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Okay, thank you. I think you are excited. Today we
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are coming to the, you know, this fourth lecture
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of, you know, poetry. And I think most of you are
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excited because they have something to say. So, as
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usual, let us start by having
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somebody to read her report.
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Fighting for survival can't be abandoned since no
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one can stop dreaming of the sweet memories in
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life. We all want to retrieve every sweet moment
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and live it again with the same people or maybe
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with others. And this is me having the same course
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for the second time gives me a flashback of the
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sweetest moments I have ever spent in my life.
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When I see the girls reading their creative
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reports with a victory smile, I remembered that
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smile I must have drawn when I was reading my
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first report. But when the same creativity comes
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with the same words I heard in the past, it must
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be something incredible. Since the music of
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alliteration metaphors paradox are heard again, I
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completely recognized the reason behind giving
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them the term aesthetics. So I admit it's a
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privilege more than a resentment to repeat the
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same course again. Good, thank you. So you are
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affirming what I'm doing here. Thank you for this
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report. Yes, you can attend the course more than
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once, but every time you have something new. Yeah.
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Okay, yes. Let's see if you can.
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Good morning, everybody. Having been ill for a
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couple of days, I was compelled to miss the poetry
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class. Though I came back last class and was quite
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thrilled at the nicely air-conditioned room with
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the air that was tickling my still warm face, the
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cameras were behind me and Being not having not
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prepared yet I was trying to sing further in my
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chair and hide between the colorful heads in the
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class. The poem being discussed however seemed
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pretty fun and easy to analyze. Dr. Akram's
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exploration investigation of the various aesthetic
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and figurative elements were really nice and were
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really exciting and got me more and more more and
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more excited. I feel excited about the class and
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there it goes with the next with the next class my
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journey of exploration will begin. Thank you very
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much. Okay, I know like most of you are willing to
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read, but I don't like to disappoint you. You can
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just read, come and read it quickly. Next time I'm
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going to choose randomly. Okay, go ahead. My last
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lecture in this class because I escaped from this
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class. Okay, so you're coming back. You're an
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attorney. Yes. Escaping from that room is what I
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did. So nice, so, so comfortable. But I was just
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like a bird in cage that could not fly. Move
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camera one. Switch camera two. That what, what the
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men in that room keeping said. Walking upstairs
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with my friend. Showing me her report with little
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shy. What amazing job you do. It, it touch me, it
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touch from me the sky. Go ahead. beneath the hope
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that gives life to whose heart is dead. Kick out
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your fright and just try. One day your struggle
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will end and we'll see the shine of success laying
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in your bed. With determination one could not be
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but guy. Finally she started reading and my heart
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with pleasure flied. Wow, great doing, my
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professor said. Then, with our interesting poem,
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we go deep and high. The time passed away, and one
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idea didn't leave my head. Can I write well as my
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friend? Yes, you can do whatever live in your
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side. Just be strong and don't let it die. This is
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very interesting. I like this report because it's
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creative. It has some poetic aspect. And I like it
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also because it runs against the motif of the
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poem. Because you see in the poem, the poet was
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frustrated, the poet was disappointed, and it
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seems like he has already, you know, made up his
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mind, like to relinquish, to give up, you know,
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any attempt of hunting, you know, the deer. But
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here, here we have a student who is persistent,
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who's not going to give up. You see? Good. So
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today's class is going to be a little bit
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different. Like it's practical more than me just
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talking. I know that I assigned you to read the
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first part of the critical plan. So just I want
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first at the beginning to see what you have
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understood. Then we're going to go through or to
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go again through like the aesthetics to show you
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the aesthetics and to see how we can link between
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like the aesthetics and the meaning of the poem or
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let's say the possible meaning of the poem. So let
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me ask you, what do you think of the first part of
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the critical plot?
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Yes. Yes, please. When you want to be excited
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about, you should answer some questions. Yes.
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First, you have to understand
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the course and language and read it again and more
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again in order to understand it deeply and then So
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yes, yes, you think like when we embark on reading
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any poem, we don't have like just to go to the
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poem without asking ourselves some questions.
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Because I think asking questions will help us to
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have a better understanding of the poem. So this
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is very important. So who's speaking to whom? What
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is like the setting of the poem in time? What is
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the setting of the poem in place? And so on. Like,
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I think it is very important here when we, like in
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this poem, who's speaking? You know? Who's
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speaking? Yeah, like it's very important. Like a
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courtier? You know, the poet? An ordinary man?
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Like, who's talking? And to whom? And I think, you
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know, how many voices we have in the poem. It's
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very important to know, like, how many voices we
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have in the poem. Because, like, realizing this or
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finding answers to these questions will help us to
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draft our, you know, let's say, initial critique
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of the poem. Good. Let's see if somebody else,
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like, what do you understand from what you have
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read? Yes?
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So let's go through the question. The first
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question, what is like, who's talking, I think?
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What is the first question? The setting of the
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poem in time. Do you think this is very important,
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my question? Does this give us clues? And if we
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are talking about this poem, You know, and I
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think, you know, we have now in mind like the
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setting of the poem. How does this help us? Yes,
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Ana. I'm sure that it's like an essential aspect
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that when we know the time that the poem was
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written and we know the culture of that time, the
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features of that time, the cases and everything
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that happened in that time, that the poem itself
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reflects what happened in that time. So sometimes
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it is a reflection, sometimes it is like, you
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know, an expansion of an idea, sometimes it runs
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against the prominent ideas of the time. See? So
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it's very important to understand the setting of
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time, like when it was, when was the poem written?
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Yes? I think it is important to know the time
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because we have to know the period because it's,
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every period has a specific origin.
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expectations, right, because the poets were
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writing for the readers of the time. And, of
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course, they knew what they expected. Yes, Jahan?
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I think sometimes it is actually essential, but
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sometimes it really doesn't matter. Sometimes you
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have a text that means something back in time, but
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when you read it now, it gives the meaning a whole
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different dimension. So it also gives it richness.
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when you don't really attach it to a specific
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period of time. When you just take it as a chance.
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You are right, but this depends on what kind of
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critic you are. If we are dealing with new
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critics, of course, like Jehan studied, like
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schools of criticism. Like, yes, if we are dealing
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with new critics, we have to forget anything
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underground. But nowadays, the most prominent
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schools of criticism are
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the cultural critics and the neo-hystericists. The
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neo-hystericists think that the poem was a kind of
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dialogue between the text and the age itself.
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Okay, but thank you. This means we don't have,
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yes, it is very important to know the time, but we
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can discuss the poem, you know, in isolation, but
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this gives us like very objective. Yes? So I think
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it's like a vital way or strategy to study history
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by reading that poem from like ages ago. Yeah. So
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I think also it is a kind of revision because, you
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know, sometimes we take what other people say for
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granted. And in the poem, I don't know, like, we
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believe the poet, However, some of you, like, was
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a little bit cynical, like they didn't trust what
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the poet said, they didn't believe him and they
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started like to think of the whole anti-feminist
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culture of the time. You see what I mean? Because
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some of you Like, didn't believe that the poet
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was, you know, in that way was a victim, but he
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was rather a victimizer. So all these things might
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be aroused when you think, what is the setting of
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the poem in time? And then, what is the setting of
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the poem in place? It's very important. You know,
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the place. Because sometimes, like, the place
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might restrict you to certain norms. If we think
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of our poet as, you know, a courtier, a man who
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was living in a court, so I think he had to
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respect the rules, the regulations of the court.
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Otherwise, he would be put in prison, like what
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happened to him. So I think the place, sometimes
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we are affected by the place. So if you are
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talking about Like, you know, the place of the
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poem, you have the hunting scenes, and I think
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hunting was like a picture of the daily life of
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the royal family during that time. a sport like
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one kind of sports the king was involved in is
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like to go hunting and I think hunting has to do
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with like it is very it is a leisure activity you
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know but it is like a leisure activity for
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aristocrats for high class people so I think all
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of these might come to our mind okay what other
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questions we have Who's the speaker? Do you think
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it's very important to know who's the speaker?
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Who's the speaker in the poem? Who's the speaker?
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Okay?
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The poet? The poet, a man? A woman? Yeah, we have
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the voice of a woman, but the main speaker is a
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man. But don't you think, like, the man here, the
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speaker voice is stronger than any voice? And even
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when he let her speak about herself, he chose
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something, you know, a certain thing, no limi
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tangere. That was a little bit offensive, if you
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want to say. So he subsumed her voice. I mean, he
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included her voice in his voice. OK, good. To
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whom? Like to whom? I think in the poem.
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So he was talking to other hunters? He was talking
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to other men? He was talking to other ladies?
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Anybody who accused him? And anybody who was
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envious of him because like some people Some
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people envied him and they thought, you know, he
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was privileged, but he wanted to show them that
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his life was different. Okay.
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Don't you think he was talking to the king as
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well? To the king. Imagine yourself the king. What
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would reaction, what would your reaction be? Would
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you be happy or you would not be happy? Why?
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Yes? Would you be happy like if you were the king
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and listen to this? You know? No? Why?
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Yeah, I think he would be mad because he's talking
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about his wife, you know? Good. Who thinks she
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would be happy? Yes. Yeah, he gave up. And I
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think, you know, also like No Limit Tanjer, like
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because he's the most powerful. Nobody is allowed
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to rival or to vie with him because he is an
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absolute power. I think, you know, he might be
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happy or angry, it depends how we interpret this.
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And the last question is, after answering all
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these questions, who is speaking to whom, the
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setting, the place, what is the poem about? This
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is the most important thing. What is the poem
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about? So let me, because this is what I want you
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to do today, is to divide in groups. And then
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start to write what might the poem be about. Okay?
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Good. So let's see. What do you think the poem is
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about? It's about courtly love. What do you mean
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courtly love? Women from the high class fall in
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love with a man from the low class. Fall in love
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with a woman from the high class. Okay, so this is
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like, you know, the meaning we see in the poem.
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Unattainable love, courtly love, and again this is
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an exercise of masculinity. But let's see, let's
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put this, because this is one of the strongest
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themes. It is a possible theme. Do you have more
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themes like this?
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So do you want to say like the poem is about a
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class hierarchy like in that society? Like
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privileged people who are holding the power, who
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are holding the money, and the disprivileged
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people who are having nothing, you see, the weak.
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And like if we say who are the weak people, we
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might list The poet means this, the woman, you
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know, and even other hunters, you know, because
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they were doing the same thing. Good. What else?
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It's still like it is, you know, courtly love. But
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like here we have about unattainable, it is about
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unattainable goal. It is about power, you know.
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What else?
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Yeah, it's about class division itself.
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I don't know. Evaluating.
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Yeah,
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but still it's about attainable goal and
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attainable, you know, ambition. Like everybody of
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us has an ambition, but sometimes we have a lot of
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hindrances that impede like the achievement or the
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fulfillment of this. Okay. Now I think we have
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today what I'm going to do is like to make you
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write down what you think the poem about. But let
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me just remind you of the
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aesthetics. Like last time we looked at the rhyme,
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and we said we have, as you see, A, B, B, A, A, B,
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B, A, and then C, D, E, C, D, E, like this might
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happen in the poem. I don't know how you can make
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use of this when you are going to write your
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critique. What are we going to do with this? Yes,
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this is a patriarchal consonant. The patriarchal
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consonant has two sides, you know, has, you know,
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has two parts, the octave and the system. So you
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might think of the whole argument, how the whole
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argument is distributed. You might think of the
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words that make rhyme and their impact on us. You
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might think also of the change, you know, he's
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doing, he's trying, because Sir Thomas White was
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experimenting, and we don't have like here, you
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know, we have in this state, like he's not
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consistent. And even you can do it like this, or
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you can end by EE, which is a couplet. If you look
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at the couplet, do you think It is valuable in
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itself. Is there something he is stressing in that
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couplet? So all these things you might ask when
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you write, when you want to make use of the rhyme
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itself. See what I mean? I'll leave this for you.
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And we'll see what you're going to write. And then
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the rhythm. I don't know what you are going to do
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with rhythm. Yes, we have rhythm, and as you see,
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the rhythm is a kind of iambic pentameter. But not
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all the poems like this. We have some verses like
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we have extra syllables. But this is, as you see,
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but as, but as, for me, unless, I may, no more.
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Titam, titam, titam, titam. It's like unchi,
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unchi, unchi, unchi. Like unstressed, stressed.
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You know, if we look here, but as you see, but as
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for me, unless I may know more. So, it is iambic
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pentameter, and I don't know what you are going to
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do with this, you know, this meter, okay?
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It's musical, of course, but it is like this, ti
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tam, ti tam, ti tam, ti tam. Can you link it with
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anything related to the feeling of the poem, the
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feeling of disappointment, the feeling of
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whatever? So it's very important. If you cannot,
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leave it. But I would encourage you to make use of
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these aesthetic things.
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Yes? Okay, now, like here, Jihan started to
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reflect upon this, you know, because if we are
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talking about like frustration, like hope and
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frustration, so it is, you have this
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interchangeable effect, you know, it might be. I
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don't want like to rule out something to say,
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okay, sorry, Here are some of the themes. You
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might embrace some of them. And I would leave
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these themes. When you read, it's about attainable
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love.
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As you see, the speaker chases a woman whom he
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cannot and must not reach, and must not reach.
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She's a taboo. She is something you cannot reach.
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You know what I mean? For she is a prize of the
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ruler of the land. So nobody can challenge the
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king. And I'm not sure whether the poet was
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antagonist or accomplice with the king. So he
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might be like a media machine for the king, hey
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hunters, if you are trying to do like this, this
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is your fate will be. So he might be admonishing
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them, warning them. If Annabelle approaches, let's
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say, what is related to the king or something the
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king owns, you'll be in trouble. Do you see what I
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mean? Shakespeare, in most of his plays, promoted
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that culture, like the king was divine and nobody,
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you know, in the kingdom should think for a moment
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to contest that power. Otherwise, he would be
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ostracized. Ostracized means like marginalized or
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treated badly. You see what I mean? Good. Another
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theme is like bowing to absolute power. Like this
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is what I'm talking about. The king is a power and
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so you are You know you are showing veneration and
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submission to that culture These are possible
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themes you can add to the courtly love
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Unattainable
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goal And you can read I can leave this for you
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like on the page to read And
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here we have all the metaphors we talk about you
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know and I think the alliteration, so you have the
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metaphor, the alliteration, you have the metaphor,
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you have the paradox. So all these are elements
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that you should use when you write. But now, with
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all these things in mind, how to start is the
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biggest question. How to start? Now, I think it's
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very important, to contextualize the poem, it's
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very important to write the first paragraph.
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Because if you write the first paragraph in which
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you have to articulate your thesis, your thesis
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statement, the topic sentence, and the topic
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sentence, when we are talking of the poem, should
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include the main idea of the poem. So you might
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say, let me just help you. This poem seems to be
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about, let me write even.
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So I might start saying,
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This poem, or I might, it's good to say, Huzo Lesz
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Zohan is
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a poem or is a sonnet. I prefer like, if you, it
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is different when you say it is a sonnet. It is a
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sonnet, you show that, you start to fuse. It's a
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sonnet written
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by
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Poet or courtier. Poet, and you say he's a
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courtier.
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The main theme of the poem seems to be about...
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The main theme of the poem, after that you say,
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the main theme
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Okay, the main theme of the poem seems,
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I don't want you to say it is, because this is a
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possibility. We don't want to exhaust any other
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possibility by saying it is. So the theme might
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be, seems to be about courtly love.
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The theme of the poem seems to
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be about,
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after articulating this,
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It's about courtly love.
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After this, it's very important now to say what is
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courtly love and to relate this.
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The persona who represents the poet is greatly
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frustrated. Now, this is what we say, the
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elaboration. And look here, the elaboration is
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very important. Why? Because the way you are
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elaborating, it means you are creating your
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controlling ideas. So the poet is greatly
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devastated because of the changeability and the
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inconsistency of a woman or the woman. So here,
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When you say the changeability, when you say this,
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like, it means you are enunciating your, like,
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controlling ideas. And this is in itself like how
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we start, okay? Now I would leave you to work in
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groups, I'll give you like 10 minutes for this
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exercise, and listen, like groups of three or
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four, and just like try to write, make use of the
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whatever figure of speech, but I think, you know,
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some of you might need to write about the theme,
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okay? So here, like group of three, write about
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the possibility. And I want you, this, like to
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make use of the You know, figures of speech. You
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know? So they might say, Cortado, what about the
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figure of speech? They might say, you know,
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terrible goal, what are the rules? You might also
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make use of the right and the left. Tell me how
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the right and the left are very important. So,
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okay. So here you work out the possible theme.
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Here you try to tell us how the figures of speech
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are related to the theme. And here, you know,
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If you need any help, I'm just coming around.
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Okay, let's see. Let's see here like those who
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wrote about the possibility. Yes, please. So you
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think that the poem is still courtly love?
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Okay,
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but we cannot write like you are defining courtly
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love, you know, not talking about the theme of the
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poem. Okay, now, like, when you write about the
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theme of the poem, you have to elaborate, you
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know, it only, but don't give a definition of the
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court levau. Otherwise, you know you're, this is
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like the aggression, like you're not writing about
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the poem. Okay, let's suppose that the poet is,
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the poem is about court levau, and the poet is
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frustrated, disappointed, because of the
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inconsistency of the lady, because of, you know,
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the dishonesty because of her fickleness, okay?
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And he was like to remove any blame to exonerate
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himself. Now, in the poem, we have, let's say, the
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metaphors, we have the rhythm, we have a very
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good, I haven't thought of that. Yeah, it is
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stressed, unstressed. Like again, this, it is like
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fluctuating, it keeps fluctuating and this
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fluctuating, I don't know, I have thought of it
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also like when a hunter is hunting, you know, he
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has hopes of catching them, these hopes are
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smashed, okay? It's like panting up. Somebody who
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is running, you know, he's panting out because
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why? He cannot. Thank you. I have never thought of
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like the rhythm fitting with the meaning of the
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poem in this way. Okay, let's shift to the theme
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group. I want a theme other than Cordula. Okay? We
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want a theme other than Cordula. Yes? Yes? Class
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division.
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Okay,
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so like she wants to say that the theme is the
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class individual. Okay, do you have anything in
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the figures of speech to substantiate that or to
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help us in developing that theme? The allegory
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itself? Yeah, very good. He can't say and express
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feelings. He just mentioned the allegory. Yeah, so
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do you want to say like He afraid from the king.
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You know or normal people like are not given like
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they don't have the right to express themselves.
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Yes. So they opt for the use of allegory. Yes.
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Good.
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Also the metonymy of diamonds and ferrets. The
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metonymy, thank you. The metonymy of diamonds. And
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also like ferrets. We were talking about the
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metonymy of the diamonds like this shows like
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diamond It has to do with richness, appearance.
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Appearance like richness. Okay? Good.
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Yes.
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Caesar, the word Caesar, you know, is also like an
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economy, like standing for the power. For the
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power. The upper class or the royal family had all
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the power in its hand. Good. Let's see. Let's go
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back to the rhyme and rhythm. Can you manipulate
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it? Because I think the art of criticism is an art
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of manipulation and persuasion. You have to
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manipulate. They say it's about power. It's about
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class division.
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So what do you want to say?
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It's a problem, huh? Yeah. Okay. So maybe, I don't
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know, maybe we can say that the fact that he
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actually did change in the run, even he did change
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the meter itself, it shows you that he's actually
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starving for power, or maybe he's trying to have
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some sort of control or sort of Ah, very good. To
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get a grip of something and do change it as he
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pleases. Yeah, like, so this change, like, it has
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to do with his attempt, like, to change. Yes, he
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cannot. He cannot, but still, like, he's trying.
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I'm trying. Okay, I got disappointed, but somebody
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might continue, you know. However, like, it is
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very disappointing, but at least I have tried to
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change and the, you know, Just to try, it's a good
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thing in itself. Well, thank you very much for
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manipulating. So look here, we can manipulate any
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figure of speech, we can manipulate any aesthetic
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element to serve our purpose. And you should be
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very happy because I'm not like just asking you to
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say one specific theme. You can talk about
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different things because what is the poem? So if
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we say it is about this, it means like we finished
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the whole poem, okay? I think I should, we should
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stop here, but it is now, this is the first
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experience with a poem like this. Next time we are
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moving to another poem, another poem, we're going
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to read another song, which is a description of
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strength. description before, I mean, written by
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Henry Howard Carroll of Surrey. He was
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contemporary. And it's very important when you
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respond, like, to pay attention to details, like,
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the differences between the two poems. So thank
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you very much, and yallah bless you.