original: On August 15, convection organized into bands, and as its winds approached hurricane strength, an eye developed within the storm.
simplifications: On August 15, the convection turned into bands, And there was an eye in the storm as its winds got close to hurricane strength. On August 15, as the system's winds reached hurricane speed, an eye developed in the storm. On August 15, the storm turned into a hurricane and an eye developed. On August 15, convection organized into bands. Its winds approached hurricane strength. An eye developed within the storm. On August 15, convection organized into bands. As its winds neared hurricane strength, an eye developed within the storm. On August 15, convection organized into bands. As winds approached hurricane strength, an eye developed. Convection organized into bands and winds neared hurricane strength. An eye had developed within the storm. This took place on August 15th. On August 15, convection formed into bands, and winds got near hurricane strength, and an eye developed within the storm. An eye developed within the storm, on August 15, as convection organized into bands and it's winds came close to hurricane strength. On August 15, convection was organized in to bands, and as its winds reached hurricane strength, an eye developed in the storm.