original: A choral scholar is a student either at a university or private school who receives a scholarship in exchange for singing in the school or university's choir.
simplifications: A choral scholar is a student that attends a university or private school and receives a scholarship in exchange for singing in the school or university's choir. A choral scholar is a student at a university or private school who got a scholarship for singing in the school or university's choir. A choral scholar, is a student who receives a scholarship in exchange for singing in the choir. A choral scholar is a student either at a university or private school who receives a choir scholarship. A choral scholar is a student at a university or private school who gets a scholarship to sing in the school's choir. A choral scholar is a student at a university or private school who gets a scholarship for singing in the school or university's choir. A choral scholar is a student at a university or private school who earns a scholarship to sing in the choir. A choral scholar is a student at a university or private school who receives a scholarship for singing in the school's choir. A choral scholar is a student who gets a free education for singing in the school choir. A choral scholar is a student either at a university or private school. This student receives a scholarship in exchange for singing in the school or university's choir.