premise: Ray hung a tire on a rope to make his daughter a swing.
initial: She climbed into it and played happily.
counterfactual: She climbed into it and it was extremely sturdy.
original_ending: Then Ray heard a loud, sickening crack, and a loud crash. The branch holding the swing had broken and his daughter had fallen! Ray ran to his daughter to make sure she was okay.
edited_ending: Then Ray heard a loud, sickening crack, and a loud crash.The rope holding the swing had broken and his daughter had fallen!Ray ran to his daughter to make sure she was okay.<SEP>Then Ray heard loud, heartwarming laughter.The branch holding the swing was strong and his daughter was swinging very high!Ray smiled at his daughter as she soared as high as she could.<SEP>Ray heard a lot of noise outside.He looked over and his daughter was laughing.Ray ran over and laughed with his daughter.