premise: Jon felt like a bad dad.
initial: He worked so late, he often missed his kids when he came home.
counterfactual: He worked so late, and often played with his kids when he came home.
original_ending: On the weekends, he was tired and grumpy. One Saturday, his son sat down on the couch and leaned on Jon's arm. Jon loved spending time with the kids.
edited_ending: On some weekends he was so tired he fell asleep on the couch.One Saturday, his son sat down on the couch and leaned on Jon's arm.Jon loved spending time with the kids<SEP>On the weekends he felt reenergized.On Saturday he went outside and played ball with his kids.Jon loved spending time with the kids<SEP>On the weekends, he tried harder not to be tired and grumpy.One Saturday, his son sat down on the couch and leaned on Jon's arm.Jon loved finding time to spend with his kids.