premise: Alan got a gun for his 18th birthday.
initial: His dad took him to the range to practice shooting.
counterfactual: His dad took him to the range to practice shooting, and he excelled!
original_ending: Alan was a terrible shot! But he persevered and practiced a lot. He now loves to go hunting.
edited_ending: Alan was a great shot.He continued to practice to excel even more.He loves going hunting.<SEP>Alan was a fantastic shot!He practiced a lot.He now loves to go hunting.<SEP>Alan was a natural shooter!But he still persevered and practiced a lot.He now loves to go hunting.