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Assalamualaikum. Good morning everybody. How are |
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you today? Good. I don't see many students here. |
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Right. Today, I'm going to surprise you and slow |
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down the class. I know that we're expected to have |
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Sydney, but it seems like we have to slow down |
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here in order to give time for other classes to |
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catch up. So it's our chance today to look back |
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again at rhyme, rhythm, and some areas in the |
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critical plan. But before we start, you know, as |
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usual, I need somebody like to read a report. Yes? |
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Hate you, Mr. Report. At the beginning of my |
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report, let me begin with admission that I hate |
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writing reports, even though I like the class of |
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poetry. Feeling that you have nothing to write |
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about feeling, that you have nothing to write |
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about feeling makes me hate the assignment of |
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writing reports. But I like writing reports |
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because it is at least has a theme or idea to work |
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on and write about. To talk about love picture, it |
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was enjoyable there. I didn't feel the time |
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passing us. It was a nice lecture to learn about |
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metaphor, irony, and image. After I just know |
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little about them, I feel that those figures are |
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the heart of poetry, that there is no poem without |
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a figurative language that enhances and |
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strengthens the idea of the poet, learning the way |
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to use it makes a joy to use such language in our |
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everyday language to express our gladness, |
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sadness, and even sarcastic everyday life |
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situations. Good, thank you. I do agree sometimes |
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it gets, you know, a boring process like to write |
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a report. And here, like, comes the creativity. |
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When you have, when you don't know what you are |
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going to write about. So you might look for a |
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hook. you might find very interesting hook and |
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then you write report. So the report is like to |
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get you to write. And don't forget, this is like |
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the bonus mark. It's not one of the official |
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assignment. So you don't have to complain, but |
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it's okay. You can do that. But I need you to |
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write. Okay, let's see another report. Yes, |
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please. |
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Daily Reporter. Description of spring was so nice. |
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It was the title of the previous month. The |
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previous lecture was extremely surprising. Gentle |
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and kind, I tried continuously to make up my mind |
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and decide, either to share or to be in a side. |
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Although the lecturer was in a gut mood, the |
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students were worried and wanted to conclude. He |
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asked the questions and students replied, but |
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because of the hot day, they will nearly fly. |
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Finally, we finished and the teacher said, you |
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should be prepared, increase your effort a little |
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bit. Okay, clap for her. Okay, look here, this is |
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an example of creativity. |
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But let me choose, yeah, you, you want like, this |
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is randomly to make sure everybody's writing. |
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Sometimes it's weird how time passed so fast. It |
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was just like yesterday when Dr. Akram asked us to |
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write a daily report, and I remember how confused |
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I was. But now all my fears disappeared. Now I |
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know how to write a daily report and how to write |
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a response. It is unbelievable that we already |
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finished two poems and about to start the third. |
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I'm so excited to take a poem by Sir Philip Sidney |
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because I've heard that he is a very talented boy. |
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Good, thank you very much. And we have to clap for |
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her as well. It doesn't mean that we don't like |
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what Rawan said, but it's okay. Right. Today I |
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thought it would be nice to go through two |
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important elements, more specifically two more |
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elements of poetry, the rhyme and the rhythm. And |
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then later we might go back to part two of the |
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critical plan. I think, you know, we have taken |
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two poems. We spoke about rhyme in general. But |
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today, I'll take you to be more specific to talk |
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about rhyme. Because we have many types of rhyme. |
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You might have read that. |
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As you see here, there are many types of rhyme. We |
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have perfect rhyme.No perfect rhyme. We have |
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imperfect rhyme. |
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Perfect rhyme. Imperfect rhyme. Masculine rhyme. |
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Feminine rhyme. I rhyme. Para rhyme. Okay, this is |
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more specific. I think most of you, like those who |
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read their reports, were writing poetic lines |
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using perfect rhyme. Perfect rhyme, as you see, |
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this is an example of perfect rhyme. It is like a |
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rhyme which has almost the same sound, the same |
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sound. Like this is in Spencer. help me to blaze |
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her worthy praise. Like he was praising the queen, |
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and like, you see, blaze and praise, almost the |
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same sound. Okay? So we call this perfect rhyme. |
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And another example, I saw Phobias thrust out his |
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golden head upon her to gaze, but when he saw how |
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broad her beams did spread, you know, so spread |
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and hid. So this is perfect rhyme. Now we might |
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ask when poets use perfect rhyme or when they use |
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imperfect rhyme. Sometimes in certain poems, you |
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should stick to perfect rhyme. However, poets |
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might variate between perfect and imperfect |
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according to their attitude, the atmosphere of the |
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poem. Perhaps they want to criticize or they want |
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to praise. So using the rhyme, each poet uses the |
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rhyme that fits with the topic, the subject |
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matter. We cannot now for sure say this rhyme |
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serves this purpose. It is according to the poem. |
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Sometimes you have perfect rhyme and suddenly the |
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poet changes into imperfect rhyme. Like, you don't |
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have this harmony, perhaps because there is no |
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harmony in the experience of the poet. See what I |
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mean? I remember in Wilfred Owen, Futility, he was |
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using imperfect rhyme, he was using I rhyme. And |
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why? Because he saw no pattern in life, so he did |
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not want to commit himself to any pattern of |
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poetry. So why would a poet use this rhyme? This |
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depends on the poem itself. Okay, so I think these |
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are again here in Epithelium. Epithelium is a poem |
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written by Spencer to describe his, it is a |
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matrimony poem. Matrimony, wedding. It was to |
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describe his wedding. It is a beautiful one, |
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Epithelium, if you have time to read it, you know, |
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just go and read it. So, now we'll go to another |
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type of rhyme, which is imperfect rhyme. You know, |
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imperfect rhyme, you see, it is not, it doesn't |
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have the same sound. Like you hear, you see, also |
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in the same poem of Spencer, you have though |
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hidden peril round about me placed, yet hope I |
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will that when this storm is passed. So what do |
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you think? Placed and passed. Placed and passed. |
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They're not almost, yeah, there is something |
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similar, but it is not a perfect rhyme. So this is |
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what imperfect rhyme. |
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Again, why would they use this? This depends on |
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the poem, the theme of the poem itself. Then comes |
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number three, masculine rhyme. It's very funny, |
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huh? Masculine rhyme. There is a rhyme which is |
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masculine. And masculine rhyme, like as you see |
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here, this is, you know, from The Solitary Reaper, |
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I think. The Solitary Reaper, Wordsworth. When he |
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says, I listened motionless and still, and as I |
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mounted up the hill, the music in my heart I bore, |
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long after it was heard no more. Look here, still |
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and hill, bore and more. If you look at the words, |
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how many syllables do we have in this word? One |
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syllable. So, when The rhyming words are |
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monosyllabic, like this. This is called masculine |
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rhyme. It's a masculine rhyme. It is one syllable. |
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It's not more than one syllable. It seems like |
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this is very tough, but this is an example of |
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masculine rhyme. Of course, when we talk about |
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masculine, we should talk about feminine because |
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if we call this masculine, there should be |
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feminine. But somebody might say, okay, masculine |
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means tough and feminine means flexible and more |
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lenient. |
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Feminine rhyme is the opposite. Of course, these |
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are your reader, you can follow them. They are in |
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the pamphlet. |
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same. So he was, in that poem, variating between a |
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masculine rhyme and feminine rhyme. And in fact, |
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challenging the conventions of the time, I mean |
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the past convention. He was romantic, but in this |
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poem, he was using neoclassical. He was using |
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poetic diction. So he was variating with |
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of the images like I behold her single, behold, |
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this is very poetic. Then would anybody tell me |
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what she's singing? So he was moving from formal. |
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to informal, from poetic diction, and even the |
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rhyme. He is in the same poem, he's variating in |
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the rhyme. Why he was doing this, some critics say |
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because he wanted to challenge, he wanted to |
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ridicule those. So this depends on the poem. If |
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you look here, as if her song could have no |
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ending, I saw her singing at work, at her work, |
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and over the sickle bending. So if you look at |
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ending and bending, they are two syllables. They |
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have almost the same sound and this rhyme called |
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feminine rhyme. |
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Then I rhyme. I rhyme. |
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I rhyme, you know, very deceptive. You know, you |
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look at them, like here, some never advanced |
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adjustment of their own, but catch the spreading |
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notion of the town. So if you look at them, they |
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seem to have rhymed, but if you read them, yeah, |
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they, you know, do not have the same sound. |
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I think the final one is para rhyme. Para, it's |
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not like, as you see, it's a rhyme in which you |
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have the same consonants, but the inside vowels |
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are different. So if you look at this, I seem that |
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out of the bottle I escaped. Down some profound |
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doltenal I long since scooped, then through grains |
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which Titanic wars had grown, yet also the |
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encumbered sleepers grown. So what do you see? |
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Escaped and scooped. We have the same consonant, |
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but different vowel. So para, it is not |
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completely, you know? It is not complete. It is |
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semi, semi, you know? Semi-rhyme, because it has |
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similar consonants, but different vowels. And this |
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Okay. The poems we are studying have rhyme, and |
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each rhyme, for example, in the sonnet of Sir |
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Thomas Wyatt, the rhyme was fitting the sonnet. He |
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was governed by this sonnet. It was A, if you |
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remember, B, B, A. A, B, B, A, C, D, C, D, and E, |
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E. So he was governed, but we said like when he |
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chose word like behind, you know, we had like that |
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long vowel and it has to do with his suffering and |
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agony. Okay? So in the sonnet, you are governed by |
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certain rhyme, but you have the freedom to play |
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Which words to choose? Which words to choose? But |
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rhyme is very important. Sometimes we might have |
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or we might have a good and a better understanding |
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of the poem because of a rhyme thing. The rhyme, |
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sometimes they employ it to express certain |
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feelings. Again, in Wilfred Owen, when he was |
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shocked, by the tragedies of the war. He didn't |
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use the perfect rhyme, he used I rhyme, he used |
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imperfect rhyme, paradigm. So there was no pattern |
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in the poem. And he did that deliberately in order |
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to correlate this |
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with his horror, his experience of disappointment |
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because of the horror of the war itself. So |
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sometimes there is kind of, you know, the rhyme |
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resonates with the meaning of the poem. Okay? Now, |
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we'll go to the problematic area, which is the |
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rhythm. And some of you are disturbed because of |
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the rhythm. and they think this is too much for |
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us. I'm not teaching you scansion or neither |
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prosody in this course, but it's very important to |
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know the meters. and to know certain feet and how |
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they function. Because sometimes again, in certain |
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poems, mainly in Shakespeare, he plays with rhythm |
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in order to suit perhaps an attitude or to fit |
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with a tone or the general atmosphere of the poem. |
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sonnets. So let's see what is rhythm. |
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spoke about rhythm when we defined poetry. And |
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here, these are the feet in English poetry. As we |
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said, Most of the English poetry, I mean 80-70 |
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percent of the English poetry is written in iambic |
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pentameter. Iamb is like this, two syllables. As |
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you see, repeat, the word repeat. What is the |
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stress? Is it on the first or the second? Yes, |
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it's the longer one. Repeat, repeat, repeat. So it |
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is very long. We saw this also in Henry Howard's |
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poem last time. And thus I see among these |
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pleasant things. It was iambic pentameter. But |
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forget about pentameter. Like this is iamb. Ayam, |
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it's called Ayam. If you have, you know, this |
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pattern in the poem, you know, like repeat, you |
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know, meet, see, et cetera, you have, this is |
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Ayam. Now, the opposite of it, it's called Troche |
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or Troche. You know, one of them either. And it is |
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like never. Huh? Never. Like, look here, never. |
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Where is the stress? It's on the first one. |
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Clever. Never. Huh? Better. Okay, these are, you |
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know, this is a trochee. It's the opposite of? |
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Yes. The anabast. Okay, the anabast. |
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The anabast. is similar to the iambic, but you |
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have... Sorry. |
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Okay. I have to go back. The anabast |
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is like too unstressed, and then stressed, like |
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interrupt, corrupt. You see? I think you are |
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studying stress with Dr. Walid, okay? So, and Dr. |
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Khader like teaching you like this, so you can |
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make use of them in understanding the rhyme. Okay, |
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then you have something called dactyl. Dactyl as |
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it's like crochet, but instead of stressed, you |
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have stressed and too unstressed, like Washington, |
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wasting. It's like, as you see, one stressed, two |
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stressed. Then you have spondee. This is accented. |
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You don't have, it is like two words or two |
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stressed syllables together, heart rate, heart |
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rate, you know? Then you have pyrrhic, you know, |
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like it is too unstressed, |
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like as in the top of the mountain, the morning, |
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you know, in the top of, morning, like too |
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unstressed, too unstressed. Now we say monometer, |
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diameter, why? Because sometimes if we look at the |
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line of pottery, we might find iambic repeated |
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like this, never ever. So what should I say? This |
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is iambic what? Iambic monometer or diameter? |
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Diameter, because it has two. It has two. So we |
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say diameter, trimeter, monometer, |
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diameter, |
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yes, pentameter. It is according to the |
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repetition. |
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So here you have one foot is called what? |
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Monometer. |
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Two foot, diameter. Three, sorry, two feet. Three |
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feet, trimeter. Four feet, tetrameter. Five, |
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pentameter. That's why we said pentameter. Most of |
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English poetry is written in pentameter, which is |
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very musical. Then hexameter, six feet. Then |
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heptameter, seven feet. And I think here you have |
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some example. Like this is an example, you know, |
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of iambic pentameter. |
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Can anybody read this? Like here, from furthest |
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creature, we desire increase. that their beauties |
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rose, but never die. Who can read it? From there, |
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from fair creatures, we desire increase, that |
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their beauties rose, but never die. See? Titam, |
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titam. So try to read it according to them, from |
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fair, From fairest creatures, we desire increase, |
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that their beauties rose, but never die. So it is |
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measured, very musical. As I told you, if we talk |
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in iambic pentameter, we'll be funny. For example, |
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please, when you come to my class, write your |
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report. It's like this, you know, ti tam, ti tam, |
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ti tam. So another example, this is, you know, a |
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tetrameter. |
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Tetrameter, sorry. |
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This is iambic trimeter, three. It is the evening |
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hour. How silent all that lie. It is the evening |
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hour. How silent all that lie. See? This is iambic |
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trimeter. Then we have tetrameter. This is like |
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Troche. He's... |
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I think it is in the other side. |
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The iambic tetrameter, it's like, it's a poem we |
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are going to study. Okay, just like. |
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Is it clear? Okay. |
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This is, you know, tricky, but I'm just like, I |
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want to give you an example of iambic tetrameter. |
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It's like in Marlowe's, they never reply, come |
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live with me and be my love. It is, you know, Come |
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live with me and be my love. It is eight |
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syllables, and it is called iambic pentameter. |
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This is troche tetrameter. Come, you know, troche, |
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we said it's the opposite. Come my, what is the |
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stress? The first one. Come my, Celia, let us |
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prove why we made this sports of love. You know, |
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it's like troche, and how many syllables do you |
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have? You have like, you know, six here, as you |
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see. Tetra, because we have six syllables. |
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Tetrameter, like eight, in fact. Cum, cummi, this |
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is two, cilia two, two, so we have eight. Eight |
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syllables because the foot, each foot is like two |
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syllables. So this is called troche, dactyl, |
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tetrameter. Like this one, you know, women much |
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missed how you call to me, call to me, saying that |
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you are not as you were, okay? So this is, and all |
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these are examples of the meters, just like look |
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at them, you know, and see the stress, where the |
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stress, so it is very important that to know In |
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this course, we might look at the rhythm in some |
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poems because sometimes the rhythm might have |
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something to do with poetry. Good. This is |
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generally about rhythm and rhyme and rhythm. We'll |
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go back to the critical plan. Yes. |
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No, I mean it is up to the purpose, like how he |
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sees. Sometimes certain words, you know, do not |
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fit with the rhyme. But poets want to be regular. |
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Like I know some, you know, some students of mine, |
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write poetry by using rhythm. They go study rhythm |
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and they write poetry. Even they are not native |
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speakers, but they still, a student of mine, even |
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he's like Tawjihi, said, I wrote a poem in Anabas, |
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which was very surprising to me. So yes, they |
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choose sometimes like they vary it. Sometimes they |
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are systematic. It is according to the purpose |
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they want to establish. Yes, sir. Yes. |
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Forty love middle-aged couple. Yes. Yes. |
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It doesn't fit with the rhythm of that. |
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Yeah, but no, 40 love, 40 love, you have two |
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syllables. We have two syllables in each one. 40 |
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love, it's like iambic. All of it, it is iambic |
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diameter. 40 love, middle-aged couple playing |
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tennis, it's iambic pentameter. |
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Yeah, that was, you know, I mean at the beginning |
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of the course I gave you two poems which are |
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modern. Sometimes some poets do not follow rhyme |
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at all, and this is called free verse. They do not |
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follow rhyme, and sometimes they vary it with |
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rhythm. See? But those poems I gave you at the |
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beginning of the course were just |
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very modern or very postmodern, in which the poets |
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did not commit themselves to the tradition of |
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English poetry. |
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If you remember last time, I gave you, quickly at |
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the end of the lecture, the leveler. And part two |
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of the critical plan was discussing some areas we, |
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as readers, might face when we read a poem. And as |
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you see, the first area was |
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like, we don't have to be very hasty. Some people |
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are hasty. This is part two. It's meaning, |
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intention, and idea. And here, as you see, we are |
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strongly advised |
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These are areas gaining balanced development of |
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the theme, maintaining the total experience of the |
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poem, and judging the poem on the basis of the |
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poet's intention. |
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We said, you know, gaining a balanced development |
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of the theme. We do not have to base our judgment |
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on one part of the poem, we have to follow or to |
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read the entire poem and to test this theme. Is it |
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like, does it fit with the whole poem or not? So |
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we don't have to be very hasty. And we gave you |
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the example of Deliverer, which was similar to the |
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example of the poem, Who's Lost to Hunt, if you |
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remember. So this is an area we should be careful. |
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Of course, we cannot say what is the poem about |
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unless we read it several times. The second |
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problem area like here, as you say, we have to |
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maintain the total experience. Here, the second |
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area is called the total meaning and the prose |
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meaning. There is something called the prose |
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meaning and the total meaning. What is the |
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difference between the prose meaning and the total |
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meaning? The prose meaning of the poem means the |
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dictionary meaning. It is the paraphrase. So if |
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you say spring, |
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has bloom and everything is beautiful, you are |
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paraphrasing. But when you link this description |
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with experience, you are talking about the total |
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experience. So the total experience is different |
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from the prose meaning. |
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This is the leveler we read last time. I wish you |
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look at it again. It's a very interesting poem, |
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and we saw how sarcastic the poet was. |
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Mainly here in the last two stanzas, when he said, |
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Old Sergeant Smith, kindness of man, wrote out two |
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copies there and then of his accustomed speech to |
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cheer the women folk of each. He died a hero's |
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death, and here we saw how sarcastic the poet was, |
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how cynical he was. He didn't believe in the idea |
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of heroism. The second area, this is like, do not |
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give hasty adjustment. This is the second problem. |
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to understand the poet's thoughts and emotions. |
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Now, yes, we have to understand the poet's |
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thoughts and emotions. And in order to understand |
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this, we have to be open. Now, sometimes we might |
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not like or we might find a poem difficult. Some |
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words are difficult and we say, damn, I'm not |
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going to read this poem. This is not good. Okay? |
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You have to be sympathetic. At least while you are |
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reading the poem, you have to be, because you |
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won't have access to the experience, to the total |
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experience of the poet unless you are sympathetic. |
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You have to understand. You have to live the |
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experience of the poet in order to appreciate the |
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poem. And as you see, sometimes we don't have to |
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judge the poem according to our initial feeling. |
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And we hear, be sure you go to the author to get |
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his meaning, not to find yours. Sometimes we are |
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blinded by a certain idea in our mind, and we keep |
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developing this and forget what the poem is about. |
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So I think this is something we have to be |
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cautious of. |
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As you see here, the meaning of the poem is the |
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experience it expresses. It is the experience. So |
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this is the meaning. What kind of experience? This |
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is the experience of happiness, sadness, |
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frustration. So this is the meaning of the poem. |
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It is not the prose meaning of the poem. It is not |
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the paraphrase of the poem. Okay, you just go read |
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this part because sometimes we like We might be |
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worried that the poem has no ideas. It discusses |
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no ideas. And we say, why? Sometimes we have a |
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poem which is meaningful because it is only a |
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description. And this description records the |
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experience. And if you see here, you have a poem, |
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The Eagle. The eagle is an example. Here, it's a |
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description of an eagle which goes up high and |
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then comes down as a thunderbolt. Like, look here. |
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This is the eagle. It's a description. He clasped |
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the crag with crocked hands, close to the sun in |
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lonely lands. Ringed with the azure word, he |
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stands. The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls. He |
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watches from his mountain walls. And like |
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thunderbolt, he falls. It's a description of |
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eagle. |
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This poem was written by Tennyson. Tennyson was a |
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Victorian poet. And in the Victorian time, the |
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world was changing. people started to lose |
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certainty about, you know, no social patterns like |
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laissez-faire or, you know, like there was |
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corruption, utilitarianism, you know, people, I |
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mean, materialism was governing everything. So the |
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sense of society, the social patterns, you know, |
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vanished. And in fact, even like religion, I mean, |
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religious values retreated and retreated and Here |
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the poet, what is the experience of the poet |
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exactly? He was looking, he looked at the eagle. |
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The eagle had the power to go up to leave this |
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land, to go and come down, while the poet himself |
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was mentally, psychologically entrapped. So he was |
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looking at this bird with some feeling of envy. He |
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was trapped. But look at this. He clasped the crag |
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with crooked hands. Look how he admires it. Close |
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to the sun in lonely lands. Ringed with azure. He |
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envies the freedom of this creature. The wrinkled |
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sea beneath. Look at him, how powerful. Him |
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crawls. He watches from his mountain walls. And |
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like a thunderbolt, he falls. So here, okay, the |
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description is wonderful. We might look at this |
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for more aesthetic consideration, but as you see |
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here, the experience of the poet was like he, he |
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was not Like, he didn't have the ability to leave |
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because psychologically, mentally, he was trapped. |
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His age was like an age of corruption, or an age |
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of materialism. So people felt they were trapped. |
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They could not go nowhere. And here, he's just |
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looking at this eagle who's having that ability to |
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escape. To escape, not like the poet. I think, you |
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know, today, this is enough for today. I'm giving |
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chance to other classes to catch up. Next time, as |
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I said, you have to bring, like, you know, your |
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response to Sidney and Spencer. You know, Spencer |
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to his, you know, there is a sonnet for Spencer. |
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So, but we are going to discuss first Sydney and |
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then Spencer, okay? Thank you very much. |
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