original: Initially very disorganized, surface pressures gradually decreased across the region, with a weak low pressure area developing on September 19.
simplifications: Starting very messy, surface pressure slowly went down across the region. A wesk low pressure area started on September 19 At first not well organized, surface pressures slowly weakens in the area. Weak low pressure area developed on September 19. Disorganized surface pressures decreased across the region with a low pressure area forming on September 19. The storm wasn't organized at first. The surface pressure lessened slowly. A weak cyclone formed on September 19th. It began very disorganized. Surface pressures gradually fell across the region, with a weak low pressure area developing on September 19. First very disorganized, surface pressures slowly went down across the area. A weak low pressure area came September 19. It was very disorganized at first. Surface pressure slowly decreased and a weak low pressure began to form on September 19. Originally disorganized, surface pressures gradually lessen in the region. A weak low pressure area developed on September 19. Surface pressures got smaller across the area. A weak low pressure area developed on September 19. By 19 September, surface pressure gradually decreased across the region, with a weak low-pressure area improving.