premise: The sea was frightening during a storm.
initial: Marcus hated the way the boat rose up and crashed down.
counterfactual: Marcus was a submariner in the US Navy on a top secret mission deep beneath the surface of the Atlantic.
original_ending: It made him sick to his stomach. He cowered in his cabin and shut his eyes but it didn't help. Marcus then vomited from sea sickness.
edited_ending: It made him sick to his stomach that he was involved in some political bull shit.He manned up and went on the mission, but it didn't help.Marcus then vomited from his lack of morals.<SEP>The seas were calm underwater, but when they surfaced the storm made him sick to his stomach.He cowered in his cabin and shut his eyes but it didn't help.Marcus then vomited from sea sickness.<SEP>Somehow even after all these years he would get seasick to his stomach.He cowered in his cabin and shut his eyes but it didn't help.Marcus then vomited from sea sickness.