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   This model was trained on ~25M tokens, in **3 phases**, the first and longest phase was an FFT to teach the model new stuff, and to confuse the shit out of it too, so it would be **a little bit less inclined to use GPTisms**.
   
-  It worked pretty well. In fact, the model was so damn confused, that the little imp didn't even make sense, but the knowledge was there.
+  It worked pretty well. In fact, the model was so damn thoroughly confused, that the little devil didn't even make any sense, but the knowledge was there.
   
   In the next phase, a DEEP QLORA of **R = 512** was used on a new dataset, to... unconfuse it. A completely different dataset was used to avoid overfitting.
   
   Finally, another somewhat deep QLORA of **R = 128** was used to tie it all together in a coherent way, and connect all the dots, and this was also with a different dataset as well.
   
-  The results are **sometimes** surprisingly good, it even managed to fool some people into thinking it's a MUCH larger model, and sometimes... sometimes it behaves just like you would expect a 3B model.
+  The results are **sometimes** surprisingly good, it even managed to fool some people into thinking it's a MUCH larger model, and sometimes... sometimes it behaves just like you would expect a 3B model to...
   
-  Fun fact: the model was uploaded while there were 200 ICBMs headed my way, live in the sky.
+  Fun fact: the model was uploaded while there were 200 ICBMs headed my way, just flying there in the sky.
   
-  I lived, so expect more models in the future.
+  I lived, so expect more models in the future!
 
 ## Impish_LLAMA_3B is available at the following quantizations: