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C954A6D0B707,"~Aesop said: ""

No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. ""

Examples of kindness:

Opening a door.

Giving compliments.

Helping someone with bag's.

asking about their day.

Impact on other people:

The impact on other people can be so important that even can save lives! and example of that can be that if you notice someone that is passing trough bad moments but you doun't know how to help the simple act of kindness of asking ""how is your day?"" can actually help that person by knowing that someone cares about him/her. Other ways that the small act's of kindness can change things is by making a person do good things for others. For example, if you help someone with bags, they will see how that little help makes them feel, that will make them do it for someone else or even back to you. The hole point of this is to make people know the importance of doing little act's of kindness and to show how you can do it. ",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
51DA4BA94C7C,"The research study has shown that there are 25% of people thinks that trying same things over and over can never make you flourish in you life. Some people believed that you always have to try something new everyday, while other believed that they always want to work in something that they always flourished in. Although, doing what they know can make people feel confident but, its salient for us to flourish in our life, because you can learn new things to be successful, you can have more experience, you can also mastered in more things than you are in right now for more opportunity.

First, trying new things can help you to be successful, sometimes you inserted that into your mind that you have never done that thing then,you end up saying that you can't do that, but never ever make that egregious decision in you life unless you never try you never going to know. For Example, a friend of mine named Generic_Name, once said that ""Try Try but don't Cry"" it means that don't ever think that you can't do it, you can and you can do it in better way than anyone else don't ever break your confident because of you nervous or for any other reason, but that's not how it works, you just need to fight through whatever reason you had. A myriad of people thinks that when they don't know what to do they always give up instead of trying, but its salient for all of us to put that confident into your mind. Also sometimes it can erroneous your feeling when nobody going to gives work to you because you never have done that work and also you refused to do it.

Moreover, it is important for you to have more experience of everything than you have in order to flourish. Experience can make such a difference in what you have learn because it can prepares you from the beginning, so then you can't struggle any more in future, it can be harder at the beginning for some people, but it will get way more easier as you work through it in future. For Example, a student at Generic_school named Generic_Name had said that ""if I take classes that related to my career in high school it can make myself to be prepare for career in future."" It means that he can have a myriad of experience in high school since, he is a flourishing student, also he can learn and experience things very quickly, so then its easy for him when he'll going to enter into his own career field. He'll not going to have that much trouble of being in that field like now a days other people have, and also He'll not going to be full of experience when he will go their or how it works, but he can learn basic things that he suppose to have in order to be in that career field.

Lastly, you can mastered more than you are right now. If you mastered more their are more opportunity for you to get more scholarships. Scholarships can help you to graduated from high school with more credits and their are more chances for you to get accepted in collages. you can get to the collage that you really want to go into. There are myriad of collages that want you to be more intelligent and have mastered in everything because that's what they stand for since, it higher level of education they need, so its hard if you don't mastered more its not always like how you think that that's going happened sometime collages look for some staff that you never good at, so its important for all of us always be active. Its not fun to mastered more but sometimes you just have to make fun by working hard and putting you best effort into that work.

In Conclusion, it is salient to all of us to be good and stay active in everything that we can, because you never know when that all stuff that you have experience on can help you so we just need to be prepare it can flourish your future life. Its better for you to try flourishing from beginning of everything you have to have little bit of experience about everything it can also open up your future door to get success. For instants job, career and many other things that can help you to grow you experience that's the reason why we have to know or learn everything that is important it can help you to get into a career that can change your life.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5
FA87416EF173,"do you thing stuudent would benefit from being able to attend classes from hom?

I sopport the student should be attend class from home because We do not have to go to School and we can have more time with the family also We do not have to wake up early we can saty safe at home.

SD 1. some student do not like to wake up early and they shoose to take the classes online for the reason that student do not to ride the bus and can early to School.

SD 2. In my opinio it is a good idea to take class online most in this time becacuse so many bad thing are happen in the world for Example the corona virus this is one of most reason that I support to attend class at home because We can do the classes online and we can stay at home more safe and healthy.

SD 3. other good reason that is a good idea to take classes in home is that you mom know that you are in home because a lot of students scape and they mom thing that they are inthe School so if peolple attend classes from home mom ready know the his son in home.

conclution some student do not like to use the computer and they shoose to come to School and other student they do not how to use computer but still doing a good idea tke classes at home becasue you can have more time with your family also you don't have to wake up early to ride the bus and you can do you work at home and take more break",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
CCEFC4392340,"Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators think that summer break is too long and students do not retain information as easily as they would in the fall. Because of this a lot of educators think we should have year- round school years. This would be shorter breaks in the summer (3-4 weeks) and longer more spread-out breaks throughout the year. I disagree with this statement and believe that summer break should stay the way it is.

The first reason I disagree with this statement is that it would ruin certain summer activities or even business plans. Think about all the activities in the summer that kids usually take part in, this could be sports, some sort of trip, etc. All of these activities students would preferably do during summer break. They have this preference because they see the summer as a perfect time to do all these activities without having to balance their education as well. They can put most of their time on this activity. The same preference applies to things like summer jobs or internships. During the summer they can learn important values like how to save and earn money. Or if a certain student has a chosen career path they can explore this career path by going in a internship for that spesicifc job. For all of these activities students at the very least would be discouraged to participate in if there was a year-round school year.

The second and probably most important reason is pertaining to the students mental health. An article, by Complex News writing about kids mental health stated, that over 40% of kids by the end of their freshmen year in high school are depressed or overall feel exhausted and depleted mentally. The article continues to say that this number from the time of their freshmen year only increases after each school year. Students use the summer break as a way for their brain to refresh from the long almost ten month school year. Students need this time to relax their brain and get ready for the next year of education. As a student, I can say that during school my brain goes into this state where I am mostly just focused on school work. And I can admit that my brain at multiple points during the year is worn down and damaged by always be in this state. My brain does not get a chance to heal from this until the summer, when school is over. So if we were to hypothetically have a year-round school year, this would mean that the brain would also be in this damaged state year round. If this were the case than the brain of the student would eventually just break and shut down. No student should have to experience that because of a year- round school year.

Although the strongest reason for this year-round school year is that students cannot properly retain enough information for the next school year, I think I have a much stronger counter claim and solution to this problem. A very simple way to take care of the problem of retaining information, is to make mandatory (but simple) assignments from the previous year for the student to complete so that they don't forget this information. This way students can have their long summer break to refresh their brain and do their activities, without them having to forget any information. You get the best of both worlds with no need for a year-round school year.

In conclusion I think my assertions for the summer break to stay the way it is is much stronger than year-round school year argument. Having a year-round school year would be unnecessarily tedious and dangerous as it would negatively affect summer activities and mental health. As someone said once upon a time ""Don't fix it if it ain't broke.""",5.0,4.5,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
F82EFD88E2BE,"Success has always it's ups and downs, I know that their will always will be failures in whatever you are doing. For example, I am planning to be a photographer soon, with that

I had to go through many steps in getting the equipment that I needed. Also I needed to figure out all of the techniques of a camera, through all of that their has always been times where I failed to complete my task. Either their were problems with my camera or with my lighting just problems that I didn't know how to function well enough. Well with all of that I learned from my mistakes now, I know of what and not to do with my camera. I'm still learning new techniques since I started about a year ago, I'm still somewhat new but I plan to do this for a couple years and make a career out of it

When we try to pursue a career or even just trying to figure out the simplest problem that we have, we will all at one point in our lives get a answer to that problem or issues that you have. That's why failure is a key part to success, if you don't learn from your mistakes how will you learn. For example, when I was in middle school my teacher always picked on me in class the reason behind it was because I didn't play my instrument the right way. Well now I thank him for teaching me and instructing me how to play my instrument the correct way. Now I have improved over the past years and play the saxophone in my senior year.

In Conclusion, their will always be ups and downs in life, in all of these examples that I have given you they have all impacted my life in a good way. It also shows that in my life their was failures and at some point in your life their will be problems that you have got to fix. In my hands I will have a advantage over people that starting to be a photographer, they will make the same mistakes as I made but they will recover from it. That's why success has always been my number one goal in life I want to be a well known photographer. All of these examples have made me a better person from what I was and from what I am know and I am thankful for all of the adults that had helped me through this journey.",3.5,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
2F3E35DA88B0,"W

h y schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones for educational purposes? Although some say that schools should allow students to have and use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes, actually they shouldn't because students most of the time will be using their cell phones just to be in social media and also students probably will try to use their cell phones to cheat.

Those who believe that schools should allow students to have and use cell phones in classroom for educational purpose they have their reasons. They believe that it will be more easy for students to complete assignments and also it will help students to turn in their work on time.

In my opinion I think that schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones in classroom for educational purposes because students most of the time will be using their cell phones just to be in social media. I think that because when I am in my Algebra 2 class my teacher always assign us to complete some work that we have in blackboard,but what I noticed in the last month was that most of my classmates that were around me they weren't doing the assignment instead some of them were just playing video games,watching videos in YouTube and using Snapchat.

I think that schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose because students may use the cell phones to cheat. I believe that because such as a student if I was taking a test and I didn't study and I have the cell phone with me I will try to use it to find some answers in Google and also if students are allow to use the cell phones in the class they may use them to cheat by taking pictures of other student study guide,assignments and homework.

In conclusion schools shouldn't allow students to have and use cell phones for educational purpose because they will spend most of the time in social media and also they may use the cell phones for cheat.         ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
F29244150DCB,"Schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by video conference. This might be a good option for students who really do need it but there is some other students who won't take this seriously.

I am writing this essay with the porpuse of desagreement with the idea of providing this ""benefit"" to the students, this is a way of making students lose interest in school because they might think that they don't have to take the conference every time and they willl think that they can do it whenever they want which gives to think that they aren't prepare for making good decisions when it comes with schools classes. In my opinion this is an opportunity that the schools gives to the students to drop out of high school considering that students are teenagers and they don't have the same amount of responsability than adults in most cases.

As a student I desagree with this option. We need to be able to communicate, create good group work, and meet people and I can assure that most of the students will ended up leaving this classes when they half way done. Being with more students make classes fun, helpful and even more interesting, students sometimes needs to have a adult teaching them and having a conversation face to face instead a computer taking to them.

Taking classes online is a benefit when you know how to manage time for example: My brother is a college student who is getting his master degree in Genetic Engineering some of his classes wasn't a requirement that he had to take them inside school so he decide to take them online so he can have more free time when it comes with work and school. He made a study plan which consist in spending one hour each day so he can focus on his online classes which helps him to study for every single of his classes.

My friend Generic_Name is a senior on high school and she decided to take two of her classes online so she can have enough time for work, school activities, and graduation plans. She has been overwhelm with all her activities and assignments which it made her drop out of one of her two online classes, she said she felt like she couldn't do it by herself which it made her start getting bad grades in her school classes. Later she decided to take those classes in school so she can have her classmate help her in case she get stuck in a topic. I think this opportunity can make students get stuck and give up on school which it can't happen because we are the future.

In conclusion this option has it advantages and disavantages which for some people might seems good and differentes but for some other this option seems to be useless when it comes with the progress that we do inside the school.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
D9B80F897473,"The better way to influence people to have good behavior at school or anywhere is to be a comppassive friend.

Giving advice, try to talk to them, Otherwise people does not have good behavior because sometimes they have a lot of problems at home. For example if i saw someone who is close to me like my best friend or something like that and they have a bad behavior.

I will try to find ways to helping being kind, nice, social and give new perspective to other people. Being good influence for them is very friendly, is good in all of the reason's. The bad influences are the peolpe who had a to much opportunities and they don't care.

Be influence for other people ""it depent's"" what's type of of friends did you have, and how you're parents educate you. Because friends can make you to get trouble at school or at home with parents that the bad influynces make it you. For example people with bad behavior tech you bad things in differents aspect and that people are not you're friends. But is that a life you can have nice friends, people who had a bad influence too, people who are a very good influences for you.

Giving people better influences can help you in your future, basically in everything. For example you can have a Social life, Friendly smile, Nice peronality, Kind and all of the others specialityes. A lot of people had a bad bahavior at school they influid their friends too. The problem is the major of students sometimes they have a bad life a lot of problems at home. That's why their bahavior is like that. Some of the parent""s does not care about their Son's or daugther's how is the behavior at school or anywhere. Because they are awesome kind of persons or parents can't get the control of them.

However, they are true friends who love you, help you to had a normal behavior some of youre're friends not all of them. some of the friends when they saw it that you in trouble they don't talk to you anymore. For example in my own persoanlity i never, ever get suspension or problems from the school. So that is what's fake friends do theyprefer to lose a comunication, but for some reasons are good because it people who are not a nice person with you, bad influence. So that are the reasons why cause not all of your friends be there for your when you need someone can be for you; True friends and good influeces be there anytime that you need help or talk to them that's why you had to select your friends. You have to know who are your real friends and who are not.

For instances, People can have a opportnity to had a better life, future is the kind of people who had a bad behavior. It the type of people who influid the better influence for bad honestly sometimes is sad when you see that.

But, anyways nothing can do about it because a lot of people try to help them. They don'n wanna put their part for be a better person, influenece for give new perspective. So people get tired to help and they continue in the same way. These are all of the reason's why some people had a bad behavior some don't.                ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
E9FC757ED1E3,"Do you think is it a good idea for students to start a career at a young age under 18 or not,student should make their own choice. In some societies, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school.

First having a career in a young age,start work (having a job) and living by yourself. its like middle school and high school switch around youre pranging to live your life as adult instead living your life as teenage. At that age no one knows how to spend money or mange too. money is like water you have then spend it, all gone.

Then the other choice not having a career in a young age,living their life to the fullness plus spending time with family and friends. you dont have to worry so much about paying bills and other things. Your family will support you no matter what happen,you could go out with friend. At this point you could spend more time on studying mostly importation on yourself.

Be honest i dont think is a good idea,It take time to grow up to be young ADULT!!! Yeah sure everyone make mistaken but learn by it even if youre old,young it doesnt matter.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
8DA298718DD7,Student's will benefit from take the school classes at home instead of going to the school because they could work at their own pace. Student's dont have to wake up early in the mornings and be tried and if Student's come to school all tried they wont do the work most of the time. If the Student's take online classes then can finish anytime without have to worried about the class finishing and not hand in an incomplete assignment. This way if student's are really sick and can't come to school and are going to be out of school for weeks then this will help the student's keep on track with the class. If the schools did the online classes they wont have to be worried about snow days. A other benefit is being at home everyday and not have to move around a lot. Students would focus more because they have no one to talk to during the online classes. A other reasons this is good is that student's that dont come to school a lot can stay at home while they can do the school work at home instead of go to school and not showing up. Student's would probably have better grades because they would be finishing the work. It would be easy the get help if the student's dont understand they can just search it up on the internet or ask someone in their house for some help. The student's can take brakes during this time so they dont tried of doing a lot of work. This can also help the student's with computer skill while doing online school. Student's would get better information while doing this and it will come a long way in the future for them. A other good reason is that the student's can show their mom or dad they did their work so they can do what ever they went after because most of time student's dont show their mom or dad that they have been doing work in school. This would make somethings easier for people like the people who dont like to come to school or the people who dont like to wake up early in the morning. It will save a lot of time for the student's and teacher's because they wouldn't have to be there the whole day at school. It will make more people like school because you can take it online and you can finsh it at any hour but its due that day. ,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
1736153EF81F,"Well, I feel that working with a group is better than working alone. In my opinion is more easy to work with other people and you can be sociable working like that ,there's a lot benefits and reasons why I prefer more work together than work alone. Let me explain what are my reasons why I prefer work in a group and why I don't like to work alone.

First of all, I prefer work together because is more easy and you can finish your work quicky. For example, is you work in group of three, one member can search for the information about the topic, another member can make a poster showing examples about the topic and the last one has to organize how they are going to present and explain the topic. However, if I work alone I have to do all the work by my own, and it can takes a lot time to finish the project.

Second of all, Working together is so funny you can talk with your classmates about the topic, and having good discussions. I feel comfortable working in a group and I enjoy working like that, because they share their opinions with you, even you can learn more from your classmates than the information of the topic, it can be strange,but it is true you don't know how much they know about the topic. Sometimes you can't understand the topic, but you have your group and ask questions to them, and they can help you to understand the topic.

Third of all, Working in groups can be sociable, you can have a good time knowing new people and make new friends. I think is good be sociable because you can learn new things about them and you can develop your knowlege getting the new information from your classmates. For example, if you don't know anythink about history and you are in a group, and you ask who knows something about history and someone likes history you can aks him about it, and you can get new information about history and at the same time you are being sociable. However, if you are working alone, you can't ask to anybody because you dont know them.

In conclusion, that's are the reasons why I prefer working in a group. Working together can be easy you can share the work with your group, you can have a good time with your classmate talking about the topic , and you can develop your friendship making new friends.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
48292985CC59,"Well I want to start saying that the first impressions about people can change but if the impressions change is because something happen. I'm saying it because of some of my experiences with other people that I met and change my impressions about them. Sometimes people don't change,instead of saying that people change your impressions about them maybe you need to know your self first and see what is happening also you need to known why that person change your impressions because maybe something sad or bad is happening on their life and you don't know it.

So let me tell you an experience that happen to me a few moths ago so I met this girl and she was very nice with me and I start thinking that she was that nice with everyone and no I was wrong she only was that nice with me so I decide to date her so I tell her if she want go to see a movie next weekend and she tell me, yes! and I say great so like 3 days before going to see the movie she start acting weird and I ask her if she was OK? and she tell me yes,so the next day I start talking with her and she tell me what was happening and she tell me that her mother was sick and she was sad,so she tell me everything that was happening and I understand why she was acting weird.

In conclusion my impressions about her it was starting to change but I decide to talk with her to see what was happening, before that I start saying that she change and my impressions about her change. is bad to change the impressions about a person without knowing what is happening in their life,because you don't know if that person is waiting for you to ask them what is happening. So I think you should ask that person what is happening and then you decide what are you going to do. These are some of the many reason why I disagree with the statement.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
09EC2F6B0D24,"What if i been asked to share a lesson with elementary school students example

.My lesson will be about what they want to be when they grow up . and how will they make that become true? One reason that this is important is because students need to know what they want to be and what they want to do when they grow up so when they go to school every day they know what they are working hard for. For example when they go to school they are going to be thinking about why they are in school for and how can they make their dream become true. another example is that they are going to be ready because they all ready know what they want because every day they went to school and they ask them self what do i want for my family? ,what do i want for my life ? why am i doing this for ?. they will not forget why they are in school for because they will have a goal for school. Another lesson I will tell them is that they need to do do their best in school because when they grow up they will need it on a everyday life. A reason why they have have to try their best in school is because when you grow up you will need it for everything you will need math,reading, writing and more .One example is that when you go to pay a bill you will need to know how much you need and how did it add up to all that amount of money and you will know how to because you went to school and you tried your best everyday you went. Another example is that everywhere you go you will need to read. This is why elementary school students need to know what they want to be when they grow up and why is important to go to school. And is important that they have good friends that will keep them going and to cheer them up because they might feel lonely and is not really good for them and everyone needs a friend that will help you when you need it and do let bad friends make you do bad things and you know what is good and what is bad .If you tell elementary school students what they have to do when they are small they will be better people in the world. Because some people dont take it for real but maybe they will be better and take it more serous. This is why is important this lesson for everyone.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
76E5D0DEC30A,"People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. There is a quote that says, ""If you want to go fast go by yourself, but if you want to far go with someone else"". As the quote says, I think that it's very important to have someone to guide us throughout the course of our lives. I agree that seeking for guidance from experts to make wise decisions can have a great impact in our lives. Experts and authorities can provide us with advices to make good decisions in life and accomplish our goals more easily.

First of all, having someone to guide you throughout the decisions you make in life could help you accomplish a goal a lot easier. For example, when I was in middle school I used to think that doing individual work was faster and easier. However, I noticed that most of my classmates who worked in groups finished all the assignments in less time than I did. This experience showed me the importance of always having someone to give you their opinion to accomplish a goal quickly and avoid wasting your time. Thus, seeking for guidance from experts can help you achieve any goal you set in life and avoid wastig your time on making wrong decisions.

In addition, you will learn and gain experience if you have someone expert to guide you. For example, having an expert guiding you will allow you to see his different points of view and learned from his teachings. This will allow you to learn from his teachings and experiences and reflect about them. Furthermore, relying on with an expert will give you the chance to learn new lessons and in the future give you the opportunity to make your own decisions. Finally,

you will learn how to make wise choices by learning from the lessons that an expert or authority could offer you.

Some people say that having someone telling you what to do will limit you from choosing what's best for you. For instance, when I was 10 years old I really wanted to make my own decisions that I thought were best for me. In whatever manner, I rarely got to choose my own decisions because my brother was always there telling what decisions to make. As I grew older I understood that my brother was just guiding me through the right path. Because my brother had experienced many of the situations I went through, he was able to help me and in many occasions avoid me from failing. Therefore, experts and authorities will be there to not let you fail and always look for what's best for you.

In conclusion, seeking from guidance from experts may not give you the freedom to make your own decisions, but it will help you accomplish your goals rapidly and efficiently. Since experts have already experienced many rough situations in life, they will know how to make decisions that will benefit us in the best way. Furthermore, in the course of the path with an expert guiding you, you will learn a lot of things that will help you make better choices. Finally, you will avoid wasting a lot of your life's time trying to follow your own instincts and ideas. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
DC56EF65D59D,"""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm""

I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, the life consists in make mistakes, nobody is perfect, everyone in any moment of our life we failure, but the purpose it's stand up with faith and enthusiasm, and doesn't give up; failure is not something bad like many people think, that's the reason why too much people feel lees than other's, when they make failure's in they life, so we resolve our mistakes with sadness, without enthusiasm, or fear of what people can say, believe in yourself is the key of an better life, and failure in our life it's just the teacher of our own future.

Churchill's statement bring a beautiful statement of what successful can be signify in our life, so success it's something what everyone can obtain in any situation, however, it's the most wonderful opportunity for our own willingness,while, in my other hand failure means practice of our own future, because failure it's just the perfect manner to learn, to be better with the past of the time. How your going to teach your children's, if you didn't make mistakes? Failure make people with experience, ""if you don't make mistakes,you don't learn"" and you can't teach other people, when they are in warning to make the same mistakes that you did before, this is a great example of family, so you need to be the example of your children's helping to show the danger, but as well the wonderful manner to see the failure with enthusiasm to commence again.

The failure make better people? absolutely, because mistakes sample the things what we didn't wanted to see before; failure to failure probably it's tired, but have a great recompense; failure prepare our own life, for example if we failure the test, probably next time we are going to study better than the first time, but we get a great experience to see with better perspective than before. The point of failure is what we need to live failure in our own life, for understand and see with different perspective than before, failure create a maturity person with experience, and big knowledge;however this great statement it's a example of persevered,progress, and growth in our own life to get experience, maturity, productivity, and fortress.

My conclusion is basically in the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, so make mistakes is no bad it's part of life, just don't give up and show that we can be better, we can do better than before;failure is the teacher of your future, don't be fear on what people can be say about your decision's, or you manner of see your failure, it's fine make mistakes ""we learn something new"",but it's important the manner that we see it, with enthusiasm or sadness?,because we continue,we start again,and we can get better results. Failure it's the experience of the teacher, of a persevering, progressing, and productivity person,life it's not perfect, but depends the perspective in what way do you see life, so"" we need to make mistakes to be the teacher of the tomorrow"".",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
410957337087,"Distance learning

In century twenty-first the education in United states and another countries became better that before thanks to technology. Moreover, the technology helps schools to teach their students with a better way. Now, classes are created creative and effective. The schools had been creating different programs such as ""Distance learning"" to offer a different option to students. This is a program that help students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Therefore, there is a question that every body is making Is the distance learning a better option?.

As all programs, it has many advantages. The benefits of this program are following: Anytime class: you do not need to wake up very early in morning, you will be able to attend classes anytime that you consider best. No drive: you do not need drive to school or anywhere, you will skip the traffic. Comfortable: it will be comfortable, because you will stay in the comfort of your house. Work and study: you will be able to work and study at same time, because you can attend classes anytime that you want. No bullying: you do not have to suffer bullying from anybody in school anymore. Focus: you will be focus in class, because you will be alone in your house without company.

it also has disadvantages such as no teachers: you do not have any teacher with experience around of you. if you have a question, you can not ask to some else. Sociable life: you will lost a sociable life in school, because you will stay in home. No books: you do not have all the books to study. Depression: you will pass for a depression that could be caused from being locked in home.

Well, is the distance learning a better option?. In conclusion, in my personal opinion it is. I think that this types of programs will be useful and success. There are many peoples that needed programs as this, because they does not have full time to go to school. Those people that need work and study at same time, because they do not have all the resources or money. This programs was created for all you, people that can not go to school. At end if you want to join to a programs as this, it up to you.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
A8D0ADC676C0,"Everyone would eventually ask an advice if they need help on a particular subject or ask for an opinion if they ever get confuse. Advises or opinions would solve one's problem. For example, to prevent making poor choices or decisions, to determine which advice is accurate, and to allow someone to feel secure with choices. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.

First, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by preventing making poor choices or decisions. For instant, if someone attempts to steal. If there's something you want but it's expensive. Also, if someone gets in a fight. If there's someone you don't like or disagree with. Lastly, if someone lies. When someone did something wrong and lied about it. Seeking multiple opinions can help some make a better choice.

Furthermore, seeking multiple opinions can help people make a better choice by determining which advice is accurate. For example, to be sure that it's reliable. If many said the same thing while others said a different thing. Also,if someone wasn't sure about the advice. Ask people for more advice if the advice is inaccurate. Lastly, if the advice is inaccurate. If someone said one thing while others said the other thing. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.

Finally, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by allowing someone to feel secure with choices. For instant, if someone gets confuse. If you're lost on one subject. Also, if someone gets lonely. if someone doesn't have a baseball team. Lastly, if someone gets worried or afraid. If someone you know is absent or gone. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.

In summary, viewing many opinions can benefit people to make a better choice by preventing making poor choices or decisions, determining which advice is accurate, and by allowing someone to feel secure with choices. I believe that asking yourself for advice is also necessary. but, viewing many opinions from people is probably more necessary than viewing your own advice.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
30FE0B8168BE,"Imagine a life where people think the same and look the same, it be like a world without stain, to some people will sound perfect,but life is attempt to do mistakes and learn from it, where people can't compare themselves, where you can accept that in some cases, there are better people than you or worst than you, life is like that, but the greater accomplishment is to be different than others.

First, if people in the world including you are the same, the world will get bored for example; when you working an a factory that do the same thing every day, after a long time working there,you are going to get bored. The better way to do is doing something diferent every day, same with people if you and the people stay the same nothing is going to distinguesh you, but since you born you came with your own thoughts and qualities,for those reasons you have try and work for yourself.

Secondly, working by yourself and focus about you, and your own goals will help you to get your goals very quickly, because if you do the same thing that the people is doing, you will stay the same like them and lose interest about what are you doing and be an ordinary person. We have a talent to discover, but you have to work individual to reache it, no one is going to do it for you.

Third and last reason doing something that every body is afraid to do it , is a way to show that you are diferent, no matter what people said. In the beginning they are going to tell you a lot things ,so you can stop it, but when you reached they are going to be astonishing.

In conclusion; the best way to live, is trying to make you something else, so people can distinguish you from others, where you can improve your self, and try to be different than others. You will enjoy your life and have a better future,so people should try to be an individual person to have a better future and be succesfully in life. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
36BBFBB5EA41,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life; I agree with this statement about the importance of having a positive attitude. In life you live and learn lessons, dealing with stress after stress, or learning that every struggle you faced at the end it will pay off.

The key to success in life is having a positive attitude: never envy what others have, nor wish bad upon a person for their success. Trust the process, life will knock you down, get you at your lowest but having that positive attitude towards every struggle and having that positive mindset to others will get you further than you think, having that negative attitude towards everything wont get you far in life: hatred, jealousy, and hard headed wont take you nowhere: in life you are going to face the fact that not everything will go right, and not everything is going to be how you want it.

This statement about having a positive attitude is the key to success in life is true, nothing will get you far if you have a negative attitude towards everything that comes your way. If something didnt work out there's always a reason why it didnt went how you expected it, either you decide to work harder to get where you want to get or just give up and not do anything to get you closer where you want to be.

I agree with this statement, no matter how hard it gets having that positive attitude towards your losses, other peoples successes, and working extra hard will get you further. The key in life is to have a positive attitude.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
A9DA6C8A9555,"Albert Einstein said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge.""

I do agree because in your imagination you can think or do anyting you want. Knowledge is just using ur brain but it's not the same as imagination. Many people might agree with me because its just true. You can think of many ways; Therefore, all the things you think can come true but not all the time. Im going to tell you all the reason why!

Imagination is a whole new world, not many people can say that. You can create anything just by using ur brain.

In your mind think of scary movie, funny movie, and horror thing that can scare you. Sometime you can make up a plan by using ur imagination; Meanwhile, you can use ur Imagination for homework or any problem that you have at home. Think about it, you are goiign to love it.

Albert Einstein is one of the smartest people if you don't belive me read an article about him trust me. If you use your knowledge what the fun on that you can't even create nothing. Some people just say, use your knowledge for a problem instead of your imagination. knowledge is important but using your imagination is more important.

If you don't belive me belive Albert Einstien!

What would you like to use more your knowldge or your Imagination. Well think of the fun thing you can do with your Imagination. Well Albert Einstein would not have said, using your imagination is more important then knowledge. This is my opiaion but it could be your opiaion to. You need to try it, Im telling you it's so fun.

Imagination is really fun and helpfull in life; However not many people think that, Imagination fun because they never try it. Many people might think it boring and that there no point to it. But there wrong becuase how do you think that many people got out of there bubble or problem they had in school or home. Just use your imagination It might even help you in life or anywhere. Like I said this is just my opiaion no one else.",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
9CCE6697A5B1,"In my personal opinion the tecnology come here to help to us in many different positive ways. such as, shopping online, make a bills payments, now I don't need to go to the stores to buy something I need it. This method make me save time and something save money as well, because in some case online purchase are cheaper that go buy straight to the store. Make online payments is one the most part I like to do using the tecnology, because make me save a lot of time. back day I have to make a longers line in the stores to make my payments now I can do it from my house. when you buy something online now, you don't need to speak with someone to make a desicion because the stores webside are really expecific with their products, they give to you the details on what are you looking for and most the time give a exactly image how the products are.

sometimes you can have fun time using the tecnology, play videos games is one of the good things we can do with the tecnology, with the videos games you can met new people from diferent part of the world, there exist some videos games provide you that option. learn new things always is good. This is a new type of style or life that most the people like it.

Thanks to the tecnology by Email, my and my daughter teacher have more comunication, the teacher always keep me inform how my kid is doing in the school, Also that way I know all the event my daughter school have schedue.

The tecnology is helpful for everyone beacuse help to everyone improve our knowledge, make our life more easy to handle it. In most the job the tecnology is using as a new tool, emails is the best way to share imformation in the work now. someone who know how to used the tecnology right, that person is value for two person.

In conclution, The tecnology is the one of the most important things we have in our life now, if you are using it, you should realized is worth it.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
753391D5E480,"I would have to agree with otherwise you try to do something in other side what you have is already mastered, you will never be successful, because whatever you have in your life is still nothing you should have a specific goal for you future, enough confidence, and demonstrated yourself.

Everyone should know what he/she want to be so they must prepare them selves for what they need to be, like working hard in order to achieve development in there ways. I want to tell about my friend Generic_Name that he is an engineer, he use be one those people that they think they can't do any thing in lives to find the way of success but he went for it to get it, thats way he is an excellent example for me. That makes me feel like it is your life, it is your choices just find it out whatever you want.

I think whoever believed to themselves and to the ability that they have they defiantly feel more strong in there goals. Also every one knows that when you have a problem do not complain just ask for help like me, when I was in Tenth grade I had a lot of issues the most important one is the school that I don't want to be in school because I feel that is just not going to work for me but I was wrong because I did ask for help from my teachers they provide me very helpful in formations. Some people might disagree with with me because they think asking for help can't solve all of the problems, but they are wrong because everyone need help no one is prefect.

As we know to confide in your self you need to toil hard a lot and you must tolerate more trouble that they are coming in your way. Of cores noting is easy but also is not that much hard that you should give up for it, so the more education that you have the more happier you will be in the future like my favorite soccer player Ronaldo he had a very hard live but he did find his goal and now he demonstrated him self to everyone.

In conclusion whoever try to do something in the lives like working hard on there goals, having enough confidence and tried to achieve them they well be successful. We all should believing to ourselves and use our abilities in right ways if there is a wish, there is a way for it.              ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
9E1DFDF33C0B,"I think classes such as art,music,and drama class should be electives. Why should we be required to take art,music,and drama class if we are not interested? Schools should allow students to pick there classes. If we were allowed to pick our electives then students would enjoy school more. We should be able to like our electives not dislike them.

What if student had to take art but they dont like it? They would not try the work and just fail the class. What about drama class,not everyone enjoys it so it shouldnt be required. Not every student wants to sing or play an instrument. Therefore they shouldnt be forced to take a music class.

Although it would be great for some student not all would like those classes. Therefore student should be allowed to pick there classes. If they were electives we would pick classes that interest us and would actually try to do work. Students would pass their classes more. Therefore those class should be electives.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
35D50C79C5CB,"Studies have shown that one way to improve student achivement is to start an afterschool homework club. Teachers and Students volunteer to meet those who either have difficulty in certain subjects or who want to finish their homework early.

My opinion is that I find it a good idea to have a homework club, because when I was in 4th grade I went to a homework club and what I did there was of course work on homework but if you finished early you could finish work from later on that day or on things that you could do on the next day and I would always rremember I would be ahead on every paper she assigned to the class because I already completed it! When I didn't do homework club I would sometimes miss fun friday because during fun friday in order to play you must have all your work done and be caught up. But when I joined homework club I haven't missed one fun friday game!

In conclusion I suggestion having a homework club, it help with grades and getting ahead in class! It's also very fun",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
1CF3776F970D,"Dear principal,

Well its important to help the community service because if we don't our city might be dirty and not clean and sometimes our city is very dirty cause some people just throw trush in the floor and that's why we always have to keep our city clean so we don't have to have our city dirty. Sometimes my friends don't like helping the community service because she doesn't care but i tell her its important to help the community because if we don't we just might not have water, food, etc. When my OTHER_NAME was here in LOCATION_NAME she sometimes take me to the park and pick up trash from the floor and throw it on the trash can or sometimes she takes me to go and check in the trash can to see if there is cans so we could recycle it.

After when me and my OTHER_NAME was at the park picking up the trash we saw these two guys that were throwing food on the floor and I told my OTHER_NAME look those guys are throwing food on the floor so when they left I went and picked up what they threw on the floor cause its important to help the community service. Also sometimes I go to LOCATION_NAME and there is a lot of trash on the floor and when I always go over there with my cousin I always take a bag so i could pick up the trash and food that they have on the floor.

Finally I really like helping the community service because i just really like picking up the cans that are in the floor and go recycle it. Finally the last thing im goin to tell you is that you should tell all the kids from the school that its important to help the community service I love it..

Sincerely, STUDENT_NAME",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
9255DC307B75,"Have you ever been in school and your teacher tells you to come after school to get your work done? Well i think that having after school clubs is good because it can help us in school. It will help then get they work done faster, and also better for them to understand. Sometimes kids at home dont like to do they homework but if they do activities after school they would actually want to do the work so they can do the activitties.

To begin with kids get bored of just sitting there doing homework but if their actually doing activitties they would'nt be bored and actually work on they homework. If the kids are active and are having fun they would get things done faster and easier like say a student was gonna pay sports and you tell him he has to finish they homework in order to play if the kid loves the sport he would do it. nowadays kids like to do they work in activitties such as math games, card games, and many more. The teachers can explain the work better for them so they can understand and learn it better.

To continue you must show them that the work is very important, and the kids would actualy take it seriously and they could actually improve there grade. Kids nowadays don't really be trying to take things serious so the adults got to push them and show them that there homework is important and has a big impact on your grade. Its better to have someone constantly on your back because it will help you in the future it's always good to have people push you to succeed. A lot of kids give up in school and don't be wanting to do they homework thats why when soembody is doing activitties and learning they wouldn't give up on they selfs that easy on they selfs. the students also get bored of being in a quiet room just working on they work students like to be active not just sitting in one place bored.

Last but not least you got to put effort in the work to be able to understand it and to get it done or if not you would be having a very rough time on your assighnment. But always remember never give up and keep pushing for your goal because not only in school will you be stressing. Lastly these are some of the reasons why I think it would be a good idea for our schools to have afterschool activities it will help a lot.  ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
D679B3291B9C,"Would you agree that schools having partnerships with companies is a great idea?. Some may say that people won't take things serious and just not even pay attention to it and see what the partnerships have too offer but, however it could help a lot of students who need too decide on what career they wanna do in life, so they wont be wasting time and money on a career that they dont even wanna pursue but, not also that people could get a head start on everyone who hasn't made up their minds.

Also for an example a companies like Google could offer a internship for cyber security. And if they see that certain people are putting in work and are making a change in the work environment or even helping out a good amount in the work space. They will for sure end up giving you a job you like, but not only that many companies have really good benefits so thats always a great plus. It also comes down to what people wanna do in life and how they are willing to pursue it.

then school is really expensive and time consuming. For example schools can cost up too $100,000 , and no average Joe has that kind of money just laying around so that when people have to get loans from banks ,but then end up owning the bank money and not only are people going to school you need to go work so people can pay for school, food, rent ,car payments and clothing. So then people end up living check by check and therefore people have no time for their families because they are so busy working on themselves.

finally it just comes down to what people wanna do in life and what benefits them in the long run so they can be stable with money and mentally. and also if they would like to do these programs that schools have too offer and what works for them, but they also gotta choose what they wanna do and actually like it because at the end of the day its their life.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
297ABDDBAA92,"How is possible to people think that success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I agree with ministre Winston; it always would be a new oportunitie to change the mistake people learn from failure. It gives everyone a chance to corret it. I also believe that failure is an important part in life to people must have success.

One notable reason is that people learn from failure. For example, sometimes people get involved in some sadness problems that consist in failure. People have the oportunitie to corret it; they would be able to reach their dreams or goals not matter how harder is life people always have to strive with enthusiasm. Moreover, in my personal opinon, 3 years ago I was playing for a soccer team I get involved in a situation where I got really stressful with myself because I training hard for playing the final game with my team. Unfortunately, I can't play the final game because the game before I commited a foul and I get a red card. my team loss the game, it was too lake for me do anything about it. I realized that not matter what I did in the past; it always be a new oportunitie for improve and teach myself that failure it's has an important role in life to be success.

Futhermore, another important reason is that it gives people a better chance to corret it. This reminds me to a friend, who was in a situation where he was really disappoint because he fail his driving test. The next day, he cames to my house and talk to me about it. I remember that I told him to keep in his mind that it's important to be prepare for any situation that you know you have a lot of chances to pass if you triying and triying you will get on it. A lack of success depending in achieving goals and dreams. I think that failure is also a way to teach people that even if you fail you just always have to try no matter how many times you try it as long as you trying without lossing the enthusiasm you will reach your dreams, or goals.

Some people would argue that success is not consist in failure; however, everyone in our society knows that failure is an important part in life to be success. People learn from failure and it gives people a better chance to corret it. There is not limits to reach ours dreams as long as you keep going to complete it.

Provides everyone a learning that not martter how harder is life, there would be millions of chances to be success with anything you want to do. In conclusion, success consist in failure without lossing enthusiasm. The statement of ministre Winston gives people a reflection about a topic of how failure is important for success.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
E1920CC1D734,"Should young students commit to a career. I think young students should not commit to a career yet because their minds can change at any momment and if they commit to a career and if they start to not like the career they wanted they will wasted all their time and effert to that one career. Also, If the class's for the career are defficult they and they give up halfway and drop out the class and never try again. So their goal to get the career they want is not in reach for them anymore. Also, you may still not be ready to commit to a career because there are different things you may be into and like doing more then the job you want to do. However, some people may not feel the same way as me on this topic. people may think that is a good idea that young student commit to a career because they have an idea of what they want to do later in life and won't be stuck as may other students may be. I still think at students that are young should not commit to a career yet. so For my conclusion if you are in high school and if you don't know if you want to commit to a specific career don't because you can chage you're mind at anytime. Also, you may not like the career you look into or may find it hard and give up and thats not a good thing to do.",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
344D7B1A7E49,"I agree with Emerson's statement. Why would some people never grow up? Some people may have childish personality so it's most likely that the person won't be able to change much. The three reasons are: your attitude, violence, and lastly friends that some people are using you and say some harsh things when your not around.

Some may say that some people will be able to change. They are wrong because some people won't be able to change how they act towards you. My first reason is attitude: some people won't be able to change to change your attitude towards them, and won't be able to change how you act towards them. For example, I sometimes have a very bad attitude towards my sister, Generic_Name. I always yell at my sister, Generic_Name for asking me to do something or give her something even though she's younger than me by three years.

My second reason is violence: Some people won't be able to change their violence, and some people my end up hurting their closest friends. For example, back in middle school I was always a sweet girl who doesn't hurt people, but after, when I cut my hair some people end up calling me names which made me upset and I started to get a little violent towards the people who call me names. I'm still sweet towards my friends who understands how I feel when someone call me names, but I also try very hard to control my violence so I won't get in trouble. The second example is: My youngest sister, Generic_Name gets violent when my other sister, Generic_Name gets her angry. Afterwards, she tries very hard not to get violent just like me.

My last reason is friends: Some people wants to use you for money because they wanted to buy clothes only for themselves. The other one is some people will act nice, but, when you leave they will say very cruel things to you. For example, I watch my favorite movie where the popular, mean girls are acting friendly to the new girl, but when the new girl leaves the popular, mean girls say harsh things about her so the new girl won't be able to hear them.

In conclusion, why would some people never grow up? The way the person is acting childish would make them not change that much. I agree with Emerson's statement, because some people can be very childish, and its most likely won't be able to change that much. The three reason are: some people have a very bad attitude, sometimes get very violence, and lastly some people may use you and say very cruel things about you when your not there.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
1703E46B4DC9,"People this days deal with a lot of issues . Its clear that sometimes adults also need help with making their own decisions. Most of the time we tend to think that because we're adults we are doing the right thing, but instead we're doing the opposite. Once you start to see the downfall,or the bad things that have started to happen to you or the people close to you because of the decisions that you made, its time for you to go for to seek for guidance. Its best that you seek help before you're life falls apart.

Guidance has helped a lot of people with their daily lives. The best part about it is that their's no age limit for when you can and can not go. For example high school students have the privilege to go for guidance at school anytime they need it. One important thing that high school students are given during guidance is to always pick the classes that will help them in the future. Going for guidance should begin at an early age. When you start going, you get to understand the aspect of life and the decisions that you make as you move on with you're life. Its a great place to go when you have no idea of what you're going to do with you life or how to make the right decisions.

The best part about going for guidance is that you are assured you'll be talking to an expert;meaning that they are able to control themselves in any situation and talk to you in any circumstance. Most of the people who hold these jobs have degrees and are licensed to do that work. For most people,talking to someone the do not know is easier that talking to someone who they know. In this case it's easier to open up to an expert who will soon give you advice and what to do next with you're life.

After all maybe guidance isn't a good place to go. One of the reasons that people don't seek for guidance is that it's too expensive. Most people can not afford to go for guidance every month or week. You need to have some form of income or at least be making a decent amount of money in order for you to afford it. The second reason would be, you're not really sure that the decisions that the experts make for you will be helpful. Its not always good to rely on what people say or when people tell you what to do with your life. In the end we are the ones who know ourselves better than anyone else does.

In conclusion most of us still need help with the decisions that we make. We all make good decisions and bad choices. As we grow we deal with so many things and sometimes its good to always talk with an expert. After all we're not perfect but the best decision for you is to seek guidance. You will be surprised by the outcomes of it.                 ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
73851AC4551C,"78% of Americans students do extracurricular activities, by staying after school,doing sports and serving on the student council. This can help students to improve their grades,because every activity count as a grade or extra credit.

Firstly,students should do extracurricular activities because this can improve their grades, if they do extra credit after school teachers can replace a missing assignment for the extra credit. Students can improve their grades in different ways they can do particularly activities like sports, if students do sports they can practice their beneficent for do activities after school. One important thing is that students can receive help from others students or teachers,a lot of students stay after school for receive help especially when they have missing assignments,if they do not understand a topic.

Secondly,students can spend time with their friends, this is important because some students spend their time in technological things like phones,video games and things like that ,others students like to stay after school because they can share time,ideas or comments how they are in their grades,by sharing ideas they can help each other in their work,especially if they do not understand something. They can share and receive help from others they can do work together and when they finish they get free time for their friends.

Thirdly, this is most important because students learn more,they learn the importance of share time with friends,a lot of people have longer friendship because they like to spend time with friends and they do not spend time with a phone. All the kids should do extracurricular activities in school because this can help then in a future,especially if they take importance to improve their grades.

To conclude, every student should do activities after school,this is a benefit for their future and for their learning skills. Parents should be interest in these things because most students have bad grades in their classes and this is an opportunity for improve grades. Doing sports is an activity that can help kids to be healthy and stronger.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
41D5C14587DA,"I really think that, Ralph Waldo Emerson, was right when he wrote this or most of the people see it that way its like you went to collage and you get a degree and come back and still living with your parents when you could move out and get a job save some money to buy a house but if you still living with your parents it will be the same, because they will keep looking at you like a lil child into you start to get your own things for them no matter how old you are they will look at you the same way that look at when you born, i think that when Ralph wrote this he wanted to mean this.

For the rest of the world you already a grow man or woman when you get your life together and get your own car, house, and family that you will look out for, and you will do anything for them like your parents did it for you and it will be the same story but from a different side and the one whos telling the story and you will never what your children to grow you will look at them like your child the rest of your life i did not get into i sow my older sister taking care of her daughter it was there when i start look ma life from a different side i might not be an fully grow man but i move out my house when i was 15 and i thought it will hard to keepup we the rest of the world i think before you take your own path and stop worrid about the rest of the world thats when you really grow up familyis first, second, and tird.

I think that the best way to grow is do you first and there is no need for you to move out you just need to look at the rest of the word from a different side and thats when you really grow is not age or nothing like that is on you just dont worry about nobody beside your family and your frinds.

from a person that live this before at a yong age ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
457A4416559B,"some schools have available program, and some do'nt have program because some kids are to young or to small to have program. Butt youngers kids have program because they are growing up. Some school do'nt have program, and some school have program. Exsample are school have program because we have enternet. Some schools do'nt have enternet.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
56E188D44884,"The first impressions are difficult to change because is something special that forever goes to stay in our minds for example when someone go for the first time to the beach, it is the first impression and is as a picture taken in his mind that will never disappear,there are a bunch of impressions the people can not forget such a new father when he come in the hospital and look at his wife with the baby on her arms is something that is undelete in the mind,good impression are alike to persuase the mind of the people, a beginner political always is trying to leave the best remain in the mind of the people to later get their votes because he win because knew that leave a good first impression was the trick to convince them. The firs impression can be used to persuade but also many times to hurt a person that is why always consider to be carefully at leave it.

I am agree with the statement, never someone could have the capacity to change something have left recorded in his mind, I have examples for my opinions such as an inmigrant who just pass trough the border from mexico and the border patrol cath him up he always going to remember that the border patrol did that his dreams stop because he was an ilegal guy, everybody have different experiences no always the impression going to be to turn us in a happy mood,this stament is quite real, everyone have to think about leave a good impression ever.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
E282639E23F5,"Although some say that is not a good idea that students commit to a career at the young age because when they get to school and they when to a class and sit they will file very tire and will say that is why I did not whants to gets the career because I ready no that will afeck my class and I am not sleeping nothing at the nigh, actually is a good idea for students to commit a career at the young age because they can see that when they get they career they are going to see that the life is very hard and they can try to fix it by working and helping there family wit other things , and they can buy what ever they wants if they shoes a good career that is helping them and it will continue helping there future.

However does that believe that is not a good idea that students commit at the young age one reason is that they will file tire , because when they want to pay atention to math class and they see that the teacher is talking to much they are going to say no I want to sleep to to be in this class borring,second when they are in the corridor study for a quiz and they will be talking about the career and when they are going to take the quiz they will know nothing because they did not study .

Does who believe that is a good idea for students to commit a career at the young age give one reason ,one reason is that tey can see can the life is very hard and they will have to do there own thing ,second is that they can buy a car so because if they shoes a good career they are going to resif a lot of money so can have a car and help there family with other thing at home .

Finally that career it have to be good some you are not going to be looking for another commit career because you try hard and ask you family and teacher to help you to fun a good one, second if you like that career you most talk wit you mom or dad that you are happy with that and tell you teacher that help you to found that career and tell her can you will talk to other students to come and talk to the teacher so she can help them .

Inconclution people shoud agree that students can commit a career because it will help other students that are in High School and wants to be someone in the future they vere found what career do they want to work or study for ,second they will feel for good if they get the thing by there own ,thrid if they are traying to make something in their country their very try to talk to someone a friend or other person that can help them ,finally they can get more oportunity if they study hard and them founf they career that they wants .",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
CD506B5747F7,"Students should are espected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they can know how long they took at high school and graduate. The lasthing they can focuse of school if they can identify a career and they can study more fast to take out at high school. Students can be preparede about the career what they want to study at high school.

First, studenst can know how long they are at school and they can know how long they take to go out at school.

however they can see what they can need to graduate at school to not take to long at school. Also students don""t like they come at school and they want to go out fast at school. There are many students that don't want to stay at school long time because some students want just work.

Second, should students commit to a career because they can focuse of school if they identify a career. Many students will focuse in their future. However students have the oportunity to have a career at school at a young age. They can study what they really want especific at school because they going to know they career. Also if a student have the career that he wants it's going help him to be prepare more when he go to a collage.

Third, If students have specific career, student can be prepared at high school what they really want to be or to study in the future. This is going benefice the students when they go to collage because they not going be thinking about their career. Students can't spend to much time at collage or Univercity because if they are preparede making progres at high school about their career.

Some careers take long time to have improve your skills ant practice more study more but if they do that at high school it's not going take to much time in the future.

Finally Students should are espected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they can know how long they took at high school and graduate. The lasthing they can focuse of school if they can identify a career and they can study more fast to take out at high school. Students can be preparede about the career what they want to study at high school. Those are the reason why students are expected to commit a career at a young age.        ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
18FDAA0BF6A2,"Do you think students in high school, should commit a career at a young age? I think students should wait until there last year or second to last year of high school, to think about getting a career. Students in high school should focus more on school rather than a career. But they can think about what they wanna do after high school.

Do you think by the time students enter high school, They are expected to identify a career? I think that students who are about to enter high school. Should focus on school and than getting out of high school. High school is not a joke it matters. You have to pass your classes in order to go to the next grade. If you fail some classes you repeat those classes again the next year or have to go to summer school. You dont wanna go to summer school. I wouldn't wanna have to go to summer school just because I didn't pass the first time.

When kids enter high school, should they think about a career? I think they should take electives that relate to a career. like fun electives they can take during the school year. I think that high school is getting us prepared for the real world kinda. Because once we leave high school we are on our own. Noone is gonna help you besides your family and friends. That's why I suggest getting a job so you can take care of yourself.

I think students thinking about a career, before going to high school. Should focus on school because high school isn't a joke. Of Course high school has drama but we have to deal with and it's not that hard. I think kids could brain storm about getting a career at a young age. High school isn't easy we all have our problems we have to deal with. But high school is temporary just like pain is temporary when your dealing with depression. High school in general sucks sometimes because of the drama and high school girls. The teachers aren't like middle school and elementary school teachers. The teachers in high school aren't gonna hold ur hand. So that's why you gotta work and not slack off in high school because it'll come back to bite you.                                                          ",3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
D344D0003B84,"Every person has their own feelings, emotions, and their own talents. But people are thinking that if they that talent or skill, and they can not do that in front of the world or people. As all people has different talent, that they really want to show to people. Before they think about their talent to chance their own world, they will be so nervous that they can't do that. They will be afraid, they will not show that to people that can learn from it. That they can try it on their own life, so they can learn new thing from new people. Over 90% of all people in the world has their own talent or skills because they are being being appreciated that who are they, and by believing on their self that how hard they worked.

To begin with, one way that all people can develop their talent is by being appreciated on their self that who they are, and how they can change the world. For example, one day it was our first day that we came to America, and I even didn't know that much English that I can talk to person. So one year later I learn some English, and I got to 8 grade, by other day we were going to do the student let decision. I really did not talk that much because I was so nervous about it like how I have to talk in front all the teachers, and students. I wanted to try it but I couldn't do that. This evidence shows that, being in different country and not knowing their language is really hard. My mom, and dad was always trying so hard that one day I will be able to speak English. My mom, and dad were always telling me that ""always be appreciated that how you got to this level, and think about hoe you can make different talents that people can see, so they can improve it on their life."" After that day I told to my self "" I always will be able to be appreciated to my self, and by being in this world."" As always that one day I will show my talent to people that I never thought of that one day I will learn English too. clearly, if I wasn't being appreciated to my self, to my teachers, to my family that they were working with me together. I wasn't be able to even write this essay. now even if I am not that much perfect I am happy that I got to that point that I and my family really wanted.

In addition, there is other way that you can show your talent to people by believing in your self that you can get to your goal by working hard as much as you can do it, and as much as possible. So you can see the result of it by your working hard. For Example, my brother Generic_Name, he is in 12 grade, for him it was really hard because he was always worrying about his grades, and he was saying ""how I can get to finish my

12 grade by being a perfect student. He was always wondering about his self, and that how hard will be next year.

One day my mom, and dad told him that ""if you believe in your self, by that time you already got this."" this evidence shows that,

Generic_Name couldn't believe on his self. Generic_Name wanted to know that how he can show his own talent . He was always worked hard to improve in his new talents or skills. Now he got to finish his 12 grade by being successful. By next year he will go to collage. Clearly, if Generic_Name didn't listen to my mom, and dad he wasn't able to finish his 12 grade by showing to all of his teacher that how he improved om his talents.

In conclusion, developing your talent or skill is a different way or different thing that you can bring it into your own life. By being appreciated and believing in your self that change your life, and bringing a smile up on your family face. As always people want to develop new talent to their own life to make them change, different, and happy. Clearly, being in a different country, far from your own family, And you can't see them. It's really hard for everyone especially me with my family. But I got a strong talent that no one can pull me back from it. For bring appreciated to my have that they were working together with me that I can get to this part. Today I realize that how much I improving in own life, in writing, and speaking English. Even if not that much perfect. And like Generic_Name, he believe on his self, and he worked hard that he got to that point. Now he is working hard that he can make this world a better place for his future that is coming up. Clearly, if you want to improve in your own life or in you own talent or skill that is in your heart, and that can show your develop to the people for this world, and it will be applying to your own goals. Always be thankful, be appreciated to your family, teacher that they worked hard for you to learn new things that will persuade you to your new goals. As everyone has a talent to the world, And that way they can change the world too. Always work hard in your life if you want to develop your talent. By improving a skill can make your own place, and your own world beautiful as they can see the result of it at the end.  ",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
B8656754E9EB,"Do you believe failure could lead up to a better person? Shortly, I am going to discuss as to why making mistakes is necessary for a person to become a better human being. When a person makes mistake he's/she's is more likely to learn from its mistake. However, not all person learn from their mistakes in the first time, some take longer than others. Therefore, you should always look back at what you did wrong and always fix your mistakes. Making right decisions should help you become a better human being for its future community, country, and even the world.

I personally strongly agree with Churchill's statement. A person should not always be right, some people think that by doing what pleases them they are doing good. However, little do they know they're hurting people because they decide whats good for them and whats not good for them. That leads up to a person who is selfish, mean, and has a cold heart. Mistakes are a problem, and problems can always be fixed.

Once upon a time my friend Generic_Name had a girlfriend, Generic_Name. He was a good kid with a good heart, therefore, that led to people takeover him easily. Generic_Name's girlfriend or friend would always takeover Generic_Name. She would tell him what to do and how to do it, she was the man in the relationship. Thats how good my friend's heart was. She knew she could trust Generic_Name because Generic_Name loved her like he never loved anyone else. Till the day came, sooner than what we expected. The day that he will never forget. It was a Thursday and Me and my friend Generic_Name were on our way to work, I was driving when all of the sudden he starts screaming like if he was having some sort of a seizure. "" NO how could you do this to me"" he said. ""What happened?"" I asked. He tells me that he was on snap chat just chatting and looking at snaps when all of the sudden he sees his ""girlfriend' kissing another man. I tell him to relax and to let it go that she was not worth his time. He calms down, breaks up with her and moves on. Years passed, I noticed that he has changed. He is not the sweet boy with the good heart anymore. He now learned from the mistake he did, which was to let his girlfriend controlled him. He now knows when to say NO and when to say YES. People make mistakes all of the time in their lives. However, that does not mean you cannot change it or fix the mistake you did.

Mistakes are mistakes. You cannot go back in time, but you can move on and make a change in your life. In conclusion, a better person makes a better future for its world. People can change,and we all make mistakes. However, we shall learn for the better.

In Conclusion, I would like to give an advice to all people to never give up. You made a mistake? You all shall learn from it. Fix it. Make of yourself a better self being and be and example for all others. We are not perfect, but we could try or at least act like we can be. Learn from what you did wrong an improve yourself. Love everyone because you only live once in this life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
C6DDD966C9FC,"Why working together is more beneficial than working alone? Working with group of people increase collaboration and allows brainstorming. As a result, more ideas are developed and productivily improves. Working together prepare students for future jobs and careers. Two or more people are always better than one for solving problems. However, it is an importan skill to be able to get along with others and it is valued by employers.

Everyone has heard people saying ""Two minds are better than one"" This quote has never rang more true, and all of the ideas it promotes reflect crystal clear off a group work. Working in a group can reduce the amount of work you need to do, as well as make things a lot more efficient. Things are also finished much quicker because of the way many people can split up different jobs in a group, and people with differents skill sets can do what they're best at. This broader range of skills can also be used to help other group members. The diversity found within a group of people is one of the most powerful resources a person can have when it comes to finishing a task.

Though multiple ideas are helpful, and it is less work to be in a group. Sometimes working alone is beneficial as well. It really depends on the circumstances you're placed in, and the people you are around to say wether or not working in a group is benign or unremunerative. Though working alone can be better for one's own reasons, such as anxiety, paranoia, worry about others preferences, or simply because you prefer to work alone. Oftentime students will learn and experience more in group of their peers than working alone, which is better for the futures and possibly what lies ahead.

Working together creates less work and allows more work to be completed faster. It allows constructive criticism from other members of the group, which promotes a better final product in the end. Overall, working together is beneficial because it creates differents points, new ideas are generated. Different points of view create divesity and diversity is the key to success.",4.5,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
F3604BAC5D79,"I agree with the Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill because in my opinion, the failure makes to the people strong and the next time they can do it better. Sometimes we are making failures day per day, but if we become sad and we are closed that we can not do it again, we are losing something important in our life, but if we are doing it with enthusiasm we can improve our failures and do it better every time. Success is the achievement of doing what you have tried to do or what to do. Winston Churchill is referring that no one have to loss the enthusiasm, however if you are making mistakes in your life and you are saying that you can not do it and you will try it but you are going to get the same results and you are giving excuse by excuse you will fail in your life because you are giving up easily and you dont see that every cost and fight at the end it has a benefit or something that you really wanted to get or a goal that you are trying to reach and you will see that you dont have to loss the hope and the enthusiasm in every dream that you want.

The failure has an important role in the pursuit of success, sometimes a lot of people do not have the enthusiasm and they think that it is the end of everything, the failure can be the destruction for a lot of people, but if you make a lot of mistakes and you are keeping fighting still to get your goals you will see how important is not give up easy and watch the positive part of your failures. When Winston Churchill said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm,"" he is only saying that sentence but it has a big meaning everybody can apply it in their lives, you can find the best outcomes just smiling to the problems. It does not mean that you will not care the problems, of course you have to resolve the problems and make them clear, because if you are making failures and people is affected and you dont care you just want to get your outcomes it will be a big problem, no body needs to be involved in your failures because the people around you will see that you are making a mistake and you are selfish.

Churchill's statement has big meanings and has good outcomes, everybody wants success but what happen when someone is trying to get success and miss? of course everyone will feel so sad and no one wants to try it again because the person is afraid of their failures, it is like if the failure is tying you and it does not want to leave you. The persons will be sad and their hopes will be down because they think that they are going the get the same outcome, but what happen if you raise your head with enthusiasm? Winston is trying to say us that the enthusiasm is very important to get the success because if you have enthusiasm you will fight with love for something that you really want. An enthusiasm person has more possibilities to get success than a person sad, broken and a person who is thinking just negative thoughts or who is close that they will get the same result and give up easily like nothing will happen if he/she is going to try it.

The enthusiasm has an important role in the success because you will keep your head up and keep fighting for your goals all the time and every time that you will make a failure it will be more easy to resolve it, because you have a key and you are enrolling every time when you get one failure. The enthusiasm help to the people to see the answer of the problems easily because the brain will be relaxed and will think the best things, however, when the brain is frustrated the brain can not think correctly. So, if you are enthusiasm you will do it very good because you want something that you want and also it will be something that will improve your life not just in the success of work or study it can be in all your whole life you can get success and everything if you apply this in your life, and the people around you like your family will see how important is this role in the life and they will want to learn about the enthusiasm in the failures and they will understand that sometimes we dont need to destroy ourselves or lost the head in something that we can resolve in an easy way that enthusiasm is helping us to improve ourselves.

I agree with Churchill's statement because the enthusiasm it is an important role you can motive to other people to be enthusiasm and they can resolve their problems using the same method. Sometimes the failure are really hard to resolve but if you really want to reach it you have to feel enthusiasm because I think that automatically you will see the answer clearly and easily and if you are frustrated your brain will not work and will be closed and sometimes when we are frustrated we are getting extras failure because we dont think clearly and we dont think about it. Sometimes we have to learn a lot from the failure and we dont see it, the failure can be some steps just to reach the success and the goods outcomes. Winston is showing us that the failure can be defeated it does not matter how long it is going to take but before the success you have to keep strong and smiling to the big failure. Winston Churchill is using a statement that means that we dont have to give up easily we have to fight for something that we want to make real.

Example: The success in the school can be really difficult and more than one time we can fail because we dont do homework but we want to pass, so if we want to reach this goal we have to enthusiasm ourselves because we have a goal that we want to reach, so we are going to fix our failure and we are going to do everything because after school we want to go to college and get a good job.

In conclusion, the Churchill's statement has an important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. The failure is just a difficult step to reach the success and with enthusiasm we can defeat to the failures. The enthusiasm is a supply very important in the enroll for the success.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
F673BCEC3BD1,"People who value self-reliance define dependence. Following your own instincts and making your own decisions is the whole point of life in my opinion. It makes a person more independent and trustworthy. Also, helps a person learn from own mistakes.

A person will always have guidance. Whether its from parents, teachers, police officers, or even a person you dont even know can give you some type of guidance. It always goes back on how the individual is going to view it. Independence is very important. Having full control and capability of standing alone can make a person realize what is best for them. Also, not being easily influenced can help a lot. Understanding what is best for you can make your decisions much easier.

People need to learn from their own mistakes. Mistakes happen every day. A persons instincts may not always be right but it will benefit them in the future. Another person is not going to tell you something you want to hear or give you the assurance you need for something. They may think they know whats best for you but personally for you, it could not be the best. Knowing yourself and knowing how you like things to be done is another example of self-reliance.

Seeking guidance from experts and authorities can be the right thing to do. It can save a person from debating too much on a decision. Help a person plan better for the future and not really let the person struggle. As well, as to prevent the individual to stress out of what not knowing to do. However, a persons own instincts and ideas is what makes the person value self-reliance. And know whats best for them. Who knows you better than you?

To conclude, its all about self perspective. On how you view things for yourself and your future. Being independent and not rely on others opinions. Having your own thoughts and opinions. Accepting that making mistakes is okay not everything has to be right and perfect.    ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.0
3DC3405DF531,all tho some people say online classes is good. they have their reasons. Tacking online classes i good it has it's bad. if you take online classes you can stay home and dont you don't have to go to a school building and you don't have to wake up early and go to school and you wouldn have to go to school and see people you dont want to see and you dont have to eat the school lunch you can eat whatever you want to eat when ever you want to eat and you wouldnt have to follow and rule you can make you one rolls and it would be esyer to take a test when you online classes cuz you can look things up on the internet and pass you test but when you you in school you have wake up early and get ready to go on the buss and you have to go to your classes on time and then you have to sit in a small class and sit in a desk and do your school work and you have to follow rule like you would have to go to your classes on time and if you do make it to class on time then you would have to go to the tarty table and if you keep doing it you would happen more then three times you would have to go to iss and what iss is you would sit in this quit room with out your phone and and you cant talk anyone. and is you dont go to class at all they will find you and put you in iis and they will call you mom or dad or email your mom or dad telling them that you wasnt in school and i dont know about you but my parents would get mad that i wasnt in school when they saw me go to school in the morning. And when you disrespect your teacher they will call security on you and they will come and get you and tall to you. And if you get in a fight with a student then you will be in a big trouble the security will come and get you and it its really bad they will call an ambles and this time the principle and the police and parents will get involved and the other person parents might press charges and that would not be good for you on your reared beauty when you apply for coleg they will see that you had a bad history and they wont want that tiyp of beaver in their school so you would be hurting your fucher. And if you do or take drugs or sell drugs in school then you would be in soo much trouble with the school and with the police and you parents and you could go well if your eithing and older and if your danger then that you would go to jive. and you would probably be kicked out of school and you would have to go to a new school and love all your friends and you wound have the same friends in the same school as you and that would be so sad and you wound have to go to jell and earthing so i think it beter to go to the online classes not that i get to eat all i want but becuth it a lot going on in schools that you have to go thour and you mith not like it i think it would be a good exprmnt to try online classes ,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
15B68B826F8D,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" He believe people should try to do something new beyond what they already know. Being good at new things can make you feel more confident with yourself. I agree that people should try to do something new beyond what they already mastered because trying to do something new can make you feel more confident and experimenting something new can make you discover more about yourself.

To begin with, trying to do something new can make you feel more confident with yourself. People can be more success in life knowing more things. If people are always scared on doing something else they will not have experiences in life and It can be hard for them to grow. For Example, I was working in a restaurant for so long I really knew how to do that job, but I wanted another job to get more money; however, I was scared on getting a new job, I thought I was not going to be good in at that, then someone told me that I should try that I will never know if I am good at something if I do not try. Now, I working in a new job, I am more confident, and I am one of the best workers in the restaurant. Therefore, If people do not try to do something new because they do not feel like good at that, they will never know if they were one of the best. Growing is part of trying if you failed, then you will learn from your experience.

Second, experimenting something new can make you discover more about yourself. Sometimes you have to let go what you already mastered and start experimenting more about life, so you can not be stack on the same thing. Grow is difficult for the people who do not have experiences in life. For instance, When I came to this country I was so scared on learning a new language and how people will treat me, but start interacting with new people, learning about their countries, and trying different foods. Now, I can say that I have learn so much from other people and I realized that interacting with other people can make me grow in a way that I can feel more confident when I am around people. So, experimenting something else can make people matured and smart as well.

On the other hand, some people say that trying to do something beyond what you already mastered, do not make you grow. They say that people that are good at something should not be evolved in something else because they could get lost knowing different things, but I believe people will never get lost learning new things, learning is the key of growing. For Example, my friend is soccer player he is really good and he started learning to play baseball, he became good at both sports. That shows that people can be good at different things at the same time without lost what they already know. Therefore, trying something new can make you good at different things and discover talents that you did not know that you have.

To conclude, trying to do something else beyond what you already mastered will make you grow. People can discover more about themselves, grow with the experiences on tying to do something, and if they failed they will learn from that. Life give us that opportunity to mastered different things, learning something new make us be more confident and success on life. We should try to do something else maybe we are not good at that, but at least we try to do it and get something with us. Life could be bored if you are stack doing what you already know and not trying something else.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
DA43320FCA57,"This quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else the greatest accomplishment"". People don't have to be something else as a greatest accomplishment. People are not being themselves in the world. This quote is not true because people are not achieving their goals, they are trying to be someone else, and they are not being about themselves.

The're not achieving their goals if the the world wants them to do something. People need to achieve their goals without someone telling what to do in their life. They have to know if they if the goals right for them to achieve, People with goals often don't like their goals because the world wants them to be something else in their lives. Often times people mistaken for want they want to be versus what they don't want to do. People who are not achieving their goals they go to be something else because they don't have a goal, or they are not themselves.

People are trying to be something else in their life by being not themselves. People have tried being themselves but failed because they can't find themselves. The majority of people will be something else rather than then be who they are inside of them. The world is a big place to be in for people and they don't want to express themselves out in the world, so they try to be something else to fit in. The majority of people who are something else are not happy for their decision because they are trying to hide their real self.

The majority of people are not being themselves in the world because they are not happy about themselves. People don't want to express on who they are in the real world and hide themselves. People are not showing who they are out in the world.

Often times people don't like to see themselves because they haven't found themselves.

People are most likely to go out at be something than to follow their goals.

People don't have to be something else as a greatest accomplishment. People are not being themselves in the world. They hide it to become something slese in the world. This quote is not true because people are not achieving their goals, they are trying to be someone else, and they are not being about themselves.                                         ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
F05D3802BC94,"Last year, a student in my classroom was caught using his cellphone during class. He pointed out that the reasoning behind it was that he was searching something that involved the class, but the teacher still took up his phone. By allowing the use of cellphones in class many students would get even more distracted than they already are. It would also be easier to cheat and get good grades, since all the information would be of easy access. On the other hand, this would make the technological integration in school even better and easier, something that many dream and believe will happen in the close future. I believe cellular devices should not be allowed during educational time.

Initially, cellphones would draw too much of student's attention. Teenagers spend enough time of their day staring at screens, and school should be a place where that doesn't happen. Many are addicted to social media, and have the ""need"" to check it every 10 minutes. Sometimes when I am in class and decide to take out my phone, not looking and paying to the teacher for more than a minute makes me loose focus of class and need to ask the ones around me for help. Class is a place where students should focus and pay attention, by allowing the use of phones many would get distracted and use it for non-educational purposes which would make learning harder, since this focus should be used on what the teacher is saying instead of what their friends are posting online.

Secondly, it would be an encouragement to cheating. With the integration of cellphones in class students would start getting better grades, since many of them would simply Google all of the answers for a worksheet instead of paying attention to the class and answering it based on what they've learned. This would make so that daily grades get better, but when test day arrives, the student who Googled every answer in the past week would get a bad grade because he didn't really learn anything, all his answers were based on someone or something helping him. This would then encourage cheating, because that student would most likely realize that with the use of his cellphone daily grades were getting better, but when it came down to not using the device his grades would drop.

However, it could be helpful and very easy to set up. With limitations in place, like blocking certain apps and websites that have nothing to do with school, cellphones could be useful during educational time. Technology integration in schools is already happening, many give chrome books to students so they can use it during class, but these are expensive and getting one for every student is not always viable. Everyone has a cellphone so there would be no need for extra devices ,since phones have 1000 different uses, including many that could be of help during educational time.

The student from my classroom which was caught using his cellphone still uses it during class, he is barely passing that class and complains that the teacher is not explaining something correctly and that is why he has such low grades. But everyone knows the reason he is almost failing is because he'd rather stare at his cellphone screen instead of paying attention to the teacher. Cellular devices draw too much of teenager's attention and can also encourage cheating. On the other hand they can be helpful in the right occasion. I strongly disagree with the use of cellphones during educational time and believe they would cause more harm than they would help.",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.5,5.0,5.0
E8AB23A796F1,"should we be honest or not? We should be honest because people that you know very well and you think that they would never lie to you thta's going to hurt you the must. and if you are not honest people would never believe you.

People in this world lie alot and they are not honest. who are we going to trust if people are not honest .if you lie all the time people will turn their backs on you and nobody is going to help you out if you a problem. when you lie to peolpe one way or another they will find out so be honest all the time. and if you lie to the people you love the most that's just sad because they give you so much incouregmentfor eveything.

I think that if you are not honest you shouldn't be trusted by anyone. you give all of your trust to that person and you say don't tell anyone, if that person does it anyways are you going to trust them again, I wouldn't. if you want to be trusted you need to start from zore. so stop lieing to ever one you trust and be honest and tell the truth to every one. and be nice and don't get in trouble. if people believe on you they're going to have your back no matter what.

People in this world don't liked to be lied to. alot of people like to be trusted so be honest all the time not sometimes all the time. and by being honest it can help you out by you'er parents having trust on you making sure that you don't do bad things or say bad things. and being honest breings good things in life you can get really great jobs and be responsible with everything .

if you are honest with everyone,evryone is going to believe you all the time. and believe in everything on what you said. and if you do what you said or promis people will believe on you and give you all of the trust that you need.

I know being honest can hurt someones feelings but insted of being sad make your wake ness in to streagth. and i'm telling you ,you will feel so much better then ever. some people can be mean when being honest but turn your back on them and don't talk to them but if they change give them a chance. and don't believe on what they say about you is not being honest to them self either. so be honest all the time.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
99A73BEA826C,"Students Need to Identify a Career

I am in 11th grade and I still thinking in what career should be better for me, if I could expected a career by the time I entered to High School, I could not being worry about what career should be better for me. I think that is a good idea that students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because in the four years that they are in high school they can get prepare in the career they want. By the time the students enter to college it will be much easier for them because they have already decided what career should be better for them.

There are four year in high school, students can use those years to star to learn a little bit in the career they chose. For example, I had one friend that he wanted to be a scientist, so when he was in high school he get prepared to a scientist, he started to look what he need be a scientist, he looked how many years he had to go to college, he found that science has a lot of math problems that he did not know and he started to learn math. The four years in high school can help you to get prepare in your the career you want.

Another reason why students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school is that when go to college it will be much easier for them. If the students identify a career by that time, in college they can only focus in the career they chose. There are many students that go to college and they have not already decided what career should be better for them, and in many cases there are students that are out of college and still thinking what to do with their life. That's why it is important for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school or at least when they are still in high school.

In my opinion it's good idea that students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because if they could identify a career that they might think they would like, that could be a lot of helpful, because by the time they go to college they don't get stress because they don't have much time to decide what career could be better for them.    ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
768FA278A16D,It has been aid that first impressions are almost impossible to change. For me i think you can change from the first impression. First of all you can come off as someone who don't care about anything or any one but when you get to know them your mindset change on how they are in your eyes. the second reason is i had someone that i thought that was the one the person i thought i can spend my life with i know it sounds crazy but my first impression was she was a good girl then i got to know her and found out she's nothing but plane evil and has nothing but hate in her soul and always trying to find something to blame me for just looking for es cues for her to do what she wants to do and Little do she knows its making my love for her fading away every step of the way. so in conclusion this is why i think that first impression arent really impossible to change because people family even loved ones change that why i think first impression can change.,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
8397368B57EA,"Do you think being in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is a good thing? I think it can be bad.

When you are trying to accomplish things and make friends, it can get you hated. First off when you open up to people and be honest with them, they aren't going to like it and turn on you and hate you. when they see you succeeding and doing better than they are, they will talk about you because they arent where you are and they will make you try to feel down and unsuccessful.

When trying to do good things in life people will down really low to the point where you give up, and just try to fit in and do bad thing that could lead you down a wrong path, to where you can end up in prison or dead you can end up in the wrong crowd, when you thought they were good people. They will manipulate you at first thinking they are good people and want to see you accomplish being thing in life. Once you get to know them and see who they really are you will see the complete opposite and it could be too late to turn back.

In conclusion whether you try to be your self and accomplish your goal there will always be people who will hate you and bring you down with them. No matter how much you try you will end up falling because of being yourself and choosing the wrong crowd.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
22F16C83DE10,"Students Summer Break Ideas

Most of students like to enjoy their summer vacation,but some educators feel like summer vacation is too long. Students and Adults decided to come up with different set of ideas to make summer break not long.. Some of the students are fine with having 2 or 3 months of summer break,and some people argue that there should be a year-round schools. A year- round school is were there would be 3- 4 week break in summer, a longer winter break,and a week off in spring and fall. These were the overall ideas that both students an Adults choose.

My personal opinion is that i would go with the year- round school because it would only take a year that students would go to school and have a shorter summer and a longer winter break. The reason why i choose this was because i prefer having a longer winter break. why? you may ask , having a longer winter break wil make students not lose a lot of school because in most part of the United States snows a lot. About 75% of parents have called in school saying that their children is sick and will not be able to go. These type of excuses can cause students lower their education and making up the work of days they haved missed. Instead of the founder of school saying their would be an ""2 hour delay"" or ""schools are close"" . Students can just stay home while having their winter break and not worrying about if they are going to school or not.

Having a shorter summer break can help bring students come back to school with a positive energy and a fresh start. Since summer break won't be long studens won't forget what they haved learned. Students are likely to fail if they would have have a really long break this is the reason why students forget what teachers haved taught them. Teenagers are likely to be more tired during the winter instead of summer this is why students are mostly tardy or absent. Even though i prefer having a shorter summer break, i still rely of the students that choose to have a longer break because it is fun to be able to go out when the weather is warm but at the same time i feel like is better having a longer break in the winter because is safer staying home when it gets really cold and when it snows.

Schools that are in the middle recontructing have to allow students take their classes out in the trailers. Even though public schools don't close when it snows a little they still have to reconsider. Some schools are constucting and students have to walk to one trailer to another to get to their class this why i like the idea of having a week off during fall and also when it's spring break ,It gets a bit cold and in some areas it already starts to snow. Having fall and spring break can bring students get their week off and take some time off before they have their SOL. It can also help refersh their brain and can start studying to be able to pass their upcoming tests.

My final conclusion is that the year-round schools sound like a good idea. It can really help students manage a lot with their education and also responsibilities. It can also help teachers not being stressed because they can also take their days off. School won't be that stressing if it were to take this idea. All of these were my own personal opinions.            ",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
7C4960DF5CB8,"I think that there should be a after school homework club because its hard to understand homework sometimes and you dont know what you are doing exactly but if we were to have these clubs think about how many students would get there work done . We might think that homework isnt important but it is homework is worth 10 percent of your grade and sure that might not be a lot but it could really help your grade. And it could really help you like when it comes to test you could know the matrial you need for this test if you did that one piece of homework that one piece of homework could have helped you past that test you probly failed or quiz . Also some students dont understand the work the teachers give like when you dont understand that class work you were doing in that class how do the teachers expect that the student bring in there homework .

I hard for students to learn middle school student have a lot to do for example students have to worry about getting homework done for all 7 of these classes it isnt easy . Most teachers might give more than one piece of homework some might give 2 some might give 3

pieces of homework .

Students could also ask about what they dont understand they will help students in what they dont understand or what they didnt understand in that lesson that they had .The teacher will explain what you didnt understand , some students just dont have time so maybe that one day that can stay afterschool could help them get all that students homework done . Also help them undestand not just give that student the answer to the question they would actually learn and that . This also will get students grades up and might take a B to and A

. It will not only help the students but the school to because if these student are getting there homework done then that will make the school look better . Teacher will also know that students are getting there work done and not just getting the anwser like some students do now when it comes to homework . Other students that are cabelble of doing this work on there own but have a hard time turning the homework in on time and if the school had a afterschool club this it homework wouldnt be a problem .

In conclusion this club would be really good to have because homework is a big issue in alot of these schools and most students dont care or dont understand how much homework matters it matters so much you probly wonder. Why you didnt pass this test or why couldnt pass this quiz you took maybe if you did that homework you could have past the test , quiz also home plays a big role in school teachers give studnets homework so we can get better at that subject it easier for students not to care about homework ''BECAUSE IT DOESNT MATTER'' but it does and. No matter how many time you try to tell yourself it doesnt matter it does and that is not going to change so do your homework and if this afterschool club happend then homework will be one less thing to worry about . I think that if the school had this club it would really help studnets in school and help really understand the work and homework and help them be less stress because it it alot of work for you to get done and espcially if you dont get the work you need to do . Also students would be happy that they got there homework done now they can do whatever they want afterschool becaus ewhat was taking up most of there afternoon is now done .",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
6CB7C1B3C548,"Do you image a Middle School student being in you classroom and telling you what you shouldnt do so you dont get introble I you future at school. Have you ever though what you can do to stay out of trouble in school? You might always have that one friend that gets introble a lot right? Ways you can prevent that from being you is try to prevent from getting into a fights that would just make it a bad idea, if you know someone that is doing what they are not so post to tell a teacher, dont make a poor choice and you get introble because you decided that you were going to do something that your friends wanted you to do.

When you get into a fight in school the only thing that that will do to you is get you into in school suspension or you would get suspended from school for a while. You dont want to get in school suspended that would just get you in a room with a teacher and you are not going to be able to talk to anyone. If I were you and I knew that some one wants to get into a fight I would ell the teacher and let them handle it not you. Another thing that if you do while there is a fight at your school and you record it you could get in trouble by that as well.

If you know something is wrong with a friend and they need help from an adult I would tell a teacher at school that can help them or there parents if you know them. If you try to help a friend by talking to the person that made your friend feel upset you could feel a friends mom or some adult you know close to your family.

When you made a poor choice it could get you in a lot of trouble when you are hanging around with friends and they want to do something thats not a good choice you could talk to them and tell them that is not going to be a good idea. A lot of times when kids make a poor choice they would have to face the consequences and they may not like them but they should of thought the things two times before they made there design.

There are so many different ways that you can stay our of trouble but theses three are the most common ones that i know of try not to get into a fight, help out your friends or tell an adult if they need help from some one, and dont make poor choices.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
0BEB8F7F5A64,"First impression are very important when you first meet someone. Many people say first impressions are almost impossible to change, but i strongly disagree with that. Majority of the time when we meet someone we already think of them in a certain way, but our judgment could always be wrong. Thats why i believe first impressions could always change.

I believe that first impressions can change the way people think of you. Sometimes people can be irritable or just in a really bad mood because something is occurring in their lives, but in reality that's not how they really are. One reason first impressions can be wrong, is because maybe they didn't get enough sleep at night, and they have to get up early to go to work, or school in the morning. For example, i am not much of a morning person, so when i wake up in the mornings i can be rude, and people might not want to talk to me, but if you see me later in the afternoon i will be smiling, and laughing. Another reason first impressions could be wrong, is because they might not feel comfortable with the people who they are surrounded by, and be very shy, but once you start talking to them they change. For example, my best friend and i used to hate each other. I used to think she was annoying, and rude, and i am guessing she thought the same for me. One day we both started to talk to each other, and i found out we have many things in common, and that we are like the same people. That same day we became the best of friends, now we are basically like sisters. This is why i think that first impressions can always change.

In conclusion, i believe that from now on as we move forwards in life we shouldn't assume what the other person is like, and not to always rely on first impressions because they could always be wrong.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
48AC182E4ADC,"Imagine having nothing but sweet time on the palm for your hands. Wouldn't things be easier to do? Imagine the things you can get done with the right equipment. Technology allows such great effects in our lives.

Everything is easier to get, games, books, news, and even shopping would be easier for everyone. Say your teacher wants students to read a certain book but there isn't any left in class. What would you do?. Technology will allow students to download the book and still be on task with students. Some teaches don't allow you to take the book home but with any device you can simply download the book and still be caught up with the chapter. You wouldn't be behind.

Therefore, individuals like being updated whether it's about schools or any world news. Technology allows parent to see what's happening around them and even around the world. They don't like to miss the days news or any news. If they did, they can type the date and see what's happening. You wouldn't miss a thing! alerts will pop up on your device to inform you. Therefore, everyone stays connected to the world in any device. Technology, also allows you to stay connected with other, such as your parents and friends. Imagine having something really important to share with your friends but you don't know when you'll see them, they're just a text away. Let's say you stayed after school but forgot to tell your parents, just call them and tell them to pick you up a certain time. Information will be much easier to receive.

However, some parents say technology is a waste of time but once they try it they'll get many things done. The more we use technology, the more we realize it should have been something back then and how easy things would've been. Technology is for everyone to use not only young adults. It can even be used to keep babies quiet and calm. Some find multitasking hard, but with simple devices, we can do many things at once.

Getting things done makes people feel relieved,for getting things out of the way on to the next. It's like an endless cycle but with the technology we have now, we have much power in just our hands. It may be little power but at least we got things done in an easy matter. We may not see it now, but technology is a very positive effect on individuals.",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
9C57307D58A5,"I want to visit Egypt because Egypt is a great country, I want to see the pyramids that are made from thousands and thousands years ago,and I want to see the great museums that are in Generic_City.

The pyramids are very huge. There are like 3 big pyramids and there like 6 other pyramids aren't that big as the first 3 pyramids. Pyramids are so hard to build to make them again. The pyramids need a lot of stone and it need some are like very big stones that are located in the very bottom of the pyramids,and it's hard to reach the max high of the pyramids because they are so high up. These pyramids are from the 7 fantastic and amazing things in the world because no body on this earth now can build these pyramids. The people who built the pyramids called the Pharana.

Museums in Egypt. Museums are a great place to visit when anyone will visit Egypt. These museums are huge but not huge as the pyramids. These museums have a lot of stuff that anybody world be interesting to see them, like people who died from thousands and thousands years ago, they did something like a magic or a process that keep their bodies, and the museums have their bodies. Anyone can see her or his eyes, face,legs,and head and thats absolutely real. These museums is in Generic_City. The Egyptian people have a great cultures.

Egypt have a lot of good other stuff. It have beautiful places that anybody can walk in it and buy something to eat or drink. Some people go sit down and relax and others like buy some clothes from these shops in the mall, some oher people play games like soccer or other games,and there are a lot of these places in Egypt. Some kids play soccer in the street. Egypt is very diffrerent than any other country. These places located in Generic_City and one of these places called City Stars.

The beaches in Egypt. Egypt have the mosy beautiful beaches, like if you go to Generic_City and there is two more places that I forgot the names for it. Egypt have a lot of amazing hotels and it's not located in Generic_City, it's located in some other places. Hotels in Egypt have swimming pools,free food,and free drinks. Anyone can have so much fun on the beach in the summer.        ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
CF288DDE1328,"Most student enjoy summer vacations, but some educators believe that summer break is too long and that students do not retain information easily. Educators argue that there should be a year-around school, where there would be a 3-4 week off in the spring and fall. But as a student, my position is the opposite of what some educators believe. If our summer keeps as all this past years we can do so many things. When our summer vacations arrive is when all students fell free and out of pression of passing the course year. Summer vacations also open different doors in our life, students chooises are vacations and traveling, others prefer to work, gain money and experience for our future. If summer vacations will be shorter not many students could handdle school, beaks in summer, longer winter break and summer would not have the same impact as summer vactions. It can sound exagerate but that wouldn't be much time to us for do our sumer change.

First of all, In my own experience I like when summer is coming because I know that new experience are waiting for me, but also I like summer vacations because all the ""suffer"" of final examns and the S.O.L are over once again, and I think passing your goals during the years always deserves and award, in this case, Summer vacations. What educators don't see about summer is that gives us an opportnity to be more responsable; many students like me decide to start working. Working has made me a more responsable man, has teach me how reality is, and that money is not an easy thing, and the easier way I can make money is study. Summer is one of the greates time for students, many students go to new places, to visit old family menbers and pass time whit them. Summer last year gived me the chance to go back to my countrie, I couln't do it during winter or spring because I have to study, and the time educators think is the best for us would't provide the same amount of aventures.

More over, When winter break is coming we all happy but it feels too short, adding a few days wouldn't make it so different, plus your adding the same amount of days in four seasons, time for us will pass flying. I also think that many of us would fell like school is never going to end, I would be so stress out that my preformence during the school could be decreasing more and more. Last time I looked an article were they showed a chart, out of 100 student 80 said that they prefere summer vacations over having longers breaks during the year. After that they made an experiment, during a year they sow how was the performence in the students who's choices was summer vacation, and it got prooved that they were doing better because they were constanly going to school.

On the other hand, educators are not at all wrong, when I start againg the school year I some times don't remenber thing that I sow the year before. Also having so much vacations makes me miss school, been with my friends and learning new things. Educators may have a diferet opinion than I, and they can be the one's who are correct, they said that summer is too long because of their experience, and maybe they had learn less. Educators are people who know more than students because of their understanding in the power of learnig.

In conclusion, summer vacations is the best, and it never has to change the aumount of days that they give to us, is prefectly the days that we all need to refresh from school and things that happened over the year.

Summer bring us new experience and it teachs us things like reponsability, a very importat human thing that we all has to have. I beliebe that we things shouldn't change, people and cientificts had prooved that the best way of lerning is how we do it.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
101E64C9DA0E,"School cafeteria are planning to make healthier and nutrisous food for students. While applying healthier food to the menu, it could eliminate some students favorite food. convincing the principle to change the menu would be a good idea, for example, students are eating junk food for lunch, eating healthier could help students body become more active and stonger, also students may feel good about themselves for eating nutrisous food and not having to eat burgers for lunch.

Junk food isn't healthy for student do to how less active they have become. Monday through Friday students have lunch everyday and may eat the same unhealthy food. sometimes it's good to eat junk food once in a while.

Healthy and nutrisous food help students become more active and stronger. For example, nutrisous food would help students become active during their classes and after school activities. Having something small to eat like a chicken salad may help students from sleeping, being lazy to become more social, and having a healthier mindset. Students wouldn't have to worry much about getting sick or having some sort of stomach problem.

Students should feel good about themselves having to eat healthy. While students eat healthy and nutrisous meal they're keeping their body from shutting down on themselves. eating healthy effects students in good ways by keeping them fit and strong. Every student should eat healthy to keep their mindset healthy for school and ready to learn.

While the principle may eliminate some of the students favorite food it would help for the great or good. Healthy food should help students in may ways from becoming lazy to staying awake in class and to learn properly. To some students, changing the menu may be hard because some food have been eliminated and it could have been their favorite food.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
DA5CA667B729,"My dad once said"" that one day I'll save a life just by calling 911"". The reason he said that is that the technology today is better than the one he grew up with. Technology today can do more things than the technology a few years ago. Technology today does have a positive effect on people because it can help people communicate with people around the world, and people can call 911 for an emergency.

It helps people communicate with people around the world. For example my Uncle can't leave the country to go visit his mom but if he does he can't return to the states. So the technology now allows him to Skype or Facetime his mom when he wants. In fact 70%

of the people around the world can communicate. All the people can now connect with anyone with just a simple button.

People can call 911 for an emergency. For example my dad had witness a car crash when he was driving to work. When he saw the car flipped over he quickly got his phone and called 911. The cops came in like 3 minutes. When the cops arrived they quickly got the guy out of his car where he was flipped. So thankfully my dad was there to call 911 for him and saved his life. In fact 55% of people that call 911 save a life. So if you ever witness an accident call 911 because you might save a life.

Technology does have a positive effect on people. It can help people talk to people all over the world. People can also call 911 for emergency. Other people believe that technology is the root of evil, however technology helps everybody no matter what. So technology is the best thing humans ever created because it can help anybody do anything.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0,4.5
172C8C3F5976,"Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? When it has to do with life's important matters people should be self-reliance. Making your own decisions in what you'r instincts tells you, or even ideas that crosses your mind. Can lead you to the path you want to be in. All decisions or ideas you have should be followed.

Making choices or even having ideas about your own life matters, it's important Because at the end of the day it's your life and you want to always make the choices for yourself. Your life dosen't effect others, what you want to pursue or have should be done by the choices you decide. Being told what is best for you is something that should be appreciated but its your life and not the others and decisions you make for yourself should be because you know whats best for yourselves

When wanting to purchase a car you want to make your own choice in what kind of car you want or if the payments for the car can reach your budget. Buying items that are needed in life is all about what you want and what your instincts tells you. Buying houses or what bank account you want is what you should decide. All that has to do about your life's matters it's your choices and instincts. Everyone wants the best for themselves and want to be self-reliance.

Decisions that are decided for yourself and ideas you come upon on should always be followed. Your life matters is on your hands we do and know whats best for ourselves and the choices we make throughout our life is what we want, and not seeking to others to make the choices for your life. Overall people who value self-reliance know exactly what you want and know whats best for themselves.                   ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
D8D90E042134,"In my personal opinion, I think that students should decide on their own. I mean if they're eight-graders, they should be smart enough and decide on their own on what they want, or don't want to do. For me, I would choose helping the community, 'cause if you think about it, your actually doing it for your own goods, maybe in some points your not, but most of them from peoples personal experiment's basically, your doing it for your community and your country, the world and people that are around you. What i would do, I would make a list from easiest, to hardest on helping the community, and start from the easiest because at first, your not used to it, and you need to learn how to be responsible for your things, and for what you do. For example, I'll pick, helping students in your classrooms. Then, I might start tutoring my cousins or neighbors, something to start of with, like a practice. If I'll see or think that I'm good enough, I might move on, tutoring Elementary kids. Later on, I'll be a famous tutor! If I'll be doing a good job at tutoring, I might starting subbing for teachers, then they'll ask me to be a teacher! Which means, that now I'll have a job! So basically, I made my own personal carrier just for helping the community! What I'm trying to say, helping you community isn't as bad. If your one of the lucky ones, you'll make your self a carrier, if not, keep on trying! And one important thing to no is, keep on trying, what you give, is what you'll receive.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
A5567EF4C8EA,"I believe that students should not have to commit to a career at a young age because they will not take the career serious they will take it as a joke. In addition they are young they do not know what is to have such a big responsibility. Students that are just to enter high school do not really know how hard they are going to have to work to be good in the career they would have selected.

First students do not really know what they have a passion for, they should not have to commit to a career they do not know if they are going to like after awhile in the career. Students should be able to really think about what they like and what interest them about a career before having just get in to it. A career is something you have to think before you get in to an specific career because later on you might want to change the career your in right now. At a young age kids do not really have a clue on what they really like or have an interest career wise. Kids that are young do not really think in careers they mostly think on being with there friends and going out to have fun. Also students should not have to be forced to be in a career they do not like thats why they should have time to think on what they like and what they do not like.

Next students are still young to know what career to get in to they should be forced to figure it out so quickly they should get more time to really think on it. In most situations kids change there minds and decide that the career they got in to does not favor them and they want to change the career. We do not really know what we really like until like the end of the year of high school I believe because at that time we are more matured. A career is something to take serious because in the future that would be where you will be working and if you do not like that will not be a pleasant job to work at. You be able to like the career you chose because if not you will not enjoy being in the career. Should enjoy the career you pick because it gives you passion and strength to keep getting up from bed and get ready to go to school to study that career.

Finally some students at a young age that are just about to enter high school do not pay enough attention to school or the career they are studying. In high school a lot of kids change and not for good they make bad decision and totally forget why they go to school for. They go to school to create a future for themselves to be able to have a better life not all kids think like that until something wrong happens. If they do not pay attention or take it serious they will not succeed in the career as well in life because they will not be able to get a good job. Some students in high school do not really think about it, but the reason why they go to school to better there lives in the future. If we did not have schools that give you the opportunity to study a career I wonder where would we be would we have good jobs that pays good enough money.

In conclusion, I do not think is a good Idea for students should commit to a career in at a young age. Kids that are still young do not really think about careers or what they can do with the career they study. It is a case of kids that take things seriously not all kids take everything serious and talking about school and careers that is a problem. That means that they do not want a better life or to better themselves they do not want the help.              ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
5F679622B317,"Shoul we have to make challenging goals in are life?

Every goals that we make in our life is important to do it,even that is not like we thought. Also do our goals can affect are live psychologyly, such as can make us more confindent of ourselves. ''The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short;but setting in our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" Setting our aim too high and falling short is more important because we feel better knowing that we did our best and we can discover new things that maybe we never thought to do.

First, we feel better knowing that we did our best to make are goals,even that is not at all like we thought. When I was 11 years old and I used to play soccer, and one of my goal was to win play in a proffesional soccer team and win trophies,even that I did play for a proffesional soccer team I won many trophies. Trying to make real the goals that we used to had when we were young make us to feel proud and confident of ourselves because we never get up, always fough to do it.

Another reason, when we make our goals, even that maybe we just complete tha half of our goals;we discover new things that maybe we did not know that we can made. For example, if my dream was to be a master chef, and I work at place where a cook food to helping homeless. So, I realized that I can make my goal helping other people. When my brother was a kid, his dream was to travel around the world;even that he is pilot and only go to airport, he meet his fiance in his job. Some people may say that complete only the half of our challenging goals make us disappoined of ourselves because we did not complete. However, copmplete a challenging goals make us proud of ourselves because we are people who worked really hard and we discover many things that maybe others will never do.

Overall, we learn more doing challenging goals in our life than doing small goals that maybe everyone can do essaly.

Also,

making challenging goals we realize that we are people who want to be succsesful in our life. In addition, making challenging goals make us in admiralble people because noy every person decide to make big steps in life.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
FCC2991C1760,"Kahoot is one of the best educational activitys for teachers to use in school and for kids to learn with. Because when ever kids are using kahoot they work together to get the right answers,kids enjoy using kahoot to learn better then using paper and books because kids get really bored of using paper and books,Paper and books are also boring for teachers to grade too. But , Kahoot keeps the kids more active when they are learning and gives the teacher better controll of the kids. Also,kahoot is easy to teach with because when kids use paper and books the teacher has to go to the kids one by one just to correct their mistakes but when the teachers are using kahoot they can explain the right answer faster and better in front of the whole class.

Teachers who use papers and books are always tried because they have to grade them, one by one and can't go home untill their done and teachers somtimes get really lazy. But, when teachers are using kahoot to teach it easy to see who did it and who did not do it and they do not get so tried and when the teachers are not tried they can teach better . And when kids use kahoot they talk to each other and when kids talk to each other and work together they do a great job and nobody is left out or bullied. Pearents will be able to help their kids learn more at home too and the more they use it the smarter they get. so that why kahoot should be used in school and home . And if teachers and parents use kahoot more school will go by faster and kids will be smarter.                                                      ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
D6278021E119,"I agree with this way to learn and study. I think that is a good idea for many students that can't coming to the school or have a work.

One of the benefits is that the students can wake up late, because the class is online so, you can take the class in the afternoon, you can stay in your home relax in the bed also if you want eate you can do.

Some guys work in the morning, in the night or all the day.

I have a friend that he work of

8am to 5pm and he always is tired and this can help his, for the future.

He can study in the night and have his class with tranquillity.

Some people think that this a way to lose the time, but I do't think so.

Because I believe that you can be a profesional person if you want.

My friend don,t wanna work in a restauran all the time, he want to be a mechanic and if he take class online his dream can be convert a reality.

In conclusion I believe that if you want something if have a dream, you need to follow your dreams I don't care if is hard NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE.

If you have the opportunity you need to take it.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
623E0AD2EF3E,"Whats one place you would love to visit? One place I would like to visit is Ethiopia. I would want to visit Ethiopia because I havent visited in over three years. Secondly, most of my family members live in Ethiopia. Finally, Once I arrive I would want to talk to my family members go eat Ethiopian food with them and cherish that moment forever.

I would want to visit Ethiopia because I havent visited in over three years, lots of things has changed from then to now. But those past couple of years in Ethiopia wasn't the best for people who live there or who has family there. For Example my grandpa died a couple days after my 11th birthday and even though I didnt cry, scream, or kick that day or the day after that, it made a horrible impact on my life and my mothers. Secondly, There was a plane crash this year, more than 200 people were affected and one out of those 200 people happened to be one of my close friends. In addition to that there was a war a couple months ago that I didnt know about till a friend came up to me and said ""How do you feel about the war thats going on in Ethiopia"" I didnt know what to say because I had no clue that there was a war I felt ashamed that I didnt know what was going on in my own country. I've lost a lot of people i've cared about those past three years and I couldnt do anything about it because i was a million miles away.

Secondly, most of my family members live in Ethiopia. I hate having to talk to them on the phone and not being able to hug or see them in person, I hate having only 30 minutes to talk on the phone when I can talk to my relatives for hours in person, I hate how I am paying two dollars everyday just to talk to them when we can talk for free in person. Since I havent seen my family members in a long time I feel like I have a obligation to see them. I can get them small things from America and bring it to them, they can sell it to get lots of money because one dollar here is $30 there or they can keep it and cherish it.

Finally, Once I arrive I would want to talk to my family members, go eat Ethiopian food with them, and cherish that moment forever. I would go on long car rides because it would make some time for me and my family members to just sit and talk and have no where to go. We can go to the zoo since I never went and I would love to bond with my family members especially if its somewhere I never went before. My family members and I could have a cook out or I can just sleepover a friends house.

In conclusion, I would love to visit Ethiopia because my family and friends are there since i've missed so much while I was in America. I'd love to breathe the fresh air and eat the fresh food my grandma makes. Plus I would love to run around the backyard with my frirends.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
4EECC9B3CF7F,"Can people accomplish more if they are doing something? yes, the more people thrive to be active the more they will accomplish. Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". Although some say being inactive serves a purpose, nevertheless, if people are doing something productive they will accomplish more because they will become active and gives self confidence.

To begin, many people are inactive which does not serve them a purpose. For example, everyone is doing something on their agenda weather it's working, school, or shopping. People are accomplishing daily tasks everyday. This shows that, when people are doing something it serves them a purpose to be active which helps accomplish goals. Clearly, if people do not commit to becoming active they will not accomplish many goals.

Furthermore, this gives people confidence and assurance that goals or tasks will be fulfilled. For instance, when being active while accomplishing goals people start to have confidence and assurance that being active can help with accomplishments. This proves that, people are best when active because they become confidant with themselves.

Overall, while not being active and doing something productive people will not see the potential they have. In conclusion, when humans are doing something, they accomplish goals which help them develop confidence and can measure how much they are active.          ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
856351253492,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" Will if you try will you be able to grow more? Does it matter what you eat? What can you do about you height? I disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because i dont think that you can make yourself taller. He say if you try will it even work? I still think if you try it wont work because the height we have now is because our father in heaven made how we are now.

First, it doesn't matter if you try or not your height and how you look it comes from your parents genes, and it can also come from another family member. I don't think that you can do anything about your height because it depends on your family too. Even if you try you all you can do is to try to have a nice body, but about you height i don't think you could get taller then you already are. The only thing that can change is your body what i mean is if you chubby, over weight you can do excuse so you can have your body the you once wanted to have. If you really skinny you can eat a little bet more, but if you like how your are now you dont have to change anything. But like i always say ""Love yourself and how you look no matter what people say, the only one who could change you is yourself.""

Second, I don't think you can make yourself taller because there is no way that you can become taller then you already are , and don't you think that the really short people will be taller by now then shorter.

I think that they would not like to be short because in this world there is really mean people that will laugh about others, or how they look, and how short they are. So that is why I think that there is no way to make yourself taller.

Don't you think that short people will be short, and be laugh at no they would not like that son that is why i disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.

In the other hand, it does matter to eat healthy so you can be in shape and you will be in this life longer. Normally you can do anything about your height because trust me if you could i've been taller by now. I don't like to be short because sometimes i get judged by my height, or how i look, and how chubby i am and i would like to have everything perfect like all those ladies and girls in the magazines or in the TV shows, and i would like to be 6 .3 ft tall then 5.3 ft. So yeah they is no way to change how you look , but by fixing yourself like: Appalachians, surge, and other things you understand what i mean right.

So that means that i still disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because there is no way that people can make them self taller because even short people or person will be the size or shape they will like to be. This world is not that perfect because if it was everything or everyone will be how they world want to be in this world. So that is why i disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson as you can see i give reasons and examples.

This goes to the person that ready's my story please give me a changes to pass just one i have never pass an SOL before and i will be really happy if you could pass me just once in my life. On this one i have tried my really best so you could understand me what am talking about.

So please please please i beg you am just asking for just once; but if i don't pass thank you for taking your time on reading it; plus English is my second language and i dont understand it that much, and i can't read it that well either.    ",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
F4C52358CE03,"In this reasons from Churchill's statement. I am not agree because, They are many reasons important in the role that failure plays in the pursuit of success.

First some people are in someone problems like a Job maybe need once step to better position or salary. The second reasons is for the young people in the (school or college) is very difficult to do study, work, etc. There last one reasons is pursuit of success is important in the life for each people for better future.

First some people are in someone problems like a job maybe need one step to better (position or salary), example somebody have a Job and once

Office but they need more experience, and more ideas for increase the production and the best thing to do would be is to trust in self.

The second reasons is for the young people in the (school or college) is very difficult to do study, work,etc. For example, is hard to complete the academic studious and dont loss of enthusiasm is the key for they are success.

There last one reasons, is pursuit of success is important in the life for each people for better future. Because some people have many projects from school, Offices, Jobs, and Family need to make sure that from many ideas and to put the best ideas, and dont loss the enthusiasm.  ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
F074C2FEC1AF,"Technogly can allow peolpe to so many different things, it can make life much easier and more convenient for people. The use of technology can allow peolpe to get more research and even get the job done faster.

Families now a days have television,computers, laptops, tables and cellular phone. technology is a good thing it can decrease labor, and make the job faster,

there are so many ways technology can be used. Back then there wasnt technology and it was hard to communicate with peolpe that lives far away but now with the help of cellular devices it makes it much easier for peolpe to communicate. Kids now love to play in video games and pareants dont have to worry of their children going out and also they can use their tables to read a book with out going to the library and checking out books.

Technology has helped people around all over the world, and it can make things people never seen or done before now a days you dont even have to go out and buy stuff you can just use your moblie phone and go online and purchase the things you want and it can be delivered to your door.

technology has great effects and one of them is evolving, it helped evolved the world and has made many chances and many postive effects like education,

jobs, traveling also dicover new things. With out technology it would be hard to communicate contacts with family and friend that live in different places of the world.    ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
F6EAE029B20B,"Today world, everything start to moving forward. People start to invent the new ideas and those ideas make life more easily. In medical world, people make a new kind of medicine to cure the disease, compare to the old world a lot of people had die. In technology world, people put those ideas into the physical objects that it is so important for today life. From all we see everything is start from the ideas and who invent the idea? This is the kind of the question that no one ever ask. It is us the people that invent the idea.

People can make a change to the world if they start to think or we can call the attitude. The attitude of the people have a big impact to the surrounding. But not all the attitude have a good impact to the world it also have a bad impact. This is led to one of the controversial question from the science; that said do you agree or disagree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. From my perception I agree that the positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make a people have a good communication in the community between people and people, make us being more productive on everything we do, developed our self and also things surround us quickly.

Everyday people need to make a connection to one another. And exchange the information from that connection. But the important thing is the way we thinking. Like in the school, there are a lot of student from different place and family. But some student is isolate and other is sociable. Most people think that the isolate student mostly are bad and the sociable student mostly are good. The reason that the student being isolated because there is something in the school that student can not accept so they become isolated. It kind like when you move from place to place you try to fit yourself in. It take time for them to being sociable like other student. This is not the reason for us to think that the isolate student have a negative attitude. And also not all the sociable student have a positive attitude. We can learn from the past that thing happen in high school led the student to commit suicide. The student that have a negative attitude like to bullying other student and left them no choice. For the student that commit suicide also have a negative attitude because they take the outside source seriously then them self. This is the small example that we can compare for what the meaning of the word attitude is.

People like to say that most millionaire are a bad person. We can not believe in this conventional wisdom. People sometime said the bad thing to other to make them self look good. But from what I see most millionaire have a good attitude because it led them to being more productive. Productive person is the person that you should be friend with. They always share the good things in their mind to you. Not just in the business world that have a productive person. Also in the community that we live in everyday. People we meet everyday that like to talk about the good things that happening to them. They share the idea how to get there and how to do it. It not means that they try to show off to you. Don't thing them wrong. We can see when the people get their new job, they like to share the idea . You just need to open your heart and listen to them. It might one day you can use this idea to do other things too. Also in the political world, a lot of Prime minister, President, try to keep them self productive by doing a charity to the poor people. This is why the world become smaller and smaller.

There are a lot of country in the world with a different culture, tradition and religion. And a lot of people know at least one language that is not their mother tough language. But also a lot of people that only know how to speak their mother tough language. When we were young, we spending time mostly in school and they teaching us the art, history, science, literature but the important thing is the language. We learn just one language and spending almost the ten years for us to able to speak. For those years, we learn the basic how to speak in a formal way. Also our parent watch our behavior and manner along the way. When we reach to the puberty, mostly everything is start to change. The important thing is the way we thinking. Everything that we been learning from our parent, teacher, friend, society start to root inside our brain and also define who we are. One famous quote from smart human that we call him Buddha said "" You are what you think you are"". This quote not designed just for his religion but for the worldwide. If you think you can become success, you will be success one day. If you think you want to be a doctor, you will become a doctor one day.

No matter what you say always say a good things to the people around you. No matter what you do always do a good things to the people around you. If you want the people to do or say a good things to you too. And everything is start from us the way we thinking. Positive attitude is an important key for all success in life. And for my experience whenever I feeling down, discouragement, disappointment, anxiety, hopeless I always repeat this quote to myself ""You are what you think you are"". So after that if I had a bad time I keep thinking to myself that I can get through it. Even you have a small chance to success just keep thinking to yourself that you can make it through. One student asked the teacher will I pass the test if I do not know anything and the teacher answer even if you know that you can not make it just go to the test center. When they hand out the test just do what you know. And after that you will know that you have at least 1 percent chance of passing the test. The student do as the teacher told.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
03F7CF142B70,"many people say that True self-esstem does come from achievement so you can learn faster and have advanced learning.

True self esstem comes from achievement because you can learn faster and have advanced learning in all your classes.

First, some people say that self- esstem can make you learn faster because when you work as a class and also when you work by yourself with some help from teachers yo are building up your self-esstem mostly by working alone. Self-esstem can help you at school at home and in the community too. Self-esstem can help you get good grades in school and also get a promotion by your boss at work for working hard and doing everything on time and right the first time. Self-esstem is the best thing you can have at school when you are in classes that are hard for you .

Secondly, true self-esstem can get you in advanced classes so you can have advanced learning in all classes. Self-esstem can help you graduate and get in to a good collage and have a job that you love so much since you were in high school. Sometimes you need to have patience with self-esstem so you can make strong and sturdy and not weak and wobbly.

Some may argue that Self-esstem comes from praising a student's work to build self-esstem because it all depends on how the student's work on worksheets and also on homework and how they ask for help. However, praising a student's work can probably help the students build self-esstem.

Unquestionly, self-esstem can come from achivement not from praising because it can help you learn faster and also have advanced learining in all classes. You will have a great chater with a strong self-esstem. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
FE7BFE19D977,"Conserve Energy and Resources

To conserve energy and resosurces; today is good option to safe our planet. Some businesses or schools take the best opcion for their benefits. However;during long time ago,bussines and schools did not take care about this problem. They did not know that energy and reosurces,one day is going to affect our population. Then,businesses and schools started to take care about this problem. However; businesses and schools wanted to see benefits and disadvantages .

Businesses,took its best option that it was adopted a four-day work week ,to converse energy and resources. Some schools want to follow this model by extending the school day two hours. In my opinion, this is good option.

First one,Taking this option; my school will have availability to help the environment and the population. because they will using just 20 hours. This is going to be a perfect benefit for the school and environment. For example: If the school is just taking 20 hours; they will have the benefit to share energy with others schools or communities        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
3F20E4B1AA0D,"Should students have longers breaks during the school years? i have lestening to all the parents at school saying that students should get more longers breaks during the school year but i am totally desagree because, it is not a good idea having really longers breaks during the entire school year .Some students dont have the ability to learn easily than the others and if we get more longers breaks then we will not have time to teach those students who really needs help in school and it is not that the school is like trying to be mean to the students it is just that we think that if we give more education to the students then they will have a better future in their lifes.

First of all we all know that having breaks sounds reallly fun but sometimes we need to think about our future, in specific when we want to live a good life or have a better future and i think having breaks all the time it is not that necessary. For example, if someone is going to vacations, breaks and traveling around the world all the time, they probably dont know that is going on in the present or what are the news of the day , they are not being educate but in this case we are talking about the students so i think if students have really logers breaks all the time they are not going to be educate when they grow up , they are not going to do things by them self because they are not going to know how to do something .

second of all, giving breaks to the students all the time its is not good because, they are not going to have a good behavior in their future, some teachers works really hard to teach those students who dosen't have the ability to learn like others and when they going to vacations or breaks , all the hard work that the teachers were giving to the students will be gone because, they will not been focusing in school or they will not being focusing in what they were learning about. Also when students go to vacations or breaks they only think about having a great time with friends or family and i know that their are some others kids or students that sometimes are not like those students who dont really care about their future and i honestly think that if all the students could be educate individually will be a really good idea .

Finally, i think that the parents really need to know how important is to being educate when u are young because , when a person stars growing up everything in your mind change too. As adult i can say that it is hard to learn things when u get older. Sometimes when you get old, you star getting more lazy but when you are young it gets easy because , the only thing you have to do is study and focusing on school so that is why i think being educate is really important for a human and it is not good to be wasting time in longers breaks or vacations when we can waste all that time doing proyects, homework and activitides in school, and if the students have longers breaks then they will forget the knowledge during the breaks .

As a result , i think having longers breaks it not that really necessery for students specially when they are young because, a student dont really need that much time to relaxing or that much time to have a free time doing nothing . Also i can say that a student dont need a really a long break because, when i was in high school the only thing that i needed to be focusing on was in school becuse i wanted to have education, i wanted to have a better life and be a good person in the future. I also think that when you are educate you have more opportunity to get a job. For example , if you are not educate and you want to apply to get a job, the manager it is going to see that you are not educate enough to be working in the place ,so you absolully not going to have a chance to get a job. And i think that is really important for getting a job in whatever place you want to work in, so i really think that the students should not have longers breaks during the school year , that way students will be more polite in school and they will be focussing in learning more things that is going to take them to a better place ,to a better life and to a better future.",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
AFE6CAE937D8,"Generic_Name who is 17 , years old she is going to High school modays to fridays on sumer The school make a new rule to come three hours late on school but now the regular time is goint to be change, class we are going to finished five oclock , is not a big deal but she has to work every night in be a suport for her family , almost two year ago her sister do the same

her goals was to be a police officer in when the school make the desicion to come late are dreams in goals going down , letter her sister she move to new york ,in one week after she get merried right now she has a responsabilty to work because her parents can work because thet are young Generic_Name is a girl who is a exelent student a girl with great personality , right now if to conserve energy and resources , some buninesses adopted a four - day work week , by extending the day two hours of school is going to be students dreams in goals are going down a 90% of students of every :High school or college they not get a new change to be a excelent human in really hurd to think when yoo know a histoty when students lost semester because they are learning a new language ,a when the school do a new rule or or they change many things are peoples students lost evething , but if the conserbe energy not adopted a four - day work week school are not going to be exteding two hours because is going to be a big problen for every one .

First students missing school : for exanple my borfriend Generic_Name deside not going to High school , any more because days ago was missing some days is him continue like that he is going to be lost a year ,if was diffrent in the time was to long on school in he dont get support for him family is hurt alot if you dont have any one by your side in the reason is because he is 18 ,years old right now he has to work to pay rent bills an get a new change for him brother who now is a baby boy in for her mother who is not here also and other things , if the time to finished the school was not to long he has a opotrunity to continue on High school in go to college in be teaher of math that's how he love . , Another example is my cousing , he want to be a doctor but high school is not easay fo him because every morning hi has to take him brother to middle school in class should be star the same time to other school he not going to lost a semester in the year too in him is going to be a dortor who his mother after died tell him .My mother she get sickly for three months she make a decition , continue to going to the university in work was not a big deal for her do two things on the same time but her work was hurt because she finished almost eleven forty nine every day she not eat good , she was not doing homework months after lost her baby lost a semester with two weeks everything is going to be perfect is the hours of college was normal ,

Secondly 80% of students not do homework in they get a big problem for example Generic_Name how come to school because he want to be a good person on life now he is learning english we have a big different when you dont not a language because he het bullyng for other students in school because he dont speak english, when the principal know what's going ,he deside a new decition the class should be long , for one semester but junior get alot bullyng he deside one day died he write a note in say thaaks for your help principal but i can do this any more he died if the boss of the school be stop the bullyng a speak with the other students junior now should be here .Another example is PROPER_NAME was a normal girl one days the office send a mesagge , we are change many things this week for example we dont have school on mondays but right now we have school on saturdays a problem now was she has to walk every day to go the school in on saturday in the night we cant walk to late on the stree because she has to work after that one night she was tired to walk every day in she stop in a corner five minutes letter see four boys when she walk close around the boys they abuse her for boys if you think that s going to happen in your life you get mad because in the rules not changes every school college is going to be fine .

inconclusion many teens change rules in they things they changes for somethings better but is not true we have to tell to every people to want to conserve energy and resourcess , some buninesses they can not adopted a four - day work week we dont care if we have benefits we need to change many things to have a great world.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
F28D4ACF03AA,"I have multiple talents and skills, but my favorite one is skateboarding. Skateboarding is a very difficult skill it takes several hours, days maybe even years to accomplish and learn a trick on a skateboard, but that's why it's such a unique sport and skill. Skateboarding has become a daily activity for me, it takes all my stress and problems away, that's why I enjoy it so much. I skate everywhere to the store, a friends house, and maybe even to school. although I get lots of injuries like scrapes, bruises and many more I still love this sport because skateboarding has taught me a lot like, being able to be confident when i try new things, getting right back up when I fall, and being able to learn from my mistakes. Skateboarding isn't just a sport, skill, activity or hobby it's a way of life and even tho it may not be the safest sport ever it's still one of my favorite skills that I think I wont get bored of any time soon. When I was nine I had lots of friends that would skateboard and I didn't know anything about skateboarding at the time so it was really cool being able to observe such a unique sport. I would always see them practicing and skating everywhere and that encouraged me one day to try it. So a couple days later I went up to my parents and told them that I wanted to try something new and it was skateboarding, my mom said she would think about it because she didn't want me to hurt my self, but my dad on the other hand told me to just go for it and that's exactly what I did. The next day after school I asked my mom if we could go to the nearest skate shop and she said yes. Once we got to the the skate shop I was looking around and i was so confused I saw decks wheels and so much more that i didnt even know about. So as I walked in the guy that was working there asked me ""is there something specific you are looking for"". I told him I was new to skateboarding and that i've never been on top of one, so he taught me what i needed to know about a skateboard like about the deck, grip tape, trucks, wheels, and hardware. After that we got into assembling my first ever skateboard. Once I was done picking out all the stuff that was going to be on my skateboard we payed and he stared assembling it, once he finished we left the skate shop and it was to dark so I didn't get to skate that day sadly. The next day I get back home from school I put down my backpack and I imedietly went outside to try my new skateboard out the only thing i knew was to ride but i imedietly fell in love with skating. Since that day i've been skating every day and if it's not every day it's every other day. ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
130CA439835B,"I think is good idea, because the students have more opportunity to graduate early. some school districts offer programs the allow school, student to graduate in three years. most students follow this plan, must take courses during the summers,or in the evenings or may not be able to take electives course. but if you finish,

the school in three year you need to study very hard to pass all the class.

is good to finish the school early too because you go to the college early and you have more time find a good job. but you need bring more focus in one class but not in other because the graduation, can be going down. but they need break too because most students going to sleep during the class because they study in the night i would like to thank all, the teachers give homework and they not finish because they, dont have time to complete. what can they do during the night they need to get energy, to continue study for the class.

some students are very smart but other students work during the night and they dont have time to do the homework because they came tire for the work, and they dont focus in the class and they no pay attention to the class because some students came from other countries they need to pay house need get foot, clothes and other thing to school but, they need to learn English first because they need to pass all the class for enter in the college,

and they can get good jab to save the money for the future ,they can buy his own house, and get a family they need more important thing the education is very important because they look good person no body say bad thing of he.

I think is good idea because you focus only in one thing. then you can study , just in the school but if you trying to graduate for bettor life if you graduate your parents be happy. because you comply your goals if you have a dream follow you can comply, but you need to focus in the school dont slept during the class, did the homework get good grade dont forget you need to graduate in three years. must students who follow this plan must take courses during the break. to study for the exam you need to be ready for the college, thinking about you life what do you do when you out the school, you getting good job they dont know, yet because we are in the college ,but they have a dream to follow in the college the most important is you get good grade to graduate because if you get good grade they know you are good students.

my opinion is if `you graduate early you have more opportunities to grow up. very first because you are ready for the new life, you can find good opportunities,

but you need to focus in one goals first because you can get good opportunities, away because you graduate for the college ,and school o ready. they families will be happy for his becuase he get good result in the college.                                ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
E8C3FA5907B0,"Dear Principle,

I think it is wrong for you to not let students with a C grade average to participate in sports or any fun activity! I think every student should be able to participate in sports and/or any other activity because the majority of the students here are still passing with a C. Also, it would be fair to any other student here to participate. Many students like to play sports such as Basketball, Baseball, Soccer, Volleyball, and much more! Also if they are not really interested into Sports they would love to go in Clubs such as a Recycle club, Art, Reading, Computers, and more! Many students would actually improve they're grades to keep on participating in sports or clubs. I really think you should let us students join.

We would appreciate the changing. Please and Thank you.

Sincerely, Student",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
C12DEB504856,"We choose our own character traits becouse we can choose if something affect ourself for three reasons:

First, if somenthing is doesn't matter for you, it will doesn't affect you. Some people when lose something material and they don't care the material things, they looking for a solution,

Second,

if you get a problem in your workplace, you would like to resolve the problem. Some people when have a problem in her workplace want to resolve the problem because they are passive

Third, if you discuss about something to someone and the person is losing the control of ennoyance, you won't response back because you don't want more problems. Some people when someone is losing the control of her ennoyance and want to fight, they don't do anything because they are passive.

However, I know sometimes it is difficult something it doesn't affect ourself because sometimes it relate to family, or somenthing is really matter for us.

In conclusion, we choose our own character traits because we can choose if something affect ourself.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
CFFD84E8F43B,"My exmple:

My opinion is that all the student taht can take drama, music, or art or any other class it is good because many students partcipated in many activities with other's school, or they made many show where invite to the family.

or the future the can be the teacher for the next generation coming.

If the student graduated from the class that they taking be better for then because maybe some student have more oportunity that others they can be progress maybe they can be teacher or they can be gave examples how they can duda with your class, and the people believe that all the student taking any class the people believe that they can change the future they can be better the future for all new generation can help with the poeople that need help with something.

When the student taking like a drama class they can be actor, or they can be supervisor of the drama show or they can help with the ideas how can see better the shoe, movies, or the student taking music class can be compositor of music manager from any artist they can have more oportunity to practice all that they learning about the class that they graduated. The student that have.

All parents believe that your childrens be better that they was the parents gave the oportunity of they can have a diploma from any class that they takinng or from the high school or collage if they continue with any subject that they want to taking.      ",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.5
5EC5534F533A,"The first impressions is importance for people. It's almost impossible to change, I'm agree with this statement, for example, you saw an ugly food, you not eating it, anyhow it good eating or no. Next, if one person give you bad inpressions, maybe you not try to talk to him or her. Finally, if you want to shopping, you will saw the appraisal about the store.

First, when you go to any restaurant to finish lunch or dinner, you want a perfect food for yourself. you waiting for food like 15 minute, after 15 minute, the food coming, but, the food looking for squeamish, you will disappointment, because, you feeling it's a bad food and can't eating that. If are pretty food on you desk, you don't care how was food, just try it first.

Secondly, you parents introduce someone to you, this guy talking too mach, the mouth can't stop,

just like fly. however, you hate people talk too much and want quiet. Than,behave of this guy let you discontent. you will hate this guy also, want leave to him or her. This impression will let you apart to this guy.

Third, when you go to shopping with best friend, but, here are new place for your guys, just came only 1 day, you don't know anywhere to shop, than you will check to cell phone to find a store. When you find a store, the things looking for pretty, your want to go, however, your saw the all appraisal are bad, only 3 or 4 appraisal are good, than, you will change other one, because, your think the quality of needs are bad.

Finally, the first impressions is hard to change, looking for the people one time, first impressions will in you head. Regardless to change, arise in you head almost are first impressions, because an effect of first time to meet are unforgettable.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
CBB0475A89B4,"If you don't do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow; From my past experiences i strongly agree. In life things aren't easily handed to you if you want something bad enough you have to work hard for it if you wanna become a better version of yourself. Most people around the world look up to certain successful people and wish to become just like them with all the money, cars, and fame like the famous rapper "" Nba Youngboy "" which has made himself known through his music rapping about his life and difficult obstacles he's had to go through to make it where he is now.

Growing in life and being successful isn't something that's going to happen over night it takes time and patience. With every task comes a difficult obstacle that'll try to put you down and make you wanna give up and people usually tend to give up easily. The only way you can over come obstacles and move forward is to get up from it and keep trying; Barack Obama one of our best well liked President worked hard for what he believed in and helped illegal immigrants around the country get an opportunity to get job legally. Obama had many difficult task but his passion and what he believed in never made him wanna give up he kept trying over and over again to grow and to help undocumented immigrants voices be heard too.

Immigrants nowadays tend to have it harder than most people; they come from around the world looking for a better life, well paid jobs, and a safe home for their family. The majority of immigrants come with nothing but a couple clothes and shoes and usually no where to stay more than half of immigrants work twice as hard to get food on the table and clothes for their kids and wifes. The mindset of having goals and being passionate about something is a powerful tool, Many immigrants work hard enough to eventually become a U.S citizen which has a lot of obstacles to complete. For immigrants to learn the english language is difficult but after studying and working hard long hours they master it and they tend to grow in the american society, Which shows anyone if you really put your head into it you can accomplish anything.                                   ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
6D41FAC8F3CF,"The author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote,"" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.

Imagine in a world that is trying to change you in everyway.

I'm disagree because you have right to do what you want to do with your life or who you want to be in your life and nobody have to say what you need to do. Example; all people in this world have rights, bacause alot people trying to change your life, and they want you to do what they said, if you think you are right do not lessent to the people.

To many time the comunity try to change your descision and they do not respect what you said. that's why is alot problem in the poblation. Example; to much politician people want to change customs and religions they can't do anything about it, because that is a decision from there culture.

If you took a decision about to put your own company and your friends say you can not do that, just try to do your best and don't peatention to him. Example; in a company every employer have his own rights like what time they need to be there or what time they get out the work.

The reason why i shoose disagree is because to many people in this world do not respect when you make your own decision, if you can do something do not worry about what people say. The solution to this problem is do what you thing is right; and the comunty need to have a good relationship families,neightborhood, and students.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
B459B5B87707,"Just listened that people started taking classes in summer for graduating in three years, Where are the breaks? Don't they need any break. Even machines don't work perfectly after being used continuously for a long time. Doesn't the same goes for humans? In fact, we need more break because we have a lot to do with friends and family. What is the purpose of going to three year graduation if you don't get time to spend with your closest ones? One year is not a long time if you are in a productive environment and surrounded by positive people then why to go for three year graduation in high school ?

High school isn't just about graduating it is about making memories, spending time with friends and learning to socialize. High school is the time when everyone, even the most innocent start to get off their limits and it is when the fun begins. Everyone like to have fun, joke around with friends and skip the school for no reason. It may seen like a child play to most but those who miss this part, miss the most enjoyable days in their life. In the old days it is not money or success that makes you happy, it is memories from your past that bring a light, wrinkled smile on your face.

Memories are memories you can let them die but what will you do of your interest, interest never leave. It will always hunt you in your dreams. If you are scared of failure and not fulfilling your wishes never leave the electives, which you obviously miss if you go for three year graduation. Electives are not needed for graduation but graduation only doesn't serve a purpose. If you can't have a class that you enjoy because of three year graduation then, interest and wishes are worth giving an extra year and you also get so much with it. Human beings don't need much to be happy even a small success or a short class that gives them pleasure can have their face bloomed for the whole day.

More ever, high school teaches to take mature decision and have good manners. It is not that we get a extra decision making class or manner class in high school but being in high school itself teaches to take better decision. Being around with people teaches us to behave accordingly. Having many friends and busy time schedule teaches us to tell 'no' sometimes. It is the place where most of the people struggle and get a better direction in their life. Everyone becomes a better person when they graduate from high school compared to what they were in their middle schools.

Being a high school student it is not wrong to dream for one year faster graduation for the sake of one year job experience and one year salary. In my opinion, one year of job experience and salary is not even close to the memories you have with your friends and the happiness you fell when you come to school.

In the nutshell, everyone of us know that college life is not so enjoyable and fun as school life. We hope to do so much but can't accomplish our wishes in the whole college year. One extra year of high school can do more than ten more years in life. Is a year too costly to spend for the life long experience and knowledge? Of course not. Some may think that three year high school saves a lot of time but trust me, it will be the thing that you will regret most in your old age. This four year of high school is the golden time for everyone as it gives the life long memories and a never ending satisfaction to each and every student who has attended high school.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
71129FE0D18F,"Some schools districts allow students to graduate within three years. This is a good idea because of legal statuses, not having financial support, and also some students having almost all required credits.

One reason is my friend Generic_Name. My friend Generic_Name lives in Texas he is going to graduate with the class of 2020. Due to his mom's immigration statutes they left Virginia to go to Texas in the summer of 2019 to seek for help. In fear that his mother would be deported in less than a year he decided he would finish a year earlier than what was expected. This year Generic_Name is taking high level class while still being ahead of the game.

Another reason is some students have no financial support. Some students want to go into the work force but do not want to effect their academics. Graduating early would be a great solution for them. Even some want to join the work force to earn money for college or help their families financial problems.

Lastly some students have almost all credits to graduate due to taking high school classes at an earlier level. For a standard diploma in the state of Virginia you need 3 math, 3 science,4 history, 4 English, health grade 9 and 10, 2 sequential fine art, and a language. Due to some students taking some classes at earlier levels it dulls it all down for them in high school.

Graduating within three years is a good idea it helps students end up with their high school diploma while also helping there problem. I agree that gradating within three years is a good idea for students who need and choose it. ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
68004683BC3C,"I Disagree the school board is adding one and half hours each day of school. We have regular school days seven hours a day. Also some people stay afterschool that palce two more hours of school. That is nine hours of school. I usally stay afterschool for peer helpers every wenesdays. That helps me to get my communite servers up I already have six hours, I just need nine more hours that is it. But either way I love helping special kid's and also I will love to finish this year helping PROPER_NAME, even though I'm about to finish my community severs hours I will still help the kids.

Anyways this about me disagreeing with school borad. What I'm really trying to say we wake up at six o'clock or five o'clock and we come to school and we do our work. Some of as have good grades and some of as are trying our best. We recpect our teachers as much as we could, we do our work and we some how understand what the teacher gives us. Also we try our best as we could.

Another example that you can't add more hours to our school is that some students have sports afterschool not in school out of school. Even though there is sports in my school they already sign up for other sports. Some students wants to just go home and be in her/she home and just study quietly instead of afterschool, afterschool is every loudly its not for everybody. All of us have good examples and they will tell why its a bad idea and they will disagree with you. But I know where you guys are coming from you want us to have more education.

I really hope you don't add more hours because seven hours is enough for us to learn. We got other things to do afterschool. If you add more hours, students will be picked up every last period and not even be there when the teacher is teaching. Also we will not have afterschool activity because students can't stay afterschool past six o'clock. Also if you add more hours parents will take out their childern and they will put them in a different school. That what I think about you adding more hours to school. I hope you think about it and think about if your idea we are actally taking benfits.

Why I disagree with school board is wrong that you guys are adding more hours of school. For example, like I said I stay afterschool on wendesday's and seven hours of school place the two more hours for afterschool. It gives me headace and our late bus is the last one to go, so basically I go home five o'clock and sometime when the late bus comes early I go home like 4:48pm. When I go home I eat and take a shower I watch for a little bit I say I'm take a nap it doesn't end up a nap it ends up I wake up at six o'clock. Also sometimes when I don't stay afterschool, I take nap at home I wake up at eleven o'clock, I go to sleep at three o'clock. This why I want don't you guys to add more hours because it will effect our sleeps.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
56080A912BB5,"Generic_Name writing sol march 19, 2019

If I do always something I can do more that one. Many people belief is always do something we can do more thing; because, if more practice something we have more abiliti to do something. When, I do always something the next time I do better. Likewese, I have to read book for book project I can do. If always I do project more good grades have, and I can do more project. I have to read for mu quiz if always study fot the quiz I can do better.

I have to read book, biography, ect.

In Generic_Name claas I have to read book for book project. If always I read book I can do more project more extra poins. In Generic_Name class we need to read the lions book for abc project if always I read this book we can do more project. In my History class I need to read biography if more read I can have good grades for this class. I thing if more do something I can do more thing, and more good grades I can have.

In my class I have to do project. In Generic_Name class always we need read book; because, if more book read more book project can do. In Generic_Name class we have abc projec about The Lions book if always reed this book more project I can do. In my History class I need read biographis for extra poins more biographys read more extra poins have. When I stady more I can have more extra poins.

Always I have to stady for my quiz. In my science class I need read my notes for my quiz if I more stady is more essay my quiz. For my sol I need to stady always; because, is so important for my I have gooh grades in the sol. Always I do quiz in my History class if always practice for my quiz always I have good grades. Is more esay for my always stady for my quiz that a bad grade.

Sometimes if always I do something I bored of this. However, if I consentrate in I do I can do better things. whet, I read my book, stady for my project and quiz I need consentration; because, if always do something, and don't concentration I don't do nothing. In my opinion if always stady whit consentation I can do everithing good, and I can have good grades. for this reason and many more that always I do something is better the I dont do nothing.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
88006889B561,"First impressions are not ""almost impossible to change"". They can be difficult to change, but they aren't almost impossible to change because there are ways that can help you change your first impression. A thing about first impression is to question yourself on is ""how can I change my own first impression?""

A lot of people say it's almost impossible to change your own first impression, but what they don't realize is that they aren't thinking hard enough to comprehend to understand why they aren't almost impossible to change, so they instead just don't even try and use more of their cognitive ability. What's important about first impressions is having to say something that will impress others.

When you use more of your cognitive ability, then you'll be able to come up with better first impressions. Once you're able to come up with a better first impression; you'll find it easier easier than what other people said based on their opinion. In conclusion, first impressions are a lot easier to change when you think about how you'll change your first impression and when you come up with a better one, but it takes time to develop

(also don't over think it because this can cause stress and also won't help you use more of your cognitive ability).     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
9E817DB62497,"Are outdoor activities enjoyable? Outdoor activities are enjoyable for everyone people can play outside with they're friends and get a chance to meet some new friends. There are so many activities someone can do. They are a lot of sports people can play soccer, football, baseball and the list keep on going. outdoor activities are good exercise for everyone for the soul reason of doing something outdoors than doing nothing indoors people are getting more lazy and stupider by the day because of technology humans wast most of they're lives on technology than the outdoors. The outdoors activities help people to get more active. Outdoor activities on any season and weather. If it is winter and snowy it's a great time to go ice skating or snow boarding. If it is summer and hot then it's a great time to go swimming and it is a great time to head to the beach and go swimming on the ocean or to play sand valley ball. Then fall is a good time to throw a football around or to kick a soccer ball around. Spring is a good time to play soccer go running and to go bicycling.

What is some of your favorite activities? My favorite activity is soccer. I love play soccer because everyone can play soccer is easy to learn and it is simple to play. One thing about soccer is that it can be played at any time on any weather if it is snowy, hot, cold, and rainy. The best time to play soccer is on the spring because the weather is not to cold but not to hot it is just perfect to go outside and kick a ball or to play with friends. Then the trees and the plants look beautiful because they are growing during the spring. The outdoors is fun and enjoyable there are so many activites some can do so try some of them out. ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
9FE689F5F44D,"Achieving the knowledge based on the books or on the notebooks is common but achieving a knowledge by involving in the extracurricular activities is a different and extra. School is the place where students get suggestion, get inspire, and get strength to accomplish their goals. From school, students can learn optimum knowledge and experiences about the inside and outside of the books as well. In addition, school is the career building place for the students. School is the best place to evaluate the skills and the capability of each students. By controlling students involvement in the extracurricular activities, many students can fulfill their dreams which gives them happiness and makes them feel special by doing it. Also, gives them a wings of hope to do something more and make their parents and themselves proud tomorrow.

As we all know that, if the students doesn't have that ability and interest in order to take a particular class then school never force students to involve in those particular class or field. But, talking about family, there are maximum parents who force their children to take a class and choose a career as they want. There are many parents who wants their children to become a doctor, pilot or engineer; though, their children doesn't have any interest on that faculty. In other words, though their children are weak in math and science, but their parents wants to make them, a doctor, pilot or engineer. It's only because according to the parents, only doctor and pilot can make a huge money and has a great reputation. At this situation, we have seen many cases that parents do emotionally blackmail to their children. In that condition, children sacrifice their dreams just to make their parents happy. We all know, every student do not wants to become a doctor and pilot. They have their own dreams and interests on particular faculty. For example, if a student is interested and good on soccer but his parents do not support to his interest because they feel it's a waste of time. But, school always support him. According to the parents their children should be good on knowledge based on books rather than extracurricular activities. They should have only focus towards their study which is totally wrong.

If schools control student involvement in extracurricular activities then it can show a right path and right decision for the student's bright future. Schools are available with each and every information regarding the bright future of students. If a student is interested on an art then teacher let them to take that class with a huge strength.

School knows every skills and talent about their student because they spend more time with their teachers, counselor, friends and their coach than their family. In fact, they share everything about their interest to their teachers and counselors because they understand them. But they do not share those kind of things with their family because family gives only pressure instead of understanding their children's interest. If a student is good on photography then school is the only one who gives more information and put more efforts to help them through different strategies. They try very hard that how students will feel easy and comfortable. Students are also able to learn different knowledge through the school's coach. Coach is the only one who teach, tell and motivate students about their strong and weak point through which student can do better today and give their best tomorrow than yesterday.

School provides a beautiful and colorful feathers to the students in order to fulfill their dreams in which faculty they are interested and dying to do for it; only by controlling student involvement in extracurricular activities. There are many students who do not have any interest on their study, who do not have any interest on the words written on their notebooks, who do not have any interest to become a doctor, engineer or pilot. Instead, who are interested to become a famous photographer, to become a great dancer, singer and a great actor. These dreams will be remain on dream until they do not get any supports from anyone, if they do not get any motivators to motivate them and also if anyone won't become their inspiration to inspire and encourage them. Similarly, school is that place which do not give their student's dream remain on dream; school helps students to give all those things which are needed to them; by motivating, encouraging and being inspiration for the students. It also provides an elective classes and other different activities to make them feel happy and special or in order to let their colorful feathers fly in the high sky and able to touch and feel it.

At the end, we can see that there are many benefits for the students which also teach them about the importance of extracurricular activities. Therefore, school is that place where it motivate, gives a strong strength to accomplish student's passions, suggest students to go through their interest and teach many significance knowledge about the educational experiences. Because of the schools control student involvement in the extracurricular activities, students can accomplish their interests, dreams and make their career in a particular activity in which they are interested, in which they see a big hope, declare it as their passion and happiness. I believe that not only the students, everyone should follow their passions and see success will comes towards you itself because all we need is our happiness. It is only possible if the schools control students involvement in the extracurricular activities rather than giving decisions to the family and student for the involvement in the extracurricular activities.             ",4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.5
510CA49B78BB,"Is setting an example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people? Sometimes it is not the best idea to mirror other people's behavior because some people do not always have a positive behavior. There could be time's that someone could be in a negative place of mind, reckless, and does a lot of horse play; other time's people can be charming, properly mannered, and influential.

Growing up in the Generic_City area, I have been able to witness a lot of drugs, gangs, and violence. The example these group of people decide to display is not a very positive act on their behalf; this is not a pathway you would want to be taking because of the bad outcomes from it. I remember I had a friend who's father shot himself due to the poor choice he made which made him reflect and he figured that was the only solution.

On the other hand, some people decide to be very influential to society in a positive manner. Out of my three years of high school I was able to see some students making their way for others by not being selfish; a lot of them did volunteer work as well to help the community and to hopefully inspire others to do so as well. I actually got the opportunity to throw a kids halloween party at a church: I enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun.

Honestly, I do not feel like I am a good example nor do I feel like I am a bad one either. I make mistakes: it is how I was taught. Growing up I believed that the only way you are ever going to learn is by making mistakes and being able to evaluate the error of your mistake; only then you can truly improve yourself and help insipre other people as well.

In conclusion, I am mutual about examples being the best way to influence other people because of it not always being a positive thing due to the poor decisions some people choose to make. Truthfully I think it is a better idea to be the best you that you can be because at the end of the day there is only one of you and so many of us; it is best to stay unique.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
DC77E1C50756,"My prompt is about how everyone has a skill or talent and I have to identify a talent or skill that I have and explain how I develop and use it. Well I'm an Athletic girl. I play different sports during some seasons, for example when soccer season has ended. Another sport I'm kinda good at is basketball. I play sports in school and outside of school. A few other things I can do is sing and dance.

I'm going to start with soccer. So I started playing soccer in 2018. I dont really remember my age but I do remember the year. When I started playing soccer was when I lived in Generic_City. I played there for to seasons. I played in the spring and fall seasons. When I played in the spring it was the best thing ever like I'm telling you I literally fell in love with soccer at that time. My team was a good team we were called the sharks. I was number 14 and I was happy because that's the number that both of my cousins jersey numbers are. Anyways, we won a few games and lost a few ones but we always played good, we gave our best, and we gave it all. After, spring season ended I played on the fall season. I'm going to say that fall season was okay it wasn't as good as spring season but I still enjoyed it. My jersey number changed in that season so then I was number 16. I haven't played since 2019 ended but I will start playing again pretty soon and I'm really happy and excited.

Now I'm going to talk about my basketball season. Last year in 7th grade I was in Generic_School and they put up the girls basketball season was coming. I was interested in it so I decided to sign up and try-out for the team. I can't lie try-outs were rough but at the end of the day I gave my best and it was fun. A few weeks later they put up the paper of the people who made it and I saw my name and I was so happy. Anyways, that season ended, then school ended, and I moved to Generic_City. School started a few months later girls basketball season started. I was happy so I sign up. I went to try-outs for the whole week. At the end of Friday which was the last day of try-outs the coach Generic_Name told the girls who made the team and who didn't and guess who made the team MEE!!!!. I was so happy my friends and I celebrated on the way out. The whole season was great, I made so many fun memories with the girls and I was just so happy.

My third skill is dancing. I love to dance everyday. Like I'm always dancing in the car, shower, kitchen, my room, just everywhere. I love it and I enjoy it very much. It's something that could never leave me. Im going to start taking dancing classes so I'm very excited for that. One app that I always use to dance is Dubsmash it has different song that I can dance to. I'm always dancing to a song in the car when a song comes up and it has beats I just be going crazy.

Finally, the last thing I love to do is sing. Singing for me is just very enjoyable and calming. I sometimes get on my feelings and cry but it's just because they are really good songs and I cry because I'm happy or sad. I love to sing the songs of Sydney R. But my top favorite songs to sing are All of Me, Into you, Love don't Change, and How you gonna. And yeah these are all the stuff that I do as a skill or talent. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
B558AFC603D4,"There was a girl named Generic_Name, and she wanted to play violin like she used to. Generic_Name was struggling. It was not easy on getting back to playing it. Generic_Name practiced everyday no matter what. Generic_Name made a lot of mistakes on the way, but successed at the end. When you accomplished something; you have failed before you could have successed. Failing can cause before you succeed because you try to get where you are, you make mistakes, and you can make the wrong choices.

To begin, failing can lead to succes because it happen before you succeed. For an example, you tell yourself that you will get your work done for all of your classes. Then you end up not understanding the work, but tried and turned it in the work. It can also be doing all your chores before you could go out and be with your friends. For another example, you had a lot of chores to do. It was getting late and you have finished all of your chores. At the end you could not go out, but finshed with all of the chores. It can also deal with reading a book. For an example, you want to read a hard book and finsh it, but you end up reading a different level and finshed the book. These examples show that you fail before you can succeed.

Secondly, failure happens before you can accomplish anything because everyone makes mistakes. It can be when someone is trying to make a cake. For an example, you try to combine the inderigdeints, but they were not the right indergridents, Then next time, they put in the right inderigents. It can also be about when someone is trying to practice on their drving skills. For an example, The driver prcatices everyday, but makes many mistakes. Later on, gets better at it. People can aslo make mistkes by giving poeple directions on where to go. For an example, a lady needed help to get the location at the supermarket. The lady asked an old man where it was. The old man gave the direction, but made a mistake where the superamlrket was at. Then the old man told the lady that it was the other way. All of these examples show that mistakes can happen before you can success.

Lastly, failing can cause by just making the wrong choice. Such as a girl wanted to tryout for outdoor track, but she loved playing softball. The girl tried out for track and made the team. There was a problem, she couldn'[t be on the softball team because it was too late. The softball teamwas full. At the end, the girl should of made a better choice. It can also be about how you want to turn out your day. For an example, the boy wanted his day to be fun, but the boy was paying attention in his classes so he was sent to the offfice. This turned out to a bad day. Then he apologized and made his day better. This all shows that making the wrong choices can lead to failing on what you decide.

This all sums up, that failure can cause before you succeed. Others say that failure does not happen when you succeed, however, I say that it does play out before you can success. Failing will always occur when you succeed. You push yourself where you want to be, you make errors, and doing the wrong decision are all reasons why failure can happen before you can success. Do you think there is failure even when you succeed. ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
205D590BCBB1,"Community, state, national parks provide a wide variety of interesting activities. I will write about an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors. I will use specific details and examples, to explaing why someone might find that activity enjoyable.

For my opinion i think i will like to have a community, state, national park that has two fields. One basketball field with soccer goals at the botton of the basketball hoot. Then last but not least a tennis court. That would be cool.

Then i will want the parks/play ground, to be split in two. One small play ground for little childrens under 9 years old.

And then the other one will be for kids above 10 years old.

Now i will describe what will i want to look like or have on the babies' play ground from a 2/3 year old kid to 9.

kids and parents will like to have tiny slides of a hight of 3 or 4 feet tall and have sings that are special for babeis'. Then little benches were they can sit with there parents. After that i will like does little horses made of plastic or metal, that you can move back and forth.

Then now i will tell you and describe you how can kids will love kids to have on the other park or play ground from kids from 10 and above.

So maybe kids will love to have two fields' because maybe they like to play soccer or basketball and tennis so one of them will be a basketball field with small soccer goals at the botton of the basketball hoot because a lot of kids like soccer and basketball. Then the other field will be a tennis field. What kids will love too is have to courts on one field too. Then for the slide i want four of the to have a hight about 6 or 7 feet tall and two with curls and the other two, just normal.

Then the other biggest ones will be of a high of 10 feet tall and i will promise you that kids will love it!

So they don't get bord and say; this is boring. This is for little kids, i don't like it!.

So this is what i think that chlidrens will like to play on. That is all i wanted to say.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
5923F6631724,"' Why do we have to go school for eight and a half hours for five days per week? We can't do anything after school!'' Please imagine that situation. If that situation became for real, how are students going to react to it? Of course, they are going to be mad, and they might have more stress. Therefore, although some people agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day because students can have time for studying, and it is very educational for them, I disagree with that idea because it interferes their family time and after school activities, and it is going to become cause of they have more stress.

First of all, students can't have time for family and other activities. At recent, many kids hang out with their friends than families especially teenagers. I think students should have more family time to having great relationship with thier families. Additionally, some students have activities after school. Activity is an essential way to relax and have fun, and it also helps students find new hobbies and make new friends. As a result, if adding one and a half houres to school, it steals a lot of wonderful opportunities from students.

Second, it gives more stress to students. Some students have large amount of stress already. During the school week, they study for about seven hours per day, and sometimes they need to work on project and study for quizes and tests. Also, they have homework at least one subject everyday. That's why students have a lot of stress. To decrease their stress, school needs to give a time to relax for them after school.

In conclusion, adding more time to school has many disadvantages for students. Students need family time and time to work on their activities after school to have fun and relax. School is not a place that give a stress to them. School is a place that give a opportunity to get interesting knowledges to them. I believe school should overrule this idea if you think about students.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
BDF13939FA26,"Students may say inactivity is the way to go, However other student say keeping yourself occupied will lead you towards achievement. But staying occupied is the way to go if you wanna be successful and achieve things in life. Sitting around and doing nothing wont lead you to anything sucessful in life.

If your at home sitting around having nothing to do will not help you to be successful. If you try to find something productive to do it will help you in the future. To be productive or to do something productive really does'nt have to be school work related it can be anything like having a job, chores or helping around the community.

Lets say you have home work but you dont feel like doing it, because your used to not doing anything and or are lazy to do it. which means you are more likely to procasanate. On the other hand if your used to doing your work the same day its assigned and or turn it in on time you are less likely to procasanate because you are used to staying occupied and doing all your work.

From my own expierence, when i was 14-15 years old i wouldnt do anything at home or at school which caused me to do negative things that didnt lead me to achieve my goals at that moment. Now that im 17 years old i keep myself busy by doing school work or working my part time job, which wont cause a negative effect on me because im preparing myself for my future and life goals.

Overall students think that doing nothing is the way to go, but other students say that keeping themselves occupied leads them to a succeful and positve life.

Now a days i can tell that teenagers that have been getting into legal trouble really dont have anything to do outside of school. While other teenagers actually do outdoor and indoor activtiy to keep themselves out of trouble.                            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
01501F95B8B2,"10pm curfews is a bad idea, why? Because teens lives would be affected in many different ways, including the fact that in can get them in much more trouble. Teens would have to adjust to this rule and some might not even know about the rule when it comes out. I think that teens should not get an early curfew but instead change it to a later time, so teens dont have to go through having to deal with changing there hole life around. having a law like this can get teens in more trouble because now they have an extra law that can be broken easily with out even knowing. teens enjoy being out late and doing things, it can make them feel older and more grown up like.

Teens are stuck in school seven hours a day and it can take a good bit of there day away so having that option to stay out later and being able to do things is a great option for them. Lots of teens want to go shopping and hang out with friends at a mall, but school and homework can take a while so they cant do it during the day always. for example, a friend and me wanted to go to the movies after school but we got assigned lots of home work and we new we would be busy the next days, so in order to be able to watch the movie, we would have to go at night time. curfews can inter fear with couples who want to do something later in the night, and it would be unfair to the teens to have to go back home just because they can't stay out late. Having said all this, teens are old enough that they can make there own decisions.

Lots of tees have after school jobs taking them late into the night, and a lot of them need to be able to walk home. Teens would have to start having to start to work around the new law and make changes to there work hours. Also kids would start getting less work hours resulting in the not getting enough money, some house hold have teens helping pay bills. Curfews laws are and will be the most common law being broken resulting in an increase of crime. teens do not like it when they get told how long they get to stay out, which will result in them just braking the law.

I would be surprised if teens would start getting in less trouble, because teens will still do what they want even if you set a curfew. A curfew only tells a teen that your not suppose to be outside, but that still does not mean that they will do it. Teens are going to do what they want at the end of the day and not what the law tells them to. The best way to make sure teens can stay on track but the still to be a curfew is that the curfew should be moved up to 12pm. Also teens enjoy going to gas station at night to get stuff and lots of the enjoy the walk as well.

In conclusion I think that if we just move the curfew up to 12pm it would allow teens to have a good night out with out having to worry about being out to late. Also showing that kids can get in more trouble by having an early curfew just means that its a bad idea and should not be implemented. If adults could just put more trust in teens i think it would improve kids behavior and also have kids get to prove them self to show how responsible they can be. teens are more responsible than everyone might think, I think they just need a chance to prove it to everyone. I think earlier curfews are a bad idea and that it should just be moved up a little for that will help teens out in the long shot.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
0F3EC382C3CB,"The benefits of working in as a group or working alone.

I believe working as a group is more beneficial for the students.

My friend Generic_Name is very capable of doing school work by himself.

However, even he needed others help to understand somethings.

I am very capable of doing a school project by myself.

However, even I could use some one else's input in the matter.

I believe working together as a group is beneficial .

For example, my friend Generic_Name he is a very smart person.

He was on the top of the class with grades but, even he could not do it by himself.

One day the teacher assigned us projects.

Generic_Name decided to do it alone.

On the due date, which was later that week Generic_Name turned in the project.

The teacher told him he failed he did not understand why.

The teacher later on the day took him aside and explained that he was not understanding the question.

He asked her how he could make up the points for the failed project.

Two weeks after that she assigned another project.

She took Generic_Name aside and said ' this time work with somebody"".

Generic_Name listed so he asked somebody to work with him.

The day the project was due, he was nervous because he does not work with people often.

The teacher told him they got a perfect score.

The teacher took him aside and told him why he passed.

She told him he passed because when you have more than just one persons input.

Things become clear so when you do not understand something that other person's input can help.

Another reason I believe working as a group helps is when I was in high school we were assigned a two part project.

The first part I had to do by self.

I got it done when the due date came the teacher told us to pick a partner.

I picked a friend of mine, Generic_Name.

The teacher told us to compare our papers.

However, our paper even though they were on the same subject, they were very different.

She later told us to now write a paper on the same subject but working together.

When we were all done with the two parts she told everyone to rotate their papers to the right once.

Everyone passed them on the teacher then told the whole class to read all three papers and to pick which one made more sense.

When every one was done they all picked the one that made the most sense and gave it to her.

Every single one of those papers she got were all the one people worked on together.

She then asked the class why they did not pick the other one.

They all said because the other papers were one sided as in only one perspective.

Some students may say working alone is better.

However, Generic_Name and I both learned that in some places you need two sides to a story, argument and debate.

If I would have gone on with my life thinking the way I thought before I worked with some one, it would be very different in some perspective.

My friend Generic_Name's life would have been very different too.

Thanks to the team work skill and the skill to listen to other peoples side, Generic_Name and I can make decision with some one instead of just making it alone.

I recommend you talk to your teacher about this and get more group projects going.

Talk to your parents about how you could use those skills in the outside world, become surprised by how much you use them, and by how easier your life become.

When you do not have to make decision alone, decision making becomes much easier.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
1300AD075785,"Based on what

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote,

''Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow.""

I would have to say that i agree with his statement because as a high school student i like to go beyond on what i already know what to do. Emerson wants yous to take another step in what we do he wants us to grow wont you? knowing that we are capable of doing something so much bigger and better and just be able to grow in are generation. Success is something that every6 high school student wants to do we want to get better at something, we want to pass are classes and if we are not willing to go beyond and put forth effort then i dont think we will be able to grow.

High school is a great way to show this especially if your a student athlete; lets say that you play baseball or softball or any other type of sport that takes time to master. Playing a sport is not easy especially if you want to get a scholarship. I get ask this question all the time ""have you yet mastered being a Cather and going beyond that point to see what you have in stored?"" I have mastered the skills of a softball catcher but i know if i go beyond that point and keep practicing i know that i will be a great softball player in my years to come. Believing in your self to do something can also help you grow, just being able to say I got this and giving it all you got just gets you a step closer to becoming a master and growing into it. Another this is mistake those are alright , no one is perfect everyone is going to have there flaws and thats ok thats another way of growing and learning; won't you want to go beyond something you already mastered and try something new to grow?

Emerson wanted us to read this quote and think about what it meant to us. I ready this quote and it gets me to think "" so if i go beyond on my catching and try something else i could grow into the sport and play multiple positions on the field instead of just one."" I could also say the same thing about JROTC in my school as being part of the drill team and going to competitions. These are good examples on what we can all think about going beyond d and farther in what we already know an think about what we can do better so we can grow and learn from are mistakes. High school is a great place to start not even then you can start when ever you want just make sure you know what you want to do and just have fun and enjoy your life. The quote can also be for adults, who have already mastered in something like for example my father, he created his own software and designed it for offices and he is out of town right now in Generic_City so that he can install it and, just grow from that experience he is going beyond on what he dose at work and just making something great happen.

The Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ,""unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" if you go this prompte and you read it and you have to pick if you agreed or disagree what would you pick? what would you tell me to make me agree or disagree with you? You tell me if i was right or wrong for agreeing with him. you will also be a great person in society. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D9FC1CDE9B10,"DEAR PRINCIPAL,

I think that students can help if they want to. but it will be very helpful to the community service. people and parents can take position helping the community. it will be more helpful if all the school cam and help the community. teacher can help to if they want. service to the community will help your town in lots of ways. like help pick up litter, help people in need, save in dangered animals. it can all so help cleaning the planet as well the students can start helping the would clean up the planet. they can stop the green house effect. then we fine better way to use power to support the world.

love, you friendly student.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
3821238FE334,"""I don't need to go to school for to learn new things, I can learn the same things in my home"" Some students believe that is not necessary go to school to learn because they can attend classes from home. Some schools offers distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. This is a good option for students whose can not come to school for their jobs or their kids but, they want to study and to get a High School Diploma. The majority of people assure that students need come to school for to learn but, they are wrong because students can learn the same things at home. Many students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

First, Some students can not come to school everyday because they have a full-time job and their parents do not support them. For example, Many students do not have the same opportunities than others students so, they have to become independent. As a result, they have to leave from their homes and to find a job so, they sacrifice to study because they don't have time to come to school. With this option, they can go to work then, they can take their classes at home after work without to feel pressure by their responsibilities.

Second, This option can avoid the absents for students don't like come to school. For example, Some students don't like come to school and they prefer stay at home because they are attacking by schools' bullies. These students feel more confident in their home than in the school and, they believe that this option is the best way for to solve their school's problems. They also prefer this option because they are shy and they don't like to speak or to do presentations in front of the class by the students make fun of them.

Another reason for this option can would help many students is the students have kids and they can not come to school by their kids because they don't like that another person take care their kids and they prefer stay at home with their kids than come to school. Attending classes from home is an excellent strategy for students whose can not come to school by their kids because they will can take the classes and to get a High School Diploma without to leave their kids with someone else.

As you can see, Many students would benefit form being able to attend classes from home because it's a big opportunity to finish their High School even if they can not come to school frequently by their jobs or kids. It also helps students don't feel confident in the school for schools' bulliers or their feelings.         ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
FE700406E7D4,"I think the people have to be guidance for the expert, Because the expert know what is corrects, and what is not correct, and if we make aur decision we will have many problem, and we gonna fail in the life, but therefore alway we can triumph in the study, I just say our life can be better if we have an expert who tall to the people, what is good and what is not good in your life, If we working in group is more easy to understand something, and when you work for yourself and you will understand less.

Example:Our life will be better if the experts guidance the people, because they know what is the best way you have to take, and they can help you if you are rong in something.

Is very important work in group with experts, because they have many experience in many thing, and they can help you to understand more than you believe, and this is my idea why is important that the people have to be guidance for the expert people and who have more experience, and i believe that work in group is better than alone.",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
827D807512AB,"churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? Success consists of going from failure without loss in enthusiasm. I think that churchill's is wrong about that failure of the plays in the pursuit of success because not many people are failure of there success and many people are in inspired from what they are going and so many people are pursing a failure.

Firstly, not many people are failure of there success. For example people that are failure is not succeeding in doing something else. Lets say that student that goes to school that they don't want to succeeded in there education. That they don't want there education for college or a university if they don't succeeded . Another example is if you are not succeeding then you can't do something just as outcome.

Secondly, many people are inspired from what they are going to succeeding. For instance people are are working or getting a job they have to be inspired of there job they have to succeeded in what they are going. They have to love they job or do a better to succeeded in there job. If you succeeded in your job you might get a raise.

Thirdly, so many people are pursing to failure. They don't want to pursuit anything because if they do then they are not succeeding in doing something else. for example if a students want to graduate on time with there class mates they he has to get good grade pass the sol then he has to succeeded in school. They have to be enthusiasm meaning they have to be inspired.

Iin conclusion Winston churchhill's is a failure of the plays in the pursuit because not many people are failure that who want to success and many people are inspired from want there are going and finally so many people are pursing to failure.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
89506A98AC2B,"People say, having a positive attitude is the key to a success in life.

I strongly agree with them, if you come to think about it been positive may give you the corage to do surtend things.

You would belive in yourself and most possiblie make your goals come true.

It also would be hard for you to get your feelings hurt.

People wont be able to brake you down that easily.

So in my personal opinion, having a possitive attitude actually is the key to a success in life.

When i said it gives you the corage to do surtend things i mean it.

Because, you might want to make a goal in you life come true, but your probably to shy or your thinking ""oh theres no way im going to make it"".

Thats the main problem, you have a negative energy witch bring you to have a negative action.

Sometimes your words reflect your actions.

This is why i think if you have a possitive attitude you will sucess in life.

Been positive or having a positive energy is like the meaning of ""faith"".

Lets talk about why i mention ""faith"".

Having faith makes you believe in yourself'

When you have a negative attitude your of course going to have a negative action.

But in many religions if you have faith everything is possible.

This is why i compare these two words, that are very similar to each other.

So if you have ""Faith"" you must have a possitive attitude.

Having a positive attitude can help you out emotionaly too.

If your possitive at all times no matter what people say about you it wont hurt you as bad.

The reason i belive it wont hurt you as bad is because, you would believe in your self and wont let other negative attitude ruin yours.

For example, if i say to myself ""Man i alredy know i aint going to pass this test , i aint even going to try"".

Oviosly im going to fail because, having a negative energy reflects not to even try.

So if you want to sucess in life like i do, you should try to change your attitude and try been positive at all times.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
69FD256DCE38,"There is a quote about success contsists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. people have different opinion about failure, some say failure is the worst thing that can happen to you, and it makes you not want to try your best on something . however in my opinion, I thing failure is the best thing that can happened to us humans because. it gives us the the corrage to try something over and over until you gat it, it makes us humans learn from our mistakes, and it gives us the strenth

First failure gives us the corrage to try something over and over until you gat it because, I have fail before when I was trying out for the school soccer team, I work so hard for it I go to training everytime, and be there on time but i did not made the team I was so sad that i did not made the team but it give me the corrage to try more and more.

Second failure makes us humans learn from our mistakes. we humans are not parfect we all make mistake and learn for it. it like me I am a teenager who cant speak english everwell, whenever I spoke to someone my age thay kept on making fun of me, but I never give up on myseif I know that if I learn from my mistakes I will be better at speaking english.

Finally failure make us stronger. in life in other to get what we want we have to go throught failure it teach us to be strong and to nevergive up on yourseif. everyone go through failure for example president Donold Trump in other to be a president he has to go through som failure.

In conclusion failure is the best thing that can happend to us humans. it teach us to be strong in anything that we want and to learn from our mistakes. failure play a enthusiasm in our lives that makes the world a better place.         ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
2B3CB2A6D7D0,"Did you know that business that partnerships the schools helps the students to know what they want to do in life. When students go to business trip with the school

They are discovering where they want to work in the future. This allow students explore where they want to work. If they wanted to work at a place that they dream of working then they are going to explore the things where they wanted to work at. I would like to explore more real estate because

I want to flip flop houses so I want to learn more about this and I want the manager of the business pick us so we can learn how those a work.

One reason, That you should pick us is how do you know if the house is good to flip and know if you going to make more money. People think that you should look in area that are growing and get house that are bad and flip the house so you can sell it for more and get more money then you payed the house and the things that made the house better.

Second reason, the manager should pick our class so we can learn How does the business work like how many house do you need to buy so that the work proceed and process. I heard that people buy three house each 6 mouth so they can work on it because some houses take one month and other houses take 4 month. Then you got to wait for the houses to sell that can take weeks or even months to sell the house to get the money.

third reason, That the manager should pick us that we want to know that if the wait of getting the money is worth it by waiting to the house to can be ready and wait so the house can get sold. People I heard that money that you wait six mouth is worth it because the money that the person get back is like more twenty thousand more on the house that you can buy a better house in a better place or keep some money. The money that you get can make a lot.

That why the manager of the real state business should pick us to visit and learn about the work because students want to learn more about this job and have question more so in the future that students will know about more then the job and maybe in there life working in this area so they can make money to. In conclusion schools should have more partnership companies that students can visit and learn about the work and that can help the students pick there job . and that can help students know what they want to do in life and proceed there dream of working and knowing what to do.              ",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
FF8BAC351714,"I disagree with the students attend classes form home or vidoe conferencing the reason why i diagree with this online thing is that one of are student will not get on, they will fall asleep and they will not do there work the by them doin gthis alot of kids can fail reason why i say this things because i know students im am one; that me explain to you why I say this .

The frist reason why I said students will not get on because they will be like i get on next time and keep on saying in till they think it not useful at all then they will not get on and just go outside and play with there friends or sometimes there Mom or Dad have to keep telling to get on and they migth not listen to them or just get on there ps4 or phone .

Number two reason is that they can fall asleep while on it and the teacher cant do nothing about it but if we was at class a real class they can tell us to get up and make sure we doing what we suppost to do by going to class that can make the teacher work way more easy for them.

Last reason but not least is that they will not do there work they will get on but how can you know they the one doing it they can get someone eles that they know or just pay them to do it for them teen are bad but smart. However other migth say the students attend classes form home is the best thing they can do because they dont need to do all that monring things they can just open the laptop and join there teacher form the web cam and learn but other cant learn like that they need someone rigth next to them so the students can understand more better. That why I diagree with this students attend schools from home .",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
A28940CA5863,"Do you think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Personally, I would rather go to my house, and eat spaghetti because people need to realize of what career they would want to choose if they would want to succeed in the future. Few of my friends want to become a doctor, and some of my other friends would want to become a mechanic. Careers are like longtime thinking, for people would want to change their minds, and choose another career that is more suitable for them to learn in college. The reason why I choose this topic, for people need time, impression, and support for their careers.

People always need time to think of what career that they would want to choose, so they can enjoy their careers, and have better reputation in their work. Some teachers think it is a better idea to think of a career in high school, yet some students disagree with the teachers. Students in high school need to understand that if they don't like the career that they choose, they are more likely to fail than succeeding than others in their careers. Bunch of students agree that having to think about career in high school is a good thing; however, a lot of students disagree that we should have more time to think about careers at a older age. These are the reasons why I think young people should have more time to think of what career that they would want to have, so they can gain more confidence in the future.

Impression is also important, for it helps people gain morale if they would want to think of a career. Some students think having impression won't help you, yet some students do agree that having impression would help pressure them to find a career. Generic_Name went to college with impression, so she had the confidence of choosing what career that she would like to choose at a older age. Impression isn't for everybody, nor it is for some students who need of help finding a career in high school or college. Impression would help some students in high school, but some teachers do think it would also help them in college. Personally, I would need impression if I would wanna go to college.

Support is also good too, for people who aren't confident of choosing what career they want to learn about, so they would ask their friends, or even family members for help and support. Support is a main key to success; however, few of my friends disagree with me. The reason why they don't believe in support, for they found careers easier without receiving help in college, or even in high school. People also need to support young kids that having a career is a longtime changing, so they would have to think about it in college, and not in high school. Generic_Name wanted to become a doctor, yet she didn't do well, so she gotten support to look for another career in college. The reason why I like support, for I wouldn't want to brainstorm careers by myself.

The thing about young people is that thinking about careers in high school should have more time to think, for it is always important of what career they would want to choose. I do agree that some students should brainstorm about their careers in high school; however, I am not very sure if they would like to learn a lot about whatever career they have committed to. Even people do want to commit to a career at a young age they would still need to know what to do to learn in college. Thinking about a career isn't easy, yet some students don't take it seriously of what career that they are committed to. These are all the reasons why I think we should have time, impression, and support. We should commit to a career at a older age, not at a younger age.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
983D4402B74F,"Not everyone in the world is able to accomplish their dream. There are so many obstacles that make a dream impossible and a lot of important things to give up in order to reach it. The British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" I agree with Winston Churchill because I also believe that failure, hope, and enthusiasm are the three keys to success in life.

First, all the things have two sides. the bad side and the good one, not everyone can see this two sides because of two simple reason. The first reason is because they do not try hard enough to find a solution. The second reason is because they loss their hope. Failure has two side but they are hard to see. The bad side of failure is that you did not reach that goal in your first or second try and you give up everything. The good side is that you fail but you learn a little bit on the way and that the next time you will be more close to reach that lovely goal.

Second, some things that i have learn from family, friends, and own experiences is that hope is the most powerful thing in the world. Most people tempt to lose their hope when they fail, while for others that maintain it can be more able to success. When I try something and I fail I always ask a question to my self. The question is What would I be without hope? When i answer that question I feel that all my strength and enthusiasm that I need for reaching that dream come to me.

Lastly,

a person can not reach a goal without been enthusiast. No one in the world would fight for something that is not interested on. Enthusiasm is what give you the strength and hope to keep trying until you success. Enthusiasm can also be lose by a person when they fail so many times. The thing that make people lose their enthusiasm is the time.

In conclusion, in order to be a successful person in life you need to make sure not to lose the three keys. Failure, that help you to gain experience, hope that help you to not give up, and enthusiasm that help you to keep trying. This are the three keys. Next time that you fail just thing about this three keys and you will be able to success in your life.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
363295DC545F,"Although some people say to spend time doing nothing is not a big deal. Because is a way to relax yourself give you a little bit of time, actually never to be idle and manage your time wisely you will be more success.

Spending time not doing things is a good way to relax body refresh our mind. Sometime when you stuck on something when people are facing the probleme,they can't think any idea to solve but take a few seconds break set yourself in a idle mode, poeple might find an another way to solve so idle yourself is not a bad happend.

Idle might change a person when they are use to have a idle time. People might be lazy and tired to doing something. Imagine If everybody have habit on taking a rest and they are use to it. The world might be changed,the world will not progress the economy is going down and when people chasing their goals they will not trying their best, immutable is people used to be have a idle time.

Determine never to be idle is a big step is how much may be done If we are always doing. This will make people have more confident,is a basic element how will you be successful. Keep doing it even you will take a long time to achive. Manage your time in a smart way the more accomplish is the more works you need to do. Even though the goal is not easy to reach don't stop trying. One day you will succeed.

These are the reasons determind never to be idle is important .Its how much we try and how much we receive, idle your time is not going to solve anything for you. Reach your purpose is not a final goal, enjoy the journey while you doing it might receive another products and manage our time in correct ways.        ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
1DFACB5D0C9E,"should music, drama and art classes be a requirement. no they should be a elective classes because elective are easier to take and pass. Some students aren't good at taking music , drama and arts classes. Some students dont want to take classes that is required to them.

Elective classes are really easy. Students will have less stress about worrying that they will fail to meet the requirement to pass their school. when the class become an elective class there will be less home work this will allow students to get an easy credit to pass the class. if this was an requirement class it would be more hard and if the students don't pass the class they will have to repeat it.

Students that are not good at music, drama and art will try their best to pass. but if they fail that means they have to do it over again until they pass it. But as an elective class student don't have to be good in it to pass. But even so the student don't like the classes but they still try to go for the free extra credit.

Requirement classes is a class that students have to take in order to graduate but most of the of the student don't want to take it. Elective classes are suitable for those students because the student that did not want to take it can switch to another class that they are good at. Student that did not want to take the requirement class will skip and don't care about it. Elective class are the best they are not hard as an requirement. Requirement class is all about passing but elective classes are fun learning and less stress to put on for the student.

Requirement classes are hard and not fun at all. Electve class are more fun and easier for the student. thats why music, drama and art should be elective classes.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
ABD38929777A,"I'm disagree with it because cell phone can distortion to students, school may not be allow to use cell in calssroom, and they will lazy to do work.

First, Now a day many students are failing classes because most of the teacher allow to students use cell phone during they are teaching.

If students may allow to use cell phone then they can distortion by study, and their force can be in phone. When we keep use phone then we can't listen what teacher saying. For explain, last year in my histroy class we can allow to use phone so, when go to histroy class I alway usemy phone and i never listen to teacher.

I fail the class and sol because of use cell phone everyday.

School may not be allow to use cell phone in classroom because if school allow to use cell phone in classroom then students may not be able to learn anything.

If students are allow to use cell in school, then when students are doing testing they might be chage to chat on test.

Students can leave study, they gonna force on play phone.

Finally, When students have work in classroom they are so lazy to do it because they are busy to play game or use phone. In school we have lot of work to do, if teacher give us using phone then students might not do it. So, we have work then teacher sholud not give us using phone because lots of students are busy with phone or play game.

While, Many students are distorton by cell phone because they can't force on study. They think teacher give us to use phone so, we don't have to do anything and they don't do homework, classwork and study. That the mind reason school should not allow to use phone, it good sometime to use phone but not when we have work to do.                    ",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
F57B95D17755,"No not good for older and younger students to be in a program. But sometimes older kids become mean and don't care about the younger just care themself to have fun. It's not normal for that to happen and it will feel weird harder stuff for the younger ones don't know and the older kids think it's too easy. There's so much reasons that it shouldn't happen doesnn't feel right.

If it was like in the summer for an activity that would be great because you learn about how the older and younger kids are. The younger kids will want to do childess stuff and the older ones want to just be on there phones and just talk. Sometimes the older ones need to teach the younger ones to be more grown up so they learn about the older ones. The teachers mostly will try to tell the older ones to help the younger ones to be grown up.

So usually they shouldn't create schools like that it will feel completly different because there will be different stuff then real schools with older and older kids and younger and younger kids. The younger ones could sometimes scream and run or goof around a lot and the older ones sometimes will feel annoyed by them. So lot's times I feel like the older ones will feel unconfortable from the little ones. When you grow older you learn what you do now and not like when you were younger.

Most the time you usually want to be friends with people your age not too much of a different age. Sometimes it can happen to be friends with someone older or younger but most times your age. Always try to be yourself and not change your additude. Sometimes the older kids will need to try make the little kids happy by talking with them and have fun with them. But not for to long you should because it will get boring doing it for a long time. When u finshis they will sometimes try bothering you because they liked what you did but just leave them alone after.

These are examples why sometimes you should or shouldn't allow those schools with older and younger students. After when you grow older you the one teaching the new kids to be grown up. Try remeber the times you were little and what the older kids did to you do that with others. But there could be lot's of times younger ones a different and you were that way 8 years ago. Help everyone be a grown up kid and still think not too much they should add schools with older and younger kids.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
FE6EC11C8877,"Should you relied on yourself or other about life's important matters?

Its important that people relied on their own instincts and ideas because if we have people picking chooses for others we would have no power on what we want, for example people who learn from them self are more active and confidant then the ones that have to learn from other, and wait for instructions. I belieave that people should relied on them selfs for two reasons. My first reason is that every one makes mistakes, and thats were we learn to not do them again. Infact when you make mistakes is better because you get to try again and you get to do it even better, there for to succesed in life you will have to fall, and get back up in to your feet to try again and do it better. My second reason is that if you let others choose for you, you will never learn to deal with hard thinking situations. Also you get to learn more about your self and you get to do stuff your own way and you also learn to love your self from your mistakes. I think that every person should make there own choose when it comes to hard momemts like when my grandma die my parent pick what we was going to do with her, and she didnt go ask some one what to do, no she knew what to do from expiriens of my grate grandma, and thats why some problems have to be dealt by your self. In conclusion its important that people learn to think and do things own there own so they wont spend money on others telling them what to do, and also not relied on somes help from others, some chooses are hard and some are easy but every choose you make, makes you up and shows who you really are. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
032EA4B76BF5,"Some people may think that positive attitude is not the key to success in life, but I disagree with them because I feel like now days are not the same like it used to be, and I think its a big issue that we have today in our world.

People just wanna finish their jobs very fast, and they wanna get where their going really fast,

and that leads to not have a good attitude with others, one of the first reasons is you can get to your dream job, for example if your positive with others they can like you or offer you a deal that's going to change your life for ever, and they may say that your a great person, and they might offer you to come and work in their company or work in a really great passion.

Another reason is you can make someones day or make them happy, for example their having a really bad day and you come and talk to them with a positive attitude, and maybe your going to make them really happy and also that can effect on others if you make them happy they can make others people happy also.

One last reason is Communication, for example by having a positive attitude you can communicate with others, and you can have a good relationship with them and maybe be really good friends.

In conclusion for all theses reasons i think positive attitude is the key to your success.              ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
D23D870D5333,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books,shop,and play games without speaking to another persons .Has the limitation of human contact due to the technology has positive or negative effects on people's lives? I think this is negative, because the rate of oversize people will grow. People shouldn't spend most of there time on devices or inside. They should go out in the real world and see how things are. How nice people are to them .

First, Being stuck in the house isnt fun because you won't meet new people or reconnect with people from your old school or meet the love of your life .Things like this is what makes people kill their self because they dont have fun. They also meet people online and let what the people online think of them. that effects a lot of peoples lives.

Then, teens would be on video games all day rather than go out and do something active. That will increase oversize teens and adults in America. Technology can take over someones life they can be hooked to it. That its self harms the brain all types of ways.

Although, people are getting there things done without having to go and talk to other people. They can lose a lot of vitamin D. That can cause to death and in that way we would have a lot of deaths. and our population will decrease because of technology.

In Conclusion, what the people are doing isn't right technology shouldn't keep us away from each other. we as people should stand up for each other. we should get out more and have a community picnic and be with each other. Not away in our houses getting what u want from online and letting people you haven't meet and hadn't meet you determine who or what u are let your friends say what they thing and u tell yourself who and what you are.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
7907952E04B8,"A lot of people accomplish more if they are always doing something and others ask if inactivity also serve as a purpose. There is a lot of people doing a lot of activities everyday and some others doing nothing than just watch TV. Each human person in the world have a purpose , goal to get in a future and is something that we really want to have in our life. Unluckily purposes don't come by itself as a miracle. Every person has a different purpose,some purposes are complicated to reach,and there's also some less complicated but doesn't make any difference because every person decides and picks what are their purposes and whether if they give up or they do anything to reach them. Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"".

Some person's give up easily, they think is impossible, hard, complicated, but basically what they are doing is waste their capacity to make something and improve themselves, just because someone doesn't trust in our capacity means we have to stop doing what we like and quit . It won't be perfect at the first try , it may not be the same thing that we were expecting, but the effort you put is what it counts. Quit is the easy way to give up , and that is they way to demonstrate weakness the people that didn't trust in us would laugh and spread the rumors of our fail. We won't feel good after that and we'll feel embarrass of ourselves , we wouldn't be capable of going out with our mind thinking in what other people is thinking . If we fall down we need to stand up again , dropping some tears and being in bed all day won't help , think in what other people might think about us won't do anything than just make us feel even more weak. What we can really do is confront the reality , understand our mistakes try to solve them ,try to get better by the time . No one is perfect we might see people getting their purposes easily and we can't understand how , what we don't know is the reality of how the live by the way we don't need to be comparing our live with others life .

A girl from school had extra weight and she didn't played any sports , she was lazy to walk and all her friends were skinny and she felt bad about herself and very ashamed of her body she tried to lose weight but slowly she was quitting ,she was crying a lot and feeling weird and unwanted by everyone , some students started to judge her and no one wanted be her friend and they were bullying her . A lot of girls bother her, and others saw her crying and hurt and they didn't stop them. Among the time the girl started to eat healthier and started to walk everyday she was adding one more lap ,then she started to jug and after run . Her bones and body develop she got skinnier and after she got back to school everyone got impressed .Now she was more confident and it wasn't easy , it took time , tears , sacrifices but she did it . This is a experience that taught me to see different the things , to see how we can do it

, if we want , if we put a lot of effort and we are patient to see the changes. After everything we'll feel great and proud of what we've done.

It is hard to try without being scared , without doubt .Believe in our capacities is something that we stopped doing , and say I can't became more common and we hear that everyday. We don't do things we want to do because of our insecurities and our laziness when there is a lot of people dying to have an opportunity. Always is better to try than just watch .Everyone has their daily things to do , some people work , others study , others do both or more things and they don't have time for them. It is necessary to take our time to make this things possible, it is necessary to have clearly our mind and see what are we capable to do and how far we can go . We can't limit ourselves with good stuff we need to spend time and learn new things , experience , teach other people and share our experiences and recommend and help others to never quit. Show others trust and appreciation for everything they get , be happy for them and give them more motivation.

Generic_Name an English teacher said ""People just see the defect in other person's life without seeing in their person's first"" . This is so truth , we don't see in ourselves first , we spend more time critizating and wishing bad luck to those making their purposes , feeling jealous of them because they could do it and we could't because we didn't want to put effort and time so we'd rather give up and do nothing than just complain about it and make excuses .That is not a reason , choosing a goal or purpose is something we need take it seriously because if you take it like a game then we are wasting your time , and the time of those person's helping us and going through all our steps , in our mentality has to be all positive .Being more strong than our bad thoughts feel proud of us,because we are doing something that others can't do. We are trying we aren't being like the rest and that make us unique ans specials, show to whoever said we could't do it or make it how wrong they were and they judge us before knowing our capacities. Demonstrate the people that was supporting us what we did to make them proud and we know how good we are going to feel that day. We don't need to take care of what others say, they might give us advises but we are the only ones deciding our actions.

What the quote means is how we make bad decisions an sometimes we just do what others do,or we just quit to something we were trying to do and it was hard so we drop off that and now we don't do anything else than watch others happy for getting their purpose. At the beginning of every subject we want to experience by doing it ,is hard , we got anxiety, nervous,sad,happy. It is so much emotions going on and we can't describe the feeling after we went through all that and we finally did it,we got our purpose we make it and the feeling of victory is inexplicable,we need more positivism in us.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
E8445DB18983,"Scientist Albert Eisnste sad "" imagination is more important than knowledge "" I disagree with the statement.

I disagree imagination is more important that knowledge.

I disagree because, I think knowledge it's more important because, you have to knowledge after you imagine because, I think knowledge it'a more important because you have to knowledge. The situation to think really good if you dont due you can not think what it's gonna happen.

because if you only imagine you don't gonna knowledge good because, if you only imajinate and say the words after you knowledge the words you what to says. and if you knowledge first after think you can be able to due son tings.

If you gonna to due a story if you only imagine you can not be able to due because you have to Knowles the situation first after you think because son times you can get good imagination and you have to knowledge.

like for example if don't knowledge you don't gonna now were put tings to knowledge the situation were you gonna put things and the ca n be better.

I don't no what scientists Albert Einstein think and i gonna now what he thinks because, people have different opinion like how it's more better to they can use, and because persons have different ideas,like me i think then knowledge it's more important, then imagination but others people they can think it'snot because for people to see things it's different, because if the person am gonna write the story am gonna use the knowledge to knowledge, the situation better and make good story.

The knowledge it's like then a group because you have to search or knowledge to now what you gonna due because, if you only have in a imagination to what you gonna due that can work, like when you go to your job and you have to knowledge,what you gonna due for the day.

when you go to school and you go to science if you have to examine the a plant you have to knowledge the plant to now were you can star to examine the plant.

when you due sometimes you have to knowledge the situation,like for example,when a person quilled to another person, the police they have to knowledge,the scene and who was the criminal and knowledge the situation how died and who was .

some people think the imagination it's was first and it's more important would, I think the people see for different forms to due would a think some people it's right because, I see for different forms like when you imajinate it's like when you imajinate the things would you can have a picture in your minds like you can see pictures like were you what to put things.

but you can have im imajine in your mied but you have to knowledge first because i think if you knowleged because i feel more necesary to knowleged beause when you knowledged you can feel it's more easy or if you look like the pictures way it's more easy, because you see the things more specific en your miend.

it's alot ways to you can see things because for people some people looks diferets to others you can see more better in you way if you don't get.

i think people it's look things different ways and other they look like the same but the most important it's the way you see the tings for you.",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
AF71C89CD199,I think this pogram should be in every school beacuse this could help the younger students to learn more about the school. And the older students can the younger students and they can show them which room they have to go. And its better this way beacuse the older students knows more things about the school then the younger students do. And this could help the younger students learn more about the school. This will make the students feel about their seld beacuse they were helping other younger students. Now the srudents feel more comfortable beacuse they got helped from the other students from the other students so now the younger students feel way happier beacuse they know where to go. And if this was not a thing students will be all sad and fustrated beacuse they will be all lost beacuse they new to the school and wont have no one to help them. The younger students going to be really sad beacuse they wouldnt know what to do and what class they have to go. So this a reason of why every older students should help new kids at the school or any younger students. And the younger students gonna learn from the older students and this pogram can help the younger students get their grades up beacuse older students can help them do they work and get their grades up,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
30DDC17D2986,"First impressions are very important but could they be changed?. Yes, yes they could be changed because first impressions don't justify who you are as a person and some people don't act the same when you first meet them. However some people are really judgmental about first impressions and could block off any type of relationship they had with you being job related, maybe girlfriend or boyfriend, and friends.

First impressions are serious which drives a lot of people insane. Because they don't know how the people are going to react to them but, its okay that doesn't define who you are as a person. A great tip of advice is being able to read a room that means how people are acting in certain time and place. Like whats the vibe and mood if you should be more relaxed, goofy,serious etc. If you can read a room first impressions will become a lot easier because you will know how to act.

But that's not the only way to have a good first impression most people dont act the same say on the first date,its probably going to be awkward and silent because you dont know how to act verses seeing someone for the 5th time. You know what to say, you know how to have an okay conversation. But dates arent the only situations that first impressions fall into. Jobs, jobs are the biggest make or break for first impressions from experience you can't be nervous and just be real you dont have to act differently. If your job takes you for what you have then its a great job.

However first impressions are very very judgmental. Some people take first impressions over anything because its the first glimpse they have of you and how you act as a person. And if they dont like you won't give you a job or another date depending on the situation. And there is nothing you can do about it. not even getting the chance to change the first impression. So is it hard to change a first impression yes,but its not impossible.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
49F54A35F6F3,"Some people say that students are better off attending classes online, mostly because they can feel a sense of comfort and no worries of school tardiness. I say that it's better to not attend distant classes and attend them from the school itself.

Students are better off attending classes from the actual school because students tend to have more concentration while actually attending the class. When attending the class from home, students will be more concentrated on their home atmosphere, or what happens at home. Concentrating onto something usually comes from the atmosphere you are in. Attend your classes are better and more effective when the person is alerted or more attentive to their classes or courses.

Moreover, students will develop social communication when interacting with other students. Social communication is important because not only will you get to know the other person's side of knowledge, but you can get experience from the other person that could benefit or impact your way of making desicions in your life. Students will be more of an introvert if attend classes from home or distant classes. In this way, students will definitely develop working skills when they start having a job as an older person.

However, even if they won't be able to go through or worry about tardiness if taking distant classes, going to school knowing that there is tardiness, will prepare them for the future when running to work and making it on time. Making to school or work on time depends on how the individual is smart enough to manage their own time wisely.

In conclusion, the more preferable method for students is coming to school or the class session wherever it's taking place. In this way, students develop better communication, better concentration and develop time management. Students will become better individuals. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
CDDFBBACC7B6,"I think that people find community parks,state parks enjoyable. Because everyone can go to them, family time and also if your stress you can go there.

My first reason why i think that community parks or state parks are the best is because everyone can go to them. You and your friends can go and just have a blast. There's so much stuff to do like play sports with other people .You can even meet new people that you don't even know. Because not everyone that is there your gonna know because everyone can go. For example the Generic_City park that place is so fun you can play sports with you family and buy stuff like food,clothes and other stuff.

my second reason is that you can have family time. Family time is so important to me because your family is always going to be there for you and the park is a great place to spent time with them. You can meet up with your family at the park. And also you can have a small little birthday party and just have fun there with your family. If you have little sibling they are going to love it because there's a park and kids love the park and the adults can be talking like your aunt with your mom. And also i fell like being outside with your family is better because you just get to look at the trees and nature instead of being inside.

my last reason is if your stress, i been stress before and i feel like the best places to go are the parks because you just can forget about everything and just draw or write. And if your stress you can do so much things like yoga and after cumming things. The park can also help people in different ways like they can be relaxing .And also if your going throw something i feel like being outside is the best thing because if your inside your only going to get worse. So the park can help in different ways like stress.

In conclusion the reasons why the community parks or the state parks are enjoyable or people might find them enjoyable is because everyone can go to them, family time and If your stress. And you can do more fun stuff not just this. I love to go to the community parks because i get to spent time together with my family and we just have a good time. And also it helps me in so many ways going to the park like if i stress or just having a bad day. That's why i feel like community parks are enjoyable and a great place to go and just have fun the next time you go. Do you like community parks?           ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D06C0F3D5553,"People love doing their favorites things where it will keep them safe and healthy. Activity means when you are doing something like playing sport, going outside, or participating in some type of competitions. There a lot of activities, you can choose and participate in it. My favorite activity is playing with my friends at national parks. The choice, I chose is playing with my friends at national parks because it keeps you healthy and unstressed.

To start, one reason I chose is that playing outside keeps you healthy. For example, I had one friend like some years ago, but now we don't talk because we kind a faded, so we used to play a lot. One time my health was getting bad because I stayed at home all the time and doing nothing then I talked to my parents about my health and they said that I should play outside with my friends, go somewhere special where you haven't been. Then, I went to the parks and played there tag, played hide and seek, and played soccer. I had fun and after some months, my health got better and I just continued playing those 3 games. It's important because nobody really wants their body to have some problems and then they regret, so that's why you should go outside and play with your friends.

In addition, other reason, I chose is that playing outside doesn't give you a stress. For example, in 2016, I had this big stress about school and about homework and what we do in classroom. I just couldn't focus on my studies and got like bad scores on the test. Then I tried to find the way to get out of the stress and it said that you should go outside, do activities with your friends that you like. I asked my mom about this and she said yes to me then I started to go outside with my friends everyday and I was kept forgetting about my school and homework which was good for me. I didn't have any stress after in 2016. it's important to be not stressed because then it affects on your study and also it affects your health, so that's the other reason, you should go out and hang out with your family and friends.

In conclusion, playing outside helps you not stressed out and keeps you very healthy. As a result pf these reasons will help you in your life and honestly these two reasons are actually reliable, you just have to follow them and there you go, your life will be amazing. Playing outside and doing more activities help you a lot and it doesn't give you any bad day or anything like obviously you don't want any and bad situation to be in your life, so follow them.           ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
D3A5813D8C06,"Most employers are looking for expecific characteristics in a potential employee. I writing this card for you Mr, Generic_Name

I totally agree with you are excellent boss ,however, in you store for the present, and future you need good employees. I dont have excellent experience for this work, but Im wonderful cadidate for developing, I learning stremately really fast, and have the skills for this wonderful work. For take this position I always remember there are three most importantly reason there are time, habits and good attitude for customers, and how to socialize with everybody. Im honest person and never give up when I have clear odjectives, and I demostrated you Dear Mr Generic_Name my abilities.

The firstly reason is the time and dinamic is very beneficial for our mind and our spirit. Every single day need to respect our horario for developing our personal work for perceverance we have all the posibilities on our life to build our own character. We need keep moving forward the coriosity keeps leading us new paths and more oportunities in work, and personal lives.

The secondly reason is habits I think everybody have different actions how organize, and develop more suphisticated method of work this is important, for example, when customers go to the restaurant on weekend the tables, and flour everything need to stay crystal clear. The character we learning in home we need to put in practice in our work. Aiming high expectetions and setting big characters to succeed the consistency and perseverance.

The thirdly reason is attitude for developing our work need to stay with people with excellent energy for charger our mind, and everybody demostrated the costumers we are the store with stremaly potential, and very respectful, and kind workers. We have the controlling of store and wonderful attention,and broadly with easy work and constant positivity will make them too soft to compete in the work with struggle attitude have the custumers. In will demostrated our method how interact and socialize with people.

Dear, Mr Generic_Name, I writing this letter for you take cosiderancy. Im good worker and have the skills for this store I promisse you put in practice my specific reason, for example, time, habits and attitude all this things considered it seems reasonable to implement in the work. The are important how to communicate and demostrate responsible in my work and developing, and please take consider my personal opinion thank you.  ",2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
D03CE04CF47C,"""People believe in praising a student work to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the student best effort"". First, you have to make respect your self, because if you don't do that change, people never is going to respect you and that is something you have to achieve. Second, making the best effort is very good in the today society probability not every one cares about how much you work some people just doesn't see that way. Third, another way that you can make your self respect is acting with a good behavior that's what people see on a person.

To be self-confident. In order to learn students needs to put more attention in class and on what they're doing. First, learning doesn't have anything to do with self-confident, because learn and self-confident are two different things. Second, if you trying to make your self respect you have to start respecting others first, and if you respect then they are going to respect you. Third, I believe that true self-esteem come from achievement, because you earned not is just there for you that is something you have to earn.

In conclusion, self-esteem is not something easy to have you have to work harder to earned that privilege, I don't think school's have something to do with self-esteem or self-confident, but that's something you have to work to get it. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
FA9EEE4BF0AD,"In some societies, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. They want to make sure you have the classes you need in order to acheive your career . The career that you will be giving to the counsouler will be befetional. After the graduation you will easily take the classes that you wanted.

firstly, I think it is good idea to identify your career before entering to high school. When you submitting your application to the high school, they will look at the classes that you need to graduate. If you plan your career from a young age, you will achieve your career very strong and easily. In order to have a successful life you need a good career. The plan which you Will be thinking , or taking will show a how organize you are.

secondly,Try to talk with someone who have experiences in this types of problems. When you talk to someone they will be giving you some advises to help you during your high school time. For example: When you want to take the classes you need to take , or you have to take, but they give you useless classes you do not need for graduation. If you want to go to a law school, then you need to take social study ,or government but when you do not commit your plan of career they will give some useless classes like Photography, Independent living and Art which you do not need for law school.

Thirdly,It is very important to have a good education in this day and age. You do not need to waste time of your life in classes you do not need. We have to try our best to be organized. You have to think about your future ,and consciousness that will be coming to you. There is multiple ways to began your career, solve problems , and finally acheive your career.

In conclusion, you need to have an idea or a career about what do you want be in future. You need to commit or tell your teacher about what do you need in order to graduate from high school. We need to put effort to acheive something that can make us happy and our family. Try our best to solve any problems we have in a good way or talk to someone. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
C5DE10EA489B,"Having a positive attitude you can find the key to success in your life because, having a positive attitude can influence your life a lot and for a good reason. As I know positive attitude is the key to success in life.

In many ways attitude can help to success in your life. for example with a positive attitude people can be more secure in their life's. They can make a good decisions at work or somewhere else. Also they can be more friendly with other people. Some people can be more secure in their life's with a positive attitude.

Positive attitude can help them in school. For example students with a good attitude can have a good behavior in school, they can obey directions from the teachers and respect their classmates. Students can have a good grades in their classes. Also students can stay after school for homework or for help their friends with their assessments. Students with a good attitude can influence in school for a good thing and in that way can influence other students to have a good attitude.

While some other people think with a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Other argue that it's not always being positive. There are several ideas that can improve this thoughts as positive attitude not influence in success in life. It's not always being positive.

For example sometimes some people need to have a bad attitude because other people are mean. Sometimes some people has a bad attitude because they have problems with their families. sometimes students have a bad attitude because they receive bullying in school. Some people has a bad attitude for the action of other people and that affect them.

I think that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. People can decide a good decisions and that can me them successful in their life. Also they can socialize better with other people. In conclusion having a positive attitude people can be more creative with their ideas, they can think better their decisions and also can be more socialize with other people and that make them better persons in life.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
4E0FDE02216A,"Technology has had such positive impact in the world. Know a days people dont have to do much if they want to food all they have to do is take out there phones, some people find a problem with that and i just cant understand why. If something is making a impact on your life making a lot of things easier to do and have fun while you doing it. Back in the day if I ever wanted food i would have to get on my phone call a place and wait for it to driver, know I can order what ever i wanted and can track the driver to see where there at.

Sometimes technology doesnt help in everyday things. It is very important tho that people still know how to do things without technology to because it will come in handy sometimes. Older people have a such a bad thing for technology because they think, every kid is brain washed and just stays on it all the time. Kids these days kinda know how to do both like its not every day i get to type on a computer I'm usually just writing stuff on paper.

Technology has come a very long way. It has its perks and its down side,but we can all agree that its made life easier. Sometimes people abuse it and its ok because you can still live with out technology.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
0ACB3F8B9DF8,"I think it does keep them out of trouble it protects them. When teenagers are out in the street its could be because they are doing something bad you never know what they could be doing after 10pm or midnight. I never hangout by myself at that hour unless im with my parents or at a family party, there is no point to be out late at night but many people dont care and be out late at night many teenagers dont obey the laws.

Its important to have curfews, it keeps teenager from being out at night. In the weekend teenagers may hangout late with a friend or cousin but it really depends on how strict the parent is. I have really strict parents they won't let me out at night, unless, they are with me. its important to make new laws to protect the envionment and the teenagers as well teenagers now a days think they can do whatever they want. 10pm is kind of late its close to midnight maybe during the weekends teenagers could hang out after midnight but during the weekdays after 10pm would be against the laws it really depends what they are doing like are they driving in a car or walking its scary to be out at night by yourself.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
D9FB5E411A4F,"I'm disagree with this statement, that first impression are almost impossible to change,there are so many examples, but some of my examples are these, for example:

First, in my case if I see a beautiful girl, I start getting in love of that girl and having good impression about her, but may be I see something wrong that i don't like of her, I start changing my good impression that i had of her.

Second, when somebody watch YouTube videos, then that person person watch a publicity about the new amazing iPhone 11, he has good impression about the amazing iPhone 11, but when he buys the iPhone, he looks that the battery is not that good as he thought, so he change his opinion.

Third when I go to fancy restaurants, I see a lot of delicious food coming throw the tables, I have good impression and expectation about the restaurant, and I think that the food is delicious, but when I try to eat one of those plates, the food was disgusting and it didn't taste that delicious as it looks,that's because my impression change totally.

In conclusion I think that first impressions are possible to change, not just me it could be case of people that I don't even know, people that I know, and me.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
9B15B90564A3,"I think that they should not do a homework club because what if students don't got time for that. A other reason would be is that many students don't do their homework nowdays so it was just be a waste time for the teachers unless they are getting paid extra for staying after school now thats a differnt story. A other reason is what if none of the students stayed after school the school would have to be sure if students would a tend this homework club. Students should be able to do thier homework on there own to be honest so that way they learn more cause maybe the teacher might be giving the students the answers and that's just not right! My other reason why they shouldn't do the homework club is what if most teachers don't give out homework like i don't get a lot of homework but maybe somone else wouldn't get homework. Would any teachers parpicate in the homework club, do they know that teachers would argee on doing this club? How long would this homework club be a hour or 30 minutes at what would it end because students have stuff to do out of school. Do pranets know about this club would they let their childiren stay after schook is a way for them to get home if anyone can't pick the student up?? Would this homework club interfir with any other after school clubs or what if students already do a club and they need help with homework but they can't go to the homework club because they have to go to the club they do. Does the whole school want to do this or just some students cause not this club would be worthless. In conlusion i think that they should not do the homework club.",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
04FA62C5F269,"The positive attitude is the key to success in life?. Experiments support the idea that a positive attitude help in life, because the people thing positive. Most part of the poblation is happy because they success in life and catch up all the goals. A high percentage of poblation get stuck in their preoccupations and they can't see the light of the sun; they think that life hate them. The poblation should take a positive attitude because is the key to success in life, and the people feel free of stress and preoccupation.

The scientist studies show us that a positive attitude help in life. A bunch part universities pass a lot of time doing research for understand the human mind and their attitudes. If you watch the news, news paper or internet they share with you all the discovery, of course that the information is shared with the authorization of the universities. The people think when universities discover something huge or important of the human body is a big step for a man, because a human body in a secret box.

The poblation is happy because they success in life. The major part of poblation think that when you have a positive mind the stress is lower and the output is higher. The brain probably is not a huge muscle but, if you use to a positive form all your body respond because all your body is connected with your brain. For this reason people give you this tip for a good style of live and a good success to.

On other hand a high percent get stuck in life. These part of poblation is the minimum part that say that life is hard and not every thing is easy because you need put afford. Even if you have a positive attitude they say that life sucks and is hard get the thing that you need or dream. But for this people is; more hard you tried to get a positive attitude it's impossible, sometimes you fall through in life and then you give up and dont tries more.

Here is a example of positive attitude: When you have a test and you are so nervous, but you think on you mind that you can do it because you're totally sure that you remember the classes and the topics that you teacher teach in class. With a positive attitude you can do a lot of thing for most difficult that it's look. For this reason the human brain is totally amazing bacause you discover a lot of capacity for doing things that you think that you can't do it.

In short, if you want success in life think positive for most difficult that show up you can do it. The human body have a big capacity for doing change to their self, and if you thing negative is time that you change your mind and start thinking positive. Also if you think more positive than negative you health get better you must have a healthy mind and body, also when you talk with other person you can transmit your positive environment or they can feeling easily, so be positive.            ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
BE1752DCF09C,"Some students take online classes they think is good to take more classes than in classroom.

However, when they need to turn the work and they are stuck in problem they can not find teacher to help them, or the device has broken, so students they can not turn the work.

Although some people think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, it is actually true that students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because there are no teacher for help them and some students they do not have internet at home.

When the students find a problem they will need teacher for help them to turn the work before the deadline.

However, if there are no teacher for helps them, then students will can not turn the work on time and students will get bad grade.

As result, one student is takes class online, in one day he find problem that he can not understand it and there are no teacher for help him, then he get bad grade because he can not understand the problem to turn the work on time.

So, if the students take the classes in classroom they will turn the work on time because there are teacher in classroom.

Therefore, students need teacher for solve the problem that the students was stuck on it to turn the work.

Some student they do not have internet at home or they do not have good internet to do the work.

However. some students when they do the work they can not submit it before time end because they do not have good internet.

As result, one student he live in area that they do not have good internet, so when he want to submit the work the network does not working and then he get bad score because he did not submit the work.

So, if the students take the classes in classroom they do not need internet to submit the work.

Therefore, students they do not need internet to submit the work in classroom.

To conclude, students will benefit from taking the classes in classroom to get good grade, understand the lesson and learn form lessons to help them in life time.

Therefore, classroom was benefit more than take the classes online because students will find teacher to help them and they do not need internet to turn the work. ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,4.0
E3096B04916A,"Nowadays many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences. There is a debate if school should or should not control students involvement in extracurricular activities. Some people think that students should be more involve in extracurricular activities. However, I think that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families because students will have to much pressure on their shoulders, students will not have enough time to complete school assignments or study, and students have to work.

One reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students will have to much pressure on their shoulders. They will be always worrying about school stuff and the fact that they have to spend a lot of time in extracurricular activities. Spending to much time on extracurricular activities can led students to a depression. They will not get enough rest because of not doing anything else ,but extracurricular activities. Students will get tired that they would not want to do anything else. Students

Another reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students will not have enough time to complete school assignments or study. Students will have little time to study for a test or quiz. Evidently, not having enough time to study can led students to fail their classes. Students will not turn homework or projects on time. Students deserve to have extra time to study.

Final reason, why the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families is that students have to work. Students work to be independent. Students work to pay for their future education. Students work to help their families financial. Students work to achieve their future goals. They work to not have a miserable life in their future. Work will give them more opportunities in their life.

To conclude, for these reasons and so many more is why I think that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families. Students will have a lot of pressure, students will have lack of time to study or finish with their homework, and students got a job. Schools should think a little bit more about student's responsibility and how controlling students involvement extracurricular will impact their life. I know that the education is very important ,but student deserve to make their own decisions. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
A72F4E50ED92,"Working with group is more beneficial because, if a person work in group then he/she can share thought and ideas before start working. Also, it helps student to learn how to communicate with other team member because team work is very important and necessary to learn before students start working professionally.

I believe that working in group will gives student more ideas and everyone in group can share their thoughts with each other. It also helps students to finish their work on time and the most important is that not only one person have burden to do all work. Communication is the key of working in group because, group working is also helps students to learn how to communicate and how people should behave when they work as a team.

Team work and communication is very important to learn before a person go to college or before start working professionally because, if a person does not have ability to work in team then it would be very hard to adjust in college or professional work environment. There are many advantages of working in group for instance, student can plan and share ideas with their group, they can discuss the work with each other before the start work on any project and they can also help each other if any of the group member is confused in anything. The most important part of the any project or any other work is finish on time and if not then no matter how much hard work the person put is just useless. Group working is also save time because everyone work together rather then only one person has burden to complete all work.

To conclude, I just want to mention that I understand that working alone is more beneficial for some people but, working in group is much better more easier than working alone. For instance, working in group gives more ideas from different people's sense of humor and people get chance to work with different people whose thoughts and working style is different.   ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.5
053C05D2EE43,"Why Collage is Important

Acorting to CNN weekly 98.5% of people that go to collage get five times more income then people that dont go to collage. One reason you should go to collage is because you can be more finachely sexesfull another reason why collage is a good chose is because you can learn new things and meet new people.

When you go to collage it really helps you out in the long run you can take a class to teach you how to pay your bells and just help you over all be fineachely stable. Also when you go to collage you learn so many things that you didn't know before it crazy! There are so many classes you can take to help you learn new things and be more intelligent over all.

If your really anti social I would get why your scared to meet new people but it's ok when you meet new people and get out you shell its going to be so exiting. and when you meet new people you can get a new friend that you can study with. This is why people should go to collage and get all of these prows. In conclusion i feel like people that go to clear are going to get a better egucashon and this is why.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
8ED2404D111E,"I am agree with Churchill statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because if i felt the ESL, my feeling is to think positive and there are many students that can't graduate and they put all the energy to pass the classes.

If i felt the ESL, my feeling is to think positive. Many students fail ESL but they never give up. There is not easy to pass ESL, but you have to put all the effort to do it right. Many students think positive and put all the energy to passed.

There are many students that can't graduated and they put all the energy to pass the classes. Some students study to much and never loss the enthusiasm to pass the classes and be graduate's peoples. Students put all the energy to graduate because they want to have a career for in a future to be a better peoples. Many students put all the focus in class to can be graduates.

Other said many peoples fail and fail and don't put the interest to get ahead. Some peoples preferred to work and don't finished the high school because they pass only failing the class and loss the enthusiasm to get ahead. There are many peoples that loss the interest to be better peoples because they are teared to fail each time. I think many peoples that fail they loss the interest to be betters in a future because they are bored to pass to the same thing aver time and preferring to don't get ahead.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
1EEA95D39409,"In some societies student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. ALlthoug, some peoplesay it's bad idea because the student doesn't care any more about his school. Overall,some peoplesay it's good idea to student work in this time because you can save money from know until you be a man.

First,some peolple say it's bad idea. For example,the student when he see the money he will not care any more about school and his grade will go down and maybe he will repeted the year again. Student is bad to work beacause if he have friend they doesn't work and the guy who work see his friend not working and he just work they will have a big problem. However, is bad idea to student work know becausehe will not care any more about his high school.

Second,some people think is good idea to student in high school to work know. For example,when the student work from know and he save money he will come a man to go to colloge he will have a good money to go to the college,For example,student or other gay work's from they younger they can save a good money and when get like a man to get married they can look up the money and get it fast they can buy a house very fast and he doesn't get worried about the money. In adition,is good idea because the student can grow up and he will have a good money.

In conclusion, In some societies,student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. I think is good idea for me but is not a bad idea is good idea beacuse I can save money know and when I beacame a big man and my friend there reach and they want to travel to Generic_City I will say yes I can ,but is bad idea because if myfriend ask me and I don't have money I am can say no.

In societies, some people say to be a younger guy is good to work. Altough some people say is not a ggod idea to work because your can be tired. Overall,some people say it's nice idea to work because you can help your family.

First,some people say is bad idea beacause you will get tired. For example, if you work after school like from 4pm to 12am you will get tired and you leave far away you will have to sleep from 1am to 7am. Then you will have to wake up around 7am and go to school so your not can get to much of sleeping. For example,the work made you tired from 2 week if you was never work at any thing before and if you think you a big guy and you work like at rasturant and you a bad manager maybe he will talk to you in bad away maybe you willfight him. Inadition,is bad to work because you will get tired and youmaybe you will get an a fight with some one and you go to jail.

Second, some people say it's good idea to work because you can help your family. For example,I think the work is good because you help your family when you working like you get paid and you give your dad like 500 hundrend and he can pay some of the thing. Altough,like when you work and get like one thousand dollar from the work you give your dad a good money and he can pay and when you see your dad happy and your gud is happy from you will life all life in a good way. Aresult,I think is good idea because I do samething I work after school from 4pm to 1am so that mean I work for 9 houers and I work every Monday,Wensday,Friday,Starday and

Suday,so I make every 2 weeks one thousand dollar I gave all ma money to my dad. When I see my dad is happy from me I feel so happy because I know that my gud happy from me,my dad open for me account in wells fargo and untill know I am saving money and I have 1 thousand dollar.

In conclusion, In societies, some people say to be a younger guy is good to work. I think is good beacause if you help your dad and your dad is happy from you you can life all your life happy and you became a good dad and youn will have a goodchildren like you I my country there a sentence it's say""how you trade your mom and dad your children beacome trade how you trade your mom and dad"". I know that everyone in these world need to become a dad and mom.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
410E1DE75773,"Do you like to participate in Extracurricular activities?

Extracurricular activities are important and it help with kids to be social and make friends and also. I agree with this decision because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you, improving social life and it kills time.

First and foremost, extracurricular activity are important because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you. when you spent time with the people you fit in with you have the chance to learning more from each other.

Secondly, extracurricular activity are important because it helps you with you social life, which leads to communication skills. communication skill can be something that you can use in the future. A lot of kids do not know how to be social and by joining an Extracurricular activities they can work on improving their skills.

Lastly, Extracurricular activities are important because it kills time. kids spend a lot of time on social media and activities help students to verbal communicate to their friends.

In conclusion, Extracurricular activities are important and it help with kids to be social and make friends and also. I agree with this decision because it is an environment where you can find people that has the same interest as you, improving social life and it kills time.                     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
F610C7BCD9EC,"Technology seems to be becoming more and more important now. As the technology improves year by year, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But people have very different thoughts to this idea, then the problem comes. Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Although some think students should attend classes from home, actually they shouldn't attend classes from home because students might be doing other things during the online class time. And students would get less opportunities to communicate with their friends if they attend classes from home.

Those who believe students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home have their reasons. They think it's much safer for students to take an online class at home. And they also believe it might be better for students to study under a quite environment.

One reason of why students shouldn't attend classes from home is that they might be doing other things during the online class time. An example of this would be my cousin, Generic_Name. He took an online class on the computer few months ago. In the beginning, he was so exciting because it was the first time for him to take a class at home. And his parents were happy to see that because it's difficult to send Generic_Name to school everyday, both of them had work to do. After a few weeks, Generic_Name got his first test grade of online study. It was much lower than the grade he used to get. I asked the reason later, he explained he was playing his cell phone during the class time and didn't pay attention. If he normally took classes in the school, I thought he would get at least a ""B"" in this test. He was smart,just too lazy to study. It's undeniable that online classes brought a lot of convinces to Generic_Name and his family, but it was not the best way to help him to improve his grade.

Another reason of why students shouldn't attend classes from home is that students would get less opportunities to communicate with their friends. An example of this would be my friend, Generic_Name. Although he wasn't like to talk, he had a lot of friends in the school because he was nice to everyone. But everything has changed, since he attended classes from home . We didn't see him for a long time even the class was over. His parents told us he won't come to school anymore because he hated school. If Generic_Name took classes at school like before, he would meet more friends. I can't say if it's a bad choice to attend classes from home, but at least not the way for those students who wasn't like to talk.

In conclusion, although some think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, I believe students shouldn't attend classes from home. They should get more opportunities to communicate with their friends, and enjoy their short, but wonderful school life. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
8087A7C3FCDA,"Each school study more that one hundred students. Many students in high school took not much hard subjects, most of them are art and music . Educational programs alredy have to take courses during the summer, if student don't finish important subjects. Making rool that student finish faster high school, must takes courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective courses, is not a good idea.

Most of our life need time. Hobby, learning, traveling, study in school. Each our doing, need time and study too.

What about thoose who need extra time? What about imigrants, which needs extra time to their homework. Does they will be study good? And, does they will need this program? They need time to finish their homework. Most of them don't have time to study good with four years education program.

Also, what about teachers? Does this subject will be intresting to students to study? Does they will have time to explain students, what they study? Teacher need some time to be ready for topic that give school to student. Also need explane this on lesson and after lesson, if student don't undestand this on the lesson.

Nowbody, don't have extra time.

Of course some of school can make three year of education, but only some of school. Educational program must be have extra time and be intresting to all students. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
5494132B7229,"Is better for students that are entering high school to know what they want to do after they finish high school? some pleople will say yes but some will say no and they are not wrong or right anwer in thise question is depending in your point of view and how fast you want to achive your goal and how good you want to be in your carrer and work.

The people that say yes they say that because when you know what career you want to take before entering high school you wiil choose you classes better depending in your career and what high school you want to attend because come schools have programs that count like college classes, and in high school you have only four years and that is not enough time for you to choose and you will end up in a carrer that you don't like if you choose the wrong one. If you know what you want to be you will cofus better in that career . You can join programs to help you more in your goals and when you know your goals you can achive them better. You also will try to see how can you get a scholarchip for your carrer and what college are better for you, and you will mead people that like the same thing as you and you can make friends. When you join programs some time you can get a scholarchip if you are good. For example my friend want to join the army so he is taking jrotc to help hem do better in the army but my other friend wants to do soccer for college so he is taking advance p. e. to be in shape and he is also in the school team to get a scholarchip, and me I'm taking business classes to help me know more about business marketing because I want to put my own store and Im putting everything of me to do that because that is my goal and i want to do the best of me in that project of my life.

People that say that you don't have to know what you want to be before you get in to high school. They say that you can join different programs and see wich one you like the most and you will choose your career from that decition and you will know what's about because some people choose careers that they don't like them maybe because they dind't know the stuff you have to do or they dind't expect to be like that. Is better to waste four years then wasting your entire live in a career that you don't like. you sholl try to get a scholarchip that way you don't pay for college.

If you dind't have a scholarchip and finish college and you are working in a career that you don't like and you dind't have a sholarchip you are going to be in debt and you are going to pay alot. If you only study for one year in college and you fell like that career is not for you you have to play for that year and is not cheap so you have to choose your career when you are in high school and see what's about before entering and if you like it because if you don't like that career you are going to waste your time. For example I dind't know what career I like before high school so I join jrotc and i dind't like it and a teacher told me to take business classes and I like it so I chose to do business for my career.

In conclution both of them are good options but if you know what you want to be before high school you can see what's that carrer is about in high school and if you dont like it you can change it and the other one you will have more chooses because you will not focus in only one career you will see more oportunitis. Is depending in the choose you make. All of thise dipend in how you are because evryone is defferent and not everyone is going for the same opsion. But for both of them you have to do your best in school to achive your goal and get a schoolarchip that way you dont pay for college. But first of all we have to finish high school and get good greads. and remember that is only one life so do your best and try to live the life that you want and don't let others tell you that you can't do something just belive in your self and that will be a big change adn wen you are in college do your best and do your work and life the live chill.",3.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
42587039161D,"Do you think technology is helpful ? I think Technology allows people to do many stuff and i think its postive because that way if you have to go buy grocery you can just go grocery shopping online something else why i think it is positve is because pepole can also work from home like lets say if you work in a offiice you can use your laptop so that is what i think about this. For example when my sister feels sick or does not have time to go grocery shopping she goes online and she gets her grocery deliverd in front of the house.

Another reason why i think it is postive because lets say if you dont drive and need a ride you can download the app uber and get yourself a ride to go where you would like to go. Another reason is if you need to clothes shopping there is no worries because you can aslo go online and see what you want to buy if you dont have time to go in the store to see what u need you can always go online. something else is you do not have to go to the book store because you can read online and even check out books. you can bisically do everthing online pay your payments so many stuff these are some reasons why i think tecnology has been positve in peoples lives. Also another good reason is my grandma lives in Generic_City and now we can also facetime her from a diffreant country thanks to technology. One reason why it could be negative because if pepole order stuff and dont go out to buy somehting in the store they are not getting enougeh extracise and they are just being really lazy. Another reason why it could be a negative is nowadays pepole dont even talk face to face all they do is either text call stuff like for example when i go over my grandmas house for any holidays my cousins they dont communicate all they do is sit there be on there phones these are some negative reasons.

So these are some reasons why i think technology is positive nowadays. Another good example is when i go to Generic_City or travaling anywhere what my older sister does is she checks us in so that way we dont have to wait in the big line at the airport and we already have our seats picked so that is also a good thing. like i said in the top paragraph in my postion technolgy has been really halpful for pepole. you can really do anything with your phone you can also pay with apple pay if you leave your wallet at home that is something you can do pay with apple pay. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
0022683E9EA5,"When a problem is a change you have to let it do the best on you no matter what is happening it can change your mind. sometimes you need to wake up and look what is around you because problems are the best way to change what you want to change along time ago. A

problem is a change for you because it can make you see different and help you to understand how tings wok.

First of all it can make you see different then the others. For example i remember that when i came to the United States i think that nothing was going to change me because i think that nothing was going to change me because everything was different that my country and then i realist that wrong because a problem may change you but sometimes can not change the way it is, but i remember that i was really shy but i think that change a lot because sometimes my problems make me think that there is more thing that i never see in my life but i just need to see it from a different way and dont let nothing happened and ruing the change that i want to make because of just a problem. For example i think that nothing was going to change me and that i dont need to be shy anymore became i need to start seeing everything in a different ways because you can get mad at every one but you need to know what is going to happened after,

people may see you different but the only way that you know how to change is to do the best and don't let nothing or not body to change nothing about you. The way you want to change not one have that and can't do nothing about it because is your choice and your problems and you can decide what to do with it.

second of all can help you to understand how things work. For instance my mom have a lot of problems but she have faith when she is around people, my mom is scare of high and i'm not scare of high i did not understand why my mos is scare of high and in not scare of high and every time i see my mom in a airplane it make me laugh because she is scare and is funny, but i see it from a different way and i like the high but also she have to understand that hoe things work in other people because it can no be the same as you. For example i think that my mom and me are different because we are and i have to understand that she does not like high and i need to understand that. to help someone to understand how things work you need to start to see how things work in that persons life.

A problem is a change for you and can make you a different and help you to understand. Everyone has a different opinion and a different was to understand then others. everyone can see the different opinion and what other people think.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
011AAA636F11,"Have you ever solved a math problem in less than 30 seconds? Math is important to many people. Even president Trump uses math to buy food or pay back to important people. He might be paying people to find a cure for the Coronavirus. However did you know that we use math every single day in our life?

How do people use math every single day you may ask. When you go to the super market to buy food, the register has to add all the food that you bought and they even have to add taxes. How about when you go shopping in the mall with some friends. When some is looking for a job they even have to find out how much is the salary. When your parents pay water bills and taxes, they have to pay the perfect amount of money. If your doing a party you have to find how much money your wasting. In your school you have to use math in mostly all your subject. In science you have find out how much of a mass is in a cup of water then subtract it from the cup to find the mass of water. For history the president has to find out about expensive's and the taxes that each citizens is paying. If you have a hobby or have talents to do an activity you even use math. In theater arts you have to measure and subtract where the lights are hitting and you have to find the perfect angel. In baking you have to add your ingredients and weight it to find it's mass.

When you cook don't tell me you just put random stuff in your pot. You have to find the perfect amount to feed the people you are feeding. In soccer you have to find the angle you are going to kick the soccer ball. Basketball is the same, you have to see from which angel you are going to throw the ball to make a point for your team. Here are some school activity's that you use math in your school.

Science

History

Art

Theater Art

Sports

Cooking Class

Home

After school programs

However several kid's don't like math but they could try it in a fun way. Many children complain about math being to hard or just being boring. I have found a way to make it exciting for kids. They could be playing games or just pretending to buy stuff, like doing a little play that won't cost money. If a student likes painting give them a coloring book that has math in it. Dancing and music is the same thing like coloring. In music you can count how many strings a violin has and compare it to another instrument that is in the violin family. You can watch a funny video that is related to math, you can watch it in your home or in school. Go on a field trip that will be free or that won't cost that much money.

If a student is struggling in math help or show them a way to do it. A kid's classmates or friend could help them in math. They can use math websites like racing cars for boys and coloring games for girls. If they are still struggling then ask there parents if they can stay or to get them a tutor after school. Find them a easier and understandable way to teach them math. The child's teacher can even play fun games with her students like Kahoot,Quizlet live, or even Pear Deck. You can give out prizes like candy or sticker's, that will probably get them more exciting.

Many scientist say that math is helpful to your brain and makes it healthy for you and your brain. You will acknowledge many ways to solve several math problems from years to years until you graduate from collage or high school. The reason why I choose to do my lesson about math is that I want kids to be independent and to get responsible when they grow up to be adults. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
F531D21A72F6,"The success is achieve something, is like a goal that we want reach. Nobody is perfect in this life, at contrary all the people make mistakes. For example: When I try to cook something to eat, sometimes I forgot to add an ingredient. As a result of this mistake the food obtain a different flavor, but of this failure I can learn and upgrade my skills like a chef.

Another example could be: when a student fail in a test, but has the chance to take a retake, is there when the student spend all their time studying to get a better grade. Daily the people commit diverse mistakes, but depend of us to determine if this mistakes will define us. Also we can take with enthusiasm this kind of failures and learn from them. Don't give up, we have to be strong. That a mistake don't stop you of achieve your goals. A characteristic of the humans is that we try to overcome all the challenges that we have in our life.

The failures teach us how to be a best person. The people just have to be more optimistics and see the failures from a good point of view. If you are negative with a failure or mistake, let me tell you that maybe you will loss the battle with yourself. If you are negative, is very probably that you will start to have bad thoughts about yourself. If you are negative, you never will be happy again, because you will stay thinking in the failure you had. I'm telling you all this, because I had this kind of problems previously.

In conclusion, don't let to the failures defeat you. You have to be strong and learn of them, to be a best person in the future. Or you want stay in the same place, with the same problems forever? No, right? You have to figth to overcome all the challenges that will appear in your life, and remember never give up. Let me tell you something else, I don't know a lot of english and I'm taking this test that have to be in english. I'm bringing all of me to get a good grade, what I mean with this. Well, even if I don't have a good grade, I learn many things that will help me in the future. I will not let the failure defeat me again, I will return more strong and with more knowledge.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
FE822B3E72FC,"On this time most the people had failures on their life, a failure is something that always gonna happen on the life. Some people get it on the good way and they make of each failure a lesson for their life , also a failure give to you the motivation that you need to do your best , each failure make you more stronger and make you be alert on your next step

Some people get the failures on good way when they learn about it. All the failures have a lesson for your life, the first reason why a failure give you a lesson is because. If you never do it wrong you will never learn about the failure. Second you learn about the failure when you made it before and you do again but now you do it good for example. If your teacher give you 10 days to do a presentation on your computer and, the first day you say i will do it tomorrow and you say the same the next day until a night before the day that you have to turn the work you start do it , and you don't have enough time and you get a bad grade. The next day it was a failure and you will learn about it because the next time you will do it on time.

A failure give to you the motivation that you need to do your best the next time. When you do something wrong for first time you feel bad and you want to do it wrong again , inclusively if it was a little mistake you don't want to and you got motivation. Most the people owners of big companies obtain motivation when they have a failure on a business, they don't give up they get motivation to do their best on the next business for example. You went to your work and it's your first day and your boss told you that you have to finish all of your signatures 10 minutes before the end of the day , and you finish it 15 minutes after , your boss can get mad and give you a warning and you have to get it like a motivation to do your best the next day and keep going.

Each failure make you more stronger and make you be alert on your next step. The failure coming and coming on ours life sometimes it come hurt and sometimes it doesn't, all of those make you more stronger, give you a lesson and make you be alert for don't get it mistake again. It make you more stronger means that you don't gonna feel weak again when you commit a mistake , also you gonna be alert and take your precautions on your next step for example. If you are on a team of soccer and you are the goalkeeper, and while you are talking with a friends , one of the other team hit the ball and make a score it was your fault. Your coach gonna scold you for it but you gonna be alert for the next time and you also gonna be more stronger because you learn about of your mistake.

The primer minister Winston Churchill had the reason when he said that "" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" I think that if everyone doesn't have any failure on their life, they never know how hard can be a success person on this world. They never learn about their failure and maybe they don't encourage to the best on their jobs in conclusion all the people have more then one failure on their life but they make of it something good on their life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
AA0CD6D22CA3,"Identify a Career Before High School

Have you ever heard about those societies that expect students to identify a career before getting into high school? Last week I was reeding the newspaper and there was a special new that really got my attention. The new was talking about a new society which wants all students to idenfy a career before they get in high school. Because some students think is not necessary, there is a big debate going on.

I believe that is good to implant to students the idea to commit to a career before getting into high school because then when they start high school they will choose the necessary classes which will help them to earn knowledge of this career. Another reason is that they will not be getting distracted later on thinking about what career should they select. If the students choose a career before getting into high school, they will get mature and they will be prepared to be more formal and follow the steps to graduate on time and then start working on the few steps that they will have for achieving completely their dreamed career.

I believe that if studdents choose their career before starting high school it will be easier for them in the future. I have a niece that is in 8th grade in middle school, she is almost about to start high school. My niece was telling me the other day that she loves medicine, and she would love to become a doctor. She told me that she asked to her counselor for some classes recomendations. Her counselor recommended to her a medicine's academy and also some extra science and health classes. Now she is excited to start high school.

If students decide what career are they interested on before getting into high school will help them to clear their mind. Once they get the opportunity to choose their classes schudele for high school they will have in ind that they should pick classes that are related to the career that they want to achieve. When I was in high school I did not even know what a career was, because the teachers in middle school nor my parents never mentioned it. When I was going to start high school I remember that the summer after starting high school, all the future new niners were called to a meeting. In this meeting we were supposed to choose our new classes for our first year in high school. They gave us all a really big list of classes from where we could choose, and because I did no know anything, and I had not any plans for my future, I chose the same classes that my other friend was choosing. When I was in my Senior year the questions started ""so what is your plan after graduating?"" ""what is your dreamed career?"" I was completely lost, so I went to talk to my counselor and she explained me what a career was. I said I wanted to be periodist, and then I realized that I wasted my opportunities of earning knowledge and practice during my first high school years. I could have been in leadership class and learn how to talk to people, I could have been part of the high school newspaper, or take some classes where they teach you how to give speeches. After I graduated I had to take special courses online, because I did not know anything about periodism.

If students decide what career they want, they will feel cofidents and they will act in the way that this career asks for them to act. They will become more mature and take high school as a more serious thing. Some of my old class mates from when I was in high school were always playing around and getting in trouble, because they said high school did not really teach you what you ""needed"", but I believe that they said that because they were not learning about what they really were interested on. They used to go to dance class when what they really wanted to become after was a lawyer, or a doctor.

Other people believe that this will give students extra stress while they are thinking like an adult when they are in middle school. They believe that students are not old enough to decide what they really want, and that they might change their mind later. This people think that the best age for choosing a career is when the students have already graduated from high school.

In conclusion I believe that this idea that the new society wants to implant to the students is good, because students should take high school seriously, they are super close to become adults and they will have to decide what they want to do with their life, and as sooner as they decide the most beneficial for them it will be. ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
0D5DA97CCEAE,"I agree with Emerson's statement, about individuality because is something that you can try and be better person in the world. First thing if you do yours own thing by yourself is something like amazing for the world, because don't depend of nobody else. I think trying something to yourself is how we learn more. And is the pride of the family, and the world to see that you trying and trying for to be something better of life. I think is no hard to try anything for to be a better person in life. I always wish better accomplish to others persons in all world.

Is like a example studying gave a good benefitsfor to be a better person. Is something that you try for to be pride of the world. When you going to school don't waste the time, in school. Is the pride for us school have a good future for us. When you do all things by yourself is an pride, for yourself. Graduate from school is something greatest accomplisment anybody can do it for yourself this is an pride, that everybody want to have. If we don't never to try something never going to know about the things, that way we need to try to do anything. Maybe something that we don't want to try can be a greatest accomplisment that we can have. Is very important to try because we going to know about it. It something that in the future can help and for the world and family too. Greatest accomplisment can be a little thing but, if you do by yourself is a pride for you it does't matter, what type of thing it is. Family always are going to be pride of it. Opportunities for to do things always can have to yourself.

Greatest Accomplishment mean that you can do it like going to university for a better life is something greatest accomplisment that can do. I always going to give greatest accomplisments to other persons. Because I always want to see better to others persons accomplish their dreams. Some people they don't greatest accomplisment maybe don't find somebody to wish their dreams. I think is something, like felt big person, how to make greatest accomplisment to othes persons and then to see that they can do it. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
A0B8C1FA3811,"I think the students should not be allow to use their cell phone in classroom, the effects of allowing them is not going to be useful comparing to how it will take their attention from their class work to the online world of cell phone. The reasons that most schools have free computer or laptops for all students for educational purposes, and distracting other students, teachers, and the student, who does as well, with out even knowing that .

Most or every school has too many online items for student to use for example, in my school we use laptop and iPad as a main educational resources to do the class work. Using the school resources with free internet, and that allow teachers to know what is everyone doing and help them if they need to. Also, that most schools have a libraries have a lot of the best free educational recourse for all students, so that make students have too many options instead of using their own cell phones in classroom.

Moreover, using cell phone in the classroom would distract others students with their class work for example, I prefer using the outline resource instead of the online once, so I can not focus to my class work when students use their cell phones around me. Also, using cell phone in the classroom could be less useful compare to how it could take students attention to the cell phone Social Medea world or the online world, so if one student didnt use the cell phone in the right way or for an educational purposes all the classroom's people, teacher and students, wold be distract out of their subject and lose their class time.

Others people might have another opinion about that, for example the can say using the cell phone is useful for student for educational purpose and contact family. That can be right when we can be sure that all teenager students would do this. Also that every school has a free phone for students to contact their families if their is a need.

Therefore, using cell phone in the classroom is less use that it's, because that would wast all class's time, and students have more options to search online for their class work.

We all must respect people's, teachers', and our time in classroom by not use cell phone to distract and lose the attendances' benefit in classroom.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
36A74F4F050A,"Do we pick our own character traits? Can it be pick by the type of influences that is beyound our control? if so then What kind of traits would we have? How are the trailts we choice is the right traits for us?

Most people say the type of traits a person can have define who are as a person, and saying that is ture because the kind of trait you would have or choices can define your character. like for instances let's say you are a very working person your so dedicated to your work that is a trait of dedication or when a person is so nice to you that shows kindness another trait. Even mabybe a person who likes to read that would be a bookworm this is also a trait. Everybody has a trait that they choose.

We choose our owns traits because we think or we know that's the kind of traits we want to have. I am a person who loves to read books, loves food, kind to others, and who can be lazy at most time. A guy name John Lubbock Said "" Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I'm choosing these traits to be myself and myself only.

The kind of traits i have is kindness, lazyness, bookworm, foodie, and family orident all of these trait are the traits i chocies because it make the person i am today.

Being family orident , i've always loved being around my family because it's gives this joy and happiness just to be around them, plus they make me feel so safe and sound when i'm with my family,all of my traits make up who i am.

Others think it's the opposite because your trait can be choose by the type influnces but i have to disagree on that because people in this world choice the kind of traits they want to have. It dosen't matter on many traits you might have they can still define who you are. Or weather if they are good traits or bad traits they can still define who you are,becuase you are your own person.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C262F0931AA1,"This prompt is about some people that need help to make their own decisions or need someone to told what they need to do even in their personal life.

The question say "" should people make their omn decesions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?"" some people they will said that is better if someone as came and make there decisions in everything so, they don't need to worry about anything.

There are another person that think that is way to much because how someone that they don't know is gonna make their decisions and also the dicisions of their life.

This is a big topical because like I said before so many people can desagree with this but there are other that are agree with this,in my opinion I'm desagree with this becuause is my life and I need to leard how to deal with it. Even if my life is the worse one I going to take care of all my decesions sometimes we can ask at someone for a opinion maybe, because the person is more older then me but is only a opinion you're not gaving authorities at all at the person to go and make your decisions and then take care of all your stuff.

In my conclusion is better if you take care of your on stuff doesn't matter how hard that it, is your life and you are the only one that knows how to deal with everything that you have done so, this is my last decision people should make their own decisions. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
AE0DB193F5B5,"Today, in the actuality, a lot of people have a big dreams that we can to complete have a better life for our future family or also to own self but a many people be surrender becuase most of the time have the fuilures, when they are doing something; I think that our life without the fuilures will be bored and easy becuase we don't have the energies to work hard or fight for our goals or dreams. I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because you can help other to complete their dreams or their goals, also you can have more spirit and a positives attitudes than you have in the begging, also you can be a successful and strong person.

You can help others to complete with their dreams or their goals, because sometimes a lot of people who want to comply their dreams or goals they don't have the motivation of their families or the economy necessary to buy all the studies or all the things that they need, so when you finish all the goals that you make you, you can assist to others. I know an experience of child from Mexico, his name was Generic_Name. Generic_Name was a child with the low economy resources, I remember that he toll us all the things that he was comply to get a better life for his family and him self. So one day, Generic_Name received a big notice from a presidency of Generic_City, the place were we live, that he can have a opportunity to study whatever he want. He and his family were happy for the big opportunity that Generic_Name have. At pass of the years, when Generic_Name finished study the collage, I know that Generic_Name is a big entrepreneur from a big company that he created after finished the college. Today, also Generic_Name likes help other people who want to be a successful in their life like the presidency help him. In my observation to be a good person likes Generic_Name makes that you have a lot of open opportunities to get the success or the things that Generic_Name every day was dreamed.

Also you can be a successful and strong person because all people knows that the life is not easy and less if you want to do something hard or something that you need put a lot of time in it to pursuit of success and if you think that your goals or dreams are difficult to complete. Sometimes we need strive more that the people or your mind think. Another of my experiences is when was in Mexico, I was little girl, I remember that most of my days I talked with my family, my mother, my father and also sometimes with my grandfathers; about that I want study the High School in Untied States because I saw a TV Shows and movies shows all the schools and also my father lived a lot of years in this country so, he talk me about the schools, the teachers, the classmates, the classes and classrooms that were to different form my country, the lunch time and I think that the thing that was more exercise was with the lockers because in my country don't have lockers or something to put our things likes books, pencils, notebooks and sometimes, the food. At the time that was grow up, I was continue with the same mentality to come to this country to comply my studies. I remember that have a lot of failures in the time to the arrival to United States but,even if never let that my thoughts or the commentaries of the negative people will be fell bad about my big dream. I think that was a strong person because is hard to come to other place with different culture and customers in everything and also is hard and sad separate to the persons who love.

Other might say that the importance role that failure plays in the pursuit of success does not matter or they are disagree because you can lose your forces to continue and accomplish your goals and sometimes this failure can make us fell sad. However, you can have more spirit and positives attitudes than you have in the begging because when you have a failure in something that you study a lot or put your all time in it, you can have the mentality that you can to do well it, just you need strive a little be more that you make before. This is one of my experiences in my life; the last week, in my History class with Generic_Name, we have a quiz form the first unit so, we did the quiz, but the majority of my classmates and me, we don't pass the quiz, my teacher talked with us to give us a another opportunity to pass it. A lot of my classmates tell her that they do not were think that they can pass it even though they study a lot before the retake but, I have the spirit and the positives attitudes that I can passed the quiz with a good grade and study well at home. I think that my experience, it is good example because a lot of people who want to complete their dreams does not matter the times that they need to try to get a good result and a good recompense for the effort that they make.

In my opinion, I think that Churchill's statement ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" it is important and I agree with it because you can motive other people to be a good person with good feelings and goals, another reason is because you can to be a successful and respectful person and you can have a good attitudes through haved a bad results, every time you need stay be happy. Most of the people we have the big goals to comply something that always we dreaming.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
05EC08C05019,"How do you make friends along your life?

well, some friendships are made by internet, outside activities, and others by being neighbors for a long time, however, the most lasting and common friendships are the ones you made at school. Therefore, you spend hours, days, months, and years being socially with the people around you, but what if you don't want to attend to school, and decide to take classes from home?

At school, you don't only made friends and memories , you also earn and learn good advices, and you see different perspectives.

People who are not socialist tend to be ones who graduated by taking online classes; they don't know how to interact with people, because they had spent most of their life talking and interacting with their computers. Sometimes we are the cause why people rather to take online classes, we separate them by diseases, illness and mental problems, not a lot of students at school have the chance to receive help or talk with their counselor ; this is one of the reasons why people doesn't want to attend to school, and choose online classes.

A lot of cases now days about why people decide to course home school are:

Pregnancy at early age: The girls who get pregnant while they are in High School either take home school or don't go study anymore, when their belly starts growing they feel ashamed, and they tend to quit school.

The Life of Generic_Name, a 17 years old High School student , who migrate 2 years ago from Guatemala. Generic_Name's teacher was talking about the online courses, home school and other online options, in order that Generic_Name can graduate on time, she was so excited about her graduation date. She had a problem if for some reasons she decided to take the online course to finish High School on time; she couldn't speak English. So, how could Generic_Name learn to speak English, sitting all day long in front of her computer?

This is an example of a problem that many students had to face, when they are forced to do home school.

In conclusion, students won't benefit by attending classes from home, here is one the reasons why ; I am a student and sometimes I don't do the work that my teachers assign me, knowing so well, my teacher can walk where I am sitting and ask me for the assign work. So, can you imagine the online courses, students can search their answers, be on their phones, or taking care of someone while they are taking the online class, so much distraction. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
1F7FD80F4396,"I totally agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson , being yourself around people of these days is complicated in the way that anything you do or you say is going to be judge by everyone , you will be the critique of your classmates,friends,family. Is basically most of the youth community feeling the pressure of being accepted by the society and they forget to be them and they start becoming someone else, just because the other person might have a lot of friends or they want to have the same popularity as them.

70 percent of the youth community either have depression or they get bully in high school. For the people who sees these type of actions and don't say anything because they are unprotected and are scared to be bully, first know that you can get help and you can be that person giving the courage to the other person feeling same as you.

There are multiple reasons why you should want to be yourself and not just a copy. First put in your mind that you are unique , by the time you grow up the reality will come to show you that you don't need to impress anyone but yourself and all your actions is for you, your mistakes will affect you the most .When you are copying someone you should analyze what you win from it and is it really worth it ?.Now , ask yourself if the friends you have are really your friends,just because they walk with you and they talk to you doesn't mean they are your friends , and worse if they tell you to change who you really are. A real friend is that person that would love you and care about your own good, a friend is the one that appreciates you will all your defects. Someone changing you is someone you surely don't want in you life. Believe it or not is better to be alone than with bad friends,inclusive your own family can talk bad about you ,they might critique everything you dress,eat,but that isn't reason to change yourself and be what they are expecting you to be. When you are going to be a grown up, how can you tell someone to be always themselves when you don't even got to known the value of it.

Being yourself is worth it, is loving who you are you won't be able to love someone else if you don't love yourself before. Having your own thoughts and always giving your honest opinions are good than just agree with something that you don't , being real is being you. Be real with your friends and if they don't like your opinions or they would make fun of you then feel happier that they finally showed their truth colors. If you cousins or any member of your family make fun of you because you unknown any argument they are talking about or they make fun of they way you dress then they aren't family. Popularity is nothing compared to be yourself, somehow in any time you will feel so stressed ,sad ,and down and that'll be because you can't fake no more. Get you own experience, have your own goals in life, create your future. Instead of worrying about being accepted just worry about what you are planing for the future. Be a right person at least, don't copy someone ignorant , be a good well , always appreciate the appraisal of what you parents thought you and don't you ever feel shameless for it. In the future the success will be good recompense .

Lastly be grateful to be unique in the world,be one in a million , always try to improve yourself and instead of going down go up , and if you think that copying someone that you think is up is being a winner you are completely wrong cause you are being a loser, know that there is a lot of mean people that could be around you and you might even call them friends when they aren't .When people is jealousy behalf themselves they can do anything to ruin you when you think they are helping. You want to be a winner then stand up and proudly be yourself.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
747E3560442E,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" Based on your experiences, do you agree or disagree with Emerson's statement? Take position on this issue. I believe what author Ralph Waldo wrote is true.

First reason, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. I think if you don't work hard for what you want,you will never accomplished it. Also believe in yourself and be confident, if you have skills use them. However, someone people have skills, but are not confident with their self. Practice or training will help you be successful.

Second reason, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. In my experienced I wasn't confident I would be shy to present my project. Although, I got my first job and helped me a lot with my fear. Now when my teachers asks who wants to present I will raise my hand first, so I can get over it.

Lastly, why I agree on what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. In my second experienced I was good at algebra and my other subjects, but my junior year I gave up when my grades dropped to a zero. In my second semester i started bringing my grades to at least a C, to make my mom proud. Until this day I feel proud of myself too.

In conclusion, you should not give up on something you love to do nor let someone tell you what you can and cannot do. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is right , work hard and you will be successful.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
043B9F48FDC2,"Should all the students have to take a music, a drama, or an art class. Or should it be an electives and they could be able to make their choice to take what they want.

I believe that everyone have different opinion , interest, or things they want to do. They are able to make their on decision but i don't think that it has to be required to take a class that some people aren't interested in. I am disagree with this prompt because those classes should an elective. In my opion i wouldn't take any of those classes and my reason why is because i am not going to enjoy or like the class because i am not interesting in it and there's not a required that i have to take any of those classes. I had a friend who didn't want to come to his art class. One day i asked him why don't you go to that class and he was like i don't like the class, i don't enjoy it at all and also i didn't choice it, they just put it in my schechule. i was like look you should go to the office and talk to them about it. Because you dont want to be there and also you don't even come to that class and after a few days and he went to talk to his consul about it. Less than a week he always be in his class and i was like it's your own choice to make desicion but i resolve it be cause you helped me.

But in other school i have one friend that he loves his art class and now he's taking it almost every year and he told me. Generic_Name you should take an art class because it's really cool and you do a lot of art also i enjoy it and i really like the class but i don't know what do you like but in my perpective i would take an art class every year. I told him look i am not going to take a class that i don't like because i'd rather be in a class that i like and i would enjoy it and i want to do stuff that i like and it will be my choice if i enjoy or not a class. Because look there's a lot of option and you can make a decicion and he told me "" Yeah you right"" and by it i just tell them everybody have to make their own decion but also remember that every decion have a concecuense. I asked a lot of people what would you do if they put you in a classs that you don't want to be in it?. They told me i just going to talk in the ofice so they can change it and i would love to come to that class but i also have the right to say something about if i don't like or i do like something cause we have a right to speak up.

We should be able to choice what we want to study we don't have to have a requiered to do things we could do things by our own. But there might be a thing that make people think we should have a required to take classes that we don't want but also they have to think about that we are teenager and we might have our future planed but if they don't know that they have to take some classes they don't even want to take then those type of things make people think that's why we have to take classes to prove ourself. Another things and it influence a lot that they make required to do things and students just don't want to they have to think how we feel about things and how we would react. We all know that sometimes we are not in a mood or we are in our feeling or we just don't feel the day at all and it can affect our decion and required because people who make the required they just don't care about how would you feel or anything they just chose what they want and they say what they think will be better for a lot of students but the thing they don't think about it how would react to thing like i said earlier every decion has a consecuense and it could be good or bad but we have to deal with it.

Most of the students would like to have all classes how they want and when they cannot do something they want then there's when the things starting coming out. Becuase they don't like it their behavior chnage and everything in that class. So all studesnts should be able to have the right to change things and everything in their schedule but their consul should have the right to say no to things that are not important at all and they could say you are taking this class because of this reason and you can't do it. Of course they will say something but they are taking care of their future and things they would do in life by taking any of this three classes. It might be good thing or it could be a bad thing but we just have to lisent to our students.

Everyone have a right to make their own desion about classes and others things but if there's a required we are not able to do anythig. Because we just have to respect the rules and do it without our opinion. If we are able to make a choice then our feeling and the way we would feel about classes it will be matter and we could make our decicion and we will like the thing we choose. But sometimes we just cannot make the decision and someone else would chose it for us so we just have to see the pro and con about the desicion we would make or the thing we would do without thinking. I think it shouldn't be a required to take this classes and it would be a elective class because some people wouldn't take this type of classes they are not going to enjoy it and go because they just don't like it at all and everyone have the desicion to speak up and make decision by our own.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
43B0E1211D58,"School is a very important part in a person's life, however it takes away most of student's and teacher's day. In a normal public middle school in Maryland, a student first class starts at 8:15 in the morning and the last class ends at 3:00 pm. Which means that a student spends 7 hours and 25 minutes in school, that is a long time for a person to be receiving information nonstop. The school board should not extend the school day, because that would take time away from activities that students need or will need in the future, such as: students would have less time to do homework or study, students would have less time to participate in after school activities like sports, and students wouldl have less time to volunteer in community events.

Students would have less time to do homework or study. Students already spends more than seven hours at school and usually has 6-8 classes that last 45 minutes each from those 6-8 classes at least

3 would have assigned homework to the students which means that the students would need time to complete their homework with accuracy, if the school days werre extended students would have less time to complete their homework which means that their grade might go decrease for missing assignments.

Students would have less time to participate in after school activities such as sports, or clubs.

Every healthy person should exercise for at least 1 hour per day and at school not every student takes physical education (P.E.) as a course which leads to the thought that students might not me be getting the necessary amount of exercise per day, and even if a student did take P.E. a normal class lasts 45 minutes, which is not enough for a healthy person. If the school board were to add one and a half hours to the school day students would have less time to practice in an after school team. Clubs are just like sports are a very big thing in a school, clubs shows students opportunities they usually would not get in a school day. if the school board were to extend the school day students that are parts of clubs would probably get less time to spend time in those clubs.

Students will have less time to volunteer in community events. Community service is usually a requirement in most curiculums, in past experiences I have had to have 75 hours of community service those hours were earned for volunteer work, like helping a teacher with younger students or helping a teacher organize her classroom before the school year, etc. . Those acts were usually done after school and usually took around 2 hours. If the school board were to extend the school day srudents would have less time to finish their community service and could eventually fail beacause of not enough volunteering hours.

Overall it is just more convienient for the school board to not add anymore hours to the school day so students can have more time for their other activities like sports clubs and community service",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
C0C29B07C7C0,"Do you want your kid to be assisted by a older student? Well look no further, this program could make your child be more smarter, prepare the young student for whats coming in the future, and a older student can help the younger student with his/or her homework.

The older student that is assisting the younger student could make him smarter. What i mean by this is that the older student will help the student on math, language arts, and science which the older student already took. The older kid already knows the concepts of the subjects that the younger student is taking, which means he will teach him the concepts. This means that the younger student would already know the concepts of the three subjects that the older student taught him which is science, language arts, and math.

The older student can prepare the younger student for the future. The older student can teach what he is learning to the younger student. For example, the older student can teach the concepts of algebra which the younger student is taking next year. The young student might even study algebra with the older student. The older student can teach other subjects like physical science, and civics economics which the young student could be ready for.

The final reason why this program is helpful is because the older student helps the younger student with his homework. The younger student might ask for help on his homework and the older student will help him. If the student does not understand the question then the older student would teach him.

This program is actually pretty good for your child if he does not understand and need help on a subject that he has trouble on. This program can make your child be more smarter, be prepared for whats coming in the future, and a older student can help the younger student with his/or her homework. This is why the program is helpful.                      ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
A495DAE52B0E,"There is two ways of working at school, one is to work alone another is to work in groups. Many people choose to work alone because it more quiet, the grade they get on the activity only affect themselves and not other people, and not distracted from other people around them. but i prefer working in groups to be with friends, get things done more faster, and more fun.

Working in groups is a advantage because the people on your group can help you in many ways like to know something you dont understand, or when you need help they can help you in what you are straggling in. in one occasion when i came to the united states i was at school and that day our teacher told us that we have to do a project and she gave us the option to work alone or to work in groups, so in that time i was a little scared and afraid to talk to people since i didn't know any English and i also was scared of people to not be able to understand me because i did not know any English i knew some words but not a lot, but a girl name Generic_Name came to ask me if i wanted to work with her and her friend, and i said yes, it was a lot of help working with them because i didn't understand anything the teacher asked us to do and what the project was about but they help me a lot to understand everything and to learn a little more English and to develop my self.

Working with other people it more easy than working by yourself. people can get things more faster, and more good because more people more ideas. Getting things more faster is beneficial, teachers can give students extra credit in their activity or project. Also students would be able to know how to work in groups in their future job, to make friends, to become more independent, and to be nice. working with other people would get people to know how other people feel and to get to know more people to become friends. My first day of school i was afraid to not make any friends because i'm not a social person, but them i become friends with a girl name Generic_Name because of a project i was doing with her, and since that day i'm still friends with her.

One of the reasons why people like to work in groups is because a lot of people are really nice in many ways. working in groups is a better idea than working alone because when people work in groups they get more social and to be able to know and to conjugate with other people. Being nice to other people it help you to make friends and not getting people mad at yourself or dislike yourself and to make things fun and good. when i turn 16 i started working at a restaurant called Generic_Name i was a little scared because it was going to be my first job i didn't know how things were. but when i started i have to be nice to costumers since i was working on the line. but one day i was sad and mad at someone about something they said, but that day i was working in a project with some people and they started to be nice to me and make me laugh so my day can get better so the reason here is that working in groups can be a lot of beneficial because that day it was a really busy day at my job but because of the people on the group i was working with, they made my bad day to a good day.

Working in groups is a lot more beneficial than working alone because people can get things done more faster, make new friends, and more fun. i really hope our teachers can give us more opportunities to work in groups than to work and do everything alone because it really help a lot of people to become social and more independent and to develop themselves. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
C6A047494477,"Generic_Name

3/18/2019

what you have already mastered ,those people they don't bealive they don't grow up ,that is not true we have to create a new things improve us self we don't like to stay the same place and nothing is imposible.

I'm agree with Emerson's statement what I already know that's a adventage for us . because it is easy doing something what we have already know ,but if we never try it , and we never know if we can do it, I need improve my self and switch my position that's a new goal . so many people they do not bealive them self , well we born poor people , so nothing is imposible ,trying what we want to do in the life . with the time we can get , and reach what we always dreaming.

You will never grow up , if you doing the same things in the life there is I lot opportunity in the world choose a new goal you will see so many change on your way don't give up.

It's easy doing what I already know because we feel comfortable doing ,for example on my work , I'm working busboy helping the server we working team work ,and easy but the problem is want to be a server but they never let me to try it i want to grow up swith a position to earn more money.

Creater a new things , we have so many skill to grow up don't be afraid doing or tying new things we want to improve us self I don't like to stay the same place doing the same things I don't see any improve on my life your life can be change a week but you have to be a positive ,don't give up , try it, isn't nothing bad.",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
F5D2D8C81370,"Cellphones should be allowed because that might help students to communicate with their parents if they have any kind of emergency while they are in school. It would be helpful for students to find any kind of information on internet when they forget their computers or other devices that they might use as a resource to find information. Another reason is that students will have the advantage to use their cellphones while they are in the middle of the class, and it means that those schools trust students that they use their cellphones properly during class and they are proving to others schools that student can be trusted to use their cellphones during classes. Students also can give an example to other students that cellphones are little machines that help us in everyday lives, and they also might be giving advice to students in how they can be benefited from chance that the school provides to them.

On the other side why cellphones should not be allowed in schools is because schools think that students will not use their cellphones in a right path, and they will become more addictive to their cellphones where social media it's included. Most of the population have shown that a big percent of the population use their cellphones to spend their time in social media, whether is Facebook, Twitter, and Instragram. Another percent of the population spend their time in YouTube which that YouTube brings us some advantage and disadvantage. The advantage might be the tutorials that can help us to find information, how to fix something that you are capable to repair, and how to provide some skills from something that you like. The disadvantage might be that people might spend too much time watching video games or a new episodes from their favorite comics characters. Another reason to not use cellphones in school is because when there is a fight between two students, they start to take pictures or videos of the fight rather than prevent and called anyone who can help.

Most of the student will agree to have cellphones in schools because some of them use their cellphones in a right path and some of them do not. For those who use their cellphones in a properly way will say that cellphones are going to help them more than what teachers expect. Some of this students also will help them to find whatever meaning of a word that they do not understand. There are going to be some students who speak different language as their first language and it is very helpful to have cellphone while they are in school. For example some of the students who speak Spanish and they do not understand what the word say, they directly go to their cellphones and translate the word. Then they start to use it in some sentences to challenge themselves and improve their English. Those students who agree to have cellphones in school and do not accomplish the rules in how to use their cellphones properly, they will be playing around while they are in class, listen to music, and probably they will be texting with their friends. For some students will be annoying to have cellphones in class because it is going to be a distraction even if they are not using their cellphones.

From other perspective teachers might believe that is wrong to have cellphones in class, whether they are using it in a proper way or not because they might believe that it's a distraction for every students, and even if they are good students they will use their cellphones while teachers are explaining some important information. They also believe that some of them will use their cellphones to finish homework that is not for their class and will cause that students will not be paying attention in what the teacher is saying. Teachers also say that students will be texting in class and some of them playing video games and then when they tell them to put their cellphones away, they do not obey and some of them insult the teacher. Some teacher do not bother them if a student have a cellphone or not because they think that as long the student is doing his homework and classwork, they are going to be fine.

I believe cellphones should be allowed in schools, but under supervision of the teachers and principles. One of the reason why I believe that should be allowed is because cellphones are very useful and helpful for me in many ways. In my situation I speak Spanish as my first language and when I do not understand a word I go to my cellphone and I translate the word and then I try to understand what the word means. I also use my cellphone when I do not have my computer with me, and I do my classwork with my cellphone, and then I turn my work in. But some students do not understand when they have to use their cellphones and when I see students listening to music it does distracted me because I am trying to concentrate in what the teachers is explaining because If I don not pay attention it is hard to understand later on. I also see how teachers get mad when a student do not obey when they have to put their cellphones away, and then the student start to argue with the teacher. I strongly agree that school should allow students to have cellphones because it does provide a lot of advantages. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
0016926B079C,"I think that students would benefit from learning at home,because they wont have to change and get up early in the morning to shower and do there hair. taking only classes helps them because at there house they'll be pay more attention. they will be comfortable at home.

The hardest part of school is getting ready. you wake up go brush your teeth and go to your closet and look at your cloths. after you think you picked a outfit u go look in the mirror and youll either not like it or you look and see a stain. Then you'll have to change. with the online classes you can wear anything and stay home and you wont need to stress about what to wear.

most students usually take showers before school. they either take it before they sleep or when they wake up. some students do both to smell good. that causes them do miss the bus and effects on there lesson time cause they come late to school. when u have online classes u wont need to miss lessons cause you can get everything set up and go take a shower and when u get out your ready to go.

when your home your comfortable and you pay attention. it gives then an advantage to be smarter and even pass there classmates on class work. public schools are difficult even if you try. some teacher dont know how to teach it in then way that students understand it. that causes students to fail and they may repeat the class.              ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
A56BCB594C0C,"Dr. Manager, I would like to work in ""Envy Nail' your nail salon , l been there before and is the salon where l always want to work l feel very comfortable when i'm there and l think when someone needs to work is importan to do what the person always wanted to do or what the person like because in that way the worker is going to do a really good job. Also i'm very sociable and friendly and l think is something that is very important because the custumers need to feel confortable, in that way the costumer are going to like the job of the worker and likely is going to back later again to get done the nails in your salon.

l have one year getting my nails done in your salon and l like the tecniques that the workers use and the time and care that they put for make the nails , l think your salon is perfect for the people that get nails and want have different colors on their nails, because your salon have a lot choises of colors in gel and acrilic powde. l would be happy to lorn all of the tecniques and styles that your workers do on the customers like, french nail , sculpture nail , or gel nail. I have two years that l practice the basic steps for make a nail for example, how put the acrilic powder properly in the fake or real nail and how put the gel on the sculpture nail. In this moment i'm lorning how to make figures with acrilic powder por example, roses , flowers or any other figures that costumer want and also l been pratice how to do pedicure and how do a properly a massage.

My idea is lorn more of what l know and work on what l always wanted to be, l would be happy if you allow me to visit you nail salon and give to me employment,

i'm going to work very hard and put effort on the nails that i'm going to make.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
B04F96DEDE6B,"Once someone told me,"" Focus on your goals, and keep focusing until you reach them, it does not matter if it takes long, at the end of the day it will worth it "". I think it is a good idea if you identify the carrer that you want to take and start getting into it at a young age, because you will have more time to know and study about it and how it works, and it is gonna be more easy. It could be difficult if at the end of the day you are about to gratuate and you do not even know what career do you wanna take.

One of the reasons why you have to decide what career you wanna take by the time you enter high school is that, you will focus in all your classes, but more in those classes that are related with your career, and you progress in school is gonna increase, and also your grades. You will be busy in a productive way doing things that will benefit you in school, because if you really wanna reach your goals you will not have chance to waste your time,

which is a good thing, instead doing nothing, bad thing, or only in video games. As how we are today, many teens are leaving school because maybe they think they found a better thing to do or because they took a bad decition.

But for those who really wanna be someone in the future and go for it, will have more opportunities, like Univercities credits and in their future job by dedicating their interest in school and doing their best.

Another reason is that your knowledge is gonna increrase, which is also a good thing, because you will learn a little bit about everything. In any career, you have to know about everything, even if it is a little bit, but you will learn new interesting things every days, things that you did not know before, and your interest in those things will drive you to search more about it and make you feel that you wanna know more and more about anything you are learning. All those are benefits that you can get by dedicating your interest in school.

In conclution, I think all students should have an idea of what career they wanna take, by the time they enter high school , so their courses of study in high school can help them when they are ready to go to the University, to not be difficult learn about it.",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
21535555126A,"I agree that you shouldn't aim high, because when you aim high you never have a staring point to your own process, if you aim high it could ruin your work ethic and how you see yourself, and lastly you can make muiltiple mistakes and correct it and make it perfect work, compared to aiming and doing horrible work and falling back down to the bottom.

When you aim low you have way more time to gain information, practice on your work, and have a good idea on what you want to do. For example the creator of Microsoft Bill Gates he didn't just wake up one morning and said"" im going to create a software system named windows"" he woke up and began to study computers, and everything about how a software works. So aiming low gives you the advantage of failing and not giving up on what you want to become. Most people are always told to ""aim high"" the ones that are told to aim high will never be able to handle failure because they never aimed low first and then worked their way to the top, that is how setting your aim to high can make you fall short in life.

Aiming high, and having a high expectation can really hurt your work ethic, Why you ask? because once you aim high and never practice on your work thats how you fail, the way you work will not be the same compared to a person who aimed low and is making his or her way to the top. For example Delonte West was a NBA basketball player he was really good, until he began to use drugs once he did that he was kicked out of the NBA and is now currently poor. You see the reason why the NBA kicked him out of the league was because they have very high expectations for him and wouldn't expect him to do drugs at all but, if he was using drugs before he even entered the league and stopped using them completely and went to the NBA he would still be playing to this day that is a good example of aiming high and falling short and aiming low and achieving your mark.

The only way to start in any journey or process that you do is to start from the bottom meaning aim low and you'll achieve your mark. Aiming high can not benefit how you were able to make it to where you are now. That is true Michaelangelo was right about aiming high and falling short. So you must start low first figure out your plan, then begin to improvise and get ideas on what you want to do, and begin your process, that is exactly how you achieve your mark

In conclusion, i highly agree on what Michaelangelo said ""The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark"" that statement was true, Aiming and srting low first is how ideas come in and you are able to see what you are working and you show people what you can do until you reach your highest peak, instead of aiming high and failing and not knowing what to do now cause you failed. So start low first and go on from there.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
AB201C60C269,"Have you ever heard about a place Generic_City? Generic_City? is a place that is located in Uzbekistan. It is a well known place because of its long history. It has a lot of buildings that have been built a long time ago. Even though not a lot of people heard about this country it is well know for its own people.

There have been a lot of fights in Generic_City?. For example there was a fight that my grandma talked about, in the 90s there was a fight against a guy called Jallolidin Manguberdi and a guy called Chingizxon, and it was one of the longest fights that have been in the history. If i would get a change to go there i would visit a place called Generic_City?. One place in the world i would like to visit is Generic_City? because of its beautiful buildings,food, and because my family members live there.

The first reason why i want to visit Generic_City? is because of its beautiful buildings. Generic_City? contains a lot of buildings that have been build in past 80s. Even though Generic_City? contains old building it still looks brand new. People from other states come to Generic_City? to see its building or to learn its history. The inside of the buildings has a really beautiful decoration that is full of different shaped lights. I have seen a lot of these pictures in the internet.

The second reason why i want to visit Generic_City? is because of its food. Generic_City? usually eats a lot of spicy food because of its tradition, so i love to eat spicy food. Some examples foods that they eat are spicy chicken, a cushion food called osh, and a food called somusa. Generic_City? has its own tradition foods, not alike from other countrie foods, and this is why it is cool.

The last reason why i want to visit Generic_City?, is because some of my family members live there. My grandma and my grandpa lives in Generic_City?, so if i could get a chance to go

Generic_City?

i would first go and visit my grandma and grandpa because i missed them so much. They show me the pictures of the city, and it looked so beautiful.

In conclusion, The three reason why i want to visit Generic_City? is because of its beautiful buildings, its food, and because my family members live there.

I hope i could get a chance to visit Generic_City? and see all the beautiful buildings and see my grandma and my grandpa, and i could learn more about the history of Generic_City?. See you there.        ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5
7E669FF93EB9,"While, some students are distracted others are taking an advantage of it. Although some say that cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms. Actually it should be allowed in classrooms,for research purpose and projects during class. by the used of cell phones. We can learn more about any topic, an example of this can be,if the teacher is explaining something and i don't understand instead of asking him. I can go to internet and find out. all the things that i need to learn and with examples. I agree with the assertion of using cell phones in classrooms.

Those who believe, that cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms,have their reasons,for example they believe that cell phones are distracted, in a way that students can't control it. They also think that cell phones are addictive. However,that is not true because we all can control our self, and i think that if we use our cell phones in a corresponding way, we will not only learn more, we will improve our skills and in the future become professional in anything.

I believe that we should used cell phones for research purpose,for example i remember when i was in English class i got sick, and i had to go to the doctor when i came back, to school the teacher was giving directions for our next assignment,but in that moment i felt like i was out a lot of days,but no it was only 2 days out of class,so i said to him I feel like i had miss a lot of thing just let me know what i need to do, and i will try to do everything that i need,so he said we went over more vocabulary, but right now i am explaining something, if you want to do it you have to stay after school i will be happy to help you. I said no you don't have to explaining me nothing, just give me the vocabulary i will look it up in internet,and i will write down the meaning of each word i will be quiet,so you can keep doing what you doing. He said fine. If cell phones are not allowed in classrooms, I could not do my vocabulary, and not only that i improved my skills by researching for good information which is not easy. I think that this is a good example why we should used cell phones in classrooms, so we can use them in a correct way thinking about our grades.

I also think that we should used cell phones for projects. This is my friend called Generic_Name he is 17 years old we are friends from middle school. In this time we were in government class, once again the teacher gave us a group activity in this case we had to came up with a new country, otherwise invent country,so we had to give it name,where it will be located, and the rulers for its country. After that,all the students got their own computers,but there were not enough for everyone,so we had no computers next,we asked the teacher can we used our cell phones,for the project she asked if there were no more computers and we said no not more,so with no choice the teacher said yes,used your cell phones,but only for the project,without wasting time we got our phones out,and we started working on our new project we worked in our cell phones as we had computers after the hard work we stopped,because the bell ring. This is another proof why cell phones are important they are really helpful in many different s ways we used all cell phones,for the whole project and thanks to that we turned in our project on time.

In conclusion,we should all used cell phones in classrooms for research purpose and projects. having in mind that a lot of people will not agree,but cell phones are helpful. They are important. technology is here for us,so we can take an advantage, and use it like it is for our own purpose. cell phones will provide a better understanding to all the students in all schools We should reflect about it, and came up with our own position. If cell phones should be allowed in classrooms,or cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
209A6BC99DB9,"When in need of advice on what to do, seeking multiple opinions can help people make a better choice. People who are indecisive, tend to seek for advice, and with input from multiple people, they can go with the majority of what people say. Out of the many opinions someone could receive, one may influence them more than the others and help them make a decision they are positive on. People sometimes may be unsure of something, so they seek for multiple opinions and those opinions could give that person that assurance they need to establish a finalized decision. Multiple opinions increases a greater chance to help a person make a better choice.

People who are indecisive could overthink and they may make a choice that they are unsure about. Asking multiple people for opinions could give them a better understanding on what choice to make. If you need advice on a deciding what to do, like choosing what pair of shoes you want to wear, you could always make an easy decision and go with the majority of what people favor most. Indecisiveness can lead a person to making an unsure decision causing them to later regret what they did, so you can save yourself from the trouble of that, and seek for multiple opinions to help you carefully decide.

When asking multiple people for advice, you can receive all sorts of different answers. Out of all the answers you get, there may be some that are of no help whatsoever, but there also could be one that could influence you heavily and be great of help. It possibly could open up a new window of thoughts that you'd never would have. That one opinion could give you a better understanding and help you make a decision that you are really sure of.

You're now stuck on making a tough decision, and you have a decision in the back of your mind already made up, but you're not sure if you should make the call. You ask someone for advice on what to do, but it just isn't enough to convince you to do it. Seeking multiple opinions could give you the assurance you need. There could one or more opinions that could help you make that final decision about something you are wavering on.

There are many reasons why seeking multiple opinions can help you to make a better choice. It will help those out who are indecisive and give them an easy decision to make. Out of all the advice you receive, there may be one that'll help make things clear and help make it easier for you to decide. Those multiple opinions could give you assurance you need if you are ever unsure about a choice you have to make, and gives a better chance of you making the better choice.                ",3.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
DDB673D3627D,"Who wants to work alone by themselves when you have the chance to work together with a group of students in your class. Working together is more beneficial because with a group you can get all the work done more faster and students are less worried. Many students should work together as a team in school because it helps them with good life skills life. People might need this to help them when working at a job in the future. I agree that working with a group is more efficient and help students learn more better. Benefits of working with a group is more beneficial because allows students to collaborate, allows different ideas or opinions from peers, and allows each individual to have feedback from peers.

However not everyone would agree with this position. Some people believe that benefits of working alone is more helpful for themselves. For example, when a students is working on the computer for a certain projects in fashion marketing, fitness and foods or other subjects in school because they're able to finished it themselves. This explains that people can put their own ideas and will get the work done more quicker without any help from peers during class. Nevertheless the oppositions over looks other important points.

First reason is that student can collaborate with other peers but only about 30% of people work together with other people on school projects assignments or activates. For example, in classrooms students have more possible chances to separate the task with each other. Also people would't have to worried about not getting each slides done because their peers would be there to support them. This shows that students who work together with peers they are not only benefiting themselves but helping other people too. Students can enjoy and have fun working with friends also everyone will get a good grade.

Second reason is students can come together as a team by listening and hearing out all of their peers creative ideas and opinions in a group on the project. For example, each person might have a good suggestion or reason on a history project that will help their group with the assignment. This shows a person will have many ideas that they can chose from a peer in their group and it's always nice to use different reasons from a student.

Third reason is when a student can get a individuals feedback to help them on a english writing essay in class. For example, the person is writing a essay for class on Google docs with each other it helps them talk and get feedback from a peer or friend in class. This shows that having a students help is important because you can fix the error in the essay with a peers correction and students can learn more better together from people.

To conclude that working with a group is more better for people because allows students to collaborate with peers so that people can separate the task with each other, allows different ideas or opinions from peers when each person has good suggestions for projects and allows individuals to get feedback from peers on helping a students with a english writing essay. Maybe good for students to work alone but working in a group is helpful to have someone support them.                                                  ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
CCA58535073C,"Picture your self enjoying spending time outdoors playing catch, or riding bikes, or even just doing any other activities.

Its fun to do many activities outdoors and its also good for you to be outside moving around and doing things.

Spending time outdoors are great for doing activities,and to see what other things you can do at parks. For one, playing catch is a good activity to enjoy with others, and to move around. People can find that playing catch is a good activity to enjoy outdoors, because most people play it differently and many of them can learn how to play, its also a good way to play fair with others, and to throw/catch a ball.

Secondly, riding bikes is a great activity to do at a park with your family or friends. Therefore, riding bikes is an amazing activity for outdoors, you can enjoy riding along the streets, and to enjoy the outside nature by looking around the park and to hear the people playing around having fun outside.

On the other hand, doing any other activities are good to enjoy outside. For example, playing football is a good game to spend time outside practicing or playing with friends, and tag is another game that kids love enjoying outside running around and laughing and playing fair with other childrens on the grass or even just chasing little things that they see, like a dog they like to go after a dog and pet it.

Conclusion. Spending time outdoors with many activities like, playing catch with your friends, or riding bikes around the park and enjoying the nice ride,or even just enjoying doing any other activities of your own outdoors. What ever activity is interesting to do outdoors to spend time on, then just do it to enjoy it.",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
05E5653B781C,its always good to ask people how it feels or how it went to an object they had or have. Its better to learn from experience from people so you dont have to do things they did and ended up bad. for example if you wanna buy a car and your friend has one and you ask him how it rides and if it runs smooth. If he doesnt like it how it runs he'll tell you so he wont do the mistake he did. Always ask someone that had the things you want and ask them how it is so you dont mess up. Always ask for advise from people with expreience because they know what their talking about. Always take the advise from people that you know and that would wants you to do good people that already been in the problem. Alwaysa trust the person thats telling you the truth about something and telling you how stufdf works. People whith experience will tell you everything how it went because it was probably the worst feelings ever. Some people that been in a bad problem tell the other person the problem so they wont do it so it wont hurt anyone else. It's good to learn from others because it gives you a chance to to really think about what you shouldn't do. Take advantage of what the people tell you what to do and what not to do because they want the best for you and they'll try their best to help you out. Listen closly to what they tell you because they been threw the thing you going threw right now. People that tell you things or adivse and there older than you always listen to what they want to say because it's important because they been alive longer and they been threw it. Doesn't matter if it's a stranger always listen because it's important probably not in the moment in the fueture it will be so alwaytake there advise no matter what. It's good to learn from others so you can see what happen so it wont happem to you. Any little pice of adivse will be handy in your future so always take it and when your in a problem always rember about it what they they told you and what was gonna happen if you ever did it ,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
ED40DCB2F669,"Do you think is a good idea for student to identify a career at a young age?

In this paper, I will argue about the idea if students should commit to a career at a young age.

I think that commit to a career at a young age is a great idea, because it help student to prepare for the future.

I think is a great idea, because students decide there future at a young age. The student are not going to have time to be doing bad things with there friends, they are going to focus more in the school and in there future. And that way we as student we are going to have batter future, we can be more batter in what we do. It will help us to be more mature, it will help us to act like adult, because we are doing things of adult. it will help us to appreciate the life.

I know many people that they witch they could have a better career, but they don't have it,because they haven't being associate with career courses. I have a friend that he would love to have the career that he wants, but he didn't had experience in what he want, because he had never being associate with the career that he wanted, when he took the decision to have the carer that he wanted, it was to latte. That is why is batter to commit to a career at a young age, because it will help us to be more professional in are career. That will help us to be more responsible. It will help us a lot to know what we want for are future and what is better for us. It will help us to decide are are future.

I have a sister that she have great skill, and she is really focus in what she wants to be in her future, and she is doing her best to make her dream's reality, however is to hard to make her dream really because I think she is not ready for the career that she wants, she don't have that much experience.

It would be much better if she would commit to that career at a young age. She would have more experience, she would be more prepare, she would be more professional. I know many people that would love to have a better career, but they don't have it because they don't have experience and they give up easily, because they feel that they are not ready. commit to a carer at a young age it make us to to more professional.

Some people say that commit to a career at a young age is not a good idea, because they are to young and they don't know what they want, and Also they are going say, that commit to a career at a young age will ex tress the student and that student are not going to have time for there friends, they would argue that identify a career at a young age is not good idea, because student at a young age are not ready for identify there career, they would say many things, but they are wrong because identify a career at a young age make us, as student more professional and help as to know what we want to be in are future, and identify a career at a young age is like identify are future.

Identify are future at a young age make us more professional.

In the future the number of unemployment people will decrease, because the student are going to be more professional, they will commit to a career at a young age and that way the life will be more easy. It would be less people doing bad things, the students are going to be more responsible, we will be more better in what we do. but for that we have to give the example to other generation.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
1A469EB86263,"We can always accomplish if we have a time and also if we try to do more than do anything. Accomplish don't have to be all the time just when you can. For me to do accomplish more is better than don't do inactivity. I have 3 reason why I think do more accomplish. First reason is, to be better. Second reason is, do more. Third reason is, feelings. There are some reason why I think that be accomplish is better. For some of the people be accomplish is hard to the people because they don't have to much time.

First reason is, be better is because your learn more, you have more experience. We don't wait our time if we do more job if we have to do more job we doing it. We don't have to be to lazy for do more job if we can do the job. Just if we don't have to much time that will be just to done the work. To do accomplish to spend more time doing it. Whatever thing is if we have time we doing it. I work every day if I have to do more work I do it but if I don't have a time do to my work I just done whatever I am doing.

Second reason is do more. do more can be extra work done that will be nice ti have extra work done for the next day if we do the same we don't have to do more. Extra work have to be complete by the time and then dependently what do you do about. When people do extra work in their job the make more money and also they make more overtime hours in their job but no all the job are the same. For me to do more work is more easy for one think I learn more for, another think I just do extra job because I have time and I like too. To more is when we the people have time

Third reason is feelings, why feelings? feelings is because when we do more work that have to be we are satisfy. In other way we feel like when you make a goal when you done. We have emotional feeling when we done the thing what we doing it and also when we accomplish more. After you finish doing the work we feel tired but is not the same when we are satisfy for done. when I do my extra work always measure that is good. When I know is good

I say ""yes I finishing"" and I feel so proud of me. when we do something we have to be positive for every will be okay.

In conclusion, to do accomplish will be the best idea for to better extra work. The reason why the accomplish is the idea is, to be better, to do more, and the last one is feeling. what Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing""

that is most be true for all kind of people around the world. do more is always help and always do accomplish is the best idea.         ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
2AAA5F2F5270,"School provide Teaching to those Students that can not assist to School, How? , well so many students have many problems to arrive to School. One of them is that They do not count with Transportation and they live far away, or some students that have special cases. So Today some School give you the option to teach you from School.

You must have a computer or device that allow you communicate with schools, if not, you won't be able, The only way that you can learn from home it's internet, but at the same time there are people that can buy those resources.

Study from home have pros and at the same time cons, pros are those can help you to learn the same themes that students learn at school, also you get you degree and can Apply to colleges, but, there is the case that they won't have a healthy and normal life at college.

Learn from Home is that you can finish it in the time that you want it, you can spent your time as much you want and finish it , but, what are you going to do after finish it?.

People that learn from home do not know what is converse with people around them, That is a big problem that can affect their life in future, They won't know where they at, or how talk with another person. That can be so stress, often they will feel exclude from their milieu.

Learned from home could help you to skipped school and you won't have to wake up early but, is not going to be the same that a regular student got in a normal school, why?, because a normal student can talk and ask his doubts in issue of time. They have many resources that School can give you. If you are learning from home, you won't be able to ask and resolve your doubts, you will have to search by yourself and figure it out.

We can not forget that people that have special cases, well, that people have at the same time special programs that school offers, some Schools are able to receive them and work with them at school, and other Schools can give you an option to work from your home, Those programs were designed only for people that born sick or have problems since born.

If you don't want to go to School, you must have a reasonable excuse, because you have to apply for it, you can not decided that you're not going to School because you don't wan't it, and you want to learn from home. Specially from public school that request a letter and proofs that you can not assist to school, and then They will analyze your case.

Today you have the resource to learn from home, you should think about it, don not make mistakes that can affect your life in future. At least you have a special case. There are many solutions that can help you and you can triumph.       ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
EEED5054938E,"I

would disagree for adding a one hour and a half hour because maybe parents might be worried about their child or children at school for another hour or two. I would say why would students want another hour of school if they just want to go home and see their family. i would even say that i would not want another hour of school cause isn't seven hours of school enough already. I can understand if teachers want to see their students even more maybe but maybe they have to email their students parents before having to get the extra hour of school. What i would say is that all the students should vote online or in public to see if they all want to have a extra hour or half a hour still because it can`t be the parents only because it`s not fair for the adults to decide if they have to get another hour or two the students have to decide because they are the ones that are gonna have the extra hour.

I

understand that kids might want to do activities for their school or they can stay after school to do it like, assignments,homework,projects,PowerPoints,tests,and quizzes. I usually would`nt want to have another because it`s complicated sometimes doing stuff there and it is just to much for me to handle at one time mostly and i have to do a lot stuff at home also so i rather not have another hour of school cause it`s a lot. If he or she doesnt want to stay they dont have to vote or say anything but other people might say something if they do want to have the extra hour or two i would speak up for himself or herself cause if u do want the extra hour or two go ahead vote or speak up for yourself and do your best to change the idea of the story or idea of the other people that would not have the extra hour. Now back to my disagreement about having another hour of school i would not have another hour of school because it is it much work for me to handle mostly cause the amount of work i have to do at school is so ridiculous really ridiculous cause the person or me has to write alot form time time and its worth it cause your getting a free education but i dont want alot of education i would want to stay me and me only.       ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
F1BB39C5E549,"In a centair time, many of us think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. We the students treat the must that we can do to us califications. Exist a controversy,

that is how more we ca have concentration during the assigments in class.

I think these thow ways of work , can get a good results. Because working with a group or with ourselves , oneself have the responsability to concentrain and do our work. It is only put us effort to aprove classe.

When we working with a group during in class, this are help for us in class to convert more fun. We can share our ideas to do more faster the assignments. Also help to ourselves when one of the group don't usterstand about the topic. Even if the assignment are complete ,

the rest of the time the members maybe can talk to each other.

But this happen also when the students have a good communication and they are friendly. However sometimes can be difficult even the sudents don't try to study with the group or only due the part of oneself.

Sometimes is better working with agroup , because when working by oneself taht can be a little frustrate.

Students can have support with a group , but when a student working alone is difficult research information without a opion of another person. Working with a group students can be more fiendly with anothers students of differents countries and they can be more caring.

Students can show their abilities and be more prepare when they get a job. Also students learn more of the members . In totality this is a argument to the students that they can't work alone , but they have the opcion to work with a group to prepare.

In conclusion , I agree that is more better to work with a group in class than alone . It is a benefits to discover new people, hear more ideas,

and be fliendly. I think is more helpful to students do the assigments in class. Work alone can be difficult , but sometimes these help oneself to be indepent . It is more great have a goup with members that gonna help. It is only concentration in a group or not , beacsuse oneself need to be more improve everyday and pass classes. Work with effort , the students always need help in study in class is a benefit when students see all persons equal to working.     ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
79F917A8CFEC,"People are capable of making their own decisions. Guidance is helpful if there are no choices that the person sees that needs it. With guidance it can be helpful, it can also be misleading and people aren't completely following their instincts. Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and makes their own decisions. These types of situations is what most people struggle with, but this helps people benefit from themselves.

We all value self-reliance to the fact that if someone makes their own decisions they have to solve the problem. In our minds we think about different things in a situation, the good and the bad. Although guidance makes you sound weak, but we want to be satisfied with our decisions. People who are self-reliance are capable of doing the same tasks they are in. In nature, most animals get to be self-reliance in order to stay alive, for example, as bear gets older, their parents have to let them go alone in the wild.

We have voices in our minds that we talk to, and get really indecisive. Like when we shop, you choose between two or more pieces of clothing. An over-sized black hoodie and a regular sized white hoodie. The prices are in the same range, a worker comes up to you asks if you need assistance. Then you feel like you're being held back by people who offer advice.

When I read my prompt for this essay, I struggled coming up with ideas and examples. The thought of, what am I going to do, to make my essay satisfied so I can succeed? You feel like you need to find information yourself, managing your stress and time. The process of thinking about your ideas.

Our stance on the matter of self-reliance in humans stans to show people need to be self reliant because it is good to not distinctly require independence on any other. Others can conduse issues more than solve them, at times. With self-reliance, one is more keen on their own inabillities and strives to problem solve with a more in-depth and notable understanding.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
83F57096AF9C,"Be a master in any area is something really awesome, because you already have experience and you already know what are you doing. There is positive and negative things for being a master.

In my opinion

I disagree with Emerson becasue even if you are a master in an specific area you never stop growing, everyday you learn more about your mistakes and about life and how to live a good one, also you learn something new that helps you in all types of areas that you have in your life.

However in this world there will be someone that will disagree with your opinion, because they have different type of mentality,or they think in a different way.

If you have a goal you never need to stop growing on it, becasue is something that you really want for your future and you want to do that for the rest of your life. That is why you need to choose carefully what do you want, because maybe in the future you can regret and that is a bad thing that you can erase,becasue you feel frustrate because you spend a lot of time on something that you didn't like.

Being an expert in an area is something really important, the positive things for being a master is that:

You domain your area and nobody needs to command you.

You can do the things easily and quickly.

You are an expert in what are you doing, so you are exited.

Is more easier to get good things, something that benefits you.

You can get great jobs with a good payment.

You can be also your own boss or manager.

There is also negative things for being a master:

There are many people that they are an expert in any area

You need to compet with your rival

You need to try to be the best

If you have a business and you are making some mistakes you need to fix it quickly because it can affect to your own skills.

In conclusion

I disagree with Emerson, becasue you can still growing even if you are making a lot of mistakes, you can still achieve new things,you need to grow in person and in skills,always.

You can stay in the position that you are right now but you can always grow and be better everyday.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
BF21550BA5BF,"Dear Mr Manager

I would like to work at Outback Stake House, and I just want to say your food is amazing and I just want to work there because im really interested. And I know I will start low but I want to billed my way up to the cook, and I was wondering if it would be OK to visit and take a look at the resteront and see where is everything like a meeting. And the time where I am available is Saturday, wendsday, or Thursday if thats OK with you. My plane is to work there until im done with high school and after that I will go to college, but while I am working there I want to please the customers so they can come back again,and I just want to work hard and get promoted. And the reason why I would like to work there is you pay good money and I just really like that resteront itself and it would br new for me. And ya that is why I would like to work there and what I would like to pursue there i hope they hire me.

From,

Generic_Name

Generic_Name ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
ECF0CBAE7E06,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, '' Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.''

I disagree with Emerson's statement, because you can keep growing by trying and trying hard on whatever you already know.

However; when you try and keep trying somehting is when you grow up more and more each time.

Additionaly, we grow more with stuff that we are good already, because we become more and more greatful.

Primaly, we think that by trying what we already know, it makes us better each time.

Generic_school made a survey to all seniors to get everyone's opinion base on ''Unless you try to do something beyod what you have mastered, you will never grow''. sevendy five percent of students desagree, they said that you learnd more and more of what ever you already know.

In my expecience I have become more and more good of what I already know.

Therefore, knowing more what you already know and you are good at it, you will become better and better each time, never give up on what you are already good at.

Secondary, expericences make us better, we learnd more of we already know, of what we are capable to do.

We have a company that has to do with Generic_school, they go to a lot of schools to talk the the juniors, and seniors of what they think about Emerson's statement.

fifty percent agree and the other fifty persent desagree, because some student say that we need more new stuff to keep succesing in life, and other say that we can still seccess with what you already know.

In my opinion I totaly desagree, sometimes we can keep and keep trying what we already mastered is either you become better or just fail in life.

Therefore trying your best and working hard base on what you already know helps you to grow more in life.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
7DBE22D9F0DA,"Should your School have Extending Hours in a Day ?

Your School should have long hours because student will have four-day week out of school ;Therefor, students will get to relax and fished there work and it is a great way to stay away from stress. Seen some business have adopted a four-day work week ,with each-day consisting of ten hours, your school should do so too. The benefits This will have on your school is ; students will have more time to work in class and understand what the teacher is teaching . Also you will have more time to fish your homework over the four - week day . Long school hours are good for the students because they will remember more of the stuff they teach.

Students are told they have and sol and the students are stress because they don't know how to study for it and do there homework at the same time . Also students are worried there grads are going to get messed up. Also whenever the teachers is teaching there going miss out on it .When there are sol student meant fail it .

school should add more hours.

Student are in class and hours are passing by and some student are slow at learning but the teachers are rushing them to give what they have and the teachers dropped there grades down because they didn't fished in the time that was given, therefor, schools should give classes more time needed to fish there work.

Students that are tired dont have enough sleep because of all the homework and the jobs some students have to do in only two week ends and its not enough hours for the students to sleep, therefor,

they need a lot of sleep to stay awake during school days. School should have a four-day week off.

School is a hard place to keep up with . student are sometime stress about school and how much they need to catch up in subject .This is why taking a day off or add extend hour to a school day is import.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
E25FE9E05F36,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. There is a lot of benefits of having a positive attitude which are health or physical improvements, how to solve a problem, and the power that exists inside you.

The benefits of optimism extend beyond stress relief better health, more rewarding relationships and enhanced productivity. People with a positive outlook tend to experience are reduced incidence of depression, lower stress levels and are better able to cope with stress causing events, an incresed life span and overall better health. People with a positive outlook on life are also more likely to live healthier lifestyle, and to smoke cigarattes less and drink less alcohol.

Attitude is the way taht we behave and we react to the daily activities, consequently a positive attitude may influence our life and it aspects in a deep way such as how we think, socialize, and even how our health is. All these aspects might be affected by a positive attitude. Actually it is proved that successful people have been influenced by the way they see the circumtances in their life. In other words, successful people see those circumtances with a positive attitude and they see those circumtances as a challange to beat and not like a punishment to suffer. Therefore, these people will be more likely to fight and have success in their life, rather than the ones who see their life as a punishment. Positive attitude might be the key to all the people who want to fulfill their dreams. If everyone would apply these concepts in their lives, they would become happier because they will see that everything including their life, situations, and problems, is under their own control.

Even though there are some people who wonder how to get a good positive attitude, is not simple to get it. Almost every single person that has has a positive attitude is because tehy have had a motivation or a feeling that supports their fight to reach their goal or achievement. When you have a positive attitude, you feel that there is a power inside of you that motivates you to do something or to get involved with something. These people are most commons to have best attitudes of this world.

Having a positive attitude can lead you to the lighter, braver and stronger way to stand against negative attitude.          ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
D3999CF53EFE,""" In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school.""

Some students want to take a career during they study but some students don't wanted to thinking about any career when they study in the school.

First, for example people want to know what do you want when you study if you think is more import ants to take a career when you study, and you are young most students know that is more important because you think about you future, and you want to try to progress you life maybe for give your parents a better life when they can to help you because they are older for work.

Secondly, we have many people in the world want to progress in his life because they think is more better for the future have a better life with your family, but is more important to know what do you know what career do you wants for progress your life because we have many career in the world that you progress better some students like to take a career more difficult like technology, teacher, technical and polices but any career progress your life.

However, students don't want to know what they want for his future because they thinking I was in the school I am young, and is the reason when they don't want to take a career during the students is study, but I think is important to think your future a career for helping your parents maybe your uncle, sister, brother, but we have many students they want to go to the school for have friends, girlfriends, boyfriends, and don't progress his life many people have problems about drug, drink, and fight.

In conclusion, I agree with this position to take a career before you graduate because is more easy to know want do you want to know what career you are interesting for progress your life is better know before that after because you have a career, and your mind have this position to take a career for better life maybe when you almost done you have what career you have for making money, and try to help your family in your life",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
C9E127E1B4E2,"People don't have own decision becuase they like decision for others person?

People like decision for other person because they have more experiense for there future.

Some people need to go guide for talk to conselor because they need someone to have confidently with that person. example: people have to make good decision and confidently they life.

Old people have to make they own ideas because is help own ideas becuase they are olders and they have more experience from his heavy?

they have to make ideas with own life because is important to make own ideas because is help in the future.

people have to do ideas with own life because in the future when they have own family and they have experience from they parent. Example: parent have to make desicions for they son and daughter for they have good future and they life.

Some people have good decision is because they confidently with own life?

people who make good decision is becuase they cofidently with own life and experience when they are young.

some people when they are young have good decision becuase they think first to have one or two decision or they ask they perant from what opinion for that decision they have.

Example: When we are young we make good decision for future but with the advice of the parent.

They have lesson for make good decision for have good life?

because people have many lesson for they future and they life but they have one counselor for they can talk any day they can go with counselor to they can make good decision or thye can talk about life or problem.

becuse they have to trust life for decision and make good ideas for they life.

Example: People have to trust more and they life for have good lesson and good decision.

I am agree people need to make good decisions and they need to have good ideas for they life they need to have counselor for they can talk when people need to talk because somepeople need to have experiense for they life and they future sometime people can mot make good decisions and they need to talk with other person who have confidently for his can make that decision his have and his mind and they need to change the good decision with other person for they can thing about that decision some people take some position for make good ideas for change they life or future that more important and they life is matters what they think for have good family and they life. I agree with this because some people have alot problem and they life people and they can not make good ideas and good decision i hunderstand that because when we have problem and life is dificul to make good decision and make idaes some student have good decision and they make alot thing for they can help and they life because they think they want good future for they life and they want to make good ideas for they life because they want parent happy about good decision they have and they life because that ideas they have is more different of other student have good ides.       ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
CC10B6160941,"A positive attitude can bring people together. Being nice to the people around you gives a positive vibe in the room or wherever you are.

Having a positive attitude is a nice thing when you meet people everyday. You can give them your first good impression if you are applying for a job or at school.

A positive attitude can get you in to many things firstly, make a good impression to you boss. Secondly,

when your team is ready to give, but it is you who persuade them not to. Thirdly, be nice to people if they're being nice to you too. Attitudes are one of the most important things in human characteristics and it also define us.

An attitude that people most adore is positivity. With a positive attitude it can also be a success in life. For example, a great job , good friends, and a wonderful family to spend for the rest of your life. So, a nice attitude can also one of the success leading to a successful life.

However, Having too nice or a very positive attitude can get people very annoyed or jealous. Because of how successful you are and to not ever give up. Being too positive to the peeple around you isn't always a good thing they might push you around of how nice you are, but do not let them drag you down just beacuse of who you are.

Success in life come from many things knowledge, great personlity, cleverness or a positive attitude.

Success comes from hard work, but it does not mean having a great personality or a positive attitude. Do not give up if you wanna have a succesful life.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
197F95A99618,"Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and make their own decisions. Guidance is taking advise and having other decide what one should do. while guidance can be helpful, it can also be misleading, and people aren't completely following their insticts when other decide for them. Being self-reliance is important due to the fact that if someone make their own decisions, they have the freedom to problems solve. Making mistakes enables one to learn and grow.

With the use of Self-reliance guidance from other human beings unneeded. Those who are self-reliant believe that other human are capable of doing the same tasks that they are. In nature, most animals have to be self-reliant in order to stay alive, for example, as a bear gets older, their parent has to, let them go off in the wild alone. Bears are able to maintain life by finding their own food and shelter.

With the use of guidance, humans and animals learn what works the best for them. Self guidance allows for mistakes to occur, be corrected, and allows for people to find their own solution. Even though not knowing anything or not being able to complete the tasks alone; it is a trait that allows individual to grow and better themselves by finding their own way.

Self-reliance is more than the choose and make one's own decisions. It requires integrity and the will to face up to the challenge that, ultimately betters one's character and work ethic. Solid solving capability leads to more creative.                            ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.0
3D739817CC30,"people should choose achievement for self - esteem. because that may help them to put more work , more skills, and more existent for get some thing . but some people think praising is good for self - confident in order or learn . self -confident is cant not help them , because the might be lazy for learning some stuff .

here are reason why they should be achievement .

achievement for student more hard working than praising student . for example let say you are try to work very hard if the teacher praised to student the student going to give up the work or get so upset . student needs achievement to more work done.

praising is not a bad thing. so this is why people should pick an achievement .

let say you wanna make students to do some project for about how to draw an art . if one of them succeed on their project and other one praising him it will not make sense for them . but if you active them that will be their for history of their school years.

and lastly achieving the student makes them more happier than praising the student . because may the get high points or good grade (A or B) or better than praising the student .i should say self-esteem comes from achievement .

these are the three reason why self-esteem comes form achievement .                                                                                                                     ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
0AF4F757FBEA,"The use of technology had positive effect's on people's live because help when you don't know something, help the person need and inform more quick.

First, the technology help when you don't know something, for example when you have homework and you need some answer you can look and Google. When you need know how do model or some project you can watch videos in YouTube and follow the instruction. When you don't how explain something you can to teach one images in some web side and show.

Second, can help the person need, for example when you not speak the same language to one friend or you travel some where and you need to speak you can use the Translator. Or when you have one emergency and is urgent you call the 911 and the police go quick to place. When you need know something in special only use Google and this show you many web side with many information maybe can help you.

For example, the inform more quick, for example you don't know today is rain or is cold you only need to look the climate in your phone and you have the answer. When something happen and is bad in your country or some place your phone notify with one messenger. When you have the long time you not talk with your mom and can't visit you call and is more quick.

Also some people thing the use of technology had negative effect's on people's live because when something is many easy the people got lazy or when you use the phone not put attention to anything because you only concentrated in your phone; however, the technology is one resource can help to many forms. In conclusion the technology is good when you use correctly.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
900D1E184F63,"Enjoyable educational activities are really good source of learning and doing something fun. Saying so, it's a really good idea that we can get the chances or we can do the activities anywhere, anytime we like.

Activities are or can be educational, many activities can help a lot, on something someone missed or failed a subject in school. It helps the brain work a little harder then other basic stuff that aren't educational. School activities are really educational in many ways, anything that helps or can helps study on anything. Studying is a great reason why we can do fun activities with the subject someone wants to relearn, practices, or just for the feels of it.

Participating on an activities, sports is a great why to participate, not only that is good for the heath, but to socializes. Activities is an easy way to make friends and socializes. Participating in activities can allow to share opinions, or give ideas on something. Participating is a good why to show efforts on something someone is working on in a group of people.

Working in groups, makes the activities fun and more enjoyable. Enjoyable is that someone can talk to their partner or teammate. Being in groups of teams or just a group of people in activites, makes the groups work together. (?)

Not only activities are just to learn and educate, but activities can be fun and enjoyable. Activities can be extremely fun if you give it the efforts of playing, or know how to play. Fun activities can turn into fights or arguments. It's all ways good that we, or someone know how to handle it. The good way for that to never happen is that we need to be respectful, and show kindness to our partner so we don't have problems in our group activities.    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
71A9098715EB,"Self-reliance is better then hoping someone makes the best decisions for you. This is because people need to follow there own instincts in life no one knows them like they do and what is best for them. Why would anyone want someone to make decisions for them, People will always want what is best for them so if people trust someone to pick a important life decision what if they pick something that will help them in there long run and not you.

My older brother 5 years ago was done with school and was planning his career he wanted to be a engineer but my mom and dad wanted him to be doctor; He made his own decision at the end and now lives his best life with a kid and wife. If he had chose to be a doctor he would be in school still and never meet his wife. This shows how important it is to trust your self even if no one agrees with you.

People will say that someone with more life experious will help others more then they can help them-self but they can make it so much further then others. Im not saying people should't have rolemodle just don't do something because someone else did it do it better then they ever could. My friend Generic_Name wanted to be a football player his whole life he was the best in our middle school team, but his mom and dad hated the idea they thought all football players end up hurt so he did't play in high school he did't like any other sports so he just went to school and went home. this left Generic_Name with not that many friends and he is sad and deperested today.

Making your own decisions all the time can be hard and at some point you may fail but if you keep trying you can make it big one day. There are many reasons to have someone make decisions for you it would be much less stressful and you would have less chance of failing, but everyone need to grow up at some point and do what is best for them, You can't live under someone your whole life at some point you will be on your own.

Those are the reasons I believe everyone should make there own decisions in the long run you will be 10 times the person if you trust your-self and do it your way. A person should never put there life in the hand of anyone but them-self. If someone stops talking to you because they dont like a decision you make and did't do what they said to do then they don't deserve to be in your life.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
3FE7AF072783,"Soccer has always been the most important priority in my life. It is not just a game but a whole different world for of its own. In the other hand, education has been also an essential part of my life. Living in a world full of competitions and challenges needs so much of a person's will power and hard work then just having an outstanding goal and not working on it. Business is something devastatingly related to education and hard work but sports are also a type of business that most of the people do not observe it.

Lionel Messi, the greatest soccer player of all time, is the person I mostly want to meet. I have always been fascinated by your skills and finishing in the field. Every teenager changes their goals for their future at least 5 times, but I have had this dream of being the greatest soccer player in the world since my first year in middle school. I can assure Messi that if he takes me to the Barcelona's beautiful stadium, I will do my best to show him how serious I am to be the greatest soccer player. I believe Messi can select me to show the true feeling of being the greatest soccer player and to let me see the most beautiful stadium of their team because soccer has always been the top priority in my life, it is not just a game but a whole different, beautiful, and unbelievable world for me, and soccer is the only game that I can play all my life without any regrets.

It was the first year in middle school that I actually understood what soccer is. Since then I have been in love with soccer. I lived in Generic_City and my parents are Asian; that is why I have had quiet some obstacles during my life because any Asian parent wants their child to study, study, and study. I was always against those who thought that sports cannot be a true career and business. I never gave up; although my parents told me hundreds of times to work on your education and study hard, but I kept it all balanced and I didn't let my parents know that soccer was always the top priority in my life. Soccer teams and opportunities in our school is important, like working hard and getting into JV was really important for me, and I will surely work hard and do my best next year to get into varsity too.

Some people believe that soccer is just a simple game which anyone can play when they have free time and have nothing to do. I totally disagree with that concept. I believe soccer has its own world. It can be a professional career and it can be a brilliant way to earn money for those who works to earn money. The first day I watched Messi's video on YouTube had me surprised that how can a person be so magnificent at controlling, dribbling, passing, and shooting. He was just perfect. There are hundreds of soccer players out there who have unbelievable and outstanding skills like: Cristiano Ronaldo, Paul Pogba, Neymar Jr, Mbappe and so many more.

Did it ever happen to you that you have played for hours and hours and your mom calls you to come home saying, ""it is enough"", but you feel like you had just started playing 10 minutes ago and how did the time went so fast? It is always the feeling I have when I play soccer. I never get tired mentally while I do get tired physically after 3 hours of playing. I want to play more and more and that feeling never gets old. That feeling shows how much you love the action you are doing. Money is one of the most crucial thing to survive in this world but if I had to choose between never ending amount of money in my bank account and freedom to play as much soccer as possible, I would gladly choose soccer.

Most of the time my imaginations are so nice that I just do not want to move and ruin it because all I imagine is me playing in professional soccer game and millions of people being my fan and I have all the skills that I wanted to have. Imaginations are nice but in real world we have to work real hard and with passion to achieve our goals. Although most of the people believe that soccer must stay as a game that anybody can play in their free time, but I completely disagree because soccer is a complete professional career for anyone who wants to play. Anybody in this world can be the greatest soccer player but the key is to work hard and challenge yourself every single day to become better. No one is perfect that is why we have to practice all the time to be better person in our lives.",4.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5
400E5AA27067,"It has been said that first impressions are impossible to change, I disagree with this stiemant. The reason

I disagree with this is because first of all first impressions are a snap chat of who you are.

Second of all the more time you spend with a person the more likely that they will change there mind of who they thought you were from the first time they meet you. At this time of peride people are starting to get the idea that first impressions are't always correct, so they are willing to give a second chance.

First impressions are a snap chat of who you are, for me personally first impressions are always heard because based on the few second I spend talking to a person they will always think of me as that person specie if am never going to see them aging. Job interview is a big one because based on how you present your self at that moment of time will determan whether you get the job or not, and you might get nerves and act a sertine way that will not help you get the job even tho that's not who you really are. For example like a year ago I had soccer tryouts for a big soccer team the whole month I have been training and feeling good, but when the day came I was nerves because I never had the chance to tryout for a big team like that. I ended up not getting into the soccer team because the whole time I was worried what time the coaches will think of me and they were not impress with me the first, but this year I made it into the team the coaches liked me because I was much comfortable on the ball this time then last time and the coaches changed there mind about me . What am trying to say is first impressions are not impossible to change.

The more time you spend with a person the more likely that they will change there mind, Sometimes you will like person based on for the few seconds you seen them or talk to them, but then when you spend more time with me you come to find out that they are not as much as inserting as they seam. For example I had this kid in my class he was funny and seem inserting. but the more I got to now him i found out that he is funny when they are a group of people around him but when you talk to him one on one he is like a whole different person. This just goes to show that it is not just bad first impressions that are not impossible it's the good one's too.

People are starting to get the idea that first impressions are't always correct, Job are starting to understand that first impressions are not always correct for that reason they are willing to have two job interviews with. Sometimes it might be first on the phone than in person or just have two job interviews in person and I think that is a good idea spicily for people like me who are not good at first impressions.

inconclution,

Some people might say first impressions are impossible to change and I can see where they are coming from, but all am trying to say is the more time you spend with a person you are going to have more understanding of who they are. The only time I would say first impressions are almost impossible to change is if you are going to see the person just for one time and never see them aging. If that is the case than what ever the image of you they have that will just be it but be sides that first impressions are not impossible to change.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
F65D9047F656,"Thomas Jefferson said enjoy your life for as long a you can what is a enjoyable way to spend time outdoors?

a lot of people like to go outside and spend their time because its fun and they wants to enjoy their life.

there is a lot of places that people can spend their time for ex: community park, state parks, and national parks.

There is thousand of people that cant go outside because they have to do work or their busy.

Their is a lot of places where people can go and spend their time outdoors for example: national parks, and museum etc. their is a lot of fun things to do in a nation park or museum. in the museum there is a lot of old things to see for example: a dinousor bone or a bone of some old animal that dosent exist these day.

Their is a lot of places that have been made for people to come and check it out and enjoy everything.

The reason people find that activity enjoyable because there is al ot of cool stuff to do, and its just fun for them and that what they are interested on. their is a lot of people that like different kinds of things. for example one guy likes to go to a park and another guy like to go to a museum. there is some people that dosent like to go to the park or other places. because they just dont enjoy it.

A lot of people like to go outside and spend their time because its fun and they wants to enjoy their life. their is a lot of places that people can find interested for example: community park, state parks, and national parks. there is a lot of people that goes to national park with their family because they all can enjoy it and have a fun day. there is some people that dosent like to go to the park or other places. because they just dont enjoy it. all of us are different and everybody likes different kind of things. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
A0D37DDFBE96,"There is a lot of ways to safe energy and conserve resources, but not all the pepole follows along with them. As an example for that could be, that every time people is not using a light at their house they must turn it off. Also when students use their computers at school for a long time just playing games and charging it, it's a waste of energy. Not every body understand how important the energy is. This is why bussinesses and schools should adopt a four-day week, with each day consisting of then hours.

Having a four-day work week has their benefits. Workers would only work four days and have three day weekend, they would have more time to rest, and have a time with their families. On the other hand working requires using energy for any type of power tools as computers, printers, and construction tools. Working four days a week will decrease the use of energy.

Also some people drive to their job, and others ride the bus, using this method of working only four days a week will safe the people more resources, as gasoline, money, and vehicles.

As working four days a week has their benefits, it also has their disadvantages. students would have to go school, and workers would have to go to work only four days a week, of each day consisting of ten hours. Students would have to stay at school two more hours, meaning they would waste more energy as they usually do. Workers would waste a very big amount of enegy due by the power tools they use. Students would only go to school for four days, and wokers to work for only four days as well, but each day constis in ten hours, however they still will work for forty hours, as if they worked five days a week, workers and studets will be wasting the same amount of energy and resources.

Being a student and going to school for only four days a week and having a three day weekend has their benefit. Students would have more time to complete their homework, and study for tests. On the other hand going to school requires to waste some energy, and resources, students uses their computer that they need to charge, and teachers uses paper every day, while using this method students and tacher would safe resources and energy. Some students drive to school, others take the bus, or they also drive to academies, this all relates to the wasting of energy and resoruces as gasoline. Otherwise going to school for only four days a week, will decease all the energy used in computer, and the gasoline the cars need to get students to school.

Students going to school only four days a week has their benefits and disadvantages. Students would waste less energy than they do in five days, they aslo would waste less gasoline and money if they only come four days. Having this method the comminuty would safe a lot of energy and resources that can be need it for the future. Schools should follow this model by extending the school days two hours and waste less energy and resources. ",2.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
00299B378633,"Dear, Principal

If u change the school policy of having a grade b average that unfair. Because many students have a C average. So that means that they cant go out for sports or other activities they want to do bad. That's like taking everything they have. What if kids want to become good at something, but now they cant because of that school policy. If they have a C average they should still be able to go out for sports or activities. A C average isn't that bad, its higher then a D average. If the school police was if you have a D average of lower they shouldn't do sports or activities. If they have a D average in school for not working hard, that's means that they in ain't going to try hard. If they have a C average and there trying hard they should be able to out for sports or activities. What if all the good people in sports have a C average in school, that means that they cant play and were going to lose every game we have. That's a good policy to get grade's up but don't take away something they care about. Everyone should be able to go out for sports if they want to. If the school policy happens, schools going to be boarding now, because now students cant go out for sports or other activities. The students that are doing good in school should feel good about themselves but we shouldn't take the other students away from the others ones. If we do this policy student will try to raised their grade but if they cant what happens they them. Should they just be out of it and think that schools boarding. If they do this its like taking away their video games. All I'm saying is that they have the right to go out for sports or activities.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
1DFAE221EE14,"Generic_School plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the student's favorite cafeteria foods. Students would get better nutrions from eating more healthly foods. Also students eating healthy foods would help them stay focus in class. The change to the school lunch menu is a good idea becasue this benfits the students health and education purposes.

Changing the school lunch menu would help students stay focus in class. Many researchers believes that when students eat healthy, they are more likely to pay attention and do good on thier quizes and tests. Students eating junk food will make them feel lazy and make them feel tired during class. Students will not have stomach problems during class if they eat healthy foods. Students eating healthy makes them succed in all of thier classes.

Changing the school lunch menu would also help students have better nutrion. They will be more active after school and not be lazy. Students that have after school activites like sports, need good nutrions to perform well.

Students that have good nutrions would feel good about themselves during school and after school.

Althought other students dose not want the lunch menu to change because they want to eat thier favortie cafeteria foods. This is bad because they will not have a good nutrions for after school clubs. Also they will be very sleepy in their classes and not be focused.

The school cafeteria menu is very important because it decides wheather a student will be successful in their classes or not. The school cafeteria menu should change because students will not get the right nutrions for thier classes and after school activities. They will also fall asleep in class if they eat junk food.",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
FA130BF0072E,"Technology is very important in the human community because if Ur writing it down on Ur phone and you can just put reminder when you will have to do something important like go on a picnic or go out with the family,have a business trip. In the society people just wanna find something fast and easy they dont wanna look up a word on a book it takes to long and they can just look it up on they're devices and there done. Its awful that people do communicate to each other anymore its just threw texts and that is horrible its not professional. and playing games every day or on devices is a bad thing and good in the same time. But i do not agree with that with prompt devices are bad because its like a drug you dont wanna get off Ur phone , laptop you just wanna be there on there everyday and not doing anything active. You can get sick if your always on ur devices just watching the screen for hours so its bad. When i got my first phone i was always on my phone non stop just texting watching videos i wouldnt stop all i would want would be all my devices i wouldnt sleep i would go to sleep around four in the morning. Yeah you can have Ur devices but you cant get addict to all of that because your going to fall apart and be mislabel. And when you are not on ur device your going to feel empty without it your going to be lost and ur going to say to yourself what can i do to be happy again. You can start off not needing any devices because ur device its a want you do not need it in ur life it can be important to call family and friends but you dont need it. you can go workout and forget all about ur devices i dont need my phone i just want it to text people and listen to music. I find all devices in a negative way it can change ur mind mentally emotionally and physically let say you at home relaxing and ur just eating and eating and ur on phone not getting up ur going to gain weight and for some they can get anxiety or depression because all they know is just do be on there devices not doing anything else. i got anxiety for being on my phone for too long staying up and having no sleep and sleeping is very important for students that have to go to school and do there work yes you can have your phone and do a timer how long you can use it for. so my option devices are bad people have there phones up in there face people have accidents walking and using there devices a car can run them over or they can run somebody over texting and driving is a big issue you can get a big text and go to jail if you hit somebody with ur car.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
ACEDBB3C81A0,"They say some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by a way of online or video conferencing. I agree that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because some students rather attend to a class at home than at the school so they can focus more; However, some students suffer from bullying, and they rather stay at home and study than attend to school and get bullied again and again. Attend to school at home is a different type of learning is at your own place you got peace.

Attend to school at home is different when you talk about focus, at home, you at your own place quiet, you don't have people around you to stop you or distract you. One day at high school I was trying to focus for a test retake but I coudn't because my friend kept distracting me and that made fail my retake. If I was at home learning in peace without distractions maybe I would pass the test. The point is that studying at home is quiet and calm what can help you successfully at your school grades.

One of the biggest reasons students attend to classes at home is due to bulllying every high school students suffer from bullying whats is wrong but we can't change people we got sometimes you got to change your strategy so you can live a healthy life, thats why some students decide instead of getting bullied every day attend to school at home. I had a problem at freshman year that i've got bullied every time because of how skinny I was and I was kind sad, all my grades went down and I didn't knew what to do;Therefore, if I decided to attend school at home I woudn't have to face this problem every school day. In this case being abble to attend school at home helps a lot of students.

Allthrough, attend school at home got some issues too, when you attend school at home you don't socialize, you don't get to know a lot people, One of my favorite soccer player once said that ""the only thing that attending school at home does not help is at socializing, meeting new people."" that's of the reason not a lot people attend school at home, because they like to meet new friends, being together with people that you like.

Therefore, students benefit from being able to attend classes at home, you can focus more and you is a option that you can take if you have any obstacle in your way at school such as bullying or something like that, nowadays is more common to see people taking online classes. All the schools should have online classes that you can take at home so every student can study the way they want to study;Therefore, students benefit by being able to attend classes at home.",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
3C693CBFEFB5,"Have you ever wanted to know if your attending a classes from home does it benefit you ? Many students want to be educated and successful but, many problems come in there way causing public or private schools not to be the best decision for them. They decide they want to do school online and have said it has befitted them so much because, when they were doing public school they were failing there classes or the problems they were facing got harder for them to be in school. Many students have done online school and have been so successful and not only being successful but it has benefited them in whatever situation They're in right now.

Although some may argue otherwise, but through family experiences, prodcasts i've watched on the radio, and from hearing some celebrities talk.

One of my cousins named Generic_Name has been through so much and has not been able to continue going to public school. she's struggling a lot trying to keep her grades up and trying to get to school on time. she has an eating disorder. An eating disorder can be really hard at times when dealing with that and school . Her family has decided to let her do online school , and has helped her so much because while being at home eating and also going to doctor appointments she has the option to do her assignments online and also sometimes some teachers come to her house do homework assignments with her that help her a ton. Through online school she has overcame her struggle with her eating disorder and has also been so successful. As many years went by she has studied more an more. ""it's so crazy""

because while having so many problems she was facing she became a lawyer.

Some may argue that it's impossible how she became a lawyer after just doing online school, that its unfair how she got to where she is now because of home schooling, some people may say that by doing online school it can't benefit you nor can it make you a successful person it's just they way to failure. That's not true because when you hear so many stories and people talking about their experiences with home schooling you have to take to consideration that maybe it helps some and not others.

Many prodcasts on the radio have mentioned many real life situations on this subject . One i've heard that struck out to me was when this mom was talking about her son Generic_Name being really popular on social media, She said that all throughout his high school years students his age and older have been bullying him and trying to get in fights with him for no reason. The mom signed her son up for online schooling. Generic_Name did online school as well as he did video conferences with his teachers every other day . Generic_Name has found it to be more easy he said that he is more concentrated because, it's just him and his laptop there's no distractions no more students bothering him trying to fight him. Since social media is such a big thing to keep up with when doing online school ,he can do both social media and be educated. However, some may argue that Generic_Name has to be a man and grow up, he can't always hide from people that are mean to him. That's true he can't always hide from people like that, but if he's fed up with it then maybe it was the best decision you can only handle so much hate.

Celebrities have talked in their interviews about them choosing home school over school and how beneficial it was to them. There's this girl named Generic_Name .She said Being big on social media is really hard Dealing with the hate, dealing with people exposing you constantly for nothing, dealing with your name always being in people's mouth. Generic_Name has said that she's been bullied so many times and has found it harder for to deal with it. She has said that at one point she got depression and got harder and harder for her to continue going to public schools. Teachers recommended her to do online school. She took that advice and did home schooling for the rest of high school and also did online school for college as well. She said that she feels more successful. Generic_Name said that online school was the best thing she did and that she decided that for college she is going to a public college and she is also going to continue being big on social media. Some may argue that, They don't see how it benefited her. It have a major change on her, she knew what she wanted to do or be so how did it benefit her. It benefited her in so many ways, she no longer is afraid of what people think of her on social media. Sometimes people need space from public school and then when they feel that they are ready they can go to public schools again.

The importance is for people that are going through the same problems for them to look and read from past experiences. For them to see if online school is beneficial for them. In the future people can look back at this and see what people were going through and how much they were struggling. This helps to see about how the past was like to compare to how it's like now. A solution is for people to do online school if they feel like being in public school is harder for them or for, whatever reason it may be. Also for people to notice and to realize that as being said multiple times that for people that are big on social media It's hard to cope with all the hate they get. A solution is for people not to give hate to others. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
AC692F322516,"I personally disagree using cell phones in classroom, because students will not get the education they need. Students can go on other pages without teachers knowing like looking up something that they are not suppose to. It also can distract others focusing on their work, or studying for a test. It may cause an issue for teachers for allowing students using their cell phones in the classroom. Students using their cell phones can lose focus on the work that is given.

Cell phones can cause problems in the classrooms; while students are doing their own work and can not use a cellular device, while taking a test. Using any cellular device while doing any work or taking a test can get into problems by the teacher and it counts as cheating. Students can also lose their cell phones during class or losing it while going to the restroom. Students can get in trouble by other teachers using it in their classroom, can get in trouble for using it while walking, or hitting someone by accident or making someone fall. Students do not see where they are going to doing around them.

Using cellular devices will not help students learn the materials that is given. Students can get distracted on the work that is given to them and not attend to do it. Students need the education that the teachers has provided for them. So, students need to stay focus on the work and stay on task on the class work, students can genially have their cellular device off ,so is does not keep them from learning. Using cellular device can effects students thinking on a subject in class.

Teachers may not know what students are doing, on their cellular device in the classroom. It can cause problems for students if they are not using their cellular device properly in class. Teachers do not know if students are saying inappropriate comments to others students. Students can also send inappropriate images among other students.

Although, using the cellular device is not the best device for doing work or studying on a subject, that they have to do. Provided the knowledge that is given to students and stay on task when is need that way, it helps you not to get lost, but it also can provide students to learn and not to use their phones. More students lose track on time and whats around them. Using cellular devices can stop you from not doing the job quicker. It can slow the work and lesson that is given to them.           ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
1A2895AB84D7,"People can check out books, shop and play games without speaking to another person. Is better use the technology and do not use the books because we have to do more things. Technology should do not use allows people to complete because not the all time use that tradition, However; technology should use allows people to complete is better for a job. Technology should use allows people to complete many task because the people can use the technology for investigate something important, the people use the technology for work, and the people can use the technology for distract to other things.

Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology to investigate something important. For example when we have a doubt we have to find evidence for real and we have to know if it is true. Also maybe we have a homework about the old time we have to use the internet. Also too if we have a question about something old or something like that we have to investigate, so we have to use the technology. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology for investigate something important.

Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work. For example somebody work on a office and then have a project to do then have to use the technology. Also have a doubt about a unknown enterprise and have to know about that then have to find that information in the internet. Also too if work about computer's or something like that they have to use the technology. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work.

Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology for distract to other things. For example they have stress they listen to music in the internet then they can take a relax. Also if want's to watch movie they can do that things and then is using the internet or technology. Also too they can distract using the technology because they can use or watch the social media and own phones or computer. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work.

Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology to investigate something important, the people use the technology for work, and the people can use the technology for distract to other things. For example when we have a doubt we have to find evidence for real and we have to know if it is true. Also have a doubt about a unknown enterprise and have to know that then have to find that information in the internet. Also too they can distract using the technology because they can use or watch the social media and own phones or computer. That's why the technology is better then books because they can do a lot things with the internet or technology.            ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
6B425FA21020,"I think seif-esteem come from praise, in my opinion, praising is good for student to built self-esteem by theirself.

expecially the praise come from their teacher, you know everyone like that other guys to praise him/her, i dont want to my parents criticize to me. even though common people, I care people's talk, Dosen't everybody care?

as a student, I understand that means in my mind, if I make some mistake, I know this is my fault early, when teacher criticize to me ,I will so sad, It isn't has a strong mind in everyone's heart, we are human not god, so don't bring blow to kid when he/ she get trouble. they are fragile, because they have different thought, more blame to others, more counter to you. you should try to encourge to them, say you are good, if student have some fault really, Don't say no ,should say:I think you can do it better.

It improtant to make progress when they are growing up. the great education is nurtured little by little early. I trust you can do it or blame them simply ,Let me compare and think about it. It's not in the same way.

You are distinctive! I really think that is truth. i admit you are right so long as you can say you understand by use your way. actually right or wrong is not improtant. but this is serious that you want to probe the problem of the learn is necessary, we can't blow them.

In a words, even thouht always miss''right anwer'', try to praise me and friends, you are good,and you can do better, I am also proud of myself, self-confident make me too strong, whatever they say anything, adjust mind by myself, that is prefect enough !",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
A22BC15DDB95,"To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted four-day work week, with each day consisted of ten hours. Like other places, the energy conservation in the school is also important. To have four-day school with additional two hours, is not a good idea due many problems.

Having four-day school is a good idea, because of some advantages. By having three days off from school student will have more time to do other things such as, they can spend more time on job, sports, picnics, other courses, etc. The students will have more time to relax and the students will be mentally well prepared for coming work days. Due to this, we can also conserve large amount of energy and other resources.

On the other hand, it also has a lot of disadvantages. By having two additional hours every day the student will be tired and they have to do more work every day. As a result, the students will not able to pay attention toward learning. When you are tired you can not able to pay full attention toward studies, due to which this is useless because students will not able to learning anything. This will also effect their grades. The students that do part time job they will face problem in doing that. The students who are willing to participate in extra curriculum activities, they will not able to participate in it. These are the reason that makes it a bad idea.

Four-day work week have more disadvantages. To make education and studies wealthy, we should not adopt it because it makes the studies and learning worthless. That is why having f our-day work week is a bad idea.                                    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
0F634E9B3E9C,"Changing the cafeteria lunch menu is a really bad idea because not all students may eat the food, students may have a aligick reaction and that can be really bad for the students,and students would throw away all the food causeing the school losing money on trying to make the kids happy.

In this stage of life, people/students are so picky these days. Students would look in there food to make sure that the food is pertfecty right. If the food smells werid or the food looks nasty most students would throw it away or they would just not touch it and starve until they get home. Me Generic_Name, im a really picky guy, if im going to eat something i want that too look perfeshonal.

Schools should leave the school menus alone because you may not know but some kids have alergys. Students when they have something like that they think it is a werid thing to have but its peryfically fine and normal. Kids that are in school dont like telling people what they have in side them because they are scared that students would make fun of them. Thats why schools should leave the menus alone because they dont know the right information about the students.

Some schools around the world have money to ah ford a lot of things for the students. Schools want to change the lunch menus for the students so they can be more happy in what they eat. But what they do not know there is so many kids that are picky, so they dont eat the food and throw it away. That is not good for the school because they are losing money and its not worth doing that, if the studnets do not appreciate the new food the schools are trying to give them, the schools should use the money on something else that the kids would like.

Schools should just leave the lunch menus how it is because schools are not getting the information they wanted back. The schools are wasting money, kids are not eating the food and are throwing it away, students have alergys so in order for all that not to happen, schools should leave the menus alone and not even bother to change it. Schools saves more money, students stay happy, and no student would get sick.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
8C880B194034,"Thomas Jefferson said. Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Forthermar, not all the people agree with this stament. Of coure, those two persons have different ideas. Forthermar, many people like to be leasy and they do not try to move on; Since, Other wants to move and work hard to make more opportunity. I agree with this stament, because this represent three nice pace to make others opportunity struggle, exploit, and related.

However noeveryone agree. To begin, some of people think they can't make more option that they all ready have for some reasons. For intance, alots of people have not easy life some of they are not reach they do not have money to make more option. But, we has to know something that's true about this life that's nathing is going to be easy to make or do. For intance, one day before granfather deid he tell my a story how they were before his life. His life it was really hard before, they was not a family reach his five childreans only ate one time on some days. But he always said this words ""one day everything is going to change."" He never stop to belived that. After this terrible day he find other opportunities to make a different life for his family. Is why everyday I think careful, if you wants something ""I need to struggle.""

Moreover, we can accomplish wonderful dreams, if we exploit the time. For intance, People can make many dreams so fast, also thing you never belived to get one day like a beautiful car, a big house, and other beutiful things. But you can get all this if you work hard and. In addition others people can give different life, because you have how to help othres. All the person who never stop work that person always make so many things

Finally, be related everyday this is something special. Because you always are looking for something more than one. That means you not stop in one street you always are try to gross the other way. For intance, one day I was thinking how to make my dream fast and how to get it. An I said If we are people who like to find different option we are going to get it. And that is all this is a reflection to know how you can get everything in your life, but you has to know this if you never go in from nathing is going to happen.

In short, the ideas is to tell you how many opportunities or dreams you can make, if you move to one side to the other sides. For example people who not try to move more far away they never is going to make something different, and that so sad because you never are going to know how many special dreams you can had, but that is going to happen if you don't move to the other side, but if you work hard and you always look for more you always are going to have everything in your life. For intance, you want a car and the car the cost is one million you will buy that car why, because you work hard and you have the money so you will have the money for buy this types of cars. Struggle and you will have everything you want, exploit go outside and find others opportunities not lose you time the time run very fast everyday, you are going to cry one day may be because you was leasy and that is going to be sad for you, the last try to be related because there is the way you are going to find many option for make you life different. If you do all this your life is going to be easy for live.  ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
7DAD3B639FB4,"Many people say how wonderful it is that much can be done if we are always doing something. But do we really accomplish more if we are always doing something to help shape our future or can inactivity also serve a purpose as well? In my opinion, much can be accomplish if we are always doing something to perserve our future and make it safe and way better then how our generation is now. We can make it better for all the generations that comes after us by keep on doing something to shape and preserve our society. Thomas Jefferson wrote that ''determine never to be idle'' which means that always be determined to do something to help shape our society into something more and better and to never lack your worth. If people back then would've never done anything like build roads or invent automobiles or anything, we would've never had what we have now.

Inactivity can also serve a pupose to our society and how our future is going to look like. It can make a huge impact on how we live now and how our future is going to look like and how is it going to be like if people would've been inactive. Everything that we built and invented would'nt be here in this generation or the next one. We probably would've been living like how the great depression was back then but a lot worse because there would'nt be any people working or there would'nt be any cars or even houses and buildings because people were inactive this could lead to all of us being poor. We would've been out there living on the streets with no houses all because people were being inactive back then and not build anything that can help shape our future.

We all have a certain unique skill set we can use to help our world and make our society a better place then what it is now. We can keep making things and accomplish our goals that can be done by not quiting and always keep doing something to make a change because who knows what we can accomplish and how we can make an impact on how our next generation is going to be like if we always keep doing something. A lot of things can be done when we do something instead of being inactive and doing nothing to help with our society because when we do nothing it has a much bigger effect then actually doing something, we could all be out on the streets probably with no job or even a house to live in because it was never invented because of the many people that were inactive in the past. We already accomplished so much because of the people in the past did something and they always kept doing something to actually make a huge difference to what the future will look like. Therefore we accomplish a lot more when we keep doing what we do now a lot can be done, if we keep making an impact our future is going to keep chaging into something more better then how we live now, having always something to do serves a huge purpose.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5
B07B4B4428AB,"I will always remember the first time I walk outside to enjoy the outdoors view. I could see the nice green grass moving side to side, smell the fresh air, and see the pretty nice tall green trees giving a nice long shadow to the ground. I can tell people were having a lot of fun by their smiles on their face, and by running up and down the field. I can see people are having fun it made me want to have fun too. I remember the first time I went to the Community Park, then I went to the State Park, and also I went to the National Park.

The first reason, is when I went to the the Community Park for the first time. I could see this big blue, and yellow playground. Also I could see people running up and down at the Community Park having so much of fun. There was also other people playing tag with other people at the park. Lastly, the Community Park had so many fun equipment to play. Like the swing, slides, wall climbers and the monkey bars. There were a lot of people there so we had to wait for our turn to use every equipment they had at the Community Park.

Second reason, is when I went to the State Park for the first time too. I could remember walking under the trees with a nice wind blow to my face in a nice shadow made by the trees. Also I kept walking and I saw a lot of animals that were not attacking people. Animals that I saw were Frogs, Turtle, Fish, Lobsters, Birds, Snakes, Deer, and Ducks all over the park. Lastly, I saw their was a big river where people were fishing. Then Other people were swimming in the river water because it was a very hot day outside at the park.

Last reason, is when I went to the National Park for the first time also. The park has a lot of fun things that we can go look at and visit animals at the park. The animals they can go and visit are Monkeys, Snakes, Giraffes, Turtles, Tigers, Pandas, Birds, Frogs, Crocodiles, Gorillas, Sea Lions, Donkeys, Horses, Lions, Lizards, Iguana, and Elephants. Lastly, the National Park has food stands were we can go and buy food if we get hungry at anytime. We can take brakes if we get tired of walking in the National Park and sit down.

In conclusion, enjoying the outdoors is very fun because we can go and visit a lot of different Parks. I will never forget the first time I went to the Community Park, State Park, and the National Park because it's a very fun way to enjoy the outdoors day. I will never forget playing at the Community Park playground that day. I will never forget walking at the State Park river that day. Lastly, I will never forget looking at does pretty animals at the National Park that day.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
F5EFA67354E6,"Yes, I do agree with Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill's statement, because people do fail over and over again without loosing enthusiasm.

I have good enthusiasm. For example I failed a lot of classes in high school and I had to repeat them I gave all of my best effort on every class I had to take even if I wasn't good at it or if I didn't like it because I don't want to keep repeating them just because I didn't try i have great confidence on every skill I have and i always try to improve them in a better way I ask for help to see what i need improve on and I eventually did get better and it was worth it because it made things much easier i understood all of the problems I had trouble with I brought my grades up on the class I was failing on i mostly got B's on the tests and quizzes it's way better than getting a D I was glad that I was making changes and improvement on my skills it was the best thing I have ever done.

I have dont ever give up, for example one time i remember i had to do make a little video game for my school project and as i was making it i didn't know what kind of video game to make i didn't have any ideas of what to make and i thought of giving up because i didn't know what to make and then i started thinking of making a first person shooting game and it was mostly like the game Call of Duty but i made a little change to it i put in the choices to choose any gun from the previous games it can be a gun from any Call of Duty game i feel like that was a good idea because some people would really like to have some of the old weapons back and they like a game that is boots on the ground and i also made a zombie game mode i put in some better things in that mode and i kept adding more details to the game and i am actually glad that i didn't give up because it tells me that I am not a quitter and that i wont be giving up so easily.

some people would disagree with Winston Churchill statement because they dont believe that failure would consist to success they think that if you fail your gonna fail again over and over no matter how hard you try your always gonna fail i know some people say that because i had a friend that literally gave up so fast it was pretty sad and i kept telling him that you have to keep trying there's no other choice you can do but push yourself and he didn't he just gave up and didn't even bother to try. However not everyone gives up so fast because they believe in themselves they don't loose their confidence even when they are not at their best they still wont give up because they know they can do better the next time they do it you just got to keep trying till you make it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
B5618012B782,"The influening somepeople ued or beliefe that are for make a money or make more friends for have good relationship with people are rich and have many service with other country are so much rich,benfic,and other things,That he can do for you job or family has the life resolve and don't need said othre people help for have good life.

Influence sometime is when you have friends,the friends say do this not happen or make bad decision like rob,kinll other people. The friends you want or interest is because is the ""THE MOST POPULAR"" in the school or where you live. If you don't want this in you life you ask why are do this?,this I want in my life?.You need thing very caution for not make things in one day;Some people are in the jail beacuse they are do thebfriends said and now this people are in the jail.

I think the influencing use for many reason in this life,you can use for:make a money,friend,do good thing not bad things with other people do. The friend never are you friend beacuse if you have god said don't doing this beacuse you problem with the police,in the school or maybe with you parent's. When somepeople said this is not you friends is because there are not you correct friends ,the friends are doing god think for with have problem or go to the jail. When you need something the real friends are for you.

The influecing is the what in you life you want influce other people with god things for this people do the same you donig with the same people. The best way to influence is donig god things other people beliefe in you,never thing if I donig bad things I'm the influence,I'm the most popular in the school or village. Only you do if doing bad things is go to the jail or make many poblem with the people are closed with you,you need make are god decision in you life because if you don't donig has so many problem in you life.

Influence is not better with other people,you influence is whre you donig with you friends or new people you nevre see,if you want god person you need or change you influence because if you donig bad things the person never want you friends because they not want problem or go the jail for make a rob there not want.

Some peope beliefe thay you do bad decision or make something very bad you not are god person. Other people said if you belief in this is beacsue you never thing you can do god person in the life.

You don't change if you not want but rember if you want the other people beliefe in you and with you influence you need change you influnce.

The influencing is the best or the influence is the better is the same for me because if you tryng do god person and change you influnce you can do.

The bes influence is make god things for other people need help or do something specializ for you friebd or family.

The better influencing is you change becuaes some people said or you familiy same need you change you influence beacuses the influence one day you used for you dream job or when you go many office for job,some offrice said you have god influence with other people work idifferent country.

If you not have or has problem you never have god influence in job.

You need god influence in the futere maybe you used for make money or relationship with others people are in you social class.

Also,you need god influence in this life,you never thing when you used the influce,donig good thing but never take bad decision in the life.

And the end;If you have god influence with other people never take or make bad thing that you go to the jaiil. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
E566F0D20F98,"I don't think it would benefit students to attend classes from home by online such as video conference Why? because they would get distracted by anything else at home and also they wouldn't have the chance to experience what it would be like in school.

If they attend school from home how would they get things done at home? they have the chance to do something else other then school work because they are going on their time. They also are not supervised with teacher like they would at school. They could easily get answers when it comes to tests and quizzes so where would the challenge be when you could just do that. When you are at school you are supervised so there is no looking up answer,you actually have to study to accomplish things. You could easily get distracted by things at home even say I dont want to do it anymore and I feel like thats the risk it would take if students are allowed to take classes at home online.

Students also would miss the chance to experience what it would be like in school. The chance to meet new people, make friends,and just simple socialize with other peers. It would also help students for the real world because when you work you can't do it from home on a computer. You actually have to show up to work and work with others. You also miss the chance to do other things that you would in school that you can't at home like join a club or play a sport and actually do so much that you can't at home. Have that motivation to wake up and go to school and challenge your self and prepare yourself for the world. When you are at home,wouldn't you get board being home all day instead of being at school and just enjoying it. Yes it's a struggle waking up early in the morning to go to school but also it's boring staying home and missing all the things you can do and learn at school with friends and teachers.

I understand why some students would consider taking classes from home maybe they have a personally reason or they can't keep up and rather take their time at home but for that reason you would have to do your best and not get distracted. Being home may help them do better then at school I understand but I think you miss a lot and all the experience that you could get at school. I personally don't think it would benefit missing all that and knowing how it would be. When you get a job that you dont have the option to do it home in the computer so how would you learn and know what it's like.

Therefor I don't think students would benefit from attending classes at home by online or video conferencing. Student should attend school and experience it all not be home distracted and miss many chances to learn new things and socialize with peers. Maybe even discover what they are good and take that for their future.        ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
E1B9CAF68CA7,"Hilary Clinton, soccer players, people in the government everyone had failed once in their life time. Everyone is not complete. We are humans we make mistakes and we fail.

Failure without loss of enthusiasm is the best thing people can do. We gain experience by failing. We learn not to give up and chase our dreams. We learn how to be patient and deal with problems. We never know when is the best time to do something or to get something so be patient. my parent told me that""good things will come to you just be patient""

Although, after failing once most of the people lose hope and stop trying. Nevertheless, it is not easy to start over because it gets boring working on same thing over and over and people give up on their dreams.

To begin, failing help people to gain more experience. When we do same thing over again it makes our work easier. For example when we fail the test at school and we have to retake it we already know what mistake we did for the test so we do not repeat it. This shows that we will try harder when we get the chance to do it again. Clearly we will be successful next time.

Furthermore, we learn not to give up when we fail for the first time. Giving up is not the best thing to do after failing. For instance, we can make a whole new plan and ways to do our work. This shows that we are going to be successful next time. For example, when I was 13 I had to take a test in order to get in to the high school that I wanted but, the test was hard and I failed the test i said I will not take it again because it is hard and I can't do it but my sister said that i can't give up and I have to take it again and again and finally I pass the test for the second time.

Moreover, it teaches us to be patient. when we fail it is the best thing for us to wait for the good time to start over and to get what we want. obviously, it will take time to start all over and do everything one by one but it will help us to learn how to be patient and to deal with problems better than before. Clearly we will get what we want sooner or later after trying hard.

Overall, failure is a key to success. We will not get to success if we do not fail once. It is not something to be ashamed of.

In conclusion, gaining experience is the gift of failing. We start working hard and not to give up. We learn to be patient and chase our dreams. The best thing we can do is to be happy and joyful even after failing. Everything has it's own time so be patient. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
FA5BCD4CBF5A,"Science Experiment

Why science is a enjoyable and educational activity?

An enjoyable educational activity is science experiment because you learn you things. This are reasons why science is a enjoyable and educational activity.

Having a scholarship in science its really helpful because the get to pay you're college, Bring more opportunities i you're life.

Science is a fun and easy subject because you are capable of learn new things and have to do with a lot of experiment.

Experiment is an action or procedure designed to discover, test, or illustrate something as a hypothesis or principle.

Science is a branch of knowledge such as chemistry, physics, and biology. Chemistry is science that deals with the composition and properties of substances and the change that take place when they react with other substances. Biology is science of living organisms. its has two major divisions that include zoology, the study of animals and botany, the study of plants. Physics is a science concerned with matter and energy.

Science experiment can lead you to a been a scientist. Been a scientist is a job that can guide you everywhere you go. A scientist is a person who is highly skilled or knowledge in science, especially in the area of natural science. Scientist is also a person the study science or predict things of nature and others thing like bones and e. c.t. The are different study of science Zoology, Botany and e. c.t. Science can be use in life.

This why science is an enjoyable and educational activity.

My all point of view is science can lead you into all this stuff. So this is why science experiments is enjoyable and educational. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
C76DBCE18AF0,"Many people think that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I agree with this statement, because first impressions is something that is hard to change in your life. And when someone tries to change their first impressions they always fail. First impressions are the reasons why people don't get along because they think different about each other.

In my experience on first impressions are always bad, because when I'm going to talk to someone and the first thing I do before talking to them is judge them in good way. For example, if I'm going to a new school and I go my first day of classes, and I don't know no one in that school, and I want to talk to someone or be friends with someone, I'm going to have to talk to people in the new school, and before I talk to them I always think if they are good people or bad people. And if think that someone is bad, but in reality she/he is a really nice person. That is an example of first impressions.

I think that if you're trying to change your first impressions is going to be difficult, because you can't change something that is going to happen before you meet someone new. First impressions is something that every human has in their lives and they can't change it, because is a part of their lives. Even the animals have first impressions, because when you are trying to buy a dog, the dog is going to have a first impression because the dog is getting an owner. So that's why First impressions are almost impossible to change.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
40C0290A53F1,"American jazz legend Duke Ellington said ""A problem is achance for you to do you best."" The meaning of this is when you have a. Problem you have a chance to fix it before anything get even worse. I disagree with Duke Ellington because sometimes you can't always. Fix your problems, you might not be able to resolve the problem you have and. If you try to do your best with the problem and it doen't work out you are going to make the problem even worse than it was before.

Theres a problem with your sink and you don't know how to fix. It so what do you do you call a plumer to fix your sink pipes the plumer goes away to do another job and .Your sink starts to spit out water again you try to fix it because you where watching the plumer. Do it the first you try to fix it and the water leak gets worse and starts to flood your house so now you. Have to call the plumer again and pay again also you could havea called him before it started leaking again he could have walked you threw it.

Some kids have pets and when those pets pass away and there. Parents try to replace the pet with another pet it will be hard for the kid he might not eat,sleep or even talk for along time. when my dog lucky died it was hard for me and my brother we barly ate or talked my dad. Tried to get other dog be me and my brother both knew it wasn't going to be the same.

When your in school and you a kid sad and you ask him ""whats worng."" And he doen't say anything back and you start talking about coming over after school because. You have to do project with this student and you say"" ask your dad if I can come over""

then the kid starts to cry because his dad passed. Away in a car accident last night then he tells you his dad died last night you made him worse than he was 20 minutes ago just from saying one simple thing.

So american jazz legend Duke Elllington i disagree with that becasue you can make a lot of thing way worse than it ways from doing one think like trying to fix the sink, trying to replace a passed away pet and trying to make someone feel happy when you tried to make them feel happy.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
85E3C840FCBF,"I agree with the idea of a year-round school because It sounds great to me. This idea has a lot of benefits towards the students and also the educators too. This idea provides a beneficial environment for both the students and the educators.

One of the reasons that this is a great idea is that,It makes the students to retain information easily when they get back from their break. They would retain information easily because the break they were given wasn't a long break and that will help them remember the materials that they were taught before the break. The other reason is that,the students will gain more knowledge by learning more materials. They will learn a lot of which will be beneficial to them,not only inside the school but also outside the school. They will also stay on task and be more focused on their studies.

Another reason is that,this idea of a year-round school will make work easy for the educators. It will make their work easy by not making them repeat the materials that the previously have taught because the students are able to remember the materials easily. They won't be forced to create retake tests and assignments and that would allow them to have an easy job. An example of why a year-round school is beneficial is that,It creates an environment where the students enjoy learning and the educators enjoy teaching.

Lastly,I would say that a year-round school is a great idea because It creates an environment where both the students and the educators can benefit from. It Impacts both the students and the educators in a productive way. The students would have more passion and love towards learning while the educators would also gain more passion towards their profession and remarkably enjoy teaching.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
FEA2C3FB45D1,"My first impressions was when i come in on this country. Because i did't know nothing me and my brother. We didi't know how are the think, or how work, we did't know how to speak the lenguage

But one day i say no more for everything no mero sad etc. And i say in my own i can do that to. Because I am a person, if the another people can do that, i can do that too. So my first step what i did to star. Was to learn the lenguage, because the lenguage is the most importenthing. Because you can deffend your self.

If you learn the lenguage you can do a lot thing.

Like for examplo you can go to the store, and buy something that you like,

or you can go to a restouran, and buy whatever you like of food etc. Another thing what you can do with the lenguage. Is to get a essy job, or you can meet a American friends. And had a normaly converseation.

For that i agree, that nothing is impossible because if i change my setuation you can change your i know that is not essy but not is impossible all of that is going to help you to overcome your self for that you has to nerver give up.               ",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
80DB9AB00E74,"i would take the offer of finish high school early and stay after school because they giving a chance to finish early so you might just take it you get to go to college early and probably get a full time job get you're own money and not worry about not having money no more.

It is a good idea because some people would like to finish early then late some of them would rether get a job then come to school but you need education to get a good job and be succsesfull in life and a better job gets you good money for the people that like to spent money on clothes and stuffs like that

A lot of kids dropping out ofschool why because like i said they rather get a job then go school but you need school to get a good job but they giving you the oportunity to graduate early but some kids just guve up on school and drop out of school but i would take the oportunity to finish school early so i can be succesfull in life and have a better life and not worry about not having money.

But some students wouldnt like to come during summer or after school so they would have to ask all the studets so they can agree to see what they prefer to do like just take the classes the you really need for graduation insted oftaking classes that you dont need for graduation so they wouldnt have to stay after school or come during summer ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
4E8ED336CF7E,"Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble

Do they unfairly interfere in young people lives the curfew wants to Procter them people would think that they are interfere in their life. they want them to be save people won't like other people do what they said.

they want to stop adoption at 10pm somethings people like the wrong way.

I think that curfew are trying to Procter them, and they don't want to interfere in their lives. But if the the curfew are adopting teenagers on the street after those hour they are breaking the law they are saying that the don't want other one to do adoptions after 10pm on weekday and on the midnight of the weekend. The curfew want to interfere in other people lives, because people won't like the curfew say something what they are respecting and they are not doing the right thing. Curfew they think that they are doing the right thing but they are not cause, if they would be doing the right thing they would already stop all that. It is unfairly that they are doing that because the dont have to care about other people. I think that they don't have to do that because somethings, people would like it, but not all the times they would like it                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
8BCA5D690FB4,Have you ever learned about hyperbaly and onmanpia? To some who haven't these are what they mean hyperbaly is something you would compare to like for an example he bacame more red than this chile. Their is lots of way to use hyperbaly. What does onmanpia mean? It's an sound affect you would see when you are reading a book or watching a cartoon here are some examples for this word the owl whoosh away flying as quick whoosh is a sound affect when watching a cartoon you could seen the character falling then you see the word boom when he falls. People really get confused with simile or metaphor when they see it or and personafaction and hyperbaly it almost means the same thing but they are not. Onmanpia it the easiest but hard the write half of the people that first start to learn this have a hard time one. saying it's name or two. writing it because for sure I did. What is simile? well simile is when there is like or as in it there are ways like he is as sad as the clouds there are two thing they are comparing it too and it has as but metaphor could have as or like in it but still wouldn't be a simile. You could say as I was walking I stumble across an old friend of mine your using as in the sentence that's a metaphor. It is important for you to know this so when you are reading or watching t. v or something this lesson will remind you about what you just learned. Personafaction is a long and confusing word but the meaning for this long word is almost the same as hyperbaly y'all already know what's the meaning but personafiction is used in sentences like the clouds don't look very happy they look mad the meaning for this is that it looks like it's about to rain. really tricky to not get hyperbaly or personafaction correct.,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
E4643D2ADD0A,"People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. I agree, because it gives them more experience to use their brains more, it makes people develop more, and it helps you from being dependent all the time.

Using your instincts gives people more experience to use their brains more. Some people don't use their common sense to solve problems, because they're afraid that they're going to make it worse. It's okay to make mistakes. For example, If you're going on a trip with your family, and you find out that there's going to be a traffic in the morning, what will you do? Wake up early in the morning before the traffic forms. That's how you use your brain. You think and plan ahead before things go bad.

People developing more is great for your brain, because it makes you smarter and brighter. More ideas can be useful if you put your mind into it. For example, if you want your boss to be impressed by you, you need to act and use your instincts to create new ideas. It can help you be successful and more reliable.

Instincts help you from being dependent all the time, because you won't be able to be with your friends forever. You have to use your common sense to help you along the way to your adulthood. Having a couple of friends is nice, but your going to have to act and deal with life yourself. For example, you're in your apartment and you need to pay a bill for your car. You're going to have to call the bank that you want to pay for that car. Your friend does not need to tell you to pay for the things that you own. Being independent is important in life.

In Conclusion:

Some say that people who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas, because it gives them more experience to using their brains more, makes people gain more common sense, and it helps you from being around your companions all the time.

Counterclaim: Not everyone can use their common sense, because they're not born that way. Sometimes, people don't know how to be independent, or maybe they just don't want to. For example, those who have no sight can not see what they're doing. Those who are deaf, cannot hear the people who are talking.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
64A9ECB1C55A,"Have you ever thought about asking other people for advice? Perhaps, people sometimes talk to more than one person because they will be able to know which is the best choice to go with, to find their next step, and that person will stop thinking about their choice too much.

FIrstly, the person will be able to know which one is the best choice to go with. I have exprienced it when I make a wrong choice. One time, I planned to clean the car. Than, I asked my parents about it, and they said that You should not clean the car because there is a lot of different diseases that are in the car. I said to myself that my parents are right because I can be sick, tired, and can have different kinds of diseases. Then, I decided that I will not going to clean the car. It is better to ask advise from the people that are your friend or family. Moreover, it will help you to make better choice in your life. One time, I decided to play video games with my friend, and I actually had a test after that day. My friend just ask me that if I have a test. I told him that yes I do have test tomorrow, then he give me an advice that you should not play any video games tonight because video games can make you tired, bored, and can't think about your question in the test. When I thinked to myslef that if I play video games, I will not be able to think on my test the next day of it. I recommend to ask good people fo an advice.

Secondly, the person will find their next step. I have exprience that when I don't find my next step, I would ask for advice from other people. Once, I did not know how to do my next step my math assighnment. I asked my friend that should I multiplie or add, she showed me a trick for an easier way to always find your step when you are stuck on that kind of question. I likly use that trick trick, and I mostly find my step. I recommend that a person will have to ask for advice if they even know the answer. In addition, there was a time that my sister had a problem with her next step. It was an important assighnment so I did'nt help her but, I give some advices and that helped her a lot to, fix her step thet she was stuck. I will say that a person should ask people for an advice.

Lastly, the person will stop thinking about their choice too much. I have expreinced it when I think about my choice so much. Once, I had a choice that I could take the Mock writing SOL or I could get the original and a higher level writing SOL. I always thinked which one should I go for, and one day I was angry for no reason and that was because of how much I thinked about which one I should go with. I asked my dad about this and he said that you should take the original because this is a challenge for you. Additionally, I said to myslef that if I get this writing SOL and if I pass this, my parents ahould give at least a gift and I said to my dad that this challenge is great. Again, I recommend people to ask advice from someone to know and research more about something.

In conclusion, people somtimes talk to more than on person because they will be able to know which is the best choice to go with, to find their next direction, and that person will have to extract his thinking about their choice too much. Consenquently, I would always recommend to ask an advice from a person you know or knows the best.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
9EBA120196BC,"I agree this decision because, if kids are bored they could do activities after school. Or learn different things about the things that the principal said. It said that you can participate on the year book. So you can also help those people by finishing the work they have left. And you participate on sports for example doing exercise and learning how to play that sport. And everybody can serve the student council. And after trying one of those you might like it. And you might want to join one of the activities. Or there might be more than one activities so you can try. ""So go try the activities and learn those new things that your learning and I'm sure you might like them and maybe you might join one of those activities."" I might even fo them because I want to learn new stuff to because if I get a job that might help me in life or in the future.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
0877E6A813FE,"The use of technology has a positive effects on people's lives, it help us to get ready by doing our jobs faster, we dont lose the much time in communicating, we don't need to worry about losing paper work.

Using technology makes our work easy and faster, it makes easy and fast by sending email, so that way some important documents the we send to our partners or coworkers without going to there office or making a meeting and these is because using email and we are saving time too, it's a easy way to send documents because they are always in time, we can't stop the use of paper and that way, we are helping the environment and us. Communicating it's a issue for many people and that is why using technology help then out because some people are scare to talk to their partners about task and critical information for the job, they get nervous and make then feel uncomfortable by talking to then, however the technology it's simple way to solve problem or communicated sending a email about the issues and there it's no oral and physical communication with other. The technology is us full and offered us many way to save important project, document, data and presentation, we are sure by saving those document in a flash drive or the computer are safe, other example are students, so we save our projects, presentation and letters in office 365 and that is a good place to save our important task without worrying about loosing then.

Some say that the use of technology is a negative effect on people lives, but they are wrong because makes our work more efficiently, we can do presentation in PowerPoint and take or get the information from the internet,we can buy stuff the we want in the internet and we don't need to worry of going to the store, and even set business or create one, publish information about jobs and look for employs.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
776FBF88E6FF,"Welll its going to be ah good beefit but in the same time it's a bad benefit to doing class in the house .

(03/10/2020).

The oportunity the not miss one class and be in you house is the best thing the can happen to one school students, this benefist the school and the students beacuse they never going to miss one day of school and the homeworks and tests to. In the actually some kids miss the school for be sicks, some familiar pass away ,they in vacation and they not return in time to the country , they miss the bus school and they can't go to the school beacuse they not have car ,oh they wake up late. This is a benefit because they can learn about the class oh activity and not miss homework oh test and be prepare for the next class in the school, and be in his house relaxing and be in a safe place and always have ready you homework oh test to next class and its ah good benefits to the people ho its in the hospital and can go to the school for ah broken legh oh medical condition .

But not everething it's good about this idea some kids maybe oh actually they gonna stop going to the school and stay in his house and skiping the school. this its going to affect them beacuse they can't sociable with other people ,they can have ah computer oh in his house, they not have wife oh cellfone and other guys oh kids will skip the online class to and go play video games,and they parents are not gonna have idea about what his kid did oh do, and during the test they can copy using this class peapers oh using his fone to find out the answers. ( In my case i will always if they give me the opportunity to online classes i will always stay in my house relaxing in my bed when i listening the class ) but in the end this option of learn in his house have his good and bad bennefits (some school in the united states are not using this becuse they not have personal wedsites and can garanteed if the student are going to use this ) .

( I have one idea in how they can do this in ah good way. The students ho miss the school need to call the school and inform why they not going to the school and need the have a parent in his house, then they send them the link of the online class and notify the parent if they are doing work, oh they are skiping the online classes, and they can have ah limet time of online classes so they can be focus to his work and doit on time and when they are doing ah test they doing the test in a video coferincing with one teacher if they and not chating oh copy during the test. ).

My personal opinion:

In my opinion its ah good offer becouse sometimes i miss the school bus and i can't go to the school becuse i not have ah car and i always miss the class,homework and tests, and this can be help me a lot to have all the work in time and be prepare for the next day of school and be ready take the class oh to take one test .

one sad fact:

In the intere world some kids can have this oportunity to have online classes in some countries around the world they not have the tecnology to do that so if they miss the school one its like they are missing one day of his life and fact even they are kids ho not are going to the school bacuse the parents not have money to send them to the school ( yep in some countries the education cost money and they not have free schools like united states ) and they have to work in one short age to help his family in my country was like this thaks to good i was alow to go to the school thanks to my mother and come her to the united states so when i come to the school her in united states and i hear students said i hate the school and i wanna be in home i remember my country and i said thanks to this country for give me free education (even in her they do video school conferencing to the people ho not coming to the school and i said wow , Even they do that for the students, and the students are doing protest to have more off days so what i try to said is always thanks to you parents for the education they are give to you and thaks always to you country to give you free education to you can be some one in you future and have a nice work and never ask why i not have this. and always think some in around the world not have the stuff the you have and always thanks to GOD for the stuff you have ( I always do that wen i wake up).

Extra fact:

In some countries i the world like China,South Korea,Russia... etc, the education in vidio its ilegaly in all school this is bacuse they think the education its have to be like the oll days paepar pencil and uniform (some schools in united states more in the private schools) and they not use laptops to do classes the have to read every single book and the attendence its obligatory what i read if you miss the school in that countries they punch you in the hands with one metal stinck ( like in some countries in south america) and the leave detention in the school and you have to writte in 10 oh 20 pages the i have to come to the school every day . sometimes they stay in the school all day bacuese they need study for ah test. I some countries ( South Korea ) its elegal have computers and cellphones in the school . in south america yeah they can cellphones and laptops in the schools but the problem its the internet so many people have to steall the wife to his neighbord.",1.5,1.5,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0
168C858F93A3,"Imagine waking up in the middle of the night and suddently all the technology devices went off. What will you do ,how will you see where you are going, play games online or communicate with your familes far away. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today because,people are getting addicted to it,people are geting lazy, and people are commiting more crimes.

Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human is having negative effects on people's lives today. First,Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human is having negative effects on people's lives today,because people are getting addicted to it. People get into more car accident because of their phones. People are having eye problems. People dont focused on what's going on in the real world instead they focus on fashions and games.

Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today. Second,Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today because people are geting lazy. People are geting fat because they dont want to to do nothing. people eat a lot and relay on technology to do everything

Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with others but the limitation of humans contact is having negative effect on peoples lives today. Third, Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effect on peoples lives today because people are commiting more crimes. People are bullying each other. Teenagers are killing themselves because of cyberbulling. People are using technology to spread false information of others. People are communication with the wrong people.

Because people are getting addicted to it ,people are getting lazy ,and people are commiting more crimes. The limitation of human contact is having negative effcts on people lives today. Technology is becoming more danger to human ,therefore,if we dont stop it now no one will. If you agree with me in this ,please join our organizations of ""How to use technology the better way"".",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
7E9D8E4921CD,"Do you think student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?.First attend classes at home they can benefit for student they can have fun and do thing's what they like on the free time,and doing. thing to have fun and be happy that is one benefit for students to be at home.

the most thing to have fun with the family and something they can do like homework during at home or study for the test that is one thing that they can benefit for the student. the next they can't benefit attend at home because they must has to go every day at school and if student don't go to school they will have bad grade on class and all classes attend is the most important in the school. attend classes from home they can't benefit at school and they can't benefit for student because tha is one of the most important rule the all school has and they must has to go to school.

Finally student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that they can benefit like doing working on internet and also they can' benefit for student because they must has to go every day at school that is one of the rule of school studen must being on the school,and them if the student don't go to the school they will get travel for be missin the school and they will have bad grade and

,something they can benefit for student to be at home they can have fun with they family and play voideo games and they can do what they like more to be at home.

and they can benefit stay at home and do the homework and prepared for the test. that is they can benefit for students to be attend classes being at home....       ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
B727B720430B,"To whom it may concerned:

For me, Policy 1 is better, base from my own opinion. Because Policy 1 would be better from Policy 2. For students to avoid breaking the rules of their own school, Policy 1 would be the better choice. Because they can use their phones during their break, lunch periods and whenever they have a free time. In some cases, most students and parents prefer to have the Policy 1 so that whenever they have an emergency or an important thing to do so, they can easily contact each other, except for contacting each other inside their classes.

As long as their phones are in silence or they won't be using it during their class time, Policy 1 is a good choice. And for me, Policy 1 is the best choice among all of the choices that the principle would have. For students, having Policy 1 could be nice. I think they would really appreciate it if they would be having that policy. Because if in some reason, Policy 2 would be the one that the Principle will be choosing, there's a possibility that a lot of students will make a way to break the rule just to bring their gadgets, even though they might get into trouble. But, students must know their limitations whenever they use their phones or gadgets inside the campus.

Students shouldn't be using it whenever the teacher is discussing or whenever they're inside their classrooms. Because, instead of learning a lot of things from the school, they would just waste their time using those gadgets. I hope that you understand me why I chose Policy 1 rather than the other Policy which is the second choice. Because I know how it feels like when you don't have your phone by your side and didn't noticed that something emergency from your family is happening. I wish you would be considering or approving my opinion. I choosing the right opinion so that won't have any alibis for breaking the rule of your school.

Sincerely yours,

STUDENT_NAME",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
C01AC1CDDD65,"Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it?

I think is true that our selfs choose to make it be because one main reason is because nobody force us to do something we dont want to do we our selfs choose to do it or not do it, its all in our hands in making a decision and also in a decision we decide our personally in weather being a good person or being a bad person and also have to take in count if we are going to accept our consequences from our own decision of what we have choose to be and also how is going to show in our character as our personally around people and your family.

Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character form by influences beyond our control?

We choose our own character traits but we could be influences by other people and it our decision in weather doing what the rest of the people are doing and being influences by them we should take a position on the issue and to be influence but by our own selfs and not pretending who we are really not just because the rest of the people are doing it, it doesn't mean that we have to do it to it our choose and decision in weather doing it or not, we should be influences by our own form and beyond of our own control and letting nobody controlling us let live our own life.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
D77456B25F73,"We're form to have different types of personalities in ourselves which it is hard to understand others behavior toward us, we pretend to quickly think that we are in control or think we are in control of subtend things in life which we are not even in control of our own distinguishing traits.

When a baby is born the mother nor the father is clueless of what their child will grow up to become in life. There are two types of individual traits: the that pretend to be someone the're not and the one that stays true to who they are. At some point of a human being life they tend to join those who have bad taste in life and always make horrible decisions and by becoming a follower of those people they also become one of them slowly but surely with time.

We can decide to be ourselves to love who we are deeply in the inside and not care what others think of us in the outside. God knew the second he decided us to be part of this world how our distinctive traits would be like when we become older, us loving ourselves influence others to do the same in there life.

In conclusion we we're not born to follow others we we're born to stand out for ourselves. In every actions we choose to do there will always be circumstances to our actions. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
B7291A99BF2E,"The example is a good setting to influence other. The people more understand and accepted by the example. The example help people to understand more. The people accepted the idea by the example. The example is the best way to make the people know the idea. More advantage, more accepted by people, and more understand are why the example is a good setting to influence other.

Even thought, example are more advantages and influence to other. Examples make the people to understand the idea. When someone give you examples for title you will understand easily and quickly. Examples make the main idea enter to the people's brain very quickly. For example, the examples make the people more knowing about the others by know what the others want and need to understand the idea .The example is a good way to explain the idea to the people. The people want more examples to understand the idea.

First of all, examples make the people accepted the idea very quick. For example, the idea needs many example and details to understand it. When someone give you idea with examples and details you will understand it quickly but when someone give idea without examples and details you will understand very slowly or you will not understand either. In addition, some people understand the idea and title by the example and details. Finally, the examples and details is best way to explain your own behavior to others.

Thirdly ,The examples are the good thing to understand others by influence them. For example, if you want understand something you should know some the example for it. The examples make you know the idea. When you leading by example your idea will influence others. Addition, you can make your idea easily by add examples and details. When people leading by example, they will understand each other. Finally,The leading by example is the best way to people understand each other and understand the the ideas.

Some people argue that example is not the main thing in influencing other. They say some examples are not advantages. This may be true ;however, the examples are the more advantages and affects to others. For example, the people affect from the tittle more then example. In addition, the make the people understand then example. Finally, the example sometimes confuse the people to understand the idea.

In conclusion, example are more advantages and influence to other and make the people to understand the idea.

examples make the people accepted the idea very quick. For example, the idea needs many example and details to understand it.

The examples are the good thing to understand others by influence them. For example, if you want understand something you should know the example for it.

More advantage, more accepted by people, and more understand are why the example is a good setting to influence other.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
B7053BDF5BA0,"Do you think older student should assist younger student? i agree i think it would be a fantastic idea. I think older student should assist the younger students i think they would get a lot of work done. The student would get along easily if they work together. I feel like older student would help the younger student improve there thinking by getting help from the older students.

I feel like the younger student would not be afraid to ask the older students for help. It would help the class communicate to one another. The program would be a success because student helping one another is great seeing them work together as a class having a good time with there class mates. Also the older student are more responsible there also likely to be more trust worthy. They would help the younger student a lot i feel like they would learn more.

Then in a few years later the younger student would come the older student and from there they help them as well too. This program would be a great one it would there student a lot. I also think they would be focus all the time. I would also like to be in this program it seems like you would know so many things. I really think this program would be successful to all the student.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
2C58AE2BD566,"There are so many reason the student are need to be discarded with the prompt, ""Some school offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way online or video conference. They are need to be disagree, because the school offer different kind the program to the student will be success on life. The school can provide us too, some career to start doing and learning what they want to be in the future. The bond more important in this life is the school, because can show us find our real self. The school can provide to be success on life, and can prepare to get better education.

The school provide us to be success on life on different way. The school is really good fundamental step, to teach us what the student want to be on the future and prepare for it. For example two year ago I meet a friend on Cuba who never went to school, he always been saying I dont want my expend my time on the school, when i can work and make really good money. For this moment is really good, because he dont has bill to pay, but after that he grow up. When he has to pay his own bill, and the money is not enough. So his Mon always been saying to him please Generic_Name go to the school, so one day he took the world to his Mon and for this he start to going to school again to the normal person. Generic_Name try to be success on the life and help his Mon what she need doing the right thing. So he never give up and he study hard to graduated. So he complete his goal and now he study doctor on the university, and making good money. This is a really good example to never give up and always need to follow our step no matter what.

The school can prepare the student to get more education . Basically the student past more time on the school than the house, its considered to us to the second house. The teacher teach to us what is the basic thing to respect each other and the main thing prepare us to the career that the student want to get in the future. The education the school bring to us are really important to find our self and to build our goal. Therefore the school is one of the main thing that was invented, because for this way the student can study the career that they want it. The school and the education the school bring always was been considerate the more important step on our life to create our way in the life

Some people may say to have home school is better because the teacher can explain to us most better. But they are wrong because the student can learn more doing the right on the school, can have more time with the teacher to do the homework etc. The school is really good please to find yourself making friend, playing sport. The student learn how to grow up with the person doing the right things. The always come to the school is a really good step to build the student future.

Basically I talked about "" Some school offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way online or video conference. The student who come to school the teacher can prepare most better to the future. The school is a really good bonds to us to choose what we want to do. The education that school bring to are really good, because help us to success and grow up like a normal person. The school is always be really nice that the student never forget, because is there what the student decide to do in the future.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
3564BBEC4A09,"Should be there a difference between people who wants to find more accomplish or inactive!

There is a debate between people who thinks should people more accomplish then inactive. Some people believes their journal will take them to their destiny and they doesn't have to accomplish any thing. It doesn't matter for some people to make decisions and others think different. Because they think their destiny will take them to where they should be. In other hands, I believe what Thomas Jefferson said, ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" This quote shows me why we have to make our decision so fast and not let to wait. Because we don't know what will happen in the future. We have to being more active, so it will help the country economy. When we are active the country rules and powers can change. Being active is optimal for immigrants too because it help them to learn new language. People always have to take life seriously because how they will know there will be a tomorrow. We should try to make decision before our destiny makes one for us.

First,

when people are more active by working hard it help the economy of a country. Many people accomplish succeed by working hard in difficult environment and it is beneficial for a country to have some excellent active workers. By accomplishing more succeed in your job they can rise your salary. In other jobs they always honor those who are working so hard. It's less chance to be loser. To find sussed everything basically inside your hand. When people accomplish more is not just for their beneficial it is for their country too.

Second, In the past women didn't have any rights in to the government until ninetieth amendments. Before women were inactive and that leave them behind, but after while they start having job in the government branch by protecting their rights. When women start being active it help them to accomplish more success. In America women are having more rights than any other country because they were fight for their freedom. In my own country which is Generic_City, women are afraid of men because women are not active and they never try to having voice in public. Still today men are making decisions for the women and treat them like a slave person, Some female from my country try to being active to make a differences in my country.

Third, some of immigrants try to be an active in their life by moving into another country. For immigrants it doesn't matter to accomplish more or not they just want a basic life. When my mom made the decision to move to the United State I was afraid to learn English and my mom use to tell me you can do it if you really wants to learn. When I first start school in U.S I was so nervous about how can I introduce my self to the teacher because I wasn't able to say hello even in English, but I trust my mom and everything changed. Finally, I get the success and that makes me really happy.

In conclusion, we all will find the success by working hard and not let anything make feel us failure. By accomplish more you will be succeed just don't lose your self. Be hard work and an active person is better than acting like loser. When people inactive they always behind of others and their life is meaning less. People should always accomplish more because there should be a line between who wants win and who wants lose. However, many people can't handle success because they lose their self to quickly.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
FEC5B79E4778,"First of all, we all know that self -reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow an own instinct and idea, but people should always seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters, so people can compare between his decision or the expert's idea and advice. Although some people always make their own decision because some usually believe that they are always thinking clear and positive, Actually the best for people is to always seek guidance from an expert or authority because somehow it can help all the people to compare between an own decision or the expert's advise or guidance to finally find out what is the best choice and seek guidance from experts can easly contribute when people want to consider to take an action on an important decision.

Some people always make their own decision because some usually believe that they are always thinking clear and positive. As it has been proved, people naturally believe that they are always correct on their decisions so it make humans feel that others are not reliable even when is a family or friend.

Actually it is the best for people to always seek guidance from an expert or authority because somehow it can help all the people to compare between an own decision or the expert's advise and guidance to finally find out what is the best choice. somethimes people is not really sure when or how to take an action on a decision and it can make you fell upset or depress, but there is always people we can trust and feel confortable to ask them for an advide or guidance, and at the end we can just try to find out what is more convinient and what will make us improve our ideas.

In addition, seek guidance from experts can easly contribute when people want to consider to take an anction on an important decision, according to New research. having other's people ideas makes the brain think twice and take a better position on any issue

For example; when people have a problem about life's important matters, the brain does not think clear and it makes people not think twice about their thinking that can be completly wrong, but if we seek guidance from a reliable person that will give us an extra point of view and extra ideas that we might use to take an action on an important decision.

people should always seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters because it can help people to compare between their thoughts and expert's advice when people want to consider to take an action on an important decision, even though many people make their own decisions. seek guidance from experts or authorities will help you to take a better position on any issue. ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
ABF21C9A2160,"Are we the future.? Ralph Waldo Enderson said."" To be yourself in a world that is costantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishement."" I agree with the statement of Enderson. May be some people will disagree with me. So I think is hard to be yourself in a world that is constantly changing because technology and social norms.

First the new inventes and advances in technology has brote new changes to our lives. We live in a world that is sorrounded by new advances in technogy. This has become essential and indispensable to preform our daily activities. For example the internet has become very important tool and so essential that we can't stay with out internet for even a day. We costantly surfing the social media. even if we love and hate social media we are always conected. We want to know what others think about us. With out knowing we fall in a new world call internet and we make chages just to be acepted, love even hate by othes.

Second we are part of a big sociaty. We born, grow up and died in a sociaty that has norms that we fallow. This norms sometime are written norms that are laws and if we brake this laws the sociaty can punish and we face consequences. Some norms are just unwriten norms that we fallow in our daily life. This norms can restrict our selve expretion and can stop us for doing what we want. So to fit and be aceted we fallow the social norms. For example if we go to school we must fallow thier rules to be able to get in school. We can't just walk in with a sexy litle dress and havy make up. The norms of the school are make for your to fallow the dress code. Even if you feel like the dress code restrict your personality and selve expretion. this norms are make for everyboby to mantain a the order and balance.

In conclution I must said that I agree with Enderson's quote "" to be yourself in a world that is costantly trying to make your something else is the greatest accomplishement."" therefore we emgrace new technology and follow social norms to keep the balance and maintain the order. We are part of a change together we can achieve new ideas and build a better sociaty.

So we can leave a better future for our childrens.              ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
C31C0ED2A05C,"For the pass few years students have been using cellphones more often than the last 15 years; is when cellphone just started to be an essential apart of our daily life and during that time cellphones were not allow to use in the classroom , but times have change and now students are allow to use their cellphones in the classroom. In this essay I want to answer a question ""What are the effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classrooms?"".

When cellphones were allow to use in the classroom at first there was a lot of benefits for example: it became easier for teachers and students to do their work, for students it became more easier to find information about a topic by using their cellphones instead of using a computer because sometimes there is not enough computers for every student, for teacher by allowing students to use cellphones in the classroom the teachers they could find better ways to do a class work by using a app that it might not be possible to use in a computer, but obviously nothing can be that perfect by allowing students to use their cellphone in the classroom there was a downside many students started to irresponsibly using their cellphones in the classroom. For example using a cellphone when the teacher is explaining a subject, using your cellphone to distracted others during the class period, etc.

Does were some examples of the good and bad effects of allowing students to use their cellphones in the classroom.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
8E5E6211E4D6,"Have you ever wondered how is it like being in a play? Being in a play is learning how to be an actor, learning new things,and experiencing new things and getting your mind distracted and getting your body moving and in postion.

If you were to be on a play it would be lot's of fun because you will get to experience new things and get to meet new pepole and could even get to be a good actor one day and could get famous so even just by being in a play it will benefit you in the future or whenever because acting and dressing up is every where you go.

Getting to be in a play is special because not everyone is good at acting and also being in a play would get you moving around and getting your mind to not stop thinking. Being in a play will help you for example being on your bed on your phone all you are doing is learning bad things on social media and getting influenced bad by other people.

Being in a play will benefit anyone in a great way not in a bad way becuase in a play your mind will be distracted in a good way not thinking about bad things or different things it could even help you in school being in a play may even get you to constantly get right in to postion when your told to be in a postion.

So I hope that you sign up to be in a play and i gerante you it will help you get motivated a lot and help you whenever or in the future.

Generic_Name",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
BB8DBBD8C4AB,"I agree with this statement, because is hard to be yourself, in a world like this, where the people judge everything in your life, and you have to be how they want, they always are telling you what you have to do or what you not, and they not care about your opinion.

A example:

In my personal life is with my family, they always are telling me what I have to do, and when I do something wrong they judge me, they want to select my friends, my clothes, include my shoes, in a situation like this is difficult to be what you really what to be, and the razon is because they don't give us a chance to demostrate what we really are.

Another example is:

With the people of outside, we never are going to be how they want, if they saw you with a boy who use tattoo they think he is a bad boy, if you are a fat girl your ugly, if you are skinny girl your ugly too, if you use a mini skirt you are a creazy women. So we never will be fine.

Everybody can judge, but we have to be strong, we have to try to demostrate what we are, or what we like to do.

Razons:

We can have a lot of bad situations in this life, Maybe one day we can feel bad or sad, Because we not feel good with the people who judge, maybe we are tired to feign to be another person, or maybe we can think in a negative way. A example of this could be say ""I never do something good"", "" I am not a good person"". So we need to be what we want to be, and love yourself is the most important thing, if you not love yurself no one can love you more then you, obviously we have to know what decisions we want to take, you have to feel good with yourself, with your decisions. You have to show what you are, if you feel good you will be good.

All this are razons for which one is hard to be yourself, and is for that razon i agree with Mr. Ralph Waldo Emerson, cause i feel identified with what he say; I feel a winner, i feel happy with my personality, and is because i don't care what the people say, or think about me, is my life, I take my decisions. If I am a creazy women who always is imperative but i feel good with that am fine. I like to be happy, be my self. I really love me. I don't have to feign nothing. The little girl who always was doing what the people saying is in the past not in my present. I learning to be my self, so ""Yes"" I make a greatest accomplishment in my life, and is nice to be your self, now i feel relax, and satify with my decisions, I desmostrated what I am. I have a beautiful life, and my life always is with laugh, laugh, I am creazy, and I love to be creazy, my personality is unique. and i like that, so I feel very happy.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
838093B60075,"Imagination is important than knowledge!

Imagination is more important than knowledge because you don't actually have to know something, you can use your imagination instead.

You can use your imagination to solve math problems. You can use your imagination to build stuff. You can use your imagination to draw or design.

You can use your imagination to solve math problems. When you don't know or don't understand something, sometimes you can use your imagination. You don't actually have to know anything to solve the math problem, but sometimes is best to use your imagination because you don't know what the problem is going to be about. For example, if you don't know how to do math or you never got to go to school, you can use your imagination to solve the math problem.

You can use your imagination to build stuff. If you like to build or to make stuff, you can always use your imagination. It's best to use your imagination when your building things because if you use your imagination, you can create things that nobody did before. Some of the useful things that you're building can help a lot of people. For example, you can build toys, make video games, or do anything you want to build with your imagination.

You can use your imagination to draw or design. You can do a lot of great thing with your imagination and not just have to know everything. You can do different things or different designs with your imagination. Some people use their imagination to draw things or make things. For example, you can draw pictures, make cloths, or design things that you like using your imagination.

You can do many different thing like designing, building, or even making things just by using your imagination and not just your knowledge. Like Scientist Albert Einstein said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge.""

That means that you don't actually have to know everything, some people can use their imagination to change the world and make a lot of things. You can do anything using your imagination!",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
03CC97D3747E,"Many schools have partner ships with companies that can allow students to explore certain occupations through internships and shadowing opportunities to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of employment. In my opinion its a good idea to allow students to explore certain occupations through internships and to discover whether they are interested or not. By allowing them to visit and explore, they are most likely to know what they want in life and in their upcoming future, and they can get a good job that pays money in the future.

The first reason as to why it is a good idea to explore certain occupations through internships is because, students will most likely know what they really want to do in life and it will help them start a good future. I have a cousin named Generic_Name, he has three kids named Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and Generic_Name. Believe it or not Generic_Name was chosen to go to Liberty University a few years ago. He went to the College to see if anything they taught was interesting. A few months later, Generic_Name started going to Liberty for a few years and finished off with straight A's. Today he owns his own business, and he is happy as ever.

The second reason why it is good to explore certain occupations through internships is because, you are willing to get a good job that pays very well. I have another cousin named Generic_Name, He is the strongest and most bravest person I have ever met. Generic_Name is the AirForce, he joined the air force a few years ago. He loved it there although he said it was somewhat rough. He went to the AirForce because his parents didnt have enough money for him to go to college. After leaving the AirForce he chose to go to Liberty University as well, He absolutely loved it there. He graduated in 2015. He is now working for the FBI and I could not be any prouder of him then I am right now. A few weeks ago I went over to his house and he said ""Generic_Name when i was in the AirForce it was rough for me, I felt like it was useless. Now i know that god put me in that position, because he wanted something big for me. I feel like i'm on top of the world I have never felt any better then I do today. I also have so much money too, thanks to the job i have they pay really well. One of these days I want to buy a mansion."" I saw tears coming out of his eyes ,and I felt so proud, I said to myself, ""I want to feel like i'm on top of the world, I want something big for me.""

Many students may say that they don't care about college which is somewhat understandable. I was with a friend one day and I was telling her about how I want to go to college so bad, but she didnt seem to care. She looked me in the eyes and said, ""What's the point of college anyways, its just like going back to hell. My parents never went and there fine."" They also say that going to college is the worst thing ever. My friend once said, ""Why do schools even give the opportunity to students to figure out where they want to go, we don't need college and we dont need a future either. I Actually like working at Wendy's."" After my friends said those nasty things about college it just made me want to work harder in life and get better grades in school.

In conclusion, exploring certain occupations through internships is not that bad of an idea, its a brilliant idea. As i once said, I'm most likely to know what i want in the future, and I will get a good job that pays well. My cousins really have inspired me, because of them and their story, I want to be better and I want to work harder. Maybe later in life I will be working for the government and I will make my future kids happy.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
EAB74EEE65B3,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others.

Everyday after school my brother and I go to the library to do our homework, when we get there I don't have any contact with him nor him with me. Nowadays, when I go to the library I can see many people sitting there, staring at the screen of a computer without having contact with the other person that it is near them. Having access to technology has positive effects but it also have negative effects. The limitation use of technology has negative effects on people's lives because it keeps us away from the ones that are near us, it can damage our way of living, and also it can make us to become addicted to it.

While we are in touch with technology, we are keeping away our self from the ones that are near us. For example, I have this friend we have always eat lunch together none of us have a cellphone, but one day my friend came to school with a cellphone that her mom bought for her. We were eating lunch, I was talking to her, but she was not listening to me because she was more into her cellphone than me. Technology can allow us to have contact with the ones that are far away from us, but we need to manage our time we can talk to them when we are alone and not when we are near a person that we can talk to. Having any type of technology near us while we are with somebody else it is not a good idea. Therefore, one day I decided to let my friend being herself with her cellphone, and I stop eating lunch with her. Technology send me away from her even though maybe she did not want that to happened. From that day I learned that if I want to keep the person that it is always near me, I just need to give them more attention instead of giving all my attention to a cellphone.

To continue, technology can damage our way of living, it can effect us in a way that we have not even think about it. For instance, when I turned seventeen years old my parents bought me a cellphone, from then I was too lazy to do my homework and refuse to talk to them because I have a cellphone and I can be in contact with the ones that are not near me. Access to technology made me lazy and careless about school. One day my parents decided to took my cellphone for a week I was really mad at them that I stop eating and then I got sick. Meanwhile, technology can help people with their tasks, but it can also make people careless about important things that can be useful for their future.

Some say that the use of technology have a great positive effect in our life, but I disagree with it because the use of technology it just stop us from being active with others and become careless about things that we were interesting in. For example, I was really interested on taking dancing lessons, so I decided that I can just watch dancing videos in my computer and it will be the same, but actually I did not watch the dancing lesson videos, I ended up watching something else that it does not have anything to do with dancing lessons. While some people think that technology have positive effects, I don't think the same. With the use of technology everyday we become addicted to it. Therefore I think technology does not have positive effect on people's life it might have some positives effects but there are more negative effects than positives.

In conclusion, Technology allows people to complete many tasks and can help us to connect with others around the world but are we really giving some time to the ones that are near us? I don't think so. Let's be positive don't let technology take away the people near us. Let's think smart we can do better in our life without being sitting there for an hour or more staring to a computer, cellphone or another electronic device when we can be enjoying the people that it is always there for us, near to us, and giving their time to us. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
F79EB8CBE0FE,"I agree with the Emerson's statement because when you have a mastered you work better on the something to do, with the mastered you get better opportunities,you get better position than the people no have the mastered.

Nevertheless not everybody agree this opinion, some people disagree because sometime people with not have mastered make better the job than the people with mastered.

First, when you have a mastered your work better on this sometime to do, because this people have years to study and practice. For example in restaurant wen you have a mastered on chef you only need to memorize the recipes, other people need to memorize the condiment's, the tools, and the machines is used.

Second, with the mastered you get better opportunities, because you have a title show you already prepared for the job. For example some companies need you have a mastered for the job or the position, is like a some restaurants if you want to work like manager you need a mastered and you get more money.

Third. you get better position than the people no have the mastered, because you show your experience. For example if on restaurant need people for kitchen, manager and dish washer with mastered you get the position of manager and the people with not have mastered is more probably put in dish washer and if he want to work with manager need more time and work more hard.

In conclusion people with mastered have better opportunities, work better on the something to do and get better opportunities than the people with no have mastered. For this reason I agree the Emerson's statement about if you no have a mastered you never grow.",3.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
32A1DC59F4EF,"I planned my paper before writing it. Because if you planned your paper before writing it is more easy so you can be ready to writte any important information about anything that the teacher tell you to writte about. I can be saomething that can help you to make your grades better because if don't planned your paper can cause you a lot of problems because when is your turn comes to writte. you are not going to be ready so the teacher is going to look at youu and she will be upset with you for example. if i don't planned my paper in time i can get in travel too because i an not doing what the teacher tell me to do so thats why you have to prepared in time before you get in travel because you are the one who is loosen point's not the teacher becuase she is telling you what you have to do. but if you decide not to follow the rules is going to be a problem.

One morething is you planned your paper on time you are doing great because planned your paper before writing it is something good the teacher is gonna be happy in you will get better grades. another example of planned your paper before writing is the information you have to writte is really important you don't ganna miss the information so thats why you have to be prepared in be ready for what is going to come.

I checked my paper to be sure that my message will be clear to my reader, is really important to checked what you writing or what are you going to do because if a writte a paragraph an if didnt write corretly an i handet to my reader an his start reading it his going to tell me what i did wrong so you have make sure checked your paper with a message before you handet to the reader or to you parents etc.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
F17E1C91D1DC,"S

tudents should not be allowed to graduate of high school a year early, as this will cause students to only have a lack of free a time and enjoyment of being of high school.

These student will have to take rigorous courses during the summertime vacation and late into the evening.

These students will miss out on taking electives, as well as missing out on valuable high school experience by being forced to grow up a year

Some high school offer students the option to graduate in three years. However, allowing a three years school programs would result students taking extra classes in summer and and at night. As results would no larger be an idea on summer for the students. In they are working throughout with no mental or physical causing more stress and responsibilities such as extra homework and getting to night. In order to get classes during nighttime, students would have a transportation to and school. Driving to school would in students spending money and increase price of gas. School also have to spend money pay teacher for extra hours after school. Another common problem would be teacher will want to work after school will would result in the hiring of teachers. Overall, high school condensed in three years would in spending lots in excess money an increase of complications for students' lives.     ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
2580A540719C,"Yes,I agree with the statement a positive attitude can always lead anyone to success.Positive attitude is the key to success don't lose hope even if you have lost everything. If you have a positive attitude and you work hard today or tomorrow you will become successful. If you have a positive attitude in a hard situation,you will feel like the situation is not hard and you will get over that situation.

Positive attitude even helps you to maintain good heath and this will help you to get success. But if you have a negative attitude in a situation you might not get success in life.

A positive attitude can will not only change your life but it can also help people close to you in achieving their goal because it will encourage them to become successful.

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We can even take example of some successful people in the world like Steve Jobs who was forced to leave his own company but he always had a positive attitude,it doesn't matter what the situation was and 3 years later he bought his company back,not only that he had a heart disease and he was supposed to die but his will power and positiveness saved him. We can also take example of famous soccer player Christiano Ronaldo who was discriminated because of his color faced all of his hardships with a smile on his face he stayed positive in his whole life and now he is one of the greatest soccer player in the history. He just thought positve things in his life and overcame most of his hardships.

In the modern world, if we even lose a small game we lose hope of winning again,but we have to change this thats not life works, everyone have hardships in their life but a smile on your face can make those hardships easy. Just think how to overcome that situation,instead of losing hope and stay positive.

In the end,I would just say that everyone face hardships from a 1 year old kid to a old man but a staying positive can change the whole situation because you will be able to overcome anything. So always stay calm,take deep breadth and stay keep a positive attitude instead of getting negative.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
6E3D46F9AAE1,"It is true that as soon as you stop learning, you stop growing as a person. Learning is what we spend most of our human lives doing; when you stop learning, you almost stop living -because what are you going to do then? Do the same things over and over again? You will always eventually reach a point when you are not even satisfied with what you do and know.

I think we all have struggled with dissatisfaction at many points of our lives, it is as if we have reached a point where we do not know what to do next. Satisfaction restricts creativity; you start doing the same things over and over again, and like a scratched disc, the music gets irritating. Life gets irritating. The stuff that used to bring us joy have been overdone and gotten boring, we need something new. We are always looking for something new. We never reach complete satisfaction. It is part of our nature, curiosity.

Even the things you are passionate about will lose their meaning. We need to do other stuff that we are not as passionate about to know what we are actually passionate about. Imagine me, a two-year guitar player with dreams of become a musician/music producer, going to college to study music and only music (mastering the guitar and only the guitar). It might be a bit unrealistic, we all know we have to take multiple classes to get a degree, but imagine if that was my only things. How will I bring something new to the table when all I know is what the past musicians have discovered and put together? My only option is to replicate and do over what has been done. I will need to find a new inspiration, a new thing to influence my music besides my music studies. This new inspiration will affect how my art grows, which is a reflection of how much I have grown as a person. We need growth.

Limiting what you do, causes you to shrink. I have always put limits to the kind of people I can become friends with. It was not always much of a choice, but now it is. I have reached points where I could not be with anyone because I was stuck in a group of people that I did not like. I still get to those points sometimes, and I get sad very easily because I am unsatisfied with my friendships. Dissatisfaction has become a normal and almost natural part of my existence, which makes life much harder than it has to be. You complicate the human experience and it makes you shrink as a person, something you should avoid doing (you should always be going after growth). Limitation in most cases is not a good thing.

Sure, many might say mastering on something that you love takes you through all the processes you need to grow as a person, but that is putting limits to how you grow and what you love. We can learn to do new things that we love and get to know ourselves better. There are always parts of you that you do not know or have not discovered because you limit your loves. As has been said before, we need to get to know things that we do not love to know what we love; it makes everything you love much more meaningful when you have to get to know something that you do not like.

Doing things beyond what we have mastered helps us to grow and be happier. Once you stop doing and learning, dissatisfaction (and sadness) consumes your life and leads to a dangerous path. Emerson was right and very wise about what he stated. We should always be going after growth.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
E80C88E9837C,"I agree with Churchill' statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of succes, because the way to become to the success is not gonna be easy. All the people that try to have a good success they gonna have failure on the way and sometime they fall apart, but they never have to loss their enthusianm, because the succes consists in fall apart and wake up again, and keep going looking for a good success that gonna be graet for their life and their family gonna be haughty of them.

I agree because, the life gonna put many impediment to have a good success we have to keep going do not have to loss aur enthusiasm, for example. My family came of a poor family, but I have an ancle that he never loss his enthusiasm of has a good success, so he worked too hard for it. One failure that he has on his way to the succes was the poorness, but he keep going wrestlering for get uot of the poorness and help his father and mother, one day he found a job and begin to meke money and his first thing that he made was to buy a bed for him, then he to begin to save money to come to this country, now he has a lot money in his bank account because he put his own company of landscaping, but he never loss his enthusiasm about his success.

I agree with this statement, because there is a lot example of how the people have many failure and they keep going never loss their enthusiasm of their success, one of this example is of one soccer player his name is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a famous soccer player, but to have a great success he had many failure one of thase failure was that his father died when hi was a kid it was hard for him even has to see a psychologist and he to overcome that, he keep going looking for his success, but he failure again because the people and couche's that saw him, don't believe him they say like he doesn't has future, but he keep work in his success and show to all the people that don't believe him that they was wrong. Because he has a future and he gonna has a great success, now he is the best soccer player in the world for many people, but he always worked so hard to get out of the failure and he to obtain a good success.

I agree with Mister Churchill, because the way for a great success is gonna be long and we gonna have many filure to obtain this, for example. I am trying to graduate from high school, but one of failure was that it is not been easy for me, because this is a new language for me and it is dificult to talk, but I keeping going trying to get my diploma , another failure is that I have to work for pay may rent and buy my own stuff, shoes, clothes, and food, it make more dificult to have my success, but I know that success consists on fall apart and wake up, but I never loss my enthusiasm of to be graduate from high school. One day I gonna say that my success wasn't easy but I obtain a good success.

In Conclution I agree with ""churchill's statement about success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". I agree with him because on the way to a great success we gonna have many failure but we don'thave to loss our enthusiasm, because in the world there is a lot people that they never loss their enthusiasm, even when they have a failure they always weke up and keek going, now they have a good success, so if we want a great success in our life we have to keep going wrestlering with all the failure that we gonna have. One day we gonna say I made it and we gonna have a great success.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
08B72DCFD859,"Have you experience taking online classes from home?

students who plans to take online classes from home they would have to learn to be more responsible and dedicated. Could students benefit by taking online classes from home,

Yes I think it would be fantastic idea taking classes from home, it would be a great way to learn without having to leave your house or worrying you wont get to school on time. Home school can get you more prepare by learning and working on time managment,by woking on time managment prepares you for future jobs. For example I have friend that does home schooling she tried going to a regular school but didnt feel comfortable her parents decided to try home schooling, she ended up loving it,she had more time do other activities, its a great idea because you could prevent bullying from happening.

Imagen not having to leaving youre home, students would have more energy because they wouldn't be as exausted. Cerain students have walk miles not matter the bad weather. If students take online classes they could get more sleep and finish there work faster. students would be able to concentrate. In school you get distracted a lot because you have friends next to you trying to talk or make caos also interupting the class.

Not having energy for school is a big factor specially for student who work and walk to school in the mornings.

if student dont have the enery to go to school learn they would not be able to get good grades. a clear example is myself having to wake up every morning at seven am and walking thirty min to school and also working every day is exausting not matter the weather. Its really hard trying to stay awake in the mornings after walking a certain distance. Thats why i would prefer online studying as well it would change my life completely and i would feel more ready to do work.

in conclusion online classes is a great way to study if you dont feel comfortable going to school.

I would take online clases its less tiring its a great rest having the time to do my work from home and expirience a new way to study.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
6D06DAD5446C,"I agree that people should get the help, so they can make great decisions. Because the other person could probably be wrong with somethings. Also the other person doesn't have any saying in your life, if you don't want them to. And you are the only person who can change the outcome of your life. even so your the main person in your life, its okay to hear others out even though they are wrong sometimes or if they are sometimes right.

The first reason is that its okay if you don't want the other person's help. But you should hear them out so you can get something out of thing. For example my friend Generic_Name, she love to write stories and love to sing, and dance, but she too embarrassed to do what she love. So one day I gave her some ideas, but she didn't want any, because she don't want to do them, but next day, she gave some of my ideas a try and she like it but still don't want to do it anymore. But long as she listened that good enough for me.

The second reason is people don't have any saying in your life, yes its true, but theres people willing to help you through your life. But it only depend on you, if you want their help or not. For a example my sister Generic_Name doesn't want help from me nor our parents. But its okay, because she know that we want to help her, because we care about her,so we will not stop trying to help her. But there is times she let us help her out with her life, and that's good. Longs she lets us in her life, thats good enough for us.

Last reason is you still are the main person in your life, so no matter what you do your life, just remember it your life is your alone, and you are the only one who can change the outcome of your future. even If you want the help of others or not. For example I'm 18 years ago, and i'm still having problems in my life, but there are people that are willing to help me, but i'm scared at no matter what i'm still feeling down with stuff. But no matter what they are still willing to help me. And i'm happy, so yeah thats good for me.

So basically, NO MATTER WHAT THERE'S ALWAYES WILL BE PEOPLE WHO WANTS TO HELP YOU. So its good to get some advice and wisdom from others. even though you don't want the help, its still good to get some advice from others.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
06C9FC1267BB,"Do people accomplish more if they are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Olympic people did not just sit at home and got an Olympic Golden medal for nothing, they worked hard to achieve their goals. Yes, you always have to do something to become the succeed person that you want to become, to reach and achieve your goals, and to stay active and social with others.

In my native country of Generic_City people always work hard, to get money, feed their families, and also teach their kids how to succeed in school and other athletic stuff, with the bad community that we have in their. As well as here a lot of people study and work hard to succeed. For example, at Generic_school we have a cooking class, they always push us forward and try to teach us new methods how to cook and seasoning the food, that gives a huge opportunity for the students who want to do it for living in the future.

Another reason, is that it will be twice as hard if you say I want to achieve this goal at the end of this semester, but you are not working to improve your self to achieve it. This is problem that everyone have, like on our swimming team I had a really difficult goal to achieve, I started to push my self to the limit and work as hard as everyone else just to achieve it. And at the end of the season I did achieve it, which was to get a time that under 35:00 seconds, I shock myself and made my coach proud of me be achieving it.

Finally by working outside, or joining an athletic team, or vising an old friends it's another really good way to staying active and social with others, and talking to other people is another great way to solve a lot of problems, specially when you are sad or having a bad time.

Other's may think that staying not active for a bit or at all is a good way, they think that because having a time alone with yourself kind of make you think what is happening around you, However, if you fill your time with friends and activities that you like to do, you will not feel want to be alone because you will have a good friends all over you all the time, and they will help you to reach the goals that you want to achieve.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
AD5F7E8C127F,"It is a good idea for students to finish High School in three years? many students graduated from high school in a very short period. But, do you know if the student knows what he/she needs to know?. In some cases students didn't remenber something from high school. Many students forget everything that they learned when is Summer or when they stop to go to the school, in a very short time. It depend from the knowledge of a students if he/she can take everything on his/her heat. May be more time led the students to know what they want to do after the High School, and have elective classes can help the students to be a good worker in the future because they are more creative.

Depend from the knowledge of the student if he/she can take everything on his/her heat because some students have the capacity to learn a lot without forgered and other not, possibly they have apathy in some classes or they are more interested in other things since in some school districts offer progams that can contein clases that students don't want to learn. But, it can be very helpfull for the students that want to graduate so fast from the high school becuse may be they want to work without a interuption from high school's things or the want to go the colledge without they had a lot of time in high school. Also, some students think that have the capacity to graduate from high school in a short time and other prefert to graduate with the normal years because some students want to have the advanced diploma that can give you goods oprtunities.

May be more time led the students to know what they want to do after high school because some students graduated so fast that they didn't thing correcly what they want to be or what to do after the high, someway you have do to something in your life that can help you to live ecconimicaly between the world. For example, you are graduate today but in a week or a month you are doing nothing because you don't know what you want to do but you need something with your life. Also, if you want to graduate so fast from high school you need a plan like; i'll work after high school because i need money, or i want to study more because i think i need to know more and i want in my future. For example: the people who work after high school is the people that knows whar they want without matter the time that they took in the high school and the people who still stiding is because they arenot ready to know what they want or they still studing for a carrer.

Have elective classes can help the students to be a good worker in the future because they are more creative, and elective clasess led the students to learnd new things that can help them in the future and in their usually life. For example: if they take an art class they will be more creative, if they take a music art they can have their own record. Also , elective class give more oportunities that a progam that conteins the usually class and borred. Finally, summer is a good time to take a break from high school and you have the oportunity to be in a class

Online if it's difficult for you to remenber something during that time.

In conclusion, some programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years are good for the students who knows what they want to do after the high schools like if they want to work or if they will still studing. Also take a little bit time to graduate is not to bad because you never will to know what new things can you learn in the elapse of the time you keep have the oportunity to think more in what to do in the future. Also, if you have the capacity to remenber things for a log time is not too bad the idea to graduate in three years. The only thing that a student need to know is nake a plan for the future with clear ideas and be sure in what he/she wants.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
367781F47105,"Most students in high school who would be looking forward to attend college barely have enough time to even get a part time job. They would work as hard as they could for a better and brighter future. For that specific reason,committing a career by the time they enter high school would be a bad idea for the students. They would need more knowledges,they would be too young to to decide,and that could also ruin their dreams. Students should not commit a career by the time they enter high school because they would not benefit from it.

firstly to begin with,lack of knowledges could not only destroy their dreams,but also them. They would not have enough experience. Everything would be confusing for them because they didn't have a chance to learn them back in high school. One thing for sure,they wouldn't be good at it as well as they would be if they finished high school and attended college. Also,they wouldn't be as open as they should be.

Secondly another,being young and have to decide something that is going to be a big part of their future is the hardest decision. They might regret it in the future. There is a fifty percent chance that they'd change their mind when they grow up. When they are young,scared,and have pressure on them they usually make the worst decision,but later in life when they would finally realize it. It'll be too late to fix it. They also would even blame their parents in some kind of way.

Also,that one decision can ruin their life and dreams completely. They wouldn't even be interested in going to college. They might drop out high school when they would start recieving checks because they need money and they get it at least every week,""so what's the point of going to college"",they would think. They would also need more time to think and decide what they really want before choosing something they might regret.

In conclusion,not only high school students,but every other kids in general have the right to have enough time to decide what they want when they feel ready to. They need to finish high school,go to college,and have a chance to choose what they want to be. When they don't have enough experience they are usually shy and scared when doing something because they don't know what they are doing. When this happen,the kid can blame whoever he or she wants because his or her parents and the school guidance should have sat down with this kid and tell the kid all about high school,college,career,and better future because that's what they are here for.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
81D266D94D6D,"Do we get astonished when people behaviors change over time? This makes us surprised and wonder because of their first impressions to us. I disagree that, first impressions are almost impossible to change. People changes all the time just like how the world moves every second. First impressions are possible to change. A behavior is a conduct of oneself in a particular way. A person's character is similar to how a pregnancy grows. When a woman is pregnant, you may be unable to tell but as times goes on, it is definitely going to show.

People hide their true and real behaviors to get what they need or want.

In today's world, struggles and difficulties are playing a very huge role in modern societies. Needs are the most crucial things in life. Some examples of needs are shelter, clothes and foods. We need all these to survive in life and we are going to lack something necessary, desirable or useful when we have no one to provide all those needs. So a person can act in a good way when you meet them for the first time because they just want to accomplish some goals. Last time, I was watching a Ghanaian movie with my family. In the movie, a man named Mr. Bright was very poor. He couldn't cater for his wife and three daughters so, he decided to deceive every rich or wealthy woman he meets the first time. His first impressions to them was to act and brag as a wealthy man who travels to foreign countries to hoax the women and get some money to cater for his family. You see how poverty makes a person behaves? So first impressions are possible to change because some factors affect humans all the time.

Sometimes relationship issues and depressions makes people behaviors change.

Marriage is a union between two people in which no one can separate that. No one gets married to his or her nemesis so bad pressures from our partners affect our characters. Depression makes people sad, causes difficulty in thinking and concentrating. Two years ago, I met a girl called Generic_Name. She was so isolated and sad. I decide to ask what was going on. Immediately I began to talk, she shouted as if I was a monster but later on I realized she was being bullied by some guys in our school. So the counselors helped her out and we became very close friends. I realized she was very respectful, kind and good. So how we see people for the first time doesn't mean that is how they are. People change all the time.

Peer pressures and bad friends make people characters change to a different level.

You will meet a person who was respectful for the first time but later on, you will find the same person talking back and arguing with their teachers in a very bad way. Bad friends are the worst thing in life. They can affect your future and perspectives. A girl who was very shy to talk in my class became the most disrespectful student in our class all because she joined some five bad girls in our school and after that, she decide to live the life she wants which was very bad. Our teachers know the road to success so they have to be respected and treated in a very nice way. No teacher wants his or her students to fail and every teacher wants to be awarded by the good efforts of their students. First impressions are possible to change all the time.

""Every coin has two faces"" so, we must deal with people in a very pleasant, patience and respectful way. A person may be good at the first time but changes later whiles a person may be bad at the first time but changes later because some factors like needs, depressions and poverty are affecting them. How a person behaves the first time you meet them may change all the time. And if we understands how the world is moving every seconds we all going to get peace!                ",4.5,4.0,4.5,5.0,3.5,5.0
E04208981449,"No! it is not a good idea to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. People think the actual life of a person starts after the high school but most of the students wants to graduate early to go collage or start working. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.

When the student grow, their interest of subject changes because they came out in a real world. They observe from their around,what they want to do and what they want to be but in early graduation they have only choices to complete requirement courses in given time which make them specific and confuse in collage. When they go to collage they have some specific options to choose courses, if they want to do something different from what the choices they have they need to take elective courses in collage which make the study more harder than what they have. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.

If the student did the early graduation and planing to take admission in collage and get admission in course, what they want to persuade .The classes they took in the high school are only for graduation requirement and the study you want to persuade is different then the elective classes ,you need to take extra classes in summer or night time to complete your graduation credits to complete the course. It is important to do four year high school graduation ,in the first year of high school ,they understand what they want to do in future and start taking those classes which help them to graduate early from collage. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.

When the student did the early graduation and they want to go in collage, and take the admission in a course which the student have no high school credits and the student never took in school. They need to take a extra classes in summer break or in the evening time. When you are in collage you need to do some internship in the evening time , if you are study skillful course, so you can understand practically but you have extra classes in the evening time , its difficult to do job or internship in the evening time. Collage education is harder but if you have extra classes in the evening and in summer break, you do not have the time took some time off from collage and job and do some vacations. Because they want to graduate early, they have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.

They have only time to complete their requirement courses for early graduation. They do not have the option to take elective courses in high school which make them confuse in collage; what they want to do, they need to take extra classes ,and they have no vacation for relaxation.   ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
5BE99F2E4030,"Have you ever been thinking about doing something fun and active outdoors with your friends and family? Well, I'm going to share with you some ideas of having a great time outside. I like to invite my friends over and play with my dog outside. Or if you and your family are going on a trip or vacation, you might go to the beach. But what is it that makes these activities fun? Sometimes you may not feel like going outside and just want to stay inside and play video games, which is fine sometimes but you can't just play video games all the time. You should go outside and be active more often.

Like I said, if you have a dog you should always play with them because it's fun for both of you! Dogs tend to make everyone feel happier inside and they help reduce stress. Another great outdoor activity would include playing sports. Playing sports is one of the most fun activities you can do outside with other people. Sports like basketball, soccer, football, baseball, volleyball are all great fun activities for outside! One amazing enjoyable activity would include going a near by park because theres so much to do there! You can do a variety of fun activities such as playing with your dog, playing a sport, you can go on the swings, you can go on the slide, run, jump, you can have so much fun at parks!

Sometimes when I get stressed or upset, I like to go outside with my dog and just observe the great outdoors. It makes me feel a little bit better and my dog helps me reduce my stress. I love my dog so much and so do a lot of other people. They are really fun to play with and spend time with. Going on walks is fun for me and my dog. Walking your dog in the neighborhood is a great way to get out and be active.

Doing outdoor activities is great for everyone because you can have fun with all your friends and family and feel strong and energetic. Even if you don't like the activity, you should give it a try. Or, if you're feeling down, maybe an outdoor activity will make you fell better.

I talked to you about the benefits and the different ways you can have an enjoyable time outside. I recommend that you try doing one of these activities and spend time with your friends and family. Maybe going outside will be your new favorite thing!                ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5
F7DF6ABE8573,"I strongly believe that technology is positive on human life because of all the effects it had on us in the past and present. Such as: technological advancements, you can talk to people easier, caused scientific break throughs which made us go further in life, and it also gave us security or protection.

The technological advancements are practically everywhere because everything we use is technology. It has helped us with new vehicles that could possibly be more fuel efficient and possible will create more safety in the cars since it's easy to hurt someone in a crash. It helped us in school and made us understand things such as looking up answers you dont know or checking when the next test is. It inspires people to think of other ways we can advance our technology state currently.

Its really easy to talk to people because it doesnt take that much effort in order to have a conversation. The news is one example because it tells us whats happening even if they are far away from us, we can still hear them. The weather could change into a disaster and they would tell us to evacuate. It allows us to talk to relatives that live in other areas or countries. It could let us see political debates and see whats happening in other areas.

Without technology we wouldn't have had any scientific break throughs because it moslty helped us with everything in life. An example of this would be us landing on the moon which is a important day for the people because it showed that we could do really big things. If people did not take the time to study and think about the different scenarios then we would not have those outcomes. It helps us by looking up something we dont understand on the internet and in five seconds you could finally understand whatever you were trying to look up.

One thing that makes us feel safe would be your own home but what if someone broke in and had bad intentions. There would be an alarm system that would ring and call the police to indicate that there was a intruder. It gives us security by giving us locks on important things such as banks so no one can enter it unless they knew your password or any other necessity.

Technology definitely played a huge role in our daily life and the evidence shows because everything we do involves technology or is something about technology. I strongly believe that technology doesn't stop human interaction but helps builds it up. I think this because we can text friends, text family, work on a project, or do school related stuff with it. If we keep on making up better technology or improve it then I believe it will make discover or invent big things that will push us into the future.",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
EDA0DCA3FC41,"I don't think that school districts should allow students to graduate early. I believe that this is a bad idea because students have to take more classes than what you usually take, students would have to stay after school or maybe even take summer school, so they can get enough credits to graduate early, and students would be very stressed having to learn all this material for each of their classes, since they won't be taking any electives. For these reasons, I don't think school districts should allow students to graduate early.

Students who are graduating early, will have to take extra classes during the school year, so that they can earn the credits for their classes. In many schools, you have to have at least four credits in one subject, so that means the student will most likely have to take two classes of one subject to earn the credits for that one specific subject. Some students graduating early, might have a difficult time being all caught up in each of their classes, which can lead to them having to stay after school to take tutoring classes in case they don't understand the material being taught.

Most students, will either have to take school during the summer or they stay after school to take extra classes. Students who stay after or do summer school do this, so that they can earn all the credits they need to graduate early. Students who choose to do summer school don't have to take that many classes when they go back to school, since they already took some classes during the summer. Students who choose to stay after school to take extra classes, will have to stay in school longer, so they can learn all the material for the subjects that they are taking after school.

Students will be stressed and under pressure when it comes to learning and studying for each of their classes. They will be stressed because they're going to have to study for a lot of their classes, when they take tests and sometimes they can have tests in multiple classes on the same day, which means they are going to have to study for multiple classes. Same thing applies with homework, they will feel under pressure to get all their work done. They wouldn't be taking any electives, so that means all their classes will be hard, since elective classes are usually easy.

This is why I think that graduating early is a bad idea, because students will be very tired and stressed trying to catch up on school work. If you do four years of High School instead of three years, everything will go a lot slower than three years and also you will be less stressed, when it comes to catching up on school because you will have less classes to worry about. This is why it's better to do four years of High School.        ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0
5BF6D0C37809,"I agree

If you wanna get a healthy life , would you change it ?

change the schools menu gonna be a great opportunity to improve the kids healthy because they will eat less fast food and junk food, they will get a good health. the schools will spend less money buying good food for their students, and the some students with overweight will loose weight.

it has been said that eat fruits and vegetables are a good way to start a good feeding, these kinds of foods got a lot of good tings on like protein and fiber. In fact some kinds of foods like hamburgers, pizza, candies, etc are pretty bad for your feeding and healthy because they got many sugars, and calories on .In fact eliminating those kinds of junk food or fast food would a god opportunity to improve student's health.

The schools in the country spend millions and millions of dollars every year on fast food. Some fast food are really expensive, moreover some schools would like to earn more money and spend that money on education. in fact, that is a good chance to start earning money.

Some students with overweight have problems in school, like having bad grades and bulling . By changing the schools menu will allow the students to loose weight in fact salads, fruits, and vegetables would permit students to loose weight and also it will let then to be in a good shape. To be in a good shape would allow you to get good grades in classes as PE. Some students have bulling problems for overweight, by having a good shape would let them to stop it.

In conclusion changing the schools menu would be a good idea because the students will get healthier food, the schools will have an extra chance to expend less money and give a better education for students, and having a good shape would improve student's grades and will stop other issues on their daily lives.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
3E170458E9A1,"I

disagree that first impressions are almost impossible to change because the people may still get used to the place and take time know get how around work-

site and they can get loss on know we to go ,

the can have a bad day we thing happen like they car stop work and there have to ride a bus there but there traffic on the road were job site is, the can have disable that make the slow at do the work and it made take time to finisher the work,

and that why disagree we first impression are almost impossible to change but we all have bad day and other may still get use to the place and fewer have disable that we have to live with life forever but do hard work , never gave up,

a map in your phone to so you no we you go or get use to the place and one your boss may gave you a raise or you can be the next boss.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
A1DE235AFFC8,"What are we in the future. Who are we now from then. How did we get this way. The fact is a lot of people are born everyday. We can not stop who people are and become. Character traits start in ones teenage years. When you grow big you keep some and throw some. If it was your choice or some else who influence. There are a lot of people who change them selves. People who change for others . There is a lot of ways to become you.

When you know who you want to be as a person thats when you pick up traits. When you want to be something you start learning things. You can't have character if you don't want to be someone. Character traits are things people notice about you. Like right now there are to Women right now one is dressed nice has done her hair. She like to be fancy she blow her nose outside. She teaches Spanish I think so she travels for sure. She actually beautiful so you know she married. This another women is dressed causal and is wear a school jacket. She has a bun

But seems to be nice. She teaches science she most be smarts.

You thoughts of a lot of traits for them. How do you think they built them. They lived in different house and different schools and have a lot of different traits. Everyone can different trait and same one. You can never find someone with all the same traits. People see them in other and copy. People learn from them selves and make them. Traits are something you learn and keep.

Now if traits were something beyond your control thats different. If something beyond are control was doing this you'd think different. If you are talking about TV thats cool yeah I think so but not like that. TV is kinda like school but a lot of different things. You learn a lot of things from the TV that aren't the same. So you build off that. If you are talking like someone controlling of thats a whole different story. People would be more a like and thats how you tell we are in control.

People make their on character always. People will always be different from others . We all want to be are own person in the near future. Who wants to be someone else thats boring. We make new character and be are selves. We have control over who we are. You can live the same life as everyone and end up different. You control your own life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
1F9C0492FB8A,"Well people are use technology when they are sick or when they are busy doing their work at the office. But same people are using technology to do quick look at their email, look if some one is texting them form far distance like friends and family, checking if they got the job they sign up for, and the news what happened in the world. What people should do is to use technology for enmercy only because you can save some one life when they get in to a accedient. People should stop using technology for sign up for job's they should do it on person so they can see how good are you in the job, if are you on time, and if you are do it the right work. Some peolpe love technology because it makes thing easier for them things to do. Most of the people are into technology. But the government has more new technology than us because they have the alert if the missle are coming to us or if the space is have a problem with the selite. And they can find out if some one is hacking the sytem of the president information or they can hack the information of the government. Then people are going to make a app for secuitry information. But mostly the technology is gonig to far with the app and the website's that now you don't know if you can trust them.   ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
F9E1434B2151,"Throughout the course of our history,education has always been placed amongst the most important necessities,as it not only helps us learn and better ourselves,but because it also opens new doors and possibilities for us. In the past,schools couldn't offer differing alternatives,because technology wasn't as present as it is today. Schools can now offer education to students,all while being at different locations. By students taking classes at home,they'll be able to benefit because they won't feel as socially distressed as they would in person,the level of education could be better and possibly help them graduate earlier,and they wont't have to endure social issues, such as bullying. Many people tend to believe that because they go to school,they won't have a hard time adjusting and fitting in with the masses,but to contrary beliefs,there's a lot of people who do struggle with social anxiety and overall,tend to have a hard time fitting in. Firstly,an example of this, is my cousin Generic_Name. He does have friends,but he feels extremely overwhelmed by being around so many different people,mostly because he's always struggled with social anxiety. Generic_Name decided that he would still like to pursue and attain his education,so he started looking for different alternatives that could help him do so. After much research and gathering of information,he concluded that distance learning was the best choice for him,as he wouldn't have to endure overwhelming amounts of people,or feel pressured by the constant necessity of having to wake up early during the mornings. Another example would be my friend Generic_Name,who never really had problems of fitting in and making friends,but overall disliked the whole ordeal of the school system itself. She then decided to pursue her education through another medium,that medium being,distance learning. Secondly,what a majority of people don't tend to realize,is the fact that you could achieve a better education,and even graduate at an earlier rate. This is another benefit of distance learning. Many people tend to believe that attending school,actually decreases their chances of being able to graduate early and of becoming more independent from their families at a younger age. Many individuals throughout the course of the world,utilize distance learning because they would like to achieve their educations at a faster pace,than those who are enrolled in schools. A prime example of this,is my friend Generic_Name. He was an excellent student while at school,but he wanted to find a way of being able to take advanced courses,that not only prepared him for college and provided him with advanced credits,but also helped him graduate at an earlier age. Generic_Name is now a professional,with a degree in marine biology. He achieved these accomplishments,all at the young age of 25. Another example would be my other friend,Generic_Name. She had always excelled at school,but she wanted an alternative that provided her with a better education and a chance of being able to enroll into college at a younger age. After much thought and consideration,and much conversation with her family and peers,she ultimately decided that distance learning was the best choice. As of now,Generic_Name has graduated at the young age of 17,and is estimated to graduate out of college at the young age of 19. Finally, an issue,that as of now,still affects many schools around the world,is bullying. Bullying has been an issue that has always caused concern amongst the masses,and sadly,it's an issue that is still ongoing till this day. Among the many issues that affect public schools throughout the whole world,bullying is still one of the most commonly and frequently mentioned. Despite the benefits of not feeling pressured,being able to pursue a better education and graduating at an early age,distance learning is also an alternative that many people, who've unfortunately been victims of bullying,provides them an opportunity of being able to continue with their studies,and a feeling that they are no longer exposed to issues,such as bullying. An example of this,is my friend Generic_Name. During his first couple of years in high school,he was brutally mocked for always standing out amongst his peers,and he not only felt massively insecure, but he also developed many social problems and insecurities. He had tried many alterning ways of possibly pursuing an education without having to worry about being mocked,until he finally discovered distance learning. He discovered,that he could still attend his classes and carry on with his regular school activities,all while being at the comfort of his very own home. Luckily for Generic_Name,his bullies actually turned out to be massively underachieving,so much so,that they ended up being expelled from school. He then decided to return to school,and luckily for him,he started to fit in. If it wasn't for distance learning,Generic_Name wouldn't have graduated his freshman year,or his sophomore year. People shouldn't really be afraid of trying alternatives that differ from the norm,they should always read and educate themselves on the pros and cons of distance learning. As technology continues to expand beyond realms we could've ever have possibly imagined,the future of education could one day narrow down to distance learning. ",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
EEEF81C2E133,"I am writing this prompt to inform you about the position for hiring. I would be very delighted if I could be hired by you. I do not have experience at all but, I can show you that I am a good candidate for this job and I could handle the job very well. Here are some few reason why I would be a good candidate for the job.

One reason on why you should hire me is that even though I don't have experience I tend to learn really fast and do multiple things at a time. Usually I memorize them very easily. It has a greater impact on me because I learn fast and customers are more happy with the service. Also, I could do many things at a time which is good for the job and good for the customers.

For example, in some restaurants it takes long for someone to do your order or even get to your table to get your order. It is better if you have someone that is fast and shows that the customers are there number one priority. It is good that the customers feel welcomed and feel important when the workers are giving them attention.

Another reason is that I have an amazing, outstanding attitude with people. I am a very joyful person and what I feel like is right, is giving joyfulness to customers who need it. For example, I have friends that sometimes have had a rough day and I tend to help them and make them happier and change their perspective to a better one. I think it is good that if a restaurant has someone happy and joyful the customers would want to come in because its a very joyful place. My goal is always to see poeple smiling and keept encouraging them to always be happy.

The restaurant can always make more money when customers feel like its there home.

Lastly, I like meeting new people at jobs and working as a group. What I love to do is bringing everyone together and making new friendships.

I've seen that when working as a groups it is better because you get things done faster. You also make greter connections with your coworkers. For example, If someone needs something for a customer and your busy doing something else its better to ask a coworker to help you out. I like bringing bonds together and working with them.

These are some of the reason I would love to get the job. I want to learn something new thats not from my perspective. I love trying new things and getting to know the different types of jobs around the community. I also learn very fast and I love being commited to anything and working as a group. I hoppe you consider me to work there and I would be very happy. Thank you for your time. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
9DE684107A66,"should churchill's statement About the importnat role that failure plays in the pursuit of success be true. I think that failure plays a big role to success but is just for those who really want to changed their lifes. First of all, learned something from any failure. Second of all, A failure shows up the real people. Third and most important, try not to do the same failure over and over.

""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiams"". First of all,learned something from any failure because we are humans and we all make big mistakes in our lifes. Those who learned form their mistekas are the best to help the ones that are passing the same process. Learn because there would be always more failures in our lifes. Second of all, a failure shows up the real people because those who you think are good friends would help you on a failure. the person that you thought was the worst could be the only one helping you. An example, A real girlfriend would never run away in your first failure. Third and most important, try not to do the same failure over and over becuase the first think you loss is your enthusiams when you had been passing the same failure for many times, it becomes harded not to loss it. There is always gonna be more failures in our lives but, if u dont even pass one it would be more difficult to pass more then one at the same time.

My conclusion, everyone has a failure or more in their lifes but the most succes full thing of a failure is to pass the page knowing that you had learned something good of it and you wont do the same mistake ever again. Everyone has the opcion to change their lifes but the key word for this is that the person has to want it and be ready to changed.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
6E5F280580C4,"Should some school offer distance learning for students to attendend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some people are agree with these class, because classes in online it's bennefit and better for students, students can learning more, students can do a better work, and students can have a more time for to spend with the family. If the students will can study in classes online they can have a big opportunities and they can follow his dreams and has the all they want to do or they want to has.

One reason it's classes in online is benefit and better, students can learning more and they can have in the house because they can do a time for make all things they needed make, for example I want to graduate and I want to follow study but it's difficult for me because I don't have time for anything I can't not make my homework, and study for my quizz. I need to work for buy my things, pay my house and my car. It's for these reason that I frefer class online, with these class I can have a lot time for me, and I can make my things and I can do the two things study and work.

The second reason is the students can do a better work, and they can have a better grade. They can turn in a good homework or proyect with more information explained. For example when the students have more time, they can make a better work, because they are enfocus in his obligation like homework and proyects, and they want to be a good student is for that they can do effort for turn in a good proyects with the use the internet. They can do a good investing for make a homework they can find a lot information, if the students are a relax and they have a time they only need to study a few hours no is like in the school. In the school is more tired because they need to wake more early and they need to do a lot homework in the many classes. But if they study classes in online it's more easy not it's very hard like in the school.

Some people say that the classes online it's a lost time the student do not make nothing in his house, when they have classes online they lost time. For example, when they are in the house they play with the cell phone or they are using his phone for other things, and they not study and not learning like in the shool. However, the classes in online is wonderfure because is a way to spend with the family because they can make a day fun with them and make differents things like play football, wath a movie, they can go to the cinemark and other places that they prefers.

In conclucion class online it's benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because students can lerning more, students can do a better work, and students can have a more time for to spend with the family. This is important and benefit because students can make a lot things, and they have a more time for make a lot things wathever they want. If the students take a classes online this is benefit for them and have a lot adventages, and they can do the both things work and follow study in online classes and they can follow the goals like find a good job and finish his studies. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
15968BD9B40A,"Some schools have programs where younger students can work with older students. For example, At my school there's homework club right after school. Teachers of all sort of subjects come to the libary and help out with your questions. The teachers also let you communicate with any grade level students. So I think that students of all ages should interact with each other.

So I think it can help younger students understand if they can't capture the meaning or they need an older student to clarify for them. Because younger students look up to the older students. Meaning that when there the oldest in the school or one of the oldest, they can help out kids/students who need help and use the same strategy that the older student tought them when they we're younger. So then, the younger students would always wanna go to the programs that the older students go to for some help.

It benefits for the older students because, For example, If one of the students wanted to become a teacher and is really shy, Then they can work on their communication skills on the younger students and become more secure about them selves and become a teacher. For example, When they were teaching they young ones, they could use that exact same stragety when they were ""teaching"" when they were young.

It defenitly can help both because, It can help with communitcation skills and meet new people you've never meet i your life, And then later on in the future you'll become really good friends with them. This can help out a lot not only one way but a lot, Because if you're the young one then you still have a long way to go. And if you're the older one then if you thought you can pursue your teaching carrear then you still have a chance to be a teacher in life.

In conclusion, My essay was yes. Why? Because some younger students parents didn't go to school, or finished school. So they have no one to ask for help. But this isn't only for homework club, this can be for any activty or program there's in the school. It can be sports,cooking, teaching, ect. For example, If you played a sport and you were the youngest, you can ask the oldest for help. Like how can i improve my skills, or how can i improve my passes, ect. So yes I think all schools should let every age group in a certain activity or program. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
2E3FC44757FB,"Do you ever help somebody out and good things come out of it? or helped out a young person and they see you as a role model? well guess what!

There this program called ""Older students assist younger students"" .

What I think on this program that pairs older students with younger students is important because the students that are older already learned about what the younger students are learning about so they give out ways on how they learned it and show it to the younger students . Another reason why this program that older students assist younger students is good and important because a older student can also get more information from what a younger student already knows and not a older student.

This program is not only good and important but it also helps out any age ,in other words this program can help anybody out when help is needed. You can help out anybody and they will see you as there role model for showing them the good things you should do and what comes out of it from the good descion you did. Having a negative mind wont get you nowhere in live so that is why older students help around younger students because the younger students are young and still dont know what they plan on being in the future. Not everybody has a role model because they have there own plans in the future or because they just dont want to do what everybody does as a living but when they get some help from a older person who already knows what they are doing the younger students start to wake up notice that you got to do what you got to do in order for you to get where you want to be.

The only thing is that only some school's have this program and it sucks becuase there is some people who want help or need assist from someone who has already been what there going thru so if you have this program use it wisley and dont take it for granted. everybody in the world can get the help they need so they can be someone in life so that is why they have that program were older students help out younger students so the younger students wont make error mistakes in there future life.

What would you do if you had this program and how would you use it in the furture of yours? I 100% this prgoram is a good idea.     ",3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5
076262AA0CD5,"The Curfews Keep Teenagers Out Of Trouble

Once, I walked down the empty street during midnight. Then, I heard a rising sound of a strange footstep behind me. Suddenly, I felt anxious and scared that someone might come up to me and murder me for money. Lucikly, there was nothing happened to me. After I got home, I had a thinking that what if a city council adopts a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers. If the curfew is published, any teenager who is wandering on the street after those hours would be violating the law. On the other hand, some might believe that the curfews unfairly interfere in young people's lives because it does not let the teenagers have their freedom and accomplish something that is very important to them, which they cannot do it another time. I still agree with the idea that curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because it stops teenagers from doing something that is illegal during the late hours, it moderates them to be a better humans being with molarity without having any criminal records, and it prevents young people from being kidnapped or killed at night.

Some people argue that curfews should not be publish because it limits the freedom of most teenagers. Still, I believe that curfews should be establish to put an end on any illegal act that is commited by teenagers because the young people should be controlled by laws when most of them are not mature enough. They should be strictly managed instead of being free and are allowed to do whatever they want. For example, teenagers who hangout with their friends at night and get drunk are more likely to do something that is breaking the law when they are not sober enough. These young people tend to pull out their weapons to threat others who walk outside at night for money in order to buy illegal drugs. This is an important issue to pay attention on because these teenagers already become the worst humans being when they are not strictly managed by anyone or any law. However, they will keep threatenting others when the curfews aren't carried out to prevent them from doing their vicious things. In fact, there are several criminal cases that are committed by teenagers in America, which proves that the U.S. government is weak at controling their citizens and managing the society within the nation. This fact shows that the U.S. government does not care about the moral of young citizens and the safety of all citizens in general. The U.S. government should carry out curfews that keep all teenagers in control in order to limit any illegal acts. The estalishment of curfews is important because it shapes all teenagers to become the better people who has morality instead of threatening others to get what makes them feel pleasure.

The curfews should be carrried out to moderate all teenagers into better people who treats others in the right way because it helps them stay out of any trouble that might be an unfortunate consequense in their future. It shapes their morals and erases all their bad behaviors that makes others feel unpleasure. For example, teenagers who turn out to be good people when they have parents who do not let them go out when the sky turns dark. Also, their parents strictly manage them and prevent them from going outside at night to do illegal things. However, some might believe that the curfews do a little improvement on teenagers because they still sneak out of their houses without their parents' awakeness to do what they like at night. This is an important issue to focus on because these teenagers will turn into adults who have several criminal records that might bother them from getting their jobs in the future. Moreover, teenagers should be more mature to realize that any violation acts that they had done will stay with them for the rest of their lives. Therefore, if the curfews is adopted then they should be obey to this law in order to avoid any unfortunate results that can occur in their lives. In fact, many companies prefer to choose employees with a good moral because they did not commit any crime in the past, which proves that they will not cause any danger while working in the companies. Unfortuantely, people who had done any crime or violated any law in the past will more likely to stay unemployed because they are considered to be dangerous. The curfews is brought out to protect all teenagers's future from being damaged by any of their wrongful commitment.

The curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because most of them would not want to be kidnapped or murdered while walking on the street at night. To prevent any harmful cause that can happen to young people, the U.S. government should set up curfews for teenagers. In fact, there are many unfortunate cases of missing teenagers in America. This fact proves that numerous teenagers had been kidnapped while they wander around empty public places at night. In this case, the U.S. government should adopt curfews law because it can decrease the act of kidnapping teenagers. However, some teenagers are killed while they are going out at night because there are a lot of robbers appear during this time. To solve this problem, the U.S government should let the city council bring out the curfews law, which can restricts all teenagers from going out at night and protect them from being murdered.

In conclusion, curfews law is significant because it can reduce the criminal acts within a society. It shapes the society to be more organized and less dangerous to the citizens. The curfews can keep teenagers out of trouble because it restricts teenagers from committing any unfortunate crime. It helps teenagers to become better individuals in society who treat others in a correct way. Specially, teenagers can avoid death and being kidnapped when they obey to the curfews and stay home at night. Lastly, we should set up curfews and believe that it can protect all teenagers from getting trouble because they are going to be the one who runs the planet one day.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
00D281524375,"Technology allows people to do many things such as order things online, play games, and contact other people in a faster way, and if your family members live far away they be able to contact them.

I belive that it has a positive effect because everybody needs to stay in contact with there family that lives far away, and be able to order online is a real help because if people oder there grocerys online thenthey want have to wait in the long lines at the store to checkout intead of waiting they can also get more items that the store dont have the food or items people.

Others may aruge that techbology is a negative out come because lots of people let it take over there lives and act like they cant go anywhere without it and lots of people try to be on there technology when there driving which is a bad thing to do because they will end up getting into a accident. And if the older generations won't know how to use the technology.

In conclusion, having technology is a postive thing because it helps lots of people out and it makes getting thngs done way faster. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
079FDB42E429,"Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by a way of online or video conferencing. Schools offer this so that students who are troubled or don't like coming to school can still have a right to to learn and it also helps students who are very sickly to have access to all their classes and homework that they missed when their not at school.

Some students can not focus in class because they are easily distracted by other students and by these distractions they end up getting bad grades and it causes them to lose hope in school and even what they want to become in life. they could also have something happening outside of school that could affect them to not want to be in school anymore and they can also get bullied by other students which would make them stop coming to school and some kids are just better off staying a home and doing classes at home.

These online and distance learning classes can help students get back on track with school and catch up with their work that they missed. The students who want to be home schooled can wake up at anytime that they choose and do the work that is planned for them and the ones that don't like coming to school or the ones that get bullied can stay at home and get their work done without missing class and getting bad grades because of them not being their to do classwork or take test and quizzes. The students who are taking these classes can benefit from these a lot.

These programs can help students be able to their work on their own time and a have teacher who can teach them but online like at school and this can help students become independent in being able to do their work and help them stay away from trouble that they could be having at school and give them confidence to be able to do their work. I think this can benefit students because they are in the comfort of their homes and its like a regular class but it just online and you could get all your work done and by that you earn good grades.

If students who don't like coming to school,sickly and get bullied,always miss class and get bad grades because their are not their to take tests or quizzes then these online and distance class can benefit them to do work at the comfort of their home. It will also persuade them to not give up on school and give them a right to get their education before they throw it away. These online classes and distance classes can help teach these students as if they were in school and if they work hard enough they can get good grades. These are all reasons why these programs can benefit student.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
3DC539E4E871,"I believe that if some school districts offer programs that allow to graduated in three years instead of the traditional four years, It couldn't be a good idea, Because most students following this plan must take course during the summer or in the evenings.

One reason is that students may be not able to get the enough knowledge because the time in class must be less than the normal time in school.

Second reason is that even if students graduated early from high school, students won't be able to take elective course.

Third reason is that some students work during summer or at night time so it couldn't be a good a idea

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In conclusion i can say that if some schools offer programs that allow students to graduated in three years instead of four even if it sounds good it is not a good idea, because most of this students must take the course during summer so there are some reason why it couldn't be the best way in order to graduated, including that some students may be not able to get enough knowledge, and some students have to work in summer time.",3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
AFB5CC3E27EB,"Many people loves libreries, and they enjoy to share time with family,they will like to be like back in those days. Technology allow poeple to complete many task without having contact with others. Technology have a negative effect in people life because people life is passing in front of their face without knowing, technology hurts people in many ways,and make many people to feel bad with themself.

Some people think that technology is the best creation that the human ever made because entertain and hepl people to understand many things. Others believe that technology is a easy way to make assigments because google have every kind of information. Still other argue that without technology this world would not be the same because doctors would never find the tratment for the sickness.

Technology have a negative effect in people life because they forget to live their life and the time is passing, just because they spend all their time playing video games, in the phone, and they star to getting older and because the years are passing like nothing and really fast that when they react they would see that their best years just passing, without enjoy their time with the people that they love. Many people just react only when one family member death and they start to think that life is too short, and it is why people need to apreciate and enjoy,

learn new thing, meet new places, have more experiences, and also meet new people and learn good thing from them.

Many people hurt them self in many ways for example physical and mental because physical they star to get fat and then they do not take care about their healty and if they do not take care who else would do for them, because when they star to get sick they just do not care about it, because they want to keep concentrate in their video games or telephone. metal many people just not care about their future and goals, because they are really busy thinking how to get the most advance technology device and who is usining in where they go. many people do not take care about their personal life and after few years later when the affected would be them because they did not care about their future they would have nothing and the technnology every year change, and get new devices. People need to think about what is most important something else that is really important and needed or a device that in few months would be betters phone and other devices, because for example whe a phone just come out every one want to buy and the price is more than $1000 and after few monts the price is more lower and they have another new phone, it is in what people want to spend money and time, first think and later act after they know is the best.

Technology makes people to feel bad about themselves because now people believe everything that is posted in internet, only because some people said it ect. Other make their self look better in the phone and when they look their self in the mirror they hate their self, and sometimes people look other people in internet that they post picture they want to be like them and they star to despreviate their self and start to search in google how to change or do something they can not do it or does not work they get depress, stressful and tired of their life that sime search the easy way, that many people and doing in other country that is kill their self, so technology just affect people in many ways.

Technology affect people in a negative way because people spend too much time on techonology and life is just passing. Technology is taking over people, and into they get hurt with something or someone that they love they start to see that they was doing wrong, they get dissapoinment with themselves for being so stuped, people need to use less phone and spend more time with family and enjoy every second of life because life is just one and is really short.               ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
F6AEEC01F174,"Although some say students should that self-esteem come from praise because students do this when can have a test or when they need to pass a class, actually students should not that self-esteem come from achievement because students effort to do their best work, students try to get some energy to do that, and students work all the time to get the best works.

Students effort to do their work. They when are absent, they stay after school with their teachers to complete their work missed. Some students praise when they need to do something good but they study first and then they praise to have good grade or something like that. They sometimes don't like to do their homeworks in breaks.

Students try to get more energy to do that. They are eat breakfast in the morning. They bring some snack to their house. They believe that students must be self-confident in order to learn. Some studens need help to their teachers and they help them. They need to organize their work when the teacher give some papers.

Students work all the time to get the best work. They study after school at home. They do their homework and they practice some exercise when they have some break or when they complete their all work. Some students go to the library and get some books to read about the class, they need to pass.

Although some say students should that self-esteem come from praise because students do this when have a test or when they need to pass a class, actually students should not that self-esteem come from achievment because students effort to do their best work, students try to get some energy to do tat and students works all the time to get the best work. This is praise to do self-esteem work and do the best.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
8079089BC4D8,"Former British Prime Minister Winston once said that ""sucess consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiam and basically its asking me if i agree on it.

Basically i really have never heard about this prompt but i find it reallu intersting and would love to know more about it, I feel like if there were to ask me an a public place for example now but instead a public place and read about it more and even just reading a little bit about it makes me agree on it.

In my opinion i would definitly agree on it since what he said was pretty true, he basically said something that is basically true and not only that its basically making you think that it is right that ""sucess consists on many thing but for sure loss of enthusiams""which is not wrong now i feel like ive thought about it just couple minutes and its making me think alot about it specially how much ive failed and life and always got up back like nothing was wrong.

May not be true for many people but for sure for me,I would agree on it 100% without doughting it at all , its always the ones that have failed and gotten up who would agree on it, it could be tuff for many to accept it but eventually they would agree to it if they were to think about how many times they have failed and won there battled with fighting for it and doing basically what they really want in their life. All you have to do to get through things are get stronger and work on yourself more, feel valued to your surroundings.

However, I have failed so many times and always thought about how i wouldnt make it not even how hard i try to i wasnt gonna make it out of the dark place i was in and eventually i told myself that it was very pointless of even trying anymore if all i was going to do is fail all over again , I didnt have no type of enthusiam whatsoever was horrible and all i did everyday was loss my enthusiam more and more until one day i got back up like a normal day and said to myself that ""Life doesnt get easier you only have to get stronger' and i realized so much at that moment i wouldnt even believe myself that i was up like nothing and day ago i was not in the right mindset thinking i was a completely failure and even didnt have enthuasiam for nothing. so last i would agree to the saying of the Former British Prime Minister Winston it made me realize alot and a very true saying of course,                              ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
4002D91C6B6C,"In some school districts they offer programs which allows students to graduate in three years rather than four years as normal. Which means students would be a year early for college and a year early in the workforce. Allowing high school students to graduate in three year is not a good idea because they won't be able to attend more elective classes in school, they will start stressing about a lot of school work, and they won't be able to enjoy their four years of high school with friends.

Trying to graduate early is not the best because it could be so stressful, focusing on getting good grades and passing in a short amount of time. As the University of Virginia did an experiment on teenagers, that which they should not be putting too much stress on themselves. As some students like to work and want to succeed in the future so they think it's faster and easier to graduate early. You should be in high school for four years as traditionally and not trying to rush through your high school years and graduate.

You should enjoy your years of high school, as normal sometimes we have stress because it's too much of work, but four years you get to have more fun classes. As three years you won't be able to be in elective classes, which it could lead to less opportunities. During summer you have to do school work so you can be able to graduate and also after school you have to do work. Some might think that four years of high school is too much but it's really not that much, you really won't feel when the years pass by.

In the other hand some students think that being in high school for only three years it's a good idea because they think that it's easier to get away from people and dramas, faster to start working, going to college faster, and they are rushing through life. They want to succeed but the faster way and they don't want to be in high school because they think it's too long and it takes a lot of years through their lives.

As in some school districts they offer programs which allows students to graduate in three years rather than four years as normal. Allowing high school students to graduate in three years in not a good idea because it's too much stress about school work, they won't be able to be in elective classes, and they won't enjoy their high school years with friends. The school district should not offer this program because students should be in high school as normal.",3.0,2.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
DC099826F469,"People is always trying to make you be someone else or follow new tendences ,especially in this time everyone is trying to have the same haircut,color hair,or body. A lot people is afraid to be themselves which is mean show to the world who they really are. For these and many reasons is why i am agree with Emerson's statement because if you obtain to be yourself you are gonna be unique,you are gonna follow your dreams,and you are gonna be confident.

Everyone is trying to do the same things that someones else does, but imagine being unique you would be different from other people you would play or practice any sports that you want. You can get your own style use or create your own clothes, and start to use your imagination. You do not have to be worry for follow any fashion because you would have your own sunshine.

Dreams? I am pretty sure that you have dreams like I do, but my dreams migth be differents from yours, probably you want to be a doctor and i want to be a singer. However if you get to find yourself you are follow your owns dreams you will be more happy that anyone else doing the things that you love. You are gonna enjoy your life every single day, every moment ,and everywhere. You alwalys are gonna get the positive side of the things even in your bad days because you are gonna love what you have and what you do.

In this time be confident is something really hard for many people but if you are a confident person you will not care about what people say, which is mean you are not gonna care about they opinions because you will be focus in your goals .You will belief in yourself, in your decisions do not matter what will happen. You will be an example for many people who does not felling in the same way that you do and you migth inspire them to follow their dreams.

In conclusion be yourself does not matter what people say or what they want for you,live your own life because life is only one. Get your own goals ,and do not try to be like someone else, do not follow their style because if you do not be yourself ,you are never ever gonna be happy with your life and you will not get all the things that you want in your future. Get your own sunshine just try it, it is inside of you and it is waiting for you ,Love and be yourself.                      ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
2F81111E7831,"Most student enjoy summer vacaction,but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that student do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall.

Most of the student have reason that is to much break during summer break, but I am disagree with the idea of change the schedule of vacaction time. Could be during summer break the student forget some information of school, but all student wait for summer because much student like to travel to their country during vacation time, or some student only can see their family during summer break and their like to pass time with them, I guess is better time to take vacation in summer. Also the eductors need to think about the thing they can do during summer break because during winter the weather is really bad and also is too much snow and is too cool for to go out side.

Another reason that why is bad idea to get break during winter is because in winter the job is slow, and the center recreational are close like the pool, beach, park, and the fair. I think 3-4 week break during summer is a little be of time to have fun with the family, and enjoy their vacation I dont see the main point of the change because if they change the longer break for winter it take the same time because they also want that student take a week break durin spring and falls; Is more complicated if they change the schedule.

Therefore is a bad idea to change because it should be the same way it doesnt matter what time or what station is the break it should be the same way, because if they do in winter they going to forget information, eather is not good idea because the student cant enjoy their break for the weather.

In conclution I am desagree with the idea and is better during summer break, because could be the same time that the student loose. ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
5241864FBC48,"My Grandma always use to say that ""working with a group is fun and all, but at the end of the day, I would have to understand what the group activity was about, but at the same time working with a group can get more work done and we help each other."" She explained to me that there isn't group work when it comes down to taking a test or quiz. Students are always sitting down and learning maybe getting up and working with a couple of classmates can help learn too. I'm the one in a seat answering the questions on a test or quiz. There is no group work involved when it comes down to that. I think working alone and working as a group can both be beneficial.

First when working in a group I can understand my classmates more than my teacher. I can understand more especially if a student just like me explains everything. I might not understand somethings or tend to forget, however someone in my group could know or refresh my memory by giving me notes, or vise versa. I can get a ton of work done as a group, but do I really understand what I just did. For example, say we have a group of five students, three of them are constantly talking, the other two students are the only ones in the group that are actually doing the work. The grade that the group received was a 95. If the students are quizzed on what they have just completed, the students that were talkative are most likely to get a lower grade than the two students that were actually doing the activity without getting off topic.

Second when working alone there are no distractions. I would get my work done peacefully, at a rate I would like to go. I would not get as much work done as if I was in a group, but the teacher would know that it's all my work. For example, say I'm working with a group, we get a 93 for the whole group work. I received a quiz on what we just did and I got a 78. After that performance, the teacher gave me notes and went over the same material with me. I studied; and I took the quiz again. This time I got a 90. Therefor, this goes to show that working alone helps the teacher figure out what you need help on.

Some people say that working in a group can cause fights,distractions, and poor quality work ethic. I feel like working alone is more beneficial. Everything can not be done in a group. Sometimes you have to work alone to fully grasp the subject. Working alone lets your brain process better especially at it's own rate. The teacher can really see what you need help on.

In conclusion, I think that both working in a group and working alone are beneficial. I think that working alone is more beneficial because everyone works and really understands the subject at a different pace. Working in a group does not show the teacher a specific person's work. Thats why I think working alone can better help yourself and is more beneficial.              ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
3E7DE9C1C160,"What lesson would you chose to teach elementary school students? Would you chose math because they like numbers, or science because they like playing with science experiments. I would chose science, because we use science every day by turning on a light, to throwing a ball up in the air. Another reason many students like science is because it is the most fun, by that I mean by all the experiments we do in science. One lesson I would like to teach elementary school students is about science because it is fun, it is the most easiest subject to teach, and it is the most used in daily life.

Firstly, one lesson I would like to teach is science because it is fun to most adults and kids. First, science is fun because you get to do different types of experiments. For example, If you want to learn about kinetic and potential energy you can use science experiments that have kinetic and potential energy in them. Some experiments can have you involved in throwing a ball so you can illustrate kinetic and potential energy. Second, science is fun because everybody can enjoy it.

For example, say one student does an experiment everyone in the class can experience it because they all witnessed it. Lastly, science is the most fun to make a lesson about because it involves you talking to other people and sharing your observations. For example, If you did a egg drop experiment, you will compare your results to different types of students in your school and hopefully learn from what you did wrong or the opposite. Therefore, science is fun because you get to deal with experiments.

Secondly, one lesson I would like to teach is science because it is the most easiest to teach to many students and adults. First, science is the most easiest because it does not require you to memorize or remember something every single time. For example in other subjects unlike science you have to memorize the root words for English, or memorize the formulas for math, But here all you have to do is memorize the terminology and you should be good to go. Another reason why science is the easiest is because it is involves experiments which are not hard to understand all it requires you to do it pay attention. For example, If you pay attention to the experiment then you will know every bit of it, But in math you have to keep on practicing again and again until you get it. Third, science is the most easiest to many students because it involves drawing pictures which is the most easiest way to understand something other than memorizing. For example, say that the students don't get it by words so, what you can do is illustrate for them so they get what you are trying to say. This works best in science because because science is the subject that involves the most of drawing and experimenting. So at last, science is the best subject to teach about because it is the most easiest to understand.

Thirdly, I would like to create a lesson about science because it is most used in daily life. Firstly, it is most used in daily life because everything can relate to science. For example, it can be related to light because light can cause radiation, it can be related to the air conditioning because it involves air traveling in currents. All of these thing are related to science and there is certainly more. Secondly, Science can help you understand more of your daily life by performing a lesson. For example, say that you don't know how to use a compass, science can tell you the answer to that because it relates to the magnetic field. Last, science is the most used in daily life for fixing things and being able to understand how things work. For example, science can tell us a lot of information, some examples can be how does a circuit work, how do fix a circuit, how does a light turn on so fast, or other possible things too. In addition, science should be the lesson because it is the most used in real life.

In conclusion, one lesson I would like to teach in elementary school is science because it is the most fun and makes a lot of students smile when they do science, it is the most easiest to teach because it involves minimum talking but a lot of drawing, and lastly it is the most frequently used in real life. So therefore, I should get my science lesson ready for the elementary school students soon because they would have the most fun in this while learning. Would you teach science why or why not?             ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F3A5981B0288,"Is a good idea that the students identify a career by the time they enter high school, and think about the future.

The importance of decide what career the students want to take before they leave of the high school,

is to prevent to be confused when they enter to the University . For example , if the students take mechanic courses or courses about how to be a Doctor in High School , would help them to experiment what career they would like to take after High School .

If the students decide experiment to be a nurse or doctor , they will go to a Central Medic or Hospital and get information about that career , or they will go to a mechanic workshop to learn and get knowledge about how to be a mechanic .

Is a good idea for students think about a career to young age or try to be prepare for the future and take some courses of study in high school because if the teenagers try to found some career that can be agreeable for them and try to learn about it , it is a good form that they can be prepare in the future .

With the opportunity of learn in different courses in high school , will be more easy for the students to decide what specific career they like more and they want to learn and study after high school

In other hand , the specific courses in high school , would be selected by the students , because if they decide to take a course that they like , they will enjoy at the same time , and they will try to do the better they can

, and this is a good manner in that the students can get good grades .",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
11402548A471,"Does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement?

True self-esteem comes from praise because it can be motivating to students,it helps them want to learn more, and it helps the student to achieve any goal even if the work is not the students effort.

one reason why motivation can help a student build self-esteem is because when you feel that you're not able to do something, but if you have someone who's there with you, you are motivated to keep on going, to keep trying harder until you achieve the goal that you want.

For example, the first time that I took the W!SE test I didn't pass the firs time and I was close to pass, but I had my mom who told ""don't worry you're smart and I know that you will pass the second time"" and those words motivated me and it helped me to studied more and then when I took the test the second time I passed. Therefore, motivation can help students to build self-esteem and to achieve any goal.

Another reason why praising students can help build self-esteem on them is that they may want to learn more if they got someone who's always supporting then and help them to keep trying, for example, when I was in elementary school I used to get really bad grades, but I've always had my mom who has always supported me in anything and she told me that I could get better grades because I was smart to achieve any goal and it helped me to keep learning and I was motivated to get better grades, in middle school I started to get good grades and now in high school I've got better grades than I used to get in middle school, therefore, praising students helps to build self-esteem on them and it help them to want to keep learning more.

In addition, praising students can help them to achieve any goal even if the work is not the students best effort, it helps them to keep trying harder even if things don't go well and it helps them to never give up.

For example, English is not my first language and It was hard for me when I came to America because I couldn't understand anything, I couldn't communicate with other people who didn't spoke the same language as me. When I first came to America I didn't like to speak English because it was hard for me to pronounce each word, but I had to learn English to communicate with other people.

I used to cry because I couldn't understand anything, I couldn't even say a word in English, but I had people who always told me not to worry because I was smart and that I was going to learn English that really helped me to build self-esteem on me, I don't speak English perfectly, but now I'm able to understand and to communicate with other people.

Therefore, it is important that we got people who are there to support us and to motivate us to keep trying hard no matter how hard it is or how hard it looks.

Praising students builds self-esteem on them, because that gives them motivation to keep trying hard to achieve any goal, it motivates them to keep on going and to learn more each day, with people who motivates students, it does not matter how hard things are, they just want someone who is there to support them in anything. There are some students who don't like giving up, but sometimes if there is nobody who helps them to keep going they will stop trying, because they need motivation, they need someone who is there whenever they need them.

My mom had always supported me and I know that she always be there for me, she will always motivate me, that builds self-esteem on me because I know that I have someone who will always support me and that helps me to keep trying harder and to never give up. If we got people who praise students, then they're going to build self-esteem on them.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
327F36243259,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and have fun without speaking to another person. Has technology a positive or negative effects on people? Technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help our health, some people are using technology to help others, and some students are getting help from technology.

Certainly, some people think that technology has a negative effect on people because some people are using technology to destroy our planet. Others believe that some people are using technology to affect others. Still others argue that teens are getting distracted by technology.

Furthermore, technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help in our health. Scientists are discovering new technology that can develop the human body. Technology helps people that need a body part, technology could help a person that lost a hand or foot. Technology can help workers to be safe, when a worker needs to climb a wall, technology may help. Technology is getting solutions to some diseases. Some countries are developing cures by technology, people are trying to get a cure for cancer. Technology will get cures for diseases, technology will get a cure for AIDS. Developing new technology can help our community.

however, technology has a positive effect on people because some people are using technology to help others. Scientists are helping community to understand our environment. Scientists have been discovering, discovering how our universe was formed. Scientists will discover new technology, new technology that will help us to know what may happen in the future. People are discovering new technology that can help our planet. People can discover new ways to save our planet, people can elaborate new ways to recycling. New technology that help our environment, people could develop new ways to get energy. People can have a better live by using technology.

Finally, technology has a positive effect on people because some students are getting help from technology. Students can help themselves at school by using technology. Students can get help on homework by using technology, students can see how to complete a homework on Google. Students can learn more, students can see more about a topic by using technology. Students have been using technology to discover more about their dreams. Students can get help with jobs, a student can learn more about a future job. Students can know more details about their jobs. Technology is a great tool to investigate.

Technology has a positive effect on people because people are using technology to help in our health, some people are using technology to help others, and some students are getting help from technology. If people use technology, then their lives would be more easier. People need to use technology to have a better live, and be carefully with it.                                                                                                                                                      ",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
D175411080CC,"Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study or complete homework assignments. Schools should limit on how much extracurricular activities they can do, having too much will cause confusion among students in class and too much is always not good. having their families decide for them is an option, but the best decision should be for the school, for they know how well the student is doing.

Research from age between 21 to 26 shows that 95% of them wanted to decide for their children,They wanted the best for them and the best they will do, That is the job of the parents. A blog back in 2006 shows that people who decides for their children most likely to get a job than people who decide on their own.

A Research conducted back in 2010 shows that 80% of people prefer to decide for themselves, having them to decide will greatly benefit their mind and shows that they are responsible on how they act. They like to choose their own path and find their own talent. Finding their own talent shows responsibility, and having responsibilities at a young age takes courage, dedication, and hard work.

Having too many activities will also cause a lot of their energy to get drained, they won't have any energy to spare for other activities like cooking for dinner, or doing assignments. The school should keep track on every students activities, This ensure their safety and heath. Having every energy drained from your body is bad, and the school should keep track at their time as well. Having more energy will greatly benefit their health. The school is partly responsible for the students, but the parents are most responsible and should know what their children's are doing, if they think their doing too much, they should talk to them and have a simple chat about overworking.

The school can also add a one simple rule where people who has 3 activities or more should be given time at the end of each classes 15 to 30 minutes free time to discuss with their teacher on how well they are doing and to do missing work or assignments. In Generic_City, Philippines, University of Mang Totomas, Practice this method. Research from this school shows that students have increased their grades when they added this rule back in 1996, it increased from the average of 3.0 GPA to 4.1 GPA, This huge increase show's that adding this simple rule will benefit not only the students health, but their grades as well.

Hard work is good personal ethnic, but too much can lead to more bad than good, studying many subjects at one time can cause confusion and stress, The schools job is to teach students, and the students goal is to learn from school, if they want to learn an extra subject or do an extra activity, that's fine, but aslong as they don't over do it. the school system should ensure students safety to be top priority, and if their wearing themselves out with the extracurricular activities, they should notify their parents or limit how much extracurricular activities they can do.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
CE214B0C2CB6,"The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock once wrote, ""Your character will be what yourself choose to make it

In my opinion, we do choose who we want to be. I agree with John Lubbock because not everyone has the same intentions as the people who surround us, we choose our own path, and people are raised differently.

Not everyone has the same intentions as the people they hang out with. Not because I want to go to college and become a nurse, means that my best friend, that I spend most of the time with, would want to be a nurse or be in a medical field as me. Some people might think differently and say that we are influenced by the people we spend our time with. We choose who we want to become. People have their own dreams and choose their own path.

We choose our own paths. I once got invited to a party where I knew there were going to be lots of teens drinking and doing drugs, so I told my friend, who invited me, that I didnt wanted to go because I new it was bad. For some people it is just fun and dont think about the consequences. Not everyone thinks the same, and people are raised differently.

We were all raised differently. For siblings, I think it is different because they are being raised by the same people and have almost the same points of view, but that does not mean they are or think the same. There could be two sisters being raised the same but one might have different habits or opinions than the other. At the end of the day we choose who we want to be.

We choose who we want to be. Yes, we are influenced by the people we see everyday and we might just take it as inspiration, but we are the ones who work towards our goals and not anyone else. We do choose who we are because not everyone thinks the same, we choose our destiny, and parents raise their children with different habits and knowledge.",3.5,3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
8BFBF3BB5542,"I think the acted of kindness can effect someone i guess does effect some one it depends on who they are how they feel ,their story kindness is something we should all do be kind to other. being kind to someone can make you feel great some people are not kind because maybe what they have gone through in their past but kind can be something more then just the word kind, sure kind can be being nice to someone but some people can think that the act of kindness means something Elsa to someone.

when i hear what the act o kindness means like being nice to someone be best friends with someone being friends with so many people you should never let anyone be alone the act of kindness can be every

Act of kindness everyone has well not everyone but i know that in side of everyone there is a little bet of kindness kindness i feel the people that have more kindness are the people that i guess they have been with people like being someones best friend those two best friends have been with each other there whole life yeah they might fight but i thinkwhen they are friends again its nice that means to me that in them they care about them they hhave kindness in them people wish they have people that cared about them where kind to they that why i say that the act of kindnss can aeffect somepeople not all do i also think that somepeople do not get affcted by it because people got hurt by some one and that's what i thnk of the act of kindness.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
6C045F130B28,"Technology in today's life is, so advance that it has both positive and negative impact on people's life. According to me, I think that technology has change people's style of living. Technology at some point slow downs the physical growth or development of our body and it stops us from learning new things, But on the other hand it helps us to complete many task and save time. Modern technology has negative impact on peoples life.

People can check out books, shop, and play games without moving form place and talking to anyone. This leads to no physical activity, which slow downs physical development of our body. In fact, there was a survey taken few days ago and it states that more then 45% of middle schoolers in U.S.A has to take some kind of vitamin medicine as the dont eat their lunch properly because they watch t. v or phone while taking lunch, 38% middle schoolers have glasses because of sitting in front of TV or using phone all the time, and more than 46% students are overweight or underweight as they don't do much physical activities.

Secondly, technology stops us from learning new things. Technology helps people to complete new task in every day life, and then we get use to taking help from technology instead of trying it our self or learning it we get a habit of letting technology do our work. For example, if our mom not stopped us form spoon feeding then we would take it for granted and never learn how to eat our self.

But, On the other hand technology helps us to complete many task and save time. Technology helps us from not being delayed, it complete task 50% more faster than us, and helps us to save 25% of more time. For example, Our group got an assignment to do on Monday and the deadline to submit it was on Friday, So if i would read books to find some info, it would take me at least 2 weeks to complete that assignment, but thanks to modern technology,I was able to finish it in 3 days.

At last, I would like conclude that technology plays a major role in our day to day life. It has both type of impact negative and positive and it impact's on our life, but the main thing is ""how and when we use it"". Technology changes lifestyle of people and if we use it more it slow downs our physical growth and stop us from learning new thing, on the other it also completes our task easily and faster that us. So less use of technology gives us positive effects and more use of it gives us negative effects.             ",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
AAAAA48F6FEB,"Students should not be allowed to graduate high school a year early, as this will cause students to only have a lack of free time and enjoyment of being in high school. They will have to give up their summer vacations, and even their evening time because of the courses they have to take. The students will miss out on taking electives, as well as missing out on valuable high school experience by being forced to grow up a year early.

With only doing three years in high school, it prevents teenagers from having free time. With the three years only, there is no free time for elective courses. All of the important classes have to fit in one tight schedule in order to maintain and pass all the requirements needed to graduate. I mean at least since you won't have electives you will have more time catching up on your mandatory classes. The lack of electives and and the three year plan, can cause stress and anxiety that prevents teenagers from achieving their full potential. Additionally, the students will lack the amount of volunteer hours and extracurriculars that other students will have through a regular graduation program. The lack of extra activities will prevent students from getting into good colleges, because they will be to focused on school to be able to do anything else.

Doing a three year program means you have to give up summer vacations and evening plans. You will have to take classes over the summer and at night. As a result their will be no more ""summer""

for the students. Instead they are working throughout the year trying to get everything they need done first in order to graduate and receive their credits. In order to get classes during the night time, students would have to find a way of transportation. The county will be paying also more money for teachers. Driving to school would result in students spending money on the increasing price of gas. Spending money would also extend to paying teachers for their extra teaching hours. High school in the three year program would result in spending lots of excess money and increase complications in students' lives.

Many students wish to pursue a three year high school program allowing them to graduate early. They want to do that because, they have a specific reason. Some students have families that need their children's ability to work, to help provide for the family. Therefore, a three year high school program appeals to the child so they may help support their family. Other families may need the childcare because they have younger siblings, and their parents work multiple jobs. However, a three year program leaves very little time to actually work during the program and can impact the overall success of the student. Many schools have work programs actually connected to the school, so that students can work while still maintaining their studies. However, a four year program is much better suited to the teenage mind, desires, and overall life.

A three year graduation program prevents a teenager from being able to enjoy their high school experience. By graduating a year earlier, their childhood years are taken away as they're thrown into adulthood earlier. Along with missing out on more childhood experience, they lose social aspects for their years. This includes friendships, being able to volunteering, as well as activities. The program can also take a toll on the student by piling on extra work as well as taking a toll on other people, such as teachers and parents. Overall you should always do your research before committing to the program in order to make sure it will be beneficial. ",4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5
CEC71375C061,Policy1: I think we should be allowed to use our phones in lunch and free times a long as we don't use it in class. Maybe it would help us in a way cause is not fair to us that teachers do use the phone in class and we don't an that way it would be fair for both of us.,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
59ADAA4D04E5,People who value self they have defrine indidual to follow yea people should make theri decions becuse their odols and they go to new live they shold experts from a position odold have they problems which they can t do obothev they live i shold be respsbel for my self good friday waste my and parens time becuse is no good ifd you live weth your mother then you need follo ther rules bat if odeol what to live he can go onwer becuse he can desede take a position on thise people relince weith they problems if you are 21 then you are odold you can do aththing you whato                                                                                                                                                                                             ,1.0,1.5,1.5,2.0,1.5,1.0
5A8CC59C2D7D,"People in the day a day allow characters to be shape base in others personal opinion. Understandable people care about what and how others think about them. Especially if they are important persons like friends,family,or girlfriend in those cases People get afraid to loose them or make them unhappy.

""JOHN LUBBOCK"" once wrote a amazing quote that speaks the true. ""your character will be what you yourself choose to make of it. that quote along changed my mindset, many people would disagree with John and his way of thinking but i personal agree with what he wrote,theres a lot of true behind his words, People shouldn't focus about others opinions or let bad experiences or events shape its character. I personal believe characters arent beyond our control after all we are the ones that control our way of thinking and reacting to them. My self has seen my tree closes friends Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name ended up really bad after they decide to let bad events,experiences, and opinions shape the way of their characters.

Generic_Name one of my closest friend decided to let one big events shape his character and at the end everything went wrong for my dear friend. When he was a little kid he contently got hit by his parents in he grew up mad and he started using violence at school he would get in trouble all the time and his parents would get super mad and would use violence against him too they say it was to ""teach him a lesson"" everything went like that for him until many years passed and he got married and he contently used violence every time she did something wrong, he was mad about what its parents did to him so he would always hit his wife until one day he end up killing her and himself.

Generic_Name my other close friend let experiences shape his character in a bad way.

when he was a young man falling a love with pretty girls many of those girls just wanted to play with his feelings. Those girls never took him seriously until one day he got tired of the way girls would treat him and he loose feeling and he become just like those girls he didn't like at first. My friend Generic_Name started playing with girls feeling and he end up by him self and never finding true love, one he got true love but bad experiences make him loose feelings for all females and he played the one true love he had.

Generic_Name friend of mine let opinions got the best of him, he was contently trying to be someone he wasn't just so people he love would love him back but at the end he was just hurting him self because he wasn't happy like that he was just lying to himself and acting for other people.

people dont let bad experiences events or opinion to shape the character you yourself control or every one would end up like my friends that decided to let others control what they would have to.                                                                             ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
7FB017FAC682,"Well I think we should always be doing something because it take your mind off of other things in your head. We can accomplish more if we are doing something like people have accomplished a lot within the years and look where we are now. We could be farther but some people are always lazy and don't like doing nothing. Those people gotta get out of there house and do something for that world each person can change the world a little but at least they are doing something.

The most greatest people that lived or lives on this world have done amazing stuff and it's not because they are sitting down in their couch eating and watching tv,it's because they are out their learning more and doing more for us the people so we can have a better future and I want to do the same thing so I can give my children a better future and a better life. Think of it this way if they are building a skyscraper do they only put a group of five people to do the work NO right they are gonna but hundreds of people because ""much may be done if we are all doing"".

What Thomas Jefferson said is true we can do more if we all but our part but there are people that don't want to do nothing but that is ok because there is people out there that is putting more effort then some of us. Imagine if the whole world doesnt do nothing for a whole day where would our economy go to or our community they would collapse. If we all do our work imagine how our economy would go and how our community would improve if we would all do something our world would be a better place for all people and animals. For right now more people our doing their part than people that are not because if more people are not doing nothing than people that are doing something then this world would have collapsed already.

If your are a person that is always putting in their part you will recieve more than the people that dont do nothing. Look life is a test full of choices the choices are what define you and what you have done and they will define you your whole life and your choices may be better for the people or not but if their not the chose wisely next time because choices can change the world like chosing to do something or not. Its not bad to not doing nothing your not doing damage to no one all i'm tryna say is that your help could help the community and the world so don't be afraid to do something and dont be ashamed of doing something and failing be ashamed of not trying.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
CD81F6CCE819,"I believe that self-esteem comes from achievement because the more a student work hard, the more achievements he/she get so when they receive more awards and/or achievements, it makes them to proud of their selves and build true self-esteem.

There are so much students who works hard, complete their work on time and also have a part time job after school, but they don't know how to build their true self-esteem so what they need to work is that they must be self confident because they can't build their self-esteem unless they're self confident.

Also, there are much more students who go to school and don't have a job or anything after school or during weekend and they're self confident, but don't know how to build their self-esteem.

So, students should try their best to receive achievements because it encourages and/or makes them to build their self-esteem.

Self-esteem is something that students can build it by theirsleves if they work hard, be punctual at school and have a checklist or a plan for what they should do first as a calender.

Students aren't working hard nowadays I have no idea that it's because technology makes them lazy or they don't want to plus they're not trying to achieve something at school.

I'm sick and tired of seeing these kind of students because if they just open their school backpack and at least study for two hours at home, they will receive a lot of achievements at school so that's how they can achieve their goals.

So, when it comes to build their true self-esteem, they need to work on achievements and become self confident first and then best version of their selves.

Teachers also have a role in this issue because I think students spend more time with their teacher compare to their parents in a week.

I don't mean teachers discuss with them to build either their self-esteem or self confidence unless the student is smart and curious to ask his/her teachers and peers about becoming like a person who has self confidence and already built his/her self-esteem.

But, at least they show students the right way to get achievements or achieve their goals so that would be enough, and students will start thinking about how to get achievements and then they'll probably start working on their self confidence and self-esteem.

In addition, when I came to the united states it was 2017, I didn't know any English and I didn't have any friends at school so everybody knows how hard it is to go to school and can not speak with anyone or don't have friends plus I was a shy guy.

When somebody was trying to talk to me, my face was becoming red and start blushing so it's all because I didn't have self confidence.

So, I am still trying my very best to learn the language and make some friends at school so I can play or do my work with them together.

That being said, now I can speak, write and read very well and I became so much more confidence, best version of myself, have a lot of friends, and so happy to attend school.

Overall, being self confident and working hard for achievements are like a key for building students self-esteem which comes from achievements.

Students should focus at school or wherever else they study so they get achievements which helps them to build their self-esteem.

Students also should be encouraged by their parents to build their self-esteem as well as by their selves unless they're self confident in life.                                                                            ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,4.0
D6504339A690,"The reason its good to ask more than one person about advice about something is because if you ask somebody for something that can help you for your daily life. It might be helpful and it might not be helpful, but now you know that it doesn't work for you.

When ever you ask someone for their opinion about something, you shouldn't expect what they tell you. You should be aware that it might not work and might not go the way you want it to go or the way you expect it to go. Before you do anything tell your self, ok, if this doesn't go right, this is my fault not the person I asked advice for.

Also when you ask a person for advice and it does work, make sure before you ask the person make sure you say thank you because somtimes people just walk away from you pretending your not even there when they know your asking them something. so just know that your thankful for people wanting to listien to you and wounder what you need or what you need information on.",3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
ABBE700093F0,"A city council is debating the adoption of a 10 p. m. weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. If the curfew is adopted, teenagers on the streets after those hours would be breaking the law. Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, or do they unfairly interfere in young people lives?

Curfew helps young kids to stay out of trouble because it can be dangerous. For example, if they just wording around at night they don't know what can happened like they can get kidnap, and be at a place at a wrong time. They can think it's cool but in reality it's not. If a police men stop or pull you over you can get in to trouble because they gonna ask if your parents know you out or if they know where you at and if you said no they gonna call you parents and ask them to come and get you.

Sometimes your parents can get worry if you not home. Kids want to meet up with there friends just to hang out but is it really worth it or to get in trouble knowing your friends ain't gonna have your back. Curfew keep teens from getting in trouble. Although curfew can be good but it shows that your parents can trust you. Night can be really dangerous because you can't see in the dark and you don't know what can be out there. There can be drunk drivers at night also.

Curfew is a law so if you go out late at night you would be breaking the law. Police man really do be canning this serious. All they want is kids to stay safe and be good also to listen to their parents. Teens think that meeting up with there friends at night is cool. But parents just want there kids to behave and listen so they won't get in serious trouble. Why lose your parent trust over some friends that ain't gonna talk to you later in life. Be smart on what side you try to be. Not everything is all about friends you gotta put your parents first then your friends that why them made a curfew.

Plus it the matter of respect for your parents.

Curfew actually helps teens from doing wrong things. Teens don't think that there parents gonna find out but when they get that call saying mom you gonna get nervous or scared because you dont't know what to say for being at late. Parents can be smart at times when they want to but they do be catching here kids in the act of sneaking out ! Teens really do have a choice by picking stay home or go out and have fun. People really care about this law. Who wanna see a kid walking alone without no parent around. Teens just need to sleep or play on there gaming systems . You can hang out with your friends during the day or have a sleep over . Whatever you can do to hang out with your friends but DON'T GO SNEKING OUT TO GO GET FOOD OR TO BE WITH YOUR GRILFRIEND! Just stay at home call up your friends or even your girlfriend so you won't put your self at a higher risk of getting in trouble.

Overall just stay out of trouble and have your parents trust. Don't do nothing stuiped. Stay at home make do homework or watch a movie just don't sneake out jsut to do stuff thats gonna get you in trouble.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
7A7660BBEE86,"The greats benefits to work with a group

To work on groups is better for many reasons,everybody can help each others,in groups student's can do a better work,and it can help all the people on the group to learn more skills,it can help students to know each others and be friends, more communications, more ideas and sometimes it can be helpful to work in groups because some students don't know what to do,i thing teachers should let student's to work more on groups so like that they would help each other and work better,and is good to work with a group because that can help you for the rest of your life like on your job also with your family and you con do better and a great job if you work in group

It can be helpful for students to work in group,First, because with more people helping are more and betters ideas and more helpful for every students,and sometimes student's don't know what to do,but if somebody on the group help so he would understand and know how to do a great job and work with a group is much helpful than work alone on many ways like to understand better with communication with your group and it can be helpful so you can do a good work and pass the class and not failed,and work in group it can help you to know others people that are in the same classroom but you never have the oportunity to talk wich their so in the teacher make a group and you can joing to one there is going to be new people and you can know others people

,Second,it is good for student's to work in groups because they can learn more skills such like the communication and they can help each others with the written,and also they can help each others how the way they talk. The communication is important and many cases because with communication you can do many things, like if you don't understand something you can tell somebody for help and all the persons on the groups can practice all days to do a great work,and also some student's need a lot of help so students that know more can join to the groups to help the others,but sometimes is not because some students don't know how to do the work sometimes it because they don't understand sometimes is because the language is a problems for some student's so there is good to make groups to help them,Third it can be an experience to work in groups because some students that don't know each others later on they can be friends and work in groups it can be helpful to students,but also to school because work on groups students can understand more and they can get betters grades also work in groups and a a good relationship it can be helpful not only at the school it can be helpful like in your home with the family and not to get in trouble with their, but also it can help you on your job to work well and not to have problems with the people that you work with,is like on soccer that why it call a soccer team because they help each others they share new or more strategies that it can help others to do a great job because work in groups students have more and betters benefits to do a great job,Finally is good to have a good communication in groups because with a great communication all the the group can understand each others and is important to have a good relationship in the group so like that they can do a better job and some students help others and that is great to be generous with others because if you help to someone that need help other people is going to help you on what you need and is a lot much better to work in group than alone sometimes when you are working alone and you got stuck in something no body is going to help you,but if you are working with more people in group they going to help you on what you need but most of the teachers want's to students work alone sometimes is good that students work alone because sometimes students got distracted for the people on the group and the teachers don't wants students to copy each others sometimes is good to work alone maybe better concentration,but sometimes is not that good to work alone because sometimes you got stuck in somethig, but if you are working with a group they are going to help you i would like to see more teachers that put more student's to work in group i don't think student's would like to work alone than with a group is better an sometimes is more easy and faster

In conclusion, is a great idea for me thats teachers make students to work in groups on my opinion is much helpful to they work in groups instead to work alone,because when people work in groups they have betters ideas and they can do a better work with more interesting and more opinions is better to do a great job and also have a great relationship and a great communication is so important to work in a group and some students know more than others so the students thats know more is good that they help the others on what they need and is good to work in group so like that you can know others people i hope teachers continuing making groups to students can learn more than what they know and work in group it can help you on your life because if you got a job and many people work there too but you don't like to work with others people as a group the boss is going to kick you out only because you don't know how to work as a group and if you only like to work alone it can be a problem if you don't understand work with others people is better always more ideas,opinions like that you can do a better work and it can help your future job and the rest of your life sometimes some student's don't like to work in group's sometimes it because they don't know others people,but i thing if teachers would like to student's work more in groups i thing they would like it and they can have more communication student's would like to work with a group, I like to work with a group because sometimes i don't know what to do so others students help me to do a great work and we all share other.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
DBC04530D2F9,"Have your ever ask yourself what makes a person's character?. Some People think that a person's character is define by their actions and by what their selves choose to. While others think that character is form by influences beyond control. I agree that as individuals our character is influenced beyond our control because of , internet influence, fit in society , and by actions.

One reason why character is influence beyond control is because people get influenced by internet platforms. Internet platforms in influence in many ways some could be good , while other not quit so. Character is influence by social medias posts , YouTube videos and variables of things. These kind of things interfere with a person characteristic people might want to follow and do what they see on internet. a person might not even be awarded that they are being influence by internet.

second claim why a person's character is influence beyond control is because they get influence by society. People might feel that to fin in society they have to have the same characteristics and act the same as others to be accepted and tolerated by society. People who is pressure by others would act and do things that they know are no specifically good. For example you are a very respectful and kind person but they you turn into a not so kind person their has to be something making you changed the way you are and that could be other people , changing your character.

Lastly people's characteristics are influence beyond control because of the actions they take in life.

People's actions influenced the way they are and act. By taking good actions your character will be defined in a positive and understandable way. good actions will be the key into having authentic and unique character.

In conclusion there are many factors that influence that a person's character.

People some often get their way of acting and doing thinks from internet platforms which could be something bad it's not take with careful. Today,s society can have a big impact in everyone's lives, we are living in a time were people would do whatever takes to fit in and feel like think they are part of society, but sometimes being around people is not mentally healthy. Actions are a big part a person,s characteristics because your character will depend on actions.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
27B8304D6E89,"we should perform community service because we are helping our society to become much cleaner. for examples i can give are, help janitors to clean litter from school, help the teachers by tutoring kids, go to the library to help clean and organize it so i could look perfect when kids come to the library, and to go to the hospitals to help patients, and so we can help clean the hospital. That's why i think we all should perform community service.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
D14413B502FD,"We accomplish more when we are always doing something. Where would the humans be if we had been inactive. Do you believe in people when they say prates makes perfect. It is a proven fact that when we work on something we get more done. Malty million air companies work on improving their product each day.

The greatest people on earth say or have said prates makes perfect. When you work on something for a long time you often tend to get good at it. We have tacanolagey all around us, it helps us corpulent a lot of our daily tasks, but there people still working on making it better and better til this his day. People work on things everyday, so they can reach their goals that they have seat for them self.

We solve more problems when we are working. The smartest people on this earth have worked their entire life to invent different types of things that still help us today. They have done a lot of thing i their life because of their hard work and wanting to keep doing something to help their community. Students go to school five days a week to accomplish more in their life.

Malty million air companies are always doing something. We have tacanolgey, medaction, and transportation because of these companies employees working hard everyday to provide us with the best of best products. That is why these big companies make so much money because they work hard like for example Apple makes so many updates to there product each year and there one of the biggest companies. Inactivity also serves a purpose by having your mind fresh when your ready to work again and can lead to having bigger and better ideas.

We accomplish more when we are always doing something. Where would the humans be if we had been inactive. Do you believe in people when they say prates makes perfect. It is a proven fact that when we work on something we get more done. Malty million air companies work on improving their product each day.    ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
4256A9A1767F,"In my oppinion people should seek guidance from expercts and authorities about life's important matter instead of making thier own desisions. A few people may not agree, but I personally strongly agree with my oppinion is very important. I belive asking and sharing our ideas lead us to making better desisions. Here are three reasons why seeking guidence from expercts and authorities is better than making desitions on your own.

In addition, confusion is one of of the most common reasons why people end up making bad desistion. A lot of people might not know what it is going on or how to make a good desicion because it is probably their first time going through a situation they have never been in. I was not in a position to make my own desistions, because I was young and confused on what was going well untill I asked someone for help,but when I started making my own desitionsions

Also, it leads you to do better when you communticate with others and gives you a better understanding on why making your desision with others helps you out more. When I began to speak out about my desisions to my closest friends and they helped me make me feel that I was not going through it alone and they always made sure that the desision I understand the desision I was taking before even making my next move. It honestly helped me a lot.

Furthermore, it makes your life less stressful. You talked about what you were stressing about instead of bottling It all up. It is like some stress relive. For exapmple, you have a big heavey backpack full with books inside and when you get some out the way, you take some books out , and the backpack feels less heavy. I would feel relive on talking about what was stressing me out when I had to make a desision, because it is hard.

In conclusion, Not only do you make a desision but you uderstand, you communicate, and you feel relived about your desision. In the end of the day you would feel not only good about your desision but sure about yourself and the people around you. These were the three reasons on why you talking to experts and ahorities about life is important.                      ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,2.5
FABE0E966789,"Dear, Principal

Students may bring there phones to school but they could only use them while there in lunch or any free time. Phones need to be turned off while in class or in the library if not they might get there phone taken away and they need to pick it up at the end of the day. Student's phones must be in their backpacks or in their pockets during class.

On, this policy by having phones at school the students should just leave their phones at home so it wont be taken by the teacher or so you wont loose it at school or other students wont have to rob you. So that's why students should really leave there phones at home. Another thing why students should not bring their phones to school at all it might fall and brake when you walk or if your texting you might bump into each other

I believe that students really need to leave there phones at home because someone might call in the middle of class. or a friend might text you in the middle of class also so students leave your cell phones at home..",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
E2F31005AF32,"Only topic that is frequenthy is debate today is whether or not conserve energy and resouces since some business have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Some peolpe think that not only extending the school day should conserve energy and resource. They feel that is the same thing and also too that is more time in the school in addiction that they will spent more money in energy like electricity, ligths , charge to computers ,blackboard electric and the more things, an resource that should spent more is the water because some students when go to the bathroom they forget closed the washstand. I believe that should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because should be take care about of how to conserve energy, resources and the last but not the least is we will have more time for make a the world better and take consience.

One reason i believe why that should follow this model by extending the school day two hours is because we can conserve more energy for the future, and also too the school should instruct to each student to be careful about the how to consume energy, for example to teach wich focus is the correct for the use in the home and gives tips for that maybe they to pay the least possible bill of light.

Another reason is that i feel that a resource that we can save in the school is the water because all students use almost two time the bathroom and always to take down the pull of the toile, i think the students can make posters in where show the importance about how to save the water and others resources that in the school can save is the plastic and paper because in some places purchase this resources, and with the money the school should to be a better school than others and the students should be more careful about this rescources.

The final reason is that i believe if the school add two hours at the day students and teachers should will have more time for to do more thigs, a thing that the teachers and students will can do is maybe a propaganda, in this propaganda they can show the society how prevent the clime global and to instruct how to be careful with of world, other thing that the students can do is a page online in where to instruct the other students and people out school how make herself have to be careful.

As you have read i think that the school should add two hours per day becuase all peolpe in the school can have more conscience for to save the energy and resource the last but not the leas the world. Only when we take consience for change the world. Will we have a better world on day.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
8476588805D9,"3/7/2019

Cedar Walk Way,

Generic_City

To the manager of

Amazon

School is the place where we get opportunity to learn different things. Schools makes you capable to choose your own way. The main reason to go school is to make our career. Career is directly related to the employment. Everyone wants to do the best in their life. Employment is the thing that helps you to do best in your life and also helps us to understand who we are and how important we are. Now a days, school have partnerships with companies to help students to choose their interests employment. So, if you select me to visit and learn about the works, it will helps me to understand about the interest that I have for my future.

The most important things in students life is to choose their own interest, to make their future happy and peaceful ,but they really don't understand where will they go because of the pressure in their mind. So, I want to be selected to visit and learn about the work. It helps me to understand about the characteristic of the different works, and also helps me to recognize my interest for my career. Employment is not the biggest thing,but the interest is the biggest things. If we have interest in something, we defiantly work hard to get that goal. For example: I had a one friend whose name is Generic_Name, she choose to be a doctor in first, but then she realize that she never had any interest in doctor. After that, she left her job and become a photographer because photographic is her real interest not to be a doctor. That's why, I don't want to be confuse in my life. I want to be clear about my future.

All the people in this world are different, they have different aim in their life. Some wants to be doctor,some wants to be an engineer,pilot,photographer,dancer,etc. In this 21st century,all the parents wants their children to be a doctor or an engineer or in the other biggest post but not all the children have same interest as their parents have. Although they have different aim or interest, they join in the work that their parents wants because they don't understand the value of their interest. So, if the school or any companies allow students to explore or visit about the works, they better understand the value of their interests and never join in any other works that they don't want to be. I have an example of my own sister: In first, she joined in the medical line because my parents wants her to be a doctor and after she read some of the courses of the medicine,she realize that her interest is not to become a doctor and then she left her courses and start another courses. So, I really don't want that same things happened to me.

Time is very important for everyone. Nobody wants to waste their time because they believe that time is money. So,why students waste their time to choose the way that they don't want to go. Everyone has rights to select their own jobs. The problem is not that they don't get opportunity to choose their jobs,the problem is that they don't understand where is their destination. For example: If you left your dog in a street that he never walked,

then how can you expect that he accomplished his destination? Same happened to the students life, if someone who is well-experienced didn't tell them about the journey of life or how to choose their interest,how can we except that they will become a successful person.

Lastly, I want to say that if you select me to visit and learn about the work ,then I get opportunity to learn about my interest which helps me to get a better future. And also, if you select me I will aware other people about the interest or works and also help them to choose their interest. If I understand my journey, then I expect that I will success to get my destination. So, I humbly request you that please select me to visit and learn about the work that I have interest to do.

Generic_Name,             ",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
DCEE7FD21CFD,"Imagine if you we're confused about which activity you should choose. There are a lot of activity you could do outdoors like for example, you could go to community parks, state parks, national parks, or other outdoor activities. On top of all of them, spending time with your friends outdoors is the most enjoyable activity of all others. A lot of people enjoys spending time with their friends because playing with the people you know is enjoyable, you can discuss things with you're friends, and they can make you comfort.

One reason, people enjoys spending time with their friends is playing with the people you know. It's not fun to play with the people you don't know, like you dont know what's their favorite game or what other kind of things they like or dislike. If you we're not playing with you're friends it's not enjoyable and it can stress you out. It will be a lot of fun playing with you're friends because they will know what you like or dislike. The people you know, you can always discuss things with them.

Another reason, people enjoys spending time with their friends is discussing things with them whether it's a good thing or a bad thing. Friends are always there to help you, if somebody needs to talk about how they feels they're always there. You should always trust you're friends,so they can trust you back. If your friends are trustworthy you can always discuss things with them and they will gladly to hear it. When you discuss things with your friends they also make you comfort.

Lastly, when you spend time with your friends they can make you comfort. When your feeling horrible or anxious about something, they will take away all the horrible feeling you have and cheer you up. Friends are also there to make you calm,so you dont worry about anything. They take away all the negative emotions, so you dont feel bad. Friends will always make you feel comfortable if something is wrong with you.

Undoubtedly a lot of people enjoys spending time with their friends outdoors because playing with the people you know is enjoyable, you can discuss things with your friends,and they can make you comfort. Playing with the people you know they will know which things you like or don't like, and you can always discuss things that bother you with your friends. Friends are always there to comfort you,so you don't have to worry about things that make you feel bad. In conclusion, there are other a lot of activities people can enjoys, but one personally will be spending time with your friends outdoor.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A9F7B20A9483,"On my opinion I be agree with the statement because He was one of the minister,who has more power from other's. Ms Winston had to help other's. For example giving hand and talk about what they can do. The minister Winston, had the responsibility to help others around he, and give enthusiasm to what they can do and how far they can go.

Them Let's say on my class my teacher ask to work with others I had to work and show up. For example: let's talk about work in group,help each other giving ideas to we can add on the project. The terms was tried if you fails show up and do cause there is how you can be better. If you make a mistake no problem on other time you can do more better on my opinion there is how the minister can work.

In addition there the things can Minister Winston do was talk about with others if they be agree. Because if they do not be agree with the statement was cause they had to know that and see is the achievement work successful too.

Now I take the my position on my opinion many people like me came to this country and looking for better opportunities to we don't have in our country. Also we had to learn the languages what is hard but we tried to what we can do and show up how we can be better on the future.

But many student had a long history or someone didn't graduated cause many student had to pay rent or thing to what's hard to work after school and don't have to much time to sleep, any ways we had to work hard.

Also many student show what they can do and how far they can go, Also many emigrant people came here to found a safe place to live so the mind on our country we don't many security.

Now I'M be here work hard, sometimes I like to help people when they get travel or didn't understand what we do. Also I tells them to din't do bad things cause if you get travel you get problem them your record contain a bad thing, until now I to my best it's hard sometime to understand but everyday when I be at home I practice or read book thats one thing can help everyone who want to learn more English. For example if you read a book like 20 minutes you learn and know how to pronounce that work that help you to main ten your vocabulary an read faster.

I'm a student who like to help others and like to share new ideas with other and talk about what we want to on a future. a couples of thing I want to share are : thanks the program for help us and the teacher who help us with new things everyday.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
F3E2F311D829,"people should not make their own decisions because people hurts someone feelings about the decisions they are making, people always need someone to be agree if their decisions are good to make it, and people think just because they are old enough can make better decisions.

People hurts someone feelings because they made something really bad even if a person tells them that they are doing wrong things, they keep doing it, because for them the decisions that they are making are great for them. One example, lets say, when we were young that we fall a lot time in love. we were wishing to have someone to advise us because we think if the decision that we are going to make is not going to hurt someone. We always think about what is going to happen if we do things that we know are not good choices. We need somebody to advise us about anything. Another example, when I was planing to leave my house with my boyfriend because I did not wanted to go to school. I get really mad. I did not think on anything. I just wanted to do it even if Mom gets a heart attack because she wants me be more educate and have a better future, so someone that I have not seen in my whole life get close to me and say "" You are too young, think about what life can brings you if you go to school, if you graduate from college that many wonderful thing you can have. Do not throw your life in that way. You will have time to be with someone"" I realized that I was making the worse decision ever.

Everyone always need someone to be agree about their decisions, because someone may have a lot of experience about life that way they can be the guide for them. they can talk about the decisions that they were making in the past and that can helps to make a good decisions. One example, one friend made a bad a really bad decision. His family told him to stop doing the things he was doing because it will be a lot consequences. That is what happened he made a wrong decision. He did not listen and now is dead because of his decisions.

Most think that they are old enough to take their own decisions, as we can see, it does not matter what age we have. What matters is how mature we are, because we have to be aware of the responsibility about any kind of decisions we are going to make. We have to say to ourselves "" okay if I do this I have to be conform about the result that I am going to get"".

Clearly, All we do is because someone is making us better by telling that we do not always have to trust on ourselves. Sometimes for some discussion we do not do the right thing, we do not think and we use our bad mood and due to that we make bad choices. We have to be more responsible. "" Make good choices, do not let your mood take position of your actions"".

Think before your decisions. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
B3F18E671DF2,"Do you think it is good decision to make school longer? When i was in my home country schools was only for six hours i disagree that schools extend two hours a day because the students will lost their focus, teachers will get tired from standing more than two hours, and some of the student will change their high school.

The student will lost their focus for example when i was in Afghanistan our school was from 8 to 12 and we where tired from listening to teachers. However, when i came to united state it was tough for many reason. for instance

When i came to united state it was so hard for me to get up at six and come home at two o clock. In addition if we have school ten hours of school each day the student and the people who work inside the school they all will get tired of school and student will not learn the teachers will get tired of teaching ten hours a day. Teachers will get tired of sanding for example they teach more than two hundred student a day so they will get tired and they teach for tomorrow. Once students get tired they will lost the focus form the teachers and they will start to talking with each other playing around the classroom or they will using their cell phones taxing their friends planning to skip their classes or panning to drop out of schools. The student will not get everything in their mind they will forget it for the next day. Maybe some student come to school and stay at school longer than seven hours a day but maybe some student cant stay longer than seven hours a day because maybe they work after school or maybe doing some think at home for example maybe they take cares of their little brothers or sisters or maybe they clean up the house. Teachers will get so tired because they will talking all day long explaining the chapter and students will not listening to them. Some students will change their schools because they doesnt want to be at schools more than six or seven hours a day. And also those who works in the schools it will be hard for them to clean up the schools the bad rooms or to cook food for students and than after that they have to wash ever think for next students that are coming after A lunch.

In conclusion, imagine you dismiss on the usual time of school. I wish that we dismiss from school on the usual time. I hope all the decision maker wonder how much students get tired and stress.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
36A5035117B4,"Have you ever stop and think what made the person that you are right now? I believe that there are much greater ways than just being a good person, because being a good person can be bad and having more possibilities is more beneficial than just having one

Although many people think that your own influence can be the best way, i believe there are better ways to teach people the right path. My mom mother never yelled at me before, she is always nice with, because every time she starts to even think about, she remembers her father how she was always mean with her, as much as she wanted hated him she told to herself to never treat people the way her father did, So even if my her father wasn't a good Role Model, she was still able to get better as a person.

When i was younger my Brother and i would play video games, but i always had to sleep early than him because i was the youngest one. I never wanted to sleep but Brother always told me that: ""if you dont' sleep you won't be able to talk and see anymore"". He did lied to me,but it was for my own good.

In conclusion, Being just a good isn't the only thing that matters, you also need motivation and be capable of doing anything that you want to do, even if the adults are agressive and evil.            ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
98D8FF9E3C56,"The life is being more modern, people also need to improve themselves. That's why some schools want to offer some programs which are good for students. Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Most students who allow this plan must take courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective courses.

This plan has two positions,some people agree, but others don't think it's a good idea. Is it a good idea? It is. It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early if the students want because they can save time, they can have new experiences, new challenges which help for their life in the future, they still can take elective courses also have vacations latter after college or work if they want.

Let's start with the first reason now. Do you agree that the time is limit? The time is the only thing you can't move back. Because of this, a lot of people, especially students are thinking how to spend time helpful. These programs will help many students save time. They can save one year in school, that also means they can reach success early one year. Many people spend summer having vacations to relax, and evenings watching TV, but the other people spend this time studying. They choose have more time after success instead of have time when they haven't had anything.

The next reason will be the reason help students the most. Most students who follow this plan will have a lot of experiences also challenges because they must have the same knowledge in shorter time than, they will have pressure, but it will grow up ourselves. They can become stronger, independent by working on own and have more information about lessons because this time is not enough for teachers can teach everything, they must research more.

The last reason refers to elective courses. Many students like these courses, but some students don't. These programs do not require to take elective courses, so some students can skip these course which they don't like or do not helpful for their career. They also take these courses after college or work if they want. They can choose also consider what is they need. Moreover, this plan don't require you skip these elective courses, you just may not be able to take these, so if you want to take courses, you can plan for this. It depends on your choice.

On the other hand, many students do not agree this plan. They think it gives stressful for them, they worry about they cannot have enough lessons. But if you think that it means you don't confide your ability also don't try for your future. Sometimes, the life needs challenges to grow up and it will be interesting. To enter college or the work, all we need are knowledge or skill, not how long we took them. You can choose your way, success will come soon or later depends on you.

Conclusion, we should support some schools offer these programs that allow high school students to graduate early if they can. Our life will change if we change, our success will come if we try, and it will happen early if we have a plan. After all, which one do you agree with? It is a challenge but many students can do. However, it will be fair if students can choose take or not these programs.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
BCE3D895D850,"We accomplish more if we are always doing something. I agree with that. People,who are always doing something will get a good habit. An active process creates a the positive success, and in the road of the success, it would never had a footprints of lazy people.

We'll create a good habit and accomplish more, if we are always actively focusing and doing something. With the good habit, we always feel good and comfortable to study, learn, and do everything. It'll make everything easier. Especially the way people look at you will be changed to positive and respect. Good habit also help you create a good process.

An active process creates the positive success. Restaurant would not able to serve a delicious meal, if they didn't have a good preparation. We are the same. Nobody could be a good doctor, a good architecture, or anything good think, unless they tried hard and focused. So working hard, and always doing something is the key to open the successful gate.

In the road of the success, it would never had a footprints of lazy people. We can't have a good result, if we'll be lazy, and inactivity doing, learning something. Nobody want to hire or work with a lazy people, because they have none, they can't make a good result. We should not feel enough for something, that'll be a reason make us become lazy. So we should work hard every time, and we should not think:"" Inactivity would serve a purpose"".

We should work hard to get and good process, and the good process'll create success. Never enough for something. In the road of the success, it would never had a footprint of lazy people. Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."".",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
D15E85D292CE,"""Cell phones"", for the main statement I must evacuate cell phones in school time. Students are often breaking ""expectations"" about using your cell phone in class. But some schools choose to use cell phones for educational purposes only during that time. Now, we should be able to see why cell phones are doing to the students of any school. Cell phones may disrupt students' work, make them feel misplaced, and make them rebellious.

Cell phones may disrupt students' work. This may happen when students play games or text in their cell phones. Probably when students might make them less focus on their work just checking social media. Students of many ages have trouble enough with their homework and also classwork. May cell phones be causing this to begin with? Maybe, just so we know cell phone may disrupt students' work.

Cell phones may make them feel misplaced. What I mean for that is a student just be on their cell phones a lot, an student may just feel better on their phone instead of doing work. which makes the student disconnect with class time. Not even using it to complete work making a opinion sound like a fact. As we know cell phones may make them feel misplaced.

Cell phones may make them rebellious. Another meaning by this is to disrespect authority. ""Authority"" means the staff of the school of any kind of departments. Some students in blood are rebellious, but not the man made kind. They may feel furious when criticize for anything done on phone. They may feel like that anytime with the main disturbance of the classroom. So cell phones make them rebellious.

Next,our argument against cell phones is extremely important to all others expect the students. Students will fight back other supporters of the opposite answer hes been fighting against. My counter argument settles the fact cell phones are not good in class room for any time. Now, students would be more efficient without cell phones than with cell phones. So, this has settled against everyone.

In conclusion, Students think their doing a great work with a cell phone in deck. But in reality, it is making you more and more dependent with your mind. But many people actually learn from it. Either you have a learning style or make great grades with cell phones must see the negatives of this. Other students using cell phones may disrupt students' work, make them feel misplaced,

and make them rebellious.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
C22B43EE7FB8,"School cafeteria plants to changue the school menu to a new healthier school menu. Some students' are agree and anothers students' are disagree to this plant.

Some students are disagree about this plant because some students have problems, they sick from have new food in the organism and they like to know what they eat for the rest of the day, because if they are sick they know what they eating. Also some students don't like eat new thinks because they like eat the same food all day. In adition some students have alergy for some food so they need to know what they eat if they have problems with the healthy.

However another people are agree about this plant because eat the same food all day is bored they don't like that. In adition the food of the school is not healthy for all students, the food they give to the students have not protein and that is a problem for the students,

because they can have deceased. Also some students like to eat new think they like enjoy differents tipes of food.

In my opinion the school need to change the school menu because more students are agree about this plant. The opinion for a lot students is change the menu because they are bored eat the same food all day the studens need to eat new think.

In conclusion some students are disagree about this plant of change the menu of the cafeteria because they don't like eat new thinks because they think meybe the food is not good or something can affect the organism. In adition some people are agree about this plan of change the menu of the cafeteria because eat the same food all days is bored and they want to eat new tipes of food and they think the food of the cafeteria is not healthy and they sick from this tipe of food. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0
988BFF516FA0,"We have many parks that provide a wide of variety of interesting activities for everyone. There is many activities to enjoy ,But i will give you a specific activity that people would enjoy spending time outdoors. Why someone might find that activity enjoyable?, i will explain and give specific details.

As we all know that parks provide many activities for us. One enjoyable activity is playing soccer ,You don't need to have good skills to play soccer. Many teens play soccer or they are in a soccer team , because they enjoy it. I know there is a lot of enjoyable activities , but i chose soccer. I play soccer with my friends and family , we really find it enjoyable to go outdoors and have some fun together. Many kids don't like going outside because they think sports are boring , But they aren't boring to me. In the summer time parks are open for you to enjoy activities with your kids and family. You can choose to do any activity you think is enjoyable for your family. Soccer is a sport that can help you keep you healthy and have a good body shape. Your kids will enjoy playing soccer with their friends outdoors. Many parents don't let their kids go places with their friends , because they think something bad might happen to them.

Meanwhile , many kids like to play other sports that are different than soccer , but they still enjoy it. Soccer is the same as many sports kids do at school or at parks. Teens spend their time at parks playing many sports during the summer time. My family go to parks to enjoy the water and play games that they never played before. If i enjoy playing soccer i think you will too , why not have some fun and probably hurt ,but hope that doesn't happen to anyone. You feel free when you play a sport you like to play or you might want to try a new sport. Always try something new because there isn't a lot of time to enjoy moments like that.

Also,I think someone might find playing sports enjoyable , because it's fun playing outdoors with your family or friends. We have two seasons that we can play outdoors and you will enjoy it. Also parents will enjoy spending time with their kids. Why not take time out your day so you can spend time with your kids more. Yes , you might not like it but many people do like going outside to the park with their children. I think spending time with your kids will let them know that you care and love them.

In my conclusion one way you could have an enjoyable time outdoors is playing sports. why not go outdoors and have some fun with your friends. Enjoy the time you have with your family and friends , imagine if something happens that causes you to not go outdoors. You might not like going outside ,but do it for you and your own health. Outdoors can also help you get stress out and excise your body more. Enjoy the time you have to enjoy with your family. What activities do you like to spend time outdoors for ?",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
4E29345CF8A9,"Students are expected to identify a career?

I think students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school, because student should think in their future wild there in high school because they can start to get ready to University or college to choose what career they would like to study.

I think student can start thinking in what kind of career they want to study in high school at a young age because is important to students to known what career they want to story after finishing high school.

in some societies,students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because they can select a specific guide to help study better for your career.

FOR EXAMPLE: My friend is in high school right now and she is thinking about collage, what does she want to became and she tell me she want to be a teacher to teach other kids math because she is very good in math so she is getting really to college and studying to became a teacher.

However; other said that young boy don,t have to worry about any career wild there in high school because they still younger, but otherwise i think is a good idea to start thinking in college when you are in high school because is important for kids to known what career they want.",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
ACC830989D7A,"We all live with purpose, finding a nice job, having a big house, or traveling all over the world. Most of us are very busy to achieve our goals in life. Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""

Determine never to be idle ... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" We accomplish more if we are always doing something.

Deligence leads us to a road of success. For example, The successful people are always willing to spend times and put efforts in their work. In history, a lot of leaders showed us that success comes from keeping doing and trying things over and over to make it what it is today.

When we become deligent, we spend our time doing meaningful things. We become more efficient and tend to be more responsible for our lifes, it pushes us forward to our destinations in a good way.

Experiencing lets us learn more. For example, We learn from books and documentaries about what other people have experienced or doing different things by ourselves then gain perspectives from it. Those things make us talented and gives us guides about how things might be when we grow up. It also gives us advantages when we encounter difficult things and try to deal with it. The more we experience, the more valuable and proficent we will be.

While some people believe that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. Other argue that inactivity also serve a purpose, for example, They say that we only live once, why give ourselves such hardtimes and do not do things that make us feel comfortable and happy. Although this may be true, it will just makes us lazy and does not give our lifes meanings and purposes.

We will accomplish more if we are always doing somthings. Deligence makes us have a positive attitude to put efforts in our works, we can become more responsible for ourselves. It shows us the passions. The more we experience, the more successful we will become. Gaining perspectives makes us be aware of what we can do in the future. we should keep doing things and learning knowledges for the better us.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
FCD0FB7FE622,"What I believe is that if you always try your best in life and dont matter what other people think or see about you just be yourself and do best you in this life because is the only one that we all have and doing good think is the best you can do to respect other and be a good example to other people to better in our society to help each other care about other to not discriminate other just because where they are from or what color they are we can do better we just have to change are way to think about other.

We can accomplish a lot of staff not just by doing something we can do more because we are human and we can help each other we're alone in this world we have to fight for our future we have to earn we have to help not just because somebody have to tell us but is come whit are heart to acoomplish good staff.    ",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
34553E598A00,"FIRST, I CHOOSE TOHAVE THE LONGER SPRING BREAKS.SECOND ,THE STUDENT CAN TRAVEL TO VISIT THEIR FAMILY.THIRD, ENJOYA THE BEACH FOR TIME THAT STUDENTS WANTS.DOESN'T HAVE WORRY ABOUT GOING BACK TO SCHOOL.

FIRST I CHOSE THAT STUDENTS SHOULD HAVE LONGER BREAK BECAUSE THE STUDENT NEED TO FUN FOR THE BREAK . II CHOSE THAT STUDENT HAVE THE LONGER SUMMER BREAK BECAUSE THE IS MY FAVORITE BREAK IN MY ALL FAMILY STAY HOME OR SOMETIME WE ARE TRAVEL SOME ANOTHER COUNTRY .

THE MOST OF THE STUDENT TRAVEL FOR ANOTHER PLACE .THE SOME STUDENTS CAN TRAVEL TO VISIT THEIR FAMILY BECAUSE THERE FAMILY WAS A DIFFERNT COUNTRY OR DIFFERENT PLACE .WE ARE VISIT HOME BECAUSE WE ARE ENJOYA THEIR FAMILY.WE ARE TRAVEL THE THE FUN PLACE BECAUSE MY FAMILY WAS A LOVE THERE .

WE ARE TRAVEL THE BEACH WE ARE ENJOY THE BEACH FOR MY FAMILY OR MY FRIENDS BECAUSE MY FRIEND AND WE ARE PLAY THE SAND WE HAVE THE FUN .MY ALL FAMILY WAS GOING THERE WE HAVE FUN. I CHOSE TONOT HAVE LONGER SPRING BREAK BECAUSE WON'T CATCH COLD .MORE DIFFICULT FOR STUDENTS OF THE CANSANTRATE .I CHOSE THE BOTH SIDE BECAUSE THERE WAS A NOT HAVE LONGER SUMMER BECAUSE WE CAN CATCH COLD MOVE DIFICULT FOR THE CONSANTRATE FOR THE STUDENTS .WE ARE TAKING THE LONG BREAKBECAUSE WE ARE FORGET THE EVERYTHINGS . I THINKS ALL STUDENT ENJOYA THE SUMMER BREAK BECAUSE THE SUMMER BREAK WAS THE FUN FOR THE STUDENTS.

MOST OF THE STUDENTS TAKE THE LONG BREAK BECAUSE TNE STUDENTS MOVE THE DIFFERENT PLACE .SUMMER BREAK TAKE THE 1WEAK FOR STUDENTS .THERE WAS THE DIFFERENTS KINDS OF THE SEASON BECAUES MOST PEOPLE LOVE SUMMER OR WINTER AND SPRINGS.SOME PEOPLE LOVE THE SUMMER OR SOME PEOPLE LOVE THE WINTER OR PEOPLE THE SPRINGS. THE SUMMER BREAKS OR WINTER SOMST OF THE PEOPLE ENJOY WINTER .THIS SPRING BREAK I WAS A TRAVEL TO MY COUNTRY BECAUSE I'M VISIT TO MY FRIENDS .I LOVE TO VISIT MY FRENSD .I THINK I AM MOVING DIFFERENT PLACE FOR THREE DAY THIS PLACE WAS A BEAUTIFUL.THER WAS DIFFERENT KINDS OF FLOWER OR DIFFERENT KINDS OF THE COLORS OR DIFFERENT FROOT OR DIFFERENT DRESS

DIFFERENT KINDS OF FESTIBLE.MOST STUDENTS LOVE TAKE 4,4 WEAK BREAKS THE SCHOOLS .                                                                                                      ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
E9BFBEA772EF,"I would like for you to consider hiring me for the job. I'm responsible and a quick learner I will take responsibility of my job that is given to me. I'll learn any skills necessary for the job. I'll be respectful of all my peers in our company show a good image of our company, so I'll do my job to the best of my ability. I'll show up on time to my job, and do my very best in my job.

To begin with, a good reason to hire me is I'm responsible and take responsibility of my duties in my job as an employee. If your looking for someone to hire here are some of my qualities to ensure your trust. For example, in school I always am on time to my classes and respectful of my teachers. If you hire me I will make sure to arrive on time and be respectful to all employees and customers. Then I'll work with you and improve on my skills and gain a lot of experience. In conclusion, I'll work hard and be responsible, but I also will learn quick the abilities needed for the job.

Secondly, I'll learn the skills necessary for the job as quick as possible. So that I'll help you in any situation to provide the best service to our customers. For instance, in school I'm a quick I've learned any subject in school within 2 to 3 days of practice. If I learn quickly I could use the knowledge I have to teach new employees that come to work. Then the company will have more production for our customers to benefit from. Simply put, I'll make sure to give my advice to new employees so our company can serve our customers to the best of our ability. I promise to be respectful to my peers and most importantly our customers.

Lastly, I'll be respectful to my boss and my peers and do as I'm instructed to do. I'm aware that being respectful to our customers is a priority in our company. As an employee I will give the best service possible to our customer and insure them of any doubts they may have. If I get the job I will ensure you that I'm qualified for the job and that you are getting a good employee. Then I will give the best of my service to any customer and learn more about other areas, so I can be of more help to other customers. These are the three reasons you should hire me for the job.

In conclusion, I would like to get hired to gain experience in any job position you may have. Learn new skills in any job position that will help me satisfy any customers needs. I'll learn my job as quick as possible to start helping as many people as I can. I will be respectful to customers, employees and managers. I'll show up on time to my job and take responsibility of my job and work hard and help in any situation I'm needed in. To conclude I want you to hire me knowing I'm the most qualified person for the job.",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
2538542762C0,"One topic that is frecuently dabated is if the schools should control students involvement in extracurricular activities. Some people think that the school should take control of the students extra activities and extra time. They feel that students need more educational activities to enrich their knowledgement at school. I believe that students should decided what they want to do with their extra time after school because some students have to work to help their families, some students have to get home earlier to take care of their sibbilings while their parents are at work and students like to do some other activities like sports, art or homework.

First, students have to work to help their parents and sibilings, it could be difficult to work and study at the same time, you get tired and all you think is get home and sleep, students who work do not have time to study for a quiz, test or do homework. However. Study hall could help them finish their homework, students who work don't get involved in extracurricular activities bacause they don't have time to make it through. But also they work for saving money for college, this is an a good idea because you are investing for your future. That is why students who work have to give up with some other acctivities that they want to do.

Second, some students have to get home early to take care of their sibbilings while their parents are at work, most of them can't afford a babysitter, this students might have the time to involve in a club, probably when one of their parents have a day off. They can do homework or other assigments for school or home while they are taking care of their sibbilings like made food for them, clean the house, laundry etc. That can get difficult for them because they have different responsabilities at the same time that they have to take care of school.

Third, other students like to do different activities like sports, they like to exercide everyday after school, there are many sports that hey can practice such as bascketball, baseball, tennis, gymnastics, etc. other students like to do art, envirroment and learn another language they can sign up for any club that they are interested on. This students are deffinetly involve in extracurricular activities from school, but they decided what they want to do with this extra time and the school do not have to tell them what should they do.

As have you read this are my reasons why I believe schools should not take control of the students activities after school. When we get to know each others personal dreams and problems this world is going to change because we are going to understand how people work hard to get succes and happiness. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
B6E9E12159E3,"When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. I think they ask more than one person for advice because other people can speak there opinion and give the person who wants advice some ideas. For example, Generic_Name wanted to plan a birthday party but she needs help on what theme she wants for her party. Generic_Name asks her mom, dad and her friends. They all said golden and blue would be a good theme for her party. Generic_Name takes there ideas. Generic_Name is now having her party golden and blue!

I also think people ask more than one other person because sometimes people don't have ideas of something they need help with. Some people need a better choice, so its better to ask other people then just think of your own ideas because hearing other people's thoughts can make your ideas better. I think people should always give at least another person's thoughts on what they need help with. It is always best to get another persons idea. It can make the person who needs the advice to gain some confidence on what they need advice on.

Overall, I think everyone should get another idea from someone else because it gives people more ideas. ",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
AEF788DA28DE,"I think that the principal should not change the school policy because there are many students in school that the only thing that make them happy is sports; and that is what makes them stay away from trouble. But if you take that away from them there going to have nothing and they wont be looking forward to going to school. And they may feel that they are not good in any thing but sports; and it motivates you to be better in school it teaches you how to cooperate with other student , how to be a good leader/captain, and many more. That's why I think that the principal should not change the school sports policy.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
29B364A33B4E,"""Unless you try to do something beyong what you have already mastered,you will never grow""

I think this is wrong becuase if you commit a mistake and you want to fix you cant due no matter what happen you always have a second change to grow.

Firts,Im explain my topic whith details a person who is due something for class always need help for others student's for example: All the students have differents opinions,but only one is the leader of the work they must be discuss the problem and star working. The people on the group don't have the same idea that the others have the work is amost finish but is not good enough,they present the work but is not good,the leader say I dont acept this work becuase is incomplete the students talk more the topic and they star working again in the problem. The people in the group never say I dont want to due this work,becuase all the people have to prove her self,they say maybe the work is not good but we can't make this again,you never have to felt that you cant not due becuase you cant grow no matter what happen you cant due again and star again.

Second,In situations you feelt that the things that you due or make are wrong ,but in not becuase the all the people in this world have a second or three changes to improve,and if you make a mistakes first is not matter that you have to made the same mistake again,you must be improve your self,world,class,and the people that you have you never have to feel grow becuase that word is not exist for a person who every day is triyng to make a good work. My other example is a person who is guilty to due a crimen and this person want to have a education to grow like a human that we are they must be giving the oportunity to study no matter what he due or make because all the people have the same staight.

I know that many people are gona to be upset with me becuase they must think, a person who make a crimen don't need a second change but for my opinion the have a second change becuase they are in jail for the crimen and the want to grow to be a better person. All the people in the world have a second change becuase if you make something that you are not prove you must be make that again you never have to say I don't want to due this or

I don't have a might to make this,that is wrong you cant due everything in this world is possible, and I know that this people are annoyance for what I think but is only my opinion becuase nobody want to be in jail and never learn somehing for your future, the people who is upset with me why they don't think if you are in the same situation you have to think in you and also the other people to make this world a little better.

In my conclusion, the people have always a second change to grow,the human that we are we have to think in us but also in the others person like example: this text is for a world to make this a better place to live, becuase all the people in this country is fortunate becuase have so many oportunities to grown and be prepare for te future in other hand I come from a country that don't have opportunities but my goal is to be a better person today, tomorrow and for my future.    ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
51BAD5699073,"As we all know we get Science,Social Studies, or Math project/experiments. We all have to follow through and do them and sometimes they are fun. Most of the time they can be just a sit and write. But sometimes they are really fun to do with your friends. It can be a play and you can have tons of fun doing that. Also it's good for you and your grade so it is a win win.

Most of the time people have good time with their projects and enjoy doing them to score better in their grade. Sometimes we all get projects like building explosive volcano at A science fair. Also projects like going on A field trip to A museum to get info about the World War 2 for Social Studies. Project can be fun when done with A friend or with just A project buddy. You can also do much more with help from A teacher. It can be fun to show your project in front of the class. Some people like to be constant with their grade so that is what they do.

A play can be fun, you can dance, reenact characters, and even just do a reality play. Or you can dress up as a character. Science experiments are really fun to deal with chemicals and to see chemical reactions. It can be fun to play an in interment and to play out loud to the crowd. With your friends and be playing your interment with you. You can do so much with playing an interment and it can be fun at the same time. Playing an interment can be a lot of fun playing for an audience and it can be fun hearing what sound you are creating. Sometimes you can just work with the music and play with a friend and maybe crate a song and play it. You can spend good time with creating a song and playing it with your friends. It can also be fun by doing it and playing in front of the whole class. Going to different places to perform is kinda cool and fun traveling. Music is A lot of fun when you are doing it with A friend or a teacher. I think project can be a great way to show creativity. The more the interment gets played the more the project will get more fun to play with your friends. The music is fun done with a partner as A project.

A concert can be A good place too play your music. A musician can direct the project. They can be really fun and enjoyable when it come to that. The musicians play the music it can be good for the enjoyment of the music that goes into you ear and the project letter can be an A+. You can also do stuff like playing your interment and doing a lot of stuff like that.

You can also lower your grade by not doing what you were assigned So u have to do the project assignment you are as were to do with your partner. Projects are kinda fun because you can let your mind be wild. So the project are really fun and easy A
.Doing simple activities like these are easy A's and easy work to do with your buddy. Doing simple stuff can make you get good grades effort and good time doing A ENJOYABLE project both of ya'll got an A on the assignment. It can be really enjoyable or really boring. Most of the time project are just so you can get your own type of veiw to somthing you can learn from it.

Projects are kinda boring in a way but most people like to do them. In my opinion projects are done not to learn whats on it but to do the assignment and bring it in on time.

I think some people like to do there project to learn but i don't like them they are fun and enjoyable but it's not my thing. Theres a lot of ways to do projects you can write it on a paper or you can type it on a computr and then prit it out out and glue it on A poster board. Well im done with my S.O.L",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
907275FA42D0,"Has the limitation of humans contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on peopl;s lives . I think should humans has limitation contact because to save their life from destioyrd. In the rest rest of this eassy i will say that why limitation of contact to the use of technoloy is important and has positive effects. Also, limitation of humans contact to the use oftechnology is good for our healt and body. Anyway, what informato can give us technology in our entire life. I will explain why we should have limitation of contact ot using technolohg.

First,Why limitation of contact to the use of technology is important and has positive efects; It seems to me that , when i used to much my phone i feel so pain in my eyes and head because i didn't had limitation of contact to the use of my phone. And phone,computers .... is part of technology to help people contact with each other and we should have limitation of contact to using these techonlogy when we need , we can use technology.

Second, limitation of humans contact to the use of technology good for our health and body because when we use alot our body going to hurt and we always feels sick and we can not eath food as much is we need, feell deperessed.

that's why limitation of humans contact to the use of technology has positive efects. For example some people destoiyerd their eyes because of using to mach technology.

Third,what inforamtion can give us technology in our entire life. technology is the biggest things which is we need in our life to do,technology is not the only using phones, computer, robots.. technology can change our life without technology we can not contact the world with humans and information about world.

In conclusion, i have to sat that has humans limitation of contact to use technology because has positive efects. We have take care our healt and body to save from dengeours happening with technology. In additaion, techonloy has alot information which is we need for now, past and for our future. Finally, in my opnion technology can help us alot in our whole life but, also can destioyrd our life. Every one knows that without technology life is hard but, if we have to save our health aslo. With technology our life giong to easy also can hurt oue life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F166A6757369,"Present. A lot people have a busy life and work hard. Because every one need to have a happy life. A lot people have a happy life just because they have to do something they like. But lot people believe happy is come from money and work hard to get it. But most of them not happy. Because they just work for money not for happy.

Generic_Name graduate yesterday from university. She begin looking for the job and go to work in the TOYOTA company. She smart and working so hard and because that make she have a good income. But when she working almost 2 years she so tired every day and she begin don't want to work. And then she begin thinking ""I have money, I have house, I have car but way I am unhappy"" Generic_Name go to consult her mother. And Generic_Name mother say "" Maybe you are tired you should to take some rest"" then Generic_Name go to vacation to rest. And then between vacation she see the flower farm. She like the flower and she have idea to make a flower farm to. She sill work in the TOYOTA company but only 3 day per week. And other day she make the flower farm and she feel happy. She can sell some flower and get some money. And then 1 year has past. she don't work in the TOYOTA company anymore. She choose to spend time for flower farm. She like this work and she so happy.

The life is short. Everyone have only one life. You should spend you time for something you like to do. It doesn't matter you have a good income or not. To be yourself. You might think the rich people is happy. But rich people happy not because they have money but because they have time to do anything they like.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
6CE97E45BF79,"The past decades technology has been advancing and helping humans to achieve goals that looked hard to accomplish. Although some people say that technology have a negative effect on peoples lives because technology is making people to not socialize, actually technology helps the people to communicate with others that are far away and technology makes people's lives easier.

The people who said that technology has a negative effect on people's lives have their reasons. One of the most important reason and approved from experts is that technology is making people to not socialize. According to scientist now in days people rather to play on their electronic devices instead of going out. According to an article people expend at least 10 hours playing videos and using social media.

However, technology helps the people to communicate with others that live far away. A lot of people have now the opportunity to communicate with their family thanks to technology. Technology allows people to video call others and to have connection with others and socialize with people around the world via internet. A good example can be soldiers. Sometimes soldiers are out of the country and the only way they can communicate with their families is by video calls.

Also, technology makes people's lives easier because you can shop via internet, complete your work, and plan projects. Technology gives people an advantage to have an life without stress. In other works technology helps people to have better life. Thanks to technology we have the access to success in our lives.

In conclusion, Technology helps us all to have a better life and to have better communication with people we dont often see. dont you agree that technology makes our lives easier?

As you can see this essay is supported with reasons. thank you for taking the time to read this essay In hope that you think different about technology.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5
8EEA38B2E6CD,"Generic_Name is working hard to be owner of his dream car but he has some issues to complete it because he has a negative attitude and that don't let him success in his goals. Most of the people does not have their goals done because they are not positive.

a positive attitude is the key to success in life because they has positivism,life challenge,and people are secure of them self.

First,A positive attitude is the key to success in life because they has positivism. For example, Generic_Name is a person who always think positive in his life,school,and his work. that is why he is not afraid for any challenge in his life. Another example, Generic_Name is always positive in her life because she complete every challenge with positivism, and she works hard to success in her goals.

Second, A positive attitude is the key to success in life because life challenge. For example, Generic_Name is a person with a positive attitude because he looks everything like a life challenge and he thinks to be success in life we will have some challenge and he never give up. Another example, Generic_Name works hard to complete is work and he is always prepared to any challenge in his work and he always look everything with a positive attitude.

Third a positive attitude is the key to success in life because people are secure of them self . For example, Generic_Name is a student who has success in his life he has a excellent job ,and he has a excellent school year because he is secure of himself. Another example, Generic_Name has a success in her life because she has every of her goals done has a family a perfect job because she is secure of herself. Some people might say a positive attitude is not the key to be successful;however, they are wrong because the person who has a positive attitude is secure of them self and they never give up because they are secure about what goals they want to complete.

In conclusion,most of the people has to have positivism,life challenge,and been secure of our self is a form to has positive attitude and has success in our life. To be successful person we have to be with a positive attitude. Most of the people is positive when they finish their goals with success because they are secure of them self and they never give up with any challenge and they always have positivism. NEXT TIME you wants to success in your life change your attitude to a positive attitude to complete your goals and be success in your life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
F0078F48B6D1,"Im Generic_Name and my special skill/talent is that I am a competitor. I like to compete when it comes to certain things, because It motivates me to practice and work for what i want to achieve. I got my competitive spirit from my older brother. But I usually get competitive when it comes to video games or sports. But I also like to compete because I like to win.

How did my brother make me competitive? He would always say that I would lose and it would change my whole perspective of things. He would always win, so it would motivate me to practice. Me watching him practice would also make me competitive cause him practicing would motivate me to practice to try to be the best. He would also like to say that ""you're gonna lose"" and it would change my whole mood.

How does being competitive motivate me? It motivates me to practice, because it makes me want to be the best I want to be. It also motivates me more if I lose, because it makes me want to do the same thing again until i win at it. Watching my favorite sports motivate me cause it makes me want to be in those big leagues someday. My goal is to be a pro basketball player and I cant get there if i'm not competitive.

Being competitive can get you a future in anything and you should work on this skill. It will teach you life lessons, it will make you be successful, and it will teach you to work hard for what you want. You should have a goal set in mind and just go work hard and achieve that goal. Are you a competitive person? Whats your goal so you can work hard at it and achieve it?",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
5077C09B20DC,"It's a wonderful day to spend outdoors and do something productive. Spending more time outdoors is better than being at home or being on your phone all day. Families can do different types of activities outdoors. Going to the state fair is something all families or friends can do that is fun. Another way of enjoying outdoors is going camping with your family.

Spending more time with your family outdoors can be fun and productive. People can go hiking with other people. Hiking is an outdoor activity that you can walk. When your like stress you can walk and listen to the beautiful birds chirping.

Like for an example, fishing, hiking, going to the beach, doing cookouts, and going to the park is an activity. Everybody would be occupied, and would have so much excitement in what they are doing. For an example, last summer I went to Pocohuntus State Park with my family. We went on a tour around the whole park. As we were walking, we had seen a building. We had entered the building, and inside it was a mini zoo. The mini zoo was filled with all different types of animal. There was animals that wasn't from Virginia, and brought it from another state. I would love to go back with my family this summer again.

Going to the state fair has a lot of options for you to do. Like for an example it has games, and roller coasters and more variety of games to play. The state fair is a really fun place. For instance, I went to the state fair last year with my cousin. The state fair was full of people and enjoyment. Their was a lot of games, roller coasters, a mini farm, there was a concert, a lot of food courts, and horse racing. That day was a really productive day because we had to walk from station to station. I rode a roller coaster called the ""Dome"" it was really scary and it kept spinning upside down, sideways from left to right. This is a good outdoor activity to do with families or friends.

Another way to enjoy outdoors is to go camping with your family. You can play games, do campfire, and make moores while you are in the outdoors. For example, when I was 8 years old I went camping with my family. I remember that day it was so cold. I slept in the back in the trunk with my cousins, and then I transferred to the passenger seat because it was so cold. The next morning everybody woke up and then after we took a walk around the lakes. Afterwards everybody packed their stuff and headed back home.

All of these are examples of doing outdoors activity with your family . Spending time outdoors with your family like hiking, going to the state fair, and going camping is fun and everybody will enjoy their day. Everybody should at least do one of these activities outdoors, so you can feel relief from everything you have in mind. Having fun at these places would want you to go back again                  ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
C41E40F2D803,"Do you know how many careers' choices you have when you enter to high school? Most of the new students in high start thinking about what career they would like to take after they finish high school. Although some say students should not commit to a career at a young age because make students feel pressure, actually students should commit to a career at a young age because help students to preparate for the future and they have more time to choose the career they like.

Although some say students should not commit to a career at a young age because make students feel pressure. In most cases students become stressed because of their parents telling them to start selecting a career at a young age. Students behavior change; However their grades get affect it bacause of the stress and pressure. Some people say that school should talk to students' parents, so students don't feel pressure selecting a career at a young age. When the parents know they have a lot time before collage.

First reason why students should commit a career at a young age because help students preparate for the future and let them know what is better for them. Students preparation is base on saving money to pay for collage. They can see what is better for them; In other words what career benefit them more and if they allowed to pay it. Students can know early where they can get help either from their parents, or if they has to work for the career that they want. Students can talk with their parents aboout a student loans too.

Second reason why students should commit a career at a young age because they have more time to look for a career that they like more. They have more time to look for a career with the charateristics they like. Students have more time to save money. They can know other careers where they can get a good pay. Teachers can help students to get a good career base in their Knowledge.

In conclusion students should commit a career at a young age bacause as I said helps the students to preparate. The time is one of the best reason that help them. The knowledge from other people help the students what is better. Students dont get pressure also they have more oppurtunities. Students should commit a career at a young age because is one of the best choice they can do.                                          ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
C168D81A3425,"People should'n need an expert for their life important matters,they should'n be trusting other people you can create your own ideas, you never know at the end of the day how things can result you may need an expert you may not.

In my opinion having an expert for your lifematters is not the best idea, but for people that are old they may need a life important matter because they need other people to help then with their stuff, people should'n be trusting other people with their benefits or lifematters.

You may not know the person you never know how big of a deal can be at the end of the day they can take everything from you or they can be stilling your stuff without you knowing, i would rather manage my own life then being attach to somebody else.

being able to manage your own life make it easier for yourself, you can make your own ideas and decisions with out anyones consentiment, and you can achieve everything by doing it.

Having an expert for your lifematters is not neccesary for your life is just a waste of money by hiring or having one, you can depend from yourself or your family if you ever struggle on life.

Because people from those companies may treat you well and confortable, but you never know with what intentions they're donig it.

Not having a lifemattercan complicate your life style in some ways,your health is not secure you need to pay a lot of money for the hospitals but it aslo helps you how to live your life and teachs you how to manage your own buissnes and decisions, you can only depend on your self everybody should know their instincts; they should'n be scare to manage their own life at their own risk, you need to challenge your self of how live life with your own decisions.

In conclusion people should'n have life matters experts because, at the end of the day you never know how life can changes you ,so you need to live your life with your owns decisions and your own instincts, you need to create your ideas and achieve then with your consentiment and your own risk you need to be yourself with yourself and take care of your life style and your own buissnes.        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
58567312BDAB,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. Students would not benefit from being able to attent classes from home because: students would not have a social communication with their classmates, students would not ask questions to the teacher for help when they need it, and students would not participate in class activies or projects.

Firstly, students would not have a social communication with their classmates because students are taking classes at home, there is not a way to meet new friends. For example, in the school students would know different types of people, races,and cultures. Also, students would know each other, share special moments, and have a friendship. Secondly, students would not be able to ask questions to the teacher because they are at home, taking classes online, sometimes students get confused or they have some question but they can not ask to the teacher. For example, students do not understand something, it is hard for them to ask about it because there is not a teacher who would answer all the questions that they need or if they are doing a homework and they get confused, it would be hard for them to finish it because they do not know if they are doing right or wrong their homework. Thirdly, students would not be able to participate in class activities or projects because they are taking classes by themselves at home. For example, in the school, students can work in groups projects, expositions, and activies. Moreover, when students work in groups, they can learn how other students work, the tecniques that they use and skill that they have.

In contrast, some students would benefit for taking classes online from home because, students feel safety at home, some students live far away of the school and they do not have transportation. Also, some students have jobs and other responsablities.

In conclusion, some students would not benefit from taking classes online from home becasue, they would not have a social communication, they would not ask question os ask for help, and they would not participate in class activies.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
E231B7832E0C,"Energy and resources, are one the most very important things in the world. So we should all try to save it. If we waste both of them we can't live with out it. This is why most the countries doesn't have one them or both, because they spent more money on, doing other stuff like makin new buildings, restaurants and etc. Instead of that, we should be saving money on resources, so people can eat and save energy by turning most of the lights of just need to turn main lights on, beacuse in today's world companies make money of the people, by sending them extra bills eventhough they didn't use that much energy.

Schools are one the most places to waste more energy. It could change, if we have less school hours we could save energy. In my school i mostly see all the lights are on, if there is no class the lights should be turned of, this is one of the big reason. In most of my classes the lights are turned of, because we care about our school. My school mostly have all the resources, but we need to have more because more students are coming in from other countries. We should be taking care of our school, have it clean and dont waste. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
7B38A110CC94,"My grandmother used to say ""Your goals are not going to be done if you don't even move a finger"".

I am totally agree with what Thomas Jefferson wrote about how wonderful is how much we might done if we are always doing something. We can make plans for every goal in life, but it doesn't matter if we just have a plan because we have to work in that plan to get that goal done, we accomplish a lot things more when we are doing something, when we have that determination to get things done to feel proud of ourselves.

First of all we have to feel, we need purpose and strength to accomplish every goal in our life to feel proud in a future. For example, when I was little, my biggest dream was to be with my parents one more time as a family, we were separated at that time; I was in my home country, El Salvador and they here in the United States. I had that dream, but yes, it was just a dream. why? Because I was afraid of the journey to be with them again, they used to tell me ""If you don't do anything you will never know how different your life could be here with us, so throw that fear away and let's do something"". Then in my head I said ""if I don't get that courage to make the journey I will never going to see my parents again"" because I knew that they can't go back to my country, at the end I made that decision and I made it, I am with my parents again and as a gift I learned a new language, now I know i'll be more helpful for this country because I am bilingual now.

Furthermore, we can see in every aspect of life how persons that one day were a common citizen, now are really important in the society because they were always doing something, they were working on their goals. On the other hand we have as example my home country, El Salvador's new president,Nayib Bukele. He was just a citizen like others but he was tired, tired of the political corruption that my country was going through, so here is what he did; he made his plan, he worked on his plan, he worked and made things for the country. Then he became a mayor because people chooses him as their mayor because of all his honest job, he started running for president in 2015, he had a hard time trying to find a political party that supports him with his new ideas and purposes for the country but the parties rejected him because they said he was to young,also they knew he was honest and that he will not admit any corrupt job that affect the country, and they were always looking for reasons to reject him, but he did not give up.

Finally he made his own political party and he get the support of all the people that get tired of live in niggardliness during the governance of other parties, he fought against the two most powerful parties in our country, as a result he won the elections in 2019 and he became the new president of the nation.

Many people think that it doesn't matters if you have goals and make plans for your future if you don't have some resources as money or a good social status, they can also see life as a random game which means that if you accomplish something they will say that is just luck, however; what they call luck, other people call it, late nights of doing something for what you want for your life.

In other words if you want your life to be successful, you don't have to spend your time just dreaming about what you want, because things may be done only if you are always doing something which means; work for what you want, stop thinking about your life goals and start working on them, determine yourself never to be an idler.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
C7294E1E615D,"A way of think or feeling about a fact or state becuasse a positive attitude it is something when you feel better to other people and continue with the attitude.

The positive attitude are important to the people. Becuase if you have a bad attitude old time you maybe feel bad or angry and, if that person wanna do something. He or she can not do nothing because he or she are angry or not feel good to do they what he or she wanna do. Also it is not good someone has a bad attitude you never know what that person think. A person who have a positve attitude all time feel happy. Because that person who has the positive attitude are better people to the other people does have a positive attitude.

I agree with a positive attitude is the key to succes in life. Becuase the quality that distinguishes a vital and functional being from dead body. Also inamate matpacity for metabolism, grow, reaction to stimuli, and reproduction. The reason it sample becuase if you alway you mat you can dead more fast that's why you have to has positive attitude.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
85F5FADDDC0E,"Here's a fact why you should go to the museum, going to a museum helps you pay attention more. A museum is an enjoyable, education activity here's why I think it is, you can be with your friends,learn new things school hasn't taught you yet,you get to move around.

First of all, you can hang out with your friends, so both of you can learn together, understand, spend together so you both can know each other better. Usually when you hang out with someone when it's not during school you can build your friendship stronger, trust each other better. You feel a lot comfortable around people when you both learn together. Bonding together with someone is really important helps you communicate to your friends, when you forget what happen the next day you could ask your friend.

Secondly, you can learn new things school hasn't taught you yet, or understand things school taught you, but you forgot half of the things. You can review it again, you can also be ready when school teaches you that lesson or subject and you would already know what happen. Study shows if you go to a museum you will likely pass that class you're struggling with. When you go to a museum, improve you listening skills and pay attention better, later on you can pass your tests and SOLS.

Finally, you get to move around when you're in school your brain gets tired so it focuses on other things when it should be paying attention,your brain pays attention when you're moving. When you're sitting down you usually think about sleeping soon, and you forget things fast when you don't pay attention and get a bad grade in that class. Or forget what to turn in,or even forget to write important things down like notes, tips, what you're gonna do tomorrow in school. Moving around calms your brain down and your body too, you wouldn't feel rushed, or you wouldn't feel sleepy at all.

In conclusion, this is why you should go to a museum, you can be with your friends, learn about new stuff you didn't know about, and move around. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
A38187259EEE,"For my own opinion , I think most students that have problems at school should take online or video classes at home to make it easier for them to learn and study.

Most students that are special , speaks different language or problems could and should take online classes. Even if you don't have problems you could take online classes if you wanted too. You dont have to go to school and learn , you stay home and learn in the computer. Homeschooling and online classes could be different but the sames at the same time. Learning at home could be better for you. Because at school cause you dont have no one to bother you , or giving you bad ideas , or cause trouble at schools on you learning experiences.

Some students would have benefits from being able attend classes from home? Some benefits could be like. "" What if its a bad idea to do it ? "" , "" What if I don't do good at it ? "" or "" What if I can't do it at home or at school ? "". Some have different ideas that it could be better for them to learn. At school it mighty be different cause there a lot of teacher and students that be different than you. At online school your at home with your parents and siblings? ad have only one teacher that teaches you on the computer. Its your dession to choose school to learn or online whatever that you comfortable for you to learn.

For me if I could choose , I'll choose going to school. Why? because its more better for me to learn from a teacher in person and see what they are do for me to learn. Online its okay , but staying at home make me get lazy and too comfortable by staying home. So for me to learn , is by going to public or private school are better for me to learn , educate , and socialize to others , its better for me.

So online classes are not for everyone. Like me I perfer going to school , not taking classes online. But what I say

"" whatever that make you comfortable for you to learn "". For me is going to school learn amd talk to other students. Wahtever you chosses for you to do then do it. Online classes are greate! but for dome people don't think so, So my option are both some students benifets to do online or some doing it school. ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
BB430219DBB4,"In my opinion it's not a good idea because in every country in world it's role that student have to study 12 yeaer in the then have to go to college. There is some people in the world that they would like to graduate early because they don't like school the only reason they don't like the school is that they wake up early and they can't sleep. If we graduate on the time then we can do something to the country. it's good if someone want to take courses because they will learn more things they will have more experiance.

In the other country's the rule in schools are every student have to study 12 years, 7 or 6 book in a book, 12 or 14 test two time in the year the one test is in the half year and the other test is in end of year. In other country after graduate every student of school have to take a big test for college or university in this test the score are start from 1 to 400 hundred the top score is 400 hundred if any one get the first position the president will gave him gift and some money also. The most university are 4 year but only docter have to study 7 years.

Our response is that to tell the student who want graduate early that it's not good to graduate early because you didn't learn anything you came to schools to learn something not for time pass. there is some student they are coming school for time pass they want to pass their time if you ask them a question they can't answer it for that reason we have to complete 4 year in high then graduate. If a student graduate early then college and university will hard for him because he did'nt learn the thing that he need it in the college or univerrsity.

Working in school time is not good for student, because he can't learn anything like in the morning he is coming to schools and after schools he is going to work and he is coming from work night and he sleep so when he will study if he did'nt study he can't graduate. it's rule that 18 year or over 18 have to work but someone is in the school and he is 18 it's not to work his family have to support him to study. It's family responsibilty to tell his child to study. when he gradute then he have to work because he dosen't have to study too much because collage is easy that school.

I hope they change the rule that when student finish thire class and pass ESOL than the are graduate, because the student will take the class that they need it to finish high school and they only focuse on the ESOL and the class that they need if they didn't study the other subjects then why thay make the class they make the class to study and learn something for that reason they have to make a new rule.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
AC8331539332,"""Do we choose our own character traits, or our character formed by influences beyond our control?"" I think you should be you own character because not everyone has good intention in this world, and most people love seeing other people at their lowest just so they can feel good about themselves, or be proud of themselves so that they prove something and they can say that they're more successful than you. That's exactly why you shouldn't trust everybody thats around you. Its okay to communicate or socialize with people every now and then but don't put your 100% trust in them because it's always that one person that you wouldn't expect to betray you and really will. People are good at hiding their true colors. You shouldn't let people influence you in any type of way, be yourself and have confidence in what you want to be in life, after all its you life not theirs. For example, if your parents wants you to be something you dont want to be, don't to it because again its your life not theirs. I understand that that's you parents but live your life and just have faith and trust yourself.

You shouldn't be acting like someone your not, a lot of people act certain ways or try to be someone they're, usually in a relationship because they are scared that the person they're with is not gonna like who they really are, or they might be ashamed because they think that he/she might judge them if they really show who they really are, but honestly why be with that someone if they can't accept who you are? Shouldn't you question yourself, why are you even with that person in the first place, if your even thinking that they ""might"" judge you in any type of way. Sometimes its okay to think though just take a minute out of your day and think and you can actually realize a lot of stuff about people and especially how they're acting towards you. That's why I don't let people influence me in any way because you never know what that person's intentions. be your own person and don't ever be someone your're not, and you should never change for someone just cause they don't like you for who you are, your friends and your family should accept who you are and respect your decision. Sometimes it takes time to see who's really there for you but one day you are gone see who are really there and support you in every step. For example, if your friend don't respect your decision making to something that you wanna do then you should know or question, are they really friends or are they really there for me? because people come and go.

My point in all of this is just be yourself, trust yourself, have confidence what you wanna be and don't let somebody take control in your life or don't get influenced by people that don't have good intentions in you, basically make the right decision. Don't try to be perfect for somebody else's, if you wanna do that then do it don't do it for somebody else, do it cause you wanna do it.

But, I agree that you should be your own character , because you can't trust everybody or expect everybody to have good intentions in you, do something for yourself not cause she/he wants you to do it. Don't try to act or be somebody that you're not, show who you really are and your true color because that's how you really know who is there for you and who is just faking to support you because they want to see you at your lowest. It takes time for other people to open their eyes but when they do they will realize a lot of stuff going on. Be yourself and don't let nobody change you in any way, be unique.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
4AF3A09B2EF7,"Who doesn't like getting an extra day off. Who doesn't love staying home on Mondays. I think schools should follow these businesses model by extending the school day two hours and adopt a four-day school week. Although the students might hate the hour extensions, they would love to have a four-day school week. However, there are a lot of benefits and disadvantages in this model.

Lots of students would agree to having a four-day school week. There are a lot of benefits for students if they only have to come for school for four days. Students would have extra time to finish their homework, they would also get some more time to spend with their family, and would be able to travel for an extra day. Students could get a lot of things done with that extra day they get off if they only have a four-day school week. Even though the model comes with lots of benefits there are also lots of disadvantage with it as well.

Students might not like having to stay in school for an extra two hours. This is a huge disadvantage because some students have after school jobs they might not be able to attend if school hours got extended. Other students might have to take care of their families after school. Extending school hours would be a disadvantage to everyone because it will most likely mess up schedules. If school hours got extended students might not be able to find jobs that work with their schedules. The school should think about having a four-day school week but shouldn't extend the school day two hours.

The model has its ups and downs, advantages and disadvantages but its still a good model. Students would love to only be in school for four days. They would probably hate having to stay for extra two hours so the school shouldn't do that. The four-day school week give a lot of benefit to the students. All school should consider only having a four-day school week.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
654DF9ECDD42,"Friday, March 22, 2019.

Generic_Name.

Should people guiadance from experts and authorities about life's important matter or should people make their own decisions? Why make own decision is better?

Generic_School, have different kind of career that student can choose for study in their life, also there is people who help to select which subject is better, they make opinion about why you have to take that career. Hear ideas and opinions sometime make you to do best things and get successful in the life.

Some students are thinking about choose Science, Why they prefer Science?, They believe that science could bring it better opportunities in their life, for example: Exist important people who created tools that are availabe to save life of people. There is more people who invented different kind of instruments, the microscope is one, this tool really that is very important, this one help us to see stars more close or any other thing that are a far of us. Those are some examples that why we took the decision of choose Science, does not matter what the instructors of the University said.

Generic_School, also have the career of study History, some guys voted for that one, But Why?, just because for a few reason, one of them is that they want to learn more about how each war started, Life's Presindents, etc. History is a great subject that teach us many important events that we even dont know that was real in the life, however, at end of the day just you have the option to do waht you like and want.

Following own instincts and ideas, is the best way to get what make you happy, remember, does not matter what others think about you. The life is about "" HEAR ADVICE AND THEN TAKE YOUR OWN DECISION"".           ",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
66241AEC8351,"Changing our school meun to much healthier choice's is a good idea because its good for the students to eat much healthier food in school. Eating more fresh fruits and water can help students focus and not fall asleep in class. Eating junk food could make you tired and you won't have theenergy to do anything. Its better to take away the opition of getting junk food that the cafeteria puts out for students. Students wont be so tempted to eat it, and could chose a better and healthier choice.

Most students want to stay in shape, so they try to eat healthier. adding more healthier choices in th school caferteria meun could help them stay in shape. most students don't workout so they depend on the food they eat. Some students tend to buy food and then throw it out becuase of how the food is made. The school could make a slald bar for those who chose to eat it and they could add there own toppings so they could eat somthing they like instead of throwing it out.

I think having fruits smoothies, organic bake goods, and a salad bar could be very good for every school to have because the school could make a lot of money selling this at school and its healthy for students to eat and enjoy. most students wont have to get uber eats to get food that they like if the school sold smoothies or bake goods. And staff members that get lunch from the cafeteria could enjoy having a healthier lunch.

in conclusion changing the schools cafeterias meun to much healthier choice would be good for students and staff members so they could stay healthy and focus.",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
A643E3470F54,"No,I don't think the school board should add a extra hour to school each day. My reasoning is because If you put this in a students perspective,they have to wake up 5 or 6 am in the morning to get ready for school,stay there for 9 hours and come home to do homework.

You can't even imagine coming home a hour and a half later trying to get homework done. If the less time students are home,the less time they have to complete homework or assignments. I also want to point out If students are trying to get more homework done,the less sleep they're getting and If kids come to school the next day,they won't get the information they need for their classes because they're tired.

Students will start to fail in school because of no sleep and this time in won't be there fault for their sleep management. This time it will be the school boards fault for adding stress to these children and why they're not getting enough sleep. I'm not saying it's impossible for student to come home an hour and a half late and still get their sleep,but If they have homework and they spend there day focused on it it's likely students won't get good sleep. Reasons like these are why some students can't graduate from high school.

To rap this up I say that the main reason why I don't think it a smart idea for the school board to ad a extra hour and a half to school because, more students time management of doing homework and getting sleep would likely fail in succeeding in school for present and future. I hope the school boards read this and take time to considerate this idea that would just give another reason for students to fail in the future.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,2.5,3.0
4032ED0063E4,"Online schools is a good idea but not for everybody, some people do good being home schooled but some just cant do it. Online class are not easy not anybody can pass thats why they not meant for everyone. Being home schooled is nothing like regular school you don't have to wake early, you get to choose what time you do your work.

Not having to wake up early everyday is nice but knowing you have to get something done right after you start is not fun and specially if you not getting the help you need not being able to ask the questions you have makes it a lot harder,

you also have to try and do your best because if you fail you can't talk to your teacher about helping you make it up and helping you pass it like regular school.

If you are home schooled you missing out the fun in regular schools not talking about class meaning all the fights, all the fire drills, all the dances and friends sometimes having trouble in regular school i always tell myself i need to drop out or take online classes but home schooled is not just for everybody and probably at least 60% of home schooled students either don't finish or go back to regular school.

ragular school is better then home schooled or online you have better chance of passing if you work with other people and get help and give help because in life we get what we give. trying your best at anything is all that matters not giving up keep trying one day you going to make it .",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
87A8B315A26E,"I think ""taking online class is not a good idea and it, doesn't have any benefit for students"". Some of students asking for online class they think ""we can do it, but it is not too easy"". I used to have online class, and

""in my opinion online class is very hard""

. And doesn't have benefit. when there is no teacher in class to help students, and some of students are too lazy. they need some body to pust them in class.

in,

june 7,2017. I took my online class. And i was new in USA. That was really hard for me, because i was new here and, i didn't know. How i need to do my works? So that wasn't fun. And i didn't get any thing from that class. Because the class was boring for me and very day works became alot so, unfortunately i drop my class. It is very different; when we are in normal class or we are in online class. Because in normal class, there is a teacher, students and a lots of things to they can make class very easy for students. And have a lots of benenfits, but in online class there is noting of these stuff are in online class. And some times online class make students to skip

, because when they face to face with a problom. They can not ask from online class, teacher direct that make students to skip the class, and make the class boring for students, that is what happend with me. And some times student can not have good attend in class, and that can make student to drop the class.

As wall as online class and conferencing class are the hardest classes. But nothing is impossible in this life we can do it "" with hard work and with a good attend in our class"". If i need to take online class in future. I will always try to have communication with my teacher. Because teacher is the only person to can help the student on that class.                                                ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
58E485E875D5,"Try your best' Many people say this sentence to people who have test or have thier own projects. Because trying the best you can, will make better result than doing nothing. Like this, always doing something can accomplish more. More you tried, better result will came out. Such as Edison and many people who live successful life in our society.

First, There will be many mistake while making a decision. But we need to keep thinking of it and find a way. Example, Edison, who made a light bulb, do you think did he make it without mistake? No, there are a lot of failed experiments and mistakes. But he didn't stop to make it. He did keep practicing and, figure out other way to success making the light bulb.

Second, in our society, there are a lot of people who accomplish more than other. Almost of them always did something like practice their experiment, find a way to figure out it, think about their purpose and each way to make it correct. Also they wanted to solve question of their problems. People can't be inactivity to do these. Doing a lot of work, and never to be idle, can accomplish more.

Third, some people can say 'There are people who didn't work that much but live successful life'. If there are? That people was really lucky. Almost of them, there is no one who accomplish more, with out any effort. Idle people do not focus on their project then, how can they make the result better? Example, someone who practice everyday and, work until late night will accomplish more than lazy one.

Lastly, try a lot of thing and keep doing something will make you grow. Sometimes inactivity can help you to rest and releax your selves but if we being more activity and always doing something, we can accomplish more. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
4C60445C5681,"I agree that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.My friend, PROEPR_NAME attend to school she has two jobs, but in the last few months she does not attend to classes because she works too much that is hurt herself , but she does not have any other option PROPER_NAME, is independent.

However some students work to help with pay the rent, pay bills I know some students that would like to attend to school, but the do not have the opportunity for some reason .For example does not have enough time, or falling sleep every time that try to weak up to go to school is not easy work and study every day that is brave.

The idea here is to support teenagers to prepare for the future

someone will be the next president of the United States, or a professional doctor that will help many people from many countries.We can help our teenagers for a better future as school is our responsibility to work with them.

In conclusion students,

Should have the opportunity to attend classes from home and work as the same time to help their parents and the most important prepare for the future. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
BDA991AF3ABE,"Thomas Jefferson once wrote ""determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I strongly agree with this quote for many reasons. If you're not doing something to help you get better, you'er failing, doing something for a purpose makes you succeed in life, and inactivity does not serve a purpose to this quote. Although, others may think different and disagree with this quote, other people in this world needs this motivation.

If you're not doing something to help you get better, you're failing. This role plays a huge part of others because failing is not a choice. You may fail a couple of times on this and that but what are you doing to not fail again? If something isn't right and want to fix it, do something about it.

In the other hand, doing something for a purpose makes you succeed in life. I play baseball for 10 years now and my goal is to make it to the big leagues but with this being my goal, I have to do something to help me achieve my goal. Success is not giving to you, you have to earn that success and by that, do something to help you succeed your dream.

At the end, inactivity does not serve a role in this act. Inactivity is getting in the way of you not achieving and succeeding. I take inactivity as a negative act because I dont want to be sitting at home or anywhere not doing something to help me get better. Be the one who changes your life by doing what it takes to do something in life to reach your highest goals.

Let this quote be a inspiration of achieving and succeeding in life or at anything. Be the one that can make a change. Doing something makes you accomplish more. It takes effort and hard work to do something but at the end, it all pays off. Only you can change yourself whether you want to be successful or not.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
F2CB99D1FE9F,"Dear Generic_Name, in our school is common to see many students working in groups. I would like to tell you that by working in group I can get a lot of benefits. For example, getting a good grade,

having a chance to meet new people, to know more about my classmates and even make new friends. I believe that working in group is more beneficial than working alone.

I think that having the opportunity to meet new people is really important. When I meet new people; I feel inspired, confident and happy. Because most of the time I like to share my ideas with other people. Although, not all time they will feel related to my ideas, but that's one way I make new friends by demonstrating my interest. I also like to hear peoples' ideas and stories. For example, I like to hear peoples' stories about their life and childhood.

I personally like to get good grades on school projects. I think that when I work in groups I feel more confident of what I am doing. I also do my work on time, and I even put an extra effort on my task to get a decent grade. For example, If I make a mistake my teammates will let me know. I will learn from my mistakes. If I make a mistake does not mean that I didn't try, I always try my best every day, to be a better person. So I can not complain that I do not have support because I do have it.

Some people say, that working in groups is not beneficial as working alone, people usually complain that they easily get distracted. But I think they are wrong. Because working in groups is more beneficial than working alone. When I work in groups I receive the support from my teammates. But when somebody is working alone they do not receive any support. So I think that working in groups is an easy and beneficial way to do my job and get a good grade.

When I work in group there's a lot a benefits I can get: I can meet new people, hear new stories from new people etc. If I get a school project and I have to choose whether to work alone or work in group, I will choose to work in a group without thinking twice. Because I have experience how good it feels to work in groups.

Sincerely: Generic_Name ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
AC6348A7ECB4,"SOME SCHOOLS OFFER DISTANCE LEARNING AS AN OPTION FOR STUDENTS TO ATTEND

CLASSES FROM HOME BY WAY OF ONLINE OR VIDEO CONFERENCING. DO YOU THINK

STUDENTS WOULD BENEFIT FROM BEING ABLE TO ATTEND CLASSES FROM HOME:

Some schools offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by online or video conferencing. Parents do not want their children to attend classes from home. Students will not get much benefits, whoever if they live in a place that is far away from school or they can't attend school for any reason then its has benefits. I'm not agree that students should attend classes from home because students can have stress, students can not pay attention very well, and the most important fact is that it will affect on students' grades.

The first reason is that the students can get stressed everyone time whenever they attend the class online because i know that its not easy to take classes online. students have to pay more attention. They can not understand very well by online or on video conference. It will be hard for students to learn or to understand their lesson online. Students will be stressed out because no one will be there to help them, not any teacher and either any friend (any other student).

The second reason why students should not take classes at home is that they will not able to pay attention by taking online classes. it does not feel like the school environment. students will spent more time on their school. At least in schools we pay more attention than doing our homework at home, because we mostly spend our time on our devices (cell phone) and on the television by watching episodes, cartoon movies, other movies, and etc.

The third reason is that it also affect on students grades and in the future they can not attend their favorite college. They won't able to understand the lesson, they will get bad grades in all subjects. It is so important to attend the classes at school, then you will know what is going on. students can ask teachers if they are having problems in their lesson. teachers can help them during school timing or after school. It will be easy for students to understand or to pay attention and they can get good grades too in all their subjects.

Students should not take classes at home. It will affect on their grades because they will not able to pay attention, they will get stressed out because if student need help, no one will be there to help them for their studies or their lessons, and it will be hard to pay attention at house by doing online studies. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
FD0881855804,"'succes consist of going failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.''

However in the world lives millions of people with the same goals and looking for a good life and a bettter future,no matter the skin color and weating for the dream come thru with a happy end.

I agree the importance to be succes consist of going failure to failure because,you can learn from mistakes, the main part is never give up and a important person on life.

to be succes needs goals even has the part hard that you learn from mistake on each step can be helful on life because your knowleedge and your experience will help your community and, the most important your strong leader will be eassy. The smart way is to try or find new ideas of enthusiasm because it seems imposible ,until it is done.

The happy life important because a lot people think to be a professional with education and somebody with responsability and pride for all the effort in order to get a good life.

However people think different and their enthusiasm and goals to be succesful on life because effort makes the difference.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
4FCEF99DE6F0,"When was the last time you looked up from your phone to admire the sky? The first thing everyone does when they wake is check there phone. We depend on technology everyday, we live with it. Technology is changing, evolving even, but are we? I mean, we put our lives in technology though the internet comparing ourselves with one and the other. No wonder so many of us are depressed, they see what other people have but to blind to see what they have is important. Everyone sees the same thing but have a different perspective.

Time wasting is a big one. Peoples eyes are glued to there own personal screen. Sheeple. They care about the new, the best, the bad, and the ugly. They only care about themselves and there phones and shirts with a red bar that says supreme in white text. Competing for the most likes and for the most clout, the fake life they make on the internet is all they care about. Talking the most negative to people through face to facetime never to the other persons face. Scared if they don't fit in or have the latest, the biggest, and the most expensive, the more it cost the better they think. That is all because of technology, wasting time on the screen. The mind and body are effected, a lot of people slouch and have a arched back. A lot of back problems is the most I have been seeing around. I have back problems because of being arched a lot as a kid, it is only in time where everyone has a arched back and the ones with straight backs will be in charge. I say that because you can not stand tall if your back is arched.

Technology has positive effects, it can help to find answers to your homework. You can find love, make a new life, find a new home even. Technology is not that bad it's just people misuse it and abuse it. It helps us but it hurts us at the same time, and people don't see that.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
1C65B8D20F73,"Student's who do not need othes to praise their work to have self-steem are the strongest one,Because giving a individual fake praising can make them feel great and not try to become better, and that can make then weak.""Individuals believe in praising a student's work to build self-steem, Even is the work is not the student best effort."" Not every individual need's others to make them feel comfortable. Some person's like to be realistic and not hear lies. Praise others people's job's even if is not excellent can bring them fake happiness and hurt them.

Some people think that the most important thing in this world is to give people self-steem, by praising their work even if is not good at all. Others believe that it can helps people to be sure about them selves even is the rest of the pople think's the oppositive. Still others ague that given every individual praise about what they do is the greatest accomplish people can make.

People should not need other's to praise their work to have self-steem, Sometimes individuals do not gonna have others to tell them how great their work is, But the person have to know if the stuff is valid or not. People do not have to depend on other's people's opinions. They need to learn skills by their own selves and know when they can fix oh make better something. At the end of the day nobody is going to try to make others feel good so people have to be successful with their own self.

Althought, People need to be realistic with their own selves, If the person is smarth and they know what they are doing and they do not need anybody to correct them that's all good. If people know they are doing wrong and somebody comes to tell them that they are doing great just to make them feel great!! Do not accept that, beause people need to be honest with their selves, All people need somebody to tell them how to became better. Sometimes being honest with someone can hurt them but is the best way to help those individuals. People have to become better to feel better with what they are, And not let anyone praise somethings that can be better.

Finally, Praising other's people's work even if is not great can bring them fake happiness, and make them feel proud of their selves when the work that they did is not good enough. Being fake with someone can make them to become weak, and make them to not putt effort to make it better. That's why everybody in this world should be honest with others, Some poeple at the end of the day ended with their self-steem down, becuase somebody lied to them , And when they present their's works's peoples's opinion's can hurt them really bad.

Student's should not need anybody to tell them how great they are doing their work to have a really good self-steem, Every individual should know when they are doing good or when they are having some problems, Every person in this world know when they can put more effort to things that they are doing wrong. People should not let anyone lied to their selves, Not everyone need's others to make them feel comfortable. Some person's like to be realistic and accept when something is wrong so they can fix it. Praise others people job's even if is not excellent can bring them fake happiness, and thats whe worse feeling ever. That's why all people need to know how do great things and impact others by their talent, without letting anyone hurt those endividuals at the end.

-Thank you :)

Att: Generic_Name, ESL student.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
35A1342EF397,"Is it good for a high school student to graduate in three years instead of the four year traditional? Let's call it the high school shortcut. Some school districts offer this opportunitie to high school students in order to make them graduate one year earlier. Based on my personal perspective, an early high school graduation is a very good experience for high school students. The high school shortcut makes student motivated to think about building their future quickly, increases the degree of their maturity and also help those students to proceed in life easily and faster.

High schools should make sure that students are motivated to think about their future and help them by making sure they're in the right path. Some students don't try to enter college right after graduating, some of them will take a year off and some of them don't try to enter college at all. By motivating to think about their future a mean that they would propably be more motivated to enter college at a young age than a certain type of age.

Going to college and start chasing your dream at a young age will make students more mature. Life after high school is something serious weither you go to college or enter the military starting it at a young age would make students more ecxited and make them became mature at a young age. So with the high school shortcut students will have the ability of gainning a lot knowledge about the branche they want to study young and quicker.

As soon as the high school students gain the knowledge that high school provides, proceeding easily and faster with the high school shortcut is and good opportunitie that should be chosen. Some of those high school students think that it's a waist of time taking a four years high school knowing that a three year high school that provides the same type of knowledge is a possible choice for them.

As far as I'm concerned, I strongly believe that the high school shortcut which is graduating i three years instead of four years is a great opportunitie. Either students who wants to graduate early or even students who wants to take their time in high school should take advantage of this opportunitie.",4.0,4.0,4.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
E382BBC2D88E,"Does student really benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because I once had a friend who attended classes from home she never did what she was suppose to do she took that as an advantage to do other things that she needed to do she didn't benefit at all. Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they take advantage of it, they don't do what their suppose to do, and they don't learn nothing.

First of all, student take the advantage of attending classes from home to do other things that they need to do. For example turning in stuff late that were long due, not all student that attend classes from home take it as an advantage but those who do they just take more advantage just to have fun and not do the work that they are suppose to be doing. Another thing is they will always try to come up with an excuse of why they didn't do the assignment that they were suppose to do. They take advantage of the time they have to go out with friends to party, to hang out with their boyfriend, and to do other things that are non-school related.

Most importantly, they don't do what their suppose to do, when they get an assignment or project that their suppose to do they just act lazy and not do it cause they know nobody for example, like their teacher wont be telling them to do the work. They will spend most of their time doing other stuff instead of the work that they need to be done with. Students will spend more time partying, hanging with their friends instead of actually doing the work that they need to do which will actually help them later on. Most students actually know the stuff they just preferred not to do any of the work cause they don't feel like doing it.

Finally, The students actually don't learn nothing by attending classes from home all they do is just party, hang out with their friends and boyfriend. They actually don't do any of the work that they are assign to do they just cheat by copying it off of someone or get the answers from the internet. Most student they attend classes from home as an opportunity to have fun and to take a break from school, they literally will learn nothing cause all they do is play around when they are suppose to take things seriously they just want to party all day long and not care about any of the stuff that they are suppose to be studying.

In closing, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they take advantage of it to do other things that they need to do, they don't do what their suppose to do they don't do their work as suppose to do, and they don't learn nothing all they do is party, hang out with their friends and boyfriend they don't do none of the things that they are assign to do.                                   ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C352BA103419,"Good actions can be helpful in most ways. Good altered can led to good grades,goal,and relshenship. If you do all of these thing you will be good in your whole life. People often do not use thins things in there life but they should use it. This are easel way to do it you can do it and any you can do it.

To be secssful you have good grades two of my friends. They name of my two friends are Generic_Name and Generic_Name. Generic_Name had good grades for all of her 4 years in middle school .Generic_Name is in the a roll every semester for the 4 semesters. Generic_Name trues so hard in all of the school work and she did not care about her friends. Generic_Name learned how to do math,reading, and writhing. She prates every time she had a test to do. That was Generic_Name life every year that she had school.

Lets see how Generic_Name life Generic_Name life was bad at school. Generic_Name get D and F in her report card cover. She never got the same grades the Generic_Name got she get blow the grades theist Generic_Name gets. Generic_Name never trues she things the school is game but it is not a game. All if her teachers have talked to her but she never rs pones to them. They told her you should stat working let harder they you do now. Generic_Name was the prensbol of the school he had a talk with her. He said look a Generic_Name grades he shod her grades to Generic_Name she god gels she said I want to get the same grade that she had but how can I get them. Generic_Name

Generic_Name talked to Generic_Name and they said how did you get this grades and she sad by prate sing and working in school and outside the school. She said teach me how to do it I would like to be good in school to. Generic_Name was so happy and Generic_Name got her grades back up. Generic_Name and Generic_Name became best friend in the school.

Seccuseful is all way help full for you and for other you can help other be sowing them how you do good. You got to be so good be doing this thing.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
12920189F7BB,"Some societies may think that students are expected to identify a career by the time they reach high school. High school students shouldn't rush their selves to think about the career they want to accomplish. Most importantly they should stay focused on what's important which is education. Students have more than enough time to think about their careers, but not at this moment. They're too young to understand the reality that they're going to face, and the struggle that they're not expecting to happen. Which is why it's really important for them to stay focused on their education, than to suffer later in their lives.

To be honest, nothings wrong with thinking about your career, but it's not always healthy to think or stress about it all the time. Because it could cause an affection on your mind which isn't good. For students who first enter high school, should think more importantly about their grades and how well they're doing in school. At a young age students are fed in with so many ideas and careers that they want to accomplish in life. Their minds are too young to understand, so it's very important for mentors to help them realize that it's better to accomplish from education, than to suffer in the real world.

For example, high school students who work after school, never find the time to come home and focus on completing their school activities. Because of their job that's holding them back. As a student, it's commonly stressing to go through these types of stuff. In fact, no high school student should have to go through these type of things. They have a whole life ahead of them and have the time to think about their goals. So, it's very important for students to focus on what's important, and not worry so much about what they want to achieve or accomplish in their career. The goal to everything is education, maybe some day when students accomplish their ways in education, they'll probably achieve the career that they've been looking for. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
DB9BA6D8278F,"Is it expected for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school, i say no to this because there are many students that still do not know what they want to do when they get older. For example there are students that are waiting to know forsure on what they want to do in life and it takes time to know what you want to do. Another example is there are many students that may not be able to afford college, if that is what they are planning and that is why it is hard because many students do not have enough for it, and that is why students take there time thinking what they want to do but can do so they can be successful in life.

Another reason why students do not know what they want to do by the time they enter high school, some parents want there kid to do what they want when it should not be like that, that is also why students have hard time thinking on what to do in the future. Students should have to worry about there future so they end up being successful in life, and end up doing good in life and making your parents proud on doing thins that they couldn't have.

It would help out students if he/she knew what they wanted to do in there life entering high school, so later on they don't have to worry much on what they want to do because they will already know. It gives them an advantage because they already know what they want to do and so they're going to work for it, they can change there mind if they want later on if they would like.

If you know what you want todo in life its a good thing because then you know how hard you are going to work for to get there and be successful in life. If you know what you want to do it will give you an advantage because you will be working hard to get there and achieve your goal, just be successful in life and if you don't know what to do just keep thinking about it until you know the career path yo want to choose to be successful in life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
985A32A20F03,"A career at a young age?

In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter to high school, but the big question here is: Do you think is a good idea for students to commit to a career to a young age?

To commit to a career at a young age is a good idea for students, who are interested to study a long career, for example: Doctors, pediatric, layer, teachers, etc. If students start to study this careers at a young age, they will be a great future for this country.

Also if students start to study at young age they will have more opportunities to continue with their careers, for example; if a teaher wants to start a new career, they can do it because he is young and has the capcity to continue.

To start a career at young age also has some desventages, here are some explamples why is not a good idea to start with their career at young age. Probably they will get tired of the school, they will to regret to study some career that years later reliace that they do not like.

In conclusion to commit to a career at young age is a exelent idea for the students, that is why, we have to motivate and support them with their careers, would be a good idea if teachears and consular, start to help them to find the corect career for their life.",3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
7033DB6BA12E,"I agree because there might be some kids out there who say that they want shorter school time and maybe some don't want that but i think there should be shorter school time. The reason of that is because nowadays theirs youtube and most of the people have phones computers and TV's and so people can go learn stuff from phones,computers,and tv. And theres places that you can learn math too.

The reasons of why i think its fair for having shorter school time is because sometimes you learn something that you've learned already and in the other hand its just not fun anymore either i mean for some other kids they think its fun and some not. And also i've seen on twitter that they been hating on the guy who tells us if school is closed or not and people always hope that school is closed because no one is really looking foward to go to school on a monday and my opinion going to school on a monday is the worst and some other people might think the same as well.

Some celebreties became famouse for example Eminem who is a rapper he dropped out of highschool and he became famouse for something that he likes to do i would do the same if i didn't what to go to highschool but i wont because i have really good friends and all the years i've known them i just can't leave them like that.

I guess it just wont be fair y'know to leave someone you've known for awhile and just become famouse and while there in school working hard.

I guess we could all agree that we should have shorter school time because what if your doing something and you don't get to finish your project or something important you'll have to wait intill you get out of school and then come back and what if theres traffic and then you get home around 8:30 to 9:00. You wont have that much time to finish your project but if you live close to the school then i can't complain but i agree to this because like how i said we have phones,computers,and TV's and on the internet you could learn anything you want for an example you could learn about 10th grade stuff even though your an 8th grader maybe your interested in that.

My point here is that we should have shorter school time because nowadays we could learn by ourselfs and for the preschool kids and kindergarden kids they should stay there a little longer because they are toddlers and they can't learn anything by them selfs but for us we should i have shorter time in school hopefully you could understand. I don't want this to effect anyone but like it'll just make all the kids who go to school have more time when they have to do something important instead of coming home late and barely have anytime to finish there project or anything they need to do but thats my point of view.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
D80B98C274D4,"Extending each school day

I totally disagree with extending each school day, because kids wouldn't have enough time do other activities, kids need a distracion away from school, they need to put their minds in something other than just school. Kids, parents, and teacher have other things to do, they all have plans and will get in the way of that.

One of the reasons why i disagree with extanding the school day is that kids will not have enough time to do other activities, for example after school programs, clubs, and practice. If the school board adds another hour kids will get so caught up on homework that will not have enough time to other activities

Kids need a distraction from school, although school is really important, kids needs to distract their minds away from everything in school, like test, wetheater or not they failing, drama, all the stress schools brings sometimes. They just a rest from everything, they need a ""stress free"" time. Kids needs time for themselfs, time to do something that's not always school.

Kids, parents, and teachers do other acitivites after school, for example kids go to football practice right after school or pian lessons, they might not be able to go. They can have doctors appointment,

since some kids get appointments late in day so they won't miss a day in school. Parents needs to go places with their kids at a specifc time, and if they come late and kids will be too tired to go with them. Teachers got palns, they need to do stuff after school, maybe their kids has a game, or they need to go to their kids rehersal and if school board extends a day, teacher would not be able to go because they are working, maybe some teachers studies after work, or they do homework if they in collage. Adding one more hour to school can ruin everyone's schudule.

In conclusion extending each school day can be a big change with time for everyone. Kids needs time for themself, they need distraction away from school and the time it's left for them to have a free time it might be nothing since they will be in school and then do homwork. Everything doesn't always have to be just about school. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
C7CE778367F6,""" Why stay home bored out of your mind when there are enjoyable ways you can spend outdoors? ""

I think outdoors activities are more enjoyable then indoors activities because you can spend more time with family, spending more time exploring the world, and take time away from all those electronic devices. Being outdoors provides a wide variety of interesting ways to enjoy being outdoors for example going to the park where there awesome activities for the kids and parents, taking a stroll outside with you dog or family, and it can also be a stress reliever.

First, Family is important, and spending more time with family is important, because it allow you to get to know them. For example your mom and dad work really hard to affords all the stuff you need and you and your brothers and sisters are barely able to see them. On Saturdays and Sundays are the only time your able to see them and have quality time with them but you are to busy in your room chatting with friends a d doing your homework, but all you have to do is take a break and spend time with them. Going to the park with them , walking around, talking have a nice conversation without a rush, joking around are ways you can spend time with family. Having fun at a carnival or festival with your family, eating hot dogs, cotton candy , riding fun rides, you might even find your cousins there and also spend time with them. All of these are enjoyable ways you can spend with your family outdoors.

Secondly, spending more time with the outside world is an amazing experiences because it allows you to discover all the amazing living creatures, food, cultures, countries , other ways other people live, etc. It can be very enjoyable to explore for example you can go to South Africa there are amazing food, animals if you go to the zoo its amazing, and fun to do with family or friends or even alone. Exploring can also be fun you can go out meet people you can go to book fairs, concert from your favorite bands or singers, try out different restaurant, try something crazy like jumping from a cliff and going into the river, swimming with sharks or dolphins, you can meet people who might be with you your whole entire life, have connections with them, visiting a museum, a aquarium. There are fun ways you can explore the world with all these outdoors activities.

Thirdly, spending time away from electronics helps enjoys quality times with other for examples your family, friends,and it helps be more focus in school and homework. Humans have tendency to procrastinate and be like

"" oh i'm going to do my homework and this or that tomorrow I have so much stuff to do""

but at the same time stay on there phone for hours. Some people cant even have a decent conversation with family or spend time outdoors with their brothers and sister because they are too busy on their phone for hours. Parks, museums, and other places have good outdoors activities that helps humans stay away from technologies. There and millions of ways you can enjoy outdoors activities without being on your devices.

In conclusion, going to the park with your family and spending time together, visiting different countries, taking time away from your phone, and enjoying all the beautiful things this earth has, are enjoyable ways you can spend outdoors, all of the activities can also be a stress reliever, going to the park with your cousin and sibling are fun to do and are enjoyable time outside .",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
19DDF17CA4DC,"When you see people doing their work do you sometimes think they are feeling alone doing their work. I mean the teacher ask them if they want to work with a group or do it alone but they always chose to do it alone because they don't know anyone in the class or they don't feel like working with anyone that means they wanted to look cool about it. so that would mean more work for them, What i feel that is more beneficial is working in a group.

When working in a group you have less work to do because everyone has a different job to do for example, let's say you have a project and it is a group project everyone has a job to do like one person could be doing research, another person can be working on the poster/PowerPoint,and the last person can be the one presenting it to the class.

people could say that working alone is better and much quite, However working in a group means to making new friend and getting the work done much faster.

Working in a group isn't really that bad you can have some fun when you are working in a group like making new friend asking when they can stay after so you can do the project together or going to each others houses planning on what you should do with your project. But it is really fun when you are working with your friends,Working with your friends is fun because you would be laughing all day and you might or might not get some work done but that just depends on the kind of friend group you have. There are some who would be focus and get the work done but there are others who would be laughing and get nothing done.

people could say that working with friends is distracting, However having to work with your friends would be really easy and fun.

It's much easier for the students to work in group the can get together and work things out with each other instead of them doing it alone and they don't have anything planed like no ideas at a lot then it's good to have a group because they can bring new ideas. New plans like everyone can have their ideas on their project plus it would be nice seeing what the student made see what each student has. It just shows that everyone had different themes of there project. so when you work alone you just only see one persons ideas and that fine but when you are in a group you see everybody ideas.

Other might people say that one mind is good enough, However many minds would make a differences.

The reason people work by their self is because they might think that working in group is too distracting and it's not fun when people keep on talking. But working with other people will help make things faster and fun but also you get to give your own opinion about things and you get to work together plus you get to learn a lot from your group.          ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
E1CAFEEB258E,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson, have's kind of a point about the world trying to make you something else.

My point of view is that we all have choice's we make to better our selves to make us better people in the world but some of the choice's we make as human's can lead us to a wrong path. We as people have to set goal's for the future and plan ahead to accomplish them. One thing i learn while being incarcerated you got to value yourself more than you value other's, if you dont value yourself what's the point for setting up goal's if all they going to do is collect dust.

Everybody haves different opinion's some people might think the world is at fault for the choice's they make and thats not true, people blame others when they know their in the wrong or done something wrong than try to say it's the other person's fault. I'll say is, with everything going on in the world we got to get together and help each other more and come together as a team NO! more as a family, when one of us fall down we lift each other up, if one of us get's hurt we heal each other. There's got to be thing's we can do, hard time's dont last forever at these moment's we got to remember how far we come from hard time's when things didnt look good for us. The world can try to charge you, it can try to break you, it can throw you to the side but the goal's you set up and the people by your side will help you complete the dream's and goal's you wish about.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
1E176F592611,"I think this will help the younger the older students with.

The younger students getting more experience from the older students. It can also help with both students being in the same level as each other. The students will get involved with both not doing the same things in the program that they do. Both younger students and older students will be able to know more things in this program that they never knew before. They can also learn more skills that can help them in their future.

This can help them in the future with them knowing more skills such as ""materials,knowing how to get better,getting smarter,joining programs with older and younger and older students can be a good thing with both groups learning the same things at the same time and than you can also learn things that other students may not know already or it can teach them athletic skills to keep there body healthy many of these things can help you be involved in life or anything younger students and older students can learn all of these to get smarter. Knowing all of this can help a lot. also older students assisting younger students is very useful to the younger students.

Older students assisting younger students is helpful because they will be able to at least teach them a little bit more information about what the program is about and how it works. Both younger and older students can also do programs that help the school,educate more students,and helping with things around the school. Helping around the school such as""cleaning the school,helping stacking chairs,and helping with carrying things inside the school like food,things for gym,and other kinds of school supplies. Thats why assisting schools can helpful to the scholl it self. There are many programs that you can be able to join such as after school programs,programs that are during the summer, and programs that are only during the winter season. This is how younger students and older students can get involved while doing programs during or after school.     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D9130F5402F6,"I think that you should let us bring our phones to school cause what if there is a emergency at our house or with our families and we don't know about it or our parents need to tell us that we cant stay after school because we have to go pick up our little brother or sister. I also think u should let u bring our phones to school cause it would make the school better. then people would want to come to this school because we could bring our phones to school . then u could use it as a punishment instead of having to think of something else you could just say you cant use you're phone for 2 weeks. these are some of the reasons that think you should let us bring our phone to school hopefully you

consider what i have wrote for you.      ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
BB38DB117F33,"In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. People who start a career can make it happen. Students who took it early can ask their counsler for advices. Many students believe that starting a career at a young age is a good idea because students can go to college after their courses, students can get a job after college, and students doesn't have to worry about making one in the future. Starting a career at a young age is a bad idea because it can cause students to quit their courses, it can cause lots of thinking to make one, and it can cause waste of time.

Students will quit their courses. For instance, when ever they went to class and took it for three weeks, they will usually give up. Furthermore, it can cause people to lose interest about their career. Teens who quit their courses, they have a hard time because it was difficult for them to keep up. Therefore, it is important to think first before taking that class.

It can cause lots of thinking to make one. For example, it takes time for adults to make their career. In addition, they will mostly think about getting a job first. Adults will usually think about getting a job because they want to earn money first. Not only that, adults like to spend time with their friends, but they make their career after they get paid enough to start their life.

It can cause waste of time. In fact, kids will spend time playing video games than making a career. Moreover, they think that career is school related. When making a career, kids will often write ""don't know"" and they will usually get back to their hobby. Thus, it is essintial to make a plan first before making a career at a young age.

Making a career at age of twelve or under is careless because it made people over think, it made them go back doing something, and it can cause them negative towards their courses. When ever they took their class about two ore three weeks, they usually will give up. Kids will often write ""don't know"" on their career paper. Making a career will take time for people to make, but don't give up easily if they can't pace up.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
3AFA78FFFC15,"So I would be talking about how people should sign up for something at there own school because people should do something they love thats my first reason. Everyone should be doing something its not like your doing it serious but sports is hard in my opinion because you have to be really good at that sport thats my second reason. Not to be on the electronics all day that would'nt be good at all compare that doing something all the time. But people should do something in there lives because you only live once so do something. Thats why agree to this so people would'nt all that because if you really love something or sport then you should make dreams come true so your good at it that is all I have to say about people should do something activity at school or sport.

Reason number one love something then do it because people should believe what they do also some people dont believe in there self they just knock there self down like believe that your good at it. What if there really good at what they do like people should follow there dreams by being good in that one activity or sport they love. We need really great people to do something dont be doing stuff you really dont like because u dont need to do something it dont make sense. This paragraph was about how to do something you actually wanna do and believe what you really love about your school like dont just sit down and relax like do something in your life its apart of life too.

Reason number two everyone should do something in there lives should'nt be lazy because that would'nt take you no where when your all lazy and stuff dont do work or anything. Do sports and activity so your body could be healthy because a lot of sports will take you some where. Probably professional sports that would be really great for you like big time. Be active al the time so your could help your own body it could probably grow like that and thats all I have to say about my second reason.

Reason number three is not to be in electronics all day long because its a distractions to others you need to practice what your doing in a activity. Be home all day you should really play outside with friends or make plans during the weekend because it would be fun for you and your friends. won't have much sleep at night because if your just distracted about being on your phone all the time you'll probably be tired in school or even at practice or after school. So you shouldnt be on the phone all day your play outside go to the movies or chores doing something doesnt get you bored all the time. So this paragraph was about you should stay off your electronics all the time not all but sometimes just go outside and play.

Thats all my reason I hope that a lot of people try something that there good at. People try something new in life because life is'nt easy at all but you just got to fight for it and be at anything. We all should try something new it would be amazing for other some people got people to look up. To so look up to someone its good because there probably a great person with a great heart. You should look up to others because other people made a big accomplishment. So thats all I have to say about being a leader not a follower like do something once again u only live once make ur life go big.    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
D2DF0FA5218C,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives?

I believe that it is a negative way for people to have too much technology, one reason is because, people get to be more lazy, another reason is that people don't put much effort on what they are doing, and the last reason is that people get to be shy or nervous whenever they go out. People get to be more lazy on the way that technology can bring them everything to their doors: clothes, food, kitchen stuff, etc. They can do everything by only moving one finger, they don't have to make any eye contact with others. If people are always using technology they are not going to put much effort on what they are doing: paper works, homework, projects etc. They just can copy and paste stuff,

it is better what they have in their minds, talk with someone else about it, socialize with others so they can have more ideas, one person can explain it to each other so they get to understand it better, be proud of what they did and not what technology did for them, see their skills. Sometimes people get to be shy or nervous when they go out because they are use to order things by technology, they are just on their cell phones and not socializing with human contact, most of the stores have machines so they can get to pay without looking or talking with another person, that way people get to be more insecure of themselves when they have to socialize: job interviews, going to college, making a group when they're at school etc. With technology, people get to be more dumb in the way that technology does everything for them. It is better to get up and explore the world, give some effort on what they are doing, and meet new people. Some people while they are walking down the street, and they see another person coming they just look at their cell phones so they don't make any eye contact with other people. It is really sad what's happening with our society. While some people believe that technology is a positive way to grow as society however, I think It is making the people to not explore the world or socialize with others. Without technology kids would be in the parks playing games with other kids, having fun, exercising, learning new stuff ouside, and not being in their cell phones playing video games, watching cartoons or YouTube videos that is not going to help them in their futures. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
3E9DF0451049,"I agree to the first expression, because it has meaning behind it,

and it makes alot of sense.

and its possible for it to change.

my life was complicated at first, but I always thought of a solution to escape my problems, as when I was little my life was a living hell, I always got laugh at, even if I didn't had a reason to get laught at, so I saw through my life and thought theres was a reason to live anymore, but then I ask people about there life, and they told me everyone love them, and that hurt me very much, so I gave up and didn't ask anyone for help. until one day. one person in my class told me if I was okay, and I responded back saying, ''I want to end my life'' and he in tears, gave me hope and told me if I wanted to play soccer in his team, and I told him, I will think about it, and after the day pass, I became a new member of his team, I practice so hard, his coach saw in me potential and told me I should be the captain of the team, and it made me so happy, I started asking my parents to buy me stuff like food, and stuff I needed for traveling with the rest of my friends, so then the days pass through, and I woke up so bright, I couldn't wait to get ready to travel with my friends, so when I arrive to the school, I started practicing and getting ready to play for the team, then I saw behind me my team with a soccer ball, to get ready for traveling, when we started packing up, we saw this huge bus that was so cool, even a giant could ride in it, so we ran as fast as we could to the bus and I got the first seat in the bus, so my friends got jealous of me, and start throwing papers, but I was so happy I ignore the team and started thinking of the soccer championship, then waste my time fighting for nonsense.

the next day we all woke up and the bus stop us at a food shop, were they sell all kinds of stuff, and I was so sad, I forgot my money, but I didn't forget to carry my lunch, so we all finish eating and came back to the bus and travel again, and traveling we saw through the window amazing places, until we stop and ran out of gas, and stop at middle of the road, I was so mad, I scream very hard, and threw papers, until the teacher told me to calm down, he told we could instead have fun playing soccer at a private place, because it didn't matter if we didn't make it to the league, what matter to are teacher, is to put smile on are faces.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
78704F723AE5,"Welcome to the story about 5 good firends. Who have a bit of trouble deciding where to visit. Then have a good time at all. One day the 5 good friends or known as Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name were planning. To go to a park,Generic_Name and Generic_Name wanted to go. At a community park but Generic_Name and Generic_Name suggested a state park. Generic_Name then was conviced at the state park but. Generic_Name and Generic_Name were not Generic_Name said ""why not the national park its huge and beautiful"". After some talking and arguments everyone decided. We'll go to the most voted park first to the least since. State park had the most votes that was their first destination.

When they arrived mostly everyone was happy except Generic_Name. Generic_Name didn't really care where we went he just want to hurry this up so we all can soon go to the national park. Generic_Name just a bit mad but also trying to have a good time. Few hours later park announced ""the park is closed please exit have a good night"" not noticing the time. Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name all ran to the car then headed home. On the way home Generic_Name started getting a bit excited because in a week everyone gonna. Have to go to the park she voted for the community park. A week later Generic_Name waking up up early and telling them to eat breakfast and get. Ready to go, 2 hours later everyone all ready for the. Community park wasen't really that far its about 20 minutes over there.

When they arrived wasent really alot activites like the state park but was a good place for a walk and another spot. To eat and take breaks,""alright so eat or start walking"" said Generic_Name. Everyone said walk first to see whats around and maybe play ball at a good spot. During the walk they came back to the spot where they can eat. Generic_Name said ""well i guess its time to eat then lets play a quick game of ball then we go home. They finished then decided to play a quick ten minutes of ball. As ten minutes go by they forget about the time and. Instead played for thirty minutes they all went back. To the car and on their way home on the. Way tho Generic_Name was telling everyone ""Guys next week finally time for the nation park""

Four days later everyone went to go buy 2 cameras because. If they loose 1 they Generic_Name will be holding the other one. Generic_Name will be holding the extra was expensive but they had to go with it. Three days later Generic_Name waking up late but he thought he was early. so he went to everyone rooms to go wake them up but they were. Gone in shock he ran to the living room to see everyone saying ""good moring sleepy head"". Generic_Name quickly went to get his clothes ran to his closet to change and get ready. As he is finally done he ran saying ""are we all ready"" with joy everyone shouted ""YES"". Then they drove of to the final park of their month and ""hopefully"" said Generic_Name last one of the year.

When they arrived Generic_Name with almost anything thats a positive feeling. Soon turn to sad because he comepletly forgot his camera because he was in a rush getting ready. Everyone felt bad,Generic_Name came up to him and said ""dont work remember Generic_Name always has the extra"". Generic_Name said to Generic_Name ""Thank you i nearly ruied our whole trip"". She replied ""gotta be out their when ur friends need help"". They hugged as they entered they were amazed to see how huge and beautiful this place is. Everyone want to go in a diffrent direction but they only had one camera so. Once again they had to vote where to go.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
1274667FF6E3,"Generic_Name

Greetings Generic_Name I'am writing this letter to you, to let you know that am very interested on going to visit and learning more about your dealership. For the future am planing on pursuing the Auto tech field. In the past I worked at a Mc Donald's. At the moment am a high school student who is involved in the Auto tech classes, I'm also a member of the engine building team. When I first came to this the U.S I started working with my brother on landscaping, under a lot of pressure.

When I first started working at Mc Donald's I didn't know a lot about how to treat costumers. With in the time I experience multiple occasions in which I had to be patient and listen to the costumers. I had to learn how to work with different people and different personalities. Thanks to the opportunity Mc Donald's gave to work there I gain a lot of knowledge on treating costumers. Now I can say that am confident and willing to work with others and help costumers.

At the moment I'm involved in the auto tech classes and am a member of the engine building team which take place after school. Being in this classes has help me learn and gain experience on cars. This classes have taught me how to be organized and clean with the tools. In the engine team I learn how to be faster on everything and also being careful. Graduate being a Auto technician is my goal.

When I first came to the United States I needed to work, thats when I started working in landscaping with one of my older brothers. working in landscaping is hard, you have to deal with heavy equipment sometimes. I remember my brother use to put a lot of pressure on me sometimes, because he needed the job to be done in one day. There I learn how to control myself during peer pressure. Thanks to my brother now I know how to use power equipment and delicate tools.

With all this being said I will like to be selected to go visit your dealership and learn more about it. I see many oportunities for me at your dealership. I will like to have an Idea of what are the requirements to pursue the auto tech field. With all my experience I'm positive and confident that I can achieve my goal of being a technician one day. I will also like to thank you for taking your time to read this letter.   ",3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
31EEF9A4A29B,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think that students will benefit more from distance learning than from going to school. Not everyone agrees that going school is for them. Distance learning is gives a better chance to learn all your education.

Here are a couple reasons why I support the idea of distance learning.

First, reason why I think that distance learning is more beneficial to you is because you can manage your time better with class work and classes. You have the opportunity to work on your own schedule. Separate the classes throughout the day instead of all bunched up at once. More time for you to focus on either classes you kind of struggle with or classes most important. All work does not have to have a due date or time limit. You can take your time to understand the material at hand and do all your work when capable.

Secondly, the more comfortable the environment the better you work. Schools environment isn't so good for students, sometimes we sit in classes where its hard to learn. Hard to learn because a lot of kids do not take there work serious, stay off task, and distract others from learning. That harms the learning environment makes kids get a little frustrated at times with there work. Its not easy to do your work while not being able to concentrate correctly and being distracted. When you are in a comfortable environment, work is not so complicated. You can relax, think straight, and focus on the task at hand with no problems. Being able to attend class from home keeps you away from the bad environment.

Last but not least, the safety of the students is always important. While in school kids can be harmed in different type of ways. Some get bullied others get into altercations. This is hard to stay away from because you are in school and it surrounds you. This can definitely throw off a student and get them off track. When kids start to think about many other problems instead of there school work it is not good. Attending your classes at home, online, or through video conference is the safest way to attend. You wouldnt have to worry about the school drama or the bullies. Your mind will be strictly focused on the work you have to do and nothing less.

In conclusion, the idea of students attending classes from home, video conference, or online. Is most beneficial because of there safety, work environment, and schedule. I agree with my reasoning and support them to the max because distance learning is the best way to learn. Your student should give distance learning a chance its worth it. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
DEDD5C568B4C,"I agree with being honest at all times because you need to be honest with your true friends, you need to be honest with your family, and you to be honest with yourself.

The first reason you need to be honest is with your true friends because your true friends are going to want you to tell the truth to them.

Your friends always check on you to see if you are okay and tell you how is your life so far .You got to tell the truth to them because they really care about you a lot. For example, what happens if you are in a bad situation like being chased by a stranger and you told your friend to call 911 because you are being chased. The police got there in time to arrest the stranger who was chasing you. You see, friends care about you and for your safety as well.

Your friends will always got your back no matter what happens to you or them.

Your friends just want to hangout with you have fun .

The second reason you need to be honest is with your family . You got to be honest with your family because you got to tell them the truth of what is going on in your life. What happens if your Mom or Dad are calling you while you are walking to school with your ringer cut off. They just checking on you and for your safety. Your does not want you tell them lies cause sometimes kids do not want to tell their parents what is going on in school. You never know when they are getting bullied and being harassed.

The lesson of the story is that always be honest and tell the truth with your family.

The third reason you need to be honest is with yourself at all times. You have to trust yourself because you never know what is going to happen to you. For Example, someone is selling drugs in school and he told you that you want some drugs . You have to think is this going to kill me or just say no. In my opinion I would say no to person who is selling the drugs. This actually can happen in real life . If you were in that position just say no or make an excuse . The lesson of the story is always be honest to yourself. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
777F0E16E55E,"Some people don't know how to play basket ball, Well I have some things that might help you with basket ball or build it or anything with the sport. The frist thing is the enviroment, most people play outside and others play inside, well I think you should play outside mostly on summer days because the enviroment is more cooler or warmer than other months. The second thing you should do is to try not to play in extreme temperature. The thrid thing is make sure its not high winds outside to be cold, this will effect your gameplay for basket ball if its high winds. Fourth thing is the good days to play basket ball, like summer days or sping time. The last thing for the enviroment is the day time and nigth time, you should play in the day time because nigth time you can't see much but in day time you can pretty much see everthing.

Equipment is important for basket ball, so here some things you would need for basket ball. The frist thing is a basket ball, make sure the ball is full of air and a frim grip. When play basket ball make sure the court is large enough for the sport. The court need to be a flat surface for the basket ball not to roll off. The next thing is a pole for the basket, make sure the pole is high enough for the basket and the ball to reach. The basket needs to be wide enough for the ball and a net that is short enough for the ball. The last thing for equipment is the out line of the court, it needs the out line for lineing up shots.

The skill of basket ball is important because of the gameplay is to win the game. Fitness is important for basket ball because it can bring up your stamina. Team work can make the game change from a losing game to a wining game, just by passing the ball to a teammate is important for skill. If you want to be good at the game then practice and trained your shots and make new openings. Strategy is important with teammates to win the game, think of new ways to beat the oppitsite team. Then you have planing, planing ahead is good way of back up plans to prevent losing. People just need to practice and trained if they want to be good at something.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
6EF996C09864,"I agree with the author Ralph Waldo Emerson, because is important to be a yourself in the world for the example, in my case is very cool be writer is constantly trying in the world. In th worl needs people like auhors.

In the world needs very much people where exist much writers, and having books for to read, all needs books about the inspirations like people, for example like be yourself is luris be unique.

I want to be someone else they don't like to much think in yourself just what they want.

In the else of the jobs, if you try to be yourself and the built the company want you will never fine the happen to me a lot of time, when try to apply to a job they want you altogether with different expresion like: Happy, active, team work, and accurate.

I agree too with Ralph Waldo Emerson with this theme ""to be yourself in a world is constanly triying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment.""

This theme is for to learn much are sentences small but is interesting are word for go ahead, for demontrate a good energy a all person that feeling of be yourself is a theme muy interesting like my person is a segment that transmit securiy, and joy in we soul.

is like for example that persons that feel less than that other person this is a agurmen or texbook like this transmit good vibes a that person.

Exist person that don't like understand because they don't care this theme they want cell phone, video game, and all insignificant over there take a very bad conduct the person having that to read, to learn, to listen, to silence, after to know they have to help and counsel.

The life is a circle when all people have to learn, to living, of good form.                                                 ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
AD730017246A,"Prime Minster Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" This quote indecteds that becoming successful is a lie in life that dose not have challenges,failures and have hard time in life to achive your goals and, without making it intersting. However, a lot of people belives this quote, because success is nothing with haveing enthusiasm and, lossing or being fail on something and being positive about it.

First, Haveing successful life without challenges is result of being fail in your success. The reason why you should have challenges in life to become a succesful its to make you a a better person in life and to make you a critical thinker and to garner your all skills and your talents for the better future. For example if you face your challenges later in life you would have the benfits from that hard or easy challenges.

secondly, makeing you challenigs intersting would led to be come successful, the reason why because having intersing and positive attuide towards your challengs would make it easire to handle. For example if your lossing a bussines or challnge do not bring nagitive atomsphere around it because it would never let your mind to have more oppotrunity that you could done more.

In my piont of view, failing or lossing is lie if you do not try hard for the intersting and successful goals. If you are lossing a challenge it okay to loss but with positive thought and never give up on the difficults challenge you have to face in you way to successful life and gaols. However a lot of people gives up on the diffecult challenges because its too hard for them to handle and at end they would have more diffcult thing to face. Make your challenges intersting it dose not matter if you fail it it matter how you play it.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
2BA422F3619F,"This is about if i suport students atending class online at home?

i think that yes if they put their mind to it. And i think if they want to pass all their grades if they are doing school at home and they really want to do it then yes If they do the all their sentens well and all their paragh well.

Aslo i think that if they are home schooled that they might do the work when they want to do it some of them will not care about it and some might just forgetand outher will say they will do it latter.

Sometime the mom/dad dose not help the student but most of the time the student want to do home school and want to pass then yes it depends on the student. when any student dose school at home they will often not do the work they aslo dont learn all the things the the school teaches they learn what the mom/dad knows.

I will say i suport it but i also dont suport becuas like i said most kids dont do the work but also some do the work. most kids when they are home schooled the mom/dad send them to school becuas they dont know what elas to teach them some just do it just to get school over with and when the mom/dad send them to school they some times llike but they aslo end up droping out of school.

Most student do benift from atending class at home but if they put their mind to it and do the work some time they learn like that becuas theirs no one that bothers them they do the work at their own speed on what they know.

most student come to school when they are home school they dont know most of the things that they learning that is becuas they didn't learn much when they where atending the class at home online becuas they were offten on their phone most of the time not caring about the work, or becuas they sleep late. Some student do know more when they are home schooled some times more then what they a student that gose to public school.

but most students that are home school they some times want to go to public school they want to go beacus they want to learn more thing make frend they rather go to public school to learn more beacuas they benn doing home school for most of the school year. some time its beacuas of their mom/dad scared that some thing might happen to their kid they dont trust their kid going to public school beacuas they might do some bad thiing.

im sure that students benefitfrom home school some take colleg class at home some start their corears but taking online class at home or some just do the things/follow the step their perent.

sometime when they are home schooled they have to go to school beacuas they have family problems or beacuas they just dont like being home scholled no more beacuas they want to do more things they wan tot learn more beacuas they feel like they are not learing the thing that they are learnig at home.

The things they learn some times aint right if they are learnig it frome their mom/dad if they are not doing the class online. But i think if they are doing the online class doing what they have to do to know what they want to be in life get thru all the the online class.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
B8624C2D465A,"For various reason's i think that student's should have at least a B average to be able to participate in sports or other activities. the first reason is because a lot of student's maybe think that a C average it good. But , for many other student's a B is a better average then, a C.

Also, i think that it would be a better reason for the student's because a lot of student's want to participate in sports or other activities. So, then they could focus more in school and, get good average's.

The second reason is that parent's would also be happy for there children to have good grade's and, that they could participate in school activities. and, also they will be proud of there self's. So",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
DBCAB09E41C7,"This is a good idea, and the educators should be agree with this. Summer Break should be more longer. We fell the summer is not enough time for us to enjoy the vacations. We need more weeks to rest and enjoy the beach and many things. I am agree with this people who think that the summer should be four weeks of break, and a long winter break. because during the vacation, we go to the beach, work, play with friends and family, visit friends or family that live far away or in other state, and sleep more. I think idea is great. Because during the period of the school we do not have time to go out. We only do homework, projects and many others things, and that is the reason that I like this idea because is the best way to enjoy the summer and have more time to rest. Winter should be more longer because during this season is very cold and dangerous, I think winter break should be more longer.

Because Winter is a beautiful season of the year, but it is also a problem because during this period of the year, if people who drive do not take precaution they would have serious problems, and I think the school should be closed during this period, because the buses can slide on the ice, and can cause a big accident, and this is a risk, because many people can die. The educators should know this and think about. Because this is seriously, we have to be more careful during winter, many students come to school, buses drive over the snow, and this is a risk, I think this is a great idea why winter should be more longer, and more weeks of vacation, this days of snow should be make up on the spring. I think this is the reason why people think the Winter Break should be more longer because they know what can happen. They know the dangerous the snow it is, we all know that is beautiful, but can be very painful. This should be note by the educators and think the days or weeks break that they want to give to the students.

In conclusion the educators should be agree with this idea, and think that we more weeks to rest and enjoy the summer. During winter take precautions because can be really dangerous, and we would have more time to do many things at home or might be work, and have more time with the family. This is how the school should be because it is hard to be here everyday, and it is so boring sometimes. This is what I think that how the school should be, but every head is a different world, and that make think the people in different ways to do things.",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
F17DDEB77A2A,"Most students hope and enjoy a summer vacation after a long school year, but some educators thoughts are completely different as the way they should get their vacations. Although, during the summer break some students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, overall, the summer is a good season to have a school break because of the great weather and the posibilities to get a job for students.

Initially, we all know summer is the best season of the year, because it brings more attractions. Of course, the weather is one of the important factors that makes it possible. For example, amusement parks to entertain people, beaches's opening, as well as others entertainment places to go visit and have fun. Summer also is a known as a time where family can share moments with others and recover all the energies leaving the stress at home. Also many people likes the summer, beacuse you can practice any sport you want outside, a good way to decrease the percent of obesity and improve our helth. Another advantage of the summer is that we have more sun light during this season than winter, spring or fall, it allowing us to get done more stuff we need to do and being productive with our time. In short, the students's vacations should be in summer, because is a great season to do many activities and enjoy with friends and family.

In addition, as we have more attractions, more personal the companies need, which gives to many people the opportunity to get a job. As a students, a job is helpful in several aspects for good on their lives. For example, maturity, responsability , new experiences and connections-which is very important to your future. Each one prepares you as a person to deal with your every day lives. Also, students have enough time to save their money and keep it for their purposes, it can be for a college or buy whatever they want without the necessity to pay with their parents's money. As a result, students are aviable to gain their own money during the summer, because its offer more opportunities, and also gain new experiences that will help them move fordward.

Still, some may say that summer vacations are too long and there should be year-round schools, which would totaly change how long the breaks will be. Then, students can have a balence on their personal lives and scholar lives. The knoledge they aquired is still fresh in their minds so, new stuff to learn will be easier for them and consequently they will obtain good grades. In summary, the significance of the idea to administrate better how long, and the appropiate time for a break is to know if it are gonna affect the student progress, which is the priority of the school.

In conclusion, educators wants the best for students,and they just want to find out a better way to rise their progress making them as a better students improving their knoledges. But, it can becomes as an issue because if you are constantly over preassure, and studying all the time without an a consider time to free your mind, it will get you tired. Overall, the summer vacations will keep you distracted with many productive activities during a long break, which are gonna let you back to school more exited and willing to keep study.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
1A3D750157B1,"I 'm agree because I think is neccesary help the people ,if to tell the truth is neccesary sincere you need to but remember where are you from, is important always tell the truth sometimes somepeoples have depression ,and is very important tell him talk which him, because i demostrate my help and i said you are a good person is good talk which person ,but which a person depresseon is different beacuse all the he is sad , i have a friend which depression is no necessary tell him nothing is better to go to the play soccer o other part , i always to give courage to my friends.

I try to help people is good because nobody know how the people to suffer hurt mental and other things, but if you can help people helping because you after help a vagrant in your head said a feel good bacuse a help people and is very good.

somepeople said i dont need help but they need more help, because the state mental is not the same, when the state mental change is hard help which the people ,because sometimes the people is crazy or other things but you need demostrate help him , like talk which him ,play which him o other things. the work psychologist is hard bacuse he talk which much people which different proble, and is heavy for him and is very hard he tgry to the the people.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
DBF44F842C57,"Dear Generic_Name

It is a honor for me to respond your statement about human individuality and I agree with your statement and i believe that be yourself in a world is hard. The world is something that the human we can not answer and be yourself is definitely the same is hard everything is hard but you can get a lot achievements for do and treat the best the you can.

First, I think the when you are alone and the city or other place and you got this situation you are alone there is not family, friends, parents nobody is there but you have to be sure that you can live without people that grow and start think what is going to happen. I believe that everyone can do everything that we want each achieve or something else because everyone can be smart, we are the people that we wanna be and yes if you are alone in the a big world you are going to scared first you have to work and pay everything that you want but that is help you to get the greatest accomplshment.

Second, be yourself is everything that all people want because to can express the real person that you are not a fake person cause if you are in a meeting or school or whatever place you have to be yourself and demonstrate the person who are you inside the feeling the you have all the characteristics that you have the point is to desmonstrate the world the you can be yourself and make more to get something else and be something else.

Next, desmonstrate the person who are you one reason is you can get more friends because your are showing to other person who real you are.

In clonclusion, be yourself in a world is more better then not we have to continue trying the person who wanna be for get more achievements and other things. Thanks for give me this opportunity to response you what i think and give you my opinion.

Sincerely.",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
7DDFF6DA8655,"What would make feel much better in class to work alone or in groups? Would it make you feel better and more productive? Some people think that working in groups helps them be more productive and helps them get the job done easier. There could be teachers who wouldnt support the idea of working in groups. If you're trying to convince your teacher you have to have examples to support your position.

Working in a group is more productive and easier it gets the job done quicker then you expect. You can assign each classmate your working with a job duty. One of each classmate can work in drawing, writing, searching up facts about the assignment and not least but last the leader to put everything together and help his classmates when needed. There can be minor things when working in groups. You could expect some who would do there job and just take advantage of time and not be productive. The leader is expected to get there classmates to work and not waste time.

When working alone instead of in groups there can be advantages. Like Having more time in the assignment and not rushing into it. You can have your own ideas without others forcing you to change it up into something they all like. When it comes to mistakes you can point them out yourself and correct them. Instead of stressing about who is not working and who can't get the job done you can work on your own. There could be problems too like not having enough time and can't get your job done as quick as you need it to be. There is other classes to worry about.

Some teachers wouldn't support the idea of working i groups. Instead they would like for you to work alone to get your job done easier. But not every student would support that idea of working alone. Some students could be left back and behind from class so they would need the help from his classmates. There is supporting ideas on why it would be so much better in groups and it would be to get the job done easier and faster. Being alone isn't very helpful when you need the help you do.

Working in groups would not just help students but teachers on grading your work. It can be stressful for them when it comes to working alone and having so much papers to grade. The idea of working with other students would be much more easier and productive. It would feel way better for you and other classmates.          ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
57B782277D2F,"Think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone and what do you feel is more beneficial? I think that working with a group is more beneficial because you can get things done quicker, share creative ideas, and it shows teamwork. It also saves up time when working in a group and when having deadlines.

First, working with a group gets things done quicker and you don't have to worry about much things when working with a group. When you have a group, they could be doing something else while you do another thing at the same time. However, having to do all that stuff by yourself slows you down and might not have time to finish. Your group and you are all doing something and that makes everything go quicker because your not doing it all by yourself. If you work alone you could be stressed and have to think of all the ideas. Working in a group can really bring more ideas to the stuff you and your group are working on. Also, you can divide the work with your group members and make things faster.

Second, sharing the ideas with your group can be helpful. It can also be very fun working with other people and having different opinions around. Someone in your group can be the most creative person and really help out on what you are working on. If you don't share your ideas then whats the point of being in the group. Everyone needs to have something to say and something to work on. If you work alone you will miss the opportunity to have someone helping you and have an opinion on it because when you present it, other people might something to say about it. Working alone can be frustrating and exhausting for some people because when they don't know something on one will be there to help them. Also, having to work alone might make you to multitask a lot and difficult for you to finish on what you are doing.

Last, shows teamwork and that teamwork makes everything better than having to work alone. When you show teamwork with your group it shows that all of you can be leaders in that group. Working in a group can be really fun because you be partnered up and meet new people or be with the same people you know and make the work effort exciting. When being in a group, you can your part while everyone else does theirs and it makes everything go quicker.

In conclusion, I would prefer working with a group than working alone because working with a group make things much easier and less work too. I wouldn't want to work alone because I wouldnt have anyone to discuss and share my opinions with. Having to do all that work by yourself can be very difficult in the process; things may not come out the way it should. Also, when you work alone you might not have many ideas to think of and with a group you can. Working by yourself may not be as much fun as in a group. If you had a group you would be able to divide the work, but working on something by yourself probably make it two times harder. That's why I think that working in a group is more beneficial than working all alone.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
82DE4E49CC52,"Thomas Jefferson wrote determine never to be idle, it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something, people can accomplish if we are always doing something, people can follow his purpose what they want because all people can done with want they accomplish in ours life its many things that can we do something.

First, People like to be idle with other people like in some works when they do not want to employed in his works just because they have a inability personal but if people want to accomplish. They can doing something like in his home or a thing easy that they can make, for follow living but some people something just think about what they want to make his purpose but they never do something.

Second, People can follow his purpose and doing something wonderful, but if they do not are idle for example in some works like that people who work. in some place the boss are idle and that do that people leave that job for his idle personality it is wonderful if people do something good for his life because, some people do things bad and that happen that in some place never proposed something.

Third, In some place or country are bad, because people do not accomplish to have a good country because they do not do something good, for example something steal person, and happen that country accomplish a purpose we need to accomplish what we can or what we what for ours life, and do not be idle because are idle do not help for make something better for ours life, so we need to have patience with want we accomplish.

We need to doing something good for examples, people that work in office need to be amiable with people that need something most of the people who work in office do not have to be idle. Also be a wonderful person in jobs like restaurant help to have more client but depend how the people serve. So first to all we accomplish more if we are always doing something for ours life and do not do bad things that do not help for what to accomplish so we need to think first the things and glide that things what we want to do.       ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
E8F77B7EB4D9,"Should people judge you what you want to do in life? or should you follow what your heart desire that is right for you? I think you should live your life how you want it to live it, what you want to achieve in the future, what is your main goal to do when you're done with high school or college. Nobody can't make you want you don't want to do life because it's your life not theirs they can't tell you what you can do or not, like no you're the that can control you body, mind and life not them.

The one person who has my back since I was kid and encourage me to keep from giving up in life is my older brother. My brother has taught me some many things that are good and what are bad in life. He told that I can live my life how I want it to live because nobody can't make your decisions what you want or not to do. He told me that he has gone through a lot things in the past like the people that he called as ""friends"" or ""family""

try to take advantage of him what he didn't want to things that they wanted him to do, so what he did was that is he spoke up to all the people that wanted to do this and that you can't tell him what to do or can't push me to doing things that he doesn't like. Then after all that he learned that he will never let the haters get into his head and take his life and use him like a toy, so he told me that is that if people try to do use you or say that can't be this in the future all you have to is do ignore everyone who tries to get in the way in the way of your life. Fight for what you desire in life, don't let anyone get in negativity go through your head just turn it to them something postive or take that negativity and use as motivation to make you work harder in life to show them what you can do by yourself.

Life is everything you have one live to live to fullest your parents has brought you into this world becasue he knows you have something speical hidden you that can maybe change the world . I believe everyone can achieve there by just following there heart and mind with no one interfering what you like to do for a living, but if you get lost or need help along your path to success ask someone that is very close to you that you know who has back no matter what that understand you that ain't trying to ruin your life should always choose people wisely. Always be yourself and live your life how you want to live it and never give up.            ",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
1FB9B9E08786,"Thomas Jefferson once wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" The people accomplish more if they are always doing something, or the inactivity also serve a purpose. Some people may say that inactivity also serve a purpose because they don't want any accomplish from anyone; However, this people that don't want any accomplish from anyone get more accomplishments when they do their work. We accomplish more if we are always doing something because people accomplish more when they are working for it and people get more satisfaction in what they are doing.

First, we accomplish more if we are always doing something because people accomplish more when they are working for it. The people wants to get more when they are doing something important. After this people get better because they are always doing it. Also they are doing good things and they get more things done. Then the people that always is doing something they always wants more accomplishments. Additionally people accomplish more when they are working for it also the people get more satisfaction in what they are doing.

Furthermore, we accomplish more if we are doing something because people get satisfaction in what they are doing. Getting satisfaction from something that they do make them happy and they will make them keep doing it. Also they satisfaction of the accomplishment is very important because they will always want keep getting more accomplishments. Then the more work that we do that more we accomplish from the other people.

In conclusion, we accomplish more if we are doing something because people accomplish more when they are working for it and people get more satisfaction in what they are doing. In my opinion people accomplish more in what they are doing because they are doing good things and they want to get more accomplishments of their actions. Finally, people accomplish more if they are always doing something and they accomplish more if what they are doing is more important and hard.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
EFE2BC73A573,"You think first impression would change a person or not? Some of are stuff that we have right now is because of first impression.

In this essay I will argue about First Impression. Let's said that you go to the store and see something that you fall in love with at first impression and you buy it, but is not what you expect to be as you saw in the store because the commercial lie about the product . Now you don't think the same about the product that you fall in love at first impression.

First, I disagree about First Impressions statement. The feeling of first impressions everybody have it, but is not impossible to change it. I would give you a example of how your first impressions can be change. For example you see a nice car for sale in you way home and you stop by to see the car because you are in love with the look of the car. The owner of the car let you try it and when you get inside, car interior is ruined and a lot engine problems. Now your first impressions is ruined just like the car you thought look nice. Next weak you see another car for sale close to your house, but this time the car does not engine problem and ruined interior like the last car you try. Your first impressions from a car for sale change.

Second, this is my experiences with first impressions. When I was 13 years old I thought that my sister phone have the best camera ever and best software ever. Now in 2019 the new IPhone 11 come out and my first impression with the camera and software was a lot different from my sister phone.

In conclusion I think first impressions can be change. Just try other placer where you can find the same product with best thing. Your first impressions about last change.                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
E88DDF2C81EB,"I believe that positive attitude is the key to success in life. What I mean by that is being nice and giving a good feedback to the things and actions people do and say. We can show how matured we are. We can be examples for others that are living with us too.

I have a friend and her name is Generic_Name. She plays a lot of sport and one of the sport she plays was soccer. Generic_Name's team always losses and she use to tell her team that it will be fine and that they just need more practice. The next Saturday they are having a game. All her team mates are scared because they are positive that they are gone be losing with out even being at the game. Generic_Name told them losing is not the end of the world and being scared does not help them to wine the game. At the end they all promised to each other even if they dont wine that they will be happy to be able to play.

On the other side there is my little brother Generic_Name. He is 12 years old. He never liked math. I always try to help him do his home work. One day I saw his test and he had them all right. I was not surprised because he was working so hard. Whenever he gets his answers wrong he wold say that its fine. I will do it again. After he came home he said his teacher gave him candy and that he gave it to his friend. I was so amazed. I couldnt wait to ask why. He said because his friend was studying so hard and did not get any candy he felt bad.

over all positive attitude is the key to success. Whenever we dont fell like we are having negative energy we should ask and understand that it could get worse. By positive altitude we could get more that we lose if we are having negative attitude.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E71EFBE547CF,"Everyone has a talent or skill. Everyone can do anything, Imagine going to America's got talent and seeing people's talents and skills. I am identifying a talent or skill I have, and explaining how i develop and use it.

To begin with my talent, my talent is roaring like a lion, is like a deep voice and just pushing air in my throat. My other talent is hoola-hooping with my arms, just making circles with my arms for the movement of the hoola-hoop. My final talent is drawing, i enjoy drawing because i can draw what i'm feeling but i need to be more detailed.

Next my skill, my skill is swimming fast, I only use my arms and legs for more movement and i would need a lot of energy for it. My other skill is running fast, I use my legs and ball up my fist for more movement. My final skill is holding my breathe long, it's risky but I would beat my friend's scores.

Finally both of my skill and talent, my favorite talent is roaring because I would scare my friends and it's funny. My favorite skill is swimming fast because I can possibly beat anyone's scores. My least favorite talent is hoola-hooping with my arms because it's not really impressive anymore.

In conclusion, now I believe that everyone has a talent and skill. Don't be afraid to share your talent, embrace it and share it to the world. I am identifying a skill i have using specific details and examples.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
DD10F696E570,"Mr; Generic_Name please let me explain The benefit to work as a team has more contact because Have specific ideas and everyone will probably has his own way to decide How would be better , on my opinion what I would like to introduce you is The main ideas we found on our grow , and be a specific topic on How will be work by our ideas , I respectfully Talk with our grow and we decide to work on a team has The Advantage, on has more people Talk about a purpose to be a related to develops content and supported to us together on any question we will be guess , The porpose we will be able to find is better to us will be a accomplishment related interesting,

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that you should be get a really good content to explain,

The central ideas for you teacher proceeding on step by step try to created your own purpose, it will be good because you would be work as hard as you can put it will be a benefit with a real important topic put at The and I would be try to created a nice idea to be a good conclusion , The real reason I say that I would not Have as much as ides for explain all That , ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
D390FE972D8F,"Changing the cafeteria food's to healthier options is a good idea because, it shows kids new variety of food's they never tried before, and it makes kids have a balance between food's when they eat.

Changing the menu is going to give kids a better experience and have a open mind to foods they never ate before. Once they try it at school and realize how much they like it there most likely going to eat healthier on a daily basis which is going to help there diet and help there body become bigger and stronger.

When kids go out to eat or are eating at home there going to have a better balance between when they should eat junk food and when they should eat healthy. When they eat dinner at home there going to have more on their plate than just the main dish there going to have vegetables fruits everything because they've tried that fruit or vegetable before and they know they like it. Kids will also see that they like a different combination of food with there vegetable or fruit.

So changing the cafeteria lunch menu to healthier options is a good idea, kids will have a better diet and will have better options when picking out what food to eat for the day. Kids will also start having an open mind to a different varieties of food.    ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
D116B2A5E044,"People always argue when it comes to does positive attitude is the key to success in life. Although some people say positive attitude is not the key to success in life nevertheless a positive attitude can make a change in peoples life in various of way. Because when you stay positive in life, you can have more friends and people will remember you easily also you will live a happy life.

When you are positive you will talk to people and others will talk you back that makes you even more happy, and makes you more friendly. When you have more friends in life you less likely to to alone. So when you have more people around you you will be busy with them so there is no time for stress.

People say first impression is the key to opening love the door. when you stay positive people will remember you easily and you can give a great impression to others. which makes you a excited and more friendly person either at school or at work.

Study have showed us that more stress is bad for humans health. To be not stress we have to stay positive because when you positive a lot of things in life can change you will be good friends with your neighbors and you will have more people that you know and you can have people to that you can talk to. when humans are positive they live a happy and a healthy life.

In are conclusion we conclude that positive attitude is the key to success in life because when people are positive, you can have more friends and more people will remember you and you will live a happy and a healthy life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
E4F813D54870,"In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I strongly disagree with this prompt because once we enter high school we are transitioning to a bigger school with more new subjects that catches our attention. My reasons for disagreeing is that I was once a rising ninth grader and I would be unhappy with the career I wanted in my freshman year. For example when I first came into high school as a ninth grader I wasn't sure of what I wanted to be once I graduate. Now I am a senior at Generic_school and I have two option to choose from.

In my perspective I believe that at a young age mindset changes; you find new interest in things and also our mind isn't fully developed at ages fourteen or fifth teen; we aren't mature wisely on what we want. I think the student should started preparing them self once they're in junior year which is when they're a eleventh grader. My reason for saying that is because you're close to graduating and need to start planning your future, looking for scholarship, and making sure you want the career you've chosen for a long period of time.

I don't think its a bad idea but i wouldn't agree with it because I know how this generation is like and we need more teacher to start talking to them seriously about life after high school. These past year a huge amount of student have dropped out of school because they do not feel like they have support from teacher, friends, or even their own parents; or maybe the student think they can't afford college; not many teacher talk to them about financial help or support.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
9B5E142C63AC,"My Talent

A talent or skill is something that is unique about everyone. It takes time to develop a talent or a skill. A talent or skill basically is something you are good at doing. Many people have the ability to move their ears, but some don't. Most people like dancing and are good at it, so it is a talent. Around the world, many people have more than one talent. My talent is to sing and write music. Some people in the world haven't found their talent yet.

One way to develop talent is to try everything. If you try everything, you'll eventually find something you are good at. During this process you'll probably be trying different things you haven't done before, like sky diving. Even though finding a talent or skill might sound hard and take some time, it can be done easily. By trying everything you can find many actives you might be interested in. Soon, those activities might become a talent or skill. Sometimes by trying everything, you might not be able to find your talent, but you can always look at it another way. Trying different strategies can be helpful to find a talent as well.

Another way to develop a skill or a talent is to make a checklist. You can make a checklist about the activities you would like to try. Most researches say, a talent is something you are interested in doing. If you are interested in baking, it might soon become one of your talent or skill. Simply by making a checklist, you can find many interests. Even though there are a lot of steps for making a checklist, you'll will find a talent or skill soon.

The third way to develop a talent is to go outside. If you go outside, you will learn and experiences many things you didn't know. Many people these days are stuck in there electronics and never notice the world outside of them. If you go outside and explore you'll find many interests and enjoy them. The world outside of us is big and has a lot to offer and has opportunities, like cooking, acting, sing, and e. t.c. There is so much that awaits in the world.

Everyone has a talent or a skill, if not, they can find one eventually. Three ways to develop a talent or skill is to try everything, make a checklist on activities that interests you, and go outside. These three ways can help you find a talent and your talent may help you find career. Sometimes the activities you are interested in and are good at doing, might not be your talent, because skills and talents can just be hard to find. A talent or a skill is something that is unique and plays a good role of describing who you are. ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
D8934CA35801,Teachers should not be able design the students project because the students might have have trouble on the assignment the teacher gives them over the break and they wont be able to get help because the teacher and the students will be on break and it will make it hard for the students to finish the work and if students choose what they want to do for their project it will be easy and understandable for them and they can do a lot of research on what they they do on their project and when the students get to do what they want n the project they can get good credit on the assignment if the teacher gets to choose what the student does on there project then then the students will have a hard time thinking and coming up with ideas for there assignment and probably wont do good on the project and fail if students get to design what they want to do on there project then there creativity will go up and the way they think will be different and if they design it themselves then they will be more intrested in the assignment then if the teacher did designed it then the students would probably wont do the assignment.,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
43EE2C3C7EB5,"Have you ever wondered why teachers encourage working in groups? working in a group is far more beneficial, as you get to achieve faster, work productively, as well as learn how to work together with people, and sometimes, people you don't get along with. Working in a group can help bring in more thoughts, and bigger ideas, therefore i recommend we start working in groups over working alone.

Groups help you get things done faster, as you divide up the work between the members, more things are done at once, for example; while I write up an essay about a project, someone else can design the project!

Working in groups can be more thoughtful, while the group discusses the project or work, they are able to combine thoughts and think of more ideas and make the work thoughtful. Groups are also very fun! Have you ever had to work alone and just wasted your time staring at the clock go ""tik tok tik tok"", because of how boring things are going? In groups you are able to talk to friends and discuss the project as you go along and work with people you like.

Working in groups result in a better job done, as students get to divide the work based off what their good at, helps them make the project or work better. Students in groups are able to help each other by correcting each other' mistakes they are also able to teach their group mates things they dont know as well as share ideas and thoughts together to improve the work or project being made. Often times I see students' struggle but once in group they are always there to help each other improve and that is why working in groups is helpful.

It may be argued that students could possibly not get along together in groups, however, once students are forced to work together, they are also forced to get along to achieve and succeed. Something to keep in mind is that in the future, students might have to work with people they don't like, but have to get along with in order to succeed in their job and that's why we should prepare students and teach them to get alone with people. For example; I've had times where i had to work with people that i didn't get along with, but throughout the project we had to work together productively in order to succeed and get a good grade, and since that project we are now best friends.

After all, the decision is yours but I will encourage you to start assigning groups for projects, as it will help get things productively done with less time, and it will also teach students to get along with each other, create friends, and learn how to work as a team. Working in a group is much more beneficial and should start taking place more often.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
E2F71EA3C3FE,"Decently the author Ralph Waldo wrote, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Based with my experience, I agree with Emerson's statement. Because we can do something else for grow on the future for our family, it is important think what you will have in one time think for how many things we can have if we work hard. Some peoples are in the street because they do not think on there benefit. sometimes be had opportunity to grow but we lose it.

But for some reason people do not like when others people want help them because some times this not are good intention some times one people only want the other person don't grow. But not every persons are the same some one really help other people only who had a lofty heart. On this time nothing is the same the boys and girls only want go to the street and they smoking a lot they never are on the home, the mather and father are very bad, because they don't have idea were their children are. And the children they never grow is they have already mastered, they will never grow.

What someone can do with this situation for help the children. if the govern do anything for help those guys we can grow. Because it only they do this they will never grow, the peoples needs helps to grow too, or we need do this with our self no body help us every times is for us depend is we one day change the luck. What we need to do is had a good job if we work hard we can grow more. And in the future maybe are a manager or on the future have a company and grow everyday. with the help of

Lord he in the only person who know our destination, and we will grow with help and our effort, we can accomplish everything.

When we do something productive we are growing. If you want change your life for something more good, work, help, grow or look for something what can change your life. For example meet a very important job and if you had a good recommendation and if they give for you a job. You had a good job were you will grow more and you not stay the same. The job can help to much and pay to much money if we are good with the work and do everything how the boss want to everybody do.

Whenever, you want to do to grow not do more or want more then other or you not do nothing, not startle do more of the other, the people who want grow more then other for them never are something benefit or desire what other had that is not good. its for this the author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. And we can guide other person, to are good employed and not want more the other. Put everything in practice and you will had a good life. With not problems in your had.            ",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
046C6FB91CBA,"Distance learning can be very helpful to students who cannot attend classes at school like other students. Although distance learning can effect students losing focuses in their classes, nevertheless, learning away from school can help us the students to have less stress, and giving us an opportunity to take care of our brothers and sisters and attending classes without skipping classes.

Almost everyone in school is stressing about something,so attending classes online would help a lot. For example: It gives us more time to finish our work for other class and stress less, because to me having the advantage to attend online classes would help out a lot, and also i might have other classes to worry about. so having an option for us the students to attend class from home by using online or video conferencing might not sound the worst. And could help students who are suffering from anxiety and having any type of stress. By using online classes they could listen to music to clam themselves down and not having any signs of a panic attack, because in school not every class or teachers might let the students use their phone to listen to music; they might not be able to know if the student is having a panic attack, but at home if they are attending classes online and having a panic attack their parents would be there to help them clam down.

Most students need to stay home in order to help with family emergence. Research has show that almost 50% of the time if the student is not at school, then they are at home helping out with their siblings at home, doing that they skipping school and losing an education, but with online classes they can do both without skipping class or missing anything in school. Because with online class the information they need would be provided to them, if they have a laptop or computer and in case they do not have any of these technology they can just go to their local Library with their siblings and do their assessments with no worries, because their siblings would find some kind of fun to do at the library.

In conclusion attending classes online at home would benefit a lot for us the students because in case some thing happens at home they just go online at do their work without stress about losing points, to me personal attending classes online would be very helpful because I would have to stress a lot, can skip school and get some sleep.     ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
EA1B7D05FE81,"The most enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is to hanging out with friends,spend time with family, and do fun activities or games outdoors. These are a few things to do in a sunny day outdoors.

Hanging out with friends can be fun if you make it fun, you could take bikes rides together, talk about problem or achievements you've accomplished, play games or just walk around. There are plenty of different things you can do in these parks, it's just up to you what you decide to do.

Other way to enjoy these amazing parks is by visiting it with you're families. Talking about how there day went can bring you guys more closer and make them feel a bit better, going to eat or bring food at the picnic tables can be fun aswell, maybe know more about what they been doing or what they are planing to do over the weekends, these are a few of things you can do outdoors instead of being indoors.

The last and final thing and most important in my opinion is to have some time by yourself, there's no better way to relax and enjoy the out doors is by yourself, you don't got to worried about anything just walk around take in a deep breathe of nature's air, see different things the you might not seen before only on TV, and meet new people with the same interest as you or just have some me time.

These are a few of activities you can do outside with friends, family, or by yourself to enjoy the good outdoors and the weather.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
BA14C47026ED,The principal is considering changing school policy and she have what the students is good and the principal where the students change possible policy. Be sure to support and specific reasons . many students have a grade C average and least a grade B average to principal in sports or other activities. she would to hear the students views on this possible policy change. and the principal can do in participate in the students to policy change.,2.0,2.0,2.5,1.5,2.5,2.5
0CFDDC1CF75A,I think they should not let them to bring cell phones during school because they will be intertain. And they will text every time when the teacher is not looking and when ask them a problem they say oh I wasn't paying attension. Or they sometime will say could you repeat it again. Sometime they are texting to there friend or boyfriend what they are doing instead on focusing on there studying or on there future . And sometime when they are passing the street of school a car come an have an accented just buy texting and not focusing if a car is coming. They don't bother to come to school because her friend told her to not go to class. And they talk about people and spreads it around. And they don't care about school but only texting to her friends. And they have low grades buy talking to her friends. And they are just talking and talking.,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
89863E1AF982,"Should the first impressions care and show who individuals are? First impressions are almost impossible to change that is why people always have to worry about their actions because people can not go back the time, can lose opportunities, and can get on trouble.

First of all, people can not go back the time and try to fix what they had done wrong. For example, some individuals who gave a bad impression in their first time at work because they did not how to deal with the costumer and they had a bad attitude but then the next day they realized that they have to change their attitude it may be too late because the costumers already complained. All in all, people have to do their best the first time even if life is too difficult because time does not come back.

In addition, Individuals can lose opportunities by their first impressions. For instance, some people that apply to a job but they did not present on time will give their new boss a bad impression about them that he or she will want to fire them. All in all,people always has to make a good impression the first time and they will have better opportunities.

However, some people may argue that first impressions can be change because people may have regrets and they will try to apply themselves and do their best in what they did wrong in the past .This argument is weak though because not everything in life can be change easily. For example, some people may regrets how they were in high school with their teachers but they can not do nothing now because some of their teacher already past away. Even though, first impressions are impossible to change because no all the time people will have the opportunities to a second chance.

Finally, people can get on trouble for how they show the first time. For example,some individuals that deal with other people always has to give a great impression the first time. Additionally, people that works at a restaurant has to have a good appearance because if they do not have it they will lose costumers,lose their jobs. In a word, a good impression the first time will save people from trouble.

People always have to be careful in what they show or do the first time. There are great reasons for always make a good impression the first time because individuals can not go back the time,can lose opportunities, and can get on trouble. What would be if all individuals make a bad impression the first time?",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
ED74D2C2403B,"Sometimes take classes from home not can be helf students to improve their learning. Although some schools offer distances learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. I disagree to students take the classes on home because they not learn the same as in the school, if students have a question, or doubt did not have a teacher to asking, and Students did not have the same opcion like others students.

The students who take classes from home, not learn the same in the school and this can be are difficult for them. For example, most of students lose the test because they forget the impormation that they learn in online classes and the time of the test they not remember enyting. Sincerity, take classes from home it is difficult for students the short learning because they not have the same capacity like others students. The students can be improve in the school more that from home, because from home they teaching they self. In addition, most of school believe that give classes from home can be helf students, but this is a big error.

If the students have a question, or doubt did not have a teacher to asking since, they answer themself. For example, sometimes the students do not know how to make homework, project, etc and they need someone to helf them. Also, every students need a teacher to explain everything that they need to make, and if they make the classes from home is impossible to make the thing good if did not have a teacher. It not the same to make the calsses online or in school because in online it is person who teaching for only a short moment, nevertheless in the school the teacher teaching for like 8 hours and helf in sonthing that students need. In effect,

some students do not have capacity to make the classes from home, they needing to make the classes in the school to learn more.

Students did not have the same opcion like others students like the time or the learning. For example, most of them have a job and they not have the time to take the classes from home, because they lose the time in the job and when they going to the home they are tired and only going to sleep. While, the others students improve their life in the schools the others students who make the classes onlone not learn enything because they not have time. Make the classes from home it is not necesary for students because they can going to school every day and work after school and with this method they have more chance to improve they learning. Truly, The school give the option but the students have the choice.

In conclutiong, they not learn in the classes from home that in the school, and this can be affect tehir learning. They teaching themself because in home tehy do not have a teacher to helf them. THey not have same opportinity like others students because they can be not have time to make the all thing. Some school have this option but it is not a good idea for students because they not focus in online classes and they fail.  ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
D26C9B0368D0,"No, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home. There is a lot of action students have to take from being home school.

For example the state has to make sure their doing their work instead of sleeping and lacking around. You have to be responsible and be aware of your work. I'm not saying all students can't attend online classes at home, but most cannot.

Going to school helps you learn and understand things better. if you dont get something, you can ask for help and the teacher can explain the problem to you. You also have a person teaching you instead of you reading things by yourself and trying to understand. Being in class accurate and up can keep you from falling asleep instead of sitting around at home eating and sleeping all day. In addition of other students because i can't speak for everybody, some students can handle that and learn way better on their own than having somebody teach them.

School groups is also another reason how student learn faster and better. Working in groups help you learn more from other students. Other students may know more than you or you might know more than them, which is a good thing. Everybody has their own ideas and opinions. You can't forget some students are antisocial and like to work alone. If you are one of them people, than working alone and at home is best for you because you have nobody around to bother you.

Another reason being home schooled isn't a good idea because you have to be responsible. Doing your work, making sure you up, and making sure you finishing it on time. You have to make sure you get up on time, not staying asleep to long, or staying on your phone. Being at school you have to get what you need done, at home is like you know what you need done but you can do it later. Which makes you lazy, staying at home eating,sleeping,and playing on your phone makes you lazy. Its gonna make you forget that you have school to do. On the other hand some students are responsible. They know what have to get done and they get it done with or without any one telling them what to do or reminding them.

School is learning place where you come and get your knowledge from. Every parent should put their child in some learning program where they get taught not taught on their own. School is the most popular place in the world. Getting a education and great job is good reasons why you should come to school. Great job equals great money. Good education equals a high advance in getting in wonderful colleges. With out school you life won't be to bad but you know you can live a way better live with school.              ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
E2687856AA7D,"School districts should not allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Those programs force the students to take summer or evenings courses, don't allow them to take elective classes, or students might not have the time that they need to be prepared for college. This information can help students to think more about their decitions, and have a successful life.

Summer, or evening courses can always be stressful for some students. Sometimes, they will not have time for family activities, or they might not have the opportunity to get involved in sports that they like, which is a good way to spent time with other students. It is also very important to know that students need time to rest, a free time when they can sleep and release the tiredness.

The elective courses during the school year should be available for all the student that wish to improve their knowledge. For example, learning other kind of things can encourage students to think about more ideas for their future, and develop new skills on many activities. Taking away the opportunity of students to choose any of elective courses, and forcing them to complete all the hard classes that they need is not a good solution. That will make students to force themselves to do hard work, which can end up in a failing situation.

In other words, its very important for students to be prepared for college. Also students should have the sufficient time to prepare, and choose the career that they really want. If in case students are not sure about what career they want, four year of High School should be enough time to learn more about carrers. For example, students will have more opportunities to attent college day also, they could go visit, and get information about any college that they are interedted on. Being well prepared is the best key to bulid a good future nad accomplish dreams.

This decition should be made by the school district to eliminate this programs, and let the students have a comfortable schedule for thier everday activities. spending more time at home with family, and refreshing their minds it's better than summer courses. Students should know that getting involved in elective classes is more fun, and bieng well prepared for college is more important. Even though students know it's going to be a longer way, it would benefit them in the future.        ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,3.5
D7EC70BFCAB6,"Allowing cell phones in classrooms it can be a benefit for some students and a disadvantage for others. Although some say that cell phones should be allowed in classrooms because they believe that using cell phones in the classroom it can help students to research for a project or it can help to do any other assignment . Actually it shouldn't because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted.

Some say that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classrooms because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted. For example one day my English teacher told me that she let her students to use their phone during a test to search something about the meaning of the words that they doesn't know. Then, she told me that she told them that they can only use their phones to translated the words that they doesn't know what it means or to translated to their own language. After that she says that she gave to her students the test and she went to seat to her desk, but then she was observing that one of her students was using his phone too frequently, she went to see what the student was searching and she saw that the student was searching for the answers of the questions that the test have. After that, she saw that one of the others students was taking pictures of the exam, she went to see why the student was taking pictures of the exam, she ask him that why he was taking pictures of the exam and he told her that he was sending the answers to his friend who was sitting in the back seat.

Moreover, she told me that the other day that she was explaining the class, some students were using their phone and paying less attention to the class. Also, she says that the students who were using their phones during the class when they got the test they doesn't know what to answer because they were distracted with their phones and they got a lower score in the exam. I believe that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classroom because is a distraction for students, sometimes there are students that when the teacher is explaining the class they are using their phones and when the teacher gave them a test they got bad score in their test and that can be a problem because their grades can get very lower.

Those who believe that cell phones should be allowed in classrooms have their reasons, they believe that using cell phones in the classroom it can help students to research for a project or it can help to do any other assignment. One example can be my friend Generic_Name, his history teacher always gave him assignments that he have to search in the book about the Civil War or World War II. He told me that it's very complicated for him to search some things about those tittles in the book because the books doesn't have enough details for him to what to put in his assignment or sometimes he doesn't know how to summarize the meaning of the paragraphs that the book have. However, when the teacher let him use his phone he began to search about the tittles that he have to search and he says that it's more easy for him to understand more about those tittles because he is using his phone for a educational purpose. Also, he says that when he plays Kahoot or Quizlet live (

those are learning games that sometimes the teachers use to help students to study

) he learn more than when he read a book. In my point of view I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school because for me sometimes is very complicated to read a book because there are some words that I don't understand, but when I use my phone to search it's more easy because in the phone there are some meanings that I understand .

In summary, some say that cell phones shouldn't be allowed in classroom because students can cheat during a test and they get distracted. However, some believe that cell phone should be allowed in classrooms because it can help students to research for as project and to do any other assignment. In my opinion I believe that cell phones should be allowed in school because it easy for me to search the meaning of a word that I don't know and I feel that I learn more then treading a book.     ",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
93385DED39E7,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.

When i was 15 years old, i broke my leg and that made me incapable of going to the school for 3 months, during those 3 months i didn't get any support to keep track on my classes because the school i was attending didn't had distance learning; Consequently, i almost failed my school year, because of this i support the option of having distance learning.

The fact that some schools have the equipment to offer distance learning is motivating, because it gives an opportunity to teenagers that struggle to get the education they need and this can be for several reasons that can limit them to get to their schools such as a medical condition, being isolated from their schools, or any circumstances that can happen during the school year; Furthermore, having distance learning as an option that is beneficial to the students and to the schools in general.

Students who are having problems to get to their schools, for factors such as not having money for the transportation or the schools are located too far from them, will benefit of having distance learning. For example, if a student can't get to his school because he can't afford a way to get to their classes on time; Consequently, the student is probably going to fail his school year for not being able to get to his classes, this shows that having distance learning support is beneficial for students that struggle with this type of problems.

Students who have for a medical condition, will have problems to get to their schools because of their medical state.

For example, a teenager that suffer from osteoporosis is hardly going to be able to get to his educational institution, and this is not going only to affect the student in his education is also going to damage his life by not having that knowledge that he needs to be progress as a person in his life; Furthermore, having support of distance learning to student that can't arrive to schools is an important and necessary characteristic that every schools must have in their options, this demonstrates that having distance learning support can help student that suffer from a disease that makes them unable of being present in school.

One of the most important characteristic of having distance learning is that it can be useful in scenarios where the students are in danger of coming to the school for something like a pandemic that would make the schools close, losing a huge a amount of days that will have an impact on the school year; Similarly, to what is happening with the COVID-19 in several country's around the world that are getting infected by this disease and where they are closing the schools because of this virus, however with the use of temporary distance learning students would be able to keep on track of their studies even when a disease or something similar to this is happening at the moment.

On the other hand distance learning can be used in a wrong way, where students simply don't care about their classes, this shows that is not a perfect system that needs to be used only when is necessary to put on practice.

In conclusion the use of distance learning in schools is important and useful to the students when they have problems to get to their educational institution and that it also can be used in scenarios where the student won't be able to assist to the school.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5
4F7F24918F42,"As a student myself, I think students would benefit from attending classes from home, because attending classes can help students manage their own time and learn how to self control, and can follow their own pace of learning.

As day by day passes, I believe that lots of students are sick of repeating the same dull sketchual, and wish they could stay at home for school, on the other hand, they will not have to wake up so early everyday when they worked on their homework till so late. When students attend classes from home, they will be able to manage their own sketchual, learn how to control their time efficiently, be more self-reliance, and prepare for the future.

In conclusion, it is a benefit for students to attend classes from home, because they can learn how to make their own plan, and learn how to manage time, which I believe that it will help the students a lot in their jobs, future life goals or even their entire life.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
E597A35FA323,"Negative, We have to take Information about the Books, Play games etc. Ok We do what we want, but not everthing we do it is correct There is will be correct some will be incorrect because we don't know all the information about this games, books, shop etc.

Everyone in the world not have all the information for Example: I know how to bring the books online. My Sister know how to do Shopping online than she will tell me how to do the shopping online, and I

will say to here how to bring the books online like that she tell information and I tell her Information now she know all the informations about books and I know all the Informations about the shopping. We have to share informations to each other.

We can connect with each other the Technology not only do Shopping online, Playing games is also to connect with each other in Facebook , Twitter , Whatsapp etc. If the Technology is limits it will be bored life and the Technology will be bored if we have limits to connect with people there is some people will say no the technology is bored for Example: people like to chat 24 hours to each other if there is limits the life will be bored.

Ok it is good not speak to each other everyday but we have to be connect with the world around us.

Know what is happening in there Country there is a Fires, Earthquakes etc. We have to connect with bad people and the good people because the bad people we can take the informations from them and the good we can take informations and the good habites also if you know only few peoples is better than you live without any one and only doing all things you know it only.

Private life is Perfect life but not too much we not talk too each other and know information at some time there is limits in our talking with people because not all people give you all informations correct there is bad people can give you the informations and when you do it you will go the police, or you get in terrible with this person. don't trust everyone. Not everyone want you to be perfect there is people want they only to be perfect but still you have to ask and connect with the others you can take the information and leave them if they are not good because no is Perfect in our Life and every were.                              ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
7B5F5B33B566,"When people ask for advice

, they sometimes talk to more than one person. Have you ever wounder why that is the case?, if you are a person who does not take advice from another individual , then you could use this skill, taking advice from another person can help you make better life choices, it will make you understand things more clearly and faster, and learn from them. Multiple opinions really is a foundation to a job like a mayor of a city, it is vital to take advice from the community in order to address problems and concerns. If it was just a city with no voice in the community then the city would fall into a bad place which no one wants to be in and the key advice is to receive it.

In the world we live in, we make a lot of important choices in life, some are big and some are small, but they effect our future and success. Next, advice from others can make you more wiser when you make your own choices, if

Abraham

Lincoln never saw how African Americans were treated for there skin color he would have never signed the documents for slavery to be band. if he never got advice he mostly likely would have never Andres the problems with having that toxic racism. If it wasnt for him, it would still be here today thanks to out 16th President, which boils down to good thinking and advice. At some point in our lives I know we got advice from someone we look up too,also what ever the advice they gave you, is an add on to bigger things, for example if a parent or guardian gives you some advice to never quit on things or problems that are hard and difficult for you, with just that you will Carey that for the rest of your life. Which eventually make you more wiser and resistant to challenges and in life. You will have a mindset that will help you be more successful and a hard worker. When you are at that point you will know what is right and wrong, from advice from your remodel, father, and mother. Multiple opinions is like trying different types of food from different chefs and if you just try it, you will see something you might like, if you never try something you will never see a different possibility taking advice is just like that. Only instead its intellects make the right choice to help you.

In Conclusion, advice is there to help you, opinions are there to guide you to something that gives you smarts to making the right choices in the world we live in live, sure not all opinions hear might not be in your favor. But just hear them out and be the best you that you want to be shaped in, advice will make yo wiser and more aware of scenarios. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
DFB7AB4481AC,"I think that people can success without having the cosists of failure without loss of enthusiam. There's other way to success without failing, one of them is to practice. An another way is sometime you can get it on your first time without have to fail. Then you can just study other's failure and not make them same mistake, or sucess and try to do the same. These are other way to success without having to fail, and they are maybe more ways also. So Winston Churchill isn't wrong, there's still other success with out failure.

First you can practices, practices makes you better that thing to want to success with. It like you can't success to be the best soccer player if you don't practices. So instead of taking the test or what ever if you practices, you might not fail, you'll be ready for it or good to do it. If you want to success in a sport, you can success by practicing you can build mussel memory that can help you in many ways. If you want to success on a test you can practices on practices tests, that can help you out. That one of the ways you can success without failure.

Also you can success by getting it are on you first time, there's some time people do will on their first time without having to fail, practices, or study. They are mostly lucky when that happen, and it does happens much, but they still success. Most people like to call this, winging it, some people might success, and some might not but that a other way so still success. it might be the best way success, but might have done it and success for it.

Another way people can success, is by watching other's failure and success. When you watch other's failure you can study and try not to make the same mistake as they did. So if you saw some player or some slowed down when they were about score, but they miss or someone block them you can say, ""they shouldn't have slowed or whatever that would have help them. So when it your turn you can try to not make the same mistake and success. You don't just have to watch their fail, and can also study their success and try to do the same thing. So by watch others people success and failure, you can copy their success or improve their failure.

So Winston isn't wrong you can success form your failure. By look on your mistake and improve them and making you'll self better, at what you have trouble at. Failure without loss of enthusiasm is better then getting so mad about it and might make it easier to success next time.

So I don't agree with Churchill's statement, because their is more then just failure to success. There's so much way to success with having to fail. You can practices, study other's failure and success, and sometime success on you first time by winging it. So those are some reason, why i don't agree with Winston Churchill.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
D45494CE3D2E,"Human survival depends on technology, we can not live without it. Technology is used in our everyday lives, from the very moment we open our eyes to the end of the day when we go into our sleep. Technology has really advanced a whole lot in comparison from the first telephone made up, to todays modern devices. Technology may have a negative impact to it, since technology is everywhere it is almost impossible to keep out of reach. Young children start to us it to early in life, they get addicted and they cry if it is taken from them. Technology may have that negative affect but it has many positive affects that come from it as well.

The beginning of technology all starts back when the first telephone was created by Alexander Graham Bell. The telephone he had created is much different from the ones you see today in everyday use by millions of people. His creation of the telephone was like a brick, very big and heavy. That device was more of a at home used only kind of device, not something you could easily just carry around with you. his invention probably was not the most popular right away since everyone was so use to living with out one it was not much of a necessity. As time progressed other inventors took Graham bells invention and invested further into it, adding and taking away things it had. For one the size and weight of it was changed by a lot through out time as well as the capability of what you could do on it. At first it was used only to transfer calls to communicate with somebody verbally without having to be face to face or even at close distance with them. Many individuals wanted to be the inventor of a phone and there are more than one, therefore because of this there are different companies, not just one that produces electronic devices. Around the early 2000's Apple, which is one of the biggest electronic device companies had released the first Iphone. Everyone and everywhere all around the world people were purchasing Apples new product. Throughout the years Apple has made so many products for people to purchase from cell phones,earphone, tablets, computers, watches, portable chargers, to just about anything for people to buy that they may use in there everyday lives.

Though all these advancements in technology may have caused some negative impacts in life such as that children from a young age get addicted from them it has also helped them. Parents have a big impacts in this whether they decide to hand their children a electronic or not, most parents that do let them opporate a device usually have limitations in what they can do or watch and for how long. Letting young children use this technology isnt all bad, there are television shows that help them learn their shapes, colors, objects, movements and simply learn how to communicate with others before entering school, nothing wrong with being a little ahead of others. ABC mouse is one of many great resources online that help children with their education and it is also done in a fun way for them to learn and enjoy their studying.

Technology is used by everyone all around the world and even out in space! Everything around us is being technologically used by us, inside of our own homes and outside. Security cameras, the thermostat that keeps us warm in the comfort of our homes and AC that helps us cool down on hot sunny days, the foods and drinks we store away in our fridges and freezers, WiFi box, T.V(s), door bells, all of that technology and thats just in our homes. Outside everyday technology would be like he vehicle we use to get to our jobs, the traffic signals, GPS to help guide use to get to our desired destination. You have a paper due or something you really need information on whether it is school related or not and the library is closed or you just can not get in reach of one you can simply do your research from any location you may be in with a click and swipe on a screen like your cell phone or computer. Machines are technology used like those in hospitals that are seriously used for human survival when someone is terribly injured or a new baby is born. Technology is still progressing and it will only become more advanced through out time, everyday inventors and scientist use it to make new ways to cure up diseases, find out where they come from and how they can be prevented.

The creation of technology on our world has been very helpful to us all in every way possible, without it there are many possibilities of certain deaths and accidents that could have occurred if it did not exist. The amount of advancement that it had gotten to will only help it get greater so we can be prepared for future tragedies that we would not want this world to face. Technology has been an extremely positive thing that has happened in this world for millions possibly even billions of people who use it.             ",4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.0
2B621C2F0716,"Someone who shares wisdom is like talking to an angle.

One person who shares wisdom to me is my friend because, we love each other, we care about each other, and just giving out wisdom, is just nice.

My friend gives me wisdom cause they love me and wish for the best for me. My friend always tells me that I should always go forward and don't look back, to the bad thing and keep on going. If i'm going through some bad stuff with someone or something you just got to stay positive and just not give up on your self.

Friends give out wisdom because it is nice and helpful for people, my friend like to give out advice and say good things and give out wisdom, because they are nice, and are caring friends and just keep there heads forward not back.

My friends give out wisdom because they care about me and for other people to and not for just one person but for multiple people. My friends are just nice and just some good friends to me and to other people out there in that world, because with wisdom you can give advise to people.

I have learned from other people because i have seen people go through it and thats a happy thing because you give out advise to someone you look forward to, like your parents, aunt, uncle, and the people you trust like a close friend to. Anyone that you trust id good because then you can stay positive.

I just think that giving out wisdom is such a kind think to do to people and to friends and family. Wisdom can mean a lot of thing to people, like kindness and being happy and just putting a smile in your face. Wisdom is just a good way to stay positive and be yourself

Wisdom can make you a happy person.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
98318D414246,"Hook

Is it really true that Imagination is more important than knowledge.

Thesis

I honestly disagree with this knowledge is important.

Claims

Knowledge is more important than Imagination.

Can Imagination be helpful to you.

Imagination can happen to some people.

Knowledge is more important that Imagination

Knowledge helps your future become successful so how will Imagination help you. It wouldnt really help you just by seeing things with your head. Lets say you played would you rather would you rather have good knowledge or have Imaginations. Is there a way for Imagination to help you?

Can Imagination be helpful to you

Seeing things with your head wont help anything ,but it might help you if you think of anything it will just appear ,although, its not really there. Lets say you want a snow day you just Imagine its snowing outside but you still have school and theres not really snow there. Some people do Imagine things but why?

Imagination can happen to someone

A person starts to imagine things when he or she feels alone ,so he or she starts to think of an imaginary friend and they think that helps them not feel alone. Say that you just played your new game and you start to imagine in your head how fun the game was ,and what things you did in the game. Lets see what we learned.

Conclusion

That was all my reasons why I disagree what Albert Einstein said. Knowledge is more important than Imagination, what can Imagination do to help you, Some people can start to Imagine and think that it will help them. those where my reasons why i disagree.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
709156BCF733,"Dear Principal:

I think students must have a least a B average to participate in sports. That way the students can bring their grades up. A lot of students would want to bring their grades up because they would like to participate in sports. That's a way students can bring up their grades. Maybe the students can bring their grade up and that way the students can work harder in class.

That way students can work hard and participate in a sport that they deserve for getting good grades. This policy may work so students can bring their grade up and stop failing their classes. One way they can bring up their up and be able to participate in sports is by turning in there homework and completing their work in class.

Here at SCHOOL_NAME we have a policy that says "" If you have more than three (F)'s you cant participate in a sport"". That's why a lot of students try to get a good grade, and that's why the students turn in all their work, in order to participate in a sport. Their is a lot of students in SCHOOL_NAME that don't have good grades and cant participate i",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.5,3.5
EBEFF43F46EE,"If you could accomplish one thing in the future, what would you choose? Something I would like to accomplish in the future would be attending and graduating college because it will make me feel successful, it will help me learn what I need in order to get my dream job, and I wanna be able to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college.

The first reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because it will make me feel successful. Attending college has always been a dream of mine since I was a little kid because I'd always watch documentaries; in these documentaries people would talk about what they had to do in order to feel that their lives were successful, some people had the same reason which was that they had made the choice of attending and finishing college. Being able to have the chance to even attend college is amazing, not everyone in the world is given this opportunity. I know that college is a long time away for me but it's coming sooner than I think. Before I know it I'm going to be out of high school and out in the real world. In order for me to feel like I'm successful I need to finish college. College gives you the information to be successful in the job of your choosing. To me being successful mean you never give up even when things get hard. These are all examples why accomplishing college would make me feel successful.

The second reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because it will help me learn what

I need to know in order to get my dream job. Most jobs out in the world require you to have a higher education than high school. College helps you learn specifically about the job you want to do when you become an adult; the job I wanna learn all about is a pediatric oncologist. Being a pediatric oncologist has been my dream job for awhile now because I think that cancer is such a sad thing; people die everyday from cancer. When I get older I want to be able to help treat and get rid of children cancer so that they an live their lives to the fullest; to me helping these kids get rid of their cancer could help prevent it form ever coming back; it doesn't mean that there is a zero percent chance that their cancer won't come back, but I want to help these kids lives last as long as possible. In order for me to actually have the opportunity to apply and receive this job, I can't just have a high school diploma. There are jobs out in the world that do not require you to have a college education; maybe your dream job may not require you to attend school after you finish high school, but not all jobs are like this. These are all examples why college will help me learn what I need to know in order to get the job of my dreams.

The third and final reason why I would like to accomplish college in the future is because I wanna be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college. A lot of people in my family have not attended college due to not having the funds to afford it, having to stay home to take care of a family member, and most just didn't see the point of even attending in the first place. I know that no matter what my parents would do whatever was needed to be able to give me the opportunity to attend college. Personally, one of the really big reasons why I want to finish college is because of my mom. While my mom was attending college she ended up having me; she was a single parent at the time and she did whatever she needed to provide for me. One thing she never got to do was finish college. She stopped all of her dreams just so she could always be there for me. My mom has such a big influence n my life and I want to be able to finish college for her; I want her to see that all of her hard work payed off and make her proud. Knowing I have my mom supporting me no matter what keeps me going everyday, I don't give up on things to show her that I can do anything I put my mind to. Overall, this is why I want to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college.

In conclusion, not everyone may want to accomplish the same thing, everybody is different, but at then end of the day there's one thing that I want to accomplish the most. Something I would like to accomplish in the future would be attending and graduating college because it will make me feel successful, it will help me learn what I need in order to get my dream job, and I wanna be able to be one of the first and only people in my family to say I finished college.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5,4.0
E07B043F3C2B,"People should seek guidance for help, because like us are still having trouble in the real world even if we graduate from high school or college, we even still have trouble trying to make our live easy. Having guidance is always helpful and learn something new.

Reason to have guidance is to release stress or don't add more stress. In daily hours people get stress out a lot at work and could get out of the control very easy,getting help from another one is good idea so you know what you doing and how you doing it. People stress things out and they don't know about what causing it, that give even more stress and have a chance to get an heart attack and lose motive to do work. Guidance could help us by rethinking our plans or working. While taking a guidance you could learn more things that we didn't know of.

Having guidance will also help you keep tack in time and help everything more clean in your work space. It good idea to have an open mind and have work done easier and fast. Having an open mind can give a good mind set in life and think more a head in time and saving time.

Another reason is people have depressing life or have health issuer. Depressing is a big thing that come to life in everyone and it cause a lot problem the way they living. Most of the population on earth have depressing in their life, so it a good idea to seek help at all time. People who having that need get some help from guidance right away to tell them what going on in their life, it could help them cure their depressing.

It a bad idea to to let people guide they own way without any help at all, because trying teach yourself is hard enough, and try to teach yourself might get even more worst because they mind might be wrong and could cause more problem in later runs. People rather do it on their own and not get help because it might give them false inform that they need to learn or think it a waste of time, but guidance are here to help. Having guidance will always help you and they always teach you more things. People can still guide on they own way, but it better to get guidance. It be more easier and get better in live in the long run.

In conclusion, guidance are here to help release stress, learn better, get thought life, cure depressing, saving time, give more open mind it, have work done in time, and make life little bit more easy.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
02B07248077F,"I am agree everyone should be make own decisions because you have just one life if you permit other people take you own desicion, you never built you own history if you sometime make mistake, thats ok because, we can learned when did sothing wrong,

I was feel good and great.

Should people take own decision of life.

l must learn take control of my life.

Becuse if I did something bad,

I can not tell other person is you fall,

I can not live with fear did somethin wrong, becuse we can learned own mistake, and future can be a better person.

For example if you want to buy you own car, if you have money buy.

if you practice any sport, you can ask opinion someelse but,

do take accion.

If you do working get you goal never get, all guys get dream is following taken accion get exito, all life is one desicion everytime, we have to make desions and, everyday some time it was exellent sometime wrong is thats matters, we are learning, all the time,

I not agree becuse when you pertmit somebody take desicions fot you you life turned bored and, you are unhappy. when you bult you own life with you own misteke it was exating and you can tell finaly I did. it thats matter what thinks others.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
CA347336D930,"the achievements can accomplish self esteem in students, however student always work hardly in every work. Even if is not the best, but praising student will help them to do the best they can do. or the praise is for students who did an achievements. these achievements build the self esteem. Self esteem come from praise or come from achievement.

Does true self esteem come from praise, students who work hardly in any work class, praising theme helps to raising theme auto esteem . That helps students to do the best they can in any work, actually helps to persuade to others students do the same thing, and raising each of theme in work and self esteem . Actually the students feel good when some body praise theme for some work, and eventually for students. Praise is the best thing you can do for theme, and they going to grow up withing self esteem and work.

Self esteem come from an achievement. Most of the students who did a good work from school, event is not, a achievement is one thing important for them to grow up, and important to a good self esteem. Most of the students who did a great job has a good auto esteem and that helps other students too to do the same thing. With an achievement student had, that help the auto esteem in student rising up, actually an achievement in any class or anything is always helping keeping your self esteem.

In conclusion both of this are really important to students, any achievement or any praise work they realize, help theme to have a high self esteem, everything about this are leanings they get of the life. An achievement accomplish keep's you doing the right thing and keeping you with a high self esteem, A praising a is good way to student to keep doing the best they can, And to do the better much they can even if is an effort work, that help student to learn and improve; in they self esteem and to get an achievement, and also praising students helps theme to get an achievement.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
47261D6E0F08,"Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something?. We accomplish excellent grades at school by studying , at sports by practicing everyday and never giving up to become an amazing player, and at work by learning and giving a lot of effort to realize our goals.

First of all, students stay after school or ask for a raise pass to study more about the subject they have a test or quiz.

In the actuality, there is a lot of schools from South America like Peru, Chile, Bolivia, etc. that do not have after school or raise pass for students to study more. Some students have to pay approximate 30 dollars per hour for a personal teacher to help them at home. Students from South America do not have the facility to study with their teachers without paying for extra classes. Another example, when I came to United States, there was a day that I had an important test, and I did not know nothing about the topic. So, I stayed after school with my teacher, and we practiced a lot. When I took the test, I answered all the questions without problem. The next day, my teacher gave me back the test and I was the highest grade of the class. That made me stayed more often at school with my teachers to study different classes. Furthermore, to get good grades, students have to do homework, projects, and participate a lot in class.

Secondly, it is important for people that want to get better at sports to practice everyday to become an excellent player.

Additionally, people success in sports, when they never give up and try to learn by their mistakes. When I was in Generic_City, at school I was part of a volleyball team, and we played against another school. That day, I was not ready to play with the other school. My team lost the game because I did not played good. I did not want to play anymore, because I was scared of losing again. But I did not give up because I was fascinated with this sport and

I kept practicing and becoming better at volleyball.

I know that the best way to success at sports is practicing all the time, and never give up in something that you love. I learned that if I stayed in inactivity, and do not practice, I would never become a good player in volleyball.

Finally, people accomplish at work when they do new projects to grow the company each day. Another reason is, people have to be responsible with their duties at work. Besides, if you want to get a higher level position, then you can do it by learning more about your job and showing your effort and hard working everyday. In this days, is hard to get a good and stable job because it requires effort and knowledge, but being active and always doing something to make a wonderful work will let you find an amazing job. By the other hand, being idle can give you bad consequences like, you can be fired, never find a job or never be successful in life.

I am sure that most people accomplish more when they study at school to get good grades, at sport when they practice and believe in themselves to become an extraordinary player, and at work when they learn and give a lot of effort to fulfill their goals. ",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
DA4E1BDBD778,"What Ralph Emerson say,sometimes it could be a challenge for some adult but it is more then a challenge for teenagers,because since you are a children you know how your life is going to be.

If you grow up in a family who cares about you on what you do the whole day you know that you are lucky because not all people have the same family as you. When a teenager have a family who do not care about him he is going to end up having more problems them that one who have a good family. At this point this teenagers has to decide to be himself a man of good and make proud his family and show them what you did with out their help or end up in jail. When the person don't have support from their family they do what they can so they can have some money on their pockets and have some food on the table for their family. That is what be yourself mean care about you and your family and give to your little brothes the opportunities that you did not have. Most people take that decision when they are teenagers,that is the most hard decision to make because you are living all your past behind and trying to work hard and never go back to the same place.

People who did take that decision when they where young they know how it feels be on that situation, they learn how to be themself and how a real man act. This world is for the people with strongest feeling weak people don't survive in this world. So to be yourself you have to be strong mind.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.5
26D32FF6313F,"People should go see guidendes from experts and theorties about lives, and importances matters because some lions are very dangrous and not easy to teach them. Its very dangrous to teach them because some lions might not know what to do, they can just ran you over,and bite you. Its not easy to teach them because theres a lot of struggles, anger, they might want to play around with you, you could have a bad day, have a whole different mood the next minute and you might feel like you want to give up.

For an example, working alone trying to teach lions can be very difficult to teach them because your trying the best you can and get it in there minds. It just takes time for them to remember the things they suppost to do like us humans, process everything, and dangerously can get attacked or killed. Seeing a guidedes from experts and theories about lives, and importances matters can save your live if you can just follow their rules they tell you. You have to follow the rules to be save around lion.

Before you follow the rules to teach and be around lions, you need pratice. A lot of practice, step by step until the guidendes from experts and theorties says your ready. Having alot of pratice can help you do better and learn something new. You can get a partner to help you out during practices if you like. You have to hear the guidendes from experts and theorties information about lions of whats safety and what's not saftey, what to do and what not to do before you actually start teaching lions and being around them. Seeing a guidendes from experts and theorties could probably be there with you watching you do the tthings you should be doing like he or she told you, and to see if your ready or not.                    ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
3DE204C5895E,"Businesses have adopt a four day work week with each day consisting a ten hour shift to conserve energy and resources. Schools are considering to follow this model. Although a four day school week is what every students want, I disagree schools should have to extended two hour more for a four day school week because it leaves student less time to do school work and sports activities through out the day and it will ruin there sleep schedule.

Schools should have to extended two hour more for a four day school week. It will leave less time for students to do there school work and sports activities through out the day. Student would normally leave school around three in the afternoon. If schools extended two hour more from the normal time they'll leave around five in the evening leaving them less time less for homework. Kids that have after school sports, have games and practice for two hour. The kids would've come straight to do there homework and other things.

Schools should not have a four day school week. It will ruin students sleeping schedule. If students are still up late trying to finish there homework, are getting less sleep. Students that have after school sports would stay up later to finish up things they haven't finished. The students that come to school tired always gets less sleep. If a student have a test the nest day and stay up studying, they will come to school too tired to take the test.

Others may say having a four day school week would be great. It will be less stressful for students. Students won't have to worry about school as much and it will leave them more time to do homework on the days off. However, I still believe that having longer hour for school is not healthy for the students. Schools shouldn't have to extended two hour more for a four day school week because it leaves student less time to do school work and sports activities through out the day and it will ruin there sleep schedule.         ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
B5663D6B5854,"Many Students have become more involved and to the extracurricular,

and many students ,

want more education.

to be exprerience , and some students ,

want to be and the. involved in so many activities so they have to have more . tittle time to study and to do better and complete homework. and assignments. to should the schools cotrol student involement in to the extracurricular or octivities ,

should the decision . have to be regording a extracular involvement to be left and to the student and they families to take a position and have more support and your response with a reasons and my my reason was to have more time for the students they like to more work and to do more assignments and class I think that is more better so the students cant have more time and more education and also a better grave in the class and then the students cant do fin and they class but we have to have more time so we cant get the work done and then we has to get time to study and complete and the homework and assingnments beconse we have many students compling about the time so school control they student but went the students get involvement in extracurricular activities so the school have to doit so the students have more time to work after school sothe students cant pass the class and more support and more people also they can help the students get better but what the students has to do is to work hart and star doing good and class or and to do work after schools to do more work and to help some of the students the need help and thas a good reasons to do after schhol and to do many activities so the students get more better and to have a good grave and they class but the most import is to gradue but the students has to work hart not only and the school after school and to some work at home to and then the students who see the diferent   ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
2DE38160D46B,"I don't believe school should follow in businesses footsteps and do the four-day school week. I believe that school should stick with the five-day school week. Because it would be better for the students in the long run.

If school keep the five-day school week there would be a lot of benefits with that. like if students have five-day school week there would be so much free time for students to do whatever they want like take care of responsibility, after school clubs, homework, study. And free time is way more useful to students.

Now some can argue saying that if school had four-day school week they would have more time because they would have a extra day off of school. And that true but there a catch with that it only one extra day off like say if you were in a club and you meet on Thursday then you would have to show up to the club later because school was longer now of course i'm using that as an example. So if school did have the four-day school week then yes you would have a extra day but like I said before there would be a catch to it.

Now even i'm not going to lie and say that five-day school week is the greatest thing they have there. They do have there down fall. Like for starter we have five days where we have to show up to school. And also school is long on enough with the five-day school week. So yea... five-day school week do suck too.

In conclusion, I believe that school should keep five-day school week and not the four-day school week. As I believe that it is better for students in the long run.    ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
5056C7637313,"PROMPT

People should believe that the true self esteem of students are absolutely coming from the achievement only. Because of praising students in a long times, it migt be would make them image anything that they want to do is all for other's praise to them. Also, the achivement of students are only come when they can be self confident to face any hard works. The praise given is something that cannot be stay in one person foever, praise is to support students spirit while they become successful.

First of all, praising students in a long times, it might be would make them think of anything that they want to do is all for other's praise to them. Because students can easily get distracted by praising from others, they could not be focus to be themselves when there's too much praises for them. Students need to remember that people may give praise to bring them up and surely can bring them down anytime. So, students do not need to listen to anybody's praise or anything that is unreal. Otherwise,a better way is students should be believing in themselves that they can do well on anything hard works.

Secondly, the achivement of students are only come when they can be self confident to face any hard works. Students should learn how to handle any hard works when they go out to the real life. They need to facing to real things, real problems and that is how they can be true self esteem. They can't be afraid or lose their spirit whenever they fail. Also, students can be achivement while they know exactly what they should do to reach their goal on the future. Student better know that people only remember to them when they become success, but if they aren't no will care about them.

Finally, the praise given is something that cannot be stay in one person foever, praise is to support students spirit while they become successful. Because the praise from others to them can easily forget very quickly. So students should know the goods and bads of the praise, it could bring students to more success when they know that the praise of people can helps. Students can be famous and getting praising from others anytime when they do something great or they can show people about how well their capability are.

The achivement of people are not coming from anyone's praise, that is about how hard they were try and what were they faced to reach their goal. Also only believing in themselves could bring them to the successful in future. There are nobody can help or follow them until the end of your goal, so they should do their best they can to show their ability. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
99ECAD55ABD3,"I think it's great for the older students to work with the younger student, because some young students haven't learned about what the older students learned, being a helper to younger ones especially in a school can be an amazing thing to do for example

They can help to teach them how to walk for the preschoolers

They can teach how to welcome people

It also helps them to have a great future

The Older students can also (maybe) earn some money for being an excellent helper to the younger students. It can also be a great hobbies for the older students to teach younger students how to live their normal lives and to greet others. Another reason why the older students to help the younger students is an excellent idea is how to be respectful and trustworthy to others. There can be a chance where the older students can teach younger students how to help others as well for example

Pick up someone else stuff if it fell on the floor

Help an old person cross the road

Teach kids how to write neatly

This kind of program could help the environment so much. The students can also travel around the world to help younger students in other countries for example

United Kingdom

Norway

Sweden

Denmark

Canada

And more! Having this type of need and help could this world so much. It helps across the country, around the world, all types of students can help others younger students how to live their lives, it can help go to collage and get a job that their very great at and in their job they can learn as well, it can make them get a talent from their job so they can learn how to do stuff in their jobs and become very good at. So yes I would recommend for the older students to help younger students (even around the world) how to live their normal lives. It can help so much for others and it teaches respect and that's why in every school they should have older students helping younger students and in other countries they should also have older students help younger students how to live normal lives and have a great future and they can also help their families and other families.  ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
BB8064D7B327,"My friend is home schooled because she use to get bullied a lot so she wanted to drop out, she could'nt deal with it anymore. Her counselor gave her a better option taking online classes because she had very good grades and she wanted her to graduate and have a good future. In some schools they offer distant learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think getting home schooled is a good benefit for students who have situations at school, for student drop outs, and it's easier and quicker.

The primary reason on why it's a good benefit, it's that it helps you if you have bad situations at school such as you always get into fights with other students, you are getting harassed or bullied, you have problems with your teachers, or you think you're wasting your time and you could be working and getting money. Having online classes can help you stay out of trouble or helps you stop what ever you are dealing with. Not only it stops the situation but can help you improve and graduating with no problem. If you are having problems talk to your counselor and ask for a possibility for online classes or your parents if you can get home schooled.

Secondly, it benefits the students who are dropping out of school. Most of the students who are dropping out are for financial reasons like, they want to help there family so, they drop out and start working or some teens get pregnant at a young age and there parents most likely they dont support them or help them in anything that they need so, it causes them to drop out. It helps them further there knowledge and can possibly get a better job. It makes them feel happy knowing they can finish school because they know they already making a decision by dropping out but they can still graduate by taking online classes. I remember when i was at student counseling aide and one day a student came to ask me where should he leave his laptop because he was planning to drop out, he looked upset. Generic_Name ask him why? he answered ""i wanna help my family out they dont have any money right now"" she gave him an option for online classes he didnt know it was possible to do that and It made him happy.

Finally, getting home schooled is easier and quicker. You can take your classes when ever you are free. If you need to take a break, you can and continue when ever you are ready. it's non-stressful comparing to regular school. Its proven that getting home schooled its less stressful than regular school. Generic_Name is a science teacher at SCHOOL_NAME he said ""88% students are stressed about school because of homework and not having to finish assignments on time"". He also said ""only 5% are stressed when they are home schooled"". In conclusion, it's less stressful and help you feel non-pressured while you are taking your online classes. It also, gives you free time and gives you advantage to do what ever you like. You get to be home and relax wake up when ever you like to, do your classes take brakes if you would like to, too me it sounds amazing!

Some people might say that getting home schooled is bad because if you have any questions you dont have a teacher to ask or a physical teacher to help you understand the topic you are learning about but it's a one on one class. There's no students just you and your instructor, it helps you focus which i personally think it will help you more comparing sitting in a class room with your friends not paying attention, playing around or not getting work done. I think it's a good benefit having online classes because it helps with people who have bad situations at school, people who are planning to drop out and its a fast and easier way to get your classes done.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
C6DDE5F881C2,"The school cafeteri should change the food to healthier food. they should not give to the student everyday chess pizza, MC checken and rich, beacuse those food are not healty, and Thoes food are not good for student health. the school cafeteri should give to the student vigetable food beens, fruite, mcgrni, fish, and the food that dose't have oil in it , beacuse if the school cafeteri keep giving the same food to the student, they will not take those food beacuse they ate everyday the same food and the student will not take the lunch, and then the school have to throw those food in trush beacuse the student do not buy those food.

and the school will not make any provite from those food the school will lose a lot of money. So I ruquset to the principal to bring those change to school cafeteri, so you can make money and the student will be also happy from school cafeteri and they will buy the lunch.

Thank you",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
FA63EE28501A,"Does true self-esteem come from praises or does it come from achievement? It's come from earning achievement, There's only so much praises can do if they aren't earning anything. Therefore the harder they work,the more they achieve. their self-esteem will keep rising and then they start believing in themselves more.

Also other believe that praises for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. I agree with there opinion,I believe that there should be goals to reach and you must try your hardest to achieve. Their's always the chance the chance of failing but that just means to keep pushing, to fix the mistakes. And when you finally achieve your goal it makes you feel so much better about yourself. Also that builds you up for harder task.

Therefore some believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. which I believe in too,feeling better about yourself works more when you have earned something. Also it can be anything but as long you give it your all,and achieve what is meant to be achieve. Your self-esteem is going to be built up knowing that you achieve something.

Next I don't believe in just praising someone no matter how good the job was works like that. Because you keep praising that they could do so much better on,it's just going to make the feel like they already got the job done,when they can do so much better. Praise their work when they tired there hardest,so then they can keep trying there hardest to achieve goals no matter what. That's how i believe that praising should be done and how to build self-esteem to make whoever try to best on anything, to not give just half but to give there all.

Finally does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement? It's come from earning achievement,so they know they give it everything they had to earn that achievement. praises work when you praise there best work so they can keep on trying there best on everything. It's takes them believing in themselves so they can earn achievement to build their self-esteem.      ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
62F7911DE51F,"Once author Ralph Waldo Emerson Said ""unless you try to do somthing beyond what you have masterd you will never grow"", and he is right. To truly understand what thee author is trying to is saying you must understand that to say that you have mastered something is to be able to do it without failer. In order to grow you must set goals for your self. Even if those steps that you take are small they help you walk the path of achiving greater things. Not everything comes easy it may take years to master or even learn, but with the right amount of confidence and self confodince you can reach mastery.

If you can ride a bike than learn how to ride a mottercicel, if you are able to make a cupcake than learn how to bake a cake, if you know how to float then learnand teach your self how to swim. Small tasks like these can help you improve skills that you already know and have. By improving those skills you can reach higher places and do bigger things. Untill you push your self you will never reach the goals you set but with the right amount of dedication you can reach your goals and move beyond what you already know. Just becuase you can't do one small task doesn't mean that you can not master it you havr to keep trying and trying till you can master it but until then you will never grow. Now it's up to you to decide weather or not you want to grow as a person or not weather to grow or stay the same and never to achive your goals in life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C1F640A29D37,"Dear Barcelona FC,

Im a student from the school, Generic_School, I would like to like to play and work for a professional football/soccer league and team. It has been my dream to be a professional soccer player for your club,Barcelona FC, for my entire childhood. watching your players play on live television has always catch my interest every match they play. ever since then, I kept pursuing to be a pro for your club. I would like to know what risk and what kind of pressure your players take and most importantly, what motivates them,what keeps them active and ready during matches.

If you have the chance, I would like to make a request to visit your campus and department. I would like to know the works of every players routine, how they train and how much effort they put into their work. I would like to interview some of your players and ask them questions about their life being in your club, how they got into joining, and get a better understanding of this establishment and get to know the players a bit more better in person. better then any fan or article would know.

I would like to know the history of this club,when it was created, the changes that have been made since and the salary of the players. i would like to know the rewards that this club as won;how many international league has this club been in and what has the club been threw the most. this club has expanded over the world and i want to know the marketing of this company make daily and per year.

It would really benefit me a lot in to know the mindset of my career, and the idea of doing it for my family. It will change my point of view of the club gives and give me a new view of it. how it how it will my friends and family react and affect me. things would be different and give me new facts about the place and country your club. It consider to accept my request, please call my school or one of my family members.

sincerely

Generic_Name",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,2.5
8BC2D4B87F27,"People believe that students should take music or drama class and i am agree with them because some students like to play instruments and some of them like to enjoy drama events and a lot of students like to draw even if they're not good drawing but they try and that's why they should take art class and the same thing with students who likes to play instruments. But the problem is if a student want to take those classes they have to ask for a permission from their parents first, because a lot of students want to take the class but their parents they're don't agree with their children and also sometimes to take those classes its need time and some kids don't have compassion to take it easy and they ruined it. But many students love to play instruments and they usually give their time on it and they learn with time practicing.

For example, A lots of students like to play sports for school and they talk with their parents first if they can play and also, if the parents agree with their children decision and the same thing with music class,drama,art etc. Because for those kind of stuff always need time. But i am agree with people who believe that students should required to take music,drama and art class because they can learn something new in their life and someday they can find a job to be an artistic or musician to play song in any events and drama they can get to record for the TV shows and that will be a good job for them in the future.

Those people who think that students should take classes for music,art,drama they support their children that's why they want their kids to take it and that's the good thing because they give the permission and a opportunity to their children to learn.",3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
E03B6B157C32,"""Does true self-esteem comes from praise or does it come from achievement."" Self-esteem comes from achievement because it makes you feel good. It makes you feel that you could do anything. Also you can learn not to give up.

Self-esteem comes from achieving, it will make you feel good about yourself. For example, if Generic_Name achieves shooting five times at the three point line and makes all of them; he will feel good about himself. His self-esteem is feeling good so he may try to do more next time at the three point line. But feeling good about yourself is not the only thing that will help with your self-esteem.

Another is it will make you feel that you could do anything. For example, if Generic_Name wins the art fair only in her class, but the school is having an art fair for the whole sophomore class. Her self-esteem will kick in and she may sign up

Also you can learn how to not give up for example if Generic_Name lose the class discussion but the class is going to have another one the next day she is going to try her hardest to win the next class discussion.

I think that achievement will help kids with their learning because nowadays kids like winning and winning things at the end it makes their self-esteem built up.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
8E53C7642922,"Have you ever group up with older or younger students before? And you think of eachother's differently and won't work it out, well there a program that helps older and younger to solve that problem.

Older students can teaches the younger students to learn the next year problems or tests that is coming up. The younger students would confuses how do the problems infront of them and would need helps. The older students help the younger students with their studies. Older students can help them read the sentences on the problems they have or help with the steps of the problem. The younger students can help the older students what they learned and teach them how the problems works again. A lot of older students forgot what they learned in the past and it's stressful. In sixth grade, my teacher let's all sixth grades read with 2nd graders and it's how younger and older bonds little bit.

The younger and older students can bond eachother in the program. They can learn from eachother what they do in their own grades to lighten up the day without awkwardness. It's a teamwork program that helps younger and older students to assist for eachother. It's like a group project and they have to work with eachother to finish the project and helps eachother step by step. One time i was little a older student alway read to me and slowly we bonded, It's was nice at the end of the day. Bonding is a key to success of learning from eachother and we are the same person with different thoughts and mind.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
5EA76942F5C7,Me as a student think that we should have at least a (C) because most students use sports to express their feeling out. Sometimes if they don't get what they want they will just stop trying; in school work or even homework. But in the other hand some other students will try harder so they can play or do what they love. So a (C) sounds good but a (B) sounds even better; so students like me could try even harder and have a modification to so. So I say to the principal great gob and keep it up. When we are looking back and when we have a great job that we like; we look back to middle school and say thank u for pushing us to max when it came down to doing work THANK YOU.,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
22CFD6C961E3,"Some school districts allowing there students to graduate in 3 years instead of the traditional 4 year is something I strongly consider, and surely something I think we all also have to consider. Being able to graduate in 3 years not only gives you an extra year, but also gives you the proper amount of time to plan your future. The amount of time that you would be spending in school would be a year less.

Given a year, it is up to you, how you use it and what your going to do with it. Getting a job would help save you a lot of money for college. Having a year off doesnt exactly mean that you have to go to school, but instead getting a job will be very beneficial. Whether its to support your family, save money for school, or even for pocket money, knowing that you have not only time, but also extra money, will help you realize that there isnt much to stress about. Jobs also dont have to be something that is outside of school. Having a job that is academic wise or just something temporary to have the experience, will help open you up to more opportunities. Whether you are looking forward to go to college or to become more appealing to bigger organizations/ companies in your work force, having a job that is academic base will help. For example, going to coach my brothers soccer game during the weekends compared to going to a community center to fix computers during the weekends, wouldnt really open me up to more work opportunities rather than fixing computers at a community center will.

Going to college isnt for everyone, but for many is the way to go. Maybe your going for your Masters or even a PHD, when you have a year you are saving the amount of extra time that you would be spending in school. Lets say for my PHD I would have to stay in school for 8 years, knowing that I have saved my self a year even though it doesnt seem like much compared to 8 years is not only saving time and money, but also saving a year to your age. Most student that go for the traditional 4 years typically are being rushed and become stressed out by the end. Colleges will also see that you have graduated showing them your were willing to work hard to get that extra year.

Being able to graduate in 3 years doesnt only ask for patients but also for your dedication. Although you are graduating a year early, it doesnt neccisarly mean that the work load given in that year doesnt have to concern you. You would have to be able to manage your time and work hard to makeup for that year, yes, even if it means you have to give your summer break. Staying organized and knowing what your aim is, will give you more confidence making you become dedicated.

Although some may argue that this is definitely something stressful and given 3 years is not enough for the workload in high-school, just know there is still hope. There are some student that dont have enough time to even finish in 4 years. So being thankful, you should know that it is alright if you cant finish in 3 years. Having this program gives opportunities to student but also saves time. School districts should label the students that have enough credits to graduate and for those that don't, and for those that dont, they should offer support (programs/ clubs) for them to possibly graduate in 3 years. If its not possible for students to graduate in 3 years then the 4th year should just be a less stressful year.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
7155F142CE58,"Some people believe that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. Others think that inactivity also serves a purpose. They argue that they are not focus and they are not learning. One should always accomplish a goal if one puts their mind to it. they gain new knowledge,skills, and information.

If one has the knowledge he can accomplish anything. I wanted to learn how to make a dog house. I had no knowledge on how to build a dog house. My friend had told me that the school was having a science fair and that they were giving knowledge on how to build a dog house. I went and I had got the knowledge that i needed. I had the knowledge to stat it and to finish it. The dog house came out looking pretty good with the help of knowledge that I had. If one has the knowledge,skills, and information he can accomplish anything.

If one has the skills to accomplish a goal he can can do anything. When i was in school I wanted to improve my skills in English. I would ask mt teacher to give me tips on what I needed to improve. She would tell me me not to use the word you. By the end of the year I was not using the word you. She had told me that my English skills were improving because I had been working on it all year. She told me that i was a strong writer. If one has the knowledge, skills , and information he can accomplish anything.

If one has information he can accomplish any goal in his way. When i was in high school I wanted to take welding as a class. I had no information on how to join the class. I asked my friend on how i could join he told me that I had to go to the office to get the information that I needed. With the information that I got I now had to fill it out so that I could join the class next year. if one has the knowledge,skills, and information he can accomplish anything.

If everybody in the community had the Knowledge ,skills, and the information then everybody would accomplish a goal. Although others think that they should not be focused on accomplishing a goal. One should have theses skills so that they can accomplish anything that they want.         ",3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
784627BD990C,"My position about technology is this brings many effect positive for us huminity life. I take this opinion for the chaning on our life and the support positive in the knowledge.

First reason, for saying the the tecnology have good effects on the human's life is it helps to do many activity fast and easy. For example, many years ago we had to go the store and we watched the stuffed we need. now with the new technology, we do not need to move. we can bay only.

Second reason, tecnology gives support to the knowledge with the creation of new tools and more precision.

For example, before we used the telescopes for treated to understand the universo, now the technology us helps with the creation of new satellite .

Thrid reason, that support the tnechnology have good effects in our economy. For example on market every people want to down the price of production, the new technology helps on this.

In conclution, technology shows to good change on human's life,

in the economy, in the konwlege and many areas technology helps.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
2B6FE734CB4E,"The one place I would like to visit in the world would be Puerto Rico. I would like to visit Puerto Rico because of the of the beautiful weather. I would like to visit Puerto Rico because of the beautiful beach's and rivers. One other reason would be because of my family.

First, the weather most of the time is hot even in the winter is hot. In the summer sometimes is ,so hot that it can reach the temperature of 100 degrees. Most of the people living in Puerto Rico are use to the hot temperature.

Next, you would see people in the beach's or at the river some people have pool but some people can't buy pools because some don't have money and some people do have money so when the weather is hot you will see most of the people at the beach's or rivers. I personally like going to the river's because the water is colder and is really refreshing when it's really hot.

Next, another reason why I pick Puerto Rico was because of there delicious foods there a lot of tropical dishes there is something call the three meat sandwich witch is made of really tender pork meat,chicken,beef then they put potato sticks and then they add the mayo and ketchup. In the holidays like Christmas puertorican people cook a hole pig and then when the pig is done cooking they cut the pig and shred it into pieces and then they eat it with rice mix with beans.

Finally, most of my family is from Puerto Rico so most of my family know's the best places to go and the type of food that we would like. Most of are family makes a party when we come from the U.S because we only go and visit in the summer because of school we can't visit when ever we want to. When ever I visit Puerto Rico I have to see my two little brothers and my friend that I have not seen sense last summer most of the time I go to my consents house because we always play baseball or basketball ,but when it's to hot we stay home watching T.V or playing PlayStation we play with my friend that lives in Virginia. When is time to go back to the U.S are family get's sad and starst crying but we tell them that we will be back.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
4A4B45273A9D,"Many people do not like to be a idle. In many states ,cities, and also country a lots of people like to work because many of them have responsibilities . If we are always doing something , Of course that we deserve more because we work for living , for pay taxes , and bills . People have different jobs , people who were young and get graduated and they went to university has a better jobs , they work in offices ,or like a doctors, nurses,lawyers,and many more. People who did not graduated for any reasons they don't have jobs like that others one . Its not bad to not get graduated many people do not get graduated , or not go to the university because maybe they did not have that money to pay that bills from the university . But anyways they also can get a great jobs .

Example, I have 2 old brothers one is 22 , and the second one is 27 they two have a different jobs , The oldest one he get graduated, and also he went to the university now he's a lawyer , he work 5 days of week , and he always told be that I have to be someone in this country (USA). My brother who is 22 and does not like school , does not like the university , and also do not like to work. So , who deserve more ? Of course that is my oldest bother because he's not a idle men .

Many people who doesn't work , They don't deserve nothing they are just a idle people. In many states , cities , and countries theres people who do not like to work they just do nothing all times . If they work they probability just work for couple of the month . How Tomas Jefferson said "" Determine never be a idle ""

People may think that persons who do not like to work are not good idea to be like a idle. Also many people may think that they maybe just don't have a huge responsibilities or they just their mothers giving then money for survey. And many people said that's really bad for keeping theirs sons that way .

In my opinion, Every people in the world is different , People we went to the university thats great because that way they can get a great jobs . And also people who did not go to the university, they also can get a greats jobs. and thats good , I think that people who do not work it just because maybe when they were young they parents did not teach them to be responsible. And now that they are adult they do not like to work , And that kind of people is always we they parents living in theirs houses.

In conclusion, Lets put in practice what Tomas Jefferson said "" Determine never be a idle "" Many people said lets do something with are life . We don't have to be idle .                  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
58255BF759C0,"Imagine if community parks, state parks, and national parks provided a wide variety of interesting activities. Would you visit and tryout these activities? Would you tell a friend to come tryout these activities? I will be writing about two enjoyable ways to spend outdoors.

One enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is by playing sports. I say this because everybody loves playing sports both girls and boys like to play sports. People can choose to play soccer, basketball, baseball, or golf. These activities are enjoyable because people like to be active and when their active they play sports they go outside to play sports. They can play in competition or just scoring points whichever way is best to have fun.

Another enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is going to a pool. I say this because people like to swim when it's hot outside to cool them down a little. People can go to a community pool for people who know how to swim and for people who don't know how to swim. The people at the community pool can teach others how to swim but it's gonna cost some money but its worth it. I say this is enjoyable because people like to have fun in the pool especially if it's during the summer . People can swim and play volleyball or play catch while in the pool to have fun.

Inconclusion if community parks, state parks, and national parks provided a wide variety of activities people would go visit the place try them out and have fun.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
2567C158F746,"If we are making good choses life can be more fun and easy. for Example if we are making everything correctly life can be more interesting. one way to make life more easy and more fun is to make everything correctly and think first after we want to do something.

Sometime we spend time doing think that can not benifict our future. for Example if I am skiping clases from school the problem will be the my teacher will call my parent and I will get in trable. another reason can be skiping clases will effect my life and my future that can effect my goal. another type of effect can be like if I want to fiend a good job the company where I am working will pay me less. or I can not have the same benefit like other people that graduate from school.

people make thing without think. sometime we make bad choses. for Example in my home country when I was going to school I was making one big bad chose. I was skiping clase with my friend to go play soccer but the problem was that I dont think first. The result was I dont pass the clase my grade where bad and they call my parent and I get in drable. people should think first after they want one to make a chose.

people spend time in think that in the future can effect them. for Example in my opion sometime we make bad chose. another Example my brother when he was in TCW. he was in 9 grade he make a big error he spend more time with his friend and he tallk me the hi dont care about the SOL

but when he was in 12 grade he need to pass the SOL to graduate. he tallk me please dont make the same error the I make.

I belive peoople should think first after making a dicision because if we dont think correctly that can effect or goal or us future. people should think corefully to be success on there life. we can change the world thinking first after we make a decision.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
642CB997325C,"Working Beyond

Do you need to work beyond what you have mastered to grow? Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Not everyone agrees that a person can grow after they have already done what they needed. However I agree because people grow by trying new things, people succeed by trying new things, and gain more experience.

Many people grow by trying new things. When people work beyond what they know they try new things. Trying new things can help them grow in many ways. People who try new things may know their job better and work harder. In addition people will get better at what they do. They will have more experience then others and know their surroundings.

Many people may succeed when they try new things. People will become more successful. They will know what has to be done and what does not because they have worked hard and know better. In addition they will know their way around. They will not need much help because they have done the work and grew to be better.

Finally people gain more experience. When people work beyond they will be more experienced. They will have more experience then others and help others when they need the help. People will be more educated in that topic and help others.

While many people think you can not grow. There are a lot of people who are probably growing because they went beyond to learn. Unless you do not do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.

In conclusion people who go above and beyond grow because they have done more to help them grow and become better and to succeed. You should try and go beyond and see if you grown.             ",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
C270D47D709B,"A first Impression is the key to succes, because that is the first time a person is going to see how formal you are and makes in idea of your personality. Is very important to give the best, to let people see that you are a person capeble of making good decitions and for that, a first Impression is always good. A first Impression is more then how a person looks and talk, is telling others that you can do anything to fine a better future. A first Impression is very important because is your opportunity to let a amployer know that you are a good person for the job you are looking for.

When you are looking for a job or trying to aply for college, the first Impression is the important key for you. That can help you to achieve that goal and make a better future for yourself, it can open many job opportunities, sometimes with out needing to do a lot of work. No knowing how to give a good Impression, is something that can affect your life in a negative way, like clossing job opportunities something that is really important to achieve those goals.

For example if you talk to a employer for a job interview and you give a nice impression, that employer is going to call you back, but if is the other way and you totally did bad he or she is not going to call you back, and you will be waiting with out getting any call. Lest remenber that Impressions don't always change, and sometimes is very important to put your best and always give the nice impression not matter of who, because sometimes those opportunities can come from someone that you will never thing. Having a possitive attitude, is one good way to give a good first

Impression to someone, because having that you can show that you are happy and you will enjoy to do almost any job.

In conclusion, first Impressions are important to develope a good image about yourself, and it's the key to open many doors. People who gave a good impression the first time, are more capeble of achieving there goals, because they show that they can be responsable and there life, but those who are the opposive is a different story, they have issues finding new opportunities or jobs that they love. At the end the first Impression is always the best, to show more about you and let people know that you are a person with a positive attitude that can make good decitions and capeble to achieve your goals.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
F69C85F4C3CA,"the memorable teacher ever had

was a teacher in 10

word

wild all students",1.0,1.0,1.5,1.0,1.0,1.5
D77A3352CB34,"For some reason I think it is not a good idea because the students are not decided what they want to be in a short time, they need learn more things in school, because they can regret for take some careers because they have another perspective when they was a young, sometimes they lost the time at find another career that they want because they choose one career that probably don't know how was it when they wasa young.

Still better option choose the career when you finish high school for you have more time for looking something that be for you agrade and that you prefer, you need take a decision when you choose one career, some you are good or something that make feeling well,example you are very nice doing somehting that make you happy or some career hard that making a lot money, is your choice.

For another way if the students are decided what they want to do when they are younger, they had more time and get more experience.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
0623DD5A8E8F,"manager I will like to visit some employs so they can choose this workplace and work hard. the type of work I will purse is I want a big office with computers and big spaces so local work so many schools have partnership with local companies and really organizations that allow students to explore certain professions because so they can learn some subject like history, math, science, language arts, chores, and more because so they can member what there talking about and so if they have a test they can study and have a better grade think about what they want to be when they grow up .I choose this work place and this specific job because so if they want to work in a quiet place they can work in a office and if they need privacy they can have all the space that they need. And I want them to get along be friendly with the people they work with and the costumers and they work together if they want to. And I want the manager to visit us so they can check if we need more thing that we need for the office and how organized that we are and here some comments about our place and if we need more details from our place like if we need chairs, or more tables more mats for the ground, or we need more employs to work here ,or we need to help people, or do we need to put a kids room for them so they can not be bored, and talk about some work that we need to work on. And I want convince my employs allow me to visit like how are they doing ,or they need to work on some thing hat they should do, or we need to move some computer to put it in the computer sections. and I want to my employs to work hard and try there best. My first reason why I pick this local companies so they help the community( the people) so the manager reads this letter. And my second reason why I pick this is because so people see that they can find a job like this and if people like to work with people and other employs they can work on the office. And this is my reason why I well chose this work place and the specific job .          ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
816FC4D1628F,"Busch Gardens is one place that I would like to visit. I think it is the perfect place where I should go. I want to go there because it is fun, all the rides, and I had never visit their before.

First of all, it is fun to go Busch Gardens. I heard that their are some good games that I can enjoy. My friends told me that are a lot of good shops for shopping. If I ever go their I would spend all my savings on buying games and toys. The best thing in their is I can spend time with my family.

Next, I would love to try all the rides. The first thing I would like to do in there is to ride the biggest roller coaster. I would love to try every single ride that is in their. Those rides are probably fun than any other thing. Then I would get in the horror house and scare my sister. Afterward, I would get in that maze and try to solve it.

Finally, the last reason is it is the place that I never visit before. I really want to go there because I just heard about it from my friends and other peoples. I think it is a good place to visit with my family. All my friends always recommend me to go their. They said that it is a great place for me to visit in the world.

To sum up, I would like to visit Busch Gardens because it is fun, all the rides, and it is a place that I never visit before. I think Busch Gardens is a magical place to visit. I would love to go there. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
7270750C775E,"MEMORANDUM

I See no problem not a big essue about using cell phones at school,a lot of students need the cell phones to stay informed or to keep in contact with the parents,students can use cell phone in case of an emergency at school. Cell phones are a safe thing for the students at this times. Some students don't have a way to search a subject or a problem because they don't have a computer with,so the cell phone is faster, and small easy to look through,share ideas with other students,point of view about a subject,political opinions,stay informed what is going on outside of school,students have to be informe about everything that happens outside of school,bloquing students devices can cause a bad effect and this will make then find other way to brake the rules again,and get what they want .I think students should be allowed to use cell phones for this reasons.

However, some students can take to other side,and don't pay atenttion in class because of the cell phones,a big part use cell phones to play games,or get distracted with music,and this can affect a lot of other students in the class,use to much of the cell phones also affect the social midia. Using social midia at school can cause a bad point of view of the school,examples of it can be recording fights, or sexual things. Most teachers don't allow studenst using cell phone during class because students can be out of the subject that the teacher is trying to teach,this can be a rock inside the boot.

From:Generic_Name

To:Schools

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FF8A189E3BE4,"I think my characters trait should be what i want it to be because i can make it whatever i want or whoever i want it to be. Making my character would be better because i would make it a great person and it would be peaceful. Characters who influence beyond our control would be bad because it would cause them to do whatever they want, characters who influence would do bad stuff.

Choosing my character would be better became i can learn from mistakes and do better off them it would teach me how to be a good person. If my character was influenced it would be it would learn from its mistakes, it would do whatever it would want everyday.

Character being influenced would suck because it didnt choose its trait. It would just look around and do whatever one else is doing he would want to dress like everyone else, buy shoes like everyone else when he could just be him.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
B3F0F2F6487F,"should the school extend the school day two hours and four-day a week?

people have different opinion about being ten hours in the school day. some people think it is a good idea for their kids to be ten hours at the school day. However, I believe that being ten hours in the school day it is not a good idea, because it dose not help for the energy and the resources, everyone's brain needs to take a break in the day and ten hours working in the school day is too much for a kid.

First, being ten hours in the school day dose not help in the energy and the resources; Because we spend the same amount of time at the school, But instead of spending an eight hours a day in five-day a week we will spend ten hours a day in four-day a week. so we are going to spend the same amount of energy in both.

Second, everyone's brain needs to a break. If we spent ten hours of our day at the school we are not going to be having that much time to live our lives, do our work and see our family. everyone needs to relax and sleep enough during the day to focus more and do more good at school.

Finally, ten hours is too much for a kid to spend in a day at the school. kids will dislike going to school. they will get tired. for example when my sister stay a little longer after school for extra work, she comes back home so tired, not talking to anyone and doing noting, because she is tired of being a little bit longer at the school.

In conclusion, as you have read. extend the school day two hours a day in four-day a week is not a good idea because it dose not help to conserve energy and the resources, everyone's brain needs to take a break in the day and ten hours working in the school day is too much for a kid. so what we can do is not extend the school day two hours a day, so all the kids can do good at the school, focus more and live their life happy.                         ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
39776B3A4C70,"Dear, Generic_School.

For some of the students, school is really far away for them, some student arent able to be in school for there health issues or gifted youngsters, is a really wonderful thing that the schools are offering online classes for the kids, it can really be a big help for there parents and there children.

My aunt, she has two children and one of them is gifted she can't walk normally, my aunt works everyday and is really frustrated , she has to take her to school everyday in the morning and take her home in the afternoon, from there home to school is like a 30 minutes of a ride and the way back , there is no bus able to take her where she lives , during the winter she wasn't a fan of the cold, the kid mostly feel sick during winter season, during at that time every morning they go outside to the car so my aunt can drop her to school she always felt sick, she was not able to attend school normally, it is really hard for my aunt, i told my aunt about the offer that the school are gonna make, about the online school and she really supports that decision she told me "" That would it be a wonderful thing for me and my child"" she is really joyful about the offer that the schools are making,

I fully do support this offer, from the schools having online classes it does help a lot of kids and parents, with they struggles and timing at home, it will be a big help for the counties of Generic_City, we want all the kids to learn at same time so they can be prepare for there future.

Thank you for your time.

Generic_Name. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
0049B1DF5CCC,"Small act of kindness can impact in other people can change people to become better persons you can have an impact of kindess with a homeles that can change his life or with some who needed they are going to know you are a nice person if you are a nice person everywhere you go people is going to like your personality so you have to be a nice person with others like a old women triying to cross the road thats a impact of kindness when you do that you feel a greate person you can change people in the way they think by helping others treating nice other people give them some advice when you see someone need it help someone older then you give food and new clothes to a homeless person is a big act of kindess maybe you wount change his life but you would change one day of his life when you do thoose stuffs you feel emotional.

Another example of an act of kindess is when you help your friends to study for a test or explain them or when they need money you give some money is an act of kindess because you are helping your friend.

Another example is not trowing trash on the floor if you put the trash where belong that is an act of kindess because benefits the earth and the people.                                                                                                                                      ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
6BFDA0FE1CB2,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""to be yourself in a wold that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" I strongly agree. Have you ever felt like you have to be someone else you are not? This is something that most people who living in this world are dealing with. Us human being live in a world nowadays that is actually don't want us to be ourselves, no matter how hard we try, we most likely end up not being confident, and having low self esteem. we think that we have to be someone else to please our society, which is not very true. Therefore fighting with this world to be ourselves is one the greatest accomplishment because, people become more confident, they get the chance to be their real selves, and they don't try to please others.

Firstly, people become more confident. No matter how good a person can look, having no confidence fade the beauty away. No confidence make people look weak and they don't believe much in themselves. As an example, some people may have terrible stuttering problems, and sometimes it may make them feel like not wanting communicate with others, or some people would love to have a conversation, but they might think that they are going to get laughed at because it's hard to get their words out. However fighting this obstacle can improve their lives and build them up to have more confident. This is one reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.

Secondly, people get a chance to be their real selves. Some people get lost trying to be someone else that they are not because the society want to change them.

For example, in some countries, especially my country, Haiti, people get bullied for being in the LGBT community. Some parent, family members, or friends might not accept them for who they really are, so they have to hide it and try to be normal like every body else. Sometimes some of them feel like they are getting rejected by the community and they just to want to be alone crying or even want to commit suicide. This is a major reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.

Lastly, people don't try to please others. Some people would do absolutely anything to please their significant others or their friends. As they pleasing them, they end up making that person happy and automatically forget about their own happiness, which is not right. For example, some people might have abusive boyfriends/girlfriends who want them to do everything their way. Deep down inside they don't really want to, but they probably love that person and they have to do it if they want to please them. They end up falling in an awful situation that may even risk their lives. This is a last reason why I agree being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.

As a summary, be yourself in a wold that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. you become more confident. you get the chance to be the real you. You do not try to please others. If people keeps being themselves in this world that just want them to be someone else, then they would find themselves where they've lost it and they would also find happiness.                                                                                                           ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
58EBDB3621E5,"Students would benefit, from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. There are a lot of kids with disabilities who wants to go to school but they are afraid of being bullied by other students in school.

There are some parents who are in college, and have many responsibilities and still needs education. There are some other kids that needs to go to school but can't get out of their houses because of their sickness or health conditions.

The first reason why students would benefit from attending classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, is because of those kids with disabilities who wants to go to school ,but are afraid of being bullied because of their physical appearance. I remember when i was young , i used to get bullied in school because of my bow legs. Kids could laugh at me , and that used to hurt my feelings at the point of not willing to go to school.

This same thing is still happening today to a lot of kids in different schools , that they don't want to go to school because of being bullied and judge for their physical appearance yet they can't do nothing about it . That's why classes from home by way of online would be so important to kids who are going through this kind of situations.

The second reason is because of the parents who are in college and have many responsibilities, as taking care of their families and work, but still needs education.

Last year my sister had a baby, yet she was getting ready to graduate in college. She couldn't stop studying just because she got a baby. The online classes from home helped her a lot , because she was able to nurse her baby and take her classes at the same time.

The third reason is because of those kids that needs to go to school, but can't even dare get out of their houses because of their sickness. I had a friend who had a very bad disease that could't allow her go outside where there is sunlight because it could burn her skin. She wanted to go to school but she couldn't because of her health condition. The classes from home by way of online helped her finished her high school studies and graduated.

Some people may disagree by saying that students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home by way of online, because they won't have fun, make friends and other things, however i believe that they would benefit because a lot of those students who take classes from home by the way of online, ends up finishing their studies, and their wouldn't be any difference from the one who made it in school. Having friends and fun is good but ain't the priority , the priority is to get what's important and what will help in the future.

Yes, students have a huge benefit ,from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.                                                 ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
B948405746B5,"Many students like to spend time with their friends in the school. Specially high schools are good places for students to learn and get fun with their friends. By the way some students are coming to school just for the pass their classes and work hard to graduate with high grades. I think graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years from a high school would be good for these students. Because they can go to college/university early, or work 1 year full time in a job to save money after graduated from high school or get more time to think about their career desicion.

First of all a student who graduated from high school in three years can attend to a college early. This means this student also can graduate one year early from the college and start his career early. If this student already decided to which college or university that he wants to go and what career he wants to do, this can be good for him. Also, student can understand how college classes are.

Second reason for to choose graduate early is save money for college/university. Some students who graduated from high school don't go to college/university directly. These students choose to work in a job one or two years full time to save money for college/university. This is a good option for the students who doesn't have money to pay for college/university or who doesn't want to be dependent to his family. Some families don't have money to pay their childrens' school. In this kind of situations students choose to wait one or two years instead of go to college/university directly.

Another reason to graduate early from high school is to get a extra year to make a desicion about career and college/university. Some students think it is hard to choose the right career for them in high school because when they graduateded from university their careers is going to be their whole life. Like an example sometimes students choose the job according to the classes that they liked in their high school but after they go to college/university they understand this career is not interesting more to them. According to the scientistists 35% of the college/university students decide to change their career in their freshman or sophomore year in the university. This shows that students need to think carefully while they make a decision about their careers. Also the career that a student choose effects the college/university that he wants to go because many students choose the university that gives good education and opportunites to this students about their careers that they choosed.

In conclusion I think graduate one year early from high school is a good idea for the students who wants to go to college/university early. Another reason is save money to pay college/university and final reason is to get a extra time to make a desicion about right career and school. I believe also to study and get prepared better for SAT

to get a higher score can be an extra reason. Graduate early from high school is a good idea but also can be hard for all students. So, student who wants to graduate early from high school needs to work hard.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
77D5466305CB,"Have you ever wonder what would happen if you know more about something you like, something you want to experience, how people can do many things, how they learn how to do a lot of things. Are you impress of how some persons can have more than one career, do you wonder how they make that happen, how they did it, how thwy make it until the end. People who knows a lot of things means that they have been trying differents things. People should try to do more things because trying new things is like an adventure, people learn more things and growing makes you a better person.

Trying new things is like an adventure. When people do something that they did not know or want it to know more about it, they look at that like a new experience, something that they would enjoy to do. My oldest sister know how to make cakes, she thought that was all she can do, but one time I dare her to do a recipe that is famous in my country, ""pupusas"" she didn't know how to make it, but she try, she fail and what she cook was really bad, but she started to practice and try until she reach it. Know she can make pupusas and cakes, but not only that, she was trying to do different stuff, so know she almost have her own restaurant. She demonstrate me that doing more than I know is awesome, that it can teach me new things and that I am capable of doing more than I know.

People learn more things. When people try to do something they start by trying and when they try, they fail and when they fail they learn something new, so next time that they try do not make the same mistake. When I came here I thought I wouldn't learn english and that I wouldn't have friends, but then I thought ""If I don't start practicing or trying to learn I won't be able to communicate with others"" so I start trying and know I speak a little bit more and understand a little bit more. Then I thought ""I need to speak with other so I can practice more"" but I was so scared that people wouldn't understand me but I had to try, and then I start trying to talk with others, now I am not afraid of talk with others enymore, my english is growing and my experiences too. I would be stuck if I hadn't try.

My sister is in middle school, she likes to do sports, she knows how to play some but not others. In her school after school they make clubs about sports. Last semester they had a club about basketball, she didn't know how to play basketball, but she wanted to learn, she wanted to try something knew. She enjoy the club and she learnd how to play basketball, know in this semester they have a club about volleyball, she doesn't know how to play volleyball, but she wanted to learn something more, know she is in the club of volleyball. She learn how to play 2 sports, she is growing in knowledge of sport, if she can play volleyball and basketball that means she can play any sport she likes or wants. She knows that if she wants to success she need to try and if she fail, she need to try again until she made, that knowing one thing doens't mean that's all she can do.

Unless people try to do something beyond what they know, they will never grow. They need to do things to know who they are, what makes them special, what can they do, what are capables of, what can they do, in what they are good, how they feel doing something. Doing something means growing, growing in knowledge, education, skills and more. People who do more than they know, makes them smarter, they try new things, things that they didn't know that they could do. When people want to do something beyond what they know they would fail, but failing doesn't mean you can't do it, failing means you are almost gaining what you want, you are almost reaching your goal, you are doing great, because you know what to do and what not to do. Just because something did not go like you wanted doens't mean it didn't work, it mean something went bad and you don't need to do it again, so next time that you try you already know what not to do. Experiences make people better, growing makes people better, trying makes people better, all person are capable of doing what they want. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
037C88B5B111,"Most of the schools in around the world that cut off hours in school, and they get a good results. Some people say that is the good idea, but some people think that a bad idea depend on their opinion. If they extending the school day two hours, to a four- day school a week, they will give students get more chances to focus what they like, time to explore and spend more time for family. Some of the countries try to improve it and they received a lot of good responds from students and parents recently. New things always have a difference opinion, and so many people could not adapt it, but one day it will bring a revolution to education.

The first thing brought the benefit for this idea is students can able to focus what they like. In the real world, Students have so much things to do. They have to start school at 7am to 2pm, it takes a long period of day and they could not practice what they like. If they can get less hours a day in school so they could practice sports, music,sciences instead of math and English. There must have some students interesting at classes in school and they enjoy it, but they are still force to take classes that they do not like, its not their advantages. Some students would quit school because they could not find out themselves in there, and it will costs a lot of problems into the future especially effects to the next generation. That why schools should give students more hour to get what they like to do.

The problem related to previous the first thing is time for family. Still, students spent all day long in school, and some of them want to do their favorite things after school, then they accidentally forget spend time with their family. ''Family is the root behind success of student'', but when they get home, they have to do their homework at midnight. So many tradition families that have a rule that student have to follow then they do not have time to do their homework. Some of students have a jobs after school to get more benefits, scholarships, to prepare their life in college. Some students just want to support their family and do not have time to think about school. they have to bring their homework everywhere they go. If schools follow a four-day school week, it would be better to students and their family; they can get more time to hangout; they do not need worry about school or test tomorrow. Students can enjoy their time with family.

The important thing that can not miss is time to explore. ''A fish can not claim like a monkey'', some people good at math, some at music or art and we can not take a person good at math to do music. That is exactly going on in school life; students can not find out what they truly want to do; they do not have creative. If school follow a four-day school week, students can receive more extra times to explore the world and life. They could discover nature that teachers can help them, reality could help students get more experiences and discover themselves what they good at. Europe countries like Holland and Ireland had tried this and they got the highest education in the world. In Europe, they do not have homework, students go to school four or five days a week but less hours. that is good thing that every schools in the world should follow.

Eventually, schools and teachers just want do the best for young generation, and they want to make a better life. Sometimes, they should flexible time and give students a chance to focus what they like, family and to explore a life. Students still able to finish their work, only 24 hours a day is not enough for them to complete everything. School, themselves and family, that is a lot of things to do in a day. ''Life is hard, do not make it harder'',

that is a good quote to say. Schools should give students more time.   ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
E06EDBA28C44,"Some people say that aim too high is not for them. This should be because people does not feel ready. Some people would want to aim high, but they do not want to know how would be the outcome. Although, some people think that aim too high is a waste of time, nevertheless, humans really need to set their aim too high to know if they would achieve their goals because some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail and some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals.

My first reason is that some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail. For example, if a person aim too high but fail that person would not feel good about him. Some times people who fail get depressed. If that is a humans who is a persistent person he would be trying more time. Until that person achieve their big goal. Also, that kind of people who are persistent that always keep trying that people one day they achieve all their goals. In addition,

the key to have a awesome overcome is to never give up and never stop.

My second reason is that some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals. People who do this are people that always want the easy thing. These people does not want to effort that much and achieve their goals. However, these people do not know the significant of have something that took a lot of efforts. In addition, some people may say that if they aim low they can achieve more things in the time a person that aim too high. Thats not the point, the thing is that every human have to effort to know the significant of never give up. Also, when humans has owned something by their own effort the valuate more what they had achieve.

In summary, humans really need to set their aim too high to know if they would achieve their goals. Some humans thinks that they are not prepare to aim too high and fail and some humans prefer to aim low and achieve their goals. Also, on these latest years humans has been lazy than doesnt want to effort to do big things and achieve it. Now humans really needs to efforts for something. Every human need to aim high and be scared of failing that something normal, but never give up always keep going.     ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
EE3E133A2D55,"Positive attitude is the key to a successful and happy life. Now days people with positive attitude can achieve things so easily, because they have the confidences of doing such activity with their best. Students with positive attitude can get higher grades, being on tasks, and never give up. Which will impact on their way of learning, understanding the topic, and do better in their exams. Having positive attitude will increase students' braveness towards their goals. They will have the confidence of knowing what they are doing throughout their career. 4/5 percent of People in the world have positive attitude to their daily activities and they are successful in it, but the rest who is not showing positive attitude towards their issues will lose the right path, and stay behind. It is important for people to have positive attitude, because it makes our identity, and someone with that energy will always be the best in his/her duties. Having positive attitude will make the person be successful in his life, caring a lot about others, and get better job.

In order to be successful person in our life we should have positive attitude and give our best effort to achieve our goals. Having positive perspectives will keep high level students away from ordinary, because the way of their thinking, ability of knowing, and taking actions to solve their problems, but with positive attitude it will make them be successful person in their live. People with positive attitude will act with integrity and honesty. Also, they will respect the dignity of others, and take responsibilities for their actions and consequences. However, they seek and share ideas, information, and their experiences with others to better understand and change the world. They will take advantage of the available opportunities such as, scholarships that will help them pay for their college fees, great colleges offers which will make them reach their goals, and be a successful person in his/her journey. Their will be struggles that would keep them from reaching their goals, but with such attitude it will keep them focus on their studies, and become a successful person in his career.

Secondly, with positive attitude people care a lot about others, they show empathy and respect to the needs and feeling of others. They do not judge others by their looks, color, clothing, race, knowledge, and ability of doing what is needed. They are open minded accept others on what they are good at, not on where they came from, or what they have done in the past. They are very much creative, take actions on what is wrong, and help others in their struggles. Also, they volenteerly participate and help others in doing their home works, science labs, math problems, and getting ready for a tests. People who have positive attitude will respect the society, and those who are living in that society. Always care about others, talk respectively to others, and do not let anyone take advantage of their kindness. Always help others in their duties, and respect the environment.

Lastly, If someone is showing positive attitude towards school they will aced it, get good grades which will get them the best offers from the top colleges, and after graduating college, they will get better job offers that they cannot ever dream about. It is all depended to they ability and having the right attitude. everyone will trying to hire people with such an attitude because, they know that they have the ability of doing the specific requirement for the work that is required to be done on time. Everyone is choosing people with positive attitude because, they know that they are the one they looking for the specific positions, to take their companies to their highest level. They have the knowledge, and the resources that they can use to get done whatever that has been asked for. They will also get paid a high amount of money that they never thought about. They will live their life the way that they want to live. With the positive attitude the are building a strong bond of trust with the community that they are working with. People with such an attitude will never give up, face the challenges, and be focus on their duties.

To conclude, having positive attitude is one of the most valuable factors that everyone should have during their life time. It will drive people with positive attitude to their successful life, having empathy for others, and get qualify for their dream job that they always want to see their selves in. It is important for everyone to have such an attitude to achieve their goals. Having positive attitude is the consideration of the identity that people are leaving behind for others to learn from, and run on the same truck. It help us to have the confidence of communicating to someone, getting participation in projects, and better understanding of this world. Positive attitude is the identification of our self to the world.                        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
AF4A2E8AD2A5,"Some people argue that working in a group has more benefits then working working alone. Some people also argue that working alone has more benefits then working in a group. Working alone is more beneficial the working in a group because, if one person in the group does not come to school the group will be short a person, if a member in the group does not care about the project, and not everyone is going to agree with each others ideas and opinions.

If a member in the group does not come to school the group will fall behind and not turn the work on time. if a person in the group is sick with a virus they would have to miss school and miss work on the project and that would hold back the rest of the group from turning in the project on time. When being put with someone who does not come to school often will cause stress on the rest of the group and also a delay. When working alone the worry of a group member not coming to school is not a thing because its alone.

When someone in the group does not care about the work the group will be held back because then more work would have to be done by the others. When being put with someone who does not care is hard because only the rest of the group is doing the work and putting in effort. Working in a group would also not be fun because you have someone who is not doing anything. When the group is working the one who does not care would be sleeping or on their phone. When working alone there is none of this to worry about because it is a independent assignment.

When working in a group not everyone is going to agree with each other on the same ideas. If one person says they do not like that idea, the group would have to take time and all agree on something as a group. Agreeing on something would take up to one or two classes and that would waste a lot of time and put the project behind. When working alone there is not agreeing on anything, it is whatever that person chooses.

Working in a group it would be more fun but when working alone more work can be done. Being pared with friends is nice but the amount of work able to get done when alone is a lot more. In a group there is more communication, sometimes that communication can hold someone back a negatively impact their grade.    ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
9C9C4EECA979,"Working in a group is more benificial . Why is more beneficial working in a group ? because if you have a group your group can help you in ideas , writing ,examples and information. If you working alone you do not have someone who can supor your idea.

The benefits what you have working in a group. The benefits are you can talk with your group abuth the work and also you can hask cuesthions and you can talk abuth examples and than they can toldyou how they can do the work and the group can suport your ideas.

Working alone do not have to moch benefits. The benefits are you can use ideas of your shelf the other is not one goin to disturb you and you can put your examples but that will be more dificult because you need to find the information and not one goin to suport your ideas.

For example working in a group in high school the english teacher say the students goin to do groups of four. For do a progect the students say yes, one of those students say i will colect the information, the other say i goin to writing the information and the other say i will put the examples of the progect and other say i will reading the progect and also i goin to do a expocition in class is more good because you will stay more relax because the group is help you.

For example working alone in class, the high school teacher say we goin to do groups because we have a progect but if you want work alone you can do it. the student say i like work alone because no one goin to disturb in my work the studen can put ideas of him shelf but you do not have some one to talk abauth the progect. and you will have nebous inclass you will be distracted and boring.

Why some people do not like to work in groups? the people do not like work in groups becase they have problems with the people in the group meybe he do not feel well in the group or he feel some nervous in the group or because some people lika work in silent.

Why the most people like to work in groups? that is because the people like work with friends, he feel well talking with the group, he like answer the cuestions of the group.",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
23F0ABEF8370,"Somepeople ask different people for their opinion. Because if you ask different people,people can have different opinion and they can have multiple answer.

First,people have different opinion. When people ask different poeple,people have multiple answer. For examole when i want to buy a pair of shoes i ask my mom, my dad, and sometimes i ask people that i do not know, but different people help me to see witch pair of shoes i should pick and there i can see what pair of shoes are the best. somepople do not like to know what other said when i think is better when everybody said their opinion

To continue,listen other opinion of different people make to choice better. Listen different opinion help us to know what other people think about it. For example my friend always ask me how she looks, so she want to know my opinion, and she dont only ask me. She ask different people to know their opinion. In the world are 58% of people who want to know other people opinion and their is 52% of people who do not care about what other people think about them. People want to know what other people think. Because that is how people can help to choice the best one. My opinion is that knowing what other people think help us to know more the other person think.

Finally, let people expres their opinion. If people know opinion of different persons,help us to pick better. For example sometimes i want to buy a pencil but i like two pencil, but i only have money for one. Their is when i need somebody to tell me witch one i should pick. I always tell somebody to tell their opinion. Because their is how people can expres theirself, and tell them that is cute or not. Instagram,instagram is a social media that a use for a lot of time,instagram sometimes help me. Because sometimes when i dont know witch one to pick, i post in my storie, i put .""What shoes i should to pick."", and their is when my frieds vote for what shoes i should pick, and i can make the best desition. I love to know what other people opinion because that help me to know what other people think about me.

In conclusion,my opinion is that every person in the world need to listen other person. Because if people have multiple opinion, people can have the better choose. Whoever sometimes it is okay to make desition for yourself because sometimes is something personal and people dont know the correct answer and maybe they can be wrong.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
8E764A2C7266,"A local workplace that you would like to pursue convince employer include why you like this job .

My First, reason is allowing students to explore the local bakery exploreing the local bakery can help students see what a person dose in the a local bakery. The students can learn new things in a local bakery for example my friend learn new things in the local bakery. This can help students learn better things in the local bakery here is my second reason.

My Next, reason is working at a local pursue bakery working at a local bakery is helpful for me because I can make new friends and talk with others. I can learn new stuff and do better in the local bakery.

for an example I made new friends and talk with others at the local bakery. Here are my other reason of allowing the exmployer a visit .

My Last,

reason is allowing the employer for a visit at the local bakery allowing the employer to come and visit. This would be very helpfull for me because the employer can come see the bakery. And see how the students can also learn what a bakery can do inside. I chose this job becuase it was a creativ job for me . For an example this job help me in learning things and stuff . In closing this is what a local workplace I chose . ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
2F93B934ED27,"Control Our Characters

According to what the British naturalist and politician John Lubbock have been say, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" Our character formed by influences beyond our control.

We should all choose to control our character because that will save us from trouble,

trust our self, and have a lot of relationships with friends.

First, we should all choose to control our character that will help to save many of us from trouble because being in trouble that very bad and many people will not talk or keep in touch with us or have any friends also. For example,

Generic_Name always many students keep saying bad stuff to him to make him fight with them, but he never care about what they say he always go to tell the security about them. He dose not want to be in trouble, that make them very angry because they are in trouble not him. That makes Generic_Name safe, and out from trouble. We have to be strong enough always and find another way to control our character to be in safe said, not being strong by fight and be in trouble. Control our character will make us trust our self.

Second,

we should choose to control our character that will make us trust our self because when we control our character we will trust our self in everything. For example,

Generic_Name works in the hospital hard to make everyone feel better, not sick one time one person was sick about to died, but she dose not cry because of that she control her character and she trust her self, So she give him a medicine and he dose not died he feel very well. Generic_Name never give up she always trust her self and she control her character with everything. We must control our character so we never give up and we can trust our self.

In the other side, some people may argue that choose to control our character will make some people think that we are sick, scared, alone. Thats true because when we choose to control our self a lot many people will think that way. However, we choose to control our character because that will make everyone want to be with us we will have big relationship with everyone. For example, Generic_Name always control her character she also has big relationship with everyone many people want to be her friends they like how she control her character. People are very likely to people who have good character and to people control their character that's why we have to control our character.

Lastly,

We all should choose to control our character to be out from trouble, to trust and believe our self, and to have a lot of friends. The result from when we control our character always we will be away from any trouble. Also, when we control our character we will trust our self in all the stuff and in anything even if it's hard. Therefore, many friends we will have while we control our character, friends do not like to have friends who is always angry dose not know what to do they like the friends who always control their character and who know everything. To control our character is not hard if we need a better life.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
0DF2006FC8F1,"Dear principal, i think that bringing phones to school is ok as long as we don't use them during class time. Me STUDENT_NAME is telling you to please let use the phones during free times because how about if we have an emergence and we need to call our mom or dad and we cant communicate with them. It would be very hard for use because we also have to have our own time to communicate with others in case something bad happens, So im telling you if we can please use our phones in lunch, nutrition or in other free times. We the students have to have the free time to. But we also have to be careful on not be using the phone during class time to. If we do then you can cancel the policy but if we actually do good we can continue with it. You never know, we might even do good in this and we can keep on doing it but if we fail, You can stop it. I'm telling you to just give us a chance to see if it dose work out.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
E2A60C034849,"Some school's use cell phones for education. In Some school's cell phones are not allow. We the students think that cell phones are a good and usefull. Cell phones have internet and we can do a lot of our work with it. A cell phone its like a computer. The students think that we should use cell phones in education.

Cell phones have a lot of apps. The apps are easier to handle in a cell phone that in a computer. We the students already have apps for our cell phones were we can see our grades and school calendar. Also with school apps we can email our teachear. Students think thats one good reason to use or phones with education.

Cellphones are small and they still have it all. Rigth now students are using computer wich it harder because it makes our backpacks heavier, why dont we replacet them for a phone. Its beneficial for us. If we the students could handle a computer, we can handle a phone. Some people think that migth be a good option.

Cell phones have more facility to get into stuff. In cell phones everithing its abvaible, that means we can found a lot of stuff.. Definitions, apss, movies about education ect. To be abvaible to everithing its something beneficial for us. .Sometimes we need to watch and old movie and the teacher dont find it but if we have the cell phones everiyone would watching it separly. Cell phones are a good thing for the education.

Theres people that think that cellphones are a bad thing to the education. They think its not rigth to have a phe out in class. Some people think that cell phones are too avaible. They think they are distractive. They think its not the same think as a computer.

we see the two parts of this, one part its showing that we need phones and they are easier for and the other part its showing that they are a bad option. We

Students think we should have them. School should let us have them in class. Basicly phones and computers are the same thing. We can handle it.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
F9DDE725DB74,"To begin with, it is good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?. In point of view, it is good idea because when students finish their high school in three years, they also can work, and save money to enter college. So it's good for students graduate in three years and obtain their diploma, and start to apply in some college. Also, students can find better jobs with their diploma.

First, it is good idea for students graduate and obtain their diploma because some students need the diploma to enter college. For example, my friend Generic_Name needed her diploma and start to apply in summer to enter at the

Hampton University. Furthermore, students who's want to achieve their diploma in three yaers, they have to work hard. But some students wants to achieve their goals without make any kind of effort.

Second, students can find better jobs with their diploma because if you don't have any diploma you cannot work in a proffessional job where people pay more. For example, my sister Generic_Name have to work after she graduate from from high school, but she need a good job to save money to enter one year later at college and pay her first semester. Instead, some students have to work because they don't have any type of help from their families.

If students have to work is because they want to enter college.

Third, some students cannot finish their high becuase they have to work for maintain themself. For example, my cousin Generic_Name cannot finish his studies because he have to work at 3:00 pm to 10:00 pm so he don't have time to his asignments of high school. Some students can't graduate not because they don't want to, cause they have to pay bills from their homes. Also, they don't have a better job to pay their studies from college and its harder to them to obtain the diploma from high school.

In conclusion, it is good idea for students finish their high school in three years and enter to college. So it's good for students graduate in three years and obtain their diploma. So students can find better jobs with their diploma and pay their studies from college. But, students can't graduate not because they don't want to, cause they have to work and pay bills from their homes. Also, when students have a positive main they can achieve whethever they want, it doesn't matter the situation that you live you can finish your high school and enter college if you work hard. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
28494A144B1A,"Character traits are what define a person. there are what make one person different the another. Although some people believe we choose our own character, nevertheless, our character are influences beyond our control because technology influences our traits and famous people can influences our traits and our parents influences our traits by they expectations.

To begin, video game can influenced our traits. For example, my own experience say

3 year ago I start play video game, when I star play with my friends. We always say that when we grow up we like to do what they are doing because their life look good. Also, we start doing the same things as the game like dancing, and thinking same as the game, and acting like them. Our others friends who do not play the game they tell us, that we are change our traits because we are acting like them too. One day we released that game was influenced our character. Clearly, because we star thinking in the future our life same as the game, and that we can do our future as we see in the game easily.

Furthermore, famous people influenced our traits. To continue with my experiences in things that I was influence, for example, when I was 12 year old. one day I was on YouTube, and I star see some videos about bloggers beauty, where they have a lot of makeup I do not use any makeup at the age, but when I see that they do their makeup, and look so beautiful I start doing my makeup, and think because I

was wearing makeup I look good, one they my mom ask me, why I am wear makeup, if I told her that I do not like makeup, I just say because they do their makeup. Then, now that I am 19 year old, I released that I was doing things that I do not like because they are doing. clearly, this prove me that I was influences for a famous beauty.

Finally, our parents influences our traits by they expectations. I will say something our parents want we do what they want. For example, we want to go out we are friends, and we ask our parents if we can go they say not, because they thing that our friend is a bad person. Also, they want to change our thought saying that bad thing about our friends, and finally they change are though about our friends. This show that, our parents can change our expectations about our friends. Clearly, parents always want we do what they want, and we always want they want because we do not them mad with us.

To concluded, our character are influenced beyond our control because video game can influences are traits and famous people can influences our traits, and our parents influences our traits by they expectations. technology influenced our character in form that we that life be like them and people can influence our change in the form the we do thing only, because we see they are doing then older people want to change our though to what they thing. To conclude, our character traits can be influences in different ways that we never expect that can happen. ",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
8EF3D97E2310,"The term success has a different meaning for everyone, but still it is what everyone wants. No matter what the goal is, in order to approach that goal, and to be successful you need hard work. I believe the majority will agree with this statement, but everyone does not agree, and talk about positive attitude. People miss the importance of positive attitude which is the key for success.

Chances in life comes and goes that some might not even see. All of the hard work has no meaning if there is no pay back for this hard work. Loosing the sight while working hard causes to miss the train, but having positive attitude makes individuals seek for opportunities. If the goal is success, then missing the chance to making it come true must be avoided. When individuals miss the first chance they think there is no more chance and they loose the rest of there positivity. Even in our daily life, when we start of our they in a negative way; the rest of the day follows that bad influence, and makes us miss the good parts of the day.

Having a negative environment affects the individuals the worst way possible, especially if the individual does not have a positive attitude to fight back. Fighting back with a positive attitude is also going to influence others to have a better view, so it does not just affect the individuals success, but others too. When we take a look at the most famous entrepreneurs we see how a great environment they have, and how successful the people around them is, like they are. It is the positive attitude that spreads the influence and makes a better habitat. The positive influence follows it self and creates a better habitat, and a better habitat will cause success.

Reaching to the best of the goal is impossible with out hard work. There has to be a effort to find the right way, but having the negativity is going to close the door for opportunities. However, setting up a positive mind set is the part what individuals misses. Positive attitude is what is going to bring the opportunities, and make the individuals create their own chances. Famous entrepreneurs like Elon Musk would not be the Elon Musk that we know today if he did not had the positive attitude. Elon Musk created a company named ""SpaceX"" for Space craft, and if he gave up on the first failure, and did not had the positive attitude, he would have never reached to his goal, and be successful. He created his own chance to success with positive attitude.

In conclusion, positive attitude has a big influence on success. Every individual can have a different explanation for their goal, and the goal is the positive influence in their life. Trying to make the positive influence in your life with out positive attitude is impossible. Positive attitude is the key to success.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
D03AC4A82463,"do you enjoy peolple that is contantly traying to meke you momethimg else?

Some people believe that is good to meke people change because they might like the person but not the person's personality. I'm not agree, becase if someone loves you they are not going to try to make you change, they knew how you were and even thought knowing your deffects they decide to be with you, and to love you how ever you are, if they try to change you means thet tey do not leve you the way they say, so is better to get away from them.

If someone loves you they are not going to try to make you change, dont let anybody to make you change, because if they really loves you they need to learn to loves you, and your deffects matter what.

They knew how you were and even thoght knowing your deffects they decide to be with you, and to love you no matter what, just be yourself do not let anybody play with your mind, because all people are going to try to make you change and they are going to even start say bad things about you but you know who you really are.

I

f someone ever try to make you change means that they do not really loves you the way they say, so is better to get away from them becase it can be that they can hurt yourself.

However you can change if you want just remind if you change is a big step and it's because you want to change not because people is asking you to change bvecause if they love they are not going to make you change, they are going to treat you good.     ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
66F8D7FB98BE,"I think that several people make there own decision's then other people about there life because"" they might need help on what to do?""for the people that need guidance to know more info.

I belive that the the people that found a way of making there own decision were so confidence that they had to decided on what to do. but if they don't, it would be wise to ask for assistance to make decision with experts so that way they can have in idea of what decison to make. because if they had made there own decision that they had regret that would have been there issue for not making a wise chose. but anyway people who are confidence can make there own choices.

other however the ones that need assistent might not know what to do when they have a decision to make. those people ask for help. they ask for guidance so that they can have more of an idea of what they are going to decide which gives them a more higher opportunity to decide which could led up to a good or bad situation. it all depend's on the person who is determen to decide.

i suggest that both ways all depend on a person because we all have our difffent way's and many can cause a huge impact on people life the more info you know the better you have to understand what path you are taking because new's had spred that people are making wrong decision which led to to be indanger.

some say that making your own decision is your issue while some ask for assistent to know what to do in a situation. which can be good for several people around the world.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
451E8369BB76,"Yes i think the students are benefit because they don't need come to schol just what they have to use is a cumputer. and i think is more better because you can do more thinks in you home you can help you family. and you have time to work and you can study in the same time. and they can make money because after you done with the high schhol if you want to continue in the university. and you have money you can continue. and if you come to school you have time to work. and if you study from you home you have time to study and so more think. Because a lot of people don't came to school because they need money to buy food and pay his rent because they don't take help from his family. For my example i came to school because my family help me but a lot of people from others country came to this country and they don't have family here so they wanna study but they wanna help his family and his county and if a lot of school have the program what you can take class from you home i think is more better because you can do a lot of thinks for example i know a lot of people they wanna study but they need to work so they say they can't study and work in the same time so they have to take one of two option so they have to pick one and they say they wanna work because if they go to school they can't make money and if they work they can buy his food and they can pay the rent for example i have one cousin he was in school and he need just one year to graduate but when he was in schhol his mom said he need to work because she don't wanna pay his rent anymore and he leave the school and he dedicated just to work because he need pay his rent and if school have the program he can work and he can study too that one is to sad because he ned just one more year to graduated and he don't graduated because he need pay his rent tha's want i think is a lot of school have the program they help a lot of guys

Here is one more example a lot of people live in mountains and the bus don't go so they don't have transportaion so they don't come to school that is sad because maybe they wanna study and they can't come. i know people in west virginia. they don. t go school because the school is like 1 hours and they don't have transportation. and if all the school in united state have the program they can help a lot of familys and they cxan open a lot of doors for the people.

Here is another example i have one friend. He come to school just one or two days per week. Because he need to work. Because he said he have to work because he don't have money for buy food and pay rent in the same time that is sad because he said i want to graduated but i can't because i havde to work for pay my rent and buy my thinks. and if schools have the program they can help him to do his gol.

I meet one friend in walmart last week i play for soccer team in Generic_City . and i was with my short that say barsity in the from of the short. and the guy said hey in think i know you and i said where you saw me. and he said in Generic_City and. He ask me if i'm in Generic_City now and i said yes and you and said i'm not in school anymore. and i said why and he said because inmigration took my parents and they send to my country and i'm alone in this country so i need to work for pay a lot of think. and he said i wanna study but i can't because i can't do two thinks in the same time. and said my gol is work with police and i said hey wanna you don't study in the day and work in the night and he said i can't because i have to help my parents in honduras because id i don't send money to then they can buy food.

my mom maybe love if i take class onlines because she work all day. if i take class online and can help her to do thinks in my home because she go to work in the morning at 7 am and she came back at 5 pm and the end she go to the part time and she come back at 11:45 pm and if i take class online i can wok too and i can help her with think in the home and money to pay a rent she is to old.

There are some kids that don't go to school, having the schhol next to thenm, but there is alot of people out here that are thing to go to school or at less take onlne classes but they can't because they have to wotk some of the people even have two jobs.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
959946A3FB03,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive or negative effects on people's lives. Technology allows people to complete many task without any contact with another human. Technology has a negative effects on peoples live's. After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house. People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen.

After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house. Technology restrict's you from getting out of the house and completing task. People really enjoy the fact that they don't have to leave the house or if the need something it will be delivered to their front door. Without you ever leaving the house can really effect your life you start to become lazy different task become harder for you because you don't have technology by your side.

Technology can help alot of people becasue a lot people buy stuff online and don't go to the store which can save time and but people start to get lazy knowing that they can get whatever they want and never have to leave the house. A lot of people have jobs in which they work from home and don't really live the house. I personaly would hate to be stuck in the house all the time i like to go outside and talk to other people and go to the store to get something other than wating for it to arrive at my door.

People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen. Kids get kidnapped because other creepy people who talk to little kids and act like their friendly to the kids. Some people go as far as finding where you live and what school you attended which can be really creepy. One of my friends had a stalker like that which she meet online and thought he has the same age as her and it turned out to be false he was away older then her and had wrong attentions for her i'm really glad that she found out soon who he really was and called the cops.

In conclusion Technology allows people to complete many task without any contact with another human. Technology may have a negative effect on peoples lives or it may not some people say it does not and some say it does. technology is a great tool to have, technology can get in bad hands and turn out really bad. After awhile of using technology and not having any contact with other human you seem to forget how to actually hold a conversation with other human. Technology can help alot of people becasue a lot people buy stuff online and don't go to the store which can save time and but people start to get lazy. People meet other people via online or in online website which can be really scary because you don't know the other person behind the other screen.                                                                            ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
EEB5AAA18E11,"Some people believe that student should be required to take a class in the arts, Or student should take classes such as elective ?

Imagine doing something that makes you happy, An doing something your comfortable at an decide what are your capable of doing in life. People believe that each student should required an electives in school cause people believe that this will help the students find what they want to do, Also this will help them find they skills an get opportunities, And importantly this will helped students in future .

Its really important that students should pick any electives they want to do, Imagine students get an electives they dont want to do. This will have the student feel lazy going to class, An when student feel lazy going to class student mostly skip class. When student skip class students will have a bad grade, An when students get a bad grade they get irritated. And they dont have the motivation so they give up and when students give up they will not receive any credit an students needs enough credit to graduate if a student dont graduate high school the students cant go to colleges. An the student cant have a better job , Also companies would not hire them. people who has no job they could be homeless an its very hard. So this is why it's very important students decide what electives they want to do.

People believe that everyone has their special skills. Students should find they skill taking the electives they really good at cause if a student is good at something they will love to go to class, Also going to class will have student have good grades and would like to learned more things and importantly you will receive an credit. An taking the class they good at will have a lot of benefit an opportunities in life, Cause people who has a lot of skill, Most people would love students to work in their companies. For example if students is good at drama company will hire them as an actress an people will get famous, Also have their own movie an this will makes a lot of money out of it . also not only a student can only have one skill you could have a lot of skill just not one but more, An this will help a student. If a student has a lot of experience an know a lot of things this will definitely help them. This one of the reason that students should find their skills .

Future is very important for the students cause when a students who takes electives and doing the electives they like an love to do students would take this opportunities to have a good future after graduating high school, Also College cause this when their adult life would begin and things will be different. And this why its very important student take their skill so future would not be hard it would be easy for students, It would have a lot of hard an rough times but with the skills they would get through it . Also this is when the student begin their dreams, An student could use the skills for a better future and things would not be hard for them cause students would know what they doing and what is going to happen also most student would find their destiny, An their destination they would love to be at.

But also people may think that student may not required electives cause students its not motivate enough to take it, An students dont really wanna do it, And mostly students will take it as a joke.",3.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
E0BFF1488787,"I disagree with schools having a program with older and youngest students

Many younger students does not know anything about program

Many older students are smartest then the youngest students

Many youngest students are not smarter than the older students

1. One day when i was on elementary school i was in 4th grade and my teacher put me on a program with older people and the older people were smarter than me and i din't knew anything and the older people knew everything i was the only one who dint knew any thing.

2. The other day i was on middle school and i was on a program and i was on 8th grade and i was in a program with youngest students the youngest students werent smartest than the older student and there was a kid who dint knew anything on the program.

3. The last thing when i was i high school i was in 10th grade and i went to a program with young students and i was smarter then younger students and and my teacher was prud of the older students.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
9860EE12D1B3,"In this competitive world people have to be a mastered in many things, but people are used to work in places that they are in comfort. Usually, people don't try to do something new that they are already do. What is the best advise to get growing? Ralph Waldo's statement is one, which motivates to others to explore new areas, and people will not grow, if they do always the same.

To begin, in the society there are many jobs where is necessary to expand in new areas to get improvement like photographers that usually work shooting pictures, but they know how to shot a video also. Photographers can explore new areas like cinematography world or work as a journalist. They know that explore new areas is best way to grow as professional. In addition, people already know that leaving the comfort zone is another way to get a personal growing like student that travels to another country to continue his studies or like a doctor how explores new medicine branches to find a cure for illness. Both have the knowledge that exploring areas that they commonly are no related, will help them to grow. Exploring new areas led everyone to get a growing.

To add, People will not be able to grow, if they don't change in order to grow. Persons that know how to do something very well, such as carpenter or construction, they decide to create their own businesses ,but they are scared to fail. They are afraid to do something new as manage a businesses even if they are mastered on it. Entrepreneurs should to undertake their companies, and they should to invest in new equipment try to grow. if they just keep doing the same without invest, they will not grow as company. In contrast, many people say if someone do always the same, they will be a professional in that area. like a professional sport player because they do always the same. However, even the professional sport player do something different every time, they have to improve their skill. If they just keep doing the same they can't play and be the best player either. This ideology is applied to many different areas where the subject want to be successful.

In conclusion, Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement has the reason, for people is not able to achieve their goal when they do constantly the same. People should explore beyond they are used to do in order to get growing. In many circumstances dare to do new things will gave people a benefit. Changes in live are always good it is just will to do it. People don't have to be mastered in one thing but many of them.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F66B2BAB7E4C,"Do we choose our own behavior or is it controlled by other influences. Well it all has to depend on the type of person you are. For example if you are somebody who gets influenced by other people then you are going to act like those people. And usually those people are bad influences, but if you are somebody that chooses to be who they are then that is really who they are. And mostly it is to be nice to others, and those are some reasons why it can go either way, but for me i personally think you have a choice to be who you desire to be without any influeces.

When you get to be who you want to be life is easier. You are going to be true to yourself and people will have respect for you. And many people all over the world are scared to be themselfs, and would rather get controlled by other people. And because of those type of people they spread that nagative influence off to other people that get controlled easily. But in the end it depends on who you hang around with.

Choosing the way you act is very important not just for you but for your future. Because your future is what matters at the end of the day. And because of that reason is because if you want to find a good job you have to be respectful and kind. But if you didn't have a good attitude then nobody won't hire you. It's reasonable too, because nobody wants a bad attitude person in their jobs.

Many people who have chose their characters have been successful because of it. And cause they have confedenced they can achieve anything they want in the world. And all that just because they went on to be themselfs. Meanwhile those who have been influenced by others have been stuck like that their whole lifes.

Depending on what type of influences they get, because some are good and they get to high places in life.

So at the end of the day as long as you choose something that is good for you and won't take you to bad places you will be great in life. But unfortunally it usually ends in bad places for those who are weak and would rather take influences by others who are in bad situations. And thats why for me it is better to choose to be yourself then to follow others. But if you are somebody that likes the influences then choose people who are good. That is how i see it in my eyes.     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
F2AE464DA15E,"Do you think a good way to success in life you had to fail first?.

In this paper i will argue about, why people should believe fain in life it is so important because if you fail a least in one thing in life it's help you be more confident and be prepared for the real world and also help you that if you want something you had to fight for the.

My mom always tell me "" Be confident i believe in you"". When i was in 1 grade in my country Honduras one teacher tell my mom that i'm not in math the i'm going to fail the grade and i did it. But my mom tell me that and she also tell me if you fail the grade it's no becasue you are not intelligent. It's because it is difficult for you but i know you can do it and i did it the next year i have to take again 1 grade but that year was diffrent and the teacher tell's my mom that it was amazing how good i was in math and the other class too. I'm happy that i fail 1 grade because shows me if you fail one time doesn't mean you had to give up , you had to figth back like i did.

I always said to me you had to fight back never give up in my dreams no matter how difficult is. When i was a kid my dream was the i want to be a lawyer. One time in my school we have to said what we want to be when we grow up and i said i want to be a lawyer. One student tell me how could you be a lawyer you never going to complete that career and said to him you never know no matter how many times i fail. I know i'm going to be a lawyer because if you not fight back for your dreams. That's mean your i said you are failure person and i'm not a failure person. Not allowed other people said you never going to make never.

If you fail one time or more doesn't mean you never going to make is the contrary. In my whole life that it is 18 years old i fail many time but i always i had in mind. I fail i learn a new lesson today beacuse all the fail times i had in my life i take as a lesson to help to prepare for the real world and how it is.

Someone may think i wrong to think like that but they are the wrong ones beacuse no ones is perfect in life everyone make a mistake or fail in something in life

To be a successful person in life you have to take step by step and also no matter how many time you fail keep going. You are gonna make don't allowed other person said what exactly you had to do.

In the future i hope people never give up in their dreams just because they fail one time or more and also show the person's who tell you ""You never gonna make it"". Shows them that you did it all by yourself.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
35CF1B2B1326,"I think, with that changing 4 days of work in a week have disadvantages and some benefits. because people will not have time to live their normal life or do work at home, they will use the same amount of energy and resources and people will not support to work many hours in a day.

In addition, people have already their own routine to work, even thought if some busines try to change work days.

To began,

people will not have time to share with their family, also working 4 day a week for 10 hours will cause problem in your family, children in those time do not have enough responsibility to be home by their self, even thought, people will not have time to do work at home. For example; to clean their house, to go work after school and to coexists their problems or thoughts with the family. And to do other works at the end of the day.

Second, working 10 hours a day they will use the same quantity of energy and resources because is the same sum of hours that all people work, if they work 8 hours a day for 5 day, even that people may use more energy, because the rest of the week people will need energy, as well to work 10 hours a day will use the same amount of resources, to make up all the works that you need to do.

Lastly, people will not support working 10 hours a day, because many people have their routine to work, or some of them have problems working to many hours, another reason why people can not work 10 hours a day is that they have their own routine work, as well student in school will not support to be in class. For example many student gets bored in class juts been 8 hours in school and if we compare there will be a lot if issue with their attendance. another point is many student work to support their self, so in that occation they will not available to work and make money.

To conclude, to work 10 hours a day is to hard for many people and they will try to work less hours in a day, because they can not have time to share with the family, also they can get sick for being working to many hours. even thought on this times some people worked 10 hours a day, but at the end of all that working to much can cause serious problems with your health.        ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
CD7201C66BBC,"Students being able to graduate a year early from high school is excellent choice for any lower clansmen thinking of graduating early in the up coming school year. In the past years lots of high schools have witness a portion of students graduating early due to the students choice in education. Not only does the student have the choice, but gains more responsibility, and thinks about his college future. Every student should have that choice in graduating early since they have every right.

Having the choice to graduate early probably sounds like a pretty good idea, to any lower class men trying to see his options in high school. High school choices are pretty slim but knowing you have that option during your 4 years of high school, means you could take that challenge and overcome the odds from everyone else not taking that choice. A student taking that choice is well aware and willing to take full responsibility on his choices.

Gaining responsibility through out this path, is great for a student to obtain. Obtaining responsibility shows a lot in a character, because having this trait takes you far in life, and shows you don't procrastinate in completing a task. In all Honesty responsibility is a major key in a student looking to graduate early, a reason is because you are getting double the work, taking all core classes, and multiple tests happening throughout the week. Just by having double the education in a single year takes a lot from a student, but having that commitment and responsibility shows, and proves a lot in a hardworking student trying to graduate early.

Working hard and succeeding in graduating early is gonna look good, in a students resume for college. One of the reasons a student could graduate ahead of time, is most likely because they wanna get straight to college. Going to college is probably on every high school students mind right about now, but colleges will automatically notice a change in the students class, and be aware of them graduating ahead of time. Colleges noticing the students activity is a good thing for them, because they notice how the student is ready to take another step in their life, and willing to put a lot of effort in their tuition as well, just by doing this they could take a lot of consideration in allowing the student to attend their college.

Overall graduating early is a great choice for a high school student looking into this option. All students in every school district, should all have that choice for themselves. If the student makes their choice they should take into consideration that they will need to take a lot of responsibility in completing all task through the year for all core classes taken. Lastly to take note that colleges have a good eye for them, and seeing the choices they make and how they are doing through their high school years. ",4.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
27FC2D31B704,"I think its a good idea to ask people for other people opinion because people might have better thought on something, they can have different options for you, and it also can help you later in life.

I think we should ask people for there opinion because they might have a better thought. For example if you wanted to go shopping for cloths and you dont know which one to pick. People will give options of what they think and they can tell you which one they prefer more. There are variety options you can pick from. You can choose your own and ask people if they like it or not. If you dont know which one to pick between two options. You can ask friends, family, or anyone you feel comfuterble with you can get an idea which one you want more. Its always a good thing to ask for people opinion.

Asking for people opinion is good they can have different options for you. You can ask on different flavor of ice cream you can get as many options as you want . People can give you differnt opionions on what they think which ice cream taste better than other ones. different options is always a good thing to use. Its bad sometimes haveing only one option the more options the better. The more options you get you wont have problems with picking things of what you want. It is easier to to pick and and you can have what you want.

All these opinions can help us out later in life. In the future you might need help on which flavor ice cream is good. You can ask someone and they can give you an opinion which one is good. Its good to have opinion some of them you might not like. Everyone dont have the same opinion which is okay everyone can have different opinion on different types of things. over time you might need an opinion on something and you can thing what people have said before or you can ask someone to help you out.

Different opinions and thoughts can help you more in life and you wont have problems with picking things. its good to have different opinions on different things that people give you. All these opinions people give you can help you later in the future and different kinda of opinions. I think it is better choice to ask someone on thier opinions and get an idea of what other people think about different things.                                                ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
A02E1D0BEACF,"Hello, this is Generic_Name and i go to Generic_School. Today ill be taking position on an issue i have been hearing alot about .The issue is should students go to school or study online and take online classes. School provides more social life more teachers, and more classes that you have to go to everyday. When online classes are providing the classes you need to gradute but its online and for free unless you are trying to take extra classes to gradute earlier. It will be all your responsablity.

Students that go to school. They will have to wake up early around 6:30 - 7:00 to catch their bus to go to school because the bell will ring at 7:55. School also provides lunch and breakfast which i think are very good for you. they care about how your nutriton is or if the food is fresh or not. They have vegeteran food for those who are vegeteran and they got chicken and rice which i find pretty healthy. There will be social life going on during school because you will be meeting all these people from different places which i find very intresting to meet other people from different countries. You have to be very responsible on how to talk to people and how to act in public because it can get you in a serious trouble if you dont act straight. You will have 5 minutes to get to each class otherwise you are late!! be on time always. You are also getting so much help from the teachers you are not alone. If your teacher isnt there you have your friends in class they can help you figure out what you are stuck on school starts from 7:55 and it ends at 2:55. School will help you find your college there will bea class for you which is called career center that can assist you and help you find whats best for you and contact them if you decide.

Online or video conferencing (home school) is what people usually call it. If you are homeschooled you get to wake up whenever you want and you can go to bed whenever you want. You can start working along studying and balance your time and see what benifts you in the future. The choice is yours of what you want to eat. You will have more freedom, there will be noone there to bother you if you get bothered easily or like to work quite. I personally know alot of people that care about what others think of them and if they have friends or not or would people judge them because of what their wearing. If you are homeschooled you dont have to worry about that. The course will take you where you need to be its very straight forward , and they will quiz you very often to make sure your on the right path. You can decide when to study or what days that will depend on your schedual if you are working or not. There will be onone pressuring you to do homework or yelling at you if your late to school or class. Students consider taking online classes people judge alot nowdays and if you arent smart enough you will get your feelings hurt and that might cause depression for some people which can affect the student life.

My position on this issue. this issue is very common and i hear alot of students considering taking online classes .I think students should go to school and learn there because their will be all the help they need. They will take care of you not only that you also learn how to deal with people in real life and experience stories that can maybe one day make you laugh or maybe some stories that we all have learned lessons from. for example: lets say you get in a fight with someone and you and the other guy both got in trouble over something silly during your time in high school you will realize that its not worth it fighting people therefore you should take at least 10 seconds to think before you do anything that you might regret in the future. You will have teachers that can tutor you after and before class if you need to they will be on you because that will benift both of you guys. teachers would have very good history of good students and good grades teacher and students will have a good grade that can get them to college. If your taking online school you might fail to organize your time and the year might just go to waste. I say that becasue you will be with your family or working trying to save money for yourself but then you run out of time and your finding it very difficult at this point. i think its a very risky move to do because you will miss out alot of good days and a great atmosipher to be in with all these people around you and the teachers who try to help you success in your life and help you achieve all your goals by going to your dream college.

go to school guys and stay in school.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
070D792C65B7,"One thing I would like to accomplish in the future is to live in a big mansion in California. Because I've never lived in some type of big house, It will show all the hard work that payed off to get the house, and it will also be the first time I go to California

One thing I would like to accomplish in the future is to live in a big mansion in California. Because I've never lived in some type of big house before. Since I've been born I've been living in small places with other little house nearby like town houses or apartments and for me It has me thinking. ""Why am I living in these places like I have some friends who live in houses but I don't?"" But that was me when I was like little but now I know that some parents aren't as lucky as others and they struggle to find nice places to live in but they get what they can get and at least they get somewhere to live in and give their kids what they need and want so for me It's going to be hard finding a job with good paying money but if i get a degree in something I want to do then It would be amazing to do that.

Another reason I would like to live in a big mansion is that It will show how rich I am and It was hard trying to buy a Mansion. Mansions these days cost so much money (of course because they are big in space and some are in private places) you can find mansions in Florida, Texas, Nevada, California, and etc. But mainly I would love to get one in California. California is a big wealthy state with many great known cities and history. It is mostly visited in the summer for its hot temperatures and great attractions. One city I would love to buy my mansion is maybe in Calabasses or Hollywood, There are many cities to get a mansion it just depends on how much it costs and how big it is on the inside and out.

Last reason I would like to live in a big mansion is that it would be my first time going to California. My mom used to live in California, in a small city near Downtown Los Angeles called Generic_City. She moved from Generic_City to California when she was fourteen (which is my age currently) and she went to high school in Generic_City and learned English there and had a job. but then after finishing one year of college she moved to Virginia and had me when she was around twenty-five. But ever since then she has been telling me stories of how it was for her in California and what places she would visit over there like Disneyland, the Hollywood sign, sporting events, and more places. I would like to visit San Francisco with one of it's famous attraction the Golden Gate Bridge or Go down to Venice Beach and enjoy the beautiful ocean and it's hot temperature to cool off.

And those were my three reasons of why I want to live in a big mansion in California because I've never lived in some type of big house with no houses that are connected together, It will show all the hard work that payed off o get the house, and It will be my first time going to California.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
615FAEE4F8EF,"School should not extend the school days more than eight hours. Some people think that spending more time at school would be a good idea because students would have more time to study. Others think that An 8 hours of school time is enough time to study every day. This is an controversial issue and school time should not be too much .This change would affect students and teachers because some students have part time jobs,students would not have enough time to do their daily activities with friends and family,teachers and students would be tired by the the end of the day and they would not do good.

Some students have part time jobs and they take some rest before going to work after school. Some students go to work right away after every school to get out early and do their homework after. By adding two hours a to the school schedule would make students who have job work till late. Even though some students need to work as much time as they can to help their families or pay something they are trying to buy. Some of this students would be also constantly tired of spending too much time at school and then going to work.

Another reason why school days should only be eight hours long and not ten is because students would not have enough time to do their daily activities. Students hang out with family and friends. Some students are part of a sport team and they have to have time to go practice. Even some students help their family to either clean or any other thing that has to be done at home. Some students have to take care of their little siblings after school because their parent have to go shopping or work. Students also need to do what they like and by doing that they would be more active.

Another reason is that teachers and students would be tired by the the end of a ten hours school day and they would not do good. Some students are already tired in the 4th hour of school. Some students do not want to do their work in the last class and some fall sleep even in a eight hours school day. Even teachers would get tired of being teaching and grading papers all day long. When it comes to a history teacher they have to talk a lot in every class and they get tired. By making every school day 10 hours long would put to much pressure to students and teachers that they would be exhausted by the end of the day that they would not be able to pay attention in their work.

School itself it hard sometimes but working and studding is even worst and those who work and study at the same time often need time time to get things done, and by spending too much time in just one thing can affect the other .Every one has personal things and activities to do and some require certain among of time. Studing and teaching requieres focus and creativity but when students and teachers get tired all that is missing.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
8F6DFE02DF75,"Topic:

Influencing others.

Argument:

Influence is a big word. It has a lot of meanings. It has a lot of ways to describe.

Position:

Mi position is negative for the word influence. It gets othes in wrong ways. It is the word that convince othes to do somthing.

For example:

Somebody offer you some beer, wine, or drugs that are bad influence. If a friend say to you, hey come on lets stole that bicicle it's a bad influence. I now some people that they copy the stile life from others that is not right, so that is the bad influence. Infuence is when somebody buys things that are not health, like Mc donal's, red bulls or chips those are bad influence for you.

Conclusion:

In my conclusion I think that influencing others is not good because it to force many people to do several things wrong. It convince many children to go throught bad ways. However, the word influence can be exellent too. It can describes many things that can be good in your work or in your life.                                                      ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
01405C3C569D,"A positive attitude is the key for be successful person in the life make our days happy and interesting, because all do you need to do is be pleasant with yourself and the people around you, if you have a good position a way of thinking or feeling the things around you make your attitude positive.

Example: If you are a worker of costumer service the costumer say bad things about you like you are not a good worker somethings like that, but you don't change your attitude because you know the costumer always have the reason, you never has to change your mind you know your position your attitude has to be positive and continue work with a great attitude.

Maintain positive attitude can help you for a lot reasons. When you see the face from another person and you look his face tired, angry or mad, now you know that person don't have a positive attitude in his life or his environment, show a good face is important because the peoples know if you are ready for star doing something be active, connecting energy and thinking good make your days easy and great.

Although for follow your dreams and your goals in the life you has to know yourself, give respect and receive, your attitude show the person if you are doing good. If you wanna have a good job make good trade,

your attitude give your personality and the peoples approve if you are the best candidate for a good job, if you are willing to have a positive attitude you can make big projects in the future.

Another example about positive attitude, if you are in a interview you need to show your skills and explain clearly good that you can do it, be honest and pleasant with the person that is going to confirm your job, he gonna see if you have the attitude if you are sufficient for have the job.

Clearly all the peoples know the positive attitude is the best way for creating good projects and big things your attitude can help you to make money, good jobs, a good house and a better future. Your attitude share good vibes and make the peoples around you happy the peoples that love you they gonna be happy to, just trying to do greatest things in your life with the best positive attitude.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
BF580042A644,"The city council is debating on having curfews for teenagers, weekdays they have until 10 p. m and on the weekends they have until midnight. This is for the teenagers to be safe and not be out late because something could happen to them if they are out on the streets at night. This rule would be an outstanding one because they can cause less trouble and they can stay out of trouble at the same time. This rule won't interfere with young peoples life, it would keep them safe at home and their parents don't have to worry about them doing anything bad. The teenagers can be talking to their friends, loved ones, and family on their phone or be playing with them on PlayStation or Xbox.

My first reason why I think they should the adopt the curfew rule is because it keeps them at home and keeps them safe. For an example, if your teenager stays home and doesn't go out passed his curfew then he or she won't get hurt or even worse shot by a dangerous person . If the city council adopt the curfew rule they can prevent your son or daughter from getting beat up or getting shot . This rule can prevent anything dangerous happening to your son or daughter, this will keep them inside and they can study, catch up on miscomplete assignments , and do homework. You won't have to worry about them that much because you know they are safe at home and won't try to get you in a serious problem. It's also your job as parents to keep watch out on your son or daughter because they can try sneaking out. The city council can't really do anything about your teenager sneaking out from your house so you are responsible for watching your kid.

My second reason why I think the city council should adopt the curfew rule is to keep your teenager from breaking the law and to keep them from doing horrible things. To demonstrate, If your teenager is not out on the street then he or she can be drawing or painting on paper instead of doing graffiti on building or walls . This could prevent teenagers from getting in trouble and prevent people from cleaning up the teenagers own mess. If you have talent to draw amazing objects then try showing it in school or on your personal items and not on the cities property. I suggest buying a ton of paper or objects that you can paint on instead of doing graffiti on buildings or walls own from the city council. If your teenager is caught doing this , he or she is gonna be in a serious problem and they will have to clean it.

My final reason why I think it's important to have a curfew rule is because this will prevent your teenager from doing illegal things such as drinking or doing drugs. We don't know what our kid could be doing passed curfew so I think we need this curfew so we can make sure they are not doing anything illegal. This keeps our kid safe and also out of trouble because its horrible to be drinking and doing drugs. For an example ,If your teenager was caught doing illegal things and doing it passed curfew , it would be extremely terrible and your teenager would be in a whole lot of trouble. This is why having a curfew and checking on your kids room once in awhile will help you prevent this from happening and also keep your teenager from having a black out, crashing or a overdose. If your teenager has some bad friends, tell your kid to stop talking to them because they might try forcing him or her to do something that they do not want to do. Instead of doing those things , just talk to your loved ones, friends, and family on the phone or play with them on PlayStation or Xbox.

As a result, having a curfew on weekdays and weekends is important because this could prevent anything from happening to your teenager. I do not think they interfere with young peoples life but keep them safe from anything happening to them , keep them from breaking the laws and getting in trouble by the police .My three main reasons from having a curfew were to keep them from doing anything illegal, to keep them from getting hurt or killed,

to keep them from doing graffiti on buildings and walls, and makes the parent communicate with the teenager and see what they are doing .One last important thing is to always communicate with your teenager because they want your help but deep down they won't ask for it , so it's important to check up on them once an awhile and see how they are doing.

This is why I think the city council should adopt the curfew rule . The curfew rule is an outstanding rule and I think more city councils should adopt it as well.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
F89738650EDF,"Self-esteem comes from achievement. My reason for saying this is because you shouldn't be getting praised for a low assignment that they did; then they are not going to grow. My other reason was that teachers are here to help students improve and if the student know they didn't the best they could've and get praised for it; then they're going to think that they don't have to do that much and will have a low self-esteem.

To elaborate more on my first reason for why I say self-esteem comes from achievement is because if you do excellent on a paper and are positively sure you did amazing then you should be getting praised. That shows how much a student can have a high self-esteem for themselves. Even though, the paper probably wasn't easy that person didn't get lazy. They wanted to do better which means that they want to grow and improve not just stay where they are.

I am going to explain my second reason for why self-esteem comes from achievement. This is all about the students and how they improve. Therefore, if a student knows they could've done better on an assignment and get praised for the lazy work that did then they are going out think that they don't need to do that much work anymore. Although, as the teacher; they shouldn't be praising students on lazy work. They should pull them aside and say "" hey this was good but it wasn't you best work; I know you can do better"".

My counterclaim is teachers shouldn't let students get away with lazy work. I say this because sometimes some students might think that the teachers don't pay attention to them or they don't care about their work. Even though, if the student approaches the teacher with a problem then the teacher will remember you and know to check up on you when it comes to your work.

In conclusion, true self-esteem does not come from praise on an effortless assignment. If you praise students on a low assignment then that's the level they are going to stay at because they got praised to be lazy. Which means that the teacher leaves the student not wanting to improve and expand on their writing skills.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",3.5,3.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
95FD6DF25420,"Hi my name is Generic_Name and I am going to talk about energy and resources. The reason why we are talking about energy and resourses is because ,some busineses have adopted a four day work week. They want to because they want to conserve energy and resourses.

Each work week is going to be for 10 hours but in my opinon that is not going to work. I think it is not going to work because, people are barely working 8 hour shift and working 10 hour shifts. It is going to be more painful for people, and they are going to get really tired. In my opinion if they are going to make people work for 10 hours for 4 days, they have to increase the minumim wage and pay a little bit more money.

Their is alot of reason why I do not agree with this new change. The only positive reason I see is getting 3 days off. Another positive reason I see for this change is, if you get payed every 2 weeks, and you worked

4 days and, make 40 hours 1 week and 40 hours another week, it is going to be a good paycheck. Now it depends how much you get payed but im pretty sure if you are going to do 10 hours shifts, they are atleast going to pay $12.00 an hour or they are going to pay you $11.00 dollars in hour. Those would be good reasons to work in a job like that. It depends to if the people have time to work 10 hour shifts for 4 days.

Their are some school that want to have those same rules that some jobs have of 10 hours. I do not think that would work for students, because 10 hours of being in school is really stressing. I know how it feel like to be in school for 8 hours, is it is not fun and it is really stress full. I think that the classes in highschool would be more longer the students would not concentrate .The reason they would not concentrate is because, you would be doing a lot of asighnments and, you would lose intrest in what they are teaching and, you would lose focus. In my opinion I would not like that but I am pretty sure the school would like it because, they would be completing more work and they would be finishing lessons really quick and the students would study more.

There would be another advantage to that because the students would be in school for 10 hours for 4 days a week. They would have 3 days off every week that in my opinon it would propably be friday saturday and sunday. It would sound kind of good since you get 3 days off every week, but at the same time no students want to be in school for 10 hours for 4 days a week ,that sounds stressing and hard .You would propably have more classes, a lot of home work ,and more test, and quizes. It would propably be hard for teachers to do 10 hour shift to because ,they would have to do more planings of lessons because they would propably have to teach lot of classes during the day since the school day is 10 hours.

In my opinion this prompt that I wrote today was really intresting. The topic was really intresting it made me think a lot of what I was going to type in this prompt. The topic was really intresting because it was about what I thought about jobs only working 4 days a week and 10 hour shifts. The other part of the topic was what if school was 4 days and 10 hours. This prompt made me put myself in that position and I did not like it if this would ever happen in real life I would be against it .               ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0
EEB4D170D513,"Albert Einstein said Imagination impacts more than education on people, I kinda disagree with this statement. In life there many things people want to accomplish something in their future life. Like learning a new instrument, to play sports for a team and others. One thing

I would like to do is to stay on top of all my classes for school to be succesful in life. People say its a challenge to stay on top. When I look at it, I say every challenge always has a way to get through it.

The reason why I would like to pass all my classes is because I want to use that as a skill in my life. At the end of college, people always wanted to be big things like presidents, surgeons and other important jobs. In real life people who cared less about that, are just sitting in a cubicle just to answer calls for a living, which is not a bad thing. I dont want my life to end up as those people, I want to make a big impact in our everyday society, like Steve Jobs. He made a big impact in peoples lives by releasing a new iPhone model every year, but he didnt just start a company that fast. He needed to be educated and was the smartest kid in his school, all the way to college, he was a smart and cooperative guy until his passing. Thats why I am planning ahead to stay on top of school and college so I can try to make a great impact for people. Instead of trying to stay awake in a boring office with the meanest boss in the world and with a low salary to one meal per week.

Another reason why I would like to be successful in my classes is because It made a huge impact on my uncle, Generic_Name. Back in my uncles time, my parents and my uncle lived together in a small town house in Generic_City, he was uneducated. My uncle was an outgoing guy but didnt care about his education back in college, he was always on the couch eating Cheerios and watch Tom and Jerry on the T.V. My parents and I started to convince my uncle to start repeating college, but he didnt care, he just wanted fun in his life and not care about anything education related. That all changed when he realized that he had pay rent and that he wasnt educated, so he finally took the opportunity to repeat college, we were happy for him to do it. He scored high scores in all his tests and was awarded a scholarship for Generic_School and graduated with a high masters degree for law and got a job for jr lawyer. Now, he rose up to make the best lawyer in Generic_City and makes 500,000 thousand dollars a year and lives in a mansion with nice cars and to share all his fortune with his family. This story has inspired me that I should stay on task with all my classes and to plan my future career ahead in time.

The final reason why I want be a successful kid in all my academics is because of opportunities, just like my uncle, Generic_Name, He came to the top because of smart he really was in college. Just like my uncle, I want to be like him and to open the door to so many career opportunities in which society has to offer, like Will Smith's movie, The Pursuit Of Happiness which was based on a real story . This talks about some emotional topics about a man named Chris Gardner was not making money and has his son with him to look after. He wasnt able to do his job right by selling bone density scanners and barely enough to pay rent or daycare after his wife left him. He got his life back together by repeating college and moving, but soon he opened the door to so many job opportunities and later in his life became a multi-millionare in 5 weeks. Based of this act, I started to think that anything can be possible as long as you put your mind to it. That way I can open many opportunities in my life.

These are the reasons why I want stay on top in all my academics is because I want to change the world the way people see it. I want people to know my name for all the hard work and impact I did, staying on top of classes accomplishes anything, it can make me into a very important person who makes a lot of money, but in order to complete that task. I would need enough Education to make me successful enough to encounter that career opportunity in my life.            ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
60ED0B48B8F2,"If you alone in the world you can make nothing if you trying to make somehting you can't because somebdoy support to you, you can't associate with the technology and you can dessarollate nothing maybe just you can survive and after then you dead, I think i'm agree with Emerson's Wrote,because when you can make all you want individuality i think you can be better because you dont need help to other person or something,so all your responsabilities is with you,when you need to help to the other person somethimes everithing to be fine and somethimes no,because somethimes your plans about you want to do or about you thinking is not really well like about you imaginate to do,the imagination is other thinks,you can imaginate all you want but in reality all your imagination is not the same because you can imaginated much thinks but in the real life you can't make all your imagination about you want is like imposible doing all your imagination perfect,so my conclusion is we can live alone in the world but you need support to the people too because the same time all the world desarollate,and the same time we destroy the world cause we make much contamination,deforetation, we create much machines ruin the world,change climated. I think the author waldo Emerson wrote he reference about like what you doing alone in one world if you care the world o destroy de world if u can alone or need support the people.",1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
5E3EA4C47C9A,"The author Ralph Waldo Emeson wrote, ''to be yourself in a world that constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment .''

I agree with Emerson statement about individuality because I've actually seen people end up in big problems tryng to pretend for the world. . In the world we live in we can't even hide from the act because its in out tv's and advertisement . If I'm being honest there is no benefit from this whole act of changing for the world in order for them to like you .

My favorite rap artist is Tekashie Sixnine who has recently been on the charts and hot 100 in America for his songs .

The main reason he got all those views and streams was because he was puttting up a front and prenting to being someone else in his lyrics . This artist has even been also been skating on thin ice for awhile . He has also created and posted on the internet videos of him doing crimes which lead to his arrest in november 20 2018.Tekashie is now serving jail time for trying to prove to the world that he was a big time gangster.

My other reason for me to agree with Emerson statement about indivuality was because our lives has changed now that the advertisemnt is telling you change and look a certain way . For example I use instagram every single day and fifthy percent of the time the ads are about weight pills and cool clothes which have gang related logos on it now people buy these clothes and are'nt even part of gang related activity because the market is influence you to buy it . People can easly fall for the trap thats why you should always be yourself no matter what .

Now to my last reason as a human being I've made mistakes and I've learned you always have to be yourself from those mistakes. When you are trying to act a type of way the life choices you will be making and friends you hang around will matter . You can be acting for your friends and end up in jail due to to the way yo were acting to make your friends happy. I think its much better to be yourself and too see that as a accomplishement because we are all now in a tech phase were web presents is a big deal and people go at any risk too achieve that goal . I for one can say that it is hard to not act like anyone becuase I came from Canada to america and I didnt change and it benefiting me because I making better choices .

These are the reason why I agree with the statement author Ralpgh Waldo Emerson made about individuality .I also think that everone thats trying to achieve something good and do something with their lives should aways keep in mind to be there selfs no matter what . ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
8836B8EFCE5A,"I really think that can be really stressed for some students, because there is more pressure for them, because they are taking courses on evenings or summer school, when some of them needs to work or they have to do somenthings at home, but that is a good idea to have 3 years of high school because they are doing just 3 years they can go early to college if they want or another place like NOVA, but on my thought I never will choose to have just 3 years because I feel that can be really stressed for me but I know if want to gradute early nothing is impossible, but if you want to choose just 3 years you have to be positive and had discipline, but there are some students that want to choose this kind of programs and they want to but they are not ready fot this kind of pressure, there is no reason for them to feel bad because there is more chances on the future, they do not have feel pressure because they fail everything happens for a reason.

And my position on this issue is not to choose this kind of programs.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
519A1A92C8C8,"Success consist of going from failure to failure withouth loss of enthusiasm, and I'm agree with this statement, because can do what it wants if try and try, and everything is doing with effort , and than a failure can be for a better oportunity in the future.

Did you heard that failured means success sometime? well effort is the best way that you can reach what you wish. Can do what it wants if try and try, so let me tell you something about a friend that is close to me, and he was in failre to failure, so one time he came to me and he told me his problems, and than he cry and I tell him, ""don't worry everything will be okay"", and than he said - I'm gonna try again this is the second time that I failure, and I will try again until to have what I want, and I tell him that I always will be there for him, because he is my friend and the friend is to be there for each other when it need, and then two years later he told me that he finally has what he was trying to do in the pass and he was very happy and I was happy too. If my friend didn't try he were unhappy, and maybe he were a miserable person, but he were strong and he did it.

do you know ""what you can do with effort"", means? effort is something that it has to be preasent in your life everything is made it with effort, when I was 14 years old I was in my country, I was in 9th grade, and my friends and I was happy for our graduation, but I was acared because we had a final exam and the exam was about my country history, but is not that simple because I had to know a book of 6 parragraph, and some of the parragraph is like 10 sentences each, and I had to tell to the principal the antire book, so and then I had to learn 50 question about my country that it comes in the book too, so I had to take the test writing about this 50 question, but I already took one and I fail, and I was scared about it, but I tell my self you can do it, you have to pass, and I was studying averyday after school at my home, with my friends, and sometimes my counsins help me how to do it, or they help me to learn; they asking me the questions to know if I knew correctly each question and answer, so the day of the test I was a little scared and nervios, because I feel I will forget everything, and finally it was my turn, and I did it right I was so happy with myself because it was hard, I put all my effort in this test and I did it, and my frinds and I graduate at the same time. If I were lazy and not interest in to pass this exam maybe I had to repeat the school year and I were disappointed with my self.

A failure can be for a better opportunity in the future. Now I come with a anecdote of my uncle Generic_Name that already died he was illiterate, and his job was the security in a night club, and that was his job in his entire life, and one day the boss went with new rules for everyone, and his boss tell him his job

-you have to write the number and the name of the people that come in the nightclub every day, and my uncle tell to his boss

-I would like to do that Sr. but I can not read and write I'm illiterate and I can not do what you are asking for my Sr. his boss tell him

-I'm so sorry Generic_Name but if it is like that you can not work anymore here, and my uncle Generic_Name answer,

-but what I'm going to do I can not do anything else this was my job in my entire life. His boss said,

-I'm sorry Generic_Name. And then my uncle left the place he was upset telling to himself what I'm goin to do I need a job, and he remerber that he fix the chairs of the night club, and he said

-I can do that in the town and earn some money just for my food , and he went to his house and find some nail and tools, but that was not anough, and he had some save money and he went to the city to buy what he needs; the way to get to the city was two days in mule and when he come back to the town the next day his neighborhood went to his house and told to my uncle

-you have a hammer that I can borrow,

and my uncle tell him

-Yes! but I can't borrow you my hammer, because I need it I have to work, and his neighborhood said

-Please I can bring you tomorrow in the morning,

and my uncle puzzling said

-Ok!

At the next day his neighborhood tell to my uncle

-where did you buy this hammer because is really good can I give you the money and you can go buy other one for you,

and my uncle said

-well it's okay I'm going tomorrow in the morning,

the other neighborhood knew that he will go to the city to buy some things and they ask if he can bring things to them, and they will pay extra money, and he tell them

- okay no problem I'm come back in two day then he were thinking about how he will earn money doing travels to the city, and buying things for the other people in the town, so he decide that will be his job and than he did it, and earn enough money that he ask to the store but a truck come to drope the merchandise to his house, and like that he were improve his little store in the town than he remerber one of his friend can make tools and like that they fabricate the tools and they find more people to make it too, and little by little he make a a big hardware it was the first hardware in the town; the day to open for the first time his hardware someone ask him to sing in the book and he said

- I would like to sing, but I can not read and write, and the man said

- WHAT! I can not believe that Sr. if you made this factore been illiterate what would you do if you could read and write, and he asnwer maybe I keep my old job and I still were a security of a night club. if my uncle didn't try to find some job for himself he didn't reach all the he had at that time.

Success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, so you never have to forget about the enthusiasm because if you do not motivate yourself you never will get what you want, what you wish, your dreams, and the best way to reach all of this goals is with enthusiasm.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
A764E2DFDDD7,"Should we accomplish more if we are always doing something. People who work's will get us new technology like, car's radio , TV. If people that don't work on something they will not get technology as fast as we can. Technology need to be work on and improve them. Technology that can give job's and give people a way of living. If more people are doing something it will change how we live improve life's and give change around the world. The thing's that change over time are computer, TV and radio. We used these items a day by day base's.

If are to accomplish more if we always doing something like the radio. The radio was one of big step's on time. the people that work on the radio when came out was hard for them to get the right setting. That was the big accomplish for the worker and it was poplar when it came out to the people. In the time radio grow and improve because of people are accomplish more of the work to improve them self. That led us to getting to the first TV it was a big thing doing that time. the people that have the determine's to work on the radio that led us to improve the internment job's it give more a working job's.

The first TV was a big thing it was able give sound unlike the movie that time and ti give people something to see on the screen. That got people to work for them and there determine to get one TV was high. People will work harder to active more of what they what. People that work on TV have a determine to improve what they got. It was first time the elections was on TV that everyone that had a TV could which it see who are they voting for. The people that work more on the TV are determine to get the TV to work and get to people to buy there good's this will lead to computers.

The first computers was made with no sound it was a computers with programming on it thy used it as a basic. the people who what to improve them to have the idea to give more people to buy the the computer. People who work on this give what they what in the computer. At the end we are able to tack test like the sol and more.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
DE41897F9C7E,"Although, some say students should not be commit to a career at a young age because students don't have time to commit to a career at a young age,actwalay students should be commit to a career at a young age because

If you know what you want to do at a young age by the time you get older you will know more then the one who did not commit to a career at a young age and having a career is a good idea it means you don't have to try everything just to find what you will do when you earnt high school

Some say students should not be commit to a career at a young agebecause students don't have time to commit to a career at a young age actwalay student should be commit to a career at a young age.

By the time you enter high school. I know what I want to do when I enter high school and now I'm in high school I can do my best to know more about the career I want.

Some students want to know their career by the time they get out of high school they will have more idea on what to do with their choose of career.

Howevery, people think students should not commit to a career at a young age because they are not yeat at high school, some think it a good idea for students to commit to a career befor entering high school.

In concushon student should commit to a career at a young age because when they get older they will know more about the it.   ",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
4F5775B0B88D,"How do people like spending time outdoors?

A lot of people like going outdoors because it's really fun to be outdoors and hang out with friends and family.

In my opinion the best activity to do when someone goes to a communtiy park is riding bikes.

I think that when people ride bikes they can lose wieght, get in shape, and spend time with family and friends.

To begin, when people ride bikes outside with friends or family.

They have an epic time, when they ride bikes outside they can feel the sun on there back and the breeze going through their hair.

Riding bikes in the summer time and under trees with a lot of shade is awsome.

People enjoy riding bikes because, they spend time whith friends and family.

That is why when someone goes outside to ride a bike they have an awsome time.

Also, when riding bikes outside they can lose wieght and get in shape.

When they go outside to ride a bike their legs make movement.

And when they bend their stomachs to move their legs a little, their stomach also make's some movement.

And all that body movement helps them get into shape, the best way to get in shape when they ride a bike is when it's really hot outside.

Their bodies start sweating, and that helps them lose wieght.

That is why when people ride bikes they get in shape.

The best activity to do when people go outside is ride a bike.

Because when people ride bikes they can lose wieght and get in shape.

They can aslo spend time with family and friends.

A lot of people like going outside to be with the ones they care for.

What do you like to do whey you go outdoors?",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
833489139971,"Former British Minister Winston Churchill once said that 'success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Many people are not perfect and fail, and some think failure is bad. Failure is actually good, because it teaches you what was wrong. Although some people may think that failure does not play a role in success, it should be known that failure dose play a role in success.

One of the reason failure plays a role is that people can learn from their mistake. when people fail they can find out what went wrong instead of giving up, Another reason is failure makes people stronger. A lot of times failure may cause people stress, and stress makes people strong and not give up. Also failure helps people become better people. leaning from there failure.

Although some people think incorrectly that failure do not play a role in success it should be know that it dose play a role in success, because you can lean from your failure, failure makes you stronger, and failure makes you a better person. people should not give up when they fail, they should learn and try again until they succeed.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
7F21F77E9AA3,"Big Responsibility Young Age

In most common societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they ending high school but in some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter school. What is the best? We'll figure out. Is not a easy thing to do, decision the most difficult thing to do in life and even more when your young.

Trying to know what a person want at young age it must be difficult, everybody pretend that you must know what you want at young age when you always have get everything by your parents, grand parents, aunt, uncle or tutor.

You can't know what you want to do in your life even if you haven't live by your self.

I don't think it's a good idea for students to star stressing them just when they have enter to school because school can be hard some times even if it's your first year at high school even if you are smart, so I don't think that could work making a student stressing at young age. Student have to do other stuff not only thinking about careers they want to take, students have to do homework, some students have to help their parents and get a job to help them some students love to do sport. Students also need help and time to know what they want for the rest of their life. Young people have to do it carefully because their future depends on their decisions on the present.

It's hard for a students to decide what they want for they life for instance when I was at 9 grade my parents told me, if you don't know what career you want to take it's fine you have 4 years to decide. When my parents told me this I felt so peaceful and relax because I had time to see what career I

want to take and I had time to get information about careers that were interesting for me. And I could do better at school because I didn't have to keep thinking about careers that I want for my life because I could do that in my free time.

In conclusion if a student it's a really young age let them think what they want not only because it's at young age it's also because they going to pick something that it's for the rest of their life. Not easy for a young boy or girl to know what they going to decide to do for the rest of their life, specifically when they haven't discovered what life is like. The only way that you could decide what career you want being a early age it's with help of God.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.5
C37F09E24836,"In some School's not only do teacher's assist student's but now student's beginning do the same for younger one's at School. Some School's have program's that teacher's allow student's to pair up with younger one's at the Elementary School's. In this program student's do game's read book's and so much more exiting activities. They do this to help out younger students that are just beginning school and are scared and don't know what to do in School or how to react because of their first time being in School. The older student's assist out the younger one's on how to read, comprehend and to get the understanding of how books are read and what they could be used for in their future life, this is the reason older students are so helpful and useful.

Another amazing this program is useful is because for those student's that are home alone and have no older brother's or sister's, this program helps them get a understanding of how it feels having sibling's at home. This program entertains and not only that but also influence's younger student's on how it feels having a sibling at home and the amazing time spend with each other as well. I think this is a wonderful and interesting idea because it interests kids and makes them want to return to School and love School if they are having second thoughts about School, for example if they do not like it and don't want to return, having a buddy might want to change their mind because they can only imagine the fun and exiting time they can have with their buddy!

Teachers's, Principal's and other member's like the School bored did a smart plan of creating this fantastic program of older student's assisting out the younger student's and teaching them a thing or two about certain things. Younger student's look up to the older student's and the older student's are known as role models because they are much more mature and that is why younger ones look up to them. The reason why this program is helpful for both younger and older student's is because this program impacts both younger and older student's, it impacts the younger ones because it teaches them how to read and write and it impacts the older student's because they learn how to assist younger ones and how to communicate with them. This great program will help out student's right now in class and also they will learn how to use these skills in a daily life and maybe on their everyday lifestyle and job's.

When a student or any person assist out another, at the end they will always feel proud about their self's and they will want to keep on helping others in their daily life. That is why they might have this program so student's can get the feeling of how it feels helping out someone and so the younger student's can learn how to read and get the feeling of how it the sensation would feel if they had sibling's at home. They might fight but at the end they will later then respect each other and they will learn how to communicate with each other. School is important because student's learn from their mistakes and then next time the same problems happen to them they will learn from it and make it better then the first time. They learn and learn so when a student is a fully grown adult they know what is expected of them and how to assist other's if needed also they will be more mature and will know how to act. if someone is out their struggling or having a difficulty time doing something, the adult that was ones a students and helped out younger student's will automatically know what to do and how to help the one's that will need help. This is the reason this program is so helpful and I hope they keep having these things for student's in the past and will continue to help them in the future.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
42F8715D04A3,"What would be you'r lesson to elementary students be? If I was asked to share a lesson to elementary it would be not to cheat. That lesson is important because the students could get into big trouble, show what they don't know, and loose their teachers trust.

First, If a student does cheat they could get in big trouble. One, they could get a zero on the test, and a zero on a test will lower the students grade. Second, the student could get sent to the principals' office and could get a call home. The students parents will also be upset. They would be in trouble at home and at school.

Second, If a student cheats on a proficiency test, it shows the teacher that the student doesn't know the material. For example, at the end of Spanish 1 you have to take a proficiency test. If the person you cheated off of doesn't know then, you fail and have to retake Spanish 1 again. For elementary it could be a spelling test. If they fail the spelling test they could also get a bad grade.

Last, the student could loose their teachers trust. The teacher would never let them seat next to a student during a test. Teachers trust is hard to gain back when you loose it. The students teacher will always keep their eye on the student that cheated. Those are the three good reasons why my lesson to the elementary students is important.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
E3E6D43F34B2,"Should our school extend the school day two hours? No, I strongly disagree with extending two hours to school day. By extending two hours of school day, students for sure need to take a rest, take a shower, some students need to do chores, and also focus on their goals after school. If we extend two hours of school day, then students would not be able to focus on their education, because the brain cells need a break and need to refresh itself. Furthermore, if there is 4 days of school and 3 days of no school, then students will forget what they studied 3 days ago.

In Afghanistan, schools adopted a four-day school week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Therefore, we are comparing the grades and attendance of students. With extending two hours of school day, this system had effect students educational life. Students are not showing up to school and they skip school because of the new system. This idea had discrease the number of attendance and the grades of most of the students.

Finally, the regular school days and regular school hours are more beneficial then the new idea of extending two hours of school. If we want to focus and have good attendace, therefore we should not extend the school hours. In conclusion, we should keep the school days and school hours as it is. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.5
B03AB7243AE5,"Millions of kids graduated last year when taking the program for early graduation, this program helps student to only take three years in high school. Most of the parents, students, and the teachers like to see students graduate early in high school, and this programs are mostly in the U.S.A. Student who graduated early will have a lot of opportunity to finish school and have a better life, most summer school lesson can also help students to take less classes at school. It is a good idea for student to take only three classes in high school in order to graduate and go to college, back those days my mom use to tell me a story, about the opportunities we have in we that most people don't really care about. She used to tell me a story about her in high school, how hard it is to graduate, most people can take five to six years in order to graduate and go to college. And most people did- en make it to college, cause they don't have the money to pay and it really hard to find a job in Africa. Student drop out of school just because they don't have the opportunity we have right now to graduate in high school. Most people will say it like this, ""Genius without education is like silver and mine"". People are brave, strong, smart, last learning, and well educated but they just don't use it and decided to let it go. This mostly happened to people who have the opportunity to do the right things but decided to let it go, and my gran mother use to tell me a story. If you ready to help yourself, God will be ready to help you, if you not trying to help yourself, God will not going to help you. All this opportunity we have are all helpful in many ways, taking three years in high school is very help full for most of the students, reasons why graduation early in high school is better than waiting for four years are.

first reason, the three years of high school helps student to graduate early and move on to the next level, helps student to finish school early and have a better life.

Second reason, helps students learn faster and makes it easier for college, it also helps student to take less classes in high school.

the last but not the least, summer school programs can help students understand better and easier than normal classes because, less distraction from other students and having opportunities to ask questions you don't understand.

Student must take this programs very security, so you will be able to graduate early in high school or a small leak can sink a great ship.  ",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
F2B360408003,"Imagine taking advice from two people, which person should you choose? Asking advice from two people is a hard digestion to make, but he will go with his gut feeling and make the right choice. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because he will know which advice to choose. Also he will have better opinions of advice, then bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience.

First, reason is he will know which advice to choose. He will go with his gut feeling and make the right choice. For example, if he asks advice from his best friend and his friend he would go with his best friend's advice because that is his gut feeling. He also knows if it's smart, or not. He knows he has to listen to his heart not his head.

Second, reason is he will have better opinions of advice, than bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience. For instance, if seeking advice from his mom ans his best friend he would choose his mom's advice. His mom has more experience. The older people are also wiser too.

In conclusion, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because the person will know which advice to choose. Also he will have better opinions of advice, then bad ones. If he chooses older person and not younger person, it's because older people have more experience. In the future advice can change your life. It's difficult digestion to make, but when you seek multiple opinions you will choose the better choice.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
C0EAFCE50675,"I agree with Thomas Jefferson about accomplishing myself every time i do something, i think if we always woke hard or at least be with the mentality to work we will always get stuff done without even thinking about it. Most people realize how they can get there work done when they are actually doing something. You can do anything if you really think like Thomas Jefferson, Just like most of the people say '' Work hard to be succeful

'' if you never do nothing you will never finish what you have to do. Just think about how much people wanna be the same thing we wanna be , if you really wanna be succesful you have to work and you will always get stuff done.

Most people dont be active all the time and they take advantage of technology because now days technology can do everything. Nobody have any excuse for no finishing work. we live in a world where if u be smart doing what u suppose to do you will get it ''DONE''. One good example is:The president just think how much work he have to get done to make a country look good,no problems,etc.

It really is wonderful how much work can we finish if we always doing theres no excuse for not doing work Just like i said i think that everybody who work a lot they gonna accomplish more every time they doing something and think how fast they did it just because you are not thinking about how much work you have to get done and never think inactivity also serve a purpose because if u dont do nothing you will not be the person you always think about or goals you have in mind, Every goal or career you wanna do takes time and time goes fast so you have to take advantage of everything and make sure you always doing what you suppose to do and not wasting your time saying i will do it next time because theres no next time. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
782678016796,"Students believe in praising them builds their self esttem,even when the work is not at its full potential. But others say giveb praise for deficient work undermines the learning by lowering standards

Although student get to proud and tend to over do the work, giving the student praise always comes out to be better than what they actually expected to achieve. Giving students praise always makes students feel good. Praising students who fail always has a different outcome the second time they do the task been giving.

Giving the students praise always comes out to be better than what they were expecting;for example,a student who was doing bad before you praised them realized what the purpose of the work was and put all their effort into the work. Therefore, the work being produced was very productive.

Praising a student builds their self esteem by making them feel good about the work that has been done. Which means if they feel very good and proud of the work thats been done the work that will be produce will be very creative and outstanding.

Praising students who produce deficient work encourages them to produce better the next time work is been given to them. Therefore,the student knows that someone is always there to encourage them when needed.

In conclusion,praising students always tend to make them do better. In that case if the students feels good their work will be better.         ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
EAE70CCAFC13,"As a teens, do you think the failure can affect your life in the future? The issue of the failure consists to going from the failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. It is a good idea to have a failure.

The failure can make you better in the future. Alhough,the failure can improve a better ways in life. Becuase,when someone do something that they think are bad they can to make better next time, they want to have a better opportunities in their life's,maybe in their future can have better job .In conclusion, the failure can make a diferrent person to continue with their life and also their dreams. .

The failure can help to be a geat person. Although, the failure can make a different in your life. For example, if you have a failure you don't to do again, a failure can help to be a better person in the future. In conclusion, the failure can help in better ways if they think in opposite becuse sometime we do thing incorrect that if i have a role of failure can give a lesson to do thing in the better.

while some people believe that it is a good idea to have a failure. Other argue that,it is a bad idea to have a failure. Beacuse, all person have worries about failure, if they have a failure they want to be in thir house sad. Although this migh be valid, there are several importan idea to be considered, such as,they can learn about the failure. Although, they don't want to make the same error the same time. For example, if you have a failure you don't want to happend again you want to make better,also they don't want the same problems can afecct in the future. In conclusion,the want to learn about what the happened,they don't the same problems cuase toubles in their future.

The failure can give a lesson to be better in the future. Also,the failure can make people to improve to be a good person. I Think the failure can make people in good ways and also in bad too because when the people have a problems they don't want to learn they maybe want stay in the same position,in good ways can be you can examplain others to do thing better.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
88816FFD8A5C,"Online Learning

Who doesn't want to be left in the house all day using an electronic device with online access? Although students save money and time by taking classes from home. It is not beneficial to learn online because students lose focus of what they are learning and tend to easily get distracted when they're in their house, students can't have a one on one conversation with a teacher nor discuss with classmates, and students could also face technical difficulties when attending online classes from home.

Losing focus has a big impact in learning. For example, my friend Generic_Name sent me a text message last month, right when I started studying for my history mid-term exam. I responded back to Generic_Name's text, and without realizing we kept on messaging past midnight. This shows how easily students get distracted at home with a cellular device and how easy it is to lose focus. The next morning I decided to get to school an hour early and review one on one with my teacher.

Secondly, taking classes online doesn't just mean you don't have a physical teacher or instructor that you can question lively, but also means that it will be challenging to find answers to your questions. I remember in my sophomore year a kid in our econ class named Generic_Name was really sick for a while so he had ended up taking classes online. Generic_Name was a straight A student, always was first to answer the teachers questions and he also used to ask questions. Thankfully Generic_Name healed towards the end of the year and I asked him if he benefited and if he recommends attending classes from home. The straight A student Generic_Name said it was a real challenge to take the class online and he finished the class a month after he should have with a B- average. Generic_Name had also said that one of the most difficult parts about attending a class online was his laptop not functioning at all times, and not having a teacher you can talk and converse with one on one.

Finally, using your personal computer and internet connection can always be an issue. You can't always depend on your computer, not just the computers but even people aren't perfect. Another main problem Generic_Name had when attending classes online was his laptop and network connection. Generic_Name explained that he always faced technical difficulties. When his laptop wasn't functioning right, the only thing he could do was to stop the lesson and wait for his dad to get the laptop repaired, which took time. Each month, either his laptop or internet connection would not cooperate, so he finished the class a month later than everyone.

In conclusion, Everyone would like to save money and time by taking classes from home. But getting distracted, not asking your teacher questions when you need to, and wasting money on laptop repair is not worth it at all. Learning from a far distance could also be an option but when asking if it is beneficial, we can say that it is not by looking at the listed reasoning.    ",4.0,5.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,5.0
8DA2034EC1C8,"I will agree with this topic I thing that can you be yourself is something can you be on our person and you most constantly our personality so you can be greafull with something you do in your life to be nice person in the future you have to respect to be good person.

First, I thing that be yourself is something can you do in person because if you don't do that so you cannot be good person in your life. However, you most have nice personality and good respect to someone be yourself and if someone don't have affect so that person is not have good personality.

Another reason. We can do the people don't do like have good and respect to someone you have to be most confidential in yourself because you most be great person to another people in the community that mean you can have make sure people is good with that to be yourself.

Next. People can do anything to constantly to another people so that's why we need to have most confidential to make sure we need to be kind because that we need yourself to be cleanly and most respectfull and generous be to good person in the future.

Finally. Be yourself is something that's why people in the community don't respect because if yourself have to be accomplishment that's mean the you have something error. So, we need to have most confidential and generous in yourself because you have be sure the yourself nobody to compare to someone else so because you are not good person.

In conclusion. This is my reason why you have be yourself because you most have constantly our personality so you can be greafull with something you do in your life to be nice person in the future you have to respect to be good person.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
57A6B1103088,"Classes Online At Home

Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Some people think it is good idea to take classes online. They say they have more time to do they homework. Some people think that take classes online is more easy than going to school. But I think that is more difficult because nobody explain you the thing. If people take classes online they will be not learning nothing. In my opinion it's not good idea because people need help from teachers, some people like to come to school, and they like to distract at school.

Some people like to do they work by they self, but others people need help from teachers. For example my sister always stay after school for help from teachers. She said that they help her with the things she do not know about her classes. She said that she learn too much about her teachers, and she like to come to school because the teachers explain the work. For example when she fail a test she stay after school with the teacher, they review about the test, and she learn more. The teachers find the way to help students after school. The teachers have others things to do but they don't care because they want the students to pass their classes.

Some students like to come to school because they make friends and have fun. For example my brother Generic_Name like to play sports at school. He said that play at school it's fun because he talk with other people. School it's important because we have to know about other people and learn more about what is hapen at school. People have the opportunity to come to school everyday and learn. However, In my opinion is important to come to school because when you graduate you going to be happy with your diploma.

Others might say that classes online is good because they like to work lonely. The school distract people from their houses. Some people need distract and also need socialism with friends. At school is the place that people like and feel safe. For example my friend say that she get distract in school she play a sport, or do a activity with others friends. Also the best way to get distract is to speak with adults people that know more about life. Also distract is doing your homework and listen to music.

In conclution, the teachers help students and they explain the things that the students do not know and online they have to do by they self. Come to school is the best way to learn what you want with your life and want you want to became in your future. School have many distract like games, books that you can read and take home. I think students should come to school and not take classes online. The teachers are the best because they help to much the students. Also they are good persons because explain when you don't know nothing. School is important in life because you need a good education and go to college to have a good work in your future.                               ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
25130AAA9552,"Do you think that students are allow to visit workplace. If companies allow students the would be expert at there job if the visit the workplace the would know where the think are and if you are the employer you would be firmer with the new worker at the job.

I would like to work at a companies because there you can work with more than one worker and have your owed offiest and you can be doing work with you worker and get help if you need help from your workers and If you allow me to visit it can be change in your companies.

Allow students to visit can help your partnerships with schools and students minet work at your companies or organizations companies can get a lot of help from students if the allow them to visit some companies need a good idea if you lant students visit the can give some good ideas for your companies and you organizations.

Why I chose working for a companies is because I like to talk with other workers and have fun while I am in work and I like working with others so this the best job and the best chose for my companies to chose me.

student like to be with there friends at work so this is the best job for the student that like to be with the friends at work and have fun if you have a group of friends this minet be the best job for all of you.

Local workplace is for you if you don't have group of friends

I chose this job for this reies. Companies should allow students to visit the companies or the job you with to work for all the jobs sould allow students to visit it. but some of the job are dgerast.

I need to pass",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
D2C7BE42DEF6,"Do you think it is a good idea for students to commit to to a career at a young age?

You can think about you own opnion , and get in your own word your conclusions and read the 2 reason and one example, ideas and one view the prompt follow the anwers in the same tittle.

2 Reason.

Good and bad.

1..Good reason...

I thing some students need to commit to a career at a young age because the young age, see the world in different forms, when the olders people dont see anymore becase, were see different because if somethink gift stop i get stop but the young students is different.

2..Bad reason..

I think is bad too because you young you see the world in different around you but is good too beecuase you can think the everythink impossible for olders;. is any stop for your show that you get a opportunities but the reality is different.

Example.

If you go to High School if you here in 10 grade but you get 17 years old, and you get a jod because you have a single mother if the work of you momm its imposible for pay everythig what you need for survive. you stop too go of follow you career and you said i dont due anymore, why because you see the real what is happening and you need something else, but when you think and young world you said i can help my mother and I also too I can finish my career too because you see if you want or need something you can get..

Ideas.

Young age Students can get more Imagine.

Can think that everything is possible.

Can get more opportunities for the future.

Some true reasong that you can see example.

The young age student is the future the tomorrow conclusion..

Anything can stop you, if you are student young age because is not matter in you age but and you think you can due and you show how you are ?you can due eveythink nothing is impossible because you can get stop in you career or you goals only if you permit this in you future or now everithing is depend you, and the young age is the future of tomorrow is something that i can said is true.

View the Prompt.

Do you see the all conclusion that people can get in the hands, but olders that is not mean that you feel ready for what you whant that is mean, you feel ready and you what is happenig and you now can said when you need the stop and get you own conclucion the you... I see one video that now the young age student that olders said not because you young you dont born for this or for stupid reason now that young age student have money and power and the society or margen that humant create.. The reasong why? is because they never forgive whent style young age what people want and need for they futures.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,1.5
4FFF2AD2EAE8,"Have you ever had a subject that you liked or you know it so well? If I

had a chance to talk to a elementary school, I will teach them about English. The reason why I would chose English because you will need to know it throughout you whole life, you need to know how to use correct grammar, and its easy to learn. English is fun and easy to use whenever you need it.

First, If you live in

America you will need to know the basic language and thats English, you will use English throughout your whole life. In school you will start learning English in preschool and it goes throughout your whole life. When people come from other places that are not in America some people have trouble speaking English because they have not learned about it. So if you have not learned it when you were young it going to really hard for you to understand. When you get older and you have a job you will need to talk to people and you will need to know how to write and type. Even though if you dont have a job you will still need to learn how to speak English. When you need to do important work for the government or tax work, you need to sign and write you information. In real life if theres an emergencies and you well need to talk to someone you will need to learn how to speak English. Finally, English will be with you fro your whole life and it helpful if you know how to speak it.

Second, one of the biggest thing you will need to know in life is how to write in English. In life there are going to so much times where you need to write you name and the date. When you get older you will need to learn how to write your address and make sure that grammar is correct like commas, period, and spelling arrows. Also, will need it when your in school you well need it everyday by writing your name to writing a whole essay and it needs to not have any grammar problems. You will also need when you have a job and if you become a teacher you will need to learn the more detail information. When there is important information that you will need to sign your address, you will need to add commas and that involves you learning English. Finally, this is the reason why its important to learn English because you will need to know the grammar to it.

Third, English is the easiest to learn because if you get how to write you will know it for your whole life. If you learn how to use commas and other things then you will learn it for your whole life. There is three things that you will need for English and it how to speak, or write, and grammar. You will need those things for essay projects and more. It is easy to learn because you are using it for your whole life over and over and when you do things over and over and it gets stuck in your head. English is also fun because when you get something it makes you feel good. You might not know but you are using everyday even if there is now school you are texting or writing a letter. This is another reasons why I would like yo teach a class about English because it easy and at the same time its fun.

Last, these are all the reasons what I will teach a elementary school about English because your whole life depends on you speaking English, you will need to learn how to write in English, and it easy an easy subject to learn. First, speaking English is not really hard and it will become really useful. Learning how to speak English your life will move slowly because you dont have to worry about someone else talking for you your whole life. Second, you would even know that your using English but you are because you are always typing or writing and you will need to learn English to be able to do that. Last, the easiest subject to learn is English because when you get it you will always use it. English is and amazing way to learn how to speak and it can be fun.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
56C4259AA5C2,"Is always good to try new ideas, I disagree with Emerson's statement. Nobody can tell you if you can do something or if you can't, the unique that can stop you is yourself. Learning new thinks help us to recreate our minds, help us to make new projects in life or work, help us to create new ideas and most of the time we can have fun. Also try to do something more besides you career will help you to have more options of work and more possibility to have a better economic situation.

In fact, it will help you to be responsible in all the staff that you do daily, in your home, in your job, in the school, with you friends, etc. It will prepare you for what is coming in the future and it will help you get mature mentally.

However, take two or more careers at the same time can harm you, and make harder you progress in your main career. For example: I got a friend his name is Generic_Name, he's taking film producer career, he needs to take those classes for almost three more years. In addittion, he started to do photography career like two months ago. He really like both careers, and Generic_Name think that if he take both careers at the same time it would be easy in the future for get a better work and make more money. But he realize that it will be really hard to do both careers at the same time, he began to feel the stress and the pressure that he will no do it really good on both careers. He realize that it was really complicated and that he was losting his time and his money on something that it wouldn't end really good.

Then my recommendation was to finish first film producer career because it was the career that he really wants to finish first, it was his dream to be a film producer and make some movies, we always talked about this. So I said first you need to finish film producer career and after that, it will be better to take photography career like second choice. Anyways, Generic_Name was really frustrated because he thought that he will do it really well, but his mistake was that he didn't organize his time and his life; that's what happen with most of the people that think that do more than one career is impossible, and is not that, is just that you need to organize yourself and your time. After that Generic_Name understood that do easch career at the time it would be better and he decided to start with film producer first and add Photography career after two more years.

In Conclusion, take two different careers or masters are not a problem, you just need to organize your life and check what is the priority for you, it doesn't matter how long you take, in a future you will see all the benefits that you are going to have, how you grow up and how you can be an example for other people that think ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have alredy mastered, you will never grow up"", if you try to do something beyond what yopu have already mastered it probably being easier, but that doesn't mean that if you do another career you will not be a successful person. Finally you just need to demostrate that you effort and you sacrifice is going to be for something better in your life.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A50D4A87B19D,"I agree with this statement because people can learn from mistakes lets say that I got a bad grade on my quiz and my teacher let me retake the quiz and I do well so I learn what to do better on my quiz by studying and doing my work , and no one is perfect so we do a lot of mistake but we can learn from them, try not to make the same mistake that people do around the world have made because you made a mistake dose not mean that you have failed but you can still keep going and that, at the same time I kinda disagree with it at the same time because some time you don't even now what to do at the same time they will rejected people if peopel fail there quiz so some time they will reject people from what they did so I am kinda at the middle part because sometimes you can win and lose at the same time.

That there are better thinkings people can do you best lets say that I lost against this guy on a game really can't be mad at the same time because you to show respect not get mad at the same time so at the same time you got now more about the other person people.                                                                                         ",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
EA37D9C12C91,"life is to much fun and joy and happines we just need to know how to organize it to make it easer, so we can be better as we can.

I do agree with Emirson's statement because before we do something we have to finish what we have in our hand, so we can go to next step, like we can't go to next flore without going into stairs.

to be better person as you can you have to be orzanize your stuff, so you can make it perfect because you have enough time to do what you got in your hand and before you start your day you should know what to do before you go out from bed.

without organize you will see everything hard and impossible to finish, like in school when you have all work from all other classes and you see them all facing your eyes, you will do not doing any homework.

To make life easer with happines you better organize it and make your life better as you can, or you will never grow up.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
BF01FFEF8CB3,"When you ask for advice, you ask multiple people right? I do. One of the reasons why seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because when you ask more than one people for advice, they mostly give you different ideas and the more ideas you get from people the easier it feels to make that choice. Another reason why seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is that when you ask different people for advice they would give you their own opinions about that choice. For example, if you ask your friend for advice for a choice you are going to make, that friend might tell you something positive about it, in the other hand, if you ask another friend for advice for a choice they might tell you something bad about it which will be way different than what your other friend said. The third reason why I think seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because if one person told you a negative advise and the other person told you a positive advise, you could pick which one you think is helpful. The fourth reason why I think seeking multiple options can help you make a better choice is because if you ask a friend for advice they can tell you their personal thoughts about that choice and if you ask another person they might give you their personal thoughts about it. For example, if you ask a friend to tell you if you should do your homework or not that friend might say ""No dont do your homework and lets hang out"" ,in the other hand, if you ask your other friend if you should do your homework or not he might say ""Yes do your homework because if you dont you might get a bad grade"", and then you would have to pick which one is better for you. To conclude, if you realy need advice, you should ask multiple people so then you could get more ideas.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
54099C3AE7CE,"My Talent

Imagine,

having an amazing talent or skill but no one knows about it. Some people might say that hiding your talent is wrong but I think that it helps me to focus more and to develop it better. Singing is my talent , I love singing

I develop it by practicing and I use it by writing my own songs .

First of all , I love singing , my Talent, which i develop by practicing.

For example , I am always looking videos up to develop my voice and practice but sometimes I practice on my own.

The more I practice the easier is going to be for me to sing without any help, For me developing my talent is really important because my talent is my dream .

Another example is that I go to singing lessons to practice and develop my voice , sometimes they give you some notes that you can use to practice at home , with the notes they give you, your voice is eventually going to sound clear focus and mature.

Furthermore, I use my talent by writing my own songs , when I my own songs the writing will give me an extra writing skill and most of the time some old memories come back.

For instance , I usually write about my old memories , old feelings or the way i am feeling at the moment. Another instance , writing my own songs will give me an extra writing skill.

By writing all the time you learn new techniques , new ways of writing or new lyrics.

In closing , i use my talent by writing songs and that gives me extra writing skills , i develop my talent by looking up videos and by going to singing lessons . Also, my talent is my dream so i usually put a lot of effort on it .",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
940441D4CF9C,"Someone the has share wisdom, and experience to me is my friend Generic_Name he has stage 2 cancer and he been fighting all his live he is someone I look up for as a super human he says that everything is fine and he just wants to enjoy his life he is an awesome friend funny he is everything that a friend could have he knows the real meaning of struggle he suffers daily from his deadly cancer but he is always happy We play mostly every day Me and One of my friends from school Generic_Name we play video games with Generic_Name and he destroy us. He is always happy and smiling he shows wisdom and makes other around him happy. My other person the shares wisdom and experience is my grandma.

She has share a lot of her experience of cooking I learn something new from her cooking ability she is a bit old but it does't stop her she has a lot of energy to make food for her family I learn from by seeing her cook an egg or make chicken I see her, and learn from her experience.

When we go to the beach my grandma always takes food so she wakes up early and starts cooking.

From the experience from my grandma I learn how to use spices and cuts of meats in a dish,

Also learn the amount of vegetables or spices that some dishes have my grandma been cooking for almost all her life she knows what taste good and what taste bad.

She teaches me how to cook some basic but delicious plates.

I think Learning from the experience of others is better because they been alive longer and know a lot about the topic like cooking, playing a sport, Driving, swimming or teaching they study or practice a lot that they became masters at it. They also been a live longer and knows how it works. Like my grandma she is good at cooking so I press attention to her cooking and see what new things I learn. An Example is when you are a teenager you want to buy the best of the best pair of shoes to show your friends that you got something that they done But if your parents say to not buy them and to save the money instead to buy something better and more special later in life like a car there is were we should press attention to what they say about spending money because they are older there brain is fully developed and they know what to save for because they are older and have been here longer and know how to use money.

Thats why I listed to what the older grandpas and grandmas have to say when I do something Bad or incorrect because they pass that and know how it was and they want us to Be susses full in our on life and they share with us wisdom and experience and thats Important because they we can learn from them.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
E733508EEB84,"I think we can't compare between businesses and school because these two themes are different in how they work.

To fallow this model of conserve energy and resources we have to know the reason to adopt if this model can benefit or not the school , following this model the school can confront many problems also can have many benefits but there are many reasons why the school have to follow this model and why school don't have to follow,

First,

we will talk about the disadvantages, extending two hours to the school days will be weary for the students, students will gonna be tired in the classroom and that's not benefit the students, if having eight hours in a regular week students feel tired, so adding two hours to the class days will be disastrous to the students.

Students, teachers would be affect by this changes the reason why can be affect is because they will not have time to pass with their families or things that they need to do after school.

Many students from school works to help their families or because they are living alone and they need to work to provide their personal things,

so they will not have time and that's will be a reason why they can left the school.

Students from the sports teams, club members will be affect because most of their activities are after school,so if the school adopt the new model that is adding two hours to the regular calender all they can be affected because of time.

Teachers also can be affect because they have personal life they need to grade the students work and in this new calender they can't do all.

People who works in schools will be affected because they will have one day off of their regular week.

Parents and Students will not feel comfortable they can be disagree with this change and this can cause conflict with the school principle and this can bring many other conflicts follow this model can bring many changes where the students can be benefits by this change of the new calender, also teacher people who works in school can be benefit.

One reason can be the four days of school that means the students will have three days off.

Students can have more time to do the homework because most students work during the weekend and they don't have time to do the homework so they will have an extra day to do all the things that they need to do.

students can learn more and this can be a reason to change the calender, adding two hours to the schedule will help the students because they will have more time to learn.

Also teachers can be benefit because also they have to evaluate the students and they have just the weekend to do that and that is short time , so they will have one day to grade and do all that they need to do.

all the the people are benefit because they have time to pass with their families or do whatever that they need to do, a lot of students work so they can work in this extra day.

In conclusion extending the school days and the four days of school week have many benefits and many disadvantages . As we can see there many things that can benefit the school but also there are many disadvantages .

I think the school have to be stay with the same calender, actually the schedule works great so I think there is no reason why we have to change. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
9715AAF5B952,"Have you thought about your first impression of someone and did it change or not? because our first impression are possible to change when you are making new friends at a new school and when you go to an interview for job.

First, first impression are possible to change when you are making new friends at new school because people can look at you by the way you are quite, shy, and serious. But once they start to get to know you they start realizing that you are talkative, loud, and fun to hangout with. Their first impression of you starts to change. For example, when I met Generic_Name I thought she was ignorant, rude, and selfish but when I started to hangout with her I noticed that she was a sweet and caring girl. And we became really good friends even my first impression of her from the beginning changed.

Second, first impression are possible to change when you go to an interview at work because when you arrive at the interview it may seem that don't have the courage to work by the way you act. Meanwhile those impressions start to change because they notice that you actually want to work and you want to put an effort on the job. For example, When I went to an interview for a job the manager thought that I didn't actually wanted to work and that I wouldn't take it serious just by the way I look. Later on he realized that I actually wanted the job even that I would take it serious. In other hand some people think that by the way I talk or my face impression, people think that I won't get the job because I would not take it serious but they are wrong because once they start to get to know me. They start realizing that I actually want the job.

In conclusion, first impression are actually possible to change when people are making new friends at school and when you get an interview for job because we need to get to know each other better, instead of letting our first impressions be right. So don't judge a book by it's cover!",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
E69E62149A87,"I say we all choose are own characteristic traits because everyone has a option. For example: The British naturalist John Lubbock was sophisticated person as one his characteristics traits therefore he had the right to write and read when other didnt have the choice. When John Lubbock choose to become an politician , but also a naturalist which he chose to become one. When John Lubbock wrote this prompt he took action to write it instead of be influence by others and becoming the same as them. Because if all politician were the same and influence by each other every time they would all be the same and wouldnt have made their mark. Back then I havent known a lot of British politicians that were naturalist as John Lubbock but, until now because he made his mark. People should have to make their own choices anyways because you cant work as a politician and always agree with what people say and be influence by it you have to make your own choices. In between that John Lubbock shows he's made his own choices about this and you as the reader to think about it also and makes a choice. When it come to talking about what characteristic traits we have its based on the person who decided to become whoever they want to become and control their out come in life. In conclusion the way were based on the way we act or show who we are, for are traits ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
04491B61A791,"I went to visit the manager of the Amazon company. I was saw that the company have most production, and would like to work here. The part that i would like to work in this company is because, my friends and my sister work in Amazon. Some people say that is so hard work here, but is one challenge that i want to take.

The Amazon company is a big conmpany that lots people work and another people would like to work too.

If i can have this job i would like to learn in the area of box empacking. I want to work because, i have dreams in my life and things that i would like to be.

If you like that i take the first week for learn more about the job, i can do. Also i was investigated that the company don't paid the first week, but is not the problem for me, because the thing is that i want to have a job in this company. I want to go to the college in the afternoon and work in the morning, this is to be good opportunity for me and my parents. I need to need to work for help my parents with my expenses of the university, and the things that i need to buy. In the university i need much clothes and shoes and anothers things that i need to buy, is for this that i want to have my own job.

If the manager give me this job i have lots opportunities in my life that i can to be, but the first if i can help my parents and my studies, my families that i have in my country Generic_City, i can help them more.

The people that have underdeveloped have majority the opportunities in the life and in the own dreams. Is for this that when we can do help the people that need, we need to do. I know that is so complicated to learn the job that i want to do, but all people can learn and try every day. Because the necessity is big when you don't have nobody that can help you when you need something. When you work is more easy for you can buy the that you need and another things that you want to do. Some days that i have problems in my life is so hard not can have money and people that i can help me, but if i can get job is more easy can do my all things that i need. So if i can take this job in the company i would like to buy my own car too. For that my father and mother do not have buy everthing that i want, and not have that use my father cars. I can do hair, so i was working in the beauty Generic_Name, but i was had some problems with the one lady that wanted that i do her hair and i resigned my post. Because my boss everyday when the people came to the Salon, she said you sit down and don't do nothing. So i don't was make money, and my minimum charge was only $150 dollar all weekend, and i was help my parents to pay the rent. If i wanted something i can't buy. But all things that i passed was experience from my life that help me everyday i can follow the that my parents told me.

I want to live one good experience in my life with one good job that can help me to be in calm with my life. Can live everyday in happy, peace etc. I promisse learn everyday that i can do my work.

I want this job, is my challenge now and one of my dreams, so you know if you can help now that i want your help with this new job.

I am very interested with this job and this company. This company is the dreams of lots students and people that want to work, and everyday i heard when they said i want to work in Amazon Company and also they love buy something online. And i love too... Is my favorite shop online. I buy my clothes and shoes in Amazon. I think is why i would like to work in Amazon, because i love. I love the big company that is, and the big team that they have.

With the money that i can make everyday with the hours that i can do every weeks and i can do some things in my life that i can help me everyday, and i would like to do top quality hours the all weekend too. Because if i work more i make more money too, so is the what i need now in my life, make more money for my university and help my family. This is one of my good opportunity that i have now, and i foccused in this i can do it.

During the time when i was live in Generic_City, i can was learn i little be of can empacking in the Bodega and anothers store that my father had, But when i hearn about this opportunity that you and your big company that you work to i was think that is my big opportunity to work here, and can do what i want.

But most can learn all things that you do.

I know that i need to know what i need to do, but if can practice for one or two weeks and can learn more and you can give one better position in the company. This to be better for me and my life. So i want this work now that i graduated for my High school and when i go to the university can help me with my studies and all things that i need.

Also i forget told you, that this all thing that i want now in my life is because, when my brother died i only stay living with my parents and they sometimes can help when i need something. The majority the time my brother was the only people that help when i need something. This is one the thing that affect in my life now that i only have my parents, and i know that i told you much about my life, but you know that now i need this job more than never.

I want to be the only girl that my parents have can help them, and that they are my example to my street.

My parents are my inspiration to i can have a good job that i can help them and i to be how the person that help in my house. In my country my father always told me; Generic_Name you need to be big in the life, because your are my only child that i have now and you need to learn about the work and things that we can hace in the street.

So this is the only that i can do, so you have de last word that you can thing. I am here, you know if i work with you. thanks.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
676A161C4CEE,"Can a possitive attitude be the key to success in life or should we live the way we believe is better?

Daily we live the way we want to. But, sometimes we don't consider the important things that can make us success in life. Attitude can be one of those facts that can make us success. There are some specific reasons about the importance of attitude and why we should consider this or not a fact to success in life.

The importance of attitude is a fact to success in life. As we know, we need a possitive attitude to get some things in life. For example, in a job to get better opportunities we need a possitive attitude to develop our skills.

To live a healthy life. For example, if we have a possitive attitude we will avoid dangerous sickness.

Easies way to live. For example, being relaxed is a result of having a possitive attitude.

In conclusion, a possitive attitude is the key of success. It teach us the easies way to live successfully in life. In my opinion, i agree with the statement that a possitive attitude is the key of success.                            ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
2286BCFF86EB,"Generic_Name was sitting in the cafeteria listening to music refusing to touch her plate of food, why was she like that?

Well, she was worried that everyone had their specific career picked out before going to high school and she was the only one that didn't. Students are not expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because students will feel pressured at a young age and students will change their career options as they take different courses.

First, students are not expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because they will feel pressured at a young age. For example, my friend Generic_Name wanted to become an astronomer but her parents wanted her to be an engineer, she felt pressured and didn't know what courses to take. During class time Generic_Name's teacher gave everyone in the class a paper to write the possible classes they wanted to take their first year of high school, but unfortunately Generic_Name didn't know what classes to take. While Generic_Name was still thinking her teacher approached to her and told her that both science and math courses connected to the careers she was debating to become, she also told her that after taking those classes she was gonna be able to pick the class she favored the most and go for that one. Some people believe that committing to a career at a young age will help students develop and make them smarter but they are incorrect because committing at a young age will cause students to have a lot of stress and give them less opportunities to join other classes.

Second, students are not expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because students will change their career options as they take different courses. For example, Generic_Name was looking forward to become a professional soccer player but he knew he had a 20% chance of becoming one. One day during class time Generic_Name started to think about a serious career that he can actually accomplish and put extra time and work. He decided to become a history teacher; He enjoyed learning history so much that he thought about becoming the one to teach others history as well. Generic_Name was so pleased with his choice that he payed close attention on everything Generic_Name said and never hesitated to raise his hand and ask for more questions. Generic_Name took all the history classes he needed to take, he also joined debate class and a public speaking class therefore he would become better at public speaking and not be afraid to talk in front of others. A month later Generic_Name thought about how good he'll be if he became an attorney. Generic_Name definitely knew how to speak in front of others after taking the public speaking class and he also knew how to defend a case so he changed his career option and decided to stick with attorney.

Another example is that Generic_Name wanted to be a dog sitter but she was also interesting in the study of the human body and how it worked, so she decided to join a a psychology class and learn more about it.

In conclusion, students are not expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school because they will get a chance to pick the career they want as they take different courses in high school and it will also cause many students to feel pressured at such a young age. Students should know that they have all the time they need to learn and be curious about any class they put their interest into, as they grow up their brain will develop therefore they will become more smarter and they will have the chance to pick the career to want to be in. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
0C7D385D812A,"How should people take decisions?? thats the real question should a person follow a feeling or motion call instincts or should they make a decision by guidance by experts and the laws and authorities. Well a person should use advise really. For example lets say a business man has to make a decision about if he should invest money or not on a product thats been selling good for the last few months but in the pass they werent selling as much. so the business man has to go and get guidance with some experts because he doesnt want to make the wrong decision and make the company waste money they wont get back.

Thats why having advisers are so helpful because there suppose to help people get out of any concerns a person has. They can guide and advice you to do things right. For example when a person is in high school that person has a guidance. That person is always going to be trying to help, there gonna help decide which classes are best for a student, and there gonna look in to the student and check why a student isnt doing good and after that there gonna try to help him so he can accomplish hes goals and graduate.

Every time we take a decision over something serious we need to think about it more than once because if it is a decision like buying a house its life changing ether it can go really good or it can hurt you badly thats why its better to think about it and talk with an expert because its needed to know if that person is ready and its stable enough. For example if a person wants to buy a house theres a lot of responsibilities that come with that decision and he or she has to be ready that means theres no more playing around and settle down and he or she needs to think about it if thats what they really want.

Take decisions it always has a grade of difficulty thats sometimes not even with the best advisers can help to make a decision being one hundred percent sure that thats the right answer. Sometimes you just have to trust youre instincts because a person has knowledge about the answer to the question but he or she think about the answer to much that they get them selves confused and thanks to that they make poor choices when really you should just trust the person is right. For example when a teacher tells a student on a test trust your instincts and dont think about the answer to much is because they know that he knows the answer.

In conclusion its always better to have a person giving you advise about a question or problem, its easier to make good decisions when a person has help than when a person is alone confused and stress about a decision. But at the same time is good to trust your self and follow your instincts and not having to depend or need someones help.                                            ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
E7585113D7EC,"The type of work I would like to have is a stalyst professional and paint landscapes.

Stalyst professional is a really good job you get a lot of money only doing hairstyles.

Painting landscapes is a really good job too because you are doing what you want doing a really good art and a lot of people like how it looks like they pay a lot of money for the landscapes if you do a really good job.

I chose stalyst professional because is interesting to do, you learn a lot about girls hairstyles and boys hairstyles I think is a really good job because a lot of people likes to do hairstyles and people likes to do haicuts because there is a lot of different things for example new hair color or a new hairstylt and stalyst is a really good job because you get a lot of money and you can do whatever you want with your own money but working hard.

I think the workplace will be in a place that there is a lot of people, because when is people they are interesting to have new haistyles for example if someone goes to have a new hairstyle and is really cool people are going to wish have the same hairstyle or a different hairstyle.

People are going to be really happy to have a new hairstyle because some people are bored to have the same haircut and if is a place with a lot of people they are going to love that place.

I chose doing landscapes because is interesting for a lot of people, because if you do a really good lanscapes people are going to love it and they are going to be interest to have one.

landscapes are so beutiful because you see how the paints are combinated houw the color are mixted and you see a really cool landscape. The work for the landscapes with acrilic paint it looks really nice because it looks realistic, and that's interesting for people that like to have landscapes.

I think the workplace for landscapes is like where is a lor of people that like to see landscapes and buy them because landscapes are so pretty. I chose to do landscapes because I like to paint

I like to see the color and how they are mixted that's so cool. I li9ke to paint landscapes because I

feel relax and am not thinking nothing I forget about everything and I reflect how I feel doing landscapes

I also like to paint landscapes because I love acrilic paints and how they mix and how they work.",3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
D9AAC11BC7AC,"The benefits of having a good attuide is always being postive when their's a bad day, and helping others if thier having a bad day too, and just always be excited to have a postive day. For example in my life when I don't have a good morning for example like missing the school bus or having a disaggrement with my parents. I try my best to leave a smile on my face and just have a great and postive day. Another example is when I see it in other people would be just diffrent because people are diffrent and they act diffrent in every way. What I mean by that is that they can be either mad, sad, or annoyed, or just super excited to have a great day. Why I say that they can act diffrent in the morning or afternnoon is because when your going to work your maybe tired and exhasted and stayed up till like 12 AM for an asssignment for your job. Same with school. On the other hand there could be people that are super excited to have such a great day for work or school. Those people are probably really excited because maybe they finished there assingment or homework quickly. Another one is the afternoon people that come back from school or work there. Sometimes there's people that can't wait to go home and eat and see their family and just go to sleep after that. On the other hand there's some people that are so tired that they can't even drive or even talk to the person that they've been picked up by. I've seen it all from so many people. But again people are diffrent in so many ways.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
B7350254EE93,"Why people should make their own decisions for them self.

Should people make their own decisions? yes people should make their decisions because important, people will accomplish more faster, and teaching responsibly.

People make decisions important. Everyone wants to feel like they play an important role in the family. By allowing your children to help decide entertainment or snack types, you give them a place in the family where they realize their voice are heard. from something as simple as deicing which good thing to buy they can feel like they are a part of the family more so than will be present they simply want to matter.

When people make their own decision people will accomplish more faster. When you know exactly what you are trying to achieve, you can do it faster period. I doubt that requires more explanation speed comes from greater clarity of purpose and process.

People make decision teaching responsibility. Not all decisions can be met with a successful experience. Perhaps a child picks a movie that is not as good as he or she thought it would be or dessert was disappointing in last. This can help you teach you child to learn from previous experiences. He or she needs learn that not all decisions have a good and positive out come and we learn from this process to make better decisions next time.

Should people make their own decision, it is important for themselves, and important role in the family. People can teaching a child decision have good things and positive. When people make decision they will accomplish more faster you can know exactly what you are trying to achieve.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
352F0193E251,"Dear Generic_Name,

Would you rather work with friends who are going to keep you distracted from off topic conversations ? In my opinion, it would be better to work alone so that you can focus on your work. In my science class, we always get the opportunity to work with partners. But i rather work alone and if I need help or don't understand something I can always ask my teacher. If you work alone you have a better chance of learning more and passing your final exam. Its good to work with partners sometimes.

Although, you have a better chance of passing your class. You also get the chance to get good skills. Like to not depend on anybody for help, to be a leader not a follower.

Before my uncle passed away, he told me to never depend on nobody for help. You have to climb the steps by yourself to get to where you want to be. I want to own a mechanic shop by myself when i am older. Ill work on all the cars by myself with no employees. You can learn a lot of skills by working alone.

Everybody has different opinions,some people say working with partners may be easier and helpful. But you have to think about all the distractions and trouble making kids. Letting other students do all the work and then copying and take credit for someone else work. I use to be one of those kids until i noticed I am never going to learn or get somewhere in my life if I keep letting people carry me over my steps.

To conclude,working with partners may be easier,faster and exciting. Working alone is a mans job,to not be a follower. To not let anybody else do their work or to carry them over your steps.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
60ACDFA1609E,"Agree you will never grow if something beyond of what you have mastered. However, some people believe that you don't have to do this to grow that you can grow conform the time. Emerson's was right with this quote people have think more then just of what they believe, if they grow they will achieve their dreams if they achieve they will grow you just have to believe in what you are.

Unless you try to do something respect, you have to do the best of you if you want to grow. Base in my experiences I'm growing, I try hard, and I try to convince the other do to the same, we want a better world we students to grow if they grow this will be a proud for the others. If we don't an open mind this will be the opposite we will never grow,no matter what is happening he we have to grow.

At the end of all of this we will have something do where we can be support our live, always come something better, you have to be organize with your things. The idea is to be your self don't ever let other people to control you just be you, and the decision is on you.

Don't you ever be an a position to where you have to decide between to options? That's when you to believe in yourself, to thing want your want to be grow or stay in the floor. If you grow will be more opportunities for you and maybe don't just for you can be for the others who are around of you.

Give the best of you to make it, for example if you don't try to grow what will be of you what kind of person you will be.

There are benefits to grow like you can be a person who can do almost all the things ,you can be accept or be sociable. Emerson gave us a great point with this statement we have to appreciate of what he wrote in my view he completeright about to try something beyond what you have already, just try and you can make it.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
E5C9AD14EB2D,"People talk more then one person because they may need help and solve the problem. They will make a better choice what will they do and not doing bad choice like, staling money, selling drag. A advice can help people make other people do the right thing.

Just one people can not make a good choice but more people can. People can choice their opinion for what thing can make then better. They can take ideas. If they talk only one that not a good advice. For a examples if you have a math problem and you use only one idea and that a hard one, use other choices that will help you. If you did not pick a idea it will be hard and you will fail. Pick the best that work for you, and that how advice work so people can make better choice like picking the right for them. A example when kids not follow the direction, they need to make a idea for better choice at school and that how advice work. If like what the rules for the class and list thing so you can make the classroom better and safe.

For not follow the direction and not make good choice can lead problem. Kids need advice too. Sometime people can make silly choice like selling drag or taking money on someone. Advice could be safe too. So those people need advice for what can happen and what the better things. But people don't allow talk to more then 1 people they can talk to one people if they feel good about. But when people don't really make good choice they need more then 1 person. For example if their was a bad guy and he keep staling money he need the better thing so a he can make a better choice so that how advice works. Advice does'n mean bad people do it and can be good people even kids because kids sometime do silly and act bad at school.

Advice is a good thing to make choice and it good for school so kid can make better choices. It like rules and need to follow, so that how advice work.             ",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
5FFB959ED7BA,"I agree.

I agree with this statement, because I have impressions that I can't change in my mind. For example when my mom surprise me with my Play Station.

This Statement is based on my experiences, my first reason why i choose this was because the impressions is impossible to change,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
F73899060D94,"Do you remember when you decided what you wanted to be? ''your character will be what yourself choose to make it''.Do we choose our own character traits,or is our caracter formed by in fluences beyond our control.

I agree Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. because, you make your own desicions,you take responsability,and you have goals. However many,believe that people influence the way we choose our characters because they think they have the rigth to critize the way people decides. Actually,this is a bad idea because people makes their own decisions,In society most of the time we have to take a decision whether are rigth or wrong we must take it at some point but is also,your choice to make the best out of it. For example,My brother had to take a decision by himself which was doing something in life going to collage study or work as an Mcdonals co-worker he decided the best was going to collage and keep studying. If,my brother wouldn't have taken that decision then he had lost an opportunity to make it.

The second reason your character will be what your self choose to make it, is that you take responsability because taking responsabilities make a better character of your self. For example,when you wake up early just to be on time at work every day you feel you are giving the best of you yourself are choosing to make your character. If,you are not giving the best of you every day that means you are no choosing to make your own character.

The third reason your character will be what your self choose to make it,is that you have goals because you want to feel satified when you have achieve something important in your life. For example,when getting your first bachelor degree when getting your dream job or you worked so hard for your dream car you always wanted. If, you don't have goals to follow then you are no going to make it.

In conclusion,make your own path,you are encharge,and you have dreams to follow.           ",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
286FE6743E88,"The constantly tying to do make something else is the greatest accomplishment.

I thinks for this that is the very better idea, I am agree because when you do somethings. When you doing somethings may be this can helping for another person that is great for all the time. This support we can something better because you know make some great this can effect for some people,and can i'm disagree,for example when yo doing some helped to hospital may be can bring some support with you pay 20 dollar for month. This helped to hospital is something you know about a greatest accomplishment because you do this idea about yourself.

That is contantly trying of yoursel. This is always and without interruption or can be again and again without end, and me position this issue is real education, so you do somethinmg in then you have you doing a discussion. When you has something to doing, then we have to do a discussion about what is the greatest accomplisment this that happened because we have to do something individuality, and make a support, for example we have to make some better we know about this how the education is the great discusssion because everybody have to making a reasons and bring the support, and this position I am agree beccause when you spoke about of the education for all the children the is some sure.

The greatest accomplishmnet can be something bad you can reporting a situation. for this things you do some this is for yourserf because you make some can have a discussion, and you making the be better accomplishment or laern more about for this experienced. For instance what is right of accomplishment is the we tying to make something such as a blessing somebody the is the greatest accomplishment because you making very good for some people this is agree,and the is action you doing and support because you make is good reasons. Also for some specific example about is the a greatest accomplishment is when all the people in a country are developed the is of better accomplishment because the people of for this country to make a dicussion, trying,talent for that country can be developed. Also something accomplishment we trying to be better because sometime is so difficulty to do here is we have to used the talents for support the idea for develop.

Sometime of the talented is having to be more considerable because we have to do a particular effort, and support this position on this issue. I feel the position when tying to make about something right you are make some greatest accmplishment agree because we trying helped and then make a reasons specific next doing a discussion and desiccion.

I make every day to be more better for any class. and tying to helped ssome people this is a constantly that make, when trying to make something is so difficult because I has to make a discussion but for a dicussion all have to talent this is statement about individuality to making. However i has to used the talent. Also in the life and future all the people have to make bigger greatest accomplishment this is that people can be more great life.

The greatest accomplishment somethings factor that have in the life. Also may be can sometnhing has to resolver with a discussion. Also this thing have to be the greatest because we trying to some to do and support.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
3A2DBB1E0556,"I believe that my skill is I can speak another language,Korean, fluently. Speaking another language is not effortless but the effort give pleasure that I can help other people. It is tired and hard to help other people, but assist make people glad. My ability is I can speak Korean, acquired Korean by reading the books, can use my skill usefully by teaching Korean to Korean - American and communicate and help Korean.

I developed my Korean skill by reading books often. I read a Korean book at least in a week. Mostly, it was hard to understand and I had to find the words meaning in every single time. However, I could improve my writing skills,

vocabulary skill and I could speak Korean and write logically. For example, I took World Language Exam last year, I could use the words that I saw when I was reading a book. Also, I could make my writing clearly, organize and I understood prompt very well. In addition, my parents read Korean books to me and my brother. That made me to understand and speak in Korean fluently.

I can use Korean skill very usefully by teaching Korean to Korean- American. Usually, people who were born in America but their families are Korean, and they don't know how to write, speak and write in Korean. For example, I go to the church every Saturday and help to teach Korean to the teenagers or children. It is hard but they can learn Korean from Korean school and communicate with families. For example, they become teenagers, and they can speak only English and their parents can speak only Korean. They will not able to communicate each other. They will become farther. Nevertheless, teenagers can ignore their parents that they cannot speak English.

Communicate with Korean can be useful because some Korean are immigrated to America with not enough English skills. They need help with bills, housing and information of America. If you go any stores or community center, they are having difficult because they can't speak English so they cannot understand what the owner is trying to say. If you can speak Korean, you can help them. For example, I was student ambassador which is help new students to touring the school and help them with the schedule. The new student came to our school and she was Korean and she cannot speak English. I introduce the school, and class schedule in Korean to her so she can understand about school system.

There are lots of advantages if you speak another languages. You can acquire Korean by reading books that help to improve your writing, reading, vocabulary skills. Also,teaching Korean to children or teenagers and can communicate with Korean can help people. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
C616874461F9,"Is the most benefit to work alone because the students learn more, for example: if they work in group they need to divide all the work in always can't all the students learnd all the work because a student do one part of the work and other student also do the other part, but if a student work alone he can learn all the work because he do all the work alone and he know about al work.

Work in group also have benefit to, is more easy and more fast because all student do one part of the work, another benefit is if a student don't undertand the work the other student can help to explain, in this form all students understand the work, the mayority of the students prefer to work in group because is more easy and sometimes a student don't work and all the rest of the group do all the work.

But in my opinion I prefer to work alone because I learn more and understand more about any type for example if work alone I need to do all the work and I need to found all the information and do all the examples and explain all about my work, the most important about this two type is learn to working in group and workin alone because sometimes in the future all will work in group or alone,

in both form is good to work and always do the best and each work.

Both have benefits but I think that the best option is to work alone also because is better for the student start to work alone, for the teachers the best option is the same, the students work alone because in this form they can learn more about the student in how they work and how they think, the teachers can see the capacity of each student because not all the students work the same in this process help to all the teachers learn more about all students.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
9145AB74E1DA,"I don't think it's a good idea to work from home they're a lot of kids that would just take advantage from working from home. Kids would rather be at home then have to go to school at seven in the morning. They're different kinds of people out there who would stay at home just because they didn't feel like getting up so early in the morning. Other kinds where kids put effort into going to school. I don't think working from home is a good idea for school students.

There are some kids that can't really work at school, but then they're others that just do it for fun. By saying how kids take advantage is because some of them would do their ""school work"" from home but it would end up with them just sleeping and doing their work later. School may be difficult but that's why we have teacher to help you the staff and your parents they will always be there to help. Even the classes online that you do if you work from home have people to help you if you have any questions or if you just need help. Some people are visual learners like right infront of you that's is why i think kids shouldn't work from their homes. People are different some work better by themselves others work better in a group or with a partner that's is why working in school is the better idea.

I'm not saying saying it wouldn't benefit the kids who are doing their work online i'm just saying working in school is easier. I'm saying some students wouldn't benefit from working from home they would just sleep instead of work or they would just goof off instead of work. They're a lot of reasons is to why I don't think working from home or working online is a good idea. You never know who your going to meet online. Some kids don't have internet access so they wouldn't be to work online and when your at school you have all kinds of resources to help you.

My opinion in this is that working at school is better than working at home kids actually have a chance to get stuff done and at home kids would just sleep and not do their school work because well, they're at home. Learning at school is way more helpful then learning online you always have someone there to help. Yes their will be some kids that will learn online and there won't be some people do work better with the person right in front of them.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E8485EFFC9A2,"The outdoor activities parks, get people to know each other better. The activities outside is fun, because you get to meet new people, where there is always competition and competitors. The main thing what makes an activity fun, is the enthusiasm of the people, having an enjoyable moment. However, how people or siblings cheered for you and others for the other team, is sensational. In Conclusion that's what makes a game great, the fact that has many memorable moments, that you will never forget.

In general, activities exercises your body, ounce you get use to running ,or playing sports. Techniqually, you wanna do more when you really like the activity that your doing, thats enthusiam for a motivation. Then, you definitely wanna be the best at it and there is others, that have the same interests like you. So, there's people that are gonna get across your way, because their unstoppable like you. Since, a child they liked activities that motivated and inspired them, to be good at, eventually this two big starts find each other and there both nemesis. So, lets say your motivation was only getting a scholarship, by sports, and the goal, that you propose to yourself, eventually you completed it. Supponsendly after 30 years your in national TV playing the finals cup worldwide, for your team, thats were imagination can take you from a winner to a star.

It starts from just playing with friends, finding encouragement from siblings. Then just practicing and from there is your decision were you wanna take yourself. Along the way, you can become a successful professional player, like Messi,Lebron James,Usain bolt,etc. However, thats the main point goal for others, but nesecerally you dont have to be good or the best at a sport. Certainly, if you participate on activities is good, because your showing potential as your age grows. Also your forming you body in general, which makes you stay fit, fresh, and always hydrated which is good for your health.

Everybody starts from going from different clubs and parks, where you could start going from your community. Then the state and then national parks, provide you greater opportunities and that's were the journey begins. I like to think that activities generally sports develop your body in a sort of way, that it can also develop your brain into knowing more knowledge of that sport and knowing every detail of it. Neseceraily, not only physical effects can happen to your typical common general body muscles, but having an understanding of the game can be outstanding which requires critical thinking that can affect your organ brain in a good way . If you get to see chess not considered really a sport ,but an activity that exercises your mental thinking, others find this game or other games interesting too and really find the complexity of the game and thats how legends form in any type of game.

The community and people are starting to know each other better by Community activities along everywhere State communities, and National communities. If you asked people that do activities everyday, they will say almost everyone in the world, ounce upon a while everyone did a activity. Since, is what forms your body's growth, shape,and knowledge. The main thing is that there is activities for everyone, that everyone can be good at something and they can have a good time, on what they're doing.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,4.0,3.0
DA1ABE125640,"Working in group

Sometime working alone can be hard, because by working alone you can't know your class mates and then you don't have any friends to work. So students should work in group, Although, working with group is more beneficial because you can know more about your class friends, can have fun during work and you can divide work in group.

First reason, why working in a group is more beneficial, because you can know more about your class friends. There are many students that come from other countries or other school so they should work in group. It is good idea to show for those students that come from other countries they will love to know the way they work in class and it is great for English learner because By working in group you have to talk more then work. In group work students can help each other as friends explains something to each other.

Another reason, why working in group is more beneficial, because you can have fun during group activity. Like working on project is fun when you have group, because every person have different idea and when as a group you put all ideas together it is going to be very interesting and by working in group you can increase your knowledge. There are many fun activities in classes that students should work in group like you can debates to other groups on any class topic. That turn a boring topic into fun topic so that way students can also work happily.

Finally, why working in group is more beneficial because you can divide work in groups that way students can complete work on time. students can focus more than working individual. They think it is kind of challenge to them against other groups. that way they give their best to work and complete assignment on time. Students can study as a group for test they can make some quizzes for their group to study for test that way they can do better in test.

Working in a group is important to students and it has many benefits. Many people do jobs with different kinds of experience people and they work as a groups they get many benefits in group work. So it is great for students to work in groups and to learn many new thing from other students. So that's why working in a groups is beneficially.  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
5D843D1CD37D,"I agree because maybe it could lead to new friendships or relate able things or a thing with a teacher. For example I had to do an assignment similar to this and I told them all of my most productive activates I could think of and almost everyone was similar to my activities like they do the same activities as I do too. You'll never know if you meet new people that you've never seen before or heard before and they turn nice and you guys could be good friends. I had friends from my soccer team and they were in my school that I didn't even knew that they were in my school so I started to hang out with them in school and after soccer practice. It's basically about friendship because if someone wants to meet more and new people they should go try out something they like and try it out with their future friends and enjoy together. For example, I keep meeting more and more people because of after school activities or someone in school that is friends with their friends. If you disagreed with the principals decision you would just do the same routine all year until summer has came and then high school and then that will be the similar routine and then graduation and then you've decided to go to college and it's another same routine for how long you're gonna be there and then you get a job and it'll be another same routine until you retire and then you just go home and rest until you die, sure it would be similar if you agreed but sometimes you just gotta try what's new what's been going on or how's it going go out with your friends and then you guys get closer and you've decided you guys wanted to hang out and do whatever you want to do. Sometimes your parents might force you do to some activities at school or outside of school it's because they want you to feel like you've like accomplished everything in life and you've decided to try something new for once and will actually enjoy it and stick to it as long as you live or until you quit or retire. You might even find your furture date and be very distance get to know each other so I am agreeing because it causes friendships doesn't have to be home all day and some thing you might like.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
964E9DBFDBAA,"image having a good skill. like being good at a sport, sing, cooking, or just getting good grades at school.

People can have skill or talent they might not even know they have one. Skill can be anything like being good at math when other people are are not, you might not be good at English but other people are. it does not matter if your not good at something. like you can be good at soccer but be bad at baseball. skill can come in different ways.

like mine. My skill is talking to people. I don't know why I like to talk to other people but i just do. But It can get me in trouble like. When Im doing a test I like to turn around and talk to my friends and i always get in trouble for this. or when Im in class I like to talk to much with my friends and not do my work and sometimes I talk to the teacher for a long time and not do my work. Talking to other people can be a good thing you like not being shy. I used to be shy but i start talking to people and became not being as shy as I used. There are more ways that talking can be good for like building a good friendship with other people like least year. I started talking to other people this year and made a lot of new friends. And you can become best friends with the teacher it a good thing to have a good friendship with the teacher. Talking can help you with making new friends out of school. like at birthday party you can talk to people you don't even know. talking is a good skill to have because. it can help you with the real world. Like when you see some one have a bad day you come and talk to them and make them feel better then they were. my skill can be good or bad at sometime. but that my skill. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
06FA8EF28227,"Many people in the history of the world were important because they become who they want to be, and now society try to persuade people from who they are and change to what they want, to be your self in a world that is constantly traying to make you something else is the gratest accomplishment, also you decide who you want to be

I agree with this because some times parents try to change their children, also school making decision for their students, religion first point parents trying to change their children, in some cases parents try to persuade their children from what they want to do or from what they want to be on the future, if some one of their children want to play soccer and if their parents do not know everything about soccer they search anything they just say no and they make their children to try something different or if the child do not want to go the place that they are going most of the parents do not listen what their sons want or like and also sometimes parents make their children to be what they do not what to be in some cases parents tell they children that they need to play an instrument liket the guitar but maybe that child wants to play the drums. some famous people are unhappy because their parents make them to become famous but maybe that child do not want to do that.

second point some times school makes decision for students too some times students do not want to take some classes and school choose for them, in some parts students do not like to wear uniforms and they make them to wear it, in case that you came from other country and you do not speak the same language you need to be able to learn because if you did not do it you are not able to be in the school and if you do not understand what are they talking about is hard but you need to be like them because you do not have people who speak the same language as you do, so you have to be part of something even if you do not like it third point religion is there to try to change your mind they are many religions in the world but all depends if you want to choose one of those religions but some times people try to make you part of that religion and some times you change completly of who you was if that work for you is perfect but if not you are going to be completly different person, you need to dress different at you usual do, and also they tell you what is wrong and what is not wrong even if you did not do anything wrong they think that and they always want you to belieb things that maybe are not true but why we need to follow that and why we need to beliebe that, so if you want to do something do that thing because you want it not because someone tells you.

In my opinion I agree with what Albert Emerson wrote because to be our self in this world that is constantly traying to make us something else is the greatest accomplishment, is hard to be our selfs because people are always traying to tell us about what we are going to do because for the society what they do is good but maybe you have a different idea but most of the time you need to do what they tell you to do the best accomplishment is being ypour self and being what you want to be and if you want to do something just do it and do not listen about what other people say or what they think because people are never happy with the things that you do. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
A68AABEAAB4B,"Dear diary today in the English class my friends were saying that in sum point in life the first impressions are almost impossible to change and I asked to other people and well what I think is that they should not say that because the person can be in a bad moment of there life and they arent doing good, it also can be that they don't treat everybody the same way and one person told me that they could act in a different way I thought that it's a good reason of that person and I said thank you for your answer.

My first reason is that the person can be in a bad moment of there life and they arent doing good because they just moved to another place far were they lived before and left there friends or family, someone in the family died, they feel lonely,for example I have been in this situation a lot of times and my situation is that I move a lot because of the places were my parents need to work and in some point they told me that we were going to move each year and I changed how I felt, I felt upset and not wanting to go to school anymore I only wanted to have fun; this year I havent moved but my parents are seeing what house to get 1 hour from here we may move in January and I don't feel good thinking about that because here in Generic_School I feel like in home they treat me good, the teachers help you if you need something or if you have a problem in or out of school they also tray to help you in any way, and another reason is that I made a lot of friends and I really don't want to leave them (the people here are great).

In some reasons the people don't treat everybody the same way because each persons sometimes are treated differently by the person; it hap pend to me one time and I really didn't like it; it was one time that I went to a party and I was going to meat up with a group of friends wen I got there they didn't want to talk to me I wondered why but I got to know by a girl that sow me wanting to talk to them and it was because they told them something that I didn't even know that I did; I went to talk with the girls and explain that I did int do nothing and told them that I had a twin sister and that I didn't tel them that I had a twin and that she was the opposite to me so things got fixed and we went to party all night and to have fun.

The reason that the kid gave me was that they could act in a different way because some kids are special in some part of there life; they can be aggressive or nice because they can't control there feelings sometimes or most of the time kids with a disease one of the example that he gave me is that he knew a kid and that he will help and be nice but sometimes he will be very mad and say things to the persons that he knew; he can't control his character but they were teachers that will explain what he had and they would be better and not say things about hem.

Well now that we sow all this I think that I am correct people don't always be be perfect, everybody makes errors in life or someone causes them. Thankyou for hearing me today!!

Have a great day!!",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
F22B25257E47,"Two minds think better than one. Working with someone else can bring many benefits and opportunities to everyone, but there is many people who prefer to work by their self . working in a group can help to have done everything on time, and we can establish a good environment in the classroom. Each person have different opinions, and we have to respect it.

Working in groups help to have everything done on time, since we are gathering many types of ideas and information from everyone. For example, in USA there are a diversity of people from different parts around the world, and each person have a different opinions and ideas in how they see everything. However, some people think that they have better opinions about what they are doing than others, but an opinion or idea is just a help that can guide to the best option. Having groups in classes is a help that can benefit. Because, they are helping each other. When someone is working alone can be struggling and do not ask for any type of help to keep going and make things nicely.

When we are working in groups, we can establish a good environment with our classmates, since there is a lot of communication between classmates. For example, if we work alone, we would not be able to communicate each other, because, everyone is concentrate in what are they doing. Otherwise, people from different parts of the country would not have the opportunities to meet each other and learn different cultures from their classmates. Knowing each other can create a calm and gradable place to stay and share with every student in the classroom. Even other students would prefer to be there.

Many people would like to be in a place where they can share and work together. But many people are looking where they can work with people from different types of cultures and listen every idea or opinions in life. having someone to work with, can make evening easier than working alone. Every teacher should allow or try to create a better place where students feel comfortable. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
6EB1681A5880,"I disagree that students should be required to take an arts as a class but as an elective they can choose between what type of art class that they want to take,for example if a student wants to take a music class as a elective they,ll have to check in with their counselor to see what class that they don,t need so that empty spot can be the elective that they have chosen.

Electives can be helpful to students because it teaches them something new about the history of the different kinds of arts class and help them understand whats going on around the world and teach them how to play instruments and see where the origin is from and how it is played,art is teaches student s how to paint and make clay and shows who are most the famous painters,where they,d come from and how,d they became such great artists. drama shows who are the greatest actors,famous plays and how they became famous.

Students say that an elective is better than it be a required class because its like having free time but you get to do something that you dont get a chance to do and it could be a career in the future for someone who is interested in doing it and sometimes the counselor puts the students into an elective that dont like and its not a required class and if they dont like it they don,t have a choice but to stay in the elective .

Therefore students should be able to choose their own elective rather than it to be a required class that you need to pass in order advance into the next step of life and it will help them learn something in the future and remember what happened during their time in that they spent in that elective.               ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
B407B3F81C9F,"Everyone has their personal choice or opinion they believe in. People should not seek guidance from an expert. People in today's generation know what wrong and right is. If the expert were to guide you, he or she would guide you from their prospective not what you believe in.

You will always have to make tough decisions in life. It can impact you in the future but you will be mature enough to know the right decision. It's your choice and opinion on what you do with what matter comes into your hands. Some go with their instinct others do mindless choices.

Some of these choices can be personal to tell an expert or maybe your not comfortable. The expert may have their own opinion on the decision. The ideas you come up with for your for your choice can be a better solution. There is no point in paying money for an expert when you can make the choices yourself.

The ideas you have can be very successful and impact your choices. With the ideas you can influence the choice so it can lead to the right path. It's a good choice to come up with your own ideas. Possibly, the ideas can persuade the choice you make and will not make you regret it afterwards.

In conclusion, I believe making your own choices and decisions is a better choice. The choices you make will lead you to success or failure but you have to keep trying. You do not need any expert to tell you about your decision. You need to make the better choice and decide what good and wrong is on the decision. Your opinion matters and will influence your choices in the future. This will impact you to become a better person to benefit to society.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
524CD617574D,"Do you think success consists of going from failure to failure? Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" In my opinion, when you want to reach your goal or your dream you can fail or success but you shouldn't never give up you should keep trying till you reach your goal. So, I do not agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of the success. There's no people that hasn't failed in his/her life at least once but there are some that did success, you only have to work really hard or fight for what you want, and you shouldn never loss your enthusiasm, that is something that people should never forget, to have enthusiasm for something.

First, there is not people that has not failed at least once in their whole life. In this world there is a lot of people that had mistaken, failed or disappointed. For example in their goal, getting a job, not getting good grades in school, not succeeding and etc. there is no perfect people that hasn't make any mistake. Failing does not always have to be about your personal life. You could fail your family or friends just by lying them or disappointing them. Maybe there are some people that hasn't failed just few like 1%. I do said this because my cousin, she has never disappointed or failed their parents she has really good grades and have a higher score in school she already graduated with a scholarship. Now she is in Virginia Tech University.

In order to reach your goal or your dream, you have to work really hard to success. If you had failed once or more do not get sad or depressed yourself you are strong enough to handle it. There is always an opportunity or another chance that life will give you. Work hard you should never give up easily, fight for what you want reach your big dream. Life is not easy life is hard no one ever has said that life was easy if you want something you have to work hard for it, I know you get drop down(sad) by failing in something but you can get up. If you can't success in something make another plans there is a lot to do and another opportunities that you can get, do not just get stuck in one thing. Look for other things that you want and maybe you will like it and enjoy it.

People in this world should never lose their enthusiasm. You are enthusiasm for something go for it do not let other people to do that for you or take it. Enthusiasm is something to appreciate and work hard for it. Not everyone is enthusiasm they dont have that; that interest, that strong warmth of feeling, or that inspired of something you would love to do or have. Be proud of yourself if you are enthusiastic for something. People without it has no feeling for something they don't care about their lives or future they only get what they can do for it, they don't give their feeling for it. They accept what they get. For Instance, when I was a kid I use to be really good at my school I was the best student with good grades, but when I moved here to US I had to start again because I didnt know any English so to success with my English I really had to work hard.

In conclusion, I do not agree with Churchill's statement. Success does not have to consists of going from failure to failure. You do fail a lot of times but If you don't give up and work really hard you can success for your goal or your big dream. Just never lose the enthusiasm that you have for something, that keeps you up for it, the warmth feeling you have the inspire and interest for it is strong so don't give up. Always work hard for what you want and you will success. Life isn't easy not even for reach people. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
B204869FA146,"Is technology a positive or negative effect on human life? Technology is a negative effect on all human life because it is a limitation on communication. With technology there is no talking to others, so you become socially awkward. You would not be able to talk infront of a crowd and you do not go out to meet new people.

People become socially awkward by not having the practice to communicate with others. You can not spend the rest of your life shopping online hiding from people. People who do not socialize hide their face when speaking, they can not even order food without getting shy. It is sad how the world is relaying on technology to do everything for them. Something that is amazing is having someone to talk to in person. You would be able to see their emotions and feel their energy when you are talking to them. People are not their just to listen but to also give advice to you. I do not think technology does the same. It does not ask how was your day or how are you feeling because it is not human it is a robot.

When you do not talk to enough people in your life you start to become shy. You will start to realize that in almost every job you need to talk in front of a crowd of people. Even if you can not do that you will have to because that is part of your job just to communicate. That is why in school they start to teach you at a very young age how to communicate. Teachers asign presentations for the students to get comfortable talking to others. Practice is the best way to handle talking to others because talking through the phone and in real life are two different things. When talking on the phone you do not need to see the person you are talking to or you can even just hang up. But in real life you have to learn how to start a conversation with someone and keep the conversation going.

People do not go out to find new friends. Yes, it is awkward going up to someone and saying, do you want to be friends. But that is where it all starts by making one friend you have achived a lot because now you have a friend that you can talk to and not feel alone. You can not stay at home just being online. You should ask your friend do you want to go watch a movie or go eat. That is better then staying at home a playing games all by yourself. Yes, you can talk with your friends and play games at the same time but it is also important to change things up a little bit. Just once in a while find something else to do rather than sitting at home. You can do a sport. You communicate a lot when playing a sport. Being at home you are just surounded but technology and you would never really get away from it if you do not try. Another thing: making friends on socail media is not the same as in person. There might even be a chance you never meet the person you met online or might not even be the person you thought they would be in person.

In conclusion even though technology is a great way to communicate with others that are long distance. It is still important to communicate face to face. Even if it is just for a couple of minutes you should still have someone to talk to. So that later on in your life if you get a job that involves you talking to a crowd you would not be scared. Also going out once in a while is not bad. You should not just stay at home playing games with your friends asked them do you want to go for a walk then you could talk to them in person. It is always a good thing to stay away from technology just somethings. There are other things that you can do even alone. You can read a book, sketch and color, or even just have a nice relaxing walk just to think. Technology should not stop you from having a good life and communicating with others. Just remember technology to some people is everything but to you it should not be.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
8415937CA4D9,"In my opinion i think a homework club would be great, most students want to fix the grades and get better ones mostly with subjects they struggle with usually math or sci ens but with extra help the student will be able to understand better which helps raise there grade.

Teachers are usually very open when it comes to help but most students are afraid to ask, with this club it will be easier to ask for help from the teachers.

I dont see a lot of cons with this idea but i tried my best find some, some students are fairly slow learners and it usually takes up time to teach them, its also hard for the student to be engaged in what there learning. most students have after school activities other than the homework club. Like sports and might arrive late to there activities.

There might not be enough people to help, though i doubt that there wont be enough people to help it may be possible but in a different way after school or work people are usually tired and dont have enough energy to stay engaged in learning or teaching.

Back to pros ya know the good stuff, mental health almost every student goes through a faze where the stress levels are high but most of that stress comes from is school work, with the club teachers will be able to helps students with home work, students will be used to asking for help.

I think this club is a good idea it will defiantly help students learn better while there struggling.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
34716B652420,"I thing working with a group of persone it will be super good, because the time going more faster, and also that fell more good working with a group, and because we can helpind of each other, and I thing we can make more friends when you work with a group, what happend whent you work alone you can be bored really faster or sometinh like that, and you goind super slow and you dont not what to do to make the time going super faster, you cant talk with not body and finished it faster, and you fell the time goin slow and you dont know what to do to make the time going faster, and for example when you are working with a group of people you fell good, beacuse when you dont know something they can helpind you with the ting that you dont know, and thats how you can make a idea of how to doing it new time, and also if you work like that you can finished it super faster, lest suport that I working with a group of 4 persone each one have to do one part of the proyect that we doing it and explaint one part of the proyect but if one of us forget something we can help explait it, what happend if I work by my self on the presentation I have to reading and explaint everything not body can helping me with the presentacion or when I dont undestand something, a presentation have to be with a lot of anwer and explait much, thats why I thing is bettler work with a group of people. ",2.0,1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
9E96EB0152A6,"I feel that this learning program can hep younger and older students and have a very big a effect on the people involved in the program, that is taking place in the schools.

Not many many other schools have this program to get extra help and kids need to understand that the there is a big opportunity that is being given to them and they need to take it.

This program helps the younger students get a opportunity to get better at something that they are having a hard time on inside of school.

If the kids are having a hard time on doing work at home or not understanding, they dont have to get worried about there grades dropping because there are other options that you can do.

If the younger kids parents do not have that much time to sit and help them with work, then they can just get help from the learning program that happens at there school.

The more you go to the meetings the better you will get even if it takes time.

I also feel that this could be important to the older kids that help as well.

This program would do very good for their service hours for there service hours for school.

It must be a good feeling for them because they were chosen to do something they are good and smart at.

They could possibly put this program on there college resume if they would like to become a teacher when they grow up.

There are many other reasons that this program could be helpful to others.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
869CC4EDD3B5,"It working in a group more better or we get beneficial them working alone?

working in group have many beneficial them working alone. In my opinion working in group is better them working alone. Because friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. Also we all can do the work more faster than doing the work alone. And we don't feel the job or work hard as we usually felt doing alone.

Friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. And we all put our interest to do the best as we can with the work. And we try that the work look good and nice. Also we put our effort to do the work and that the teacher see that we all work together. And we try our best to do the work the way that she or he wanted to be. And friends or partners can be good if we need to do a drawing or with the hand writing. Also if you're partners help you with the work the teacher is going to sacrifice with the work that all of you are doing.

We all do the work more faster than doing the work alone. Because we try that everyone have one part of the work. And that way we can finish the work fast. Also everyone participate in the work. And we all have some part of the credit. Also we try to do the work fast but also we try that the work look good. And we no just do the work fast because we want to finish quick and them do nothing. Sometime it because the teacher a specific time to finish and with a group we can finish on time and also the work can look good too.

We don't feel the job or work hard as we usually felt doing the work alone. We don't feel the work hard because we separate the work in parts. And if there is 4 in a group we all 4 do a list one part of the work. Also in a group there is always one or two person that know how to draw, have a good hand writing, or know how to decorate, and one that is looking the thing we need in internet for the work. Also we divide the part to every person and we all are attendant that the work do okay. The job is more easy to do if there if more than one doing the same work.

In my final opinion I think that work in group it better them working alone . Because working in groups have many beneficial that we can use wisely. But if you are working in ground and the group is doing nothing if better for you working alone in that situation. Because you have to intelligent and organize first and everyone know what they have to do we all can get a good grade in the work. Some of the benefits that we can get working in groups are. Work with friends or partners can help us to do the work better and more simple. Also we can do the work more faster than doing the work alone. And final we don't feel the job or work hard s we usually felt doing alone. Also working in groups it help to the development. For me it better working in a group have many beneficial and is very helpful to do the work good and nice foe the teacher can be proud of the group work. And also is mire fun to be in a group with your fiends and all of you get a good grade. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
0E14B9D24898,"I think that the curfew is good idea for adopting because at least sudents will not dying on the streets and they will not be no loneliness for them. Teens would not braking the law if they were not in big trouble. For teens there will be no street fights, crime, shooting weapons, etc. The curfew will take care of them at least temporary or it depends. Government need to take care of homeless teens. Those who drop high school early is too bad because some students desided do not learning and try hard their subjects. They will not success in future without educarion. In real world no one need them because they are not educated, did not complete high school and there are take care by themsellve on the streets. After curfew they leaving,

found minimum job with payment good for them, at least teens did something in their life. Their big mistake that ignor, lazy, skiping school, worse grades, attitude, not respect, selfphone and etc. If teens will not changing their minds, posobility well end up in wrong way. But I hope that they will succeed in future.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
4B4A48BAED30,"i as a standby and a typist (whatever that means). i am not fully agree to this extracurricular activity thing that is going around this school, because when i was a mere child. we had this sorta thing to but more easier,but since school nowadays is getting harder then it used to be back in 1950's. this perhaps may be excellent, but like i said before in the begin of my talk. i dont fully agree even though this will help the students. but the extracurricular activity here are well for kids who, are interested in sports, or kids who are interested in taking photos? (which sounds very boring for students at this particular age, well for some of them) or for students who want to make their speech sound like a good speech(a boring one) and sound more exsiqsitict (i dont know how to pronounce it) or whatever the kids like they should maybe join or perhaps join one activity. thats all i have to say from myself. thank you for your perticepice",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
C652190DB53F,"Working alone is more beneficial than working with a group. People can work relax and calm without being interrupted, and no one has to ask other people opinion, and also people are shy , they might don't like being surrounded by other people. On the other hand, working with a group can be good, because everyone can share ideas. However working alone is much better.

Work is already stressful, and work with people talking and giving opinion about the job is worse. Imagine a work where the whole group is speaking and there is someone stressed, this person won't be able to work relax and think about new ideas, probably when the person get home, it will be more stressed than someone who worked alone and quiet. Being alone make any person relax, and once you're relax no one can stop it, the ideas come to your mind.

During doing the work, might suddenly appear a new brilliant idea, and with a group the proposal is check with them and see if everyone agrees, and it spend time, and also might happen that not everyone agreed. Working alone can gain time, because people can use the time they're asking the group to work more instead of asking someone opinion. Also it creates discussion, more and more people speaking at the same time, disagreements and agreements, wasting time, and making people confused. Then it is better work alone to gain time working instead of asking, everyone does your own work.

Being surrounded by a lot of people might be hard for shy people. For example, I'm shy, and work in group for me is a struggle, have to talk to other person, have to share my ideas, I can't do my work relax, I can't either think about anything. The impression caused is that people will look at your work and judge it, and won't agree, and there I'm, needing to do everything again, in most of the times I don't even show my own work I just agree with other people work. It is not good, the brain doesn't work how it was supposed to work, people looking and may judging, all of it might collaborate for a terrible work.

Some people might say that work together people could share ideas and open the door to new opportunities, of course share ideas is a good point, see every point of view. However working alone has much more benefits, is better to have a good time working, without stress than share ideas and get home stressed and full of everything.

Working alone in a peaceful place, just you and your thoughts, to think about everything, every point, to analyze all things, relax and calm, whitout being shy or stressed. It is the benefts that everyone needs to have.                   ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
BA6FC6ECE68E,"Some school districts have been offering programs that are allowing high school students to graduate a year early instead of the regular four years. In my opinion most students who agree with this and actually want to graduate a year early just do it to get school out of their way. They choose to take courses in the summer than a nice trip to a beach or hang out with some friends. I mean who wouldn't want to graduate a year early right? but in the end it's not even worth it.

I know that school may not be all fun and games but all that education and knowledge sure does take you far in life. Graduating a year earlier than your other classmates doesn't make you more than them, it doesn't make any student seem smart, it's just them taking the short cut to end school.

I believe it isn't a good idea for students to graduate a year early. I say this because senior year just brings more new experiences to your life. Also you get more opportunities to get a little taste of a few colleges when they come to the schools. You get help with your resume's, and just things that prepare you for a good future. Senior year is the ""best"" year as some students say. Graduating a year early, just makes you miss all those nice and fun experiences with friends, including the activities the school does that last year. Some students may not agree with this but senior year just gives you that extra push into making your future better. The last year of high school is like the guide to the beginning of your new life as an adult with more goals to be accomplished.

Another reason why I dont think it's a good idea for students to just take the ""easy""way out is because some students just do it to end their school life. I believe that the students who'd want to graduate a year earlier would be the ones who skip class, don't do their work, are always late to school and so on ,but to make it clear I was just referring to the bad influenced kids. High school isn't a race and neither is who has the best things in life because those you earn them by your hard work. Some students end up not even going to college, they just go straight into the workforce. Being one of those students who get to graduate a year early, it literally doesn't make you cool. I personally think that going straight to the workforce isn't the best option because to be honest, they just end up working in a Chick-fil-A, McDonalds, Burger King and all those jobs that don't even pay well. An education can get you a job! A job that'll pay you well and something that you know you'll have as a secure job and not having to change every other month or every three months.

For those students who are planning on finishing high school in three years they must have a plan whether or not they plan on still getting into a college. If some of those students still plan on going to college then they should be aware that some colleges may expect four years of high school. Also colleges may look on your school record and just see the type of person you were and may not accept you. All this coming to a close that not all colleges will be acceptable of you only having to do three years of high school. For those who don't plan on going to college, they have to have a better plan for them to survive in the real life. Some students just don't take the school serious but only if they knew that, that's the key for them to open to get to their future.

If I were agree with school districts allowing students to finish school a year early, I'd think about the positive side it has. I believe that some students may actually do it because they love school that much that they'd want to get a head start with their career. That's good I'm not saying it's bad, it's just something I wouldn't do. Students who are more than prepared should be the ones graduating early. Only students who have had perfect attendance and do their work and get good grades should only get that opportunity.

In conclusion, school districts should not allow high school kids to graduate a year early. They have to earn it and demonstrate their hard work. Senior year is the last little push a high school student gets before starting a new chapter of their life. School may not be the best but it can sure give you the best career life.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,5.0,4.0
D7301CAAFAB0,"When are parents gave us advice we are able to learn do the right thing. For example if you go work with your dad he gave you advice. Also they gave us advice we learn how to do the right thing. Learning the right thing helps us to make our life better. Learn something from more then one person because they help you dont get in trouble and be a good student or son if you learn from someone us.

Learning advice from school is good because everyone learns and get good grades. Do something good for school is good because when they gave you advice to do the right thing is class. For example the gym teacher gave you advice to do the right not the bad advice because if you do the bad thing you will get a bad grade and get in trouble. When we get in trouble is bad and you always have to listen when they gave us advice for you do well at your test. When we do well in our test is because the teacher was having us advice and we were paying attecion.

Friends gave us advice out side of school and inside school. When friends gave us advice inside school is because they want a better life for us. When friends gave us advice for our life is because they want us to be happy and be a better person. Also when they gave us advice like when we play sports. When we play sports the coach always have advice do win the game. When coaches gave us advice to play good and win games that teams will be come so good if the players get the advice of the coach.

When people ask for advice is because they want to know what things are better like to buy. If we shop somewhere then you need a advice from someone to know if is good or bad. When they gave a advice of food you have to know if is good or bad for our health. If we dont get a advice like for something maybe will be bad for us to eat or do and may have problems. The person who do not gave a advice of what they doing they will get in trouble if good for our body or not good.

When we are in math class the students gave us advice same with the teacher. Sometimes students gave us advice how to do the work of the problem more than one student gave us advice. When teacher shows advice of our class work how to do it and know when test are coming for be ready. Also the bus driver gave us advice how to act inside the bus. If the bus driver does not gave advice everyone in the bus will act crazy and maybe a accident. Thats why everyone should said a advice for we could be safe and be good.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
0BB7AF7A448C,"Technology facilitate people to do a lot of things without having contact with others?

Does technology make human's life easier?. Although, many people argue that technology is affecting the people saying that human spend most of their time using technology, for things that are not productive. I think that technology is good because you need it for your daily. For example, if you are a student you can use technology to help you to do homework, project, or specific things that require technology. However, there are some people that need technology for their life that is require, if you are very sick doctors will have to use technology to understand what sickness do you have.

To begin with, using technology you can do many things at the same time that can help you in your daily. For example, there are some time when you have a lot of things to do, and you don't have a lot of time, but if you use technology you will able to make it, because you can do many things at the same time with technology. Also, technology help you with your job, now there are many machines that you can use in your job that does not need any force of your body, those machines work by using technology. If you work as a security you can security the building by just be in one office and use technology,

you can install cameras around the build and you can security the building from that office by using the camaras, so you won't have to be walking around all the build, and will take you a lot of time to make it.

Second, technology can make your life easier. People require to technology when there are things that human can not do. For example there are some job that are very hard that require a big force that is impossible for human, but they can use some special machines that are very strong and can do the work. Also, you can search in google things that you don't know. For example, address,news, thing about History, books it is much easier to read a book in google than going to the library that take you more time than just type the book tittle in google.

Finally, technology also help schools, every schools use technology for their information. For axemple teachers have computer where they has the information of their students, where they has their work all the materials that they need to teach. Also, teachers have special programthat they use to teach, make easier their work. However, teacher, and schools do almost all their work by using technology. in addition, students need technology to do their classwork when it require to use computer, or personal divice.

In conclution, technology is super inportant, helpful for everyone,and eveything. People won't be able to do the work or things that they do now without technology. Humans need it for our benefic to make our life easier.

Life won't be the same without technology, schools, Hospital, Banks, everything could be different. Also, no technology will effect the community in their daily tasks, like what they do everyday with technology. I think the world won't be the same without technology.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
D93EC6A7E859,"people who value his ideas came be a millonarie person example when his wan t to do something like a market places or store his thinking what to put on his store his making his own decision or he came go to the expert or he came has for help the expert and autorities they came do nathing because his my ideas an things if i need too kill some body they not going they what who came do it people always do his own decision never faul the rules in this worlk thats why is so many deaths if the people are more focust to the work the work his going to be more betther the life is inportant because you only have one on this worlk you no have second time if you you dead all your familly is going to be crying i know i not going to pass this test bout is a example what i saing to life.

life is beautyful whit god on you thats another level that why i saing to life the life is mathers becaise with my own ideas an decision came do anything a want to do if the people are respecting his own decision are gone be bery good.",1.0,1.5,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5
92B418CEA06E,"My mother's uncle Generic_Name wanted to be a lawyer, he did all the step that everyone do for go to college and he started work hard for pay all his classes. Generic_Name woke up every day early in the morning and he went at the college, after he took a bus for his job. After all his effort, after all the nights that he could not sleep, he became in a lawyer but Generic_Name never imagine that the real challenge is coming. After two years of his graduation he found a job ,he bought a house and a car and that is all Generic_Name did for the rest of his life. Should we aspire just at one thing? In every single aspect of our life we have aspiration, to be more every day to get the most beautiful house, the better job but that is all when we get all the we want and the set we stop there. In my opinion,if we don't try to do something beyond what we have already mastered,we'll never grow because we'll never have the enough experience and a better quality of life.

First,we'll never the enough experience because we always being in the same situation, every experience that we have make our knowledge,the way that we see the life and the problems. If we never give up to do something beyond our spirit preserve young while we have more experience we'll have more opportunities nos just in a professional aspect . For example,if we go to college and we finish the career but we stop there for the simple reason it is more safe so we never grow because that make us to be stagnate in one place,we think that doesn't matter that we good.

Second,We'll have a better quality of life because when we try to do the best every day,when we kept learning we became in a successful person which is good point because you inspire at others. we'll have all the thing that one day we wanted an the most important thing we'll have the power to help other. For example,when we continue learning more and more we'll stay one step more near of our challenge and we need continue to the same way.

In summarize,I'm agree with Emerson's statement because we always need to be more that we were yesterday. The success,the opportunities,better condition of life and the happiness is part of never stop grow. Is really important for everyone be happy with ourselves is like wake up every morning see us in front the mirror ,and say I can be better tomorrow.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
F772343CC7A7,"Do you wounder why kindness impact on people think in your mind how kindness effect peoples lives.

The first reason is when someone show their kindness to much and they get annoyed.

The second reason is when they show kindness back they will angry at you because you got annoyed bye theirs.

The third reason is some people just don't like small people because they believe they give you bad luck.

My forth reason is an ex:Like say someone like lets say...Generic_Name gives you a hug but lets say the player decides to kill Generic_Name then Generic_Name his brother comes and shields him then Generic_Name gets his revenge bye judging you by teaching you to be nice.

My last reasons] is also a ex:Then you spare/give him respect Generic_Name is happy and goes home you can chose to kill the king or go to his house and live with him and ask him to teach you the acts of kindness.

The other ways people can show kindness is fighting their demons.

And fighting bullies from their past in their head or in the real world.

Sometimes gas stations get rob and the police have to chase them down and sometimes you can help them.

Some other ways people and kids can help they can show kindness to the ocean bye getting trash in the water.

Another why people can show kindness is helping the community pick up trash on the ground.

People across the world their are so much kind people out their they can help you with anything.

Like clean up your yard and the shed and the playground and the trampling and the outside of the house.

And they need kindness to so we help them to in needed or in trouble.

I had a old friend name umm... i forget so lets call her Generic_Name she had a lot of problems like trying to kill her self or cut her self or Evan hang her self but i was all ways there for her but on day she went missing and i never saw her again we had good times together but she was there for me to like when we were kids she wood protect me from bullies and demons i don't know how she known about demons when we were in 3 grade i did not care. Sometimes i wounder is she here watching me has a ghost i would be happy but creep out at the same time. And thats why kindness is impotent in life.     ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
3134FDB9DB86,"Would you like four day of school stay of five? Can that be possible same, companies are trying this new way of school, I think most of the student and teacher would like, However most of the student does not know their benefits or desadvage, the student just think about their time they can spend doing other stuff like play videos games, play around, going out, but never time how values is the time they are using right, and step to going 8 hours class they going to have 10 hours the disadvantage will be the you have no have to stay more at school which me you, which you going get tired you going to have less time time to complete you homework they less classes is going to be harder to stay focus, more classes which me more homework. you going either awake more early and get of school more late, more project the classes are going to be longer the they used to your going to more tired, more angry,long topic to study, more test less life socials, life would be more harder the already is your gonna have to pass more class to graduate, you need to be focus and all your classes if u wanna graduate you gonna have less energy to be in class and for does the already work its going to be difficult to wake up in the morning your going to be exacting those people are going to be sleeping in class ,the school most provide more food they student are going to hungry, bad time about tree free day you can forget import time or topic the you need in class so the teacher in going to need to explain again and we student are losing time the can be sending in a new topic.

Four day of school strep of five benefits if you stay focus during the day with 10 hours you going to be learn at lot which good the most your learn the best life is for you, have new3 classes the you want to have but you couldnt have for the reason of time now you can have classes the you are interesting, you can joy in new class that can you be good at it talent5 the you didn't the you have .Education is the base of the world is the pendent what you studying and how good you are is how you status is life going to be which me have more hours is going to be useful in life education yours4elf in the best status the you can do in life; we gonna have more a hours you have have more teacher so teacher so the can not be tired and give the expectfict as its, the good time is a extra free day which me you can spend with your family or with your friends people can go more relax to school less pressure, more focus, have time to fisish your homework.

In conclusion and my option i strongly believe the they should life 5 day of school so people the work after school can have time to do anything they need, how can be mo refocus during class, less tired less pressure no be worry about they you going to have more classes the you don""t need you have time to be in after school active help you family during the afternoon be you homework it way you life can be more eassy and the life teacher can be more essay for them too.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
5F8F76B7A6FD,"School districts offer programs that allow high student to graduate in three years time because it help student to start planning about what they want to do in college and what course they are going to take in college and to start planning how to get scholarship ,student aid, student loan, etc for college. some advantage of three year program is you can't stay too long in school in and that is great for me because school is boring and full of too much stress especially when you have to come to everyday even if you don't feel like come you still have to come .espicllay when you don't have friends in school is very boring . l know school is fun but the same time is stressful were you have teacher giving you lot of assignment . but in college you have your own schleude and is your choice to choose which day you like to come to school . you don't have to worried about friends every one will nice to you and in college you have study group were can join socialize with others . many people may that going very soon is not a good idea for them because don't want to leave their friends the making a new is going to be hard for them . well I don't think that is the reason for you not to go I mean you can still come and see if you want.

So finish school in three year time is a good Idea to me .",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
D9AAEE4C9BCC,"Do you think that influencing other is imporant or not important?

I think that it is a good way to influence other and guide them to a better way of thinking. so that they can understand the main point of the topic. My three reasons are guiding others,influening others, and sharing your thoughts.

Guiding other will make people believe in what you are saying and that will make you feel great because you are teaching other what you have been taught.

Influencing others can make others listen and hear what you have to say and then share it with others. Sharing there thoughts will guide people to doing good things in there lifes. Like buying stuff when they are old enough to. So when they go somewhere they would already know what there are doing.

Sharing there thought will help people to doing great thing in there life even though life is not always perfect you will have to make the best out of it. You have to move on in life and never look back because if you do then you will be stuck and still be thinking about things that effected back then,then now.

When giving others important information it will help others with there upcoming future an teach them how life really is. When they have kids they can teach there kids information that you already know so that they can have a heads up.        ",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
2A9FC8634742,"What does it feel to achieve a high score on an English test after you study all week for? Pretty good right? You feel like all that sacrifice and long hours of study were worth it. All the confidence you build up was because of your own work. True self-esteem comes from achievement. Students and famous artist show us that without hard work, there is no true love for ones self.

First, school is the environment where students learn. In this building students especially show that in order to feel good and confident you work for it. For example; when playing a sport such as soccer, the athlete need to believe in itself to be an outstanding player and for his teammates to trust him when making a play. If the player does not believe in himself, his teammates will not chose him to guide them as the captain or simply as giving passes with the ball.

Continuing, a famous artists in the music industry named Lady Gaga show that when you believe in your passion and you give all of you in an scenery, the feeling of comfort and satisfaction is more than words. Gaga could not be where she is right now if people would have been sorry for her and just give her a contract without talent. In order to success you have to yourself and that's what she did, she develop her talent and now she is the most successful female artist in the music industry with ten gramys and many other recognition.

Contrary, some teachers agree that in order to build self-esteem students need to be commemorated for effort even if the work is not excellent but, why should students get recognition for not making their best effort? This would be unfair for all of the students that work hard for that test score. Feeling sorry for a student is not going to make them successful in life.

To conclude, all the hard work you put in a sport or your passion is going to help you succeed in life. Students are capable of so much and if a teacher praises an alumnus for work that its not worth a good grade, students will feel like they have not done something right and instead of building their self-esteem you would be creating an under qualify teacher or president. Is that what you want for their future? ",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.5
223FCA37F79D,"We should allow the students to bring there cell phones while they are at school, but as the school rules say ""the cell phones should be off or on silent during class. The students may take out there phones when they are at lunch or when they have free time. If the students do not follow these rules they will get consequences for having there cell phones on during class or using them during class. And if the students are using there cell phones during class it may distract other students while they are learning. These students are responsible for there cell phones going on in class or even using them during class. If a teacher is seeing any of there students using a phone the teacher will either take the phone away or he or she will tell the student to put it away because it is distracting the other students from learning. And it will mot just distract the other students, but it distracts the student that has the phone. If the student is not paying attention it could bring down there grade and they will not be learning anything what there teacher is showing them. if they get to distracted with the cell phone they can be in danger at school. they will not be able to do any school sports when they have really bad grades. If they were to leave there cell phones alone and start to learn maybe they could start playing sports. they will also bring up there grade as well. These students should start learning and stop using there phones during class. The students may use there phones when

they are at lunch or when they have free time. they could also use there phones when they are at home,",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
74D9504A6EDD,"In the actuality, many schools have been a good support for all the students that want to continue studying, and have goals for their life, the schools provide opportunities and have partnerships with companies that allow students explore certain occupations.

It's hard for many students to choose the career they want to study, some students leave school after high school, so they loses great opportunities that the school provides, but my dream is to have passion for a job, so I want this opportunity to make a good decision whether if I want to study marketing, through internships and shadowing opportunities that the school provide. I'm really interested in this oportunity because I want to learn more about marketing, which is the business of promoting sales of a product, as by advertising and packaging, also learn about inform new innovations and persuade the people; I'm really creative, I enjoy making posters, using social media, talking with people, and I can speak spanish, english, and a little of french, also I want to have organization and administration of the things, however, I'm interested in pursuing that type of employment, that the manager of a business can tell us his experience, to motivate us because if you want something you will never give up, I will always put all my effort to be a better person.

In conclusion, I hope I can have this opportunity, to make sure if marketing is the job I want for the rest of my life because it's really important to choose the correct job, the people need to have passion for the things that they do , so they can enjoy and be happy everyday, and I want to transmit that feeling for everyone.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
F069420C6DB7,"Some schools are offering distance learning for students to attend class from home. With online or video conferencing . I support thus idea of distance classes Because you can wake up anytime you want, Go in a slow speed to no overwhelm yourself, no one can bother you while you study.

First of you can wake up anytime you want so you can have the right amount of hours in case you work at night and you dont get seven to nine hours of sleep every night. Also you can do classes later in the day in case you want to work in the morning instead of the night. So you can have a career and have time to study to make your future come closer. It's also a good thing for people that have to stay home to look at after their sick parents or little brothers they won't have to worry at school if they are okay because they will be home taking classes and making sure everything is okay while studying.

Therefore they won't be overwhelmed about missing days or which classes he needs to make up a test or if he/she has a project coming up in class because all of that info is going to be in his/her phone or laptop. Its a better thing to have online classes doesn't take up half of your day you dont get overwhelmed with new info for like 4 different classes in one day. So you wont be stressed out as much that (study shows most kids that drop out is because they are being stressed out with so many info in just one day for like 4 different blocks in a single day). Online classes are better from what i heard it help's you better cause it teaches you what the state want's you to know instead of things you dont need to know like some side stories that teachers say to make you try to remember but end up getting lost in the story.

Finally when you do your work no one can bother you about the answer or what problem you in and they cant cheat off of you and you end up getting in trouble because they didnt stop asking or taking to you. Its also a good thing because if you don't understand you can go back a lesson to relearn it again in case you forgot how to do the problem. thats why Online classes are more proffered then actual class when you have to wake up early and go to school all tired cause you only slept a little staying up because of work or studding for the next unit so you cant fall behind or re doing a new untie while going into a new one. So i support the idea of distance learning for students and that schools are thinking about doing it would be a great idea.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
41D9F5D10332,"I believe that students accomplish more when they are always doing something. That serves more of a purpose than not doing anything at all. Students learn more when they are doing something productive. Students accomplish more when they take action. Another reason why students accomplish more when doing something is that they get farther in life than others. Lastly they get mature and learn what life is about. That why i choose that when a students get all those thing in place the student will accomplish more that someone that is not doing anything in life in their whole lifetime.

The reason I choose that we accomplish more when doing something is that we cant accomplish something when not moving doing nothing. My first reason why we accomplish more when when doing something is that when we do something we are learning. For example in the 4th grade i was really mad at math , so I took action and practiced everyday after school for the rest of the year. I would get good grade after i took action and studied every night. What I'm trying to say is that i wouldn't have accomplish that if i wouldn't have done something. Another example is that studies show that students that are always doing things at home or after school do accomplish more than students that don't do anything at all. Finally they learn how to mange their time more better.

Students that accomplish things get more farther in life than others. For example my aunt is a doctor and she put her mind in everything that she did. For example she took a lot of test to take and study for. So what did she do she always was multitasking. Another example is that a person that has made so many challenges in life is going to understand that you need too do something for it.

Finally the reason is that students when they are doing their work they are going to understand what it means to be a adult.,and to be more mature in life. Students get mature when they start work and going to school because they start to mange their time more wisely. Like for example a students is going to work right after school and they have a lot of work to do. They make that time do do their work some other time when they have time or at work on break. Another example is that if a students have a goo example in life they will get really intelligent .

Finally students that accomplish more are the students that are doing something in life other that just doing nothing. Students that are accomplish more are learning life skills. Students that accomplish more are going to get farther in life than others that aren't doing anything. Students that are accomplish more things are going to become mature. For knowing that they are doing thinks that are smart.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
79484682B23E,"Should my school follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business to extend the school day to two hours for a four-day week? This idea has an advantage and on the other hand a disadvantage because student will be stress out, some will not get enough time to rest before going to work,and they wont get time to learn.

First,students will be stress out. There are different kind of people in a school,some may be fine when it comes to sitting for a longtime,others may have problems. Sitting down for more than three hours can cause waist and back pain. some students may be sleeping while the teacher is teaching. Example;if a teacher is teaching and the students are sleeping,the student will end up not hearing what the teacher said about the topic. When this happens,the student will end up failing the class which is not suppose to happen.

Again,most of the student will not get enough time to rest after school before going to work. There are a lot of students in high school who work and cater for their living. Majority work after school,therefore,they have enough time to rest before going to work. If the school hours is extended by two hours,they will not have enough time to rest and will be sleeping later in the day in class. Example;some people do not close early when they go to work,those student get a little time to rest before going to work.

This idea is important because,it will help teachers to complete their syllabus in time and also rest on the fifth day,and get time to be with their kids. some subjects involves a lot and needs much time to complete. Teachers always rush when they are teaching just to catch up the syllabus and students will not understand the concept they are teaching but when two hours is added to the time,the teacher will take her time to explain for the students to understand the concept very well.

I will conclude by saying,adding two hours for a four-day week school has a lot of disadvantages,therefore,my school should not follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business or else it will affect the academics of the students,and also weak the body since they dont have enough sleep.                                     ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
D5E4F0C7D0BC,"Are educational activities enjoyable? There are many different kind of people that like different things. But, if you are a person that likes science this is for you. one educational activity is a experiment because there are a lot of people that like to record data and find out how something works.

Many people like to like to record data, so they might really enjoy a experiment. For example, in a experiment that a person has to measured and put the data in a table. Some people would fight for this task, that is how much a person love recording data. There might not be author person to fight for it but there is always going to be a person that wants yo do it. Experiments might be enjoyable to some people that like recording data. Some people might be in a math class recording data, but I think a experiment is more affected.

This is one reason why I think experiments are a enjoyable activity.

In the other hand, some people like to find out how something works. For example, a person might want to find out how the Faces of Matter changes. Maybe that person already knows, but want to know more about it. Therefore, that person does a experiment to find out more. Some people love to learn different things. other people will spend all their life trying to fine something out. It maybe new or not.

This why I think a experiment is a enjoyable activity.

Recording data and finding our how something works are just two reason why experiment is a enjoyable activity. People will fight just to record data. Other people will spend all their life doing experiment just to fine something out. This are the reasons I think a experiment is a educational and enjoyable activity. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D4A38C52F57D,"Why should students have a good attitude even when they're not in the mood? I think that students should have a positive attitude because. it might make them forget why they were even upset in the first place. They can also brighten someones day by giving them a compliment or just as little as smiling at someone.

Also if you have a positive attitude you can accomplish your goals. Therefore if you have a positive mindset not only can you achieve and accomplish your goals. You can be proud of who you have become and your hard work. Once youv'e done everything you dreamt of achieving. Your parents would be so proud. Having a positive mindset encourages young children to treat everyone with respect. And children could learn from the elderly and mimick their actions and words.

In conclusion i believe that everyone should treat everyone with respect and have a good attitude towards one another because were all one. Regardless of race and religion.              ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
5F407964AF46,"Hello to all the teachers in Generic_School.

My name is Generic_Name.

I Am From El Salvador.

Nice to meet you, to all the teachers in Generic_School that, i don't know.

But, i really would like to know, all the tecahers at Generic_School.

I am a hispanic boy, that i like to play, some sport after school, i really like to play, soccer, with my friends.

I like to come to school, to learn, about that the tearchers teachs to me, and all the students. I really appreciate that,

I don't like to be an ignorant boy, at school.

I always like to talk to the people, at shool, and i like to make new Friends, I like to be a respect boy, with all of the people.

I really like how, all the teachers at Generic_School, teachs to the students they, teachs to you really good.

I already read the

Prompt, and, I would like to describe that, and give my opinions, and reasons.

so let's started This. I know that so many students, want to have, some educational's experiences in some activities, but others Students do not want to be in activities, others students want to have all the homeworks, done. they don't want to Miss anything, at school and it's ok, If they want to be in an activities. Of course that the school always should have The student's control. Because students can have all very good without problems, and thats why the school and the Teachers should have their controls, all the students should have all done, if they want to be in an activity, because If the school did not take the controls, of the students they will not respect, the school's and the activitie's rulers, my Opinon will be that students should have time to do some activities and they should have time to study, to do all the Homeworks, like they don't should have a lot of activities, they needed to do the homeworks to. for example, if i Would like to be in some activities like sports i have to do all my homeworks first,have good grades at school. i Know that the activities are good for your body, normally the body always need some activities, the school always Have some activities to do and thats really good for your body. I see a lot people running by the roads like in the Summer because, it is good, for body and healthy. When i was in 10th grade i did have some activities at the gym From Generic_School and actually i did all the activities that the teachers tells to me and others students. it was very fun To do all the activities at gym from Generic_School. ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0
161E5C8A6719,"Studies has been showed that students that been committing to their dream career before entering high school would be most likely to get their career more successful than other students. However, it'll be a stressful/pressure thing for students because they would have to achieve it faster than others. The issue of students committing to a career at a young age is a stressful, mental thing, should not be considered because students would be more stress, they would focus on their future career and not themselves and high school makes everyone change their minds.

My firsts reason why students should not commit to their career at a young age is because they would be more stress throughout high school. Yes, high school seems like an easy place to stick to your future career but at the same time it's really not. If you commit to your career throughout high school, your're more likely to be stress because you feel like okay if i do this i'll achieve faster but not at the same time if i do this i won't be achieving. So technically you just put yourself in a position that you really can't get yourself out of. You're focus on one thing that in your other classes it's hard to think or studied about. Yes, committing is easy but it's not. Its's high school the place where your education change you. You would probably change your mind no time soon. Therefore, don't put yourself in the position to be stress.

Pressure is a main key to everything nowadays because it's ""fun"". However, it is not. Being put on pressure is the most hardest thing to be in because you feel like you have to do it to make someone or somebody proud. Like in this case your future career. You feel like you're pressure because you want to make your parents, teacher, your school admins proud and know that you can really commit to things. As days or weeks goes on, the pressure level goes up and up and when that goes up you kinda get depressed, sad and not yourself because you are doing this for them and not you.

High school changes everyone mind. As soon as, you walk into high school it's not the typically high school movie you think. It is place where students and teachers minding their selves and doing their know things. Middle school vs. High school are two different place. The classes are harder, high school have many many electives to pick from so like of course you are going to change so like why would you want to stick to your career at a young age when your haven't taken those other classes. Like your never know what you actually like when you have tried taken those classes.

In my personal opinion i would not commit to career at a young age. i learned from experiences and from other. Take the classes that you like in high and if you like keep moving on. If not, move to a different one. What your see on TV is not want you see in reality. So again in my opinion

Everyone is different, you are different. career is just a word. Don't push yourself at a young age. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
D9E7B148EF8C,"I DISAGREE

Hello there!!! do you know that Albet Einstein is one of the smartest person that ever live, he discover by using knowledge and imagination. Then he said this "" imagination is more important than knowledge."" I disagree because you see you use imagination and knowledge in the rest of your life, when you work as a team you use imagination and knowledge and you need to be fast, strong, and smart, and imagination and knowledge is important. OK' let me explain why i disagree what Albert Einstein said.

First, when you was a kid you use imagination to make things, to draw, to make discoveres, and to have fun. When you grow older you will get knowledges and use it to pass your test, do your homework, and more, but you use your imagination too. For example by thinking, to brain strom, to make music and more, is the same thing however you use knowledge with imagination. Both imagination and knowledge, you have those things from your rest of your life!!! Starting when you were a kid and when you grow older you still use both imagination and knowledge, thats one of my important reason why i disagree.

Second, you use imagination and knowledge when you work with somebody or working as a team, making something or thing how can we make it stronger or how can we win. if your working as a team and battling a robot battle you use imagination to think whats the best robot to build and how to make it stronger, that one of the examples. If you play sports you use knowlege to think what to do, how to win, its the same but you use knowledge. However theres a battle that you work as ateam, using imagination and knowledge, it is a war!!! let me explain its beacause you use imagination to know whats the plan, what is the things were using and knowledge to know when to attack , that one of my reason, when using imagination and knowledge in a team you need to be fast, strong, and smart.

The last one, imagination and knowledge is important, because imagination and knowledge is both important because if kids can't imagine theres no knowledge or if there no knowledge there no imagination. Every body need imagination and knowledges to do what they want and both of these is fun like they can make things, they work as a team, and it will be at there rest of there life. This last body or body 3 is conneted in body 1 and body 2 this is the most important reason. If there's no imagination there's no knowledges, both of does is important every one need imagination and knowledge.

That's all my reason why i disagree that ""imagination is more important than knowledge"" both of those is important, you use it by playing, making, thinking, and more, that's all i have to say that i disagree on albert eintein.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
E22F1FD54169,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote,""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.""I disagree with The Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because if you have already try to do something more than you have already mastered,

You will grow because now days there is too much competition in everything for examples Companies,Schools and Sports etc. I think if you try to do something more than you have mastered will make you more better than you are because if you have mastered in something it will not be a bad idea to practice more even you know everything because everyday somebody is getting good by watching people those have mastered everything so when they go against them they will beat the master because they already know whats the master is going to do and they will try to protect themselves. Here are some examples when people play video games like fortnite people be watching streamers from YouTube and twitch to get better and learn some new moves and after watching them for some weeks they know what they are going to do next and how they going to play at any bad or good situation

Here are some example like Apple is big company and Samsung is a big company they both have some bad relationships like Apple always make a good phone which is always better than Samsung but Samsung try their best to make a better phone than Apple so, Samsung has been trying to make better phones then Apple by trying to copy their features for examples the screen size, The GB, and motherboards. only reason Apple is making better phones because they have mastered everything and they are still making some new technology which Samsung might not able to make in next two or three years and here is a another example they are so many cars in the world for example Mercedes and Lamborghini they both are good cars Mercedes is a old company so they know everything about the car the way the want to make it luxury or fast and for example Mercedes is a fast and a luxury car where Lamborghini is a fast and luxury car,

Here is a last example like your coach if you play sports you need a coach which is going to teach you how to play and teach some moves that you can use to beat your enemy and make you strong and tell how to dodge some stuff when they try to hit you for example people play boxing and for new people they hires coaches which help them to learn how to play and stuff. and teach you how to defend your self from getting hit on your face or hitting him back.

The conclusion is yes, i disagreed with

The

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote,""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" and you need to practice everyday dont matter how good your there is a lot of completion out there and some people dont even know there are so many people better than them which some people dont even know what kind of abilities they got. they need to go to gym and stuff to know hat kind of abilities they better in a moth year or days. and to get their mind working antler and help them to have a good mind and learn how to grow better and teach you guys to learn and thaknyou for grading my essay I love you from heart and have a nice day. At the end of the day the light away the light",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
4751F39ECBC5,"thi don't really select a work in wat iam interest wight now but i think i can fget in the technology business because i is fun i like, and is interesting if i had a job i had to like it and thats why i pick this type of biseness and i think that position fo what the manger can give to me is like the guy who makes works from the computer like a graphics work like to create games because thats what i like and a'im good doing it so thats one of my options what i can get for work in a company of thechnology, If i get in a technologi company i wish it canbe about video games like i wish i can be like a graphic desainer so i can create characters of a videogame and olso i can money in the job that i like like oing what i like the most. thats the bsusiness i want to geot into it.",1.5,1.5,1.5,1.0,1.5,1.0
7AC357DAA5D7,"Its been said that a positive attitude is key to success in life. I agree, I think its nessasary to have a positive attitude in your everyday life , in your work place, in your ""time of need."" those are the most important times you will need to show your best.

First , I think its important to have a positive attitude in your everyday life because, of the stress that goes on. No one will understand how you feel other than you. If you stay in the mindset of "" i cant do this,"" ""this is too hard."" You will never see yourself prosper and grow. How can you have the biggest expectations in life when you are so dull and negative. To advance you need to be aware that everything is going to be okay, be reminded of that.

Secondly, your work place always has to stay positive. This is the place you go to work in , this is a place you try to distract yourself from the rest of the world. If you set your self to a person who feels as if they cant do anything then you will never reach that promotion youve been waiting for. If you set your self as the person who puts too much on themselves, you will never see growth. You can do the impossible it will just be up to you to change your circle.

Although, there are many people who live in doubt and build this wall of negativity in there life. You cannot be that person. Think about the little things in life , you have a roof over your head, your family is safe, you are safe. You never go a day without eating. Those are the little things that matter.

Lastly , in your "" time of need"" you should always be more optimistic. Whenever you are feeling down and feel like your world is falling apart be aware that your surroundings should never bring you negativity. There are so many other thing you could and should be thinking about, the little this matter in this life. Feelings are always temporary and you need to always make sure that the positive things impact you the most. Greater things are to come in everyone life.

In conclusion, being positive in many ways will always change your mindset . Positive attitudes are key to a better future and for the best success in your life. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
B9A542B2C36C,"I think students should not be able to take classes at home. Because is not going to benefit them with their work. Sometimes students dont know how to do their assignment assigned. Students need to communicate with others to gain more experience.

a lot of students needs help with one person to support them with their work. Some students are not smart enough to work by their-self. If students take classes at home they might have some issues.

For example from my point of view I think students should come to school. Because is more helpful for them they get help from their teachers. They communicate with others share their thoughts. If their having problems with their assignment they can ask for help.

however some students are not agree to come to school because they might not like to wake up early every morning or deal with others. Some students have bad attitudes and they dont like been with others or forced to talk. But it is more important to come to school because it benefits you gain more experience.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
5AC16E188F1B,"Today technology is arriving into the schools. Some schools offer distance leraning as an option for the students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think that this would benefit students? I believe that it would not benefit students because of technology distraction, student behavior, and the different in capacity and ability for a student to understand things.

First reason, technology is an useful tool that people can use to learn or discover things, but it can be a huge distraction on young people. Today the technology is everywhere and it has everything which make it a powerful distraction for student's. Also, the students can copy any work from the internet while they are taking their online classes. The students will not learn anything if they copy every single work from the internet. Most students on school classes get distracted really easy by something around him, and also get bored when the teacher explain a new theme. I believe that is going to be more bored and distracted being at home alone doing conference and watching videos about the class. My home can distracted me more than my phone or computer, most kids have a video game, TV, family, and so others things that can catch their attention.

Second reason, student behavior can be a problem with online classes. A

lot of students do not respect or listen to their teacher at school, and

I am not wrong thinking that it would be the same at home with online classes. Most of this students do not listen to their teacher because they do not understand the way that the teacher explain or they do not like the teacher. So you can have an idea of how worst it can be i will give you an example, if a student do not like the subject of the day he can easily end the video conference with his teacher or he can just not listen to what he is explaining. The student can also not enter in to the class at the right time. I believe the there should be someone near the student to tell them what to do and how to do it.

Last reason, not all students have the same capacity to understand things. Not all the students have the same capacity to learn or understand by just watching videos or looking at pictures. I am a person who need someone to be physically near by so he or she can tell me how to do things. All the students that have this disability would be affected by this type of classes and this would make them to loose their credit on the class. At the same time this new type of classes is creating a barrier between students, teachers, and school.

Conclusion, the online classes do not benefit students because it can create a barrier between students, teachers, and school. The technology used for this programs can generate a distraction, and that can be a huge problem on future, the environment and behavior of the student can be a barrier too, and the different in capacity or ability to understand things can also represent an huge problem. At the end non one benefit from this online courses. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
2E8A8C550F8D,"This essay is about some schools offer distance learning as an option for the students attend classes form home by way of online or video conferencing , I think some students would benefit from take classes by their houses, because some students work in the night this is a problem for the students who working in the night because the school start 7:30 this is to early for some students because they work and they don't sleep well.

Example one is about my friend he work after school sometimes he work between

5 to 12 and he after this he need to wake up at 5 for go to the school , I think this is heavy for him because he always is tire in the first class because he can sleep well in the night , but he need to graduated from high school because this is the only way he can have a better life. Many students in high school work after school , I think this program can help they because they can continue working and they can sleep more , this can help they to have a better grades because they can sleep more because sometimes they have a bad grades because they don't have the time to do the homework and the study for the test .

Example 2 is about the many girl in high school are pregnant , this program can help this girls because I see many girls don't want to return to high school , when they are pregnant because when they're pregnant sometimes people say bad thinks about they ,because they're to young for have a baby. but with this program they can take the classes from their houses .This can help they to graduated from high school because this is a better way to completed their classes , cause sometimes many girls decide to continue in the normal schools but when they have the baby they can not to continue because they need to take care for the baby. but with this program they can finish their classes.

For my conclusion this is a good idea because they can help many students who have some problems . because they can finish high schools , because they don't have time because sometimes they need to work. but with this program they can help this students because this is a good idea for help this students . because they can benefit if they take the classes from their houses.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
14CC79B9F334,"I agree with Emerson's statement because we have always to be like we are all the time. We dont have to pretend be other person just to like someone . For some people be yourself is hard. Sometimes we do things that we never do just to have more friends and that is bad. We dont have to try or pretend be cool or acting different just for that. I think that be yourself is an accomplishment. In the world is a lot of people that you can talk quite freely, but those people sometimes are hypocrite because they are acting like they are people that you can trust. People who sometimes do not look good or something can be better than people who look kind.

I am food runner in a restaurant and literally most people loves me in there. I have been working for 6 months in there. All that I have to do is be food runner, but sometimes I help the servers and if I help them is because I wanted. they sometimes say thank you, sometimes they say nothing but I do not care that. and one day one server asked me about why you help them and I said I am just been myself and I

like it.

I think if one person is good doing something and that person decide to do that all the time, that person can achieve too many things.

When I was 9 years old I start to play soccer, and when I turned 10 I tried to enter to the team of my city where I lived, and I could not enter to the team. Some people probably should make a decision to leave everything, but when I see that I could not enter to the team I tried to be better for the next time, and the next year I achieve to enter to the team, and what I think is the importance to be yourself be positive. After play 1 year in the team of my city the next year the coach of the state team talked to me and he said that he was watching me all the time when I was playing, and he said that I am a really good player, and that he wanted me in his team .When I make the decision to go to the new team my friends told me that they are going to miss me. They wrote a letter saying thanks for you friendship and for be an example that all that we have to do is ""to be yourself"" and go for what do we want to do, and I told them that if we do what we want everything is going to be easy and fun.

the phrase to be yourself means that we have to be always how we are not change or pretend be other person just for have more friends or something, and if we do something that we like do it. If we do that we are going to accomplishment everything.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
27E725D251A8,"Do you think people aways succeed without any challenge in their life?.

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is right.

Some people sometimes decide to isolate because they cannot handle the pressure of this world being a human is not easy becasue sometimes you just feel that the comments that the people make about you are real, but everybody should be strong and be themselves,because we as humans we can do anything that we want to achieve our goals and never pay attention to those comments because we can show them who we really are.

Firts, desire a lot of people when they see someone that is doing great on their life, sometimes people don't like it, others ones start thinking on doing it becuase they know the this man/woman are there because they work hard, in this world nothing is easy to have unless you work so hard to get it but never try to be soemeone else and is not necessary to do things that you don't like because you are trying to be like one else not do the mistake the most important thing is that you are going to show to those people that did not believe in you that nothing is impossible even when this world if full of envy.

Second, confidence now people around the world what they see in a person is their appearance,clothes, shoes, etc, now people are like trying to be something that they are not to try to fit in this fake world, but you know there is where you realize that is wrong to be honest things don't matter what really matter is who you are you and what can you offer to this world that is trying to kick you out, but you start getting confidence and that is a big challenge to try be youse around people that don't see life the way you see it.

Third, success as the world give you hard times you start to be strong, sometimes you have to go through things ` that you start to think about giving up, but you quickly think that you are wrong that you are going to make it even if is impossible like the author says ""To be you yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplsiments.""

Some people have lose their confidence becuase they are trying to be something that they're not, people think that being fake is the best way to fit, i don't think like them i think that you should you be who you really are.

In a world where you have to fight to be yourself and don't get lost in the fantasy that the world offers you that is the greastest accomplisment. A lot of people might argue that is not true, but they are all wrong because people always can be themselve if they wants even is the world if full of lies is their responsability to make real their dreams.

In the future i will try to tell the people that nothing is imposible, to not be afraid of who they are that each person if different in that is what make us special.

In this life you just have to be youlself enjoy every moment because after you get old you will regret everything that you didn't because you just were to be busy trying to be someone you are not.

To conclude, life sometimes gives you the opportunity to discover who you really are and know what is what you wants.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
4665A1D77D6C,"In this passage i will tell you my point of view of this, I believe that it dosen't matter how much experience someone has over the other person, it only increases there chances of getting picked, and only by a small margin. my reason is that people shouldn't pick a person by what or how much experience they have, but pick the people that are best for the job such as being a hard worker, fast learner, or by being determined to work. you might not have the experience but they can still pick you for the job, all you have to do is to prove to them that you can do learn it and will be able to do after it.

I think getting a new job is like learning a new unit in a class all you need is a person to show you how they do it and improve on that and, you will have setbacks or things that you won't understand. but you will still have the teacher or the person that is helping you, that can tell you if your doing something wrong or to answer your questions. once you had enough practice with it, you can help other people that have the same problems as you or the same questions. by getting the job you've learned how to do those things and how to teach other people how to do it too. you don't need experience you need people with experience to teach you so you can teach other people.

In my experience to have a good worker they don't need to have experience, they only need people to teach them while there working seeing what they are doing wrong and improving on that. while i was working in a construction job, i was making mistakes all over the place, i wasn't doing well with tools or machines, sometimes i would cut the materials too small or too large, so most of the time i would hand it over to one of my coworkers and with the tools, most of the time would get them mixed up, for example one coworker will ask for a tool and my mind would just be blank then they would just get it themselves, so after i had to practice with the tools and by the end of the time i was working there i never got one thing wrong, this proves that all you need is practice during the job or work, it dosen't matter if you have never done it before all you need to practice.

Although i do acknowledge the people with experience have more of a chance to get the job there going for but all i'm saying is that you shouldn't doubt yourself when someone has experience and you don't, just keep your eyes open and your head strong and see if you got the job, and if you didn't, try another time, it dosen't matter if you fail to get the job once or multiple times, it dosen't matter if someone has more experience then you, if you prove to them that you can work harder then them, and learn more then them they will pick you for the job. all you need to do is go to the interview and show what you can do and what sort of person you are.

In this passage i have show that you don't need to have the experience to get the job or being a good worker, you just need to be determined to do the work and they will recognize that, and they will respect you more. but only if you do good work you can't expect good things to happen because of bad results, but if you prove to them that you will be able to learn how to do it then you will get the job. i have also shown my own experience with it of being a worker that had no experience to being the one that never messed up at the end. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
9A24CB0724FE,"Dear, principal

I think that is required to have community service . I would said because if they got in trouble they could serve time in community service. If kids help we could help the environment around us and people that need help. We could help families in the community. That is why I think we",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
10D5A47D0859,"I disagree whit this statement,because positive attitude is not the solution for all your problems in life there are many problem that you can beat.

when you came to this country and you are alone and dont have help from other people you just cant be positive you dont understand the language and if you are illegal you dont have the many benefit like if you are born here in the united stated you have to hide from the police sometime you can not find a good job because your situation.

2. when you lost someone important in your family and you cant go to se then because you were in other country etc. you can not be positive for this reason i said what i positive attitude is not good of all.

3. if you are from other country some people discriminate you may be they think is easy to be here they dont think about the danger than you have to pass to be here they discriminate you by your skin color and becouse they think you came to this country just to make money and then came back to your country but sometimes you came to suscive and make a knew lefe but many people dont understand that and they trate you so bad and who can have a positive attitude by this reason.

4. yeah! is right there are many thinks to be positive, like your family,frirnds,girfriend have a good jod, graduate from high school is other reason to ve happy and positive but sometime you just can be positive.

some time when you feel bad and you have a bad economic situation youcant caund whit your friendsbecouse they tell you that tney can help you becouse they dont have the resources but some of then are lyan and if you know it you fell like their are playing whit you and that is not a reason to be positive.

so my point is that you can be all the positive you can but sometime bad thinks happens like youare immigrant and you can se your family and that make you be negative.",3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
1D82FAFE677B,"well i think its a good idea because it would help out the future and give other students different opportunities that they enjoy for there choice of carrier. For example in the real life students should understand the choice of there carrier because different carriers have different working conditions. This shows that students would enjoy there future. this shows that students would enjoy there choice of there carrier. this shows that students would deal with there working conditions. this shows that students would get better understanding there choice. some people may believe that students should commit a carrier because they would enjoy what those would do. However some students would not would not there carrier because they would think about it cause there other carriers that might interest them.

well most carriers can interest students because it would give them a different experience of what they do. most students might of seen there parents work on there carrier that they might seem interested. this shows that students should see what there parents would do on the carrier that they would interested on .this shows that students would enjoy that experience if they seemed interested. this shows students would be enjoy there experience by the same carrier. this shows that students would enjoy same carrier that there parents work. some people may believe that students would work on same carrier that there parents work on because most students might have the same experience. however students would choose a different that they like.

well most students can go online and learn what carriers could do. Example students would use there computer to learn what carriers can do. this shows that using technology would help them with there interest. this shows they could ask someone that work on a carrier that they interest. this shows that carriers could help out the future. this shows that carriers could have different experience. some people may believe using electronics would help out the carriers that you were interested because they could understand what they do. however other carriers would something different. ",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
1D944BF5BE87,"Yes I think it is a good idea for students to plan their career early because students can be prepared for the real world, it can help with jobs, and it could help them in college. When students graduate they will face challenges . They have to find a job to support their needs. Students will also need to find what they want to do in life to make them be successful. A planned career really gives a head start to those who want to achieve more and be prepared.

The real world is tough if you dont have a plan because it can be too late to accomplish goals. Planning at a young age gives students advantages for their work. This also helps with a students resume if they want to attend college.

Jobs want students who are successful and take work seriously. When a student graduates they want to make it in life and not struggle.

Another reason students should plan early is for jobs. A job gets people money and they can use this for more school or for other needs. A planned job at a young age is a very good head start for many reasons. Students can save up for college or by a vehicle. An early job gives them a lot of experience and helps benefit when they look for more places to work outside of school.

More reasons students should plan their careers early is for college. College helps keep them in school giving more education. More education and knowledge also helps students get better jobs. Getting better jobs helps students make more money for their future. The money helps support their needs for example like owning a house.

Some people today dont want to go to college which does not mean they wont be successful. Sometimes students prefer to find better jobs to make a living without anymore education. When students dont plan ahead that also does not mean they are always too late for anything. Students would sometimes need more time to figure want they want to do in life. As long someone works hard they can accomplish all their goals and commit to a career at a young age.",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
323F5DADC975,"Dear principal

I think is great idea that the student must B average to participate in sports because it would help student there grades and benefit or learn more. some many kids all the world want to be sport famous player. and another reason is that they have to do their homework , study for their test and participate in class so that can play any activities they want or dream about that they will be come one day. getting B or A average in every day i would be awesome because some o]f the student don't believe that they can do they work and get good grand to they can play the sport the like to be come on day.

always believe in your self no matter what other thing about. once again i love

that idea !!!!.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
BDC0340D4BD5,"Dear Generic_Name,

I have always wanted an opportunity to visit and learn about the police force. I am very interested in crime and like to help people. At school I am taking a criminology class. I would like to look for more opportunities to see what it's like to be a cop. Not only do I like to help people I like to solve things. I am interested in making this my job and I want to be able to understand everything that cops do. I want to be selected to explore new things and further my knowledge on how to be a good cop.

In additon, I am capable of doing this and I believe I can go far in this career. I will take this opportunity serious and I will let it teach me new things. I am open to knowing what's it's really like out in the world. Having to solve things and really working your head to solve a case is what I find really intresting. If I could help anyone in any way I would and that is what cops do everyday. I know that this will help me pursue a career in the police force.

In conclusion, as the manager of the police force I hope that you can see that I am capable of doing this and will select me to visit. The like I have for solving things and helping others will help me as a cop. I strongly believie I can be a good cop when I get older. Having criminology class made me want to be a cop even more. I hope that you select me to learn and see what it's like to work in the police force.",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
E0ED97D6F88B,"Dear principal ,As a student i think we should balance The school menu of healththeir school lunches is a good idea and also a bad idea, the resaon why is when most students don't take care of their own body by eating junk food but most student like their favorite food for example, most students in my class when they eat their favorite food for example pizza, in lunch it will affect their stomach but not only their stomach but they have nothing health besides milk to eat.

My second reason is when you eat health on school days your body will feel better and relax and also when you eat healthier foods your body can help you in the future as you grow older health foods in school would be a great way for students not to be sick and they need protein to grow.

My thrid reason is if you take away our favorite food most students wont eat the healtheir food, remember when their was no Fried Chicken friday at lunch and thats like everyones favorite food the school was so upset they didnt eat lunch for the day over chicken. So in conclusion I think that we should balance them out like their should days were we eat health foods and days we can eat favortite foods.

When the food is Balance students will be able be more happy if they just have both their favorrite foods and something Health to eat, so in my opinon i really hope you make students have both their favorrite foods and healtheir foods so that all students would be happy and so as their body.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",2.5,2.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
F75D6E5CCE78,"Imagine how life would feel like when you can't have your favorite food at your favorite spot in school? would it even be fun to go to school or not. About a week or two ago i went to Panda Express to grab some food on my way home but at the time that I got there, I asked to get some white rice with some orange chicken but the workers told me they have changed their menu a little bit so i can't have some,at that point i fell so sad because that was the only spot that sold some in town. I think the change of the school menu would be a bad idea because,it will make students leave the school ground to go get some food in a illegal way,it would also bring some money problems in school and it would also make some students keep on empty stomach during the school day till they get home to prepare some food.

secondly,If students leave the school ground to go get some food in a illegal way andthey never came back, this would leave the parents worried because since the principal decided to change the menu they would have a reason for leaving school ground. Mr. principal i would be happy to tell you to leave the menu like how it is because it would make some students get in trouble and a lot of incidents will happen when they leave.0nce a bad incident happen out of the school ground,the principal would be responsible for all the damages caused when they left, keeping the old menu would be a good idea but we don't want our accidents and school detentions to increase.

In addition to this it would cause some money problems because if students are going to have to eat healthy then how would they gain more money easily to support the school when they are in needs of something. This is some of the way you can make more money so, Mr principal if you decide to change it the school is going to have to shut down at a point because when is no money to operate the school and pay the teachers and custodians they would have to leave their job and get a better one and once everyone one is gone there would be any teachers to teach the students. Mr principal because of this reason we should keep the old menu so that students and teachers can enjoy their selves in the school.

Therefore if the principal end up using the healthy menu this will led to some students getting sick because they will have to leave their stomach empty and they can't have what they want. This will cause a protest in the county because they supposed to eat what they like, and what the cafeteria think will be good for them to eat. In case of this of this reason the teachers will teach for no reason because the student are so focused on going home to eat what their mom or dad have prepared waiting for them,so if the principal wants them to focus in class then he is supposed to give them what they like.

In conclusion i think leaving the old menu would be a good idea because if the principal wants the students to try to improve in their class then he should leave it. Therefore if the students wants to add th healthy menu on it then he should let them vote on it whether they agree on what he is saying but i would say leaving the old one should be the best for the students.                    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F5609AECDD96,"People think that working with a group is because they can talk to other more. If they work together they can talk more and joke around. The can even get lunch and hang out if they have a break time. Some people like to talk a lot and geting to know the people they work with.

If you are working with a group you can get more frends they can get more friends by talking to them. Second by doing things for them like helping them with their homework. You also ge more friends by making them laugh and giving them things.

I know it is hard getting to know people more getting to know people can be hard because some people are shy like me. It might take them a while to met new poeple. Some people just do not like talking because they can be really shy and get nervous their hands can get really sweaty.

I chose working wih a group because the benefis can help out a lot of people like me that are really shy and onse I get to know them I won't get shy as much like I use to be. Finally people are fun to hang out with like my English teacher Generic_Name she is a really good teacher and makes everyone smile and laugh. That is why I chose working with a group because people like Generic_Name can make their job fun and exiced also making it fun to learn. I hope you enjoy reading this and I also wish this makes sense when you are reading this.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
A263E403FAC3,"it's a gtood idea for us the students, like that we could know what we want to study when we be graduated from the high school. we have a lot of time to think about it. I would like to study for pilot, so i can try to choose one class to be related about that and learn about how to drive an airplane.

But, Not all the schools has these benefits and also because some students don't have how to go to these schools and all of us students do not can go to any high school. I think that's the only bad thing because if you drive, you just can go and then back your home and some times if someone is giving to you ride is good as well but it's not gonna be every time then you would have to find who can take you to school and who can pick you up from the school.

Well I think we the student to commit to a career at a young age is well because we can be graduated more early.

the good news is if you go to thats schools you can learn more and choose what do you wanna study for college thats a good point and also you may have a lot of opportunities, In some high schools you needed have good grade for going there and passing clases too.

in others words if you don't have a good grades you can't sign for that schools.

You needed be prepare every time, If you do, You can study in the best university and achieve your dreams.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
FD98A503573E,"Do you think that a positive attitude is the key to success in life?

some people said that positive attitude can help you in life.

positive attitude is the key to success in many ways in life.

I agree, because in many opportunity that you will have in life, is that you will know a lot of people in life with out positive attitude. One of the most important things that a person can have in life is positive attitude, if you are one of those persons with positive attitude, you will get more opportunity around the world.

In my own opinion positive attitude can help many people out there in life, having positive attitude can help a lot in the person. Example: when you go to work, if you have positive attitude you feel good all the time, also you will be able to talk with your friends in a way that you would not affect someone around you.

Those who have a positive attitude you will success in life. Example in my family, my grandparents has been successful in life only with positive attitude, they always have faith in the things that they will do, also one of my grandfathers said that all you need in the world or in a the work area is positive attitude, if you had that you will get all you want. in many opportunity that you will live in real life, is when you are ready to do something but you are not sure to do it, that's where you will put your positive attitude to do it on own place i would said that having good attitude is one of the best things that a human can have good attitude would give you more opportunity, when someone with positive attitude wake up at the morning the first thing that they do is smile at the mirror.

Positive attitude is a good thing to have but, some people with out positive attitude they think different in a way, that they dont know what are they are doing to be as the person that have positive attitude in life.

In the future positive attitude is going to be one of the most important thing around the world and also in your life.

conclusion if you have a good attitude you will successful in life. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
AD097EE6B6D7,"Always doing something it's better than doing nothing.

staying in the same place where you star is better; however, doing something is always better.

it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us the best opportunities, it gives us a good future, and it can help us to make good choices.

First, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it gives us more opportunities. we can have a job were we can earn a lot money to support your family .we can have the car that we want because we work to get the car. we can have a house for us. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us more opportunities.

Next, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us a good future. We can have a good future because we will know how to deal with adult problems. In our future we can earn a lot of money because we will know how to work hard to earn that money. We can have a house were it can be all my family. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us a good future.

Finally, it is better to always do something to accomplish what you want because it helps us to make choices. we can choose the best career that we know it's going to help us in the future. If someone knows that he want to be a engineer he needs to take a career were he can learn everything about enginnering. We can choose what kind of job it's fore us. It is better to always do something to accomplish what we want becauase it help us to make good choices.

In conclusion, it is better to always do something to accomplish what we want because it give us the best opportunities, it gives us a good future, and it can help us to make good choices. we can have a job were we can earn a lot money to support your family. We can have a good future because we will know how to deal with adult problems. If someone knows that he want to be a engineer he needs to take a career were he can learn everything about enginnering. always do something it's better.        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F83702EEB830,"I agree with it because everyone has to do something productive in school and playing a sport is good for our health, yearbook writing is good for our spelling, and serving in a student council makes you be more confident and talk more with other people.

Playing a sport is the best way to make our bodies stronger and healthy, it also helps us mentally when you are going through times going outside and playing helps you a lot. Playing a sport in school helps you have more energy and be ready to learn it likes opens your mind. Soccer for example is helps your body be stronger, Volleyball helps your hands be more stronger, Basketball helps you jump higher, and Football helps you run faster.

Writing or coloring the yearbook is a great idea too, because you are writing something that everyone is going to see so i know you gonna write neat and correctly. Coloring is good for our brains too it helps us be calm and out of stress. Spelling is one of the most important things and writing helps it improved it, coloring is something that not everyone knows how to do it, but by practicing we are gonna learn.

Serving in a student council helps you a lot because you learn something very important and thats learning how to communicate with other people and be nice. Sometimes its hard to communicate or talk to other people but we have to do it because sometimes the people needs someone to talk to and someone to be there for them. Helping to helping is a best thing you can do maybe you are not getting something from it but at least your being a helper.

In conclusion I think that everyone has to do something is school it doesnt matter what but we have to. School is not just for learning and being bored in class, school is for you to be happy and confortle with everything, we can make school fun.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
E2C3F26AB94D,"Something I'd like to accomplish in the future would be to practice my singing because it makes me happy, it can turn into fun and games with your friends, it helps relieve my stress, and you can freestyle when you sing. Lastly, I think that singing is very fun and helpful.

Singing makes me happy because whenever I'm done singing a song it makes me smile. Once I'm done singing a song I'll have the urge to sing more because I love to sing. Ever since I was a little girl I would occasionally ask my dad to sing to me and ever since then I've always been passionate about singing. I sing whenever I'm sad and then I choose a song and I'll sing to the song I chose and it'll make me happy.

Me and my best friend play around a lot and when we do we'll start singing but in a fun way. We'll be so off key. And start goofing around. We'll do singing contests. This one time we did a singing contest that went on for hours and it turned out to be a tie. So we did a rematch and she won that rematch. So we had another one then I won.

Singing has been helping me relieve my stress a lot lately. Because since SOL's are like right around the corner I've been singing to just get my mind off everything that's stressful. I felt relieved to sing because I hadn't sung in quite a while. I also felt very happy to sing, after singing I was energetic.

In conclusion,

I think that singing is very fun and helpful and it can also get your mind off anything that bothers you.",3.0,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E1DB041DD77B,"The statement positive attitude is the key to success in life is true,the attitude is important in life. No one want to live their life with the negative way that not good for everyone, their family, and everyone around them. Let thinking about that when you have positive attitude and good energy and give it to everyone first thing you got is people will love you because that make people feel comfortable when near by, they feel your positive energy you giving to them,and you will have a good friendship when you give them the best feeling they need after all the problem, stress in their life. The second thing is that make yourself happy, life is tired you will not happy if always have a negative attitude in life, no one can make you happy except yourself. The last one is some people think they are having very bad life, they always get the worse thing than other people, and they want to give up but if they looking around them they are not the one have the baddest life. Follow that way you will never become success.

When you do a good thing make everyone happy and you will feel like you are so cool, you are very good, anyway you will feel happy because you was did a good thing and when they happy they will give their love, their respect. They like you and when you get in trouble they will help try their best to help you without your money like the way you make them happy. Or the long time no see they still remember you in the good memory, and not forget you make feel you important in the world everyone not forget you, that is the success in life.

I am very sure most of us learn from teachers and parents are always the positive way and positive attitude, they will not teach you some thing bad and negative, what is mean? That mean they want you to live the most happy you can because they know they can't go with you or following you forever. The success not mean you become you must be rich or must become famous, you can think it the easy way is make yourself happy. For example, when you rich but you not live positive attitude and people not respect you, love you, support you, or you always worry about your money, you get stress or some people always say they love you but for real they just love your money when become poor they will leave, I am sure you still not happy for that way.

People think they have very bad life and always think the worse thing that the negative attitude and it will go with you forever and you never have the better life, the life you want and you never become successful. Why people always say never give up or you don't know how far you can touch your dream, you think it very far away, some it next to you but you just don't take your chance and your time to finish your dream. For example you think you don't know or not good at anything, why you don't try it? whatever you are you still not doing great for the first time just do your best, you can do better for the next time, you will never know what you can until you try it, you believe you could and you did it. When you touch your dream by hard-working, and you will know the challenge in the life make you grow up.

in conclusion, the success in life is can be base on the attitude you have, the positive is always good thing for your life, that make you life is easier don't make you life become too hard. The first of all you need make yourself happy, then you can make other people happy, finally don't give up make your life going up by your hard-working if you can do all of those thing you are successful not by your career or your money but by your good energy and positive attitude make it become success.                  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
753E320B186B,"In my opinion as a student: I don't agree at this type of method but the same time is good for students and teachers to learnd everyday, life is like a school we never stop learning something everyday and acquire new expirence and skills in our grammer. I should go neither everybody need their will to vote what they want to do or spend their summer break as they like.

like you see is their break and is not fair to obligate a student to do a project with out a vote to give them a choice to pick if they want to do it or not. Example; like the elections a President can't be a President with out votes, the country pick their own candidates and the citizens give the vote to the person they pick best for their country

Most likely everything have a vote in our community fuction nothing move with out a vote to people is fair to vote,

that how it works ",2.0,2.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
591B7E3E2B40,"When people ask for advice, they mostly don't talk to one person they talk to more then one. This can help you and other people to make a better choice. They can give you more opinions. You would have more people to talk. They all have different ideas.

One reason that can help you and other people to make a better choice is talking with more people other then one. When you are talking to more then one person they have more opinions then one person. Making a cirlce and talking about what you think is going to help you make a better choice could help more then one person. If you think that one opinion is not going you make you do a better choice you have another choice to make.

Talking to more people for an advice. They could have different ideas that you can help you with the right choice that you want to make. You can hear different people taliking and not only one. If you and other people think that the choice that you are going to make is not a good choice you have more then one person to talk to. You would have more people that will help you with your adice.

This are my reasons why this can help more people make a better choice. They are many more reasons that can help people to make a better choice. If you are talking to one person they are going to help you but if you are talking with more then one person. You have a better chance to make a good choice.      ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
46D16CB314CD,"People often use a good attitudes to successed their goals for their life. A good attitudes can help other in suretin prombles. People use a good attitude to help other like job, homework, or chorse even if they having difficult time. Having a good attitudes provide peoples with helping other and successed your goals.

Helping other is a good way to provide them with a good attitude for their life. For example, I help my friends with homework or a study guide. If they're stuck on a questions or a promblem I can help answer the questions and give them a easy way for them to know. Even if they having a difficult time. I can help them if there is a problem, so I can help them. Helping other is a good attitude becuase it's help other if they have a problem and people can help others in the future.

Successed what your goals is a other way for them with a good attitude. For example, my goals is to get good grades, so can go to colleg. I work hard on my homework so I can get good grabes, but sometime it's difficult to do my homework even if I don't have much timein class to get some help. All though I still get some help from my parents at home. Aachiveing your goals is a good attitude because it's help me achiveing my gaols and it can help in the future.

It concluded that having a good attitudes helps other to succesed their goals. There are still many ways to have a good attitudes like helping other that provide people will helps other if needed or achiveing your gaols that helps what your achiveing. Even in life can hard sometime we'll always need something that's good for once to get our self together.    ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
ECF265A73C7E,"According to the Washington Post, there has been an increase in student population in schools around the U.S. they are being crowed with more and more students every year. Because of this more students in the future will need to take online classes at home instead of going to the school and doing so. Being able to do class work at home, will benefit the students that live far from the school; they attend and make it easier for them to get the education they still need. Distance learning will also help the students manage there time better. Because of the fact the students don't have to go and spend time at the actual school. The travel time it takes the students to go and come back from school would not be a factor anymore if they attend online classes in there house.

A reason distance learning could benefit students is that it could improve student attendance. If you were sick and could not go to school you can work on the things you will miss at school. Another thing is that for the students that struggle with transportation to get to school on certain days; instead they can finish the school work at home which would be easier instead of stressing over how they are going to get to school. The way it would benefit students is that it will help them focus more on work than instead of focusing on transportation to school.

This could also benefit on the days that school gets canceled. For example school gets canceled because of a snow day or some other reason. Something that is really big on news right now is the outbreak of the Coronavirus. The U.S. is deciding to close schools in certain states around the country. Distance learning could benefit by if some schools were to actually close, it would not affect student education as much as it would if there was not a way to learn at home. If there was a snow day and some parents did not want there kids to walk to school on the sidewalk because it was dangerous; and they could drive them either because of the fact they had to go to work. A easier and safer way would be just to have them do the school tasks in there house. In the past when it rained or snowed really hard and the next day I had to go to school sometimes the roads would be flooded or their would have been an acident that prevent me from getting to school. In those cases it would be nice to have the option to learn from home instead of going through the trouble to figure out a way on how to get to school.

In some cases it is better for the students to work at school than it is at home. A reason being is at school they can meet new friends and be in a better working and studying envoirment. Another thing would be that their are less things that could distract you from completing work. For example when you are at home you have all your computers, phone, TV, and things like a Xbox that could get you distracted or off topic. When you are at school their are friends that can distract you to but when you are in class it is hard to do anything else besides work. The reason is that your teacher won't let you go on your phone or talk to your friends as much before you finish with your in class assignment. A Benefit from going to school is that a lot of the things that you learn come from talking or hearing it from people at school. So if you attend classes at home instead of going to school it impacts some things that you could actually learn from going to school. A lot of the things I have learned in my past is from talking or asking a friend how to complete an assignment, if you are at home and have nobody to talk to it is not as beneficial as it is going to school.

The fact being that their are benefits from learning at home and learning at school. Because when you are at home you can get distracted easier cause their is no teacher that is watching over you to complete your assignments. But when you are at school you are surrounded by other kids that could talk to you and disturb you on doing your work. Their are pros and cons in both situations but having the option to attend classes at home is better than not having the ability to. Because of that I think that distance learning is better in most cases cause it gives you more options in how you can complete work.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
F7E091B1D163,"Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble?

In this essay I will discuss as to why curfews could be a necessary law for teenagers.

One of the reasons curfews could help out parents keep their children safe is that teenagers like to hangout with friends late at night and having a curfew for teenagers could prevent them from getting in some sort of trouble.

Another reason why curfews could keep teenagers more safe is teenagers think they know everything in this world but in reality they don't know how the world really is and anything can happen at any certain time.

The finale reason why I think some teenagers need to have curfews is because some teenagers are still not mature enough to be out late at night and something could possibly happen to them. I think the 3 reasons listed above is more than enough evidence to have curfews for teenagers to keep them safe and to keep parents aware and calm for their children. As a parent or guardian of a teenager we all want to keep our children as safe as possible because anything could happen outside our homes.

In concussion I think the 3 reasons listed above is more than enough evidence to have curfews for teenagers to keep them safe and to keep parents aware and calm for their children. As a parent or guardian of a teenager we all want to keep our children as safe as possible because anything could happen outside our homes. Curfews can be good thing to keep parents aware of what their children are doing but I personally think they should not be a law for every teenager. For example some parents they are OK with letting their child to be out late at night but as long as they stay in contact with a parent at all times. That shows that not every teenager in this world is irresponsible and is aware for their own actions. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
E0EEC1CE4679,"I'm an 8th grader and I would like to shared somethings the I would like to accomplish in the futere. My firs thing the I would like to accomplish in the future is to gradute from Hight school and Collage because many benifts if you graduated frome Higth school and Collage you can have a better job like being a nurse and a lawyer and many diffrents types of jobs and you can be a professional worker. But you have to work hard a school dont get introuble at school and not have a bad record so you can accomplish to graduated from Hight school and Collage .In my opinion is worth it be in school for seven hours to pay atention in school cause it will help a lot in your future .The second thing I would like to accomplish is to learn French because that's one of the lenguage I'm intersted on because I like French culture and I feel that French is an easy lenguage to learn because its similar to Spanish and I would like to have the opportunity to know three lenguages (Spanish,Inglesh and, French) and if you know more than one lenguage you can help another people at school and you can also get paid more on your Job .The third thing the I really want to accomplish is to help my parents when I'm older I really want to do this have been with me all the time ,they are been such a good perents I know the they probably wont need my help but I really want to accomplish this goal for many other reasons one of them is because this is coming out of my heart. I ask god to let give them the opportunity to see me and my brother grow and make them proud once againg. The last thing the I would to accomplish is to help the shelters where all the immigrant people are because they are looking for a better future for there family because sometimes there life is in risk and they dont want there family lifes in risk so thats why they risk their life to come to this country.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
78E692CD7085,"Students should have to commit career at a young age bacuse they can trust what their are doing. Studrents can reach their goals.

Students who commit to a career at a young age always doing better things in them life, and when students get a old age he or her always know what they have to do because they trust their work when they was young.

Ex: Generic_Name said, when she was a young, she was trust her things and it was always teaching her many thing and shows her what to do and how to be, and many people was care about her, they was not doing them things without her, when they want to do their things, they was waiting her because she was help them and teaching their, and she get an achievement in her life, and reach her goal.

Students having to commit to a career at a young age to get an achiever in future, they doing what their trust, and they always doing what they know because they believe that whatever they trust puting them in a good way to reach them goals.

Ex: Generic_Name said,When she was young, to commit to a career was the best thing that put her in the best way, and believe her thing, when she belive her things, always she was in a good way and it always protect her life, and many people get to respect her, because there are people who was not having an respect to her, and it's shows her what kind of something she have to do that can give her the way to reach her goal.

Coulcaim:Many people said, Students should not having to commit to a career at a young age because it's not important in their life,it cannot help them anything at all.

Therefore: to commit to a career can teaching students nothing in their life, they cannot trust or believe them work or what they are doing.

Coclusion: To commit to a career in life makes students to understand many things, and if students trust them things they can get good safe in their life, they can teach others and protect their life, and students having to trust them things in lives, students cannot lives without trust what they are doing and reach their goals.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
F61FB474D85F,"The city council adoption the curfew for teenagers.

There need have curfew for teenagers why because need be outside midnight , weekend need to be at home going to sleep. A study say that teenagers how have cufew work hard at school , but how didn't have a cufew breake the law more have trouble do great at school. Why a teenagers need to be street midnight do something wrong or you came back from a party , or you do gang thing. What are you going midnight , how do that outisde i know not me evergybody this tired want be outside.

It the cufew is adoption teenagers in the street can be no more.

There new law at Generic_City council say that cufew for teenagers for 10pm .

It meain the a teenage walk the on street after 10 pm you breaken the law

Ever a police see he can take to jail . The city make the law for safe of teenage didn't see how onsafe it to be out midnight. we trought you was inside at home on the street we thing in home you not .

The commerity say why can you make law for teenagers cufew make one .

Evergyone say why do you make that law not great for are teenagers intertere in there live.

Do cufew keep teenagers out of trouble ?

The cufew keep teenagers out of trouble this not one man job evergyone need to work like a tearm for teenager can say out of trrouble .

the first thing what time are teenagers going outside ,where are you going . Talk to are police man lit know see a teenagers , walk midnight ask me where your home they're listing take him to jail .

Are one thing are child safetin we can have are teenage midnight do wrong thing.For police man it hard pickup the phone to a mother say yhat her son ,or her dougther are deid . This why have a cufew it ver need to have so know one have go to hard time last son, dougther ,

we intertere in teenagers live beacuse they didb't know what bad or good see what on the other side can bad or good .

The teenagers do think they thing after see they large preplem they need help this why were say safe go first.

A city coyncil is adoptiion cufew .

What time cufew start 10pm .

Do cufew keep teenagers out of trouble.

The teenager need a cufew

Yes !",2.0,1.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
E57E60E07425,"Conserving Energy and Resources

To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Conserve energy and resources through this model could be a helpfully way for the school. It can be a support form for the community area. Following this model by extending the school day two hours can be method to conserve energy and resources.

First, conserve energy and resources through extend the school day two hours, the school can give necessary resources for whom need those resources in the community. For example, in the community close to the school live some families with not much resources. They do not have money for pay the energy or buy needs as water or food. The only way that they can have resources as energy is through a big building as a school in the community. In other words, if the school follow this model by extending the school day two hours can conserve energy and resources and give to the community as a needs. Thus, through follow the model by extending the school day two hours, the school can give necessary resources for whom need it in the community.

Second, conserve energy and resources through the model by extending the school day two hours can be helpfully for the school in emergency situations. For example, at Generic_City occurred a strong earthquake at the beginning of this year. Generic_School was one of the school which adopted and follows the model to conserve energy and resources, as a result they were supported in their necessities in this disaster. In other words, by extending the school day two hours and conserve energy and resources ,they were supported with this conserved energy and resources in this emergency situation. Thus, conserving energy and resources following the model by extending the school day two hours can be a helpfully way for emergency school situations.

Conversely, some people may claim that follow this model by extending the school day two hours would not conserve energy and resources because the school will still consuming this energy and resources with this two more hours. However, it can be true, but to retake my point, following this model by extending the school day two hours would conserve energy and resources. It could be helpful for community needs and emergency situations in the school area. This conserve energy and resources could be a way to support the school and the community. Therefore, adopting the model by extending the school day two hours can be a helpfully method to support the school area and the community.

In conclusion, to conserve energy and resources, some businesses adopted a four day work week,each day consisting of ten hours. The school could follows this model by extending the school day two hours because it can be a helpfully way to support the school area in emergency situations. It can be a form to give necessary resources for whom need it in the community. In other hands, some people may argue that follow this model by extending the school day two hours would not be a conserve form for energy and resources because the school will still consuming this energy and resources. However, following this model, by extending the school two hours would conserve energy and resources for school area and community. Thus, following this model, by extending the school day two hours will be a helpfully way to support emergencies situations in the school area and support community needs.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.5
F8FE459205F4,"Do you agree with churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success?

Should i agree that when someone fail and if they continuo doing what they were doing they will success later on?

I'm agree because when you make mistakes you'll learnd from it, and next time when you do it you will be better than what have you done in the past. If you are a failure and if you keep trying then i'm proud of you because thats the mean that you're in the good path and that you'll achive your goals soon. My reasons are nobdy is perfect and no one will be perfect ever, my second reason is even famous people have fail and now they're in the top, and my tird reason is there are some people who like to accomplish their dreams by working hard and never letting other people stop them.

To start with nobody is perfect, is because we all can make mistakes and also because it is okay to make mistakes, no one had died because they fail doing something like work from school or stuff from work. So it is like when you go to other country and you have to try new things like their languge, their food. their traditions and all the stuff that their country have and I konw that sometimes to feel like you'll never be like them, you'll never understand what they are saying, but it is false because I am a immigrant, I came to the United States when I was 14 years old not knowing any english, with only one person by my side that was my mom, and leaving everything behind. For one moment I think that I was never going to get used to this country, that I was never going to understand english and that I was never going to be enough to this country but now I can say that I can speak english I can writte in english and that all the people (brothers,and sister)

that I left behind I still love and that someday I will returned and I will tell them everything.

To continuo with famous people had failed in their past, and i'm saying this is people I know that to be where they are now they have done alot of work and they've done alot of sacrifices too like leaving their family behind because they did no support them or maybe because they didn't like that profession, friends becuase some of them are fake or maybe because they want to help them to progress, maybe schools need to be more focus about they work like wrinting songs or even focusing more in their dance, works because you need to choose the one that you like more, and I can tell that it did not stop them, they keep fighting to be better each day to give all the best about them to have a mentality about progress. I've seen alot of famous videos about people that I like and i've cried because some of their stories are really sad and I know what they where feeling that time. You can follow famous people and i admire them because they have fail millions of time and they've never stop doing what they love to do.

To finallice with that if you are one of those persons who like to accomplished dreams then you should never give up because thats what looser (mediocre) people do, they give up when they see that something is hard or maybe because they are shy about them how they look like if they are pretty or no or maybe because they don't like their work because the people is mean or their managge is agressive in the term how he express so they decide to quit. We always tried to put the best and to be the best of us even when you know that you can fail, that there are other people that are good too but you tried and you put effort on it so if you fail you'll know that you win because to did it and you finished it. You never can think that you are a failure if you didn't win, you can see that you are good in some other things where other people is no good. You will always have options you can choose if you want to tried hard or if you don't.

To conclude I am strongly agree that failure plays in the pursuit of success because nobody is perfect and if someone wants to be perfect then they'll need alot of work, we also know that even famous people have fail so if they have fail we should fail too beause then we will see what we had done wrong and we can fix it, and also even when it means that you need to leave that people that you love behind. Furthermore even though sometimes it takes a little too long to notified how much we have success and because we don't see that, we're mad with our lifes, we think that if we don't have a good possition at our work is because were not good enough but it is not truth because they are some people that doesn't have work or some others supplies and were complaining about our possition at work. It is not fair to have that kind of mind because we all should be happy with what we have and with what we can affort. Furthermore been a failure doesn't mean that you don't know how to do something or that you can not win. Been a failure means that for more that you fail the better you get and the more capacity you'll have later.       ",3.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
EF455BB07922,"The grow is the stage of the life on the grow-up it is.

The life is on the present for on self, the firs stage of the life is, you live born be, grow up, desedence, up old and stage of life. Writing easy but, is so long the years like has registered will people live centenary

I was to agree

By the word raw and direct is more eficas because way take the life like game and way take the responsibilities, like made you personal money no the money will you dad give, for you work for the future you no how is the life.

Example is me, by when was like little boy i understand how doing on the life when have 8 old year i made may bred fast and clean when i am eat shower my uniform of my school, to 15 year working little but i can paid something and i star the the actuality i no how is the life and what need doing for the future have my vision my dream for have so cool future for me and for some was with me.

When you no can doing something you calidad of life is so more short, but

Finalized, you need the comprendetion the life, what is you vision for the function , what is you dream , for you an you family, star made you personal plane thin complete you tin and no depend of nothing i am free ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
74E468FCE398,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Based on my experiences, I disagree with this statement, first impressions are made by everyone but it is not impossible to change. Your first thoughts of someone. Everyone makes first impressions of people before even getting to know them by the way they dress, and looks. Some first impressions can be changed and some can't be.

First impressions is a human thing, I believe that everyone has at least made a first impression of someone and their first impressions can be impossible for them to change or it can be changed. The way someone's appearances can be affected by first impressions by so many ways. That is a major cause that is first seen. The way you are approached.

My Experiences can be said some of my first impressions can be hard to change, or I can be wrong about someone and my first impressions can be way off,and that person turns out to be nothing like what I have thought. This statement can be argued from two sides. Sometimes it can be impossible to change what your first thoughts can but than other times it can be changed.

One major first thoughts of a person can be the way a other person dresses, the way they look they way the walk, the way they talk. There are so many things a person can have first thoughts about a human being and just assume things about before even getting to meet . There is a lot of people in this world whos first impressions are impossible for them to change and would never change. But than theirs many other people whos first impressions are changed.

In conclusion, I believe that first impressions can be changed by my perspective, It is hard for someone to change the way they think of someone, but thats why its called ''first thoughts'' because it can be changed over time the way you look at someone can start to be seen differently and your thoughts will change.    ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
81FB30DE2618,"To Whom It May Concern, I heard that you are looking for a employee who is responsible, hard-working, and has experience on a job. It would be my pleasure to work for you. I have a little bit of experience; I'm responsible, respectful, and hard-working.

I have a bit of experiences working. I've worked with my mom cleaning houses,hotels, buildings and on multimedia. I also know two languages; Spanish and English. It may take me time understand the routines in the job; but it's not impossible. Once it's in my head what to do and how you want me to work, I won't forget. No one is born knowing things, people have to teach other persons on how to do things right so they can teach others. You learn from your mistakes.

I should be hire for the job, I am perfect for the job. You won't hear any complains about me. You won't regret choosing me.

Thank you for taking your wonderful time to read this, have a blessing day.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name                                                   ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
790891A35047,"Dear, Principal

In my opinion, I think that you should allow students to bring their phones to school, but with the condition, to use them outside their classes. Students need their phones for any emergencies. However, students are to understand that teachers don't want them to be disturbing the class. Also, I think that the students know better to turn off their phones, if they don't want their phones to be taken away. Students still bring their phones to school whether you teachers and principal don't allowed them to. So, I absolutely agree with the policy of letting students bring their phones",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
CA42D47C0914,"Would you like to act like someone else when your not? You should always be yourself nobody should ever tell u how to carry yourself. You ever heard of the quote,""Don't judge a book by its cover?'' I honestly believe in that. I was once a scrawny kid getting bullied cause of the way I carried myself and dressed. I never got the chance to get the shoes I wanted or the clothes so other kids who were on the football team would bully me. But little did they know i was the nicest and honest kid at

Generic_School.

In the year 2015 throughout 2018 I was someone I really wasn't. I was in the streets doing the opposite of what my mother showed me. Robbing people, fighting, breaking curfew, breaking into peoples cars. I was going through it because I was tired of people bullying me, I was tired of people emberrassing me infront of other kids.

By the time I tried to get a job,all they woud do was look at me head to toe and say they arent looking for employees right now even though their was a help wanted sign out front. Even my moms friends would judge me on my looks just because I have tattoos and have a mean mugging face. I may have a bad background but that was me trying to be somebody im not, I was trying to fit in with the bullies, wiith the kids who used to bully me.

Moral of the story is don't let nobody get to you and make you into something your not. I wish I could go back and prevent myself into being someone whom im not. My uncle got caught smuggling narcotics and is praying everyday he gets out. This all happened because he was trying to be someone he wasn't.

To conclude, A couple misedemenors and felonies can ruin your entire life. Don't be someone your not, Be yourself.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
F44D5A636C2F,"Generic_Name

Generic_Name

Octuber 23, 2019

English 11

Enviroment of Impressions

Two million years ago a person named Jesus arrive to this planet to dwell for a several amount of years, an history we all have been told about witch it takes us to it's death, he spoke to us saying he was our Father. However, he was killed becasue of whom he show up to be, and it's here where we see that it does not matter what impression ypu show up with, people don't mind about it, we all live in a world thst only care for our own good, our onw benefits.

I don't agree in frist impressions are impossible to change, I've meet people that I use to hate now they are part of my life their my family. Independence day, you have an job interview, the first thing they get about us it's first impression no matter what we do and pretent to be someone that we obviuosly aren't they only care about your eargerness, charisma, garment, manners, etc. The popular one meeting new people at school at the beginning we can hate everyone but untli we don't meet that person we won't change our perspective about it personality. In fact, most of us guide by first impressions, and thats the same towards us.

Primaly get can easily get impressed by someone or completely disinterested. we are humans it's imossble to represent our reality we are just like social media when we are with our frineds or at a public place, we fake we act we pretent and thats a common thing we aren't realistic with us and thats where we are given first impression. In conclusion, we are who we choose to be and who we deserve to be, we are in the place that we a re supposed to becasue thats what we deserve, whatever we give it;s what we are going to recieve, and we shouldn't be worried about what we're going to get, what matters it's what we give and judging people woon't tkaes us to the highest place.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
20A42E81AC2B,""" How village people get education ""

A village have a school and they are diside learning the people, they offer for distance learning. They do meeting for that and everybody agree for that. After few week start the class. Some students visit every where and they try to teach to viliage peoples and attend to them. They think village peoples learning everything . What they are need?

I think""yes"" students would benefit from being able to atted classes from home.

My first reason is some village have or had no one go to school. They just doing hard work. One day some peoples visit this village and they deside. They will be teach to them. Then, they are start the classes . Some people think it's crazy. When everybody learning they know it's good for everybody. They takeing online or video class for how they are makeing graden? how they are growing up? how they can't do hard work? First issue is how they thing about that?

My second reason is I think the peoples they don't doing any study they will be face the any problems. This why they need to study. some people thing study is bad thing of life. How we solve this problem? The people teach to them many things for examples:

1. Girls under 18 they don't get the married.

2. how control the birth?

3. They are need a nice future.

4. Boys and Girls need the education.

My third reason is I resoonse for the reasons because whole world peoples need the good educaton or genertion of future. Because who didn't get study they no how can talk to peoples. I agree for that because peoples need the educatoin. The village people now go to school and they send to child in school. They students help to them everything what they need to every daily life.

My conculation is one second, one minute, one day, one months,and one year peoples need the study or education. Because people don't get study the will be get poor. I'm agree with this school they deside good idea for the village peoples. The learning is don't finish because will leaning every day some thing new. Study can't be finished when you will be die. Also, they need to do how the students teach to them and how they are learning.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
0F563E567370,"I would like to go to a landscaping company.

I would like to see how to do the job like them.

I chose this place because it looks fun.

I would like to convince you to let me go.

I also chose this place because you get to go different places.

I would also like to see big houses.

I also want to go to see how to start my own company.

I would also like to go to different states.

I would like to compare the difference from the houses.

I would also like to go with my family.

I would get to know the world better

I would also like to go to a construction site.

I would like to see all the equipment they use.

I would ask how much time they spend there.

I would ask how the boss mad it to have a big company.

I would ask how do they get a lot of money they get in such a short time.

The other place i would like to visit is a famous song writers house.

I would like to go there because they get a lot of money too.

I would ask if they sing day and night

I would ask how hard it is to make a song.

I would also ask if they have to be a certain age.

One other job I would like to visit is a basketball players house.

I would like to know how they got that famous and how they got to that level.         ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
0F473C4B0103,"First impressions are more effective, and can be enough to break relationships. First impressions are possible to change. People are more knowledgeable nowadays it can not be easy to change their minds. People are not believing anything easily at first impressions. It is possible to change through: speech, proves, and loyalty.

Comparing to past people are more educated. They can convince people back from first impressions through their speech. According to the speech, it describes how his speech was con vincible. ""I got nothing: no power, no money, but my loyalty and love to my country"". (Afghan Presidential Candidate) It explains how speech can change minds. Speeches can be strong enough to win or loss. Speech can be more effective to convince someone back from first impressions.

Proves can be a reason to change first impressions. Nowadays people are not believing easily. They want some proofs to trust. According to the quote, it says how can proofs be more valuable than first impressions. ""I saw the video recording today, and I realized that he is not guilty"". (ACB Bank Manager) This part describes how proofs can change someone life and first impressions. Proofs can be more effective and reasonable to change first impressions.

Loyalty can be the main thing to change first impressions. People can be more close to other people through loyalty. According to the speech, it shows how loyalty can win someone trust. ""I would have not forgive anyone, but since you are involve in it I can change my decision."" (AXC Security co Supervisor) It is hard to gain trust but to be loyal its easy to have everyone's trust. Loyalty can change someone's first impressions.

It is possible to change first impressions. Great speeches can change someone idea and their first impressions. Proves are one of the strong reason for changing first impressions. Loyalty is one of the important reason and can be enough to change first impressions. First impressions are changeable. We can change our first impressions anytime we want. We do not have to take action on first impressions, because it can not be strong reason to decide.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
F99CE431D554,"Do you think a positive attitude is the key to success in life?

in this paragraph, i will say that I'm agree to have a positive attitude beacuse it's a good thing and important that people should have.

One reason why have a positive attitude, it's beacuse if you give a positive attitude to one person, that person will be nice to you, and you going to receive all the things that you want, and like you want to be, and that person going to give you back the same attitude to you, that means that if you give a positive attitude you goint to receive a positive attitude.

Another reason, is that people should always have a positive attutide to every single person, so the persons can be nice to you, and treat you like you want, and that can demostrate that you are a good person that have a possitive attitude.

Last reason, have a positive attitude always going to be a important and good thing, beacuse it's help you, that how can be nice to the people, and when you give a positive attitude to one person, and that person give back to you, it's feel good, beacuse they treat you very nice, they smile to you they ask how is going, that's the positive attitude.

in conclusion, have a positive attitude is the key to succes in life.  ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
B50C9D328FAD,"If you could visit one place in the world where would it be? One place that I would like to visit is Pakistan. Here are some reasons why I would like to visit this place. First, it is known for it's parks. Secondly, the food is amazing. Lastly, Pakistan is one of the nicest culture. As you can see, Pakistan is an excellent place to visit.

Pakistan is known for some of it's best amusement parks. One place I would go to is Aladdin park. It's an amusement park with a lot of thrilling rides. I could go on the chair lifts. They are so awesome. Another place I would go to is Sea view. It's a beach. There I could go on horse and camel rides. The rides are exhilarating. About three or four people can ride the camel at the same time. They take you all the way to the water than back to where you started. Another place I would go to is Safari Park. It is an amusement park /zoo. There is a section for animals. You can go on a safari ride to see them. One of the best part about the ride is that you get to go to the elephants cage. There you can pet the elephant, you can even feed it, and you can go inside the cage if you want to go close to it. As you can see, Pakistan has variety of places to go so you won't get bored.

Food. It's the most important thing..right? When I wake in the morning after an awesome night. I will be hungry. So I start my day first by going to the local breakfast shop. There I will order eggs with some round hot parathas, and than some hot piping chai. Then when it's lunch time I will go to a fast food restaurant. There I will order a chicken burger with yummy fires and soda. When night comes around it will be time for dinner. For dinner I will go to a local restaurant. There I will order steaming hot Chicken Korma with buttery naan and Mango lassi. For desert I will have hot gulabgamun. They are like little doughnut balls covered with sugar syrup, and are very soft. As you can see, Pakistani cuisine is very delicious.

The people are very nice in

Pakistan. Wherever you go you would see people helping out each other. They are very welcoming and kind. They treat each other like they all are equal. They laugh, talk, and they just have fun. They don't disrespect each other, they take care of each other, and are very grateful. They are very protective towards each other. They're like a community and support one another. As you can see, Pakistani culture/people are the best.

In conclusion, I would say that Pakistan is awesome. So get your plane ticket right now and come to Pakistan. It is one of the best country you could visit.",4.5,5.0,4.5,5.0,4.5,5.0
5FE4F223CEA8,One of my favorite middle school subjects is Math. Why Math is important because you will need to learn math thought high school and middle school even elementary school math is also important because math all the time in school and out of school to count money everything. For example you go to the store and get groceries the total would be whatever money it is and you'l pay but you need to know how much math you have to do. What if you know how to do math and you need a lot of help to count an amount of a number and if theres no one to help you have to use a calculator and other things. If you were to pay rent or something when your older it would be harder so you need math it's better for everyone. Math is meant for everything sports to count how much players there are to know a play for like a playbook. Thats why Math is important in school and out of school. ,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
4CFAF19AF547,"Technology has it ups and downs with some being useful to use humans and some being harmful and destructive. Has technology come to a point where we need to use it in our everyday life or has it become where we don't even need it because we're to lazy to do thing ourselves. I think that limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has had many negative effect on people's lives because it can cause depression or isolation, can cause some people to lose their touch of reality, and can harm your physical or mental health. Likewise, technology can cause many harmful things.

In other words, technology can cause depression or isolation can really be very bad situation especially if you have both. Depression can be caused by technology because many kids around the world get bullied through social media ,and some get very emotionally depressed. That's when kids want to isolate themselves and don't go to school. Many people around the world like playing video games, and some are very into it that they don't even know that they are isolating themselves from everyone around them. Most people around the world have a phone, a cellular device, and use it all day and don't even come out once. Technology can cause a big impact on people's life and causes them to have depression.

Consequently, technology can also make people lose their touch with reality. Some people can easily manipulate other through the internet. At a young age kid like to TV, YouTube video ,and things like that, and many kids if not all are very gullible. Many videos on YouTube can make kids believed something thats is not true or even brainwash them. Adults also can get brain washed through the Internet. Many conspiracy theories say that the government are trying to brainwash people with technological advancement machine and many to believe that it's not true. Some people even get brainwashed by playing so many video game at a young age, and believe what they do in a games is what they can in real life.

Additionally, as technology keeps on progressing it's just going to keep on getting worse for our physical and/or mental health. Eye doctors say that if your always on a device and it will effect your vision. Technology can mental change you as a person because some people want to be like someone on the internet and change the way they dress and even in some situations their personality. In some cases people have watch many videos of people doing very dangerous stunt. Some people actually try and attempt the same stunt they saw on the video and fail miserably and end up going to the hospital.

In the other hand, technology can come and be useful. It can also safe peoples lives in a situation where someones life is at risk. Technology can also come in handy for us to win wars. It's usefulness can make someones life way more efficient. Technology just overall makes like so much simple and easy. People don't even have to stress about thing as much as they used to anymore because of technology. Technological advancement can change the world as we know it. However, technology can malfunction anytime or anywhere. Technology advancement machine can be the cause of someones death. People might think that technology is going to make life easier, but it's only gong to get harder. If people just let technological advancement machine do everything for them their physical health is just going to plummet down because people are not getting the exercise they need. Also people need to understand technology is getting in the way of something beautiful, the Earth. Technology is causing pollution around the world and killing our home.

Overall, technology is causing all these horrific things to use and we don't even know it until we look around use. I personally think that limitation of human contact to the use of technology can have a negative outcome on people's lives because can cause people to lose they're touch with the outside world, can cause depression or isolation, and can a severe effect and people's physical or mental health. So, technology can be ignored but it will never go away.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
C47E98E69AFB,"I'm a gree because if we are enthusiasm is probavility that we have success in the future for example, when we take an test if we are bored and also we not are enthusiasm is probavility that we fail and no passing the test, sometime be enthusiasm is the first step to take the success,but sometime when we are enthusiasm also is probavility that we can loss to most but there is when we need to be most enthusiasm because is like it how we can have success.

actually,

another example It's me because when my family and I decide that I will to come to United Stated and my other family that live in the United stated for many years they told me that if I coming I will going to the school I was feeling enthusiasm because I wanted to learn a new language a was the English and now I have three years living and studing here and for be enthusiasm today I speaking two languages

I think for be enthusiasm I have success for this reason I'm agree the success consist in no be scary to loss and alway be enthusiasm.

Also many peoples said that the success not consist in be enthusiasm because they said manytimes the peoples that are enthusiasm like for example, when they will stard a business or differents type of jobs they loss money for example or also they always fail in everything and the reason is because they are very enthusiasm for this rasson they said that be enthusiasm not always is good and also not a;ways consist in the success.

but is a opinion because there are many people that are agree and other are desagree because some people take a good opportunities because they said that they was very entusiasm and also there are people that never know what is success for this reason are desagree but in my situation

I was enthhusiasm and this support my success.

In conclusion, I'm agree because is probavility that if we are enthusiasm we will have success in the future and always will be a step to have success.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
F1620489BEB3,"I agree that changing the school lunch menu to a healthier option would be a better solution. This could help resolve some problem we have today. The top problem in the world for this topic is that many people in America are obese and numbers are growing. This also helps show a new generation the many healthier option to choose from. What i think the best thing is the amazing new foods and cultures it can be introduce to you. How many people do you know that their or your kids don't eat the school lunch cause of the food almost everyday?

In America we have gone through many tough time's but a big issue that started happening in the late 90's and early 2000's was the growth in obesed. The line for what was good and bad for you was smudged and the only thing that was okay was that it tasted good. That's why schools started noticing a change in peoples decisions for healthy or unhealthy choices. And change if not only a small bit to try and help, but that didn't mean they couldn't bring in their own food. Having a more healthier option would be good for students bodies and a better state of mind cause you know your giving your body energy and what it needs.

We go through life living the way we were raise. That also comes with the food that was given to us as teenagers and kids. All of us have at least one trait that your care giver did that now you inherited, some people drink coffee more then other cause that how they saw life as. Which is why showing kids and teenagers a better more healthier life style early show them better eating options and that all starts with what to eat for lunch at school cause your there for almost half the day.

The best part about eating a healthier life style is that you can try new and better options instead of the same lazy food. Almost every country use natural fresh produce in everything they eat cause of their culture. And showing people that might not like that idea, a food they wouldn't eat but end up loving it is the best feeling. This is also educational cause it introduces students to new culture are the world. This show's how they eat and prepare food in their country and the difference in our own lives. It's really eye opening for some people and it show kids not everything that doesn't look good is bad food.

Having a healthier option for school lunch is good but it take a lot of meal prep and it's more expensive them getting can or frozen goods. Employees that work in the lunch room are gonna have to come in more early to wash and cut fresh fruits and vegetables which means the school is gonna have to pay them more money cause their doing more. And to get the best quality produce, schools are gonna have to pay more money which some schools can't do. But the only thing that should matter is the students not this or that. The problem with schools is that their lowering down their standards with food to get things that aren't necessary. They could be using that money for better food and better silver wear items then what we have now.

Having school lunches be healthier is better for everyone even if it needs time to get use to. A better lunch can show people different and more unique foods around the globe also helps show's that not everyone's different. This also help's show people that there are better options in fresh and natural items rather then foods that have yellow dye-7. This would also help America be the country it wants to be and how Americans want other countries to see us as a stronger, mature, and all around amazing country. And show that this school is ready for change no matter what happens.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
3137C16C109D,"The firts impression are almost impossible to change. Do you think the first impression are almost impossible to change. Although some people think the first impression is imposible to change. actually is true is impossible to change.

The first impression is impossible to change. for example, when a friendo surprise me my first reaction is smile because, I fill so happy, exiting in this moment you maind no think in what happen arrond you first, the reacction when someone surprise me oh my God that is beautiful becasue, I never think one member of my family do something for me, secound reaction or impression for what is impossible to change is how you filling in that moment, what will be your first words, people see this in you that is soo exited becuase is the first impression nobody chage this becuase is my life my decitions. third when someone surprise me a bad day change in a good day, my family, friends or a girlfriendo do this

I never thing in the problems or in what situation I'm, oh men thisi smile nobody in this world chage how you filling when someone special in my life is whit my nobody change that moment soo special.

my conclution is when you have a bad day someone special in your life and traid to surprise this impression you never forget, The firs impresion nobody change. becuase is part of my life, the first impression is a good reaction becuase your happy, if you has a bad day that surprise changed the moment fot a good moment a momente with you not thing in what happen around you or in problems and this is my conclution for what I thing to the first impresion.                 ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
9947BA6C3149,"The option of distance learning can be helpful for students in many ways. Internet have the access of having to take classes online or communicating with a teacher. Students can get the same knowledge in school or in their house but easier. Bullying is the major problem in school;however, teachers can avoid bully by having the option of distance learning. Teenagers might be bad influence for other teenagers by forcing students to drink,smoke, or even worse to use drugs. The majority of students have responsibilities to take care of after school, taking other classes online,taking care of their siblings, or have a job.

Even though teachers try to avoid bully, is hard to make sure students are well behave some do not listen at all and not care or some are lazy. Some student's lives are tough for many reasons it can be by their parents that do not pay attention to them, stress by having too much school work, or some of them have already a job, and adding one more by bully, it can bring bad consequences. In many cases students suicide because of the stress, or they are tired of people not paying attention to them, and not care about what happens in their life. They are cases that teachers are aware of bully, but they ignore the fact that the school is not a save place to be anymore and that they are big problems going on at the school and having to deal with it is better than having to call their parents and do something about it. Teenagers do not realized the fact that they can be responsible for someones death and they be can put in jail by many years, and ruin their live by making fun of someone,or punching other students, it can be something silly and that little things can ruin their lives.

Some students might be a bad influence for other students by forcing them to do several things that can bring consequences for the rest of their lives by being in jail,being unhealthy,or change their life in a bad way. In this days is normal or cool for a student to drink, smoke, use drugs and forcing other students to do the same. The ""if you do not do this I am not your friend no more"", or "" you do not love me if you do not this"" or even worse ""if you do not drink with me I am going to tell everyone your secrets"" that makes students be afraid of losing their friend, girlfriend/boyfriend forcing them to make actions that do not beneficial them at any pint of their lives. Teachers in high school are though to students; however, some students do not care about their education at all and they go to school to talk to a friend or distract other students effecting other students education. Some students are always energetic, getting in trouble all the time,distracting other students, being a bad influence, instead of giving them referrals or suspending them it can be recommend to do home school to avoid any type of problems.

It is a good idea to start saving money for college/future and having a job. It is difficult to study or do homework while having a job students get stress and frustrated to have to attended to school and a job. School waste time in lunch or having other activity when students can do all their work in home and a few hours they are done and can take care of other responsibilities. In students houses can take their time and not have to rush in a assignment or in a test, having the opportunity to not get stress over school work. Having to wake up at the morning it is a hard thing to do for the majority of students, not having a good rest at night can effect students by ,grades, not concentrating, falling asleep at class, not paying attention,always been tired,or skipping some classes can effect when they graduate.

In conclusion having the opportunity to do home school can make a big difference in a good way to the school and to the students education. That it is something that can be a easy way to learn and have the same knowledge like the other students, but in easier way. Internet have the access to many apps to help students can be a fun way to learn instead be sitting in a classroom for two hours. Students can avoid the fact that are some students that do not care at all and if they do not care about their live they are more possible not care about other student education. Going to school now it is something that some teenagers do not considerate important student can take any class online.            ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
6E248B1F33B0,"The one person that has shared wisdom and experience with me is my friend, Generic_Name. Learning or sharing wisdom and experience with her have taught me a lot of thing that is around the environment. The benefit of learning experience from people is because it help to make the right choice, help to know activities more easily, and also it help people to be strong.

Making the right choice is not something that everyone are able to do on their own. The experience and wisdom learned form people can help to know the mistake that have been done which will help them to prevent it form happening. It helps with learning from other failed experience in life which also help to bring the best out in making that right choice in life today.

People doing thing and knowing activities more quickly other it because they have more wisdom and experience for a long time or they have notice the activities form someone they know in their life time. Having the experience of knowing thing easily can happen in both in school or at the work place. It helps them to move forward with others that are high than moving backward.

It also help people to be strong in so many ways by giving them some encouragement that they can be better than what they were before. It also gives hope to a lot of people in today's life. Experience and wisdom can easily help people that are not too great in doing thing outside their home and also make them to the top of their school or their work.

In conclusion, learning wisdom and experience can be very helpful in people life today. Experience can help give them power that they can be better than what they were and also learning for people's mistakes so that they can prevent it from happening .                         ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D6B34BAFC908,"When people ask for advice it can help them make better choice because, it help's them choice better decisions, help them give other people advice, and it help them in their life. When someone is giving you advice listen to them because it could have help them in their life and it could help you to in your life. Also your family, friends, and other people can give advice that could help you in life and still people are going to give you some good advice. Give some advice to people that need help with there life.

When people give me some advice i listen to them and i give some advice to the people i know and it been helping them in their own life. Sometime i give advice to my little sister so that she can be good at every subject she have in school. I have been giving advice to so many people and it have help them make better choice in their life they have been thanking me for helping them. After listen the advice the people have giving me i want to give some advice to kids so it help them in their life. After listen to all of this advice it help me so much in life i have made better choice where ever i go and keep give people advice.

After i was giving people advice they came to and thank me for help them with there life and with the advice i gave them. I have giving advice to my family, friends, and other people they have make better choice in their life and sharing advice to those who need it the most. And when giving advice to those people who need the most it have help them in thier life.

And the reason why people ask you for advice is so that it can hlep them in thier life and they can pass it down to other people.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
B18BEE398BAD,"For do yourself in the world is not contantly change tou only need to be yourself if not import that pople say and reflective,but your self in other peolpe and maybe she or he capture sonty to you and gif to understand they not be to change for nobody.

For some reason I think they I need to be only one person in the world the first reason is not necesary to change nothin of me., The 2 is they i never be change in my personality., The 3 reason I never change because I like such and hoe I am and I think the nobody can force because I like many thing.

Reason 1. Because the world need to be eqaul for all and is necesary to everyone accetp such and how I am.,Reason 2. For more they people attempt don't me change because I accetp my personality., Reason 3. Because I like help people wen they need my help and because I know they I have a good heart.

If tou treat to be another person in this world is bacause you these insecure bay if self and if you not accetp how you are never how you wan the people accetp how human.          ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
40331978F344,"When creating movies, games, or any other art, its a good idea to get advice from others instead of just one person, first off, its a good strategy to make your work more diverse, makes it more appealing, and more opinions is better than one.

First off, when creating art, its important to get advice from others, but the more you get, the more clearer and more diverse it becomes. They can tell you if you messed up and why. They can give you ideas to make characters to fill in the gaps, They can also help expand the story.

Second off, If you want to seem as appealing as possible, you should ask people for what they want and work with them. If you want your work to succeed you must work with others so you both get what you want. appealing to peoples opinions also helps your work by showing that you care. everyone has different opinions, one person might like one thing while everyone else hates it. appeal to the bigger opinion.

Lastly, the more opinions you have, the more messages your art will have. One person isnt enough to give enough opinions. instead of just one opinion, you should have multible opinions so you can give your art a message. listening and getting feedback from multible sources will help you and your art in conclusion, three good reasons why to get multible opinions is; making it more appealing to a general audience, fill in gaps, and get feedback.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
F75BD3928377,"Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. A person who volunteer untakes a service or duty. If some boss has emty for worker set up, boss will hire for specific an adult. Although some says that you may not have experience in the type of work you seek, someone who is responsible are benifit because they are hard working, motive, and skill.

The employment are hard working in their businessperson. For example, teachers work in public school everyday. This shows that they are teaching more deep about science, history, english, and math. Also, more information share for students learn new something. And adults are willing to help employer in business.

An adult who they are motive their applicant. For example, buider is motivating to make house for long hours. This proves that patient never give up to still work so hard. However, anybody is enjoyable employment for positive their mind. Improving their energy vigrous action is hard working what their best. Some people are skill ability to use one's knowledge effectively in doing something. For example, some teenagers are skillful sciencetist. This shows that knowledge how to make science for medicines to help people solving sickness to becomes healthy. Sciencetist are proficiency and well advanced of major. They may who volunteer to get jobs, but employer will like that should be invite them.

some might agrees that some people not have experience in the major of work. However, someone is resposible are profit. They are hard working and well advenced. Also, energy vigorous action. In addition, a person skills major their job. They should be motive to hard working what they like the major.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
7F1E8663BAE8,"Is important to learn from other people experiences? The answer is yes, because they don't want you to do the same that they did. In this essay I would talk about why is important to learn others people experiences. In my point of view, learning the experiences of others is important, because you learn something that someone had already commit that mistake and they tell you not to do when you grow.

First, one person that had shared their experiences with me is one of my friend. He had tell me plethora of experiences that he had when he was young. One of the experiences that he had tell me. Is that when he had the same that I have, he use to go out of the house without asking permission to his parents. Almost every week he used to lived the house without permission. One day, he realized that he was doing something wrong, so he stop going out of the house without permission. He tell me his experiences, because he want me to learn that is your are below 18 you still have to ask permission to you parents to do anything.

Next, when people had tell you their experiences that they had when were young. You already know what not to do when you grow up, because someone had already tell you not to do it. Maybe your grandfather, parents, friends, e. t.c. had tell you plethora of their experiences that they had. They tell you does experiences, because they don't want you to commit the same mistake that they did in the past. In addition to, they want you to do better them what they did in their best moment of life.

Furthermore, they want you to do successful in life. One day, you are about to do something wrong, but then you realized that someone that you know did it before, and they had already tell you that it didn't went well. Then you stop and you think what happen to that person that did the same mistake you were about to do. In conclusion, maybe when you were young you did something wrong. You would shared that experiences to your children, grandchildren, and others, because you would not like them to commit the same mistake. Even that someone had already tell you not to do it.

Finally, in my point of view learning the experiences of others is important, because they don't want you to do the same mistake. First, one person that have shared his experiences with me is one of my friends, he had tell plethora of experiences because he dont want me to get in trouble as he used to be when he got the same age that I have. Next, when people tell you their experiences, they want you to do better them what they did. Furthermore, they want you to do successful in life.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
C52B76D995C6,"Generic_Name

Where i would like to visit

3/21/18

If I had to choose a place to visit i would choose Brazil. I would go to Brazil to learn and expertise many new things. I could learn how to speak Portuguese, I can find out how Brazilian food is or i could even learn how to make it. I would even go and see one of the famous parades held in Brazil, one of my friends went to Brazil to see the parade and he said ""It was beautiful."" Going to Brazil would be great.

I would like to learn Portuguese because I could get along with the people and even be friends with them. I could even ask for directions if i didnt know where i was going.

I would like to try out Brazilian food. I would want to try it because I never had it. It would want to know how it taste and if i like it i would try to learn how to make some of their foods. I would try to make it because I could make it at home and never forget about my experience with Brazilian food.

I would like to go and see the Fantastic Parade in Brazil. I would see it and take many pictures and never forget about it. I would like to know how it feels to watch a parade that everybody loves.

If i go and do all of this i would never forget about it. I would always remember the good times i had in Brazil. I never forget about the expertise I had.                         ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
9086C0A2BF10,"How the humans use the technology.

The technology in the world is change all time or each year, sometime people use the phone with excessive time; practically we live on red social. The cellphone it's the first device that the humans use more time in the world.

How we can see at the pass to the years the technology advance to fast around to the world, and thanks to the technology we forget how is the content in a book; in my personal opinion is happens.

I think that the technology was some revolutionary for the humanity because the technology come to make the life more easy to the humans in the world. We are blinds because we prefer pass more time in the phone than pass more time with our family, we dedicate our time in red social, where only we are lose the time.

In conclusion the technology was a benefit very important in the humanity, we need to learn how use the internet with responsibility, and understand how the technology change the world; like help us to care the planet, but I think we are did the against because we are lose our time all thanks at the reds socials, we need to know that the technology is a creation of the human to did the life more easy in the world. All what I can said is thanks to my ante past for create the technology that today in day I use for my benefit, each day I learn something new thanks to the technology.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
092BBD374359,"""Hey I had fun reading this book with you"" , younger student said. Kids especially younger ones love the older students because they make everything cool and fun. Since some schools have a program where they pair up a younger and older student together to help both of them. The program could help both of them learn something cool, interesting and the older ones can learn how to assist a kid and could share different opinion that they can't share front of the teacher about learning.

One way the program can help both younger and older student is by. They both can learn about something they have never learned or what they young want to learn about. Younger kids can teach the older ones how to say different stuff that they are learning. The older can each them what they are learning in class. This could be a mini deal that both have with each other and it could help.

Another way the program can help both younger and older student is by. The older ones are almost ready for job. He could learn more about how to control a kid and teach them or assist them. The younger kid could tell them ways and teach them. This could lead to a good bounding with older students. I think they would see each other after years and be like I know who you are you were the one who assisted me.

Last way the program can help both younger and older student is by. The feeling a student has is like why are we doing this. Is this even related to anything. They would able to give there opinion what they think about the topic or subject. Mostly students are shy front of class, but that would be only person to person, they won't be shy. This could help the students explain there self. I think it would make both of them feel comfortable.

I think this program would help alot of the students confident to talk to people and learn in a fun way. This help alot of people I

am one of them. When I was in 6th grade I was a reading, so I read books with my reading buddies it was fun. You get help in subject you need help in it makes everything easy. This program could help you in different problems you have. It will incourage you to learn more, so you can tell your helper.  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
50611B996992,"During this time our society are magnifying in many ways. Therefore, people has to work, study, or do any personal things every day. People don't conseve their energy and resources in the way that people get tired daily. Nonetheless, there are some businesses had the idea to work four days per week each day consistenting of ten hours. As well as, schools should follow this project by extending the school day two hours. In my opinion, school should follow this great idea because students can do differents routine, be less stressful, and get better grades.

To begin with, the majority of students do the same rutine daily some enjoy to play sports on the school. Whereas, someone will like to try another kind of sport outside the school but they don't have sufficient time to do it. Elsewhere, if the school follow extending the school day and leaving one or two days off students can do different rutine and have thier own space. All in all, students can try different sports with their families or friends outside of school. In others words, doing differents routine will help the energy and resources for students.

Second reason, for some students is stressful go to school everyday. As well as, some has to work to late, or do homework, or has problent to get sleep at night. If this happend during this time they loss their energy and is difficult for student to focus on their class. However, students that are stressful can have health problem. In other case, students can be less stressful and active if their sleep more such as, if they get two days off of the school they can repose their tiredness and get energy.

Lastly, the energy and resources are a important priority for a student. Likewise, that all students do their homework and be on time in their class. nevertheless, the majority of the students has problem be on time or do homework some of them miss school days just because they didn't do their homework. Altogether, durin this days off students can do their homework with resources, patience and dedication. After all, this could help student to have better grades.

To conclude, the priority for people life is to conserve energy and resouces. Rather, we are on time to help our students's health. Lately, doing different rutine will help us to progress and be healthy. If we are healthy we are less stressful we will be with energy. After all, energy, time, and resources are the key to be successful.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
49DA281C7585,"I agree because this can help some student, for example some student have diffulty for to learning, maybe more activity can help the student, i gonna go give to you my example.

im brazilian and i see many videos for to learing more my ingles and this help me so much, i have class in the school but i study in my house, i know many people that learning ingles in the home.

i have a friend from brazil him never go to the school in the america and him work to translator and him to receive 1.000 dolares for week, him to learning ingles study in home, whating videos and practice study the ingles online have people can to learning history,math science and other online, i make duoling, this is a game online and i learning some words to play online in my house.

Some people can not like this idea because some people this not help they , maybe they student no leaening online or whating the videos .

i think this can help they because we need to try new things for make different this in the school, maybe make cool activity.

my friend its nspire me the want to study in my home because i want being architect but i need to strain.

some people need to try new things, becase if we no try new things we can not know to leave they try, because the life its feat of new experiment.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
346E77F08903,"My opinion is what, the student and doctor have that to make less time, in the hospital because for to be for to receive, better the classes in the school, because all the doctors for aux to make good his work, have that to rest good because being doctor is nothing easy is one run, very hard, beautiful, of so much dedication and love. I think that is so good that recieve two hours the classes but also is very important that work, the sufficiently, the legal of 7 at 8 hours because. He have that conserve his energy for all the day have that eat good.

Also I think that four-day work week, is good so have more time for preparation more study more in his house in the school. also have more time for to be with his family etc, for example; He doctor have that to be disposed the 24 hours the day because, for the emergency's his benefits the work in on hospital are so much so how for Her also for his patient. for the doctor is very important. that He doctor to be disposed every day every time, also if the doctor work work, more more his pay is so good for everything. he have more opportunities in the life.",1.5,1.5,1.5,1.5,1.5,2.5
2BAF09F7004D,"As we know the modernization through the years is bringing us new advances in technology. One of the most important and positive effects of use of technology is make life more easy for everyone. I mean, the use of social media is given us a lot of way to communications no matter where we are; the facilities of communication and information on time are essential to accomplish many task. The complexity to communicate and create different way to interact had making a great way to a efficient communication.

First of all, the use of technology is currently having big impacts in our lives. It is changing through the years the way how the humanity is living. There out are a lot of brilliant brain creating new advances in technology everyday. The expansion of the new advances day by day is given us a renovation of our life style. The interactions between everyone through communication using different devices such a computer, phone, iPad, etc.. The principles of those project of advances created and expended by people expert in technology; the've been implement the necessity of technology in every single places. It can also influenced our mental and physical health; depression and anxiety are common nowadays so there are website to providing helps online. The variety how we can combine knowledge in technology are infinities. That is one of the main reasons.

Secondly, we are breaking all the limitations that we had before. If you are trying to communicate and if you were in large distance was limited because we did not have those resources such a Mobile devices. So now, we are currently, sending messages or texts, even we can do video calls on live simultaneous. This factor was not possible without the technology. Everyone is connected around the world. Those limitations are breaking because all the different social media:

Facebook: One of the most famous and popular website to post, share videos, photos, websites, links.

Twitter: This app is used mostly to post personal thought or opinions.

Instagram: To post and now with new implement of sources for marketing.

Gmail: It is one of the most popular account to mail. It is like Email but it is more modern.

Email: is mostly used to messages.

Blogs: is used to shared a personal version. It can be about life style, hobbies. Anything you want.

YouTube: This is a platform with the purpose of given us videos some of them can promoting companies.

In addiction, one of the important advantage is the facilities to do everything we want, when we want, where we want. The use of technology in school, colleges even work implement the easy way to accomplish everything. Now days, school bring to their students computers with the the purpose of advances in every single student to do their homework/assignments in home with all the necessary facilities. They want to give students information through books that you can easily get online. In the pass, it was impossible because you had to go to the library and get the permission to read a few books. So, now with the technology we can also use the technology with the purpose to sell or buy things online. Amazon is a good example of success marketing in the world. People buy things on Amazon because they do not have enough time to go to the store and buy their stuff. The platform of amazon is giving us enough details about those items that we want to buy. The majority of shop stores or companies have websites. This is creating a red of new jobs. Some people can work even in home using any device because technology is making that possible. Sometimes, the use of technology can be optional but something is a necessity. We have to adapt to the new modernization. That is because technology.

Although even, there are some statements about some negative effects of technology such a limitation of communication, I can prove with real facts how the technology facility the interactions of contact to other people for example: group chat, messages, Facetime, live videos. Students can be connected with their classmate or vice verse even with their teachers. They just have to be connected. Social media is creating a direct and indirect connection to others, I mean the students can have conversations about projects or assignments through their phones or any device. The use of technology can be fun. We can use technology in video games and some of them have communication though microphone and we can really interact with our partner. We also can extend the communication and interact not just once or two as many as we want. Technology is given is entertainment. Sometimes we just want to be in our conform zone and that is okay. So it's up to us if we want to work, play with somebody else or by ourselves.

It's true that we can decide if we want to work, have fun by ourselves but the technology bring us the opportunity to interact with others.

Finally, the use of technology is part of our lives already. We can deny the use of it in our daily activities. A simple example: If we are going to get a job, mostly of the applications are online. Every job is associate with technology. The use of them created good benefit in everyone. The effects of technology depends with the purpose we are using it. If our purpose is to using the technology to good benefit, the used of them will be successful either the purpose is about good or bad things.

""Every action, have a reaction"" Isaac Newton.

The results of our good action will always have a positive effect.

I can concluded, all those positive effects are making our work more easier. The use of technology in our society is impulsing us to be betters every day. All the results of hard works by every of us. The innovation of those advances are creating new mechanisms in our routine, new life style and all that is because we are smart enough to created technology, everything started from us. The majority of people is using technology with good purposes. The world is doing better because technology.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
9702AD260172,"In this essay I will talk about how courses and daily life in high school influence the students to guide them and to think in a specific career. When students enter at high school are likely to get interest in anything and I believe their great skills they can show at high school, the support from their parents and think about their own future, is a good idea for students commit to a specific career at young age.

The great skills that a student can show in any course say a lot. There are many students that have differents roles inside the high school. Some of the roles they play are in different environments. There are students that really like Fine Arts, Music Band, Chorus, Act, etc. However, students usually get interest to show skills in differents areas to be a professional like Masters, Lawyers, Bachelors, Doctors, etc. Actually, these careers are more convenient to students but also they need support.

The most students gain total support by their parents and is a big priviledge. Nowdays, there are students that leave the school because they do not have enough support from their parents and this is a awful situation into the society.

Students should be supported to do their job as students and not be concerned about any other stuff beside school. Parents have not to be just the supporters. All the school staff can also support students. The support is very import into society because students are future of the entire wolrd and I know we can make a change at worlwild.

Think in a great and awesome future for us and new generation is amazing. For youngers students is easy to figure out what is necessary and what not. That's why the world needs brilliant minds and leave a legacy that can make bigger differences. More culture, respect to the Rights, more opportunities of jobs, more health to everyone, feed to everyone, and a health and wealthy world are some needs students and people wish to live in good environment to everyone.

In conclusion, students are guided and helped to think in a specific carrer by influnces like cources and lifetime in and out of the high school. The skills that a student can shows is simply awesome, they have great imagination. The support for students is in our hands, students have to be supported. The most important area is focus in their future as the best, doing big differences and doing a legacy. To be young is awesome.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0F8F499BAAB9,"I think it is a good idea for students to select a career at a young age by the time they enter high school.

Because for example right now I am in high schools in eleven grade and I dont know what career I want to take it.

I agree with the societies that do students expected to identify a career, at that way they are gonna know what career they want, some students likes more than one career and they dont know which to decided before they graduated..

They are others students that the career that they want it is to expanses and they don't have enough money to pay they can try to get like a scholarship with having good grades and they have to stars in nine grade with good grades and they can apply for one later and see if they can get it.

I agree that the students select a career at a young age, at that way they are prepared and when they graduated of high schools that are gonna go to college ad choose a good career,

and than after that get a good job.                                                                                                         ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
AAD6A5CBDDB9,"The skill i have learned is playing fortnite, i started playing the game in 6th grade because some of my friends told me to play it and i was like ''ok i guess'' so then i downloaded the game. And i sent friend requests to my friends from school, when i playing with them i was the only one who just started.

I would just keep dying because i didn't know how to play, so what we would do we would hide the whole game and wait to the vary end to try to win. Then as time went by they added creative and creative was your own world you can join and do whatever you want, you could buildfight your friends or make teams or even do free for all.

And as time went by again i was getting better and told myself i want be really good at the game, so and i looked in youtube and it gave me so much information. I learned so much new things that i would practice in creative to try to learn them.

I would mostly look in youtube on how to do retakes, retakes are ways to try to get above a person without getting shot at. It would be really helpful but then my skill as a player was not getting better, because the only thing i would practice is build the right stuff. I would not be good ar editing or aiming, because i would never practice it. It took time to stay above the meta i just needed to find the right balance for all 3 major componets in the game.

Then people discovers new things like how to win fights and how to make smart moves and smart edits that can win you the game. what im just lacking as a player is making the smart dicisions, like when to rush a player and when to not but in my opinion there is always something to learn overall fortnite is one of my skills that took me time to learn.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
9664D9C4C5F9,"NO MORE LIMITTING!

Some people believe that students should be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. But should students be forcibly required to take a music,a drama, or an art class?

Students should not be require to take a music or art classes, and make these classes as a electives.

Dont limit they're choice

If school start to limiting classes and require to take certain classes, this is truly ineffective for everyone.

All students have rights to pick what they're interested in, and what they need. For example, If they're applying colleges and they need some specific classes and credits ,they might want to take what they're needed other than art and music class because its simply waste of time.

It's unpopular, unnecessary, and unprofitable for some students.

Not every students are artistic person and want to take a music or art class. Maybe art or music is not they're area ,according to newspaper ""CNN"" 's participation experiment graph, it compared to people who are interested and those who are not, and graph showed people who are not interested seems to loosing they're focus and even irritating them.

It's waste of time if they're not into it, they will eventually end up loosing interest.

There is no point of waste our precious time by doing things that we are not into it, obviously it's always privilege to take academic classes in school ,but it's not always the case. we rather do something else that are more fun and more productive for us.

It is mortal for some students especially seniors.

If school is limiting and make require to take academic classes it is mortal for some students especially seniors, those who failed one or two classes and need to make up. But because of school is limiting and make require to take academic class they couldnt graduate on time.

I strongly believe that students should not be require to take a music or art classes, and make these classes as a electives. If school make art and music and other academic classes as a elective, it will be more effective for everyone, because every students will have choice to pick what they really want or need. Even for teachers as well, teachers will be teaching students who really want to learn. it will be beneficial for both of them.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
1FC46D4B9D8C,"Positive attitude is the key to success in life.

I gree with the statement of having ""positive attitude is the key to succes in life"". Becuase people with a good positive attitudes enjoying life better. examples of enjoying better life with a positive attitudes are: people being more pation, respect on all, and hey live life with having less headache on their brains.

People who does not have a positive attitude in life, they are not succes to enjoy life in pace. one clearly example of people who does not have a positive attitudes are: they are always conflict with them self,

they being disrespect to the people around, and they also are in more trouble and able to get headache constately.

Another reason, why I agree keep positive attitude? is because a good positive attitude is also healful to our self and we do not hurt or offend other people.

Positive attitude such as a special key to make life better, more healful and to treat other people nice.",3.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
81218F777A2F,"Energy should be conserve more because alot of people do not use alot of these particular items half of the time. It is better to save energy rather than waste. Like for eample, we use light everyday to see things around us so that we do not trip or bump into things. If not we wouldnt be able to see things near us. At times we take advantage way too much. Were wasting alot of light source that we hardly ever use at times. Therefor, were wasting alot of energy that we should not be wasting. Alot of people tend to go out to places to run some errands and leave there lights on for no reason or just keep the light on for no particular reason. The best way to save energy would be to turn off the light before you go out and not just leave it on because your just making your bills go up. When you do not even use it half of the time. It would help alot and keep you from wasting alot of money.

Second reason, would be us not recyling things that we drink or eat. We tend to just throw it in the trash instead of the recyling bin. Even in schools they have recyling bins but us people do not pay attention to it because it is nowhere to be seen. It would be better if the recycling bin was to be seen. I feel like people would use it and recycle more. Also will save resources that can be cleaned and used again. Rather than just using more products to make the particular object. Schools and other places should make an improvement and stop using alotof energy and resources and make it easier for the resources that are being used. Us people should recycle more and save light source and actually help the world be a better place and keep it clean and simple. If we were able to do that it would make everything else easier.

Overall, schools should not be extending it for two more hours. Reasons why is because teachers tend to use alot of paper to give students to work on. Most of the times teachers would not use front and back of the paper. They would always do work on seprate pices of papers and give them to the students. To make things easier for them would be to use front and back because there not using alot of paper. So that it can be graded on and be thrown out by the students. Students never like to keep paper with them when teachers grade them after. So alot of paper is going to waste for no reason. Teachers should consider of teaching students with technology and doing work on there rather then using alot of paper. Technology would help because trees would not be going to waste and harm the things around there surrounding just to make paper out of it. Alot of trees would be save and have alot of resources still. People should just think about the goods thing and the bad things about it. Like is it worth wasting all these resources rather than using technology.

There is advantages and disadvantages of extending school for two hours. The advantage would be students being able to learn more and have more time spent with their peers and teachers. Students would have more time to do work rather than doing it at home and struggling. It is better for them not to waste time and get the help they need. But, at the same time the teacher is giving them work which is bad in the way but good also . The work that is being given to them is not bad but the resources that makes is because of how it is made. Eventually, schools should just use technology and do all the work there. Students would be able to access it easier and teachers would not have to worry about the students losing work or having problems. Students would also be more entertain because all they like to do or be on is technology and it would help the teachers alot.

Overall this point, teachers or not just them should consider of managing the time they use on things that use alot of energy. It would make the world a better place and more healthier. Trees would not have to be cut down alot and affecting their surroundings. Basically would not cause pollution in the air and hurt things around it like for example animals . It is important to save energy an keep the world safe. Schools should just do everthing on computers and make things easier. Rather than wasting alot of materials for no good reasons.                                   ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
589CEB00ED37,"Why is having a good behavior when trying to influence or per swaying others? Lets see humans have a brain with that they have emotions, habits, and other cool stuff in the brain. You see people have to talk with one and each other if they don't they will slowing go insane. Some people may say ""why bring up the brain"" you see the brain is what controls your thoughts or emotions of someone or something.

Lets see If someone was feeling down after a person's family pass way, you will try to influence him to move on, but to do that you have to talk to him with a calming voice so can he will feel more relaxed and calm. Why did his mood change? because the person that helped the other person knew by speaking calmly to his friend that he would always have him by his side. If you talk to him with a mean tone, he will get aggressive with you, he would start attacking for not caring about his lose. Because you chose a behavior that didn't fit with the situation, you just made him more mad and now he wouldn't trust you with anything.

When at war and you feel like the enemy side is going to run over you, the commander of the army will say a speech to light up the mood of his soldiers by telling them ""this wouldn't be the end but a new beginning of the war, if we die, we die for our country and for our families."" The commander influence the soldiers that the war is not over yet it's just the beginning and if they die, they die for a reason to protect the innocents back home. why did the commander bring up their families? As a person would you want to see your wife, sons, or daughters suffer from people whos wants to hurt them. It gives the soldiers a boost and a reason to fight to protect the people they love. The commander influence them to fight to protect their love ones.

World War 2, Germany has lost everything money, land, and people. So a dictator name Adolf told to himself that the Americans and the Jews were the problem. Adolf when to a social club and told the people in that club that he was mad at the Americans for taking everything from them and that they should fight to get their land back. The people in the club agreed with Adolf that they should fight. So you see now how Adolf influence the people in Germany by his anger at America. He had a group of German people to fight against his side and over through the president of Germany.

The best way to influence someone is by that person's behaviors towards them. If you have some disagreements a law, you will try to influence people to agree with you that this law doesn't seem fair. Influence people at your job for better working conditions or more time in your breaks, and what would be your behavior angry because you feel like you are not being treated fairly like the higher ups. The person's behavior will define the influence you make on them, it could good or bad it just depends on what behavior you choose.

Every single person in this world has an opinion and view points on this world and when they feel like something is fair or not fair, they would share their opinions with other people and they would choose their tone to per sway other to follow them. To influence others you have to have the same behavior as the people you are trying to influence or it wouldn't work as well if you have the same behavior.                                                                              ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
F6C88F801A8A,"I would have to disagree to this statements. Letting be controlled by the world

(people)

it's not a good idea. There is so many things to accomplish, by not being controlled by other people. We can so many things without people controlling us, we can succeed our life. We can actually be someone though our hard work and deduction.

being us:

just being who you are would be the best and great choice to do. You would think properly with correct knowledge, just by doing that, You would accomplish so many things in life without people going agents you. NOT being you or being someone you really not are, is not a good idea.

Don't let them control you:

letting people control who you are, isn't a good thing. Many people think is a good thing because they can fame or attention, Its like having a double life, 1: living the regular life, being who you really are, 2: Being out in public pretending to be someone when your not. You won't accomplish the things you want to do when your not yourself. You will feel important when the world wants you be someone. Be yourself and accomplish the things you want to do and you will improve your skills and achivments. They will just control your life and they won't help you on the long run. No one can control someones life who they want them to be.

being us, not them:

We need let people do what they want we shouldn't be controlling their life. Everyone should chose there who they want to be and what to do. Not everyone should be controlling them. Not everyone are they same, they are different from others. They don't know their weaknesses to be telling them to be.

We shouldn't be controlling other people what to become. Many people do it for the fame and attention but they are the most unsuscceful people. They dont achieve things they go by there fame and people. We should be us and not be someone we cant be. They end up being embarrassed.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
E7EBDBDD703F,"Do curfews keep teenagers from getting into trouble? The city council is still currently debating on either adopting the curfew to be at 10 p. m. during the week days or at midnight on the weekends. If teenagers were to be out after the hours selected, it would be considered breaking the law. The laws are choosen for many reasons, even if we don't agree with most of them; we have to obey the laws. I believe the city council should adopt the cerfew for the minnors. When it comes to under age people in this world we have to be more conserned for their safety, it is best to have curfews. We should consider all the dangerous things going on in this world.

Have you considered all the things that could happen when your child is out? There is many dangerous things going on in this world. I'm not saying something will happen but honestly nowadays anything could happen. Without an adults care vision many things could occur. Many minnors are being killed or harmed for reasons we don't know. A curfew is one way from preventing those things from happening to your children. Even though a curfew at midnight on a weekend could still be dangerous; it is our responsability to teach the minnors from right to wrong. If we get them to understand why it is important to have a curfew they would be exrta careful. Theres a high possability they won't want to listen about their curfew; I can speak for myself I would want to spend more time with my friends there was a few times I didn't listen to my mom. I relized how much my safety ment to my mother and how worried she would be when i would be out late.

Have you heard about what happened to Generic_Name in New York? He was such a good child. His mother talk about how he loved hanging out with his nephews and family. She said he wouldn't go out with friends, he would always be home. He was very close to his sister, they'd always be together. Generic_Name had good grades in school, he would never get into trouble at all. The reason I bring his story life into this essay is because he was killed a few blocks away from is house, outside a little food market. I'm not so sure about the time but it was after dark. It was a group of guys who saw him, dragged him out the market and stabbed him under his arm. He tryed asking for help but no one would help him; he tryed getting to a hospital by foot unfortunaly Generic_Name didn't make it and died on the sidewalk. Those guy were caught a few months later and said they confused him with another guy. Generic_Name had no fault in any of it,he didn't deserve it. Maybe if he would of wanted for the next day or if his mom would of took him things could of happened diffrently. My point is leaving your house alone isn't so safe, when your with your parents it goes completey different.

Some people might think they would give the freedom they wanted as a child to there children. They might think there isn't a problem with them going out when ever they'd like and don't think they need a curfew. Everyone wants to enjoy their life and live it fully. Enjoying life doen't have to be passed your curfew, theres more to see during the day. Yes, you might trust your child so much you believe it's okay for them to leave but do you believe in the other people with your child being out in pulic? During day is much more safe then at night time when it's dark. One reason being is because of how many peolpe are out during the day. You could scream for help, run or give signs of being in danger. At night everyone is sleeping, and barely anyone is around.

In conclusion, the city council should think about the things going on in this world and do what's best for the teenagers, which is to have a curfew. Teenagers can still have their freedom and enjoy every bit of their lifes with curfews. I think it would be for the best; everyone would be safe in that way. Mostly everyone can agree that their minnors safety is important. Curfews would also keep teenagers from getting into trouble.     ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
8F16365E363D,"Online classes or video conferencing it is one of the many opportunities that some school offer, for those who have a full time job and they really have the volunteer to graduate but they doesn't have the time to attend to school,they still can graduate, taking online classes and complete the credits that they need...

for example: my bother is taking online classes because he works full time, and wants to support the family at the same time.

Students are going to be more than benefit because they will have the opportunity to finish their classes.

The program distance learning has many advantage:

the students will have more space and time to review the same, if they did not understood it.

they will have more privacy they will have a flexible schedule, and they can take the class when they want.

they will not miss any class for any weather changes, etc.

Personally I think that is a great opportunity for us, because if we are not able to attend at school, the school gave us the opportunity to take online classes that way we can finish our classes and to graduate, also it is not like that you have to be there an specific time.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.0,3.0
861B660C2E86,"Would you want your comunication skills to be much greater than they are now, or being able to make good choices that you think can help you out. If you do the best way you can start is by seeking multiple opinions from other people.

If your asking how can this help me, well their are mant ways this can help you out. I will talk abot 3 ways it can help you out and that is by improving your comunication skills, helps make good choices, and can help you give advise to others.

Lets talk about the first way it can help, seeking new opinions from others will require comunication skills and by talking to new people your skills can improve daily.

It would also help on making choices and you can have more then one option when having to make decisions this can make you more independent and you can relie on your self much more and wont pick someone else to do it,

this is very important because once you become an adoult you will be on your own and having to make more choices for your self, and your family, this is why seeking help first can help you in the future and you can have much more choices from the people you have listend to.

It can also help you quide others and give them advice like family, friends, at work, and you can quide your kids and be a good parent as well, its just like how a teachers job is to quide their students so that in the future they can become someone important.

Now that i gave you 3 reasons on why this topic can help you now and in the future I think its time for you to go talk to more people get different opinions and ansewrs to your problems and you can chose wich choices souts you the most.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
0E6BB199BF93,"The principal is saying that the students must sign up in a activity so they wont be left out. it is good to say that they must sign up in a activity in sports or yearbooks. So they can move around and exersice. Sports is a good activity to sign up for because in sports you can sign up for football soccer,baseball,Track All of these activities are great to sign up for even if. You dont have to sign up for these you can sign up for the yearbooks. The year books are great because if more people sign up for the yearbooks the pictures can be done faster.

Sports could be a awsome! activity to sign up for because if your in soccer you can go to soccer practices more then 2 times a week. The games can be at least 1 hour and more and you can celebrate when you win a game. Games dont happen offten a week but practicing can be good for you! because you get to run and do laps when your coach tells you to. During games there can be drinks that you can have there is mostly water so that can heal you up and get your energy back.

The activities can be thery relaxing and a really good sport to join like if you like to run and exersise just join wich ever sport. The best one is most likely track because in track you can run alot. Football can be hard at most of the time you can go against tall poeple and really strong people the way how you can be like them is just train more and exersise more. If you do that then you will be able to join a higher team with better players in football.

during football games the players can be really loud and anoying and tease you wich can be bad and get people mad that has happened alot during football history.

during yearbooks if your teaacher tells you, you can get out for class and go to different classes and take pictures in there classroom and post them in the yearbook. Also you can take a camera with you and take some cool pictures there. The yearbooks can be awsome because you can take pictures of fun and funny stuff in a classroom. ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
9532BA8E40BA,"why is better to have summer break than have it in different time of the year? Some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall,and some people argue that should be year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 weeks break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. I disagree that students should have a year-round schools because students will not learn if they have many breaks during the year, students would not have enough time with their families, and friends, also students would have hard time to do their work.

First, Students will not learn if they have many breaks. I think that is better if students have summer break than have it in different sections of the year. for example; if students want to travel to other state for vacations they would have to travel a week before so they can have fun, but students have to come back a week before school start, and they will forget what have they been learning the pass months. the main point of this example is that there is no point of doing a year-round schools, because that would affect students.

second, students would not have enough time with their family, and friends. Students travel every summer to other states to visit their families, and friends. for example; Most of the students travel every summer to other states or countries, but if students have year-round schools they will not have enough time to have fun with their families, and friends, also they would make less plans, because students would have to come back a week before the school start. from this example the main point is that students should have their vacations in the summer, and not in different sections of the year because they take time to those students, and when they go back to school they will not make any effort to do what they suppose to do.

third, students would have hard time to do their work. they would not have enough time to complete their worksheets from school, because they were having fun with their families, and friends in other countries. for example; if most of the students travel to different countries or states, and when they come back home students will be tired, and lazy to do their work, but if they have summer vacations they will be exited to go to school, retain information as easily when they come back. from this example the main point is that students should have summer vacations so they can be exited when they come back to school, and be great during the school.

finally, students would be more time in the school learning more, and paying attention to the teachers, also they will get their work done more faster, and students would be more positive to pass their SOL'S. Although students would be more successful in school.        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
0381BBE47393,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I strongly agree on what he said about us people always doing something will help us accomplish more. I will explain why i agree on what Thomas Jefferson wrote about always being doing something. Even though it sounds like it is not a good thing i will give you my point of view of why it is important to always be active.

First, one of the reason why it is important to be active doing something because you will accomplish more. For me i like to be busy because it will keep me focus,be determined, and keep me motivated. Being busy will help me finish my work or task i am doing. An example would be,i would rather be busy doing homework than just sitting around doing nothing and not being productive. You may have stress if your always busy but at the end it will always pay off.

Second, another reason i agree on why always doing something helps you accomplish more is in time managing. Because you can not always be something and always finish it. People like to time manage so they can finish the work that will keep them occupied the most first. If your always doing something that you need to do it will keep you from doing stuff that will not benefit you. It is good thing to build time for other task you need to do then to just stay focus on one and not accomplish as much.

Lastly, always doing something makes you a proactive person. Being lazy and not being a proactive person will affect you. Because you will not accomplish more than a person who is always doing something and is progressing in their own task they need to be doing. Always doing something is a good habit to have that will help you to always be successful. You will feel more proud of your self for the hard work you put in on your task for being always active on them.

In conclusion, all those reason i talked about are reason why i agree on what Thomas Jefferson wrote, About it being a good thing that if we are always doing something we accomplish more. You will never have to worry about not doing a certain task you need to do if your always active and productive. People will not worry about them forgetting to do things if they are always busy and remembering to use their time management skill to help them.  ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
F834F75D0E3C,"The school board plans to add one and a haft hours to each school day. Do you think is a good ideas to extending the school day? The school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day because all the students will got stress,all the school program will get delay, and the all starts to skipping school.

The first reason why the school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day is because all the students will got stress. Some students can get depression by learning to much. They don't want to study anymore because of the long day in school. They will get very tired of sitting all day. They will not do their homework because they have to memorize a lot of thing at school are ready. They don't have a lot of time left at home to study or do in their homework. They will not interesting in school anymore. That's the first reason why the school board should not one and a half hours for each school day.

The seconds reason why the school board should not extending the school day is because of the school program and activity will got delay. So if the school board add one and a half hours of school all the after school program will get delay. No more students want to stay after anymore because if to late. Just think about the transportation from the school. If a student live in a rural area they have to wake up at 5 A.M to get ready for school because from his/her house is one hours away for the school. If the student planning to stay after school she/he may not get home at 7 P.M. And he/she have to get home before 7 P.M to be available to do her/his homework. That is all the reasons why school should not extending the school day.

The cost of electricity every year is over 6 millions dollars, just think about how much it can cost the school board if they add one and a half hours of school each day? If the school board add one and a half hours for each school day, all the students can learn more thing. The last reasons why the school should not add one and a half hours because the cost of electricity. Every years the school board have to pay over 6 millions dollars. If the school board spend over 6 millions to the electricity every years then how many millions for every thing else. The school board will not have a lot of money let to updates the school.

The school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day because all the students will got stress,

the school program and activity will got delay, and the cost of electricity. That is all the reason why the school board should not add one and a half hours for each school day. Are you agree or disagree with extending the school day?            ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
CD9FDD5F9F9E,"Does failure play a big role in success? Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that, ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" Although failure often just ends up in failure, I agree with Winston Churchill's statement that failure can lead to success if people continue to use enthusiasm.

First of all, many of our inventions used today are a result of failures.

For example, Edison created the lightbulb, but failed many times before he discovered electricity.

He used his faith and motivation to not give up and keep trying even though he had many set backs.

He accidently made a circular shaped like glass ball which became a source of electricity. If Edison did not keep trying, we would not have electricity today. Also, many scientists have created medicines after many failed attempts.

For instance, there is now a chicken pox shot that prevents people from getting the chicken pox.

Through many experiements with mixure of chemicals and failed trials, scientists were eventually able to find a shot that prevents chicken pox from entering your system. These examples show that failures often lead to success if people never give up trying.

Second of all, many students have failed in school, but if they keep trying and keep their enthusiam, they will succeed. For example, I have had a hard time in school, especially with passing my sol's. When time goes on, I try harder and harder, and spend more time studying with my teacher.

As of today, I have passed all of the sol's I need in order to graduate except for the one I am writing about right now.

I also have a learning disability and ADHD and have a hard time paying attention and often lose focus in my classes.

Even with my disability, I have not given up and keep coming to school and get extra help from my teachers so that I can graduate this year.

I make sure I follow the rules, don't skip class, or don't miss school becuase it's so hard for me to make up what I miss. Although many seniors like to skip class, I do not skip becuase I want to earn a high school diploma. Even in education, there are failures, but through hard work and a good attitude, students can succeed.

In conclusion, I agree with Chruchill's statement ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of entusiasm.""

Even though people will experience failures, there will be success if they work hard, keep the enthusiiasm, and never give up. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,5.0
852C90E3FA05,"Yes, I'm agree. I'm agree because the success consists of keep trying without never loss the enthusiasm. You need to keep trying until you get what you want because that's the goal.

I will give you, and tell you what a pass through like a example. When I came to the United States; It was a may 21, 2014 (I thinks that's the correct day, I'm not sure). I was 13 years old, almost 5 years ago. I didn't know any English, but I said to myself, ""I'm never giving up, until i get it"". That was my goal. I learned some English, how to write it, and how to speak it, although I'm still learning it, but I keep going trying it without giving up, and the most important think is without losing the enthusiasm because if we want something, we need to keep going, and trying until we get it.

Some people think they can do it, and those people prefer to gave up, and NO! That's wrong. YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING UNTIL YOU GET IT, and NEVER GIVE UP! That's it. :)",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
35D43561EE62,"Studies have shown one way to improve a student achievement is to start a after school homework club. Some ways this club can help students can be help with home work,help with classes,and having a talk with teachers. would you volunteer by helping a student?

How can this club help students? It can help kids with home work,not every one likes home work,home work is like getting sand or dirt in your delicious ice cream. some students are not good at doing there home work so this club can be good for helping them with homework. You can get help with subjects like math,science,and reading. Do you need help with any subject from school?

Reasons why I would volunteer for this club. I don't mind helping students out with work but if its bad kids then I am not helping them,I do not want to be treated like trash. It wont affect my agenda because most of the time I am just staying home playing video games so I don't mind helping out,I will finally have something better to do. Helping someone is like a firefighter getting a cat out of a tree,I am the firefighter and the cat is the student and the tree is the students problem. The feel of knowing someone looks up to you because you helped them get better in math is a outstanding feeling. I like helping people out because it is some thing nice to do and I think every one should help students get better at school subjects so we all can do something nice as a team.

Studies have shown one way to improve a student achievement is to start a after school homework club. how can this club help students get better at school work? It can help them with home work like science,math ,and reading. Reasons why I would volunteer for the club and what I would teach.1 reason is because helping a student makes me feel amazing and it helps me be a better leader,being a leader can help me with running a company or other jobs. The subject I would teach would be science because I know a lot in science,I have a wonderful grade in science,and science is fun because you can do experiments. this is why a after school homework club is good for students who need help.     ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
B6F445EE304C,"Dear principle:

I think that changing policy so that students may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average is a good idea. Students mostly don't try hard unless they're rewarded. If you change this policy maybe students will try on they're best to get a grade B or above. They will see their friends playing all these activities on their hard and best work. So next time they would want to try hard and play those activities.

On the other hand though, not every kid is good at every subject. If kids try their best on the subject and still don't get a grade B average, this wouldn't be fair to them. They would be a lot of students who wouldn't agree with me because of this reason.

Changing school policy isn't a great idea, but to make the students get good grades and to benefit their lives, in that case then it would be good idea. Not every students will agree with me but that's the best way to get them educated even though it wouldn't be fair.

sincerely yours,

STUDENT_NAME",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
60E9300D597C,"Each people in the world should have any to trip in life because each failure,wrong, and bad day our help a better each aspect in the life as social, personal and work, and this consist in learn for each failure and no come back to fall in the same not is advancing nothing in his life.

my mother is the best woman in the world because she never had help of my father or other people for care me to me and my brother and with a lot effort she to achieve give them a life very good and ours show that in the life a bad moments as good people but always is united as family and help of god can out of this failures for achieve in the life ""sucess"" that each people to deserve .

For example, in this world there a lot people that are very succesful in his life is because they each pursuit his happiness, every day they wake up with a great spirits from follow to from in his life to achieve his dreams, goals and the sucess. Also can be that others days they have a bad day but always follow fighting an against always the people has that is firm in a only target that is "" Pursuit of success"". Also all the people that has sucess in the life always are very humble and respectful with it them.

In this world there always there problems for any things, but with so effort,hope, intelligence because all people has problem or failure in the life but no for this should to leave of fight , because the life to try of follow to follow because all the things has any out .

other examples is, when a student take a test and the first time not pass of test but he don't never give up, because always there a more opportunities and only should to follow study and better for that the second time should be better.

Also i have a example that i'm live in my life each day that is when a people as me,when i going to live a other country very different to mine with his way to live and it more important his language is very hard no can to communicate with them, but the beginning is very hard for any people change of country and is more hard if no know the language, but i don't give up because i know it that i'm very smart and with more effort, faith, and help of my teachers, mom and family little to little better my english and each day i learn of new things in the life because never leave of learn in the life. i disagree not can understand it and not can say nothing.

For this failure plays a role very important in ours life because show as the people has abilities for can do any things and know that all the people has intelligence for can achieve it. The failures in the life to help to better and think about that can help to better and however, i think that each people has a goal in the life and not should to renounce a ours dreams, goals that should of achieve it.

Because in the life each people to choose his destiny in the life but i think that all people has a fault but each people has of power for eliminate it of his life.

In conclusion, all the people should of has any failure for can better and achieve his success and happiness in the life with love, hope, and effort for that nothing in the life is so easy , everybody needs is very focus in the life because until the own family may be can think that you are a dump but can show you that you are ""the best"" and that nobody can stop your success in the life and nobody can to take your dreams and goals of your mind and heart and always each day should of think this is my best day, and wake up with spirits of better and be a great pride for your wife, son and people that believe in you , and with help of this people so important in you life give you spirits for achieve it and they to go with your steps to sucess in the life .",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
E28221F47AE3,"Yesterday, I was talking with my parents and they tell me that I have to start thinking about what career I want after I graduate from high school. I start seeing what issues can cause and I think that it is bad idea to select what career I want at this age, because whats is going to happen if I don't like the career that I choose when I was younger or if that career is going to give me the money that I'm looking for and what about if my parents are not in conditions to help me pay the career that I want, after think all this I meet with my parents again and I tell them the reasons that why I don't want to select my career at this time.

The first reason that I think why is not a good idea to select my career at this age was, what is going to happen if I select one career but after four or five years later I like other career and I really want to be in the other that its totally different from the one that I select five years before, maybe they are going to get mad at me because they are going to say that am just wasting my time or something like that and I don't want that I want to be sure about the career that i get is going to really like me when I get older.

The second reason was, who know's that is that career is going to help me in my economy because some career with the time they lose demand on the thing that they are doing and they give you fire or reduce your salary, but if I take my time to think and analyze all the careers that i like that can be better, because everyone wants a job that can provide a good salary and a good benefits and thats what I want, in that way everything is going to be more secure for me that nothing of that issues that I said before is going to happen and my economy stays in good conditions.

And the third reason that I think was, what about if I select my career and my parents after the four years that we have to do in high school they don't have the opportunity to help me pay my career and I ready get very excited that's is going to get me very nervous because i didn't think about what other career I want to do. This is why I want more time to think about it and see if my parents can help me to pay the career that I choose, in this way me and my parents don't get frustrated, I for having multiple choices of what careers I like and my parents for paying something that they can afford with their money.

In conclusion, I think that it is a really bad idea to let young kids decide what career they want because not all the time it is going to like the same career that we choose when we were younger or what about if after high school you decide to no continued in school because you have to work because your parents need help for paying some stuffs or because you want to buy your own things or just you don't like school anymore, so in my opinion I think it's very important to have a lot of time for choose whatever you want to do after you graduate from high school. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
DA86BC9B9FB6,"I think is a good choice for people to take classes online or at home because they can learn more and concentrate better and put more attention and nobody can distract them. I think if people do it online or at home they are not going to make friends. Sometimes is good to make friends because they can help you or be with you in someway is good to go school then taking at home or online. Also if they do it online or at home they are going to be more prepared and ready for wet ever situation because they was putting attention in their lessons. But being in a group in school is more interesting because you can meet new people and don't be alone doing the work but everything have their good choices for do it and people can decide how they want to do it or how much they want lo learn.

some people prefer to take classes from home or online. because they can be more concentrate without nobody distracting them. I think it will be a good choice for them to do it online. For example if they are doing work in a group they are talking and don't concentrated but if they are with nobody they can work better and do their work. This can be the reason for more people take that classes because they work better with out no one else. The people who studies online or at home are more intelligent, and learn more because they are concentrate in what they are doing. In sometimes in the schools they are not concentrate because they are playing or talking with their friends and that can distract people. If they make a competition an student who studied on line or at home with one student is a regular school I think the student is not on the school can win because sometimes that students are more prepared then the regular school. Also sometime the students who go to a regular school they just go for play with their friends is good to have some friends but they are not concentrate o they are sleeping when the teacher is explaining and then when they do the exam or quiz they fail. But if one student is studding online or at home they are listening for when they have to take the exams they can pass and are more responsible with that.

When the school is over at the end of the year some people learn a lot but some people no because they were just playing and don't putting attention or sleeping in class. But the people who studies online or at home they are ready know a lot because they were concentrated and no one was distracting them and that if how they work someones want to learn and pass and someones no each one can take their own decision. I think studies online is more better, more productive at the and of the year. Taking classes at home can benefit at the students in many ways and they know more at the end of the school. When the students at the regular school at the end of the year they have an SOL test. some students fail this test because they did not learn nothing for the rest of the year just for be sitting and doing nothing. But if someone who studies at home have the ability to pass the SOL because they were interested of the class of what were they learning and don't have distractions all year. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
4025349AD977,"By having a good attitude you can get out of problems and be a success in life. To start off, you can get out of problems by having a good attitude. This evidence shows that, you can get out of problems by having a good attitude, Like when I broke a plate and my mom was mad at me, and I kept a good attitude, so she was not mad at me anymore. This detail suggest that, you should always have a keep a goood attitude beacuse you keep a good attitude problems aren't going to be problems. clearly, having a good attitude can help you and others if you want. additionally having a good attitude can help you become a succes in life. For example, when going to a job interview and you keep a good attitude the whole time that might be a reason for the company to hire you. This detail suggest that, you should always keep a good attitude because more opportunities will come to your way. To conclude, keeping a good attitude can help you make friends, get a job, and more opportunities will open for you. By having a good attitude life will treat you better. keeping a good attitude can save you from some problems and give youy better opportunities. You should considered keeping a good attitude because is the best for you. life will be yours by having a good attitude. From what problems can a good attitude save you from.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
22F571F54234,"Think about a talent or a skill that you have. What did you do to develop that talent or skill? How do you use it? A talent or skill that I have developed is being able to write in cursive. I develop and use this talent in many ways. In order to develop this talent and use this talent, firstly, I had to practice every single day, observe many other people write in cursive, and lastly I use it to sign many different items.

One way I developed this skill is practicing. I used to spend everyday writing the whole entire alphabet in cursive to perfect how I wrote. I would meet up with my teacher after school everyday for about a month so that she could help me work on my writing. Another thing that I did was rewrite every document or letter that I saw or received to accomplish writing as good as the original writer.

Another way I developed this skill is by observing other people. I would watch many ""How To"" YouTube videos to observe how other people wrote. I would observe how they wrote and I would write very similar to them. Whenever I saw anybody writing in cursive I would study their hand movements and match mine up to theirs to achieve writing perfectly. Any letters that I had received from family members I would examine to figure out how they wrote in such a perfect manner.

One way I have used this skill is by signing my name on many different items. Anytime that I go to the doctor's office I get asked to sign my name and knowing cursive comes in handy. Whenever I decide to write letters to my family I sign my name on the outside of the envelope so they know that it's from me. Also, anything I have painted or drawn has my name signed on it.

Think back at a skill or talent that you have. How did you develop it? How do you use it? Mine is being able to write in cursive. What's yours?",3.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
6C98327DA084,"Explain how small acts of kindness can have a impact on others?

Did you know that if you pick up trash out of your way or someone else way you can actually help them think about why did they not pick up trash. Act of kindness are everywhere from picking up trash to doing your brother or your sisters chores one day they will realize something about why you wash their dishes everyday. I think kindness is the most important personality of a human being why i think kindness is a important personality?

You can change peoples mind or the way how they think about some stuff, for example if you can help someone to get across street when their is too much traffic you are doing a act of kindness, and you can help change other kids minds by making them think about their parents who is trying to cross the street trust me they will jump right in. One important thing about kindness is that you always need to have a positive set of mind that means that if someone is asking you for help jump right in and help him don't just answer ""I don't know"" if you actually don't know where the place is try asking someone else if they know about the place the other person is talking about.

Some people take kindness in a negative way only some people and at a certain time some people like to do stuff on their own and sometimes they like their own time and own place and own work they don't any help from others like me sometimes I like to do stuff on my own, but sometimes I need someone to help me. I would like to help people in need for example; taking out someone else trash, helping my new neighbors settle in the community, and mow my new neighbors lawn.

kindness can open many opportunities some people even think that kindness is a part of their religion and I really think it should be a part of every religion because it can really help you and people around you and you can change each others mind or opinion on one thing by kindness,all these thing just does not sound it is possible but it could be. To be honest I think that kindness is one of my superpowers if you ask me but sometimes its not but those times without kindness goes by quickly with kindness on your side you can become anyone you want and be a bigger person that everyone.

In these days people who understand kindness they are actually showing kindness and they are also telling us to be kind to each other. I feel like kindness has become a big part of peoples life in 2019-2020 and i expect the same or more amount of kindness over generations and I also feel like that the person who really teaches us kindness in childhood is our parents.",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
32E2949B0C66,"Do you ever want to do something fun at your school that you really like? Well you came to the right school, cause the principal made a rule that you either have to play a sport or join a club that you like.

You could play on a basketball team

You could play on a football team

You could play on a flag football team

You could play on a baseball team

You could play on a softball team

You could play for a soccer team you could join a cheering team

I agree with the principal because, when we get home we don't do anything and kids are lazy nowadays. We either take a nap, eat, watch YouTube, or play video games. Also it will give kids a chance to have fun and make new friends and see what they like so they can do it the future.

So if you don't agree with me, I'll give more reasons like kids are overweight, they're lazy, most of them won't do anything cause they are out of shape. Probably the first thing they do when they get his eat and play video games and watch YouTube. So that is why the principal put in the new rule, they could make new friends while they're after school or join something their friends are in. Also it will be good if your going to play in high school sports cause you already known what it takes to be on the sport team.

It is really fun cause you when you play a game that is home you will feel good cause everyone from your school is there cheering you on. Also if you win your game at home it feels nice cause everyone is cheering your team on and then when you go back to school everyone will be taking about the win. If you don't believe me ask anyone that plays/played for a school team, most likely your parents played for a school team both of my parents did.

If your not interested in sports you could do other afters school activities like

Book club

Yearbook club

Dance club

Cooking club

Computer club

Student council

Engineering club

You could do those clubs in stead of playing sports, You could also do many other things that you like if you don't like any of this thing. Ask your teacher if you could make club and if she says yes go to her office. If you don't like your club cause everything was filled it is fine, cause you could join it the next semester but you have to be one of the first to sign the sign-up sheet. Also you be given a snack at the beginning of your after school period you could choose anything and, if you take the bus it will be there so you can go home.

But if you don't take the bus you will have to be picked up by 4:30 and then you be home and do whatever you want to do. But if your parent can pick you after school you could leave at the normal time school gets out and if your not feeling good you could also leave at the normal time. But before you could anything you have to do your homework and then go to your after school club.

If you don't want to go you will have to go to the principal and explain why you can't, but if it is a dumb reason you will have to go to after school. Like if you have a broken leg and you play on a sport team you could still go to practice and see what they are doing and see al the drills they are doing. Also if you fake an injure and the teacher find your big trouble cause you not listening to the principal. But you could get kicked out if your being bad and you will have to serve a punishment cause your still on school grounds. Like you you hit a student you will get suspended but if you hit the teacher you will get expelled.

If your playing sports it is all year long until the season ends, if your coach finds out your is taking drugs you will get kicked of the team. You will have the same rules as a high school cause you probably play for the high school team. But it won't costs any money cause the principal made us join the clubs so we could do something after school. Most likely we will find our hobby forever cause we are going to do it for the rest of the semester. If you find something that someone is doing and you want to do it just tell the teacher cause they will put you guys together.

If you still don't agree with me you should just try it out cause it fun, You could have fun, make new friends and bond over things you all like. Like sports if you join one of the sport teams you could meet someone with same interest like you. Same with all the other club that the school is providing to the students, like book club you could like the same book as someone else and be best friend over that one book cause you joined the book club. I met one of my best friend through basketball and we liked other stuff that wasn't basketball related.

Most likely you won't like it at first but then when your half-way through the year you will love it. Most of the time I join a club that i like cause it fun to meet new people that have the same interest as you. Sometimes the club isn't fun but that is okay cause you could join a new one. Most of the time everyone will be shy at the beginning cause no one knows each other but half way through the semester you will known everyone. Cause everyone won't be shy cause they will see you everyday plus, when your in school at lunch and you don't known anyone and you see one of those people you could sit with them. When you meet a new person they will have friends so you could more friends when the new person shows you to them.

So what we know is that joining an after school program could give you a lot of benefits and friend. Also they is a lot of clubs and sports you could join for fun. Also eat a free snack so your not hungry when you get home to your parents.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
C5E4E48AB704,"studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start after school to do homework. teachers and students have egry to staying after school to help other students that need help with their homework. some teachers need help other teachers have egry to help other teachers to do their work.

some students don't want to stay after school because they want to go home to play video games, but i think is a good idea to stay after school so students can ask questions to the teachers about homework.

students have shown that staying after school can help them to do homework, it can help students bring their great up to an A and Lord more then what they now, teachers can help other students to study, so more students can under Stan, doing homework after school is a good way to do it because wen you at home some times you are confuse so the better way to do homework is to stay after school to do it with your teachers and it can help teacher to, so the next day they don't have to teach them what she or he have learn.

teachers and students have to make a minting after school about helping students to do their homework after school some schools don't do that because students dont want to do nothing after school so teachers have to make a students to staying after school to do homework some students go home and they come next morning with there homework not done, some times is the teachers fold because they dont want to help students to stay after school to do homework or to study, so students can bring their great more up then what they have.

teachers shut do tutoring after school because some students want to go home and play video games or listing to music or videos on YouTube wen they haven to do their homework, some parents they dont event asked their child rends that if they did their homework, so teachers shut start doing tutoring after school so students do homework and parents dont have to worried about that because they now that thy stay after school to do homework, some student want to stay after school because wen they go home some times they dont Eben now how to do their work so some students want to work with their teachers so they can under stand more.

some students want to stay after school to do their homework with their teachers but some dont want to or students dont want to stay after school,l they shut do tutoring after school because student can learn more they can do their homework teachers can help them is a nice idea for students and for the school so some students can bring their grate up, students some of them dont want to staying after school because they want to go home and listing to YouTube or play video games and they dont bring their homework to school. ",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
0A4CDC286F8C,"Imagine if students are trying to accomplish somthing that thier doing. That would be good because time will go faster rather than slower because there being more produtive. Although some people say that accompish does not serve a purpose, nevertheless, others say that accomplish does serve a purpose because a student could be working on homework and playing a sport.

To beging, accompish more time on a sport. For example,

a soccer team was trying to accomplish their shooting because they had a soccer game. They also knew that they could use more practice on thier shooting skills on the goalily. This shows that, the soccer team didn't want to waste time on something that they could be practeing for. Clearly,

Futhermore, accompish something on homework. This proves that, a college student wants to get their homework all done because they want to go do something fun with their friends. They could also be going out with people so they might as well get all their work done. This shows that, if a student wants to accompish something they are willing to give it a try and move on.

Accomplish does serve a puropse as Thomas Jeffereson wrote. Working on homework and playing a sport. In conclusion, Students should be able to do something in life if they want to. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
395189B8B76B,"Many schools have partnerships with companies that allow students to explore certain occupations through internships and shadowing opportunities. I would like to be selected to visit and learn about the work that interested me,

because it would help me to be prepare on my future is a great opportunity. One of the reasons that I would like to be selected is because that can help me to find the right job and to know how to do it ,and to learn about it more, Because I can have more experience on doing my job. For example if I have to do one thing I should know how to do it and is better to learn something before doing it.

Another reason is because not all schools have partnerships with companies to visit and learn about the work that interest students, that way I know what's the work that interests me by having that type of help on schools, By doing that type of help students learn new things and have more opportunity in life and have better jobs and have more money by doing the type of jobs that they want to have in there future is a great help for schools to have that. Students should already know what they want to learn about work.

I think that is a great help for schools to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of employment, so student learn more and they can find a job that they want that is why I want to be selected and visit and learn.

Those are great opportunity to discover whether students are interested in pursuing that type of employment.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
A0129E84B1D4,"First of all, the technology is really usefull and i think that it will have a posiitive effect in people's lives, the cuestion is how?. For example, people will not have to take a bus to visit other people, or walk miles to see other folks, instead they can just call in their phones and have a little chit chat by using tecnology.

Second, is that the tecnology can do part of the work, for example you are writing a note for a paty, ceremony, marry, whatever, and it have to be one for each person, what are you woing to do? just by using the technnology you can print evrithing you want, it makes easy your work, also have more time to do something else. In the mean time you can use your phone and unload an app to shop somthing that you like, there are several things like clothes, shoes, food, tools, and other things that can be usefull for you or you child, whatever, and there is also the app for books; people don't have to take a lot of time loking for a book, they can just find it by put it in the device or the computter

Third, some benefits of the technology is the time that you spent looking for sonthing or deciding, another benfit is the things that you can learn with all the information that is in the web, ofcourse if you use it properly like it is. You can learn how to be an artist, how to cook, and how to fix something broken.

In addition, sometimes people get addicted in a web and that could be bad, that is when the negative effecs came, people don't know what they are doing when they get adicted to it, that is why people have to know how to use it correctly

Consecuently, the technology is developing more and more, we can built great things for the future and create more, eventually, the tecnology is not the only one that is developing, there is the science too because it help to develop other things and bring protection to people.

In conclution, the technology can bring positive effects to people because is a sounce of knowledge that you can use to inprove people's live.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
1FE3EE0E16A8,"Success is not just for perfect persons, sometimes we need to fail for to learn how to be better and learn from our mistakes to succeed and reach our goals that we have in this life.

Every single person in this world make mistakes that means to me that no one in this world is perfect, but we need to learn that is part of learn in life, is something about to be better every day and the enthusiasm is part of learn about our mistakes. It is important to fall down and don't loose our hope because that hope and the enthusiasm make us better persons and that is our impulse to succeed and make our dreams real. We need to think like a winners no matter what is going wrong in our life, take our weakness and make it strengths. My mother once told me because you loose one battle that doesn't mean that you loose the war, that show the importance to don't give me up at any bad circumstance or bad decision that i took before in my life because no one in this life born with all knowledge or born perfect to don't make something wrong. She also show that i have to do my best, to give my hundred percent at whatever that i want do because that is what make us better persons, she show me that don't give me up, be dedicated and passionate in all that i want to reach.

Failure plays a important role in succeed because that is how the apprenticeship start at, what if all scientist they were gave up in their experiments just because they did something wrong in their experiments we probably would didn't have medicines or the cure to a lot of illness or all technology that we have in the actuality or the first people that worked for the NASA with their first rockets that they made it, they get on fire and burned up but they still tried out again until they reach they dream to be the first persons to go to the moon, all they learned from they mistakes, that was the key of their achievements, that is what made us humans learn from our errors.

Is important for us to fail but is more important to don't give us up, to follow our dreams and believe in our self in our own capacity that we are able to be better in whaterver adversity and solve all problems that life impose in our way that is the key to achieve all dreams that we have, not all in this life is perfect but with effort and enthusiasm we can choose the right way to go and found solutions to our problems no matter the adversity just trust your self and do be afraid to be wrong because failure what inspire us to be better and succeed and learn from our mistakes.",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
F1CB29904BBD,"My dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me these are the thing's that my dad shared wisdom and experience,He show's me his experience that he has,He shows me wisdom that he has that he gain,He teaches me about life.

My dad show's me experience like working on the cars he showed me what to do for working on the cars. one time me and my dad was working on the engine of a car he tells me this is how it works or how to fix it. He show's me wisdom,my dad he would tell me to not give up on something,when I can't do something and it's hard to do it my dad would tell me to not give up you can do it believe in your self. He teaches me a lot about life he says that life isn't always easy or simple,sometimes in life it can be bad or hard but he would always say keep your head up and never be down on yourself. when he tells me about life I feel like I can do stuff in the future that I would take off and be sussesful in the future. And its cool when my dad talks to me about life. My dad is a really good dad he show's me wisdom and experience and other stuff to like he helps me in stuff. In conclusion it is important to learn from other's that are experience too, Because you will learn new things or will will new thing's that they will say that you don't know of in life its really good if you get to know a new person and get to know them and hear what they say or there experience that you dont know of. And it's great to learn new thin'g about the person that you meet or already know because you will find new thin's about that person and you will learn about that thing is you liesn to them. It's better to learn about there wisdom and the experience because once you know there wisdom and experience you will tell them your experience and your wisdom that you know of that you got from your parents or your other friends.",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
3F722ACC887E,"To conserve energy and resources some businesses have adopted a four day work week and consisting of 10 hours per day, everybody are different everybody do they want so can be good or can be bad.

I'm disagree because for me is the same thing that the businesses adopted a four day week that consist of 10 hours of work, because if they work the 6 day's at week doing 8 hours at the end is the 40 hours at week same with if you work 10 per day in four day's at the week.

When the businesses make the people work the 10 hours per day in four day's week the people get more tired and most people do workout in the morning or in the night and i think that if you work 10 hours per day you dont going to do your workout because your going to be tired and the only thing your going to do is sleeping

If the school follow the same model and extending school day two hours for some student is going to be good but at the time no because if the students come to school for four day and add two more hours they will be in home doing nothing and they can play all day in video games, and that cant get more energy, for other student can be bad because some students work after school and that can affect them.

As you read sometimes you get benefits and sometimes disadvantages one of the best benefits can be that you conserve energy and one of the best disadvantages is that your body can be tired, but at the end is going to be the same thing that businesses want four day week that consist of 10 hours per day or that businesses work 8 hours per day and there be the 40 hours at week referent with school they dont have to follow the businesses because students need to learn.                                ",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
5C69070E1E48,"Students would benefit and not benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because you can stay at home ,not distraction,not friends or groups,tools from school that you may need,students can cheat.

Students would benefit from being able to attend school from home because you can stay at home and by staying at home you can wake up late for school. There is some students that hate waking up early for school that's one of the reasons of having the opportunity to take your classes in online. Staying at home you can be eating whatever you want there is not going to be teachers telling you that you can't eat. There might be people that doesn't have the transportation to go school and get in time for school and because children doesn't like waking 6 AM in the morning. That chance to take classes at online many students would prefer having online classes.

Other reason why students would benefit by attending classes from home is because there is not distraction at your home you can be at your room alone without no one to distract you when you're taking your classes or when you're taking a very important test. By being alone at home you can concentrate more about the things that you're learning because your friends are not there with you to distract you with another things.

Like I said there is not benefit too of having classes in online because students doesn't have friends or a group of friends to share their ideas. There is children that may need a group or a friend to talk about their ideas in classes or maybe you have a problem with something and you don't have no one to help you ,and by having not classmate it might be boring being alone.

students may need tools from school for example you need to read a book and you don't have one because you just don't own books at home and that's why I think it would not benefit because in school you have a library you can go there to find a book and there is different types of books students can pick.

Other reason why it would not benefit the students is because they can cheat.

students can cheat at everything because you don't have a teacher that is taking care that the student don't cheat at a test. If the students doesn't want to do a class he can can pay someone to make it for then ad pass it for them.

Different people might have another opinion about taking classes at home but I think there is benefit and not benefit because students can use this opportunity to waste their time or take advantages about having classes at home. In my opinion there will be some students that will take this serious and do the right thing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
BFEA2E7F1486,"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment because at the day of today there's a lot people that doesn't want to accept the way that you are or you want to be. They will never be satisfied, they will judge you, they will talk bad things about you, but at the end it's just a obstacle that the life put in your way, so you can surpass it and finally find yourself and be how you are.

To be yourself in this actual world it's difficult for some people because sometimes they don't support the judges from other people and most of this people just decide to end with their life. For example the LGBT community get a lot of hate, judge and bad things from other people that is not part of it. People in this world just talk about others without thinking the pain that they can cause by saying just a few simple words. Other example is the people from other country that travel to another, there are people that are racist and make people feel that they are from another world, when they are actually they same, the only thing that change is the culture and language.

To be yourself in a world that is contantly trying to make you something else is one of the most important things that people have to achieve, to live the life better because you will never progress in your emotional life if you don't make people accept the way that you are.

For teenagers to be theirselves is most difficult because they are in a young age and sometimes they don't really know how they are or how they want to be, and when they finally find it, the hard part is coming. Then for older people, most of them don't care what people say about them, I have seen a lot of older people that dress and make to their selves what they want and I really like to see them because it makes me to be less insecure about myself, they just make me think a lot.

Live the life by showing how you are, the opinion of other people doesn't have to make you more insecure or make you think that if you do this or other things you will get judged or hated. You have to fight to achieve this because life is better if you do it, is better if you don't care about others comments, you will be more stronger than before if you fight with all this situations.

You will be more happy and will have a great life if you are yourself, you will be more certain about your opinions, decisions and actions. You can help other people to achieve this goal that is ""To be yourself"" because sometimes there is people that need from others to make a change in their life.

If you help them and they accept your help, they will be thankful to you because you help them a lot and you was with them, when nobody wasn't.

At the end of your days you will be really thankful to you because you live life the way that you are, not the way that others wanted you to be. You will think in all the things that you have to supported and achieved just to get your goal, to be who you are and at end you will knew that it wasn't hard. It was just obstacles that maked your life more stressful and harder but you did it. You got all the things that you wanted and the most important was, to be yourself.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
66C2FA45A48B,"Energy and many different resources are a big patrimony that nature gave us,every single person need to take care of every single resource that we have like energy,water,etc. All of those resources complement each other to do their functions for example: without water we would not have energy,water helps to make energy when it is coming down like a waterfall,so there is when water produce energy. We also know the sun is an energy reproducer and we can get a natural energy,the type of machine that is used for that kind of energy is a little expensive,but is better than a normal energy that we use every single day, it is less dangerous for our enviroment. An example of sunlight energy can be the calculators that need to be charged with light,so they do not need batteries which is a good one.

The government and obviously every single person need take care of this amazing resource to conserve it for a long time. Conserve and earn energy is a big challenge for all,we thought that little things like leave the lights turn on for along time and do not use them is a loose of energy and money,those little things affect us believe it or not and of course affects our aconomy. Energy is one of the most expensive resources,we pay for electricity,because to reproduce energy it goes through an expensive process.

The prompt says that adopt a four days of work with each day consisting of ten hours it is going to conserve more energy. I thing that can help us to reduce the lost of energy,but at the end we make the change. I think ten hours of school is not going to make a big difference,first of all that change will create many conflicts with students who practice a sport,have things to do after school,or need to work after school the time is not going to adjust.

Parents will get in troubles to pick their children or to leave them in an extracurricular activities,even if the school adopt that proposal that does not mean that all of the jobs and schools are also going to adopt it,so that is going to affect families who have children in that school. I believe the change is going to be stressful for many parents who both of them need to work. One example can be when people who need a babysitter to take care of their children,we know that person also have a family or have things to do after job and if her job take more time that she usually do is going to affect her. Not all of the people are able or agree to work till late,and if they accept they want to be paid more.

Having a long days of school,I mean more hours that we used to do can be stressful for students that are very mischievous or rude,they just want to go home early as they can and if the school add more hours they are going to be more rude than they are. We are teens,we just want to have a good adolescense. The good thing is that we are going to have one more day off out of school. We used to have two days out of school,but now we are going to have three,so if we add the days like early dismissal,vacations,or because of the weather those are going to be lost days,in fact we are going to lost more days,so I think that is going to affect our academic life. The period of time that we used to have to finish the unity for each class sometimes does not adjust and we get busy,imagine if we just have four days of school plus the teens that like to be absent. In fact,all in the world has advantages and disadvantages as I mentioned.

One of the advantages that I can see is that teenagers are going to be more hours doing good things being in the school,and not waisting their time doing things that are disturbing for them. We usually go to school an average of seven hours,if the businessses want to add two or three more hours to be in total ten hours taking out one day,and becoming just four days of school each day ten hours of work,In my opinion is going to be the same,because the two or three extra hours that they would add is the same that one more day of school;however,what is going to happen with the students that are in sports,have other activities or students that are in clubs,they will going home till night,I believe that is not good for anybody,they are not going to have time to do their homework for the next day,or an extra activity if they want during the rest of the day.

In conclusion let the things stay same till this day,we can conserve energy doing other type of proposal that not affect too much the people and their activities. We can start doing little things like turning off the lights of our house when we do not stay there,or when we do not use them. Those are my thoughts,so we can help our world being more educated with our enviroment and the resources that they provide for us. Energy is something indispensable in our life,so if we do not take care of that resource we are going to have a lot of problems in the future,as energy become more expensive or something like that. We can provide huge things to our country and the world if we want.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
5B40AA0E6C2B,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree with this statement about the importance of attitude of the people. I think is very important to be positive and has a good attitude with everybody.

In the other head, many people likes the people that has a positive attitude. For example when I was in my country Generic_City. There is a woman call Generic_Name she have a small restaurant in the park front to her house . She was sell I say was because I don't know if she still has the restaurant. However In the restaurant she was sell many type of food. For example soup, chicken, pupusas and Generic_Name need someone to help her with the restaurant job. And there is a woman her name is Generic_Name she is very smart however she has a bad attitude with every body.

She went to apply for the restaurant job and she has a good experience in the restaurant. And there is other woman name Generic_Name she is very nice and she always try to help others in the community also she has a positive attitude with the people. Generic_Name call Generic_Name and Generic_Name Because Generic_Name want to interview. Also she want meet they and see how they are and what they know about work in a restaurant.

The fist woman the come to Generic_Name house was Generic_Name she don't say good morning she just went to Generic_Name and say I am interesting in the job.

Generic_Name was very surprising because her just ask for the job don""t in troduce herself and Generic_Name told her that she already has someone to help her in the restaurant. Generic_Name just say ok bye. After one hour Generic_Name come to Generic_Name House and she say good Morning I am Generic_Name it is here where they are hearing someone to help work in a restaurant.

Generic_Name told her yes so Generic_Name was talking with Generic_Name and Generic_Name know that Generic_Name know a little about work in a restaurant bout she notice that she is smart and with the time she well be learn fast and she well be appreciate the opportunity that Generic_Name is give to her. Also Generic_Name has a positive attitude went she was speaking with Generic_Name.

In fact I think has a positive attitude is the key to success in life. For example, few days ago my father was very worry because he has just two days to finish one of the big job the he has. He was thinking to ask my brother if he has time to came help him. My brother told him that he is going to help him and he look at my father he was very worry and he ask my father what is happen why he look worry.

my father told him that is for the job that he has he just has two days to finish and my brother always has a positive attitude and he told my father to don't worry that everything is going to be okay. And he is going to do his best to help him with the job. He is going to do the more fast that he can and he is going to ask his friends to came and help hem with his big project. After two days they finish the job on time. And My father boss was so happy that they do a great job and my father was very proud of my brother because he has a positive attitude and he believe in his self.

This is why I think that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Because is help to win many things with the family and other persons.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
D0CC47FFC293,"To have a good life we need to have a good way of think, it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I'm agree with that statement because a positive attitude make you a better person, and makes your life easy, with a positive attitude your been optimistic and that is very importan during hard times in life. There are a lot of importants reason why it is important to have a positive attitude.

A positive attitude is the key to succes in life because you will have a good relationship with people. People like to be around a person that has a good attitude and is optimistic because they know that you are always going to try to help others and you are going to keep a good attitude during adversities, also if you have a good attitude people will know that they can count on you. You can give people good advices as well as a constructive opinions. Conversly if you have a negative attitude you are going to transmit a bad energy, and people will stay away from you. That's why is very important to have a good attitude because you are going to be surround with people that has a positive attitude too.

Also a positive attitude is important because it will help you to solve problems easily. If you are calm and keep a positive attitude during problems you will find a better solution for problems. If you are positive you will try to think in a way to solve the problem without stressing too much. Also if you have a positive attitude you will not give up easily during hard times. People who have a negative attitude always struggle when solving problems, because they think that maybe the problem does not have solution or if it has is to hard to solve it. Negative people always focus on the bad side of things that's why it is very hard for them to handle problems. Thereby is important to keep a positive attitude, no only because it will help you, but also because you will be more happy.

Another reason why is important to have a positive attitude and why I think is the key to succes in life is because I have seem that people who have a positive attitude are more happy than people that have a negative attitude because they stress for little things that happen , positive people are always trying to see the good side of things, they know everything that happen, happen for a reason and that everything has solution, we just need to look for a way to solve it. People with positive attitude always make better choices than someone negative. For example; The majority of the people with negative attitude give up when they don't reach what they want instead of strive their goal. Largely people with positive attitude always keep going and fighting for their goals until they reach it.

In conclusion a positive attitude is very important to be successful because, it will help you to make a strong relationship with people. Also it is important because you will always find a way to solve conflicts, if you keep a good attitude you also are going to make good chices. You are going to be happier and live peaceful because you are not going to stress about everything . Your friends, family and coleagues will know that they can count on you because you are a reasonable person.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
0435196871A1,"We live in a world where almost everyone has dreams,passion and ,goals. People has different passion for example they are people that want to learn about sing,dance,write,read,technology and more in depends in what would you like to learn .High school were made to learn about important things about Science,Math, History,English and some of them are fun. However there are some high school's that requires to have a class of drama,or art before you graduate at least you have to have one class it can be drama or art. I believe schools should have more options to students for example music,dance, sports, sing ,cook ,technology,cars,and more because no everyone is interest in drama or art. It should be elective by the students, first reason why it should be elective is because the people have different passion and dreams,second reason is that might be helpful to identified who you are,and it would help you to success.

One of my passion is to make new tings that no one has never ever create something that can be helpful to heal people life. Thats my passion and my dream .The last school that I went they require two elective classes but is optional the students have the right to choose. My counselor help me to find out some elective classes about science and humans it was really hard to find the right class for me. Somehow they were some students in the same classroom and they were boring,sleeping. The reason why they were like that is because thats not them passion they probably want to be learning about something different. Thats why is important to be in a class where you really feel that you going to learn. So that can happen to many students that's why is really important to know what are your passions and to be free to choose at least one elective class.

Two years afters I finish the elective class my brain was confused everything change because before taking those classes it was hard for me to choose my career. So right now am pretty sure how and who I want to be in a future that class help me to find out that heal sick people is my passion specially children's health. Before the elective class my dream was to be a police officer and now my maid is completely change and it was and still being help full to me. Now the electives class are helping me to applied in universities and scholarships .Basically these can happen to more students, there some students who don't know who they are and what they want to be in the future and these electives class can help them at the same way that helps me. However principals should know that is important to help students to find out what passion and accomplish they what to made while they are in high school.

In conclusion high school's should let students to choose at least one elective class every year. Elective classes has they own benefit to students. In my opinion I am agree with having the right to choose one class that has to be relative with your passion and your dreams. However they are more different opinions as my opinion,some of them might think that art and drama is what everyone needs to learn about it. But for what I have been through I support those who believes that is fair to choose one or two elective classes.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
BE28A2EEAE06,"There are many kinds of enjoyable educational activities. Completing a science experiment is the most enjoyable activity. it's the most enjoyable activity because doing a science experiment teaches kids to have more responsiblity on completing something. it teaches them to work hard together and have responsibility. My favorite thing about doing a science experiment is teamwork. I think that working together is important because it teaches kids to bond like family,talk to each other about it, and learn what mistake you made about it. Even if you don't make a mistake you still learn different things at the end, like bonding and learning how the experiment was supposed to be done.

The activity is enjoyable because my friends and I get to do experiments together as a group. We assign a person to do a different task so everyone can work. Our teacher tells us to clean up after ourselves for her next classroom so she could get more organized. Doing a science experiment is helpful because people will start to like learning about science. This activity also makes you understand better as you are doing the experiment. These are the reasons why i think completing a science experiment is a enjoyable and educational activity.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
4608287E9B30,"Do you like to be yourself? Many people around the world love to be original. To be yourself is the greatest accomplishment in the world because you can earn your own credits, you can make your own way and you can have your goals clearly.

In school I am always making my own effort to earn my own credits and never be a cheater because I feel satisfied with the result of my own work.

Make your own way have a big advantage because you decide where you want to go or when you will move forward although it is hard because have a lot of obstacle this is one of the risk you may have to take to be yourself.

Have your goals clearly is an advantage because you know what you want and need to be an exceptional person in the society and that every one would see that you are different person and never give up at your goals.

To be your self is to try your best in whatever you want. To be our self sometimes carried us, but t be our selves it is a beautiful and unique feeling. In the feature everyone will want to be their selves because it bring us security, exceptional personality and love of our own. every one is invited to feel this beautiful feeling",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
0BDADA3AFF77,"When someone is confused like a problem or a situation in life. They're going to want a lot of advices so they could solve that problem for example: i was struggling on math. I needed help so i asked a friend. They told me some advices but i was still confused so i decide to ask another friend. If the advices were not helping out so much then i would just ask the teacher and the teacher should give you a lot of helpful advices because there the ones that are teaching the class so they should know what to do to help a student out.

Also the reason why people ask multiple persons for advice is because. if you ask one person for advice that person may not give you a lot of advices than asking multiple people for advices because the advices that other people are giving you can help you out more than that one advice that the one person gave you.

Asking multiple people for advice can teach you new things that you didnt know of. Asking multiple people for advice can help you in so many ways. Asking multiple people for advice make you help someone one day that needs advices in problems.

I feel like asking multiple people for advice can be important to you in so many ways like doing your homework, doing school work, driving a car, taking care of a baby, and so many other stuff that could help you in life for asking multiple people for advices.            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
7B4B838D8360,"First of all, I agree with Minister winston churchill once he said success consists of going from failure to failure because when you failure somethig you have to see the important role the faiure plays in the pursuit success. In addition, you have to think about your ideas. Forexample, when I know the position of superviser is avilble at my work and traying to work harder and harder to get this position,but after three years of working hard they gaive this position to someone ealse at this time i feel failure and I keep asking my self why they did not give me the position. Moreover, after two month the manager taking to me about why I am not working hard same like before, and you telling him about the superviser position and you did not ask me for it you just give it to someone ealse. Socend, the city manager called me to ask me if I am still interstiing about the postion or not I said yes I am intersting for it. Then he meet me at the work and said to me to get the position you have to do a lot of things before I gave you the position I said a lot of things like what, I am always dowing every thing at work. Third, he said I have to work all the positions in the reastorant the positions are the following:Foodrunner, Host,Selver,and

Ketchen. And after all of that you will get a traning of two other restorants. In addition to that, I have to disid if I still need the superviser position or not, if I said yes I still need it thats mean I heve to do all the thigs what the manager said it to me to gt the position. FOrth, I accept my manager ofer, and i worked all the positions in the restorant accept the bartnder.

Fivth, the superviser position is good I will get good money and indepence on the location of the restorant our location in Washington Dalles International Airport. Thats mean the restorant always busy specialy Saterday and Sunday. Moreover, I am working with the campany since the open the restorant I am the seniorest preson in the restorant because the campany changed the manigment three times until now.

Then, when my manager saw me morking extrimly hard and when the city manager taked me again I am finaly get the suprviser position

Firs of all, when you going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm it is very great to have your enthusiasm and you have to belive in it, because this is the only way to seccess in your life.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
D669349412FB,"He is a good thinking,but you see fast all fall,said you are ageeri him. He said you going to success god help us.

Yes i,m agree because every people fallow the role and going to toghader don,t loss enyone.British Prime Minister Winston Churchill so good idea,because people go just one satap success god help,s more help go up belive the god and yourslaf. Failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.

I,m agree with him. He has a good idea about the improtand role and that failure plays in the pursuit of success,because you have pawer fight with failure,and failure you won oneday success and you have prode yourslaf.He is a nice idea give you but fast all fasl the most improtand everywhere fallow the role,success consists of failure loss you enthusiasm. My sentences content of my idea. My word organized in a logical manner. My idea supported by British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said,success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Pursuit of success i hope so the maen idea is success of help god but said him good idea give us all.

One day you have success fight the failure ever peolpe fast fight the failure than have a success. Eevry people dont have success because thay are not sarvie life no fallow the role,s and dont have good thinking go up.

Mr: British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said is very improtand idea and good thinking every people fallow the rules than you go up success you don,t have good think you not move go up success.

Main idea is success and failure with fight than go about success.

He is very amizing idea and supptand the success and you know without failure not have not success. You frist down than go up going to success you not fight failure you not go up you not have success.

British Prime Minister Winston Churchill i,m agree with you. Yes success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Churchill,s ststement is will because all success is with failure.",1.0,1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5
12CA89146E91,"It is true that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. First i want to be something in the the future i will choose my won character, second i will choose my won character to be socialize with people and third i might chose my won character to take care of my health.

First i want to be something in the the future i will chose my won character. For example; my parents wants me to follow what they wants to make my character but i'm not agree with their decision, they wants me to be a doctor in the future but, i want to be a pilot in the future, so i will decide my won character to be a doctor or a pilot and i would choose what is best for me.

Second i will choose my won character to be socialize with people. For instant; I love people! spending time with people around me helping me to learn how to build my won character better, being socialize with people mean you have more friends and spending time with them can help me to learn new things from them and experience them might help my won character.

Third i might choose my won character to take care of my health. whoever health is more important to me, health is depend on my won character ,for example; if i eat healthy food it's can help my mind to think about my won character, if my health is not good i won't be able to follow my won character so, we should focus more about our health,so we can be able to choose our won character in conclusion, it is true that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. i want to be a pilot in the the future i will chose my won character,spending time with people around me helping me to learn how to build my won character better and if my health is not good i won't be able to follow my won character.           ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
2D5A9BEEB30D,"Do you agree or disagree with extending the school day. I disagree with extending the school day. The 3 reasons why i disagree with extending the school day is that the students will get home late,the school will need to spend more money on students,and the students will get more tired.

First of all,the students will get home late. The students won't have have time to do after school sports nor activities. The kids will not have time to do homework nor study. The students won't have time to do fun things on their own time.

Additionally,the school will need to spend more money on students. The state will need to raise taxes for the schools. The school will need to spend more money on bills for utility. The schools will need to spend more money on supplies and food for kids.

Finally,the students will be more exhausted. The students will be exhausted because they will need to do work for extra hours. Students who do after school sports or activities will not get enough sleep because they will be getting home late. The students will get home past there bed time and they have to eat dinner.

In conclusion,the three reasons why is disagree with extending the school day is that students will get home late,the school will need to spend more money on students,and students will be more tired.",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0
E8C554B25F19,"Do our character have to be formed by that way the we performed or by influences. Your character will be what yourself choose to make it. We should formed our character by influences beyond our control.

In addition, by the influences that we receive day by day we chooses how to be creating our character. For example, I introduced my character in the situations the I pass, that help me how to be a better person. Also, sometimes we take our family advice, they tried to persuade our character by doing incorrect things. In others words we can said that they just want to influences our self because they ready pass for al this things that is good because we can see how much love they have to us. Is wonderful when your mom tell you the she can't believe that way the you get influences because sometimes we don't want to get they advice but all that they said is correct event if we don't want to believe then. For example my parent always want the betters things to me but i know if i don't try to fix my character I going to have less opportunities to have a better job or a better future. Also, Things are necessary somethings is hart to change our character because we think the we are okay but other think all the appositive, so we never have to think the we are fine because the never is going to happened always we have to be better in some thing we need to be honest with our lives and accept what we are doing wrong is more better to accept our errors and there is went we are going to see how our character change in a better way and then we are going to feel happy about our character and our lives.

Moreover, The influences control our character by the way the we act and think. For example, I was a person the if something I don't like I really have to talk to you the was horrible. Also my mom help me to change my character in my way to act because went sometimes people tell me things the I really don't like I do bad faces to then, I was doing bad with that. In other way, we don't think in the consequences of having a bad character, sometimes we don't think if others are going to see the actions in our lives and they maybe are going to influences you but no we the same attitude, because some people have bad attitude to but all the influences help you in life because if you don't like the people act with a bad attitude you don't have to be like that to. Also, you have to be prepared to make the decisions of what changes you are going to make. Having a good character gives you large of opportunities people always is looking for person with a good character,because costumer look the. In addition, all thinks the people said about you help you with your character, don't feel sad because you change your way to think. Obviously the take your time because you are not going to change in one morning but with a professional character more doors are going to open and more opportunities came so take other people influences.

Some people argument the we should choose our own character traits, because some people just are going to tell you bad opinions in the way the you have to act. Moreover, some people believe the is no necessary to get a great character. In other hand we have to feel free in what we want to do we know what we need to change we don't have to do what others want because sometimes they just look for they benefits what is better for then and that dont have to be like that. In addition, some people don't care if you are okay, or how you feel. In addition others argument the is necessary listen to others influences because sometimes we don't find a way to resolve our character problems bur other know what to do and they try to find a way to make you live easy. For example, I know some people the dont know how to control they character when they are mad soy they contact person the know how to act in the situations. Also, some people take careers for find solution to person the have serious problems with they character I really dont know if is normal the people get mad went they want to eat, I have a friend with the problem in my point of view the is not normal because i never pass from the situation so I can't help her but people the have long time studying on the yes they can tell her what way to eat or i don't know but they have a solution for the problem in her character. In Addition all this problems can help you to have a good character a better attitude because is necessary for talk with other because we need to have a way a formed how to talk without breaking they feelings because as humans the we are we feel sad went other trade us with a mad face and sometimes we performed don't talk to then. So always remember the a good attitude change to many things.

In Conclusion, sometimes is necessary be influencing by other because they give you different ways how to be working in your character. In addition they received influences by other help you with the control in your character by changing a your way to act and covert you in a better person. Also help your character in a better way to think, in be focus on your ideas. In conclusion all this things are necessary in whatever way the you want to used then because in the proved of the live all things are necessary event if are smalls things they are necessary don't thing the people just influences your self in change your character because they just want to fight with not the is not like that is people is trying to give you a better influences about how you have to act because they always want better things to you. Always if you do bad on your character they are going to tell you and I thing the is more better if they tell you what you are doing wrong the others persons the you don't know came just for the just because you don't want to obey always think in you future. The is necessary a excellent character for a better work or food different's things the you want to realized.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
FA0619D6A0DF,"People may not agree, but we do pick our own character trait. There are also other people who when it gets to having their own character traits they can't, therefore they get influence by others. Yes, we probably were influenced by other, but we didn't use all their character traits. There's lots of people who try to be others but it always dose not work out. If you want to pop out like the others best chance is you being your true self.

To begin with, we've been creating our own character traits since birth. We all learned how to speak, and walk differently. Your first word were most likely ""Dada"", or ""mama"". You kept watching shows that kept you entertain, or was it the games that made it entertaining that kept you going. How'd you learn how to walk, were you thought by your parents, or did you learn by yourself. it was either your parents were walking you, or you stood up and took your first steps.

In addition, you never stay young, you're always growing, our parents always wish we wouldnt grow. But it's part of life, now you're in the stage where time gets hard. Being a teen is mixed emotions, as like mentally, and physically. Times gets rough, you're struggling in school, or at home. You're having problems with friends, or family members. Being a teen is never a struggle nor negativity. You're learning what you need to improve and what you don't, you're helping yourself out. Guide yourself and continue making new character traits.

Finally, you see everything different, there's more responsibility, more weight to your shudders. your an adult, getting ready to pay bills and more. you've came a long way, youve been through ups and down. You've learn so much, use your knowledge, and continue to expand it. Do what's best for you and not for others. Use your character traits that you've learn and explore whats in front of you.

You are who you are, you choose how you live, how you move, and how life will be. Yes there are struggle in life but it doesn't mean stop and dont expand. have your character traits to help you, to guide you. Yet we're in a new year where people try to be other people, people try to be who they aren't. It's better to be yourself, than being fake to yourself. all these character traits that you've made, you worked, you used. It defines who you are and what you can do in life.   ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
4EE0B81B9133,"You are in trouble. As your teachers might tell you, behave when you are in school. That includes in the halls, cafeteria, and even on the school bus. By following simple rule that are established for your safety, you won't lose your school staff's trust.

Behave when you are in the halls. when the bell rings, and you are dismissed, go to your other class immediately. Don't take a walk around the school, go to the gym, or cause a traffic by standing in the halls and talking to your friends. It's not a safe nether is it responsible. Keep your hands to your self, unless if it's an activity that allowed you to touch the other students or even staff members with adult supervision.

Behave in the cafeteria. Once you are in line to get your food, you should respect others by waiting your turn. This isn't only respectful, but it's even a good habit. Walk back to your seat, don't run. Running could cause for you to spill your food, and someone could slip and that resulting in an injury. When you finish your food, cleanup after your self if necessary.

Behave when you are on the school bus. When you are on the bus it's nice of you to greet your bus drive, but you don't have to. Quietly walk to an open seat and sit down. Sit with your grade level. Once settled, you could quietly talk to the person sitting next to you, don't yell across the bus. On the bus it is important for the bus driver to be able to see from the back window or door to prevent car accidents, don't put your stuff in the middle of walkway. If you are going to be eating on the bus, which you are not aloud, unless the bus driver said so, clean up any mess that you may have caused.

Showing responsible and appropriate behaviors could make teachers more flexible with any other improper behavior that you may cause. For an example, you are a bad student, you were late to class, and you decided to run. The teacher catches you, and you get in trouble. Example two, you are a good student, you were late to class, the bell rings but you don't run, the teacher forgives you.

""You are free to pick to choose your actions, but you aren't free from the consequences"" said somebody.  ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
34E9C436DECE,"Whenever I play football, we do 2 laps around the field After running laps we then stretch for 15 minutes. Later we pass the football to eachother or we punt the football and someone has to run and try to catch it. I find that activity fun,because I get to be with my friends/teammates and we get to travel with eachother too different places like Generic_City,Generic_City,Florida etc. On the bus too Generic_City we study with eachother like how we're going to help eachother out or like a mini game plan. We sometimes help eachother with homework or needing someone to help study. We love to play football beacuse we are pushing our body to become stronger,healthy,body in check,and our mind out the gutter as in our mind roaming freely but thniking at the same time. Whenever I play left-mid I got to keep eye on my oppenent that is in front of me because who knows he might end up getting the ball passed to him and it's my job to stop him from going further then where he is because if he goes further it'll effect me because it's my job to make sure he doesn't reach the end zone or go further then the spot they were originally at. Football for me release any stress I have on my mind like I just release the stress and be focus more on the field the thing I was stressing about earlier because like for a person like me i stress a lot and think too much for my brain and my head ends up hurting because of too much stress,over thinking,things on my mind. Football is a very enjoyable sport to play.

I enjoy uploading songs and get paid cause it's one way of making money by the internet but at the same time it can be really hard sometimes becaus eyou have to think what song you're going to upload and make sure theres no mistakes in it very well audio quality.

I like video games as well beacause you think what your next move is about to be beacause lets say you're playing fortnite with your friends you got to over thinking the other team thats pushing thats pushing you and your team because they might be better then you guys combined so you got to out play them. Once out play them you got to kill the other teams to win the game ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
2DDFC0DFC442,"Highschool is a big step in the growth of students. The step from middle school to highschool is a very diffecult one. As kids start to grow older there minds also change and sometimes the dreams they had of becoming someone or something is different in highschool.

Many young students in highschool don't really know what they want to be when they get older. And sometimes highschool forces kids to try to find the job or jobs they want to do when they get older. I feel like as a highschool student my self, and as an 11th grader I still don't know what I want to be when I am older. I feel like for young adults like me school isnt the only thing they have in mind. For example, I have a lot of out of school activitys that take away from always just focusing on school. Also for highshcool kids relationships can be a hard. They take up all your time and they also make you angry and stressed. And that can also take away from learning and your future as I know very well myself.

As young adults, Students that don't really have the ropes done in our day to day life in highschool I dont think commiting to a career in highschool is a good idea. I think schools should be teaching kids about different jobs and fields they might want to get into. But I dont think forcing kids to make there choises in highschool is something teachers should be focusing on. Instead they should be focusing on how different students learn in others ways. There are always kids that can learn and achive everything by just sitting in a class room and listening to a teacher talk. And there are the kids that can't just learn in a class room. The kids that have hard time at school becasue they have disabilities.

Teaching students in highschool to be succesful is what highschool need to do. I feel like schools mainly focus on getting kids to collage and what not. But some students dont want to go to collage or even get a job durring or even after school. I feel like school should help students become successful in school but not drive them towards anything. Meaning students should feel free to do what ever they want after highschool. And it all starts with teachers asking kids what they want to do when they grow up. And a lot of students dont even know what they are going to do in the next 2 months to come.

Sometimes collage is not what everyone wants. For me I want to take a gap year right out of highschool. And go play soccer somewhere. In my highschool days so far, Highschool was always been hard and its a big step from middle school. The teachers are not really on you as much as they were in middle school. So it makes u feel like u have more time for yourself. And its good in some ways becasue it teachers u how to be indepentent. But also as teachers give u more lead way students become more likely to do worse. They think its just easy to skip classes and not get in trouble. So for me everything that i have explained makes choosing a career during highschool really hard.

All in all students should feel like they have the fredom to do what they want when they are at the later years of highschool with out the burden of everyone around him or her telling them they have to go to collage or that they have to choose a career when they are in highschool.

I think Making studetns choose a career when they are in highschool is not something schools should be focused on. They should be focusing on having kids grow and not having them choose there careers at a young age. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
01A65BA4080E,"Most schools let students use their cell phones during class for educational purposes, however, other schools don't think that allowing students to use their cell phones would be better than using computers in the library or computer labs, by allowing students to use their phones there will be a higher chance for them to get distracted doing what they are not supposed to intead of doing their assignments. Students should not be aloud to use their phones during class because students would pay more attention to their phones than their teachers.

Some teachers would rather take their students to the library or to a computer lab to use the computers to do assignments, instead of letting them use their phones because students would not get their work done. For example in my school we used to have the school WIFI on our phones but that only made us get distracted so my school decided to take down the WIFI from our phones, this year we were given chromebooks so we can do our class works in class without having to go to the library or a computer lab. We can take our chromebooks in any class to do our assignments and it's made a huge impact on every student because now no one is ever on their phones, and we pay more attention to our teachers.

By letting students use their cell phones during class will increase the chances for them to get distracted, for example one day my english teacher gave us a reaserch paper and told us that we could use our cell phones to search up important documents, while we were doing our work one of my classmates' phone went off because she got a snapchat notification and everyone got distracted, the next day everyone was using their phones in class and no one was doing the work that we were assigned to do. Students should not be aloud to use their phones during class because it will not benefit them, this would be a distraction to not only students but teachers as well.

If schools let students use their phones there also will be a higher chance that students' grades will drop, and a lot of parents would not be pleased. My parents would get extremely mad if my school let us use our cell phones during class because they know I would easily get distracted, if we were aloud to use our phones the whole school would be a disaster. Teachers would not be happy with the idea of letting students use their phones, because every teacher wants the whole class' attention on them not their cellular devices. Some students and schools might think that letting students use their phones would be a great idea because it could probably benefit those students who might not have a computer at home, and maybe letting them use their cell phones during class to do their assigments would help them, but that doesn't mean that every student has to use their phones too.

Schools should not let students use their phones for educational purposes because it would be a big distraction for students and teachers. By allowing us students to use our cell phones it's only increasing our chances to get distracted and it would make our grades drop. If we were aloud to use our cell phones during school we would not pay attention to our teachers and we would never get our work done. Us students should not be aloud to use our cell phones during school because it will not benefit us, it will only make us distracted. Teachers and parents would not be pleased if schools let students use their cell phones during class, we're teenagers and we get distracted very easily.       ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
767533E12569,"he is a good because they are the prescient and us. now the are more procession a other prescient and us. because and the more many education for student and school. the more school for one because he have a one women the have many education for a other because the good more the one is information for access because is not like the brazen giant of Greek fame with conquering one nation for is the imprison the eyes command the one book for people the us give more your lied your huddled Farmer with silent lips the more the one is for you because the are a one solution for you and a other people he have a more the one solution for you here ancient lands your storied pound Aries she with silent lips pledge of a in order people he have a education

Do we accomplish more the if we are always doing something or does inactivity also serve a purpose take a position on this for you and specific examples. take a position for you because the are a never much may be a always how many I planned and my people he have the on the right to ported and the after type your response in the space. than new colossus for the more have a one they solution for is came one o two people the same time. because the more that in and here name norther of Exiles form her barmen the are one sous ion. ",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0
5DB370AD8EFB,"No I think it wouldnt be good idea to teach students from home. I think it would be a bad idea because students could easily get distracted at home. Students could just not answer the video calls. Students could just simply also not keep up with the work due to improper communication.

Students could easily be distracted in video conferences with other things. Things that could help them not attend to the conference that is going on. As for classes that are taking place online, Students could just not be doing the work and be on other pages.

It can be easy to not attend any of these classes, you could just not show up, do the work , or simply just sleep in. If you dont attend these classes it could lead to serious consequences. These consequences could lead to serious things. It would be better to have a physical class to walk into and attend.

Some students are better learners when you directly speak to someone one on one. Not all Students learn the same, some learn by being up and active such as athletes, mechanics, and others. Students that choose to learn online could also not understand a subject and could end up needing a little more help. Like me, I

need a little more help sometimes from teachers so I need a physical class and physical person to help me.

So in conclusion, I think it would not be a good idea to have students taught at home because of the distractions, Attendance, and miss communication. Therefore it would be better for a student to learn in a classroom with a Teacher that could help the student if he ever needs the help.",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
C53073A5A9CB,"I am going to talk about a prompt that Tomas Jefferson wrote, about being idle or always doing something;

Idle or active?

, I think that when you are active you can make and accomplish the duties that you have faster and better.

The reason that i think being active is better, Is because you will get accustomed to always do something and that can help you in your future in your homework, house duties, and in your future job; and i know that being idle does not help you to grow as someone that is uses full to the society, because one of my cousins does absolutely nothing and he start to get into a lot of problems with our family.

If you are always active you are showing to the people that you are someone they can count on, someone that demonstrate, values like determination, and responsibility; and most of the time people are looking for does type of people to manege a work place, food store,school,and companies.

I also think that active people are more likely to be successful,I am sure that it is true because my father star to work when he was only 9 years old and he was always doing something, and then whit the time he reach to be his own boss doing what he like but never stop doing the duties that he give to himself make him a really responsible person; and that why i think that person how are always active have more potential to succeed.

The reason that idle people are not going to get anywhere for me is because most of the time people are looking for somebody with energy and wants of work and if you are one of the people how are always on the sofa watching television i am sure that you wont be the first choices for them.

In conclusion the reason why i chose the people that are active make more accomplishment in they daily life is because that have more opportunities to show to the word that they are here and that they want to be seen and they want something to do and do it better and that they can reach their goals.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
B942E0DA6A0F,"I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, it is best to be yourself than to be someone you're not. You won't have to meet some jobs perspectives. You won't have to be someone you're not. You can have many accomplishments throughout your life.

The first reason as to why I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson is because, when it comes to jobs it can be real tough for some people. Some job's ask who you really are as a person, once you let them know they don't like the response. But, there are some job's that will accept you and will like who you are truly.

Second of all don't have to be someone you're not. You shouldn't have to please others only because they don't like who you are as an individual. Some might even say that its for the best when in reality it isn't. You shouldn't have to be the opposite of who you are just so you don't get judged on. Pay no attention to those who don't accept you for being nothing but yourself, and don't change for them unless you're doing it for you. You should always please yourself no matter what.

Lastly like Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" That writing is nothing but the absolute truth. Your individuality can bring you so much success. It can take you places you can't even imagine. Being yourself can benefit you as a person, people can perhaps like even love the real you. You can become a role model to those who are having trouble on deciding if they should be themselves or be what this world want's them to be. People could admire you and accept you even more.

In conclusion I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because it is best to be you own individual self than not, because you won't meet jobs perspectives, be someone you're not, and also it comes with amazing accomplishments. Some think otherwise because the believe that it would make life more simple and easy. Also you might find that being your own individual self gets you no where. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
A1BFCDA12FB1,"People should make their own decisions about life's important matters. i agree with this statement because once people get older as a person they know what they are doing and what they want. another reason is high school, people are a teenagers and people are still learning, but sometimes make mistakes. moreover when people are eighteen they start to make important choices and actions about their life.

When a person gets older they learn between right and wrong. for example a person should never spend their money on something they don't need and knowing if they do they'll be broke and have financial problems. people know what are the needs and wants in life, they learn this through out life and the one to make the decisions.

High school is where people start to have an idea or know what you wanna do as a career. In high school you get to meet a lot of people and make new friends, in addition you make a lot of decisions. The decisions people make and ask their self are, should i be friends with this person, should i go to this class, and sometimes people don't wanna continue school. more over people wanna experience a party in high school so they sometimes make the decision to go and drink or do drugs, but end up getting in serious problems. In the end people make the decisions.

When a person turns eighteen they are an adult now and probably out of high school. People are either in collage or working when eighteen. That's a decision people make before graduating and thats a very important life choice. Sometimes people make the decision not to go to collage or sometimes go to collage then drop out and thats a decision a person makes because they think its the best for them.

in conclusion people make decisions and learn from it. People know between right and wrong, need and wants, and what they wanna do in life. You also make mistakes in life and sometimes you need to make that mistake in order for you not to make the same decision again. At the end of the day people know what they want in life and know the decisions they make. Guidance from others is a idea or option, people will still have to make the decisions.          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
BB18A75AC035,"Work requires a lot of concentration. At Generic_School, I prefer to work alone because I do what I think, no body interrupt me and I concentrate better when I am by myself. I will give three reason and examples about why I think working alone is better than working with a group.

To follow at what my brain tells to me is the best decision I can ever do. I remember one time when I was in middle school, I was working with a group of five students. That day the teacher told us to make a surprise to the children with cancer. I had an idea to make a letter and a big poster with some illustrations to make those children happy, but we didn't because my partners didn't want to make the poster and we only did the letter. that's why I always believe that is better to work alone.

In my English class, the other day teacher made some groups, and each group had to make an essay about the contamination of earth. I was in a group of four, I was trying to do my best by reading a book about earth and what causes earth get pollution, when one of my partners stopped me by removing the book that I had, that made me really angry, and now that makes me over thinking that working alone is one of the best choice that one person can make.

I remember the last year here at Generic_School, Generic_Name my health teacher told the class to make some groups for presentations about drugs and its diseases that these can cause. And also, each group have to pick their topic about what are you going to present she said. I asked her if I could make the presentation by myself and she told me that I can, but it may be difficult for you because it is hard to explain in front all your partners she said. I did my presentation about the alcohol, and she congratulated me because the hard work that I did.

She told me that she was glad about me because I did the best presentation from the class. That's why I always prefer to work alone, so no body can interrupts what I think.

In conclusion, these years really changed my point of view because now I think that working alone is one of the best choices that a human can make because it makes a person over think and believe more in their self. Now I am ready to continue with this adventure. ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
3B6893E9CA71,"If we're always doing somthing then we're always busy. As long as we keep busy we'll sooner be done then later. For example if there's a project to be due, then that project must be due, and if the teacher gives you a due date it would be more motivating to finish it on time then later or even late. As long as the person doesn't give up and keep focus, then there's nothing to worry about. Staying on task isn't that hard, but if there's any distractions you must remove yourself from that situation and get back on track. Like imagine if a student was in class having trouble focusing because the students around them we're distracting or noisy. Then they may ask the teacher that they prefer working in the hall because the noise in the class is to distracting to them. The key is when it comes to doing something you must keep busy to reach that goal of finishing or being done. There are going to be some challenges, but you just need to overcome those challenges and learn from it its all about learning and progressing as you keep working towards it. These are some of the reasons i think would help best to keep moving forward.",3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.5,4.0
BCDED505B597,"Dear. Principal,

I think the best and awesome policy is policy number 1 , because the students need their cell phones to call their family members to pick them up. I see a lot of students use there phones in class, but maybe if you give them other free times to use it they may not use it during class periods. Having to use phones in your own free time is not a bad idea, but need to remember to turned off their phones in class.

From: STUDENT_NAME

2/28/11",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.5
FD7B0090CFE0,"I agree with Emerson's statement a powerful tool, because its always good to know more, then what I already know. That way I can have more experience in other things, and unless I try to do something that I don't know I will never move on.

If I don't try new thing things I will always be stuck with the things that i know, and if I have to do something that i need; and i dont know how to do it i will have to learn it.

Its always good to be learning new things, and I can learn of everything books, television, electronic devices, many other things.

people complement me when I show how to do something or at least say thank you, and that makes you feel really good about your self.

Learning its always good to my mind because it keeps my mind working, and I feel good learning new things interesting things like learning about animals that i didnt know about or learning about a country.

Unless I try to do something beyond what I have already mastered, I will never grow.

I always like to be learning it makes me want to learn more about a specific topic or just learn about new things, because if I dont then I will never move on, and I will always know the same things.

But I can start learning new things, and know a lot of things, how to do stuff, or just to something, because I never know when I am going to need that knowledge.        ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
D5C7AA1266CC,"Yes teenagers should do curfews because they will stay out of trouble and stop braking the law. They will be discipline,and have respect of themselves and others example lets say you have a child is a minor and he or she breaks the laws and always gets in to trouble the military is one of things that will keep you discipline or otherwise they won't be well trained. The next thing I want to add is young people have to be shown and have experiences the a 10:pm weekend curfew is a descent amount of time to get them well trained other places like military, Juvenile, and like closing of businesses. Teenagers have a hard time staying in one place of a very long time with no free time a midnight curfew for teenagers is good for them so they can reflect and learn for their mistakes.

Some teenagers are committing crimes and getting away with it but this program well benefit them but in a matter time they will become good teenagers and obey the law. However, they will carry the behavior through their work place and public areas with good attitude and good behavior and it will never interfere of young person's live for example,lets say a job interview and the person who wants to hire you and he or she will see your characteristics and how many times you have broke the law and getting into trouble the person won't hire you can't get a job when you have a bad record of committing crimes and facing the law so, curfews are a good suggesting with young people that you can't say no to. However, another example is vandalizing when you harm someone's property without permission as an example like graffiti, braking car window's, and invading somebody else's property.

In conclusion, every teenager who brakes laws should attend to curfews for a beneficial life experiences so they can get the best out of them and they can prevent teenagers out of trouble.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
CBE7994D8199,"Dear, Principle I have a complain that I will like to talk about I heard that you are changing the school policy on the sports and activities. I heard that us students we will not be able to participate in any of the sports or activity un less we have a B average in our classes. well i need to tell you that I disagree with that change and let me tell you why.

First a lot of kids like sports but some time school gets a little difficult and its a problem for some of us because we are not as smart as others which and it will be so unfair. we want to have good grads in school to but like I said before its not that es",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
E21C97204867,"Changing the cafeteria food for students would be like taking a bone away from a dog. One of the reasons why changing the school lunch would be a bad idea is because, students that attend the school would not be happy with the change. When students are unhappy with changes of the schools sometimes parents can get involved and that brings a bad reputation for the school board. One day I was watching a show and they were making school changes without the students or parents consent and it turned into a big thing. Students were so angry the went on a ""strike"" and refused to go to school.

Another reason why taking away students favorite food would be a bad idea is because students would stop eating at school. For example, when I went to a family dinner they made meat loaf and I absolutely hated it, I couldnt bring myself to finish it and I felt extremely bad but i had to throw it away. Another example is also similar to my last one but, one day my friends and I went to a buffet and they didnt have a lot options to choose from, we ended up getting these wings and it was just awful we could not eat it all. When people see things they do not like then they most likely will not eat it or even try it out.

Lastly, changing the cafeteria food would leave students with less options to choose from. It would be unfair for those who dont like what they are serving and they would have nothing else to eat. Look at it like this, its like when you go out to your favorite shopping store and they have taken out all the clothes you loved so much about that store and they replaced it with clothes you hate. You would be very unsatisfied if that wouldve happen to you. Thats what students would feel if the school lunch were to change.

Some people say that changing to a healthier school lunch would be a lot better for students; Although, this is a good point, its wrong because it misses the fact that some students would be unhappy with this decision. These are some reasons on why changing the menu would be a bad idea for the school.  ",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
4A9DB943D7D5,"My enjoyable educational activity I chose was soccer because it is a sport you do a lot of running. Soccer can be played all over the world. Long time ago people used to say that all sports were for men only but today men and women play sports thanks to the changing of the laws.

A day before a soccer game, players have to train so hard in order to win. They have to learn new tricks and they have to run a lot. All soccer players must have enough energy to run because it can lead to mistakes and can cause the team to lose. Soccer players need to be concentrating on the ball at all times and they have to make sure where they kick because if they kick too hard, they can hit someone in the stadium. During a game, there has been so many injuries due to running so fast and tripping players and then it causes a huge argument over the injured player. At all times if people want to be a soccer player, they have to play clean.

There are kids that want to grow up to be the best soccer player and for that they have to start early and join a team in a school or in other places that let kids play. Sometimes kids play at their house with siblings or other people in their family and that can be a good practice for a game in your team. Playing soccer is a great sport and it helps people lose weight because of the amount of running.

Some people play soccer for money because they got things to pay, others just play for fun. Some people say that soccer is just for Hispanics, but it isn't true because almost everyone plays soccer no matter the race. In soccer, it is best for your team to have a great coach and that he/she is good at teaching because sometimes its the coach's fault that they lose and he/she starts blaming everyone. Everyone has to try their best in any sport no matter what but its most important to concentrate on the sport and not be thinking about anything else but the sport because you can lose track and make your team lose and your team can be mad at you.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
4D3C1E2D2E03,"I agree with Churchill's to be success consists of going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm, it that's matter if you are failure and you are not even losing your enthusiasm but at list you try, that is the most important thing.

First of all,

you will never know everything but the most important things is trying because if you dont try, you will never learn, but sometime its okay to be failure without a enthusiasm that means that you dont care, you are not interesting in anything or another way to see that dont have a enthusiasm is when you waste time for example if i feel like i am just losing every time and i dont even has a enthusiasm, something to be focus, I will enjoy my time to try to better, to be a winner I always will be try to increase.

Secondly, some time people love to be a better person but there will be people who doesnt enjoy the time to increase, I just know one thing for sure sometime people like to stay in the same step because if you want to be a winner, you must try and see what you can do to go up, I will try to have a good future, a better future for my family, to have my own things, living failure make you a weak person everyone can see that you are weak, that you are not smart enough , that you are comfortable for what you have, but you must be a ambition person to have more than what you have.

Thirdly, if you dont want to live failure you must to win the opportunity, I just know that this world is for smartest people, here survive the person who can use there brain carefully, people who are not making bad mistake but we are humans,m humans make mistake but that is okay you must fix it you must to increase yourself to keep something in your heart that can motivate yourself.

Concluion, on my opinion i can said its okay if you want to stay in the same step,but you will never understand the meaning of life if you never try, you shoul try at least one time.",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
D5AC4A35BAF8,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, "" Determine never to be idle. . It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". When he wrote the quote

"" It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing,"" hes referring that when we always do tasks, assignments,or other things, It's a wonderful feeling knowing that we could complete or finish the tasks if we were always doing something. I believe that when someone work hard or try their best on what they're instersted about they could accomplish their goals.

When setting up goals, we want to accomplish them in the furture. By accomplish our goals we have to keep working harder and focus closely until we could reach our goals. Get ideas how you could accomplish your goals; for a example , by particupating schools programs ,or other smalls groups that could help you reach your goals. Keep praticing on what you're instersted about because we accomplish more by always doing something repeatly. Always be positive on reaching your goals and always try something new beacuase you won't know if you good at something else that you never knew before or try before.

Most of time we don't accomplish anything its because we not trying or we don't really care about finishing or completing anything. Sometimes always doing something repeating doesn't help for some people, since it may not work out for them. If your other goals is not working out for you, you could try something else that's new or challening. Accomplish something is not only for goals, but you could accomplish your tests, chores, group activity, and more others. Most of times people want to accomplish short-term or long-term goals because they're the most important things that they want to accomplish in their list.

Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or not ? Yes, we do accomplish more when we always doing something because if we keep repeatly doing something for kinda long period we will accomplish it and accomplish more goals too that we want to achieve too. When most people accomplish their goals, they feel amazing and exicted that they accomplish something that they stick with and praticed for a while.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
5CA2DCC616C6,"Energy had become the most usable thing in the world; without energy students couldn't be able to find information for their homework or projects. In this life time is the most valuable thing students can lose. Although students would have a three-day weekend, they would not lose any minute of class, nevertheless they would have more time to work because they would go to school only four days per week, which would give them more time to earn more money at work, spend more time with family and friends, and do their homework and projects on those three-day weekend.

To begin, energy is the most usable thing everyone use, and if students do not start to conserve it, in the future it could be difficult to get. For example, technology in schools is advancing over the years. Teachers give homework and projects to students online where they have to use their smart phones, which need energy to get charge, so they can use them for their assignments. They also use internet, which requires energy to function. This proves that if Generic_School extend the school day two hours for a four-day school week to conserve energy and resources, teachers would have to start giving students homework in which they have to use books. Obviously, students would have to adapt to find information for their homework and projects in books, like old times, and stop using technology to find information.

Furthermore, students would like the idea of having a three-day weekend. For example, they could use that time for work, spend time with family and friends, and do homework and projects. This shows that students would not miss any day of school because they would spend the same amount of hours they usually spend at school, but only in four days; the two extra hours Generic_School would extend on the schedule for a four-day week, would sum the hours the students spend on a regular week, yet they will divide that time in four days. They also can earn more money if they work more hours on those days that they would have off. Students would also have more time to study for any test they may have, or do any homework or projects. Clearly, this will be a benefit for students and teachers. They would get an extra day off without missing anything at school.

Overall, students would enjoy their three-day weekend studying, working, or spending time with family and friends because they would have an extra day on the weekend. Students would also adapt to find information in books. In conclusion, if Generic_School extend the school day two hours for a four-day school, would be helpful to conserve energy and resources.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
607A39D981DE,"Students and their families should consider any activitie that they want to get involved in school before getting in. If students get involve in many of them, then they will not have time to do any of their work from school. Not doing work from school will affect their grades , and they also won't be able to participate anymore, for having bad grades. Parents as being the ones giving permission to the student, should talk to the school and ask if it is posible for their kid to not participate in all of them because of the time, and other responsabilities they have.

First of all students should talk to their parents before taking any desicion, them both need to consider that if the student gets involved in many activities, then they will not have time to do any work from school.

If the students spend too much time on the activities, then he/she would not have time for them other responsabilities. The school should make an runion for parents, so they can agree on the terms that the school want. Activities at school should not be controling, or making the students join so many activities.

If the student does not do the school work, then they will have bad grades, that will affect them by not being able to participate anymore in any of the school actiities. Students should not be able to participate in more than two activities at school. because they will get tired a lot, and therefore they will not do their homeworks. Participating in any of the activities should also be a credit for the students.

Schools are responsable for any activite that it is happening in school, they should contact parents, and also have a reunion, so they would get the parents opinions. Parents as being the ones giving permission to the students, should considered any type of activitie that the student wants to get involved in. Participating in school it is good for students, but not when they do extraactivities.

Some of the activities should be reunating with the students after school, and help them with any questio they have, or repasing anything that they didn't understand in the class.

I think Schools should not control students involvents.

Parents should be the ones desiding, and analizing before allowing their kids join any type of activitie in school. Students should not be able to participate in too many activities that would effect their grades. parents and school should agree on the desicions of wha is going to be better for the students. When students are responsible with their shool work, and their activities, they should get extra credit.      ",3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
94EC7DF6EA74,"People these days dont go outdoors as much as they used to. I think that many people are avoiding going outside, because of cell phones. going outdoors is actually more fun than staying indoors doing nothing, because you can do a lot of activities. Some activities you can do is play sports, practice sports, run laps, and do exercise. I think that some people find outdoor activities enjoyable, because they can do activities with others and enjoy the weather while doing activities.

People should go outdoors more, because if they dont go outdoors and dont do activities, there is a chance that later on in life they can have weak bones. There are people who stay indoors just listening to music, but you can actually go outside and do activities while listening to music. If you dont like to play sports, exercise, or run laps you can just ride your bike. Riding your bike can actually help you later in life, because it can give you stronger bones and can improve your stamina and strength.

Another thing that you can do is play outdoor games, such as tag, freeze tag, and hide and go seek tag, but there is many more. These outdoor games can also improve your stamina and strength. A good time to go outdoors is when its sunny and when you have nothing to do. Also when your going outdoors make sure to bring someone with you so you can do activities with them. And if you have no one to do activities with head over to a local park to do activities with other people. Therefore i suggest that people, especially kids, to go outdoors more.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A4CD4307D620,"Part of growing in this life is having the right type of mindset and skill you want for yourself only. The things I have learned in today's day is probably not really achievable because people give up to easy and think it's hard to fix cars. I like to build and take apart engines or even add parts to get more potential out of any car I purchase. I love to race cars and also flip my money too. That all takes skill but you don't learn if your not taught in life.

Likewise myself , for 11 years my father taught me how to use his tools and fix little things on any car he had at the moment. We would sell them and flip the money beacuse we'd be the ones fixing them up a bit. When I got my very first car it had no motor in it and bought it for six hundred dollars. I myself bought the motor for a thousand and installed the whole thing by myself but yet with the right tools it was then worth five thousand because of how many miles the engine was and how clean the interior and exterior was. I would always becareful though when it came to turbo the engines. You'd need to hook a special computer on it to tune the compter of the engine so it doesn't blow up on you. I'd love to race and compete against other peoples builds for money on the track. The best part of mastering this skill is that I will never need a mechanic to fix my own car again.

Another skill I have become really good at is gaming and playing the fracnchise called Call of duty. These types of games are shooter games and it all depends on how fast your sensitivity is and how fast you can react to whatever is happening in the game. When it comes to gaming I like to post videos online of how good I am because I can also get paid through how many people watch my videos. Some people like the entertainment but more like to see how fast the reactions I have. That type of skill has helped me so much in life because it has always helped me make the right decsions when I am driving on the road even in school it has helped me remember and react a little faster then others in class. This skill improves everyday because it's affected my everyday life. Through this I've mastered to actually get through everday life without having such stress because I am always prepared to react and decide what is good for me.

All in all I agree with Ralph Waldo he is right without trying something new you won't grow at all. The human brain is mean't to be expanded and stretched like a muscle to learn new things like playing a sport , remembering equations in physics and solving over and over again and still getting logical answers , to be good at something takes practice , but to master whatever you want to master takes brilliance. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
444D784C5791,"Having the benefit to work alone or in groups is a good thing. Some say that working alone is much better than working in groups because you get no distraction, you also have more advantage to get more work done on time, and get more time to actually think about your answers and not having to worry about someone telling you different, if your wrong or right.

When working in a group, you always end up doing all the work yourself or someone else copying the answer from your work becasue they didn't wanna work do their part of the work. Working in groups is not always a bad idea but when you end up doing the work yourself then it is. We sometime wanna work with people we hang out with, but in the end you never get work done. Someone is always doing all the work and that's when everybody copy's from that person's work, when they finshed the work.

To start off, working alone can cause you less distractions and it would also help you concentrate more on your work. For example, my phone brings down a lot of distraction to me, so therefore I put down my phone for a while and concentrate more on doing my work instread of being distracted on my phone and not getting any work done. That's why have less distractions and being concentrated more could get you to finsh more work on time.

Second of all, you also would get more advantage of getting work done on time. You would take your time to actually do the work instead of guessing or rushing to get done first. For instance, if you were working with a group, you would barely get any work done, but if you work alone you could get more work done than what the group would get done.

Lastly, you could actually think about your answers and why you choose that answer choice. For instance, if you were working in a group y'all wouldn't talk or think about the answer choice, y'all would just guess for every question so y'll would be the first ones to be done. When you work alone it's different, you take your time, look over your answer choices and double check to see if that's the correct answer.

In conclusion, these are the benifits for working alone and not wokring with groups, working alone is so much peaceful and easier then having to work with a group and rush your work and guessing on every question. Having to concentrate therefore less distractions, also having more time to actually get work done and lastly looking over your answer choices carefully.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
0EBED6896F51,"Would you choose to fail for somebody else's ideas and not your own?

Although some say that people should seek guidance from people that have experience about life because they have become more wise with the years, actually people should make their own decisions because you already know what you want for your life and if you fail will be for your own decision and not on somebody else.

Some say that people should seek guidance from experts that have experience about life because they have become wise with the years. Old people like my grandfather for example, he always told me that the best way to accomplish something you really want is by giving the best of us and not wait for other people to do it for you because that is not going to happen.

In reality people should make their own decisions about what to do with their lives because you already have an idea about how you really want to be or what you want for your life to be in the future. When my brother was about to finish high school he tried to get an advice from somebody about what to do with his life, but my father was always working and my mom had not experience about life because she had taken some bad decisions in life. So my brother had to follow his instincts and take a decision in his own. Now he graduated from high school and he started an academy to be a police officer one day.

Some people say that it is better to fail by taking our own decisions and not fail because of decisions that other people take for us. I still remember my aunt Generic_Name she always wanted to be a cloth designer but she did not take her own decision and now she is still working and making some more money then a cloth designer, but she is not completely happy with her job because she followed some other people ideas and she did not think on what she really wanted for her life.

In conclusion it is better to follow your ideas because that way we will do what we really want for our lives and not what other people tell you to do even if they haven more experience sometimes is just better to follow your instincts. Seek guidance from experts that have a lot of experience about life is not always the best thing to do because if you follow their ideas you will not work on what you want. Although everything you need to succeed is to follow your dreams.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
772D27D400BB,"It god to have a possitive attitude when you don't have a possitive actitude you not treat god the people and they feel inconforteble. I agree to this statement because when the people have a possitive attitude they can faund a job and to have a positive attitude is very important in life and also to have a god attitude is important in the hausehold.

First: I work in a reusturant and I always have a god attitude with the costumers for example, I now a manager how work in the reastaurent she always have a negative attitude, and I think that is not god to have a negative attitude ,

to have a good attitude help a lot to have a job in my oponion a think that if I have a possitive attitude I can work very well and also a think that possitive attitude that we have is because the parents of as they teach as how we can have positive attitude .

second: I have some friends that they are negatives and that is not god we have always to are positives some people think that is god to have a negative attitude and is not real if we are negative we can do thinks bad , my mom always tell me don't be negative that is not good that why I'm always positive, my grandma always tell me don't be negative .

Third: positive actitude is good to have I think if we are happy we have a possitive attitude all people can have a positive attitude,if people don't have a posittive attitude they can't get a job that's why all people can have a possitive attitude is important if we have a positive , in all the works they need that we can have a positive attitude because in my job a girl how wants to work in their but she just went one day when my boss are treaning her she dosen't have a possitive attitude that's why a think we have to be positive always.

In conlusion if all people wants to have a job they have to learn how to have a possitive attitude if you have negative attitude plis change you attitude the negative attitude is not god in work or in oder things , we need to have positive attitude always , the positive attitude depend and how we traet oder people if you don't want to see oder people sad for you bad attitude be positve, have a positive attitude always .",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
8A4D99910F10,"Students will struggle to learn the subjects that the school requires them to take such as History, Math, Science, and English.

Attending to school can have a huge impact in your life. How would it affect you, if you don't atten to school?. would it be the same if you learn all the materials by watching videos?. would you be able to ask questions just the same way other students do?. Making a decision of taking class from home can make a huge impact in your life and the future. For example a high schooler that takes classes online that wants to be a history teacher they can struggle a lot because a video can't give you enough information, for you to know the story. a video only summarize the story comapring to when you're in class you can ask questions and also have more information from your teacher. Having a teacher explalining you everything and working with other students can help your grade and also your GPA for you to attened to good collages and be able to have a lot of advantages.

Students will have more benefits and advantages of learning the materials, if they atten to school. students will also have good grades and apportunities for them to get a scholarship and have a higher GPA that would help them attened the collage they want to go to. For example if students don't have a high GPA, the most common thing that would happen would be that they will be rejected by a lot of collages. Having a high GPA can help you get into good collages without having to pay and you can also earn money while you're attending collage. students will be able to graduate early from collage and with a really high degree that could benefit them by finding job where they start at the top like others professionals people.

Students will struggle a lot looking for collages that are not too expensive or collages that can help them save money. For example nova is an academic instutude collage that has a lot of benifits for students such as saving money for collage. Have apportunities of going to others university or instutudes where you can work as an asisting and get well paid. Nova can be very helpful institutude that students can attened to because they only attened to nova for two years. At nova they prepare students to when they are ready to move on to a four year collage but you need to have a good GPA and have all the requirements that nova asks for.

However not everyone agrees that atteneding to school is benificial for students. some students think that having to show up to school is a waste of time and that it would be better if they learn by looking tutorials on youtube or being able to attend classes from home. For example if students don't attened to school they won't be able to understand anything which it will cause them to stress out and make them give up on there dreams. students won't adchieve if we let them attend classes from home. Students also don't agree about having good grades and a good GPA. For example students think that they can still go to the collages they want to attened without matter of there grades and GPA that all they had to do is pay. but the question is ""do you have the money to pay collage?"". ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
9CB6D9467227,"I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life because people are Motivated , Happier and Work harder. Many people disagree that having a positive attitude doesn't mean anything and others think it makes a huge impact in success. Many studies have shown that having a positive attitude helps people succeed better and is a key.

First, I truly believe that if you really stay motivated and I'm convinced that I want to be successful, I continue to push myself each time I want to give up. When I pay attention to the certain things I want to achieve. I give dedication when I want one specific thing and try not to worry about other things that aren't related to what I want or succeed. I try to stay as focused as possible because once I'm determined and make that my main focus, then It'll make me want to keep my positive energy towards my goal.

Secondly, If I want to have a positive energy I must remain Happy. If I truly believe in myself then I will continue to have a positive energy, but even if

I

don't believe in myself I will remain to have a positive energy and a positive attitude. By succeeding with a positive attitude I must prioritize my goal making it my first reason to stay positive and to work harder. Keeping it always in my mind and reminding myself; for example "" oh this is what I have to look for"" or ""this will help me by succeeding my goal I want to achieve"", those two examples are ways to bring it to my mind all the time and remember what I need to be looking for.

Thirdly, If I work harder by putting my all into it and dedicating my time and keeping my positive energy then that's one way i can always succeed. By keeping my energy positive and succeeding I will make work twice as much as I need to for my goal to come true. If I know i truly want that goal and what to succeed I won't give it up that easily because that will be my main focus and my main priority.

Having a positive attitude is a huge key to succes because people get motivated, happier and work harder for what they are trying to achieve in life. Many people disagree that having a positive attitude is a key to success and others think it's a huge difference when you do because that's peoples main focus in life. Always have a positive attitude for the things a person including yourself may want in life! ",2.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
A754F3AC48E3,"I'm agree to take guides about careers because, I think that the students include to me, we want to have a spacific career guide when, we enter to high school because when we will go to collage, we have to be prepared with ideas, how is the career that we want to take and the students has to be ready with knowlegde with his own careers.

The first reason, I say that because the students will be more excite to came to the school, they will say, I like to go to shool beacuse, I practice somenthing that I love. I think that the schools need to change to give the student to choose, what they want know, I not talking about the classes, I talking about careers guides. I know we have young age but we want to be something our life, we have the goals to work in something, we love. The school's need give the opportunity to prepare the students. If the school's have guide careers or activities of work the students, they will enjoy that.

The seconds reasons is personal but, I see that almost the all people of my country when they come here and they have the opportunity to study but, when they end from the high school they stay in the same thing working in not good jobs earning 14 dollars per hours and some people say now that the diploma from high school is nothing to their. Some people go to school beacuse it's something ilegal, if they not going, I think they will put more interest to the study if they have the opportunity to study what they want to be when they are more olders. This are examples from others people too.

The students dreams that the school have something similar from college.

Some people tell me that when I end from high school, I will work in the same jobs, maybe I think the same because my family don't have the money but if the school's have something of academic's to know about the jobs, maybe the academic is not free but, is more cheeper than college or the school's have something that we can know about the jobs. Maybe the all student is not rich's but the only thing they want is work what they want.

Everyone enjoy doing the thing what they love with the heart.

I lucky to be in this school because the school give the opportunity to some students go to tech. That's what I know about the guide careers, the student want knowlegde from when they're in high chool.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
B6ADED946A1A,"Hello Ms or Mr teacher,

I'm writing this for convince you to don't work in groups ,and here are my cons and pros about working alone or in groups. The benefits of working with a group, or working alone are complete differents because some people feel more comfortables working alone than working in groups. In my oppinion working alone is much better than working in groups. In some cases your teammates of you group don't participates in the work or they don't want to work in groups. I feel more comfortable working alone for many reasons.

First reason , I can do whatever I want to do in the work or do the work in my way, but in some cases the person who work alone doesn't know how to do the work in this case is good to work in group because maybe your teammates knows the answers of the work.

Second, If I work alone I have more chances to unertand the work by my self without distractions. Because in some cases your teammates of your groups are distract you or other teammates of the group.

Third, working alone can be more benefict than working in groups because you can learn more things about the work, and do it in the way you like the work, without worry about what your group is doing. If we work alone we will have the opportunite of learn more about the work.

I know working in groups are the easy way because maybe your teammates of you groups knows the answers of the work, and you dont have to worry about the work because you know your teammates will do the work for you . But in some cases people who don't participate in the work gets credits in the work what he or she doesn't participates it. And that isn't fair for you or your teammates who did the work.

That's why you should sonsiderate us to do not work in groups anymore.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
3816B67C0B31,"When working alone, I agree that it is more time saveing and benifical because. You are more focuesd and consentradedon what your are doing. So when working on a job or school profect, you can gain experiance on working alone. You are also more indipendent when working alone, and that is helpfull when gong to colleg or getting your first job. Others can distract you and waist your time when working as a group, and you'll end up doing all the work . Ending up with a bad score in your grade. So because of this , people should be able to consetrate on their self , and do their own work alone when the time comes to do so.

First of all, working alone can make you more independent .So when you grow up, and leave off to colleg. Your not going to have any body to leach on, so you should be more consentrated on your self then others becouse. No one is going to want help you on your work. So from being independent, you gain that self confidence, and experiance of working alone. From this you are able to do your own choices. That allows you to get a job, or buy stuff that you want.

Second of all, when working alone. You gain a better understaning on the sudject insted of others opinons confusing you on what to do. Independent work can make you understand what your doing , and get a good score at the end or a higher paycheck if its a job. Other may distarct or confuse you on what the sibject is your doing. For an example, You might be doing a battery replacement on car. you would read instructions on how to do. then see an example on what to do, but from that point. the instructions is diffrent then what your trainer did. You might be confused on what your about to do, and then mess put at the end. Others may tell you that your doing it the wrong way, and distract on what your doing. SO working alone may save you time, and be more consentrated on replacing the cars battery, and finishing the job.

Finally, working alone can make you more focused insted of being distracted by others. You should focus on your own work then copying the same thing as another student. THat student might no bo corect and you are going to end up with the same failure grade as you stident you copyed from. Or when working in groups. Some students may be lazy. Leaving you with no time left, and making you do all the work. Sometimes others may have a different idea on a subject, amking you both fighting over witch one to do. Or some student may be playing around, making lots of sound. making you distracted, and not finishing the work you were supose to do. It is better to work alone because it will help you fous more, and get a good grade at the work you have done.

In conclusion, working alone can save your time, and make you independent on making your own choices. It will also give you that confidence of working independent, so you dont have to ask other on what to do. Working alone is just a good skill to have when you go off into your own life adventure. When you are able to do your choices ehter if its good or bad. You are more independent and responsible of doing your own work, and choices of what todo. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
9528CA8FFC22,"Farmer British prime minister Winston Churchill once said that ''Success consists of going form failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I agree with Churchill's Statement because some time in life u fail but never gave up in life. keep fighting and you will get to the place you want to get. Work hard if u fail and fail never say i'm done trying the same thing over and over. Because one day u will not know what will happen if u keep trying.

Firstly,Some people think that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss some time people feel safe without loss in their life. For explane you trying to became a prime minster in the future and people telling you. Can't became a prime minister but all you get to do is work heard in life true in yourself you can do anything you put you mind to in life.

Secondly. some people think that success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss. Some people think that failure to failure is good because some time people like to try one think over and over on tell they do good at it so that what some people think in life to gave when the chances to do the same thing over and over even if they could't do it they just when to keep trying.

Sometime people think that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss. Because they dont like to keep trying one thing over and over so they feel safe without loss in their life. But other think that success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss. Because people like to try the same thing over and over on tell they do good at it.

Conclusion, sometime is good that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" In everything you do in life. But sometime is good that ''success consists of going from failure to failure with a loss of enthusiasm.'' in life...          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
5630E056A0DB,"The world has many rules that needs to be follow, and if someone tries to escape that rules a lot of things can happen whethere it's a good thing or bad. Some people believe that to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is not the greatest accomplishment because not following what the world wants can make a big impact on a persons life; however, to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something is the greatest accomplishment because Being able to be someone who the person is not suppose to be can bring success into a persons life, not letting people influence a person characteristics is a big accomplishment, having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability

Being able to be someone who the person is not suppose to be can bring success into a persons life. Being different can isolate someone from the society and this can change a persons life choice. A person who think and act different can have another way of facing problems in life which makes them different from other people.

Not letting people influence a person characteristics is a big accomplishment. Being who the persons wanna be can give someone originality. The person can act freely and become who it wants to be also they do not have to worry about peer pressure.

Having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability. The person do not have to worry about what others think of whats it can do. Acting as what the persons not suppose to be can give a big advantage in creativity.

Some people believe that being someone that you're not can is not the greatest accomplishment because this can make a big impact in someones life; however, showing who you really are is one of the biggest accomplisment in a persons life becase acting different can lead to success, being different means the persons have full control over their actions, having to be someone who a person wants to become can show the person full capability. To be someone that a persons dont want to become is complete fine because this shows that no body is limiting the person from being who they really are.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
21741500885B,"The school plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch mean, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods. School should change to a new, healthier school lunch mean for students to eat healthier food and be healthy.

The school plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch mean, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods.

Most students eat unhealthy food almost all of the time, and some students think it's fine and it doesn't really affects their health. Some students eat unhealthy foods while playing video game, and while they are playing video game, they grab snacks that are laying on their table or the dresser such as: chips, candies, and energy drinks energy drinks, which contains chemical and are unhealthy for them. Some students don't want to get up and go eat with their family or eat healthy food, because they do not want to miss the the game that they are playing with their friends or playing online. School should change currant lunch menu to a new lunch menu,healthier school lunch mean for students to eat healthy food and be healthier.

Students when go to lunch they just grab anything that they like and they don't think if it's healthy or not for them. Some students eat unhealthy foods during lunch because they don't think about it, or they see somebody else eating something and it makes them to try it, and wanna look cool in of their friends so they eat things that are unhealthy are them.

Some students may not like the plane to change the school cafeteria lunch menu to healthier foods, because most students are now so use to eat same school lunch every day; but eventually, students will get used to new healthier school lunch menu and they will feel alot better than thye use to, be healthy, and won't eat unhealthy food at school or at school. Lots of students don't really like eating healthy food,or drink healthy drinks like water, and juice, because it may not taste as good as unhealthy food. Unhealthy food and drinks contains chemicals that are not good for anyone's health, therefor the school cafeteria should change to a new, healthier school lunch menu.

The school plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch mean, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods. School should change to a new, healthier school lunch mean for students to eat healthier food and be healthy.

The school should change a new, healthier school lunch mean, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods, and drinks for students and the teachers to eat healthy food, al least at school if not eating healthy foods at home.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
CE7FCD160837,"It's been brought up that student should chose a career and be committed to it before entering high school. Do you think its a good idea for students to be committed to a career at a young age? Even though choosing a career at a young age gives you a early start on researching that career. Choosing a career at a young age is bad idea.

Its been proven that even collage students change a career they want to major in. So when it comes down to committing to a career at a young age there is a high possibility that a student will change it down the line.

Although there about to enter high school students still need more time on choosing s career. Students are 14-15 years old making chooses that even 18-20 havent even desisted on yet and dont even know all there interest and hobbies yet. It's been brought up that before students enter high school they should have chosen and committed to a career. It has come down to my conclusion that choosing a carer and committing to it a a young age is a bad is a because of many reasons.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
4FA6CCB0D1BA,"Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in there years and enter college or the work force one year early. yes we need to done high school because it's to important to for life,but about your familiys and for your country. Then however If you not finish high school it,s not good because you not ger a good work and anyjob.

Is it a good idea for students to finish high school. The First it,s to important to your life because if done the school we can choes whatever you want,Then we going to college just chose your option to lear a four years to college, After that i,m looking find a job.

The Scond, about your familiy. If you finish the high school your familys to happy because we can leave to a good life with your whole familys, and we can get a strght life. Then your familys is always to makeing to happy.

The fainliy, If you finish high school and college you get a good job,and whatever you want to get the job,but we can suport to your family and your conutry If you get a good job suport to other people If you can,thrn even everones we need you. however If you not finish school we can get a good job because you don,t have high school diploma that,s mean a document confering a privilege or honer so don,t have that why, but you work to like clean,shopers and like the simple you get the job, and you not happey bcause some people distraicting, and It,s to mach tarid. that means we can do finish your high school.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
FB70FE5B31A8,"Generic_Name moved from military academy to a public school whehn he was 14, he was a serious person, and he was really respectful. Four years later, I met him at a restaurant and he was a whole new person, he dressed different and his personality was different, Generic_Name's influences in public schools changed him.

People's character traits are formed by influnces beyond our control because the enviroment that we live in takes a huge part on how we are, who we are, and how we act, and because of people like our parents that have guided us and influenced us throughout our whole lives, and while some people say that a person is able to choos who they are or control their character traits, the majority of the people in society live by other people's influences.

The enviroment that a person lives in takes a huge part on someone's character because; their culture, their religion, and the people they surroud themelves with, always have an impact on someone's traits; for example, a private christian school student might not have the the character traits as a public school student because the enviroments are way different. In conclusion people's traits are controled by influces beyond our control because people is always getting influenced on the daily regardless of what envioment they're in.

People like our parents are responsable for most of the character traits we have since they have been with us our whole life. They guide us everyday, and they teach us what is right and what is wrong. Most of the kids in this world look up to their parents or use them as a role model, and that controls a huge part of our character traits. In conclusion our traits are formed by incluences out of our control because our parents, who have been with us our whole life impact us every day with thei lessons.

Some people say that a person is able to control their character traits or choose who they are, because they are alone and they probably don't like talking to people or learning from people so; therefore they don't get influenced by anyone , so they start forming their character and they start being who they are base on only what they do.

Most of the people in this world are influenced by the outside since most poeple go to work everyday, go to school everyday, and talk to people everyday, thay are always getting something out of someone, it could be an advice or a lesson. I don't think many people are able to control their character traits on these days with social media, and things like that going on.

In concluison our character traits are controled by influences we can't control because the enviroment with live in always has an impact on us, the people we surround ourselves with have an impact on us and society in general has an impact on us. Moving forward i think it would be good for people to keep being influnced by the outside because we will get to know how everything works, and no matter who we are influenced by there will always be someone that will tell is if it's right or wrong.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
DA8F8C0D6952,"I believe that students attending school from home will benefit for many different reasons. Students who experience anxiety attacks, depression, bullying, or just not being able to attend school for the day will find great use in online school, they can connect with their classes or teachers without being in school and not have to miss out on important information or work. Students are able to be in a safe environment at home if they do not feel comfortable in school.

Furthermore, students with anxiety or depression may have a harder time going through out the school day then their peers. For example, my girlfriend who has very often panic attacks, dislikes attending her current school. She was a new transfer student to the school and was also new to the school itself. She found it hard to not have anybody to go to and vent during the school day which causes her to stress and have anxiety. Moreover, she gets very often panic attacks during the day which makes her not want to come to school more often. She finds it easier and safer to stay at home. When ever we're on the phone over face time, she's always doing her class work that she takes home to complete. She's a hardworking student and always does her work but because of the environment she's in, it limits her on what she is capable of.

Not only that it would help students feel secure, but for the students who are sick for the day and cannot attend school, wouldn't have to miss out on important information or work. For example; there are days where I just feel weak and tired but I wouldn't want to miss a review day for a major test the next class. If there was online school, I would be able to connect with my teacher and the classes from home where I feel comfortable. Also, my mom wouldn't have to worry that i'm failing my classes because i'm not showing up to them. I believe that other students would agree with me on this argument because almost everyone I know, wishes they could attend school from home.

Moreover, adults might not have knowledge of this, but let me tell you; there is a lot of drama and rumors in every high school. No matter where it is, the policies it has, the advances of the students, there is drama. And drama is one major factor on why students wishes to attend school at home. Just Imagine the advances of our present civilization if there was no drama at school, and no have you heard this or have you heard that. Drama and rumors are big time distractions to daily school work and it peaks the interest of every student. By enabling online school, students dedicated to become scholars are able to take this distraction out of their equation. They can attend school without dealing with the big mouths talking up and down and all around the school.

Overall, distance learning has a very good impact on the students. Students feel safer at home, and when they are sick or cannot attend school for they day, they wouldn't have to miss out on important information or work. Online school would be very beneficial for everyone.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5
EE392BB6CFD1,"kind,caring,nice. Those words explain the meaning of a person if they are trying to be their self. Although some people may think its okay to be yourself in a world where its always trying to change you , nevertheless , some people may think is not okay to be in a world where its trying to always trying to change you into something else because people should express them self how they want to they shouldnt be in a world where its constantly trying to make them into something else and people should live how they wanna live.

For example , people should express them self how they want to be they shouldnt be in a world where its constantly trying to make them into something else. People have all right to be who they wanna be but if you in a world where it is trying to change you that is not a great accomplishment. Clearly people should be who they wanna be.

Therefore , people should live how they wanna live. Everyone picks how they wanna live in a world some people pick to live in a world where people get to pick who they wanna be and some people pick for them self who they wanna be. But its NOT okay to live in a world where everyone picks for you u not making a great accomplishment for yourself. If your making a change for your self you should be living in a world where it doesnt judge you for trying to be something you wanna be and you turn your self around and be come something where everyone want you to be a they call it ""great accomplishment"" .",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
9B4C52064991,"Have you wondered why local companies and organizations plus the different schools doesn't add up well this will answer why? This prompt will try to figure out the answer of this question.

These local companies and organizations that allow students from different schools should interact certain professions.

Teachers and students can think of organization that allow other schools to join in that profession. I think i should do is help the students that needed help with the organization they wanted. If the employer wants me to visit I will say this if i get accepted for this job first of all thank you second is you probably want to go to my office. I chose this job is because I like to help other people with what they really need not want but need. Students should create new professions in the future so then the future students can access the professions that the students from the past did the same with teachers. The local companies can grow even bigger if they needed to. Some local companies and organizations hate students because they touch very expensive, valuable, dangerous items plus they don't even pay any attention to you. Others can be totally calm about it. They actually answer some of your questions, listen to you for once not faking it. This workplace that i'm working at (if i'm enrolled) well i had to find a backup job but it will take a while so i have to find specific job for it.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
F5FAD709AAFC,"Some people say that people should make their own decision. Other people say that people should not make their own decision .

People should make their their own decision because life is important other people can't choes my decision and my life, and every one has free dom, every thing they want they can make it for their future. So if we do hard work and study more, then every thing we want we can get it. Every family should suport their child to studay hard and think about their futur life, and also if our family does't support us then we can't choes our decision and we can't grow. So we have to care about our futur and family to suport them also and have great life. No boday want to their life compare to some one eals. We have to be powerful person in our life. A person need to be establish our decision,and sociologist person. The person should receptive to admonition of their family because family always choes the good stuff for us, and never chiets. So if we don't have family suports then we have to support our self and choes our decision. If some one want to have the good futur, job and famous person their live they have to be have a good defender behind them, or someone does't have some one to support them, then they have to support their self. A person should listen other people idea and make their one futur. People can't make my decision. Every want to be like seek person in their life. If some one is seeker in their life then they can get their goals easly. In real life if someone do more pattient they can grow more and more, they can get their goals very easy. Finay a person should be a seek, bold, ect to make their decision and get their goal and have great live and futur.                                                                                                             ",2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
62EDBC22A953,"I think that success, are composed by failures, but not for everyone.

Success are for a better life, but to have a better life there will be always complicated things(FAILURES), that may be you will want to stop doing that thing that is going to help you to succeed.

The important role of failures on success is that, if you don't fail once you will not learn; failures plays that important part in success, learn is based on what you did wrong, I am saying based on wrong because If you did something wrong before, you learn that part, What do you did wrong? and next in the future you already know what you did wrong and now you will make it right.

Now, sometimes we give up so easy on what we want or on what we are fighting for, some loss the enthusiasm for the success and others not, I agree with that, some think different and if you think different about the failures its going to help you to make that success. I'll say, once my aunt told me ""Believe in what you can do, and not in what you can fail on"", she hasn't never give up on what she can achieve in her life. For example I'm from Generic_City and all my family are Hispanic and our home language is Spanish, and speaking English its not easy for me, but I never thought that I was going to be able to speak it. I told myself that everything its possible in life, you born for a purpose, not just because your mom wanted you to be born.

There was a time, I got stress, anxiety and depression. I was failing in school and I felt so sick that I was giving up so easy and fast. Failures comes one after one, and after one, that I told myself ""You are going to be okay, and you are going to do what you like and succeed and make your parents feel proud of you"". I started to think positive, and do the things right, nothing last forever, I got rid of my depression but still with stress and anxiety, but from there to now it doesn't mean nothing for me. Failures can cause a lot of things like, feel hopeless, loss enthusiasm and giving up so easy for those who are weak, but if you are strong enough to believe that you are going to make it you will make it, you are going to have your levels of hope, enthusiasm and faith high that nothing will stop you to succeed.

Failures are more challenges added to your life, to be in the top of the mountain you should hike until you can see the ocean behind the mountain. There will be more than failures, there will be big obstacles and some times people will put traps in your path.

Some people will just want to see you fail in the field and some will be happy to see you in the top of the mountain. Some people fails in their path because they dont understand the meaning of the failures.

In conclusion, I agree with the idea that Success consist of going from failure to failure, even if you loss your hopes or enthusiasm you got to keep going in your goal to succeed.

More than 50% of people, I will guess, fight for their future they put all their effort to succeed and if they can, we can. Failures come as a good parts of success to set it down and success in life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
5C3A7990C870,"People who mastered with experience and not knowing what to do next, can find themselves a new alternative skill. The Brain does not have a limited amount of knowledge. The good thing about it, is that the Brain never gets full. What they can achieve, lead to society were people pass down to the generation and to generation, expecting a challenge to test there skills and multitask is a benefit opportunity.

Most people, has a unique a ability. That all over the world want to hear your name. These pass few years, people pass down there outstanding skill to generation to generation. Back way before, Ancestors tell their children of they can do for a future life. Then they tell there future children and the next; it in our blood. People around the world would say ""Hey, i like this guy, he can do anything"". Theses people want to be follow in his/her shoes. What you already mastered such as: a Gunsmith, a Formula 1 driver, an Investor, a Stock Broker, a Magician or even a Scientist would tell their own children what do to and what not do to. In fact, tell them to be in their shoes. Generation grows bigger and bigger; Wonder what would happen next.

On the other hand, you might as well encounter something that you never try before, a challenge. In this position, people want to test their master skill to the test. It good thing because you want to prove yourself ,as an expert, that you want to be anonymous person who tries so hard to achieved their goal. People will say ""Dream Big"" or ""Just do it"" that gets people motivate to face their mastered skills to the next level. Dreaming for a challenge beyond their skill, is a goal for them, they dont want to give up. If they do, whats the point of hard work.

Furthermore, benefits is what you want in life, it happens everywhere: jobs, schools, and physical health. Nowadays, people want more benefits then just one. By multitasking, these opportunity help there job more easy, but some times not so easy. when you are doing more than one skill: a promotion and a rise(money) can come as a reward. That being said, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow"" is not all true. People can have 2, 4 or maybe 8 skill that can show what they got.

In the end, there are a lot of ways to ensure that people can go beyond than anything. Pass down your skill in next gen, a challenge to prove them self that they are worthy, and benefits for being a multitasker is one thoses reason that he/she is something special. Doing beyond what you master, can make you grow. Never stop of what you love to do in life.            ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
44D395C2AD83,"The success can consists from failure to failure. Sometimes life is hard but never loss your enthusiasm. Not everything in life is going to be great as you planned. From your mistakes you learn something new or how can you succes in something that you fail. You always need to think positive doesn't matter if you fail and fail again but you going to have success in your life just believe that you can do it.

First, Many times in your life you will feel like you cannot do it anymore but never give up you have to keep goin until you reach your goal. Life can be hard and you can fail many times but never loss your faith. Your enthusiasm and your faith fot what you want to reach is going to be your better weapons in your success. Never loss your enthusiasm because, you can reach your success but nothing in life is always easy.

Second, Mistakes or failure are good in life because, thats is what teach you what you are doing wrong or what can you do for reach your success. I know many people that had been in many mistakes or failures, but they never give up and they had been patience to be successful in life. Sometimes people think if they fail one time, they cannot do it better next time or improve. Your failure, is not always bad as you think it is.

Third, People sometimes fail and they are close from reach their goals or they success, but they think that everything is done. If you believe in your self that you can do it and you have faith everything will be possible in your life. People think that an obstacle in your life will be an excuse to not keep going and reach your success. Sometimes you have to pass for many obstacles in your life because like I said life is not easy and every success need sacrifice.

Finally, In life to have success you have to work hard and sacrifice in order to reach your success. Failure is a big obstacle in your life because, it can make you to give up and not try or continue reaching your goal or success. Faith, bellieve in your self, pray for what you want and work hard these are some facst that can keep pushing you for your success. If you think you cannot do something that you never have done and you are scare to fail just try, doesn't matter if you do it wrong, but you are going to learn what you cannot do next time. Failure help you to pursuit your success and it's something that all humans we have to do because we are not perfects.  ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
DF23B896A1C2,"American jazz legend Duke Ellington said, '' A Problem is a change for you to do your best.'' I agree with that stamens because when you have a problem it a chance for you to to your best and overcome it. Unfortunately that not the case. Mostly in sports you are driven to do your best when losing. But adults tend not to do there best when facing a problem. You should be always motivated to do your best.

If you play any sports you know that when you are losing you are motivated to do your best. No mater how many points you are losing by you try your best to make that come back and win the game. If you don't win that game you at least know that you tried your best. If you were to give up you would have wondered, if you tried would I have won. This not the only example, for example you boss is about to fire you and try you best to keep that job. There are many more examples you can try to be your best.

Some times adults have to face problem and they don't know what to do or how to face that problem, they think there nothing they can do. They give up form the start they don't try there best when facing that problem. They simply give up. They miss out on that chance. For example, My dad got fired from his job, he was depressed and did not care at all about anything. He did not try his best. he simply gave up. But you should never give up always give it your best no matter what.

Form trying your best you don't lose any thing you only gain something. you can't follow you dreams without trying you best, does not matter what you want to be. you will face problems no matter what path you take. For example bill gates he did not become one of the most successful people by doing nothing. he gave it his best. So why should you not give it your best .

No matter who you are, you should take the words of Duke Ellington and try you best when facing a problem. Does not matter if you are playing sports or having a issue at work. or trying to achieve you dreams . Never fail to give it your best, or you will regret it.                                                                                                                              ",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
046ECC91332C,"The first impressions are so important. Some people say that the first impressons are almost impossible to change nevertheless, a person can easily change his/her first impressions because, human is a developed creature that can easily keep moving and change the first impressions with his/her ideas and experiences. It should not even be a doubt for the people who already faced this situation and has developed ideas.

Some of the people says that the first impression is important. Yes, it is important. This is your first look to a person or another thing. It is easy to be impressed or shocked. But it is easy to go over it and change it. Almost everyone has their own ideas, not just the person who impresses. Another person can come with better ideas than that person. An average person is developing his/her ideas since kindergarten. Maybe by language, maybe science/math, maybe sports/arts. But almost everyone has their developed ideas. Even if they think that they don't have any ideas,

they are using their familiy's ideas. The person's family helps to create their mindset since they are born.

A person is getting in this impression situation certain times in their life. Unfortunately there are some people who can't keep moving after the first impression. They keep their mind set impressed to that person for forever. But also there are some people that can easily get rid of that awful experience and can keep moving. Because they know that they can easily go over this situation and can change it. Even a person can live like he/she never experienced that moment to keep their mind clear. A person has his/her own idea that could easily go over impressons and change it.

Is there any other way to change the first impression? Absolutely. A person always gain experiences from born to death. Even though the first impressions are confusing and shocking, it is not a problem for people. Because they already experienced this situation. They already failed it or succeed it. It is hard to solve the first impressions that the person faces. But that is the keypoint. By keep failing it they learn how to succeed it. They learn how to go over it. A person never ever should be shy for failing to handle this situation. No one is successful in their first experiences, even in their 10th-20th experiences. This is how a person gain experience and learns how to go over this first impressions. Because they already faced it and went over it.

Yes, the first impressions are important and it could be shocking too. But a person can easily change this first impressions with his/her ideas and experiences. The person already has his/her own developed ideas that could change it really fast, also has experiences that will help to go over the first impressions.         ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
5EAC31CA561A,"I agree with Prime Minister Churchill because failure gives you strength to keep going and to learn from your personal mistakes you make, so you can succeed in life.

While I was a kid all I ever wanted to be was an actress. I would try for plays in school and out, but I failed to be in the plays because I was to nervous, quite, not using the whole stage, ect. That inspired me used all those factors that where making me fail and improving them to make me a better actress.

In school/classroom always fail in sols, test, and quizzes but those students never give up trying and after trying and studying students succeed in their test.

In a community everybody tries to help out trying to catch people that break in peoples houses, but never do. The people made a list of the things they were doing wrong and they very upset people stopped trying. Until one day one person broke in to a house and instead of doing nothing like the people said the made a successful plan to catch the criminal. The planed worked and then community celebrated their success and for not giving up.

One of the most famous soccer player in the world Lionel Messi also has failed on the field whether it is on penalties, shooting, or speed he always tries to be better and all his failure has made him one of the best soccer players in the world.

In this world you become better on what you do by failure. If there is no failure there is no success.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
DE1A1149D54B,"I agree with that because positive attitude always bring the success in our life. It helps us with alots of things in our life. All people love those who have positive mentality and a good personality. In order to be successful in life u need to be respectful with every single things that we do everyday. We can get so much benifit out of it. It helps people to get more friends and make a good community. It also make our family think that we are smart and make them feel proud of us.

The first thing we all should do is to love our self if we cannot do that it will be hard for us to control our positive attitude. if we don't love our self we can't love others as well as you do to ourself. We are human we cannot be same as others in some point we make mistakes in life we always should try to move forward. Some of us might have have seen some people they can't be satisfy with their life beacause of their behavior and the way how they think of there life. We need to conduct our self in a perticular way to bring the power of success.

There are many people who can't show their love to people or who are kind of broke on their life most of them have negative mentality. Its not their fault maybe the situation makes them to be like that some of us living with depression and it causes a massive differents into our brain our thinking area and more other part or side effects. It also happened to me when i was freshmen during the highschool year. I started to giving up on my life i didn't feel like to doing anything in life. Every single day was the hell of my life. i broke down myself and put my self somewhere where no one can find me. I didn't talk to anybody just trying to stay at home all the times and realised how could i get out of this kind of situation. I was starting to loose friends in that time. Only those will understand if they ever gone through depression.

That was the worst feelings i ever felt in my life. i was trying so hard to figure out why this is happening to me and where does this come from and didn't get any response out of this. I felt negative every time. I tried so hard to change the situation but it didn't work. I didn't have anyone to share my feelings all i did is just to kept that in my heart and made my self cry alot. I throught of myself i will never be successful in life.

After few days passed one of my friend came to my house just to visit our family member and me. when i see him i was little happy to see him after a long time. i took him into my room and we were talking about somethings and recently he came up with a topic which is call depression. He knew how i was feeling with my life so he started to giving me some lesson to make me feel better and everything. First he told me i need to changed the way how i think about my self and people and he also told me there are many people who always try to push others down and make them feel bad and make you think something that is not good for you. My friends told me to ignore those and listen to my own heart. No matter, how u feel, always love your self and change the way how you think of youself. As a human no body is happy about their life in some point their sad but the main thing is we got to move onto forward. Forget about everythings that happened in the past.

After he have told me all the lesson i was feeling way better than the past i realised how crazy i was before and the way of my thinking. My friend he was so motivated. Whatever he told me it was so appriciated to me and it forced me to changed my self to become a normal and to be a possitive person. I decited to not to keep my life stop because i dont want to be in the same situstion as before. I want to make my family friends and all of my relatives feel proud of me. Every one of us need to love their selves and if they think in a negative way to bring the success in their life, it will never work thats why we all should try to handle our mind in a positive way. It will help all of us to become successful in our life. This is why the positive attitude is the key to success in life. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
7545AC12D178,"I think have a positive effects on people's lives because is for be independent and make more easy your tasks , all humans must to work with technology , some people affect that because they think is negative for a teenagers but in this year all used , we need to modernize and not only for teenagers for all because is for make your hard tasks easy , and all , technology is not just for fun is for make your life more easy.

In my personal life i give you a example , i use technology for been fun and when i have homework i used my chrome book for make more easy my problems that help us for everything , i used technology for all, read books , play games , due my tasks and talk with friends , i like to use social media , technology is not boring you never been boring , reading books and play games is not boring , my family use technology for the same thing , take it easy your life.

An example of technology is in schools every schools used for is students , like in my school every student have a chrome book for do tasks and every classwork we due in the chrome book , the teachers have mac's for due tasks and this is my examples to why is positive in our life , i think technology has been modernize , a example is in the hospitals for take care of us we have technology , that is amazing technology can save ours lives.

A reason why have positive feelings about technology is because all examples i give you , another example is the police need technology for catch bad persons and technology make more easy tasks for a cops , god blessed the technology , i think we need technology for modernize , acceptable , and attitude, for a person get used technology is very easy only you need to practice and is a very easy to learned the technology.

I advise technology is for make easy your life that is all , you have work hard to do easy with technology because technology today in day have everything, you are a better person with technology , my thought is one day have we dependent about technology because this is the new fashion and everything , a example is the cars , today every car have technology , my thought is one day technology can make fly cars , and i wish that is the future.",2.5,1.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
99CAD0AF3560,"Is playing a sport a fun activity for students? Does it help students exercise? Does it help students get healthier? I agree that playing a sport is a fun activity to all students for many reasons.

To begin with, playing a sport is a good way to be more energetic. Playing a sport can help students exercise. Students might do some warm up games, do some work outs or they can practice at home with their families. Playing a sport can also help students get healthier. Students get more energetic, eat healthy food, and get in good shape. Playing a sport can help students do better things. They could run faster, get stronger, and it can help them do better in class

On the other hand, playing a sport is bad for some students. Students might get sick for being outside. If is winter and students are playing outside all day they might get sick from the cold or if is spring they might get sick from pollution. Some students might get injured. Students might break their arms or legs for playing with others students that are bigger than them. Some students might not be good at sports. Students might suck at soccer, football, or basketball and they won't play.

Even though playing a sport is bad for some students, they can still play. Even though students get sick they can still play. If some students get sick they can get medicine and go back to play. Even though some students might get injured they can recover. Some students might break their legs or arms, they can wait a few weeks and go back to play. Even though some students might not be good at sports they can still learn. Some students might suck at soccer, football. or basketball with practice they can learn how to play.

In conclusion, playing a sport is fun because you play with your friends, run around, or just feel the wind in your face. It helps students exercise by doing some warm up games, work outs, or practice at home with their families. It helps students get healthier by eating healthy food and get in good shape. I agree that playing a sport is a fun activity to all students for many reasons.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
FE3CA06DDCA1,"Why is it when someone asks you for advice there the one's talking most of the time? Here are 2 of the reasons I think that the person who asks for advice talks more than the one who is giving the advice. Reason 1 is they might want to give the on who is giving the advice all the info so then they can help them. Reason 2 is that they are give you as much detail as they have to give you good advice.

They will want to give you all the information so you can probably find a solution or fix to there problem. As in this sit ions where my friend needed some advice for a test she had coming up. She was not sure what to do to study for it. She was telling me what she had to study but then she said  I dont think these would help me much I told her to make flash cards out of the note she had then she did that. She was super stress. I think when your stressed you just say things that are on your mind as in you talk more.

If a person wants good advice they will want to give you all the details. If you know all the details you will most likely know how t fix it. Everyone needs so good advice because the how are they going to fix there problem. If you friend has a problem and they dont tel you all the details your not really gonna give then good advice.

In conclusion why you need advice you will talk more then the person who is given you the advice. When you are in a problematic event you will take a lot more because yo will be most likely stressed. Also if you give all the the details of your problem you will get good advice. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
B1E1608C016D,"'Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.''-Churchill once said this phrase during WW2 to tell his people that it didn't matter how many battles Britain was going to lose but that they were going to win the war. Personally I do agree with Prime Minister Churchill many times on my life I have fail, and fail again but I got up because I knew that there was a good price at the end. Humans now at days think that life is all about planing the future, and they all just trying to avoid problems, trying to live only winning but to reach success there must be a long journey of lost battles, of big problems but you must stay put because it does not matter how many times you fall you most get up again, and again.

My Dad once told me ''Always try never give up''. Back in 2014 it was my first day on the soccer academy

I been playing soccer as a defender all my life but this time it was my first time training in such a good team I started training every day make some friends too. A few days later the first game came I was not on starting line up or on the bench I wasn't even call for the game I was upset but I though that it was because I was new in the team, or the coach didn't know me well. The next day during practice my coach call me out and told me if you wanted a spot on the team you need to work harder after that day I knew I needed to start training more, going to the gym more often, and I start eating more healthy a few days later during practice I started seeing results I was getting stronger, faster, and skillful a few weeks later I got called for the teams fourth game but I was not in starting eleven I was sitting on the bench the all game I was upset I though I was failure once more but I never gave up and the next day I was back practice, eating more healthy, going to they gym more often. Halfway during the season one of the the starting defenders left the team and I knew it was my chance I started and I play all the game and I didn't just prove my coach that capable more importantly I prove my self. Later during the season in one of the last games in one play I dislocated my arm and that meant that I was out for the rest of the season. After three long months of recovery after was heal I started once again training harder, eating healthy, going to the gym more often getting ready for the next season. beginning of 2015 that season I was chosen as team captain and I played all the games all that hard work was worthy at the end.

It dosen't matter how many times I failed I never lose my enthusiasm because in life we are going to have many failures and we will feel life given up but we most get up and keep going it doesn't matter how many times we lose a battle our main goal must be win the war because just like Churchill failed again, and again but at the end he won the war with his people I also failed in my team again, and again but I won my own war at the end.                                           ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
3498E7E2DAB6,"In the principals office there is quote stating that "" your life can be beneficial if your doing something very productive, because it can lead you to great success in life"" In some way we ask ourselves if we are do something with our lives and be thinking ahead on what we want to do with our life and what can take us to success. Is that true?. Its more than just having something to do. Life is very short, As long as you are doing something with success. Living is an option as well as just giving up and not trying very enough. Accomplishing something in life to any dream you want to have. If you dont try as hard in life, you will never succeed and imagine all those who gave up and thinking... Where they are now?. Living life can only be chosen just by you and it's only your choice to think in what direction you want to take. Although some may believe that life,belief, and hope prove that doing something with your own future can accomplish and lead you to a successful life.

Your life can be turned around very quick, if only you are doing something very little that makes you happy and know that sticking with it, can take you anywhere you want in your future just only by trying and not giving up on your own self. Not trying and thinking way ahead of your own future can bring yourself down which can lead you to depression, low self of esteem , and as well of not having very much hope. In human society it has been discovered that in most of our population much as 40% of our people in the U.S are unemployed and don't have anything to do which leads them to go down in their life. There is so much poverty going on in this world and just by thinking about it and you think to yourself and say what did they do wrong in life that brought them to were they are now?. Your future can be so easy as long as you try and have hope in your own self. Just by knowing that you have accomplished anything in life can lead your own way to success. Your future can only be held in your hand no one else. Like its said once life can only chosen due too live a long term of time or short period of time its all held under your back, your shoulders, and your own self future. Being successful life is very important to your life having many accomplishment can make your self feel very motivated and make it very good. You can make your life very easy and not to hard just as long your are doing something that makes you happy and also as long what right direction you are taking and what good path is in your way. Life isnt easy either, it can be very difficult just as long as your trying at your very best and your pushing yourself into having great success, you will be at your very best and the top est you can be. The choice you make, can make it very effectively on you and it can change anything.

The make key in life is as well having much belief on your own future or in life.

Belief can only be happened by you and no one else, It can be very good and at its best just as long your try and making your life not to difficult. Having belief isnt bad at all its just a feeling you have on yourself and that the feeling makes it good for just for yourself and no one other. Every person in the world is very different in their way, everyone isnt the same in the way you see or in the perspective you think in. In society each person can think any type of way they want and they only problem is that you should be only be worrying about yourself but no other. There has been many issues due too how you believe and what others think about you and get to worried about it. Our world shouldnt be like that, in our belief we should stay positive in each one of us and stay motivated in any situation you go through. The belief in come in any one and whoever think in the mindset of way, we can all go through difficult times and not have any belief in ourselves. But only yourself can change no other can do that for you. The accomplishment in life can mean allot in yourself and can also have no good beneficial idea just for you, but something you can also do is give a big impact in human society.

In setting a good state of mindset can change you very completely, another word to help yourself could also be hope. Having hope could lead you very far in life and also having great accomplishments that can also lead you to a big success. If you cant see it but others can see how your life is being impacted on you not doing something with your life. Only you can change that, but as others can't. Another key to life is hope. It can take you very far and also lead you in any direction yourself takes or as well in any path you want. Having hope is an option and a belief you want or can have. Not every person has hope or believes in themselves because all they want too do is fail. Others can see you fail and not try, but it is very hard for you to see yourself. In life if you have it can lead too do good things in life and have great accomplishments that no other has, just by having good hope. Just know to yourself that having hope can lead yourself to great victory and a great life that no other can have but you.

In those who dont believe that if are doing something isnt an accomplishment to success, which that takes my position in saying that themselves thinking that is wrong. Because a key to success in life is having many accomplishments and lead you very far. But in those who also say that being inactive is a way too success is also wrong on their point of view and isn't a true fact statement. Inactivity cant take you too far in life and isnt a beneficial success to life. Having anything to do that you enjoy can lead too good accomplishments and also great success.

Having a great life,hope, and belief can take you very far and lead you to any direction or path you want to take. Any one can have a great life just as long as you try. Life is easier as long you make it a success.           ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0,3.0
3F4D8262235A,"I think students would benefit doing school at home many kids maybe going through problems at home and could just be tired or maybe just annoyed of to much problems. Students working from home is good for kids that could be getting buliud either they speack up but dont see a change, having problems with adults here at school that don't really help much but just bring the student down, or maybe just being an anti socicl person. Online school is something really seroius to look into if tyour dealing with problems at home having so much stress in you and cant deal with more stress of school, or you just simply need to work to help out your family it could be a chance they need money but cant get enough to get bills paid and need help in paying them,maybe you dont really have time in showing up to school. I think online school is a good choice for many students that could have problems at school and not seeing a change. Students wouldn't have to get up so early in the morning having to look presentable or anything just having to have a good schealue that works good for both work and school. Both online work or video conferencing are good for kids that have their ways in learning like as in having videos chat with a teachers. Students can be fast learners just by reading insturstions they got it memorized and having the work ready in less than an hour. Others students are more to a visiual learners that have to see work getting it explaned to many time for them to undersatnd the work some students are slower than others. Online school would be the best choice to many students that just have it the ruff way and not easy. Other reason is because many kids get sick really easliy and its better to keep those kids away from others in getting sick. Online schools can really make a big change in kids that are just not ready have more stress in them and wouldnt have to deal with more problems with parents or maybe getting bullied. Oline schools would make a big change in those kids lifes in a positive way. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
9F803521F9A6,yes i agree if that if your attitude is not good you will never success or you did not get what your want in your life if you a person nned to success or learn something from other you most know attitude is good or bad because attitude it the key of your life ad your success if you want to live with people nicily your most knw your self first take care of your attitude because you can't make your life bad or be homeless because of your bad attitude control your attitude everyway you go at work don't let people judge you bad because of your attitude even home don't let your parant or your sibling judge you wrong because of your attitude use our attitude in right way so people can judge you in the right way your attitude is your way to success and to make you a nice person of all the time to other don't let your attitude contron you but you can contron your attitude attitude is good sometimes or bad in many ways example your get hiring asa teacher and your attitude it not good. you get angery so easlier to your student or your other teacher you say something mean to your them end of the day you dream to be a teacher you will lose it because of your bad attitude you can use your attitude to make your life so much easy to your self and for other because if you control your attitude even a person you work with will be nice to you because you use your attitude in good ways thayou post be to do. attitude can make you a lot of friend in the same way time your attitude can't make you to lose your friend your attitude can make you a rich person your attitude can make your life so much easlier if you control your attitude you control your while life if you control your attitude you control your success or your life. yes attitude is the key of your success,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
D581D89A822A,"Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? People should make their own decisions because if you trust your decision there is no reason why you should ask someone else. Putting some trust on your decision can help you do what is right or wrong. However, part of your decision needs to come from your heart.

Firstly, If you want to accomplish a dream in your life you need to put some extra work trying to get it done. Also, getting it done is not going to be easy but sometimes you need to try. For example, lets say you are a soccer player and you have a game but you don't trust your team mates what is going to happen is that you might lose that game. I know is hard to trust someone who doesn't act or look the same as you. I would take my decision and ask my self should I trust them or not?

Secondly, trusting your team will not always be the same but you should follow your instincts. Example, one day I made a bad decision of not cleaning the back yard of my house for like three months and it was fall and what happened was that it got full of leaves. If you take wrong decisions will cause you things that you don't want. When I saw my back yard full of leaves I ask to myself why did I make the decision of not cleaning the back yard. Ideas are part of what you should take seriously in your life. The idea of going to school should be one of the most important things you should do.

Thirdly, asking for help in taking a decision is not a bad idea. However, every day or every time you want to ask someone for help you must know who you are asking. For example, if you want to ask someone what you should do after graduation must come from you but sometimes you can ask questions to your family and talk about it, they might know what is the right thing you should do.

People agree with you taking your own decisions than doing what other says. Other unknown person's decision is what you should never do in your personal life. What I do when I have to take a decision of doing something is to think the decision twice.

In conclusion, never give up a decision of you doing the right thing. Always do what your parents says or ask you to do because they are the ones who wants you to accomplish your dreams, be there when they need you, talk to them when you need to. Other people who you should talk to are your siblings.                                                                  ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
F85B1C875E6C,"The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives because there is less communication, you dont really get to enjoy life as much, and your less capable of showing your creativity or smartness. Technology has had a big effect on humans from adults to toddlers all around the world in schools and in many other environments. With less communication due to technology may cause conflicts between people. You may have not been able to comprehend what was said or happened because you werent communicating. Not communicating causes people not to understand what you mean or where you are coming from in any situation if its in a relationship or friendship. Communication is something everyone should be comfortable to do and know about.

You dont really get to enjoy life as much because with technology you dont really focus on anything else that is happening around you. When your at family events you may be on your phone and not focusing on your family enjoying dinner, making funny jokes or opening up about something new and important to them. You may be at school and miss on all school events or the kindness of people around you. It does have a big impact on your family because you may care and love them but having technology around really makes them think otherwise.

Technology may get in the way of you showing your creativity and smartness. When you are at work or at school and you have been put in a place that you have to prove what you are capable of. A teacher may have assigned you to activities or have you do homework but you may have not done it or been able to. You arent capable of outsmarting someone or something through technology and creating new things or being open minded to learn new things. Everything may be different due to you being used to technology. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives because there is less communication, you dont really get to enjoy life as much, and your less capable of showing your creativity or smartness. Many are used to it and carry it everywhere with them and it may be a distraction in certain places or situations. You complete much more tasks without technology in schools, with families, and jobs. Technology may not be able to teach or help with things you will need in real life situations without it you avoid many problems. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
89114CEF532E,"What is one type of job you would like to employ and why would you would you employ it ? The one job i would employ would be a soldier. The one type of work I would employ would be a soldier because it has a lot of money and I want to protect people in the country.

First of all the one type of job I would employ would be a soldier because it has a lot of money.

For example, There was a boy named Generic_Name .Generic_Name was in high school and he was in tenth grade .Generic_Name wanted to be a nurse but his parent didn't want him to be a nurse because they knew that nurse didn't have a lot of money. Generic_Name also wanted to become rich so he could help his family. But Generic_Name dreamed so little for himself. Generic_Name hated when his parent told him that he was not going to be a nurse. When he went to school the next day , he told his friend what his parent told him. Generic_Name friend also knew that being a nurse would not help Generic_Name so he decided to tell him the truth.``Generic_Name maybe your parents are right."", He said.`` Isn't nurse a good job too?,"" Generic_Name asked.``It is , It's just that being a nurse is no good for you and your parents,"" He said.``Why,"" Asked Generic_Name .``Because it doesn't have enough money for you and your parents,"" He said. When Generic_Name went home ,he started thinking maybe his friend was right . He took a lot of time thinking about it. So he decided to be a soldier. At first he didn't want a soldier then he thought about it and he decided to go to soldier school. When he was graduated he went to collage. He worked really hard. When he finished his school,he employed for the soldier work. The first thing they did they buy a new house for him. When he started to work there he didn't have any problems .He felt like his dreams came true. He never had any money problems. And he also had enough money to help his parent. His parent were really proud of their son and happy for him. From there on he didn't have any money problems .

In addition

The one type of job I would employ would be a soldier because

I want to protect people in the country.

Once there was a girl named Generic_Name .Generic_Name lived with his father and mother but she didn't have any siblings. Generic_Name

Generic_Name 's father was a soldier .Generic_Name really loved being a soldier but her parent didn't let her be because in their country girls weren't allowed to fight on wars. One day a soldier came to Generic_Name 's home and told Generic_Name's father that there was war in their town so they needed him. But Generic_Name father couldn't go because he was really sick .And the problem was he only had one child and she was girl. Generic_Name's father wanted to go but Generic_Name stopped him because he was very sick and she didn't want her father to die and she also didn't want their town to be destroyed Generic_Name decided to go to fight by her self . When she was on her way to the soldiers she decided to pretend to be a boy because she knew that if she shows her self as a girl the general will send her back to her father's house .When she got there Generic_Name trained for the war ,she was so ready to fight. The general told them to get ready for the war so that when the enemies comes they start to shoot them first. But the other group planned a really bad way to finish them so when they got there they were all shoot by the enemies except for Generic_Name .She fought all the enemies and they were all died. but when she finished she was so tired so she felt down and slept. when she was asleep the fake hair dropped .When the soldiers came they were so happy but when they saw her they were surprise.``A girl she's a girl,"" one of the soldiers said. When the general came he was so angry that wanted to give the other soldiers permition to kill her but he remembered that she helped them won the the first war so he decided to let her go home and never come back. One day the enemies surrounded the soldiers and they were all attacked. The news was all over the place .The villagers were so afraid because they didn't have any one to protect them .Generic_Name din't want their general to die so she planned something .She went to the enemies secretly .She killed all of their enemies and then she went to their captain . ``Your highness I know the person who wanted to kill you,"" she said. ``He said that he is not afraid of you and he is waiting for you your highness,"" she said. ``Do you you know where that person is now?,"" Asked the captain. ``Yes and he said he's waiting for you ,""She said. ``Take me there,"" Said the captain.``OK ,"" She said. So she took the general out side. But when the general got there he didn't saw any body. ``Where is the person?,"" the general asked.``I am the person,"" Generic_Name said. At first the general laugh and laugh but when they started fighting .The general died and the people didn't have any problems. And from that day on Generic_Name was accepted to be a soldier and everybody respected her .

One job that i would like to work to would be a soldier because i want to get a lot of money and I also want to help the citizen just like Generic_Name did. At first Generic_Name thought that being a nurse was the right thing for him but when he stepped to soldier he didn't have any problems about money and his poor family now lives good life because of their child is a soldier. At first the general though that girls can not help on the war but Generic_Name wanted to prove it and she proved that women too are strong enough to be soldiers.

Dear

Manager I would like to employ for soldier because it is a good way to protect other people and it has a lot of money. Some people think that only men can work on soldier work but if you believe that you're wrong because soldier work is for all of us not only for men. If you're a woman and you want to be a soldier just do it it doesn't matter what type of a person you are.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
6BB4BEB51A80,"People can learn without making mistakes. People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important. People should not make their own decision. First, they would learn in a better way, also people need someone to advise them. As well, the world would not be destroy as it is now.

People would learn in better way. To begin, if people seek the guidance from experts they would not make a lot of mistake, and their life would be better. For example, a person who seek the guidance from experts it would have more opportunities. Likewise, a student who doesn't understand math class can talk with his teacher or other expert in math and the teacher can explain it. On the other hand, if the student doesn't talk to anyone he provably would fail math. In addition, a person who get a new job need someone to explain it what to do. While, if nobody explain it the new employee would make many mistakes. As you can see, the people who take the advise of a experts would learn better.

People need someone to advise them. For example, everybody have problems, but not everybody have someone to advise them. First, a new student came to my school and he didn't know the rules of the school, so he did something that it wasn't good and he get in big trouble, but if someone would explain him he would't get any trouble. Therefore, many teenager do whatever they want because they doesn't have anyone to guide them, and the result of that is those teenager get it many troubles each day. While, the teenager who are guide for any expert they do well in everything they do. As you can see, everyone need someone to guide for the right way, and nobody would do a lot of mistakes.

The world would not be destroy as it is today. For example, if everyone would have the opportunity to have someone to advice them the world would'n be danger to anyone. Furthermore, in many countries the people are in danger because their governors doesn't know how to guide a country, but if an expert took the control of the government the people would not be in danger anymore. Likewise, teenager sometimes live by them-self, so they don't have anyone to tell them what is good and what is bad; teenager many times do bad things and they don't even know. As I repeat, if the whole world would have someone to guide everyone the world would not be destroy as it's today, everything would be in peace.

In conclusion, if everyone would have the opportunity to have an expert guide during life the entire world would be better. Likewise, people would make better choices in their life. Also, with a expert guide the people nobody would be in danger again. Furthermore, teenagers and kids would have a better future around the world; as well, the world would be in peace, and people would learn in a better way. Also, if someone doesn't know something he/she can talk with an expert and the expert would guide her/him. Finally, life would be better and easier if everyone talk to an expert what is going on, so nobody would do a big mistake.           ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
FA72E7D170D5,"You never try to do something by yourself unless what you have already mastered, you will not grow all the time. You just will like a child and never grow up. Are you do something without any mastered? Even you are a young child, but you cannot always ask you parents and said "" Mom (Dad) , i don't know how to do this one, i don't know how to do that one."" And let your parents to do all of something for you. You never try, and you will never grow.

You are not a baby, you have to try to do something by yourself. When i was a child, do not understand what is ""do you own thing by yourself ?'' My sister (older than me) ,she always told me '' help me to wash the dishes; help me to hang up the clothes...''

She never will do this a little thing. Have once time , my grandmother saw me and asked me '' what are you doing over here, is too dangerous. Come over here, quickly."" '' Who let you to hang up the clother ?'' My grandmother said. I decrease my noice, and told her : '' is Generic_Name.'' Then my grandmom was angery,and told my sister :'' Why are you is so lazy, you can do al of this thing by yourself.'' Then, my sister, she was cry very lough.

If you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you are not be a success person and grow in your life. You have a big, samrt brain. In my memory, i am a lazy person. I do not know how to do that thing, but i do not want to think about how to do that, i will go to ask my parents or my sister.

The people in the world, they should have a little mastered when they do something else. A little mastered for every things, you will half of success.

No people is very perfect in the world, only when you want to do better than last time.         ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
8EE0540E163D,"First of all Thomas Jefferson have wrote a great and wondeful idea how can we get done any goal we planin to get done. We all know it is hard to done someting we will use on our future, but when dono it the first time the secound purpose will be much esily. however to accomplish a goal any one has to work hard and fine out to get it done.

How to get done our purpose and goal, all of use need to fine out how to get done some things ca happen many obtacle beffor get to the pupose we planign to get done we all know wil take a long time is not goin to happen jus with one person it will be hard to get there.

On otherhan it is a gret idea to be to accomplish what we what or we love to do on our rest of life becouse will make you a great person or a exemple for others.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
2EF984473EC5,"Which do you feel is more beneficial?

Do you prefer working in group or working alone? There could be many reason on either ones. As a school project, i would prefer working in group. what would you like to choose working in groups or working alone.

I choose working in group because you can task for help when it's needed. If you get stuck, you could ask your partner for help. If you done understand something , you could ask your partner for help. If you got question you could ask your partner also. If you don't know what to do you could ask your partner.

Working alone could be confusing at time. Working alone could be hard and have no help. If you got a question you have no one to ask. Also if you get stuck it could be hard to get back in track. Working alone could get stressful. Working alone is not easy, you gotta think harder.

Working in groups can be easy. Working with a partner could finish up quick. You guys could talk about it. One could be drawing while the other one could be writing. Working together will be easy when brainstorming. You guys could be doing two different things and still get it done. When working in groups establishes a better relationship.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
AD28F2915402,"I didn't heard much about that, but what I read in this prompt is that ""some high schools districts offers programs that allow high schools students to graduate early instead of four years"", it means that they should have extra classes in summer, and they are not able to take elective courses. These are my thoughts that I have:

First, I can see that they don't have a brake to relax (except winter brake and some holly days, sometimes teachers give students homework for winter brake) , they are always studing hard, so they get stress.

second, usually they have a lot of homework, that's one of the reason that they don't really have time to their families and friends; they can get depress too and start feeling alone, that's what usually happen to me.

After that, they are done with the school early, so they have one year to chill or may be have a part time job, except that their parents make them join to college early. They keep studing, and then sometimes people have to move from house, because the college is at another state or city, so they have to rent a room close to the college.

In conclussion, graduate in less time is better and worst at the same time, but people know what they do with their lifes, in my opinion I prefer to graduate like a normal student, in four years.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
FEC7696871E4,"Scientist Albert Einstein said,"" Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I really agree with him. Imagination can make yourself happier, can help people, it also can find a nice job that you want. What are these things mean? Let me tell you in this essay.

First, imagination can make yourself happier. Why? It is because you can imagine something that you like. For example, you want to fly like a bird but you can't do that. You can imagine how that feel. It feels free? Comfortable? Or tired? You can also imagine how you look like when you were 100 years old. Imagination make yourself happy.

Second, how can imagination help people? Let's think about if there is a child crying in the mall and everyone look at her because she dress so weird. You can use your imagination at this moment. You may told her to imagine with you. For example,""Don't crying sweetie, think about everyone look at you is because you dress like a princess. Now you are visiting them. You have to be nice and elegant. "" Maybe she will stop crying.

Lastly,parents always said "" You can't find a nice job that you want by having your imagination."" I think you can find a job with your imagination. For example, if you want to be a home designer but you don't have imagination. You make the house so horrible. You will got fired and you can't earn money. On the other hand, if you want to be writer and you can imagine lots of things and create 30 or more excellent books. You can earn lot of money even earn more that a doctor. So, I think Imagination can find a really nice job that you want.

To sum up, I totally agree with Scientist Albert Einstein. "" Imagination is more important than knowledge. Imagination can make yourself happier, can help people, or find a nice job that you want. I think it imagination is the most important thing in the world!        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D95A9CC4C62B,"One educational activity I would like to do is being in a chorus class. Because I get to practice my singing skills,I can learn from others,and also I can perform in from of people. I can do this by staying after school so i can practice more skills,or ask the teacher or students for help when I need too.

I think practicing your voice skills is very important if you want to enjoy the chorus class because you can get alot out of it. Ones you're out of the basics you can get more advance classes.

Secondly i think learning from others can help you because if you don't know something that other student knows you can ask if they can help you. Also seen what other student might do you can get an example from them or you can do what they are doing for you to get better at it.

Also when it gets to performing in front of alot of people I might get nervous because I'm not use to that I might even forget the lyrics of the song that I'm singing ,but ones you've done alot of performs you are not going to be afraid of going to sing in front of alot of people.

In conclusion, joying a chorus class can be fun because you can be with your friends or you can make new friends,and you can learn your singing skills,you can also learn from others and ask for help when you need too. So I think being in a chorus class can be helpful for you and others.                                                                                                                                 ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
F91EFD0443E6,"Have you ever though of people who use technology has limit their communication to others? Nowadays people who use technology are consistent spending their time on electronic device. Technology has a negative impact on human lives due to their daily routine.

The first reason is people's communication skills will decrease over time. Spending a lot of time on technology without comminicating with others, will affect your communication skills. Therefore, talking to someone who you haven't talked with for a while can be awkward. This shows that understanding between two people might have consequence and will be not accurate than it should be.

The second reason, people who use electronic device are unlikely aware of the surroundings. For example, people who are walking in street using headset or earbuds on that cover their ears is a bad choice. This shows a sign of danger, because you won't be hearing anything. People who are aware of surrounding are more safe to cross a street and communicate with people who are passing by. This shows a negative effect of people who block their earing has higher chance to get into a accident.

Some people say that technology helps them communicate by commenting on a website which is true, but that is not important because the person will be not always active and able to comment back on time, whenever they are on. If you are communicate in person you can read the person's mood. You can get a faster respond than waiting for the person to comment back. In this way is more accurate and able to trust each other more by communicating in person that you have meet or have not meet before.

The final reason is library is more accurate than reading books online. For example like reading online recommendation is not always accurate because of the people's preferance. You can ask the librarian for recommendation and librarian also assist you whenever you need help. You can read on your device but it is limited because of the battery. Unlike books, have no battery which means it doesn't have any limit. This shows reading on books is a better than reading on a device.

In conclusion technology had a negative effect on people lives. People should be aware that around them and spend their time in their technology on a necessary way. There should be a limit of how much time you are using on technology. Is better to communicate in person and don't wear anything that cover your ears while talking to someone. This affect our daily lives, so limit the time you use in technology.",3.5,3.5,4.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
591164D3C800,"I agree with Albert Schweitzer "" Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is he only thing."" Setting a example to others it's the best way to influence others because for example there are two students named Generic_Name and Generic_Name. Both of them are in the same school. Generic_Name has good grades he is always doing his school work, never dose anything to upset the teachers or get in terable while Generic_Name is the complet opposite.

Generic_Name has poor grades, always talking back to his teachers and never dose his school work he also get in to fights with other students. Generic_Name has a idea he wants to help Generic_Name to become a better person and influence him to do well in school. Generic_Name have the same first block class as Generic_Name. Generic_Name decided to get bad grades and talk back to his teachers.

Generic_Name is doing all of this because he wants Generic_Name to realize just because you have bad grades in school that dose not mean you can not change that. The next day Generic_Name gets good grade he apolegize to his teachers and Generic_Name seas Generic_Name having bad geades and the next day Generic_Name change that and started doing good agine. Generic_Name thinks to him self if Generic_Name can change so can I. The first thing he dose is to go and apolagize to his teachers for being rude he started studing, getting good grades. The moral of this was that some one's behavior could have a influence on others this is why I agree with Albert Schweitzer.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
CDCE16D2C836,"Boom that's the sound of a volcano that just erupted. An enjoybale educational activity for me is a volcano because they are intresting and an excellent science expirement.

The first reason I like volcanoes as an eductaion activity is because they are intresting. I've always wandered what caused a volcano to explode. Now I don't need to because I know now what causes them to erupt so voliently. Valcanoes are very fascinating to watch erupt when you see the magma flowing down. The magma can be so hot it can be like being hit with a ray from the sun. It's very awesome how the volcanoes are fromed and made. But as cool as volcanoes are they can still be pretty dangerous,because they could cause harm and erupt,cause chaos. sometimes volcanoes erupt at random times. Sometimes in villages or islands and in this case people don't have time to run. Because the magma flowing down is like an avalanche because it goes really fast and the people can't outrun the magma because it is to fast. There have been more volcanic eruptions that have killed people even children. Like pompei which was a huge volcanic eruptionthat killed a lot of people. After the eruption paremedics and police went back to discover the remains of people under huge rocks. Volcanoes are very intresting althougj they can be dangerous at times it's amazing how it looks when it erupts. Volcanoes are one of the greates things to study.

Next a volcano would make agreat science project. A volcano is a good science fair project. Because it's very amusing to see how the volcano erupts. When it erupts you can see the hot flowig magma as if people on a raft were going down. Volcanoes are a good science roject because it lets you know more about volcanoes and how thy come to form. Volcanoes are very rare to find here where I live at but there are still some outhere. That's a good science project not only because they explode but because you can even show the layers. Volcanoes have layers the top the middle and the bottom. The top is where the magma shoots out like a bullet from a rail gun. The middle is the less calm part and the bottom is where all the magam is. That is why I think a volcano is a good science project.

In conclusion an enjoyable educational activity is the science project of a volcano and i gave my two reasons why a volcano is a good educational activity. What is en enjoable educational activity for you?",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
E8BFE6D45E41,"I think older kids should not be pair with younger kids because they can be a bad example,not being good around young ones, and not respectful to younger Kids

I think the should not be pair with younger kids. If a older kids does something bad the younger ones might do it to. It can go super wrong like if a older kid does a trick in a skateboard. The older knows how to do it. But the younger does not know how to do it he can break . Something arm or leg. One my brother was with his friend doing trick on his skateboard and i tried to do it but i fell and Brock my arm.\

I think older kid should not be around younger kids. Because they can be on drugs or be smoking who knows. That bad for younger kids if a kid see you smoking all the the smoke can go to his lungs and maybe give him cancer or die. My fiend Generic_Name brother was smoking around us we told that smoking can kill us and him bu he didn't Leasing.

I think older kid should be respectful to younger kid and everybody. So they don't to be like them if you're respectful to other younger kids can be respectful to others. But if you're not respectful other are not going to be respectful. One my friend brother was not being respectful to us so we were not being respectful to him.

This is why i think older kid should not be around younger kids. There not respectul,bad example and there not good around young kids. If the were repectful,responsible it would be ok around younger kids.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
EE58A33AD551,"In my opinion, I gree with the Prime Minister Winston Churchill because the enthusiasm in the life is everything because without the entusiasm we are nothing, we can't go nowhere because we don't has the enthusiam, if we want something like jod, career, something the we want in life, we need the enthusiams first. Failure make people to give up when they mess up something but they has to keep going and doing thing possitive. Now i going to writting some example and information about the enthusiams and failure.

First, In this life if we not make a mistake (failure) we are not going to learn anything but we has to know if we fail we always has to try again and again no better what. We always need to thing possitive and has the enthusiams to do it again and get what ever we want in this life but always with the enthusiams because we need to has enthusiams to try again. Don't drop out your dreams if thing not going well.

Second, we need the enthusiams in our lifes no better if we failure, the enthusimas is the impulse to keep going and get everything like finish high schools, past the test, has a good grade but first thing possite and be enthusiams in things you really want to be successful in the future.

Third, the enthusiam is a great enjoyment, interest or approval . I think everyone has interest in something and we can make it, we can has everything but if propose in life. For me, my enthusiams is graduate from high school to make mother proud of me because thats why she came to United State to give me a better future and now she enthusiams to see her daugther graduate from high schools.

Addition, ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" in this quote said failure to failure is an instance of something not functioning properly but is not mean to give up just doing again but never loss enthusiasm to thing you love or want in the future just keep going make yourself proud of you and but never lost the entusiasm you has for things you love just because people talk bad things or thing is not good well, life give lesson to see if we are strong. Enthusiasm is everything in life.

conclusion, I will said that Minister Winston Churchill is rigth because how i said in the beginning of my first paragraphs enthusiams is everything in life, we need to has enthusiams in everything we do to make it better. Failure sometimes make persons to stay in the same place, failure don't let people to keep going because they think everything they do is failure and never try again or be unsuccessful in achieving something.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
FAC0A72D62EE,"Churchill's statement is important to American lives. Currently, people who fail always gets back up to keep on reaching for the goal they want to achieve. However, when people fail, they think they should give up and stop trying. It's important to discuss about these different sides. Churchill's statement is important for not giving up or quitting.

The first reason why we should never give up is that we learn from our mistakes. when you fail at something you have to understand that it's not the end of the world. If you don't get something right or you mess up on it, you'll know to get it right next time. It's always important to recognize that you can reach for you're goals to be successful. when you fight for what you believe in, you'll never go wrong.

The second reason why you should never give up is because you want to reach you're top goals. When you want something, you have to fight for it. People who fail or didn't do something right, they give up and say that they have wasted their time, But in life, we can't always win or do something right. we are bound to fail at some point in our lives and it doesn't feel good. However, we keep on pushing for it because we want to be successful and feel great about ourselves to know that we didn't give up.

On the other side, when people give up, they have fail. People who think they have what it takes to be able to get a job, being able to go to a good school, or pursuit their dreams without mistakes, is someone who's going to give up the moment they've fail. The people who got great jobs or got into a good school, worked hard for it. Even when things went bad, they didn't give up because they work hard for that purpose. Some people who fail, often say that they're not smart or not that good. If your not that smart, how are you here today? When you struggle on something, you have to understand that the people around you are the people that can help you with deal with you're problems. Friends and families are the people who can help you in your time of need.

Finally, whenever you have a goal or something you want to have, it's important to never give up or quit halfway through. A goal is something you want to have and by working hard, you know you'll able to reach it in no time. Whenever you get stuck or something goes wrong, you always have support from the people you know very well to help you. By not giving up on what you're trying to reach, you can be able to feel confident about yourself and be able to be confident through life.         ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
04ACA7EB3994,"No,I dont think students should attend online classes from home. Because online classes might be sometimes harder for them to understand and to get help. It is always better to take classes in the person so students can learn better and get more experience and they can easily get help from the teachers whenever they want to. Online classes make people lazy and dont went them to do anything. They should get experience of going to school so they can learn more better. In my opinion in person classes are way better than the online classes. And it help students to be on time always.

Students should take the classes in person so they can attend school daily and get more active. It is totally different experience by taking classes online or in person beacuse sometimes its hard to understand from the online classes and students cant get it. Online classes are good for the students who need to graduate early and they cant have more in person classes so they can take the classes online and graduate on time. online classes make students lazy and dont they dont do it on time and they get lazy by staying at home. Online classes might be harder sometimes than the in person classes. Some people are used to online classes because they feel they are more easier for them. online classes are good for students who want to complete their all the required credits. Some people dont get time to do the online classes beacuse they have to go to work and they cant able to finish everything on time. They put more effort by going to school and sometimes they just dont feel like doing to online class. Online classes are good for those who wants to complete there courses early. Students should attend school so they learn more better. Sometimes online classes might be pressure for some students because its alot of them to do it and it depends on them whenever they want to do it and they should finish before the end of the school year and itmight be more stressful for them to complete everything soon. They should try there best to attened school beacuse it is more better than doing the online classes.

Online classes make some people lazy and they dont get experience of going to school. They should go to school and attend the classes so they can do all there work in class and get help from teachers whenever they feel difficulty beacuse getting help from online classes are harder it is a bit harder to get help from internet because some people dont understand them and it is more easier when they get help in person and they can understand everything easily and ask questions whenever they would like to. While,Some people might say yes it is better to attend online classes rather than going to school because they have to work in the morning and they dont get time to come to attend in person classes because they dont feel like going to attened them so they attend them at home. Students dont get much things in online classes and the feel difficulty sometimes and its hard for them to get some help from someone. Becasue if they go to in school classes they can get more help and they can get help for them to go to college. They can ask their counselour about how to apply for the colleges they want to get admission. They can get know whats going on in school and they can attend many activites in school and take some electives classes so they can learn more. Some people just want to take the classes online becasue they dont have the time to go to school.

Some students attend both online and in person classes beacuse they cant get enough classes at school in a year and they want to graduate on time so they take online classes so they can finish everything on time. It is little harder to attend both at a time beacuse they had to go to work too and they dont get time to do online classes. One of my friend jose he had done the same. He had to graduate on the same year but he was missing one class and he was not able to graduate on the same year so he went to his conseolur and he asked him what can he do to graduate on the same year so she gave him the idea for the online class and he started doing it. He felt it little harder but he was able to finish on time and he was able to graduate on time. Some students are always late on doing on online classes because they dont have enought time to do it If students get to in schools they get to know more about school and be more responsibility and they can get more education so they dont feel difficulty when they go to college they should always have experience of high school so they dont have any problem in college later on. And students put more effort in class because they have to get good grades so they can get good GPA and easily get admission in the college they want to. Online classes are sometimes harder depends on what class are they taking. Maths class might be harder to do in online classes beacuse you always need someone to help you because you might have so many questions and it will be harder to do maths in computer.

In conclusion,I would say it is better to take classes in school so students can learn more better and its more easier for them. In person classes are always better and students can get more help and understand better. Students can take part in activites. Students get more active by coming regularly to school. By coming to school daily it helps students to learn more and they get good experience for coming to school by making new friends and getting to know more about school. And they wont feel any difficulty beacuse there will be someone who can help them whenever they want to. By taking online classes students dont learn more like they can can learn in school classes. Students should take the online classes only if it is needed them to complete all required credits they want to graduate. Online classes might help some people and they feel more comfotable. But in my opinion i would rather take in school classes because it would help me in future by getting good experience of highschool and learn more",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
BEFC24511B26,"The effects of students gets involved of a program, is relate ship,teamwork, and truth willy because all this thing builds up like a friend ship. Also the students will experiment this well there in a program as a team.

Relate ships is a important work with someone else. Also the program can make these students become friends. Friends can lead up to best friends. Relate ship can also help other people, what they did wrong to people. It can make them real lies relate ship is important to people.

Team work is other thing that is important to the program,because it share friend ship ,and relate ship. Team work can assist there team in game or in praction. It will effects a lot of people as a team. The program help both the students by assist each other. The older students show and help the younger students.

Lastly truth willy is very important, because it is part of people life. Truth willy will make program better and truth willy to other people. This will help the students trust each other will and as a friend or family. The both students will get more friends and look each other. The students will trust each other as a team work or a friends.

Inconlotion relate ship, team work, and truth willy make up a friend ship, and the program that the students will be as a team or a family. The program also help a lot to the students. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
EF1CF9E844F7,"I believe high schools students should not be expected to stick to a career, They are barely finding themselves. Choising a career a at young age can lead to mistakes like choosing something you don't enjoy.

High Schools Program shoud be a way to help the future profesional to find what they are really want to be in the future, high school stage is one of the most important step for the young age students, Because there is when they choose their future, We need to work with them the best way is posible, We need to find out a programs that impulse them to continue students after high schools graduate.

In some case parents try to tell their children what career they have to take, In that case if the students have to choose a career by the time they are entering to the high schools, Most probably will be their parents choosed what career they are going to take it, So that may be a mistake for the student because when they finally found themself, Probably they realize there were something else more interesting for them that they could take it, At that time would be too late.

Also some students may take a career that doesn't make the money they were expecting, or choosing a career that's not fit for them,

What the high school should be concern about is to form the best profesional for the future, Teaching them the best educations is posible and the same way showing them what kinds of career are there,The advantage and the disadvantage all the career have it.

High schools programs should know they're playing a really impotant roll in the future of the country, However the programs needs to be concentrated, should be educated the young guys the best way is posible,

Create a programs to keep them away from problems like; Grugs, Alcohols, Gangs. This 3 problems are killing our new genetion, This is one of the reason why the students leave the schools at early time. Also the high schools needs to help the students to find the career that will make them be happy in the furute. Should not be the high schools expected to the students to identify a career before or at the time their are entering to the high schools.

In conclusion, high schools students, In my opinion are not ready to choose a career yet, At their age they may not know what really want, or be ready to make such a big decision.",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
D2C9C1EE55F2,"I think that if we always do something we are going to learn something new from our miskes. We have to do something always everywhere in the world even in the bad times of ours life time. For example we have to work, take cares of our children's and also ours country. As we born and grow up we have the right to work harder at school until we finish than we have to work.

we always have to work in untied state because we have a lot of bills every month in the Mali box everyday a bill is coming from different companies, Every month the rent of the house. Than the rent of the cars we drive. And the insurance of the cars. The bills from gas and water so from every where. We work this much money and we pay back more than we make and at the end nothing will left for us. Than we have to take cares of the kids always something new when ever they see something we have to buy it to them no matter what you cant say no we have to work so that we can take cares of them anytime anywhere. Unit they grow up they always asking for milk if the government dont give the families or the kids the snap which is a card they always or each month they sent money into the card so you buy food from it and thats for kids. If they dont help people and the people have to work even at night to prevent every things for their kids. We always have to do something for our country to do our jobs like we have to work hard to protect the people from dying we have to take cares of our jobs better. We have to help the government by paying taxis so they can do something to the country make the roads safer for us so we can drive in a better roads. We always have to do something that the people whos lives in the country proud of us such as the police mans, military and air forces or anything else who ever work they should be honest with their work. That way we can do something for the country.

In conclusion we always have time to work its never late if we want work or do something and instead of staying home is better if we work outside.       ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
8FFDA5B9D359,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I agree with this statement i have three reasons why I think students should be able to attend classes from home. One reason is some students have a alot of responsibilities at home and sometimes students arent able to go to school. Some might have kids and they need to stay home to take care of there kid because nobody can babysit. That's really hard for a student to do. Trying to go to school and have a kid can be very stressful to the student.

My second reason I have for this statement is some students feel comfortable having class in there own safe environment where they feel comfortable and not anxious. There are some students that have anxiety and are not able to function in a classroom full of students that can be really hard for a person because its not easy trying to get your work done in a classroom full of students and dealing with anxiety. That can be very stressfull I feel like a student should comfortable in there learning environment because when they are comfortable they achieve better in there work. They can focus better and get work done and won't be distracted by anyone there's a lot of benefits with that. Parents would also agree that having ther child in a environment that they are comfortable in is the best way to keep there child focused and willing to pass there classes without any distractions that the child doesn't need.

My third reason i agree with this statement is students can feel more determined to do there work at home in a quiet place its very helpfull to the students needs to be sucssesful. Some students get distracted easily and can't in a classroom so attending class at home helps the student concetrate and perform better with there work.

Another reason is parents would feel comfortable with there child being at home doing school work where they are safe and focused on the right things which is school work. Some students find it easier to do things online than in a classroom so its all about personal prefrence and i agree with this because it could be hard trying to understand what the teacher is saying or talking about. It's good to have a sense of understanding when it comes to learning something that's very important for students.

My conclusion to this statement is that i agree and I think it is a great idea for schools to offer this to students because it gives students a chance to be at home and pass there classes with no distractions. It also gives them an oppotunity to sucsseed and graduate. I also agree about doing school online because some students find it easier and better than being in a classroom all day and not being able to understand the teacher. I also like this because you can do your class work where ever you are you dont have to be at home if you have somewhere to be you can take a laptop and do work. I think doing online class works for a busy students schedule its all around is a good idea and I am happy that schools are letting students do online classes its a big benefit for them that's why I agree with this statement.  ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
8521B650F8A9,"Dear principal

I think that you should require students to perform community service.

It will help all elementary school students to do better on their school work. you can let students that are interested in this program to participate in it.

Students that do not want to participate, must let them do what they want.

Principal I will be part of this program and i will help those elementary school students.

you still have to ask the students that are interested if this program will affect their grades in school.

I will help you organize this program.

I will also bring as many tutors as possible.

I will try to make this program successful.

Many other students and parents are going to help us organize this program.

This program is going to help educate many elementary school students and make a good future for them.

I will do my best to make those students successful.

You should announce this program to the whole school so many people can participate.

We need as much students as possible.

Helping people is one of my hobbies.

We can also provide different interesting stuff that students can do during tutoring time.

We can provide sports and other things that they want.

We can make it as an after school program.

We should also provide buses to people that are going to stay.

Mr. Principal let me handle this program and make it ready for all students.

We should do our best to help those kids.

Parents can also help.

You can also ask for donations.

Mr. principal its my pleasure to help all students that need help.

sincerely: your student

Date: 2/15/11",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
8C83ACEF2A15,"I agree that some district offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of 4, some students don't have enough money or they don't want to go to college. Their parents work day and night if they got out of high school with a diploma they will be able to work full time and help their parents with money or even move out of the house and start living independently, another reason is that teenagers would be more mature for their ages and learn everything they need to know to be successful in life.

Nowadays employees are looking for young adults to work for them but also with experience, that means if students graduates in three years they could gain experience by working on a restaurant,store et in one year. Other teenagers will go to college or university if they know what they want to study and know what they want to be, they will graduate at a good age not young, but not that old,they would have more time, energy, and interest. Some teenagers just don't want to be at school for years they don't like school, this program help them have more time to experience, try new things, prepare them for what they want to do and how they want to do it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
4B0F6070B45A,"Every day all the people in the world make a lot decisions and each one have different way to decided. Sometimes you have you have to ask for help, becasue there is a lot of people with experienced for example, parents,teachers and experts. I think decisions can affect your future and also can affect other people. Adults, specially old people have a lot advices for you to be a better person.

First of all, decisions are the key of the one person and can affect the future for the rest of the life. For example,education is one of the most important thing in the life, and that's why your parents always keep saying go to school, and finish the high school that advice is given to you because they want to see a better future for you and you have to listen because is the experienced that is talk is not your parents.

Second, adults have a lot of experience specially old people (grandmother and grandparent).For example, every time when your parents talk for your future, they know about the life because all they have experienced and maybe when they were young, make a bad decisions and that's why the given to you a lot advices because they worried about you.

Finally, most of the time specially (young girls and boys) when they decided something always is wrong because they only care they self but that decisions can affect other people. For expample I from Generic_City and in my country all the time you see young people make the decision to drop out of school and get to the gangs. As a result, they get to the jail or they died and the only people who cry is your family bacuse they want all the best for you.

In conclusion make decisions is not easy for each one because some are easily and some are hard, but I think you shoot ask all the time first for help with your parents and with experts because they have a lot experienced.        ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
57E8161AEF27,"I think It's a really good idea, And students they will benefit with this idea, Bacuse they don't have to travel to school eveyday, it will be a better option taking the classes only or video conferencing because is soo much easier. And i think is more beneficial beacuse i dont think, Students would want to travel eveyday to school and back.

I think students they will benefit with this idea, because they are not going to spend that much money, In traveling to school eveyday. It will be so much easier taking classes only, because students will have more free time to do their own things, after they're done with all their schoolo work at home: for example; if the students works it will be a better option of taking classes only because he/she will have more time in getting ready for work, and been on time to work.

Reasons why I say it will be a better option taking the classes only or video conferencing, It's because students they don't have to worry, about gettig in trauble for been late to school, Because if students will travel to school schoool, there will be a high posibility of not getting to school on time sometimes it can be for many reasons; for example: traffict issus, parents they might get sick or any other reason, It will be really hard for this students if schools wouldn't offer away to study and learn at home, schools they make it easier for this students who aren't able to come to school, Myself as student i think this is a really good idea made by the school, Bacuse it gives students the oportnity of study at home when they aren't caplable to show up to school for this type of reasons.

I am agree with schools that offers distance learning as an option for the students, Because some students don't have the ability as others students, That has the oportunity of riding the bus to school everyday from Monday to Friday, This students who takes online classes is because they really need it, And they don't have a way of getting to school eveyday , It might be more difficult for them , because they might not have someone to explain them as well as a teacher. Another reason why i think some students students take only classes is because some classes that they like, some school don't have them, and they really want to know about it, Aslo sometimes parents look trought schools to see the classes option they have online so they can apply to see if their sons can takes those classes online to learn about it. One of the major reason why student take classes online sometimes is because they don't have enaught credits, so they have to take classes online, Becuase even if they come to school they won't be able to graduate because they dont have all the credits needed, Some students don't live near the schools to come all the way to school so they decide to take the classes at home.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
95671082C3A1,"The use of technology has positive effects on people's lives, because the technology is very important at the present time, and people can finish their tasks without having ask others. People can check out books, shop, and play games. Some people believe that the technology has a negative effect, because people loss human contact.

Firstly, people can check out books online or read books without having go to the library. For example, some people do not have time to go the library and grab some books, because they are busy or they are working. Also, they can read the books any time that they want without bothering others. Secondly, some people shop online because is more easy for them to do it like that, for example, they can order anything like food, clothes, or shoes. Anything that people ordered would be delivery to their homes, this is more easy because they do not have to go the stores and buy what they need. Thirdly, some people like to play games because there are a lot ways to play games for example, people can have they portable nintentos, they can download games in their phones, or they can have they own games at home.

To concluded, the use of tecnology is very important, it helps people to complete their tasks without having contact with others. The use of technology has positives effects on people's lives because it makes some things easier for them.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
70041E13A0CC,"Distance learning was popular, and had so many students and parents chose instead of attend in class. It is convenient and highly support for students in many different way. In the other side, it has a limited things become disadvantage for students who taking classes at home such as communication to solve the problems, competition each other and experiences inspiration from teachers. Those are the most important things school offer to students. It is made valuable that distance learning never could gives to students.

The first and the obvious things that students would not benefit from distance learning is communication. Communication is the the person gives and exchanges information to the others, either verbal or non-verbal. For example, some students have watched video, and they still misunderstand and how would they figure out what they have learn, different teachers is different way to teach. Instead of video conferencing, school offers to students time to see teacher, professor to discuss their problems and find out what they were struggling with. That is why communication so important that distance learning can not offer to students.

The second advantage to being in class instead at home is competition. Competition is person versus or competitive with another person or group, each of which is trying to do better than all of the others. The best example is the one student in class got an highest score test, the others will do whatever it takes to get higher that score was. School always creating the competitive for students to participate, and that way makes students get more interesting at work help them to prepare for examination. That is the reason why competition is necessarily and advantage that distance learning would not have to offer students at home.

The last thing students could not get from online classes or video conferencing is the experiences and inspiration from teachers, professors. The experiences is the knowledge or skill gather from the pass; the inspiration is person with confidence and desire to do something that makes the the other people follow. During the class, not just the lesson from the math or English or Science, students would receive a life lesson from their teacher. Teachers could share the experience from their pass and motivation student who has the same the path, then students would not struggle with the same mistake they did. That was the most valuation that students can not get anywhere except in class.

Eventually, classes give students a lot of thing that they would not benefit from being at home. Attend to class offer students communication to easier solve their problems, created competition place for students and experiences inspiration from the teachers for students have a better way to learn. Those things that online learning students would never received. class is not just a lesson, it is also the small society that students should have before the real life. That was the reason why attend classes better than onine learning at home. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
FDCBCA9B0636,"Dear School Principal,

I believe that students should have cell phones in campus. If they have something they always wanted from a school. They'll be wanting to learn more. If there's a emergency somewhere where they cant get to the office immediately , they could use there cell phones to call other students to tell the teachers that there's an emergency. Parents won't be angry about this policy because they'll know that there children are learning in ways that they'll want to learn.

So, if they know that they can use there cell phones in school they wont be using it during class hours. Cell phones are really use full to students during school hours. It keeps them safe and will help there education in how they will want to learn. You should really reconsider to allow students to bring there cell phones to school. It will be helpful to them. Students will think that education is fun now. And If you really look at it there's not much time of break or free time. The only time they'll use their phones a lot is during lunch time.

Take my opinion and try it . You'll see that i was right. Our school will be fun for students our age. Parents might want to bring there younger children to this school when they get older.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5
1A17F32415FD,"First impressions are almost impossible to change because it's the first image that I give to the others, what other people think about me , people are going to treat me as I treat them the first time and no one is going to change his mind easily

First impressions are important, because thats how the the others around see me, because after the first time that they see me, that is the image that they have about me, and if it is a bad image ,thats how they are going to remember me every time that they see me, even if I am not like that , like if a was having a bad day , and a was grumpy , they are going to think about me as a grumpy person, even if I am a happy person, but that is the image that they are going to have about me.

whats people going to think about me depends on the first impression that I gave them, because if I gave a bad first impression , but then I am trying to be nice with them , they are not gonna believe me, because they are going to still thinking about me as a bad person and they are going to think that I am lying.

After the first impression I am always going to get what I give ,I am going to be treated the same way as I treated others the first time , making more difficult to change their minds about the first impression.

Is important to keep in mind that the others are not going to change their mind easily , but it is not impossible , if a person try really hard and with good intentions , the other person maybe can change his mind about that first impression , but sometimes a person does not have to do anything to change that first impression , someone can change the first impression by his actions , even if is from a bad impression to a good impression or from a good impression to a bad impression, but it is possible.

first impressions are really hard to change because the first image a person gives, what others think about me after it, and they are going to treat me the same way as I did with them , but it si posible to change.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
40AA29D2F32B,"Dear, Manager

I would like to visit your companies to explore if the crear is good encore for me.

If I like what is available for to do.

I want to know more and see how it needs to be done.

The companies is big that you can have a lot of employees to do work faster. The students can see how it feels to work or to be in a companies. You can make the student know how it feels to be a manager and to work up to 7 hours. You can tell them how long they will work and when there lunch at when it is time. You can show how it is all organized and where everything is at to get anything fast when it is need for the product to be done in order to sell it to the people.

People will wonder how the companies work and it could be tiring if at night.

How big can a companies even be are there any limit to the area going to be used for the company.

What is the cost for a companies for it to be build. Dose a companies have to be remolded and cert en times like every 5 to 6 years. Where can a companies be build at in urban places are rural places. When do people come to bring stuff to make something to sell it because they will need stuff to make the thing to sell it and get money to invest to the company so it will grow. What is the cost for all the meltarsils of the company to be able to run correctly so not a lot of money is put in to it and get broke and struggle with money that is needed.

Going to a company can help others if they want to work in a company.

Some people want to see how it feels to work or be a manager and time to put in to work.

What will a company do if they run out of money and supplies dose the company need to be sold.

Will a company pay lots of money for the bills from most of the elctristy. will a company get in to trouble if the supplies they make is not good? All companies are big but some are bigger than other because they sell there stuff faster and get more money from it and they get better stuff to use and make there company even bigger with better stuff to make the supplies and surly more employees. every company makes there own stuff they can't tack other people supplies and take the credit of the managers.

What wll happen if on company steals an idea form someone will they get a fine of a lot of money are they will go to jail for stealing the idea of the other company.

Will all companies have work all the time.

Do companies work on festive days like Christmas or new years.

Will employees get some days to have vacation.

After all the work is done all the machine get turned off if in a festive day.

When a employ gets sick do they have to call the manager to say they can't go or they just don't go and wait if the manager calls him because he wasen't there.

If they get sick during work will replacement person come to replace them for the days or in tell they feel better.

When there is a fire will they get money from all the thing they got destroyed or that don't work any more.

It will be nice if students can go to the companies and see how it is like to be a manger or employ or even a expert so the can control the money so they don't get broke in the future of the company.

Know everyone will know how it feels to be a manager or employ of any job that needs the manager or employs.

All of the these will help and see how it feel to control the company and how they do it and when get sick while in work.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
98823BEE8E85,"I'm very interested in the nurse and now there's an opportunity that school tell us to strive for an internship in this hospital, i'm very glad to attend this competition. Because i really like and also thirst for be a nurse and i think nurse can help a lot of people.

First, i usually learn some knowledge about nurse in books or online. There's some books that people write their experience about how could they become a nurse, how the nurse job looks like and also some story that they have met. Actually i know, it's a hard job to learn, even my first language is not English, it become harder. But when i see the story, see the interesting experiment, i'm fascinated. Sometimes, i also go to find some volunteers about nurse, it always help me learn a lot that i can't learn from the book.

Second, i think to be a nurse is arrogant. People always say "" Nurse is just like an angle"", they help people from disease. As i said, i have read a story that makes me shake: Once in a night, the nurse was ready to finish her work, but suddenly, a man run in to the hospital and there's blood in his arm, he said somebody want to hurt him, that nurse keep him in to the restroom and called 911 first, she try her best to bind up his arm, she wrote in the book"" I'm so scary and my hand was shaking, but soon i clam down, i know i'm the hope for him"". This story makes me have different understanding about nurse, this job can even save people's life. What a mighty job it is!

In conclusion, i hope i can get this opportunity, this hospital have high opinion in VA, and there's more projects that can makes me learn. This is a rare chance for me and i have plenty of time during the summer brake.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
8060FCE12001,"Should students enjoy less summer vacation and more winter break. Why would they change the vacation time? Cant it just stay the same as usual? Would the students like like that change? Are those changes going to help the students in their studies?

First of all some students wont like this change because,in the winter time it can get really cold ,so the students wont be able to go outside,walk,nor play. Also one of the reasons they wouldnt like the change is that i summer break they can be outside and go out places. In the winter could get really cold and the students stay outside for a long period of time they might get a could and miss some school days and affect them. If they miss schools days they will be behind from the class.

In the other hand some students might like that idea because in the summer time it can get really hot outside .If its really hot outside people can get dehydrate ,but for other reasons summer days can be some amazing days. Some benefits of summer : going to the beach,amusement park,camping,and travel. Reasons that students will like to have more summer vacation:more vacations days,nice weather to go outside, go to the pool,explore nature and helps them to stop using technology.

If this change in vacations happen I wont like it,because I like being outside in warm weathers and i woulld hate to have less summer break and more winter break .Plus I hate when we dont have school when theres a snow s day. I

like how the vacation time is right now because everyone can enjoy some vaction in the tie that the like the best . I am aslo sure that most of the student will like to keep the same time of vacations beacuse they want to have more not less

In conclusion the time of vacation will not change because the students will prefer to keep the same one .They will like to enjjoy the time not hate it. My point is if the studdent dont like the new time they will problobly wont like to g back to school and just ingnore it. So if they want to change the time talk to the student if they are ok with it ,if not then make a solution about it.        ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
036042533396,"Do you ever feel like giving up just because you failed and you feel like nothing is going your way ?

In this paper i will argue that '' success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasms''

Sometimes it's okay to feel upset,mad and frustrated when you think you're trying your best and it seem like. Nothing it's working out for you .

Failure is the way to success and some people seem not okay with it. Most people also don't understand why it has to be like this. However we don't always get what we want in life and that's a fact. Because that's just the way it is you can't blame yourself for it either. Most of us think that you have to be successful the first time you try something. But sadly that's not how works for some of us but some are just lucky.

I remember a few years back when my Aunt Generic_Name open her second beauty salon. She was quite upset because nothing was going the way she wanted to and how she planned. It wasn't going well she felt like everything was falling apart. She started to lose a lot of costumers the first year she open the salon. But 2 years later she started to promote her beauty salon again. She kept trying till she achieved her goals and now everything going well for her. I think one the things that helped her a lot was her positive attitude towards everything. She also didn't lose her enthusiasm. I think this is a good example of ''success consist of failure''

Some of us might not agree that ''Success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.''

I know a few people that don't have this mentality. Just because you weren't successful doesn't mean you're not going to be ''somebody''. Or that you need to stop trying because it's not meant for you. But they are wrong because at the end of the day what matters is what you think you're capable of doing and what you can do.

Don't let others people get to you and keep hoping for the better. Another good example is most of the big celebrities that we know now days like Oprah,Ellen DeGeneres and many more were turn down before had disappointments and maybe gave up for a moment . But they never lost their '''enthusiasms'' and they made their dreams come true and pretty much that's how you become successful in life.

From time to time you need to start taking those ''Failures'' as a lesson and just keep trying to do better. Because that's how life is. Because you attempt to do something and it didn't go your way doesn't mean you have to put it aside. We are humans we make mistakes. But you just can't give up easily and losing hope. It's not an option either you just have to keep pushing and like people say ''Fake it till you make it .''

In the future i hope people start realizing that opportunities come and go. There's nothing wrong with failure. I'm pretty sure we all been there before and it's okay to feel like crap. But it's not okay to stop trying just because one door closes many more can open for you. You can go as far as you want to because you're the only one that can stop you from being successful. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
6805FE96E548,"Students having the option to have distance learning would only be great for students who are responsible and cable of keeping up with their assignments. Distance learning is beneficial to students because they won't have to worry about getting up early to go to school and also, don't have to worry about that amount of time they have in class to finish an assignment. Taking online classes gives the student more freedom to expand their thinking while having their own space at home.

A way that distance learning benefits students is not having to wake up at 6 or 7 am in the morning to go to school. Some kids don't show their full attention in school because they're not a morning person. Having to wake up in the morning and sit in a classroom for 2 hours is uncomfortable. For example, I'm not the type of student that can sit in a classroom for 2 hours or more and listen to a teacher talk. I would, prefer to move around and also eat while i'm doing my work that makes me feel more focus. But, in high school your not allowed to randomly get up and walk around it would make the teacher feel unsafe or the students. Waking up at 9 to 10 is a good time to start your online classes because you had enough time to wake up shower , eat and that most important part is that you dont have worry about what clothes your going to wear to school.

Another reason that distance learning is beneficial to students is because as high school students is not really easy to keep up with a teacher. when they're teaching a lesson with 28 more students in the classroom that probably already understood the assignments. There are some teachers are just not the type to go back and repeat their self. For example, When a student miss class it feels like you missed a whole quarter. The teacher is not going to explain the whole lesson to 1 student she would simply say check online for the assignment. This is an example of why students would prefer to take online classes because theres no way a student can be absent. Student can walk around anywhere with their computer or phone and simply pull up the school work and start doing it on their free time.

Some students would say its better to come to school, meet people and have the high school experiences. Although it sounds fun. Theres still students that would prefer being home and getting their work down at home then being in school dealing with drama or extra assignments. Theres students who would rather focus on online classes and finish them and also have a part time job on the side to help them pay for their colleges.

In conclusion, distance learning is an advantage to students who are proactive and for students who learn better on their own. Having to do your school work online and especially at home makes it feel more comfortable. Its also helping students get ready for the real world when they have to take home assignments from work and make sure to stay focus.     ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
2010889A6522,"Hello dear reader. In the follows paragraphs I would like to tell you what I think about this issue because i believe that everyone got opinions or some ideas about this new ""proposal"" as well. First, I would like to discuss if this ""proposal' makes sence to me or not and wich are the advantages and disadvantages.

First thing I may say is the advatage and the disadvantage that we probably can see or find in the proposal. One adventage that comes along with this proposal is one schools day less. If the school follows the whole proposal; we can say or expect that friday or anyday will be off; wich means no school for us. In addition, we will have three days free. So, we can spent more time donig what we most love or enjoy. In the other hand, we have the disadvantages. I personally found one hugh disadvantage, the time. I personally think that the time that we will spent in the school is alot. Just think about it , how do you going to fell staying about 10 hours in the same place , spacially when that plece is not home. You might be get uncomfortable, or little irritable.

Secondly, I totally agree with the proposal because we gonna get more help on schools subject wich is good for us. Also we will avaible to do more school activities such as sports, fell trips, math stuff or any other amazing things. Besides, we will learnd more things such as lenguague stuff. like I said in my las sentence more time in the school could works for many of us.

Lastly, One more day free. We gonna spent more time in school, but at the same time we also can get one more day free. Folllowing the proposal we also can get other day free like Saturday or Sunday wich is good for us because that day could be any day of the week. So, this means that we are avaible to do more thinghs that we most enjoy or love, for example, play videogames , go to the park , take wallks and other amazing things.

Conclusion, the new proposal has a good advantages over the disadvantages. I completly agree with this and I am sure the proposal is benefial and will work for us. Also, we will save energy and resources , at the same time we gonna get benefits from it.     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
E71DABB44645,"This essay has been written to take in consideration the advantages and disavantages of a four-day school week with each day considering to be ten hours which for some people it might seems to be a better way to conserve energy and resources.

As a student I can say that I agree with this ""benefit"" but in this case I don't agree with making school two hours longer than usual for some students spending eight hours in school is consider to be enough becuase people get exhausted by spending most of the day sitting in a classroom. For example: in every classroom there is someone who is always sleeping during class due to the a lot of work school leave us to do, people who has work after school, and even sports. These reasons of why people gets to be too tired to stay up during class, imagine having to spend two additional hours in school just to have a three day weekend which might seems good but it really doesn't.

Spending two hours more than usual for four days it just a way to still using energy even though people think they are saving energy but they really are not doing any better, let's use this as a example: the two hours we are using extra for the four day it still makes up for the eight hours we are losing for the fifth day of class. The extra two hours of Monday-Thursday sum to be eight hours that people still use the energy, which means they aren't really saving energy

Example number 1: my friend Generic_Name loves the idea to have a four day school because this means that he will have a extra day to do homework and to spend time with his girlfriend Generic_Name. For him this new programs works perfectly and is an advantage for him.

Example number 2: My boyfriend Generic_Name loves to study but he does not agree with this new idea because he has sports to do after school for like about 2 hours of training for the basketball team in our school and then after that he works for 4 hours to help his mom with his car insurance which means that he won't get enough to sleep at night because after he gets home from work he has to do homework so we won't have to turn in it late. Like him there is a lot of more students in the same situation. Who does thing sacrifies to help their parents to make the payments.

However, teacher's opinion matter too and they will be tired of speaking ten straight hours too, remember that they aren't robots who are just set up by the government. This means that they might not even agree with this new idea of making school loger for students and teachers.

My school should not follow this model because they should think in everybody's benefits including teachers and students plus the staff of every department in the school's main office to make a fair decision for everyone in school. We don't know if this new adaptation will work in the schooling system which we don't have guarantee of this idea working well for us as a community. Consideranting that this program is working for some business that have adopted this new schedule might not work for us as a High School because here we have differents actitvities that the people in businees companies doesn't have, which make us a different environment than the business. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
B261F438E0DA,"I think that honesty is so important because, being honest can make you gain trust from others. Honesty makes life easierit helps by telling the truth everyone can get along. What ever the situation is good or bad you still have to tell the truth because it is good for everyone and, yourselves. When your honest more people can trust you and, the more people that trust you the better of a person you are. However, when it comes to suicidal thoughts or someone isnt feeling good tell the truth to an adult even though your friend told you not to you did a great thing for your friend, you might have saved his life. You can always tell the truth because being honest is always helpful and, good because, you did a good thing. Being honest is needed everywhere because if everyone was a liar our country woudn't be good. Telling lies is not good for you it's a bad habbit for you and, once you lie a couple times you will countinue to lie over and, over. Whatever it's about lying is never the answer to solve problems it makes it worse. You loose trust, you don't get anything out of it, and you just seem like a bad person by lying. For example, say you stole something and it was your friends toy. You decided to take him when he left it there and, he asks you ""Have you seen my toy"", The best option is to give it back or tell him that you have it don't lie and take it. It doesn't matter how badly you want it it's not yours. The boy's mother bought him that and it wouldn't be nice to just take it from him. The boy would feels sad and, the mother would not like that too and, you wouldn't feel good after because lying hurts. Telling the truth is always the right choice to do in any occasion.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
1594F1B5DED6,I remember when i was in my country my uncle have a little store and he was trying to grow but he try for much time but he see that his store looks sad poor so he close the store and was asking for help and just like 5 or 4 people help him and at the pass of the year we see him building a good house he grow inmediatly and people get surprised by him because a lot of people din't not beleave of him so people get mad of him because only because he grow and people don't want to other grow. the wheter is that you will never grow. i am agree that you can grow with what you have already my firs reason is that people can grow working hard like my uncle did because my uncle did work hard and that store is there because him. my second reason is work together look there are many games in this world but some of them dont like to work together so is a game called Pug mobile and the other game is Residential of evil and those game work together and they are getting good thing and that how every one need to do to grow my third reason is to be easy going to to be sad because you dont have nothing that how the biggest company start with nothing so that how people have to thing to be ungry to dream and if you take that seriously you will be someone in this life so work hard and never give up whem you fall stand up is no matter how many time you fall that inportant thing is to never give up some people may say look at that person he or she is crasy if that dont work just keep trying and you will see you grow.                                                                                                    ,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
68392F53B9D7,"I disagree with the saying ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best'' because not everyone always learns from their mistakes,the problem may have already affected them,the way to be successful in life is to hardly have any mistakes.

I disagree with the saying ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"" because not everyone learns from there mistakes. some people cannot remember if they had a mistake a long time ago and that mistake comes up again, for example, my brother had failed his drivers test and when he took it again he failed again. Furthermore, when your nervous and you had a problem, Some people get trauma and they think of that problem and they are afraid of doing it again, For example, I missed a tackle at football once and I was scared of doing it again, so when I had the chance of doing it again I thought about if i would miss it like last time.

I disagree with the saying ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"" because the problem may have had already affected them so they would not be able to change it. some people may have made a really big mistake so they would not be able to be the best if they have had that chance. For example, somebody on the news had the death penalty for murder so they would not be able to change that. Furthermore, people have had the opportunity to get something great but they chose not to, they cannot go back and change that. for example my sister got this award but she refused to take it so she cant go back.

I disagree with the saying ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best'' because the way to be successful in life is to hardly have any mistakes. A lot of people had had many mistakes in their life and failed to achieve their goal, for example, my cousin wanted to be a lawyer but then had a lot of problems with what she was doing so she quit law school. when people have a lot of mistakes they tend to get more mistakes and then they end up trying to figure out how to deal with all them. for example, I was taking a test and I tried to figure out some of the questions at once but then I ended up mixing all of them up.

In conclusion,I disagree with the quote ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"" because not everybody can acknowledge what do do after they have made a mistake, the problem may have already have had a negative impact on them already, And the way to be great is to rarely have any mistakes",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
FF76D397A73C,"Not all the types of success have to be kind of hard to reach...sometime you just have to give a look in what are you good in one thing.

According to the Minister Wistom Churchill from Britain about the phrase tha he said

""Success consits of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiam""

is 50% percent true and 50% percent wrong.

For example a person who reached the success in hard way is the now trending disigner of the brand

""Off-White""

he said on a nterview that ""it wasn't easy to be in here that I'm now you know?"" cause when ll this started I didn't had help so i find my own help with the company/brand Nike to use some of they sneakers to make my shoes design come true, i didn't have the answer of they in one day- NO! I tried and tried to get one response until one day that they say ""Yes we're working together, you can use all of our sneaker desing to make your work"". Now the colaboration between Nike and Off-White in a trending colab now in these days.

This example is a hard way to reached the success but now we are going to see two cases of ""easy success""

Two exampe of ""Easy succes"" are the actress Natalie Portman and the Ex-Proffessional Boxer Mike Tyson,they got their success cause they are naturally borned talented.

For Example the case of Mike Tyson, he was a 12 years old fighting in the streets to gain some money for his family till one day a man saw him fighting with an older boy with him in which fight Mike won, the man saw in Tyson a potential legend in the world of the Box.

Another caseis the case of the famous actress Natalie Portman, she has been a talented actress since she was a little girl. One day a friand of her mother told to Natalie to make a try to win a paper in a Hollywood movie in which Natalie won because she was naturally born a proffessional actress, she just make her future with her talent.

In conclusion not all the success people made their success with blood, sweet, and tears, some of them just were talented or used their pros to be somebody important in this world.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
8B095EB24288,"Students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home because some students have to work, they have family, and others live far away.

First of all students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home because some have to work and they dont have time to attend to school because of their schedule.

Second reason is that students would be benefit from being able to attend to classes from home because they have family, that could be a problem for them since they could have kids and have to take care of them and being able to study from their houses it's a great a option for them.

And last reason, because others live far away. sometimes students dont have transportation because of their location or maybe they don't even have school in the area, and online classes it's an good advantage for them and good opportunity to study.

In conclusion online courses have many great opportunities and good advantage for students, and some of the reasons are: because some students have to work, they have family, and others live to far away.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
371739A95793,"We need always doing something is very important that our body is always in movement the people who are in movement have less odds to get sick because have much energy.

Always we need to doing something, the most people have a goal a day it can be in your work or in any place where you are, some people like to work all day because they like to have body moving, that is good when your body is always moving your muscles get used to holding something always, at the end of your activities the only thing you need is to relax.

A body in moving is more healthy, is less likely to get sick and that help you because if you are the person who like always doing something but if you get sick that can be hard for you because you are accustom to always doing something, the people who are always in movement sometimes are the people more old.

You need sufficient vitamin too, if you want to be always doing something remember you need vitamin too your body need a nutrient because you need a good nourishment, if your body are weak you can not strive it can be dangerous ,all you need is doing everything with precaution but is very good always doing something, your body need much movement in a day.

We are always doing something, we can never be in one place, most people are very active, there are many who are still sitting always have to be an activity, it is very good to always be doing something to help your mind to clear up a bit and created movement in you body in the same way makes you very well.

It is wonderful doing everything you want, but you need to know how dangerous it can be because everything have a limit you don't have to strive your body to make more than you can do.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
4F89EB8CB97F,"I think this is a great idea, normally a person graduated in four years, but if we graduate en three years of school it will be the best for our future, because we can take advantage, start college one year early, and finish it one year early, and it will better for any student who wants to take advantage in life. I think it will be better but this is going to be hardest because you have to study more time, and have classes in summer, and evenings but all effort has its rewards.

If two girls are in High School one of these (person A) took the programs that allow students to graduate in three years, and the other one (person B) took the traditional four years.

The person A graduated from high school in 2015 and the person B in 2016. while the person A was studying her first year in college and working, the person B is in her last year of school, obviously 2019 is the last year for person A in college and graduate from college will help her to work in something about her career.

Well what I do is if I graduated in just three years I will take advantage for work hard and take some few classes before go to college all the fourth year, and then the next year I will have a good amount of money for college, and when I going to college I keep working but less hours, I think this of allow high school students to graduated in three years is great idea. Knowing that the students only have three years in high school it will help the students to put effort in high school and to finish early high school and college. If more students are interests in this program it would be better for everyone, because you are going to graduate in three years, you are going to college, and then you are going to be a young professional. I think that if you are young and professional you will have more opportunities to have a job in everywhere.

people is going to say that the high school is going to be more difficult because you are going to have many classes in only three years, and that you will not enjoy your vaccation in summer or can not do something that you like in evenings, but how I said before all efforts has its rewards. If you finish school early and going to college after that you can enjoy or do everything.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
9ADC4A3BFDD0,"Taking classes online or video conferencing is one of the best way to help students,who can not afford to go to college and for older people that couldn't get the chance to further their education because of their financial state. Financial issues has become one of the problem in this generation of mankind, whereby students either have to pay to live on campus or out of campus to further their education,which has caused a lot of students out of school dorms because, they struggle to pay for them. Most students have daily jobs to help them afford to pay the bills, based on their level of education. Working and schooling is a difficult task on students because, one have to make time for school and work to be able to make everything easier and stress free.

Transportation and parking space has also been an issue for some reason, why some students prefer to take online classes from home to prevent them from being late to class. Colleges with large mass of land may not have enough parking space for students and we also believe that, not every student own a car or any type of moving vehicle where by one needs to park. when one is being able to attend classes from home, they get the chance to begin their lesson anytime during day after a long stressful day.

Students benefit from being able to attend classes online from home because, they accomplish more and get worked done faster in due time. With less distractions, they understand and enjoy the lesson, it helps them concentrate and more focus on what is being taught to them. They get to ask questions online, they also get more time to go over the lesson again to the right state of understanding the lesson. Lecturers reduce a lot on online students with less work and projects for them to have be ready for other assignments being given to them.

Taking classes online or video conferencing gives one enough to take care of other things, to be on time for lectures, help other students that couldnt go to college to feel they also have the right to achieve their goal once in a life time and to help others without transportion save money and more organised and time managment.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
F1270F8362F8,"""Hip hip hooray!"". ""Thats a talented kid!"". The whole school cheering for you after you made the winning shot for your school to win the whole basketball game. Imagine the enormous crowd enjoying your performance. One talent I have is using math everyday. Some people do not use math as much as I do. I use it when I go to the store,at school,and at home. Math is one of the things I use everyday.

I use math when I am at the store because I have to calculate my money and how much I will be using. I develop this skill from school because I have use math is most my whole school career. Some individuals might think my talent is unusual,but I think that my talent is helpful in the real world. I would rather spend my life as a math expert than just staying at home and doing nothing. I want to succeed right now ,so I can become a well-educated and successful adult.

In addition,another place I use math is at school. This is the place where I developed this skill. Teachers have an excellent job making me the person I am today. For instance, I am doing my project and need to get the dynamics right I use make to help me with the project. I would like to became a math teacher at my school. Math is all around us

, but you just don't notice it.

Moreover, the last place I use math in is at my house. I use it in dividing my chores with my siblings and I use in the kitchen when I am measuring ingredients. I also use it when I do my homework. It helps me when I am playing basketball because you need an arch to make the ball straight in. It helps when I am older because I would already know how do math and know how to use in the real world.

In retrocept, there a variety of talents ,but my talent is using math everyday at home,at school,and at the store.

I use math almost everyday of my life. Math has been a huge part of my life.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
3E750EB9F5C5,"I disagree beacuase anyone can change there impression anytime. If you don't like someone and your talking to them your impression won't be the same, as your impression to your family.

some people disagree because anyone can change there impression anytime. Like when have you seen someone impression the same when they gift them a toy then when they give them a book. Some people will agree that impressions dont change but you can fake your impression anytime.

other people will agree because some people can show the same impression anytime. there wrong because no one cant have the same impression everyday. Some people fake a smile every day and when they get home there down and crying a lot. other people that agree that people can have the same impressionthey gotta look at it from another point of view.

disagree beacuase anyone can change there impression anytime. If you don't like someone and your talking to them your impression won't be the same, as your impression to your family. other people will agree because some people can show the same impression anytime. there wrong because no one cant have the same impression everyday. Some people fake a smile every day and when they get home there down and crying a lot. i think no one have a good impression everyday            ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
9C1A3F53B869,"Do you think that should be students finish high school in three years, enter college and get a job early? Some students, parents and teachers are agree with that the students finish the high school fast. I think the students should be finish high school in three years because, they will can graduate of the university more early, they will get a job fast and probably they will can do you're life better, to age early and be independents.

In this paper, I will argument that in my country El Salvador; The High school is of three years. My old sister was graduated of the high school at you're seventeen years old. she enter to the university and now she will graduate of nurse at you're twenty-one years old, however, I feel that is better that the high school should be of three years because, I'm in the high school and I will graduate at my nineteen years old. I think that, I will late to graduate for the university, more if I take a profession of eight years to studies.

In my school, the students, parents and teachers voted, to know how many are agree with that high school should be of three years. The 70% of the votes was the answers that yes, they are agree that the high school was three years. Some teachers says that, is a better way that the students will can have opportunity to graduate more fast, since that some students don't pass the class or the scholar years. They have the reason because, my brother don't pass the scholar years, now he need to repeat again the grade nine. He will take five years in the high school not four.

My mom was graduated too at you're seventeen years old in high school. When she was twenty-five years old, she graduated of doctor and then she got a good job in the hospital. In the same time she went to night school because, she want to be too heart's specialist and she was graduated again when she had 30 years and now she have two good job, have better life. I think that she can graduate early, because she only got three years en high school.

Three years in high school is better way to that the students can graduate early. Some school districts are disagree with that but, they are wrong because, the students will can have more fast a good job, if they going three years at high school. In the future I hope that the high schools will be of three years not four. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
7600F1C7D884,"Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I personally don't think students would benefit learning from home because you can learn better by being taught face to face, being able to know the ideas of you're classmates, and from being around people who already know enough to help you out. Being homeschooled would be much less stressful than from actually going to school, but if you really want to learn and be a scholar, I think you'd have a better chance going to school rather than learning from home because at home you can get distracted easily.

Being taught face to face is so much easier becasue you can ask as many questions as you need to help you with your problem. also, I think your brain focuses more when you're being taught face to face than from learning through a computer. For me it's so much easier to learn when being taught in person, because I concentrate more on the words the teacher is saying and when its through a computer I get distracted easily because there's no one around to tell me that I can't get up or go to the restroom. I remember this one time in math class I had an assignment I had to do and it was online, I could never understand it until I asked my teacher, personally, after that all the problems that we're similar to that one probelm I couldn't figure out, I did them in seconds and I think thats because I was being taught face to face.

When your in school you're never alone in a classroom because there's always other classmates and when you're homeschooled and it's just you by yourself. I feel like being in a classroom full of other people is better than being at home and learning on your own. Having people around you while your in class isn't always as bad, I know some people get distracted easily and not concentrate while being around others, but sometimes it's good to be around other people because you never know whose around and you don't know if the answer of one those people in your class can help you in any away. Me, personally, I enjoy working with others or even just having people around me, I feel less lonely like that and well I don't really get distracted as easily because I can talk to people and and at the same time concentrate on the work i'm doing, but that's just me i don't know how others are.

Thirdly, going to school is actually fun, you meet new people and you don't have to be locked up in your house the whole day. In middle school I remember that I wouldn't talk to no one that worked at the school because I didn't trust them, until this day I still don't trust them but it wouldn't hurt you to be around them and ask questions about something you need. Having people around you who already have been through everything were going through is very helpful because they know the steps to help you feel better since they've already been through it. Plus, you get more opportunities at school than learning from home, and that's because school can help you achieve you're goal and you're career, maybe not always but they can most definitely give you advice on what you can do to achieve you're goal.

In conclusion, I think you'd learn from home too, but you can learn more from school. This is to the people who homeschool their kids, wouldn't you rather have your kid at school where his safe, getting fed, getting his education, more opportunities on becoming someone in this world, and meeting new people in his life? or would you rather have him at home where his lonely and getting distracted easily? and it doesn't matter wether they're the ones who want to be homeschooled because you're the parent and your in control not them. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
E52BD4FC3FF0,"Have you ever done a enjoyable educational activity. It is fun because you can play instrument, make a science fair project, or act in a play.

The reason why playing a insturment is fun you can play instruments such as play the tuba,clarinet,trumpet and many more you can also preform at a concert in school or out of school those are all the reasons I think playing a istrument is a enjoyable educational activity.

Next, are the reasons why completing a science fair project is also, a educational activity you cn do many projects like figure how long it takes until a apple rotts, or even see how far your paper aiplane will fly those are all the reasons why doing a science fair projectis a enjoyable educational activity.

Third, why I think acting in a play is a enjoyable educational activity. One of the reasons why i think this is because you can wear a costume, preform on stage and, also read plays from william shakespeare.

Those are all the reasons why educational activity's are enjoyable.        ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
F98F9BA65DFB,"89% Percent of the students at Generic_School disagree that the school board should't add an extra one and a half hours to school each day because most of the students have after school jobs and some of them have to watch their siblings and do homework. This Is why the school board shouldn't add more extra time for the student's to stay at school.

Students disagree that the school board should not add extra time to school each day because students Parents have job so they have to watch their siblings for this parents to work and so that they have money to buy food and clothing, pay bills, students like's to watch their siblings because its fun playing with them, watching you're siblings Is a lot of responsibilities because you have to watch them so they dont get hurt, you also have to feed them so they're not starving, and you need to change their cloths so they're not dirty, cleaning the house Is fun while yo're siblings are sleeping because there will be no destruction. You're parents dont have to worry about cleaning the house after they get home.

Being In high school sucks because there's so much stuff that you have to do like home works but projects are tough, home work Is fine but Its too much of works, but you have to do you're home work to keep youre grades up and so that It dont go down, projects are tough so you might want to ask you're friends for some help, youre gonna want to do your projects because If dont you're grades will go down, Studying with you're friends are fun because you're getting to know them more and you can all hang out, passing highs school is the best part because you're parents will be proud of you.

Having a job is cool because you can have you're own money and you don't have to ask your parent's to give you money because you want to buy something, having a job sucks and good at the same time because you're making money from It but you have to go to work after school when you're tired and sleepy, having a job Is nice because you're parent's dont have to give you allowance, having you're friends at the same job as you is fun because you can go to work at the same time.

This Is the reasons why the student sat Generic_School disagree that the school board should not add an extra hour for the students to stay at the school because some most of them have a work to go to and some of them have to get home soon because they're parents have works and nobody will watch their siblings.                     ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
4C1C3000E7C6,"Computers in School technology in this years are helpful in the school to have more assessments and are many software to learn how to make presentation or projects.

Microsoft office we can learn word to make letters or power point to make presentations for business.

we can research,

i can find information for my projects or histories in Internet has many information typing we can use typing for accuracy we can typing fast end learn new words to make more easy for make projects and save more time .

devises can help the nature,

cannot need to cat more trees for peppers trees help our environment, we can planting more trees in parks to make more panoramic for every body can enjoyable,also we can take our computer or devise to the park to do the home work.

in conclusion computers help me to do many things projects take notes learn software rear books taping better. susesful and help me in my business.",2.5,1.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
3FD4C280E4EF,"Summer

Prompt

Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information easily when they return in the fall. I think summer should not change because it would have a negative impact on students; such as, not enjoy summer time.

Some people argue that there should be a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. Some student said that break during school year sounds good; however, they would enjoy better summer time because of the weather. In personals experiences, I enjoyed summer break better then winter break because in summer I was available to play outside; in the other hand, during winter break I wasn't available to play outside because the weather was too cold.

Student also think that they enjoy summer break better because they don't have the pressure of homework, and after school activities. I think summer break is long enough for those who need extra help, so they can attend to summer school. I enjoy summer break because it is also the part of the year where days are longer enough to expend time with friends. I also enjoy summer break because it is the only par of the year where I can spent time fishing, which is what I enjoy the most.

I think having certain of breaks during school year will make difficult for student to concentrate. Think you don't understand a topic in algebra; you get some help, and finally you start to understand it, but you realize that fall break is next week, and it will interrupt with your learning. I think thats a consequence of having certain of breaks during school year.

There should not be a short summer break because it is the only time people spend the most time with their family. I think that's the most important think of summer; spend time with the family. It is also the part of the year that people get off their stress. People is adapted with the school program and they will not like the idea of having it change. I think the society is adapted with the system that we have currently.                    ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
5AAD796F4D6B,"Why having a good attitude tours someone can have good causes. Having a good attitude tours someone you just meet, can bring good actions like a great friendship or relationship, a reason for a person that wants to hang out with you is because that person thinks your great person and they would like to spend more time with you because you give them a good impression to them and they think your a great person.

For example, lets say your mate wants you to meet his or her parents, so to give them a good impression you would have to, have a good attitude tours everything they say in order to give a good impression to them. another example can be work, having a good attitude at work can be a lot less stressful and more positive in your life and others coworkers because your not complaining of how difficult your day was, they have it difficult too, but maybe not having so much stress in your mind or complaining how life is treats you, you can even hang out with your friends or your coworkers time to time and make new friends or people like you even little more because at the end of the day everything would still be the same so be more positive. So having a good attitude tours your friends, family or coworkers can lead to positive outcomes.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
C693AA305835,"Should some high school districts allow high school to graduate in 3 year instead the traditional 4 years?

yes, i think high school district should allow students to graduate in years. high school students should graduate in 3 years because most students have all there credits,they can go to college earlier, also you would have another year to explore new things.

Most student have all there credit by the 3 ears of high school so which mean i think they should be able to graduate in 3 years instead of 4 years because they would be wasting another year in high school and they would have been able to go to college and so they can can already be studying what they want to become in the future.

Student who graduate earlier they can start going to college earlier it can be benefictional for you and people should take advantage of it and they would get college done faster and you would be almost be set on their career and moving on making money because every one want to go to college and e

Third reason is why school should allow students to graduate 3 years instead of 4 years because students would have a year to explore and try new thing maybe find a little better part time job save some maybe even rent a basement or something

In conclusion high school students should graduate in 3years not 4 years of high school.

Some say by graduating early you would not be getting the full experience of the four year high school but there are benefits when you graduate earlier. In the future i think school students should only have to go to high for only 3 years.              ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
BA9DA5122C58,"I think that we should have after school homework clubs in school because it can really help kids get homework done at the right time so they don't get a zero on their homework.

There is kids that get too much homework so homework club would be a good time for them to get their work done so fast that they don't need to worry about it when they get home. Some kids might struggle in one class because they have a lot of assignments that they need to make up. Homework club will give students plenty of time to get missing work done, and they should move the grade up to an A or B. You could also get homework from a bunch of different classes, and homework club will give them enough time to get the easy assignments done, so that they can focus on getting a hard assignment done, and that would leave the students with one assignment left to do.

Homework club can be seen as a way to spend your time wisely when it comes to getting homework done. It reduces the stress of getting too much homework because students will realize how much time that they have to get their work done so they can focus on the activities that they do in or outside of school.

For example, someone might have soccer practice at 5:30, and homework club might be from 2:30 to 4:50. That would give a student enough time to get a lot of work done before soccer practice. It's better to finish homework early because you would not need to worry about it for the rest of the week.

Sometimes kids need assistance from teachers because they are struggling to understand the subject, and they may need a teacher's help. The could stay at homework club so students can work with the teacher to get the work done. A student might leave an assignment at the last minute because they had other assignments to do. If homework club will give a student two hours in a half to do their assignment, they should be able to get their work done just in time. Homework club can give relief to a student when they have left an assignment at the last minute.

I believe that if a lot of kids went to homework club, then all students will be successful.

That would mean that kids will get As and Bs from now on, and they would not need to stress about their grades. It just takes students to use their time wisely at homework club to get homework done,

and no one will have any problems. ",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
BD889A4D831B,"Students have to attend school to learn more efficiently, but long distance learning is not good because you have to take your own notes online ,however, if you were to attend school on regular time, you would not have to worry about taking your own notes. Although, online is still a option because you just need a computer or a laptop to take online classes, and not having to worry about missing the class when the teacher took notes that day. All you have to do for online school or video conferencing is get online and do all your classes, and not worry about getting to school. Students need to go to school instead of online or video conferences to learn more and participate in class or school.

Going to school than taking online classes or video conference is way better because you go to school and actually pay attention and not get distracted of what is around you in school ,however, taking online classes can get you easily distracted when you're at home or a public place trying to do you work and you hear people talking and having conversations all around you. While you're in school you can peacefully finish all your work in class and ask for a question, or even help from the teacher, but if you're taking online classes your only source is most likely going to be a online source, or the guides they give you online which might not be always correct. The information online could be outdated. while the information at school is planned out and ready to be given out by the teacher or staff at school. Even though, everyone would prefer online classes over actually going to school, people should consider going to school for a backup just in case the people taking online classes don't like how it is done. Going to school and learning just for being in class helps you in a lot of ways such as visually, speaking, and self control, however, if you're at home taking online classes it will only help on your visual learning.

Taking online classes can probably be difficult sometimes, because people can forget to take the class the day you need to log in ,however, going to school and knowing which days to go to school is very helpful because you can learn without any problems happening. Although taking classes online and not having to go anywhere and stay where you are is good, you're putting your grades at risk, the computer can malfunction or even be corrupted with a virus on it, and it can slow down your computer or even shut it off every time you need to do your work. This is why going to school is more efficient. The people that go to school have no worries just bring all the materials they need for class and work and pay attention. Also students can have more time to work and can be actively speaking with our teachers too, for questinos and answers to help students. Students need to go to school instead of online or video conferences to learn more and participate in class or school.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
DD00E48BC258,"Honestly, I do not agree about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. The pursuit of success in life is achieving it in many ways.. Therefore, you can push yourself to be successful by putting in effort.. Failure can lead to serious conflict because then you will not be able to succeed. The important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success is not agreeable because you can overcome obstacles, aiming the goal to success, and to achieve the plan to .success.

First reason, is to overcome the obstacles, for that you must have to work hard. Also, it takes practice the better you get to succeed. Do not give up on something you are overcoming in life. One of the biggest problems that people have in life is not overcoming what they are afraid of and from being afraid will not get you to succeed. Most of all to overcome the obstacles. is to try them not to give up on them.

Second reason, putting a great effort can lead to improving. Efficiently the work you do can increase a great impact towards your achievements. In order to achieve a method, working pays off and by earning it. For example, people push themselves to making progress. Others might work hard in different ways to be successful and to aim what they want. Eventually, when making progress towards something, can influence the goal your improving.

Third reason, to plan the success is to try achieving what your aiming for. In other words, enthusiasm can be those people that want to be successful in life. Pursuit also aims for the goal your trying to influence. When planning goals, is the most valuable thing to achieve. There must always be a plan towards the target you aim. Majority of the people, look for something easy they can achieve in their future goal and that is how they succeed.

Finally, the key to being successful in life is by achieving it. To be honest, I do not agree about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of improving. Many people find success by putting in effort and time towards big things. It is not to late to start pushing yourself to be successful and being something in life. Therefore, is it not an important role that failure plays in pursuit of success, and to achieve the plan to succeed ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.5
3F908BB271AA,"Nothing comes throught untill you work for it!

I feel comfortable or confident about this quote because once you already mastered something you keep feelling as if you are still missing something or maybe you think what you already have is not enougth so, you decide to start working on a different thing or proyect just to keep making grow what you have.

In this life nothing comes easy, you have to work harder to build something or what you have in mind, once you build what you got in your mind you still probbably not going to stop trying to build more than what you already have, because you already tasted hows it feel having much, so you keep going and build more and more only because you don't feel that what you got is enougth or you liked how is feel having much.

""Dreams never come throught, untill you make them happen."" That can also describe or talk a little bit, about the quote of Ralph, because when you have a dream and that dream get into the reallity you are going to think like Ralph, you going to feel that is not enought for you and you are going to start trying to do something else to make grow what you got, sometimes this can be taken as a selfishness because you want more than you have but, if someone doesn't feel goog with what they have they can keep working to make it grow.

In my oppinion I am agree with the thoughts of Ralps because if I have something and if exist other way to make grow what I have, I would definitelly going to work for it so I can make it happen; hard workers always receive their rewards in the futere.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
E2E99090C7D5,"Should students be required to take a class in the arts, or should such classes be electives?

everybody knows that, that kind of classes could be funny, but what happen with those guys that does not feel interest with the class? it is a wasted of time, we could use that time in another class, where they feel comfortable, where they feel interest about the class, you can not be good in something if it does not like you, the classes must improve our skills, that's the reason why I believe that classes should be electives; on that way, I have the option, tp select my class, for example: art, music, chorus, drama, etc.

Why?

Simple, not everybody has the same capacity, as somebody said ""we can not judge a fish by his ability to claim a tree"", we must motive the student to take the class that he/she wants and they will give their best.

thanks for the attention, in addition, I hope that the principal could take a smart choice and leave the classes electives.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
833F25175AFC,"Dear principal

my name is STUDENT_NAME and I don't agree with the new school sports policy. My opinion about the school policy that no one should be left behind that every one should have a chances to participate in the sport that they want to play. Am an example because I cant play sports because of my grades I love to play volleyball butt i cant participate i fell left out. When I see the other girls with there uniform am I just look away that just makes me fell like dam I should be on the team. I know that there is more kids out there that want to participate and fell the same why I do.

Some kids

that I know are in gangs because of that reason. Ether just because of that resounds that they cant participate.T            ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
6FDAD6124B9E,"Ever since you were little, have you ever noticed that your really good at something as you grew over time? Everyone has a talent or a skill that are common or very unique. I have gained a talent over years and I just realized not to long ago. My number one talent I have it dancing hip-hop because I took classes for 9 years and I got inspired by the artist I mostly love.

My number one talent is hip-hop. Hip-hop's really been a big part of my dancing life over years. I took classes at a place and just remembered having so much fun and learning new dance moves. Since I started taking classes of hip-hop and learning new things, I thought that this might be the number one thing I might actually be good at. I have once broken my ankle by learning a new dance move. The bone was out of place and the bone was a bit cracked. At that moment I was just thinking about the pain but once I got home and was able to rest, I just had the fear of not being able to dance and it made my heart shatter into 7. After a 8 or 9 weeks I felt better and was able to dance again. I had to be careful and not hurt myself again. when I first got there I was not a good dancer like most of them. Once I was there for almost a year I learned a lot because they would tell me little secrets of their's. I got better ever since and now I teach my closest friend how to dance. I took dance class for 9 years and it helped me a lot with my dancing skills.

I got inspired by the artist I love the most. Ever since 2012 December 22 I found a group of boys that were new. I watched their video's and I was in love with them. They debuted in 2013 June 13 with their first song called ""No More Dream"". They were called BTS. There are a seven member group, there stage names are RM, Jin, Suga, J-hope, Jimin, V, and Jungkook. They are a band from South Korea. Their fan's are called ARMY. As years passed by and they became the biggest boy band in the whole universe and galaxy! I was inspired by their music but also their dancing, which got me more into dancing. I learned all their dance moves from their music video's to their stage performances. They also inspired me to dance more because ever since I was little I liked dancing and over the years I got better, they kept telling me to keep going which I did and that's when I made up my mind. I was now planning to become a back up dancer for them when they went on tour. I was planning to already become a dancer so I practiced more. When I became 13 I was able to dance and more like some one was controlling me with strings, like I was a puppet.

Now that I am 14 I decided to teach others who wanted to learn how to dance. It's been 9 years of dancing so why not. After learning to dance hip-hop I felt like an animal that's been let back in the wild. Dancing is a big part of life if you love it and enjoy it. BTS has taught people many things but the one line they said about dancing is ""There are 2 deaths in life. The first one is when you lose the passion of music and dance and the second one is death. The first death though is more painful."" Those are not the exact but very close to the meaning. My number one talent is dancing hip-hop because I took classes for 9 years and I got inspired but the artiest I love the most. What's the one talent that you have, do you actually want to become better or move on.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
BE3784039C72,"Small acts of kindness has an impact because it can help you out, they can believe in you, and you guys can play sports with each other.

It can help you out on your education and other things. For example, you went outside and saw an old man on a sidewalk and you helped him walk across the road thats means you are showing him respect. I has a day where I saw a homeless man at a store and I had to give him $5 dollars because he was a nice man, plus he gave me respect. After that day I went to the store to see if he was still there, since he was so generous . When I was him I was shocked that what was he wearing. He has like a $10 dollar cloths on and he told me how to get an education from his buddy that is rich.

They can believe in you what you say. For example, you gave your mom respect and honor her a prize for being a careful mom, she will believe in you that you can do the SOL test excellently. People believe in you when you dont lie a lot. I lied to my dad once and he still believed me buy when I lie twice and he figures it out, I'll get an punishment. Some people doesn't care because they don't understand what are they talking about like sports or something.

You guys can play sports with each other. For example, there was 2 people in a park and they saw each other and both of there favorite color is blue and they became best friends and played sports that they each liked. I has a friend when I didn't know before also he was very athletic, he was the same kind as me but i'm not really a athletic person. I talked to him and said hi, ""he said"" hi back so normally. I told him can I play and he said sure and after that we became good friends.

It can help you out, they can believe in you, and you guys can play sports with each other so thats why small acts of kindness has an impact.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
F40D707EC722,"We all have our own goals that we would like to accomplish in the future. Perhaps you still want the same thing as when you were a kid, maybe the technology has changed your plans. I personally want my dream to go to college accomplished by the future, get a career, high education, be the first one in my family that has gone to college.

First of all going to college can help me get the career I want which is game designing. game designing is a career I have wanted to get since I turned twelve years old when I first started playing minecraft. Minecfrat is an awesome game where you can build really cool things that come out of your mind, yo may create a whole new entire world in there. When I turned twelve I always wonder how did they make games go so real so I started reading articles, books, etc. then I stared playing more games and it was incredible. I want to go to college and be able to make my own games because I know people would love playing them. I want to make my own gaming company and kids going around talking about my games. but the only way I can actually do that is by having a college career.

My second reason why I want to go to college is because the majority of people in the United States just drop out of high school. People who dropped out of high school have a really low education degree. I personally want people to think I am smart just by looking at my education record. If u completed your goal in college, if you graduate, people would offer really good jobs to you with a high salary only because your education is high and you know what your doing because they've taught you that in college.

Last but not least I want to be the first one in my family that has actually gone, completed, and graduate out of college. My family is not poor nor is rich we are in the middle class, which I understand why some of my family could not actually afford to go to college. but some people in my family had has the opportunity and they just din't wanted to go because they wanted to live the life, was they're excuse but living the life is not working at a pizza place or McDonald's. I want to demonstrate to all my family, who actually had the opportunity of going to college and din't, that the way they think living the life is wrong. I want them to see that even going to college you can still live the life and probably even better when you have actually graduate. I want for my two little brothers to see, to be proud of their sister and be a good role model for them, so they can follow my steps and get a good live.

We all have our goals that we would like to accomplished in the future. maybe when you grow up you are just going to change plans and do something more important. I want to go to college so I can get a career, I want to go to college so i have a high education degree, I want to go to college to be a good role model to my little brothers and kids in general. going to college is just a really important thing in your live that some people dont get the opportunity to do and some do.",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
CA10EA3EB6FD,"A problem Is a chance for you to do your best.

Did you know that problems are a chance for you to do your best.

Problems builds up strength on you. They also show you to not repeat the past. Hard times like problems help you to keep your head up and never give up on a hard war.

A problem is a chance for you to do your best. My problems opened up so many chances for me to do my best in life. Problems will always have a chance for you, so you can do better in your life. Never lose that one chance in life. Those chances will not come back and you will regret not taking the chances. I took a chance to live with my mom and now I am happy with her.

Hard problems make you build up strength on yourself. When my father abandoned me and my sisters, it build up strength on me and my sisters because, we had to learn that are father is not always going to be there when we want him to be there and we have learned that we don't need a father for everthing and we can do it by ourselfs. I can't lie I really miss him and I really wish I could give him a big hug. All that is left are the good memories I made with him. I will never forget him and will always love him beause he is my father. All the tears I have cried over him have build up strength on me and thought me to never give up and keep fighting even if it is hard for me.

Hard issues show you to not repeat the past and do better then the past. My hard problems have showed me to not repeat the past and to do better then the past because, I would always try to give up on everything and always put a negitive thinking to my problems. This has showed me when you try to give up you are showing yourselfs and others that you are weak and can't handel it. It has also showed me to never put a negitve thinking and put a positive thinking, because if you but a negitive thinking everything could come up negitive and you will always try to give up if everything comes out negitive. Always put a positve thinking and everything will come out positive and you will feel motivated to keep fighting.

Really hard problems help you keep your head up and learn to never give up on a really hard war. When my father was so mean to me I would always put my head up and not let the mean words get me down. To never give up and show him and the haters that I am stronger and better. When i cried because my mom was not with me and my father would not let me see her that showd me that my head was up all ready because I fighted to be with her. I have turned all my haters into my motivators, because I wanted to show them that I can do it . Always keep your head up high and never down because, keeping it down won't help at all.

A problem is a chance for you to do your best. They are also helpful for you in your life because, they make you strong, so when you have an other problem it won't hurt you as much. Never give up of your problems, whatever problem you or your familly are going through never give up, because if you give up you won't be able to go to the past and change up everything that you gave up on. All those hater will always want to see you crying,mad, and sad and they also want you to feel like a big losser, all those haters turn them into your motivators, don't let them put you down. Stay strong and never forget that you are better, and stronger then that problem. Never feel bad that you showed the haters that you can do it. Always have a smile on you face, my mother told me ''even if you are upset always have a smile because, you have to smile to the hard world you are in."" That's why I agree that a problem is a chance for you to do your best.        ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
EC64EE12DBB4,"McDonald is one of the most fast foods, and people who work their get paid a small amount of money, so if students can come, and visit this place maybe students will see how people without a education or not doing nothing at school will end up and a job like this, so i would choose a job that don''t get paid that much to show students what happen when you don't do your work at school or pay attention.

Students might change their minds of playing around in school from visiting this type of job students will see people working hard and fast every single day and getting paid a small amount so students would not want to be working at a place like that in there future so it could pursue them to start putting more effort in school and not to play around in class, and have a successful job.

Some parents don't have money to put their child in school Furthermore there are going to have to work at a hard working job but students don't have to because you have a chance and you got your education so it might teach students to take this advantage to have a success job and not to play around on the other hand teens that don't get their education will work at a place that pay a small amount.

If students don't take their education serious your parents paid the money for your education and if you just don't pay attention and not try the money your parents paid will be a waste because you didn't learn anything cause you goof of and you won't be able to have a successful job so visiting this job will change students thought pf whether they should play around or not so if you take your education serious you can have a job that pays you a lot of money and be successful in life but not doing anything in school won't get you anywhere.

I would right a letter to McDonald because i want students to see what happen when you just play around in school or your parents don't have money for your education because the employees at McDonald work hard but they get paid a little bit but if you take your education serious you can have a successfull job in life so this might change students mind of whether they should pay attention or not and students will take this as a chance so they won't end up a type of job like this.        ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
1F3620A2965E,"Enjoyable Activities

Schools provide a variety of educational activity such as, Art. Art can be enjoyable because, there is always something to do, endless creativity, and it can also help you socialize. In Art you can build and create anything your mind thinks also it helps you express your creativity so you can figure out how to find yourself. Express your feelings by making drawings, paintings, and even sculpting will help you express your feelings in Art.

If you have trouble making friends at school don't worry, in Art you can meet people that share the same likes as you. Art helps you socialize, you can ask people for help on a specific topic and they can teach you what you never knew about. In Art you can meets people with different likes, even though they have a different way that they think of Art, Everything is still related.

In Art you can make drawings, paintings, sculpting and many more, Art is created every time you use your creativity and mind. You can express your creativity by creating Art, you can let all your emotions fill in just one drawing, painting, or others. In Art, creativity is most important and it is needed to create masterpieces, You can also express your skills of a specific topic or you can learn more and many other ways of Art.

When you think about Art you probably think of drawing or painting, right? Thats not all to Art, there is an endless amount of ideas you can do in Art. The ideas range from how creative you are, in Art you can make anything, some examples are: sculpting, ceramics, and paper mach'e models, Etc... You can learn how to make other kinds of art that you have never heard of. You can always learn new things in Art.

In conclusion, Art is an enjoyable activity because, it lets you express your inner self, the creativity that is hiding this whole time. Art includes letting your creativity flow, never ending ideas to do, and helps you socialize. I recommend this to students of any school, to see if they have an interest in Art or if they find it enjoyable. Reflecting this on myself, I personally enjoy Art a lot, I have made multiple friends this way and tried out the different types of Art, This is why I recommend this to any student to see if they have the same experience or same interest as I do.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
6BEE2EEEDD39,"What do you think is a enjoable way to spend outside. A fun way to be outside is ? An fun way to be outside is t play around in nature and explore it. Havea great and fun with your friends and play games with them. To have enjoyable time with your parentsFirst if you want to go outside you can exlpore near your house to see is cool or nice that you have discovered. Playing outside with friends give some fresh air if you stay inside, and by given you fresh air you may think of new games to play. Just going outside with the fresh air and draw would be fun for some people or play around with your dog. For instance going outside and just playing with friends can you a chance to meet new people and ask them to play with you and your friends. Playing with your friends give you a chance to play games and a chance to meet their friends. in adition you should also spend time with your parent well they have time to because some parents could have to work all day, and with that you should play games with them outside like soccer or basketball. Going outside with your parents and go a to cammunity parks,water parks or just any park to have an enjoyable time. In summary enjoy time with friends, family, and just go outside t just have fun.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
2175BC2F7C2C,"There are a lot of benefits of having a good attiude. The benefits of having a good attidue are in many ways. For example you can help someone, Be kind, and be respectful to the people around you. You should also carry that good attitude everywhere you go, even during diffcult times. Having a good attiude not just tells you or others to be good, but it also makes you a have a good, long, and a healthy life period.

A lot of amazing people like Martin Luther King Jr, Mahatma Gandhi, and Nelson Mandela have credit their successes because of having a good attiude during good and difficult times in their life. For all three of these amazing freedom fighters we had seen these years, came from diffciult times in their life often struggled during their early life. But they still had good thoughts, good plans, and good ideas all the time. They always thinked positive and kept moving forward in their life. But there are also some ways that people can't get good thoughts and it can affect them a lot and upsets their mood.

When having a good attiude has also proven to be good even in Science. Science says that when you have a good attiude, you feel more active and more energetic and you can achive a lot of stuff with a good attidue. You keep carrying it out and it helps you gain trust and motivation that you are up and ready for any task, that is out there for you to do. It can aslo can make you responsible in life and a trustworthy person that people think of you. But have you aslo wondered that a good attiude also means a balanced and healthy diet? You should also make better choices when you are in a good mood. If you don't make proper chocies in life it can affect your mood and your behaviour. The best thing to do is be to have the best good attiude is that you could take all the bad stuff in your head that you have exprienced and put a lot of trust in yourself.

Having a good attiude is the best and correct choice to always and forever be happy in life. It also brings a lot of joy. Even if you can't get good thoughts, you can always ask for help and guidance from people that can help you with diffcult times and give you the best advice, to make you positive and make sure you feel happy, safe and confident to make you achive a lot of things in the future with a good attiude.     ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
9DCB91B1F18D,"I think that students should take a art, muisc, and drama class. Cause by taking these classes they can learn more about what happens ineach classes. Also, if they do one of those classes they can recive credits on their GPA.

First reasoon, student can learn what happens in that class like art. Art is a great elective class because tehy can have more credits and they can learn more interesting things in that class. Also, art can do things for the student because while time pass and they are great in drawing it could take him or her to collage it could make better digree collage. For example, if you also can be in a art contest in your school or anywhere else.

Secondly, students can do these classes. However, music is also a great elective class because it could help you like in school and anywhere else because they know how you sing. But, music is not only singing students can also play insterment like giutar, flut and many more. So, student can also impress them with insterment. Also, it helps with credits by it could take them to a different better collage.

Lastly, these classes are better to take as an elective class because they can perform in events in school like drama. Drama is a great elective class because students get to move around and have fun and dance. Also, they can do it on their free time and as their elective class. For example, students can impress their family with their amzaning talent. Also, with their talent they can go to different countriesand perform their and other places too and preform too.

In clousion, this is why students should take art, music, drama as their elective class. That ways they can get credits for doing these classes.

imrove with their talents and go around the world. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
7A89CCBBD747,"Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle"" that is mean like some time we are busy. I agree with this prompt becasause it's something posible and if we always doing something.

In my opinion we acomplish more if we are always doing something because some times we have stuff to do for example going to work after school or study after school. But some time people they don't like to do school work for the reason they think there are not smart. In my position do work it's some i like to do every day because that's how i learn more stuff. IF we have a park time after school that is something good because you are reciving money for your self and maybe you can help your parent with bills.

Some peoples think that if we don't do something in this life we ca have a vetter remposible. That is mean if we don't work or study for a vetter life them we are not going to have nothing for .Exaplem if you are

18 or more you have to look for a jod becase you are respomsible for your self because your parents there are not going to give you anything what you want you have to work and buy your own stuff. This is something posible we can do in us life.

Some may said that to do nothing is better life. they said that becsause they never think about thre future or maybe they don't want to do nothing in the life and that is not going to work. for exaple I have a lot stuff to do for gratuade from hight school i have to pass my esol and have a good great grade if i don't graduate from hight school that choise i have is to work out side. However, if a want the opportituti to do something in the future the best choie is to study effort my self and go to the college to have a better jod.

people Sometimes they're bussy in keys that is something posible in us life becuse we want to become a good person and resposible in the future that's that way we learn it is easy to do something never give up.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
6751442A85E4,"I remember when I got in trouble for making the wrong decision. In this essay, I will argue that making decisions on your own can lead to some problems and you need someone's help. People should seek for guidance before making any decisions because it prevents them from getting into trouble, can help you make the right choice, and you can be more successful in life.

Consulting with an expert can help prevent bad situations. Although, it might sound silly sharing your personal life. It can help you in many ways. For example, when you're angry and want to do something that will cost you your whole life. That's the time to express your feeling to someone else. The best way staying out of trouble is having someone guide you because you don't want to end up one day behind bars.

Making the right choices can lead to a healthier life. Meaning that, it's most likely for you to have a positive mind. I remember when I decided to break my friend's trophies. I was so mad that I wasn't thinking right. The next day I woke up and realized what I had done wasn't right. However, I decided to talk to my parents and they gave me some good advises regardless to what I had done. After that, I apologized to my friend and everything went back to normal. I felt relieved because I had so much pressure on me. Sometimes it's better to make the right choices because it releases our stress.

Having a successful life is what everyone wants. In order to be successful in life is to take advises from your parents. As a teenager, we might think we know everything but it's the complete opposite. The key to success is always get advises from an expert or even your parents, which will make you a better person in life.

Some say that, we as teenagers can make decisions on our own; but, they are wrong because not everyone can handle their own situations. Seeking for help from someone else is always a better option. In the future, I hope teenagers like me seek for help when making an important decision.                                 ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
876CDA4D152D,"Do you think that all students have the capacity to commit to a career at a young age? In this paper I will argue about how students do not have the ability to commit to a career at a young age. Students shouldn't commit to a career, because they can change their mind, they are not good at only one thing or they don't want to do anything.

A lot of people I know keep changing their mind, they are not ready to keep doing only one thing for the rest of their lives. My sister is an example: She is now almost about to finish her career but she wants to leave it because now she is interested in another thing. When she was in high school the career that she is in right now wasn't something that she wanted because she didn't like it, she does now, but she wants to do other things. For some people is not easy to stick with something, because they will keep changing their mind.

Since I was young I wanted to do a lot of things in life. I can't commit to only one career because there is so many things that I want to do and like to do, for example: When I was 6 years old I liked playing the guitar, I still like to play the guitar but it is no something I want to to as a career. At 3 years old I loved to dance, it is something that I will always like to do but that is not something that I see myself doing for the rest of my life. And when I was 10 years old I started to draw, I started by drawing animals or any cartoon character, but now I draw whatever comes to my mind, however, it is not something I want to keep doing. Since there is not only one thing I like to do I can't commit to only one thing in life and If i do commit, later in life I will probably regret doing it.

There are many students at my age that really don't want to do anything with their life or they don't have the ability do it. Some drop out of school because it is no something they are interested and probably it's something they are not good at and give up. Most of them just want to stay home and do nothing. They stay at their parents house, which is not bad, but they stay there and do not look for any job. Some look for jobs but it is not something they like, it is something that is easy and can get them money to survive.

Some say that all students can commit to a career, but they are wrong because not all students have the same mind sets as other students. At a young age not all students can do a career. In the future most of the students wont want to stick to only one career because they wouldn't only like one thing, so they should decide when they are ready and really know that the career that they are choosing will be the one that wont get tired of doing it. ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
0465517EB6B7,"First impression is an effect a feeling, a feeling that can be changed, for example ""

love

"" sometimes you can look at someone and think you can be with them forever and love them, because you have that impression that feeling,that they will never do such harm and leave you because they think problems can't get solved but once you noticed that it can, but the other person doesnt see that you can realized that is really worth it, to keep having that person that thinks problems can't be solved and always thinking negative.

At first impression you would think that bad things couldn't ever happened because you were so in loved and so attached then you see that things change. so i think is possible to change your first impression and what you really thought about that person.

It's really sad to believe or think that you were right on your first impression and then you see that it hurts when people leave you because you feel betrayed, you never had that feeling that your significant other would just quit on you and not try to work things out when that was all that matter. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
F3550CF50ABC,"Have you ever wonder how our character is formed? John Lubbock once wrote, "" Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I personally think that our character is formed by our friends, social media, and so that people can like us.

Many people believe that we choose our own character by being ourself and not caring what anyone thinks however, I think that our character is formed by our friends since were always with them. For example, if my friends are always skipping school and they ask me to skip school with them and I am going to say yes since, they are my friends. What most do us do is ,that we can not say no to our friends and by saying yes, it makes up our character because now people see us as a person who skips school.

Another reason on why our character is influenced by other people is, because of social media. Social media plays a big part on how our character is formed. For example, on social media there is a lot of models, and singers. A lot of young teens want to be like them so they will change the way the look and act. Since society has made it seem that if you don't look like Kylie Jenner or any other famous person that you're not pretty and because, of that people want to change their character.

Finally, our character is formed by who we are around is because we want people to like us. For example, if I am at school and I want to be friends with a group of girls I will do what they like and do what they do all the time so, that they can like me. Since I want them to like me I will end up changing my personality and look just so that they can like me; this makes my character be influenced by others.

I urge you to think about your character if it's formed by the way you choose or if it is formed by who you surround yourself with. We should not let people choose how they want our character to be. I personally think that our character is formed by our friends, social media, and so that people can like us.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
C623A886C6E7,"First i imagine if my school change the lunch menu i think that will be great for students, i agree to school have new lunch menu because we want to try different type of food, also i think students are bored to ate the same food every day and some time students those snt'

want to ate at school, they bring their own food because the school provide same menu every day we dont see any change for long time thats will be my reason we want to see a new lunch menu for the school.

Then after they change the menu all the student will see all the change and they start to comment about how is the menu, of course it will a percent of students they will be not agree about the food, thats why i recommend the principal will do a session for student to start to vote what kind of food they want in their menu. I recommend these for the principal to listen all the opinion are students said, when the menu change we dont got any issue or complain from student because that will affect the change of the menu because the principal take the decison in him self.

However if in case the principal convince about this i will give some examples about my opinion and what i agree to have a new lunch menu i support all my data because i want the school to change the lunch menu.

whatever happen about student reaction for the new menu the principal how to know have control in the students because that be a big deal if not be prepared or make a bad decision somehow the principal will prepared to fixed correctly and faster and improve a good resource for all student, but my opinion is to make all this happen because we need the school change and give attention all the opinion of all the students.

Finally we are welcome to have a new lunch menu, and we will enjoy the change what our school give to us, and for all.

The principal made are all students comfort in the cafeteria and give new menu all the students will be great and celebrate to have a change in their school and the principal need to do that action.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
8E64BE4119C3,"Schools offer different options of schooling, they have is Online School , Public School , Private School and also Video Conferencing . However taking classes from home wouldn't benefit students the same way Public School would benefit them due to the fact; Some students are visual learners, Students wouldn't have a big social life outside of their home , Students can slack on their own education an have no motivation and also they could be relying on Google answers when they don't understand the material.

Students have different methods to remembering a material they have learned. Everyone isnt the same, Everyone has their own different techniques; Some people may be visual learners, They need someone to be speaking to them explaining step by step and some students just like peace and quite to figure it out on their own. Personally I am a visual learner for every subject, I would need my teachers to give examples and to go over everything to me step by step to learn the material the teacher is teaching. My classmate, Generic_Name has a different opinion, Generic_Name needs a quite place to concentrate and to think about his work rather than a teacher talking the whole class period.

In Elementary , Middle school and High school they plan a lot of activities for the kids. Schools have dances, concerts and even field trips being home schooled you wouldn't be able to enjoy none of the fun activities the school would have planned for your classmates. Being home schooled you wouldn't have that "" high school experience "" everyone claims they love so much and would do anything to go back too. Being home school would also effect your social life for the real world. In school they might not have a class for communication but going to a Public schools does teach you how to speak up and communicate with other people you dont know and that would really be beneficial for the real world after school when you go into your career.

On the weekend I personally hate doing homework, I like to think of my home as a lazy environment for myself rather than another school place. I think if kids were to be home schooled they wouldn't be able to concentrate at home the whole time they are supposed to. There would be no consequences for the student as if when they aren't paying attention or just on their phones the whole time. There would be no teachers or administrators to be motivating the student to get to work, be on time or even get your'e grades up. Being home schooled and doing online school they would start getting on the wrong track after some time. If my house for me was a school environment i would procrastinate my school work so much like saying "" ill do it in 15 minutes "" "" ill do it the next 15 minutes "" and so on to the point i forgot because i have no motivation for my work.

Having no teachers or administrator around it would be easy to cheat. not understanding the material and not being able to ask questions your last resort is to cheat for answer. Students will find the answers then think they have a easy way out of online school by relying on Google answers. Students can also pay someone to be doing their work for them and manipulate other kids to agree and do the work for them. Students attending online school or homeschooling have a lot of ways to cheat for their classwork.

I disagree that home school or online school would be beneficial for students because they wouldn't be able to learn and understand everything and to being able to ask questions, Students wouldn't have a social life outside of their home and not be prepared to communicate with people outside in the real world, Students would't have any motivation for their school work and start slacking off and lastly they can find easy ways to get out of their own work and having it done without them actually doing any work.           ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
F50C9936F416,"Some schools have a program that older students pair with younger students and lets talk about how the effects can be very beneficial in the students future.

One reason this would be most beneficial is that the younger students are getting there education from someone who already knows about the basic of reading, pronouncing words the younger students just have not reach potentacil and these older students are pushing these younger kids the right way.

Another reason Having older students pair up with younger students is a very beneficial idea is that it teaches a students what skills are necessary to be a teacher just encase they want to be a teacher one day.

Third reason a younger student pairing up with an older student is beneficial is because it makes the older student feel more responsible for somebody else is learning like making sure the younger student knows this like making sure he/she knows how to pronounce words correctly make sure the younger student can be organized.

A fourth reason that proves younger kids pairing up with older kids is beneficial is that the teacher has a couple less students to deal with so less stress to deal with younger kids can be annoying to deal with sometimes.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
90EBF38FCFBA,"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is something you know, imagination is anything you want to see. When you were a kid you had imagination it was with you when you were born, knowledge you have to learn. With imagination you can believe anything, new ideas are made with imagination, imagination is fun.

You can believe anything you want with imagination. What is imagination? Its something you imagine for example an imaginary friend. Something not real but you see it no one else can see your imagination. You can make your brain think whatever you want you control it. You want to believe your touching a teddy bear, than you just imagine it and feel it. Our imagination is in our brains with us it's something you're born with something only you can see it, feel it, and only you can imagine it.

Ideas happen because of imagination you can think of new ideas for a movie or anything. Some people just have a bigger imagination then us but we all think unique. Everything we have in earth is because imagination happened. Those people think ""what do we need, what can help me."" First you gotta imagine it, then you have to believe, and finally you do it.

Imagination is fun just let it take you where ever you want. its something you're born with not something you learn. Take vantage of it.

That's why i think Imagination is more important then knowledge. You have it with you, you just need to let it shine. Just image anything. Don't be afraid to show your imagination. Just do it and keep imaging, you imagination can take you anywhere you want.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
188FE8830590,"Is it better to finish high school early? Yes, I would say finishing high school in three years is better. Why? because you can start college early, or go into the work force, and you can have the time to explore the world.

By doing this 3 year program, you can start college early. In today's society, finishing school early may be a big benefit. If I had the chance to do this program, I would take that chance. You may be looked at different but in a good way. Also, by starting college early it can be a huge advantage to your future.

Finishing school early can bring you into the work force. I would believe by finishing school early, it can be a huge benefit for looking for new jobs. Also, putting on your resume that you graduated early, the employers would look into it and see that you had to take summer and evening classes. You would look your very intelligent and responsible.

If having a year off, and don't know what to do, you can explore. If I had that year off I would use the time to see new things, things that i've never seen before. By taking the year off, you would still be on track in your schooling. In life some people don't want to go into school because it is overwhelming. Have the time to go out, if not then you'll regret not having that time to yourself.

By taking a 3 year course of high school, you can start looking into jobs, have time to explore, and you can start college early. Some say that finishing high school early, you don't get the same high school experience as others that don't do the 3 year program. But finishing high school a year early, can bring you more benefits than just doing the normal 4 years. In the future I believe that high school will only be 3 years of schooling.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
19D55405175F,"Imagination and knowledge are very inportant parts of us. Albert Eistein said,""

Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I'm on debate on whether I agree or not, so maybe this will help me decide. In my opinion, I believe that imagination and knowledge go hand and hand. There's many reasons on why I believe this, but due to the character limitation, I'm only going to name a few reasons.

One of the first reasons I believe this is because of discovery. When someone goes out on a new adventure, they can only imagine on what they can find. When they do find something new, they use their imagination to find out what it can do, what it haas inside, or what does it do for the enviroment. Once they do figure out somethinng about it, they get the knowledge from it. It's honsetly cool on how much we know because of our imagination.

Another reason on why I believe this way is because of what we created over the past years. We've created so many wonderful things and a few mistakes over the past years. When sommeone wants to invents something, they use their imagination and knowledge of the world around them to make it. If you want a job on where creativity has no boundries, then you should become either an animator or a game developer. I choose to be both, but mostly being game developer. When someone get inspired to make someone, they use the knowledge of their inspiration and their own imagination to create something wonderful or a mistake that should never been released on this world. I honestly do that too. I've takeen the knowledge from the games and animations I liked to come up with something in which I hope many people will injoy.

There's plenty more reasons that I can't really come up with but I'm sure that you get my point.

Imagination and knowledge work together to improve this world as we know it. Prime examples of this are discovery and creativity. If everyone can use these two things together, I'm sure that we'll come up with something wonderful or something that'll most likely mess up the planet forever.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
C2E3AD707EDC,"I have the idea that our school should adoptep this model that consist in extending the school day two hours. This model come from a system of some businesses have adopted to conserve energy and resources, this model can help student get more involvev in their apprenticesship and school's activities.

This idea can help stueden but it have disadvantages is well, because there will be some students that will take a lot of time to be in the habit because they were accustomed to the normal school day. Also some students have to work after school, this meas if they stay at the school more time, it will less time that they will have to make work's hours, but this dosen't affect them to much, because they will attend to the school only four day in a week. This is graet because they will have a long weeked to make their tasks and work and help their parents at home with the home's jod. One reasons why our school should follow this model is the creations of new classes like: workshop , drama, and stodios of art . Student can be involvev in every kind of activity to spend their time in something that will help them in their future. Everyone can join up to any program at the school like ORTC this is a great program for some student that are thinking about join up to some militar's branchs, as we know the military can give you many benefits really good, with this program they will get a rich knowledge about it.

Many peoples will disagree with this new model of extending the school day two hours because some of them dosen't like the school already. Also some parents can be disagree because they think that the students doesn't need that much time at the school that's why the school should make a specific schedule, addding more breaks and activities and then, they will realize that this model of extending the school day two hour will be good, and then student will take advantage of time that they will have to learn more.

In example we have a groups of society as we know like some businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resources. That way the worker have a extra day that can be spend with another work and they are available to have a second jod. This can help them get a better financial life or take that extra time to esped it with their families. In conclusion there are many reason and caress why our school should adopted this model of expending the school day two hours more .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
5E49CEB56FB3,"I think that this is wrong for the students sometimes ,because they can't learning the iphone is one thing for that they can't focus in the school.

when the students use the iphone in a moment imporntat when the teacher is teching somthing they can't understand because the never put attention to the teacher, and is very important the eschool because you can be someone better the , you can have a good future and don't matter what.

We need to do everithing for get a good job , and make money , but if the teachesr never put a stop or don't help to the estudens they never do that .

the tecnology is something that have to the all person now all one want to be or use the iphon for everything , the people need understand that all is in our mean we can do with only think and want to .

Everyone need to finish with this problem with the phones and do something change the thinghs that affect we life .

One day verything can be different to now .",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
CB327222A71B,"I agree with the Author Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in a word that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"", because the most important in this world is to be yourself. To be yourself is to make you unique and different for the others. Some of things is important to be yourself is: To be yourself, to achieve goals by yourself, and don't let others people tell you to be different.

The first is to be yourself. Some people things if you don't be yourself is to make you successful in their life, but the case is not that. To be yourself is make the people in your work, family, and friends see the real person you are. In my case when I came in the United States, I don't like to be myself because I was a little scared the kind of people was here. Every time people talk to me, they look me different. After we finished the conversation I feel bad because I know was not me. One afternoon my mom talk me, "" You need to be yourself, because inside you heart, you are a sweet person, beautiful, and you love help people."" In that moment I changed my life and the way I look people.

The second things is to achieve goals by yourself is motivate you to continue do the right choices, and the things right. To be yourself had more opportunities for work, universities, and scholarship. To be yourself don't only implicate be a good person or help people, is to implicate say the truth, the things you think, and never lie to others people. To achieve your goals and objective is make proud of yourself in this world completely of opportunities. For examples, my sister for her dedication, and to be herself, so right now she is in college. To be herself, she achieve their goals and dreams, and she always saying the truth.

The third things what is important is don't let other people tell you to be different. If always to be yourself, you always be successful in life. Some people say you needs to change because they are jealous or they don't like you. Whose say you needs to change is because they want the bad things for you. In my case, I don't remember very well, but one person say to me that, "" I need to change my personality."" In that same afternoon I go to tell my mom what this person say to me, and what my mom say to me was, "" Don't let any person to over shine the light you had.""

In my conclusion, I feel this is very important for all people need to reflect, in this life the most important things is be yourself don't matter what. The are three things that one person never forget is to be yourself, to achieve goals by yourself, and don't let other people tell you to be different. If you let people do what ever they want with you life, you never be successful in life.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
8C44127FF83C,"Dear manager

Good morning, we would like to visit your company because we are content to meet and know a little bit more about this job. We also would like you to show us how hard can a real job be. We want to be professional people, what is the why we want you to be our teacher in this new experience. We choose your workplace because we think it is a great place to start meeting about medicine. We would like to be a famous doctors as well as you are. We are also so excited to meet your workplace because some people doesn't have the opportunity to visit you and your clinic. We choose this job because we think it is a great job and also because you can save lives.

It will be a pleasure to meet your workplace. We want to be like you, be a famous person. We also would like to know a little bit more about how to be a fantastic doctor. We choose your workplace because of people told us that your clinic is the most amazing place to have an operation. We are five students that would like to know more about how to be a doctor and how to safe lives. I was thinking about if maybe you may be with us. We are asking if you can allow us to be in a operation with you ,or be watching how do you and the other doctors work in the clinic. We would like to be a great surgeons.

We think that your workplace will be a great starting to know more about how to do an operation. We would like to know how to become a doctor. Your clinic is always clean. We are asking if you can give us the approbation to visit your hospital. It will be a pleasure to meet you and your hospital because we just want to know how do you work, how do you control the clinic, how do you make an operation. We would like to be in an intensive room, even if it can be disturbing. We also choose this kind of job because it is great, even is sometimes doctors have to make hard decisions.

We know a little bit about medicine. We would like to be in your clinic one day because we want someone to show us the materials that the doctors use. In the school we do not have the resources to have these materials. We are actually studying to be the most knowing doctors becausewe want to be different from the others. You are the person who inspires us to be doctors. My dream is that in a future I can have my own clinic and hospital. Be able to say, "" I did it"". I know that it is a hard dream to follow. But if you gives us the chance to be in your hospital for one day. My dream will finally come true.

I swear that my life will be better if you let us be in there. Maybe you had a dream too, and I suppose that it was not easy to became a professional doctor. Was it? So can you please make my dream true and give me the first steep to be a professional person. I know is kind of hard to ask you to let us be in your clinic because I know you are a busy person. But I just want to know a little bit about medicine. I know you are a great surgeon, that is the why I am asking you to teach me. I know that it is not easy to be the hospital's manager and surgeon but there if you can. I'll too.

Thank you for listen to me. Have a wonderful day!

Generic_Name;                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
5C31B4B9B185,"Do you think that the programs of graduate in three year is a good way?

some school need student that they have online classes and they can graduate before than three year for one part the program of graduate in three year is not good, because is more hard, My brother need help for teachers for graduate, and in the school classes he learn more, and he pay many attention to the teacher because he want graduate in three year etc.

some student take this program in summer school, because they want to finish the high school in three year, and go to the college in less time.

The program of graduate in three years is not good because student need help for the teacher, student learn more with teacher help, and they pay a better attention etc.

The program of graduate in three year is good, because you graduate in less time, and you can go in summer school for graduate the next year, but is more hard, more responsibility, and more work etc.

Should the school districts offer this programs? this programs offer many opportunity to graduate in three years, so i think that this is good for student, and they can have more opportunity to graduate in three years. ",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
E91D1A0039C3,"Sometimes is really hard to get this opportunities. If students get the chance to learn about what they like they should take advantage of it. They might learn things that interested them. Although some students think this opportunities are useless, actually it opens a lot of doors at a young age to learn about the things they like. For some students this is a big privilege. Find out who they are.

A few of this students are not really insterested in this opportunities. They tend to think that is useless just because they don't have the program they are insterested in. Normally people get use to the things they like, and they don't want to learn new things. Sometimes is hard to see that learning about new things could give huge benefits.

Other students realize that it could be fun to learn about new things. If they are lucky enough they could find the career they like. When kids start to go to school teachers always ask them to think about what they want to be when they grow up. Almost everyone wants to be a policeman, a fireman, a teacher, or a doctor. When they grow up their way of thinking chances. Kids realize that there are a lot of other things that they could like. While others grow with the same mentality. Some of them make it happen, but some others change their mind in the way. It does not only happens when they are little. It could happen when they grow up, so they should give it a try to new things. It might be better than it looks.

Also, If they find the program they like and try it out they might find out if they truly like it. I had a friend, and he really loved psychology. He took the class this year because he thought it could be interesting. Midway through the year he found out that he is not so good at it. Although it was too late to back up he realized that psychology was not what he was looking for. Sometimes people believe they have what they want and that there is nothing that could stop it. They all should have a second plan in case plan A is not working so well. Everyone should be ready just incase there is a rush change, and they have to take a decision in less than a day. They have to hope the best and get ready for the worst.

Some students think this opportunity is lame for not having what they want to learn about. Some others see that there are a lot of benefits in it and go for it. I classify myself as the kind of student that takes new chances. I also have two careers in mind. I know if one of them fails me I still have the other one. This is why I should get the opportunity to go. I truly want to know if the careers I have in mind are what I want to do the rest of my life. If in any case there was not what I am interested in then I will try new things.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
3418CB8125B3,"I think i agree because some people were seeking success and some other people were doing the same but they were doing their best to reach what they asked for. People didnt want to to loose what they needed because they have to keep doing what they are doing to reach that goal that they always think of. Assuming like you want to be something that you like to be you have keep trying until you get to it because is like you want to have it to your own self. People dont like to fail because they dont want to fail, they work hard to achieve the goal. Winston Churchill was telling people that when you fail to do something people will get it and stand up for it. Even though people already achieve their goal, they to keep going at it. Winston Churchill was maybe tell the people about how important to take a role that are engage to success. People felt inspired about his quote because makes think that people were strong about the the feeling that they have to succeed into it. People believed that if they succeed through it they would achieve it. I conclude that if people want to succeed into what they are in, or already done, they still need keep trying and push themselves to achieve that goal.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
14D2867090F2,"Philosopher, physician, humanitarian

Albert Schweitzer said,"" Example is not the main thing in influencing other; it is the only thing. I believe that if you show good behavior while working or simply going to school with a good behavior that some people will follow your attitude and want to have a positive way on life, however there are other ways of showing good behavior, for example you can help your mother with the groceries and help take the dog for a walk, some might think that good behavior is for the weak, but to be honest it shows that you are mature and that you know how to act around other people or places. If you continue with good behavior you have a higher chance that you will be respected in society even in your own home. good behavior is really a life skill you need for example, your trying to get a job, how are you going to behave in front of the employer? your going to act like a mature adult and tell him that your looking for a job so you can buy a house or a car. so you need to behave correctly in any given situation. It can be hard to behave correctly because some people are very disrespectful and like to get on other people's nerves, but in the end your the one that set a example to everyone else that you know how to act in any situation. dont let other people get to you because then your going to justlash out on everyone else and thats going to make you look bad no matter what. you hsve to show that you are well behaved in any type of enviroment weather its at your house or at work or even at the movie theater you still have to show that you know how to act.  ",3.0,2.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
E508BAFC3BF9,"Yes I agree with this quote, beacuse every students have a chance to learn, so in my opinion, I think that is a great opportunity, for all of them to learn. Some of them has a job, maybe with that same job. I think some of them they have a chance to surpport they family.

Maybe they leave lonely, far aways from they family, or they have to help theire parent pay the rent, or other stuff to pay in they own too.

I think they will have a benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because the schools give them a new way to progress.

First of all I think it's would be a great benefit is, at same same time you can do other activity, and you can took it whenever you want, before or after work it all depend on what you think will be better for you.

Secondly if you have some family problem or you have to go somewhere immediately for a long time. That is an opportunity for you to learn or to not loss all the days you have been absent at the school.

An other opportunity is if you go to college and you have a job at same time, if your classes are in the morning fron 8 AM to 4 PM, and you job schedule is at 1 PM to 11 pm .

At that time you have this big opportynity to sturdy and learning online, before work and you have some time left to do your homework, or other thing that you have to or you want to do in that day.

It's not noly online you take the class online but, you will have a viedo conferencing to motivate you, that if you not understand, that can explain it to you.

The school give them a big opportunity to progress, to have a good education and a better future.

For me it is a great option for them to attend it.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
EF9677DEFA79,"I think the teacher should let any students play in any sports or activities in school because the might be better at sports or activities than any other kids. They should at least have a c grade to play in the sports. They should at least have a c grade because they are not to low nor to high. I think just because a student doesn't have a b grade and higher doesn't mean that they cant play in a spot or activities. Maybe they are not that smart but they are trying there best but they might not be able to succeed. Sometimes kids cant improve because they might have problems at home the teachers might not notice.

Maybe even smart kids grades go low and the teachers might not notice.

Maybe they have problems at home.

I think before they not allowing them play activities or ports the teachers talk to them why they have low grades. Maybe the teachers could help them with a problem and help them improve their grades. If the teachers connect and get the confident with the kids they might now what is going on with there grades instead of the teachers saying ""you can not participate in an activity of sport.""

The teachers could talk with kids and see if they could do anything to help them with their grades and help them improve.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
A1CA2A691C98,"Do I agree or disagree on Ralph Waldo statement well I agree on what he is trying to say because you can master beyond something and get somewhere in life.

Also following your dreams and do what you want to do. Try not to follow anyone's decisions they make for you because it's not right for them to do so. It's your path to choose what you have set in life. You can master things in life if you believe in yourself and never give up. But people can tell you that you aren't too good for things and you should give up on everything.

If you were to master something important you will get somewhere in life. It can start by graduating from any school. If you mastered graduating from school it can get you a new job where you can do something better and you can grow from it. Also you can be willing of having a family , that for me it's a huge thing to have because they will help you get better opportunities. However mastering what you can it can take you to places and you can improve to becoming something better. Trying your hardest is a big key note because if you don't you may never get to become what you want and you may never grow from it.

What do I want to do and should I follow my dreams or goals. By following what you want to do you can become the next big singer out there. If you want to achieve something no one believed you can do you can become the next president. Also by thinking out of the box it can make you do things you have always wanted to do. However if you believe in yourself you can be a professional soccer player without being so ostentatious. But people can bring you down and you can always bring yourself back up if you believe that you can do it.

How can I not try to follow anybodies decisions they make for me. Well you always have to make sure that things are about you even if you don't want it to be about you. People can make you do things so you can give up on something you set you goal on. Don't listen to what they say or on what they want to tell you. It's not good for you to have negativity around you. Also you have to efface on what people have to say about what you do or how you are going to do it . However make your mark and show them what you can achieve and make the people who believed in you proud that you did it.

When someone has something so positive to say that can change someones thinking I have to agree to what he or she has to say and it's true we do have to master beyond something or we will never grow. To never give up on following your dreams and what you have set your goals for . Also try not to listen or follow what anyone decides for you and try to make it about what you want it to be . If you mastered that goal by you having them set then you will be going to places and having great opportunities. It's hard if you don't do things you have set your mind to because you will go nowhere. But you can always get advice from people whom you think will help you out.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
3CD660D1E7BB,"True self-esteem comes from achievement because all the constant work and dedication put into the goals you have accomplished will continue to build up the confidence in yourself and the way you do things.

Achievement is a major role for building anyones self-esteem because it lets you know that you can accomplish anything you put your mind too. That feeling you get after you have finshed something that you've been working on for a long time and doing a very well on is the best feeling ever. It makes it seem that nothing can get in your way no matter how hard it may be at first. Accomplishing one thing can be the start of many more achievements because once you have passed an obstacle, the ones that follow you know require you to work harder on.

The confidence that you build makes you want to keep moving forward and work twice as hard. Overcoming something not only makes you feel good about yourself but it keeps you motivated. It motivates you to keep going and setting higher goals for yourself.

All it takes is one to make you want to succeed more. Wanting the best is never a bad thing because it is going to teach you that hard work and success is going to push you to become your best.

Your true self-esteem takes time to build and small victorys like passing a test or even winning a difficult soccer game for your school is the start of it. Little things like those are the small steps that will make you strive for bigger and better things in life. Eventually all that hard work will pay off and you might be the top of your class. All it takes is committment, dedicaton, hard work , and one small achievement .

One achievement can have a huge impact and change the point of view on how you think about things. Changing the way things are thought of and done can make someone want to finish more and set more goals for themselves that one day they want to accomplish. Which helps better themselves and have confidence that they can do it.                                                                    ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
01C53183305A,"They are some Schools offer for Students to Lerning as option for Students from home. They are many thinks you can't Lerning at home you can use by way of video or online.

First, Know in this world the technolgy availadle everywhere and you can use anytime you want to go online and attend the classes on the time.

Secand, They are many student they have a lot of job or they have baby's or anything, They can't go to schools to lerning. So, they should take classes by way of online or video they can open the classes on the job or at home.

Thrid, The student should behefit from deing and serios to do the work and homewark from home because this is nice from them they make it for you easy to learning evry thing on the time.

Last, If you want to learn or take any thing in this life you can do any time you want and anywhere, You can take many classes at home, and finsh you'r education. The Schools are the Bast houes in the world.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0
FBB5F20E7554,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend class from home?. I think that some students in our country can benefit from able to attend classes from home, but I would do not agree because, the student can be more benefit to attend classes in school. For example, the students can practice deports that they like, the student can not feeling bored in classroom, and the students can take elective class, or academy. However, some students would do not like choose the offer distance learning as as an option for students to attend classes home by away of online or video conferencing. Just the student do not have other option to take credit for graduate.

First, the students can practice deports in the school because, the most students love practice deports and the school give then these opportunity . It is a passion to make what are you like. For example, when I feeling sad these the form how I can distract me, entertaining and I feeling good because, I can share with other people my passion for soccer. The practice deports can help most students to not consume drugs, or participate in gang. The young need a different world where they can have more opportunity to realize the dreams.

Second, the students can not feeling bored in classrooms. All students like to feeling motivate, happy, and entertaining. They do not like to be all day in one computer, or landlocked in home, so these the reason that the students like to going school because, they can share with their friends and know new people. For example, when I confused ,or need help with my homework I can ask my teacher, or my partner. we can travel to know the university, teather, and museo. We can learn about our history.

Finally, the students can choose elective classes, or academy. One of the reason that the students want to take elective class is because, they can to know what are their like. All schools in our country have elective classes, or academy about: kitchen, piano, cosmetology, art, fitnes, medical assistent, dentist, band, police, detective, electrician, and medical emergency . These class can teach us to find what are you want to study in your future. Only in school you have these great opportunity for know how you can to take a credit in a bank , or how you can they help for your university, how you can applicate for a beca and choose wich university do you want will going to study your career. For example, in my schools they help to know what a I want to study and they help to take a credit for my university .

In conclusion, some students do not like choose the offer distance learning as as an option for students to attend classes home by away of online or video conferencing because, the most students like practice deports in schools, the students can not feeling bored in classes, and the students have the opportunity to choose elective classes, or academy. However, some students do not have the opportunity to going a school because, they do not have family, others have to work and they do not have time or car to going a night school, and do not have other option for graduated that accept the offer to attend classes from home by away of online or video conferencing. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
DC1271D1294D,"No one should leave this world without taking a trip to Generic_City! Generic_City is an amazing destination. What do you think about the incredible sites like the white house and Abraham Lincoln monument. Are you interested in museums? for example the Air and Space museum and the Art museum. You could also observed the extraordinary Cherry Blossom. You wouldn't want to miss this would you?

My first stop would be at the breathtaking sites. The white house is a really old house that was built a long time ago. All presidents of the United States have lived there except George Washington. I would also make a stop by Abraham Lincoln monument. This giant sculpture has an amazing texture and is a great view to just relax.

Next, i would visit some museums. In the

Air and Space museum you could have a memorable experience. You could learn about rocks from the moon and about the first rocket that was sent to the moon. Also you get to see the first airplane that was created by two brothers. In the art museum you have fun gazing at really good pieces of art.

Finally, taking a little trip to the Cherry Blossom wouldn't be so bad. Who would miss having a great view to relax? People that have been to the Cherry Blossom before has enjoyed a lot. When you go with family it can be fun taking in the gorgeous sight. People usually go in the afternoon because it looks mesmerizing and no one would want to leave.

In conclusion, no one would regret taking a trip to Generic_City This amazing sites, breathtaking museums, and the mesmerizing Cherry Blossom are not leaving and someone should visit them and enjoy it. pack your bags now and take a trip you would never regret to Generic_City with your family and friends.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
325B2F7BB3B1,"Are positive attitudes the key to success in life?

Yes, The positive attitude is key for life. for example, if people are happy the negative things are running away from them. And also, if you are with good attitude, good things are beside you; it's feel like god is blessing you. In addition positives attitudes are good to live good and peacefully on every single places there are going to be people that they're not going to thinks as you, they just want to hurt you but, that people that are angry all the time is not their fault is just because around of them just negative things are happening. So, thats why good attitudes are good not just for you, and is good for the people around you too because you don't hurt them. And you can get a better job to support your self and support your family, never let them alone. In conclusion the positive attitude is the best choice you can do, because negative attitudes only a track the bad things, not positives and thats the key to success in life. Happy wife Happy life!",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
0B953049AE1E,"Some school districts offer programs that allow allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I think students should be offered the opportunity to graduate in three years so they can go to college or join the work force early.

A program that offers you three years of high school has so many benefits and advantages. Its a great option, because who doesnt want to be done with high school one year early and come out ready to pursue their career or dream? It's not only about finishing school early, but in that year you also have the advantage to be offered jobs or be hired over somebody else for example, if you were competing for a job in fixing computers you would have the more experience, knowledge, and advanced while the other guy just came out of high school and is new to the work force.

This program gives you the option to have a flexible schedule and to choose whats best for your comfort. Taking courses over the summer and not being able to take electives can help you finish more early and to be available to plans for the future. You will have so much time to invest in activities that your interested or visit colleges you wish to go to, because remember your graduating early and you have to be ready for this life changing experience.

Having an extra year of high school is waste not just of your time but a waste of your life! Your a senior in high school and your friend who took the early college program has the same career choice like you do, but he graduated last year, has more experience, many job offers, and good pay, while your in class listening to a history channel on the television. His friend made the decision to apply for early college and took advange of it.

Success is the key in life and taking this opportunity is the key that will take you further in life and your in your career. If you have the option to apply for this program be wise and take this life changing opportunity.",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,3.5,3.5
E2FC55BF5005,"The idea of creating a new menu for the cafeteria affects people who are trying to have a healthier diet, and kids who need to be clean of bad supplements for the sports season. Otherwise, Students that come to our school since freshman year love the tradional food of the cafeteria.

It is a good idea to include the new recipe of food in the cafteria menu because, it will have more types of vitamins, proteins, and all type of good suppliments that a young healthi body needs. Also, Teachers agree that would be a good upgrade for the students to have a extra meal that is healthier and it is in a good quantity. If the changing in our menu happens, the students that do sports will have a second meal to support all the exercise that is needed for the soccer teams, football, etc...

In some others opinion, the new menu in the cafeteria will affect the businness in our school, beacuse the students that are in the school for a longer time will not like to change their favorite types of food.

Some students might not agree with the changing of the recipe in the cafeteria, but for those reasons, the principal and teachers agree that the new menu would be a healthier and more elaborated meal for everyone in our school.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
EC7A73638669,"Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I agree with this position. I believe that it is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college one year early. Although, some people think that it is not a good idea for students enter college or the work force one year early, nevertheless it can be helpful, because it can help students to start early to college, then they can have enough time to choose what they will want to study, and it also going to promote them to be eficients and take adventage of the time, they will have.

When people have to take a important decision, regularly, they think and they look carefully at all their options. If the students graduate one year early, they will earn time to correctly choose what profession they going to take, and then they will have enough time to elect the college or university where they feel comfortables to go. This is significant, because of one decision depend the future; the experiences that people going to live. With enough time students can give attention to their most important interests, thoughts, and consider possibles changes if it's require. Also people can take adventages of the time that they have, one year is not too much, but in one year is the opportuny for students to select a exceptional career and work and what they always dreamed.

The time is a investment and students have to take advantage of that. Some parents, students, and techers think that if the students graduate a year early, they don't will have time free to play, to share with their families, or to do others activities. The reality is that it going to improve the performance of the students. This method will catch the attention of them and it will show them their priorities. The children have the right to have their free time, but also the parents have the labor to teach them that are precedences that they have to comply with. For example, I took English 10, in summer school in Generic_City, but I was living in Generic_City, I drove every morning, one hour to arrive to my summer school, it was hard wake up early and then drive, but now, I'm sure that it was the best desicion because I'm at few steps of my graduation. People always have to remind that to can get extraordinary rewards, people have to do extraordinary efforts.

On the other hand, some people are not agree with those that offer the special program to graduate early. The opposition believe that students are not sufficiently prepare to graduate before of the schedule time. The contrary side, also think that students have to complete all their high school years to be ready to go to the college or the work. People that is in the opposite side not coincide with the programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years. In addition, some parents are not agree with the options that the program give to their children; to take courses during the summer or in the evenings. Parents refer to this like ""a extra pressure to students."" There are people that suggest that the better choice is that the students complete their four years of high school; however, it can prolong that time for students to graduate.

To conclude, it's important emphasize that in certain cases the pressure is a tool that help people to protrude in their projects and in the life in general. When people take risks and they have the courage to do reality their goals, they going to achieve all of them. The time that people invest in positive accions are transcedent to achieve their goals. The program offer a essential support to students, that going to be useful and it going to show to students that they have the capacity of achive their goals, before that they believed, they just have to establish their academic purposes and demostrate that they have the capacity to achieve it. The program is a great oportunitty to grow and success, one year can be the big difference, and it can approach us closer of that dream.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
E060D90D6CB9,"Dear Principal

I don't agree with your decisions about the new school policy. I think that students needs exercise. I believe that students joining sports is a good thing for there health and it also makes them happy. Its not good for students to think about school work too much because it causes stress.

If you change your mind maybe more students would actually work hard in school because of there accomplishment's in school. Kids should be aloud to play any sport without doing anything.

If they think about school work and sports at the same time it might cause them to stress out. At the same time i also want them to have fun in school. There are lots of reasons why students shouldn't have to work hard just to play the sport they want. Changing school policy is a bad idea.

I think it will encourage kids to work harder in school. Not only it will encourage them they will also have a better future.

Changing the school policy back to normal would be a good thing for kids. They will also have a good exercise everyday because it encourage the to practice. I am also a sports fan my myself. I know how it feels if that happens to me.

I wouldn't like it if I have to worry about my school work and my favorite sport. I hope that you will change your mind after reading this note.

Sincerely: STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
D159EE3218BC,"Showing kindness to others is very important because people see you that you have a kind soul, people can spread kindness around the world, and kindness will help you throughout your future. Kindness is the key for success and enjoying your life. The world would not been the same if their were not any kindness, imagine what it would be like if no one knew what kindness is. Having kindness in your blood could change your future to an even better one. Having no kindness means that you are negative and misrable but all that could change when a person shows you how kindness could change your personality.

When people see you showing kindness, that shows that you have a good heart and a good soul. And, it also shows that you care and very nice so, people could trust you. Thinking kindness is very positive and relaxing because it is a very good thing to do in life. Kindness will never be a bad thing because it is meant to change the future. No matter what, kindness could never go wrong as long as you try it to others.

Spreading kindness around the world could change how people think, in terms of doing something bad is not part of kindness. Therefore, giving kindness to a person could spread around the world, and you would not even know that all this kindness was because of you. Without kindness, all the virture words would not even exsist. There would be no such things as being caring, loving, sharing, humble, and so much more. Every small kindness you show to others, will change their emotion and follow your action as they did to you.

Kindness will really help you in the future because it shows you who you truly are. If you show kindness everywhere then their could be a chance for you to get into jobs easily or, for you to get good grades on your school work. Also, in the future you would be very grateful that kindness brought you here into this amazing life, and all the kindness you have done in your previous years. Kindness is always by your side. You will appreciate having kindness in your life because it helps you to become a better person.

Kindness will not randomly appear to you, you just need to make and share kindness. Life is waiting patiently for the people to spread kindness everywhere but, unfortunatly some people would not let that happen. In our expectation people should already have kindness for, in reality thousands of people do not want to share their kindness. Some people are trying to spread kindness because they want the world to be a good place for the future. Finally, kindness will always be their in your heart, you just have to let it out.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
F581373D36A4,"Generic_Name

Generic_School

Generic_City

Generic_City

Generic_Name

04/9/2019

Teacher: Generic_Name

1 ST Period

Room 3119

Generic_School

Generic_City

Dear Generic_Name

I write to teacher Generic_Name today with the benefit of work in group. The work in group is more better then work alone, in the beneficial is the student work in group is have more opportunity of learn more with other students in the class, they can work more better and understand more quickly the theme in the class and have more collaboration, learn to respect other students. They in the group can say new ideas for the team.

I think in the personal the work in group is more productivity in the student because have a good communication with the students and teacher, they have more positive attitude in the ideas and participation.

For example, students in the group work more and learn more quickly because in group have a higher quality of ideas, and students can change ideas together about the theme in the class and have a better determination in the job of the class.

Second, work in group have a big benefit in the class because students understand problems more quickly, and they have solution in theme complicated with ideas and dedication in class.

Third, students have collaboration with other students have a good relation and learn to respect others person for religion or ideas. They have more communication in the class and have more better grade in the school.

However, work alone not have good result because almost all the student have fear to say ideas for the critic of other students in the class, and they have slow work in the class for complication of the theme.

The preference is work with a group have more benefit in the student and teacher to learn and teach other students in the school have more communication, better work and good relation in the school.

sincerely

Generic_Name ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
E2E3D86A8CF8,"based on you experience , do you agree or disagree with Emerson statement should based on your experiences do you agree .

more support to try something do you more go up take more position you have more experiences you never go down should based on your experiences do you disagree

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no position no ready for that no complete nothing should base on your experience do you agree because have more support in you will go never grow and you try something and you have more experiences . and when you have more experience you go more up it is passive do you have more opportunities and you ready for anything should base on your experience do you disagree because no complete nothing when anyone have experience or support with reason . and when you not have good reading you no go up because you need to practice you first and you go to that what are you doing but when you ready for that when one person no complete everything it is impassive go up . many person go to up because no is ready for that and when you have more experience is more easy for this person you need to ready .

everyone is passive to proper for that because is no easy when you have good experience you good because you state good end good position is more experience star and good position so many peoples no proper for that and is imposing you have good experience thats why you need to proper first my reading for that is more experience and more practice because is more easy for one person practice to that everyone is proper first and you states where you are and something you have so many ideas when you no understand nothing you need to ask your Principe or your teacher or you boss he give to you reason or good question for you or your life or when you complete everything is more easy for you or you understand everything that why you need to ask first so many people practice that so many people no practice nothing .",1.5,1.5,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5
8399BA1DF44B,"I am not agree because everybody in this world can be freedom to think or to do whetever they wan because we have the independence of right. They can enthusiasm for things or wons that they did.

If they want to do that the rule said is they decition,or they opioniom because they are freedom right, but i am disagree with thus rule for one reason, that it's. That if they don't want to failure you have to fight for yours dreams for everythink that you can do it, and say thank u god for give me that opportunity and say i am so pround of me.

you never give up just kept going and follow your dreams to have a good future and don't be failure and don't play with that things beacuse you can practice once and you can take that thing for a while of your life.

I will give you one example for this thing, you see the poor people that they follow the rules just for money or do whetever things just for money is because they just wanna a good future for they kid's and they don't wanna failure they just fight for they kid's to have a good education and they hope that one they they can be somebody profetional like doctor and help them family to get out the situation of poor.

I hope that everyone in this world can see the right things and complete and don't be afraid if you don't do nothing bad why you suppost to be afraid you have your right laws. If you play wiht that thing you can fail in your life, but you can learn that way because when you broken down and you say i can't continue with this, is when you have to say i am stronger, the life give a leason, and i learn about that. Now i see and i can be better.

You can see now that you can do it. When you wish something like be profetional, soccer player, but if you play with failure you can fail thats right you can not have to play wiht that.

Also there is going to be peoples in your way that they dosen't want that you can be happy, like a fake friends, and sometimes we were really surprised because someones in your family are fake too, but don't pay atention to them just focus in your dreams and finish.

Another example is my self because when i came in United States, i don't even know English and i thoght that will be more difficul for me, i thoght that i will fail every class, but is not how was i thihk because i just focus in my class and i work hard every single day, and i never fail one class that's right you never have to loss the enthusiasm in your life and enjoy every single day, because the life is just one and we has to make the most of opportunitys in this life, and be happy every single day.

When i came in United States without my parents i thoght that will be more difficul for me, at the beginnig was so hard because i always live with them but i never give up because i know that they want a good future for me and i saw that way and now i juts want to help them because they are a good example in my life they say to me, son just fight for your dreams and don't worry about us you know that will be ok and that's right i never loss my enthusiasm because i want to reversed the help that they give me one day.

My father and my mother say, you arer the reason for work and fight so hard for you. You will have a good future don't be afriad don't loss your enthusiasm. That's right i never loss my enthusiasm because i take the example that they give me because i wanna be a good example for my childrens and be like my parents or better.

When you have a problems to solve and you feel that you can fail just think creatively about different ways to solve and actively work to balance your mind, health and emotions or enthusiasm. we have to develop many ways to solve the problems. Our environment it will be consider many perspectives, and how we can work to balance our mind, health and see many solutions in our life.                     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
D242BBCBEAFB,"Some student can take classes at home because they could find a subject of course that like. Learning websites can help them get better at what they do. It could benefit because they it would seem easier to go on different classes or to take a video to study a subject. For example, taking classes online would give you a head start. Many other schools have students at home take taking these course and have them apply for it. It is like a benefit for them to take some opportunity to get taught about something they have learn or to have a different way of learning it.

I will think they would able to do this if they are interested. For example, Home-schooling could that much money. There could be some reasons for them.

1. They want to try out some different learning strategies.

2. They can apply online.

3. They can try taking some subjects that they like.

In conclusion, it could be able to work for the home-schoolers to also have an education because they did not go to public but have it at home.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
CDE661A599F5,"Imagine the president and the government of our country being nothing but idle and letting the country run on its own. There would be no regulation in the country. The history would repeat itself and many of the tragic historical events that happened in the past would happen again. We talk about the American Dream a lot but being lazy and just waiting for something to happen will not take us anywhere.

As Thomas Jefferson said, ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"", I agree that if we always do something we accomplish more.

We as human beings have so much potentials in us but we will never discover it through inactive.

Firstly, I believe that inventions and new discoveries have made people more lazy and inactive. I dont blame Inventions and discoveries because they were made with good intentions and not through idle ism but there are people who trust inventions more then they have to. There is always something to do in this world; we accomplish more when we aim higher. Even small chores prepare us for something big. laziness is a big wooden door which can only open by ourselves and once we open that door, theres always something big waiting to happen and once we accomplish that another big adventure awaits.

In the history of United States, there were many people who idolized idle. We had a government who let the country run free, this had a great impact to the country. the country was poor, people died because of huger, disease etc but now the country has accomplished so much then the people in our past would have imagined. The country is well know all over the world now. The country has accomplished by establishing government regulation which removed all the laziness from the country. If a whole country can accomplish so much from not being lazy then imagine what a person can accomplish.

I believe there are people who supports on being idle more that have to do work. I agree that it is okay to not do anytime sometimes because everyone needs a break in their lives. There are people who believe in not having to go outside their house because they have all the technologies or they think they have nothing to do. Technologies serve their own purpose but we have our own purpose, we are born to do something big. If we could just go out and just help one person and day, that person would help another and another to another, this would be such a great accomplishment.

In conclusion, I agree on what Thomas Jefferson said and believe that there is more happiness in doing something everyday then being a idle. I hope everyone see's how much bad impact idle is in our lives.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
E4DCBE75344D,"Theirs a lot of activities that many people enjoy doing. Why are educational activities enjoyable? because you can learn a lot of new things, you spend time with friends and you'll learn from your mistakes.

First, Educational activities are enjoyable because you can learn new things. Trying new things wont kill you but it will benefit you,for example try to dance or experimenting it can be one of your liking if you tried it. You can learn from the new things you do. If you study more you will know a lot of things because of studying.

Second, Educational activities are enjoyable because you spend time with your friends. You and your friends help each other on the activities you do. Friends are one of the most important things in your life. If you spend time with your friends your bonds to each other will grow and for every memories you make with your friends you will realize the importance of having friends. Friends helps you in many ways like if you need help on something or if you need someone to talk to if your depressed.

Third, Educational activities are enjoyable because you'll learn from your mistakes. They say ""Failure is the key to success.""

its true, because every time you fail you will do your best to fix the mistake you've done. If you fail on your project or the activity your doing you might want to check it if whats wrong with it and fix it.

In conclusion, Educational activities are enjoyable because you can do a lot of stuff you enjoy doing. Educational activities helps us grow and make our minds brighter and wider. It helps our thinking and our imagination.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
93C575DB7931,"Would you rather ask one person or multiple for advice

I think that if you talk to more than one person for advice it will hep you more .One time i saw this quot by Lebron James that said if you need advice always ask more than one because one person could be right and the other could be not be right so dont be scared to ask more than one person there is noting wrong about asking the person you look up to. it will most likely be better if you ask multiple people for good advice.

If you are a person that does not like taking to other people you can just go to one person or you can try something different and ask someone else but if you just want to ask one person you have to go to someone you trust so they can give you some good feed back and good information. If i was to ask someone for advice i would go to a person that is very wise and makes smart choices so they can help me make a smart choice so i dont make the bad choices. If you need good advice make sure your going to the right person because you do not to be getting bad information if you have bad information you can make some bad choices.

Getting advice from one person can also be good because what if your telling them personal thing they can keep it a secret but if you tell multiple people your personal information can get out there and can start getting bulled and you would not be able to trust anyone again so that is why sometimes you just have to tell one person if it is important information. And if you just dont trust anyone you can just go to your consular because your consular will never share your information with anyone and she will under stand you more because it could of happen to her as a child so one person can also be helpful.

Dont forget asking for advice can always be useful if its one person or it multiple people it can still help you but if it is a person that does bad things and you ask him for advice he can tell you to do the things he does and you will turn out just like him so do not do to someone for advice if they dont make good choice. advice can change pepole live if it is good.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
A66E85DB3C56,"In the modern times kids want to stay out late until 2-3 in the morning, but it is not safe for kids to be staying out that late. Especially, teenagers now days get more in trouble late at night because they do illeagal things. often times teens go to parties and drink underage which is bad for their health. usually, curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble because, if there was no curfew teens would stay out late, do illeagel stuff ,and get them self in deep trouble.

Teenagers would be in trouble and also in danger if they don't follow the curfew. It is dangerous for teens to stay out late because the world we live in now is not as safe as we think it is. There has been a lot of kidnapings and sex trafficking happening in the United states it is best for teenagers to stay home past curfew. If they want to go out somewhere past the curfew then they always have a choise to go with their parents. Usually, most teens don't have a license so they would uber their way to wherever their destination is and ubering at night is dangerous because, teens can get kidnap or anything bad can happen to them, so that staying out after curfew could get teens in trouble and in danger.

If teenagers start to stay out after the curfew technically they would be breaking the law. They can get in a lot of trouble from their parents and the police for breaking the law. Teens tend to go to parties a lot and they drink under age which can get them in trouble with the law and also it is bad for their health. Another example why teenagers shouldn't be out after curfew is because, most teenagers when they go to paties they smoke which is really bad for their health. The parties they go to are sometimes on weekdays and it ends around 2-3 in the morning which is way past the curfew. If the teens come home that late at night they wont be able to get proper sleep because, they have school so getting less than 5 hours of sleep is not good for teenagers health at all. It is best for teenagers to stay home after curfew and get a good night sleep.

Now days teenagers don't spent so much time with their parents. The curfew could help their parents spend some extra time with their kids. If the teenagers wants to hangout past curfew they can always go to their friends house or their friends could come to their house with their parents permission and they can hangout and be safe at the same time. Staying after curfew would definetly keep teenagers out of danger and trouble. Teens can aslo have extra time to their homework. It is best for teenagers to stay home past curfew for their own safety.

All the reasons that are above is only because, so it shows what would happen if the teens don't follow the curfew. If the city council wants to keep the kids safe, healthy, and out of danger they should definetly have the curfew. The best way to keep the kids safe is to make them follow the curfew for their own safety. The curfew is there for the protection of the teenagers.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
694C96A1E9A0,"It has being said that a positive attitude is the key of success in life. Many people might think different from what i do. I agree with this statement, because being positive in life makes me happy and when i am happy i do my work with happinest. Maybe not all the time my work is going to work out but at least i had fun doing it. During the time when i am doing my work to reach the goal, i am always being positive. When i play soccer for the school, and we have hard games aginst others schools who have a better team than we do, but no matter what i am always positive. Also when i am at work i have stuff to do before leaving my work. i dont like going home late, so i am always positive that i will be finishing all the stuff so i can leave work early.

Doing my homework every night is a stuggle beacause i work everyday, and i do not get time to do it before going to work. So what i tried to do is do all my work fast at work so like that i can go home and get my homework done.

Playing soccer for the school is the most fun activity i have done in my life, because i get to meet new people and compete against better players. Sometimes i have to play against some players that are really good at soccer and i might not have a chance to beat them but that doesnt mean i will stop being positive. I am always telling my self i can do it. I tried to pass my positive attitude to my team mates. When everyone starts being positive we play better games and we beat the good teams that we could not defeat a year ago.

I love my work, but sometimes i am to tired and i just want to go home.

I do not get leave my job till i finish cooking all the stuff that need to be ready for the next day. Also i got to clean the floor an the kitchen. If i want to leave early i need to be positive, that i will finish every thing fast. Like that i would not have to leave late. The good thing about my work is that i get to work with my best friend, he is always positive like me, so we do our job faster but well done.

When i get homework and i have to work the night i just want to cry. But i tell my self that if finish all the work fast. I would get to go home and do my homework. i would not have to go to sleep late, beacuse of my work and homework. Being positive helps me finish everything fast so can go to sleep fast.

In conclusion, Being positive is the key of success in life beacause, being positive gives you happinest and makes you do your job with more joy. Many people should change their negative attitude because neggative people never succed in life. When you are a positive person more of your goals are going to be achive. Also just not that you will make other people start being positive.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
234F1BA430B7,"Why is it important to learn the experience from others?

It's important because you know what you're going to do or you know what you're going to see.

For example when my cousin went to another country she told me about her experience, and that puts a thought to my head of she did and what she saw. Therefore when i went to the country she went i experienced what she did and what she saw.

When your friends or family members share their experience with you, you start to imagine what they've expericenced and that sometimes leads to preparing because they've told you what they've experienced from them they can prepare you. For example your family has a thing where all the boys in the family try out for basket ball, and you ask your older cousin how was their experience went and what they did good and bad.

So you know what the coach wants to see and what he doesn't want to see that means you can show off to the coach and that can help you make the team and make your family proud and keeping the legecy going and when you can share your experienced with your brother when it's his time to shine.

Learning from others experience leads to good things like making a team,preparing,proving people wrong,improving, and some lead to bad things like you're new student and a bunch of girls see you're hanging out with a girlwho has had bad experience with them come up to you and tell you about their experience with the girl, and that makes you think she's so nice and that makes you not want to be her friend from ther experiece with her , or your best friend and you have the same science teacher but different blocks and your best friend tells you that the science teacher is very nice and when it gets time to go to your science class the teacher isn't as plesent as your best friend shared with you. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
2FE31DD4FD98,"Personalty, I disagree that my school should follow the model by extending the school day with two hours. The school would have more disadvantages that benefits. My point of view this issue is that school decision might affect students schedule, students health and the school will create a unneeded investment that can create also a problem on parents income.

My first opinion concerning the fact why my school should not follow this model, it is the reason that would create pressure on students schedule. Most of the schools have sports teem or music band. Some teenager are included in a teem or a bad, they would need time after school to practice their passion. Taking away that time by adding two extra hours, the students will be under the pressure and will have to choose the school instead of the activities that they love. The two extra hours might create a disorientation for students schedule and students mind .

The role of students is to learn and be prepared for the future, to put pressure on a young person will give a wrong perspective of the life. Even if in the future some students would possibly have a career that include a four-days work, the school should not be like a job. Cutting one day of a student schedule would create more homework and they would be suppose to learn by themselves. If the students would be tied or they will need to do other activities, most of the student would rather prefer to stay home than go to school.

For example, in Romania, the Music schools had Friday off and two hours added for the rest of school days. For most of the students was a hard period. Being at an artistic school has already harder, students played four instruments and they tried to keep their grades up. Most of the students decided leave the school after the decision of expanding the school day was approved. However after three month the school went back to normal schedule, but the school lost a lot of students.

The second reason that I support my opinions have reference to students health. Spending a long time in the same place, students might cause eating disorder, physical and psychical pain. For a young student that have homework or other activities, would be harder to have a clear mind everyday at school. Sitting almost all day it might develops back problems and others problems.

Spend more than seven hours at school students might create a sensible body. However, a young human being should not have problems with their body.

Eating disorder can be a really big problem for students, in this days most of the young people prefers unhealthy food. At schools many of the young scholars are picky, they would prefer to skip lunch or just eat snacks and other unhealthy food. The lunch is the important meal of the day, and it happened to be at school. Students will need to eat better and the school will need to add more time at lunch .

My last reason why I degree with extending the school day it is the fact that school create unneeded investment and the parents budget will have to suffer. Even if the school have the purpose to conserve the energy and resources, adding the extra hours would be the same as a normal five days of school. The school would not conserve the energy, in fact would create a uncomfortable situation for students. School would need to invest more in a healthier food for give the protein that a young student need.

For the students that dont have a free lunch or reduced price for lunch, the parents or the guardian of the teenager will be force to pay more for their children to eat at cafeteria, and also the parents will add some extra snack or food.

With all my reasons , my opinion is that my school or other shouldn't follow this model and extending the school hours. Some people said that is a good idea to create the opportunity of a free day ,that help students to spend more time with family. However I think the school should give the opportunity for students to feel comfortable and not to be under the pressure of the time. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
B1BF25C4C28B,"My mom always tell me "" keep going until you reach your goals, never stop"".

I believe that if we are always doing something we can accomplish more than we can imagine.

First of all, you should never give up on something, it might not work the first time but if we are working consistently on it, one day it will became a reality. For example, when I started 11th grade I was not doing well in Chemistry. I remember each day getting into the class and always starting with a warm-up about moles. The teacher gave us about ten minutes to solve the problems because they were easy, however; I always got almost all of them wrong. Almost all my classmates knew how to solve them, so I was too embarrassed to ask question in front of the class. My friend who's also in Chemistry, understood how to do those problems and much more about chemistry, so I asked her to help me. With her help

I was able to do the problems on my own because she taught step by step on how to do them. As a result, my grades improved a lot. If I'd decide to just let it passed I would've never been able to see how far I could have gotten get if I always keep trying.

Second of all, you should always go as far as you can, never stop at on point just because you think is worthless or you're are not going to make it. For example, the women who's my manager at a fast food restaurant she started as a employee. Most of the coworkers told her that it was going to be challenging for her to be a manager .They were trying to make her stop doing something she wanted to do for her future, they told her to just stay there and see what happens next. Instead, of listening to what people were saying, she worked really hard and accomplish a lot more than she could be able of. If you really want to make something happen, you should always have to work for it, and not think it will just happen as a miracle.

Third of all, some people may argue that doing something over and over again will never work, however; many people are able to prove that this statement is not true. For example, in a TV show about a girl who was always working toward getting into collage failed many times, but she never gave up. Because of her hard work and desire to keep working no matter what, one day she got accepted into a really privileged collage. By always doing something and never giving up is the key to accomplish everything.

To conclude, in order to get something you should never stop working for it. Most celebrities and rich people are where they're now because they always are doing something to make their dreams true and if at one point they had stopped I don't think they would've been successful. This world is full of opportunities but only those who always are working and never stopping are able to take advantage of it. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
410D72D3CCE8,"Great people had discovered great things for us and if it was it because of them, our community wouldn't be the same. It has been said that to be yourself in a world that constantly try to make you someone else is the greatest thing yourself can do and accomplish. Personal thoughts and opinions agree with this statement and proof to be real with articles and autobiography of examples from successful people.

First one of the reasons of being yourself is better than being controlled is to think in about someone who has already accomplish something. An example can be: Nicolas Tesla, Martin Lutherking, Neil Armstrong, and Albert Einstein. They all have done a something that changed everything, not only their life but everyone's life. Being controlled by the government to go to school and do what they want will not help in life goals; to be successful the community have to achieve their goals to make a change.

Furthermore being yourself will help in self confidence and will help in life accomplishments. For example, big man with an opportunity to work with a company much superior than his, has to go to a conference to talk about bussines, his self confidence isn't really well supported and he ruined the conference because of it. All successful people have something in common and its having self confidence. It will help you in real world challenges, and being what a person is everyday is the best thing to do.

In the other hand, the community keep its way having trouble to live and following the government's ""help"". Only people with great disciplinary actions can success with this help and its why people keep following what they say to do. In Virginia there are a lot of public schools, they all teach the same thing and have the same exams. This is the same school 10 years ago and people have goals that cannot be accomplished because of school limitations.

In conclusion, Reading at all the people who has accomplished something for them and for us the key to be successful is that community have to change its way to accomplish goals and to not only depend on schools that will not teach us how to life after school is finish. Depending on government is not the way to be successful. Self confindese will make successful people as well as goals.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
DC247D62DB3E,"Why do people need to follow their own instincts and ideas?

I think people should make their own decision because they have to follow their own instincts and their own ideas. They have to believe themselves because if you not believe on you ,so no one can believe on you too.

First of all,I think people should make their own decision because they have to believe on themselves. They don't have to think as much because the ideas come from their mine not from someone else. When they have to think of some ideas that mean their don't have to ask ideas from anyone. When they have to do some writing that mean they don't have to copy from someone or from internet.

Secondly,I think people have to follow their own instinct because when something happen to you that mean you don't have to wait for someone to help you solve a problem. They don't have to seek for guidance because you have confidence in yourselves already.

In addition,They have to believe on themselves because if you not believes on you by the way no one can't believes on you too. For example,like when you have to do a presentation in class and you have to present in front of teacher but you not believes that you can do it, so it mean the teacher might not believes on you too. After that is might effect to your grade because when you have to present you keep asking teacher that you say the right thing or wrong.

Conclusion,I believes that people should make their own decision because they have to believes on themselves first before they ask for some help. They have to believes on themselves because if you not believes on you by the way no one else can't believes on you too. Lastly I hope all people believes on themselves first because if you just listen to someone else but you not listen to yourselves that mean you not have enough value.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
DA8E64EC1304,"I think the tecthnology is helping to every people in the world and this has s positive effect on people because using tecthnology is an easier and faster way to do something. For example if you want to apply for a job you don't have to got to the office to get an aplication you can do it online.

Another positive effect of the tecthnolog is that we can at home and shop online. There are many app and website to shop online and they bring your thing at home they left the thing on your door of your hause, if you want adelivery faster you can pay ore money. So, the is an easy way to shop using tecthnology.

The tecthnlogy is a very comun way to way to contact our family or friends because we can call or send a mesage to the. So, there are many way to contact the people. We can do it in videos game too. Finally the tecthnology is havin a goog and positive effect on people and is very helfull too. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
A28E9B475935,"My mother always said, ""You will never learn if you stay at home, go to school to learn more things."" Math, English, history, and science are some classes that students need to learn. If students take classes from home, then student will not learn so they will not benefit from it. Students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because student will gain less exercise, students will get less social communication, and student will be less focus.

Many claim, students will benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because they will feel more comparable. However,students will not learn anything even if they feel more comparable at home. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home.

To begin, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise. For example, Generic_Name, who attend classes at home before, said that he will get less exercise, now that he goes to school he gets more exercise than before. To further detail, two friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, both attend classes at home before, they would both say that they would gain very little exercise before going to school. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will gain less exercise.

Additionally,students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication. For example,

Generic_Name, a girl who use to attend classes at home, would not communicate much with other students at first, after some time she is able to communicate with other students. To further detail, Generic_Name, would talk very little to other students because he use to take classes at home, after a while he would talk to other students. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because students will get less social communication.

Lastly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home because student will be less focus. For example, Generic_Name ,a student who attend classes at home, had to difficult time focusing on the lesson at home, some later she began to understand the lessons. To further detail, Generic_Name had a terrible time focusing on the lessons when he toke classes home, he said that his surrounding was very distracting. Clearly, students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from at because student will be less focus.

To concluded, student will gain less exercise, have less communication experience, and will be less focus on lessons are reasons why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes at home. These three argument state why students will not benefit if they are able to attend classes from home. If students attend classes at home then student will not learn a home. There is one option: students should not attend classes at home.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
2DFC9CC1793A,"I agree that loser can try to achieve success their are many types of loser who try and get success in around the world like in school some student can't pass the sol and some student pass quick in one time, but the loser who fail the sol first time he gonna try to achieve and pass in second time because every old man say never give up do it whit hard work, and do whit your heart then the success will come to you essylry.

Next, to be honest a lot of success can harm you because they can'tcontrol them self and invest their money anywere like in casino in Alcohol,Druges, and all that can harm your feature like your kides gonna be have so much money he will get everything what he need sport Car, nice House, so he will think i dont have to do anything he dose'nt have the stress on his mind to do somthing in life in small age he will smoke Cigrate and Drink Alcohol.

Then, if you control your success in right position your feature gonna be amazing like obama he is the Presedent of United State of America he have a so much power in his hand to do anything, but the most important thing is he know how to use that power he have big coltrole on his success he also have lot of money,but he don't have any bad habit like Drug or somthing he also made his feature good and he say to his two daughter he say to them go and find work for your self you guys can dependenton me you have to satnd on your legs and show the world what you can do every.

On the other hand, big example of the presedent of India first he was on the street he selling tea and he dose not have enough money to study,but luck is most important in our life his luck chang and he is the presedent of india he did so much stragle and hard work in his life and get success,but he don't have any controle on his success and he invest money on useless things and people in india say he is not a good for

India people hat him he higher the cost of fule,food,elericety,rent and more, and if he had the controle on his success India was gonna be like America.

Finilly, I campare both American and Indian presedent and see the success and failure power in my opinion the United State of America have the success controle power that's why people like to leve there and they also like there presedent,and India dose not have success power that's why people dose'nt like presedent,and they don't want to leve their, so this is the power of success if you use carefully you good but if you don't you die.              ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
998DA357F910,"Hello students my name is Generic_Name. Today we will be doing basketball lesson for P.E class. Basketball is one of the best sports, it's also fun to play with friends. So we are going to do some basketball moves the frist basketball move were going to do is the crossover. the crossover is the greatest move in basketball history. frist thing you have to do is move the ball to your right and then swich it to your left as fast as you can.

The next move is around the back, you pretty much have to do is move the ball around your back and then you're done simple as that.

Now we're going to talk about stories about the greatest basketball players, that was used to be in the NBA. The frist man we're going talk about is Kobe Brant, who used to play with L.A

Lakers, and won fore champions chip games. He was the player in the leage no one can stop him, people call him The Black Mamba because he was too fast. The real thing about him is he's a father, a porducer, and he has his own basketball school called Mamba acadme. He teaches good lesson like we did before. But sad news about him is that he died on a helacopter crash in Febary 17, 2020. some of his kids were in the helacopter carsh too. Kobe died in the age of 41 and people never sad that this happen.

The next basketball player we're going to talking about is Lebron James which he's still in the leage. He only won three champion chip games, and play for only two teams. Lebron used to with the team called Clevlond Cavalers, then he went in the Mimai Heat. Leborn James is now playing in the L.A Lakers that kobe used to be in. People name him King James because he was the best at doing every thing. That means he's good at offence, defence, he a lot of adwords. But thats not just the real him,

he's a father, loves to work out, and he teaches his son to be a good basketball player.

This next story is not about a famous basketball player, this story is about me. When I was young I always love waching great basketball players so I got my ball and just start praticeing basketball moves. I was doing jump shots, lay up's I was doing every thing. At my high school year I play for the schools team Generic_Name, we won a lot of games but we only won one champions and then the other games we kept loosing. But it dosent matter about wining what matters is how hard you play.

So in conclosoion they all have in common guys. like were Kobe teaches his kid to work hard and thats the same way that we did to. Rember to always lisent to your teacher and consentrate on their lesson that there giveing to you, so you can do the lesson correctly.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
0C1EDBE2EEC3,"They said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, I disagree with that. I believe it's possible to change your first impression. First impressions are almost always: wrong, judgmental, or they are assumptions.

I'd like to say that I, Generic_Name, have had first impression on classmates, teachers, and strangers. They usually end up being wrong about that person, and end up being a totally different person than expected.

First impressions are 80 percent always judgmental. They judge the person by what they wear, by what they look like, and by the way they act. I for example was non for being a trouble maker in middle school and when I started my freshman year of high school, I was non as a quiet kid for a while. Reason being is because i was too nerves sent it was my first year in a much bigger school. After a while, my classmates started to get to know me a bit more and realized how much of a troublemaker I was.

Whenever I saw a new need student in the schools that i have gone to, I would always assume by the way they dressed, looked and acted. This year there was a girl, lets call her Generic_Name. Generic_Name would wear hunting clothing, had glasses and looked funny.

One day I made fun of her and she went off on me. She told me her life story and I felt bad and apologized for what I said. Now I look back to this story and remind myself to try my best to not assume too much about a best.

In conclusion

I stilll believe that first impressions can be changed. You just have to open up and express yourself, telll people your life story like if it were a book. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
C3E499B46594,"Althogh some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Nevertheless is it not a good idea for students, because they tired more early, bring more focus on some classes but not in the others, and they not take a break on summer.

They can be tired more early because some time they worry for the work that they have . For example, students pass more time study and not take a break. Most students going to school sleep because in the night they study for exams, or make some proyect that they left. most of them have many homework and they not finish on time because they are tired and need to sleep to going with energy on the school though they are not finish the homework. In concept the students need more time to make the school work because if they take the offer to graduate in three years they need to give everything on time.

Most of them bring more focus on some classes that others because they think that some classes are more important and the others not. Nevertheless the grades can be going down for the reasons that the students not put attention on classes, or not make the work. Also they need to make the work of the all classes because that importan, and all classes they need for graduate. This can be give them problems if they not make anything for they grades going up because if they have bad grades they can not graduate in three years. Clearly the students forget the importan that all classes are for graduate.

The students not take a break on summer because they want to going the summer school for make more classes. For example, they make this for graduate more early but, they do not have time for they family or for the work. Many time they need to work on summer and this affect most students, they going the school in the morning and the night they work. some families going anothers countries for vacation and the students can not going for the reason that they need to stick for study. Clearly going on summer school affect students but, this can be help for advance classes.

In conclution some school help students to graduate more early like in three years. The students can be tired because they want to make the more importans classes, but this is more hard. They bring more focus in the importants classes and the others classes not. Most of them need to going on summer school because they need to pass the classes. For all students the graduate is it importans, but everyone need to take the time in the school an have good grades when they are ready to graduate this is more importan. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
D325C8F858F6,"A group of students have skill to take decisions, there're a lot way to do, students can react to any problem, but work alone can be good as a group, people who like work alone have abilities: reasoning, recognize, and expression. Groups were created to share ideas. Therefore, it's not bad get help from other people, everyone say, "" two head think better than one.""

Groups make different way to share or send a message, a few people can create a lot, base in their share of thoughts, abilities, and decisions. Groups have the most of attention in this case. Elsewhere, work alone is base in just you, and what you know, if something that you did it, come to be wrong, you will not share it. If people who like work by their self can't support ideas with reasoning, can't do a perfect project. the change of ideas always will be a good work and the can support your reasons, why you had make it.

Work in group include: less work, time, and money, back to work alone you have your own words, spend a lot of your time more than you think, also could take too much time to finish. To different of groups students can do other activities. The group help to students to learn and combine new thought from other students. Friends can help to get a correct answer or do a good work.

The important of groups is that students learn to share, help, and be kind with other students make a friend, besides that learn, help, and teach to other, they make fun their work. work alone give stress and that show someone who want to make everything by his\herself they share their own ideas. Sometimes work alone can be a good choice, because is you're wrong, you can't blame to nobody.

In conclusion, I believe that groups are more helpful for students, because they learn to take other decision and compare. About work alone, I'm not agree, because you try to do something, maybe that's good, but you're not count with other ideas, expressions, or declaration of other thought. In my opinion is more beneficial working in groups that show us compare, analyze, and be friendly with others.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
BEE04EB31D59,"What is the best leaning environment? Working in groups or working alone? Some people like to work in groups and others like to work alone. Many people have their ways of learning certain things. Some may like working in groups because it makes the work easier, bring up their confidence and social life. Others may like working alone because it helps people concentrate, they like to get their work done faster and they don't feel uncomfortable towards other people.

First, Working in groups might make the work easier, help bring up their confidence, or their social life. It can make their work easier by separating the work to make it faster to deal with the work. It can help bring their confidence by talking to other people. It can help them bring courage to make new friends and learn about each other. It can also help them with their social life. Instead of being on their phones they are learning together and getting work done. They are also getting to know each other.

Second, Working alone can help people concentrate in their work, they could be fast workers, and they don't feel uncomfortable towards new people. It can help them by concentrating in their own work to feel more comfortable with themselves. They could be fast workers because they are not being distracted and they can go on their own speed. They won't feel uncomfortable or awkward by other people because some people don't like meeting or being with people. Most of them just want to be alone or with people they might know.

All in all, find what you feel more comfortable with it could be being alone or being in a group to study with people you might want to get to know or with your friends that your comfortable with. Working alone is the best choice for most people because they might be able to work faster, they are fully concentrated in their own hard work and they might just feel comfortable with themselves.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
72732FD01203,"""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"".

In my opinion, I agree with this quote because, if you do not try to do better everyday, you are not going to reach your purpose. When you have the experience, on doing something you have to keep doing it, and you will improve each day. If you keep working on something that you have already work on it, and you don't stop focused on, it will make you grow. The more things you learn the more prepared you will be in your life.

My first reason that support my response, is that if you don't keep trying to do better everyday, you are not going to complete your goal. If you keep trying your best and doing what you like to do you will grow each day. Its important that you try your best everyday not only you will grow in your life but you are going to make yourself proud as well. For example, some people have their goals but they don't try their best.

My second reason that support my response is that when you have the experience on doing something you most keep doing it, and you will improve each day. Every time you try to improve, its a good opportunity for you to grow. The experience you have will make your future better. If you work on something that you have already work on it, and you don't stop focused on it will make your life easier. The more you work on something the fastest you will see the different in your life. For example, in my experience every time I know how to do something and I keep practicing, on it I get to improve myself.

My third reason that support my response is that the more things you learn the more prepared your will be in your life. If you try to learn more things and not just stay focused in just one thing will make you to be able to grow. Everyday you most have the purpose of learning new things. Learning new things each day, makes a person specialized and all the things you know. For example, in my experience when I try to learn more about something, its easier for me to talk about it.

To conclude, I agree with the author Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement. The more you know about something, the best future you will have. If you focused on doing good everyday you will grow. Trying to do something you have experience with will make you grow. Working on your purpose will make you have a better life.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0AB62AE1C13F,"Having to learn from the experiences of others. It may help you participate in school activities, and learn new information.

My first reason is that you can try new things. If you hear that your friend participated on a school activity, and keeps talking about what they experienced , and you found it interesting. You can try joining a school activity and experience the fun time that they had in the activity.

My last reason is that you can learn new things. If you hear about the math program in school and students kept talking about what they learned and how fun it was. You can get intrested and you will want to join the math program and experience what they experienced you might learn some new informations.

I think it is important to learm from the experience of others. It may help you join a school activity, and learn new information. If you try new things like other people you are not going to regret it, because you are trying new things that will have benefits.                             ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
FBE9FF521DD1,"Should the students work alone or work in group.

Students should work in group because they are going to have more ideas, they can help each other and, they can prepare their self for the future.

Student should work in group because they are going to have more ideas. For example the student can share ideas of the work with the group. Student have a different mining of the topic and they more ideas about how to do the work. And the student have different point of view, so they are going to share the ideas to the group to finish the work more faster. In conclusion student should work in group because they are going to have more ideas.

Students should work in group because they are going to receive more help. For example if a student do not understand the work other group member can help them so that they can understand. If the teacher do not have the time because she is helping others student to help a group member they can support each other. And the student have different ways to do the work so they can help each other to finish the work more faster. In conclusion the Students should work in group because they are going to receive more help.

Student should work in group because the student are going to prepare for the future. For example when they get out of school, and they have to work in a office with a group of people they are going to have the experience to share ideas and get and give support. When the student have a family they are going to support each other with the family member to solve any problem that they have in the way. In conclusion the Students should work in group because the student are going to prepare for the future.

Student should work alone because they are going to their work independence, however; It is better to work in group because students can help each other.

In conclusion for me the student in the school should working in group because they are going to have more ideas, more help and, they can prepare their self to the future.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
04E1A9EE5BE1,"If you image the world student stay home take online class? that be great for student are most sake can not go to school but online class is big help for sake or in the hospital. they are people hoe have problem like have cancers or harder dazes is not harm full anyone student in school. but some student they say their is no problem to not to come school if you sake or not you have come to school. but they are range because they do not hate to go school they body is not strong handily jar mes in and get sake al the time and school allowing ha very to can take online class but they have pay. but student way not free because student hoe are sake pay all the class and they can not play any sport, your student can come to great full of your parent.

do have thing in their power sand ache one to school .

very I was 5 year old choke cold toke my my parent,

I do not wont to go school star cry Generic_Name hurt van my gram father hired what i say come to and say stop cry eat your maidens and go to school way do not wont go school to day then and gram father told me a story van gram father was younger he told me van he in school they wore no online class and they some people van can go to because my gram father harder and harder and that but still he harder to bake a doter. then in end i go to school think what my gram father la cone he throne me

THINK ABOUT

it was long time age now my 18,

I great full my gram father what he.

Teacher me non

I realize what he mate education is harder get stay home ,Wii not give anteing in end it does not batter if you take online class or not you take normal class if you but some time think way you come fun or wife, friend you are not think if online class doing wok get machine you do it later you not think about what is amount in the end they two lines to go can to light or dark that you live some one think they family and they love and wont bake something that make they family prod and go to collage live a happy live with family.",2.0,1.5,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5
F7B655834981,"she is not to bring a phones in school because it is the school and you do not a phones to you get in t and get at school you cult get call home and you get a big and you cum to for a mouth ,you we be other lunch .or you do not cum you we be achubll and i wuld call your mom to tell you to cum . and stop testing went you are tollking and you are going to get a teket stop testing well be stop you well be in a cold and you well be stop. you would stop .would be stop and you. do not have allo w students to have phoneat school at all.",1.0,1.5,1.5,1.5,2.0,2.0
E4051C85D12E,"If we think about the words that the British Prime Minister Wiston Churchill sait "" succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" There is a lot of truth is this words well that is what I believe. So how important is the role that failure plays in the process to reach success and don't loss enthusiasm in the proccess? In my opinion it is very important because it make us gain experience, improve our skills, and it make you feel comfortable and happy at the end.

Les't think about how you feel when your staring in the proccess to reach a new goal that you propose to youself it could be hard at the begin, because is your first time in that enviroment and maybe you have none experience there, and that could make you to fail some times and could be desesperate to you.

you or people migth say, "" this is not for me,"" because you already fail a few time and you think but is just the beginc how will be the future. That could make you loss enthusiasm, but if you think what happend when you keep going with all this fails you're gaining a lot of experience during that proccess. For example, when I star to study at Generic_School it was a big change for me staring with the lenguage, because I came from a coutry of Spanish speakers and here the official lenguage is English, so I remember that in the begin my English was really poor, and I just knwe a few words in English like good morning or the name of some school's supplies, but everytime I did something wrong I learnd something new from that mistake wich make me gain experience in the proccess of my English learning. Even if sometimes is embarasing to say or spell worng a word infront of people you will be learning to do it rigth with the time. Therefore we should see the fails as a good oportunitie to gain more experience.

Most of the time you will notice some changes in yourself while you're reaching some goal, I'm talking about the change on your own skills. That could be maybe improve some skills that you already had before or in the best of the cases developing a new one. Using the last example that I used, when I star to learn English I remember that my speaking was the most hard part for me, because is hard to think a word first in Spanish and then traslate that word in to English and also spell that word correct just on your mind. Sometimes I started a sentence but then I couldn't finish it. That was so embarrassing for me, but with the time that problem has been decreased not all, but now is not like the begin. Sometimes that happend to me again when I'm doing presentation or when I'm imfront of nwe people that i have never met. But I feel that the practice has been helping me to decrease that problem and now is easier for me to speak with some body in English at school or in my job . Even if you feel bad or embarrassing to fail with the time that will help. You can be improving skills or even descoviring new ones while you fail that is part of the whole proccess of reach success.

Maybe for some people the fact of fail is the worst thing that can happend to them in the proccess to reach success some of them could say,"" You have to do perfect if you want to reach your goals,"" but I think that we can not do perfection without failure. Failure is a big and les't say importnat part of reach success. Have you ever heard the words , "" No pain, No gain,""

I like that words, because reminds me how good feels when you reach a goal in wich you speend a lot of time or maybe hard work.

For example, when you have a big test at school and you have been studing for that test all nigths for a week or even more and the day of the test you know all the anwers for that test and you got an A or A+ as a grade that feels so good and comfortable to you. Just because of your hard work you are getting all this good grades that you gain by yourself. That is one of the best sensations that you can ever feel or experiment. Using my example agin I can say that all the result of my hard work that I have done helping me to get good gains in my English developing .

Not matter howmany times you fail the last feeling is best in the world. Because is the result of all your hard work. Sometimes I remember how hard was for me to star school in a differnt country, but when I see that I'm about to garduate and get my High School diploma it reminds me all the hard work that I have done during this almost 2 years that I have studing here in Generic_School.

It could sound bad when you hear the word failure or fail when your trying to reach a goal, but if you think we should see all the forms that this words have. Success is not all about fail there is more. We have to go deeper into that words. As I said fail is a big and important part in the way to reach a goal. Success is a big proccess with branches and one of this branches is the failure. But failure give us more than we think. it give us experience that could prepare us for future problems or future goals, it also prepare or improve your skill and even if you don't have one you could descover one that you didn't notice, and finally, but no less important the comfortable feeling that give you at the end is incredible because remind you all the hard work that you have done. So I think if you don

't want to lloss enthusiasm during the proccess of reach success you shouldn""t see the word failure as it is you should go deeper in to try to understand the important role that it plays in the pursuit of success. I just mencion three reasons here but there could be more than three just don't think that just because you fail is the end of the world instead see how failure could help you to reach that important goal your or success. I hope all the time that I've fail in my English speaking will help me to in the future became in a perfect bilingual speaker having my home lenguahge Spanish and my new home lenguage English.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0
D9FA943B5453,"Should schools control the involvement of extracurricular activities, or should extracurricular activities be left to student and their families? Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study or complete homework assignments. Extracurricular activities can affect a student but also can help students. Extracurricular activities should be left to the students and their families because students would do something they like, and students will concentrate more in class.

First reason why extracurricular activities be left to the students is because, student would be doing something they like. For example, the student chooses a activities they like such as soccer:they would be having fun without stressing out over school or any other problem going on. Many student wouldn't like for the school to put them in a activity they dont like. In fact, many students would prefer to not be in a activity they do not like, than being in the activity they dont like.

Second reason why extracurricular activities should be left to students is because, it would make them concentrate in classes more. For example, many activities require to have good grades to be part of it. Student would focus more in class and work harder to get good grades. This would make the student look good but also the school for having students who out reach others. Having good grades is important when being in any other activity because the student would have to manage their time for school,activities, and homework.

In conclusion, students and their family should be able to control what the student take or not take. If schools were to control what a student can take student would be who they are. They will also not care about the activity and start not caring about their grades. Student would also be happy and calm not having to worry about something they dont enjoy doing. Students are still growing more and more;

the more students we have which means more students to be happy. Student shouldnt be forced to take something they dont enjoy because they wont learn anything from it if they dont like that.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
CDBB3ACAD2C8,"Honesty is a good policy because you are being strong, even thought honesty can hurt some people. I also feel that you are being responsible,mature enough to tell the truth. Some people can't be honest sometimes and that's okay because not everybody is the same, we all are different. I will say I like honesty because I don't like when people are not honest with me, so that's why I like to be honest with them. If they are not honest with me than that's totally fine, I'm not going to force them on being honest with me. But in the other hand I will have to agree being honest is a good thing to do. You never know what could happen if you lie an any case. I could disagree but I won't because people need respect and I'll show them that I can be honest with anybody. Honesty is good, It might help others think good, different in a way, but smart. I know how people feel when they tell a lie and I don't feel comfortable with it, at all. Aproving to this is good, why? why because people will like to be honest to, and they need to learn how to do it. They need to let go of shy, and be confident, agree with yourself if you will like to be honest. If you don't, then don't push your self, If you don't want to be honest and hurt somebodys feelings is okay, it all happens. But we still have to be respecful to others and all treat them the same. Like I said I will like to be honest with others so they can know how I feel about stuff or how I feel in my own way. I'm not trying to be mean if i'm honest, I'm just letting it go how I feel. But don't just go to others and say how you feel about them because that is just really disrespectful. It's good to be honest to your parents because they have always been there for you. Be honest with your friends, they are like siblings to you, they won't judge. Be honest with the people you trust or see them hurt an any type of way, help them feel happy, grateful, they will appreciate it alot, seeing that you stood up for them, that you helped them do something succesful. trust me they will be greatful. you are being productive. People will appreciate it alot if you help someone close to them, they'll see you are one of a kind! Just be honest with people and if they might hurt others feelings, try to say it in a nice way, don't be mean to them. And if they get it, they will like that you were being honest with them. Because you are just letting go what you think and you want to help them on whatever it was, So that's why I agree being honest is a good thing!",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
12F89E196E97,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are actually doing."" Idle refers to people who are not busy or keeping themselves occupied to their powers or implements. You would think being inactive serve a purpose, but personally i think it does not. To be occupied gets you to accomplish a lot in life. People who do not keep themselves busy tend to not get far in life.

In other words, to not be engage in work or activity is a very poor thing;there could be plenty of opportunities for you, but just because you are inactive you could miss these awesome opportunities. When we lack the ability to work or to keep ourselves occupied we are being inadequate. People who do not push or work themselves never actually really make it anywhere in life. Therefore, if we are always ""doing"", we will not fail to meet our expectations. If athletes were never idle or always ""doing"" some of them would of never made it in life.

However, inactivity does not serve a purpose because when you are inactive or simply not doing anything you miss out on what life has to bring you. We would accomplish so much if we always kept ourselves busy neverless. People who lack strength or courage are inactive. So when teachers say use your time wisely they are telling you to be Idle. It is wonderful when you are doing, being active, or pushing yourself because when you do these things you never miss out on any opportunity.

Lastly, when you are Idle you serve a purpose for yourself, family members, and you encourage others around. People who are active push themselved to do better. Being active can get you a good job because people will speak highly of you and recommend you to others. You ever heard of ""hard work makes the dream work"" when you put yourself to work anything is possible. Your peers around you will look up to you because you get stuff done and it would push them to do as you do.

In conclusion, Thomas Jefferson says when you are determined never to be Idle you serve no purpose and you are determined to get knowhere in life. Keeping yourself occupied can get you to places in life where you thought you could never be because you are putting the effort. People who move with no purpose are called lazy people these people do not accomplish as much as those who work. Thomas Jeffersom is right to be Idle is wonderful to those who put in the effort and try their best no matter what. Anything is possible as long as you are always at work.",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
863550AEB938,"I agree, they should adopt the 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew. Parents wouldn't be worrying all the time, kids would be focusing more on school, and curfew could teach kids how to be more responsible. Teenagers mostly want to go out and have fun with their friends. Teens are more outgoing when their around their friends. Teenagers might even be disrespectful to their parents if they don't let them go out. Teenagers should feel more grateful because of this curfew law.

Parents are mainly worried about where their children might be because nowadays there are so many things going on in society and we might not even know. That's why parents would feel like it's a great idea for the city council to put this new law. When parents let their children go out with their friends they usually tell them a time they may go and a time to come back. Most of the time kids don't even listen to their parents and they just come back at whatever time they want, but if they put this law parents wouldn't feel as worried as they usually do when they let their children go out. Kids would actually listen to what their parents are telling them and not just leave and come back at whatever time they want like if they didn't have parent's. Society now is really dangerous compared to back then because theres a lot of kidnapping, even killing teenagers. Now the fact that they brought this law parents might start to feel relived because they know that if their children are out on the streets after ten p. m. then they will get caught by the police and they'll have to face their actions.

If they put the 10 P.M. curfew law. Kids would go home early to their parents. Kids would go to sleep early. If teenagers would go to sleep early they would be getting a good night sleep and also they would probably not be falling asleep in class most of the time and actually paying attention in class. Teenagers sometimes think it's not important to learn like if it isn't important. Thats why they go out with their friends and forget theres even school the next day, but their wrong. We indeed need school to educate ourselves and so we can be a better person in the future. There are so many things teens can avoid so they can focus in their school and grades, but sometimes we make poor decisions by not listening to the adults.

Curfew teaches teens to be more responsible. They learn how to manage time and see if they can make it on time because if they don't. They know their going to get in trouble. Teenagers shouldn't be in the streets after 10 P.M. and if they are then its probably not something good their doing. Teens could avoid getting in trouble by the cops or anything by simply going home. Sometimes teenagers like to learn the hard way instead of the easy way. If they don't listen after they've been told a million times then they have to face their consequences. Teens should look at this new law as protection from not getting hurt or anything harmful.

In conclucion, If they choose the ten p. m. curfew hopefully teenagers start listening and respecting the time their parents want them home. Hopefully theres a change in teenagers learning in school, and on how responsible they are. Hopefully they know how to manage their time around their friends and not get in trouble. They should be more considerate about how much their parents worry about them every time they go out and anywhere they are at. At the end of the day this is only doing the best to help teenagers from being in any type of trouble. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
AA2191D8D24E,"In the United States the use of technolgy had positive affects on people's lives. If people dont use technology it would be hard to do the stuff people usually do. People can get a job by using technology, shop, and talk to each other no matter where they are. Now days people can't live without technology because it had made their life easier and it is hopefull to everyone who works, who goes to high school and, also if you stay at home. Technology allows people to do many tasks without having contact with others.

Now days to find a job, people do not go to the companies and ask for an application. They use technology to make a resume and just wait on what the companie is going to say. It is easy for people who doesn't have transportaion,

they can get a job by staying at home and use technology. People who works far away from their house need transportation if they want to call the boss they need a cellphone or something that has something to do with technology. when technology didin't exits it was hard for people.

Technology helps people to shop by just using the internet, now days we have a lot of stores that people only can buy stuff by using the internet and it is good because if someone want something they just need to use the phone and go to a store application. Over 98% people around the word use technology to shop. If people shop online they're not going to loose a lot of money because the prices that they have are good. this is really hopefull to a lot of people and to people who play games the internet is a good setting to nuy.

technology helps people to talk to each other no matter where they are, it is know that our planet is big and people lives all around the word, some people don't have the opportuntie to travel to see their family, friends and get to know more about our culture, but now that peole has technology it is easier because you can talk to peole that is on the other side of the world, you can get to know more about our culture just by looking at pictures or videos or you can do stuff without speaking to another person.

technology has helped people a lot in everything day do every day, if people stay one day without technology they are going to see the diference of having technology and not having it. becuase if you go to your job you use it, if you go to school you use it, of course people can live without it but is going to be harder to do the stuff we usually do, that is why people continue making more and more technology to make adiference in our planet and to make people's lives easier.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
AEDDD593BF0F,"Ralph Waldo Emerson is the author. He wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" I agree with his statement. Because he didn't give up to write a statement. For example, Generic_Name wanted to give up for the driving lesson. But Generic_Name thought, ""If I am not gonna take the driving lesson anymore, I can't go far anywhere."" So, he didn't give up and took the driving lesson. After that, he got a driver's license. After he got a driver's license, he can drive anywhere. He drives very well after he took the driving lesson.

Another example, Generic_Name wants to be a scientist. So, she is studying a science. Also, she is doing lab with the experiment materials in the laboratory. But, there are many hard science problems, and experiment materials. So, she wants to give up, and get another job that can do easy way. But, she decided to don't give up for her job. So, she didn't give up to be a scientist. She studied hard, and researched how to succeed in the experiment. After she did that, she got a job scientist. She realized, ""If I give up, I can't do something later."" So, she is doing hard for her job, scientist.

When you give up, it will be hard to succeed, and get the benefit.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.5
1F4961D46D29,"Imagination Over Mind

Imagination it's what sparks our creativity. Without imagination, knowledge means nothing because we wouldn't be able to come up with anything. How we create intricate characters and stories and how incredible buildings stand tall. This is due to imagination and how we come up with such things. Take a second and think of your favorite character from any source of media. They were created because someone imagined them and brought them to life. Imagination is all around us from our stories and music to our basic everyday items. That pen on your desk was imagined up to be able to write and pass along information.

For ages people imagined stories and people listened. People and imagined plays,movies,books,TV and video games all with different stories and design. These things may seem insignificant, but people adore these stories and have been inspired. They have been mesmerized by these worlds and characters. Imagination is what leads people to create these stories. These stories have taught us messages and life lessons also. They inspire us to be best version of our self and to follow our dreams, as we see the characters do. We grow close to characters and relate with them, making these stories more special to us. Imagination gave us inspiring role models and heroes, they also gave us a childhood. How we wait to see our favorite cartoon and smile with excitement waiting for the next adventure to unfold. Imagination gave life to unforgettable characters, how Walt Disney created Micky Mouse and countless other. These characters and stories aren't just for children but adults as well. Stories of all genres exist to bring new experiences and worlds to the audience. Imagination gave us stories to inspire,scare,to make us laugh or even cry for the character. Imagination gave life to countless of stories something knowledge could never do alone.

From the Eiffel Tower to an small little house, people imagined buildings and ways to construct them. It's true you need to understand and know how to build but imagination is more important. Imagination is what let us think of such designs. Even in ancient times people put imagination and knowledge to build a house. Whether it's building a mud house or straw hut people imagined putting all of it together and put it in action. How people designed cars for transportation and made it function properly. Engineers are creative and imaginative to come up with such intricate designs and models. Even everyday objects were imagined and made to help you in everyday life. Whether it's a juicer to a wrench, people imagined these things to serve a purpose. How biomechanics creates prosthetic arms and legs to help the disabled to move again. Theses things all started as thought to help society and now are a vital part in today society. Imagination is what led man kind to create items to help us in everyday life.

Music is an form of art where people express their emotions through song. Instruments were imagined for the sole purpose to create art. Then playing the instrument led to more creative thinking, then songs were imagined and instruments added to that. Songs are written with heart and they express the artists' emotions. They are imagined and written down, sometimes using metaphors to express their emotions. People say that they can say things through music that they couldn't say with words. Being able to imagine such meaningful songs that leave a such an impact on the listener is incredible. Music speaks to people in a way words can't and the artist that make them are imaginative people.

Imagination led these artist to produce such songs and music. Painting is an other form of imaginative art. These artist express themselves by using strokes of paint to produce vibrant works of art. Even though a painting is silent people speak through them to show such meaningful works of art. Artists imagine what they want to paint and execute and you can see such a passion in their works of art. Imagination inspires artist to create outstanding pieces of art.

Imagination also expresses itself in the way we dress and life style. For the most part we choose the way we dress,where we work and what we do. When not in uniform or work clothes we choose how we dress. We imagine ourselves a certain way and choose to expresses ourselves that way. Our hair and how we choose to style it also reflects our personality. Whether it's colored,straight,curly or even no hair at all. We also imagine what we want in our lives and choose to study for that career. Our hobbies and interest also show what kind of person you are. How you spend your free time is how you reflect yourself. Our appearance and hobbies are a self reflection of our imagination and who you are. Imagination makes you who you are, and that's what makes everyone a different person.

Imagination might not seem important but it's what allows people to create stories, construct buildings, create items,produce music,to make art and makes you. We need imagination even more than we need knowledge. Without imagination there wouldn't be a way to put our knowledge to use. Imagination is the fuel of the world, it's what keeps everything going. It may seem insignificant at first but imagination is so such more. Without imagination no advancements would be made. We need imagination to do almost everything life. Imagination is what makes us human. Imagination over mind.        ",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
7D1825E2F4AD,"Why should someone, tell people what matters in life , or what decisions to take?

Everyone has the opportunity to live however they want by taking the decisions they want , if they have self-reliance , they don't need no one to tll them what to do.

People should make their own decisios, even if they are not sure, because if they are making a mistake they can learn how to do it good, they will feel secure, which is impoirtant to take future decisions, and they can find out what matters in life by themselves.

People make a lot of mistakes in life by taking the wrong decision , but that's not bad , it is just a way to learn hot to do the things rigth, a lot of people look for experts when they have to take a important decision, because they are afraid of take the wrong decision, and there's nothing bad with it, but they should trust themselves before pay someone else to tell them what to do , or what decisions take.

When people take the rigths decisions by themselves they feel secure about what are they doing ,so they earn self-reliance to make future dedcisions, and even if people don't take the rigth's decisions , they learn from the mistakes, to take the corret decision in the future, with no help from the experts.

Why should someone else tell people what really matters in life ? People don't need guidance to find it out , they should take tehir time to analyze what really matters in life , they should take their own decisions about what matters , because people is different one from others , so they should take their decisions about what really matters in their lifes.

In conclusion people should take their own decisions ,because it helps them to feel secure when taking future decisions, they can learn from the wrongs decisions , and they can learn and understand what matters in life.",3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
EA8BE9778AA9,"On a human, the brain is the strongest part of their body. It control your body. Also, world's one of the biggest thing from a human brain is imagination. More than 100 years ago, people used their mind to build machines, planes, rockets, television , bridges, etc. Most of the things were build my their own imagination. Our world's one of the brilliant scientist of all time Albert Einstein said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I think that imagination is more important than knowledge in a lot of ways.

""Imagination""

is the power of mind to make something creative. Sometimes when you imagine something that you know you will do it no matter who stops you, It may come to real life and change the whole world. It can change a lot of thing in the world that you didn't thought of. For example: think that you designed a machine from your imagination about a robot maid who can help you to clean your house , do your laundry, make you dinner, washing the dishes, etc. From your idea, you made the robot and It worked just the you wanted it to work. And then your robot went to the market and the people brought it and loved the machine. How would you feel when you see your robot went viral in the world and people liking it? Your robot machine went from an a imaging thing to a big successful robot machine.

Also It helps your mind get stronger. When you thinking about anything, your brain is running from one place to another place to get the next task. In a human brain, we do 5% conscious and 95% unconscious things everyday. You are learning something new everyday, your brain collecting data based what you do in a everyday life basis. When you imaging something, your brain brings back the data from your past and puts it in your imagination. In that way,you know what you should in your imaginary work. Also, In that way your brain are becoming more conscious by your little thinking process and it's making your brain stronger everyday.

Imaginary can make you an open minded person. If you are good at imaging, when you are gonna talk to other people and they tries to explain you their situation, First, you will imagine yourself into that situation. Second, you will understand what they have been went through. Then you will think what should I do to make that person feel better. Next, you will give them some helpful advises that will make them better. If they feel safe around you, they will be more comfortable to tell more about them in future.

In conclusion, I think imagination is better than knowledge. It makes you a good person, It makes you open minded, It helps your brain to get stronger. And that way you will be able to help others'    ",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
F39FFFB63840,"I agree that failing plays a important role of success. Is because you can learn form your miss tack, you can understand why your keep failing and fix the problem, and you don't make a same miss tack again. However, I do see why some people don't think the same way. It because they don't want take a risk to fail at anything and no one want to admit that they failed on something. But it not as bad as you think, hears why.

First, everyone my miss tack and you can learn from that miss tack . For examples, when I failed to shot a goal, I what to know why I keep missing a goal. After a weal I learn how to properly shot it. A nuder examples are, my friend like to draw a person but he always have a problem to draw a hands. He try to learn why he keep failed to draw a hands and time go by, he finally learn how to draw a hands.

Then, you can understand why you keep failing and fix the problem. For instens, I always keep failing to payatensh, so I understand what was a problem and trying to fix that problem. A nuder examples are, when I keep reading I always keep miss pushing it . So I be reading thirty mines every day and it help me.

Lastly, you won't make a same miss tack again. For examples, when I found out that I failed my reading test I what to know what part that I miss, when I toked again I pass the reading test. A nuder examples are, when I made a miss tack to get a figure that almost filthy baler, and at the same time I have to pay my bills. So I learn my miss tack, at the time when I pay my bills I won't get a figure that almost filthy baler.

Inconclusun, failure is not as bad as you think, it can help you to success for instens you can learn form your miss tack, you can understand why your keep failing and fix the problem, and you don't make a same miss tack again. I hope you understand why failing plays a big role of success.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
0781753B768E,"I disagree i feel like everyone should have entilded of being whoever they want to be, or however they want to be. No one should be said or be told how to be something that they're not or dont want to be. Personally

I always try to be myself,stay positive and with head up even when people in this world are constantly Trying to bring me down, making me feel bad, not believing in me, or expecting me to change.

Sometime I get constantly brought down, when it comes to my emotion. My family is sometime judgemental. I get treated differently when it comes to my sister and I.

My sister are better when it comes to Education, Maturity, or being responsible in their eyes. I try my best as a person to prove them wrong.

I constantly feel bad because my parents tell me some thing that they might think it's not hurtful but it's more so an ""contrustive critization"". It's never enough for them, what I do.

Im the most productive in my house

I do everything before it's even asked.

Making sure the house look neat and organize. keeping my head up , and always prove them im better.

It's hard to live with people that always take you for granted and treats your differently, because you were born with a learning disability. Not being taking serious, getting treated as a little girl, Always being the one who is ""the problem"". Everyone is not perfect and we all try to better ourself, and move on. Making the best of it no matter if it is an matter of how much you know, you're worth it and you know much more you can give and proof.

That you can accomplish what you put yourself and mind to. Never giving up always looking high.

No matter how much people try to bring you down, you should always keep your head up. Keep fighting and prove everyone wrong. People might not always have something good to say or nice.

Never let no type of negativity get to your head, Stay positive at all cause always possible. The sky is the limit an no one can tell you otherwise.                       ",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
CC149CD4B584,"In this paragraph I will write about how students can take classes from their homes and if they are going to do good in the works that the teachers give to the students on online, talk to the cousolers or tho his admistrator, the students will have some benefit, Students will have benefits with the grades.

If the student offer distance learning, First he must have to talk to his counsoler about doing classes online and disscus with her about he can stay home and do the classes online. Second, the students have to take test before they do the classes online because the teachers or another people from the school can see if he really is going to do the work at home and be prepaed for all the work that the teacher will give to him/students. Finally, the teachers will see and talk to his counsoler or administrator if they do good in the test and see if they can saty at home and do the classes online also the teacher should give a recomendation to the students if they have to take classes online.

The students will have some benefits if they take classes online, First, the students obiasly will have benefit because they will be doing all work at home and they can ask for help to his/her brothers or sister at home and they can help to do the work and if they have a test in the class that he is taking he will pass because he can see the notes or some works that he finished before. Second, They will have benefit because they are not going to school and he can go out during the day and also do the work when they're out. Finally, Students also will have benefit because they can do the work whenever they want bacuse if they have the classes online at the computers is more easier for example, if they only have to take notes they only can see another attachment of the same thing and if they have a test they will see the notes or another paper about the test.

Students will have benefits with the grades. Firts, the students will have good grades because they will have a lot of time do the work that is assigment for the next day or the same day and they will be concentrate because they are going to be alone at home. Second, The students will have a lot of benefit in that because they can see some work abouth the assigment and have a 100 points in the assigment or if they have a project that the students who are in the school they only will have a hour to do it because the others teacher will give a lot of homework to them but the student whp is taking classes online he will have a lot of work too bute he will have all the day to do it or the next day.

In conclusion they can't take classes online because they will have a lot of benefits that the students who is going to school and they can sleep a lot and the regular student has to wake up early and they can't have benefit with grades or other benefits,

In my opinoin students should not to take classes online because that is going to be more easy than the stduent who take classes at school becuase the students who is in the school they are not going to have he same benefits as the students who take classes online.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
ACA08DBF39EE,"In my opinion, the students tanking to attend classes from home, by way of oline or video conferencing. I think the students not have benefit from being able to attent classes from home.

First, the students has more distraction in home; with vedeo play, and othe oction, more students work a time with taking a class, more with have a classes in distance, the schools need a tanking a other options. With lern in school the students are more specific learn, with a have a teacher opposite the student to learnig more specific, when she tanking the classes to has a more effective for a students.

Second, I hink this option for learning offer the class in distance wich a attend classes from home; not is a good option for example: in my house a have three brothers, and one sister, I think is distraction wich learning in home.

In finally; with reason with not is good idea the learning a distance the school, I think is more elementary, basic to taking the video conferencing online, because; learning more in the watch the vedeo conference, with online; is more effective memorize with the morning in not in evening, the students have forceful in the morning, but no think this is a good option for a students, not have a good benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

Conclucion; the students not taking the classes from the house or distance learning, but students learning more when she go to the schools. The parents thinks exactly whit me, because is most effective taking the classes in the schools, in not a distance the schols. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
6D6E937C3A67,"We do not choose our own character, if everyone gets to choose their own character nobody will have any bad people in this world, everyone would be full of good things because they will be able to pick their characteristics. If everyone had the same characteristics life would not be as good as it is now. Each person has different characteristics based on their culture, environment, childhood makes difference in their character. These are the three main reasons that differentiate people's characters, and makes them good in their own way.

Each person has had a different childhood which is an important part of people's characters. Childhood is very important because it is the the base of the building this is where person starts building their knowledge. Childhoods can effect kids when they grow up in a lot of different ways. A lot of teachers in the middle east hit their students when they do not do homework or get a bad grade on a test, this makes the students not wanting to go to school and hating school because they get hit in front of their friends, this does not give students enough confidence which is going to effect their characters in the future. Children who spend hours and hours on video game and making online friends, this make them anti-social people when they get older.

People's environment such as work place, friends has a lot of effects on their characters. If a person has a lot of bad friends that person's character is not gonna be the same as a person who hangs around with good friends, for example if a guy has friends who do drugs even if does not do them step by step they are going to get him to do it and that will start making changes in his character, on the other hand if a person has good friends who tell him let's go to the library to read or study that will have a positive effect on that person,s character. In work if a person is working and his manager yells at him that will lower his self confidence and have a negative impact on his character.

Culture has a big impact on a person's character in a lot of different ways. Culture is what is going on around the person and what he believes in or does not believe in. Sometimes cultures effect the person's character in good ways sometimes in bad ways. Culture makes people religious, pray and be good people. Sometimes culture does not give the person the freedom they need for example, in the middle east sex before marriage is not allowed which makes a lot of difference in peoples characters making them do secret stuff and not being able to communicate with the other gender because they are not even allowed to talk to each other because of culture.

In conclusion people do not get to choose their character. People's character is formed by a lot of different things such as environment, culture and childhood these are the most important to form a person's character. At the end of the day all characters are good in their own way, the difference between people is what makes them stand out and complete each other. This is a very important topic and it means a lot to me and other people Thank You for giving me the change to talk about it.       ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
FD22ECF287BD,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Many people can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person. Some people believe that technology has a bad effect on people; however, technology can be very educational to students, people can save a lot of time while shopping, and it can help people stay healthy.

Technology can be educational for students and teachers. For example teachers can tell students to download apps that are used for education and students can learn on there. Many people think technology isn't educational, but it is because students uses online resource to lean new things. Other example why technology can be educational, students can learn new languages and that can help them in the future. Next example students will be able to use technology, to help them do a project and they can search up educated websites that would help them on their projects. Therefore technology doesn't have a bad effect on people because it could be used to help students for educational use purpose.

Technology can help people be healthy any many ways. For example i use apps to make healthy food and healthy drinks. Next example people can search up the type of food they are eating, and look at how much calories they are consuming. final example people can download apps that can help them exercise, keeping their body in good shape, and consuming food that is good for their body. Many people think technology doesn't help us stay healthy, but it does because we can search up food that are good for our body and exercise that are good to. Therefore technology is very helpful to keep us healthy in many ways.

Many people use technology to save a lot of time in their life. For example many people order their food online, so they won't have to wait in a long to order their food. Next example people shop online to save a lot of time, some people don't want to leave their house to shop so they order things online to save time. Last example technology can schedule meeting, some people don't have time to go to meetings at that time so they can reschedule their meeting time. Some people may technology doesn't help us save time, but it does because we are able to schedule things online and order food to save time.

Many people believe technology have bad effects on us, however; technology is a educational tool, can help people to stay healthy, and can save a lot of people to save time. By people saying technology is a bad effect for people we can use technology for good use.  ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
0D0CADFF33DF,"Imagine being a doll that is being controlled and someone telling you that this is your character traits. You don't have control on your own character trait because you let others influence you to think that's what your character trait is. Many people let others pick what their character trait is instead of doing it on your own and learning who you are and who you want to be and/or let others decide what their character trait is or are obligated to be this this person their not. Most let others decide because they don't know who they want to be or what others want them to be.

I agree with this prompt because you are obligated to because the other person is in control of your life, you let others choose because you aren't sure who you want to be, and you choose what you want your character trait to be.

You are obligated to because the other person is in control of your life and will make you feel vulnerable if you don't do as they say; they are the ones in power with what your character trait is and who you are going to be. An example can be your parents especially your mom that raises you. It might not be all mothers out there but most of them will raise a child and tell them what their character trait is going to be. Another example can be is if you are in a situation and it's between your life or death and the person makes you choose what your character trait is when that is not who you want to be but your life is on the line. Whoever you choose to be reflects who and what you are going to be in the future.

You let others choose what your character trait is because you are not sure what your character trait is and don't know who you want to be.

Many people tell each other that this is who they are and just influences people to tell you that's who you are. How will you know that for sure though if you cannot even figure out what your character trait is on your own and if that is what you choose it to be. This is where you over think about your character trait and just take your friends or any other person's opinion about who you are and what your trait is. If you are not sure who and what your character trait is just learn more about yourself and don't take anyone else's opinion and make that your character trait.

You choose what you want your character trait to be because you have the power to control who and what you want to be and not what other's have to say what your character trait is. You yourself choose to make what your character will be.

The best thing that a person can do to figure out who and what they want to be and what their trait is going to be is listing what you like about yourself by doing pros and cons. You will know your character trait when you feel comfortable and you love yourself for making another person smile and making their day. Along the way you will learn new things you did not know about yourself. We get to choose our own character traits not others, let that be a valuable lesson.

In conclusion you yourself choose what your character traits are going to be and not by others because you have the power to choose who you are and what your character traits is going to be.",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
D7E4E0A1B943,"Do you agree or disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality ? Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ,to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment ."" I disagree with Emerson's statement about individuality .

my first important why I disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality :

the humen, or the person, if he whant to be the greatest accomplishment i don't think he can be greatest accomplishment by hemself because he need help from shool or the teacher because you cant do that whithout help .

to be the greatest accomplishment you shoulde to study, or work whith groups not only if you work only you cant understanding you cant investigation your dream .

the work with groups that will help you to know our life that will help you to be greatest accomplishment my most important reason why i disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality ;

To be th greatest accomplishment you need to study about what you whant to be you need to learn a lot of things about the world and every thing about the world you shoulde be the best one on the earth in conclusin , why i disagree whith Emerson's statement about individuality because he cant be the greatest a ccomplishment to be your self in aworld that is constantly .",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
F48D7BBAF52D,"Do you think that have a positive attitude is the key to success in life?

Some people think that have a positive attitude is definitely helpful to get a greatest accomplishment, when we longing to be someone in life you need to have two important things; positive attitude and courage to be what you want to be it does not matter what is you career is, if you don't have a positive attitude you will be nothing in life, a expert of university said, ''Have a positive attitude for students is very important when they decide to go a college, it will help them to get their career done easily.''

Have a positive attitude is good because it make you to do things better in life, it make you feel proud of you , you positive attitude help other people to feel positive, to feel with a good attitude, and to feel them comfortable with you, have a positive attitude it help you everywhere, anytime, and every single day of your life.

Many people today have a positive attitude that help them many time to get gretest complishment, the positive attitude help me on many ways one of this is that it help me to get gretes things like to get my job that I have now and have a good grade at school and transmit my positive attitude to others students.

In conclusion, have a good positive attitude is something that help you up every day, a lot of people get gretest success in life through positive attitude, in other words, if we have a good possitive attitude we can obtain great things to reach our dreams, but this depent of what we want to be , what we want to reach.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
009F4E9310CB,"Asking more than one person for and advice help you take a strong choice? seeking for multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. Example presidential election,requires someone opinion and choosing a restaurant to eat at and place to visit. Theres good and bad opinion but pick one or two or more but choose one the help you make a great decision.

First many us citizen are required to vote. Many of them would have different opinion about who is the best candidates. Positive and negative opinions would be circulating about the candidates but you can ask more than person what they think about the candidates there be interesting opinion and some not so interesting think about what the many opinion you hear and think about the one the got you thinking the most.

on the other hand lots of people love going out to eat. Many people try new places to eat at some may hear good or bad opinion about a place but until you try it you can't tell your self is great or bad. Sometimes Google lets you see other people opinion the other people leaved about a certain place. to be honest my dad does this sometimes he goes online and search is up the place and then looks at the rate the place have and the comment as a result of the deadly corovirus (Covid-19) lots of people have decide not to travel. But theres certain people that just love to travel many of the occasion people travel to a place because they hear good thing about a place. for example thats how me and my family hear of Lego land my aunt tell my dad that this place was so amazing me and my family we have been a big fan o Lego and we really dint know this place existed.

finally sometimes people have positive and negative opinion about something or someone but is you job to find out the one the makes you fell like ""this is the one"" many people there own believed thats why you may hear different opinion. Have you ever ask for more than one opinions? i actually have that was went i was't sure which suit to put in a red or black suit so ask my mom dad ans sister they tell me the best suit was the black one.    ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
E70DD00622DB,"From my personal experience back in middle school, I had to use technology for many different reasons. One of the reasons were for research purposes. I was able to use technology as a tool to provide information on my assignments and projects. So far technology has made a positive effect in my life not only in school but in real life. Technology has helped me accomplish and complete many difficult task in life. I believe that technology has made a positive effect on people's lives; consequently, it makes peoples lives a lot easier and convenient.

One reason that technology has a positive effect on people is that they are able to study without having to go out on a library and pay for books or a tutor to teach them. For example, people who are disabled or unable to travel out of their houses are able to go online and research for books and look for a site to teach them what they need to learn. The availability to go online and research for information also helps students who are too busy to go outside and ask others for help. Many schools started providing laptops and iPad's to students who are unable to connect online. Schools are using these electronics because they provide an easier way to help student learn and complete work.

Technology can also help people do many other things online other than researching for information.

Furthermore, technology may also be used as a way to shop whatever and whenever. For example, eBay and amazon is an online shopping website for many things such as: furniture, clothes, food, and many other reliable things. This has made it a lot easier for people to purchase items that they want at any time. Online shopping helps a lot of people who are looking for items that cannot be found in local stores. For example, many custom equipment's and items can only be found online and in places that may not even be located in your place. Not only does technology may be use as an online tool, it may also used as a way to communicate to others in the world.

Lastly, communication has been a major part of the world; in addition, technology has been one of their ways to communicate. For example, our military has improved a lot throughout the years due to the inventions of many technologies. Technologies such as: cellular devices, radar, satellite and many other communicating tools has helped us win wars and accomplish many things around the world. Another reason why technology has had a positive effect on people is that they use it for emergency purposes. For example, if an adult needs to call out of work for the day because of family problems, he may use his cellular device to call and inform his supervisor about it.

Many people say that technology is a way to showcase yourself as a lazy person and I disagree with that. I believe that technology allowed many people to accomplish and complete many task. Technology is not only important to the civilians who are either students or adults who are working in the industry, but it is also important for the military who are using these tools to provide protection to our country and keep our people safe. In conclusion, technology has had a positive effect on people's lives and that is due to many reasons such as online researching, online shopping, and wide spread communication.                 ",4.5,4.5,5.0,4.5,5.0,5.0
EFF1803E4B81,"Why are people scared to fail? Is failing really a bad thing. NO! For example Churhcill says that ""success consists of going from failiure to faliure without loss of enthusiasm"". I agree with him. I believe that to have success in life you have to go through failiure. Failing with the same feelings and mindset is hard but you just have to think failing is a way of getting better. Failiure is also not something you should be afraid of or embarressed of. You should be proud of failing cuz you know what you did wrong and next time make it twice as strong. Failing does not mean that your to dumb to do whatever it is. It just means you need some more time. Churchill bleieves that failure has an important role in the pursuit of success. Which I also believe this becuase once you fall all you want to do is get right back up. Which I encourage everyone to do.

When you fall get back up everyone falls. Life is about taking risks and failing. Which in my opinion evryone should do. Failiure is the key to success. Without failing you can't really call it success. I beleive you can only succeed in something that you have failed at. Without failing life would be boring and everything would be the same because people are taking riks we have lots of different things in the world today. Everyone has failed to do something. Not everyone in the world is perfect. I wrote this to persuade my readers to take risks. It is also fine to fail just get up and try again. Surely, if Churchill was a live today her would be spreading the same message around the world. That without failiure there is no success. Also, that everyone has failed at something, nobodies perfect.

Churchill Is trying to say that faliure turns in to success. Once you fail you know what you have to do to get yourself back up. Then you try again and again until you get something you are happy with. This is what makes you try again. This is what makes you find and fix your problems. You get a lot out of failing thats why i think that anyone that is going through something tough don't give up so easily becuase its is ok to fail. Failing is a good thing not a bad. However, its hard for people to think in this way becuase they think once they fail its all over. Its not over until you want it to be over. Keep trying and Try your hardest.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
2C0F002E8882,"Make sure you have your seat belts. That is the people from the air plain making sure everyone is save because wee are going strait to Argentina.

safety is the most important thing because if wee dont have safety wee not getting to Argentina.

Argentina is the place I want to visit because it has one of the best player in the world.

I will love to visit Argentina because they have good soccer players and l want to see them, have something from them like a signature or a picture with them. When I get their I going to see the near by place to eat because I want to tasted the flavor of the Argentina food because they have good food but I cant name them they have a wear name. However after that I want to go and visit the soccer field take some pictures were the famous player play. and finally l will pay for an hotel to sleep because Im going to be tiredly for all the amazing thing that i did all day long. I dont know but I will like to know if is true that Argentina has good money.? ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
0C91926E2BC6,"My talent and skill is drawing, painting, and coloring, and writing. Those are my favorite talents and skills. And the things I like to do with them is making cartoons, painting and drawing pictures, and coloring, and writing novels. But, also last year I did art and took all art clubs ,and classes ,and usually I like to be a real cartoonist so this year I want to be a writer. And I want to do that for this year. But I am still good at it. So next year in ninth grade I am doing art again next year. And I use whenever I'm bored and there nothing I can do at home of at school.

So for writing I want to write novels and books for everybody. And lately I have been taking writing classes during the summer. But last year I started being a cartoonist and start writing newspapers and drawing cartoons for the newspapers. At School I join the animate club and then I started drawing pictures for the scenes of the cartoon. And I like it. So I join the yearbook club and I started writing the captions under the photos. To tell and say what it actually means. So last year for third block I had facs ,and I use art for the cakes and cupcakes and also ice cream. And then I think that art is good for me.

So let me tell about my favorite skill writing. The main I like writing is I like to write novels and books. But my favorite book I like to write is about Transformers Dark of the moon. My favorite graphic novel of all times and it is the number one movie to be produce of all times and in the beginning of the novel is the war of cybertron and the rest of the movie is all about everything about the space race. But the main thing I like about writing is you know is the words and feelings of it ,but also I like to write about poems , and poems help think about feeling.

And other kind of stuff let give you some specific reasons.

detail#1:

I think that writing can impress you detail#2:

Writing can also contain facts and opinions detail#3:

Writing can also have poems

So for art is everything

Art is everything

It can be all around us

And ,but also writing can have vocabulary and it is for spelling. But you must check your spelling whenever you are done with an article or an essay. And it also contains art. But also for art it shows like it graphic novels authors must make bubble speeches for the people it the book to say. Whenever they are happy, sad, or other kinds of feelings. But it contains all kinds of words and languages for people to say ,and the bold means what is important and what it really means. But it means whenever a person reads a book. And what it have to say what it self.

My conclusion is that in the future I continue to think about my talents and skills and what they really means to me. But still I think I still care about it. And that is for everyone else's. That is my favorite. For example I draw and write comics. That is my conclusion. The end",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
9C9F45A47A92,"With can use cell phone in the classroom because it can help a person to identified a answer. If we can use cell phone for useful thing than it's good and if we missuse phone than it's not goods. Nowdays all school are allow to use cell phone. It's also help in study or to search something.

If student are use cell phone in class for educational purpose than it's good and if they connected with social media or something else than it's effect to the study. Effect of phone like they connected with social media or something else , they cannot focus on study , or they cannot disturb by phone. If they use phone in useful then there is good like they can search anthing , they learn easily .

There are to many thing are helpful and to many are harmful. Some teachers are allow to use phone in class and some are not. If we want to focus on study than we want to use phone in class for helpful thing like to search some topic or some thing related to our study. We can use cellphone on social media after class or before class it's defends on students. If we use cellphone in class then it is helpful and harmful thing.

I support that we cannot use phone in class. We should focus on study. igore all the apps during class. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
E033F3B6B044,"The first impressions can change depends of each person; Each person have different reaction when they see something the first time, but after that your thoughts can change when you know more about the life of the other person. The first impressions are important because is the first reaction of each person; First reactions sometimes can change after 1 hour or 1 day.

When a person have a bad impression about a class the first day because the class is bored; But the second day the class is fun your reaction can change. Some times the firsts impressions depends of your attitude because if your have a negative attitude your first impressions are negative too. First impressions sometimes are bad and if a person react bad that can show what kind of person you are.

Sometimes impression are impossible to change because many persons don't change the first reaction.

When you have a good impression about somebody your through can change if a person do something bad.

The first impressions change , when you have a good impression about a work because you thing is easy and fun a you make friends but in the second day know your boss and he have a bad attitude with you your impression can change and your through about the work change because you don't like the attitude of your boss. A first impression is a important moment because your first thought about a person or something and that is important because if you have a good impression about somebody you can make a good friend.

In conclusion the first impression can change depends of each person and depends of your attitude too but no always the first impressions change because sometimes many person don't chnage their thoughts about something. Do you imagine if the first impression don't change? that is bad because when your impresions don't change just because you thing the another person is not cool; you can't have that thing because you have to know more about the life of the another person.",2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
31490B1FA765,"Art classes are importants for some people but not all students want to take this class they could be doing something that they would like to do,such sports,science and many other classes. Students do not see art as a big deal this days,they do not see a lot of outcome from art classes,is to hard to have a carrear coming from art,really hard to be successful in the art market,art can be that important in the students life. Do something cool or nice to do its the best thing,if the person do not like the class,will be a big chance of the student try to skip class, walking around the school wasting time, a time that they could be using to do something that they would like to do,problems with teachers can happen if they do not agree to do the work in class. This can affect the student in so many ways,and nobody want to see a student not happy with what he is doing at school,this just do not take the student time but also the teacher's time to teach who wants to learn something in the class. Those are real problems that happens in every schools,so to avoid this problems i think art class should be elective.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
4F98619F7A18,"People go through good things in life and bad things but when it comes to success everyone gets happy about it even thorough the bad times.

First, when having a positive attitude you think more. It opens up your creativity makes you a critical and creative thinker. It helps you think about positive things and not negative things. When your at a difficult moment and you have a positive attitude it motivates you to keep going and not to give up. Even during a difficult time if you were to have a positive mindset It would help you In the future by giving you confence to get out of that position you were In. Even going through a difficult moment is a good thing because it will help you during the long run because your getting a taste of the how life actually goes. Next time your In a difficult moment try to have a positive attitude it will help you through those hard times and it will motivate you not to give up.

Secondly, when I was in 7th grade my friend was taking a very important test. The test was about 35 questions and I remember he was worried that he wasn't going to pass it. He started to tell me ''what happens if I don't pass it my parent's are going to get so mad at me''. He also told me ''I'm not going to pass this test''. What I told him was ''don't worry about it do your best and you got this just have a positive attitude''. Then I went to the bathroom and once I came back I saw him jumping around and happy. Once I got inside the classroom I said ''what happened I said'' he said ''I passed the test''. I got so happy that just by having a positive attitude great things can happen to you.

Thirdly, It doesn't matter where you are weather your in a airplane or even in Mexico having a great attitude can change so much. It can even change you and your life. I once said to myself having a great a positive attitude means having a great day. When your at a difficult moment in your life or just anytime. You feel stuck of sad and you feel like you want to give up be positive and say to your self you got this I can do it. One benefit of having great attitude is it motivates you to be successful and to not give up.

People go through good things in life and bad thing's but when it comes to success everyone want's it and feel's happy about it even thorough the bad time's.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
FBC421A7BE79,"Generaly saying,people do accomplish more if we are always doing something.

in live if you don't want to do anything you will become blind to the society and be left undone because you have waste the day and time not doing accomplishing things with your live but focus on things that are not accomplishing your live. for example: playing video, twitter, face time, and snapshot. all these thing are waste your time all depends on the way it being use. and if you fall in that position of not accomplishing when you get older it's going to effect you. example: you will start rubbing,mudring because you didn't put your mind on accomplishing anything. it is also important to accomplish more. my reason for saying this is the more you do accomplishment the more you go farward in anything. for example; by making good grade in school, by being a good leader, and also helping people if they do needs help all these things you are accomplishing something. everybody do want to accomplish something in life but you have to work for it.

To be sucessful you have to accomplish everything in life. any people in this world today, have gotten good position for their accomplishment. i know, some time it's hard to do but like i said if you want to accomplish something in life you have to work for it. for example: like the brids we see today they have to go through a lot of stages. bruds cannot just be born and start to fly the same day they have to go through before they fly. so they accomplish their flyinh by process and it is the same as human we go through processes to accomplish things we want. our lives go by days and hours the day we see today will never return so why not accomplish somehting within that day because when that day is gone you have waste thime,and abilities to accomplish something.

lets be honest the world today need someone that never give up. it is amazing for some one to reward you for your accompishment. today many of us went to be a doctor,lawyer, and so on but, we are not putting the effort and time. one way to accomplish thing in live is this pay attention to things, learn from mistake using your time and effort if you found yourself doing this you are going to accomplish many thing. the reason why many poeple don't accomplish things is this they don't pay attention not willing to ascept their wrong doing and don,t use their time and effort. for example; i want to be a doctor i have to pay attention in biology class, read books, and also make good grade i'am accomplishing what are want to do because are do it constanly and i love it to so that give me more intrest in doing it.

therefore, to make the world a better place we have to do better talking by mouth and not putting to action it don,t work so if you ready want to accomplish some thing in live you have to always do it never give up and always found your self doing something not playing arround be a better you for your tomorrow.

santly                      ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
559902F0A513,"People often credit their succeses having a good attitudes. Thats is a good thing you can do. But alot of people don't, only a handfull of people credit their succes. You can change that when you have difficult time with life you can have a good attitude. I know its super hard and out of this word it just does not make no sense but theres benefits. Wow theres benefits thats super lit and i can prove because i saw it in youtube or use my smart brain. The number one benefits having a good attiude in difficult time is you have good luck like becoming a word class soccer player only with a bit of luck and good attitude you will make it. With charming good attitudes people will follow you in difficult time beacuse you got good attitudes. If you got a bad attitude people will easliy guess that you have a bad day or difficult time, people will stay away from you and that not good at all. Another benefits having a good attitude in difficult time is you will be happy in life you will be so happy that you could be the joker that never have bad attitude in difficult time. Having a good attitude in difficult time is the best it can helps not doing bad choices in the outside word. Theres one thing I want to share with the people about benefits, good attitudes in difficult time can change your life just think of it how much time have you have difficult times in your life just add good attitude in difficult time you will so succesful that you make trump jealous that will be awesome.

In my own experience having a good attitude in difficult times fells so uncomforable but its worth it. In the finals we lost the score was one to zero but I was in a good attitude in a really difficult time that we lost. My teammates was in a bad attitudes try to cheer them up and I said ''at least we went though to the semi finals it was quite hard for us.'' Then my teammate was quite happy because going to the the finals is hard. That my experience how good attitude changed my teamates in diffcult times. Having a bad attitude in dfficult time is harsh trust me when my cousin rage quite in fifa when he got a bad attitude in diffcult time, when its raining the internet did not work I was chilling in his bed you know but I hate the rain too so I was in a bad attitude. So we both was in a bad attitude so I have witnessed one a bad attitude we was fighting not physical but kind of we were talking smack each other. But we do that when we have a bad attitude but why I said in my head we never have a good attitude in diffcult time in current time,but long time it was lit beacuse we have good attitude because we awalys go to the park and play soccer. We have great time even if it was raining long time ago we have good attitude in diffcult time. For me good attitude in diffcult time feels like heaven only if you do it right, but bad attitude in dfficult time is the devil. This is why good attitude in difficult time will be the best and help you succed in life.    ",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
28661F47D728,"Should such classes be electives for the students ?

Students may have electives classes and decide what to do and what they like for be more good in the school and have some attention on it.

Firstly they will like to go the school because they will feel like a little break of a hour on the class that they like for be chilling. They will not get frustrated or bored on the day of school and they will get off of stress for all of the day they will have s time just for do what they like to do .They will forget all of they work that have to be done because with other classes have homework, class work and the students will be feeling tired. And may be they will not want to come the school anymore.

Secondly students will be doing something that they enjoy because they will be happy to do something that entertained their minds and maybe they will be creative with a lot of things they will want to do in the class. It could be exited for them to have a class that they would like to have. Is good for their brains because the brain is going to work with more interested for be doing something that get all of their attention and they will be relaxing because they don't have to worry if they don't know how to do something because they like it and it will be that more easy to make.

Finally it could be an opportunity for them because students can fine their profession, what they want to be in the future. They may decided if they really like to be for example a an Artist or something else. They may be fine that they are more good they think they are. And maybe they do a big and good work and someone like it for example a professor and they will recommend to universities and thats how they can open new doors for the future of this new generation that it could be the best if will let them have electives classes .

Students can have electives classes because they can have a time for do what they really like it and is a right that students should have to be more interesting on school. ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
CF45352F8424,"Do you think positive attitude is a key that everyone need in order to be a successful person in life? In my essay I will talk about positive attitude, if it is important or not. In my opinion attitude should be always positive, because it can help you to succeed in work, can encourage people to do their best, even if what they have to do is hard to do it, and it can be a great tool in order to succeed in relationships, and believed in yourself.

When I was working in Mango Paradise, my boss was a really bitter person, that was always angry with everyone in the work, but I was one person that I didn't care about his bad attitude toward us, I was always with a big smile, perhap how he treated us. There was one day that he had a bad day, because one member of his family was in the hospital, and was very delicate, he was an a mood that did not look like he was the same one, he was sad, he was devastated, and worried, because the person that was in the hospital was his wife, she had cancer. So, that same day I asked him if we may talk, he said "" Yes"", I just wanted to talk with him and tell him that perhap everything, we were there to support him in everything he needed. Unfortunate, his wife pass away, and as I said to him, we were there all the time supporting him, we were there with a positive attitude telling him, that everything will be okay, that his wife is gonna be in a better place where can rest in peace, where she will not suffer more. He was so thankful with us because how we supported him in that bad moments that wanted to increase our salary, many of us accepted, but many others not. He really change since that days, that many of us, we are still working there, and earning more money than we regurlarly earned.

In every human life, there is always a hard problem, that make us to give up, but there is also a person with a positive attitude that makes us to get up, and continue with our life. There was a time in my family where we had a problem of money, my father got fired on his work, we almost lose the house where we were living, because we did not paid the rent in almost four months. My father was devastated, he was looking for a job amost for three months, and he could not find any job to pay the rent, so we would not lose the house. As every wife do, my mom came to him and said ""Do not worry sweetheart, we can get out of this problem as we always do, I am here to support you"". My father almost immediately changed his attitude, he gave to my mom a big smile and said to her "" Thanks babe to be always with me, and for trust on me"", he get up take the keys of the car, and went out to look for another job. He found a new job where he earn a little bit more than his previous job, so our money's problem disappear.

Believe in yourself not always is easy, some times we though that is difficult to understand yourself, but there is always a lovely person that help you to believed in how strong you are, and to see all the thing that you are capable to do. When I was in 10 grade, I had an algebra teacher that was always telling us that we had to believed more in ourselves, sometimes we did not do what she asked us to do, because we did not understand, many of us were disappointed of ourselves, because we didn't even try to do it. In the first quater many of us in our class period failed. We though that our score would never change. After that many student changed their attitude, but it was not because we wanted. It was because our teacher talked with us, and made us to believe that we can do anything that we want to do. Some time later many of us had changed, as we changed, we saw that our teacher changed too. The second quater passed, and the students were happy because their score in the algebra class, many students's score were from 50 to 90, it happened because all us changed our attitude in different manners. We paid more attention as we should since the beginning of the year, we started to believe in us, we started to do things even if we didn't know how to do it. Until this moment I am thankful with my teacher, because of her, we changed to a better score, because of her we believe more in ourselves, she just wanted our best, but sometimes we made her get angry, because we did not believed in ourselves. We changed, all of us did, and she became for me the most good person as a teacher and as a friend, she was always supporting us, and teaching us. That is why until this moment she is one of my favorite teacher, and I think that for my other classmates she is too. For that experience that I had, I think that possitive attitude is something extremely important in every human life.

Our attitude has to be always positive, even in the worst moment of our life.

Some people think that a person should have a positive attitude just during a very important moment, or in happy moments, this is not correct, they all are wrong, we need to have a possitive attitude always in order to succeed in life, and to be happy. In our homes old people as grandmother, grandfather, sibblings and parents, need to give the example, so kids will take it, and they will be confident and a positive person.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
374CF6E834A5,"Year-round schools have more break over the year, you may have more break during the year but you will have less vacation time over the summer, it's going to shows that year-round schools has more stress, less vacation time and less money make over the summer.

The first issue about year-round schools is more stress, the main thing students stress about is what clothes should they wear to school everyday it makes students to buy more clothes even when they have a lot of clothes because some students want to look better than everyone else in school by not wearing the same clothes everyday to school. students are not the only people who stress teachers will stress about what lesson should they teach and they will a lot assignment to grade.

The second issue about year-round schools is less vacation time, students will have 3 to 4 week vacation over the summer so student won't have as much vacation time as they would like to have because 3 to 4 week vacation is not a lot of time for student to go to another country for long time. parents will be affected by this too because some responsible parents can't leave their kids and go to another country alone.

The third issue about year-round schools is less money make, student can't work over the summer because they don't have the time, one month is not a long period of time to work you can still make some money but you can's make as much money as you could make in 3 months not only the students would make less money government will too they would buy for the electricity and water and other stuff.

Some may say you will have more breaks over the year, but you will not have as much vacation time over the summer.

Some other may say you will not forget anything you learned if you have short break time, but learning everyday without any long breaks will make you a lot of stress.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
D684AE8A9418,"Many people are going say that we can be our self, but even though we can be as we want in certain things, our character is formed by influences beyond our control because we tend to try to fit in society, we fear making mistakes, and we try to be like someone we admire.

As humans we tend to try to fit in society; we like to feel liked by the people around us, so we act different than we actually are. The feeling of being liked by society in most cases makes us feel pride and self confidence, which is fine but makes a line between being our self and being influenced. Fitting in a society might be hard for some people,even frustrating, but people still are willing to do it so we can not be seen as different. trying to fit in a society might be the biggest reason why we do not act as we want and tend to act as everyone else in front of other people,because we fear that if society categorize us different then society is going to dislike us,however, there is some people that are careless of what people say about them. There is always someone that will not care at all of what people say about them which is good,but, there is always a time where they cared or will care about it. It is part of being a human that we care about what society says because we do not want be seen as someone different that can not fit. For example, students in schools dress as the trend is, so they can fit in society,even when they grow they will care how they look.

The fear of making mistakes influences part of our character. We fear that making mistakes will make us imperfect or not good at something, therefore, we think that if we are not perfect we are a failure,the fear of making mistakes is what makes us human, and that is a gigantic influence to us and we can not control it but makes people stronger and, help us to develop a character that will represent us in the future. we fear many different things in life for example,our appearance, if we think our appearance is not as we want, we get insecure in many different ways but, it is a huge help in the development of our own character because we learn from those mistakes. Being insecure is a huge obstacle and mistake for people to get to choose their own character, because it does not let us decide for what we really want,therefore people should learn from them which it will hopefully help people to develop a better character. Many people find themselves as insecure because of the fact that people might dislike them. Scientist have said that having the fear of making mistakes will make it harder for people to achieve their most wanted goals in life. We all as humans make mistakes, therefore we can not or it is harder for us to find our own character by our own self.

As humans we all have at least someone that we admire a lot,and we see them as a person we should imitate so we can be even a bit as them. Imitating someone in any way will make our self to struggle when trying to develop our own character because we are thinking of how someone else would think. Imitating someone else that has had such a great impact in life might be good for your self and you might achieve your goal because that person did. Even though our character is formed by influences of other we admire we also have to have our own character into it, so we can feel the pride of achieving a goal that has had our effort in to it. Having a bit of your own character into what you do is important too because it is not a full imitation of what someone else did. Many famous es have said that they also had followed someone else's steps to get where they are, so being influenced by the people you admire might help the people a lot to achieve their goals as it did with the famous people,and they also said that the people they admired a lot was the one helped them to find themselves, because if it was not for them they would have probably the same as they were before being famous.

In conclusion, we can decide how we want to be but that does not remove the fact that our character is mostly formed of influences that we can not control because we tend to try to fit in society,we fear making mistakes, and we try to be like someone we admire a lot. People are going to find themselves mostly from experiences and influences that they can not control,however you should have some of your own character to do things so when you achieve something important you feel better about yourself, but we,the people tend to act different so people like us and it is something inevitable,either control in life. As humans we dont like to be categorized as different and our main goal in a big percentage of people in the world is to fit in society and that is something that can not be controlled, but it helps us a lot to find our self afterwards and form our character at the end.",4.0,4.5,4.5,5.0,4.0,4.5
66F03584BCA5,"Should people make their own decision, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters ? Some people value self reliance and feel the need to follow their own instincts and ideas. Although these people are confident and trust themselves,I believe people should ask for advice from their parents and other professionals before making important life decisions.

First of all, most people respect and value their parents. For example, when I consider getting another job,I like to discuss my options with my parents. They help me look at both the good and bad things about different job. They bring up things that I may have not thought about. Their advice help me make better decisions. I appreciate their knowledge because they know me very well and want the best for me. Therefor, I thing It' is important to ask for their guidance in these matters.

Secondly, I would ask not only my family, not also my teachers when I make decisions about my education. For instance, after I graduate from high school and earn my diploma I will ask my teacher about the possibility of going to a community college or taking extra classes to help me get a good job that will make me happy and provide me with skills make so that I can live a better life. My teacher have worked hard with me to provide me with guidance and the skills I need to be smart in life.

Thatswhy,

I think people should ask for help and guidance from their parents and teacher before making important life decisions. Both my parents and my teachers know my strengths and weaknesses and can help me in making the best decisions.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
F84E5DEFC874,"Have you ever just sat down and thought, Do we really accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Some say sayings have a reason for example Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something"", Does this mean it is true because he said it? Or is it just something he wrote because it was his opinion?

I strongly agree with what Thomas Jefferson wrote, it's saying in little words don't be lazy, it's amazing how much can get done if we are always doing something. If we are always doing something other than what we want to accomplish it takes time and the process just gets longer. I believe that inactivity serves a purpose even though your inactive or active some or many things can be accomplished.

One reason I believe that inactivity serves a purpose is because, more can be accomplished when you are not active and working. I have experienced this numerous of times at my job. At my job,

we have task we have to get done by a certain time which is closing and sometimes those task don't get done due to how busy the store gets, when the store gets busy we can't get what we want accomplished, but say we are not active, or working and the place gets slow and calm. We have the time to get our task done and meet the requirements and leaving on time. When you are super active and busy it get hectic and that just adds more to your tasks. For example your making some food, drinks and theres more and more orders, you can't make something then clean your gonna have to keep going and clean it all up at the end when it slows down. In my opinion you get what you want accomplished when your less active in this case.

Another reason I believe that inactivity serves a purpose is because, when your not active you don't know what your gonna accomplish that day, but out of boredom your gonna get something out of it. This happens to me all the time where one day i'm just free all day with absolutely nothing to do, and i just lay in bed with a mess in my room not even thinking about the mess and all of a sudden I start cleaning everything and organizing everything. Like Thomas Jefferson says ""Determine never to be lazy... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something"" In this case it works both ways because if your doing something you get something accomplished and something good out of it, but if your doing absolutely nothing then you get nothing accomplished.

Lastly I believe that inactivity serves a purpose because, say your going to try out for the boys or girls soccer team and there is only 1 spot left. Obviously your going to need to practice everyday and know how to play. Practice makes perfect the more active you are with soccer, the more chances your gonna get that last spot to be a member of the soccer team, but say you really want the last spot but your just not as good as the others and it's a new sport you just wanna try out but you are not practicing everyday to get better. If you don't practice everyday to get better then there are less chances of you making that last spot just because you weren't as active and on it like the others. The more practice you receive the more chances you will have to get that last spot because of the dedication with no activity done theres no hope in that.

In conclusion, inactive or active you get through your day and learn something new and that is a accomplishment so much can be done in many different situations, anything is possible. At one point through your day you accomplish making it through even if you felt like you didn't accomplish anything you must have, because you learn something new that is the biggest accomplishment. Thomas Jefferson said that for a reason for sure. Everything has a meaning and reason behind it. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
2ACFD4F32565,"Do you think a problem could change your life? Some people do think that a problem makes you go in the right way. But some people it's all made up to make you try. Therefore I

disagree with Duke Ellington because a problem could cause depression,lack of sleep, feeling bad. The meaning of problems is a chance for you to do you best is that problems help you do better.

Have you ever been through depression? Problems are bad because kids or even teens cannot control them . Next you need to stay away from conflict because conflict is problem and problem can be bad. After that depression is when you cannot yourself and you do wearied things like forget to eat or go to school. Another thing is depression happens when you are hurt and want to quit life. Also if you in depression talk to a trusted adult and he or she will help you.

Problems can also leave you to have some or no sleep. First that happens because your thinking about the problem and how can I get raid of it. Also you can raid of it doing something that you love to do like listen to something watch TV or even read a book. After that if it's a bad problem you will need to talk with a trusted adult. Another thing is that whatever it happens gust be calm and try to sleep and forget about it. In addition to that dont use your phone when your in that type of a problem and dont use phone before bed because you will be dreaming about it all night. At last have faith in yourself and dont give up in life because you can get raid of the problem and live a happy life, but dont forget to do something you like when your in a problem.

Don't feel bad when your in a problem because you can do it. First thing dont let other make fun of you being in a problem and gust try your best and you got it. Also feeling bad and looking at others could cause a bigger problem gust do your own thing. After that feeling bad abut something is not good gust be positive and worry about your self and dont let any boss you or making fun of you. Next problems could be bad but you need to talk to someone that your going through that and why are going through that. Then you can not feel bad and you will know what to d when you have a problem and hoe to slove it too. At last avoid any danger problem as much as you can.

In, concliontion I have come up with that what Duke Ellington is agreeable because some are long term problem and some short term, but there bad for your health and mental health and for you safety. Also you need to stay away from and type of dangers because dangers is like problem so stay away. After that tell a trusted adult when your going through something bad like conflict, dangers, and more. At last don't be affected to something to perfect your self.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
C5C74A1D0020,"I think students should commit to career at young age because of these reasons.

Students should commit to a career at a young age because it may have them in school because students may be thinking about there future and then get movtivated to get more done. Students at young age also be invasted in the career they may choose for example being a soccer player, being a basketball player, being a football player etc. This the first reason why students should commit to a career at a young age cause it will help them become a better person in life and also help there future.

Students should also commit to a career because it will help them perpare for life because they will be getting for college and thats a big step from highschool that is there road to succues because when they are in college they will be learing about there future job whiles if students who don't think about there future at a young age will probaly go down hill for them somethng like getting into drugs or getting killed this is a second reason why students should commit to a career at a young age.

Students should commit to a career so that can can have a good life because if you don't think of a career at a young age you will not be good in life there many example like being homeless. Therefore students should start thinking about a career because it would be coming so fast.

These the reasons why students should commit to a career at a young age for a better future.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
ABEA8B5724EF,"The World We Live in

More than 4 billion people with different culture,different background and different mentality live in our planet Earth; and each person have their own way of life style. Naturally, we have to associate our self with others, to manage our way of living. It means life push us to open our doors and see different people quality and life style. Emerson's statement "" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" In my opinion, this is wrong. Sometimes, we have to allow our self and live other people lives. It means we have to change our face mask everyday to be a head of somebody. this will help us to avoid conflicts, to accomplish our personal goals and to live in any environment.

Sometimes, I fell like we should change the name "" world "" to "" different."" It explain the meaning a lot more. our world is different. every living matter have their own characters and identity. Birds can fly but lions can't. Plants, they can't move but we can. This can show us how our world is divided in many ways. This is leading us to conflicts and fights in every aspects. For example, we can see a political conflict between Donald Tranp and the Democrat. Personally I don,t agree with Donald Tranp's ideas and terms. But if my community agrees and supports Tranp's ideas, It is mush easier if I put a new a mask in my face and put a fake smile on top of it and pertained that i am on same track like them witch is supporting Donald Tranp. It will help to avoid conflicts between me and my community.

Every strong person uses methods to accomplish their drams and goals. focusing is one of the beast way a person use it to be on the top of everybody. strong person fight to win and to be number one no matter what the situation is. Giving up is the beget enemy in their life. Not being somebody else cannot be the reason to give up in a dream. For example, If your goal is to be number one fighter, you have to fight first. Even if you have a lover personality. If you want to be a fighter you have to fight. thats the reality. You can't love some one and punch them in the face at the time. you have to switch up to get to your dreams ( to being number one fighter). American secrete service agents go to Afghanistan to catch terrorist. They are not Muslims but they have to dress up like Muslim and learn their language and culture just to make their country safe from terrorist. Being somebody else help them to achieve there goals.

I believe, becoming somebody else, can help you to learn about that someone personality.

This can help you to adapt the behavior of that person, witch can help you to establish a good relationship. For example, I am originally from Ethiopia living in the US. Sometimes I have to act like American just to establish a good environment around me. Thanksgiving is a well know holly day in American culture . But we dont celebrate it in Ethiopia. Just to respect for my community, i celebrate thanks giving with fake smile with others just to create a good environment in my area.

In my conclusion , sometimes we should be somebody else to live in our divided society. This can also solve our conflicts , helps us to accomplish our goals and to be live in any environment. I believe we have to be logic and see the other side. This could be the smartest way to live our life with our crazy the society .                ",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
150C42083D49,"The schools lunch menu should stay the same. Students have a choice on what they want to eat. It is important for students to eat foods they like because it brightens up their day. Many people believe that having a healthier school menu is a good idea because it lets students become healthy. The cafeteria should not change their lunch menu to a healthier school menu. It effects the students learning if they are not happy with their food, their parents pay for students school lunch, also students won't be used to the new healthier menu.

Students learning would be effected if they are not happy with their food. Students need food that they enjoy to motivate themselves. Students can't learn if they aren't treated with right food. If the cafeteria is not serving good menus, students will have a bad mood. It is important to give and treat students good food so that they will like being at school.

Parents aren't just paying their kid's school for nothing. Parents are paying for their child's school lunch to make them enjoy themselves at school and to learn. Students will be social if they are having a good meal at lunch. Students will also be active if they are getting the right food. Therefore it is important that the school needs to think about the students health.

Students would not be used to the new healthier menu, they would hate it. They will bring their own lunch because students don't like eating the school meals. It will also make parents stop paying for their child's school lunch. When most of students aren't eating the school food, other students will follow their footsteps. Moreover it is important to not change the school's menu because they won't get used to it.

A new healthier menu will effect students learning in school, they would not get used to the menu, and parents won't be paying the school for their child's lunch. Students will bring their own lunch to school. Students will not be active and social in school. Essentially it is very important that the school should stick with the same menu at all means. Changing students health is very important and you would need permission from all student parents to agree. That is why it is a good idea to not bring a new, healthier school lunch menu.",3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
911DD337DD61,"In my opinion, students should take electives instead of music, drama, or arts. Some students may dislike to be in music or drama because they don't have experience to be singing or drawing. They should focus on what they are good at for themselves.

One reason that students should take electives, they will pay attention to their classes and finish up their work to get the credit. Some students can't multi-task if they do drama class and math at the same time. They would have to focus on the important things that they're good at. Students shouldn't be wasting time on taking drama or music classes because they may not be interested in doing those classes. It'll be easier for the students to learn more with their assignments, instead of worrying about arts or dram classes.

For example, during in my junior year, the school wanted me to take art and music. I never wanted to take art because I knew I would be awful at drawing and fail the class. I had to take music also, I was horrible playing the guitar and I was failing in that class. I've told the teacher that I couldnt take art nor music because I wasn't great at it. I just wanted to focus on my course classes, so that I can graduate and get pass all my classes to graduate my year.

Second reason that students shouldnt take it, they will finish with their course classes and will get to graduate their year. It's hard when some students can't do what others can do at drama or musics. It'll be the best opportunity for the students to focus and work hard on their course classes. They should not worry about the electives because that can be done at the end of the year. They won't have to stress about their grades to be below F if they don't take the electives. They wouldn't stress about taking electives and course classes at the same time because it'll stress them out.

Last reason, students shouldn't take advantage of making themselves work more as they are now. They should only worry about their course classes because those are the only classes that will make them graduate. Some students have no talent or experienced to do art or to be in musics classes. It's better for them to finish their course classes and then at the end, they can take their electives.

Therefore, these are the reasons why students shouldn't be required to take classes in arts, musics, or drama.                                                                                                                                 ",3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
69241D10E69A,"Online school a great tool for young scholars that might not graduate on time due to missing school days, or any other inconvenience. Online school could not only help scholars to graduate on time, but also help a portion of scholars that are looking to get a job for future education, or helping their households. Online school may also be a helpful option for scholars with disabilities, or illness that might stop them to attend school.

Although online school might be a good tool for some scholars it can also cause negative outcomes such as students not doing their assign work, or not passing the class due to less time with students. Other issues that must be faced ,are some students not having computers, or not having access to the internet to do their assigned work. Overall online school is a great tool for students that may struggle to attend school. Once its issues are met and something has being done online school may not be only a great tool for some scholars but also an opportunity to finish school without any issues.

In conclusion online school might have many issues but once its issues have being solved and students get help with access to computers, or internet it could make a big impact on young scholars. Online school may also help economy by allowing students to have enough free time to get a job to help in their households, and their future. Therefore online school should be an option in every school to help students achieve their goals, and well being                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5
0D807ABE1BB3,"In a recent survey 70% of pedestrians think imagination is more important than knowledge. One day I imagined that I would play travel soccer for a really good team in Florida when I imagined that I put my mind into it and I made my imagination become reality.

For example when you were a kid you used to imagine that you were flying through the air or in space fighting aliens on Mars, imagination can come a long way from just being a kid to inventing something that can change the world. I agree with Albert Einstein's statement I do believe his statement not only because he was one of the greatest scientist in the world but because this statement is so truthful. Knowledge is a huge part of our lives we need knowledge in everyday activities in school we gain our knowledge by going to class and learning more and more lessons everyday.

Imagination is more important than knowledge, everyone can imagine things it's not whether if I have more knowledge than you or if she has more knowledge than me there is no limit when it comes to imagination. Anyone can imagine something and make it happen it's the effort you put into your imagination that makes knowledge superior to your imagination. Knowledge can only get you so far in life if you don't have a thought proccess but what you do have is knowldge how far is that going to get you whee you need to be?

If we didn't have any imagination in our lives where would we be right now? As a whole what would we do if someone never imagined a car and invented it or if someone never imagined a light bulb and invented it, what would happen if we never have imagined those daily necessity's. Imagination paints the full picture in our lives.             ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
6D7377CA8608,"Technology allows people to work in an easy way, technology helps to connect people from different parts of the world. Also technology works as entertainment for kids and old people . Technology has affects in our life is basically something that we need everyday or something that we cannot live without it because is really important

Fist, Technology connect with a lot people around the world, different web sites get money making app that people can text, call or make a meet with people that they do not know. As a student technology helps me all the time doing my homework or learn about different cultures, connect with my friends.

Second, as a young lady I use Facebook, Snapchat, instagram, photo editor, online books, etc a lot of this apps that technology give us, my life is easier with technology. When I was a kid my family decided to move a different country it was new for me I thought that I never will see my friends and family there I cried in all our travel because I miss the people in my country I did know anything about technology, I grew up I have my cellphone, laptop and table, I can make video call with them and see them, last Sunday I made a video call with my grandmother, is really incredible everything that we can make with technology, I still missing them but at least we can talk everyday.

Third, technology effects positive in people lives, think for a moments our life without technology, how hard life or boring, technology is. At this time our life depends of technology, millions people using everyday different apps for work, studies or just for fun.

Conclusion, technology is part of the world that we live, it makes our life easier and connect with different thing or people use it for good things and be successful on things that technology give us.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
A4F11F4A76AE,"Students should enjoy summer break, cause they would not have to worry about school and they can get to relax some educators should not complain about summer break being too long cause having a long break is better than to go to school cause school you have to do work and do tests. but in during the summer break you get to relax all day summer is the time to hangout with your friends and famiy and to go to vacation to enjoy life too and not think about school or work that is what summer is all about and for educators saying that students are not going to remember what they learned in school. from last year when they come back to school is not true cause some people remember what they learned last year and some don't and i don't think summer break should be 3 to 4 weeks cause most of time students are in school more than they get to have a long break. i think summer break should be for 2 months so people can have a break from school cause i know how school can be stressful for students cause they have to worry about a lot of things passing their classes passing their sols that gets stressful to students. cause that is the most important things in school i think for winter break has to be 2 weeks cause of chrimstmas and new years that time is too enjoy those 2 holidays with your family and then come back to school in january. for spring break should always be in March not in April cause it has always been spring break in March spring break should be 2 weeks to take a break from school and to come back in school with a fresh mind to get ready to go to school and learn. so the students can be prepared the only break in fall is thankgiving which is only a week that seems fair cause is just the 2nd holiday in November having breaks is always a good thing i don't know why some people hate it it gets you time to think about things it helps people a lot to relive stress on people it makes people happy and puts a smile on people's faces and that is all i have to say about all the breaks for the seasons.     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
44E2726DA1B3,"Your principal has decided all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I agree because now days all kids do is stay home and be on there phones and do nothing. I know that because I used to do the same thing before and i didn't like to do anything at all but then I started playing a sport and it help a lot but i think that. Participating in a extracurricular activity may help you by staying healthy, get you out of trouble,and get you in a good college.

one example is staying healthy by playing a sport you can help prevent a lot of things like maintain a good weight, and keep you from getting sick. Keeping a good weight is good for your health because it keeps you from getting other diseases,more than 1/4 of the people in the U.S. are obese. Why not start at a young age and prevent from being sick and other things. Another thing that can help is eating healthy, we can prevent sickness to in order to do that you might want to think about trying out a new sport.

Another example is getting you out of trouble you can avoid a lot of drama. I learned that social media can get you into a lot of trouble, half of the time a lot of the drama comes from social media. Maybe if you join a club or a sports team you can think before doing something that can get you in trouble. One time my friend made the soccer team but she got in trouble so they kicked her off the team and she learned from her mistake and never got in trouble again. When in your in a cub or playing a sports half of the time you don't have time to be in drama get in trouble.

Last example is joining a club, working on the year book,serve in the student council and, playing a sport can get you into a good college now a days colleges are looking to see if you have participated in any sports or clubs. When i graduate high school i want to go to college and a study to be a general surgeon and participating in a sport or joining a club can help me get into a college. You meed new people when you join new clubs and make new friend ships. When you want to go into a club or in sports do something that you like not something your friends like or something that can help you in life with.

In conclusion staying healthy,getting out of trouble,and going into a new college can help you when you participate in a extracurricular activity. staying healthy by playing a sports and eating healthy can prevent you from getting sick. Staying out of trouble can avoid a lot of drama from school and social media think before you do something your going to regret . Joining a club or participating in a sport can help you get into the college you want and you can meet new people and make new friend ships.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
0DC7DEF31BE5,"I belive that students should be not requiered to take elective classes because elective classes are not importance so, student waste their time. Elective classes are nor riquiered for graduatio also, student will not dedicate time in thoes classes and they wiil get F and their gpa will came down. Studen will scape thoes classes because tey dont need thoes classes and they can be boring and they will get in problemes.

I belive that student should not take elective classes because elective classes are not importan. Students are wasting their time by taking thoes classes because beside thoes classes they can take others importan classes that can get a credit from. Elective classes should be opcional because some student wnated to finish theirs classes early and by taking elective classes they waste thair time. I think that the schools shoul do is give then the opcion if they wnated to take elective classes or they can take all their credit classes.

Elective classes are not riquiered for graduation so, the student will not take thoes classes seriously. Student will not do the work because they know that they don't need thoes classes and they have more imporatn work to do from the others classes that they need for their graduation. Student will get F and because of that their gpa will became down and that can affect then when they decide to go to college.

Some student will not go too thoes classes because they know that thay dont haveto pass them to graduate and thoes classes can be boring. Elective classes can be boring for soame student becuse their are some student that don't like music, drama or art some studnet like sport or some student what they wnat finish all their credit classes. Student that don't like thoes classes they will tride to scape thoes classes and they can get in big problems because of that. This can affect then in the future when they wanted to go to colllege or if they want to work in a federal job. This is a big problem and because of this they can lose a lot of oportunities. The schools shoul resolve this problem by making elective classes opcional.

Inconclusion student should not take elective classes because elective classes are not importan and student will not care. Becide elective classes student shoul have the opcion to take all their credit classes. Elective classes are nor requiered for graduation so, studen will not do the work and they will not go to thoes classes because it may be boring for some student. Some student will scape thoes classes because some student likeclasses like art, music or drama they my like sport. Studen will get in big prolems because they scape their classes and that can affect then in the future. Schools should do the best for their student and amke elective class opcional.",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
40DD3FF566D8,"How many times you try to give up, how many times you wake up, there is a lot of difficult things in the life. While many are discouraging by going into failure to failure but never give up, stay happy keep working hard and you'll find success. I'm firmly agree to Churchill words, no matter what, you have to keep the enthusiasm and keep working hard to get success. There is a lot of difficult parts in the life for example I was a clearly example of this because I went to failure to get success. When I was in 10 grade I take for the first time the Geometry Test, I was so nervous because I was going to take one of most difficult exams that I have never take it and yes I fail and then I take it 3 more times and I fail again. After 3 times of failure I take some minutes to think about it. And I say what is the best thing that I can do, Well the best way is preparing my self to take the test again. Finally after 4 times I pass it, and this situation give a big lesson never,

never loss the enthusiasm never give up, failure make me learn new things that will help me to improve and be success. One of my reason for this should be that

I have to had the Geometry test to be available to graduate that was the reason that motivate my self to pass the test.

Another difficult part of my life was when I move to this country, it was very painful because I leave all my family in my old country and all my friends that I know from my infancy, but that is not the very difficult part. when I move to this country I never though that the language would be a problem but i was wrong. It's very hard when see someone talking to you but you can't understand, it's feels pretty bad. Then I start to study English to improve my pronunciation and understand better, but like I say before I never give up I keep working and I will find success. My reason for this is that I want to a better future and I know that if I speak two languages I will have a better future.

My conclusion to all this would be that no matter what you have to keep the enthusiasm even if you fail many times keep working hard and you'll find success.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
A828480AA508,"Successes comes in so many diffrent whays,but the real questchon is how can having a good attitude lead you to being more successesful in life. I think that starts with your attitude ,attitude plays a big part in your life, for example if your about to take a really big test in math class and you tell yourself befor the teast that your going to fail and your just having a negtive attitude about it, your more likely to fail ,but if you walk into math class with a good attitude and your cofdent in yourself and your just going to give it your beast I thinkyour more likely to pass the teast.

When you think of successes you think of famos people you might think of a person on tv or someone that hass lots of money. If you think about it the people you wach on tv or any of the people you think are successesful hade to have strugled in life to get to the place they are now. What ever the strugle was they hade to get back up and push themself. There are successesful people every where fot example it could be your mom, or your dad, brother, sister any one you know. Successes doesnt have to be a big thing it could be you doing something like running a mile or being the first person in your familly to go to college or just geting all As in school Whatever it is having a good attitude in life can really change your life.

I try to be as successesful as I can if thats in school I try my beast,Whatever it is I know I cant acomlish anything without a good attitude. For example in the fuetre I want to be a fashon disinor, but that whount hapen for years but thers things I can do to push myself to the thing I want to do. Things I can do now to get to my futer ,I can start with a postive attitude There are hatters every where that try to bring you down you just have to learn how to ignore them and learn how to creat a path for yourself.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
ECB127F00953,"I disagree, I think if you are honest all the time, you might say some mean things to a person, which might hurt their feelings.

First, being honest is good, that's how you earn trust. However, keep some things to yourself if you think it's not positive to say to another. Second, It might make the person feel bad if you do say something harsh to them. Lastly, A person might see you differently if you're honest constantly, Whether it was nice comment or a mean comment you said.

Firstly, there isn't a lot of honesty when there needs to be at times. Sometimes you have to say what's right in order to not hurt someones feelings from what you said. For example, your friend and yourself have to be honest in some cases to earn each others trust for the other person to be honest in return. Secondly, not being honest might lead you to trouble, if they might have found out you lied to them later. They might give you respect if you're not lying to them and not saying malicious stuff about a person.

Secondly, If you are honest ""all the time"" some people might see you ask a snitch from the way you are saying everything to a person. For example, a teacher comes up to you and asked you a question on what a person did you would have to be honest and say the truth. I also think that ""honesty"" and ""truth"" are a similar word because, you have to do both in order to be honest constantly. The truth is that honesty can get you into a very bad situation if you have to be completely honesty with a teacher. By the wrong person you talk to, you might accidentally start a riot.

Lastly, you should be careful on how honest you are to people, because you don't know whether they are going through some stuff you are pointing out to them. Being truthful to someone and saying everything to them might make them upset on how you view stuff in the world also. Honesty is like an opinion that may cause someone that went through something upset them drastically. This is why I disagree that honesty is the best policy. From the situation you are in say respectful stuff towards the person. It might make you a better person if you are not saying negative things towards a person too.

In conclusion, I disagree with ""Honesty is the best policy"" by the situation you are in with the person and what they are going through. May cause them to dislike themselves in a way you wouldn't know.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
B7AABB24BDB8,"Yes,we accomplish more if we are always doing something rather that doing inactivity. If we keep on doing something to accomplish it then victory is always near to us. Our continious work to accomplish any task will be paid later by our better results. Hard work and dedication always lead us towards the success so does if we are always doing something to accomplish the task. Doesn't it sound foolish that inactivity also serve the purpose. It somehow can help to accomplish taking much time but not the same way like if we are always doing somethng.

There is a famous saying that ""Rome was not built in a day"". Here the people were always working for many years to built Rome into a beautiful city. We can see their hard work and dedication really worth it as it is one of the most beautiful city among the world. Would it have been possible if they were doing inactivity? Obvioulsy no nah? Doesn't it sound foolish that inactivity also serve the purpose. It somehow can can help to accomplish taking much time but not the same way like if we are always doing somethng. As ""Where there is will there is the way"" in the same way if we really want something then we can achieve it if we keep on working and always do something for that. I can support it by saying that failure will never ever take you if your determination towards success is strong enough and keep workng for it.

Let's take an example of two students. if two students are assigned a long project in the summer vacation and one student started working from the mean day so that it will be easier from him to complete before the due date whereas the other one kept on realxing thinking that he will start working on it at the last of vacation. Now all of us what the result gonna come. One student happily submitted the project accomplishing it before the due date and the other one had to suffer a lot. So which one would you prefer accomplishing by always doing something in the right time or rushing to complete task in due time.

So,in my opinion always doing something to accompish more is better idea than thinking that inactivity also serve a purpose. No one want to rush to complete any task at the due time so we should be always doing somehing to accomplish more. Slow and steady always wins the race but it doen't mean to say that doing work slowly will worth it everytime. I mean that you should be always doing something in oder to accomplish in time. We can learn lesson from tortoise and rabbit story. From tortoise side,like topic says we should be always doing something to accomplish more or in time in the same way tortoise kept on walking for the race although he can't run having faith in himself that he can do it. From rabbit side we shouldn't do mistake to think our competetors not strong enough than you. We should always respect your competetors thinking that they are as stronger as you and keep doing our assesments to be the most deserving one of that victory. We should have strong believe in ourselves that I can do it then nothing seems impossible.

In conclusion,last but the least I would like to end up saying that if we are always doing something then we can accomplish more compare to the one who works inactively. Time is the most important key factor in our life. Once it is gone it is gone for forever..So,the key point is we should understand the importance of time and utilize it properly and make it effective by always doing something which leads us to the accomplishment of our task.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
CC0186CE98B3,"science experiment on thing like chemical change like color In my science classroom my teacher experiment on fire change color that is chemical change science love their job that is the enjoy for be science identify thing on the earth like plot that is not a is not plant science go to school to be what they are today they want to be science that was their dream they become methodological activity their discipline study.

people that is science they study hard on their educational they do not just wake one day they become science they want to be science for years become science you need to go to school and collage study on you test to activity regarded as requiring study and method they different type of science we have science fiction in which the plot based in speculative scientific discoveries drastic environmental change, or space travel science fiction based on they discoveries things and they travel around the world science thing they do experiment like a board curved sword with the edge on the conveside. when a science experiment on a cow that need their tools they will be like four or five science we need science with it science we will not know what is go on in the world like solar system and sky.

we have science notation a method of writing or displaying number in terms of a decimal number between 1 and 10 multiplied a power of 10

science notation do math like 10 is power than 1 that we need the science notation example my want to be a nurse she to go to school and collage she need to go collage for four years and go to nursing school for four year to be a nurse just be science i do not know how years you to be science .

scintilla a person having expert knowledge of one or more science example to throw off spark to be animated and brilliant for you to be a you need to study and work hard on you study you need gained through experience.

Phys a multistage nuclear reaction esp a self sustain series of missions in which the release of neutron from the splitting of one atom leads to the splitting of other.

A series of reaction in which on one product of a a reacting set is a reactant in the folloe\wing set portable over saw with teeth linked an endless chain science was the first people to know about atom the thing abut at can splitting in two other.

science love do their job and love experiment on thing my science is the fun teacher are have my want be a teacher you need to be a by go to school and collage my advice to be want to be a science is to following the rule like go to school my mom sister about not to show off about any thing we do mat home my sister ask for ,me a advice about her boyfriend he to be a science and do not what to do about it my advice was to follow he heart and my want to be a nursing but that what he to be she to mm boy to go to some collage she is go to that was hard and the boy break up with her that was to follow he dream to be science i was happy and you will what are you happy that you sister boyfriend break up with her he to follow he dream will be happy for any one who to follow their dream.

my advice to science is to follow you dream no matter what happen follow it with your heart and with the science with not any one to tell us abut the solar system by happy with what you have and be really too follow you dream . my brother tell to be really because in life no can do you home work for you need to it ,by you me self o to might school is t real for it m,the home that is come so you to,be a science you need to work hard then you use to work.

science live to m,work it in the their blood so if you to be a science let no stop you to be one if want about cow that is you dream want to walk dog that is ,you dream be dace that is you dream.

chain change a group of convicts chained together esp outdoor labor to smpke in close succession chamleon to cut off the edge or corner of bevel to cut a groove in flute when you teacher is made science you wait and watch my advice to really a change to in life room ways shad is very different think do i love go to go school my English is fun and nice my ma the teacher is she very are that is my sister very good at math my art teacher is very nice to me i love to drawing my is very that my dream to is paint and be a nurse that is the problem .

i have a example it not about science Generic_Name have a friend they fight lot about thing she want a advice she ask her sister said do not have be friend she want to be so go to her mom her said that if she to be to friend so mush talk about their problem and solution it so they talk about about the problem and the solution it and have science have problem like friend all Que that is their problem.

my sister have a boyfriend she think her the her boyfriend is cheat is ask for my advice are ask if she have thing can tell her is cheat her she like are do not have think to said that me boyfriend is cheat on me and said that is not thing do thing like that my advice to mm her is not to be to mush nosing to think like this she was like can do any thing i want to do my was like are do care that science advice to talk if you do not have some to talk to you go crazy so me to so come together and take about the problem you like to do think together my advice talk about you you problem like i me now i am very writing but i am learning how to work my problem is come softer and talk .

so science come to together let talk about you problem do be like can like other people that acting that they can do it my is to people friend you wife if you are not marry come to you sister you brother and family science is import to the world so people who you to be and what people want you to be me do not like people do you work so science I also happy we have ence that we science so let come to together and be one so science please follow you dream do not like people be mean to you so let us follow our.                 ",1.5,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5
29BEFF0B3FA0,"An old proverb says honesty is the best policy. However, it might hurt a person's feeling. Well I disargree with that because, what if someone came up to you and said, my mom bought me this dress and said it looks good at me and asked you if it looks good on her. Well what if you said no it looks ugly for you then, the girl will be hurt and would think that her mom lied to her and will start crying.

Anther reason is, what if your friend got in troublem and said he didn't do it but, you knew he did it and the teacher ask you if he did it and you said yes. Well their're somethings that could happen to you First, nobody will trust you Second, the kid that you snitched on won't be your friend and won't talk to you forever Lastly, everyone will call you a snitch because you snitch on you freind.

However if someone said to you or wrote it to you that they were going to shoot the school. That's when you could tell the principle or the office because, shooting a school is something seriouse that could scare people and if you didn't tell the office or the principle and it happen well it will be something that you will need to live with for the rest of your life because you didn't tell the principle or the office that there was going to be a school shooting.",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
7DC02C918305,"It has been said that a positive is the key to success in your life.

be positive in your decisions is the most important for any goals or dreams that you want to do, its important make sure of each thing before do it because sometimes just take decisions for other people say and this do that dont believe in yourself, however always you have to think about what i want to do? or what i want to be? and think about the achieve for you future and believe in yourself, be positive is the begin to carry up big dreams in your life.

for example when i start the school i was so positive but same time negative because i dont know anyone, the language also but always you have one reason to do something and i have one reason thats my son, i was positive about what i want and what are my goals,the time past very fast; i found people important in my life, my friends they always are positive and this help yourself. When i talk with my friends i feel positive also because they make me feel like that, so now it's my last year and i feel good and this is the point to make up my dreams and goals.

Never give up everything depends on your decisions, if you are negative or not believe in yourself you never to be able for your goals or other things like work, school and support other people it's important be positive, no matter what the other people say, no matter how many times you try, the key is achieve and think about your future.

The life present always new things,challenge,obstacle you has to be prepared for everything and give always the best.

For finally, the best way to achieve your goals in the life is always be positive, strong, believe in yourself and never give up. No matter the new change in your life just dont be scary and put your life in God's hands.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
8E6F35BA3EE6,"I agree what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote about. I agree with him because if you do the same thing you Mastered you will never grow but if you do more things and then you mastered you will grow a lot. You need to have a lot of experience and be on top of everything so you can grow. I'll give you a example if you have a concrete company that you mastered you will be okay. If you sell concrete and do Excavation and commercial your company can grow a lot and you will do more what you Mastered and can grow a lot from that.

You need to have a lot of ideas and experiences what you are doing. If you think you can do something or achieve more do it because you can grow a lot from doing that. It's good to have experience and knowledge because everything can go away in seconds if you dont care of it. It's always good to do more what you Mastered in life. It's good to do more what you mastered so you can grow a lot. I really do agree with Emerson and what he wrote is so true.    ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
D9D8AB28BD26,"I disagree with Emerson, because if you try to do something different of what you are doing you will grow.

But if you cap doing that same thing you will never grow. For example in your life you do different thing to know more about that world , you esperiment diferent thing to know thing that other people don't know to becme strong person and I thing doing different thing you will grow. For example when you are became father & mon you change you experiment thing that you never imagiane how that work. Like some people they still acting like kids I thing is because they talk we person they are not they age, they talk to young men like there age is 17 & 19 this you men they still dont know how to act like men, when there age is 40,

thas how you will never grow. Because a men change to a men is when they are 25 this is that age that you are change thing , and thas way people get old and they still act like kids.

Other people grow fast because I thing that wey how that family teache , like in all family they are not same they grow in difernt tipe. like some family star teach to there kids thing that they dont be doing , try to teache the better thing. For example when they are having diner all together in a restaurante some perent talk to there kids before they go in. they are having the food they need to be put off they table & phone ,to not talk when they have food in there mause at that time you star grow. in the fulture you be different that other people. like whent you goint to othere hause you will be better person for example your friend they you hey what are goint to do after school you like to have diner whit my family you know more beter thas how your perent teach when you are kids. Because when you are youn men and you still know how that work you will cap doing that wey how you learn Like other family they dont that ,when they are eat they use table &phone that wey you will never grow,you get to old person and you will cap doing that same thing that you be doing when you where a kids and i thing you main dont grow.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
C93925EDB882,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote a quote that has Inspired me,""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"". I truly agree with this quote because it demonstrates who you really are by doing hard work,everyone has something to give to the world and it is important for self esteem.

By doing a lot of hard work and not giving up, it demonstrates to people who you really are, that you are a person who is determined to get where they want to be and who preservers no matter what the chanlleges are. People may or may not agree with what want you want to do, their are always going to be someone who is going to try to bring you down emotionaly, physically or mentally but you have to show them that you are going to be yourself and do what whatever it needs to take to accomplish it. This reminds me of myself because in my senior year of High School I didn't have enough credits in order to graduate that really got my family disappoint that the time I was going to an online school and it was harder for me to make up for all the classes but I saw how my own family started to put me down and it did hurt my feelings but that used that feeling to pick myself up and work everyday on the classes to be able to graduate on time. This showed people and most importantly it showed me that im capable of showing people who I really am by doing hardwork.

I think everyone has a lot to offer to this world, you never know who will be the next person to discover a cure for a illness that people thought it was terminal. Everyone is capable of doing what there heart desires it just take determination, hard work and desire to accomplish what you want. People should not listen to what other's say it only matters what you know that you can accomplish and that you believe in yourself that is all it takes to became and be where you want to be. My plans after High School is to go to college to become a ultrasound technician. I speak two languages Spanish and English and I believe because I speak two languages fluently I have something to give to the world, to the community and to any one in need. I know my own family wanted me to be a lawyer to help people with immigration lawsuits and for a while I started to consider following my parents dream of me being a lawyer to make them happy but my passion for the medical field was bigger and from my knowledge a big percent of pregnant women are Hispanic and as a person who speaks Spanish very well,I think I could help out people who don't know English in order to get the resources they need.

Being yourself and showing the world what you are capable of shows the world that you believe in yourself and it is important for your self esteem too because it makes you feel good about yourself and most of time your going to be alone doing your own stuff, taking care of your business. You can not always depend on people to get you what you need, to get you where you want to be. I remember when I moved out of my parents house with my son and having my own room, my own space and paying bills made me feel so good about myself. I finally felt like I was doing something for myself because my parents wanted to keep me at home but I managed to get through everything and anything while living on my own and It made me more independent person and it helped me boost my energy and believe in myself.

Nevertheless, Author Ralph Waldo Emerson quote ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"". This quote has reminded that you should truly believe in yourself, be yourself, do hard work and it will motivate you to be where you want to be. I think this quote has a lot of different meanings and I think it depends on your own personal experiences and It has honestly helped me a lot through my teenage year and overall my biggest accomplishment was to follow my heart and be who I really want to be in life just like the Ralph Waldo Emerson said. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
B950C326FB77,"First impressions are always the most important thing when you meet someone you want them to think good of you so you do your best to make them feel comfortable around you. If you make a bad impression the first time with probably that person It is going to think that you are like that forever. There is no way you can change what others think even when you have not talk to them,people think what they want to think and it is hard to change their thoughts. You can do a couple of thinks to make them trust you and change their perspective about you: like be kind,ask them about what they like,etc. Start a conversation that makes them feel they can talk with you about whatever they want,however sometimes things like that do not work and simply you just can not change what other people thinks that is why you should try to make a good impression the time you talk with a new person that is the reason why first impressions are important. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
6FEF6D46714D,"Has it ever crossed your mind that people today are struggling to make their own decisions, and wanted feedback from other people and just maybe wanted to change their mind. Well people today are just going what their own decisions they make, I am the type of person to ask for some feedback or ask other people about, is this a good choice im making, can I do something better then what I did yesterday. I believe that people should take other peoples' guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter due to people wanting help in the real world, and also tell them about the past so they do not mess up on there life choices.

What is more important the choices you make or the outcome of it? Teenagers about my age need to make better choices, but why you may ask. Today Teenagers are just ruining their own life in school. Teens need to focus on what is right for them making better decisions, like not to drink, help mom out in the kitchen, and do something productive. Teens decisions now can affect the decisions they will make sometimes in the future. For example I changed one of my friends decisions to not drink because that will cause him in the long run, like ever makes it big and someone sends that picture to social media his life can be ruin. Therefore I think teens or people should also ask other people that have already or still is living for a better decisions in important matters.

Why should I go to someone else for a better decisions for some dumb reason they are going to give me, wrong. If you ask someone, you should actually listen to see what they have to say and understand the concept. It is better to have someone else opinion on how to change my decisions. Well they have lived longer than you have, they have more experience,and more life choice taking. All im trying to say is that in my opinion is that you should always take someone else decision because maybe it will help other people in the long run. Maybe it will lead them to build something amazing, start their brand company. Just something between those lines. Someone else decisions can actually change the person you are right now. I've had so many people bring me down on how I'am going to never make it the Army branch. I'm just gonna be a lawn mower, a person who just cuts grass for living. Even though they making money that not my passion. My recruiter told me to never let someone enter your head with bad thought and let them struggle you with these bad thoughts. One of his saying was ""yesterday was the past,today is the present,and tomorrow is a mystery"".

In conclusion People should take other peoples guidance from experts and authorities about matters due to people needing a little more help, telling them stories about the past so they dont go through that rough past and make the same mistakes. I agree that some people may not what to interact with other people or even care about what they want to say. I agree but if you just hear them out they might just convince you to change your mind. All I'am just trying to say if you do not like the hits or opinion they are trying to give you just back off and find someone new or just go with the flow and follow what your heart attends you to do.        ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
134937CE445C,"""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.""

Introverts can easly feel identificated with Waldo's words, in a world where the majority goes in the same diretion trying to convince themslves that the way they are taking is the best, it is just a fantacy, but sadly unique, and genius people are afected by the same.

As time passes most of us we still refusing to be like the rest of society; I trully belive that being yourself is more importar than a life lacked of happiness.

As we growing up we been told how to be, and who we have to be like, but only people who resists and face world's opinion can really know deeply what self-acceptation is. It is not about ego, it is about reallity. God, Universe or whowever gave us life, also gave us a purpose. Being different is not a crime, but a privilege, so we have to take advantage of it. Life has a lot of perspectives, just because they are right, does not mean I am wrong.

Before my favorite artist passed away, he used to say: ""I rather to be hated for who I am, than be loved for who I am not."" well, I think Emerson would love this quote. People that choose a diferent direction are usually called: black sheep, weirdos, misfits, and even crazy. In most of the cases they end up being rejected, just because how they look, how they dress or how they think. but it is a fact that no long they become the most greatness, successfull and happiest people in the world, and there is a few of them. well, I guess no pain, no gain.

I know is hard to be yourself when all these people are judging, in my opinion it is a really big accomplishment being yourself, even in these modern times. I never understood why we have to be like someone else just to be accepted in this cruel society but I know for fact that being myself is the best feeling I've ever felt, so I trully believe that being yourself is more important than a life lacked of happiness.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
2EEEE9C5E227,"Are first impressions impossible to be changed? It has been said that they are almost impossible to change. Most people tend to agree with this statement, but what if they are wrong? I personally disagree and believe that there are ways to make impressions change. It's all about giving the person the opportunity to show and see who they really are.

First impressions are judgments we made before getting to know the individual. These impressions can be on favor or against the person being judge. Thinking on ways to make these impressions change, I have found some good ways and these can be; getting close to the person, asking to their close friends about them, asking teachers or other adults. All this based on my life term experiences.

Getting close to the person meaning; talking to them personally, this could make a big change on the impression been transmitted the first time you saw the person. By talking to the person you will find so much things and probably things of your interest. When talking to a person you are making judgments in your head, but your mind always changes from what you thought this person was before.

Asking to their close friends about them is a risky but also a good idea. Their friends know them better and can provide a good opinion on them. When asking their friends, you should make a comparation on all of their opinions, this would help to know this person's circle. Social circles are very important and most of the time define a person's being. Knowing this person's circle will change that first impression on their social side.

Asking teachers or simply community adults will help a lot to change that first impression. Maturity level is something we always judge when comes to impressions. Teachers will tell you what is this person attitude at school. Community adults will tell you how does this person behaves on their everyday living. Whether you find it positive or negative, opinions definitely make the first impression change.

People say that first impression only last a very short moment, therefore it can't be change because it's just flash judgment on a person. On the other hand we have people like me that believe that as long as you have not contact with that person's circle, you are still in the first impression and it can be change. Getting to know an individual, Talking to their friends, and others adults' opinions are all first impression changers.

Overall first impressions are possible to be change and we need put these steps on play. If we would to follow these steps we would not be hating on each others and will live in a better world.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.5
CEAD27DE3263,"We tend to accomplish more if we always do something. In my opinion, I think that if people want to accomplish more, then they would do more to make their lives better. For example, a teen who gets eight hours of sleep before school wont be tired then a teen who slept for three hours. The teen who slept more will accomplish a successful school year because he slept earlier. Responsibility is a big role of being able to accomplish something; unfortunately, not everyone's responsible.

There are many ways someone can accomplish something, but they all start out with them taking action. as an example I'm going to use Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Both of these men started out with nothing. no one knew who these two men were 13 years ago. But that all changed when both of them announce their new technology. If it weren't for them, no one would have these useful items: IPhone, Android, Xbox, Window computers, etc. However, the reason they accomplished all that, was because they both studied and worked hard.

Inactivity can also serve a purpose in a person in my opinion. I think that people who do not want to accomplish something is because they do not want to push themselves into doing so. Another reason I think that they're not pushing themselves is because they don't have anyone to support them or help them out. Those are two main reason why I think people are inactive.

In conclusion, we do accomplish more if we are always doing something. you cannot simply do nothing and wait for it to be accomplished by itself. everything thing you do now will lead to a bigger accomplismnet. If you want to be sucessful, you always have to do something, Even though it's little things like helping your parents cook, or washing the dishes. ",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
59E62F702421,"Students should be allowed to do that because they want to learn so much from the professions. They want to learn because this could be their future if they want to. Schools should often do it and will affect these students careers. Kids have these types of dreams that they want to do and learn to get into. They often have the right to ask anybody why these things will help students have a good career and a college degree. The main reason is that this can help kids so much and tell their parents what they learn.

The reason why schools should allow to do this so that kids can go to college and when they are done they can do the job forever and they get the emotion inside of them. Learning so much is the only thing that should help students in school to get all the information inside of their head so that can get them where they want to be. Some don't really have a good thing what they want to do when they are trying to think what they want to do in their life, but it can be a hard choice to decide. Things can really get so good when ever we decide what we tell our parents what we want to do for our lives and other people's too. What we think is that when we go out in the world and see what we think about or something that shocks you when you get so surprised about it and you get it in you head and thats what you want to do.

The job that kids want to do when ever they grow up is the only thing they want to do or something else that's more better than the other one. Things can often have many reasons why kids should get jobs and buy their own things so parents don't have waste any more of their money on them. It's a good thing that parents should make kids work for a job to get money and save up to go to college and have a good time. The thing is that schools have the right idea to teach kids what they should and what they should learn about. This is why it's the right idea to make schools teach students other things that they should. For kids that wanna play sports should really work hard on keeping track on what they should do at school of homework, projects and many other stuff. It's a good thing that kids should keep track on what they to do in order to pass the grade and graduate.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.5
9C7B4130AA3E,"Yes you can influence other people by you setting a good example by your own behavior. When you give someone advice, on what not to do or what to do, they won't take you serious because you're not following your own advice. They'll see you as if you're playing around if you do the opposite of what you told them. That's why a lot of people say ""Actions speak louder than words"". There's a difference on saying things, and actually doing them.

Therefore, there are people who knows you, and want to be like you. You never know if they can come up to you, out of nowhere and ask for opinions and advice. You can't just say anything, you can say something you do, and something you follow. Keep in mind that there's a lot of things people see in you. How you behave can change the way they see you too. Believe it or not, people actually see what you do. If you have siblings, they see your actions without you knowing, and they could do the same things. Giving advice to people is easy, but they would want to see you follow your own advice too.

There's people who you might not know, but they do know you and they act the way you do because of the way they've seen you behave around them or around other people. People who tries to copies you and your actions. There are people in this world who watches your behavior and actions. Yes, you can influence others by you setting a good example by your behavior. set an example, before you give one.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
7AC5AC48813D,"I believe that schools should allow the students to graduate in traitional four years,

instead of three years because If some of the student faill the class or the SOL, they should a time to retake those classess they faill. Most of the students dont what to take a courses during the summers. Some students want to take a elective courses in schools not in summers chas as a art, muise, and language they want.

I personily believe students graduate in four years because they will have time to retake a class or SOL if they need to do. I think it's head for some of the student to work and graduate in three years instead of four years. The most immopat think is that if the students faill a class they can't graduate the hight schools befor they pass the class they faill.

Most of the student's don't want to take a courses during the summer because they want to have free time , they don't want to work on summers. Some students work and save some money for college. They don't want to work for schools on summers. They're some family who love traveling with they're kids.

Most of the students want to take a elective courses but not in summer. Couses whay want to take is art, muise, and language they want. Some of the classes that students take as a elective courese can help them in college or in work force. Some of the elective courese that students take can help them find out what they like or dislike.

Overall my position on this issue is that schools should offer a four years hight schools, instead of three years because it's can hlpe students to get ready for college and work. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
49C5BCE4CD28,"Would you ever want to go Skydiving? I think Skydiving would be fun because you can see everything from up high and you can face your fears. If you are afraid of highs you can go and Skydive with your friends or one of your family members. When your are up in the sky you get to see trees,grass and other stuff from far away. I think it would be fun because you get to fly in the sky. If you Skydive you can see animals that you never saw in your entire life. You can also maybe see weird stuff that you never saw. You can see a dog,cat or small houses and tiny people. If you Skydive i think you would fine a lot of different kind of things in the air. If you were to scared to go on a roller coaster. You can go on a roller coaster now because you jumped off an airplane. And If you were to scared to go airplane because it was to high. Now you can go on a airplane and travel because you wouldn't be scared to be that high and where you jumped from the airplane. The airplane is going to be the same hight. I think you won't have fears of heights anymore and you would like to travel a lot. You can go to places that you can't go with a car. Like bora bora or the other tropical places. Skydiving can be a lot of fun but it can also be very dangerous. If you don't know any thing like how to turn on the air bag for you to float you could fall when you land. If you don't know how to land you could hurt yourself or land somewhere else. If you don't feel safe i think you should go to the indoor one first. After all, Skydiving can make you see weird stuff that you never seen before and you can face your fears by going on an airplane or riding on a roller coaster. I think one day you should go skydiving and see every thing that you can see. If you are scared of highs like mountains or going on high stuff. I think it is going to help you but if you think you are not going to know what to do for the air bag. I think you should go to the indoor one first. If you want to go to the outside one someone is going to be on top of you and they are going to be doing the air bag and the landing. You are just going to be flying with them and you don't have to worry about anything you can just see the view and see if you see anything interesting that you never seen before.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
CE246FE2471F,"One day my mom told, "" son, be positive in your life,and everything will be of success"". Since i started to be more positive in my life, everything was looking better, i found the job that i wanted, i bought my first car, and, me and my family move to a new house, overall everything was looking better. Based on my experience people should be positive and be around positive people, listen to positive music and found activities that incorporate positive attitude.

People should find new friends that give good vibes and help them become a better person, because sometimes the problem might not be themselves , might be people thats around you telling bad stuff, and always making you a have a bad day.

Changing the music that you listen to, could help you be more positive, because most of the songs and artists that most people listen to these days, sign about, drugs, killing people, gang related stuff, and thats good if you want to be positive.

Founding activities that incorporate positive attitude could help also, like going to church, going to the movies with the family, or going to a motivational speeches, will get you into a positive mood and forget about all those negative stuff going on in your life.

Being positive is good, and it makes you feel good and have success in life, but not always is good, because, life sometimes is unfair and we have to deal with it, we cant be leaving thinking that everything is good, when the reality is that the world is getting worst and worst everyday.

Looking ahead in the future, i see the new generation incorporating positive activities over the whole world, and making the whole world see life of a good and successful perspective.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
386C2A01AD9D,"If you could pick a job what would it be? Have you ever saw someone who needed help but you could not do nothing. I would like to pursue to be a Doctor because I would like to help people and they get payed a lot of money.

First of all, I like to help people because when I was five my mom was vary sick I barely could do noting at all so that is why I want to be doctors has talent they can save their family and if I was older I know what she needed I was five. For example,people get sick a lot and I want to help people with cancer or lost a leg a arm,or an body part. I want to change someone life. For instant to many people die from little thing and I want to pervent that is one reason I want to be a doctor. In closing I think I should work for sick people.

In addition, doctor get paid a lot of money for helping people but you have to go to school and finish college for you can have a lot of money. A outer reason why,doctor get paid a good amount of money because they work 24/7 non stop to help us in need of help or in life. They save people life of course they get paid a lot, In conclusion I will love to work to be a doctor.

I would like to pursue to be a Doctor because I would like to help people and they get payed a lot of money.

This evince show helping people can help.          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
60623DB5DE7A,"Four-day work week, a remarkable idea to conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted the idea of a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. I think this idea is amazing, workers would have a day off and they won't be wasting energy and resources like in a regular day of work. Therefore i think my school should follow this model and extend the school day two hours in a four-day school week. Students would be happy of having a day off, and most of them would support the idea of having a four-day school week. By following this idea, my school would conserve energy and a lot of resources such as papers, school materials, food, etc.

A four-day school week benefit students and teachers in many ways, students would have a day off and time to do extra curricular activities such as sports or work, teachers would be at home and have time to spend with their kids and be with the family, and all of us would be conserving energy and resources. One disadvantage of having a four-day school week is that some parents work 5 days a week in different companies and these companies might not have the four-day work week so they won't have time to be with their kids at home in the day off, and some of them would be forced to change their five-day work week to a four-day work week, so they can be with their kids at home.

Personally, i would prefer the four-day school week, because,i have a part-time job after school , it is from 5 to 10pm, and having a day off would allow me to have time to do some extra work at home and to change my schedule for in the morning so i can have the rest of the day to work on my stuffs, have time to chill, or maybe to do my homework, and help my mom with whatever she needs.

Having a four-day school week, would let me have time to do a lot of things during the day, for example, babysit my little brother if my mom goes out, go to the gym or maybe help my dad. I can get another job to work on the weekends, the thing is that it would allow me to be busy, and to generate money.

In my family, my dad is the one who is always at work, he works from 8am to 6pm everyday, he doesn't have a day off, but it is okay for him. My mom, she doesn't work, she is always at home taking care of me and my little brother, for my parents, it wouldn't be a problem for me to have four days of school a week, because my mom would take care of me during that day off.

In conclusion, i think having a four-day school week, would benefit a lot of people, because just like me, there are plenty of students that would love to work more and generate money, and for the teachers, well they would enjoy have a day off and spend time with their kids at home.",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
692357D5F3F0,"For student that try to graduate early. Is a good idea to graduate early if they are thinking go to college or if they try to work. Student need to be able to take class out of the school. Some student will need to take class in summer school. For some student is more difficult to graduate early because they need work for help in theirs houses. For make this possible student must need to be; determine, preparete, and flexible.

Student that try to graduate early they must need to be determine. they need to be determine for be able to past all their class an exams. and example is; ""I have a friend that is graduate early and she is taking class in the evenings"". Student that are determine is going to be more easy to finish high school early. Yet if you are planing to go to college is a good idea to graduate early.

Student that try to graduate early they must need to be preparate. They need to be preparete to take more class during school year. They need to be preparete to have a full skehchule and not be able to take elective class. they need to prepare because they maybe need to take class during summer. They need to be prepare to pass all their class and exams that they need for graduate early and not to stress out.

Student that try to graduate early they must need to be flexible. Sometimes you have to be flexible for what you have to do like if you work and go school if you try to graduate early you have to be able to stop working and focus just in school. Students need to be flexible for new things and face in the best way. Like if you find difficult in one of your class you should ask your teacher for help. Student need to be flexible because if they take class in the evening or online is going to be different and maybe difficult for them but they need to be able to find a way to be successful.

Is good for student to graduate early from high school. Yes is good if they feel they can do it and pass everything what they need to pass. Student need to be determine, preparete, and flexible for pass the classes and exams for graduate early. The opportunity that schools offer to graduate early is really good for student that think about go to collage. Graduate in three years is good for students because they can start college early and be finished in less time.                                                                                                                              ",3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
4DCA7736B00C,"Changing the school menu healthier is a good idea. There are some food that is being served to the students that is not healthy at all. In some of the foods there is so much oil, that is not healthy instead it can make us sick. The more healthier students are the more productive they will be. They will feel like they are more energetic and want to run around, that means they will want to try out for sports. Some of lunch food now makes students really lazy because of all that oil, that means they just want to sleep and not do anything at all. The healthier food will help out many kids with health issues. The students need to be healthier young, for the future they don't have any health issues. The healthier food can help students with their body, less fat and motivates them to be someone they thought they couldn't be. The more healthier students are, the less sick they are. Students are more present in school. Students need some of the vitamins from the healthy food. There are so many good benefits of having a healthy lunch, not only for health issues but make students feel really good about themselves. The healthy food is less expensive than the food they are serving. Students like fruits, vegetables and many more healthy food, they should have the option to choose the type of healthy food they would like for lunch. There are so many amazing benefits of eating healthy, it helps out in life style and makes people feel really good about themselves. ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
47470951BBDB,"Do you remember a time you hated cleaning you house?

Well if people hate doing that imagine them doing community service and how that don't have air conditioning like a house do its outside in the hot sunny day and just have water to drink sweet coming down your face. some people complain of what they have and what they don't have, how nasty the food is and not, how one person got something better then they do, how hard it is to keep on cleaning everyday of their life. But, the best thing to have is a beautiful place to live but we wont have that if we don't keep our self together and keep our environment clean because if we don't then we would be living in a nasty ugly place then a nice and beautiful one like LOCATION_NAME how sweet and beautiful the air is. But some people are to selfish to give up a little bet of their time to help and keep our community safe and clean for each another i mean how hard is it. Why would they rather live in a nasty dirty place? we should all in school accepted to work together and do community service and change mother earth and livings around us. So i think we should do community service don't you?",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
AC1F60D0F85D,"I believe people who value Self-reliance should make their own decision, because they know what decision they want to make, but

Sometimes you need to seek guidance from experts opinions about life's important matter, because not everything you think its right its going to be right.

Its also not a bad thing if you chose your own idea or if you seek guidance for the information, if you do both either one is right in my opinion. I think that if you really want to know about life's important value you need to either ask a guidance from expert that know all of the information about life's important matters or if you know the right information you will be fine but its also a great idea to check with experts to make sure that the information you know it's correct or to learn more about it.

In Life you will not know some things thats why another great idea is that you seek guidance expert that knows about life's important matter. Most time time people can be positive that they know about life's important matter and they dont need to seek help and that completely normal .

A personal story that i want to share is that most time i may think that i know everything about life's important matters.

If i sometimes dont go anywhere to seek guidance from expert because Im positive of the things i know, but also they are times where i do need to seek guidance experts about life's important matter and in my personal opinion that helps too when i need the help.

Seeking guidance from expert can help anyone know more about useful information about Life's important matter and much more information. While if you dont seek guidance you won't be able to learn anything about life's important matter.

When you know some information is also good to check with an expert who knows and can give you more information on the topic life's important matter its useful to know information to for the nearest future and also you can teach others who need the information.

Making a decision is not a bad idea neither is seeking for guidance from expert about life's important matters. You can always learn new things if you ask for help and you can learn more about life's important matter.

If you know your facts that can also be helpful and you dont need to go seek guidance expert about it.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
FB6F9B24FD1B,"I think that students should commit to their career at a young age because it will move them and encourage them to go further into being someone that people can rely on, and its a big help to society and the community and it will help it a lot because theirs generations that had some kid that turn into an adult did their part in that generation and the after that and after that, and some things change in the peoples mind once they get older and wiser and that is the big picture. Also some students might change that career because they want the best for them selves and its not bad to change who you want to be in the future because no one is choosing this for them, they are the one thats doing this for the best of them so when they want to make money love what they do to get money with passion they are living the life of a normal money making person and it doesn't matter how much money your making its STILL MONEY!!!! and some people around the world still don't get that. Soon they will want to go to college and thats big step into having their career because theres more studying to it and the teachers aren't as nice as you think they are and they will be very comfortable with you goofing off in class, after that your out of the game, also it a lot of money to pay yearly for their tuition and depending if your were born poor, rich, some what rich or wealthy enough to pay then your fine to stay in their to study party relax and play video games with the boys and eat a lot too if your close to a restaurant, cafe, buffet or a diner then go ahead and fill up that empty stomach. After that when they have a good time their and read to graduate they'll go to a University, and I gotta tell ya it not the same as college, it more studying and more work and if you can handle that pressure with no sweat then your set for a nice year in there, but depending how long your going to stay there, it can 1,2,3 or 4 years when you think you have enough knowledge about your career and studies then your set to get a job that pays you well and have a happy life. Now that we got that out of the way, we need to talk about how the students are going to be effected by by all that has happened to them and how far got to that end point of their journey to be successful in life and be some people he or she can help one another so they make that persons life better and make them feel happy, the students need to be happy with how they are working because if they don't they can have stress and anxiety and soon they don't want to work any more and we can't have that in our generation, so we have to let them be someone that they want to be before some one else will!. Before all that, about all I said about the colleges and universities, their Parents, oh yeah the big dogs the ones who have created you to be a good person with a good career their child/student get older, the students have to tell their parents what they want to be when they grow up to be an adult, yes I know that they always say that when you were a little kid, but your still a kid but a teenager from the age 13-17, your still going to be told that and you have pursue your dream or goal of being someone that goes without saying, so this is why students should identity their careers by the time they enter high school.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
1B981E7E59C5,"some people believe that students will be required to take a music,drama,or an art class.

The students required of many classes to accomplish their knowledge, but some people think that students need to take a music, drama,or an art class because:

I think that students will need those classes to graduate. To get school diploma students will have to accomplish some classes like music,drama,or an art class. they should use those classes for distraction their mind to the other classes for examples math, history and science class then, they will get relaxation. Also, I think that some people wants the students take those classes because those classes represent happiness, peace and an individual talent that every person have. but some people get frustrated that they don not have any talent like sing, act or draw. Some people want that the students take those classes because they need to develop their mind in something productive for the society and for them. No think in bad things or bad actions.

Also,I think that some people think that students should be take a music,drama,or art class because students have the potential to protrude in the great music,drama and art world. To prove to the society the capacity that they may have and that they are the future. They will replace the people that do music drama and art in our present for example artists,painters and others.

I think that some people believe that students should be take music,drama and art classes because is the only way to develop their mind,knowledge and to learn new things that help them for the future. Those classes help the students to get a mental and physical develop because the music make us to express feelings,emotions,or give to the audience a message that we want that they know and understand. The drama help us to develop our mind,but also,help us to use our body to express something that we want that people will know. The art class help us to represent,express and get abilities that students will do not know that they have. With those classes students will be exactly what they are and feel because they will express anything that they may want without get frustrated.

In conclusion some people believes that students should be take music,drama,an art class because they need new persons that express and give to them that knowledge that represent those classes because those students that will learn are the future and are the new generation. Also, because students need express feelings,emotions and develop their knowledge. Because they think that the students are interesting in others things that is not productive and they need to learn those important topic to not be loss and continue with the music, drama and art in our world. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
8A8CC7624410,"I 'll talk about the disagree in many causes I have been paired with people who are bad they have their bad character, they are aggressive, discrminator, inpulsive ,in that aspect, however, one is at risk while being with bad people they even try to do things to one, for example they beat him, they mistreat him, they require him, to do bad things such as killing, rooting, selling druds, and much more in those causes, they usually happen bad today there is much evil sim embark they try to undo othres by giving them bad ideas so that they run the risk just as they do.

but what really the who harm what the please through a machiavellian emotional black mail based of fear of aggresion but under certain circumstances, evil acts can occur without the need of all of us. we have met peolpe who appear to be kind while they gain their trust and that is whea you realize that you are failing that you have been linked to bad people even in recent years,bad people there are people who have an evil background because of their environment can shape us to detect bad peolpe, the occurrence of very mediatic cases of munder or abuse of people make society silvery high because there are such people bad.

The virtues are the qualities we have and that provides a good for the same and for others is to say not knowing how to live whith another in my case, terrible things usually happen to me when I talked to my aunt, I did't know that she was aggressive discriminating well, not only does it happen to me, I have seen more people who go through terrible things that even their own family is bad with onw in case it is terrible to happen with bad people influence.

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person with who, spoke and through the times, realized that he would be badly took him out of school so that the child would be unable to read and would fail to steal in stores how bad it is why he closed the doors and I take that great opportunity away from the boy now the boy is a boy, who is in perdition, because how his own mom did every thing to him now he is a bad boy who is stealing is aggressive all because of her mother's fault why she took that great opportunity from the boy.

that is why today there is so much evil bacause many and others were separated from their relatives making is not only one of the most bad people the propensity to the evil of these children is in the way it is conformed to detect so much evil today full give people with the smile in the mooth and the poison in the heart. ",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
8FF3A8F178E1,"If you wake up a day and you asked yourself what make a person different than other let me tell you that you are not the only one there are many other asked the same ( which is weird). But like John Lubbock says "" your character will be what yourself choose to make it"". I agree with John Lubbock because is important that you have to choose what will be your character traits and this are my reason. Firts reason is you create your own personality. The second reason is the you are not monotonous. And the last reason having others people respect.

When we create our own personality is means in a group of friend we are the funny, the serious, or the person the never pay attention what the other friend is saying ( that is me I never pay attention what my friends is seaying). Have your own personality is important because that is what make you unique when don't permit the other people influeneces with idea.

When a person is monotonous is they don't a different way to do the work they always is going to do the same every single thing for example in art class the teacher make a painting of a sundown and then they have to the same painting all the student is gonna put their own style to the same painting but this student is make a replica of the teacher work he don't put a different style or a different color.

Some people may says that be differentof the other people is no important. However having your own personality is very important and that is my tird reason, having your own personality can get other people respect and some is gonna says the why you are talking about. Well get respect from the others people with your personality can be healthfull because when you are good leader the workers respect you and they work more and if you still confesed well let me ask you if you work with boss the is always angry and he is always yell you will be confortable to work ( I don't belive) or your boss is always making jokes you know to be ""cool"" you will respect him (I don't believe).

In conclution is does matter what other people says or what they influences you always have to be you.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
C1314085435C,"I agree with Ralph waldo Emerson because he say that if you try to do something you will never grow and that mean you can't do anything with Emerson. but that is not possible to do that if he say that the people will be scared with that thing but if I agree with Emerson he can do something about opinion and the people they can do the other opinion and to understand, and how we can agree with other, we can agree something is very important Emerson he can need to stop how to agree or to take out if we do agree we can do each ether. and we can grow we can stay down, he can keep it up not down if will be down how that will be not grow that need to grow is not to stay down.

We can agree about the opinion and to come to understand the agree with the original, the people agree but is not all of them some they agree, because that give the opinion to understand ideas but spicy food that does not agree with person or to the people with other does. The person can agree and he can't do any opinion but he can understand the opinion that he agree. he suppose to agree because there are people they agree and they grow the people have experiences.

Emerson he suppose to agree and people will come to agree with him if is not that the people will not be able to agree with him and that is good to grow, agree is opinion of the people and correspondence the people they have experience to agree and he need to be experiences to other people. Emerson he has a opinion for something he agree and he can do whatever he know but that is not great if you have some ideas you need to took and we can agree each other with other people if we don't know it we can tell with other people they know how they can agree the think we have to agree and that will be good for other people they can say that was very good to agree.

then if that will be great to the people we suppose to it and that is good for the people or person If that he don't to agree the people they can do it many people they do something is important to them if they don;t do anything how they can agree If Emerson does do anything that mean he don't need the people to agree anything with him.

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I can agree and people they can be able to do whatever they want to do and if they have anyithing we can help each other.",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
253B2D521F14,"Do you think starting a career at a young age is good? Many students think that starting a career at a young age is good, but its is not a good thing for them or in general. Students often choose to start it at an early age because they could be really excited about it. I think that them focusing on their studies until they get older is even more better, and it would be a great thing to do. And instead of the young students hanging out with their friends at somewhere thats unrelated to their career or studies, they should maybe go to a tutoring center or help each other. Students should also have time to think about and choose a career that they think they would focus on really well. If students start a career at a young age, it can have quite many consequences. Usually doing so would make them more likely to have failure in their career, lack of some education, and they won't get much respect from people.

One of the reasons why I think that students shouldn't commit to a career at a young age is because they will more likely to have failure in their career. If they have failure in their career, there will be many problems. One of the problems that could happen is that they could get sued if if they end up doing something wrong. Another thing that could happen is that they could get many complaints about things. And if people complain about them and if they make bad reviews about them, it will make their image look bad. And for that they might not be making a lot of money out of their profit, because people know what failures they are.

Another reason why I think that students shouldn't commit to a career at a young age is because they will lack some education.

If they lack some education, they won't be able to know a lot about their career. Its just like a chicken is running to get to the other side of the road with his head cut off. One thing they will also have trouble in is interviews. They will not be going to get success if they don't know much. And if they don't know anything about their career, that person could get fired. One of the things that they would also be doing is making a lot of mistakes. The students should stay much longer in school to get proper knowledge of that career so that they will earn success.

Another reason that students shouldn't commit to a career at a young age is because they won't get respect as much as a well educated person that knows all their studies and who knows a lot about their career, if they do so. People would probably ask them that why didn't they take their studies further. Also, and what they could've done before to fix this situation is that they could've gotten help from others such as their friends, teachers, by staying after school for extra help, or asking their parents to hire a tutor. Additionally, or what they could do instead of getting extra help, is that they could just focus in their career class and not slack off. They should also do a career that they're interested in. Because a lot of the times when they see that one of their friends chose this one career, then they will do the same one. That's why young students should always think and choose very wisely when it comes to picking career.

Young students should focus more on their studies and shouldn't commit to a career at a young age. They should all focus, and they should keep studying until they get much older, rather than choosing a career at a young age. It is also a very important to not have failures and mistakes in your career, so that your career turns out to be good. I think that young students should always study, and never lack any sort of education. Also, and that they should get the most of education to gain much more of peoples respect. By doing all of these things as a young student, they will achieve great success. By them not doing these things, they won't get much of their career success.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
CEE41F7526FA,"I have some reasons why I would disagree with the school board because I don't like the idea of staying more time in school. Either way it is not a good idea because the school would face alot of work with the time extended plus it's gonna be more work than ever with the school extending. And I have a lot of reasons why its a bad idea so I guess start the reading the paragraphs right now.

First extending the school day would get a lot of students mad at the school because they want to go home and do whatever they want. The students would have to stay longer in the school and some would be mad and some be happy about it. And students that are bulllies would have a bigger chance on picking on people during the extended time of school. The next day the school would most likely be getting emails from students and parents complaining about the extended school day. While other students and parents wont care and go to school like a normal day and al lot more.

Also the jobs in the school could change like the teachers job and other jobs in the school time would be extended. Some teachers would complain by the extended school day if there gonna do a extended day everyday they are gonna have to be payed more or else the school would die slowly because all teachers,staff and other jobs in the school would quit and go work somewhere else better and get paid more. If one teacher does quit their job because of the extended time he/she would most likely tell other people that the school is terrible then the school would barely get people to work there and in a couple years later probably the school would be abandoned for other people to explore to see the leftovers of the dead school.

Finally the school would change by alot than before it ever has in its couple years of existance. The school would have to face a lot of consequnces like a lot of students posting on the internet about how the school is trash,boring and now they want to go to a different school. And the teachers would complain about if they are going to teach more than ever they want to get bad even more money. And they would have to change the whole school time of the day,the bus time and the students classes time which would took a very long time to do. Either way other jobs in the school would be more difficult than ever for example janitors,staff and teachers.

Even though the school really does want to change original time to a extended time it's not the smartest idea in the world because theres gonna end up being consequnces to it and they are not going to be fun for anyone. Either way next thing you know the county that owns the school will just die because of the extended day. Because then who knows probably no one then later on wants to go the either school in the county anymore and would probably just moved out to go to a better school. So this is why this idea is a bad idea. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
E2D7273C427B,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative affects on people's lives?

Technology have a positive affects on people's lives for...

To contact people, persons have friends and family that are in other countries or states that they can not see them but can talk with them by technology, is using technology to meet new people and be more social, and it is easily to contact with friends and plan to hangout with them.

Some jobs and companies need the technology for; save information about its costumers as their names and orders, to organize documents that can be important to the company. and to contact with the workers more quickly or let them know what they have to do next day by calls or emails.

Now it is more comfortable to students, now some schools are allows for use laptops for schools, withe the books in the past was to required to bring all your books for schools every day, but now just you have to bring your laptops that has every book that you will need in all yours classes, and to turn in assignments and projects because you just have to press a bottom and your teacher will have your work to grade it, and it can help to teachers to explain to students more clearly with videos.

technology do not affect to people's lives in a negative way it is contrary it is a positive affect and the people that said it is negative is because they possible they are old people that they are not accustomed with the technology.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
55AEC9A9BB4C,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to the success in life, I'm totally agree in this case, because as we are growing up, we are thinking in just positive things. when we are kids, we start thinking in what we want to be when we grow up, then we turn to adolescent and we start thinking in what university we want to go, and finally when we turn to the age of adult we start thinking in what we gonna do to give a better future to ours children.

First, when we where kinds we have only positive attitude,we only think in positive things as what we want to wen we grow up, for example: some kinds said theta they want to doctors,astronauts, and teachers; some kids said that they want to be doctors because, they want to save lives,

and find the priest for the cancer, some kids said that they want to be a astronauts because, they that to go to the moon, some kids said that they want to be teachers because, they want to teach others kind something that they know and they know is gonna be helpful for them in life.

Second, when we turn to the ages of adolescent, we start thinking in our graduation of high school and what university we want to go that is better for us, we think in positive thing that can can be better in our lives, something positive so we can have a better future and not be in gangs or things like that that can cost our lives, In my opinion positive attitude in can help you to find find a better way in your lives to find what you really want to be, and just that it can help you to find good friends and good works, because your attitude It's what makes a better person.

Finally, when we turn to the age of adult we start thinking in what we gonna do to gives a better future to ours children. when we turn to adults and we have kids we start thinking is positive things that can help to our kids in there future, if we have a positive attitude everything that we do for ours kids It's gonna be all right, because we know that what we are doing is positive and not negative, but is we do things with a negative attitude we know that ours kids are gonna get things wrong and then they gonna a have a negative attitude as we teach them in home, thats why we have to teach then just positive attitude.

In conclusion,

positive attitude is the key to success in life, because positive attitude it can help you to find a better life, makes good friends, find a great job, and it can help you to gives a better future to ours kids, positive attitude is the key to keep going forward and have a better life.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
4FE6EABBFC00,"One topic that is frequently debated is if people should make their own decisions or seek guidance about life's important matters. People think that they should make their own decisions. They feel that it makes them learn from their mistakes and become mentally strong. I believe that people should seek guidance from experts because they know more about life's important matters, some people don't know how to make the right decisions , and they may help them with valuable lessons.

Experts may know more about life's important matters than most people. They might've learned from experience or studied others, a class of sociology. They know if something is wrong with the person, if they had a bad day, and if they had sleep.

Some individuals don't really know how to make the correct choices, they often try to make the worst choices work but that will never happen. They're afraid on what the good choices bring, if it brings good or if it brings worse.

As you have read, it is strongly recommended that people should seek advice from experts, because we will not let others make bad decisions unless they are good ones.",5.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5
86ECF13FEDEF,"Why I disagree that first impression are almost likely to never change overtime? Well,In this world many people have experience bad,nice,and fake first impressions. Why because people have a bad feeling about you, you are not aware of what is happening in their heads, and maybe they just wanna take advantages of your personality or who you are.

One, First Impressions that I deal with everyday is give nice impressions with my friends. However, the person need to be interest on the topic you're talking about or just be goofy. People sometimes come up to you and smile and said hi or was sup because they know you're alone. If you wanna make new friends or have the respect that you want you only got to show them your nice impression. For Example: In the movie Everything,Everything the girl couldn't go outside because she could get sick,but the new neighbor his name is Generic_Name and he decided to smile and said hi through the window. She smile back to him and then she went to bed.

Two, I have experience bad impressions about people being rude for no reason. They bring a side of me that when they said bad stuff they think that I am going to stay quiet. I just give them the same energy back because nobody deserved to be treated on a bad way when you're trying to just said Hi or want a new friends. If your in pain or suffering don't take out your anger on others cause for a first impression you going to be looking like a bad guy. For Example: If a Hispanic kid decide to ask a person for the class room number and that person start to laugh in his face the Hispanic kid gonna feel oppress and feel bad. People don't realize that by first impressions you could win the whole world, but no people like to be hard and act childish.

Three,Fake Impressions make the person to take advantage of your opportunities and your personality. The person wants attention all the time but then start talking mess up things about you. I have experience people making fake impressions when they said Hi they look at you a certain way that you know is wrong. Fake Impression led you to think that the other person is talking behind your back. The person pretends to like you, but in particular the person don't care about your feelings or the friendship. For Example: My Ex BFF a year before we stop talking we meet and is was fun, but until I left to VA she decide to not care for me,text me, or call me. That hurt me so much that months past by an you even feel better without that friend because since the begging she was giving me fake impressions and I didnt catch on.

In conclusion, Sometimes you need to calm down before to start speaking to a person. Be nice and never let negative thoughts on your mind that are going to make you look bad. Let people talk to you first and then think about their first impression. I been nice, but sometimes I gotta get mad with people cause they don't even know you and start calling you names but is not worth it to think about that cause that said a lot about their first impressions. First Impressions will never change cause once you speak whatever come out your mouth is gonna stick to that person forever. You know that you when accomplish somebody smile or laugh that's everything to them is important that is their first reaction and by First Impression you can win the world by been nice all the time and make new friends or win the respect that you deserve or them.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
DB2EA5C4828F,"Technology is positive, because is the good possibility for people the accomplish method system, the effect by people is have playing blow up when is play have a ball is very good for your health. the many person said the woman is not good that sport but the woman is very good for all along time. reading the books is good for your skull you think by relation in your life. never put down handle by another person when you had acquire that examples when me litter girl get at in the unites states but my parents they say no you no sties here but for my 15

years I no like for party i sad my parents my gift is the trip.

I don't spoke very more English sorry this is story in Spanish, I litter stands the question.

para mi el juego es bueno siempre cuando tu lo vez como una meta tuya no como una competicion solo como algo que tu crees que puedas ase, no para ser mejor que los de mas todas las personas piensan que cuando tu puedes una vez lo puedes siempre no siempre en la vida se gana y se pierde nunca tedes por vensido con lo que quieras ser, leer libros te ayuda atomar cual quier situa sion aprendes de los personajes y siempre pon encuanta todo lo que lees si es malo no puedes mejorar tu vida si tu quies. nunca terrindas con lo que quieres ser si tu estas dispuesto a ser eso pues con ti nua con tus metas pero solo se tu no te creas mejor que los de mas todos somos iguales por esos algunos no pueden a ser las cosas que quieren por que siempre quieren verse mejor que los de mas.

cuando yo hera muy pequena queria viajar para los estados pero mis papas me lo inpidian ellos siempre quisieron lo mejor para mi pero no sentia queera muy ariesgado para mi el camino luego yo les die que no me importava que tanto tenia que sufrir pero que queria estar en los estados unidos por que era lo mejor par mi luego ellos si aseptaron por que veian que donde estaba era mas complicado y no me iva superar.

y gracias al efuerson de mis papas y adios no estaria donde quiero estar siempre hay que tener encuenta lo que quieres aser no por que los de mas eso quieran para ti hay que ser ponsable por si solo por por que alguien quiera que tu seas difernte     ",1.0,1.0,1.5,1.0,1.0,1.0
E55289EA6492,"The author who wrote this line was very smart based in the life actuality the people when say, "" you will never grow"" I'm agree with the author I think in this world some people not are conform with the that have. However the problem is that some people are avaricious, think that are better that others people and want all at the same time.

The first reason is that some people are avaricious, is a bad influence for the people that want grown in the jobs, school and in the milieu family, for example my brother not finish the school, Because He like the money and He think the best solution will be leak of the school for work more and have more money. And now He say that is not good idea leave the school for money.

So they's think that are better that other people, for the society cause indifference to the other people, rejection would be also bulling. I am disagree with the thought of this type of people for example, if she/he can make something grand also the other people can the major greatness is the humility.

The third reason is want all at the same time, when the author talk about ""you will never grow."" Is because the knowledge of the life is not obtain things materials amount, because in this life all is vanity if you want grow start for conform with the little that you have for example, the education help for that you will be a good person with principles.

The conclusion is that the life have many opportunities bad you have the option take one opportunity. For that you can grow and can be a good person, and be intelligent because the vanity is bad adviser.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
FFA6690BC309,"Having activities after school are good ideas for students so they would spend the time doing good things and not thinking in make bad decisions and we do not need more bad people in this world we need more good people to succes in this world. Although some people think that schools should control the students involvement in extracurricular activities nevertheless, the students should decide if the student wants to do extra activities after school because students would have the freedom to decide and some students needs that time to study or to work.

First, students need to have the freedom to decide if they want to do actives after school for example some students work after school sometimes they need that time to make money to help their parents to pay bills like rent or water. If the students have activities after school they would not be able to help their parents. Also some students need to take care of their family members like their brothers, sister or cousins. If the students do not help to take care of their family members their parents would have to pay somebody else and that would mean spend more money for them. The students who work are also learning more skills so in the future they would not be lazy and they are learning how an adult life is that is not to easy but they would be lucky because they would have learned that when they were younger. Also sometimes parents decide for the students to do an activity that they not even like which it means that the students would not be happy and they would have a lot of stress is better that if they want to do an activities they should decide what they want to do not be a parents decision.

Second, students need this time after school to do homework or to study. For example if the students have activities after school they would be late at home and they would be tired which it means that they would not study or do their homework so they would get bad grades and if they try to do their schools homework they would stay up late which it means that they would not get enough of sleep so they would be sleeping and lazy at class the next day. Also students need this time to take a break from the school and relax students school's life if hard sometimes they need a break from everything to came back with more energies. Having enough time to study would help the students to improve their skills at school so in the future they would have more opportunities to find a good job that they would enjoy and they make money to have a decent life and support when they have a family.

This shows that students should decide if they want to do extra activities after school because students can have the freedom to decide and the if the students have activities after school they would not have time to study or to do their homework. In my conclusion the life of a student is not easy they need to know how to manage their time so they can go to work or study sometimes they also have things to do at their house taking care of their family members. Students needs to choose if they have extra energy to do activities after school. Students would have a lot of time in the summer vacations so they can decide if they want to do and activities they would know how to manage their time to work and take care of their families member but they would be also enjoying their time doing activities.      ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
078201045481,"Albert Schweitzer is right because the example is not the main thing in influencing others, but people learn how to be respectful, responsible, and thoughtful to others this can be a really good example to people who are around, is a big responsibility when that happen, people sometimes just see what is the bad things other do life sometimes is hard or easy, all depend the decisions what people choose to be better, just every single one know, everything is like that, good decisions, good things will be happened in the life people have all the power in the mind, heart. People know, is the biggest goal to be better day by day and be the good example for a future family.

In part is right like what it's said before, every single one is a different world, people can see how others live or sometimes criticize of others life, some people want to copy thing from other may be because are jealous of how other live with good cars, house, clothes, luxury things what others expect to have, no one is perfect but some people appear to have the best life, no body has to have billions of money to be happy if people have love and a big heart and charity to others and is no matter the race, religion or economic position, be the best example for those who need direction in theirs life, young people need orientations, discipline, best prospects of life.

This also can be so bad because in the family if the father go out with friends and came back very drunk, the kids may see that, and sometimes the drunk father can be aggressor with the kids and the wife, the father is giving a big bad example to those kids, and this is totally real, if people watch the television and see the news is a lot of people how died every single day not just for aggression in the house also out side when the family are driving and sometimes the father or the mother or both are drunk and they crash the car on the highway, a lot of things, parents have the responsibility if the kids are so little but when the kids growth they will be take their own decisions.

Many people change to a good way or a bad one but everyone have to know that is fine the life is only one, everybody is free to take all the depositions what people want, but with clear mind and the responsibility this can effect so much to those who are very closer, more for those who are young, parents are the most important example, there is the rot, parents have the responsibility of educate the kids, talk with theme, be the best friend, that way the kids are learning and expressing the thinks, dreams, and goals for the future, what the kids want to be, kids can think more clearly when the parents are always there giving counsels, talking like a friend.

everybody see and criticize each other, sometimes people talk so bad thing, everyone have account people are different than others. Examples ones to others every time, every space in the Earth, everything is important. But what can said! the unique on everyone can trust and the best example is God. That's why no one is perfect in the world. Sometimes the parents can be the best example but when comes the times where people do not want to listen or trust this happened when people fail every single time when try to follow others example, every body has to follow the heart, do what people think is the best decision for be the best example to others.",2.0,2.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
C97525A88E48,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to be successful in life. I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life, Because if you have a negative attitude that means you don't believe in your self or you are insecure so you may not be successful in life; but if you have a positive attitude, and know what you doing is correct, so what you doing will make you successful in life. being positive will make you successful. if you are successful in life that means you are positive, and you are happy that you are doing everything as you want.

being successful means that you have achieve most of the things you want in life like buying a house, a nice car, going to college, or getting a diploma; so you always should stay positive,and try hard for something you want in life. being negative won't help you get what you want, or achieve a goal or a dream because you won't believe in your self and you will just let everything just go, and not really try hard for what you want. you make your life successful by doing what you want, and trying hard for and not giving up and being negative to be successful you will make mistakes, but you learn of those mistakes, and not make them again , or do better at something you din't do good on the first time, so just keep trying, and stay positive, and be successful in life ",3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
20AA145EB328,"Some people believe in praising a students work to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the best effort. They believe that the students must be self confident in order to learn. Others believe that praise given to deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. They believe the source of true self-esteem is achievement. True self-esteem is from achievement, it encourages students reach their goals, being a good role model , and being determined for their success.

Students self-esteem comes from achievement, once one goal is achieved students will have confidence, which will cause students to achieve more goals. Students achieving their dreams will encourage others to try their hardest to succeed more. Students will become better leaders by encouraging others to accomplish their dreams as well. This will give students a mindset to not give up easily. When students see others achieve their goals it gives them hope to be able to do the same, which leads to students trying their best to turn in their assignments on time and give their full effort on topics they're given.

However, students having success allows them to be good role models for older and younger generations. Students prove others whats like to achieve their goals and have the emotional support they need to continue their dreams. Students set a good example on how others can accomplish their own goals. Students having confidence and helping others achieve their dreams helps build their self-esteem, which helps students learn better about others and ways to accomplish more goals. Being a good leader will help in many different ways to succeed by, helping others with emotional support and guiding them to their dreams. Students will be very confident when their goals have been accomplished and helping others to succeed as well.

In conclusion, Self-esteem comes from achievement. Students build their self-esteem by encouraging students to try their best on assignments, having emotional support, and accomplishing their dreams. True self-esteem comes from achievement, it motivates and encourages students to reach their goals. Self-esteem leads students to become a good role model.       ",4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5,4.0,4.5
9A9924C0CA97,"Of course the first impressions are almost impossible to change, when you meet with someone, you are waiting that this person can be nice to you, it depens on how you are as a person, sometimes people can make you think good or bad about them , that doesn't mean anything bacuse you dont know how somebody really is as a person until you start knowing about them or start talking with them by any way, you can get information about them from friends or someone who already know this person in case you really want to know about them. It is okay to look over the person you will meet because that way you are feeling sure with yourself about what this person can do or say about you.

Your personality is something that can define you as a human. If you want that people talk good about your personality when you meet them, you will have to give good impressions by doing things like saying hi when you arrive to some place, talk about the good things you have done, sports you play or any healthy activities you can achieve.

If you are a socialist person you know people will look at your personality when you meet them because they want to know if you are a pleasing person, the minds can change, imporessions never do, even if you know a person for a long period of time, you will never forgot how they was before you meet them for the simple fact that the first time is something that almost nobody can forget.

Another reason or example can be when you are looking for a job, you can give good impresions to your probably next boss and the people you will be working with, not just by how you acting it can be by how you are dressing too, your underwear many times can show much about you.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
71B72E8890F1,"Summer is a hot and nice season and most students need time to enjoy the break and here is why, so first off most students go on vacation out of state or country to visit family members and they stay longer than three to four weeks. When visitng family you need time to be with them and enjoy time with them, because you wont get to see them often when you leave. Even if the student stays for two weeks and the student returns they will not have enough time to do their summer assignments or to gather materials for school. One month is not enough time and not fair when us students go 10 months straight to school, two months and couple days is a good amount of time to relax.

Also when it is summer there are plenty of activities to do like go to national parks, amusement parks, water parks, play outdoor sports, have gatherings with family members, and relax at home. I mention these type of activities because they are not available in other seasons like fall, winter, and spring. There should not be a week break in fall, because first there are no special holidays or reason why we should have week off, also if no school for a whole week and Columbus Day people will start to get the habit not to come to school. Although a longer break would be nice for the winter, all we need to have is two weeks for Christmas and New Years.

We need to have more time to learn and be prepared for future exams, especially if some students do not have good grades and are falling behind on their work. Some may argue that two months and a couple days is too much, but parents would not like it if their child was starting to stay home and not go to school. We need to have all the time in the world to be educated and be caught up on all missing assignments. Finally it might seem that most students will forget information during the summer, it will not matter because the student will not be learning the same information as last year.",4.0,4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
AF6E7702012F,"Is doing your best a problem? Personally I feel like there is no problem by doing your best. You should always want to do your best no matter what your doing. But,some people don't like to try they give up so easily that they don't want to do nothing no more. Like me I try my best but,sometimes I don't apply myself,and when I don't apply myself it turns out to bad results.

For Example,Paul George,and the Clippers played against Los Angeles Lakers,during the middle of the game Paul's shots weren't falling so he was having a low scoring game,but he still tried his best to get rebounds and steals to win the game for his team.

For another Example Generic_Name had a test,and there were some questions on there that he didn't understand. so he still worked through the problems,and took an educated guess and still tried his best and got a 75 on the test. usually Generic_Name get a B or above on tests but he forgot that the teacher told him that there would be some questions on the test that the class didn't know.

Final Example,my little sister is a basketball player like me and every Friday i go to ball handling to get my handles right. My little sister never done it before,and the class that we took was advance,it was easy for me because i been doing it for so long. But,i look to my right and i seen my sister struggling and my Trainer told her she was doing it wrong. So she dropped the ball and walked out the gym. After the training we got home,and i had a talk with her,and i told her i was gonna help her out. I showed her the moves outback and she started to get the hang of it,and now she's been practicing on the moves for weeks,and finally uses them in the game. But, she gave up the first time but, she was willing to try,and the results turned out fine because she tried her best.

You should always want to do your best and not give up because if you do your best the turn out would be great. It makes you want to work hard and do better at the things you want to do or get the things that you like. It makes you feel good because you know you tried to give it your all and wouldn't have to stress about it.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
CC8C5C963660,"A study found that 87% of students that participate in extracurricular activities become more involved at school. Extracurricular activities are fun you once you let yourself try something new. Most kids judge something before trying it, but if they try it might be worth it. Most people that do extracurricular have a more happier time in school because of its positive effects. I agree that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity because students can make new friends, become more productive, and finding a passion for something new.

One reason, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity because you can make new friends. When I was kindergarten there was a healthy kids club and I was a shy kid at the time. So my parents thought it would be the best for me to join the club. I was very against but still went to the club. My neighbor joined the club too so we could be together at least. When my neighbor and I came to the first healthy kids club meeting, and we were separated into different groups. A teacher called my name to leave the room with a bunch of kids in my grade that I didn't know. After we got into the room people started talking and making new friends. This one girl named Generic_Name came up to me and we started talking. After becoming friends with her, the club wasn't that bad. Generic_Name and I started to sit by each other at lunch, and played together at recesses. We are still friends together to this very day. Another example is when my neighbor started to learn baseball. As he grew up no one else in the neighborhood knew how to play baseball. He always wished he had someone to play with. Once he got into middle school he heard they were having tryouts for the baseball team. So he decided to try out for the baseball team. He made the team. He started having more friends come over to his house. He even made friends in higher grades then him. He would always being playing baseball or out having fun with his new friends. I could tell he became a more happier person, and that he has now found people he can relate to and overall have fun with too. So this is why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because you can make new friends.

Furthermore, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students become more productive. My cousin she decided to join volleyball team her freshman year. She thought it would be fun to join. She started to focus too much on volleyball. Her grades started slipping and she was told she couldn't play any volleyball games till her grades were up. She had to stay up late nights to complete extra work that would raise her grades. She thought to herself, if she went back to the volleyball team she would have to find a balance to make sure volleyball doesn't take over her whole life. She got her grades back on track and she was allowed to play in games again. She started getting used to her new schedule to balance volleyball, and school. My next example is when my uncle was in high school, he joined an after school club for mechanics. My uncle wasn't a very good child growing up. He was always skipping classes, and never show up to class. Soon he joined a mechanics club with his friends. He instantly fell in love with it. He started showing up for school, and teachers started to see him be more productive. He so after choose his job as a mechanic, and he started to save money to have his own mechanic shop. He soon went to college to learn more about mechanics. He started working in a mechanic shop to learn the experiences of working and owning a shop. He then started his own successful company. Without extracurricular to change his attitude about school, he wouldn't be where he is today. These are a few reasons why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students become more productive.

Therefore, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students can find a passion for something new. When I first joined band I didn't know what instrument I would be playing. I started to play the saxophone and became good at it. Once I started to show my teacher, he offered to put me in honor band and that I would need to stay after school to join it. I started to get new songs for honor band that challenged me. I knew when I grew up I wanted to play saxophone. I'm in middle school and I couldn't get into band this year due to my honor classes. This year I have missed playing the saxophone because its my passion. I have decided next year to do less honor classes to see if I can get back into band and get to do my passion again. My second example is about my closest cousin. She joined her after school baking classes. She started baking cakes for family events and special occasions. She finally found out when she was older she wanted to become a baker. She is now working in at a bakery nearby my house. She is always baking and learning new techniques to improve her baking skills. This year she will be graduating high school early and going to culinary school. She never knew what her passion was going to be and without extracurricular she would have never known. These are my reasons why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students can find a passion for something new.

Students making new friends, people become more productive, and find a passion for something new are reasons why I agree that students must participate in at least one extracurricular activities. Without trying extracurricular people might never know the importance of trying something new. Overall this is why I believe extracurricular can change your life.            ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
D190133EDD2B,"Dear council

I think the city council should adopted the curfew for teenagers because it'll keep them out of trouble. They're some teenagers who will stay outside to trouble the people. It's a good idea for some teenagers to go home at 10 P.M because they are on the street leasoner to muise, and doing nothing but to trouble athers. Will there some teenagers who is stuly for schools, and trying to sleep becuase they are going to schools. If the curfew is adopted, they should make a law that saying teenagers who is out on streets after 10 P.M would be breaking the law.

Most of the teen are jail because they are doing things they should not do. Some of them have gam but most of them not ever 18 to have a gam with them. Some of them is on jail for no reasons but they well find with teen who had gam, and other sutf with them. Most of the teen who have a gam not eve there's, some of the gam that teen have are find in water that people put in and all the thing that other person did in that gam are now everthings is the people that find th gam. The city council and the curfew helping teen, they want all teen to stay out of trouble.

Some people belive the curfew interfere in young people lives. If we look in other side of the stoy , yes the curfew interfere in young teenagers lives but those young teen doing things they should not do. The curfew just trying to help them.

overall I believe it's good idea teen to not be on streets after 10 P.M beaucse they will be out of trouble         ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
C676CE973E9E,"I think that by extending the school hours is not a very good idea. Because there might be some students that have things to do after school and teacher as well. It well effect everyone at the school because there are some student that dont like school very much. So by extend the hours they will not show up to school and that will effect the school and them.

I dont think it well be a very good because there might have some student that have work after school. Or they might have to go and pick up there little brother or sister. And by extending the hours it will not let them do it because they have to be in school and some student will lose there job because they had to stay at school all day.

Some student might have to walk to school and if you extend the school hours then it well get dark and then they cant walk home alone. It will get dangers to go home alone so its best if the hours stay the same because then they will all be fine and by keeping it all the same can help a lot of people.

By extending the school hours the student might not be mad to stay all day at school so some student will not show up at school. Because they will not want to show up at school because they dont want to and that will effect everyone that u know. Because the student will fail and that wont help them at all.

If you extend the school hour then there is going to be more homework to do and held at the end. Because there is go to be more work to do at the end.

Some teacher are going to have some thing to do and work at thing at there homes so by extending the hours the teacher that have think to do they will not be abole to do it and that will make them mad and then they will quit sand that would not be a good idea for the school and the teacher and the student.

So that is why we shouldn do it because it will effect a lot of people and then it will make al lot of people not very happy so if we just keep it the way its soapstone it will be all OK cause then the student will be happy and the teachers will be happy so keeping it the way we have it will help a lot of people.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
E1B279EE81AE,"dear principal

i think some of student want to go help the community and some of them didn't want to help the community but i think that student should perform community service because we not let down the student who wants to go and help the community because if u say the student will not perform community some of student will think that this is unfair and they will not agree with this decision. all i have to say is that student should perform community. have a great decision and also thank you.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
13AB4CC7F80F,"I like to play my instrument,because I like the relaxing songs we play. And my older brother use to play the violin so that's two reason why i started to like instruments so much. And I been trying to learn how to play the violin for a while now. I also learn how to play old to joy which is a amazing song in my opinoin. My new music teacher this new year has very been pushing us to our limit which is great because he could help us on the parts we don't know how to play yet. Moon night is a old music sheet that we still play. The music notes on it are really hard to play, LIke on line number four and ten. It seems like i'm been getting better in just a short amount of time which my teacher and brother are very proud about. If i do master the violin i'm gonna try the paino next and my reason for that is just to play it on a rainy down and I know which song to play and it's called thank you by dido, it's such a lovely song to play when it's raining outside. Also i heard a song called happier which I been trying to play this week. I wonder what kind of jobs i can get if I keep going down this path, hopefully it's a good paying job. Instruments are good educational activitys becasue it makes people to try over and over again until they get it right which is very hopefull ti those who want to keep trying. My brother haves been takeing his time teaching me how to play the violin because he nocites that i been playing it lot or he had nothing else to do. The good thing about instruments it teaches you that things take time and partices to learn just like most things in the world which is really hopefull.

And ever instrument teaches you something a little different from one another which I find it amazing that each instrument has new to explore on it. Also in the world of music you can your music you just need to take your time with it. When you do that song can become the next big thing. Plus you can your feelings into the song and playing from the heart is what music is all about. Playing from the heart can be a little odd to most people, and most people are shy about it as well. And stundents can help each other parts of the music sheet so the teach won't have to waste his time ever stundent who dosen't know a part. Learning how to play a instrument it enjoyable and a new to learn something new, Which every teacher wants from their stundents correct? Also buying music sheets is also a way to go out to world and see whats going on. Which music your mind is your only limit, well that's what my music teacher saids anyway. Plus you might go into a collage for free if your very good at playing your instrument. Which is really amazing that could happen. And i think theres clubs for playing imstruments so stundents can learn which each other with things that they don't know yet which could be a huge help for them and maybe later on as well. Also if they have someone in thier famliy knows how to play a instrument they can teach them as well, and maybe even more.",3.0,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
9CB69011AE54,"The ancient Greek storyteller Aesop said, ""No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.""

Small acts of kindness can have an impact on othes because, if you do something good, if you do something important, if you help somebody.

First, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you do something good like give food to somebody the it's hungry the person in going to be impoact because you are doing something important something the others didn't do.

Second, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you do something important like yake care of something.

Third, small acts of kindness can have an impact on others if you help somebody like help a person save her work for the person her work it's importat the person it's going to be impact if you help her and save her work.

Is not important how small or biger are acts kindness the importnat the you are diing the things you are helping others you are doing something good for others and thats the important thing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
D54C778A8F9C,"I think it can go both ways people can make their own decision or they can seek guidance from experts, or authorities. But its really their choice on what they want to do, it would be helpful to have an expert or authorities to help you with ideas.

People who make their own decisions on life important matters shouldnt need no help with decisions because they have it all planned out its called being responsible. Its always good to make the decisions on your own. There fore you dont need no seek guidance from other people.

People, who value self reliance is doing things on their own like homework,classwork,jobs but then they are talking about should they take guidance from experts, i would take guidance from experts because they know more. they have been there and they have experienced everything so they know how it is. I feel like doing everything on your own can be difficult and tirering and then you just feel like giving up.

In conclusion i think people should get ideas and help from experts and authorities just like i said before they have been there and they are more experienced and i feel like they can help you a lot with anything and help you be successful. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
7A6599531E9C,"Which be the characteristic that show a person positive always time? A person with a positive attitude be kindness with other people show that in life have that be change. In totality is agree with that should have a positive attitude in the life . For example being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life, make that life be comfortable with yourself, and positivism maintain good mental health.

In addition being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. For example that people that are around you will see your positive personality at the point that you can became the people mood to a positivism. and have a character strong that show a person different that make that the people see a thought positive. everybody can be a person with a good attitude in your life for that life be easy.

Make that life be comfortable with yourself. For example a person with a character positive have more opportunities in your life because help that not have preoccupation, In your life and can explore thing that never see also a person that feel a positive actittude not have problem with other people because have calm when other people can be heat thing for your self.

While some people believe that should have a positive attitude in the life.

other argue that should dont have a positive attitude in the life because being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. Although this be valid there are several important idea to be considered such as positivism maintain good mental health. For example, Held take best decision en your life because this help to have clarity thought, that maintain out of every conflict with the other person. also the people will tire to not became mad for simple thing that happen

In conclusion believe that help that be comfortable in life. Is a form that maintain in your head that make for help to have a mental strong, and that other people can see your positive personality in your life have chose a reason that will be change and mark the different for world.                                   ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
EEE6067CF9B5,Some schools have programs that older kids can help younger kids. If they don't know how to somethings in school or out side of school. Or they are there just there to assist other kids that more help then other kids this can be helpful. For older kids that they might have to teach something new that they did not know or just teach something that they had some hard time in when they where leaning this in school. And can be more helpful for younger kids because they might have to work a little more harder and get more. Challenged more then they get at home or school and they get through there homework at this after. School program and then when they get back to school they have there homework done and then there homework. Might not be late or they might just be more on top of there stuff and when they get home they just can relax and play some games or just go outside. And have good jobs later in there lives and I think that more kids should have this. Chance to get this time to study and get better programs in there school. Because we have good programs and then if most of every school have likes programs they can get help by older students and younger students can help they older can help by helping the younger and the younger if they are not doing homework and if they are done with home work they can help other younger students. so they can get the help and the assisting that need or might need because if you are good with some like math but then the homework gets harder they might just need just need some more time or more time study and going over there past home work to see if he can or she can solve that problems or if they can't that why there are the older student. That can them help he or she with the home work or projects. They can help one and other to finish faster and get their projects done if they wish to or they can just work on it just by them self. and then when most of the kids are done with homework witch most won't be they might go on there computers or they can go outside and play some outside games witch so half would go out side and the other will stay to keep this program fun and not just doing homework and classwork all day long. So they can keep or gain some energy to when they are done form playing they can comeback inside with some. Energy and not being broad all the time there are there. at the after school programs.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
39E0A362CF29,"The Generation of today they all want success instead of failure,for success to occur we have to fight for it,success does not come by itself every single human have to built,A success live without losing the enthusiasm,but the problem of today, is that people usually likes to give up things. Although, some say that success does not consist of going from failure to failure actually, it does consist of going from failure to failure,one reason is,because we are getting stronger. At some point we fail in something,for my own perspective it is like a new opportunity for us,so we can learn from our mistake. In general all the people at some point can commit an error,but the problem here is not the mistake committed, the problem is that people start losing the willing to learn,and willing to be better. there is not even one perfect human, who does not fail in anything. Another reason is because you can meet your level. It is really important for us to know our capacity. I am sure that our brain is not limited we put limit in our lives we all have the ability to get things done, it doesn't matter the situation or the problem. There always have been solutions for every single situation,for all the people who does not give up.

Those who believe, that success does not consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm have their reasons. They believe that failure does not give a good outcome to be re joy of;They seem failure like a pain hurting people making them feel really bad, and it makes them not to keep trying. They also think that failure make them doubt themselves,and that is not true my argument is not to give up so easily. They have to try until they get it done,and clearly,but nevertheless they regret it.

In my point of view, I believe that when failure occur we get stronger. An example of this would be my friend Generic_Name: 20 years old, a white man,black eyes, and black hair. He wanted to go to college, to study electricity, but his finance was slow,so decided to learn it without going to college. I knew right away that he will be challenged to make his way thought,so he start practicing looking tutorials, how to fix things, how to change a lamp, all that kind of stuff,but my surprise was when the time pass he apply for a electricity company. I said to him

! are you serious ! don't tell me that you already know electricity. He got a moment of silence... and respond yes, i make my own way he start explaining me all the difficulties part that he was on. He said that at some point he wanted to just forget that,but something inside of him wanted to keep trying. Of course the people were saying no you cant do it in a funny way,but he did not listened to the people. Moreover he wanted to keep going. He knew that it was something hard to become an electrician,but not impossible. Today Generic_Name is a really good electrician. He did not only learned electricity. He also learned how to paint houses. This is a proof that we cannot give things up only because it seem hard. It is not based on your finance. Some people have a low economy,but still there is not wall that can stop the willing to do something. It only required a personal character and volunteer. What might happened if Generic_Name loss the enthusiasm he probably will be putting less importance on him.

I also think that when failure occur frequently, we will know and meet our level our own capacity, like what are we made of. A prove of this can be my sister in law. She was on high school senior year. She had some problem in her algebra 2 class at the beginning she did not understood anything. She was in every single class,but the problem was that her grades in algebra were critical,so she talked with her boyfriend Generic_Name which is my brother. She was saying that she did not wanted to go to her algebra 2 class. Not anymore,because it was too hard she feel less intelligent and she wanted not to keep trying. My brother respond, I think that you are just starting in the way that you have not try like I would like you to try, if you doubt yourself that is a problem,because I can see a really smart person right in front of me. Believe in yourself and try again after that, she decided to give everything or nothing, so she was studying really hard, asking a lot of questions to the teacher, with that hunger to learn, and be the best in her Algebra class. Even though her classmates were ironic. Her eyes were not on them. In addition she learned a lot at the beginning she was below of her classmates, more often she was the Hornet in her class with a reward for trying super hard, and get things done on time. Image what might occurred if my sister in law give up, so easily of course she will fail the class in all quarters and have that tone of loser on her.

In conclusion, when failure comes don't let it the opportunity to take over you,because you will be thinking of yourself bad things. If you are having hard times and you can't see things clear, just ask these question to yourself Do i am doing enough for it or i am just starting?. every single of us have a big ability there no exceptions. there is people who really know what they want,and fight for it and there is people who easily give things up. We should be those kind of people who does not look for their goals and dream who are sitting down expecting how other people naturally reach to their dreams.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
6CA2ADCE9A7F,"Do curfew keep teenagers out of trouble and safe, or do they unfairly interfere in young peoples lives. And why is it good or bad for them.

In my opinion I think it would be bad for them If teenagers stay until after 10 p. m and not having a curfew, so it is good for them to have it because of these three examples.

If this was a law I think it would be good for them to have the curfew because they will have a time limit and they'll know what time to not go outside, because if the stay outside until after 10 p. m they are basically breaking the law.

I think it will be good for them because if they don't have it it will interfere their lives and their life schedule. And it will make them and keep them unorganized about everything. Because they can't sleep well, they won't have enough energy to keep up with their daily works.

In my opinion it will be good for them to have it because, it would be more safe for them and they will be more safe and it will keep them away from danger and trouble. Because they will know that after 10 p. m it might not be safe for them.

In conclusion it is good for the teenagers to have a time limit or a curfew for them to go outside. Because it will keep them safe and out of trouble. And it will make them and keep them organized. And the point is that if it was a law. It would've be better for them.

These are my three reasons to , why it's good for the teenagers to have a curfew and make them a time limit for them to go outside.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
6C9BFD05D35D,"Have you ever gone to a place that you have never been before ? what activities did you do to keep yourself occupied ? The activites I would do is sight see, swim, and climb or walk to where I want to go.

If I could go any place in the world it would be Jamaica because there are many places you could go to do activities, there is a variety of food,and different types animals.

I would go to Jamica because there are many places to go to do activites like a mountain or a beach. There are many activites I would like to do at a beach or mountain. I would swim at a beach so I could feel the fresh water. I would also climb the mountains to feel the fresh air. I would want to sigh see at the top of a mountain. Since there are creatures in the water I could look for them. I would like also just laying on the sand and enjoy the weather.

I would also go to Jamaica because there is a variety of food. I could find the variety of foods in reasturaunts, on tropical trees, and in a creek. I could find rice and beans in reasturaunts. I could find coconut and banana on a tropical tree. I could also find crayfish in the water and other fish. If you catch a crayfish or regular fish I would fry it. If there is a variety of foods then I could change my eating style while I am there.

Lastly I would go to Jamiaca because there are different types of animals. I would probably find chickens or other birds that fly or run. Also I could find stray dog that roam around the streets. I would like to find fish that have claws or fish that have fins. I might find frogs that are poisonous and ones that are not. I think I could find goats roaming around eating peoples plants. I could also find snakes that have fangs or are poisonous.

I would go to Jamaica because there are many places to go to do activities, variety of foods, and different types of animals. This place is unique compared to others and also this place has lot of nature. This is why I would want to go to Jamaica If I could go to any place in the world.        ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
A0B2BF94231C,"First impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree because when you look at a person for less than 6 seconds you think you know that person. Until you have a coversation with that person at least for ten mintutes. Your impression will change. However i disagree that first impressions is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks,personality, and their communication skills are always that change your whole point of view of that person. From your first impression, when you look at them.

However the way a person looks from your first impression isnt always who they really are. Your observation on someone aren't truely who they are. The person can be good looking person you've ever seen and you really want to meet them. Until they are the wost person, that you hate so much. This also works the other way around too, the person could be the ugliest person you have ever met, but you never gave them a chance. Thats when you realize that, that person is really good. Its also like dont judge a book by its cover. Until you actually meet that person and get to know them.

Personality can change your first impression. Personality is mostly who you are finding out, who that person is, can be life changing. For you not knowing who someone is can have a big change for you. You really dont know who you are really meeting. Personality gives great insights in that person and who they really are. Also however they want to come out to you.

Also communication is key its really important to have communication. Communication gives confidence to the other person who you are communicating with. That shows that you understand the other person and feel comfortable with them. Having good eye contact and hearing all the information of the conversation that they are giving you, makes them open more up to you.

Additionally, i disagree that the first impression is almost impossible to change. Their personality, the way they look, and communication skills can always change your whole point of view on a person. Looks can be looks, personality being honest no matter what. Communication skills are you by listening, can help you on your first impression. Therefore by taking the time, day, hours , and effort to get to know someone can benefit you from not judging a book by its cover. First impressions can change ,by getting to know that person and who they really are.             ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
07A4DAFDE5B7,"Hello, Mr: Principal.

I'm writing to you this letter to inform you about our responses about changing the school manu.

I'm a senior student in your high school. I really want to thank you about approving the idea of chenging the school manu to a new healthier and bigger one. We really appreciate that.

Some of us have a bad experince about the unhealthy food and the schol old manu.

one of them is PROPER_NAME he hate the spicy food and once before he tried it by mistake from the cafeteria, his stomach hurt him and he was throwing up all the day, and all of that because of the un healthy food.

And also I will tell you sir about my own experince, I still remember, when I was a kid I had one of the worst days on my entire life in the middle school when I decided to eat the new spicy wings with the super hot souce, I went to the hospital and I was very sick for a long time in the home.

And all of that because of the unhealthy food such as what our school used to have.

Do you know sir, I used to feel unacceptable in the school, just because the food, just because I can not eat like the rest of the students. and I can not enjoy the food with them.

I have never tried the school food since that day. the only case I could eat the school food is when the cafeteria have some kinds of soap, and some kind of the none spaicy food. And there is a lot of students have the same case of me, we all are sharing our healthy lunch together, you might before have seen us in the cafeteria while we are setting as a circle.

But by your decision, there are more than a hundred of student will turn back to eat in the school cafeteria.

We all will be enjoying the new cafeteria manu.

Especially because I heard that will be a different types of milk and different type chicken and also I heard from the new chef that you brought him from one of the biggest holtes in Virginia, he told me we will have a few types of salmon fish and others fish types.

In my opinion changing the school cafeteria manu was great idea to begin to keep your student health safe, especially your freshman and salphamore students.

I know what i'm telling you about the salphamore and the freshmens student very well, because I have my youngest brother his name is Generic_Name, he is addicted to the unhealthy food with the all of this food types, like the fast food. he could eat only the fast food in his life and he would be happy, but his body would not like that. Acctually his body begun to hurt him from now, because he been so fat and he could not move or do ant effort. he eats only the fast food which is the only unhealthy food in the world. he has a problems in his body, his body hurt him because he does not eat a vegetables and he does not has ant vetimans in his body, his body is fery big but is's very weak.and that is what the un healthy food does in our boodies. that is what you sir, saved us from and saved the next students from it. absotutly the healthy food a lot cheper than the unhealthy food. also one of the good thing is the teacher also would like to eat and try the new healthy food.

one of the good thing and actually it's the best thing ever is that healthy food will give the student more power than the un healthy food, and also the healthy food will make them paying more attention to the classes and to what the teachers are saying.

the new healthy food will be very good thing. I wish if you sir would took this decision 3 years ago, just whaen I was a freshman or when I was a salphamore that would be great if that happend. I can not stop Imagine if that happen I was going to be playing Gym all the summer and in the winter I'm was going to have PE class. That was going to be very good. I wish if that happend before.

But htat's fine I still can enjoy the rest of this year with eating a just healthy food from our cafeteria from this new chef. I heard he will add a new typers of food from other countries like France and Egypt and Spain, and Ethiopia also. yeah that is how the school lunch should be like.

Do you know Mr: principle that there are about 20 Muslim student in this school who does not eat the old manu food like the bacon and Pig.

Do you know Mr: Principal, in our school there are about 50 student or more than that who are vegan, this students used to feel very bad about the old school manu because they could ot eat any food from the cafeteria for all the time they had in the school. But from now and over these students are very happy about your decision. and also the Muslims students now they are happy because they can eat the vegan food and a least they can eat the chicken and the others food.

Actually I know there are a lot of student will arguement with you about your decision. but they still young to understand that, they still too young to look for thier health and the healthy food and the unhealthy food.

But, acctualy they will appreciate that very well when they became adults.

Mr: the principale thank you, thank you about looking for our health. thank you for being acceptable for the new ideas.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
161F2D351A92,"Today in the actually there are so many things the it have be done and that we have to do, as Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Imagen if all work together for a better life, that don't just benefit one persone we all get benifits of a society.

Determine our mind to don't wait intil things happen by then self we have to get ours life ready to make it happen. We have to be useful and do something for as and for others if we all work together for a better society we can do it. Imagen that stead of droing trash every time that we walk, we should peak it up make a different between this past years and now, clean our own commiunity demostrate that we can do better every day without someone to tell us what we have to do and do it.

I have seen groups of people around the world making a big difference on our planet, cleaning rivers and parks if we determine our mind to don't wait intil things happen and like those groups of peolpe make our own difference and keep do things for a better living because this all about, be useful and be better every day do something that's the key.

Do something should be a porpuse in our community, we should be more actived with thing aroud as make more difference and make things be possible. Be determine and keep doing something, do something will always be better than just wait until some do it and not do nothing. Keep it possible, productive, and wonderful",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
605C1B4CE788,"Today I'm going to share my thoughts about Author Ralph Waldo Emerzon wrote to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest acomplishment.

I would say yes is the greatest acomplishment because if you trying to be someone in the world but you don't have no body to be with you is wanna be more difficult but if you try your best you can make it but if you have like people with you that is trying to help you is wanna be more easy, so I think to be your self in world that is constantly tying to make you something else it's one of the greatest acomplishment.

I would say is true because to be yourself around people that is negative is wanna be difficult. So to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you soemthing else is the greatest acomplishment.

for example

If you just been yourself and you making all that you want, a lot of people they not wanna like that so they wanna try to make you fall, so if you been in a world that is constantly trying to make you else is always wanna be the greastest acomplishment.

if you are in a world that people like you only for been yourself it is good becasue you just been yourself you can make anything happen and if you have a world that is constantly trying to make something else is the best acomplishment because everything is wanna be more easy for you sometimes you have to choose decision and i think just been yourself you always can taje the right ones",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
15847C58ED47,"The accomplish we are always doing is something wonderful how much we successfully achieve things. It is interesting to look back at the easily creation and compare it the work today. Modern creation are written and revised with the help of the internet that contain search able date base containing over million different things. Modern world relating to a computing, internet, and mobile technology are now established as part of the main stream rather than being considered.

Never determine how much may be done if we are always doing something. if a boy was given a straightforward earlier life as schoolmaster at Virginia. But his lack of judgment, however, meant that he could not prepare boy for confirmation. This was an effective block on the career path since he could not hope of promotion to the position nor therefore eventuality achieve a headship. But he had accordingly resigned his position and set out to his brother. He his been living by his brother for a couple of year . They were therefore the natural people to turn to when the press wish to put a long held aim to publish a small book to be published at a price of one or two shilling based on the press this accomplish is special to them.     ",2.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
470D092F3831,"There are many benefits of you knowing what you want to be in a young age and many people take advantage of it. Knowing your dream and what you want to be, in the fetcher can help you in many way. First of all, you can get more time to focus on your dream and try to accomplish them. Also, knowing what you want to be and studying it at a young age can effect your knowledge on it. And also can help you accomplish it, for example my cousin he know that he want to be a doctor by the time he was in high school. He took class such as biology and chemistry and many other sines class. Now he knows a lot about what it take to be a doctor and what are the responsibility.

knowing what you want to be in high school can help you when get to college in many ways. Getting some of your fetcher job class in high school can help you in college. It can help you to be more provisional and responsible in your college class. also it can help you in your financial life by taking most of your courses in high school. And also it can help you get in a good college. for example, my cousin got in a good college that have cross that relate to the felled that he want to work in.

knowing what you want to be before high school can even help you when you finely have your job. It can help you get more exuberance and, most of the combines want their employees to have a exuberance. Also knowing what you want to be at a young age it can help to be more compatible in you job. My cousin once said to me the the key to my successful life now was that I know what I wanted to be from the binning. That's why I think that knowing what you want to do at a young age is a good idea.

To conclude, my point was if student know what they want to be by the time they are in high school, they will benefits and have more exuberance. Also, it will be easy to them achieving there dreams and goals. And have an easy life and a nice life. And they can be more successful in their job.

And in their daily life also in their fetcher.            ",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
FBE8983EF69C,"Have you ever participated in a extracurricular activity at school, Did you enjoy it? In today's day and age there are tons of extracurricular activities and even maybe some you never heard about. Its always nice to give something a try even if you have never done it before. You could even join something that you have already done before and that your good at. For example, if you are good at basketball you could join the basketball club and have fun doing what you like. I agree that students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity because they can gain new experiences, it could help with their health, and they can make new friends.

My first reason that students should participate in extracurricular activities is that they gain new experiences. Its always nice to try something that you've never done before. For example, lets say you have no experience in cooking and theres a cooking club you can join. By joining that club you could learn about different foods and how to cook them. Those cooking skills that you learned could take you a long way or help you with something simple like cooking you or somebody else some food at home. Another example could be joining a club that has to do with the wild and things like nature. You could learn about things like how to make a fire or what plants are dangerous and which are not. There could even be some hands on experiences like fields trips to go camping or just explore the wilderness. These could help you if you ever wanted to go camping on your own later on in the future. These are just some of the things you would get to experience joining new clubs,there are so many more.

My second reason that students should join extracurricular activities is that it could help with their health. If students join a club they will be surrounded by other students and this will help them stay socially active. Instead of being at home in a dark room playing video game or on their phones, they could be talking other students and enjoying the activities in the club. Its always nice to have people surrounding so that way your not alone. Being alone could lead to things like depression or social anxiety and no student should have to go through any of those things. Another way it could help with their health is by joining a sports club. By joining any sports club students will be getting at least forty minutes to a hour of daily exercise. This exercise that the students are getting could help them with things like weight loss or just trying to stay in shape. Its always good to try and maintain good health and these are some great ways to do it.

My third and final reason that students should participate in extracurricular activities is that they can make new friends. By joining these extracurricular activities students may meet other students they have never seen before. This could be a opportunity for them to be able to make new friends. On top of that, they could most likely have the same interests as they chose the same club or activity. For example if they joined soccer they may have a interest in soccer and they could build off of that. Once they become friends they could do things like help each other in school or maybe even hang out. They could even introduce each other to other friends that they have. For example, One student could ask the friend he made in the Art club if he wanted to sit with him during lunch and now that the student has been introduced and they can all be friends now. Making friends is always a good and fun thing to do.

Overall, extracurricular activities are a good thing for students. Whether its if your making friends, helping out your health, or even learning new experiences. Extracurricular activites are a big help to students. They should be encouraged to join and try them. I agree that students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity because they gain new experiences, it could help with their health, and they can make new friends.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
263C2C01BC08,"I disagree with extending the school days, because is too much for the students and teachers, also not fair for teachers to work more them they do, and finally not that good because all the other schools are going to get earlier. Having not much sleep can effect students grades and classwork, This can effect teachers also just like the students.

Students wouldn't feel that well with adding one and half hours to school, because they need to study and rest well. Adding all that time to school would effect after school activities, because students would not feel like they had much sleep or they did not study for something that is due for school the next day. Students would not feel well rested because they had to wake up at a early time and then coming back to school, after they come back from school students are looking forward for a nap but they can't because they have chores to do.

Another thing is that students would not have time to do their chores that their parents told them to do, because they have homework or have to go to their soccer, swim or gymnastic practice. Adding one and half hours to school would affect the students a lot with activities and school work and also their sleep.

One more thing this would effect teachers work because they have to leave school later then before. Also teachers wold not have much time with their family afterwards. Another thing is that teacher are going to have to work even more in their things for the classwork. It would also make it difficult for them because they are going to have to spend more time in school instead with their kids or family.

And this is why I strongly disagree with adding one and half hours to school days. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
9DBCBFD45366,"Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make better choices because they can get different perspective from other people, more option to choose from, and other ways to solve problem. Things can go really bad sometimes if someone doesn't ask for more than one option to choose from.

First of all, getting different perspective from other people is anther reason for someone to ask for multiple opinions. Let's say Generic_Name was going to the mall, but when she got there she didn't know where this on store that she really wanted to go was. She asked a dude where it was and the dude said "" In the second floor"". She went to the second floor and did not find the store so she asked another person and other person said ""It's on the first floor next to the ice cream shop"". She went down to the first floor and went next to the ice cream shop got an ice cream and found the store. Generic_Name was so happy she found that store because if she had it asked the other person she would never had found the store.

Second of all, having more than one opinion is better right?. For example lets say Generic_Name moved to New York and it was her first day of high school, she had know clue where her school was nether her parents. Generic_Name parents told her to just walk to school and see where other students where going. She saw this girl with blue eyes and brown hair, "" ""She looks like a high school"" Generic_Name said, so she ran up to the girl and asked ""Hey what's your name"" Generic_Name she said I'm in high school what about you"" ""Oh same"" Generic_Name said. When they got in the school Generic_Name had to go in a complete different way and Generic_Name was complete lost again. However, While Generic_Name was walking in the hallway she was asking a bunch of people to see where she had to go. She got multiple answers saying to go to the same place. See asking multiple opinion is better than one because what happen if she only had asked one person they could had been room and she could had gone to the wrong room.

Lastly,

Another reason why seeking multiple opinion is good, is because it can solve problems. For example, Generic_Name was having a sleepover with two friends. They were making food in the kitchen when her mom told her not to. While they were having fun cooking the oven caught on fire. Generic_Name was finking out she didnt know what to do ""AHHHHHH WHAT SHOULD I DO"" she said freaking out. One of her friends said call 911 while on the other hand her other find told her just trow water it will be fine your so dramatic. Generic_Name decide that calling 911 was the smartest or lets say better idea. 911 came and solved the problem.

Overall, seeking multiple options can help someone make better choice by getting different perspective from other people, more options to chose from and can solve problems. Generic_Name found the mall she had to find, she found the place had to go and her house didnt burn down. Let's just say somethings really bad could had happen if Generic_Name didnt ask for more than one opinion.",4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
C41DFE052637,"Imagine someone is doing the same skill that he already has mastered, he is going to stay in the same place. He will never grow. One reason why doing different things can help someone grow is by being stronger in other things. Being able to learn new skills can improve your ability. Someone can even find out if they are good at other things that they probably never thought they would be good at. Is the best to try to do new things than staying in the same place and never growing.

First reason, why doing different things can help someone grow is by being stronger in other things. Being stronger in other things can really put you to the top where you never thought you could be at. When getting stronger at other things it could make someone the best athletic person or the best person that is strong in so many things. When being strong or good at things, you can even help your friends if they are struggling. Once you become a strong person are you going to be able to do anything.

Next, being able to learn new skills can improve your ability. Learning new skills can help someone out a lot. When doing a lot of new things it can make someone a healthier person. Someone is going to start realizing their improvement and once they start seeing results, they are going to start getting motivated even more. When someone knows so many skills, they could probably teach another person that wants to be like you. Is a great thing to be able to improve your ability.

Finally, someone can even find out if they are good at other things that they probably never thought they would be good at. Finding things that someone never knew they could do will make someone pretty shocked. When someone finds out more things that they are able to do, it can help them join in more activities. The people that can do more, they have a better advantage because they can do more that others can't do. Its pretty shocking that there are people that don't know that they could do something that they never thought they could do.

In conclusion, someone can make themselves even stronger than what they are now. When learning new skills it can make your ability improve. Also, someone can even find out new sports or skills that they never thought they could do. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5
9F9C42BD3B7A,"We live in a world where each and everyone of us, will always need someone or others to rely on. In this world not everyone is born complete. However being yourself is always good, but you can also change yourself if you feel the need to. But if someone else were to change you then that would be very bad, because they could be either delusional or emotionally negative of certain things in life. When your being yourself on my opinion it means you shouldnt have others change the way you are but its up to how you feel about yourself.

I strongly disagree Emerson's statement on how individuality is a good thing, and i have various reasons or examples on this statement. I have many important people like my mom,dad,sister, and very close friends who are also like family to me. Having other people is vital because you get through life more easily, and able to change yourself as you live on. But if you got rid of all of that then you would probably live a lonely life in deep and total solitude. Having other people isnt trivial, you have to have faith in one another to get through life.

There was this one time where i was about twelve to fourteen years old, i would always struggle with my grades in the beginning of the school year, and have a strong sense of unease everyday i go to school because i always felt like wouldnt be able to provoke my self to do better in school and get better at socializing. I was only caring for myself most of the time, and when i get back home i would feel depressed and repugnant. But that all changed later when i realized i needed to have others to help me. As time went on i was able to change myself by others around me. The world isnt changing you you are changing yourself by just living a life with others around you, and you wouldnt notice that you changed either, but that is a good thing because now you know that if your able to change then anyone should be able to.

The last thing that is bad when you dont have anyone else with you, is that it can be really boring and not fun at all. When your all alone in your life, you wont have anyone to socialize with you, and keep you company. But when you have a lot of friends and get to know other people, you can have an experience with them and its what makes life really entertaining. When your with your friends you get to have lots of fun, like play games together, socialize, travel together, and get to have more and more experiences with each other and maybe learn more lessons in life. Theres a lot of people who think that we live in a society where no one cares about you and doesnt want to help you at all. but thats not true because it isnt there fault, because when you have others with you, it can have an effect positively and negatively. And people who are negative all the time can provoke others to be a bad person, which is why they end up all lonely because they fear of others or hate others because they think no one cares about them. But thats not true because all it takes is to change yourself, by having others in your life, or asking for help.

In conclusion individuality can be pretty awful and lead others to a path that is bad. Having others in your life is necessary because we can lift each other up, no one is worthless. Leaving someone on there own can be pretty sad, helping them is what makes you a better person and gives you a better and easy life. But as i said dont let anyone change who you are, being yourself is good but being alone simultaneously can be a bad thing. You are the protagonist of your own life, your life is your own.",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
DDD3771E1DF6,"Many people believe that they do not need advises from others in order to take decisions in their life,and they believe they should take their own decisions. I do not agree with them. It is important to listen what other people think about it. Each person is different in a special own way and someone else might help you to solve your problem. I believe people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because they may have a better idea,or they may have been in the same situation before.

One of the main reasons is that other people may have been there before and they may know what to do. For example, You are undecided about taking swimming classes or piano classes,and you know you are a great swimmer,but you've also wanted to play piano since you were 6 years old. Your brother have been in that situation before, and he thinks that you should take piano classes from Monday to Wednesday after school, and swimming classes every Friday after school, but you have to work from Thursday to Sunday;then he says that you should take piano classes every Monday and Wednesday after school ,and Swimming classes every Tuesday after school .You believe that is what best suits for you.

Another reason is that other people might have a better or different idea than yours. Another example is that your parents give you two choices: going to Canada for spring break or going to The Bahamas for Christmas break. Generic_Name,your best friend have already visited those places and she tells you to go to Canada because she knows you love extreme low temperatures .You tell your parents that you've decided to go to Canada and once you are there you realize that it was the best decision you've taken. Thanks to your friend's advise;you are enjoying your trip,and you are glad that you asked for her opinion.

On the other hand,letting others influence on the decisions you take is not always the best thing to do. A simple example can be that you go to the mall and decide to buy a pair of shoes but you do not know what color to choose, so you ask your sister and she thinks that the red pair is the best for you; you buy it and when you get home, you realize that you do not like those shoes. The first thing you would probably do is blame on her because she told you to buy the red pair, but if you take that decision by yourself and you regret for the decision you make; You cannot blame on somebody else except for you.

In conclusion, people who seek guidance from their family,experts, or authorities are most likely to take the right decision. All persons sometimes may need an advise from someone on what to do, or if they should follow their own instincts; but the one who will make the decision is you, so do not blame on others for the decisions you make. Humans are not perfect and we do not always take the best decisions in our life; but with help from others , we will be able to make them right and move on.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
7CDB47E88B39,"Having a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall does not sound like a good Idea to me. Since It snows a lot in the winter we would be missing more days of school If winter break was longer. The school year is 9 months, students should get a summer break that we usually get, which is 2 months. We shouldn't have a break in the fall if we just got back into school after the long summer break.

We should not have a longer winter break. Since it snows a lot in the winter, we miss a lot of school days. Students would be missing lessons, quizes, and even tests because of the snow days we get. Students need to catch up on everything and finish lessons before the school year ends. If we get a longer winter break we would be getting out of school later on which means less summer vacation.

Since the school year is 9 months, students should get a summer break that we usually get. Students deserve the 2 months of summer break because of all the hard work and studying they did in the school year. In the summer students also get the chance to visit family members, spend more time with their family, and even get ready for the next school year.

Since we just got back into school, It is not necessary to have a one week break in the fall. We just had a 2 month summer break which gave the students the opportunity to be ready for the next school year and also gave them a chance to have a vacation. Since there is also a lot of holidays in the school year, a fall break would interfere with the day we get out of school. Which means we would probably have a little longer school year.

If we did have a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall, the school year would be pretty short and the students wouldn't like the short breaks. Even though the educators would like it and thinks that it is helpful for students, it would make the students feel stressed out since the school year would probably be shorter.

Having regular summer break, regular winter break, and regular spring break, would be a better idea then having a shorter summer break, long winter break, and a break for spring and fall.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
DD279F25DC1F,"""Oh my God Generic_Name,"" I did not have enough time to finish my power point, me too Generic_Name said. I think our school should add two hours more and we should come four-day school weeks like some businesses they work for ten hours and they only work four days it can benefits students and teachers because, some students can have more time to do their homework, some teachers and students can saved more gas and money, and some students can ask their teacher for more help.

First,students and teachers saved more gas and money. For example, my friend needs to drive herself to school everyday and she needs to pay for her gas. The other day she told me that coming to school for five days is stressful because, she has to pay for gas and she is not working everyday like she just too, so her parents have to pay the gas for her .They told her if she do not start to pay for her own gas they where going to take the car away from her, I told her about how some businesses have adopted just going four- days to work for ten hours and I told her that our school should have four-day school week too, I think that would be a good idea and she thinks that is a great idea too, because she gets to saved money and gas and she do not have to worry about paying a lot of money for gas anymore and her parents would not be mad at her anymore because she would have the money to pay for gas.

Other example can be my Spanish teacher she lives a little far from school and she has to drive to school, but she is having some problems and she does not have enough money to pay for her gas. She told me that if she do not get the money to pay her gas she was going to be absent for some day into she get the money to buy gas for her car, that make me so sad because she is my favorite teacher, she is like a mom to me, and she would not be able to come to school just because she dont have enough money to pay her gas. My friend told her about what I said and she things its a great statement because she would have more time to grade students homework ad would have more time to spent with her family.

Second, students can have more time to do their homework. For example, myself sometimes in my math or chemistry class we talk about something new and it takes almost the hold class and my teachers give us a lot of homework so I think the if we go school for ten hours it would be great because I would have a lot of time to do all my homework or I would have time to study too and I would just get home to relax and I would not get stress because I already did my homework.

Other example can be my best friend Generic_Name, she is taking all AP classes, and she gets a lot of homework sometime she does not get the enough time to finish her homework in class and when she gets home she has to take cared of her little sister, so she does not have time to finish her homework at home or sometimes she has projects do the next day but she does not have enough time finish in class. Generic_Name said that she gets really stress about all her homework and how she has to do it in so little time, she thinks if we go to school for more time she would have a lot of time to do her homework and she would just go home and take care of her little sister, she should not have to be stress about doing her homework.

Another example can be my friend Generic_Name, she loves to do homework because she likes to compete with other students, but ladle she has being so worry and angry about everything. I ask her why does not she compete with the other kids like she used to, she told me because she has a lot of test's coming up and she needs to study and that she wish that we have more time in school so she can get everything done the same day because now she has to take her homework to her house and finished over there, now she does not get time to relax and chill like she always did.

Third, some students can ask their teacher for more help. Like myself the other day in math class we were talking about a new topic it was so hard that I did not understand the topic. After the teacher show us how to do it, I was asking for help every three seconds because I did not understand, after she explain me for the hundred time I was still confused, before the class end she gave us homework I did not how to do the homework ether, so I stay after with her so she could it explain me again, but the after school time is only for fifteen minutes. My teacher explain me again and show me how to do it again but I did not get it, she told me the if we have more time in school hours it would be better because would take her time and explain us how to the work more slow, but we only have like one hour in her class so we do not get enough time ask a lot of questions. Other example, my friend Generic_Name sometimes his teacher talk so fast that he can understand what she is saying, he want it to stay after school so she could explain him again, but he could not stay because needed to go soccer practice he being missing a lot of day because he always stay after school with a teacher for extra help and if he does not start going to soccer practice again, his coach is going to kick him out of the team, he is the only one that has been missing a lot of days, and he needs to get back in track because his team has a really important game coming up, so he can not stay after school for help anymore.

Some students think that they get stress for being in school for a lot of time;however, they are wrong because some students think that if they go to school for a lot of time they would get more time to do their homework.

Some students and teachers get to saved more money and gas, some student can have more time to do their homework, and some students can ask their teacher for more help this are some benefits of why should my school adopt a four-day school week.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
DB6B9E64CFF0,"All around the world involves people learning something new. We learn about different creatures, peoples ,and objects. An Individual that is willing to learn more each and everyday will succeed in life. Some people believe that Emerson statement ""unless someone try to do something beyond what they've have already mastered will grow"", but I disagree. I believe people who try to do something beyond what they've have already mastered, they will never grow because due to lack of experience, and not enough knowledge.

To begin with, every individual want to become something in life. There's literally a certain career that every individual is discovering for. People who wants to learn, participate in certain activities or classes would most likely get the dream career as they wish. Putting the effort is the answer to everyone problems. For instance, my friend Generic_Name shes a server at a restaurant. She is nineteen years old. Generic_Name has been working there since she was 17 years old already. Therefore, Generic_Name knows all of the meals that are served, places that need to be restocked etc. Unfortunately, she getting tired of the job. For some reason, she doesnt want to try something new.

Having only one job experience is barely enough for the person to know about different experiences from other jobs. I strongly believe,as if Generic_Name does not put effort into applying for a new job. She will never grow out of her self esteem or confidence into getting a new job. Clearly, getting involved into different jobs will even give you different alternatives.

Pursuing this further, knowledge is very important when it comes to trying something new. Individuals need to know atleast some knowledge when trying to reach further into their career

For example, my eighth grade teacher Generic_Name would sometimes sit with me at lunch. We would discuss about anything. One day, I brought up about going into high school. Since my middle schools years were coming to an end. I asked her if their were any advice for my upcoming freshman year. She told me high school it will get harder . Also, I needed to become more serious about my education. Mostly likely I will have to pass all exams, sols ,and keep my GPA high. These are the years I will0 start thinking about what I want to do with my career. She gave me advice to guide me through to become better. I strongly oppose, knowing more knowledge about something will make yourself grow.

Obviously, if an individual is trying to do something beyond then what they've already mastered, they will never grow. Just by having lack of experience will lead the individual feeling in their comfort zone. Also, the lack of knowledge will leave the person clueless. Some people may argue that unless the person try to do something beyond what they have mastered, they will grow. How can someone grow from repeating on doing what they do on a normal basis? How can they learn something new with such little knowledge? For example, my dad came to United States when he was 14 years old. He knew little English. Also, he knew how to write some words, but that was all that he knew. He put his full time effort to learn a new language. Each step he took he accomplished. He himself grew out of the stage of not knowing something. He went beyond into what he really wanted.

Finally, everyone needs experience and knowledge in order to grow. Imagine doing a science project on an unknown animal. Surprisingly this creature changes colors, sizes, and shape. Wouldn't you want to invest in the creature more? Learn how the creature lives? Or you would just want to know the basic facts of it? ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
92EA64272FB4,"High school is like a preschool for young adults, where they get a chance to explore the world much earlier.

Students at grade nine through twelve get to learn what they want to be at a young age. It gets them more interested in the careers they choose in the nearest future. As they get through high school, they will know what path to take and what needs to get done. As soon as these young adults leave they won't have to stress of what their going to be. It's agreeable for students to start looking into their career at a young age.

Through out the years in High school, students will have the rights to choose their own courses, which follows up to their interest. For example: culinary arts, design multi media, masonry, and more. They can also choose any subjects such as: math, English, science, and history. These courses can also help those students with their future careers. While these students are learning they realize what they like and what they don't like. The upcoming goal for them by the time they leave high school is what they are going to become.

As these young adults think of what their going to be, they will think twice on some careers. Which gives them time to research options, and that research will reflect on which career is the best for them. While being young an thinking of a career students will have enough time to sort the ones the students like and the ones they dislike. The average life Span of a human is up to 75 years, which means 18 of those years can resolve of what the students are going to do when they grow up. Teen's can dream what they could be but can they put the effort in trying.

As in college, students will have to get credits to graduate high school, and need to pass a amount of exams.

From there the students path will flow to what college they'll go, when thinking young they got to think smart, which means they got to put the effort. When thinking of a career at a young age the students will have most of everything planned. Its never too much to notice that a student has more potential young than old because they got more time.

The students won't stress out because their not out in the world alone finding what to do.

Teens can commit to any career because they have had a whole lot of time to think of any career.

Its never bad for a kid to have dreams of being a cop and going for that career. Its always good to plan ahead, to always think and do. It's great that a young adult wants to think of it's future. Agreeing something that everybody has done, is something that people can agree on.     ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
ED185DEBD213,"There is a debate abou to take a musica, a drama, or arts claas, should students need to take a electives classes. Some people believe students need to take a music, a drama, or art classes. I believe students need to take electives classes , so students can choose the classes they need , students have more oportunity to choose classes they like, and they can choose the classes with more opportunity for get more credit. Finally students can choose the claases they need to graduate.

First reason, is students can choose the classes they need , so they can have more oportunity to choose the classes they need for get the diploma, they can choose the classes for get more credit, this is a good idea students can choose a electives classes so tehy can talk with the teachers to choose classes tehy need to graduated. Many others students do not like music or drama claases, students have oportunity if they can choose electives classes so they can have few classes, they can have more time after school if they have a job.

Second reason, is students have more oportunity to choose classes tehy like, many others students doesn't like arts or drama classes, in my opinion this is a good idea students can choose classes they like, this help students to work in classes they like and have a good grades.

Last reason, students can choose classes with more oportunity, students can choose classes can help then to get credit for the diploma, students can talk witg teachers they can help then to get claases they need, this is a oportunity to students they work after school, this can help many students to get a good grades and pass all they classes.

In conclusion, this argument can help students to choose classes that can help then to pass the grade or maybe to graduated, this have many oportunity to choose electives classes, in my opinion i dont like drama and arts classes.                       ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
5915757AEE1A,"Let's be honest technology is the best way to convert our things more easy or speak with family's who are really far away;technology can do things that you never could do in one or two hours,I'm going to tell my experience with the technology,When I became to the United state,because I'm from Generic_City and my first thing to come to my head was. what happen if go to school in then,I don't know. how to use a computer,because in Generic_City,we have nothing of technology in our school,so was my first day in one American school,I was so scary,the teacher give us a computer for work in a homework and then was so confuse,I ask one student who was close to me,I say can you help the with computer. how to sign in? and he says yes I can help you with that,two days later I learn how to sign in,but that was not the complicated thing,the complicated thing was search things in Google,next day the teacher give us another homework to do the class,the was so hard for me it was find seven president with his correctly description,I take a decision go to library and take the hard way to do my homework,the teacher give of one day to do this,I star to find this read and read each book contain at least one full page for find the information then I was looking for,I give my homework to the teacher,but I see someone's homework he tell me he did his homework with computer and I say wow,also the teacher was telling everybody the best way to do the was in Google this wed side have all the information that you need,I was so frustrated,I say in my head here in the United state find the easy's way by learning how to use the technology,now my goal was learn how to use this technology.

I ask the teacher to teach me a to how to use the technology,he tell stay after school and going to teach you OK.

That was my first class learning the basics things about about a computer. About three weeks I learn the basic things. That's the star of a new future for me. I am so wonderful for the people's that help in the moment now I can easy do my homework with the help of the technology.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
573E39E45177,"Is distance learning such as, online learning or video conferencing more benefical than traditional learning?. In my opinion, I believe that most students that take online classes have a higher risk of failing. Therefore, they have a higher change of getting distracted. Studies confirmed that young adults are more likely to get distracted than adults since, their minds are not fully develop. I also believe that, every human being has a different way of learning and goes on their own pace.

There is positive's and negaitive's reasons about person-to-person learning and online learning. Person-to-Person learning helps the students gain more knowledge and interaction. While being in a traditional classes, you can ask questions anytime and gain a relationship with one another. The negaitives of tradtional learning is that, students attend to skip class, not listen to the teacher, and sleep during teaching. Students attend to do these negative actions because they might be force to go to school or they can not go on their own pace.

Online classes are not benefical but you can go on your own pace. Another reason is that, techonolgy is popular in this generation that students rather be in a device. Online classes have a positive side to them because there is many options online in what you want to learn about, but keep in mind that visual is harder than interacting. Visual is diffcult to understand because there is no instuctor or a teacher helping you in person. I believe that everybody is different and we all learn in different ways and different pace.

Some Students would not be able to attend at home classes because of personal problems such as, not having food to feed themselves, some do not have a roof over their heads, or they do not have access to a device. For an example, there are some students at Generic_School that do not have food at their home and all they eat is school lunch. It hurts to see Children that are not able to afford things in life that are in need such as, education. Education is in all of our life's and I hope traditional schools can still be popular as online schools. In this generation techonology is taking over students!.

In conclusion, I support my reasons and my opinions about, traditional learning is a better way to learn than online learning. They both have Pros and Cons but Traditional learning has been in our lives for so many years and techonology and devices are taking over students. Distraction is what young adults have trouble with, Online classes is not a great idea to pursued. There are many reasons and studies, why students should keep attending traditional schools. I also believe everyone works and learns in their own pace and that is why Person-to-person is way to pursued.                        ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
CC11E4C2FE01,"Do you think that we should have a program to help younger students?

I think that some schools should have a program, that pairs with older students. My First reason is sometimes they go to school and dont really understand nothing that the teacher are saying, so this is where the program comes to play. Then by using the program, you connect with a random student that learn the same subject as you. And they can teach you the same thing as what your teacher taught you, but they speak to you slowly so you and the other younger students can understand if they dont understand then how are they going to pass a test or a SOL, so basically its like your getting extra help.

My Second reason is, they help younger and older students is because theyre both learning from each other, but it will be hard to make a program because we will need a lot of stuff, but its worth it because the younger students need to understand what they are doing. I think we should have programs in other schools that pair with older students because, so they can help the younger student learn, and make sure that they understand what they are doing.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
D5A110D65134,"Changing first impression is easy and for some people its, because they do not think nor care about it they just do things that makes them feel good about themselves so i disagree with the statement. We have all meet people we did not know and got introduce by someone else and we would start talking to them to get to know their background. First impressions are the biggest factor in the world we live in right now, because we all want to have a good life, so we have to present our self properly. When you do not show manner the first time your meeting someone they will think you do not have home training and you do not care what people think about you. We meet new people everyday in our life because of the environment we put our self in. The people i have meet in my life have changed their impressions real fast around because when they get attached or close to you they show their true colors and personality. Always put yourself in a good position to succeed in life because when others see that your respectful they will put in a good word for you to feel like you earned that prize that you are being awarded for. I always tell myself that first impressions tell the person everything about yourself right there and now because you do not know what they can do for you in the long run. Take every chance you get and do good for your self and others because if you act like a clown what are you gaining from that. Like all say do not be the one to ruin your own life because you do not care take action and do something good for yourself and it will take you to far places.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
F4F054797227,"I believe that people yes should make their own decisions and follow their instincts because that is what make us different from others. Follow your intincts and what you think that it is right can make a big change in what you are and what you want to be.

First. People need to believe in themselves and do what they think that it is right. Sometime we are afraid to make ours onw decision because we think that is wrong or because what others can think about us. But just think about, all the things that people had been invented along the time. What would will happend if they did not make their onw decisions, nothing that what we have today will not exist. So do not be afraid to make your onw decisions because others. Is not bad to look what other had been done and see if what you are about to do can be good or not. But always follow your ideas and do your onw work.

The instincts is a natural aptitude that human have, is something that make us do things without a well reason. The instincts make us do things that we think are right because a felling that we felt. No matter, sometime that felling can be rigth or not. But sometime bad decisions teach us what we do wrong and learned how do it better in a future. people should follow their instincts and ideas because that is what make us defferent. Learn of what we do wrong make us a better person. Poeple always are going to judge you and talk about your decisions no matter if are good or bad. So do not let others stop you and doing the things that you believe are right.

The decisions that we make today can harm us in the future. That may be is right, but if we always are thinking about what is going to happend. we never are going to know what is really going to happend. So make own ours decisions can make a big change ir our life for good or bad. It is important to listen to experts because can be helpful in what you are abuot to do. But always do it because you want to do it, not because other tell you. Always do may make you happy, no metter if you are wrong or not because that is what is going to make the difference.

In conclision yes people should follows their instincts and ideas. But also make their own decisions. Never stop doing that things that they like. Always do and follows what they believe and think carfully and what they want and where they want to be. The goods and bads decisiones and experiences and learn of they if what really teach you about life's important matter and make you succeed.       ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
174C4761FEA2,"I agree to the quote

""Success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.""

In our life, in order to get what we desire is to overcome failures. It teaches us to become more stronger and to keep going without losing faith in pursuing our goals until we succeed.

Based on my experience, doing what i love is the most important thing. No matter how many times i fail; as long as i love it, i will keep going to reach my goal. I will not mind other people, even they're telling me to stop and give up. For me, failing is the way that life gives to be stronger.

Some people might think that life is very unfair, it just depends on how strong a person is to rise up after every falls. Every individual should have faith, in order to conquer challenges. Failing is just a word, it can't do nothing to stop a person to keep trying to pursue its goals.

Failing for me doesn't mean it's the end. It's a good experience, because it teaches lessons. Doing what i love motivates me more not to give up, instead i'll keep standing up after i fail in order to succeed.

In life, trying is not bad. Having faith and being enthusiastic is needed to overpass all obstacles by not giving up after failing. Keep trying to get what we want.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
C779E68B8B7E,"Yeah because, pepople need to enjoy summer with the family and friend. And yeah is good idea to me because, we can get a week off in the spring and fall. People can go to the beach or king dominion, to have fun with family and friend. No body enjoy summer because, some people going summer school when somebody fail class. This year I want to have a great summer, because I want to know thing. Like I want to go to my country other country. And I want to know new friends to play with him.

This summer I want to play new sport like basketball, football and other sport. This summer I want to have fun, and play with my cousin and friend. Going everywhere with them, play pool with them practice boxing. And play soccer every day because soccer is my favorite sport. My dream is going to Generic_City that is my dream, because one day when I have my money I am going. When I have my job and have a good money, I am going to Generic_City to know thing like new people, and my other dream is going to Generic_City, because I want know new beach and new people too and to have new friend. I want to know new country, like I want to go to Generic_City to know my favorite singer and to have more thing to know. And to have my favorite food because, I want to know new food to eat.

And this summer I want to do a lot of thing, I dont like to stay home or when I am going to summer school and no do nothing just do homework and summer like is no fair. This I want to have a ood grade to no go to summer school if you don't pass you classes you are going summer school, if you study hard and have a good grade you can have fun and summer. And going with my cousin swing because, I like to swiming because is fun to go to the pool and have a lilte a fun to do. And then going to the beach with my family and have fun, because summer is fun to do thing or watching movie with my cousin and friend's is nice to have good friend. And this summer I want to practice my license driving because, I wanna drive and going everywhere like Generic_City. Last year I went to Generic_City to see new thing, I buy my favority thing like my shoes I buy my favorite shoes.

My last summer was great because, I went to king dominion with my mom and sister and cousin last year was fun. This year I want to go again to king dominion because, the place is a great place to have fun and going to the beach going to Generic_City to know people and to know new friend. And Spring Brake I am going to my country to see my grandmother, because I have 5 years I am no going to my country and to know thing going to the pool going to the beach and other places and to see my old friends.

Summer is great because, you can do a lot of thing like play outside with my friend, play pool , play soccer, play basketball.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
5061F044BC43,"Although some say that school lunch menu don't need to be change because the new lunch menu would be more expensive, and some students throw the food, actually some say that will be a good idea to change the school lunch menu because some students declare that they sometimes received an expired food so they think that food is from one year ago and some students say that eat the same food every year is bored because all students from high school are study four years, and some students start hate the food and they prefer to take food from home or they buy food like pizza, burrito, etc. and that is not good for health.

Some of my classmate took the lunch and they throw the food because they don't like the food and they said that they prefer another type of food that school doesn't have anymore, and they did not think how expensive is that type of food and they say if we are not pay we can throw all food.

My little brother said that one time in lunch time he took an expired milk and for that he said that he prefer to get food from home like chicken or buy in pizza and soda, and that is not good for him for that my aunt wanted talk with the pricinpal if they can change the cafeteria menu for lunch.

I have three year in High school, and I don't like the lunch menu because the last two years I eat the same food and for that I don't take lunch this year because I know is the same lunch and I prefer to take the food at home and, I don't take the lunch during the school.

In conclusion I think that schools has to be change the lunch menu because sometime students received expired food, and some of students are bored to eat the same food every year.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
89857315A1A4,"How to distribute forty work hours a week most usefully? Nowadays, a four-day work week is very rare, because this system is new; people always being careful when something new come out, but then they understand it is better. The four-day schedule is more balanced, energy and money saving and variable. This is why, I believe, our school should should follow the new schedule.

First, the forty-day school week is more well-distributed, because the students would have more time for rest, doing homework; so their ability to study will have been raised. On another hand, ten hours in school might be exhausting for the pupils, but the school administration may make breaks longer and more frequent to solve the problem of tired students

Second, the four-day schedule lowers the use of energy and resources. The school would use less electricity to heat and cool the building; it will spent less money for servicing the students and investigate saved money to science researches, equipment and study program development.

Third, with the sour-day schedule the pupils become more free: they might share more time with their family and friends; spent more time for their hobbies and working. The students may hardly learn if they are late for making project or plan the interesting and fun weekend in the three days; the bad thing about rest four days: you will not rest. School days will be very busy, hard; but maybe more educational and efficient. Long ten hours in school might be uncomfortable for the students, who do extra curriculum activities like preparing courses, art clubs and sports. However, our school has all comfortabilities to do extra curriculum activities inside the school's building, so the students do not need to go anywhere else.

To conclude, the four-day school week seems experimental for people yet; but when something new is thought the people realize an idea is innovative, then the idea becomes an action, which becomes regular.   ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
8BE20A3524AE,"Students should commit to a career at a young age or specifically by the time they get to highschool. Most students know what they wanna do when they get to highschool so its a good idea to commit to a career that you are interested in and enjoy so you can start preparing for a job/career in that field of study.

Yes, students should commit to a career at young age mostly because always a good idea to start earlier than later. In addition this gives more time for preparation and being able to learn more about the career of your choice by selecting electives in highschool that are in that field of study of the career you wanna pursue. Highschool offers many electives and academy classes that students should take advantage of to stay ahead of the game in what they wanna do as a career. Its a smart way and fun way to go deeper in the career you want and learn more from it and have it help you in the future. Commiting early on is key to being more successful in that career and for your journey to that career.

Secondly, commiting to a career at a young age is useful to build up confidence in that student so they have the urge to want to pursue that career and be more serious about what they wanna do. Most students don't take their career selections seriously until senior year or until they graduate highschool. Another reason is that if you're confident in what you wanna do you'll be able to achieve your goal. For example i wanna become an athletic trainer/fitness instructor and i am taking the fitness instructor class next year for my senior year to prepare and learn more about what i wanna do. They also offer a test at the end of the year to certify you as a fitness instructor so i am confident in taking that test and still expand my study at college because i believe and i really wanna have this as a career.

Lastly, If you commit to a career early enough you can start working as part time for that career for example, after highschool and if i pass the fitness instructor class and get certified as a fitness instructor i could apply for a part time job at a gym or something related to that and help others out to reach their goal. While i would still go to college to expand my learning in althetic training having a part time job in doing what i love would be great. It could also help out with expenses and anything else. The earlier the better and more opportunitys would be opened to students.

In conclusion, students should commit to a career sometime in highschool just so they can start preparing and builidng up confidence in what they wanna do. Take advantage of classes in highschool because they are free and very helpful for the future. Overall once you find someting you like doing and want to do that as a career then commit.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
A3E9A1C9917B,"In some areas they have their students pick their career right when they enter high school to help them, but personally that is not a good idea for students. Students may choose a career, and later on say they dont like the courses they have to take. Some students might even feel way to much pressure having to pick a career at a young age. Others may argue and say that having picked a career at that point, and be sure about it may feel that they are ahead of everyone else and prepared for the future. Others students might have only picked that career, because their friends have chosen the same career. Students may feel overwhelmed, and not like or take serious the career and courses they have.

Students may choose a career and later on say they dont like the courses they have to take. They might feel like that is not the correct path for them. Some change their mind because they may feel like the courses are to hard, or that the amount of work is too much. Others may change because their parents might not agree with that career, because its to complicated. Students may not have fully made up their mind yet if they even want to keep studying anything after high school. In addition, if students change their mind once they might keep changing their mind again and again, because they want to experiment other careers and courses.

Some students may feel way to much pressure having to pick a career at a young age. Kids may get stressed or even overwhelmed with knowing they have to choose something. As well,some students might already have jobs and it could be tiring. Some students could experience great amounts of anxiety, because they may feel forced to take those courses to succeed later in life. Furthermore, students may not like that feeling when they have to pick and rather give up. Some schools could help pick, but students may not like that and feel more pressure. For example, just having to pick regular classes for the year is somethings to really think about, because you wanna take easy classes but yet succeed as well. Adding on, having to pick your career in even harder and super stressful.

Others students might have only picked that career, because their friends have chosen the same career. They might think that its cool and fun, but not realize that it is a bad idea. While they start to spend more time together they could get super annoyed and agitated with one and other. Some of them might have actually like the career they chose and want to do good in the courses they take. In addition, the ones who actually want to take the classes and succeed wont let them if they get annoyed at each other. Teachers and parents may even realize that it wont be a good idea for other peers.

In conclusion, having to pick a career to succeed could be stressful. Students might not be able to enjoy their teen years, because they are focused on other things. Other may also agree that being prepared for the future and having plans is a good thing, and young adults can be prepared for it. Other may disagree and say that kids need some freedom and enjoy life as young adults. In addition, students dont need to have all this pressure and just be able to take regular classes and if they want to take classes that do help with their career then, let it be an option for them. Students may be overwhelmed, and not like what they had picked.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
558C7F83201B,"do you think students should have a career plan by time thy enter high school ? i think no , because they can always change their minds ., like if they end up not like the career they thought they wanted at first . and they pick a new one . in high school you have to take math and history and science and many other classes . and then you pick electives you are interested in . and high school students have to pass all there classes and some high school students have after school activities like staying after for extra help on subject or being on a school teams and clubs . and they just want to hang out with there friends and family and have fun and not to worry to much on what career they want to have in the future . and they might have other stuff going on . and i dont think its a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because your interests change .and i think students shouldn't be expected to that early on. and its not a good idea.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
EFDC396D9F7A,"Date 3/12/2020

To: The school

From:Generic_Name

RE: Classes online

Not bacause I take classes online many of the students will not be responsible and they miss many grades, They will even have not internet in online classes for be doing their own things at home for example, if i have online classes i would be distranted by my brother or other things and i feel that my online classes is not would not be good idea like i say that online class is not a good idea there are many distraction. also, if we have that problem I think that beging with teachers is the best idea cause they help us a lot in the amies.

The firs reason is not all student have the internet in the houses some students don't have the internet because their parents don't have too much money to but one or maybe because they don't have the tecnology. One friend told me that their parents think that the tecnology is bad for him because it is distraction and he needs to focus on his future. and if he dosen't take that class online he will fall that class. every parents think different.

Another reason because not all student are not responsibles. some student came to school but they don't do anything' but it the teacher letf them that they need to do this, they do it, because they feel pressure and they know that the fall the class but is their class is online they will no care about the class, And they don't will take care about the class.

The conclusion is tha bad idea take classes online because the internet is one of the things that they need it, anbd not all the students have it, they need to have their responsability the class and not to all the student care for their classes, and the last thing is because not al the students like to have classes online because they know that they can't consentrate in their house bacause all the noise around.

Generic_Name.           ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
963501C88479,"Some people say that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Other people say that failure do not play in the pursuit of success.

Some people say that failure plays in the pursuit of succes because if we fail we learn how to stand up after every time we fall down,For thing we never had we have to do something we never did,If we fail big we learn big things,and we fail once we have to try again.

In life stuation we fail but it does not mean we never pass,Life is hard to deal with it but we can deal with it,every time we fail we have opportunity to fix it,Life is about gulliblety bad ideas come to our mind but we don't have to think about it we have to think positive,Every time we fail we think we are guilty,We think we are useless,We think we can not do it but there is somwthing in the back we have to catch it that thing is success.

We are skillful that thing is notthing against our skills,we always worried about what others think what we accomplish and what we carry out but it is our job that what we do, We have to lead our self to get success and we are the finder,there is alot of ways to pass we can get help from others:family,teachers,friends,and people;every body is liable for there own work.

Once i had biology class that i had to pass SOL I toke the SOL fourtimes at the last time i pass it,It was hard to pass SOL for me but i never stop accomplish even i hate that,In some point in our life we fail but we do not have to loss our firmness or solidity,We do not have to shrik responsibility,We have to strenghen our ideas,We ahve hopes in our life that we need to make them true,In some points in life we have to calm down take a teep breathe and focuse on our work, In a test when we fail we learn things like:what was in the test,how to use an other strategy to pass the test,how to try,and what can we use in the test like dictionary;This is how failure play in the pursuit of success.

Other people say that failure do not play in the pursuit of success because every time they try they fail.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5
96F4AB949807,First I will like to change lunch manu I would said 3 time every week I will let you know the riason why I will change the manu because no everyone like to eat the same food every day for example I know many people who they don not eat because is bored be eating the same food every they and I know many people the they better have food from home because something is better lik anyway this is my oppinionds about that second somethingI some student like to trie something new like different food that is the other reasons why I would like to make they trie new food every week maybe they get more exite to came at school maybe that can by one of my other opiinion but look if they see the in cafeteria they get more food maybe they came school every day fanally we can plovate with more food this is my oppion about this discusion we have to maybe exite the studens to have more open window to by at school and healthier manu that me is if is helthy we have to provate fruts too ,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
5807D5F42CEB,"This is why employers should hire me. Employers should hire me because I can show hard work, really good hospitality, and good communication skills. These make a good employee.

First reason why employers should hire me is because I show hard work. Hard work is essential because the harder you work the more you get done, and that's really helpful. For example, if you're playing soccer and you are trying to score a goal, you can't just score it magically while just standing there doing nothing. You have to work hard to score the goal by running, passing, and communicating with your team. All of that relates to hard work.

Second reason why employers should hire me is because I show really great hospitality. This is really important because the more comfortable you can make the customer, the more they will enjoy the place and like it. For example if you're working at a hotel and a customer walks in, and right away you are not nice to them. They will start hating the place and they won't come back again. On the other hand if you're nice to them and make sure they enjoying their time. They will love the hotel and will always want to come back in the future.

Last reason why employers should hire me is because I show really good communication skills. This is yet another really important characteristic to have as an employee. The reason being is because if you can't communicate well with a customer, they will have a really time figuring out what they need to do. For example, if you are working at a shop and a customer walks in and asks you for a specific thing. Then you start to get nervous because you don't know what to say or how to act, then they will have a hard time trying to find that specific thing because you didn't know how to communicate.

These are the reasons of why employers should hire me. Employers should think of hiring me because I can show hard work, great hospitality, and good communication. And having these three characteristics makes an awesome employee. That's why employers should hire me.",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
F771A9924D56,"I agree what Thomas Jefferson wrote,and peoples doesn't want to participate or do something in any activity to help other people. Idle people is big problem and they always ask for help from the government,but they don't want to work. People have take hand by hand and support each other and help the people who doesn't have a job. so we are going to accomplish more if we are always doing something,or create inactivity to serve a purpose. Thomas Jefferson gave this wrote because all the people doesn't have to be a idle,government have to support the people to a accomplish something to help the people,and people have to take the activities or jobs that governments gave to them as a series.

all the people doesn't have to be a idle because all people should have to work and help each other. People have to create a specific times and days work and divide the work between the people. Some people are old and want's to retirement that may get a opportunity to the other to have chance to get a job. It's really helpful when people support the other that will help everybody also, that will help the government to give more opportunities and create communities from different culture. To mix communities from many culture that help to have a people who have different job.

Government have to support the people to accomplish something to help other people. Many communities today serve a different jobs at that way many people can work if they have extra time from their day. However,students are very important element to this plan and they have the future in their hand. Schools and students can help to crate a activity for the any student who interested to work with this activity. Peoples from around the world who have many different idea how to create an activity or a community.

People have to take the activities or jobs that government gave as a series. It's very wonderful when people feel to their job as important job to them. Also people have to share any thing at news paper for the people to let them know that anyone need a job. people like to have something accomplish in their life. People like what Thomas Jefferson said and they accomplish what he said.

It's a good idea when all people working together and help each other. all the people doesn't have to be a idle,government have to support the people to a accomplish something to help the people,and people have to take the activities or jobs that governments gave to them as a series. Government have to support the people to accomplish something to help other people. People like what Thomas Jefferson said and they accomplish what he said. Many people disagree with this for many reason. Most of them have a hard life or sick,and they can't move from their bed because of retarded.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
CFBD5DD8ECFD,"Having shorter summer break can be beneficial for students to remember information. Although, some students enjoy having long summer breaks, but I think there should be year-round schools because students can have 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall.

I believe it is enough for students to have 3-4 week break in summer because long summer break can make students bored and forget all information that they already learned in school. For example, in three weeks I can go to beach with my parents and friends. I can start my basketball practices, learn new skills, and be more active. Also I will not forget any informatin that I learned in school in three weeks. So this is the good reason that schools should have three week summer breaks.

The second reason that schools should be year-round is because students can have longer winter breaks and celebrate the new year with their family. For example, one of my friend loves winter break and he always wanted to go back to his country and celebrate the new year with his family but he never got chance to celebrate the new year with his family because he didn't have time because of school. So having longer winter break can help most of the students to go to their country and celebrate the new year with their family.

The last reason that schools should be year-round is because students can get a week off in every season of the year. For example I love to go out with my friends in spring because it's close to summer and weather is very nice to spend time with your friend. Me and my friends always like to play soccer in spring because it is so fun and you can enjoy the weather while you playing soccer. In addition I can rest and sleep more during the weeks off in each season, so I don't get tired and get bad grades in school.

In the end I agree with having year-round schools because students can have 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. So government should start thinking about these issues and make schools year-round. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
770541C6A2C1,"Would you like to start your life early?

Graduating is a privilege in general for everyone. Most find it very very important if you want to succeed in life and make great money. on the other hand some many not and find it important and waste of time. I think everyone who doesnt find it important should really think twice. Yes I understand that some classes are better than others, but its all required for one to graduate.

In my opinion i support both sides of the story. Some people want to start their life early some do not. Even if you wanted to graduate early its a challenge. obvious you would have to take extra classes, and to make those up you have a choice to take it during the summer, online, or night school which ever is best. its nice to graduate early because if one goes to college they see that and they think best of you.

On the other hand i do not think it's a good a idea to graduate early. Only if you have the right skills and capability for it. Gradating early is not for everyone some struggle in the normal four standard years of high school. It is not a requirement at all. High school is not a race its preparing you for your future its good to take all the time you need maybe if need to stay in extra year or two.

In conclusion like I said ""I support both sides"" it is not necessary to graduate nor is it a requirement. Graduating early is only for those who already want to go to college or go into the work force. Graduating in the normal four years is grate if you dont know what your going to be yet after high school. There is never no rush. Always take your time its your future. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
C25E3A9AA408,"dear:

I Help that i can get your atenchienhasi wish that i pass dis test is so inportan forme and may teachers because they have work harde forme i oso what that my children be brode of me that y de pass the test. a more options for estudent that cant go to school on morning they can go on the asfer nuon or they can home classes or vidio confedensil. i tink that all boy or girl shot go to school all the time they shot graduet work hard and they can go to nova or north carolina universiti dont have to pay tha mach money .i tink all the boy and girl shot go to university and have a diploma i now school is hard i tink the student shot have a diploma. school is a privileche to go no al children can go to school some have to work to get food to der home son of the little childrens are 6 year old they do not have to work they have to be in school or playn no all chindren are have some of them wish to go to school.

disten lornin is a good idia because no all the time wi can go aut sayd or have the mauch time but tha is a good idia i will go graduat my family will be happy thet y will be more is goin to be one of the most inportant day in muy life is adreem that all student have to du inthe life but that is i good idia that we can have to vidio chat for a classes. yes student will benefis for that promgran because not all student can go hay have to work to help der parents. but some wish that they can go to scholl but on the same time he now that thay can not go but that will be good idia is not a dreem ene more cal student can du what they what is goin to be more hese .i wist we can help all the world for the little children can go to school they will me so happy ther dreem cambe real what day wish to du or gohave dome for demen that is all forme thank you.  ",1.5,1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0
168958FC7315,I agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day because. Most parents only get off work at 4:00 and they need to be home before their kids. Also if kids are at school longer they will learn more and get smarter. First parents need to be home before their kids because. If they leave work early to get home they will get paid less. If they get paid less they will not be able to pay for their kid's college. Or out of school activities like horseback riding and soccer. Or even paying for a nanny or a babysitter to watch their kid so they can get paid more. Second if kids are at school longer they will learn more and get smarter. If people learn more and get smarter they will have a higher a chance in getting in to a good college. If they get in to a good college they will have a higher chance in getting a good job. If they get a good job they will get good money to help their families out someday. In the conclusion that's why I agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day. That's why you should accept my position.,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
E96C123FAC95,"CHOOSE YOUR OWN CHARACTER

The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote,""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.""Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? Take a position on this issue. Do we need to choose are own character traits yes, or no? In my opinion I will say yes we need choose our character because If we choose our character we can be wherever we want, good,or bad person, etc and we are going to do a good job if we choose our own character traits.

First, If I choose my own character I will give my best work because I choose my own character, and I'm going to feel very comfortable, and so happy to do it my character. For example, I remember one friend from my country hi's name were Generic_Name and he was doing a activity school was theater, and they were doing the story of Little Red Raiding Hod, and he was acting the wolf he was the bad gay, and he did a really good job I was so impressed, I remember he say in the stories I always I'm going to be the bad guy because the bad guy is the second most important character, and is the conflict of the story the one who make interesting the story.

Next, you can develop and demonstrate your skill acting, If you choose your own character because you are going to do a great work, and you are going act like you are a real actor and maybe you can discover acting, If have a passion of acting. For example, I hear some stories about actor. How they like acting, and they say in the first time they didn't liked to act but them there was starting like how they act, that how they like to acting because it's fun to act, and you can enjoying acting with your friends.

Finally, If I do one character I don't like, or I don't choose probably I'm not going to give my best work because I'm not going to feel comfortable or exacting to do it. For example, I remember like 3 years ago In my English 9 class we do a act about Romeo And Juliet and they give my the character of the guard and I was not exacting to do it, so I didn't do very well but I try I think If I try maybe I will like the character but I didn't liked that why I prefer to choose my own character.

In conclusion, If you choose your own character you are going to do a good job and great work, you are going to demonstrate and develop your skill acting If you do the character you choose, and if you do a character you did choose you probable are not going to do a great job, or maybe you are not going care about the character this are the reason why is good to choose a character them someone give you a character. So remember choose your own character don't wait Intel someone give you a character,and don't forget is telling you the one who wrote the article. >_<",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
4906FE42D823,"Philosopher Albert Schweitzer once said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" meaning setting a good example by your own behavior to influence other people. Some say setting a good example is the best way for one to influence others, on the other hand, there are better ways to influence others. The best ways to influence other is to show motivation and to be positive in what is being accomplished.

Motivation is a major aspect to those trying to reach or accomplish a certain goal. For example, a person is trying to lose weight and be in better shape to do or a sport in school, but that person isn't feeling motivated to do anything, with even a little motivation by saying ""it's going to be tough at the start, but once you feel like giving up ask yourself why you started"" can get that person moving and determined to reach the goal that's being aimed for. Not only is Motivation a huge impact in influencing other, Being positive is a major key to get others moving.

Being positive can affect others in a way to get them more influenced. For example, a person is trying to write a song but just can't seem to figure out what or how to write it, stress and anger is taking over but showing the positive can allow that person to relax and have a clear mind on knowing what to write about. Being positive can easily affect those that are around and by saying, thinking, and listening to positive things is can influence so many others.

There are millions of other ways to influence people, and it most certainly is the best way to do so. Motivation and being positive can indeed help those who need the influence, even when they can't reach their goal or can't be able to write a certain song, these following reasons have showed how it can help and many more can be done to influence others.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
E446D60AD551,"I think that some things that we thought not are true in the history the students they will work is not the best effort. They believe that the source of true is self esteem is achevement. I take a positions on this issue I think that will look in the future. I think that are different peoples some person not look its future only think that the life them treat only of to live but not undertoond that not is only life. I think that students have reason of thougtht that is this is an achievement not is easy we have a achievement yes we have a achievement in this life because yes not have an achievement I do know that you thought in my opinion the trues is the point number firts in this life because that is really happened the true is import always me question for me is that yes not have true all away different.

Some things of this paragraph elieve o this prompt is that understand that the students they believe that students must be self confident and that sense have this world power CONFIDENT are two world confident and confidence Confident is feeling or showing that your are sure about your own abilities opcions and confidence is trust or stong belief in someone or something. I have every confidence in ability to do the job. They have much confident and they have much order to learn more order is to tell someone to do something in a strong way which does not permit him to refuse and without saying they ordered to learn more learn is to get knowledge a skill they learning work they thounght that are the best.

They have achievenment something that is done successfully espeacially through hard work or skill. The act of finishing something successfully the feeling that you get when you have finished something sucessfully. They in learning by lowering to move someone or something down to make something less in amount or quality. I think that the life have must chance or opportunity of have one better life of enjoy every moment yes have work hard but always enjoy every minut every hour every every year with the family is important in this life not all only have that them job always think that have must time and to stop one moment and look this life will look the future.

What is an future? an future is at or to a greater distance in time more to a greater degree the board needs time to consider the matter futher. I can't remember any futher back than 1995 at or to a greater distance in space. However many people also use futher when talking about distances especially in formal coversation only futher can be used in other senses we need a futher week to finish the project but make your life no have self rich with only proffession make your future preofession a type of job that needs special training or skill especially one that needs a high level of education and yes have one occupation is always a job or profession always a employment is a work specially when it is done to earn money it's very difficult to find work at the moment.

I think that yes have a carrer like the student best effort but work I think that I can always but have a carrer the job or series of jobs that someone has in a particular are of work usually involving more resposibility as time passes I have a friend she had a very distingushed carrer in medicine she have a profession I do know because is different a prefession with carrer or trade I think that a trade is a hob always but specially one that involves working with your hands and requieres special training but now talking of the students I think that not have a job because thought that they not have a experience in a job.

I do know that must talking of this only think in the job and the student that the other people thought that they no have experience and that is esperience is to have somehing happen to you to feel something it was the firts time I had ever experenced failure and experinced is having the knowledge or skill that is necessary for something the true this student put in me an expiration because the point important this but they is the true they have a good point the sincerity the quality of being sincere or honest sincere used about a person really meaning or believing what you say not pretending sincerely in a way that shows what you really feel or think about someone or something.

The student's have praising like you say when you are expressing admiration for someone or somethig I think that they have a precaution always precaution in the job I think precaution is something that you do now in order to avoid danger or problems in the future. We took the precaution of locking our valuables in the things with safe like precautions against fire. The students I think that they thought in implore when you implore someone when the situation is very serious and you need something very much.

They had importance about the job the decision was of great importance to the future of the business they have importance of this job only person not have tolerance but learning other people what is tolerance is like to allow accept someone or something especially opinions or behavior that you do not agree with or people who are not like you and other word is intolerance the ability to suffer something especially pain difficukt conditions the student only working together but self better so that two or more things are mixed with joined.

The other people no have compassion they no are considerable with students I think that they had considerable difficullty in getting the students they have a opinion are work the important is the true they must consider the matter carefully before they make our choice to have something in my opinion I think about someone or something in a particular way. They need considered that not are riks wastoo great to remember or pay attention to something the like the students is they have repect not are angry for no have experience in the job they are intelligent for no have insecurity is this I like not have insecure not are they have security Ilike they",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
061D2BBACB45,"Technology had a great impact in the world. Technology had changes many things in the world. Today people can do a lot of things using technology, but there are some good and bad effects that technology cause on people's lives. Technology can cause bad effects and there are some people that they can see what is technology causing and they just prefer to continue using technology. Technology need limitation for humans.

Although some people says that technology had positive effects on people's lives, actually technology can have negative effects on people's lives because technology cause addiction to peoples. Addiction to technology is a big problem in the world. Some people believe that technology doesn't cause negative effects on people's lives, but this is not true because technology can cause problems on people's lives.

First reason, why does technology had negative effects on people's lives is because technology cause a lot of problem on peoples. One of the problem is that today technology had a big impact on people specially in adults, kids, and adolescents. The majority of people are using technology some of them knows what it can cause if they are using this all the time. For example, some kids start using technology when they just have 4 or 5 years old, and it can cause positive effects and also can cause negative effects because they start learning, but at the same time they are creating a big addiction to cell phones. The parents have to control this and dont give to their kids cell phones because they just are kids and dont need to use technology too much. Kids can use technology to study or have fun, but they need limitation of technology .

Second reason, why does technology cause negative effects on peoples lives is because adolescents are using technology to play online. This is causing a big problem to them because they are getting addiction to this. Some adolescents just prefer to stay at home playing and they dont want to go out with their parents.

The Washington post had a article about the addiction that technology is causing on people's lives. This article says that people who are playing online are having problems with banks. For example, Some of them have to pay to play online. They can't stop playing because they have a addiction. They start using credits card of their parents and they create debt with banks.

In conclusion technology had negative impact on people's lives. Technology have to have supervision because it is causing a big impact in the world. The are some positive effects that technology cause, but the majority are negative effects. Some people want to stop technology and there are some that they just want a better world without problems and addictions to technology. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
87DF9FF7104D,"Albert Einsteins said "" I am afraid that one day the technology outdo the human brain."" He was afraid that one day the technology controls humanity. In my opinion, the technology had negative effects on people's lives, because the technology had been corrupt the mind, also expose the life of people. in the actuality the people act like robots. Most of the time, they do not think by them self. In addition the interaction between family and friends is been losing a cause of social media or videos games.

However many people think the opposite, they think live before without technology the people was illiterate, and they think the technology is a progress for the world. The technology brought a lot of invents like explore the human body, talk with the people that is not near from us, or maintain informed what happens in another place, Even still the technology is giving us a lot of sources like buy things without leave the house, but the technology is had been negative effects on people's live because nowadays many people, most kids and teenagers they do not think by them self. One of many example of that is when you ask a girl or a boy about something really important how it is, if the water has energy? Most of the teenagers is going to answer yes, and I know this because in my science class the teacher asked this question, and everyone in the classroom answers yes, but the teacher said the water does not have energy, and she explains why, but no one has convince and what she told, so they look in Google and they arrived the conclusion what the teacher say was correct. The point with this example is to see nowadays the people believe more and what Google or other things what form part of the technology say. if the people need a solution to solve any problem, they actually do not think about it. they go to the internet and look for solution.

another negative effect of the technology in the daily life is the interaction. I am going to expose my family and friends. when i spend time with my family and friend, they always happens in their cellphones, they do not pay attention around of their behavior. They lose the notion of their time and everything a cause of the social media even my brother he does not want to go out and play soccer or to walk, because he is more interesting to play videos games or watch videos. In actuality a cellphone is indispensable to live. to do moments that suppose there are good moments, or that is the people believe, but they forget the feeling to talk, to joke without check their cellphone every two minutes. We slowly losing our feelings, our taste for life, our friends, our family, and even our jobs. In addition the technology expose our private life. Example is for every transition you do, you need to give your personal information. The social media is turn in our worst enemy because across of the internet many people has been bullied for the videos or picture that they shared until to lead the people to suicide.

in conclusion the technology is our worst tool to improve ourself. The time of Elbert Einsteins was afraid is coming soon. The technology is opaquing our intellect. The technology is turn into robots without the capacity to think by ourself. thanks to the technology the humanity is turn in unselfish, unsuccessful, and unsure of themself. The effects of the technology cause ours children, teenagers are negative and we only watch how the future of the world is going down. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
25F1B2374A32,"Have you ever felt like you needed the guidance of another person? Many people have felt that way. It's never bad to ask for help or guidance from another person to get through things. Although having your life runned by someone else, seeking guidance isn't such a bad thing, because for some people making a big decisions on their own could be hard and stressful, and you could also be guided into a good and healthier life style where you are making better decisions and ideas.

A reason people should seek guidance is because for some people making a big decision on their own could be hard and stressful. But having someone there with them while making the decision would be more than helpful and could possible reduce the stress they have. For example my cousin would get very stressed out when she had to make big decisions on her own. But when she had someone there with her or she asked for help she wasn't as stressed as she was when she had to decided on her own. Making decisions on your own is hard and intimating, so why not seek the guidance of someone else to help get though that tough decision making?

Another reason seeking guidance is a good idea, is because you'd be guided into a better and healthier life style where you are making better decisions and ideas. As an example one of my closest friends was going through a dark time in her life and was making poor decisions. But she found someone she looked up to and asked for their guidance. So they guided her to a better life style, where she now makes better decisions than she did before. All because she had someone to guide and help her. Guidance really does play a big role in a better life style and better choice making on people.

However one might say, ""well your life is being runned by another person."" But it really isn't being runned by another person, because you also have the choice to listen to them or not. Or that your mentor or whoever is guiding will tell you what to do or how to live your life. In some cases they do tell you how to live your life, but they tell you how to live a better and healthier life, but can't force you to change in any way.

Having your life runned by someone else isn't ideal but seeking guidance isn't the worse idea because you'd be guided in good ways such as a better life style and could be guided through big hard decision making. In conclusion I believe peoples lives wouldn't be horrible with the guidance of someone because they aren't only guided you to better your life but they are also helping you with hard decision making and getting through things.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
722C353F2831,"I agree with being honest because holding the truth for so long can hurt a persons feeling wether you know them for long. Being honest is a good choice because it is over to get easily without lying and worrying about it later on about it and what you did. Lying about something you did do could get you to make the person believe that they aren't your friend or aren't special to you but telling to truth means that they can also tell honesty and how loyal you are.

Lying would make it hard for you in your life (future) and the people who care a lot for you because they wouldn't trust you ever again or talk to you. It'll make it harder for you to communicate with them when you see them or try to talk. Later on your life lying would make you regret what you did and why you did it because you'll lose someone in your life as well as the person you love.

Being honest with you family and friends would be the best choice because later on your life you dont have worry about any regrets on your actions on what you did. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
4668B9F74078,"When you try new things you learn and when you learn you grow.

Do not conform of what you already have try to be better, because if you do not try you would not get chance to do thing and you probability would not grow. In my opinion you should try new things and not be stock in what you already mastered because ,You can learn new things, You can grow as a individual and as a community and You can help others.

When you try new things we learn because the make us grow,

for example if you want to open a buisness of finances in your community but you do not know how because you never try to do it you ask someone that have already mastered of doing it and you can start doing your buisness because you already try and you learn how to do it. another example would be going to college and there is a class that you already know because you take it in high school and you explain the thing to your friend and you are a mastered doing it and one of you friends ask you for another class problem but you do not because you haven try the class but it sound interesting and you want to try it because you want to learn new thing and try not matter what your situation is in your life be confident of your self. other example would be try to cook and learn your self that can teach you that you can try by your self and learn by your self but you try and that what it matter you try.

Try new thing help you learn and learn help you grow as an individual and as a community for example you grow as an individual because you take the class that you friend ask you before and you did it answer him because you haven even try then you try and become a mastered doing it and you open a buisness the community start growing and you open more buisness you become more important and the community grow more as well as you and you became someone important for the community and you keep having chance to be better every time that you learn you start helping people that do not have a chance to imprube them self. an for teach your self of cooking is a motivation to other to try the same thing.

You can help people when you grow because you learn how to do the work and now you teach the work to other to they can have a better chance in life giving them a place to work and having them grow as well the community grow because the buisness that you open people was more interesting in your buisness and they make you offers and tell you to work with them but you are scared that you work may not work but you remember that if you do not try and stay of what you are mastered you would not grow. cooking your self help the community to have people to get in head and teach others.

Even if you do not have try something and you think you can do it and you fell, you would be more sad that you do not try before you do it or ask someone for help that ready do it is a big mistake, try before you do not grow ,you do not have to be conform of what you already have because you can help others and make your self be proud and cooking for other and tell then that you learn by your self is a inspiration to other do the some thing and the way that you grow as trying thing would make the community more interesting try to grow before you give up.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
34F016931102,"Some students would benefit if they understand things easily without a teacher explaining everything and if they don't need help like in math, but other students would not benefit if they don't understand things ,and if they need extra help or ask questions that will be a problem for them taking classes online or video conferencing.

Student who would benefit are those who understand things easily, and if they want to be alone to have a better concentration in what they do classes online is a good option because they will be taking solo training, and it's comfortable to take these classes without going to school they would have more time in home for example, I preferred to take classes online because that will give me more time to prepare everything that I need to go to work, because when I arrive from school to home, I have to do everything really quick ,things that I have to do like wait for my little sister in the bus stop from school then, I have to cook ,and that takes me time, and I have to be ready at 3:30pm to go to my work ,but classes online would benefit me because, I need help understanding classes like geometry or English is not easy for me to understand some words in English, and I need to ask a lot of questions.

Students who would not benefit are those who like to be with friends in school and talk with people that can be an issue for them because taking classes online they will be alone, and they could have some possible technological problems, and if they don't have self-control having a computer in front of them certain time of the day they would not be successful with classes online.

Some people think that students who take classes online don't make the same effort like those who take classes in school , because they don't wake up in the morning to take the school bus like normal high school students do ; however ,I think that students that take classes online male the same effort because they need to have time to take those classes and they have to respect the schedule that teachers give to them to attend class, they have to be in front of the computer a lot of time that can is not good but they do it because they want to graduate like other students wants.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
9ABF7B48B802,"Having school every single day is nobodies favorite free time to others it's there favorite hobby it also takes time and alot of studying to. There making everything so easy for us this year they will do 3 years of high school if I studying really hard to not stay for all 4 years by that addition they will be including to have courses during on summers or in evenings or may not be able to take elective courses. Which will be really helpful for me to have more hours to myself more of my free time I could studying way more to. More than I knew about these prgrams im glad I found about it because it can be a big change for me and everybody else. It's a 50 50 deal to me because your going to miss on 1 year ,but also you can do so much go apply to colleges and have a job because you would have more time for all the better thats coming to you.

On the outcome you would be helping yourself out spend your summer on school time or you can have less hours of going to school on evenings sleep in more in the miday. All 4 years you can be doing the total of 3 years you would just be doing fulltime but it's also the choice you make on evenings or in the summer days. Luckily you can do anthing what you want and could imagine if you can put your mind to it and it will appear better days. Although everything in life you will get because its how you want your future to be but if it's for you it will not go away. At any age you can graduate young or as a older person but when you do you will be a successful leader.

My main priority in life is school since I was a child I always love coming in to school it was always my focus in life to overcome the end of it. School has always been my favorite because you saw your friends and it's how you start your day also good connection than having a studying buddy to make everything work. A high school deploma is your way to the next door it's access to everything you will ever need later on to your future. After your done high school you will be feeling as a pot of gold apply in purssure and you will get there apply to many awesome colleges and now that you have time you can have a job. The program is an outstanding choice and make the choice now your missing on a life time opportunity.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
0C30A2A5D998,"It success consists of going from failure? I think that there are people that are successful and have gone through failure because without experiences people will not know that is out there. I believe that in live there is gong to be up and down and this teach us who to be an successful person.

First,to have a successful live we need the experience to be success not matter who many obstacle we have. When I was eleven I star making cookies at first I was bad, and when I fail the first try, but I keep going to make cookies not matter how bad I was. Then as I keep failing, and one day I was able to be successful. People have to know that we are not perfect and in some point of live we have to be unsuccessful to became what we one to be some day, Also it very important that people have the capability to say that they have make mistake.

Second,people have up and downs. As an example J.K Rowling she wrote the Harry Potter sires,and she want it to published,but she was not successful,and then by the time her sires was one of the most famous book. I believe that any one can be an successful person,but they have to know that not every thing is going to be a success at the first try.

Other believe that success is not consisted in failure because they think that people can be successful with out making any mistake. Thinking that every thing is easy as an litter kids puzzle.

In conclusion failure is one step of been success because every person can process the piece that their missing to be successful. As people have been going in up and down,and had experiences who thing are going.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
CD4135EAFB1E,"A Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow. Some will said you'll grow but won't reach their beyond what they mastered. Some will disagree with Ralph Waldo Emerson statement, because doing something beyond that already master will never stop you from doing it. In the pass year I played a Villain before I reach goal becoming beyond with a instrument that I didn't know how to play, I master how to soccer for the first when I was little, and at the end of the day your going to be beyond great when you don't give up.

When I was 6th grade in middle school I never though I was going to learn how to play instrument for the first time in my life. The instrument that I'm now play is Villain my brother though I wasn't good enough to play a instrument. I practice every days to get better and to try my best. I played three year in middle school I was getting good and then I love how sound made with bows and string. The teacher once said if stop playing then your going to forget the string note and how to used correctly. When I got to middle I learned how to play a interment for the for time in my life become beyond. I didn't stop growing I kept growing to become better to play.

Why won't we reach our goal then become beyond because doing something beyond your reaching a goal to finish. This was a time where I want to learn how to play a sport. When I was little I wanted to play soccer but I didn't started learning until I was 10 years old. My goal was to learn how to play soccer, until one day I was at the park with my family and friend I learn how to play soccer. My uncle tough me how to played soccer for the first time.

He showed me how to kick the inside and outside of my feet. My uncle told me that I was fast learner that I kicked correctly with forced. So we played soccer just kicking back and forth until knew how to kick. When I was 7th grade I sign up for the girl soccer team for the school. When I made the team I was exacted because I never though I going play for school soccer team and it was the first to play. The couch liked how I played but my friend though I was beyond great but I didn't believe them. When I got to 8th grade I wanted to sign up again because some of my friend was joining, then when I made in the team next then I know they voted for me to become captain for the girl soccer team. The coach was beyond how I played for the game I made 8 goal in the season but I never stopped playing soccer. Until the moment in my life I knew that I had master my goal.

I'm 16 year old about to turn seventeen in July I have reach so many goals in my life and then it when beyond. I learn so many thing on my own because my parent didn't know English. At the end of day I had teacher and friends that help me all my school year. The one key that my parent tough me was never give up on yourself, if you don't understand the problem then go to the next problem then come back to finish the rest. So all this year I learn how to play a instrument that was a villain and playing a sport that love I become beyond great and master to become better. I grew up become better the thing I love the most and did it because I had sibling following my foot step since I was the oldest in my family.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
7D955FAD0C73,"Likewise, many people belive that "" Determine never to be idle ... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". By all means that by being idle you wont get much done, but if active can get a lot of more stuff done. Others belive that by being idle, you can still get anything done as much as a person that is consistently active. I strongly agree that by being active will get more tasks complete and it will be less difficult. By always having something to do, your showing everyone your character and your morals. Inactivity and idleness is not good because by not having anything to do you wont learn as much as a person that has to do majority of time. Actively participator have better improved skills then those who dont do anything.

Firstly, being active is the best goal a mind set can have. It will be less likely for one to not complete a task or struggle with a task if is idle. Always doing something no matter if you have nothing to do, shows a lot about someones motivation and actions. Especially in a work place, if your boss sees you doing nothing while there being things to do, hes going to think your inactive. By showing everyone you always have something to do, your showing them that you are capable of doing anything. Theres no task to difficult or no job to big for you to complete because you are already used of always doing something in your everyday life and while being idle from the task isnt part of your expectation or motives. If you think of always being occupied and being successful it practically the same concept just because getting task done is like you doing anything you are asked to do and being successful is like achieving your goals.

Secondly, Idle and inactivity serves a purpose when you are a 100 percent sure you can do anything when asked to. For example my dad once told me, why are you always playing video games and that why dont i go and play outside with my friends. What i told him was that i did not want to and he told me that my actions show a lot about who i am. After that he signed me up for a youth soccer team, that i played being a defender. Although i wasnt good, i started trying my best and being active with the team. Later that day my coach was talking to my dad and telling him how i was participating and doing everything he told me to do. What he also had suggested to my dad was if he can move me up to a left forward because of all the hard work and commitment i had done for the pass warm ups and practice games.

Therefore, people that are always participating you will see improvement in grades, work ethic and body structure. People that always are doing something productive in there everyday life have good grades because they are used of finishing all their work, rather then the student that doesnt do anything and idled from the class. Humans that are always active rather than being idle and isolated have a better attitude and work experience. Going to the Gym doesnt only show that you have an excellent daily routine but you are person that has a goal to complete each and every day. Keeping your self occupied thew out any circumstance is a good skill and shows that you are not inactive and that nothing is excluding you from doing anything you have to do.

In conclusion, do you think always having something to do all the time shows who you really are? Participating shows a lot about a person goals and achievements. Inactive people show their lack of interest and the type of attitude shown. While a person that is consistently doing things and keeping there self occupied and does not tend to complain about what they are ever asked to do. Always doing stuff will make you want to complete more each and every time.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
525E9A75CAA0,"What if you can go vist anywhere in the world? Where would you go,their are many place in the world but I would want to go to Hawii.

I would want to vist hawii with freinds and family. Because we can go to the beach,we can eat coconuts,ice cream and we can get a nice tan. We can go surfing. Me and my freinds and femily can live in a house all together near a nice beach. And we can have a lot of fun on the nice beach

First we will have to find a house near a beach. Then we will have to put what ever we brought on the trip into the room we picked. Then we can get some stuff for the beach like surf boreds,some sun screen,sun glasses, and some stuff for the sand. And when the sun goes down we can watch it,and we can watch the sun go up in the morning.

After we get the stuff for the beach then we can go to the beach. When we have the stuff for the beach we can use the surf boerd to go surfing. Me and my brother and freinds can have a race with the surf boerds. After we are done having fun on the beach we can stop by somewhere and get something to eat then we can get some nice ice cream.

This is why I picked Hawii out of any place in the world and I hope that one day that I will wake up to the sound of waves and see the sun rise up out of my window and eat coconut out side on the beach.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
1E2B10DC7A53,"In my opinion, they shouldn't let students attend class from home. Students do not attend their classes will most likely to slack off. Although it is a great idea, only the truthful will attend classes from home while the other student will be in school. Students need to be in school to social and get out of their house, students shouldn't be in their bed listening to the teacher and being lazy all day. Student needs to be in school.

From my point of view, students should be in school to socialist and need some fresh air. If a student stay home then they'll feel lonely, decrease their social skills, and be lazy. Due to this, students can develop some type of mental health problems if they stay in their house for a while, also some student who is in home will most likely skip school just to enjoy their day off. Teachers should know their students more. If a teacher knows who wants to learn then they'll most likely will focus on that student but if the student doesn't care then the teacher will try their best to help the student. Therefore all K-12 students should be in school and learn.

Even though you understand my argument however, I think the trustworthy students should attend class at home. If a student shows respect and work really hard, then they would most likely to attend class at home if necessary. Although it is best if they attend in class but if they are sick then they are welcome to attend class in home as long they listen to the teacher and take notes. But if they are really sick or any emergency, than they should email the teacher to let them know. Students should always let the teacher know when they are not in school and ask the teacher's permission to do a video conference.

Without a doubt, students should be in school to socialist and need of fresh air, I do believe that everyone will be good in class and show respect to any adults. All student needs to be healthy in a physical and mental way. Students need to be in school in order to build their social skills because that's part of life, to socialist people if they need some assists or you need some assists as well. However, if there's a trustworthy student who work really hard may attend class in home. But if a student is awfully sick and in crisis then he or she will email the teacher that they are not in school and ask if they can do the work next class or in the morning and lunch break. Whether or not I think all K-12 student should go to school and learn instead learning it from home.                ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
4477C08B4960,"Imagine that you are in the classroom two minutes before the teacher asked you to take out your homework, in that moment you remember that you didn't do the worksheet because you don't understand it, and you don't have anybody to help you.

First, kids have some problems to do their homework, or they don't understand what to do. Many childrens' have problem to stay focus in their homework, for example, many kids get distracted by little things ,or a person distracted them. Afterschool homework club is a great idea to help students, because the teachers can help them, and never miss a homework again. Also, they are many students that the fist thing they do when they get out of school is to play videogames.

Next, some childs know how how to do their work, but they only need motivation to do it. Teachers do fun games for the kids to do their work in a fun way. Many prefer to play games, and not to do their work. All students likes to play, so teachers make games that is related to the homework to the students do it, or make it more easier for them.

Furthermore, students don't write their homework in the agenda, so they forget to do it, or sometimes they are playing and don't remember to do their work. When a child don't understand something the teachers can explain them in afterschool to they understand better. If the students are in the afterschool homework club they never will miss a homework again because the teacher will help them.

Finally, the kids that is in the afterschool homework club will get good grades, because the kids return their assignments. If the kids don't understand something in the afterschool club explain the students to understand more. However, afterschool club is a great idea to help students, because the teachers, and friends can help the student, and never miss a homework again.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
BB240E6FF61F,"Since the early societies with important philosophers such as Aristotle and Confucius, the world have been in a complex debate arguing about the best way to influence other people. As result, several ideas about how to influence people emerged, such as an internal agreement through the creation of the early constitution in Athens by Aristotle. Early constitution which tried to combat the earliest authoritarian ways to influence people through force. However, those ways to influence people were not effective because those factors dictate the people's actions and created a hostile environment. Therefore, the best way to influence others is by our own behavior setting a good example because this generates stability, creates higher standards, and effectiveness.

Henceforth, setting a good example generates stability because this do not create a patron of dictatorship that generate differences and hostilities between the relationship follower-influencer. As result, this factor create an ideal and healthier relationship, which is reflected in the quality of the relationship environment. As a consequence, the stability created it by our own behavior and example make our message easier to be transmit it and receive it. For example, the relationship parent-son. This particular and common relationship completely reflected the influence of a good example and how the parent behavior dictate the stability in the family, especially in his relationship with the son. As result, if the parent set a good example and behavior the son would be more open to receive the parent's influence. Therefore, a high grade of empathy would be developed. As result, there would not be any differences and hostilities that can damage the stability of the relationship.

However, many people still argue that there are different ways to influence others rather than setting a good example, such as internal agreements (e. i., constitution and other behavior codes). However, those ways still fall into the dictatorship and authoritarian scheme that make people disagree and create conflict. In addition, those rudimentary and forcing methods do not help the persons and the influencer-follower environment. In contrast, deteriorate and break any possibility of improvement because this authoritarian limit you, instead develop you. Therefore, by showing a good behavior and setting a good example the influencing process change drastically because this process became more active, inclusive, and dynamic. As result, this influencing way create higher standards because this method of influencing people promote values such as integration and solidarity that reach improvement and cooperation. As result, the higher standards break the authoritarian barrier and open the path for cooperation, participation, and admiration in the follower-influencer relationship.

Therefore, a great example led by a good behavior becomes more effective because there is a dynamic cooperation between followers and influencers that boosted their performance and empathy in the relationship. Hence this dynamic cooperation becomes stronger, as result the relationship reach incredible stages of solidarity, which is translated into a better and healthier way to influence people. In contrast, the old ""fashioned"" authoritarian ways to influence people just deteriorate the follower-influencer relationship by dictating and forcing the followers' actions. As result, the net influence, effectiveness, and impact by the authoritarian ways become lower than setting a good example and behavior. For example, the actions by the Mohammad Gandhi in India with his pacific civilian disobedience movement; where he led an incredible number of people just by example and a good behavior through the diverse hostilities. This show the huge impact of setting a good example and the effectiveness that this way have on influencing people. Therefore, setting a good example is the best way to influence others because this way is the less damaging and authoritarian, and more inclusive and beneficial method to achieve a greater result. In addition, because this method promotes solidarity and unity, instead of division and competition. Lastly, because this method highlight humanity instead of cruelty.     ",5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.5
B8EE6B6594BD,"Most students enjoy summer vacations,but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and the students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. Some people argue that there should be year rounds schools,where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring fall.

This is the opinion of some educators that think the students dont need a long vacations ,because they cannot retain the learned in the past year, some students think the same .The system to the long long vacation for students in high school can be a very problematic because they are start the adultlife and need time off for live.

The idea that the students's vacations need are more short is bad because the students in high school needs long period of vacation for find their firts job, some students need travel to other country for visit their family and need a long vacations; if the students not have a good long vacations they can stressed and have other nervous problems.

For this situation to improve that the vacation are very short is impossible because not all students have a same system to live and some need time to find independitzation, some enjoy with their family and other can study in their homes, in other words the students need explore the world and this only can possible when have time in vacations the rest of the year they can study.

Educators and other people that think the system of short vacations need understand that before they was a students and they also was need vacation for forget all thing and enjoy the life.

The other side for take postion in this issue is that the short bacations are goof for not forget the learned in old classes.

Some people think that the student need a long periods of vacation specifically in summer , but this is bad because the student only need study and the student cannot retain the information for long time and they need more time in the school for learn more thing and repeat the learned in past years.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
C1ACBD09B2FC,"should our school follow this model after consitering the benefits and disadvantagesto a four day a school week will be not be not because,we will not expend time time with family. We will have a lot homework. It's a long day. children needs to be time. family waiting for children. students have three days a week free and some students start work some not. Students will be focuses to learn a long time i agree but, students had to dangers. I don't think students learn will be just school for good life. Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. And businesses doesn't have students have a lot homework. Students won't because students some under 18 some over 18. Because students will be hungry, and they can't wait lunch time.

First, We will not expend time with family because, we will have long class and we will stay whole day at school. we will boring and tied we will focus to learn. and children will be free after class so,children going to out side with friend and they play game any area any time they will be happen. If we say you can't go with your friends students start cry and i can't say any think because,students already learn long time.

Second, ""We will have a lot homework'' because, they will be have extra class and subject. They give more homework when they finish class they will come back home but,they are not free they have homework they didn't eat anything they can't talk anybody. they have mind foresters. It's a long day because, students cant,t be stay long time one place. students life will be not eager it's difficult,strenuous. they always thinking about enjoy a day and they will to go to new place and some think learn new subject. some students doesn't boring because they can used phone if they are free they pay song they are looking movies,they were talk to friends and if have lunch time they will go to to side and enjoy to lunch but,not every body.

Third, family waiting for children because,some children not above the 18. who not be above the 18 there needs to be parents when they are going to the school bus and come back to home. there parents can go to work because,class to be long but, they will come back to work when children come back home. Some time precepale call to mom and dad emergency they can't go to schools because, there parents think about children come to late so,they are will go to out side and fair way. Some students have work some not if they are working it's to be good because,they got money and experience how to work who to talk to costumer and help each their, make new friend,talk to different languages. Some students working they get money,they does't want to go to class because,they have extra money when students want they gone find anything they have a lot of money. If students left work students have money and student thinking about school then better then money. Students not interest for learn.

Last,Students will be accuse to learn a long time i agree but, students will be danger because, students have a lot of treble and they have mind they will learn many thing. they cachap imidetly but,every think same time and they talking just English if they want to learn another languages but,they do't have info time. So, if students long time at school they will be boring and they feel uncomfortable. i know some students want learn very excite. Now at schools has a subject in school a computer is there. computer has electrical energy. all students used computer and phone they did't know about computer,phones are dangers,but all students used because every thing election system. computers,phone helps a lot there have everything. ex: cell Facebook, map,dictionaries, calculated, document every think in there. So, all students use phone but ,they lose eyes, mind. i know a cell phone helps communication goes on but, it's dangers.

Finely,I don't think students learn is just school for good life because, at school for teacher give some idea how to learn .students know about what hempen out side because students all the time at school. If students have more time students learn friends,and mom,dad sister,brother there get some knowledge. businesses have adopted a four -day work week and students for day a week and students have four- day week it's different students students have dungarees and students have a lot homework students learn some thin but business have they know already know that.                                                                                                            ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
56579FB8A60B,"When you have a goal, No matter how long it takes, and you complete, it will be the greatest accomplishment.

To be yourself in this world that is changing over and over, you have to have a strong mind, a lot of people will not be agree with what you have to do in your life, But people over think everything people say, if you want to go more higher than where you are; you will have to make some decisions in your life to make those greatest accomplishment that you want to finish and get to the top.

I agree with this statement, because the time passes in your life is going with it, the more you do the more you get and that is what people don't get, if you want to make accomplishments in your life you have to worked out man, For example Lebron James how do you think he went where he is now, Making steps in his life, goals, family help, you have all of it it is right there you just have to get it.

""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else""... honestly I will not take it like is changing you, because you are the one changing your life, yes you will be seeing stuffs you will make some errors but that is how you are going to reach what you want in life. you are going easy you will get it easy and you will get it shipper too, if you work hard at the first time, at the end it will come easy and you will be thanks full.

A great accomplishment?, That can be anything, every one is a world, what I mean by that is that every mind have the power to do what it have to be done, either a teacher, family, friends, they are just telling you where is the door, your friends are not going to opened for you, not your parents or teachers, you are the one who will opened if you want to do it and get out, and get that goal or accomplishment that you have to complete.

I can be a example for this, I used to hate school a lot, i went tot his time that i didn't wanna even go there, but there was this English 10 teacher that just speaking with me one day just one day, yes I was having F at that moment, after all that thinking a lot about what she said I passed her class at the end with a B, not knowing that I was going to be able to do it, but I did it just doing what i have to do, like I said people can just tell you where is the door you have to go get it.

""to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"", yes it is; put your self together get all the help you need if they are good person they will help you, staying quit you will not get it, asking for help will not make you smaller it will make you stronger, and that is what we need be strong and get that goal or accomplishment done thanks.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
D68907DB12ED,"Do you think school's should extend the school hours? Well, I disagree. First, student would not concentrate in school if they got out an hour and a half late. Some student's may need time to do homework, go places that take a long time, or just make up time to study. If schools were to add more time the students would not get enough sleep because they stayed up late studying for a quiz, test, or just homework causing the students or the other classmates to sleep during classes

Second, it would affect the mental health of the students. Making them stress out over knowing that they would have to wake up early and be dismissed late.

Third, the education time of some student's may be cut short. This may happen when some student's are in a sport or they just need to leave school early. Student's who participate in a sport may have to leave class early to go practice for an up coming game making them miss half and hour or more of education.

What is your opinion?                      ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
C2343290CC89,"Conserving your energy it's an important matter. But you may be wondering why? well, by conserving your energy you will be well rested, healthier and more importantly active, so you can last on your long day of work or in my case school, so I can focus on my learning in order to graduate on time.

Recently, some business companies started to conserve their body energy by working less days, but having long shifts a day. 10 hours a day to be more specific. I personally think that, this is not exactly the right way to conserve your energy and keep your body healthier. On the other hand, I would agree that you would earn more money an have better opportunities in your career despite your personal life.

As far as I understand business companies like Management, Grocery stores, or car dealers have a 8 hour shift Including

Schools and government jobs etc...

If people would work 4 days a week and 10 hours a day It would totally not be good for their healthy and personal life.

First of all, If you work 10 hours a day and 4 days a week you would not have enough time to rest. As a result you would definitely be tired, exhausted and having a bad mood for not getting enough sleep. Second of all, when It comes to your personal life there would not be a family time, and no time to go out with friends therefore, I conclude that the concept of having a 10 hour shift a day would definitely not be that best way to live your life.

In terms of education, specifically talking about schools. Since I'm a student I would not be exited about attending to class for 10 hours a day. Basically because I have responsibilities outside. For example, I have to go to work, study for school and attend to my soccer training during the weekends. Also I would not be able to go work by the time school ends during weekdays and I'm sure there are students like me who have responsibilities to care of outside of school.

Now If I have to attend school for 10 hours a day and 4 days a week I can definitely say that my learning would get affected instead of improving. Nevertheless, I would not able to memorize everything I'm learning in class, because there would be a lot more topics to go over. As a human being my brain and body needs to rest, so I can keep all the information I have learned in class.

In conclusion, whether about going to school or work for 10 hours a day would not be beneficial for your professional and personal life for many reasons. For example, It could affect your health and your emotions which could lead you to be stressed out or having a bad mood not to mention that It could also affect your personal life by not having the necessary time to take care of your responsibilities outside of work.    ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
D06951B19A28,"Most people believe that working in a group is more beneficial than working alone. Other people think otherwise, they say that working alone is more beneficial than working in a group. People is different, they have different believes and ways to work.

Some people prefer working in a group for many reasons. One of that reasons is that people in a group get more things done in less time. They say that is better working with more people because when you work alone you get bored or you don't get motivated as the people that works in groups. Working in a group is better because people can share their ideas with the other people in the group and they can do a very good work using all those ideas. Also, the work can be divided in equal parts, and that's fair, in that way everybody have the same amount of work to do.

Some people think otherwise, they prefer working alone for many reasons. First, it is a little bit boring because they don't have nobody to talk and to share their ideas but they know what they are going to work with. They can do their work in their own way, they can take all the time they want to do the work. Second, they do not have to wait for people to tell them what to do or to ask if the work that they did is correct. Third, people can edit their work many times without asking other people what they think about it. Another reason is that people does not have other people rushing them. And sometimes people that work in groups have a lot of issues because they do not agree with other people work, and a lot of times the grade that they got for that work is the same for every group member. That means that if somebody made a mistake every group member will be affected because of that.

In conclusion, working alone is more beneficial because of a lot of reasons. Every person have their own way to work but if you work alone you are not allowed to get in issues, arguments, problems and bad grades.  ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
8C0C5CED34D5,"I agree that its hard to Impressions is impossible to change because my First experiences and the example is that when i was 16 and my first day of working with my uncle and i work on delivered marble,materials to the person who needed something to fixing the problem As a result on my first day and experiences it went well and OK because i was a little nervous that something is going to be wrong that i may say something wrong and i don't know what to do when the person say you got the one materials and tools. On my second day at work my boss told me to go help the other workers and i did and i grab the big marble table and put it on the truck and tied the rope and rap tightly so it won't fell down but when i was going to jump out of the truck and rope was ripping apart and the table got broke in half the consequently that means we clean the mess and throw it away and grab another marble to cut it in a right shape and size and delivered and fast as we can to make it one time and that is one of my scary experiences because i was scared that my boss will get mad at me and the other workers it a good thing that we work together to finished the job and the mistake we had to fix. And boss tell my dad that he did a good job and impression like his dad use to do my Father was very proud that did very well at work for the past 3 days because i work there for 5 hours and very fun and a good experience and they teach me out to use the tool the right way and how to use it properly and those people help me a lot and a pleasure to work there on the marble shop as a worker and made few new friends an that job.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
04B3A4DD9460,"I agree that talking to guidence is a good idea because guidence can help people on what is good or bad things to do in life. same people can even talk to guidence about thier problems and tell them what can be best can be a good solution for thier problems or for what they are passing throw in life too, However not that many people like to talk to guidence about thier problems people prefer to stay silence about their issues.

Eventhough some may say that people should not talk to guidence because guidence does not help in anything. guidance is the best resorce person to go to because they help you to stay focoues in problems you go throw in life.

Let say for example if you need help in school problems with family's or someone dies that was really close to you guidance could help you with depresion problems, familiy problems they are councelers but just few changes,

guidance can help you with paper work that you don't understand and fill in the paper work. Guidance is a good idea because guidence can help people on many stuff and find sulution of it one way to another. Guidance is the act of process of guiding, it also has counseling such as that provided for students about vocational and eduaction matters, Any of variovs processes of guiding a vericle by means of biltin equipment.

Guidance is someone who guides to the right way, or someone to look up too. gauidance is a good solution to problems and festration when a person does not have no one to talk to and they could have trust on guidance. where could people find guidance well guidance are in school or out of school too. Guidance help kids with school and fouces more on school and talk to parents, on how to maintan a kid focues in school and home.

Guidance helps kids to love and keep parents involved with them more and show them how to pertect thier kids.

finally, gudiance is a very good resource for who needs it people could find guidance in schools in courts, cummunity centers or so other who ever needs help guidance is a good resorse for them.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,1.5
E974548BFD00,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow"". Doing something that you have already mastered means that you won't grow. I agree with what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because it is always good to try new things. Would you want to try something new and master it or keep doing the same thing?

First, people can challenge themselves with new things so they can experience life with obstacles. Challenging themselves means that they will try to do something even when its hard. Challenging people with hard things means that they are not going to give up even when it gets hard. Why wouldn't you want to challenge yourself with new things?

It's good to try new thing because doing something that you have already mastered is good but what about trying to master something else. If you want to grow even more it would be better to step out of your comfort zone and experience new things.

Also, Having more experience with life means that you are growing up. Growing up means that you would have to try new things and not only stick to one subject. Wanting to try new things in life is good because your brain functions better and you get more knowledge. You will have more knowledge in your brain which means that you could master more and more things. Mastering something is good because you get to have more self esteem and you will feel good about yourself. Feeling good about your self is really important because you will need the motivation to master something in life. You can't master anything without having motivation because then it will be a mess and it wont turn out good.

Therefore, wanting to try new things is good because you can be open minded. You can also have many ideas that you could jot down. Wanting to try new things gives you a lot of ideas on what you want to master. In the process of thinking of an idea to master you get so excited that there is a lot of planning and ideas in your head on what to master in. It is always good to feel confident because without confidence and motivation you wont have the energy to do what you originally wanted to do in the first place. Trying new things is also good for your social life because you will come in contact with people that has so many creative ideas and you can talk to them and they would probably help you on what your ideas can be.

However, not challenging yourself with new thing,having more experience with life,and wanting to try new things may not be good you could end up being comfortable at where you are at. Being comfortable is good but not challenging yourself to do whats best is bad because your not giving yourself enough credit. If you don't work hard to master something that you truly want to master in then there is no point in trying to master it. If you dont try to master in anything you wont have any hope and you will become lazy and you will stop trying the hard work that you are trying to do. Trying new things is apart of life and if you don't do that than you would struggle a lot in life.

In conclusion, challenging yourself,having more experience with life,and wanting to try new things is better than being comfortable at where you are at in life, being lazy,stop trying,and don't want to try new things which means that you will start struggling in life. having new experiences is better than only having old experiences because with new experiences you have a fresh start and a clean plate. You get to have a better life because you're going to be having a lot of things that you would want to master. Giving up is never the right thing because than you wont get anything you want. You have to work in order to get what you want because life doesnt give you anything for free. Many people want to grow and do other things so that they can master at it. Wouldn't it be cool if you were the first person to master anything you wanted? ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
CA966FF7F1E6,"The results of talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices can be absolutely helpful. People will be able to develop new ideas with the help of more than one person. They will be able too learn things way more faster. How ever you have to ask the right person for help. Some people are not able to help others, because they don't the right mind set as others. Last reason why talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better is helpful because people need someone too talk too and get ideas from. If someone is sad or they need help with problems that happen in their life. They need too find someone that can help them and seek for multiple opinions.

For instance i think that if you develop new ideas from the help of more than one person can be helpful in so many ways. One way is if you talk to the right person you will actually be able too get a good job in the future. Second reason why talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices and it will develop new ideas is because people will be able to get new opinions and for information to help them with their career. How ever theres many reasons why you can be able to develop new ideas.

If you wanna talk to someone about seeking for multiple opinions and making better choices. You need to find the right person. There are people that can lie about so many things. People like this can ruin so many careers and dreams from people. They do not have the right mind sets of others. Thats why you should find the right people too seek new opinion from.

There are so many people that need help and need ideas, because they are going through tough times in their lives. This is why i think its better for everyone to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions. They are able too talk too you and they will be able too make you feel better. Those people are able too make your day. If you have found the right people too talk to than they will easily solve your problems. They will also give you great opinions too seek.

In conclusion people say that talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices is a bad thing. I disagree with their opinion. People need more than one person to seek new opinions. They also need others to make better choices. How ever the results of talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choice is a good thing. It makes other learn quicker, feel better and make people get better opinions from others.        ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
7835355C55D8,"Dear TEACHER_NAME,

I WRITE THIS LETTER TO SAID THAT IS NOT FAIR THAT Only the people that have good grades can play in one of the sport. All the people with A, or B can play because the C is the baldest grade on the school. Because people",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
8C5BF0347F87,"People around the world have thought about the way students should be teach or the way they should be treated but a few have notice that many students are struggling to build self-esteem. Students have difficulties and they affront them without their parents' help. Consequently many end up loosing their self in the worse way and they take paths that guides them into substances that had damage the rest of the society, like drugs or the alcohol. Furthermore, parents lets teachers decide what to do with their child because they think schools will teach them the right way to learn about how life works and that includes self-esteem. Although some people say praising student's deficient work helps build self-esteem because it bring hope for them, actually praising deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards because students will not improve their work and it is unfair for the hard working students.

According a survey found in Google, many students quite school at a young age because they disbelieve how good they are at schooling. Furthermore, the survey display a chart where a big number of those who quite schools are the greatest students and according to the writer they do not have enough knowledge about it. Praising them probably won't help them learn fast and smarter but it does not let them give up easily she wrote in a quote.

However, students that are praise for their deficient work never improve. For example Generic_Name, my friend's brother he quite schools since for years because he says that nothing he learns at school apply in personal life.

Even though his teachers did everything they could to help him improve his grades, additionally they praise his worst work and it did not even work. Moreover, The New York Times post an article about students failure and they conclude that students that have a job and study at the same time, they are more likely to finish high school. In the other hand students that gets money from their parents, most of the time they do not finish high school and if they the do, they do it with the lowest grades ever.

In addition, praising student's deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. According to the Generic_School, two of three students in a class graduate, but those who graduate are the ones that work hard and study for long hours to achieve their goals. Clearly, praising students deficient work shows that schools are becoming worst more than in the past years and students now are not competent to apply for a simple job. For that reason, many parents believe that deficient work lowers learning standards and that schools are getting worse and weaker every year.

In conclusion, self-esteem comes from the student's best effort, by working hard and not being unfair with the others. As we know Steve Job achieve his dreams by hard work and not by the praise of the society or even his parents. Because of his great achievements,

Apple is still one of the greatest companies ever created. Definitely, those kind of examples teach and stress the importance of building self-esteem by hard work. Every people have different thoughts about how a student should be teach but whatever they choose will influence their children's life forever.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
3D72844EC5B0,"Well, I'm desagree with this statement, because no always your first impressions of something it's impossible to change. Sometimes you will have a lot of impressions of people,things,or animals..However some percent of humans can not change their first impressions ,because they think that ,they are sure about their impressions , and there is when your mind has to change,so you can check first to make sure that yours impressions are rights,and I will support my response putting myself like a example; One day , I was at my house doing some work out ,and then I started to having some strainghts impressions, That

I had the impressions that my girlfriend was cheating ,with my best friend, so I get mad ,because that impression was to difficult to believe, also you have to be carefully, when you have a bad impressions of someone, you have to know how reaction will be. Also you have to make sure that yours impressions is right, so I called my girlfriend and we had a long conversation , but the thing is that I did not know , how tell or ask her my impression that I had with her and my best friend, however I was trying to change my impression, but my mind and my brain was confucing, because that impression can put me in problems with my girlfriend or somebody else, so the thing is that I did change my impression ,knowing that not all your impressions thyat you think are rights, some impressions that you get sometimes, it's because you are not sure about something, or you no truths in that person who make you have a bad impression. My point of this statement is that the first impression it's possible to change, in the way that you, always will have a good impressionas or bad impressions, so on my example is that sometimes you have to keep your impressions and just let the things happens or like passing the time you will know if your impression was right or not. Now, when I have impressions I keep for myself, that is one of the ways to change your first impressions, because that help me on my first impressions.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
D0211302AE30,"The limitation of human contact due to technology has a positive effects on people lives. It is a faster and easier way of getting information on topics that humans want to learn about and takes you to wed sits that can help people what they are looking for and get to read about it to more. I think technology helps people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Although people can check out books,shop,and play games with out speaking to another person nevertheless, Technology has a positive effect on people lives, to be able to complete many tasks with out having contact with others, and it is faster and easier to get information more quickly.

Technology has a positive effect on people lives and to be able to complete many tasks with out having contacts with others. Technology has many benefits for humans it can be a good way to to complete tasks you have to do. Technology helps you improve your skills and many other things. Studies have showed that we need technology for studying purposes and research projects and school activates that our teacher sign us to do. Some teachers like using the internet for lessons to make it more exciting to learn about what we are leaning about in class and be able to read the notes on a near pod and do it at our time and really get to learn about it more.

Personally for me, I like using technology for projects it helps me get more information more quickly. It is faster and easier to look up things about my topic. The internet is a good source to use because it has a lot of information and different things. For example I did a project for history and I used the internet to do it. My topic was about Anna Frank and her dad and what she went though as a little girl at a young age and how she died and why it was remembered and why we still talk about It. This project was all online and we had to use special website to use for the project. All my articles were online and i've learn more about the holocaust it was and about what happened to Anna Frank. I read a lot of articles and books of her.

people can check out books,shop,and play games with out speaking to another person. Books are very good sources to get information from. If people go to the library they have sections like fiction or non-fiction and many more and helps people explore and find books they are looking for. They can look around and pursues books and take it home and read it. They can play games with out talking to each other. If we didnt use technology and only used books it would take longer to get information if we only used books. kids wouldnt be excited if we only used books for our projects.

In conclusion, The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a positive effects on people lives and technology allows people to complete many tasks with out having contact with others. Technology has many benefits for humans it can be a good way to to complete tasks you have to do for school and work. Technology helps you improves getting to learn the topic more.",2.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
402843726F3B,"One day Thomas Jefferson said ""It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.

Although Thomas Jefferson said ""that it is wonderful how much may be done if we are alwayas doing"". Some people think that it is imposible that we are always doing something because we need time to our family and we need a break too. Actually many people think that if we are always doing simething we can accomplish a lot things. we can gain more experience. However other people say that sometimes we have to stay inactive to do not get stress or to do not get crazy. If we are always doing something we can work on new staffs and learn more. stay inactive can help to your body to relax for a while.

In conclusion However some people say that stay inactive is good because you have time for you and your family. Actually always doing something is better because because you can try new things and gain experience.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
FE8A54A36006,"Do you think that students should be able to take classes in school that benefits them in the fucher?

In this paper i will argue that if students should take class that that will guide them towards a specific career. should student consider their career pass at a young age,yes because when the student gets older and becomes a adult he or she wont have to have a boring and low paying job.

Im am in the eleventh grade and I already know that i want to be when in older, I want to be a U.S.M solder.

The class that am taking right now in high school that will help me become what I want to be when am older is JROTC.

You may ask that is JROTC?

JROTC is a class that teaches student about the United State Armed Forces.

Another class that am taking in my school that will help me with my fucher career is Econ and Finals.

Econ and Finals is a class that is a high school requirement to graduate, but i like that class because i know that its going to help me with my fucher career.

What if we dont start preparing are self for are fucher careers after high school we'll be loss, confused,and broke too. In my family i dont think anyone do what they wanted to do i high school . I remember my mom telling me that she wanted to become a Aries but she never became a Aries because in her old school they did't have art and she dropped out to have family.

Working is something everyone have to do.

So agree that its a good idea to start finding something you will like to do when your older in high school,

When i grow up i want to be a United Stated Marin solger and i konw that the classes im taking will help me become that one day.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
09ADB0629CD0,"Benefits of attending public schools

Imagine a child or student taking classes at home. How would his or her parents feel?

Would home school be helpful for their child? Is homeschooling important for thier child than public schools? Students would benefit to attend classes in school rather than attending class at home because students can become active, getting enough information, and having the ability to share ideas.

Attending public schools can persuade students to become active. Teachers can also persuade students to become active as well. Teachers wants students to have fun. For an example, physical education, or for short PE. It is a program in school for children to have exercise and training. Teachers would allow students to play inside or outside. Even if students do not want to participate.

Not only schools let students become active in class, but also offers information to students who need help. Getting information can help students to become better at understanding things that students learned in school. It is important to know why students want to learn. For an example, students staying after school for help. Staying after school can help students study for a test. If a student needs help or needs more information, do not be afraid to ask for help. A teacher will be there to help you. Teachers can give their best to answer student's questions.

Not only schools can persuade students to become active and offers information to students, but also shares ideas. Sharing ideas can help students as well. Students can share their ideas other students. For an example, completing assignments in a group. Students love being with partners or group to solve problems. Students would listen to others student's opinion or debate and see if they agree or disagree. It is always helpful to be with a group and not be alone by yourself.

In public schools, students can become active, can get information that they need, and let students share their ideas. That is why it is important for children to go to school. Home schools are different than public schools. Home schools can be very challenging for some students. A student working alone with no partner, not being active, and not getting enough information from parents. Imagine a student being in that position. How would she or he feel? Public schools would be the best option for children. Imagine if every student went to school, their would be a positive change in their future. School can build student's knowledge everyday and to do it is by learning. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
52AD70C9FE05,"What is a small acts of kindness that can have an impact on others? What do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life? When you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need? You need that small act of kindness like the ancient Greek storyteller Aesop said, ""No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. Who has that small act of kindness that can have on impact on others, what do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life and when you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need.

What is a small acts of kindness that can have an impact on others? The small act of kindness is a very important because people can't get a smile on their face ever day. That smile on you face of that kindness is good for your health. That small act of kindness can make some one day. You dont now what they are going throw that why it is wasted in people life. They are people when they get that small act of kindness give to others.

What do people feel when they have some of that kindness in their life? When the person get that kindness they feel like they are being loved. You can feel the kindness that person has for you. They can make feel happy inside and out side. That can be one of the grates feel in the world that you have to have. You don't have to give an object to some to make them happy. You can just be kind to them you can make their day.

When you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need? The act of kindness should give to others to show them that you love them. That they gave that kindness that you don't all ways get. Just being their for some can show that you are giving that kindness back. You can help some clean there house that is giving kind back to others. You can just give a person a smile that give a sing that you are give kindness.

Who has that small act of kindness in your family, what does your family feel when they have some of that kindness in their life and when you get a act of kindness do you give some of that lite kindness that orders need.

Do you have that small acts kindness in life? What something that make you feel like they are being kind to you? What is something you do to be kind to other people? What do you consider to be kindness?                            ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
A1B06DEEA15C,"I agree with the Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill, that failure plays an important role for some people in life, If they fail once they could get it right the second time and succeed. People will learn from their mistakes and it will take time for people to be successful in their life and accepted that they failed for the first time.

Its very important for people to know that if they fail they can try again and can go back and check to see what was wrong or think to them self what they did wrong, They can learn from their mistakes and not give up when they fail the first time.

People that have failed in life know that its not a bad thing when they fail. Its actually a good thing to fail in life and people that know what its like to fail would get inspired to work extra hard and take more time to look over everything. They would also stay on the positive side and have family, friends, and other people supporting them and cheering for them no matter what happens if they fail or don't fail.

The British prime minister probably has fail in the past years when he was younger and was successful after he learned from his mistakes. Nobody is perfect in life thats why we fail in life to see what we did wrong and make sure that it doesn't happened in the future.

Here is one example, If someone wants to open a coffee shop the person would need to get a loan from the bank so they can purchase a building and to start their own coffee shop business and come up with the name's for the coffee shop, drinks, pastries, and food that will be on the menu. People that have wanted to start their own coffee shop business or other kinds of business, doesn't always work out for them for some reasons and are not very successful when doing the planing their ideas and would want to hire someone to help them come up with more ideas. The person might not be happy when he or she were unsuccessful for the first time to try and open their own business and take a few more months to come up with more ideas to be more successful for the second time.

Overall, I think that failing is good thing and not a bad thing its just people dont have to give up after they fail the first time they need to give another second chances until they get it right. People should get inspire to keep working hard when they fail and not quit, because not everyone in the world is perfect in life. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
2E6495FC2C72,"Ralph Waldo Emerson

""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because each person is a world and we have to do our things separate and does how we learnd about life doing our on things life is not easy as how we thing when we are with our parent's but you have to be older not young so we can decide to do our own things.

We have to work for what we want nothing in this life is easy, All the people need to take a decision in life but firts we need to go to school and then graduated and look for a job and like that we are going to know more about life and make decision and kowing more about life but we always need the endorsement of our parent's.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0
0E5C8FE6867B,"Based on what I read in the sentence. What he said is something very important because there are a lot of people that spend their life. Doing just one thing, they never try something new they mind be thought the in the future wouldbe use less or they just don't feel like they actully need it but if you get more experiences you will grow as a person and besed on experiences too.

For example. When you start growing u learn a lot of things that make you a better person. You know that there is a person that want to learn new things, even if he's young but you know things like that adults know that make you be a older person. In the way that you know things that persons that have you same age not , but you know that you have some other responsabilities, because based on what you know you life have to about on that things that you know or you make or that things that you learn.

For example, you go to school that is a place where you learn and where you been intul you graduate because if you know more you have more oportunities to be succecful, and i'm agree on his coment why? let told you the reason. A lot of people never try new things like if you are a teacher and after like 5 years you don't feel like to teach more. you can try to be something else that help you to grow more based on experiences because if you try more things like other jobs or try to study something else like gona be rich on experience because many people sometimes get stuck on one thing but everything in this world have a solution but to get your goals is not a easy thing you have to sacrifed many things that you love.

For example your hoobies or your family or other events, but at the end of the day you have everything you ever wish becuse you deservet and you work so hard to get it. And you start see the succes that you have. You would see that all you did to get there was correct and that make you grow because you have more experience. Nothing is inpossible. For example if you are the owner of a little restaurant and you want to your restaurant grow more, and more but you remenber that you study bussines and also you work for a restaurant and on that restaurant you were a manager, so you have the experience and if you know how spend money and you make a good marketing plan you can be succesfull and you will growing as a person and as experiences.

In addition I think he's right becuase how I been saying if you know more you have experience and you can a have better jobs and that way you growing you have oportunities more chances to be a better on your life and unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Based on your experiences.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
E3097287CBD1,"Some school offer distances learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think student would not be benefit if they had distances learning. Many student would not focused during the lesson they would just do whatever they want so they won't learn as much as if they had a teacher. If student had online classes they would not get the attention necessary if they need help.

Some student often have a bad day so they often don't pay attention and they just don't do the work that is assigned to them. they often just search the answer without learning but they think that's okay because no one is watching them. Many of them don't learn the subject but still somehow they passed the class. Other Important, reason why student won't benefit from online classes is that the may have some big problem in their life and they need someone to talk to but their one home so they feel sad, but if they were in school they can talk to a teacher,coach,counselor, or any other they feel happy to talk too. Other student may be sad they don't have someone to talk too.

Online classes don't benefit students because they don't have the help they need. When student take online they can paid someone to do their work, and pretend that they did the work. One reason they can ask their brother to the work for them so they are not really learning anything. Other example, student may request some extra help but they won't get it because they don't a teacher with them. so they just don't understand but when it comes to do the text they failed. Other example might be that they are having family problem so they won't do the online classes. And they would not be focus. Having online classes won't help student in their life. one example is that they won't have friends and when they go to the real world they are going to have trouble talking to people because they don't know how too. Other important reason why school should not have online classes is that many student need to talk to a counselor for that they want to be when they grow up. and most. Most counselor guide their student the right way they teach the career we want to have in our life. but they take online classes they don't have the opportunity to chat with them.

When students get video conferencing they don't really understand because something the video don't really explain what the student want to learn. one reason is the student might feel lazy to replay the video so he does not understand. and if he was at school teacher would help them with all their work . School should not have video conferencing.

Student are going to feel bad when they get older that they took online classes.. one reason they going to feel bad is that they did not enjoy high school life. let's Image if a student was really good at soccer or any other sport and if they had played high school they could of get a scholarship, and maybe become one of greatest,

but they did'it because they were talking online classes. school should not have online classes because it take the right of student in playing high school sport.

Overall, student would not benefit from online classes. they won't learn that much at home, and student need the attention to do work, they also need people to help them with their work. In my personal option school should not have online classes or video conferencing. Student are going to have a better knowledge if they go to school and, they work with teacher. School should let student enjoy take their high school life and not have online classes.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
E08185D94A44,"I should be selected to visit the ''AD Assets Inc''. The AD Assets Inc, is the most important company of Assets in United States for the last 35 years. Company that going to select one person to visit and show how they works. Since I was six years old I was secured that the Assets was going to be my job. Learn about business and assets without a persons that really know what they are doing is almost impossible.

This opportunity is one of the most important things in my life. I need to go to the field trip, since I was six years old I was secured that be in the business world it was my purpose. Try to do business with other people and my friends was my goal. Then I realize that it is mandatory to learn about the assets and management to be a business man. That's why this opportunity is so important for me. My whole life dreaming and wishing about be in a company and now my dreams comes true.

I've have been learning a lot by myself about the business and assets my whole life. For example I'm in a group called ''FBLA'' (Future Business Leaders of America), this group is so important for me. Because I've learn so many things about the assets there, and acquired a lot of knowledge, so important to my future career as a business man. This new opportunity in ''AD Assets Inc'' let me acquire more information about my future career, prove myself, and increase my knowledge. Improve my knowledge is one of the reason of why I want to go to the company. Because every day I learn something new and I am very exited to learn new thing in the AD Assents Inc company.

Some people argue that this partnerships with companies are useless because the teens do not know what they want; however, this view is mistaken because the best way to teens to know what they want to study is let then explore and see, that's the best way to decide. I've been sure that I should be the one who needs to go to ''AD Assets Inc'' since they make the announcement. Some people want to go to see and discover if they like it, that's why I should be the selected. Because I am completely sure that I want to be in AD Assets Inc after I graduated and completed my high school.

I am the most completely student to go and learn about the assets business. Nobody want to go to this field trip as much as me. Around the years I've dreaming about be part of a company and this opportunity is the first step to it. I should be the selected for this incredible opportunity. If you want to know about me and my knowledge about business you can find me in ''FBLA.com''. There you can find all my scores in competitions and exams about business that I has been doing my whole high school years.              ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
CBCA3CFF320B,"Boom!One day PROPER_NAME mom decided that she wanted him to join the distance learning classes.Where they could have online or video conferences with there school teachers.PROPER_NAME would sit around all day on his phone playing videos games instead of doing his online or video conferences.PROPER_NAME is like many others who thinks school is not all that important.I believe that schools should not offer distance learning to students.Therefore,students would not benefit from attending classes at home because students would have more free-time, students would be discourage that school is not important,Also they would skip classes to meet up with friends.

First,students would have free-time.For example,PROPER_NAME was home alone because her mom and dad works at a fast-food restaurant called LOCATION_NAME.PROPER_NAME knows she would have online conferences in the morning the next day at 8:30.Next morning came PROPER_NAME decided that she was not doing any conferences because she wanted to go shopping at the mall

for a up coming beach day that her aunt PROPER_NAME was having.PROPER_NAME then spend all day at the mall walking around looking in stores and talking to friends.Another example,There was a Vybz Kartel performance in LOCATION_NAME where they would give away free food and drinks at the gate. PROPER_NAME mom make sure to call home and remind her that she would have video conference in the afternoon with the teacher she loves the most PROPER_NAME but there was no answer so her mom decided to leave a voice mail ad hope when she sees the message she will know what to do. PROPER_NAME then left home after listing to her moms voice mail saying that she needs some alone time so she have to attend this party because all her friends were going and she wanted not to feel left out.Additional, PROPER_NAME boyfriend PROPER_NAME texted her saying he want to spend the day with her because he was leaving on October the 26,to go and stay for sum time in LOCATION_NAME with his dad. PROPER_NAME then got up pack a bag with clothe then left without anyone know she was out of the house without studying for her online conference presentation.c

Secondly,students would skip classes to meet up with friends.For example, PROPER_NAME skip distance learning classes to go enjoy the day with her best friend PROPER_NAME because it was his birthday and he invites her out for ice-cream and horse back riding. In addition, as for PROPER_NAME hanging out with his friends skiing in glove on snowboard or ice hockey is way cooler then staying home listening to his online conference teacher talk. Another example, PROPER_NAME dad PROPER_NAME just brought this new speedboat.one day when her dad was not at home she decided it is better not to do her online or video conference she was just going to invite sum of her friends over and they could take the boat for a spin at a hotel called HOTEL_NAME.They spent all day boating around instead of her doing her online classes.Another example, PROPER_NAME woke up one Monday morning saying she doesn't feel like she has a need to be taking distance learning classes so she pack her bag and call her friend PROPER_NAME to go with her to the countyside to look on lakes,mountain,and also valley.

Lastly,students would get discourage that school is not that important.For example, PROPER_NAME was taking AP biology class because she wanted to be a doctor, but because her mom start letting her taking online conferences for biology and start staying home she get discourage that school is not that important because if it was why would they would her to stay her.Next example, PROPER_NAME wanted to be a color guard coach but her aunt was telling her she does not have enough money to pay for her to attend the color guard practices her aunt heard about this distance learning program where she could stay home and learning about the skills for color guard for free. PROPER_NAME decided that if that could help she would take the class after two days PROPER_NAME said to her mom that the distance learning is not working out the way she wanted it to be also that is lower her expectation about school.Some people believe that if school offer distance learning to students it would allow them to have freedom.They are incorrect because most students are responsible.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
0AAD73A0AA91,"I think working in a group is more efficiently and helpful then working alone. In these paper i will argue about the benefice of working in a group. Working in group is better because we can share ideas, prepare us for the real world, and save time.

If we work in groups, we can share information, ideas and thoughts. We can see what its better for our teamwork and the assignment that we were doing in school or jobs. I think the most of the jobs in the real world are in groups, however, when i work in the mechanic shop with my dad and brothers, an i'm replacing a engine, i need their help because it takes strange, agility and experience to replaced it, because it's really hard for only one person to do it, so it's important to learn how to work in group, these skills prepare and help us for the real world by working like a team or family group. The army, police officer and government are some good examples of groups, they work together to finish their work and see the benefices of working in group. Doing work as a team is not a waste of time, we share the responsibilities,so it would not be the much work for only one person. Two or more people is a good combination of beneficial and fast work.

some say that working alone is better then working in group, but they wrong because when we work in groups is more easy by sharing thought with friend and partners, we get to now each other and makes new friends, that is the way how people get better in life by working in groups. Working in groups make people to put more effort and attention in what they are doing because we want to get better opportunities in life, good greats and chances of getting a great job.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
0B720B5EA0E9,"There students that would be able to benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because there schools that can let you take online classes. You are able to work on your own pace,you are also able to balance school,work and spending time with friends and families,and your able to take video conferencing at home.

There are many different schools that can let you take online classes. There students going through family issues at home that they aren't able to attend school regularly. It can help them to learn in class so they don't fall behind or fail the grade. They just want to learn like us and have a great future. It can also help if you are attending collage but not want to stay on campus.

When having the benefit to take online class at home is working at your own pace. You are working at your own pace to get in done fast or you just like to take your time. Many students prefer taking their time becasue it will help them understand it more then rushing the working knowing that it could be wrong. It can also help them be more then the other colleagues at school. When having this opportunity your able to get work done without any distractions.

When balacing school,working and spending time with family and friends can be very diffcult at times if you are attending school regularly but when taking online classes it can help you understand the class more and you can focus more then getting distracted at school because of friends. This will help you get the work done in matter of seconds.

When having the intrenet your able to do may things but having the opportunity to a video conference from home while still attending school is the best. This will help you with one on one tutoring sessions to ask questions to your teacher or professor when having trouble with anything in a subject. You are also able to learn new things while doing video conference.

Students should take this opportunity to attend school from home because instead of going to school for seven to eight hours, you can learn everything at home without anyone rushing you or having a deadline when its due. Its better to take your time and take the opportunity. I would recommed this to anyone who would rather get to learn at home on their own.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D610B092DAD9,"If you where a high schooler would you know what you would want you'er career to be ? Some say that students are expected to know to the career that they want to have so that they take specific class for that career. So that it could help them acive or get closer to the career that they want.

All though some say that high schools students should not be expected to know what specifice career they want. Frist peopel tented to chang over time so somthing that you might have liked three years ago you might not like that much anymore. Second you cant really telll if you like somthing intell you try it. Lets say that Generic_Name has wanted to be a teacher her whole life but then she gets the job and finds out that she is not that happy with her job and that she should have tryed other class in high school. Finaly most student dont really think about thier careers intill the last two years of high school.

actuily all students should know what they want thier career to be by the time they are in high school. Frist if student where to know what they want there career to be they could take specific class for that career. By students not having to take other class that they dont need it would help them focuse more because they whouldnt have to worry about having to take or study for a test in a class that they dont need. Finally if a student was to be taking class that he/she wants they would show up to class more because they would be intersteded.

Thats why I belive that students should know what career they want when they get into high school. Because it would help them out and even make thier life esay. Even if that idea was to chang but it all ways good to have a goal so that you can acive it.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
918C1880FCD8,"When did you decide to research your future job?

Students should start thinking of a certain career they would want to encounter by the time they reach high school. by the time students reach high school they must have a job they're interested in. If students start viewing the concepts they need, they can become what they want to be. Also by starting early with a goal, researching, and acknowledging goals they can find a job that they would like. Also will have a distinct idea on how to succeed.

First step, In most societies students start researching different jobs at a young age, so they know what they want to become in the future. Research helps students find what they need as a teenager, for example: getting a Standard or Advanced diploma, going to College, and getting a degree. when students start encountering what they need to accomplish they will tend to work hard and start receiving the information they desire. Also research gives a better understanding for the student to know what to find. Although some may say ""Information online may be false"" but there are multiple sites you can examine to observe the true facts.

Second reason, Goals help students with finding a career to start. Goals help by giving an idea to a student of what the second step is, to find the best career for them. Goals can be both limited and unlimited. Although some may say ""Students should start thinking after they graduate high school because there's many jobs in life students might pick the wrong job"", but starting young helps the teens mind to find different careers. Also students can decide what they would want to commit to.

Third reason, Acknowledging your goal will take a very important role of students life's. If students complete their goals, and research they can acknowledge their goal. Examine the work they have finished and look through to check if they are missing anything. After students have finished their steps students may continue on finding a job that they want from the data they collected. Finally acknowledging goals will help in examining job duties.

In conclusion students should start finding a job early. Starting young will help each individual student with, finding a job, how to determine if the job is right for you, and following along with accomplishing every goal. Students will have a less stressful time finding the right job. These 3 steps will help students find the right job: Goal, Researching, and Acknowledging their goals. Also it's a good idea for young students to have at least a couple ideas of what they want to do as a career after high school. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
10D3A9E5E79E,"Whlie some people say that doing something that you mastered help you achive your goals, others say that you should try something more challenging to achive more than your goals.

Achiving more than yhour goals can get you farther in life, it can make your job or what you like to do exciting, and your education expands.

If you think you cannot do it, you are not beliving in yourself.

In order to achive your goals and be happy, you have to belive in yourself first.

Put yourself to do more than what you expected.

Being successful meaning get further in life, have to do with the majority of the world, what's around you, and what you put yourself to do.

In my opinion,

getting further in life is great, not so many people have the privilages to do what you can.

A student once challenged herself by taking chemistry.

At first she did not believe that she can do it but hen she ended up passing the class.

Do not expect less from what you deserve.

Some people do not like their job, so they do a really crappy job.

Making your job exciting is great but, how can you make it fun?

First find something that you like.

Then make a challage every week to be successful, keep in mind that is for the better. Think about it like a game.

Everyone likes games meaning that they would like a challege.

Education has been a big part of ours lives and will always be.

A person can learn from just watching a person characteristics.

There is planty ways a person can learn.

Be ready for any occasion that happens, mentally ready, emotional ready, and even physically ready.

Life is full of surprises and will teach us good and bad things through out the times.

Just be your best and learn from every little thing that happen and will happen.

In conclusion Emerson is right, ""do something beyond what you already mastered.""

Meaning that you should challage yourself and achive more than your actual goals.

Believe in yourself and be better each day.

In this world everything is like a game but, is to make you better.     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
A4DA4201903F,"yes i agree with Ralph waldo Emerson wrote,

because he tray to do something i think he have experience to be a better person and organised and he have opporytunities to help the people or communities for change the opportunities more people like that ,we need try to know the person who have better opportunities change you mind or be a better person when you need to do change you characters if you are angry something like that .

another thinks is you need to be responsabilities when you take a possition becuase you need to careful you job because if you no care you job you lose and your self is donw no continue more with you goals and is late for thinks that you have before taht you lose your job and all your goals is donw no body wan't to back you goals for be same person or have a better or same oportunities because you need to care you job. and doing same thing you are..",2.0,1.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
F2DE30047DF9,"They shouldn't extend the school day two hours , because every student have a schedule they run everyday like going to work , playing a sport , or any a school club they are in. The student would like a four day school week but they don't want a extra two hour in school this is a disadvantages if they was considering doing a four day school and only get a few hours to them self and going to school really early. The good benefits of it is that the student gets to have a three day weekend for the whole school year and more time to finish there homework or the work they missing to catch up with there grade for that class. The other disadvantages is if those other two was added the student is not going to pay attention and lose there focus on the lesson also there work or fall asleep in class. If i went to a school that had extra two hours I probable not pay any attention to my teacher or lose my focus and go to sleep till school finish. A other good benefit is that they can shorty the school year and make the holidays week longer or spring break longer. Those are same of good and bad reason toward this topic about having a four day school week i think it could be a some what a great idea so they can have a extra day to relax. Overall this is my opinion and thoughts for having a four day school week.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
9D6E844DBDF2,"Some people they take art class because they like it and the other student they do in class for arts or they try to do art class.

Example:

The art class is make them good life and better because the other people they try to do art class but they try to do it.

Example: Like I can say that for my sister, my sister she like art because she wanted to do art in her life, when she didn't know anything she was do art home and she was try her best to know art she wanted to know how they do art but now she do art because she try her best and the teacher tech her some thing she didn't know how she can do but now she she make art.

The student do that because art is make money better the art class is very good to them some student they take that class because they know that is make better to them, Some of them they do art home and they do in school and they ask the teacher to help them how they can make art because some people they want to make sure if they know better.

Some people they make art of the use of the Imagination the effort to produce beautiful objects, as by arranging forms, sounds, or words, some student they do group to make sure if they can help each other in class for art because if they don't help each other they can know anything They need to help each other and they can know each other some student they do that because art is make money batter.

Example: The other student they go to school and they take art class because they want to make money but is not to easy to know art all time or to make one day the other student they try to do that in their home.

The other people they believe that the art class is better to use,The art is make money to the other people that why the student need to take art class and art class is make better to them.

If they get in college they can do art by self because they can know anything if they didn't do in school that why they need to remember that thing they was do in school some student they do that when they get in college because they want to make more money and they want to do little business.

Some student they feel like they can draw something to make money and the people they can feel that the art is good to use, the student they cant draw some picture in class or in there house they can make to someone and they can to pay them the money if they pay them the money they can get more power to make art in her life some people they try that too.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
B2123357B114,"People have said ""positive attitude is the key to success in life"". I competely agree with the statement because the person would have a positive mindset even going through hard time in their life. They won't be giving up on their self. I belive without being positve a person would be depressed or being negative about their self.

I belive if you want to be successful in life you gotta belive in yourself. You gotta bring yourself up when feeling down. A negative attitude won't get you no where. I understand that sometime life problem can be difficult, but you gotta keep being positive. Don't let yourself get to a negstive stage beacuse you won't be anvoidable to accomplish your dream.

In life being a negavtive person isn't a good solution if you to be success in life. A person with a negative mindset would have bed thought in their mind. For example"" you can't do this"" or "" just give up on life"" . you won't have enough confidence to accomlished your goal. If you are a negative person then you should get some help or go talk to someone help. So, you can become a better positive person.

A positive attitude help you to be something in the future. It's give you happiness and make life easier. You won't be upset thinking "" did i do this right "" or "" am i good enough "". Also, with a psitive mindset you will want to keep trying unitl you make it. when you a positive person ; people would want to be around you. You will have the best confidence you need to rech your goal.

Life isn't a wonderful place sometime but if you want to be successful in life have self-confidence,

be a positive person,and at least try to bring yourself up when you have negative mindset. Also, without giving yourself hope you will get no where in your life.                   ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
13C400DD9794,The year book is for to not forget anything and it helps you lot will somtimes people don't like it but for me it helps me lot but we don't the have it any of thoes no more it lets you to not to foget to do your homework and what do have torrmorw and the next week But we have those any more because we are now 8th grades but the kids what year book to show thier family what spots they did even to show kids went to school even to show how there friends looks like and one day there family can met them even I agree to do it like what to show there family what did and there school looks like even for they can rember but also if there friends moves away and we will still rember even to love them so much but still I agree for to do the years book and I'am ok with it and what the year books still and I still love them and miss them lot I want them back and it actlly look good But like we only get them an a year it takes for ever to get and I think to pay to get your own one but I like and the fotes to.       ,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
54D835ADB326,"Everyday everbody try to do the best to live that day happy and try to make somebody also happy, for example when i was in Italy every year for the day of god everbody going to downtown and have some fun together like they drink,talk,eat and eat again, you can have some much fun there with no money the with money. This is important because you don't need money to be happy in your life just live your life with people the make you feel good and don't try to make you feel sad or bad.

In your life Don't follow nobody and don't trust no one just your self. For example do somethiing the you like and you need think about the you are better the everyone because some people in this life are jealousy and something they can break you dream and you can not follow your dream because he say someting the make you sad or he do someting to you the you feel the with the thing the he did you can stop follow your dream. This is important because Don't live somebody also your life and don't make someone also control and tell you what you need to do with your life.

Everyday I

think about world can be if everyone are able or think to help the next youth. For example one day I was in Italy I was going to the super market with my dad and i think was my friend too with I don't know wherever, we going t obuy all the food the we need and when going to the register to pay what we buy I saw a guy try to buy a sandwich but he tell the register the only money the he have was $0.50 cent the sandwich was i think $2 then when i saw him turn the sandwich back to the register I take the sandwich and I buy for him, he was so happy and he tell me,"" My friend you make my day better"" i was so happy that day. This is important because you don't need spend a lot of money to make someone happy.

In conclusion I think we are complish more when we always do something for somebody and I want say to everone the to live your life and never give up, because the time the you give up iss when you not trust your self anymore and that's is not a good thing.                       ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
3EA2BA9DAB33,"Well i thik that is a good idea for all the students to be guide and know more about a career after high school younger age.

some reasons why they should know more aobut a career at younger age are:

They will be ready after they graduate and know'ing what are they gonna do.

It will be more easy after you graduate you don't have to worry about what career are you gonna study,

and it ognna make you more responsible.

Some students don't like this idea to be guide at a younger age they don't want to worry that much,

some student just want to finish high school firts and they have 4 years to decide what are they gonnna do after high school and what career are they gonna pick.

In conclusion staring knowing aobut college in a yourger age is no a bad idea, it will help you a lot and you will be more confindece, but they are other students who prefer to know more about college and what career they should pick after they graduate.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
2ACDFF7FCAAA,"Dear,

Principal l think that we should be allowed to bring our phone to school just in cause of emergence. And during class time we should turn them off, when we come out of school we should be able to use them. We never no if threes an emergence some day and we don't have phones and how are we to call our parents .If we didn't have phones how are we saps to contact our parents . that why we should bring phones to school not because we want to text because our safety. That's why some parents get phones for there kid because they know that some day we are going to use it for a very important reason .For we could contact them when some thing is going wrong. For they could be a to know were we are just in cause .and that's why l think we have phones. And that's my reason why we bring phones to school.      ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
E5621447B675,"Did you know that everyone choose their onw character traits? I choose my charecter trait in my house,I cgoose my character trait in my job, and I choose my character trait in the school.

In my house I can choose my character trait with my action. my brothe character trait is to lied everydoby at home.

In my job I can choose how to use my character trait from my customer and my friend at my job. for example If I use the same character trait from my friend to my customers my customer can feel bad. my character trait at the school can be a happy or serious caracter trait. for example when I am in clases I am serious but when I am with my friend in lunch my character trait is happy.

In conclution my character trait is how I desided to make it.    ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
9A93D940C694,"Is it true that some students at some point in their life want vacation time? Yes, because not everyone is a retard that wants to be studying and going to school all the time. Almost every student wants rest from homework. I think having a summer break for students is a good idea because it gives students some time to relax their brain and body. It gives them time to spend some time with their family and enjoy thier every minute of life.

First of all, I think it's a good idea to have summer break because it gives students some time to relax their brain and body. It gives students some free time to do what they want to do like trying new things out, playing new sports and finding what their real talents are, instead of doing school work and other activites all the time. Doing meditation is really good for your brain and mind, and it's only done when you have time for it and nothing to distract you.

Secondly, I think it's a good idea to have summer break for students because it gives them time to spend some time with their family. Some of us are really bad at giving our parents time in life because it's just too much to do everyday. Half of student's day they spend in school and get no extra time for their parents. Spending time with parents is not wasting time when your really enoying it and it's a good time spend.

On the other hand, some people might argue that it's not a good idea for students to have summer break because they will waste their time by being home all day or texting their friends. It will kill their education time and won't give them enought time to get to where they want to be in future.

In conclution, I think it's a good idea for students to have summer break because it gives them the opportunity to go new places they never been to and try out new dishes they never tasted. I think life is too short to be doing homework and studying for tests, and planning for your future. Life is about having some fun time and enjoying every little moment with your family and friends instead of focused on one thing all day and everyday which is school.    ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
A2EA2D3D0542,"Have you ever worked individually on an assignment and was stuck and had no motive to keep pushing? well if yes I'm here to tell you why working with a group is more beneficial then working alone. I believe working with a group is far more easier than working alone,communication is key. Therefore if you have communication you don't have to do as much work; just have to gather your thoughts and put them together and let it make sense. Group work has to be one of the most easiest things as an highschooler group work assignments are the best,hearing what others have to say can really open up the brain. Sometimes group work may be challenging but it also helps you in the real world which us people need which takes me to my next topic; respecting everyone ideas and having a goal.

Group work isn't always about who has the most ideas or who can put it together and what not,It's more of letting people get their thoughts out. Having one or two individuals speaking over everyone can affect the whole group chemistry,making sure everyone is conformable before you start is very helpful of the process. Working with a group you have to come up with a goal;However every goal has a destination. Therefore if everyone in the group has a designated job too do no matter what they're working towards the same goal. In my opinion goals are good when doing anything when there is a goal to accomplish it just pushes the work ethic to obtain that goal. History shows you that having a destination pushes the brain to do better and has a big effect on the outcome.

Personally,as I work in groups I collect other peoples ideas and analyze their way of thinking and use it to my advantage. This helps expands the thought process as many can see a different perspective on things. It's actually amazing how someone thoughts can open multiple thoughts for an individual that didn't even know they could think of such thing,that's why I stress so much about group work it can be rough,frustrating,inpatient but at the end its all worth it. Another way you can think of it;lets say you were working alone and you got your project done,well that's okay but wouldn't you want to know more about whom ever you are? wouldn't you want to get pushed out of a shell and experience new things. Also a group is not always a maximum group of 5-7 people it can also be about just 3 maybe even two.

Group work has more pros than cons; criticisms is in the category or pros if were being honest, even if your partner not giving you as much feedback your at least getting something. Than not getting anything at all in my opinion people that work by themselves are just flat out :selfish,hard headed,and think they're too good for everyone. While people are working alone they could be working on their work place readiness skills.

However,some may say working alone is much more precise than working with a group,In some ways they are correct. Yes the process goes faster and there is less to do;as a team may have to do more before they get started. Also you can state your own ideas how and where you want it to go without someone thinking otherwise of that thought. All around working alone much faster than working with a group but if you ever want to get to that next step/level your going to have too sit down with a group of peers and express your feeling which takes:character,time and patient.

I have come to the end of my writing I hope I have changed your perspective on things and hope you even learned something with reading my essay. I just want everyone out there to know accepting critsm isn't bad neither is accepting that you are wrong and someone else is right. So take that next step and go interact with others to better yourself!",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
0F7DB6BD1AD5,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I think students would benefit themselfs by taking classes at home. Because they would be more focus with out anyother classmates around they would also focus more if they had a quite place to study or just do there work and students would have more time to do there work or get things done.

students would focus better if they did not have a other classmate talking to them. Some students can not foucs if someone else is talking it might bother them it also might bother them if other classmates are making loud noises. For example i am one of those students that when i am taking a test i can not concentrate if other students are talking.

students would have more time to study and finsh work because. They would be able to take breakes during each class. students can ask there teachers to help them study for a test or quiz they can also ask a friend to help them too. students can take a break between clases and do work for other clases.

students would focus more if they had a quite place to study like the libary or somewhere they might know that would not have much noise or taking involved. students would focus better and concentrate better they will also get there work done on time.

Inconclusion this is why schools should offer distance learnig for students because students would benefit themselfs to work alone with out any taking or classmates making noise.         ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
750AFA674F45,"I think students would not benefit taking online classes or videos conferencing from home. Students not learn to much because they do not receive a good explication about the class as a real teacher would to explains in the school,

not have rulers and online classes not catches the students attention.

Students not learn to much taking online class because they need to receive a good explication about the class, as real a teacher explains in the school. For example, if you are a student but you have questions and doubts, but the classes online or videos conferencing does not answer and give you good explications about the class. Would you learn while you are keeping in mind all your questions and doubts? Other reason is that students do not learn taking online classes from home because they get confusion, not understand the class and they give up when nobody help them.

Would you able to do the right thing when there are not rulers taking a class? Electronics devices are the most powerful and useful tools that help us nowadays like cellphones, smartwatch and computers. However, many students are using electronic devices in the wrong way. For example, students that are taking online classes from home, they don't have rulers and they are using their phones to watch movies or texting with friends. This steal the students concentration, while they are taking the online classes. This can not happen during a normal day of school because teachers do not allows students to use electronics devices during class time. But students do not have the same rulers at home that teachers makes at school. This not benefit the knowledge of the students at home.

Online classes or videos conferencing not catchs the students attention like a teacher makes it. For example, if you are taking online classes from home and you are at the midpart of one the lesson but you get hungry then, you left the lesson to get eat. After eat you say, ""I want to go to the park,"" then, you, went to the park, so forged all about your lesson. Would you able to do the same during a normal day of class in the school? A teacher does not allows that a student left the school or to go to the park at the midpart of the class, while he is teaching because he wants to catch your attention to make you to learn more and morer. However, online classes or videos conferencing you can stop it and go or do whatever you want, then you lose knowledge abou it.

Some say that taking online classes or videos conferencing from home is a benefit for students. They are wrong because the students not learn to much and they would have bad grades. Other say that online classes or videos conferencing explain in good details.. They are wrong because real teachers explain better than online class or videos conferencing.

As you can see, taking online classes or videos conferencing from home, not helps the students to learn because if they are confusing they will get bad grades , nobody answer their question or doubts and they don't have rulers or limited to use any electronics devices. This is not a benefit for students.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
DF8B648769C5,"PROMPT

Many people today likes give advises to others, sometimes about their life, work or personal relationship. But the question now is, ''Example is not the main thing in influencing others; is the only thing? I think it is, for two main reasons.

Fistly, When you talk to others, you sometimes gives a example about other people experiences. For example, someone who was a bad person in the past and now he change. You can change bad relations or yourself . You are influencing that person with reasons, examples and actions, he can change himself. If he wants.

Second, always we influenced people with reasons, maybe bad reasons or good reasons but is the only way to influence others. Influence people is not easy, you need to be prepared with the examples they need to ear.

In conclucion, the only way to influence people is with examples, actions, reasons and your personal advise. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
EC3B982A622A,"I do not agree with adding another hour to school, because some of us would like to go home, some people have places to go after school. For example what if a student wants to go pick up his grandma from the airport but her flight gets in while the student is still in school. If school would've ended at the normal time he could've went to pick up his grandma. Even though staying an hour more would help students more, there won't be anytime left for after school activities. in the winter time it gets dark fast and some kids like to go outside and play for a while after school,but if they add that extra half an hour kids would have to get home fast and leave there stuff to go outside for a little bit. There are many bad reason why adding another hour to school is a bad idea but, there are many good ones too like a good reason would be kids can catch up on there missing work, a bad idea is kids go home later then they used to and some parents would not like that. If they do add an hour of school they should open the school at 8:30 instead of 7. If we come at 8 kids would get more sleep and not fall asleep in class with more sleep kids have more energy and with ms are more energy kids are more productive. In my opinion i don't think adding another hour is not so bad, just that no other student would wanna stay another hour. Students could get frustrated because all the work they do at school,and then kids got to go home and study and do there homework. Therefore i disagree with the idea of adding another half an hour.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
6CDE42A3FA9F,"People think sometimes that influencing means you have to be an example for the person, but in my opinion influencing someone could be through anything like : internet, words, a friend and even family. I disagree with Albert Schweitzer because he said,  Example is not the main thing in influencing others ; it is the only thing.

First reason why I think an example is not the only way to influence people. For example, I go to a party and there are people under the age of twenty-one drinking alcohol, they do not have to be someone I know for them to influence me to drink alcohol. Some people would feel pressure to do it just because the other ones are doing it.

Second reason why I think an example is not the only way to influence others. The tv can influence people to buy thing from the commercials, it could be anything. People sometimes do not think about how much money they spend on stuff; at the and of day they use it once, and then forget about it.

On the other hand, people think that the only way to influence someone is by an example. In addiction, my mom is someone that consider as an example for me, if she do soemthing wrong it doesn't mean that I am going to do it, too. I think being an example is something good as long as you don't do what they did wrong.

In conclusion, I think there are more ways to influence people. It could be you influencing someone else or someone influcing you.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D08BCAC0B1D6,"what ever we have to accomplish we will all do it until we beat it and be big in live getting threw challages that we have never facesd before. Nothing in our live will stop use from doing what we would like to do in the furture. if some tell you that you will never get there in live dont belive what other peolpe thing about you, just do you that you will be albe to do anything in live. also It would be great if alot of thing could be done but how by alot of people working on only one thing that's for sure would finish the proeses quicker and get other thing start alot fast, but they just can't everyone has a part to do when they are working on project, that would be working on building new cars and, new home. that one thing that people would wish to do if they could accomplish anything they would go right ahead by do it and finish it until they secces accomplish it, what they dream for finley happened.

One way to example how we can do this is by getting a job or something that he/she would like to do in live to be the best they can be or just be their own boss by having your own bunisses, no one telling you what to do or nothing like that but one thing that they have to do is keep track of how make people are working for you, pay those who are warking all day and who ever is on time for work. but that for who own there own bunisses. Like for us we work for other people at store, fastfood placse, divilering other plasce that you guys can thing of. We always start somewhere when we first start working getting our own place paying for our own stuff all the cool stuff you can get with your own money.

everyone will start out easy but when they want to do better they want to accomplish there dream and do better and bigger things in there lives, to do what they always want to do so they give it a try unti they have try it out how it is and if its going well they go for it keep move front to accomplish what they alway wanted to do in there live. Helping out in the real world making your ideas help other peolpe to help them get most of your ideas off of you. everyones dream is alway to own a nice big house, with nice cars a big pool in there backyard. But there one thing to that when you do accomplish your dream, you have all this money you will want to just party. but its not all about the money spending it going to party, just doing the right thing to help out in the world there people that really need it the most anyone can do anything if they work for it, like what every you want to be or become you can just go with it no body is going to stop you if you just put your mind to it. Just you and only you will do anything in this world you will be able to accomplish big things in the furture ahead of us will be the next step to your seccess. our furture await us for new people to accomlish bigger and better things ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
29E1FB4B1D42,"1. R- Teacher

A- student

T - about helping

F- Explain

Do- how to help

What-help the people that they need help and care about people. and teach yourself how to help people. teach yourself how to be nice to people. don't care what people say how about you. Is good to help because that is how you making people o be happy. helping makes people feel good. and If you didn't help people that they don't have house. if you can help them give them some food. 2. Older students they can help younger students how to do homework and how to teach they hoe to read and how to be nice to other kids. and teach how to help people. helping is the thing that people needs to do in the life. 3. help someone with one feeling If you feel like to help",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
FAF2897C9B65,"I agree with Winston Churchill that success consits and failing many times.

One reason is that if you fail, that is going to make stronger for the next time. It's like a game; you are going to do whaterver it takes to gain the game. If you do not do it in the first round, it's going to be the second and you'll do even better. A lots of people think that if they don't do it in the first time, that's going to be it. They don't realize that if they just keep going they're going to get there, and be success. Wouldn't it be great if we didn't have to fail? but that's how it's some times. We have to accept it and keep trying. Life is fool of problems, but we just have hang in there and keep trying and get where we want.

Another reason is that never loss of enthusiasm, that's the most important reason of all of this. if we don't have that exclusive word is like life does not make sense at all. For example, I used to have this friend that his mom wanted him to be a doctor, but he didn't want to be a doctor. He wanted to be a teacher. Farthermore, he study to be a doctor. He wasn't that good but that was what his mom wanted. The second year, which was even harder he just stop. He talked to his mom saying that was not for him. He did not have any enthusiasm on that career, so he fanilly started classes to become a teacher. now, that was for him. He did so much better, good grades and excellents jobs. In short, he never lost the enthusiasm to be a what he wanted.

Some people migth say that you don't have to fail, that you have to be success all the time. They migth say that is not ok to fail. However, that's not true, you can fail it's going to make you strong. you are going to have experience and you're going to do things so much better. If you can't do it in the first then, go for the next, and next until you can finally make it.

In summary, success consist and failing many times.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
ED4CAEB0D7A3,"A character is defined by what tdo they do? like for Example the main character in the story is the one that has almost the most attention of people, and others are just supporting the story, But can we make our own character in the story? A character is defined by what do they do into the story made by their improvements, skills and influences.

For Example: A character that like to be actor in a story is because he likes to be a character into a story.

Here are some Reasons

A character will be himself something that He like to do in a story and not what people want because too many people like the same story and everyone has different opcions.

a person that thinks that He create His own character it's totally wrong what happened is that He laike the character a lot and He thinks that the character is doing what He want.

That;s why many people thing that they can create their own character when the only thing that they do is to choose their favorite character in the story or een in a movie.

A character is the one that do all that he can give and not the one that has more power because in the story their work is to make people thing that what happen in the story is true.

For example at the end of the story some character are acting like they're dead or any other reason to tell the public that the story is real and make people thing that they are into the story too.

Like I said the job of characters is to get the attention of the person who is reading the story or watching a movie.

But going back to the question if we can make our own character?

We can't make our own character, Is just that our favorite character is formed by influences, and improvements to make hem a better character in the story.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
D7C6DEB19630,"Technology

Technology have changed people in a lot of ways. People use technology almost everywhere they go. Technology, sometimes, is helpful and sometimes its not. People use technology to find resources that are very helpful. Some people use technology to play games and discover inconvenient sites. Technology change peoples the way they live their lives. Using technology can have some intense effect on peoples health issues. Technology can cause people to perform bad things.

Technology can change the way people live their lives. When people are using technology, they can't focus on what the other person is saying. Technology cause people of losing communication with their parents or their friends. Young people use technology more than old people. Young people are addicted to technology which is bad for them. School's do not like to let students use their cellphones during classes, because they will not focus on learning anything. If someone could take the technology away from young people, they would not communicate with their parents or not even make an eye contact with them. Technology can cause a bad habit for them.

Using technology can have some bad effect on peoples health. A lot of people die in car accidents on account of them using technology while driving a car. People can get addicted to their technology devices, which is bad for their eyes. Using a lot of technology can cause people to go blind. Young people don't get enough sleep because they use their phones and stay up late. Some parents let their kids to use technology and avoid what it can do to their kids. Some parents do care about their kids health issues and they take their devices away. Technology can cause people to get hurt.

Technology can cause people to perform illegal actions. Technology have a very negative effect on the peoples lives. Many people kill themselves because the media tells them to do so. People see negative effects of the technology and then they use them. People kill because of technology. Using technology can turn people aggressive, independent, and impudent.

People shouldn't use technology a lot because it effects them emotionally. Technology is bad for people because it changes the way people live their lives. Using technology can hurt many people in different ways. It is bad for peoples health. Technology effects different kinds of people young and old.        ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
D2E545CFEBF3,"I would agree and disagree at the same time because their can be good reason and bad reason of why it good to extend 2 hours of school and working for 10 hours each day. My first reason is that it good extending the 2 hours helps you learn more things and catch up with any work. What is good about Working for 10 hours each day is that you will have money for colloge and save up. What is bad for working 10 hours is that you will be tired and sleepy.

For example if you work four-day week you should work at least for 8 hours only because you need to get enought sleep, leave some time for home work. But it also can be good because you can only work for four-days and rest the week days. Working more than 8 hours you will feel tired,sleepy and frustrated. Therefore it better to work only 8 hours instead of 10 hours because it too much,as a result you can get bad consequence or bad grades.

My other reason is that I think school should not follow this model because working each day 10 hours it too much. However their can be bad consequence of working 10 hours and extendidng

2 hours in school. My first reason is that you can be tired and not listining to the teacher while she teaching. Second reason is that if you extend the hours of school many student will be livid for staying more hours in school.

I think that the school should not extend the hours is because some teachers need to be in places too,needs to rest and also needs more time on grading papers. I also think that many students have part time jobs and also they need to be somewhere. Some students will be tired and sleepy. Another reason I have is that student needs to go home early to go do their homework,rest alittle.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
F6DEF203DCD1,"First impressions is what the person show you. The first impression is almost impossible to change. In my opinion I'm agree with this statement. Some people can think in a diffent way for they experiences. Most peoples can think the same way that I think. People can change with time not at the first impression when you meet someone. People can deside is they want to know the person better. People can change in there own way, or if they really want to change they need to deside to be better in life. The first impression is impossible to change. They need time,effort, and dedication to change. Most people can said that you do not need all those things to cange. The people at the fist impression. The first impression is what the person make you feel.

The first impression is what the person show you. The person can not change at the first impression, they most need to have the specific time to change. One of the most important fact to change is time. For example, is a person is fighting with a employee at the Ice cream story, you can not can change that person that way the he think. Maybe you must wants that. He need to realise what he is doing is something wrong .The person most have his reason for the fight. The person need time to change not at the firt moment the you meet. Most people can determine that they need time to cange. Another example of that is someone have a really bad adiction to do someting that do not have none benefict for his life. You most want to change that person. The first impression that this person make in you most be the most terrible impression. First impression is impossible to change.

First impression is actually what the person make in you. Sometimes is not the best impression that the person make .Sometimes you must want to change that at the same moment even is you do not know the person. The person can change with effort is you talk to the person and let her know that what is doing is not right. Maybe the person can change but not at the first impression that need take time. For example is a student is copy in a test and you realize what the student is doing you must want to change the way the he is thinking. The student need to have effort and act of actitude that he can do anything in life and have the effort to do it .Another example of that is you meet someone for the first ime in the attitude is so bad you most want to tell the people to change. The person need to have the effort to change is the person wants that. The first impression are almost imposible to change. First impression is what the person show you. Some people are more complicate they do not want to any effort to change. The first impression is the way the you most guess the personality of the person.

First impression is what the person show you. A good first impression is what the person guess of on you. First impression is what the person wakes you feel. You most not espect the negatives accion of the person, because you do not really know that .The specific time you most know that person is it something that you do not like of the person with dedication can change. For example is you meet someone at the park for the firts time and you and the person start talking. Most one of the two person want to change something in you or oppsite. The people can not change at the first time they need time and dedication. The first impression is more important when you meet someone for first time. For example is a father leave at him son when he was a baby , and when they meet for first time the father have to have the best impression for his son. The son wants to espect how his father is he most want to know that. The first impression is the most important for that father. That father have to change is he have something that his son do not like. He need to have dedication to achieve that. The first impression the more imprtant when you meet someone for the first time.

The people can not change at the first time. Many people think that we can not change a person with the first impression. A person need there own respected goal to change. The person need the time, and effort and dediaction to change. Nobody can not change people at the first moment they need time to analyze what they want.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
E19CE100743C,"""Getting something by doing something or doing nothing also bring us something""

We accomplish more if we are always doing something ,because if we do more than what we want or have we will always be growing ,everytime that we do something no matter what it's we receive something back ,many people called ''reward"" , when we want something and we work hard to get that, we create a confidence in ourself's that we now that by doing something we can get what we want and we motivate ourself to accomplish that. we get more if we do more ,but some people think that by doing nothing you can get something back . accomplishment is something that you get by working hard , giving your best ,and by doing something about it , if we dont do anything we aren't going to accomplish anything or get anything in this life .

We accomplish more by doing something, because if we do more than what we want or have we will always be growing more. like one time I remember that I was in six grade and I really wanted to participate in the math competition that Generic_Name prepare every year ,only the fastest student's in math can participate ,so Generic_Name tell us that they were math reviews after school to practice for the competition ,but I didn't have the opportunity to stay in does reviews ,because every day in the after school I had swimming practice and I couldn't skip because my classes were already paid , so I remember that I was sad and I start thinking that if I really wanted to be in that competition I should do something to be there ,I start to wake up two hours early in the morning and I would practice math and also I will go to the library in lunch to work on math exercises ,but that sacrifice was worth it because when Generic_Name make the list for the people that would be able to participate in the competition my name was there. My mom always tell me that no matter how many times you fail in getting something , because the next time that you tried you wouldn't do the same mistake twice and at the end because of your effort and hard work you will accomplish everything that you want to make in your life. that's something I will remeber the rest of my life.

We get more by doing more ,because every single time that we do something ,no matter what it's we are going to get something back ''recompense''. when you take your time to do something with patience , will ,and gratitude that can benefit other people by not expecting something back ,we have that selfsatisfaction of making someone happy. like when you see a poor child walking in the streets ,looking for food in the trash ,bacause he is hungry and he doesn't have money to buy some food or maybe he doesn't have a mom that can feed him and you know that you can make that kid happy by giving him some food , because you have that feeling of helping him and make him happy once. one time I remember that I went with my mom to work , we went to clean a house of a 79 year old woman that the only company that she had was her dog , so I remember that I ask my mom if I can come the weekends to her house and join her during the day , and I didn't know that this woman would became someone special for me. she was very sweet ,kind , and lovely woman that i have ever meet in my life , she use to call me grandaugther and I was so happy to get the opportunity to meet her and when the time pass; her son that lives in Generic_City came to country and decide to take her with him and when the moment to say good bye comes, I was really sad because I would not be able to see her again ,but after she left I would always remember the words that she tell me; ""I'm living ,but dont worry because you would always be in my heart ,and i will always have in present everytime that you spend with me and make me happy."" that day I learn that when you do something no matter what it is you will always receive something back and that something it can change your life forever.

We get more by doing something ,because if we want something and we work hard to get what we want , we create a confidence of ourself, that we know that no matter how hard we have to work to accomplish that ,if we put our effort we can get what we want. like when you are at school and you have alot of assigments to do ,but you still motivate yourself to complete everything that you have to get done and you make the effort to continue until you are done, that's when you realize that you have that confidence of knowing that "" if you purpose yourself you can do everything "". confidence is something that is going to help you in every situation that you are in , it would help you when you are struggleling to take a important decision that maybe it can change your life. I remember when my sister was confused , because she didn't know if she would be able to accomplish the career that she wanted to take in college, and since that day I admire her ,because she believe herself ,she take the career and I knew that she knew that confidence help her to continue fordward and to accomplish what she already know that she wanted ,but at the same time she was scared of taking the challenge and fail. Sometimes we have to take that fear of failling out of our lifes ,and bring that confidence that would help us to belived in ourself's.

Getting more by doing something, is better than don't do anything expecting that we are going to get something.

By doing something we will always be growing more than what we are , we would always receive something back and that can be the happiness of another person's , and we would have that confidence to believed in ourself knowing that we can do everything that we want if we work hard for it. It's important for people to know that in this life they can have the opportunity to accomplish everything that they want tio improved their life ,but also at the same time they have to know that to accomplish something they have to work hard , have confidence, and they get everything they want in this life.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
AD175892EC1C,"Attending school and Attending online classes.

Attending classes from home by the way of online or video conferencing is not a really smart idea. You can learn better by making eye contact, and asking questions from the teacher rather, than just trying to learn online. Education is one of the most important things in our life that we can't continue it in a good way by attending online classes. Attending online classes might look a smart idea for some learners because they might be able to stay home, and study, but there is absolutely a reason that we build schools. Students might get benifts by attending online classes, but not as they will by going to school. Attending school instead of attending online classes have a lot of benefits that can change an idea of attending online classes.

Attending school can give us a freindly character by being able to talk in front of a group of people. When we attend school, we start talking, and communicating with people by the time we get in the bus. We can find freinds, and get help from them when we need. We will be able to ask any question from the teacher at any time that we want, and they can give us the answer without waiting or searching it online. We will get ready for bigger communities such as college and university by attending school. Teachers don't just teach us a lesson, but they show us how to talk in a good way, and how to have a good character in our life. which online classes would't help us in such a way. We will have a lot of events at school that we can celebrate with the whole school. We can't celebrate any event while attending online classes.

Our chatacter, and the way we are is really important, and attending school will help us to have them in a best way. Talking, and asking questions in front of the whole class or several classes will help us a lot to get ready for college, and more other presentations. Comunicating is something that we will need to use in every day of our life. School is the best way to learn how to comunicate. When we go to college or university there will be a community bigger than a school. Therefore, attending school is a very good option rather than attending online classes. School is not just a place to study books, but its a place where we learn how to live like an educated human. Friends are like family. while we are attending school we will make a lot of freinds but we can't make any freind while attending online classes. Celebrating some events will give us the best memory while we can have that by attending school but not online classes.

Attending online classes have a lot of disabilities to teach a student they way they need to be teaching. A teacher can show us how to use a good language with other people but an online class wouldn't be able to do that. A big community like school can make us get used to talk in front of a group of people, while in online classes we are alone. We need courage in order to study. When we answer a question in the class or get a good grade in our class, the teacher, and students courage us but if we get a good grade in online class, there is no one to see our talent and courage us wihtout a small class massege. Attending online class might be good for some reasons. When we are sick or we have a poblem that we can't go to school; attending online class will help us, but not for a long time. Video conferencig has a big different with wactching what the teacher does in class, and what questions students ask.

There is a lot of ways that we can study but, attending school is the best way. Attending school is a complete education than other ways. we build schools because we can understand the importance of studying at school. School is a place where we start how to to earn someting that we want, and teachers help us with that by giving us courage. Attending online classes will just help us read something, and if we don't understand a word, then we need to search online for that either, whcih is going to take longer time than studying at school. I strongly prefer attending school than attending online classes because there are many benifits we can get by attenidg school rather than attending online classes. We can not learn all the good things on online classes that we can by attending school. Attending online classes will be a big process, diffuicult, less apportunties, and there is no one to encourage us or show us what is good for us. Attending school is a best way to have a bright future, a good way to communicate and a good preperation for college and bigger communities.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
F167D1995565,"It Has Been Said That First Impressions Are Almost Impossible To Change.

Do You Agree Or Disagree With That Statement?

People don't know everything by born. They have to learn everything by culture and family. Every culture has different impression but we have to caught it because we are human. Everybody has a lot of impression. Many people would have different opinion about this statement. In my opnion, I am disagree with that first impression are not impossible to change because all people are live in culture, practice can change anything, and they are adjustable.

First reason, I believe that first impression are not impossible to change because all people are live in culture and culture change impression. One person has more than one impression and different culture has different impression. People make comfortable with new impression. For example, I born in bangladesh but I live in USA. I have a different impression than before becuse now I am live in new culture, they have new impression. Almost I forget my old impression because USA culture change my impression. People help us to change our imression because whatever we see around us we can hold it.

Another reason, I am not agree with that first impression are impossibe to change because practice can change anything. People don't want to do whatever they don't like. But if you do everyday whatever you don't like oneday you will like it because practice can make anything perfect . For example,

my friend who came from bangladesh without family even she disn't know anything about this place. But she have to do everthing her ownself. Everyday she is practice new culture that's make her to learn new impression. Now she doesn't remember her old impression becuse if you practice everyday new things. You will forget old impression becasue she doesn''t preactice her old impression.

Finally, I disagree with that first impression are almost impossible to change because people are adjustable. In the world, people are the only things who can adjust themself to any other new things. When we went to the new place we have to do lot of new things. Even we have to change our impreassion because every place has different kind of impression. And people can adjust themself with new impression. For example, people impression are like water. Doesn't matter where you put water it will be shape like where you put water because water is liquid and people mind is changeable. When we go to the new place we have to have change our impresson and it does't matter who you are and where you are.

In conclusion, people have to say that first impression are not impossible to change because people live in culture, practice can change anything, and people are adjustable with new things. Most of people wouldn't agree with that statement. We don't have to believe that whatever other people said. People has a right to say whatever they believe. Human beings are adjustable with impression becasue we are changeable. Whatever we can imagine we can do it. Everything is possible for human. Even I believe that first impression are not hard to change but we have to be faithful about our opnion.",2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
DAD5BCDAB7DD,"When I grow up I would like to do five things. The first thing I would like to do is go skydiving. The second thing I would like to do is go to Europe and visit many places there. The third thing I would like to do is own my own construction company. The fourth thing I would like to do is go back to my country and buy back my childhood's house. The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is Learn about my family and where they come from and how it was for them.

The first thing I would like to do when I grow up is skydive. One reason why I would like to go skydiving because I like heights and high places. Another why I would like to go skydiving because I would like to see the view from such height and how amazing it looks. The last reason why I would like to go skydiving because I would like to feel like I'm flying like a bird skimming through the sky. I would like to go skydiving because of those three reasons.

The second thing I would like to do when I grow up is go to Europe and visit many places there. I would like to go to Europe because I like many countries and their history that are located in Europe such as Greece, Germany, France, and Italy. I would like to go Europe because I like most European history such as the Spartans history, the Roman Empire's history, and the Persian Empire's history. I would like to go to Europe because I would like to Learn many European Languages such as French, German, Greek, Polish and much more. I would like to go to Europe because of those three reasons.

The third thing I would like to do when I grow up is own my own construction company. I would like to own a construction company because I like construction and engineering. I would like to own a construction company because I like building and would like to build famous buildings and many other things. I would like to own a construction company because I would like to build as a career and as a hobby. I would like to own my own construction company because of those three reasons.

The fourth thing I would like to do when I grow up is go back to my country as a visit. I would like to go back to my country, Generic_City, because I've spent most my life, and all my childhood there. The second reason I would like to go back to my country is because I want to buy my old house back and go to it once a while. The reason why I want to go back to my country is because I was born there, and feel at home there. Those are the reasons I would like to go back to my country and visit it many times.

The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is learn about my family. One reason I would like to learn about where my family comes from and what struggles they went through and how they got there. Another reason I would like to know from where they came from came from and why they left it and what race they were. I would like to see to who I'm related to and if they were bad or good people, if they served in any wars or were famous people. Those are the reasons why I would like to learn about my family's past.

When I grow up I will do five things that I would want to. The first thing I will do is skydive because of the view from such height. The Second thing I will do is go visit many countries in Europe and learn many of the European languages. The third thing I will do is own my own construction company because I'm into construction and would like to build many things. The fourth thing I want to do is go back to my country and visit it many times. The fifth thing I would like to do when I grow up is learn about my family's past and where they come from. Those are the five things I will do when I grow up.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
DA228B928B61,"Would students benefit from taking classes home? Some would agree and disagree. Taking classes online would help students who need that one on one teaching. Some students have a hard time focusing in a noisy environment because other students are disturbing the class whiles they are trying to pay attention.

Students who aren't comfortable in a noisy environment cant express themselves in class,but if you take classes online you get to express yourself for example video confrence you get to express yourself and ask good question with good explanation. Because everybody has a way of learning some students adapt quick and others learn slowly,but taking this one on one course helps you adapt really quick because you are alone in a quite environment which is going to help you adapt really quick! Online classes also helps because some students have a hard time waking up early in the morning to school which causes you to be late everytime,being late can lead you to detention,saturday school and other things. But with this online course you can take it anytime during the day. Mainly my point is online classes are very helpful and it helps students to concentrate more.

Some students would disagree to take classes online because some people have a fast away of adapting. Some students like to interact with others,students like to experience the high school life.

Do you think would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? It all depends on the ways the student learns.                                 ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
33CFC6838E04,"Dear: Generic_Name

I agree for the possitive attitude is the key. Because is good when you have a very good attitude. Also if you got a good attitide you can has positive thins in your life you can has to many fiend. And you can't have problems. because you, are very positive in your success life. You will , make very good decision, for your posiive life. The things most important in your kife is you get a job you need to have a attitude . Because if you don't have a good attitude you can improve in your life, The society if bad with you .Because you don't have agood attitude and , but you has to be possitive in your life to has a good attitude in your life.

Also sometime is good but some day is no because is a hard work to have a good attitude when a person don't want to talk to you that why is very hard to be positive Because sometime people talk bad thing about, you and you dont have a good raction in your life and the is not good for me and you need to calm down to will you have a positive thing in your life you has to wait for everythin nothing is easy in this life.

For example , you will has to have a good attitude ,well had to has positive things in your life to be a very good person , and yopu need to be a very good person because the society can said the you has a very great attitude in your life, And you can make where ever you wants if you have a very good positive attitude with your life and anything. Also you can make your own positive attitude not one make your decisions every one help to you has a positive life to have a very good decisiond.

When you has a great good positive attitude for your life is when you got everythin right .You can't worry for anything for the only thing the you can importam is to have a attitude right and the people dont talk bad about you, and the society. I think the positive life is the most importamt in every life. Every single life has to be positive an got a very good attitude. And every body cant have a greAt position to make the society most better.

I was thinking the attitude is very importamt for every body because if you don't have a great attitide you can get a job . Because in a job need people with a positive attitud. Also you can't improve and ,any job the you, cant have because you got a very greatt positive attitude about , you be very friendly every peron and every person who not have a very good attitude, the person never improve because,i think no body want a person the is not positive in his on life in every work need people with a very geat positive in his own life in has a great attitude   ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
E56D4253DFE7,"I think to extending the school day two hours, that can be something bad, because not all students agree with that, and also that can be something complicated. To all student because we can be out to late.

That's why I think that expending the school day two hours is something not very good. For some students are very complicate to extending the school day two hours. Because some student have to work in the afternoon,

and others have to do others thing.

I think the benefits and disadvantage to a four-day school week, can be good, but also can be sad.

Becauase not everyone is agree with all this that happens in the school, a four-day school week have good ideas and bad ideas. For the disagvantage is that we can be out so late, and that is something that not everyone liked, and the benefits is that is only four-day per week. But the benefits is that all students only come four-day per week. And i think is better get out early, because some student have something to do, and get out so late is not a good idea for all students.

Some student can be not agree with all this, that extending the school for two hours. Beacuse I think that is not a good idea for all the students, and that can effect because if they working in the afternoon. That's why ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
C8A3B0D8B7E5,"Prime Minister Winston Churchill said that "" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" is a great idea. Although some people might say If you keep from failure to failure that means you can not done It,because you are not genius. But in my opinion If you don't loss your enthusiasm you will be success.

The best example is when AiDiSheng developed light blob he had thousands of fails but he didn't give up, he didn't loss enthusiasm,after more fails finally he made the first light blob in human life. It tells me If you don't loss your enthusiasm on something thing you focus on keep doing it you will done it perfectly like what you wished.

My other reason is be audacious keep trying. when you are failure to failure, your friends might say stop doing it you are not going to make It .they just giving you a suggestion.

If you stop you will loss your enthusiasm on something that is attracting you just because they said are not going to make it, trust yourself keep trying don't loss your enthusiasm.

In my opinion enthusiasm is not easy to have, the only ways to have Is someone or something that is attracting me. I would like to focus on I will have enthusiasm like video games I can play for a whole day,but I can't study for whole day It will be tough to me what If I have enthusiasm on study I will be success too.

Fail is not dreadful, the awful thing is loss enthusiasm that will be incurable. Believing yourself even you have many fails continue trying you will be succeed.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
3567E4ED2023,"One quote that is debated today is minister Winston Churchill success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I think that failure is one important thing to learn how to be. They feel has to do fast all the thing. I believe if you have goals you can be better very time. other reason is if you respect each another because that is everything you need.

Same people think if you do everything fast that going to be right but, you has to take slow. When you think failure is the right way because you learn new thing and going to help and everything you trying to do in your life. Another thing important from failure to failure is listing other person who try to help.

My option is if you trying to do many thing that same time is not going to work because you has many thing but, if take a moment is work. As you have read the best way from failure to failure is never give up because if you try many time that going to be much better because every person has mistake to be good in that way you lean you dont know how good you are in something you never has be try.",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
791AF7B78178,"My position about this prompt is that students should not take the program that allow students to graduate them in three years, because is not like taking normal classes, for example what would happen if students get to take the program that will allow them to graduate in 3 years?

They would have to take more classes in less time:

Because as I read in the prompt there was one part that says ""for students in order to graduate must take summer courses"", and this means that they would not have a break in this time. Not because of the time but for those students that would decide that they would not only risk to fell some classes but also not to take elective classes during summer because that's what this prompt says.

It will be more stressful:

As we all know school sometimes can be stressful but imagine how stressful if for students that graduate in four years as every other normal programs that high schools offer, now imagine how it would it be for students that take programs allowing them to graduate in three years. I'll say they have to work even harder, during the summer they have to take courses in order to be upgraded to the grade the are going to, also a lot of SOL's test will be taking in less time, I'm not saying that those people won't have enough time to study, but what I'm saying is they would have a really busy schedule with all their classes plus all of those tests coming up it wont be easy for them.

The reason that why I used those examples to explain the main idea like this, it was for you to understand that such as that program it can be very difficult for students, not just that but for students that might not be quick to understand new subjects or new units, it can get them stuck in there with no option but to get into a point when they would just give it up and quit because it will get really hard for them. Now that I showed you how hard could it be for students that would take a three year high school program, now it clarifies that theres no need to rush with education and that students should take normal high school program because it wouldn't be so hard as taking the other program that I just talk about, in conclusion students have more changes to graduate with a four-year-program, as long as they keep themselves in track with what they are suppose to do it won't be no problem, and there will be less stress for them, more freedom to take a break when they need to, and enough time to study.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
EB1500B8EA75,"Some students who live far away from their schools; they prefer to attend classes from their home instead of going to a school, attending classes from their home can affect some students education and affect their live in a future beacuse not all of the students who are taking online classes are going to complete their work .In my opinion I think is a bad idea to attend classes from your home because students can get distracted for anything, not complete their work and get bad grades.

If we have online class it can be hard to these people who got distracted for anything .Once I had a friend her name was Generic_Name, and she had a online math class that she needed to be able to graduated. One day I went to her home like at 6:00 pm after shool and she was working in her online class, but honestly Generic_Name was not really woking in what she suppose to be working on, yes she had her cumputer on and her online class open , but she was getting distracted by the her tv show just because she like the beaty and the best she stop doing her work. My friend Generic_Name she suppose to do her work but she always got distarcted by her tv show, if she had deside to turned off her tv she didn't got distarcted by anything and she could be success in her online class.

Students who attend classes from their home as there is anyone who is reminding them to completen the work some of them forgot to get it done and they had an incomplete work. This year I am taking an online class and sometimes I forget that I have to be doing all my requested assingments, and by the end of last week I got a bad score because i didn't complete my Vocabulary assingment. If I had put a alarm every day to remind me that i have tostudy and complete my asssiments i could get a better score.

Some others will say that attending classes from home can be a good idea because they can work on in any time,however,others may say that is a bad idea beacuse they can get bad grades. Some classmate that are taking online classes they aren't reading all the directions that the class is giving ;they are just doing the work without reading and that can affect their grades. Having bad grades can made you to not pass your school year, but if we efort we can be great.

For some students is consider to take online classes, but in some point can affect them in their education. There are many students who have online classes and they are falling because they dont have enough help, and some of they because they are not doing it .If schools provide after schools help for online classes will be helpful for all student who needed to be more success, and feel more confortable while they are doing their work and also teachers to be cheking if students are able to pass.     ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
62243789233B,"In today's society, many people agree that having a simple goal and achieving it is better than having a huge goal and failing to achieve it, but i disagree. One of the greatest artists, Michelangelo, said that setting our aim too low and achieving it is a great danger for some of us. He stated this thought because he failed and made mistakes before he was known as a great artist. Michelangelo rather fail by doing something big than his life than doing something small and achieving it. I agree with Michelangelo because you learn from past mistakes, you learn to take risks, and having bigger goals help you improve ones self.

Michelangelo is a great artist because of his work, but he learned from his own work to keep moving forward. People can learn from past mistakes by seeing what went wrong and practice doing better at it; for example, in a show called

Masterchef, chefs must impress the judges by their skills in cooking but one chef gets eliminated every episode. When a chef gets eliminated their dreams may get crushed, but they had the courage to go on and did their best and can learn what they did wrong. Another example is taking the permit test as a teenager. The permit test is something big for teens since it is something related to their future. When I took the test I was nervous and failed by one question, but i checked the answers I got wrong and studied them a bit more and passed the next time I took it. These examples prove that you have the ability to learn from past mistakes, grow as a person, and that you might have to take risks in doing so.

Taking risks are mostly involved in big decisions that involve jobs, education,etc. I believe that taking risks are better than small decisions even if those risks don't turn out the way you wanted them too. In a show called Shark Tank, people come in to persuade investors to invest in their products, but they do not always succeed. The people who do not get investments keep moving forward and take their own risks to get a investor. If you learn to take risks, you later get use to it and you can speak more in front of people and state your opinion. Another example is having a meeting for a job. It is best to have a meeting in person than online because it is not as easy so you get challenged and the person interviewing can know you better and you can most likely get the position. Taking risks can make you a better person as a whole and those mistakes can help you improve.

Michelangelo and I agree that having a bigger goal and failing is better than having a small goal and achieving it. Having a bigger goal can increase your confidence and help you put your head in the task you want to overcome. People view their mistakes and overcome it so they can do better next time. Small goals do not involve much effort and work as bigger achievements; by choosing to accomplish a simple task, you as a person may get use to the easy way out and can get lazy over time. Setting a higher aim for yourself is better because you can improve your skills and knowledge. Bigger goals are better because of how much they help you improve.

A great artist once said it is great danger setting a small aim for yourself. Setting a bigger aim and failing is best because you learn from your mistakes, you learn to take risks, and bigger goals help improve ones self. Smaller aims are a scapegoat compared to bigger aims because of how much easier they are. It is best to challenge yourself so that you are ready for anything that comes your way. Even if you take the high route and fail, it does not mean you can try again. In conclusion, setting a bigger aim and failing is alright and better than setting a small aim due to it being more easy.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
F90A6181BBCA,"In this world many of us make decisions by ourselves and others seek guidance to make decisions in their life. While some people argue that people should seek guidance to make decisions in their life, but I think it is more beneficial if people make their own decisions because if people make their own decisions they will develop their self confidence and they will become responsible person. Also, if people make their own decisions they will have happier life in the the future.

It's true that by making our own decisions that we will develop our self confidence and become responsible person. If person make decision that decision might be hard, after making the decision the person will develop his or hers self confidence and they will become responsible for the decision that they made. For example, if one person decides to leave his parents house to live by his own, he will be responsible for himself because he decided not to live with his parents no more. This will help him to be responsible person because he has to take care of himself by his own. Another example can be, In school, Students choose their classes for next year by themselves. This will help them to develop their self confidence because they are deciding what is better for them or not by their own. Also, this will help them to decide and have a confidence in what they will major in the future. So, by making our own decisions we can develop our self confidence and become responsible person.

Secondly, It's also true that by making our own decisions we will be happy and have happier life. When people make important decisions by themselves and if they achieve their goal by making this decision they will become happy and they can have happier life. For instance, if one student decided not to go college, instead he wanted to become a soccer player. If the student worked hard and become a professional soccer player he will be happy and will have happier life because he decided to become a professional soccer player by himself instead of going college. Additionally, In school, When I was sophomore, I was choosing classes for next year and I decided to take classes that I thought that are important for me and that can help me for college. Then when I take the classes this year I was very happy of my decision because this classes helped me a lot. So, people should make their own decision because they will be happy and have happier life by the decision they made.

On the other hand, some people argue that people should seek guidance to make decisions in their life because it helps them not to make wrong decisions, but I think that is wrong because if you always seek guidance to make decision in your life the decision that you made may not satisfy you in your future life. For example, if your parents advice you to make decision to become a doctor and if you made a decision to be a doctor by listening your parents ,in the future you might have bad life because being a doctor might not be part of your life. Also, you will experience difficulties in your life because your decision is influenced by others. So, people should make their own decision because it helps them to become better self confident person. By making our own decision we can gain a lot in our life.

Finally, people should make their own decision because it will help them to develop their self confidence and to become a better person by being responsible. Also, by making their own decision they will have a better life in the future. People should make their own decision to become better person by achieving their goals. Additionally, peoples have to make a decision by themselves because they can gain a lot in their life.                ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
548EC5B339E3,"When we talk about technology and ways to improve our life, What is the first think that come to our minds: Cell phones, computers, internet etc. However technology is also present in the field of the medicine, food daily life etc. Now you think that technology is Just cell phones computers and internet.

I'am pretty sure that student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. I was a clear example of this situation, last year I take an online course and of course it benefit my self a lot. How I get benefit: well first I pass the class that I was needing. It makes you feel more comfortable, because you're attending to class from home. It is more flexible, what I means with flexible you have more time to work in other things, also you have the option to turn in the homework a little later, one last thing you administer you time whatever you like.

Student would get benefits in many ways. If they study from home and if they also go to the normal school they can graduate much early than the usual. They can find a job too, if they organize their time wisely. If they have a job so they could earn money and they can use to pay college.

If some student ask me I obviously recommend them to take online classes, it is a good way to improve your weakness and also you are going to be more success.

My conclusion is yes student get benefits in many ways when they take classes from home. and I think that every school should have the option to choose if the students wants to take online classes, and also is a good idea to help the student to be more success in the life.

:)",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
916811E780BD,"How do people think younger and older students help each other? older students help younger student understand that it is ok to need help sometimes and younger students teach older students how to help other people.

Older students help younger students that it is ok to need help sometimes like when I was in seventh grade and I was in dance club and there were 8th graders to and they would help us with the moves if we needed help. If they were doing something wrong the older kid would help them. It helps the younger students to help others like as they are helping you it teaches you how to help someone the same way. Older students help younger student to

Younger students would teach older students how to help other people like when the younger student were getting help the older students were learning to help others. Younger students helps you by teaching you that it is ok to not know something. Younger students teach you that it is ok to need help sometimes like if you are helping a younger student and you don't understand a problem you can ask a teaher to help you understand to. Younger students help older students to.

Younger students teach older students how to help other students and older students teach younger students that it is ok to get help sometimes. The program help the student tha twe are need some help sometimes.                   ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
E8F6D6EA06F1,"Should you agree to letting the school board add one and a half hour to the school days.

I disagree because it will make students less excited to come back to school the next day.

Students already have the work they have to do after school, adding more time to the schools will give less time for what the students have to do once they get home.

Students have the work in school that they get normally, but once the school board adds more time, the students will have the stress that they don't need.

The time that the school board adds will impact the students time, stress, and family management.

Students will come to school with less happiness.

Once the student gets to the school, they will have to do the same work with more time that they could have used to do their daily needs.

Students need the time with their love ones so that they could get work off of their minds.

Students will have to come back to school with one and a half less time to regain their thoughts and sleep for the next day.

Giving more time to schools will effect student's daily plans.

When the student goes home its for their time to get the work form the school done and to enjoy the time with their family.

Adding more time will effect the family time together, in replace that they will have to work on the time they wanted to talk with their family.

Students will argue to the school that it is unfair that they have to have more time in school, then they will be mad that they have to take one and a half hour away from the time they get out of school.

Adding more time to the school will put more stress on the students.

Students already have work on their mind when they are in school, adding more time will just add more work that leads to stress.

Once the student has stress they have to find a way to get it out but, they have to to work in the school and get work to do at home gives the student no time to get it out.

The stress that the student has can build up to make it turn to anger and frustration, the they can use it in means that they will regret in t he future.

Adding one and a half hour can put students in a tight spot.

Students will be upset to come to school, given what they have heard.

Students have to budget their time after school.

Work can give students stress that they don't need to have.

Having more time in school can lead to problems that the students don't want and need.    ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
F72EA674A872,"For a student like me, working in a group is alot better than working by my by self. Here is some reasons why working in a group is better than working alone. Number one we finish the assignement alot faster. Number two everyone is working on something different. Number three everyone is helping each other if we struggling on something. There is the bad part about working in a group is that there is alot of distration, there is also different ideas that everyone wants to put in the assignment. Now lets look at the good part on woekinmg on the assignment alone. number one there is no distractions getting in between you working. Number two there is only your idea on how you want it to look like. Number three you can ask the teacher on how sheor he wants the assignment to be done, so that means that the assignment is going to be correctly done. The bad part on working alone is that there is going to take more time on the assignment to be done. the other part is that is that you have to do all the wrok by your self and have to rely on your self. Other words if you pick to work in a group or by your self, are going to be struugling kinda the same thing like how mush work you have to finish, the different ideas on how you wnat it to be looking linke or how you want it to be done. Ones again for a student like me i rather work in a group than by myself because knowing my self i wont finish my work or the assingment. In a group i can have one part on the assignment that i have to finish. You can say i am picking on working in a group to do less work, and you are right because its going to be done instead of not doing the whole assignment. so for my coclusion i would want to work in a group instead of working alone because ""team work makes the deam work.""",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
B1E8A95B0939,"One thing I would like to acomplish in the future is to play guitar and learn form people.

Its a beautiful instrument and you can learn from people. It can give you a possiblity of becoming somone known in the music industry.

Plaing guitar can give you a job in the music industry. You can play for a band in concerts or write people songs. One thing I would like to do is be finacial stable playing guitar. I would aslo like to play background music in a movie it sounds be nice to get paid for somthing you like doing. In total playing guitar or any other instrumnent can give you a job.

I would like to meet people with talent. Meeting pople that are intrested plaing guitar or having the same goals I do. I would like to find someone that can help me achive myh goals in the music industry. Also I want to teach people who want to learn how to play guitar. All in all meet talented people around the world.

This is something that is more likely to happen after traveling and playing in the music industry is to teach people how to play guitar. Teaching people around the world would seem nice. I would aslo like teaching at a school I want people to learn how to play guitar ,and I also want to learn from them. I would like to learn diffrent styles and techniqes overall I want to teach people who are intrusted in learing .

In cunclusion I think guitar is a good instrument to play. Its a dream I have to become a professional guitarist .There many talented people I would like to meet. In total playing guitar as a job and traveling and meeting new people is something I would to do in the future.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,2.5
F951F260E983,"Would you ever likeit is someone was not honest with you? My opinion is you should be honest all the time. Sometimes when you are honest it can hurt someones feeling but would you rather someone lie to you or be honest with you?

If you are honest it can get you in less troubel when you tell the truth and not lie. When you are homest it gives you a good reputaion that what it gives you when you are not honest. When you tell people the truth people trust you more.

When you are honest with people they trust you more and that make you someone who they can always talk to and you should be proud of yourself. If someone was ever dishonest with you would you want to have someone in your life that lies to you? You wont be able to tell them anything because they are not trustworthly . When you are honest more people want to be your friend because people like someone who is honest and wont lie.

When you dont lie to people it gives you a good reputaion because you are being honest. When you are honest to your teacher friends famlies when ever you do someithing they can belive you because they trust you that you are teeling them the truth and not lieing to them. People might know you as a honest person. When you are dishonest it afects your reputation

When you are honest it can get you in less trouble. In school being honest can get you in less trouble than what you would get when you lie. With your parents it gets you in less touble when you tell the truth because they dont like it when you lie. can trust you when you go out.

In conclusion being hounest can help you get threw problems with anyone. Helps you in life when you dont lie.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
90BF447C6E83,"Dear principal i am writhing this letter, to aprove your oppinion about changind the school menu because is something good for the school and for the student, to try something different, and something healthier, some student would like the idea of changing the food menu because they have been eathing the same food over the first day of school, and other would not like the idea of changing the menu because they have already have they favorite food, but most of the student would be happy, to change the food menu to something better, and it is a good idea, because some studend dont eat at the the school lunch, instead they go ouside the school to buy food at the restaurant, and other make they onw food at home to eathed at the schoo, in my oppinion it will be better to try something new to see what it would happend in the futere and how the student would react on the change of the lunch menu, instead of eathing the same food every year of schoo, it cand be a bad thing or a good idea changind the school menu for example it may be worse and student would dont like it or it cant be good and more student would eat the school lunch.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
B106E3896C56,"well to start off i do agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson on what he wrote because in my postion for me it is true like he said ""unless you try to do somehting beyond what you have already done""

you need totry and see how it works out and if you are succesful with it then you master it even more bigger to become even more bigger so that is why i agree with what Ralph Waldo wrote.

one reason why i agree with Author Ralph is beacuase it is true once you mastered somehting you can also do something beyond like bigger. so that is one reason why i agree with what he wrote second reason why i agree with Ralph Waldo when he says ""unless you try to do something"" which i think its true if you try to do something and u make a mistake you can keep trying like lets say you go to collage and you failed 3 class and you give up which its not a good idea because you will make mistakes in life not all the time but sometimes so that is what i think when he says ""unless you try to do something"" means like you at least need to try once and see how it goes. thrid reason is he says you will never grow and what he is trying to say is that if you master somehting beyond that what you have already acomplished and you go more bigger then you will grow because you did somehting on your own and bigger so that is why i think there is a thrid reason.

These are all the reasons why i agree with waht he wrote and why i agree with him like i said you ned to try to bigger things in life and become more succesful and get more better things have what you want like buy a car a house and go on vaction with your famliy and like i said for reason two i said if you try and make a mistake you need keep on trying and become a better person. so that is what i think about what he wrote and why i agree with him. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
EA4AED3BFE34,"Some schools permit their students use cellphones in classroom for educational purposes. There is so many good and bad effects allowing students use their phone for educational puroposes .They can be more bad reasons than good reason beause we have to think how really they are going to use their cellphones, and if it's for educational purpose.

I think allow their cellphones to students is not a good idea because we know that we are young people, and we are not going to use our phone just for educational purposes; we are going to use :our apps , social media ,and that is going to distract our attention in class, makes us faild or test because weare not using our resource for good reason; we know there are students without resposabilities and that's what make cellphones a bad opction.

Some people may think that use our phone in classes can be a good idea because we are going to have more access to technology at school, and more easy research for our classwork. Also people think that we are going to have more privacity for our work. Students said that they can be resposinble at the moment to use their chellphones just for educational purposes.

Allowing cellphones for students can have good and bad effects , it can have good effects because is a easy option for students having their phone for: research information resources, have easy acess to internet ,see videos educationals abut the subject, and find deep information about the subject. The bad effect for students can be :they are going to get distracting , they are not going to do their classwork,and for all that reasons they can lose their classes.

My first reason is cellphones in class are not good tools for students ,because cellphones distract and make students lose their attention to class.

My second reason is cellphones is not a thing that we need for learn because our parents, teachers ,family in their time was no cellphone ,and they learn by other resources like books ,so is not a thing that we really need. there are computers we can use them for when we really needed .

My third reason is that cellphone is not necessary for our educational purpose because we can have better resources than a cellphone ; we have the most beautiful thing in this world and that are books our better resource.

Some schools allow their students to use their cellphone to a educational purpose they think that is a good idea to have cellphones in their classroom but in my opinion is a distracting thing ,and is not necessary for our educational purpose ; we have good tools for example one are the books and internet but not using our cellphones at class because we know that we are not goin to use for educational purpose, and cellphone are going to distract us.            ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
3B81809AA132,"""Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something"" yes people accomplish more when they are doing something. I believe that when people put in the effort to do more things that, it could help accomplish more for them in life. The reason why people accomplish more is because since day one they've been working hard and every chance they had of doing something productive that it would help them get to where they need to be in the future that they would take it. They knew that at a point of time when they get a job that they would have to take care of their parent when they older. This is why our parent's always push us and tell us to do better in school because they already been through our situation and it took them the hard way to learn and they don't want us to learn the hard way they want us to learn the easy way so that it would be easy for us to get a scholarship.

Back in the old days when our parents were growing up they didn't have no technology to learn they had to struggle to learn, they didn't have no bus to take them to school like how we do now days. But back in the old days is was easier to get a jobs and it was easier get into colleges because all they needed was a GED. But now we need a Masters Degree, and a High School Diploma just to get a job that pays good enough for us to live by yourself and to start a family. Now it very hard to get an academic scholarship because now you need at least a 3.8 grade point average (GPA) to get an academic scholarship. This why we need to be always doing something so that we can make our parents happy and also make ourselves happy that we've made an accomplishment.

These are the reasons why i think we should do more, push ourselves more to get to where we need to be in life as a teenager because our parents can't keep telling us the same things over and over for us to listen we should just listen the first time so that we could make them happy and take care of them as when we get older and into our adult stage.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
73D69658CF95,"Some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. For those who can pay a fee for it would be perfect because they have the material to do that, like enternet, computer, or any other device to joing by online or video conferencing classes. Some students woul benefit from being able to attend classes from home, but just those who really need it, like students with disability or health problems. It would not benefit students whom have a hundred percent of their ability to develop anything, it would make them more lazy than what they normally are.

Generic_Name is a student who has a hundred percent of his ability but he does not like go to school. He is always skiping classes and never make homework. Generic_Name is a student with health problems who can not assist to school like a normal teenager because he has to be connect to a oxygen tank twenty four, seven. Generic_Name does not want to go to school and Generic_Name can not do that. The school which both of them used to attend is offering a distance learning program for students and the first two students who joing are Generic_Name and Generic_Name. If schools decide to create this program for students, them most priorize at the moment to acept students.

Distance learning program as an option for students to attend classes from home. It would benefit thousands of students whom really want to learn and be successful in their life. If schools which have this program available for students allow students like Generic_Name and Generic_Name to be part of it. The one who is going to be benefit more would be Generic_Name because he is the one who really need this program, he is the one who want to learn new stuff, he is the one who want be someone in the future. Generic_Name would be just one more of those students who are trying to take the easy way for everything, acting like if the world goes around him. But there is also an amount of students who can not have access to enternet or any electronic device to access to the online classes. So it turns a problem for those who does not have acces to any of those things and has health problems like Generic_Name or who does not have enough money to have what they need to participate. The online classes would be hard to them no matter what. If schools created a plan for those students it would be more easy to them to develop themself.

In conclusion some schools are offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home, for students who does not have a hundred percent of their ability, student with health problems, students who really need it. Them also may create a program that help students without enough economy to take those classes. If schools are creating new ways or programs for those whom really need it, them most think about all the needs that them have and try to supply it, not with a hundred percent but helping with what they can. So students can learn and be successful n the future. Remembering that the one that are students right now, are the future of the world. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
AB6284069E18,"Some schools offer education at home, online, and or video conference calls. Teachers and some students believe that off campus is horrible. The reason why is : you won't have an actual human teaching you with online classes ,Video conference calls aren't great because most people aren't paying any attention to the teachers or student also you would need more assistance which is just unnecessary. Then finally you won't meet any people and you won't learn how to socialize at the end you won't learn how speak to people.

The school that offers these programs should just destroy these programs. Students should learn to how to go to school. Learn how to make friends,teachers,also day to day people. Just go get an education which is very important thing to do and that needs to happen if you want to do anything for the future the place they should just get an education is on a on campus school.

To the schools that offer the out of school education some that are at home,online,and video calls. Teachers and a lot of surveys show that having students with out of school education tend to have lower grades, more missing assignments,and less people in there lives. The facts just show that if you aren't at a on campus school,You're grades tend to be way lower then the average student on campus student. If you don't go to on campus schooling you will become social awkward. It's not fun staying home

With the online classes these days it has some benefits but the end of the day it's still a very bad distraction usual for example people love to watch television while doing work , but they aren't doing the assignment with 100 percent attention. If you want to get something done do it the right way. Also with the student they have many ways to cheat with any kind of education that's not on a on campus school cheating is 100 percent wrong not the right thing to do. Studies show that if you have two or more things that you are doing you are doing at the same time they aren't using there whole brain to do they're work. One of the major reason why online classes aren't good because you can just google the answers that's just cheating you aren't learning it's cheating.

Video Conference calls are just a waste of time. Students don't listen or even look at the screen to the call. It's just better and useful if you went to school. Just go to school you won't have to do calls and extra things like calling over and over again. Also it teaches you not to be lazy. If you go to school you wouldn't need to call or anything of the sort just go to school and get an education.

The school should destroy these programs and students need to go to an on campus school education or they won't be able to anything for the future for there education because they didn't pay attention or learn it well plus they won't have any friends to know them.

In conclusion students should be able to go to an on campus school just like the rest of us and meet new people and friends for the future.    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
78DD2317E359,"What Minister Churchill is trying to say is that going from failure to success is not gonna be easy in life. What could they do to reach their career and have success? People will agree with this statement. Not everyone is gonna succeed in life, we all make mistakes. People just got to try harder even if it takes years to achieve. Failure is not the end of the world, people just got to find what is best for them. Going from failure to success in life is not easy, but they just got to have the potential to reach that goal.

First, some people may tell others that going from failure to success is a good thing. For example, my friends told someone that playing basketball is not a good sport for him, but overtime he has gotten better at basketball. Most people in the world are gonna say ""practice makes perfect."" Another example is that my sister wanted to go to UVA, and she studied hard to get into that college, my family thought they wouldn't accept it, but a few weeks later, they accepted her in UVA. Things aren't gonna be easy, people just got to understand that it is life, we just got to work harder.

On the other hand, most people in the world experience this. There is not one person in the world that didn't have any issues throughout their whole life. Even in school, it is very unlikely to find someone that is not having a hard time with there classes. Everyone was not smart when they were born, people got to work for it to get smarter. Here is another example, my Math and History have good grades, but my English and Science don't have good grades, so not everyone is gonna have good grades, people have strengths and weaknesses, they just got to study and work because not everyone is perfect.

In addition, some others may say that going from failure to success is a waste of time. Others say that it won't help their career in the future. People think that there is a lot of information in school, college, and even a job that they have to go through just to have success in life. They also say that they have to work hard to pay for their house, their bills, health insurance, car insurance, and even for their family. The people in the world that say that it is a waste of time are the people that can be homeless or the people that just have no life at all.

Lastly, the reason why that everyone should always go from failure to success is because it's gonna make people feel good about there selves. Another reason why you should be successful is if people finish everything they need for their career, then they don't have to deal with it in the future than having to deal with it later. Also, it is a good idea if they study and learn the materials they could accomplish. Even if people don't succeed in life it is fine because they still have a chance, all they got to do is to study hard and work hard for it because in the future they will not regret it.          ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
04659704890C,"Having a good attitude is important if we want sucess. If you don't have good attitude in what we're doing then we can never get the things that we have to do done for for instance if I didn't have a good attitude everytime things got hard I wouldn't have done the things I did. Take for example If I would've had a bad attitude everytime something went wrong in my life I wouldn't be as happy as I am now because we all go through difficult times but how we choose to handlle it is way different.

Take famous people for example if they would've given up everytime people said horrible things to them they wouldn't Have as much money as the do now or famous as they are now. People who don't have good attitudes don't want other people to have success because they wish they had a good enough attitude to do what others are doing. If we decide to have a good attitude we can get more things done and accomplish way more then anyone else.

It's also nice to help other people with they're attitudes. By helping other people we can have way more success it's just simple if we want to accomplish more then we can help people with they're attitudes and help them get way more things done. Another example I have a friend and she didn't have a good attitude about her grades but she didn't want to work hard to improe them so I told her if she wanted to get her gades up she had to have a good attitude about them and she did the she started working harder and she improved so much.

Having a good attitude in life can help us out so much when we want to sucessced. It is important to have a positive outlook on life and not focus on the negative things. If we focus on the negative things to much we may forget to look at all the positive things in life. It's better to spend our time enjoying life instead of worrying about our problems alot. After all we only live once and if we spend our whole life being negative then we won't be happy in life. Being negative in life isn't how we want to spead out life if we focus on all the bad things in our life we will not sucessced at all.              ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
94C1C9CD10B7,"'If the school adds one hour and thirty minutes in a schools day'' honestly i dont agree nor disagree their some pros and con with this topic. The pros are that you learn more its good because schools get out earlier for the summer so their more summer days to enjoy. Another pro is if you have question on your homework the teacher can help you out by teaching you and you dont have to worry about the time because you have plenty of minutes to learn. Second If their were longer classes kids will lean more things and pay attention,if its their favorite class well it will be good for them because its longer. For me I love music class if i have more time in that class i could learn more things about music and i could be better player. Third pro it give us more time to hang out with our friends because your could be busy because they sports or church. Well for me i cant hangout with my friends because i have strict parents they wont let me get out of the house unless i have good also they don't let me hang out with friends so the only way i can see them is at school. Fourth pro is you can get to know your teacher and the students in the class you can learn many new thing about the teacher that you would never know about sometime its cool to hear their story because it could teach you something or can make you laugh. So i learn that their many good thing of having more time in a school day.

The cons of having one hour and thirty minutes in school day. First con is kids will be tired and they wont think that much or pay attention because all their energy is gone. The kids will be rude and wont do anything because they are tired or hungry. Well the only way to fix this to give them snack yeah that could help but how your going get the snack you have to buy them with money they are going to tell the kids to buy the snacks and the schools wont buy it. Second con is if the kid has doctor appointment they will go and the next day they will miss a lot of stuff in class and they make it up and the teacher wont teach it again because they have to move on and learn something new. Third con is classes will be harder because you have remember a lot of stuff for the test that your going to have that week. Honestly for me everyday when i get home i take a nap if dont have that nap i will be mad all night so many other kid could be just like me when they dont get a nap they are really rude so that bad for them ant the teachers also you will see kids falling asleep and teacher will yell at them. So i learn that their many not so great things of having more time in school.

In the end they are many good like getting help for work and their may bad things like getting tired. So having more time in school is good and bad .    ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
475AAF4D130E,"Most successful people keep study new carrers or leanirng new tasks to do in order to became even wealthier and to not get bored of doing the same job daily. Ralph Emerson states that, you will never grow if you do not try something new that you already know. Meaning that if people do not expand their knowledge after of what they already know they will never accomplish more to became more successful in life. However, if you are willing to expand you horizons and break out the comfort zone, you will grow and achieve higher goals. Trying something new of what you already mastered help people to grow because it lead people will live real experiences and it provide more opportunities. and it break the comfort zone.

To star with, the more people learn, the more opportunities they have. Opportunities are provide for people that are open to learn new things and grow in what they do. For instance, I have been working in a part-time in a salad place for two years. The first year I learned all the work stations which I was really good at it. After a year, I realized that it was the time to expand my knowledge and also to ask for a raise. I became a valid trainer in all the store's stations. Now I teach new workers and assist them how to do their task in the correct way and they are paying me better. This shows that if I would not be open to learn how to be a trainer at the store, I would not be paying as well as today. Being capable to try something new offer better opportunities in order to grow rather than getting stuck in the same place without trying to achieve higher goals.

Moreover, the desire to try different things make people to live many wonderful experiences. If people never expand their horizons , they will never experiences the adventures life has to offer. For instance, Last summer I went to a campus in a university to get more information about careers that I was interested in. I meet wonderful students from other schools and learned computer science. The teachers provided me the information and requirements to get into the University and the different classes that I have to take in order to get a degree in computer sciences. Also, we practiced several methods to create graphs and draw in the computers. Since, I visited that place I got more convince to study computer science in the future and it is a experience that I will never forget because I realized that I have the skills to study that career as my major. If I would not go , I will never notice that I could study computer science in the out coming. Learning new things lead to live and learn experiences that help people to grow in their future.

As can be seen,

it is better to try something new because people can explore experiences that will never forget and and they will learn new things to became even more successful in their lives. People have the right to never stop learning and get new skills that will prepared them for whatever they want to accomplish and change about their routine. If the whole world have the willing to keep learning despite they are mastered in something already, they will be more professionals and a wealthier society.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
93B8C8DAFE20,"Doing projects at school is really fun when it comes to working in groups. I think working in a groups is more beneficial because of the extra help you'll have. You wont have to work a lot because your group will help and share the project so that everyone has a chance in it. Group projects will show you how to work with others and maybe even help you make new friends. Projects of any kind will look and be better when in groups, lots of ideas will be on the table for everyone to look and pick from.

Working at school is hard. You get lightheaded and maybe even get tired. Group projects are so helpful because the project will be split up into parts where everyone in your group can take a part of it, all they have to do is post it together when finished. Having not to do all of it by your self is super nice.

Another beneficial gift in working in groups is that you will be able to learn teamwork. Learning that is a good skill because you'll need teamwork for your life time. New people, classmates, workers, and much more will want to work with you because of how you and your team get along with one another.

Projects of all kinds have to look good. Lets say your having a hard time trying to find the perfect color background for your poster. You can talk to your classmates who are in your group and ask them if they have any ideas of what color you should pick. Together you can find the perfect color and together you can make your project look perfect and maybe be the one that has the best project in your who class.

Group working is so much better for everyone because you'll learn teamwork, learn that you'll always have help when you need it, and your projects will always look good and perfect. The more people in your group, the more help, care, and ideas you'll have for your project. You'll learn something new from all of this and others will to. This is why I think working in groups is more beneficial for schools and jobs. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
FE1D0E5EA2EB,"The Author Waldo Emerson wrote ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"". I agree with Waldo Emerson's quote because if theres someone thats trying to make you something that your not, being yourself will be a very duanting task. When I was in the 8th grade someone who I thought was one of my friends wanted me to change who I was because they though that I was'nt cool enough to hangout with anymore, at first i thought that I was the problem, but I learned that true friends won't try to change who you are, no mather what. Being yourself is one of the hardest things you can try to do, possible because your to shy, you don't think your good enough, your scared of what others will think of you.

I always hated thinking about myself because i never though that I was good enough for anyone or good enough to do anything, so I kept everything bottled up inside, at one point or another I even thought about killing myself but was to scared to do antthing to try anything. So I decided acted like everything was ok untill I tricked my self into belaveing that I was happy, but that did'nt last. Now i'm in the 11th grade I came across a certen individuality(my current girlfriend) who, when I around, can't stop feeling real happyness. Everyday I think about how lucky I am to have met her. The Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment, as an individual I agree with his quote because in this world not everone wants to see you sucssed in your efferts.",3.0,4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
D95B78E39793,"It is 21st century people have their own opinion and decisions. Human revolutionary has changed drastically over the time. People now are smart and makes wise decisions on their daily basis. However, people tend to take risk upon their decisions without any consultancy with experts and authorities.

People should always seek guidance from experts and authorities whenever they are making any big decisions. It will be more easier for them to choose options when they seek guidance from someone who already knows about it. People often tend to make wrong decisions when they make decisions by themselves. A lot of celebrities have their personal guidance which is their manager. Manager makes a thoughtful decisions for celebrities to keep them on track of their career. If celebrities tend to make their own decisions many celebrities would go downfall in their career.

The decisions people make should be thoughtful and have guidance from experts. Christopher from into the wild book, he is one of the example for to take advise from experts or else people will end up like Chris. Christopher did not take any guidance from anyone while going into the wild of Alaska alone. He did not have any good materials to take with and didn't ask for help. MC candles died into the wild of Alaska because he was not prepared for the trip he was going into. This is exactly why people should take advise, if he would have taken any advice what so ever he would most likely have survived in the Alaska wilderness. He chose not to take any guidance which is the reason he died into the wilderness.

Everyone wants to have a successful life but not everyone gets it. If people wants to have a success in their life they have make right decisions or seeking the guidance from experts. There are only few people who people who succeeded in their career while making their own decisions even if they succeeded on their own they will need a manager to keep on track of their career. Person who seeks lot of advises from experts and authorities tend to be on advantages on their business. It will be more reliable to make a big decisions while seeking advice from expert rather than making it all alone. People are more likely to take a wrong decisions while doing it alone.

Overall, everyone should seek guidance from experts and authorities while making the decisions. It will be always more beneficial to have a advise while making big decisions in life or else people will end up like Christopher from into the wild.        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
81B5D8CBA063,"The limitation of human contacted due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people. It prevents the young generation of today basis social skills. It allows bulling on the internet. It also allows trolling on the internet.

First, Technology interferes with student social skills. For example, the student walks into the class room they are in their phones 24/7 of the day. In the class room the students are on the computers playing video games instead of interacting with one another. In a way people are trapped in their own world it stops people from learning about them self and others.

Second, someone can post a video to make a person feel bad about them self attempt suicide. Or a person can post a picture where their drunk and they post it on Facebook and tag them on it and on Instagram. I saw a video on YouTube.

A girl from Australia is getting bullied online, and at school also on the intent and her family had to move at lest 3 time because of this issue.

Lastly charting rooms where you can meet serial killers. fake news post on Twitter spreading rumors for an example

Michelle Obama is running for president in 2020.

The limitation, First, it percent the young generation basis social skills. Secondly it allows bulling on the internet. Lastly it also allows trolling on the internet. In my opinion we should turn off our phones for at lest 1 to 2 day and going out to eat with our friends with out our phones. In school teachers should wait for students out side the door with a box so they can't use their phones during class. So on bulling last longer and that goes beyond the internet so in conclusion should be more stricter, technology limits people talking about their issues.                     ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
DE56AA9B4BF1,"Every students desperately waits for the weekends. Because they hate all the school days. But believe me, adding one and a half hours to schools will be beneficial to all the students for their future. The school board should add one and a half hours to school each day because the students can learn more, they can use their time wisely, they can improve the understanding skills of the students.

The school board should add one and a half hours to school day because all the students can learn more. A long time period can make all the students to get a good knowledge about their chapter or topic, So, most of the students might started to get good grades on their tests. The students can take their time to do their own work. So, all of them can discuss about their projects. Sometimes the students can finish their homeworks during the class periods. That might save the time for everyone. Firstly, the students can get some more knowledge is a reason why the school boards should add one and a half hours to school each day.

Another reason is, all the students can use their time wisely in the class. The students will be more into their study at that time rather than their phones. So, the time will be more useful to them. The students can finish their all work in the class. So, they can get some extra time to spend with their family and relatives. Sometimes, the students can get some extra time to read books. And that can improve their reading skills. Secondly, using the time properly is another reason why the school board should add one and a half hours to school each day.

Although, some people may argue that, adding one and a half hours to school each day is stressful to all the studens. But, believe me or not, all the teenage students are always on their phones. So, it isn't a bad idea to add one and a half hours to school each day. At least, they can't be in the touch of their electronic devices for one and a half hours! Lastly, for a better understanding skills the school board should add one and a half hour to school each day. The teachers can explain the chapter or the topic by taking their time. So, the students will understand the chapter more better. The students will be more responsible and the teachers will teach the students with a good understanding level. That will be more beneficial for the whole class. Good learning or understanding skills is the last reason why the school board should add one and a half hours to school each day.

Adding one and a half hour to school is beneficial to all the students for their future. Because they can learn more about their topic, their time will be used more wisely for them, they will understand the subject better. The students will finish their work in time. they can read books, they can discuss about their projects and stuff, the teachers will get some extra time explain the errors or problems. The students future will be more brighter!",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
4DBF966A37CA,"Is our past our future?

Many people won't grow, for the simple reason that they still live in the past, want to repair a mistake from the past, and miss somebody or something they had before.

Is totally true and the reason behind it if we don't let our past go as humans we know that at a certain time those things might come back and probably will hurt us a little bit more than the first time.

Living the past is something not easy but we have to understand that there are so many good and bad times in life. That sometimes, whenever something happen to us when get stuck and stop doing what you were doing for that moment . We feel like it will be the ed of the world because once something happen happens we felt like that little mistake will the fine our future but when is not five to six months can pass and we still living in the past. We still living in something that instead for us to stop us it showed us a lesson on how things in life work because we think we can't do anything that will fix our mistakes we've done in life.

Repairing certain things in our lives something could be harder than it seems the reason why is we feel we've do many bad things that all we feel inside of if that we're guilty for the simple reason that we just don't fin a solution and we feel like we've hurt eve the one around us when probably it was just something that life wanted us to happen to teach us a lesson and learn from it, but we see it on a negative way like if it happen only God knows why this and that happened to me like it was the biggest things of our lives.

When people had gotten hurt in the past sometimes is one of those painfullest things because once someone had hurt us we don't socialist with people when that's when also you are hurting people by not talking to them by not doing anything and because at once someone fail to us we don't want to trust anybody for a simple of one person when it shouldn be like that we juts have to learn how to forgive the ones that ave hurt us in he past but we felt like that is not the right thing to do.

in all of this three thing we just have to learn how to live with it our past won't define who you are right now or who your are going to be in a few years we just have to learn to live no matter what we all have situation in life that we right felt down at some point but if you fall just get up and continue the race.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
D42B6354404D,"Dear Principal

I think we students should at least have a B average to play sports, that would make it fair for who tries their best in school, but i bet that those who really love sports would try their best in all their classes. Students who do not try their be st and don't like sports they could just stay with whatever grade they get because they deserve it. Students who also have a bad attitude should not get to play either. If students really want to play sports or join activities they would really try hard not to be bad. If students have a 69 or below they should not let them play sports until they have a passing grade.

If many of the students have a C average they should try harder on their work for those who love sports and who like to join activities. I bet students who have a C average are mad because they cant play sports until they get a C average. I would like to convince the principal that they should at least get a B average. All students have to do is listen in class and pass all the test that teachers give out so you could pass the class and be able to pass your class and you'll be able to play what ever sport you want.

Students and people who try their best will always get everything they want because they do everything said and everything they tell them to do. doing everything they ask you to do will make you a good person. If you try your best you will get to play sports and join in activities you like. Your decision depends on you if you make a good decision you will get what you want if you don't you don't get everything that you want.

Love,

STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
90F73F20ECF0,"something I want to accomplish in the future is to play on a professional soccer team . I want to accomplish this because soccer is my main sport, If I had a chance to play in a professional soccer team it would be amazing. One specific team is Barcelona, Because Barcelona is one of the best soccer team in the world winning a lot of trophies. They won the champion five time, they also won ""La Copa Del Rey."" Barcelona they got a lot of good player they got Messi,pike,Ansu fati,Luis Suares, and Griezman.

I'm a Barcelona fan if I had i chance to play for Barcelona it would be a dream come true for me. I would be so happy for the rest of my life playing as a professional soccer player. And one last thing I also want to play for my country as a professional soccer player. Because my country is not good they have lost to many other country but they haven't won any game so I want to change that. I want to make my country win a lot of game not just getting destroy by other country. I want somebody that can change the way they play i want they to play in a good way.

The player who is going to change how my country plays is me. I want to change how they play I don't want my country loosing a lot of game my country need to win a lot of game. One day I will accomplish that I would be the player who change my country but not just win game, win the World Cup for the first time in History of my country. That would be a dream come true again, and then Avery person in the team is going to be happy about winning the World Cup.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
8A2A9C25B642,"Why seek peoples opinions? Learning to relay on different informational sources. Searching for information with one source won't help you. It's good to listen to peoples thoughts and reaction. You might agree or disagree and whine about a subject. Having a argument is a way of dealing with people. Arguments aren't always bad. Arguments make you talk and reason with people. It's good for listening to other thoughts.

The important of not being basis. Sometimes people only listen to they're point of view. They are on one sided scale and basis. Not basis is examine both sides. Asks questions like. Why is this idea more important than others? Does have depth? Is the idea understandable and matter? Is true or false? Theses kinds of questions are needed. Finding the better response.

Determining the right course of action. The proper thinking process for doing the action. People use techniques to make good decisions. Not guessing what you want to do. But searching what needs to be done. Do planing step by step thinking. Because people want to make a good expression. On they're thoughts and possibly they're feelings. In order for you understand what they feel.

The best way to judge a persons idea. First you need to look what they're idea is. Second give destructive criticism on what it lacks and needs. Third give more negative and positive feedback on the idea. Fourth help them improve structures of the idea. Finally they do a self checklist and make correction. These general stragaries people use to check a persons thinking. Because sometimes needs to be revised.

Trust other peoples opinion and look over them. Your able to relay on others and they're way of thinking. A source of information you can reflect a pond. Listening to peoples knowledge on they're point of view. Their are questions to make sure your not basis. Hep you make good decisions. To express thoughts and feelings they might have. Give destructive criticism to improve they're ideas. A time of opinions matter.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
B083862AF3B4,"There are many students that has the possibility to take class at home. The students that take class at home are benefit because they don't need to leave from home, they can stay in home if are sick, and they can't be absent, because they always stay in home.

There are many reasons for explain that takes classes from home is a good idea, this are some of them:

First, the students that take class at home don't need to leave from home, nothing can detain take classes. The weather changes don't affect to take a class, if is snowing, raining or are a hurricane in the city.

The parents of the students that take class from home can be more unsuspecting, because they sons are in home, also this is benefit for the parents of students that take classes from home; they can be sure that nothing danger can be happen to they sons. The student don't have any excuses for be absent. This is good for the students because they at final a year has perfect attendance.

Second, the students that take class at home just can be absent, if they need to stay in home and don't take some class, they have the opportunity to explain to the teacher by text or just a call, then the teachers need to ask to your parents if is necessary don't take classes because you don't feels good. The students that take a regular classes in the schools can't do this because they need to be in the school everyday , if not in this case the correspondent sub school has the obligation to put absent in the class day.

Finally, the students that take class at home can't missing a class, they don't have the possibility to missing the bus or miss some useful for the school. The students can't forget the computer, pencil, notebook or other things that we use in school, because they have all classes online, this can be positive for the students that stay in home at care to they parents the student can't has some distractions that sometimes has in the school, like talk with any friend, use a inappropriate language to the teacher or don't pay attention, if can be some possibility to the student miss some class; they can take the missing class latter.

In conclusion, take a classes from home is a good choice because stay in home, do not have any absent if are sick, and don't missing class, are a good idea for take classes at home, the benefits that this have are good for parents and students that need to have more family time, or need to have more time with they sons. A reason that take classes in the schools take a big part time of students, this is a good choice because the students don't need go to the school just stay in home ,add that, this is a good choice for some students that need to stay in home, with they brothers or they parents.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
DBAE7F4F7837,"The reasons i would argue for students and teachers having a after school program. Fist, the student will have more knowledge. Second , When students are in private with teachers the teachers will teach them new stuff. Finally , So they students can study for quiz and test and pass the quiz and test. There's more reasons but those are my reasons.

When you go to school you learn. The longer you stay the more you learn more . The more you learn the easier it is to get in collage . Collage looks at people who learn a lot so the after school program is gonna make them have a better future. Learn more and youll have a better career.

When you get tough new stuff it can be fun to learn about the new stuff your learning about . So when you learn new stuff you can be ahead of your class. Learning new stuff can make you twenty percent smarter than you usually are. Learning new stuff can get you a better job in the future.

There's always time to learn new stuff .

By going to a after school program you can study for quiz and test. If you get a good grade on mostly all your test then your gonna have good grades and thats a fact. quizzes are mini test so you should also try to pass them because both are huge deals. Passing test can bring your grade from a F to a C+. Passing quizzes can bring your grade from a F to a D+. So they bring you from a failing grade to a passing grade.

Teachers and Students Volunteer to meet with those who either have difficulty in a certain subject or wanna finish there homework .

Why is it after school ? ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
7740DF009E10,"Did you know that staying active is the path to accomplish our goals? Staying active not only hepls us with our goal, but with health too. To achieve our dreams we have to keep fighting and take the long run. Our knowledge is gather by all the activities we have than since we were only childs. In my opinion, 1. we can accomplish more if we stay active,

2. Activities helps us gain knowledge and expiriences, 3. We build self-steam and confidence in ourselves.

First, we can discover and implement more if we can stay active. For example, we have a higher rate of winning if we are pertinacious. In the other hand, its wonderful to enjoy the world and whats around us. To sum up, descovering new places and getting involve are the most important moments in life. Having an active life can help us in the future.

Second, Activity help us gain knowledge and experiences. such as, growth of our brain and skills. It keep us healthy and stronger. For instance, performing new activities hepls us have an inquiring mind. If we are always doing something that will become a habit and it will make as a more mature, inteligent person. If we are always doing our objectives will be stronger.

Third, we build self-steam and confidence in ourselves. For example, our character grows and develop in a stronger and confident personallity. Our rate of achivement will be higher. Moreover, we stay strong as a person. To keep on doing you have to get out there and give everything you have. To conclude, doing will always have a purpose.

In conclution, we can accomplish more by doing. Activities play an important role on our daily life. Winning in any type of sport or at work makes us feel positive about ourselves. Our determinations have to be very complex. Being part of a team and have interaction with other people can be very supporting.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
7203112033A1,"Hello my name is Generic_Name and I am here to tell you why I think, distance learning is a good idea, rather then a bad idea. I will be giving you three diffrent points of view, and why it wouldn't be a bad idea for some of us. My first opinion on distance learning would be, maybe he or she gets bullied for the classes they take and dont want to be in school no more. My second opinion would be if your not in school range and your parents can't drive you to school on time, then you could easily stay home, pull out your phone, computer, or tablet and do you work on it. My third opinion would be why not try it you know maybe you'll like it.

1 OPINION: Everyone one knows school is very hard for everyone, nowadays school is based off of how you dress, or the way you walk, or just in general who you are. I used to get bullied in school a lot but ever since I switched to online school I've never felt better I get all my work done, the teachers are so nice to me, there very patient and polite, and I dont have to put up with nobody's crap from school. It was a good switch for me, and it'll be a good switch for you too!

2 OPINION: Every where you live there is always one problem, school range. I know its hard for everyone to find a ride to school or maybe it isn't, but say one day you move and u can't find a ride to school the next week and you dont have a ride cause your parents can't take you cause they're running late for work, or you just missed the bus and your house is to far from the school. Well that's why you've been given the option for online school. Would you take it ? I would because iw ouldn't have to stress on trying to get up on time, and trying on clothes for school, or finding something to eat all in a rush. I love online school cause i can get up at whatever time i want to. I wouldn't ave to make my parents late for work every now and then. Also you can start your assignments on your time, say like your not busy u can start it then but you have to do them because there are new assignments everyday. So think about it for a minute and see why it might be a good option for you.

3 OPINION: Why not just try it. I think you guys or girls, or whatever should give it a try because not everyone has the privilege to have sort of secondary learning challenge I think that if your try it just like I did. The price for online school is around from 150-200 dollars, I know it might sound a little exspensive but its worth every penny you spend. So dont hesitate to try it you'll love it.

In conclusion I think it is a good thing to do distance school because it gives you benefits you've never gotten before and it might turn out to be the best decision you ever made in your son, or daughter life. So dont hesitate to call, call right now if you can I love it and they will to.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
EC2758A5B74E,"Dear School board,

Why does a student's education matter? To me, it is extremely important because it can affect them for their entire life in positive or in negative ways. It could lead them to a job with a seven figure salary, or to work a part-time job at a fast food restaurant making minimum wage. What's also important to me is the learning experience. I believe learning should be fun, interesting, and not stressful for students. That's why I agree with the school board's plan to extend the school day by one and a half hours, because that way, students wouldn't feel rushed and would have more time to learn, teacher will have more time to teach and using new ways, and the school year would be a little shorter.

To begin with, I agree with the school board to extend the school day because students wouldn't feel rushed and they would have more time to learn. Right now, each of our periods are only about 50 minutes, which I think really isn't a lot of time to learn once you start working. If one and a half hours is added to the current school day, we would have at least an hour for each class. This way, the students would have more time to complete projects, assignments, or just have more time to really understand the subject without feeling rushed. I know this because right now, I am working on a project in science class that we only have two class periods to finish, which totals for just about one and a half hours! I am not saying that a little push isn't necessary or beneficial, but the extra time would definitely boost the quality of the student's work at our school without rushing them.

Secondly, I think the school board should increase the school day by one and a half hours because that will let teachers have more time to teach, while using unique ways to do so. With the students having more time to learn, the teachers could potentially also have more time to actually create a better learning experience. Extending the day ensures that teachers would be able to thoroughly explain new concepts and materials, while also teaching using better or more effective methods that wouldn't have been possible because of the shortage of time. For instance, sometimes we have educational scavenger hunts, where the teacher lays the information throughout the campus and we would have to find them. The issue is, we've never been able to finish, not because it wasn't possible to, but because there simply wasn't enough time. Those kinds of educational activities are, in my opinion, very fun, but it's also effective. So if we have more time, I am sure that some teachers would plan and teach more using different ways which are beneficial to both the student and the teacher.

Lastly, the school board's plan to extend one and a half hours to the school day is something I strongly concur with because school will be out earlier in the summer. While I do enjoy school very much, I think summer break is something that everyone looks forward to. The days that are cut down because of the increased time allows students to attend more activities and spend more time together with their families. Even though the students aren't at school, they could still be learning something new on their own. For example, they could be learning how to play an instrument, training for sports, or learning how to speak another language, which are all very helpful for them. Also, the teachers could be attending conferences which let's them collaborate with other teachers on creating newer and more efficient methods to teach, which will help everyone in the long run.

In conclusion, the reasons why I agree with the school board to extend the hours are because students wouldn't feel rushed, teachers would have more time to teach in unique ways, and school will be out sooner in the summer. Although I think there are many more reasons why the school day should be longer, those are the main ones. There are just so many benefits that this extended time would create; possibly having an effect on the entire community. This is not an immense amount of change but it can be a big success, which is why I think you should really consider extending the school hours.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",5.0,5.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5
0B478E81218B,"People should go seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters because a lot of people in this world are very isolated, like they are always to themselves, sometimes you can notice when people are going through things. People always need somebody to be by their side, it's not good to stay isolated it could make you go crazy. Fifty percent of all people go through depression, anxiety attacks and mental breakdowns because there's nobody there to help them, sometimes when you try to help they just either ignore you or they just don't want to be spoken too that means they haven't been seeking help. A person who has a companion can be going through things too you know, but they express themselves to their best friend but for more help you can talk to your specialist doctor. Doctors and authorities are really a good help, they hear you out and always agree with you. Experts should be people who are very close to you it could be a neighbor, family relative, family members, your boss, coworkers and even your friends.

Authorities sometimes don't really help you when your having mental breakdowns because sometimes they don't care or it's not their business. Life is way bigger than you think, don't take it for granted always be grateful that your living to this day. The Environment should be peaceful, calming and not to over dramatic always be positive in your life don't let anybody bring you down, Life is important, live it up to the best, In other places like work or school always express yourself usually at work you ideas but your not show if you should share them, don't be shy share your thoughts on new things. Sometimes at work it's hard for you to share what you are thinking even at school, a lot of people have to over think their ideas because they think it's not good enough, that makes them lose precious time because time is usually short and you need all the time you can get, it's better to go seek help because your struggling to think of a good idea.

Most of the people in this world are really good at making their own decisions because they have nothing really to worry about, they like to be independent and always get things done quicker that way. For some people it's really not that easy for them to get their work done because they have a huge struggle in their life, they need the help, but sometimes they don't ask because they don't want embarrass themselves in front of others that work independently. Everyone deserves to be treated fairly and equal, the world needs to open their eyes sometimes because a lot of people are taking their life because they don't receive they need, day and night, sixty percent of people in this world work hard to live, they work hard to cover your monthly bills, groceries, clothes and gas if they have a car. People who make low income deserve a big chance so they can maintain themselves, when you in situation like that look for people you know and ask what they work for, it might match what like to do. People who are struggling to maintain rent and other important things they can always seek for government assistance.

People are living in this world for a reason, they need to survive and live their life. Everybody got to do what they got to do sometimes when it comes to surviving, there is a lot of single family dad's and mom's in this world, most of the time they can't even maintain their kids and home. It's a good idea to always have someone in your life they motivate you and care for you, they do much more because their here for you no matter the situation, Always have help beside you, you will need it. A lot of people who are alone and make their own decisions, don't have families and friends, they just rather do their way because they know what they are doing. Not everyone is the same, everyone has different problems and they usually go through them alone, sometimes they don't know how to think and how to live. At the end of the day there has to be someone out there that can help you with your life, your never alone always remember that. Some people who try their hardest usually pays off even though they go through struggles but they have to be independent sometimes thats how you learn to be responsible and no one is always there to hold your hand sometimes you got to give it your all, just believe in yourself over time you will succeed",3.0,2.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
0E03218FDD2F,"Educators say that students should have shorter breaks because, students don't retain information as easily when they return, its better if students spend more time in school rather than taking long breaks, summer breaks are better when they are shorter. Some students say having long breaks gives them time to relax and not having to worry about school for a couple of weeks is a good thing. One day on my summer break me and my friends were discussing on how much we love our long summer breaks. We also realized that having a long summer break is only fair because we spend so many hours in school everyday.

Summer breaks are better when they are shorter because, students dont forget as much information that they learned during school. Its better to come back and still remember the stuff you learned. Just imagine coming back after a 5 week break, I doubt students would be able to take a test right away. We need shorter breaks because if students spend to much time away from school they'll forget the important things they've learned. Students should consider spending more time in school rather than spending all there time on their breaks.

Spending more time in school is more important than spending longer weeks out of school not learning anything. Students must realize that their education is more important than spending time off of school. School teaches us what we need to know for the future, it prepares us for the next stage of life. They need to realize that they need to learn us much as they can, the more effort put into school work and learning the better the outcome. Life shows us that you can't just get a job without knowing anything, you can't sign up if you don't know your basic math or basic reading. Some students think school is a waste of time but honestly it's preparing us for the stuff we need to know.

Students do not retain information as easily when they return. Those long breaks really take a toll on the students, they return to school and don't have a clue on how to solve a basic problem. The more time students have out of school the more it drains their memory on what they've learned. Coming back on an empty brain not knowing anything isn't good at all because what if a student had an exam on the day he or she returned, do you think they'd pass? Having a shorter break would improve a lot of things.

In conclusion, it'd be so much better if breaks were shorter than they usually are. Students would be able to come back and easily answer a question and get it right. The less time on break the better, school should be the main priority for students. Im sure that some of the students would love to pass their classes. Overall we know that having a shorter break would improve the learning skill for all students. I agree that our breaks should be shorter so we could stay on track and keep p our good work.  ",4.0,4.5,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0
99A3641592CA,"Do you think immagination is more important than knowledge? Why do you think it's important? Let's see why I think it's important! Well think about this you have the knowledge, but you never immagine things that you think you can't do. If you just immagine or think bigger about what you want or what you want to do. One day you will achive your goal or dream.

One of the reason why I think immagination is importantant is that if you don't immagine what you want to do in future as your job or hobby. When your in school your not going to try your best and show effort. If you don't learn anything at school when you are older to get a job, your not going to get the job you want, because wherever you are there will be someone that want the same job as you but trying harder than you, learning harder than you, and showing more effort than you. Which means effort creates achivements. For example, you went to an interview for a job at a store to be a cashier and there are 15 people that want to be cashier. But they only need one. So first they asked everyone what do you do when the costumer comes in. One of them said you have to smile and say hey, do you need help with anything? and you said you continue doing whatever your doing. Who do you think there going to pick? Of course the first one right? because she showed them effort and willing to do the job. That why you have to immagine what you want to do in future and try your best in school.

Second reason is that you have your knowledge, but if you don't immagine or think bigger your not going achive big things in your life. The people who failure in life are the people who quit something one step away from success. That's what a lot of people do. But the people who successed in life are the people who took the step that a lot people quit which the hardest step to take. For example, you want to start a company, but the people around you said that your not going to success. Although they said that you started a company anyways. After a month no one wanted to invest you company. You kept asking people to invest your company. So one person did, with that money you payed the bill. Then nothing happened to your company. But if you stop asking people when no one wanted to invest your company your company would of been closed. So you have to immagine thing and use your knowledge to achive them.

Third reason is you have to immagine things as your dream and get a lot of knowledge by learning at school. When I was little I wanted to become a docter when I grow up. Then I started immagining to help and more stuff. When I go to school. I told myself you have to be good at science, math and other subject to become a docter. So I will have knowledge about things that you have to know to become docter. so you have to get a lot of knowledge to achive the things you immagine.

So I think immagination is more important than knowledge. But knowledge is still really important. I feel like everything starts with immagination first. Then you go to school to get your knowledge increase every year. You work really hard to make immagination becomes reality.    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
33ADAAB38BFC,"Should students be allowed to have cell phones during school? I think that students shouldn't be able to have cell phones at school at all because first its to distracting and the student wont be learning anything because he/she would be occupied doing something there not supposed to be doing. Second is school is a leaning environment not a place to be doing other things with your cell phone we come to school to learn! The third why i think having cell phones on campus is because we all have ore free time to do whatever we have to do.

The first reason why i think havening cell phones on school campus is because its really distracting and we wont learn anything because well be occupied on our cell phones. For example , we need to forces on more important things such as school work and maybe after school activates. I think we shouldn't be able to have our phones because 50% of students that have cell phones fail there classes because while the teacher is explaining something important the student us either messing around or texting another student which is not only affecting he/she but others around them.

The second reason why i think cell phones shouldn't be allowed on school campus is because school is a place to learn not use your phone in class. We come to school for one reason and one reason only at that is to go to school and get the education we need for a better future and all of the above. We need to help all students get ahead of life and have good jobs that they could all be proud of.

The third reason why i think having cell phones at school is a bad idea is because we all have free time i do understand we also have to have a social life and communicate with other students or peers. Not everything is fun and games sometimes we just need to expect the what our parents do what they do because they love and care about us.

We shouldn't be able to have cell phones because honestly its just a waste of time and we could do so much better and if we do a good job in school than we would have time for other things because in life there is time for everything but it also has its own time. we shoulnt be abl",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
5EF21F142C51,"Have you ever wanted to seek others opinion on a choice that you had to make?.Seeking others opinion on a choice you have to make is right. I think seeking others opinion on a choice that you have to make is good,because people can help you make the right choice for your self,learn what they would do if they had to make the same choice as you,and learn new ways on making that choice

One way you can seek someone's opinion on a choice that you have to make,is by asking people what they would do if they had to make the same choice as you. by doing this you will known their opinion on making that choice. Most people don't ask others on what choice they should make,because they think that people would make fun of them on making a choice on a certain topic. For example when someone has to make a choice on if they would buy some toy against buying a video game. I too have been in that type of problem. Another example is making a choice between wanting to get something you like but there are more than one things you could get and your friend making fun of what you say you want to get. To sum up my first reason of why it is good to seek people's opinion on making a choice,because you then can use others opinion to make your choice.

Another reason of why you should seek others opinion to make a choice is to get help on making the correct choice. One way you can get help with deciding on a choice is by learn the steps of make a choice. One way I learned the steps of making a choice was from a book my mom had got me to read. The steps of making a choice are first think of all the choices you have,then checking which ones you like and they suit you,and finally making your choice!.One other way is to ask friends and family to help you decide on your choice. A example for asking your friends and family to help you make you choice is,One day you had went to the video game store and you see two video games you really want but you only have $70 to spend,so you ask your brother on which one you should get and he says the racing one,but you don't known if you should save more money so next time you get both or just buy one now.

Lastly,My final reason for why seeking others opinions to make a choice is right,because you can learn different ways of how you can make your choice. One way you can make your choices is by finding all the possible outcomes. Another way you can decide on what choice is by asking friends and family give you ideas on the different choices you have and which ones are the best for you. An example from my life I have is,one time I was going to the ice shop and me and my brother did not known what favor to get,so I said why don't we try the new favor,because we had not ate before,so I think my idea for what we should get was good,because I came up with a new choice that we never had thought of before.

In Conclusion,seeking people's opinions on making a choice is good. I think seeking others opinions on a choice you have to make is right,because you can learn what they would have done if they had to make the same choice,help you make the right decision,and learn new ways on making that choice.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
389752B5BECF,"Generic_Name

18/Oct/2018

Schools offering online or video conferencing distancing learning for students is a great idea. Its a great asset for students because they can learn and work their assignments on home or cross the country. Help students with high anxiety that they can finish their assignment on safe working place for them. Many students surfer from anxiety or other social disability this program can help them get their work done with out any problem. This program can help students to learn in a comfortable place for them and learn cross the country.

A person around the world can use theses online classes to get their education from the schools far away to them. A students that lives in India can take classes from a school in America that can help young adults to go to schools without traveling or leaving their love ones. This program can help students not paying high trips or travels for going to their schools.

That can help students save money and a safe and comfortable learning place. Students that live in cross the world can try benefit from this program.

If students are sick and the schools have this benefit, they can learn at home and their grades wont fall down. Students can do their work online and watch the conferencing videos to catch up in their home.

A student name Generic_Name was sick for 3 days and couldnt go to school; He watch the videos on home and did all of his work online. Generic_Name said that this program help him to not fail those 3 days and to not fall apart. The teacher and the schools were happy with the program did to the students.

Students with high anxiety and social disability could benefits with this program by staying in comfortable learning place. Student name Generic_Name, she have couple social disability and extremely high anxiety and couldn't go to school because of this. This program help her pass all her class with no worry of anxiety attacks or other social disability. She finished her work online, and she ask for help during videos conferencing if she didn't understood the topic. Generic_Name could have fail her school year without this program, this program benefit her to succeed school year.

This program can really benefit students and change the ways of we learn. Students living cross the world could learn to their schools that are in different countries that they wont need to spend high money to travel cross the world. Students that were sick couldn't go to schools they could do it in their home. Students with high anxiety and social disability could work in their comfortable work place and pass their class. The program can benefit students for helpig them learn.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
7F1F55F771F9,"I agree with the adoption about the midnight weekend however this did not mean that i agree the 10 p. m weekday curfew.

Although many of the teenagers are constantly restricted nevertheless, the teenagers more younger`s that 18 has their own`s responsibilities and obligations to themselves and for their families because, the teenager`s need education, a home and money.

The teenager`s need education, being from elementary until high school grades. In 5 or 10 years in the future the teenager been the support from the economy, the country and the next generation.

A home the teenager`s need a place to call ""home"" that place where him not only can relax, rather he should be tranquil and save from the rest of the world; that place where you know that someone is to waiting for you with a smile and food, sure will be you should reprimand but you know that is for your well-being and future.

Logically the money is the more important fact in the teenagers life, to won it is necessary to get a part-time job or work in the weekend, that is where is the problem to obtain money the teenager`s from 16 to 18 year`s has to use their value time after school to work. The part-times are approximate 6 hours; if a student work from 4. pm to 9p. m there is no problem, but if a student work between the curfew from 5p. m to 10p. m the big problem is that the teenagers will been accused be breaking the law when it did not happen is just a unfairly interference from the city.

In summary: The children`s from today will be the teenager of tomorrow and the adults from the new generation.

a home is the best place to a teenager to feel comfortable, save and tranquil. The money is the most important think for a teenager in the present and for their future and the time is a necessary value to get it.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
FF7FE6BD8509,"I agree that first impression is almost impossible to change. No matter what you always want to stand out of the crowd and show the best of you. People are always going to think of you of how you first were when they met you.

The first impression isn't just about you acting in a certain way. Its also about you showing them your character but most important to get them thinking good things about you. I have three examples of why first impression is important. My first example is that Generic_Name want's his parent's to meet his girlfriend. He thinks thats her first impression of how she acts or on how she greets her self toward's them is something his parents are going to be looking at. Most Guys like Generic_Name want their girlfriend to have a good first impression so their parents like her. Then second example is on the first day of school teacher's always want to give their student's a good first impression about them. Either on how they teach or how smart and fun they are or anything so the students like them. Last but not least my third example is when a school goes on a field trip to a museum or to another school. They want to have a good first impression on any other school that's there or anyone one because, you're representing your school.

There are people who believe that first impression by a person dosen't always show how they really are. For example when you're on a date and you might be dressed in a way or talking with a different type of slang. But that dosent trully demonstrate that if the first time you guys went on a date. That on the second date you can give a better impression than you did the first date. You cant always judge someone by their appreance or on how they are. Another example is that if you're best friend thinks that you want to be with the prettiest girl in school you might want to step it up and change the way you are. You can change the way you are and the first time you meet her you were rude but you're best friend thinks she will like you if your sweet and friendly. Not everyone thinks the first impression is hard to change.

However,I still believe that the first impression is the most important no matter what the situation is. I also still believe that the first impression is hard to change. Some people are different then others they don't all believe the same thing but in my case it's hard to change how people see you the first time because,after that they are going to always look back at that and remember how you were. You always want people to think he best of you because,there going to be a situation that if they need someone they are going to look for you.

To the people that think first impression arn't important they really are. You always want to show people the best of you no matter what. It dosen't matter who you're with or where you are it's always about showing the best about you so people can always look back see that you stand out in between so many people they will look at you. For example If your getting a job and you have a job interview at a certain time; You either might want to be there earlier then the time they gave you or on time. You have to impress the boss or the person interviewing you and blow their mind and why you would be a good person to be hired for that position.             ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
40DB9B4FC90A,"Our good behavior is something the motivate us as a way of thinking or, feeling as one on self to be someone important in our life. Because, it described us by having a good conduct, a positive personality, and a attitude. This is something the help us to have a good success in life. Because if we want to do something in our life we always need to be positive.

My first reason is having a good conduct it help us to be a better person, every where we go. Because, is going to be useful

For example: If the students go to the school every day; they have to behave with the teachers. They need to be respectful with them. We must do everything that they say because, we are smarter people to understand what is good and bad for us.

My second reason is a positive personality is also important. It help us to be more successful. For example: If we are taking a test; we always need to be positive instead of being negative or, if we have bad grades we can asked the teacher to help us. We must do our home works, and extra works so we can improved our grades.

My third reason is a good attitude is also important because it described who we are. For example: I helped my friend friend to find a new job were I work. So, she got a interview for the job. I told her to have a good attitude so they will might accept her were I work. I think is important to help others.

We always need to have a good attitude so we can be someone in our life. Because, we are smarter people, and we know what is important for us. Also is going to help us to be successful in life. We most be positive and do what is important to us. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
65975436BE5C,"True self-esteem dose come from praising someone to keep going and to follow their dream. Like a good friend once said ""never let anyone put you down always get right back up on your feet"". This is saying that people should believe in their self more than what other people say about them that will drag them down. People need to have thick skin to block all the negative haters and disbelievers because having courage, confident, and trust can help with self-esteem.

First, people need to be confident in their self in order to fallow what they want to achieve in life. For example, I was not confident on passing the SOL and my teacher was praising me to be positive and not to over think it. Then it came to the SOL, and when I finished it, the next day my teacher told me that I had passed. She later then told me that I should believe in my self more. This show that when someone praises another person that they will have confidants in their self.

Second, courage can be helpful in over coming fears that can drag one self down. For example, when running a relay race and you start to fall behind. People end up giving up and saying in their head I lost there is no way to catch up because Im all ready in last place. People will want a friend to cheer them up and encourage them not to quit and to keep fighting. From the courage that is given to them then they will keep running till the finish line. This shows that courage can praise someone to keep going.

Finally, many young teens should trust what adults say to them and not ignore them. However, some may say that teens can do what ever they want, they are wrong because teens need to be taught life lessons. For example, when I was younger I steal from stores with a couple of friends. My mother told me not to hang out with other teens that will cause trouble. Which I didnt listen to her and we got caught by the workers and they called our parents to come pay for the belongings we stole. This shows that by praise from adults, teens will make good choices that wont get them punished.

In conclusion, praises can be very helpful for a person to feel good about their self. When taking any kind of test people will want to be successful. To when having to play in a sport people will want to win and not quit. Also to listen to people that are there for others no matter what. This shows that having courage, confident, and trust can help with self-esteem.",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
BFB53ACD3DD5,"Have you asked to your-self what might people think about you or what impressions they have about you? That's a hard question to answer, but I guess everybody does it. First impressions not always are positive for our-selfs, it can make you doubt about your-self, look for people's approval, and get a low-esteem. First impression not always come into your life with good intentions.

As first point, first impressions make you overthink what to do and what to say, making you doubt about your-self, and loosing your confidence. Nobody should wonder what others think about them, because each person have their own life and their own problems.

In high schools, mostly the 90% of students look for the approval of their friends. Teenagers are the most affected. Essentially, this teenageers do not have their own life.

In facts, first impressions affect all people but mostly the teenagers. They get a low-esteem, all because the system in what now we life, first impressions.

I remember my first year of high school, I was afraid like a little chicken as we said in my country with no idea what to do or what to say, wonderig what they were thniking about me. There were a few days that I din't want to go to the school because I could felt tha the other students had bad impressions about me.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           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6712BD512DB7,"I agreed that the greater of us lies and not in setting our aim high or low, but setting our aim too low will achieve our mark because many people around us are down and falling for some reasons. But, they are trying their best to climb up to the top in order to achieve their goals and learning from their mistakes. However, many others are lying or cheating to get a better score and failing down slowly. In fact, many people are working-hard to accomplish the goal that they want to achieve.

Setting our aim too low will achieve our goals because people have a weakness in their job and that's the reason why that they should be trying their best to fix their mistakes. I used to failed my math class last year because I didn't understand the unit because it's was too hard for me. So, I started to stay after school with my teacher and asking questions because I want to make sure that I understand the lesson. However, that didn't work out a lot as I expected because the assignment was different from what my teacher was explaining to me. But, I did not give up yet so I decided to study more at home and do some research about the lesson. And I finally understood the lesson. No matter how hard the work is, but what's important is that I put my time and efforts on it.

Another reason why setting our aim too low will help us achieve the goal is that by trying your best and work hard for it in order to achieve. However, many people are cheating to get the their goal so easily. My best friend got a high score on the test because he cheated and the test was hard as well. The teacher was wondered how did he got a high school on the test because he was the only one who got the highest score in the class, then he lied to my teacher that he studied a lot last night. But, the teacher caught him cheated on the test by using the notes because his answers was exactly as the notes said. So, it's not a shame that you are failing at something; but, it's a more worst that you lie to people and start falling down.

Also, setting our aim low will help us achieve the goal because many people are working-hard to get what they want. During the summer break, I told my mom that I want a new computer because my old computer is glitching and broken down a lot. Then, she told me that I work to earn money and get the new computer. She also said that it will helps me learn more things about the world. So, I started to work at a small restaurant and my position was cashier. It helps me counting the money faster and also it helps me improve my positives toward the other people.

Many people disagreed that setting our aim low won't help us to achieve our goal because sometime lying could be good for some reason and achieve the goal very easy. However, once the people find out that you're lying to them then you know the consequences. Sometime people starting at the lowest score to the highest score because they are doing their best of abilities to get the what they wanted to.

In conclusion, starting at the lowest point to the highest point will help you figure out what you need to do or learn in order to reach the goal. For example, if you don't try your best to achieve your goal and it's the worst thing that you could've ever done. However, the other are spreading lies to people how they achieve their goal easily and convincing people to be like them. But, keep trying your best and never give up to achieve your goal; then, you can get what you want.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
B9F6B348FC3A,"In my experience I don't disagree, that Emerson thing that mastered will never get him grow.

First reason, all people get mastered and that stop them to grow in something that they tried to do,For example if you are doing like your own job, and you are the manager you will see all the product that you are selling is going down, and you job it's not going well, of curse, you will be in unless to try sell other product and your stored that will happened to you and you stored that you will fell terrible and you will you not valuable to continue in you job because you are so tager to see that you job is going down not going up.

Second reason, Mastered is like you are in favor of something and your friend fight to tell you that you are round with what are you trying to do, After your friend try to tell you that you was so round you undated that you was round, them you tried to do the thing right but, you are you get in mastered and that make you to not have other change to tried again, everyone are unless to try something that they already mastered and, something for example you are teenager and you are is school and you did a test and you get bad scored of curse you feel so bad and you will no tried to retake your test again that having mastered .

Third reason, being scared to try again something that you love and that you thing if you try again that will be a same way that you did the first time, but went you try again, you will have more experience because you will try to not get the same mistake that you got first time, and will have to look so careful to not get the same mistake because you have more experiences. we all can do the thing many time the thing is that you have to believe in you,

and you will look that you will grow not matter how hart and, how many time you get upset, you have to be positive and to be screed if already have mastered.

Conclusion,It's that you never give up at what are tried, not matter how many time or change you take you feel that you get in mastered you always will have other change to start and trust that you can believe that you can do it because that's all that you need to start again.  ",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
683A4FE3661C,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. well i gree with the statement, because how your impressions is sonting you can not change like me when i see my familly my impressions are good because is the first thing i shod to dent, like when i see my mather i express my impressions to her are sonting diferent because i feel happy to see her or when i take to her and sonting i do to my bothers or my friends.

Tirst, the impressions is sonting almost not change, like my friends in school oneday i talden i liven the school the first impression they put waus sad becuase i live the school and they do not want to me live the school they want to me staing with thend, but i take to my friends i i sead to dent i have to go se my mather i my contry because i miss her like my brothers i have see my familly and 7 years the impression when i saed this to my friends was so sopraision.

Seccond, when i go see my mother and brothers in my contry for the first time the impressions they put in ther faese whas so happy to see me one more time after 7 years. My mother she was more happy to see me, but when my brothers see for the first time the impressions they put was so different then the impression my mom put to me they sead to me i do not looke nothing equal like bifore now i look like a big men and not like boy.

For example, how i expression my impression is sonthing special like when i do not see my familly or friends and 3 or 4 years i will be sad and my impression is going to be depress. Impression are so many way to expression like the time they tolk me my father was death i was 5 years old my impression was like nathing because i do not comprehend what my mom tolk me of my father.

In conclusion. the first impressions are almost imposisible to change the is true because how impression are is sonting ameising you expression things when you see sowant or people do you no see in aloge time like example in my familly i have not see my granfather but i now the firts time i ging to see my granfather my impression is going to be many. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
DED3BCBE5049,"What would you think about an after school homework club at your school. Do you think that it would help the students with their homework or that its just a waste of time to do this type of clubs. Some people might think that the homework club its helpful and others don't. Others might do it just to get their homework done early. That way they have free time at home to play games or to go out with friends.

I think that this club can help so many students who have difficulty with certain subjects like Math, English, or Science. It can also help them get their homework done or any projects that they didn't finish in class. The teachers there can help the students with their work. Also they can work with a friend that is in the club with them. It would be a really fun thing because you get everything done faster.

Some people might think that its a waste of time because they can do their homework at home. Other students just go to get all their homework done early. They can also go to have a little fun with their friends after they are done with all their work that they had. This club can also help you study for a test that you're about to take or something else. They can also just go to play video games if they have no homework to do.

I think that the schools should keep doing this club after school because it can help students get their homework done. That way the students can improve their grades that they have in the class. The students should also not be misbehaving while in the club. They shouldn't do any inappropriate things or say anything inappropriate during the afterschool club. If they do they should get a consequence.

I would like to have afterschool homework club because it can help a lot of students with their work. They can get their homework done faster and get more help. You can also go and get your homework done earlier. You can study for a test that you're about to take. You can finish any projects that you didn't get to complete in class. Afterschool homework club is a really cool thing that every school should have.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
570595740274,"Do students need summer break or they can handle not have summer but with more breaks around the year?

Students need summer break because students like summer more than other other times in the year because is hot outside and it doesn't snow all the day also, during break some students can do things that they couldn't do because of the school. For example have a job, just enjoy and relax outside with family and friends or have big families plans that they were expected, students have more odds to do all that in summer because.

They can put all their effort in their jobs. almost all the students that I know have summer job in fact I actually have two summer jobs. For students have a summer job is actually very important and it means a lot because it can be the first thing that they actually put all their effort, and is not only the fact that they put all their effort it can be the fact that they can be helping their family for example.

Their mom is having a bad time at work, the sells went down, is being two weeks since the last buyer went to the store, is not something new at the store that could bring buyer, and is being a bad moth for their mom, their son will try to help her paying small things like the internet, the water, the light or he could actually do his best, paying all that and paying the rent of the house, some teenagers not only work in summer for their own good some teenager work for help their family with everything they can however. Sometimes they need relax, doing nothing or going out to eat, watch a movie with friends or family, or go to party with your friends and enjoy summer how I said, I have two summer jobs.

The first one is in construction and the second one is in a place called Generic_Name. My first week doing all that I feel tired and I feel that I couldn't do all that anymore but I realize that my family needed me and I keep doing it, in my first work I actually learn a lot about how to measure things and how to use a electric hammer also my boss is my uncle so I spend good time with him and I meet some really nice people. The second one is in Generic_Name I had to take care of kids, clean the place and make food, I meet really nice people there that helped me a lot and I realize that I like work with kids. However some students don't have a summer job and that is fine, some students likely have some family plans or plan with their friends that they want to do for summer like.

Go some to another country with you parents, sometimes parents have vacations at the same time that summer start if they change the vacations it will interfere with the time that students spend with their parents. Some students actually don't spend a lot time with their parents in fact I am one of those. our parents work to 8 AM to 8 PM and when they come back they are tired and they just wanna eat and go to sleep, and we understand why they are like that. In summer we spend time with out parents we go out to eat, we go to the movies or we go in a travel to another country that is the first reason why student prefer the vacations in summer than in another time of the year the second reason can be.

because of the sun, we all have to accept that we get tired of the cold, rain, snow and frozen rain we all get tired, and we want the sun also with the sun your garden won't die or it wont look ugly. Sometimes when we have summer some times another school from another country or another state have summer that means they could come here or we could go there and spend time with them. I actually have some friends from Venezuela and every time they have summer they come here to spend summer with me however.

Yeah sometimes it can be hard retain information but students need rest for while, spend time with their families and friends, and if they want it or they need it get a job and do their best.

Can they change vacations for another day or just have more different vacations but not that long?

No summer is not only the time where students rest, also is the time when they spend time with their parents or friends, it can be the time for some students to work and help their family.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
BA5DC45B0E3F,"Our character develop sometimes by our own choices, and other times it develops by the influences in life, we can choose what kind of a person we want to be either good or bad, some choose to be both you can't really pick a side and stay at it , there's good in every bad and there's bad in every good. Some choose to be bad because they think if they choose to be a good person people will take advantage of them since good people always the ones who cares so much , help others all the time , and think about people happiness before theirs. They're wrong in my opinion because being a good person is better than being bad who are most likely the selfish ones that don't care about anyone except themselves. But in my opinion having a character isn't just about being a good or a bad person , it's about having a good personality , loving yourself and loving people , making others happy , having a positive energy , but also most importantly not forgetting about yourself. No one can really have a perfect character everyone got a dark side in them but only show it when needed , like if they were hurting or something bad happened to them or any other life reasons, that's if you choose your own character and choose to be good or bad. Sometimes you really can't choose your own character because the influences of life will choose it for you nothing will be in your control , it all depends on the life you were born in , like your culture , religion , and the people around you , but that's not all sometimes the way life goes is the reason your character change you can choose to be something and life's decisions will choose something else for you , life can be like a puzzle it never lets anyone stay as they are , they always change , grow up , be mature , or things that happens with them in life will make them grow up even if they're young or still not an adult yet. For me I think age isn't the thing but a number , the thing that make you mature is your character and the way you think , if life didn't force you to have a specific character then choose your own character and make it different don't try to copy someone else and be life them , just be you , be different it's more beautiful.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
ACA1A45EE438,"I strongly disagree with extending the school days. Longer school days can have a great impact on students. It also makes class hours long. Most students likes to have short classes. Longer school days can make students, exhausted, have less free time, and hate school. Longer school days will not make students happy.

Longer school days can make students exhausted. Longer school day causes the classes to be longer. Which most students get tired of being in the same class for a long time. Students get tired of doing a lot of work in class which make them want to do less work. Students will be exhausted which will make them not go outside.

By extending school days students will not have free time. Most students like to spend time with their family and friends. However, longer school days can take that privilege away. Longer school days can take away students free time. Most of the year it can get dark outside early, and students won't be able to go outside after they come from school. Since students won't have enough free time to go outside they will hate going to school.

Students will hate going to school when there is longer school days. Because students like to have less class time. Also students would want to do less work. Students wouldn't want to be in their least favorite class for a long time. If the school hours get longer students would not want to come to school. Also some students would skip the classes they didn't like.

By adding hours to the school days students will be, tired, they won't be able to have free time, and they will not want to be at school. Students will hate school if the hours get longer. Students will not enjoy school. Also classes would have a lot of work in one day which would make them not want to come to school. In conclusion there should not be one and a half hour added to school days.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
1EB4D8BFB732,"Dear principal

what are community service: is when people come together to help make the community better. helping the community is very important. i think our school students should be required to perform community service, instead of waiting for the school cleaners to take away the trash and clean up the class room at the end of the day. i think students should do it them selves. you can help taking part of community service for example: cleaning up litter, sweeping the lunch room after use, picking up used trash. community service is not meant for school alone there are different palaces community service could take place for example : you house, your neighbourhood, anywhere around you that is need to be clean. i know students have something better to do like, their homework, play video games, i think there is time for everything. and students should always take part in anything that would make their community better and cleaner.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
3C56844D4CF0,"Many students become involved in extracurricular activities enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to or complete homework assignments. In my opinion it would be better if the school has controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities. Therefore, school offer the capacity that students have to develop their potential. Secondly, school count by with the necessary tools that students needed. Thirdly, school helped the students a level physical with the sports. If the school simplify by pushing the controls and the extracurricular activities for the students, their are more productive at school and teaching-learning process undoubtedly be win-win for all the participants involved in this activities.

The first reason that support the school has a controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities, is school offer the capacity that students have to develop their potential some students to take advantage of the opportunities, while that some students their classes seems boring. For example, I don't have any idea that the biology class was a interesting class, because I was observing the animals, plants, bacteria, and human body, biology is a wonderful class in this class I learn the importance that have the activities in the school. Therefore, everything was I learn because the schools offer to me the capacity to develop me potential.

The second reason the school has a controls in the students involvement in extracurricular activities. If school count with the necessary tools that students needed, research has shown that teenagers experience with the school has a control with the students. For example, the school count with the books, computers, and different classes, and with everything that a students needed to their life , this statement helped to students go to different schools. Some instruments has the ability to change the students attitude and impact everyone and should be strongly considered.

The last reason to support the school has a control in the students involvement in extracurricular activities, is school helped the students a level physical with the sports. Some schools helped the students to have the best level the sports and to make the dreams to paying. For example, my youngest brother playing in soccer team this is good for him, and he says me everything in the team is wonderful and is a inspiration for him because he has a the most wonderfully experiences in the sports. Students can be more productive at school and in their activities, because the schools bring the opportunity to parctice some sport.

I truly believer that having the school has a control in the students involvement in extracurricular activities can be more would better is the right step towards a more convenient and enjoyable educational experience, and considered that schools offered the potential that students have to developed their potential, by and large school count with the necessary instruments that students needed, lastly school helped the students a level physical with the sports, I hope my voice get heard to the schools and their make this issues, schools can be more productive if their has the control with the students.",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
7E29ACA46157,"Summer vacation is a good break for the students to spend time with their family, also a good way to take a break form school and your annoying classes, to take some rest, change your mind, and think about what will you change, when you go back to school, also taking a long summer vacation will get yourself out of stress. you will be able to do other think than just memorizing stuff you don't need in a real life, that's why it's not a good idea to reduce students summer break just because educators say so, we need to have some fun and start learning new stuff about the path we want to take in our life.

First of all taking a long summer break will restore ourselves, it will change our personally there might be people that are devastated from getting bullied at school, some people that have stress and don't want to talk about it and need some time to think about it, some that fail the SOL,and are failing a class, and never want to repeated again, or get ready for summer school, some that need to get ready for the next school year. we need time to do all those stuff and make our life better, when we come back from summer vacation. Summer vacation also give us the opportunity to get a job and save money, two months is pretty enough to get you at least much money. Some students that take care of themselves need to have more time to get ready for the next school season, so they can buy what they need such as: school supplies,clothes, ETC..... summer vacation need to be long enough so we can spend time with our family. school is not our family but home, the only reasons most students come to school this day are to make new friends.

Second think school is worthless, we dont need to go to school for that long what we need is to work hard to achieve our dream, and have some fun with life, that's all we need, and if we stay in school for a year and spend less time at home, we will not be able to communicate well with our family, this is not a good idea, there are people that went to school, and got their high school diploma, went to college for 2 years, and are still working at McDonald for few money, that means they just waste a lot of time at school this whole year and didn't get any good from it, so if we stay at school for a year, we will then spent 12 year getting educated, and still not achieve our dream, still going to have a job at a fast food restaurant. we need a longer break so we can recover form school stress and spend time with our family, school now last for 10 month and summer vacation last for 2 months and a half, so we should leave it like that.

Third thing is taking off one week off spring break and fall break is really a bad idea, why because we need to have some rest and some fun. who want that, no one want a week off spring break and also a week off fall break. what, that's insane, we are going to do a year at school and get only a total of 1 months off out of 12 months what, no, that is a bad idea, if we get a year of school , how are we going to get 3 week or 4 week of summer vacation there will be no summer vacation. School start in September and finish in June so, when we will have a year of school we will be finishing in August that make 12 months of school, so where is the summer vacation break.

so some people might disagree with me, but i think that what we should do is change the school system. so lets say some students like school and want to get to the higher level.

i'm sure that they have families and have to rest. for example; let's take a place of a student that want to be a athlete, and is learning math, science, economics, and other stuff for 12 years without getting any lessons from the the types of athlete he want to be, so that's kind of bad and not good, why because getting educated for something you don't have any interest in or you don't like at all, it's not good. we can say math might help you a bit, but not everybody want the same things, also not getting a long break will weaken our brain.

Every country have the same system break as us, not all but at least FRANCE has the same as the U.S, by changing our break time it might affect other countries, students will have more stress and will not have fun at home with their family, parent might also complain about changing the break and going to school for a year, by the way every time we come for a new school season we learn new things and different things, At least half of what we learn just come in some of the topic, we will not have the same class as last school season, but new one and new different topic, you will only have the same stuff to learn, if you fail the class or if you the SOL in that class, and that's why we need a longer break so we can focus more on that in the break time and won't fail no more next school season.

Family over school, family is the most important thing, i'm don't know anyone that dont like his families members, so let's said that we should not reduce the school break, or go to school for one year, we should also change the school system so we can put students in what they are trying to become the future they want to build, the future might need more people that could do a lot of different stuff, we might need help for, then let's agree that going to school for one year is not worth it for some students and reducing the summer vacation is a bad idea.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
B2DAE4CC6597,"Today schools offer many tools or ways to complete your diary learning process. one of these tool is called ""school at home"" or ""distance learning"". Basicaly students can complete all their schoolworks and learning process at home through different methods like, in this case, the students attend classes form home by way of online or video cinferencing, but is it really good for the students?. Probably not.

It is know that students learn how to be sociable at school, and also they learn how to act at to many different social events or situations in the daily life. For example, we have a group of students, they are all the day working in a classroom with other students and friends that they knew at school; and we have a group of students that take ""school at home "", they do their school work in their houses and they just can socialice with they family at home. How can you learn how to be sociable without socialice with new people? different than your family ?. The answer is: you can't. Talk with new people improve you confidence and helps you to make new friends, and as students or young people, we do not used to try to talk with new people, because we are afraid, we don't have self-confidence, etc. and school force us to be social with our partners.

Moreover, some people claim that school is not a good way to improve your social abilities, but that people passed and important point and is that the school is the best way to improve your social abilities. For example, you (as a student) are working from monday to friday at least six hours per day with other students and teachers in different classrooms, the students aren't going to be the same in each classroom. All these factors made you get used to different personalities or behaviors of your teachers, friends, and classmates. School have to many different people with different behaviors that can help you to understand the way that people act and how to be their friend.

In addition, school teaches you how is going to be your life when you grow up and trains you for that. There are to many similarities between school and a job, for example: the schedule that makes you get use to the early woke ups, the homeworks that make you understand how long can be a job journey, and the teachers and students that represents your boss ans partners at work. All these examples of how school trains us for our future. Without all the training that the schools gave us, it would be a problem to get use to or daily life when we grow up.

All these reasons show us that school will benefit students more than ""school at home"" or ""distance learning"", because it teach us how to be sociable, it develops or social abilities, and it is a necessary part of our training for our adult life. In conclusion, school trains us as people, it teach us how to socialice and work.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
D2421A895FFA,"In this world has many countries, some are big, some are small. And they all have their own special places. Although some countries are not as that big and not outstanding, but they must have some places that can grab people's attention. So, I know there is a country described like that. Japan, the one place in the world I would like to visit.

Whenever people mentioned this country, I believe that what they're thinking to are the scenes and foods over there. However, the such beautiful scenes in Japan is also the one thing that attracted me. The blossom tree is the most beautiful image I have been wanted to see from Japan. Many little pinky leafs formed numerous soft and fluffy flowers. And now, just imagine that when all leafs are falling off from the tree, that scene just looks like many butterflies are dancing in the sky. Only this image is enough to grab all people's attention from the country. Sometimes just bring your food outside and find a blossom tree, then sit under it, looking at the image while eating. I think that's a such enjoyable thing.

The Japanese foods are also famous. I can't describe it, but I know there is a wonderful place in Japan where can eat a lot of things, and also can buy anything you want. The Japanese market, the one place I want to go at most in my mind. Everytime, you already can hear the laughing sounds even you're not step in. With this happy atmosphere, and walk slowly to find out the things you want to buy. How warm is it. The nicest scene is not just that, but also when the night is coming. During some special holidays, a bunch of people will came here and participate some small activities which only have at night. At this time, the laughing sounds is even louder than morning.

Japan, a such wonderful place, a place that I would like to visit.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,4.0
E43EB471951D,"Do you think is good idea for student to finish high school in three years?

most in one point is good bad in other point is not really good because when a student take the four year of high school is most be prepared, when someone took three of school is not on total prepared.

Most kids wants take three year but they don't thinking about it; they think is easily for them. Take time and thinking, most student who follow ths plan most don't take elective classes courses for the simple act that finish high school early then other students.

Kids who finish high school, in four year they're going with knowledged that they know better than other, some high school's have programs three year until two years to study, but in some high school's it is necesary make four years for wherever reasing or for that is traditional four years as well one motive is because student after graduate they will go to work they don't go to college and that's why they took three years.

For example one's of my friend's took three years and her sister took two years my friend's who took three yaars she said that her don't have the opcion to take elective classes for the simple reason that her will graduate in three years from high school. But when she took one career of college she don't what is going on, because one of her classes has nutrition wellnes and she didn't know nothing about it.

Her sister took two classes her only have three clases; crime, cooking, and goverment;

and her teacher says that her want the opportinity of wanted to comes night school for finish the three classes, but she graduate beginig of time, her graduated in march that normal graduate for us is in june.

But if some high school offer that program is subs to you is good to take just three years, but is oportunity take four years to graduate from high school. Most studen follow that opportunity three years to graduate because they want enter the college early or work.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
7B5BC2343286,"In some Societies, students are expecting to identify a career by the time they enter to high school,Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific careers and take the classes they need for the career to practices more and be more specific in the career and have more thinks to know how it work for them, in some career they need a lot of think to try it and they need practice to be in high level of the career and at young age they are expecting what career they want to take when they get older and get to high school.

I think that's good idea for students to commit to a career at young age, because some career are really hard to take it and if they start talking about what career they can take from young age, they would know more about how the career work, and before they get to high school some of them would know what kinda of classes they can take and how it work to get better practice in the career because some career are really hard to take it, but some are not that hard to take it, but in high school they are many classes about careers and they talk about it and it work.

When they get to high school, they can ask what are better courses for this career and what is better for this career and get information. When they are younger they are thinking in many career and they talk to the teacher whats better in this career and what kinda classes they can help and bring up better in the career, When they get to high school the thinking in many more career and getting more ideas about careers and see which one is better and talk about it. and when they get age when they have take classes for the career they getting more ideas about the career.

By the time of the classes they meet someone who knows the about careers and they ask what they need for take classes, and visit the college or make a field trip and meet with the company of the career,

before they get to high school, they trying to be better in every classes they have and have good grades and take important classes that work for the career and trying to take everything what they need for the career and important thinks learning everything.

Most students from young age are thinking in career, when they start middle school are think what kinda of career they can take when they get to high school, and when they get to high school they are looking for the classes about their career, and see what can they do to learn more about what they think in their career and see how can they do to take it, and do the best with their classes to complete the career for their job and take about what they need for the college.

I think that's a good idea to be thinking from young age, so when they get to high school they already know what career they gonna take and what kinda classes they work for their career and be prepared for collage, and from younger age they are learning more about what they wanna be when they get older, When they get to their college they would have more experience with their career, because they start thinking from young and they take course that help for their dreams with the career.             ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
F1A4167422E2,"I disagree with the fact that the school board wants to add an extra hour and a half to each school day. I disagree because many students might have something to do when they come out of school,they are also going to have to get used to a whole new schedule,and they might not have enough time to study or do their homework at home.

After school many students might have something to do or attend. For example,students might have to attend a club, take care of one of their younger siblings, or maybe they have a job after school. If the school board adds another hour and half to a school day these students might have to miss the activity that they have or might have to change what they do. This is bad but what is even worse if having to get used to a whole new school day routine.

They will need to get used to a different schedule or routine. Students will have to get used to much more longer classes and having to leave at a later time. Like I mention in my other paragraph sometimes students have things to do out of school,so they might have to change everything so that they will be able to attend or do what they need to do after school,For example,if they have a job they might have to change their job schedule so that they won't be late. This leads me to my other reason about not having time to do their work at home.

Students might not have to time to study or do their homework at home. Think about it. By the time that students get home,eat,relax,and do anything else they do when they get home,they might end up starting their homework at a really late time. What if they have to study for a test,by the time they start studying they might only have an hour to do it. I know some people might say to their school work before anything else,but what if the student is not able to do their work right away.

In conclusion The school board shouldn't add an extra hour and a half to each school. Although, many people might think that it is a good idea to have extended school hours. It would save a lot of time and work to just leave the school hours like they already are. And,their wouldn't be a reason to add an hour and half because students get a most of their work done in the amount of time they give them in the school day.     ",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
BAAFCD5BD313,"Im agree so the student can basically learn more on this time, but if it is putting one hour and half more should give some type of food or snack for them, because on this time the student will be hungry and too tired to stay on school studding, but i'm agree with idea because a lot of parents or guardians go to work early and just come back tonight and cannot stay home for caring they children and this one and half hour it will be to much helpful for the parent/guardians and also teachers who like to teach.

Will be helpful for the learning of the kids because all the hours on school is good for the learning and you can learn more and more all days on school in this time, and when they put this one hour and half it will be good for all because also the family as the teacher like too see that person is learning something different that you teach them to do it.

Getting perspective about the life, and will know that life is not that easy because it have they good this and they bad things happening all time around them.

When they put more time for the school the student can enjoy what they want and what they like example:Sports, Math, Science, Technology, English, Arts, Library or chess club that is the examples what the student can choose, they whatever he wants for their fun on that time and this good time will open the mind of the kids.

Because of this time they can like more school and he can stay everyday and also can choose what you like and what you want to do it for learning different things on school, is not too much time but but they gonna have a lot of fun and and this open the eye of them so they can see that school is not just boring for them ,but you can also have a lot of fun.

If i wold give a suggestion or a complement on this i just will say it about snack for the people who is staying more time than others, because it will provide that the student do not get weakness, sickness or heading, for some reason this can be affected if you do not eat something all day .",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D7817C171926,"Benefits of long summer break

Most students enjoy summer vacation and like to have a fun time. Some students may have more time to share with their family. However some students uses that time to have a job and earn money for any emergency or for keep saving for their scholarships, if they have planned go to the college. I believed that students should have a regular summer break because some students have the ability to remember everything they learned before summer break, and also students may enjoy the weather and have some fun time.

First reason that students should have a regular summer break is that students may be able to develop their strength, while they are enjoying their summer break. For instance some students may have summer school where they could make some extra school's work and keep everything they learned in mind. for instance my family just have time in summer, so I would like to try to do some extra help in summer school, and then enjoy the rest of the summer time with friends and family. also there are a few reason that why students may have a regular summer break. Continuosly I will explain some more reason.

Second reason that students should have a regular summer break is that students may be able to enjoy their break going to the pool, to camp, the river, the beach etc. however students may have also time to study on any subject that they want and have a fun time. Students may have a time for themself, for instance they may sleep and wake up at any time they want, hence they have to clean up their house and give to their family some help.

Also students may study at home with their sibling in case they have, and do some activities to remember everything they learned.

Third reason is that some educators feel that the summer break is too long and because that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. but if educators really knows their students, they may be agree with the regular summer break because that the only time that with have with a good weather to enjoy outside of the house. what about if students have a long winter break, they will not be able to go outside because the snow or for the lowest temperature. what about if students have spring and fall off, also that time of the year is still cold not a lot of snow but cold, students may get sickness or something else. In addition if students need to work because, they do not have the resort or the benefits as another students, they have to work but in winter time in some place of job are not hiring so the could not work in winter break.

In the final analysis some people would argue that students should have three-four week break in summer, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. however, the summer break is the best time of the year, because students may do something else as play any sports they want, and enjoy that time. Students may have the ability to retain information even after summer break. addionality students would like the advance that they have of having a long summer break and be prepared for the next school's year.           ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
E481AA5C2F0B,"Why we should be agree with have a positive attitude is the key to be success in the life?

because he does what he sets out to do.

When you have a positive attitude you can a good future.

If you have positive attitude and you did something wrong one time, you will try to learn about it, and you will not worry because the next time you will try to emend what you did wrong and you will try to do more better the next time.

This are some reason why we need to have a positive attitude.

They does what they sets out to do.

If your propose is graduate you can do it because you will try to give the best to do it.

My propose was to come to this country and study and study that is what I am doing now, and I say, I want go to The United States many people say why you go to that country, you are so young, other say why you want to study it is more better work and make money, but I don't listen all that wrong thing and I am in this country and I am study too.

If you have propose in your life you can have many thing that other people say that never can have.

When you have a positive attitude, you can have a good future.

If some day you have a accident with you car and after the accident, the car doesn't work and you friend say put the car en the trash and you say not because did you think the car have a little problem and you don""t want to put it in the trash and some day one friend come to check and say the car a little problem maybe you can pay $50 dollar and the car can be like new if you are no positive maybe you put the car on the trash, that is why it is good be positive in your life because if you are negative never you will live so well.

In your life you have to be positive because if you are positive you can have many thing and you can have more friend because some people doesn't like the people who are negative the person who are negative only think on bad thing can hapend or in thing they think that they cant do it.

I don't know the negative person can live if only think on wrong thing can happen and that are so wrong because you never can be have friend to talk because they think something bad can happen or they think that is a bad person.

When you have a positive attitude, If you do something wrong one time, you will try to learn about it and the next time I will try to amend what I did wrong and I will try to give my best for do it more better.

If I fail this SOL I will try to learn about what I did wrong for the next time I will try to give my best again and put in practice what I learn.

If I am doing a work and when i am doing I do something wrong I will try to n and when I have to do it more better next time.

If you are doing a project and you forgot write something you will try to learn and next time you will try to doesn't have any wrong.

I am agree with said that positive attitude is the key to success in life because If you have one propose you can do it.

your future can be successful. when you do something wrong in you life you try to learn about it and next time put on practice what you learn, amend what I did wrong and do it more better.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
D01F88C1F2A0,"I believe that when people have their first impression on something they can change, people can have different impression and different changes no one has the same attitude as others

.Sometimes they don't even change because they don't care about it, and some of the people they get altered on something or on someone, it's based on what experiences people already had .

Some people don't even change when they have their first impression because they don't even care about it and people can change when they really give them a bad impression about them. Sometimes they keep doing the same thing every day and they don't even care about other people who are talking about them. But when they get another impression they start to think on what they did wrong and they analyze it. People start to change when they really need to change who they are. And to change takes time some people don't change quickly because they can commit the same thing without thinking it.

People can get impress on relationship about betraying each other, they can get altered on something or on someone . In a relationship their are always going to have problems it could be jealous, toxic, and bad influence. Many adolescents are dying just because they give them a impression about her/his boyfriend betraying them with another one and they don't even think about how hard is goig to be to that person knowing that they betraying them in that moment. Being on a relationship is not to impress others that they can get jealous at, sometimes changing is hard but it's a good way to have a good relationship.

In my experience, when I had my first impression I think that it was impossible for me to change myself. In that moment when they told me that I was a girl who disappointed other people about my attitude, I really feel very disappointed in me that I think negative everyday. And that I can not do what other people are good at. It was impossible for me to change my attitude because I was use to things that it was good for me but for others was not. So one day I say that I was going to change who I'm no matter how hard it was but it was going to be possible for me to change with or without help.

I believe that when people have their first impression on something they can change. changing is a good way to show to everyone that you are not the same person you use to be, and that every impression that they going to give you is going to be a way to try and to not commit the same thing in the future. People can say that it's impossible to forgot what we did in the past but when we try every day to forget it, we can get better to it. Everyone are not perfect but we can get better at changing our attitude on not trusting people who we think that it's not the kind of people were are going to trust.           ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
FAB189F7E4DF,"Have you ever do something bad in your life , and your friends influence you to do it ? well everybody has two types of friend one with good behavior and the other with bad behavior. But the teenagers of this time never think in consequences when they are following bad examples. So I believe that a good example by your own behavior is the best way to infuence other people because people learn things by examples, or if you get together with somebody who is not a good influence for you believe or not your are going to learn what he does. People is always around you they are always looking what you do and they are criticizing your actions.

My first reason is because good behavior is the best way to influence people because if you are a smart person, educated , and happy your are going to be a example for other people and they might said that they want to be like you. Many teenagers has ruin their life for following bad influences. People can said that we are old enough to know what is good or wrong but we never think from what is coming. The world is full of bad person and some people would ask their self, why there's too many bad people in this world? the answer is because people is influencing others to do bad stuffs. If human wants a better world for their kids they have to be good influences, good examples to the new generation that is coming.

In my own experience I have seen friends and relatives that has ruin their life for getting together with people that is a bad influence for them. Is really sad when you see somebody that is in jail or dead for following bad examples by having bad friends. When you are following a bad example that person never is going to tell you what are the consequences. As you can see babies when they are in the age of learning new things they do what their parents do or what they teach them to do. Adults and teenagers are a little bit different because not all the time we do what people tell us to do, but we always end up learning something of that person.

People is always criticizing so if you don't want to that happen be a good example. Being a good influence people would trust in you, but being the opposite of that nobody would trust in you. And when we realize is too late because the people you appreciate are separating from you for been a bad influence for others or maybe for them. My grandma always said , "" what you crop, you would sow."" For me those phrases mean a lot because being a good example or having a good behavior will take you to succeed in life , and is not just that there are many ways to succeed in life too.

For these reasons I believe that a good example is the best way to influence others so the people that is learning or looking what you do can learn good things about you and by that wat can trust in you. Also you will feel proud of yourself that your are influencing other in a right way. If you want a better world be a good example for others and don't lose your time in influencing other in a bad way.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
80DFF2FC7C1F,"i am disagree with this because, is going to have a negative effect because, you are going to lose the comunication with the people.

first reason: you can't go out side to shop.

example:when i was in my country, i was going to the store, i was go in my bike or walk but when i move to the united states i don't need to go because, my mom just call to the store and they bring the prouct or food.

second reason: play games with your friends.

example: the last week, i ask to one of my friend who live in my home country if they continue play games like soccer in the soccer field or anther game in the street , he tell that now they play populars games in the phone and they don't like play games in the street enymore.

third reason: the little boys don't want to do others thing just stay in the phone.

example: my little brother who is to years old, he just want to watch videos on the phone, when my mom take the phone he cry because he want to watch videos or play games on the phone he don't do other things, he don't play with my other brother.

fourth reason:

go to visit family or other places.

example:when i go to visit my family or other places i can leave my phone because everytime we go to visit my family i be bored. and when wi go to visit new places i like to take pictures of the place.

fifth reason: you will be a addicted with your phone or computer.

example: i have a friend here in the school who use the phone in the class, sometimes he is play games , some times he watch videos, when the teacher look at him he is in the phone she tell him to put on his packet or in the back pack but he never do it, some times he sit on the back of the room so the teacher can't see him. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
CD52F56B2392,"I disagree with the school board.That they should had more time in school. They have no time to do anything after school. They also will not do their school work because they won't have time to do there homework and they have to go to sleep because they will have school the next day, and they won't get a good grade because they didn't do there homework and there is reason why school board add more time.

Why they should not add more time in school because people won't have time to do anything because they will have to do other things too. This is why the should board should not add more time in schools. 1 They have to do there homework. Number 2 they have things to do for after school or they have a plan for after school, Number 3 they have to go somewhere. If the school board add more to the school hours that means that they will have no time for anything.

Reason number 1 They have to do there homework,they won't have time to do there homework because they don't have a lot of time because when come back for school they

are doing something and the end they don't do there homework,because they have to go to sleep and they need to go to school the next day.

Reason number 2,They have to do something or the have plan's to do after school. For a example Generic_Name need to pick up his sister and brother form school but he can't because the school board add more time in the school.That is the other reason why the school board add more time to the school.

Reason number 3,They have to go somewhere. For example PROPER_NAME needs to go to church after school because the church is 2 hour of class when he comes back it is 8:30 then he eats then he goes to sleep because he has school the next day when he went to school he got in trouble because he didn't turn in his homework. That is another reason why school board should not add more time to the school hours because they want have time to do their school work.

reason number 4,They will get broad in the class room,For example the teacher is talking forever that they will sleepy and they are going to be sleeping in your classroom, because they been sitting down forever then they won't do there work, because there getting tried.That is the other reason why school board should not add time to the school.

That's why I disagree with the school board by adding more time to the school hours, because the students won't have time to do their school work and other things, because school will end late, because if they add more time the students will not do there project or there homework,because they don't have time to do school work.Then they will get a F and that class because they did't do there homework or school work. That the reason why the school board should not put more time in school.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
301A4BFAE56A,"Working in group would be much better, because you will be able to get more help by the other people, like how people in my country say ""

2 brain's think more than one

"". If you work by yourself it will be hard because you would have to do alot of work by yourself, like if the teacher say's that all the student's will choose to work with someone or by yourself, because they would make a poster and it has to have drawing, colored, and write some stuff about it, for the one who is doing it alone it would be hard, and for the one that are working in group can meet in any of their houses, while someone is doing the writting the other one would be doing the drawing and colored, so it would be easy for them to do it.

There are alot of people that think that working by themselves would be more easily because they would not have to worry about to meet somewhere with your partner, or getting worry about that your partner doesn't do the right thing on the poster(or not did it). Doing it by yourself would take a lot more of time but you will do it the way you would like.

Working in groups would be better than doing it by yourself, if you are in a sport you would not like to work by yourself , because you will need the help from your team mates so the team can win, if you do it by yourself the team would not be able to win because you are not working together , the whole other team will try to get the ball away from you and your team mates will get mad at you because you didn't pass the ball on time and you lose it.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
CBEB284749D7,"I belive that Going beyond what you have already mastered is a great way to accomplish in life it will motivate you to work hard and take more steps as you are trying to achieve more goals. Some people believed that going beyond what you have already mastered is not a great way to accomplished becuase you will never grow and that will lead you to fall back and it is beneficial because you have already accomplished.

In my opinion going beyond what you have already mastered is a great way to achieved more goals and the more steps you take the more experience you will get than just focusing on what you have already mastered,because achieving more and taking risk in every journey that you made is a great way to know how important each step you take is and going beyond that will prove how strong and passionate you are to be more successful. For example if you are in a soccer team and your team had already won three goal that should not give you the risk to relax and think that you have already mastered what you were trying to get ,go beyond that and play more harder and get to were you want to be until you feel accomplished that will give you the courage to try to do more and never look down.

Another reason why people should try to do something beyond what they have already mastered is it will set an example to the public by showing how ethusiatic you are in any part that you take ,because you are aiming to get more and win more and you will be a role model to the young generation, For example if someone is trying to let go because they had already got what they want they will take you as a mentor, because you at the other side never stop even though you have already mastered and accomplished more but you are still aiming to get more and you are still growing.

Another reason to go beyond is it will impact you in your after life and you will also feel proud that you never let go you take risk you go beyond your thought, for eaxample you another person who have already mastered what they want and they feel good withwhat they have already get and you gop beyond that makes you a hero.

In conclusion you will always expect more and accomplished more if you are willing to go beyong your gains and what you have already get.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
C65AD37C8194,"Desagree,To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisment

To be yourself in this world is kind of difficult, but if you try really hard you will success with honor,respect,humble and make you strong. Not trying after you lose make people weakness, fearful and incapable.

If you want to success in life and future, just help others when they need it, and be humble with those people who do not have anything in life and they have to sleep in the street. Nobody is more than others, God make us equal. Be yourself every where you go, you do not have to change your personality because other people do not likes you. You have to prove yourself that you can do it, no matter how many time you fell down, just stand up clean yourself and continue. You will found a lot of obstacle in life and all you have to do is play like you are on the soccer field.

You have to be strong and prepare for what's coming in life and do not worry if others tell you that you are useless, just show it to them that you can do it. Sometimes people just left and give up. Not trying after you lose make you weakness person. Weakness person are those who give up in the first try, they are incapable to fight for what they want in life, and don't let no one change your personality, if they really love you,they would love you like the way you are. My mom always told me,""do not give up till you are in the top"",after all the struggles you will be a better person.

Nobody can change yourself, you are the only one who can dicide what you really want to be in life. You make your own rules, but you have to respect others, I will give you a counsel, If people treat you worthless do not treat them like the way they treats you,be original and treat them like royalty, after that, they will see that who lose gold was them,not you. Do not let no one hurt you because we are in a world where no one wants to see any body get victory. All I can say is be yourself, if you want to dye your hair blue and you are afraid what people opinions are, just do it, do not start walk around to find your happiness because your happiness are inside. I hate it when people said like what happen if I do not looks pretty, you are pretty inside and outside, do not make yourself miserable.

The struggles will make you strong and get all you want in life, like David and Goliath, ""the little boy who fight with the giant warrior and he won, when he throw the rock into his eyes"", no matter how big is the problem and how small you are, you have to fight with your fear. If you pray to God and tell him what is going on in your life, he will helps you to solve it, like he solve David's battle. Do not let people change the way you are, because some people just come and goes through and we have to enjoy what we got while we have it and do all the things that we haven't, and thanks God because we are here.

Conclusion,

Live the life you love and love the life you live, just do what makes you happy. Remember that your happiness are inside, all you have to do is look for it and find something that you can prove yourself , that you made it without help and make yourself feel proud and do not let people take advantage of your insecurity because you are great, you are strong and that is all you have to do, focused on your success.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
FDE0B653AD74,"When you play activities or an instrument, don't you get a relief when you play them?

I like to play volleyball, because I can make new friends, it gives me an opportunity in life to have a good life, and it is really fun to hit the ball when it flies really close to you.

My first reason is that I can make new friends. Having friends is an amazing thing, because you can always rely on your friend and have some kind of connection to them. Friends will help you at any time, whether it is hard times, bad grades, fight with someone, arguments and others. Friends are always there for you and it does not need to be a daily conversation with them to be friends. If you have friends, you will have more success in your life and it will give you new opportunities in life, such as, jobs and etc. When you become friends with someone, you become a different person and everyone around you are happy and you also can make a difference in the world if you have more opportunities to have a great life.

My second reason is that the games give me more opportunities to participate in any activities that I am interested in. Doing activities is good, because it keeps you healthy and a more enjoyable person. When you play sports it teaches you math, because the ball is circular and it has a circumference, radius, and a diameter. People don't just play sports, they play sports, because they enjoy them and when you play it, it feels like that you are free and able to do anything in the world. When you believe you can do it, you will be able to do it, you just don't need to give up if something goes wrong.

My third reason is that it is fun to hit the ball when it flies towards you. It is fun, because it give you new experiences and different feelings that you have never had felt before. But to play a sport you have to have good grades and a good spirit of wanting to play the game. Sports are like your new life, because when you start playing, you cannot stop. It feels like you are addicted to the game and that it is so fun that you cannot stop playing it. When you are in a team, it gives a different feeling, because you have to work hard to get into the team. You don't just go and play a sport, it has to include how hard enough you have worked to play in that sport.

My fourth reason is that you should never give up on any sport, if you already started it. Sports also give a different point of view of people. Having feelings is a really good experience, because it shows a whole different part of our personality. Sports give you a life experience that you will never forget, even if you are old. And, whenever you feel along you can go talk to your teammates about it and they will help you out with it. Teammates are the best part of the game, because they open so many new doors to you and you just have to work hard enough that you can go through the doors that you chose to live with.

My final reason is that even perfect people make mistakes in games. If you want to be perfect in a game, you just have to practice a lot to become better and better at it. Practicing show your teammates that you care about them and the game. New friends always pop out from different angles in your life. Life without friends would be miserable, because you have nobody to help you in anything.

Playing volleyball is really important to me , because I can make new friends it is really fun to hit the ball when it comes towards you, and give opportunities for a new and better life.

In conclusion, sports are really fun, because you can always gain courage in the game. You can experience things you never experienced before. It can make you want to become a coach, because if you are a coach it will be fun to give kids what they want to play and get new ideas of new kinds of games that they can play. Your life doesn't always depend on the game, because we always have something else to do even if we have a game and it is always hard to find what time you are going to play the game. It is how the life will be when you are a grown up. Our lives always give us surprises that we don't expect. Sports are the most important thing in our lives, because they helps us overcome our fears of communicating with people.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
9DB8409B95F6,"It was a really nice day so we went to the park. We were going down the slide at the park, and I was with my brother, and sister. If I haven't told you what their names are, I'll tell you right now! My brother's name is Generic_Name, and my sister's name is Generic_Name, My name is Generic_Name. My siblings are pretty annoying, but I still love them. It was really sunny, and warm, Then this cute guy came, and right away I text my friends about it.

My brother somehow started playing with Generic_Name. Generic_Name told me he already knew Generic_Name. He had a really cute little sister, and she's two years old, and her name is Generic_Name, and Generic_Name is ten years old.

I asked Generic_Name what his brother's name was, he told me it was Generic_Name. When Generic_Name told me his brother's name, my heart started beating really fast, I was really happy that I would do anything in this world.

Generic_Name comes up to me, and says hi, I was really nervous, me and Generic_Name were talking while are siblings were playing. We got to know each other, and now we're best friends.

I'm so glad I met Generic_Name! We have so much things in common, we both like the same sport, which is soccer. The saddest thing is that we don't go to the same school, I go to Generic_School, and he goes to Generic_School. We got each others instagram, snap chat, and our phone numbers.

We all wanted to hang out again, but tomorrow It's going to rain, and It's going to be really muddy, and wet outside. We got home, and we ate dinner, we all took a shower, and did our night routine. I had so much notifications from my friends, I totally forgot i sent them a text, I told them everything that happened. We had school tomorrow, and me and my friends were talking about it, but Generic_Name didn't seem as happy, as we all did. She told me she needed to talk to me, but in secret. So we went to the library. Generic_Name told me she knew Generic_Name, and she told me so much bad thing about Generic_Name. Generic_Name is Generic_Name's ex girlfriend.

I was very upset, and started crying, I went straight to my house, and Generic_Name came with me too, she's my best friend, and she's always there for me, when I really need her the most, I told Generic_Name what Generic_Name told me. Generic_Name told me that all those bad things she told me about Generic_Name aren't true, she did that, so I would stop liking Generic_Name. I called Generic_Name that I needed to talk to him, so I gave Generic_Name my address.

Generic_Name came over, I told him everything that Generic_Name told me, he told me she was lying, because she's jealous of me, and she liked him, but Generic_Name didn't feel the same way as Generic_Name did.

Generic_Name told me that he liked me since the time, he made eye contact with me. I really didn't expect Generic_Name telling me that, I thought he would never like me. I don't trust a lot of people just my best friends, and my most favorite teacher, because the people that care about you the most, are the ones that want the best for you, they're not jealous of you, like Generic_Name was. Girls shouldn't change over a guy that doesn't feel the same way as you do, and boy's shouldn't either! God has someone waiting for you!

If you really trust someone, don't loose their trust! A lot of people can give bad or good experience to you, but you have to see who's being a bad friend to you, and who's being a good friend to you. There are a lot of people that can give you bad influence, and a lot of people can give you good influence. Be careful in who you trust, there are several people that are there for you no matter what. If there is something wrong with you, talk to the person you feel more confident talking to, you can talk to your mom, dad, your principle, counselor, dean, or anyone you truly trust.

There's always a time where you accept some bad friendships, that give you bad influence, but it's okay. I did to for accepting my friendship with Generic_Name, if she really was a good friend, she would of told me she wants the best for me, and not lie about something that isn't even true, When someone lies to you, it's hard for you to gain their trust. You have to learn your lesson to the people that lie, your realize how you loose friends by just lying.

Me and Generic_Name are now dating, we are focusing in school, because school is important, and no matter what others say, me and him are going to be happy, and no one will ever change that. Be careful in who you trust, and never change for anyone, because you are amazing just the way you are!",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
6C6B01577E01,"Yes i agree with Churchill's statement about the importance role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because we need to learn to not lose hope in what we want for success and our future. Imagine you keep on failing and failing but knowing your going to be successful in life? Imagine not losing fate or enthusiam to pursuit for success? That is what the Former British Prime Minster once said that ""Success consits of going from failure to failure without the loss of enthusiam."" How would you know your going to fail to pursuit for success?

What is success? Success is to achieve goals you been wanting to accomplished. Everyone wants to accomplished something or anything. It feels extraordinary to be successful in life but to fail is something that no one likes including to success. It's understandable to make mistakes because you can learn from them and try again until you get it right. No one is perfect,it's understanding to make a couple of mistakes here and there knowing you can learn from it.

Everyone wants to be successful in life or in anything. For an example when you apply for a job you to apply first, then wait for a response for the interview,After when the interview is done you have to wait a couple days or two until they call you to notify you if you have gotten the position or not. Well thats how we feel when were trying pursuit for success hoping that we can do this and having fate to not give up.

When you know your failing to pursuit for success is when you keep making mistakes but you keep going until you get it right. No matter how many times you keep making mistakes it won't stop you from what you are doing or trying to get. You can be still successful no matter how much you fail because it will make you smater for success.

Success is something that many have achieved or have not but at the end of the day were resposiable for any mistakes,actions and verbal language that we have used,It could affected anyone or anywhere. As we as people must continue on to be motavated for success if not someone else will speak up and take charge.         ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
B7075CD10BCC,"In my opinion the attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is a excellent idea for everybody. We have many benefit from to being able to attend classes from home for example, we have more time for sleep and have more energy for study, also the students has more dedication, the students has more concentration for study in home because, nobody distract to the student, the students have more time for make other things like work or others pastime

Many student don't like this idea because, they think the attend classes online is so difficult but I don't think so because we have help of all teachers. One reason very important is not mess around, because take the bus for me is lose time, maybe the classes online can start early and we have more information, more experience for the future, the thing more important is learned more, in my opinion the school is a little distraction for many students because they don't pay attention to classes, they go to other places when we need study more for the life.

Another reason is beacuse is about the video conferencing this idea is great because we learned to communicate or socialite with the people in the video conferencing, I think because, some students are silent and this option help you.

For many parents I thinks is a great idea because they have more control in home like they know when the student work in classes or not, maybe the parents wanna see the progress of the children. The idea is productive, is a new experience for the students and parents. Maybe

This option for the students classes from home by way of online is in my opinion a great news because for some people stay in home and practice and study is more comfortable. Classes online is not difficult for the students because in the computer we have modules and information and others things can help you, and is more easy in video conferencing because we have always somebody who can help, we can talk with a teacher or somebody, so is a good idea and new experience.

In my conclusion I support and for me is a good idea the option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because is a new experience and i like it the idea and is more comfortable stay in home is more peace, more concentration, is more time for study and more important is learned more things, new thing for the future because the place is not important you can study in others places but the important is study more and more. Study is more important, the place is not important beacuse when the person want to be someone like a professional in the future they need study much.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
3FC8F9902F11,"I agree that technology had a positive effects on people lives because is help them figure out some stuff or distract them by listening to musics, watch a movies,or play games.

Technology is something that people use some much for example to find a jobs,

to business, shopping, or teaching. Some people use to make music or movies like all those actors and actress they used technology. Is so popular that technology is everywhere for anybody went to used. It a nature is help other people too, it very differentiate when we used for different language for example with can used to translate any words in different language

We used technology to call people ,friend, family, or parents some people may say that it can make your lazy when I meant is that we can't even walk or to nothing but is not true we have machine that work with technology sport and it helps us find stuff or we can even have a jobs by technology and we can stay home every time. And it helps students for written a essay or taking text,quiz, or exam. School is a place that we can find technology people and many stuff relent to it .

People used technology because it was create to make stuff a little simple for an example we used technology right now for taking ours SOL why don't used paper for that so that why technology make stuff more easily for people . On another hand technology is very expensive one if we need to buy.

A cell phone is a part of technology is very popularly because it help us communicate with people we don't need to go the the house we just call or test message and we good to go.

In the environment people used technology so much that we can even account the number what I am try to say it technology is every benefit for young and adults people to used. We pretty much used designed jewelry, house. Everything we do is technology.            ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
F12B9AF96175,"should people make their own decisions,or should they seek guidance from experts? people who make their own decisions will have success in life. I agree with people who make their own decisions because it will build up confidence,higher chance of accomplishments, and it helps them understand from their mistakes.

My first reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, it will build up confidence. Having confidence is a big thing to many people because thay can do many thing in life and will not fail. Having confidence can help people in many places. For example,If you are going to a job interview you will have to have a high confidence in you ,In order to get the job. Making your own decisions will help you build up more confidence.

My second reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, you will have higher chance of accomplishments. If you make your own decisions you can have many accomplishments,because if you make good decisions in life you have more chance of success. You can accomplish anything you want if you make your own decisions,because making your own decisions can be anything you want and you dont have to follow anyone.

My third reason why I agree with people who make thier own decisions in life is because, It will help people understand from their mistakes. People who make mistakes from thier own decisions will have a higher chance to understand and will not do it again. On the other hand,Many people seek guidnace from experts so they dont have to make thier own decisions;However,making your own decisions will help you be a better person and it will help you be you.

In conclusion,Making your own decisions in life is a good thing for many of us. Making your own decisions will make you a better person and you don't have to follow others. Many people could seek guidance from experts If they can't make thier own decision. These are all of my reasons why I think people should make their own decisions.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
76C2E20AF20E,"When you were in high school would you have commit the career you have now?

Many people do know what they want to do for their career, but others do not. In my opinion committing to a career at a young age is not a good idea. There are many people that choose a career at a young age, and now years later, they are not happy or they get bored. A lot of high school students do not know what they want to have as their career. It is also a lot of pressure for students to figure out what they want to do for the rest of their lives.

When students go to high school , some of them want do explore different class to figure out what exactly, they want to do as their career. For example , I am in the 11th grade, and I still have not committed to a career. In the last 2 years, I was able to see what I might want to commit to and ones I do not have interest in. Some might say they want to be a doctor, lawyer, or even a teacher. But many might not go for that career in the future . Maybe it is because they found a different career that they love but figured it out at a different age.

I see some people that are over 30, and are not happy with the career they committed to at a young age. They do not like going to work as much. Also when they committed to a career, they could have through it was totally different . But when they started to study for that career ,it was a little to late because they committed to it. When I am older , I want to be at least a little happy with what I have my career as.

In the other sides opinion, I do see why committing to a career at a young age is pretty important too. It is better to have students study what career they want to commit to , so they can start to studying for it . Then they can start to expand their career at a young age. If I knew what career exactly I wanted to commit , I would have been taking classes for that specific career in high school. It always good to know what you want to study for at a young age, so you do not have to worry about it in the future.

Students still not knowing what to commit to and having to commit to a career that the students might not like in the future are my two main supports to my opinion. I choose these two, because I think it supports my opinion the best. Students can always figure out what career they want in college , they do not have to know right away . Its a big part of a students life to commit to some thing they are going to be doing as their career. But it is always a pretty good idea to know what career you want to do at a young age. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
CDAA99F49D42,"My prompt say that district school offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Some students wanna do online class and night school to help them graduate and get there GPA for there classes for college. Do students do online classes and night school right now? Tutoring and and night classes and can help with everything you need in college.

Students that graduate early helps you to get ready for college. This helps all the opportunity for them to understand the learning. The classes you do to understand all the things that happen in each course to help out all. For example, I know a lot of people that that do classes in the morning and at night time to catch all the work for the classes they hard. The more work you get done during summer it counts your GPA scores. Doing everything done with work at school can get ready for everything to be done.

Do students do online classes and night school right now? If so, how do students get it done with all the activity and what programs they do to make it done. Some school offer programs for students to help them with there grading and work they make during the past school year. I remember all the year that I did all my best for high school I've done after school tutoring and morning tutoring to just get everything done so I can just graduate and help my family. This oppoturniy graduating early helps me get ready for school.

Classes in school is hard because they helping you out to get ready for college, because when you enter college its very different than in high school because all the oppotunity you can make for your self. Being orgizinize with all the work you do in school can help you with all the work you will do in college this is you being independent for everything you do in high school because teacher's helping you out. For me being a high school students all the elective classes I do helps me with the course I'm taking in college and doin online classes was the best way to get it done.

Programs you make in school and trying to be in it will help you with all the work you have. Early gradutes, yes, there's alot of them in the country to just get there education done with everything. Colleges do look at your scores and work you do with all the information you do in school all the records and everything. Having good grades and always in school that's one of the records to make college look at you and be like I want her to know to be in my college.

I will say that offer programs from different school you can get accept with all this around you because this can help you out with all the career you do in high school. Graduating three years instead of four years you can get everything done. That's why students graduate early.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
4ACFA2D3D0A1,"In my opinion I believe that it is better that we accomplish more it will make us more active. Im a firm believer that inactivity does not serve any purpose. This is the reason there is daylight and also nighttime; when its day time you get things done and when its nighttime you can rest or spend time relaxing. I also seen that the more you do the less you are to complain. Now let me explain to you some reasons why you should always accomplish a lot through out the day.

My first thing I would like to start with is that there was a study at ""The University of Florida"" it showed that a person that does completes lots of tasks usually does better academically. Also you can get stressed if your not doing lots of work suffer health issues being active is important. The university tested 40 students 20 of them would show up to class on time get assignments done and come everyday. They would also be inspired to do better with there studies.

It is also sometimes good to be inactive but that would mostly be during the night time when you have had a long days work you can sit down and just relax.

Being a active person also makes you a more preferable person when you are working. People tell you that you are a hard worker when they see that you are doing your work on time. You are also preforming to the best of your availability. At my work I had this conflict with my co worker and instead of me arguing I just told her she was right and let it go. This lady would always be angry because her work she would be stressed out and yelling but that again comes in with being a lazy person.

Being active can keep you out of trouble or addiction because you will not be so bored throughout your days. You will keep your head so busy that you will be so tired that you wont think about anything else just about taking rest and going home. Keeping bust is also a huge stress deliver because it makes your brain process things more quickly. Unlike with being inactive you just stay at home and do not do anything. Your brain will just be thinking all day about what it will do and you will get worried from not doing anything throughout the day. These are some of the reasons I believe it is good to be positive and not to be to worried.

It is always good to consider why the night time and the day time was made the sunlight was to keep us awake and then the dark was made to make us fall asleep. Also keep in mind that the time you spend doing nothing can be put for good use and you can never take back the minutes or hours that you have spent doing nothing. These are some of the reasons it is always good to be a active human being so that you do not have any problems later in life.                   ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
ADDFE045FED1,"Although, I believe sometimes being around many different influences, such as religions, trends, and different cultures. We all choose our own traits.

Certainly, many different things can influence us. Such as trends, for a couple of weeks, months or years. Many different things could be could be trending. Like different genres of, movies, music, or video games, even clothing. In the moment when those things are popular it might feel amazing to own those particular things. Many people who cant afford things of such nature such as the latest cars, jewelry, and brands like Louis Vuitton, Gucci, Moncler, or anything of type nature that is trending. People like teens or young adults might feel terrible because their friends could be having those things and they cant afford it, and when they get some money they might go and spend it on expensive things to fit in. But as you get older, and the trend is over, most people regret spending a lot of money on things they didnt need. After the trends die out and everybody moves on to the next set of trends. People will start maturing and decide to wear, listen to, and do their own things, instead of being just like everybody else.

Most people, if not everyone would prefer doing things they like rather than doing things they dont like because their friends want to do it. A majority of people in the world have made themselves who they wanted to be. Every persons interests can influence them more than any person or friend. If it wasnt for peoples interests, and wanting to be themselves whether they were accepted or not. Most famous people wouldnt be where they are today. A lot of people use their interests to get them out of bad situations, which brings me to my final paragraph.

Following your dreams and being true to yourself can take you a long way. Although when people think of chasing their dreams, they picture being rich, famous, and living in a mansion. Others may think of starting a business with things they have a passion for and enjoy. Even having a daily basis of clients/ customers, even if its 5-10 people a day. At some point if that person stays consistent and humble, something big may happen for them and their business can just become huge, and they could keep on growing and having people who also share the same interests could come in on a regular basis. I believe everybody chooses who we want to be at some point, it may take time but in the end, everybody finds themselves.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
87B7FE5BD9D7,"Imagine there were no school and attending classes from home. I do not think students attendind classes from home by way of online or video conferencing will not benefit , Because classes at home will not benefit the student. He or She will take Advantages by watching online videos, Playing games and not studing. Students will not take classes from home serious.

Attending classes from home will be a distraction due to family issues and noises at home will not help student to pay attention.

Attending classes at home will not help student by not knowing general knowledge, Getting to know things around the world, Not able to meet new people and not being able to feel how the world is.

Some say attending classes from home by way of oline or video conferencing will be benefit for students they are wrong because, Some student needs help from their classmate. Some student also learn from teachers than attending classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
78A3B43DFF8E,"Former British Prime Mrimister Winston Churchill once said that ''success consists of going failure to failure loss of enthusiasm. ""Do you agree with of Churchil's statment about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success ? Take a position on this question. Use reasons and specific examples to support your ideas.

Yes I agree.

The Failure in My life.

The failure in the life is just the first step of counsel to success. From experince , I'm saying yes that the failure makes my life better. like when I came America with zero English that was the biggest straggle in my counsel. As emyplee , student and self developing.

Emyplee.

First, as emyplee it was not easy to find job because of English language. So way where was applying for jobs the company require have whether Spinsh or English so I can not speak any of other, for tow year I was just home, job no money to help my family back home because of language

But I did not stop after two years fund a job so I was dishwasher, it was too tough to communicate with my Mangers and employees too. They were making fun of me when I spook English. But that never stop me from what I want to do. Now I'm a superior in the pace I work for it. I did not let the language or anythings else to stop me back from what would me my life best.

School and Study .

Second , as student that was the hardest than that I though . No back round of school like knowledge or education because I never been in the school in my childhood so that made it for me so difficult to understand what the teachers were saying. So another attack of failure in my way, I did not no how to study because there was no one to help me what should I do in that time so fall at school. Because of what other people were saying about me like that impossible that you can go further than that you are now which is can not get high school diploma there were a lot of failure in my life .From failure to a big surprise that I making this year, I will be my graduation form high school and the nest will be collage. Because I do not what let other people make decision of what should I do or not.

Self development

Third was to wake to believe of myself and to make nay decision. there were a lot of pressure no me . I could not focus with what I was doing like school and work and other thing because of people around me. I could not eat well for two years and I got sick. All my families were worry about me. So over and over I fall of everything. And one day I asked one of my friend what you did to be successful in your life. ''she said be yourself and if you are important to yourself that will makes it different''. That word change my life to think positive. Nothing can make me stay a way from what make me successful.

And the end, as human our enthusiasm can make us stronger then failure. We have to look what other people did in the life because of enthusiasm. As human we can learn anyn things that we thought that is hard to learn it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,2.0
C3668997E921,"If I were to be asked to share a lesson with elementary school students it would be how to be respectful, to always learn and, be good communicators.

One of the first lessons I'll share with a student would be, being respectful. Being respectful is important to you and the people that surround you. For an example, you cant just go up to your teacher and tell them ""give me a pencil"" you should tell them ""may I please have a pencil"". Also if you don't be respectful to other people, people will not be respectful to you. The word ""respectful"" is not the only word you can use there's other words like nice, polite, and many other words, these ""other words"" are like branches of a tree that goes up to the main stem which is ""respect"".

Another lesson I would share would be to always learn, because in life it's always important to learn. To learn can be very hard or easy because how you learn is how you move along in life. For an example, when you first stared to walk how did you do it, by learning. Another example is, when your in school your always learning new things like math, history and, writing. Learning can be fun or boring, but in life you always need to learn for opportunities for jobs. The more you learn the better opportunities you'll get.

Lastly, being good communicators. In life you'll always have to communicate if it's your friends, teachers or your family, you'll always be communicating. For an example, I can't communicate with people, for me its very hard and every year goes by and it makes it more difficult to learn. When I came to my new school it was so hard to meet new people and I don't want anyone to suffer how I did but I learned and now I feel better I have new friends and if I never communicated then I would of just stay quite. A way for you to be a better communicator is to talk more and talk to new people, its an other great way to make new friends.

And those would be the things I would share to elementary school students to always learn, to be respectful and, be good communicators ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
41EAC230D430,"People who have a lot of experience in life have started off the same way as everyone one else, from the bottom. Their first ever job was something that they probably had never done before, this makes it so that they had to learn and adapt to something they were unfamiliar with. Hiring these people, people who had little to no experience to what they are now are the one who went on in life by learning and adapting. Hiring new people can also benefit employers in a positive way, by having someone with no experience can help grow that person professionally. Also finding someone with a lot of knowledge at something may be difficult for they all have jobs that require experience. This in the end can make it hard for employers to find someone just right for the position they need

Hiring someone who doesn't have experience in the job position you are looking for can be a good thing, first, it can help the employee discover skills for themselves and outside of the job, second, it can or will make the employee much better and more reliable for the position. New employees need a mentor or someone who can show them the correct ways to do the job and who ever the mentor is, it can help them grow their leadership skills dramatically. Having skill diversity among the group can also be very beneficial it can result in the new employees finding new ways to manage things on the job and may even find ways to replace the old rules for better ones. Some people are fast learners so he/she will adapt to the new work environment very easily. Building up experience is a key part in life and and some point there will be a time to get a job and seeing that everyone has started from the bottom, and hiring someone new can really benefit the company and the employer

Do i think that employers should hire someone that doesn't have any experience at something; yes, once hiring he/she the employee will do whatever it takes to keep that job and find new ways to grow while on the job. it is also a good way to expand company diversity and skills.

In the end, anyone who is looking for a job should be given an opportunity to learn and acquire skills to become better and stronger experience wise. Employers should mostly take notice on how ready and determined he/she is for the job rather than hoe much experience they have. At some point even the employer was given a chance so whoever the person may be should also be given a chance at this opportunity. I hope you take this letter into consideration and offer positions to someone who is eager to learn and be part of your group.

sincerely

Generic_Name ",3.5,3.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
A25E8EBA43CA,"I agree with this prompt or sentence because it the truth. A problem is not just a problem it a way fro a second chance and a success in life. A problem dose not mean your a life is over or i can not go back to redo it again, yes you can it your life you choose how to solve your problems. An example, having an F in your test dose not mean it the end no it not it the beginning because that how you start by giving your self a failure path and make it a success and that how a problem start. A way to solve a problem is like in school, at home, in the street, is talking it out with someone who can help in school you can talk to you teacher your consular, at home you can talk to you mom, sister, dad, brother, in the street if it a fight talk to each other, cause a street is not a place to fight. When having a problem you will know because it will give you this negative feelings like you are not perfect you can do anything right, you should know that failure is a lead to problem, a problem is a lead to second chance, second chance is a way to be success, just so you know giving yourself a second chance and accepting second chance when someone offer it that like the best thing in life cause keeping the positive spirit is what and giving yourself a chance is what other want so use it like you use your phone.  ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
3550660EE2EC,"A enjoyable educational activity is when I was doing a science experiment wewas building a volcano. It irupted we was all smiling because we didnt know it was gonna work. we put soda inside the volcanoe and we shaked it a little and then put mentos it went high. we had to clean it up after there was a mess every where but it was fun. As soon as everybody left I was taking to the teacher to ask her wat I got.

He told me that I got a B and I got mad because I got a B I was all like how and he told me that there was soda every where. it was messy and it had mentos in it and I was like please give me an A or can i at least remake it. He was like you can have one more chance to remake it I was all like thank you. it took me a while to make it and think what I can do so it wont spill anywhere. So I thought of putting a cone around the volcano put I was all like nah because whats the whole point of putting it if you cant see it.

I got an idea I put a lighter in side and a put a special paint that blows up with just fire. it can not make a mess I dont have to clean the floor I think this the best idea. i did it and i tryed it out at my house and it always blew up every where and I kept on thinking and thinking but I had no idea Ithought that it had to much paint and iI kep on putting it little by little.

It kinda worked if I put a little in a bootle and light it like that but thene I had an idea that if a put newspaper under it and let it burn it will help it and it did and then i kept putting more and more news paper it took like 16 news of paper and my brother helped me do it it was hard because i didnt know which way to put it. I got it all finished and I took it to school.

It was my turn i represented the volcano I lit it on fire and the whole volcano fell and I was mad. after school the teacher called me and told me.''you did a great job but it failed but guess what you get an A for at least trying'' I was so happy I didnt belive it I did it.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
9EB7D09C785B,"Take classes Online can help busy students, but is you are interested in take this classes can help you too. Take classes online is a good opcion for busy people because some times they do not have enough time to make food, do the homework and go to school, sometimes they need money so they need to work, and they look at this like an obstacle that keep them away from school. By taken classes online they can make a better sketch, eat at home, do the homework, have more time to do the things that they need to do at home. For example if you have a baby, you can take care of you baby, and they the classes olnine at home. Also, if you need to go to work, you can go to work and in your free time take the classes online. Another reason is that some students live far away from the school, and they do not have a car or transportation, is more easy for them to take the classes online in the comfort of their home. Also, if they are in a normal school and they want to keep learning by the summer they easily can take the classes online or the video conferencing. In my opinion I think that the classes online or the video conferencing can a lot of students, if they are busy or if they are interented in this classes they can take it too.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
E853D5DD528D,"People should be guidance by experts and authorities because in that way we can have less people killing each other; however, their are people that don't like to share their situation and there is where the suicide came from.

Although some say that people shouldn't to be guide by experts because they don't like to people tell them what to do, actually people should be guide by experts because they can show people to love each other and make a better world with no violence.

Their are people that don't like to be guide by others but they have a knowing in their life in what is good and bad by their experiences. For example my gram pa, he doesn't like to be guide by others but he said that he has an understanding in what is good and bad. He also told me that some people try to guide you for the bad way, by showing you how to drink beers or smoke cigarettes and you have to be ready to say not to those type of drugs but, I believe that we need to have experts and authorities to guide us about life's important.

Actually, people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because some experiences have better knowing then other ones and learn how to love each other. I would like to be guide by experts and learn about their experiences. That could be awesome.

Some times is better to make your own idea because that person that is by your side such as, your girlfriend or your mother could be wrong, and there is when you make a mistake and start to be disappointed with your self, In that time is when you are frustrated and you could kill your self or hurt someone else.

Violence can be make by a bad understanding. That's why people should seek guidance from experts and learn how to talk to each other. Usually if you are young , sometimes we don't know have to talk and their where problems came from. However

I encourage to al young people you seek guidance from experts until they have a better knowing in their decisions.

We as humans always make mistakes and we learn through them, but we need help from each other. We need to stopped the violence and start to love each other, but we have to seek guidance from expert and authorities about life important matter. Thats is how we can be better persons and we can change or thoughts.                         ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
EAB3924FD98F,"Students should take four years of high school, instead of three years, because students can have more time to learn, students can have electives, students can enjoy their summer vacations and their evenings, and finally students have more time to do stuff.

Althought some schools think that is better to offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years, actually students should take four years of high school. First students can have more time to learn. For example, in a year students can learn much stuff, and they have energy to learn, in the summer students just have two months to study, so they don't have much time to learn all the stuff they learn at school, in evenings students have three months to study, the classes start a 5pm and end at 7pm, so at that time students are tired and the don't have much energy, so it's difficult to concentrated and learn all the stuff. Second students can have electives, students can have classes like gym, art, and music students can discover new talents in that classes, also students relax their minds in that classes and enjoy the school. Third students can enjoy their summer vacations, students get tired for study ten months, is good that they can relax and pass time with their family and friends, so their mind is clear, and when they start study they have good attitude, energy and they want to learn new stuff. Finally students can have more time to do stuffs, because they can go home and do their homeworks, study for exams, pass time with their family, and have good sleep hours, they don't have to worry about go to school in evenings, they can relax.

Students should take four years of high school, so they have more time to learn, they can have electives and learn new things, they don't have to study on the summer and they can enjoy their vacation and evenings with family and friends, and finally they can have more time to do sttufs. ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
B32F41984B27,"Here is my three reason why student should not go online do the classes work at home.

My first reasons:student should not do there classes from home.

Because it can be hard doing you work at home it batter do the work at work because you can get help by the teacher at home no one can help you. It can be hard to do the work from online because you don't know what the teacher can gave to you i will rather do it at school because it will be easy to do the teacher can help you with it will be hard try to do you classes work online at home.

My seconds reasons:student who are smart should do there classes online at home.

Student who pass the SOL and the class they should get out early from school because people who have a job they should get out early from school. Student should have a high GPA so they can find a collage they want to be they have to think what they want to be when they finish high and collage so they can have there own business person and make money. People who is smart should not go to school because they already pass every they did.

my third reasons:They should make classes work online only for the kids.

Because it will be easy for them to do they classes work online. They should make classes online only for kid it will easy fro them do it it at home batter then school but some parents they want there kid to go to school and do the work at school. If they school do classes online for kid it will be easy for teacher and for the kid.

My finial reason:For school offer classes online at home.

I think all high school student should have classes online at home because it will be easy for student and for the teacher. If student have classes work online at home they can copy from his friends that why is not good to have classes online. Middle school should have a classes work online at home.

summer:

Collage should have online classes becuase it will easy for them do complete the classes online at home they will have time to do it and get a batter garde so you can complete the classes and take a new classes when you get A or B.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
5EE526AB840B,"How can a students learn more from home than attend classes in school?. A student has more benefits if they attend to classes in schools because if the student can not understand a topic or has questions about it, the teacher can not explain by video conferencing as a teacher that can explain face to face an be sure that student understood. My second reason is a student does not have a person who trust or a person to appeal if He/She are passing for any personal or familiar problem. In schools We can find a lot of person as a teachers, counselor, police members, and psychologist to help students. My last reason is a student has to socialize with other students to be prepare for his/her future.

Firstly, if a student can not understand a topic and has questions about it, they can feel more comfortable to ask and said

""I do not understand, can You explain me again?, if they are with the teacher face to face. Generic_Name (My friend's name) decided to take the classes online, in the beginning He was so excited, but after one month He told me that was not a good choice because He does not feel comfortable asking a lot of question about one topic by the computer, and when He not understood something, He just do not said anything to the tacher who is given him classes by video conferencing.

Secondly, in schools we can find many ways to be help if we have any problem in home. Teachers, counselors, any person who works in the school can help us. In my junior year I had a classmate who was attending to the school but then she change her classes to online, When I ask her why she change her classes She told me that her mom was fired of her job and She had to start working to support her family. She was 16 when that happened she felt alone with nobody who help her.

Lastly, students has to socialize with other students to feel the sensation of surpassing. If they just does not want to attend school because they are shy or they does not like to interact with other students, We are not educating a good citizen. Students has to feel the sensation of surpassing when they do their homework or when He/She finished their assignments, that sensation the student can not lose. I read in a newspaper a case about Generic_Name, He was 16 when He attended to online classes, He never like attend to school when He discover the option for students to attend classes from home he decided take it. because He never like to interact with other students. After 2 years he graduated, but he never were prepare to socialized with persons, and that affects his personal life.

In conclusion, the offer to learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing in not a good idea because all of them are under 18, They does not have a good criteria to take that big decision that can bring serious consequences or affect their life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
0C28481DFBB8,"In my opinion, I know why Thomas Jefferson decide to wrote this for his people. He want to see if we are responsible with our own work and left to lose the time just little things, he just want that his people can make their dreams. When he wrote this people was scare because their people was slave before

Abraham Lincol become president of the United State. This show three reason why he wrote this.

First, Thomas Jefferson spend his time with us because he want to see how his people really following his wrote. Many people don't think about what they can do in their life, if we still spend time with other people we don't accomplish our own dreams, sometimes people are shy,and scare with their dreams because other people can bother them because they can accomplish their dreams or may be they don't believe in them. Some people can't acommplish their dreams because they think that is lot stuff but the reason is that they never try, if they can accommplish their dreams.

Second, if we look and read carefully we can find more about this wrote. We really can't thinking about because we don't have commitment to make our own dreams better. Some people are in school but they don't see the opportunity that we have for make a lot stuff in the future. We just go at school because our mothers dispatch us at the school. If we used about Thomas Jefferson wrote we can learn how we have work hard for make our life much better. We just have to think just in the our future and study more for have a good grade and accomplish the dreams we wish.

Third, in this time we have much time in our own life for do a lot stuff because we are freedom. But we just think to go out with friend and have fun, nobody care their dreams in this time. They spends their time in party and doing lots stuff with our friends. If we still doing the same things with our friends we never get something better in our own life. We need to have more commitment about what we really want in our future.

In conclusion, we can be better than other people because we are young and we can do more stuff. We can teach them thst we can do all this stuff, if we can think better. We have a good concentration in all what we do. Don't matter what we can accomplish our own dreams because we are not alone we have our familes for support us with really we want to do in the future. Thomas Jefferson give force for continue with our dreams and never give up with our own dreams.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
CF4E6D77F514,"Our cell phones could help us in many situation, but they can also distract us in many ways. Some teachers thinks that they should let their student use their cell phones for educational purposes while other don't. Cell phones could affect a student in their process of learning.

A cell phone can be a distraction for anybody specifically for a student. If students are allow to use their phone in their classroom for educational purposes they could get distracted with the other apps on their phone. For example: Sanpchat, Instagram, Facebook, or even a text message. All of this apps could distract the student from doing what he or she is supposed to be doing in the class.

All students most do their own work at all time to show the teacher what he or has learned in class. Having access to a cell phone in class could tempt the student to cheat on their class work or test. Also students could send each other answer through a text. Classroom should be a red zone at all time so students won't have the chance to cheat in their work.

Every student should be focus on one specific thing thing while they are in school which is to have good grades in their class. By being able to have access to their cell phone in class the student won't try as hard to keep their grade up. Not having their phone would push them to do better in the class. The student will have all their attention on getting their assignment done in time.

Some students know how to control them self while others can't. Cell phones are a big distraction for teenagers now days. Most of them can't go anywhere without their phone in their hands. All classroom should be a red zone just so students could put all their focus in school work. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
205069BE2E53,"1. Scientist Albert Einstein is wrong because imagination is not important because it won't help you with studying or anything like that, knowledge is more important than imagination because imagination is showing you some mental dumb images in ur brain so it not good for you, being knowledge is more helpful.

2.

Scientist Albert Einstein is trying to compareing about which is more important imagination or knowledge but he said to himself that Imagination is more important than knowledge so i disagree because it not right imagination is not gonna help these kids being smart.

3. Scientist Albert Einstein is trying to help these kids to be smart,but i don't think i agree that imagination is right because i just think that imagination can show you some images about like your just making a car right now, so im just gonna said maybe imagination is more important than knowledge maybe i said..

4. Imagination probably is more important because it might sometimes show you images about something that your being smart something like that but i can't figure it out, being knowledge is more important but i guess not.

5. For now i think Imagination is help for all the peoples i bet every scientist use they imagination to create something new, from now own i will use my imagination to think something smart that can help everyone.                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
164D6D056A48,"I have a awesome talent, that is making weird high pitch noises. I make the noise sometimes, But in elementary school I made the noise all the time. When I found out that I could make the noise it was in 1st grade.

I made the noise all the time, I could do it and no won could stop me except myself. The only reason I really never stopped was because i made my friends laugh and i made jokes. The first example was I making what does the fox say and I made my weird noises. The second example was I randomly out of nowhere I slowly looked at my friends and stared right at them and i quickly made a lobster position and chased them well making the noise. I make a lot of noises at school but at home its even worse.

When am at home thats when I strike with the noises. I really liked annoying my sisters all the time. But, they punched me because I was being annoying because I always made the noises. The first reason they would punch me was because I sat right next to them and started making the noise, and less the two seconds she punched me really hard on the shoulder. The second reason was when I went in my sister room and started pocking her when i was making the weird noises and she got so mad she punched me on my chest that really hurt. But, now I really don't make the noises anymore i got tired of it myself. But, I do it on accident sometimes when im playing games.

I found out I had a talent and that was making high pitch noises And I used a lot. I made my friends laugh hard and made my sisters hate me a lot but i had fun with it. I made jokes one is what does the fox say and i made my high pitch sounds. the other was being punched by my sisters on the shoulder and the chest "" man the chest one really hurt"". But im pass that i may on accident do sometimes but other then that im done with it for good this time.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
F8F7785B285B,"The lesson for elementary students is what kind of the subject that each students are really into. There are manys of subjects lesson like science english math history etc

The lesson would i like to share to students is sign laungue. This is new lesson for students to commutity with others while using their own hands. Not manys people don't know what is sign laungue. It alright to teach sign laungue to students because one day they met someone who know only sign laungue so he/she can commutity to the person.

There are some school that are teaching students sign laungue to commutity in the real world. Sign laungue is still use til this day around the globe. Why sign laungue was made for? There not manys people can hear or talk so he/she use sign laungue to commitity to others to people around.

Even though things are different in sign laungue and talking to commutity. You remember even words to commutity to person or people and in sign laungue you'll remember every hands sign to commutity to the person or people. It choice for your own if you want to learn something new in sign laungue.

Sign laungue is not the only thing that people doesn't know. The people who can't see he/she use morise is code to learn it almost like reading but it to learn in real world. Ever letters and numbers have code like sign laungue. They are both different but unquie ways to learn.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
CA8C0B2EA600,"The one place that I would want to visit would be LOCATION_NAME.The reason on why I choose this place was because, I was born and raised there.I want to visit this place because I have so many memories there.Memories of my child hood,memories of when I had my first golden medal,memories of when me and my cousin got into a soccer team together and made a lot goals,and many more.

The main person that I want to see that lives in LOCATION_NAME is my dad.He was always there for me for my brother and my sister.He took us places that we wanted to go to,like LOCATION_NAME, LOCATION_NAME,and LOCATION_NAME.He gave us everything we asked for,but when my mom and him got seperated we didn't see him much.We only saw him for the weekends,and it was okay at least we were spending time together with our cousins and him.

When I arrive at Texas the first thing I want to do is hug my dad,and then go eat with him with my brother and sister.After doing that I want to see all of my family that lives there especially my favorite cousins.There are so many things I want to do once I get there, but it wouldn't happen in one day.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
D5C8C29F17D8,"If school can offer options to students to finish school at home is great because they want students can learn and give them more opportunities. Students can be more benefit if they attend to school and they can learn more than to did at home. Also there are many students can't come to school because they have a job and they have to did school at home. Students are not that much of prepare if they did school at home. If students could attend to school it can be great for them to be more able to did more prepared them for the future. Also that can get opportunities if they attend to school and good reviews from teachers.

If students attend to school there are more ways to learn. Also students can be more able to ask more question to teachers. If they did classes from home that are not able to ask a lot of question and they can't met friend who can be a big help for them. If you attend to school also teachers can prepared you more and they talk to you if you did wrong in classes. All teachers in school i believe that they can see your capacity or level that you are and at home they just give you work and they didn't know anything about the student. The teacher at school can see the way that you better learn and they can work with the student to don't fell classes because the know you better if you go to school. Home school is a great idea for people that can't come to school.

In the world are students that can't attend to a school because they have a job or others problems to go to school. In the world is not only one single reason to don't attend to school. Many of the students that can't attend to school in the United States of America is because they work and this work can't give opportunity to attend to school. Sometimes they don't attend to school because is hard to work and wake up in the mornings to go to school. They also many times prefer to do school at home because they maybe have physical problems and they feel better if they did at home. Many students can't come to school but if they did at home this shows that they are planing to graduate even if they don't receive a good chance to learn more.

Students at home are not learning what they can learn in school. They are not very prepared if they did school at home because sometimes teachers give activities with friends and students can learn from that activities or presentations of projects that the whole class did it. School also you can practice more if you are learning and at home you can't practice what you learn. If you are learning English and you did school at home if they speak other language that is not English you can't practice it. If you did school at home there are also many distractions that you can't concentrate and if you are not concentrated in what your working on you are not going to understand what you are doing. If you are in a classroom teachers make sure that you are concentrated in your own work and they also make sure that you are doing right that why students who attend to schools can be more prepared than students who did school at home.

In conclusion if you have time and the opportunity to attend to school you should do it because you will learn and get more opportunities. If you can't attend to a school and you are doing school at home you must concentrated in your work and don't get distracted. Also if you are receiving school at home you must find some one who you can work with to practice. The opportunity that many school offer is a great idea. School wants to students can complete their dreams even if they can't assist to a school. But the schools are giving opportunities to finish at home and must students should appreciate that because school is thinking about the future of the society. In fact school programs are working for people who really want to have opportunities and make their dreams true.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
F86C79CE78F4,"The people can't speak and had contact with other peolpe but, not undestand to other people; Someone people are invisible for other people because they speak little, although is better comunication to each person.

The technology can't elimination to the human, Because the human are creating for God and God is creator of the human for which reason, the technology not change, the humans have the ability for take the technology more specific and creative.

I thing than, the technology is positive for the human, Because for everyone people help and take that the people have more creativite, and more inteligent.

To the people not effect the technology;

The people can check book, shop in your cellphone without needed speak with other person, for the person is very good because to go by car to the shop.

I think than everything for progress is positive in the community for the human, Because everyone learn more things with the technology, Although there much deliquency among more cience exist in the world. ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
E792CBEB06C5,"I think that students should bring phones to school but turn then off and put them in their locker.

If the students don't do that job they might be in a big problem. in SCHOOL_NAME if the students do not turn theirs phone off and it rings during class the teachers automatically will take the phone from the students.

Eventually the parents have to come and get the phone from school and give them to their kids.

If the students bring their phones to school they will text their friends, call their friends and take pictures.

In contrast if the students are doing those jobs during classes and there were no school rules the students would play with their phone during class time.

During class time students might listen to their favorite songs on their phone and don't pay attention to the teacher which they will get a worst citizenship in their report card and they will not graduate and they will feel sad and shocked about what they have done to hurt them.

lastly these are the reasons that students allow and not bring their phones to school,",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
2C76B87A843F,"Choosing me to visit your business, will help me be a better cooker. Since, it will allow me to prepare for my future. Also, it will help me learn more about cooking. Finally, your business will inspire me to accomplish my goal. Despite this valid reasons. Some people argue that it's not important for me to visit your business, because it's a waste of time. However, if I don't prepare my self for the future, I would not know what I am going to go through. Ultimately, going to your business is a great opportunity for me to get prepared, to improve my learning, and to feel inspired.

First, in order to become a cooker, it is important to be prepared for all the circumstances that the work contains. Also, it gives knowledge about what we are confronting. Case in point, having the opportunity to visit you business, will allow me to prepare for when it is my turn to be in the the kitchen. Furthermore, in the future I will have a better understanding of what cookers have to go through. Clearly, being prepared would help me in the future, and will improve my way of learning.

Additionally, it will also help me learn more about how to become a professional cooker and will improve my abilities in the kitchen, by learning other peoples way of cooking. For example, exploring your business, will allow me to observe and learn, the skills that some employees apply to their work. As a result, learning new techniques will improve my way of cooking. Obviously, learning develops my abilities and inspires me towards my goal.

Lastly, visiting your business can implement my decision of becoming a great cooker. It is important to have inspiration on what we want to accomplish. In particular, observing the passion that each cooker applies to their work, will inspire me to continue with my goal of becoming a professional cooker. Therefore, it's important to be inspired by people who are good at their work. Plainly, inspiration, is a key motivation for the future.

Some people say that it's not important for me to visit your business, because it's a waste of time. This idea is inaccurate. For instance, if I don't visit your company I would not have the opportunity to prepare my self for the future. Also, I will not have any idea of what I'm going to go through. Moreover, choosing me to go and visit your business, will allow me to be prepared. Undoubtedly, going to your business will help me in different ways.

To conclude, visiting your business will be helpful for my future. It will give me the opportunity to prepare my self. I will be able to learn and improve my abilities of cooking. Moreover, it will motivate me to reach my goals. Although, some people say that it's not important to be prepared for the future; since, it takes away time. Furthermore, it is important for me to be prepared. Therefore, attending your business will help me improve, learn, and inspire me to reach my goal. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
E07F7A913FB6,"A football manager OleGunnar Solksajer once said ""Prasing his players and kids helps them work to the best of their ability"". That is a very significant statement because every student have their own set of skills and abilities. Some students are good in sports,math,science,art or music. However, plenty of students are not able to perform to the best of their ability because they have low self-confidence which is mainly caused by the lack of praise and incentive by their parents,teachers or coaches. Praising a student's work is important because it helps build their confidence and motivates them to work harder.

Praising a student's work is vital for their productivity because it builds their confidence. Studies show that people with high self-confidence are usually risk takers,creative,optimistic,hardworking and productive. This shows how important it is for teachers and parents to praise their students. Self-confidence is not something that happens suddenly, it is a process that builds up from a young age. Little praises and incentives from parents and teachers are not only important for the students' performance in school but also when they transform into adults.

Additionally, another importance of praising students is the motivation for them to work harder. Students always seem to work harder when they get an incentive or praise. That is because students feel appreciated for their work and it also make them feel like they are doing a good job so they always stay motivated to do better every time. Motivation is vital for everyone because its as important as an oil is for a car. Motivation is a motor that keeps the sudents happy and hopeful. Motivated students always work hard and give their best effort.

There are some people that think praising students will undrmine learning by lowering standards and some believe a true self-esteem and confidence comes from achievment and not from prasing. Although it's a fair opinion, it is wrong because students who get praise from teachers and parents always seem to do better acadamically and in outside-school activities. In conclusion, Praising a student's work is very important because it helps build their confidence and motivates them to work harder and smarter.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
FAC3F8F91C6F,"Graduating early isn't a good idea because lot of people find it difficult in maturing. Some people are lack of plan/organization in their life.

It will be difficult for them to face the challenge the world have.

I do not support it because i feel like the school are rushing to grow up to fast. They will leave you with a huge responsibility that you aren't ready to take on. Is like tell a new baby bird to fly in the world that fill with danger things.

Most people that graduate early goes through depression because they are loosing a huge part of their child hood.

from my point of view people who graduate find a huge difficult in life because when they graduate,they will have that mind set it is good idea to take a year of college because they graduated early and when you rest for a year you start to forget everything you learn and when you go to t college you have less memory on what u learn in high school.

For a student to graduate early they most have a lots of requirement to graduate such a good record responsible and have a plan in life.

Graduating early is a wasted of time and effort. All you got to do is bared the four and be will prepared for the future instead of u jumping into the future with out knowledge",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
D939E8851FAE,"Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because, you're getting people's opinions and their way of handling a situation people can give you advice that you wouldn't have thought about before and that will help your choice in many ways. Some peoples opinions can support your choice or can go against your choice. Getting other people's opinion can help someone think of a better choice and make that choice more helpful to that someone.

Why getting other people's opinions can help someone make a better choice or think of a better choice is because, people can tell you the same thing but in a different wording. Having different opinions can make someone think of a better choice because people give that someone ideas of the choice they're going to make. Having more opinions does help a lot because they could make someone's choice more beneficial and help someone's way of thinking about better choices, having less people wouldn't really want to persuade someone to make better choices and it wouldn't be that make someone think of a better choice. The more opinions people give someone, the more likely the choice will be or they will think of a better choice.

Opinions can persuade someone to make a better choice because a good friend or a good person can give his opinion that would make someone want to make a better choice having lots of good opinions can benefit someone's choice and make better choices. Having two or one opinion doesn't persuade someone to make better choices but having five or eight people could make someone want to make better choices because people can be very persuasive and some people wouldn't really listen or care what one or two people say but if its at least five or more then there is chance of that someone might listen or even care because lots of friends and family or even teacher want that someone to make better choices and he or she can't just ignore that unless they want to make bad choices. Having advice from close ones can be helpful to because they can persuade someone to make choice that will benefit their life and ensure that they will not regret that choice they made in the future.

That's why having multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice, they help people think of better choice and new ones to, they can persuade people to make better choices, having more opinions can benefit their choice, having more opinions can make someone's choice more beneficial, having more opinions can give someone ideas. That's why having multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
7A7D7BC53938,"Its a fact that possitive actitude is the key of succses. In every single thinsg that you made, or every single act that you take, even a small ane like blink if you are not confident in what you are doing, on that i will make it fealling, you will be failing.

That does not mean that fealing is a bad thing because fealing is a important aspec of successes. Not only because you will learn from the mistakes that led you to the failing box. But also you will come back knowing against what you are figthig with, next time you will be back with a diferent set of mind, with a diferent plan, even with a diferent actittude, and all that because one thing wich all the people says is bad.''Fail''.

but lets be honest, why would somebody fail if you have the chace to be successfull ?, because if you are not going to win and get what you want and are looking for, do not even struggle, stay at home laying donw and watching some series. There is a real hungry world with real hungry people out there and if you are just giving the 75 percent it of your capacity it would be just not enougth.

Thats were positive actittude comes up, if you know your value and you are wheling to give the one hundred percent you dont have to worry.

If you are confident and positive you will go for what you are looking fof do not matter who is agaist you, do not matter what the people would say and specially it do not matter the cost of it. That is the key of success.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
C49F716838E7,"Should students attend to year-round schools?

Considering year-road schools they are good for students to attend too because they retain more information,students stay in school,and become more responsible students.

In my point of view, I think they are too expensive,students do not spent time with family or friends,and dont have the opportunity to have new experiences in life; for example having a summer job.

For example the experience I had in life with year-round schools was in Generic_City, when I lived their with my family for over ten years after living in the United States for nine years for my life; and for my parents for over twenty year of living in the United States; moving to Generic_City was a big change of life to my family. My parents wonted the best for me and my brothers, so we attended to a year -round school. It was not easy being their because me and my brothers did not know much Spanish but know is are first language. Also it was too expensive,and students did not spend time with family, all kids do is attend to school all year.

After me and my brothers finish up are year in that school, my parents decided to move us to a normal school to spend more time in home, and have more life experience. It was so much better being in a normal school because I had more time in school vacation as a student, also had a summer job, and more time for me and family.

Also I experence more new thing in my normal school like being part of a band, playing for the school soccer team,being part of the drill team enjoying school like kids shoud do.

In my point of view student should not attend to year-round school because some students have part time job,it too expensive attend at year-round schools , and some students plan family vacation out of the country to spend time together.

But having this year-round school some students retain more information and stay focus to learn more information. Also by not attending to year-round schools some students have more life experience and become responsible in life.

In conclusion i consider students should attend to normal schools because they are less expensive,students can have a part time job, and also have some more life experience to help them become more responsible persons.     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
1E7CF4875ED5,"Playing an instrument is a very educational and enjoyable activity to do. If you know how to play an instrument you can get many advantages from it, that could be really fun for you to do, you can also help people by teaching them how to play an instrument, and last but not leats you can play an instrument in your free time.

If you know how to play an instrument you can get many advantages from it. Playing an instrument can lead you to a great career that can really help you in life. Playing an instrument can make you learn other instruments faster. And my last reason why playing an instrument give you a lot of advantages, is that you an upload videos on

Social Media of you playing an instrument which will make you meet famous or nice people that can guide you to a better life.

My second reason is that you can help people by teaching them how to play an instrument, it can be really enjoyable for both of you. There is a lot of people out there that believe in themselves and have a lot of positivity in themselves too, they would really like to learn an instrument and it could be really fun teaching them because they really want to learna new thing. You can also meet new and nice people, that can make you learn a new instrument, and you can also go to specific places where you can show and teach people with disabilities how to play an instrument which will make them really happy.

Playing an instrument in your free time is a cool thing to do. Playing an instrument in your free time can relax your body and it can make you forget your daily problems. In the other hand playing an instrument can make you avoid technology like cellphones, computer and tablets which is something really good and my third reason is that it can make you learn and improve your talent or career.

In conclusion playing instruments is a really fun activity. If you are bored now you can just play an instrument, you can also play an instrument in your free time, you can get advantages and you can teach which is also a really fun thing to do. And that's why playing an instrument is really fun.      ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
198F2ABF2971,"Why

Great Britain is the greatest place to visit for the tourists? In my opinion, best place to visit for the tourists is Great Britain. Because, Great Britain has,the most interesting and mysterious places to visit, the culture differences, and why is visiting Great Britain is great motivation to start learn English.

Firstly, Great Britain has a lot of tourist places to visit for example, Big Ben. Big Ben is the one of the main historical places that tourist should visit first. Also, Great Britain built a lot of castles between 15th and 17th century. This castles were serving to, protect rich people or royal families from attacks, and to keep them warm. But right now most of this castles are not used to live inside because people left hem alone and nobody could keep them clean and safe. It's great place to visit to feel how people lived differently than us right now.

Secondly, Great Britain believes in very interesting type culture in the world. People are living their life with optimistic view even if they have not the best time in their life. Actually, people who lives their whole life in Great Britain has beautiful accent that helps them to make a lot of dramatic operas. All of the Great Britain history, people believed in Christianity and promoted to other people, it cause that all of their old colonies are believing in Christianity.

Finally, if the tourist is visiting Great Britain, it's a good motivation to start learn English because, right now most of the world is using English to communicate with each other, and English is one of the greatest language to start to learn. English can be difficult sometimes but every language is difficult in some ways.

In the end, Great Britain is the great country to visit and explore their culture style, historic places, and motivation to learn something new for yourself. Great Britain will give you the most exciting moments and feelings.",4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
0514D25768A0,"Technology has been one of the most facts popular during the 21st century. It is well-known for every ages around the world. However, the use of technology had have negative effects on people's lives. There are three reasons very clear about it.

First, technology has a lot of wed-sites which attracted to most people. Therefore, when you walk in the park or wherever you go, you will see most people with their eyes into their phone, ipad, computers or another device. As a result, there are many road accidents or even some parents lose their children in the mall.

Second, students are not productive in their classes. They do not need to read a book, to find the information what they need because everything is in the internet. In other words, technology is more intelligent than our students.

Finally, technology has ended up with our social life. Nobody what to talk with other person without use his phone. In adittion, the comunication between parents and children, can not be possible these days because they are very busy surfing on internet. They spend a lot time in their devices, when they are in the store, in the house, in the work, even in a date.

However, some people think that technology is not bad at all because it help to save people. For example, in a hospital, doctors usually use technology to do X-ray, operations and to test different body part's. This help them to do more professional their work. Also, it help to do many work outside the country. For example, if the government in our country want to send information to an allied country, it will be easier by e-mail.

In conclusion, technology could cause death to people who do not know how use it. Also affects to the student's learning and limited the human contact. In other hand, It can be use for positive things, as along as we use it with responsability.",3.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
E56D7CC27444,"Some people believe that glorifying a student's work might help them build self-steem, even when they have not put a lot of effort into it. They believe that students should be confidents in themselves in so they can learn. Others believe that glorifying a student's work that does not have a lot of effort into it lowers their levels of learning. They believe that in order to build self-steem they must complete achievements. I believe that students do not need others to praise their work, even when they did not put enough effort into it. It would make students think that what they did is perfect and that they do not need to work more on it or to do some more effort to achieve what they want. Although some people might not agree. They would think that it is a good thing to glorify students work only to make them feel confident. However, I firmly believe that students should put effort on what they do and that they do not need other people to praise their work only to make the feel confidents with themselves.

One reason I believe students do not need to be praised on their work is because it would only make them rely on what they have and not work to achieve more results. They will not do more of what they are capable of. In addition, they will not put more effort on what they need to do. They do not need others to praise their work only to make them feel confident with themselves. Finally, students will always need others to tell them what they did is amazing to raise their self-steem. This matters because there are people who still believe that praising a student's work will help them to be self-consident.

Second reason I believe that students do not need to other people to glorify their work is beacause it would make them think that everything they do is correct. Students will think that they are not capable of doing more than what they believe they can do. For example, they will always check their work with others only to feel confident with what they did. In addition, I think it is best to tell students that they need to be confident with themselves instead of praising their work. FInally, students do not need others to praise their work in order to be self-confident. This is importan because people have to tell students that they need to be self-confident, even when what they did has not their best effort.

Third reason I believe that achievement is the key to build self-steem is because only achieving what we want we can feel confident with ourselves. I think that to build self-steem we must put a lot of effort to achieve what we have to do. Students need to achieve what they have to do in order to be self-confident. This matters because students should know that they need to work hard and that means to put their best effort, if they want to build self-steem.

In conclusion, I believe that people should not praise the students work only to help them build their self-steem. Sometimes they have not put their best effort in their work. They are going to feel that they are always doing exactly what they needed to do, even if is not like that. In order to be self- confident students must do achievements. However, some people will not agree with my opinion and they will say that it is best to tell students that their work is well done, even when is not only not to make them feel bad or to damage their self-steem.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
D3D5841674F5,"Technology has positive effects on people's lives because they can help you with many information that your trying to look up for example if your trying to shop, play games, or even buy or read books. They help you do a lot when you really need it. Technology is not for only buying or doing any other things it's for doing projects in class or a if your doing your homework, applying for jobs, and applying for college. Here are my 3 reasons why technology is positive for people's lives.

First, let's say that you want to go to college but you can't go to the college because you don't have time or maybe that you just can't go. What you can do is that you can go on your laptop and go to the website and apply there and you can take your time on it and not have to worry about going there. You can apply to many collleges online and that is really great so you can get accepted to many colleges out in other countries or states. When my brother was in 12th grade he wanted to go personaly to the colleges but he said some of them were too far and that he didnt want to go because he needed to do something really important and so what he did was that he went online and started applying for 5 colleges and he got accepted to 4 of them. He said it was not even hard. Having to fill papers with people takes up so much time that you will be there the whole day instead of you doing it online at home and not having to rush up anything and if you mess up the laptop tells you that there is something that you typed up is wrong.

Second, If you don't feel like going to the store because your just tired and you just don't want to go out but you need some clothes for that night and you don't have any then what you can do is go online and start shopping there and buy everything you need for that night and you will be fine with out the need of going to the mall or going to any other store. At the same time even tho your not going out if you shop online there is a posibility that your clothes that you ordered does not fit you or it might not come on time when you really need it. The process of returing it and everythig is just too much. That's why people prefer that it's better to go to the store and just buy it from there. If that was me I would prefer to go to the mall or the store to. When you go to the stores sometimes you have to handle some workers that are aggressive and they have a bad attitude. I don't like seeing people with bad attitude it makes me mad and it always makes me just go away and not look at them anymore.

Third, In school sometimes you have projects and you have class work but you can't find information about your research or anything about your topic or about your class work then you have to find information online. When you ask your teachers what they would say is that go on your laptop and look it up and then go ask your classmates if you can't find anything. For my US VA History project are teachers gave us many different websites that we can use and they were very helpful I got all my information from there. I didn't even have to go ask him for help or anything. Also when you have test it's mostly technology because you don't really have test on paper anymore now it's on laptops and you don't have to write anything now it's only typed it is really easy and fast. Even essays it used to be essays on paper and now it's essays in laptops.

In conclusion, These were my 3 main reasons why technology has a positive effect on people's lives. There can be many positive effects on technology but theses 3 were mostly about how technology is even tho you do not interact with other humans face-to-face it is good doing online things. There are better chances that you get many things done and also you get the chance to have some time off of looking and talking to people. If I were to ask many people which side they prefer they would choose the positive effect side. ""It's better technology instead of talking to people"".",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
F711DAD6AA51,"I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisehment"" because of Success,being yourself,and being the owner of you life.

First success is the most important thing for the sociaty because we all need great people like philantropist who help reducing povrety in the world,great inventor who creat thing tahat today we cannot live whith out it such as Car,internet,and computer. and the Evolution of Human being by creating a safe enviroment for everyone to live a long and healthy life.

Secondly being yourself is a great accomplishment because you truely the person you want to be, you are true to the people around you being showing them who you really are by acting truely without faking who you are,and you are live a meaninfull live by being yourself instead of what the world want you to be.

Thirdly being the owner of you life is really important because you can your own decide, you can decide what kind of futur you want ,and being able to make this decisision by yourself will make you life greatfull,and mostly an healthy live.

Some people will said that is worthless or is better to be told what to do,but being able to creat your Success,being yourself,and being the owner of you life is somthing really important for the development of Human life and for every individu to dicide what they want to be or what they have plan for they futur.

All this will drive a person to a great accomplishment because life is a text and every individu have a different text so being yourself in this world will always be a great accomplishment because some people a conditioner to live the live that the world gave them. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
72635AF44FA7,"Some schools use cellphones in the classrooms for educational purposes. Allowing students use their cellphones in the classroom may have a positive effect in the education of the students, who use their cellphones frequently. In other words, it will make students feel better about doing their classwork. Because it will help students finish their school work or homework, check their grades and assignments, and students will learn better.

One positive effect of allowing students use their cellphones in the classroom is that students will have a chance to finish their classwork or homework. Some students have classes that left many homework, so that means that they may need more time to finish their assignments. Moreover some students have personal issues, for example; Sometimes I can not focus in do my homework because I may have a problem that blind my mind and that makes me feel stressful, and that does not let me work on it. Also some students have jobs after school, for example. I have a job after school and sometimes my tiredness is huge that it does not let me finish my homework, and I can tell that it is really difficult, so having this experience I think that it would be really good that school allow students use their cellphones in the classrooms to educational purposes.

Another reason is that students will have the chance to check their grades or assignments. Some students miss school and they probably does not if have assignments, or they does not have time to check it in home. Most of the students forget easily that they have homework, for example; Sometimes when I get home and I started doing some of my labors and when I notified it is already time to sleep, so they next day I do not have any time to finish it. Therefor it will be good to most of the students check what they are missing during class, and they can probably ask the teacher for permission if they can work on what they are missing. Also ask for help to the teacher if they does not know how to do it, for example; I had a friend that math is hard for him, so he check his assignments in the classroom and ask the teacher for help to understand better, so I think it will help students to get their grades better.

Some people say that the allow of using cellphones can cause a negative effect is because it will distract students, for example; some teachers say that students will be doing something else, like texting or playing video games, in other words students will not pay attention in class. Whatever they are incorrect because students will a better way to learn, in which one they will feel comfortable. The point is make feel that they can learn in an interesting way, for example; Some teachers let students play trivia games on their cellphones, so students can learn and have a good time doing it. They will learn better because most of the things that students look in their phones they are capable to memorize it. May be the pass generations think that the use of too much technology, like allow the use of cellphones in the classrooms is a bad idea because it will make our brains slow is not true it just help us to learn in a better way.

In conclusion, the school allowing the use of cellphones in the classroom will have a positive effect because it will help students finish their school work or homework, check their grades and assignments, and they will learn better. We are the new generation and the future of the next one, we have the help of technology to get a better knowledge. The future is on our hands and make it easy is our decision. They are just finding better ways for us to learn and educate better because they want us to succeed in school, like in our lives. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
4462E068017D,"This prompt is asking if they should reduce summer vacations because they think its hard for students to retain informartion easily after a long break.

Summer you can travel with your family to different places and have fun and not to worry about school things. Students should have summer break after months of been at school and they can take their stress out during the big break and focus on other things outside of school. You can travel to different places or countrys to see your love ones if you haven't seem them in a long time. Summer is like enjoy myself time because you can do things you can't do while you are in a school year because its a short time but summer is like two months break. Students can go to retake classes during the summer if they fail and they want to recover a credit for a class. Students that play sports would have more fun enjoying playing it because they don't have to worry about anything but stay in shape for their sports and they have more time to play sports. For the students that like to read a lot they have a lot of time to their self and can spend major of their time at the library reading tons of books. Students that like to travel a lot they can anywhere and later they can write journal or take pictures and tell their classmates how their summer went.

Bad things if they reduce summer break will be more school time. People wouldn't be able to go places because they have to attent to school and they would have to worry a lot. Most people would be stress from school if they don't have a long break like summer. Summer wouldn't be fun for students because thats when they all gather together and they have fun and enjoy theirselfs.

I think the school boards should not reduce summer break because you can travel with your family to different places and have fun and not to worry about school things. Students should have summer break after months of been at school and they can take their stress out during the big break and focus on other things outside of school. You can travel to different places or countrys to see your love ones if you haven't seem them in a long time. Summer is like enjoy myself time because you can do things you can't do while you are in a school year because its a short time but summer is like two months break. Students can go to retake classes during the summer if they fail and they want to recover a credit for a class. Students that play sports would have more fun enjoying playing it because they don't have to worry about anything but stay in shape for their sports and they have more time to play sports. For the students that like to read a lot they have a lot of time to their self and can spend major of their time at the library reading tons of books. Students that like to travel a lot they can anywhere and later they can write journal or take pictures and tell their classmates how their summer went. This is my support and i agree that they shouln't reduce summer break because it will have everyone go crazy.   ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
B9B71CEE162B,"This is a very important important subject to me Thank You fore giving me the opportunity write about it. In my opinion i believe that graduating in four years is a lot better than, graduating in three years. The traditional four years of high school does not put the student under pressure, unlike the three year plan. The four year plan allows the student to have some elective classes. The three year plan helps students graduate faster but it also, it does not give people time to enjoy the summer or have free time to do their favorite hobby.

High school is the best time of every student's life, because in high school students do not have a lot of responsibilities. Students who decide to pick the three year plan will be making a big mistake. Students might not be able to have any elective classes, these classes are made to be easy classes that help student do their favorite hobby like playing guitar, piano and sports, these type of classes help students remove the stress from their brains by doing something they like. I am pretty sure that students who do the four year traditional plan will be doing better in school because they are not pressured, unlike the other students with the three year plan. I was born in Egypt i moved to the United States in 2015, which was my freshman year of high school. I had to take all the mandatory classes in my first year in order to be able to graduate on time. I was not able to take any elective classes, which put me under pressure and made feel bad, because of the amount of homework and the number of hours i used to sit in my room and study.

Students in high school should be enjoying their lives. Students who do the three year plan do not have time to enjoy their lives with their family all year long, because they will have to study in order to pass their class and graduate. We all know that social life is important to every single one of us and, it affects how we do in school. Students who do the three year plan do not have time to do anything but study and do school related stuff which causes a lot of people depression and anxiety. Last year one of my closest friends had to do summer school, every time i call him he barley answers and says that he can not hang out because he got school related work to do. My friend used to hangout with me all the time but he did not because he had to go to summer school, he was telling me that he was not happy be cause he would wake up go to school finish school, go straight to work, come back from work do his homework and sleep, he barley had time to eat, which made him very tired mentally and physically.

Some of the students in high school are independent, they live on their own have a job and dont ask parents for money. Independent students can not do the three year plan because the will not have any time to do anything other than work and school. For example i have a job i live on my own and i do not as my parents for any money or anything in order for me to do the three year plan i will have to quit my job, so i can be able to focus on school or else i will fail in school and not be able to graduate and if quit my job i will have no source of income to take care of myself and pay for my rent, but i do the four year traditional plan and i have a good job where i can focus on both school and my job so i can live.

In conclusion the three year plan is not a very good decision to make and everyone should think twice before deciding on it. The three year plan does not let students have their free time to hand out with their friends or do their favorite hobby. That plan also does not give people time to have time with their family or the people they love. The three year plan will not give you time to have a job if you need one. I believe by going to high school for four years students will be able to get more experience and enjoy the best time of their lives. Thank you.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
64B53DEF0467,"Technology is good for many stuff. For example, technology is good for research, homework or otherstuff. But, they their is a negative effects on people's lives. Technology can be use for bad stuff like in internet, researching bad stuff in the website. But like I said technology is good for many stuff

Technology is good for research because when your doing a project or study for test. But you dont know anything you just research in the website. Also good for your homework, you can find the answer or get informtion rewrite on your word. But, technology has negative effects on people's lives.

(I was talking a the computer).

Technology is good for play game. For example, I have a Playstation Four and so many video game. I play all day not get bored. But then, much too technology can cost your eye to get hurt or loose your eye sight. Their a other thing is bad for us as a teen. We waste so much time on video game rather spend time on doing our homework,prove writing skill, reading.

technology (phone) is good for communication with other people in fairy away places. For example, My family live in Generic_City, but my aunt and unlce live in Generic_City. But we use a phone to call them if their fine and we talk them about our life. Even tho were fary away them we still communicat with them. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
503960784148,"In every school privated or public is they good idea created a new menu the food in loch created one sitio web for students they can enter and star the plate form, questions or encuest they defined a students they school known like food and they see students they have one alergie's they prevated in loch they never occured one problem witch students some students is don't like food in the school, they take food for home is bad because the point is every students is need eat food for have a very good energy in classes.

One idea for student's is they every school realized every year differents options in menu for bote students in one sitio web and when they have a results change the menu in school is a very well benefit for students because when you eat good your brain is more concentrate in your work is have more energy, one idea is in the morning take a frut's, or cofee and then in loch eat popeyes,chipotle,tacos and others more options because students in a long time is omg again this food the point is change food in school every year differents options for eat it's good have differents menu for year eat new food.

School is need created the importants points they students need realized after school teh first is the every students is need due ten minutes the exercise then go to lonch and take foood for eat then go to your regular classes in teh 10:00am go to lonch and eat tacos,popeyes,chipotle etc. and drink a natural water they contained natural fruts then keep going with your classes is very well take differents options in the school they realized for students look for your benefit and students is more concentarte,have new energy brain always positive because the change is wounderful in your life is very well health.

When students is coming to classes after eat students is contained more energy in your brain is more clear is major benefit for students eat food they very like is more concentrate in the work for classroom students they need have to bote for differents options in school menu change every year because for take basically it's the same time food is tired look the same menu in school for that reason students is think no eat after school and go to tour house or students take alwayas food to school because the food in school is don't like for the 50% the students because the lane for wainting in take your lonch is very slow and big for that reasons someone people is don't eat or eat food the your house is important see that points in students because is bad for students don't like food in the school.

In my conclusion they schools is have created every year new questions or format's in sitio web for comparate, conform pass the years and then change the menu and see they better options for food like eat for students it's a very well idea for students and teachers for drinks is good always contained differentes water the fruts natural because is very good how you body contained water and eat good is very health for your body someone students they have sports with more reason they need have a good network nourishment's for conbained full energy in the coaching is very good contained witch a lot variety the food are the students and someone the teachers is take food they more like.

Course always included the good health for your body the big poin is they creater sitio web for students can visit every year before star the school due one the formation they have every school for it's for facile take the opinions and then change the menu in schools public or private and then when you coming to school existing new variation the menu's they students bote more for eat and every students alwasys take food in school and the actitudes the students and the teachers is more happy because they star eat food the like for everybody in school, in change the school created one protested for created new food in school more menu existing motre lane for take food and eat and then the students is look more happy and wainting very fine because take more time for eat well.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
2C9EA803FF3A,"Success comes from failure and failure occurs when something doesn't happen.

As I think and based on my experience I am agree with the statement of Ralph Waldo Emerson, because when someone don't do anything they will never get to the success and can't achieve any skills, so its important to mastered and have skills in your life.

everyone should have skills in more than one because life is hard and without trying more it will become more harder.

As Emerson says:

""you will never grow""

it means that no succeed is possible without skills in different things.

If someone doesn't know anything without their profession in daily life, what do you think will it be easy for him to live like that?

Off course not, because life need everything and we will face hardships too and for being successful in our life we have to know everything and try everything beside that we have mastered.

For example:

someone has skills in engineering but they don't get any job and he want to start his personal business in which he doesn't have any skills, we know that it will be difficult for him to start because he doesn't know anything about business, so if he try and make a way for his business then he will get skills.

Our skills in more then one profession make us famous and shows our personality to other people and makes us more responsible in our life.

Getting mastered in more then one will make you famous and successful.

Life does not remain in one situation and life is going to change in every second.

Also humans are not same as well because everyone is getting older day by day so who knows what will happen next without Allah.

For example:

Everyone of us need to do different tasks and get our skills but beside that our life also need skills for our future generation and it is very important for every human being to have skills in their life because they have to show the right and wrong ways to their children.

If you are a skillful person then everyone will want to meet you because everyone need to know from the person who is mastered and you will become famous and fame is the way to success and without trying noting success is way too much hard.

Knowledge doesn't ends because it's like a sea and sea doesn't stop.

All of human beings needs to learn and they must learn.

knowledge is not just a book and a school that we do in daily life.

For example:

We can't achieve more skills from our books but we can be mastered if we try different from the book and try something new.

If we just try and learn from our books then it will be too much harder to achieve everything's skills from reading book beside reading we have to work and search for it and again trying is best option for success and growth.

We know that knowledge is more important then everything else but also without skill even knowledge is nothing.

If we don't have skills then we don't know how to use our knowledge and our skills comes from doing different tasks and without trying something different success is hard and growth of mind is impossible.

I am agree with Emerson and what does he says is based on his experience and if we think of those things then we can find the right answer.

As I mentioned life is hard and our life need more skills to go further and getting mastered in more then one profession will make us famous and successful in our further life and being famous and successful needs more hard work to try different from what we already know.

Work hard, be active and don't fear because time doesn't wait and our growth of mind and success comes from try different and hard in our life.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
79662DEC0A1B,"Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. When they take online class they start thinking much. Students get more free time to do online class at home. They being prefect and smart. I prefer to take online class because it's much easier than taking school. When I take class in school i can not focus that much because to many students yelling at class. So taking online class is better. Students develop their studying skill and more knowledge.

Although, taking class in school isn't that much bad but student can't concentrate at class. When they take in class they start taking with friends they stop focusing on class. ,Nevertheless, Being taking online class at home important to develop knowledge. Gain smart. Gain perfect. Seeking to know more. being work harder. Because, Students being focus only on online class. Nobody yell at him he can concentrate and also he can think very well. Being gain smart. And Students will have confidence on their self. I have online class thins year. I am seeking to do more than I do on class. That's makes me have confidence in myself. I can do by myself.

To began, Taking Online class at home is help to take students time. They will finish early and they start doing another stuff. Students can get more opportunity to do better job. Student should have opportunity to take online class and Done with their work and have time to rest. Being happy. Being smart.

For example, When students before taking online class they pay for it. So they will take care of about the subject. However, Students have time to study. When he study at home, the place is quit that can he focus in studying, then he will be smart and good thinker. When you do by yourself you will have much confidence. Being confidence by yourself. Being Good thinker. Being work harder. Being developing skill of studying and developing knowledge.

This for that, Taking online class help you get more knowledge and skills. If students study a lot they can do better. they start seeking to understand about that class. They will be focus on that and getting good grade. Some people thinking taking online class is bored but isn't bored if you try to know something about what you are studying you will be loved it. Instead of wasting time taking online class at home. That is student can get benefit.

Clearly, The way of taking class at home can save your time. Students know what to do so, If they want to take their time, online class is one of the best way to take their time. If I start taking online class I will save my time on the other hand I develop my knowledge. Fixing The way of i'm studying before. Most students are hated studying at home. They don't want to studying at home. Instead of studying they prefer to play games. But, If they have online class they starting study and they will fix their problem. That is better way to improve skills. Students become work hard and study hard. They will get good job.

This provide that, Being though full. Smart. genius. work hard and believe in your self. They starting believe in their self. That is make students proud. They start thinking to do more. If you study a lot on online class you will do a lot. That is the way of improve knowledge. Also you could do any test. you won't afraid any tests. To change the way to you study. Online class helps you study more and also, help to having experience.

Obviously, Online class can provide your problems. If you senor you want to graduate this year but you didn't finish your credits, So the best way is that you can take online class which is you have to take to graduate this year. Then you will graduate. Online class can save your time. Gain perfect. Being develop skill. To be a good thinker. To avoid bored of study. Also, online class can help you to fix your problems. Students become thoughtful.

In conclusion, Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. Improve the way of studying. Instead of playing game study online class. Students being thoughtful and work Harding. Being taking online class at home important to develop your skills of studying. When you take online class you will save your time. gain smart. Nobody can bother you when you take online class at home. you will better than that you did on class. Students will get better grade. If you study on online you will get better and you will believe in yourself.                                                ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
2BE976C99FDF,"Many people like Philosopher's are stating Information which comes from there head and believe Its right; For people to look at and assume It Is right and agree because of what position that person has such as a Philosopher,Physician, and a Humanitarian. This Philosopher,Albert Schweitzer illustrates that an ""Example Is not the main thing In influencing others;It Is the only thing."" Although setting an example by your own behavior Is a good way to Influence other's; Their's still better and different way's to Influence people. Not all people have bad behaviors because of somebody close to them; A son could be a good and humble and the people around him could only have negativity.

There are different ways such as sitting down with someone and giving advice about good behavior and what their currently doing wrong In the present. Schools even teach about It and have group of students learn about whats good and bad. In health class they are teaching about having a healthy life to be prepared in life and for whats coming In the future. Although there are example's out there like famous people that motivate others to go the same path they went,Also a good example but those are not the only way's; There are teachings or parents giving advice to have a better behavior,psychologists who people can tell whats going on in their life and they get a response of what they can do.

Somebody,Anybody can demonstrate they were a good example to somebody but at the end not everybody turns out to be like them. A son can be good and humble while the people close to him or that he admires have a lot of negativity. Anybody could sit down with somebody and talk about about what there doing wrong and they could be doing the same thing;That dose not make them a good example but at least they give advice,ideas, and reveals to that person a new pathway they can take to do better. Teachers who teach about It can fill them with information they didnt know about having a healthy life; That teacher could be doing everything wrong and be negative which makes her a bad example to everybody but the students get the good advice to be better.

There are people who leave good examples for others to follow but is It also the only thing. Because there are other ways to influence other people such as giving advice and teaching, while that person who gives It Is a bad example but the person who receives It follows the good advice not there bad example.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
2265CC4410DE,"Changing the lunches to healthier lunches will effect more then just the cafeterias. It will change how people eat, and changing the food habits which is not good. Some adults and parents might love the change, but as teens it might have to be a nightmare. People having favorite lunches and enjoying what they buy to eat should be the goal. Not having to be inforced to eat healthy food on a daily. The school board should speak, and see all the possible outcomes of this change before making a desicion.

Think of how many kids won't eat anymore, because of this change. Losing some of their favorite foods would change everything. Not only a loss for the kids, but a loss for the school as well. Losing more money as more kids stop buying lunch. This could not only effect the stomach's of the people not eating, but could also effect their learning and how they do in school. Nutrition is a big thing in school, because you need it in your system to function.

Habits are also being changed. Being enforced to bring food from the outside. Some people would probably even leave school. That should be one of the schools biggest fears. They are legally in charge of you at schoool, and if you decide to leave, and something happens to you; that can not be good for the school. There are so many things that could fall into this. People coming in and out of the school with food for others. Random people could indentify as a student due to holding a backpack and having food in their hands, so a student opens a door for them.

Some parents are obviously going to disagree. They want their kid or kids to eat, and do well in school. The amount of complaining will be very untolerable and annoying. There should just be a balance between healthy and unhealthy. For example one line could be serving healthy food, and the other could be serving what they used to be serving. They should be making it work instead of making them unhappy.

I really think everything should be looked over again. Making big time decisions like this could really effect the school. I think many people should have a say in this including high representative students, and very exclusive clubs. Some being National Honor Society, Key Club, and maybe even the the county board itself.

Thank you so much for hearing me out, and hopefully you take my ideas into perspective.

Sincerely, Generic_Name",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
8149E792E505,"Some schools offer programs for students graduate in three years? students needs to go school for learn and be success in life in high school normally is four years but some schools give to students some programs for to graduate in three years. a lot people think four years on school is good because in that years you can take to much classes. I disagree with this statement all students need four years in high school for know what to do in the future and they do not have any problem in college

Students graduate in three years is not good because in four years you can learn more about that career you prefer to be in the future, you can take more opportunities for to be successful people think that is good because you can graduate one year early but some times is much better continues in high school for prepare yourself. in four years you take more classes and learning about it. For example student wants to graduate and wants to be a mechanic he needs to keep going in high school for four years he learn about that career he wants and another subjects.

Some people they do not like the idea for to graduate early because they do not think that is prepare for to go to college. College is a serious thing so all people need to prepare for to go there ,when you go to the college you have a idea that difficult be for you but not impossible . you need to pass all your classes in college but for that you need to study and try your best in high school that is the way for a good student .

Some people prefer graduate one year early , they has reasons, they wants to finish the career for to help the family or some people just finish the high school and go to work. is probably is the bigger reason why some people choose that opinion. for me both reason is good because you need to stay in school for to be successful and understand why some persons wants to graduate early they wants to help his/her family so both options that is very good.

Four years in high school is the bets option can you choose because you learn more, study more, and prepare more , for me that is the good way for to successful in life. Probably be more hard but you can do it, you need to try the best do yo have for in the future you will be a good person with a good job and can help your family. when help your family you are a good person and recognize that job was your parents did for you so keep going and do it a 4 years in high school this is good for success in life .",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
E08B2DFE266D,"""Positive attitude is the key to success in life"" I agree with this because the key to get succes in your life is positive attitude. Because help you to do a better your work, study, and get better rusults. Positive attitude is important in our life. Positive attitude can help to create a better relationship with other people if you really want to get succes in your life you have to take positive attitude in your job school and with the others . For instance if you work and study with positive tttitude you can do it everything in your life. the reason are the positive attitude help you be a better person with the others. acomplish your goals, and help you in your job.

My first reason, is positive attitude help you be a better person with the others. For example, if you have possitive attitude you can express to the others. If other person is angry you with your positive attitude can make that the other feel great and create a better relationship with others.

My other reason is with posittive attitude you cam acomplish your goals. For example,if you are doing something hard and, if you have positive attitude you never give up and, you wiill doing again and again until to acomplish. Is like a in my life I do not have a grat attitude in many things but, everytime I tray to do it and that is a attitude positive because until sometimes I think that I can my pisitive attitude help me to no give up.

My last reason is posittive attitude help you in your job because you can do it everthing with a posittive attitude you can do better your job. You can learn many things in your job a get a better position with a better payment.

To summary, possitive attitude is important in our life if you are negative you can not doing anything but if you have a positive attitude you can do wherever you want the positive attitude help you in your job, in the school, and in the relationship with others.  ",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
21737947650E,"Working by your self vs. working with a group.

Why it is important to work by your self? What are the beneficial? Think about it; Work by your self is better than work with a group for many reasons. Work on your own is more beneficial than work with a group learn more, more attention and good grades.

Generic_Name was a student that likes to go to school, he woke up every morning like a normal student does, but the thing is that Generic_Name do not likes is work on his own he prefer work in a group and not by its self because he likes to distract others by talking, playing,be in his phone instead on what he needs to focus on. The time keeps going and going. One day a wise person said

"" The time keeps going and going and wait for no body.''

There was another guy called Generic_Name. Generic_Name against work as a group because he knows that is a distraction and he don not likes to have bad grades. Generic_Name made a scientific experiment his experiment is based on the idea of work in a group or work alone. He talk with his teacher and explain his idea, the teacher agree with Generic_Name's idea. The teacher gives a worksheet to the student that were in the class and the teacher said you may work on your own or in a group.

The result was like Generic_Name thoughts were like, the students who work by them selves demonstrate good work, perfect scores and they did not took long time to finish the work and they were able to help others students. But the other group of students who choose work as group they show something different than the other students that work by them selves, they did not finish the work, others not even start the work between those groups was Generic_Name.

One day Generic_Name met Generic_Name at his house to play a video game. Generic_Name went to Generic_Name house and they start playing the game, while they are playing Generic_Name start ask a lot of question between those question he ask. Why you always work by your self? and not work in a group?

he laugh and answer the questions. I prefer work by my self because I easily distract with my friends, or I start talking with them and I do not finish any of my work. Generic_Name said something especial to Generic_Name. Understand this Generic_Name, work by your self is not the bad you learn, you prepare more your self, more instead of coping someones work. Think abut when a test, quiz, or an Sol comes up. Nobody will there to help you out and you do not know what to do. Please do not take mad at me I just want to help you, Generic_Name said don not worry, I appreciate the word that you said to me.

Generic_Name think over night the words that Generic_Name told him while they were playing, at the next day Generic_Name try to do what Generic_Name does and he found a big surprise that he can do a better job by its self, and time was passing and Generic_Name notice that his grades went up, have more time in home his teacher was surprise on the huge change that

Generic_Name had.

In conclusion work on your own is not a bad decision. Work on your own help to grow in knowledge, successful in life and not depen on others, try the vest to help other and must important to help you.  ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
876DD6D022A9,"Do you feel confident comes from achievement or for praise? People are concern about the students must be self-confident in order to learn and other thinks that self-esteem come after you achieve something. People might think a lot of things but this is my opinion; to achieve something you have to be full of self-confident. Some examples could be people have to have self-esteem in order to work hard and learn new things every day or once in a while, people have to be confident and positive in order to get something done, and confident is feeling sure about what you are about to do.

Succeeding in something is a great achievement but if there is no confident how can you be sure what you. First, people have to have self-esteem in order to work hard and learn new things every day or once in a while. For instance, there are some jobs like a doctor they never stop learning new things because at some moment a new disease will appear and new medicine will developed. Learning a new language, being someone who knows Spanish and want to learn English is pretty hard. Why? Some words might mean the same as the do in English but all of them do. One word in English might mean five different words in Spanish and some words aren't even similar. You will never gonna to achieve to learn the whole language no even the native can but you will build a confident inside yourself knowing that you will never going to be done with it but you will be learning everyday new words. Secondly, you have to be confident and positive in order to get something done. For example, anger doesn't let someone to concentrate and it lead to chaos. When the final days of school comes and the exams and SOL arrive slowly and you are feeling unprepared for it. The confident that you put yourself every day to come to school even if you feel bad is the one who will keep all your information and it will help you in your nightmares that is those big tests. If you study for a long time then when the time arrives, you will feel ready to pass it. Thirdly, confident is feeling sure about what you are about to do. When trying to find a new job at any place but you don't know how is going to be like or how they are going to receive you. You have to be sure about yourself and letting your confident falls over your fears because with fear nothing is possible. Because you won't have any clue about what is going to happen in that first meeting and those people who will hired you have to feel like you are really to do the job. They won't choose you if they feel you are not really and no have confident to do well the job.

However other people think that self-esteem come from achievement. To begin with by achieving something, you are getting what you fought for and self-confident come as the result. For example, achieving something is no that easy. You have to make a mix of all the things you have to include to get it. When you are at school, it is so easy for old people to think that students just have the obligation of going to school and nothing more at all. Studying it's not just passing classes but it's about learning things for the next day. SOL is a good example of it; teachers prepared us for about eight months to pass a test that is no that long, the problem is that it's not just one SOL but many of it no including the exams. The satisfaction of telling yourself that it is over and summer is coming, there are no more worries about next day because you have fought for eight months to pass it. When you pass something, you achieve it somehow. But what if the SOL is failed twice won't that prejudice your next year. Secondly, after achieving something, usually that person feels joyous for the reality that it's over. For example, if you study so hard for the driving test the night before and feel like you know you are going pass it. That's happiness in yourself but what is you fail, all the effort for the last night is not over yet because you have to do it again until you pass it. Let's pretend that you pass it in the first try, well, you achieved it and you are happy because it's over and now you are getting closer to get a car and drive by your own. Your confidence will grow high because if you did it at a first try then you can do anything that you feel afraid of. Lastly, a positive person is someone who is full of joy and feels confident for what it wants and it's there to fight until it's achieve it. For instance, in all the world there are always different kinds of people: positive and negative. Learning a new job it's so frustrate because at the beginning you won't have any idea on what you are doing. Positive people always think that everything will go right and they tell themselves that they will end up knowing this job like their own hands. Why? Because they have confidence that they can do anything if they fight for it. Nobody was born with the intelligent to get something form the beginning. When you are learning to walk for the first time, you fall and fall until your knees get red and even end up with blood but after all that effort comes the realize that now you don't depend on them to get something because now you can do it by your own. Believing in yourself is feeling confident. However I still believe that confident have to come before the achievement because confident is courage that every person put itself into his or her heart to full-fill the fear.

As previously stated, things cannot be achieve if there is no confident on it. People need self-esteem in order to function at work and keep learning, the confident and positively that is in every person will make possible for them to get things done, and confident is a feeling of courage that makes the fear goes away. My solution is to have confident in yourself. Make the confident to cover your fear and be sure what you are doing. If something is achieved then the fear will go away and the confident will stay forever. Hope you enjoy this and it will be helpful for your day. Thank you!!",4.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
A2C232F3D92C,"Are you happy with your self? Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" Do you agree or disagree with this statement? I agree with this statement, being yourself and not letting people change you is a great accomplishment. One should never allow someone to change you.

To be yourself is the best way to the greatest accomplishment because people try to persuade you or talk to you about doing something else that doesn't impressed you. You have to actually think about what you actually want to do to accomplish in life. You don't have to listen to what other people say and tell you. Most of the time people gives wrong advice to others. You have to believe in yourself, that you can accomplish greater thing just doing what you admire.

Go with what you think its a good decision for you, either being by yourself or need someone to tell you what to do. Most of time people doubt others. Having a strong feeling that being by yourself is a good decision for you, that a good thing because thats means you have no problems of being by yourself. If you know that you going to succeed in life then that amazing because you believe in yourself . Go with that decision that you think is right and don't allow nobody to make you do something that you don't think is wrong.

However, there are people who think allowing someone to change you can be an accomplishment. Only if it is for the good. For example, if someone is having a hard time being a good citizen and they are always getting into trouble, then yes changing them is a good thing. You can help them out by saying "" what you doing is not a great decision, you should have better choices then getting into trouble."" Another example, is if someone is having a difficult time, you could help them by giving them good advice how to accomplish something.

Being yourself lead to great accomplishment. I agree with this statement. Sometime people try to change you because they thought you couldn't succeed with what you wanted to become or wanted to accomplish. Sometimes being yourself doesn't goes as plan as you thought it going to go. In my decision being yourself and actually knowing what to do is the best decision to the greatest accomplishment.        ",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
FA145FA7B678,"Think abou the benefits of working with a group or workin alone. The people think working in gruop you have more benefits. Working in gruop is more better because that more people thinking idea's of to the work. The peoplo think is more good working in group because you have more idea ""Which work alone"". Working in group you has benefits because tha's more person thinking idea's , and writing.

Meanwhile you work alone because you think more , and work more an strong more your mind. I preference, work in group tha's why you has more benefits. The people tink is more better work in group why is more easy which work alone. The socioenomic class consisting of people who work for wages esp. Low wages , including unskilled and semiskilled laborers and their group.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
3CDCFB2C7F25,"I believe that doing nothing is accomplishing nothing, it gets you nowhere. Being active, and having a purpose are essential in being successful, also always doing something is better then doing nothing.

To start off, being active can mean that you're accomplishing or trying to accomplish what you're doing. For example a boss of a company will always be trying to keep his business from loosing money, for he can't cant loose the company, so the boss will work towards saving the company.

Secondly, having purpose in life, or a goal is better then dreaming about it; for instance, if you ask a successful person how they got to where they are, they won't say I dreamed for it, they'll say I worked towards my goals and didn't give, even if they thought they were gonna fail.

Finally, always doing something is better then doing nothing. For example, if a student goes to school just to sit around and do nothing, he or she are wasting a opportunity to learn, and get an education towards what they want in life.

Some people might say, what if you fail pressing a goal; for instance, someone is trying to make money, or getting a job and keeps failing, they learn from the mistakes and keep the right mind set, if someone can do all that they'll flourish in the future.

In conclusion, this is why i believe doing nothing is accomplishing nothing, as Thomas Jefferson said,""Determine never to be idle"". ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
2568B64DB374,dear principal it think that it is not fair the way that you are not letting all of us students not participate in all the sports here in SCHOOL_NAME only if you have b average you may play .please if you let us play the sports without a b average not all of us are perfect at what we are. plus if you don't let other kids play sports without a b average it will be total chaos if you don't let us students will not try there best to put in effort in to there grade .there fore if you do decide to let other children with different grade average they may pick up there grade if you allow them to play there sports. there personality may change and start acting right and then all of the kids would have a b average and you'll be so proud of your school and how much effort the put into there school work and the way they act who knows they might even mature . in conclusion that is why i think that you may want to rethink about the rule on sports that you want to pass I hope you don't want to pass this new policy because your doing something that the children of SCHOOL_NAME would not appreciate because sports are a big part of SCHOOL_NAME and for you just to make a decision like that is hurtful to the kids who play sports here in SCHOOL_NAME,3.5,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E1E09D32484D,"Do we choose our character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? Some believe people choose their own character traits and who they want to be. Others believe that our character is formed by influence. I think we choose how to make our own character traits and we choose the attitude we want to give to others. This is important because our character is what represent us and is what makes us responsible for the person we chose to be.

First, people have the power of choosing who they want to be and producing their own attitude. For example, characteristic is important because is the quality, or property of us and it is what makes us committed to keep moving on the person we chose to be and different from others. Furthermore, I believe that people should choose their own character traits even though if they think that is formed by influences beyond their control. Perhaps some people should do the effort to change it because not everyone have a good and nice character.

Additionally, a person's personality is the collection of emotional and behavioral traits that characterize them. Personality and attitude is the key to be a role model for others to become a great person and care more about whether we choose wisely our character we're giving to other peoples. People's humility and kindness is priceless. Personality and attitude is what represents us and what makes us noble. For example, people can think that our own character traits is formed by influences but they still change it and do the effort to be a better person everyday.

However, not everyone agrees with this position. Some people claim that our character is formed by influences beyond our control. If we do not choose our character traits and they are formed by influences beyond our control, it might have its disadvantages.

For example, one must consider that there are people who have a bad character and end up alone because of their attitude, also their character can brings other people displeasure and make them go away and not get close to you just because they think you will never change your character but our character will be what we, ourselves choose to make it.

In conclusion, I think choosing our character, personality, and attitude is what makes us a humble and noble person to look up. I also think that some people should focus on the attitude they are giving to others and analyze if its what they would like to receive from someone else and if it brings them displeasure, perhaps it encourages them to change a bad character for a good personality and attitude. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
025722D0AFB7,"Now a days most employers are looking for specific characteristics in potential employees'. They look for someone who is responsible, hard-working, humble, and kind. Someone who is going to be a role modle for the company, and also for the community. Commonly, they look for a person who has experience, specially with costumer service. When the company decides to hire someone with all of these characteristics, the company is going to increase its sales, more costumers are going to visit the location, and they are going to be happy with the service provided.

I belive that by having a good behavior and showing our values and manners, we are representing our families, and who we really are. Manners and values play a big role when hiring an employee. When communicating with costumers there has to be mutual respect. Responsability is also really important. Showing up to work on time, with a clean uniform and a possitive attitude, is a way to show responsability and respect to the company. Therefore, by working hard and staying true to your self we are going to help make work a better place.

A role model is kind, humble, learns from its mistakes every day, as well as to be a better person at work and outside from work. An employee is a role model for the community, and also it represents the company.

As we all know, work can be hard sometimes, so it is important to ask for help when needed. By doing this we are creating a comfortable atmosphere for costumers to feel like home and to feel welcome. Eventually, sales are going to increase and the company is going to make more money.

Most teenagers my age don't have that much experience in any jobs. Mostly because they're too young, and the jobs they apply for recures at leas 1 or 2 years of experience. However, I think that at least we should get an opportunity to get the job, because no one would ever know how good we can be if we don't get an opportunity. In my past experience, I've worked before with as a cashier. I'm also respectful and responsible. I take my job really serous and I don't like to play games. I'm a straight forward person, who belives that if employees are good to the costumers, more and more people will visit the location and the bussines will show more growth.

I highly belive that I am a good candidate for this position. For me it is really important to have manners and values, specially inside work. To treat people with kindness and respectfuly. Also to be responsible, and something that is really important for me is to work hard to get what i want. When i go to a restaurant or to a store, I like to feel welcomed, so that why I treat costumers the way how i like to be treated. In advance, i will like to say the importance of being a role model for our generation, We are the future of this world and we have to make good decitions every day.            ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
0563F089C239,"To the principal:

Cell phone is a very popular device now a days and almost everyone use it to communicate with others. I have a cell phone my self too. I think cell phone is appropriate for student to use during lunch periods and other free times as long as they turn off their cell phone during class and use it for appropriate matters. Cell phone can help people solving matters by talking on the phone and contact when some emergency happened.

Cell phone can help people in many ways, as long as we have a limit on it.

Cell phone is a device that has many functions. It can help people in many ways. When there is an emergency at school, the best device to use to communicate with your parent to tell them you are safe, or polices to report the incident is cell phone. Cell phone is not a direct contact, but it gives the least secure to a matter such as you are safe, some specific thing happening in school, and some decision that can be solve using cell phone instead of meeting face to face. Cell phone will be fine to use at school as long as students are using it for the correct matter and does not let the cell phone disrupt them during class.

As time went by, more and more function appear on the cell phone can make our student and adult's life easier. Some cell phone can even go to the internet! Some people can use cell phone as a material to find resource, study online, and read books online instead of carry those heavy books home. Cell phone is simplification for many thing you do, it can not absolutely replace books, but it makes easier for people to read and study. If we can let the student to bring the cell phone to school and only let them use it during free periods or lunch time. I'm sure that it would benefit both our student and you.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5,4.0
87694700310E,"First impressions is always something that i pay attention to when meeting a person for the first time. I will always agree with the fact that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Why? imagine meeting a person and the only thing you think about when they cross your mind is the way they first greet you or the way that they introduced themselves to you.

For instance, in my opinion, i feel that people will always put on a different character for their ""first impression"". For example, calling a job for a interview is something you'd want to change your normal character into a more formal and nice responsible person. You can never change your very first thought of someone, it may change later but not the first second of your conversation. Another example could be is getting someone introduced to you from a friend. On the other hand, there's always an ""i wonder"" question in my mind about everyone, because it's totally normal. When meeting someone new there is many of ways people act towards you. They may act shy and make you feel awkward, or they may act friendly and make you feel welcome. So, with that saying, you can never change the way you first think of someone, first impressions will always be a permanent statement that your brain can't erase.

Accordingly, if you do have the abilities, you can always tell what type of person they are. With just one impression someone can teach you about themselves a bit, theres no doubt in that. It's fun of how our brains permanently label people from our first impression until it is changed to something else. For example, imagine seeing some person that is always quiet, always seems like their mad or doesn't want to be at the function. What first impression would you get from that person? I would honestly not even bother to talk to them, they could say anything mean to me, But with first impressions changing overtime, you never know once that person starts talking they wont stop smiling or talking. You never know truly about something until you experiment it.

In conclusion, the first day of school where you have to introduce yourself, or being at public place and someone asks you for something in a nice way, what do you think about that person? From first impressions, after seeing that person for the second time you would always go back and think about how the first time went. While getting to know them that same thought changes about them because now you truly know who they are. The first times will always be different than the regular times. I will always agree that it is impossible for first impressions to change because of our natural human traits.             ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
5D7D1445A7CF,"Smooth Sails do not make Skillful Sailors!

In my opinion, anyone can succeed if they work hard and strive for what they want to achieve. Nothing is a piece of cake. There is handwork and determination behind every successful person. One should have a specific aspiration in their life, and should not do something because they are forced to. There will be a satisfaction if we make a mistake in the work we like to do. We try to find solutions and solve the problem, but if we do something our parents want us to, there will be no contentment.

School life should be the time where all the students should relax and have fun in addition to studying. It is not supposed to be a burden to anyone. Every kid has a right to receive the same education and programs. Discrimination should not be shown to anyone. They should be allowed to do whatever they want to, but should be taken care of so that they do not do something wrong. American school systems are perfect for students because they get to study and at the same time they can take courses they are passionate about. They have a chance to learn new things about the career they want to pursue. The balanced system helps them to manage stress level and also concentrate on how their future will unfold.

Some schools in the United States also allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. There is no point in students graduating one year early to work or enter to college soon. How does graduating one year early matter? This increases nothing but stress and restlessness.

Some students wish to do that not because they want to, but their parents force aspirations on their children. I do not say that it is wrong whatever parents do, but I say that this is not a right way to expect their kids to be successful. All the students need recreational time where they can forget all the school stress and enjoy their time, but parents desire to see their kids as the most successful person, is not letting them to be happy like other kids. Higher grades always does not matter. All that matters is that how can we use in ow much knowledge we attained from the school and how can we use that knowledge in the future. In order to finish high school early, the kids are required to take summer classes and spare their time in the evening. This is not something that is useful for a kid. They need some time to relax their mind, so that concentrate in their studies. They should be able to take their favorite electives as those classes can help them to be successful in the future.

I know an incident where one of my cousin graduated early from high school in order to attend college early. He was really smart until high school junior year. He had a great knowledge of what is happening around the world. He would share those with everyone and help us gain some knowledge too,but at the end of the junior year, he was so into graduating early that he did work hard and finally got into a college. He regrets that decision now as he did not learn so many things in the last year of high school that are stressing him now. If everyone finish high school in the traditional way, they will know everything about college and how it works. Then they can do whatever they want to and have at least some knowledge about it. We often hear news about how students commit suicide as they are stressed about academics, so I think they should not do whatever they do not like, and instead work on what they desire for.

Hard work is the key to success, but that does not mean that everyone should work hard on something they do not like. instead they should really work hard to achieve what they want. Our aspirations should not be impacted by anyone. If we have our own goal and ways to succeed them, we should follow that way and make sure that we become the most successful individual in that particular field. ",4.5,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
DAECE15EE507,small act of kindness can impact on other by showing that you care about others. And even though you don't show a lot of kindness even a little bit change on the other person because of the kindness that you were showing. If you think showing kindness is a waste don't think that because showing some kindness can show the other person that you care about them. Also you can think that not showing enough kindness is bad then you wrong because even just a little bit can show yourself and the other person that you care and that you nice. Even though your not the type of person to show kindness to others can change about what the other person thinks about you like maybe the person thinks oh like this person doesn't care about me. But when the person show kindness can change the option on what the person is thinking about you. And if your the person that is always nice and you think your not good enough because you think that you don't show enough kindness just know if you say something nice or show thats kindness. In conclusion this is why i think showing small act of kindness can impact on others.,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
E4905D0DD050,"Working with a group would be much easy because you have less work to do by yourself also you would finish it faster. In my opinion doing it in a group is helpful by having less work for yourself.

For example, doing all the work on your own would take much longer and probably wont do it right. Also I've done projects on my own and it takes a lot of time and a lot of effort to finish it and turn it on time. Needing a group would be helpful not just for me but for everyone who is in it because by doing together we would all get a good grade. Being in a group would make make everything much easier for everyone.

Doing your project wont take as longer no more because we would do it in groups. For example, doing your stuff takes to long when doing it yourself . As in doing it all together it would be much faster. Everyone would take a part to do of the project and put it all together. In a group everyone would put a part of there assignment they have done to pull in the whole project together.

There was this one time we all got to pick are group to this big project about the earth we all got a part we want to do. We had to full weeks to turn it in but because we all did want was assignment to us we finish in a week and turned it in and got ""A"" for our project. In for all doing it in group would be much faster.

I think by doing it in a group it really helps because you get to know your classmate more. For example, you can get to know them by talking to each other. By getting to know your its a good thing ya'll can all become good friends and do even more project later on. It's also good way to comutate with others in your class you haven't talk to. This one time by math teacher made us to get into groups but I didnt know anyone in the class but, a girl invite me to go with her's and I did ever since that we are always in the same group together and she became my best friend. By being in a group will help you get everyone in your class.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
1214E4605B0C,"Should the school break system be change to 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break , and a week off in the spring. Some educator feel that the summer break is to long and students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. Others argue that summer break is for students to take a mid break and stop think about school. Schools should not change the break system, because many students and parents had already planed,what they would do during the summer, and because many students work, and by changing the break system it could affect them, and because summer break is for students to relax, get a mid break and stop worrying about school.

The school break system should not be change to 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the the spring, because many students work during the summer and many jobs do not gives students the opportunity to work only a few week or days,they want students work a lest two months so they can be able to give them the jobs, otherwise they would give the jobs to peoples that can stay more time with them. For example I work during the summer, and the company that I work with, only gives jobs to persons how agree to stay more than two months with them, if the school system change, this clear is going to affect me, because I going to lose my job and it would be difficult for me, to find another job during the break, because most of the jobs do not want people, how just going to stay in the company for a few days or weeks.

The school break system should not be change , because students and parents have already planed , where they going to go, and what they going do, and if the school change the brake system, most of the plants that they had already made it, are going to be destroy . for example my bother and my parent visit my grandparents every single year and if the school break system change this could be a problem because they would have to come back more soon, and probably they may not go.

The school break system should not be change, because students have the right to have a long break and stop think about all those worksheet,quizzes, and tests that ,they had already done during the school period,summer break should be a time to relax spent time with family and friends and not a time for be think and worry about school.

Considering all this factors that I just talk about, I clear believe summer break, should stay the way it's, because it has being working like that for many year.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E36B406AFE70,"Although it may seem like being active helps us accomplish more is better, but it's actually true that inactivity also serves a purpose to. Three reasons why I think being inactive is that I have time to rest, I can catch up on any t. v shows, or I can hire a butler to do the cleaning around my house. Some people are always being active and have no rest: thats not good because the human body is not used to so much work being done. I think in a certain point of life inactivity will serve a purpose because people will be tired of all the work hey done and will just want to rest.

While being inactive there will be time where you can rest. Last year when I worked, I was so tired of the job I had received because I was hot and thirsty out in the sun all day picking up trash. Then one day when I was off, I spent my whole day resting. This served me a purpose because I was able to rest and get my energy back up to work another time. When I was resting I slept up to about 10 hours because I was very exhausted, and gloomy. While I was resting in bed I had time to catch up on bills and any other things that have to do like call in an order for some groceries. Resting this day helped me catch up on everything I needed

On weekends, when i'm at home and i'm lazy some times I call a butler to come to my house and clean everything. There is a show named Jessie, and on this show they have a personal butler named Bertrum, and he travels with them also: he cleans up for them, cooks food, and he even has to open doors for them. This helps them because while they are trying to rest he is doing mostly everything they need to do. In my opinion, I think he's doing too much work than he is supposed to because it can be overwhelming. Jessie and her kids are very lazy because they basically make Bertrum do everything; that serves a purpose but then not because Bertrum will be exhausted all time.

When resting at home I have a chance to catch up on t. v shows that I like: like Master Chef, Wild n Out, and also Real House Wives of Atlanta. No one can tell me to not watch it because I am going to be inactive and have a peaceful day where I have time to myself. The reason why I want to catch up on t. v shows is because, most of the time I dont have time because of work, or i'll be caught in a family emergency.

Overall, some people might think doing something will make you accomplish something isn't always true. In the world today there are a plenty full of people who are inactive, they sit there and do nothing but have business calls on the phone. I think it would be better for us to work at home and be idle thank to go to work and be very tired. Though some people may not agree with me its better to live that way so you can preserve your energy. Determine never to be idle doesnt always make me accomplishing something; putting my mindset towards that goal helps me reach that goal even if i'm idle.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
DE06A0AF7DEC,"A fames person ones side,Your character will be what you yourself chose to make it.''Do we choose our own character traits,or is our character formed by influences beyond our control. It's inpoten to keep a good name for yourself for people can't think badly of then for inset

Bad chose, like people teens tin to make bad chose when they are around other people. Even around there friends they like to do stuff you should be doing like doing drugs, spelling and getting into tridol. Having a mindset that they need to live up to standers because it a tread or it's Popper. And it's usley young teens because they are always on sholmetuy,seeing all these's videos of people,getting frames over something sipol,they think that they can do it to. If a young kids see's someone doing drugs or stilling from a story they are most likely to do the same, it has a big inmates on the young generation,people don't know how much it efets them.

Snead people want respect but don't know how to give it back, like for insteps if you tire other with respect then they well give it back. Don't give yourself a bad name like if you opliyening for a job but the manger saw you stell something he or her is not going to trust you anymore, you need to urn that trust. A other thing is not to be rude because if your rude to people well think of you densely,do to you being rude and not good with people. And trite them how you would want to be tread with respect and not being rude to people if you give them all of that they well do the same for you. And that's what's truly inppont in life.

So in other words be around the people you love and that well bring the good out of you,don't give yourself a bad name in this world. Be who you wanna be in those world but think before you chose.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0
80C2ED8BE6A6,"Online school can be more beneficial to a lot of student's struggling with grades and being late to school because of over sleeping or missing the bus. Going to school takes up a lot of time off stuff you're interested in doing outside of school like playing sports and spending more time at home.

I agree with online classes over going to school because some students feel more comfortable learning in their house rather then going to school. Some students also have trouble with over sleeping due to a lack of sleep causing them to miss the bus and be late to class. Online school starts in a more reasonable time of day so it's more convenient for those that over sleep to attend class on time. This allows students to have more energy which will help them focus on their work and be more productive in class. When student's get sick they miss days off school which causes them to be behind on class work, for some students being be hide on class work causes stress because their grades go down. But you can still attend online class if you're sick. You can also attend online classes while on vacation with a laptop you'll rarely have missing work to do which is a big positive for improving your grades.

However, some may argue that looking at the bright screen for a extended amount of time will put a strain on your eye's. Also that it's easier to cheat on test's and quiz's in online classes then it is to cheat in school, because the teacher dosen't know what your doing on.

That is my reasoning on why taking online classes is more beneficial then going to school.  ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
C65705E1E072,"Human has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change or influence the character. Does human can believe that first impression are almost impossible to change ?Based on our support ,we going to discuss it.

Peoples' influences can almost change your altitude of understanding,many people are contaminate by their own environment where they live , certain believe on God whatever the type of believes ,they cannot change their impressions even the way they go through.

Human being uncontrolable in the Earth ,that affect the rate to make the problem grow up .The first impressions can be change if human wants to change to another impression more classifiable . The life knowledge affect also impressions , the education is the biggest issue to make you better ,parents can change the way you act by your impression . They play a huge rule in your life even in the future .

Based on science fiction on National Geographie they test humans' impressions can change depend to your own enviroment which you are in .All supports surround for exemple , money, education, parents , drogue, environment can affect your impressions.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
7DB5E5FA8324,"As a teen every one have different opinion on what to do in high school year. In some societies, student are expected to identify to a career by the time they enter high school. I agree that is good idea for student to commit to a career at a young age.

Is the best option for student to commit at a young age for there career in high school. The Student could be more expert in their own career when they young. They could be much better and more expert when they keep doing there job every day at work. Also, they could get payed even more for working with the company they like. Even is fun for them to work because they give them the option to what to do in their career.

If teen start their courses they will have to try hard to reach their career. they have to be tested how they do if they are in their real job. If teen fails that means that they will not do good in their real job so they have to try again so they could could pass and go to their real job. thats good because you still young and you could still work and make more money then others. So that good to start their career when you young.

Some teens disagree that is a good idea for student to commit to a career at young age. Teens say's that student have to look for more career if they don't have one. while some say's that Teen will start doing there career as soon as possible when they study their own career in high school. Starting your career young is the best for money, you could make more money as you get older. Also, starting your career young is the best for your life. when you get old you will have to quite your job because you will not be quick, and knowing what to do.

as a result, this is important for teen to start their career in high school because they could start doing there career a soon as possible. Teen start there courses they will have to try hard to reach their career. teen could be more expert at their career. This is my opinion to teen. All teen need to start their career in high school for better life, more money, and better for the company you work for.                    ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
32B2D5592E1D,"This teens manual I talk to talk about expectation. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

The first I ready to talk about some expectation. That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. Other example, regularity students nope have the opportunity go to the schools because the students things they not equality or things he/her can't do anythings to learning. I support the way to some teachers or one person is working to schools or some people have permission to teacher to go the house the person nope lost any classes they provide.

The another reason, Responsability, for example,

the place where I born people need to walk a lot distance to go learning and graduation some teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. Other example, some time the people nope have transport or some people not have money to pay the transport to go schools. To graduate or learning more you do a lot things to graduate, however, if you put you responsibility you can do a lot or things to learning. Always the people is intelligent to great in school they can obtain beneficial scholarship to helping you and the family.

Reason of this teens. People take classes the way online, some examples, a lot people taking that's way because some people are elder; but they things is better to graduate because he/she work and others things. Some people things that's is more better for then I things that's is great to do both side. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Always one person in class is coming four or less days to schools the attends is so bad students things is better go to work that's why a lot students take that's route. Some students don't matter anythings about the school, however, students particularity not a lot both some person things bad.

Next reason, offer to learning to night is better too, for example, some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. A lot students take the opportunity to finish the school online. Person take that opportunity is because they have another weigh, for example, they go to work or stay in home to do nothing about his life.

That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. The place where I born person walk a lot distance to learning and somethings to graduation some when teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. My options I take the position to learning or finish my high school online, because that's really great to explain another person your experience about to finish school online. Always the person things somethings they not have good ideas to his life or something similarity. Opportunity great things for the person have major action.

Great take both ideas in this teens.  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
6574B5B58A11,"Always being active, determined to become successful can lead to lots of accomplishments; however, some people think it is necessary to procrastinate. Thomas Jefferson quoted

""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something.""

Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to being successful in life, having the ability to not procrastinate, and people start to see that a person is responsible or trustworthy. These are reasons why it is important to be motivated, and to be able to accomplish assignments.

Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to being successful in life. Having the motivation of being able to accomplish assignments on time and the accuracy is important; therefore, it shows that a person is organize. Organization is important because it shows that a person can arrange equipment or utensils neatly, for it helps in the future. Accomplishing assignments can lead to success in life and becoming financially stable because of finishing assignment on time and by completing them. The sensation of having motivation to complete assignments and being successful in life is amazing.

Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to having the ability to not procrastinate. It is important to keep track on which assignments has to be completed because having a incomplete assignments passed due can cause trouble. It makes it harder for a person to finish an assignment at the last minute because of the rush. Procrastinating is not the key of finishing any assignments on time and by having the assignments accurate. Being able to complete assignments on time is precisely important because it can help in the future with any assignments that crosses.

Having the mind set of being able to accomplish assignments, and being active in anything can lead to people seeing a person as responsible or trustworthy. People can see a person as responsible because they complete assignments on time or before hand. People do not have to tell a person repeatedly to have an assignment completed by a certain date. Other people can see a person as trustworthy because they stick to what they asked to do. They finish the assignment before hand or on time, which makes people trust them more. Accomplishing assignments can help reach goals, and it can help in the future.

It is important to have a person active and and determined to complete assignments without procrastinating. Even though people might think it is not important, but it really is because it helps a person with massive assignments. It gives them knowledge on why it is very important to keep on track and to finish work on time. Being successful in life, having the ability to not procrastinate, and people seeing a person as responsible or trustworthy are all reasons why it is important to accomplish assignments and being active in anything that wants to be completed.",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
BF5E801B7FD6,"""i think that the principal have to considering allow student to bring phones to school and use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time.. because they have to call your parent when the school is end at 3:50"".or if you a emergency u cant call your parent .first than all ,all kids like to have a phone but some of this kids use in the school to chat with other kids and they don't listen to the class you cant not use the phone in class if they used the teacher can giving him a detention . i think that are kids not use his phone in class. so i agree with the principal to allow student to bring to school y case of emergency if u need you can used. so u can bring your phone and used when you finish the school. :)",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
AB0686BA42E5,"Why people enjoy outdoors activity? People enjoy outdoors activity like; ride a bike, play sports, or just walk and enjoy the nature, because they can be healthy and appreciate the nature beauty.

One of the reasons of why people enjoy outdoors activity is because they can ride a bike. If you like ride a bike you surely enjoy be outdoors, because is were you can do the thing that you like and enjoy, also have a lot of space. Ride a bike outside is so peaceful, you can appreciate the nature and people around you. During a bike ride you can listen to the music and stay calm and be happy, also is good for your health.

Another reason to enjoy outdoors activity is play sports. Play an sport can make you enjoy be outside, sports are good for your health, you can enjoy play that sport outside. If you like sports you can be outside and practice, or play against other people, you can be outside and see how others play an be better. Be outside give you a lot of space to practice and play, also give you more opportunities to meet more people that like play the same sport as you do.

The other reason for enjoy outdoors activity is just walk and enjoy the nature. If you like do exercises you definitely love be outside, walk, and run. Walk and appreciate the nature beauty at the same time is one of the most relaxing things in the world. If you like do long walk in the park and meet more people or just chill and listen music can help you stay happy, calm, and healthy.

Enjoy outdoors activity can be helpful in many ways like; be happy and stay clam. Stay outside can make you happy and be in a good mood always. Appreciate the things that are around you and feel good with yourself. I highly recommend go outside and enjoy do the things that you like.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
DCB1A6F255A8,"Technology is something many people use in their daily lives, I belive technology has definintly made an imppact on people over time. Phones, cell phones, laptops, tv's have all been upgrated during the past couple of years, technology can effect us in both negative and positive ways but i belive that their are more negative's than positive's.

One reason I belive technology has more of a negative impact is because it causes a lack of communication with friends and with family, I myself have witnessed and expirinced this. Another reason in why it would be negative is the children using technology. Children can become more obsesed with electronnics than most teenagers and adults, I have a little brother that recived an ipad as a gift from my parents whe he was only three years old, only because he would'nt let my mother use her cell phone in peace, getting that ipad might have been the biggest mistake thats my parents could have made. My little brother (when he recived the Ipad) stopped playing with his toys, stopped watching his favorite show which was spongbob, stopped eating as much and also stopped listening to direction and became rebelious. Everytime one of the members in my family would try to talk to him it would be like he was zonned out; he just would not listen. Another negative impact this was would be that my little brother would yell when someone tried taking his Ipad away and thats when my parents knew it was a very huge problem, so they decided to put his Ipad away for a while as well as our electronics or atleast keep them out of his sight and over time I got my little brother back and my parents got their son back.

Secondly, technology can distract people in many negative ways, one way is safey, you could be walking, driving, on a boat it does not matter, but if you're on your phone and not aware of your surrounding, or not paying mind to them, than you could get hurt. Their have been many reports on people getting in car accident or getting hit all because they were not paying attention, but overall their have been more incidents while driving.

There are some ways that technology has also been benefial to us. Some ways that technology has been beneficial is if you work in a job that requires you to have a computer or laptop to make work easier, or having a busy work schedule that you can type into your phone and it would alert you about the things you have to get done. Another benefial way that technology has helped is shopping! eveybody loves shopping but somtimes you can't go out and do some shopping for yourself becuse maybe its been a long week and your exausted from work or you're injured, as well as having children. Children are the worst when it comes to doing things for yourself, which is why there is technology to help you out, you can do online shopping for grocieries, clothing, exc without having to leave the comfort of your own home.

In conclusion, technology overall has its ups and down, there are times where it can be beneficial and there are also times where it can be a distraction but it has definetly helped in the past in many ways one really big one is hospitals, technology has saved many lives and helped alot of familys so it really depends how you use technology for it to actually be benefitial. It's not good to take advantage of it, you have to use your brain as much as you can, people depend on technology too much and that's what causes problems.        ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
6C449C1EDB2D,"A Positive Mental Attitude by Generic_Name

A possitive mental attitude can make you successful but it can also blind you from seeing how you may fail. The idea of being successful in life has nothing to do with a positive attitude or negative attitude its how you struggle to try and be successful and not just say that you will be successful, a lot of people have wanted to try and be successful or try helping by being successful but also fail and their hardwork goes down the drain. You should think about working hard and being the best

YOU

that you can be, but yes you should still try to keep a positive attitude but also a negative attitude in case you need to keep up if you make a mistake. If i were to be the one saying this from trying. I have never been successful in anything

WITH

and

WITHOUT

the positve mental attitude its difficult to keep the positive attitude but you should keep that attitude and strive for success. I'll show you pros and cons now

Pros

Keeps your mind at bay

Helps in tough situations

People may be encouraged to help or stand by you for your attitude

Cons

A failure in what you do could make you depressed

Your anxiety may skyrocket and make you uneasy

Everything might seem hopeless

You might see yourself as a failure

People around you might move away from you because your attitude may change.

I know it doesn't seem right but thats what a PMA could do to you. It's bad but could also be good.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
F0524CAE23DC,"why you should have good attitudes? first having good attitudes will make you more succsesful in your life and there's 2 reasons why you should have good attitudes and how it's going to make you more succsesful in life,second having bad attitudes won't get you anywhere, having bad attitudes will make finding a job harder for you,finding good deals harder for you,and if you are in a court and you have bad attitudes the judge won't be happy about it and will probably write something you don't like, here is the reasons why having good attitudes good for you, first it will make people like you,second you will gain respect from others,third finding a job will be easier.

1-People will like you,

people will like you for having good attitudes because you are showing them respect,therefore if you are showing respect they will start liking you and respecting you back and will help you become more succsesful in life and if you ever go to a job interview and you don't have good attitudes they won't hire you,but if you do have a good attitudes the chances of you getting that job will increase and you will most likely get that job.

2-respect,

gaining respect from others makes you a succsesful person becuase they are not trying to make you fail, but if you have bad attitudes they will disrespect you and try to make you fail,however gaining their respect is not easy, you have to have good attitudes,you need to respect them so they can respect you and you need to help them so they can help you,getting their respect will make you more and more succsesful in life, so you should respect them first.

3-finding a job,

finding a job with bad attitudes is going to be really hard for you therefore you should have good attitudes to increase the chances of you getting that job, or getting into a good college, both of them will be harder because of your bad attitudes, let's say you are trying to get into your dream job or the college you want, having good attitudes will make it 100% easier for you, but if u have bad attitudes you will end up getting rejected or kicked out.

in conclusion I think having good attitudes will make your life way easier than having bad attitudes so having good attitudes will make you more succsesful in life and you will get people liking you and you will gain respect from that and your chances of getting a job will increase.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
477B00F899E2,"Student-designed Projects Encourage Learning

Summers can be boring for students, especially when homework is assigned. Students have creative minds and a variety of interests which can be specialized to a topic of interest; however, schools tend to assign a generic assignment to all students despite their differences. Summer projects are intended to enable students to continue learning and exploring the world through a lense of their interest. Therefore, allowing students to design their own summer projects allows for their interests to spark, their creativity to grow, and their areas of knowledge to expand.

Firstly, student-designed summer projects will allow for every student to specify the project on his or her interests. Every child is different and shows admiration towards different subjects in school. If teachers design the summer project, the students will lack incentive to explore an area of interest as that has already been done for them. Additionally, teachers will attempt to design the summer project in a way that it applies to all students; however, not all students think alike. For example, most middle schools conduct science fairs that allow kids to explore an area of science that particularly interests them. This allows for children to research heavily into a subject and even enjoy doing so. This not only sparks an interest for science, but it also allows students to show off their abilities and specialize in their talents. This science fair analogy can be applied to summer projects because children will develop their admiration towards an educational topic and will enjoy the learning process. This creates a positive incentive for learning despite it being summer.

Secondly, if students are enabled to design their own summer projects, creativity will occur and develop. When teachers design projects, students are incentified to simply follow instructions and do as they are told. This results in surface level researching and a lack of interest in actually learning and retaining knowledge. This is understandable as most students do not enjoy a generic assignment that does not apply specifically to their interests. However, if students were given the opportunity to design their own project, they could research a subject that sparks their interest and creativity. This will lead to a deeper understanding of the topic and will result in a better quality of summer projects completed over all. For example, refering back to the science fair analogy, most students will become creative and design their own experiments if they are given the opportunity to do so. Most students enjoy being given the freedom and trust to become creative and show off their interests.

Lastly, when students return to school after summer break, they will see a variety of interesting summer projects completed by their classmates. The student-designed projects allow for a large variety of topics to be explored, and will benefit the students intensely. If all students, for example, have the same assignment, they would be less interested in their classmates projects as they would all be generically similar. However, if the students have the opportunity to design and conduct their own research into their favorite topic, then the students can share each others interesting new insights with each other and spread their knowledge. This increases students admiration for learning and will inentify them to study something interesting for their classmates.

In conclusion, allowing students to design their own summer projects allows for their interests to be explored, their creativity to flourish, and their areas of knowledge to expand. Schools tend to fail to recognise that each student is different, and that he or she requires different learning styles in order to be successfull in learning. It is vital that students are given the opportunity to become creative and explore an interest that is dear to them. If this is not prioritized, schools will continue to foster the idea of simply following instructions.",4.5,4.5,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0
FDA7648F8B49,"Some school offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in tree years instead traditional four years. Must students who follow this plan must take courses during the summers or in the evenings or may not be able to take elective course.

One reason that I agree with this chance that this programs it is offering. because must students like me need to take the high school diploma and try go to college or try to find job. When they have the high diploma ready. Must students take time during the summer to on focus in class or during the evenings.

Because someones students work k in the morning and the rest work during the evenings. But all this students want to go to college. This should the first reason why could be a reason this program. can allow the students get the high diploma done.

Other reason this program that be offering this chance that must student get the diploma between three years should a very important oportunide to think in try to finish high school or try to enter to the college. because is must students have the oportunide study and be ready to go to the college

.also should help them try follow their's goals what they want to be in the future this program is a good idea to must students.

I very agree with this program and I support this chance that are offering to students .because we has to know wants to know what is better for and try to follow ours future choose what do you want to be in the life .

This ones were ones of my support the students and agree that I am very agree that this program help the student grow up and finish high school.

I really appreciate to take time and read may support and agrees thanks for all.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
A055576C0F9E,"My name is Generic_Name. I am going to take a position about self-reliance, whether or not about if should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about lifes important matters. I honestly think that seek guidance from experts is better, because you can ask them about how they did to accomplish their goals and also they have more experience about life.

First, guidance from experts it can be much better, because experts can give more options, more ideas. Also you can ask them about what you need in life to be success. Also ask them about their life, how they did to accomplish their goals. Because if we are in any situation that we know we could not do it alone , we should ask them about any idea that they will give to us.

Second, those people they know almost everything about life, they could tell you whats steps you need to follow to achieve. As we know, billionaires people worked hard to be success, even if they failed something, even if life make them week, they never give up. they keep trying and trying until they make their dreams comes truth. thats why seek guidance is important for someone that want a better life.

Finally, in life we need help, even if we say that we dont need we need it. Because we can not do everything by our self. Thats why we should ask for help with people that can teach us about life. People that will give us tips to be success in life, because they have more experience and also because they know almost about everything.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
DA26E5E2C08E,"Many people believe that teenagers should have a 10 p. m curfew on the weekdays and during mindnight weekends. In my opinion I say having a 10 p. m curfew on the weekdays for teens that works and get out of work late might not be a good idea. Another example can be, you never know when an emergency can happen at your house and or anywhere else and you have no one to pick you up or an emergency hoccurs at your house and you have no one to take you, at least you got your son/daughter to help you out. Lastly during high school is when you get a lot of projects to take home and when you have test the next day and a project due before that can be a hand full and it can stress them out, by letting them do their work and have more time to study, it improves their grades in school and they do better in their classes.

I have a lot friends that as soon as they get home they get ready to go to work, and most of them come out at 10 p. m but by the time they get home it can a little more passed 10 p. m depending how far their job is from their house. Many teenagers help to support their family in whatever they can, having a job that can help them support your family is truly a good help. Letting your son work passed 10 p. m is not something you want to get in between due to thier boss changing their schedule sometimes and if hes helping you out by giving you money to pay a bill or to go buy food for the house it's worth him/her working a little late. I have friends that work very hard in school and after they home they change, they put on their uniform and they go to work to bring food the house due to his mom not getting payed good enough at her job. Others work to buy themselves their own needs, for exmaple when they have school dances and you need to buy a ticket and your mom has no money, by working you can buy a ticket and attempt to the dance. Another example is prom, prom can be one of the most exiting activities high school has, but it can also be very expensive if you have no money and your trying to look nice and presentable.

You never know when an emergency can occur at your house and you have no one to call or help you out. I once had a friend that his mom was pregnant and he had little sibblings that could not drive but him, and as the pain started to get worst he took her the Hospital and thank god everything turned out fine for them but the reaon they didn't call anyone else for help due to the fact they we're new in the city and didn't knew anybody and it was passed midnight, so his older son carried her to the car and drove her to the Hospital. You never know when an emergency can happen to you or someone in your family at anytime. Another example was when my dad and I drove to Walmart to buy my mom some medicine because she had a bad fever and a headche and we left the house exactly at 10:30 p. m and when we got back home we gave her medicine and the next day she felt a lot better.

During high school is where I have gotten a lot of projects that are hard to make and thier due two days later, not only do I be having projects, I be having homework from all my teachers and test that I need to study. Staying up late to complete your work can most definately help you complete your work or at least do more than what you couldn't had finished if you were to sleep at 10 p. m. Whenever I have a lot in mind like projects, homework, make-up work and test that I need to study really be stressing me a lot until a point where I feel like i'm being rushed and I can't concetrate right if I have other things in mind that I need to get done. But by having no curfew you can go to bed late, but at least you were calmed about it and you werent rushing into getting it done, when you took your time.

Many people can see 10 p. m curfew as something that should be done, but think about the consequences that it can have for example, not being able to work and help your family because can work passed 10 p. m or you never know when something can happen to anybody at anytime and there's noone to help out, or when you need more time to complete your project that you weren't able to finished due to curfew. Think about many other things that can be done, other things that can help others.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
7999A063F80E,"I agree that praising a students work is an outstanding idea to jump start a students path to success,but praise is not the way to increase their self-esteem. By overpraising a student his or her confidence has to be on a different level. Students will also have a harder time dealing with constructive criticism. However, if a student works really hard to achieve something,then that feeling of completion can motivate them to continue to their path of success. Getting your business done without any praising and knowing you put your all into it could make you feel way better about yourself and it would just not motivate you but the people around you. I say this because people don't usually thank you or give you any comments they usually mean. You would never know what could come out someone's mouth.

They wouldn't want to agree with this but, that's because we all think different and most of us know the real meaning behind something similar to this. If you achieve something and you keep on achieving things in life you will get many blessings. People don't usually know the difference between praising and achieving your goal without it. You don't need people telling you about your work or whatever you are doing because at the end of the day you're the only one who knows what you're accomplishing in life. Teachers should let students achieve their goals and not worry about what the other person has to do or say. By accomplishing something could make you learn new things in life too. People get confused and don't get the message, we need more people to believe in their selves and not about what other people have to say.

Although I think it's nice of people complimenting and saying positive things about your work but, I still have to go with achieving it on your own. So what if they dislike your achievements? so what if they start doubting? prove them wrong with all your accomplishments that are coming your way. Make them regret what they said and go accomplish more.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
163AC455E1DF,"In my opinion i think online schooling wont benefit any student because, you dont have a teacher in front of you explaining what to do. Video conferencing is something different, you basically at school but on a screen. Youll be able to hear the teacher while shes explaining the assignment and teach it to you better so that way you understand more and you can be able to ask questions. Looking at a screen and reading an assignment isnt going to help you much. If you have an actual teacher, she/he goes into details and shows you examples of how to do an assignment. Being home schooled is pretty challenging. Most online schooled kids tend to procrastinate and end up falling behind. Most shy kids are home schooled or video conferencing because of problems or any other thing thats going on with them. If students want to attend online and video conferencing, then thats fine as long as their getting their education and finishing their assignments. Its the law for every student to go to school or to do something thats related to school. Online classes are pretty expensive to pay up, so students must complete their assignments because theyll charge you for it either way. I think attending school would be better. Teachers teach you better and help you out when you dont understand something. You get less homework and maybe even easier homework to do. You dont need to pay anything for your child to go to a public school. Your student gets taught well. So in that case i think going to school is better then online class and video conferencing. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
9725E454418F,"Inteoduction, I planned my paper befoer writing. there are maney school in world. to my paper capturess the reader's attention. the option for students.

The have distance to learn. The school is an importand in live, you do not delay to the classes. We do benefit from being, because we do not know how to, writering, spelleing it is very important and reading . Also we have serves at school. All people need education. Sam students they do in online, sam in night and daly. To be indebend students.

In my convenient for me, I learn write, read and speek. When I took my certificate from high school. and then I look for job, I like working to schools and goverment office. I want to help my family and people. when they need.

Conclusion, with pleasure, I talking about school. 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925371DCF84D,so another reason i agree one is because the most technologist people who makes technology are the most smartest people in the work. the brains of them help them out .it dont mater what is the technology this day are the matter is that one of the time technology dont work. we cant live without technology . the people know that technology the day are best thing .that ever happened in this world .and those who complete the world. i s thnk that we the reason we need technology is because its vey important to have technology becaus ein case an emergency had happened at work school somewhere else you will need ur phone to contact the pwrsom ur friend police station second i agree because technology makes you famouse to have the category .the technoly make u ven beter ur brian pople have the smtest barin in the wold                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.0
4843C41AAF24,"in order for students to have a good experience at the school, we would like to partner up with your company so students can have just have that. because many schools doesnt allow that offer to students but here at Generic_School we would like to take learning differently and fun. so we would like to have in total of one-thousands of Hershey chocolate milk because it seems that students like it so much to the point where students even made a paper bringing back chocolate milk. so we would like to partner up and get Hershey milk for students here. so the students can be happy and think that this school is a wonderful place for others and Hershey milk seems to make all the students happy and if you have any other products we will like to try them!. in order to see whats the healthiest and tastiest for our students and we would like them in a small container in order to be clean and organized and good for nature and make the milk low fat as well for those other students so they can have a try them self.

- the manager",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
E4FF635779B8,"People say working in groups is better than working alone, but thats their opinion even though it helps others more than it helps other individual's. I still know working alone is better because all my life i've been working alone since sixth grade. I wasnt really the person to just jump in and meet others or ask for help when i needed them.

Every person has to go through many difficult times looking for a group but, Their just too shy or too nervous to say a word to other people, I would know because i was in the same problem. It can be hard but, the reward is so worth it.

People say working alone has no distractions, finishing faster than others, or learning things on our own. Other individual's say that having no distractions can help them work without stopping but, sometimes there are many difficult situations where we cant do much to work while being distracted, maybe being in quiet place may help. Finishing our work can easily be done without a group, like in our jobs, an office, or even at school. Not everyone has a group to be in except for people that know each other , They have many people that wish to be in a group like them. Back then when i was a little boy, I didnt know English so it was harder for me to understand teachers, or even students till i met two other kids that spoke the same language as me. I was happy to actually find two people that speak the same language as me but, that didnt last long because i never got to see them again. Till then i worked alone, avoiding others, sticking close to myself, even studying alone without anybody. My mother or father couldnt help me as much. That made things worse for me. Thats how i learned to do things all on my own without help. In a quiet place, We'er able to finish other assighment's from our jobs or school work. Teachers and students love to be in a quiet place because it helps them concentrate more than being in a group.

In conclusion working alone is better than working in groups. next time try working on alone, in a quiet room. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
CA290993DFBA,"Many students and teachers think that taking online classes are bad for the students and the school. The reason is that the students might not take any notes on what the teacher is saying. The other reason is that students will often get distracted from the lecture the teacher is giving to them. Students cannot be benefited of taking online classes because students might not take notes and that the students might not pay attention to the teacher.

Students might not take notes while being on a class that is online. For example, at school, students take notes because they are being watched by the teacher, so why would they do it if they are not being watched by the teacher; the students would not care about the notes. If the teacher is on the screen, but cannot see if the student is taking notes; most likely there are not because the students won't worry that the teacher could check them. Students should take notes when they get information about a topic, so that topic could stay in the mind of the student if they write it and they also try understand the topic from the notes. Teacher's won't even know there students are taking notes because it's online they cannot see them. also the students might not be paying attention.

The students might not pay any attention to the lecture the teacher is giving to them. For example, when a student looks around the classroom, but not at the teacher, they will miss valuable information that is needed, so it's like the same when it comes to online classes; information will be missed by the students. Missing information when distracted is terrible because students might miss out on what is going on in the class, might miss on something on they have to do, and miss on how to do there work. Students should pay attention; no one likes to miss any key information; therefore, students need to look at the teacher to get more information as needed to do an assignment. When students don't take notes, they will not only miss out on some key information, but might panic on how to do a problem on the assignment they were given.

The students cannot benefit from taking online classes because the students might not write valuable information in there notes and they might not pay attention to lecture that teacher is giving to them. The students won't take any notes because no one is watching them take the notes as the teacher goes on lecturing. The students could miss valuable information because they are not paying attention to the teacher, and the students might miss on how to do something in a assignment. From not taking notes to note paying attention is the reason why there cannot be students taking online classes because teachers might not know what the students are doing and students might not even care about all of this.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
248407B5DBB2,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" For example to run without connected to the power is not useful work. I agree with Thomas Jefferson that from doing nothing we can not gain anything. Because if we are always doing something ,we can learn from what we are doing, and we can reach the goal that we have .

If we are always doing something we will get a good result and we can learn many things. For example when I was in high school I was just doing my school works and I did not have any job or something else to do after school in my free time, so I thought maybe I can join the school soccer team because soccer was one of my favorite sport and I was always watching soccer games and I was thinking maybe I will be also a good soccer player in future too. And then I tryout for school soccer team and I did not have any experience about playing soccer and I

was thinking negative, because I though maybe I will not be able to join the team because of my talent and I did not know anything about soccer, and there were many kids for tryout with good talent and skills that they had. When it was the time for tryout I went for it and the coaches were testing, but when I got the result I did not make it, I was so sad that day and I was never going to give up because of the dream that I had. After that, two months later I join a soccer club for training and I was trying my best to learn soccer an many other skills. And after a year when it was about to start the next season of tryouts, I made it to the team and I was so happy and proud to be in the team to accomplish many things for my self and my school.

It is always a wonderful thing if we are doing something or working toward the goal that we have. For example when I graduated from high school my goal was to go to college and I wanted to be an IT Engineer. And that was not an easy thing for me,because of the expense of the college and the subject that I was thinking to study. And I did not have the budget for it,so I was wondering if I could work and make the make money that I needed for college. And the cost for the subject that I was thinking about to study in college, it was going to cost me around twenty thousands dollar for the whole semester. And my parents were also supporting me a little bit,but I needed to make the rest of the amount by working. Finally I got a job near by our house and I did not have a driving license, so I was walking to my job. And the first days of working it was a little bit challenging for me, I did not know anything about the job and it was also a new experience for me .And I had to work and accept the difficulties and challenges that were upcoming for me to reach my goal. After two months later I was thinking to get also another job beside the job that I was already working on, so I could make more money to accomplish my goal early. And also I found another job and I was working in both of them and I

had a shift of four hour in each. And I learn many things from doing my job and after a year and half I had the amount of the money that I

needed for college and finally I reach my goal.

From doing nothing we can not accomplish anything. And it is always a good time to start and it is never late to do the things that we want. And we should never waste our time doing nothing.                   ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
FC211F7815F2,"Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement, is to start an afterschool homework club. Students stays for homework help, finish their homework early, and turn in their homework on time. So ,we all have our homework to turn in on the next day. They're a lot of students that do their homework, dont do it, or some students might said, ""I forgot my homework.""

Should people bring their homework to school? Of course, or what, you're just going to leave it at your house and forget to bring it at school. Always do your homework and do your homework at home or afterschool. On the next day, just prepare to turn in your homework and if you forget to bring your homework, ask your teacher and give a good reason why you left your homework. Then you can turn in your homework on the next day.

People need help on their work. That's why they needed an afterschool homework club. They can go to their teacher to help what they need. If they go to afterschool and get a good helper, then they can be better and will know what they learn at afterschool. We can improve all of the students to get a good knowledge and success, to be a good students.

So students needs to turn in their homework and get a good grade. So, if you want that grade, you have to achievement and pass the class and get good grades. Turning your homework is one of the important grades to success and go your grade up. You can help other students that needs help on a subject. Why, because helping someone will learn from you and they will know how to solve a problem. They might do something and turn in. That's why people needs a good grade and be smart on something they known.

Now that the students have an afterschool, they can go and learn what they need help on something. Then they can remember, how to do a problem. We all can be nice and treat like if its like you.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D87F1B0CE93F,"Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" By saying this I believe he meant people should never be lazy but to always be working towards something. Not doing anything and waiting for something to happen is not realistic. Working hard to get something feels so much more cherish able. Being able to out figure a way to accomplish something can help benefit others.

I believe we always accomplish more if we are always doing something whether it be small things or big things, we always have to keep moving forward. By moving forward we get to discover new things and see a change. Working towards a goal helps us to become more aware and understanding of the world around us. By always doing something we are always moving forward no matter what it is. Not doing anything is bad because you are just wasting your time and sometimes other peoples time too.

An example of being active and it helping/benefiting someone is if a person gets good grades so they can get into a better collage. By working towards getting better grades the outcome is getting into a good collage. Working towards a goal is beneficial and an accomplishment.

Inactivity doesn't serve a purpose at all but maybe in small aspects it does. It all depends on the type of situation. For example if someone is having a bad day you can't change their mood they have to do it themselves so in this situation you can't do much for them. By not being active accomplishments aren't being met rather someone else doing it.

Actively working and trying to accomplish something is most ideal. Never attempting to do something is bad. Always try your best even if you feel like you can't. Trying is always the best option because at least you attempted to do something. Things can get done if we are always doing.                                                                             ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
60AE13D3F07B,"I think our character traits are formed by influences beyond our control. Everybody has a different character trait and I believe it is formed by our parents, brothers, or sisters. It is the responsibility of adults to teach their child how to behave and that is usually how their traits are formed. As children begin to go to school, most often they meet other kids and become friends. Friends also have an influence on how traits are formed like for example: Kindness, friendly, honest, and more. The influence mainly comes from parents and are the role models for their children. Our character traits are formed by influences. Many people around the world have different character traits, Everyone is different on the way they behave around others. Therefore they are formed. My character traits are quiet, funny, and calm. These traits for formed because of school and my friends. John Lubock mentions that ""your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I think that this quote explains that you are able to choose it by yourself. I disagree and I believe that other humans make our character traits.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
F123CF0BF9DB,"Should people make their own decitions, or should they follow, others experts and authorities about life's experience. However from what think if you are alone out of no where and you don't have any exprerience is much better because you get to have your experiences and no one bothers yours plans. You make your own decitions and follow your own rules. On the other hand if you have some one on your back that do have more experiences them you they will be correcting you and bodering bothering you. Some people think that is better to follow some one decitions, but others think that is better to be alone because you must create your own decitions and follow yours rules is like you have a family no one is going to correct what are going to do with your family you don't follow others people they may be incorrect and you are correct and is better to be alone becuse you make your onw family whit your decitions and your rules.

To begin alone is better because you make your experiences from the mistakes.

you make your own decitions, but went you make a decition that coust you a mistake you get to have more experiences from the mistake that you did and went you have experiences from the mistake you learnd from the mistake that you need to be more responsible went you have a mistake you get to have a big experiences and that make you more strong and what you do and that makes you feel good and you become more responsible from the things that you do form the experiences that you have some people see that and they will have a hope on you and that you are going to be some one in the future and they will know you better because you are alone and not with some one that has more experiences you will raise you and your decitions.

Another think is that you must follow your own rules that you make. When you make your own rules no one is going to say some think to you they will follow your rules if they want to be with you however if you are with some one that has more experiences you must follow their rules and you dont want that to happent went you make your own rules and follow your rules you will know what is goint to happen but if you follow some one else rules you must be awear because you dont know what is going to happen, so is better to make your decitions your rules because you know that is good from what are you going to do so make your own rules and follow your own rules dont follow some one else rules you become more strong and more smart person.

Fanally the last reason why you should be aonle is that no one is going to bother you you will make every thing in your hands and no some one else hand they will not be on your back bothering you you will make every thing posible on your hand and if you are alone you will become and expert on the jod,company,schools the things that you do you will be the head on your decitions and you are no going to use some one else head and if you use their head they will correct you in what you do and if you do is like from what they thing is better ithey will be bodering you and that is not to good because it will be bad why it will be bad? Because they will make where do you walk in a way that you must don't want to walk they will make every thing possible to walk in their way and you want to walk in your way thier will make every thing possible they will bother you and no yuo must follow your way and your road to make every thing possible to have your own experiences and your own rules.

To conclude people must make their own decition, they should not be with some one else that has experiences or some tipe of company you must star from zero and trow the procces you will get to have some experiences from the mistakes that you did while you where working and wnet you have more experiences you will get to be more storng and you will grow in the things that you know and some people look at you and they will have a hope on you that you will make it to the end. On the other hand you must create your own rules you must be very organice on the rules that you make dont follow others person rules make your own rules and went yuo make your own rules you must know what is going to happen if every thing is going to be okay or bad, but if you follow some one else rules you will not know what is going to happen do must make your own rules so you can be unique and a expert. In adition, if you are alone no one is going to bother you in the things that you make becuase you are alone you are the boss no one is going to some some thing to you and you will guide others people went they see that you are alone and no with some one else you will grow alot in the thisngs that you do. Fanally you know now that the best thing is that you should be alone and no with some one else that they will make your own rules and you will learn from their experiences and you will not get to have your own experiences and no one is going to bother you is you are alone because of hall of that you must be alone and star from zere Thanks.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
750184492A96,"Do you want to be board going extra hours to school, when you could be doing fun things? All the sports that you want to do will be ruined if you do homework club. Students should not have after school homework club because you won't have time to spent with family members, students are not going to have time to play there favorite sports, and they won't be able to play their favorite sport.

First of all, students won't spend time with their family. If youre in after school club and your parents are planning to go eat dinner, you are not going to make it. For example, Generic_Name is at school and the day is over but, he needs to go to after school club. Generic_Name call his mother and told her "" Mom i need to stay after school today"" but, his mother told him ""we were going to your favorite restaurant Red Lobster."" Generic_Name upset that we wont be able to go to his favorite restaurant because of after school club. This proves that after school can affect on family time. Generic_Name missed his favorite restaurant

just because school.

Secondly, students won't be able to play sports. If you are in after school club and in a sport your most likely going to be late for your favorite sport. For example, Generic_Name

plays Basketball but he goes to an after school club for English class. On Wednesday Generic_Name needs to go to the after school club, also he has Basketball practice after the club. Generic_Name goes to practice and he is five minutes late the coach tells him that is strike one. PROPER_NAME tried to convince the coach that he was at a club for school, the coach told Generic_Name """"Is either school or Basketball Generic_Name."" Generic_Name got kicked form the team because he got to strike three. This proves that after school club can affect the sport that you play. Generic_Name got kicked from the sport that he loved, and the sport that he though that was going to be his career.

Finally, if you like video games their is only video games

on the weekend if take this club. You are going to come late from school which means that you are not going to be able to play. For example, Generic_Name is a gamer on YouTube he streams every day and plays games for YouTube, but now that he has to go to after school club he can't stream on week days because he gets out of school at 6:30 and the drive home is 30 minutes. So, Generic_Name gets home at 7:00 and he needs to do some of the home work that he didn't got to do on the club and is to late for him. Also, Generic_Name just bought a game and he can only play on the weekends. He lost lots of people that were following him on YouTube just because homework club. Generic_Name was playing for YouTube and had

a lot of people on his stream and lost half of them because after school club.

After school homework club is a waste of time, if you have things to do after school. It's difficult to do two things at once so don't do after school club. If you like doing sports do it because you should do homework at your own time. If you do after school homework club in school for more hours. Don't do after school homework club if you don't want extra time in school.                            ",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
35A7E263AC71,"the prompt says ""Unless you try something beyond what you have mastered you will never grow"". one would say that is something very wise to say .But due to the lack of wisdom around the world it is basically useless to say anything wise. I personally agree apart from physically growing I'm almost done. Going back to the topic I do agree with what author Ralph Waldo Emerson said in his quote, That if you don't try something beyond on what i have mastered am I really growing in any way ?

I have try anything new and just do the same routine over and over i'm not going to make far in life .Although I can't think of a reason why someone would disagree the statement. I have tried many thing my seventeen years of being alive, and I can say I have grown to be the person I am now .Many people don't try new thing only because they are quick to judge on the presentation of the new item or new person , but if people actually gave the new experience a chance it could be life changing for better or worse .

So going back to you trying something beyond what i mastered I won't grow or something like that it's all in perspective if I wish to try something new and be a better person in society I will but if I wish to not try anything at all and just to the same boring routine day after day .Sooner or later I will get bored of everything .Even though some may argue by saying ""that's how I got successful in the first place by doing the same routine over and over"". In some cases that may work for example in sports the athlete must do the same thing over and over until the get better at the sport or like a dance they practice the same dance over and over until it;s ready to be shared with the world how well one can dance . And for others trying a new routine can lead them to success (well maybe not everyone is talented)

In conclusion trying something new does change who you are in a bit by either helping or destroying yourself .People do grow to be wise and old and other don't grow old wise just young and reckless. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson was a wise man to say ""Unless you try something beyond what you already have mastered you will never grow.

thank you for taking the time to read this essay .                                                                          ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
8F78E9AF1D0E,"Do you challenge yourself often? In this society today do you think we challenge ourselves by making harder goals or easier goals? Michelangelo had stated a quote that proves how society is today and how we set goals we know we can achieve rather than set harder ones and give up when its not accomplished as quickly as you thought it would be. For instance, it can be the littlest things that you wouldnt realize such as, doing your bed in the morning is challenging but you know you can do it so you make your bed every morning.

Furthermore, Setting easier goals that you know you are capable of achieving gives you an opportunity to continue to create more and more goals as time goes by. When you accomplish something it makes you feel like you can do many more things leading to something bigger. For example, when you study for a test and you take the test the next day then later received an amazing score you challenge yourself to study every night before a test rather than take a risk and challenge yourself to study the same day as the test because you think you would remember it better.

We give ourselves goals we know we can achieve and play it safe rather than challenges because its easier. Such as, knowing your limits and knowing what youre capable of accomplishing. For example,

you would rather do something you already know instead of doing something you have no idea what to do in and no longer enjoy it therefore, you stick to what you know you would enjoy by knowing your limits.

Finally, Giving yourself a harder goal and not achieving it frustrates you and can cause you to give up on your goal. When you dont know how to do something it's frustrating and you just give up for example, In the movie frozen Elsa was forced to keep her powers a secret and to no longer use them but she tried using them and froze Anas heart because she was frustrated. Elsa tried to challenge her self and try to use her powers but since it was so difficult she got overwhelmed and started hurting people

In conclusion, People prefer to set easy goals that they are able to achieve because it inspires you to continue to do multiple goals instead of one challenging one that you know is to hard. People need to realize that its okay to have many goals instead of one big challenge goal that can make you lose interest in things ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
F06D9612B900,"One activity i consider really enjoyable are science experiments . One of the reasons i consider these activities fun is because they are different from other types of projects . And what i mean by this is that for example when one does a math project or a language arts project is nothing more then doing many math exercises or writing an essay . Unlike the science projects for example one time i got to see a frog's interior . And it might sound desgusting to many of the people reading this and to be honest it did'nt smell good either . But one of the things that facinated me from the project it was that frogs dont have as many organs as we human's do . Or maybe they removed some of them but there wasn't a lot of organs in there

And another thing i was curious about was that they were different colors . i remember seeing blue and pink unlike us humans almost all of our insides are red . Frogs actually got different colors in their interior but they looked a little dry because my teacher told me that they have been frozen for some time . But it defenently made it easier to cut parts in the interior of the frog . And also sense my teacher told me that we were able to cut whatever we wanted me and my group tried to explore as much as possible . But there was a part that was really desgusting which was that there was some flies in the frog's stomach . And that part definently disgusted me but it didn't made me want to stop either.

After we finished trying to see everything inside the frog the teacher told us the name and function of each of the parts of the frog . But one of my friend decided it was silly to poke the frog's eye . And until this point i still dont know what went trough his mind in that exact moment . But wen he poke it , it resulted that the frog's eye was'nt completly frozen so liquid from the eye just came rushing out and he got wet because he decided to do that . Fortunently it did'nt reach me but it defenently reach my mate . After that the teacher send him to the bathroom to wash himself .

After that happened my teacher decided that it was best to just stop the project after that . But it was defenently a lot of fun .

Another example of a project was recently when my tacher decided to have us do a project in the dark because is themed to what we are learning about right now . Which is the unit of light and the project was really simple and to be honest it wasn't as amazing and funny as the other project . But it was to spray a liquid in front a flashlight . And what was supposed to happen was that i would be able to see the waves which light travels on . And after the teacher explained the process of how this happens she told us to spray the liquid in front of the flashlight and being honest i didn't see anything i was kind of dissapointed . But after four seconds i could see them and they were kind off hard to see and it was for some few seconds but i actually enjoyed the project . But it had some downs like it was really short and the teacher took forever to explain the process . But i still think it was a really interesting project .

And what i tried to show by showing you this examples from my own personal experiences is that . Science experiments are not always boring and you may not like them but you should give them a chance . And i promise you that you are going to like them or at least one of the many projects there is . Because they make class a little more interesting . And in my opinion projects or experiments are the best activities there is in the school . Beacause they teach you in a more directs type of learning . And that's why i think they are the best . ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
49CBF98C0292,"This technology I dont thing so can effect people's because day of day the tencgnology is more and more i thing that can be helps you to do things like beginner your life. The technology sometime is good for contact with others person. That can help you in many things, you can play game and spiaking with others. That is positive because you can do whatever you want if you need fot do you work, you can bay if you don't want to go to the store, but that you can aid the people with need to know a bout technology, also in this world you need to know abaut technology, and some part of work you need to apply for work and you need to do for internet that's why sometime is good to know who yo make doing, for example you now can used the map to know the location, and a long time ago you can't to do that.

The reasan why is good is because you can do whatever you want to do if i want to do somenting but i dont know nothing a bout technology that's problem, because you dont know what to do so you need to practice who you can used the technology, fot work you need to know who you can used the computer, or you want to have a Iphone you need to know who you used some meny things you need. The most peolpe always aks you advice, and you need to explain, and you need to know for want you used the technology, do for something good not for bad things because somrtime you know what you doing and dont say yes a everything .

A thing some time is bad because the children know to much technology and that affect his life in many things now they can do overything his want because they know to much and they want to have they want, they need work mere in different things , you can build things about rechnology meke sometime your future, but always need to consult with people's who know, because if you know you cant contaminate your self you always need to convice your self, that's was very good what your doing.

listen what your self always tell you if is good or bad ner forget that.

With this technology now you can be a lot tings,but you need to have a limitation and what are you make duing because now the human only do things bad , they dont listen what they duing , they need to undertand they dont need to do bad things or negatives , they need to take a position en think what meken, and this time you now can kwon where the person are bacause the technology helps to much the you can do wherever you want only used the telephone and the compurer and you can do everything, you can play now and speak with your fiends in the game, yu can do online everithing now for the banck if you need to diposite check you can do online because the technology is to much.

that's why is important, .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
2F10C8035FEA,"What thomas jerfferson wrote to deternime never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing may mean something to him being his opinion from what he is saving may be true every one can accomplish something for what they have done like for intance to help others or to finish something import.

My opinion to what he is saving might mean that everyone has their own diddent way by accomplishing something on their paste some people maybe slow on what they do and get thing done that way and for some other people maybe the opposite they would know what they are doing and get thing done faster than other

When we do something and getting it done we do accomplished thingas way more faster the more we finish something the more greater feeling we get in with ourselves like being proud. but no that may not be true accomplishing something may be hand for some other people.

People that get thing done are ussually the people that want to succeed on their work, without slaking off. They would always stay on task and acomplished with what they got to do. For those people that don""t accomplish something on time usually maybe really busy with many things and things and not getting the other things finished.

for what it is always a good thing by accoplishisomething more, because we get things done and not having ton worried about anything else.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
67DD73D48474,"83% of people say that the idea of extending the school day by two hours is a bad plan, For those who dont know the average school day is abut 8:00 am -2:45 pm. The time that students get out of school should not change because the changing of the time would case cognitive impairment and students not having inf time for their jobs after school.

The idea of extending the school day would case cognitive impairment, For example, When my friend got sleepy for doing a school project late last Kite he would constantly forget he had homework and always feel uninterested in doing stuff, When I got tired I have forgotten to check the time that I had to get to work.

The plan would case students not having inf time for their jobs after school. For instance, When I had to stay after school for a test I had to miss work, and my manager had to cut my pay for messing work, Because i had to stay after school I lost my chains to get paid for my hard work.

Some people say that the plane would give students a four-day week than are five-day week. However it still dose not address that facts that people well not retain much memory of what they lend do to long school hour, and not having inf time of finding a job. It would be best to not to change are present schools start times and end times.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D25868F1C5C3,"Dear, Principal

Hi, my name is STUDENT_NAME and I'm a student of SCHOOL_NAME. I believe that Policy 1 is a good idea for the school. That students can be allowed to use there cell phone during lunch time or when we have free time. And that we aren't allowed to use them in class. If you don't allow cell phone's at school all of the student's will not be in the same side as you.

One of the reason's that you should allow phone's at school, is cause student's would not be in the same side as you. and they would still bring their cell phone's. When that happens student's will be in the office all the time.

That's why you should allow cell phone's.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
D2E2605EE795,"Do i agree or disagree that ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow? In my own opinion i say i would agree in my 17 years on this earth that i have to agree because if you stay to comfortable you won't do anything in life you will want it all easy and not try to strive for the best version of yourself.

you can stay comfortable but it won't help because your just wasting time and effort that you could become a better human being and spread your knowledge with other people. You should always try to strive to become the best you can be.

I say people should agree on this because not trying to fix your or improve yourself is not the best way to go. Like they shouldn't disagree i say because it not a bad or good thing but it would be amazing to push yourself and be more educated get pain a lot for having that big of a knowledge and use it think help people that can't help themselves. us humans should help everyone we can even if it's little people sometimes don't ask for help but if they dont ask you tell them you need help.

Some people also may disagree because they might think only about themselves or they think that there at a good point that they dont have to try anymore or try there very best they think thieve mastered the problems and situations. They think that they can't learn anything else but there wrong we human beings can always learn something more strive to be better humans, father,mothers,sons,daughters etc... but the point is don't settle for okay do more.

We Should learn not to stay cozy you should try to improve a bit everyday or learn something new help yourself and help each other out if they need help or if you need it learning and talking to other people wont hurt you so like

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow""

is a true fact and you should try to be a better human or person in life and become someone that people can look up too.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
8D160B0BC04B,"I agree with Author Emerson because people can do what they think makes them happy, they will support what they believe in without fearing anything, and they will speak up for themselves. Emerson's quote is saying that we live in a world with many influences trying to change who you are , so to retain your individuality or who you are is a great magnanimous feature. Most people end up striving to change themselves to fit standards to portrayed by media or to try to impress someone, however I think that people who choose not to change, and to be themselves are the accomplished ones. Other people will be inspired to become like you if you exceed to be yourself and not care what others think of you , and you should do what makes you comfortable. By you going against what everyone thinks is normal , you are showing that you are happy about who you are and you will stand out , out of all the other people trying to be someone they are not. I know some people might disagree with me,but thats ok everyone has their own opinion.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5
1A2894059051,"I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because if you have a positive attitude you can do a lot of thing in your life. Also you can octain better things, that can help you for a good future. Sometimes you has to be positive in life to be successfull, and a better person. Think positive is the best way that you can do for betters things, and a good provilege. If you want good things in your life you have to be positive.

I think if you are positive in life, that's a good way in which you can find better thing to do. That can be something very important for you. Also if you ae positive in life, you can do everything that you want to do it, for your future. That's why if you want to do a better person or a educated person you have to be positive. To complate your goals, and do better things that you think that can help you, to be positive because that's the key to success in life.

To be positive is the best way to success in the life. But also if you are positive in life that can help you, because also your parents can feel proud of you. That is a good form that yours parents feel good, and they tell you, that the key to success in life is to think positive. That's why you always has to be positive in the life, because every person want to improve, for betters opportunities, and good chances that can help you for betters things in life. But also think positive for a better future.  ",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
5A74C94F9813,I will like to visit new york because it is a fun place and there are a lot of things to do in new york and have stuff for you to like do and go to like places like muesams or stuff like that that you can visit I will like to visit the beach because of places oceans and like spend time with people you know and gonna go play basketball and going shopping and going to eat at a resurant and stuff and looking around and see if you like the places and stuff and going to roller coasters and flying a helicopter across the ocean and riding boats too and walking on the sand. I will like to visit Noth Carolinia because family is over there and places that you want to like be at or see and going shopping too and going to take a hike on the mountains and going driving and going to go see the rivers and going to go fishing up there and hunting too and going to go watch ball games and stuff and going to go watch animals up there and going to the zoo. ,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
E98FABC326F7,"ways to help improve students achievements in after school clubs.

after school homework clubs would be helpful because students can understand more about what they are doing, for example when a student has difficulty in one of there subjects,and they need help they can stay after school to get a better understanding on what they need help on.

other ways after school clubs would help the students focus more on the certain problems they need, but over all after school homework clubs is a great way for students to express there knolage and there concern on what help they might need help on over all.

after school homework club can help know the children strength and weakness for example me when I stay back for math after school my teacher helps me know what I need to work on to decrease my weakness for instance, me and my math teacher she helps me go throw steps to learn easy ways to decrease my weakness in different problems that I dont understand. other ways she helps me on to decrease my weakness is by giving real life problems and showing me ways to solve them and getting the questions right .

having after school clubs can help teachers and the students know were there strength and weakness are.

the after school club can help classmates have one on one conversations on what they understand and do not understand learning from other people can help you because they might know problems that you dont understand but they do. like for instance my friends at my school they get more help from classmates then they do teachers.

having a after school club for students can bring a positive impact on them and others around them and also it can be fun. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
DEC2349902F8,"I disagree with the school bored adding one and a half hour to school each day. Because students will have to wake up very early everyday and get out from school late that's messed up to do to us like every class will be like more than a 1 hour and 30 minutes of class time hell no. I will die having a class like that but. I hope we have gym for 2 hour and 30 minutes everyday that will be fun but without having health and I will be so happy if we never have 5 sol every year like 2 or 3 is fine but 5 no that's to much sols for 1 year like the county is so mean to us but it's all good and having recess like what I had when I was a little boy.

I think when i get older I want to be a soccer player or a basketball player but I do not know yet like when my dad was a little boy he was poor and he want to be a soccer player but his dream never became true but when he came to the united states he went to her don high school for 2 or 3 year and than he learned how to speck engli8sh and got to play for the schools soccer team.

I think school is not that hard but for some people it is but the hardest class for me is Math and

History that all the class that I hard for me the other class are not that hard for me.......... ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
6531927DF837,"The mind can perform differently when extensively staring into a phone screen and causes a lot of distractions in the classroom setting depending on how it's used. As for educational purposes, using a cellphone to probably schedule some test dates, or save notes for later use can really improve keeping track of class subjects and assignments, considering most individuals carry their cellular devices on them every time of the day. We also have notifications on our devices to notify us on when we've missed an important assignment or other things.

The real issue is whether the students are actually taking advantage of it's dependability to actually improve their classroom performance. The human brain can be effected on how long you use the phone regardless of where you are, and that issue goes across all devices. When having used your phone maybe in the middle of the night before a major test, your sleep is cut by maybe an hour due to the eyes being exposed to blue light shifts, which is the brightness of the phone seeping into your eyes, so it is very critical on how the person uses the device before, during, and after school.

Now another big issue is having the freedom and functionality to use the phone however you'd like. This is where a teenager's habit of text, calling, or sending pictures, brings up the debate of using cellphones for educational purposes. It is very easy to get distracted by other uses of the phone while also very easy to take answers from maybe a friend or find cheat sheets online. We don't have the right to control how people use their phone and that's where my opinion on it leans towards restriction policies and or, giving full responsibility to the teacher about when they can use their phone.

Our phones are also effectively useful for keeping a calendar and keeping us notified of the important things in life especially in the educational sense where paper and memory just don't suit us very well anymore in this day and age. Phone's are evolving rapidly and manufacturers are finding new ways of making them more useful for work, school, and social media. Modern education now requires plenty of technology to keep us updated, and there will eventually be a day where education is fully integrated into computers and touch screen devices.

I do agree we need some form of policy or agenda to make use of the phone to help our student's with how they're approaching their education. Teachers must have to conduct the convenience of the phone and whether a certain student can use it properly and educationally. It is a unique creation we have come to experience in our time, and I hope our generation can think heavily on this matter with a progressive and open mind. All it takes is serious debate and rationality for both sides of a subject matter to be comfortable and conclude with what helps us most while also advancing our students properly.",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
10D0BBF44479,"I believe that we have to work for our goals, and also we have to focus in what we want in our life. and that is true that we accomplish more if we are always doing something, because we maintain our mind occupied in our goals or what we want to be, we could accomplish more things if we focus in our goals and don't waste our time doing other stuff.

For example: In our school we can do awesome things with hard work or if we try to concentrate just in our goals. that is get good grade, and graduate and if we keep doing good job in school we can accomplish many great things. like if we get a good career we can get good money and we can enjoy life because we are doing the things that we like not just a simple job.

Another example: Once we decide what our goal is we maintain our mind occupied in our goal and work hard to get there, or to accomplish that we really want, and not matter how hard it is we can do it. because it what we want to be, is what we like, and also is to get a good future and a good life, like if we get a good job we can get good money and we don't have to worried about that and just enjoy life and try to work hard everyday.

Another reason that why I think we have to maintain our self doing something we like. is because we can get trouble to accomplish want we want. like we can do drugs and drink alcohol and all that kind of stuff and I think that is bad for our life because that interrupt our way and we get distracted and loss our path and our faith for our self because for just one mistake we can loss all the think that we had worked for. and I think we have to focus if we really what to be a professional person of if we want to be someone in the future.

In the other hand other people think that inactivity also serve a purpose like we can live our life no matter if we do something, or not like if we don't work hard for our goals its fine, and some people say that what happen in your life is for a reason or like is your destiny. but i think that they are wrong because we can decide what we going to be in our life, that's why God left us the free will to have the opportunity to choose what we going to fight for, and make a decision that going to help us to accomplish whatever we want in this life.

In conclusion I believe that we can accomplish many awesome and great things if we work hard for our goals and maintain our mind doing something good and something that we love like in our jobs, our school, our career etc. also if we maintain our mind occupied in something productive at the same we win something because its help our life and also we have to be careful to don't get distracted for others bad things like drugs, alcohol etc.

I believe we have to take care to our life like a treasure because this life is what God give us and we have to be careful the decision we take and if we get wrong we can learn from our mistake, and I think is wonderful how much may be done if we are doing something that we like. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
C6EB01B2D6B8,"MY SCHOOL SHOULD NOT FOLLOW THIS MODEL BY EXTENDING THE SCHOOL DAY BY TWO- HOURS

The addition of two hours to the school day will benefit the school poorly but,

will cause a huge disadvantage to students and the school as a whole. The four - day work week will not be beneficial to my school because,

it would reduce the amount of time students have for other activities,

and also this will result in the inability of students to learn more, and as a result students are affected mentally and psychologically.

To begin with, the school day has been designed in a special way which gives students, a reasonable amount of time to involve themselves in after school activities. These activities help the students acquire other skills different from what we acquire in school. For example, students who also take part in sports do not have enough time to practice or train after school if these 2 hours are added. Other students who work after school will begin to work fewer hours because they also need time to study and revise. As a student, time is needed to attain your goals and time also determines your future.

In addition to, the student brain can't function as well as an adult brain after some hours of serious work .The brain becomes tired and needs rest after some time, but the adult brain can do more because it is well developed than the student brain. After lunch, the students can study to a maximum of 3 hours only before feeling sleepy or tired and if these hours are extended, students will feel reluctant to study, which makes these extended hours a waste of time. Due to this, students won't take these hours seriously but will only disturb or disrupt the class which produces no positive result at the end of the class. The school makes sure that wastage of time is extremely prevented to produce positive outcomes and results.

Furthermore, to become a successful student, individuals must be mentally upright and psychologically sound to allow learning to be much easier and convenient. If these 2 hours are added to the school day, the students won't be mentally stable because, they would be stressed from pushing themselves to learn more even tho they are tired. Psychologically, this will reduce a student's ability to understand new things being thought and also prevents them from revising past information or work given. If this is happens, students will begin to forget past information and how to apply them which will become a problem in the near future.

Conclusively,this four - day work week would benefit other other institutions but won't benefit an institution like my school because my school works and remains successful mainly by the use of precious time and effort.

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8778DE7C8D0E,"introduction

The people who value selft-reliance should seek guidance from experts and authorities,

instead of taking their own decision about life's important matters. When we say experts we are talking about people that know alot more about the topic then us. We can compare this an a teacher and student.

The teachers they have graduated from what they know lets say science class. They have to do alot to become a teacher in that career. This is why I say that if we value self-reliance we need help from experts. that way we can subcess in life. However there is some decision that we can take by ourself. For example, we can choose if we want to drink alcohol, and smoke. for that type of decision we just have to think about who we are hurting too, and as we know it is ourself and nobody else. if we don't take about ourself and the decision thaty we make nobody will.

Reason 1

In my opinion self-reliance is really important in every single person life. When we talk about Self-reliance is about decision. There is times that we think we are right in every decision that we make. However, we have to know that no one is perfect as a human. So, there is times where we make bad choices. One good example could be when we are tenergers. at that age is when we need more help than anything because there is alot of things that can influenciate us really easy. At that time is when we need help from experts and what better experts then our parents. They want the best for us, so they will teach us what could be the best and what have to really matter is this life because they love us. I'm not talking and general because there are some parents that don't really care about what his son or her dauther are doing, but some of them do. Also, we can look for another type of experts who can be profesional and have a diploma in what they are experts in. So, it can be really helpful for us to subceed because they have been studying for years their career. Also, it can help us to make better decison trought life and make us a better person.

Reason 2

Bad decison can hurt ourself. decison is something that we all have to make one day. it could be good or bad decision or sometimes there are some decision that look good, but it could take us to do something bad. However ther are decison that cna hurt ourself and can take us to do something stupid in life. For example, a person want to nibest money to create a restaurant. At first it sound good because what we all think is that we only win in this type of business, but the reallity is that it could be like a challange for the person. some people don't take sometime to think about the consecuences of creating a restaurant. They don't think about the things that they have to pay out from the money that they are making of the restaurant. They don't think about that they can lose all their money if the restaurant doesn't work. When it happens that people lose all their money they can get depress, and some of them have even take their life. So, here is when we need the help from experts and not take the decison of creating the restaurant by ourself. Those people that we call experts know alot more then us because they have graduated from it. They know everyhting about business and what could be best for us. So, we can subcess in business life and don't lose money.

counterclima.

Someone would argue that making decison by ourself is better because that way we won't have to blame on anybody if we make bad decision. Also, we can learn how to be responsable in the decison that we make. Howevere, we don't need to wait untill that happen better look for experts, so they can help us to make good decision and not bad decision two heads are better ten one.

conclusion

In conclution the help from experts is the best way to do the things. They can teach us how to be better and thats why they have been created in this world to look for them and ask for help. sometimes we need to acept that we can do it by ourself and thet we need help from experts or our patrents. We have to look for different sources to subcess in life. In some points we have to be strong but to take any decision we need to be social, what I mean by it is to ask for help and make good decision.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
A33D66485059,"Tomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonerful how much may be done if we are always doing.""

In this prompt I thinki that Tomas Jefferson was triying to said is that people have to determinate to never be idle to always do something, because after that you will see how much things you may done, and there always 2 types of people . The pople who would be agrere or not agree with this frase. That is why some people may think that is not always necessary to do something or work hard for things that we want, because they think that we can work for our things when is their necessary time . Also some people may think that you need to do something when things are really necessary or when you want something. I hardly believe that the frase that Tomas Jefferson wrote is totally true. We need always been working in our life to get wonderful thing , as he said is wonderful how much we can done whit things if we are always doing something for it. It is also that we that he worote that sentences, because I can totally feel how he specificly said "" Determinate never to be idel "" I take that sentence like never let yourself be that.

In the world are so many people negative that always think that we cannot get that things that we want that is always the reason why people become lazy with their dream , because they always think with negativily.

there are many people outside looking for a excuse to be idle.

In conclusion I hardly believe that I'm totally agree with Tomas Jefferson because we can keep working or doing something because after that, we would see the things that we have done or our resuts that our hard work. Just we need to keep doing something or working for something great in our future as a person succeful that we want to be.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
1E11EA73C7B3,"Inactivity will most definitely not get you anywhere in life. By not giving up and always doing something, you'll accomplish more in your lifetime. You'll learn a lot in the process, and you'll also set a great example for others.

There's a good amount of people who are good at something in life, but never get the opportunity like other's to be successful at it. For example, sports. If your good at sports nowadays, you can easily make it to the big leagues and have a good salary, if and only if, your focus and show that you want it more than others. You gotta be unique in someway. Because if you think your good enough already and sit back and think that there's no one better than you out there, then your wrong. That means your mentality is not set for success, it's set for failure. If you decide to be Idle, you'll lose your chance to make it to the big leagues because there's many people out there who are hungry and are willing to take that spot from you. For example, Ousmane Dembele, former Barcelona player, took the starting spot from Philip Coutinho. Because at practice and some games, Dembele showed that he had what it takes to start over Countinho. Coutinho did suffer an injury, but when he recovered, he pretty much became Idle and Dembele was already far ahead from what Coutinho was when he started.

When you decide that you want to be successful, it's not only good for you, but also for others. Because your setting a good example,for people that look up to you, younger siblings, etc. I'd rather die trying to be successful, than not, because then I know I made someone happy, like my family. Trying isn't going to harm you, matter of fact, It'll get you somewhere in life where It will only motivate you to do more, and become a better person. A person like me, would never become Idle because i've witnessed what happens when a person becomes Idle. Especially High School students. I've seen many students get jobs and lose their interest in school because they've ""found"" an easy way to make money. And many think that they don't need education, that's why I, myself, haven't had the interest to look for a job at the moment. I witnessed my cousin, get a job at Wendy's, going from straight A's and B's, to becoming Idle towards school and finishing the year with all F's and only one D. That's why I encourage students not to get a job right away when they become 16 years old. I would rather wait for the summer, get a job, and make money. Because you can't also sit around and not do anything in the summer.

Everyone gets to that one point in life, where they'll find themselves being Idle, but that's great because they learn from it. They learn what's bad from it, and hope to never be like that. At least I've learned from it. I suffered a bad injury freshman year, which lead to my downfall a little bit because when I came back from the injury, I noticed that I wasn't the same anymore. My team mates were telling me that I'll most likely never be the same again and that another person was gonna take my spot. I took their words, and trained harder than ever. I became a better player than I was, took me a bit of time, but I got there. And that inspired me a lot, I even started playing with better people so that I could learn from them. I pushed myself out side of my comfort zone, but it payed off. I inspired my brother to also become a goalkeeper, he now trains with me every weekend.

Thomas Jefferson states that by always doing something, you'll accomplish more, and it's a wonderful thing when people acknowledge that. I, in fact agree with him, because when you're Idle, you most definitely won't get anywhere in life. There's always something to do out there, for every human being. You just have to push yourself outside of your comfort zone, and do things in life that makes you happy.                                                                            ",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
F2B390040C12,"My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours, and four day school week. There are some benefits but also disadvantages.

First reason, if we take only two hours of class during the day probable should more express try the best of us, for use that time of class. In contrast, lose hours in others things not necessary; with more hours and days off the students would be distract of the responsability that is demanding the school.

second reason, less pressure for the students that have a job is a big idea taking the school day two hours, because they want time for both during the week. For example, i work 27 hours in three day i came home so late, hungry, and tired sometimes i miss days of school, for that reason i think is benefit take time on sleep then came to the school just for few hours. But, one disadvantages that could be happent is less time of classes when the students don't work or spend time in others distraction. Clearly, they feel more in liberty in do something else on free time, and would not put all in the study.

Third reason, another disadvantages is not focus at all maybe should not work that idea; in the way that lost time of school is lost sacred time. The teachers miss day of their job too, and the student do not see the loss of the oportunity that is the school. However, one benefit and important for the students is the repose, so when our brain is in repose with not too much pressure it was relax, and we going to be blessed. Because, we have more time to think much better what we want to do for our future,so we think most clear.

In conclusion, in my opinion it is a great idea if my school take a four day school week of two hours each day. Obviously, it's probable that students feel more easy in this way, for making their homework with time, wisdom, and decoration. Finally,the school will make the change for a good reason.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
F22FE8D7FA16,"Students should commit to a career at a young age?. Many people thing that this would be an advantage in the future, because if many students choose a career when they are young, then there's going to be more professionals that can help the country, but other people thing the opposite, because they thing that the students are not ready to choose a career,because they are not in the age to thing by themselves. In my opinion, I would say that both arguments have good reasons to support their arguments, but l would prefer to be disagree with this opposition.

For my first reason, I would say that it's too much responsibility for their age, because they don't have the experience necessary to complete a career that they like, but they are not prepare to complete, however if they choose a career, then they have to worried about the college that they want and how much it's going to cost to them and their family to start a career, also because they are not going to take the career seriously, and it's going to be a waste of time in a career that they can not hold by themselves, so they are going to leave the career.

In addition, my second reason is that they don't have the ability to maintain a career mentally, because they can not control their actions and thinking, and if they do things wrong ,and they try to solve their problems alone, it's going to be stressful for them, what can cause a distinct kind of future that they don't expect , so they can get affect by all the things that can occur on your way, and also because there's going to be people that instead of help you, it's going to use for their benefits, and one example of that is the people who works in factories, construction, and bussines.

Finally, my last reason talks about how much time they have to enjoy their life, if they have to work in their career at a young age, because you can choose to be a professional when you are young and find jobs with that kid of career, but if you already know that you are going to work almost the rest of your life to have better future and keep progressing, so why don't enjoy your youth and be happy doing things that you like, instead of worry about find a career that if you are not ready, it's going to make you problems that you don't want to have now.

In conclusion, supporting with the reasons, I would like to say that the best thing to progress in life, is to find something that your are good, that you can control, and also something that you can make money with that,

however if know what you want to do in the future, and you know how you are going to try to make it possible, why don't enjoy what you have now, and leave the occupations for later, so you can concentrate in what you want now, before it's start to being late,because life is only one and we have to enjoy the maximum as we can.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",3.0,2.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
8F3B39C509B9,"Why should students identify their career by the time they enter high school?

some people say that Students should identify their career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward their future life. Students could study on their future work, to become better and have a better knowledge on what they do,get more money and respect at the same time. one student may thing of Ben a Doctor but have no idea how to come one of this dream work so this students take biology class or others student can think of Ben a manager this student have a chance of been one because in high school that teach blitheness classes or economy class. students have many chose in high school to become who they want to be.

Students also could learn how to take responsibility by doing a little things like doing their Class work, Home work, and also by doing some school activities. students are mostly scored to take a responsibility by them safe but doing a little thing can Chang every thing for their future.

Students could be participating in sport at their school, they can be playing profession in the future or even while their in high school. they can get a scuoralship by playing any tap of sport at the same time they can have fun. in one school there are many kind of sports like soccer,basketball,voliball,tennis,racte,etc... sport can help one student mentally or phicaliy. most student experse theirs elf by using sport, that make friends, becoming one big family.

However some people things that it is a good timing for students to identify their career by the time they enter high school,Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward their future life. some do not thing it is a good thing to do. As some people said making teenagers chose his/her career is wrong because teenagers age is what old people call it as ""The fire age"" to make big chose like this, so they can west their time doing something that was not meat for them. some people come up with some idea like counselors make a good chose bathed on their grad in midel school,or wait for the students to finish 9th grade than make a chose for him/her the best thing to study instead of the students making wrong choice.

Students make the wright choice and identify their career by the time they enter high school!",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
C5376D2ED6EE,"Generic_Name

EOC Writing Prompt

13 March, 2020

School Lunch Menu

Do you think that it is a good idea to change the school menu? Students are the only person who can choose what they want to eat. Students might prefer eat a hamburger than a salad. Changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic of some types of vegetables and students' favorites food would be eliminate.

To begin, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic of some type of vegetables. For example, Generic_Name is allergic of tomatoes and lettuce. If the school menu changes then Generic_Name would not go to the cafeteria during lunch. Because of his allergies, Generic_Name have to stay away of those kinds of vegetables. For students like Generic_Name, the principal should reconsider the idea of not changing the school lunch menu. Overall, the change of the school lunch menu would not be benefit for some students.

Secondly, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students' favorite food would be eliminate. For example, some students' favorite foods are pizza and hamburgers. If the school cafeteria changes its menu then many students would not eat because the cafeteria would not have their favorite food. For those students who would not eat, the school cafeteria will waste the food. Overall, by changing the school lunch menu can lead the cafeteria to waste food.

Some students might argue that changing the school lunch menu is a good idea. They argue that by changing the lunch menu students will have a healthier life. This point has merit; however, the change of the school lunch menu is a bad idea because others cannot decide what students should eat or not. Although, students will have a healthier life, other people cannot decide what students should eat.

In conclusion, changing the school lunch menu is a bad idea because students might be allergic and students' favorite food will be eliminated. For example, if the school lunch changes then it will have disadvantages for some students. Second, the cafeteria can waste food if they decide to change the lunch menu. And lastly, although students can have a healthier life; other people cannot choose students' food. Overall, students will decide if they want to have a healthier food or not. ",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
AADAFDCD9944,"Disagree about extending the school days two hour long and be a four day school week, the reason I disagree with this event is beacause if the school extend the day 2 hours can mess up the student schedule after school ends. The students may have to reschdule some of the things that may have to do after schools end and some student can't changed there schdule at all also more stress can happen to the students.

Some student have things to do after school like they have a jobs go to after school ends, I have a friend that has a job he go to after school end and to go right away or he will be late for work that can lead to him fired. I have art school after schools ends and I need to be there on time to finish part of my art work that help me get in to college. Some of the student may have go to an importent event that has a time on it like a funeral in a diffrent state and that can lead to get behind in class work.

More work may over stress the student mind and they might fall behind in things that might be inmported, the student may have less time to sleep to get work done on time beacuse there schdule maybe get more cramp with work to do, then they were before the school have added one more hour of school day. And the classes may have more work to do in class that can lead to more stress to the students and more homework to finish off at home.

Sure when students become an college students and adults they have more thing to do in there schudule then a student in high schools. But student do extra thing to get in to the college they want to get in to. I am trying to get in to a art college, so im going to an art schools for 5 hours to make my paforlio for it. I'm also making my essay and taking the sat to get into the art college I want to get in. Now lets add two hours for my school I have to reschdule my art school time then after art school I need to eat dinner then do my home work and I have little to no sleep trying to get my homework done in time for the next day.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
EC8590A774E6,"I think self-esteem comes from real achievement because if you're not doing your best work In class and you feel like its not good enough, and someone tells you what you did wasnt good enough then it will just make you want to do better. On the Other hand If you do try your best and the work you completed is good, and someone gives you a lot of compliments then it helps you build a better self-esteem. Therefore you got to be self confident also, why? because if you're self confident and you apply for a job you will manage to be confident that you will get that job, when you go to an interview. If you practice to be self confident It will help you a lot in the near future. If you got an affinity for a type of shoes and someone else tells you they're ugly how will you feel? Of course you will feel some type of way because that's just how the human body works, but you know what? It dont matter what people think. If you Got an affinity for those type of shoes then it dont matter what people got to say about your shoes. At the end of the day its what you like not what other people like. People will always judge you no matter what you wear, what you look like, and how speak. Always remember that only god can judge you. Therefore you should take the negative stuff that people got to say, and turn them into something positive. That will help you build up better self-esteem because you always got to be yourself no matter what. Dont be something that you're not just because your friend likes you that way, be yourself and if that friend is really your friend he will accept you for who you really are. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
622ECD91DA0C,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement is false because you can't judge a person based on their appearance because sometimes people are just having a bad day and when you become friends with them you find out how that person actually is.

For example, you meet a person that has a lot of tattoos and you have a bad impression of them, but then, you interact with that person and you find out that he/she is not what you thought; therefore you can't judge a person based on their appearance. I think that how a person dresses doesn't determine the type of person someone is, but if you let someone to express their feelings your opinion on them will completely change.

In addition, when you become friends with someone and you talk with them, sometimes they tell you that when you met them, they weren't having a good day. Also, what a lot of people don't understand is that everyone have problems and they don't know what other people are passing through.

Sometimes you have a bad impression of someone because of what other people say and the opinion you have on them do not change until you start talking to that person, I think that this an error that a lot of us make, we judge a person without knowing how they actually are. For example, once I had a friend that talked really bad about a girl and I believed everything he said, but when I started talking to her, she was completely different from what this one friend had told me about her.

In conclusion, people are not always what they seem to be and you can't judge them on how they look. I think everyone should first try to get along with someone and then, they can judge. That's why I think that you can change first impressions.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
C865637A034A,"Students would benefit attending school from home in many ways.... students would be able to work in a quiet environment with no distractions from other students. Another reason why it would be better would be because, some students work in their own speed and won't be worried about how fast others finish. Sometimes students are more focused on who finishes first and sometimes think it's a race. students would also have the chance of working on their own time when they can,like that students could proprobly finish their work faster. Online school could also be better for students sleep schedule, like that students could be more rested and would be able to focus on their work.

Better sleeping schedule would help kids focus more on their work and would be able to stay up, whens students dont sleep well the tend for fall asleep in class. Falling asleep in class effects on class grades because student pay less attention. Having to wake up early and get ready on time is hard work,making it on time to school is a big task. Just having online classes from home would be better for everyone in general, would honestly make students life much more easier. Online school should just be a thing for students because its less stressful and much easier.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
649C7912163C,"Have you ever thought of a place in the world you would like to visit? Some people would go to France to see the popular Eiffel Tower; while others would go to Hawaii just to relax. For me however, I would like to visit Generic_City because the people there are well mannered and kind. And also because there are amazing waterfalls and parks.

To begin with, the people there are well mannered and kind because they treat each other like brothers and sisters instead of mortal enemies. And something I would like to do once I arrive, is to greet these grateful and thankful people because they are gentle to one another. Furthermore, most of the people in Dubai make a honest living and there is rarely any crimes caused by residents.

Additionally, there are amazing waterfalls and parks because the designs and structures are well made and created. For instance, when visiting the waterfalls at night, it is very colorful which makes it beautiful to watch. Also, something I would like to do when I arrive, is to go on a boat ride because it is very peaceful and it make you feel calm as the ride goes along.

In conclusion, a place in the world I would like to visit is Generic_City because the people there are well disciplined and nice. And Also because there are outstanding waterfalls and parks. ",4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,5.0,4.0
D949A947DD92,"Asking one person is great! Maybe asking your best friend for there opinion is great and all, but have you tried asking more then one person? However even though asking your friend is great, but have you thought about what other people may be thinking or there opinions on it? Wanting to ask your friends is nice of you, however they could be lieing to you about there real opinion. Therefor asking more then on person is better then asking just one, and you get honest opinions on what you may have asked about, or what you may have wanted to know about.

People think if asking more people for there opinions on what they asked about is better then just asking one person about there opinion. For example, somebody wants to know the best why to make some great yummy cookies. Nevertheless, there may be some times were when you ask people you may get a tie between the two choices, and if you do get a tie just go ask one more person for there opinion.

Many people ask more then seven to eight people some people don't have even numbers, however if you do get a even number there can always be more on one side of the vote or opinions. I was drawing in my note book and I finished a drawing, but for some reason I did not know what colors I should use. Then I asked my two sisters my mother and my father for there opinions on what colors I should use. Most of them picked the same colors, but my mother and my two sisters all picked the same color.

Therefor, if you ask more then one or two people then you can find out which is the most best out of the two things you wanted opinions on. Even though some times asking more is great you still have to pick which one you like the most if there were to be a tie and you don't want to go ask anymore people for there opinions about the topic if not your fine. Either way the most voted would be best, but if you pick the least liked am pretty sure that other people may not like it. Like my grandma used to say, ""more votes are more points in life"". There are most likely 10% of people who don't ask for others opinions, and 89% of people who go out and ask people for there info about the topic or there opinion about it.

Go ask your friends or family if they ever asked more then one person for there opinion. See almost everybody has asked if they haven't they well soon. My mother want's to get a tattoo, however she doesn't know which one she should get, and she doesn't want to get something that people or here kids may not like.

After she put the pictures of the one's she liked she then put then on Facebook to find out which one people like the most. Also I gave here my opinion as well, and now she has enough opinions and she knows the one she is going to get. Honestly asking people for there opinions are great because you get peoples opinions on which one is the best and which one is the worst.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
EE99F74CAE44,"Philosopher, Physical, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer say that example is not the main thing in fluencing others, actually being a example can not be a good thing to influence others becuase first you need to start doing the right thing on your own before you decide to be a example or influence others and that's mean that you need to do everything perfect when that's means that it is hard to do it.

They say that example is not the main thing in fluencing others becuase being a example can be stressfull. For example, they can be stressfull on trying to do everything perfect to do not do wrong things to influence others and they have to be responsible with what they do to not do mistakes so that they can influences others and they feel that it is a very stressfull responsability of influcing others.

However, they believe that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others people and being a good example makes they feel responsible to others and they feel that they have the responsability to do the right way in their own so that they can be a good example to others.

In reality, they say that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others people because they feel that they have the responsibility with their own behavior so they can do the right way in their own first to influence others. They also say the having respect to others is a good example of our behaviors and being humildity is also a nice examples that we can teach or influenes to others. They believed that being honest with anyone is also a good example of our behaviors. For example, they believe that being responsible with their own behavior is a good example to start doing the right way and to influence others because the responsability gives to others respect. They say the being on time in any meeting makes they responsible with their own behavior and gives other a good example of responsability. They say that responsability is a example of our own behavior and can be something that they can learn with the time and needs practice. I believe that being honest with others is a good example by start setting our own example behaviors. I also believe that humildity is a good example of our behavior because the humildity and that responsability is something that I can learn from others with their own actions or their behaviors. For example, I learned how to be responsible with my things for my mom and my dad because they teaches me how to do it and that this need practice too and I also they teaches me that being a example with our own behavior makes you humildity and teaches you how to valore what you already has and accept what

I don't have.

In conclusion, they want to argue that setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people because being a good example by your own behavior teaches they how to do the things rights, so they can influence others by doing and taking the right way and also teach how to be responsible, honest, and being respect to others.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
FFD29828A873,"I believe using cellphones in class for education us only is good/bad idea for students.

I believe some students learn easer on technolegy then paper ad pencil, but i also believe cellphone could be use for bad use such as students using for games and apps, texting etc ,

I believe cellphones could drop grades. i've been through it all and seen it all, im a student myself and sometimes when our teachers allowes us to use our cellphones i take the chance to look through my texts and i would see my classmates do the same, but then we have moments where we reallly need to serach up information or our teacher would love to play an online game then its really useful .

There cant be a right or wrong answer to this but there could be an amazing arugment to this issue.

I believe using technolgy could save trees and our nature enviorment, using technolgy could stop schools and the goverment fro cutting down tress for papers and allow us to use our cellphones. we never ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
83FBBD0447F2,"Have you ever feel something different after receive support or help like a special feeling well that feeling is a act of kindness it feels great and wonder and unique. Acts of kindness big or small can have a major impact to our lives. Some explamples of acts of knidness are sharing, helping or supporting. Acts of kindness can help others who are in need of support, trying to solve problems and more.

What is act of kindness, Act of kindness is a form of kindness but in any size big or small with a effect that could change people. Showing a little bit of kinds to those who are in need of support can have a major effect. Act of kindness can change those who are need of support and can effect them for the greater good.

How does acts of kindness help others. If you do any acts of kindness it can have a major impact like Changes people lives, in a good mood or a positive way of thinking of things . It can also effect decision making and giving kindness can have positives effects on you.

Why do we need acts of kindness in our lives, Acts of kindness can have long lasting impacts to many lives it changes how people feel or think and you even feel better if you show or receive a act of kindness from someone act of kindness a chain reaction it's a never ending chain it will effect everyone in one point in their lifes

Biggest to the smallest of kindness can change many different people lifes in a good a positive way and it could help those who are in need of support with their problems Because act of kindness impacts all of us.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
4351657CEC2F,"Do I agree with churchill""s statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? In my opinion I do agree with his statement because everyone fails at something in life. There's so many people that fail in the world and I definetly agree with churchill's statement because i think it really says a lot about life in general its not easy.

One reason is because I believe that everyone goes through some type of failure in life and I feel like that's the only way you learn from anything. I also think that people that fail are people that succeed at what they failed at. That's the only way you learn from anything for example people can fail at taking a test or playing a sport. Not everything people do the first means there gonna succeed which isn't always the case. I feel like when people fail that's when they can take the time and realize why they failed they learn from that mistake and the next time a oppurtunity comes for them to try again they can try there best and succeed. Trying your hardest is the best way to deal with a lot of things that's the only way to succeed in your best way.

Another reason I agree with this statement is because life isnt easy there are a lot of challenges your gonna come upon and all you have to do is try and if you fail the first time then there's always gonna be another oppurtunity around the corner. What I think churchill is trying to get at people is never give up and he's trying to say that it's okay if you fail the first time you try something there's always gonna be another chance to prove yourself and you can succeed at that goal or test you have in school or something like that. Iv'e failed many times in my life and on the second try i succeeded so churchill has a point when he says that it's okay to fail in life because thta failure prepares you to be better than you were the last time.

That is why I agree with this statement because i believe tha everyone deserves a second chance to prove themselves and what they are campable of. Churchill's statement should really speak to people and people should take it into consideration because there's always a time in life when you are going to fail and you are going to get a second chance at it again. I do completly agree with this statement because it makes you look at life and everything differently and in a better way that is why i agree with Winston Churchill.   ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
8283155E54A0,The ancient greek story teller said no act of kindness shoudn't be wasted because They wan't everyone to be kind like they say no act of kindness should never be wasted. They wan't everyone to be kind and no wasting act of kindness. My oppinoion I wold at least do one to five act of kind ness a day to make someone happy. If you do a act of kind ness you might get some to say something good about to make you feel good. It is nice to do in genral. You can feel good if you gave some a complement of there self and make them feel good. You can make someone day because they might have had A bad day and you gave them a complment and that make them feel good. I think the auther made this becuase they can make people feel good. The ancinent greek is relly old and they were doing alot of act of kind ness. The ancient greek story teller said no act of kindness no act of kind nees shoud never be wasted no matter how small. I think Aesop is a ancient greek king That can tell people to do act of kind ness. He said in his words NO! act of kind ness should never be wasted for no small reason I think that means that evreyone should do a serten amont of acts of kind ness a day like I said that I woud do do like one to five act of kind ness a day to make someone happy. I think That is why he wants evreyone to do acts of kind ness. For people                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
2675A97C2B76,"Do you think being hounst at all times is a good thing? I agree with people who are hounst at all times because they don't lie and lieing can cause a lot of problems. No matter how old you are being hounst is a very good thing for kids, adualts and teenagers. I think you should be hounst at all times because if you'er not hounst people wont trust you, and people can come to you for advice, it also helps people with trust issues to know that there are people out there that you can trust for being hounst.

If you are not hounst people wont trust you. Most people want to be trusted. People want to be trusted in a relationship, friendship and a parentship and most importantly you would want to be trusted in your family. Being hounst whould make people trust in you in many ways. However, you can be trusted be not lieing or makeing fake roumers. For example a girl in our school whould make up roumers and lie about an eight th grader. Therefore, after doing all that no one wanted to be her friend because they could'nt trust her.

If you are hounst at all time people can come to you for advice. If your hounst your friends, sisters, classmates will come to you for advice because they would know you would have great ones. Mostimportantly they would trust you because you'er hounst and they will tell you everything and ask for advice and you will tell them what sounds good and hounst .Therefore, if you hounst you can be trusted by good advice that might actully help that person.

Being hounst also helps people with trust issues to know that there are people out there that you can trust for being hounst. Having trust issues can com from being dishounst and if you'er dishounst with someone it really makes that person think that they can't trust anyone at all. Thats because they have been broke by that other person who keeps lieing. That shows me that being hounst is an amazing thing that everyone chould have.

In summary being hounst is good for everyone .It could be hard for some people but you always have to remember you have to be hounst so, people could trust you, people could come to you for advice, it helps people with trust issues know that there are people out there that you can trust for being hounst.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
67D7FC66C2F6,"Have you ever had someone to shared wisdom and experience with you before? A friend that has been with you for years. You trust that person, shared your wisdom and experiences with that person. My best friend Generic_Name has shared her wisdom and experiences to me. She help me with art things, how she become best friend with me, and how she like to help so many people.

She was home school Kindgarden through Third grade, but when she went the Generic_School, and she was put to Third grade. Before Generic_Name met me, she didn't know anyone, she had a different teacher and class. When she in Generic_Name's class, I walk in the class, that is when she first met me ,and Generic_Name told Generic_Name that ""Generic_Name is the same grade as you and you guy can be friends"". After that Generic_Name, and I became friends very fast, as the years past, our friendship grew and now we are in the eighth grade, we still best friend.

Generic_Name likes to help so many people like I do. When somebody drops something, she would pick it up and give it to the person who drops it. She holds doors for teacher, and students even have their hands full with books, or papers. When a friend needs help, she would try to help her friend the best she can because she cares about her friends; want to help them the best can and, she don't give give so easily. She likes to help teachers by help passing out papers, running errands for them, and doing a favor for a teacher.

She is also good at help people with art things because she and I are taking art class this years, but her art class comes first and I have art class second. She likes to tell me what the art homework is ahead after the class is over, and going to her next class. When I need help of what I should include, I would ask Generic_Name, and she would give me some advise of what I include in my art drawing. I would said to Generic_Name "" That is great idea, Generic_Name, thank you so much""!

Some times to have a good idea, she will get a computer look for some good ideas, or used your imagination.

Having a friend to share their wisdom and an experiences to is meaningful because you and your best friend have gone through so many thing with you, and have been by your side withe all this time. Having your best is can help you get through challenging things, or be there for one another when they need you the most. My best Generic_Name has share her wisdom and experiences with me; how she help me with art things, how she becomes my best friend, and how she so many people. I am so happy and very thankful that Generic_Name is my best friend because without her help, I wouldn't make it this far at all.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
BF0AF86DFDE1,"I agree with the plan of having an afterschool homework club. Because some students have a hard time finishing homework by themselves and if teachers stay with the students to help them finish their homework that would be amazing because that would mean less students failing. Also some kids might not have computers or any electronic device in their houses. Although if their is no afterschool homework club that may be good because students cant get help from any teachers and that could be good because they can know that not everything in life is easy unless you are good at it or try your best and your hardest. Another good reason that I think might be good for having afterschool homework clubs is that sudnets get a chance to enteract with other students and they also get a chance to veiw or examine how the other students do their own homework.

Some kids migh take advantage of having afterschool homework club by cheating the answers off of somebody and then leaving. So I think if the afterschool homework club shouldn't let students look at each others work until they are done. And some kids may take it as fun club and talk through the whole thing. But there is always the kids that do what they are supposed to do. They do not play around,joke around, and distract anyone from doing what they are supposed to do.

So, at the end I think that there should be an afterschool homework club because there is more details to back it up then there is for backing up not having the afterschool homework program. And alot of kids could change their work habbit and not get as much as bad grades. And mostly kids who care about their grades would want to join so there is high chance that kid do what they are supposed to do. But not having an afterschool homework program would mean that kids that really need to improve their grades would have a chance to do so and would have a chance to finish then grade they're in with good grades to start of for their next year.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
B6EB1835EBE0,"This sentece is literaly true, because you never to be idle, because you can do wonderful things, just need belive a little bit more on yourself and always we need think that sometimes we commit a mistakes, and that's good because the mistakes is how we can learn about that nobody is perfect, no metter if are wrong things or good things, always you learn that the life is not easy, but is not impossible, so don't be scary, the life is a game and you decide if you want to be a winner or a loser.

So you don't think that to be mistaken is wrong, but if you make a mistake, try to don't do it again. I give you a example: If you are on a game (football,soccer,basquetball,etc), so if you are on any game and your time is lose, but you know the wron in the other team, so you know that you can attack on this wron and you can won the game, or if you lose that game but you got the revenge, well now you know where is the wrong and maybe your team won the game. So you can make a mistake, but no more that one time.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
EF36F9497E96,"I think i'm going to agree what Churchill had said. Because, if i success so easily, i won't able to understand how hard to earn something. Some people think they are smart and they'd never fail. But me, i thought a different way. I thought that if i fail,i 'll have more experience. For an example, in my country, Vietnam, people always say that failure is the key lead to your success. I have failed many times in my life, but i never give up. I remembered when i was 8, i was really love the egg that my mom made for me. So i asked her how to made that egg, and of course i had broken a lot of eggs. And i also wanted to give up, but, i'm really love the foods that made from egg. So i continued learning how to cook the egg, and now i succeed with the fried egg dish. In my conclusion, i want to say that being a failure isn't a bad thing, because it helps me know that i can do better.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
21884C3DC96A,"I like to work with a group because working with people helps you benefit from a lot of ways. One way is helping each others when working in a group. when i work with my friends we help each other with things that might be hard for us to do. I sometimes don't know how to answer a question so i ask the people i am working with to help me with it. The people you work with might not know something that i might know so that's a good thing when you work in groups. I like to help my friends or my group members with any thing because thats what group work is about.

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When working in a group we communicate a lot and talk about everything we have to do. i like to talk when i work in a group it even helps me learn more things that i did not know about. Sometimes i don't know how to say something in English so i ask my partner to help me say it or pronounce it. When i don't know something it's hard for me to talk about it or try to help when i don't understand what they are talking about. its good for me to work in group because it helps me learn more English.

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working in groups helps you and your partners to do less work. When i work in a group we split the work fairly if someone does not like the part he/she have to do we will give them a different one. For me i like to do the most easy one but i do not get that all the time sometimes i have to do a hard part and sometimes i have to do a easy part. I do struggle with things sometimes because i do not speak good English but i ask my partners to help me with what ever i do not understand.

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One way to get to know people better is working with them and talk to them. When i work with people it shows me who the person is and what they like to do. For me i like to know people better and make them comfortable around me even if they are shy. Some people don't like working in groups because they like to work by them self which is not a bad thing. Talking to people is one of my favorite things to do especially if i know the person more.

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It would be great for me to work in a group because it benefits me with a lot of things in a lot of ways. one thing is to get help from others and help others. The second thing is communication when u talk to people it helps me learn new things and they might be learning new things too, and i do not do as much work as if i was working by myself. its really good for me to work in groups because of all these things. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
26E2AD762E9B,"Duke Ellington said that, "" A problem is a chance for you to do your best"". I do agree on what Duke Ellington said. My reasons for this quote are because of You can show what you can do, You can learn what you need to know, and You can help other people show what they can do.

First, In any problem l can beat it there is nothing in my way to stop me from getting to goal. For example l had to pass a test in order to pass the class. l took my time l read the question over and over again. When l felt that my eye's whore going to fall out l kept going. I told that test who was the boss. I showed it what l knew. In addition l was on the football team l had to know the play's. In order to start in the next game l had to show everyone and the couches l knew the plays. Later in the day it was time for me to face my problem. After 23 catches l showed my team mates and couch l knew the plays. In other words try your best at everything.

Secondly, l dont know everything in the world. For example I had a good friend named Generic_Name had a girlfriend named Generic_Name they both had a great and good times together. One day Generic_Name wanted to go ice skating. One thing she didn't know Generic_Name hatted skating. When Generic_Name was little he loved skating, but one day he fell trying to do a 360 spin and he broke his leg ever sense that moment in Generic_Name life has not been the same. Generic_Name said the pain felt like 100 gun shot to the leg. The doctor told Generic_Name to take 3 pills a day to make him fell better. The doctor also said 20% of people break there leg a year you will be fine. Year passed by to the present Generic_Name was talking to Generic_Name it's time to go ice skating Generic_Name didn't want Generic_Name knowing what happened. Generic_Name told him self let's go. As soon as he got on the ice he fell Generic_Name started to laugh the she said you got some learning to do. Generic_Name said l guess your right.

Lastly, l could and will always help someone beat their problem and try there best. For example l needed help on this paper for science l didn't know a single thing. My Brother Generic_Name knew a lot about science me and Generic_Name didn't really help each other a lot , but for some reason he helped me finish the paper. l asked him why did he help me he said you looked like you needed help. l wanted to see you do good in life and face your problems and beat them, But sometimes you need some help from other people. In addition Generic_Name wanted me to get a good grade on that paper he told me that your never alone. In other words there is nothing wrong with getting help on anything.

In other words, A problem is a chance for you to do your best wise words from Duke Ellington. I agree 1,000% on what he said everything you do should be at your 100%. You can show what you know, You can learn what you need to know to get better, and You can help others show what they can do to face their problems and beat them. The last thing l will tell you is stop taking the easy way and take the hard way to see if you can do it.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
6D21E6095A62,"Many schools are starting to offer online schooling for students. Students or teachers may believe this can be a very beneficial program. However, I believe that online classes can be difficult or tough on a student. Students some times need an actual teacher showing or explaining to them face to face content, others take extra-curricular activities, and many students may even forget they have an online class.

First, not every student can learn by just one explanation, many students need a teacher showing them or explaining how to do something. Take for example my cousin, She's taking online classes but has a difficult time learning the material because she doesn't understand the explanation they are giving her. Her struggles with the material is there because she doesn't have an actual teacher explaining why such ans such are like that. Not many students have the capacity to learn off of the words of a website. Many students need that extra help, whether its a different way of learning or just a better explanation.

Secondly, A large amount of students take extra-curricular activities. Many are in an art club, Spanish club, and maybe even drama. The struggles for taking an online class for those would be a large amount. For example, The time I took an online class for art, it was terrible, either I didn't know how to transfer my painting to the computer or I just didn't know how to draw the picture. Extra-curricular activities would be difficult to learn without the extra help of a teacher.

Lastly, Students can even forget they have an online class. Many have jobs, others just like to sleep, they'll forget they have a class online and forget to turn in the work. For example my cousin, she sleeps a lot, By the time she wakes up she realizes that her assignment was already due. Online classes don't send out reminders of the assignment so any student can easily forget and fall behind the rest of the class.

In conclusion, online schooling isn't very beneficial. I believe that it can be tougher and more difficult on students. Many need a teacher to show them face to face content, some take extra-curricular activities, and majority of the students forget they even have an online class. For those few reasons is why online schooling shouldn't be an option to students. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
005661280443,"Imagine if you could prove other people that you are a good problem solver. Imagine that a problem is a good chance to do your best because youre a good problem solver, and you can learn something from that problem. I think that problems are a good chance to show people that youre good at something, and that they can seek your help if they need to. I agree that a problem is a good chance to do your best because you can learn from that problem, and prove yourself that you can do it.

You can learn from your problems, and that it enhances your skills. Learning from your problems can help enhance your techniques for problem solving. Learning from your problems can help you on other problems you might have on future occasions. Getting good at problem solving can lead you to helping other is they need the help from or they dont really know what to do. When you are good at problem solving and you seek to get better problem solving becomes easy for you because you have been doing it for a long time.

Proving yourself and others that you can be a good problem solver is an accomplishment. Being better at problem solving really comes in handy when youre trying to solve a problem or trying to figure something out. Proving yourself and other that you can be a good problem solver is an accomplishment. Whenever you help other people with a hard questions you feel accomplish because it was a hard question and you understood it while helping someone. Problem solving makes you smarter and you have to less work since you know what do and how to work out a hard problem.

I agree that a problem is a good chance to do your best and learn from problems that you struggled on the past to use the steps that you took to solve that problem and apply it to other problems that might come in the future. Learning from your problems can make you have better techniques, apply the steps that you took to solve problems, help other if they need it, and it makes work easy. Proving yourself that you can be a a good problem solver makes you be a good proving solver, prove that you can do any problem with out any help, and you can feel accomplished about it. Proving solving can make help you learn from problems and apply that to other problems and you can prove yourself and other that you are a good problem solver. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
7B2B2910BB90,"Imagine you are going to buy some new shoes but you don't know if you should get them. So then you ask for some advice from family and friends. But you still don't know what to do. So then you ask for more advice. Then at last you all ready know what to do. So you can more. I think u should ask for more help and advice. so you can pick the better choices.

You can get more info on the topic you are doing. Like for one person can tell you one thing and a other person can tell you something else. Thats how you can get some more info. It helps more by asking more people because while you have your info they have there info as will. So then you can have more knoallige about whatever you doing. Last of all it's better to ask more people because like I said you can get more knoallige on the topic and will help you one making the better choices as will. It's all ways good to get more info on your topic because you don't ever want to do something with out any knoallige.

People can help you answer stuff faster. you can probably can get the answer faster by telling more then one person. like for example you are doing some hard work at school and you want the right answer you are not just going to ask one person you are probably going to ask more then one person. All really because everybody thinks different. And last of all ask more then one person can probably get you the right answer. you should other people for help.

you can help you pick the right choices. You can ask some friends or family for some help then it can help you go the right way. But if you do ask a lot of people you can probably can get confused. And maybe get mad and not finish your work. Then you will have no clue how to being aging. But all so all the opinion you got can help you a long way. Because you have gotten so much fact and options you can finish faster.

All Am saying is ask for some help and you can get the right answers and you can probably make some friends too.  ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
00ED2563D0B1,"Philosopher, physician, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer once said "" Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing"". I strongly agree, imagine you being the reason why a person decided to make a remarkable change in there life just by following your footsteps, imagine how that would make you feel. Setting a good example everyday is one of the most important things you can do in life; you dont know who is watching you, and you dont know who is getting an impact from your good ways. People watch others every move and learn new and better things as time goes so they can also turn out to influence others. Consider yourself as a leader being able to influence people is a leadership movement, everyone needs someone to help them and guide them through things they may not tell you, but they'll watch your examples and learn.

Many may think that there are better ways unlike setting an example by your behavior is the best way to influence others; but little do they know that setting an example by your behavior is the best way to influence others. Setting good examples is helpful in so many ways however; there are other ways to influence others. People get influenced on anything these days, just sitting around and watching TV can influence you to do something. But think about it would you rather have someone set examples for you, and have someone you can watch to motivate you and guide you; or would you rather sit around and procrastinate on time?. As the influencer having people look up to you and following the way you move is a big deal. For example when surgical interns first go to a hospital to work they look up to their head surgeons. The head surgeons set examples for the interns because they want them to be successful, the intern watching the head surgeon during operations and check ups influences and motivates them to do better and be better. Even for school students thats how they all learn from examples the teachers show them, it influences the students to try so they can also be good at what their teaching is teaching them.

Some people may prefer to get influenced in another way because they may not want someone by them step by step they may be more independent and like to be on there own. Having good behavior benefits you in a lot of ways, you will get a lot of opportunities, help and inspire a lot of people and gain a lot. For example parents have a good influence on there kids. They are the reason why there kids wake up and try every day, seeing your parents have a good and positive behavior will motivate and influence you to do better. As you go on with good behavior people will see you and begin to know that there is something your doing to be happy. You will have people come around you because of your vibe and good energy. Once they start talking to you you automatically begin to influence them to be a better person. Knowing that you are a motivator and an influence onto others is a good feeling. You will know that your good work and good behavior has a good effect strong enough to influence others in the best way possible.

Overall setting a good example by your behavior is the best way to influence others, they learn better, feel comfortable and get to experience a lot. Having someone look up to you as a good influence will help you both because it will make you both feel great and you both will benefit from it in the long run. We have people around us for a reason, if you have someone that is willing to help you and influence you to be better in life take the chance because it will be a great experience and you will change as a person once you get influenced in the right way by the right people in life.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
4B907938595D,"Technology can be healthy in my life? I believe that this prompt will have negative effects in my life. Sometimes we need talk to somebody, we need help, we need to be sociable with people that is around me.

Everyone can be sociable without technology. Technology can help us with things that could be hard for us but sometimes, we need to be sociable ass well. The technology cannot be my friend because at the beginning we can feel satisfaction with technology. After, we'll see that technology is not everything and i start to asking my self what i do? where is everyone? and i never spent to much time with my family, friends, mom, dad. In fact, i can changes my mind and do the right things.

Sometimes, spent time with my family can help me because we can talk without phones, for example: When we are going to eat, nobody can have their phones in the table because my parents said that technology will be disrespectful and also, technology can take out my time with my family for example: Sometimes i need to do my test at home or homework but, i stay in the computer and i never go to eat with my family that's for i said that we can enjoy, and spend a lot of time with our parents.

The communication is very important in our life. If we have homework, work ships. We can share our ideas and help us each other for example: When i came here at the united states i don't even know English and i was scared in my first day at school because i thought that nobody could speak Spanish for help me but, there was many people to help me and give me information about what the teacher said. Now i understand and i can defect my self with English that's for i said the communication is very important in our life.

In conclusion the technology can be a negative idea in our life because we just want to play in the computer or phones. Sometimes, the technology can help us in so many things for example: test, and work ships but, when we have time with our family, we has to enjoy, and pay attention to then. Family is very important also, the communication is another factor that we has to take care.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
64AE19BBA321,"A problem is a chance for you to do your best. I agree with this statement because of many reasons, first reason why I agree is it never will solve the problem if you don't try to at least do it, second reason is that you feel more competitive to face the problem, the last reason is that your friends and family can help you a lot with the problem.

If there is a problem going on with your life you should always try to solve that, and do your best to solve it. If you don't do anything about the problem it is going to effect your life even more. So you might as will do all you can to do something good that can solve the problem. For example someone comes and bullies you everyday, and if you dont do anything about that then its gonna get worse and worse everyday.

When you see a problem getting in your way of accomplishing your goals, you should always stand up for your self and face the problem, and beat the problem so it can never bother you again. Their are many you have to face during your life for example, if there is a someone that always bothers you or bullies you, you should do something about it.

If you had a problem face you there probably someone that helped you a little to solve it. Its always really important to tell a friend or a family whats going on in your life because it always makes you feel better. The reason why it makes you feel better is because when your saying all the problems to your family or friend they kinda have ideas how you can solve it. For example if a bully starts to beat you up then the only people that can help you is family and friends.

A problem is a chance for you to do your best. This statement is a really good statement because it really motivates people to face there problems, and get them out of there way. I agreed to this statement because of all the reasons I was talking about in the other paragraphs.",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
C71E82A97BD3,"Is it true that people can often credit their successes to having a good attitude? well yes it is, I have seen people like my uncle become successful in life because of their attitude. I have also seen people go from being successful to being unsuccessful. Some benefits of having a good attitude are that more people will like you another reason is that people will want to hang out with you and the last reason is that people will respect you.

Having a good attitude will get people to like you. It will get people to like you because you won't be mad all the time. It will also get people to like you because they will tank your a wonderful and positive person. Thats why I thank having a good attitude will get people to like you.

Having a good attitude can make people want to hang out with you. A reason why is because you won't be boring and will have positive things to talk about. Another reason why is because maybe you can make people happy or make their day by just saying one word. Thats why I thank that having a good attitude will make people want to hang out with you.

Last but not list having a good attitude will make people respect you. It will make people respect you because you will treat people with respect and theres a saying that says treat people how you would like to be treat. So if you want to be respected you have to respect others. That why i thank having a good attitude will make people respect you.

Those were all my expels of how having a good attitude will help you. It will help by making people like you, make people want to hang out with you, and make people respect you.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
FA9386DCB8DD,"Imagine going to a country full of beautiful places to go to. A lot of new technology to look at or to observe. That is why the one place I want to visit is Generic_City because it has a lot of beautiful places to visit and they have a lot of new technology.

Generic_City has great places to visit. The first place I want to see is the sky buildings. The sky buildings touch the the clouds (that is the reason why people call them sky buildings). The second place is the wooden bridges. These wooden bridges can across forests. The final place is the gardens. The gardens have all of the plants on Earth. These are the greats place that Generic_City have.

Another reason why I want to visit Generic_City is that they have one of the best technologies. One of the best technology they have is robots. In my opinion, robots are difficult to make because it has a lot of bits and pieces to put together. Another best technology they have are air bots. Airbots deliver the food or items to your house. The final new technology is trains. The trains do not touch the ground. The hover over the ground. These are the new technologies the have.

To close, the best place I want to visit is Generic_City because it has a lot of beautiful places to visit and they have a lot of new technology. The first reason why I want to go to Generic_City is because it has beautiful places. The second reason why I want to go is because it has a lot of new technology.",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
B3AB4E6C5678,"Dear principal

I think that we should have policy number one. All student should be ably to use there phones in their free time & in lunch. Its better to have them off in class time. Because if we don't then the student wouldn't learn. They should be turn off or it should be low. Some student would really like this idea about using phones in there free time. There some student who don't like to go to lunch or like to eat and by using there phone they have something to do. The teacher get mad when there standing up by having there phone i don't think they will be. Most kids use there phone in school when the teacher don't look so its better to have the rule about only in free time. By having this rule i think it will make kids be better because if there not then they will not be ably to use there phones. That what most kids like and want to be ably to use there phone in school. Not all kids have phones so to make it far for everyone the rule should be phones and ipods only in there free time .Think this would work good as a rule but we need to try it first. In high school you can use it so why not middle school. Kids should start see how it work with the phones in high school. So they can have in idea about it. But not everyone is going to think how i do but i think we should try it for a week or two to see if it works. But think that policy number one is a good one and a good idea.

We never now if we don't try. We should try if it work we keep it if it doesn't then we just say it didn't. But we can say at least we tried. For some student it will work good but for some it wont. Some will have hard time with it but other wont. Most student do there homework when there testing and do good in there class. Maybe is not a bad idea doing this new rule about the cell phones. we should all look at this there some good things about having this rule and yes there some bad ones too. But i think this would work as a good rule for the school.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E9E68651B168,"I disagree on extending school hours. I disagree because if the school board adds more morehours to school, students won't pay much attention to the teacher or staff. Another reason is that students will start disrespecting teachers because they have too many hours and they will start to get more tired or start to go a sleep. I also think that teachers might get anoyed by students replying on why the school board added extra hours of school. I think that instead of adding the extra hours to school, the school board should just make the extra hours optional after school. This should take place after school so kids can come and learn more about life and school.

First of all, I disagree because if the school board adds more hours to school students wouldn't be able to concentrate or pay attention in class. I believe that if students don't pay attention in class or to the teacher, the teacher will get very upset and students will start to get in trouble or would start losing points. I believe that the students don't pay attention in class or to the teacher, they would begin to be disrespectful to teachers and won't be respectful to others. I believe that students should tell their parents to do something about the school board wanting to increase the amount of hours in school. Kids should work very hard and keep up the good work and not be disrespectful to others or to the teacher.

Second of all, I don't agree because I think that students will start to disrupt or question their teacher about why the school board wants to change or increase the amount of hours students have in school. They are going to start asking a lot of question and their teacher isn't going to like that. I think that students should ask the school board why they are going to increase the amount of hours in school. Students should talk to their parents on why the school board is extending the amount of hours. Students should just be able to do the normal hours of school instead of doing extra.

Third of all, I believe that the school board shouldn't increase the amount of hours the should just make it an after school activity. I think that the school board should just make it an after school activity instead of increasing the amount of school for students. The school board shouldn't extened the school hours for students because students can just study hard for something or teachers should go over the subject the are learning about so they can learn and understand. If they just stay after school theyh will get so board and they wouldn't want to be there.

I decline on the idea that the school board wants to increase more hours for students. I decline beacuse students will get very bored and wouldn't want to do anything. The school board should think it over again and not extend or increase the amount of hours for school. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
21FB103CCBBF,"Today, I will be talking about if weather or not students should be commiting to a career at a young age. Do you think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Therefore some students still would'nt commit to a career. Although some say, It is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Actually, It is a good idea for students to commit to career at a young age.

But some people think, It is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. A reason they have for that is that, The students that dont commit to a career early wont have to start paying bills. But I persnally Think It is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Because, If students commit to a career at a young age they will learn to be independent then students that dont start a career at a young age. This is what people said about not commiting to a career at a young age.

Therefore, What i think is the oppsite of what they think. I think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Because, If they commit to a career, They will start to make money earlier thn students that dont commit to a career. But, Another reson why people think it is not a good idea for students not to start a career at a young age is, Because the students will start paying less attention in school and in class. This is why i think students should start a career at a young age.

What some other people said about, it is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Is because students would be tired in school. Students would be stressing over school and work at the same time. But, What some other people said about, It is a good idea for students to commit to career at a young age. Students would have money of there own to buy the stuff they need. They would start leaving independently at a very young. These are some of the reasons people gave for both sides.

Although some say, It is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Actually, It is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. Students would be able to start living independenly. It is a good idea for students ro commit to a career at a young age. This is why i think students should be commit to a career at a young age.              ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
91377BE7D4ED,"Imagine if you could do school from home and have time to relax or do more stuff. I would love to be studying from my house because I would never have any distractions, and I can just stay comfortable the whole time. People say online school is better than online school, but online school is more comfortable and nicer for students because they don't have to get dressed and ready just for school, they can take their time with the school work, and they have more time to do more stuff like get a job or play a sport.

A lot of students get stressed in the morning because they don't know what to wear for school. What if they didn't have to worry about that anymore? I don't like to get up just to dress and get ready for school. Online school, the type of school that students don't have to worry about what you wear or how people think of you because no one will ever see you. We all get lazy at some point in life, and we just want somethinh that will make us feel comfortable while studying.

All students get rushed because they have too much work to do, and sometimes, they don't do it on time because it's too stressful for them to finish it all. Online school gives you a long time to finish all your work and maybe a little extra time to relax. My friends and I are always stressed because of how much school work we have to do, but if we could do online school, it would all be so easy and less stressful. Online school is the best way to get time for all your work.

Everyone that goes to a school knows how hard it is to keep up with the work and what they do outside of school. Maybe it's a sport or a job or it could be both. It would be great if we all had that extra time to do all that without stressing. I rarely have time for school and work , but my friend, Generic_Name, does online school, and she has all time she needs to finish her school work, go to her job, and play lacrosse.

Some might say that going to a normal school is the best way to study; however, online school is a better and safer for students because they are able to take their time with the school work. they don't need to get up and stress themselves about what they should wear or how they look, and they have more time for other stuffthat aren't related to school like sports or jobs. How nice would it be if we didn't have to worry about any of these problems? Online school will have you relaxed most of the time.             ",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
6A0DE6BCFA73,"The limitations of human contact due use technology had negative effects in peoples's lives. Imagine how many accidents happen in they week because the use of the technology using programs a lot. Generic_Name was driving and playing his favoitrs games online,and he did not look to the red light. Limitatios with humans can cause many problems in your life. We need to have limit technology use. Technology gave negative effects in time with family, driving while you are testing, and energy electricity.

First of all, families have limitation of time to talk about their problems because they dedicate more time to technony. For example, Generic_Name was a girls in public high school. She was talking with an old man; the man was looking everyday, and she do not figure out because the man told her that he was in another country. Next, she did not talk with the families and she was one more of many young victim of kindnap. Another example, peoples in families use technology inapropiately causing get all on troubles and having less communication between them as human.

Secondly, some people prefer to talk in text message while they are driving. This is cause of many accidents peoples use devices in their car. Sometimes person does not even look who is begin stting next to them. The are some problems as someone told me. Generic_Name was driving with his mother who was in another country: She came to see him, but he did not left the phone alone and look at his back the computer after a two miles, they crash crossing a railroad. Also, we knows the risk of doing it. People think tha using technoly and have less communication with their family anywhere is safe, but they are wrong because one distraction for our limitation with others human can be deadly.

Thirdly, energy is anothers problem because people spend more money. Even know, this increase a lo of accidents because custome's companies just buy lof of thing as computer, cellphone, and toys. The problem is many peoples spend more time plugin in setting beside its divice charger to get some energy in their computer or cellphone. One more example in about this problems Generic_Name was addicted to the computer in his room. He was charging it. He was friendless because of this reason, and Generic_Name did not talk with his family as normally; however, he just say good bye everyday.

In conclusion, Everyone has to stop using technology for unimportant reaso or things. This will be more safe for you and your family. In ddition, limitation of human contact have more consecuences while you are with your family, driving, and spend more enery. It's your time to chane this word. ACT NOW!!! you can chane verything talk to your mother, father, and your whole family and peoples. I change. I am waiting for you because we do not want our future generation get adiction. The government and the whole word need to be safe: lookin around our beautiful natural resources.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
FC33EC420C9E,"Education change our life and teach you to think in a different way. Some people rush trying to graduate from school or reach their gools ahead of time which it is not good. Because they end up taking the wrong decision and I do understand that as student you just think to finish school and graduate to became profesional. The idea of finish high school in tree years instead four,

it will force students to chose the wrong career because they will not have enough time to get ready for college and they are still immature at that age.

First of all, students who are trying to finish their high school in tree years instead four they don't have enough time to prepare for college. They will not have build their knowledge to be succefull in callege. High School is means to prepare and help students to get ready for college, but spending less time in the school they would not have enough time to learn or cover all the subject in clase. In addition, they will not develop their skills and be succefull in college or their future. Some people might think the is a good a idea to finish high school in tree years because they can enter in college early and start to work but they might not be ready for college.

Forthermore, students at that ege still immature that they don't really know what they want to do with their life or if they want to go college. In addition, some kids might be even think drop off school and don't comtinue in college because school require time, persevere, dedication and concentration which a lot of the students don't have when they are immature.

Many tennegers of theis kids do not apy much atention in schoo because they are district in others things like hang out with their frends and playing sport that they do not even think much in school. For this reason, they need to spent four years in school instead tree so they can learn to be responsible. Some parents and studenst migh think that it not necesary spent four years at schoo when they can finish in tree but if they are immature and inresponsible they are not going to be succefull in their future.

Finally, students who want to finish their school in tree years instead four, they don't know what career to chose or if they want to continue in college. Forthermore, they are still immanute to decide what to do with their education that they end up chosing a wrong career. For theis reasons are necesary to finish school with four years instead tree, so they know what to do after school and they can be succefull in their future.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
161779A176BD,"Many people argue about how there shouldn't be a long summer break because students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. But I do not agree to this argument , because I know that having a long break makes students accomplish more things in life. For example There is many students that have not seen one of their family members in a long time and most of them don't have that time to even say hi to them and why? well because sometimes the schools do not provide a longer breaks and they are so busy trying to focus on school work and get everything done on time that they forget even on their own name.

In reality not everyone is going to have things planned for summer break. There's still students that prefer making their vacation useful. They make they time valuable by taking classes online. And the reason to this is that they might want to graduate early so that they get out of school and maybe have more time to think about their future and what they want to study in college. For me this is a great opportunity to manage time and use it correctly. But even though not all students prefer doing it they still succeed in school and they will accomplish too. Educators say that students are more likely to forget information that they have learned in school after they come back from their good time. And the answer to this is yes thats true but that doesnt mean that all the information goes to waste, because that's why there is technology to help us remember things that we might have forgotten and also their is still teachers that can answer our questions if we have some. And not only the teachers can help, there is so many things were we could get information from like going to the library, asking a friend, asking a teacher , dictionary , and the internet.

Another example is that after coming from summer break some students also feel relief because they didn't worried about having to turn in school work or an assignment being late, the main thing that a lot of students hate is, waking up so early and being stressed . But with a vacation they could save some energy they could sleep more and they can relax and enjoy their break. For me personally I don't really like waking up in the morning because of how tired I am with so many assignments that I am not able to rest as much. Sometimes I even fall asleep and wish to get a break from school because I feel so weak and I feel like my brain is going to explode if I do not get a break and thats only going to happened if you never get a break but if you do then you are ready to go and learn.

Last but not least students are able to work during summer they could get a part time or a full time job. This would be so helpful for many students that have fees to pay to the school , or just in general. They could get a chance to pay for things that they might need in school and classes or they could work just to get some extra money. After summer break is over they can keep the job for only part time or they could go and focus again in school .

To conclude I agree that having a 3-4 week break in the summer , a winter break and a week off spring and fall is the best idea. Because we are like cars if you put gas on them they will take you anywhere you'd like but if you don't they will not move until you put gas in it. Same as us if we do not get breaks we will be tired everyday but if you do give us time to relax outside of school we will be more successful and we could accomplish more things. And this is why I believe having a longer break sounds a good idea. ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
B2C32E74812E,"Generic_Name.

11/20/2019

Generic_School.

Generic_City, Virginia.

I really think that if we want to be success in life, we have to be positive on everything, a lot of famous people said that for example, Michael Jordan said: the key to the success is to be positive.

We have to be positive on everything that we do if we have a negative attitude everything is going to be negative, maybe we are going to fail but that is another key to the success, that means we are doing everything well, but if we fail, we have to keep trying and never give up, until we get what we want, Michael Jordan said: I fail a lot of times but, that is the reason why I am who I am.

There is going to be bad moments in the journey but that does not mean that we are done, we have to be positive and think positive, because for everything there is a solution.

But another key to the success is to be humble, when we get what we wanted we have to remeber from where we come, be positive is important, but be humble is the most important thing.

But the most important thing follow your dreams and never stop fighthing for them, until you get what you want.

I am agree with this statment: It has been said that a positive atittude is the key to the success in life.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E65D5A2616D2,"Imagine an old proverb said honestly was the best policy. What would you if some one used honesty in a bad was would you disagree or agree? I would agree because some acts of honesty can really mean a lot to someone. An old proverb says honesty is the best policy because it is the key of telling the truth and it can also create new friend ships in life.

I would agree that honesty is the best policy, but if you miss treat honesty it can be very lethal to your trust with people. To lose someone's honesty is very hard I have seen car crash which someone got severely hurt and the person who crash into him won the court battle because he was not showing honesty. My father has told me honesty is a great part in peoples life. My father has told me stories were his friends have seen people get robed and their honesty has helped find who did it and convict the criminal. Even just a little bit of honesty can help anyone. But when you use honesty you should never use it in a way that might hurt someone's feelings. I once was playing a game and the opposing team was not being very honest which hurt some of the kids feeling's on my team. But a persons honesty can always change at all times. I once had a friend who was never honest but changed through out his life and started to realize why honest is so important. I even have made new friend ships in life just from being honest. As we can see you might be able to get something from being honest.

If you are always honest people respect you. I have been in instances ware honesty has created respect for me. When you show some form of honesty it creates a good environment around you which can make good relationship you. But when people use honesty to hurt your feelings by not being honest it makes you feel like you just have been hit by a train or it feels like you have been betrayed. Once I was walking down my street and saw that there was lots of police cars out side one my neighbors houses. I heard that she got robed a couple months ago and found a witness that saw who the thief was because the witness was honest with the police it helped find who did the crime. As I can see honesty is the best policy.

In conclusion, no matter the incident that happened you always should be honest. Even in the future your actions can be justified from your honesty. Honesty is the best policy because it impacts you to do the right thing and creates a good environment. When being honest it shows that you have a high self steam which is can be very good for you in the long run.                                ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
21EFAE02832D,"I believe students should design summer projects instead of teachers, what do you think? i believe so and here is why. Most students think more alike other students because most of them have the same knowledge than others but. That doesn't mean that the whole school will have students that could think like teachers. By all means this proves that there is a lower chance those students with high developed knowledge will be the ones doing the summer projects for others to complete. The students that do create some of the summer projects will make sure not to make them to hard or to easy that way the students doing them can surly keep learning during break without stressing about it. The students that make the summer project will also make them easier for there fellow classmates. Some of the students that are doing the summer project could be stressing about it but that also means they won't make it to difficult because they would want to get over with it already and focus on something else to get there minds distracting. So that we they cannot be thinking so much about school. As well as the students doing them won't stress as much about them because they'll know it's not to difficult and can do it any time during the summer, such being the last week or the last day so they can have all summer to them selves. Not having to think about school. When students aren't thinking about school that doesn't mean they're not learning it, just means they're trying to get there head off of something that highly stresses them about a lot of work or having to deal with for a long time and that's the only time they can get a break from it and not stress about school. The reason being of students doing them than instead of teachers they also won't have to do a lot of writing or work for starters. Students will be sure to not make them as long because they know what it feels like to get assigned a long and stressful assignment especially over the summer break that is the only time you actually get a break from school. Students also doing the assignments will help out teachers to also get a break and focus on other important related stuff they have as well. The students creating the summer projects can also be more open minded after doing them and grow they're knowledge as well as learning better and thinking of ideas more often for school. Teachers can review the students work and see how fine they do. The students who do well creating can continue to do so if they feel goo about themselves doing it for the other students that weren't so bright at it can give out ideas and help out the students doing them. I believe other schools and principals will be impressed by having a school with students creating they're summer projects and that is wonderful. I believe that having students create the summer projects is an outstanding idea for the community and school they will think of them differently and have a better picture of themselves. This argument has been good because it will open the eyes of many students and have them be brave enough to put themselves up for the challenge. If you believe students should create these summer projects instead of teachers write your own prompts to see what you guys have in mind. I think my argument is well stated and many teachers will surly think about letting it happen. Don't you believe so as well? Yes indeed you do.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
4BE3F5DCD6C9,"It has been said that the first impression are almost impossible to change. I agree that the first impression is almost impossible to change about this topic because it's logical and very important about the first impression to life, and a have my own experience to share about this topic to share.

when i was7 years old my first impression comes in my mind is to have my own car but its was impossible because i was seven years old and I was a kid but I decide to come in united state but, also its was impossible for me because my parents was poor of money three years later I get the same impression that day its was the most important to my life and the impression it can be easy or hard to achieve but i did it and I come to the united state.

The fist impression is very important but is not easy to change all people was one impression and sometime they think thats impossible but if they work hard they will get it because is important for them.

The first impression that all people have is the most important to life because they can have a different stuff on mind my impression was to come in the united state and i did it because I its was my dream and my impression to have more opportunity to have more impression in mind.

there is not only one impression that i have theres so many things that i want to do maybe make a lot of money or buy my own house but the first impression is not impossible.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
307D618AF467,"they'are looking to hire someone who is responsible and hard working and often a person who has experience. I think they should hire me because I am responsible and hard working even though I may not have any experience in the type of work.

First of all. I'll work hard to get the job and I'll do my best to understand the work that you all do. It may took some time, but it will be worth it. I am not a lazy worker, I am a fast leaner. I have done some other type of job, and I've done good because I don't just ask them to hire me, I ask them to hire me because I really want the job and work with them. However, sometimes people just don't like to hire people that doesn't have any experience with the job and they don't hire them or just ask them to leave, or they just tell them that they are not worth it to waste their time. Nowadays , people work where they can get accepted because other jobs would not accepted them and they do the to get at least the money to pay their rent and some other stuff. They don't think about what they are going to do if they keep working for hours and getting paid less, but if people would like to work for less hours and getting paid more, they would try to find a job where they can do their job for less hours and for more money. What I am trying to say is that I would like to be hire to this job, because I would work harder to be manager. I am qualify to this job even though I don't have any experience. Trying to work hard for a job is something that life teach you and could be worth it for me, and for my future. I could have a better life if I work harder, I would be prepare for any type of thing to do in this job. I may be ready for any type of things to do in this job.

Although, in may took some time to be able to work well, doing other type of job is kind of hard because people are used to work in different type of job and it is kind of hard because we cannot get used to work in this type of job in just one day and it is hard, but people could try, even me I would try to get used to this job and i will work hard enough to be manager. Even though, people may think that it is easy to do a job and get used to it fast, but it not true it is hard to get used to it to other job when you were doing other job. Some people are so cold heart and would not care about your feeling and would just try to make you quit the job and it is not right. If that happens to me I would not let it slide, because I would like to do my job in peace and with no interruption. It right for people to seek a better job position, even though if you are starting to do it, but it is normal for people to seek a better position: just like me a seek for better position in the job. However people would not let you in peace, they would try to make you quit, but if you don't let them be like that to you they would get tired of doing that to you and they would see how much you are getting better and with a better position. I would love to see people that hate me to see me grow in the job that I would do if they hire me, I am not going to be a lazy guy in the job I would work harder to get to manager and later on I would do more and so much more to be an owner of my own business. Who wouldn't want to be an owner of their own business, everyone does want to be and want to have it, just like me everyone have had a dream of owning a business but after all that start you have to work harder to get it. that what I would do in this job. Eventually, I would understand the stuff of the job and I would do them and be much better then the others.

Finally, doing a job that you have no experience, but you are a good candidate, that means your are capable of doing so much more and be a better worker or even be your own boss. You only have to work hard enough to get it and to achieved your goal, it doesn't matter if it take one or three years, you have to keep going until you achieved your goal and try to work hard to achieved that goal. I would do all that to achieved my goal, it doesn't matter if it take me two or three years; I would do my best to do it. I would take the risk and do it better than anyone else in this job, or other type of job, Learning different things can make you know more and more qualify to do other type of work. knowing more stuff about other type of jobs, it make you more qualify to do more and to be able to work in more stuff or even to owne your own business. Work hard and try to take a risk.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
696B864AED8C,"Most of the people thinks that having a positive attitude is the key to success. It has been said that a good attitude is the best way to reach the goals. I totally agree that is important to have a positive attitude to success in life.

Having a good attitude can helps people to get a job. For example, if there is two guys on a job interview and one of them show a positive attitude while are asking him questions but, the other person is answer all the question with a bad attitude, the person with a positive attitude will get the job because, a good attitude show who you really are.

Showing a positive attitude can really show where you came from and how your parents educate you. Other wise, if a person show a bad attitude and he is insulting all the people and his way that demonstrate that his parents didn't gave him a nice education. Because, the attitude came from how your family had teach you to respect the people.

A nicely attitude can even help in the education. In other way attitude is the most important key in education because, nobody will teach someone with a bad education. It is important to demostrate a positive attitude when a teacher is explaining something because, that way you desmostrete the techer how much effort you are putting in the education and that you really want to success in your life.

Other people thing that is not important to have a good attidute to succes in life. Because, sometime you can be in a bad moon and attitude is something that you can't control. So, attidute is something is simething that can you hold.

In conclucion, having a positive attitude can help you reach your goals because a good attitude demostrete personality, education, and how careful you are with other people. Having a positive attitude can tell how your parents grothw you up and how you really care to learn a high education.    ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
F70288B24094,"No i do not think that we should add one hour and a half to school. I think it is bad anough that we have to stay for about 7 hours i have a lot of reasons why i think they should not add an hour to school. One of the reasons i would not want them to add an hour to school is because if they add an hour to school they would have to add class to the chool to. but one of the main resons that i would not want another hour at school is becuase kids just want to go home and adding an hour would just get kids and parents mad for there kids getting home late.

For example if it was day light savings time it would be very dark once every one to go home. Or if a teacher staff memeber or student plays a sport they would be late or unbkle to go for the late releas at the school. In addition if there where to be a lockdown at that hour and a half that the school bored had added the parents of the students might want to sue the school bored for putting there children in danger at the time they added to the day. Another example is if ther is a fire they could get sued for the same thing that is why i feel like the school bored should not add an hour and a half to the school day.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0
9C1B60E737FB,"Inactivity always serve a purpose

Thomas Jefferson wrote; of how ""wonderful much may be done if we are always on it nonstop.""

Will I believe, that inactivity always serve a purpose because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them and your body won't shut down while your doing it. Although, some people may say we accomplish more if we are on it all the time.

Inactivity always serve a purpose because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them. To begin with, that's why now in days we have Saturdays and Sundays off. For example, our bodies wouldn't be able to function without any stopping point. Next, we're not even going to be able to sleep with all that pressure building up on us. Lastly, even animals take rest after along day of hard work to continue on moving.

Inactivity always serve a purpose, because your body won't shut down while your doing it. For starters, we can be working, but we might be falling asleep at the same time anything can happen. However, we might even get hurt doing work hours depending on what your job is. To finish off with, we can lose our lives while driving or cost others.

some may say we accomplish more if we are on it all the time, because we can get more work done and we can finish faster. First, we can learn something faster if we are on it all day nonstop without rest. Second, if we are on just on that we make better results of ourselves doing what we are doing. For example, if we are building an apartment or house you name it. We might just finish faster without a stopping point. It'll just take less time to get there, Just as a journey that takes you wherever you go without stopping. lastly, is great when you don't stop moving forward and accomplish your goals your'll make it.

Inactivity always serve a purpose, because in order to finish what your doing, you have to take breaks between them and your body won't shut down while your doing it. Still, some people may say we accomplish more if we are always doing something. In the end, I believe Is all up to you to determine weather or not to be Idle.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
CEFC32741811,"People who have self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. I think that getting guidance from experts could help make decisions better because most people look and ask for guidance on a lot of things most of them are on decisions to make whether it's a good or bad decision to make.

I have asked people for guidance on decisions i remember i asked my old teacher if i should move to the U.S or stay in my country Generic_City. He told me that it would be better to move to the U.S because i would have more chances of being successful over there than staying in Generic_City and that i would have a better life too and that was one of the hardest decisions i have ever made in my life because i was leaving friends and family behind and i didn't want that to happen.

I have been asked for help before, my friend one day she called me and asked me to help her on her relationship i could tell that she needed help and guidance i could her it in her voice they got into this argument and she told me that it wasn't the first time they have argued before and she told me that it got to this one point that it made her cry so i told her that she needs to break up with him and that he wasn't good for her and if she keeps dating him the argument's could get worse what if he starts getting violent with her and stuff. I told her that it's going to be hard but it's for the best.

People ask for help when they need it or when they want it , However some people may not agree with me because they value their self-reliance and trust their instincts, they think that they should keep their personal problems to themselves but eventually those people are going to start having this feeling like they should talk about it to somebody and ask for their guidance because the same thing happened to me i didn't like telling people what was going on with my life later on i started feeling like i needed to talk to somebody about my decisions and i started to ask my family and friends for guidance. It's not bad to talk to ask people for guidance it can help you make decisions easier.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
6F3C318ED62E,"Of course that i'm agree with Churchill's statement, because for to have success or to be successful in the life you need to have many failures. No one is perfect and you don't need to be it for be successful. This quote reminds me when my grandfather used to tell me "" Son, if you wanna be someone important on the life your gonna have ups and downs, don't matter how many failures your gonna have, but however, in spite of everything your gonna achieve your goals and dreams without matter what other people says about you, the most important is not loss the enthusiasm"".

I think that if you do your best on everything and you try to do it better always your gonna achieve your goals. You don't need to do it perfect all the time, because despite everything you always gonna have a failure but that doesn't mean that your gonna stop try to do your best or your gonna loss all your enthusiasm, it's mean that despite of each failure your gonna follow your goal. No matter how many times you need to do it, just try it!!!.

The failure plays a important role for be successful, everybody has ups and downs, for example:

In the school, if you have a test and you were studying for that test but you fail, don't stop just try it again and try do it better the next time.

For a job, if you are searching a new job and you completed many applications for any job but no one is requesting you for a interview, or unfortunately, you not were accepted on that job, don't matter, you will find another job, just don't loss the enthusiasm.

In a relationship, if you like a girl or boy and you declare your love at her/him but you not were accepted for her/him or what's more worse she/he doesn't like you, don't be sad you will find the right one for you.

In a career, if you wanna have a important job like lawyer but you have a failure in the progress, don't loss your enthusiasm you can try with another profession like nurse or another that you like it.

In the life, i say in the life because i have a stepfather that he always says that he is right all the time when it's not true but he never want to accept that he are wrong and that't a problem, because if you never listen at the other people that are right then your gonna have a failure in the future, for the same reason that you thought that you were right when you doesn't.

Be successful in the life is not something easy at the contrary it's hard because in the progress you always gonna have many failures, but however, nothing is impossible in the life with enthusiasm and to much effort you gonna achieve many big things, always fight for your dreams and goals. Remember nobody is perfect on this life and you are strong and intelligent don't matter how many troubles or failures you have just try to do your best and fight for everything that you want.

In conclusion to have failures is not bad at the contrary is very good for you because you learn more about how to do it better the next time. My mom always say: "" Each failure it's make you more strong and more intelligent "", and the truth that's true, you never gonna learn about your error if you don't have a lesson for to learn but everything without loss of enthusiasm.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.5
CFA55621F274,"One of John Lubbock famous quotes is, "" Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it"". Some people think that setting yourself goals is something that can't help you in life and you have to follow what others do to be able to find success. They feel that people don't have enough potential to do things and by doing that they have to do what others do and not showing who they really are . I believe that choosing your own character is a way on finding who you really are because you can be able to show things that you never thought you were able of doing, you can set goals and try to put your best on accomplish them, and by setting your own character you can be able to help other people to follow the right path to success.

My first reason why is good of showing your own character is that you can show things that you never thought you were able to do. you can be scared of certain things in life or wont be brave enough to try them but you have to be able to get out of your conference zone and try to step for yourself. this can help you in so many things later in life because you can create or be able to experience new things that can be come very interesting in your life.

setting your own character can provide you on setting yourself goals too by believing in yourself and working hard everyday for what you want. it can help you in so many ways because you can see your own potential and see who you really. not being lazy it all and you would be able to have more energy in your system and try to work for something that can help you in the future and being proud of doing.

Last reason why setting your own character is a good thing because you can help a lot of people too by showing them the right path of success. you can be able of leading them to work hard everyday and help them in motivating by not giving up easy on what they want to accomplish. try to provide them certain thing what they can or cant do making them things a little hard but believing in their self and working harder then usual.

As you read, setting your own character is something that can bring you always to success, it motivates you and you can believe more in yourself on what you can do and getting out of your own conference zone. Help other people whose doing things that they are not supposed to and leading them in the right path, and you can accomplish so many things by hard work.",4.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
7A66900A3812,"How you can have a good relation ship with your dog?

You need to have a good relationship with your dog because, when you get a new dog and your dog need to take him/her out and you do not know that you soppust to do that the dog will do not like you at all, like here's I am gonna give you some exampls for what you should do for your dog to not hate you, the dog need to feed him/her a food every day, cold water in the summer to not be hot, a normal water in the winter need him/her to go out to walk or poop out side,the dog need to have you be with them all the time, he/she need to feel that you like them, give them food, water, play with them every day, take them outside when you hang out with you family, friends, etc..... .

The dog only thinking about you and the food and how he/she can save you from anything dangerous like, when someone come and stell something from your house and you sleeping, the dog will pits him/her in them legs, and the dog try to wake you up with his/her ""wror"" the the dog make, sometimes the dog need to have a comfy space so he/she come and set behind your legs and sleep, but when your dog wake up he/she get bored so they trying to wake you up by liking your face or your toes, a lot of people love dogs so they buy it for a lot of money because some dogs are no really avalable in some places so it's hard to find theis dogs, and they still cost a lot of money, dogs can alive like 11 years to 15-20 maybe if your dog not that long with you you not gonna be sad at him/her if they but if they at least 2-3 yeas with you you really gonna miss them and if you died your dog will cry on you because I tried that before when my grandma died my dog was not even eating or drinking water or palying she was just seting and crying, and I was having two dogs they was brother and sister, so they was playing together everyday but one day the her brother was died i was really sad and crying and she was not even eating or drinking like when my grandma die, she was really sad for a long time and then I give it to my uncle house he was have a dog and a cat, she started to play with them and having fun so she happy right now bwcause she forget her brother and found a dog and a cat to play with them.

The dogs like to live in a big house and a big backyard to play in, and they need to live in an organize place. You need to a vet to check your dog every month at least, maybe they have alergece for something or they need to take a shock for something in them body. The vet for your dog gonna tell you what you suppost to feed him/her and what you not soppust to give him/her. And what time you should go to the doctor to see or check at your dog. Dogs like to live with a family not one person because they like to set with them and if they have a childern they really like to play with a baby or children because the childern have a lot of power to run, play, to anything and the dogs have a lot of power, enrgy to run, to play, and etc.... . The dog need to take a shower at least 2-3 times at week, when the dog get out from the bathroom and she/he wet you should put planket on them to not get cold and sick, and you need to brush them hair and dry it with a hot air to not get cold, the important thing that you need to clean his/her eyes everyday in the morning because they will have something in them eyes because they sleeping like humans when they wake up they wash them face because it's not cleand and brush them teath. The dogs do not like to get wet a lot so do not get him/her out when it's raining outside. but you an put him/her in your car and go shoping with them. Sometimes people leave them dogs in the car because they not alawed to go in resturant so they leave them in the car, dogs feels that they lonly and they waiting for you to come back really bad.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
DCDED7261D03,"""Your character will be what yourself choose to make it"" everyone should be free of deciding their own character this is important because it can help with being more confident about yourself while making difficult choices, making clear what your goals for the future are, and makes easier to show who you really are to other individuals . In the other way some people believe that our character is formed by the difficulties and influences beyond our control.

First, feeling confident about yourself is one of the best ways to succeed in life, it makes easier when deciding difficult choices, sometimes when people go through difficult moments in their lives, being confident with their self can help them choosing the best decision by just looking at the positive way of their decisions. For example, every time people visit a new locations they should feel confident with their selves while creating new friendships or business.

Secondly, setting your goals is not as easy as it sounds, because you have to know what you really want, when people know what their goals are they have to work really hard and encourage their selves to achieve it. If people chose their own character its easier to set their goals because they really know who they are. For example, one of my goals is to graduate from high school. So,I need to put a lot of effort and hard working to achieve it.

In the other way, some people claim that our character if formed by the influences beyond our control, some of those difficulties might be what your parents want or economic resources. Also, when people let others create their life choices or character they don't enjoy their life as how they want to enjoy it. Foe example, if your you let your parents decide what to do with your future, you might don't like that decision and that would not be really who you are.

In addition, making your own character influence in how you show others who you truly are, this is important because, it feels better doing something that you chose and want than doing something that other individuals what you to do or difficult situations.

In conclusion, I am agree with ""John's"" quote because everyone should be able do decide what that really want to become, feeling confident with their selves, having clear all their goals and work hard to achieve them all, your character shouldn't be former by influences beyond their control. You should be able to show everyone who you really are.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
0FFB44B5D0C2,"Do you think that people make there own character traits?

the british naturalist and politian john lubbock wrote. I believe that we choose our character traits.

People need to choose what character traits they want. For example, at the street you going to see many influiences can get to you. People will going to try to change your personality but you going to see what is right for you. People can't not change your personality because is your own thought. Some people knows their own personality if they want to be a good characher or bad.

Some people can give bad advice or some people want to trap you. For example at my school their is a lot people that they have bad personality or vice. People need to understand or think before what character they want because everyone is different their thought or feelings. Some people need to choose what character is right for themself.

while some people believe that we choose our characher traits, some people believe that our character formed by influeces beyond our control because they think that influences change their though or actions. Although this might be valide, there are several important ideas to be considered like People need to choose what character traits they want. For example, at the street you going to see many influiences can get to you. some people cant not change your thought because is your own decision what is good for you. People can give their own opinion but is your decesion what characher you want. people need to learn the right way the character.

People need to choose what character traits they want. Some people can give bad advice or some people want to trap you. My final though is to not let the influence people change your thought because you influences people just can bringe you some problems on school or on the street.      ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
80C97E7C2558,"High school students should graduate in three years instead of traditional four years. Most student who follows this plan should work hard and take more courses in the summer or in the evening. Therefore, students will have a good choice to work one year early or to enter the college early. Students will finish high school early, work force one year early, achieve their goals early. These reasons are why high school students should graduate in three years instead of traditional four years.

Firstly, students have a good idea to finish high school early. For example, some students take a courses during the summers and some of them take courses during the evenings. When students take the courses during summer and in the evening, students will finish school early. In addition, some students may not be able to take elective courses. When student not taking elective courses, they will finish high school one year early. when students finish high school early, they will have time to achieve their dreams.

Secondly, students will have time to work force one year early. For example, some students work hard for saving some money to pay the college. When students enter the college, they need money to pay the college for the courses which they will taking it. Therefore, some students like to finish high school early for to have time to work one year early. When students work hard and saving money for college, they will study without any worried about the money that should pay to college.

Most importantly, students will have time achieve their goals early. For example, some students want to achieve their goals earl, for to have a good career. When students achieve their goals, they will have a good life in the future, and they will have a jobs or career to support their life. In addition, students who achieve their goals early, they will opportunity to achieve another goals. When students achieve another goals, they will make a future more better.

Some people argue that high school students should not graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. They say students will not be able to take elective courses. This may be true; however, when students will not be able to take elective courses, they will achieve their dreams early. In addition, when students graduate early they will have time to working and saving money for college. In fact, students will have a good choice to work one year early or to enter the college early.

In conclusion, students have a good idea to finish high school early, have time to work force one year early, and students will have time to achieve their goals early. These reasons are why students should graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. Some students take a courses during the summers and some of them take courses during the evenings, for graduate early. Some students work hard for saving some money to pay the college. Some students want to achieve their goals earl, for to have a good career.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
7680EF5AD3CB,"I believe students should not be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. Therefore, it should be an elective. Not every student is excellent in the same things. However, taking a required class a student may not desire or need in the future can cause a student to fail. I believe students should not be required to take any of those classes because it's pointless, unfair, and not important.

To begin with, it should be an elective because not every student will need any of those classes to become a succesful person. Other students may want something dissimilar for their future that has nothing to do with singing, art or drama. It's also not helping a student to become smarter or to learn more. It's no where near educational related. It wouldn't be entertaining for students who do not want to take the class.

The second reason I certainly believe it is unfair to make it a requirement because it can cause them to fail and hold them back from graduating. It also shouldnt be a class that should hold you back from moving forward on to college. Students would feel as if it were a pathetic reason for them to repeat a grade over a class that is useless.

In conclusion, I believe that it should not be required classes to take. it's not important for students to take any of those classes. It's not a class that will help or provide a student to get a job. Majority jobs don't require for you to have any of those classes.                      ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
D3C9A3C2BB08,"Does technology have a negative effect on people lives? People believe that technology these days is a big part of society and that its effecting people lives in a negative way. They say it makes people feel lazy and depend on it so much and without they feel like they can't get nothing done. Although, technology has a negative effects on people lives, I believe that its positive effects is greater for few reasons.

First reason, it allows people to do much more in less time. We can complete many tasks without having contact with others. For example, people can check out books, shop, and learn without having to go no where or speaking to another person. Not only that it saves us time it also saves lives.

Another reason, it helps us and others on emergency situations. For example, we are able to make emergency calls at any given time for help without having to go no where. Also, we can call to report someone or something that will harm us and others. Not only we can call for emergency we can also call people we care about that we cant reach.

Final reason, We are able to talk to people we care about and love that we can't reach. For example, If your parents or someone you care about are in a different state or country, and you want to check in on them you can just call them without having to go or travel to them. This what makes technology a positive effect on our lives because it makes everything easy.

In conclusion, technology has a positive effect on people lives because we can save time, save lives, and contact people we care about. This why technology has a positive effect on our lives. But at the end of the day it all depends on you and how you want to use it you can make it positive or negative to your life.       ",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
FA3D872358BF,Although some people don't like using technology it's a good thing because thanks to technology we can now talk with family members who live far away and also you can meet lots of new friends on the internet. But i get some people are afraid to talk to new people because they don't know about the person their meeting with but once they meet the person they talk about what the person life is like. But technology is taking over the world because for example stores are getting shut down because you can now buy anything on the internet there's no point of having stores everyone now uses amazon or eBay to stuff that you would find in Walmart. And a lot of stores are already out of business like Kmart because stuff you would find at Kmart are on amazon or eBay. Cars can be bought online you don't need to go to the dealer ship you now just get your computer and look for the you want and they can deliver the car right to your house .Also we have Tesla which are cars that are electric and you charge them instead of putting gas in them and also they this feature called Autopilot which means the cars drives by it's self and all you have to do is pull that switch on and then just have your hands on the steering wheel for safety reasons but they are trying to make it where you only have pull the switch and just look out the window also they are very fast it can beat a Lamborghini and when you brake you are charging the battery .But also people are losing their jobs because of this but they can also work using technology instead of working at a store they work at a Amazon factory plus they pay very well .So what do I think of technology I think it's awesome because it gives you new opportunity's that we use to not have when technology did not exist. And it's changing not only the world but also the universe because we have technology everywhere like in the moon we sent a Tesla Roadster and we also have satellites in the sky that tell us what happening in the sky.,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
1649A2246587,"Benefits of being home school.

Have you ever felt like you could not handle school?, well let me tell you that you have options, in here you are going to know the benefits of being home school. When I was younger school was a challenge for me; There was always conflicts at school and the environment was really a distraction, not good for me. Attending to school from hone have a lot of benefits. Students are going to be more focus in their studies and they are going to understand the meaning of responsibility.

One of the reason why home school it's good for students is going to be that students are going to be more concentrate and focus on their studies. Students manage to work better if they are alone, since they do not have any distraction around them like: drama, bad influences, mean teachers, stress and so much more. This is really good for those students who want to get their stuff done and learn more efficiency. So attending to school from home is one good option for those who want to focus on their studies.

Responsibility is one of the most important skill that us like humans have to have. Being responsible is a hard skill to follow but it is the most important one since we use it on the daily bases. If students attend to be on home school they have to learn that is not easy and they have to be really responsible because they are not going to have a physical teacher in front telling them what to do. Therefore you have to get it by their on hands and learn the meaning of being a mature and a responsible person. Students are going to be more responsible because if thy have any project, homework or test they are going to manage the way to study and do their stuff by them self and using the tools of their online program.

I understand that some people may disagree and prefer students to go to a normal school since they are going to have more social life. Having social life it's really important but who said that being in home school means that they are not going to have any social life, it's the opposite because if students are all caught up with their things they are going to have so much time to hang out with friends and family.

In conclusion the benefits of being home school are really good since students are going to focus on their own things and studies also they are going to learn how important it's to be responsible. now days we use technology for everything because it let us have a lot of more options if people is struggling with school. so more schools should include some online programs for students who want to continue their studies from home. This is going to bring a big change in our community and more professional, responsible people. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
10ECA491D66C,"I disagree that someone can change you. First of all nobody can change the person you are from the beggining. Second of all no body can tell you how to be or what to do either even if your married or single. Third of all you have to be who you are you don't need to pleasure no body in this world but yourself. You have to be proud for who you are and what you are doing in order to be doing good in your ways of life.

To begin with I disagree that someone could change. One because that's for you to decide if you wanna be the way you want to be. You can't change for anybody to accomplish whatever you want. If you want to change you'll have to change on you know nobody can that for you.

For example when I was a freshmen in high school I used to like skipping my classes all the time. I never went to my classes I liked being around my friends most of the time. My grades drops from 100 to 50 real fast. I didn't realize friends can make you go the down road. I felt like I did not care in the moment but then I realized all those friends were not real friends at the end.

Nobody is going to help you get you stuff together, your grades, your education. I believe you have to always be your self in order to progress and success in your own life.

Secondly people say that when you get married your suppose to be someone else that your suppose to cook at all times, do laundry for you partner and yourself, I believe that is not correct. I believe that you can still be who you are even if your with someone or not. You don't nessecarly have to be someone your not in order to make others happy. Your friends, your boyfriend or girlfriend are not going to give you a High school diploma, an apartment, a car, and food. You have to get that on your own you have to be happy the way you are. If you are a lazy person, crazy person, dramatic person, you can be how ever you want to be. You do not have to change to make the rest happy.

For example I do not like being around friends anymore, I do not like drama at all that is just me I learned from my experience that no body is going to be there for you on your rough times and it is not worth changing for no body ever.

Lastly I believe you have to be who you are and be yourself in order to success and follow your goals. Being your self is one of the best things there could be. You do not need to care if someone judges you. You do not need to be worried about anything but trying to accomplish your goals, your dreams and a better life style. You have to have a good character in order to achieve everything you want and especially being positive to yourself. Never let others try to change who you are or what you want to be always go by what you want and do not question your self. You have to be happy by the way you are and not think about how the rest want to see you.

For example when I used to skip class in freshmen year in high school my friends wanted me to be like them they wanted me to skip at all times and just hang out in them mall or park. I realized one day I want to get somewhere in life I want to graduate on time, I want to have a good job, I want something different for my self. I realized I was doing my self wrong so I stop completly and started of my sophomore year fresh and different. I began to see the difference. My friends thought I changed and I did because I did not want to stay back with them I wanted to move on forward with my self and goals I had. This was my experience and ever since I realized being your self is a big worth anyone has.

This is my opinion on why I disagree that you do not need to change for anybody. You always have to remain being the way you are and never let no one change the character you are just to make them feel happy. Even if you are with friends, boyfriend or girlfriend you do not have to change the way you are for them. Always be proud of the person you are too. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
C3D8E8E8B942,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Should these summer projects be teacher-desdigned or students-designed?

These summer projects should be student-designed for varies reasons such as, engagment, vaction, and lastly, confidence.

Students during the summer have many things to worry about like having a job, looking after siblings or even their mental health and the last thing on their mind is a techer-designed project. The projects given throughout the summer should be student-designed becuase it allows the student to be engaged. The student will be more engaged because it is a topic that they want to learn about and being engaged shows that the student is willing to learn and is very intrested in his or her own topic. Typically, when a teacher assigns a project to a student, the student isn't very pleased and with that being said, it could affect the amount of effort and the desire that the students puts into actually learning.

Secondly, these projects also need to be student-designed because of summer experiences. During the summer, alot of students grow. Vaction plays a big role in the students growth and development, as the students travel they pick up more and more knowledge, which expands their knowldege and could possibly change thier perception of things, making it easier for them to have better ideas and to do well on their summer projects.

Lastly, student-designed projects over break leads to confidence. Because the student has had the freedom of choosing what he or she wants to learn about, it just makes it easier for the students to showcase their work with pride. Pride meaning, showing that the student has learned and is more than comfortable to enlighten others. To have confidence about what you have put alot of time into and worked on is an important skill to develop because the student will surely use it some other time in their lifetime.

In conclusion, these summer projects should be student-designed because it will surely keep the student engaged in his or her own learning and add a little more excitement to the students vacation because the project is something they are eager to learn and work on. Lastly student-designed projects will help build the students confidence because they know what they are talking about.                                                    ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5
17230E94E6CF,"Do you think that the failure is a reason to don't reach the hit. my opinion about the ""success"" is that no everyone find the easy way to catch up the hit. I am agree with the minister Winston Churchill because failure is not a option to loss our enthusiasm and don't realize our goals. Also,the enthusiasm is a good reason to stay what do you doing in your life. Then, we learn of the failure and that cause to make a important decision in our life.

Failure is not a option to loss our enthusiasm and don't realize our goals. First, the life is not easy and always will be a fall on the way to the hit. Second, there is people that they don't like to see you and the top and they try to cause us a fall to don't realize our goals but also it's a people that help you to catch up our goals . In conclusion, there is no reason to you give up to realize your goals and go up to the hit.

The enthusiasm is a good reason to still in what do you want pursuit of success. initially, the enthusiasm is a motivation in our life to reach the hit that you want in your life. also, the enthusiasm help you to never give up when you fall down. Then, failure is a bad experience but if we try to be positive person and find another way to be a successful person. In conclusion, the enthusiasms a tool that will help to grow up and find the way to be a successful person in our life.

we learn of the failure and that help to grow up to the hit. For example, to failure give to you a experience and we learn about this experience. Initially, what do we learn about our fall that will help us to find out what do we want in our life. Also, we need to decide what do we doing, if we give up and loos our enthusiasm or stand up and continues until we reach the hit. Then, failure is not always a bad thing pass in your life sometime we need failures in life to find out our ways to where we want to be.

In summary, success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because the enthusiasm is a good reason to stay in what do you doing and never give up when the failure come. Another reason is we learn of the failure and that help to decide in what we want to do in our life. Also, most of the people want to be in the hit and no is only won no to be in the hit also need some failure for learn about the experience that the fall give us. For this reason I'm agree with Churchill""s statement and is our decision to loss the enthusiasm or stay with the same enthusiasm that we has before of the failure. Finally, a successful person is not a person that never have a failure and his life the successful person is one person that have many fairule and his life but he never loss his enthusiasm on what he want to be.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
3D3C80EF2AAA,"""It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to Chang"" i agree with this quot, for three reasons.

First, when you meet someone and you see how they act you get those feelings about them if it was hate or love. Second, you may never meet that person agean, so the way he act this one time is gong to make you judge them. Third, or even if you see them every day the way they act toured you give you thats feelings that never will Chang toured them or your impressions. Finally,that why you cant Chang your first impressions.

Those feelings that you get turd that person, if it was love or hate is because of the way they act.

For example this one time i met someone and it was my first time meeting him so i did not know what to expect from him. After talking to him i did not like the way he talk or his personality so my impressions for him was not good and i never Chang the idea that i took of him. I never met that person aegean in my life. Thats why when you take that look at someone you never chang your mind.

changing how people think is hared ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
FB2840C4B789,"i belive working as a group is more beneficial , because if you have the right crew you get to get so much done invest in stuff and finish it and you get to earn more money as a group team.

working alone now im not to sure , when you work alone it can be quite challenging because you have alot stuff to do and you not sure if you might finish it unless if its a small task. If it was a big task then it might take you the whole day or two days.

i have experience as working in a group we had to finish 6 palletes unless makeing it 2 left , we finished the pallets so quickly that we thought where gonna leave early but we got some together finished.

now working alone man.. that was challenging i tried finishing at least one but i couldnt because there was so much stuff in one pallet and i got to say i was new in that department , then thats when they sent me help.

working as a group is much more helpful then working alone theres alot of different benifits as working alone and as a group but in picking which is more better i will say working as a group unless if its a samll task and you know you can get it done.",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
3B93AE972238,"In this school year I may be doing Homework club because I want it to get all of my homework done at school and to turn it in on time. Homework club is a go thing that I chose because their are teachers their to help you to get your homework done. Another go thing in homework club is that if you have trouble with your homework the teachers could help you with it. kids will love if the school time never changed so they could get home on time and even the bus driver and the teachers to.

Well I think that the kids won't like it because lot's of kids will be coming home late in night will the bus driver and the teachers if they live far from school. The after school stuff will be late into the night for the kids who will be staying and some of the teachers to and the bus driver to if the schools add one and a half hour to school each day. Kids will hate it if the school adds another one and half hour to school each day so some kids hope that they do not started school at 8:00 o'clock in the morning and they finished school at 5:18.

Some kids will kind of love the idea that the school is adding one and half hour because some kids love school that they just don't want to go home and do their homework because you have to take your baby brother. Some kids will love to stay after school and the stuff they do and lot's of kids will problem stay at homework club to get all their homework done for all their classes so they do not get a bad grade if they did not do their homework. Some kids will like to come home at 6:50 or 7:00 o'clock because they could just eat their food and they did all of their homework and they could just watch T.V.

Some kids will love the idea to add one and a half hour to school each day and some of the kids will hate the idea. Lot's kids will love the idea to stay after school for a long time and they could come home late and some kids will hate to have to come home late if you have after school everyday. Some kids will agree with this some won't agree with this.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
23FC0A3DF4C9,"In my opinion, I do believe that it should be an elective classes for students to take art, drama, and music classes because it has nothing to do with our education. It won't help us in the future because all you need to learn is how to get a good job, pay for bill and electricity, food, gas, and water. It has nothing to do with our and it should be optional for students to take any art classes whenever they like the class and the second reason is that students might not like the classes because they will be not be interested and will be bored because art is really not their thing. Students like to listen to music, party, go on social media, sports, video games, talking to friends, and being cool. But they don't want to sit in class with a bunch of nerds that paint, make clay and draw. Students should not be required to take a class they don't like. It should be optional just like band class. Some students might fail the class because they either don't like being there and just skip the class or they're not that good at making clay or drawing. For drama it should be optional too since all you do is make an act and speech and it has nothing to do in students futures. Music class is what students will find most interesting but it has nothing to do with students futures either. These classes are something that are easy, Something that you are good at, and something that interests you. So in my opinion it should be elective classes and not classes that should be required to graduate.",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
45A86623B659,"Do you agree or disagree about the importance of attitude? I agree with the importance of attitude, because with your atitude you can motivate yourself to do the best in your life, and you can motivate other people to do the best in their life. Some people think that in this life your positive attitude is the key to do good in everything, because if you go to any place, job, or to the school with positive attitude your life its going to be excellent.

In this life the success is the key, because if people have negative attitude in everywhere, they just don't want to nothig. For example, if they go to the school/collage with negative attitude, maybe they don't want to learn new things about the class, because they are going to be mad, and they don't want to do work with negative attitude, but if the people go with positive attitude they can learn averything they want, or learn more than they know about the class, because be positive means that you want be success in your life, also means that people want to do the best in everything.

Second, people can do better in this life with positive attitude, because they want be graduated from collage wih positive attitude, and with them positive attituted they maybe motive to other people to do the same thing, with their positive attitude they learn more, they are going to do work, homework, and classwork, because in this life the key is the attituded, that means everything you do, do with positive attitute,if you do that you are going to learn new things easy.

Some people argue that in this life you don't need positive attitude, because they only think if you pay attention, do homework, and finish classwork in the school/ collage so you can be success in this life, they only think about to be responsible with their works, not about to have positive attitude. People also argue that in the works you don't need positive attitude, because the only thing you need is experience, work, and be resposible.

In conclusion, if you do everything with positive attitude we can learn things more easy, and you are going to be success in this life, because you motivate yourself to do the best, also you can motivate people to do the same thing, to be success in this life, with positive attituded you can do everything, because you want to learn new things in this life.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
A5E9417DBC88,"Have you ever thought about how many people are ""success by going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm?."" This are are the words that British Minister Winston Churchill once said, and I am totally agree with him, to failure without loss of enthusiasm will creeate a person with experience and knowledge.

Once

I fail one time people think that I am a losser, but I see it in different way because I learned what

I did wrong in the first place, and I can fix the problem to make it perfect the second time. Moreover, every single mistake that I make give the opportunity to be success in life, so

I will never give up for any reason.

This remind a few years ago when I was in nine grade when my class took a test and I could not do it, so my teacher involve him self to make it try again as mush as I want it, so I decided to try the second time and still fail, for the first time in my life

I was going to give up, until my mom told me if you never fail and keep trying you are different than others. Hardly, but I decided to try again and this time the third time I new every single question and at the end I was the kid with the best score in class. if you ever thought about giving up with your first mistake you're wrong or because you fail one time you will never be successful, keep trying until you overcome every silgle obstacle.

Many people that are simbly of knowledge and success now were failure once. The important role that failure play in persouit of success. Failure show what kind of people I am and from where I coming, what makes me special and different from others.

On the other hand, people might say once you fail you will keep failing for the rest of your life or that I will never be successful person, but all what people say

I can use it to improve my self.

To resume, what the Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said "" success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.""? Its absultely true, if one day you want tio be succesful person you have to learn that there will be mistakes and fails no once,twices or maybe more times, but do not lossing enthusiasm will keep you in right way. Failure give knowledge and a better change to improve yoursel. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
DA92389BB8F0,"PROMPT

Prompt is somthing that can we done everything but some times somthiny bad can happen, we have to thik fisrt, before to do something.

First in my opinion, for me is bad, because no all time yo can be lat, also if you have excuse or a reason why you are lat, but we have to be prompt, for instanse some times people are lazy, and is not good, por example if you going lat in your job probale lose your work , or if you get up 7:30am in the morning and your bus raisin

7:35am again you lost the bus, according how you are, especially we can be lazy.

Especially always we need to be prompt because is necessary, in different place where you go. you need to be the first person, but no't the all peron are prompt, some people have a excuse,

but we can accomplish if you want, and if you can, also some people have a lot of things to do, but we can meke a calendar, and be more responsible, we can take the time for different things to do, also looking you watch or clock.

Then we can give a good example, prove a good prompt, also one thing in the life, and more important is the promt, but for mi some times is impossible, when I lose the bus school, one thing how to change this, for this get up more early, and take the time, aslo we have 24 hours is so a lot of, we can do the all things, depend how you want to live, if you can't to live runing all time, is because you are lazy or other reason.

For intsanse the prompt, all time you have in your life, when you have a appoiment, when you need to go in your job, also when you need to go in the school, when you need to go in the church, when you need to go in the court, you can lose that things. in other words alwasy you need to be prompt, is very important. we need to do the all things. ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
185E2F7317F2,"A problem is something that can make a difference in your life and can also teach you. I was in walmart one day, than I saw a man with small legs and Generic_Name started make fun of how the man walked, talked, and the man heard him he asked Generic_Name if he wanted to do a biking raise with him, Generic_Name said yes, they did the raise and the man with small legs own. After that Generic_Name never made fun of anyone he saw. A problem is a chance for you to do your best because it can change your life and it can teach you.

First of all, a problem can change your life. Oneday

I was at walmert and Generic_Name was telling his story of the past. He said, I used to steal, tell lies, I didn't listen to anyone and I also didn't work. One day, we went on a family vacation, on our way back we got hit by a truck and

I was the only one who surived in that accident. After that, I wanted to take my life, for I didn't see the reason of living anymore. Six months passed, and nothing was working in my life. Then oneday I went to the beach planing to take my own life he said, when I started walking toward the water I saw a man sitting in the sand. He asked me, who are , my name is Generic_Name

I said, and I started telling the man my story. Then the man said, your life matters the reason why you survived the accident that night is because it wasn't your time yet, your life matters because you are still breathing said the man, that is a gift because there are people out there wishing they don't have machines helping them to breath. These words changed my life, he said, I didn't forget about my family but I fixed my life for the good. This evidence shows that Generic_Name used to steal, tell lies, didn't work and didn't listen to anyone, his family got into a care accident and he was the only one that surived, he wanted to take his own life but all that changed when he met a man at the beach who opened his eyes. clearly, a problem is something that can take your life to the next level.

In addition, a problem can teach you. There was this man named Generic_Name, he was a faithful man he helped people in need with what he had, Generic_Name had eleven children, five boys and six girls. All his children were trained to help people in need. One day, something happened, a messanger came to Generic_Name and told him that his house was set one fire, and his children were in there. Everything that Generic_Name owned was destroyed, Generic_Name, who was Generic_Name's wife, was not pleased with what happened. Generic_Name's friends told him to repent maybe he did something bad to his God, but he said he didn't sin against anyone, his wife told him to curse God and he will die , but Generic_Name didn't. Oneday Generic_Name got really mad that he shouted at God and when he did that he remembered years ago, Generic_Name promised to give a family some food and kept saying I will give you some food I promised, but Generic_Name will always forget. The whole family died because of Generic_Name. When he remembered this Generic_Name asked forgiveness to God, and he forgave Generic_Name. Everything he had was restored. This evidence shows that Generic_Name lost everything he had, but at last he remmbered his mistake and asked for forgiveness. Clearly, we can learn from our problems. Inconclusion, a problem can be a chance for you to do your best because it can change your life and it can teacher to you. If you ever found yourself in a sitaution like Generic_Name's remember your life matters and don't forget the promises you give to people because it can destroy your life.       ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
69FF884BCEA1,"i don't agree whit considering changing school policy so that student may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average because getting a B in all classes is going to be hard everybody love to play sports o other activities.a gree whit you if you put that the student cut play sports or other activities if they have lice a C.because is going to be more easy for them to get a C+ than a B because you tiring see in which class they need to have a B for the y cut play sports or other activities.

so that mean that they need to have in all the clases B for they cut play sports or other activities.i don't agree whit you because is going to be hard for them to get a B for that they cut play sport or other activities and many of the student have C on there clases,they are going to pase whit C they are doing a good jod in class.in me opinion,i see that i let the student that have C,B AND A to play sports and other activities byt the students that have D and F they cut not play in sports or other activities because there are feling the year and if why leat them play so they are not going to do good in class for that they cut pass the year.that is why i don't agree whit your idea because if they have C is fin they are pasing the year but the students that have D and F they are not pasing.dos are the students that you need to see that if they don't have C or B they cut not play or participate in sports or other activities.your adia is good but like those student that have c they are doing all that they can to pass that years and is not fear to them that they are doing all that they can to get a C and that you see that they need to have a B for that they cut play sports or other activities.finally,i don't agree because is not going to be fear for them that they get C on there class and you set that they cut not play sports or other activities because they don't have B.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
B88EA53BC496,"Of course you accomplish more if you are always doing something.

Sitting down on your behind trying to accomplish your goal or your dream will never come. Get up go grind for it , go plan for it,

set steps you will take to accomplish that goal of yours. Now if your sitting down doing nothing how will you ever accomplish anything if you are putting no work into your craft. Nothing in life is given to you , get up off your behind and WORK.

. Some of the greatest athletes in the world like Larry Bird, Michael Jordan , and Lebron James all had to get up every morning and train master their craft before the can be great and accomplish the amazing milestones they accomplished in their careers .. Before every game Larry Bird would shoot 100 3-pointers because that was his craft. Lebron James was fresh out of high school and trained then ended up getting drafted. Do you think if some of the greatest athletes in the world would be able to do what they do if they sat around and waited for it to come to them?.

Same thing with money , you think you can just sit at home all day eat,drink,sleep and watch TV all day and think money is just going to fall out of the sky?. Money requires work, and sitting at home on your couch all day will not get you a profit i can guarantee you that . I understand that yea maybe sometimes you should sit back and let things play out but no the more you let that happen the more time you are wasting in life.

One of the best NFL football Running Backs ever to play was Walter Payton. He was not your average RB . He had a hill in his neighborhood he ran everyday which separated him from the other players in the rest of the NFL players. In the off season 90 percent of the League goes idle but nope not him he worked and trained everyday, you know where that lead him to ? Lead him to the top 10 rushing yard list of all time. The people who work everyday all day will and comes back the next day to accomplish more will have more accomplished when they are dead and gone.

Everyone should want to accomplish something nice in life and work and constantly striving to do better 24/7 and trust me it will happen.     ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
BD0CEEC9B429,"People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about lifes important matters for many reasons, there are some emotions following our own decisions whether is right or not, people shouldn't always follow their heart and do something it could cost your life in the future. Another suggestion is asking for help to those who knows how to guide and gives ideas to people following their own decisions . Having some different types of ideas from different people or culture it can help us to work and do better in life because life's important matters. It can help our sociatity do better for our new childrens and the anyone whos around in our environment.

First of all, some particular people sometimes shouldnt always follow their heart or emotions whether is right or wrong we can always seek for help and do what we like to do in our daily life. For example, the other day I made the worst decision because I didn't have the courage to share my thoughts with anyone in my family or friend about quitting my job or not. I felt like if I suggested to ask someone to help me clear my mind I was going to do better now. Next, later on I saw my manager and told me they had a better job position for me with better health insurance plan. In this case I feel that seeking for guidance is not always a bad idea, is the opposite we can help each other. I made a bad decision for not comunicating with others about my problem whether to stay or leave, what i did it was left the job.

Secondly, in many cases we think we know a lot, but in reallity is that other people can help us to do and give new ideas in our life. Than, If I want to change something in my life I have to love myself more and have the courage to comunicate with others and let them know what I am thinking and expect a better results. On the other hand, making your own decision can also help you to be succesful about life and not depend on others. For example, someone whos expert, can let me know and give me some advices about a proyect because they alredy know it or went through and have lots of experiences in that area. I always believe imformation is important if we working as a team is the best for the human we get to know each other time and values. Although, everything works best when we seek for a true guidance.

To conclude, in many cases people are really succesful because they met or know someone from different culture and shares different types of ideas. In this world we live in many times this is the best way to work with as a team by seeking help from experience people and open up our brain more to understand the problem and to move on forward in our life. If woman and man work together life's gets easier because we all putting our effords so that we can have a better tomorrow for our lifes and childrens. Lets all do better and be better for a better tomorrow.          ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
DBC8CBF56BB9,"As a child, I always loved to go to the park. It was my favorite thing to do because I loved playing games with my sisters and sometimes we'd even make up our own game to play. However, things have changed in the past few years and now I barely ever go to the park. The park isn't the same fun and cool place that it used to be anymore, but why?, Why did it change so quickly?.

There are so many reasons to why the park hasn't been visited as much as before, but, yet again only one reason explains why most people barely ever go to the park. The reason for why people never to go the park now is because they don't know what to do at the park anymore. People think that the park is a boring and useless place, but the park have many purposes. People now spend more time on their couch and on their phone and it's very unhealthy and concerning especially when it comes to health issues in the future. The park is a fun and entertaining place to be because there are millions of activities that you could do at the park that are very enjoyable. I'm going to list a wide variety of fun and entertaining activities.

First off, you could always go the park with friends and/or family members. It's always great to be around the people you enjoy the most, especially in a beautiful environment like the park, where everyone could enjoy themselves. Second, you could always head to the park for some quick exercise. You could run, jog, do yoga and much more when you're at the park. It's always a good idea to clear your mind and go for a run at the park when it's beautiful outside. It's always important to make sure your health is in good condition and you can make sure that happens by taking a walk at the park. The third activity is, play some fun games at the park!. When your at the park you could always play some fun games that get you pumped up and happy. With the nice, fresh, open space that is available, the possibilities are endless!. You could make up your own fun games with your friends or family members. Now my fourth fun activity is, throwing a fun party!. It could be a birthday, graduation or even a going-away party, The occasion doesn't matter at all!. Having a nice party at the park is one of the funnest things!. You could do a barbecue and play with your friends and/or family members. celebrating outdoors is a great way to have a blast. My fifth activity is, help clean the park. This activity might sound really boring but helping our your community is 100% worth all of your time. When helping out your community you're not only helping those around you but you're helping yourself, the environment and the animals. Many animals live in parks, for example. a squirrel , birds, worms and even small insects. So next time you go to the park, or are planning to go, make sure you at least pick up one piece of trash, because that small piece of trash could save the animals and the environment.

Now my last but certainly not least reason is, grab a book and head to the park and read. This might seem like boring stacked on top of boring but doing this helps you clam down and relax a lot. When you're in a beautiful and peaceful environment, how could you be mad?.

Why should you try one of these activities?. These activities aren't only fun but they do help you in the long run. Hanging out with your friends and family members help you appreciate the people in your lives but also the environment that it giving access to being able to be around people. Taking a nice run at the park helps you by being healthy and improving your well being. Exercising doesn't have to mean running and jogging, it could be yoga too. Making up your own games help you build up your mind especially when you have access to so much space, you can pretty much create a fun and entertaining game. Reading a book is one of the most important things that you have to do in order to build up a stronger brain and doing to it in a peaceful, quite and beautiful environment makes the experience 100x more pleasing. You don't have to choose one of my ideas, you can choose and make up your own activities!. So next time you go to your local park, make sure you contribute and acknowledge the beauty of your community and make sure it's being properly taken care of.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
7CFA22351B27,"school districts should allow students to graduate one year early but only if they took the courses. If the students willing to sacrifice their time, elective course, and really work to get to their goal of graduating a year early then they deserve it.

From the process it takes to graduate a year before it would seem that yes, they are attending school for less time but from the courses in summer or evening theyre putting the same if not little change in time of the average high school student in just that one year. If they can handle the equivelent of junior and senior year in the same year then it shows how hard working and out going they are and could benefit them when they`re choosing a collage because:

it could impress the collages they'd want to attend they already know the stress of a collage class because of the extra courses they could be in a better position with organization, and being on time

It would also be a great benefit for students who'd join the work force instead of collage because:

they also know the stress from the extra courses if their family is going through financial problems it gives them more time to work they'd have a head start on their life

The only real problem of this would be the amount of time and stress the student had but thats only limited for the school year.

in conclusion i believe school districts should give students the chance to graduate early if they are willing to put the time and effort of two years into one and face the obstacles that come with it. itd be very beneficial to the student and/or their family and create a great layout for them fro what ever comes next.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
A42A8E5FA4CD,"""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you someone else is the greatest accomplishment.""-By Ralph Waldo Emerson. Some people try to accomplish themselves to demonstrate that they not need someone else to be successful. Some people believe that believe in themselves is more accomplishment than believe in another people. Those people who believe in individuality became more independent. In addition for some people to be themselves is the most greatest accomplish because people learn how they can value for themselves and demonstrate that they can be something else without help of someone. Some people rather be individuality because they didn't like the opinion of others.

To begin with, People learn how they can be value for themselves. For example, ""those people who decide to marry and separate from their actual family, during time they become learning to how survive with out help of their family and they willing that they can value for themselves."" Some people demonstrate that they are independents for their actions. To be ourselves teach as how confront our mistakes and how to process them.

secondly, Be individual make people more believable in themselves. For instance, ""When people make thing for themselves they believe in them and being positively."" Some people believe that is more better be individuality because they believe in what they do that what the others' do. Some people be individuality because they are more believable for themselves. Those people who are believable in themselves are people who truly want to be successful in their life because when people are individuality they do things for their own and they realize that they are not depending for someone.

In the other hand, some people argue that is not good idea to be individual. Those people believe that be individual is a bad idea because they say that two person have more ideas than one. However, that is not true because be individual make's people to believe in themselves and also is the greatest accomplish to keep believing than what others' believe for us. Be individuality make people more believable in their selves and be positive in their own decisions.

In conclusion individuality make people be themselves and they can effort to be the greatest accomplishment. Being individuality people became to learn many things. Some people effort to do their best and not be dependent for someone. People do not need be with a partner to demonstrate that they can do many things for themselves.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
CEC1115B69DB,"When i was younger my parents told me to do different things in life. Get out of your comfort zone and go beyond your wildest dreams unless you go and get it yourself. Would you get out of your comfort zone and chase your biggest dreams? I agree with Emerson statement because, how will you get better, being unique from everybody ,and the end result when you accomplish your goal. This is why i agree Emerson's statement.

PRACTICE.MAKES.PERFECT. I know you've herd this phrase a billion times from your family or friends. This is what Emerson is trying to say. How can someone be better without practicing. Furthermore, how can someone grow without working hard as you can? When i was in middle school i wanted to be in the basketball team. But, i was not good at it. One of my best friend who was in the team told me that he will tech me everything, only if i wanted to work hard and keep practicing with him everyday. We practiced everyday in till tryouts, whenever tryouts came i did really good and i got in the team. i've gotten better from working hard and never giving up on myself.

Do something different from everybody else. My father always told me that when i bring up college. He wanted me to do something big. Yet, not only big but unique unlike everyone else. In my last year of high school i was thinking about taking an online class. So, i got into a online course that will not only give me a credit and see how a online class really works. At the start it was hard for me. Because, i was getting out of my comfort zone. Just imagine being in your house or class with no teacher to help you. However, two weeks later i've gotten better at it. Two months later i finished the class with a B+.

At the end of all of your hard work and time, it will be worth it. When i was taking my online class i was scared, now i feel like i can do all of my classes online if i wanted to. Because, i've experienced it. Its all because of practicing alone or with somebody,also getting out of your comfort zone. You are going to do something beyond if you tell yourself to do so.

Some people say that you dont need to try to do somethings different to grow. Well their wrong here's why, most people cant get used to anything without trying to do so. Moreover, you dont need to master something to grow,because if you try you will now your right from your wrong.

In conclusion, If you work hard and try to get out of your comfort zone to try new things in life you will always ascend and be better!",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
0546517E6BAA,"When we make our own decision , we are creating our own world. People should make their own decision than be guidance from experst and authorities because they can't grow like a person by it-self. If they are guidance from experts or authorities they can't develop their own knowledge. That not help then because they are depending by other people and they can't never try something different by it-self. I agree with people who make their own decision because they build a self-confidence, learn be independent, and develop own skills.

When people make own decision they build a self confidence. One example of build self confidence is that we can believe in our self in what we can do. another reason is that we can feel confident by making our own plans. last reason to build our self confidence is that we have the ability to create our own future by making good decisions. Taking our own decisions always help us to feel confidence because we feel like a responable person in each decision maked.

Taking our own decisions helps us learning to be independent. One reason is that we learn to work by our self by making the decision to create our own businees without be guidance from a experts. Another example is that we learn to get up by it self, when we fall down by a bad decision. Last reason is that we have the right to do better if we get something wrong in our lives by a bad decision. When we make a good decisions by our self we feel independent because we are learning to live by ourself.

The people who make their own desicion, they are developing own skill. When we take own decision we are improving our knowledge becuase we are understending about what are the good decision and bad decision. Another reason is that we are learning to develop our own personality because making desicion help us to get more experience in our lives. Last reason is that to make decisions also help us growing like a person because when we take decisions they make feel us with confidence that we are people with great capacity to do anything. Make decision in our lives help us to develop our own skill because we are understanding how hard is live if we select a wrong decision.

Make owns decision always help us to grow by ourself. By doing own decision we can build self confidence to be a successful people in our lives. Practicing own decision help us to be independent and make feel us as a responsable peoples. When we make own decision ,we are making our own progress for future coming by developing skill like doing better our personaliity. It is for this an many others reasons that people should believe that is better made their own decision than be guidance from experts and authorities.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
7D0CE6E00B68,"Aesop said, No act of kindness,""no matter how small is ever wasted"" I think that what there trying to say is that no matter how mad you are or sad you can still find happiness or hope even if you lost someone in a family member it is ad but also just be a little happy that he is in a better place that he dose not have through any pain or suffering.

Aesop said, No act of kindness,""no matter how small is ever wasted"". I think he is also trying to say is that dont let anyone drag you down do what you think is right and dont let anyone tell you that your wrong try to prove them wrong because you can do anything. Maybe you can be wrong but learn from your mistakes and try again.

Aesop said, No act of kindness,""no matter how small is ever wasted"". I think what he is also trying to say is to be happy to have fun enjoy the little thing's as a kid once you become older your not going to have that much fun because were going to have to find a job, house, vehicle, and other stuff and it's not going to be fun so enjoy the little things and to have fun while you can. ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
AC7AB280A93C,"Students won't benefit from being able to attend school from home. Students will slack and become less responsible if they are home school.

Students tend to postpone work and project since there isn't a teacher physically in front of them constantly reminding them ""do your work"" or ""heads up this assignment is due next week.""

Although some may say students benefit more being home schooled they won't because they will get comfortable. Students will have the sense that they can do the work whenever they want , so therefore they won't complete the assignment. Students will later find all the amount of assignments that have to be complete will increase the student will feel overwhelmed then later fail, quit , and drop out.

School prepares you for the real world. They take in consideration attendance and responsibility. For instance a job as well requires these characteristics. If your home school your not training yourself or the mindset to adjust to being responsible. Home school will make someone ,less responsible since they got into the habit of being comfortable and not responsible.

In conclusion students won't benefit from being able to attend school from home. Students will slack and become less responsible.     ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
430762044028,"Why they are think studnets should have classes from home by way of online or video conferencing? Many of the studnets home is to far and maybe can't come or is come let. Every schools should have this option for students. This is make easy for some students.

First,some students wanna to stay home for classes this is good thing because you can fouces carfully and take you time and no body can't make you obsess. Some students maybe just need focuse to classes and he can't do in schools and he want to be school home. For Example; We have firend family him name is Generic_Name,Generic_Name wanted to be home school and do work in home. He do like to come school early. He told to him Mother and Father but they are is not agree with him because they says you have to go school and you can learning better and he do not have any option and he start to go school.

Second,the student want to stay home school they should know home school make your lazy because you don't have any activity to do you you stay home all time. For friendship you can't find good friend. this is make you unfriendly. for the class maybe you not understand what teachers means and you have some question. For Example;Generic_Name she is school home and she all time in home she doesn't have any friend she talk with her mother and father and her mother father is agree with she and she start to go school and she find alot friend and she understand better then befor.

Lastly,some teachers like to teach online and I think this is good option to for teachers because maybe teachers can teach better and maybe can foucse better then in class. Some teachers go to students home for the teaching just for one student and focuse to just one student. For Example;Generic_Name every Thusday have teacher she come every Thusday in Generic_Name home and she was help to Generic_Name to all home work. she talk to Generic_Name about home teacher is good then teacher in school because you focuse just for one student but in school you focuse just for maybe twenty students this is to hardc for me.

Studnets, should go schools this is not matter do you want go home school or normal school. some students have some physically problem I think they are need home schools because is easy then school because in school maybe somebody push and like some accident. For the physically students schools home is good because they can learning easly and they can focause better and nobody obsses.

Some students, need go school for the understand better. Some students need go school because if they are stay in home and they want home schools maybe in not listen to teacher or make copy. For friendly some people is unsocial and need make friend in school. Ithink school good option for this studnets.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
6642E181B08D,"I think that summer is to enjoy the weather, family, friends and if you have a pet also him and everything else.

no body would like to be thinking about school work or trying to figure it out to complete homework.

In my opinion students need to relax from a big long year of school and this is not just convinient for for young people, we also know that we have a clear example of Adult people( older people)

they also need a big break from their jobs because they might feel really tired or stressed with work same as students and so that i am not trying to compare adults with young people I know they have even more responsabilities with their lifes but students comes to be more understanble because of the reason that they need to save more energy and have enough sleeping time but adults also need the same things and due that many jobs required just a week of vacation (sometimes even more) they feel really streess and tired and that why they would really wish to have a big vacation to can spend time with their family etc. same with student now that they have the opportunity to have a big vacation enjoy it.

Plus many students really love summer because the weather( the warm breeze) the feeling of summer or the feeling that you know like freedoom not worry about your grades, activities, projects and etc. makes a lot of diference between a long break and a shorter brake, but I also take the position of the educator, I know they wouldnt like to been repeating things to make student remenber of the subjects they saw the last year and having issues with things they forgot, That would be really stressful but come on! Who wouldnt like a big vacation? good for some teachers that save money to enjoy summer.

I also take the student position and as student I identified my self with the first character I describe when Students need the vacation to relax, but theres another big example of why vacation should be longer. first of all some student plan their goals during the summer probably to get a full time job during summer ( i KNOW EVEN SOME TEACHERS do )

to can save money and spend it on things they need another example is to save money for collegue, yes for collegue.

and probably this is the major goal of many students trying to have a great summer because of the only reasong that they dont have as much support as the other students but at the same time I understand teacher or educators because their goal is to push us up in our goals and the once a year a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week of in spring and fall sounds really nice since some student may love the weather by those times even though they like to see the fall so theres not problem concluding with everything else it will be almost the same as the regular summe vacation except that It will be more shorter.

In conclusion, the break that we already have is perfect because of the only reason of that many student love it, the weather is so chill the beaches are already open and is enough time to go out of town to see your family and have a great time with them and good for those who liked to work during summer just to have some extra money or help a little of bet their spences.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
D4269468970A,"I agree with honesty because it's good to be honest and make people trust you and believe in you and because you have honesty it will get you friends and teachers will like you as a student. And also it is respectful to be honest and if it's your friend or family I think you should be honest because it's your friend and they probably wouldn't care what you say if it's mean because they probably know that you don't mean to be mean and that your just being honest with them.

But being honest is also not good because it can hurt someones feelings and can make them sad and not being honest could make you lose a friend and or make your friend happy. And if your not being honest and the person finds out you could lose them as a friend or they will dislike you a little bit.

But if i could choose both I would because it depends on the situation on why you have to be honest being honest or not honest could make someones feel sad or happy. And being honest or not could make someones day and make things better for them.

In conclusion:I say it would depend on the situation on why you have to be honest or not so that is what I think if you should be honest or not. But you have to be careful on what you say with honesty or not because depending on what you say it could be a big situation for you if you say something wrong.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
41F8A61B0BB8,"My name is Generic_Name and i am 18 years old. I am currently in 11th grade and attending Generic_school. I dream big in graduating, starting a carrer, and making my family proud. My parents are from Generic_City, As my sister is from Generic_City. Currently i am from Generic_City. What i am very intrested in is, playing soccer and learning lots about criminal justice. When i graduate from Generic_school, I would love to maintain my dream goals in studying Criminal justice and explore new types of events to figure out my future job. What i am mainly Intrested in is, A DEA Agent. Being a DEA agent (Drug Enforcement Agent) was always my favorite type of police job ever since i was a kid. I would always see movies about them,One famous show would be ''Narcos'' with Pablo Escobar. My parents really love the fact that i am intrested in studying a carrer as an agent, They one hundred percent support me and see me as one in the future. I am also currently taking criminal justice in school, I have been for 2 years, and look forward to continue taking the same class in college as well. I am a very Brave type of person. I like to step up myself in achieving goals i set myself to one. I've once set myself into making the Generic_City soccer team, With a lot of practice and hard working, i've managed to achieve making the team and achieving my goals in my 10th grade year. I am also intrested in continuing my carrer as playing soccer in college,But what comes in mind first is Ciminal Justice. I have been researching many informations about DEA and searched up many documentaries. Being an agent seems to be very hard and need very hard working brave men to step up for any emergency. If i ever achieve my goals into becoming an agent, I am certain in helping the community and other countries, to maintain it safe and out of trouble in risk of losing or out growing any type of bad habits. What i will make sure of is: Finishing High School, Keeping my grades up, And finding myself a good high job, to start off my carrer into achieving my goals to become a DEA. I do believe one day i will try and find myself working very hard, Trying very hard to build myself up to a police , And graduating with an Advance Master Degree in becoming what i wish to be. I hope god to help me achieve my goals, And to never give up in my dreams. Until then, I will continue in studying and learning many more facts, Information about DEA.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
ACE1BE41A8E0,"One of the most famous quote by Thomas Jefferson is, "" Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" He believes that there is so much that can be done if we are always doing something because if you are doing something all the time even if it's little it can be done but may take time. I believe we accomplish more if we are always doing something for example if you don't practice everyday then you won't get better at soccer. There is a lot of things that need be done in our country. One of the most important thing is racism , if we do something about that everyday to end racism.

If you are always doing something then you will get a lot done. When your building a house you are always doing something to it but if you stop then it will more time to build. I always believed that i can do a lot if i'm doing something all the time. When i was little i use to make Lego's i would always build them, i was always doing something to them. My mom always told if i'm building them everyday i could get done fast. I prepare for school the same way when i have big projects. When i have big projects i tend to freak out. My mom tells to just break it down and do little bit of everyday. When i do that i get my projects done fast.

If you don't practice everyday then yo won't get better at soccer. If you want to be professional soccer you will have to work everyday. When you don't do that you won't get any better because you have to train everyday so you can be great at soccer. I use to play soccer 2 years ago and i wasn't practicing everyday so i did't get any better. My dream was to be a soccer player but i wasn't training everyday so i didn't get where i wanted too. Everyone has dream to be something in order be that you have to do something everyday to reach your dream. Most people don't make their dreams because they don't do the little things that matter everyday.

There is a lot that need to done in our country. One of the most important thing is racism. I believe we can end racism by doing something about it everyday. One of the most important things in this country is racism because a lot people are getting killed by it. Police officer shooting black men that didn't do anything. That causes people that have been killed family's pain. I think racism needs to end as soon as possible. A lot white police men are shooting black men and are not getting anything for it. I think they should at least get some punishment because it's not fair to the people who died family's. I believe this could be fixed if we all come together and do something about it everyday.

As you have read we accomplish more when we are always doing something. Only when we do something you accomplish more. By doing something everyday you can accomplish your dreams and get your work done. The world would be in better place if we everyone did something to make the world more cleaner and safe. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
EC773C38B72C,"I'll disagree because being success is really important and being a failure is one of the worst thing that can happened in life because when someone start failing their is no more reasons to keep doing the stuff that someone like in if when the person start failing for their success they cannot do like that much for they can help for that and when the success person is their best time they can do all the stuffs they want for they can keep being success and keep their position and in good conditions.

Being success the hold time can make someone to fail at the end because someone keep doing their same thing all the time and when that happened the people can start getting tier and that's hew can people can make their success carriers or jobs to fail and that's how they can prevent from all does things that can prevent them from failing and when the people doesn't see they can start to fail they don't pain attention or they don;t care about what they doing during that time,

When a person is a failure at the beganing they can get more courage and start working harder for they can be a great the success person in life after being a failure in life for a long time they can start being success from one time into the other that how the great brains can work after being a such a failure person they can be a great success person in life after being a failure and start working harder and start being a great competent person for working in that areas.                        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
EB403A2AA1DB,"I would share that life is not easy. Enjoy your life as much as you can. enjoy your childhood. Because when you grow up you won't be able to go back

In the future you will do a lot of responsible things. Enjoy it bore it ends.

Everyone goes through something in their life. Everything will get better. Just don't think negative. Always look up never down. Cause if you do look down you won't see your bright future that will come.

Do good things in your life. Like be nice to people don't be rude, disrespectful, and mean. That's not going to help you in life. what's the point of being mean. Don't take your anger out on others. Just because someone else did something to make you mad. Taking your anger out on someone who didn't do anything is not going to help. Its's making the problem worse. Things happen for a reason, Maybe it happens to teach you a lesson.

Don't rush things in your life. Give things time, be patient. You don't know what can happen if you rush things in life. Everything has a time, you just have to wait until it comes. If something happens it happens you can do anything but to hope that things will get better. Life for an example, Lets just say that someone important gets sick. Like really sick that they had to go to the hospital. Its scary right? But what can you do to stop it. Nothing but to hope that they will get better. thats how life is. Life teaches us a lesson. We need to believe, have hope in life. if we dont how can we know things will get better.

We need to have hope to learn the lesson.

The more you give hope the more you believe, The less you try everything is completely blind.

For an example, I gave up and stopped trying. But that didn't help. Things got harder for me. I didn't have hope. But then i realized why am i thinking negative? and not trying. How is this going to help me in life. I opened my eyes and began to try. I started to believe. It helped me a lot. life is never easy. life is full of lessons that will teach us something. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
CDDAB6C29BF8,"This company is interested me and is a opportunity to me to show what a can do to deserve the job. The art is a way to express your self or if you do not want to say your feelings then, say it with drawing are coloring. If is a day when you feeling alone,happy, or you are excitingand you don't no what to do then start to draw, paint, or color. If I could express and any art will be drawing people because we all look different that is why a like drawing people.

I can travel different places and draw what a see there. If i could go to Mexico I could draw there tradition like dia del muero that is the day of dead. And their different design that they wear and their festivil. I can start by desing are drawing clothes. That is how you starting to get small ideas then you sart building more details on you drawing.

This job is and opportunity to show my potential and I work so hard to be come how I am now a grat artist. The art for me mean that I can express what a can see and think in start to draw what I am imagine in my mind. I deserve the job and I will work hard and I will give all I got. I am the one for the jod and i will not let you down on the job. ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
ACABA85B131B,"Dear Manager,

Did u know that many schools do not have local companies and organization that allow students' to explore certain profession?

I believe that they should have local companies and organization because when work as a teacher, the teacher can help students, have fun with students, and solve problems.

When you work as a teacher, the teacher can help you with anything. Like for example: When you are stuck with any of your assignment ,or doing a project, the teacher can help you with any of your assignment, or a project. However, some teachers do not help with students because the students won't get it, or learn anything. When a student needs help, go ask the teacher for help because when u don't ask, then you won't get help by the teacher. And that it is important to ask the teacher for help because when u ask for help, the teacher won't help you because you didn't ask for help.

When you work as a teacher, it needs to be fun because the student can not be bored and that they need to do fun activity like for example: Like going outside and play fun activity playing educational games that contain subjects like Math, Science, Reading, or History ,or like playing Soccer,Football, and Basketball and do more fun so that the students can not be bored. And that it is important to have fun and instead of being bored and not doing anything in school.

When you work as a teacher, the teacher need to solve problems. Because a student might have bad situation, or might have a ruff day. And so the teacher needs to talk to the student who's having a bad day. Like for example: If a student is having a bad day or a bad situation, the student need to ask the teacher to help with this situation or a problem that u have that is going on. And that it is important because the teacher can help you with anything. Teachers are important because they can solve problems that u have or question that you have so you can tell the teacher about it. And that the students need to tell the truth because when your lying, the teacher won't help you and your getting yourself in trouble, and making your situation more harder and more difficult to yourself.

Therefore, working as a teacher is important because the teacher can help students, have fun with the students, and solving situation or a problem. And it is important to work as a teacher, at the same time it is hard to handle with the students. Consequently, a teacher can handle anything, or any problem that you have, or having a ruff day and you need to talk with someone, or a teacher. And that many school don't have local conpanies and organization that allows students to explore certain profession.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
18EA27A2E333,"Schools Partnerships with companies

Why schools allow the students to visit the companies? Because many students are interesting about business and other types of jobs that they might want to explore. In some schools the workers of the company come to the school to talk with students about the different opportunities they have in the future. The manager of the company should chose me because I have a good grades, I am interesting about business, and I want to learn more every day about business and I work hard .

First, I have a good grades in all of my classes. The teachers talk good things about me with others teachers and my uncles. I pay attention in class I do my homework every day. I missed school when I am sick or I have an appointment. I stay after school if I need to retake a quiz or if I need to print some papers in the library. I don't use my phone during class because I like to in focus what the teacher says I turn my phone off.

Second, I am interesting about business because I want to be manager of companies. I always interesting about this career when was 12 years old I said I want want to be manager of companies. Now I am 19 I still want to be manager of a company. After High School I want to go to college to study about business and prepare for can find a job about manager of companies. I never stop to make my dream come truth.

Finally, I always want to learn more every day about my future job. I like to work hard to show all my knowledge in my projects. I like to explore new things an discover news ideas about my Future work. If they pay me a check every month need to be for my work I don't like to win money easy. I don't like lazy people I like the people who work hard and developed their job really good.

In conclusion the manage need to chose me because I am a good choose to go visit, explore and learn more things about my future job. In my opinion the manager need to chose me because I have a good grades, I am interesting about business, and I like and want to learn more about business and I work hard.                            ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
D16B3304A010,"A positive attitude is the key to success in life.

Can you imagine the world without positivity? Some people are doing successful achievements through the positive attitude, but others have a discrepancy to that. I believe that positivite attitude is important because positivity points to the healthy mental health, genial and successful accomplishments.

To begin with first reason, there are successful and unsuccessful people in the world. We are all humans, and we all have feelings, strenghts, weakneasses. Usually, those weaknesses make me stronger and give me lessons, and good lessons bring the keys to the successful doors. Life is like a school, teaches, tests, grades. However, my attitude decides who I want to be, but the importance is in being positive.

Another reason, ""being positive"" for me means being patient. For example, the person who is admiring me everytime. He is my father. I know all of his experiences connected with his job. There were a diffucult times too but because of his positive attitude, he is at proffessional level of his military career. I remember, when he had strict bosses, not very loyal friends, when we had the money shortgage. My parents teach me everytime: ""It doesn't matter where are you, be mature show them respect, take your community to the positive sides, be kind. Therefore, it will help you to be successful"".

On the other hand, some people say that the world is diffucult and success is not in the positivity because there are other things like money, good community, good education. Yes, that is true, but thinking positive and having efforts to accomlish something, that is already success. Success doesn't mean being rich and eminent. For me success is when I follow my dreams, help people, motivate them to be positive. However, there is the times when there is no place positivity, like loosing someone, or being unresponsible for something, hurting someone's feelings.

Eventually, to be successful in life, I have to stay positive in difficult situations. I like to be humor ,when I want to cry. I am responsible for my life and I choose positivity to achieve accomlpishments to be better and helpful to the community because that would help me to be successful and success makes the bliss!",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
746A0BFABA84,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Why should first impressions defined who you are? Why are they so ""impossible"" to change? are first impressions really that important, why should something so small change the way you think about someone. First, no one is perfect. Everyone has very different personalities or ways of being. Second, it should't defined who we are. First impressions don't always go well, you should be able to change that. Finally, It could ruin your reputation. A lot of people care about their reputation a lot. To the point that it could be emotionally wrecking

First, no one is perfect. We aren't perfect beings, we all have different personalities. Different things we do that others don't and some people may think its weird or we are weird to do that. That's when first impressions come to play. Meeting someone for the first time can often be hard to manage since is the first time you are meeting this person. Truly anything could go very wrong. They could think they way you talk, eat, and act is weird because you are trying way to hard for it to not go bad and sometimes that comes out as bad. Life sometimes will go wrong and we can't change that or let it get the best of us because we aren't perfect and it's okay if sometimes things don't go our way of liking. if it goes bad we should be able to change it or try again.

Second, it should't defined who you are. Every human is not alike in any way possible, all of us are unique in our own way. Sometimes we make mistakes and theres cases where people don't like that. When you are on a stated of mind of anger, you could do something drastic but that doesn't defined who you are on your heart and mind. You have your own mistakes and flaws but that isn't you is just a part of you that doesn't think and does thing on impulse. When you are trying to make everything perfect that person it could stress you out really bad and anything could make you go off. when it's the first time meeting that person it can really tress you out bad but that's okay. First impressions should be able to be change because if that were to happen it could really damage a person if that certain person was important to them. You should be able to reschedule the date when everything is better and you can be normal. If they are truly your friend they will allow to you to that.

Finally, it could ruin your reputation. Let's say you are the most friendly person in your school and everyone likes you because of how fun or nice you are. you would love to keep that way. But one day a new student comes to your school and you introduce yourself but right out of the bat they don't like you without knowing anything about you. That thought could eat you up for the rest of the time, and you try and try to get that person to like you but they don't. Being able to change that first impression is all that you would like to do but it feels impossible. But it isn't impossible if that person wanted to get to know you they could but they don't want to and yes there's people like that all over the world. Having a second chance could change everything for you but we should't let it get the best of us that person will come around at their own time. We can't make people be our friend if they don't want to. If they want to get to know you they will.

Conclusion, First impressions are not important things will go wrong sometimes and that's okay. We can always try again another day, it should't get the best of us or makes us feel some type of way if that person truly wants to be your friend they will not care about the mistakes you make or anything around that. You are human and you make mistakes sometimes. And that's okay, it doesn't defined who you are;only you know who you are on the inside. First impressions should't even be a thing they stress you out and makes you over think. Being able to change the impossible is something we should be able to do always. Don't let anything like that make you think less of you. ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
D6894AB9188B,"Failure plays in the pursuit of success. Although some say that success shouldn't be consist of failure because a failure makes you a loser, not a winner, actually failure plays in the pursuit of success because people fail, but they learn from their mistakes and it's positively affects people personalty.

Those who believes success shouldn't be consist of failure have their reason. Some say failure may negatively affects people in their life. But, success makes people feel proud and enthusiasm. Because a failure makes you a loser, not a winner.

Failure helps people to find their a path to success. People fail, but they can learn from their mistakes. For example, I took math test last week, and I didn't do well on the test. My score was 50 out of 100. So, I checked my test paper, and I saw what mistakes I got and learned from it. Then, I retook the test, and I got 91 out of 100, I was proud; after, I saw my score.

I know many people hate failing, they think it's negatively affects their life. But, failing is sometimes there's benefits because it's positively affects people personality. Such as, hard working, proud, and encourage. First, people have their dreams, some wants to be a football player, or some wants to be a president. They need to work hard to accomplish their dreams. Some people fail or success, but they are working hard to accomplish their dreams.

Lastly, pride and encouragement. For example, I have cousin who into sports, and he is in race track. there was a race in high school between Generic_School. So, my cousin was in it. He's family was there and I was there, too. we saw the race, we were encouraging and cheering for him. So, he came in second place. I was mad at first, and I saw my cousin smiling. I told him, ""why are you smiling?"" He said,"" I'm happy that you guys came, to see me race."" he was so proud. I was happy for him. He didn't care if he is second or last. He cares about his relative cheering for him.

Conclusion, Failure plays in the pursuit of success. I believe failure helps people to find their a path to success. People fail, but they can learn from their mistakes and it's positively affects people personalty. Such as, hard working, proud, and encourage",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
80E36876B2CB,"No more junk food in the cafeteria anymore. Students need to start eating healthy, and take care of themselves so they can stay energetic for the rest of the day. Cafeteria needs to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the students favorite cafeteria foods. It's a good idea to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu because students will eat more healthy, students will not be obese, and they will be healthy instead getting sick every other day.

Majority of the people who eat healthy on daily basis are always in good health. My mom always eat healthy, and takes care of her diet, she's 60 years old, and she doesn't have any diseases or anything. She's in good health. So, she always tells me to stay determined to eat healthy, stay hydrated, and that should be the case for everyone else as well. Changing to a healthier menu is a good idea because students will eat well, and start to like the healthy food instead of the junk food. Eventually, students will start to like fruits and vegetables instead of chips and chocolates, and drink more water instead of soda, juice, and stay hydrated. They will be diligence towards their diet. Students will eat oat meal, milk, yogurt, and some fruits in the morning from the cafeteria. It would digest easily and students will not have stomachache or any other kind of pain in the morning after eating breakfast. In lunch, they will eat proteins, for example: meat, nuts, and beans, also milk, water, stay energized for the rest of the day, and not have any disease or pain.

Students will not be obese or gain a lot of weight. They will stay in shape because they will be eating healthy food from the cafeteria, and they will not have unhealthy condition of body or mind. Students will maintain their health, and stay fit by following their diet. Their body will not contain any impurities, and they will not have any diseases. Students will be able to play sports, run fast, accomplish their goals, and discover new things in life. Also, they will be more active. If you're fat then you become lazy, always not willing to work which is not good for health. You have to be productive in order to achieve your goals in life. Students will not eat junk food from the cafeteria anymore, and it would give students the opportunity to keep up with their body and be fit.

Students will be healthy instead of getting sick every other day. Eating healthy is good because you learn how to maintain your health, and it helps you to eat well. Students will the eat the food that is good for their health. Eating healthy on daily basis, and going to the gym maximum twice a week can keep them in shape, and get rid of the illness. Healthier school lunch menu would benefit a lot of students, and illustrate them ""To purify, and be bright"". My cousin Generic_Name used to eat unhealthy all the time, even from school cafeteria as well, and always used to cry about how her stomach used to hurt. After six months she gained weight, and she was crying about it that she's never going to be fit again because she gained too much weight, but my mom told her that there's always a second chance, she was eating unhealthy, and wasn't taking care of herself so that's why she gained weight. She told Generic_Name about her healthy diet and convinced her to immediately start eating healthy, stay hydrated, do not eat junk food on daily basis, and be diligence about working towards her goal to be fit. Generic_Name listened to my mom and started eating healthy, she lost weight right after 8 months, and her stomach didn't used to hurt like it used to before all the time, that's why students need to eat healthy food from the cafeteria, and take care of their diet because they spend majority of their time in school. It might not be the best food for the students but it's good for their health.

Junk food is not good for health. Cafeteria should have healthy lunch menu. So, students can have the opportunity to eat healthy and not face any dificulties related to their health. It's a very good idea to tell students to fix their diet, and start to become responsible for what is good for their health and immune system. Students will not gain a lot of weight if they stick to their diet and eat healthy from the cafeteria. Students wil not have stomachache or any other diseases. They will be able to trust the process of eating healthy, and keep up with it. Cafeteria should only have healthy food. So, people can minimize the amount of junk food they eat on daily basis.    ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
15D10C4DBA29,"Have you ever assist a older student and a younger student from involving a program? It is better from involving a program so they can talk to each other and communicate others, if they are struggling with some work or if they need to stay after school which is important for them to get good grades.

I agree that older students should assist younger students from involving a program because they can help together and cooperate together, if older students want to enjoy a after school activity if they like being it, they can learn about social skills.

I think that cooperating together for students is good because they can hang out and talk with their phones while their at school and they can work as a group of doing a project which is good for them to do if their kind of bored and they can work together of doing a skit or a play or act they like to do and last they should book buddy which that means reading as a group or playing card games each other.

I think that older students like to enjoy a after school activity because they like to do video games because i know that some students always stay after school for video games because they like it a lot they like to play games each other which i play video games with my friend, and students might say 'Yay' i like to stay after school to play video games again.

I think that students should learn social skills, because they can educate themselves of liking it, and there is a another club that is called Personal development which is a good club of social skills so that students like it a lot and their is some fun things that students like one of the activities are really fun for them.

In conclusion, students should help together from cooperating together because they can get to know themselves and they can be happy and they award themselves from accomplishing goals that they do is important for them, and if they get all A's they can improving themselves from their teachers saying "" Students have accomplished their goals because they are on time to class they respect teachers, and students working and cooperating together of doing kinds of work they like to do is best for them.               ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
9EE9E6991968,"I 'm Agree with this because if you have a positive a ttitude when you do staff you can make Better things Happen at the moment . and people can say that you are a great person because of your attitude how you treat other's people having a good attitude can make people think you are a different person than people say, how you treat others people thats why being good can help you count on different types of people including your friends and your family. when you are having bad things and problems.

happen in your life you feel sad depressing and trying to quit of everything .

but you don't have to give up you have to still Fighting so you can Solve all this and leave this at the Past .and start like nothing Happen and keep having that positive attitude on you. having a good a ttitude in school can make teachers see that you are a quiet and chill guy who just traying to do great on classes and trying to pass the school and graduated and be a better person than others who just having a bad attitude in school and quit.

thats why having a good attitude can make you be a good person with others and people see that. you can make all your wishes true if you being honest and prepared so you can be in the work you want for you in the future and make a better life to your self and your family.

and being good with your attitude can make easy thyings happen to you and people treat you good     ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
0230A077F5B6,"some school districts offer programs that allow high school student to graduate in three years insted of the tradional four years. I believe that high school student should not allow to graduate in three years. Beacuse for example they are not going to have free time with friends, it's hard for student who learnd new language and some student work afther school. Did you imagen yours child spend all day at school studying hard out seem their parents most of the day just want tham graduate in less then four years.

To begin with, all single child or student need to have free time play with the friends the student don't have to worry about stay afther school to study. most student like afther school go to thier friends houses to play video game, go to eat restaurent also student who graduate in four years don't have to be take any clases during summer or evenings. they can have time to play any sport they like during summer insted of be in at school taking any clases.

In addition for those student who are learning a new language three years is not enought time to learnd every single studnet differnt time to learn some of than learn faster than others student this program that offer that allow high school student graduate in three years,may have to know that each student laern differenly. Anothers disavanges to graduate in three years insted of four is that student don't have time to secand chances to take any felling sol or test they must have to pass each test or sol each years to able to graduate. I feel that is too much prechers for student who learning a new language that they don't have enought time to learn better, that can effect the student when they want to attend to go to callage. It's song that one years can't make any different but,for must of student will be make different,in one years we can prepere student whow callage are what is the different bitween high school classes and callage classes.

The least but list as we know some student work afther school the issue is that this student don't have time to do their homework and study for any test some tham student work fourty hours per week they are going to sleep late night it's hard to attend to school everyday and work at the same time. they just not focus in school they have anothers responsability for example, help their family pay bill or rent so,this student may take the four years to graduate from high school they can do some make up some work and study.

Inconclusion In my opinon the student from high school should not allow to graduate in three years we can keep traditional four years. in this case the student can have more time to play with the friends, time to learn better a new language learn more in high school to be ready for callage and they can have time to help their family with anything this programs should help the student to keep traditional four years the student are future any country may have suppor with are better for them.    ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
0C88A0C1602B,"Do you have a talent or skill? If so what's you talent/skill, and how do you use it? Explain what your talent is and how did you developed it.

The first thing i'll be talking about my skills. One of my skill it cooking; I love cooking and it's one of my favorite thing to do at home when I have nothing else to do, and I'm pretty decent at it. I can only cook one thing for now, the only thing I can cook right now are eggs such as sunny side ups, scrambled, and an omelet. My dad is the one who got me into cooking, and I wanted to be a good cook like him. Another skill of mine is that I can run kind of fast I don't like running that much but I still run. I can also run far with one breath, and I don't have a lot of stamina. I can also bake. It's rare for me to bake because I usually don't do it a lot, but it fun to do if you're bored and you want to make something. The only two things that I made was cupcakes, and chocolate cake. My dad's girlfriend is the one who made kind of like baking because it fun to do.

Now i'll be talking about my talents. A talent I have is drawing; Drawing is one of my top five favorite things to do when i'm not doing anything or when i'm bored. I'm decent at drawing but not really good yet I practice on trying to get better at it, and the things I draw are random because when I draw something random I usually draw it when i'm bored. The person who got me into drawing was my sister, when I saw her drawings I was amazed cause she was a good drawer, and I wanted to draw like her one day. Math is also one of my talents: math is my number one subject because i like it, and my friends say i'm good at it. When I we have a hard problem I sometimes don't use my calculator because I always forget I have one.

I also like build most of the time because I get to go outside and find stuff I can play with, I usually find big sticks and carve them after I finish carving them I start sanding it so it wouldn't so rough when I finish I paint them to make it look cool, but now I bare;y do it because I have a lot of stuff to do. The only thing I use is a knife and a sand paper because some of the tools I needed to use I didn't know how to use them.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
86A511A55117,"I think students can benefit if they are able to attend classes from home, even know the distance but learning as a option for students who wants to finish a carear or have a good job.

Take those classes online or videos conferencing is not the same thing like to be able to go to classes. In class students can ask about any question they have or get the information they are looking for, and the schools teacher can see how they are learnig but, online they don't have much oction like read a book or be able to ask any question they have to anybody.

Attend to classse is great is a oction from student to choose but is the smart oction for for student who know what they want to do in they future. Schools is a place where students have the desition by you're own. There is where students can start makeing options and try finish what they really dream. Be able to atted classes from home is hard thing to discuss but when students are able to go there is great bacause is where they have to be and never give up during that time.

School is not a principle to starts getting information about how thing are working, or what options we can choose for be a porofessional after schools. Prevent oction in schools is preposterous because that is not ducing, good octions during school.

Students who rually have the decition to go to schools even know the distace but they are benefit. that is a oction, but when they get there is alot of information and option they can lissend from teachers and other students. When they go to schools they are giving a step more every day, to them life and they are benefit in school for the alot of option they can have in schools.

Schools is a benifif for all yung people to learnd how start life, when you get out from schools and have a good job. for have the opportunite, students need finish school firts. Not matter the distance or the skills they have during that period time. after that they will see how everything is change to be better in they way.

For somo students is hard to make that decition.

But when they have the oction and they can do it is a good thing because they can learning more about and have more opportunities when they graduate from schools thay have good jobs and more oction to choose.

Some students think is preposterous to to make decition in schools, bacause is alot of oction they can choose, and alot thing they want to be but they only have somo octions. For somo of then is hinder to go and pick that oportunities.

Instance when students live far fom schools is hard to get there they need like a car to get there, but parents are allways insist to students to go to schools not matter how hard is all they wants is a good future for they childrens.

School is a personality decition in life, butsmart decition for people who is looking for good oction in life. Ertheless who finish school have more oction the people who don't finish. During school students need have to be inmate because schools is a hard time.

For students in schools is like stairway, because they walk aroung getting information, that is a good oction for teachers, to stall information and try to preparate students to then life. One way to be a perfectionist is graduste from schools.

Fanally when students finish schools they did a good job and they have more option to choose. More of they have good jods or go to college and finish a carear, and they know how follow the the dreams, because when they was in chools there was alot of skills and the crusts those over and over that was like the firts hard thing they start with, that was alot of bad action they can choose but they don't choose any of those. Finally finish with right thing, Now is fancy work and alot oction to choose in life.                                                                                                          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
A91E59572DA0,"Technology had been a useful tool for the man to make his life easier. Cellphones, smart watches, and more make information very accesible and easy to find. But technology also has a negative impact on social relations, as it reduces human contact and promotes lazyness. The main target is the youth, which is more exposed to technologycal advanced nowadays.

When we think about technology, social media comes related too. For some, especially teenagers, these websites work as entertaining platforms, useful to share memories and talk with friends and new people. While these can make contact easier, the risks become higher when social media is not used properly. Posting personal information, such as your adress, cellphone, or location, is an irresponsible action which could lead to unsafe situations. Websites like Facebook and Instagram make identity theft easier: as they reduce human contact, people can take advantage of the users by introducing themselves first as a 'new friend,' to then execute their real intentions. For instance, kidnap and monetary robbery are the most popular cases that come out of social media.

In addition, social wesites and items like phones can be utilized in the way. There have been lately a lot of users claiming that their phones are listening at all moment, a tactic which could be useful to spy on people. As this theory has not been confirmed yet, it could be easily enforced by anyone with the required knowledge.

Productivity is another factor influenced by technology. The main purpose of most technological items is to make our lives easier and, in some cases like hardwork larbor, it can be very efficient. But when people start spending hours with these objects, the development of dependency towards technology could increase. Video games, for instance, have become the addiction of many kids, who stop performing their typical responsibilities in order to play with these. This is another way human contact is reduced, which will have a significant impact in their future lives. To develop social skills at a young age is very important for kids to succeed in the future. It's true that many factors affect the achievement of succeess and it can not be predicted by the skills a person has; but what it's true is that we are always going to be exposed to social interactions and it's neccessary to learn how to manage them.

A solution for this problem could be in the parents' hands. Enforcing limitations on the use of technology not only will create a stronger relationship between them and the children but it will be beneficial for the kid's future.

After all, technology has become a advantage for many of us in our daily life. However, it's important to stay aware about its risks and exercise a responsible behavior when using it. Moreover, we shouldn't let it take total control of our actions and enjoy in-person relations more. ",5.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
862ACD748291,"the effect of the program is a good thing because it can help the younger who to behave in classes and other stuff and learn form the older students the good part

1) the older students can help and teach the younger one who to behave in the class and they can make a good effed tried to teach them.

2) the younger students learn form the older one so they can learn form them.

3) if they learn they can teach the more youngest or the new kid by doing that the bad part

1) the bad part of this is that the youngest can get in trouble if they go whit the kid that don't behave correct in the class.

2) they can get in trouble if they miss behave and be whit the wrong people in the school.

3)

some people want to make trouble and can make the younger kid in a big trouble by teach them bad behave.

the thing is that the program can run well but if people that just want to mess up other is not a good idea and that's why the progra can hep other make and do good decision .",1.5,1.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
1D327ADD95AA,"Whether the limitation of human contact due to technology has had a positive or negative effect on people's lives, is a constant topic of discussion. Technology is an amazing tool, with countless positive effects. It has made society what it is today. Without it people would not know life the way that it is now. Technology makes many activities in life possible, which before would have been impossible. The first man to walk the moon did it by the means of technology. The vehicles which allow people to commute to work, or travel the world, were also created through technology. Buildings are powered with technology and our houses are to. Our whole world is surrounded by technology, and without it people would not live life the way that they do now. If a day came when people would have to give up all their technological advantages, life would be a catastrophe. People would not be able to get to work, there would be no way to talk to friends or family that are far away, the whole teaching system would have to be rebuilt, and many other countless horrible things would occur if technology where to be taken away from the people. We are highly dependent on technology, and that is not a negative thing. People have learned to live with it, and it makes life much easier than before the technology era started.

Easy and fast communication is one of the most important contributions that technology has provided to the new world. People's phones, computers, and even TV's now can connect everyone to loved ones. Human contact, is now even easier than it was before technology came into play. Now people can call a friend, and talk with them for hours, no matter the distance. People can text with family and friends, and it is even possible to constantly check on them with video calls. Before technology, people would have to travel many miles to come into contact with friends and family, but now thanks to technology everything has changed. Now, looking at family and friends through a little screen is a possibility, and not just something that happens in a futuristic TV show. People can tell close ones how their day is going, what has been going on in life, and every other small detail that could possibly pop into ones head. Losing human contact because of technology is not something to be worried about. Technology does not get rid of human contact. What it actually does is create the contact. It makes it possible to build bonds with people no matter the distance, and it also allows people to connect with loved ones when ever wanted.

Technology is also a very important part of current entertainment. Netflix, Apple Music, YouTube and many other apps keep people entertained for hours non-stop. Watching movies and listening to music, was something that used to be only done at concerts and at movie theaters. Thanks to the positive effects of technology, now a day enjoying good music, and movies is something that can be done at home. The best thing of these apps is the low prices, and thousands of content, which is updated over and over again constantly. Having easy access to good music and good movies while laying in the comfort of home is an activity which most people in the world would enjoy. These apps also make it possible for people with no connections to the world of entertainment to pursue a career that will be enjoyable. YouTube is one of the leading online video streamers in the world. People who want to pursue a career in entertainment have the opportunity to post their videos online and gain fans. This is something which would have been impossible before the technology era.

People love completing tasks while comfortably laying in bed inside home. Technology is so amazing, that it has made this possible to. People need to shop, but sometimes the stores which have the items that are needed are not close to their homes. Technology knows this, and it has made it possible to go to thousands of sites online and purchase anything. It is possible to buy shoes, clothing, electronics, and even food. When people shop in a normal retail store, it is possible to find sales and the items needed, but shopping online is a totally different experience. By shopping online it is much more likely to find the best possible price for an item, due to all the options that are available. There are also many items which are available for purchase online, but not available at stores. Shopping online is also surprisingly a very entertaining experience. Browsing thousands of items, and ultimately finding the best price is an activity which can keep people entertained for plenty of time. Shopping online is much easier, and comfortable than actually going to the stores to find the items that are needed.

Technology is a constant growing phenomenon, which needs to be constantly worked on. It is the fuel that powers the world. If it were to run out, everything would stop moving. With the technological discoveries that are being made every day, people are living longer lives, the depths of the world are being discovered, and new ways to sustain earth are being presented. If the way technology is growing continues at the pace it is currently going at, the world might find ways to cope with global warming, and maybe even find the cure to deadly diseases like cancer. This is how important technology is to the world. It goes to the point that if it is studied correctly it can save peoples lives, and even the world. Technology has already changed the world forever, and it will be no time at all for another invention to change the world once again. These changes will be for the good, and technology will prove to positively change the world once again.",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
880188B5EED8,"People say first impressions are almost impossible to change. I think you can change someone by getting to know each other, spending more time together, or ask them how they feel.

If you start talking to someone for the first time and you think their personality is really bad try to know the person more. In my experience, when I see someone for the first time like at work or school right away I think they're mean from their face expressions and attitude. Sometimes they think the same way too, so they are mean back.

You should spend time together and go to places where both of you guys like to go. Their attitude might of changed because maybe they needed someone to talk to and go out more. There's people that their personality are just different and you have to accept it.

Lastly, People go through a lot in life and their personality starts to change. Also, you have to ask them how they feel because sometimes they feel depressed or angry about something and need someone to talk to. It's better to be there for them or help each other out.

In conclusion, people say ""Don't judge a book by it's cover"" because you never know why they behave like that. If you don't know them, still ask if they're okay. It is possible to change their personality and make them a better person.        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5
D5202DF530D1,"I feel like people making their own decisions will be a lot better for that person. But seeking guidance is that bad either for someone to make their own decisions says to someone else that they know what they are doing and can build something great with how their working and planning for the future.

Although seeking guidance is the worst thing to do, i feel like people making decisions for themselves is better.

For example if i were to go to someone for guidance or for something more and they give me some sort of guidance or idea and it turn out bad for me. Than i would never be able to go another person for guidance and ideas and i would most likely turn to myself. Then theres the problem that the reason that i went to seek guidance was because i couldn't make a decision for myself and now since I'm self reliant it will be hard for me to make my own decisions.

Now if i didn't go to the authorities and experts and made the decision for myself but it still ended up being bad outcome. It still would have been a lot better for me so that i can use the experience of making my own decision to help make better one in the future.

Now if you go to the authorities and experts to seek guidance and it it come out great and now your life is going great. Until the time to make your own decision it will be even harder to make then the time you went for guidance. That you yourself will fell behind and lose whatever chance that you had because you never made a decisions for yourself and thats problem some people have because they have been going to someone else to make your life decisions.

In conclusion to go somewhere to seek guidance isn't bad it's what comes out of it to help you if it turns out bad or good it will effect your decision making to be better and worst. In my opinion making your own decision will be better then any expert ideas because it help yo in your life and what comes after every decision you make for better or worst.  ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
D5588B5DD6FF,"Once The great artist Michelangelo said that

""The grater danger for most of us lies not only setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark"". I personally disagree with this because not all of us people really wants to more than what it is asked to do, what really matter in this world it is to achieve your goal, and aiming low is a representation of honesty and humility. Some people may say that this may agree with Michelangelo's said, because sometimes getting out of our comfort zone it is what most of us should do; challenge our selves to get even higher expectation and results, but to be realistic not all of us aims for that.

First of all, most of us do not really wants to do more than it is asked to do. For example, Generic_Name a orange contractor, he has been asked from his boss to fill 10 trailers of orange per day, one day he filled 12 trailers of oranges and thought that his boss would pay him the 2 trailers extra of orange that Generic_Name and his worker filled, in his paycheck did not appear the 2 extra trailers of orange causing Generic_Name pay his workers for the extra hours and work that they had putted, Generic_Name never again did more of he was asked to do. People took Generic_Name as en example of not doing more of what it is asked to do in their jobs.

Secondly, what really matters in this life is to achieve your goal. For example Generic_Name is a student from Generic_School, Generic_Name and his friends in their freshman year aimed for the advanced diploma in his school, but Generic_Name aimed for the standard diploma, his friends bought that by choosing the advanced diploma would be easier to earn credits and graduate faster, but little did they know they would get challenging classes, having almost AP classes in almost every material, Generic_Name from the other side having his standard diploma resulted him having normal classes and passing almost all of them. At their junior year Generic_Name's friends decided to change their diplomas because their classes was so difficult that their credits was not high enough, Generic_Name had the needed credits to be considered a graduate. Sometimes it is better to achieve your goal and do not try to get out of your comfort zone and challenge yourself because at the end what really matter in this life it is to achieve your goal.

Lastly, aiming low is a representation of honesty, and humility. For example, Generic_Name have a Mexican restaurant, she does not aspire her restaurant to be the greatest in her town, but what she really aspires for her restaurant is to keep her with the same love and passion she has for cooking and the satisfaction of her clients. Aiming low does not mean that is going to be a failure, but if you do it with honesty and humility, the 'danger' will not be as big as it appears.

As you can see, Michelangelo's said its not all the way truth because, people from all over the world thinks differently, having different experiences in their lives causing them to disagree on his said. Not all the people wants to more what it is asked to do, what really matter in this world it is to achieve your goal, and aiming low is a representation of honesty and humility. Not always setting our aim too high and falling short it is what it means to survive in this world.",4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
29905A8482BC,"-

Today in the actuality is easier to take classes or courses, online or video conference, because the system of education is always trying to improve them self as everything in the world. The internet is our big source that we need everywhere and in different circumstances and the technology is a big advance that has a lot of benefits for us, like make our life easier.

My point of view about the student attending classes from home. First, most of the students in High School are teenagers, if they are in their homes taking classes it make the possibility that they do not socialite with the people and they can not find a firm personality. Second, the students could have problems in their vision in cause of the long time looking a monitor, laptop, tablet, Etc. Third, some of the students are beneficiary of their free lunches in school, so, if they are in home it will be more expensive for the parent to pay extra food. To conclude, those were some of my points of views or disagrees about attend to school from home.

This is a list about the agrees and it could be a benefit in my opinion:

Do not have to spend gas going to school.

Do not spend in different clothes everyday.

The government, do not have to pay a lot of teachers, so maybe taxes can get lower.

We can use a different schedule to see classes, and the other time to work.

The students do not have to socialize with the teacher, so, no disagrees and problems between the student and the teacher.

This ideas was basically what i think about attend classes from home, maybe it could be better or maybe no, the mostly reason i think is fine to attend school from home is, if you have a disability or sickness that don't let you go to school.

Made by: Generic_Name.                                                                                                                                                                                             ",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
A93072F1F0EC,"I disagree about what the principal has decide because some student don't like sports or any other activities at school. They are probably don't do that activities because they don't know how to play or do those activities and some activities you have to buy all the things that you need for that activities but they don't have money to buy all the stuff.

Other people might fortgot to give the paper that they need for the sports or any kinda of activities and they cant go or play sports just because of that reason and some people dont do a sports because other student will judges them because they might be bad at playing that sports and they will judges them.

Other student played sports but scared to play now because she or he might got hurt when he played last time and she or he might got scared because of that reason and people will call him or her weak just because she or he fell or got hurt.

Not everyone are good at playing sports and even though they probably know how to play sports they might just be scared to play because they have shyness and people are lazy to do any kind of sports.

Not all of the student will follow the principal just because they dont probably know how to play the sports and they are shy to play when people are yeling and staring at them. Not everyone will do the sports just because the principal told them to do any other sports. People will just ignore the principal

They will get mad because if they have low grades they will get kick out of the team just because of the low grades. Other student aren't that good at doing sports but they will probably do better but they are scared to play sports because they see alot of the people who get hurt just because of a sports they dont want to get hurt because of a sports.

Some student will not do what the principal say because it's either they dont how to play the sports or they dont wanna play the sports and if they do play sports it's because they got force to play the sports because their parents and they dont want their parents to be mad or sad because they do sports.

Some people are scared because of a sports they might get hurt because of that sports.

They watch TV at home and it show how the people who play sports get hurt by playing sports and they are scared when people are staring at them.

Some people don't want to do the work for the year book because its boring and some people hates doing books stuff because it's boring and they hate books and some people don't like when they read books.

They do'nt want to do any other activities because it's not their type or they just hate doing all the stuffs. they are probably lazy to do that stuff at school and they just hate doing all that's stuff.       ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
79BE4A2D8223,"LIFE DECISIONS

In every part of our life, we need someone to share something with them.

Maybe they are our family or friends.

In these days, people are more self-reliance. They think, we don't need anyone to guidance us.

But I think in every moment of life, we need someone, who had a lot of experts to guidance us.

Father and mother are the best persons, to share our everything in our life.

They have a lot of experience and important matters in life. They can feel us In every situation.

We always should ask from our mother or father, about our life decisions.

we should have someone to hear us and support us.

Our parent experience can be a lesson for us.

Experiences make our life. We should learn something from the experiences.

Life is full of thing, actually new thing. Everyday we meet a new thing in our life. That we don't know what is it? and where is it come from? Our parent are older than us, they know everything. They were in our age and now they're older than us. thats means, they understand better about us and about our situation.

My mom she always feel me. If i am sad even if i didn't tell her she know that I am sad. Because she's older than me. She was in my age before me.

We are like a person that don't know about anything, because everything is new for us. Because we don't have any experiences of the thing.

My uncle, he was 17 years old. He wanted to open a small fast food in our country. He always just listen to himself.

He didn't share anything with anyone until he did the work, than he comes and tell us that what I did.

Everyone was sad about him because he was younger and he don't know about anything.

His mother and father told him to finish school first then open a fast food, but he didn't listened to them.

He leaved the school and started his work. In the first he was so happy, but after a few months he become sad.

When he saw his all friends going to school and he works he felt sad.

He was so regretful, because of what he did. He didn't listen to his parent and he just did what he wants.

Than he came to his parent and said sorry, because of not sharing his idea with his parents.

My grandfather said to him"" I was in your age, I did the same mistake that you did, but in different way. I told you to school is the first important thing in our life, you can't leave an important thing in life"".""I had the experience that why i was trying to tell you that. ""My son always share whatever you have in your mind with the person that you can trust and believe, and listen to them, they will always guide you"".

Finally he understood, what he did was wrong, but he also like to work too.

That time he came to his father and share that he wants to study and work.

His father was so happy that his son come and asked him for showing the good way.

His father guide him and show him that what should he do.

He went to school and also continued his work too.

Right now he's a businessman, he always says"" to us to share anything with your family or friends"".

He said that to us"" the way that I am success and a good businessman was my dad experience, my dad guidance"".

I learn from my uncle that if your mom and dad teach you how to speak and how to eat and.... they also can teach us how to life good.

I always ask from my mom and share my day happens with her.

She hear me and feel me. Sometime before i say anything she know, I'm thinking about what and what I want to tell her. Having the experience are good, you know better how to solve a problem and guide someone who trust you.

If I have a plan for future I will share it with my mom, she support me and guide me.

Experience of the life are best lessons to us, everyone should guidance from experts of their parent or friends.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
B9B02A6FB3F9,"Dear Teachers,

Date: 03/12/19

Address:

Center St Generic_City

In my opinion working in group should be more benefits.

Teacher should let student work in group.

Teacher should be allow students to work in group. There are three reason why should they let student work in group:

Working in group think more stronger and faster. Each of every students can catch a mistake. It would benefits to get more information about what topic they will do it.

Firstly, you can look more than one idea. Secondly, each students can make one question about what they are doing. Thirdly, if you work in group you can be more comfortable with your work.

Your working should have the best idea and should not be any mistake because before to give the work to the teacher every students should look at it.

It would be more interesting to meet another students and know what they can do it, and if you can help in something that they don't it. Also, in some schooler teacher let student to work in group because some students don't feel comfortable to do the work by themselves. Some activities should be necessary to do in group.

For example, when they are doing a project. However, most of the classses have workshit to do in group.

For example, make experiment in a lab, present in front of the class.

Some students say that work in group is more funny than being alone.

Sometimes, teacher don't like to put student in group becasue they observe that when student are in group they just talk about anothers thnig not about what they tell you , but not all the students like that.

In conclusion,

for these reasons is more benefits to work and group than work alone.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
346D75CE413A,"It's good to have afterschool homework club, because it could help to understand the homework and be great at it. For example, I went to afterschool homework club in every tuesday and thursday at my old school for English. I thought it will be bored, but then it was fun and easy to understand. Sometimes in homework clubs, They do fun lesson to under what to do on the homework. For example, at my old homework club, We sometimes have a field trip to the public library to some fun lesson. In homework club, you sometimes get help from the teacher, or classmates. At my old homework club, We sometimes video chat to some famous authors. Sometimes we play fun games with the principal. But there are thing to get used to, Like you need to know if someone is picking you up, or you are ride the bus. For example, I forget my mom is not picking me up, because she was at work. It took me two hours for a ride, because everyone in my family was busy. And you leave two hours later the your regular time to leave school. The goal in Afterschool homework clubs is helping student to understand the subject that have trouble on.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
C78AC0CB25F9,"A positive attitude is the key to success in life. A position of the body or manner of carrying oneself. Do yo prefer a person whit bad attitude or good attitude?, think about it. In my position i agree with the statement, because; people get better communication with others, get more jobs, and students have more opportunities.

Some people think attitude reflect self confidence to society, as positive attitude reflect peace and happiness. For example: When i have a positive atittude; i see more people want to know about me , but when i have a bad attitude nobody want to know me, because they know people with a positive attitude reflect more friendly, furthermore people with positive attitude have better relation with their family, friends and communitie as they energy is more pleasant.

A positive person with good attitude get more jobs. In some companies a positive attitude is a requirement for the employer. People who have a positive attitude do better works. for example: I am waitress and my boss say all the time "" if you want to be a good customer service you need to have a good attitude"" and thats true because when i have a good attitude with the costumers they give me a good tips, but when i have a bad attitude i get bad tips. Customers want a good service, employer want to make good money and companies want a good workers.

Some Schools want students with positive attitude. A student attitude is important because help them to get a better school opportunities. For example: Sports, Science, and others Team's in schools; the good attitude is a requirement if you want to be part of them. Students with a negative attitude have difficulties to connect with the class and work in a group. However, students with a good attitude facility they own work, and the teachers work, because if a student have a bad attitude is more difficult that teacher or coach teach them and help as student is good in those things, but have a bad attitude he/she loss the opportunitie to show their capacities.

In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key to success in life, as important and help to people get more opportunities at jobs furthermore be great in studies and get a better communication with all people, that make a success person in their life.",4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
7CB712FD1253,"There are some some school's that offer 3 years to graduate but then there are some school's that are still doing Traditional way's of the 4 year's of high school and in my opinion is that it is good to graduate early and go to college or the work force but it also depends on the person thats doing all this work to graduate high school or the evenings or night school but people still do it and its good. The people that are doing all this work are hard working people who want to follow through with there ideas and dreams in life and they are paying good for it by studying and working hard throughout high school and they keep on working hard to reach for there goal outside of high school. In my opinion It's a great idea to finish all of high school within 3 years because that's hard work paid off but some people believe that if you stay in school for an extra year that makes you smarter but in some sense that could be true but sometimes people stay the extra year because for 1 they sometime's stay because they fell behind and sometimes it's because they need one type of class for college but in reality the people who did the 3 year's of high school are the truly advanced one's because they did everything within 3 years and its good for them.

if these people go into the work place they have a higher chance of getting the job that they want because they have a high school diploma and the fact that they graduated school early so they that as an advantage for them when they find a job and most jobs are only looking for people that are either in high school or have a diploma because some job's just want people with brains so they could work smarter and not harder but the truth is these people are doing everything to make a living because they worked really hard in high school now they're working really hard at a job and now they are succeeding in life because they were smart and graduated earlier then everyone else

In the case that going to college after graduating the three year's are also good because they want to get into a field of a type of job that they wanted and now they're working even harder for it but in reality its working smarter not harder because they are studying for a career that will give them more money no matter what because they are studying for 4 more years to achieve there dream of becoming something in this world and they are smarter by doing that because a dream job is one of the thing's everyone want's and its good to have a goal in mind.

In my conclusion is that going to college is the better one because It's working smarter not harder and that's the better idea instead of working hard and not being able to get paid enough like the people at the college do so in my state of fact that college if the better choice to go with out of high school no matter if you did 3 years or traditional 4 years of high school the best choice is after high school to go to a college or a university that makes life better in the end for everyone. Some people like to chose the route of hard work but its truly good to head to a college or university after school is over fo0r this person.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
E13F3C0CB738,"Can failure lead to success?

Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.""

Many people who have dreams and goals would agree.

If failure is on the road to success it will give motivation, thought of improvement, and an opportunity to have experience.

Failure doesn't always have to be a bad thing.

Failure will give people that push of motivation many need. If students fail once then they know they have to get up and keep trying. Are many people just going to give up because they failed one time? Let's say somebody is setting a high goal and fail; if that person sets a high goal they will have to understand failure will come in some part of that; it is a reach to get there. As soon as failure kick's in, so should the motivation. If not then nobody will be able to meet the goal of success they want. For example,student is walking into class and spent the whole night studying for this test.

She turns it in and thinks she did well. Turns out that it is the opposite. She has the chance to retake it and is taking the chance. Sometimes expectations don't go the way people would like. That doesn't mean eventually the expectation won't get met.

It just means to keep trying.

Another reason on why failure can bring success is because it gives thought of improvement. Everyone knows the saying ""You learn from your mistakes"". That saying is very true.

If something goes wrong because the way it was dealt with, will the same mistake happen again? Of course not! People see when the mess up or fail after it happens and will try to do better.

That is improvement and it's leading you to success.

Then we will know where to start and where to fix things.

It's apart of succeeding. People who have succeeded can tell others than without at least one fail, they would not of made it to where they are now.

Last but not least, it gives you experience.

If we didn't fail there would be no experience for the next goal. Having that experience of failure will help.

When the goal is met and finally succeeded then there will be an amazing story to tell. Especially because failure was around. Speak on the obstacles that were faced and how to get through without giving up. Having this experience and speaking about it can influence others as well. Maybe some people also have failed but they want to give up, encourage others that failing doesn't mean you still can't succeed.

To conclude, failure can be a big step to success if used the right way. Don't sit there and give up because failing is a way closer to the goal. Use failure as motivation, thought of improvement, and an opportunity to have an experience. In this case, failure is a great thing. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
7248792ECAC9,"Many people believe that success consists of going from failure. because we all human making mistake in our life. being faliure is good for must of peoples. however we all taking lesson from faliure to faliure to be come success in our life. for many resons: fristly,must of students, agree with this statement that Minister Winston Churchill once said. and secondary, part of students did not believe in this statement. however they are thanking we do not want to failure in our life or tests. we want to success once time. previosly must of people agree failure is key is success.

for example: Abraham Lincoln, one of the 16th president of the U.S, once time said in during in civil war said to his people or audience, we have to be strong, does not matter for us how hard is life is it . and he continue his speech he said. whatever success, going from failure to faliure without loos any of enthusiasm. he said never contrition in your past. the constant to be succsess consists of going from failure. and aslo he siad that, this a good convenience for everone in consequence Lincoln, said you guys have to conscious and be awake all the time. this confirm to everyone or to all of us key of failure is in success.

other peoples , did not agree what Abraham Lincoln said. must of them said this is not compulsion or compulsory, they said this is over las conclusive in our decide we want to success one time without lossing any enthusiasm or failure.

In my opinion that "" succcess consists of going from failure to failure without loos of enthusiasm. we agree in this prompt. because before that i said faliure of key is becoming in success in our life we should all battle with failure we all know that way is become austerity. we have to fight with failure we did not want to win us. we want to success,in improve our self.

Many people making a mistake in thier life some of them success, and most of them failure. this is our life.

no mather success congsists of going from failure to faliure. some people dismal when they got failure in thier life.

They are become depression most of them and finally when they got success in thier life they are become happy, and depreciation. of course that"" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
2F56C4AD3F46,"Students should their cellphones for educational purpose, because the reason why they should use their phone it can make things easier for them to use it on there work. The students phone can be used as caculators for their math class. In history class the students can search for the answer and write it down on their paper. If the teacher wants to do an phone activate the students can use their phone to do that activate. The Students will be more active on their work if they had their cell phones with them in school.

In a math class the students can use their phones as caculators for educational purpose in case their actual caculator ran out of batteries. The students will have to use their phone in order to work on their math problems. The students can also use their phone to make a straight line so the students can do their work fast or running out time for their class. The teacher can give the students to take pictures on the board so they can remeber what their work is on tomorrow. Cell phones can be used in many things math class it can help students in their time of need.

In history class cell phones can benefit you if you use it right. Incase the teacher wants you to go on a cite to see which year was it that brought us here and get the answer. If theres a time when a student is about to leave early they can ask their teacher to let them to take picture of the board so the student can write down on their notebook. The teacher can also bring in a fun activate thats related to their class and the students phone so they can play kahoot. If the student wants to know whats happening around the world they can look on CNN 10 for answers. Cell phones can be a real benefit for the students if they given the ability to use their phone for educational purpose.

People might have some disagree meants with the use of cell phones. They might think that it's an distraction for students when they use it. The students need to read books so they can actually get the answers. Some other people might say that cell phones can cause some cheating for their quizzes or test. The that their are some people might say that, not all students can be that way.

In conclusion cell phones should be used for educational purpose so the students can be more active when they are on their phones. If the teacher allows the students to use their cell phones it can bring a lot of interactions with the students. The students can education can be improved because of the use cell phones. The use of cell phones can make school a little bit more fun. The students will be excited when it comes to usuing their phones kahoot will be great the students use it.         ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
EEB113169637,"Dear TEACHER_NAME;

What happened if thers a event but you have to clean up for community service? Is right to do the right thing. Community service is important to the community because in the future the community change and everybody is happy. Some people doesn't wannabe help or they have other things to do. Is the same thing as school. Some students is in Community service.

First reason, that Community service is important because the mayor of the city will be proud. Some people say ''What a mess is here!''. The community service is come for help. When you left trash then later it will smell bad. Some people hated when this happened. Please don't leave thrash on the floor put it in the trash can.

Second reason is that when there's a event the people who work there have to clean up before the event starts. Some people think that takes too much time away but no. They just want to help people and the community. In school is the same thing friends doesn't want to help and some to.

Last reason is that there's too much to clean up and during the night. Janitors need to clean up during the night because when the next day comes it will be clean and neat. Some people clean up their stuff alone and sometimes together.

I think t",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
941A269CE055,"The resources is very limited in our world. How to economize resources? It become a topic. Some businesses have four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. This way may economize resources so school can use this pattern also.

But for this idea people have different opinion. Someone say school should not follow this model by extending the school day two hours because only four-day school students can not learned enough knowledge. But in my opinion I think school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because this pattern is very good for economize resources and four-day school may promote students efficient study.

Some parents think four-day school is too sort for them children can not learned enough knowledge. And three-day weekend is too long. them children may do not study. So parents worry about the foreground for them children.

In my opinion I think school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because this pattern is very good for economize resources. We can do a easy math for this question. How many electric for one lamp? How many lamp in one school? How many school in US? You can image it is a big resources spend just for electric. That is why I am agreed the four-day school.

The four-day school have benefit to student also. Because students need learn five-day knowledge in four-day. It may promote students efficient study. The efficient study is useful for the study and work at future.

The resources is valuable for us. We mast economize them. So, I recomment should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
DE8EAEAC72D9,"Imagine of having your own business by the time you graduate from high school. I think its a good idea for students to commit or take specific courses at a young age for their future lifestyle because you will have more experiences also you can save a lot of money, you don't have to worry about for college. Althogh some people think its a bad idea for students to commit to a career because they just into high school, However they will have more experience by the time they graduate frome high school and live a better lifestyle because they already havea good career and have money and they might have graduate early and started their own family or family business. Some students like to be me a business man or women so the plan to take classes about thoses to topics so they can learn more and they can help the others with their busines.

The first reason why its a good idea to commit to career in a young age is because you will gain more experience and gather information that can help you with your career and have a better lifestyle so you can have everything you need and don't need nobody to help and you can ask others for their advices on hows to gain more experience and some students can take online class. I understand having to plan your career little early in hard because you have to have good grades and enough credits graduate early. So if you want to have better lifestyle you have to put in te hard work and you can't stop unitl you reached your goal and your happy with it. also you apply for jobs to gain as many experience you wanna gain for explam you can work at the fast food resturants and at subway and the doctor offices or at walmart and forever twentyone. and having a business is hard because my dad has one and we barly get to see him because he's so busy and his bussines is not even to close to us is at TN and we get to see him only once a month or two.

The second why having a career is so impartant because you can save alot of money like a lot. Because saving money is good because you can really rich and you have to be selfish in the begging if you want to became something great in life. although you have to spend a lot oof money at first because you having for your classes and programs that your in so you can study what you want and there are some school that will help their students to be succesful in life but have to put in the hard work first if you don't then thats a big problem because your not going to be rich your not going have a lot of money to have good lifestyle. So thats why students need to applying for jobs at age of sixteen and build baby steps to save money and doing good at school and having a better. There is alot of ways for stuents to gain money and save them for explam you make cupcakes at home and sale them at school or other events you can make alot of things a sale them and that how you save alot of money by working hard in school and having a job or making stuff.

The last reason for having your career planed out in a young is to help you in the future weather you have to go college or not and if you have enough credits and your testing scores are good and you don't have a history of getting into a lot of fights and trouble. Then college is for you and you don't have to worry about having to pay for college becuase you can get a schoarship to the best schools ever and college is a important part of your career and life its where you can get more education and help you to become a better at what your doing in the future and if you want to something big you have to work hard like you can't stop because people that put the work they don't stop until they got they want in life and honstley some people have to work hard for everything they want but others don't because the were born with golden life.

Although some its a good idea to have experience with other careers and with making stuff and having alot of money and not playing for college but first you have to put in the hard work in oreder to be commit to a career in a young age because its really hard when you wanna commit to something don't have the goods and good testing scores for in that means you have to do double the work that your already doing. some peple can do anything when they put their brain and mind to it and thats good because if i only foucus in school would have been a straight AB student but i didn't so its hard for me to do that now because there is no time left and what i am trying to say is that don't wait until the same minute to do something specially if you wanna have good career and want to commit to it.                                   ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
128161F8B117,"It is a good idea, a lot of students like to do that, because for them is a good opportunity, is not easier for the students who wanna graduate early but when they finish the school, they have more time and is easy that they think about collage and what they wanna do in collage. Also is depend if the student want to, but for me it's a good choice, the student have to take summer school, be honest it's not a lot of work.

Many students saying that is preferable take the four years because we are young and we have time to think what we wanna do, but not, is logical that the student that wanna graduate early have more time than the student that wanna take for years in the school.

Many students wanna graduate early but their parents saying no, so they can't graduate early because their parents saying that is a bad choice and a lot of things more, each person think different but for me is a really good choice.

For me is a good opportunity because i can think in what i wanna do with my life, because basically i have one more year, but something that happens with the students that graduate early is that they take a brake in that year and when they going to begin the collage they feel tired and they don't wanna go to collage because they feel tired and that is not a reason for not go.

Why not graduate early, if it is a good idea, it can feel free and it can thinking about collage without pressure.

If i wanna graduate early obviously i have to work a little be more, but i will have the chance to have one more year and in that year i can work in something good and productive for my school life. If a student gonna graduate early and in that year do nothing, he will lost his time and that's bad.

So for me it is a very good idea, if i know how to work with my time and i know what i want to do in collage it is a very good idea for the students who wanna graduate early.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
4D816E688FBD,"This Essay Is about:To conserve energy and resources do we have to extening the school day two hours, four-day school week?

My opinion about this question is that we don't need to extend the school day and go to the school four-day a week.

Why? Easy, because if the students spend more time in the school everday, we just loose energy.

We get tired, we are not focus in class, we forget what we learned, affect your communication with your family.

We get tired even now, that we just come for seven hours. If we spend more time in the school, the students are gonna be more tired than normal they are. Getting tired students start loosing they energy and, they do not pay attention what the teacher is saying. Sometimes I feel like I can't anymore my body and my mind need to take a rest. Your mind start loosing power when you get tired. Get tired and do not have a good rest is not healthy.

we are not focus in class.

When you start the day after a good rest, your mind start the day fresh. If your mind is fresh, you get better focus and powerful mind to think about what you are doing. During the day after few hours, you start getting tired and, loosing focus about what you are doing. If we spent more time in class, we gonna get bored and we can start talking with the neighbor, distract the others students and interrupt the class. After the school time students are gonna be so tired (body and mind) that they will want to arrive at home take a rest, leaving the homeworks without do it.

We forget what we learned.

It is so simple forget what we learned during the day, specially if we are going fast and talk about different topics. If we extend the school day, we most see different topics and we will going fast,forgeting about the last topic. This happend because we lose focus,when we are thinking in the differents process and topics. When your mind is process one information (let's say ""Math"") and, you do not even practice for a while, you just get it and, the teacher pass to the next unit (beacuse the period is longer cause the extending school day), you most will forget what you learned last unit.

Affect your communication with your family.

how extending the school day, affect your communication with your family?

Well, let's say the most of the time you are in the school, some parents work during the day. But in the afternoon when the kid arrive at home parents spend time with them. If extending the school day, by the afternoon the students are gonna be more tired than normal they are and, they just will want to take a rest the rest of the afternoon. You have three days of weekend to do what ever you want and, have a conversation with your family?

of course you have an extraday now, but remenber that's just for students your parents still working one more day. The weekend the students can use it for homeworks that mean you do not have much time to have a conversation or pass time with your falimily.

My conclution is: If you gonna get tired, do not gonna be focus in class or you will forget what we learned, it is not a good idea to extend the school day, because at the end do not bring anyhelp for students. And can be worth for some of them. Take a good rest, be focus in class and keep what you learned, those are the students beneficts. The extratime I spent on my homeworks at home plus the school day, it is enough to learnd and be focus on study and get a fresh mind.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
D9B51C663A5F,"""no act of kindness. no matter how small, is ever wasted"".

I agree with Aesop, no kindness is ever wasted.

First,any kindness can help others in life. First, anyone who is going through a rough time needs kind words to get them through it. Second, people who are thinking bad can help by haveing nice, kind, and careing people with them. Lastly, kind words can other people happy and welcomed. By showing kindness others can learn or do the same.

Second, showing kindness can have an impact in your life. First, others will be kind to you. Also, many people will know how to be kind to other people who are thinking bad. Lastly, everyone will know you are a kind and careiing person. By haveing kindness you""ll live a happy lif knowing that u do something good in life.

Lastly, being kind can help the community. First, we can all help pass food to people who are in need of it. Second, by cleaning up we can help keep the street cleans so wild anamils don't come. Lastly, we can have people come together and help the people who are homeless. By helping the community will have more people helping.

In conclusion, being kind to people and helping the community we can live a nice and peacefull life knowing that there are nice people out there being kind to others. I think being kind is everything beacuse if we say bad things to a person knowing nothing about their life can get they more sad and by being nice we can help them by our kind words.         ",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
C02F3803D0D1,"People think that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree with that because impressions is just what you think, always make you think different things, and you never know whats gonna happen.

Impressions is like when you thought somethings, its just what you think about someone or something. For example:My impression is that she is not telling me the truth. you think that she's not telling you the truth but you don't know the truth.

Impressions can make you think different or bad just because how you look at someone or something. For example: If you see someone that has a bad looking, your impression is that he might be poor but, you can change your impression if you see that he has the Iphone of the year, or he has a Lamborghini, so it can make you think different.

When women get pregnant they always get impress and trying to guess what the baby is gonna be. For example: When my mom got pregnant and she had me, her impression was that it was gonna be a girl, and she wanted a girl, but here i am, 18 years old, a big boy and she was impress and sad, but when she see that i was very handsome her impression change she's happy now.

Some people believe that just with their impression you are what they say.

Next time you think that the first impression is impossible to change, you have to think the first impression does not say everything about a person or something.

I hope you never impress by something or someone, that can be different that you thought, thats why we dont judge, God is the only one who can judge.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
1767698C3969,"Do you wish to have healthier school lunch menu?. Imagine your school cafeteria plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods. Many students wouldn't want to eliminate some of there favorite cafeteria foods. Therefore, I believe healthier school lunch menu you could benefit students at school, at work, and at home.

Dear, Dr. Generic_Name

My name is Generic_Name, I am a freshman at Generic_School. I would like to talk to you about a healthier school lunch menu. Ever since these 4 months have passed I've been eating the school lunch. Every time I eat the school lunch, after 30 minutes I would go to the restroom. The food wouldn't sit right nor feel right in my stomach.

The issue isn't just with me, my friend Generic_Name has an allergic reaction whenever he eats something from the school lunch menu. I believe it would be a good idea to have healthier school lunch menu. Because half of our students at Generic_School are obese. Even you know all the food your providing for us is junk food. The pasta has puddles of oil, the burgers don't taste like real meat, the orange chicken isn't even cooked well. All the food you are providing for us is microwaved food.

Instead of all these microwaved food. We could have similar foods as the ones we have right now for the lunch menu. The foods you feed us should be organic like the bread, meat , spaghetti , etc. The school lunch should be worth $3.75. Dr. Generic_Name instead of thinking about yourself think about us a little bit more. Imagine yourself sitting down at the lunch table seeing a puddle of oil on you're pasta tray. Imagine eating rock hard french fries. Please think about it and call me into your office if you ever want to talk about this issue that 75% of the students are having here at Generic_School.

Sincerely, Generic_Name  ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
F094225CAE4F,"I am agree with this idea because is the best opportunity not only to the hispanic people, well for everyone who want to follow his/her dreams, and has responsability or lower resources.

I think is great idea, because some students sometime or usually work. One reason why the students do not go to the high school is because they do not have enough time to do homework, study, or just hey want to make more money.

Rarely students really want to learn, or to feel like they need to go to the college or university, cause they have a few time to go to the high school. This idea is great and amazing to someone really dream and feel that the high school is the door to the college, university, or opportunity to do your dreams real. The advantage is if you finish high school in three years you have more probability to go to the college or university. The disadvantage is that three years would be very stressing and harding time, because you need really to focus in the high school and all that stuff like: homework, worksheet, project, study, or simple attention the class. The good news is you can do anything if you have purpose, if you have motivation and completely focus in your dreams and What do you really want to be or to do?. Do not worry is you feel fear that is normal everybody feel like that about the test, high school, or dreams.

I think is a big opportunity to me; well, I work and really need pass my last year, but sometime feel like ""I cant anymore"", and I want to leave or run of the high school and just work, and work, and work, but everytime I think like that just say me "" NEVER GIVE UP "", always remember everything I did, why am i here?,and How too far wil be go for my dreams?.

Sometime the life is very unjust, cause some people have the opportunity of study withouth work, While others people do not have chooses, and that is the situation where the hispanic people live today. Well, that it's my point and why I am agree with this awesome idea. I have been thinking this system or program will be helpfull and better for every student that the system we have today. My view is if you finish the high school in three years, will be more effective, easy, and fast to be gratuated.

Thank you for your attention. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
DEA1F417949A,"Did you know that people who stay out of trouble, have greater change of succeeding in life. So the city council should take step forward in to adopting the curfew law, because that would keep the teenagers out of trouble. Many teenagers follow the law, but those who do not will be breaking the law. This curfew law is going to help many ways, some teenagers stay out late socializing with they are friend; many times they are late to school the next morning. The benefits of this law would be that, it keeps the teenagers safe and out of trouble.

If the curfew is adopted, it is going to keep the teenagers out of streets late at night. Me and my friend sometime go to 7-eleven late at night during weekdays around 10;30 p. m. If the law was in order right now, we would be breaking the law. On the weekend some teenagers might want to stay out longer with they are friends: socializing, making new friends, and building a good friendship. But a law is a law, If you are still out on the streets after 12 a. m then you would be breaking the law and going to be in trouble.

This curfew law will set a boundary for teenagers who always come home late at night. This law might cut down little bit of they are freedom, but it is for they are own good. My mom always tells me to be home by 9:00 p. m on the weekdays, but I am always an hour late. When the curfew law is in order, my mom knows that i will be home by 10 p. m, because i do not like to break the law. It is better to be safe and out of trouble than getting in trouble and breaking the law.

Many people would disagree with the curfew law because some teenagers work and do not have transportation; they have to walk from work to home after those hours. There-for it is parents job to make sure they are kids make it home safe. As parents you never want to see your child in danger or in trouble on the streets. The city council should adopted the law in order, so the teenagers will be out of streets late at night and home safe with they are family.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
8658D3ABB67F,"The meaning of this is to save all the energy that we can. In all the schools spend a lot of energy using; cell phones, internet or using the computers doing test, works or homeworks. It is probable that students and teachers are not agree to extending the school day two hours.

First, the schools don't need the follow that model and also to extending the school day two hours. If all the schools are agree about to extending two hours more, then they are braking the rule to converse more energy and resources. It is a lot of things that schools can use and the principal thing that school are using is energy. In the school office all the teachears are working all the time making copies, works and they are doing a lot of files.

Second, it's not necessary to extending two hours more in the schools, students can do campaigns to how reduce the energy or making groups of people and try to do things that help to conserve more energy. In this case we can created proyects that help better to try to not spend a lot of energy in fact to try to conserved. And then conserve some of energy.

Third, some of the students can created devises for extract the solar energy and used. Teachers can help to support to the students creating more ideas or proyects. Maybe is not going to change as how much energy we are using, but it is some that helps to reduce the energy, the point is to try to conserve the energy that we are using.

At this point to conserve energy and resources schools can follow that model, extending tha school day two hours. They have a lot of time to make more proyects maybe better ideas to how conserve the energy.

In all the cases the people, students, and teachers are not agree to extending the school day two hours. Beacuse it is something that we can stop it, making proyects to conserve de energy and resources. To sharing the campaings to anothers students.        ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
49605B65EA8D,"Dear sir:

It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing.'' But i think we always need i break during our activity and work, when we work alot we can't make all dreams true, but remember that we something have a family and this can't cause family problem, if you are not expent time with them.

During work time all the employee has to have break . because the help everybody, to have a good mental work in their job. no break during work time, can't cause bad discuss, bad service bad comunication with all constumers, family problems.

Break can't help the empoyee to be good at work, and the way we can't have a good comunication with everybody and also with all constomers.

And also if you have family, you can't prevent problems problems with them too

. Sometimes some people work alot but they forget that they has a family in home waiting for them, that's why alot of people divorse, because they don't have a good cominication. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5
9E49399B42B4,"Some people belive that students should be required to take a music, a drama, or an art clases. Should students be required to take a class in arts, or should such clases be electives?

I belive that students should be require to take these clases because it plays a great rolls in our lives. students should take these clases because they're part of our daily activity. Some students are really good at arts, and some are good at music, while the others are good at drama. So such clases should be allowed in schools for students to take.

I also agree with those that says that students should be required to take clases like art, music, and drama because some students wants to become an artistic, some wants to become a musician, while the others want to be a dramatist, so it should be allowed in school for students to take them. I believe that through arts and music, or even a drama, people are able to express their emotional feelings, or their passed lives. As for me music and art should really be allowed in schools because through those subjects people will be able to express their grievances.

Some people may say these clases should not be require for students to take and such clases should be electives because not evryone are good at them.

Well it's true, but these clases are really helpful to the society because not everyone have the face or the abilies to really express their emotional feelings to peolpe, however, people have their passed life stories to tell, but they don't know how to let them out. Probaly through arts, music, or even drama they'll be able to express them out to the world. Through this subjects many people are rich today, and many people was able to let what had been in them for years upon years out, so they should be required for students.

For instance: Beyounce, Rehanna, Nici and so on. I believe those people didn't just come up to become rich today they study music because that was their goals in life.

In summary, music, arts, and drama should be required for students to take, and such clases shouldn't be electives in school or for students.",3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
9872487371ED,"Imagine a place where honesty is the best policy.

I disagree with the old proverb because honesty might hurt peoples feels around you, honesty can make people not like you no more, and honey can not be used in a matter that you speaking of.

First when you tell people how you really feel about them it might hurt you in a way too, when people find out how you feel about them it can be good or bad, when people tell true about someone it may hurt them, and how people tell you how they feel about you it can be hurtful.

Second when you tell someone how much you do not care about them can make you look bad, when you have a friend that you tell stuff that you do not like about him can be hurtful, when you talk about people in front of them can not help your friendship with them, when you said hurtful things about them they will not like you any more,and how you tell people about what you do not like about them it can be harsh.

Finally when you tell people how you really feel in a different way can still be hurtful, the way you tell someone you do not like them can be more hurtful to them, when you speak of some one but in a different way can still grateful of hurtful, when you talk about someone in a nice vice but it can still be mean, and how you talk about someone is up to you no matter what you say.

There for you should not tell people how you feel about them no matter what you said or what they said about you.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
92B8F2F85C44,"Although some say ""Unless you have try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" Based on my experiences I do agree to Emerson's statement because life isn't easy you have to try new things in life, you have to risk yourself to walk through that bigger path and try not to look back to something you couldn't accomplish back than, instead look up, stand striaght and tell yourself ""I know I can master new/harder things that are to come my way.""

Some say if ""You don't try to do something beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow."" How are you suppose to grow if you haven't master something you can't accomplish? Life puts us in a sitution where not everything is going to be perfect, not everything is going to be rainbows and butterflies you have to challange youself, you have to show everyone that just cause you messed up once doesn't mean your going to make the same mistake again. You have to go through the rain to get to the rainbow, you have to be prepared for the big situtions that are coming your way. You have to learn how to handle the bigger situiton to know how to handle the smaller sitution when it comes to you. Don't let smaller things effect you at the end of the day the sun is still shinny brighter than ever, challange yourself so you can master and accomplish the situtions.

Therefore if you can't accomplish something you've tried so much you shouldn't give up but also don't stress about it too much either. If you think what your doing is the best than don't look back and keep doing what you've already started, life will be harder sometimes but it's up to you to show that you can master things you haven't been through. People might think you can't handle what your going through, people will laugh at you for not being able to master something that is easy for them but harder for you, you can't just stop trying just because you feel like you can't no more. Take a deep breath and I promise that at the end of the day you'll be happy because you master something you thoght you couldn't handle, but not only that you'll be happy because you didn't give up and you showed all these people that didn't beileve in you that you did it!

Others say that ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" I agree with this side of the argument because it's honestly the truth you have to master new things or you'll never see yourself growing, for an example if you just had an argument with your sigificate other and you break up with him/her your really just throwing things down the drain instead of sitting down to talk to that person to try to solve what went wrong. Try to master things so you grow not just kick things down the road and think that their going to come back to you. Maybe that was the first break up and he/she actually wants to break up, are you going to let her/him to let you go just like that or are you going to ask him/her for a reason? Get on their shoes, sometimes things happen for a reason and if what ever your going through hits you in the back of the head is for a reaon, don't confuse yourself on accomplishing something and showing off.

In conclusion some things might be harder for you than others but you shouldn't end up backing up and telling yourself you can't do it, that it's too hard. Instead you should do the opposite and tell yourself that you are better than what you think you is and that your going to master lots of things with or without someone by your side telling you ""You can do it."" This is my side of the statement I agree with and the way I look at things when I feel like I can't master big/small situtions.                         ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.0
5F998012DDCD,"The argument related to distance learning has often been a topic of interest to many people. Nowadays, many scholars support the idea of distance learning and it has been getting a great acceptance among many societies. Although some people think distance learning make students careless in doing their work, nevertheless, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it saves the time they would spend by going to school and makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage.

To begin, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it saves the time they would spend by going to school. For example, it can take ten to forty minutes for a student to go to school. This shows that going to school takes students' precious time and makes them unproductive. Clearly, no one wants to waste his/her time on transportation.

Furthermore, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage. For instance, students who spend their time on technological materials know more how to accomplish technology related tasks in a short period of time compared to students with no experience. This proves that taking online classes prepare students for higher education and learning. Obviously, the use of technology is growing fast in this age.

Overall, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. This is because distance learning saves the time they would spend by going to school and makes them more effective and efficient in their technology usage. In conclusion, schools have to offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home.",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,5.0
C50BE3C76571,"I dont like becuase the student forget all information of the year in the vacations. Teachers or educators feel that the summer because students do not retain information.

I thick when the student have a spring breack or summer vacation we need study in vacatio for not forget all information, we take in the year of the school. Is necessary to be ready to next year. we need take care for not fall the clases.

The teacher well be ready to very year cause sometime the students well be ready for start the year. I think the students they need prepare every year after the summer or other vacation.

Is not bad have vacation in the year because all time study is no good, because the maind no have a relax, the maind need to distract in other thing.

I am not good student but a try to get one is so dificult for me cuse I'm not speak englihs good, but this is not scuse for not study in spring break or in summer, this is for every day to bad studen to good student. nothing is impossible to go better to better.",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
73A997703BC3,"Does technolgy have a posistive or negative effect in your life? To me it does because it allows me to complete many things without having contact with others. For example when you wanna order something online you dont have to calll you can just order it online with out contaction anyone.

Technology can help you in manys ways. One way it can help you is by if you dont know the answers to a homework you can go on a computer or even a phone and look up answers and wedsites of where your answers can be. Another way is if you need to do technology work need to be done at home you can use a computer and send an email to your teacher without contacting her about it when your done. To me i see this as a positive effect on people because it can help you succed in school and complete things you need to do as well.

There are so many other ways technology can help you as well. when you wanna sign up for soccer you can regrister online. All you have to do is answers qustions put your information and once your done putting your information in you can pay for it and once you pay your coach will get an email that you singed up for his team. Technology for kids is positive when they are younger than 5. Letting them use phones and tablets would be good so they can learn how to say , words , letters, numberrs, and learn new things before they go to school and already know a couple things. So that to me is a posetive effect with technology

For sum people negative effects could also be negative for them also. When a parent dosent know how to use a phone it can be stressfull for them becuase they wouldnt know what to do unless someone is there to help him and do the things the parent needs to do on the one. Also another negative effect is when if you have all work saved in a computer and you get your computer wet and it wont turn on how are you gonna show your boss or teacher your so that would have a big negative effect on the worker. These are sum ways technology can have a negative effect on you.

To me technology has a poseitive effect in my life because I can be able to do more things and not have to worry about and contact people to help me do it. I also beleive for other people it can help aso for like, work, bank, food and more . But sometimes they can also be negative things but negative things also happen in life so its okay for that to happen. So Technology is good for life becuause it can bring posetive effect.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
AD6986B56719,"Michelangelo once said ""The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" I agree with this because we should never set our standards low even if it means we will reach our goal quicker; we should always have a strong mindset in completing and tackling hard tasks no matter how hard it can be. This can be mentally be difficult for some people because they like to quit when something is too hard for them, this shows how weak minded a person can be and end up never completing that achievement. If you're setting your achievement low knowing that you can complete it, why do it then? It will be a waist of time and you'll most likely get no satisfaction out of it.

Waking up in the morning and looking at your to do list and seeing that hard goal you have to complete can really throw off people. They look at it and starting off their morning can put them in a bad mood. This can mean that the person is not mentally strong enough to finish his or her task, it can take weeks, months, or even years; some people just dont have the patience for it. This most likely means that you'll never complete anything difficult in your life and end up always choosing an easy goal knowing you can complete it in a short amount of time, That type of mindset will never get you anywhere in life, no one will want a lazy person working for them in the future; they'll want a hard working and determined individual.

A person should always set a task for them that is hard, but something they know they can complete. This can be working overtime at your job for that sports car you've always wanted or even just saving up money for retirement. Setting your goal low can mean the person will never grow up to be a strong individual or even be a hard worker. After completing your goal you should always get lots of joy, happiness, and satisfaction; if you're not getting any of those you're doing something wrong. It should never feel like your goal was just a waist of time or you did this for nothing, you should come out of your goal as a stronger and happier person.

Having a negative attitude can play huge role in why you're not completing hard goals. Two keys factors in completing a hard task are having the right mindset and having a positive attitude; Having neither of these will already be putting you in a major disadvantage. Through out your day you should always have a positive personalty, who would want to talk to an angry and negative person? These are very difficult skills to learn it takes patience and time, but already having these two key traits can put you in the biggest advantage for completing your hard task. Not lots of people embrace these because they think they are useless that it has nothing to do with your mind but more about the actions of the person.

In conclusion I highly agree with Michelangelo's statement, it can sometimes bring out the worst in us but that is how we grow and learn as a person. This quote separates the lazy week minded people out there from the hard working, strong minded, and positive people. Setting a hard task and taking the time to complete can influence yourself into completing harder goals you have planned for yourself in the future. This is how successful people are born and become who they are and make a name for them self, no millionaire would ever tell you to set your standards low just because you feel like you can't complete a hard goal; they would tell you to push yourself mentally and physically no matter what the cost may be. Some people are just born without that mentality that most successful people posses, you cant teach lazy but you most certainly can teach hard work, determination, striving, and dedication.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,3.5
4F158CCF45AC,"First, i would say i agree with most of the student that they are intersting to finish their high school in three years,and in my opinion that is good for them so, they can have more years for college and some of the students have to do that to graduate early for example, i am one of them i have to finish the high school in three years because when i came to united states i came too old and i didn't take the freshman year in united states that is why i have to graduate in three years.

Most of the students are preparing for good colleges and some of the colleges you have to stay so many years to finish them. and also from my experinse it is hard enough as it as in four years but i know so many students have done it before and they sucssed on it. and i know some student have done it too but in 2.5 years. and i almost have done it and it have been good for me but it need alot of work and you have to study hard and foucces in your school and do your homwork and get good grades and don't do any pronlems in school becasue if you did any thing wrong you are going to stay more years at the school.

it is good to graduate early whenn you are young so you will have alot of years in college to be a heigher education. at the end i would say and support every one that want to graduate early because it is good for their future and i have to say thank you for the people that they are helping me to do that. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
75D13F3E0B2E,"Most students who want to graduate before the years, that they should be take. Students with the capacity of make their mind strongest, go to their limits, and make one year early. Schools that allow students make more short their school years, if better for most of students who want get their diplomas, enter college, and start a career. Students who have a lot responsibilities and their want a diploma. These program is good to make steps in life. I think college do not have a specific age, just with your goals to make everything without leave school is strong enough to make a year early.

Those plans do not make problem, if just a way to finish what you want many people admire those people and see their potential. when a student have a early year because want a start to make a goals. If you see, passed, and remember high school lesson you will be fine, if you study and make your task these option will be good. Many reasons that take people to get these program, if because they usually do not have enough money, have to work, and need to study at the same time, everyone do not have the same opportunity opt for study during summer or online classes.

If you analyze students work after school, they want to get a diploma and make a force one year, when they make get one year less that say you are study and passed your classes different can be when teachers give you a year when you don't know nothing and teachers approve your year that's different go college when you have no idea how react to many classes than you never see or never show during the period of high school, the students that study during summers or in the evenings are focus in their classes that's because they finish fast and go college to involve in a new goal.

Example if you go school and need to work you'll to opt for study in summer or in the evenings that's your best option, students follow to take courses because it's a better idea maybe do not be the same learning, but with effort you can advance. Is not important how many years do you spend in high school, the think is what is your percent of each class. how you can involve in college: studying, focus, and remember what you see or learn.

In conclusion each student have different way to think how want to study and how many time want to spend in high school. Most students who take this decision if because they have to work and can spend much time, and they sacrifice some summers or evenings to get close their goals and each one do what is more beneficiary for their way. For me, if a good option opt for finish fast school and start a new stage in our life.",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
960D7C072801,"Hello Mr. Manager I would like to vist your work space. Visiting your work space could help me learn about how you work and everything. Visiting your work space can help others understand what your do. Visiting your company could help understand how things are made at your company and what your goal is for the future of your company. This visit will help me understand how the people are too.

Visiting your company could help people understand what you do at your work space. Looking at a work space can help people see what the company is working on. Also at a company while they are working help people see how things are here and if they like it or not. Letting people see your work space will let them know what kind of company this is.

Opening your company to people would help them understand what kind of things you need to work here. This could help chosing colleges and schools. Instead of wasting time looking all the colleges looking here could help narrow the options a bit. Knowing what course to take will help me pick what college I want and will help me narrow the list instead of looking all over the place.

Letting people vistit your company would them see what your working on. Letting them come in and everything could help them know what they might be getting in the future. Helping people understand is a good way to keep your company out there in the world.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
DD96F81877AF,"The one place in the world that

I would like to visit is France.

I wanted to visit France because french was my favorite language and when I watch TV some

TV shows brings up some staff about France and the French people and if I wanted to visit France I would want to know staff about them. That is why I would like to visit France.

If I visit France what I would like to visit and see is the museum that they have. I know that France have the most biggest museum in the world it has everything about all the history of all the countries. I would also like to visit the tower that they have in Generic_City I wanted to visit the tower because its really high and it looks cool to me . What

I want to find out is about what people do on holidays such as Christmas, what they eat and about their education .These are the things I would like to see and visit.

This is why I want to visit France and what I want to see and do when if I visit France.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
8D0B6FE098F1,"Should students take the programs that the school district is offering, which is to allow student to graduate high school in only three years instead of taking full four years.

It is clear that finishing high school in just three years can be the best opportunity. One can be to get high school out of the way. Not everyone likes high school year, therefore it is the great way to graduate early and accomplish to get into your dream college school. This program that let you take courses during the summer can be a great option to finish high school quickly, the aim of this study is to, so students get out of high school, and have enough time to start processing and think about what want to do in college or start working to help out their parents on necessary things, such as, bills, rent, and etc.

However, not all student would take this action, it emphasized that students may not have time, it can affect their sleep schedule, and not completing school. Some, of course, may think that you're not learning fulfilling, for instance, regular school year is like ten months and if one take the programs, you're only taking extra courses during the whole summer, that's like saying you're missing a whole ten months of school. In addition if I were to take this program, I would really do as much as I can during the summer courses, and courses to get extra credits that i need for the colleges that I;m applying to. and soon I'll start working, and apply for a scholar ship, also applying to universities or colleges that i would like to attend to,

In conclusion, many people may not agree or join the programs, we all have different opinions, different beliefs, this program can help many students to start off thinking majors,work, so therefore, I'd recommend students to take this offer, and see where it can take you. I can assure one can accomplish something for their goal in the future. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
71F27422C5FC,"My friend, Generic_Name, is a very good student, he will not go to bed unless he finishes his homework. However, because the school has changed the system from five-day school week to four-day school week, he had to do more works than usual. He cannot sleep for a few days, he did not done all his works, and his grades tend to be bad. His parent decided to move him to another school. Changing from five-day school week to four-day school week has lots of disadvantages, mainly these three reasons: students do not have time to do more works, students move to other school due to the pressure of homework at school tend to rises, and students do not focus on learning because of three-day weekend.

To start with, students do not have time to do more works. let say that if we have an extra day to review all works that we done to prepare for the test on the next day, it would done well than when we just have more few minutes. For example: before the school change the schedule, I have a whole day to review my works to do the test, now I have to rush off my feet to review my works and that make me completely exhausted. Whenever the test would start on Monday, the students will have three-day weekend to do so, that is a completely waste of time.

To continue, students move to other school due to the pressure of homework at school tend to rises. For example: My friends, Generic_Name and Generic_Name, they are good students, but because their homework is too much, they could not done all homework, they had to stop all the club activities to catch up their classes, their grades went bad, so their parents decided to move them to other school to help them study easier.

Some people believe that the school has four-day school week is better because they can have more time to learn and relax, they are wrong because having four-day school week make their time rush and their have to run to catch up the schedule.

And the last, students do not focus on learning because of three-day weekend. For example: Generic_Name, a student from my class, he usually absents from school, since the school change the schedule, he started to go to school more often, but he did not study, he went around and talked what he did in the last three-day weekend, his grade was bad, but he did not care.

In conclusion, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week to conserve energy and resources, but the school does not have to because school is where people come and learn new world, to explore more what are we capable and able to do, we are not wasting the resources, so why we have to adopt four-day school week? Please write a letter to the local government of the city to change the schedule of our school. We are not using resources to waste, we are using resources to make a key to open the ""Success Gate"" leads to the bright future for our generation and the next America's generations.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0AC3C87DC51A,"If you looking for a hard worker make sure he wrights you a good resmay. If he wright you a good resmay and tells you what was his good expriens. You should ask him why was he so intrested into this job and why. ask him how searouse would you take this job and why. check for his record,ask just to make sure if he or she not into any badthing's. Ask him or she what make's him or she conterable the job they want.

Make them feel conterable what they are seeking for ask him or she how they want to work like. Make sure to ask what was their fist jobs where they lived and name of the place they worked at. Ask them a good reason why they should have the job they are looking for. Ask them what collages they went at how long they were there for. Ask him or she how long are they trying to work for.

Ask him or she like how long are they trying to wrok for in their jobs they are trying to get hierd from. If him or she is trying to get hierd and they dont wright a resaymay or show up not looking profectional,they are not the right person whos not trying to get hierd. if you going to and interviwe make him or she drees up nice,so you wuold get hire. Make sure you show up early not late. if you keep doing that to a inerviwe you will not get hired,and you will not have any more chancese.

When you doning a interviwe they can ask as many question as they want you can also ask them back to them too. if you intervewing a person or they at you make sure you listing and making eye contact at all time. before interveiwing make sure you practice at home so when you go to your interveiw you wont be nervose. Or pratice with some you now so you would get used to it or wright a peace of paper so you know what to say the next day with no problem. if you can not make any eye contact and you get nervose while you are in the interveiw ask him nicely if you could have a little practice with him or you could got some where is quite.

Ask waht's their expreance on what they like doing and when they get accepted on what they were looking for.  ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
59CE34172C44,"In my opinion it's a good idea to change the cafeteria menu, because in my school some time I have good menu but most the time I have bad food like class of food, and a lot of people don't like it, because every week they do the some food, that's why meny students they don't like cafeteria menu.

I think it's a good idea to change the price of the menu, because some students do not have money for buy lunch, and some people don't eat because don't have money, more when the cafeteria has a good menu.

In my opinion it's a good idea to know what menu has every day in the cafeteria, all the student want to know what is the menu every day.

I think the more import thing is change the time of one hour lunch because most the student want to talk with friends, and some student after eat, they want to go to one class room and talk about classes with the teachers.

In my opinion it's a good idea to change to a new menu because most of the students don't like the cafeteria food, for example in my school most the time I have bad food because they don't want to change the menu of the cafeteria, and all my friends we talk about the food and they said that most the people they don't like the cafeteria menu. Another importation thing about price of food, most of students don't have money to buy food because the price of the menu is high, it's good idea put all the price down and the students that don't have to much money can buy, and it's good idea to know what food the cafeteria has every day, for example they has to put a calendar in the fron door of the cafeteria and all the students can see what day has a good food. it's a good idea to change the lunch time, for example my school, I have one hour of lunch and after eat I can go anywhere, but most the time I go to my class room to do homework, or talk with my friends and I can learn more because they talk more about classes, games or friends. This it's a good idea for change all the thing about cafeteria menu.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
AF39DC7FF677,"Dear, Principal

These kids should be allowed to participate in the sports and activities. the kids a your school try very hard to get over a D to participate in your activities. these kids wake up ever morning to go school to study and work hard. if you let these wonderful kids participate in the activities trust me they will try harder to get better grades and to make your school top in the state. these kids just don't want to work they want to have some fun with their friends. but once their fun is over they must go back to work. thank you for letting me share my opinion .            ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
EEB58B11D40C,"I disagree that the principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity cause some students just have lots of work and some students just don't want to do it. First of all,students have lots of work to do like homework,chours, projects, and etc. These things are a lot for some students to handle. adding a extracurricular activity that students must participate in would increase some students stress and could cause students to fail in school cause of how much work they have to do and complete. Finaly, some students just don't want to do it. Beause most students would finish their work and hang out and talk with their friends. If students where forced into participating in at least one extracurricular activity it would decrease the amount of time each student would have spending time with their friends. In conclusion, I think that what the principal decision was not a good and was a very very bad.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
49718724CB84,"Does the people that have mastered something can grow, even if they do not try nothing else? Some people believe they are very okay only with what they have mastered. People knows they could master one profession, but they also know they wont grow in nothing else if they do not try nothing else. If someone decides to only master in one thing that is okay, but that person's knowledge will only increase on what he master, nothing else. People cannot grow if their mindset is stuck with what they mastered and they wont increase in knowledge.

People cannot grow more if they stick only with what they mastered. For example, Ms. Generic_Name, a really good looking woman, had a store for plants and she also teaches about plants. One day Ms. Generic_Name had to let some kids know that the plants do not grow by itself, people make them grow. She called the kids to the back of the store to show them apple's seed. Ms. Generic_Name told the kids that she used to take care of them but she stopped, because she thought that once the plants grow enough, she would not have to deal with that again. She saw the plant standing and she thought her work was done. She did not take care of her plants no more because she thought they were okay in that position, but she did not know that the plants were not gonna grow more. That is exactly what happen with people that mastered something and they just stick with that, they did not try nothing else and now they are just steady they can't grow no more. Thus, if people believe they are okay with what they mastered and they don't try nothing else, they wont grow no more.

Knowledge is one of the things that mostly deals with growth. For example, Ms. Generic_Name had the knowledge of every plant. At first Ms. Generic_Name did not know that she had to take care of them, at least until they could be strong enough. Now that she have years on plants she knows a lot. She did not want to stick with what she knew and now she is grown in knowledge. She is in college studying more about different types of plants from other countries. Thank to her enthusiasm for plants, Estency Generic_Name is now one of the biggest specialist on plants in the world. Nobody should be comfortable with knowing just what they want to know, people should start seeking more for knowledge based on what they want, just as Ms. Generic_Name did.

Some people may say that people could grow if they have mastered only once, because they only need whatever they have passion for, or whatever they want to do. For example,Generic_Name went to college with the dream of being a constructor and he graduated from college, now he is a constructor but not how he wanted to. Generic_Name could have being an architect but he decided to be less; however, people should seek for knowledge and not only stick with one master. People could get master at something but after that people have to be open to learn knew things every day.

In conclusion, people will never grow if they do not try out. A person's knowledge increase with the amount of time and interest. Knowledge is one of the things that most deals with growth. People could just get their master, but is better to always be open to learn more, ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
2D8464A3BD5B,"One year ago. I though that business was the career that I wanted to study, but it was really hard to me. I could not do anything good in that class. I was fail that class and I was really stressful I did not knew what to do. I realized that business it was not for me, but I though that was to late to change my decision. I talk with my counselor and she said that I could change the career. So, I

decided to chose another career and now I know what career it is the right one for me. I do not know if I going to change it again, because I can be a undecided person. As well, I realized that happens every time that it was normal. I talk with my classmate, and they say that same thing happen with them. Although some say that is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can select courses in their high schools to help them improve in their right career, actually it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them and students can be undecided in what they want to study.

Some say that is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can select courses in their high schools to help them improve in their right career. The only problem is that they do not know that is a problem for students. Everyday I heard students, classmate or even my friends that said '' This class is really hard for me, but I can not change it because this class help me improve my career"".

That words make me think that they are unhappy and stressful.

The best way to help students is that they can change a new career. Maybe that career that they are starting are not for them or students can be undecided in what they want to study, and they just pick one.

There is a lot of reasons why is a bad idea that students commit to a career at a young age, but I just have two of them.

In addition, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them. The dream of all kids it is to be like their parents. They want to study the career that their parents studied, even go to the same university they parents go. Sometimes is different their parents put pressures on them to studied a career that they dont want. So, students chose the career that their parents studied or they parents wants them to study . Then they realized that the career they pick is not right for them. This is a problem because now students are unhappy and stressful. Sometimes they wants to quit school because they think school is hard for them. When is just because they pick the wrong career. If someone do a statistic about how students feel about their career that they chose. I think the probability of that students said that they think the career they pick is not for them will be above of one hundred percent.

Also, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students can be undecided in what they want to study. There are a lot of career that students can pick, it is difficult just pick one. Students can find skills that help them in another career. Even though their skills are good in the career they pick before. They decide to pick another career. Sometime the decision that students takes are not the right one, but they continue experiment new careers. That is basically life is about, decision. When students takes a wrong decision in their careers. they are learning. Maybe students decides to learn two careers or more than two they take different course or classes to achieves their goals. I think students can be undecided in what they want to study and that is the best thing that help them in their career, is good that students can experiment different courses.

In conclusion, it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students might select a wrong career that is not right for them and students can be undecided in what they want to study. Sometimes students can be very impulsive and can chose whatever career they want, but they not realize what career is the right one. Also, students sometimes could not decide what career they want to study. The best way to help students is to let them know what they want to learn. I think students will be more decide in whatever they want to study.      ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
B18CF330D3CD,"One thing I would like to accomplish is to lose weight for three big reasons. The first big reason is to do it for my health. The second reason is that I want to inspire other people that might be overweight and give them hope that they can lose weight. My Third and final reason is that losing weight is just better for me in general it would boost my self esteem and help me be not so self conscious.

To better explain my first reason I will talk more about it. The reason was that losing weight would be better for health. You see bad things can happen to you when you are overweight such things as diabetes that is a sickness that is a result of being overweight. Some overweight people find it difficult to walk or to do something simple because they are carrying all that extra weight on them. In fact i sometimes find it hard to do exercises in gym class that most people would find easy to do. There are many heath risks when it comes to being over weight and thats one of the reasons I want to lose weight.

The second reason I want to lose weight is because I would like to inspire other people that are overweight to try and lose wight. If I lost weight that could encourage other people to lose weight as well because they can say to themselves a person who was were I am lost weight and I can do the same. I have a saying it's ""when you help someone you help everyone"" an example for that saying would be if I helped someone want to lose weight they might feel the need to help other lose weight. So I hope that I could influence a sort of butterfly effect starting with me inspiring someone to lose weight and that person inspiring someone else and so on and so on. If I lose weight knowing that I lost weight not only helping myself but also others I would be proud of myself.

My third and final reason to lose weight is that it would be better for my self esteem and help me be not so self conscious. If you have any insecurities than you know what is like to want to get rid of those insecurities. One of my many insecurities is my weight and I think that if I got rid of that insecurities it would better my self conscious and make me think good about myself. I just plainly think that I would be better off losing weight because I would think better of my self.

In conclusion one thing I want to accomplish in life is lose weight. There are several more reasons I could list but those are my main and biggest reasons I want to lose weight. I want to lose weight because it's healthy,because I want to inspire people to do the same,and because I want to boost my self esteem. Losing weight is the one thing I want to do in life and helping others is also something I love doing.",5.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5
C77A361A7476,"Is it good for students to to finish high school early?. Students should be allowed to take classes early because they do all their work in time , they take classes over the summer or even after school. They also get to go to college faster. They also get to walk and get there diploma faster. The student get's to go to college to study for what he wanted to study for.

The students who study harder or finish the work they do should be allowed to finish school in three years. If they study hard and take extra classes let them fish early. That's all up to them , if they care about their study let them walk early. The student put's his or her mind set to finish school early witch is great for them. The student who finishes school gets more time off of school. But at the same time more stress on them.

At the end of the day the more students that finish school early have one full year of no school. They get to focus on what they wanna go to college for to study. But that's only some schools, some schools don't even allow students to finish school in three years. In some schools they make you do the full 4 years of high school. Some schools probley want the students to do the the full 4 years of high school because they probley need a class on 12th grade.

If some schools let some students finish in the 3 years then the school wont be as packed. The schools need more space cause of more students coming in. They need to have more space and it would be less work for them. But at the same time it would take some time off the teachers. Some teachers have the time to help students and some don't.

Welp that's all have to say about schools letting students finish school in three years. I really think schools should let students finish early because they work hard to get there.

If the student finishes his or her work they should be allowed to walk early. I think that all schools should allow all the students who want to finish early to let them. It's good for the student that means he or her is educated and can get a good job and go to college to study for something really good. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
F93A5B7E57AF,"Being ourselves in a world strongly influenced,manipulated,and corrupted by people. Make a big difference in our lives .This also make us to know, who we are. Because we should not change our personality,our cultures,and how we were educated.

Although being like other people make us to socialize easily. Nevertheless, we should not change our personalities. Because our personality is what help us to become our dreams in reality. For example there is a case of two guys who were twins one of them was nice all the time, and the other rude because he was influenced by his friends all the time having even a weird personality, that nobody liked. They attended to the same school their last year in high school, the one who was rude had many problems and one of those problems took him to death, however, his brother who was upset by his death, never stopped being a nice guy and having a great personality,he graduated from high school and attended to one of the best universities in the United States. Additonally having a real personality without any change help us to be more honest with ourselves. I remember last year in my math class my teacher told us to check our assigment by ourselves. In the honor system and I only got six of the ten questions right which was a sixty percent I told her the true and after she checked she gave points extra, she said that I deserved for being honest. In fact our personality gaves us an attitude and help us to be honest with ourselves.

Another important reasons for which we should keep being ourselves is because we should not lose our culture. Because our culture makes us special and different to the rest. For example there is a story of a girl who moved from Colombia to Canada where she always practiced her culture even made a club with her traditions that colombian people in Canada visited,so she became famous really fast and made a lot of money. Additionally it is important to keep our culture in anywhere because the culture is an important legacy that children adapt from their parents. One amazing example of this is Leonel Messy a great soccer player, from Argentina, who has been living in Spain for a long time. However he is still practicing his culture and does not change his accent thanks to his family which made him to beloved by all Latin America. Therefore keeping practice our cultures will make our families, and others to be proud of us

Also it is important to be ourselves, to show how we were educated. Due to our education is what define by itself how we threat other people. For example on the newspaper was written a story of a guy who teached a long time ago English to his students in a particular way giving them candies when they participated,he never changed his method and all his students got good scores always. Actually our education is most the most need in our life. For example my uncle graduated from high school and ten years after that. He attended to college and the university where he studied languages now he has a family an really good life,but he never stopped being the nice man he was and still being today.

in conclusion,we must continue to be ourselves in anywhere, anytime to have a real and nice personality. That will open doors to become our dreams true. Also to keep our culture alive for the next generations. Making our families proud of ourselves. Finally it is important to be ourselves because it shows the way we were educated. Because a good education brings a good life. Therefore being ourselves bring so much good things to our life, that we should not change by the influence of other people.               ",4.5,3.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
858DFA7A9980,"Good Morning,

I just want to start this letter by telling you a little bit more about my interest towards your company . As a matter of fact, the day I heard about the oportunities our school were giving to some students to be able to visit some companies. I absolutely want it participate, Because I want to develope more practice and skills about the job I would want to have when I get out of Collage .

Farther more, I'm very interest to work for a Microsoft company that has being my dreams sinse the day I started using computers and I would want it create something that can help others and create new technology for future Generations. However in my school theres not a lot of programs or clases about computer management or software programing, that could help me and other students to improve our nolage about computer Software. I would want to learn more and get more experience about crearting and fixing computers.

For sure woking at a Microsoft company is what I want to do for a living. Also allowing me to come and visit one of the companies would help me undertand what I'm going to be facing in the future when I start working for a big company

For example, what is exactly the job I'm going to be doing or what job I be able do enjoy doing , or what is going to take to get there etc.

If you allow me this oportunity I can show you my skills and you can see and judge me by my job or what I can do. I belive I can be caplabe to do very creative work and come up with ideas in a matter of seconds to improve new producs. And this oportunity can help me figure out what other type of work i can be able to do.

I appreciate the oppotunities your companies are giving to our school and other schools in general, but now I would want to know if you could give me chace and the privilege to come to one of your companies and learn more about Microsoft Programing and computers. I believe I can apport a lot to this company.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
253108CDC69F,"hello I hope you have a good day. I will tell you how i am and why you should select me to visit and learn about the work that i am interest because i am very intelligent and i learn fast.

A opportunity is a favorable combination of circumstances. Although some say that the manager should not select me because i don't like to do extra work. Actually,

Manager should select me because i have positive attitude and i will working hard.

First, Some say that you should not select me because i don't like to do extra work. some people exploit yourself when you try to do extra work if you did the first time, so the next time they give you more work to do. However all the people are not the same. For example, my sister work in clean the house she have different type of person, so a women from Generic_City told her to cleaned the toys. My sister just told her OK, but is not her job in the next time she went to clean the women put her to cleaned the garage and she didn't pay.

Second, Some say that you should select me because i have a positive attitude. the people that always have positive attitude they will have success in the life. If you fall you have to get up. In the life you have to learn a lot thing like lose and win not all that time we can win because if you focus to win. One day you lose you will have negative attitude and you cannot doing well you job that why i learned how to have a positive attitude in everything. However this can help you manager for that you have the best company in the world. For example, My friend is going to college and he is study about business. He always told me that the teacher teach to have positive attitude for that they cannot fall in depression if they lose money or something.

Third, I always work hard because i like to do my job perfect. I try to do the best i can because i don't like to leave my job in average. For example, when i went to High Schools i maintained my level in up. I can work in the night if you prefer i really want to visit you. A lot people said that they work hard, but I can demonstrate how i work and how i am punctual in the work. You will see the different in you company. I am interesting the work that your company is doing. I am very interesting to know how your company install the machine of the air condition. Also, I want to learned how you discover new machine with new strategy ""don't worry i will learn fast"".

In conclusion, I think that you should select me because i learn fast and i am very interesting in your company. the most important is that i already tell you how i am and thanks for give a opportunity to write you. I hope you understand me.   ",4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
1247CB034EF7,"Wouldnt you want to have time and do your homework after school so you wouldnt have to do it later?

If you were to go after school and do your homework so you wouldnt do it later you would have much more time to do things. You can go outside and hangout with friends without any concern about doing projects or homework.

Also if you do your homework you can have time to go study for a test or, and you can study to take a retake test or quiz and bring your grade up.

And if you do your homework after school you can have massive time to relax.

You can lay down and take a little nap or play on your phone with friends, and you can take a little walk or play in the playground and you will not have a worry in the world.

And finally you can do community service hours for the school. Community service hours can help you pass the year and gives you time to work hard and maybe have fun with some friends of yours, and you can have fun even if you are walking a dog or watching someones cat you wouldnt have to worry about school work at all.

In Conclusion, Doing your homework after school is fantastic because you wont have any worries, and you will have time to do more work like a project or a test, and also you will can relax and take nap or take a calm walk, and you can do a little community service hours.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
41641B53F554,"I am writing to support the idea that students have to choose or identify a caree beafore they enter high school.

First of all, I support the idea on students choosing a career before they get to start high school.

That wey they will know, what they like to be when they graduate from high school.

For example some students will became profetional sport players, architects, doctors, etc.

Because thinking on becaming some one very important in the society at a young age will make them proud of them selfs, and that woul lead them in to a succesifull pat.

Secondly, for young students will be easier to get to where they want at a youn age.

Because they are young, they don't have to think a bout anyting ells but studying.

For example they don't have to think a bout payin bills, or taking care of the family.

The only thing they have to worry a bout is studying, and follow their dreams to be what they want to be.

In conclution, this are my reasons on why I support the idea that the student need to identify a career by the time they enter high school.

Thank you for your time and attention.

sincerely,

Generic_Name",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
E52BA6E4D7EE,"Technology in people's live.

Technology have a positive effects in people's live, make you do thing better and easy, like if you don't want to go to the library you can read a book in the internet, or if yo don't want to go to the store and buy something you can buy that thing online technology is one of the more important thing in the world for many reasons, doctors use the technology to help you wen you have a problem and see what it is, or in the airports to see if you don't have something illegal if places like this don't use the technology is very complicate to do the job and more time to due.

In school we net the computer all of the time to do the homework and test and now is an important thing to have if you are in the school and no't only in the school also people that work from home or in any other job they net the technology, most of the job in this time net a computer, or any other type of technology, some people say that technology make negative effects in people life but on my opinion is not true because must of the people who say that use the technology to say that is bad and affect the population.

I know the must of the people use the technology, or sometime of their live they use the technology and the technology help they to do something,a lot of the medicament that we know on this days are create for the technology, technology is not only computers and phones technology can be something pretty simple like a clock, is not necessary has to ve something very sophisticate, some people say that if you use the technology you don't have contact whit other people and something is true but that happen when you use the technology to much, but it does't mean that technology is bad if you use appropriate.

What people net is responsibility to use the technology and know when they net to use, that way we can be more sophisticates, we can use the technology to talk, play video games,etc but we can also have time to stay whit the family and friends.",3.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F95CE6B81C75,"It is important to accomplish something in the future because it will help you find your dream job, It is one of your top hobbies and it will guide you to your strength.

To begin, you need to accomplish something you are struggling with in order to find your dream job. One thing you can accomplish is something that is school related. In fact, when I was in 4th grade disliked art class even when my sister said it was fun and easy I would just refuse everything that is related to art. In 5th grade as a student I was required to take art class and I thought that it would boring to be in a art class. In the middle of 5th grade I actually changed my mind about art class, sooner or later I found out that art class was something that I wanted to finish. Ever since 5th grade my mood for art class grew to be one of my likings. As a 8th grader now I am still taking art class and it is actually really enjoyable to be in art.

Secondly, it will help you find your hobby and your needs. Another thing you can do to accomplish something like English class or even just school in general is trying your best. Even when you think you can just skip it, you will somehow come back to it. In fact, when I was in 6th grade my grades were A's and C's one class however was an F, that class was English class. I didn't do my homework for English class and rejected help from the English teacher. In the beginning of 7th grade that same subject was getting harder and my grade for English decreased. At the middle of marking period 3 I decided that I had to do the classwork so I can create a new habit of trying to do work. I soon found out when I was trying to complete my missing work there was one assignment that caught my eye, That assignment was a book report that was supposed to be written. I tried the book report and soon I realized that I loved writing.

Lastly, completing something that is a challenge for you will help you find your strength in a certain subject and finding your strength will help you graduate. In fact, when I accomplished art class in 5th grade I found out that art was one of my strengths that was I only needed to try. I also found out that writing was something that could help me graduate and get me to my find one of my two careers. Art class helped me learn that I am actually really creative and helped me figure out that art was something that relieved my stress when it comes to school. English class helped me figure out that writing was one of my strengths and it will help me figure out my main career.

In conclusion, if you accomplish something like your challenges it would incourage you to find your dream job, Help you find one of your hobbies, and will support you to graduate.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
A10755158FEF,"Some people believe that in order for a student to put their best effort they have to go to a praise , as well as others think effort wil find others to believe that true self -esteem comes from an achievement. Achievement can make a students accomplish alot of things way in their life such as goals they have set ,

new things , and focus on things that have to be done .

As a student achievement could let students accomplish a lot of things in their life such as golas they have set . Students like to get their work done . Also have good grades that makes them feel confident about themselves . Try new things that they always wanted to do . Especially students wil be able to think that things can be accomplished by working hard towards it . It's accomplishing what they have set to reach true - self esstem because the more you accomlish as a students the more you want to do in your life

Having confidence in yourself can lead you to true self-esteem . It can let you do many things also your favorite things . Without a person having confidence in themselves can lead to negative things . It will make a student focus on what they are doing also what they have to accomplish in order for them to finish what has to be done . Having a postive attitude will make a person interact with other people , and make you look as a good person .

Students having true self-esstem is an important rule in everyday life . It lets you do thngs that you thought you wouldn't do .There is more socializing with people and learning new things by them . It makes students put the best effort in what they do . It gives new learning skills and become more smarter . Many students can become the best version of themselves with being postive at all times . It's important to believe that things can be done with being postive in what is ready to be done .Students should believe that having true self -esstem is important in things you do .

As some people believe a students work to bulid self -esteem , it's imporant to have true self-esstem because it makes you accomplish things such as doing great things , have self confidence , and have a mind of goals that can be accomplished . However ; it;s important to maintain a postive attiude to accomplish things .",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
760988C4BA3B,"In the future, I hope that one day I will win a ""Super Smash Brothers"" tournament. Growing up, Smash Bros has always been one of my favorite games as a child and it had helped bring my siblings and I closer together. I can get paid for winning a tournament, and it will help me get through in life. I know that I can't just win a tournament right off the bat but I want to try, because the thrill of just winning and having fun is what makes people enjoy this game. Winning a ""Super Smash Brothers"" tournament is something that I can enjoy while helping me in life.

""Super Smash Brothers"" had helped me bond closer with my siblings throughout my life. Even if we've gotten tired of doing other activities together, we've never got tired of fighting each other in the game. Fighting with my siblings had molded me into the competitive person I am today, so because of that I want to fight other people and get something out of it. It helped me learn to be competitive because it's a competition in the real world. Smash Bros helped me discover other games to enjoy with others like Kirby franchise and the ""Legend of Zelda"" franchise. Beating other players with characters I love makes me want to play more with new people. I never really had the best communication skills, but I can enjoy playing different video games and competing in tournaments with others while improving my social skills.

Winning a tournament can help me get money, so I can buy my necessities in life. Getting the money could help me buy luxuries like a house or a car. If I can win a tournament and get the money, I could have those things and even get more that I need. If I can buy those then I won't have to have help from my family. I could get other games that I enjoy watching other players play. Just by watching people play these games makes me want to compete with them. I always loved competing with others and now I could even get paid to do so if I win a tournament.

""Super Smash Bros"" just gives me the thrill of competing with others and having fun while doing so. People always get this thrill of winning and it keeps them going to win more. Every time I beat my brother in a game I get excited each time, and I want to beat new people just to get that thrill. If you don't get that thrill of wanting to do more of what you are doing then you wouldn't do that thing again for a while. Like other games, Smash Bros bring players together by competing with each other and just having fun. I want to experience that with other people in tournaments. Winning a tournament or just competing in one will help me learn that doing activities are not always as fun as doing them with others.

My life will be brighter when I accomplish something big like winning a Smash Bros tournament. I've always enjoyed the fun in playing games with others and talking to them about it. It also sounds great when you get paid to do something you love like competing in tournaments. I learned that doing activities are never as fun when you're doing it alone. ""Super Smash Brothers"" brings others closer together with their families and friends.",4.0,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.0,5.0
E8B836196ADB,"I guess it's a good idea Because it helps the students to complete their homework with support from other people, with this club it will help a ton of students that has trouble or problems with their homework.

This will be a great idea for many students that has trouble doing their homework at home or doesn't understand or their stuck on their homework, but the other reason people don't want to add this club to the school is they don't like the idea of having it they say ""it's a waste of time for us"" or other more things that they say, some other students might say they don't have time for it or they don't wanna join the club. But it is a good idea to add this club for the students who don't understand how to do their homework, if other people don't wanna join they could just get a bad grade for not doing their homework. If you join the club for sure you will get a good score for doing your homework and probably get good grades for doing your homework because it helps you learn or practice at home for a test or a quiz, so maybe its a good idea to add this club to the school after school probably a few days, because it will be easy to complete your homework everyday and turn it in everyday if you join the club. If you join the club you could finish your homework early then your other classmates, if you do complete your homework early you could have free time at your house and not do any work cause you complete your homework early and not worry about doing work at home cause you already completed your work.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
7862D2AE5697,"Failure playes a huge part of becoming successful. By failing people are learning on how not to make the same mistakes again. For example lets say that i was trying to become a professional soccer. I played for the best clubs, i was named the best player in the team, and i have never been cut from a team. One day my coche tells me that there is a professional soccer try out next week and he want me to get ready. So he gives me a schedual on what i should be doing to get fit. Everyday i have to eat right and train hard. I did all of those things somedays i did not want to train and just start eating unhealthy but i fought through it. Try out day comes and i was ready as i will ever be. we started out with warm ups and went to drills. I was amazing. i was like the best player at the fiald. at the end of the day they gathered every body up and called all the people that made it. I was not one of them. I have failed to become a pro soccer player. Now this is the part where enthisiasm playes a role. I can eather stop playing soccer and choes a diffrent routh or i can pick my head im and try again. Failing tests you on how pationant you are at what you are doing and are you willing to fail again and again to be succesful. A good example would be the book persude of happynes. In this book the main person makes a muchen and he wants to sell in. But nobody would buy it. He was also a dad with one kid and lived in a motal. he got kicked out of the motal because he was not able to pay his bills. So he was homeless for a cuple of weeks. Even though he was homeless that did not stop him from trying to sell his machean. Still nobody was willing to buy it off of him. Finaly after his ups and downs somenoe bought his muchean. The person that bought it told some people on how good the machen was and they started to buy it to. He became successful because he did not give up on his dream even though he was geting regected every time he tryed to sell it. failure is the key to your success.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
349FF2E7D179,"Although, setting a good example by your behavior is helpful to others, there are other ways to set a good example. Talking to people and persuading them to do good is influential, you can save someone's life by talking to them, you can help someone be successful by talking to them and influencing them to do good helping them take the right path to becoming successful, seeing someone fail knowing you could've spoke to them and influenced them on the right path would suck; I personally would feel horrible, sometimes all it takes is a couple words to influence someone. People don't always pay attention to your actions, people pay attention when their spoken to, when you talk to someone one on one it's so much easier to get their attention rather than you behaving good in class for example. Actions can determine the way you change someone's decisions, the way you behave can set a good example to other people but ask yourself would you rather have someone talk to you or you go off based on how someone else behaves?

Confidence in yourself is also a good way to influence people, you need to be confident in what you're going to say to the other person, you need to be assured of what you're going to say to them. In order for you to be confident you need to genuinely know that person in order to find ways to influence them. Once you talk to them and get to know them better you can go ahead and influence someone, it isn't always how you behave there are plenty of ways you can influence someone. Confidence in yourself is important because once you're confident everything will go smoothly, find out what the person likes and dislikes once you have that in hand you're good to go. Honesty plays a big part when it comes to influencing someone, why? When you speak with honesty you won't hesitate in what you're talking about, you won't feel guilty of lying because you're speaking the truth. Respect is also something you should when influencing someone, when you show someone respect the connection of the dialogue increases and the other person will be interested in talking to you.

Determination into influencing someone is probably the most important thing, when you're determined into doing something it's because you really want to do it, nothing is stopping you from doing what you're determined to do. When you're determined into influencing someone you feel secure in what you're doing, that's when confidence kicks in determination and confidence are somewhat alike, determination is when you've decided to do something and there's no turning back, once you feel determined influencing someone will be easy, especially if you know the person well. Decision making on yourself is important too, you can't go off influencing people to do wrong you need to do a self check and ask yourself if you're ready to influence people, you have to ask yourself do my actions match what I say, when influencing someone you want to influence them to do good not bad.

Preparation, you have to prepare yourself before going off to influence other people, why? Because you can't go off influencing people if you're not prepared to do so, do research on how to positively influence people, practice it with friends and family. Influencing people isn't easy, it takes a lot of practice, determination, confidence, respect and just getting to know the person well, once you have all those qualities you're able to go off and influence people that need help, people that need someone to talk them through, there are people out there that rather have someone talk to them and influence them on the right path rather than watching how other people behave.

Behavior isn't the only thing the only thing you can do to influence someone, to influence someone you need to be prepared, you need to have confidence in yourself before going and trying to convince people to do things how you tell them to because sometimes we feel like we're right but we never take the time and think if we're wrong or go back and see what you can improve in. Make sure you're on the right path so you can ahead and help someone else take the right path with you. Go ahead and influence someone just remember that your behavior isn't the only thing that people look at, people look at your qualities and how you approach them, make sure you do everything correctly and you'll be set. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
E21038BEF290,"Could Impressions Change

In this prompt statement i disagree sometimes impressions can change time after time, but some people need help of how to control it ,or they may not know how to express them selves in front of people some impressions change by you trying to say something,a person maybe happy one day and the next day mad, or the person may not like you.

Impressions could change in many ways we as citizens, have so many expressions of how we should confront others. Some of the popularity of the United States don't like people because of their impressions, but some citizens hate it when they have the same impressions too. Even though people have problems of how their impressions work also they say that citizens may need help of how to control their: sadness,anger,happiness,and fear when they give impressions to others. Teachers in schools say they have problems with kids attitudes this year of how they approach others, and of how they approach their teachers too. We as citizens can't help of how we express, give impressions,and how to put our emotions out their even so you can't trust your parents,friends relatives for help nor the teachers the government can't help us or the president .

People can change their impressions;in so many ways of thinking they can: ask for help, ask for advice,and talk with someone about it.

Impressions can be held in different ways of being they can be held by trying to go for something at the store,eating ice cream, talking with someone close.

Parents think that their kids or others won't change their impressions towards others even though they think that there can be a possibility that can happen you can try and approach your kids by sitting down with them,giving them time to help them,trying to understand them.

Impression can change in many different ways,but it's not impossible to make that change sometimes impressions can be helped by others some of the people in the U.S. have problems trying to say good impressions about how they feel,wanting to confront a person,but others just might dislike that person they might also have hate in them,but they might not.

Into today's economy people are the same of their impressions,some citizens have the problem of dealing with those impressions,although they have the same emotions but also the same expressions. Everyone has a different background, so they may have different impressions of everybody around them. Impressions can be changed nothing, is impossible to do unless you give in the effort to do it or not try to have confidence of who to trust let impressions change or not nothing is impossible to do unless you put your mind into it.          ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
3F4A9ACFEDFB,"`the blood the people

'' for my uncle she death the blood cancer'', she ti fight again for blood cancer for to manage for months agains to fail infectious venereal disease; she go to hospital for dies ago my mom his sister for my uncle she go airtime my seed my grandmother she terminally ill pat went, may cousin she son for my uncle said may grandmother what is mom may grandmother said she compact papas you mom she state hospital because she state enfermedad she combats for house the may grandmother she not state enfermeda she so happy because she combats house may hose he so happy for you coming house she turned enfermar she combats to hospital.

she state for dies ago she death all la family said because she death everybody they all came my cousin said what is going now may grandmother said one old sir death may littler cousin said you lying he said is my mom death may grandmother said no papa is not you mom he said yes is my mom death what you said is you mom because my cousin said is my tia Generic_Name dis is name for my mom no combact never more again Generic_Name you face for my mom grandmonther he said my littler cousin may big brother he Generic_Name becuase you dad said you mom death she combact more house is night is funeral for my uncle Generic_Name may littler cousin said my grandmonther can you bridge dis flower a my mom said my grandmother Generic_Name she said dis is more dificult for my.

my mom said DIOS she is death what it because she have two baby she Generic_Name my said at my uncle my said you mom for you baby she make promes for my uncle death every day let't see for fou baby as soon make the funeneral evyrime coming the funeral my grandmonther Generic_Name she my litltler baby death my cousin Generic_Name evyrine Generic_Name because she is happy, for everyone my grandfather no Generic_Name because he said she state en mejor lugar pero cuando llegamos a casa my grandfather Generic_Name .

the conclusin my cosun coming the sementerio make flower for you mom my mom coming the united state he said my littler cousin said you death no quiero que nadie se muera como ella quiero que todos esten con migo becuase my mom death .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,2.0
89A2B91E59C5,"I know that having career coarses is a great idea for students to identify their careers in High-school. By studying coarses in High-school it will teach students the requirements for specific careers and prepare students for college and thier career if not required for college after High-school. Having career coarses will make students more confident and comfortable in thier first year in college or thier first day at work becasue students will already be knowledgeable about what thier doing, and it will also give students a headstart in life and which makes students well prepared.

Having career coarses will give a variety of choices for students and will help them figure out what they might want to study. These coarses will teach students requirements, basics, and will give them an idea of what they might want to study in college or a career after High-school. When students are getting ready to leave High-school some students still might not know what to study, but having career coarses would solve that solution easily which will cause less depression and stress.

There are four years in High-school which is enough time for students to switch out of a career coarse if thier aren't intrested. If High-schools don't take advantage of this idea students will be pure pressured to go to college and study a random coarse which isn't right if thier not intrested, that could lead them to drop out of college and waste thousands of dollars and could maybe go in debt for the rest of thier lives.

Career coarses In High-school will give students headstarts which is very beneficial for students and professors in college. College professors won't have to teach the basics, but will go over them which would save time and this also means students will have a couple of extra time for test's and final exams.

Having career coarses in High-school will cost a lot of money, but why not spend it if are main focus is to educate the students and help them suceed in the future. After religous beliefs school is the second most important thing in the world. These students are our future and we want the world to be a better place and have a better society.

We should reach out to the school board and colleges and let them know, By emailing, calling, or just by using social media that this is a very important matter and it would be very benefical for both them and us as students,

We want to suceed and be educated and having career coarses is the best way possible, we dont want to go in debt for the rest of our lives for something we didnt enjoy doing in college we want to be well prepared and every student should have equal opportunities in the world to know what to study. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
1BD023792E29,"In my point of view, I feel what is more beneficical is working alone. You might think working in a group is more beneficial, but let me tell you why is it not a good idea. It lets you concerate more on your work and won't let you get distracted and get off topic with the rest of the group. On top of that it gives you the chance to slightly get your work done in a matter of time. On the other hand, in case you don't understand a topic,it benefits you learning alone so next time you understand it in the future time. In this way of working alone, has many benefits and could help you in many ways in the long run.

Have you ever been part of a group at somepoint in your life, and your group gets off topic and ends up not finishing the work that was assigned? It really isn't such a productive group like that I could say. Say perhaps you were trying to get your work done, but you entire group wants to do unproductive things and gtet off topic. Have you ever thought who gets the blame after? Your group gets the blame and you as well. Even if you were being on topic and getting your assignment done, but your also part of the group, what could you do. Let me give you an example. There was once where my math teacher said we could work in a group. Me and my group were getting our work done, until one of my group members gets off topic. There goes my whole group off topic. What was the result after, my group didn't finish the assignment. Next thing you know who got the blame that day. My whole group and including me as well. I explained to my math teacher in a nice, clamy matter to her, that I was trying to get my work done, she didn't lose an energy listening to me.

What if you teacher for example set a timing to finish the project, and you couldn't finish in time because of the silliness in your group? I'm positive you would want to finish in time and get a good grade. I'm more than certain that you don't want to finish late with your group and get a zero as your grade from your teacher. I've have so many examples, but let me tell you one that stood up to me and left my eyes bright open. My biology teacher had told the whole entire class there was a project due at the end of the class. So she told us to get in groups, of four people in the group. Long short story, my group got way off topic and didn't finish in time. At the end,we all got zero's and for a week I had a zero bringing my grade down. I brought my grade up, until it was test day. I've been through so many experiences, I enjoy working alone. On the other hand, I also experienced understanding a topic on my own, which feels great let me tell you.

Have you ever experienced in life going or thinking of a topic and not understanding? That has happened to me once. Where your at a point,where you don't understand a topic, but learning on your own kicks in. Everytime you go back and reazlied what you did wrong, it all kicks in, in the future. Which in my point of view is a good benefit. Learning on your own is denfitnely not a bad thing. There was once where I was having quite the trouble at a topic, in my class of english, but the outcome wasn't so bad. As I could say. In that certain assignment I got a high B. I learned after where I needed more information on that topic in my english class. On the next assignement I had I got a high A.

Working alone has many benefits and could benefit you in the long run. Many poeople think its beneficial working in a group, but I say no. Want to do better, get a good result after, get a nice dencent grade after. Working alone is the solution. Don't let anyone trick you into saying it's bad, because it is most ctertainly not a bad choice/idea. If you come across a point to work in a group, thats great, i'm not saying never work in a group. Although at some points when the stitution is series to get an assignment done, thats were working alone comnes in handy.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5
D579D6F26A91,"Have you ever wondered if you have extracurricular activities are getting in the way of your homework time or study time and if the activities you take should be up to the school or the student and his or her family? I'm going to explain why I believe the decision should be left to the student and his or her family memebers.

My first reason why I think extracurricular activities should be left to the student is because capable on choicen activities that would like to take and enjoy. For example if the school choices classes that you dislike and not enjoy you would have to be stuck with it. Also you would be very stressed that you're in that class and that stress can affect other classes in a negative way.

My second reason why I think extracurricular activities should be left to the student is because idf students choose to do more activities they gain more expirence in diffrent types catagories. This is a good thing beause it allows students to test the waters and find out what thy like to do so they can think about studying in college and persuing it. For example if you have more activities you have a way better chance to find something you like than less activies.

However, the school might say that if a student has more extracurricular activities it would affect the time students has for doing homework and studying. They also might say they know more about time managment but some students are fast at doing homework and are very fast at studying. So I think that the decision should be left to the student and his or her family memebers. The family and the student should know if they are capable to have many activities and still get their work done. That is why I believe the student should choose if they want to do many or little extracurricular activities. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
5F467A8F3896,"What are people going do if they find themselves in a situation of danger because of meting the wrong person on social media? No body would like the idea of being on danger but if we do not know how to manege social media we all are in danger. What are people going to do if they find themselves all alone because they did not take the chance of meting someone new, o because they did not enjoy the little moments whit their family? How could someone think that human communication is not necessary? People would not have the chance of having a nice chat whit their family or friends. Although some people say that the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has a positive effect because it helps people whit communication problems interact whit other people due social media, actually the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has many negative effects because people miss priceless moments whit their family and friends and there is a high risk of meting someone dangerous on social media.

People say that the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has a positive effect. This is because they think that it helps people whit communication problems interact whit others due social media. Many studies have showed that social media is very helpful for those people that are insecure of themselves to interact whit others not just from their city but whit people from different places in the world. Technology is advancing, and it is trying to help people whit different needs. In this case technology allows people from everywhere to communicate whit others does not matter the place they are.

It is a privilege for the people that are far away from their families. It is also a way that people use to get away from having uncomfortable chats whit people from their surroundings.

However the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has many negative effects. Because people miss the opportunity of having nice moments whit their family,

their families start to break apart. That's the case of my cousin's family. they were a beautiful family but everything went apart because my cousin's wife spent most of her time on Facebook, where she found a random guy, so she left my cousin whit their three daughters and one son. social media can destroy families and relationships in seconds, but is our duty to enjoy our time whit the people that we love because we show the love that we feel for them and communication by technology can never do that. We do not know if one day the people we love are going to leave, but if they leave we are going to keep those priceless memories on our heart. Family is everything and we should never let anything get us apart from it.

Even if social media allows people from everywhere interact whit each other; there is a high risk of met whit someone dangerous. There are many cases where young ladies have being abducted.

This happen when young ladies decide to met boys from social media that result not being what they thought but kidnappers. Those kidnappers sale the young ladies, and this poor girls are forced to give up on themselves and work as prostitutes.

All of this could be avoided if we start to know better about the people near us instead of trying to met someone that we dont know anything about . It's important to recognize that social media have benefits if we know how to use it correctly, but we need to be careful because we have to know other people better before trusting them, and it is even better if we already have had a chat in person whit those people.

In conclusion the world is constantly changing and technology is an important factor in actuality, but in those cases where technology is used incorrectly many people can get damaged. Technology is not a need but is a benefit, and if we are allowed to use it, we should do it whit responsibility and not depend from it. In spit of the fact some people believe that technology is more than necessary, and that there is no need of human interaction because it helps people with communication problems, in truth the limitation of human contact due the use of technology has just negative effects because we can experience more than one danger; like losing our family or being forced to a prostitute. Communication in person is necessary, there is no better way of live our life than enjoying the time whit our family, the little chats and of curs taking the opportunity of get to know better each one near us. A computer or a phone can never transmit our feelings, and if people want to express themselves they do not have to be trapped on technology.            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
F1A5FE43ADD0,"Even though other believe working alone is easier and better. I

strongly believe student do benefit from working in a group. Working in a group has it's advantages, and I feel it's a better choice. When work work in a group you can see different ideas,learn to work with other and also you can met new people.

When you work with other people you can see the different ideas also you can learn know things. You can see the same problem in different ways but as a group you try to find the best way to solve them. For example let's say you have to do a project for a class, and you have to do it in a group. As a group you can share you Knowledge of what you know about the topic and share them with you group . Also you can share you ideas with your group,and see if they like it or maybe they can add something more to your idea to make it a better one . You can see who you have in common with them also you can see the differences you have with you group members .

Working as a group can really have a good advantages. If it is a really big project you dint have to do it alone. Also you can split work and everyone can get a small portion of the project. You can also see people creativity. In a group every one is good in something, so lets say if there is some who is really good at drawing and some one really good in writing then the project can look really nice and the penmanship will look great. You can get it done half as fast with every one in the group does what they have to do and work as a team .

When you work in a group you can met new people. Maybe you change schools. You do not know any one at your new school. When you work in a group, you can meet new people and make friends. It also work if you are shy because in a group you have to communicate with others to get the work done, or you are just a born leader you can help other how to start the project together or tell people how to do thing because they do not know what to do first. Also it works so you can get out your confer zone and try new things. For example you really like to draw but you do not know how to draw really good maybe some one from your group knows how and they can teach you .

As a conclusion I think student do benefit when they are in group. Because not only they can share there different ideas. You learn how to work as a team. You can met new people, and make new friends.        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
1FAC31F5C8DC,"People said that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. The answer is yes, Having a positive attitude can helps you during your hole life, because with attitude you would always see the good side of bad things that happened in life, and also can make you a better person, even attitude can helps you during your job.

Having a positive attitude can helps you during your life, it can helps you for the reason that you would never going to look the wrong side, of any bad situation that you are going through. You are always want to look the good side of the situation, and think that what happen was for one reason, For example you did not pass a test in your Government class, you had to think that next time you take it you are going to passed.

To continued having a positive attitude can make you a better person, because their are many persons out side that are going through bad problems like financial or family problems, You with a good attitude can help all does people, and that is something that you are going feel proud of doing good things.

In short Having a good attitude can help you with your job or if you do not have one it can help you to get one. because now many Companies want people with good attitude for the reason that they want you to talk or help customers with what they are looking for, and they think that is important that you help anybody that needs it.

In conclusion a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because it can help you in any bad decisions you take or problem that you are going through or even you can help a friend. With a positive attitude your life is going to be better and so much fun and can make you success in life.           ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
38DF7BD353A9,"Its a good idea for student to try to finish high school early so they can start there grown up life.

when you finish school early you can start going into the work force earlier. Start working as early as you can so you can save up money for your life. you have more time to thick if you want to go to college.

Start thinking more about your self you have time to do what you want to and not having to worry about school. Go travel the world visit family and friends, you only live once so why not finish high school in 3 years. You dont need to get up early to go to school anymore,dont have to worry about homework and tests. You dont have to miss out on anything anymore youll have lots of free time.

your parent wont have to worry about spending money on you school supplies. your parent wont be on you ass much when your done with school like are you done with your homework, classwork how are your grades. no need for you to eat threat nasty school food for other year. you wont have to walk up trying to not miss the bus in the morning.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
B046D31B68F0,"Dear principal,

If you don't like to leaving in a place were there is lots of people that litter then I think you would be able to tell some friends to do some community service is a very good idea because it helps keep your town or city clean. I think that we should start to do community service because a lot of people litter and it is really bad for our oceans and if we clean litter up we will keep oceans clean and it will be save for the fish.

the end",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
BDAE1D4B6C20,"The quote, '' hard work pays,'' means a lot when it comes to doing something and one staying idle. The world today upgrades itself each and everyday,which tells us that we should always be doing new everyday as humans.

Although some people say that been idle is the best way to go because it relaxes the body and gives it a new form of strength actually doing something always not only exposes one to new ideas and strategies but also makes the human body active and vibrant at all times. There are a lot of chances one can benefit from been productive other than been idle.

To start with, there are a lot of goodness in been productive than been an idle man. People who invest in their time to produce something meaningful are known across the globe because of their hard work and dedication. Due to how hardworking they are, they get the chance to explore new ways of doing things and new ideas that would help them in their next exploitation. For instance, since Bill Gates is hardworking man, he is known across the globe and due to this he has been exposed to other new things that would help him in whatever he is doing now. Again, when there is a football match between two different teams, and if one team is seen practicing so hard than the other, it would be considered that the team seen practicing the most would deliver more than the other team with no doubt.

Moreover, doing something always makes an individual active and lives longer than been idle. A person who is seen to be doing something productive all the time is considered to be adding more years to his or her age due to the fact that working tirelessly everyday helps keep the body in form and shape which by so doing prevents diseases that attack people. For instance when a person walks about a half and a mile to work everyday, it is very difficult to see that individual get sick because the body is always busy looking for something to do. On the other hand, idleness brings nothing but retrogression and failure because you're not able to bring forth anything productive and therefore it becomes a waste of time,energy and resources. One can make the comparison so easily between a productive person and someone been idle, a productive person can always be seen advancing from one stage to the other while an idle person will be seen at the space that he is at always.

Furthermore, when people say '' time is money,'' they are definitely talking about how one is able to use his available to produce something meaningful for himself to get money and have some other benefits as well. No one gets rich by just sitting at home, folding his hands and just expect something to happen. People may argue on this that one can make it in life when he or she inherits the possession from his family. This may be true because you may have everything to yourself but everything will be squandered if one does not work hard to top it up or add more to what he has. People choose idleness because it is more relaxing and the easiest way to go because you just sit there and wait for whatever happens to happen. Been idle can also affect a person in way or the other. In the sense that, if a person is seen to be at one place all the time, it may be considered that the person may be lazy and this may deprive him off certain opportunities that might help him in one way or the other.

Last but not least, working hard or been productive gets one a recognition or a specific type of award that goes a long way in life. There is no doubt about the fact that people who work hard are awarded the most and are the ones that are shown to the world for others to see and emulate their footsteps. For instance, Usain Bolt has been winning almost all his race in the Olympics and it sends a good message about him to the world because of how hardworking he is. Due to this someone else can decide to emulate his footsteps to become a world star like him.

Again no one chooses to be last in whatever he is doing but rather aims at the high spot. Although some people say that been idle is the best way to go because it relaxes the body and gives it a new form of strength actually doing something always not only exposes one to new ideas and strategies but also makes the human body active and vibrant at all times.

It always good to look at the brighter side of good and it is always advisable to go for what is right. Productivity brings a lot of good things in a person's life than any other thing a person can think of while Idleness brings nothing but retrogression in one's life.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5
8281058A7684,"Ralph Waldo once wrote,""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow.""I agree with this quote because of my experience learning another language like English it can be hard to learn English coming from a Hispanic family,and video gaming. Some may disagree with the quote because there is nothing else to learn .

When I was in first grade I came to school not knowing any English. Honestly I felt isolated because the language barrier I did not know what the teacher was telling me. All I said was ""Yes"" and ""No"" thats all I knew. I think it was a few weeks later that they call my parents . They notify my parents that

I was not doing well in school. My mother as always told me practice makes perfect. My mother with little bit of English that she knew she helped me to perfect it. Now, I could speak both languages fluently because of that effort I have more opportunities for a better job .

In Christmas the year 2017, I got the probably the best and worst gift of my life. It was an X box one at first felt happy because it was my second gaming console, but I did not know how to use it. It took me two weeks to understand the full operation. Then when I starting playing the first game that I bought was Fifa 18 by the way I did not pay for the game it was my dads credit card.

After that I downloaded Fortnite it was free so I didn't get in trouble . I found the games difficult , I started to practice a lot , then a few weeks later it became an addiction. I couldn't focus in school my grades were falling off where I had them before I got the X box one. My father told me if I did not get better grades he be forced to take away . So I started to focus on my grades ,but yet still thought the gaming console .

Some may disagree that what Ralph Waldo wrote. For example, if your'e a teacher you probably know what to teach for the semester. The job you have does not require that much only a master degree. Or being a car washer you just clean cars.

This has been all I have for this quote.       ",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
451321E506A6,"I think students doing home assignments will not benefit the student, because it doesn't help the student grasp the same kind of concepts like other students that do go to school.

The reason why I personally don't like home schooling is because if I'm at home I wouldn't get my work done. I'd be distracted by looking at my dog and looking at what my mom would be doing. Another reason why I would not like it is because I'm not getting the same kind of education like most of the other students. I wouldn't have the chance to learn with my classmates or go on trips to historical monuments and historical musuems with them. When you're home schooled you're mostly self-taught.

One other reason why I wouldn't reccommend home schooling is because you're not interacting with other students which can cause depression and anxiety. Another reason why home schooling is not such a great idea is because when he learns how to write and read and play a musical instrument and masters soccer, running, or other sports in general how will this particular student learn how to communicate to the real world if the parent has kind of isolated him from meeting people. One of the other reasons why home schooling is bad is because the fact that parents may lose patience when they are trying to educate their children. Some parent may be too overbearing or impatient, which may cause the child to react in a negative manner.

I think home schooling is a bad idea is because he wouldn't get the proper education like most students in school. That could possibly effect the student and also that student is not interacting with other students which could lead to depression and axiety. If the parent loses their patience the child would start to act up on them. For all of these reasons home schooling is not a good idea. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
F5E70573B058,"The prompt talk about who people have own instincts and ideas or to make their own decisions. People make decisions in their own life. Nobody have to tell them what to do in their life. He or her can follow their own instincts or idea. Everyone should make own choice or own decisions in their life. Their life is so important to them that they could make own decisions without people tell what to do or ruin their life. People should be wrong about their life not other people life. If they want to help they should talk with the people if want help or not. I know everyone want to help out but sometime they don't want help for other people,friends or their family. They could solve their problem at there own.

For example we don't need people to tell other people how to live their life. They can make their decisions. They a lot people that make bad decision or good decisions in their life. It good that they did bad choice because they real what they did and they won't do it again in their life. People can live their life but they have to make good choice their life not bad choice. They should have good friends that make good decision in their that always help them in their life. If you have a friend that make bad decision sometime at friends won't help you out. Then you are on your own with you're problem. Sometime good to hang out with friends but you have to make good choice if you're going to hang out with your friend's.

I know people can make own decision and can help other people to not make bad choice in life. Is good you got friends and family that have your back when you want to make own decisions in your own life. Sometime family don't agree with your choice or decision you want to make. You're life is important you should make good choice in you're life to happy or live your life with you're family's and friends. You don't have to wrong about other people opinion. Sometime good to listing to other people opinion if it will help you understand your problem or to make good decision or not. Some people don't want help for other people. They don't want other people to be wrong about their life or be noise. The only who makes decision are the adults or the teenager but not the kid's. It's great that teenager are make decision in their life. Teenager sometime make bad choice when they are with their friends hang out. They learn the lesson to don't make bad choice in their life or to not hang out with their friends. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
F17D56052066,"I think it's good to know people's opinion because it can help you deside on something you wanna do. Maybe that person has already tried the thing you wanna try he can give you his opinion on the item. If you wanna buy something first it's good to talk to someone who has bought the item they can tell you if it works or not. Maybe you wanna buy a car and some how the car doesn't work you gotta talk to the dealer ship about the car. Or if you wanna buy some medicen you have to ask first before you drink the medicen or else you can even die from it if it's bad for you.

And you have to talk to more then just one person to be sure because if you don't you can waste you money just like that. And you always have to be positive when people give you advice even you know they aren't saying things right they are just trying to help you. It's always good to give your opinion on things because maybe they aren't sure if they wanna buy the item or not. If you care about a person your going to give your advice to a person because they are some how confused on something you can help them. Giving advice is a way to be nice because you wanna prevent from that person to buy that item if they buy it and it doesn't work they are just going to waste money on the item.

Also by giving advice you can prevent people from getting hurt like if a guy walks to a store and buys something and it doesn't work he is going to come back to the store and fight the guy the sold him the item and then they both go to jail from fighting. Also if a parent comes to her friends house her freind can give her advice how to cook something maybe she doesn't know but her friend does and she can give her advice.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
C825937F3BF1,"Students committing to a career at a young age can actually be very helpful. Although, some students prefer not to be committed to a specific career in their high school years. Some students just like to take their time and explore new things and that way it can give them ideas about what to do in the future. Other students just decide what to do when they are in college. That being said, committed at young age, exploring new things, deciding in college.

Students being committed at a young age is helpful and will benefit themselves for the future. Students sticking to one area for their career at a young age and just being focused on it is what they need in order to get there. Especially if they are focusing and putting hard work at a young age. However, some students may not enjoy having to just stick with one area. Students will not be able to enjoy what other students enjoy. Exploring new things at the young age is very fun.

With students being committed at a young age and all, exploring new things at a young age is very fun. Students do not have to worry or stress about being committed to just one thing. Students exploring at a young age will have more opportunities to see what they like. Students will enjoy more of their time rather than other students who are committed to one thing. Unless if students really love to what they are committed to, they wont enjoy much of their time. For example, if one student is committed to one thing but does not love what he is doing and the other student who is exploring new things and enjoying his time, then the student exploring will enjoy more of his time and be happy as well.

Being committed at a young age, exploring new things are fun but Lastly, students decide what to do as they enter college. Students deciding as they head to college is pretty tough. Some students wont be able to prepare for whats coming. For example, if students had chose what to do while they were in high school then they would have time to prepare for what they would be doing in college. But choosing what to do as you head in to college can be tough for some students.

In conclusion, being committed at a young age is good and beneficial for students but it can get boring and sad, unless if students truly love what they are doing. Students entering college and immediately deciding what to do without actually knowing anything about what they chose is not so fun. Now students who explore new things at a young age is what most students should do. This way they know what they will enjoy and what they wont enjoy. Students can do whatever they want to at a young age. Once students find what they love. They can stick to it and have it as their career. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
F27DE7F7F3AB,"In my opinion, The school shouldn't have to follow the model by extending the school day two hours. because schools have seven hours school day and when they use two hours for that it will be not help full for students because student. when we use the same amount of time for school that is better for me because student have more time. If we want to make our life easy or conferrable it is not help full. for example if we have a two hours expanding the school day its not helping us because the using our schedule. All school schedule is help full for all who attend the school. so we don't have to use the two hours expanding the school day. The energy of the four-day two hours extending schools extending is not help full for me so. The school follow the school management systems.

we dont have to use the two hours extending police. because,it is not help full for who attend the school and who need more time for his/her class. fore example some student need more time to do the Home work, and assignment. its not helping for that kind of student, some student need more to understand . it mean it is not help full the four-day school week and the extending the school day for two hours. Finally the am disagree with this idea its doesnt help student and teacher in the other way. school have to follow his extending police. ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
FB73ABAB1D14,"Students should have the right to elect their classes that they want to take in school, because it's all about in how capable the students are or how much the students can learn if they have the chance to elect their classes. It's hard for some students to learn a class that it have been given to him/her. Some students are born with special skills, they can handle many things at the time but not all the teenagers and the kids have the same ability. People should think more about just giving students classes without consulting with them about what their class are going to be. Some student might not have the skills that are needed to take the class that it has been given or the student might struggle with the class that it has received, because they didn't had the chance to tell their teachers or parents what they were capable of.

However, students should be allow to elect a class they feel more comfortable of in their school, and all the schools should be aware of letting students pick the classes or activities that they want to do or they want to learn more about, because It has been proved by scientists and experts, that the ninety-five percent of the majority of the students who elect their classes have become successful in their education path because, students have developed different types of skills that are based in a careers that they want to do in their future, that it became easy for them to manage after all the experience they have gotten, after choosing something they liked while being in school.

The majority of students do not consider music or drama classes important for their education, it's something that you are inspired by to do. Music, art, and drama these classes can be a distraction for students not to focus in their school work and it might affect their education status. Most of the students from the age of ten years and up are still developing their brains and they can get easily distracted. Most of the parents in the

U.S they won't let their kids watch TV for more than thirty minutes, because they can create a habit and they will spend more of their time watching TV, playing video games and more.

In addition, for those students who are forced to take art or drama classes etc, this choices can lead teenagers or kids to fall into a level of depression, for not having the chance pick something they like to do in school. Parents and school teachers should let students know that they can also practice any sport in school, this method would keep students exercise and healthy. Overall, students should have the last word of what they want to learn in school and parents should be aware of that.

In my life experience, I have become successful in the things that I have done while being in school, because my parents always told to pick something that I would like from school, and I choose to practice sports and after choosing something that I considered good for me and my future, I received an scholarship for soccer. All this happened after my parents gave me the opportunity to decided what it was good for me and my future. I completely disagree with the people believing that students should be require to take music, drama, and art classes, because all of this might take all the good opportunities away from your child and it will become a distraction for them.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
70E490A83717,"To begin with many students enjoy summer than winter. Making winter break longer than summer and a week off in spring and fall is not a good idea. When students come back from break regardless of the season they most likely cannot retain information, because they have been gone for a long period of time. Having a longer winter break than summer is a waste of time. Why should educators feel that a longer winter break than summer could help retain information?

In my point of view having a longer winter break would not be enjoyable students like the fact that they can be able to enjoy their break. Even though students cannot retain information on learning targets, at least it wont waste time because having a longer winter than summer would extend time causing time to be lost in the school year. Changing the season of the break would not be enjoyable either cause of cold weather, it would certainly not help students to remember the information they learned when they were in school. Whats a break if you cannot enjoy it?

In addition what maybe the students can take into consideration is to review some of the things learned, during the free time on their break. Teachers should assign online classes and review's for students to help memorize information at least once a week. That way when people return to school others wont be so behind on things and can remember the objectives taught. A longer winter break could possibly help the scholar remember what was learned, if they were to revise and analyze work that was given to in the past in this situation.

In conclusion changing the season would not help students retain information and is not a good idea , unless the individual were to spend time studying a few times out of the break. Overall there should not be a longer winter break than summer.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
F530741D2297,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing."" Jefferson's quote is accurate because we can not accomplish something without doing something in life. Everyone has a goal in life; to meet those goals we have to prepare and take steps to complete them. Some people may say that inactivity can also serve a purpose because there are people, including: famous people, family members, or teachers who has once been passionate about something they have done in their lives who quit and became someone bigger, but they are wrong. There is a lot that can be done and steps to take if we are always doing something for ourselves or for others because instead of doing nothing we can focus on our education to help us in the future or to make this world a better and wonderful place for everyone.

For starters, when students focus on their education all the time there is a lot that can be done. One reason why students can do so much with our education is because often education can prepare us for a big exams. For example, in class students are learning and reviewing different tropics repeatedly, which will help us pass any exams that will be given to us. This proves that when students are constantly learning something they can accomplish anything that they were leaning or reviewing throughout the year. This shows students how much they have done by focusing, instead of doing nothing. Another reason why students can do so much with their education is because it can help them graduate and accomplish bigger things in life. For example, most students that are always on task and doing everything that they should be doing have bigger plans in life than those who do not. This proves that students that accomplish more by being on task with their education will graduate with a future ahead of them. As a result, students that are focus and on task are more likely to feel incredible for everything they have accomplished in their education.

Second, a lot of people around the world can do so much to help other communities by volunteering and to make this world a better place. A reason why it is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing something is because we can help those around us. For instances, there is a lot of people around the world that need our help, such as homeless people or families who live poor. We as a community can feed those who are homeless or can help families who need help with jobs or to get health insurance. This shows, that if we gather together as a group we can see how much we have done to help these people in need. Another reason to see how much we can do together is by making great choices in life. For example, we can plant fruits and vegetables and give them out for free to help people around us to consider to make better food choices. As a result, there is many opportunities we can take to make this world become a better place for everyone. We can only accomplish a lot by doing everything in our power to make better this world a better place.

In Jefferson's quote, he was saying that we can do so much by doing something and it is true. If we put our mind into something and do everything we can to accomplish what we have in mind we can do anything, but if we just sit there doing nothing, we will not have the outcome we expected to want. Everyone lives in different ways, but it is important to see what each of us individuals can accomplish in life. The only way we can graduate is by focusing and staying on task. Some may see the see the world as being lazy, but we can change that by helping out and planning something together as a group to make a change in the world. It is important that we are making a change for ourselves and our communities. These are some reason why we should always do something to get the outcome that we want to see.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
B49D86AC2062,"Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm? its a 50% chance you will be successful,reason for this is that some people give up too easily,some people get tired of failing and failing again. You dont need to fail many times before you get successful.

Some people never put in work to be successful as they are today some just became successful out the cut. Right now the world we live in you dont really need to put in alot of effort,there are many ways of being successful for example we have social media! Social media now has a big impact in the world we live in.

Scientists are perfect examples of this statement. A scientist can start an experiment and fail over and over again till they get they expected the results. Students can fail a test over and over again but whiles he's failing hes learning from his mistakes to pass his test.

Working on something new or getting used to something new,you wont get it right the first time you would mess up or fail but once you keep getting used to it you learn from your mistake which helps you to become successful.

If you ask most successful people of today,some might respond by saying they experienced alot of failure on the way to the top some might respond with a no,this states that failure might plays a role in being successful it may also not play a role in being successful. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
FE7408E48786,"Students get their longest break on summer when they finish the first ten months of the school year; however, they will forget the information they have been taught in school when they get back in fall if they spend this long vaccation for only partying, going for a trip, or without taking classes online. Also those people who argue that there should be a year round schools and summer should be a 3-4 weaks break, it will be a less time break for most students who have planned to do their own projects while reading and without forgeting what they have learned.

First, when students complete thier school year and started planning what to do for thier summer vaccation, spcially teens will put partying on the first list. There are some students who are doing worse than this, doing nothing but waiting for their friend's party. Students don't realize that they are wasting thier time on partying untile the coming scholl year approaches. This doesn't just waste their time on thier vaccation when they can take classes online or school closer to where they live in but they are wasting thier money instead of saving it for their college tutition.

Second, when someone goes for a trip, they will observe information and learn from what they have seen when travelling. On the other hand, when students are going for a trip, most of them will be taking pictures of themselves only without paying attention, observing ideas, or learning from what they see on the trip. If they were paying attention when travelling without just taking pictures of themselves, they were going to get benefitted for some classes like history and geography.

Third, in the summer long vacation if students are not going to summer schools or studying at home, they definetly should be taking online courses to help them not to retain information as easily when they return to school on fall. When students are not studying ortaking classes over the summer, their brain is not developing which makes them not to be a creative or open minded. Plus, it is hard for most students who was enjoying summer without taking classes and getting back to school when it opens to understand like other students who have taken summer schools in their long vacation.

In conclusion, I don't agree with the idea that there should be year round schools to prevent students from not retaining information when they return to new school year from their summer vacation. Instead of creating a year round schools, students can enroll themselves to summer school and study with their parents support. Additionally, if there is a longer winter break in the middle of the schools year, students most likely will forget what they have been taught before even finishing the full school year. Furthermore, long summer vacation is helpful to complete what one student has planned. As the matter of fact, even if there is a 3-4 week break in the summer, students will still not retain information easily when school starts if they don't use their vacation time wisely on purpose.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
7B557B2F27CE,"Do you think imagination is more important than knowledge? Well have you ever wonder how the first computer was made or how the first lightbulb was made? It all started with a imagination, if the person who made a lightbulb never had a imagination of building a lightbulb we will be using candles for a source of light. How a about google, snapchat or even, books it all started with a imagination. Thats why I think imagination is more important than knowledge.

We all know knowledge is very important but with out imagination we cant think or read because imagination is the key to knowledge. Without imagination we cant think and when we cant think we cant learn or solve every day problems. Knowledge did not just exist like that is was made how? By imagination thats why why learn and do things.

You can be the smartest person in the world but if you dont have a imagination you cant help the solve world problems like how to poverty. Imagination is very important because with out it our lives will be more difficult for example with out cars we wont be able to go to work or go places and without phones it will be harder to communicate. The reason we have cars books and computers is not because knowledge but because of imagination. Thats why Imagination is the key to knowledge.

Imagination is very important, why you may ask, well with out imagination we cant think of new ways to solve problems or read. Lets say imagination was never a thing we wont know how to read or count to 10 because imagination is the key to knowlege Without imagination we will be having a lot of problems like how to comunicate, read, think, or even count to 10 thats why imagination is important.

With out imagination we as people cant make new things like books, art, or even better things thats why imagination is very important in may ways. Imagination is the key to making new things like cars, phones, computers, books, with out imagination we wont have things like cars, or phones. It takes alot of thinking to make new and helpful things. If imagination was never a thing their never have been numbers, books, or even a language.

Imagination is how we have things like google, computers, cars, books, and with out imagination we cant think of new ways it make the world a better place.

Imagination is why we as people are advancing and getting smarter every day. Anything is possible if you can believe and think. Thats why imagination is vary inportant is many ways.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
221BA383246D,"The job I want to pursue is to play in a professional soccer team. The reason why I want to play in a professional soccer team is because I love and its fun to play the sport. This is something im good at in my life. This is a sport that most people want to play at. This is a letter to send to any manager in a professional soccer team.

One of the reasons why I want to join a professional soccer team is because I love the sport. This sport can release your stress. If you have so much stress on you this sport can let you refresh your mind and will take all of your stress away. You can also take your anger at somene if you are mad at the person or just you mad at something. You can slide tackle or shoot the ball as hard as you can at someone or the goal.

Another reason why I want to be in a professional soccer team is because it's fun to play. You can play with your friends in the sport or you make new friends. This sport is really enjoyable to play. Whenever their is a nice day outside you can play the sport with your family or friends.

This is the job I want to have when im older. These are the reasons why I want to play in a professional soccer team. In my opnion, this sport is one of the best sports in the world. Hopefully this will happen one day and I will be really happy. ",4.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
5FC620AEDC8B,"Prime Ministor Winstong Churchill said "" Success consists from failure to failure without loss the enthusiasm"". Failure had important role in the persuit of success because, failure help you to improve, to learn, and be strong in your life.

Firtsly, fail help you to improve in differents directions, at school, work, and also in your life. You cannot due verything rigth you fail one day and when that happen you had to get ready to come back and cheek where and why you fail, and try to find differents strategies to improve what you do.

Secondly, learn about your mistakes. If you make mistakes is because you're doing something wrong and probably you have to change somethings like your work style,skills, the way how you study,and your social communication, and try to find a differents ways to due better.

Lastly, be strong ,if you fail do not stay down, you don't want to be a destitute man, everybody want to be wealthy and what you have to do is get up and continue, push your self, work hard,because you have the control of yourself.

Inconclusion, failure do not push you down failure help you to go up, to improve in what you do, also help you to learn about your own mistakes and push you to find a different strategies to be a better person, worker,or student.                  ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
F2BAC6095D8A,"I belive that students would work more effectivelly online rather, then sitting in a class room all day and not engaring in there learning rather then talking to there friends and being sociable.

When working online the student and teacher has obligations that he or she sould complete foor example a student that has a project due on wednesday and will do it ,on time and correct rather then the student, that goes to school and has the same project due on the same day there will be, more higher chances that the student working online will have it done first becuase the student has less time, to socalize with friends and has more time to stay foused on he's or her work .

Many kids have this advantage and it is a good one becuase they learn so much though out a online school rather then a public school ; becuase the class it more advanced and has for advantages for example the student ;online is taking pre calculas the student can easely tell the teacher what proble he or she is stuck on and the teacher can go over it explaning it in more it also help the student to be more engaging in there learning ; turo details rather then asking the teacher after class and not giving you a straight foward awnser .

Many student's taking classes online have the capibilidy and asset of graduating much earlyer becuase there classed are more advanced and with more potential to succed in life becuase of the parnts and the dissition that they have enrolled there kid in to online school ,rather then regular school .

Many parents do benifit from this great advantage becuase the student can take a class knowing that the parent will give suport to the kid in his or her future carrer. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,2.0
7D2D5053D947,"What are the benefits of working with a group vs working alone. Working alone isn't bad because their no one to rely on. Then and working with a group is more beneficial. reasons being said are more people more ideas, getting help from teammates, and will be less mistake because there more than one person to get help. For example playing in a team sport working with teammates is better than trying to do every thing alone, same thing with a big project.

Just like the saying two heads are better than one. defiantly when working on a project. Being alone there going to be mistake because no one will correct you on the paper. Another benefits of working in a group is more ideas coming from different people and taking that you can learn from it. Not only that if a person is stuck on something the group with help out to solve it together, also it will save a lots of time trying to work by yourself.

Being in a team that the PE teacher assign you, will be hard trying to play alone in a group or team. Working by your self is not helping the team or people skills. In the long run getting a job there will be times when needed to work with co workers or bosses, doing group projects or playing for a team will benefit that. Because it helping on people skill. That learning in experience knowing not everybody is the same.

Working alone helps but I feel in a group is more beneficial. There no motivation being alone it attend to be boring. Therefor more mistakes could happen, limit to some ideas and knowledge, and can't get help because every one is working alone. Doing work in a group helps students be wake, reasons for that is there someone to talk to also it will be less work and save good amount of time. Students attend to dose off or stress when it to much work on their hands.

In conclusion I prefer working in a group feel more beneficial then working alone. It will defiantly help in school if a student is doing a project or playing for a team. Also in the long run With jobs, family, neighbors, or starting a protest will help if being in a group.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.5
12FE853D6B88,"I agree with Emerson's statement because people should be themselves no matter what. You want to always show the real you. That is the beuty of life,connecting with different types of people with different types of personalitys. People in this world now a days are cruel and mean that have no heart. People bully others because of theres clothes,shoes, and how they look. You can get bullied for anything now a days, its very sad. That's why people who get bullied hate themselves and want to become something they are not.

I remember one point in my life, i was deppressed. I kept getting bullied because of how big my head was or how skinny i was. I know it sounds funny, i laugh all the time when i talk about it dont worry. I stopped wanting to come to school because of that. I never wanted to leave my house or talk to anyone. It was very sad. But one day one of my close friends asked me why i wasn't coming to school, and i told him everything. He told me straight up to ignore all the negative stuff that people call me and live your life to the fullest. Since that day, we have been bros for life. He always had my back and i always had his. A few weeks passed and i told my mother. We talked for a few hours about how i should ignore all the negative stuff because life is so short that you can't let anything stop you. That really changed me and how i see life.

Trying to be yourself in this world is very difficult now a days. Just by telling someone that there shoes are ugly can really change the whole person. They start buying stuff that they don't really like. Also doing stuff they don't want to do. Suddenly they start doing bad stuff. Just to fit in with other people that have all the nice clothes and shoes etc. People really can't be themselves because of judgment.

There should be more help in this world so people that are going through this can get help. People should be motivated to be themselves and also love themselves. Some people can really say somethig mean and the victim could commite suicide, just because of someones judgment. People should start treating other people with respect. Parents should start teaching there kids early on how to show respect. People shouldn't care about someone elses opinion. People should live there lifes to the fullest.

People should feel very accomplished to be themselves in this world. People really make you feel like trash when they say something negative about you. There is always going to be negative stuff coming at you, that's normal. That is what makes you stronger and turns you into a great human being. That is what should motivate you to do great things in life. That is what should make yourslef and everybody close to you proud. To be yourslef in this world should be the greatest accomplishment.",4.5,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.0
F8F503B765DA,"i say that we shoudn't have more hours of school , because it will just make us be more sterssed b working. we wil barly have free time to o what t do but more time time in school wil make us tired and weak we will need more food. it will cost the school more food and it wil cost more money and light to wast on teaching. Kids won't learn because they are going to say why did they put more school time and thats all they are going to say the the whole time. It will make it all more busy for the teachers they will get mad and say how they can't do that much hours they got kids they got thing to take care of.

The school will need to whas't more money on food and electicion bill just for one more hour of education and kids won't even learn alote because they will be to busy complaining and say that they want to go home. the school board will just was't money for no reason. school is doing good already so do not mess it up by an hour of school. The teacher will work more time ,so they will get paid more. So if u do put one more hour of school if a kid needs to stay after would they stay an other hour of school that would mean that the teacher would gets a bigger pay cheack and that would be alote of students so teachers would have to stay for ciuds to so that would be longer and by the time its done it will be dark.

The school will need more volnenters because they don't want to pay teachers more already because they already do because they have an other hour of school left so they will have to beg the teachers to volnter to to stay. School will need to think of more thing to do in the school to fill up the hour.

we will not want to go to school. we will be so tired and and to know that we have an other hour of school i would be done for the day. I would not feel like going to school every day because i would be more tired . it will give me less free time to us because we got sleep earlyer because we are tired.

we will get mad because we don't got free time alote and that would effect our school day. Kids will feel that school is to much work and might tell there parents and the parents might tell the school to lower it down. The school will will get complans form parents that there kid is stressing to much so that would be bad and school will have to cancil the one hour. Thats why i think it is a bad idea to put one more hour of school all of the people will disagree i would to because it will just make me stressed out and give less free time. I think school should leave the hours alone since they don't have to deal with the work and tired ness they don't have to think twice.

I think it is dumb to add an hour more because it can mess up every thing. If every thing is doing good then it should stay like that if we need to change it we should all chose if we want a to have one more hour or not. We are the important voteers so why leave us out of it. We are the ones who get tried ,so one more hour and 30 mintues is not good for are bodys even worse if you have after school or a clud. The money that you had to use for the extra time could go to better things like new computers for us. Or it could help for better lunches or better gym oqupment or mucic things and make the school better by painting it or somthing. Instead of was'ting it on one hour of paying teachers. I would like to have free time not streeing out about doing work and being done and haveing little free time. Thats why i think it would be better if we did not get one hour of school and just be the same.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
453ACA22D3B4,"some peole believe distance learning is a good opcion for students, because they can be at home, and they can take the classes they need and with this opcion they are able to do others activities, they need to do everyday.

for example, students who don't have the enought of money and they need to work.

this show that many students get benefits from this opcion that school give to students, because students can work by the day and take the class by the night.

in another example we have students that for any reason can not attend to school.

they could stay at home and also get the credits they need to graduate from schoool.

this opcion is also good for the students who want to graduate early from school. for example, students that only want to be by 3 years at school, they can take the regular classes and also can take some classes as distance learning. this suggest that every schools should have this program, because it is so helpfuly for students who want to graduate from school, but they can't attend school.

online classes also help people who already finish the school, but they want to continue studing and they can take clases online. for example a teacher who have a basic degree to teach, but he want to get a master degree. he or she can teach by the they, and he can take his classes online, when he get free time.

in conclusion this opcion is very helpfuly for students , and it is a opcion wich all the schools should have.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
F07EB7B6F40E,"I have been through so many things in my life and imagination has help go through the crazy thing in life. I would want to leave everything and everyone . Imagination has helped me realize that i could become who ever I wanted to be. It even helps me through any problem. It help me realize that can prove people wrong by just imagining the best things in life are coming my way. No matter how much i'm going through, i'm always going to be happy and grateful for what I have and gone through. Without the bad days you will never know how to enjoy the good ones.

Remember everything happens for a reason!

Imagination helps me have hope no matter what I have gone through . I had to imagine a lot when my brother went to jail. I would always have to believe thats it going to be fine. I would always imagine that my brother was home and that I could see him again. No matter how hard it was for me. Every time we would go visit him and it was time to leave I had to imagine that he was coming home with me. Even every time we would go to court I would have to imagine that they would let him leave. Sometime knowing thats their two much on my head, imagining help me feel free and peaceful with no problem.

It was hard dealing with my brother and school on top of that. Imagination really change how I look at life. It makes me bring out my creativeness out. It made me realize what I have been missing out on. Imagination help me forget everything thats going on in life no matter how big or small the problem is. Also it help me feel myself and not pretending to be someone that i'm not. Sometimes going through things help you understand why it happened to you. But at the movement it might seem horrible. I just know that there is a purpose for me and that end!

Knowledge might be a great thing but imagination helped me achieve things that I never thought before. Imagination help me feel good about my self. It help block all the negative things. Imagining helps me know that I can do what ever I want , I just have to put my mind and heart to it. Also it helps me feel unique from everyone else. It helped me gain self respect and convinces. Imagination is a great thing for every thing. It might seem weird but it helps in many different ways. Thinking out side the box is not always a bad thing it help me bring out my smartness and strongest things through everything in life. I do think imagination is really important in life. Also it can take me really far in life.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
343A80DD6FB3,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others.

People can checkout books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person.

Has the limitation of human concact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives?

Towards to technology, lack of communication is going to ruin our human sociaty.

Especially when phones are advancing in the next years.

One day, technology will take over the human population.

Say this, one day a boy meets this girl from school and they were talking through a social media,

but one day, they thought to meet up in person and when they saw each other, it was really awkward at first, but then they became very good friends. So they started to go to the movies, the mall, restuarants, and etc.

They started as two random strangers to having a, boyfriend and girlfriend relationship. Saying this to someone is really touching, because liking someone is to die for, but there's rules to follow and things to do and not just kissing or making love, its being there for them and hopefully you'll be there too.

Meeting that special person is a blessing, because for so long people have been trying to talk to this special someone,

but its really hard to confess it through person, but throught a screen is pretty easy, but do you really mean it?

Saying ""I love you"" means alot to someone, but actually saying it over and over again, it just warms my heart to say this, but i think im in love. Not just saying to make people to break through a screen, because saying ""i wanna break up"" it really just says you do not have the heart to say it to their face. Honestly everyone who does this, should just atleast try it and see what's more than life, then just being on the phone most of the day.

Once the day comes everyone will just destroy their own phone to prevent from robot abomination.

Sticking together as one, we can stop phone users and type of electronic device to end this obsession once and for all. Opening up to someone, its like a flower is about to blossum. Seeing that special someone is a delight!

Through peoples lives this is a negative thing toward human lives. Knowing that someday we will come together as human beings and sttle this like us!",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
E0C521DEB367,I disagree with the school board because we not trying be in school more time in school. Also students need to have their own time outside of school with family and friends. I also think this because students spent 8hrs in school more than what they spend at home. My other idea is that i think the schools around that county should have a essay in all schools asking students about how they feel about this decision. The county should take the students decision as a answer about what they think because our ideas matter too. Also the school should be thinking about the students benefits of being in school for longer and for less not just to one side. I think if they did that they point of view will change a lot knowing what students think also it would help them know about what students they are dealing with that would be a great advantage for them. That would help them with the decision and knowing what would be the impact on the students. This is my prompt to yall about if i agree or disagree.,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C444D6A0AC1C,"Although, many people believe that extracurricular activities can enrich students educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have little time to study and complete their homework assignments. This decision should solve with their families, because this decision shouldn't made by school, school should help not control students to do the extracurricular for their good experiment with other student or get involved with different team works, and some student don't want to do or stay after school program or any other extracurricular activities.

First, whether student wants to join or do extracurricular activities they should ask parents or families first, because some parents don't wants to do the extracurricular activities. Example, some students have a lot of homework, project, tests or their different school works. Some parents don't want let the kids or students to do the extracurricular activities because of their other school works. This can cause their student fail the school or other stuff can happened to them. This is why extracurricular activities decision should made by families not by schools.

Then, school should help not control students to do the extracurricular for their good experiment with other students or get involved with team works. Some school wants students to do join clubs, sports, and any other after school program, because some after school program needs students to do join their program by forcefully. Example some sports coach ask to do join their team but the student don't want to join for some kind of reason, and sometime they email or call to their parents to let them join our programs. Some student don't want to join any after school program for some reason. This is why after school program or extracurricular activities should made by families decision.

Lastly, some student don't want to stay after school program or any other activities. Some student are already tired from school example, some students is already taking lot of extra classes at school and they probably have lot of test and quiz or even homework. If they decided to do after school program or any other extracurricular activities then it's up to their families choice, but most of students don't want to stay after school because they already have lots of homework, projects, prepare for their quiz and tests. If school wants to control student to get involve with any other after school activities then it can cause students grades, lack of sleep, and other stuff can happen to students. This is why extracurricular activities decision should made by their families or by parents.

This is why I want parents or families to make a decision about after school programs. This is the three reason that I want families make a decision about after school programs not by school. Although many people believe that school should control student involvement in extracurricular activities. For me I disagree that school should not make a decision for students, decision should made by students families or by their parents for my three reasons. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
79D634E4575F,"Some schools of the United States are looking forward to the day that students will attend classes from home by way of online. Dispite this exciment it can be not beneficial for some students in the way of learning. Making students to attend classes online happens will change many students lives. Although some say that offering online classes by the school would be more beneficial, actually it won't be beneficial for students who wants to attend online classes offered by the school because it will require more work for students and students will have less interaction with people face to face.

Those who believe schools should offer online classes have reasons. They believe that students will have flexible schudeles during the day. It will help students to relieve strees and to work if they have a part-time job. They also think that students will become more responsable attending classes from home. Doing their work in their own will develop a self- decipline.

One of the main reasons why schools of the United States shouldn't offered students to attend classes online from their is because it requires more work from the students. For example, my friend Generic_Name. He is attending one class online from his home. He says that he doesn't have too much time to practice a hobby or do something else because he needs to do a lot of assignments for his online class. Sometimes he has to do two homeworks each day just for one class. Also his class online requires to write a lot, such as essays or read books. Essays and reading books counts as a big percent of his grade. And it doesn't include the warm-ups and classworks during the class. Requiring this ammount of work schools shouln't offered these classes online because too much work is assigned just for one class. If students want to take other classes they won't have time to do it. Like my friend Generic_Name his life has become very busy since he stated taking this online class offered by his school.

In fact, students become very wird because they have less interaction with people face to face. For instance, my counsin Generic_Name she used to be a girl that really liked to interact with people. One day her school offered her some online classes to take. She said yes. Well in a short period of time her parents starting to notice that she was becoming a very shy and wird person when time was passing and continuing taking clases online. Later, her parents found out that her online clases made her become a wird child because of the less interaction she had with people. Schools should privide students a diferent method to help students to attend their classes becuase online classes keep students from the real world and their interaction with people. Avoiding classes online will reduce the percent of students to become wird and shy and to have a better relationship with people.

In conclusion, many schools of the United States should stop offering students online classes becuase it requires a lot of work for the students. These classes just make students's life busier than what they expected. Also, students are afraid to interact with other people face to face because they spend most of time in their computers. The real world need students who like to interact with people not shy students. Students don't see benefits of attending online classes, instead it just make their life difficult in many ways.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
214EC21D1403,"I agree that positive attitude is the key of success in life. Because the importance of having a good attitude is to never doubt yourself that you can't do it when all you have to put is work. Working hard is most of the common things you can do to pass High School and College. Then you start searching up for things that you're interested to do after you finish college like a job which you have to have a positive attitude to pass the interview and treat customers good. Positive attitude will change your life forever.

One, Having a positive attitude will get you anywhere. You want to have a good image that its positive. You have to be hopeful and confident about the future. In many places is hard to find a good successful job, which all you have to do is have good attitude in front of the manager and if you get it keep your head up always don't let that ruin you. For example, their is a lot opportunities for a good successful job, but you have to keep working hard until you get what you wanted.

Two, Feeling good about yourself is sometimes what you need to have success. If its necessary to take away people to have good feeling about you is good so you can focus more on want to do in life. You are the only person that can control yourself or behavior. Take little five minutes to think and prove to yourself that you can do it without any help. For example, If you don't like Monday mornings all you have to do is reflect a positive thought on your mind that will make you happy the rest of the day.

Three, Show your best work by doing right thing in life to success. If you have you head up always and sometimes you need to think is good for yourself which make you a better person my reflecting a good image. Be honest to yourself and never take life for granted. Is important that you have a good positive attitude by doing this stuff which will led you to a good successful career. For example, You have a big interview that is gonna require a lot hard work cause this can define your future and you want to be successful in life overall if you pass and have all the techniques you need you're good then, but if not then you will keep trying until you get it right.

I agree that positive attitude is the key of success in life. In this life you can be whatever you want,but all you have to do is work hard. Have a positive mind set and positive attitude this will led you to have a good things in life. Have faith on yourself to get back what you want. The success don't come along in just one day you have to keep working hard to reach the top and have what you always wanted. Success will pay you off at the end when you have reach the top and all from it was to have a positive attitude and be the greatest person ever. This will show you that anything is possible to do in this world. What's impossible become possible.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
583DC3D2E7FC,"I think that people who graduate a year early to go into the workforce, or start college early isn't a good idea or decision. People end up missing out on a lot of High school experiences. High school should be about making memories and making the best out of the four years they have left. Having time to be focusing on deciding what kind of career they want to have in the future. High school gets people ready for deciding about what they want to be when they grow up.

People who finish High school early might not be 100% sure on what they want to do or what they want to be. Also, having to take summer courses and classes takes away from having a summer and enjoying it. Spending time with family and friends, traveling. Although people have the ability to finish early you'd end up missing summer and always working on classes,doing projects,doing homework,or extra credit assignments,etc. Even though most people who finish early have a lot of pressure on them to try and get the most work done so they can finish early. It could get stressful because they're studying for exams and trying to stay on top of their grades and assignments.

I think it's better to have the full 4 years of high school because you would have more time to do things like sports, clubs,etc. Being apart of a team. Going to games and competitions. Going to powder puff home, football games, etc. Also if you're apart of a club like Photography,choir,film, or any club they would be able to make a lot more memories and have time.

Especially During their last year of high school. Missing out on senior events, senior class trips,having fun being a senior. Having Senior privileges, early release, late arrival, Eating at lunch in the senior patio. Having senior class trips, Graduating. finishing all your assignments and getting out of school a month early. Getting senior class rings, having memories of getting ready the day or night of graduation. During your senior year since your almost done with High school you get to have less classes because you have all your credits.

In conclusion i think it's best if people don't graduate early because they'd miss out on the full 4 years high school experience. Being able to make memories with friends, meeting new people throughout the 4 years. Participating in school clubs and sports teams. Making the most out of high school events like homecoming, and prom. I believe it's better and easier to graduate after the four years. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
DA254A895F0D,"what type of workplace would you like to pursue at school with partnerships, local companies, and organizations. I would like to pursue something fun and that I like, and that that I know what is it about what would I do. it's fun to do something that I like and that I know what to do and I know what is it about and if the employer allow me to go visit I would chose something fun.

I would like to pursue something that I like to do. I would explore and see everything. when I do not know something about like partnership with local and organizations. I like to learn when I do not know about something or what is it about. I would ask someone to talk about partnership with local companies and organizations. after someone have talk to me partnership with local companies and organizations. I would chose something that i like to explore. i would chose something interesting that I like.

I would like to pursue something fun. I like to chose something that I know what to do. I would like to do something fun that I like and I know what to do. I like to have fun. doing what I like to do and learn. I would chose something that I understand. Because I do not like to do something that I do not like to do or learn. I would chose something fun, that I understand and that I like. If the employer allow me to go visit.

I would tell someone to talk to me and explain everything. About everything that they do and learn. I would I would like to know what would I like learn in there.

And see if I would like and what is going to be about.

I would like to know what would I explore and learn.

If I am Interesting in something.

I would chose something interesting.

it's fun do something that I know what to do and what is it about and if the employer allow me to go visit I would chose something fun.

In all of this I learned to do what you like and that some school have partnerships local companies and companies.

I think is fun to do what you like and have fun.      ",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
DDCB2CC96EA7,"I am strongly agree the failures in our lifes means to keep going and be a successful person. Although some say success not consists of going from failure because people always fell many times keeping doing the same mistakes in several times in their lifes, actually success consists of going from failure because failure help us to learn more in our lifes and get experiences to teach other people.

Those who believe success not consists of going from failure have they reasons. One reason people always fell many times keeping doing the same mistakes in several times in their lifes. But doing the same mistakes many times does not help people to be successful; makes the person wake in front of others. People that are better to them can make bullying at them because they feel that they are perfect than others .Many of the people that keep thinking that they are a loser think about diying is the better thing to get out of the failures. Did you know is that 90% 0f the teenagers kill them self instated of find help to keep going with their lifes. It is very scary and make me sad at the same time. If we use social medias we can see people talking about their lifes or using drugs and drugs makes the person to lose more their mind.

However, success consists of going from failure because failure help us to learn more in our lifes. Learning from failure to failure is better for all the people. Having the enthusiasm in our mind can be the better word to start our life every day. We are capable of doing many things it does not matter how many times we have to do the same things to be better in our feature but we have to keep going not matter what. In my position I have a experience; when I was in my country I did not what to do with my life; I just was trying to finish my middle school, get a job and then have a family and now here I am making better things for my life; now I am tinking about to have a better life. when I came to USA I was tinking about how am I going to do if I do not nothing about the language but now I feel more conformist knowing the language because makes me keep going studying. I though that learning another language was a new obstacle for me to keep going we my life.

Also, success consists of going from failure because people get experiences to teach people. There are many people that think that they are failure and they are not; I think that every people are genius. The things is that people don not let the talents get out and that can be because they think about others people opinions about them. I have many experiences keep seeing people about failure. Had you ever try to help others? I have it done many times. When I was in my country I saw this person trying to be better but at the same time this person was with many problems that did not let to keep going. In many occasion I help the person to be better like getting solutions with the problems and it is very difficul to teach others with the problems and try to make them better.

Seeing our life in a failure can be the worst thing, but keeping trying to do better things each day is going to be the better effort in our life and that is going to help us to get more enthusiastic every day. It is very helpful to find ways to be better in the world because every person had to have new things to do the life better for themselves and help others if they are struggling with their life.                      ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
D752DF2541DD,"Dear Principle,

changing the policy is a good idea, because many people have c average, and if they play any sports, they might get a lower average than a c. Also they have to focus on their school work first than the sports, and like I said before playing sports might get them failing. Also, if nobody is making a change, on their grades than maybe she could change it but, meanwhile she should keep it to a b average to play any sports or to be in any activity, the students are going to try their best at making good grades to play sports. It is good in many reasons to keep a good average, because then they get their report card or their progress reports and they see that they have a low average, it is going to be because they are focusing to much in their sports or activities. The principle should first see how the students react to the changing, and if it works than, yea keep it, but she can always change it. It doesn't matter if they have a high C, but then need to have a B. Most students would argue about having to study, but i think its for their own good, also the school will change, for example, the school recognized for having a C average ad letting them play sports or do any activities, that could change if the students try hard enough and change the C to a B, then the school will recognized by having a B average on, most of the students.

The reason that its best for students to have good grades, its because also at the end of the year if they don't have a good average, they will not be able to pass the year. Back to the point it will be challenging, but I'm sure the students that love playing sports or being part of school activities, those people will actually try and make those grades, but if for some reason, those people who tried their best, like they went to tutoring, did all their home and school work, and turned it in, then you might want to check in with his/her teachers and see if they want to let them participate, but everyone can make at least a B, not an A but a B, because we all are very smart, some smart as others, but yes I'm sure, it will all work out, but if they keep on complaining, and they don't actually try to do their best, and they slack off, go to sleep in class they you won't see a difference n their grades, then that's their lost, because we want our school to be recognized, with all of out players with a B. one of the reasons why i want the students to have a good average, its because, those who want to succeed will try until they get it right, but if you are the person who doesn't care, then whose fault is that?

So i would like to have that policy. As i told you before, everyone is smart enough to pass their grades, even if, they don't think so.

It wont be so bad, either, to try your best at school, even if you just do it for sports, but i you were the type of person that was failing, then now you can say that you are passing all of your classes, don't think of what other people have to say, just do it for yourself.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
48EA282A4EAF,"some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. i think student would benefit form being able to attend classesfrom home. you are authorized take the electronic version of this you will taking this promptsome student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option.

online pr video conferencing. the right view the prompt and teh checklist for writers vvsome student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student.",1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0
D8D84A2E4CE0,"I think that working in group would be beneficial, because ya'll can help each other and learn about work and can be practice words that they don't know. Another beneficial that help's you to work in group is that they can finish he work more faster then working alone, because if you work alone it takes to much time to finish the work.

Sometimes when the teacher tell you to make a project and tells you that she's going to put groups to work you know that you don't have to speak by yourself because you know that your friends will help you to make it together. I think that work with someone else helps you to relax because sometimes you don't know something, but you can ask your friends if they know and they help each other, but sometimes it's better to work alone because no one distract you and if you have friends that would be distracting because if you trying to make your work and they playing aroud that will be extrecing even that you know that it's going to be more hard to finish your work you feel relax because everything that you doing its right. If i have to choice from working in groups or working by myself i wirll prefear to work in groups because i think that would be more help full for me.

It's beneficial for me to work in gorups, you know sometimes you been stresing for to much work and you know that no one can help you because you have to work alone, and if you work with someone you can talk with him or her ask about what this thing means or ask them for some opinios and get it together. Working alone you are thinking i have to do this and this i don't have no one to help me and sometimes you don't finish your work because the project was hard, thats why it's better to work with groups both have benefices, but you did't working alone for me it's not a good choice, but it's not a bad choice. Even if you have to work by yourself you have to try your best. I know that a lot of people choice to work by there self, but one time you going to be wrong and you gonna need help, both choices benefical you one way or the other way.

One day i was maiking a project by myself and that take me to much time to finish the project, and i was stresing because i didn't understand somethings that they was asking me and i have no one to ask about it. I have do a lot of projects by myself and in groups and i know that working in groups helps you more 3 or 4 breins works more then one brein.

If you finish the work faster you know that you have more time to do other things that you wants to do, ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
9ED1E2DB0B0F,"If someone wants to grow more as a person, they will have to try different things. I believe that Ralph Waldo Emerson is right. To grow more as a person people have to try different things because the most things they do the more experience they get. If a person mastered something already he will feel that he know everything but the true is that he only know whay he mastered, but if a pereson try different thing he would get more experience that can be use in the future.

an example of this is Pique. He is a famous soccer player. he get pay a lot of money, but to grow more as a person. he also become a busines man. Now Pique have a lot of companies that work for him. he also created his own Tennis league in Spainh. Pique also support a fundation that his wife created to help kids in Colombia.

Other example is one of my uncles from Generic_City. his mane is Generic_Name. He study to be a teacher. He was very happy with his work, but to grow more and get more knowledge he go back to college to study to become a doctor. Now he feel like he know more and that he have grow more as a person.

I also like to thing that I'm a example of this. I always try to do my best to leard different sports. I'm a really good soccer player, but I prefere to try others sports. I play a different sport everyday because I feel that this will help me to become a better player and will give me the experience to grow more as a athlete. I also like to to study a lot for the classes that I'm having problems because I get more knowledge about different topics and make me grow more as a student

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People can still growing when they mastered something. An example of this is Leonel Messi. he is a soccer. he has play soccer all his life's. He always was getting better and better every year. he never play other sport in his life's. Now he is considere one of the best player in the world. He grow as a person by doing what he already mastered.

people have to do different things in their life's if they want to grow as a person because if they think they are the best is a lie. They are the best in what they mastered, but they don't have any type of knowledge in other thing. In conclution if someone wants to grow more as a person. He will has to try different things to get more experience and more knowledge.    ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
4861FFA6F6CE,"It's better to have an elective class because it simple, forgiving and doesnt take skills doesn't take time in the schedule and more Students will likely to pass the classes and both elective and art have the same principle with the same accomplishment. The difference about the two is art classes and electives how they would set a skills some sudents have good skills in drawing or writing it will take student time on school work than outside job that they working on; Art classes are hands on class is for students who wants advanced skills in writing or any type of work or job related to technology or language skills, good scholarship and art classes not for students who procastinate than doing their work. As My i would prefer elective classes because it doesnt get my school work on my path and I have to complete it. elective class helps students who doesnt have time to do their work also benfit any students to have jobs outside of schools. Some students in elective class can have the same credits for graduation same as the art class but more students would rather have elective beacue ii is much more relax than getting alot of class work in front;

As a student i would rather have an elective class ,",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
9DA131E0F720,"Last week, I had a math test on my first period. I prepared well for the test, but on that day, I woke up late, and I realized I got late for my school. I also have missed my school bus; therefore, I had to walk the whole way to my school. I was tired and tensed. As a result, I couldn't do well in that test, but if I was taking online class, I could take the test from home and be able to not get into all this trouble. Online classes can save us from getting into all this kind of problems and save our time also. Although some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because sometimes, students might not understand their lecture or work on online classes, and as a result, they would not be able to do well in that class, actually students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time and by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities.

Those who believe students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home have their reasons.

They say sometimes students might not understand their lecture or work on online classes, and as a result, they would not be able to do well in that class. For example, if they get a project or assignment, some students may have trouble in understanding how to do/complete that assignment or sometimes, they might not understand a topic from a lecture in online class.

However, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time. For example, if I get sick, I don't need to miss school. I can stay at home and take my classes from home. Again, if I'm not at home or may be I'm at my relative's place or my friend's place, I'll be still able to attend those classes.

Also, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities. One example is that, if I don't need to come to school to attend classes I would be able to make my own schedule and I can do my job for more hours in weekdays and save money for my college. Again, I can finish my school works quickly and take other courses which can help me in my future career or, may be I can do some other activities I like.

In conclusion, students would benefit from being able to attend online classes from home because sometimes, students don't want to go to school because of sickness or being not at home, so they can stay home and take classes from wherever they are at that time and by taking online classes, high school students can save a lot of time and can work for more hours or do some other courses or activities. Online classes can help us in many ways. Not only it will save our time but also it can give us opportunity to do a lot of extra activities and enjoy the day.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
732952FF57F2,"For the time students get to high school, Is time for the students to focus more on their future. Students that go to high school are expecting to do more work and be with a different mind set. Going to high school, is the time when students need to think what they want to do in the future, and pick a career that they like. But there are many students, that don't care about their futures, others don't think about their futures in high school. High school is the time when students are able to get focus and think about a career they wanna take. Also to pick a career that you like,and you enjoy doing it. But there are many students that take career just to take them but thats no the career they like so they end it up not achieving nothing.

In high school, is where a lot of students work so they can get money and buy what they want and Also to pay their college career. So identify a career by the time students get to high school help. Because now the students now how much does the career cost, and where he can go studied when he finish high school. Also choosing a career when your young helps, because students have more time to get more information, about the career. And see if there are others career that students would like to take. So thats why committing to a career by the time you get to high school helps you, have more time to view different careers and choose the one u like the best.

Many student that are almost in high school, think about how high school going to be like. So been able to choose a career before high school helps. Because the student can get their mind set and think about what courses the student wants to take in high school. Those courses can help, because it teach the student the things that he needs to learn therefore hes prepare the career, he wants to take. And also to be able to search where the he wants to go studied and pick the collage that teach the best for his career.

And finally preparing for a career before high school, gives the students more opportunities. So I agree for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. also high school has a lot opportunities, for students that wants to take collage course. So they can be prepare for their careers, and when they get to collage they now a lot about the career they want to take. So it helps committing to a career before going to high school it can get you prepare for your future. And acomplish what you want for your future.    ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
194E86ED4117,"My dad usually told me that failure is the mother of success when i was young. Way to success is not easy, everyone had to face different kinds of problems. It will fell harder and harder every time you failed, and it's hard to keep up the enthusiasm while facing different kind of problems. Yes, i'm fully agree with Mr. Churchill.

Failure lead you to success. Simple example about Elon Musk, one of the richest people on planet Earth. He was the Chairman of PayPal, Tesla. At 2002 he invented SpaceX, first ever self-investment rocket company to reach the Earth's orbit. Also, most amazing thing is they invented the reuse rocket, which is the rocket will land back to earth after launch to the Earth's orbit. SpaceX has accomplished so many that people talk about their success so much without remember their failure. Let me tell you this: The first 2 of their rocket(Falcon 1) launch are all failure due to engine failure. after during a other year of researching, testing, and examine, the 3rd rocket launch still failed to reach the Earth's orbit. At that time everyone think this project is a jock and Elon only have the money to launch the 4th rocket. Without losing hope and years of hard work, their 4th rocket(Falcon Launch 4) was successfully launched and reach the Earth's orbit. Elon and SpaceX made history, SapceX also received a large amount of money by NASA.

Don't ever lose your enthusiasm(Hope). Don't Never Ever Give Up, one of the greatest quote of all time, it lead so many people to success. Like Elon Musk i talked about last paragraph, he is a great example for us. His enthusiasm and passion about Space transpiration in the future and even moving people to space lead him and his company into success. I'm a sports athlete, i play basketball for 5 years already, it's part of my life. Every athlete knows practice is boring but also important. Why so many people still play professional basketball is because they have the passion and enthusiasm about winning. Process is boring and long, however it only take one moment for sports athlete to fell everything is worth it. Still some people failed on their way, beat by the tiredness of the process and slowly lose their enthusiasm for what they are chasing for at the beginning.

Failure complete the adventure, last thing i'm going talk about today. Everyone is emotional, everyone hate losing, everyone wanted to take the short cut. I'm the everyone, you are the everyone too, but without the gaps on the road to success, the adventure just seems not complete. Every failure make the explorer more stronger and smarter. Learn from the mistake, take note from it and you will be step ahead from everyone else. Every person on this planet with big accomplishment also have big mistakes too. No one is perfect, just go do thing what you want or like to do, eventually the journey will become interesting.

All for all, guess you already tired of reading. i support my 3 main points: Failure lead you to success, don't ever lose your enthusiasm, failure complete the adventure. I'm also agree with Mr. Winston:'' success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.'' Failure does play a important role in the pursuit of success.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
E3611716918E,"Some people chosee to be diffrent drom other people. Some people act difrente from each other. All people diffrent from each other. Some people always in a happy mood,Some people always sad. Some people always mad. I belive all people should be happy. Is not fear if someone was sad or mad they all should be happy all the time. Some people they are sad beacse they lost there job, or they lost there mom or dad they always gonna be in sad mood. Like some people lost there mom there mom they always gonna be in sad mood no matter what. Noone can change them. Some people will change but if it was somone lived with his mom for a while like 25 years these people gonna be sad forevere. And I hopoe they will be happy. Okay now les talk about mad people they bad persolty these are not good. They always in a bad mood. some people have anger issuse like they get mad so fast they will do bad stuff like beat there kids or wife some people get drunk and get crazy these kinda people need help some people break evrething in the house this not good at all they some peoole are mad beacse they have3 jobs a day and is vrey hard when you have more the one job. Or they get paid bad or they just dont like to work. Some mad people always fighting in schools they alwsys get kicked out school. but they will change one day. Now we can talk about happy people they always happy. They have good jobs. They are rich they might have a lot of money. Some people are just happy no matter what even if they are poor or they dont have nothing they still be happy. Some people just happy even if they face bad stuff bad job bad money there boss treade them bad not good even they boss dont pay them good they will still be happy one day evrey preson in this earth poor people,masd people sad people, they all gonna be happy one day and they gonna be a team a strong team they gonna kill the word sad or mad we all should be happy we all live once.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
BFE92DE70CA2,"Although i believe it's a good idea to be our self where ever we are. over all being our self is better than act deafrient. Also not being comfort with it. Because being our self is mean trust our self. Not believing to any one who come to as, and till as any thing to Change as. then reaching our goal by trusting our self. For example. Being our self shows those people how strong we can be,and continuing our way to improve.

In a word that we see people change accomplishment. We should trust our self to not change. To a bad person, or any thing that a society try to make as. Trusting our self and continuing our way to improve more. to show a society how strongly we trust our self. So that way we keep our self in better way. Also i believe we can progress people around as. Because it show people that they can do same as we do.

When we see that some people really try to change as. Or a society that is Changed already, and they are following a different ways to improve their life. Also they try to change as as the way they want it. To follow their way, and we know that it is not the way we can improve. So to be our self, and we chose to improve our life in other rule. It is because we see something that is not going right, but the society has changing. Also it looks when those people try to improve, and they get that, they heard other people. and they dont know they rich something they effect some other thing that they dont know about about.

I believe it is not acceptable for as to do the same to heard some people. Then we should follow some other way to our life.

Clearly "" is society that is constantly trying to make as change in highest improvement.(Author Ralph Waldo Emerson) I should believe to my self. That i can rich my goal successfully. progress on the thing that i need and want. So i should not let ant one to turn me from my goal. Because there is some people who want as, to not rich our goal or dreams. To advents my self i would work so hard. But is some people who is trying to fail as in our way to rich our goal. Then going to embrace as for are fail, also try to stop as to rich that dream. But i believe if we trust our self, and have a big goal to rich to. It will be possiball to get it. Then no one can get our way to stop as.

being our self trusting to our goal, and respect our self, makes people to respect as. As will as we do to them. Also reaching our goal dreams In a right way. But being in a society that people as changed. then try in to change me. SO i see the can improve but in not right way, and not respect between people. So then i believe i should be my self.

finally I believe it is good idea to be our self. and do the things that makes as happy about it. So if see in society that is changing, and see some people trying to, Change me. Even i do the right thing to improve. But those people saying to so the thing other, i know that is not right to do it. Because they way the are saying it could heard people. but they jut look forward to improve. Over all i believe to be my self and the the thing in right ways.                                                                                                                 ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
9801CF414927,"I believe that changing the school lunch menu would be a good idea, there are reasons why the change of the lunch would be good idea; It can help students who are sick, It can help the students who play in a sport team, it can help those student who abuse eating at home.

First reason: healthier school lunch menu can be good for many students who does fitness and also for those who play in the school sports teams, they need to be healthier, for example soccer players needs to be with good weight, so they can play good in their games, but if they are eating things with a lot grease they would not be on the team, because they are not eating healthy.

Second reason: The change of the school lunch menu can also be good for those students who abuse eating at home, for that I think the healthier lunch menu can be a good idea, because they abuse eating bad thing at home but, they eat healthier at school, that is the second reason why I choose that the healthy lunch menu is a good idea, because the students are eating better than what they eat at their homes.

Third reason: This last reason is to show that the healthy food is better, because it helps students who are with any type of disease whether is a terminal disease or a normal disease, it doesn't matter what kind of disease can be,

it just that eating healthy help them for example, there are many student who are with diabetes sometimes they to bring their lunch from their home, because at school there nothing they can eat, because everything may have grease or sugar on it, and that is the reason why student bring their lunch, because of their disease, so that is why I think healthy food can a good option for the school lunch menu.

In conclusion, the healthier school lunch menu would be a good idea because it will help a lot students in many ways including teachers, students, and all the people who works a the school, I think is a good idea to be healthy not just out of school also inside of the school, we just want to maintain our habits, and that can be good because, we are doing the right thing, and that is my opinion about the school lunch menu, we just want to improve with the school and doing this we will.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
5C2A497012B9,"Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home?

yes and no; yes, because students who are taking online classes or taking classes at home would be more focused, since there's no distraction like other students or teachers. No, because it is not very active socially and physically, unlike going to school, interacting with people, and playing sports.

Also, if the internet's not working then the student would have to skip the class because internet is what loads the videos and is used for face timing with the students. Some students can't learn just by watching a video or taking an online class, they have to actually experience the situation to understand. But the majority of the students can learn from videos and online classes.

Since technology is growing, I think in the upcoming future there will be just online classes that you can take and schools will be there but the students will go there only if the internet is down or any other internet problems, that way the students won't miss a single day of class.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
BFD5F32AA3C2,"People should make their decisions because first everyone should depends on himself in life to get more experience second people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions third making decisions make people stronger and know what to do in a hard situation.

One Decision Can Change A Person Life!

However, some people might argue with that, because they think that people should not make their own decisions but they should seek guidance from experts to make a better decisions for them.

First, everyone should depends on himself and make a better decisions in life to get more experience for example a student can't get a good grade unless he makes a decisions to pay attention to the teacher and doing the homework.

Second, people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions for example nobody will be by your side all the time and in the hard situations to help you make a good decision and a person should not just think once but twice and think far and know what are the consequences of every decision.

Third, one decision can change everybody life and that is on of the reasons why people should depend on them self because nobody cares about you more than you. Other reason is most of the successful people they started from nothing but they made a good decisions and they became successful.

In conclusion, people should make their own decisions because first everyone should depends on himself in life to get more experience second people are not going to learn unless they make their own decisions third making decisions make people stronger and know what to do in a hard situation.

Are you gonna make your own decisions now?                                                                                                          ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
84CE7281265F,"My uncle has in his wallet 100 dollars, he give to me 10 and stay with the rest,I tell him to save the money for tomorrow he well need it, but he spend all the money to buy shirt pants and hats, and the next day he was asking for money for the gas for the car. My unclewas happy for the money and to buy things with the money and fro not listen we was need it for tomorrow. He spend all the money in things that are good for him but he knowing he will need it, for tomorrow he spended it, are all.

Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choise. Once of my friend was having money on his paket he says,""lets go whatch a movie on the cinema"". but all the rest of my friend we tell him to ""NO"", Because the movie was aready in CD and was much less money than go whatch it in the cinema. When my friend recibe ours opinions we see the situation in other perspective of the he was thinking. Even my friend want to whatch the movie on the cinema, should be a to spend a lot of money to pay. and that how we tell him to buy it.

When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. My Dad give to be money to buy anything that i want, knowing that tomorrow I will need a white shirt, I buy a game and my dad tell me about the place that we need to go and will need the shirt and for my obsession for the game the nezt day was asking if they can give me money to buy the shirt, and my dad tell me yesterday,""I tell you to buy it, but you don't listen to me"". Even I was knowing about the shirt, this happen because i did't listen, In adition, all the talk and learning, and that day after the money I save it for this type of case.

The case that happen in resume, all talk about how important is that to listen to the people around you, All this situation happens because there were listen to the person next to it.

and you, In sometimes is okay to that more than one person talk to you?",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
DCED9DA8896F,"Technology allows people to speak to others, People cam do meny diffrent task at the at the same time It help us to make progest, Technology allows me to complete many tasks,

Many times It suppout me in my many accompaniment tasks,

Technology has the limitation of human contact . On the otherhand technology can also hart people,

It Can take all of your money from the bonk, Overall techology is good more than bad, More and more people's life change wit the help of technology, Finally technology help people to check out books, shop online, And play games. Finaly technology give us the chance to take the test on line,

Technology had posiliv or negaliive effects on people's lives and a hald good and bad inthe long run we nrrd tecnology to improve people's life and take a position on people, after all this thin call technology is the best thing in this centry, we all benefat from It in many ways,Technology allows people to make many plances,

Another person has the limitation of contact other people wit good and bad nuse,The illegally casts a vote at each of relationship to other It impurties in this time, ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
2EBC2F60AAE9,"life most important matter is when we make decisions for success or failed. The thing is when you make the right decisions which is a good thing however when we make the wrong thing. However we as Human learn from the mistakes we did wrong and try not to make it again and to do it better. Like for some instead when we have to trust your self for it to happen. In the way at People at think want guidance for some one it may be good or bad which sometime is must be good to have it when we need it in a bad time.

I think people should decisions for there own. Also to believe there self because nobody know you like you know your self .For example how would you know what is inside if the people mind and for you try to help him or her. Some people have to believe there self and have good faith and Am sure is going to help you to solve all your Issue.

In this world we live in people don't care about you they only care there self and money,family. For instead if you fail people think at they are better then you at is why nobody would never try to make you better person .All people these Days only care about there safe and money,family. At is why i choose to make my own decisions and if i failed i am going to try it again to i be better what i do. I have min reason to think at most people don't care about people.

For the people who choose to go seek with someone. I understand what it feels like to be. however i think they should talk with there self first and tell your self. What i am do wrong and how can i make it right and what i need to do so you can learn it. Your self because people are not going to be with you when you need them or for there to ask them for life important matters. At is why you should decision life matter's for you in do the right thing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
82618B162AAC,"I don't think its fair to change the policy.

What if the students were close to have an a grade or b ? We all are trying are best and for you gust to come and change the policy. students are even going to have worse grades. Because them thinking that they could only be in a sport if they have an a or b . And them trying there best to bring grades up and have more points! ITS NOT fair.

I say you just leave the things the way it is! Kids are going to do better in school and bring there grades up. But if you just come and take those sports away trust me its not going to be so good at all! Guys are going to argue about soccer and foot ball. Girls are going to argue about there sports and there not going like it.

Leave everything the way you think is best but there not going to like it and the scores are going to down. And your not going to like the way everything is going to be.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
85C54BD4D416,"Thomas Jefferson, writer of the Declaration of Independence and founding father of the United States, once said, ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" In Jefferson's eyes, a world spent in constant work and motion represents a more productive and accomplished world. However, there is merit in a world that does not work without break and resolves to be idle at times. A world that is always working may also be a world that is burning out, diminishing the value of building connections and reflecting. A world that is idle when it recognizes its need to be has more value than a world that is always working, as it allows time for cognitive development and reflection, mental health, and inspiration.

In the body, the brain represents an entity that is constantly developing, creating new ideas, and planning for the future. If a human was always working, there would be no time to create new ideas or plan. The potential of the human brain would reduce, as the human brain would never have the time to step back and reflect on its past experiences and how it wants to reflect lessons learned from those experiences in the future. For example, if Thomas Jefferson had not taken time off to create new ideas and plan for his country before writing the Declaration of Independence, the United States would be very different from the way it is today. Every idea would be thought of on the spot, and the potential ramifications and consequences of each idea would not be carefully taken into consideration. In addition, the human brain requires breaks to keep working, just as the human body needs sleep to continue on the next day in a healthy state. Time spent idle does not equal time spent wasted; time spent idle is time spent reflecting, planning, and developing. Time spent being idle carries the potential to be a valuable learning experience to the human life, as well. In colleges, the requirements for acceptance do not only include academic excellence - they also include extracurriculars and attention to when the brain needs a break. If students did not take time off to develop, their potential for achievement in life would reduce. Therefore, a world spent constantly working does not always represent a world of accomplishment.

Some argue that if one is not always working, then one cannot accomplish as much as one can, as a minute spent idle could lead to a day spent idle, and so on. Contrastingly, if one is always working, then one has a much greater risk of crashing. Mental health is an essential reason as to why the world today does not and cannot constantly work as Jefferson wants it to. Many studies show that top students in classes, those who never stop working towards their goals, can have a greater risk of developing depression, anxiety, or addiction to drugs. This is because their brains cannot comprehend the constant work, and moves to other unhealthy tactics of releasing emotions. Several stories in the world detail the downfall of the most intelligent people, simply because the never took a break for themselves. Furthermore, if one's life is spent constantly working, one's brain is exposed to extreme competition and high standards. These two concepts are unhealthy for the human brain, as one may believe that they actually are not working hard enough and need to work themselves even harder, when reality shows that they already work themselves unhealthily. This concept ties in with the concept of unhealthy comparison, which further proves why mental health is one of the largest reasons as to why the world cannot constantly work. Those who always work also always compare themselves to others who are working, and often times do not take into account that what they are doing is very unhealthy. All of these concepts combined greatly heighten the chance in the deterioration of mental health. A world spent working constantly is a world exposed to bad mental health.

Finally, if the world is spent constantly working, then there is no time for inspiration of any sort. If one's brain is constantly in a working state, it will never spend time appreciating the beauty of the world around it and taking in inspiration for future plans. A prime example of this concept is the work of artists. If an artist such as Vincent Van Gogh or Claude Monet was constantly working, said artist would never spend time collecting inspiration, and the work of said artist would be mediocre instead of beautiful and inspiring. Inspiration flows from person to person, and if everyone was working constantly, no one would serve as a source of inspiration for others around them. Also, brainstorming represents one of the most important parts of formulating any plan for any person in any situation, and constant work does not allow time for that brainstorming and inspiration to occur. In schools, teachers emphasize the necessity of brainstorming before writing, and this concept is emphasized so much because inspiration is what leads to the development of mankind. Role models also result from the need for the world to take a break, as it allows for humans to gather inspiration from others and plan how they want to lead their lives. Thus, if the world was constantly working, there would be no inspiration. Without inspiration, the world would not be where it is today.

Cognitive development and reflection, mental health, and inspiration represent three of the most essential reasons as to why the philosophy of Thomas Jefferson cannot apply to how the world works today. Constant work leads to stunted development, deteriorated mental health, and no sources for inspiration. Without time spent being idle, the inventions, buildings, ideas, movies, and other parts of the world today would have never come to fruition. A person always working does not represent a person living life to the fullest. The United States and our world today would not be the same without time spent idle,",4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,5.0,5.0
550D53DE2832,"I understand what are you tying to say about determine never to be idle which means not working or being use to not be idle you must to do something everyday to change you're life, and accomplish you're goals, which is I agree with for two reasons.

one is if you have a goals trough the year something that you want to accomplish or you have a dream you must start to take a step by step reviewing it every single day saying to your'e self I can do it even though when no body see you're work no matter how long it will take , but eventually you will get to that point where you want to be as long as you tying you're best every day, and you will be successful in life.

A lot of people want to accomplish their goals, but the thing is they don't actually take action why because they afraid of fielder you can always win, but you can be the best as you could be, and you never be same again because you come this way if you don't do something every day you're life will never change.

Therefore, I strongly believe that if you are doing something everyday you will see the result at the end. you're life will change, and you will accomplish you're goals. I fully support, and respect you're words, which is I agree with.

Thank you for you're consideration. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
ACB4771E367E,"Imagine living an outgoing life or a lazy life. It's like talking about a traveler and a video game addict. In my opinion I think we do accomplish more if we are always doing something because when you are out doing something you gain experience, also when your out doing something you tend to meet new people, even though some would argue that living a inactivity life also serves a purpose because inactivity allows you to live a life closer with your family.

First when your out doing something you gain experience. In my opinion when your constantly out you gain social experience. For example you wont be as shy to speak to others, and you wont be awkward when socializing. Also, when your out you are traveling and getting to understand and appreciate many different cultures around the world. Another example you get a closer look into the lives of everyone around the world and allows you to help them get through any hurdles. These are some reasons on why gaining experience and understanding others is important.

Also when your out doing something you meet new people. For example your always talking to people when your out so you tend on making new friends. When your traveling and in need of a place to stay, by making new friends around the world you are possibly covered and dont have to spend a dime on a hotel. Another example when your out doing something you can possibly meet the right one, future (Husband/Wife). I've seen many stories of people traveling doing something and they end up falling in love with someone. This is why meeting new people by doing something is a good thing.

Some would argue that living an inactivity life serves purpose. For example you get to sit around and just hang out. Also you can make friends and do many things through the online world. Sure all these things are good you get to have a different form of fun. However you're just being plain lazy and choosing the simple way of living. Also once you have to go out into the real world you'll most likely be awkward and shy. This is why being inactive can be some what good but also bad.

In conclusion being able to travel and get to understand different cultures also gain experience is super fun. Also having friends from all around the world is just so cool and brings many different kinds of stories to the table. Even though living an inactivity life has it's flaws it also has it's pros theres so many different opportunities but your not living a fulfilled life. In my opinion we do accomplish a lot more in life being active and going out doing something than being at home being lazy not doing anything. This is everything on why I think we accomplish more by being active.  ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
D86C20117DC9,"Students should work in groups or should works alone. Working alone students can be more focused during class; however, work in group is better. Work in group is more beneficial for students because students can share they ideas, they can be better in class and they can learn from each others.

It's more beneficial for students work in groups because they can share they ideas. For example, if the students are doing a important project or a simple homework they all can says theirs opinions. Also, they can research together to support they ideas and make a better work. Last, working in groups students can support the ideas from each others. It's more beneficial for students work in groups because they can share they ideas and make a wonderful group project.

Is better to to work in groups because students can be better in class. First, they can talk and find out what they don't understand and ask to the teacher together. Also, teachers can safe time because if they ask questions in group them the teacher can explain just one time and not explain one by one. Last, working in groups students can learn from the mistake of the other students and make less mistake. It's better to students to work in groups because they can be better in class and be more proper.

If students works in groups they can learn from the people in the group. First, if a students need support or not understand the class material other people from the group can support them. Also, they can help each other to make a better group and everyone can understand the class material. Another example, is that students can research together to find better information. Is more beneficial for students work in groups because they can learn from each others and learn from the others people from the groups.

Students should work in groups because students can share they ideas, they can be better in class and they can learn from each others. If students share they ideas them the other in the group can learn from them. Also, if students work in groups they can be better in class and they can pass the school year. Last, working in groups students can learn from others and be better to the future. In conclusion, is more beneficial for students work in groups.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
FBC269A9D3AE,"Students should start choosing a career path when you enter high school. If you chose a career ahead of time it is easier because you can focus on that career ; you can take classes for this career you chose, Looking at colleges ,knowing what your goal is after high school being prepared for the world ,going after a job that is involved with the career you chose.

Knowing that students have a career in mind can give their teachers a good mindset knowing how to guide this student into doing what they would like to do after high school. Having a career in mind when it comes time to look at colleges you can look for the colleges you would like to apply to see if this school has the career you want to major in.

i find In my head i always like to be prepare ahead of time so i am not rushing nor stressing to get something done last minute. When thinking about what you would like to do i set out a plan and i chose to follow that plan in order.

Having a goal in mind about your future is good because you now have something to motivate yourself. Students now have the advantage to push themselves to succeed. You learn life tips in high school about finance and taxes which can help you later in life when you graduate. These tips you get in high school can possibly help you with the career you have chosen to follow. You learn more tips about life as you grow up. You experience certain situations as you grow up which can mature you after a certain period in your life.

In Conclusion, I believe that students should start thinking about having a career choice when they enter high school. When the time comes to looking at colleges. it is good to have a career choice in mind to start applying to the schools that could help you achieve your goal. Having your career choice in mind is good so there is less weight off your shoulders when having to decide what you would like to do with your life.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
1D31AE0453BC,"60 percent of students have a problem with other subjects in middle schools. Although, some people believe after school homework clubs are irrelevant, I really dont believe its bad. I truly believe after school homework clubs are beneficial because students can study, get homework done faster, and socialize.

First off, I believe after school homework clubs are positive because students can study. Students can study what they need to if they have a little extra time at school. Many students dont have enough time to study at home and a after school club could give them more time to study what they need to. Some students need extra help understanding what is on the paper and studying could help them a lot.

Next, after school homework clubs are important because students can finish homework faster. Some students cant get homework done at home so an after school club could help them. Students can get extra help with what they dont understand at an after school club. Many students cant students can get their homework done faster by the help of other students.

Additionally, after school homework clubs are useful because students can socialize. Students can learn how to talk better to other students. Students can talk to friends when their done with their work. Many students cant talk to their friends on the other teams so after school club could fix that.

In conclusion, I truly believe after school homework clubs are beneficial because students can study, get homework done faster, and socialize. I believe after school homework clubs are an asset to students because it helps students a lot. I believe more people should agree with me.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
E2E6984894BC,"""Determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"" this is what Thomas Jefferson wrote and I am totally agree whith him some peoples always are saying they can finish nothing but is because thay never doing that, never try very hard they want to stay doing nothing all the time and thats why but when you are always doing someting you finish too much like when you are doing a report work on that and you finish and adter that you can do something more and than something more and more and more but you can finished because you are doing that you no just finish your report and stop and say ""ok I finish this now I can go to relax all my life"" noo you work and work and for that you recieve one recompence yo don't work for nothing.

And if Thomas Jefferson says that is because is true he allways do something and he done much things he never be idle and you never had to be idle too and I think his main idea is to persuade the people too do something all the time because when people doo the world change.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
E263EB3FBC22,"The principal should allow students to bring cell phones to school. He should let them use it during lunch periods and other free time. As long as they turn them of during class time or any other learning time. I think the students are old and responsible. To let them use there phones during lunch or any other free time. They should know when to use the phones.

Students should be able to use there phones during there free time. It is there free time and they should know what there going to do with it. Either walk around talk or what ever they like to do or use there phones. They are old already and they what there doing. That's why the principal should let the students. Use there phones during there free time.

The principal should also let the students use there phones during there lunch periods. There the ones that are having there lunch. There not learning there just having fun with there friends and eating. So there is no reason to not let students use there phones. During there lunch time they should know if there going to eat or not. So there is the other reason why you should let the students. Use there phones during there lunch period.

So why not let the students use there phones. During there free time or lunch time. If there not learning there just having fun. They just will have to turn them of when they have to learn. They are old and responsible to let them use there phones. So that's why you should let students use there phones when there not learning. You should really let them use there phones during there time.

The End      ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
BF267B42A2A4,"The humanity now in days had been not so good lately, there is many different opinions on how you should do things in life or how you should act. It is well informed that people can be complicated but nobody will said the life will be easy all the time. I think people should start making their own decision because, they can learn about life, have a better understanding on how life works and how to value their-self and be efficient person on their own.

However, there is a big chance that people can tell you how you really should live your life, you have to experienced it in persons there will be a day when you are going to fall or something can happen you are not aware on how life can be so hard and difficult in times. Also mistakes are allow nobody is perfect life will surprise you anytime without you notice it you got to be ready to face it not matter how easy or hard it could be. When you make your owns decision you will be capable of making the right decision for yourself.

Meanwhile, it is hard to understand life sometimes but is part of our daily life and you have to understand how it really works so the way you do not stress out for a simple thing, life gives you challenges that only you as the only responsible of yourself have to face it and all will depends how you take things it will be a result of it. As we grow life will make us stronger or weak it all depends but best choice of making the right thing is that you should be aware that anything can happen without given you a hint it will hit you on the right time or not on the best time you wanted it. Anything that will hurt you will make you strong and that's how you know that your are living life.

Lastly, people might not notice it but if we do not love ourselves nobody will do it, people do have to depend on some else to be happy it's all about you. In addition anything you do will not make others happy you have to learn to do everything on your own because that more efficient you are the more good things in life you will make. Be your own and value every single thing that is around, but remember nothing is easy life can surprise you anytime.

In conclusion, people should start making their own decisions to be aware of what life really is if your learned and have a better understanding about life in a daily routine anything that will happen will not surprise you. Loving yourself will make you love others. Hopefully people will take a note that life is all about you and not others each person has a different thoughts and ways of seen life. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
AECE763751DB,"They are many things or ways one, or a family can spend their time when outside or their time in the outdoors. And also will see that activity to be fun at the same time and will like to do it all the time.

One of the activities that one can do outdoors is going to the community park to have some fun alone or with their family to enjoy the environment and leave their life the way they want to, also they can take their dog with them and have fun with them some of the activities they can be doing with the dog is training them how to jump,catch things,and also how to make friends with other dogs in the area of the park they are. and also if they go alone they can also have some alone time on their own or even make friends with other people who also brought their dogs with the,and by this they will have some fun outdoors and also find that going to the park was a fun idea.

Another way to have fun or spend time outdoors is to go to the beach on your free time to clear your mind from all the things you did on workdays like from Monday to Friday,having al those kind of stuff on your shoulder at work I think that this will be the best time to go to go to the beach. But if you think that in your opinion that my first point I made about going to the beach was not the best idea then i think the second point may be the best reason why someone will have interest in going to the beach. The main reason why someone will go to the beach is to have the best time of his or her life or maybe find someone that the person is attractive to when they go to the beach.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
88FD25AC86CF,"I thinks is decions of everyone because if you are smart and if you want to graduation in three year just you have to focuse and give your best and you have the decion in your hands if your decion is yes so do it, because another students can`t do it or din`t like, so i think is opecional, for my selfel i think is greet idea just take three year of the high school but i know is not easy becuase take the high school in three year is very complicate becuase you well have to take course duging the summers and may not be able to take elective couses, but you advance is good.

Reasons. (why is good)

becuase is good for you live because you have one year early and this can help you to do it a greet estudent and with this year early you can go to the college early or you can work one year and after this year you can star the college, and if your finis the high school in three year that mean you are a good estudent and thats can help you because you can find a programs that can help you, because if you want to go to the college the college is not chip and for follow your dream you have find a solucion and the solucion is give you best.

Example. Because if you find a programs that can help you, so you can follow what you want to do it in a future.

If you are a bad students and you GPA is so down you can`t go to the college becuase for going to college, I think you GPA have to do more the 3.00 for you can go a good callege.

Thats why I think is good take the high school in three year, because you can have more oportunidis for well have a good future.

Conclution.

Yes is good idea that students to finish high school in three years becuase is something like well better for you futuere, in your live. But everything is your decision you know what you want to do with life and if you don`t know what you want to do just think about in you future and thats you can find the enswer and belive in yourself that you can do it. because the education is very important.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
ADC42265FD32,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can use technology for read a book, watch TV show, shopping, play games, and people can contact random people whenever they wants.

First, Lot of people reading a book and watch TV show or video on the phone. When I was in Generic_City, I saw lot of people read a book with their phone or tablet, Also they are still watching a video almost every times when they are in the vehicle, but this is not a negative effects on peoples lives. This is positive effects on peoples lives, because they are still reading a book.

Second, many of student are not doing homework or not focus on their school, the main is they are not doing homework and play video game, Also they are using a phone or listen music while middle of the class. Or some people not studied and cheating on the test or quiz. but they will get a good grade, but they dont know what they learned.

Finally, Old people doesnt know about technology, so some bad people using a technology for old people, and they get money from old people. This thing still happening lot of country, like Korea. I saw my grandmother happened too. They took $1000 from my grandmother, and they got busted. This is really bad negative effects on peoples lives.

So technology is half negative effects and half positive effects, So whoever use technology for negative effects. I wish they are stop, and use for good place. ",4.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
EAD2625A1711,"In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study In high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. Many young students do not have the capacity of choosing a career at that time of age. I believe, that kinds mentality about their career will change through out high school. Student should not be required to choose a career by the time they enter to high school, because they are inexperienced to know what they want, students could choose the wrong career, and unhappy of wasting their time on a career they are going to change their mind on.

Inexperienced of not knowing what they want,students could make the take wrong choices about their future career. When students enter to high school they are normally around fourteen years old, young students of that age are normally not worry about their future career yet. Students mentality starts changing abut their career when they are having more knowledge about what they really what to be. When kids are around sixteen is when are maturing about their future and looking at things differently. students do not have the capacity of choosing their whole future career at the young of age.

When students are force to choose a career when they first enter to high school, they could choose the wrong career. Most students know that choosing the wrong career could affect the later on in the future. Lets say that they choose a career when they enter to high school, but they are unhappy. They are going to be stuck their whole life time with something that does not makes them happy. When people work with things they like or enjoy they attempt to work harder and better.

Most people change their mind almost everyday about something they like or do not like, well it is the same with choosing a career. Wasting time is something no one likes to do, and specially when is about their future. Making kids choose their career at a young age could mess them up and they would have to do things all over again. When choosing the wrong career, accepting the consequences and restart over again with a new career of their choice. Making good research,planing things out first with a good process will help with their future career.

Most students are not prepare to pick their future career during high school. Most students have no knowledge of what they want to be later in life. Some students could make the wrong choice of picking a career they do not want. Changing their mind in a career could also make them unhappy of have wasted their time with something they was not interested in. Students should have enough experience and good knowledge of what their future career before they choose what they want to be.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
F7DE5680F74D,"Is important to learn about the expiriense of others because is possible that the same happen to you but when that happen you will be prepare and you will not be scare of what will happen to you or others thats why when you have someone that expiries the same problem that you have is the right thing to ask what happen and how she or he solve the problem and if is possible to call for help.

Other thing that you can do is when your see your granma talk about the problem she have and what was the solution she took for that problem and why because when you expiriens the same problem you now what you can't do or see do options you have but is important that you ask before appends to you or someone else that you now is important to you.

You can't do so much if you ask before it appens to you or your family because if happen you now how to confront the problem for your self or whit the people u carres for you and loves you that are some options you can't do to comfront the type of problem you expiriens.

You can't help others if you don't stay in silence and ask if you can't help or do something for the person u is expiriens some problems and what type of problem because some problems cut always be dead.

Some poeple don't have families you now why is because they don't leat people help whit the problems they have thats when the people try to soved for is self but in some cases you have to need help you can't leave whit out help is something that you have to undrestant you need sometimes help because if you are in real trable you will be dead.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
5902C2E86345,"Is influencing others other even a good? I believe that there are better ways to influence other than just by your own. One other better way is to look at other people and see how they have seceded in life. Another way is to see ones appearance and how they act. Others think differently and believe that your own behavior the the best to influence others.

My first reason why I believe there are better ways to influence other is one will look at other and want to be like them. This will want him or she to start and think on what they want for them selves. Maybe they do not know what they want to be yet when they grow up. So by seeing others and how they have seceded they are going to want to try new things. Looking at others by can also help the influence them by what not to do and learn form others mistakes. This could help them start on the right way. Thats why feel like looking at other can influence others.

My second reason is ones appearance cause when someone sees someone they judge off your appearance and how you act. The way someone else looks will want them to be like you if you are dressed with a suit and tie. That is because a person that is dressed sharp or elegant makes you look prfecinal Also seeing others the way they act can influence others to want to act like them. They might see how other act towards them and them probably want other to act the same with him or herself.

Others think differently and feel that your own behavior is the best way to influence one another. Some people might believe this because one person could impact one person so much that it will want that other person to do the same. I feel like that not the best way cause its hard for just one person to do so much. I feel like one person can not do as much as many other people can.

Therefore,this is why I feel like there are better ways to influence others than your own. Like notice others and see how good they are doing in live and might get inspired. Another is a way one looks to someone or they way they are as a person. Others might think the opposite and say that ones owns actions it the most impact full way on other people. This is why believe that one persons actions is not the best way to influence others.",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
4BFB5768916D,"Im not agree to the schools districts programs for the students to finish their diploma in tree years because it is not enough time in three years then than four years and the students going to study to hard. in the summer and in the evenings the students brain is going to get tire they can not going ta have break they can not going to have the important courses of elective class can be force for the students. however if they finish in tree years the advantage is finish more faster but than can not help to the students also they going to do hard work to study in the summer and evening .

I thing that finish high school in tree years is not a good idea because is better to have the time necessary four years is important is more time.

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second is if the students finish the school in tree years the students they has to having must to work hard. in the summer and in the evening i thing that the students can be get very tire it is good to have the time and is get more focus before got the university.

it is better to study more and thing what route do you want to go and take the necessary time.

for the student is help more because four years is more time then. Thant tree years and they can no be frosted for then and they can have more free time to do the personals things.

it is better before go to the university and work force because is more time to prepare the students having to focus more on learned more things is good to now more before take the time it is important for the students that four years in the school is going to help for the students in the future for what carers they going to be doing.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
FCD96EA1E6E8,"I think that have a good attitude is great. Benefits of having a good attitude is when you, walk into school you feel ready,you don't get angry at school and don't get mad at your friends and teacher's,you always have a positive mindset when your going into school or playing a sport.

First, when i walk into school am always mad about early we wake up to go to school but i always get that good attitude when i walk so people don't see why am so mad or why am mean, i always say good morning to every teacher to make think am not going through a struggle each morning.

Next,you always want to have a good attitude with friends and teacher's and mom and dad you always want to talk nicely with friends and teacher's and always with mom and dad. You never want to say something to your mom or dad that will hurt them or make them feel bad, you see your teacher's every day and come's to school everyday to teach you something and you friends are the one's you spend most of your time with so always have a good attitude.

Finally, Have that positive mindset with every one if you don't is because you are have a bad day and you need to fix it when i play soccer i always go with feeling am going to do good score a good play good and be the best one on the team,at school you want to have a good attitude like if you have a test you don't want to say am going to fail, what your going to say is am going to pass am going to give everything i got and pass.

Concussion, i think that you should walk in to school with a good attitude even in sport's or anthing in your life becuse people are going to know you about how you are and how nice you are and how good your so always keep that good mindset about everything.         ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
B46E31AA2653,"Its important to learn from the experiences of others whether its a good experience or a bad experience.

My mom told me once that it was hard for her to go to school and that was all because she was the women of the house. And she had to do so much work and that was not easy for her every day. Having to cook for many other people and do work for school was really hard even when she would try to do her best it was not easy for her.

Knowledge, Judgment, and Succeed are part of experiences from others as well you might have that in yourself. Knowledge to know and keep in mind that maybe that person you learn something from put so much effort into it or maybe not. Judgment is part of learning to never judge somebody whether its wrong or right.

To succeed from that experience to do better, to learn and to know that from that experience you can succeed and keep in mind what to do good.

Its a good thing to learn from experiences. You might as well relate to their experience that maybe you did not even know you could relate to.

Sharing wisdom with somebody is always a good idea. I think it helps people to improve and succeed and learn from mistakes and learning new and different things.

In other words, sharing your experiences with somebody brings a connection between you and that person.

Sharing your experiences and what you had to go through and knowing the other person know that it was not easy to be successful, there was a lot of work done to put on to be able to succeed.        ",2.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
A1D0490FD324,"I am writing about should students work in schools or their homes. Most people think its best for kids to be in school than in their homes because it can help them in their social life, make friends in there world instead of being lonely. Even though lots of students like to work at home, I strongly believe its better to work at schools.

Students should have friends in there lives to be more social in the world. When I was younger I use to switch schools to schools then I went to a school called Generic_School I was the only new kid in school I had no friends I was the quite in class, then one day I join a club called book club we just read books and talked about what happen in them. Then one of the kids came up to me and ask what do you like I told him what I love like animals, sports. Those were the things we both like too he was my first friend in that school. Students should be in schools because they should be comfortable when meeting, talking with other students because they might have things in common.

At school students can help each other out in class if they dont understand something. For example, In history there are students that don't understand they would just sit in their seats and not ask for help. One day I saw a student frustrated with work so I decided to help him in America Civil War. When we took our test we both got A's. In my class students can be helped by fellow classmate or the teacher.

During school projects students can be in partners or in groups to get a good grade. In my science class we have projects to do we get in a group of friends to get a good grade and we see a student work by him self. When we got our projects back we got an A and the student got a B. This shows that in schools we should be with other students to bring in ideas, ways that others can't see.

In school you can be well taught and understand better when people like teachers, or other students help them. Its best for students to be in school rather than be home school.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
53CF6D801CAF,"I'm agree with what has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in the life. ""Generic_Name, my son, remember, you always have to have a positive mindset."" This is a quote that my grandmother kept telling me over and over again before I came to the United States. She used to tell me that negativity attracts failure. throughout my life I have always looked at the positive side. For this reason I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to success as it assists in keeping resiliency, and courage, which are essential in accomplishing goals.

We must have a positive attitude to be successful because it helps humans to be resilient. I have gone through numerous of challenges in my life including being homeless, but I always look at the good things I have, and think about those who do not have any support. A positive attitude helps people be resilient and confront everything that comes their way.

Another reason why we must be positive is because being positive brings courage. Courage allows us to not give up when we want to accomplish goals. For instance, crossing the border is dangerous, however, with courage and being positive, I have been able to cross it. Now I am about to graduate high school. I have also been successful and will be an electrician, I could not accomplish this without a positive attitude.

There are many people out there that think that being positive bring people's hope down if things don't go their way. But I do not agree. being negative brings bad wives, and bad wives brings bad things this is why I also surround myself with positive people.

To conclude , being positive is the key to success. I strongly believe this because positively brings resilient and courage. Resilient and courage are two characteristics that are important to succeed. In my life, I have been able to succeed because I have remain positive. So, I say, to everyone, think positive!",5.0,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
296B1DD1E251,"Do yo have a good impression? I am agree, the first impressions are almost impossible to change, because I feel that the first impression is important for everyone. There are many people that do not show how really are, and try that everyone love them, but at the end they show how really are and everybody move away. The first impression said everything about us. I believe that, If you show them everything about you, the people will love you how you are and they will trust on you.

Always we need to be honest with you and with the people. My ideology is be honest with yourself and do not show something that you do not are, If you want that everyone show you how really are.

I always show how I am friendly, lovely, funny, charismatic with everyone, and also try to help when someone need me with my knowledge and capacity. One of my experience is in my work, every single day new employees go to work in the store and I always help them to know how the store need to look like, and also with the customers I always smile, because I show my first impression with them, and I feel great when the customers saw me with a smile and they said: Hi, how are you today, it is good to see you and have a good one. I have few months working in the store, and I feel comfortable with everyone, because the customers do not know you enough, but they trust on you and they tell you something about his life, and with the rest of the employees we pass fun, We are like a family and we help us ourselves.

In the school is a little bit the different, because in the school I am shy, I do not talk with anyone just with my best friends, but I always show my emotions, enclose with the new people in the school, but sometimes they pretend be good at the first time, but with the pass of the time they have different attitude. That happen to me around 2 years ago with different person, the first person I knew her in 9 grade, when the both was new in the school, We became friends and everything we did together, but She change with the pass of the years, in summer another friend and his sister told us what she talk about me and my sister, but I always be honest with her and friendly and she showed me something different than the first time. Then, with another girl was a little bit the same, because she had jealous for my sister and I to had good grades and be active in the school the last year, but she always had bad grades, and We tried to help her but she never wanted, then with my sister and I move away from her because she was friendly with us but she was a bad friend with us.

I feel that we need to show always how We are not matter what everyone thing about us. Sometimes is good a new change in our lives, but never changing you essence. Something that I always do is think about my weakness and how can change it to a positive way

Finally, I think that We can be success in the life, the first impression will open many opportunities in the world, I know that the good person are these that show a good attitude when you know it the first time, and something in your heart told you that you knew a good person. Everyone will have present that they can trust in you and they will feel great to know a person like you. The first impression is always a good one. Many people do not know me and they think that I am conceited just how I look like and they do no take the time to talk with me or just smile me. My point of view is each person need to empathize with everyone know more people try to make new friend but always show like we are.         ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
332F7B4392BA,"Former BirtishPrime Minister Winston Churchill Once Said That ""Success Consists Of Going From Failure To Failure Without Loss Of Enthusiasm"". 

In my opinion, the former Birtish Prime Minister Winston Churchill was right about his statement, saying that ''success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Because in life, before you achieve any of your dreams or goals, you've to pass through some difficulties.

Some people may disagree with Winston Churchill saying because they've not experince any hardship, or any failure in life before.

The reason is because they were born with silver or gold spoone in their mouth. They don't even know how hard ship is or looks like. Those people have no idea how it feels to be a failure, or a loser, or to even loss enthusiasm in life.

Even though, some of them are rich today, but they when through a lot of difficulties, disappointments, and they even lost hope in themselves to the point that they couldn't believe that they will make it in life because of the stuggle or hard ship they when through.

In addition, failure plays an important roles in our pursuit of success. The reason I'm saying this is because if you don't have any experince of failure or without the loss of enthusiasm, you won't know the important of that wealth you have or your parents has.

For example, my mother once told me her story that when she was in Africa in my country Liberia, she when through a lot of difficulties, disappointments, and hard ship during the civil war and after the civil war. According to my mother, she said things was really hard on her, and she said that she had no one to helped her to the point that she used to asked people in the community for food to eat just so she and my oldest sister can be able to salveged from hunger.

In summary, the Birtish Prime Minister Winston Churchill was right about his statament that says ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm''.             ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
EBD559A9576C,"Being yourself is being true to yourself and to others for example. When you're hanging out with a group of people. Don't act like someone else but yourself because you will get caught for trying to be someone that you're not and get made fun of for being something that you're not. It's better to be yourself because you want people to like who you really are. Not someone you ain't your just lying to yourself and others.

Ralph Waldo Emerson was a Author who believe ''to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment''. I agree with that statement but not so many could say the same. There is many human on this planet who cant accomplishment being their self than being someone else than their self .

Many people struggle to be their self because of society. Society brain washes people to be someone else than being their self.

Nowadays being yourself is lame and being someone else is Amazing to some people. Their is con on being someone else like lying to people until they fine out who you really are. Than they might not like who you really are then your feelings are hurt . Therefore your friendless and hurt ,But you could always pick yourself up by being yourself. Than by over time people will start to notice how you change and they will want to have relationship with you.

It's healthy to have relationships with you being yourself than being someone else. The reason why i am saying that is because you dont want to be lying to the other person the whole time during the relationship . It will bring problems to the relationships .However its always a good idea to talk it out and come clean.

Being yourself make a huge impacts in people daily life. It could go for the good or the worse its all up to the person. Therefore its important to be yourself always no matter what or whats the cost of it . Also make sure to take pride of being yourself.        ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
2A4B5673EBAC,"I speak for Thomas Jefferson he need do simtheing by no idle. he ask for people how time need for finish what does need something tool or materials. Thomas Jefferson he need do all people something no people fight or take money or steel for neither people. people finish school and fend job he take more money for people no finish school is that people take low money. Thomas Jefferson he serve for united stated in military and present for years 1714-1769

he fight in American.

Thomas Jefferson serve in American help in fight to much he take people and help for something for people lief.

Thomas Jefferson serve American for conkers how think how strong for world take area he does American strong. Thomas Jefferson he need no anything no idle in less no move or not Deon something Thomas Jefferson he no what he do how strength. Thomas Jefferson purpose help united stated speech for people. how to strong in help to chattier.

Thomas Jefferson he accomplish for present in how he get present he go in speech people what do what good for people thank what good people and what not good. people like Thomas Jefferson in you stay in tole what do how Chang for good people. Sam people no like what he do or speech is chary kill Thomas Jefferson lat time. in conkers is work Thomas Jefferson he think in he go to conkers.

I think Thomas Jefferson serve in American help in fight to much he take people and help for something for people lief. Thomas Jefferson serve American for conkers how think how strong for world take area he does American strong for America. Thomas Jefferson he read book in he yang how think what do he does speech people listen to ham people like Thomas Jefferson he no made he no what do for lief.

Thomas Jefferson he have friend help him for what do how think what do to for fight. he read for whagongon what he do he take good something in does. Sam people no like what he do or speech is chary kill Thomas Jefferson lat time. in conkers is work Thomas Jefferson he think in he go to conkers.",2.0,1.5,2.0,1.0,1.5,2.0
9613CEAFE86E,""" Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"" Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? In my opinion i think we as people accomplish a lot if we are always doing something. One reason is because in oder to do something or succeed in something you have to be doing something for that to happen. I feel like if people want something to get done you have make a change and stay determined just like what Thomas Jefferson said in his quote and that's very important to keep in mind when you are trying to achieve something and you wanna make a difference.

In Thomas Jefferson's quote he says something that really makes you think about how in society today how people deal with some things. It makes you wonder if people are doing the most they can to accomplish something and it also makes you think to yourself if you as your own person are doing whatever is it you can to accomplish your goals in life. I feel like some people don't do anything to try to accomplish the set goals they have for themselves and they expect for that goal that they are waiting for to come to them instead of them working for that accomplishment. It shouldnt be that way but some people think life is like that also when there is a major issue going on in the world some people think that doing nothing is okay. When people witness a problem some people decide not to do anything and the issue will go away when maybe that's not the case in some situations.

There are people that are dedicated to what they want and will always do something to accomplish or achieve whatever it is they need to achieve and i think that is really good because it just shows that you are determined to do whatever you can to get what you want in life. People that are very determined achieve so much that it inspires others and makes them feel like they need to do something so they can start achieving want they want in life. I feel like that's very important because if you dont do something to accomplish what you want then nothing is going to happen in your life and I know there are people that don't do anything and they have nothing good going for them.

I feel like Thomas Jefferson was the type of person to stay determined and focused on the goals he wanted to make. He set goals and he made them happen he made things happen for our country and all that happend because he was determined and focused and he wanted to do something so he can accomplish what he wanted. Everything in life you have to work for it and do something about it. It doesnt just land in your lap everything you do requires you to work for it and the end result will be that you accomplished everything you worked hard for. For example I feel like a lot of issues in this world could be solved if people would do something people wouldnt be running for there lives because there is a war going on in there country if somebody would do something about it. There wouldnt be so much negativity and so much hatred if somebody would just make a change.

My over all conclusion about this quote that Thomas Jefferson wrote is that it is important for people to actually do something and work hard and achieve there goal. When you put your all into something your hard work pays off and you finally accomplished something and that's all that matters. I feel like what message Thomas Jefferson is trying to give is that life is always gonna be hard no matter what but you always have to push yourself and accomplish what needs to be done. When you do that good things come in return and it does serve purpose in you life it always have and always will. I think that is what Thomas Jefferson is trying to say in his motivating quote and it really inspired me and i hope it inspires others as well.                  ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
D42B99110E5C,"I want to work at a supreme store for a day in Generic_City or Generic_City. And seeing if im a good worker and to see if the boss will let me stay there . to work there for a while. what makes me want to work there. Its to get experiences i want to help him with his work and i want to feel all the presser he gets so one day i try to start something ill have the experiences. So thats why i want to work there. I want it to be my first job. so i can learn how to work.

Why i want to work there is because supreme toys or hats or cups are vary valuable and by the older it gets the more is caused. so it gets more expensive by the time lot of people go for old staff because its valuable and if you want to resell it youll make money of of it. but new thing or valuable to if the people like it and if it sells out . people make a living out of it because some thing cause millions of dollars working there can get me thing that are vary expensive for free of half the price. working there can help my brother and i because i can tell my brother what are they going to drop and what they are making for the future. I want to help my brother to have a big supreme culechion so one day he can sell it and make lots of money i want to help my family.

my brother and i cutlet supreme. each week they drop new supreme things like bags and cups and hats t shorts they drop new thing each Thursday and new thing they dont drop the same things because if they drop the same things each week the value of the the thing they dropped it will go down so they make share that everything the drop is new. I want to work there because i cant get things faster and i can see what there going to drop every Thursday. And i cant see what there making whats on its way for the future. and one day i want to move to Generic_City or visit it for a summer vacation. In Generic_City and

Generic_City both have a supreme store. but Generic_City is the original place where it was first created.

I feel like ill be caorthuble working there because thats the thing i like doing and thats the type of stuff ill like to sell and I will like working there because my brother likes supreme and i like it to. I think working in the supreme store can sometime give use free stuff. I dont know if its a good working there or if they pay good money to work there for a day or two but thats why i want to try something new some thing that i enjoy. supreme is not that expensive when it drop but when you buy it and then resell it thats when the price go up.

I feel like working there in the supreme store is fun because working there you can talk to lots of people works there or go shopping. i like showing people about the history of supreme when it first came out or when did it start getting famous and i like telling stories about the things they sell. After doing all of that i want to start my own organization so i can start something like that thats why i want to work there because i can learn about the how he started supreme and what he did to make supreme famous. But theres a lot of people that get supreme and make a living out of it like they buy it and then make there own website and then they sell it for lots of money.

thats how Gucci started that had hard time but one day the blue up they started selling a lot of things but Gucci is very expensive. But i feel like its fun to start some bigness like that.

I feel like working there is going to be fun i want to see how it feels how to work there and i want to see if im a good worker. So i want to show the boss that im a good worker but i want to see if that job is for me because if i go and work there for a day and the boss likes me and tells me to stay and i dont want to stay working there because the job is no for me im going to regret it. But if i like it and the boss tells me to stay i will stay and maybe move to

Generic_City of & Generic_Citynbsp; but i want to go there for a summer so work docent distraked me from school. and then i can see if i can start a store over hear. I think the supreme store is a good job. My brother and i are trying to start a big supreme culashoin. so i think they should let me stay.              ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
AB75D2DC92B7,"Schools were made for people who wants to learn and be a successful person in life even though , there are some people who don't have the opportunity to be in school. Right now in some countries be on school until you are 18 is a law but it other countries government those not care about children future. Here in the United States they have the option for students to attend classes from home by online or video conferencing. They have that option specially on universities because some universities are out of the city and a percentage of students with a bad economy may not be viable to get transportation everyday. So In my opinion that is a great idea to have that option on universities. They should have the same option in high school but not to all the students because that may cause students to fail the classes. High school 's should give that option to students with excellent notes and for students who live out of town. Attend classes from home by online or videos has benefits, oneis you become more responsible,

second it helps you to earned money, and gives you more opportunities to success.

In one hand,Attend classes from home it may be a big responsibility because you are doing it by your own no one is going to help you or push you to learn. For example when you attend to class in a school or colleague there is always a teacher ,who is there to help you,supports you ,and make sure you don't fail your semester, they also make sure that you are learning and getting better everyday. Instead when you have to attend classes by yourself you must be confident and responsible to make sure that you are going to take classes everyday and don't waste the opportunity,because no one is going to be telling you more than 3threet times to do you work .There are some students that don't know what be a responsible person means, does students may not be viable to get good greats by taking classes from home. This kind of students need help from someone to push them and teach them to be a responsible person. Be a responsible person is important because it helps you to success in life gives more opportunities and you don't depend from nobody you learn how to do things by your own.

In the other hand one more benefit to attend classes by home in online it helps you to earn money specially if you live in large distance from school. A few houses are located miles away from the city that means schools are located miles a way from home. In that case attend classes from school it would be very helpful and a big opportunity. Because take transportation everyday Monday to Friday it may be expense because you may pay at mornings to get to school and pay back in the afternoon to go back home. One more benefit is that it help you to success,you may be a viable to find a job. For example you can do your online classes in the mornings and find a part-time in the afternoon. Many students do this they go to school on mornings and work for a couples of hours at night. But if you could attend classes from home it would be so much easier to work and study at the same time you would made your own schedule withou a problem. Also make sure to give enough of time to do your online classes and get good greats.

In conclusion

I do believe this potion to attend classes from home in online or videos is a great opportunity. Specially for students who live out of the city and for everyone who was to success in life no matter what. School and universities should let students know about this option. I am agree and I believe that I may not be the only one who support this idea. Therefore this opportunity should give to students who really needs it and no to those who would waste it .This kind of option should be in all over the world to help people with bad economy and help those who want to success and have a passion to learn. Students who have the opportunity to attend school everyday without a problem should know that there is people that live far from the city that they would love to be seated in a classroom and attend school everyday.        ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
6F0330A6C504,"This shows how students could think and have thoughts about what they want in the future, a career is what benefits them in their lives, preparing them would make a change in their minds on what they really are interested in or what would they want to be successful in their future, it would take time to prepare to finally decide whats on their minds to choose their careers as a young age, this opportunities will make a big change is students choose wisely.

After keep studying students should make positions on what they already are studying,thinking as a young age students are more creative with their minds and heart; Students should think as young age for a beneficial purpose,deciding on a career at a lower grade (8th) many societies et their students have this opportunities to choose their path and make changes on what they really want in their life,the're changing from a playful mind into a mind where teenagers starts to make decisions; In reality this is a path where they would finally decide what they want or could be do for being graduated as a honorable person, by doing the most of the students frequently found what they would do and could be doing on their future as a older person, as they think they organize them self and be more clear on their positions in life.

This could make a big change for teenagers, now they show they can make a more positive and strong decisions, to show that they make better decisions as a lower grade society could being tested for all middle schoolers and keep track on how do students on how they are getting ideas as they turn from Middle School to High School; Most of the students decide good careers and some of them great careers, but is not only about choosing a career is about what students could think as a teenager; having students deciding on what they think the're going to be success.

However, letting young kids think on what the're going to study as a career would not be the best because not all students want to keep studying before High School; it would be a waste of time and effort to give them a great opportunities to start thinking as young adults, this could not benefit all students because as they get into High School they keep changing careers and by the end of their 4 school year they didn't decide what career they want to take, most of students end up not enjoying their career and giving up deciding they shouldn't get that career and deciding to not finish the college. Therefore, students could not take a career they didn't want but if they know they could pass and be an excellent person, even in the career they didn't decide to take they could make even a better life in their future by choosing and changing the career they were thinking as they were at Middle School, they continue thinking on what they want until they reach what they're looking for in real life as a young adults.

By telling this students should see and think very carefully as parents understands their children and teachers helping their students how they could or might do to get that career on what they need to focus on, for society is really difficult to choose right ways hat might help students and which ones might not letting students choose sense their getting more knowledge they will increase the capacity to get into what career benefits them as students,there are many student that want a career and the society helps them with their courses a they are getting into High School, their final thoughts and knowledge finish for them and they should start to think more in what he career is and how they're going to deal with their job ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
90C81189C58D,"One day a random lady came up to me and called me gorgeous, and it made my day even better. The small things matter to someone. It helped me to show kindness to others because it impacted me and I want to impact others. Once you show small acts of kindness it can lead you to a better life. When people show small acts of kindness it can help someone's attitude to improve,

it can make someone's day better, help someone become a better person, and can help someone going through some hard times.

Showing small acts of kindness can help someone's attitude to improve by doing things that make them happy. Telling them what's wrong to say to someone so they know to not say it. Show love towards them because the attitude they have might may be really bad, but showing them love can help it improve a lot. Finally, they will slowly improve it might take time. The most important part is having a good attitude towards them even if you think it's not going to help it is because you're showing them how to give a good attitude back to anyone.

Helping someone's day better is by giving them a compliment it can effect them in the most positive way you can think off. Text them good morning and good night because you never know if there having a rough morning and night shows that you care. If you see them sad give them the biggest hug it can easily bright up there mood. Showing them acts of kindness can help them show kindness to others. SPREAD KINDNESS ALL OVER THE WORLD!!!! you won't regret it.

Showing acts of kindness will not just benefit the person , but it will also make you a better person. Helping someone become a better person can be easy or it can be hard it depends the way you do it. Doing little things can easily make someone a better person by giving them a smile or a hug. Once you helping someone become a better person can help you as well ! Most important is be yourself nobody is perfect in this world is okay take a deep breath and relax everyone cares for you.

Finally, a small acts of kindness can help going through some hard times is by being there for them in general you never know what there going through. Ask what's wrong and if there not comfortable telling you let them take their time it might be hard for them at first but they'll get used to it. Hang out with them 24/7 keep them active so they can forget everything they been thinking off recently. Be there for their family's as well they can also be going through a lot too. How can you show small acts of kindness to others?                     ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
5F370D929BA7,"Would be good too that the younger students can be able to go to some schools of the older students, because they can learn how the High Schools goes and they can learn either what classes they are going to like.

When students go to different schools they can talk with their parents to what school looks better and if they liked or not and he can choose the classes that he wants and talk with their parents if that class is good or not.

They are going to be happy because they choose the classes that he have the chance to choose the classes for themselves.

Some students have a program that pairs older students with younger students. The older students are available to assist the younger students.

Is good that the students go to the schools but most will be the one's that are in the middle schools for what for nothing is good that the students that are in middle schools they are going to high school because they can talk with the teachers about the class and what is going to be about.

Can be good for some students because when get's the time to go to high school they can be sure what is going to be about the classes the he choose and all that stuff.

They are going to liked because they have the opportunity to choose their classes and for some reason is going to be more fun and the students wants to learn more about what is the teacher talking about because they choose them classes.

Sometimes the students don't know what classes they want to take when they go to high school because some students say that is hard to be in high school it is but you need to think that if you wanna do something hard you need to work hard and you can due because if you don't try you are not going to do something.

Sometimes the students don't like to help themselves but doing this can be helpful for them because they are going to say to themselves "" wait but is going to be cool choose my classes "". And they are going to want choose them classes and and they can learn what classes they can choose.

They are going to be very happy because they decided to help themselves.

They are going to help others students and see what they due and what they are learning.

Helping other students is good they don't need to be at school but I don't like this class what can I do to changed but I can't changed it help them and they are going to be happy.

Always try to help other because they are going to be the future of this world we need to help them to find the solution of everything. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
5D693DD9978D,"How will be high school different if you will graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years? Three years things happen very fast than four years. you can't learn a lot things that happen in high school in three year because you will follow different plan for to graduate early. It is not a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college because I have to force my work, I will be indecisive and I won't be able to take elective course. All this will be hared days for me to finish my high school in three years.

Firstly, if I want to graduate in three years I have to force my work because I must have to take courses during the summers or in the evenings. And I do not wanna do that because normally my family every summer go to visit different country. Also I have to take course course during the evenings where I go to play soccer because I like to play. For example, if I want to graduate early I could not do this and I am to young to force my life, I have time to take this things slow because when I force my work I feel like my work will be wrong and I could not learn anything and that can not help me to go to the college. So three years is to short to learn everything that we have to learn in high school. It is not a good idea to force your work because like you did to learn things from the high school is how you will forget it.

Also, finish your high school in three years do not let you to think about what you want to study for the college because your course will be to short and you won't to do a good decision. If you have a lot time you can think better and you can find a new goal. For example, when i was in eleven grade i did not what i want to study when i will go to the college. But now i am taking geometry and i like it. Now like to be architect because i found that math is one of my favorite class. If i just took three years of high school i did not what want to do for college. So three years is to short to take decision for go to the college, you can go but as a indecisive student.

Finally, high school in three years will be boring for me without course elective because there two courses electives that i like. One of them is art and band those became me a good students, they change my life. For example, when i play the violin in my class with my classmate that moment, i forget everything that was wrong in my life. Another example is art where i can draw my happiness and i can remember that the life is not wrong. So i prefer to study four year and take my course elective than to study three years whiteout enjoy my high school with my course elective. it is a not a good idea to students to study three years of high school because they won't find the taste of high school.

Some people think that work force, indecisive person and won't be able to take course elective is better because they want to graduate early. They do not care about their life, they just want to do this to do that and they do not learn anything. However, to go the college you need to be more prepare because college is different than high school. That is why must of the college is hard to enter because some educational programs offer that allow high school student to graduate in three years and then when they go to college they do not anything. Because in three years is not enough for a high school students.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
CCC05B237877,"Your attitude is the best way to achieve your goals or just a plus to get everything easily. In life if your attitude is pleasant you will have a lot of opportunities, and also be succesful in work, love, and friends. For example if you help your partners in work, and do your work well probable your boss prometed you in a better stand for all your effort and devotion. Another example can be in love if you are affectionate, charismatic, and loving probably you gonna find someone love you and give you the same love, and actitud you have with her.

To begin with, the best way to get a best position in your work is to show a good attitude. The majority of contrators like someone everyone loves too, because is more effective to everyone and effective for the company. For example last year in my uncle work someone will be ascent, 3 workers inclued my uncle, the most part vote for him because they said is the most friendly, and the most appropiate for the jod. To conclude this if your attitude like the others everyone wiil be agree with you and they going to follow you because they trust you.

Secondly, the best manner to be in love with your partner is havening a great attitude, and communication. The most part of relationship work, because both respect each other, and have a great communication. For example my Mom and my Dad never fighting they prefer talk and solve them problems and teach me how is not necessary have a load attitude to solve a problem. This show how have a good attitude is the best way to prevent the love gone and preven divorces.

Some people say, is not always neccesary have a good actitud to be succesful in life. A lot porcent of people think have a bad attitude is a caracteristic to be succesful and is not a obstacle to have a great career in the future. For example the president of my country his attitude is disagreeable but he has a faultless career and although he is likeable is the president of El Salvador. However everyday people say ''he is the president because we need him no because we want he lider us''. This demostrate how you can have a good career or power, but if your attitude is unpleasant although they need it never gonna like you.

People with good personality and good attitude have the benefit to get everything more easy for how you expresed to others. And people who have a weird attitude no matter what they said if they sttil have that attitude and don't chance people never gonna try have a friendship with them for this reasons. In conclusion be a person charismatic a great friendship with the most part of the people your life will be benefit and different just to have a good attitude. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
0D8EC8868869,"Dou you think are you success or not? some people think what not is the better but other person think what yeas is the best for everyto pursue fighter for to have a world best .

I am agree with the question everybody we o need to keep fighting to get the results that we want to be successf ul not let the to follow to try single why wing first work our we need to keep instant moment until till to get the purpose is to fight what all to pass an examination we have error nothing to pass an examination since the principle not as a early as possible why pron poss error to fight why the we keed and to follow a run to fight.

I am think all the person we need time for more work and estudy and practice more to give fot never to leaver the struggle fotr existence in the life nothing is easy example a person some not follow in the study for not to be wary fight what all to pass an examination and aproximatein the life nothing is easy .

everybodyr persuare correct the error some people need more to follow for correct the error.                                                                                                                    ",1.5,2.0,1.5,1.5,2.0,1.5
F16AFE936F49,"Disney land is the place I would want to explore! Have you ever heard the saying "" Disney land is your land?'' Well I would like to explore the nights with marvelous fireworks,and blasting shows. Disney land is a great place, for kids that enjoy watching Disney movies and/or shows.

At Disney land kids would enjoy the shows,fireworks,and rides! A family would see the look at their kids face after a fantastic night of fireworks mashed up with fantastic plays. Therefore, I would like to go out to Disney land to view the huge castles with decoration ,and visible lights that would just glow my night up!. In sum, Disney land would be my elected place because I love, and enjoy watching Disney shows, and love to see people act out as Disney characters.

In additional, Disney land is my dream place to go because I get to watch my favorite shows, and enjoy myself! However, my way of explaining Disney land is... Imagine yourself playing your favorite sport or your favorite hobby. In this example i'll be using hockey. Lets say you just love being offense since your really good at it, and always help your team to win with your blossom hits. Therefore since you would love hockey (defense) ,and I love watching plays both would connect to form a connection which would be a joy of winning in hockey ,and a joy of watching people preform plays. In conclusion you love to play hockey, and I love watching plays which all leads to a great night of our favorite shows/sport in a optimistic way that will be unforgettable. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
F53E50C57938,"Technically, students spend seven hours in school and seventeen hours at home regardless of what time they sleep or what they do when they get home. Students should have more time to study at home, rest and prepare for the next day. More hours in school will ware out the student causing it to effect their grades. I disagree with the school board's plan to extend the school day because students have extracurricular activities to do when they are not at school,and it disturb both the students and the teachers personal life.

Not all activities student perform happens in school. Adding an hour and a half to the school day can affect the student progress at home. For example, a student can be a player in a local soccer or basketball team, adding more hour will give the student less time to practice and get ready to the game or match and the student will also have little time to do his/her homework or complete an assignment or project given to them. The student having less time to practice is going to take a big tow on his/her team. Maybe the student is a very good player and his/her team needs him/her,he/she having small time to practice will make the team lose the match. This decision will not only effect the student but the teachers too.

Everyone wants to go home and relax from a long day work. The decision of adding ninety minutes to the school day is going to interrupt what the teacher and student do in their everyday life. Some teachers have families they have to take care of. They may have to pick their child or children from the babysitter, preschool or school if the don't use the bus. They also have doctor or dentist appointment they have to attend or have to take their children to. Teachers have chores or duties they must preform at home like shopping for groceries or picking little brother or sister from school. It could also be that they have another place to work at after school in order to earn more money. Both students and teacher have busy lives this decision is going to effect them.

There are many reasons why adding one hour and a half is bad but these are the ones I could come up with. I disagree with the school board's idea to extend the school day because students have extracurricular activities to do when they are not at school,and it disturb both the students and the teachers personal life. I think if the school board is going to add more time to the school they should high the pay of the teacher because it take time off their schedule.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
ED06CD30103F,"Have you ever wondered when is it a good idea for people to start thinking about what they want to do for a living. They are many reasons why high school kids need to start thinking about what they want to do for a living. Im going to tell you why it is a good idea for high school kids to have a (an) idea of what they want to do for a living. However, some people think it's a bad idea for them to start thinking what they want to do for a living.

If people dont start knowing what they like at a young age then they will not know what the want to do in the future. We should start knowing what we want to do by the end of high school for many reasons. When we finish high school we should go straight to college so we can study about what we want to do. They're many people in the world that still dont know what they want to do; and that is because they didn't know what they want to do. You should always know what you want to do for a living once your out of high school.

People in high school only think about living life and not thinking about what they want to do fro their life. They're many people in high school (including me) that just want to live life with out a job and just got party. Life doesn't for that way. If you want to work at McDonald, Burger king, etc the you won't be able to party like you want. All your going to do is work, work, and work all day. If you start think about what you want to do for a living right now, then when your older you wont be working all day. You will be able to take a vacation or have time with your family.

Some people think that if you wait until your an adult to know what you want to do, then its better, but thats not what I think. You should know what you want to do by the end of high school. Then when your older, like in your 50s or 60s then you can retire and not bust your butt of working at a minimum wage job for your whole life. Thats my reasons why I think its better to know what you want to do for a living once your in high school.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
F495D071AE60,"Students should be allow to bring cell phones to because maybe some students may have an emergency and they need to call there parents ,or if there parents had an emergency ,or a car accidents an need to call her child to make sure they aren't picking them up after school. And maybe they need there cell phones if they walk to school and they kidnapped them and they need to call someone to help them.thats why the principal should allow the students to bring cell phones to school and turned them off in call.

They can use there cell phones in lunch time only but to make sure they have them off in class .And in the hall way they can use them just for a emergency or if a kid faints someone can call the nurse to come for him that.student shou",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
E969EF7D2D8A,"Given students a long summer opportunities would give them the chance to take a restful break from all the ethic school year they have being having.

Most students enjoy summer break vacation. but some educators feel that the summer is too long because students has a long summer vacation would take the time to review their school year and go to summer school for makeup class while others are planing to spend time with their families . Though others are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. I think it not a great idea because Most students thinks the long summer is a great opportunity for them to participate in some various positive activities and for them to sets a standard goal for themselves.

Most students should get a long summer break because they have to take their time and review their work and go to summer school for a make up class that would help them to get credits back or graduates the coming years. Imagine have in a break during the summer, would any students have the chances of making up class work during the winter? or would they even think about the ideas of doing a class makeup?. I think no because they would be giving an excuse about the snowy weather and the real cold weather and schools would be canceling which would affects the process of curriculum on what the class are learning. for example during the winter when we sometimes gets a snowy weather we cancel schools and that one day that school get cancel it affects most teachers planing on what they should do for that day. For instance the school would have to take a week off of that summer break so that the teacher would have time to complete what he or she has to teach the students. Therefor students needs a longer summer break to succeed on their goal.

Meanwhile other students need a long summer breaks to spend a long time with their families because they has already spend a long school learn especially the once that had honors class also the students who are in college. Most students who spends some quality time with their family might have a better chance of setting up a goal for the next school year by all means because they are getting a better advice from their family, for example I had a understanding that students who spent the most time with their family discussing their school year would get motivated and has a goal for themselves before the new school year, meanwhile in the winter break, you wont have that much time to spend with your family, because most of your family who live far across would most likely not want to come visit because of the winter. For example when during the winter most of my family who lives abroad or out of states would never come to visit us during the winter break because they said it winter and it really cold, while in the summer each and everyone of our family would come to visit because we spend some quality time together and they always give me some good advice on how to be successful on my education and what goal I should set to gain my success.

Finally though other are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. With this opinion, I think am little bit agree because during the winter the snowy weather kind of disrupt everything or activities that was supposed to happened during the school year. Meanwhile another hands the students does not have to missed a week or weeks to school but a day or two. Therefor they should get a long summer break even tho they would gets a week or two off, for instance I believe if they get a a day or two there would be no chances for them to forgets everything they learned during the time school opens to the beginning of winter. for example if they miss one or two days they would have a day to revised their notes and maybe be prepare for a coming test or quiz in the future, never the ;less they wont have to study for too long for a test or quizzes again.

In conclusion

Most students enjoy summer break vacation. but some educators feel that the summer is too long because students has a long summer vacation would take the time to review their school year and go to summer school for makeup class while others are planing to spend time with their families .

because Most students thinks the long summer is a great opportunity for them to participate in some various positive activities and for them to sets a standard goal for themselves. Though others are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. And I believe that students should always have the opportunity to have a long break especially a long summer break.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
AD72A536B54A,"I,d kinda have to agree with micky here (least favorite tmnt turtle) because, if you don't aim high but go for short you might not get anywhere in life.

Like when you aim low like only work in fastfood and only get paid minimum wage forever, then get a job for a company like samsung of nintendo and get paid more then that.

1 of the examples is the debt/taxes you want to live a good life when you're down here right so do you want to live with so little money or more money that you save from a good job.

My 2nd example of this is like athletes if you learn what you did right, or wrong to achive that goal you have to push yourself further then what you are right now.

but if you succeed at the low standers your more like meh okay.

Though I can see the other way too saying you aim low but at least your aiming for something which i can get behind.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
9A879E8D266F,"Dear Reader's

This statement is wrote by Ralp Waldo Emerson, it's trying to help to the peoples who's thinking about his life, if it's better work indibiduality?

called; to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment.

This realization is important for the world and people's who make a good choice.

you nee be complete that work before you get some problems with the organization from whatever country you are and thinking about your future.

The central idea with the Emerson's statement , i'm agree with the statement, I gonna be expresed my personal opinion, it's a good accomplishment because is better one thing you need think is what is your purpouse in the future and better, what you wanna do for the life , you need be prepared for take a good accosmplishment in the future and take a good organization for you realization in company's or whatever you work.

When you work hard you always gonna be a good person for the people's what are around of you , tha's gonna be a good notice for you realization, and for your famil gonna be enpresive of you , by that you need think positive in the life be a champioms work indibidualiy and take a good decision's for yor organization , in that part you need be very careful , be respelful with the other's peoples around you and they gonna be happy with you.

if you work by your self that is help to your realization , by that i'm agree with the statement Emerson's , he was thinking about him self and that helped to him , he take a good decicion by that he wrote the statement ""

To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment""

work indibiduality thta are the sum of qualities that characterize and distinguish an individual from all other's , personality or separate, and is most important and better, because people's in the team sometimes not work hard, they just work for survival in the day in tha's is not good you need work every day for take better future with you, and if you dont work that dont gonna be help with the accomplishment , and you need continue with the work you are doing because that gonna help you in the future with the organization.

The appropiate accomplishment for your self it's when you work hard always you gonna be a big person in the future or to the world, and them you gonna see the results of your work believe you tha's is a big notice from you.

The purpose it's be yourself in a world, your future is in the front, work by yourself that's make happy to the future and to the people's in the world.

The conclusion are in yourself work hard for you better future in the world, take a good desicion's with the peoples, because that is gonna help to you , the purpose in this statement is think in yourself for be a big person in the future and to organized your life , that mean say take a good desicion's dont get bad thinks about your life if yo go donw never stop work hard and them you gonna be happy with your position you are that is better now.

be positive with yourself.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
3EEB66F3630C,"This is what the prompt is asking me to take a Position on this Issue. And to Support my response with resons and Specific examples on this prompt. So this is what the Countergraument is about and what it onces me to take the Position and Issue on is this Should people make their own Decisions, or should they seek Guidance from experts and Authorities about life's Important matters?

People should make their own decisons because in one point of another theres always going to be a time that we are going to have to make a decison on something like for example every four year's theres always a selection for a new goverment and what i mean by new Goverment i mean like a new President that when we have to make a Selection that a decison that we are making for our self but in this situation we are looking for our own Committing benenfical so that why it is good for us to star making our own decisons for our own self and specially for us as young Atults that we are in high school and that some of right now we are asking some bad choices but we can change that by staring making good decisons or at list trying to make the right decison in school.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
6305A432AB38,"The Benefits of Having A Good Attitude.

It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. The importance of having a positive attitude can be bigger of what some people may think. A positive attitude describes how much effort people are putting into the problems they are facing. To see the good side of the things in life help to be successful. A positive attitude is the key to success in life because a positive attitude will help not to give up and will make things easier.

First, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because being positive help no to give up. For example, in the text ""People Who Became Successful After Adversities"", many people had a hard time before becoming successful. Even though, that people had adversities they always had a positive attitude towards the problems, that hope they needed to become someone. A positive attitude can change the view of the problems. Having a good attitude help people to not give up when facing adversities.

Furthermore, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it makes things easier. For example, a person with a positive attitude will always see the good side of the problems. When people have a good attitude toward a problem, to face it becomes easier since people will look for a solution instead of being stuck. The attitude with which people face problems, shows the effort and how much people try. A positive attitude make things easier for people to be successful in life.

Many people may argue that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life because people does not always need to be positive to become successful. For example, there is many people who became successful without the needing of a good attitude to do things. This argument has a point, since people does not always have to be positive when facing something. However a positive attitude will help everything to go well. For example, people who have a positive attitude in life will attract good things, and everything will go well. Even though many people may argue that people does not always need to be positive, a positive attitude will help to make everything go well in life.

To summarize, it has been said that with a positive attitude people become successful in life because a positive attitude help not to give up, and a positive attitude will make things easier to go through. People with a good attitude do not give up when facing problems. Having a good attitude, will make things easier to go through. Some people may say that a positive attitude is not always needed to become successful, however a positive attitude is the key to success in life. To be positive in life is really important, since it helps people to face problems and become successful.               ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
4A38761A2CBB,"I agree on Prime Minister Churchilll quote that ""success consist of failure,being successful"" can be a different of what people might think and solving their problem to overcome any challenges that blocking their ways to being to improve and motivate them selves as a person.

Success is not just a dream is a dedication to be engage in everyday activity also success also a role for humans to think whats ahead and not lookig back to seek old habits.

Failure doesn't mean just to give up dreams and ideas but it gives the choice of pushing it to the limits and overcome any challenges,failure can also help to motivate any hopesand being prepared for any challenge thats around. its like how to motivate others to support and encourage them to help what their need is.

Despite having failure its not a end of the world situation but a test for confidence,skills and improvement or being a leader of some sort of ideas and real life. its like My self taking a test i was more likely to be more nervous but i was really confident that i would pass my class than thinking of failing it. some people want to be successful to persue the happiness and they dont the others to help get on track as their skills improves and its crucial for them to think futher down the road whats their future going to be and some people doesn't want to loose enthusiam its like loosing a video game and gave up easily and just throw the console to the trash and never play again for the rest.

but some people want challenges becase they can think hard and improve and know their weakness as they progress every level and they dont want to get beaten they want to stay on the top.

I agree on Prime Minister Churchilll success consist of failure,being successful"" can be a different of what people might think and solving their problem to overcome any challenges. and improve and motivate them selves as a person. Success is not just a dream is a dedication to be engage in everyday activity also success also a role for humans to think whats ahead and not lookig back to seek old habits. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
4844CF56336D,"students who take an online classes do not have much benefits because, they feel lazy to study on their own, sometimes do not their assignments and also do not have people they will be compete with. They also do not have much confident to speak with lots of people or give a speech in front of many people, which makes someone who attends an everyday class with a lot of people to be experienced than a person who takes an online class. people with much experience in a lot of things do not always have fake people in their lives.

People always think that taking an online class is very good, which is totally wrong. When taking online classes you do not get to know the people who are performing much better than you in class, but when you go to an everyday class in a school, you know the people who are better than you in different subjects. When you take an online class you do not get people who will help you solve your problems in much courses; for example, when you take an online class and you fail in a subject you would not know those who performed good in that subject, that means that you will not know how to study hard to perform good next time. Online students always find it difficult to study because, they do not see their mates in school learning which will also encourage them to that same thing. This means that taking an online classes will not be advisable for students.

Also when taking an online class, you do not get to interact with different kind of people through out the world. People who take an online class do not always have the confident to speak in public and do not always have lot of friends. Having friends is one of the important things in our life. When you have friends you share each others problems and solve it together. This means that when you take an online class you do not always have enough friends to speak to or to share your problems with. For instance,when you are given the opportunity to give a speech in front of a lot of people, you begin to shiver or start stammering because you are not use to speaking in public. but when a person who attends classes which involves a lot of individuals, they always have the confident not to only speak in front of their mates but to also speak to those who are much older than them without any fears.

Moreover, people who always involve themselves in a video conference do not always know the people their dealing with in their business or do not always have much idea about their business meeting. When one is present at work place all the time, he or she runs the business smoothly without any misunderstanding with anybody. Again when having a business with someone on a video conference, you do not know if the person you are dealing with is a fraud a fraud or not. So people who do an online businesses always end up putting themselves into trouble. When one is always present at their business places, they always know the people who are hard working and can make the business go much further and those who are lazy. When you are always at your work place,you make your members to respect and adopt your policies.

People who take online classes do not understand much better because, the teacher is not always around them when they need help with the topic that they not understand. But hen you are in an everyday school classes, when a teacher always teach and you do not understand you always know where to locate him to ask for help. Even when the teacher is not around, you can find different teachers who also teaches that subject and they will always find a solution to your problem. So students who attend an everyday classes perform much better than those who take an online classes.

All the above mentioned, which includes, it makes them interact with different people, find a lot of friends, get to know good people in a business, ask teachers for help when they have a problem really shows that taking an online class or a video conference is not really beneficial for an individual. Once all these measures are taken into consideration, people will see that going to an everyday class or making yourself present at a business meeting is more important to a person.",4.5,3.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
331760E7A5CB,"John Lubbock, a famous writer and well known for his master peaces inspired by many others such as friends, family, and other famous writers. John Lubbock once said ""Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control?"" it is a very outstanding move, because 86% of the writers use their experiences, knowledge and everything they have known as a different way to interpetrait, and make a book.

Most of the people decides to choose their own character traits, this is due to how their parents treated them and how their childhood was, all thought it is different when someone has had a rough childhood and yet they decide to be a good person, this, this is being different to decide to be different then the person that has caused pain or sorrow to someone, that is moving on for the best, moving on for what is right; on the other hand we have people who do not agree with this, if there is a good side to something there also has to be a negative side is the balance of the universe and the bad side, or the people that can not move forward let the influences of many others affect their point of view of all the situations upon them.

Those people are hurt, full of pain and shame to something that they can not escape from, those people need help because who verdicts that they can escape from their past for a extended period of time. the people who tend to have a bad personality is either because of their past or their present along with the males according to a researcher in Harvard university 78.48 of the population believes that being a male means that they have no right to show their emotions, to be heartless, to be cold. women had fought for their right to vote women fought for their freedom and men are still men. the male population decides to be quiet and dont let their emotions to affect their significant others.

The people have fought in many wars, conflicts and yet there is not for sure that there is equal rights, All of the generation Z are saying ""equal rights equal fights"" but yet nobody see those equality traits women want their freedom to be exactly like men to look just like men an yet the real men are unable to show emotions and feelings without being judge or lynched.

So why did this British politician Lubbock said ""your character will be what yourself choose to make it"" because everyone has their own personality and everyone faces their own challenges along with their own problems, men can not be like women because men will get denigrated for it, and women are always free to do what they want because they will judge everyone that is against them. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
40AF66A621E0,"Example :

Some student in High School try to the best in class and I thing is a good idea to try to pass the notes with a good grade does care the short you are the thing is try to learning and thing in all the thing you ready know ,I believe in opportunity in High School ,

Thesis , One topic that is frequently debated is whether or no students should commit acareer young age .Some people think that student commenting to a career at young age is beneficial , they feel that is an advange for them , I believe than students should commute at a younger age because they can explore more about the career , Find out if a career it's a good choice , and they can explore other options , at Reason : some student take a regulate cases and if fine because you try to the best to and learning very fast and if you small does care doe and that's help for you life

Second Reason :

Some Student take all the class with a good credit and they pass a another good class because they ready pass them you good , because you are sect to go in universities ,

Three Reason : if you take a good position you good because you ready know all the class so them you are prepare in your life because you ready take hart time in High School ,

Conclusion : Some Student take hart class and them they practice and learning Avery single days in ,High School they are Smart Student and they try to learning because they wanna prepare in life , If you prepare you are in good position because you ready graduate in High School and Universities to , Some Student take regulate class so is good because you ready prepare in you High School time you learning in all the class so if you grad due of Universes you good because you can find a very good jobs Them you happy because you make a hart time in High School bout you make you future

, Thanks

I believe in some Societies , because they try to the best in the community in is fine because all boys can go to the High School and learning hart and pass a good time to

Their courses in high school are select to guide a specific career

I believe in all the class and all my grade

I believe and opportunities so is true because if you are smart boys you are select in high school",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
D9BC7F4F22F0,"Well what i think about praising for a student is that it could be achievement or self-esteem. Praising could be good/bad the way how you used it. People who is a praising could be good/bad people who helps other people just like a hero, it also mean a ruler too. People who used praising could used it as a expression. Some people used praising as self-esteem to get there anger out on someone,and some peolple used it as a achievement. Some people used praising as self-esteem to ignore their pain or just get ther anger out.

some people that are using praising as a achievement is good person why becasue you can do lots of things that make other people think you are a hero or a leader. It could used it in school,wrok or in general outside the word. theres lot praising in the world. Theres fighter fighter who help people with a burning house, and theres a cop who find bad guys who deserve to go to jail like crimital or robbers. And now theres us we can help people by asking if they need help if they are strugging to carry something or they have a flat tire you can help them. Just overall help people that are struggling because peope will follow your step by seeing you do it. If you see a old lady go help her bring the stuff to her car or ask her do you need any help if she say yes then help her and if she say no then shes fine but atleast you ask because some people are watching who is helping or not.

Our world need more better people by help other people, we dont need any drama or bad stuff happen to our world like that. We need our world to be friendly so other people can visit us more. How you can make this world better is by help other peolpe that are struggling, care for each other, be friendly to other people make friends, and lastly be positive to other people who you see. The truth about praising is that it deopend on other people sees it and used it outside the world. If you used Praising for bad thats on you but if you used praising for good then yay for you your making this world a better place and envirment for other people and changing others people mind about our word we live in. Some people used praising for good and some people dont and thats okay,why beacuse people sees praising diffrently from what we see in person, and thats fine thats normal for people that dont think the same as we do. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
B596C01C5E87,"Considering businesses have adopted a four-day week , is probably good for them. On the other hand, maybe students in school can handle that. This would come to no harm for our society. We could make this a habit if we wanted it to be, just have to take some action in this. More energy would increase if this would happen. It could change many things, specially recourses. This also can come with responsibilities

Well , were trying to help students out more if we change a full week, to a 4-day week. Their would be no harm. Although , it may effect some students. I feel that, more energy, will come more as students. Coming to school with more energy to a 4-day weekend, students would often get things done more. This would be no harm to us. A full week might just be little too much. If businesses changed the policy for a 4-day week, why not us schools change that. This would benefit us students to get things done. Some of us students have sports or work after school. This policy would benefit us to do better in school and out of school. If schools allowed this , students would benefit this as a gift. If we would be able to take a vote on this, I personally think our schedule would be changed for good. Although, this policy can come with some responsibilities. Maybe most of us students can also handle this policy.

By extending school day for 2 more hours isn't a bad thing. Maybe for this policy to change, would require more school hours in the day. Furthermore, some of us students wouldn't mind that. Regardless, this helps us get more energy for sleep hours by making it a 4-day week. energy is important in this topic. Although, this helps our environment with no harm. This wouldn't be a problem overall. For example, How much energy would be transferred into a 4-day school week than a full week, way more and their is nothing wrong with that.

By handling business, taking care of things, it's all about responsibilities at the end of the day. All were trying to do is help our community and our resources. Students would benefit this and would be a helpful to us. As us students would have to take action into this situation. End of the day, we just want this to help us for the real world and specially after high schools or college. This could all depends the energy we bring also. If this policy would change, we will all be still in good hands.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
FA43581AD6D1,"Thomas Jefferson once wrote ""determine never be idle, it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."". I completely agree with this statement because if you do not want to do anything then how are you sure it will happen. If I want money and I do not have a job then how will I ever get money.

If you want a job and you only sit on your couch how will you get a job? The anwser to that question is you wont because you are not going out and applying for a job. You have to be active and you have to always keep looking until you have the job you want. Nobody will come to you and tell you

""Do you want this job?"". You have to get it and if you are not doing anything to get it nobody will. In todays society people do not want to be active in what they want to get, they want everying to be givin to them. How can we give people something they did not work for they need to be active and search for what they want to get it.

People may disagree with my statement and say ""You do not need to be active for things to be done or to get a job."". If you are not active then how do you know things will come your way. Everything you get in life is earned through being active and getting things done nothing comes at a snap of your fingers.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
97C6E22BA8EE,"Working alone will always be a better progress to your knowledge. Some people think that is better to work in group than by yourself. But many famous people has shared their own stories of life and it show how working alone can open your brain to another level and acomplish more of what others think that just can be done in group. I read an old story of my favorite wrestler , and he explained how he worked really hard at the gym to become one of the best wrestler man in the whole story;that's why I think is better to work alone because working alone help to increase your understanding , it show that you are willing to grow on your own, and it will be one more step forward of your knowledgy.

Consider,for a moment, working alone will help to increase your understanding and if working alone have so many people on the top of hall of fame why we should not try to be one of those people , but to be one of those people we need to work harder than ever. However, people must work alone and they must feel the pain of the hard work that they need to get done. Furthermore,to increase your understanding you must try to learn or do something new every single day of your life, In order to see the result of the hard work that you are doing , does not matter if that is a meantal or physical work as long as you are doing a safe work to succed in those goals.

Besides, working by yourself is safer than working in group and when people work alone it show the desires to grow by their own experiences because a lot of times we trust people that we should not trust for many reason as envious of what you are cusseding at, pervert people in your group doing the wrong work that they should not do,and many times they do the wrong work just to see you down or because they are not interesting on the topic or kind of work than the group supposed to be doing. According with paragraph one ,working alone will definitely take you to succed in your goals and you will get each of your goals done. However, you must be focus and give all the motivation to those dreams that you have in life.

There is a lot of people that think is better to be working in group than by ourselves because five heads think better than a single one. True , I agrees that five heads think better than one , but how about not every menber in the group is agree with the topic or the material that they are working on; what could happen there is problems between themselves because none of them have the same goals or thoughts. Moreover, it could even cause discussiones with teachers, and it will be worse for the group, so which means working alone would be the best option for everyone to take. That way every person can work on their goals and express their diffrent thoughts without getting into discussions.

Concluding with paragraph one,two and three,'' working alone would be the best fit to you to acomplish everything you want as long as you work for it,''. That is why I always try to work alone in all ways because it help to discover new things , a new person inside of you, but also it help to push yoursel forward and always do your best in every single thing that you do on your own because at the end of the way whatever you acomplish,''that is gonna be your legacy,''. If it were up to me , working alone would definitelly be the first option to people to take in a classroom or any place that you are working on.             ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
00B21F9B726F,"Do you think its a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? In some societies, students are expected to identity a career by the time they enter high school. Yes it is a good idea to start young because your already step ahead, you will have background knowledge about the career classes you choose and once you get older you won't have time to choose an career. Also taking courses in high school will help you choose your career like for an example academy classes.

As a students taking a career course, will help them learn more about that career and you will have background knowledge about that career. for an example I'm taking auto technology in highschol becuase I want to learn more about cars and how to fix them. after high school I will be going to a community college so I can learn an advance auto technology class and move on and thats I'm going to succeed in life.

Another reason why its a good idea for students to commit to a career at young age is becuase it will help students choose a good career that pays good money and the students will be a one step ahead. by doing this they will accomplish their goals.

others may say that its not a good idea for students to commit a career at a young age becuase they think its waste of time however, its not waste of their time, becuase once your getting older you wont have time to choose an career that will last.

In conclusion, I think its a good a idea for students to commit to a career at a young age becuase you will have some background knowledge to that specific career, you will be one step ahead, and once you get older you won't have time to choose a career.                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
6A977849DE08,"More is better than one. Asking more than one person will never harm you in any way. What it will do though is make you mare confident about what advice you are getting.

So, whenever you ask for advice, always ask more than one person.

You should ask more than one person for advice because you might find something that help you with another problem. You might not find what you are looking for but it can help you in the future. Whenever I ask for advice I always have one person that tell me something that's completely different but it always help me out later or with another problem. For example, once I asked my friend if he could give me advice on what to study for the math test. He couldn't give me advice for the math test but he ended up giving me advice for the science test.

You always want to make sure you are getting the right advice and collaboration is a big key to finding if the advice, opinion or fact is correct. If more than one opinion collaborates or says the same thing it's more likely to be true than the one that doesn't. This method can also help you with a project. For example, when you're working on a project you want to go to more than one website to check if they have the same information. That way you know for sure you are getting the right information. If you ask multiple people for their opinion on something and five of them same give you the same thing but one person says something totally different. You know he is wrong.

Collaboration is a good way to check if the information is correct but what if you don't understand the information or don't have enough to back it up. Asking more than one person for the same thing can help you build on the same thought and make it better. Maybe you just don't understand what they are talking about but somebody else might restate the same sentence and that might help you understand it better. I know this because Rome and Islam used the same technique and that's what helped survive for so long. For example, when Rome was going to war with Carthage they didn't have a navy but they found boat from Carthage was up on shore. They took the boat apart and made hundreds of copies of it but they improved it by adding a plank so they can walk over to another boat and attack them.

If you are working on a project, a essay or just asking for advice always ask more than one person to make sure it's correct and the best. ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
44C1594D0950,"You can be a good musician or a good soccer player but in order for you to get better at what you do,In order for you to be successful in life,In order for you to win a competition or a race you have to try to do something beyond what you have already mastered. My name is Generic_Name. I attend Generic_School and i am a student athlete,i play soccer and football and based on my experience in these sports i agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.

I have three main reasons why i agree Author Emerson,and the first reason is to get better at what you are doing you have to take bigger steps. In order for me to get better at football and soccer, i have to try to do something beyond what i used to do. I take personal Fitness in school and my goal is to get stronger, but i cannot get stronger if i keep on lifting the same weights i can not i get stronger if am always benching the same weight.

My second reason is that, it helps you win a race or in other words it can help you win a compettion. It is just like Uber competing with lyft, they both good at what they do but in order for uber to gain more customers they have to try to do something that is beyond what they have mastered. I play as a striker in soccer and i play as conerback in football but am not the only striker on the socccer team and am not the only cornerback on the football team so in order for me to start on the team i have to work harder than i used to.

My third reason is it will help you be successful in life. I just found out that the owner of Amazon started in a garage,when i first heard i told myself that he wouldn't be successful if did not take bigger steps in life and even though he is successful he is still taking bigger steps. Also, Trump had everything he wanted cars,money, houses but still wanted to compete with Clinton for the presidency. Let's use an iphone for instance,the more they keep on upgrading it the more they gain more customers. A lot of successful entrepreneurs took bigger steps by getting a loan to start their business.

Some people will say you don't have to try to do something beyond what you have mastered,you just have to try to do new things but trying new things does not help you grow because how is adding another workout to my old workout making me stronger?,I have to increase the weight to make me stronger or how am i gaining more customers or how am i growing or how is my business growing if am still working from a garage?, in order for my business to grow or for me to gain more customers i have to take some bigger steps like getting loan to find a new place.

I agree with Author Emerson because you can be perfect in what you do,you can be perfect in life but you have to try to do something beyond what you have already mastered to keep you growing.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
42DB5DABA590,"That older students can assist with the younger students and the younger students can pair up with the older students. I think this way because the older students can help with the subjects of the younger student that dose not know about. And that the older student can learn something about the younger student that he/she does not know about ether. To have more understanding of the old and young student. And to work together as one.

The older students have know the past year before the young. They know about the subjects they did and know what to do. This can help the young because when it comes to questions, they can do something about it. They can give examples of what troubles them when it comes to a hard question. To show what feels how hard or easy in class, projects, work, and homework can be.

The younger students has a fresh start to 5th grade to middle school or 8th to freshmen. Other students think that middle or high will be easy. Or other think that it will be hard for them self. To open up lockers, find there classes, etc. But by the older students can help them what works best for the student. They can understand of what to do in class. Because of the help of the older students. And they can also teach the other young students of the teaching of the older students.

The program can help each other by if they want to be helpful and to work the path to be more easier Maybe something won't be east on work in school. If the student wants to ask questions, to show hints, or how its going to be in the next grade. The program can make everything much more simple. And this is why that the program can help with the younger students and the older students can know something about the student.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
D7528DEBA951,"Isnt technology just great? through time technology has been advancing, and it's just getting better, but is it minimizing our connections with the human contact? I believe its had a good positive effect on peoples lives. see it this way, technology helps us so much like buildings cars and airplanes, technology has taken over restaurants in such a way that you no longer have to tip! technology and stores do mix and its just speeding up the process.

Although technology might be taking hundreds of jobs, technology is one of the best things we have in this world. Ford industry is a great example they make their cars using robotic technology! by using these big instruments they are able to make a car every ten minutes, that's incredible, and not just that they have the capacity to sell trucks without specking to a customer, representative its all online no need of customer service. Having to buy parts has never been easier thanks to Ford/store. org get the piece you need the next day. Near my local ford dealer they have a great restaurant where technology is all they utilize.

Who would've known by using technology in restaurants everything would run much smoother, by using technology ordering your favorite meal off a tablet was never this cool. Yes that means there would only be a few people employed and less contact with waiters/staff members but there is a good side, no need to worry about tip, especially no human mistakes, order everything off your finger tips. while your enjoying your meal staff members will have a chance to be doing somethings else unless called by a customer. Have you seen how long it takes to check out in Walmart! thanks to technology now and days?

Have you ever experienced or seen a cashier take a billion years just to scan the chicken your considering purchasing? i have and It was devastating to watch! or have you witnessed a wrong change? things like this happen way to often and if you never noticed it on your receipt you just lost some money. That's why they invented self checkouts to speed up the process of purchasing, thanks to these great machines leaving Walmart was never easier to do. Just scan and go! sooner or later every store in America will have these great machines. Yes they'll once in a while have some bad performance but most of the time there really reliable. Is it weird not seeing a employee in the cash register? yes but you'll get use to it as time continues.

Having technology in our side has made us better and has lighten our sense of being, technology has been so good to us that it has brought positivists in our lives. How stressful would it be for Ford Junior to hire millions of workers, and finish one car every five hours? or opening up a restaurant and hire twenty workers who are rude, lazy to there customers? and last but certainly not least, Walmart having hundreds of workers who take forever to scan and pack your items. All of this would stink if we wouldn't have such great technology in our hands.                                         ",3.5,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
14ED79D68BC4,"I think if we never try something new we will never are going to grow more. I'm agree with

Emerson's because in this life the point is to try new ideas new experiences is not only stay in one place like if I already have something why can't try something different if I can move more far than where I am for example if I never try something that I always have wanted how am going to know what it's feel. One reason if I already have a mastered in something how im supossively to grow if I never have try it before how I will know if I am good for it Ifor not

I never try before.

Example If I am a person who has a mastered in bussines and I am able to have my own company but Iam scared to try how I am supposively to grow If I don't try I will stay in the same place where I srtart because is does not matter what I am mastered fpr it if I don't try I f I don't take the risk if I am not confident in my self. Unless I try to do something that I already have mastered I will never grow. I think everything depends in our own personallity because there are person that they are already old but some times they regret their selfs because they never try somethint that they could try it when they were young but now is to late for them I think those kind of things are important in life is not only a bachilletor degree is what you want in life is something that if you don't try is gonna stay in our lives forever and we wiil never are going to see that.

Another example for this is that we always have to go beyond that what we already know we never can stop in one place we need to keep going because there are more things to discovered and the more fast we are moving the more fast we start growing it. So every time we need to keep in mind that everything that we do is what is going to make us to look different then others and always be beyond in everything. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
BBE74D844874,"The Ways To Success In Life

Failure plays an important role in the path of success. To gain success in life we all have to go from difficult situations. We do not have to lose hope at failure. Failure is the key to success. We learn the lesson from our mistakes. If we will not do the mistake so, how would we learn the things more better. We should learn the things from our failure instead of losing hope. Encourage yourself and other when you you are facing the failure is a good thing. If someone fails again and again in their goal, we have to encourage them for not to lose hope,determination about goals and be enthusiastic.

We need to help people if they need us,if we see someone who are losing their hope because of the failure, we have to encourage them for not to lose hope. Because if they lose hope, they are destroying their dreams and goals by their own hands. At least we have to try something until we reach to our goal. There was a spider, who wants to go to his home but he was not reaching to his home because it was so high, he tried first time he failed, he tried second time he failed but he did not lose the hope. When he tried the eighth time, he reached to his goal just because he did not lose the hope. We have to try as many time as we can but never lose the hope.

We should have determination about our desire. If we are determine about our desire then we can reach to our goal. For the success we have to do a lot of things like hardworking but the main point is determination. For instance if we think we can not do this thing then its really happen. First we have to prepare our minds that this is my desire and I will have to reach my goal. There is nothing wrong to make or see the dreams but the determination about your dreams can take you to path of success.

Be enthusiastic about your work and goal is the great way for success in life. We have to be thrill about our goal. Enthusiasm is a great thing, we have to learn from the failure with out loss of enthusiasm. In the pursuit of success we do not have to be sad. Be happy that you learn from your mistake and now u can do that better than before. From the failure we are getting more experiences. For example when teens go for their first job, they do not have experience. They do not know how to manage their time in job, how to take customers and how to deal with the difficult situations. Every day they do mostly mistake and learns from their failures. At the end of the year they are master in everything but if they do not lose hope and be enthusiastic about their work.

Life is so hard but we can make it easy if we don not lose hope, be determine about our goal and be enthusiastic. To gain the success we have to do a lot of hard work but if we fail at any point we do not have to lose hope and just sit down because we fail. We have to learn from our mistake and just try, try and try until you reach to your goal. If we fails after hard work it does not mean we can not fulfill our dreams. However if we fails after a lot of hard work it means we have to try again. Because hard work will never waste so just keep trying until you reach your goal. So, we should never have to be afraid from the failures. It is good for us to learns more from failure and do better next time. Never give up on your dreams and desires. Try for your ambittions and happiness. One day you will get the success, as Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said that:

""success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.""",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
F4EA60BCBC2C,"Many people prefer to work in a group, because they think it can be more helpful, and others people said that they prefer to work alone. There are some benefits of working in a group and working alone. I think that the best option is to work in a group.

When you work in a group you can finish faster. For example, if there is a group of three people, one people can be doing a job, while you are doing an other, and the third people can be doing an other. That is a smart and easy way to finish the work faster.

Working in the group can be very helpful for planing how to do a project. Like as, all the people in the group gives their opinion of how to do the project and everyone in the group hears the ideas and them, they vote for the best idea in the group. That is a key point of working in the group everyone express them self and the work become easily.

In a group you can have better ideas. For example, you are in a group, and you have an idea and you tell the idea to the group, all the people in the group is going to give an opinion, and they will tell you if your idea is good or it is bad. In that way you can have more ideas for you and your group, and your group and you can learn more from your ideas.

Working in a group can be more helpful, because you and all the people in the group can have more ideas and finish faster. Even thought some people prefer to work alone, because they think that they can be more concentrate and they can learn faster.

In conclusion in a group you can finish faster and have more ideas for you and your group. While working alone you can concentrate more because you have less talking, and you are less distracting,when you work alone you can learn more, because you find the answer at your own. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
E9CE67114F63,"I think that failure plays a crucial role during the persuit of sucess.

Failure is inavoidable the path to success is not straight one.

everyone fails sometime in their life .

Walt disney was fired for a newspaper because he lacked creativity.

Learn from your mistakes, if you make a mistake at least you know not to do it again.

A failure might put an end to one thing (idea or opportunity) but lead you to other for example: I used to try to draw realistic people and animals with pensils, and then I found that i was better at zentangle (an art style that consists of repetitive designs and patterns. The success you end up having might not be the kind you originally had in mind. Failures could lead you into in something else entirely.

Failure often leads to problem, working to solve problems and getting through difficult times makes you smarter and stronger as a person. By dealing with your failures, you will be more prepared and experienced in the fututre. Strength, intelligente, problem solving skills, and experience are all thing that are gained from faiture and can lead to success.

Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that success consists of going from faiture to faiture without loss of enthusiasm. I think that faiture Plays a crucial role during the pursuit of success.

If there were not mistakes in life. Then no one would learn from then. Faiture is unavoidable, but it can be a useful tool that helps shape your future.

My conclusion is Faiture can change who you are and what path you're on in life, and I believe that it plays an important role in the persuit for success.

Mistake only makes us smarter and working to solve problems only makes us stronger.

Without faiture, no one would be sucessful.

Vocabulary:

-Blunder

-Unavoidable

-Principal

Prime

-Induce                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
CC2EC6C74865,"Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because to have success is important to do a great effort. It is very important in the life, but to learn the value that it has sometimes failure is also necessary. Also success is not something easy to get, but without loss calm could get it with enthusiasm. Success has an role important in the life of many people since it is something that is necessary in their academic level, their jobs, and their goals to have a better future.

First, success is difficult to get at the academic level, but the students need know that although they are failing with effort they could get it. Since to get it, they need to study a lot without loss the hope of getting success. Also they need to practice each step to do more easy their activities and have a better success. For example: if students loss any test they need to study and practice a lot to get their success with enthusiam. For this reason, the importance of the success also depend of failure to failure to learn.

Second, in the work, the success depend of many dedication and is absolutely necessary working a lot to get it. If the employees is not working well, the problem could be that the company not could have success and the employees could be exonerated of their jobs. Moreover, if they are exonerated their jobs, they need to looking for another jobs without loss the calm to get their new jobs with a great enthusiasm. For example: An employee was farawell for does not a good report, but continuous practicing and learned to do a good report after that the employee found a good job did a very nice job. Sometimes the success in the work is not easy to get, but neither impossible.

Finally, the people have many goals in their future, but also have obstacles to get success. The goals are difficul to accomplish, but not difficult to do. Furthermore, to realize their goals, they need to keep completely firm their ideas to find the success. Sometimes, they can failure, but they have the capacity to do anything and accomplishment their success for example, A family want to go to the beach, the problem is that they do not loss money to their vactions, yet they were to the beach because winning money working hard and with a great emotion they arrived to the beach. All goals can get with dedication and effort.

In conclusion, from failure to failure, the success can be possible and get it with a great enthusiasm. In the academic level, job and goals for future there are not impossible to accomplish the success. Does not matter the difficulty that everything have, the most important is realizing all with success, but without loss enthusiasm. Success is important, but the most important is learning to surpass failure to get it with enthusiasm. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
976E2E05C4EB,"Some businesses only work 4 days in the week maybe to conserve energy or maybe to the employers can rest one more day. I think it is a good idea to extending the school day two hours to a four days school week, but one reason that I agree with this opinion is that the student could more time to do their homework and they could work too. The schools could save more energy if we go to school 4 days per week because we used a lot of energy during school day. Many students have babies they have to care them when they are out of school this option can be benefits for this students how have to be parents and students in the same time I love this school where i am because they help the students who do not have who can care their kids.

In my point of view this option can help me and the rest of the students too, because we could do a lot of things in that day for example I have to work after school because i have to pay my rent, food, clothes and other things that a person need and If I only came only four day in the week I could work all the day and make more money to help my mom.

I agree with the businesses who only open

4 days in the week because they want to save energy and money, For example when i was in mu country my family and I always saved energy because we don't had the money to pay the energy, sometimes I forget to turn off the TV and my mom yelled me and said ""turn off the TV because you don't pay the energy."" and sometimes i get mad because i wanted to listed music and watched TV.

Some students have to do many things in the same time for example they have to be parent, student, and labor and the week is to short to them to do all the things and a day off can be so good for them because it's not easy to anyone to be responsible. I admire my mom because she was dad and mom for my and my brothers and I was think how can she do all those things and then I realized that she wake up everyday because she want the best for us and doesn't matter how tired she felt. We can't ""never give up"" because fighting.

In conclusion, I agree that the schools extending the school day two hours and we came only 4 days on the week because sometimes we feel tired and we can rest one day in the week because we have to work in the weekends too and the school can be beneficial too because they can save energy, food, water, money and a lot of other things. The Government will can make that my dream came be true to have only 4 days of school.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
BC0703638937,"Haven't you got an advice from multiple adults in your daily life? Most of the times I believe that people ask for multiple advice from multiple people because they want their adive to impact them in a certain way. However, sometimes one person cannot be convinced by one voice they like to hear multiple voices to be convinced. Most often people are not motivated by themselves which would make it harder for them to be motivated by a single voice because those people needs to hear multiple opinions to make them better or motivated. So let's say that this one person likes to change his or her life and become more motivated, be in the best shape of his or her life, so he or she ask about 10 people how to get motivated and how to work hard to achieve your dreams. Hearing motivating and powerful words from other people can impact your life without you even knowing.

He gets about the same advice from people as he did from the people before and as he heard all of those people talk about the same topic now he or she would be motivated because sometimes not only one voice but two would put a big impact on someone's life and help them. My teachers, friends, family, and all of the people I've met in my life had gave an advice that I heard and took their advice because it meant something to me and it was deep. I would want more people to give me advice that can impact my life, for example my friend's dad always gives him advises but he has hear his dad tell him the same advice over and over again at the end of the day he will get bored and not listen to his dad's advice which would impact him negatively.

Sometimes life gets hard to certain people and they would like to hear advice from multiple people which will impact them in a positive or a negative way depends on who they ask advice from. For example if I were to ask advice from my brother all the time he would just repeat everything he said from before and that would not help me at all, after all they say ""two brain is better than one.""

Listening to other people's advises can impact you in a way that would make you do the right thing in the future and not only it can impact you it can impact the people around you. You could also use the people's advises you heard and give that advice to another person that also needs to hear it. This is my thoughts on why some people would like multiple and how it can affect them in a certain way.",2.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
E7A76C48340D,"I think this council is debating the adoption. If the curfew adopt the teenagers, the situation will change to the better. the council said the teenagers don't have to be in the street after 10 p. m. in the weekdays because they want the teenagers out of troubles. and they found teenagers in the street after 10 P.M. that's mean is breaking the law. that warning for the people because sometimes the bad people walk around have a knife or have a gun these people can kill someone kidnapping anyone. Or someone make a bomb and try to put it in street. and also is danger because maybe someone drank a lot and he drove the car maybe can hit anybody by the car that's why the police check the city a lot of time to make sure no bad things will happen and also the police check the city because if someone have something wrong they will help them. if the teenagers don't break the law this will help the police to try make the city safe the safety in city is so important. Like example that happen with me when I was 15 years old I was walking in the street at 11 p. m. and I was going to my home I see one man behind me but I thought is regular man but he was have a knife and he said to me give anything you have I was have my wallet had on it my ID and not too much money and I don't have anyone in the street to help me and he took my phone and he told me leave and don't look behind you I ran away because he was almost gonna kill me. be in your home early to be safe. The police doesn't want to control on you but he want to be safely. because the world is not safe now the world have a lot of bad people. And also I was have my friend was in street at 1 a. m. and someone was drank and hit my friend by the car. And my friend is dead all of these to show you how the world is not safe. the police have a lot of situations with the bad people. and if you look at the countries is not safe the reason is because every day around the country you will find everyday someone killed. That's tells you how the world is not safe. a lot of people dead because of the people is drank or the someone have a gun or knife. if you search in internet about the people is succeed in their life the internet will show you these people focused in their future when they finish their work the going to their home to take a rest. try to make your schedule early like in the mid day in the morning to go to your home early.

a lot of people kidnapped every day make sure you're safe. And also I saw before a guy have a gun and he stopped a girl and his husband and he took from them the all gold that girl have it and he took the wallet from the man. and if you don't care about yourself no someone will care about you keep yourself safe. your life is expensive don't make your life is free for someone.                                                                                                                    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
3A38B9DD6723,"In every success of a person there is always a humble story of how did they start from the beginning of their journey. At some point, being successful does not mean you have gone through a lot of struggles, but it was destined for you to be successful. In every story there are different types of story because it is based on where you came from, what education you have finished, and your status in life.

However, I agree with Churchill's statement because success comes after failure. Failure is really an important role for every success. If I fail, I did not hesitate to stand back for myself to pursue success. The greatest blessing in my life is being successful after I have gone through failures. For instances, Graduating high school, I won't be graduating if I did not fail and try harder to reach my goal. At some point of my life, failure is within me because I am not making any move to pursue my planned success. Planning ahead of my success is not bad actually it prepares me to become a successful individual, if I will fail at this time maybe planning my success is not a good idea because it was planned and I know what kind of success is waiting for me. I'd rather be a failure with clean conscience than a successful cheater.

I conclude that in every success of a person is within you. You hold your own fate. If success is really for you be thankful of what kind of success you are receiving at that moment of your life. Be humble, keep your feet on the ground. I will end this by saying if you fail once, stand up twice.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
E23EF596D2B8,"I

think high school offer those programs to young students that wants to graduate in early age and other students take this programs, because they want to graduate to continue with college or work to help their families. In other cases students just took these courses because they don't likes school .

But however their are always students that decide to complete high school in four years to have full credits to go at the best colleges. These students that take high school in four years are more prepared to colleges and they have more probabilities to get a better job.

For me take school in three years is a bad choice, because you learn a few less.

Examples:If you take school in three years and if you don't have the result that you wanted than you are gonna think that was a bad choice in your life.

Conclusion: students would take the traditional four years of school and enjoy the young age at school. Than after the four regular years, It's time to think about what they want to do with life work or continue with college.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
B370B0D18727,"I think that working with a group is way better, because working with a group gives you a better understanding of what you are doing and helps you to be more focus. its can also be very important when you have your teamates around you that if there is any mistake you and your teamates can come together and try to solve that issue. and also working with a group can be very beneficial. because working with a group can also makes u feel confident and makes you good at social interactions. so that when u go out in the world you already know how to interact with your boss and fellow coworkers. and working with people can also make u grow not physical but to grow as a person and to make u more mature and to make u have a better understanding of life and of your responsibilities. so i feel that as a young adult comming up in this world. i would like to have my work experience with a group. that way i can be more aware,focus and to be more understanding of my environment that im working in and that i can learn not just from my self but learn from the people around me.

Working with a group can also be fun you can work with kids your age or you can work with people older than you. it can teach you self awareness,kindness towards others and its can influence you in so many ways because if you are working with people older than you are going to start acting more mature and want to live up to your teamates expectations. and also working with a group can improve on manners, behaviour,self esteem, self conduct and politeness. working in group is very important you can have experience and learn alot from other people it also teaches you what to expect and how to prepared for it in the future. it also teaches you how to act around others and teaches you the importance of life so i think that working with a group is better it teaches you better and you can learn better.                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
BDA166D1989A,"The famous artist Michelangelo once said, ""The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" His quote implies that completing a low goal is far worse that failure. In my opinion, I agree with Michelangelo's quote; when people aim too low, they are preventing themselves to have learning experiences. In order for growth and improvement, one must be required to step out off their comfort zone. Because aiming high comes with better resluts, it can serve as motivation to completing a goal. Although one may fail while aiming high, you will gain experience and knowledge from the situation.

To begin with, growth comes with attempting to accomplish new things out of your comfort zone. While always staying in your comfort zone, aiming low, you will be confining yourself, which prevents you from improvement. When you set your aim high, it assists with finding out what you are truly capable of. For instance, when working towards a goal, it comes with finding your true self. You can learn about your interests and hobbies, or even new ideas and thoughts that come to mind. When setting you aim high, it improves you as a person and helps with your own growth.

Not to mention, aiming high for a goal is possible when you have the right mentality.

When you aim high, the results are more motivating than when going for a goal set low. For instance, when achieving to graduate high school, one may aim to graduate as valedictorian. Being the valedictorian comes with great results such as getting into a better college or even just feeling better about yourself. If you put your mind to it, belive in yourself, and work hard towards it you will be able to accomplish any goal.

Furthermore, failing at achieving a goal provides experience. When you fail, you can use that situation to understand where you went wrong. In order to succeed the next time you attempt again, you can improve your mistakes. Failing is essential to the learning process as it gives you a chance to better yourself to prevent future mistakes. This knowledge you have accumulated from this certain situation, will be useful if applied to other life problems. On the other hand, when you aim for a low mark, there is no learning lesson you may gain.

However, some people believe nothing is wrong with setting your aim low. Instead, they believe that going for a goal set too high is worse as it means it will come with failure. These people view failing as a discouragement as others may consider them as a weak.

However, aiming high and failing gives you a life-longing experience by having the chance to improve your mistakes. When attempting again, you will have gained the knowledge to do so.

In conclusion, I believe that setting our aim too low and achieving it is far worse than aiming high and failing. For the fact that we need to grow as a person, we can not always stay in our comfort zone. By setting goals too low, we are preventing ourselves to grow and improve. By setting goals to a higher level, we can gain experience and knowledge that comes with the path to achievement. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
E21BAA47A9F4,"People almost always credit their success by having a good attitude because they treat people the way they want to get treated, it makes other people happy and it makes the them happier. Having a good attitude to another person makes that same person give you that same attitude back, and to other people. They spread good vibes, and it makes them feel happier. Giving a complement to someone every day can lead them to doing the same thing. Having a good attitude can lead to having good karma so next someone says ""nice shoes"" to a random person. That someone will get treated with good karma like passing their test the next day.

Having a good attitude to people at school can lead to having more friends, and getting treated better. By treating the teacher with respect, and kindness. It can make the teacher do you same thing back. Good attitude is the key to success, and every famous person you see on TV always has a good attitude. Maybe thats why there successesful and famous all that hard work they put into their job. When someone has a good attitude it's most likely thier happy, or everyone they talked with was happy.

But sometimes there's a sad person and to make thier day or cheer them up a complemant can help. By saying their outfit looks good, or their hair cut looks better than last time. It can cause them to feel better and do the same thing back to someone else that's having a bad day. There's also people that have good attitudes to make them selfs feel better It's like leaving chruch you fell happier. But coming to church it's just feels good.

Having a bad attitude can effect other peoples mood it can make them happy or sad. Having a good attitude makes more people happier and feel calm. Attitude effects almost all of the day and other peoples day including your family and pets. If your mad all day it's because someone was mad to you or just got effected by it from someone eles.

It's just better to have a good attitude all day than being mad all day and causing other people to be mad insted of being happy. Being happy in the worst times in your life is a good thing and can change your fellings somehow. I would rather have a good day in a bad day than have a bad day. If half of the world had a good attitude next thing you now the whole world has a good attitude. But people don't like doing that they rather be mean to other people and that's why the whole world is violent and wars start and people die Because people don't have good attitudes.

Good attitude effects a lot of people like in music and in movies sometimes it's good and sometimes it's bad. People that are famous and have bad attitudes are really common they get mad at their fans but the fans is the only reason why their famous and rich. Rich people are usually the sad ones and the poor are usually the happier ones because they have better attitudes.

Good attitudes effect a lot and so do bad ones that's why thiers all types of people in the world. Good ones and bad ones the ones with good attitude and the ones with bad attitude. Good attitudes effect friends and family and that's why people should always have good attitudes. One time I was testing and I had a good attitude but when I saw my score I had a bad attitude for the rest of the day. And the same things happens when my parents are mad at each other it gives me a bad attitude for the rest of the day in school and in soccer. But when someone is nice to me or gives me a complement I feel better about myself and it chages my attitude.

Sometimes having a good attitude in the worst times is bad like having a good attitude in a funaral or at a sad movie. But sometimes it's best to be happy and have a good attitude to spread good energy to other people and family. It's sometimes good to have a bad attitude so people can know your sad and be happier near you to cheer you up. Being nice and having a good attitudes can really change someones day so try it and complement people so they will do the same thing back.

I usually have a good attitude even when I have a really bad headache or am sick because having a bad attitude is not fun. and it makes other people have bad days or feel bad so that's why I always have a Good attitude. To other people and my family so they will all have a good attitude and that's why having a bad attitude is bad because it causes bad thing and we don't need that we need to be nice and help other people. Thats why people are so mean and don't care.

And that's why problems start and people get mad and that's why you should have a good attitude everyday to make other people happier.        ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
930CF711E6B6,"I agree with Mr Ralph waldo that To be Yourself in a world full of fake people is a great accomplish,No matter what you do for other people they will always treat you like a piece of garbage,So What's The point of Pretending to be someone that's not me.

I Prefer to be Myself and be happy Then, Pretend to be someone else just to make people like me,

people will like me for the way i am and not for who I'm Pretending to be so that I dont have to waste my time hanging out with fake friends.

I know people that are a shame of where they came from and they started forgetting their culture and start adopting a new one. every time someone ask them about their past they just look a way and try not to answer because they dont one the rest of the people to know how they use to live and now that they have everything they wanted they act like they were never there.

theres people that pretend to have lots of cars,money and houses just to look superior than others that just messed up i dont see the point of making others feel bad just to make you feel superior thats just stupid why do you pretend to be someone that you are not even close to?

thats messed up i seen this happen a lot of times in my life and it makes me feel sad.

That is all have to said i hope that one Day this society will change their point of view and accept all the mistakes they had done.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
76F0144EB703,"Why should people make their own decision? I think so people should make their own decision becuse all peolple have to make their own decisions or their own choose. It is really helpfull to make your own decision you will know better what to do. It is our own life than we should make our own decision. If we make our own decision I think so we have more freedom.

All people should make their own decision. They all need to make own decision becuse you will have more freedom,you will know butter what to do,and mabey if we make our own decision life will be easy for us. It is hard to understand other people own decision. We all need to make our own decision to choose what we want to do That why I think so our own decision is butter than other people own decision.

I think so people should make their own decision. To make our own decision It is like we have more freedom want we want to do. Freedom is like that what we choose and waht is our own decision to do everyday ot on future. Our own decision is butter than other people own decision. Own decision is like wath ever you is raght you will do it.

Our own decision is butter I think so. We will pick waht we like to do in our own life. If we make our own decision than our life will easyer. Mabey other people own decision is differnt from oue own decision or mabey we don't like their decision. Then we will have hard time with their own decision.

Mabey if we make our own decision life will be easy for us. They mabey want something differnts or we don't like each other owen decision that why I thank each porson should have their own decision. It is good to make oue own decision we will have allwes a gerat life. It is our own life that we should make our own decision or our own choose.

Our own choose or our own decision is butter than other people decision or choose.

I think so people should make their own decision becuse all peolple have to make their own decisions or their own choose. It is really helpfull to make your own decision you will know better what to do. It is our own life than we should make our own decision. Other people own decision hard for some people to understand them. if we both don't like each other own decision we will have hard time.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
4FD5B8B612C6,"Does going from failure to faliure consist of success.? It does , a lot of people in their life have failed to do something in life for example: failed a test ,failed to do a work assignment ,failed to show up to work once or twice, ect. You can fail a test , fail to show up to work but you get an opportunity to fix that mistake but some people just dont care about that opportunity.

Say you were to get a 75% on a math test but you wanted to get a better score you did study, but didn't show up to class , or stay after school to get extra help. So then you ask the teacher if you can re-take the test and the teacher say that you can but you have to show up to class ,and stay after if needed extra help ; because without studying, or showing up to class ,ect. How will you pass the math test or any test if you dont study . It's okay to fail and fail no one is perfect not everyone is going to get it right the first time unless you just have goodluck but still you have to study for a test no matter what.

Let's say you had a band concert tonight , you had a positive mind set because you have been practicing since February you were nervous not because you have a concert but also because you have a solo part but you know you got this because you've been practicing ,studying the notes and staying after with the band. It was time for the show; you guy's finished and did a wounderful job playing the music and did an amzaing job for you'r solo part. Not only did you practice and stay after you kept a positive mind set for yourself.

You just can't give up on yourself because you failed you have to push and push yourself even if you don't have enought positive in you if you want to become a nurse ,actor , jet flyer it doesn't matter what you want to be you have to push yourself and have a positive mind set.

Without a positive mind set your probably not going to end up were you wanted to be in the first place. So if you fail the first or second time just know not to give up just yet and to think positive.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
07D5647B11AE,"The first impression is always imposible to change; I agree with this statement because most of the time people judge on youas you look and it is always on the mind of the person for example:

the kind of clothes that you had been dreessed, the way that you speak and the face expression of that person.

As, peopple dreessed define their personality. If you have requiered to atttend to a meeting at work with the bosses of your boss, and dressed that is neccessity its not appropiated, they may judge on you and they could said that you are not a proffesional worker, or a formal person.

To get full attention people forgat a good value adecuated at the time of wave, meet, and speak with the other person. One reason is the major or important for people, and is the way the people communicated with others always matter because represent they selfs.

The expresssion with the face when someone meet others for the first time is never forget like when they heard your name, even the smile of the person most of the case represent the character of a person.

All of all, the way that you present with others at the first is how you are going to be remember, but are we good judgen people only for the first impression that we made about it?.                                                                                            ",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
257D0126F271,"First, I would like to visit the place Spain because I want to go and see a real Madrid. Real Madrid Is a team that it's really famous in soccer, and many people watch them play.

Also,I want to go with my friends to the beach and have some fun by eating a lot of food that we never try before and playing with the water in the beach with all my friends.

Third, my friends and I will like to go, and visit one of the famous soccer players in the history of soccer, and take a picture with them and there team. After, will want to take a soccer player to come and eat with us and have some fun whit the soccer player.

Finally, we would like to bring some family members to the trip, and come have fun with us play a lot and take them to a park that's great for family trip on Spain, and that we can all eat some ice cream at the same time and eat some great food and then go home.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F0116D8BA334,"Do I agree that my school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Some of this businesses have adopted a four-day work week, without thinking about the consequences. Each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resources which it would be difficult for them since they will be working ten hours per day during four days of week. Taking the model of the businesses expending school day to conserve energy and resources, with each day consisting of two hours will be a difficult choose to make. First of all the government need to be part of this decision, and need to be include to see which are the consequences going to be in taking this choose. personally i am fully disagreement with this model, but not only myself is in disagreement there is a lots of people that believe school should not follow this model to conserve energy and resources by expending the school day two hours. The government and society is the one who's need to be taking control of this decision, because they know what is good for the students and what is bad for them.

In a society it is unlike the average American work week, so it would be difficult for families to adopt to the changes. Having longer school days and shorter weeks does not align with the structure of a typical parent's work schedule. Most students being involved in extracurricular activities after school, and not being able to drive, the four day school week will create many conflicts. Parents will most likely struggle to get their children to those activities and anything involving life outside of school. Most parents would have to adjust their work schedules to accommodate for the new school hours. Also, an extra day off for students but not necessarily for parents and child care would be required for the younger students on the extra day off. Additional expenses such as that are not always easy for families to come up with. Lots of changes would be put into action. Some others believe that the positives of changing to a four-day work week outweigh the inconveniences brought on by extending the day.

Their main rational revolves around improving to transportation, building and it will be good for students to be able to have more down time.

Taking part of this i would argue that the benefits seen so shortage, like a lack in the amount needed. In real world application of this plan applied in a education settings does not posses the same bonuses. The advantage of having another day off most likely Friday, while promising, does not necessarily means a day without work to do. In fact, there is a lot of many ways that you can conserve energy and resources, some business adopt different ways to conserve energy and many resources. Although i do not like this plan that our school should fallow this model (their plan is so bad), if we start doing this plan we will be in a several problem. We usually go to school seven hours per day, and barely have time to do our homework after school. Students like me need to go work after school, since some of us are living already on our own and this plan will affect our jobs.

In conclusion the idea in adopt a four-day work week, is not the best plan to conserve energy and resources. This plan is not the best plan that this businesses company have came with. There is a lot of consequences that need to take care of, before get into the point that you can not have the right for a opinion of what to do and what not to do. In this plan i will rather say that the school should not follow any plan or anything that is not for the goods of our students. Speak with the society about it and then make a choose that it is going to effect for good or bad. Sometimes changes are goods, but not on this plan people said that there is some benefits and what i see is just disadvantages on this plan. Adopt a four-day work week, is not the only you have to save energy. There are so many ways to conserve energy and resources. Example: not use a lot of water or try no to use the electricity that much last, but very important think first and then do the use the plan or the choice that is best.                    ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
857B7FB712ED,"One topic "" success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". when the person want to progress with something the person maybe failure or maybe not, if you work hart and you focuss on your goals because everybody try to do some better on his life.

I'm agree with churchill' because the statement is important role not always your won when the people has a goals , each time when we try something new, we will able to success the first time but the problens is to how your work for you not failure on your life. when you start everything is enthusiasm only you know how work going for the future you cant not failure.

Second ereason, the british prime ministern say that because maybe he do something and he try to do with different ways. The

British look at for you wan to have something good or other thing is when you start but the first thing is when you failure because not always your won on your goals but if you want to mejories your own life, you need to focus on goals and them you will have your success on life. When you get a success, your was enthusiasm.

Last reason, I see if you want to be successful on your high school or in your job you only need is beleive in your self.

Because you was enfocus at 100% when you wannt or need something tat was be more easy for you beacuse you work really hart for take a success because when you have success you was a enthusiasm and them you try to work more and them in your future was more success.

conclusion. to the british say that is really important because not all of person want to work hart for won and them take success. On my case when i start study on Generic_School , I failure to many time on my class because on the time i dont like do nothing but when i failure the last time on my sol . I say and thing own my self , to i want success on my class . My goal and dreams is pass my sol and graduated from Generic_School.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
FC2D44D20533,"To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four- day work week, with each day coasting of ten hours. l feel is better conserve energy because help your resources and has a good businesses. But the same time is better because have more opportunity, with the money you help your family and others people with the person that no has money or houses.

Firstly. for the people is difficult working four day in the week because no accustomed a job strong. Sometime person he like a job strong and pay good, and to buy more money for that her children study and has better life and good future and can has a carrier. Some people do easy working everyday and working ten hours, Many people no has a good life but they struggle for that her sons has food , clothing and other things although even working large for give better, some parents no has energy for working more and the children have that has a job for helped.

Secondly. Some parents no has more energy for working. Some sons are bad with her parents because, when they are young abandoned and no help an her parents leave lonely. Many teenagers grind that parents no can give good things or no can buy clothing the mark or shoes Nike. They only want give one opportunity for that have a good future and a job better.

Thirdly. Some people working strong for give better an her children. But no all time is good pleasure an teenagers some young help an her parents but others, no and no are grateful that, How struggle parents for that they have better and can study, and one day to be better person and good son. We stay in the school and complaining because come to school, and own parents that working everyday though day that they no can more and no have energy but they so follow present in her work.

In conclusion. I believe that many parents want the better for her sons a lot time that people no appreciate her effort that do the parents many teenagers in day now lacking the respect. When they are old man they to be tired and is more difficult working and more so is job strong. Also they working for have a good business , and for they is more difficult that her bodies adopted an job that working every day and does ten hours all day. Considering a good son and help at your parents.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
66288718AF60,"When you need advice do you just talk to one person or more? Its way better telling people the things that happen so you can get there view because you might not see it the way they do. When you tell more people you get more advice and thats good. Let's say that you have some things going on in your life and you want some advice to try to make it a bit better so you ask a couple of your friends to help you and give you some advice. They give you advice and you take it and try it and it works so it made you feel it better but thats only one advice they gave from all your friends so there is still a bit more. So you day got better. An yes i understand sometimes you don't want to share your stuff with people so you just have one friend you tell everything to and they help with everything they listen,give back what they think. An yea you might have a different thought of if this like you might think just telling one perosn is better because you don't feel like sharing your stuff with people and i get that but when you need advice do you just want that person or alot of people giving you advice. It's your choice on what pick.

But i still asking people for some advice is better because like i said earlier they give more advice, They will give there option and tell if if your in the right or wrong. An they will always be there for you no matter what, thats why i say yes. because you never know what they will tell you or do about the things you tell them but if there real friends they'll stick by yotu side no matter what.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
437B5914340E,"Why positive attitude is important in our life? People should have a positive attitude on their life. Specially on the work place, school, and home. But some people think that positive attitude is not that much important. It's important because they can make positive decisions, they people around them on work place will be good with them, and student with positive attitude can be respect full with their teachers and other students.

First of all, people with a positive attitude can make a positive decisions on their life. Because, if a person have positive thought and attitude they can good think and they can decided to have convention with good people. And every parents wants to teach their child to have good attitude with everyone, and they wants to their child respect them. And everyone like mother, father, brother, sister, friends will proud on them.

no matter where you are going, which communication you life, just be a positive with people and with yourself it will success you.

Moreover, the people around them on the work place will be good with them. Because everyone likes to be with a person that has a good and positive attitude. And to being good with each others. A person can have a good attitude and respect with people whom work with them. And you can save you job by being good and positive. If you work some where and you have bed attitude no body will loves you and they will never want to conversion with you. Being positive on work place.

finally, students with their positive attitude can be respect full with their teachers and other students. And also teachers will help and support them a lot. And students also learn in school to have positive attitude and teacher always telling to students if they have a negatives attitude, whats doing to happen with and if they have positives attitude, whats going to happen whit them. student by having negative attitude, they will lose everything on their life. just try to be positive by doing positive thing you will feel good.

It's good to have a positive attitude. And being success on your life. The attitude not going to change anything on your life, but the positive attitude can change one thing on your life thats a success you on your life. In life one thing is more important is to keep people around you. And how you going to keep them? by having positive attitude you can keep them. In my conclusion by having a positive attitude and being nice make your life easier.                                                             ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
375ABFC3D6F5,"The school cafeteria plans to change to a new healthier school lunch menu. One reason that I think that is best to change the school lunch menu is that it could eliminate bad eating habits. Students can learn to eat without being tempted to eat junk food at school. Another reason on how you can switch the food is by substituting the schools junk food by exchanging it with something much more tasty and nutritious food that could lead into healthy eating routine to all the students.

Some students say that they disagree on changing the school lunch menu.

If were to eliminate students favorite school lunch meals; it could lead to them not to eat or buying junk food outside of school.

However school lunch teachers are preparing tasty, and nutritious lunch ideas to serve to their students. Eating a nutritional diet could increase focus in class, increase lifespan, and minimize harmful toxins and bacteria to the body. Changing the school cafeteria lunch for healthier menu.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
AA32237D75CE,"Many people think that older students can be helpful to the younger students on the other hand many people think that the older student can not be helpful to the younger students by the older students give a advise to the younger, to help them make more understandable on the subject, and to show the the younger how to do something.

The first reason is the older students give a advise to the younger students, the older student are helping with the younger students because when the older student are giving advise to the younger student make them intelligent for example when i was in elementary school in fifth grade my principle asked my teacher to give information or to give idea to the third grader on their project and my teacher sand us to the third grade classroom and my classmate was helping with the third graders.

The second reason is to help them make more understandable on their subject, the older students are trying to make the younger students more knowledgeable in their subject. for example when i was in sixth grade the my best friend was in seventh grade when i needed help with my homework or with same other classes homework and she was always helped me with my homework, testes, and quizzes and i was getting more understandable in my every subjects and she teached me how to solved problems.

Finally to shows the younger s how to do something, older student can be helpful when you need help they can help you. to ilistued. when i came to America i was in third grade i was new and i didn'et know what are the school rules and i didn'et know any thing about school and also i did'net know how to speak English. So there was students how was older then me and the help me where was my classroom because i was getting losed in school and every time when i was getting in to boy bathroom there were showed me where was girl bathroom and they were helped me how to speak English.

The older students are available to assist the younger students by the older students give a advise to the younger, to help them make more understandable on the subject, and to show the the younger how to do something. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
05CE0C0C5102,"Is it a good idea for student to finish high school in three years? Well I think that if student take three years to high school is that they know what they want to do in their life. Those student either want to go to college early, go the the work force, or start something from their passion. I am going to talk about three things of what I think about this prompt. Those things are students knowing they want to do in their lives, student not knowing what to do in their lives, or student just want to be done with school.

Student that take a three year high school plan, know what to do after those three years are up. They are determine to finish high school so they can finally start learning something that they have wanted to do. In those three years student are willing to finish any assignments on time and will at least get A's on their grades. They use their time wisely and always focus something to get it done. Once those are out of their way they are ready for the next step in their life.

Most students take a four year high school because they want to take time of what they want to do in their lives. The reason is, is that students just do not know what they want to do. Students just do not know what interest them so they have a hard time of their whole life. Some students just know what they want to do, but do not want to take a three year high school because it can be to stressful for them. most student will finish high school and can continue to college wandering what to do.

If a student ether take a three or a four year high school maybe just want to be done with school in general. those students may just think that college maybe just not worth the time, some just dont have the money to pursuing college. Those student may just know what to do and know that college is just not needed for that and is just a waste of time. They could have the resources already to pursuit the things that they want to do and so they are prepared for what is coming.

To put it all together, make sure choose what is best for you wither it is a three year high school plan, or a four year high school plan. In those years student have got to prepare for them selves if they are taking a three year there is going to be a lot of work being done so they can graduate early. For the students who are taking a four years for high school got to use their time wisely and think about what they want to do during those years. I feel like what is the best option is a four years of high school because i dont want to do a lot of work in three years. so that is what i think about this prompt, four years of high school is good enough for me.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
4B174612FD60,"Imagine oneself is a student in high school who is already stressed out by all of the homework and work that One must already finish during the day, but also all of the classwork that oneself did not get to finish during school. Students are already stressed out because of school work, letting a student use their phone as a learning tool would only benefit them in finishing their work on time. This is why teachers should let students utilize their phones as a learning tool and not be against the usage of it when doing school work.

Admittedly, students could get distracted with their phones and not get their work done in time. However, Teachers can specify that the use of phones is only for academic use only during classroom hours. That anybody who is not abiding by the rules will automatically get ISS. Therefore, students would understand that it is a serious matter and would not be playing around with their phones and getting distracted.

Furthermore, students would not have to wait on the schools slow internet and wifi to finish their classwork on time. Students phones work faster than most of the computers in school and they would be able to finish their work faster. For example at the beginning of the school year at SCHOOL_NAME the wifi and internet were down almost every day. Making everybody in the school that has online classes or just courses that require the use of the internet to be behind in all of their work. Also, schools computers are outdated and full of past information that makes the computers work at a much slower pace than a phone would. This is a contributing factor to students not being able to finish their work because the computers are outdated, it takes most of them at least twenty minutes to log in. Those are minutes lost that a student could have been using to have started their class work and possibly even finish it. Consequently, if phones were allowed to be used for class work then students would be able to finish their work on time and not have to worry is the wifi is working or if the computer is taking too long to log on.

In addition, students could take their work home if they are not done with it, and they would not have to worry about being behind on their class work. Students most of the time do not have enough time during class to finish all of their class work. Making their work pile up high and since the school does not let students take computers home they could not take their work home with them. If students have class work on a specific computer app like Microsoft word they would not be able to access it from a computer at their house because they do not have the same system we have in school. For example, one of the classes that I take is econ and personal finance and a lot, if not most of the class is online. If we have to do a vocabulary in Microsoft word

I have no way of accessing that document until the next day and by then we would have something completely different to do. Letting students use their phones to do work like in Microsoft word would mean that students could use their phones to type up their paper in Google classroom and send it in or leave it in the drop box in desire to learn. Hence, why letting students utilize their phones would be a great benefit to them.

In conclusion, letting students utilize their devices as a learning tool or experience would be easier on them. If students are permitted to utilize their phones in the class room then they would not have to worry about not finishing their work during class. This is why students should sign a petition and turn it in to the principal, so the use of cell phones during class work can be permitted and not be frowned upon.",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
F1329DA98283,"How much can we accomplish if we are always doing? Thomas Jefferson once wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I think he is right, if you think about it, the more you do, the more you will get and learn.

Over time, we've seen how many people had accomplish their dreams and goals, because they were always trying and working hard for what they wanted and what they needed. If we are always working hard, we can achieved what we want and even more, I think that's what Jefferson wanted to said with his words, the more you learn and do over your life, the more you will get, people will need you, and because they will need you, they would do whatever they can to get you.

Let me put you an example, think about your job, imagine you work in a restaurant, and you start as a cashier, and then you start to learn more, like you start to work in preparation, and then you put your hands in the kitchen, over time, you learn the system of the restaurant, how it work and everything; next thing you know you are the manager, but then you get tired and you quit your job, so then you can open your own place, and thanks to all you did in the restaurant now you have the experience to run your own place, and even better. Everything you get in your life will be thanks to all you try and learn, because even though sometimes things get difficult, it will always have a reward at the end.

This is like when we were kids, and our parents made us do things that we didn't like, for example, when I was a kid I hated to do my reading and writing homework, because I didn't know to do it, but now that I think about it, thanks to all the homework I did, now I know how to read and write in Spanish and English, because even though I didn't want to do my homework, my parents push me to do it, to learn and to be better every day. When I was a kid, my grandma always told me to said ""excuse me and thank you,"" at some point I did it because my grandma told me to do it, but now I see that my grandma though me something a lot of people forgot to do. Everything we learn make us better everyday.

Some people may believed inactivity is also something good; sometimes doing nothing, is doing more, and is okay to just stop everything and take a break once in a while, but just wait to see if things work by their own is not the best, if you want things to work in your life you have to work hard and never stop, because if you don't work for what you want nobody else will do it for you.

""It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing,"" Thomas Jefferson was right it is wonderful to see what we can do if we never stop. We are humans and we are smart, not perfect; we can do so much amazing things if we just try and work hard, all we have to do is don't give up.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
5FBDFD6DB173,"Yes because people can be a failure, but you can be a success person too. And people try their best to become a successful person and not being a failure person.

First you can be a failure person at math, but you are good at science that is relate to math, then you are good at math and science,

but people are good at something that is their strengths. people can be success in some parts but you also failure in someways that you are good at.

Secondly some people are failures ,but they have a strength to be a success in anything. Although people can be failure to failure all the times, yet people always tries there best on anything that is possible to be a successful person all day long in their life.

thirdly You could be a success person in English class but the other person is bad at English that person who is good at English can teach that person who is bad at English to be a failure to be a success person. you can be a success person turn to a failure person but you can turn back to a failure person to a success person again.

People can be a success consists failure to failure without of enthusiasm therefore people need to try their best on anything that is relate to any job or school.

people can be a failure but it will grow to a success in every day life. furthermore failures can be a success person. additionally people try hard to be a successful person but some people can be a failure person in anything.

some people are failures in Korean, or some people are good at french if they try hard in korean or french they will be a successful in speaking and writting in korean and french. addition to failures and successers if you work hard and try your best you will be a success person, but if you don't try your best you will be a failure.     ",3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0
0E22A47D358E,"I think we are accomplish more if we are always do in something,Because if you doing wat you have to be doing you going to get your stuff done. Because when you dont do wat you have to do you dont det nothing done,then you going to be worried because you dint get our work done.

my second reason is if you get your stuff done you can get a free time when you do all your work and it fells so good finishing all you work that you had. when you done you not going to be tired.                                                                ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
196EE083F6D0,"Should schools have a program that pairs older student withe younger students? Well I dont. Schools have rules that must be flowed and if they are not flows the students or teacher can have a big consoquins. I dont think that schools should have this programs beaus, The younger students atint to answer most of the questions. Also the younger students may get boiled by the older students. And most of the older students play around in class.

To begin withe do you think that school shooed have a program that pairs older students withe younger students? Well I dont beaus sum of the younger students answer more qushtons then the older students. For exampal they are more attentive in class,they mostly study to get good grads,the younger students now more of the qushtons then the older students.

Second this is way schools should not have this program beaus the older students play to much in class. for example they like to joke around to make the class lathe,They also like to be Laud most of the time,Also they call the other students names which is also bulging.

Thered the younger students may get build by the older students. The older students can pick on the younger students,Some times the older acts tougher to the younger students,Also the older students bully the younger ones in phicicall aperans, That also way school should not have this program.

Do you still think that schools should have this program? Well I still think no. Beaus younger students answer more quash tons,The older students talks to much during class,and the younger students may not now how to defined him self s if a older student is bulling him.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
4E59508F6D0B,"As our lives progress on technology keeps advancing further and further. Which leads to less person to person communication and our education is getting worse from over use of technology.

The more technology is invent the more person cummunication get worse becuase people are not going to wanna go shopping and do other in the real world all there going to do is oder stuff on online and what messes thing up is that not that much people are going to have job because most of the people are going to oder thing online instead of going out.

As the technology incresses student are not gonna pay adtion in school because of the technology most student have phone by the time they are in 6th grade. Mostly now days student like to order a lot of thing over the internet and mostly thing that u can buy over age. So technology is bascily taking over the world.

So as our lives progress on technology keeps advancing further and further. Which leads to less person to person communication and our education is getting worse from the over use of technology.",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,4.0
4DBC5B5272FF,"Generic_Name Key To An Excellent Success

With a positive attitude you'll get somewhere in life like Generic_Name who's always has this positive vibe with him, even when he works, goes to school or even when he's kinda had a rough day. He determines himself to be positive every single day. Generic_Name grandmother, tells him it's better when you're always positive everyday will show much he will grow. ""The more of a positive attitude the more you'll get in life"" she said.

His key to an excellent success is by working hard and having that positive mentality vibe. He never likes to see anyone or try getting himself to be negative. With his, mentality he'd achevied so, much in work and school. Generic_Name been getting so many scholarship's due to his work ethic. He's said before"" when you're negative you'll do nothing in life to be successful,all you'll do is hurt yourself and not be very successful cause of it."" Generic_Name just always has that positive mood. He's done everything to help people in need and also to get his career and life great. People will always look up for, his positively and working ethic.

How does he determine to keep that positive attitude for his success. He always, avoids himself getting in a negative vibe, by doing something that makes him feel great to take it away. Tries to make peoples days like buying them clothes and such. Spends sometime with the family, cause who doesn't feel better when they're with the family. He also, tends to keep his mentality very strong for himself. Asks for help from people when he feels so down. All he does is just to be positive. Even if something tries to make him go down. He always ties himself to be great and positive each time like how his grandmother told him.

He took the words from his grandma. She told him a story how she was always negative back then, in his age. In school they used to bully her she lost her mother at an early age at that time and on how long took her being successful in getting a house. Ever since, then Generic_Name took those words and always makes himself the positive guy. When he did he's done so much, in school and work. He's been offered to so many things in life. He's bought a home for his grandma, getting paid millions. The work and postiveity he took is rising his life to the top. Everything what he took from his wonderful grandma when he was young made him a great successful man.

Just like, how everyone says the best attitude of being positive brings success to life. His grandma's words with always be in his head. This is why a positive attitude in life will make you successful. In his words""a positive attitude,mind and mentality will make you and your life great.""",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
ECEE1FB05BDE,"Let's be honest if you're yourself and not faking who you are in this world you'll become a better person in this world. One thing you don't ever forget is to be honest,and to be real with yourself and everyone around you.

Girls,if you reading this please don't make the same mistakes that i did in my past be always honest with your partnership or whoever, because the consequences are not how you might think. When i was in 8th grade i met this person i was so in love with him,he add me on snapchat so that same day that he add me i post a pictures that i was in the field,35 minutes after he text me i was so happy,and nervous because i liked him so we start texting but we never talked in person,a week pass by and he start to being disrespectful with me,playing with my feelings i knew that we were just friends in those time. One day i told him that i want him to be honest with me,he always said that he was honest with me,2 week pass by he were keeping playing his little games and i did not say anything i just leave his message in delivered,1 years pass by he texted me saying that he felt so bad for everything he did to me in the past,i just told him everything that i felt for him in the past but he was not honest with me. Girls,let me tell you my big mistake that i did,we talk about 5 months as a friend after we talk for 5 months he make me his girlfriend,at the time i was still feeling butterfly for him that first years is was perfect like any relationship,those 12 months i was so happy,i always told him that he was ''the love of my life'' and i just say it for everything we went trough since middle school also,because he was my first boyfriend and my parents were fine that i was dating him because they though he was a good person.

Girls,find a guy who is real with you all the time they might be a lot of guys out there that can pretend that he is in love with you. Yes, they might be real and make you feel butterfly 5 months or 6,but things changes in this life person change not everything is always the same,anyways he started to lie to me when i knew that truth of that problems is when he start to hurt me all the time but when you love someone you let them hurt you,so i keep letting him hurt me,i started crying and to supplicated to stop hurting me he stop like any relationship we were okay for a week and then he started doing things that hurt,he started talking to girls,and cheated on me but us girls we so dumb that we keep them.2 Years after i was in depression i did not tell my parents they found out when they take me to the hospital because i passed out in my room crying, without eating for days i was in the hospital for a week after that i was able to go they take me to therapy. after 5 months of going to therapy,i was able to talk him to close a chapter because i learn to forgive but in my heart i felt hate for him what i told him was ""i love you but i love other person more than you and that person i'ts me"" yes, he cried but he did not deserved me .Finally i let toxic people leave my life,i'm not going to lie like i'm afraid to talk a guy again because i feel they will hurt me. i'm not thinking to go out with a guy because girls you have to love yourself to be able to love other person.

In conclusion,if you are honest with yourself your life will be okay without any problem.     ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
8C34447FF21C,"I have heard that many people gets bully by others people sometimes, and which is I don't understand, why this it happens probably for the color of you're skin and we all are the same just the color of the skin is different. Or can be other reason why they bully other people, which is people who gets bully they could kill themselves about getting bullied by other ones and thats a bad situation.

But those bad people they keep on bulling they don't stop until something happens and I ask my self why? this happens sometimes, probably its because we are different than they are or they feel more stronger than other ones or can be any other reason probably they are rich they have more money than other people, probably thats why bulling someone is not nice it could cause bad things to you.

And I understand that its hard for those people who are suffering about bulling, and its hard to support all that when you get bullied for someone, when you bullied i thin k is not for some reason and its horrible for those people who gets bullied by someone, I think thats something that those people who are bulling they should stop bulling those poor people.

What should we do about bulling collaborate to stop we should stop because, it can cause bad situation to those people who are bulling other they can go to jail for the reason they make fun of others, why they can go jail because those poor people who are getting bullied they could kill themselves and thats why they can go to jail its a bad thing thats what can happen to them if they don't stop bulling           ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
1BC40A063549,"I am agree with this prompt, i think that everyone have to believe in their self-reliance, Because we have to follow our own ideas to be a unique person and believe in our decision in the life.

the only way that you can be a successful on your job or on your life is believing in your own ideas and value your self-reliance, and never think that you cannot do nothing because you can.

the only thing that you have to do is believe in your own instincts and ideas and don't let other to tell you something different.

i will like to reckon in my self-reliance to be a better person in this world and don't depend of other person to get my dreams.

(people who believe and value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas).

1-the school is one good example for this is because the school give you exams and work for do on your own self,

- the school give you a lot of challenge one of them are the tests, for get good grates on those test you have to self-reliance to study and pass those test.

2-the work (jobs) is other best examples,they give you the opportunity to show them that you are a excellent employee and that you can create your own ideas.

-the work is other place to explain the self-reliance, your boss is asking you if you can do a work for him and that work is important for him because he ask to other workers but they copy the work from other company so he belief that you can do the things better that other and you have to self-reliance for that work and create your own ideas for it.

3- on my own life, the idea to choose what we have to do on the future is because our parent want that us get the best opportunities but sometimes we don't want to do the things that our parent tell us because we want to do the best thing for be the best but not like they want we want to do the thing on my own way.

conclusion i believe that, we always have to self reliance because, that help you doing things that you never imagine that you could do that, and never keep focus in just one thing, put your mind open for make better decisions and follow your instincts for do the best that you can,

my conclusion is that you always have to believe in your self-reliance and always follow your dreams for more hard that those things can be but that is the opportunity for your self-reliance and show that you can do the things that you want if you bring your ideas and follow your dreams.",3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
EEEF07B3D146,"Do you accomplish more when you always keep yourself busy? In this essay i will argue that keeping yourself busy serves a purpose. You get more things done, you will not be considered lazy and you get to learn new things.

When you are always doing something you get more things done and out of the way. You will not be behind on anything. This is a good habit to have because it can affect you in the long run. For example, when you get older and have to pay taxes or bills. You will be caught up and on time which is really good for your credit score.

You will not be considered lazy. Many people in your life will notice how you like to get things done. This habit will definitely get you a job. No employer is looking for someone lazy and does not like to do things. Keeping yourself busy can be therapeutic. Many people do this to relive stress or think about things instead of being useless.

You will learn new things. Take advantage of the things you do because it can lead you to new opportunities. You can experience different things which is phenomenal. It is always fun keeping yourself busy because you feel great after the things you have accomplished. The more things you learn the more things you can try to keep yourself busy.

Some people say inactivity serves a purpose, but they are wrong because when you are always doing something it keeps you motivated, experienced and makes a good habit to have. In the future I hope we have less useless people and more people who like to get things done.  ",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
C277BE295A41,"Being true to yourself in a world so cruel is the best to accomplishment. The most important lessons life can give is stand your ground, be more forward with certain individuals, cut what seems to be negative. Individuality can always be a good, sometimes you never need that helping hand because not everyone is helpful. Some try to be the bad person by stepping over you.

Most experiences, I myself have gone through were never the best. Everyone might seem like the good person, but we never know what is really behind them. First off, you should simply just stand your ground. Show them that not everything is meant to be worked within two people.

Another reason, achieving things on your own shows you a lot of things you never knew before. One of those might be you have made through school by yourself and got your diploma. Accomplishment comes with many struggles and steps. Not just anyone makes it through; some give up because maybe others told them that not everything is for them.

Lastly, cut out certain people that you know never got you anywhere. Everyday is a lesson if we recognize it or not. Some days are harder than others, but there is never a day you should give. Every job can be easy with a positive mindset.

In conclusion, my reasons to accomplishment to stand your ground, move forward, and to leave negativity behind can lead to bigger success and open opportunity.      ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5
2B6BA642E4F5,"Firstly, Adopting is good for teenagers and may help keep them out of trouble and even breaking the law and others things , adopting may help a lot to teenagers to have a home and education a life better and thats what they need is parent the they support them with everything the they could do for them to help, parents are the best thing the we have in our lives also, teenagers on the street think about why I could have a better life or home it and is so sad for them the they could it have for them seen other teenager having all the good things with their parents, kids on street dont realize the they can get on trouble because they didnt have any education even they dont think because of how they live on the street breaking the laws there are many reasons why teenagers take the thing as their life and at their young age didnt have have a education and never use all on their learning skills, curfew helps also to keep teenagers out of trouble and breaking the street policy, adopting street teenager will decrease the many cases cause because of their madness and thats what it keeps them in trouble and thats what a teenagers need support from somebody the is going to help, teenegers living on the street wont realize the the could do something to attent to school and look for help.

The street teenager the has been adopted will accomplish their dream and also sprees their thoughts when her starts living in his parent adoption. For example teenagers the has been adopted will study hard to see their self out the place the they never thought the they could accomplish and even do well in their cases.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
10DF0ACB336C,"There is one place I would like to visit is Generic_City because that is a beautiful country there is really great people. At night is really beautiful if you live in a apartment you can see how beautiful it is when i'm bigger i'm going to Generic_City with my girl because I love that country and it's a awesome country. The food there is really good and at night you can go in the water with someone it's really fun.

The boats are big and small you can ride them and you can relax. I don;t know how much you have to play to ride them all I know is that they are really nice to ride. And I want to go and get on the Eiffel it's really high up and you can see everything. At night the Eiffel it lights up and it;s really cool because you can see it from ever were because it's really high up.

Theres and elevator do that you can go really high in the Eiffel you my take some time because it's really high and there my be going a lot of people so you have to take an other ride. For me it's better to look at night because of the lights it's really cool. At day time it nice but it dose't have the lights so I like it when it's night time. But the thing I don't like about night time it's that you can go but in the elevator.

The food is really good they eat a lot of things they eat bread at any time of day. They have cafe's there are really good. But Paris is really different form a lot of country's. They have really good chafes that make really good food that you are going to love. They have awesome food.                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
4744A861D13F,"It has been said that first impression are impossible to change. Based on my experience, I totally disagree with this statement. Here is my reasons why I disagree first impression are impossible to change.

First, When you get to know a person, you always have a first impression on them. It could be negative or positive; however, it could change over time. For example, when I met my best friend for the first time, I had a bad impression on him. I thought he was serious and boring but it turns out he was actually fun to be around with and joyful.

Secondly, It's not the same knowing the person for the first time than knowing the person for a long period of time. For example, people don't have the confidence of showing their selves when they meet the person for the first time. Although they are cases that first impression stays the same; however, it could change depend on how the person treats them.

In conclusion, first impression could always change based on how you act. You need to get to know the person more to be able to change thier first impression. And here are my reason on why I disagree first impression are impossible to change.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
9C7E82646A0F,I remember when I was having a difficult time because of problems. I had a bad attitude but I counldn't have a bad attitude infront of my friends because they didn't fo anything for me to have a bad attitude with them. I had a good attitude with then at all time. People often credit their successes to having good attitudes. To have benefits of having a good attitude. Always smile infront of family and friends because you don't want them to think that something is wrong with you and ask you a lot of questions. Stay positive at all times because positivy can actually get you somewhere in life. Just act like nothing happened to you. Having successes even during a difficult time. Always try to make it through the day without thinking about it. Think about them good times even if it was with your friends or family. Go out and have fun and experience the world. Always believe in yourself and you will make it and be happy. Don't worry about nothing. Have a good attitude even if you are having a bad time in your life you will always get through it. Be true to yourself. Never be hurt have postive vibes.,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C454239AC43D,"I don't think our school needs to follow this model by extending school for an extra two hours. We need to be in school for seven days a week to learn and be productive in working on assignments, projects, tests or quizzes. We also be in school to be active in working and socializing with students and teachers. If we are in school for a seven day period, then students and teachers would involved in helping each other more and getting some work done that they were absent for or helping them work they have to turn in or they need help understanding the information they are given.

My first reason is that we should be in school for seven days instead of 4 days. If we are in school for seven days, then the students would be learning more about what certain topics the teacher is talking about. Another thing is that students can work hard on assignments that are due within two days or week. Also if they if are absent or just need help , then students can make up work by staying after school to catch on anything they have missed or just come in for extra help if they need it. One example would be if I were absent for like day or more, I could make up the the assignments that I missed by staying after school to make them up. Or having to just coming in to get extra help on assignments that I don't get or having trouble on.

My second reason would be that teachers will be there for seven days to help you with anything. If you don't get what assignment is asking or understand it, then a teacher can help you by reading it to you or explain it to you. Teachers will be there everyday to help you with anything that will help you succeed in their class. Also they will be there to help motivate you in getting good grades in any of your classes and passing them. My second example would be If I didn't understand the information or just give up on the assignment, a teacher would be by my side. they would motivate me to never give up and always try to do your very best on any assignment that was difficult for me.

My third reason would be students would be engaging with other classmates. Students and classmates don't have to only engaged in helping each other with assignments. During a seven day week, students can talk with their classmates or friends during lunch or if the teacher allows you to talk. Also your classmates or friends would love to ask you if want to participated in after school activities or clubs. My third example would be If my classmates or my friends ask if you want stay after, I would say yes. Then I would get involved with my with my classmates or friends and start talking with them.

Some people think that having a four day school week would be better for them. They think if they have school for four days only, they would have nothing worry about. Like for example, they wouldn't worry about much work needs to be done or how the work will affect how they are. Also what grade you will get on a assignment or when to turn in your assignments.

Some people think that having a four day school week for be bad for them. Students would be worrying about what they got on a assignment or test. Others would be panicking when to turn in assignments or when you can make up a test or quiz. Like for example, If students only had four school days to turn in assigments or make up a test or quiz, then it make the students feel bad for themselves or they can feel sad and sorry for themselves. Also they wouldn't know how they did on a assignment,test,quiz and what grade they got on it.

In conclusion, Students and teachers would much rather a seven day school week then a for four day school week. Then students can work hard on their work, while the teacher will be there to help with help or any questions that you have. Also if the students are having any trouble besides work, then the teacher will be by your side to help you or motivate you to make you feel proud of youself.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
D58980F5EC66,"I believe this would benefit students around the world, students would be able to attend classes from any school no matter where students live, this would help students who live far way from school and can't get a ride to school. Attending classes online from home would make it more comfortable for students.

Distance learning is good thing for students that want to study in school around the world or get the best education, students can be at home taking some classes that their country does not offer. Let's say a student lives in France and the student takes classes from United States, that's a good benefit, because you are learning education from another country in a different way that your country teaches you. This will be good for students who live in different country temporarily and are coming back to their countries.

The schools that offer distance learning are making life easier for some students who can't get education of they have to walk for hours to go to school. I remember watching a video about girl's life where she explains how far she has to walk though the mountains for 4 hours just to get to school. There are students who can't get education, because of the places they live, like places that are cold or far way from the city. This a good benefit in the United States since there's is a virus called corona virus in some states people are already effect with it, schools are closing cause of that students will be talking classes at home.

In school some students feel uncomfortable of working with their teachers or classmates, that makes students to stop working or lose interest on their work, but when they are home school students feel more comfortable, because they are at their house with their family, they feel more safe at their house and they can trust their family. In schools one of the main reasons why students feel uncomfortable of going to class is because some students get bully by their classmates, others get peer pressure to try to do things they don't like or be something they are not, making students not to be themselves. There was this famous video of a kid who was crying and told his mom that he wanted a knife to kill himself, he was just 7 years old, the reason why he wanted to kill himself is because many people at his school make fun him for being small, the students at his school were bullying him so much that he had to be home school and get therapist to help him get better and be comfortable.

At the end being able to attend classes at home depends if the students like it not everyone would think this is a good benefit for students others would think that is bad for students to take classes at home, because students will not get the chance to be social with other, this will make students not be able to work or talk with others outside in person, because they spent so much time at their houses taking classes by themselves. I have friend who used to be home school, now he goes to a high school and because he was home school, he doesn't talk that much in school, he doesn't have that many friends, it takes a while to get to know him. Taking classes from home is only good benefit if you want to take classes from another school, can't go to school because of where you live or it takes too long to walk to school, and if you don't feel comfortable in school, those are the main reasons students would taking classes from home. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
DB050381035B,"Some people may say that oppocite but to start with your aim low helps with the little mistakes that need to be fixed.

People should considere setting their aim low so that they can star by reviewing the stuff that needs to be fixed,those are going to the things that are going to make you stronger and capable to lots of stuff.

The people that start the lowest are the ones that overcome their dreams,the ones that are capable,the ones that set their aim's low and achieve a mark. People overcome themselfs because of the mistakes that some people make along the way are the ones that help by building their character and makes themslef in a way stronger and more capable of lots of more stuff out there.

Some people will star high thinking that by doing that they would be able to get on top of stuff and all problems that are along with that are somehow fix without putting any effort or even think about it for a second,people should star a bit lower than that because that way they can work built that character that can help with achieven their goal by just putting a bit of effort and try to not aim high and fall short. For example a person that saids thats going to do lots of things riskign everything he or she may have a by just taking a single step loses it bacause of not being able to a list think before doing anything,by starting low can help not putting things and not taking any risk,by taking stuff step by step and learning things along the path.

Setting the aims at a low risk help with not losing what it was to hard to get or to achieve,by understanding that thats what help getting far in life and not let anything fall short and just taking the time to think and overview that things that are still around and star making them better and just work on them step by step. As some may say that its good for people to chalenge themself once in a while but without risking whats around it because whats the point of being able to work so hard and by just one step that was taking without having a chance to think of what was happening and lose it all by not taking it step by step.

My oppinion is that people should considere think before doing anything because that what helps getting you on the top and not just let anything fall down in front of your face,by thinking that to risk thing and not having to even think about it for a second was going to get you to the top,and if your going to chalenge yourself make sure to think about it stuff before doing it.",3.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
C1CA798352BA,It can effect people in a good way by lighting up their day or just talking to people helps them. Doing small act of kindness can really help people by if they lost money and you found it and you gave it back that helps them or you clean their car for them that could mean a lot to the person. picking up trash can help the earth that why no matter how small act of kindness it is' it can still have a big impact on someone day. I think more people should start being kind to other. tell me this when someone is kind to you. you feel happy right knowing that someone cared to do that thing for you when your being kind to other they feel the same feeling as you do knowing that someone cares about you. and when people show kindness it usually comes back to them in any forms like a person give you a bag of chip because that person was feeling kind. that all my reason that people should that being kind to others. how kindness can help you is when your car turns off when your in the road people will come and try to help you that's kindness they were kind to come and help you. when your stuck on the homework you ask your friends for help there being kind enough to help you. volunteer help people if something happened to their homes volunteer help people for no pay they are being kind. this is all my reason kindness is never wasted and how it can come back to and how it effect people and how it helps them and why you should do it. I hop you liked it,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
DB0A595A4723,"Dear Principal,

I write this letter to you because children are not suppose to perform community service. so sometimes children have time to do community service, and some don't have time to do it. For me I rather kids not doing community service because maybe they have better thing's to do. first of all, that kids have to do homework and important projects. secondly, children have the choice to do community service. finally, children have to do chores at home or help mom do something important.

first of all, kids have to do homework and important projects and that's because they have final project for the quarter, but you have to do community service what do you rather do i rather do my project for the quarter. Also homework is a important thing in your school grade and you also have to another community service again, and it is important too and that's why children are not suppose to take community service it take away to much time from important things like family, class work, and projects.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
A88FB1D1C8BD,"According to Ralph Waldo Emerson, so I am here to support the motion which says....''

To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplish''

. Before going to the point,I will like to let you know the meaning of accomplish

.ACCOMPLISH IS WHAT YOU FULFILL,

leaving your real life in this world will surely makes you accomplish or fulfill what you want in this life. For instances; I have seen a girl leaving a fake life to accomplish what see want, but at the end of the day she was caught, their is a company who need someone who is rich and popular to be the director of the company and will be paid thousand of dollars every week. This lady try to live a fake life and decided to go for the post, when she got there every single person believes that she is rich and famous,and she has to compete with other lady who doesn't lives a fake life. she is so poor but have the work experience and was talented,after some days,weeks and month. It now the time to choose the leader,they both seat separately with their heart beating vastly,the lady living a fake life have the 100% assurance that she will wi the contest, here comes the judges to call our the winner,the speaker gives a speech about each of them. The speech goes as; After we have camp both ladies for some month will we sure;y choose the leaders but here with me some evidence about those ladies,their is girl among you two who lives a fake life to get what she want and there is another girl who didnt do that, this position is given to the girl who does not leave the fake live because if this position is given to you who live fake life you will surely ruin this company by embezzled and faking this company,the speaker says she borrowed almost $500,000 from banks,two house and 3 brand new cars to fake her life and at the end she did not accomplish what she want,likewise the other girl who be herself in this world and finally fulfill her dream and have greatest accomplishment.

With this little words of mine i will like to convinced not to confused you that living your real life in this live that is constantly trying to male you something else is the greatest accomplish but if you try and fake your life in this world you will never accomplish anything than public disgrace if you later got caught.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
153C3543E432,"People who value self-reliance defined as the need of each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas.

Should people make their own decisions about life important matters,or should they ask someone else for their opinion.

People should ask for guidance from experts about life important matters.

There are times when depression comes and stress appears because,of bad decisions made by one-self.

If people do not ask for experts guidance, there is a possibility that in the future the decision they have made, might affect them in the future and cause a fatality like, depression which can lead to deadly thoughts and mental problems like bipolarity.

Depression is one of the most know in all over the world which is caused by,bad decisions,over working by mental and physical jobs, family problems, and an unhealthy life style which all of this can lead to suicide thoughts.

For example, one of the most famous singers from United States Sia known for her most popular song ""chandelier"", she committed many bad decisions which had lead her to drug addiction.

Her fame was getting higher; and many contracts for more shows where she had it to attend to, were exploding her head which lead it to an over working stage.

She has an amazing soprano voice, with more than five different tones, and because of that, different music productions wanted to sign a contract with Sia, but she instead of taking a rest she decided to continue, knowing in which stage her body was passing through, she decided to take drugs to cover her stress but, instead of taking away her stress she became a drug addict which lead her to suicide, but thanks to the doctors she is alive; now she keeps being one of the most popular singers but, because of her pass, she covers her face with long hair bangs to the top of her upper lip; and no own has seen her face since that incident.

Also, bad decisions might lead to mental problems like bipolarity, and sadly most of the cases are seen in schools where parents and teachers do not notice until is late for that youth to recover, because of his or her bad decisions that this students had made.

For example, a student from a school in Virginia known for his great intellectual was passing through a rough time, he had to go to work every single day after school from Monday to Monday his hours to school were from 7:30 Am to 2:15 Pm, and his work hours were from 2:30 PM to 10:30 PM every single day.

He never gave up he always was the top student of his class, but there were times where his parents were putting more pressure, and Test were near to come and work was getting more and more exhausted until one day he exploded.

The day of hes graduation arrive and his most treasure sister wasn't able to accompany him because she was getting into the same stage that he already pass through.

After his graduation he wanted to have a life and do what he always wanted to do since he was a child which was being in the Marine, he was already in a bad state because of all the pressure he gent through but, he wanted to fallow his dream.

One Saturday in the morning he decided to apply for the Marine but, sadly he was not accepted because of his migratory circumstances and because of that, hes brain collapsed in a stage of dementia, but his mother instead of giving an affection, she got mad and told him ""Stop, you are a man already, act like one"", the only one who tried to calm him down was his little sister who did not know what to do but to say ""He needs some experts help, he needs to go to see a doctor in that way, we can make a good decision and know what to do"".

After all of this happened he went to a mental hospital where he was hospitalized for three long months and now he is living a life with medications from an expert who helped him to go through all of this where he was diagnosed with bipolarity.

In conclusion, if someone wants to make a decision which is about their life importance is better to ask an expert and prevent all this things to happen in that way there can be a reduction in mental problems and suicide attempts.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E0EBA1995BCB,"First impressions works as a normal form to react to a person, the impressions will depend how scary or funny it is, and how people feel in that moment. Impressions are almost impossible to change, they come instantly, people can not have control of it because first impressions come naturally from the human, the maind sends the first impressions when people are impressed, and people are not prepared to the first impressions. It is impossible to change.

First reason, impressions come naturally from people, they can not have control of it. For example, when people meet with other people, they automatically have impressions of the new people that they are meeting, do not matter what type of people they are, but the impressions naturally come. Second example, people usually move around the country to live or visit, every new place that they are arriving, the impressions come by itself. Third example, during the school year, the students are exploring more about the classes, they even have been not thinking about it, but they already have impressions what the classes talk about, and the students did not can change those first impressions about the classes.

Second reason, the maind has an important work on the first impressions, the mind sends the first impressions to you. For example, when people go to shopping to a marked, they are looking and comparing the prices from other marked. People are having impressions about the prices and their minds are working sending them impressions and also information from the other marked's prices. Second example, people who work on hospital, they are constantly seeing people with cancer, their minds are prepared to make impressions and send them without any difficulty. The type of impression depends how their minds are prepared to react on that situation. Third example, people who come to the U.S from other country normally they are having new impressions, their minds are having a big change. The mind is who make the biggest work to give the first impressions and adapt to the new type of live.

Third reason, people are not prepared to the first impressions that they have during they are discovering new things, it come by itself. For example, when people go to the cinema to see the new movie about the world, they do not have any idea about what is waiting for them, they just infer that the movie is about the world, but stating the movie they start to have impressions. the impressions come without notice them. Second example,when people got 18 years old, they are not prepared to do everything by himself, they start to have impressions on how hard if the life outside with more responsibilities and without their parents. Impressions always surprise people because they never prepare for it. Third example, people who are starting new job, they are learning how to do it. They are having impressions how the job is, they were not prepared for those impressions that they are having during they are learning the new job.

In conclusion, first impressions are almost impossible to change, because first impressions are naturally from the people, it come instantly as result of a new thing that people learn. And mind has an important work on the first impressions, the mind is who send the first impressions to the person. Also, people are not prepared to the first impressions, it come as a surprise. People just explore new things and impressions come as a result.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
F5CB9849B913,"To accomplish something there is always gonna be some inactivity once and a while. Well everyone has their own different type of way to accomplish something, but there is always some kind of inactivity at times; but not always. I think that we really do accomplish more when there is something else happening.

Everyone in this world is different compared to the next person. Everyone has their own unique style of completing an assignment. Some examples are Listening to music , working outside, working with someone else, and basically anywhere else. These small things can help somebody to Stay in task to complete something. Myself personally I love to be listening to music to get my assignments done. I am able to accomplish more than what I usually do. Before i never got my school work completed cause i was really bored of doing it, but when I first played music. I was flowing threw to get my work done.

Sometimes when trying to accomplish anything in life. Some people may experience some inactivity. Two things that happen the most to people are Zoning out or a phone notification. These two things are what happens to people the most, But they can always prevent it from happening. Me for myself i love using my phone. I never get bored of it. Sometimes while i'm working to get my assignments done and complete. There will always be a notification that will make my phone go ""Buzz buzz"" and then ill have the courage to see what it is. Now I have overcome that. What i do now is i put my phone on silent away from me while its connected to my Bluetooth speaker playing music. This always helps me from zoning out. Music playing in the background prevents me from zoning out.

some people can complete everything without a doubt, But not everyone could stay on task to complete something to accomplish it. We all had accomplish something in this world; but some people havent accomplish anything at all. Their minds are not set for reality I must say. Their minds are inactive and not set for anything. People can change. Anything can happen. Nothing in this world is really impossible, well if you set your mind to it. People dont believe in themselves to Accomplish anything. The inactivity that they got can change. Before i used to never get anything completed/Accomplish. I was thought I wasnt enough to do anything. I always made bad choices. My mind wasnt set for anything. I didnt care. I thought my life was a joke and soon it will be over as soon as I know it. School was hard. I didnt really get anything done. I was never the perfect student. My grades were bad. I had no faith in myself. I thought i could not do anything right. I never accomplished anything. The only thing I could accomplish is messing up everything. School, at home, In a public area, Anywhere.

I made bad choices back in my pass; But now its completed different. I have learn and seen everything that I did. My mind wasnt set on success only failure. Only I realized that I could change not just who i am but everything. If i set my mind into it. I started to accomplish assignments at school. I was doing very well then I thought i could do. I started to see a huge change in myself. It felt like i was a whole new person. I had accomplish to change my life. I saw the success. It wasnt hard. I just had to believe in myself to do it. If I could change then i know people in this world can change also.

Although accomplishing something no matter if its simple, Difficult, short, or long. Its still better off to accomplish it even tho there is always gonna be a little bit of inactivity, and its okay there are always a way to over come it. Everyone can always change. With the power of your mind and yourself you can always accomplish more if you are always doing something else with maybe a little of inactivity.",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
0BB9FAE6E27B,"Setting A Good Example

Have you thought of set an example for your own behavior?

Albert Schweitzer said ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people.

However; others believe that their are better ways to influence others because the person being influenced should set their own examples not everyone wants to follow someone examples.

Although not everyone thinks the same it's better to set an example by your own behavior to influence others. People get influenced by demonstrations, peoples mistakes and when visualizing things.

To influence someone you have to set an example for them to visualize what you are trying to influence them to do. Most people get influence when presented demonstrations through videos, presentations and pictures. My favorite youtubers influence me by spreading postivity through their videos and content. They help the homeless by providing them shelter; they make people's day by helping them with their needs. They influence me to want to help the homeless and other people. These youtubers Influence their subscribers to spread posivity throughout the world by the examples they set on their videos.

A lot of people learn from others mistakes; setting a good example from your own behavior will influence others not to do your mistake in your example because they will take it into concerdation. One of my friends told me their experience on missing their opportunity of taking a course required for graduation. She did not get to graduate on time she stayed one more year in high school to complete the course she missed. She regretted not taking the course her junior year to graduate on time. My friend influenced me to take the class my junior year and to learn from her mistakes. I didn't miss my opportunity I got to take the course and earned the credit for it. I learned from her example she influenced me by telling me to follow her example to accomplish it.

Most people don't believe things until they see an example of things. They're are people that need to visualize things to get influenced by them. It's confirmed that most influencers present things that you can visualize to influence people. I am a person that needs to see an example of something in order to believe it. When I am searching information I need to see if it is fiction or non fiction. Once I researched up the wrong information for a presentation the article didn't state a true event. I got a bad grade for the presentation as my consequence I had an F that quarter for not stating a true fact. Influencers set example's of their own behavior to influence you the right way.

Others believe that there are better ways to influence others by letting the person being influenced set their own example. The person being influenced can not set their own examples if they don't have experience. People need to follow someone example because they need to be influenced before they can influence others by setting their own examples. All influencers have been influenced by others examples they didn't set their own example.

Following an influencers example will help the person being influenced learn from their mistakes and improve from them to set better examples to others being influenced.

Albert schweitzer set his own examples from his own behavior to influence others. He was

Inspired by other influencers examples and that it was the only thing to help influence others.

He says that the best way to influence other people is to set a good example by your own behavior. You should follow someone examples by their own behavior to set a good example to influence others.                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
245B5CD11772,"I beleive that if somebody wants to have succes there will always be some failure. The most important thing is that the person dosent lose there confidence or entusiasm. Ive also been through that to where I want to succead at something that I want to achieve and theres failure down the road. Once I failed I told myself to be positve about it and not just give up or get stressed about it and know that I needed to work harder at it.

There are people who want to have succes but forget that its not that easy. People have to remember that it takes time and to have patience,and stay positive. Its not easy because that person has to work hard and show effort but even after showing and doing all those things there still can be failure. When somebody fails its better to think about what can be down next time and to try harder after the first try.

Anybody could lose confidence or the energy after they keep failing but he or she forgets to see what can be down better next time. After that to check what has gone wrong and not lose confidence because eveybody has the potential to do anythung. Failure will always be there but it plays an important role for that person to remember that nobodys perfect and that theres always mistakes. The important part is to keep trying and to fix that mistake and to keep that energy up and confidence that it can be done its mot impossible.

I've also been through this to where i have a big dream and i chase after it and I think its easy but then i realized it was starting to get harder. After i tried so hard to keep working and trying i lost confidence after i kept failing again,and again. Its better to stay positive because people might say that i cant do it or many things that can cause me to lose confidence. But i choose to stay posive because i realized nobody is perfect even artist,singers,and many other things that people wanted to be because they also had mistakes and had to try harder next time. I realized after failing there were improvements better then the last time i tried and it kept happining becuase i tried harder each time but eventually i got there. Its best to know that in order to have success theres failure but it has to movitate to try harder next time and then eventually when someone works hard enough they have success. ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5
5132328226C2,"Afterschool Homework Club

Most students do not enjoy doing their homework at home; for it can get quite frustrating. A lot of students favorite part of their school day is going home, but some other students favorite part of the day is their afterschool club. Now teachers and students are volunteering to meet with people who have difficulty in subjects or who want to finish their homework early,but afterschool. I think it is great that people are staying afterschool to help other people with school work and learning. It is a good to be a part of an afterschool homework club because it makes teachers do what they're best at, it helps students understand certain things better, and a club made for troubled kids makes other kids not afraid to ask for help when they don't understand something.

A teachers main job is to teach their students common knowledge that they will need when they become independent adults. Although the main job for teachers is teaching, they can, and should, also inspire their students. With this afterschool club students will be inspired to help others when they see their own teachers helping others to better understand something. Feeling believed in is an amazing feeling that students will feel in the club. The teachers who are helping the students aren't getting paid to be their, they are volunteering to help the students because they believe that the student can learn and understand something better, with their help. The people who volunteer to help their students would also be helping their community. The smarter that the teachers make their students the brighter the future we're headed towards. Not only can the afterschool homework club help teachers do their job, but it can also give students the extra help that they need to understand a subject.

Learning and understanding something new is something a lot of people struggle with. Some people struggle with learning something new because the class period that they learned it in was too short. A lot of times when learning something new it is important to have time to understand it, and one class period is not long enough. The club would give students extra time to understand the subject, and possibly do the homework that the subject required. Doing homework at home can be stressful at times. A lot of times a home is loud and distracting, but with a one-on-one class with a teacher it would be quite and not distracting. There are different ways that a person learns best. Some people are visual learners and some are verbal learners. Some students dont understand what they're being taught because of the way its being taught. A visual learner could be learning verbally, and it might just be very confusing because of it being taught verbally. The club would have teachers teaching in the students proffered way. Because of students getting extra help, more students are becoming unafraid to ask for help when they have trouble understanding something.

This club makes students know that they aren't the only ones that have trouble in school. A lot of people feel dumb because they cant do something properly or even understand it, but with the club they would see that they aren't the only ones struggling to understand the subject. If a person that you knew was getting help from a teacher afterschool and the next day they completely understood the subject, wouldnt you want to go be a part of the club too? Most people think of afterschool clubs as a fun and relaxing activity to calm down their mind from their stressful day at school. Afterschool activities are like school, but it's fun, and it is exciting. Learning can be made fun in afterschool clubs because they have students all sharing their struggles and getting help for them. The afterschool homework club would be a safe place for all the people who are afraid to ask for help, but arent afraid to be a part of a group. The club makes people feel welcome, not alone, and so much more.

The afterschool homework club benefits all the people in the community. It benefits the students by giving them the help they need to succeed. It benefits the teachers by giving them a chance to inspire others to help each other. The afterschool homework club benefits the students parents because it prevents the students from coming home to complain about their homework that they dont understand. The afterschool homework club is the best thing a school could do for their community.",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
A8DFA8766B31,"I think for my opinion students should and shouldn't use their phones at school. because the good thing about it is faster and its easier because students now days use their phones every day. The bad things about students using their phones in class its that it could be a distraction for them doing their work and many more things.

The bad things about students using their phones are that students wouldn't pay attention in class and would be lazy to do their work at school, thats why the schools have computers and a library's so we could look up information for their subjects. Its a distraction and wouldn't let them learn or do their work. cause now in these days all teenagers use their phone for everything. Lets say if the teacher let the students use their phone so they can look up information for their work. Im pretty sure mostly of the students would be doing something is like being on social media or texting their friends. Thats why school is a place to get your education by learning and paying attention.

Even students now this days they get mad if the teacher ask for their phone cause they use it allot in class. Students learn more faster by reading n doing their work and using their head. Cause if they use their phone they going to be looking up the answers. I think what should teachers do is that they should give their phone to the teacher once you get into class and once the class ends he should give it to you back. Another bad things about phones is that they use them on the test to look up the answers n dont try.

The good things about using your phones is that it easier to use then a computer and it so much faster. I think students should be allowed cause you could learn from their n look up information or things that you dont understand in class and you could find another way of learning and different ideas. The other good reason your better on typing on phone then using computer.

I think its a good and a bad idea cause with your phone its quicker to use then a computer but the bad thing about its a distraction to student. Cause they would putting more attention to their instead of the teacher. And student get distract with their phone cause they access to social media at the same time. And student would cheating on test cause they would be looking up the answers. Students now in this days have to use their phones less cause they use them every day n not their and thats the reason they dont learn.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
FB68439D9CBA,"Schools cafeteria should change to a healthier school lunch because students can have a healthy diet, have energy and a healthy body.

First, students can have a healthy diet.

For example, most of the students should stared eating healthy food, so it can produce less people to get sick from consuming animals meat. High schools' students can became a vegetarian. They should stared at a young age, so they can get used to it.

Some student sometimes dont like to eat regular cafeteria lunch because the food that they give is sometimes cold and have a wear taste.

Secondly, student can have a healthy body.

For example, people whom eat healthy can have a healthy life and being a strong person.

Most people that eat healthy can live much longer.

Students can have a healthier health.

Most of the teenager students will like to have a perfect body and by that they will choose not to consuming unhealthy food.

Third, students can have more energy.

For example, eating healthy food can produce people to have energy.

It can help student to have energy to go to school, and be able to finish the class works.

Help them learn more faster.

Sometimes it effect the ones that dont eat, or not having enough of sleep it may cause people to not have energy.

School should stare to give healthy breakfast.

Otherwise, Student will prefer to eat school lunch because, thats the way that the school stared to give since a student enters to school.

Students might change their diet depends on their living style.

Conclusion, schools that have access to give the students a healthy lunch and regular lunch are the the ones that give the students to choose their own type of food.

Students should always be healthy and to do that they need to eat healthy food.       ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
7CC4A8E1948E,"Winston Churchill is a good person everybody knows that, a person that give good idea or a person that bring idea to life . Thing he say they are true, they can open your mind, and make you think.

Yes : I agree with Winston Churchill. I know some people say that too, to be success at first; you going failure to failure, in once you try not to failure guest what, you fail again. This can be happen , but Winston was right , to success you can fail all the time. When somebody want to be success in he/she fail, that doesn't mean they cannot "" try"" again. But the thing is, they need to get up in keep trying on till then.

If success brought people failure to failure, then what would that be in life, when you fail on try to be success, it not a bad thing cause sometime in life either you: win or you loos, but at least you can try one more time. Failure might be discourages you, but you can Always keeping going to accomplish your gold, or maybe you might "" successful"" after all.

1)Success is a good thing for those who fail in fail in the results, they successful. Winston idea was right, so my position is that success consists of going from failure to failure without loosing enthusiasm are lesson you. With enthusiasm your success going greats and fast. Thats it true enthusiasm try to find your success can make a big differences. An in endurance can bring you to successful too, in time you'd need it.

2)If you pursuit or enthusiasm your can success anything that you thing that hard can be easier's for you, cause you put your ; Enthusiasm, and convicted your issue. Failure without trying "" does not"" gave nothing excepted discourage, in that will be stupid of you if you failure in you give up in the same time.

3) Failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm will give you something in return, in that is ""fact"" no dispute about it. Even those who loves you can make fun of you, it they sees you keeping failure; or stay away from you on till you ""win"" or find what you want's.

Anabel for you to be success you need enthusiasm, it gonna give courage, and not to focusing on you failure, then you'll never success or accomplish your gold. For example : Generic_Name his a psychology teacher in Generic_School,Generic_Name never thought he will be a teacher cause his gold was to teach psychology, unfortunately he cant past his test so that he can graduated, but he thought about it , he put all his enthusiasm on it Generic_Name past the test in now his a successful guy. There are tree reason that "" success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.

ONE, if you a failure in you didn't put your enthusiasm on you ""success"" you'll never be successful.

TWO, take example about people who never thought they will success, such ass Generic_Name, Generic_Name,and Generic_Name Generic_Name.

TREE, always get up when fail, always focuses on you success, and take that serious when you a failure. As a Mather of fact , look at all the Hollywood stars' , some of them didn't born with success some of them were poor, having no skills ,and some of them didn't have no education. They work hard in hard to be success cause that was their gold to be "" success"" in they accomplish it even if they fail sometime.

Winston Churchill was right about that, i'm 100% agree with his statement. If you a failure in then you loss your enthusiasm you will never be "" success"" . That's a true statement for success, in

I really Agree with Churchill's statement about the important role failure plays in the pursuit of success.

If you have a gold to be success in you though you a failure , don't like that why cause with : enthusiasm, and consists you can accomplish anything, even thing that you image you'll never accomplish or be success.    ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
EB8030177678,"As Thomas Jefferson said ""Determine never to be idle ... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I believe that Thomas Jefferson's quote is right because if people determine to never be idle, they can accomplish more than those who determine to be idle. Although some says that determine to be idle or inactivity also serve a purpose because they can accomplish something with the time or when people make a purpose to don't be idle, actually Determine never to be idle is much better because we accomplish more if we are doing something people can make proud their family and people may growth having a better future.

Although some says that determine to be idle or inactivity also serve a purpose in the way of one day they will accomplish something even though they are lazy, and people determine to not be idle when they want to accomplish something and when people decide to not being wasting their time without doing anything, inactivity doesn't serve a purpose in the life and in the way of accomplish something

Determine never to be idle is much better because we accomplish more, we make proud our family when we do something great to our life, I have done many things in school and accomplish many goals in my life so my parents always tell me that I make them feel proud of me for all that I have been done even though they said that it is not that easy but they know that I never determine to be idle and I always like to accomplish something in my life.

I always like to accomplish things like having a better grades in school and learn more each day even though some classes are harder than other once but I like to not be idle because if I determine to be idle I may just waste my time doing nothing.

Determine never to be idle is much better because people can growth having a better future in their life,

people can growth having a better job. For example, I want to growth by studying a career and have a better job in the future. Make more proud my family and myself I know it is hard, but all the effort that I put on it right now it will pay it back later, and I will so be thankful to myself to be a person who never determine to idle in life. And it is wonderful how much I had done I never going to regret about what I had been accomplished.

In conclusion, if people never do something in their life, they never will accomplish something that can be a benefit for their future or make their family proud. As Thomas Jefferson said if people determine never be idle they can accomplish and have done what they want to done in their life, and it is wonderful how much people may have done if they always been doing something and don't determine to be wasting their time. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
777CB894A285,"I believe on what Mr. Emerson said about being a master at something but not growing. In my experience In working In construction I learned how to measure wood, cut wood, and Install wood frames and all of that taught me how to be a more efficient person at my job. It also taught me how to use power tools and utilitys and for me I think it's better to know how to do different things like how to change the oil from your car or how to fix something that went wrong In your car like If something went wrong with your engine or If some hoses came loose. I believe If a person just want to know one thing and be great at It that's their right and that is acceptable, but they will be only focusing on one thing. But It's alright because not everyone would have the time or just would'nt want to do It. So I think it great If someone has already mastered something that they really like doing, but I believe it better to know many different things like construction or car mechanic or how to connect electricity wires because I truly believe that knowing many different things can give you more knowledge for the future.",2.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
5335796068E8,"Students should commit to a career in high school, because they would get a better understanding about the career they want to do by the they are out of high school.

Students would know what to do after high school. The student wouldn't worry about what job their going to get or what collage they want to go to. They would have everything figured out and it would put less stress on them. For example, If you already know what you want to do it would be easier to apply for collage and you could get a part time job in the career that you chose.

Students would know a lot about the career they want to do. In high school they could research things about their career like how much they pay,the conditions they work in, and if it takes a lot of work. They could also talk to people that are in that career and take academy classes. It would make it easier for the student because they would be well educated about the career. For example, when they apply for collage or a job they could say that they've been studying and have a better understanding of that specific career. It would give them a better chance in getting accepted or getting the job.

It would be easier for the student to get a job in the career. The student would have a better chance of getting a job in the career they want to do if they have been learning and taking classes in high school. They would be prepared and wouldn't be scared of not knowing what to do when they get the job. If the career they want to do requires them to go to collage it would be easy for them to pass the classes because they would know mostly everything. For example, when they apply for the job they could see that they finished collage which would give them a high chance of getting the job.

In conclusion Students should have a career in mind when they are in high school. It would make it easier for them and their future.      ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
B403A4E28BCE,"Why do we need to seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? Why can't we make our own decisions? It's because the adults knows what's best for their kids and they been through everything that we are experiencing right now as a teenagers. Or is it because they would like to keep us safe and make good life choices in the future? But, I think we should make our own decisions because we know what's best for us, we can learn from our mistake, and we want to be more independent.

First, when we do something bad and get in trouble for it, we know not to do it next time. For example, I had a friend and she decided to go to a party and I told her not to go because it's always a fight. Well she went and ended up getting hit in her face. I tried and warned her but she make her own decisions and I wanted her to make her own decisions so I let her go. Now she doesn't go to parties anymore.

Then, we know what's best for us. If we know something we're doing is wrong but everybody is doing it too, then we will do it just so they wouldn't make fun of us or we want to be ""cool"". But, I only do it one time, while other people keep on doing it. For example, when we choose the wrong groups of friends to hang out with. Knowing they are bad but sometimes they bring out the other side of you that nobody have seen or they get you in trouble just so you can fit into the group. Then you wonder why you even became friends with them in the first place.

Last, we don't listen our parents or any adults telling us what's right and what's wrong. we would want to figure things out by ourselves and be more independent.

We know when they telling us that we shouldn't do certain stuff because they did it before when they were younger. But we know what we're doing ( well at least some of us know). Sometime we don't tell our parents what's going on at school or on social media but somehow they find out whats going on with us. We sometimes try to hide the problem and solve it our selves but it doesn't go well.

In conclusion, teenagers today will want to do everything and not listening to the adults. When we get older and start to understand why we did all those crazy and nonsense stuff in high school or middle school, like fighting (knowing it's not going to solve the problem), making fun of other people (knowing that's not how we would like to be treated), and smoking (knowing it's bad for our lungs). We just wanted to be like everybody else"". But,

at the end of the day we learn from our mistake and become a better person in life. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
A9E9851F3E7E,"Some schools offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some parents think it is a good idea for students to stay at home for education. Students should not attend classes from home. Here are the three reasons why students should not attend classes from home.

The first reason is students are just wasting time at home doing work, but they are really just playing video games or watching T.V. Also Most of the students that are home schooled can easily get distracted from Cellular devices too. What if the students have siblings, they might not have the time to do there work on time. Students at home may not have any connection. So, students will not be able to do any homework.

The second reason is students can struggle with homework. Students can focus on doing there homework or class work. But what if students are blind and can not do any work at home. If a student is blind, parents would have to hire or contact someone to help that blind student at home for some help. A student from a different country may not speak English. That also can be a struggle for a parent or gaurdian because they might not be able to afford classes at home.

The third reason is wasting money on books or classes. Most states have classes for free books or classes, but some other states might not. Parents might have not have the money for the classes or for the books. But wasting money on classes or books is not a good idea. Parents have to pay bills but what if the student needs the money for the classes.

Some schools offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home or by video conferencing. Parents may think it is a good idea for students to stay home for education at home. Students should never attend distance learning for there education.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
973A3ADFAB72,"My grandmother always says ''If you want to accomplish your goals you have to try different ways to get in the top of your objective.'' Back in my country Bolivia the mayority of old people said that you have to be resourceful if you want to get what you want. I am agree with this statement. In my opinion, I believe that people have to try to make something else to accomplish their goals because people don't trust themself, people don't take second chance, doesn't matter the time.

To begin with, most of people do not trust themself. There are people that think that can not do it, but they are wrong because if you propose something to yourself you have to work on it, you have to be a positive person if you want to persevere. You most have to trust in yourself. For example, my older brother never trust in himself, he always says what about if I do this and it no gonna work, he was negative, he always had negative thoughts, he never tries make something else to get on top of his goals or what he wants. But one day my grandma talked to him. My grandma told him that he has to try even though things are hard, if he want to accomplish his goals he had to try to make something else to achieve his goals.

Secondly, there are people that don't take second chance to get on top of their goals. The 60% of people when they have something done, they don't like the result so they don't want to do it again because they did ones so they don't want to do it twice, they think that they gonna get the same result. For instance, in my situation, I used to ignore the secod chance because I thought that if I did one time and it wasn't that great so is gonna be the same the second time, but I was wrong. Hence, it wasn't like that,so what I trying to say is that is essential to try, try, and try, ''My mom always says don't be scared to do it, the thing that are worth it isn't eassy you have to try and give your best.''

In addition, many people said you must have to try something else it doesn't matter the time. There are people that does't care how many time they try something, to get in their goals. The just think that they want to accomplish their dreams. For example, my best friend Generic_Name always says don't worry about the time you have to get what you want, you have to accomplish the things that you porpuse yourself take the advantage of the time.

To sum up, as you can see if you want to accomplish your goals you have to try different things. Just try keep in youjr mind that the ones who work in what they want they to achieve. Manyh people may think why people should try twice, but that's not the point. The point is that you have to keep going and try your best to get your goals. I think people don't believe in themself, don't try twice, and people don't think about the time.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
4A8E42EE9569,"A diploma is a trophy we all want to have and be proud of, but unfortionally not all of us deserve it. We are graduating only once in our life, and to be able to graduate we must have an strong character that has confident, vision, and goals in life. The universe, destiny or even life won't share with us the opportunities that provides just for free, we have to move forward and challange our own person to dedicate every moment to taht goal we want to reach.

A graduation it's not a competition neither a race where only us will win because behind and in front of us there are million of other more people looking for what we are sacrifiying for. There are benefits that qualify to graduate before the traditional year and algo graduating at the right time. In three years you could acomplish what you wanted to do and go out and have more time to plan your life and what you want to do, however, completing the four years of high school will allow you to enjoy and experience more opportunities to do extra activities and spend that little time that you will never have. I agree in both options, I think we all choose the best for us, graduating before doesn't mean you are smarted neither that if you graduate in four years you are incapable.

in conclusion, we are not compiting we are reaching the goal we want to be proud of and deserve, we need self confident and to have an open mind to the reality we face day by day, we only have one opportunity in life, we decide how to spend it or how to waste it, we choose our who I really am and going to be, becasue all we do now it's what we are going to see in our future, if we don't prepare don't think your having a diploma to your position, but if you develop your plans and prepare the triumph will be mayor.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E51754AD1D38,"Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people.

People can see that you are being a good person and setting a good example.

They can see you are being good and that they will get influence by it and would want to be a better good person.

People that are not behaving good can see that you are being good and they would want to change to become a better person instead of setting a bad example.

I think people that set bad example's should change to become a better influencing person instead of showing a bad example there will be alot of good people in this world if everyone showed a good example so everyone can see that being a good person is better than being a bad person.

Like in school you can show that you are doing your homework getting good grade. s showing good example's to other's and they would want to be the same like you so they can do good in school just like you get good grades pass the grade and do homework to not fail.

Showing a good example to better to show it with the way you behave.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
FFA3D98123DC,"I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success because in life no matter what you do you need a positive attitude. for example when you go for a job interview you go into the place with a positive attitude of you wont get the job. its like getting a job you have to have a positive attitude when your working with your others or with customers. i think that in life everyone needs a positive attitude to accomplish there goals. I think that people that doesnt have a positive attitude wont get very far in life. because when i was in middle school i never had a positive attitude and i would get into a lot of trouble because of my attitude, and now that my attitude has changed im becoming successful in life. i think that in everything you do in life requires a positive attitude. you need a positive attitude when your talking to people. if you have a negative attitude people wouldnt want to be bothered by you because people dont like to be around people with a negative attitude. for example when you have a positive attitude people would like to be around you then to be around someone with a negative attitude.

being positive is the key to success because if your being negative your not going to be successful in life.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
AD9CEE5A6FFF,"I think it better to talk to more people than just one person, why becase different people have a different way of viewing a situation. People act differnet, one person might be angry and the other might be happy. Thats one of the reasons why i think its better to talk to more people than just one person.

You can see how different poeple think by just starting a conversation, different people might have better advice than others becase of the way they think or how they were taught to do things. Its also good to talk to the people that have been through your situation becase they have been through it and they can give you tips on how to be positive or how to be relaxed in that situition if it ever happens agian.

You can also talk to your familiy members becase they are are close people that you can always trust to help you like a project or just homework things like that so it doesent stress you out so much. Its good to know that someone will always be there to help you out. Thats way i think its better to talk do different people not just one person.

THE END

Senceirly; Generic_Name                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
3CDD56FF3477,"Today, at school, most people are required by teachers to work with a group in order to prepare them to work in society and be able to communicate with their future colleague. I believe that there is more benefits for students to work with others rather than working by their own because they can share their ideas together and don't work alone allow them to be faster.

First, by working with a group students can share their ideas and discuss on the work they have to do. By sharing their ideas, their work will be stronger and longer because every person of the group bring his own point of view, his own examples or experiences and their own way to work, to proceed. While working alone can be difficult when the student have no ideas or is lost and don't know how to do his work, so in a group they can help each others to understand and push them to work For example, if in a group a person have more facilities on the topic than others, she can help others who have more difficulties to work. Working by groups allow students to grow and enrich their skills to be better because they learn from each others. Working with a group help them to be prepared for working by their own.

Secondly, working with other students can be more efficient. Students, by sharing ideas, are working faster because they don't have to find all by them self and do all the work. They can share tasks so one person have one job rather than do everything alone so it's more efficient and beneficent for all the group but also for the teacher because the work will be done faster, so the class can move on and do more things during the year and if they help each other they probably don't need help from teachers, so teachers can be focus on students with real difficulties. Working with a group can prepare them for their future jobs so they can be able to communicate to other people and learn how to work not only for them self but also for everyone and they learn to help each other so they will be more productive in the future. For example, if in the future, they will work in a society where they need to work together on a project with many people and their boss don't want them to work by their own, they already learn how to be efficient in a community so it won't be a problem for them. They will be already used to work with a group and they will know how to proceed.

Some people can think that working by groups can do the opposite and prevent students to work by talking, laughing, having fun with their friends, which can be distracting them or if a person in the group don't want to work it can impact other's work so it's unfair for people who really want to work and are motivated to have a good grades. However, students can keep working at home if they are late on their work, they can communicate by phone or they can meet during the weekend or after school so the work can be done in time or teachers can make the groups in order to prevent distractions. Also, if a person don't want to work and impact other's work, the person will be graded lower which can motive her to work or if it's not the case, students from the group can help her and to be motivated and push her to work by giving her little tasks to do or easy tasks.

In conclusion, I think that working with a group bring more benefits for students rather than working alone because they can share their ideas, their way to proceed and work faster by helping each others. If teachers want their students to be more efficient and enrich them self for their future, it's important that they do more activities and work in groups. ",5.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
CEFDC545C24F,"Should high schools extend the school day two hours. This is important because students need time to learn the maternal. I think students will get a better benefit from two hours more. My first reason is students will have a better education learning. My second reason is students wouldn't have to stay after school hours to get get help, while they have extra time in class to ask any questions.

Students will have a much better understanding on the subject. The high schooners would get to learn the maternal more, spend more time on the subject. They would ask more questions on the topic. Students wouldnt fail if they spent more time to learn it. They would have more practice and more additives to do in class. Because some teacher teach it way to fast because of the sols they have to finish all of the units before sols. We have to be prepared for the sols but we have to take time on it learn it.

Students will have time to learn everything, therefor they wouldnt have to stay after school.

Students wouldnt have to waste teachers time after school to caught up what they messed from class. Teachers have to come home to there families too. Most teenagers have jobs so some of them cant stay after school. Some students dont have rides after school. They would have a three day weekend. Only go to school four days of the week. Have time to study on the weekends.

This is why high school should extend two hours more of school. They will have a better understanding. They need time to learn the maternal in time for the sols. The highers schools will have a better knowledge. They would know the maternal on time for the sol comes, more will pass it if they understand it more.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
4CB5C9A9AD5A,"I am not agree with this, because the school hours star at 7 am and end to 2:10 pm, in that time we can work after school, and do other important things that we have in the day, but if the school adopted this rule, the days for the students are gone ,because if the school take that rule , the students are going home from the school at 4 pm, and they are arrive home at 5 pm ,so they don't going to have time for do others things, like work or do the homework ,because they just go home to sleep and do some things that the students have to do in home for help in the house.

But for the work weeks are better because they are going to have more time or one more day for have fun with their family and they don't have any problems because they just have to stay two more hour and they going to have one more day off and that is better for they, because is like that they are working that day ,and they get the same pay and the workers just go to work and then go home.

Except for some students are different because they have to go to the school and they have to get up early ,and after school they have to go at work, that is difficult for some students, because they go in to the work after school like at 2:30 , and go out like at 12:00 am, and they don't sleep nothing the rest of the night, and they come tired to the school but they still come to the school, and they do the work that they have to do in the school, and the home too, so that is why that going to affect the students.

I don't think that this new rule going to benefit the students, that rule just benefit the workers, because they going to have one more day left, and to more hours of work in the day, but for the students they get up early and go out of the school late ,and that is bad because, we don't going to have more time for work, just for study and do home work and sleep, that is all the things that we going to do, if the school adopted that rule the day for students are going to be gone for them.

That is what i think about that prompt.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
E5F1CCC31762,"Positive attitude is the key to success in life.

Although have not Positive attitude the key to become success. neverthiess I am agree to everyone have a positive attitude,because positive attitude indicator of curage,honor,and personality of a person. so everyone mast have a Positive attitude in their life to become success. Having a Positive attitude is cause and effective on people's life,that they can attian and progress in their life.

Person who have a positive attitude he/she is Curage,and they can do their work with out needs of anyone. for example Generic_Name,at first he dosen't have anything after he pass through the hard life,he tryed alot with his positive attitude and now he originate all his success in life. now a days he become a Curage man in the world. he make a lot of good facilitation in his life and on people life that he support them. and he is the best political man and his life is like Royal. so he is very success in life with his positive attitude.

So when a person is Honor. than everybody like that person,because of their positive attitude. for example if a person always in life have a good opinion or speculation,they can recived thier biggest achivment in life. also they can make their own bussines or they can work in a place that they like it. e. g Teachers they are trying for their success and high progress in their life. and they use alot of positive attitude in daily day to understanding the student how to became success in life. than they try alot to make the best new genration with a positive attitude,that they helpful for country and for their futuer life.

People that they have a good personality,they make their personaltiy by a good attitude and they are lovely person in socity. for example in school one of the student have a good personality,and he or she is very suitable or talented in every subject. and they use their best positive attitude in front of everyone. and they look a good persom on Principal,Teachers,Friends,and her or his Families. so by having a positive attitudet they become a successful person in their life. than he or she recived alot of achevment by hard working.

As a result that I get in my life is,the best way to become success and become the best person in life,is having a positive attitude in everywhere,like Home,Job,School and etc...and the positive attitude shows the personality and the civility or politeness of people. and having a positive attitude in effectfull on everybody's life. and by having a positive attitude and hard working we can get our wishes to come ture and we are also become a successful person in every step of our life.     ",3.5,2.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
F886A2B6F351,"It's a good idea to have homework club at your school. Every school should have homework club at least three times a week. Homework club is a club where teachers help you with your homework or if you need help understanding a subject. Homework club helps students get to learn a little bit more about that subject, be more active with theirs friends, and it makes them have more confidence about their work. Homework club is a big help for students. There's so many stuff you can do at homework club and that is finishing a project with a friend, studying for a test/quiz, or even finishing your homework early.

At homework club you get so much help from the teachers. You can finish a project with a friend and when you do that it helps you be more active with that person. If a student ever has a doubt with a question about their project, then they can go to homework club and get some help with their project. The best part about homework club is that when more students come, we get to help each other with our projects. It's like a community were we help each other with any questions we have. Projects are really hard when you do it by yourself, but if you go to homework at your school then you will get all the help you need. If your having trouble then the best place to go is homework, so you can get some help.

Another thing you can get do at homework club is study for a test/quiz. The teachers will help you make flashcards, help you over the study guide, or even play a game of kahoot. If you didn't know what kahoot is, kahoot is a game where it helps you a lot before a test/quiz. I can say that kahoot is like a study guide but form into a game. Many students can't really study for a test/quiz when they are at home, because they can't concentrate studying when they are alone. So if you go to homework club they will help you study for your test/quiz and you will for sure not get distracted. I recommend everyone to come to homework club at least three times a week so you can get help studying for a test/quiz or if you need help with something else. If you go to homework club then you will pass your test/quiz, cause homework clubs will help you prepare yourself for your test/quiz

The last thing that homework clubs helps you is get your homework done early. the teachers will explain everything perfectly and I guarantee you will learn even more then what you learn in class. Math teachers, Science teachers, History teachers, and English teachers are going to teach students so much more. You can go to homework club and do your homework early so you don't have to worry about doing it at home. In homework club teachers explain the homework to the students but with more details. What I mean is that the teachers will teach you more about that subject.

Homework club is one of the best club their is. It helps students learn more about the subject, it also makes them have more confidence, and it makes them be more active with your classmate at homework club. Homework club is a community full of amazing students and teachers. There's so many things teachers at homework club help you with and that is Helping you get your projects done in time, helping you study for a test/quiz, and helping you finish your homework early. We can achieve this goal of establishing homework clubs in schools, but we need help from student to make this goal happen. Homework club would be boring and not helpful if we didn't have some amazing teachers at school volunteering for homework club. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
67D58F9FA53C,"I agree with the principal because that what he said said all students hood at lest participate on a sport,club,or after school activitis. The principal wants students tp join sports maybe because he want some students to get on shape or to atend some after school activitis for example like a dance club to see how students do and art club to see how students draw and students council. The yearbook like take pictures of all the teams,clubs,or groups the school has. or take photographs of all the teachers of the school like put what they do or what they teach students. School coincuals like take a photographs of them and write on the top what they do there names favoryte thing and others. And sports i do agree with the principal is for students can learn to do team work conumect with others and trying there best to win or at list not loss the game that's how they can learn and it shows the teacher how good there in one thing then the other

.And students council i don't now what that is or what it means but i think if like to help keep the school or help janutors, teachers,or the principal with something. And i agree again becaude people or example students need to get on shape learn how working out feels like and then when they grow older they would be like ""wow"" because school is not just learning math sciences sociol studes and laugen arts no,school is a aportuniti to now how life is and how it is ti work hard and trying our best to do or conplet something on life. Okay this off the topic that we are talking about okay, all most every billoner drop of of school and collage to start what they wanted to do and what there dream was the did not stop it they all went for it

Okay now this is back on the topic. I also disagree because some students need to do some at home like help there father or a family member o something of life or have to work in a reasterunt to help there family with bills or other thing like that is why some don't have the time to do any of dos after school activitis and others,or have to take care of a sibiling or a family member and don't have the time to stat for after school activitis for the cause of dos thing that I just said. And i disagree inone thing again some students just stay after school to finish a test,work,progetor a asy for the teacher or just stay to learn more about what there wanna do of the work or esy is wanna be about. But in one thing some not all students some hood really stay after like the ones that can't speak english, or the ones who need help on writing on english,or the ones who really need help to read on english .

Or the ones that want to learn more about a other laenguech they can just stay in the same class that they have the leangucj they want to learn about and just tell the teacher if they can stay after or not no if the teacher is gonna stay after for then they can stay after and learn more of the leanguch they are learning about. The students that are in sports they can just stay after pratising with other students on the soccer filled. And for the student council students can just do what the student council dos because i have no idia what is or what it means .

So what I am trying to say is that yes some students hood stay after school to participate on one of this activitys the principal has probited for them i can help them on soemthing not like help them alot but just a little for the students know how it is to do something.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
BB7BD362A162,"Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week day to be able to save energy and resources with the ten hours each day. My school is also considering to adoted this model. There are benefits and disadvanges that school shall consider. Students, parents, teachers and other workwers members should also give their opinion abouth this new model. Their opion is very important because they will be working for an extra two hours each day but they will also have one more week day free. After school hear their opinion then school should make the decision about adopted a four-day work week.

In my opinion as student I could said that this is not a good idea, because we will have to stay for an extrea two hours in the same place which would not be good for students, be at school for 8 hours is hard for us and I could not imagine be there for a longer time. Although we will have an extra day for be with our family and do homework or any other assignment but whatever we still do all those things with the two day we have now. Shool should also consider that some teachers and worker members have their kids and they cannot be with their babysitter for a ten hours. They need to be with they family after school and do others things. Stay for two more hours will be very stressful for everyone.

School will use the same amount of energy, because they will be using a energy for two more hours each day which is equivalent if they reduced the five-week day to four-week day. The same amount of energy will be used in both ways. Make a new change will afect not only at school it will also afect society. Everyone is adapted to the sistem as it is now if thre is any change there will be needed new rules for example what students will be doing two more hours in school or what we are suppose to do with an extra free day during the week. If students have an extra day doring the week will not be beneficiary, because they can use these time to play video games or spend their time doing things that are not good for them.

If school approved the new model they will need to raise the work's wages for the two more hours of work in each day which will count as over time, because the legal hours per day for a person should work is just eight hours. In fact they will be paying more money compare to the money they are paying now. Now they are just are not paying over time. The eschool should not be adopted this new model, because they will be using more resources.

In my opinion school definite should not adopted the new model, because there are more disadvatanges than benefits. If any other school have not done before is because it is not good for students. The new chage is not neceessity for our school. The same energy will be used and there will be more resources used. For some businesses might work but it wil not work for our school. I hope my school do not decided to make this new change.                                       ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
7CAFF57E1775,"Dear principal,

I have heard of the school cafeteria's plan to change to a new healthier school lunch. And as a junior in this school,I take the position that this new dynamic idea to change the school's lunch menu is a bad idea. So I have decided to share my thoughts for the development of this school and with our health. I believe that keeping our school's lunch menu is a good idea. I know that my opponents would argue with me regardlessly,because they would probably assume that our students have been eating the same food for too long and would definetely want to have a different versions of food,and get to explore their school lunch like other schools usually do. But when they detect my reasons,they would know for sure that the school's lunch is way better than they think it is.

My initial reason for not agreeing to this change is that it would eradicate some student's favorite cafeteria foods, especially me,There are a lots of food currently in the cafeteria that are so good, clean and healthy.

they are also enough food for everyone to eat, so changing the menu wouldn't be necessary, it would be a waste of time and money. the school has got a bunch of stuff to focuse on. American's have this quote that "" if you have lemons make lemonades"" meaning we should make the best out of what we have by embracing it not changing it.

In additon, the current school's lunch menu is technically healthy, I have this extraordinary thoughts in my mind because I haven't seen any student that has protested against the school's lunch, this means that the current school lunch is unique on it's own way. Also the school lunch is potentially some of the amazing healthy American foods.

Again,Most American foods are junky and cause students to gain weight chronically and gradually. But our current food consists of fruits,vegetables and also green salad which prevents the body from gaining too much weight and sustain the normal body weight. I have been eating our school's green salad for a while and l have seen some fantastic changes in my body and it is very impressive. So principal, dont you think that changing our school's cafeteria's lunch menu is a bad idea?

For instance, our school cafeteria's lunch has got protein,Vitamin D and my weight is intact, as far as our health is concerned, so take all of these reasons into consideration and figure out your final answer,I hope that you make the right choice for the school and l know that the school's improvement is your priority.

Thank you respectively,

Generic_Name 11th grade( junior)                                                                                                                   ",4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,5.0,4.0
A403FC7A8542,"In the world , nobody is more than another , human is equality , you will never grow if you do one thing many time and that make you just stand in one place , you will grow if you try something more heighten than what you already know and you will successful in your life . Like math , if you have a trouble you can find a teacher or somebody know ask for help and then you can try it again if you want for sure you can do it , then you find a new question more harder to do to improve yourself .

The prompt asking me do i agree or disagree try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow .

Agree : you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered .

Disagree : you don't do nothing beyond what you have already mastered .

Conclusion : I agree with the statement . You try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will grow . However , if you don't do nothing beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow .

Nothing is impossible , you need to trust yourself and do something more than you know , you can do it with someone else , you can grow more and more . The way of success will come to you .                                                                                    ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
65B1F548E8BE,"As teen mature, they make opinions about issues that can affect them. Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think students should not be benefit to attent classes from home.

Students would not be able to socialize with other students. For example, staying home every single day and not going out can lead you to depression. I personnel can't stay home all day and only focus on school. Also, teenagers need to interact with people more often and not be home all day. In conclusion, students need to get out of their home to clear their mind about all the work the school gives them.

Students would not be responsible in the future. For example, when they grow up they will not have the knowledge and the resposability it take to get a job out side of home. Students would not know all the resposabilities it takes to wake up every single day in the morning to go to school and do all the work that is required to do to be able to graduate. In other word, it will affect them not knowing how hard it's to work hard for something they never force them self to do. In conclusion, teenagers should get the experience and the hard work it take to be successful in life at a young age.

While some people believe that students should not be benefit to attend classes from home, others argue that students should be benefit to attend classes from home because they can do their work on their own pace. Althought this might be valid,There is several ideas to considered such as, Students would not be able to experience of being part of a club or sport in school. For example, Schools have many activies that can be helpful for students futher in life. Students will not know how it feel to be part of a team or how to work as a team. Also, In the furure sometimes they will be required to work with a group of people but they will not be comfortable because they never had that experience. In conclusion, Students wouldn't be able to do any activies in school.

Students shouldn't be allow to take classes at home while other student's go to school. First, Students will be isolated in their home all the time. Secondly, They will not know the hard work they need to put in to achieve something. Finally, Students wouldn't be able to enjoy the life of a teenager. As a result, Do you think it will help student's in the future?",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
63314DE11287,"The main piece to improve your skills is during the process of keep learning. Most of the people got to the point where they become successful, thinking that they have the sufficient knowledge to stay where they are and not move forward. The most common mistake that someone can make is believe that they have learn enough to the point where is nothing else to learn. I strongly agree with the words that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, people that have got the title of professional and keep being successful in their daily are the ones that are still adding productive information to their life and career. The actual key that makes people become professionals everyday and give them the recognition of master is through the process of keep learning new things.

Convince yourself that yo are not good enough ""Yet"" this to motivate you to believe that you need to learn more. Examples that we can see everyday, teen mothers when a young girl or even in some cases girls that are still considering a kid have to been each to be a mother. Teen mothers learn through the pregnancy to; take care of the baby, change diapers, give appropriate food and how give them bath. The process of being a mother for the first time, does not end when you give birth to the baby. There is not a book where it details you how to take care of your child, even if there is one it would probably not be as helpful as you learning each day.

If there were a class of ""How to be a mother for the first time if you are a teen"" it would not cover all the expectations that you baby requires because you will be the only one that knows your baby, its behavior and what its needs are. Even adult mothers have said that they keep learning how to be mother everyday.

Do not push back yourself because of the fact that you seen to be far away from your objective. If you have been studying for years, since first grade and still have to go to an University, it could make you think if it would be necessary those extra years. The answer is yes, even if you have been in school for about 10 years and still have to go to college to get you the information that you need to be able to get a decent job, yes it is necessary. The years where you have been taking classes that does not look that t would help you in the future in any way. They do have a purpose, and it is to inform you and help you to develop skills that have not been discover, whether you like math, history, science or languages. Any subject that you have learn is to help you find what you really like and how you can used for the future. That is why there are those extra years for college, to start to focus on your objective and teach you what you actually need to become successful. After you have got the extra years, does not mean your learning have also stop, when you get to practice for the career you have selected you keep developing your skills and growing as a person, and this because of the motivation of keep going beyond of what you already manage.

Going beyond your expectations as a person would bring you benefit to your life. If you get a job based on your skills, experiences or knowledge it would also require the same process of keep learning. If you got the job where you always wanted and they approved you to work there because you qualify and you have study the career for years does not specific mean you know everything and you would directly get to the work and lead yourself to become another worker. Like always and how the Author Ralph Emerson emphasizes you would have to keep trying new material. You have experienced the process to gather the sufficient information to get this job, but now you are being told to go beyond and now you need to learn the system of the factory, office, building, hospital or any apartment you have being positioned. In this case does not mandatory need to keep educating yourself, but to improve in your work and become an efficient person you need to keep learning new skill that would apply to your job. Like is being remarked again the importance of keep learning to do new things so you can grow.

The importance of always going forward and learn to manage new things will make you grow as a person in your life and improve the labor work. If you do not try nothing new and do not applied on your daily, do no expect to become successful as a person. You are the only one that knows how to lead yourself and what weakness and strengths you have, as a captain of your life you know where your boat should go, the wind could make you take different directions which is why you have to recognize where exactly your destination is. The fact the it seems that you have got far enough where you might feel afraid to go beyond, which could ruin what you already have does not mean it will. People argue that they are scared to keep going forward and decide to just stay stand where they are because is been far enough. You should not let yourself be the obstacle to keep learning new things to do. If you feel like that was enough and you got to were you stay, it is because you can go more fatter with the experience that you have. Do not stay in one point and make sure to keep walking and doing new stuff to help you grow, do something new everyday and prove yourself that you have become a successful person every time you go a step ahead. Keep growing to encourage yourself and others to keep doing something new and always going in different direction without stopping.",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
4CB787139508,"The school board plans to add one and a half hours to school each day. I disagree with this plan because everyone will be in a bad mood they will start to skip school and do bad acts, teens will be late to work and lose there jobs, and i feel like if we add more time to school there will be no tine for family.

First, the school bored wants to add more time to school. Kids and teachers are already tried, adding more time will make it worst it will start making kids wanna skip school or even start acting bad. I have a friend who will already skip school some days. he said, ""school can get to boreding who will wanna sit in class longer inside of playing soccer with you friends."" I think there will be more kids will skip school like my friend.

Then, some kids or teens like the high school kids, will be later for there jobs. My sister work at PizzaHut right after school. Adding more time to school will make her late to work, they will even fire her for being late. If the school board adds more time they will be taken jobs and money away from teens like my sis.

finely, family is every inporden if the school bored adds more time to school there will no time for family. School already take up a lot of time. I love to be with my family and i'll pick it over school anytime. Me and my family watch movies each friday. My step dad picks outr the movies with my little brother, and i help out my mom making the popcarn. It's so much fun, but if school has to be longer then I will not be able to watch movies and others kids will not be able to family stuff too.

All in all, I hope you agree with me and don't add more time to school.      ",4.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
51DD6A82BD9D,"American teens love there phones they love to text and call all of there friends but this i starting to be a problem at schools all over the United States. Teenagers all over the U.S text during class or during lunch. Phones are taken by teachers and taken to the office.

The principal is reconsidering the schools phone policies:

policy 1 Allow students to bring phones to school and use them during lunch and other free times. policy 2 Do not allow students to have phones at school.

First, students should not be allowed to have phones at school because . Students are going to text during class . people might say , students wont use there phones during school because they are mature enough to follow directions but i say no some students might listen but others are not going to care and use the phone . Next phones going off in class is a distraction for all of the students and the teachers , but students might say that they will keep there phone on silent , but i say no students mig",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
16005A45A20A,"There's 90% of people in the world that wants to be someone in life, but some people never had the chance or some people just gave up on school,and now they regret it. In the past few years, there has been many teenagers that go to college and try to do a career that they think they are able to work with, but after few days of studying for that career,they see that that's not for them, and they just drop out. Our schools and our parents have been trying to help us decide what we really want to do in our future before we enter college, that way we don't do the same mistake some people did. Now schools have a program where you get to choose what career you think you are interested in, and see if it's really what you want for your future. That way you have a chance to either stick with it or look for other career you could be interested in.

I want to be able to see if the career I want to take it's really for me or not. I think whatever career someone chooses, it shouldn't just be for the money, it should also be for some that makes you happy and that you are going to be able to stick with your whole life. My friend Generic_Name graduated in 2014, and he started to attend to Generic_school. He studied to be an architect, but the only reason he wanted to be an architect was because he wanted to help his family out with some money. Generic_Name was struggling to be an architect, because it was a lot of math, and he wasn't really good with numbers. What Generic_Name really liked to do was to fix cars with his older brother. He couldn't do it no more, he dropped out of college, and started working with what he knew was gonna make him happy. He worked for a whole year as a mechanic and saved money, that way he could have his own business and help his family out. He finally did it, he has his own business now and whenever there's a problem with my mom's car or my dad's car, we go to him. This is what I'm talking about, he never had the chance to see how hard that career could be and if it was going to make him happy. I don't want to do the same mistake, I want to know what I will be getting into and see if that career really is for me.

If you give me the chance to go,visit,and learn about the career I'm interested in. It does not only help me to see if It's really for me or not but I will also learn new things I didn't know and those things, they could help me in life. I want to be doctor and to get there, you have to go through a lot. As right now, I'm attending to a nurse class where I learn the basic things like knowing how to do blood pressure, learning body parts and learning a lot of vocabulary. I also know three languages: Spanish, English and Latin. After finishing my nursing class, I want to attend to Generic_school, because I've heard their doctor and nursing class is the best. The only reason I want to be a doctor is to help people out and be able to keep them healthy without any problems. My dad wanted to me to be an electrician because that's what he is, but I told him that wasn't really my thing. He taught me all he knew, that way if i ever have a problem with that, I would know what to do. One time i went to a friends house, and it was already 9:00 pm. Out of nowhere, the lights of the all house went off. So what me and my friend did was, turn the flashlight on of our phones to be able to see. His parents were freaking out, because they knew it was late already and there probably wouldn't be any electrician that would pick up the phone. I told my friend that this i could fix this because my dad already taught me how to do it. I called my dad to make sure I was right, since he's the one that knows everything about it. I was able to fix it and turn the lights on again at my friend's house. They thanked me and were surprised for knowing all this kind stuff already. Every career is important, it might not be the one for you but you will always learn new things that will help you in life, like it helped me.

There might be people that say to just look for a job where you get paid well, or people that say a career is too much because you have to study a lot, so I'll just go and work as a waitress. Yes, it is important to try to get a job that pays you well, everyone likes to make money. But if you don't like the job you are doing everyday, then you won't ever be happy with what you are doing. That's why you have to find a job that's really for you. You do have to study a lot to have a career, of course you have to. Because you are not only helping yourself, you are helping other people that's going to need your help. This is why it's important to know what you really want for yourself.

I am writing you this letter because i want to know what I am going to get into, I want to know if this career really is for me, because I want to make sure I stick with my decision. Like I said before, if It's not what I want, then that's okay because I've learned new things that will always help me in life. If it's not for me, then there's always another way, you can look for other career and see if you are interested in. I know there's more people that probably want the same chance as me, but I hope you choose me. It's not just because the money I want this chance but also because I want to help people out. I want an opportunity to see what I really want.                                                                                                           ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
9615F113FAA1,"My principal has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. I disagree with my principal because you cant force anyone, they can do whatever they want, and some people are not best doing extracurricular activity.

Forcing someone is not good because you cant tell someone do things that they couldnt do. Some people dont like playing sports, working the yearbook, or serve on the student council.

Not everyone have the same opinion, but many people have different opinion. Forcing an students to do something probably make them feel that they have no rights.

The students should decide what they should do, not the principal because students should get their own opinions. Letting the principal decide the students what to do, make me feel not very good because it make me feel like he is telling me what to do and i dont like that.

Some other people are not good at doing sports or working the year. Some people are different from others. Some students are best other things and some are not. Many students have their own taste on something.

I disagree what is the principal is saying because they cant forcing any the student, the students should decided they own, and some people are not best doing extracurricular activity. The students should be able to choose what they ever want.     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
A91103F63B19,"Thomas Jefferson wrote ""Determine never to be idle ... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". We tend to persevere when we are used to doing something for a long time but if you don't do anything how will u accomplish and persevere in anything? However been idle doesn't necessarily mean we are incapable of persevering forward, it just means that we lack the spirit to accomplish our goals or dreams. Your inactivity in life doesn't serve a purpose at all in your life instead it serves as your downfall and your weakness in persevering.

People who persevere to accomplish their goals or dreams always end up changing their lives for the better instead of the worst. Like Lionel Messi he didn't give up on his dreams to become a world star athlete because he couldn't walk upright and was always bending over, he continued playing despite been different from everyone else he played with. He played and showed how energetic he was in accomplishing his dream of becoming a world class soccer player. And today he's one of the world's Best and richest soccer players in the world today. He showed that even if you have tried and can't persevere through your goals or dreams, the little effort you put in can do a drastic change in your life. It's amazing to see how much we have done in te last two hundred years pertaining to technology. We didn't do all that by standing around and been idle but by always pesevering to accomplis something greater for ourselves and our society and to move forward. we have created electricity, telephones, telegraph, airplane, motorcycle, automobile and more. we created so much that it pushes us forward to be better people. But the most important one we discovered was electricity because more than half of what we use today uses some form of electricity.

We have created so much that people would not be idle but there are still idle people. Not everyone who perseveres comes from a poor family or had a terrible life when they were little or was disabled, people can persevere where ever they are from. They can persevere even if they look, talk or act different from everyone else as long as they have a strong spirit and a strong will to move ahead and be a better person than they were before nothing can stop them. So let us all be persevering and be able to accomplish our goals by doing somthing good for ourselves.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
5355F44A1FE4,"!!Ops Ops!!

Technology allow people to complete many goals without having contact with other , But has a limitation of technology, technology have a positive effects on people's lives.

First , technology make our life more easy by paying bills from their home. also help to started a care without going a college or people that can not walk. They can used the technology to order some food, to send money to other counties. From long time ago the technology, change a lot the way that we can talk with our family from a video or testing without had contact with the person also, somethings their is not enough money to travel so, we saved money.

Second , technology make people finish the goals in from a computer with out speed 8 hours, like the regular class. because some people want a better future but they did had the opportunity, like other to go School because they have to work, take care of her own family so, they stop there dream; they had to used the technology, to finish High School now a lot people are able to the technology, in the computer to given a class without go to school to graduate have a diplomat.

Finally, technology is so important in 2019 because every where you go everything have to do it with a computer because long time ago the used to send letters to communicated to others people now we have phone computers to call make an a appointment weather all people, now know how to used the technology ,because is so important everything we need we can find in the Internet finish also, everywhere you go there is technology example today people from 56 or they used there phone to call uber, taxi to go everywhere, a lot of apps to used.

In conclusion, technology there is not limitation because we all need technology here some reason why? Because in this year, 2019 we all need pay bills, shop without going to stores. because somethings some people dont had a car. They can not walk so, there will be always technology to used make our goals come true. Dont matter if we did get at the first, but there will be a second chance we called technology we can make it ; The Technology have everything in this word.            ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
C2DCF6EED519,"During school many student struggle with one or more subject in class, but there are teacher at school to help them with their work. When school is over and student try to gets started on their homework, but they don't understand the work and their'er no teacher there to help them with the homework. Beginning an after school program can help student gets their homework done fast, learn more thing, and also having more free time.

First, every one need to do their homework from the teacher. Some teacher give out homework to help the student remember thing that the student learn that day in their head. Doing dome work can also help student keep up the grade.

Next, learning more thing can also help you during school day, it can also get you ready for a test or a pop quiz at any time so you don't have to stay up late to study or wake up early int he morning to review. You can also get ahead of your friend in your class.

Last, every one need some free time after school,but you cant because on the homework that the teacher give you. Going to an after school program can help you finish your homework fast and also give you free time at home to take care of your little brother or sister.

After all, after school is a place for every one. It help you with your home work, help you learn more, and its also give you more free time. Now a student with low grade can bring their grade up and the student that do not know any thing now is at the top of the class. After school is a place for every one to have fun wile learning.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
D2517350CB3A,"Elective classes are chosen by student who are intresting to be part of it. Many students

Probably prefer to have a elective clase because they are learning what they like, and will be less difficult for them to understand the class. In my positon students should be required to take elective classes because they attend to school every day, students are teach in what they want to learn and students are much success in class.

Many students do not attend to school in order to not have a clase that they do not like. Students that use to not attend school is when he/she have a class that is not intresting to learn; they may think that the class is not important enough to help them in a future, and letting students to take elective classes probably will stop the absence of many kids because they will want to know new things about the class . Furthermore if students have an elective class they will have that exicitement to start the class on time and not be late, neither to miss school any day because of their interest of learning .

Students should be guide in what they may think is useful and much helful for them. In some school people had heard that many students are teach In things that may not be needed in life like art, some students take art because they like that clase and problably because In the future they Might be plaining to become an art teacher, but for others is preferable to select an elective class that will manage her/ him to be succsessful. As a result of take an eletive class can be a tool for students to discover what subject is most important for them to have knowledge and have the passion of keep learning.

However other may say that students should be required to take a music, art , drama class because students can have intertainment having these kind of classes, but I stiil be thinking that students should be required to take an elective class because learning what they like, they put much effort to get knowledge and good grades, for example study, pay attention to what the teacher is saying participating in class or any other activity. Moreover obtain good results of what they decide to choose to become a successful student.

Students who take elective classes have the advantage of learn what is interesting for them , and be succsess no just in class also might be helpful for students in a future. Be able to choose a class is a good opportunity because it helps students to be intresting in new projects, know new things and obtain a good education at school. Obtaing a good education might encourage students to be succsessfuly in other classes and in other places.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
CBDE3C526D05,"Dear, Principal

I think your students should have community service but i think its only fair to the people that do something bad to do community service, because for example some of the students at school litter and if they do and you catch them you should make them do community service for littering. not all students should do that only the kids that act up because if you put all the kids in that your gana be taking their time away and its gana be worst there gana get mad.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",2.5,1.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
40E6BC53EC01,"Just imagine you have an important basketball game at your school. Since you have three hours to get to the school, you decided to go watch a movie with some friends. When the movie finished you realize is already late, and that you need to go home to get the basketball uniform and your water. Ten blocks away your house you realize that the traffic is getting for ever, you feel like is never going to end,

that the minutes passed so slowly, really nervous, and sweaty. When you get home and check the clock you see you have just twenty minutes to get ready and go to school, your mom is screaming at you really angry because she is always telling me to be responsible. You arrived your team is already playing without you. Since you get there late Generic_Name tells, ""You are not going to play today, because you are not responsible."" I think a good lesson I can teach to the kids is responsibility at home, school projects, and sports.

First, responsibility at home is really important because is were we live, and when you are responsible you show respect to your parents. One day my best friend Generic_Name called me because she wanted to get a coffee and tell me she was really nervous of failing the year because she have not been responsible. I told her, ""I am going to ask my mom."" When i asked my mom she told me really angry, ""Have you fix your room and wash the dishes?"" I respond, ""I have fixed my room, but I have not washed the dishes."" I supposed that she was angry so that was an no. I tell

Generic_Name I cannot go, and she was really sad about it. Later I realized that I was not responsible about doing my duties at home. That is why you need to be responsible of doing your duties at home.

Next, you need to be responsible with school projects because in this way you get better grades. When I was in elementary school I remember I need to do a science project for the science fair. I wanted to get the first place of all the school cause I knew that i will feel really happy of it. I decided to do a wave experiment, but it was really complex and i knew it would take a long time to do it. I collect all the materials and build it, but i did not remember about the poster. The poster need to be really big and with the hypothesis, procedure,

materials, results, and pictures. I did not make my best work in that poster, so I get i ninety percent and third place. I feel really good about the results, but I learn that in order to be better we need to be responsible at school.

Finally, responsibility at sports. I did not know we needed to be responsible when practicing any sport. Just imagine you have the last soccer game of the year. Generic_Name have told you many times the directions of what you need to do all the week before the game, but you have not follow them correctly. One of the directions was eat healthy, but you have been eating pizza all the week. Other direction was drink a lot of water every day, but instead of drinking water you drink soda. The day of the game has came, and you did not get prepared because you did not wanted to be responsible. When you are at the middle of the game you start to feel really dizzy. Generic_Name and the nurse take you out, and tell you why are you so ill. In sports you need to be responsible of your health.

Responsibility is what make us be better. In think responsibility help us have a better place to live. I list three ways we can show we are responsible. To show the importance of it. Ways we can show we are responsible are making duties at home, at school, and practicing any sport.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
E47A7E497F78,"One small acts of kindness can help other people by doing little things for them. Helping people with a small act of kindness is helpful because they probablly have never ever gotten a sweet thing said to them or something kind to them. Anybody should be kind to one to the other because it's something kind to do. It can have an impact in others because it can litterlay change the world by being kind to another. The reason why it could change the world is that people in this world don't care to be kind but if everybody does it then it would change by alot.

Just by saying something kind to someone could make someones so happy thats why doing something kind no matter how small it is, it could make someone really happy and amazed and if a person could treat someone like that there is a possibilitty that they could do it to other people and the kindness could go around. Kind is what a alot of people need and its somethimg great to do. You can impact someone by saying something really simple but all of it with kind. In my opinion i think that kindness is a wonderful thing and i can believe that its a huge impact for others.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
6A47B80F3283,"I believe, the schools which ones offers distance classes for students is a really good option for alot of people for a several reasons.

Some persons wants to finish carriers of schools, but they cant for this reasons.

- They does not have much time to do it,

because they have to work, pay bills and stuff like that.

-Some students get out of the schools becauses they wants to help their family , and pass more time with them; take caring of they youngues bothers, sister, or work to get many into their house.

Taking classes at home wil be the better options for the studens which ones wants to conitinue their carrier after high school, into the university,becasuse they can have a time to work, and to pay they carrier , and to get done what they wnats to be and their future ...

Some carriers are really expensives, and a parents cant pay for it. Well the students can work and get many. And the same time with this programs they can still continue with they classes .

Also begin home taking a classes, should be a better more consentration and relaxing eating an apple, least worrys and getting ready for a better future. Doing classes work and the free time and having time to do others staff.

Classes a distance, will be the better option for alot of peoples, they can have time to do many things done at the same time .

work,take of they kids, have time free for your own and, with their family. Takinf a classes at home are the best way for those peoples wanst to finish they carriers in Universities or High Schools .",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
04788D56AC58,"Generic_City is the one place in this world i would like to visit. Mexico is a very nice and pretty place to visit and alot of people go there to visit. I like to go to Mexico because there so much to do and it's really fun. When i go over there i do a lot of stuff every single day like hang out with family, go to the plaza, go to the beach, go to the movies, go rollerskating, go to downtown and shop over there, and many other stuff.

My favorite thing to do over there is to help the bakers make bread and also to be with my family. Mexico also has good mexican food that you will probaly like. There are other places i would like to travel to but i choose Mexico because it's my moms hometown, theres a lot to do,and because i get to see my grandma,uncles,aunts,and cousins. Mexico is my favorite place to visit because i get to hang out with my old friends and go to the pool and swim til i get tired.

When i was little my mom would take me to the zoo a lot with my friends and we would have a blast. Sometimes i wish to live over there cause it's an amazing place to be at, but sometimes i don't cause i would have to go to school over there and i would have to learn how to write and read in spanish, which im not very good at. Mexico is kinda similar to virginia because they have chuck a cheese, mcdonalds, burger king , buffalo wild wings, and taco bell. Back then they didn't have those kind of place but only mcdonalds. Mexico now is so different because theres spray paint on the walls every where and it's just not the same as back then. They listen to american music and kinda talk english. I'm not saying that they can't learn that i'm just saying its just weird cause i just came from america i just want to be in a place where people are talking in there launguge.

I think you should visit Mexico, you will love it. there's just to much to do over there. you can also go to the park over there and also you can go to the circuse, you will totally love it and enjoy Mexico. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
508A9EC12C44,"Technology in the currently life we have is something great, but sometime can be bad. The technology is in all places is in home, work place ,hospitals,schools, vehicles is in everywhere you go. Because the technology make the human life more easy in many things. But make the people more easy I thing is no something the technology make people be lazy the people play video games and other thing. They choose stay in home playing when the can go out an play with the friends soccer or other sport thing the get a healthy life.

Technology I agree because in the actuality the technology help us in many things to save life to study you go everywhere you see technology. Now we need that for have a great life with the technology make the life more easy help others. To safe life the technology is a key for example the machines the hospital have help to doctors to safe a peoples life. In the schools or job helps also in the schools the computers helps the students to make the classwork. In the job if you work for example in construction, the machine and tools are technology for they make more easy the work.

Thanks to the technology we can get communication with other people like family, friends, etc. If you are in other place or country you can get communication the 24 hours of the day an the 7 days' of the week have a great communication with your favorite person. Now you can get communications also for social media and messenger or calls .But always be have to take careful because the people use technology for bad things.

In conclusion the technology every days save or helps people. we use everyday in us life is something grand. But always we have to take be careful the technology help us but sometime people can get a addiction. In the life everything in excess can be dangerous so we have to take a valance in our lifes.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
E03B0AA78E40,"Committing to a job at a Young age is bad and good idea, why you may ask? Well at a young age you might have a fantacy and a very huge immagination well at least i did, as a kid this could help because if you commit to a career at young age. When you're older you'll be an expert and know the job by memory. Having to commit to a career at a young age can save you time in the future, when you have graduated you would automatically have a option and know what job you are going to do. This can also be a terrible idea because at that a young age you don't really know what you want as a career, you just go with what ever your parents or the person you look up to does and as you get older you relize you were not really into that career. Your brain also isn't fully developed until you're older it is a proven fact.

Having a fantacy and a very great immagination is good because it can motivate you to choose a good carreer which you would obviosly enjoy in the future. May aslo be a bad idea because when you get older you learn to hate things you enjoyed as a kid and it would just leave you with a career you cant enjoy as much as you use too. For example when i was a kid i enjoyed to play Football i always thought i would do it until i died. As i got older i began to hate it, because it wasn't really what i wanted to do it was what my dad wanted me to do which i enjoyed because it made him happy. Now i know i want to travel the world and be a Photographer and learned to speak up for myself and it helped me to communicate with my dad and be straight forward with him there for kids are confused at a young age.

Reasons why commiting to a career at a young age is a good idea. The more you get older the more you know about the job so you'll be a wealthy man getting paid good by the time you are twenty five. There for you wouldn't be worried and freaking out about what career you are going to do after school you would already be prepared mentally and physically.

As a kid you enjoy whatever your parents are doing, so you would obviously choose a career to be with your parents and thats a good thing as a kid. It'll make the job easier, funnier and more comftorable.

""In some societies, students are expectected to identify a career by the time they enter high school."" Personally i think Choosing a career at a young age is a bad idea, because like i said it is a proven fact that your brain isn't fully developed at a young age. That can be a bad idea to choose a career at a young age because you can choose a career you know nothing about, which means once you learn the job you might not even like it as much as when you first chose it. For example let's say Your father could be working as a construction worker and because he does it you might chose your career to be a construction worker. When kids are young they like what others like its just how society makes you think, as you get older you become wiser and realize thats not what you actually want to do. There for you should not choose a career when you are in high school and just enjoy your school year's once you graduate you'll regret it and wish you had just relaxed but that does not mean you should'nt plan for upcoming careers you should have more than one option, prepared for after you graduate.  ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
15BD3759DC85,"Have you ever thought what life would be like without and with success?

I agree with this quote from Winston Churchill,""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" It's an important role that failure plays in our daily lives. Failure leads to many different directions,But, if we learn our mistakes we can understand what we did wrong. People sometimes have the enthusiasm or optional energy to get thought the obstacles. Some-others don't which it's acceptable for this type of situation. Giving up faith is likely, giving up on yourself as an individual.

Tools are like megalo, it helps us become the person we are today. Tools guide us to consist of good devolpement of character. It can read our thoughts and mind as a reader, when you specifically need them in hand. For example, working on a project from school, you use the internet to find those evidence to support your statement. You may never know that the tools you we're looking for has been sitting their waiting to be taken. You knew it was the item you we're searching for, soon enough it was a success.

Without failures or mistakes, we won't even understood what errors we had. Life would've become a lot harder, stressed, overwhelmed etc. The more mistakes we resolved, more issues fills up. We won't even be able to undo our issues. It would waste more of you're time.

I would argue with this fact, success comes from mistakes and obstacles along the path. It tells us what we should do and not fall into the same hole again. It takes time and effort to adjust,So, we must contribute as a whole.

Therefore, no matter what obstacles we face in life, considering a side-note. There may be a tense of giving up, let it slide. You can active anything in life.                 ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
6521895BA018,"One time, my friend used all type of drogas for example: cocaine, marihuna, ciggarett,alcohol,etc. But one day he asked me what school am i going? i said Generic_School, can i go with you? he asked me, of course i said. I am tired to use all this drogas, i want to be something else in my life. Since this moment he chenged his life. Now he wanna be a doctor for to help people to become a some else in their life. I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because i can demostrate that they said is wrong, to show them what is defference between to make and to talk, and to be concetrate. Those thing i can show the people that i can doing with myself and that make me a greatest accomplishment.

I feel to be myself, it is not depend what people said about me. If i want to change or to be something else in a world, i have to do what my mind say to me, for example if i wanna be a teacher. And they tell me to be a teacher is not important because their payment is trash, they just can earn $1000 each months. But if i like to be teacher do not matter what i earn. They will trying to make me confuse. Maybe they already tried it, but they could not do it , that is why they believe that i could not do it either but not all time is the same, the world change every day so i need to try to show them that what they said it, it was wrong. So it is important do not pay attention people who try to make me confuse.

Also there are two defference between to make and to talk because i can believe in myself but if i just talk and to say i will do this, i will do that and i will not doing nothing. That way i can help the world even i lie myself. But if i did not said none and to show people that i change my life with my attitude. they will come at me and ask me what happend with me? because i am changing. I will tell them that i want to be something else in a world. That will be my greatest accomplishment.

Even if i believe in myself i need to be concentrate because i am human and i am not perfect, i can fail with my decision if i am not concetrate. Because bad people will like to see me on ground they will tell something fun that i missing. For example to study, many people do not like to study because they say that school is boring so that i am doing they believe that is boring. They will try to convence me doing wrong things so i have to demostrate them that i wanna be something else in a world not just have fun.

In conclusion, work individuality is not easy i have

To showto the people that sometime we do not need help from somebody else. Just believe in myself, do not heard what they said about me, to show them what is the defference between to make then to talk and all time to be concentration in what i am doing. Thus i something else is the greatest accomplishment. ""The world needs me"". if ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
94131A88E955,"In my oppinon school is good how it is now. having go to go school for a couple of months straight across and then just have a couple of months off for summer. If they were to change the school routine to kids having to have breaks for 3-4 week's they wouldn't come back with the same effort as they do when they come back off of summer break.. For example if I were to leave shcool for 3-4 weeks I wouldn't want to come back to the same classes and with the same routine, It's just that Students do retain the information they teach they would have to go over it just so they get back on track. But the fact of having year-around school isn't it just doesn't make a diffrence. and im an sure that kids wouldn't like to have only 3-4 weeks off school after all the time they spend in school

This is why students should have a right amount of school and a certain amount of months off. a year-around school benifits teachers not students. because they if they did have a year- around teachers wouldn't have to worry about re-teahing it again to the students because they would expect them to already know what they are taking about. so they should have a regualr schedual for te schools board to follow.

But at the same time the fact of not having to go to school for weeks sounds good. when their break is over they would have to go back to school not only that but they would have to pick up from where the left off at first. I feel like leaving in the middle of a lesson that is important that really wouldn't have the studets as much. if they were to change the school routine it would just mess things up with the students and their grades and that would e more work of teachers. What if some important test is coming up for the students and they only have a certian amount of time to get things done within the time period and then they would leave on break what if the teacher couldnt get everything done in time then te whole class would fail the test.

This is why they should just leave school as it is just so that student's and teacher's wouldn't have to go throught all that trouble, Just get what they need to get done within the time they are their and then when they are done with all the work they needed to get done with they could leave for summer break, just so students dont stress over the facts that they have to get things done in a certain amout of time. These are some of the many reasons why they should have school for months and not take breaks inbetween school days just so that they have months off on their summer break. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
FE459F8CF4CE,"""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"", this phrase said by the American jazz legend Duke Ellington means that if you have a problem you can use it to improve yourself and I agree with this statement because problems can help you by making your brain grow up, giving you knowledge, and making your personality stronger.

Problems make your brain to grow up, imagine being on a math test and you don't know the answer, probably you will be scared but if you try hard to remember what is the answer you will find it, usually problems are too hard to solve and this fact helps you to make your brain to think a way to solve the problems, this can cause your brain to grow up by using all your energy to think in what you can do in this situation.

Problems gives you knowledge, there should be a reason for you to be in a problem, if you fight in the school or anywhere with another person or you do something bad, probably someone will call you to the office or take you to the police department , if you are in a problem the first thing you will do is think on why this happened and this helps you because you will know what you did bad and will not do it again.

Problems makes your personality stronger, if you crash your car you may feel bad and scared for this event, I had a test that it was hard and in that moment I felt bad, so most of the time when you have a problem you will feel stressed, this stress can be bad for your brain but it can also help you to be more patient and determined in your goal that is solving your problem, with this two things your personality will be stronger that before the problem.

In conclusion, I think that Duke Ellington is right because problems can help you by making your brain grow up, giving you knowledge, and making your personality stronger. So if you are in a problem you should take the lead of this situation and be determined in solving it, is not the end of the world only because you have a problem, and now you know that problems can help you.",3.0,2.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
57DFE525E50A,"Ever since I was in elementary school I have had an interest in your company. Technology was not as big as it is today, but for some reason I have always shown interest in the products that your company has made. When you created the windows PC it revolutionized the world of technology, and ever since then I have been taking technology classes, programming classes, and even engineering classes so that one day I can created something of my own or even be a part of something surrounding your companies work. It would mean a lot if you gave me the chance to come visit your company and learn about the things your company does such as, what type of work your employees do throughout the week, the environment among and which your employees work in, and how you maintain your servers for your computers across the world I would also like to learn a little bit more of your journey as an entrepreneur in your early days, the sacrifices you had to make and the chances you took to get where you are today.

I am the perfect candidate to be picked as an intern for your company because of the fact that i have dedicated my life to technology and even followed your footsteps. I know everything there is to know about computer science, programming, and engineering. Out of all the companies that deal with computers, yours is by far the best. I have researched everything about your company going back to the roots when you were in the garage building your computer and programming them to now being one of the richest men in the world having your employees build them for you. I aspire to become a great man like you and this the perfect opportunity to show you and everyone else what i am capable of. I believe that if you choose me as your intern you will gain an even greater advantage in the world of business and technology, I have a certain set of skills that allow me to learn things quick about human behavior and gain the advantage over competing companies i have studied the nature of consumers and i know exactly what they like to see and hear, having me learn a thing or two from you will give not only me a learning experience but you as well.

Giving me the chance to see your company work in person is one of my life goals and it would be an honor to learn how you managed to become not only one of the richest men in the world but also learn what made you decide to take on a challenge such as technology giving that it was one of the hardest things to adapt to in your time. You managed on your own to create something as big as your company with just an idea and some programs. Learning something from you is a once in a lifetime thing that probably never happens to most up and coming entrepreneurs like me. Giving me this chance not only helps me but it helps my family and my community. we live in a small town with not much technology and my dream is to change that I want the people in my town to experience the wonders of technology i want to show them that i learned everything I know from the man who started it all, the man who revolutionized the world.

In conclusion, giving me the chance to see the work you have created will spark something new in this world of technology. I have followed your footsteps, i have dedicated my life to technology and engineering. However with this opportunity i will create something of my own for my home town so that all my family members and towns people can experience the joys of technology.             ",4.0,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
20A2147B6DB8,"On life's important matters is it best handling by yourself or seek help? They're two types of people, one follows his or her own ideas , and the other seek guidance. I strongly agree getting help form a expert or authority is much better than following your own instincts. Reasons are teacher and therapist; Both help out a lot in peoples life. For example my friend Generic_Name and me.

Therapist help me when I was going through hard times. My family had split up, a good friend pass away, and I got bully in school, so many confusing and terrible events happening which teared me apart. Trying to work so hard fixing everything by myself, but non of my ideas work. Until I talk to a therapist about my problems. The therapist guide me to a better understanding of my life, and what to do next. Together we solve my problem with the bully in school, and help me got over my family split and my friend death.

Secondly, my friend Generic_Name is a senior in high school. She was never good in math, nor did she pass the math SOL. Generic_Name had chances to retake the math sol to graduate. The next one she taking will be the last SOL . Generic_Name study on her own and worked very hard. She like to be self-reliance But at this point it was not working, so Generic_Name ask her math teacher to help out before the SOL. The teacher saw Generic_Name had a lots of mistake, so the teacher guide her to fix it. Also teach her on the math problem she didn't know. Seeking guidance form the math teacher help Generic_Name pass the SOL.

In conclusion getting help form experts or authorities help, in ways being self reliance can't. Seeking guidance help a better understanding of the situation, less mistake, controlling stress, and learn something you did not know.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
B3493FBE6476,"Distance learning is a great option for students to attend classes from home. There are many students that fail the grade just because they don't attend their classes at school. This is a great way for students to still take classes and learn more their education. The generation from now aren't as motivated as generations before. Theres might be a some people that wont agree with this statement because they probably think going to school is better than taking classes online or conferencing from home.

Some people may say that it isn't a great idea for schools to offer distance learning for students especially the parents. Most parents would want their kids to go to school and take classes because they think it's better for them. They probably think that they're are ways to cheat if they take classes online. Some parents would want their kids to interact with other students and not just be home all the time.

I agree on all the reasons why they student shouldn't take distance learning as an option but I think otherwise. It's a great option for students because there are many student that fail or drop out of school just because they didn't attend school. If students had the option to take classes online from home then it would give them a second chance to pass and graduate so they wouldn't give up. It even may help other students understand the curriculum more.

The generation now are giving up at such a young age just because they don't even want to attend their classes at school. This is why its a great idea for schools to offer distance learning so students won't just give up and drop out. Having the opportunity to take online classes from home with probably help those students the don't want to attend school. The students would take classes from their homes and learn the same information they would learn at school.

In conclusion, I think it would benefit many students if schools offered distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. It's a great way for students who don't like attending school most of the time. It would be a great advantage for students to have that offer of distance learning, it woud make a huge difference for the generation of students now a day.              ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
E952F0EB5083,"Former British Prime Minister once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". I disagree with this statement. In my own experiences I have never failed to succeed, I have always failed to fail. In 7-11th grade I have tried out for my school basketball team and never made the team. I have also experienced doing something on my first try and succeeding, Failure never brings success.

All through out my life i wanted to play basketball for my school. The only problem was every year I tried out i never made the team. This year I am a senior in high school and still havent played basketball for my school. I have realized that no matter how good I got it wasnt enough. Personally i can not relate with failing to succeed because it has not happened to me. I have never been able to fail and then succeed.

I can say from my own experiences. Somethings just come to you and your able to keep being good at it. While there are also things that are not able to do on the first try or ever. For instance my seventh grade year I was trying out for football. I had never played a game or ever tried out. First try and boom I am on the football team. I played left tackle and was a starter for ""A-team"". I had never played before and I was already starting. I didnt fail to succeed, I just succeeded.

As a result from the facts I have stated. I do not believe or agree in ""failing comes success"". Failing happens to everyone and I have yet to hear someone say "" I failed to succeed"". It is very uncommon for someone. If it has not happened to me in all of my seventeen soon to be eighteen years of life i dont believe it is possible. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
1348668DF845,"Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?

School districts programs would be making a big mistake on allowing high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional 4 years.

If they allow high school students to graduate in three years , they would be making everything harder in the Generic_School because students would have to put more effort than ever on passing their classes and the SOL.

In any other state would agree on graduating high school students in 3 years because their rules are different from the the state of Virginia, For example, in Virginia high school students are required to have their SOL passed with more than 400 points, and the 22 Credits instead of graduating for high school.

Other states like Kentucky or Chicago will agree to this because they are required to have 22 credits for their graduation , and it would not be that hard to get 22 credits in 3 years.

It would be a a bad idea to allow students to graduate in 3 years instead of 4 because students would not like to come back to school in summer to do more work, get the credits they need, and make the SOL , as a student i would not like that to happen because we would not get a lot of time for vacations in summer to spend with my family, and i would not like to take courses during the evening , it would be like to be doing a lot of extra work.

People in different states would like to allow this new rule of graduating high school students in 3 years because they can prepare them more everyday doing their work so they can graduate faster in 3 years .

Many other people are saying that it would be better for them to graduate high school students in 4 years because students would be having a lot more of time to get prepare for college and for try to pass whatever they need for graduation. Students also would like to spend more time in the vacations with their family and not in the school having that pressure that you have to pass all yours classes and exams for graduation.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
45697CF2448C,"Do you like to extend your school hours?

I think extending the school hours do your life more easier because you don't have to do homework at home. You can do your homework in the school and you can ask for help.

I agree with extending the school day because I like go to the school and you have more time to stay with your family because you don't have to do your homework.

My first reason is I like to extending the school day because when the teachers give you homework you can do it in the class, and I like it because you can have more time to stay with your friends.

By this I mean, when I come back to my home I don't have to do any homework because I do my homework in the school and I can go outside and play with my friends. This is why is good to have more hours of school.

For example, one day I was in the school, and my science teacher give me so much homework, she told me I need to do projects, quizzes, and extra work but I told her I can't do it because I don't have internet at home and I can't do my homework in the school because I don't have so much time because the school end early. I go to the school principal and I asked him if he can extend the school day because many students need more time to do their homework and then a few week ago he told me,"" I want to expend the school days because I was thinking and you are right."" I feel happy in that moment because I will have more time to do my homework and pass the grade.

Conclusion, extending the school hour can help you to do your homework and missing work, and you don't need to do it at home.

My second reason is I like to have school hours because you have more time to eat and when you do your testes you can study one hour and not is a matter because you still have time to do your test.

By this I mean I have more time to eat my lunch and talk with my friends in the cafeteria, and when I have testes I do it with more calm, and I don't stressful because I have time to do my test.

To illustrate, I was in the school, and I was doing my math test and I was so hungry and I asked my teacher if I can ate and he said "" No because we don't have a lot of time, and we need to finish the test."" I was so mad because I was hungry, and we don't have time to ate. When the test finished we go to ate and then we have to go to another class but I was so tired because them don't give us time to rest .

To wrap up, you need to have time for everything and do the thing with calm. Is good if the school extend the school hours because you have time for do your homework, your quizzes, or your projects.

To wrap up, the school need to extend the school day because like this every student will have time to do what they need to do in their classes, and they don't have to worry about the homework in their houses.

I feel if the school extend the hours should be great and more peaceful because you can because you can do your work and other things with more tranquility.

I think if in your school extend the school hours you have more time to do your homework, and you can have more time to stay with your family.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
CAC2F2EE4C2D,"I belief that the best option in our life is to be a student active, that to be a student inativity, is the better for our life how students that we are, also because we can learn about the all thing that exist on this world, for to be a best person and too for our future.

we can do more if we are people active,when put our mind to work, enrich at the brain, achievement may goals that we wish on our life, like when are on high school and us stutying hard we have great grades in the class, we pass the year and set all the effort, the result is have in the hands our diploma, we will feel a sensation of happiness, and go ahead with our goals, the university and with the future.

also we feel the satisfaction because we are people that we like to be doing differents things that obvious are good, may be no is easy because somtimes we fail, but we can continue to endeavor and to be a person with goals clean that go to comply, follow with the university, and to be a person succesful in the life.

the students that have a mind occupate have more opportunities because these student are smart and people that not are lazy, obtain more adds of have the best prosonal of jobs in company or industry, in any type of job if we are people efficent that doing more in the world ,

because we enrich our brain and body and that service in the future, a style of life unique, obtain a best job to be people that can improve the world.

I think so that be a person active or doing something create a way in our life that champion to be professional because we cannto be idle, we have that to be women and men productive and obtain the job of our dreams, cause if we not doing something we are people that not have clean their goals,

in change if we are people with a brain active we can do anything in the world and understand better tha things. ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5
AFD325C9347D,"What would happen if school offer the program to student that qualify for the program that only take three year of high school instead of the four years. Here are some examples, and reason why is a good idea for school to offer this types of programs.

Reason number one is that students that had A's and B's in the past years like middle school and the beginning of high school maybe qualify for the three year insted of the four year of high shool, because they are so intelligen that they not need the four years of high school.

Reason number two is that if they graduate from high school they may like to apply for a community service for there college aplication.

Reason number three is that some student don't have the money to pay for college so they may need a year to save some money to pay for college, or some student may not like college so they are only going to finish high school, and they are going straight to work, and the more experience you learnd form a jod the better it is so is a good idea to begin at a younger age.

So i think that the program that school offer to studen for them to take the opportunity to graduate early from high school is a good idea beacuse it will help them alot in there life.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
CD1D7EC5810C,"It has been asked by one teacher about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. Work is the ability to do something that given by any one it can be a person, a company or at school that we do it by ourselves or with group. One scientist said that, ""one country can developed not by the Prime minister(President) its by working together"". Although some says working alone is more beneficial then working in group because they learn how or accomplish things by themselves or responsible for that work, actually working with group is more beneficial than working alone because we can get more ideas from other person and it is limited by shorten time to complete the work.

Some people says that working alone is more beneficial than working in group because they learn how to accomplish things by themselves. In our world almost all people struggle to accomplish their work by their own, which is good to learn many challenging things in our work. For example, Thomas Edison invented the light bulb with out asking for help, he also fail many times to passing light through in the bulb. Also Leonardo Davinci took him more than a year to draw the most expensive and beautiful woman Monaliza, but he didn't ask anyone to help him. We can do any thing by ourselves if we work hard and struggle not to fail.

Actually Working with group is more beneficial than working alone because more ideas flow out from another person. In Biology our nerve system can stuck when we thing over and get stressed, the last level of stress is stuck. One person can do one or two things but if another person help him they can have more ideas. For instance, the two brothers who made the airplane, now a days we can see what kind of airplane made. However because of they are two they mix their idea and get it done.

Time is short in this world. God gave as the time interval to do in our inter life. Bible says God gave 900 years for Adam, and when the people become a lot the time interval became more less, and now a days the interval for our age(time) is 80 or 90 in average. When I came to my idea, it is limited by shorten time to complete the work when we working with group. Lets give an example for this; the teacher gave an assignment for each student to do research about global warming, he gave 1 month to submit it, but if they had work in a group they can easily do it with in less than a month. In this world we stay for shorten time interval we can work together to accomplish our goal.

although some says working alone is more beneficial then working in group because they learn how or accomplish things by themselves or responsible for that work, actually working with group is more beneficial than working alone because we can get more ideas from other person and it is limited by shorten time to complete the work. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
293A93F037A7,"I agree with Winston Churchhill because without failure how can we be succesfull in life. Frist, reason why because If you fail at something you can reflect on it. Second, failure can make you become better then you were yesterday if you work hard. Third, Is never let failure consume you. Instead use failure to lead you to success.

You can always reflect on somthing you fail at, and become better. If, you don't study yourself at something you failed at, then you can't become successfull. For example, say you were playing a football game, and you missed your tackle in the game. After the game you watch the film, and see what mistakes you did wrong. After you seen what was wrong in film. You studied the film, and trian harder in practice for next game, so that won't happen again. Another reason you can do after you reflect on yourslef is practicing at something you love to do. For example, riding a bike for the frist time without trianing wheels. If you fail at riding a bike, then you have to practice, so you can become better at it. In order to practice you have to reflect on it frist. After you reflect what you did wrong, then you will become better when you practice.

Failure can teach you to become better then you were yesterday if you work hard. For example, you went to practice for a 100 meter, but you did not wram up at all. You decided to run the 100 meter for the frist time anyway. After you finsh the 100 meter you didn't feel good about the time you had. The next day you decide to warm up, and work harder to get better results. After your trianing you wanted to run a 100 meter. When you ran a 100 meter you felt better with your time, and decided to work harder everyday to become better then you were yesterday. This is how failure is making you better because it is teaching you that if you fail at something, you can always pick it back up, and become better, then what you were doing that day when you failed at something. If you want to become better, then you were yesterday. Then don't worry about the past because thinking about it all the time will bring you back to failure. For example, say you are mad that you lost your 100 meter race in fourth place. When you lost, you keep thinking about it all the time, and can't move forward for the next race. When the next race starts the day after you lost. You lost the race again in fourth place because you keep thinking about the race you lost in the past, then thinking about how can you can become better then you were yesterday. The point is in order to become better you have to think how can you improve better for the future, then thinking about how you failed in the past.

Never let failure consume you. Instead use failure to lead you to success. For example, say you have a math test on Monday, but you decide on Sunday to not study for it because you think the test is very easy. On Monday you give up on a math test, and decide to fail it. The reason why because you did not study, and it was too hard for you. You decide to retake it on tuesday, and learn from your mistakes. On Tuesday after you failed the math test. You took the test again to get a better score because you studied very hard to succesed in the test. This is why you always use failure to lead you to success. If you let failure consume you, then you won't reach to the top to become successful. For example, you can't swim at all, and your drowing. For some reason you dont won't to reach the top because you are depressed, and want to give up.

In conclusion, I still believe It is impossible to be succesfull without failure. Without failure we cannot reach the top to be successful. Without failure we cannot reflect on things to become better. Without failure we cannot become better then yesterday. In order to become successful we have to use failure to lead us to success. Its okay to fail because after you learn from it. Everything is going to be okay when you overcome it, and be better. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,2.5
C57371A3E79F,"I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality. It is find for me that I can be myself in a world. I'm thinking that the world is trying to make me who I am and make me see. the way I am can make me do whatever I want to do. I could visit wonderful places like seeing great nature, going into a big forest, and go see big hills. this would be amazing to see wonderful things.

I can be myself in a world when it is constantly trying to make me something seeing things like a place to see nature. Sometimes in some places to see nature is amazing. Seeing nature like seeing different kinds flowers, and seeing and beautiful. I will also went to see the blossom trees. Those would be interesting for me to see those kinds of Nature.

I would think about in a world and it would constantly make me something else when seeing nature a big forest. Going into the forest usually it is just trees, but when I see something new in the forest, it would be very interesting. I would see in the forest that the life is changing. Also I would see fresh fruit growing from the trees. And also I would see a beautiful area with flower bushes.

Sometimes I think in a world that makes me something else wants me to see everything. This can maybe explain that I am on top of a mountain or a hill. Hills would be better for me because I just only want to see a high view of the land, with the mountains it is too cold and windy. When I see big hills usually it is just grass. Going up to the top of a big hill and When I see that this land is clear, this may explain that there's only a plain grass area with trees, this is similar to the past a long time ago.

It is good for me to be who I am, and being myself in a world. This may explain almost everything. Saying that I disagree with this statement thinking that It doesn't seem very interesting, it may feel like Emerson's statement doesn't make any scents. For me this statement makes scents, because it does describe the world that is trying to make me something else about the greatest accomplishments. That is why I agree with Emerson's statement, to be myself in a world.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
327F4BCC9E4B,"The idea that businesses have made is very important. Finding means to conserve energy and resources are important in our daily life. Most people use energy and resources in their day to day activities which put more pressure on the use of energy and resources. This four-day work week will conserve the workload on energy and resources. I agree to the fact that my school should follow the four-day school week with each day consisting of ten hours.

When the school time is extended, it will make students have more time to do any unfinished assignments in a particular class. Students can do more work and cover many topics in a day. This will make teachers do a lot of work in a day. For instance, any project that you didnot finish can be done the next day in class, students will have enough time to ask questions about what they are being taught, they will have sufficient time to go to teachers and practice more if they have other questions related to what they were taught. This will make classes fun and more entertaining. Students will have adequate time to study and understand the concept of what they are being taught in class.

If this adaptation is considered in my school, it will cut down the usage of energy and resources. The school uses more energy and resources due to the population of the students. Some examples of such equipment that uses higher energy are as follows : Air Condition, Laptops, Printers and many others. These machines uses high barometric pressure. Throughout this four-day school week, we can conserve the energy we waste in the school.

Others may say students might get bored due to the increase in hours because they are used to the normal daily routine but hasn't considered the benefits of it. When this is taken into consideration, more energy and resources can be kept from wastage.

In summary, the four-day routine and extending of time will be beneficial to conserving energy and resources in the shool. This will make students work hard in class, reduce the work load on energy and resources, seek more help from teachers if they are finding difficulties in a particular class.                                              ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
EFB208F9EF60,"They say that conserving energy and resources, some buissness have a four day work week consisting ten houres a day. Extending the school day two houres and a four day school week ain't a bad idea for people who need's more help and are focusing on their future and college. Do you think this is a great idea? Yes, because the more time your at school the more time you'll be learning and getting help. If added 2 more houres to school on a four day school week, the more school work will be finished and learned. I think my school should fallow this model because in my opinion test and quiz scores will show a greater improvement over time.

First reason why my school should have a four-day week school with a exteded 2 houres is because, many work can be done at school and teachers would have more time to explain details with deeper nolige. Teachers could have more time to study practice with the students before taking their test like using websites like kahoot's. it/quizlit. live and notes so the students can feel confident of what they have learned. This will be consiting longer periods for every class that every student and teachers will have to make sure every student leave the school grounds successfuly and informed of what they have learned that day.

Second reasons is that being in school for 2 more houres will help you work smoothly at every class. Plus every student will be haveing a three day weeknd from Friday to Sunday to rest and to have more time to complete homeworks and to study for testes and quizies. I could get work done when i have not been in school because i was sick or on vacations to get back on track with my studies and school work. Great idea for people at school becasue they won't have any excuss of loosing or not finishing work.

Those are the reasons why a four-day school week is a fantastic idea with a 3 day weeknd everyday. And ways for students to be ready for college and to get good grades everytime with extra help. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
8DF5D7CF4085,"Everywhere you go, everyone or at least someone makes a plan for their future reference or goal. Many people don't have the time to accomplish their goal and others have. Everyone has a way to achieve or succeed in something they like. Others like to stay idle or not tend to move to achieve their goal. And other people like to do something to accomplish their goal. Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle....it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I totally agree to Thomas Jefferson's statement that, we accomplish more if we are doing something.

To start with, doing something can help you plan, achieve, or complete your future goal quicker.

For example, When you are given a task to complete you can't sit there idle to wait for someone to help you or wait for a magic to happen to complete your goal. If you want to graduate from high school and get to college with a scholarship, you will have to study hard to get to college. If you want to get a great permanent job, you still have to study hard and have a good resume. This will make you be faster with every work you be given to complete.

Furthermore, doing something always makes you more active. For instance, when you fail an exam or possibly one or too many of them, you can't possibly say that you do not care about your score, you have to take action, study hard, and hope for the next exams you would make it to the top. Whenever I fail a text, even though I don't like to retake a text, I prepare for the next text we are going to have for the next unit and for all the rest unit we are going to learn. I like to learn ahead of the class because am not really smart to learn in class so instead I learn and prepare ahead in class. Planning and taking notes in class or anywhere else can make you tend to do something than to sit there idle to plan your future. Making plans for the future helps you achieve or accomplish your goal.

On the other hand, many people often argue that staying idle to achieve your goal will make you less stressful. They say that because people want to achieve their goal by doing something, they often take pills that will make them stay awake especially for the high schoolers'. They say this because most high schoolers' wants to achieve more, graduate and get a better college and a great permanent job so they put all their might into studying and drinking and taking pills to stay awake and some student often get sick but can't stop cause they have been addicted to it. Although this may be valid, but doing something always makes you great and achieve your future goals and helps you to be more responsible in the future because in the future it will be easy for you to get a job and mostly half of every job will ask whether you have an experience or you being qualified for the job. And you probably don't know what's going to happen in the future so you to be prepared and planned for the future.

In a nutshell, I like to plan my future goals and learn ahead of my class. Completing an action all the time will forever make you involve in important duties. It also helps you discover more. It can also help you improve in your studies and make you a successful person in the future. It will make you useful in your workplace. Many teachers and other colleagues will admire and respect you and you can even turn out to be their model. You can get the college you have been always dreaming of and accomplish all your personal goals. ",4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
1DE0E7C48DF0,"I know not all of us may have experience in every way. For example i may not be experienced in everything but as long as someone is their to hep me i will be wiling to work and do what is needed.

Some jobs look for the days they need their employees, Most places won't hire if you dont got what the job is actually looking for. Its better to find a place you find comfortable working at. Most jobs require-

certain age experience availability

Mangers go for people who they see doing good in their job. For me i know i have job myself and it wasnt easy to find. I had no experience i didnt know anything. I was trained like every other employee at my job, But now i know a lot more positions. If my manager is low on staff he knows he can rely on me to come in and help, better for me i make more hours which makes me makes me happy knowing I'm making money for myself.

Its better having a job where you get along with your employees. Find something your really interested. Dont choose something is gonna make you miserable.

One day their is gonna be job youll have where they pay more then you will get paid for a part time an youll probably get more then $8 of course.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
82BA3E4396CC,"Imagine you are going to a diffferent country, and you do not know anything about that country or how it works and you have only heard people talk about it or may have seen it in movies. But you know you have to go there because the education is not well supported by the government, and the president is corrupt and does not care about its people in your country so that is your option to be something in life. It is good to hear what other people have to say even their personal opinions because you may never realize that you may be in their position in the future struggling.

Knowing as a kid that you have to listen to adults, but you may think it is not neccessary, I have thought the same thing before I was a teenager and before coming to the USA from Generic_City only knowing 1 word in the new language that you are going to be using the rest of your life everyday. I was born in Generic_City 2006 and moved to Generic_City I grew in a town where snitching and getting into peoples life is a daily routine because people don't finish school bacause they are lazy and others who work to feed their family and never get an education and if you get to finish everything there arent many job options to enforce your career or to make money for yourself so you have to travel to the larger cities for work and you only get paid for day not by hours unlike the US.Everybody tells you to go to the US but everyone gives up because getting paper is super hard and stressful, the chance for you to get accepted are low so people just stay and get a job at a small store until they die and it is sad because they can't reach all the goals they wish they could achieve in such a developing country.

Since I was 4 years old I wished to always go to the US because at that age I already knew I had no future back there and I used to watch tv a lot and the US looked like a promising place to live at and there we're more job opportunities and I could be what I wanted thats what everybody told you back in Generic_City, and some of it was true you get more chances to be what you want and not end up as a ""vago"" and not be a blockhead. People used to say the language was their biggest obstacle even my mom said the same thing well I never thought I would come to the US of A I guess until my mom met my stepdad who brang us here but before comeing we spent a whole month and more on papers before coming to the US.It took a lot of money, work, and time which was the reason I did not want to come to the US because it frustrated me seeing my mom stressed out about some papers that we needed to come here where I now stand.

Once I came to Virginia my mom, and stepdad told me to work hard because the language would be my struggle as well as his when he came to the US around 20 years ago. My first day of school I got in trouble in less that 1 hour and 27 minutes into the day, because some kids decided to bully me and thought I wouldn't say a word because I didn't know how to even say good morning in english well this all happened inside the hallway bathroom I beat them up because I totally forgot fighting was not allowed in the schools and they said ""He started it he was trying to hurt us we we're just trying to use the bathroom and he came out of nowhere"" and I got in trouble I wanted to say something but I only knew one word in english which was ""hi"". My school was Generic_School which I used to get taken out of my class for a teacher to teach me english she told me I was the fastest english learning student she had in her entire career as a teacher which I was already starting to speak the language 6 months into the year with no background of me speaking the language in Generic_City. I was in fourth grade by the time I could comprehend almost what everyone was telling me and all the kids became my friends even the ones who had bullied me a year ago. I had struggles with my homework a big struggle my stepdad would come from work late and stressed out and he would not have much patience while helping me with my work and I would say I learned the language because I needed to become independent as soon as possible because it was too much stress on my back not being able to do anything on my own. I came to a whole different world where the school system was different even a math problem was different than what I used to learn back there I was 8 when I came.

Something I really like i the fact that there is snow here in the US because there was no snow where I used to live, as well as water I noticed that there was water everyday and all night here in the United States. Water is something that lots of developing countries may not have while others have it for their wet weather and jungle like land where it always rains. In the town I lived you only used to get water for 2 hours of the day and not every day.      ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
1E8ABB190763,"I want to have a beneficial and efficient work. There is two way to do it one is doing it alone and the other one is do it in group. I think the best way to have a beneficial and efficient work is doing it in group. So, I have some facts that can convince you to think the same as me. This can benefit eveyone on the group because all can share ideas ,we can work in the difirents parts at the same time, they have more time on the breaks ,and they have more time to review the work and checks if there is a problem.

I notice doing in group is more efficient and can help improve the working on the on projects or works. First, I think that share ideas with the group will benefit you and all the group. So, they all can have ideas to continue and do not minds in blanc. This will be helpful for the groups because we are more efficient than do it separate. Also, I think this benefit every one on the group to do not get struggle because we are out of ideas.

I know that working in group is a benefit because every one in the group is having more breaks than they will have doing separate . Also , this help every one in the group because we are less probable to stress because we all have more times on the breaks to be relax. although, they can work in differents are of the work at the same time. So, every one working in different parts benefit they because they are working faster and efficient. I think we can get more time to help each other on the work and this is great because we learned and help the group to have a good work.

Every one doing this in group is a benefit and helpful way. So, doing this in group is helpful because every one can check differents part of the work and look if they find a mistake. Also, I think this is help because maybe a person did not see a mistake another one can see and can help fix it. I think all the group will benefit and we will notice the difference by working alone and working in group. Last, this benefi every one on the part they work because help about finding mstake and review if they something wrong.

I think doing a team work is good because every one can improve their skills or habilities . Also, this is helpful to every one to find mistake at tell where are the mistakes are and help us fix it to have a good work. at my point of view , every get experience working with people and sharing time with person to make a good work. So, this help by having more breaks than working alone, be less stress trying to finish the work ,

be more relax ,and be more concentrate in the work . In conclusion, this are facts and examples why working is group is more helpuf , efficient and benefit. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
4E91C3BA11D0,"Imagine being a new sixth grade student in middle school and, not knowing the expectations nor, knowing anything about the place you are around. Elementary students should need to know what will go on in middle school and it's expectations. So explaining it will make it easier for sixth grade students.

once coming to middle school

First of all, students should know about the class room expectations. Middle school student should be respectful, responsible, and productive. Kids should know better than to play around ,or ignore teachers and ignore their work. Students should come to school ready to learn not to play around. Kids should be quiet while a teacher is talking and should also be silent while taking a test or quiz. They shouldn't be throwing stuff around the room or be yelling or screaming. When i used to talk i would get in trouble but, i would always listen to the teacher.

Second of all, students should know about halls and lockers expectations. While walking in the halls kids should be safe. Students should not run in the halls and, should not push and shove other kids. Because students could get injured. At your lockers you should get your things for the next class and not talk to your friends in the hallways. If you cant open you locker ask a teacher near by. But you shouldn't kick your locker. If i couldn't get my locker open i would just ask a teacher to help me. Don't kick or slam you locker respect the schools things because it provides you with the things you need to learn with.

Last but not least, you must know the lunch expectations. During in line to get your lunch you shouldn't be touching everything nor, keep a hold up in the line. Be productive and get your lunch fast then take a seat at you table. If you need anything raise your hand dont get up with out permission. Don't throw food at people pick up your trash once you leave and, dont make a mess. While eating you should stay in you own seat and not at others tables. Once i would go to lunch i would get my food fast then take a seat with my friends at my table. In the cafeteria it is super loud so try not to scream or yell because it will be extra louder if you do.

In conclusion this is why teaching kids about middle school is a good lesson to teach elementary school students. So that once they go to middle school they would be ready. The students would already know most of the school expectations and how things work around.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
5C72AB0B1232,"What's a career? a career is an occupation or a profession that someone do. People can start their career at any time in life. It's a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because career would prepare students for what they want to become in the future, and it can help students learn more skills and experience when they work with others.

Firstly, career can prepare students for what they want to become in the future. Consider someone who wants to become a doctor. People who want to become doctors usually work at the hospital so they can watch how doctors do their work. For example, Generic_Name was a student at Generic_school and he wanted to become a doctor one day. Generic_Name started to work at the hospital after his parents told him that they didn't have money to put him in college. Generic_Name learned a lot of of things about doctors before he went to college; and when he went to college, it wasn't so hard for him because most things about doctors seemed familiar. Generic_Name graduated with a bachelor's degree and he became a good doctor. This proves that committing to a career at a young age can be helpful in the future.

Secondly, Career can help students learn more skills and have more experience of things in life. for example, Generic_Name loves when someone plays guitar and he always say that he wish he knew how to play guitar. Generic_Name was hired after he applied on a part time job which was called "" Teen fun time"". it was a good job for Generic_Name because they could teach him many different things including guitar. Generic_Name was taught how to play guitar by some guy who liked how Generic_Name was a hard worker and nice to everyone. After hard months of training, Generic_Name could play guitar by himself. people loved how Generic_Name played guitar, therefore, his manager made him play at the entrance of the building so people can enjoy while entering the building. Generic_Name was able to draw, paint, and cook after he worked at the Teen fun time for a while. Teen fun time made Generic_Name a good guitar player and a great cooker.

Some people may say that it is not a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because some teenagers turn into disrespectful children to their parents when they receive their first checks. For example, Generic_Name was hired at the boys and girls club. After he received his first check, he could not do anything his parents ask him to do and he would claim that he's going to be late to work. His parents did not like it and it made them unhappy sometimes. However, committing to a career at a young age is good because it teaches teenagers a lot of stuffs they need to know in life. Teenagers also make money from a career, which means that they can help their parents with small needs like buying clothes for themselves and shoes.

In conclusion, a career at a young age prepares students for their future career. If someone want to become a pilot, they have to work at the airport so they can get some ideas on how planes fly. Committing to a career at a young age can help students learn more skills and have more experience on things in life. By working with people, students can learn new stuffs from people they don't know. This proves that committing to a career at young age is good for students.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
EFBF293CC2AF,"Dear, Local hospital manager

I would love to visit your hospital because i can imagine my self walking through those doors, smelling medicine and noticing the sound of machines, seeing surgents running and rushing towards the surgery room, soon to save a human's life.

I wanna visit your hospital because i think its pretty cool and brave what you guys do. One reason why i would love to visit your hospital would be because i think that the hospital is a very cool place, surgents get the feeling when they save someones life and they get to use some cool machines that they probably havent used until they started to working in the hospital and they get to open up people and see the inside of a person's body. One other reason why i think it's pretty cool, is that there is three different type's of doctors, the first kind of doctor would be an Intern, which is a doctor that just started there first year as one and that is learning to be the best, another kind is a mid tern resident, which is the second to highest level, one last kind of doctor is the highest which is a resident,i think its smart that you guys have that because i think it keeps everything organized and it keeps every doctor in order. One example why i want to visit the hospital is that i want to make people that they are in good hands, that they are going to be safe, also i wanna become one of the best surgents out there, most of all i just wanna help and save lives, i think its cool that surgents get to use machines and other tools to open up people that need medical help. When i was smaller i would have to take care of my sister because my mom would be busy going to work, one day my sister got cut when she was playing outside she was bleeding a lot that i grabbed some paper and rolled it around her leg and then called my mom because it seem so deep, ever since that day i wanted to be a surgent because i didnt feel disgusted by the blood and stuff, i thought it was pretty cool that i cured her leg, and stopped it bleeding.

I wanna have the opportunity to visit your hospital because i wanna save peoples lives when i grow up and have that desperate feeling when you save someones life. One reason why i want to have that feeling is because, i just wanna save peoples life and make them better, even though it might get exhausted its gonna be worth it because at the end of the day i think of how i saved someone's life. Another reason is because i wanna see how the hospital works and how every gets in managed, i want to learn if there is anymore different kind of doctors for example, there is cardio heart surgery, plastic surgery and more, i wanna be a surgent when i grow up because i wanna save peoples lives, i feel like there is so much good around the world that i wanna do good when i grow up. One example is that, me being a surgent would be a good idea because i can learn and help people that are struggling in life,i wouldnt just get to help people lives inside the building, i would get to save someones life outdoor of the building too because if something happens to someone then i can help them, if i become a surgent then im gonna work hard and learn about medicine to be the best and help anyone that comes through those doors. I wanna become into a doctor/surgent because i just started watching this show and its very interesting because its about doctors saving other peoples lives and how they struggle and how that connects with there life because they feel like they haven't been spending time with there friends or there family because they just have been busy of work and i feel like ive been learning on how i can not struggle in life if i do work as a surgent.

I wanna visit the hospital because when i grow up i wanna become into a surgent and learn about all the medicine out there. One reason why you should let us visit the hospital would be because i wanna get the opportunity to feel to be a surgent one day and learn about everything. Another reason why you should let us visit is because if some kids are interested into becoming into a surgent then they can think of taking a medicine class in high school and learn about it more so they can prepare them self if they become into a doctor or surgent, being a surgent isnt just about opening people up and sowing them and saving peoples lives, its about learning and learning because every time you do something you have never done before in your life, you have just learned something and by getting the opportunity of just going to see the hospital and seeing how it works, i just have learned something new even though i didnt do anything other than watching. One example why you should let us visit is because we would be learning something new and getting to feel how everything works around the hospital if we were to work as a surgent or doctor. I mostly wanna become into a doctor because i think its cool how doctors are brave and work and how good they are at there jobs, mostly its cool because they learn something new everyday and at the end of the day they have saved a lot of peoples lives or changed peoples lives.

A local company i would love to visit is the hospital because i feel like the hospital is very cool, the feeling of saving someones life is incredible, and you get to learn everything about medicine/medical stuff. I think working at a hospital is a gift because you get to learn and everything and save peoples lives and most of all you learn.

I hope you consider thinking of letting my school visiting the hospital.

sincerely, Generic_Name  ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
B385E5EE33B9,"If you ever get a chance to go on vacation, it should be the Bahamas. The Bahamas will blow your mind away. The Bahamas will have everything you want to see. It will also be the best place you've ever go to in your life.

You would want to go to the Bahamas because the beach is crystal clear. You can see all the baby fish that are swimming around you which is so cool! I always try to catch one but it never works. There will also be very colorful snails stuck on the rocks. They look poisonous so I never try to touch them. You can also go surfing there. I am too scared to surf so I just lay down on the surf board and relax. There are coconut trees near the beach which looks really cool. One of my favorite parts is when big boats pass by and big waves come your way.

Another reason why you would want to go to the Bahamas is because the restraints there are like no other restraints here. The restraints there look big and fancy. The best part is that you get to eat at a restraint for every meal because there is no store there for you to buy food and cook it up. Although that may be a little expensive, but you have to keep in mind that you are on vacation. It takes about ten to fifteen minutes for them to serve your food. I don't know about you, but to me that is not long at all. The food taste so good! They also never over cook your food too! One of my favorite dishes is the shrimp pasta. If you go to the bathroom it is super clean and it smells good too. I hate it when I go in a bathroom that is dirty and smells bad.

Another reason why you would want to go to the Bahamas is because of the awesome, clean, and fancy hotels there. The hotels there are nice and refreshing. It is super clean. There are two closets, two beds, and one bathroom which is pretty good if you ask me. There is also a big TV right in front of the two beds. There is also free WiFi for you to use but that is kinda unless when you have a big TV right in front of you unless if you want to play games on your phone which is what I do. There is also a mini fridge for you to put your water so when your hot just grab the icy cold water out of the fridge to drink. The best part is that there is air conditioning and it actually works.

These are all the reasons why you should go to the Bahamas. All I am trying to say is that the Bahamas is a great place to visit with your family and friends. If you ever get a chance to go on vacation, go to the Bahamas and you won't regret it.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
33DEFCDAD05F,"Technology has made a positive impact in our lives. Technology can be used for many things whether it's browsing the web, shopping, or planning for vacation. Technology has had impacted us negative wise and positive wise. For a lot of people they see technology as a huge positive impact for people.

People may think now that technology is out people contact other people way less but high chance that's not the case. People that do things like gaming or just connection with others online make it way easier to meet other people. For example theres websites like Omegle where you just go on and get into a voice chat with a random person around the country or maybe in other countries. There's also many other websites or apps where you can contact random people or even friends and family. There's also gaming, for gamers you usually go into lobbies or servers with thousands of people which is also an easier to contact people. For example if you own a PC, a PlayStation, or even an Xbox there's many games where you can contact people if you're making new friends or even just playing with them for as long until someone gets off. I have heard many stories where people have met online and grew a friendship even though they've never met in person they probably have each other's social media and numbers.

Many people use technology to shop. Online shopping is an easier way of finding things you need or even things you want. People commonly do online shopping only because it's just easier and quicker. Some people may have a busy schedule so it will make things easier if they're running errands or even just going out and spending time with family or friends without having to add something else to their list of plans. Online shopping is probably something everyone has done multiple times and many people can agree that it is easier and quicker than driving out to the store and searching through the whole store to find the things you want or need.

In conclusion of this technology has made a positive impact in our lives in many things that people do on a daily basis. Technology could be seen as positive or negative depending on how people see it but in my eyes it's done a good job and has definitely made things easier for a lot of people.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
0756FC69B810,"I would like to talk about the interesting quote that Thomas Jefferson wrote,and how he tell us to

""Determine never to be idle."" He thought that is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something, and that we can accomplish more if we are a active person because the inactivity also serve a purpose in every person life.

First,It is awesome has the determination to decide how to do or what do you want to do in your life,because something we may know what we need to do but we don't take a decision to done it. And the reality is that we don't gonna know how much can be done if we don't try to do the things that we wants or needs to done.

Second,everyone has the option of accomplish much more than we think,if we are always doing something,for example,finalize any plan or idea that comes to our heads in any moment,time,or second of our lives. The big thing is never stop doing the things that we wants to achieve,and be proud of what you receive.

Third,we have the option to choose between doing something or stay inactive,because inactivity also serve a purpose. This is the big deal ,sometimes we don't imagine that we prefer do nothing without see it, we don't see what we are doing at the time. That's the power of inactivity. We have to see clearly and make a decision of what we decide to choose.

In conclusion the interesting idea of Thomas Jefferson of write this quote, was a amazing idea ever,because at this time reading his thought we can see the importance of be determinate and be someone who knows how much may be done if he is doing what he needs to do, to have the right to accomplish much more than he thinks,and have the power to choose between doing something or just stay inactive.",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
8E91F0997B77,"The positive attitude is the key of the success in the life. I agree with this statement. We has to have a good attitude everyday in everywhere. In the work, school, and in the house.

Firts, I agree because the attitude is one of the main charisma in a person. In the work everyone has to have a good character with attitude because is important to be a good workers. In the work is very important to arrive all the time with good attitude and be amiable. The customer can stay happy with the workers work with a good attitude. The customer give tips, and the workers are happy. The workers don't have problems with the chief or the boss.

Second, I think that the attitude is important have in the school because every student have to go to the school everyday with a good attitude. The attitude is one of the main charisma that a student has to have. The students with a good attitude everyone spectable by othres students. The attitude is important to have friendly relations. When they are graduated they remenber that it's important to be good with others and continued in to be good person with a good attitude.

Finally, in the house it's important to keep a good character with good attitude. I think that in the family is more important to have a good attitude. If everyone have a good attitude we live in armony and don't had problems to each others. The attitude in the family is one of the most important that everyone has and live without of problems.

In conclusion, the attitude is one of the main charism that one person can had. many people don't have a good attitude with others , but it's important have good attitude in everywhere to be a good people.    ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
F7B478DB88ED,"We are living in a world full of possibilities in the day to day basis, where we could decide wether to go to Paris the next day or stay at home sleeping in bed. The question is what would be a better decision in this set of crossroads. What would make the most out of our short lives we have of living. Perhaps you'll be surprised of how much yoou can accomplish in this lifespan. Being active on a day to day basis has proven to create more happiness and more ""success"" throughout people's lifes.

I think the many witnesses we have of people who have lived a ""succesful"" life is enough of an example. We have heard stories of so many different people who have stood out on their field; celebrities, journalists, corporation leaders, etecetera. What do all of these people have in common? They never backed down from their dreams and took every step in their life in action towards that dream. People like Steve Jobs could've stayed in the comfort of their homes, idle, to the outside world and the possibilities that they had to create something that would transcendentaly change the world. But they decided otherwise, because of their denial to idealness they shaped and transformed the 21st century world as we know it. All the people who we remember and our taught about in our history classes, decided to live their lifes taking action to make a change.

But many times we don't have a goal to find the motivation to take action towards our life. It should be reminded that the actions we take don't have to be for our own desires. Instead taking action and denying to be ideal allows us the possibility of one of the greatest sources of happiness: service to others. We are constantly battered by a world that seems more disastrious everyday, everytime we watch the news we seem to be living in world full of lies and grief. Where innocent people suffer the consequences of actions that are not their own. By denying to idleness and reflecting about the world we live in, we allow ourselves to create an impact on other people's lives. Spreading joy and happiness and making a mark on their lives. While also creating happiness and fulfillment in our own lives.

Perhaps a more gruesome but at the same time important way to analyze the denial to idleness is asking ourselves these questions: ""When I leave this earth, what do I want to leave behind?"""" What do I want my legacy to be?"". Hopefully your answer isn't nothing. Because wether we believe it ourselves or not we all have the capacity, capability, and opportunity to leave a legacy that we are proud of. We are all the determinants of our legacy. Wether it be something of large scale involving the whole world or something related to your best friend. We are all most likely to want for people to remember us. Perhaps it's something chemical in our brains that makes us want this or perhaps we want to know that the time we spent on Earth was of some value. Perhaps in our last hours of living we want the reassurance of this very thing. And the only way to know that we will feel that satisfaction is by taking action today, no matter where you are or what you're doing. After all when people were asked in their last hours of living what do they regret doing, they said that they do not regret doing anything, that insted they regretted not doing the things they could've done. Taking action is the way to leave footprints on this earth, by taking steps forwards, backwards, to the right and left. And perhaps more than one of those steps will be facing the wrong direction but it's important to remind ourselves that we have to keep walking because that's the only way we will realize how much we can accomplish.

Taking action in your everyday lfe and the denial of idleness allows you the possibility to create the world you once thought you could only imagine. By stepping out and seeing what life has to offer wether that be a flower or a river, it is what allows us to accomplish our goals. And the denial of idleness helps you realize that there's people out there who want your joy put out on this world. So my last question to you is: When you wake up tomorrow, will you take a step forward?",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
F144EA4BE505,"is number 1 because same time samtin import is happenings in the school and we can tell are parents what is happenings and is crite we cant have are selfon in classroom we need to log of same tame is reining in the classroom and the strident is text

whet samebari in class and not looking in the teacher bate and same tame we can have acsidid in the classrooms and are parents don't no nation and and the sefon we can used to call are parent for satin is happenings in school

and yes i onto spec whet are family

and same tame want to tell are parent same ting bat we cant to be texting in class we neon to have thebe sefone off and we can text when the school is over yes we can have slfone for text went that school in ban.",1.5,1.5,2.0,1.5,2.0,1.5
C24F3DD7A37E,"What are some benefits of having a good attitude, even in a difficult time? A good attitude can make people successful even in a difficult time. But not always people have a good attitudes, and sometimes affects them. A good attitude makes people strong, and to always have positive thoughts and emotions. Having a good attitude helps people to be more intelligent and to face their problems. It is important to have a good attitude because people can face their obstacles, it gives them many opportunities and experiences to learn.

Nobody is perfect in the world, everyone has obstacles to face forward. But having a good attitude can help them to face their obstacle, it help them to never give up, like famous actors of movies, shows, and many more. Before they came to be famous they face their obstacles to be someone in life. They past through many things to be came successful, but they face them with a good attitude and yep sometimes with bad attitudes. Some actors still have some obstacles to face, but they face them with good attitudes.

On the other hand, having a good attitude gives people many opportunities. People often have opportunities but they don't know how to confront them. A positive attitude helps people in their life because it gives them many opportunities, like

Generic_Name,

the mother of a girl, who had face many problems in her life. She never give up and she always was with a positive attitude, when Generic_Name was 30 years old, one of her son's died from Cancer. At that time Generic_Name was very upset, but an opportunity appear on her life. She decides to take the opportunity with a good attitude. Generic_Name always has a positive attitude even during in a difficult time.

Otherwise, having a good attitude gives people many experiences. Experiences appears in people life so they can learn from them, but having a good attitude makes then more fun and interesting. One of the experiences that learn is that when you give money or food to a homeless they shared it with other homeless with a positive attitude. They think about others, even when they don't have to much. A person once said, When give more, you receive more, that is true because when the homeless shared something with others they receive more but they wait with a positive attitude is like they feel happy, they have a good attitude but at the same not all of them have a positive attitude some of them have a negative attitude because they had a hard time.

Overall, having a good attitude can help people anywhere in the world. A good attitude help people in their future they have obstacles to face, opportunities to take, and amazing experiences to learn. Sometimes people imagine their life with having a bad attitude, and everything that they have will be rare because they will not have the chance to learn or to experience. To the contrary of people with good attitudes are awesome because they are intelligent and they have an incredible wisdom. A good attitude is important because even when people have a difficult time they can face them.    ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
4D23A7FA9408,"Although some say students wouldn't benefit attending classes from home because students will not have the opportunity to work in groups with other students, actually students would benefit attending classes from home because they will feel comfortable and students can be more safe.

Those who believed not being able to attend classes fom home wouldn't benefit students because they can't work with other students. Around 200 articles said that students that attend online classes don't have the best projects just because they can't have other student's opinion. For example, so many different ideas by having a group can be more interesting than only having a person's ideas.

However, students would benefit attending classes from home because they can feel comfortable. Furthermore, a school survey showed that students prefer online clases because that makes them feel comfortable just to be seated inappropriate. I agree with these people because I like to be seated in many ways, but in school rules is only a way to be seated.

Also, students would benefit attending classes from home because they can be more safe. Lately, more than hundred school shootings had happened, so it show us being at school can be dangerous. Other big danger can be gangs at school they can be an influence with so many bad things on a child's life.

In my opinion being able to attend classes at home can make parents happy; they don't have to be worried for their child's safety.

As you can see students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students can't stay connect with other students, actually being able to attend classes from home would make students feel comfortable and secure. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
584A4BB1E954,"Should these summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed ? I think students should designed. students can do this well.

One reason why summer projects from students. Because if the student designed their project they can choose their projects. For example, some students need an essay project but teachers give harder projects for students and they can't do this projects. And some students not have idea about the projects from teachers but when students choose their projects they have good ideas about their projects. However, some teachers did not like to students choose their projects .This is not the only reason summer projects from students is good.

Some may argue summer projects from teachers is good. This is because the teachers have more information about summer projects and they know what kind of projects is better for students. However, some students not have information about summer projects and they did not like to complete the summer projects from teachers in the summer.

In conclusion, I think the students need to choose their projects because if they choose their projects they like the summer projects and they really want to complete their projects in the summer vacation and they have good ideas about the projects.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
D9F549A8EE63,"I agree with Thomas Jefferson we must never be determined to be idle. Becuase life is too short you got to follow your dreams don't be idle. Everday you do more you learn more, you acomplish more as long as you believe, and have the heart for it .I don't like braging about my self but I am allways doing something. Right now i am 18 and belive it or not i own two busniss. I make good money but it everday is a struggle to keep the busniss runnig good and going to school but i never once thought about stoping here i wana do more i wana be sombody .

Frist, reason why i agree with Thomas jefferson is becuase if your idle you will never make it out i promise here is a example Donald Trump he is one of the richest people in America and he has his own air plane decraded with 24k gold so you know he has accomplished a lot of things he can be retired living in a island right now but right now instead he is the president of united states you know why becuase he is not a idle person he wants to do more like what Ragin(rip to thats mans) said ""dont ask what your country could do for you ask what you can do for your country"" and that is what Donald is doing right now he is doing more and acomplishing more .

also, its okay to be idle some times we humans everydody needs a little break just as long as you believe. And make goals for your self you will be alright. The most important thing is that you do it the right way their are no short cuts in life and that is why i agree with Thomas Jefferson ""determine never to be idle.""",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
1204D17C682A,"To conserve energy the students do not Should fallow that policy, because is going to be much stress for the students work ten hours per day. Some students would be affected by the change. Students that work after school are going to be affected by the change. and that also will affected the income that the students have to help their parents, if the students work less hours their income would be affected.

Also students help their parents taking care of their sibling after school, some times also students help their parents at home as clean the floor, wash dishes, make dinner and time for their hobbies, made the life of the students more easy at schools and at home.

students that like to do sports after school as soccer, fotbool, basquelbal, or tennis, some just wants to have a little time of peace by themselves as reading or walking alone those little thing is what a student can miss but if teachers decide to extended the schools to hours late, students also are going to work the same amount of time the only different is that they have to work to hour more each day to complete the forty hours work for week, and those two hours would private students to do what they like to do and make the life more happy.

considering the idea of work after schools some students need that income to help parents bring food over the table this is what some of the mothers do time ago, look the possibility of help their parents by working a little part time and getting food for their tables, always think that those mothers are heroes that god put aver the earth to do the best they can for help their parents, amazing some students already have the opportunity of study because their parents already pay the price of work hard and now we have the opportunity of have a better future.            ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
DEB7816C7CAF,"I gonna maybe take a long summer but i feel like is so nice take a that vacation. I need go to every park and everithyng can i go. They take a good vacation so long but good that is so cool. I need go to Oder side for vacation. they take a education summer and they past so good i think they need more vacation on a school because that is so important for they but in the school any time have vacation i will go to talk my teachers for vacation whit a school people.

i like that school but need more programs and more activities for the students. that is not good because all the time they pass in the class that is so boring i cant now other thinks in the life like how is the Virginia history in the museum Thais a good idea is important that thinks for the students vacation i gonna maybe take a long summer i feel like is so nice a that action. i need go to every park and everything can i go. They take a good vacation so long but goo that is so cool. i need go other side for vacation. They take a education summer and they past so good think they need more vacation i will go to talk my teachers for that vacation whit a school people i like that school but need more programs like more thinks more activities in the life how is the Virginia museum an history that is a good idea is important that thinks for the students vacation.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
F3259CFA6566,"Being yourself brings out the better you in a person. When you are yourself your a better person because your not changing yourself to be someone your not. Sometimes its good to change in your life but don't loose the way you are to be someone worse because your attitude and personality is what stands out the most in you. Most people change because they want to be a better person or they are tired of being so quiet and keep to themselves. The way someone is shows the kind of person you are and to try to change back to the person your not anymore could be difficult because you are changing your ways as a person.

Firstly; being yourself means you are unique in your own way. You don't have to change yourself to prove a point to someone. No matter how mean, rude, disrespectful you are you can't really change the reason I say that is because that is how you are already as a person. Most changes can occur maybe from someone loosing another person like they passed away and it hurts you so much you loose yourself as a person. Changes can reflect you as to what goes on in your life. Like maybe you suffer from abuse, violent actions, or even depression that can change you as a person. Just by being yourself and pushing yourself to change can be such a big change in your life even maybe to your family that are already used to you being a certain way. If you want to change your way of being change to be someone better the who you are now because out don't want to be the person everyone talks about. Just by being yourself you should care about what other people think about you because you are who you are and no one can change that.

Secondly; just by changing you can loose your inner self. You had already been trying to be someone that you like or maybe even respect. If you want to change you should do it for yourself don,t do it for your friends because at the end of the day they won't care who you are or what you are. Most of who you are and what you do can reflect you as a person of good. One thing my grandma would say to me is "" sweetie be yourself don't change yourself for anyone because no one will respect you and love you like your family will"". Be you don't push your inner self away because no matter how rude and annoying you are your still one of the best person in your family. No one deserves to be changed just because people think your not a good person already. Show your inner person because you are probably hiding someone you haven't brought out yet. Most people can bring you down just by talking about you are even getting other people to hate you maybe because your to quite or your not a good person. Be you unique in your own way and show everyone that you are good with who are already.

Thirdly; your personality shows your character as one. No one wants to b friends with someone that he or she is better than everyone else because thats not true. You should always show where you come from even if you are poor and dont live in such a beautiful house. One reason i could say is because most of those things show that you dont care about what people think or say bout you because everyone stands out as who they are. Don't be someone you'll eventually regret being because that could reflect on you changing. If one of your friends, cousins, siblings stops talking to you dont bring out a mean person you weren't supposed to be because they could pull away from you and not want to be near you again. You also can't be a coward just because someone gives you advice on changing the way you are because maybe they are trying to help you be someone better and of good. Be the person that stands out for being himself or herself and not the one that everyone says oh they copy everything

I get or ever wanted to be more popular somewhere be more known as a person.

Fourthly; Changing back someone you had already change to can be difficult because you had already pushed away the person you didnt want to be. Trying to go back to that person you used to be can be long ago by the time you try to change back to that person. Most of the people that pushed away from you now may never come back because of you changing who you are and or were at one point. Most of things you did to change yourself can just now affect you and can never be out back together again. Be yourself dont be that person that tries to back to him or herself just because you dont like the now you. You decide to change to be a better person so move on and keeping that person you wanted to be at one point. You've changed for a reason so now you should em braise it and love your change. Who you chose to be will be that same person you'll possibly be one you are more grown into life.

Lastly; be yourself and dont try to change yourself to be someone your not. Who you are now could help you throughout the rest of your life. Maybe not always be yourself but dont do it or someone that doesnt deserve to see a change in you do it for yourself. Do everything to try and be your own and unique person all at one because a lot of people would like to around you. Just by being yourself could always reflect on who you want to be once you grown up and leave from your families home.",5.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
B4B82E063D04,is setting an good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people or are there better ways too influence others my opinion is that setting a good example can influence other people around you why because if they see you do something good they might catch on and say oh since he was being nice im start doing the same thing and start doing good deeds and that will help others because than people will start catching on and start being to nice to everyone. your setting example for the younger kids because most of the kids look up to there older siblings saying when i grow up i want to be like them so setting an example for the youth or anybody is great. it also helps with safety too if there was something going down like a robbery or a shooting adults will probaly try yo protect the younger kids and than when some adults see some kids by themeselves they will see other adults and run to protect more kids. and if your in school and you went to class and show up on time teachers can use you as an example for coming in on time being ready to do your work and people will look up tp that and say i want my teacher to use me as an example and start doing the same thing they'll be on time and ready to do there work. ,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
272CA21BAE13,"Some parents think that is normal for students to choose a career a young age, but other people think that is most better for students to choose a career when they feel get ready for to take this responsibility. Why is importan taht students to choose a career to young age? Although some say it is good idea for students to commit to a career to young age because the students can to learn more, actualiy it is a bad idea for students to commit to a career to young age because the students don't have time for explore new things and they don't have time for fun in the high school.

Some person belive that is is a good idea for students to commit a career to young age. One reason is because the students can to learn more in a specifit environment.

For example, the students who choice a career by time they enter high school. They have a idea about the class they want to take. For this reason, when they finish high school they are more prepared. A 35% the students choose a career to youn age because they think it is help for your future.

However, it is bad idea for students to commit a career to young age because they don't have the opportunity to explore new things. For example, in the high school the students have the opportunity to choose 2 or 3 elective class. this clas to help the student to find or explore a new hobby,and some time this class to help to discover what do yuo like or what do you want in the future. In my opinion, I think that this class are good for the students who not have a idea what they want to study in the future. For example, I want to learn to play guitar and I take the music class, but I discover I am so bad in this type of class. My second year I take a math class and I discover taht I love math and I think that I want to continue to learn about this class.

The other reason is it is bad idea for students to commit a career to young age because the student don't have time for fun. One reason is that students is only focus his study and they don't pay atention her and his friends. they are worry because they have -B in your class or they don't make the homework. In my pinion, It is good that they are worry for your grade, but they need time to fun because tha teacher and old people think taht is good that students take a breack (rest landing) some times. In my experince, I heva alot of memory with my friends for this reason I recommend all students pay atention your frinds and create a lot of memory like me. But no forget the school and the most importan your family.

In conclution, it is bad idea for students to commit a career to young age because they need to consider what they want to study in the future. In my experience, is most better to take time to fun with frinds, your family and take time think about what do you do in your future.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
CA73BDEC2752,"I disagree with what John Lubbock saids ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I strongly disagree because we are influnced by the people we hang out with. Like for example in America we have diferent accents all around the map and thats because the people near us influnce one another. They influnce one another by sharing cultures and beliefs. For example in louisiana they have martigra but it did not originate in louisiana, in new york they have a lot of italian people, and we all enjoy eating ethic food such as chinese food, tacos, pupusas, italian food. All of those things influnced americans and their traditions and customs which impacts thier morals.

As we all know everyone has morals but those morals are influnced by people, such as our friends, family, teachers and coworkers. Ones morals has a big role in character. I would even say its the biggest factor in what builds pur character. A persons moral is what tells them what is right and what is wrong, what they should do or what they should not do, wether to pick option A or option B. Morals are a part of someones character, its what builds thier charater. For example if someones morals aren't made up and they do not know what is good and bad then thier character might need some work.

I get where Mr. Lubbock gets the idea of ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it"" but I also think that social class has alot to do with your character. I think that the different social groups have a varaity of character building factors. I believe this because for example a person that only makes 20 grand a year has a lot more struggles than a person that makes 100 grand a year and those struggles impact ones character.

In conclusion I disagree with John Lubbock because I believe morals, social class and people around us influnce our character. I believe all those factors play a major role on who we are because it is human nature to adapt to surroundings. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
0D00750E249B,"The school should proved a better and healthier lunch menu. Schools cafeterias plans to change to a now school lunch menu. I think is good idea to change the lunch menu.

The school menu repeat the same food every day. For example,the students are boring that school lunch menu don't change the food for a better that the students can be satisfy. First at all,some of the students skip classes just to go to buy good food outside the school. In addition,would be great if the department that make the menus can approve for the people who work in the cafeteria to give a good food that can help student to don't sleeps during the classes and have energy when the classes start and they can put attention. Also,changing the lunch menu the student can attend to the school every day because some of the students don't come to the school because they don't like the type of food that they give. In conclusion,for benefit of the student would be a excellent reason to change the school lunch menu.

In the school lunch menu there are food that contain a lot of grease. For example,that type of food with grease can make the student get sicken. Moreover, the grease can be accumulate and affect the heart of some of the student. Also, there are more possibility the the system of the stomach be affecting,the the amount of grease that is use in the food. In other hand, the grease can make the student be obese there are many case in school there are a lot of student obese because the food that school provide contain to much grease. In conclusion,All the food that is in the school menu can cause several problems for the students.

While other argue that change the lunch menu is a good idea,but there are other argue that change the lunch menu is not a good idea because there are some student that have a favorite food from the menu and they want the menu to stay the same. Although this might be valid, there are several important idea to considered,such as,some of the student pay there food but the food is not good enough. For example,some of the student buy the food in here of the school because they to have energy to made all the classes. So, They don't eat at home because there are not a lot amount of time so they decide to came to eat to the school but there is not a good food. However,sometimes the lunch food is costly but there are time the food is not full cook. In conclusion,the student pay the food to eat because is important to be healthier.

The school don't change the food every weak and same day they have the same food. On the other hand,there are food that are not healthier for the student to consume. At the end, to have a good care for the student there need to be a good food. Althoug a really good food help student to have energic.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
1CB9668F242D,"There are so many enjoyable ways to spend time outdoors. That is bike riding,skateboarding,rollerskating,

surfing,scuba-diving,camping,hiking,rock climbing, and snow boarding. However,the most people enjoy doing are skateboarding and bike riding. Mostly,during the summer,friends gather around the neighborhood and teach themselves how to skateboard and bike ride.

However,most parents disagree with having their children ride bikes and skateboard. Most parents think that their children are going to get abducted,raped,kidnapped or get hurt. Some parents also think is a good idea for their to children to skateboard and ride bikes outdoors,so they can cope with talking to people. Well I think is a bad idea for children to ride and skateboard in the Summer alone without parental guidance, because it takes a lot of training and focus to bike ride or skateboard. Some people can even scuba-dive if they have the experience. Most people like to spend time outdoors,for example,they can invite some friends over for some barbecue.

People like to spend time outdoors doing fun stuff like Snowboarding. Snowboarding is a cool way of spending time outdoors,because a lot of children like to play in the snow,so snowboarding is a fun way of playing in the snow. There are so many outdoor events like,Easter and partying. A lot of children like to hunt for Easter eggs during Easter,because they find eggs,candy and so on. Sometimes,most people like to go to outdoor-clubbing to chill,relax, and relieve stress. Some other people don't like to spend time outdoors during the night because they either don't have time or they have important things to do.

Mostly,during the Summer,most parents take their children outdoors to teach their kids how to ride their bikes. Eventually,people might find the activities mentioned above enjoyable,because they get to tell their friends their parents thought them how to ride a bike and skateboard,they could assist their friends. People like to spend time outdoors with friends than stay home alone and do nothing. They could try and teach themselves how to ride their bikes. If parents stay outdoor with their children on a campsite,they could make smores with a campfire and enjoy.

In conclusion,people should stay out more often so they can learn how to snowboard,skateboard,bike ride,rock-climb,roller-skating,surfing,camping,hiking,scuba-diving and jet-skiing.              ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
D044FCEAE0D7,"Based on my experiences

I agree with Emerson's statement when he said, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. sometimes in life we have to do things that we already have mastered but it never grow. One time when was little child I learned that I can't master the things that I already have done.

For example; My brother took his master degree when he was 22 years, now he wen back to school to take his master degree again .He regret what he already took his master degree in the past and come back to take it again it did't help him it all. another example my friend decided open his old store after the government shut it down. he open store and the government came and shut it down again. I learned in this life somethings that we mastered we should leave it behind and move on to different things. I try do something I dont liked it didn't work it all but when I try work on the stuff and things that I like it works and master it no matter what the thing is. This why in life we should master the things we like and never go back to it .

While, I understand that some people disagree with Emerson's statement when he said, ''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow'' and could be right sometimes we should master all the things we have been done in the past .

These are the reasons and specific examples why I agree with Emerson's statement when he said

''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''.  ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
F7CF6202A7FA,"In the past, I think I studied really bad and I didn't get a high school diploma. I think I agreed with Emerson's statement because I need to try harder and get a high school diploma, although some people might say I disagree with Emerson's statement.

I agree with Emerson's statement because I need to study harder. To begin with, I need to pass this class to get good grades. Additionally, I have to spend time for studying and get ready for another test. I will not get frustrated and confused for this test. Next, we studied together with my friends so that helps me boosting my grades. My friends would help me and studied together so gives me to memorize my brain and getting ready for the test. Finally, I will try my best and think harder so I can track my grades and make it smarter. Furthermore, I will able to check my missing work so I can get back for my passing grades. That said, I would agree with Emerson's statement.

I agree with Emerson's statement because I'm getting a high school diploma. First, I have to check my grades to get an high school diploma. I will able to see my passing grades to get my diploma. Second, I will have to take job classing during the graduating year. I would choose to computer science so I have to get mastered of computing. Also, computer science is really hard, so I have to practice for computing coding daily so I can get back on track to getting good grades. When I'm college, I have to get the computing degree is the key to success for good grades. Lastly, I will practice computer coding everyday to get beyond programming and future. But I will take computer knowledge classes and technology to help maintenance computers and resolve computers to fix. It is obvious people would agree with Emerson's statement.

Still, some people might say they disagree with Emerson's statement. For instance, they are struggled to keep things up, however, the grades are getting down. I'm feel depressed when I don't know about combing computer codes. Also, I can't even focusing on work so I tried to get help with others. Sometimes, I would provide an assistance when I'm doing my work. My friends would teach me for how I do computer coding to get some provide information. As I said, they agree with Emerson's statement.

That was being said, I have to try harder and get high school diploma, I would agree with Emerson's statement. In the future, I will apply a job for a programmer to get career information. I have to code, work hard and get some activities to do. I will train hard and get involved with my career.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
0EE67777ABB5,"Do you think having a positive attitude would always bring success in life? Always having a negative attitude wouldnt really take you anywhere in life. But, having a positive attitude would bring success in life, because nothing would be in your way to reach your goals you want to reach. For example, the prompt says It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Therefor, being a positive person would bring better life choices in the future.

Agreeing with this statement would represent you as a positive person. Some examples would be, being positive would bring better benefits. This stands for being a nice and positive person would bring new and better things in life. Like, having a better job than the last one would bring you positive energy because your getting paid more than the last job you had. This could lead to always having a positive attitude every time.

Another example for agreeing to this statement would be, a positive attitude could sometimes bring better opportunities in life. This represents being positive could bring good or bad things later in life. In addition, this could be like coming to school every day and being prepared to learn could bring good things in life. Or, not coming to school could bring bad benefits in the future. this would also represent you as a good and caring person or a bad and irresponsible person.

In conclusion, having a positive attitude could sometimes be the key to success in life. Therefor try to always have a positive attitude, life could be hard sometimes and wont go the way you want it to go. That's why you should never give up and think positive of the positive consequences that could happen. Also, having a positive attitude could bring better friendships that could last for a lifetime. these are all my explanations on why positive attitude is the key to success in life.          ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
60CCF0F2DF38,"Dear Winston Churchill,

I strongly believe that, failure plays a huge role in pursuing success, and I have a personal story and also information to back up my statement ""that failing is the key to success"".

The news article of daily life, had a section dedicated to failing is a key to success, in that portion it talks about how the most successful people in the world had to fail so many times and hardship in that portion of the article it interviews Bill Gates and he quote on quote said that ""failing thought me that you have to try harder and harder every time you fail in order to successed"", and without failing he would not be the CEO of Google.

I personally have experienced how failing is the key to success. I started playing football in my freshman year in high school. I was trying so hard to get a starting position on the football team. I was doing really bad during team practice, and one day my coach came up to me and told me that I should quit football, and how it was not the right sport for me. So I got cut from the team but I did not listen to what my coach said to me. I kept practicing over the off season working harder then ever. When sophomore season came up and we had to go through tryouts in order to make the team. I was doing really good in the first two days of the tryouts but then I started doing really bad on the third day, and then the coach came up to me on the last day of the tryouts, and told me that I did not make the team. I started feeling really hopeless but I still did not gave up and kept working harder and harder. On my junior season it was time for the football tryouts once again. I started doing really good, and the coaches were really impressed of what I was capable of doing. Last day of the tryouts the coach came up to me, and told me that he was really proud of me. He was really surprised that I didnt gave up, and after that he told me I made the team as a starting defensive tackle.

In conclusion this is why I strongly agree that failing is a key to success, without failure we as human beings would not be able to improve in our day to day life. It is because of failing which keeps us successful, and makes us humans work harder for what we want in life.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name         ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
F893E9ED1F0C,"Should school have to add one and half hours to each day? I disagree because student have to do stuff after school like some student have practice for sports and more. Another reasons why I disagree is because student might not like school and it can get boring. Something else why I disagree is because parents might want you after school for something and if you come from school late them can't do what your parents are telling u want to do.

Some reasons why I disagree is because you might have to do thing after school. Something are you might have sports practice for a team or for clubs. Another reason why is because some students have family things to do out of school and it would be for a long time. Some student would have doctor appoints and that is very important.

Another reasons why I disagree is because student will get bored in school. Some student can start to get mad try to leave the school and get in trouble and the student can get in a fight. Something else is that student can fall asleep and not pay attention to the teachers and they can get trouble as well as the student can stay even longer. Something is that they would not be able to learn if they fall asleep.

Last reasons why I disagree is because parents might need their child after school for something. There parents might need them to help clean them clean there house. If they need to tell them something important. Another reason why is because there parents might need help to buy food for there house. Some parents might not like that because they would not be able to see there child for a long time.

That why I disagree because school is just for certain time it not all day. Some student will get bored and not want to come school again. They might have thing to do after school like sports and practices or other thing. Some student parent might need help from there child and would want to see them more time not for a little while. That why I disagree that we should not have add and half hours to each day.                                                                       ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
CA3EB3AA11FC,"yes, I am agree with that ..

Because it's true the can show the the act of our felling in this three words ..

1.. be anxious

2.. Felling 3.. not to Belief the are self

...

1.. Be anxious .

in the world 99% of population the have a lot of staff going on in the are idea or concept , to how to do the are work , how to do the are staff , and how to do the are poraplem self .

,, and the have lot of pressures on the thought

. an effect feeling or image retained after an experience . A mark produced on a surface by pressurre and the can show the felling thaey have . the did not seeying the are felling cuz the are sedition the are fell and the don't want to tell anyone and the are worry about it .

that why the can not change they are are life .

2. Felling. .

All the copies of the a pubilcition printed at one time from the same set of type.

some people did not showing the are felling . the are state of being withe the are self and the can exp lean what the have wane what the have need to do in the live the are confuse for anything and the are scyer for that to tell anyone.

same time the are thinks if the do sorting wrong it,s never gonna right and never gonna right.

3 . Not to Belief the are self.

sometime the not blivet or respect the are self and the are urgent to someone else to do the are work and the can impressions the are felling. some time the sending a person to do somting for it .

like they are sending the a person to giving for something the are need it cuz the shameful to to something by the are self . and the are can not doing the staff the .

In the life everything in impossible we can do anything in live we can do the best we can go the way we want to go. over time everything is going to change the live , the friends, the staff , the feeling . the every secant . don't be shay for samthin you really when it or need it you can not Chang you can not be the beast you never be porfect in the live . be porfect in live if you not make your miss tikesa you can not be perfect in the feucher . if you take the right way you you be the best in the all live thake the good posittion and do good live witout the any impressions fell ......  ",1.5,1.5,1.5,2.0,1.0,2.0
FE7CACFB2B1A,"Some people say, ""Has the limitation of human contact due to use of technology had positive or negative effects on the people's lives?"" Many people think the technology caused caused a great impact in the world, with a positive effects and negative effects. so, most people think the technology had a good effects in the world, because it helps without having contact with others, and olso they can communicate with their family who doesn't live with them, but the technology it can help with many things of their jobs or from the school it depends how you want to use it.

Most people think the technology had a good effects in world, because technology alllow people to complete many tasks without having access to the librery. Technology it helps to be better, if, the people doesn't have technology the world is almost nothing, because the technology had a great impact in everything, with the technology they can get a job, you can teach yourself about everything that you want, the technology can do things that the human can't do it, the technology helps to do this and more. The technology helps to communicate with others parts of the world, technology is a resource more easy to save time, with the technology you can discover things that you even know.

Technology it can help with things of their jobs or from the school, it's going to help people with everything, when people get a job people will need a technolog, because many things are made from the technology buildings, cars, phones, schools, hospitals, etc. The technology is one of the most important methods in the world humans will use it for everything.

At the schol, technology it will help with homework, if, people it's going to do some resources from the school,

if you can't go to the school and somebody wants to learn something from themeselves, this world is practically made for technology. Technology is method to save time when people is doing something from their job or from the school.

Some people who are desagree with statement will say, the technology has negative effects with people, because the technology lost people in the schools, every student in each school are using their headphones, cell phones, and everything in this time the technology loss the teenegers because they are completely focus on the technolgy, but, most people think it depends how you using, if, it will use it in a bad way, people will have bad results, if, people use it in a good way, they will have good resuls. The technology is going to work in both ways, good and bad it depends on themeselves.

The technology it can teach many things thereby people has to know how to use it, because the technology has many advantage and many disadvantage people can use it, technology is the scientific knowledge and equipment that is needed for a particular industry, etc. to know developments in computer technology is required for some jobs, a person whose know technology works involves practical skills, but the technology it can lost people too, so,

the people has to try to use the technology only in emergency, because the technology is not play, you can have a good results or bad results, it depends on you, technology can be very helpful.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
87692B9A8184,"Have you ever felt that the weekend isn't enough? that you might wanted to do some kind of activities during weekend, but the time wasn't enough. I bet that you did it, and I'm going show you my point of view of why we should keep having a normal school week of five days instead of a four-day school week.

Although some say that my school should adopt a four-day school week by adding two hours each day. Actually, my school should not adopt that kind schedule, because the standard week with eight hours each day increases the productive time, and the standard week allows student to do other activities after school, such as: work, to do homework, sports or even spend more time with family and friends.

Those who believe that the school should changed their schedule from standard five-day work week to a different schedule model that consists of ten hours per day have their reasons. They think that weekends aren't enough and they really need and extra day off to cover their needs. They also think that two extra hours each day are not a big sacrifice, knowing that they are going to have an extended weekend and making the same amount of hours which means the same paycheck amount, and they might have time.

One reason why the school should not changed their schedule of five-day school week to four-day school week is because, the standard week of five days increases the productive time of each student. In this case students might feel tired of being ten hours in school, and at the end during the last period of class they wouldn't pay attention to the class, because they would feel to tired of had spent almost half-day in school. As example of this is myself. If my school adopt this new policy, I wouldn't be able to keep my grades high and I wouldn't pay attention to the last period of class, because by that time I would be tired and bored of have stayed that long and having classes the all day. Therefore the schedule of five-day school week should not be changed.

Another reason why my school should keep its schedule of five-day school week is that, the standard week of five days gives the opportunity to do activities after school, such as: work, homework, sports or spend more time with our families. A perfect example of this is my friend, PROPER_NAME. PROPER_NAME goes to school, but he lives alone. So, he pays rent, his cell-phone payment and food. Then, he really needs to work after school to pay himself. If our school changes the schedule of five-day school week that each day is formed for eight hours, instead having a four-day school week of ten hours per day, but having an extra day off. PROPER_NAME would be involved on a problem, because he wouldn't be able to have a job after school. Therefore my school should not change

its schedule of having five days of school.

Based on the reason that I gave, it's clearly to see that having four-day school week offers good benefits that the regular standard weed of five-day does not give, but I strongly believe that the five-day school week is way better then the four-day school week. Although some say that my school should adopt a new kind of schedule that some business are implementing called four-day work week that consists of extending the school day two hours. Actually, my school should not adopt this new idea, because the standard week formed by five day of eight hours increases the productive time, and it allows student to do different kind of activities like have a job, homework, play sports or even share time with family. Therefore four-day school week should not be accepted in my school. ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
24C654C85C1F,"We as high school students should make our own decisions for classes. But for younger age kids, we should pick there classes as teachers and they will just need to do the work. Kids that are young will not have the option for drama until they are in high school or middle school.

Students should have the right to pick a class because its what they want to learn about. It should not be required, the school shouldt make you take a class that you may not like. We as Students can make these type of decisions or we can choose something new, Students can pick new classes and learn something new.

School's should make these Kids take these certain type of classes because it helps you and its mandatory. for example, if you take art class then you will need to take drama class too. Both of these classes will help each other and you will have background knowledge. The school is basically trying to help you by doing this method.

At the end of the day whatever method your school does, your going to have to listen to them and comply by the rules. its really not hard, unless you are not trying to graduate. Also if you are not feeling a class or you just dont like it then you can talk to your councilor or a trusted adult in your school.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
E847B658E4DA,"Is it important to express your emotions? Is it good to live a healthy life? The way you move, the way you control your movment is all up to you. Is this activity enjoyable for you?

First, this activity has been done by everyone in the world. Which is dancing, everydody at least dances once in their lives. As we speak some people take this activity to the next level. Performing at competitions or shows people pay to watch. This activity is not only enjoyable but educational for those who seek interest in dancing. There are so many things you can learn froming dancing like tap, ballet, hip pop, jazz, and ballroom dancing and more.

Second, you express your emotion, all that anger and sadness you hide, you put that into your dance its what makes it special. Do what your body tells you to do, let out whatever it is your feeling, let your emotion tell a story. Its like writing a story in a book but the only thing different is that you are moving.

Third, dancing takes alot of energy, so that means you have to have a good meal before you can dance. Streach your body so you won't pull a muscle, which can be very painful and sometimes can lead to surgery. After streaching, warm up yourself so you can build your stigma, it will help you when you are feeling weak and tired. Always drink water because you are always sweating and you need to hydrate your body.

Fourth, when you are dancing there is never a right to wrong. Its like a test with no answer key, it just keeps going without stoping. Don't doubt yourself because nobody is going to be perfect, if you want to dance like you run the world then trust yourself.

Finally if you enjoy dancing and you have passion, You are going to be unstopable. All you just have to remember is to just have fun and be you. Teach others and show them that if they are feeling alone, they are never alone because you will be right there next to them guideing them every step of the way.

In conclusion this activity is super enjoyable and fun because you will meet new people and you will have new friends and people who share the same intrest as you. Just remeber as long as you, put your mind and heart into whatever you want to do, anything is possible thats why this activity taught me so much about loving myself.        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
39929B24673E,"The success is something that everyone gets one day. Some persons don't success, because they maybe don't have the opportunities to success. Others persons don't success because they don't want to success, they don't want to be a impotant person, with a perfect job, or house. Success sometimes have something bad; to get success, in jobs, or in life, people go throw a lot of bad things. I agree with Churchill's statement, it's a true statement, and so important too.

First, people have to have enthusiasm, if people lose enthusiasm they breakdown, they deteriorate. Failure make some people more weak, and others so hard in thinking in perfect things for there life. Failure is something that every person have, or they go throw failure before. People can failure in jobs, people get fire from there jobs they failure.

Second, failure plays a amazing role in the pursuit of be better; However, when people failure to much, the perfects things come after. In peolpe life something chance when they go throw to much failure. They think different way, they see the thinks differents. When people failure, they start thinking in different way, because they go from failure to failure. People maybe think that they are not going to be a respect, or a important person, that's why they think like that.

However, some people failure a lot of time, but they don't care they try again, and if they failure they try again, they don't stop trying they don't loss enthusiasm.

Example: A person go to a school, to find a job like a teacher, he want to be a english teacher, they went to the main office to talk with the principal. She said, "" We don't need a english teacher in this school, we already have one, and he is so amazing in his job."" The teacher went to the other school to find job. He went in, and talk with the principal, she was so nice, and she accepted him in the school as a english teacher. He was so nervous, and so happy to hear what the principal said. He did not loss enthusiasm, the first school he went they tell him that they already have a english teacher, and they don't need another one. The second school accepted him, and now he is a english teacher, because he didn't loss enthusiasm. He failure in the first school, but he success in the other one he went.

Last, Some persons are amazing to failure, but others are angry, or sad to failure, there is different types of persons. Some they like to failure, some they don't like to failure. All the persons failure in one time in their life, but they maybe success when they failure. Some success and they don't failure anytime. Enthusiasm is something important that any person have not to loss it.

Success is something in your life, but people go throw a lot to get success, they failure and failure, and than get success. Some people don't success, because they don't want or they can't. Once people success, others are going to success too. A person success everyone success. People have to not loss enthusiasm to success. Some people success and don't have failure? Some persons success with not having failure, but later in life failure comes. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
6EF7CBB46501,"The statement that the author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote about to do something else just to be someone in the world, it is completely an error. I disagree with this statement, since, I believe that every person think differently. For example, people has their own ideas and ways how to do their own business. Everyone can make a biggest impact in the world, but, by doing what they love. Not what others think that it could be beneficial for you. To be someone in a world you should believe in yourself, make right decisions, and success.

First of all, people could enter in your mind by telling you what could be beneficial for your life or carer. Some of them accept their opinion and do what they do not like, or love. For example, when students are thinking in what career they want to study. Parents influence in their choices by telling about what career would be properly for them. However, those ""properly careers"" it is not in their list of careers they want to study. This action make some teenangers to take that step of let parents choice by themselves.

Otherwise,

they do not help them to mature or even take responsabilities. Everyone should believe in themselves by doing whatever they love, without any interpose in accomplish their dreams. Since, we have the right to build them, it does not matter if we commit an error. Because of our capacities to avoid them or even get over it and keep going.

People has the right to make big choices in life. Making decisions it is hard and important because it could be beneficial, or even worst. However, if you choice with your heart it might be right but by the time you can change your mind. But, you won't regret it about those decisions because as they say, ""You have to learn for every error you commit to be success."" This means that we learn through the past of the time every fall, because you have to stand up and continue your life. It helps us to growing our knowledge to build a better version of ourselves.

Finally, by being confidence to yourself helps you to surpass any obstacle. Beliving in your ideas and trying to make it come true, it tells us that you are persist person chasing for your dreams. Which is quite favorable for person in any career or even job. Because of seeking to be successful at your own way, by do not depend about what others can say. Everyone has a differently perspective than others by doing what you love without any ""obligation"" or to be oppresed.

In conclusion, I am not accorded by this statement, since, we have different points of view. However, I believe that every human being can make their dreams come true without any oppression by others. People should stand by themselves by starting to be confidence in their belief. Also, by being patience on making important decisions, since, everything takes time. And, do not be afraid on doing what you love because it brings you to the way to be success.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
5C9B1FB411EB,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree with statement because having a positive attitude led to great success and great oppurtunity to do something that you would love, or admire.

With a positive attitude you could do more in life than a person with a bad attitude. For example, a person with a bad attitude trying to get a job as a model but gets mad over how the clothes looks on them or how the photos of them came out. Getting frustrated, or angry won't led to great success that would just make the sitution worser because modeling is a strict job and they have limited time . They can't deal with bad attitude, so you can't success with that job by being anoyed by something that you disagree on . With a positive attitude you could success with modeling because you don't have problems with nothing ,as least you had an oppurtunity to get the job.

Positive attitude led to great success like going to college, getting a good paying job, being respect by others. No one like a disrespecful person by being disrespectful you can't success in life. It's going to be diffucult but as least try be kind to others. People with positive attitude won't have a diffuclt time becuasuse there always kind and respectful to others.

I agree with statement positive attitude is the key to success in life. For example, if i was a hiring someone to work as a model and there two persons try to get the job but i need only one person i would see who haves a positive attitude i woundn't pick someone that don't have respect for others.        ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
82F7D233871E,"Some schools have a program that pairs older students with younger students.

I think this program is good idea for the students because it will help them work together . And it will be good for them so they can be able to learn from each other. It will help the older students to be able to do something after school and help out in there community. Also it will help them get battle in school. They can learn to work with the younger kids. Therefor it will help teachers to be able to get there work done at that time. It will also help there teachers.

For the younger students it will help them learn from the older students and there younger friends. It will also help them in school too to be able to listen to there teachers and there families. It will help them to get smart in school, Help one other, under stand from each other and anchor each other. There for it help there grades get battler. And it will help there parents that work later to get there work down when there kids are at the program. So there parents don't have to get off work so they can get there kids. And it will also help them make more friends and get to know each other.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
244973AE9715,"Many people are kind and do parts in helping others , what they don't know is , the act of kindness either received from or given to someone has a big impact no matter how small or big . Reasons an act of kindness can really benefit someone are , the person might have a better day just because of your kindness , the person might learn from your act of kindness and lastly , a good act of kindness can come back to you from the person who you helped .

The first reason of how kindness can impact a person is , the person whom you helped might have had a bad day or , you never know what someone is going through , they could have a hard life and are hiding it . The person who received the act of kindness might have bad a bad day or life , your kindness could have made that person feel so much better and worthy. Some people don't often receive kindness , you might have put a big smile on their face or , made their day much better . You can be seen as a person with good characters and manners , people can always depend on you if you are a kind person and do a lot to help make someone feel better with words or actions everyday , most people would appreciate you if you did almost anything to help them or make them smile because again , you never know what someone is going through . For example , I partnered up with a girl in our math class , she was crying for some reason and nobody wanted to be her partner , when I told her if she can be my partner , she said yes and sounded really happy when I said . I , of course told her what was wrong , she told me she was going through a lot at home and nobody wanted to be her friend in school , I was devastated to hear that . I told her she can be my friend and for the rest of the day she smiled and laughed .

The second reason any act of kindness , big or small , can impact a person is , the person receiving the kindness can learn from you and make themselves a better character too , you can influence a person with how you act , if you act kind and generous and , make good choices , someone is gonna learn from your words and actions . Same with if your a person who is just rude and makes bad decisions , someone else , will learn from your actions . Many people tend to learn from people in their environment , especially young people , so if a young person sees you offering a kind act of helping to either them or someone else , they can learn from your actions and see you as a big role model , people should always make good decisions for many reasons one being that young people can benefit from your choices and will always look up to you for being the person to guide them through life , many people make bad decisions around children but if you do an act of kindness , to them or someone else , young kids will automatically learn from you . For example , one day me and my little sister were in the park , playing with our friends , we saw an old lady all of a sudden drop her apples , I immediately went to the side walk and helped the lady , I picked up the apples and put them in a safe and clean bag . The old lady thanked me and told me , ""you're well mannered , thank you for your help , I appreciate it , may god bless you"" , I smiled and said ""your very welcome"" . The next day as I was going to the bus stop , to pick my little sister up from school , my little sister ran to me and said ""I sat next to this new girl in our school who was being bullied . I even shared my lunch with her because, she did not have much food at home to bring to school "" . I was delighted to hear her story , I told her why she did that , she responded ""when I saw you helping the old lady yesterday , I realized how nice you were and how happy the lady was , I decided to do something similar "" .

The third reason of how an act of kindness can benefit someone in many ways is , the good act of kindness can come back to you . For example , one day , a girl in our class came late to school , we were in our social studies class , she came and sat down and asked people if she could copy the notes , all of my classmates shouted ""NO"" .

I went up to her and gave her my notes . She was happy and said thank you , when she finished copying my notes , I went to my seat . About a week later , we were having a contest in our school , whoever won would receive a prize . I sadly did not have any knowledge of the topic for the contest . The next day , I partnered up with the girl who copied my notes , I told her about how I wanted to win the contest . She looked happy and told me she knew all about the topic , she said she could help me and I replied with , ""I would appreciate it so much "" . I went to her house after school and taught me all about the animal , we needed to have certain knowledge of the animal to do the contest in our school . The next day , I did the project and the next day ,I winned .I thanked the girl .

In conclusion , any act of kindness can benefit a person , you might make them smile , make them learn , or , the act will come back to you.                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",5.0,4.5,5.0,4.5,5.0,4.0
965DC6768854,"Though most people think the inactivity serve a purpose however, the people always need to doing things in their lives. All the people need to have something to do in their life. Most people in the world think an inactivity person can have in effect to other people, so the people need to always do something in their life. The people need to have more activity in their life. A activity person can have many success things can change their life and the future a new generation in their families. A person with more activity can be more successful .The inactivity is a person lazy can do not care about doing something their life so, they may be do not care about other people too.

Many people in the world does not have a job , but they do not look for it. The people feels lazy to move around looking for work and they only waste their time doing nothing. The people pass their time without a work so, they are not doing nothing for their future for that many people in the world are very poor. They can have a good future if they do not waste their times doing nothing. In many countries there are people who are very lazy for work, so they going to streets to ask other people give money to them. The people have many opportunities in their life but , they do not think about it. An inactivity person do not care about if they can have a job or not. That kind of people just think have a free times. To be a lazy person do not have any purpose in the life. Many children in the world suffer with their parents because, they do not have a job .The children with young age have to work because, their parents are very inactivity in the their jobs. The inactivity can have a effect in the children because they have to go to streets with parents ask for money to other person.

Most people in world are very lazy. Some students have inactivity in the schools .The students when they have to do a work in group, they want to the easy part of the work for that some students have problem when they become adults. Most the students are very lazy so, they want all the things easy. When the students become in adults they think all are going to be easy for them like student years. Sometimes the work is next to them, but they are so lazy for doing any work, so they only avoid the work. The people want to waste their time in easy ways like spend time in home. Sometimes the people want to find a job with easy ways to do it for that many people do not have a job. The students need to be more activity person. To be a inactivity person in young age can have a big a effect in the future. The students need to have a purpose do not have to be inactivity person.

In the world many people are unemployment, so they think that can be better for them. The people can spend more time with their families,but they not need to be lazy. They need to doing something for their country or their families. Many people says if the world have less unemployment the economic can change for a good way. The economic is very important for a future of the countries. If the world can have less inactivity person the economic can change, so the countries can have less poor people.

In conclusion, to be an inactivity person does not have a purpose in life. The people need to always do somethings for their life. If the people always do somethings, that people can change the ways how can be their future life. An activity person always are doing things with a purpose, so the person can be successful in anythings they done. If the people are an inactivity person that mean they can not have any purpose, so the people never has to be an inactivity person. The people never need to act lazy around. Any people need to act like more a activity person so, they can be more succesful in life.                  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
D4A0BB487395,"Have you know that being honest is sometimes good and bad. But to me it likely good because when my mom tell me stuff that i have to be honest she give me a snack. when you be honest it bring you to a better life and the future because so that you are kind with in other and so that you can go to college,and have good grades. also when you are honest to a person, that person will be your friend and know that he will truest you for ever. when my family want me to be honest I sometimes tell them or not or because even if i tell them i will still get in trouble in either way.

honesty can bring you to a better life and future. because so you can have a lot of friend that can trues you, and you can have good grades at school, and might go to college. also when a person come up to you and tell you stuff you have to be honest and tell them no please leave me alone. honest is good in life because no one would like you if you lie with other about stuff you have to be honest to your self sometimes not always. lieing will get you in trouble at school, home, or other places so that why you have to not lie and tell the true. because so people will be happy not mad at you and people like a person not to lie because a lot of people say that lieing is a bad habit for anyone in the world.

when you be honest to your family they would say this kid tell the true all the time he is a good son i every have. and they might give you something like a price for not lieing and your mom or dad they teach you to be kind with others. so when you grow up as an adult you remember what your parents tough you in the past. like be honest, dont lie, always act good to others have respect to teachers or other family member. your family want you to be a better person in the future that why you should tell your parent thank you for telling me to be an a some person in life.

finally when you be honest to teacher they would say you are a good student in the class because you have been kind with student, and you have been telling the true when someone is doing a bad choice. when you be honest in school the teachers will tell your parents that you are doing good in school. school want us to learn make right choices and always be honest around you dont follow want people are do if they are doing something bad in school dont fallow and tell on an adult that they are doing something bad.

honesty is a something you tell that true like it bring you to a better life that you can have a lot of friend that trust you so they dont think you are bad person for a example in school when you be honest the teacher will say you are a good student to have in class. when you are at home if you be honest to you parents they mint be happy and give you a price for being a honest person. honest is a good in life so people will respect you in any way it is important in life.                           ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
CED4F9C63B9B,"The first impressions are almost impossible to change because when people meet new person, their personal information is only what is she or he looks like, so it is hard to change their first impressions, and people do not often change the first impressions.

Firstly, they find the first impressions and guess the person who is she or he because that is what human does every single time when people meet new person. For example, student meets new person who does not look healthy body and the student guess the boy cannot play any sports by seeing his body, but people says that he is the best player on the team. Even if the student watch his game and he plays really good, it is difficult to change the first impressions because he still does not look like athletic person and the student knows how unhealthy he is.

Secondly, people do not often change the first impressions because it is individual opinion so they want to keep it in their mind. For example, there is a man who is very shy and show people that he does not want to talk to anyone, so people decide that not to talk to him. Some day, he talks to his friends and find out he loves talking with people. But his first impressions are shy and not talking with anyone so people cannot talk to him because they are not able to change his first impressions.

However, some people could change the first impression as long as making a good relationship with a person who talks to. For example, there is a man who is really big and angry face. Everyone afraid of talking to him, but a student tries to talk to him and the student find out he is a nice person to talk. Sometime, people can change their first impression which makes the person feel better so the student can talk to easily.

In addition, it could be possible to change the first impression by showing difference between now and before. For example, a student who is being mean to some friends. But some day, the student realize that it is not good to being mean to friends, so he shows the difference which is being nice to friends and helping people instead of being a mean person. Although, the friends change the first impression of the person which makes both of them happier and be able to make better friendship.

In spite of these issues, it is still almost impossible to change the first impressions. So everyone should not focus on the first impressions too much.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
A46DA0EA4F5D,"Four-day School

Debate between benefits and disadvanges. Resume any doing school activities on regular five school day and change that for only four day.

To have a four-day school week, is an option that has to be adopted not only for some of the businesses workers and also by each high school and higher education school after see this reasons.

That is consisting of lose ten hour per week. but those missing hour can be recoup it by extending the school day two hour and increase the time for each class per day, that is an option to increase the atention and time on each class and complete any proyect or assigment toll by your teacher, and if we get the extra two hours, we can get more time with friends and teacher for suport between us on any class someone is failing.

Also, we can adopted an option for the fourth day on the extra two hours, used for time on the library, that can be amazing for the sturent who love reading, or students who love extra time on the sports, or any activity after school.

The fifth day of the week can be used for doctor appoinments or any health situations, you know the great excuse for missing classes on regular school time is because the parents write a note explaining we will be absent of some periods of classes. Doing any that situation on not regular time of school will deacrese the sturent missing on any period of class.

Without forget the teacher's situations who are the parents at the same time and need one extra day for family time and doing regular acctivities with their sons if that they have.

Don't forget the situations on seniors who are the most difficult situations on their life, decide for future, and they need time for keeping all option from universities and college for do the next step, higher education nad considered also job for weekends, also about freshman, who are the chlidren from middle school, they are the situation on needing understanding from extra activities on high school changed from their last rutine.

Another opctions for Friday or Monday free day can be used for community service, with permition of parent and some supervision of some adults, any students who wants participate on this can go and help on cleaning up street and river or any help on relation with community service, also the schools can create any program that consist on get many big companies who wants help students find a job on this new free day and may be part-time on weekend.

Considering:

Only four-day school, forget about the fifth day on school (No coming a little time for five days use the full time on four days)

three free days per week (use this extra time on family or friends meeting, any thing you and your parents want)

No wake up on Friday mornings or may be Monday mornings (dependes on the detition of the school about which day is going to be the third free day, use time for rest and complete responsabilities)

This idea can be not convenient for students with part-time job, because by following this model by extending the school day two hour will decrease the student's time sheet, even though if every one on this situation can use the fifth school day that will be free for a full-time job and get three full-time job.

Always remain. BE ON TWO DIFFERENT ACTIVITIES PER DAY CAN BE HARD AND EXHAUSTING, going school than going to work is exhausting because you don't have time for rest. But, if you get only four school days even though the school increase two hours you will have time after school for rest and doing any proyect or homework and use the other three days for any job you think is convenient.

Knowing disadvantages also remain the solutions and benefits for each disagreement on this proyect, because there are ore of the benefits than disadvantages for more 90 percent of the students.

After mention all points on considering benefits and disadvantages and solutions on that. To a four-day school week. Willingly I conclude with ""Everyone need a three day free from school and just four days on school"". Even though if any student's situation is diferent for using this free day, stay in home, family rutines, helping on home rutines, working or studing. And considering we every one are agree with all on this document, we all together will have the power to do a fight for this new right on high school and college's sturents. ON THE SAME POWER, TOGETHE FOR A NEW RIGHT.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
4248882EDCCC,"Why teachers should designed summer projects? it prepares students to be ready for the next school year. Students actually do what they suppose to be doing. Students don't have tow worried about what they need to be working on. Teachers should designed summer projects because it helps students to learn more on what they need to do and students know what they need to be doing without stressing about it; however if students designed projects it could be wrong.

First, teachers should designed summer projects because it help students on what they need to do. For example, it helps students to get to the level where they have to be for the next school year and students actually understand the subjects better. Students actually get the work done because they are doing. Teachers should designed summer projects because it helps students get ready and prepare. students should do what their teachers asks them to do so that they can get better and prepare.

Second, students know what they need to be doing without stressing about it. Helps students to understand what they have to work on. For example, there are many students that stress about it because they don't know what projects they need to be doing. Students take their time and do their work because they know how to do it. Many students don't get work done at home during summer because they stress about not knowing what they suppose to be doing, that's why teachers should designed projects.

However, if students designed the projects it could be wrong. Many students are lazy and they forget about the projects. For example, there are many students that don't want to do anything during summer they just want to have fun so they finish the projects the fastest they can without knowing what they need to be working on. Most of the students work during the summer and they don't have to actually do their work correctly.

In conclusion, teacher should designed summer projects because it helps students to learn more on what they need to to be doing and students know what they need to work on without stressing about it; however, if students designed the projects it could be wrong. Many of the students don't have to worry on what they need to be working on because they have everything they need. Most of the time students do what they suppose to be doing. It helps students to be prepare and become better at any subject",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
E89C57CE37A6,"For some people that is not a good idea to finish the High School in three year, because in another part is not agreeable and unjust for some student who study for four year to see something new, so this is disagree because the students need to study four year in High School.

Finish the high school in three year is a big bad idea because is to short to finish the high school,

and another parts some students don't wants to go more to the school so they choose that new program for a short year to graduate in high school.

The other parts is not for all High schools to finish in three year, so is most better to delete that program and cancel about to finish the high school in three year and the students who follow that program they need to take the normal high school. To change the new program for all high school of the country is not easy, because some schools don't agree to doing that so is most better to continue the traditional four years.

If they change that program for all schools of the country they have a big responsibility about that, because most of

High Schools they have a big problem and work for example to change like that credit for graduate to the high school, the SOL text so is not a very good idea to doing that.

The conclusion, this is the best option, is to follow the rules of the schools. One should not make a big problem with the laws and the constitution of the schools. It is obligatory of the student need to take the high school for four year that is most better and continue with the traditional four years of school. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
4C3AFB55C4F7,"Imagine someone that you know, that is trying to show you what maturity looks like. And she set a example for you to see, by how she talk and how she treats her friends and family. You watch how the person act and talk. Later, you start to follow what that person does. This influenced you to also be respectful to the people around you. Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others because people follow what you do,know right from wrong, they are going to influence more other people.

First reason, setting a good example to influence others is the best thing because people follow what you do. They look up to you as a role model for them. Whoever you hang around with, that is whoever going to influence you. For example, if someone is doing a act of kindness, then you are going to do the exact same thing, because it influenced you. Philosopher Albert Schweitzer said,"" Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" Overall, if one person set a good example in life, it influence the others also.

Second reason, setting a good example is the best way to influence others because you know right from wrong. If no one set examples for others to see, then they would not know what to do when difficult situation arrives. Examples guide you to do what you know is right. People would not know how to act if there's no examples to be set. In summary, examples setting by other people help you make good decisions in life.

Third reason, some people may believe that setting examples by someone's behavior is not the best way to influence others. However, I believe that setting examples is the best way to influence others because it's not just one person that they are influencing, but many more people. For example, if a girl help a elder lady that needed help with carrying groceries inside the house, then others will see that and learn to help people that are in need also. Because of that one influence, others will care for people that need help. If one person set a good example, then others will also set a good example for many more people. In conclusion, many people will be influenced because of that one example that people set.

The best way to influence someone is through examples that are set by others, and how their behavior and attitudes are towards people. Setting examples is a good way to show people what you are trying to teach them and it gives them a idea of what's happening. Through all of these examples that people had set for you, they will influence you. When you do the example, because it influenced you, others will also catch that influence from you. So yes, setting examples is the only thing that will influence people and make a big impact in people's lives. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
39B3FC0EAE2A,"Imagine being a loner for the rest of your life because you only relied on yourself. This quote says "" think about the benefits working with a group or working alone."" Working alone helps you complete what is task to you with no distractions, and creates an important skill to be independent. Working in a group helps with your commutation skills, and each person has their own role to play in a group, so it's less stressful. Although, working alone is more beneficial, actually, working with a group is best beneficial.

Those who believe, working alone is more beneficial have a point because you don't need to relay on anyone. You have more control on what you're working on, these are also your own ideas not anyone else. Working alone keeps you concentrated on what you are working on. For an example when you're working alone it's less likely to get distracting by someone. Working alone can develop independent skill, this skill is good to have in the future. In reality no one is there to hold your hand and guide you. The benefits working alone are completing your own work with your own reasons and less distractions.

However, the benefits on working with a group helps to get the job done faster. Listening to what others say is great listening skills; people like when you listen to them. In a group you can combine ideas and relay on each other. For an example you're confuse you have your group to explain to you what you need to do. This benefits your commutations skills and willing to speak up when you don't understand something. There is nothing wrong with reaching out for help, it shows you want a better understanding on the topic. Working in a group also has an advantage in speeding up the possess since each person is working on what they're assign to. Everyone has their weaknesses and strengths, the goal is to find what best fits for everyone in your group, so you work together as a team. If you make a mistake you have your group to give you feedback on what you should work on.

Additionally, working in a group can reduce stress because you're only focus on one part on what you're working on. We know projects, assignments, etc..can be really stressful, all you have in mind is "" I have to finish all this.""

Working in a group isn't so stressful because everyone has their own role they're working on. Everyone relays on each other to finish their own part, so they can finish faster.

In conclusion, working with a group is best beneficial because you finish your work faster and its less stressful than working by yourself. You can learn new things by working with others, also it increases your communication skills. You can also help one another by focusing on their weaknesses and giving feedback. Therefore, this is an important experience to have because in the future you'll have to learn to work with one another at any job you apply to. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
D6930DD4EDD0,"Knowing what your future career is in high school is very important. In high school there are many classes that could help you with your future career.

If the student talks with their counsolor they can figure out what classes the student can take that is helpful for their future career. The student can get a head start on their carrer and by the time they graduate they know what to do. Therefore, The student will be well prepaired after high school. when it's time for collage they already know somewhat about their career.

Take advantage of the classes high school has to offer becasue in the future when your no longer in high school you'd have to pay for those classes.

After high school I'm looking to become an auto motive tech. Talking with my counselor helped me figure out what classes I can take to help me with my career. My counsolor recomended this class called Auto Tech and through that class I got hired by Toyota. Taking that class helped me a lot ; for example, Mercedes Benz ranked me 3rd meaning I could go work for them. I wouldn't be in the place I'm in right now if I didn't know what I wanted my future career to be while in high school. If you know what your future career is talk with your counsolor they can help you figure out what classes are best for you. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
6269A525D482,"I think it is a good idea because students might be tired of working at school everyday. Lets say that students want this the same school schedule that has a longer winter break, a year-round schools, and a week off in the spring and fall because people want more time to do spend time with family, do homework, projects etc...

First, We can spend time with family and friends, we can watch a movie with them, eat food together as a family, have parties and celebrate at our house. We need families to stay together as a group because if we don't then we are going to miss them too much as we go to college or get our new place to live. Nobody wants to stay alone because if they want to stay alone that's okay if you want.

Second, We can go on a vacation to the beach, the pool, Disney world etc... I love going to the pool in the summer because we don't have to stay at our house all day and all night. There is so much to do outside then just staying inside and doing nothing. We must stay with our family because they love you so much and they want to spend time with you too.

Finally, We can relax from work and studying we are tired of working so hard that we need a break. We are studying so hard for school, we did lots of tests and quizzes that we are tired from. We all enjoy summer vacation because we can spend time with our family and friends, we can invite our friends to eat , go to mall, watch a movie etc...

In conclusion, We must spend time with family and friends to go anywhere in the world for a vacation. We can enjoy each other by going to a amusement park or a museum to play and take pictures to save it on our phone for memories. We need to be together as a family, work as a team, having fun on a vacation. People might think that their family is annoying or they don't love them but your parents and siblings love you because we are not perfect in every way.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
04C2DA8069E7,"The school use cell phones in the classrom for education purposes it's because they want the student learn the other way can, but they had to be doing workand the same time kids start thinking other way to use cell phones in life.

Theacher they thinking the best oportunity to explaint in own life that way we can use the cell phones appropriate in the future. Because some teacher they worry about it are future and how we can go.

some theacher try to give anything to work on parper or looking for new, event, and search anything obaut the class. they making to take some examen on line and quiz on the cell phone usen app to get on the quiz.

When we talking about schools, some they are in lawful of the schoolto us cell phones in cvlassrooms. thats why some school they have own laws about cell phone.

They are meny school they had own ruls and they don't want the student use cell phones fro any reason.

They are many institution or progant to help school how they can teach and the student learn someting new and how they can put on his life.

Conclusion they are many way you can teach studen usen the cell phone but you most to explain why? the school is important to teach student how they use own cell phone.

I hear many teacher tell the people. What other thing you can do with you cell phone, but don't tell my calling i want to hear other thing like..? I know some people don't anwer the question.?

they many thing can help people and student to can see on the phone they can do to be a better person but they don't lost time doing tha't and they are most on the computer or they take class and read book all the time.

yeah it good people read all the time but they had to explor the world too on the other side like usen new tecnology.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
902341F8EB11,"If I choose my specific job, I would choose to be a surgeon and a doctor because my main goal and dream is to help people in life and prevent people from getting sick. I can fix people if they have any medical problems in life. I was reading books about doctors and I started to get interested becoming one. Being a doctor is alot of hard work, I love doing hard work because hard work makes you pay off. My parents told me don't do something what you think it's fun, do something what you love, what I want to do and love to do in life is to become a doctor.

I sometimes mainly do hard work because of money, one of my main goals is to get alot of money. I need money to buy a house, have children, and taking care of my family. Doctors get alot of money when they do hard work, it's not easy to become one. Hard work makes you feel tired, but at the same time you relax and get alot of money. Money is not important in life, when you have alot of money, the first thing I think about is family first, then I think anything I want on the second thought.

My uncle is a doctor, I learn alot from him how you become a doctor. He told me to read some of the doctor books at this age and then when I get to my senior year, that's when he told me to think about becoming a doctor. How my uncle become a doctor is he going to medical school for 7-8 years, but I want to be different from him, I want to become a surgeon and a doctor. My uncle is just a doctor, but he still works for surgeons but dosen't do actual surgery to people. My uncle was the one who got me most interested becoming a doctor.

I would mostly become a surgeon than a doctor because I read mostly about surgeries and it get me even more interested. Surgery is not that disgusting when you get used to it, that's why I read alot of surgeon books. When I first thought of surgery, I thought it was really disgusting, but then my uncle told me alot about it, then I stopped the disgusting part. My favorite part about surgery is fixing people, I feel happy that i'm fixing the person. The main reason why I want to become a surgeon is because I want to get alot of money to take care of my family, and I want to help people in life.                  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
24C508ED6FE2,"It is true that there are many ways to influence others. Its not your behavior that defines your actions. Its how you show people by your actions, having goals and to have motivation to be able to influence others. Sometimes you dont even have to be positive to be able to influence others. For example, in the movie ""The Princess and The Frog"" , she wanted to open a restaurant because it was her dad's dream. So she kept working to get enough money to pay for a building she wanted. She didnt get it in the beginning, but at the end of the movie she did. What i'm trying to say is that she had one goal and it was to open a restaurant. she also had motivation to keep working to earn enough money to do so.

For my first reason why you can influence others in different ways is by your actions. The best way someone can influence others is by your actions. For example lets say you help out by donating food to your local food bank. That wont make much difference but if you do it daily, word will eventually get out on how you kept donating food for people in need. Especially if it gets on the news about the good deed you did, then more people would donate more to help out their community.

For my second reason why you can influence people in different ways is by having goals. Many people whit goals accomplish more that people without one. For example lets say that your trying to save money to buy a new game that coast eighty dollars. But you dont have any money left. So you do chores like cleaning, washing your parents car, or cutting the grass. You still dont have enough. So you start going to your neighbors house and asking if they need anything done. Eventually you earn just the right amount to buy the new game. Basically, if you want something set goals and accomplish them to earn what you want.

For my last reason why you can influence people in different ways is by being motivated. You cant influence others if your down. You have to try being inspiring and energetic. Because if others see you being motivated they would most likely do the same. Being motivated is important because it shows purpose of completing a goal. It also shows how hard you are willing to work to accomplish something.

some people may say that,a persons behavior is the best way to influence others because it sets the right mood on someone to be motivated. But on the other hand behavior doesnt show how a person can be influence to do something. Therefor the best way to influence people is by showing them your actions, goals, and being motivated. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
FE2115055812,"I think that my school should not extending the school day per two hours. I feel that don't to be good or necessary for the students. The proposal of increase the school day two hours has the pros and the cons. I'm against of extending the school day. I know the pro is that way we save more energy and resources but has more cons, to continue I have three clear reasons.

The students to lost one day complete of class, and they needs to learn more of each class material. I think that if the teens study just four-day per week, they will can't to be a good output academic. I have a friend that she studies in another school, her school is not ""common"", And you ask me: ""Why do you tell me ""not common""?"" I can answer you because the school day is similar to the principal question, she study just Monday to Thursday; She told me that is ""cool"" because don't have class on Friday but I think that was ridiculous, I know is funny don't to be class on Friday, is really funny!! but We are need focus in to study, we need to have a purpose that is the school and graduate. Studying four-day to week is not similar than study five-day to week.

Some students have a job after school, if they study two hours more per day to week, so the teen would not to be to work almost per four days. They need to work for pay their phones, their clothes, their rent, their food, etc. My cousin have a job after school , he works 5 or 4 days to week. He works because he need the money. When the class is to finish (He can to work that days), his job's schedule start 4:30pm to 10:30pm, so if the school decide change or increase the two hours per day, my cousin and other teens that have a job, would not to work.

The students need more time after school in their home, because they can to do homework or study any quiz or class materials, even any teens have another class in the afternoon, like to study computer, French, Spanish, Arabic, or whatever language , also study arts, math, ballet or whatever dance that they to prefer. Patty is 15 years old, she is a cute girl, she loves to dance class, her dance class start 5pm to 7pm, her schedule is on Monday and Tuesday. On Wednesday she takes computer and Spanish class the same time that dance class. If the school decide follow this model by extending the school day two hours probably she lost her afternoon class

In conclusion, I think that should not follow the model be extending the school day two hours, because the students lost one day complete of class,lost the concentration and focusing in the class,

would no to get job after school and they would not to study another class after school. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
5C656CD57F67,"Identify a talent or skill you have, and explain how you develop and use it.

Everyone has a talent and a skill. I personally think that my talent is photographing, but photographing take skills as well. Taking pictures is relaxing, fun, and cool at the same time.

Photographing is I guess not easy and hard because while taking pictures you have to find the right angle the your photo and as well you can just take your picture in your own way.

How I developed photographing is by going out and looking at intense images.

when I go out, I always think about if I should take some photos of whats there like: the River

People, and maybe other Cities as well as Nature. While taking pictures, it's really relaxing because you can feel the wind breeze on your face and you can release your stress.

For me I think that its fun because you can take pictures whatever you want, I also think that taking pictures is cool because you can see how things looks like up close how it looks like on camera.

How I use it is by releasing everything that is on my mind. I also use it for improving my skills as well. For me sometimes its a little bit hard because I need to find the right angle for the photo Im taking. My photograph skills aren't that good, but I practice everyday so I could take better images.

During my free time I go out and find some photographic things like: Insects, the Moon, and other objects, and take pictures of them.

To conclude , in my opinion I think that photographing can be your talent and your skill as well because if you like looking at intense images then you can take an intense picture too, or you can take it just for fun. Besides, maybe you can try to see how your photograph skills are too.     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
F65622698950,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing""?

I believe, when most of the people don't understand how relevant is to do something instead of being inactivity that also serve purpose because like everybody else it is normal to always do or make good things for someone, and it could be family or close friends for example.

My reason is if we try to done good stuff for people, and not receiving anything back for example: If I give people chance to not try anything, then how are we gonna communicate? how are we going to accomplish our goal when you don't deserve it? so my point and my reason is the we need to do something about not being inactivity with people are around you. I understand that not everyone are gonna have the same thoughts as me or with other person. However we need to be on the side to the change for good.

I grew up knowing when people put a lot of their afford to you, it means a lot because you'll never know when people will trust you and believe in you again it's a huge difference between those, and we people show us or make us see how important is when almost everything is easy when we ask for it example: Trying to hard to show how many things you have done for that person without asking, but it means a lot to you because you give a lot to that person and you hope that person can give you the same thing you've done for her or him.

Sometimes some people misunderstood about always doing something for her or him like you don't have to do it for them, but believe you'll feel great if someone do something for you isn't a bad thing then you will be fine and grateful knowing that theres good people around you, and ready for help you. You ain't alone anymore believe theres people for you and try to not think too much about it.

My conclusion is about to always do something for people because there is people who will need you, and being around, and everything you want to do for them it will make it better like. Thomas Jefferson wanted to do good stuff as a president caring about his people, and making him one of the best presidents, so it is wonderful to done much for them than yourself. ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
A00A8837B25B,"Anybody is capable of doing anything no matter how bad obstacles can get. Failure is one of the biggest reasons why most of people are successful. Although people believe setting our aim low, and achieving our mark is less dangerous than aiming high and failing, nevertheless, aiming low, and achieving our mark is a greater danger because there's no limits to what people can do and failure gives motivation to work harder to achieve more and be successful in life.

To begin, setting our aim low, and achieving our mark is a greater danger than setting our aim high and falling short because there's no limits to what a human being can do and achieve. For example, Isaiah Thomas, he was one of the best basketball players in the NBA at Boston. He's very short, and everyone doubted him and said he's too short and can't make it. That didn't stop him from aiming high and achieving his goal and becoming of one the shortest people to make it to the NBA. This shows that no matter who the person is, they can accomplish a lot in life as long as they work hard. Clearly, everyone should always aim high and accomplish their goal to have a better life later on.

Furthermore, people should always aim high even if they fall short because failure gives motivation to achieve more and come back stronger. For instance, The Golden State Warriors lost the NBA finals in 2016. It was one of the worst finals ever for them. They lost very badly, but that didn't stop them from coming back the next year and winning the championship. This proves that it doesn't matter how bad failure can be, as long as they come back from it stronger. Obviously, no should be scared of failure and everyone should aim high and try to be the best at whatever they do.

Overall, the greater danger for most of people lies in not trying their hardest to be someone in life and aiming low to accomplish their goal because failure motivates the person to comeback stronger and have no limits. In conclusion, Aiming high will get anyone successful as long as they keep working hard and fear nothing.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
7CCC4CDC5CF0,"People make their own decisions in life but, people can make mistakes in life. A certain people don't have have other people to help them with their decisions in life. People should seek guidance from experts because experts can assist people in situations, making sure that the person is doing it correctly, and give advice to a person that needs assists.

First, experts can help people about relationships in life for example a breakup, fights, arguments, trust issues, and lack of communication. They are good amount of experts who can deal with peoples relationship problems for example my father helped me with a breakup. my father said to me that ""she's not the only girl out there in the world"". I listened to my father's advice it helped me a lot. Experts can actually help through with your taxes and bills if you're having trouble, for example my grandfather who was helping my dad with his taxes because my father forgot to pay the taxes.

Secondly,experts can make sure if people are doing stuff correctly. Experts can assist people with their taxes to make sure if the person is doing their taxes correctly,for example my grandfather was making surer that if my father was doing his taxes correctly. Experts can make should that people is going to make sure that the person is doing the bills right,for example the mortgage for the house people need an expert to assist the person if they're doing the mortgage correctly. Not just the mortgage it can be bills in the house. Experts can make sure that the person is doing their car payments correctly in order to keep their car and not fall behind on their payments.

Lastly,Experts can give people advice in life,for example experts can give advice for taxes,payments,and etc. For example my father was giving me advice about how to buy a car because I'm getting a car over the summer. Experts can give people advice when the Person needs it to be successful in life. For example an expert giving advice to a person that is trying to get good credit to buy a house. Some experts give advice to people that are serious, for example people that are in a verge of crisis right now.

In conclusion people can make their own decisions in life but, people make mistakes in life. people should seek guidance from experts because experts can assist people in situations, making sure that the person is doing it correctly, and give advice to the person that needs help.     ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
728AD690E87F,"Dear principal I agree with the school cafeteria plans because our health would be better if we eat healthier than chunk food, It will makes us not get obese and fell into depression, healthier food makes your body be more active.

Does healthier food makes your health healthier?, is obesity a problem for students?.

Healthier food would make our health be healthier, Instead of eating chunk food we should eat healthier school lunch ,because If we eat healthier food it will be easier for us to do any sport because when we eat chunk food our stomach feels heavier than when we eat healthier food, professional athletes they maintain their shape because they always eat healthier food.

It will makes us not fell into depression, When we eat chunk food and we don't eat any healthier food it makes us get fat and when we can't stop eating it makes us go to the level that we get obese and when we get obese a lot of students fells into depression because they don't like that way they look after they weight increase.

obesity is a big problem for our health, because it can take you to the level that you will not be able to walk.

Healthier food makes students be more active, when we eat healthier our body don't feel to heavy so we are able to move faster than when we chunk food. Chunk food makes stomach heavier that after we eat it makes so lazy that we don't e want to do anything after lunch. Healthier food activates our brain like when we do exercise we activate our body .

In conclusion i think it's a great idea this new plan, changing the school menu into healthier food because it will make our health be healthier, It will help us not fell into depression, It will make us be more active. healthier food is the best the school cafeteria can do for us because they will help us prevent obesity and they will help us take care of our health.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
80AD3F379BD1,"I think that a act of kindnees is great for people to see that there are people that are nice and can do nice things. maybe people dont see that nice people get treated better vs. people that don't do nice thing don't get treaed the same way . that why people that dont do act of kindness need to starr now so they know what it feels like to be good or just saying somethnig nice is good to but when you put time to it that is better to. people need to help other and respet each other everone has a good side to them even if they say they don't . you can see that when they where kid they where nice and kind but they grow up and they think that they can do bad thing and do not help people that need it or saying soming nice to them, but ever one has a diffrent ways of being them self and finding ways to not be nice or kind to others that are nice to them adn they don't want to do the sma e that want to be the mean one thae one that does not care what other think or do and try to hide from the fear that they can get in troble for doing this that are not to be seen or done at school , at home or even outside where you can get in to big troble . people need to more act of kindness in school when i was in 5th and 6th with the same teacher all we did was do act of kindness because she wanted us to see that just a note to someone you care or love about can make you and the person feel better than they alredy where.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
EA970C38817C,"Do you think people accomplish more if they are always doing something or do you think inactivity serve as a purpose?

Thomas Jefferson wrote,""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.""Many people think that they accomplish more if they are always doing something. When people are always doing something,they are always learning new things and gaining experiences. Some people think that the more they do ,the more they achieve because being idle will not lead you to success and nobody is going to come and accomplish things for you. Therefore much may be done if people are always doing something

Certainly some people think that inactivity serve as a purpose because people can be physically inactive but mentally active and they might be creating wonderful things in their minds. Still others think that being inactive does not mean that they are being idle because they already achieved their dreams and they are satisfied with what they have so that is why they see inactivity as a purpose. Others might think that not everyone have the opportunities to being always doing something and they do not have more option that being inactive.

However, people accomplish more if they are always doing something because they learn new things in the process of doing something. They learn more about themselves and about others. They learn how to interact and connect with others and how to fit in different environments. People who are always doing something gain more and new experiences that will help them later in life also gaining experiences and being in different types of environments surrounded by different kind of people will help them improve their mental maturity and also help them to to have a different perspective of see world and life. In other words people who are always doing something accomplish more,and learn more how to interact with others and gain new experiences.

Furthermore,people accomplish more if they are always doing something because the more you do the more you achieve. If people do not work and make an effort for the things they want to accomplish nobody is going to do it for them because each person is the author of their own success .Some people might be waiting that the things they want fall from the sky ,or appear magically in their hands making no effort to accomplish them and idles will not lead you to success .People who are successful today is because they were always working hard and making their best effort to accomplish their goals,they know what they wanted and they were persistent and did not give up on their goals. If people want to be successful in life they have to know that failure is part of achieving success and just have to keep trying and do not give up until they achieve their goals. Therefore people's success is based on the effort they put to achieve it because the more they do the more they achieve.

In fact, people accomplish more if they are always doing something because they are spending their time in things that really worth it .If people are going to spend time of their life that will never get back they better spend that time doing something that worth it and doing something that is going bring positive ,and good things to their life. Many people spend a lot of time or even their whole life doing things that never brought something positive or good to their life and that is maybe because they never found their passion in life and doing something you are not passionate about it is just a waste of time. Therefore people should spend time following their dreams and doing what they truly love because when they are doing what they are truly passionate about, they will see that every effort they did to accomplish their goal worth the time they spent and the effort they put .As a result when people spend their time always doing something they accomplish more.

In conclusion,people should determine never to be idle and never to conform with what they have. Always work hard and aspire for bigger things ,always try to be successful and do everything and anything to accomplish their dreams, and goals and do not let anyone to tell you that you can not do something because if you believe in yourself you are capable to do everything you want .People should always spend their time in things that worth it, in things that will bring good and positive things to their life .People should be always doing something and that is how they will see what wonderful things can be done by doing always something because the more people do the more they achieve and people who are always doing something are the people who accomplish the more.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
D81AEDF6E262,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. For example, people can check out books, they can do shopping from online, and play games without speaking to another person. However the technology had positive and negative effects on people's lives. Although some people say that technology is good because all the people can use it for an emergency situation, actually many people believe that technology can change the attitude of the people and technology has more important people behind a screen than people around them.

Although some people say that technology is good because all the people can use it for an emergency situation. Imaging that a family lives faraway from us and need help and nobody lives around this family. Further, in this situation is very necessary the technology because they can be in a very hard situation. For example, when I was in my country many families were living faraway from the city, and some of them did not have any device to communicate with their families or another person; however, some of them were having a really hard lives because sometimes they got sick and they did not have the help from others and they died because the technology was necessary by the moment.

In addition, many people believe that technology is bad because technology can change the attitude of the people. In 1978 people were more respectful and some of them did not study but they show the respect to each other. However, people keeps saying that a person change the attitude because of: movies, music, novels, and cartoons. It is true the some people the use technology constantly they can get mental problems or they get blind using technology over and over. For example, I know this families that have a girl that is fifteen years old, and she likes to see many TV shows. This young girl acts like she is more older than other teenagers because she does not obey to her parents. Her conduct is very bad, but that is the way her parents are growing her. This girl goes out whatever she wants and with whatever she wants. Sometimes I think that is her parents fault because they still keep buying many technology things. They do not paid attention to how their daughter is using the technology. By contrast, allowing children using technology at young age is very bad because some of then do not use it appropriate, and when they get older their parents can not control them because they learn many bad things from the technology. Otherwise parents can go out with them instated of using technology.

Also, many people believe that technology is bad because technology has more important people behind a screen than people around them. It is true that many people are more focus on a screen almost all the time. The Psychologist Generic_Name said that ""it is better have conversations face to face because people can be more clearly about situations"", and he is right because using technology people can lie behind the screen. By this time factories create more devices that makes more people loose their mind in technology. Moreover, about ninety percent of all the people paid more attention to the technology than their families, or people around them. There is one example about lying while using technology, about five months ago I was reading this book that is call ""

Behind the Wed

"" and was very interested because the character was a woman teacher that was having communication with someone that she did not know nothing about it; however, when they were sending messages the person the was behind was acting the was a man but was a girl acting like a man. When this teacher ask her about if they can do a video call she said not because she was lying to her. There are more examples the happens and real life to many people.

In conclusion, technology can be good or bad, but thats depends on the manner of how the people wants to use it. Technology does not stop increasing, yet people have to know how to use it in the appropriate moment and the correct form. Technology can change the life of many people.  ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
AD53B357BD0D,"Have you ever had a really important decision you had to make? Did you feel overwhelmed because you didn't know what you should do? Asking for help or advise from people such as friends and family around you can really help alleviate all that stress. Most people encounter big decisions often throughout their lives, so getting advise from numerous people can help you get more input on something, and may end up helping you make a final decision. Seeking multiple opinions can really help someone make a better choice when dealing with decision making.

One way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is that by asking more than one person, they can get more input. Asking numerous people can be a huge help when making an important decision. Not only are people getting different ideas of what they may want to do, they can also get advise from people who may be more experienced than themselves. For example, if someone was debating on which college they should apply to, they may end up asking people such as older siblings or parents for advise because they may have more experience with that matter. By asking multiple people, you can get multiple ideas, each of them being different in their own way. By getting more people's input, you may be able to start to make your own choice about the matter because of the advise you've gotten.

Another way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by not getting any biased opinions. By asking more than one person for advise on a subject, they can get more than one new idea that isn't one of their own. This way, they can get more than one person's thoughts on the decision, and have different ideas on it. For example, if someone were trying to make a decision on what sport they may want to tryout for at school, they could possibly ask their friends and family about which they should choose. However, they should also ask people like classmates and teachers, as they may have their own ideas, and won't give the person any biased ideas or information. Friends and family can have a great deal of influence on people, so it's important to always get people's thoughts that are on the outside. This will make it to where there's a greater chance of the decision maker not being biased, as they've heard numerous people's thoughts, and can make their own decision off of that.

A final way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by being more prepared about the choice they're going to make. The decision maker can use all the advise they've gotten from different people to make their own choice, and feel better prepared. They will be more focused as they know what they want to do, and will feel more confident and less overwhelmed. Feeling less overwhelmed can be a big help as the person doesn't have to be so worried, so they won't have any distractions from making the best possible decision. For example, if someone is trying to decide what kind of car they want to get, and they've gotten advise from numerous people, they can make a better choice when picking. They'll know exactly what they want, as they've heard many thoughts from the people around them, and so they can make their final decision.

After getting advise from multiple people around them, the decision maker may be able to make the best choice possible, as they've gotten new thoughts and ideas. Asking for help or for some advise from those around you can help you make the best possible choice because you've gotten a lot of new information and opinions that you wouldn't have gotten if you had only asked one or no one at all for advise. Making an important choice can seem a little bit easier and less stressful after seeking advise from multiple people. Getting help from others around you can help you make the best choice you can. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
1B2274161889,"I personally think that working alone is very beneficial. When I work alone I can work on my own time. I do not have to listen to anyone, I am my own boss in this situation. Also I have nothing to go over once I am done because I know I did it all myself and it was done right. Independently I can do more work. whenever I work in groups I get side tracked way more then I usually do.

Working alone has become a very common thing for me. I have always preferred to work alone. Working alone lets me work on my own pace. I can work whenever I want too. I have tried to work in groups but they always want to do the last minute type of thing, but when I work alone I do that sometimes too. but i know I got to do it all. I also don't like to keep someone if they did their part. One time I was doing a group power point and two out of four of my partners did not do their part and I ended up failing because of them.

When I work in groups I feel like I am doing all the work and my group members are just messing around and not helping me. I have had very bad experiences with groups I have failed many projects, class activates, and labs just because I would trust people on doing the work that they would get when we distributed it. Last week in oceanography my table was doing a lab and I had to do all the work because my whole table group wanted to talk to a whole different table group and not help me. My teacher would not let me work alone even after I told him about the situation. Later I told my guidance counselor and he did not do anything about it either.

Every time I have worked in a group I have been side tracked. I can never do anything with someone because i always have the urge to just talk to them and not get any work done. I have noticed this bad habit of mine for a long time now I have tried to fix it but i just can not. Working alone is a very good thin for me i am very productive when I work alone.

Working alone is very good for me. I like to do it because then I know that I did all that work for the grade I got not anyone else. I like working for stuff I do not like getting stuff ease. Whenever I work alone I mostly have good time management on all my work. I am mostly always slacking when I work with a group.                                       ",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
3D29C845934D,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to succeed in life. I strongly agree with this statement. Having a positive attitude, will make you be more successful in life. By having a good attitude can make a big difference. Always have faith in yourself.

For example, if you have a test and you have a negative thought about something, don't automatically think you're going to fail, look over your test and check for any mistakes you might have made. Then when you are done checking over the test and feel better about it, then you should tell yourself you are going to pass it. Having a positive attitude can change your life completely. It is always important to have faith in yourself. You got this!

The next thing is when you are out in public, it is always important to give a good and happy attitude to the people you see. Even if you don't know them, it can make anyone's days. It can makes you a better person just by smiling at a person. You never know if that person is having a bad day and just by giving them a smile and a few words, it can make their day better.

Another thing is if you are a teacher or parents and you're having a rough day due to a personal or medical problem, still try to give the kids a possible attitude. They look up to you and care about you. They don't deserve to be yelled at over the smallest things that wasn't even their fault. Having a negative attitude towards the students or your children is not a good thing. You might hurt their feelings or even worst think that they are not good enough for you. You are not being very successful if you keep on yelling at innocent children or even your own kids.

In conclusion, Having a possible attitude is the key to success in life because it can make you a better person and give you a lot of self confidence. So If you ever feel unsure about something, look over and think what feels right to you. Also if you see a strangers, kids, etc, smile. It can make anyone's day just by seeing that one smile. So just a little reminder to never bring out your anger out on anyone ever!",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
F8B49772E887,"Therefore, I agree with being honest all the time because it will help you gain trust with other. This can also sat that the person think's you are loyal and trustworthy and that they can believe in you more then they already did. Yes is may hurt the person feelings,but, you are there to help them get though it and make them feel OK.

When being honest with people it can build up trust with you two because they know that you can talk about things without lying. This can also effort how they see you as a person. Even if the truth hurts them they know that you were able to tell them what was happening or if someone was saying something bad about them. This can also build up trust and build up friendship and relationship. People don't like it when you lie to them because it hurts them and makes them feel bad about them self.

Honesty can change how people view you as a person. They can even see if you would be loyal to them when they need you the most. They can also see if your a real friend or something more with being honest. This can also give you respect that you want or need. When I said they would view you different I meant by your personalty and how you are as a person.

Yes, honesty can hurt them,but, lying hurts the most. Why I'm saying this because honesty can hurt but it make them feel better because they have someone they trust and believ them, a real friend. Lying and changing up the word can hurt them and even mess them up and change them. That why I agree with being honest all the time.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
F2C012ECBF9C,"I agree with the statement because when you get your first X box game the impression you have is almost impossible to change. that impression can be almost impossible to change because you are so happy that you could burst into tears but that impression can also be embarrassing, when you realize it you can change your that impression and make a different impression to an impression that is less embarrassing and the could be OK for you but the first impression is the best impression of you being happy about having you first X box game and that impression can be OK for you if you like. You can chose not to change that impression because it is the impression that makes you feel good about your self even if that impression can be embarrassing it is no problem for you because it's your impression and no one else impression. So I agree that first impression are almost impossible to change.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
D10BBD82D66F,"Former Primer Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"", and in my opinion I agree with Churchill's words. Failure has a enormous role in success. Failure is all about, learning from the mistakes you made and gaine all the experience you can out of it, Not giving up and plan what can you do better to accomplish what you have been fighting for to get even better results that the ones you were expecting in the first place, that is what failure is all about and that is why it has big and important a role in the pursuit of success.

Learning from the mistakes that were done is a big example of the role that failure has on the pursuit of success; throughout history there had been many times were our society, nation, and specie had learned from their mistakes; as an example of this is the League of Nations, it was created after WWI to maintain worldwide peace; It end up being a big failure. we learned from this and the U.N was created to maintain global peace through nations and till present days it stills been one of societies biggest success. this is an example of how learning from mistakes you have made in the past is useful but overall this is one of many examples you can put to show how failure is related to success.

Not giving up is also really important on this because giving up is not an answer as an example of this is, Pele, he became one of the best soccer players in history but it also became the youngest player to win a world cup, since a really small age he was told that he was never going to become a soccer player, he was told numerous time that his talent was not enough, but he did not gave up, he gave all he had and when he had the chance he showed everyone of what he was capable of and became one of the best players in the world. In his debut on first world cup he suffered an injury on his knee while training for the first match, it let him out for half of the of world cup. Doctors told him that he had to do exercise every day to get better, but that he was not going to be able to play in the whole tournament; he did not give up he trained day after day and in the third phase of the world cup he was given an opportunity to play in one of the games. This is a great example of the strength that people have when they do not give up and they give all they are capable of. This is also a great example that shows how failure has many things directly related at helping people to success at what they are trying to achieve.

Another example of how failure can help you success is trying once more. this is the most important feature in the relationship of failure and success because once you have looked back at what you did wrong last time and learning from that, you are ready to try once more and accomplish what you have been fighting for. As an example of this is the spaceships that have send to space to reach many places in the universe. Its well known that many of the spaceships that have been send to space failed, and in really big proportions. Many of those spaceships exploded do to problems on their systems or other problems. After many tries looking at what failed and what went wrong humans were able to send satellites and people to the outer space, it took many failures to till we got all of this finished, now we are able to send spaceships throughout the galaxy to explore the stars and many other places. failure taught us what were we doing wrong, and we learned from it, this shows us of how failure is related to success by trying many times to achieve what you are fighting to achieve.

Many people believe that failure is not related in any way to success, they have arguments saying that, you can accomplish something at the first try, that you do not learn anything from the mistake or the times you have failed at something, and they also say that you lose all enthusiasm when you fail numerous times at something. I believe this people are wrong because you do not always accomplish something in the first try, and you always learn from your mistakes, you might learn valuable lessons out of them; their last argument can be denied by telling to yourself that you can do it, we decide when do we lose our enthusiasm or not. this is why I believe they are wrong failure is related in the pursuit of success even if we want it or not because you learn and gain experience out of it, that is what makes this world a better place, failure, and it might sound like is not true but I believe it is; failure is always there and we can always learn valuable lessons out of it.

Like I stated in my examples above failure is related to success; failure is not a bad thing because we learn from the mistakes we have done, we can gain experience out of it, we learn what are we doing wrong, but what we have to keep in mind is that we decide if we lose the enthusiasm in something whenever we decide to do it, this is why I believe that the words that Winston Churchill said are true, because from failure to failure we learn from the mistakes we made along the way to success, we can think of a better plan with the things we learned and after that we can try once more to accomplish the thing we have failed with better results that those we were expecting. That is why I think that failure is related to success. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
A72FE8731B45,"Ever since i started school i never liked the school lunch, i would always go the whole day without eating and I would'nt take a snack or anything so it could sustain in my stomach. Most kids at my school dont like the school lunch either, because they either think it tast wierd or just they are just picky about what they eat. Normally, when I would go almost a whole day with out eating my head would hurt or stomach and i know most teenagers in my school can relate also because they prefer to starve and not eat the food that the school serves. In my opinion. I believe that changing the schools lunch menu and making it healthier is a good idea because kids would enjoy the food, parents would not conplain about their kids not eating in schhol, and it would be a great advantage to improve the school lunch.

Most kids think that the school lunch is not very appetizing, but if the school cafeteria decides to change the school menu it would make a huge difference beacuse I know that most kids especially teenagers are very picky about their food or that it's disgusting. When I was younger I would'nt eat at school and until this day I don't because i didnt like and i would always have somach aches, and my head would hurt a lot, and i wasent able to concentrate in class. Most kids think that its not neccesary for the school cafeteria to change the menu but in reality most kids don't eat at school due the type of food they serve. Sometimes even the parents say something to their kids because they dont eat in school.

When i would go to middle school and the beginning of high school my parents would always wonder why I woud'nt eat at school, they got to a point where they thought i was depressed and i would always get yelled at because they thought something was wrong with me when in reality i just didnt like the school lunch. I understand why most kids dont like the school food because either it doesnt have flavor or it just doesnt taste the same as before, and also sometimes the food would make me feel sick from the stomach afterwards. Parents main concern is if their kids eat or not. I believe that by changing the menu it would would much better for parents to stop worrying about why their kids about why they dont like to eat at school. My parents especially my mom would barely have time to make me something, for example, she didnt have time to make me a snack or something real quick so I could have taken it to school when I was in elementary school, she would always tell me that she did'nt have time that she was always in a rush and thats why sometimes I would'nt eat. My mom almost went to put complain about the school food and that she wondered if I was the only one that would'nt eat in school.

I believe that if the school cafeteria has a advantage to change the school cafeteria food because they should think about why parents worry about their kids not eating and also parents putting complaint of why their chidfren don't eat at school. In my honest opinion i think that they should shange the menu because when I dont well or i dont eat at all it is hard for me to concentrate in class and that is a huge priority to pay attention in class and try to get good grades. If the school cafeteria plans to change the cafeteria food it would be really great because more kids will be able to concentrate. When i was in freshman an sophmore year I would always skip to go eat because I coud'nt eat the school food, i think that kids nowadays do the same thing just so they wont starve.

In my honest opinion i belive that changing the school food would be a great idea because most kids dont concentrate in class, parents worry about their kids, and also they it would make a great impact on the schhol.           ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
EEDF62EFA5D7,"Thomas Jefferson Prompt

Thomas Jefferson once said, Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Jefferson wanted the world to become more active in life whether if it is a physical.

Being active has many positives. Activity in society can help people reach their goals, help society, live life to the fullest, feel good and use time wisely. In this world people have big reasons to have activity life for example, they need one work where maybe all the time they are move for this reasons and more I think that the people need one activity life.

Small actions like recycling or participating in community this help to disperse a good life for you and for the other people because people look that you have one purpose in the life. The life is hard, you need activity, you need to learn new things all the time, and never you be a inactive person because if you are a inactive person you not have good reason for live in this world.

Inactivity is not good for your dreams or goals in the life because if you have one dream about buy a sport car, the car is not coming if you not work hard to take the money for the sport car. Nothing coming so easy you need effort, and dedication the inactivity not help you, the essence of the life is to crate good reason of live and work for yours dreams and goals.

The idle person is a person how not have activity, That person maybe not have dreams or goals or maybe your dream is be idle, but the poin is that a idle person not have reasons for the society, not have support for your community, and he or she is lost in the life. For a idle all is for tomorrow not take actions today, not take effort and if make this person not put the one hundred percent only put five percent. Remember you need put effort to your activitys in the work, school, sports and your life all need effort.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
D80ED2446C0E,"Setting examples by your own behavior to influence other people is better for many reasons but still has its pros and cons.

My first reason why is because the majority people around world learn and comprehend better when they have an example in front them. In addition it is easier to influence others by your behavior becuase you experience it everyday and it would be very easy to set an example.

My second reason is setting examples makes you a leader and when other people start to notice it they will strive to act upon that action because they where influenced and want to become a leader like you,soon more and more people will start doing it.

There is only one con and that is depending on the individual and situation that person might not be good at making self behavior examples because they may have not experienced it before but there is a solution for this problem. You can ask a smart adult and act upon there actions and carry it on. Nobody is perfect and its okay to ask for help sometimes.

In conclusion setting examples by your own behavior to influence others is a smart thing to do and you'll be surprised by how many people youv'e influenced.             ",3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,4.0,3.5
2855CD45984F,"Thomas Jefferson wrote about to determine never be idle that means, we need to do soemthing to be woderful how much we done if we are going to do something to look what they need to be we need to purpose to do the things never give up we need to continue doing this; We need to serve the country, we need to organized people they or we nerve going to be a idle

. I am aggre not be a idle because we need support, we need to help which others like some poeple do that we support and purpose to help. It wonderful how much we done if we never give up and to be prepared we nerve don't know what is going to happen? in seconds, minutes, hours, you feel wonderful went you are doing soemthing to me a able to help people how do you know to look wonderful thwe things we are doing never stop continue ding the great and wonderful this your doing to succeed is doing something really diffucult and you can do this you can never give up you can continue doing this hards difficult you are a person can do things really hard you need to purpose to do this never give up.

I am desaggre in other part because some people don't want to continue and this doing this you are not able to stop for a little problem and not continue sometimes we need to choose the responsabllities we have.

For example you have a problems or difficult things you need to tried to continue to be a responsable person don't give up you porpose continue doing the great things organized your ideas and plans you have to finish the difficult things Thomas Jefferson wants to continue do we need to accomplish more if we are always doing something never stop and not doing something people said i dont know how can do this you need to some part of you to do this you need to support other persons to start doing things ,like you needed went you start doing something .

You nerve be abel to dertermine the idle we haveed support we are wonderful doing this we cae up we nerve give up we have opcions opportunities to do something to be that person. Thomas Jefferson said we are wonderfull we are doing always great things we can accomplish are ideas to whetever things we want to do we organized thigs we do difficult things we can finished great things and continue doing hards things and wonderfull things how you tivicontinue doing the problems we are great organized countries activities and nerve let your opportunities go,you need to determine never to be idle . I think Thomas Jefferson said this things because some people is not doing anythings for they self just waiting what is going to happens and what can do went something happen we need to start doding somethiing we don't know what is going to happens in a second, minutes and hours we need to be able to do something to wake up for do some things we are not doing we need to think for the us for everyone not just me we can help to determine to be not a idle soemthing we can do. I think we not doing nothing because is not my problem is their problen we don't thing we can help what we can do for help for soemthing needs we are a wonderfull people why we can not help or we want to be a accomplish people not doing anything to help how needed us help we can organized a campain of people and do new things we can not be a inactivity person we have great things to do we also can serve a organization of people tehy need help. I am able not be a person not do anything for people we can change the world which the thins we are doing we organized things we finished everything they put to we are can do this and never gives up we can choose do something or nothing we haved opcions we haved everything what you want to do. I am determine i am never give up i am goint to do something we can do this.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
E7C8F254C841,"PROBLEMS WHITH MINISTER WINTON

Maybe it ask:why put on that title?, i don't know about team, tinck firsts, in don't making do,and don't writhing nothing, but is how, skip my problem, and absolute,i'm can doe more; so sorry for this note, by we it start my introduction about this team of mister Winston.

am starting for: what is British?- OK that is habitats of Britain.

Winston Churchill does, primer minister than formed British, and he say:

""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"".

Hes very smart, i tin ck the costs to rrive to be minister from British; the place Britain being is controlled for command army.

The settlements being indigent, have to status classic, the different if have money or if is poor and middle recrosses, it's good what man family unsaid to the army, for a better position for family.

I know fine, but indigents or Britain with low recrosses of Britain make or starting""warm tea"", who the all Britain on wet-up, hers ideas protected the territory of evil, for a free right and don't more pay commission in the mercadery was legality.

""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"";

this phrases is truth because you can do make a mistek again an learning better is something messenger indirect, can you do put in your live, for example , how now, always is fine try, don't have zero percent in the live of it and if you can more to your manner.",1.5,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5,2.0
5098F28A2EF3,".

It has been said that 1st Impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement to me is wrong. Impressions can be changed not only because people always mature in life, but also people may change by others actions, and they way life treats one another.

Impressions can be changed because people mature in life. For example, my mother tells me all the time that I was not the same kid she raised because of my appearance and the way I act around others. So, it is because I have matured that I have changed, if I was 7 or 8 years old, I would be shay to talk to people and try to be polite to not cause problems. Also, people would never smoke or even talk back if their impressions matter like they did when they were little. So peoples impressions change when you get mature in life

Impressions can be changed because of the people around them. For example, my little brother may not do all the things that he does now if it weren't for my behavior around others, back then my little brother would be very shay to speak. Then he saw how I spoke to others; with security, courage, and calm. He learned that from me and now he talks to anyone he enjoys hanging out with. So, with people being and influence in someones life, you would make a good or a bad impacted on someone's life which would change someone's impression for sure.

Impressions can be changed because the way life treats one another. For example, a week from my birthday I was going to turn 14 my dad got arrested; I did not feel like I wanted to throw a party, I hated everything cause I said to my self life isn't fair, Then the next morning in school, every ones impression of was that I never felt sad, I was a happy young teen; Until the next day everyone was wishing me a happy early birthday. I didn't feel happy about it because my mind was all caught up on my fathers arrest. People noticed that and their impression changed because I never felt happy in my life, everything went wrong. Instead of everyone greeting me every morning, they just gave me space because they thought that I was depressed and I was for a good time. Now people take me seriously now because I didnt make jokes. So peoples impression changes ever since they saw the way life wasn't fair.

In conclusion, It has been said that 1st Impressions are almost impossible to change. This statement to me is wrong. Impressions can be changed not only because people always mature in life, but also people may change by others actions, and they way life treats one another. All of these reasons are true because no one really knows what life, maturity, and the people around you can do to affect someone's 1st impressions of you.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
767920BDAD93,"Wouldn't it be better if you have the option to attend your classes from the commodity of your house? Although some say that distance learning would not benefit students, actually students should be benefited from distance learning to attend their classes from home because it can help students who have disabilities and it can also help students see school from a different perspective of learning.

Those who believe that distance learning would not benefit students have their reasons. They believe students could have trouble with social interaction in the future. They also think that it can motivate students to be dependable on artificial life. For example, my friend PROPER_NAME who rather attend his classes online and also rather spend his time playing video games and not with his family or friends.

Distance learning can benefit students who have disabilities. When I used to live in Honduras, I had a friend called Generic_Name. Generic_Name had a weird condition on her legs, she could not walk. It was very hard for Generic_Name to attend school. Her mother, called Generic_Name, had to push her wheelchair every morning so that Generic_Name could attend school. Our school was about 30 minutes away from home, by walking. During school time, Generic_Name had to push her wheelchair to get to her classes, restroom and recess. Even though, Generic_Name would get ready early in the morning, she would usually be late for school. Sometimes, Generic_Name would not get good sleep, so it was very hard for Generic_Name to pay attention in class. I think that it was not Generic_Name's fault for not attending school on time. I think that people with disabilities like Generic_Name, can benefit to attend classes online from home. It would save them time, so that they can get a good sleep to pay attention in class.

Distance learning can benefit students see school from a different perspective of learning. Last year, my cousin Generic_Name, refused to go to school. My cousin, had bad grades at all of his classes, at the beginning of first quarter. My cousin didn't like school at all. He would usually say that he would always be tired to attend school because he had to wake up early in the morning. My cousin, thought that he was really bad for school. I would usually hear complains of my cousin about the school's free lunch or about him thinking that he was not made for school. My cousin then talked to his counselor about this issue of him not being able to pass all of his classes. His counselor told him that he could attend all of his classes online, so he did. My cousin's grades are really good now, and he also thinks that it was and amazing experience, for having the opportunity to attend all of his classes. I think that my cousin was not bad at school, he was just not receiving the way of education he needed. I also think that people like my cousin, can be benefit by distance learning because they can experience their school year from a different way of learning.

In conclusion, distance learning can benefit people with disabilities, to help them feel that their necessities also count as students. Also it can benefit people who believe that they are not good for school, so that they can experience a different way to learn and feel useful. I think that distance learning can benefit students with this kind of problems, improve and be equal like the rest of the students, regardless their way of learning.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
F9FEE5DC1640,"Imagination and knowledge are all come from you mine, but what are the different between those two? Scientist Albert Einstein said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I'm agree with him, because if you take a class like art or computer graphs, you don't really need your knowledge, the most important thing you need, is your imagination. It can help you do better in the class.

first, the different between Imagination and knowledge is you don't need to rember the knowledge, and sometimes people have hard time to remberm. So you just need to think you like to do, and you don't need to follow the knowledge what you learn. I'm that kind of person that don't like to rember things, but I like to do what in my mine want to do. We have a lot knowledge need to learn, and we never finished learning, but we can use our imagination to do more things that is helpful to the world.

I guess, everybody like to play video games, but do you know how they make the games up? I did create app club this fall, first I thought we will create some app what other people already create it before, but than the teacher told us that, everybody will be create in they are own app, I don't know what kind of app I want to create, and told the teacher said, ""can I create a one somebody just create it before?"" ""No, you can't, you need to be imagination, just think of what you want to do, and what kind of app you like."" She answer. the end of the due day, I use my imagination to create a game app. From this class I learn that imagination is more important than knowledge.

Imagination and knowledge are both important, but imagination is a little better than knowledge, we can use our imagination to do more helpful things to our beautiful world. In our life we have too much knowledge need to learn, we need to keep learning and nerve stop.  ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E5B3346016BA,"A POSITIVE ATTITUDE IS THE KEY IN

LIFE

A positive attitude is the key to success in life? Attitude is a behavior that people has inside of them, and is impossible to see it, but by action you can tell. A person may born without attitude, but parents are one reason to teach their children to have an excellent attitude. A positive attitude is the key to success in life, because it assist to live with different people in world, and gives other a desire to impress someone who have a positive attitude.

First, a positive attitude is the key in life because, people loves someone who is kind and helpful. Having a better attitude in front of community make people feel pride. For example, school there is different people from different countries, and they have their own behavior. some student doesn't like to talk to other, and It gives them a hard time to learn new things in life. Without thinking attitude prove what kind of person he or she is.

Secondly, a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because it may entice people to see other are important, and being able to help each other. For instance, doctors they have an opportunity to keep a person alive. They do all of that because of their adorable attitude; and care a lot about another people's life. Small thing can make a difference in the world.

Nevertheless, some people say a positive attitude is not the key to success in life. They argue that thus born with positive attitude, but they start to change themselves later. The point has merit, because not all people has positive attitude success in life, some of them are struggle. However, positive attitude benefits people to receive a lot of knowledge, and become more successful. Therefore, positive attitude can give a person chances, to make connection with different people.

To conclude, positive attitude carry the mean of being a human. Because you can't say you're a good person with negative attitude. It's necessary to have a quality attitude, that may persuade other to change theirs. Lastly,

a guest person who have positive attitude can live anywhere he or she goes. The lesson, if you see your attitude people are not happy with try to modifying it.                                                   ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
F2A97549C778,"We live in a world were everything revolves around technology. People these days don't know what the world outside holds. Why? Because they always have their noses in their phones and they never take time to go outside. Very few peoplw know what it's like to actually spend time outside.

Sports are another example, not only are they fun, but they are alsp helping you stay healthy especially if you play almost everyday. If you think about it every sport requires you to run or to keep moving. Sports can also be something you do after dealing with a lot of stress or work. They were shown to be a good for both your body and your mind.

Families also become closer when they spend time together with no sort of technolgy that can distract them. I think now in days families aren't as close as they used to be because we spend to much time on our phones and not so much on the people who care about us.

Technology has advanced a lot in these past years and it is fine that people want to explore new things. But we shouldn't get lost in it and forget that there are other things waiting to be discovered beyond a tiny screen. Activities like sports bring you better things than a tiny screen can.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
DEDCC703F6FC,"Some school districts offer programs that allow high students to gradute in three years instead of the traditional four years. In my opinion, I feel like it is a good idea for some school districts to allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years.

The reason on why I feel like it is a good idea for students to graduate early is for Job oppurtunity, Entering college early and also Moving other places and starting a whole new life without no worries on education no more. Job oppurtunity's will help you out to save money, working on what you like doing and also find some jobs can help you get into college if you are interested. For example, I am studying about autotechnology and it is my second year doing it. My plans are to continue working on cars and hopefully find a job at a dealership so I can learn enough at college.

Another reason on why I feel like allowing students to graduate in three years instead of four is so that they can start off there future earlier than others by attending college. Entering college early is a good thing because you have some time to pick and decide on what you might want to study and learn about so you can get your masters on it or so that you can finish early and move onto what's next on your accomplishments in life. My school has the option to do Dual Enrollment which basically means starting college already and getting already college credits and still having to be in high school.

Finally, another reason on why I feel like graduating high school earlier than others is to have the chance to move to another country or state and start a brand new. Starting a brand new life can become very hard and very stressful. Starting a new life moving somewhere else means finding a better job oppurtunity, finding a olace to live in your budjet and also finding new people to hang around with but in my opinion at the end it will all be worth it. Some students are already looking somewhere to move on there own or with a roomate because they might be having problems at home that they don't want to deal with. At the same time of moving to another place you have to make sure that you are ready on what's about to come into your life. For example, paying bills, paying rent, house supplies and also if you have a vehicle make sure that your payments are on time.

In conclusion, I feel like allowing high school students to graute in three years instead of the traditional four years is a good idea. Job oppurtunity, Entering college early and also Moving to another state or country in my opinion are one of the main important things to focus on after finishing high school.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
D61FC9795679,"Half or more humans use there technology for social media instead talking to them in person. Most websites on the Internet shows that humans that keeps using there technology for along time goes through out depression. We should stop using technology for fun. It could help humans have a battler life, also you could protect your eyes form getting glasses. One of my best friend had glasses wend he was only 5 year old. He was watching TV in front of the screen

Technology can help us in a way like sending pictures to someone that live far away form you, Doing your homework. Finding out the time and also the mind reason of technology is calling your family members and also you friends that live in a different country. But technology cost a lot of money. But my option is that technology does not helps you on any thing. Technology just routines you brain cell.

Technology can also make a dumb guy. Like if you keep using you phone and not study for a quiz or a test you going to get a bad grade for it. This is why technology bad for everyone. If If you use technology if going to eat your brain cell. One of my friend cheated on a test with his phone come on, the teacher was just seating on his chair and playing on his phone. Even one of my best teacher was using his phone to.

Not most of my teacher are this, but some are. Even in gym people just play on there phone and just sit there. But, me i play soccer, baseball and even basketball some times. Mostly I play soccer. Ya

I am talking about students so, even gym teacher do it to. OK lets get to the point am I the only one that know about this? Thie things happen everyday, everywere. Did you just found out?                                                                                          ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
CF290C0884F0,"To conserve the energy and resourse, we do not should have to work a four-day for week. Some jobs, work during the week, and others in the weekend days. We can not conserve it much of the resourse or energy even they give four days of work, because some workers do their jobs in the week days, others will do it in the weeekend days. This is because there are a lot differents types of jobs, that do not permit they to work only in the week days. Add to more hours its not make a diference because some job are in the night, some in the mornings.. Most of the people they have off and want to go outside to have fun or go to a restaurant have dine, some bussines have to be open in this days that the people have off and want to do something in the weekend day. In my position I don't think we conserve the energy and resourse doing in a four-day work week. It's have to be nesesary that the businesses have people working and open their bussines the 7 days, to those people who go to their businesses. Schools must don't have to chanche the five days to four days in the week. Students can adopted the two hours more but, they will be have three days to spend their time.

One reason why I will be desagree if the system want to change the schedule of the schools is because it's going to affect most of the students, since they don't have a job and will be pass must of the time in their fhones, using the internet, social media, wathing tv or playing video games. Students will be doing nothing productive in their lifes doing this we will waste most of our time. This will be affect in our lifes, I take a position in this situation because I am a students and I know the students hobbies what we like to do, what not and how we wasting our time.

However to add two more hours in the workers scheddule. It can be good for some of them because they don't have towork 3 days, but also going to affect most of the workers, that are parents. Most of the parent can not aply to work the week days. Suppose they aply for work the 4 days, but can be diferents days like their are a lot jobs that have diferents schedule. Monday to Friday, Sunday to Thursday, or Wednesday to Monday.

Schools also chanching the schedule, parents will be have to pay for babysitting for those who have kids.

Not all people have a government job the require only work the week day and weekend days off.

Most of the businesses ask to work 5 to 6 days and which its not have to be Monday through Friday.

Also we can see it's imposible to change to the four-day to conserve the resourses even people work 4 days. People have to work between the 7 days, some have to work 4 days and when this people have off the other half have to work that days because businesses can not be close the 7 days. People must will have to work even diferents day.

In conclusion for me it is not a goog idea to change the schedule of the students, to a four-day, when they have 5 days. Students can do more work in school and learn more and develop their knowladege passing more time in the school. Can be good idea for the people who work because they can have rest more time with family, or doing hobbies. Work 10 hours its good for those who will have off 3 days, but not for students because students have to develop in school more time. ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
F44AE6192EA9,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""Unless you try to do something beyond What you already mastered, you will never grow.""

I agree with author Ralph Waldo Emerson because base on each experience of every people that they had mastered, i think that what you already mastered in life it can make you be more stronger base on the experience that you had.

I agree with the quote because unless you try to something you need to have pasion and focused in things that you can grow in life over things that you already mastered. You can grow beyond and over things that you already master and learn new things to keep growing not just staying in the same spot.

Experince new things in life are going to make you feel more stronger and make you think that you can do things that you maybe never thought about that you were going to do beyond what you already mastered.

Unless that you need to reach and make new goals to grow you need to make an efort no matter how hard it can be for you, you need to focus in that goals that you want to grow more and have more experience just for keep practecing.

Base on my experiences, i could do something beyond what i already mastered because i want to learn new things and try to make good things and that's going to make me grow more and experiences new things that i never thought that i can do. To grow exterior and interion i need to be confident with my self and letting me know thing that i can do better thing that i already mastered and be more suscescfull.

I agree with author Emerson's statement because of what he wrote it make me feel confident with me and keep trying beyond what i already know and already master you need to push your thought to make your goals come true.

Thank you     ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
EB67209E0468,"I think the people should always accomplish more by always doing something. You'll be more successful, each time you do this by most of the times.

One of my life experience was me joining the swimming team. There's times that i would wanna give up on myself. some other days, i would feel too lazy, extremely tired, or having lots of work after school. One night, i decide that it's not the time to just give up on yourself, after everything what i've had done. After that night, whenever i thought this to myself. I went every single day to my swimming practice, also thinking thoughts of head to never give up. All this sudden, i became more successful ! i was a leader to my swimming team. My couch knew one day i would put more effort on myself, he always believed in me.

Some other days, there's times after swimming club. I just wanted to hang out with my friends, to able make time for them to go shopping, walking down the park,go on the beach or having fun at their parties. I know, if i wanna become a leader to my swimming team. First, i must do what's best for me. Then i can make plans for all my friends to hang out. When i became a role model and also starting do go my practices every single day. afterwords, i started to hang out my friends !

They completely understand me. what i was trying to do for what' best for myself . I took full responsibility on my swimming club first. at the end, i started to have more enough time to be with my friends and including family as well.

At the end, One lesson that i have learn in my life experiences is to never give up ! in order to be more successful. There's nothing that i regret on my choices. In matter of fact, i am very proud of myself, how far i become to be a great leader for my swimming team. In the future, i am chasing my dream to become a world famous swimming player on live television. If i would've make a speech on live television, I would want to say "" by accomplish more you can always be actually more successful by making your dreams turn into a reality. Always learn by doing our own responsibility and never let anyone say otherwise.

People should start accomplish something that they think it's best for them self just to be more successful. By taking this advice, you'll see the big different how things could come into a great reality. Instead of not doing something in order to accomplish yourself. Try make enough time or be able to focus on things you may can do, By doing little steps each time, you will get a point to reach up your goals. It's very important how you make your choices, just in order to be more successful in your life. Take the advances, be a good leader and make this a good lifestyle.     ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
4A87CFC37238,"I believe that success comes from repeatedly failing but never losing interest on the task you're trying to accomplish. Trying to be successful in a certain task isn't something that can be done over night it requires extreme passion and patience, Certain scientist have been successful over time by failing but always getting back up on their feet and trying again hopefully to do things better. Scientist are driven by their enthusiasm over the life of science and what interesting things you could discover from studying it, their consistency of repeatedly failing and getting back up brought them a long way from nothing which eventually turned into something big for the society over time.

For example Christiano Ronaldo the world famous soccer player, Christiano worked very hard to become who he is now which is a world class famous soccer player. Becoming a pro soccer player isn't something that can be done over a couple weeks you have to work your way from the bottom you have to be extremely good to get into a club with years worth of practicing also comes with a lot of failure by not being able to do certain tricks, certain passes, or shots it's very difficult to perfect all those tricks or certain shots but that didn't stop Ronaldo from being the best. Soccer took multiple months of training and lots of failing and loosing matches for Ronaldo to get recognized after struggling and loosing Ronaldo eventually carried his team to multiple wins with tremendous skills, therefore soccer clubs came out to watch his games and soon he was offered a spot to play pro soccer, He worked his way up to becoming the best soccer player anyone has seen.

Most people in the world think failing is a bad thing and eventually give up after time, because of the lack of passion they have towards their task so tend to give up and move on with another task. The majority of our society are becoming more and more lazy over time which leads them push away all their work away for another time, therefore it's less of a chance for them to do bigger and better things in life like everyone wants. Some rappers, multi millionaires, and professional sports players became high school drop outs who worked at fast food places to get money to get through their day but they never gave up on what they loved the most regardless on how broke they were or how many problems they had they going on in their lives they never gave up on the thing they loved the most, they thought that one day they were gonna make it to the top and have a better life than they were living they never let go of that passion no matter how hard they had failed they always got back up and tried even harder than the last time.

Eventually, all that sweat and hard work they had put into what they were passionate about they got recognized more everyday which made them want to do much more in life, be better person from what they were yesterday. Anyone can be successful if they really put effort into what their passionate about no matter how many times you tend to fail as long as you're enthusiastic enough about your task to keep moving on and doing better.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
446CE95CF3F2,"Learning experince from others could help you a lot. The problem is that most people think that learning from others wouldn't help. The reason why learning from the experince from others is so you could learn from their mistakes, learn what they went through, and how they dealt with it.

You learn from peoples mistakes. If you learn from other peoples mistakes you could avoid them. I find it really helpful when I learn from others mistakes. Learning mistakes could help you in life to be sucssesful. My friends make a lot of mistakes which I learn from them. Most people do think making mistakes isn't a good thing, but I think it could help you improve on what you did wrong. What I'm saying is that learning mistakes frorm others is a good thing.

You learn what they went through. Learning what others went through could help you understand people more. Understanding people could help you understand people more. Another reason is that learning what they went through could help you a lot in the future. If you find someone like them, you could help them. You could get close to the person and know them better. getting to know someone could help you make a friend, which is something everyone needs. learning from other and what they went through could help you sometime in the future.

You could learn different ways on how they solved their problem. When you find out how they solved their problem, it could help you. You could be going through the same thing and might need help or advice. If someone else is going through it, you could help them or give advice. In my opinion, helping others is a big thing in life. You learn that most people could have the same struggle, and they solve it in different ways. I think it's a good thing to know that two people went through the same thing, and had different ways to solve it. In conclusion, you should learn how others deal with their problems.

Learning experince form others will help you learn form their mistakes, what they went through, and how they dealt with it. My claim is that you should always learn from others. Learning from others will defenitly help you in the future.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
DF9E11F7A06E,"Ralph Waldo Emerson says""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow.""On one hand,some people disagree with statement. On the other hand,some people agree with this statement. People should try to do something beyond what they have already mastered since their confident level will grow,it makes them feel good,and make their live easier.

However,not everybody agree with position,some people claim that people can grow in live without trying something new because they don't want to get out of their comfort zone and try new things. Nevertheless,this opposition other important,namely that trying new things give us a high level of confident. For example,my biggest fear in live is airplanes and i never been on it,but if i try it for the first time in my live even i scare or not next time,i would have more confident for trying new thing since when the airplane was my biggest fear and i try it. I could do more. Further more, trying new things make our confident level high which is an important thing in our live.

In addition,it makes us feel good. For instance,my cousin was always sad and she hated to try new things. One day we went swimming,everyone had fun except my cousin. After condensing her for a long time,she try it. On that time,my cousin was so happy that she even wants to be a swimmer now. Thus,people should try new things to make them feel good and happy.

Finally,it makes the live easy. To illustrate,if someone be so strike in live and doesn't wants to try something beyond what he/she already mastered,that person will have a hard live. The person will never grow in live since he/she scares to get out the comfort zone and try new thing. Moreover,we should get out of our comfort zone so we could have an easy live.

Based on this argument,one must conclude,people never get better unless they try new things in live. In the whole,Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement was true based of the reasons.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
89C7C4115B84,"One place that i really want to go is Generic_City, Italy. i really want to go here mainly because of the stuff i can do their. I really want to see the fancy cars that Italy make's like the Lamborghini or the Ferrari an the Alpha Romero or other car that i normally dont see here were i live. I also want to know more about their culture. i wan to learn their language i want to eat their food i want to know how they live if ts ruff or easy or even both. I really want to eat the real Italian food! i always wanted to see if their would be a difference. One other main reason i want to come is for the tours, i want to get on the cannou then paddle and ride the whole channel.

The reason why i really wan to see the fancy cars is because i have a big thing for cars. Ever since i was a little kid my dad will always talk about cars and i'll always be with him ill play with toy cars and and when ever i see i nice car i always call it out saying ""thats my mustang gt"" or ""thats my supra"". My cousin always modifies if cars (he's also a car guy) he's another reason why i like cars. He has a Rx-7 every single part is modified he spend more money on his car then he does of him self. When i grow up i'm going to be a car guy like him. Another reason why i want to go to Italy to see the cars is because were i live you would see a Ferrari like once every 1-2 years and over in Italy seeing a Lamborghini must be like seeing a mustang. so that is why i want to see the luxury cars.

I really want to know how their culture is. i want to know how life is over their i want to see if their kind or mean. i want to learn their language so i can talk with them. To me learning their language or understand it will be an easy thing to do. I think it will be easy because Italian and Spanish language is closely the same. I just don't want to be in on part of the country i also want to go to other places because i know that their are different cultures around the country.

I mainly want to try the real Italian food i dont want to be eating the American version of Italian food. I want to see if their a difference of the the foods i want to know witch one tastes better or if they taste the same. thats what i want to know about their culture.

Another thing that i want to do over their is go in tours. i want to go on tours because when i see on the TV shows, movies, and commercials i always say ""im tryna go their!"". I also want to go to tours over their because i can see the cultures and how places look their. When i go on tour i find out stuff that i didn't know about and finding about new thing is good for your brain. I also always wanted to go to the cannel waters and ride. ever since i was a little kid i would see that people would ride on the cannel waters.

This is why i want to go to Generic_City, Italy. because of all off these fun stuff i can do their. All of these are reasons why i want to go to Generic_City, Italy. I hope one day i can go to Italy and explore their.    ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
FE69FBDD5681,"Is learning online a gift? Students should attend to classes from home because that way the students would have more time to study or do homework, the students would get less distracted, and the students would learn better if they feel more comfortable.

Students would have more time to study, or do homework because they could start school later on the day, or students could start early it depends on how the students feel. Students would feel better if they had a better rest, or knowing they could do school whatever time they feel good.

The students would get less distracted if they learned from home because they are not around their friend or peers, who are usually a distraction. Of course the students will get bored of being alone while doing school but it's better for them to stay focused on what they are doing, and plus they have a better understanding on what they are doing if the students don't get distracted. The students would be more dedicated on the homework's, tests, or projects because they would understand a lot more if they are not distracted by their friends.

The students would learn a lot more if they are comfortable for example people pay more attention when they are in their rooms on their beds or when at their house. Students would rather sit on a comfortable chair rather than a school chair because when your sitting on the same chair everyday your body starts to hurt, or you don't feel comfortable sitting in that position.

Students should have the opportunity to attend school from home because its more beneficial for them, they have a better timing, they are more comfortable when working from home, and they would get less distracted from other students.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
B3AAF502DFFE,"In this generation people use Technology for their needs and wants. If their was no Technology than I would not be able to take my writing SOL which I am taking it right now. In my opinion I believe that the limitation of human contact due to the use of Technology had positive effects on people's lives.

People use Technology to complete many tasks through out their lives. If their was no Technology their would not be any improvement in our lives neither country. people can contact their family with video calls to see their families that they havent seen each other for years. It has been 7 years that I am living in United States of America and I cant go back to my country for various reasons, but I have been in contact with my family everyday, which makes me really happy, and feel good about it. Nowadays everyone need Technology for everything. My friend father is an engineer, and all his work is with computer, and Technology. If their was no Technology he wouldnt be able to complete his task or learn new things neither earn money.

Technology saves Millions of people lives in many ways. Many people do not have money to take tutorials for their kids, but they can use YouTube and Google which let them learn in a better way, and without paying any money. In fact even though if you had money you could save your money and use Technology/ Internet for learning. My parents never took me to any tutorials not because they didnt have money but because they wanted me to be independent and use Internet to learn more. Technology had helped me a lot, and will be helping me and millions of people in this world. I think in this Generation If their was no Technology people would not improve or even learn anything. I have learned from Internet that you can read books online instead of going and buying. Technology has let people gain education and experiences through our lives.

Their are thousands of disabilities in this world which they cant go and work, but they use Internet to sale some stuff so they can earn money. My cousin is a specialist and he was born with not having one of his leg. He was so depressed and didnt have any confident that one day he could work and earn money, but with the help of Internet I have thought him to buy some clothes and other stuff and put it online so people can see and buy it. Technology has lots of benefits that we humans are so lucky of being able of using it which some people cant, because of various reasons. It has been 3 years that we have opened our own clothing business in Unites States of America, and as we all know it's really hard competing with clothing stores here in USA, but from the time we started putting our clothes in websites and becoming popular day by day we are making lots of profits which makes us really happy. Technology has a positive effects in our lives which a lot of people agree with my opinion.

I agree with that, that Technology also had a negative effects in our lives , but also that depends on the person itself which decides how to use Technology. Most of my friends make fake accounts on Instagram and Facebook to bully people which a lot of people die from being bullied. Technology has a lot of advantages and disadvantages that we can use form it. Some people's use Internet for watching bad videos, making fake accounts and put putting fake news on websites and hacking people through social media which are really bad, but their are only 5% that they do those things, and not everyone which we should think of the other 95% of using Technology for their needs, and the benefits of gaining lots of education.

In my perspective I believe that the use of Technology has positive effects on people lives, because we human are earning money out of Technology, learning new things, and gaining experiences in our lives with the help of of Technology. I think their should be a way of blocking the bad websites and making securities for people making fake accounts and for people that bully others to stop it. In my opinion we should think about the benefits of Technology than the negatives because. If their was no Technology our lives would never improve and we would not be able to learn new things. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with each other. My dad has been in Generic_City for 30 years and his job is sailing Fabrics and all his customers are from Generic_City, Generic_City ,and Generic_City which they have never been in Generic_City. They have founded our sites through online, and buy from us. My dad has never seen most of his customers in real lives they only have been in contact. We should look at Technology from a good point of view.

In General we have variety of reasons that we could use technology of our tasks to be completed. Technology could be good and bad in both ways which we human should decide of how to use it either of our needs or for negative things. I believe that technology has had positive effects on people lives.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.5
681B9CD21B07,"Dear principal,

My name is STUDENT_NAME and I want you to consider policy one for various reasons. The first reason why we should have cell phones is because some parents like to check up on there son's and that can't happen in policy two, but in policy one we can do that and if you are a parent wouldn't you like to check up on your son or daughter? Second, I don't see why we shouldn't be able to bring them at all because say we forgot our homework at home and say we already missed a day of homework and if we miss another one we will get a detention, we can just call our mom during lunch break or passing period and tell her if she can bring our home work. Lastly, say we are in a lock down because someone had a gun in the campus and the man or women cuts the power off so no one can call through the telephones we can just grab our cell phones and call the police. I'm not asking you to approve it I'm asking to considerate please.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
13578C0BCC3C,"I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day, because we need time to do Homework and study and spend time with family but if the school boards adds a hour and a half hour then we cannot do those things. we also need to have fun like going outside. When we get home we can only a little time to study and do homework and maybe have some fun. We will be bored in school and be tired cause then we get home we will be tired of all the time in school so we would want to take a nap but then we won't do Homework we wont study or do anything cause we will be tired. Sometimes i have to be home early and take care of my little brothers but if the school board adds one hour and a half hour then my brothers will be all alone.

I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day because some teachers might have to take care of they're children and they need to take care of him at 3:30 but if the time of the school changes then he will be late to take care of they're children and come 4:30. they would want to quit they're jobs. Get another job then the school will lose a lot of teachers. All the students will be hungry because they got lunch early. Some students will not even go to school they will skip or just not go to school if they're is one hour and a half hour. If students parents want they're sons to be home early but the students cant because they're going to be one hour and a half hour extra so then a lot of students wont be in school then they're parents have to pick them up.

I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Because the students are gonna have to get a second lunch. The lunch ladies are going to say they are tired and cant cook anymore. The lunch ladies will quit. We will have no lunch ladies. We will not eat anything.

I disagree that the school boards should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Some parents are not going to let they're children go to school if the school board adds on hour and a half hour to school each day. Parents will be mad and sue the school. Also some of the parents will travel with theyre children to another state to another school with no extra time. The school will lose a lot of students.

I disagree that the school boards should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Some parents want to take they're kids out and have fun but not if we have extra time. A lot of students will be mad cause they will not have fun but have to learn more at school. Parents would be mad because they wanted to take they're sons out but can't because they're will be extra time. So students cant have fun and do more work at school.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
6792C2E73B6A,"Some people agree with the statement ''success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm'' because the failure help to learn how other's to be prepared and better understanding. But many people disagree with Churchill's for the reason what they don't believe in the failure because if they fail something they do better the next time. Since, no one is perfect everybody have something bad and something good this don't make a different the other's.

Although many people concern the failure how something the need due for doing a better person in the life but that does the means they can't due. Some people thinking what the failure is important for they life because they learning a new things and they put all of they for doing good person. Clarity, this people due everything for not failure something.

Additionally, many people don't believe in the faillure they say is somenthing happed in the life for doing a better person. If they fail a class or don't pass the class they keep trying and never give up. Surely, with failers they learn from the expirence they will not loss the enthusiasm.

Ask you can see failure is not always a good way to major sucess. One need to success failure is put a attention and due a better person and trying hard. If this people trying the things wiil be better in they were doing. Although all many people are success with failure.

Truely, failure is part of life and we need to understand our failers so the we can successed. By understanding our failers learn how doing better and not worry about the failers. Since they are worry about the failers one can have more enthusiasm to success.        ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
1C17939C40A7,"I really like this quote because, i believe this is a problem that basically happens in many homes and also many society of people. Being motivated to become what they dont want to be and what you dont have the passion for. Therefore i disagree with Emersons statement; Why? Becacause i believe everyone has a choice to choose what they are passionate about, not what the society or the influenece of their parent saying I see a doctor or an engineer in you. Having the love for a profession or a study is one of the greatest thing ,you feel like you are living everytime you figure something out,you feel happy and motivated to take it futher to you reach the top. When someone is passionate about a profession,studing of a language,writting,discovering,healing,helping people,anything in this world i believe they should be motivated. Not brought down by making them do something else because its not healthy physically or mentally i believe. An example is ME.I have studied business almost my whole like since i was in my country,beause i wanted to be work in any field of business. Last year i moved to the united state and my parent and everyone around me said i should be a nurse,but i dont have the passion for nursing,but with no support on my side i decided to be nurse,and mentally i feel like ita going to be difficult, and i always bring my slef down when i thing about it, but if it was something i had the passion for i wouldnt mind the hardness i will just concentrate on how i will make it and and believe in myself that i will surly get and will also be very determined. Thata what i mean by being motivated and supported to do what you want and do what you love is really great.

So i disagree with this quote,some people will agree because they believe your society or your surrounding makes you who you are. But i believe the society and everyone around do not make you,or can not stop you or influene you to do the opposite of what you want to do unless you give them the chance like me or you take your stand and let them know why you want and love this thing and it will be a great honor if you accomplished it . ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
1DDC2D1DB4EE,"Dear principal, I'm writting this letter to let you know my opinion on the idea of change the school lunch menu into a new healthier menu. I think that it would be a good idea change the lunch menu to be more healthy because it will help the students to consume less unhealthy food, can help students to stay healthy and could encourage the students to begin eat healthier.

Students consume unhealthy food on school alsmost every day, change the menu into a healthier will help students to consume less unhealthy food. Eating unhealthy food daily could damage students in many differents ways. One this ways is that could bring students diseases such as heart problems or could cause obesity in a young age. Additionally change the menu could not just be benefical for students it could also help teachers and personal staff as well to consume less unhealthy food daily.

By having a healthier menu could help the students to stay healthier because they will be eating the proteins that they needed to develped better. Also this could help students to do better in things such as sports, and their respectives classes on school. Another advantage of this menu is that will give students the opportunity to try something new instead of having the same food that they're had been having year over year. In addition by doing this could migth make students realize that having this menu is not just to force them to eat food that they don't like, instead is to keep and them stay healthy.

Even thougth that some of the students will migth think that this would be a bad idea because will eliminate some of their favorite food, I think it will be helpful for them because by doing this will encourage them to begin to eat healthier, because that could help them now and on the future. Also this could encourage them to covince their friends and family to begin to eat healty because this could prevent them from having a disease just for eating unhealthy food.

In conclusion I think that change the school menu into a new healthier lunch menu is a good idea, because it will help the students to consume less unhealthy food, could help them to stay healthy and could encourage them begin to eat healthier. Those are the reasons that make me think this way, I hope this letter could help you decide that implement this plan is a good idea to change the school for better. Thank you for you time, dear principal.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
2003BF2E6DD0,"What is knowledge with little to no imagination? If you had a mind filled of knowledge but with barely any imagination then that would be the same as eating an Oreo with a dusting of cream in the middle. Just constant knowledge is boring, but adding imagination is like adding sprinkles on to a boring vanilla cake. Quantum physicist, Albert Einstein once said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" Einstein is indeed correct because there are many ways imagination is more important than knowledge.

One reason why imagination is greater than knowledge is that of the ability to imagine the unthinkable. For example, how do you think Albert Einstein learned and explored the unknown of quantum physics? He used his mind to imagine the unthinkable. How you think Elon Musk came up with the idea to start a colony on Mars? He imagined in it all in his head. How do you think Steve Jobs invented the iPhone? He used imagination to gain that knowledge. Imagination is what fuels the mind to create knowledge. It's all in the head, that's where it all starts from.

Another reason why imagination is important is because of the benefits of using your imagination often. For example, using your imagination often will have you obtain a more creative and detailed mindset overall. You can also do many cool things using your imagination such as lucid dreaming, invent new ideas, or even train your mind to see the world in a different way. You should always use your imagination often to strengthen it. You should also try lucid dreaming to come up with brand new or more innovative idea while using your already known knowledge.

Finally, the last reason why imagination is more important than knowledge is that it can change you mentally and physically. How imagination can change you mentally as a person is by making you a better person or be a more fun person overall. How imagination can change you physically as a person is by motivating you to be a better by work outing and or going on jogs pretty often. As a result, using your imagination can change you in many ways as described above, unlike knowledge.

In conclusion, I agree with Einstein and his idea about how imagination is more important than knowledge. Using your imagination is benefiting, motivating, changing all in different ways. No matter who you are, you will be changed by the different ways imagination can affect you and on your already known knowledge. Imagination is alot more important than you think it is.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
277A95AC0190,"I agree that the possitive attitude is the key to sucess in life. The reason why a lot of people agree with me in this subject, is because lot of people that have a negative attitude or minset, their thoughs or ideas would always be negative. All those people would never be sucess in life, because no matter what they would like to do in life or the ideas they have in their head that they wanna do in life. All thoose people would always have that negative spot in their head, that would not let them success in life, all those people would have to work two times harder to make it to the end, to make their dreams come true and sucess in life. Out of 100% of pople that have a negative attitude or minset, only 10% would sucess in life, the other 90% would not be able to sucess in life.

The people that have a positive attitude in life, all those people would success in life, because everything would be easy for them, because no matter how hard the situation gets, they always gone think that they can do it. They always have the minset of we would get throught this and we gone do it and can do it. nothing would stop them from making their dreams come true. They would not let anything get into their heads, that is why for all those people is easy to make it unitl the end, to make their dreams come true and be successful in life, because all those people know what they wanna do in their life and because they want the best for them and to give their family the best in the future.

The people with their mind set positiveand 100% sure of what they wanna do with thei life, their reasons can be because they want a better life for them, wanna help other people and been an example for other people, like guys or girls that are about to gradute high school that they would start seeing what the real wolrd world is, they wanna give their families a better future. They wanna be a good example for their kids, they wanna show their kids that no matter how hard life gets, they do not need to give up or have a bad attitude in life, because that would not help them to be successful in life, that they need to stay positive no matter what and always keep their attitude and minset postitive, that if they stay positive, they would success in life and would make all their dreams come true.

Geting to a conclusion, lot of people would agree that all the people that have a negative mindset would not make it and be success in life and that it would really hard for them, because they would have that minset that they not gone make it and they would always have a negative thought in their head, that would not let them make their dreams come true. In the other side people knows that they people that have a posstive mind set they would make all their dreams come true, that those people would be a great example for other people to make their dreams come true, those people have their minset that they wanna be better for their life and the future, because they wanna be a good example for their kids and their family. They want other people to see that nothing is impossible in this life that everyone can make it and make all their dreams come true. All they need to have is. A positive attitude to be success in life        ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
E0B86027C5C5,"Do you prefer doing things in life by yourself or with a partner? Some people prefers to work or do things with a partner or in groups. Although, most of the people think that working or doing things individuality will make them more succesful in life because, you know what you are doing, you know what you want in life and what your goals are. being yourself in this society is the best for you.

Working or doing things individuality will result better for you because, you know what you are doing. you know what your dreams in life are, only you have that knowledge so, you will work hard to make them come true. when you are doing something and you feel like you are doing it wrong, ask for some help or advice. show people that you do noy give and that you can do it.

When working individually you know what you want. when you get that, you will feel proud of your self, because you did it by yourself without any help from anyone and that makes it more special. to the people who did not believe in you, you will make them see that you can do it. whatever positive things you do for your life, they are better when they are self made, you did everything you could to accomplish.

Achieving your goals individuality is the best accomplishment in life, planing things and accomplish them by yourself, is one of the best thing that can happen to you in your progress. always be your self, do not try to be someone else, put effort on everything that you do to achieve your goals. fight for your goals, the most special feeling is when you achieve something that you proposed to yourself. being yourself is the greatest thing.

Most of the people think that working or doing things individuality will make the more succesful in life because, you know what you are doing, you know what you want in life and what your goals are. you could have important skills and that could make you someone important for the society. always be yourself. don't try to be someone else because you can do things that the other person can not do or viceversa.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
CBA73A4D5C18,"Do you think individuality create a unique way to be your own of life style? Some say individuality make a specific way to achieve goals being yourself. I'm definitely argue with Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement about individuality because your own style of works,Nobody tell us what to change , freely to choose your way of thinking.

First, your own style of works. For example, my dear sister "" Generic_Name"" yesterday, she got a phone call.

I was with her, when she answered the phone call , it's was the teacher saying if my sister "" Generic_Name "" would come at her college, because she was the only one at her class to got a higher score for doing the project with her own creativity and unique steps at the project without following the steps that her teacher being teaching daily at the whole classroom. The teacher told my sister it's a good way to do something with your own ideas without the fear that would be good or bad its just exploring your ability to making great works being yourself .This explain my sister for being the only one to did the project with her own way got the most higher grade.

Second, Nobody tell us what to change. For example,

my sister "" Generic_Name"", every night, she tell me, how I need to brush my hair correctly, she thinks the hair need a proper care and treatment to brushing the hair . I dont like to do at her way because I feel her way to brush it's more slowly than mine own way to brush my hair, so every night she got mad with me because never use her style to brush the hair. I always said to her, I like to brush my hair at my way and my sister can not tell me to change my way at brushing my beautiful hair. This explain, my sister, don't need to get mad for doing the opposite the she wants to do, I got my style and nobody has to tell me what to change at doing any activity.

Third, Freely to choose your way of thinking. for examples. ""Generic_Name "" my sister told to my mom , if she can participate at the "" project of making a novel "" in her school , so my mom let to her participate. She thinks that would be the winner for being the most iconic novel might be existed in the world, so she starting to writing it down, each content at her novel but she dont need a examples of novel because she got her own style to write down, she say her novel would be a entertainment novel because her way to thinks it's different at the other types of novels, her novel will be a her own creativity and passion to make the novel the next most read novel in the world. This explain,free thinking its discovering a new person.

Individuality, makes us special to achieve it goals. style of works different than anyone else. we don't need to someone to tell us what to change. Being free to choosing thoughts it 's s a perfect way to express it with the real world .some says individuality is to be a selfish behavior for doing the things at ours own ways but Individuality it's just a sense of life to find your own way to work. In the future individuality would be the secret tool to reach different goals.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
C82037D6072F,"Befits For An Extra Hour of School

85% of students who study more can pass more test. I feel like some students could befits from an extra half an hour of school because it could help students learn more. Also some students struggle with some subjects so it could also befits some students who can not stay back. School should add an extra half of a hour to school because it could help students get more education, better job opportunity, and help students to be better prepared for test.

First, students with more education could help students lead to success. Education is helpful because it is need in a lot of daily activities. Education is also super important because it is through out life. Also some students who want to get in a good collage but do not have the money for it if they have a good education they can get in for free but they have to have good grades. Some students might want to become a teacher but might not have the right education for that so that why education is important.

Second, students could have better job opportunity. Some students would not like the job they get. Also students with good education could give students a job they want. Another thing a better job could make the students get more money from higher paying job and also some students could want to become a teacher. Students also do not have to worry about how much they are getting paid and what type of job they have. Some students could have a better job opportunity if they get an extra 30 minutes because they get more education are more likely to pass their test.

Third, students will be better prepared for test. Some students struggle with a lot of test because they can not stay back. So I think an extra 30 minutes could help students get a little more education and it could help students learn more and be better prepared for test. An also passing test is important because it is one of the highest grade and if u fail them it could make your grade go down a lot. An some student may struggle and that could help student do more activities and maybe they can pass more.

In conclusion, I think an extra 30 minutes could hep students get more education. It is also good for some student. It will also help students be better prepared and it could let them lead to success. So I feel like an extra 30 minutes is not that long so some student would also not mine. So it could benefits some student to make them more successful.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
278DE0BFACBF,"School's should not exend a school day by two hours and have a three day weekend. Just to conserve energy and and resources. Students would have to work a lot harder. Student would also have more resonsibility.

Student already hate school and are already really tired when they get home from an seven hour school day. So whyadd another two hours to there day. This would cause a kid alot more stress because of the extra amount of work they would have to do, keeping there grade up and staying fouces on there school work. Plus they would still have to come home and do there homework or any work they didnt finish in class.

Also some student might have a lot more of resonibility to do and adding another two hours would just stress them out with the amount of work. Like what if the kid was doing some after school activites, the kid would be to tired to do any clubs or sports. Students would also be unmotivated to get job because they would have the time or enegry to work.

Some would say that it would a good idea to extend the school days by two hours because of the extra day off they'll get, and because of all the energy and resourcs they'll be saving, but wearing out the kids by giving them extra work to do. Stressing them out moreis not worth it.

So in conclusion I dont think school's should extend there days and give us another day off. It would be to stressful and to tiring. Student need time to go home after school and rest, and have a few days to rest.",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
60AEEA05E1A9,"Online classes, i think that if students really trying to learn something is not need for them to take classes online but sometimes, teachers cannot teach al the students well because is only 1 teacher and like 30 students in every class room, and i think that online classes are not a bad idea because they been teach by a computer and they have to pay attention or they will fail, but at school they wont fail that easy because they can get copy from another students and thats how they will pass classes better at school then online .

Now lets really talk about online classes, is a perfect solution for students that for some reason they cant go to school in case that they had a car accident they cant walk but they parents dont want them to fail the school year , or they dont feel like going to school thats why online classes are the best choice not only for me for a lot of people like student and parents; I mean school is not that bad at school students can make more and more friends every year online they will get tired if they have to see the same computer and hear the same voice everyday.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
7E530A20DA68,"People and students' have some amazing talents and skills. Talents are very impressing and challenging for an example,people that can juggle with oranges or bottles and people that can sing. Some talents can be very difficult at first and people can give up easily but when people practice and they try they do not give up. The skills and talents I enjoy the most is playing the violin,cooking,and makeup on my own time.

When people play the violin they say It is very difficult and it is very boring. Some adults that have played the violins and the chelos are very talented and their skills are by playing the violin Is just slowly moving the bow towards up and slowly moving it down. When I first played the violin It was not easy moving the bow fast towards the bridge of the violin and knowing the songs that some students' had to play by their self. When I had my first Pyrimid Concert In Elementary school I had a great time playing and learning how to play the violin.

Cooking is another talent that some people like to enjoy while they are home or they help their mom cook. Cooking can be fun and people can experience new kinds of food that they never tried. When I was little I always wanted to cook with my mom and she cooked all different kinds of food like Rice with Chicken,she made Pizza,and also baked Cookies and Inchiladas. They are resturants that have good flavor foods like when people go to the Buffet or to IHOP.When I cook with my mom or my sister I experience that cooking can be hard because people do not know what ingrediants they have to use or the taste is disgusting.

Makeup Is one of the funest. They are some teenage girls that love to do their own makeup or they just do it for fun. A lot of teenage girls start learning how to do makeup by watching on the internet step by step. Teenage girls have really good talents in fashion and using good color shade on thier eye lid. Talents In makeup are fun when people have their own time with their firends when they come over. Some girls feel more comfortable by using makeup and some girls do not. Makeup can be enjoyable and fun to experience.

They are some difficult talents and skills that people give up on. When people experience or find something they like they would like to try it. Cooking Is like a talent where people like to enjoy cooking like the cheifs they make really good food. Makeup is fun to do and it is really amazing when people are a makeup artist and really good at fashion. Playing the violin Is hard at first but when people practice and they want to be talented It gets easy.    ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
B86530090737,"There are lots of activities one can to do outdoors. Many people now a days stay in there home and play video games. There is so much to do outdoors like you can go rock climbing. Rock climbing is a very fun, dangerous, and healthy outdoor activity to do. Many people who do rock climbing are living the happiest and healthiest life they can. You can also do hunting. Hunting is also a fun outdoor activity you can do, but it requires risk to do. Hunting is done by a gun which many people cant use or dont have but hunting is a fun activity to do if you do have a gun and know how to use it.

you can also go to parks. Parks are really enjoyable, there is lots of fun stuff to do in a park. There are slides, swings and other fun stuff. There are also animals some times in a park. its like a park and zoo mixed together. people can really enjoy there self in parks. Parks are not only for little kids and there are not always slides,swings, monkey bars etc. in a park. There are some parks that are only made for people who like to jog, run and walk. There are so many different kind of parks.

One of the most enjoyable thing you can do is play a sport, like Soccer, Football, Baseball, Tennis etc. There are many places outdoor you can go to play. There are soccer fields made for people who like to play soccer. There are Football fields etc. Sports are not only fun but they also are healthy for you. Like in Soccer there is nothing you can do accept running after the ball. Football is also fun and healthy for you and many other sports. Doing something outdoors is way more fun than doing something inside. If you play video games all the time you can lose your eyes and you can get fat easily.

You can also go to the beach. Beach is the most funnest and enjoyable place. There is sand. ocean, sun, waves and other fun stuff. if you cant swim you can also stay in the sand and make a sand castle or something like that. If you do know how to swim you can go to the ocean and swim in the waves and have lots have fun. If you dont want to swim and make sand castle you can just lay on your towel ad enjoy the hot sun. If you are with your friends and family you can also play lots of different games like frisky, Tag, etc. You can play music on a boombox or a speaker and have fun with that.

Another fun activity to do outside is skydiving. If you want to fly skydiving is just the thing for you. It is another one of the most fun outdoor activities but it requires skill and lots of confidence to do a skydive. If you dont know how to open or use a parachute you will not be skydiving alone you will be tied to professional skydiver and you will skydive with him/her. You still need the confidence to skydive or you can have a heart attack or you can pass out and passing out in the midair is not very good for you, you can break your neck with the air pressure or die.

Skydiving is not really healthy but it still is fun and enjoyable.

Hiking is also one of the outdoor activity and it is really fun. In hiking you can go to mountain peeks or just walk to the middle of a mountain. Hiking is similar to rock climbing but you dont have to climb rocks you just have to walk on the track and and have fun. hiking is also one one of healthy outdoor activities. Once you reach your goal you can enjoy the view and be proud of yourself. Hiking is not an easy thing to do there are many rocks and unstable ground on the way but if you do hiking often it will be easy for you.

Camping is also one of the outdoor activities. camping is fun and enjoyable but it is also dangerous and risky. Camping is when you alone or with your friends go to a forest or camping spot and live there in a tent for one or four days. camping is so much fun especially if you are with your friends or family. you can cook yourself food, enjoy the nature etc. If you like nature camping is just the thing for you. camping can be dangerous and risky because there are a lot of dangerous animals in the woods like lion, bear etc. but if you pick the right camping spot for yourself then there is no danger. many camping spots are where there are less harmful animals.

Outdoor activities are fun to do. Most people dont them because they waste all of there time time on video games and indoor stuff. Most people dont like nature and the are discussed of it. outdoor activities are fun and healthy for you they can keep you in shape and you can have the time of your life. Outdoor activity is for people who really like nature and want to stay healthy.           ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
C3FBD51A2343,"One of the most qualities among human that makes one unique. Business owners look to work with a well mannered person, and also well mannered people often gets rewarded every day for their good deeds.

I strongly agree with what has been said ""a positive attitude is the key in to success in life"". Attitude is sign off telling or showing who you are without expressing yourself. Our positive attitude is what makes our dream come through. Positive attitude attracts wherever you want to do. For instance, working as a bartender is a great opputtunity to earn rewards. Approaching customers with a positive attitude and treating them right, makes you tips. And that person will pleased to work with you if he or she has a company or running some business.

In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key to success in life and makes us unique in ones eyes.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
B5AA232A7261,"Dear, Mrs. Generic_Name

My opinon is that i'm disagree with this policy of students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. I don't think isn't good idea for students to commit to a career at young age.

It has come to my attention that some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career and my position on this issue is properly to not makes that they aren't allowed to indentify a career at a young age from selected to guide them toward a specific career because for all of those who has a career and is because their are worked hard to arrive from they are and they get to propose.

Currently they can't have a commit to a career at young age, because for that has to be prepared and work hard nobody can has a commit to a career at young age.

for that you need to finish high school and college and work for the career you want.

Thanks for considering my opinion let me know if you have any question we can contact any assistance.

Sincerely:

Generic_Name",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
2CD73298526F,"The use of technology has had a negative effect on people's lives, because they tempt to take the use of technology as a fundumental part of their life. They get so attached that they miss beautiful moments, people or opportunities, life is full of extraordinary places and people to share life with but why make all that dissapear just to be on a phone or any other technological device.

Technology can be consider a threat for families. Why would it be consider a threat? Well, let's say you and your family are going to Generic_City, you go to the best hotel an as soon as you get there your wife, your children or even you go on their phones immediately without wanting to do or go anywhere. There could also be another example with that, a family reserves a table on the best expensive restaurant in Generic_City and as soon as the family sits down they all go on their phones, even the parents gave that example instead of them wanting to have a nice family dinner. Families lose the connection due to cell phones because just like that family had a date with their phones and not with their own family the connection starts to decrease and after all that it'll be hard to have that open conncetion with your family. That's consider a threat because you're letting the use of technology define how your family will be or do things in there lives. It could also be a positive effect because and not all families struggle with the addiction to technology, people such as; doctors, judges, lawyers, businessman, etc... They have a job and the best way to keep in contact with people that need of them, they have to always be using their cell phones or computers to be in touch with them no matter where or what they are doing. But that shouldn't be any excuse not to have a family time, family comes over everything, you can't miss moments with your family or else you'll regret it in the future you'll just remember being on the phone that entire time. Don't let technology control you or your family.

Love could also vanish do to the lack of commitment with your phone. Relationships now a days are very different from back then, they don't get to be more romantic well they could but maybe through texting. The love they had for each other could easily be broken do to social media, either the guy or the girl could possibly find someone else and cheating happenes, I know that does not the whole reason why but it does affect you in a way. Let's talk about Khloe Kardashian, she being a famous women had to receive the bad news of her baby dad cheating on her moments before she gave birth. In some cases couples don't get to enjoy their date because one of them is in there phone. I've seen that breaking up through text is the biggest excuse for a men or woman, if social media didn't work like it does now there woulndn't be a lot of cheatings. Social media could also be used for good, if you are in a long distance relationship you have the opportunity to talk to your significant other across the world and also because you get to know someone you might marry in the future. But is still bad, social media causes a lot of things to happen such as suicide or having eating disorders or even bulling.

Technology has a negative effect on most kids in elementary, middle or high school. Back then you woulnd't see little kids having the latest phone, because the new generation that is coming is more open minded about how ""society"" works. There might be things I don't even know and yet you ask a seven year old kid and they know it already, Society has changed a lot from when I was a little girl to how kids are now. KIds are mostly connected on their phone most of them just want to stay home and play Fortnite, not only kids play that all grown ups which makes them looks so childish in my opinion, while before they would really want to go outside to play any sports they could. Little kids having phones at there early age makes them have bad grades in school because there main focus is texting, videos, or video games which don't take them anywhere. The percentage of students having good grades has decreease in a way that surprises you. how many times you see little babies asking for their paretns phone and what do parents do, they give them there phone because they can't control their children what will make them obey is technology. In some way it could be good because they get the chance to have more opportunities in school wise, like having computers in our home helps get your grade up if you use it wisely, some parents don't have the money to buy their kid a computer while schools does provide some don't take a good opportunity. Just look at how children are attached to there phones. Focusing in school will give you so much opportunities that will take you on a greater point in your life and I feel like that is what we need to make all of them understand.

In conclusion, Is good to have technology but don't use it to hurt people which will take them to commit suicide or having eating disorders. Cherish every moment you get to have with your loved ones don't let technology control who you are or who you can be. People don't have the same human contact anymore because they are more worried that they'll get a text that they need to respond as soon as possible. Live every moment to the fullest you never kknow what could happen in ten minutes or the next day.      ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
6CB31DED1BF0,"There are people who are not happy with the career path they took. People wished that they could of done something to change what they do for a living and do something they will be truly happy with. There are people who are sad and deperessed on the job they have now. It takes time,focus, and motivation for a student to find the career they truly would want to take in the future.

Not everyone is the same there are people who need a long period of time to find out what they would want there career to be. Students might love to do multiple things but cant find out which one to do as there career. Sometimes the students needs to have the experiance and see how it is with there own experiance. Students should not be pushed and forced to pick a career so quickly. Not everyone is able to be like that.

Not most students can afford the right education for the carrer they are being forced to take; therefore the whole time the high schools have been forcing them and guiding them towards a specific career it would all have been a wast of time because they could of not afford the right education for that career. If student are being forced in studying a career they dont want to do and then cant afford the right education to do that they are going to be unhappy and they will b forced to go downhill to a job they would never imagine them doing. And in doing so when they are doing something that they never imagined themselves doing then depression and regret will start happening.

With the job they are being forced into doing they might not be able in doing it. For example if a student is being forced in a scientific field of learning but they know that science isnt there strong suit they will have a hard time and start having a hard time in that field. Students know what is best for them and know what will benifit them and find a path that would be best for there needs.

Some people might say that having students pick a career at a young age will help them in the future because it will give them more time so strengthen that career and become very good at it. What people dont understand is that some students might not be intersted in that and would want something they would b happy with so they can improve on the stuff they know they are good at and have alot of skill in. Students have the right and the liberty in choosing a carrer they would want to do for the rest of there lives they dont need to be pushed into doing it they should take as much time as they need to find what is it that would make them happy.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
49E2BDE820BD,"I disagree with Thomas Jefferson because you need to be inactive sometimes to lay back and relax. If you're always up amd doing something then you wont really have much rest. You can be active and get stuff done but also kick back sometimes andrecharge your energy.

Im not saying that you shouldnt do you're work but dont forget to do that work you need to get energy. Another reason is if youre sick and cant move around so you dont have to do anything then as well. There are many excuses for you not to do something.

You should do stuff tho like the important things you need done. For instance go to a doctors appointment or get groceriec. Just because you dont have to do something all the time doesnt mean you shouldnt move from being an idle.

You should never be an idle tho. You should always get up and get an excersise or cardio because laying down and not doing anything can also cause sickness in your body that you dont want. Thats what i think of this prompt and those are the reasons i give.                          ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
BF5D1465DFFC,"I agree what Duke Ellington's said because sports, school, and family there is always a problem and a chance for you to do your best. Sports is what most of people do play a sport but we always get frustrated when the opposite team scores a point so we try our hardest to score back the point. School is what a lot of humans struggle on its our work sheets and test but every question wrong we get it makes our brain smarter so do our best and not pick the wrong answer. Family is people we love and hang out with all the time but not very often we get into problems but every time we have a problem we just have to find a solution to do our best. This is why I agree what Duke Ellington said about a problem is a chance to do your best.

Sports is fun activity we can all do but most of the people do or watch but a lot of the player or fans. Start to become angry because their opponent scored a point but. The players can solve the problem and do their best to try to get the point back. When I was ten years old i played on a soccer league my team was losing to our rivals our coach told us the problem why they keep scoring on us. The team and I fixed the problem an tried our best trying to win back again and we did win. My brother plays basketball he used to be terrible at playing basketball he missed every shot but fixed the problem by practing more and tried his best. Most of the sports have a problem but they fix it.

School is a place where we make friend learn new subjects. For some people in school they struggle a lot on worksheets, test and quizzes. I used to struggle on test and quizzes but when i got the test or quiz back i studied on the questions i got wrong. So when next time I took the test i would get those questions right. So the problem i got wrong i tried my best to remember it so i would not forget it when i have the same questions on the test

Family are people we love and hang out with but sometimes we have problems with each other. When problems happen we try to fix our way and try our best to not have problems anymore. When I was younger I never wanted to share with my siblings. But i had to fix the problem and try my best to share with my siblings. My older brother dislike me to use his video game so my parents help fix his problem with me and my brother sharing.

This is the essay about how Duke Ellington saying help a lot of people to fix their problem. All of my problems were fixed so it my help people fix their problems to fix them. The problem to people is that they dont know how to fix there problems and that is why a lot of people struggle on that. I used to have a lot of problems with stuf now i fixed them.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
7D519DA76B29,"The use of technology has spread all over the world. Everyone uses technology to talk to family/friends, text family/friends, pay bills online, shop online, etc. To me technology has both positive and negative effects. The positive effect is talking to people you can't see everyday or can't see at all, you can use technology to talk to long distance. A negative effect is the lack of getting stuff done, going outside for fresh air, no person to person communication, etc.

Instead of going outside to be with friends, family, etc most people stay home and just be on there phone all day, watching TV, on the computer, any device people have at home they use. Shopping has changed dramatically. Instead of going to the mall to go shopping most people can just stay home and go online to shop. Paying for bills or going to your bank has changed dramatically. You can pay all your bills, funds, credits, online. Everyone used to get out of there house and go to where they need to go to pay there stuff off, but technology as made it easier for people to stay home an do stuff online.

Half the people in the world think technology is not okay and should be gone. Young kids having technology is even worse because, kids dont play outside anymore they stay inside and play video games, talk to there friends online, watch videos, etc. Teen's are the same too. Almost every teen stays home and talk to friends, play video games like x box, PlayStation, etc. In schools teachers use websites to help students learn and understanding the subject.

Technology has changed the world. Technology does allow people to complete many tasks without talking to people. The world would have been so different if there was no technology made at all. Everyone would be outside more with there friends/family, traveling is the best way to get your mind off stuff and to have fun, eating in restaurants with people you love is the best. Ways to plan stuff out like traveling or eating with friends/family is either using a phone or just talking about it in person.

In conclusion, i think the limitation of human contact has a negative effect. Since technology has been made people have been getting lazy and lazy by the day. Theirs so much things we used to go outside for, we can just stay home and go online. Instead of playing with friends outside we stay home and play video games and if we're bored we stay home and just find something in our device to entertain us. Its hard for people to get there phone taken away from parents because what can we do without our phones? The world needs to see that something is wrong.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
77FAA33476CA,"Why does most people want multiple advice when they are seeking for advice? As human beings we all go through hard times in life because that is how life works. When we go through those hard times we want to ask for help from maybe a friend, family, or just anyone that is close to you and you know them very well. Seeking for advice does not only mean you are having trouble with something. Asking for advice can also mean asking someone if you are making the right choice. Something that we have to remember is that not evryone is not ok with asking people for their advice. There are many reasons why most people are afraid of asking their friends or family for advice is because they are scared they might judge them or laugh at them. Something else most people are afraid is their family or friends might think they are crazy or they are just making things up. For my final reason I think this reason is the really importent in my opinion because this is what a lot of time kids, teens, go through is people might think they are doing this for attention. Now by attention I don't mean something as so they could get the parents attention I mean they might be asking for your advice because you are the parent and you know what's right for your own kid and you want to always make sure you support them no matter what.

What I am writing about is something that I have been through in life. There were a lot of times in my life where a lot of my friends were going through really hard times in life and most of the pain they were going through was their families not caring or thinking that their kid is crazy and they just want attention. The truth is if you wanna help your friends or even family members you need to give them the right opinions that you have and help them find other people who can help them and give them their opinions. Something else that is really helpful when seeking multiple opinions is, it helps the person make a better choice. Again this might not be so easy for the person, but it opens more doors for them and it makes them feel like they do have a way out of their problems.

In 6th grade I had a really great friend she came from a different countrie and she was from Generic_City, and had no idea how to speak english. She did knew some words like how to say hi or say her name, but that was all she could speak. After a couple of mounths in school I noticed that she was having a very hard time in school because many people bullied her. Everyday when she came to class she was always sad or she was always in the office. I knew that my friend was going through something so I tried talking to her and helped her by giving my opinions of what she can do and what she should do in order to slove her problems. By giving her many opinions she was able to overcome her problems and she was always happy and she was starting to speak a little more english and it was like as if she was a whole new person.

This might not be easy for many people who has a close friend that is going through something and they don't want to talk about it because most of the time they are shy or they don't want people to know. Always keep in mind that just because that person does not want to tell you anything does not mean they are ok or they don't need help, always try to talk to them and tell them that you care and you want to help them. This can also build up the persons confidence and it helps them to open up more with their feelings and they can try to talk to their family members or their friends more often.

Now why is Seeking Multiple opinions really importent? Well I just told you there are many reasons why it's importent. It helps people to know they matter and there is a sloution to their problems no matter what they are going through. It opens more doors for them, and helps them know that they do matter and they should talk to people they can trust. Something that parents need to keep in mind is that when your kid asks for advice don't think they are crazy or they just want attention because that is not the point, they just want help with what they are going through. Again by attention I don't mean something as so they can get the parents attention I mean they might be asking for your advice because you are the parent and you know what's right for your own kids and you want to always make sure you support them no matter what.        ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
7B0C76128726,"I agree with Prime Winston Churchill; in he saying there is a lot of true and motivation. Failure is the most important element in the pursuit of success. Being successful is not a easy thing for anyone; there is a journey that you have to get through with many obstacles that you may fail at the first time. Also, no matter how many times you fail, you shouldn't give up on you want to do. When you continue to fail, your learn a lot from this mistakes or problems. The better thing are never easy to secure; we always make mistakes, but never too late to start again. As Winston once said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm'' This statement is most certainly true if we are welling go put in the effort to past though feature and attain real success.

If you really want something you going struggle for that and effort the most you can. Everyone who is successful has been through things that has caused them to fail in something the admired dearly, but remember you should never lose hope; mistakes allow you to view your challenge from a different perspective. Failure is only an opportunity to begin again, only this time with a better plan and more understanding. Failure is an unavoidable obstacle, so you must be ready to affront and learn about it. Look examples about people who don't lose hope and keep trying until they did it, and see that these people are representation of success. See the mountain they've claimed and look to it for inspiration and all they sacrifice.

In conclusion, we come to learn more from our failures and difficulties than from our successes. Failure can bring us to better ourselves and begin our plans once more, this time more wisely. If everyone was to successes in their first try, we would not feel accomplished in the presence of success. The most important message to take from these quote is that after you have acknowledge both why failed and how it made you feel, you must attack the obstacle again with enthusiasm. Success it is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice and most of all love of what you are doing or learning to do.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
305EFA6DBBBF,"Do we choose our own character traits?

As the British naturalist and politican Jonh Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I certanly agree that everyone is capeable of choosing their own character trait, they are independent enough to have control over themselves', they're capeable to choose in what type of enviroment they want to be in, or how to react to bad or good circumtances, at the end of the day we all have the freedom to choose who, and what we want to be.

Jonh Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.' everyone have the completly control over themselves, no matter how bad the circumtances may be or how tough a problem is, everyone will always be allow to choose either to smile or cry, to be positivee or negative for example;

My grandma, she's a 78 years old lady that have work her entire life, she's a very independent women who always says, ""If i don't do it, no one can make it as good as i can."" Always with a positive attitude, never sitting down, because she says that sitting down is a waste of time, and she have always been so energetic, until one day that sadly she had a really strong stroke in the middle of her brain that made her lose movement on half of her body, and her voice, her doctor told us that she was going to stay in a wheel chair for the rest of her life, it was hard to see someone so positive and with so much energy, in a wheel chair for the rest of her life, everyone was really shock and depressed about it including my mom, but even though my grandma knew what was going on her positive attitude never change, she took over the circumstances and she never gave up on herself she decided to be ""positive"", even though it was a rough time in life, this example helped me to see that everyone have their own control or they can choose who they want to be in the hard or easy times.

Everyone can have the freedom to choose the enviroment around them, how they wanna live, with who they wanna leave, people have the abilitly to understand when there are toxic people around them, to understand how much an enviroment can change the way they act, to understand that they can change the negative enviroment into a positive enviroment, everything in your character depends on your onw person, yes the enviroment that is around you can affect a lot on your character, affects on what you do in a daily base, but at the end of the day it alwasy depends on you, who you wanna be, who the people around you should make you feel, and how positive or negative it should be.

Having a reaction with other people around you can show them what your character is, it can show people your weakest part, and can shows them how dangerous or calm you can be, reactions are a really big part of our characters either if we have the control of them or not, how we react and how we respond depends on us, for a lot of people having their own character it's really hard, because of their negative or positive mood, sometimes we want to be or act like other people that we see at school, but that's like stealing their characters, at least but not last everyone have the freedom to choose what their character traits are or can be.

In conclusion everyone is free to choose what they character should be, no matter if they are going through a rough time or have the whole word agains them, theywill always have the chance of trying to be someone else character or build their own, but it will alwaysbe what they choose their character traits to be. ",3.0,3.0,4.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
8593D649EBE4,"Dear, TEACHER_NAME

I know that us student are responsible for our grades in school but a B average just to play sports or be i some sort of activity is pretty dumb most students have C averages if you change this policy you will have lots of mad parents or students i think you don't want to be the bad guy here. I think and i think i speak for the whole school we at least should have a D average because if you really want to play in a sport or do an activity you should keep your grades up above an F that way you passing you class or classes but you also know that its not all fun and games you have to do your studies first in order to be in any type of activity and if you do good in school you can accomplish anything in life. I know parents say that its good to be in any type of sport but you have to like its because it keeps you out of trouble well its true i mean if you change this policy you might see this straight student go from a good student to always calling his/her patrol officer to see if he/her doesn't have any type of weapon's please TEACHER_NAME think about how this is going to affect the students and our community.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
759E0659FF69,"A city council is debating the adoption of a 10pm weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. does curfew help teenagers or not help teenagers. Curfew is a bad idea because curfew do not help teenagers on weekday and also the weekends. My tops three reasons are stay out more, sink in/out the house, and they can get in trouble.

When teenagers stay out more it because they want hang more with their friends. My friends and i hang out and we smoke. My curfew was 11pm and i didn't check the time then i know that it was past my curfew i ask my one of my friend if he can give me a ride home i got my house keys. When my friends drop me off at my house and i open door of my house than i saw my parents sleeping and the next day my mom ask if i came back to the house at my curfew and i said yes and i got always with it.

Teenagers also sink in/out of the house. Some may say that curfew help teenagers to be home on time. They are wrong because most teenagers sink out of their bed room window. One night around four in the morning i was sleep and then i heard lot of noise. I got up from my bed and i saw my sister sink in from my bed room window and so help her to get in my room but around that time we are sharing my room because we had a room met. We both went back to bed and i told we will talk about this in the morning. In the morning i ask her why she sink out the room and she said that she need to think things over, she could't sleep, and she want go outside. I told her what happened if someone just take you and then what happened. She said well no one did and i told yeah thank god. We didn't our parents.

Most teenagers can get in trouble with their parents. When teenagers get in trouble it mostly with their parents because most parents are strict. When parents are strict it that they want what best for their children than they had. When teenagers are in trouble the person they go running to is their parents because they know they something bad and now they need help for it. On a weekend my friends and i are doing weed in one of my friend basement and her parents catch us doing weed and her parents told my parents. When i got home my parents were in the table and we all talk. My parents told me to stop doing weed so i did but few years later i was doing weed again and again they found out somehow. We talk about it now i stop doing weed for good.

Curfew is a bad idea on a weekday and weekends. Curfew do not help teenagers on weekdays and weekends because they can stay out more, sink in/out the house, and they can in trouble. This are all my tops three reasons.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
D84024335230,"People are love challenges and learn new languages. There are 67 languages have spoken in the world, 8.9% of us speak Vietnamese. Vietnamese is on top 10 hardest language has spoken. My skill is can speak Vietnamese fluently. I can do a lot of things with Vietnamese, such as translate English to Vietnamese, teach my friends how to speak Vietnamese and to communicate with others Vietnamese.

I can speak both Vietnamese and English at the same time, so that's mean I could translate from English to Vietnamese or even Vietnamese to English. Don't you think it would be helpful for your parents when you 're on a family vacation. That is my main job whenever I go out with my mom, because she doesn't speak English or able to understand it.

My friends are love Vietnamese, they always convince me to teach them this amazing language. When I come to my class my friend start saying ""Xin Chao"" it means ""Hello"" in English, I'm so glad that they love and want to learn it. I had a friend who is American, I taught him how to speak Vietnamese, and now he can speak Vietnamese like his home language.

However it would be helpful if you are in Vietnam or a place where the most Vietnamese people lives, you could ask them in Vietnamese when you need help( I bet if you are from a foreign country and you can speak Vietnamese, they will think you're super cool). I remember that one time, I had a family reunion and I went to Vietnam. Then I was lost, I tried yell ""Help me, I lost, I can't find my parent"", but they couldn't understand what I was said, luckily I can speak Vietnamese, I asked them where is the police station so I could find my parents.

Overall, Vietnamese is the perfect language to learn if you want to challenge yourself. It would help you a lot if you want to visit Vietnam one day.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
736B285BF88B,"It is wonderful how if we are always doining something. If always we doing someting we got more that we think before. We need practice everything. we need practice something that we want.

Do we acoomplish more if we are always doing something. We need think that's what is that we want to acoomplish more that we thing. If I want to be a police I will study hard to be more that a police. I want to buy a iphone 5 but I will work more to buy a iphone 8. I want go to Generic_City with $600 but I will save more to got $1000. We need think before to do something. we need to learnd to save money.

If we doing nothing we never got soemething that we wants. We need to work because if we do not work we never can buy something that we want. if I want pass the SOL of Geometry I need study but if I don't want study i will not pass the SOL. I want a good future but if I doing nothing I will had a future bad I will study and work to had a better future. we need think in the future before doing nothing.

Determine never to be idle. I don't want to be a idle but if i don't be a idle I will never had everythig that I want. I want a car toyota but I will work hard, and think like a idle to work more hard and get more moey to buy a BMW. I need pass all the class to graduate but I want a diploma better that normal one I will doing all homework to pass al the class. we need to be a idle to got everything that we want.

In conclucion, It is wonderful how if we are always doining something. Do we acoomplish more if we are always doing something. Determine never to be idle. But if we want thing that speend a lot money we need to be a idle to got more money, or we want graduate we need study more that other to be better person in the future. for this reason and many other we need to be a idle.",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
5EA71157D48F,"I supported that people make their own decisions and here's why.

You can learn your own expression, that you can learn something new on your life like building your own home or learn how to run a town for mayor. Following your instincts that can help you bypass tough problems like how to escape from a hole or how to dodge a ball perfectly. Follow your own path to see who or what to see the true you is. I don't hate getting help from others to seek guides but I personally prefer it because it would be challenging for me instead of taking the easy way out, if I did what did I learn something? nothing that is why I would like to learn something on my own. another thing here is that if you seek guides from others, its a helpful way so you won't struggle a lot and that is alright, that you cannot do everything your own which is fine.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
6A9031A05632,"Ibelive tha use the cell phones in the class room for educational purposes is a fantastic idea, because student will save a lot of time finding imformation or doing others works. Teachera will not worry to collect books or magazines that normaly stuednt use to fine imformation. Student by using their phone, the work is going to be more easy because phone are more practical to use.

The idea to use phones in class is a good idea because will not only helpe students it will helpe teacher too. Student by usin their pohe they will save a lot of time, because sametimes student have to fine imfromation for a project and project need a lot of imfromation. Fine imformation in books, magazies is harde worke and studen they do that. With the phone student can fine the imformation more faster then normal and they have more time to do others work.

Teacher will not have to worry to collect all the material that stuend use to do their work. For example, in some classes they have to fine a lot imformation classes like Goverment, Biology and World history one and two. Student to fine this imformation they use books and magazines and when bell ring the stuen live the material they were using and the teacher have to collect all the thinks that they were using, but by usin phone they will not left all that mess teacher would not worry to clean the mess.

Studen will compleate all their work because if they have a project that need to finde imfromation they will do it faster in their phone. Phone are more practicle to use and more easy them books or magazine that student normaly use. The big reasen that student give that why they don't finish their work is that they dont have sufficient time because fine imformation in books is hard.

In conclusion phone will be a fantasctic i dea beacause will not only help stuenden it will help teachers too. The work will be more easy for student they wiil finish their works on time and teachers will not worry to cleand the mess the tuden do when they use books or magazine. They not going to have a escuse that why they don't finish their because with phone is going to be easy.    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
07E1633CC87A,"Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes to allow students to use their phone in class but also some schools doesn't like students having their cell phones in class or educational purposes.

In addition, students can get distracted while the teacher is talking or just in general but students should use their cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes because if student needs help finding a word, students can use for emergency, and students can use their phones to check on theirs grades and any missing work.

First, If students need help finding a word, they can look it up on their phones for example, if the word is apple they can look for the definition and use it for resource.

Second, if the student has an emergency therefor, students can contact their parents if the student isn't feeling well or any problems.

Third, students can check on their phones to see if they have any missing work or any grades fix furthermore, if students can't remember if they turned in their papers, they can check on their phones to see if they turned it in. If the student has a F in the class and if students can't use their phone how will they know what grade they have in that class.

In conclusion, I strongly agree to let student have their cell phones in the classroom because of those reasons. Some other students likes listening to music while they work because they can focus better. The students also can prove that they use their cell phones wisely in class.     ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
DC33D5F69792,"In China we don't have the thing that Ralph Waldo Emerson. I know Ralph Waldo Emerson think he is grow up because he beyond he has already mastered. In my opinion people are different, so not everyone can grow up from beyond the things his already mastered. If they beyond the game that they already have play the best, they are not grow up. And there are three reasons I disagree about what Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote looking for new things and learn it make people grow, some small vital can make people grow up, and other vital matter can make people grow up. I am disagree with Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote.

People can look for new things and learn the things to grow up. The new things are not for human control. Students learn new things make their knowledge be more, they can grow up in this way. This is a example of my mom. When she first time can to America, she didn't know any English. She is learn English for three years, now she can talk a little bit English to other. Nobody can say she is not grow up, she learn a new Lagrange she never know before. In my mom story I know not the things you have already mastered in past make you grow up, the new things can make you grow up, too.

People can have many small things that they don't care make they grow up. In a science experiment if you get a small mistake, the all experiment will be destruction by that little mistake. People who learn science, if they make that small mistake they will get their master abusive, nobody knows if the experiment will make people change. I think this is a big things will make people who learn the science grow up. They can control it is happened or not. In this example I learn the little things happen let they know the mall will become the big thing than it will bother you life.

People can have many things in their life can make they grow up. When you go to the society, you will find it is so different between school and society. When you go to the work, you can feel effort is not the only choice, it is many way can get you go to the high lever. If you know this one, now you really become a adult. When you have a wedding with a girl. That will be you best time time, you grow up again. Then if you have a baby, you will get what is the really mean about responsibility. Responsibility make you get a word called grow up. Many things make people grow up the work, wife, kids, and other things make people really grow up.

Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" It may work for Ralph Waldo Emerson or other people, but I disagree what he say. People are different, they have many different way to make they grow up, not the only way like Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. People can study new things to make their knowledge be more. They can learn the things from the small mistake that they made. They can grow up from society. In China it has so many reason make you grow up.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
BE4764F7BFF1,"The Downside of Online Classes

A couple of schools offer online classes through virtual videos and video conferencing for students to take from home. Some schools might think that students would benefit from this and others think that this is not a good idea. From my perspective, students would not benefit from taking online classes for many reasons such as; they could get distracted easily, they miss out interacting with teachers and students, and they would eventually get bored of online school at home.

To begin with, many students K though 12th grade get distracted easily. The distraction is not because we don't want to do the work, but it's our minds. Everyone's minds work in a different way and theres always going to be that part of us that gets distracted by the small things around us. Also, technology is somewhat of an issue because it distracts many people because of the games and many apps that it has. Students could go off task and go off playing games or watching videos while they are supposed to be learning and doing their work online. For example, sometimes even I get distracted while doing my work at home through my computer or smart device because of the many other things I could be doing instead of doing homework. There are many distractions online and around us that could make us go off task instead of keeping us focused to do our work.

Furthermore, many students would miss out on interacting with other students, teachers, and staff. In other words, when you are taking online classes the only person there with you would be your teacher, whom is communicating with you through your computer. No one else would be there with you to help you through it, everything would have to be on your own. Ultimately, if you are in a school many teachers and students would be there to assist you with any questions or concerns that you might have. Also, you would miss out on a lot more exciting events such as school dances,

football games, and pep rallies. There is so much that you would miss out if you wouldn't go to a public school and decided to take online school instead.

Ultimately, you would also be spending almost all day in your house because of online classes. A regular school day is about 8 hours, meaning the online classes would be about the same time , or more or less. In school 8 hours is already tiring enough because of the learning and listening, but think of 8 hours at home with no breaks in between, that would be extremely exhausting. Almost all students that attend school come for a full 8 hour day, which includes break in between classes, then once school is over they go back home to be able to relax. If you are at home for 8 hours doing work, you wouldn't want to spend time relaxing at your home because eventually it would get boring there after a while. In my experience being at home gets boring to the point where I don't know what else to do to not be bored at home. In other words, being in the same place for a whole day would get boring and uncomfortable.

On the other hand, other schools claim that it is a good idea for students to take online classes. They are in favor of taking online classes through video conferencing. Some of the schools think that online classes are a good idea because many students could possibly avoid drama, get 1 on 1 assistance, and learn quicker. Although some of it is true, online classes should not be necessary. Online school should only be necessary if a student does not feel safe at their school because of personal reasons.

Overall, online classes are not a good idea at all unless it is necessary because of safety issues. Besides that, it would not be a good idea because many students would get distracted when they are supposed to be doing work, students would miss out on interacting with other students, teachers, and staff, and they would spend most of their day at home which is unhealthy.",5.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
FF190BD8380B,"My grandma always said, "" Is ok to fail, the only thing that matters is to stand up and keep trying."" A decision is the act of deciding something, as a controversy or question, by reaching a conclusion or making a judgment. If people take their own decisions, they are going to benefit. People should take their own decisions because it is a right, people can learn for the consequences of their actions, and people have the ability to think by themselves.

Many argue that people should visit a guidance to take decisions because guidance may have more experiences solving problems. However, they are wrong because in the past people fight and die for rights, and now that everyone have the privilege to talk for themselves they are not going to let others to decide for them. Clearly, people do not need to visit a guidance in order to made a good decision.

Initially, citizens have the right to take their own decision. For instance, Generic_Name, who is a citizen of the United States, wants to get the divorce because he found his wife cheating on him. To specify, he went to the court to get the paperwork done for the divorce. To detail, he have the right and the privilege to get the divorce because it is human right; he do not need the help of any guidance to made this decision because is something too personal. One should observe that taking decisions is a right that everyone is able to reach.

Additionally, people can make mistakes, but they have the capacity to emend them. For example, Generic_Name, for peer pressure, take a wrong decision about using drugs. To add, she realize that what she did were a wrong decision, and she understood that is bad for her health and she staunch doing it. Clearly, society can make people do what they do not want, but is in one to say: no; and fix what they did wrong.

Last, but not less important, everyone have different ideas and points of views, and because of that people should make their own decisions. For instance, Generic_Name's parents teach him to differentiate between good and bad; that means that he is not going to be in troubles for a bad decisions. To illustrate, he do not need the help of others to make a good choice. Obviously, humans are unique and sometimes people do not going to agree with others, but that does not means that one is wrong and the other is right; people need to respect others decisions.

In summary, taking decisions is a privilege that ancestors gave us, people are going to made mistakes in order to success, and everyone is qualify to talk by themselves. These prove that citizens should not need to see a guidance in order to made decisions. People must respect others points of views and do not judge them for what they do. There is only one choice: respect and always have present that no matter what others said you can do it!",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
AE8A9585640A,"when theres a problem its a chance for you to do your best. I agree with this statement because when you in a problem you give up, you dont know what to do, and you try your best to find out why its hard or why its a problem.

when I play soccer there was one problem, I never passed the ball to my teammates. The coach always got mad at me for not passing the ball. Sometimes I gave up because I forget to pass the ball. There was no way that I can remember to bass the ball. The coach always tells me in every game to pass the ball.

I dont know what to do to remember to pass the ball. If the other team has it I attack to get the ball but when I get it on my feet I cant pass because its hard. The only thing I can do is go in Google or YouTube so it can help me. Sometimes I don't know what to do to get better, its hard watching YouTube or going to Google is the only thing I can do to get batter, or not forget to pass, and help me. I search up ""why do I never pass the ball and how can I get better to pass or not forget to pass the ball."" It helped me a lot and now I started trying my best to get better at soccer and its going good so far. every game i have passed the ball.

when you have a problem its your chance to try/succeed. when you have a problem you need to try your best, try not to give up, and try not to get confuse or it will be even harder for you.",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
80F9E6D6503C,"do you think that these classes should be electives or a core class?.I say that it should be an elecitve because some peole are taking it as electives and so they cahn graduate on time thats why i say they should make theses classes go for elecitives and kids will like more drama and art and or music classes. more than core classes cause core classses are required for gradutaion and the elecitves are for fun and i think that the school should give these classes as an elecitve because it will be fun to learn new things and explore what you would be good at.

some people may believe that you should take a music class,or art class,or drama class however; i believe That those classes should be electives cause their less important then the core classes. but at the same time it would be fun to have one of those classes. and so you expiernce something new. and you get to meet new and differnt people and thats why it should be an elective.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,1.5
12796C5A0480,"Desagree,because to select yes the to taste to participe in an activity ,what no effort in the that no to select for example pay a sport and to arrive to hurt. a estudent has decide that sport play and to know the it that game, they decide to understand and to have a good time,to be acquainted with more people have more friends, weight control,check health,to control the sentiment.

To know and to learn much more things , to surpass whole every day ,to throw out desire every second,to understand or to quastions if to want learning to find to avail oneself of the right moment to find that all himself to again ,not to matter if is difficult or easy never to determine that is impossible.

never to surrender because if one all the propose ,sole is to want to learn and to againg ,for example to want to learn play a sport if himself the to propose play sport, and every day to surpass. Not himself to need that east obliged.

They to know that if not participate in the working as task in the rating. if to need to find on the theme power to quastions and to understand.",1.5,1.5,2.0,1.5,2.0,2.0
E353A05E7C8C,"Many school have partnership with local companies and organization allow student to do there community project and just to help out. Local work places like a store and business. Student don't have to work there for like 9 hours insensate they will work to hour a day. If the work fro along period of time they will have an headache because they are not use to it. When i said community project like write an article about the company. Also help out is like if they need wood the students will give them.

One way i think student should not work in a company is because the side effect is student wouldn't do their home work , they will not attend in class on time and they will not study at home. What if the student did dome thing wrong there parent have to pay for it or the school. If the machine cost 10000 that is expensive to afford. Student shouldn't work it will make them get a bad grade. when you have a bad grade you will not be able to play game and use your phone.                 ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
BD9FE34E4670,"I agree with this statement, because one there's no knowledge without imagination, secondly Albert

Einstein has made many inventions and he has succeeded, and lastly you can be creative with your imagination. one reason, is there is no knowledge without imagination, because your have to be open minded about things. Imagination isnt just a picture in your head. knowledge is something to see, and think about. its not hard to use your imagination its fun, because you can think about anything you want. even if you have to write a essay, then you need to use your imagination as well. Many people invent things, but before they make it they think about what they want to make, and they imagine what what they want. People invented cars, motorcycles, bikes, and skateboards, But before they made all those things they drew it out they took there imagination, and put it on a peace of paper.

My second reason is Albert Einstein invented many things he might of failed on some, but he succeeded on many. He said "" imagination is more important than knowledge"" he made that statement because he used it to make his creations great. It helped him on many things. and it can help us too. For example if your are writing something, you have to use your imagination on it. If you are listening to music, then you are using your imagination as well. Albert Einstein was a very smart man. he had made many things in life, and we use it till now. Even if your thinking about something then your using your imagination too. People had made phones all different types of phones, People have made flip phones, iPhone, and androids they all invented that, and used there minds and creativity to make all that.

My last reason is to be creative with your imagination, I chose this because if your making a book you need to let the reader think, and picture the scene in there mind, or if your reading a book then you have to imagine it in your head instead of just reading it, and doing nothing. Also if your teacher is explaining things to you, then you have to think about what shes saying, and think about what your going to do. for example I once had to make a assay for my teacher, and it was about life bellow water it was pretty hard, and I had to explain what was going on in the ocean. It took a while to make, but I ended up saying that people keep throwing trash in the in the ocean can you imagine how many animals, and creatures are dying every day because of that? I imagined all of it, and people should not throw trash in the ocean. Every time I read a book I saw it all in my head, and it was cool, and fun! Also every time I wanted to draw something, I would have to see it in my head, and see what I should draw. Even if you are trying to make song or some thing, then your have to imagine how the beat is gonna go, and figure out if it sounds good to you. Even if your making a poem then you have to think what rhymes or doesnt rhyme. Also there are doctors that have to see if they can save someone, they have to think and see in there head if they should get this, or that. Everyone uses there imagination there isnt knowledge without imagination. There are kids that get read to, and they imagine whats going on they dont just listen they think about what they hear. That is why I agree with Albert Einstein.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
C868C220A380,"I disagree,and here on my reasons. If you just believe on your imagination then knowledge it wouldnt end up go for you. 1,people would think your crazy. 2,people would not even believe it would even work or would ever come true. Lastly,people would just think its plain old dumb if you believe in that.

I think people would think your crazy because if you keep living on your imagination then you'll get to stcuk in your own little games your in,and you'll sometimes forget what the real world thinks of you. The worst to come is that you'll get to scared to come to even go out into the real world. Knowledge is a powerful thing that everyone has,and its more powerful than your own imagination. If yo keeping thinking about your own little world your own little world you live in,then you would just forget on how the real world is a scary place.

Second of all,If you have a big imagination,people would not even believe that it would ever come true. Reson number 1,people would just believe in whatever you do. Think about it,their are so many ideas that just shut down,like how bills get made but they dont even get to the second step of becoming a law. Reason number 2,Everyone judges on what you think and what you believe. Some might agree,but most of all they just think your werid or crazy. So yes, it's scary to think on what people believe in what you imagine.

Finally,People would just think your plain on dumb. If your imagination gets to out od hand,people would just think your dumb or disagree with you. Yes,it's werid or even sad to have people judge or think your done with your own fantasy. People won't take you seriosly. And if they don't take you like you mean business,then they just won't talk to you at all. And your left with nothing but your own ideas. So,its risky to have a really big imagination because people would just think your plain on dumb or they might take your ideas and leave you with nothing.

In conculsion,I don't think it would be a great idea to have a big imagination. Knowledge is best because people won't judge you,they wont think your crazy,and they would believe you a 100%. I think its great having a big imagination,but dont get to attach to your imagination.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
D91D25F55AD9,"This world would never be how it is now if it wasn't for technology. Technology has made a big change to this world. Most people think it has made a positive change, and others think it's made a negative change. Technology has helped schools and business, but also has made some people's life impossible. So maybe, some people are wrong maybe having technology isn't so great after all.

Over time people stop talking to each other. Stop focusing in school, families, friends, relationships, All because of technology. If there was no technology there would be no social media. People see thing online that will make then mad and always want put it on other people and it all makes it a big problems. The relationships with those people then gets broken and never want to talk to each other again.

Before technology was created, families use to have game night, the whole family would all be at the dinner table eating their food and talking about their days. They would go on trips and have fun and enjoy their beautiful moments with friends and family. They would have a nice healthy sleep. Now it's all different. People get home from work to go watch T.V. or be on their phone all night long. People don't have family dinner anymore. This is a big problems that has effected a lot of people.

When I was younger I remember my parents giving me a lot of attention. As I started growing up it started to go away. We wouldn't go on trips anymore. We all wouldn't be at the dinner table anymore. Everything started to change, then over time I started to realize it was because of technology. They were just so obsessed with it, they never got off it. Then I got my first phone and I understood why they didn't come out of it. You always wanted to know what was going on with the drama, news, Facebook, Snap Chat, etc. That shouldn't be how this world should be running. God created this world so we can all stick together, be nice to each other, and care about each other.

If technology wasn't created then maybe everyone would be happy with their life's. Everyday would be a happy day for everyone. Even though technology has made some good impacts, I still think it would be better without it. Life will never be the same how it was before without it. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
F131A67F5B95,"Being yourself is better than try to be someone else, being yourself brings you a true friends, not afraid to know who you are, and the most important is that you are honest. When someone is dishonest the person will not have true friends, maybe the person do not know who is. Being someone else is the greatest accomplishment in this world.

Being yourself brings a true friends.

In this world we love to make friends. Why? it because friends never let you down when we need them. Friends brings as happiness in our life, we can count with their time in conditional, friends are gift of God, whatever place we go, we always are going to find a friend. Friends are like family, they there for you no matter what, sometimes we fight with them but they will there for us because they know that you are being a true friend. Being our selves we always going to successful whatever we go.

Being yourself is know who we are. Know who we are, is being honest with our selves and not only with our selves same thing with the society that is around us. However;

some people might not likes us too much because of our action and the way how we talk hurt them. One action talk a lot of a person because demonstrate that that person know who he is. Know who we are helps with our self steam, also we make friend, the love of people and most important is that we loved who we are and not act like if we are someone else.

Finally being honest, is the best action that a person can have in life no lies, no disappointed on people, no issues. Being honest is how we can have true friends, not only true friends, we earn the respect of every single person that we work with or meet in life. People will trust in a person that is honest. not in a person that is dishonest. Whatever place we g, we most be honest with all kinds of people no matter what. Friend, teachers, family, etc; will not disappointed on us, if we are honest every single thing will work for as , there is not issues when a person work honest, it is all the contrary.

Being yourself is the best choose than try to be someone else, being yourself you re not fear to know who you are. Also, the most important is that you are going to made, ""real friends"". However, honest is a strong part of being yourself. No matter what, stay the same, because try to be someone else will hurt you and all the people that is around you. Stay your self eventho the world constantly tries to make you something else.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
46AD88A6F157,"Imagine a world where everyone behaved same way. Positive attitude is the key to success in the life because it helps you reach a goal with confidences and brings the better outcome for their future.

As may many people say that the negative attitude is way to succeed, however, a positive attitude, explain the performances of your doing for example Generic_Name got 50 out of 100, which she wanted on her presentation not because she did not do the work properly,but because the way she present her presentation and she was scared and nervous to present it in front of everyone. It was majorly graded on her performance, but next time she practiced her way to present her presentation five-six times and thought about how she can do this and she doesn't have to be scared of anything and she got 100 on it, which was her goal. Also. a sports team lose few time because the players not getting along or one is better than other, which they can change by thinking equally and being friendly to each other. It shows the optimistic behavior of human supports during their task.

Your past always reflects on your future. Everyone learns something from their mistakes or good memories. For example if Generic_Name did good on her presentation because she the way she presented, it illustrates that she more confident and positive to do her same presentation without worrying. If the sports player lost couple times they would not make same mistakes as they did it before. if you think and feel positives it will show it on your work. The effect changes your perspective to your life.

In conclusion, the way you display your input in feeling true helps the output for your future life, Like Generic_Name positive behaving helped her getting 100 on her presentation and the way that showed on her future presentation and the sports team which practiced and improved their co working to wins the games and their future games. The way you think, feel and perform helps you support your life ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
1BA1FD29BF69,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change.

I agree that the first impressions are the ones that are impossible to change, because impressions from other person can make you feel proud for that person, and impressions from other people about you can just make you feel good and happy for what you are doing, for your hard work.

Reason of why the first impressions are impossible to change, is when you find those negative and envy people, that does not want you to be successful in life, and when the time came at your favor and you start to begin success in life, there is when you start to see those good impressions from those negative and envy people, and that just can make you feel happy and proud for the hard work that you did, that is why is almost impossible to change those impressions, because not matter what you showed them you always looked forward, but still don't hate them, love them as God loves everyone in this world.

No matter what give good impressions and show them, let them know that they are working hard, people who works hard deserve good impressions, make them feel proud for what they are doing, and also no matter what give good impressions, show people how hard worker, how positive, how respectful person you are, show them that you always look forward not matter what, so when other people talk bad stuffs about you, your ones does not going to believe or change those good impressions from you, because you already showed them that good impressions you keep with you...",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
A04B4B412DB3,"The school board should add an hour and a half hours of school to each school day. Do you agree with this? Three reasons why school board should add an hour and a half hours to school are, students wouldn't have much homework, schools could add another elective to the day, and teachers get more teaching time. Help me do this!

The first reason why I believe the school board should add an hour and a half hours to the school day is students wouldn't have much homework. Most students have responsibilities after they get home from school. Some have responsibilities at home, work, and sports. Most students take care of their siblings when they get back from school. Others work after school and don't have time to do their homework. Also a huge amount of students have after school sports either inside or outside of the school, sometimes both.

The second reason why the school board should add an hour and half hours of school to each day is because schools could add one more elective. Studies show people become disinterested in an activity within an hour. If schools added one more elective to the school day most students would be on board with the hour and a half idea. Some people naturally like school and they want the hour and a half thing to happen. Instead of the elective this class could also be a study time for students that are struggling with a class or an assignment. This could help students grow their brain because they would try to understand it, instead of just giving up.

The last reason why an hour and a half hours should be added is teachers would get more teaching time. Teachers tend not to explain some topic well because they run out of time. Students don't ask questions because usually they run out of time. Sometimes the teachers is explaining to another student because they didn't quiet get it either. This doesn't mean the teacher doesn't know how to teach, it means the teacher made an effort to teach as fast as possible so he or she wouldn't run out of time.

The school board school board should add one hour and a half hours to each school day. Three reasons why I think this should happen are students wouldn't have much homework. schools could add one more class or elective,and teachers would have more time to teach. Do you agree with me? If you do help me make this happen!",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
CDA4015E635A,"Just think being in a curfew on adoction, just becauses we are on trouble,think about it, sometimes we teenagers we are who has more troubles because of our friends dependen what kind of friends tha we have they may be good friends also bad friends, but think there are people who wants tha all teenager become a good person,they are people who wants you to become a professional. The city is debating the adoction,because they also wants that the teenagers had less troubles, so they can have a family that the can help to advice what is good and bad.

The council it may help the teenagers to be more safely, and being out of many bad things, the council the only thing the it wants to do is find a family, and being more happy, and the family can help the anyone being out of troubles. I think the being adocted by the age of a teenagers it can be really hard ,for they and the mew parents, i think the because we all teenager we already know many things bad or we know things good, but also having new parents they may wants us do new things, that maybe that are gonna help us in the future,

but we don""t know.

Youngers teenagers the only things the we need are parents who are there talking with us,

I thing the it will be fine for many teenagers being adocted bye a family because he can knew new life, out of many troubles, and also it wiil be fine being out of bad band.        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
C79292B5F78A,"My thoughts on this are that it is good time and this should actually occur for many reasons first of all during the weekdays young people have school everyday only if it is a holiday or if sick. By implying this more young people will get out of the streets so late at night there is no need to be out so late at night in the first place. Second of all, at 10 p. m is a great time to be home during the weekdays it will keep you out of trouble and there will be less chances of young people dying to other criminals at night. Late at night is where most of all crimes occur and now the chances of this will be lower. Third of all , as their are so many people that sell drugs and if young people have to be home so early the chance of them getting into all types of drugs will be so much lower.

If this does become a law the times are also very appropriate Monday through Friday until 10 p. m and then Saturday through Sunday until 12 p. m no one needs to be on the streets later then this time that is being given. If they are their out so late there should be a extreme reason as to why they would be ""breaking the law"". This will most likely keep young people out of more troubles then they all ready are. This time is not unfair it is a very generous time to be home. This really should not be interfering with any ones life you can still go out but not be out for so late at night. I would understand if this law was also for people over the age of 18 because young adults like to party. But this law should actually be for people under the age of 18 that would make more sense and being a ""adult""(over the age of 18) they know what is right from wrong,what they should be doing, and what they should not be doing.

This law is not to harm anyone but it would to improve the community curfews to keep teenagers out of trouble I can very much agree with that. But those young teenagers are not doing the right thing then no matter what law that is added nothing will change the fact of how they act(keep them out of trouble). Going back to the time it is not like this law will be implying that the young people do not hang out with their friends this is just so more people can stay safe from all the trouble that is the streets. A lot of innocent people die every year by being so late at night and in the streets where some of the bad people come out. They have all after school to be doing after school activities this will not keep anyone from doing what they want. It is just a way to keep young people out of trouble there should be excuses to all of this like going to a party but there as well should be a limit to all of this. The consequence if they break the law should start of as a warning and then just be adding on to that.

My position on this curfew law is also that I would understand why people do not want this to happen but at the same time teenagers do know what they should be doing and what they should not be doing. I have two different view points why they should be worried and why they should not be worried. I know that people like to have sleep overs and would this be included or do they have to specifically in their house on can they be sleeping at someone else . Back into my other view if they go to a party lets say over the weekend where the curfew is at 12 p. m because it is on a Saturday and they come back at 1 p. m or later .They are not keeping track of time and lose the time. They are having fun with all of their friends and then they get caught because someone calls the police. Then the police comes and now they have to face the law and all that. Now what is next that being on their record just because they stayed out longer then they had and were on the streets. This would honestly suck and then going home and getting in trouble by your parent because of a mistake you made. After all this wanting to go to a very good college and they not accepting them just because they made a mistake for staying to late at the party. This would be a down side because if anyone breaks the law that will go on there record and not come out of there permit sadly this is a consequence that can happen and would suck. A college not accepting them because they "" broke the law"" not fun at all because colleges do look at everything anyone does before getting accepted and being a very good student with a high GPA and hearing this would not be good they will be carrying that guilt for their whole life by not getting into the college that they want to get into.

On the other note right now there is not a curfew to what time teenagers should be home yet but there is a curfew to when who ever has their permit for driving. So that is also a big restriction no young teenager is out in their car at a late time the only time you can actually see them is when they are getting out of school. There are pros and cons to this ""law"" but I think there are mostly pros then cons everything is very much reasonable and understanding. The only down/con that I can personally thin of right now is that they get caught and that going in their record does not sound good at all. But overall there are a lot of pros to this and this law should be seriously implied to all of the United States not only to one city but to all of them. This will keep more people safe yes pf course there is always that one person who wants to break the law as a joke or something that really should not be anything to play around with or anything but something that all young people listen to it take it serious.

In conclusion this law or curfew will stop all of these thieves from stealing young girls or boys and then selling them as well as to stop rape from happening so much because sometime it is very hard to detected people because of how dark it is. But this will most likely lower the chance of all these negative things to happen so frequently to anyone. It will also keep young people out of lots of trouble by being so late at night less danger.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
1928846BB272,"I believe that is good idea for the students to commit to a career at a young age. Instead, it is important for the students to find the specific career and graduate before time. In point of view, some students can choose, if they want to a specific career or more. In thesis statement, students can find the specific career because is great opportunity and good idea.

First reason, some students are considered to find the specific career. Because they want to enter to the college at their young age. For example, Generic_Name was prepare to enter to the college at her 17th years old and she win a scholarship, and enter to Generic_School to study her specific career. This shows that students can achieve their goals at their young age, that nothing is impossible.

Second reason, some students have to find the specific career. Because they want to prepare before graduate of high school. For example, Generic_Name had her classes pass and all the credits before 12th grade and she apply to the college to her specific career. Being students it's not easy to achieve this specific goal, but with work hard and perseverance all is possible.

Third reason, some students think that they can't commit to a career at a young age. Because they don't have courses to guide toward a specific career. For example, Generic_Name is in 12th grade and she wants to graduate before, but she don't pass her SOL and she have the enough credits for graduate. So this shows that students can't commit to a career. If they don't have everything that is necessarily to find the specific so they cannot achieve anything.

In conclusion, it is important for the students to find a specific career at a young age. However, it is a great idea to find the career that proponent to achieve before the time of graduate and get all that you need like: credits, grades,

exams, and courses. Also, this is a great opportunity if you want to be someone professional in this society. So be positive and perseverant.     ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
E501D2D7FC83,"According to the prompt i would have to agree because impression is something you get when you get to see a old picture of you when you was a kid, or when someone makes a surprise for you, you get that impression , you start crying or just smiling .

For example,one of my experiences was meeting my whole family for the first time in my life, when we came to the united states my first impression was that i saw a lot of new things , a lot of nice cars , big houses , and a lot of people.

We stayed in texas for 2 days, we call my uncle the first day we stayed in texas, he told everyone in my family that we made it , we took different buses like for 3 days just to get to were my family was.

When we get there they went to pick us up , my first impression was to see all my family back again and that impression i will never forget it , and it will be never be change.

We went to my grandmother's house, i was nervous because in that day i haven't see my dad for more than 8 years, and when he came through the door i got that impression of seeing him again, i was so happy to see him again.",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
ADFE2CDB6FF1,"Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus.

-The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them, "" the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English"" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school.

-For example:

If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about what he is doing in his online class. He will try to find the way to solve the problem by himself.

Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting.

Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking. Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school. Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too. i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many time she was so tired with her belly and then when she has her baby yet she take in her house the next classes i was surprise about it either i do not how unconfortable it was for her that a teacher was with her when the baby start cry or when the baby need to eat, later she was done she back to the school but she didn't feel ok for leave her baby at home. This story make me think about it if i have the election to choose how i can study i prefer study and take the classes in my house better that school.

I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems; what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we are no pay attention what the teacher is talk about the class, So i think this if a student want money need to work and continue study online maybe in that way is more easy pass the class and the SOL. Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes, in summary ""NEVER GIVE UP"" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have to do is study. sometimes the other people make feel us so bad or without no reason to be in this world, go ahead and desmostrate to that person who do not believe in you that you can do it.

During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials. Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are:

- Spend more time in the computer

- More focus in the homework

- Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want

- Study all the day

- No talk with your friends during your class

- Finish more fast with no distraction

All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be involve in problems with another student. Could fine stay at home by self in own class than go to the school. Many student suffer of depreciation and that is so bad for them. If they school giving to them the opportunities to take the classes online it is more better for their healthy, this is my opinion about attend classes on the home.                ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
D1EB6E3F8A28,"People should always take the student's work as an effort because of the way they work hard and because of the best they try themselves to reach a goal.

All students do not deserve to learn by lower standards otherwise students have the right to learn of the most helpful and powerful way.

I believe that self-esteem comes from praising because all students should be supported by people, and people should have the right to support students in many ways to learn and help them to could reach their goals for life. The support from people is the best way to make a person feel better.

Also students should have someone who can helps out or making this person feel better, comfortable, giving ideas or finding many different ways to support him to keep going and helping to never give up.

Praising a tudent's woork it helps to build self-steem and make it feel apreciated and also dont make it feel lower just because of the hard way this person work.

In conclusion all students have the right of being supported by family friends or private people making it feel better and helping outr every time this person need it.        ",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
D1D770AF6855,"I believe schools should allow cellphones in classrooms because , If someone needs to call you , family emergency , and it could also be used as learning tool.

Although sometimes cell phones in school might be used for personal reasons like soical media the pros of being able to use your cell phones in school outweigh the cons. In todays current society millions of people use electronic devices at work and school , Schools should implement more use out of technology and let kids use their phones in class to help complete tasks assigned to them ,

for example , If a kid does not want to use a dictionary and to find a word he can easily just look up the words meaning on he internet using his phone.

If someone needs to call you during school they can easily do it by just dialing up your number instead of having to call the school. It is much easier to call someone during school on there celluar device instead of having to call the school wait for the school to find the classroom the student is in and then transfer the call to the student in that classroom. In case of a family emergency , parents , relatives will call you on your phone most likely they will not call the school. I have had personal experiences with that as my parents do not contact the school when they wish to speak to me , they call me on my cell phone.

Implementing better rules in school for cellphone usage is beneficial , instead of punishing a student for having there phone out in the classroom the school should make better use out of cellphones by allowing students to have them out and or use them. More schools , classes are making it easier to access assignments that can be completed online ,

you can view what assignments you have to complete in class by using your cellphone instead of being overwhelmed with paperwork , your tasks can be completed online.

I believe schools should allow cellphones in classrooms , it will make learning in class easier due to the easy access of the internet , in case of family emergencys and for any other reason you might need it. Cellphones are in alot of students lives and we should punish them for having todays technology in classrooms.",4.0,3.5,5.0,4.5,3.5,4.0
43AE9E4D0EFC,"I would say that I am agree because If you want a succesful life you have to learn how to made your life easy showing to the world that you are special that you can be a nice person does not matter what the other people said or think, you have to take everything with calm and if you have problems you have to solve it with a good attitude because if you get angry you do not going to solve in a good way that is why you have to be a good person with everybody, have peace in your soul, and the last but not least have a good connection with the people that are around you, you have to put a happy face to everything that comming directtly to you.

When you are a good person with all people you made them feel good and also you feel it, because when you are a goood person you are saying that you are different to everybody, because in this world we can see that alot of people are so bad but that does not mean that all of them are aqualsbut ypu do not have to stop being a nice person just because you know people that have a bad attitude, the only thing that you have to do is be away from all of them and give to yourself a chance to know that really think like you that can make you feel as in family, this people will make you feel better because you are showing to them that you can have people around you that can make you have a better life and also more succes, for example I am a good person with all people ,with my family, and with my friends; I am gonna told you something about my friends they are specil I love them and they love me you know why because I took my time to know them, now I know what they like or how they spend their time and the most important they think that I am a succes person that make have a good attitude with them and I want them in my life and I think they will have a a nice life because I see in them that they will be very succes people.

I think that have peace is a important part of your life, because from your soul you get a lot of good feelings that make you feel comfortable,but in the same way sometimes you can have something and that make you be incomfrotable but there is you have to try to have peace, I konw that can be so difficult, do not have peace inside of you can affect you in some ways in your life, I think that to feel peace you have to do things that really like you or find something that you can make always and is not bored and also not get angry so easy because just for one problem you can be mad for a weekend or more and that is not good for you there is anything better than have peace, when I was 12 my younger brother did something that do not like me in that timeand I still remember since the first day I can tell you is not good have that mind inside of me, I am 20 now and I think that mind is gonna be with me the my whole life, but I trying to do not remember but when I remember I tell to my self that I love my brother and we are so close and he is a person that is there to hear me and when I talk with with him I tell to him everything thatv is happening in my life I feel peace in my soul.

A good connection with people that are around you can help you to have a good attitude because if you meet people that always are positives or always talk about things that are going to help in your life they can influence in your future because they know what they want in their life or what is bad for them those people is nice to meet, are interesting to hear, you can learn somethings from them and you can share some ideas, but in ypur life you will know a lot of people maybe good or maybe bad some of them are going to be nice, they will ask you to go outside a lot of days or they will invate you to have fun and you will think that those people are the good for your to be succes, but let me tell you sometimes the good people are the ones that offert to you not a party if not something that can be good for your life something that is not going to affect your future , and I know sometimes you are going to feel that the people that want to help you are the bad ones but not you are wrong, I know a person that I saw a great future he studied with me, he always had good grades, he always did homeworks, he was a nice guy this happen in the sevent grade, but when we attend the nine grade he start to meet people that they had bad grades they di not do homeworks and I think they don not wanted a future, some months later his grades goes down but was because he always when I ask him where he was, he was going something bad with his new friends and then he turns to one of them , and I think he do not attend college, this is why I am saying to have a successful future you have to be with people that are going to help you in your future.

I think we all agree after this three points that were; a good person with everybody, have peace in your soul, and have a good connection with people that are around you, this make me think how important is have a good attitude, show a good attitude to everybody, and have a good attitude does not matter what is happening in your life.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
9C3D2911E32D,"Have you ever thought of the affect of going out after 10 p. m. at night? Night time is the scariest period of the day; nothing is more dangerous and harmful than at night. People would rather stay at home than going out at night. A city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because it is safer, teenagers can stay out of trouble and they can have more time to spend with their family.

However, some people think that curfews would unfairly interfere in young people's lives because they might have an emergency and everyone has freedom to do what they want. In some cases, for instance, teenagers might have an emergency or something important at night that they need to be there as soon as possible, city council cannot let them stay at home. It will be unfair if other people can go out at night, but not teenagers. Everyone has freedom to do what they want, others cannot force teenagers to stay at home everyday after 10 p. m. at night. Although some people think that having curfews are not a good idea, I still insist that the adoption of curfews for teenagers would be a fantastic idea.

In the first place, a city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because it is safer. It is very scary if teenagers hang out at night because someone might follow or kidnap them without they notice. No one knows what is going to happen next. Staying at home not only keep teenagers safe, it also make them be caution to everything around them. Furthermore, teenagers need to protect themselves from others, so that they will not get hurt. In short, it is necessary to adopt curfews for teenagers because they will be safer.

Additionally, it is important for teenagers to have curfews because they can stay out of trouble. Teenagers nowadays have a very playful mind and they would do anything to enjoy themselves; however, they can get into trouble very quickly. Curfews can prevent and stop teenagers from breaking the law. They can stay at home and do something productive and meaningful to themselves. Moreover, curfews can prevent teenagers to meet harmful people outside of the society and make a bad decision. Therefore, a city council should adopt curfews for teenagers because they can stay out of trouble.

Lastly, it is a great idea for a city council to adopt a 10 p. m. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers because they can have more time to spend with their family. Spending time with their family is the best moment that nobody wants to miss. Instead of going out with people below standard and breaking the rules, teenagers can have a wonderful time with their family at home. Because of curfews, the relationship between teenagers and their family will grow and be healthier. To sum up, it is nice to have curfews because it helps build up a better relationship.

In conclusion, it is the best idea to have a city council adopt curfews for teenagers because it can protect teenagers from danger and risk, they will less likely get into future conflicts, and they can have an enjoyable time to spend with their family. Curfew benefits both teenagers and the law. Curfews can raise the world to a higher level and make a clean society for all teenagers. Let's make the adoption of curfews come true! ",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
8B155840CA6D,"Summer is the time for students to take a break from school, but some educators feel that summer break is too long and it needs to be shorten. As for me, I am strongly disagree with this idea because summer is the time for student to visit their famiy, their relatives, to do whatever they like, to enjoy whatever they love and sometimes learning too much might be somthing that some students could not handle.

First of all, summer is the time for students to come back to their hometown to visit their family. Some students, like me, came from another country so a lot of times we do miss our hometown. That is why having a three month summer break is truly a huge chance for us because that is pretty much the only reunion we have in a year. I will take mine as an example. To be able to come back to Generic_City it is not just about time, sometimes it could involve money. The ticket is just too expensive, not to mention that it is in summer. So if I can visit my family this year, I might have to wait a few years later to be able to visit them again.

Secondly, this is a period of time where students can do whatever thay want to do like doing some volunteering or club activities or playing sports or just simply doing their favorite hobbies. If we shorten the summer break, students will easily get bored when they come back to school because they do not have enough time to do what they like in summer. Nobody wants to study when they are bored. So if we want a student to return to school with lots of energy, we need to let them have a break. And that give me an example. One of my Vietnamese friend told me that even in summer he still have to take a lot of tutor classes. That is why if we shorten the summer break then lots and lots of Asian students will not even have time to do what they love!

Last but not least, learning too much might be something that some students could not handle. A short summer break meaning we have to go to school more than we need. I know that if we shorten the summer break we will have a longer winter break, but that is not the case for the country that does not have a winter break or a week off in fall and spring. A student could get stress if they do not have a proper break. Just check some examples on the news or internet, especially in South Korea or Japan. A lot of students suicide just because of learning too much. Too many homeworks and tests, pressures from parents and teacher,.... Very stressful! Not to mention that Asian students usually have a shorter summer break and winter break.

On the whole, I am not agree with this idea and along with fact that I am an Asian and I used to go through a very strict and tough education in Asia, I can never accept this. Students need to have some times to release their stress after a long year at school by visiting their family or doing whatever they like.",4.5,4.5,3.5,4.5,3.0,3.5
46EC00DDBCF9,"Small kindness can impact others. Because you can make their day go much better if they not felling ""Okay"" we can get a smile out of their face or saying ""everything is going to be okay"" saying something nice can impact something that motivates them or making their day go better saying positives things not negative stuff that's going to make their day go even worse and making them feel like they are nothing in this world everybody comes to this word for a purpose they not just here to do nothing but if we make that person feel like he is nobody in this world he might saying ""there is no point of me being here"" And that person might finish with his life because they treating him like he is nobody. There is two types of people in this world one of them are the nice people and the other ones are just mean and bad be choose what type of people do we want to be nobody can force us to be someone we dont want to be we do it are self this word will be full of hate if kind people didn't exist. people might go and say something negative to the other Pearson and if you hurting that p[person feelings your just hurting yourself too or you might not even care about yourself you just care about what people might say to you or think about you and you just making other people feel bad. Because if they treat you like trash your not just going to treat others like that or you can just not talk to other people or they might try to help you out you choose you get help or you can stay the way you are and not get help but we all gotta treat people with kindness no matter who they are just treat people like you wanna be treat it or get help. Good people still exist start treat everybody with respect and kindness.

Get a smile out of people face they want to be happy but they just need to learn how to smile and be happy with others being kind and treat them with respect thats what is all about helping a friend out not giving a friend your back when they really need you staying with them in the good or bad moments.

""everything is going to be okay"" giving people advice of whats good and bad and being kind to one another. ",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
605BF3B67175,"Dont you want to know why a positive attitude is the key to success in life?

I absolutely agree with the statement. For this reason I am going to provide you some details that support my opinion. Hopefully, at the end of this essay you will agree that attitude is the key to progress in life.

First, I think that to have a wonderful attitude in life will help you to be confident, because, people surely will trust on you; besides, if you have an exemplary attitude, you are demonstrating to others who you are and how your behavior is.

Second, I have been seen that people who have a better attitude, they succeed in life. In addition, it will develop your skills to make more friends; for instance, supposing that you are in High School, and you have resentful behavior with your classmates, what will happen is that rarely they will talk to you, the reason is because they already know about your behavior.

Third, I have read some segments from online resources; reportedly, more than a half people (70%) who have a filthy attitude, in the future they become pessimistic people. By another hand, if you demonstrate your nice attitude, you will have better opportunities in life.

In conclusion, if you are one of the people who have a awful attitude, I am sure that it will not let you to develop as a person. However, if you show your awesome attitude, you will succeed in life.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
EAE71A9E0247,"i think working 10 hours a day is way better then working 8 hours a day you can save alot of energy and electrricity and your time in a day. in 4 days working 10 hours a days is like 40 hours a week. still if you want to do overtime you can still do overtime on friday and saturdays.

working 10 am to 10 pm is better then working 8am to 4 pm. i think my school should change the school hours and save some time. they should extrend the school hours to 2 hours so that the kids can get enough sleep when they go home and they can do there work at the jobs too. if my school extends the school hours to 2 more hours then kids can get off for 3 days from school. that's how schools can save alot of energy water etc. teachers can get 3 days a week off too if my school extedns 2 more hours and make it to 10 hours. there should be just 4 days school in a week. some people have hard time to wake up early in morning so they can do there homework. when students get enough sleep they can focus more in there studies and they get more time during weekends too do there homewoks. that's how students can achieve there goals in high school when they get enough sleep they can stay more fresh and active during school hours. in high schools most of the students have hard time during the whole school year just because they do not get enough time to do there homeworks during the weekends most of the students work 32 to 38 hours a day so they do not get enough time to do there homeworks on saturday and sundays.",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
DACF12F21A7C,"Dear, Principal

I think that you should allowed the students of your school to use there cell phones when they have the time to. The students should have in mind that when the teacher ask them to put it always that they well. But also to remember that they have the right to use them. Will this is why I think that allowing the students to have there phones with them is ok. One because they want to time in school to call friends that may not be in the same school or if they have an important thing to do after school in they can't go. Another is if they need help with something and on one is with them . Now I what you might be saying that the students are never going to leave their phones not even if there in class. will there can be a punishment to that person that dose not flow the rules. You can assigned any thing to that person like after school clean up or Saturday school something like that so that they know not to do it again and that they need to lessen to the teacher when they are ask to well that is all i have to say principal.            ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
0383E4A36E46,"If I could go to visit anywhere in the world, It would be LOCATION_NAME. LOCATION_NAME has so many differnet things that you can do like their food and culture. LOCATION_NAME is also a great spot for family vacation. Lastly you get to experience how Islanders live and their way of lifestyle. These are the reason why i would go to LOCATION_NAME.

I think LOCATION_NAME is a amazing vacation spot for your family. Everyone around the world go to beaches during summer and LOCATION_NAME has more than just beaches. LOCATION_NAME also has one of the best resorts and food because I've lived their for 1 year. Food and resorts are the best thing ever. If you have a big or small family and they love taking pictures then LOCATION_NAME gives you so many opions on places to take them especiallly if you are from a city. LOCATION_NAME is the family vacation spot if you love nature and beaches.

Another reason is LOCATION_NAME has really great food and culture. Like they give you so many options on what to eat and the taste is priceless. Secondly, they show you so many different and interesting dances, They also play their own music which is a really cool talent. They have different instruments that are hand crafted and the sound of them brings joy to everyone. If you go their as a tourist then they will give a tour of their culture and tell you stories of how LOCATION_NAME was discovered. Every meal in LOCATION_NAME has a different history behind it which makes you want to eat it even more. Food and culture in LOCATION_NAME is one of the best in the world: and it is a lifetime experience.

Lastly, experience how people in LOCATION_NAME live, their lifestyle especially if you actually live in a city. Living their as if your family are locals then that may teach different ways of life. LOCATION_NAME is not the richest place you will ever visit but it is the life changing moment. LOCATION_NAME offers many people homes to rent for a week or month then you can live as if you are a local in LOCATION_NAME. LOCATION_NAME is also a very relaxing place to visit, If you have been living in a city then LOCATION_NAME will give you a mental break. Lastly, You can find out how that Island was discovered and how they worked to make It look like a vacation spot. Experiencing how different cultures work and their way of living that Islanders life.

I would still go to LOCATION_NAME if I could visit any destination in the world. Their food/Culture, LOCATION_NAME is the number one family vacation spot if your family loves going to the beach and lastly, Experiencing a different lifestyle, seeing how the life of Islanders work. LOCATION_NAME gives you many options on what you should do when you go their and how you should enjoy your time. These are my reasons why I would visit LOCATION_NAME if I could go anywhere in the world.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0
FA568C27F0F5,"The some businesses adopted work for ten hours for a week that will good for the worked, because they make more money for example they are working 10 hours a day they are consisting going to work but the school dont follow this model, because the student dont are coming to school everyday.,

The school dont follow this model from the businesses work. First the student are not coming to school everyday and they need to come for learn because the businesses for work are taking all the time, and just came to school for two day and they are missing all they work from the school. Also the student need to came to school for learn and be a good person and them they can work after school.

Ruler the school dont want the student just came for two day. Because one of disadvantages is they are not going to make a great grade . Second because the students are not coming school, and they dont know what the teachers are began doing during class with the other student and they will have a bad grade for not coming and dont doing the work for the classes.

One of benefits they have began work is making money. Because they are working, four-day for a week so that make they have a good time to work and make ten hours a day but they are just going to work and not come to school. Another way they can work is after school that help they to came to school and learn, have a good grades and all the classes. Next they will be respect to the teachers and do all the homeworks pay attencion in class when the techaers are teaching.

Conclusion: the school and the teachers want all the students can graduates and be a good person have a good job and they want to help every students to have a good future, and the student need to come to school everyday so that how we can learn, and student can work after school..

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1DDA34D8E4D3,"Community park,sates park, and national park are fun because you can ask your friends to come with you to play any sports like basketball,soccer,baseball,and football or kickball. Playing outdoor is fun because you could play with your friend from school or you could play with your cousin or your own brothers, because some kids don't like to play outdoor because they rather stay indoor so they can play with there friend video games. Older people like going outside to go for a run or riding there bikes with there kids and they like to play any sports with there kid at the park. Examples:( basketball,football,soccer,volleyball).

Why should people be outdoor because, what are they going to do indoor all day by not going outside, and go have fun with your friends or cousin or your brothers or sister. Going outside is fun because you could ride your bike around the your neigh broad hood or you can play tag with your friend because little kids like to play tag with another person because it's fun for them or they could play kickball or anything they all want to play outdoor with another person because playing outside is fun because you could play with anyone in the family because some people like to go to the park with there whole family and they could all play a sports together that they all would love to play as a family. going outdoor is fun when it's spring time or summer because its really hot that time and it's a good time to go to the park with the whole family because a lot of people like go at that time of the year or season because they can go to have fun at the soccer field or the baseball field to go on and play a game together or you can play a kickball at the baseball field.

When it's summer time or spring a lot of people would like to come outside because they can go to the stat park or the community park or the national park to ride there bikes or going for a run around the park or going to the park with your family to go have some fun with your cousin at the park you could play soccer,baseball,kickball,and you could walk around the forests with your brother because you might find something really inserting and you might found an animal somewhere I think you might find a bear or fox and a frog like a different kind of a frog in the forest and you might take that kind of a frog home with you and you can take care of it yourself. Going outdoor is fun because you could go to the pool or the nearest park were you live. Some people like to be outdoor because like to play football outside because some people kids dad play football when there were kids now the father like to play football with there kids or there grandchildren. some people do not like to come outside during the summer because they don'thave school or homework they could do what ever they want to do because it's summer time some other kids come outside for the whole dad if want to because there no school or homework for them and they can even go to the park all day with there friends.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
62B3C9C3398E,"Do we have to live other people experiences?

If we want to live our own life you should start by taking a break. Think how people would like to live their lifes and then, use this as an example but do not use it for your own. We all know that life isn't easy as we want but that's life, we cannot change it. If you put your life in hands of an expert you will have the opportunity to succed but it will feel strange and you will regret later. Why? if you ask why, and this is because everything you have done it's thanks to someone else not to you, you are not living your own life, youar not having fun, no mistakes, no experiences, no control of your own life. There's always going to be a person telling you what to do and if you don't follow his/her directions something could go wrong. That's why you should live your life as you want to live it without anybody help. At first, you can have a teacher during a period of time but it doesn't mean that you will have to go and ask for help everytime you have a problem. Make your own decisions mean that you will do mistakes but you will learn even more from this and it will help you to do thigs better and it also will help you like a human. When I said human I mean that you will have your own thoughts about something and your own way to live your life and no like a robot that just follow direction and have no sense of humor.

People will never discover their great mental power because until I know they just develop the 70.3% of their mental capacity and it makes them feel useless sometimes. I don't really like to talk about other people life but one example could be Homeless people. Everyone thinks and look at the as a piece on somethings useless but if you really meet them and talk to them you will realize that they are smart and all they do and what they have in their brains is even better than what we have. The way they think and the way they look at other people make them specials and unique. Now, what can experts do to change their life or take the control of what they want to do?. As we all know, they cannot do anything and no matter what the situation could be the answer will be the same. Their decisions and their style of life before the actual I think were made by someone else and after a while they were not able to pay for what they had. Experts help you to get things but do you really think they will help you when you are really on trouble? or will they help you with things you have to pay? the answer to this is NO. In my opinion they help you because they want something from you or they will try to get something from you after you learn it. Two years ago I met an old man from Washington DC, his name was Generic_Name. His parents are from Generic_City and Generic_City. Before homeless he was a mechanic but one day while he was fixing a car he met a person who told him that he could help him to have his own workshop and he accepted. Everything was good for the first years but after some years the person left the country and Generic_Name didn't have the capacity to manage the whole store. Bussiness came down, deppression started to make him use drugs, and after a while he lost everything he had and the expert (person who help him) wasn't there to help him when he really needed him.

If you think you have the capacity to succed on your own, you have to do it and don't let anyone ruin what you have planned for your own future. It doesn't matter if he is a proffesional, you just need to learn what you need but never let them maneuver your life. People will always try to control your life but you are the one who is going to decide if you want to live the life they want you to live or the one you want to live. I am not saying that you have to ignore the advices they give you but don't follow their directions.

Nothing is difficult if you really try it and nothing can be impossible if you really want to do it. Do not live like a robot, don't let anyone take adventage of your incapacity to succed just because you do not know anything. Ask questions, ask for advices and opinions but don't do want they want to do with your life. I know life isn't easy to live but remember that we just have one and after death we cannot do anything about it. Life is going to beat you up, experiences will make you stronger every single day, decisions will make you be independent, and at the end you will see that everything you did was good and you have what you wanted without anybody help. My friend, if you let people maneuver your life, then you will cry and you will not have the future you wanted. Everything will be destroyed and disgrace will follow you anywhere.

Don't follow experts, be one of them and do your own life, have a family, have a car, an partment or whatever you want to have without asking anyone. Help is given by God when you born. He gave you two arms, two legs, two eyes and a body. A person help you to walk and talk and one time you learn this you become an indepentent person. Do everything by yourself and don't let people make you feel useless because God make them the same as you and as everyone else but they have not develop their mental capacity the waht make them special. If you do everything by yourself people will try to destroy you but be strong and try even more until get what you want. Never try to kill yourself if you don't know what to do it is better if you believe in God and in his help because he is the only one who can help you without taking anything away from you.

Never give up and follow your dreams, live your life as you want to live it but remember that no one can control what you can do if you don't want to. Life depends of you and what you do with it. No matter what happen you have to do what makes you happy always just trusting God. Remember that just God and family are our friends. Anyone else is just people we know. Fight for what you really want no matter what comes next.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
6F30733E6B4B,"The first impressions are almost impossible to change. I disagree about that, cause me personal i don't have issues with no one around me. Maybe I can be a little annoying sometimes with my peers, but that doesn't mean that they don't like me. They hang around because they know how I am and what I do when they are around me. In the end of the day it doesn't bother me if they like me or not, because I know they are gonna come back and enjoy the day with me.

This first impression thing had me thinking about something that happen a long time ago. It's not based on my experienced, but one my best friend's that we go back a long way in middle school. He told me that he didn't like me that much so we didn't talk too much. He didn't even talked to me when we where around each other, but something happen that change our friendship. There was guy who always was there with him the guy had done something terrible and caught suspended for sometime. My friend and I started talking more, after the guy got suspended he told that he didn't like me because I was dating someone he liked that's what happen.

My first impressions where good cause everyone that I know are cool with me, but if it wasn't I could of make-up something to be good with them. This thing about first impressions is not that hard to if you have charisma or personality in you. I never had a hard time making friends, because I have personality and charisma this two things you need to have if you wanna be friends with someone or making a first impression. There was a time that I went to talk with my father-in-law that day I was super nervous to even talk to him. In the end my father-in-law was just a great guy we talk about every comment he had to talked.

I don't get nervous about nothing, but he was tall and looked like a hard-dude. Even thought I all ready knew him he still looked intimated to look at him. Her wife was the opposite of him she was pollute and nice with me, but I knew that all ready because I seen her in parties. It was a good impression in the end we broke-up in a few days, but we still friends her mom still remembers me that good. sometime it is hard to make a good impression with people you know.

It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. My conclusion I disagree about that, cause me personal I don't have issues with no one around me. It's just that you need personality and charisma to make a good impression in my opinion. So go and look for that its's not difficult to have that. If you only have personality that good or have charisma that even greater to have, sighing out.                ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
616C3D5795E8,"I think i agree on the Churchill statement because :

every time you failure more and more ,every time you learn something new , for example :

my mom always puts me to clean the house but every time i went to do the cleaning, she used to say ""you din't clean here or ""you are missing a part of the floor that still is dirty"" so i just say to my self next time i'm gonna clean better in this part of the room and i keep smiling not given up.

To learn how to clean the house in a perfect way i decided to clean the house every Saturday so i can practice more , it passed two month and then i went to clean again and i mop the floor , clean the windows , clean all the tables,so i finished and my mom says great job you now know how to clean in a perfect way!!.

remember to success you don""t even have to think about what you do wrong just keep working on it ,and keep dreaming!!!",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
BA0D3D6A8A94,"I disagree with this plan. I say this because the amount of hours we come to school everyday is enough. If the school board add another hour and a half to the school day all students will be tired, and the students would not be able to learn everything during the day. Being in school for a long period of time and getting homework would put a lot of pressure on the students. For most students the amount of time we come to school at the moment is already putting a lot of pressure. If the school board add another hour and a half most of the students will surely dislike school and maybe even drop out or show no interest in school work or homework. Students would also have a very short amount of time to study for tests or the big projects that they have to finish outside of school at home because some students have a part time job.

Students need some free time for their happiness and physical health. As a middle school student I can say that I get to have free time and do my school work just fine at the moment but with getting one hour and a half added to my school schedule I don't know if I would still have the time to have fun and do my school work and still manage time to spend with my family and friends. It would effect my health if I don't get enough free time to play with my friends or do the things I like. For those students who have a part time job won't be able to spend enough time with their family or friends or get some time to rest. It would surely effect their mental health, physical health and happiness because they are not going to get enough time to work out or do something fun to rest their mind.

Teachers with part time job would have a difficult time on teaching students their best and having a part time job. Mostly all teachers have a part time job because they have a big family and their income from teaching is not enough or they want to save money. All of them have their personal reasons for it. But teachers can not have a good part time job if the school board add another hour and a half to the school day Because teachers must stay after school at least once or twice a week to help the students that needs help or want to take a retake on a test. Teachers will not have enough time for a good part time job or to really take good care of their kids for the ones that are married. The ones that are not married to just take good care of their mom and dad. So teachers would either have to quit teaching or get their salaries increased. So they wouldn't need a part time job to earn more money and they would have time to take good care of their family.

Drivers already are taking a risk for driving in the morning when it's dark. It's very difficult for them to drive a school bus that's full of students when they can't really see the road. Adding one hour and a half is the last thing that the bus drivers need on their plate even if the school board adds one hour and a half to school day it's okay for the bus drivers. But what's not okay is the after school program. After school program is for two hours and with adding one hour and a half to the school day that's three hours and thirty minutes later than the normal time. It would be really dark. So it would be really hard for bus drivers to drive and it would be too risky. It would be dangerous for the bus drivers and all the students that is going to be in it.

After school is a program that helps every student make up missing work, retake a test or redo their homework to bring up your grades. It also help the school finish their work quick when students stay to help for their serves hours. But sadly the schools might have to shut down after school program if they add a hour and a half to school day because it would be hard for teachers, bus drivers and students. Students wouldn't stay after school because by the time the school finishes all the students would be really tired.",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
74CE2F003968,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from honme by way of online video conferncing. Is good idea to take classes online or not good idea to take classes online?

It is a great idea to take classes online, this is in my openin because it is fafe the students times. Like (work in deffrent time ) (Famileis responsiblity) (Sickness and transportion) work in deffrent time sa we all know that work that may effect the time of students becaue is impossible any work places give the students the schedule that they want it. So after student done from work ,they can take online classes fom home that will make them more relax.

Because after work is hard to focus in the classes but if students take from home they will have time to ate and more fouse. Online classes can give more time to do other activety,like sports, go out with friends.

Sickness,transportion ,Parke if students sick so bad do they can go to school ofcurs not first of all the student who is sick can make the other student sickt too. So that's why the online classes can make the different for students additional sick persons may can not drive too ,and may not all students have cars and parking some time students vhave to pay fo parking too. Frthuer more the wather may not help smoe time to dive to anywhere.

Families responsiblit,it is good benefit from families ,being to attend classes online. Because there we all know may some of students have chidern, or students are disaplelty person ,example disapolty persons can not go bythemsevs to school in the issue the online classes can make for thses students a big different so they can take time off if they are not feel well,and take their pale in the time. And that will help students that don't want to school because of these kind of issue the online class will be btetter for them. Or if students are moter or father, it will be easy for them to kake care of their childern and take classes online . So there will calm in the mind of the students because they will know that wouldn't be missing classes. Hwoevery; they will feel busy in their time but at lest there is options which is online classes. The great benefit of online classes for mother or father that may be they are students is the time. Which if they have kids or teenagers the online claeese can be benefitationl bacuse they can speent time with their kids and teen to see if they are doign good in school.

And the end the technology make the lifes easly and helpful;safe time,make anything be done on the time, so we can say technology refund the time for these who always busy.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
A975CBC4A7E8,"Great opportunities for students to attend to classes from home by online way,

Well, Now a day with the new technology. Thinks get easy every day, Long time ago you had to attend to a regular school because there was no other way to attend to school and accomplish your career dream, But now we have new technologies that allow some school to give online classes from home, If you live far away from school and theres no way you can get to school faster and easily. You don't have to worry at all, Because now there are a lot of online web site that can give you an opportunities to you to accomplish your goal or your professional career, so I think this is a great opportunity for all of those people who never went to school and think is too late, Well is not, Online classes allow to accomplish their goals to every one, No matter what age if they are old or young they can do it whenever they want, And at the time they are available,

However, Some parents decided to enroll their children in a online school, Because they think thats better then to sent they to a regular school, In one point those parent are right because in a regular school you are not looking out their children, And they dont know what they are doing, Or even if they are in school or not, And also you dont know what class of friend does your child is hanging out with, Or if other children are bulling to your children,

In regular school you don't know whats going on,

But. by the other head in home school you can be with them during that time they dedicate to study, or even better if your schedule don't fit with the time they need to study, you can hire someone you have confidence with, To help you, In home school your child is not surround of bad children that can make your child feel depressed, So in this way you can see how your child is going in progress,

And I think this is one of the best decision you can take to enroll your child in a online school, Or even your self if you want to get your education higher, I think this is a big opportunity not just for child but for adults too, This schools online bright us a lot of benefices, For example those people who didn't finished their studies is not too late to continued, This benefices them because they can do it at the time they are available, And in a comfortable place, In my position I'd rather enroll in myself in online classes. Then to come every day to regular school,       ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
0369AD4B5726,"I would agree with being honest at all times because if I'am honest, I'am telling the truth and I'm not lying towards anyone. The reason why being honest is the best policy is that people can really trust me if they ask me a question or if I need their help with any of my work even if they are not honest or completely honest with any of their work. I think that honesty would be number one in my personality because people get smarter when they grow and honesty will be in my life mostly from the start. Another reason why honesty is very important in my life would be to believe that I'm not going to fail a test or I won't get bullied in the future. But sometimes honesty would fail and some people are going to get angry with me when they actually trusted me. Then they might have learned a lesson to not trust me in their entire life ever again. That would be sad if I said I were honest that this would happen and I was actually positive about it just to make my friend or my family member happy instead of thinking about all the negative things that are going to happen which actually might have a tiny chance to happen or not happen. After a negative relationship about honesty happens with my friend or family member, they would disagree on my honesty and might never trust me again and find someone smarter than me. Later in my life, my friend or family member might apologize to me when they could not trust me in the past. The relationship with my family member or friend might come back together again and they might agree with my honesty once again and we might never get into a fight about honesty and relationships ever again. But what if my friend or family member found more than one person besides me to trust in their honesty. We might have a huge debate going on about that and also get into a fight that would never stop. It would be best to not have a huge argument about honesty and I can meet with the other person face to face and have a conversation with them which is not that harmful and nobody will hurt anyone's feelings or my friend or family member would not allow me to be with them their entire life anymore. That would be better because it would be best to gather as many people as I know because then me and other people who are very good with honesty can help my friends and my family members stop thinking about negative relationships and we can make them think about positive relationships so they won't get stressed out or they won't have any attacks when they think about anything that makes them feel sad or other dangerous thoughts like suicidal thoughts, dying by doing drugs, getting into a car crash etc. Even if someone tells me that they cannot trust me and they disagree with my honesty, I don't have any dangerous thoughts about death. I will fight back for my position in honesty even if many people trusted my honesty and I failed them in my honesty. Still, my honesty is not a failure. I will be honest my entire life and I will never lose my most important personality about me which is honesty. If I think I'm going to fail a test on the first attempt. I'm always honest that I will not fail this test today and I'm going to try so hard on this test that I pass and I will win and be happy with my own honesty that I trust. Sometimes if I forget to study for a test, it's not honesty's fault I failed. It's my fault I did not study for the test because most of the answers I got wrong in the test is because I guessed instead of knowing the correct answer. If I can't trust honesty or if I don't need it now. I'll use my honesty if I really need it help me succeed so I won't be a failure in life. I would want everyone to have honesty as their number one personality because honesty can really help everyone solve many conflicts that are not easy to solve in one attempt and I might need help with it. Most people disagree with being honest at all times and they say it's not their number one personality because people first have to learn the true meaning of honesty and how it can actually help me succeed in your life. Most of the time, people think that very smart people have the best honesty and they might agree with their honesty for some reason. But they're wrong, I can trust everyone's honesty. It's not like people who are not smart don't have the best honesty and people who are smart have the best honesty, they're equal. People who are not that smart can grow in the future and their honesty can lead to many people supporting someone who was not smart in the past and is now smart in the future. Same with smart people, they can either continue to grow or their smartness has a tiny chance of dropping. Then people in the future for some reason would continue to trust smart people even if I know that their smartness and their true honesty has dropped which would mean that they started to lie in the future and in the past they would tell the truth. That would be the reason why smart people in the past might start to lie about most of their things in the future if nobody teaches them to never get into the non honesty mode. The right people that can reteach me about honesty if you lose it would be either your family members or teachers because you don't goof around with my family and my teachers that often, it's mainly with my friends because they can try to get me into a different world to forget about honesty and everyone will wonder what happened with being honest and why can't they trust me anymore. Same with people who grow, my friends and family members will be suprised how I learned to be honest and how most people can trust me now. They would be put in a totally different world and they would be thinking. ""How did they change in the future?"" ""I thought they would still be the same their entire life?"" Finally, once they figured out how I changed in the future. They will probably inform everyone about the person that has changed. That is why honesty is number one for everyone lives and it's best.",2.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
9BEE648877EF,"Students use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes.

The students we should to consider for what they permit us use our cell phone in the class, and they give us the opportunity and don't spend our time and others things and we should focus in our work.

Many student's when the teacher said you gays can use your phone in the class for search information or some work sometimes that we do is play video games, or see Facebook, Instagram or something else and we don't focus in that the teacher said in the classroom, and spend our time and things that affect us.

For example i know a person when i was in my country when we are in the class the teacher said search information in internet that story of this person or when we was in math class, uses our phone for the calculator but there was one girl that she never do that the teacher say and she start to see Facebook and send messages to his friend that are in the same class and that affect the persons who her is message sometimes there is students that they absolutely do that the teacher say or the school and that case, is really good idea use the cell phone cause help us in the class or to have more information about something that we want to know for example in my case i am a person that don't have too much time in this country, and sometimes when i am reading in my English class and find one word or sentence what i dont know what is that means i need search information about that for understand what am doing, is the same in my math class too much times i dont know how traduce symbols and need use my phone for that i think of that way is very good, school permit us use our cell phone too can be the best way for learn more things and makes our work in the way that the students likes also can be more helpful for the student's and also for the teacher's.

I think all depends of the student, use cell phone in class can affect or also can be good idea for learn in the school the school give us the opportunity, that use our phone we should that feel grateful for the opportunity and uses the phone for the work not for other things what can do that our grades come down.                                                                                                                                                                                          ",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
B312F104B015,"I agree that the option the some schools are offering is very beneficial for students, which is the distance learning option. Distance learning is being explained in the prompt it says ""distance learning is an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing"". I think that this option that some schools offer to their students benefits them in many ways. For example the food and transportation are tow big things that some students worry about. This essay will contain the benefits that this option will provide and some of them might apply to you

Some benefits that students will have being in this program are the food and transportation. Let's say that a middle school students always have problems with transportation because their parents work and he have to wait thirty minutes after school everyday, in this case this option that the school offers will be beneficial for him. Another thing is the food. There are some students that do not like food from school some of them bring their own food but some of them opt for not eating anything the whole day. Last year I had a friends that never ate at school because they did not like the food. This option will be beneficial for students like my friends because when you take classes from your own home your are not force to eat something you really do not want.

The benefits that you get does not end there. We all as student had struggle at least once trying to find what cloth to use the next day and if you do not find what you are looking for you might have to go out and wash cloth or use for second time and no body likes that. Well taking this option that the school offers you will not have to worry about that and you can use the same cloth you had when you woke up in the morning. Another thing are the uniforms because not every school let you use the cloth you want. When a school require uniforms you have to use it like or not. By taking the option that the school offers you benefits you in the way because buying a required uniform that you do not want is a waste of money that could have being wasted in cloth that will really going to use. This where tow more benefits that might apply to you.

There still one more benefit and is the liberty to choose whether to do things or not because of the free time you will have by taking this option. Like for example let's say that you are in high school and you like sports but you want to work you will have to choose one of them because school consume a lot of time. In my case I am a senior now and I stopped to play basketball which is my favorite sports to start working because being in school take a lot of time. Taking classes at home take less time than being in school and you could do both things if you want to which are to work, sports or just to do whatever thing you want to do.

Concluding my response regarding to this topic my thoughts are that this option benefits students in many ways.

By taking this option you will not have to worry anymore of transportation, food, or making the things you like the most. Like for example you do not have to decide whether to practice your favorite sport or having a job. As you can see above I talk about some benefits that you should consider by taking this option and that might apply for some students.           ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
52F0677ACD21,"It is possible to change your first impression, because not everything is how you might see at first, lots of things are different then you may think they are, so many people think that lots of things are bad, just because that is what came to their mind when they first saw it.

We should never judge someone or some things on our first impression because we could be wrong, and miss judge things that we think is not right, we even have different first impressions on other people, without even knowing about them, or what kind of person he or she is. You could be wrong on some of the things that you may seee because it maight not be how and what we see,and you could have miss. In 10th grade I miss judged one of my friend because I thought he wasn't the person I wanna talk to. Even tho I had some classes with him I would not talk or be around him, because my impression was that he does not shows respect not only to other students but teachers too , therefor I won't talk to him so he would never know me and won't be mean to me.

However, Later I realize that he was one of my best friend and the nicest person I had ever met, who I can trust and hang out with. Even tho, you may think that you can not change your first impression if you think about it, it might change your first impression.       ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.0
F12C7794CDCB,People should follow their own instincts and ideas. First if people disagree with what people are saying then they can say what their idea is and put it to a vote to see who's ideas better. Second if people idea's are being ignored then the people ignoring are taking away their freedom of speech. third people should have the right to say if their idea is good or not. However people are being ignored and not having a chance to speak and have to listen to someone ideas instead of standing up to people and telling them their ideas to see if people would agree. If authorities won't let people put down their ideas then they are breaking the law of freedom of speech and denying people to speak and say what's on their mind. Finally people should have their voice heard and follow their instinct and ideas instead of being forced to listen to someone elses idea.,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
2CAAF1F40F49,"I would say, i would agree with what albert eistein said. It is good that imagination is more important than knowledge because there are so many ways of using it in real life.

For starters, it can help you achieve something or somewhere in his or hers life. Because, they or you can use your imagination to invent something that can benifit the world or daily sociaty problems. It also might have you even more suited for more major important jobs nowadays. For example, a doctor, a sergin, a engenire, and much more.

In addition, it is also veritile on doing it in many other ways. It can't just specificly just of types of sicence studies. It can also be for political or finnetial studies, it can be about mathimatical studies, or about creative writing and jornalism. Politican wise, it can help you to become a lawyer or a judge. Mathmatic wise can get you still to become a sientist or math professor. And lastly, creative writing will help you as a jornalist, a author, a creative writer, or a activist.

Furthermore, without your imagination, your future no might be as good as you planned. Because with out a good job, you technicaly can afford a good shelter, food, or water. Plus at this rate, you might not accomplish anything with a humble life. So that why you need to work hard with your knowledge and imagination in order to have the life that your planning. Because if you don't do so that you might as well call your future doomed.

And finally to sum it all up, your immagination is a important key in your life that can even benifit your life or someone else life. Will you ever consider using your imagination when it comes to knowledge in your life in the future? We hope so, because there are veritile reasons and ways that your knowlage and imaginations great.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
B469122B9ACB,"Success Consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I think he is said is right you never give up on anything, you are always going to wings and sometimes you are going to fail. Because thats how you are going to wing never giving up. There is a lot of stuffs that I been done on my life, that now i start thinking i never finish what I start. But I dont give up i know I m going to end up doing them soon. for example there is a lot of people that have the motivation, then they start winning and fail ones and they give up. when you love something you gotta chases it because then you are never going have it.

Failure is a really strong word that nobody likes to like that hear some students get upset for failing a test or class they cant be late because they want to win is just like work if you want to start getting paid more you always gotta be on time and all that. so you can become better everyday. Soccer is one example about success soccer you got to learn a lot of new stuffs, Because you have to do a lot of practice. To win you gotta do something,and do it right all time. We all hate failing I hate failing, I always think that is just a waste of time. I fail so many times but i never give up because I know that I gotta finish what I started ow you are going to success

Enthusiasm thats whats the way to success on your dreams if never use that enthusiasm to do something you are going to be good at it you might fail more than ones but still think about what is going to give you. And just think positive that you are gone be sussefull. Lets said that i m trying to go to collage and I stared to work and stared to get a lot of money and all that. then I think about going back to collage and think of all the work that they do and all that im not going to keep going. Because I lost the enthusiasm that i had. Why because I stared to get more stuffs, and I wont feel success

Thats why i agree with what The britishs prime minister Winston Churchill said. That to get where you what you got to fight. And never give up on whats coming next yeah some times you going to fail but get up and keep going so you can be success and become better and always have a good enthusiasm on your life because every body deserves to be success. never lose your your enthusiasm because thats your key to success.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
588B09153941,"No i do not consider that extra two hours a day beacuse it will be a little hard on the students.

10 hours is a lot of hours for a student to be in school and each class would be 2 hours per lucture and that would be stressfull and long. And also there wouln""t be enough time for after school activities if school end at 5p. m and 85% of the students in school join a sport or a band, so if they do practies or the lesson will end late and the students would be tried once they get home and there would be no time for their homework or if you have a test the day after it would be a inconvienes for me to stay up all night to study and get up a couple of hours later and go back to school. And just bcause the businesses extended there work week schdule doesn""t mean student have to beacuse the grown people that have a job its easy for them to work an extra two hours because they dont have all this extra resposiblity a student has.

Plus the people that work get paid by salary or hourly so it really doesn""t matter to them their getting paid regarless if they work 2 hours or 10 hours and students don""t. So i feel like its unfair for ya""ll to add extra school hours to student""s .",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
163A54729CAA,"Other people would say that failure is a way you learn about your mistakes and where you can improve. Being successful isn't necessarily a way of failing so much it's a way to show that your trying and trying while not giving up. I would have to agree on Mister Winston Churchill about ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" In other words, I believe being the person whos mistakes or failures is someone successful because they didn't give up they believed on they're selves and continued to work harder.

First, when you seem to fail everytime but, you just keep believing in yourself that's how you know you want to be successful and when you look back at those days in either high school,work,or even at home. You'll noticed that those days weren't perfect but, it's a way for you to learn about your failures in the end of the day you become someone whose very successful. My parents told me to always believe in myself and to never give up and if you fail over and over then get back up and do better.

Second, it's not just us people who has failures but celebrities also had failures believe it or not. Celebrities went through what we went through. Classmates either said ""your not gonna be famous your just gonna fail."" or "" Your failures won't lead you to be successful you'l only fail again."" They didn't care what they're classmates said they just kept trying and trying until they made it. For an example, Will Smith he kept trying to be successful in the acting world and he once said that if it wasn't for his parents who told him to keep trying he wouldn't be where he is. Jackson Wang, his a Chinese artist who didn't think he'd become successful but now people see him as an inspiring artist who is also in a Korean boy group. So in other words, if you keep failing then keep trying because you'll become someone someday.

In conclusion, Mister Winston Churchill is right about ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". His message about it would bring people to they're feet and not give up. Just keep trying until you made it. Don't every say you can't do it, just keep believing in yourself you can do it.",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
C9B9A8174D46,"Technology has been a really good source of information for the past years people find technology the best way to communicate, relax, plan, search stuff by using the internet. Ordering food online its a normal thing nowadays, people rarely go out to eat because of the food service, this is keeping humanity from doing any physical activity but its way easier to get something done. This can improve human society in many ways by making life more easy, even kids nowadays are using different sources to find something fun to do or watch for example on the platform YouTube kids can find toys reviews or cartoons which its fine but that's also keeping them from playing outside.

There are a lot of problems in society now days one of them is ciber bullying, this can drive to many problems some people take it too seriously and that can start an argument,and some people can feel offended for other people opinions this can cause a big impact in those who are really sensitive in fact there are many cases when this drives them to commit suicide, for unlimited reason people get bullied everyday but its our decisions how you can take the respond. The best way to avoid ciber bullying is by not paying attention to whatever the other person has to say and walk away, focus on yourself and don't look back that's how life works.

In multiple situations kids enjoy watching something online than playing outside, but kids are not the only one who are being affected by this problems adults are also in the similar problem. My family orders food every night without going out of the house, and it's becoming a problem because theres no effort in that. By not doing any physical activity the body starts gaining weight and it can be critical if the person does nothing to stop it, by simply doing more outside activities people can get a better chance to experience more things in life as going to beach, play a sport that you haven't played before or going out shopping that's can be life changing for some people including my community.

Mobile devices are improving in a incredible speed in the past five years, nowadays it's way easier to find a place by using the GPS on a mobile device, this can also allow people from other countries to contact relatives from another country by making a simple phone call or a text. But this can be really expensive for some people a decent plan of data can cost up to fifty dollars per month, that's more money than it should be but somehow people are addicted to this. Phone updates can also help in many ways in your life Apple realized the group FaceTime not too long ago now up to four people can talk at the same time no matter where they live, this can help the plans for your future a bussnies project a wedding or a party this is life changing, this is the future.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
C465964DA6D5,"Do you think that you need to fail over and over to become success. In this essay, I will argue about the important role failure plays in people success. people that become success is because they have failure a lot of time during the process, and they work harder each time to do it better.

When someone success in something, they had failure in something one time in their career. Maybe the fail they took in their career is what make them successful. They knew, if they dont work harder they wouldn't do any better. A failure can teach you lessons to do better that last time. That why a lot of people said that never gave up just for a fail that you can have. Thats what make a person successful.

Failure is something that all of us do. Thats what make us do better in life. If we all ignore are failure, we would keep failing over and over. That why we have become successful in something in are life. For example, when I was 10 years old, i couldn't ride a bike. I away fail trying to ride it, but i never stop trying. I try doing different way to learn. My success of riding a bike was based on failure that teach me different way to learn something and better.

My dad have a company that he have work hard and a lot to archive what he have now. He never loss his enthusiasm to make his company better, years over years. All the knowledge that my dad have now is by the failure. Sometimes he have lost a lot of money, or work for free, because he din't do what the customer said. Some times was because the customer din't like the work.

Now he know that he should do the work as the customer said and do the work better. He have learn that he should do what his job more better and do what the customer said.

Some people said that you don't need a failure to become successful, but they are wrong. Success comes from failure that make you have knowledge. All the failued that you took make you work harder and do way better. In the future, I hope people learn more from their failure to be successful in what they want to archive in their life. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
FF8BCBD76108,"I agree that ""to be yourself in a world that is constanly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"". A lot of people now a days are trying to be somoone else like soccer players,rappers,basketball players, and not to choose they self and that not going to make them reach for they goal.

From my experience in life is that I want to be ronaldo when I was 15,16,year old and that wasn't good because it change my mind set not to be myself and to be someone else. But I learned a lesson is to be my self all the time to know who I'm today and reach for my own goals. People should be proud to be they self because being yourself make you ,stronger,helpful,and smarter. And my advice is to be yorself and learn from your mistakes.

Don't look at famous peopel and try to be them just be yourself and do your on thing to be successful in your life.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
00BCADB373EF,"A positive attitude is the key to success for so many people because when you have a positive mind everything can be possible and you know that you are capable of what you put your mind into. To encourage others to have a more positive way of thinking about their life can bring them success. People should have a positive attitude because it brings new opportunities, a healthier and happy life, and success.

People with good personalities attracts successful people and thats the reason why they get too many opportunities from others. New opportunities are not easy to find and once we get them we need to use them wisely and do something productive with them. Its extraordinary impressive how much benefits a person can have if they put effort with being positive every time they can towards others.

A healthier and happy life comes ahead once you add just positive vibes in your life. This doesn't mean you are not going to have problems in your life but the way you response to it is the main point. People can go through a lot of problems and can still make like nothing happen to them. The negativity that others brings shouldn't affect people even thought they might get hurt; what you should care the most is to be in peace with yourselves.

Success is important for everyone, people should make smart choices and learn from others to become professionals themselves in the future. You need to focus on yourselves first and be smart but at the same time treat others with kindness and respect to gain respect from them either. Sometimes life its going to get hard but it will be worth it hard work always pay off with good results although success doesn't seem easy.

In conclusion people will success if they have a positive attitude towards others because they will get more new opportunities. They will attract more successful people into their lives that will give them support , help and dedicate their time to give advice. The positive people always have a better happy and healthier life because they don't let the negative comments affects them or their progress. To become successful you should be consistent every day and work for what you want. Focus on yourself and realize that the importance of your attitude plays a big roll in your life the more positive you are is going to be the more positive opportunities to your future.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D776E7CA9913,"The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.

The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers.,lol

The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.

The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers. The students enter in high school for graduating, and they expected to indentify a careers of cources in high school and are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think was a good idea to commit to a career at a young age because they have more time to think about our career and learn more for that, and practice of the career, and take the position of a good life with work and pacient on careers.

The reasons why is good for a young age by know more careers and learning for a future, and earn more money and teach others about you learn in this proffesional career, and is most easily to find jobs in internet of in stores. For my example of this I choose a chef's carrer, and I learning more they teach me everyday of how to cooking and other things I do not know that; other example is when i am in high school and my teachers select me and others students for what is my career for my future they show me how to find careers in internet and i choose one of chef and the other is a doctor career i, choose the doctors and they help me more in topic doctors and how to work in this job etc. and i more of medicine and i help people for have more safety. This is my examples of careers.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
558B9106B99B,"In my opinion student have no time to sleep because they want to stay up and study, or do their homework, Also parents start calling school why my child failed in class, Although student should decide, actually school should decide because have time to get work done, falling the class, and sleeping in class.

student should have time to go home and do their work, they should have time to study, Also they should have time to do their homework. If student know that they have homework to do he have to do it on time.

However they start failing the classes, they start failing by not turning their work on time, if they do turn in their work on time their grades will drop. They should start paying attention and turn in their work on time. some student also sleep in class, Being to tired may be the case, if student stay up late and doing their work they can't get up on time for school they will get sleep in class and they can't do their work on time.

Because of not having time to work, failing, and sleeping in class, school should decide. Student don't have enough time to study. Student grades start going down and then they will fail the class, school should decide what student should do to pass the class doing their work on time, and not sleeping on class. If school want to their student have good grade in class, no sleeping in class and passing the class. school have to make a new law for student, the law is no phone in class and no talking in class, because phone is the only thing that student can't study If they make this law then every student will get a good grade and they will pass their class. Sleeping on time is parents responsibility, not school Parent have to tell their child to do their homework on time sleep on time and get up from sleep on time, then student can be success and student will have good grades in classes.

Most of student that sleeping in class is student that they are working after school, and they are working until

10 or 11 in a night, and they can't get up early in the morning so they sleep are sleeping in class, they are not paying attention to their study, and their grades will drop, then they will fail the class.  ",2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
EF7E0CBD62D2,"I am agree whit this statement about the importance of attitude. because If you have good attitude, you can thinking carefully about the life we commit error every time. But we can learn the a adult he can give me a good advice.

If you have good family your attitude can be patient with the other people i know some time we keep bad moment but you can step out with your friends and forget everything, and you can reflect very wall your parents can be teach, good thinks and they can give you a advice for your, life some people dont like give you advice because they said we dont matter the life. some people said the adolescent not matter how they said but we are conscious the outcome.

My opinion is important to do good think in your life. Because the people remember like a good person they dont said something bad of you is important to have good attitude because is mirror how you are,in the school you need to have a good attitude because you dont want problem with the other people.

I remember some day my grandparent told me dont get problem because is bad attitude what you show to the other people you will prepare for the future when you are adult you know how to do with your boys you have good experience to show they and they can believe you.

I believe we know how to solving a problem because you need to thinking carefully and you get the answer for your problems.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
8A0A3FE01FE7,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Many believe sitting in a classroom is better for students education, but others believe it more reliable for online or video conferencing. Distance learning won't give you the same benefit as sitting in a classroom. Its more reliable to sit in classroom because if not you could fail, system can shut down, and you'll be getting more physical help in a classroom.

Many like distance learning because it's more flexible, but because it's really flexible a lot of people have a higher chance at failing then passing. Imagine, a lot of people don't like waking up at six in the morning to get ready for school, so what would you expect from a student who stays home. He/she could wake up late and still miss there class which means they're missing the material and education they need. Others irresponsible students will forget about the class and they won't care on doing the work. They will have the mindset of ""it's online, i can finish it later"". Many student fail to do there work because of laziness and for being irresponsible. Especially, if the weather is nice outside many students tend to make plans and won't have the same attention towards school like before. In the other hand, if the weather nice outside and students go to school , sit in a classroom, in the afternoon they wll be able to enjoy the weather and get there work done..

Numerous of computer's systems shut down because of many different reason. If this were to happen to a distance learning student, they wouldnt be able to log in. Some systems take hours, day, and maybe even weeks to get fixed. Other computers have trouble accessing internet. Without any internet, no student will be able to do any online class or video conferencing. Another problem with computers are, that the power goes out. If you computer or any cellular device is not charged where would you be able to plug it in? How would you get your classes done? How would you turn the things you need in on time? These are a few question people dont stop and think about. Therefore, because of these troubleshooting problems it best to go in to a classroom.

All students have many different learning skills. Some prefer physical help instead of visual learning. Learning the material physically is way more reliable to learn easier and faster. Physical learning can help people get there work done faster, easier, and not get distracted by other things around them. Students can be more focused on their work and get it done on time. Others say the environment in which there in doesn't matter as long as there focued , but to other people it does matter. While students are at home they can easily get distracted and forget they have work that needs to be done. this will cuase many students to fail and would have to retake the course.

.",3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
D0C50EB5CB1F,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow,"" I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, because he says that if you don't do something you will stay in the same place and never grow up if life, you will not advance, and you conformed with what you have. I believe that peoples always try to overcome in life, that's why you always have to try progress in life and grow up and not be an conformist. because you always can be better in life. We have the ability and the opportunity in our hand.

First , never stay where you are, always try to do something else and try to get more experience, always try to overcome in life,because you can always try to be bigger, and bigger,and try to dominate other things because you have the ability and the opportunity do grow up and never give up easily and if you have the opportunity to grow you will do it because never let opportunity get away from you chase the opportunity to be better and to master other things.

I believe that you always have the ability to chase your dream and if it is not enough you can find more and you can get to your where your limit is. I think that all people have the potential to follow and surpass them abilities and if you already dominated your, you can find and try another one don't stay with the same one because there are always there's a lot of things inside of us that we don't want to take it out of them but if a person take it out he can do things that non one can believed, because it still inside of them you know that you have capacity for that but you don't want to do it.

all people make them own decision but some of them don't know what's them capacity is. Sometimes they don't take the opportunity they just throw it on the trash.

Like the feeling of a person they don't fight fort that they can be a big house a lot of money but they can't feel the love that someone has for them that's the one that a person has to recognize they stay in the same place without doing anything they know that they can change that make that happen. But they can change in like and they can grow up.

As a person we have to respect each other, make decision on life to grow as a person be a good person in the association take care of my and my family respect my family, be respectful with everyone. Be clean be a good person help someone make a man as a person having good attitude be as good person with my mom. If we make be thinking in this life we ave not gonna grow as a person if we are doing something that we are not suppose to. I think

I think that respect is one of the most important part in the world.

conclusion

In conclusion I think that all people can always finds more opportunity and they can get more experience by doings new things and overcome a new person in life, and chase dream because if they chase that dream they can make it happen for real. I think that all people in this world has the capacity to do things in life but some of them don't want to do it because they just can't, and they stay there without doing nothing, they should chase that dream and never let it go.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
E7A9FD471BE3,"Graduating earlly should be a good idea because students are abkt to accomplish it early, students may have goals in life they want to achive and they might have other responsibilities to take care off. Some poeple said that graduating early is a good idea becasue students can relive some stress but some student say that is not a good idea because students may miss the best year of thier life. So thinking about it, should you graduate early or not.

First of graduating early is a goog idea because of the responsiblity a student have outside of school. Students may have work or some issue that are not school base things. For example my friend had a kid. She graduated early last year, now shes able to go to college or go to work force while taking care of her kid. Some student may have sport team outside the school that may help them to be professional player. For example soccer players can go professional without going to college. Beach Fc or anyone soccer club out there may help those players become a pro.

Seconly. Students may want to acoomplush it early as possible. Students may want to graduate early becasue thet want a time off school before going to college. Students may be sick of going to school because of how many lesure are there everyday. For example my friend graduate early last year because he wanted to get it done early. He wanted to step back for a bit before going to college. Going to school is stressfull enough for students, Exams, Sol, Text, ect. Students use this meated to have a years off school before going to college or going stright to work force,

Thirdly. Students may have goals in their life that they wanted to accomplish early after school. Students may have a sport team that are able to help they turn into a pro. or a gaming team to turn them a pro. students have a lot of goals in there life also. Graduating early may help them to get a head start so they wont be falling behind with people. I read a story once that a guy that graduted early. He became a proffetional soccer player on are 17 or 18. He is a incredible player, One of the best in the world.

If a student could graduate early; the students can accomplish things that they couldn't after highschool. if a student can graduate, they can focus on other responsinilities outside of school. If I can graduate early, I can accomplish my goals early than others. Graduating early can be a good idea. for example student may graduate early becuase of they're responsibilities outside of school, students may have goals in life that they want to accomplish first or a student just wanted a time off school. You have a chose. take it or leave it.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
4D35A86F4929,"I agree with Thomas Jefferson that we can accomplish many things together. In many cases people are in active and they lose a lot opportunities. It is better to be society, fight for the benefits and to be .an active person. This can change many things in people's lives.

We have to be society to not procrastinate about daily tasks. If we are always participating and if we are always involving ourselves in an event or task that is beneficial to oneself or other. It helps build a sense of standards for society and also builds up a persons attitude

Accomplishing something does not always mean achieving a goal, it could also be perform regular tasks with the best benefits.

They have to fight for benefits what they want and no waist any opportunity. In my case i am always an inactive person and lose a lot of opportunity along the way. The opportunities I had and i lost because i am an inactive person and that's bad.

It is better to fight every day to achieve the things we want in life. With the thing that i had to past is better to fight and strive to be successful.

Active person can help people reach their goals, It feel good help people and use time wisely. In this world people have big goals in order to reach these goals people need to work for them. Small action like help or participating in community people take that like a big change in society. Time is limited in a day people use this time to accomplishing they goals. Being in active person can change the world and make a difference.

In conclusion it does not matter who you are but we have to be sociable. to meet the goals and have benefit with the things we want and fight for the things we want to achieve in life. And do not waste any opportunity and also help those who need it to be a better person.      ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
62E5030D1A59,"Imagine getting a job that you're most interested and enjoys the most that later on life, you became super rich or making decent money but doesn't mind as long as you enjoy it and still continuing on. Life can be hard if people don't enjoys their jobs, causing them to have depression. That is why, students should select to visit and learn about the work that interests them because, it gives them more time to think, making plans for their future, and to gain experience through out the school years.

Students should be planning for their future and to decide which class to take in order for them to learn about the work that interests them. Many students have successfully acquired the jobs they intended to work because of how much work they put into to plan and learning the stuff they need to know on how to run the job. Planning is really important for all of our lives. For example, the military uses a plan and tactics in order for them to calculate and for the plan to be successful. Because of that, planning has a big impact in our lives and helps us to decide on what jobs to do and to give us the time to think. This way we can understand the situation and whether or not if the people and their families to decide if it's a good idea.

Students can gain little experience by taking the class every each year, this way students can learn more about the Jobs they want to be in. For example, JROTC are similar to military but trained to be a marching men and to juggle with rifle (from what I know of). They exist because, it helps students to understand what its like for them to experience JROTC. I also think this is very important. It's like, warming up for a swimming contest but, how can you win if you don't know how to swim? Swimming class exist to help people to not drown. If you take swimming class every year, and gain a little bit of experience, you will be able to win the swimming contest. All this reason is to proof of why gaining experience is a good thing and help you understand the job you wanted to applied for.

Giving students the time to think on what jobs their most interested on is also very important for this prompt. For example, students need time to think whether or not if it's the right class for them. Every year in high school students are required to pick three choice to pick their class. It is called the Course Election, where students gets to pick three class that are interesting for them or forced to pick because it is a requirement. I really like this idea, it helps us understand what we're interested on and what to learn. I think three years is enough for students to plan and to have a little experience for their future.

In conclusion, student are more successful if they are to be picked for themselves instead of the school choosing for them, because the more they like the class and the job they are going for, the harder they will try to succeed.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
B8F0ECC9DC86,"Dear : Principal

I think that would be a great idea if the you let the student to do community service , because if they do that the street were clean, they go to put more attention helping others person . i mean i know other person doesn't like to clean but i know that we cant make the other people to change ,ho know if they start helping us to like not throwing the trash on the streets. it's not necessary clean the hold day but like 3h that would be great. i know we cant do that i only need to know if you agree or disagree with me. EX: painting the sidewalk cleaning the beaches cleaning the street school helping people that really need are help like paralytic, oldest, veterans persons.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
D0D7C3A056CE,"Should people make their own decision ? or should people seek for guidance ? I think you should live your life the way you want to live it with the guidance of your parents because they already lived theirs. Our parents have experienced life and it's challenges and which they would want the best for us and nothing else. For example you are looking to purchase a car, you would ask your parents for their thoughts and guidance because they have already been there done that. Deciding what you would want to be in life, Now thats a choice you choose on your own, you choose if you want to be successful in life, you choose if you wanna have a big house, a nice car, a good job thats all you from what i've learn in life is that nothing is gonna be done by it's self. You are not gonna get what you want if you dont get up and handle it yourself.

I look up to my older brother because he moved out with a goal and that goal was to own his own car, his own apartment by the age of twenty one and still going to school part time. I aspire to be like him so hard working and with a goal to do it all by himself with the guidance of my parents of course. But thats not the point, the point is that he left my parents house with a goal, determination, and self trust he always told me that its all about taking risky decisions in life.

Nobody cant make you do anything but yourself the only person that can harm you is yourself the decisions you make in life will impact yourself. You decide what is right or wrong in the real world because outside of high school its a whole different ball game you are gonna make bad decisions and good decisions but its okay mistakes will happen and mistakes are good because you will be able to learn from them and grow as a whole. i think mistakes are a blessing because i know that my parents both made mistakes and some a regretful and some are a blessing that you will learn and live to tell on.

I think it's important to have something or someone to inspire you to motivate you have to trust your own gut because you can always look up to them. Or be someone a person can look up too, be motivation for someone else be someone you want to be in life. But its not just gonna be handed to you you have to work for it there are always gonna be obsticals in the way or challenges in the way but you have to tell your self to just keep swimming. SO YES i think people should make their own decisions in life because its your life do what ever your heart desires!                      ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
2C7A6E04F7D0,"Accomplish more or Inactivity

Do you think that we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or dose inactivity also sever a purpose. I feel like that we do a lot if we are always doing something and not inactivity. while some may argue if inactivity have a purpose in this I think not, I believe that we can do a lot and accomplish more if we are always doing something because you might want different options from different people, two or more people work better then just one, and you don't have to worry about doing all the work on your self and be worrying about finishing it on time.

Firstly, do you think having different options or opinion would help you accomplish more things? In my own opinion I think having a different opinion and opinion is better why, because someone else way might be better or faster to finish on whatever you are working on secondly, always having a second person while wanting to accomplishing something is better. why because one person might think differently then the other. Like if you worked with someone that was form a different country or state and they did the opposite of what you where doing but it was much faster you would like to learn how they do on whatever they did to finish faster. work could be faster and earlier accomplished by doing it and working it out.

Lastly, accomplishing on whatever you may be working on may help you and the person that you will be working with. I think with accomplishing work you could discover something new or something you didn't know about, and might be good that you would like to share it with you priers and other important people around your area.

In contrast, some people believe that that not being inactivity would help you better you self and accomplish more but I think not. Why because, I believe we accomplish more if we are doing something and working on it because it might get you somewhere in life or better you future and help you in the long run. By sitting down and doing some of the work might not get you as far as the person that accomplish it and will be so much better then the person the accomplished some of the work. This is why I believe doing something and learn more will you more and accomplish more in the long run.       ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
7C08DA95AE9A,"One way to improve student achievement is to start a after school homework club.

Teachers and students should start meeting after school this idea would benefit students by getting extra support, turning assignments on time get a better understanding of the things that the teacher teach on class, establishing the club would help those students who don't turn in assignments on time or those who like to do things early.

In order to students to be successful they need extra support a better explanation of the things they learn, many students struggle with the assignments and most of them don't ask for support through the school year I have seen many students raping the assignments because they don't understand them, but if the school make the the idea of starting a club there would be no excuse for students to not be successful in their homework, tests, and class assignments.

Students should start turning assignments on time specially those who don't turn in on time, the club would help many students like instead of going home and forgot that they have assignments to do they could come and join the after school homework club. I have friends who like to do homework and be successful, but the problem is that they don't understand the assignments and if someone don't understand something why should they do it because either way they going to get the assignment wrong the school must provide more support for students.

In addition the club could not be just of getting help or finish assignments early, the club could be a place were students can find support and motivation in order to be a better person on life many students don't care about school because they don't find the good thing about it maybe because they need a motivation to be at school the after school club could be a place where people can meet and share ideas or meet each other and make a friendship helping each other to understand better the thing that they don't understand.

In conclusion the school must make the after school club in order to get more successful students and to also help and motivate students to do their assignments and turning them on time. extra support is a better way to understand the things you don't understand, turning assignments make a student seem responsible and also get a good admiration of others making friends and share, discuss thing together is a better way to solve a problem that they had.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
A0A2D6856B0E,"(1)A talent I have is pranking people. Something that inspired me to do pranks on people was a

YouTube creator. He went out in public and did these prank that inspired me to try them. My first prank I did was on my family by putting a woppie cushion on they seat it was fun and it made me laugh. I started to do more pranks on them but the pranks started to get boring they were no more good ideas.

My new ideas were using the pranks in new ways. Not what they were designed to do in new creative ways like putting a cockroach under a cookie that idea went really well it scared a lot of people that was one of my creative pranks.

my second one was. It was called Valentines through the hand box. This one took a little bit more effort then the rest of them because you had to cut a big hole through the box that was the size of your hand. How this work was on Valentines I would of gave someone a big box that is the shape of a heart and cover the bottom of the box were the hand would go in and they would open it and a hand would pop out at them. this is how I started to develop to use pranks to make people laugh. I still use these pranks I buy them off

Amazon and at 5 Below. Now I .use the prank more on teachers for the most part and how I use it is is in public I place a fake poop on the ground and people got disgusted and I once had a robot cockroach made people freak out. Well I think it is important to have some pranks in our life it make us feel joy and happy afterword because how the world is now a days, they is not that much joy in life more people then ever are sad so we all need sometimes a laugh in our lives no better way to do it by a harmless prank. pranking people is my talent those are some reason why I am good at pranking people and that how I use pranking in my life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
D1A0AFC80A9A,"Ever since, we were kids we started choosing our own character traits. it can be good or bad based of the environment we live in, how we were raised, and personal experiences. But we can always change our character traits, it's similar to an opinion on something or someone. We choose who influence us. we decide if we want to be happy or sad,making good and bad decisions all those are character traits that we choose with our minds.

Lets say you are inspired by Kobe Bryant. You look up to him as an idol because, of what he accomplished in his lifetime. You either wanna be like Kobe or be better than him. That right there is a character trait, the ability to choose who influences us by what they have accomplished. Some people believe we can't choose our character traits because we did not decide nor choose the way we wanted to be born, we did not choose if we wanted to be tall, short, black, white etc.. But, they miss the fact that character trait is not about the things we can't change, its about the things we can change and decide for ourselves to become a better person or be like someone who influenced us.

Choosing character traits is not an easy task for everyone. In fact, adults have a hard time choosing character traits. Unlike,most kids that dont care about the consequences nor judgments, kids usually choose careless traits but as they get older and become adults, they realized their mistakes and they choose traits with precautions. Mainly because adults have a lot of things to worry and take care of, their character traits can cost them to miss out on big opportunities like a job or a promotion. Something we all have in common is character traits, without it our lives would be meaningless we would not achieve nothing big or anything to be proud of. Our lives are based off the character traits that we choose.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
2B62F285FD21,"Its a good idea to have year-round school because you will not be out of school long that will make you forget what was just learned and will always have help from teachers all the time.

Being out of school for a long time can make students forget what was just learned and it's true because many kids have reported that they forgot what they have learned in that year of school. Shorter breaks is the way to go because you will be able to retain the information that the teacher taught last week. This is another advantage that you will have because students will be fresh and will have more time to learn and study for upcoming test and would probably even make them a better student.

Having a long break is desireable by all of the students but it can also be a negative thing, Thats why having year-round school can improve many things for an example it can improve your grades, better focus and understanding, and better opportunities in life. It will even make the school at one of the best schools to go because the percentage of passing scores, quality of learning, and the best teachers.

This will not just improve and make students better at school but can also give them opportunities and chances in life. Education is the most valuable thing in the world without it this world would of not had influential leaders and inventors. This can open new doors in life and it can make anyones dream career come true not mattering their race or class. Having year- round school is the answers to many solutions.

In my opinion we should make a difference and have year-round schools. We have to make our youth in America into one of the most successful and brightest because they are the future of this nation.                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
DA00F2B25B8C,"According to the author

''To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you someone else is a greatest accomplishment '', is hard because we are in one world that the most important thing is the appearances more than what you are, most of the people prefer be and appears something that they can not be, for example most of the people when someone comment about how they look or how they are, some of them get frustrated, is a biggest accomplishment because they critic your form of walk, how you use your clothes and how you do the things.

We lives in one world that the opinions are more important or what others thinks about you, are more important because the constantly opinions from people that the only things they care about is their appearances, one of the first reason why is a biggest accomplishment try to be yourself and be individuality is that you need to appear how you are, do your own stuff, no matter what the opinions are.

I am agree with the author of this prompt because is true that is a biggest accomplishment that everyday we have to tried to completed and do not do what others want you to do to make them feel better, or just do it for appear something that you are not, is good to be individuality and do your things by yourself and do not get influence with bad comments or opinions from others that are not satisficate with their personalities but is not easier to be strong in the world where the appearances has a big influences in the community.

In Conclusion, not everything is easy, when people do not try to let the stereotypes when is talking about how to be yourself, and leave others decided for you or left them influences you with negative thoughts, those people are not better enough to stay in your life, is a greatest accomplishment to dissolve but nothing is impossible and believe in yourself individuality and do the rights things can help you to finish the thoughts about others people with try to change everything.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
BC4A0CFD6CAF,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Today, people prefers to interact with technology than people. They can check out books, shops, and play games without speaking to another person. Some people thinks the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have positive effects on people's lives because technology makes more easy their lives, for example they not need to leave their houses for buy or to joint with another person to play games. However, I think the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have negative effects because people prefers to shop on online than stores, people use more technology to talk, and also children plays with technology than with another person or toys.

Today, people prefers to shop by online than stores. I saw and lived this experience many times about buy by online but I not feel comfortable as a store. Online shops makes feel lazy, alone, and when you have questions obout the product nobody can answer you. I bought by online many times but one day I understand that online shop is not healthy for me because when I go to stores I'm practicing my English vocabulary, I walk alot that means that I doing a little exercise, and meet new places and people. Shop by online avoid the human contact and gives negative effects on people's lives.

People use more technology to talk, as facetime, facebook, whatssap or others applicationes. I agree to talk with this aplications with people who lives far away but I prefer to join with my friends or family to talk who lives close. Sometimes, I came out with my sister and their friends who always are in their phones texting or taking pictures. In my personality, use the phone when you are sharing with another person is not respect and you are not enjoying the moment. The use of phones during a meeting avoid the interaction with other human, and gives negative effects on the people's live.

Finally, children more plays with technology than with another child or toys. In the past, children plays with toys or they made their own toys. This helped to children to developed their imagination or decover their skills. Also, children invented plays involving run, saltar or make force; this plays helped to children to enjoy healthy and socialiting with other child. But today, children prefers to play with technology avoing come out and carring to be lazy, obesity, and addicting to the technology. Children's break times likes to use their phones than talk with their friends or family. They think that interacting with family or friends are old things and that is most enjoy use the phone in their break times. The use of technology for children is a negative affect because they not play or relationing with another people.

Today, people use more technology than interact with another person, carring people to complete taks wotout having contact with others. These limitation of human contact due to the use of technology have negative effects on people's lives.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
53607F113053,"Although they say it is better to not try to redo things you already mastered then you will never grow,Actually it is better to retry something you already mastered,one example is you will have more experienced on the task your suppose to accomplish with. Another example is they would take you in as a responsible person.

One of the following examples I mentioned was how you will have more experienced on the task your suppose to accomplish because having that experience their is so many things that can get done. With the experience you can multitask. In today's society people around the world have their own jobs and work and from now then have experienced the job. For me when I got my first job I didn't have no experience I did not know what I was doing so they trained me from then I started getting the hang of it I knew from then what my job was to do. I've been working at Party City for a year already and I already have experienced even have the chance to become a manager from the store. All I know is that with experience things can get accomplished and turn out fine to the best things that get done.

Another example that i mentioned was they can see you as a responsible person and they know what rights and wrongs you can show them. A responsible person can show so many ideas or reasons for someone to be that good person they expect themselves to be. In today's society that we live in their is so many people all around the world who are responsible for their actions they know what is best. For example when it comes to babysitting one of my siblings its a huge responsibility to take care just like how my parents left them for me thats how they want to come and find them. It's my job for them to make sure they don't get hurt and for me to have the time to feed them and to please them from the things they want. My mother calls me responsible since I know that I love kids and its my job to keep them safe. Responsibility matters in society good things can come your way if you honestly see yourself doing big things that are right in life.

However the opposite of trying something you already mastered is ""If you don't retry something you mastered then you will never grow"" meaning won't get to accomplish what you could have accomplished more and wont experience new choices or things. The things that people in society do which in life it can come to a time that you have to redo something it is best to retry and if you don't it then you wont accomplish things meaning it wont take you nowhere cause you would forget other then that you wont get to experienced anything new that you couldn't accomplish.

Through out society we know that it's best to retry things and to keep completing the accomplishments that wanted to get done either it's best to keep building up more experiences and to be come responsible person or to not even retry to do the things you were doing before which they would not get you nowhere. Through out life it's a big chance which you can see yourself happy and from then having a smile on your face. People even complementing you about how well done things you accomplished. What I believe in is to never give up to retry things that were done before and that it can still be redone no matter what day it is in life, it's always better to accomplish then to not even try.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
78E8970D0C13,"I argree with haveing a afterschool homework club, because It well help out alot of students improve in school, and do better overall.

also don't you want extral help when you need it? students are the same they want help on schoolwork and homework cause it could be difficult.

students don't really like difficult homework, so they give up and do something else, but with a homework club they can go afterschool and do the work there teachers can help students out.

for example I sometimes need help, so I have a teacher that helps me at home with my work and my parntents has to pay that teacher. and some parntants don't have the money to pay for a teacher, so if we can work togather to make a club that helps out students that would be great for the students, and the parntents would not have to pay alot of money to make they child good at school.

a other example would be that students can stay afterschool with there teachers, but for a little bit of time, so if were going to have a homework club lets make it more than 47 minumies. More time equlas a lot of work getting compled.

in conclusion we need a homework club it can help out a lot of students and save a lot of pernts money, and also make stundents pass more tests and help tham on schoolwork, and make students feel like difficult work is easy since they got all the help they need from the afterschool club, also if some teachers don't feel like staying for another they could just let the students help each other and let the teacher rest.

overall I think this idea is very good, and well help out a lot of students with there work.            ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
E9CE2D1B2D50,"DEAR PINCIPAL:

I believe that the first policy is better because phones are good but no when are use in class.

Just imagine that something is bad how are they going to talk with their parents if they don't have phones. What would happen if something bad would happen after school how are they going to call their parents and if you don't let them bring the phones at all their parents would probably get mad. Then the parents can go and have a protest that wouldn't be good.

That's why the first policy is better.

Sincerely,

Your student

STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
B379CB700CCD,"Technology is making people's lives easier, because with technology people can find jobs, play video games, read books, and talk to other people, and buy buy products online thats why technology is a good effect, because is helping a lot of people, because without technology it would it be hard to find a job , you would have to travel a lot to find a job, to comminicate with someone that is from anoher state you would have to travel just to tlak with your friend , and it would be hard to buy stuffs because you would have to look for the thing that you want to buy and travel to other state and pick it up.

With technology buying stuffs online is easy you can pay for the things that you're buying and they wil deliviered it to your house.

Technology is around the world wherever you go you will see technology.

Military uses technology to train their soldiers.

Technology is neccesary for everyone its helping a lot of persons to make their lifes an easy way.

Technology is helping scientifics to discover bacterias or make new medicine for cancer or other problem.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
DB80C6963DB7,"With great imagination comes with great knowledge, with both, you'll be able to conduct something amazing! You can have great knowledge and little imagination, but you can have imagination without knowledge.

I personally disagree on Albert Einstein stated, yes imagination is very important and useful, but it's not more important than knowledge. I say that because, people everyday, all the time, imagine great things all the time but without any knowladge, how will they make that thought turn into reality without having any knowledge what so ever??

Knowledge is way more important that imagination because many inventors, scientist, constrution workers, normal people, use it in thier every-day lives! Imagination us just one step with in into reaching to a goal or something, if you have plenty of knowledge of your dream, you'll be able to grab that goal!

But knowledge isn't just about reaching a goal or building something, it's about having idea or knowing what your doing and what's going around you.

In conclution, knowledge is way more usefull than a thought bouncing in your head, Knowledge is way more better because it helps us build many great things like, electronics, machines, stores, ect. Sorry Einstein, I just don't agree with you.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
DF149975C610,"I agree with emerson's statement. I will grow every day, I do best in life. When I wake up most days, I think on my goals. I will reach my dream in my school to grow better in Algebra. I will grow in my school , to improve my english. to set up my plan to become a doctor. I study hard every day. I can do this finish my goals. I work hard. I feel tired most all the time , but that is not my stop sing to leave my school. I will finish finish as soon is possible I will be satisfied getting my goals done.

I disagree we don't have to challenge other person's to do better. Some people they are satisfied what they have,for example job,school, and other activities. may be they still in high school and they are no ready to go to the next level to go the college.

In my case, I want more challenge on me to have a better job, better opportunities, to support my family. Majority of people think, I can't complete my studies or finish my school. I believe on me, I will grow up to see my self in a good job, I will grow in Math, english and History. I believe also some people, are happy what they have in life. Further they will discover new ideas, to put in order to bring on their future plans to move on to the next activity or achivement.

People grow evendough, when they have done journey in life to achieve their goals. I saw some students today. They were my classmate in the same school where I done too, now present day some of them are lawyers, profesors, and doctors. Solutions I agree we should learn new things in life, is important to have wisdom to share. I agree I can get my High School Diploma.

I will motivated people to back school to done education. To do progress in life, we do have to find the excited things what should like to do. If we are good in soccer, let's go play soccer. if we like music, we should find the ways how to learn to sing. I agree I'm the solution to get things done one of them my education. I disagree I am no the problem to stop my goals.

Finally with effort one day, I can be a doctor. I know is no goig to be easy. I love dificult things on me to get my dream to become thrue.

satisfied is a word I will declined, I will see my self with my family, friends, and teachers given me my diploma. I respect people, is satisfied with their goals.

In my opinion, if we have the opportunity to have a better future. We do have to challenge our soul. To become a such a profesional to help our world. We should live in peace, a share the wisdom, and love around the world with people. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
0F32DDCBECB6,"It is important try to do your best for conserve energy and resources. But, I am disagree that my school follow this model and change to a four day school week and extend the school day two hours. Even if maybe it can have some benefits but as student i think it can have many disadvantages for us. And if we want to conserve energy and resources we can do it follow others methods.

I am not in favor of that my school follow this model for some reasons. First, thIs proposal could affect most to the students in many ways for example if they extend the school day two hours I think it is to much time at school it will be so stressful for the students and teachers as well. Another reason is because many students have to work a part time after school. So, if they extend the school day two hours is possible that the students who have to work after school will can work only few hours and some of them really need to work after school becase maybe they live by themself and they have to pay rent and anothers bills it means they need the money. Then, this students who have to support by themself maybe they will can not go to school any more if the school accept this new proposal because they have to work .

Another disadvantage is that it will be stessfull if we have to do our homework after have been almost whole day at school. Next, some students have to help their parents after school for example they have go to pick up their little brothers from school and take care of them or they have to cook, clean up the house, wash diches, do the loundry and other stuff. So, if the students have to do this things they will don't have time to do their homework. Then, those students who have to work or help their parents after school will be so affect if the school follow this model maybe their grades will decrease because they don't do their homework or they don't sleep well if they don't sleep well they will be distract and not paying attention in classes.

Another reason why i am not in favor is because sometimes maybe we want to hang out with friends, go visit your family and spend time with them but if we leave late school maybe we will be tired or have things at home to do. So, we will not have a time for that and sometime we need time for ourself, time to rest but if we have work, do homework, school we can not it is so stressfull. Then, the students will not concentrate at school nor work.

There are some benefits too for example for some students who don't have to work or help their parents after school so they can rest when they get back from school and they will have time to do their homework. Also they can hang out with his friends or go visit his families on weekends.

Another benefit is that if we have only four day school the students will have one day left that can use to work all day or do other things like homeworks, go play soccer or other things for fun. So, with this model we can have 3 days without school and work those days and study thet other four days if we live with our parents or someone who support us then if the schooIl follow this model wll not affect us and it is a great option.

In conclusion i am disagree to my school follow this model because i think it will afect the student and as student i want to be successful and reponsible with my homeworks. Also, for those students who have to work they have to be competent in their jobs to not get fire because they need the money.              ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
F0BB52DD1DB6,"I strongly agree with this statement that author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because i can relate to it based on my passed experiences as a little kid not wanting to try new things in life like other food and activities. I did not like to try new things as a kid because when i would fail at them i would get mad or upset. But i ended up trying new things in life anyways and it helped change my mindset from not pushing myself to believing in myself that i could accomplish things and also help me grow as a person.

For example when i was l lot younger then i am today like a lot of kids i did not like to try new food. I was that type of kid that just did not like to try new thing at all. Say if i did not know what it was or had not try in before in the past i did not want it at all. Some times my mom would tell me to eat my food or she would not let me go outside or take me to the park to play. so i would eat it but not because i wanted to it was because i wanted to go play outside or go to the park because i was just full of energy all the time and always liked to be outside.

Thinking back to those memories at least the ones that i can remember i always seem to get easily upset. When i did not know how to do something that other kids or people knew and could do. I would throw a fit you could say sometimes and not want to be a part of the activity at all and just straight up get mad over simplest things that just needed some time put towards them. So i could learn them or master them or someone that could have taught them to me. I think if i wouldnt have gave up on some things when i was younger i would have know how to do a lot more then i can today. Instead of just watching the other people do this type of activities and enjoy themselves. I always wanted to know how to play these sports as a kid. Like know how to play soccer,football,and play basketball. Instead i would give up on myself on the first time i failed at it.

But as time went by and the older i got little by little i started to try new things in life besides just other foods. I think the reason for this was that my mindset was changing and i did not give up on myself anymore i started to push myself to achieve my goals. I learn that anger would help me too like this one time in middle school i was in my math class my teacher said that i could not solve the problem that he had put on the board because i did not pay attention in class. So i got mad and did my best to solve him and show him that i could solve that problem and i did after class he came up to me and told me that he was proud and that he knew i could do it cause when someone tells me i can not i get mad and work hard to prove them wrong. He also told me to never let what other people say stop me from achieving my goals in life and to also try to control my anger. I understand that know because i know there people who look out for you and help you. But also there are lots of people that do not want to see you make it in life and do better then them.

This is why i strongly agree with this author by the name Ralph Waldo Emerson and his statement. That go by the lines of unless you try to do something that you have never done before you will never grow. Its just how some people play it safe in life and do not attempt to do or try scary things in there life like rock climbing,sky diving swimming with sharks sneaking into abandon house cause its haunted by a ghost or something not like other people who live their lives with no fear. You can be scared i life but do not let them fears keep you from having fun and enjoying life.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
0ABD502C5BF9,"have you ever needed examples to learn something or you learn better with different ways instead of receiving examples? Well, was as Albert Schweitzer said "" Example is not the main thing to influence others"". this means that there are other ways to influence other without using or giving examples.

One way that people may get influenced is if they receive help from others, not receiving examples; This can be better than give examples to illustrate this, in the class of ceramic the teacher mostly give us examples of how to make clay stuff, she almost never help me and this results difficult for me and for others how to make things because she only explain one time how to do it and some of the students forget about it. when she help someone their project result always to be the best of the class because of her help on the student.

Other people say that when they receive examples sometimes they get confused, this happens when the examples they get make them change their perspective over what they are doing, for example: doing a drawing, sometime the teacher tells to make a drawing of your imagination,this means of your thinking and whatever is on your brain. What could happen when the teacher tell you what to draw after she said that the drawing is about your imagination and she give examples on what to draw this make you think that she wants you to draw others things that are not on your thinking, this shows that sometimes the examples does not work on specific subjects because those get to confuse you.

Although others may say that when they use examples they are more able to influence other because they show the experience that they have on it and also teach how to do something also there are many people that learn better get more influenced when they use examples. I think that there are a few ways that are stronger that make the examples less useful or powerless to influence others. For these reasons I think that there are better ways to influence other without using examples.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
DC7F27315FCF,"I agree that we should have positive attitude in life to be success in life. Showing positive attitude to human beings and animals by not harming others and the nature. Staying and spending time with positive attitude people is also a key to a successful life. It`s also important to show positive attitude it will help us to become better and successful in life. Show positive attitude you will get the same positive attitude back.

If we show positive attitude to human beings and animals, by treating people with good maners and helping them out with any kind of work in life that is for a good cause we will get the same positive attitude back from that human who we were helping out. Same goes for the animals treat them well they will be safe in returun that animal might protect you from harm. Having a positive attitude people will not judge you for being wrong or innocent because of the positive attitude you have.

Is positive attitude important? Yes, because if you want to be successful in life you need to have and show positive attitude with that you also have to show respect and responsibility. For example going for a job interview showing positive attitude might get you a job. Many people love positive people because of their way they talk to other people, how they act, and the important things that the perosn might have done. Staying with positive people and hanging out with positive people is also a important, because that`s one place you learn positive attitude and it`s a key to be succuessful in life.

Positive attitude is a key to a good life, positive attitude people don`t show attitude over small things or fuss about somthing that is not important. They let things go by easy and don`t care about the samll things that won`t affect them. Even if we have positive attitude we should not treat ourself by saying we a king or a role model, instead we should help others into having a successful life by helping them out with positive attitude and showing what is good for them.

Finally, but not last I agree to be success in life you need to have positive attitude. Positive attitude is the key to success in life. Showing the way you care for others and animals, making positive thoughts and thinking. Positive attitude people stay in their circle which is a good thing helps them be focus in life and have success in life. Show positive attitude to others you will get the same attitude back. So spread positive attitude and making this world a better place to be successful in life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
B1D135A74E3D,"Mr. manager i want to explore certain occupation through internships and shadowing i read that you are given the opportunities to student to explore a certain occupation;I want to learn about how became a teacher i like this profession and i think this is my opportunities to discover all of the things about this profession.

One of the reason is because i want to help children in a school and teach all of the things that they need to know for their future .

I can teach to parents that parents want finish a career and they want to finish and have a diploma so they can have a better job for that reasons is what i want to be a teacher so i can help people with education this is why i hope you can give me this opportunities, because i want to learn all the thing that i needed to this profession.

One example why i chose this profession is because when i was a child i see my parents they want to help me when i have homework but they dont know a lot of thing because they not have the opportunities to go a school if i can be a teacher i want to teach that kind of people i hope you can give me this opportunities.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
C2D40AF42A53,"Does technology has limit to people?

Brainstorm

Positive

Negative

People can buy online

People cannot use other technology

You can buy and sell

Causes people to return the stuff they dont like

Thesis

Some people believe technology has a good reputation of searching the things you like and you don't like and stuff you want to buy around the world. However, others believe technology can cause bad influence to people and affecting the stuff they buy because they need to check before buying or selecting an item using technology and it has limitation to people because they have different technology around the world.

Body Paragraphs

First, In fact, people can use technology on looking the things they want in life.

Second, Nonetheless, Most people invest a lot of time researching and looking for something they interested in.

Third, However, people can conduct using technology.

Hook

People can buy thinks online using technology.

Bridge

People assure to use technology in time to time.

Conclusion

People believe that technology changes people's lives.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
387857083AAE,"I agree with Albert Schweitzer, because he's a man with a lot's of experience and influence.

Let's say he is wrong and my behavior is not the best way to influence other people, and maybe people only care about famous people and look up to them and get influenced by their behavior.

Some people may agree with that statement, I just feel like it's not completely true.

For example, let's say I was very unknown by a lot's of people and they see me saving a kitten of the road.

Will people be influenced by my behavior? even thought they don't know me, would they agree with my choice in saving the kitten? or will they follow someone who's famous?.

Albert Schweitzer said, ""example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" What he is saying is that no matter how famous or how infamous you are, everyone will follow someones example no matter what the conditions my be, at the end someone will follow your behavior because they are influenced.

This is why the quote that says ""first impression is the last impression"" because no boss is going to hire someone who's: show's up to work late or nor properly dressed or doesn't look serous to take the job.

The conclusion of this statement is, that everyone is influenced by someone's example and it doesn't matter who the person may even be.

At the end I personally still agree with what Albert Schweitzer said and I can not find a better statement or an argument that people may not know the right answer to.

Everyone has to have some kinda example to look up to or look down on based on their behavior or actions.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
4228BAB7F096,Former British prime minister Winston Churchill. Success consists of going from failure to failure without agree to stop failure in life. He said a failure can not success in life people agree with Churchill. Failure loss all doing like bad ideas. Like doing some isn't right. Success to not failure in life need to do is to star to success in life. Is one that have failed to success in life because Churchill said it. I failed one time but i study all of time and success in of pass the a test in a class. The who failed in a class have time to retake something to pass. Churchill say that because he sailed something in his year of time. The thing to success in something is went we want to pass a classes or something in life. To be someone in the fucher need success in self and not stop to be someone in the fucher. they are all of people how is failing in the word. They are all of people is success in many place in the word. Many people need help to pass a class to success in life and a family. And help his/her mother and father to help then. state of inability to perform a normal function adequately help.,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
A0A56F7995D6,"I disagree with the statement about a positive attitude is the key to success in life because there's others things you need to be success in life anyone can have a positive attitude and they are not success or probably won't be, theres only few percent of people in this world that are success there are some people that dont have a positive attitude and they are success in life.

For example people with a positive attitude they try so hard to be success in life but they cant they keep trying, trying and nothing happens. now some people with a bad attitude are success they dont even have to try to work hard to be success.

Image how many people work hard and hard every day just be success in life, but theres a couple of people that have a positive attitude and they are success in life basically living life great, there are people people that dont have a positive attitude they just do bad things to be success. now doing bad things is not right because you can be success for a while. for example it can be stealing or drugs if you are dong those things you will be success but is not a right choice for you and you keep doing it one day you will have to pay for what you did, most people prefer to work hard every day to be able to have at least everything, I prefer people to do the right thing because doing bad is not going to get you anywhere you might be success but it wont be forever id rather work hard so i can be success in life ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
DB34A89420F2,"I understand why you want to add an hour and thirty minutes to school for kids to get more time to learn.

But think about the children may think its a bad idea and I agree with them as well. Why? you may ask, well lets think about it kids dont want to be at school for a very much more time in what they are already in for. Many students go to after school activities at certain times and get out later others dont but do some outside of school activities like sports, helping the community, getting chores done, {etc.}. You may seem like those arent important but for the students do think its important and also school, but the home work time they have left to do at home my not be a good idea on the different after school programs they may be in at different times when it starts and when it end times go fast and may not be time to go over homework or study for a test the next day. Education are good for the kids but getting low grades may not help them in the future and for the family. Many students wont have anytime to be spending with their family together any more with those times being spent on school and sports and other activities.

Families may think its a bad idea too add more hours to school and to take away time after school to get things done and to have time to enjoy with families at outside places at an restaurant or to go out for walks before bed times and the next day. While other parents my think if there going to add more time to school then students should arrive to school at least 20 minutes later for kids to have more time to sleep for an long school day, so they wouldnt be sleepy in the mornings. As may I think that over the week ends families like to go to far places and if students end up having projects and home work to do could effect the time with family and school and that wouldnt be so good for the students. Think about it kids not doing well in homework and test for not studying for not have any time after school for the extra hour and thirty minutes they are going to get that wont be good for the school county and less students would start coming to there schools and rather transfer to a better school with less hours or just consider home school and your school would have kids leaving and wont be able to have students to teach anymore. Witches end up shutting your schools programs and closing the school and there wouldnt be any jobs for teachers or you to find quickly enough to pay bills and rent witch wouldnt be so good for the employees.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
1AE2E7D8DFA3,"How its really nice if you say thank you or your welcome to someone. If you say nice things to others and have manners. All ways be grateful for what people do for you or even get you something just always say thank you or your welcome. Because if you do then that means they will say it back to you. If you always be kinda and have manners then they will to. Show kindness and love. Be happy make them happy to for having nice manners. Always be there to help someone out.

If your kinda to others and have manners to, they will do the same back to you, so if they be kinda and say thank you or your welcome to you its because you said it to them back. You always need manners for anything you do always have to say yes sir or thank you all that good things only if you want the same thing back for you. If you want someone to say thank you or your welcome you have to say it back to them. Its all about being nice to others to.

All ways be happy say some thing good try to make friends because if you have manners thats how you can make new friends to. Saying thank you after someone helps you out, or they do something for you. Always have something good to say to them because you never know if that made there day being nice to them. Just be nice have good manners to get the same thing back. We all want manners and kindness so we all have to do that. Being nice is something good. Your showing who you are.

If you never said thank you or yes sir or your welcome to someone is okay but you should having manners is good because then they will be good to say your welcome and thank you. If you ever hurt someone say your sorry be kinda say something nice to them and then you will be fine. They will be fine with you to its all about manners if you want someone to be nice to you, you need to be nice back. If you want someone to say thank you for this or your welcome for doing this you have to have manners and say it back say your welcome because no one really likes if you dont have manners. If you want kindness then you have to say something or help someone out with things. You want manners back say something sweet to them then they will do the same. Seeing someone drop there thing on the floor helo them oick it back up they say thank you, say your welcome.

Manners and kindness are some thing that is good because your showing some thing good about your self. If you go out and your going to pay for something always ask the person that checaking out your things ask them how there day is going. Make them feel good because if you want someone to do the same be nice and ask them to see how they are it doesnt matter if you know them but if they a worker and there helping you out say thank you and ask how they are doing and ask how there day was. Just make them happy. Always say thank you after getting some thing. Thats showing a lot of manners to someone. Even if you didnt say nothing nice and someone says have a good day say thank you, you too because your telling them to have a nice day to and that really nice. Never say some thing that will hurt them then they wont show manners back.

If you go out to eat say thank you and you can even give them a tip showing kindness to them. If you see a woker not haveing a good one ask them to eat with you or get them something even some thing else thats nice giving them tips.

Always say something nice because thats how you get it back. Manners and kindness are really good if you want someone to say it back to you. Be happy when they say some thing good about you and say some thing nice back. Be good the more you have manners the more you get them back.        ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
E8E60E149B48,"New ideas always help us in life. Some people think people should make their on decisions, it's easy to see both sides, but one stands out people should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters, because new ideas can help us decide something and guidance help us when we're confused to make that decision.

First, new ideas can help us decide something that we're not sure to decide. Guidance can explain what you want; they can tell us what is better for us or if something going to work. Guidance is really help full in life, if we didn't have guidance in our life would be a little hard for decide things. New ideas can help you decide something.

next, guidance help us when we're confused to make decision or don't know what to do. Guidance can help in our future and they help you decide witch idea is better for you and for your future. They always know what is better for us.

The other side, some people think that we should make our on decision, it make since, because it make us have responsibility and always know what we want, but what if you do the wrong decision and you can't change the decision, because you already choose it. That's why people can't make decision alone.

Concluding, people should choose guidance, not just choose your own idea or talk about it with someone because you can make the wrong decisions. New ideas can make people think more and make a good idea. Always think twice before make your own decision.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
C3F3118898B5,"My sister decided to be a doctor at a young age and started to focus on that path. Now, she is a doctor. Choosing which path should be taken in an early age and preparing for it beforehand, will help a lot for the future. Although some people might argue students should commit to a career later in their life, students should commit to a career at a young age because it helps them to decide for their future early, it makes them focus on a specific goal, and they won't feel more pressured to choose a career later in their life.

To begin critics say that choosing their occupation later in their life is more beneficial because they will be open to more new options later than in a young age. To support this idea, a child decided to be an engineer when s/he was young, but suddenly s/he changed his mind and decided to be a surgeon. Should s/he choose what s/he wants to be now or should s/he choose what s/he wanted to be when s/he was young? However, it is obvious that choosing a career later in their life will only make them feel burdensome and their life will only be more intricating.

A more valid argument is that choosing a path to be taken at a young age will let you have a better life in the future. For example, a girl started to prepare for the career she had chosen when she was young and started to work hard for that. Finally, her hard work paid off and acheived what she wanted to be. This evidence is valid because preparing for the career in a young will let your life go smoothly, will give more free time in the future, and won't feel pressurized.

Although people might say that students committing towards your career and choosing it at a young age will lead you to a better life because it makes them to focus on a certain goal of their life, will make them decide what they want for the future, and won't feel pressurized to choose their career. People should consider deciding their path in a young age for their own benefit and betterment. ",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
1AA55FB101FD,"Although some schools offer says that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because some students prefer take classes online and for this classes you have to pay, actually If you go to the school you'll have the capacity of learn more faster.

Although some schools offer says that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because there are 50% of students that prefer take classes online and they don't come to the school. I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because if they stay at home, they will have more time to spend with their family or make things that they would like to do. And students who stay at home they will have more time to studied another signature like math or they can learn another language. They can practice a sport or they can do whatever they want. If you take a video conferencing this will help you to understand your teacher because a video conferencing explain you what you need to do. And also you will see what is your teacher teaching you.

Reason 1, why students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because if they take classes online they will finish school more early. for example some classes online are more shorter than a school year. School year require have 315 days of classes and you have to be in the school for about 6 to 8 hours per day. And also they need to complete some credits to graduated. If you want to finish school you have to complete this credits. To have complete this credits you have to take some classes that are require to complete those credits.

Reason 2, why students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because if they studied at home they can go to doctor's appointment. There are 70% of students that doesn't come to the school because they have doctor appointment and they mostly are absent. Attendants is very important in the school because if you want to have good greats you have to come every day. If you take classes online you will have the capacity of learn more faster and whatever test that they give you online you'll available to past them.

Although some schools offer think that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would benefit at some students that choose studied online or by a video conferencing. There are a good reasons why students prefer to studied online. That's the majority of students prefer stay at home and take classes online.            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D1769512AB23,"When I said to my first impresion for to change is. When I live youselt in your future you need to woriking so much is your responsabity to pay your bill,rent and, the food. You need to do help your family when is necesary when you have your money is ther you need to have traspotercion for you move you youselt, in whatever state.

By you need to Finiched the School firts for you have a good work, that its very important for everyone. if full one to work when I go to the College I with like to study to doctor because I like to helped another person when I need the one I like the Medicine when I working this programa I need to impresional to my family this is to simple world.

To be as a good person to change and response with your reasons, do you need to are change before you due something bad, You need to suppor another person to cause danger something peolpe change for more danger because sometime is don't have a family to trotencion her or dont have one home,

If full need to change you need to teachable, In important person in your wolrd.

You will need to due talking a person if you have and somethings problems with another person in your world you need said that were are happedened before to cause more danger I thinkg you have Opportunity to focus, in your work whatever type ther work you will be asked to recomencion to fined the somenthing due .

The more importante part is you need to find everthing for you graduction in ther to be extra work and the don't be star alone because this it not good I Agree when something person to prefer to due in your work before that school her don't no the firt part is to study for a good futeure to finid the college her need to have more money that are a pay in the oder work

I need to Preparecion because do you to for painter do you need to do finid the college firts their its so much type for your future in your simple world you need to do.            ",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
E9F50492B159,"It is true that curfew keep teengers out of trouble. because, being out at night for to late might be dangerous. also, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. and , so they be more responsible.

First, being out at night for to late can be dangeruos. For example, if they stay to late out at night something could happen to them someone might kidnapp them because, at night everyone is in their home not a lot of people is out at night it would be easy for someone to kidnapp you and rap you or do something wrong with you.

Second, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. For instance, adults and teenagers are busy in their daily life teenagers go to school adults go to work in the morning they don't see each other often and, they dont have enough time to spend it with each other and talk to each other so they can have more time at night to spend it with each other and talk .

Finally, so they can be more responsible, Therefore, teenagers must be responsible and know what they should do in their life and what is better for them. In that age teenagers make a lot of mistakes it because, they don't have a lot of experience like adults do so they must listen to adults and follow the crufew in that way they can be safe and more responisble.

For these reasons, curfew keep teengers out of trouble.

First, being out at night for to late can be dangeruos. Second, teenagers can have more time to spend it with they are family and friends. Finally, so they can be more responsible.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
CA7CE4CE7ED3,"Has there been anyone in your life that shared any wisdom or experience with you? If not, why not ask someone that is important to you? They would love to share maybe a dad, mom ,grandparents they have tones of experience in the past. A person who has shared wisdom or experience with me would be my father ,because he has showed me how to be respectful to adults and show me how to work some business papers.

One thing that my father had shared with me is how to respect adults. For example, my father wasn't always the best child. He would do bad choices like going out with his friends all the time and not listen to this parents. But as he got older he realized no one though he was serious and rejected him. They thought he was trouble child, Soon when I was born ,and when i was able to talk and walk my. My father would make me say please and thank you. As well as listening to the adults, bow when entering a door and greeting them. My father did not want me to me like him when he was younger so he made sure I was respectful to my grandparents. This shows that my father gave me some experience to get respected into the family.

Another thing that my father has shared with me is how to work at a business. For instance for the past few months my father has showed me how to do paper work at his second job. My dad has to count the money that he was getting and how much to give back the workers. So a few times my dad would come into my room and teach me how to split the money they were making and pay the bills. Those days he showed me showed me how much money everything is ,and made me realized that I need to work very hard because if I want a simple job that I doesn't do much that gave a job that can pay my bills I need to work hard in school. This shows that my father really cares about my future and want me to do well in life and showed me some wisdom in of how hard like will be if i don't do well in school. In closing my father taught me how to do business and how to process one because I want to do business.

In conclusion a person who has showed me wisdom and experience would be my father by teaching me to respect adult and how to do paper work at his job. H+e had showed me by telling about his past and show how to mange a business when I am older. So what are some people that is important to you that has shared wisdom and experince? Or what experince and wisdom would you share to people other people?                                                                    ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
F386245C7C21,"Have you ever wondered about your working skills do you prefer working in groups or on your own? How they benefit you in your job or anywhere else?

people say that working together is a better way of doing stuff then just working alone. But theirs other people who prefer working alone. Here are some of the benefits to both sides.

I feel like working in a group is more beneficial because it lets you have a chance to ear new ideas. You can also finish the work faster if everyone is doing something. For example this one time. My friends and I were doing a project for drives Ed. We had sometime to think and write down ideas. After that all of us got together and agreed on some ideas. Then we each had our own part to do and we finished it during class.

Some people believe that working alone is better. You can be more focused on you work. In addtion you can be more creative in your own way. I remember this girl in my biology class had to do her finial exam project. She decided to work by herself. The girl was res reaching and was really focused on that she was looking for. She got her information then made a really creative poster that went with the theme of the project. The teacher loved it and gave her an A for it.

In conclusion working in a group benefits me the most. Their is less work to do. Everyone has good ideas. You get to express thoughts and feelings about your topic. So many more things that working alone doesn't give.    ",3.5,4.0,3.5,2.0,3.5,3.0
FC723537E49B,"Positive attitude is the key to succsuss in your life is 100% true; because if you don't have positive attitude you can succsuss in your life and no body respect. you this is so important to be have positive attitude not only outside you should have a positive attitude in home, school and office and everywere we should respect our family mother, father brother and sister and we should have wonderful positive attitude with teacher, and with neborhood that they living with us the same place. we should respect them the positive attitude can you make a better person and everyone know recognition positive attitude person and everyone recommend you people . The people that they don't have not positive attitude everyone think that person don't have respect for others and thinks that person is reluctant, have ego and people slowly loathing, dislike you that person that have positive attitude everyone love, like that person.

I'm student at Generic_School and I learn everyday about positive attitude and how can we make a good relationship with other people that they all have positive attitude it easy to make wonderful relationship between them.

Positive attitude make a better person that person make there dream become true and likewise positive attitude person superpower to succsuss there dream positive attitude person effort to find the succsuss key in there life positive attitude endeavor to find a good way and use a brain to find a success and light future.

That we know the positive attitude is a success key in life. positive attitude is very very importance in life my request is from you if you want to be a better person, and to be success and brave follow this steps if you want to be everybody have good behave with you; you should be a good behave with them if that is your consent. if you have any dream don't go back follow next step maybe that work. my aspriration, dream to pass this sol...                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
24E7F271035B,"Everywhere around the world is filled with negative energy. Most of it is caused by teenagers because they do not know between what is right and what is wrong. teens around the world resolved to violence, affecting others around them. Most of it is caused by bullying. Years ago the government allowed students to attend online courses and a good amount of students left high school and stayed to take online courses.

Students should attend online courses because bullying would decrease nand it would be easier to find your way through the website instead of walking from class to class.

Bullying would have a major decrease because students would be at home instead of school. Everyday students get harassed by other students and then up to the point where it drives them to commit suicide. Students would be at their house where it's safe and less distracting. Also, some students are too shy to be around other people so they get bullied for it. Every parent doesn't want to see their kid get bullied. There so much negativity being spread around and it not only affects the victims life it also affects their families.

It would be easier to find your way through online courses instead of walking class to class. It could be difficult for some students to find their way around the school because of how big it might be. With only the press of a few buttons, students would easily find their way towards their next assignment.

Others may think that taking online courses are a waste of time. Parents question the school district ""

if we have teachers then why do we need online courses?"".

Some students would feel a bit depressed knowing that all their friends are at school and they are the only ones at home looking at a monitor. It is more likely that kids won't be able to learn that way because they'll be distracted by other things. Students would prefer to be with their friends and listen to a teacher in person and have less work.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
0943E322C195,"To me its more beneficial working as a group. I have a few reasons why its better working with a group rather then working alone you can learn from one another also be motivated to learn as a group. Making new friends can be tough but when you are but in a group you can make friends with each other. One thing in a group that can be good and bad is having disscustions with the group. There are many reasons why i prefer working with a group and im hear to share with you.

Working with a group is all about sharing new ideas and discovery with your group that some people didn't know about. With a group everyone would get good grades and ace their exams. Some people in your group may have the same intrest as you and would like to study that objective more and being motivated by one another.

In my opinion working with a group is more simpler and fun at the same time and kids will enojy learning that way.

One small little problem about working with a group is having disscustions about the subject that the group is talking about. They with all disagreements but also argree with each other . The group tends to get mad maybe because someone in the group said something the other didn't like and would have a argument. There are more pros then cons in working with a group for sure .

Everyone has a different saying if its beneficial to either work with a group or work alone .

I'm not at all saying working alone is a bad thing on the contrarie its also good because sometimes you might not get along with the group you got asand with and you just wanna do your work alone. Working in a group though brings you toghter as a school and theres nothing better then working in a team.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
CDCE6EB37AF6,"why shoult be don't try somthing else new in my life? If you have already mastered, you will never grow in life. Although, I am totaly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson that what him wrote, but somepeople are conform in yours life with they know and have. I agree because I can learn everyday new things in my life also

I can help others how to do something different if I can do that very well.

learn and help that things make my self very proud and don't feel me comform with

I have.

firts is all, I can try and learn to do something different in my life, how I can learn new things. For me it's very importan to learn something differerent everyday in my life. for example. If I am cashear in my job and don't have any idea how to charge some extra price in one orden thefood, I need to ask my manager how I can do. Another example. If I can't to resol some problem in mathematic, I need to learn how I can resol that problem for after will be easy to me how to resol that problem, and that why is very importam to learn everyday somethig different or new in life.

secod is all, in life very important to learn and try to help others because not body kwon when will be need help. I like to learn and try to help others how to do something new for them. for example, if I know how to ride bicycle, and one person aks me you can ride bicycle and that person need help to learn how to ride bicycle, of corse I can teacher how to ride bicycle or somebody want to know how to use computer I can teacher that and aditional help others that I learned make me feel every good in life.

In conclusion, learn everyday in life is importan and don't stop to do something different also are importan, that why Ilike to learning something new in my life and them help others how to do the I know and learned, that why Iam totaly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson. Nobody can't stop to learn except that person like be conform in life and don't like to grow in your own life. I don't like to be conform I like to learn something everyday and help others that my self wil be proud. everybody for reason of life need to learn somenting and help others.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
C78951522AC0,"Dear, manager i want to know more about your business. What opportunities do you give your employees? I want to know new things from your business. I would love to go and have a position there. I'm interested to give it a try in your business. A professional like you can teach me how everything works and how you maintain everything under control with your employees. Also, it be delightful if i could ask questions about how is it difficult to be such a big person as a manager?

Therefore,I choose your company because I feel like its great for me to start working in a place that i could be conformable with. And specially if its from a company with great quality and management. Also i can learn how to socialize with people. Learning how to communicate is important for a company so everything is in order. Some companies don't know how to communicate and to be organize. They've to be anti-social so they can focus on their work and not on other employees otherwise there's consequence. Some companies are very strict with their employees. For examples employees have to be obedient to every single thing. As in they've to follow every step correctly or they would get fired or worst.

Thirdly, Your company is understandable to your employees. You treat them with respect and love as if they were your family. I heard that if your employees had a emergency you would be generous and support them no matter what. I never heard one complain from your company either. However, its the exact opposite. people who works there seems to love it and to enjoy it! They've learned to be responsible and respectful in your company. You also are fair with your employees. Employees in that company gets payed well with no complains. They get payed exact the hours they've been working.

However, the way you manage your customers is incredible. Your customers are never disappointed what they order is exactly what they get. Employees always have a smile on their faces when receiving a customer. They're always gentle and polite. But more importantly patient because they're a lot of customers who are slow or aggressive, they like to get attention. As great employees they handle any challenges. And i think it's a perfect start for me because I'll do everything right with no excuses. In the other hand, your company is always nice and neat you make sure that the place looks good and prepared just in case important visitors come to visit your company.

Mean while, i think the environment needs more companies as an this one. because everything about this company is splendid and spectacular. They've great service and employees. They make sure their customers come in and out happy. Your company takes responsibility for any errors that could happen. You also give great deals for customers. you teach your employees have to be a great worker. You give your employees plenty of time to get along with their job because you know that in the future they will do way much better. You also persuade your employees that they can do anything. That giving up is not a answer. I would like to be a outstanding person for your company. I want to tell everyone about how amazing your company is and how wonderful everyone who work there is. The organization in your company is great you keep everything in order.

In conclusion, I think i am very interested in learning about your company more and actually try to work there. I want to feel that joy and that responsibility i have to have. I want to spend time learning and practicing in your company. Your company has shown me that not all companies are bad as they say nor terrible. In my opinion i think companies should be more like this one. So if i could get the opportunity to go and check it out and learn that would be amazing. Because i never heard of a company this generous before. And i would definitely would love to know more about it. Everything about your company is great for example communication,organization,employees and deals. It sounds entertaining and enjoyable. This is a enormous deal for me. So Mr. Manager i would like to go and visit it. I could also work that exact day if you want me to it would be a pleasure to work in a amazing company.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
DA994B5C3784,"People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. That's why I believe that people should always try to seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters. I understand that some people may like making their own decisions but it's always good to take advice from experts. It's always good to talk to someone in case of an emergency. For example I was sick at home with a lot of pain and I refused to go to the hospital, until I talked to a doctor about how I was feeling and he suggested that I go to the hospital to get checked up and I did and it made me feel a lot better. Sometimes it's good to take an experts advice in a matter like I was in, you don't always have to take their advice but its good to just talk to someone about it and keep in mind what they say for future references. It's always good to follow your own instincts but sometimes it's not. Their are people who have experienced the same thing you might be going through right now and are certified or trained to help. For example my aunt is currently training to be a consular for high school kids and her goal is to gain the trust of her students so they can come to her when they need help. She always tells me that she was a high school kid at a point and she knows what its like and the problems kids might be going through, so that's why shes training to help them in making the right decisions. When I need help making a life decision about something like college I go to my consular who's been in college and knows what could be right for me, I always take in mind what they advice me and make a decision. It doesn't always necessarily need to be help for an adult it can always be help from a sibling or other family member who has been through what you have and who you know will lead you in the right direction. I understand that some people may like making their own decisions but it's always good to take advice from experts. ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
E0DF99CD1D9C,"What is something you would like to accomplish in the future. I would like accomplish alot because you would love it and wont forget it.

Thing that you would love is swim with sharks because you would get over your fear of sharks and swiming.

skydiving is fun doing it with a family because allthogether you would love it. Doing things that get you over fear is bad but doing it as a family is the best.

Things you wont forget is family and friend because you do fun things together and you wont forget it. Doing your favorite activite and enjoying it. The activites you do is all fun when you got family and friend with you.

I like doing things but other people have other opinion on what stuff the like or not like. lot of stuff is fun with family and friends foing activites with you. all the activetes you do is allways fun with or without family and friends",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
D92452B93539,"Reasons why the school board not add one hour and a half more for each day. i have a few reasons why we shouldn't do that. first reason homework. Second reason the time after school and third reason why is teachers. these are going to be my reason why in this passage.

First reason is homework if we have more time in the school day how would students have time to do their homework. If we had a hour and a half more then teachers shouldn't give homework to students. students shouldn't have more time in school then have homework after school students have have some time to enjoy themselves and still do homework if we have more hours in school students wouldn't have the time to enjoy themselves. If students did their homework after they wouldn't have time to enjoy themselves after because it would be dark outside then they have to go to bed.

Second reason is students having time like i said in the other paragraph students wouldn't have time if we had more hours in school. students wouldn;t do fun after homework after school because by the time you know the sun would go down and it would be too late for anything. go out somewhere, play outside, and hang with friends.

Third reason why is because teachers. teachers would have more work in their hands teachers have a life too they need to get to their families too. and all the work they have to do would them holding longer which would keep longer away from their families too this is is why schools shouldn't have more hours in school     ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
F2165F132C87,"Many students become participated in extracurricular activities to acquire a great educational experience. In addition, some students involved in activities that they don't have so much time to study or complete assignments. Finally, the students who participate in activities after school they don't spend so much time with their families in the afternoon. Some people argue that if students participate in activities they will focus more in what they participate; however this is the opposite because they can obtain help with their homework, and projects. Undoubtedly, sutudents involved in the activities of the school.

To start, many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experience. Most importantly, a student who wanted to overcome in life wanted a good education. For example, Generic_Name is a student with a great purpose in life, and he wants to study a career. He become involved in activities like staying after school while he was in high school because he wanted to improved in the school, and be a good student. As a result, he thinks that maybe is not necessary being involve in so many activities to enrich a educational experience. With a good behavior and good grades he will enrich in his educational experience. If he show good grades in class, then probably he will be better in his education. Not only the extracurricular activities enrich the education, being involved in activities allows a student to have little time to do homework assignments as well.

Additionally, some students become involved in activities like sports and they have little time to do their homework or study. A student who join in activities don't have so much time to finish their homework. Case in point, Generic_Name is a student she goes to high school, and she likes to play soccer. Generic_Name is very athletic she join in the soccer team, and she stay after school for practice everyday during the week. She is a smart student, and she likes to get good grades as well. Furthermore, when she get involved in the soccer team now she don't have so much time to complete homework assignments, and study. If she doesn't stay after school every day, then she probably will have more time to complete her homework. She thinks that it can possible to her because she shows interest in what she wants. Participate in activities allows to have little time to complete assignments, and allows to spend little time with the family as well.

Lastly, students who get involved in activities after school they obtain little time with their families. However, many students likes to participate in activities of the school. In particular, Generic_Name is a student who likes to participate in the activities of the school. She likes to participate in the class activities, games, and clubs. She likes to stay after school because she is participating in one club. She just stay after school on Mondays, Wednesday, and Fridays. When she stay those days she pass little time with her family. If she doesn't stay these days, then probably she will have more time in the afternoon with her family. Plainly, the participation that she demonstrate in the sport she improve as athletic.

Some people say that involved in activities will impair some students because they can focus more in participating in activities, and not focus in their class grades. However, this idea is inaccurate. For illustration, Generic_Name is a student and he participates in a club where he obtain help with his homework, and projects. When he don't understand his homework assignments he go to the club. If he didn't participate in the club, then likely he will no receive help from the club. Therefore, participating in other activities the students can obtain help with their homework, projects, and improve their grades.

In conclusion, participate in activities can be helpful to some students. Many of students prefer to participated in extracurricular activities to improve their educational experience. Secondary, some students become involved in activities, and allows students to not have so much time to finish their homework. Finally, students who participated in activities after school they have less time with their families in the evening. Conversely, a lot of students participate in extracurricular activities, they have less time to study, and they have little time with their families. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
108CA77CBAB4,"although former British minister Winston Churchill says ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" actually to get to success sometimes does take failure to get it. actually this is very true for people who never give and work hard even after they fail time and time and again. for example when you fail at something to keep trying after till you succeed. some people think if you fail you won't be successful that is not true. if you never give up you will be successful. another example when you fall you always get back up and keep going and pushing forward. only you can decide if you want to always fail or try harder. to get success it ain't easy. there is a saying nothing that is easy to get is wroth having. this relates to what Churchill said. Winston Churchill is a wise man and i would agree with him. everything he said about failing and being successful after is true. they are so many successful people who have failed plenty of times in their life. it happens to all people no can be perfect at what they want or do in their life. inconclousion Winston Churchill is a wise man for his saying. his saying can motivate many people who feel like giving up after failing. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
EBF9131A638F,"Distance learning is a new learning method for students to attend classes from home by online or you can video conference. Schools have brought distance learning in their system for students can do their assignments from home. Many people think this is a great idea and some oppose to this learning method. The schools can see if they are on track or online to their classes but if they arn't in the online class they will be behind in their assignments. Is this new learning method a great way to learn? or does being in a class with a teacher more beneficial for the student?

The main problem in distance learning is if students are really getting on the online class. Students who do get on are on task and on point. The students who get on the computer and get on the online class for a short period of time at home might be playing, or might not be concentrated, because he is at home and dosen't feel like doing it. Students who don't do their assignments they wait until they are at school because in school you arn't distracted like at home you are concentrated and ready to work. Is distance learning beneficial for students at home? for some students it might be but for many it isn't.

Is online learning at home beneficial for students? some students do think its beneficial and a really great idea. Many people prefer learning in class with a teacher because they can ask questions if they don't get the question that is being asked. Students do some of their work but get off in a short period of time if they are at home, if they were at school the students would be on task and doing their assignments, unlike at home they would be off task. Many students prefer teachers teaching them so they can get more information of what they are being taught. Distance learning isn't capable of doing what you do in a classroom. Is distance learning really beneficial?

Is being taught in a classroom more beneficial for students? many students prefer being taught by a teacher than online. Students are more productive and they share their thoughts and explanations in that specific assignment than online classroom. All the students are in the same page and all gathering more information by writing notes and being concentrated in their tasks. Students are more interactive with each other and sharing thoughts and many techniques to get the answers by fellow classmates, also getting good grades. Classroom learning is beneficial for many students and teachers.

Students have their own way of learning, it doesn't matter if its distance learning nor in a classroom. It is how they feel how they enjoy learning. Students will say this is the best way for learning other no this is, it doesn't matter what you think is the best way to learn its how you enjoy learning something it is the best way for you. The students who prefer distance learning really do it at home and feel like they are learning mush more at than in a classroom. Students who enjoy learning in a classroom like being around peers and want knowledge from everyone around them. They are both beneficial for that specific student.     ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
BBE8AE3B2B09,"- Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years?

In my opinion it is not a good idea because the normal time to be in school and the normal and traditional years to spend in high school is four years. Graduating early is not a bad idea but neither is a good idea, why? because some students need to learn more before graduating. In school you just dont learn math or English, for example you also learn:

How to save up money for a better future

How to have a better behavior

You learn how to spell some stuff correctly

How to write essays

There is a lot that you must know before graduating. Most of these stuff you learn in high school, and yes it might be a possibility that you can just learn all of that in three years by doing extra tests maybe staying after school, extra work, and not having any elective classes. Most of the teenagers would love to graduate a year early but doing all that stuff its a lot of stress, maybe instead of enjoying the weekends with your friends or family you just stay home finishing work from school. Some teenagers also have a job after school and doing extra work not spending time with your family nor friends can stress you a lot take a lot of time and yeah it could be worth it but what if you dont pass any of those classes or you do but graduate without even knowing whats the difference between a debit card and a credit card. In my opinion graduating early should not even be allowed because for example i have this one friend that is doing that and taking extra classes, she doesnt have any elective classes, on the weekends she doesnt go out nor spends time with her family, every time i see her instead of seeing her happy i see her stressed and tired, because she works and comes to school but shes most likely graduating this year and that something that you should be proud of, thats something that is going to help you a lot in a future and you can also start saving up money earlier than you thought, but in a future when you look back and remember your high school moments you wont have cute or fun moments to remember all you will remember is ow hard you used to work to get there and how many times you missed maybe a family dinner or a family reunion or a friends sleepover. Graduating early is actually good because you can have a better future but graduating early wont let you enjoy your life right now that we are young. Honestly i thought about graduating early one time and i told one of my friends and all he said was "" If you know you wont regret it in a future go ahead"" that got to my head a lot because this age that we are in now, is only once there wont be no other chance to go back and be 17 years old again, and to enjoy your parents and the time that you have with them right now. Basically my option is no, it is not a good idea to graduate early.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
674F5DA988D2,"The city is debating doing a curfew of 10 P.M. week day, and a midnigth weekend curfew,

this a good council because if the city do curfew all teenager can be safe and they can have resposabilidad with dont breaking the law, with a curfew the city can try to keep safe all citizen and the young people can keep out of troubles.

My first reason why is important to try to make a curfew in the city is because in the nigth is too dangerous for the citizen and especially is more dangerous for young people,if we have a curfew we can keep all citizen and the most important the teenagers safe.

My second reason is because the parents do not have to worry about the teenagers because if the city do a curfew, we can keep the teenager out of troubles, and the parents can feelling good because everybody wiil be in home safe.

My third reason is because if the city do curfew we can keep the teenagers out of drugs and alcholismo, because the young people is the first coustomer of drugs, if we have a curfew we can take away of the jail at a lot teenagers. A curfew can keep safe at all teenager and all citizen.

My conclusion is do a curfew is a good opcion to keep all the teenager out of troubles, if the city council do curfew can being safe all the citizen.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
42AD5E1F4167,"Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn.

Desagree:. Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn.

1: Students wouldn't benefit being able to attend classes from home because if they don't understand something who can help them.

2: Distance learning is not the best way to learn because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are.

3: If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.

Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn because students wouldn't benefit being able to attend classes from home because if they don't understand something who can help them, distance learning is not the best way to learn because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are and If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.

Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing because for some students that's the best way to take their classes but for other student is not the best way because some student have to work after school and they have other responsabilities to do like the people who came to this country from another country and don't live with their parents this guys have to work and study at the time so that's why I think is not benefit to attend classes at home. For example the people who came to this country, they came for a better future, better opportunities and they need to learn a new languaje and that's not easy for everybady some people learn very quickly but other people not.

calsses by way online that's great for some student because they have a great idea and reasons to take classes from home for example some student have child and they have to care about their baby's so they can't go to school for them that's a great opportunuty to study and do what they want, this people just need motivation to keep going and they can gain their goals.

I think students they don't be benefit attend classes from home because at home they have too many things that can be disctracte for them with things like electronic devices, or persons like childrens, and any other distract thing.

Video conferencing that's good form to learn for some people who want to attend classes from home but if you have any question or any dude you can't ask to this video that's why I thing that the best way to learn is going to school and work hard every day to do and study what we want to do in the future, we have our future in our hand if we do any bad thing some day we pay for that, always we have to think and be sure for what we want and do. in this life everything the we do to somebody good or but someday that thing comeback to you and there woud you feel what other people someday fool for your foult.

The old people who have esperience in life they said to students keep going ''if you want you can...''",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
25597135F582,"Student's that don't want to be in high school for four years, plan on finishing earlier than others. These student's have already gotten their credits and just need a few more to finish. Students want to get a early head start than their other classmates, they have enough credits to finish their junior and senior year in one go. It's a great idea for student's to get a head start on college and the workforce one year early.

Students that get an earlier head start plan on starting their careers while in college. The jump from high school to college is way different but it's a better step for students. A friend of mine had finished high school earlier and got to start college earlier and now their life is going to start because they went on the right path to start their career. College's offer programs to student's to help them get their degree like Master's or Bachelors degree faster so they can achieve the career they were trying to achieve. Many colleges offer this program as one of my family members is going for their Master's and they are going to get it a year earlier than majority of their classmates.

Some students have already been into the workforce already and now they would like to finish high school and become a full time employee instead of a part time employee. Student's that are still in school that already work cannot make more than 40 hours due to the fact that they are still under the age of 18. Full time employee's make more than 40 hours but some of those employee's still go to school due to the fact that they are balancing school and their work life. Students's that are in school are either a full time student and part time employee or a full time student and full time employee. Some student's in school majority of the time they work put their schedule as everyday at a certain time or they work weekends.

Students finishing high school early is benefit for the students that would like to finish early because they want that head start in life. They want to start college so they can get started on their future career and get that dream job. Students want to become a full time employee instead of a part time employee so they have more hours and get better pay to go to college to be a full time student and full time employee. For these reason I agree with this statement that it's a good idea to finish high school early to get into college earlier or into the workforce. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
FA0A22FE957A,"Summer vacation is for enjoyment. Every student is waiting for it. Students need long break to make his/her mind better. In vacation many students go for a trip with family or with friends. In school days students are waiting for vacation but when they have vacation they miss there school friends. Students need break for 4 to 5 weeks to enjoy there vacation.

Some educators students feel that the summer break is too long and they think when they return to school they cannot catch up easily. They said we have a holiday in year-round means only 1 times in a year. It should be only for 3 to 4 weeks as long as a winter break.

I did not agree with the educators students because students have aslo there life. Ther need to enjoy it make a fun and they also have dreams for their life. Educators students cannot decided others life. If they needs short break then they after 3 to 4 weeks they start study at home and fweel like they are doing their school works. Educators did not like long break because in schoolthey always study and at home also. Long break for educators student is like a death. Educators student cannot enjoy their vacation properly because they alway think about there study. I think in vacations all students cannot think about the study. They need to enjoy their vacation . Educators students also have their life and they need to enjoy it properly had a fun, spend time with with famil or friends. Go gor a long trip and refresh there mind. After all that they can start from begining for their study. They get better ideas for study. They study properly without tension.

I suggest educators students and normal students go togather because educators students also have an idea how to enjoy it make it fun and where they want to go. In summer vacation students may go beach, park, sunshine point and enjoy it. In summer vacation students may enjoy ever single movement because it can be there memories.

After then they finish there schools they can missed tht evey single movement that they had a lot of fun on it. They miss theirfiends whom they enjoy. They miss there school. But after their schools they cannot meetv their friends easily because all friends may go somewhere else for their study and for their best future.

So coclusion is every student enjoy the break. Do lot of fun with friends.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
13D960FD28CD,"It better working as a groups because the teacher will think that we will benefit more thing as a project or classwork. And also that we will work together and talk as a groups for the teacher because working alone is hard to think for the one question that you don't know what is about. So many of students think working as a groups is better will help each other However, teacher will thinks many from us that will improve from talking each other and together. Because the student will do more stuff and talk a lot also as a groups and alone because many student will do that to get focus and pay attention the class.

This why that people prefer working with a group is better. Because the reason that we want working as a group is that we will work together and help out the question to talk and give a convince from the work. That we will don't know the answer from the question or the problem because for example, well you think that as a sport you need to be in a group that play together, talk together, and work together as a team is the same thing in the school or other place. For the other example, you saw the cartoon of luney toons that bugs bunny and the duck doing the play for the opera that people will laugh this is call working together as a team to do funny thing in the cartoon shows.

So many of student think working alone is better. Because you will achieve more thing be yourself and thinks more hard you never think before from the work. A lots of student and teacher think it will go better that working as a group well it going to be hard that whatever, that i need help or my friend need help we can not work together we only going ask the teacher for help for the question. Because many of student will do more better job in the class to do work and think more stuff outside the place. For example, some singer that work alone because the there want to be alone that make a better song and to do something and plan yourself to leave anywhere you want to see a better life alone.

In conclusion some people like working with a groups and other half like working alone because the teacher said if you want work with a group go ahead if not you can work alone. So a lot of student show the teacher you can do both as a same time because it doesn't matter if want work as a group or alone because there will give you plenty of time that to do same thing as a group and alone. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
FF2B30052436,"Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school their courses of study on high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career to have a idea on what they want but a lot of the new students don't know what they really want in life because they are too young and some of them are not used to high school. When you are in a young age is difficult to choose what you really want it takes time to choose what you want or to choose a career at a young age because they don't have a lot of responsibility's at a young age a lot of them just think of having a playful and safer childhood. They are to young to just choose what want in life.

When you are a teenager you don't have any idea about a specific career or you are not sure. A lot of students put a lot of pressure school: test, quizzes, homework, grades. and is very difficult for some students on specific all the athlete'S: soccer players, basketball players, lacrosse player's track runner's, if they make it to the school team all of them have to spend four to five or more hours of just training and working on getting better. they don't have a lot of time for study or do the homework. a lot of young students have a lot of pressure to think on a career on a young age because some of them have problem like sleep problem's and school grades.

All this young teenage's and student's need time to think about what career they really want. They need time to choose what they really want because if the student's just choose a career they are not going to like or be happy on that career they are not going to keep going. when you are on a young age you need something or somebody to help you to choose a career. You get need help to choose want you want is better to grow and spend more time thinking about what you really want. when you are on a young age is hard for you to just go to high school and choose a career that you really want in life, the school's should send help and talk to the students on what they want the should help them to choose something that they may like and bring specific people focus on that career to help them choose and get some examples for the students if the school's get that help and specific people to help them that should be a big help for the students and teenager's

When you get help sometimes is more easy and can you help think about a career that you can be focus on overall teachers should bring specific people and get them example on that career. that they really want. is better to spend more time thinking on what you really want than just choose something that you don't want.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
FE31D12E44FE,"Did you know that choosing your own character traits makes your brain develop. Some people prefer to make their own character traits. This is a good idea because you can have your own ideas, chose who you wanna be, helps you brainstorm.

Choosing your own character trait is a good idea because you can make your own ideas. For example, if some one chose your character trait and you dont like it you can make you own character trait and have your idea. Therefore; I need to have my own idea so i can chose who i wanna be.

Another reason why choosing your character traits is a good idea because you can chose who you wanna be.

For example, if you wanna be a super hero or a prince, animal you can chose who you wanna be, Therefore; i need to chose who i wanna be so i can be happy.

Final reason why choosing your character traits is a good idea because while your thinking who you wanna be it helps your brain develop. For example if you think and write down your own ideas it helps you brain storm. Therefore; i need to brain storm so i can decide who i wanna be

Choosing your own character traits helps you your plan your own ideas, helps you in who you wanna be, helps you brainstorm your ideas. I commend you to let me choice my own character trait so I can brainstorm on who i wanna be as character trait     ",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
CB2F9A2B612B,"I would play basketball for the school because you get to play against other teams in other different schools. Also, your friends can watch you play. Playing basketball for the school is a good thing,for an example:Your getting sponsored,you get to participate in activities like drills,and you get to play against teams from other county schools. If you make it to the basketball team you have to be healthy because high school is different how you play from different other leagues and also you have to work out a'lot to get in a good shape so you can have a higher advantage on driving a lane or shooting a three on you opponents while playing basketball.

One important thing is that you gotta listen to your coach and have good sportsmanship because if you do,then you will have a perfect team to win the championship game because if you do good college coaches might scout and look for good players that knows how to handle the ball and play defense so they can prevent the other team from scoring. If you do really good on both of those things then you might have a good advantage that college coaches might pick you to be on the team.

My second favorite sport that i would choose would be football because in my personal opinion football is the best sport because you get to tackle people. If you participate in football for your school you have to go training because there will be defensive and offensive coaches that will be there to train so you can get on the team for high school football. In training,you would do dead lifts,hills,drills,weigh lifting,and scrimmages. You have to do those things because thats what coaches want to see,they want to see their players train hard because the players want to make the coaches know that they will work and train hard to make the team.

Finally, the best sport to choose would be football because it is a very aggressive sport and also the sport is very hard and you have to be a lucky person to make it to the NFL.This will be a very hard thing because you also have to do good school but if you dont the coaches might think about cutting you out of the team because they want your grades to be perfect. If you make it to college and you do good, you can be the luckiest people to be invited ti the NFL combine. But if you dont like football just pick basketball because it doesn't really matter what sport you wanna choose to play for your school.                        ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
E376D913FA25,"The technology take position in the world, the technology has evolucionated in the industries of the humanity.

the people they communicative using technology and other tasks, the technology is not good and bad because have different emotions in the human like when you play a video game you can find a people playing and you can talk with their but you can find varies type of people example. a good people you play and said hey add me friends but their have another people insult you, like in the social media instagram, Facebook, and other.

The technology today has to perform creating news sites for the people can buy a books, or in amazon you can buy food using you phone, and the videos there some many company in the world working in news videos games.

in the social media people used for communicative with the family and friends like instagram and Facebook this is the most popular social media in the world because you can contact with the other and find new peoples.

But the question is the technology had positive or negative effects on the people, well this is different because the technology is not bad example, the social media you can find everything there videos photos but who public this videos and photo the people this is the problem the community insinuated the technology is bad but no it's because all from the human the human create the technology for what? the human used the technology to fight and create guns, airplanes, and boats. so the technology in not bad we can use the technology for a good thinks this is my example the technology bring a good thinks and sometimes negative thinks depend how you used.                                                           ",2.5,1.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
3EEEF86719CD,"There are many reasons why people want to be independent. They major reason is because they want to start making their own decisions. Making your own decisions in life is a being thing in life it shows how responsible and independent you are. Some people choose to make goo decisions some choose to make bad ones. The bad decisions can cause a lot of damage to others in different ways.

Some examples of bad decisions are drugs, drunk driving, and joining gangs. these decisions can cause a lot of pain towards the people around you, joining gangs is a high risk of getting yourself killed and for no reason. once you get your self killed you did nothing but make everyone that love you cry. Then theres drunk driving you put yourself at risk as well as others that have a family waiting for them to come home to them. While you made the decision to drive after you drank alcohol you have to deal that to put others in the hospital because of the decision you made. Then you got drugs that is never good for you. The only way to stop doing them is to never start them. Your family wont be happy with you nether the people you love, but other than those there are some good decisions people make.

Decisions helps you figure out what you want to do after high school. Maybe Like what job you want to per sew or what you want to study in college or maybe if you want to start a family. All of these are good examples for making good decisions to make in the future. Jobs are really hard to find and get if you dont have experience. They are always looking for people who are ready and happy to be working in there store. But if your go to college first and youve figured out what job you want you now what you have to study to get that job. That helps you in many ways and with that you can make a family and not worry about haveing the money to support that family.

While people are trying to figure all that out we have kids that like to start trying to be independent and make their own decisions. while these kids are trying to do all that they have there family members thinking that my kid can do that on his own if you know what I mean by that basically what I'm trying to get to is that there mom and dad believe that there kid dosent need help with one thing. It shows them that there there turning in to a man or woman. there parents know that letting them make their own decisions help them think for them self and grow as a person. It also show there parents that they can handle them self when their by them selves

All these reasons show that making decisions is a hard thing to do for some people, but at the same time it shows people how to be independent in life and its a step kids and adluts have to take to move forward. Indenpendece is what people ask for in this worl and know that you have it what are you going to do with it?        ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
7B1B2E8F7E89,"I think it took a positive affect on humans lives. I think it would be impossible with out technology. My reasons are that we use technology a lot,we use it for to shop online for our phones. My two other reasons are we use them for work. We use technology for school and to learn things from back then from now.

We use technology for online and for our phones. So if we needed to contact someone it would be threw our phones. If we needed something to wear we go online buy something. If we needed go some where the in our phones theres GPS will guide us. We use our phones for lots of thing like looking at the news, or to see what time is it. Our phones has a lot of knowledge so if we need something new we use our technology

We use technology for work like if we needed finish something we know how to do it. If we needed look something up for work we do it threw our technology. If your boss calls you in for something hes using technology. So if we did not have technology we could not do anything that what we are doing today.

We use technology for our school like now Im taking test on my computer. We use technology for learning things like in history we are learning stuff from the past. We use technology for tests and to print some papers out. We use projectors for class if we need to see something. We use technology for our safety like cameras.

So without technology we could not do anything like call or text or shop online or learn. Are lives have changed a lot when technology was invented. Technology is all around everywhere you go theres going to be technology.",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
20E194B18D0E,"The debate was using cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Some people think using cell phones in the classroom is not good because as soon they grab phones, they will start texting their friends. Some people feel that using cell phones for educational purposes is a good idea because they will do their work. I believe using cell phones in the classroom will distract students, they won't pay attention, and they will stop working.

First reason why using cell phones will distract students because they will listen to music. They will start using Snap chat, Instagram, and Facebook. When my teacher tell us to take out your phones, the first thing I do is to text my friend. I don't like using cell phone because I'll get lazy to do work. Without using phone I have responsibility of doing homework and classwork. One day we were doing a group project, so one of my partner was using phone and he was listening to the music. The teacher told us to share it with the class and give some more details while explaining. Three of us did what the teacher told us to, but the guy who used phone, he had no idea what to do then he got F for that assignment.

Second reason why students should not be using cell phones because they won't pay attention to what the teacher is saying. It will create a big problem because teacher will get tired of explaining and none of the students will listen to her. Even I will stop paying attention because I will start watching my favorite TV show. Only few students will pay attention because they must have their parent's pressure, without that I can guarantee that no one will do what the teacher is telling them. Without paying attention to the teacher while she is giving instruction for the class will make students fail the class.

Third reason why school should not allow students to use cell phones because they won't do their work. If I know that I can use my phone then I won't do anything because I get too lazy to do it. Without doing homework or classwork students will get F and it will harm them after graduating high school. When I was a junior, I was using my phone in the chemistry class while doing a lab. By mistake I dropped chemical on my phone then I lost my phone because it stopped working and when I went home I told the whole story to my parents, they got mad at me. They said, ""how can you be so irresponsible and why you used your phone while doing a lab thats why you have bad grades in the class and so on.""

As you have read, using cell phones in the classroom is not a good idea because many students will stop working. They won't do anything because students are addicted to their phones. Using cell phone is not beneficial because we lose the ability of working and focusing. Using phone won't make anyone smart, if they focus on doing work or listen to teacher that will make them smart and responsible people. Education is the key of success and taking that key will make you work hard.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
13A94BBE2B24,"Imagine every time you look at the clock, it is time to dismissal, but you are still in school and doing tones of extra work. This is usually the time that you are in your sports practice or music lesson, or even relax at home and watching TV. However, things are different now. you lost the option to go home after the normal school time, because the school is extending the school day hours. It is not fair for the student to force them to stay any longer than the regular school time, it can simply miss up the whole plain of students' after school activities. The school should not extending the school hours, because student might have activities and practice after school, and it is the right for students to choose to stay in school when the school is ended.

For example, I have a lot of after school activities, and I always schedule them by looking at the time where school ends. I usually have music lesson right after school, it will be not convenient for me If the school hours are extended. I have to reschedule them, and decides with my private teacher. I might not have the time for the class because my private teacher and I are both very busy. The extending of school hours have the possibility to make me not taking the music lessons,because the conflict of the time. It is absolutely not worth it because , none of the new stuff will be taught in the extended hours, and we will most likely have more homework than usual. If we have more homework and more hours at school, our grade will most likely decrease because since many activities are squeezed to a short chunk of time, we will have less time to do our homework.

In addition, It should be optional for students to stay on after school sections. However, there are people who have very few after school activities, and they are welling to stay in school. That is why school have after school sections.

Instead of extending normal school time, we should let students to go on after school sections because it is better for the student to manage their own time and it is more beneficial for them. Students can stay in school for two hours every day in the week after the normal school time. There are many options for students to choose. Students can choose to study with a teacher in certain subject or work in the library if they want to study. Students can also go to the gym and play sports or even join a club like drama. Any options that students choose is benefit for them because they are learning in different kinds of way which might be more helpful than their regular class. It is clear that when students have trubble or issue in a subject, it is better for them when they come to the teacher one on one after school, because it is easier for them to understand the problem and it is easier for the teacher to only explain to one person.

Over all, it is a bad diction to extending the school time. It will not help or benefit the students and it is a wast of time for the students. It more better for student that they go to their practice and after school activities or go to any after school sections. The student will be more beneficial and more welling to learn than go to their regular class for an extra one and a half hour. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E312449DF480,"I think, first impressions are more effected than other events. Because first reactions are usually hectic. We will not know until we feel something. Somehow, recollections can give you positive or negative effects. If a person had a bad impression, it can gives you anxiety, which is a person needs to get help about negative satiation. It doesn't matter how bad or how good the impressions are, it is important how people get effect.

Second, I remember when I was first grade in elementary school, I did not want to go to the school. It was the first day I wanted to stay at home. On that day, I was a little bit bored, I took the big pillows from armchairs then put them together. I was trying to jump from the pillows to the other sofa. The first time I jumped it was successful. After a moment my mom caught me. I was kind of scared, she told me it was dangerous, and I can hurt myself with that.

After she left, I put the pillows together like I did it before, then I jumped to the wall. The walls corner was really sharp, and I hit to the wall. I realized I hurt my self so bad. Then I went to my mom, I was holding my head and crying. She was so mad at me, then I took my hands off from my head, it was bleeding so much. She called my dad, then we went to the hospital.

In conclusion, I agree the reactions, impressions are impossible to change the consequences. It is really important what people felt or lecture extract.  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
CDABA09822C7,"I my opinion the Minister Winston Churchill its right, because to learn something you need to see it not just of the success fool side. You need to learn of the mistakes too.

The problem of someone how never has experimented the failure, is that when this happen its going to be more pain fool that someone how has that experience.

Imagine a pro football player and he never in hes life lost, and for the first time in his career lose: he is going to suffer more and maybe get in depression because he never experiment the feeling of lose. But the football player how has hes loses and didnt stop and keep fighting if he lose now he know what is the feeling, he is more prepared.

You need to feel what is loss, its going to make you a more prepared person, who knows what you want and how to do it, but you cant surrender you need to all ways keep going; is your life, your goals, your decisions and no one cant stop you.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
9F1CC7603B64,"I agree about that some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, the students can would benefit. One of the reasons are that I think this can be a more easy way for students to learn is because they cannot be distract to anothers students, so they can work with tranquility. Another reason is that the students can save a lot of time working online at home, because they don't need wait for the bus, or walk directly at the school.

For example, if you work at home, you don't need permission to use the bathroom, because you're at home, so you can use the bathroom anytime. Another example is that some times work in the school can be so noisily, also can be uncomfortable, but if you prefer to work online you get not problems because you can be more focus in your work, and also you can feel more comfortable working online.

Another example about why I think that working online is more benefit for students, is because they can have all the recourses, and tools necessary to work, also you cannot be feel bad about if you don't finish a test ,or a quiz at time in school, working online you ge all the necessary time to complete a test ,or a quiz, you can more time to do your homework, also you can eat everything that you want working online, in the school you cannot eat on classes time.

In conclution, working online is a more easy way for students to learn than working at the school, because had a good help and a lot of good reasons, and also a lot of good benefits. That's what I think that working online or video conferencing is a more easy way to lear for the students, and also I think is a big opportunity too.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
FF197A6B15B2,"Dear Principal my thoughts about having phone's in school i think you should let students use phone in their own spar time because they don't use it during class and its not fair that most teachers at the school can use them during teaching it is a big distraction when the phone goes off during a test or some important project, but it well help if you let the student use their phone so they can plan their day by letting their parent know where there going after school or other events like school activities like soccer, basketball, and other great stuff the school has provide for all the students.

The big idea about this is trust the students can not use their phone when ever if the students don't follow the rules you can stop phone use but, give it a try and see how well it works out for you but, make you do the right choice or have a vote for the whole school that's how it all work in the U.S. do what's best for your school.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
6D114CB7EBB3,"The Character of beyone my control it take influence to make it right. This prompt support that i am able to have my own character. The british naturalist is right because people make bad chooice sometime it dosen't mean they are bad. My character will show that how much i can do the right thing. Influence beyond control your mind but it mean you have to strong and kind to other. I control myself to do bad and good things i can only control me and my action that can be a issue. I make misstake and l can learn from my own mistack that are right. This is also supports how i act to other and be truth to myself. Sometime you don't have to be selfish but their many selfish human being that do the wrong things and they know what they doing even that were wrong. I tell myself that you are not perfact but doing the right things that isn't issue but the issue is when people take it wrong way and you can't do or said anythings. If i really things about that what is my character i'll able to said that i am not perfact but i do the right things and i care about other people feeling may hurt by me and action and influence that i can control myself to not make misstakes that i'll regrade later. i support that my character is influence because i control myself and the rest of is you body do the rest in science that are study knowledge about human body but it's nothing to do with this but your character tell you how to choose and be youself. Sometimes i am not proude of who i am but it's not about who you are it about what you do and and what you said. I can control myself to do the right thing and their many teenager that dosen't know how to be yourself because it takes lots of controling your character. Your character tell you to support your respond to other that you choose away you can control yourself. My character will show that how much i can control myself to be myself and not to be the person that other want me to be. I can't give up i have to be postivie to myself and other and not to things nagative went i have to thing postivie to myself. I do agree with this quote because my character will be what i can just be myself and choose the right thing to make it right. My character makes me who i am now even went i wasn't my self. My pass what make me more strong and to be brave to control my self to choose make it all the way. It wasn't easy i work really heard to be the person that i am now my jerueny the reasons that i know how to be able to controling my self. Life isn't easy to know everything you have to thougt your self to live in this world there many people even don't know what is to be able to love yourself and do the right thing. The Britesh naturalist and politician and John Lubbock wrote this quote and i do believe that i can control what i said and i also control what are my action are that not usless to me because it's importan to me by influence beyond control take a position on this issue. For example i did losed control went i am not thinking postivie and choosing to be nagative that's why people need to know how to be able to control them self. Thinking postivie is't force it's come by influences and the people you around with not always the you round with their know how to control them sefl but it is not them that you can't depond on you have to learn your own and not all people are bad to hanging out with. I believe that one person can change the whold world just by their bravery and thinking postivie to them self i may not be prefact but i know how to control myself just by thinking postivie and think before i said or do anythigs. Some teen that are don't know how to control them self but you really don't have to know how to control your self they're many reasons influence that control youe self that you don't have control over what you have is you control you i know went i frist nocite that i have to make everything right but it is not what i have change it is what i am. Character influence beyond and it takes many reasons to be able to do the right thing i support that influence do control our character that we have and it make it more hearder to believe that i know what is the right and wrong thing as the time goes but my responds has to be the same i can't not change what other people do or said but what i can do is just be myself and think postivie that what makes it my character right. Character formed by influence beyond my control i do have many ressons to support this prompt do i choose my own character formed that is real by influences beyond control that i have over myself is my action and my thoughts that able to do the right thing as my character choose to be make it right. John Lubbock was right i do control my character formed by influences beyond that my brain tells me to do. it is positible to my character will be what me and myself choose to make it right, my responds with this prompt that is i can control my character will be show as i think postivie and do the right thing to improve my self that i can control my to be make it thru all the way as i'm useing character formed by influences beyond. I can control my actions and my thoughts that will not hurting other but if they're someone is not nice to me i can just use my postivie thought and postivie mind to control my nagaitve thoughts and use my postivie thoughts not to be bad as their to me. I do also support this prompt i am controling myself to be the person that i am and not to be the person that what other people want you to be. My influences that control my action that i am able to do the right thing and think postivie as same time my undestaning one anouther that support that what other may feel. I choose to make it right because that is who i am and it make me more stronger every time i am controling my action and that may not be the problam as the respond stay the same ans iam supporting this because i also do believe in myself that i do really can think postivie and do the right things by influence beyone my control.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
C6CAFAC5589F,"A enjoyable way to spend outdoors it will be to go with your bike specially in summer you can get to even see places like stores, the river, birds and the cars an you cant take a food and have a picnic. You get to see other people too that they are with bike or you can buy food when while you are riding with your bike and get to a store too. While you are rididng with your bike you can see to really famous places like could be a musemoun or a a restaurant and see people in those places and when your riding with your bike you can go wherever you want its amazing that get to see reallly beatiful places, While you with bike you get to see a river and people taking picture of it. And get to see place like zoo and see beatiful flowers or whilw your wuth your bike you get to see people with their too that they like it too by going out with their bike. Its a enjoyable activies their its fun you get to see a lot beatiful places like store and or you get to see places famous stores and you get to going while your with the bike and its an amazing activies you get and you get to see lot of things while your riding with your bike. and by riding your bike you could feel exited.

Its an enjoy activies because you get to see places and you you ge to take a food and if you would like and you get to go whit your kid in the bike and you get to see different place or you can take your own food and while riding your bike and you can take your friends too to go out with the bikes and will be more relly fun and you get to have picnic with them and your family whoever you woul like to take while your going rididng whith the bike or you get to see desigh on places like beatiful art and you coul enjoy that activity while your discovering different places and get to know more about it.",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
D940E4357737,"It has been said that positive attitude is the key to life but other people think otherwise. Due to the lack of happiness people get depressed, sad and lonley. Having a positive attitude all the time would only make things worse cause you don't always have the best days. Someone can tell you bad news, like someone dying, you can't be positive during someones death, especially if its someone close to you. Having a positive attitude all the time is not the key to life. If it was then why do so many people have to get hurt in our day and age. Imagine a heart break, loving someone for so long but them leaving you just cause they didn't want to date you anymore. People are going to be positive after they've broken up with someone they been with for so long. That's why Being positive isn't they key to life, if it was the key to life then why do so many bad people live on this earth, and want to do bad thing to others just living the're lives. Being that you could have a happy life is possible but you will always come across obsticles that you can't just be positive about and not caring for. Would't you be misserable if you had a positive attitude all the time, always looking happy and never looking down. Something can always happen in any moment at anytime in you're life. That's when everything crashes down on you and falls on your lap. In cunclusion, having a positive attitude is not the key to life because you will always have a gloomy day and there won't be an escape then.",3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
E96C0F9CE5E3,"True self-steem come from praise,praising someone for at least try to do their best built self confident. However,deficient work always need new ideas from experts and people that know about the topic,another praise given, can be tips, to get a work better next time.

Praising someone for their effort of trying to get a adecuated work done ,let them know that get better each day, its a opportunity, that they can make. When a student is self-confident, is less insecured with every step that they make and can keep going without tryng to go back to were they have started. Give away some ideas,tips and reasons to improve their self with a second chance. Sometimes people have no self confident and help then to built one,can be a really good praise, not apreciate someone else effort ,to make a really hard task for them, can give the impression of being a bad person or a person that does not want them to improve.

Others believe that praise given to deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. They believe that the source of self-steem is achievement. That being hard and strict with students would make them strong to commite their task.

Student's can broke easily, help them find a good way to improve is being a good teacher,praise them for mistakes but still telling them one way to keep going.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
3BEF322748A1,"Imagine that you got a project in your college and in that project you have to interact with different people and you have to write about their lives, but now you will be thinking that it is really difficult project to do because in all those previous years of high school all you did was to avoid people.

Some people believe that technology saves your time as you can buy or sell things online. However, so much use of technology effect your eyes and brain in a negative way.

Therefore, usage of technology should be made less and people should interact with each other more, because the more friends you will have the less you will go in the depression.

Use of technology have a lot of negative effects on people's lives. Too much use of technology weakens your communication skills with other people. Recently it has been said that there are some kind of radiations on your phone and other electronics which affects your brain and body in a negative way. Too much use of phones, laptops and television can weak your eye sight making it difficult for you to see.

Some people say that technology can be used for different kind of resources . On the other hand, it can also leads you towards the cyber crime which is really bad for you, because if you are caught once doing that crime the rest of your life you will be in jail.

Now a days, if you will go outside, in many places you will see that there will be friends or family sitting on the same table but no one is talking with each other, everyone is on their devices.

There are many people in today's world who do suicide or are in depression just because they think they have no one to whom they can talk and can share their problems.

For example, if there is some one is trying to talk to you and is trying to be your friend but you are busy in using your phone and the next day you came to know that the person who was trying to talk with you yesterday did suicide today because that person thought that he had no one to whom he can talk. So you will blame yourself and you will regret at that time for not talking with that person.

Hence, people should interact with each other more and more and they should try to know about each other life intead of using their devices all the time. People should spend more time with their families because not everything is found on Google,there are somethings which you learn by spending time with your family and your family will be the only one who will be with you every time, in your good and bad days, but your devices will not be with you and also they will not support you at that time.     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
F3E0762BFA43,"Some people say working alone is more benifical. Well I think working in a group is more benifical.

My first reason is it keeps you away from boredom. It keeps you away from starring at a wall for hours. And it keeps you away from sleeping in a class room. Its more helpful having someone to raise and boost your energy and being the confident person you are. Now days in a classroom were haveing 60 percentr on students being unsure about there answers and being unsure if they should even speak up. Being in a group helps you raise your voice. Manny Adult and students are suffering boredom and thats not healthy. Talking to your peers and being around people more keeps you away from depression. Making your self feel more confident about yourself shows who you really are its like the next step to being a risk taker. My second reason is you can talk and discuss with your group about your project or work together. Its more faster being in a group where you can actually discuss about your thoughts and idea and feeling more confident than ever. Having a partner check it look togerther for any mistake or errors. My final reason is you save lots of time for yourself. And not everyone is right. But creating these ideas from yourself and your group could make something turn out to be unthinkable. Being in a group makes your mind grow and learn new things and ideas from other people. Your having a good time with your friends and if not you meet new people that may become friends with you. You want to talk and move around and meet new people getting out. Not being shy or denying yourself wrong. Being in a group is like your bring peace in a table. I belive that everyone should try new things being in a groups and its okay if your wrong because there is no right answer. Being in a group helps you become bigger and bold about yourself your trusting you self and your classmate. I believe working in a group is more benificaial rather than working along cecking your self and thinking if your rong and feeling unpositive about yourself.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
12F2BF34883F,"I do agree wih Emerson's statement, because i've had past experiences where i did not know a thing but then i started to get better at it by practicing on what i wanted to get better at. There is this game that got really popular last year it was called fortnite and everyone was playing it, so I decided to download it and play it because it was free.

I was playing and did not know what I was doing I didn't know how to build or shoot or run i didn't even know where I was at , I started playing more often and got my first win with my friends and then I started learning how to build and strategies to get kills, but i honestly didn't like it so I stopped playing for a while and played different games that I liked more because this game seemed to childish for me to play. After a while my friends would tell me to play so I would but I got bored and played different games, then a new season came out on the game and I had money so I bought it and after that everything changed.

I really started to like it now because it had a good storyline and it was more fun, I knew how to play so I would just goof around then I really started to practice with my friends and decided to stop playing around we would fight one on one's to practice i would lose but i just kept going and going until I would get more kills now i've been playing for 7 seasons which is a very long time, seasons are usaually 60 to 80 days in the game they aren't like seasons in real life like spring or summer their like tv shows how they have new seasons and stuff like that.

Anyway I do agree Emerson's statement because on how much better at I got at the game and how long i've been plaiying and the experience I have in that game, I started out really bad at it than started getting better and better the more I practiced and played. Not only me though I know people who started out around the same time I did which was in season two and they were just as horrible as I was now it's season eight and some of them are even better than me.

I also agree with Emerson's statement because i used to fail in math since I was a little kid than last year when i was in 10th grade i had a good math teacher who would help me alot and after a lot of work and help that was the first time i passed math and also this year to had a teacher who do the same she helped me a lot and I passed that class too.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
D30614F0911F,"Some schools are considering the idea to offer distance learning for students to attend classes from home. Many students can benefit by considering this new idea for students to take classes from home by the way of online or videos. Although, many other students would not be agree with this idea.

In my opinion, I am not agree with the idea for students to attend classes from home. First, if the students are in their houses they would have more distraction, for example; they can get distracted by the food, many time food is a big distraction for students to concentrate in classes. They can also get distract because of the television, they can see something interesting in the TV and they would quickly get distracted. Also one of the biggest distraction for everyone is the cellphone. If a student is taking classes at home; no one would be responsible to tell him/she not to use their cellphones. Second, they would not take it seriously. They would feel free because they are in their houses. Sometimes they might take the classes; and sometimes they would not take them because no one would be telling them to do it. They would feel allow to do whatever they want because they would not have the rules like in a classroom. If the student is in a classroom; he/she receive more information, more examples, more attention, and more help. Every teacher has rules in their classrooms; rules that help students to be successful. And third

They would not be able to learn as much as they would in a classroom. They would not be able to ask questions and get the answer they would need. They would not receive as much attention as they need.

However, many students support the idea for students to attend classes from home. It can be considered a good idea for many students; because they would not be traveling from one place to another; it would safe them time. Also many times when there is a bad weather outside; many schools cancel classes; because they can't travel. And by considering this idea for students for students to attend classes from home would help them; because even if is raining or snowing, they will not cancel their classes. Therefore, many students agree with this idea because is not only going to safe them time; it would also help many students. Many students do not have transport. Sometime they have to walk or even pay so that they can go to school and attend to class. using the online program would give them a big support.

In conclusion, considering the idea for students to attend classes from home by the way of online or video can be a good or a bad idea for many students. I do not support this idea. Students should not attend to classes online or video. Students can get distracted easily by anything or anyone in their house. Many time studying at home give students many issues; there can be many people at home and too much noise that the student would not be able to concentrated and will get distracted. It can also happen that watching a video and that there's no one there to explain it; can make the students tire and he/she can fall sleep. Also, students will not take it seriously because there's not a teacher telling them and explaining them what to do. They would not receive as much education, information, and attention as they need. My position on this issue is to maintain the students attending to school. The students will learn more if they receive classes in school. Attend classes in a classroom with a teacher will provide students more support and it would help them in many ways to be successful in the future.      ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
14409A305AB3,"As a student, I can say there are a lot benefits for a student from being able to attend classes from home, is really convenience for a student that some schools offer distance learning as an option, every school should have that opportunity; it ca be helpful for a lot of students, is good for students that does not have a lot of time, so that help them to have a flexible manage of time, in some cases the student are more successful by taking the classes online.

For example if some students have to work , and because their work's schedule take them a lot of time or they have to work at night, they do not feel like waking up earlier in the morning, sometimes they start to getting late to classes, missing classes or missing all days of school, but if the student try to taking classes online can be really helpful for them; since they can have their schedule at their convenient, the opportunity or the facility of making up their on schedule according to their others activities.

Also when someone have to travel a lot for some reason, taking the classes online they do not have stay in the same place every time they are taking the classes, it dose not matter, they can take it anywhere they want, the only two things they need is a computer, and also to have internet connection, and thats it, they should be good with those two things or some people do not have that facility of moving of one place to other, they do not have the money to defray cost for the transportation, or is just to far away from their houses, so the classes online are a way to fix that problem.

There is a large percentage that the students that are taking or took classes online are or were going great, their are doing a successful work, they are being tempting to show more attention to their classes, a lot people say that they feel the classes easier, and also that is easier to study,

when the classes have videos they can put back the video over and over, when ever they want, how many times they want, where ever they want,if they want the teacher to do not talk fast or to do it they can regulate that also, they save a lot of money, because they do not have to spend a lot of money in materials, like for posters and things like that, they do not have to be with some people that distract them from the classes and is also faster to get the classes done.

So how is showed the opportunity that some schools bring them is wonderful, it have a lot of benefits for us, like some students are more successful taking the classes online, so much students are interested in the classes online, feel like is better for them so that way they can be taking classes and doing other things, they just have learn how to manage their time; people that work can do their classes at morning and go work at night, they can have a flexible schedule.",4.0,2.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
D779EEB6F8BC,"The school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school, students can't work for to long because they will get tired, and students need enough time to be out of school and have fun.

The school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school. There are many students who take after school clubs and activities. They should have enough time to prepare their self's for the activity they are doing. If the school decides to add one and half hour than the students will have hard time focusing on their activities. Therefor, the school board should let students have time to go home and practice and get done whatever they need to.

Next, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because students can't work for too long because they will get tired. It's enough for students to be at school for about 8 hours but if the hours increase than the students will be extremely tired. They won't have enough time to finish their homework and they won't have enough time to do their house work. The students will feel exhausted in school and will be to tired to do school work. So the school board should not increase school hours each day.

last, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school because the students need some time to be out of school and have fun. Students will be stressed out for being in school for to long. They should go to fun places after school to get their mind of out of stressful things and have a great time with their friends. If they stay in school for extra hours than their brain won't be functioning that good. Therefor, the school board should not increase school hours each day.

In conclusion, the school board should not add one and a half hour to school each day because most students have stuffs to attend after school, students can't work for to long because they will get tired, and students need enough time to be out of school and have fun. It's enough for students for being at school for almost 8 hours. If the school board adds more hours than it will be difficult for students to handle all the school work.         ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
C37595A8AE16,"People have different skills. Some people have different skills In their own way your are special. Like practecticin,be pation and loaning a tik tok dance.

Practicing is important because. One example is when I learn how to play soccer. The person that teach me was my cousin Im still bad but Im learning. Another Example would be when

I learn how to bould on fornite. I learn how to bould and sauces by my cousin. Lastly when I learn how to aim on fornite. I learn because of my cousin and he teach me how. Learning a skill Is better then not to.

Being pation Is good for you for example. One time when I was trying to bould hard thing on fornite and it didn't work so i got mad. But then I tried doing net part by part and I got what I wanted. Another example would be I was Inpatient of swimming on deep water. But then I learn how to swim on deep water. When I wanted to go on a water park I was inpatient. But I learn be pation Is good. I was waiting then got in the park and it was fun. In some cases Is better to be pation then not to.

Loaning a tik tok daced for me Is a skill. For example one dace would when I made my own dance. It was easy and I lorn. Another example would be a hard danced. I tried to duet but it was to hard so I quit. Lastly would be A danced that was hard but

I did step by step and I enjoyed. Loaning can sometimes be fun.

Practecsin is the way to success. An example would be a hard assignment that I did and it was hard. Second would be pattion when I need to. For example when I play to much games Im pattion and not getting mad. Lastly learning fun skills. Hard daces can be challenging but once I lornet it was fun. Doing all of this thing made my skills useful In life and Im happy that I now all of this skills.     ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
CEC6870D564F,"Hi, These is Generic_Name. In my opinion is a good idea the school allowing students to have and use cell phones in classrooms.

First, at all student can use cell phone for any emergency or use the Google translation because sometimes is take minutes to find out in the dictionary. Also, because in some schools Student can't have access to use computer.

Second, Sometimes teachers put some worksheet or order tints to do in Google classroom and we have to do by using a computer and sometimes computer gate very slow and we can do by use cell phone device is sly.

Third. We know some student use cell phone for bad propose like to no't pay attention in class or make bulling other classmate. But, I think if the Schools use different methods like to block some app for example Snapshot or other student use to bulling.

finally, It's convenient to use cell phone in class special wen the teacher is to busy and we can use the cell phone to gate information about math or any other class.

In conclusion,

base in that is necessary to use a cell phone for any emergency. We can finding word that we don't known by using Google translation. It is good to use cell phone for education purposes.                         ",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
915D8BF74963,"Is it good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? For example, I got a academics scholarship into George Mason. With that scholarship I earned and worked so hard I could have a high chance of becoming a banker or someone who runs money and I been committing to this career from 8th grade. Knowing and committing to a career puts you on a very a head spot in life and also on what you want to become.

First off, having a head start of knowing what career you want in High School puts you on a spot that you're a head. People who don't know what careers they want, gives them a struggle because when you get to College or finish High School they would be in a position of not knowing what to do after. The stress will build up, over thinking, anxiety, give up, depression, and lastly the most important going to the wrong path. But people who know what career they want in High School will be ready for what college they should go to, what classes to take, after college they'll be applying to jobs, and lastly, doing something they always wanted to become or do since High School. For example, I have a friend who just turned 20, He always told me about what career he wanted to do and his plan after High School. A year ago, I asked him about his career and plan. He already has a job of what he wanted since High School but at the age of 19 and also told me he was thankful for staying with the career he always wanted and never gave up. He also told me, It wasn't easy to become what he wanted and no matter what if you want something, keep pushing and never give up because soon you'll be proud or yourself.

Secondly, The stress of committing a career from High School is less than not having one. People who already know what they want to become or do will have their challenges because it wont be easy to getting up there. For example, people who already know what they want will face tests, projects, public projects, quizzes, finals, and etc. But that's only what they have to face. For the people who don't know what they want to do, will start worrying about what they want to do, stressing over why they didn't think of a career in High School, over thinking, and etc. It's better if know what you want to become early than late because it could waste your time if you start late instead of starting early or on time.

Lastly, having to learn different careers is good, but it'll some times be confusing, over whelming, stress, anxiety, and etc. But just knowing one career you'll be able to focus on that specific career. Trying to push yourself passing those limits, making yourself you can do it, never giving up, and reaching your goal. Having to learn many careers is very good, because you know a lot and a high chance of getting many jobs. But learning and staying one career is better because you will know what to do in a mil of a second. People would want to hire you because how fast and hard worker you are. It's better to have a head start from everyone than being last.

Therefore, knowing and commting to one career puts you on a very good spot. For example having a head start, less stress involved, and lastly choosing you love since High School. Finally, these are the reasons why it is a good idea for students in High School to commit to a career at a young age. So what, are you going to commit to a career at a young age because time is clicking and soon it'll be too late. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
B0CDBB24465F,"The city council should adopt a 10 P.M wwekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. Teenagers would be more responsible for themselves. They would have less risk to be out in the streets late night. Also, parents would stress less if they theyre child came home early. Eventhough it interferes with there young life.

Teenagers would get used to being home early. They would enjoy more time with there familys. Also, play video games with there friends online. Teenagers wouldnt miss out of dinner made by there family.

Teenagers would stay out of trouble. They could be stopped from doing bad late night and coming home. The teenagers parents would see them come home everyay and not have to worry about them. Teenagers would out of trouble from the police only if they dont pass there curfew.

For teenagers to actually go home before there curfew. Cops have to be involed and check the streets for teenagers roaming around after there curfew. If there are teenagers out in the street after there curfew, they should in trouble. It should be law for them to come home to there parents early and not be roaming around in the streets.

Adopting a 10 P.M weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers would risk less trouble and deaths for them. Students would really benfit them for getting home early. If would benefit them for a job that they would have to get early too. Also, they would have time to do there homework or work they have to do. Finally, they would have time to spend with there faamily and see them again.     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
4967076F4E7F,"I don't think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because when students coming home, they need to do the homework first. Maybe that's day some people have a lot of homework so they couldn't attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. If they could open some video of online then I think some students can''t watching whole video. Because when I finish my homework, I feeling so tired and I just want go to my bedroom or play game, message, Facebook, ... I guess that's habit all students because almost students doesn't wanna be work too much and parent will be for son or daughter spend time for favorite like soccer, bamboo, ukulele, ... If the students might relaxing then I think they will learning better and faster.

Some parent want my son or daughter go to the bedroom early. Because parent can control them easy, example like some students will say I still do home work on the Laptop, but they playing game with friends. The best way is for students go to sleep early. If your might for students sleep early, It really good for eyes and healthy because one young people can sleeping enough eight our every night, you can feel comfortable for star learning better new day. And if you don't sleeping enough, you can't learning anything at school because you always sleeping in classes and teachers always say ''wake up, wake up''. It not good for you and teachers. And when you go home, time for sleep but you don't feel sleep because you sleeping in classes too much. That's why you don't feel want to sleep, and today to tomorrow to whole life, you still don't want to sleep early. Maybe that will be become the cycle in your bad life, If you don't wanna change your style.

I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home is not good. Because when parents coming home, they need talking, do something or have a dinner with family. It's will be better you do a lot homework. If you have dinner every night, you will have a lot of conversation with your wife or daughter, Since you will be know what your family want and your sentiment with family will be better and better.

When students learning online or video at home, maybe they don't understand what video say and if they have a question, what teachers they will ask ? And if everybody have a question to asked teachers, the teachers can't responded the question too much for students. If students waiting for tomorrow go to school, maybe students will be forgot the question they want ask right now.

I think students need learning at school better learning at home. Because one people one idea, that's mean have a lot of answers your guess and you will be know the best the answers from teacher. It'll be helping you how to do work team. Work team so important with students because in your future, labor need you know how to work together. If you know how to work, you will be become the manager or boss. If I work with teachers, maybe I will better for my way.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
BD8683F93B5A,"Dear Generic_Name

I understand that you are considering the benefits of working with a group or working alone. This could be a big deal depending the class because the majority of students prefer to work alone, we should use some of the time that we have in class to vote and see what students want, but i agree with the idea of working with a group for two reasons: we can devide the work and you get to talk to other students while their working.

First reason is that it feels like we do get the enough time to work, when we get to work with groups everything gets a lil bit more easy because there is less work to do, and if they decide to work alone, you would notice that they are going to have more problems completing the assignment, while the other studens that are working in group they would find this assignment more easy, so the way the teacher don't have to spend to much time with only one student.

Second reason is that they should not have problems finding the information because while some of them are writing the other students should it be serching for anwsers, for example, students that are working alone they would find this a lil bit harder because they have to do the writing and searching part by them self. The best part of working with a group is that the work can be finished a lot faster and they can have more time to recheck the work and make sure that you are not missing anything in blank.

Also, there is a lot of benefits of working with a group or working alone, but its clear that those students are not going to work with other students because they say that they don't like to be talking to other students, that they prefer to work alone, but anyways the teacher should be agree with this, thats how she would know if you need more help with the assignment then other students.

I strongly believe that working with a group could be the best choice for students because they are not going to spend to much time doing the assignments, so you could work with someone and devide the work wich positively affects, therefore, we must try it and see what benefits can we get from this and voting could be a good idea to decide if students would like to work in group.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
FAF6B6E4DFF4,"Thomas Jefferson used wrote,'' Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.'' It is a moral,people always doing things to achieve their life goals. As a person,we all have something want,it can be easy or impossible to get base on how much you have. In this realistic world,since we are born,we only can choose one lifestyle which is always doing something. This world needs useful person,mutually people always doing things for a more comfortable life. Different people have different life,one thing in common is they all have something must to do. For example,students are working hard on learning new knowledge for a good grade on the tests,employers are working hard for a higher income to feed their families...even the boss is working hard to expand his/her companies. Most people are busy the whole life. I believe if you really want to do something,no matter how hard it is and you are always doing it,you can accomplish your goal and have a ''surprising gift''. Life is fair,whether you are poor or unhealthy,It always take care of hardworking one. On the other hand,what can we do if we determine to be idle? That will be extremely boring. I cannot image if I just sit on the bench a whole day and doing nothing, it is like a waste of time,a waste of life. However,inactivity also serve some purposes;Such as rest. But that's all I can think about. In my point of view,people are like the ants,they work together to make their home better. Basically,people always doing things whether they want or not. This is how the world functioned.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
A2CAB9C551B9,"""I would identify you playing an online game such as cahoot, coolmath, and theres lot of other games you could play online that will help you learn something. The thing is the games are fun to play and are educational. Examples would be Cahoot is this game where you and your classmates play the teacher gives questions and whoever gets the most right wins at the end of the game sometimes the Teacher might give you a reward for winning. There is also coolmath it's not one particular game but its a website with tons and tons of games you can play math games there really fun.

The games are fun because you get to play with your friends and specially on cool math there is this one game where your a cube and you have to run and theres levels it helps you with geometry. ""I would say lots of people that go to public schools have played that game because it's just that popular and fun. Especially cahoot every kid that attends a public school has played this game either to study or just have some free time.

""Im not just saying you have to play games to have fun while being educational but it does really help a person out some kids would just rather maybe get a book or do the work straight up and thats also good but sometimes you could enjoy playing games and those games are enjoyable and help you learn to ""I really suggest them. But there are other things like doing a science experiment you could find interesting things that you never knew before, also playing an instrument ""if you enjoy music thats really fun you can learn how to play a instrument,You could also be in a play if you like acting anything that fits your interest and is educational you should try it.

"" I also identified math , chest , and science fairs. First we will talk about Math , when your good at math and want to compete against other students or just learn more and be good at math there usually pretty fun when you finally get to know all that stuff its a great experience.

""Now we will talk about chest , chest itself is a really fun board game you have to use your brain to make good plays and focus on what your doing why its fun is when you become good at the game or already are it gets easy and enjoyable. You can win money from chest if your competing for your school or maybe a team they have tournaments and you can win money which is great because everyone wants some type of money.

""Last one science fairs making volcanoes erupt, making just in total something amazing which you can show your whole school thats pretty cool. Why its enjoyable is because when you make something cool your peers around you get to see it and if your good at stuff like that you will most likely enjoy it.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
A10E91E49973,"Yes, I do believe that imagination is important more than our knowledge. Albert Einstein is recognized as the most brilliant person who has ever lived. He used his imagination more than his knowledge, which made him accomplish so many things. He imagined things first, then used his knowledge to make that happen. If we couldn't imagine things, it would've been difficult for anyone to invent something or do a lot of things. All the inventors, who has invented things first used their imagination to create an image on their mind to see how it will look like, which helped them to make the item. Imagination helps us to accomplish our goal. It shows us what we can do to achieve it. Imagining helps us in many ways.

I always think or imagine before I do something big. I always imagine before making a choice or decision because I do not know how it will turn out. Sometimes some people think its funny and laughs that imagination can't come true but I do believe that no matter how hard is to accomplish my success, I will always try. My parents always tells me to imagine what I truly want to be when I grow, which is amazing. I think many parents are strict and tells their children to stop imagining things and always study, which I believe education is very important but telling someone to stop imagining is not quite right, Once I read in a article where it said that imagining thing is a natural habit and you will imagine things unless you have disability or blindness.

Once I also read a article that says that according to physcology imagining things is important for our brain . We imagine things everyday. When we are imagining things or just thinking, it helps to improve our brain. Scientist always has a prediction or imagines before doing an experience because they don't know what is going to happen. That helps them to be prepared so that if something happens their going to be ready for it. Albert Einstein had a an amazing knowledge also he believed that imagination is important, which made him be a successful person. There are so many celebrities, who wrote a quote about how imagining helped them achieve their goal. For example Taylor swift always imagined that shes going to be a singer when she was young and now she is a singer. Sometimes people can use imagination in a bad way like imagining to rob a bank but its not good, but they need to think deeply how it can affect them.

If you also don't use your knowledge can't succeed because you have to use imagination and knowledge to succeed, you have to use both. I will always remember this quote.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
97167C9DC677,"Do people accomplish more if they are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. In activity does serve a purpose by showing maturity; however, people accomplish more if we are doing something. People accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence, it shows determination, and it shows progress towards their goals.

Firstly,people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence. In a everybody lives or in today's era, everyone wants to achieve greatness, but by achieving greatness people often or need to start from the bottom of their league or what I like to call ""THE CASTLE STANDARD"". In The Castle Standard each have their own class their, the bottom league is the beginner class, the middle is the amateur class, and the highest class is The Hall of Fame class AKA HOFC. Each person start from the bottom to get to the top, by starting from the bottom they can show higher authorities what they are capable off. For example, there was a movie called The Pursue of Happiness, the people in the movie was Will Smith and his son. The movie was about how a man, who worked at a business company as a mere employee, he and his son was kicked out of the apartment and they were homeless, they were trying to find a new home, so they started to live in a homeless shelter, but that didnt stop Will Smith from going to work. He went to work even though he was homeless. They authorities he worked with knew his situation, and they knew his dedication to his dedication to the company,so they decided to make him CEO of the company. In the end he got higher paid he was of the greatest CEO in the company and he was able to get a new house for him and his son. Furthermore people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence.

Secondly, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows determination. People often shows determination, once they set their mind doing something they personally want to achieve or accomplish. In people mindset have something they want like, saving up money to buy an expensive item or staying on task to get a promotion at your work place. Determination is also one of the characteristics of positive attitude that leads people a success in life. There also shows determination when they are trying to reach their goals in what they want to become in their future. For example, the movie I used in the first paragraph The Pursue of Happiness. Will smith even though he had a situation which he was homeless, he had job at the company and he was in a huge situation with the company. The situation was they wanted to fire him to give him time to set his life or plan his life with his son, since he was homeless and they are living in the homeless shelter. He showed determination to the job and gave them a huge reason why the should keep him at the company. because he solved the companies huge problem which almost led the company to bankrupt, so the authorities decided to keep him in the company and give him promotion and a huge check to be able to sustain his daily life with his son. I believe that people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows determination.

Lastly, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows progress towards their goals. In everyone life has goal, there is no human being in this Earth who doesnt have a goal. The goal can start from High school or middle school or somewhere were people have been brought out by their culture. In every goal there is a purpose why that person is setting that goal, maybe it could be huge reason like impressing your family or following your idol and so on, but by setting your goals people often need to plan how they can achieve that goal. For example, in TC Williams High School my goal is to join the Airforce, but by doing that I needed to take specific subjects that can help me or give me the experience towards my goal. I had to take Aerospace, JROTC, physics, and this was kind of personal ,but I had to take PE/Fitness for a physic body structure, so that I wont be weak,fat or plumply when I join the Airforce. So I had to take step by step or take my time to accomplish my goal. Furthermore, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows progress towards their goals.

In conclusion, people accomplish more if they are doing something because it shows they are striving for excellence, it shows determination, and it shows progress towards their goals. Also by stating you rmind on what you want to do people can make remarkable or impossible things that might shocked the world. I think the right thing to do is for people to accomplish more if they have set their mind on something extraordinary or even more enhance.    ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
EFBD506FC8F2,"Select me to visit your company It would be a great opportunity to learn more about this job, but also is going to help me to have better skills in what I do. I could easily write about my six years of experience in this area, and you would see that I could ""qualify"" for this visit, but I don't want you to select for those reasons; working in a TV Production company has always been my dream since I was a kid.

I was a little girl with a lot of energy, goals and really confident about myself, I enjoyed being in presentations, ceremonies or anything about being in front of the public. I kept growing, and a lot of people thought that I was going to forget about all this crazy dream to be in TV, but it wasn't like that, my interest was increasing more and more; I was still in my country, Generic_City, when I went for my first time to a news channel, the principal of my school in that moment selected me to make a commercial about a festival that we had, I'm not going to lie, I was scared and really nervous, but once I touched the microphone, I forgot all my fears, the employees of that place were so surprised, they told my teacher, ""how a 13 years old little girl can have a lot of talent? The way that she speaks make It see it so natural and easy to do it""

I would never forget those words, because It was there, when I realized, that all this was for me, ever since that one day, my principal asked me to do all the commercials for the school.

Two years later I had to move to a different school, and I had a big surprise, this school had way more opportunities to be successful in this area; the owner of the school saw my potential in the way I speak, and yes, he asked me to do every ceremony and commercials during the whole school year. But that was not enough for me, I wanted to learn more, so I stared to used professional cameras and make homemade videos to practice a little big more; that same year my family decided to move to the United States. I was really sad, no only for my family and friends, also, I didn't know If coming to America would change my dream,

everything was different, traditions, school and most important, the language. This change was not going to change what I like to do, I stared taking this class called: ""TV and Media Production"" and I felt like coming back to home, everything that I love to do, was right there, I learned how to editing videos, how to record professionally and take all I know, to a whole different level; couples moths in this country and I already had the opportunity to being in different news channels,video for the school and they loved how I did it, and I don't have to think a lot to know that this is what I want to as a career.

These are just some of the reasons why you should select me to visit and learn more about your company, I know you may have more applications of students with better grades and experience than me, but no all of them have the passion and enthusiast that I have, because this wouldn't be just a job, I would be a the biggest accomplishment for me.",4.0,2.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
B3241FAB44C9,"A homework club is a great opportunity for students who have a difficult time understanding their work. Sometimes work can be hard and not everyone can understand it. Homework clubs can help students understand their work better and have more confidence with it.

The homework club would have to start at the end of the day when everyone has their homework,the club can be from 3:00pm to 5:00pm that way students have 2 hours to get their work done and have time to chill out at home.

I am sure that many other people agree that we should have a homework club. We all know this would be a great opportunity for students that have a difficult time understanding their work.

Homework clubs can also help students improve grades which will then lead to higher test scores all because students will get extra help and have someone who will help them understand their work better. I am sure that starting a homework club will lead students in a great path to success and wealth.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
D06EDF336392,"A city council is debating for the adoption of the curfew for teenagers. That create an enormous positives and negatives reactions the rabble who is for the curfew and who disagree this and said we are in a free country. This laws prohibit to see a teenager on the street at 10 P.M weekday and midnight weekend. In this prompt we will show the reason why the curfew can be a marvelous benefit for teenagers and keep them out of trouble.

In beginning, the decision is reassuring for the parents. For example, when the parents know where their children are that can help them to stay calm. Because sometime we have a parent suffering from high blood pressure and don't know where their children are can affect them. In this case, parents are the main piece of the education of children. When the parent stay at home with their children that can help them to planning the schedule of the sleeping period to be the optimal version of parent of their children. If this case, parents can have a few control into the life of their children. the idea there is to leave a parent with their children to help them to be close and to know each other. Because we have a french proverb what said ""Tell me who do you walking with and I will tell you who are you?"" And the best people for approve your friend and answers us the fabulous question ""Who are you?"" Is our parents.

Furthermore, this law would reduce work of 911. Because everyone know that most of the crime are commit at night and that can not be the moment where we leave our teenagers outside. For example that will help the 911 to reduce call for emergency at night. Because we never know what can happen in a teenagers party, they can do a prank call challenge, they can have a fire in party, or they can fight. In other case, the law can heaven preserve them from eventual aggression in the minor. We do not know who the people who walk in our street and their mentality. We have immensity and variety of people in our street like drugs dealer, a daring, and a rabble we do not go to let our children walking in this environment at night. In this case, the law can decrease a criminality rate in the street. Because teenager are the principal target of people in the street because they are easily influenced. This easily influenced can associate them with a sort of people disreputable.

In auditioning, the curfew can help a teenagers in their education. that can help teenager to study. Because the first priority of a teenager is school and they can have time for studying, that decision can create the future amazing men and women in the future for emergence of our city. In this case, that can help teenagers to sleep early. To have a fantastic performance in everything we doing, we need to have our eight hours of sleeping that is also the case of school. To have a marvelous performance at test and at class we need to sleep the time recommend by a specialist. In this case, teenagers can learn to be organize and responsible. Because the curfew can sharpen their sense of priority what is actually to back home before 10 P.M. And this sense of priority can help them to be a wonderful adult.

Finally,to sum up the situation, we saying our vision about the beneficial effect of the curfew in our marvelous city. The beneficial effect what can impact our the families situations, the local authority, the society and in school, or class. That rule can be very strict for some people, but that is after a long analyze the best way to put our teenagers safe. The curfew can assure the best future for the children in our city and

United State of America. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
6013DA298542,"Schools have partnered with local companies to let students explore the certain professions that local workplace perform the type of work you would like to pursue.

Many school pay to have a partnership with local companies some of the companies dont want to be patnershiped with the schools that are paying to be partnershiped with the company.

Sometimes local companies come to the schools and ask them to be partnershiped with the company some even ask for just a feild trip with the kids to explore the work or company to see what they have in the jobs and see what they do nonstop everyday for just work and gettin payed after a whole day of work.

Schools are wasting money to just get partnershiped with a company and also companies are wasting money for asking the teachers for a feild trip to go see the jobs what are going to do to stop the paying money part i know how about ask the teachers for a feild instead of paying the teachers and begging them to do the job that they going to tak the kids to the job after your done.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
98CD7819C7EF,"Some people believes that making mistakes is how peoples move on to success. Othes believes that is if we are determinated person and having positives thoughts without limitations. Some others people realized right before they are committing the mistake and they are just avoiding them. Although some say, successing in life without failures, our lifes wouldn't make sense, because we would not learn how to be success in our life's. Actually, successing in life with failures is more baneficial to our life's, because we learn how to believes on us, and we may have a life without doubts.

As a result, if we are the kind of person who doesn't makes any mistakes and realizing to success. i think that we wouldn't know what are we doing wrong to be determinated person. Also most of the people wouldn't have knowlwdge to succes in their lifes. Actually, when people cling to themselves isn't good for their goals in lifes.

However, I believe that making failures is how we move on to succe ss in life and is more beneficial to our life's. Otherwise i can tell the 80% of the people belives that making failures is how we learn to success and we become a civilized person. Sometimes most of the people have goals to achieve in their life's. As a matter of fact,

when we are setting goals to our life's and we can't get that goal it's because we are doing something wrong and we don't even realize what's wrong with it. its when we are learning to be focus and making sure next time to be success and whatever we did wrong.

In fact, sometimes it's hard to when we have had failures a fewers times, because we do not want to commit mistakes, but i think that is a beneficial for most of the people. Because the most mistakes we have and at the same time we overcome to have more experience in life. First of all, when we fix what we did wrong. Also I believe that fixing problems is a good way to be success in life. second of all, my suggestions are that to be a positive person, and determinate, smart, and wise person it make us a better person in success.

In conclusion, some people believes that having failures is how we are success in life and others don't think that way. However i do believe so that to be a success person, we have to fail a fewers times, because it's really important to me to be a determinate person. I think that those are my thoughts to be a better person in successful. and by the way, I'm totally agree that we have to fail first to be a success person.",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
B9733BDA883E,"High school the place where we can all do anything we want and just a step before going to college, or at least this is what a lot of middle schoolers think. In high school we take so many classes that are required and those classes are supposed to open up doors and get us closer to our goals. But, classes like arts, music or drama will give us something that we cannot get from others classes. These classes are like a little break, just a whole class to forget about having to write an essay or doing some long math equations and, instead just have fun with friends and enjoy singing, painting and even acting. These classes teach the students how to socialize and communicate with others.

High school is not as easy as some would think, students usually get really stressed because they have to pass their classes, their Sols and start getting prepare for college all at the same time. There is where classes like this can give a little opening to reduce some of that stress. Usually the environment in this classes is always joyful and fun, it is a place where students can learn through socializing and having fun. Who knows may be students would never think they like music but after some months taking music they would find out they love it and decide to become a musician and that can also happens with art and even drama. Classes like this not only give a little time off all the stress and pressure from high classes but also can give lessons to students that they would never even imagined they would learn.

Now, think about a extremely coy student who has never had the confidence to speak up in class not even to ask a question their math class, we know we all have asked something in math is just a class that at least a question per unit seems mandatory. However, how can that same student later on give a speech or have the valor to push himself up in a big company if he never has learned how to properly communicate. Even if he has huge talent and the brain of a genius he will never be successful. In life being able to express ourselves is something required, something that we have to do if we want to move keep moving up our hill path. Nothing will be easy but communication is a social skill we all have to learn.

Many will not agree on this and can will make strong arguments on how this classes are a waste of time. That after all we do not get anything from this classes and students just see these classes as a place to hang around with friends and procrastinating for 90 minutes. well, what about those students that do not have friends, students that always sit back in a corner and the teacher has never get him to say something. The students no one has ever heard from, or sometimes even noticed they are there. Shouldn't school concern about them, shouldn't school be the place where they can grow and open up their winds to start flying on their sky of opportunities.

""Tu voz habre puertas"" It is something i heard from a commercial once i was watching TV with my mom, it means ""Your voice opens up doors"" but those doors will never open if we open our mouths to ask questions that will give us answers those answers will impulse us further in life. Not matter how smart a student can be but if they cannot make themselves be notice their brilliant brain will be worthless.",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
92F7DD653EFB,"Some people think that is more beneficial working alone that working in group. Which I disagree with for two reasons: People always need help and is more beneficial working in group. I feel that the benefits come from others.

The first reason is that we as a human being, we need help. When we are working, we need help from others at work, during class at school, anywhere where we work. For example, at work when I'm cooking I also need someone that can brings the ingredients. Some would argue that, working in group don't help you to learn, but we learn from others not from ourselves. As a result, we obtain help from others working as a group. Additionally, we obtain benefits working in groups. In addition, benefits to us are made it from others, benefits to others are made it from us. To illustrate, when I'm sick, and I can't go to work I need someone to change his scheduled, and take my place, for that day, so he is going to need the same benefit from me to cover him one day he get be sick, or will have any emergency. Some may say that working in group is not beneficial, working in a group we acquired more benefits than working alone. As a result working in groups give us the chance to have more benefits.

It's obvious that, working is groups is more beneficial this will allow us to get the help need it from others, and to have more benefits made it by others. We should always work in groups, helping each other as a human being.",4.0,3.0,3.5,2.0,3.0,3.0
F737FB396F2E,"I Think that no matter if you are taking online classes, or going to school, you always going to graduate you can loarn alot if you'r taking online classes. Like if i were on the position of taking online classes, because im working and i don't have that much time i would loved to study when ever i could.

For Example:

some people that are here in the United States they have to go to school and work after school, and they got to pay rent, send money to their families back in there Contries.

For Example:

Some of the people don't have someone that can take them to school and the school is far away that the buses can not go all the way to their homes.

For Example:

There are some kids that don't go to school, having the school next to them, but there's alot of people out here thet would love to go to school or even take online classes but they can't because some of them are always working, some of them even have two jobs.

For Example: My mom wouold loved to take online classes at less but she can't because she has to work in the very morning like at 7 am, and she comes back like at one she cleans the house and then like at 3pm she goes to her other job and she gets out like at 11:30 pm so she doesn't have time but she would love if she could do it.

For Example: My dad he's going all the way to DC for school because he is taking classes for duster he pays each moth and my dad works to in countruction but weekends she goes to DC the classes start like at 10 and they end like at 1,

if you like someting work hard for what you like.

For Example: I have a friend that he takes online he work's everyday, he takes his computer to his work so when he's on break runs to the computer and he starts school online like that someone that wants to progress in this country.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
298969937643,"I am against this issue because, it's just not a good idea for student's to graduate high school early, and enter the work force and college one year early. My reasons for this would be that, those who do graduate early will miss out on school activities. They will have to do so much preparation. Some don't see that after high school life get's tough, and who knows if they'll be able to handle it.

Early graduate's will graduate a year early, but, they don't realize that they will miss out on school activities. Some activities that excite student's would be, the school dances such as prom, and homecoming. Dance's are meant to enjoy a night with friend's, and get all dressed up for the night. Also the day before a dance, there is always a football game, which is exciting because everyone goes to support the team and if they win they celebrate the day after, which would be at the dance. Pep- rallies are when all four grade levels come together and verse each other on which class has the loudest cheer, and who has the most point's when it comes to the games they end up playing. Spirit week is also when all classes verse to win point's. To earn the point's they must dress up as the theme of that day or buy what is being sold that day. The theme's they would usually do would be twin day Monday, polka dot Tuesday, and for the sells it would be spirit chain's that get hung up. Senior activities are when all the graduate's do their last activities with those classmate's they've been knowing since elementary school. They have a senior picnic which is when only the seniors go and have lunch together. Also some go on a class trip and they take their class picture.

Even though early graduate's will miss out on school activities there's more important things than that. They might think that they are ready, but in reality they don't think about the preparation they need to face. Depending on what diploma they are headed for either the standard or advance, each diploma has its requirements for graduation. Standard diploma's really don't ask for much. There might be a chance that you won't be in need of doubling up on classes. Unlike the advance diploma it ask's for so much. An advance diploma may require you to double up due to the fact that it requires many classes. Also students won't be able to take any of those exciting elective courses that are by most the best classes a student could take. Of course the classes aren't the only thing that must be completed, there are many test's that take place. Math, science, history, and the most difficult would be the English test. They must pass each test for graduation. This would mean that, students won't have time to distract themselves' by other thing's, and, will have to stay on task to maintain their grades up. Some might say otherwise that if they're going through this road it's because they are aware and are ready.

Although graduating early excites them, it is better if they wait another year and graduate when they have to. My reason to this would be because the work force and college will be completely different than high school. High school might be the easiest part of starting to understand life. Most student's that graduate early are juniors, and are sixteen and seventeen years of age. This is pretty difficult at that age, they would have a hard time finding a decent job that will help them pay their tuition; unless they have another way of paying like a scholarship or some other way. Perhaps some might do both work and school at the same time, but, it could end up being too hard on them because they are too young and aren't as prepared as they thought. If some were to be at the age of eighteen they would have to face adult responsibilities; such as taxes, rent, insurance, and much more.

However some might think otherwise. People who favor this issue support early graduation. Their reasoning would be that it's an early start in life, and some students do it certain reason. It could be a family matter or other reasons. But, I disagree, in no way is graduating high school early good. Those student's that graduate early will miss out on so many good thing's that come with high school. They will be stressed due to so much they had to do just to get out a year early; if that didn't stress them out then having to go college and going to work to pay for their education will.  ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
C48A4DC42846,"Someone will find many activity enjoyable such as soccer. I think people should play many sport like soccer

People will find soccer fun because you get to work together and they just have fun. For example people now in days don't even talk anymore they text. If you play together you can communicate with others. Working together with other people would be good for the future because you will know how to get along with others even if you kinda don't like them you will learn how to be patient. When you play soccer you get to hang out with your friends and possibly meet new people that you might actually might like . So you get to make new friends by just playing soccer. In life it's not about winning it's about having fun with your friends. Mostly playing soccer can be fun other people you might not even know so you get to work as a team and having more then one person play with you. If you go outside to play soccer you get to run and thats good for your health so you get to have fun and be healthy instead of sitting at home getting sick by eating unhealthy. You can grow up to be strong,healthy,nice,athletic,ect...Soccer is a very fun sport that mostly everyone loves some people dont really like it thats why i am writing this to pursued people to play. This is why i think people are going to enjoy playing soccer and talk to their friends saying that soccer is enjoyable..          ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
D743AC1EB08D,"how conserve energy and resources

The energy, and the resources are the most important factors in the world, for the evolution and survival of the human. There are many types of resources such as money, products, and energy power. Factors that have supported the human life for long time, and actually continue it happening. Every body in this world must be career it, because these resources are helping us to survive ,and support our life style. But the sad-reality is that the human does not career it, because they do not know about the consequences or they are ignorant. We need to rectify our mistake, and keep safe our resources. This written will be about advice, benefits, disadvantages, and plans how career our resource.

Let talk about the benefits that we are go to get if we safe our resources. First, there is a plan or recommendation what is about adopt a four-day work week, with each days 10 hours work, and school days with two hours. This is as a way to save our resources, and obtain the following benefits; we are going to save the energy, food,internet, water, time (to spend in our life with the family or whatever we want), the deterioration of our clothes and shoes. We are going to help the environment to keep it safe from the pollution, to make a better style life for the humans, and save resources for critical moments in the world. As you can see there are many resources what we could save, if we have adopt this plan.

In this plan, there are many benefits but also disadvantages. For this time I am go to talk about the disadvantages, if we implement this project. There will be present many problem such as the loss of time to learn, time to work, we will lost our social life in the school as in the work, became a professional will be harder and tardy. The technology advance will be slower, and it is go to affect the human evolution. Then we will lose many important things, and resources. Factors that could support in life, and make it easier.

In conclusion, There will be many people whom will benefit from this project , but at same time it is go to make many problems cause the disadvantages. If we implement this plan, we must be able to understand, we are go to take our risk. Moreover we must be think about the risky that this could be, and prevent more problems than we already have. I recommended do not waste our time anymore, starting to create a better world with a better life style, and creating new project to save resources. This support or this type of project need to be created by the government, because they are whom have the power to control whole country. Now take career our resource became a new goals for me after reflect a topic as this. We are going to understand that is necessary protect our resources, because they are indispensable to keep us alive and keep going with this life what we have in the twenty-one century.       ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
D6C9DE61BAF4,"There are three examples about if I agree or desagree about the statement ""It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life"". I agree with this statement about the importance of attitude and I will give some reasons.

Firts example, one reason that why I agree with this statement is because,if you want to apply for a job, you need to have a positive attitude to be sucessful for other people because they want to see the best of you and if you can have that job and how you relate with other people and you will see the results about it . Many people with bad attitude are lay off of their work because at work you have to show your best attitude with the costumers,boss or with other workers but some people don't do it . If you are the boss, you needs to have a positive attitude or try to have it because your workers hope the best attitude of you to manage the job and that can show respect of your person.

Second example, another reason that why I agree with this statement is because all people desserve positive attitude like, if you are walking at the park and you say ""hi"" or ""have a good day"" to other person with a positive actitude they will feel good and they would think that you are a good person . Be a person with a positive attitude can be successful for yourself or for your family for example, if one of the family members has a bad day and they see you, his mood can change because of your positive attitude, you make him feel better with advices about how he needs many options to resolve his life but if you have a bad attitude you make him feel irate of you.

Third example, the last reason that why I agree with this statement is because, if you are in the school there are many teenager like you that have hard classes, but some of them have a positive attitude because they want to have a good grades, pay attention in class and try to help other students who needs it, they try to make them sucessful too, so they can have a good grades or a good future . But, if they have a bad attitude they would be have bad grades,they don't pay attention in class,they try to distract the students who want to pay attention,make argument about the class or sometimes they scape the class because they feel that they have a bad attitude and that's why it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life.

In conclusion,in this three examples I give reasons that why I agree or desagree with the statement ""It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life"". If you have a positive attitude that can make you a better person or successful for yourself and other people.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
7AF7DC456D3C,"This program is helpful for younger students because it would get work accomplished with the presence of the older student. Older students that volunteer helping younger students would make younger students feel more at ease. Younger students won't have to deal with their assignments being due because they already turned it in. This program will help younger students study with assistance by the older students to get a high grade in tests or quiz. Older and younger students can play board games or read a book to help them get better with their English and writing skills.

Play outside basketball, soccer, football, etc just to have fun and waste that energy. Younger students who want to pick sports is fine as well, Older students can support or encourage younger students to do what they want. Older students can review things in the year for younger students to remember the key things or notes for the SOL's. Then younger students won't have to fail the SOL because they have the knowledge to surpass the test. Younger students with knowledge can get past Elementary, Middle, and High school and get that degree to College leading them to jobs they need or want in the future.         ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
27D80E5F87B1,"Which is better Working with a group or working alone, Somepeople may say working in a group is more Beneficial than working all alone. By

Sharing answers, Help each other if stuck in proplem, and get to finish on Time

.

First, Working with a group is more Benefit than working all alone, Because sharing answers helps me learn New thins to learn about new answers to thing about because I,m not that good in English speaking, For example i got Generic_Name, My English 11 Teacher Gives the hole class a paper to Read and answer, By the time i finish reading i ask my tracher if i could let Generic_Name to be my partner so we could help each other and get it done on time by helping each other and share our answer to see a diffrent thoughts of each one of us,

Secondley, Working with a group is more Benefit than working all alone, Because Its fun to work with a person or more, For example in History Class, when the teacher got to let us do class work for tomorrow exam or test, she let us do a group of 4 and do a challege in a computer so we could learn and do fun in the same time.

Third, Working with a group is more Benefit than working all alone. Because Students could finish their work on time, Foe Example Last week me and Generic_Name we got a project is Due in two day in History class, We worked together and reachers a diffrent thing and write a diffrents thought and even diffrent answers and we compond all of our answers and finish on time with diffrents thoughts.

Conclution, Some people may say Working with a group is more Benefit than working all alone, But Sometime i like to work a lone because i could think of my answers and question and even could get my own grade but sometimes when i work in a group when i try to work and care about my work but the rest of my grop does not care so if no body has worked then the hole group will get a zero even the person who worked.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
97A0FFE91A3E,"Why i agree with the school board planning to add one and a half hours to school is because it would give us more time to learn in each of our classes and it would benefit everyone.

my reason for why i agree with the school boards planning to add one hour and a half is because if we are doing a worksheet or any notes and we dont finish the notes because of how less of a time we have in the class and with that that extra hour we can get some more time to finish work we need to finish.

Another reason why i think that would be a really good idea is because it would not only give us more time to finish and do work but it would also be very helpful to the teachers. because it would give them more time to teach us and finish things they need to do. and Teachers won't have to worry about not finishing their lesson because of how much time they have in that class.

I also believe that if we do extend the school day longer we would learn more because of the extra time we are getting. and it would give us more time to learn. if we dont know how to do that subject the Teacher would have more time to go over it again and tell us step by step how to do it and help us to improve and get better at it.

Another good reason is because that extra hour can help us get better at the subject you dont like or can help you get better grades because the Teachers can show you how to do it and you won't struggle in test because the

Teacher reviewed it with you and it would benefit you because you would start getting better at it.

The extended hour can benefit the teachers a lot because it would give them more time for planning and doing stuff they need to do and what that extra hour we can make up all the work that we didn't finish.

The problem's if we do not get the extra hour is Teachers wont have time to get through their lesson because they wont have much time. and student's wont be able to get help on what they need help on. another reason is that students will fall behind because they won't have much time to get through the subject they need to finish and they will have to finish the next day while other people will be finished with that subject.

These are my reasons why i would agree on the school extending the school day one hour and a half longer because it would benefit the students and the Teachers.        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
6B479AF72202,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote,''to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment''. Although some people disagree about Emerson's statement, actually I agree because society is always trying to make people change their point of view, their culture, their belivers. First never give up, Second always love and be proud of yourself and Third don't forgot your roots.

Here are some reasons why I agree with Emerson's statement. First, the world is trying to make change but you have to never have to give up. Becuase it's important to continue being yourself, not matter if some people are not going to like it, the only one who have to feel comfortable with yourself it's you. Second, always love and be proud of yourself. It's important to be proud of who you are because eventhough you make mistakes sometimes that doesn't have to make change who you are. You just have to learn from your mistakes, I know it is difficult but no one says that would be easy ,but you can do it. Love yourself because every of your features, your character and your personality is what identify you, is make you unique, different from anyone else in the world that wants you to fit on it. Third, don't forgot your roots. If you are from another country you are forced to change yourself, trying to pretend that you are someting else, but you must have to stop it. Because in a world that is constantly trying to make you be something else your biggest accomplisment is to show that you are better than what they expected you to be.

Finally what are you waiting for!. Don't let the world change yourself, remember to never give up always fight for is better for you, love and be proud of yourself always and don't forgot your roots because every part of yourself is what make you unique, special and that is your greastest accomplisment.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C8EF7048C03F,"When you're looking for advice, you might not go to the same exact person. Hopefully you do talk to more than one person to make a better choice and give up the less opportunity cost. Most people talk to more than one person to see their other options instead of putting all one decision into one person's own opinion.

One thing I like about talking to multiple people for advice is that they can give you so many open options to pick and decide from. Most likely if all the people you talk to about advice or help, you will pick what they have choose. Which can be good or it could lead to a bad cause. Your always gonna have a opportunity cost. You either make a good or a bad move, which can lead in different directions. including the rest of your life, your mood for the rest of the day, the improvement, or the impact. There are multiple options that can occur.

Another reason this option is good is because you can hear all the others people's opinion's about your choice and you can mark out the ones you have already happened to you in a perfect or an awful way. You can also, pick their opinions or options and learn from it either if it's gonna be a bad time or a good time. After you have learned you can help out the one's in your same position or a little more different. But still can be able to help others in need. You can learn from it and help other's or you can learn from it and help yourself in the future if you ever come upon the same situation. Or even teach the one's need in teaching

One dislike I don't like about talking to a couple of people for advice, is hearing their opinions and advice it could possibly change your mind of you were thinking about before, But also it could be the better choice of the 2 or more open options. Different people can give you different responses about your situation. Which can make your problem worse of the option your gonna have decide to pick which advice could outrun the rest. Even picking which choice your gonna make can put more stress and pressure on you. Maybe even after picking your choice it could turn out the worst day of your life or the best. It's really hard to make the selection of which advice your gonna pick.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
38CADC812CBA,"Imagination can be more important than knowledge because imagination might help us with our knowledge because imagining on creating something it might help us on the future. For example, you are imagining something that you wanna make your knowledge is to try and never give up.

First of all, knowledge might help us to in our lives but it's important to imagine how we can live in our future with our skills of knowledge that we can have. In order to do something creative we have to have experience what were doing.

In conclusion I agree what enistein said because when you imagine you see stuff that you don't realize and knowledge is about your skills and effort you can do on things.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
BEE8F91F40E7,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change but that is not true open minded people and second chances help change the first bad impression that was given accidental.

First, people with open minds for example a teacher may see a student as a troublemaker but after the students second impression the teacher sees that the student after all isn't a troublemaker but a respectful student. An employer with a open mind may see an employee's first impression as someone who may not be worthy for the job but as the employee processes throughout the job his employer sees' that the employee after all is worthy for the job. Some may say that first impressions are impossible to change but that is not true first impressions can be changed by open minded people who are willing to give the second chance to change their impression,

Second, people who give second chances to others so they can show second impressions for example a father giving their daughters friend a second chance to show their impression again of not being a bad influence to their daughter. A business boss who gives a second to a employer to prove there a good influence to the job who can help grow the business.

To conclude, first impressions can be changed by open minded and second chances. First impressions will always be possible to be changed for a better impression. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
763EF698F56B,"Well In this part I

think is good and bad idea.

I think is good because if they have any emergency in home they do not going to dismiss any classes they can take classes from home they have already tools do not needed to go outside they have everything in home, and the teacher they do not need to wake up early everyday, and also some family they are going to agree because now they do not are going to think every time how is my daughter or my son if they are safe or if they are in trouble.

the bad things that if they going to give to all the students to take classes from only or video confederation some students they not going to do their work. in some others parts they do not have any internet or money to buy a computer they do not have opportunity that the others person have, also the teacher do not have any jobs they are going to need they works back, and some family they do not need to send to school to their sons because they do not have many or they want their son to work. Is very different have the people think is hard to take decision.

if they are old they can choose what they want, they have to think very careful if they said yes they want to take class form online , is going to be more easy from them because they do not have a job or they do not have to take care, they can do it they have a lot of time in the world if they do not have any computer thats is going to be a really good problem form them because they do not have school open or they do not have the materials they want for learn,

they have to look for job but sometimes if your looking for a job they need to know how you was in school they need to see you record, you are going to need in the future.

If you are going to say no because we need to learn something, we do not have any money to pay to go to school theirs so many ways to go to school their have school that are free you do not need to pay anything, just you need is go to school everyday, and do not get in trouble. Is good idea if they do this in college for students they work they know, they have more responsibility.

If you put a child with computer is going to be more concentrated in computer and maybe they going to have problems with their eyes or any problem when their grow up.

if is a old is more easy from them because they brain is more they can understand and they do not have any issues to work in the computers.

so is bad idea that they students take class form online they do not have any money or they do not work. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
E0656353B8F2,"School districts shouldn't give the three year instead of four year program. Why? because students should receive all the education they need to succeed everything they want with completing four years of high school. Most colleges look for students that have completed four years of their high school education, also they don't like when students have free periods unless they have a specific reason of requesting free courses. Students will always have time to do what are they want in life with a four year high diploma it doesn't matter if your birthday is late and you want to graduate with three years because you don't wanna graduate at that specific age. Teachers, parents,siblings, they should be the ones telling they're children or young adult that it is important to complete there four years of high school. The process you have to follow to do a three year of high school is more stressful because you have to summer school or evening school where there are not really a lot of teachers to help out with most of the stuff you need help with. When your in school you have English, history, science, mathematics teachers, you have counselors librarians everyone that can help you with anything you need to finish high school. Most students may graduate early because they have an illness, disease, or something and they just can't take the pressure of being in school no more. From my point of view parents should always talk to there children about how important education is for them they can pursue all there dreams if the parent didn't have the opportunity to finish there high school career. Also entering college early wouldn't be so convenient because maybe the student missed something they didn't learn then when they get to college there like my teacher didn't teach me this or I don't know what that is. The work force accepts a lot of young teenage children that graduate from high school and expect them to have a high school diploma and of course they'll have a high school diploma but they wont know how many years they completed which I believe still shouldn't be accepted. Children think that just because they have a high school diploma they're better then everyone else if you only completed three years you shouldn't feel superior to everyone else. I would feel disappointed in myself for not completing all the four years I needed because I would feel like I didn't complete everything I need to be the most intelligent most outgoing person I am. If your a child that believes you can't do it and finish high school because it's stressful, of course you can do it I punish myself all the time for saying that. I may not be the most smartest person in my family but i'm giving it my all to complete my high school career as an older sister and role model of two younger siblings that I have. Also if your a three year completer you should always take younger siblings in to consideration because they look up to you and they are gonna think that just by completing three years its OK. To be someone successful in life finish all four years of your high school education schools shouldn't provide three year programs for students or at the age of eighteen they can drop out they are going to get no job no one will accept them without an education. There is nothing good out in the world without an education or some type of proof that you have completed or have gone to school. In conclusion, to all of this children, teenagers, anyone take in mind that colleges, jobs, anything will most likely look for a four year completer because if they see you as a three year completer they'll take the other person instead of you. Even if you have all the requirements you needed to complete high school you still really didn't finish your career. Schools should stop providing this program and make students complete there four years in high school because it is very important for them to get an education till they are 18 and they are free to make their own decisions if they want to drop or just do three years of high school. And don't be the type of person to just finish high school with three years and do nothing after you have decided to not finish school you just decide to drop out to be home and do nothing for yourself. Be the bigger person and take full responsibility of your education because you only have yourself throughout your journey in high school there will be no friends once it comes down to your senior year in high school. The more you pressure your self to finish high school the more stressful and painful it'll be for yourself because you may not have all the requirements completed and you have to complete them in summer school thats why parents and teachers mentors anyone should always come in and talk to the child and make them finish what they have left of there high school career nothing is impossible. Do what you can to complete and finish high school with all your four years and you'll be the most hard working work force person ever or the best and college student that completed all four years and will complete all her college years needed to succeed to accomplish there dreams or whatever they want to do.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
A98482015F5A,"There are many instances where people have the mindset that you must be doing something constantly in order to achieve the most. I believe that having this mindset is terrible and is not beneficial to the person. I believe this because if you take the time to rest you will find that it allows you to regain a creative mindset, it allows your work to regain its quality, and taking time to rest serves many health benefits.

Regaining a positive, creative mindset serves many purposes. Having a creative mindset will allow you to think freely, and come up with brilliant, unique ideas that give you an advantage over possible competition. For example, if you are constantly writing all the time you are not giving yourself time to create unique ideas that separate you from the rest of the competition. Another example we can use for this scenario is when an entrepreneur is constantly trying to start a business without taking a step back and allowing themselves to come up with a unique idea that they have passion for. Where as if someone who does take breaks is working in the same field as another individual they are working less, but achieving more because their ideas are more unique and thought through.

When you are constantly working there is a high chance that your work may lose its quality. When an individual is working the factor that they must think about most is the quality of the work they are providing. If the quality of the work is not there then it completely takes away from the rest of the qualities from that body of work. For example, if a man wants to sell a product, and he puts hours upon hours into this item but there is no quality then the item will not sell. Where as if the man takes constant breaks focusing on quality, and not quantity then the item will have a lot more attraction from people.

Being idle sometimes rather then working persistently also has its benefits. When working diligently all the time there may be times where you may be very stressed out or you've tired your body out, but these problems can be avoided. These problems can be avoided by taking breaks, taking breaks allows your mind to relax and release stress that has been piled over a certain amount of time. For example, if you are a athlete and you are constantly over working yourself there is a high chance you may get injured, but if you balance yourself and take breaks you are allowing your muscles to heal themselves which also boosts your performance for the next practice or game. Allowing yourself to take breaks also improves the quality of the work you provide whether its paperwork or sports.

Although some people think never being idle is a good thing because you can achieve more work with no set backs. I still think that being idle serves a purpose because you want to be able to incorporate quality into your work, you also want to be creative when it comes to providing, and lastly you want to be able to gain the benefits from relaxing your body and your mind. Finally, if you are one of the individuals who like to work diligently without breaks, you should at least consider taking a break once because it will not hurt you, and if anything it will help you.",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
FA11AB7CD13F,"Technology

The application of science in Indus- try or commerce. The methods and materials thus used technology. I agree that technology has negative effects on people's lives. Technology is hurtful for all the people. For reason person learn how to get dope for the technology. Examples they used the internet to know how to get the dope from, and dope is be come unfavorable for a person. Like the person come be so wired to anyone because he doesn't know what he's doing. He be come a incorrigible person with anyone try to stop him.

The people don't have to go to another one house. They just use the phone to call them and ask if they don't good. Because of the technology we don't have to see each other. They think it's enough to talk in the phone or call each other video call. Before the technology everyone used to go see their family at home. Also they can go to the store and buy everything they want. After the technology they order everything online. When you play a games you don't talk to the other person that play with you.

I think technology let you be come a unfavorable person. Reason we use technology for anything. Example you don't have to go to the bank to pay your credit bill you can sit and home and do it. You don't have to hold you debit card with you guess why because you can open it on your phone. Technology makes everything silly. Also you can pay your house bill when you sit at home.

Technology has a positive effects too. For reason I can call my friends in Generic_City with my phone. I don't have to write a litter for them and send it to Generic_City. If someone sick and you don't have time to go visit her just call her, and ask if she's feel better at that time. Technology also can help you to make a new friends for any country.

Technology is positive because when I came to USA I didn't speak English at the time. So when I went to school it was so hard for me to understand what are the people talking about. One teacher used Google translate to try to speak to me. That was nice of her she's tried to help me to understand what's going on in the class. She told to me to watch TV in English to try to learn how to speak, But to was hard for me because when I came to USA I was to old; and I was already speak one laughed. I know that I took a long time to learn English but finally now I know how to speak English also I can understand my teachers when they ask me about my homework.         ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
C5B351564A3F,"According to this prompt can you imagine that some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, to conserve energy and resource. However, now did you ask to your self, should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours?. went i think in that i give me some thing. although, follow this model by extending the school day two hours have benefists and disadvantages of follow this model to a four day of school week .

fist, think about benifist that is very important part for students and for the employees , however consider how this model is going to help students and employees from school. Then how this model is going to help the school if they dont conserve energy and resourse. For instance, teachers are affected in how they give students work when they need some proyect to do how they use energy if they dont have resources. Now left think about if school dont have resourses how students use the restroom if dont have water, students also use water to get a shower went they have a game in the school, another think is that women in the kitchen they need water for cook and give students lounch. However, some students work after school and teachers needs to take care their childres after school or some teachers live very far. Beside, they could affect school education. Lastly, school are affected for many manner this affect whith the hours being to a four day school week in the other hand,

let meask abouth disadvantages.

Second, students,teachers and employes are affected in the disadvantages. For example, some students work after school if students wants to stay after school maybe they lost their jobs because they dont present to his work or if they have some homework to do after school they can no stay because they need to work studens are affected. Beside, teachers are affected too because after school they need to take care they childrens or maybe some teachers live very far and spend many time for arive to his home. In the other hand, school employes lost his work because if school work only four day at week the drive lost some hours of job this affect some employes and their families. Thats why this dissadvantages affect studens work and students education because some students dont came to the school if they are resposable with his job. However in my case this affect me because i work after school and i need came to the school too but i need some money. They are many reasons why this disadvantages affect students and employees. Let me ask some benefist that is good.

Finally should fallow this model by stending four day school week you should have some benefist. For example, you should have one day off to stay at home with family, do the homeworks that the teaches give you or spedn more time to study, teachers can relax one day or maybe they prepare students assignment.

In conclution, to conserve energy and resource to considering the benefits and disadvantages to a four day school week, many pleople are affected mostly students and teachers because two hours would affect students job, also the teachers because some teaches live so far from the school and they dont have time to past with his family. In the other hand, the good thing is that they should have one day off and they can relax, students can do their homewors and they can study for his test or maybe they can go to his job in the day off. But is important can to the school every day because we need to learn more every day and in the future can take a better job we can do a good people and a good example for our family.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
EA5B3C8E09D1,"I agree with this statement because, positivity is the key to success, if your always being negative and saying negative stuff it will be hard for you to find success. My dad once told me that whatever you do in life and even if you fail you should always tackle it with a postive attitude no matter what. Having a positive attitude has great benefits when it comes to work place,your personal business and even life in general, being rude or disrespectful to people won't pay, there is a saying that says what goes around comes around, so if you treat people with a negative attitude, in the near future somebody will treat you the same way. Attitude is very important in life, attitude determines if your going to be a better person in life or a bad person, attitude determines how well you are in treating people with respect. A good attitude goes a long way, even if you don't have enough money or you struggle to pay your bills having a good attitude and being postive will land you into a good job and also by meeting great people. Having a bad attitude can even ruin things that you know how to do well, if your suppose to be doing something and you do it with a bad attitude it won't turn out good, you will always end up doing something wrong because of your attitude. At the end of the day attitude counts, treating people with respect is very important and it will take you places you have never thought about.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
05F30981F3EB,"Imagine if online schooling was offered at every school. Schools are offering online classes for students to attend class. Also schools offer video conferencing online to help benefit at home. This is important because some students are not responsible to get to school on time. Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because health issues play a major role through out the school year, students can become smarter by taking time to learn the content, students would not have to stress over transportation.

Certainly some might think staying in the house all day causes bordom to do school work. Others believe students tend to need help from an adult to understand that content. Still others argue by feeling alone will not motivate them to be productive.

To begin with, health issues play a major role through out the school year on students. Students always tend to come to school while they are sick. So that spead germs through out the school and causes major illness. Spreading germs can have someone hospitalized and in bad condition. Which can make students have bad attendince. Also parents would loose jobs to attend to their sick child. However staying home and still be able to do your school work causes less stress. Because it gives student more time to be able to complete there assignments. Another reason way online classes will help out students that are in wheel chairs, crutches, and broken legs. Is they dont have to be rushed, pushed, in the crowded halls. Therefore they feel more safe and have enough space at home. Parents will be able to supervise their child more. An not be worried that something else might happen. Health issues should be a cause of not being able to not attend school if you are able to do it from home.

Secondly students become smarter doing the research on their own to retain the information. Every student have a diffent way to learn. Some students need day's to understand the content. An some can understand the content off the first try. Also some student need to see it hands on then be supervised as they complete the task. Witch is also not a bad way to retain information. If help is needed the video conferencing will help out in the long run. Being able to home relax and still manage to completed your school work motivates the student to remain on task. Another reason why is grades will have a major increase and students would maintain a higher grade point average. The best part of the video conferencing is the student will be able to replay it if needed. Instead of hearig it once in class from a teacher then forgetting the information the next time you have that subject. Apart of life that is important to have is knowledge, so being able to teach and perfect your weakness are important.

Lastly transportation is a mojor problem for students. Some students have to walk, get droped off, or take the bus to get to school on time. Most students are not responsible to wake up on time to catch the bus. The students that walk are stessed, because they have to walk while its raining, hot, ride their bike, cold, and dark. In conditions like that are not safe for students to go through is something happend to them. Most of the time parents have to work and be worried that their child get to school safe. Having the privaledge to be home and do work will prevent fights, childish students, and angery teachers. So everyone would have peace and respect for one another and learn more. There will be no disagreement and aultications with students and teachers. After school students will not have to rely on transperations, because they are already home. Less stress can be taken off of adukts that are nor responsible for you. Having to find transpertation to your destination is worth money and not everyone is forchen to loan out money all the time.

Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because health issues play a major role through out the school year, students can become smarter by taking time to learn the content, and students would not have to stress over transportation. If students was able to stay home and do school work the it would be less confusion in school. Keep calm and remain focus even if times get hard on your shoulders.        ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
8C01B86DE888,"Homework Clubs

Imagine getting all of your work completed easily and correct! A homework club are for students that is having a difficult time of getting their work done, they can also do their work together as a class. Homework clubs are good for students because they can finish it early, they can help each other, and it improves their learning skills.

First, students finish early. Students can do something else later instead of homework, and it helps them avoid of getting a late work. For example, back in 7th grade, I didn't really do my homework and I knew that I didn't make the right choice so the consequences were having a bad grade, and being grounded for a long amount of time. I really didn't like doing homework but I learned something from it so I started doing my work since I was grounded.

Second, students can help each other. Students can help the ones that are having a difficult time of doing their homework, they can also finish their work easily. For example, when I stayed after school for my English teacher to do work, I realized that I finished most of my work because I was focused and I asked the teacher multiple times to help me with some of the work. It helped me bring my grades up from a failing to a passing. So I suggest that students should do homework clubs to get their work done.

Third, It improves their learning skills. It improves their collaboration, and it improves their communication skills, and it can improve their skills on every subject. For example, when I was in 4th grade, I didn't know a single word in English so I was in this program called, English and Second Language, where they taught me new words everyday until I started talking English in class and to other students. It helped me came along this far where I didn't need it anymore. I was scared to talk to people because I thought that they would make fun of me because I didn't know how to talk, but I was wrong. I made my first friend in 5th grade and his name was Etka, we were both at the program but he knew a lot more English than me so he also helped me improve my communication skills along the way.

I think that after school homework clubs are good for students because students can finish it early with the help of one another and the teacher. The most important thing about this club is that it improves your learning skills and your communication skills.",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5
9EADCECA2FB8,"i think that students should have cell phones at passing time and lunch time so these students can relax and they don't have to get their phones taken away and they don't have a problem and they need to put their cell phones on vibrate or turned off but students don't want to put their phones in their lockers cause they get stolen which they get mad and they need to buy another one.

students needs their phones so they can contact their family if some thing happens or their family get robbed then how are you going to communicate. cell phones are okay but students are always texting during class when teachers are teaching. the cell phones company are starting to make new cell phones and people are starting to buy fancy phones like droid so are the students. cell phones are very cool to have and its kind of a lot of money to pay for those fancy phones. all students are buying cool phones cause they think they are cool cause other kids has cheap ones and telling them their phones are ugly. students are mean cause they could use someone's number and tell them awful stuff and would say the same thing what they say. so i say lets not have cell phones at school that would be okay to me.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
E31B2A06C28C,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life, that having a good thinking about what you do, and be proud of it is important. Well, in my opinion it is the only thing, because time is going forward, and not backward, things that you have already done cannot be changed, but by having a good attitude about it you change your future, like being successful in your goals, solve economy issues, and even in day to day life.

A positive attitude is really important when it comes to achieve your goals, if you want something but you think you can not make it, it is because you do not have enough attitude, in order to be successful with it, you must forget all the negative thoughts, and believe in yourself, and after all the effort you have been giving you will be a little bit more closer to achieve your goals.

Sometimes money can turn your life real hard, it can make you stop trying for what you want, and make you give up; is in this kind of situations when a positive attitude must come in, let me give you a personal experience: I used to live with a stepfather, my mom, and five brothers. At that time bills and debts were easy to pay, my stepfather was making around $3,400 dollars a month, my mom like $1,300 dollars a month, and my brother and I around $800 dollars a month, all these money was the house income, but after my mom and her ex husband divorced, everything changed, now we had all those bills on us, but because we did not give up, and we had a positive attitude about the situation, we started to work even more, now my mom is single, and we can make trough out the month.

Another good example is living every day with a positive attitude like at work, at school, at home, even restaurants, it does not matter where you are right now it is important to always have a positive attitude, it is crucial in life to be proud about what you are, where you are, how you are, be the one who makes the change.

Some people say that because you did something wrong in the past, it is impossible to make a change about it, but they are wrong because they might not able to change the past, but for sure they can change the future by fixing and understanding in what they have failed, the attitude is important be proud of everything you have done and do not be ashamed.

In conclusion, it is really important to have a positive attitude because to be able to achieve your goals you must have to have a positive attitude, money can make it hard for you to live, but you have to think and analyze the situation, wherever you go remember to have a good attitude about yourself, and never be ashamed about something you did wrong remember that you always can make a change, only if you have a positive attitude.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
EEDD6AC8DC5B,"I guess because one person is determinate they have goals and dreams, and the person work hard for complement all something,when the person have a purpose though, tired or think you cant ,there are in you a voice said you can do it , at that moment yuo think i needed for my life, family . is more essay when the person have determinate direction , when the person not have anything in the life , I think its necessary that person to be linked with family, friends who is motivation for him or she. my diari life is a example because my goals is take my higschools diploma but i need work hard because , walk up 6 in the morning , preparate breakfast for everything in my family , then i needed take my thing necessary for my work , i working all day , to go out 5 pm then came for the schools night , i have for class for a years , sometimes i tired but , remember my family , what example given for my daugther , only work hard , to achieve my goals .",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
5DA3135B6664,"Ralph Waldo, Emerson, wrote ""unless you try to do something beyond hat you already mastered, you will never grow."" I agree with Emerson statement these are my reaason why. First, i think if we do not prepare for more than one thing. We never will grow up. Second, have more than one knowledge than other people always will be advantage.

Last, if we do not try more than one thing that can be more hard of that we already know. we never will grow.

First reason,i think if the people do not prepare their lives with more than one knowledge. Their lives will be without direccion, and with less opportunies in our society, becuase they will do not have the enought knowledge to play a good job. For example, if they are looking to find better job with new experiencies that will be impossible to find for them, becuse they do not have the knowledge which one is require for the position. how they can be productive for the country or society. If they are not prepred to make done specific job that can be important.

Second reason, when we have differents knowledge our lives help us a lot to find the best or easy jobs. The knowledge is the most power thing the human being can have in thier hands. Some people think the knowlege is something that we can not buy from any where. Exmple, if you focus to learn. you always will be have advantage to grow. Last, i think if the people never try something hard they never will grow. we always need to try something who will bring new experiences on our lives. Exmple, when someone is goint to university and the person graduated from teacher, but if he stuck there, and not go for more hard profession he never will grow like principal etc.

Conclusion, i agree with Emerson statement, because he give to us expecific ideas what is life about when he said ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered , you will never grow. this is why i agree to his statement, and i provide all this reason.     ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
BFAEA615906C,"All individuals should follow their own instincts, and ideas. when trying to build a successful future, people should create their own ideas, make good decisions, and experiece new things by themselves to get more confident in their lifes. However pleople should make their own decisions and manage their ideas to do what they think is correct.

First, people should create their own ideas. although, they have to follow their instincts, and don't led anybody disturb their mind. Think on how they want to improve and try new things. Also seeking ideas from other people is not a very good thing when it won't benefit them. To understand what the role of life is, people should expand their ideas And work out more by themselves.

Second, people should make good decisions. In other words, people should decide what they really want. When people make good decisions they tend to be successful and encourage themselves to keep growing. Decide what people really want, and what can they really do, is very important, since not everyone is able to do what other people can do. Therefore, confidence is the key to make good decisions. We can also say that people need time to think about any bad consequenses that can result from any of their decisions.

Third, people will get more experince. In fact, people know more about life when their experience is greater. Experience will help people to know how to face problems whenever they make a mistake. Also, an important point of experience is that lessons of life won't led people make the same mistake over and over. Correct or incorrect decisions would make people more experienced. That's why, experienced peolple are more likely to success than not experienced peolple in order of the kind of knowledge that they have.

In conclusion, people as builders of their own life, should be independent, and don't wait until someone tell them what to do, and how to do it. Reasonable people would make up good ideas, be careful with any kind of bad decisions, and use experience as a tool to success, and build a great future for them.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
447221C3FA00,""" Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm""

Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". The thing is that if we going to do something good we have to failure anyways because for example, we are excited and we are going with enthusiasm to get a great results, but you never fail in the life and your enthusiasm is up. Success is failure one, two, trhee time. You are a human without loss enthusiasm is hard because some people have not enthusiasm to do the right things don't have power and are weak when herad something bad. I'm agree with him because to be a successfuly in the future your going to failre a lot of time. I have a friend that told me to get success in the life have to to fail and don't loss enthusiasm.

For me fail in my life is not something really bad, but just a little bit, you can keep getting good without problem. This is a important role because all people can think what they have to do about failure and how they can be preparate when their enthusiasm is up and later is down. Failure for me is not a mistake because by those mistake you learn and you can be better person. Some reason to be agree with him is that is true, you have to fail first and happens what the happens. Some people are not agree with this statement because they think that if you fail you going to be bad and your enthusiasm going down. Support ideas is not easy because this world have different kind of people with different kind of mind. Good examples to be success is do the best thing and if you fail don't say nothing to nobody, just do it and that sit. Some teenegers have the same problems everyday because when they are fail they think that something happen going to happen to them but they are their success to consist of going from failure.

In my conclusion I'm going to say that if you want to success in your life is necessary to fail because you learn from experience, you going to do everything right. For me in my future I'm not going to say nothing about failin g because I'm going to be calmly because I knew that with experience could be preparate for my problems. We have to be positive each day because you going to remember all the failure that you had in your past. I think fail is not bad for my life because it going to be a great experience.              ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
D129F19FF7F7,"People should make their own decisions to avoid bad guidance from other ""experts"".

Everyone should make their own decisions because they know themselves better, they know what they like and what they want, mentally and physically. For example if someone bought someone else something that they didn't like or didn't want and is the total opposite of what they needed, they wouldn't have sent the other person to go get it in the first place, now would they?

Also, people should make their own decisions so that they could learn from their own mistakes and their misjudgments. For example, people buy the wrong size of clothing online everyday without trying it on in stores first. People will now know to go in stores first or to get themselves measured first before ordering clothes online. Another example, is that people look at something they think is interesting and nice, but won't read the directions or the descriptions that come with it and once the package that they got or ordered it at their homes and in their possession is either not like the picture or is smaller then what they thought it would be or is just one piece of what you ordered. This is a great learning experience for them to not do it again and to always read the descriptions of what you're ordering comes with.

Lastly people should make their own decisions because not all ""experts"" can really help you with your situation or not even do so well on your case. For example, people can pay a lawyer a huge amount of money for them just to fail on your court case. Another example, people pay to see a doctor for something they think is wrong with them because they're hurting badly and doctors will say you're perfectly fine and prescribe you an expensive pain killer, which people can already have at their homes. Last example, a therapist can also prescribe you medication that you don't need but will still give it to you because they can. Some therapist don't believe in that but most do.

So therefore, these so called ""experts"" sometimes don't know what they're doing or sometimes they are trying to make money out of innocent people or even sometimes is it always okay to make some mistakes and learn from them and your misjudgments. So it is always better to make your own decisions to avoid bad guidance from others.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
F7DB1032DFAC,"Did you know everyone has a talent? Talent is a special skill that everyone has. Everybody has a talents or a skill, my talents is doing math problems, when you do math you will be more organized and it helps you grade go up even more better.

First, if you solve math problems more often, you will be good at organizing things. Solving math can make you think about spending time. It will create a thought about how you spend time. Eventually, you will learn how to spend your precious time wisely. Additionally, it will lead you to good decisions. Basically solving problems is like, when you have to make a wise decision. You have to figure out the best solution that you can think of. After that, this process can help your personal problems. We use math everyday to solve our personal problems. Math is not just a subject, it is teaching you life skills too. Solving math problems can lead to good organizing skill.

Next, If you do math, it can help your grades go up and get it more better. First of all, if you start doing math, your grade for math will be satisfied. Math subject requires a your time for studying and it takes your patients too. Taking the time to study for math always pays off. In the end, your grade will be good and it will be all worth it. Then, when your grade is good, you will be more relaxed and pleased with your life. When you have a bad grade, it really does feel awful and the you will be ashamed by yourself. But when you have a good grades, it just makes you feel better and good. Eventually, If do math more than usual, start doing it for your free time, you will be good at other school subjects. Every subject has little bit of math. For example, science is basically a different form of math. For me, figuring out math problems helps your grades get better.

Solving math equations is my talent, when you do math, I think you get more organized and your grades go up. For me doing math is like a puzzle, if get wrong piece you will have to try again and if did put in the right place you will get the solution. If you made mistake, you have to think again, learn from it and try hard to not make the same mistake again.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
C0643251A96A,"Generic_Name

Prompt-My prompt is explain to people why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice

Seeking muitipule opinions is a better choice beacsue you can get a bunch of diffferent opinions and they most likey will have a better point of view. Its better to have mutilple choice then just having one choice or opinions now for some examples Example one If a student is having issuse at home they have mutiple opinions which are 1. talk to a counsler 2. talk to the school social worker 3. talk to a trusted adult 4. talk to a friends parent 5. talk to other family members..

example two a lady haves a few job offers but he goes for one and thinks he not going to pass the interview but he stll has a few jobs lining up behind him the job offers are1. sceintest at nasa 2. host on the ellen show 3. a buisness owner.

I also feel like asking one person would not be the best choice bescause what if they dont have have the best opinions or best advice,i feel like for the bst advice ask more then one person make sure the person is trustable make sure the person knows what they are talking about.

To make sure this trusted person know what they are talking about ask them a few quetions iif they answer them right then they might be a person you can trust

If your the one taking to the kid or adult going having issues have patince with them its probroly a hard topic for them     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
7231635A63C8,"The technology has improve this years, allows people to makes think much faster than before and the technology every day its going to keep improving. I think that Technology makes thighs more easy for everyone but especially for does that cant walk, speak or heard. Technology makes thinks much easy and quickly for everyone, If you dont have a car you can shop online. People can buy food, materials, video games, books and everything that in necessary. Technology also makes more easy to talk with people that is far away and you miss. Last year I call my grandmother and she never had a cellphone before, she was surprise that she was talking to me event that she is far away from me that makes me so happy and I was thinking that if technology does not exist I dont know how to communicate whit does people that are far away from me.

Technology is very important this days, for everyone but if we used for good because their is some people that use technology to do bad thinks and that way technology have some negative effects on peoples lives. The limitation of human contact has something to do with technology because there is some people that dont know how to use technology they think that technology is the only way and they feel like there is no other friends but that wrong because technology its a tool for human and if we know how to used its going to makes us life much easy.

In my opinion technology its one of the best tool that we have, but we have to lean how to used because it can helps us a lot and makes us much easy many thinks, but there is only one rule we have to used for good.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
2637F9BEE7D3,"I agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson, about being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you somenthing else is the greatest accompplisment, because people always say that they love you and care about you for who you are, but the truth is that. When you're yourself with them and show them who you really are, they want to change you. Some peaple are always going to talk and pay more atenttion to the mistakes that you made instead of what you have to offer , being yourself in this world is the most importan thing in life, because you got to show them that you like who you are and you don't care what they say, love yourself inside and outside never stop doing what you love just because people told not to do it, do what makes you happy not what makes other people happy. don't be afraid to show the world what you got to offer, you only live once, feeling good about yourself is more important then satisfied other people. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
051C3A22AEE0,"I think that the online or video coferencing wounld not benefit high school student because they many pros and con. pros student can work on thier own sudent can work on home cons

Not all student have a acces to the internet student cannot understand the assessment it make it not English speaker to understand student cannot benefit for attend classes from house. because take classes from home cannot improve the student educated. In the school class student are alllow to work with group and work with teacher. home school can cause distraction, worries. For Example when you're work or take exam and your family member call you to do something for her. in school they taught you many thing to learn. Online classes and school classes have similarity and different thing in common

The First different between this two classes is that online classes are classes that you take home why school classes are classes that you take in school.

The second different between this two classes is that in online class you don't learn lots of thing. but in school classes you learn of thing. This are the similarity between two classes.

The first similarity between two class is that both classes are required the second similarity between two class is that both classes are teaches by teacher  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
E54E238C6DDB,"I would think that some student's would stay home so they can catch up on things they need but some stay so they can get the help they really need. For example if a parent see's his child struggling they could ask their child and be like do you need help or what do you want us to do to help you. I'm pretty sure that some students are gonna take this opportunity, and take online classes or get the help they need from a teacher or someone they know who can help them. The real reason that I think they will do it is because they would want to graduate from school so they can get the diploma and be happy that they did it with the help of a parent. Yes, I do believe that student's would benefit with taking classes at home or by online classes with a video conferencing. Student's should be grateful that some school's are giving them the opportunity to take some classes at home or even with a teacher they can video chat with and they can help them too. If it wasn't for the school who was giving us the privilege do take this opportunity for the help then we wouldn't be passing anything or getting the help we need. For example, if a student goes to the school and tell's them hey i'm having trouble getting this subject i know for sure the teacher are gonna give them a choice to pick if they want help or take online classes at home with like a teacher who's helping them. Another reason kids ask for help is because they probably ask at home and sometimes's parent's dont have the time to help them cause they are tired from work or they just tell them to ask someone else and then they don't get the help they need. For some student's it's easy for them but for some it isn't easy so some students can help each other so they can understand it. For other reason's it's better for kids to try on there own first and then if they still dont get it then they ask for the help or ask the teacher for help at the same time. In conclusion i think it's a good idea that the school can give the benefit for student's to take online classes so they can get the help they need.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
2157AE4AFAA6,"I agree that people make their own decisions to learn about life, and be more independent. Sometimes it is difficult to follow advices, but that can make us a better person every day. As an illustration, every people comit defeats, yet that can teach us to be more stronger people,and never give up. People will grow only if they start being independents, trying new things, and learn to be better by they own self.

By being more independently, people will learn how to take their own decisions. People can start taking their own decisions when they do not live with their parents anymore. As an illustration, they can find a good work, pay their own things, and having the capacity to make their owns decisions. Besides, people have to have more responsability; in order to take a decision because that can affect ourselves. However, that can makes us more stronger, and be more prepared in life.

Trying new experiences can also, teach us to be more independently, and learn about others people experiences in taking a decision. In fact, we can ask for advices to our parents or in someone that we trust because they will tell us what is good or what is bad for us. Additionally, sometimes there is people that the only thing that they do is judge us for the decision that we take, but that does mean that we are a bad person. We can propose to ourselves everything, and we should never get down.

Learn to be better by our own self ca help us in many ways. that can be a benefit into our life because in the ways we can be more responsables with ourselves. For example, we can take many decisions , but sometime we do not know if they are going to be good in the way how we planed them. Besides, we always can try to be a better person, and think more about every decision that we choose.

Take good decision in our life we make us to have a better future. First, people can take any decision that they want, but it is better to take them with responsability. trying new thing can take us of our comfort zone, and that is good because we can think more about the good decisions. Lastly, we can learn how to be our best self without help. For these reasons and many more people should be more independently and try to take our own decisions.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
7007EB8E265D,"Working alone can be more beneficial because you can work at your own pace and we all have different levels, in that case we do not have to argue with anyone about putting your own ideas. Although other may think working with a group is better and more beneficial.

Also, working alone can be more beneficial because you can work at your own pace. Working at your own pace is very important, you will not make mistakes and if you do it is totally fine because that is where we learn from. You may be the type of person that likes working little by little every night instead of doing it all at once. You will not have people over your house horse playing instead of helping you out and working with you on your project. When working alone you do not have to worry about all these concerns because you will be the only responsible one for your own work.

Working alone is more beneficial and can be very helping, it will prepare you for the real world. When working alone you may write or put what you think is correct, your friends will not be there to tell you that you are incorrect. You might be a independent person and prefer to work by yourself. You do not have to worry about someone rushing you because you should know when the due date is. While working alone you just have to worry about you, and finishing your work of course.

Although, others may think it is more beneficial working with a group. Working with a group can bring a lot of distractions. Research determined that when it comes to group projects people complain and prefer to work independently. Also, why would you want to work with others if you do not know if they are in the same level as you. When working with a group you have to check up on your group members to see if they finished there part of the project, if they are not responsible enough to finish it themselves you have to fill in for them because it is a group project and project grade.

Does it not feel much better working alone? You can work at your own pace and we all do not have the same mentality, so we do not have to argue with anyone about putting your own ideas and what you think is correct. Let me tell you a little secret, working with a group can be pretty complicated. Always working alone, it is more beneficial.        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
A742ED869970,"We need the to stay active to accomplish the important matters people need to work on and being inactivity the amount of energy people spend in the day means that sleep is the best way to go for. Being active has a grate purse in life. When people are active and awake, there aware of the surroundings. People wake up from the night sleep they had and having breakfast, getting ready for work, or heading out to the gym. But inactivity is a good too. In the of the day people sleep in the night or morning. Also many people need some rest to keep the same energy they had yesterday in the morning or night.

The best part when someone or yourself is active they can accomplish so many things. Having the good energy you can finish the work that is needed to be done at work or at home. Feeling about yourself of finishing your work or task is the bets feeling ever. There also many thing to do beside work, walk around the park, have an outing with your friend, even finish reading the book that you like. At the end of the day all what you need to do is go to sleep for the next day. To have the same energy you just need some rest let the body relax to get the same energy, just like batter of your phone when charging.

Having a good night rest is good for the body, your body needs the energy to work and have a good system. When you don't have rest the body is slow, you're moody. Also not focused on the things your doing. Sometimes you can't finish thing on time cause the brain is needs to rest so you can focus on your work. It's dangerous if your out driving in the night, pull the car over rest a little a bite before heading the road. You can forget things much more faster too form the lack of rest the brain has.

In all, yes it is both bad and good to stay active or inactivity. They have pros and cons to where can finish your work when your well rested or if not your behind work. It can also effect your health in a bad way to wear you forget about things faster and to the point you're behavior changes quickly. When rested you do many activities to do from walking around the park to head out with friends. But at the end of the day everyone needs to rest will and stay active around there surroundings for the daily life a head of them.     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
D6407F1D3515,"Technology has had positive effects on people because you can use cellphones to interact people, you can also be shopping at home without having to leave your house, and also if you are a gamer you can also play with people from around the world. That's why technology has had a positive effects on people.

Technology is a big impact on people because phones can do anything. You can be in video call with friends and family without having to leave your house. You can also call your family with just your phone. One last thing you can do with phones is that you can make group chats with your friends and family. You can be playing games with your friends or you can just chat with them.

With the important of technology you can also do shopping. You can shop without having to leave your home at all. If you are from another country you can shop from around the world and you can buy things that represent your country and feel like home. One last thing you can do with shopping online is that can order food from any restaurant and it will get sent right to your home. you can also send stuff to your friends and family by just sending it to them

With technology if your a gamer like myself you can play with anyone from around the world. With gaming you can play with your friends and you can be talking and playing at the same time. Also with your gaming system you can also watch hulu, and with hulu can watch movies without having to go to the movie theater. Also with gaming with friends is that you can just have a blast while gaming. The counterclaim will be what if your not a gamer? If your not a gamer then you can take school at home without having to leave your house.

In conclusion i agree that technology has had positive effects on people because it has brought us cellphones to connect people from around the world. You can also shop online without having to leave your home. You can also be gaming with people from around the world. That's why technology has had a positive impact on peoples lives.             ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
25BFA95D04DE,"Everysingal student has worked hard in school. Showing they can push hared without being praised, even if it takes a year or two. Praising a student every time they get a good grade or accomplish a small paper isn't fine. I believe working hard builds true self-esteem comes from achivment because it shows in the students hard work, they aren't going to be stuck up or self centered, and they won't expect anything if they stopped getting praised. Although achieving your work and getting praised once in a while does feel good.

When a student works hard it shows in their work and in their face. Many students have shown their best effort with out getting praised. The student should have to put their own interest if the student really wants to accomplish their work. If the student is getting praised all the time what are they really learning about hard work? They would think everysingal good thing I do comes with a prize.

There are many students that are stuck up when they receive a good grade, those students have probably done good work but there could be a student that has worked the same but didn't get a good grade. There are some students that get their feeling hurt when they don't get a good grade and their class mate rub their grade in their face. Those self center students are closed minded, instead of helping the student out they hurt their feelings. Some student like to keep their grades to themselves.

If a student gets praised all the time they will expect something in the end. The student wouldn't do it for themselves they would do it for the prize. They will not learn about real hard work, they would think every good thing comes with a prize. And thats not the case. Feeling good at the end and knowing the student has worked hard with no prasing is great. They feel better about themselvs because they know now they can achieve something without the prasing.

In conclustion I believe true self-esteem comes form hard work, feeling good about your own grades and not expeting anything from anyone when you have worked really hard. The student will show their effort in their own work, and will look for their own achivments in school so they can feel good about themselvs. Thoes are the student that should be prasied.         ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
E7EFD51B632F,"The most persuasive, efficient way to influence others takes someone to set a good example of their behavior. Those examples sets an image in people's minds of how they want to see themselves in an ideal state. Moreover, every single human being on this Earth has a certain vibe or energy they give off due to their actions and thinking that people perceive or take in to judge that person. When people see that someone else has an energy or vibe he/she likes or agrees with, he/she will tend to gravitate towards it. Setting a good example is the best way to influence others because people want to know what is morally right or wrong, to see change and improvement, and to take on similar motives.

The first reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people want to know what is morally right or wrong. Martin Luther King Jr. is demonstrated as a great example of influencing others about what is right and wrong by leading a protest that many African Americans were involved in. Martin Luther King Jr. gave a famous speech called ""

I Have A Dream

"" which radiated strong energy that gave African Americans the strength and pride to protest the whites' racist segregation laws. The great example set by Martin Luther King Jr. displayed that he was a capable and high-thinking individual that African Americans gravitated towards. Due to the fact that African Americans were influenced by Martin Luther King Jr., they were able to understand what their rights as a human being were and how wrong the whites' segregation laws was.

The second reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people want to see change and improvement within themselves. A personal trainer could be a figure for some people as they are persistent and passionate at what they do. This can lead people to being motivated at the gym and encouraged to become more fit and healthy. Also, It sets a postitive message in their mind saying they have what it takes to get to the point of where their personal trainer is. Having the personal trainer as a figure to gain motivation from led to a person seeing improvement and change in their body and mindset.

The final reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people desire to take on similar motives. At an early stage of development as a child, they tend to look up to their parents or popular figures in awe as they gain inspiration to become a certain profession. A child may have seen an astronaut on television and became inspired to become one when he/she grows up. This inspiration may have led this upcoming astronaut to take astronomy and other space-related classes. Then an amateur astronaut is born because the astronaut on TV decades ago set a good example on how interesting tasks an astronaut has to do which led to the inspiration.

In conclusion, people better themselves due to influence. Influencing others to know what is morally right or wrong, to see change and improvement, and to take on similar motives are all based on good examples that are set. The examples set must give off something that interests the other person to be able to connect with the person. Also, that person must retain an energy and vibe that coinsides with the other person for that person to be influenced. This is indeed the best way on influencing individuals.",5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
DEC2A1A6A1CA,"The famous Albert Einstein always said ""Imagination is more important than knowledge"". I agree with this amazing quote because without imagination you wouldn't be yourself. As a kid everyone has always imagined of them being like or better then someone. These are my reasons of why I agree with the famous Albert Einstein.

First of all, without an imagination you wouldn't have dreams to succeed. Myself for example I've always wanted to be a professional soccer player. But than I realized that soccer isn't very popular in America. So than i started playing football and I enjoy playing that sport very much. Since than I've always imagine of being a professional football player.

Secondly, imagination is an everyday thing you use it everyday in many ways. Imagination is like an opinion,no one can take that from you. It can be positive nor negative either way no one can change the way you think. Imagination is everything because you always imagine or wish you were doing something or wish you were with someone. As a person that has dreams to succeed you need imagination to achieve them.

As one can see,me as a football player. I use my imagination a lot for many reasons. Because I am very competitive when it comes to sports, I always want to be better than the old me. I always want to be one step ahead from everyone. For that reason I think I use my imagination a lot. Like if I ever lose at something I would think about it and say ""imagine if I won"".

Lastly, the famous quote can say a lot in my opinion. Because without an imagination you wouldn't be a regular person.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
80CCEFCCD166,"Some may say that working in a group is better because you have people around you that can help you and support you. You dont have to depend on anyone when your working by yourself. Your focused more and when your focused no one can distract you. You could ask people for help if your confused on something.

You don't have to depend on anyone when working working alone because if you have a group and one of your group members doesn't show up then your screwed because now your missing a piece of your project or whatever the situation is. It's going to be hard when working by yourself because everything is depending on you. So you have to do everything on your own.

When your working by yourself you are more focused on doing the work. You could listen to music to keep you even more focused. Music keeps you relaxed and calm. You want your work to be nice and organized so that the reader can understand what's going on. Also you can use the internet to help search information. You can also ask someone for an idea or for a little of help.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
4585DE769AE9,"I don't believe the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. First of all, the research showing there is a lot of chance to know about the distance. It's hard to make the online or video to offer the distance. Because when the students are in online or when they try to make video they are not going to take care them self. For example: I remember when I was six grade my friend PROPER_NAME was making online video. We went to classes from home to know how far it is. On that time she just focus on her video she wasn't focus on her way. After that, she try to cross the way but she still making video. She didn't saw the car she try to cross the road. So,she got some accident because of the video and she just focusing what she is doing.

The most important way is to offer the distance classes from home is using map. It's easy to know how far or how close it is. Other ways, the students have to take care there self when they are in the way because there is a lot of car.

Additional, there are not going to take care them self when they are making online or video. They just focus what there are doing. For example: when I was tine grade I remember my friend PROPER_NAME she was eleven grade.

She try to offer the distance for her friend by making video. When She was school from home. Then, she started showing the way. On that time, she wasn't take care her self because she was focusing the video.

Next, she try to cross the way by raining. She didn't pay attention the way and she got car accident. On that time she passed away she died. I agree some students think they would benefits from being able to attend classes from home. But most of them are not going to take care them self because there are not focusing the way. They just focusing what there are doing or they just focusing online or video. Additional, using map is butter than making online or video. Other ways its hard to make online or video for offer the distance. Most students are not going to focus when there are making that.

In conclusion, I don't believe the students would benefits by way of online or video to offer the distance. There is other way to offer the distance from classes to home.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
FF4CBDA0E418,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. In my opinion first impression might be possible to change because people are different human with different habits and it depends on ourselves how we act and treat the person that we want to impress.

For example Generic_Name wanted to apply for a job in a clothing company named Dior which is a popular,expensive,and fancy brand he prepares himself for his first interview,he wears black suit and black shoes and starts heading to the office with his CV he have enough expeirence to be one of the employer in the company he impress his boss and thats how he gets his job.

In addition to this statement the reason why the first impression is impossible is because the people did not met each other more than once they do not know their habits what they like about each other or what they do in their daily life or what they like to do like their expeirence.

In conclusion I would say this statement is kind of equal disagree or agree becuase like I said people never know each other habits and what they like for example: what is their hobby, what they eat,what they like to wear, so at the end my opinion is I am disagree with this statement.   ",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
7C14A6539215,"To keep the resources of the world, Can be necessarily to implement the idea "" four-day school week"". "" The four day school week"" consist of ten hours per day. Adopting this idea it is going to conserve energy and resources. If they spend the whole evening in the school they can learn more and be more prepare for school.

It's a good idea to implement this but at the same time it has some disadvantages . One of them can be that the students will be stressful. A lot of hours in just one place can make the students to got bored an tired of it. It's not just that a lot of students have responsibilities as paying rent and bills. They need to work to pay their responsibilities and if they come to school for ten hours they won't have enough time to make more hours in their job.

If the students assist to school for more hours they got the chance to learn more and improve their skills. In those 10 hours they can even get an extra class , a class that they want. They can have a lot of time to understand more their classes and be more prepare for them. Having that time will be easy to communicate with more people and teachers . The don't have to rush in class anymore , now they got the time to prepare more in class.

To implement this can be a bad idea because if the students come to school for ten hours they will end it up with stress. Be in a place for a lot of our can be really stressful If the students are stressful of school they won't do their best because they are tired of it. Not all the students like to go to the school and for them will be even more stressful. If the students have homework will be even more difficult to get a good rest. They won't have enough rest for them.

Some students got responsibilities at home like help their families at home or some of them have to work to pay their bills. A lot of students pay their own rent and they need to leave early from school and work more hours to effort enough . If they leave late from school they will work less hours and at the end they won't have enough money . Leaving late from school and working a lot going to make them tired of that routine. The students need time to rest as well. If they don't get enough rest to do what they want to do at the end they will end it up stressful and not doing their best at school and at work. If that happens they will have a lot of problems because if they don't do their job property the will got fired and without money to pay their bills. In school can happen the same thing as well with bad grades and not paying enough attention.

In conclusion having this idea can be a bad choice . A lot of students have things to do beside school like working or helping their families . Coming for ten hours can make them to stress easily .Student with stress won't do their best and at the end they going to have bad grades. The students need to rest and do whatever they want in their free time.          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
604E0EA00305,"Allowing students the use of cell phones during class for educational purposes can be a threat, because it might cause an effect on the students education cycle. Some schools don't allow students the use of electronic devices inside their classroom, because the use of cell phones can be a distraction and it can also become an addiction for students in school.

This idea of letting students use their cell phones in their classrooms might stop the developing of their brain and is gonna lead students not to pay attention in class by letting them use their cell phones for special needs in class. However, cell phones have different types of effects worldwide , it can cause people to become slow in their learning and thinking abilities, it can cause vision problems, and it can also be a distraction for everyone.

It has been said that seventeen percent of the world's population has increased their thinking and learning abilities and the number are raising by using their phones daily.

Students are the future of hundreds of nations, students should be teach with words, books, or by letting them find information inside magazines or finding new words in dictionaries.

Some schools don't allow students to take out their electronic devices during class, because schools have computers inside liberties for students to find information when they have permission from their teachers or when they have school work.

By letting students use their cell phones in classrooms for educational purposes can cause a big impact in their physical life and also academic. Experts have discovered that ninety four percent of the students in school use their cell phones to cheat in schoolwork and exams. Most of the students in school struggle in their way to collage or because they didn't used the right method for learning or finding information when they had schoolwork, they didn't developed their thinking ability that at the end it became something hard for them to remaster. This method effects millions of students around the globe when they get out of their education system, this is one of the reasons why a percentage of students struggle in their lifetime when they end their education.

In addition, experts have discovered that when teenagers use cell phones in daily routines in a certain amount of time they might experience vision problems or they can also end up blind, this is all caused by the reflection of the light from their cell phones, this is why experts recommend schools to teach students with books and not to let them use technology because they might experience vision problems at least once in their life time. The cell phone use in classrooms for educational purpose can become an addiction or a distraction for students in school or in their life outside school , they can develope a routine when they won't be able to live without their cell phones and sometimes this cell phones addictions guide people to end up getting hit by cars or by getting involve into car crash accidents, because they were too distracted on their cell phones while driving or crossing the streets.

In conclusion, schools should not allow students the use of cell phones in their classroom for educational purposes, because all of this might guide students to struggle in their academics, or in their personal life outside school. Students take advantage of the use of cell phones in their classroom, students will used this method to cheat in school. Sometimes this school methods end up taking thousands of lives for being distracted on their cell phones or trying to help students with technology.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
C209AAD70DDE,"Imagine if we accomplish more, if we are always doing something. Some people accomplished their goals in life, but some people dont do nothing to accomplished what they want. I would like to accomplish my goals in life; there are three thing that I would like to accomplish: having a success career, graduate from high school with an advance diploma, and studied the area of medical. I dont know why people dont accomplish something in life. People always says that things happen for a reason. There could be reasons of why things happen or not. In my opinion, people should always by doing something. If people accomplish what they want, then there would not be a purpose. It doesnt matter where we are, we could always be doing something. We could accomplish more by: helping our parents, being active, and helping our community.

My first reason, We could be doing something by helping our parents. It would be wonderful if we could help our parents at home, or, most thing may be done at home. Helping them by with laundry and cleaning the rooms, so, they dont be tire that much because they just come from work. Helping them with the chores would be a great choice because they would not be too tired from work. Helping our parents is good because they help us when we were little. By doing the chore is our responsibly because they could be mad.

My second reason, helping our community. Helping the community is a great choice because we could pick up trash so it doesnt pollute the our where we live. Helping other people good or bad. Some people could rape you or stole the money you have in your wallet. It depends of the people some people could be hypocrite and some people could be nice. The most important thing is help our community by pick up trash and cleaning the community. Our free time we could be helping the community so it doesnt pollute like other countries.

My last reason, being active anywhere we are. our health is important because if we dont care about our health, we could get disease. Doing one hour of exercise, workout, or something it could be good for our health. By always doing something our health could be healthy, and eat a good diet. Some of the disease are cholesterol, diabetes, and are other more disease if you dont eat healthy or you not do exercise. Being active is very important for you and other people.

Helping your parents is a great option because most things could be done. Helping the community is a great choice because we could pick up trash, so the community doesnt pollute where we live. Being active is very important because of your health. Your health is very important because you need to eat right and do exercise or workout. Some people accomplish something and some people dont accomplish nothing. If people accomplish what they want, there, would be no purpose. In mt opinion people should accomplish what they want in life. I hope people could accomplish something in life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
B54DBEF87F11,"One day Generic_Namehad to go somewhere important with his family, but the problem was that he also had school to attend to. So he decided to do a video chat with his class, so he didnt he didn't have to miss anything from school. Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Doing oline stuff and video conferencing is a great way for students to stay on task with their work. I think that students would take the benificial of being able to attend to school from home because they have responsibilities and also a future ahead of them.

First reason on why students should take the benificial of doing school from home is because they have responsibilities. What if you get sick and don't want to miss anything then you can just video chat with the class. Your familiy decide to take a trip somewhere on a school week what do you do. You take your school stuff with you and a laptop to talk with the class. You can't miss more than like 9 days of schoo if you do you automatically fail, and that's your biggest responsibility on not failing, so you can take the advantage of video chatting with your class. Those are the reasons why I say students should do a video confrence because they have responsibilities.

Second reason on why students should take the benificial of doing school from home is because they might want to have a future ahead of them. When you are in your senior year that's when ou got to step up your game. What if you miss the bus or don't have a ride and you can't get to school then you obviously just video chat with your classes. If you don't understand with your school work you can do learning stuff online so you don't feel behind. Doing online stuff as well help students who don't know what they are doing and feeling left behind. Those are the reasons why students should do video confrences and online stuff because they want to have a future ahead of them.

Lastly, some people don't want to take the benificial of having video confrences or oline stuff to do school stuff at home. The reason why they don't want to do that is because when they are home they just want to have free time not to do school work at home. Also when they are sick they don't do anything because they think that they don't have that much work to miss. Well you see when you are home not doing anything then what are you getting done obviously nothing because they think that when they go back to school they won't miss that much work. That's why you should either do online stuff or a video confrence with your classes so you don't miss anything or be left behind.

Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. There are many reasons why students should take the benificial of doing stuff like that because they have responsibilities and also have a future ahead of them. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
75DAA54880C1,"The author Ralph Emerson wrote, '' To be yourself in a world that is constlantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' I totally agree with Emerson's statement because be something else is not the most greatest accomplishment that you can do, the most important accomplishment that you can do in this big worl is always be yourself, be humble about everything, be kind with others, and never change the person that you really are.

First, bring humble is one of the most important thing that we always need to have no matter what. Being humble can take you to the top, to be successful in the life. For example, Marisela de Montecristo, is a salvadorian beauty queen, who wob the title of Miss Universe last year and Nuestra Belleza Latina in 2013. Marisela grow up very poor, but when she was 10 years old, she emigrated with her mom to this country looking for a better life, however, when she came here she went to the school, she learned English, and she did graduated in social communication. In 2013 she decided to compete in a reality show that is called '' Nuestra Belleza Latina '' and she won, and with all the money that she won, she decided to founded an own restaurant for her mom in Las Vegas, Nevada. Six years latter, she decided to compite for Miss Universe El Salvador 2018, where she resulted the winner. That year she went to Thailand to compite for the title of Miss Universe. Now she is a famous person and she have her own foundation that helps people in countries around the world like Africa, El Salvador, Mexico, Philipines. Also she is modeling in differents countries like Paris, Spain, and Great Britain, but above all this things that shes is doing, she always still humble. In one interview with Telemundo, she said that being humble is the key of being successful in the live, and I totally agree with her.

Second, be kind with others is something that defined you as a good person, because people love when someone is really interesting in help others. For example, I think that we should be kind with others, help others, because we never know when we going to need help of these people, in addition, being kind is other accomplishment that you can do in this life, and is something that you can feel proud of be.

Third, never change who you really are for something passenger or for something that can not give you happiness, because be yourself is the most important thing that you can do in this big world. For example, my mom told me that being myself is the only thing that can make the difference of me between everyone, she also told me that being gay is not a hindrance to triumphing in my life, because with effort, dedication, and persistence I can do many things in my life, without necessity of change the person who I am.

To finish, be yourself is the only and the best thing you can do in your life. There is not other way to be happy and to demostrated to the world that you don't have to be something else to be successful and to make greatest accomplishment in your life, because the key always is going to be be yourself and be proud the person who you are.",3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
24DAF94F0A18,"I am sure my heart is raising that I saw a lot of people behavior is going bazaar! Then it is said that your own behavior is the best way to influence other people because it creates trust, shows that your helping others, and creates a positive big impact on others.

Your own behavior creates trust is to show that other can respect you and care about you. Friends behavior creates trust because they will sometimes help others. For example, if i have a huge injury and I can't walk, then probably they'll know that I'm not joking around and I'll trust them to help me. Another person behavior that creates trust is teachers, their behavior is mostly positive and always influence others. They'll always care about helping their student and makes the student trust the teacher what they need help on. Even though students think that teacher dont trust them, but others think teachers have faith on others to try hard to help and let them work hard for the future. Also, families creates trust so they will always have influence on me. It like i made their personality more positive than before. Your own behavior creates trust because of helping others, having positive personality, and increase better relationship on others.

Showing that you help others is another way to influence other people from your own behavior. Sometimes my families help others and they will never forget about us. Like all of our family went to Generic_City and went on a mission to help others, like we build houses or feed a lot of poor people with food that we made. Another person that help others is friends, they always help me if i'm in a stress zone. They always comfort me feel better when I'm upset or mad. Also, teachers help other because they want the students to past the school. Although some of them might fail, yet teachers try their best to let them past. They want them to try hard so teachers need to make them work hard and help them learn. Like my teachers will try their best to help me past my quizzes or test. Helping others is the best way to influence people like friends, teachers, and families that they will support you and others what they need.

The reason why your own behavior creates a big positive impact of others. So more and more people will show respect and will mostly love you. This will create a big positive impact on friends because I show love for them and they will probably love me back. All of us should always show love and care so that they wont hate you. For families, they always have a positive impact because of others positive attitude. Showing a good attitude can be like walking the bridge to their heart. This can help their feeling be better and better. Another person that have a big impact on others is firefighters. They always care about others and their lives so they always protect them when they're in trouble. There was one story that these firefighters that they need equipment because their tools is rusty and broken, but one person called them for help so they came the house was on fire and the wife is still trapped. So they got her out and she is save. So the husband so so proud, and send them 2,000 dollars a month so the firefighter can bye the equipment. This it to show how much the husband care about them. So this can create a big positive impact because of showing love, fixing feelings, and having risk to protect.

Other might say that your own behavior can affect others. It has said that you own be behavior can influence other by showing that you help others create a positive big impact, and creates trust. We should see if others behavior can influence others and change the world.       ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
C2D061782462,"If you're afraid that you're going to hurt someone's feelings by telling the truth don't be afraid to tell that person the truth. Being honest can lead you to many benefits and help you in many ways right now and in the future too. When being honest, people will start trusting you with a lot of things. But you've got ot be careful with what you do or say. You can get a lot of good benefits in life. A benefit of telling the truth all the time is building new friendships and meeting new people.

On the other hand, people will have that mindset thinking that being honest is a bad thing. As you start lying more often, it can become a bad habit which you might regret later in life. Now if there's a case where you're trying to tell the truth, those same people that you have been lying too won't believe you. A negative effect that can ruin you is like losing friendships or losing a job based on the way you've been acting. Also, being dishonest can make people think that they can't trust you. Those people that you're lying too might think you're a bad person.

You can show integrity to lots of people which can be by listening to them and telling them the good and the bad. Think of yourself like a role model to other people and having a positive mindset. If you show integrity, people will start looking up to you. Also, have a good explanation to the reason why you're lying to that person, well that's if they find out one day. Besides, if you had a good reason for lying that other person might forgive you. But let me tell you this as a tip so you won't make a mistake and regret it ""think before you speak"", if you don't do that it can lead you to many consequences.",4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
8D14BC33208D,"I think that finish high school in three year is a really good idea, because I can go early to the college, and I don't lost time. One reason is my friend Generic_Name, who finish high school early, and now he's done with college; Additional,

he says that finish high school is very good because he got more time to work but not everyone think like him.

Therefor my others friends who think that is not good, because they need go prepared to the college, so they says if I finish early high school I can't go prepared to the college; Another reason is that no body want lost time, for that reason my friend Generic_Name finish high school early, but many youngest are lazy.

Every school need offer that program, the program is really important because can help a lot students to finish high school early; Also, a lot student want finish early.

I think that everyone need take the program, because the students got more time to work, and to learn too, so the program is a big help for the students who take it. My friend Generic_Name ad others friends who I know, they are benefit. One year is a long time, in one year early they can got more money and more everything.",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
44DCCF637033,"DEAR PRINCIPAL

All the students should perform community service because the adults are out there working the whole day and when they come back home they want to drive on a clean community. The students when they do community service they are learning about their future life it is like a job you can't slack off. The adults don't have enough time to do community work with their job and all that but who has more free time than the students or kids . That is not all when we clean up our community our children our going to live in a clean community so help make a better future. The students may this is corny but they know too that they want their children to in a clean community and for their grandchildren. The community service could be any not just cleaning up also help tutor your neighbors child with home work and any thing out side your house helping is community service. You can babysit your neighbors kids and other peoples kids too that could count as community. The teachers could have like a game where who ever does the most community service gets like a prize of the class.

There would be like when a student gets suspended they have do community work and give him or her an hour or more time .

So principal encourage more students to do community service during the day or after school.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
3B2DADB10DCA,"A exelent worker man come for a student who choosed a career that he love when he was at young age and study that career for a long time. children at yound age learn more fasther them when they are getting older. Also some parents like to ask their children what he or she want to be in the future for example: doctor, teacher, dentist, police or engineer. At school teachers' tell students' to do a draw about what they are dreaming to be in their future and every students' at young age are have in mind what they will be in the future. It is a good idea fo students to commit to career at young age.

Students need time to prepare for they career in way to succeed in what they want to be in their future.

For example, all career take time to learn about each subjec and students might don't have enough credits to past some classes and they have to take the class again. In addition some students wants to be doctors' and the career for doctors' take a long time and a lot of money that they need to have in way to be get that career. Such of people have to save money in way to pay for they education for their career, but in some cases the government pays them education for to be a qualify student their school. Career takes time and knowledge in way to do exelents in what you are planing to be when get older.

Students will have the opportunity to learn more than one career and they will have the choose to decide what career they like most. For xample, students have have the option to change they career to other career that they find out that they like most. Furthermore students are young age can have many ways of opportunity to make a good future for their life. Also student can decide which career give them a good job for to have a better salary. Staring to study career at young age you have the option to learn about more career and get that one that you feel that you are good at.

Some people believe that students at young age don't have a good knowledge about what they want to be in the future. For example, they argue that students has to be more older to understand how to choose a career and how to be sure what career they want to be in ther live. Such of people says that student just like to be what his or her mother, father, uncle, cousing or some persone that they might almire career is, they might even now enything of thoses career that they want to be becuse they don't have much of knowledge about the job. Even though they says that students don't have in mind how really career that them want is not that easy that how they think it's; they says that students are not responsible enough to decide for ther future career at young age. People think students are not old enough to be ready to take a position in their live.

In conclusion students decide what career they want for their life. But also straring a career at young age students will have more opportunities to learn thinks that might help them in their future job. Deciding for what you want at a long time help students to do things better beacuse you have more time to fix you mistakes in your career. A good person with a good job and with a great future in font is the one who stared working for what they want at young age. High school will encurage students career at aerly age.            ",3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
01794F5F1423,"Most schools have the same lunch menu every week but, Imagine if that changes. One day the cafeteria plans to change the menu to a healthier on instead of the same one. Try to convince the school principal to decided whether this is a good or bad idea.

Some students think its best to have a healthier lunch and not the same one.

Students always have something different to eat. Some students get bored of eating the same lunch here and there so, why not have a healthier lunch. If the change in the menu where to happen most students would not get bored or complain about their food. Although, one can see that not most of the students enjoy their lunches they mostly just play around with their food on their trays. while some are actual eating.

Some prefer to stay with the same menu. Some would not agree with the change in the lunch menu. However, Others prefer the idea of having the healthier lunch instead of the other lunch menu. On the other hand, Some do not want the change just because of their favorite food on the other menu. But if they try it they might find out hey like something new.

Provides more nutrients. If the cafeteria where to start to give healthier foods in the menu. Students would have the right amount of energy for the rest of the day. This means if they ate a healthier lunch they would not fall asleep for the remainder of class or classes.

In conclusion, the cafeteria should start giving healthier lunch and not whats on the other menu. By the end of the day students would have more energy and be awake in class.                                                          ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
8D734AF72931,"Some people don't accomplish their work when they are doing something because if they are then they might not have time to do the other work they are given or they might be busy with the hard work first then maybe finish the work. But inactivity also serve as a purpose because some people aren't doing anything so they have time to finish and accomplish something because they are not doing anything

The first reason that inactivity should serve as a purpose is because people that aren't doing anything should be able to accomplish their work and other work so that they did not finish and they dont have an excuse to not do work. On the other hand people doing work have an excuse because if they are given a lot for work they might not have time to finish the other work but the people that finish working and have some time left should be given more work in till they done have anymore time at school or at work.

The first reason why people accomplish something when they are doing something is because they work and don't waste time at school or work but sometime. The second reason is that they don't accomplish work when they are doing something because they won't have time to finish the other work or they rush ans make a lot of mistake on their work and will get a bad report are grade on it so thats why some people don't accomplish their work when they are doing other things.

So inclusion some people accomplish their work and some don't also inactivity serve as a purpose for people that are done with their work but class or they are still work should not just sit there and do nothing they should get more work in till they leave the class or their jobs.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
DCFBEEAC3AA8,"I am support should people make their own decisions because they are practice make their own decisions and they are confidence their decisions.

I am support should people make their own decisions because they are practice make their own decisions. If people make their own decisions they should get how to learn their own decisions. They are practice individual make decisions. They are find own idea to make the decisions. They are find more information to make decisions. They are more active their decisions.

I am support should people make their own decisions because they are confidence their decisions. If people make own decision they can do more and more better with confidencecal descions. They involve more confidence. They learn how to show with other people their own decision by confidential. They learn how to improve their decisions with confidence. They are more strong than make with the group thire decisions. They decide what ever they want desions. They show their confidential make with other people.

In conclusion:

I am support should people make their own decisions this is important because they decide what ever they want their decsions.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
DD474E5804C0,"Do you think students should work on assignments from school at home?

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I will argue about how students can study from long distance, not all schools approve the current subject. If students were to study from home it would be difficult for them to understand what the assignment that is being asked to complete at certain time. The students should be able to afford a device which is necessary to study any subject. Attending classes from home can cause for students to be able to work more and do their assignments on time.

Schools will not exist if students leave to study home which will make it hard for them to communicate with teachers when help is needed. Students would not meet each other or talk physically which would be awkward, can cause them to not trust each other if it comes to a project that needs to be done. Physical education would not be a class since everything would be on devices which is a conflict, which is needed to graduate. In many short word students will be gaining so much weight that they'll not be able to do certain sports they want or walk to their destination.

Typing online or video conferencing is not easy if the person on camera is shy and doesn't like video conferencing which can be very often. Accessing to both subjects can not be trusted if the school will be monitoring every movement you take on your device. Testing online can be easy to cheat if the teacher is not around walking and watching what your doing. Students might not know many things but cheating and being sneaky are the two most known words we understand very well.

In other words there are advantages to studying online, disadvantages online and it would be a big disappointment for students to fail almost every class that needs to be taken for graduation. If they have a job they will consider work their first priority instead of school. Student's would not receive a scholar ship or diploma so that they can go to college and accomplishing the goal of having a better job.

Some people say that school is very important for students, that they'll earn more money than their parents who probably dont have a well paid job and education. But I think it can benefit sometimes it can be a amazing idea for students to study home because they won't drop out of school. Students have different emotions that trigger them to want to leave school behind, since they start working more to pay bills that need to be paid each month.

All students should go to school to focus on what they want to be in life or do. Physical experience is not the same as typing online or video conference. Knowing that student's can succeed in different ways is not bad even so they will be expected to have any sort of education someday in the future. School is providing knowledge for those who pay attention to school and more. Believing you can do what you always dreamed of is a motivation that will help learn more about life and the way it works.     ",3.5,3.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
FD0C7DA5E69F,"Dear ,manager

I would like to choose and work at this place where you make controllers and stuff. Because you can learn how to design things , like perhaps learn how to make an interior design certain objects. And thats the platform i wanna be in. Becasue when in that work space i feel more comfortable and why i chose it cause its just fun to make new designs to a controller and you get quite the money for it of work because of that. What specific job is this its to design xbox controllers and stuff to make the controllers more meaning full so people can buy them, such as when they want to have a good gaming experience. When they buy the controllers that are decently priced they will take care of it and when they do that they make the controller more money and this is why i chose this work place and specific job.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
CE9843304D87,"I am agree, but sometime it is not possible to make something that we want. There is a lot of thing that we want but we can not to have it. Yeah, he was right to be ourselve in world that is constantly trying to make us something else is the greatest accomplishment. but in some situation we can not do what we want? for example; I want to be a doctor and my family support me for that, but the problem is that I am trying to to learn and search something about human life but I can not, because it is hard for me. Only in one condition I can reach for my goal. if I try my best and I study a lot. then I will be a good doctor.

If we do something for ourselve it will be good because we do the thing what we want it. It will be great to doing something good but we should discase with someone who is so close to us. by asking someone about our problame maybe we solve it. If we want to do something for ourselve so we need to finish high school and university. take digree after all that I will take a good job and then I make a good career for myself and tehn I will be have a great life in nthe future.

sometime it is possible to do the thing what we want. world is to big. whatever we want we can do it but we need someone to support us in the any type of situation if it is bad or good. if it is bad thing then he/she can tell me that it is bad and you can not do that stuff then I will never do that. If it is good thing then he/she can tell me and support me for doing that good stuff.

Everthing is possible in this world if we try and we should search about the thing that we do not know about it. by asking someone who have experience in the thing that we do not have. by searching I can change my life. trying is best to have great life. I will try to make a good life for myself. i have a lot of goal to reach for those goals but I should try because it is hard for me. everything is possible.

for making a good life in this world is not that mach easy that we thing. We need to face to face every problems. if we scare from the problem then we will not be able to do something what we want it before and we can reach it in the future. so we should be do the thing what we want to do.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
FDFB04ED3388,"I agree with John Lubbock statement about ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it""

because in order for you to get to your career , you want to have very good character traits. For an example , you love working with kids , so you apply working at a daycare center where you'll teach little kids the different types of shapes and watch them while their parents are at work. You apply and get schedule for an interview and the owner in charge looks over your resume and realizes you have bad character traits , do you think that they'll give you the job ? no they wont because they want someone who has good character traits.

Another reason , Your character shouldnt be decided by the world or your friends. Your character is something you show to somebody like loyalty and respect. If your loyal to someone chances are they'll be loyal to you. For an example a Hospital hires you to be a general surgeon most likely they want you to stay loyal to them and stay with them. Respect goes a long way , respecting someone is very important you never want to get in someones bad side because you never know what they'll do if you disrespect them. You want to always respect someone.

Your character is something that is chosen by yourself never the world, because you could be a very good person and you'll still have people talking down on you , but you choose to accept the fact that people are always going to have their own opinion. The world shouldnt decided if your a good person or a bad person society shouldnt decide that either. You choose to either be mean , rude , nice , happy , or sad. Your character shouldnt be based on the people around you. They shouldnt have to choose your attitude.

Even though people think that your character is formed by influences beyond our control , I think we control our own character , we choose to either to be mean or nice. We control what goes through our head and what comes out of our mouths. The people around us should respect our character. We decided what we want to do for ourselves not others. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
F4B3B2CAB030,"I belief in this issue about the students are responsible with their class is favorable for them, take a class at home . Also Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend class from home by way online or video conferencing. I think is good idea, students would benefits from being able to attend class from home.

Some students take class in home because they do not have time to go to the school. For example, this e students need to take class from online because they work at night or at day . Clearly, they do not have time to go the school because they time is short and they need to organize their day for take a class so, some students take a class from online because their have many reason . In summary, some students need time for study , and they need this position from online for study and they can finish their class.

To day in the world exist many disease, and we need to get precautions with this dangerous disease. So for this problem some students can't go to the school for this big problem. Relating, this problem with school because the students health is so important. For example, the corona virus is so dangerous, students need a protection, because this illness inflict many death. Is so easy to get sick. For this reason, 
is important to students to get class from online or video conferencing,

is better study at home and also a good place, is the best way for students not get sick from this dangerous disease. However, this disease not have medication, but students we cant to prevent get to sick also, studying at home. In summary, is important to caring students they are the future for the world. For this reason some school need to get dis option, learning from online or video conferencing.

In another hand , i think is good idea, students would benefits from being able to attend class from home, and other people belief, this not a good idea , students would benefits from being able to attend class from home for this issue, students not leaning in one video conference but, some students don't want to go to the school because they have more than 17 years old or they can't enter to school for their age. Because, for you can enter to school minimal you need to have 15 to 17. Also, you have 18 you can't not to enter at school and is a problem because you can't find a good work if you dont have a graduation certificate from school. For example, some students want to study , but they can't because they can't enter to school for their age, I think is so important to exist a program when the people older the age can study line or video conferencing. However, many people need to get a certification but they can't for this problem, also the best solution is studying online is more accessible for them. They can have more opportunities in their life , they can get a better job. For instance students can learning online , is a big benefit for this students was can't enter at school. In definition everybody need a opportunity for study, for get a certificate from school. obviously the students are responsible with their class at home.

The benefit was school online or video conference represent is the student get more concentration at home , they do not have distraction for any other students, they do not suffer by bulling and they can get a good grade studying a lone in home. For example, sometime students get bad grade for this reason , distraction , they can't sleep at night also, they need to wake up to early for this reason they sleep in class,and they not put attention because they are tired. Also, the students have the opportunity to studying online they can organize their time and pass their class easy because they are focus with their class online also they not have distraction and its for that reason they get a good grades, students need class online or video conferencing , this program help many studying or many young girl are pregnant. Some young girl want to finish her high school but she can't because her are pregnant. However, some school get a program studying online is to much better for this students are pregnant is more easy, to studying at home because she can eating when she hungry and carrying her health for her baby. The program studying online is important to exist help to many students with different problems situations or health problems. In summary learning as action for students who wants to study online or video conferencing. I think is a good program for many students who want to study. Clearly,

everybody has the opportunity to study obviously the students who get study online has a responsible to attend every day their class and get their certification high school.

In conclusion, class online or video conferencing have many option to study, just is question of time for the students , they need to organize time for study online and can graduate , this program no have many different then the school just, the student need to stay alone and the benefit of that is you can concentrate better alone by your self. Also is better studying at home for this many disease dangerous is more comfortable state at home. However students no need age for study, what they need is inspiration and intelligent for study not need age. In summary distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
DE0F5C13960F,"Have you ever wondered what it is like to have a homework club at your school, well its pretty useful. The idea is for kids to do their homework at school instead of at home, you can get help from a teacher and also work with your buddies.

One reason why I argue for school clubs to be available is because you it gives you time to do other stuff such as, spending time with your family,spending time with your friends,and even go to the movies. If you do your homework at the homework club you won't have to worry about due dates, quizzes, or tests. If you dont go the homework club you will always have tons of homework and not even do it which can cause your grades to fall down and probably not graduate if the required skills aren't meet.

Secondly, if you and your friend are in the same class and get the same homework then you can work on it together,check each others papers, and quiz each other on it. If you work on it alone you might get confused and frustrated, or maybe stressed, obviously copying one another does not make you learn anything, but there is a teacher who can help both of you at the same time.

Video games are very fun and addictive but you cant play if you got homework in the way. If you get you homework done then you have the whole day to play with your friends, communicate with them and even battle to the lat one standing. Some video games have blood, gore, and violence and some kids love those games which can be a small problem but not a big one, most parents can take devices and electronics away because kids dont do their homework so if you want to play video games and have fun you better go to homework club.

In conclusion the homework club should be available and going so that kids can finish their homework all at once and have fun in and out of school. Homework is really important and kids very often dont do their homework and thats probably the reason why kids hate school and do not want to got to school.                                ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
0C8D699DEE90,"main idea some schools district offter programs , that allow high school students to graduated in the three years of the traditional four years.

may mean idea is students is coming the different countries is heart because speak different languages y different cultures is different languages the people is coming and this countries because make you future for to pass away you life, a later young people is this country because this make you future, is coming the high school graduated is so hart because not speak English non thing not auderstant nothing the class no pass the class is later people state four years, and high school because you no put a lot effort in to pawing , because you make you future . But my self three years is coming this country is so heart because not speak nothing English pass the class because i'm make may future for my mom and litter brother i'm see you graduated and this countries because is more opportunities and may fears years in the highs school pass the sol algebra 1,and so happy because pass the this sol, becuase i'm have a later problems and my family.

the a later students no coming the school because work force one o more years is coming the collage the students make you future you family.     ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
DAF9AC30424E,"The school day should not be extended even more and I dont want the be their for an extra hour and i dont think anyone else would want to be their for an extra hour. Reason one we are in school almost all day 8 hours is enough there is not way i'm staying their for an extra hour. Reason two staying in school an extra hour is less time to do our homework and they give out a lot of homework,we will probably be done with homework by bed time. Reason three with more school hours,less homework time,less free time. We wont have any time to do what we want because they give out a lot of homework witch means we have to put in more time on home work and we have to stay in school for an extra hour also means more homework time and way less free time. thats why we should not be in school for an extra hour because we are in school almost all day,less time to do our homework,even less time for free time.  ",3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
2D0A261453D0,"I have a friend who is special to me and I can trust her whenever I have a problem or situation. This friend I have is really nice, a hard worker, and always helps me with school things a lot. Sometimes when I struggle she is always there and knows when i'm trying to hide my problems away from them.

I met this friend in fifth grade my friendship with my friend is really special. Now, I know what their personality is like, and when it comes stressful, wonderful, sad, special, and other moments in their life I can always find a way to make them feel better. I can always count on them because they know how to always work things out, they can also be very fun and silly at the same time which is great. We can always study together, play games, and do a lot of fun activities. We always joke around about a topic and create silly ideas to make it funny and entertaining to make more jokes. We were really happy to be with each other even though we had to know each other more.

I only met them in fifth grade but we became really close in seventh grade. When we entered in seventh grade they didn't have any of their friends in any of their classes, I was, but in only one. This only class they had me with them was the class we had every day to see each other in. They didn't know anyone besides me because we had already met but they didn't know anyone. They were really shy back then but I helped them to make more and new friends besides the ones they already had and me because I was in only one of their classes but not in the others. Then they made new friends in other classes which they are still friends with other people, they introduced me to their new friends and they were really nice and I was really happy for them being friends with new people.

We both know that their a really hard worker, they could also be trusted and a special friend. Now, when it comes to us being older we might fade away from each other as time goes by, no one knows when one of us will change or leave but, if we get separated and change I will know it's them only by looking into their heart no matter how much they change I will find them again because once a best friend always a best friend.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
AA7B4CC7EE1B,"A positive attitude is what we expect in everything and everyone whether it be from;a customer service employee,teachers speaking to sporadic students,and or a bus driver driving a bus full of disrespectful kids. The lessons they burn in your head as a kid is that a positive attitude can take you places beyond your wildest dreams and those who have a negative attitude will have a unfortunate future brought upon themselves, in all honesty through my words I don't believe a positive attitude can lead to a successful life its our decisions in the making that do decide it instead. The saying that nice guys finish last is one heck of an understatement in the least, you could be the most positive person on the planet and still have shortcomings when it comes to a successful life .

A positive attitude is just what it is, it doesn't guarantee anything sure it might be helpful when getting the things you want in life but it can only go so far in within its own limitations whether it be giving and employer a positive attitude during a job interview of a job you've always wanted while ignoring how severely under qualified you are in the field. The idea alone of someone truly believing that you can be successful with a positive attitude is a joke,if anything the person believing a positive attitude is what makes them successful isn't in on the joke they are the joke.

Similar to a positive attitude a negative is never a guarantee to a successful life at least with a negative attitude you won't see the world in rose colored glasses if anything you see it for the harsh reality it truly is rather then doing pointless things to make life just a little bit more worth your time rather then forcing a positive attitude just to take in the world easier. In my eyes its just some facade we all have the ability to put up but some choice to live in la la land while others live in the real world dealers choice really.

Our attitudes is just one thing that can change the course of our lives the real way we make it in life is how we do so with our decisions towards that successful life that everyone desires. Its a bittersweet reality on those who constantly maintain a positive attitude those kind of people are taken advantage of their kindness and will often be misunderstood with the people around them. The real way to live is to have an iron will that shows that you are not someone to be messed with but, someone who is respected and can hold their own with making heavy decisions rather then keeping it all happy go lucky.

The debate about whether or not a positive attitude or a negative attitude can make you successful in life is kinda of like those other world debates about what happens when we die, is there life other then humankind, is there really a god. Its all based on interpretations or our upbringings into this beautiful disgusting world that is life you can be born with a sliver spoon in the mouth with a negative or born in a war torn country with a positive attitude its not about how we should make a successful life with attitudes its about how we make of it.",4.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
8416C7C6F146,"when someone is already mastered something beyong , they will never grow, base on what they experience alot of people they can not do another thing becuase when they star they just mastered, alot of people try to do something new or trying to make another future but is it imposible becuase they alredy master up. And they will never grow becuase people star duing the thing wrong they did not see the thing write

One reason thay people can star a new life or do another thing it becuase when someone is alredy mastered or they alredy pass for the momet and now they canit erased and they never grow up, they will can go back and fix what they alrady did that why is it importan thing before when someno it about ro do something and also what someone alreadi did it hard to fix it again for example all what a people did before in they pass they canot go fix it, people did thing and they dont think about it that why they will never gow up when someno thyaying to do something but they already mastered they will nwver can do other thing and they will not ba a person that why can do something alse the autor refere that, what you do beyong now yu anot do it again some people may say people has mastered when they already pass but a person can change that people can satar what they alredy mastered and the can fix it agin people do bad thing and do something bad byt they stuill can starded and they can kip growing and kip going becuase ther is ntohing can stop a person whataver they already did they still can fix it there fore it no mater what they did it just or what they pas when they satr the thing but alway can fix it and kipp going kip growing on myon people experience they do think and ther mastered up but alwas they fix and they satrded again and alwast ont satar againg.  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
17E521D5F29C,"CURFEWS SAVE TEENAGERS

By Generic_Name

Curfews are a great way to keep teenagers safe and out of trouble.

Teen teenagers who spend too much time on the streets are more likely to get in drugs, curfews will prevent teenagers from spending too much time in the streets. Teenagers offended tend to drive at high speeds at night because the might be drunk, it will prevent then to not get influence by bad people, if this law is approved it will really help keep teenagers safe.

To begin with, in streets at night there are lot bad people, teenagers are expose to a lot of dangers, when they are in the streets at night curfews can prevent this to happen. Teenagers could be kidnapped or raped when they are in the streets at night and some cases they can be forced to do drugs or join gangs, if they dont do this things they might be beaten to death until they do it.

Second reason, There are teenagers at night who tempt to drive at high speeds when they are drunk. This should not be allow because, it can end in car crash, teenagers don't have a lot of experience driving at night. For example, I had a friend who always likes to drive when hi was drunk at hing speeds in the highways at night, One night he had car accident because he was driving drunk and at a high speed he is dead now.

Thirdly, curfew can prevent teenagers from doing things that they are not supposed to do. They might be doing drugs or hanging out in the streets with people that are doing drugs or are in gangs, they can be influenced by bad people from the streets to do drugs. Insulation, my cousin who use to do spent a lot of time in the streets with her friends, she and her friends went to jail because they were doing drugs.

In conclusion, curfew prevents teenagers from getting in trouble, it may prevent teenagers from getting in drugs, also from getting kill in cars accidents. It will keep them away from bad influences, they will stay away from danger people in the streets, but the most important is that this curfews will keep them safe.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
16B9EB49892E,"The should be people make their own decision, or should be others make to Them.

The should be make their own the decisions. The have to self confident. because the decisions is more doing u can to the act of reaching a concly sion or just making up one's mind

The should be make theri own the decisions, They can be happy in life. because for life is the decisions are it's important. In the a victory won on points has occurred

The should be make theri own the decisions, The face challenging moments in life. because the challenging it;s hard but more better for we can be for the decisons.

People should make their own decisions because they would have self confident, They can be happy in their life ,and

They face challenging moments in life.

The people who don't make their own decisions can be have easy life and they don't have to think about only thing; however, It's better to make their decision by Them self.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
D1B9985EAF6C,"People should seek guidance from experts because they can help you to make a wise decision. For example, sometimes we as a person take bad decision that isn't favaroble for our life; but our guidance as our parents, mother or father give us advice to not take a wrong decision, and we have to follow their instructions because they're wiser than us, and they help us for our goods, so they don't see us ruining our life by ourself. Experts can show you how valuable its our life and how much we have to appreciate it. We as teenagers are not suficient mature to take a wise decision and mostly we as teenagers take the wrong path for not being wise enough or not having knowledge about how to take an important decision for our life without noticing how damage are our bad decision for us, and how much we can hurt ourself by not knowing how to handle it. Our decisions hurt people we love even though you don't want to hurt them because we let our impulse control us, and because of those decisions we hurt ourself and we hurt others by not realiazing that we push back our family and friends. Your decisions makes you grow as a person, but also make you find yourself, your decision are the ones that makes you be who will you be in the future, so you decide who you are gonna be.

In concluision, be wise about your decision get help from a person with more experience, and don't let your bad decision to define who you are, be yourself always following the correct path. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
FC831CB27E25,"Although some people might say, if the students choosed a specific career at a young age it will help them to focus on their future. Choosing career at young age would make the student stressful, because the student will feel scare of failing in what he choosed, he dont have close people are supporting him for what he want, he choosed a career he doesn't want it because of few members of his family want him to be what they want not like as he want to choose. Having a specific career while being young student would make the student more responsible and creative of what he is going to do for his life with full of confidence, because in growing up more hard decisions the student will have so he has to choose the right decision, being creative at his career will let the student get a big succeed, and being already chosen a career is enough by itself to stay away of the people who failed in their life because they dont have a goal or career they can get.

In conclusion, choosing career at young age would make the student stressful, having specific career while being young student would make the student more responsible and creative of what he is going to do for his life with full of confidence, the student won't be worry if he is going to choose his passion, let the student take what he think its good for hisself.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E069D2A8AE1E,"Have you had a friend sharing wisdom and experiences with you? You probably had that a million times. Here is the thing though. People just want to learn the experience of you and the others, which isn't a bad thing. It's also important to learn each other's experiences. I think it is important to learn from other people's experiences because you get to understand who they are, you can help the person if they're in a situation, and you can communicate each other. To clarify this, let's dig in deeper.

First, I think it's important that you understand who they are because you get to know about their favorite hobbies, the places they like to visit, the pets they have and their dream vacation. Getting to know on who the person is can give you a good start off to make a bond, or form friendship between you and that person. If you shared your experiences with a person, they might feel interested on what you're talking about. Telling a person on what you like can bring that person's attention deeper.

Second, it's important that you help the person if they're in a situation because you can cheer them up if they lost a family member. Helping someone out can make that person feel better and most of all, feel comfortable, and they will think that you're a good person. If you didn't reach out and help somebody, they could start getting into a tougher situation where they might not be able to handle by themselves. They could also feel very lonely or left out, and that is not okay.

Third, communicating with others is important because you can text them in Social Media, such as Instagram, Snapchat, and Facebook. You can also go shopping with them. Communicating others bring closer friendship, and keep the bond strong between you and you're friend. Watching movies and hanging out at each others house are another examples of communication. They're lots of ways to communicate with your friends and other people, and that is a good thing for friends. Activities is another thing for communicating with other people because sometimes, when people do activities, it provides teamwork.

In Conclusion,

I think it is important to learn from other people's experiences because you get to understand who they are, you can help the person if they're in a situation, and you can communicate each other. So now that you understand, think about these as you make new friends. Question yourself on how to get a good start to form a bond between you and that person. Try to reach out and help him/her if they need help with something. Make that person feel comfortable by hanging out with them at lunch or at home. They might need good company from you!      ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
6422237D967F,"Would you like someone deciding what's best for you or take matter into your own hands? Well in my opinion people should make there own decisions because they can decide how they want things and what makes them happy in there own way even though some would argue that, people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because some times they know whats best for us and our own health. Yes, sometimes when you seek for guidance they help you out a lot and lead you to the right path. They also, help you find whats happy but its not like if your doing it because you want your just doing it to better yourself and your not doing what you want your doing what your told.

Deciding what u want probably is what's best since your going at your own paste, your taking it how you want. your going at your own paste with things. Also, no one can stop you from doing what you believe is best for you. You can find your own ways to cope with things without anyone telling you other wise. Going at your own pace is better then getting rushed, doing what you dont want, and doing what your told even. However, getting help pushes you to do it better.

Seeking guidance isnt bad at all either you get the help you need, you get that push forward to bettering yourself. Sometimes in life there are moments where your not your best help and you need a hand. Theres nothing ever wrong with getting a little help. You sometimes need a hand to understand your values to get to recognize them and meet them.

we all have different life matters because we all dont care about the same thing. we all care about different things. your life important matters are valuable and there something that only you can decide on not any one else. Sure, our values all are different in every type of way thats the reason to why we should decide on our own why our life matters are important. thats why in my opinion people should make there own decisions, find out there matters, what there good at and what the things that they value are.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F4D07B2A60F9,"Do you think that positive attitude would make you successful?

For my point of view, I think that is good to be positive, becaus if you are positive you have more chance to be successful in life, most of the times you can or can not regreat good things. Is good to be positive on the bad times, that way you do not feel worse. If you have a positive attitud, some people that have negative attitude is going to try to make you change, do not let that happend. be positive can make you a better person.

If you are going through bad times is always good to be and think positive, if you are a negative person you are going to see only the bad things of the good things, you can lose friends or you're family members, if you are a negative person, no body is going to like to be next to you.

negative people is going to try to make you change; some people can be selfish and if you always think positive and most of the times you regreat positive things, they are going to want to have what you have even though that you work hard for if.

However some pople can think positive things but they can act negstive, it does not means that that good or not to think one thing and act with another thing, but if you want positive thigs happend to you most of the times, do positive things too. Be positive can help you to be successful but remember ""actions talks more than 1,000 words.""",3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
B1AFACE6704E,"I agree with Michelangelo's statement as I have found through experience that it benefits me more to set high expectations and not reach my goal, rather than settling on a low goal and achieving it. When setting high goals, I find that I learn more and progress my abilties further than I do with a lower goal. This is because setting high goals requires confidence, challenges, and pride.

Firstly, hard work is required to achieve high goals, and requires confidence. Confidence involves having trust and believing that you are capable of accomplishing something. I have found that when I set high goals, I feel more confident in my abilities. With lower goals however, my confidence is lower as I settle for the easier path and do not trust myself to do better. With a higher aim, my confidence motivates me to not give up. I tend to try harder, and always believe in myself. For example, at school, I had to choose whether I wanted to try out for the varsity tennis team or remain in the club team. The varsity team was a higher reach, and required confidence in my abilities for me to try out. The club team was a lower reach, as I knew that I could simply continue with it. I decided to try out for the varsity team, and was confident in my abilities. I practiced hard and did not give up. Despite not making it onto the team, I found that I actually greatly improved my abilities through the confidence I had gained, and tried harder than I had ever before. I managed to progress my skills, and was able to play more confidently on the club team and excel. Therefore, setting high aims requires confidence, which is a very beneficial characteristic to have in life.

Secondly, setting a high goal indicates a challenge. It will be more challenging to attempt to aim high rather than aiming low, yet this will also prove more benefits. With a challenge, I tend to be more motivated as I want to prove my capabilites. I try harder, and in return get further. Even if I fall short of my high aim, I tend to get further than I would have if I had settled with a lower aim. With lower goals, there is no challenge, and so once the aim is achieved any effort stops. Learning is limited to that low expectation, and will not be able to go beyond. For example, in my high school career, I have always struggled with picking between two types of courses: honors or academic. Honors is the more challenging course, which requires more work and effort and would pose as more of a challenge. Academic however, requires the bare minimum and is easy to succeed in. In the honors course, I would be setting my aim high yet might not get the grade I want; yet, in the academic course, my aim would be low and I would most likely get the grade I want. After hard consideration, I decided to opt for the honors course. This course may be a challenge, yet would allow me to learn more. I enjoyed the challenge, and found that it motivated me to try harder to try and accomplish my goal. Even if I fell short of my ideal grade, I was proud to have tried my best and felt that I learnt so much more. The course benefited me more than the academic course would have, despite not receiving the grade I hoped for. Therefore, challenging oneself with a high aim allows for more flourishing and encourages more learning. Overall, setting a high aim will pose more benefits.

Thirdly, pride accompanies setting high goals. When setting low aims, I feel that it is easy to achieve the goal. However, with high aims, it is more challenging to achieve the goal, and so I feel proud of myself for attempting it. Pride is a very important characteristic, as it increases self esteem. With a higher self-esteem, I tend to try harder and feel more powerful with my abilities. I am more likely to learn and improve upon my abilities, which overall allows me to succeed. For example, in high school I had the opportunity to write a poem and submit it into a writing competition. This was a high aim, as the goal was to win. I felt very proud of myself for taking the time to write and challenge myself with this competition, and ended up writing my favorite piece yet. I submitted my writing, and did not win. However, I felt very proud of myself for having tried so hard and was able to learn and flourish in my writing abilities. Now, I am more likely to sign up for competitions, even if I do not win, simply because I enjoy the challenge and feel that I am able to learn. I feel proud of myself for taking on these challenges. Therefore, setting high goals emmits pride, which can prove very beneficial in life.

In conclusion, I agree with Michelangelo's statement. Setting high aims and falling short can bring so many more positive effects than setting low aims and accomplishing them. This is because setting high aims requires confidence, challenges, and pride. These characteristics are very important in succeeding, and can encourage learning and progression in abilities. Through setting low goals, learning becomes stagnant. In order to flourish and continue learning, setting high goals is crucial, even when not achieving the goal. ",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0
5564D9D8C845,"""Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an after school homework club."" Two-thirds of the students who join an after school activity club are more likely to succeed in academics then students who do not. Schools should establish an after school homework club because it can help students finish their homework, become more socially interactive , and give students some teaching experience.

Firstly, an after school homework club helps students finish their homework in time. Many student get a low grade in their class because of unfinished homework. They were not able to finish their homework because, they did not know how to do it. Teachers do not usually have the time to go through each student, and help them in class, but some teachers volunteer to meet with students who have difficulty in certain subjects in an after school homework club. Joining an after school homework club is a great way to finish your homework in time. Sometimes teacher might even give students some tips and tricks on how to solve a question, that they would not give out in class. My friend Generic_Name used to have a lot of difficulties with his math homework until he joined the after school homework club in our school. He learned many tricks on how to solve a math equation and even taught a trick to solve an ""Integer Slope Inequality"" equation.

Moving on, an after school homework club can help students become more socially interactive. While in an after school homework club, you can find students with the same difficulties as you. This will give students something to relate to and not feel out of place. Having group discussions on how to solve a problem and having group projects in your club will also help you be more socially interactive. My friend Generic_Name made many friends by joining the after school homework club in our school, and grew a lot of confidence. He is now much less nervous when talking to people than before.

Lastly, homework clubs can give students teaching experience for if they want to be a teacher when they grow up. Students can volunteer to help other students finish their homework in an after school homework club. This will give the student a lot of experience on how to teach, and deal with other students. There is a team of students is our school called the "" Junior Honor Society"", which helps students with academic difficulties every day after school. As a member, I have learned about a lot of ways to teach someone else, and because of my desire to be a teacher one day, this helps me a lot.

Schools should establish homework clubs because it can help students finish their homework, become more socially interactive , and can give students teaching experience. Ten out ten students have said that, joining an after school homework club has been the best decision they made in their life.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,5.0
A8F321EBF782,"Small acts of kindness can come for yourself and others. for example when you see someone that is siting alone at lunch you should invite them to sit white you. like this one time my fried and I were siting at a tad at lunch, then we sow a boy siting alone at a tad. So we desisted to ask him if he wanted to sit withe us and he side ""alright I wold love to."" after that we found out we have simpler classes as him. We all became good friends and weer still friends to this day so an act of kindness can make a friendship.

Moving to a new school can be herd. Because your living your friends that you had for a way you can make the new kid feel confab in school, by showing then were their classes are explaining some thing they don't understand and asking hem to sit with you at lunch and you and can help each other with homework you don't get. And show their around town and make them feel like there wanted in school, and you can show he or she the clubs after school and if you to have similarity showing some one you care makes them feel like their going to be okay at their new school and will proudly makes them feel more confident.

A nether way of showing an act of kindness is by listing to peoples and friends. pronouns beaus some times you fell down and have no one to talk to,so you can be that some one, listen, give advise and confert you have to let then know your their for them. And will listen to anything they say and they might feel cuffed talking to you. Because you their age or in their age group and they wold proudly let you talk about that has bin on you mind and what they can do to help you as well.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
877EC536B112,"Many schools have partnerships with companies that allow student to explore because many student have goals or student have many opportunities to have partnerships with companies and they can explore a big business or to have connection another place to use partnership with companies.

people can have business because they got a good study and they have goals to exploring business and they can have easy partnerships with another companies and showing more opportunities to the futures.

many student have goal to get a business in the futures because many young man have experience how to find partnership or connection in another place or other country, and many of young man have brain to think how can make the good things of the life, and the technology can help now for every body how can investigate many things, and have a good employment to work many people there and every year can grow a employment with the business because good people can work about and companies can pay of employments better.

some school teach student about how can drive a business how can open a companies start building a employment because many companies can not grow without employment work strong every day because most people can have the same idea like professional student or some student graduate for business class so they have more integenci than many peolple who can not use a companies of a business ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
73234AB62383,"Would you wanna be extending 2 more hour to your school schedule because you work for four days for 10 hours? In my opinion I feel like no because sometimes some students decide they want to spend some time with their family . Also some students have to go home early and do something else instead of doing their school work and some students have to enjoy their free time instead of working all day.

Some students decide they want to spend sometime with their family. Some students decide that because sometimes they might not have enough time with some one that lives far from them so they decide they want to go where they live and they want to be with them before they leave. Also some students might want to spend more time with there grandparents because they might not be able to see them or they either want to spend more time with there grandparents because they want to help them out side there in the stages of being old so they might need help with something. Also some students might want to hang out with their cousins since they might not have seen them for awhile. Student usually like to spend a lot of time with there family since they might not have seen them for years so they decide they want to spend more time with them .

Some students have to go home early and they have to go do something else instead of doing their work from school. Instead of doing their school work some students have to go after school to go sports so they might not have time to stay in school for 10 hours because they might have to be going to their practice whens school finishes. Some students might have to go straight home because they might have to go babysit their little siblings since there parents are working. Some student might have to go home early because they might have to go straight to work or they might get in trouble if they don't go at the time they tell them they could get into trouble. Students usually have to go do something else instead of having to go do their school work all day.

Some students have to enjoy their free time instead of working all day. Instead of staying at school all day or at work all day students decide to go out and hang out with their friends. Some students might want to go out and go shopping .Some student decide to go out and spend some time with their parents since they don't have that much time .Also some student just want to enjoy the only time they are free to do something instead of being stuck at school all day or being stuck at work all day.

In my opinion I feel like we shouldn't add more hours to out school schedule because at this time we are still young and we want to enjoy the free time that we have before we get older because then we won't be having that much time left since we will mostly be in school still or might just be working all day. Also I feel like some people might just be getting tired of all the work they give us to the point were some students might just give up on there work. For example when I get out of school I usually have to go home and take care of my little sister because my mom can't .

I wouldn't like to be stuck in school for another two more hours because I would have to be leaving school late and if I had a four day work week I would not be able to do my school work at home , When I would get home from work I would be really tired and just decide to fall asleep.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
A2957D006D28,"It has been said that the first impression are almost impossible to change. I disagree because when you look at a person for at three seconds you think you know that individual already, Until you have a conversation with him/her for at least ten seconds your whole impression will change with a ""blink of a eye"". However, I disagree the first impression is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks, personality, and there way communication skills are all ways that can change your whole point of view of a individual. From your first impression when you look at them.

However the way a person looks from your first impression isn't always who they really are. Base on you information on someone aren't ever really true. Meaning looks can be deceiving. Ex. The guy/girl could be the cutest person you ever seen and you really want to meet them. Until they were the worst nightmare and you hate them with a passion. This also works vice verse. Ex. The guy/girl could be the ugliest person of the time, but you never gave them the time of day. Until you met them and started talk to each other. That's when you realize that this person is the one for you. It's like saying don't judge a book at its cover. Until you opened it and read it. That's when you really like this book. Sometimes a personality can be a huge factor on your first impression.

Neverless personality can change your first impression. Personality is mostly made up of whom you are. The basic qualities, and beliefs you have on a individuals. Find out who someone can be a life changing event for yourself not knowing who someone really is can have a big affect on you, because you really don't know who you are dealing with. Personality provides great insight into individuals and their lives. Being honest no matter what with someone can build a strong first impression on yourself and the person right in front of you. Showing the courage to do what's right in those situations, being loyal at your friends and love ones are good ways to boost you relations with another individual. Having the drive to keep going can rise-up your personality and your first impression to a different climax. Communication is key to your first impression.

Furthermore, communication skills consist of verbal and non-verbal by transferring information to another individual. Communication involves displaying confidence, and passion to show that you understand the individual topic by being eye contact and hearing all information that they are telling you. By you giving your honest opinion on a situation can grater your chances being with that individual, when keeping an open mid and resisting to give your quick judgments are clear signs of good communication skills.

Additionally. I disagree that first impression is almost impossible to change. The reason why is that the way a person looks, their personality,

and their communication skills are all ways that can change your whole point of view on a person. In other words, looks can be deceiving personality because being honest no matter what is key, and communication skills are caused by you first impression. Therefore by taking the time, day, hours, and efforts to get to know someone can benefit you from not judging book by its cover.            ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
2A18E2265D9E,"I disagree that schools board plan should not have one and a half hours to schools each day. Some students hate some of their teachers because they treat them bad. Some kids would like to go outside to play with their friends or would like to play video game with online friends. Most of schools give student to much homework an schoolwork.

Schools give us to much homework and homework. Some teachers give student to much work in one class and things that we can put all of that stuff in are brain in one and a half hours. If you miss one day of school you will be hind in all your class because teacher give us to much work. Student would get bad grade if teacher give us to much work to get us behind.

Some kids love to go outside and play sport with their friend and just to have fun. Some teens and kids all most play video game everyday to play with friends and online friends and they do not like schoolwork. Kids love to go outside,teen love to play video game all day,and no one love to do schoolwork and classwork.

student hate some teacher. When teacher are mad they make the student do more classwork and homework. Some time teacher will said stuff behind you. This is why student and teacher fight because the teacher make s up lie that the student did this but they did not do it so now the student get very mad at the teacher.

This is why school board plan should not have one and a half hours to schools each day. Teacher makes up lie then the student are mad. Kids love to go outside and teen will dead for video game and not do homework. Teacher will make us do more work because they have one and a half hours. ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
9653A4188D80,"I think we choose our character traits and we are influenced beyond our control. I say both because sometimes we choose to be who we are without nobody telling us what to do, what to say and not forcing us to do something we don't want to do. Choosing our character traits can be something hard for some people, because some of us think that we are going to be judged by other people and some of us think that we are not going to get accepted for who we are. Me I do both sometimes I choose my character traits and sometimes i'm influenced by other people, I don't think its good to be influenced by other people because I think we should be the one's controlling our character traits at all times. But sometimes we feel forced to do something we don't wanna do or say and it's not part of our character, But we feel we have to because there maybe someone watching or it could just be pure pressure, Doing stuff we don't always do that is basically getting influenced by other people because we are doing something that we don't really want to do. This is why I say it's both we choose and we are influence.

I think you don't really choose if you control your traits or not, because some days you can be yourself and other days your kinda getting controlled, because you do what people are telling you what to do and basically your not yourself your not doing what you want to do your listing to other people. I really think theres no option I think everyone does both, one day they are themselves and some days they are not themselves because there not doing what they want to do, there kinda getting controlled in some type of way.

In conclusion I think every one does both they choose or sometimes they don't, Honestly I think everyone should be themselves and not let anyone control them. Everybody in this world should choose there own character traits but it doesnt happen because we all sometimes feel that we get influenced by some other people, Basically what i'm trying to say is be yourself and don't be someone your not. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
D151A06B4136,"This prompt was written by Thomas Jefferson, he wrote a quote on how we can have a lot of things done, when we put the effort to do it."" Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". It determine your personality, and helping others may recompense yourselves. We can achieve many goals by making things work the way we want it. And we do accomplish more when we are always doing the things we have to get done. It helps you a better person.

Theres a lot of people in this world that feel unless, because they think that they can do anything, we can help them. It feels satisfactory on changing life's, making things go other way for others. You must have the enthusiastic on getting things done. To make a lot of things work, and to make sure were helping others. It is fantastic when you achieve your goals, because you can see the effort you put to get things done.

Help homeless who does not have food or somewhere to live. By starting on making an effort, and changing life's we can help homeless. Sometimes they feel like they dont have no one. Help others and you will have done many things for the future of someone. And whenever you need help someone will help you back. Give back what you receive and be kindness.

It determine that you can change someone else life. If we are not the ones that help others who else is going to do it. It must be difficult, but we can change someone else's life. You will be successful when you accomplish your goals, or helping others. We accomplish more when we do good things for people that really needs it. We can do it ourselves to see the different in the things or gaols in this life.

In my conclusion, you must help others because whenever you need it they will help you back. Be different from others, never let others tell you cannot do it. Because if we do it we accomplish more, and we feel honored to see someone else happy for what we been doing or accomplish our goal. We can do it even if they let you down telling you, you can not do it. Must people dont like to see you accomplishing your goals, they feel unless because you did try, even if they told you you couldnt do it. Accomplish what ever you want in life to be successful, and if we are always doing something we will get to where we want to go.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
82F9FDBD6F98,"My argument about the 10pm curfew for teenagers statement; is they should have a curfew for teenagers because it can get them out of trouble, and make it home safe and they can get rest for school.

Example of staying out of trouble is you can get mistaken at night; and get hurt just by not going home at the right time. Another example a teenager can be at there friends house and if they leave late or outside with there friend, anybody can be outside and would want to hurt them or there friend because it's dark out, but if you have the 10 pm curfew you can leave without worrying about being in trouble. also can have a guardian to pick you up when its late so this scenario would not happen.

Another reason is to get some good rest for school and have lots of energy. If you do not have enough sleep, but can have the 10 pm curfew to help you to get some rest and will also help you concentrate in school. An example for this is a teenager could be outside and they do not have a curfew so the teenager comes home late. And does not get good sleep or no sleep and goes to school tired and can't concentrate.

A good counter claim for both is you can just stay home and don't have worry about a curfew or going home really late. because if you are scared to go home late or can't get some rest just stay home. You will be more safe home with a guardian or sibling then outside in the dark and not knowing who is outside. And parents should just be more protective so they don't end up going home late. And they can stay home and sleep earlier and get lots of rest for school.

with both arguments i think the best for teenager is that they should have a curfew just for safety reasons. And no parents should be worried or scared for there kids being outside late because there city council do not have a curfew. And another reason is they can get good sleep for teenagers is very helpful for them so they can have a lot of energy and concentrate in class better and get good grades.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
CEF302996231,"Dear Dr. Generic_Name,

Thank you for taking time out of your day to read my letter, hope you and your staff are doing well. My name is Generic_Name and I'm currently a Junior at Generic_School. I believe that some students should benefit from taking online classes because we won't have to worry about turning in papers late, or having to hearing teachers to put our phones and headphones away, and also I won't worry about owing school lunch money. Online classes is a should and it can also be a shouldn't, and i will explain why its a should.

In school we all panic when we hear a due date, especially when its up close. Students work better at their pace than rather to wait on the teacher, teachers go slow just for the other students get to know what's going on. When taking tests, or quizzes, we seemed to get rush because we only have that class for and hour and some change. In some cases if we don't finish on time they, will ask us to stay after school. Some of our parents work late nights and won't be able to get a ride back home. Also in school we all get distracted so easily, like from fights that happen in school, drama, and class clowns that are not really doing their work. And kids need to concentrate in their work instead of lacking off.

At Generic_School, phones and headphones are a huge problem. Some of us like to listen to music and work better with it, but however, some teachers don't always allow it in the classroom. Classes at home can be such a big change in a good way, we won't get in trouble if we get found using our phones or even listening to music. A lot of teachers find this disturbing and run to writing us up, but they won't understand how much faster your brain functions when listening to music, it gets you more concentrated into your own work.

Our parents work and the school thinks that they make lots of money, due to that cause the school charges us for the food we eat. In some cases we get milk that's been expired, and they dont even notice it. Classes that we can take at home could benefit us here, we have better food at home and wont worry about if the food that we get at school is expired or not. Online classes can be much cheaper than to actually go to school. At home, we can eat breakfast and lunch and not think about that eating breakfast or too early or if eating lunch is too late.

Thank you once again for reading my thoughts, I strongly agree that our students should benefit from taking online classes while being at home.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
FE60E597467E,"What is positive attitude? Positive attitude is when a person has positive thoughts about something that went wrong or good, but they see all the possibles ways to success in life. Having a positive attitude is essential in lifestyle, this can bring happiness to your life, and can take you to extraordinary places. I think having a positive attitude is important because this is a way to express yourself around others, and to show the way you can manage your thoughts. I agree that having positive attitude is the key to success in life, and that everyone should have a positive attitude not just for a work area but anywhere.

There are many reasons to have a positive attitude, for example: you may want to have a positive attitude when you get a bad grade on the test, because you can think positive and say: "" I did bad on this test today but, I am going to keep trying and studying hard every time so I can do better"".

Another example is when you are doing a sport and you think you can't do it and that you are going to give up, you can tell yourself you can do it and have a positive attitude towards it. There are always problems in the daily life, and people deal with this problems not always with a good attitude.

What will happen if you don't have a positive attitude? Well if you don't have a positive attitude, you won't have success in life because you are going to have negativity in your mind and the word ""fail"" is going to become one of your favorites. Having a positive attitude is not always easy, and not all people have it. A negative attitude is the opposite of a positive attitude, and this can affect your life. For example: In school if you have a bad attitude things can go bad, when you are always being negative usually your problems don't get fix and you struggle more with your thoughts. This can mentally affect you, and teenagers are challenged every day by this issue.

The key is positively to a succesful life. I personally consider myself as a postive person. I try to solve every problem with a positive attitude because when I do so, my problems get fix the good way and I am happy with the results. If I don't have a postive attitude, all my goals would be nothing, I get stress and change my attitude, and I even hurt people's feelings without knowing. Success is important too because by this you can be a better person for society, people can judge you differently and you can help others when they are going through a lot. Positively is also mental strength,

it expands your knowledge, it changes the way you think about everything, and makes your life easier.

In conclusion, having positive attitude helps you to have success in life. Sometimes it's hard to understand how people can be so positive about everything, but not all people are happy in their lifes. Some people have their reasons to not be positive, and it's important to understand these people. Other people, like me, have postitive attitude towards anything, which is good because it helps you in your daily life, work, school and others activities. A lot of people like other people with a positive attitude, because it brings positive energy and hapiness to other people's life. Everyone should have a positive attitude, if you are not a positive person, it's not to late to change the way you are living , and it's time to have more positive thoughts and say "" positive"" for a successful life.       ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,5.0
C8DF8FD0D69D,"""Succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm"".

-Former British Minister Winston Churchill

Immigrants who came from differents countries to United States are the most strongest people in the world.

These people really know what failure means and how brave they are to leave their families and find the success that they could not get on their countries.

That's the meaning of this statement and I'll explain you why I am agrre with this powerful phrase.

I believe that immigrants who came to United States are the strongest people because they have to do a lot of sacrificies before to come here, for example, some parents live theirs children with their grandparents or take the risk to come with them even knowing how hard is the way to come to America.

Its really difficult to come to a new country without know the lenguage, the city, and what kind of peolpe will you find in the way, some are good persons who helps them some of them are racist, they start from cero without a hosue, a car, a good job, being alone and so far from their families, this is how they get the strength to keep moving up and help their families in their countries.

They are the best example for this statement to teach us how can we start from down in a new place and get the opportunity to be in the top without never give up making clear our goals and purposes,

sometimes we want to do something that we really love but we feel afraid to fail, but if we never try we never going to know how it feels like to see ours dreams realized. If you believe in what you think , then it worths and do not let anyone tell you that you can not.

I'm agree with this statement because it shows us a different way to see what we call difficult or imposible to make. When the things are getting hard just think in the price that you will earn at the end or how proud you will be for made that thing that you wanted to do and someone told you that you could not make. Just be as an immigrant, brave, able, capable to risk all that they have to get a new opportunity, a different way of live but always thinking about the yearned price.

I hope you have an idea about this statement means , and do not give up on your dreams and the goals that you made some day thinking about make them reallity and if you always want to triumph you have to spend time on it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
4353BF70C4A3,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Schools goal is to offer for students classes from home to make sure students do their best in order to pass and graduate. Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because students love the idea of taking their courses at home, will have more time to do any activities they could not do in school day time, and its more easier.

First, students love the idea of taking classes at home because students do not have to wake up early for school, that give students more time to sleep and all of us know how important to get your daily hour sleep on our brains. Also, it's good for students who are shy for what ever reasons. I know someone who took classes at home for third and fourth quarters, so he didn't have to go to school. The classes he took started at six PM every Monday and Wednesday. This guy told me that online classes were helpful for him and made him pass.

Second, students will have more time to do any activities. Schools started at eight AM and ends at three PM. At this time, students could do any thing like working in the morning time or help parents in anything or do anything else. Students could use this seven hours to do anything that may help them in the future. As I said before, online classes start at six PM and ends at eight PM. Generic_Name, my closest friend, took classes at home, so he could work and get money.

Students take classes at home at home because it's more easier. Many students said that is better to take our classes at home because it's more easier and teachers teach in really simple way that make anyone understand than what school do. Students wants to pass so they takes the easy way that the school offer to pass, and as I said before, schools offer distance learning to make students succeed. Generic_Name, one of my best friends, took online classes, and he told me that's his teacher was really good because of the way that the teacher taught them back then, makes everything easier and simple that even a kid could understand it.

Schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home not just because it's easy or can attend it from home. Schools goal is to make sure we succeed on this classes, and that's what schools here for. Is to open the way for us to create the future because if students are 20% of our present, they are 100% of our future. Some people or students do not like the idea of taking classes from home and will disagree with me. After all everyone have his own way of thinking and living. So what do you think of taking classes at home?",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
895FFC078777,"More is always done when we do what we need to do, other wise we get lazy and say ""I'll do it tommorow"". We never know if tommorow will ever come for us to do the tasks that could be important. It's good to have a mindset where you like to get stuff done, that shows that youre an honest person, and it can really say alot about a person. When we dont do anything get stressed out, and worry about it to much, more then we're suppose to. Doing nothing is easier then doing something, but doing nothing has a bigger consequence then doing something. Around the world, there are people that accomplished alot, always by doing something, and not by doing nothing. There are Entrepreneurs around the world that didnt wait to do something with themselves. For example, Bill Gates, he is the richest man in the world with billions of dollars to his name,but how did he manage to get all that money? by doing something and not by doing nothing, doing what he needed to do, when it needed to be done, not waiting for tommorowto do the tacks that he needed to do to get where he is today. Bill Gates was always busy doing something to get stuff done for a company, now he's the owner for Microsoft. Doing something will always bring positivity around you, into your life, another example is Steve Jobs. Steve Jobs didnt wait to do something for himslef, he dropped out of college, but it didn't stop him from doing what he wanted to after that. He stayed in a small garge, worked day and night to invent a computer, the MacBook, with this computer, he was going to become a famous Entrepreneur. A couple of years later Apple came to be to what it is today, Steve Jobs worked hard to get his company to where is today, by working hard and not by doing nothing, but by always doing something. Steve Jobs is a great example of how much great can come by doing some. These two Entremreneurs are great examples of doing something, great should come. They both worked so hard for their companys, not waiting a day for something to be complete. Doing nothing will not get anyhting done, neither will waiting. So we have to get stuff done so we won't have to worry or stress about it later. to conclude my essay, we should always do something the moment we get the task, other wise it will never be done.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
9054912D1EA7,"Do you think modeling is something wonderful to do? Well I think it becasue I love trying new things. Theirs modeling componies i would like too visite one day and see if I get more intrested. I would like to model makeup, shoes, clouths, and diffrent type hair styles. I think modeling is something really fun to do it's also really intresting beacuse you get to do multipe stuff. Like for example i think you get to travel to diffrent places to model diffrent metirel.

I think you should do modeling too beacuse modeling is something wonderful to do. I think it really would be fun because you would do hair styls with new cloths that desiners make. We would be the first people to try the new cloths and to show the world to buy it. We would also be on TV in diffrent chanels so people can seee us modeling. Modeling diffrent kind of thing modeavate me to want to do it more.

I would really like to visit a modeling place thats always been one of my dreams. I would be so exited to atually see what a real modeling componie looks like. On how the models learn how to walk how they get ready for there pictures. The way stand the way the have to move around and show off anything they have to show off.

I think it would be so intresting to do all these type of modeling and showing off I hope one day in my future I can do that. It would also be so thought full if i actally did a modeling thats somthing I would always want. I hope you thivk about me going to visit my future manager.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5
C2FBC10F36E0,so just because i couldn open the exhibit window am going to write about what do you i like to do in class. I like to work alone with no body bother me . sometime i like to with work with groups but is all depend what type of people am working with and also how is my mood during the day of in the class. When am working like to listen to music because it let me to focus what am doing and i dont get distracted with the others student talking about drama or what is going on an there life or school. Also when am in class i dont like when teachers or student start asking me question where i am from or what do i like to do. or sometime i like to work when the place is quiet because i can focus more and the place is quiet i can do my work in peaces. Also i like to have my personal bubble because i dont like when teacher or student come to my face and start asking me about stuff that i do not know or when they give me a attitude so that is the time when the situation will star to get worse because every time when the happen i will do the same to do them but mine it will be worse and sometime i cannot control myself. when the work in a group i like to work with people that wont talk to much and we do our own work. Because when i work in group who talk a lot i cannot focus on my work or they are just talking stupid stuff and trying to be funny there is when i get mad or when they trying to put me in there conversion that i do not care because if i am not talking to you or to the group that mean i am good and i do not need you or i dont need your opinion. I like to be my own personality because i know what i am doing and i am doing because i like it and when people told to stuff or me trying to be a different person just because they dont how i am or that way i dress or look. And i cannot be a other type of person who i am not because i will be lying to myself and lying to the people around me just because i am acting different or look different for other people to think i am like that. Also if you think we are friends and you start to get conferees around me and you start talking about your life i am just going to walk away because i didnt ask you about your life because i am not interesting in your life because if i did i probably would ask you but if i didnt ask that mean i really dont care what do you do or what do you like. If i dont like you you better understand i wont be nice to you and i wont try to have a conversation with you. Or event class class if i am not talking with anyone the mean i dont want yall to talk to me or if i dont like the teacher i just keep my distance but if the teacher i dont like and she/he come at know where an start yelling at me i wont stay quiet and i will say stuff back to you because you just come to my face an start yelling at me for no reason so that is telling me that you got a problems with me and i didnt know at about it. It is so ease if you respect me i will respect you back because if you come at mo where an start saying stuff to me and i really dont know what is going on i swear will disrespect you and say a lot stuff to you because you came to me saying stuff and every time that happen i really dont care if i hurt you or i hurt your feeling. If you leave me alone we probably we be cool and we wont have any issues with each other. Been around people is not my type stuff i like to do i just rather to be alone and do my own stuff but if need help would ask someone who i think they know just go to the internet and try to found what i need online. Because i dont like to bother people just to do it or try my best to guess in the answer.,2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
C9B989E27414,"Some people said that haveing a positive actitude is the key to success in life? How do we know this and, how can we demostrate this on real life, well here I have three examples of how to be a positive person it help me to be success in life.

In my first year as a freshman i was a lonely and boring person I didn't talk to any body, i was dumb I remember that i used to had a really good teacher her name was Generic_Name, i remember that i was bad with her and know i just want to aplogize with her, my point in here is that if my attitude was positive in that time thingscould be different in many ways and thats why i decide to chenge my attitude.

In my second year I decide to talk with more people and be positive person and because of that I star to have new friends and more teachers like me and when a teacher likes you they help you more and thats a small way to show that have a positive actitude is the key in life, and because i'm not a smart student, that extra help that the teachers give me, it help me to pass my classes.

In my third year, well it was pretty fun because when I change into a positive attitude i got new frinds and when i was in problems they help me, like i losse my pencil they borrow me one, or when i miss my bus they give me a ride to my home or they give me a number of a bus that is close to my house, when i was apsent they ask for my missing work so they can give it to me.

In conclution the positive attitude is the key in life because it makes you friendly and more people like you because of that. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
061AF57CB05C,"John Lubbock wrote ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" When it comes down to it though I think our own character traits are formed by influences around us. I say this because even if we can say what we are, the things around us can change that for the better or the worse. What can change us can be the people around us, the things around us, and even the friends we make. A other thing that can influence us is our family since DNA can give us some of our parents personally and the way they treat us can change our personally as well. Now other people who say we can chose have their own opinion as well. They think we can choose our own character traits. They say this because once you put your in mind on it you'll be able keep it like that. I also thought this as well but that change because my family and friends were totally different they what I was going for and thats how I became what I did. They also think it would be worse to let pick on its own since it would be unhealthy. This is understandable because it would mean thinking less about it but I think it be more helpful since being around people who are kind and helpful can and will rub off on you. Those are my reason to why I think our own character traits are formed by influences around us.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
405CEC6E7F5D,"Do you ever wonder if we should choose our own character by trait or let our characters be formed by influences beyond our control? I will argue that, we should choose our own characters by traits and not by influence. I think that we should choose our own traits, because we will be choosing our own fate or destiny, we shouldn't let other people decide our path and make a good character of yourself

Your character is your fate or destiny to choose on what ever path you should take. We all know that we should go to our own path to life and choosing what is best for our lives. You are the only one that can take control of your character and nobody should have the ability to take it from you. The fate or destiny is at the power of you hands and you are the only one to decide on what trait you will have on your character.

Don't let people decide on what path you should take and live with it. We should choose our own path to life and enjoy it. Many people know that we should be yourself and nobody else, we should be the character we choose to be. We all have our own character, we shouldn't influence people because you think that it is better for them. We shouldn't do that to other people because it was great for you, let them decide on what path they're going to take. We should only give them advice, but don't decide for them.

Make a good character of yourself, don't let anyone make you feel down. We are the ones to decide our own path of happiness. We can be many things if you believe that you can achieve it. If you think that this is a better way to a good character, then take it, endure it, make it worth it.

In conclusion, we should choose our own character traits. You might say, ""I think people's influences can be good for our character."" you are not wrong, but not all influence can be good for your character. It is what John Lubbock said,

""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.""

It means that you are the one to take control of your own character. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
0E07647BBC59,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ?

Well school is a place your suppose to feel comfortable in, there are many different schools. I personally think being home schooled can have it's advantages and disadvantage, you of course have benefits for example not being bothered by other classmates, and finishing your work on time without having a distraction, kids in outiside schools have that disadvantage of having classmates who don't care about there education and some kids get carried away and distracted and they end up having to repeat classes or stay another extra year, It's very different because years on years you can just retake the class at home with nobody judging you about failing, here it is like an embarassment to be seen another year so that's something to look into.

Home schooled kids i would say get more attention as in that one on one attention, I would also say outside schools get the same but there are plenty of full classes and the teacher can't always get around to all students. There are lots of kids who want to be able to attend outside school but they can't for many reasons for example a disability or how they are a celebrity, being in that situation you would want to not be known like that so your just forced and obligated to attend home school and that's when home school kids would think it would be better to be attending outside school you'll always be home and feel trapped you'll get tired of being in your own home, It does people good being able to socialize a bit.

School can also be finished faster during home school, lots of things are offered, but also lots of things are not offered for example lunch, in almost all public schools there is free lunch, free everything your getting a free education, home school is expensive and you will always provide your own food. The wifi at home will also be payed, the computer and just many things but as we know it can be beneficial in life your getting an education so it's worth the spend you'll get something out of it.

What's better than being home and getting an eduacation it's benefitting you and it will in the future, when you get a dipoma. My point is either your in public school, private school, home school, it will benefit you in many many ways. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
CF453C152FD5,"This is an easy choice technology has a negative affect on people. There are many reason why but three big ones are. one you lose a lot of communication skills. another is you only see things through your phone. And finally you lose family time or time with friends .

The first reason is people lose communication skills. such as you dont see people face to face you are just texting them and you dont know how to talk to them in person so you dont hang out with them you just text them. and they pretty much just a become and online friend. another example of this is during a job interview you don't know how to talk to someone. it's really hard to do stuff when someone doesn't have communication skills. and you can get food online so you won't have to talk to people.

most people just see things and hear about stuff thats happening. don't go and explore or experience thing the just go on the Internet. because everything around us is technology based. you can't go anywhere without the internet or a TV. so everyone has gotten used to that so they don't have a need to go out or play outside if they have games on there phone,computer,iPad. so people don't have to travel because you can face time people or use other apps to see people. you can order food from uber eats so you don't have to leave your house and people won't know how it feel to be in a restaurant.

finally people wont be spending time with family because of the internet. because someone could be watching a YouTube video and then another then after a while it could be dark outside and you just lost the day and havent said anything to your parents because you have been watching YouTube or Netflix. people get used to that life style and a lot people won't change because its become a habit and its a bad habit to over come. people also forget about there friends because they just wanna be on there phone alone watching videos,playing games , watching TV. and you forget about family and friends not on purpose and you still do it without knowing. And its not just kids it's also adults. They pay everything online so they only leave for work and nothing else. then come back order food or get groceries online. and cook while watching TV or on Facebook .",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
70B91D253E27,"I think that it's a bad idea to put more hours of school beacause after school people,students and teachers have to do important stuff like take there kids to soccer or go to a doctors appointment and thats the only time that we have free to do are important missions and there are teacher's that live far they could live in Generic_City and other places that are far. And if we make it longer there are going to be parent's that are going to be waiting for there child to take them to the football, soccer games and then when they come home its going to be late beacause like they want to change the hours they are not going to have enough time to do anything there going to go home to homework and then when you know it it arleady like 8pm and you have to go to bed. And we arleady wake up at 7am and then coming back home and it's like 5pm-6pm it's stress out kicking out stuff that you do but now you can't to beacause they put more time in School.

And i think it sucks beacause there are kids that go to my school that live in Generic_City and it take along time to come to school and go back home from school beacause i've lived in Generic_City before and it suck when i stay after school i get home like at 7pm-8pm and it's sucks so it better to not make school longer beacause there are kid that live pretty far and there are going to get home late and then they have to get there homework done too. so it's dummy hard work to get that on time. And us as chidren its going to ruined are shecdule and are parent's to maybe we have not go to soccer or any activity that we take just beacause they put more time in school it going to suck being in a class room for 80 mintues now. it's to be trieding.

They meant if we get a half an hour of more school they start giving us more homework then we mostly get and doing that for just 3 hours that we get just beacause they want to add more time it's going to be hard for everybody and they teacher if they live far it's going to be hard beacause at 6pm thats when all rush hour are so much traffic and there going to come home late and when they come home late there going to be grading work and then waking up at 5pm to go back to work and that trieding doing that smae rountine for there whole life it hard I dont even go to work and i'm like wow if that happens it going to be bad.

Another thing that why would should have on more half an hour is beacause we wake up early and have another half hour kicking ints not far if they want to do that they should a least change they school time and wake up like at 8am or something beacuase its not far wake up early and then leaving so late it should be the oppsite wake up late and leave school early it going to be better beacause then everybody going to kbe happeir no one is going to be in a bad mood and it's going to be chill and then .

Anothe thing way we should have an half an hour of school left it's beacause we the 8th grader we get lunch at 1:40 and then haveand half and hour of school were going to have lunch at 2:10 or something I arleadly hate that and i dont wanna be starving beacause then i wont to my work beacause how hungry I i'm going to get mad i'm going to get hangry and having busdriver taking the kid home at 6pm its going to suck beacause they need there time too for they could do stuff and have time with there family's and there going back and forth it sucks for them having ti puck up kids late and stuff and taking them home.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
5828FAC247DF,"Should student commit their career at a young age ?

In this statement i will argue if student should commit to chopse their career at a young age. In my opinion, i think student should think about their career at a young age. First reason why they should think about their career is because they could know some step of how to get into their career. They woukd know some steps on what to study or in other words know what classes are the right one to take. An example is that when i was in high school i didn't know what to study for. my teachers couldn't find the right classes for me to take. Most student get into high school without knowing what they would want to study for. Another example was that when i got into high school they ask me for my career i told them what i wanted to be. Once i got into 10 grade i change my mind and decided to change my career. When i try to get into my step for my second career it was already too late to apply which made me now find my own way to get into the career i wanted to be in. Most student get into high school with out knowing what they want to study for. Another reason is that when they don't know what to study for as their career, They don't find a way after in how to get into collage. It is always a good first step as a high schoolar to know what they want to be. Last exapmple is that i didn't think about my career when i was in middle school and now in my high school year i didn't get into any of my career i wanted to study for. When you know what you want your career to be teachers help you get the right classes. Teachers also help you get into the collage you want to study for your career. Some people think knowing what they want to study for before going to high school is just a rush thing for them. People be saying it's too early to know or think about your career. In my conclusion, Most student should know at their young age what they wanna be. My advice to all the young student making their way to high school they should start thinking what they want to be. When they get into high school they will know what to do, how to apply and they would know what classes are just right for them to take for their career.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
063F809DE304,"Can you imagine how students will be so smart if they had extra help outside of class like an after school homework club. I believe that having an after school homework club is a good way to help students succeed. I will talk about how student will succeed from this,

I will explain how they develop when they have a homework club,and my personal experience.

Student will highly improve when they are in an After school homework club because student will comprehend even better while they are doing there homework with people that can help them. In my belief this is a good way to help kids not just with there homework but kids will improve on uderstading skills. they will learn how to learn things in a different way if they do not understand. Student will pass more tests and have better chances of getting to college and take this world in a good direction. I truly believe that helping kids with school work is the base for them selves and this world.

Kids from k-12 will develop as they go . They can develop even better when they have help around them. Kids are bright and smart they have fresh minds and they can hold things in there minds. If kids can have the 100% help they will just be absolutely geniuses they will be better than the person that thought them. If kids can have academic growth

10% a year with out help imagine what they could do if they had a homework club where like I said where they can be talented.

when I was in 5th grade, I was kid that loved math but I was not very good at it. So my teacher suggested for me to join the homework club after school. At first I was not happy about it but then once I started to go I loved it because

I understood math even better I kept geting in the upper 90 with test scores ,I had the most lessons done on a math program that is called Think trough math. I became a student helper at the homework club and I am now a smart intelligent math student.

when I get to high school I will volunteer at the homework clubs at and go help kids for my own good and because I love to help people.

These are all the reasons why I believe that having an after school homework club is important to students improvements. I will continue to volunteer in helping kids academically . Like we all know youth is the future of this world. I truly believe there are so many kids out there in the world that need help and they are smart but they can not get it because there is no one that pays attention to it. There will changes to that may be not in my life time but I will do what ever I can to get kids from around the world education and help where they can develop and be the best they can be.    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
CC24D88BEB8E,"I agree with Churchill's idea that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm; Although, many people believe that failure will take you down and make you doubt about your potential; however, failure also help you to progress, gives you different ways to achive your goals, and makes you become even stronger than what you were before failing.

Failure is always there, a lot of times we thing failure is a bad thing, but failure is a key thing for success, it will prepare you efor even much harder situations, if you don't fail how are you going to progress?, fail and mistakes help you learn from them, help you to become stronger and they let you know that things are not easy. You have to put more effort on the things you want to get and mistakes are just there to help your progress.

Sometimes we just need different ways to solve problems and failure is there for us, when you fail you know what you are not going to do next, it give you choices and failure let you know the things you could've done to avoid it. When I started to play soccer, I didn't know how to kick the ball correctly, because I only knew one way to kick the ball, I failed a lot of times, but i didn't give up, I started to kick the ball in different ways, I placed my foot in different positions to kick the ball with more power or if wanted to kicked it with more precission. All those fails helped me to realized that there were many other ways and not only one way.

Failure also makes you stronger, because when you fail and you are beaten down and you go there even stronger and achieve what you wanted to achieve you are a new person, a new and strong person that doesn't give up for a simple mistake, a person that when everything looks like its over, comes back with more confidence to not make the same mistake again, that mistake helped you to become even stronger than what you were before it.

Edison was asked ""How does it fell to fail 100 times?"", and he answered, ""I didn't failed, the light bulb was a proyect that took 100 steps to be done"".

In conclusion, failure and mistakes help you learn from them, failure gives you other ways to accomplish your goals and it makes you stronger than what you were before, I think people shouldn't be afraid of failure, they have to start failing, because when they get to reach their goals, their satisfaction when they achive it, its going to be even bigger.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
FC7F226294EE,"I

highly agree with this statment, first impression are a big thing to most peolpe because it shows them how you act around diffrent people. My experiance with first impression are quite because i get nervuos around new people, However people aren't always going to base you of there first impression of you, Even though you can't change people minds on first impressions you can still change on how they look at you later on in life, just on your behavior around them and how you carry yourself around them.

First imression are big key to finding new jobs because it shows the manager how you'll act on the job and it will tell him/her if your worthy enough for the job, sometimes first impreesion are the reason you might even get the job like my brother exprienced with his job he went to the interview with a positive atitude and went in with the mentality of getting the job, I really strognly agree with first impreesions because people really will base you on first impressions.

People first impresison on me are werid and funny, im not even that weird most of the time i dont really care about first imprssions becuase i dont base people of first expressions, i really base them on how they act after you look at them closer.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
1FB89CF59E5B,"Influence can be divided in words, actions, and motivation. Words can give a individual influence. Actions can give a example of what to do, when to do it, and/or how to do it. Motivation has a impact in people's life that can demonstrate influence to others. Some people say that giving a example is the only way to demonstrate influence. By analyzing each paragraph the reader will have a summery about how a example is not the only way to influence people.

Word can give a excellent influence. Many people tend to hear what other influences say. For example a YouTuber called Alpha M teaches young men, or older men to be more succefull. If Alpha M does not have his charismatic character to talk, then many of his public would not listen to what he says. Words can dictate influence if the person knows what is he or she saying. Not only words is a key, but is a fundamental key.

Action is a important key to demonstrate influence in peoples life. Actions tell in a non verbal way how to do certain things in life. For example, Messi, a really famous soccer player, has played soccer since he was 9 years old. His talent has influence many people to be better in sports, and to be better in life. If Leonel Messi did not had the talent to play soccer, then his influence would be less or non. Actions can tell what to do, when to do it, and/or, how to do it. By analyzing actions the reader can tell that actions is a important key, but motivation can give influence to.

Motivation can do many things for influence. It demonstrates character, responsibility, and success and thats what people most want to follow, more in this days. Generic_Name, a police officer, has demonstrated a lot of responsibility in many times. He has been rewarded many times because of his excellent work, and his motivation. His motivation has influenced many people to obey the laws, and to be better in society. If Generic_Name's motivation was not good, then many people would not obey the laws. Motivation can make millions of people to be influenced by one person. Motivation is a key, but some people say something else.

Some people say that giving a example to society is the only way to influence people. Words, actions, and motivation can give a person influence to follow them or motivate them to do something. By giving a example the person is only influencing people in one way. In particular, a teacher from Generic_school tells students to not use their cellphones during class period, even though he gives the example of not using his cellphone, many students still use their device. If the teacher had giving the students the words, actions, and motivation, then the students would be influenced by the teacher's order. Giving a example is part of influencing others.

After reading each paragraph, the reader can have a conclusion that a example is not the only way to influence others in society. A individual's influence can be based by words . What to do, when to do it, and/or how to do it can give example of actions, which gives influence. A individuals motivation can demonstrate influence to others and have a impact in people's life. Some people say that to demonstrate influence, the only thing to do is by giving a example. Words, actions, and motivation are three key factors that can give a person many influence around the world. Not only giving a example, but having this three qualities is important to have influence.          ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
88ECDCC89475,"Individuality

I am agree to be independent in a world is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment, because you can feel proud of yourself. Independent means that you have the control of the you doing, also signify not looking to others for one's opinions or for guidance in conduct. I think that when you decide make the things for yourself is because you are ready to confront the different situations that the life give you.

The individuality is one that pursues a markedly independent course in thought or action. That means that your actions have influence in you, all that you doing have a purpose.

For example, when you want something but is spend, you work hard for it, and can get it. This going to make you happy because just you know how you worked for buy it.

Be yourself in the world is not simple, need to have good thoughts, these are the key for the most big accomplishment. For example, when someone tell you do this, you need to think about it, and decide it is good or not , if is something bad that going to affect you. Some people no want that you win or protrude in the life, or not believe that you can do. But you need have the capacity to show them, that you can and not need help for obtain it.

Accomplishment is the quality or ability, the result of something. Make big accomplishment for yourself, teach you that you can do all that you want, but only if you believe and have trust in you. Sometimes we don't something that we want for fear, because think that the result not going to be favorable or how you thoughts. For example, sometimes many opportunities came for your life, and you never accept. But when you take the decisions of do, you see that is possible. Now know that you are able to do anything that you want.

In my conclusion be yourself in the world is good, because your learn about the life, also to do things that you not believe possible. I think that good thoughts can make you successful. Also I think that do all individuality is not easy, but not impossible. The biggest accomplishment only are caused when you do things for yourself. That is why I think that be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
48940AA0656E,"People who vale self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? people should take the decisions from guidance and authorities.

First, In my opinion, people should follow the guidance and authorities about life's matters. The guidance people have more experience than the other people who make their own decisions. people can learn more new things from the other people about life.

Second, Some people like to make their own decisions and some poeple like to share their decisions with other people. But they have to tell their own story to the guidance, so they can get more experience and they learn more new information.

Third, the people who make their own decisions thinks the life its esay for them. No, not esay. They have to meet the people who has great level of decisions

.In concluion, people have to learn and study more information about decisions, and they have meet people who have good experience about life.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
D875C4365BC3,"Been said thet a positive attitude is thr key to success in life.

Because, thet attitude is the definition for the person.

My central idea is whet the attitude definition of the person.

A men position or feeling with regard to the fact or state. The position is they something in the une relation to somethinng else. A negative or hostile state of mind, a cocki or arrogant manner.

My idea is an offensivery pesonal remark and they attitude tietine so mach what, thry collection of emocional and beavioral traits that charecteriste a person, distribution of personal and social traits a well knonk person.

Think is what they attitude is very importan of they people.

Definition on Spanish:La actitud define a las personas si nuestra acitus es mala las personan se alejan de uno. Pero si somos personas con buenan acitud todo va a salir bien.

In my person my attitude is very dificul. For my attitude i lost many person in my life. Therebe sideways our evil attitude's.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5
45E9622CF8F7,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' Even though some people disagree, I agree with Emerson's statement. The world that we live in has always been cruel and it will always be.

Growing up in life you will see a lot of people trying to bring you down, do the wrong things and take the wrong path, it is your job to make the right decisions. For example, friends will invite you to do wrong things such as doing drugs, something you are not suppose to do, it will only get you addicted, poor, homeless or all of these combined. They will ask you if you want to try it and they will tell you that it is just for fun and that you will like it, don't listen.

You will see people trying to make you do other bad things,even worse then doing drugs, such as stealing from other people,

beating somebody up or even killing someone. Be yourself and don't listen to those type of people. Stealing, beating or killing is illegal acts and it will only get you in jail or even maybe killed.

Another reason why I

agree with Emerson's statement is because y ou should stay away from people that doesn't care about their acts,life or future. Don't try doing crazy things just to fit in because someone told you to do it, be yourself, be happy, and people will like you the way you are, they will accept you the way you are, even with all your problems.

Forget about what the world wants you to be and focus on yourself so you can be whatever you want to be. Life is too short for people to tell you how to live your life, you only get to live once, it should be your right to live right. And this is why I believe being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.                            ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
C7BD62EA392F,"Dear Principal:

I personally don't think its a good idea that your considering changing school policy so that people may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average.

Sports has nothing no do with school, that's just another activity that's after school and the better you play sports the better your going to be good at school, specially with your grades. It keeps you organized and makes you stay on topic. For people sports are really important and really fun to play, it makes you runs and concentrated on how you play. You might think that for some reason that's why people are getting a bad grade average, but its not like that. I consider that sports are really important to me, and even if i don't play in a team i still love to play any kind of sport. It keeps me awake and motivated. It keeps me from stop being lazy all the time. There are 2 main reasons why i don't think its a good idea that you should change that policy. My first main reason is sports have nothing to do with school ,is just another amazing activity that people would enjoy instead of just watching TV or being on the computer. My second reason is like my mom always told me a story. When she was little and lived back in Mexico, she would tell me all about her childhood and what she would do at my age. She used to tell me that she would run every morning to exercise and breath the fresh air outside, after that she would be with my grandfather and helping him with everything that she could and then she would play Basketball with her friends. Having a little challenge to see who would win and just to have fun. I remember asking her if sports had to do anything with school? if that was an activity to bring my grades up ?' What she said Exactly was "" They invented sports so that kids, teenagers and people would have a routine and be a better person. Believe it or not mostly for teenagers, sports brings there grade up and well organized , and when i started playing sports, it did bring my grade up. What the captains do is that they show you how to be on time and do all your assignments so its similar to sports.''

I'll never forget the message that my mom gave me about sports.

Sincerely : STUDENT_NAME",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
603863409B06,"Most of students live with so much stress for study so hard and each time they depress more. They need to take a break sometimes. May breath fresh air and entertain themselves in something that can motivate to follow forward. I agree that students should be required to take one of these classes. It's very important to be creatives in some moment. Taking that type of classes make to students being relax forgetting for a moment the problems, helps to lose some fears, and above all they can benefit in their future.

Arts in general can help to people who can need a break of all the problems they have everyday and thus not live with stress. I have a friend who live with so much stress for every thing he pass. He try to be the best in all of his classes, but that cause more stress on him. For that reasons, he decide to take one or two free hours everyday to relax himself. The best decision he take was to choose a music class. After he start to take the class, he told me: ""The guitar class is very amusing and interesting. It helps me to forget all the problems that cause me stress. It was the best decision I take."" Now I see how my friend is so happy and calm after he start his guitar class. He changed because he found something that he really likes to do and that helps to be relax.

The performance class helps students to being more sociable with the others and lose one or more fears. I'm a girl with a lot of fears, but my biggest fear is to talk with others. That fear start to appear with the passing of the years. I was not a timid girl when I was a kid, but little by little I think more in what the rest think about me. That's why I decide to take a drama class. I need to confess that the first classes was very hard for me because I didn't speak with anyone, but with the passing of the days I start to speak with my companions. They were kind with me so that was more easy to me to have a conversation with someone.

The art classes can be very important to some people because it helps to have a good future. I have a teacher who I always show her my drawings and sculptures because she is my favorite teacher. She is not a art teacher, but I know she appreciate me so much because every time we talk she told me: ""Your drawings are so beautiful, in the future you can be a teacher of art or sculpture. I know you are going to have a great future doing what you really likes."" I think a lot of what she told me and probably after I finish NOVA I'm applying to some university about art, and maybe I can apply for a grant about art.

In conclusion, it's better if students take a music, a drama, or an art class so that can relax and have fun at the same time. Most of the people believe that type of classes should be electives because some students don't like to play a instrument, act, or even drawing. But I think that every student needs to take one of that classes to leave all the stress away. That type of classes are for students to turn on that creative part that they have inside and can have fun, not to being boring and stressing every time. It's good to take a break sometimes.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
41BB825BAEBB,"My Mom, she always shares wisdom with me and shows how to be a wise person and she also introduce me to this world.

One day she decided to leave everything behind and start all over,because she wanted us to have a better life in the United States. She taught me whats right and wrong,

she told me ""son always go for whats good but don't go through the bad path.""

When you learn from others experience you become a better person.

However don't learn from bad influences they'll bring you down.

friends that are doing bad things are influences you don't need to follow their actions in order to become a better person just talk to a wise person they might give you a good advice.

My Grandmother also shared how to do the right choices. Once she told me doing the right choices will always have a reward.

so I always remember to do right choices.

If you learn how to be a wise individual other people will follow your steps like M.L.K. and his famous I have a dream speech he was an example of wisdom.

It is important to learn from the experiences of others because you want to be know as a person of character.

Imagine being the person, the person you want to follow.

Do what your Mom says trust she's not lying one day you might not get that same advice wisdom shows what is true and what is right this is important in a person's life because you develop those skills that your Mom and Dad show you and use them when you grow up.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
B7FABBC13A0F,"""Character is something what you yourself choose to make it""

I agree with John Lubbock because our character is something we make by ourselves. We make ourselves the person we become in the future. We choose our traits and characters by ourselves. Everyone has a right to choose what's best for themselves. Some people choose worst traits but others choose good. It depends on ourselves what we want to be in the future. Although some traits in a character of a person comes from experiences and most of the time bad traits comes from the worst experiences in our life. But it is completely our choice if we want to make those bad experiences a process of learning and learn something good from them. Some people choose to learn worst possible things from their experiences that's how most of the people get their worst traits. It is not wrong to say that people choose what they want to be and how they want their life. It is true that some traits are formed beyond our control but it depends on ourselves if we want those trait in our characters or not.

Some people get too comfortable with bad traits and they don't want to change their selves for example lying is a worst trait anyone can possibly have it leads to do things that we don't even want to do but we do it anyways because we get comfortable and have no fear. ""Lying is not better than silence"" so it is way better to not say anything than lie about it. Lying is something that leads to other bad traits like dishonesty. If a person is not honest than they are not trustworthy. Trust is something very important because it is extremely hard to gain.

If a person is not trustworthy than there is nothing they can do other than try not to lie. Trust is like a glass if it breaks it will never be the same. All these problems are caused by lying and it depends on our to choose if we want to lie and make ours characters full of worst traits or be a better person choose good traits. In this world there is nothing more important than being who we are and choosing best for ourselves.

Our characters can formed by influences beyond our control for example something bad that happened in the past can lead a person to lie and being dishonest. Lying is not something to be proud of and bad experiences doesn't give anyone the right to lie because it doesn't matter. There is a huge difference between right or wrong. We choose our traits and what we want our characters to be like by ourselves we should know what's good and bad for ourselves. Even though sometimes being honest and speaking truth can lead to difficult situations and most people don't want to deal with difficult situations which is okay but it is important to do something right. Difficult situations make a person stronger and traits like honesty will make us proud of ourselves in future. Most of times its the journey that matters the most than the destination because it not about how we choose to become a better person it is about the experiences that led us to who we will be in the future. It is about how some people choose to learn worst possible things from their experiences but others learn good things from them. It is true to say that we become what we want to be and we choose our traits by ourselves. The harder the path will be the stronger the person becomes so it depends on ourselves to choose good or bad. There will be always two paths one will lead to good and other will lead to bad although our it depends on our own selves to choose from right or wrong,good or bad the choice is ours. If we want to be become something we'll be proud of or something we will be ashamed of. We write our stories by ourselves so it is all on in our hands what we want to be.

Although some people might disagree and yes it is true that our characters can formed by influences beyond our control but it depends on us what we want to be. Everyone knows the difference between right or wrong. There will be consequences of choosing bad and sometimes it will be easy to not be brave and choose the worst traits for ourselves. It is completely your decision if you want to add good traits in your personality or bad traits. The difference between Joker and Batman is that Batman chose good traits while Joker turned himself evil by choosing bad traits. Even though tragic experiences led Joker to be evil but his past didn't give him the right to be evil. So,you can't be evil because of your past and becoming a better person or having good traits will lead to a better future because it past is past and future is something to look forward to. Traits like honesty and being able to do what's right without any fear will make us proud of ourselves in the future. Everyone wants to be proud of themselves and to make that possible they need to adapt good traits. Good traits will lead to success and a better future which is very important to for ourselves. Bad traits will lead to an unsuccessful future and which is not best for anyone. It is important to choose good traits.

In conclusion the person we choose to become today will reflect on our future selves whether we choose good or bad traits. The decision is ours and what we want to be ourselves to be like it totally depends on us. Most of the problems in our lives can be solved by choosing good traits over evil. Good traits will lead to success and a better future which is very important to for ourselves while bad traits will lead to an unsuccessful future and which is not best for anyone. It is very important to choose good traits. If you want to be proud of yourself then it is a must to choose good traits. Our traits make our characters and personalities. Some people make their life miserable by choosing what's worst for them like bad traits. It is important for ourselves to choose good rather that ruin our lives with choosing something like bad traits. A person can ruin their character by choosing bad traits. That's why it is extremely important to choose good traits for ourselves because it is good.               ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
8B4BB870857D,"Can we accomplish more if we are always doing something ?

Sometimes we are lazy and we don't want to do nothing, but if we are doing always something we can be more stronger and helpful to the citizen.

Sometimes we are lazy, but that is bad in our life because we has to learn about this life and prepare for the future and other things. One day we would grow up and we would does not know anything and we're gonna fall in our life, therefor i told them this advice.

Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.""

we can be stronger if we are always doing something because we can learn about everything that we did and we can get strength to be better, also we can be a adviser to other peoples for example: Kids, Teenager, also Adults.

We can be helpful if we are always doing something because one day that we fall down, also we can stand up more stronger and healthy. We can help person with our experiences, also we can help kids give them a advise because we want a good, strong citizen in this world and they can make it better, and help each other.

In conclusion we can be stronger, healthy for people that don't know anything in this life. We can do better things for our future, furthermore kids will be our future, therefore we are gonna fight for them, and their future because if we are lazy and we don't do anything we are gonna fail. We need more activities in our life and do something all the time because for that we can learn ah be adviser, also we need a break but we has to continue learning and to be success in our life, and complete our dreams.",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
2F268BE28055,"Failure play's an important part in your life and it also lead you to success. why would many people thinks that failure lead you to success?. Well failure is one of the things that help you look back at yourself, so that you can start asking yourself questions that matters and that will help you succeed. You cannot survive in this world without you failing, or you having some kind of trouble that want to make you give up. The reasons why I agree with Churchill's statement is, because school, parents, and your career are things that help and give you hope, so that you can succeed.

The first things that play's an important part and you need in life is Education. School teach you things the hard ways and by you learning it the hard ways, help you fix your mistake in a better way. Your school work is what going to lead you to your success and your next journey in life. Without your education, it will be hard for you to succeed, or to even think about what kind of experience you could've have and what kind of person you could've been. You failing is teaching you how life is, what your next journey can be, and how much effort that you going to put into it. For you to succeed you have to fail, so that you can actually grow up, learn how life goes, and learn from your mistake. Education help you succeed in a better, clean, and a proper way.

The second thing that's important and that you need in your life is your parents. They advise you of how they were able to succeed, have a family, and how failing is a bless, because you get to learn from that. Your parents support you in the good moments and also in the bad moments. It is when other people are supporting and giving you advice other than your parents, because you going to have to choose if it a good advice or a bad one. That is why when you happen to have any of your parent supporting you, or giving you advice, you should be greatful. Some teenagers loose hope and their confident when they're failing, because they have no support, no one to give them advice, and they're lonely with no parents. That is also why your parents play an important role on your success even though, you keep failing.

The third thing that helps you see things clearly and that challenge you, is your career. when you have a career, or want to have a career, it is where you going to start making mistakes. By you having a good career and want to keep it, but you keep failing actually help you learn how to succeed. You having a job helps express yourself, more mature, and it help you learn how to challenge yourself, so by you doing that, leads you to success. You challenging yourself, help you see a better and a more challenging person. Your career help you stand up for your mistake, challenge yourself, and fix your mistake.

Most people would think that failure leads you to success and fewer people would think that failure leads you to giving up. ""Success consist of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm."" They might think that it is peoples opinion, because why go to school when you can succeed the dirty way. What these people think is that their succeeding, but what they don't know is that their keep failing over and over again. Playing it the dirty way is not you succeeding, but it is you proving to yourself that you keep failing. That is why failure play an important role in pursuing your success.

I agreed with Winston Churchill, because success does consist of you failing. The reasons why I agreed with

Winston Churchill is, because Education, parents and career are important things and people that helps you succeed. By you failing thesempeople and things are the one's giving you advice and help you be more self assured. Everyday in this life you're challenging yourself with new things and these things, are things that you need to keep doing, so that you can succeed. You will never be successful unless, you failed.  ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
3DB503D247B3,"Dear, Teacher

What do I think about working with people or working alone, I think both have great benefits but it depends on the type of person if they are social, antisocial , or if they been through stuff. But if I was to pick one I would choose to work with a group because of how many advantages their are, if your stuck and you need help you can always ask for help from your group because theres more than one, working with your group is easier than working alone because you can do different parts at the same time meanwhile when you work alone it takes longer, it becomes more difficult if you need help and not knowing what to do. Working together gives us a bigger boost of an IQ because multiple brains are better then one and gives us a better over all grade or if the person that is working alone and is very smart he could find things easier. Working together could be fun because of the people you are working with or meeting new people in the group that you don't know and learning from them and what experience they been through.

Disadvantages are people are going to force the smarter person of the group to do all the work, if people choose the group they'll choose either the smart people of people that they get along with and mess around and not do anything, if the teacher finds out that the smart ones from the groups do all the work they'll get an f. People who choose people to be in their groups are going to abuse their power. People who choosed to work alone would be struggling because work hard and they would have to do all the work, it would be boring and long with no one to socialize, if were stuck you and you needed help no one is there to help. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
DBC60BDBC49E,The school board shouldn't add one and half hours to school each day. To begin one reason i think they shouldn't is that a lot of kids who play sports or clubs after school might not be able to because they don't have time to learn about how life is and how difficult it is and people's life difficulties. One example is that some kids play videos and since they dont have lots of time out side of school they might just play video game instead of sports and if you give them more time out of school more opportunities students will have. secondly Students will be more tired and less focus because if students have more time in school the more earlier they will have to sleep and most students don't fall asleep early also students have homework since they well most likely be tired from school they might take a nap and there might either wake up to late to do homework or not have time to finish all there homework. Thirdly more students will not want to be in school and may drop out from either too much stress or they just don't want to be in school because the longer time there in school the more tired they are and less time they have to do what makes them feel relaxed or not have time to do what they love to do. students also might not have time to make friends because there focusing on school and it might ruin there social skill and conversation with strangers out side of school. Lastly less amount of time they have to spend with there families because they would have to go to school for extra time and as soon as they get home they have to do homework and honestly by the time there done there going to be most likely tired to do anything beside resting or sleeping. Also some students have younger siblings to take care of after school so that would put more stress on a student and either a family would have to pay for a baby sitter or some families don't have money to pay for one so parents might take there student out of school just to take care of there sibling and so the extra time in school wouldn't help him. To conclude those are the main reasons why I think we shouldn't have more school hours in school.  ,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
857574FE9711,"In my opinion.

I agree with Emerson to be right when he wrote everyone can do eny things, but not every one wants to work hard to do.

Example.

In my personan I think to have my own helicopter in the future.

In this word evething goods is posible something more than more beyonnd whtaever my effort my or how many i give to soporting them. Even in my life or my phat way so many dificult, but I velieved in my faiht there is nothing impossible.

But i have to work hard to get them ,because nothing come easy ,everything have price first then came be true, But I can't lose nothing to try ,try and try becouse wiil be successful In the future.

Even if I see now only in my dream and, dream in my future it's already mastered.

The people never grow because they fear to try, to do some bighest or highest is the most enemig byself .I can't grow more toll,but I tread believed in my self and first God, will be grow me in wisdom that is my best part I can't do by mayself,the first thing to is to have good health, and my family to.

So I agree to do something beyon what I already Mastered.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
A9544F0E8868,"First impressions always count no matter what and sometimes even impossible to change. Because,when meeting a new person or family member people judge on how people tend to act and speak. For example,if a women would like to apply for a new job and talked to the manager in a rudely manner her way of speaking and acting would affect her opportunity of working. So maybe think before what you're going to say because it affects your life. But,not only you but the others in the surrounding Therefore, being nice and kind to others helps the way people look and act when they show their first impressions to others.

First of all, first impressions not only are by judged by the person of a face but ,can sometimes leave a good mark or bad one because the way people look and the attitude they give. Sometimes that's why when people are going to give a first impression it has to be a clear and nice way so that the other gives back to people. Otherwise, when meeting with them later in the future they will regret to have spoken and talken to you because lack of behavior. So maybe think clearly andi treat others the way they do to others. Next time think of what positive things to share around and impressions to others.

Secondly, sometimes its impossible to change impressions and thats why we think before we speak. One way by noticing is when meeting a new person and by their first impression. Its says a lot by just looking at their behavior and attitude not only because the way they speak but interact with others. For example. when meeting a new employee at my job employees have to introduce themselves to each others so that they can create a long-lasting relationship. But, when meeting a new employee there was a guy and I introduced myself to him and he had just passed by without saying anything and was shocked when that happened.. Because, when meeting new people you have to introduce yourself to others like any other person in the world. Not only because their new but it helps people interact with each other.

Lastly, being able to give the first impression to others means a lot because it represents who you really are and the person you want to be. Therefore, people will comprehend the way you feel about others and how you treat them. So that your family and friends can be proud of who you are and realize who you've become as a person. Then, treat other with respect and kindness so that many others can spread positive things in life. maybe so later in life you can become someone and treat others the way you treat yourself. Then realize that first impressions always count as a good way to introduce yourself to others.

To summarize, the person who you are today is the person that can be later in life. Thats why first impressions always count no matter what and where you are and how you act as a person. Not only that but it also say a lot about people and you. Being kind and generous to others can affect the world by a lot not only by being kind but can help the people around you. Just by having a good impression of yourself people can take it to other good ways in life. So that's why we as persons have to be the that lead the next generation and with a good personality.",3.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
004AC288D833,"Dear Principal,

Our school should have a community center. The reasons why, are so students can learn what our community needs, how to make our community better place, and why is community important for students to know. Its a great to have a community center to know how we can make things better.

Students think community center takes their time away. but they have to learn what our community needs. students will participate in a group of students making a list what our community needs, therefore students will learn what our community needs! students will present their list of things our community needs! due to that students will be giving extra credit for the ones who have low grades!

Some students don't participate because their friends say its waste of time. it would not be waste of time when you get to know how our community can be a better place for us. students should know that the program is about our own lives, because if our community is bad well our lives are going to be bad. due to that students will want to participate and will want to make our community a better place for us.

some student might say why is the community important anyways, were fine nothing is wrong. but when get to know what our community is, they would want to know about and would want to participate and know why is our community important. students will receive a good grade if they participate in this community because is like an extra credit. due to that their friends would want to enjoy the program because their friend told them about it.

so principal the community center will be a great place for students to learn lots of things. so i guess this will be a good idea for our school. students will learn what our community needs, how to make our community a better place, and why is our community important!

Sincerely, STUDENT_NAME",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
7FED050A6D55,"Did you know that Robotics is the most funnest job than any other jobs out there? what I like to pursue is doing Robotics because it's all about coding and building.

Another reason why Robotics is a job for me to pursue, because it's all about coding. Furthermore, coding is basically you have to type in the words specifically. For example, Forward = (1). That means it tells the robot to move forward only one time. Also, coding is like math, you have to calculate what distance is the Robot is going to do and where it want to stop.

Another reason why Robotics is the one thing that I'd like to pursue is Building. Building the Robot is where you have to work with a team to make it happen, if you were to build it by yourself, it would take a long time to make, since it's only you and not 3 or 4 people helping you. Building is like Lego, but you have to screw in nuts, and not connecting them together like plastic bricks. Also, building the robot is most important, because if you screw something up, you have to remove every part of the robot to fix that one mistake you did.

In conclusion, Robotics is the most joyful job, because it's all about editing and creating a robot to make it function.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
F1F6D7CAE400,"I am agree with Churchill's statement about that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" Failure plays an important role in the pursuit of the success. We learn of our owns mistakes, including others persons mistakes. At the same time, is very important to be enthusiasm and with a good attitude to address and learns of ours mistakes, to continue progressing in the pursuit of success.

If we do not try, we do not make mistakes,

if we do not make mistakes, we do not learn, and we will not be success as we want to. It is so important that when we make a failure. With enthusiasm,

checking where did we fail, how can we fix it, and give the best of our self. You can see, that how the next time that you pass with the same circumstances, you will not make the same failure that you did the last time, and at the time you will became an expert according at the area you are trying to perform.

Do not let the fear of going from failure to failure, prevent you of pursuit the success. Every vary make mistakes that is why, it is very important that we do not have to loss the enthusiasm. The enthusiasm is what make us, to stand up, learn of our failure, and continue pursuit the success, do not matter which one, or how it is the circumstances of our failure.

At the same time you can learn of the failures of others persons. that way you do not have to pass with same circumstances that they pass before; and you can economize your time to success faster. Listening, reading and paying close attention of what other person transmit about their failure can help us more then what can we think. Imagine the much you can get just for give some of the minutes of your time, to listen the important things you can get from the failure of others. so open your mind and pay attention.

In conclusion it is good to failure. Every time we make a mistake, we learn about it, and we will never forget what we learn from them. Therefore do not let a failure prevent you to be success, and learn of your failure and other people failure.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
8311ABD30CC1,"Many people thinks that the school should not follow this model by extending the school two hours. Students, teachers, and others employees have responsibilities in their houses and others places after school. Also, fathers can get a bad attitude about why theirs kids need to be ten hours at the school. Schools should not follow this model by extending the school two hours.

First, some fathers believe that extending the school by two hours their kids will get more stressed. For example, extending the school by two hours students will need to do more homework, test, and projects. Students can feel like they can not do all of the work what the teacher give to them. A lot fathers doesn't have a good transportation for can pick up their kids at the school that late. Therefore, schools should not follow this model by extending the schools by two hours.

Second, some students have responsibilities after school. For example, some of them have sports, drama classes, and jobs. Extending the school for two hours can cause that these students can lost their jobs or some hours, they can not go to drama classes, and can not go the their sports practices. For other way, students need to have some rest of all. Schools should not follow this model by extending the school two hours.

For instant, extending schools for two hours and four-day school, students can have three days free. Students can have more free time, they can hangout more with their friends, and they can have more rest. Consequently, with four-day school and extending for two hours students can get more stress, and their grade can go down. Schools should not follow this model by extending school for two hours.

Extending school for two hours, will cause that fathers will get a bad attitude, and some students will lost their jobs, sport practice, etc. Students will feel like they can not do it, and their grade will go down. Therefore, schools should not follow this model by extending school two hours.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
84192B65683A,"Community parks has it all open space, sun ,green grass, tables and a nice setting in general.

Community park provide a lot of opportunities such as spending time with friends and family, sports and exercising, and doing school assignments. These are my three reasons what you can do respectfully and peaceful at your nearest community park. I hope you find these helpful for you in the future.

Spending time with friends and family at a community park is a good way of making bonds stronger with each other. Parks have a lot of activities to do in a park for example there is a lot of outside games you can play. My opinion on how parks can make your bond stronger is that you can talk to them while you walk, jog and other activities. For example Generic_Name and Generic_Name went to the park to go play checkers. They talk about grades and other subjects for one hour. Their bonds got stronger they hang out every day.

Community parks have a lots space playing. Sports burns calorie's and it is very fun to play sports. You can make new friends with sports might even get ask to play on their team. For example Generic_Name brings her new ball to her community park nearest to her. Generic_Name brings her ball to the court kids dashing as fast they can to her. A crowd of kid show up to her begging if they can play they make teams. Generic_Name makes a lot of friend and plays soccer with them everyday.

Parks are good way to study and do school work because it is peaceful and natural sounds help you get relax.

Imagine nice sunny day no wind hear of birds and grass bending every direction. Studying in a park will help you a lot because you are not going to get interrupted my neighbors and relatives. People from the park might help you and give you way and strategies to get a good grade on a test. For example Generic_Name want to pass his test. his sibling are loud he can't focus. Generic_Name goes to the community park to study for the big test.

In conclusion parks are a good way to do every day activities than staying home being lazy. I hope this helps you with your every day situation.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
5CF895003869,"""Unless you try something beyond what you already mastered,you will never grow"" I agree with this argument because if people never try something new,they will never know if they choose the best option because never try. In my opinion be afraid is the worse thing in the world. In my experience afraid is the most thing that I feel stoped me because if I am afraid I never try something beyond things I have,even knowing that it can be better for me. Also if people try to do something new,they will learn more things than they already know. Keeping trying is the best option for all people in the world. Does not matter if they fail or they are wrong,and finally I agree with the statement because people will never know if they will get better opportunities in a job,college or in general life,if they never try or they never force theirselves to be successful.

First,if people never try something new,they will never know if the way they choose,was the best option because they will be always with the doubt thinking about what could happen if they were tried. They will never be brave enough if they never try to do something new because they are afraid. In my opinion the best example is when teenagers are in school,specially people who are from Central American countries,they are afraid because they do not speak the internacional language ""Enlglish"" so,they prefer do not try something like; speak with their classmates or even with their teachers,if they have any doubt they will never ask because they are afraid. They just do not want to try it because they are afraid classmates or teachers laugth about them,even when the teacher are good with them because some teachears are a kind of rude,not all of them but there are some of them. In my personal experience,the last year I had two teachers who was very rude with me and my friend. We were in our class when she asked for something that I did not understand and I asked her what was that,and she said that if we do not speak English we need to go back our conutry,and my other teachers was angry because in my class all the people was speaking Spanish and she said the same thing that my another teacher said before ""If you do not speak English just go baxk to your countries"". These are examples why teenagers are afraid to try new thins and they just prefer stay quite,but the only way to know how things are going to take place,is try it. If people try new things,they will be better person that they already are because they will figth for the things they want,they will be successful by theirselves.

Second,if people try to do new things,they will learn more things that they already know. When people try something new the results can not be always positive. They can fail,but at least they were brave to try something that they never try before and they have to be proud of theirselves even if they did not get what they want. However if they did not get what they want,they learned something new because people learn from the mistakes. Mistakes are the best way to learn because you will know what to do the next time that you try the same thing until you get what you want. Does not matter if you are wrong,you will learn because the life is a lesson that you learn every single day. In my experience when my uncle wants to get his license,we went to the DMV so many times but he always fail his test. We went to the DMV about five times till the day he pass his test,but he never give up even knowing that he can fail the last time we went,he wants to try it again and keeping trying still they have his license with him. So do not get frustrate if you do not get it the first time you try,just keeping trying,you will get it.

Finally,is people will never know if they will get better opportunities if they never try. So many people in the wolrd are looking for better opportunities but the most of the time they never get it,the only reason is because they never try. When people want to get a new job where they need to do something that they never did before they choose do not try it because they do not want to be wrong,but if they never try it,never will be better,never will get a best opportunity to be successful. Everybody is afraid about fail and fail is the most comun reason what people stop to doing something they want,but fail is not the worse thing in the world,the really worse thing is not try it. People can get better opportunities also in the college,they need to try something maybe the things can work good for them. Life is the best gift that we have,we can be sad,we can be happy,we can be whatever we want,and do whatever we want to do,but need to keep try it. If something does happened just like people want,keeping try it to get perfeccion. To get what they want,they need to force theirselves untill get and be who really want to be. Life is the best teacher we have. The life teach us be brave,be proud of ourselfs,be best person than we were yesterday,but life also teach us to figth to get better opportunities,and better lifestyle.

In conlcusion,try new things is better than stay with the things people already have. Try is the best option that people have,does not matter what poeple say about the way people decide to take,everybody is going to choose the best way for their lives. So keep trying,on that way you will mastering more things than you already have. Does not matter how good you are or how many things you already have. You need to looking for most better thing,better opportunities. People do not have to be afraid,people need to be brave to get what they want. Do not give up if the things do not take the place that you want,just keeping trying. Always will be better try new things,to continue grow up than stay where you are with the things you already have. Better life,better opportunities,best person in the world. I am very agree with the statement,and you need to be agree,too. ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered,you will never grow"".",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
B744CD534ADB,"Dears, teachers of Generic_School.

First, I think that we all should work alone, because each student can be working for their self with out any other help from students that do not care about their projects or homework, all students has different ideas, working in a group would be more stressed for the student, they may not have the opportunity to show their own ideas working in a group. However, working in a group sometimes can be helpful but working alone can be more helpful to the teacher, working alone, the teacher would see who deserved a good grade, working in a group one of the persons can be the only one who does all the work. In addition, working alone can be the best way to show our own ideas because everyone has different opinion about the projects or the homework and how is going to be, working alone should be more helpful for the student who had different opinion in their topic.

In my English class we all were working in groups, well in my group were three people one of the group was at their phone seen social media, and doing nothing, I ask if he needs help and if that was the reason why you are not helping us to do our project, I said, he just answer and said don't ask me, that's not your problem, he was unreasonable but there wasn't nothing more that I can do for someone who do not want to work, that's one of the a lots of reasons why is not helpful working with a group.

Wherever, I believe that working alone is the best way to show up our mind and be sure that we can do all that we want to do, some people think that working in a group they can get done more fast any projects but I think that we should work alone because there is some people that do not care about their subjects and sometimes the teachers think that they just do not want to do nothing but there are people that we really want a good grade, working alone let the student to focus more in their own work than someone who is stressed about if his partner is going to help or not. Some people said that working in a group it's more fun than working alone but I think that working alone some times can be also fun because you make your own rules and use your own imagination.

In conclusion, students should work alone, each students can be working by their self and with out thinking if their classmate is going to help in any kind of project, all students has different ideas, working in group would be more stressed for the student, working alone can be more helpful to the teacher, the teacher would see who deserved a good grade. Working alone is the best choice, teachers considerate students ideas like the most big new option to improve our society, working alone is the best way to show our own ideas, by working alone students will be feel more confident about their work and more likely to explain their work. Finally, students can work for their self, and is not always necessary to work in group, sometimes work in group can be annoying and distractive by others students.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
DE3867FD43DE,"well hello today I will discust the diferent between working wit a group or working alone first let me ask you a question how hyou like to? with a group or alone? well i chose working with a group lets see why...

working in group and working alone have advantages and disavantages for each one,I like wirking as a group because your team can help you with some ideas and ways to do your work and at the same time have fun while your are doing the work. disavantages in a group there will be always a person that want to be just playing around and don't like to do any type of work just have fun. nut if we being on the side of be working alone thant advantage will be that you will have more oportunity of do your work the way you want to and no be worry about other people opinion. you will finish your work faster and the way you want the wor kto be done,but some disvantages you will no have fun because you have no one to be with and it will be difficult to have a lot of ideas. i think working with a group is more beneficial because if you think there will be more people at the ppresentation helping you and you will feel more secure with your work.

working with a group can help you to increase your skill level of talking and self confidence and being social(meet new friends) , working alone can sometimes can get borring and you dont finish the work because you don't have someone to share the ideas with,

workingt alone can cause you a damage on yuor personalty and your aparetion people will think i he don't like workign with aother person around that he should work by it self andf then there will be a lot of caos that person fall in depresion because no one acept him and it was because you make them to be like that or feel that way.

while you are working with a group you learn skilll like having respect for others and diferentsd way of doing things and work as a team,or even for example you love play sport well you can not do it by your self because there will be team, and how you will work as a team with out learning how to work as a group, you need to learn how to work as a team if you want to be succesful in the comunity, in your future working with a group with the perople you trust you learn that friendship is alway good for you have thar confident that people you like being with help you to increase on your life that is a feel that no one can easy aford it.

went oyu are working with a group friendship will always be there why because is the keey of being succesful on your life. in your future, and your career, in your job.

for example;

lets said that you was driving on the higway driving normal but you forgot to past by the gas station you are in the middle of the street you don't have gas well if you don't like to work with a group then you will push your car and problably you will end up getting a desease or crashing another car.

while if you learn how to work as a group then you can have four people helping you push your car others stop the traffic and some calling the police to help you with that issue.

now you see why it is importan to learn and work as a group, even though with that you already meet new people and have new friend,what I try to said is that working with a group help you a lot in harders things that you need help with.

working alone is depent of what kind of personality you have and if you love working with out people than is fine but there will alway a time that you have to work as a team or group becasue there are things that someone by them self can not accomplish.

when you work as a group you gain respect and great friend ship because if you help with everything then everyone will love working with you and you now will feel that you are important and useful, something that working alone it will be dificult to make.

well i hope you like my explanation i did my best and i feel that we should be more socialize with other nad let then join us for our better future so they can have friends and they never feel like their are alone, lets make everyone happy and having a good time helping other and always respectful.",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
A9B3B0AEE38B,"I think that older and younger students being together is a really good idea cause that means that the older student can help the younger student and If an older students needs help with something one of the younger students can possibly help. I think that all schools should have programs like this because then the younger student can learn from the older one. Also the older student can possibly be an influence to the younger student like for example if the older student wants to be a doctor then maybe, just maybe, the younger student can be influenced and wants to be a doctor when the student is older. I think the effects of older and younger students working together is good because i think that the students can help each other in many things and if a younger student is getting picked on then maybe the older student can defend them and i just think that if older and younger students are paired up then they can work together and help each other on things outside of school. And maybe one of the older student can become really good friends with the younger one. I honestly think that schools that have programs like this are really good cause students can cooperate with each other and work together and maybe become friends. I really think that students are smarter when they are with other students that are not in there age group.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
EEEEC24C9AE7,"The author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote. unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.

Why the author Waldo Emerson wrote. Unless you you try something beyond what you have already mastered. you will never grow. The author want to let the people know that there's many way to grow up. The people should think about to do different stuff even if they are mastered in any profession.

Does Mr. Emerson thought about the people when he wrote his message in his text. Yes he does. He thought a bout it because he clearly is talking to the people in his writing. People shouldn't stop learning other stuff or do other kinds of work because they are professional in one job. I agree with Mr. Emerson about his writing. Many people in society just want to focus in one thing. but that affect the development of the community of work. Also if you never try something new you will never know. and if you do not try you are closing you mind and the opportunity to learn. The people should think about to grow up.

In my conclusion the people should try something else. The society shouldn't be focus in just one stuff all life. The community would be better if we keep going a head. and think about the future.            ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
057E81E19740,"People should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter. because they can find a good ideas from them. So its help full for anyone who is struggling with there own ideas. Even though they find a good think to make there own decision.

Even thought people need to see guidance from experts and authorities about life's important.

because, who confused with his/her ideas. They will find a good ideas to make a good decision for there ideas. Also Some times they does not have idea with what they have to pick or they have to do in there life .So, They need some one to find a good ideas from them. Some people keep his ideas with him/her self and think over. They get depression all the time with them life's. also they start doing other bad thing to get out from them depression. Fore example, drink alcohols.

I think sometimes we need some life's guidance to make a dissciocion for our life. because everyone think too many thing all the times. but, when we get confused with our own ideas. It is help full to share and to see guidance. we have to see guidance from experts and authorities about life's to make a good dessicion.

For example, when I start think about something hard and straggle to get a good idea. I always share my ideas with some one who can understand and help me with my idea. If

I got a good ideas form them I keep that ideas for my own life. so its better to share your ideas with people from experts and authorities about life's important matter.

People who decide his won idea with his self and sharing his own idea for other people and making a decision. Making a decision with other peoples are help full to make a good decide. because they find anther good think with your idea or they will tell you the bad thing about your ideas. So you can make you own decision after that thats help full to now your weekness.

So making decision with life guidance is help full to make a good decision for life.                                                                                                                                                                                               ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
83B3CD03C693,"An enjoyable educational activity could be playing an intrument,an intrument could teach someone to practice everyday,by practicing could lead you to learning new techniques to play that type of instument. Being enspired by someone to do that instrumet or what ever you want to do you need somone to motivate you for example, their was this one time where my brother motivated me to play the chello and I did and it felt good,because I practiced everydaycand I loved doing it. Thats why practicing is important.

Having fun while playing in band or orchestra your able to travel to diffrent states to learn how difrrent groups play,

learn diffrent songs, and learn the sites of that certain city. Thats why I joined orchestra when I was about 9-10years old I learned about 20 new songs that 1 school year and I loved doing it. It was fun to watch, and hear them while playig it was probably the best year i had in 3rd grade.

The people in your group are like your family you guys are going to travel together and perform together. And even making freinds to the new kids who join later in the year so dont worry about being left out while traveling to that certain state your always going have someone to talk to be around. YouCAn also make friends in the new state you travelled to thats why playing an intrument is so enjoyable. ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0
692FAA1828D2,"Have you ever gone out to a park, or just even made an attempt to go out and enjoy the outdoors ?

Some people love going outside and enjoy spending time with their family. Just by going outside you learn something new while you are there whether it is about your family or something you never knew. So take time and effort and go outside and enjoy the time with your family . And help someone out wile you are there, like a homeless person or someone in need of help.

Some fun and athletic activities you can do at a community park are , to meet lots of new people that live in your community. Something you can do at a community park is go running; You can even take some of your friend with you as well. You can also take your bike to the park and listen to music while you are biking. some community parks also have a pools. You can go swimming and enjoy the cool water on a hot summer day or even throw a pool party and invite your friends . Some people like to bike, swim and run to feel good about what they have accomplished .

Some other ways you can enjoy the day outside is by taking your sibling to the park. This is a great way for them to get there energy out and you can enjoy the time with them. And they will feel so tied they won't even bother you for the rest of the day. If you like adventures then you will enjoy going hiking ,its a great way of looking and enjoying nature and getting fit as well. You can also take your dog on a walk, some people like to do this because their dogs get some exercise and so do you. I think these are all great ways to stay moving and it makes you feel good about yourself.

Swimming, biking, running, hiking, going to the park etc. There are lots of more ways you can stay fit and enjoy the outdoors , these are just some great activities you can do outdoors. Some people like doing all of these things to feel like they have accomplished something . Some other people might do these things to get fit or lose weight . People also do these activities to spend time with their family or to meet new people. I think everyone should try doing something outdoors like getting into a new hobby or a new family activity to do . Thses are activities I think are great to do outdoors .",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5
32380C91070A,"It has been said that the importance of positive attitude is a key to success in life. i believe that have positive attitude is better then having a negative attitude.

Its better to foward then moving backwords to put postive thought head and keep moving ahead.

I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success, it help in many way when talk to someone or when talk to costumer. Having a positive attitude help when working in a work place For example,

when a costumer is giving a hard time instead reflecting back it better to respond with a positive attitude then a bad one. Then matter will turn out better.

when reflecting back with a negative attitude the outcome isnt great it worst it better to smile then be mad.

Its important to have positive attitude because there better outcomes having a better attitude is a big key to success it help when dealing a bad situation. Having a positive attitude change the way you see thing there much better outcome like seeing a smile on someone face because the attitude you gave them was positive and not negative. The action we do reflect on what is said or done, just like attitude reflect back. when giving the right attitude everything is better and there no bad responds or action done.

The important of attitude is the emotion some gives when thing change for example, when a job gives a raise to someone the person attitude change because there happy. Small things changes a person attitude and a way of thinking. when thinking about the way your attitude can change in just a split second by the action taking place is pretty amazing how not only when someone is happy the attitude they show is better then it was before.

In conclusion having a postive attitude is very important when to talking to someone. It is big part of life and it will help you with succes when facing a problem in the long run. the important of attitde is the way to think or feel and what makes you happy.

There is so much succes when you have the right attitude. Don't let the wrong attitude reflect back do better. Being negative won't help,

i agree with having the right attuide is the key to succes.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
E20DE200FEA8,"There are people who believe that true self-esteem comes from praising the student's work and others believe that true self-esteem comes from achievement. There are situations where a student should feel that his real hard work is considered good by praising his work. There are some students that feel that their work was good, because of their achievements. There are some types of students:

Students that make themselves feel especial when their work is appreciated

Students that feel that their work was hard by achievements

Students that even if they do not try their best, want their work to be praised in order to learn

Students the feel themselves in a position to learn when they do not give their best effort and it is praised

There are many students that deserve their work to be praised to build self-esteem, because they have really tried their best in order to get their work done, but there are many students who do not deserve their work to be praised, especially if they have not tried their best on their work. Those students who try their best on their work, they deserve their work to be praised, so that they can notice that the real hard work that they have done is appreciated. It would make them keep their hard work.

There are some people that truly believe that true self-esteem comes from achievements. It makes a lot of sense, because achievements come from real hard work. If any student achieved what they wanted, it meas that they had worked hard for it. If people want to build true self-esteem through achievements it is a great idea that they have that on mind, because it would make them feel especial if they achieve it through hard work.

There are many circumstances where it depends on the type of people and situation where you want to build self-esteem. For instance, there are certain type of people that even if you praised their work will not keep it to build self-esteem. There are certain type of people that will. There are people that learn by achievements in order to build self-esteem.

In conclusion I think that true self-esteem comes from both, achievements and praising. There are people who build self-esteem trough the hard work that has been praised, but also achievements. There are many type of people that build self-esteem trough achievements, but also praising.                                   ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
25BFEA75C65A,"After reading the prompt I might think we have to make some change to the school like, what was said in the prompt we have to change the school days to a four day school week and make them to be two hours long. it can give people the hours that they need for other things and can give them time for project and stuff of that matter.

The reasons why, I think we should do this because we can get more hours in the day to do things like for example: sports,homework,helping others, getting more rest in the day because maybe some people might not get more sleep during the night,some people might have job, students might have to go with their parents on a trip to somewhere or some place or also a school trip that they might go on. I well think that this is a good position to be for the change of the hours but to ever good thing there must be a bad like, a bump in the straight road ahead of you. I think for myself I do agree but there are some people that might not agree with my train of thoughts. The people who many not agree will probably say that there are not many hours in school to do things like learning new things.

My train of thought thinks that we must go this way of the four day school week plan. There are so many beliefs of going this way that means we can save more resources and teachers can plan things up ahead for his/her students. I must say that there are some disadvantages of students having a four day week of school like students forgetting the things that they were teach in class and students can also not be ready for class.

Some in conclusion: there are bad and good thing of having a four day week of school plan but there are some disadvantages of having it like what I said people might disagree with you but don't let them change your own train of thoughts. people also might not agree with your own believes but don't let them change who you are but the disadvantages are hard but the students can probably somethings pull it off. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
67F6FEDD7677,"Some schools have programs for youngers and olders student why they make programs like this or how can they help each others Okey. This program help both students to learn about what are the responsability of the olders students and the youngers student to see what they going to do when they becomes a older and the olders student can learn from de younger student.

The olders student can teach about mistake because every one have different mistake they can teach younger student to do right things and can help each others

The yourger student can also learn about theres mistakes they make the program to thye olders students can go to visit the yourger student to help them, to them they can help the youngers student to learn from theres mistakes the olders student can teach the younger student about the life to do the right things

The youngers student needs the olders student like the olders student need a adult to they can say dont do this is the same the younger student need the olders student they can help each others if the youngers studetn have a promble or a question they can ask the olders student to do right this some student of the youngers schools they dont know english the olders student can help them some times the olders student needs the youngerts students to do somenthing like if the olders sstudent dont know somenthing they can ask the younger students if someone has problems with something they can help each others they can do many dinfferent things together there are many types about programs that can help younger students and olders student sometimes if is a fight with youngers students the olders student can stop them and say to them to do the right thins because in this life everyone has mistakes nobody is perefect they can help each others to the rights things and the different about this two kinds of student is the olders student have more responsability and the younger student have responsabily but the dont have much like the olders students or the olders students dont have the mu\ch responsability from the adult one time my dad tell me that when he was youngers he need help with somenting but he dont want to tell a older person he tell me if one time i need help with something i can ask a older one to help me to do tghe right this and to learn from ours mistakes we can help each others olders students are important because they can help the younger student to know about this life the younger students start to learn more about this life the olders student know what is right and what not right they can help each others to practice the armony of this two kinds of students the youngers student can learn much about thir sames mistakes know a big problem has the olders student dont want to help the youngers students the diferent betweet is the olders student know the right things and the bads things so thas why the can help each others

Also in betwen thius two kinds of student are a different types somentimes the olders studeents dont want to help the youngers students and the younger student dont want to listeng from the olders student so theirs is a problem somentimes the olders student want to teach somenthing important to the younger student ,and the younger student dont want to listeng the olders student so we have a different there like now the oplders student dont want to listeng the aldult or theirs teachers so whent someone says dont do this more you do it and when the consecuense cames we dont want that so my we need the olders student to teach as to know what is good or bad like the olders student need a adult to they cant tell them dont do this or do this but they cant hit them they can only tell them don't do this this is bad for you or what is good for you they need thir helps esch others they can proctect each others                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0
845693DC199E,"Dear principal, ''This is what i think about community service.""

I think community service is helpful because you can help the community. For example, some tutor elementary school children and others clean up litter. Community service is helpful because you can help people in the hospital and you can clean the streets. By helping people in the hospital, you can help people that are sick and in the streets you can help clean up from the parks and the street floor. Also i think that the principal should decide the people that should do community service. One way that the principal should decide is by choosing the people that got a 75% or higher on their report card.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
E926BE6F104E,"Working in a group can be helpful. Working alone is also good for you because you can focus and get the job done without being distracted. Seeing people working in groups shows that really only 2 people do the work and the rest play around. You also dont get the full learning experince working in a group than you get working alone. When you work in a group you dont know your strengths and weaknesses your just wondering what to do but when working alone, you can realize what you need help on and what you dont need help on. Working in a group can make you lazy, because you depend on your group to do the work for you most of the time.

Personally I would rather work alone than work with a group. Working alone gives you peace, quiet and space that will help you work at a fast pace. When you work alone you tend to ask your teacher qustions in order to help you and thats good. Its also gives you the power to do what you thinks right. Working in a group, you cant do what you think is right the whole group gets to decide the answer. Working alone can also benifet you by your grade they show you how well you did on it or if you did bad. If you did bad then you can study and see what your missing out on and that can make you better and understand the topic correctly next time. My personal preference is working alone even though working in a group that could be a great experince I'd rather work alone. It gives me motivation to get my work done faster then not caring. You can get distracted and carried away fast at this day and age. Alot of students love to work alone its a great time to themselves and to finish their work. Working alone saves you the trouble of getting blamed for something you shouldn't have been blamed for.

So i think working alone is more benificial for everyone. Unless you are assigned a project and its due very quickly then thats the perfect way to work in a group. But thats a whole different story. At the end of the day i will rather choose to work alone than in a group but some might think otherwise.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
D250DB9080E0,"I agree with this prompt about the first impression, based on my own experience and for what I've seen in myself is related or better said similar on my every day life, and what I really mean by that is: First impression that we show it won't change that easy as many people expect to change between one month to a year, not because we couldn't change it but because this is who we are, also because this is how we act and it won't change because is part of ourselves.

In addition to this prompt i think it might be impossible to change our first impression not because we can't change it, but it'll be because is part of our personalities, in my case should I say is part of how I really am, how my culture distinguish me, that's what makes me unic and by trying to change a part of me it would make me feel empty, because first impression means a lot to me and is all thanks to my past experiences that I've been through.

In conclusion to this paragraph i think that first impression is important, it helps you to understand how a person is, also it helps you to analyze that one person, and most of all i think it helps a lot when you're patient when trying to understand others at the first time, sometimes or most of the time people would judge others by their first impression without seeing what's really their intention, this is what I think about it, we shouldn't judge just by the first time you meet someone even if you think that person is an stranger, just give them a change to prove you're wrong with their actions and their way to treat people, thank you.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
AF8963C142A0,"Benefits on working with a group is a better way to get work done because most students get to use different ideas,Helping each other out with different parts on projects finishing work faster,and communicating with each other is key if working in groups.

However not everyone would agree with this position, because it benefits of working alone is most students don't have to wait on others to do their work. For example The teacher assignes a project and they have to be in groups of five and two of the students do their work and the other three don't do their work. It brings everyone else down.

Working alone makes students not have to worry about others not doing their part of the work.

Most students get to use different ideas when they work on groups. For example students get together to start talking about how they are going work together and start giving differents ideas on how to work better as a group

Working in a group makes students jobs less complicated and stressful by having others helping each other

Working in groups students get to help each other out. For example each student gets to be in charge of one part of the assignment so everyone contributes and work gets done faster. Helping each other out is really important to the group and communication is key when students work in groups.

Communication with each student in the group is really important if students working in groups want to get work done. For example each member of the group comminicates with each other and work gets done faster. Communication helps in different ways,helping someone if they don't understand something,Giving advice to another student if they feel like they are stuck or need a different opinnion or not agreeing with someone else there's always a different way to communicate that to each other. communication is key to work in groups.

Working in groups benefits one another by working faster, communicating with each other, helping each other out when someone is not understanding something and giving different ideas. Working in groups can be helpfull if students know how to use it and take advantage of the opportunnity. It should be the best way to get work done and be able to help each other out. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
462832DCD932,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"". In this day ling life to be yourself individuality in this world. distinguish, normal, healthy, sane condition, and selves. Is the greats accomplishment by Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.

I agree with this, In this time we has a human being trying to be an unique person. A music artists, drawing artists, or a teacher etc.. as an example; A teacher can trying to do something especial with his students. That can be something that nobody did it before. That make an unique teacher and that can end really bad or good either this, people going to judge he/she, however; the world constantly trying to make you different. And that change is gonna be to make you a unique person. When Author wrote ""To make you something else"".

Negative persons consisting trying to change you, make you something else or judge. For my opinion that simple thing can be strong. Why? is the way that you looking, as an example; they gonna judge, but you gonna be strong and not worry about that, because you are a human being in this life nobody is ""perfect"". We can be unique in this life, we also can guide by people are already death. In the past, a member of your family, a artists, or a person that did a great job or something unique. that can also help us to get some ideas, as an example; the men who created ""Facebook"", this person is unique. because he created something inclusive that beans created before Is a positive change of the ""life system"". What I trying to say it is. In the cycle of life, we as a human being; born, growing up, reproducing, and dead end. In the cycle an example; when we are in the stage of growing up, they let us know to understand that we have to made a decision. For example: ""What you want to be in this life when you old?"". this trying to understand that we have to make a decision to contribute to this ""life system"". To make it better world as an example; teenager trying to decide a career for college, to contribute something good for this world, however; that decision of the teenager can be, wherever he or she want. People can judge or be bad with you, but the end of the day. It no important anymore. This is only one life to live wherever you do with this life, is your decision. But we have to smart.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
A3E6A572C6E5,"Do you remember a time where whether it was your parents, teacher, or someone very close to you excepts you to be something that you are not? According to me, every parents wants their kids to be perfect, wonderful, and hard working. Every parents wants to see them successes in life, and be happy, but what they don't understand is how much pressure and anxiety they put on their child. I remember a time where i was under so much stress and pressure because my parents wanted me to be this perfect, wonderful, and hard working person just so i could be the best torture.

Do you remember a time where you wanted to do something so bad, but everyone else wanted you to do something that you don't even like and want. I remember a very good friend of mine name Generic_Name, wanted to be an artiste, but every one in her family wanted her to be a doctor. We all know that being a doctor is not an easy job. sure you get high salary but being a doctor is not about getting high salary or wearing the white uniform is about carrying for others and enjoying your time with others . But Generic_Name's family didn't understand that all they care about was her getting in medical school and be a doctor. Generic_Name is very smart, carrying, and wonderful person. because of her family pressure her to be a doctor she let her dream go and now is suffering very much, because she doesn't want to be a doctor she wants to be an artiste something that she wanted to do her whole lives. That's why we should never pressure someone to be something that they are not.

dreaming and working hard to be something that you always dreamed of is very hard when you have people, who constantly try to make something out of you that you know that you are not. One example of that is when i was little i always dreamed of becoming the greatest dancer at all time, but everyone was against what i wanted to do. i remember i had to set down and have word with my family i had to explain to them why i want to be what i want to be. I was under so much pressure, stress, and anxiety that i thought i was in a war with my own family. Everything i said or do they use it against me it was very sad, angry, depressed, and unhappy moments, but i get though it i did become a dancer, i did something that i thought i could never do, and i didn't let anyone to shut me down with their words or actions. The lesson that we could learn from my story is not to stand against your family and disrespected, them, but no to allow anyone to take your dream away from you. Always stay strong and never give up.

""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" According to me every person in this world have the right to speak their mind and do whatever they wish or desire. No one should every try to make you something that you are not. In today's world we people try to make changes in others life by trying to make them something that they are not and that's where we lost loves one, friends and family just because we choice to do things we wanted insisted taking their advice and changing our path. We should be doing the thing we love and dreamed of no one has the right to tell you otherwise. You should never change yourself to make others happy or to show them you care about them, because if they really care about you they will accepted you for you.

Changing yourself for other just so could show them your carrying, perfect, and happy is not love. Everyone has the right to be happy in their lives and we should accepted them they way they are. To give you an example of what i am talking about is i had a friend name Generic_Name he was very hard working guy who was loved by everyone in the community. Generic_Name was born in single family he was living with his mom and two younger brother. Generic_Name's mom was a wonderful women who was loves by everyone. Generic_Name was the older child so he had a lot of responabilty he had to work to provide for his family, he had to go to school, and take care of his younger brothers'. when Generic_Name get accepted to college he wanted to study biology but his mom wanted him study music but Generic_Name was never interested in music. he want to learn about living and nonliving things, but Generic_Name's mom never agree with him she told him"" you have to study music and that's that."" Generic_Name was my best so when he told me about his problem i told him"" Listen Generic_Name i know you love your mom so much, but do what you love to do will make you happy and you don't have to be something that you are not interested in because you will suffer in the future"". Generic_Name loved his mom so much he didn't want to make her sad so we he went to college and he study music, but he never like what he was doing because he was born to be a biologist. The lesson to learn in this story is to never give up your dreams for your loved ones because once you started doing something there is no way back.

In the future knowing that you did something for yourself and knowing that no matter what other said you did what you love to do is the greatest accomplishment that you could ever accomplish. Some say to be yourself is not the great accomplish but i disagree with that because being yourself, not losing hope, not giving up, and fighting with others trying not to be something that they are make you to be is the greatest accomplishment. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
4F35BA561593,"Some people ask if it is better to work with a group or alone? Everyone has different opinions about the benefits of working in a group or working alone, some people prefer working alone and others prefer working in groups. I believe that the best way for the people to improve is by working in groups because they learn more and understand better.

First, working in groups help the people to improve in school or at work because they learn new things. For example, listening other ideas and points of view from their partners. One day my English teacher make groups of four in class and gave each group a piece of paper, then he put some questions in his board and told us that we need it to answer them as a group, when we finish the teacher told us that we were going to discuss it, then when each group discuss their answers with the class we all realized that each group had different opinions, ideas, and points of view. Each group learn something new from each other.

""Everyday we all learn new things in life"".

Second, working in groups help the people improve because they will understand better. For example, asking their partners if they have a question or didn't understand really well. My history teacher gave the class an assignment that we need it to completed by the end of the class, when the teacher gave the instructions i didn't understand her really well, then i ask one of my partners if he could explained to me again in order for me to understand it, be able to give my opinions and help my group.

""We could do more if we all help each others"".

Many people believe that is better to work alone because they will concentrate more. For example, they will not get distracted with anyone and will finish the work faster. A friend of mine has always work alone because she said that when the people is working in groups they tend to start talking, distract others, don't do their work and by the end of the hour only got a couple of questions done. However, this argument is meaningless because if they don't understand really well, then they would not have a partner who could explained to them what they are doing. For example, not finish their work because they got stuck in a part. Not having someone to discuss the work with could be hard sometimes.

In conclusion, there's a lot of benefits when working with a group. Some of the others benefits that working in groups has are; making new friends, having the opportunity to learn more about your partner, and learn more about yourself. Having to work with someone is a good idea because you don't have a lot of pressure about having to finish the work on time or not having idea what to do. Even though some people say the opposite, i believe that working in groups is better than working alone.

""Sometimes you will need a little help from others in order for you to improve"".    ",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
16C3B49CFB43,"I agree with Winston Churchill because we don't have to give up. There are many ways to continue even if you failure. Even though, people have to be awareness for what they doing. They have to confront the problem without losing they enthusiasm. In other example, confront your failure make you more strong and think about what is good and what is bad.

When you confront your failure you have to be conscious for what you doing. For example, you can't repent because you do what you do for a reason. In other word, people don't never have to give up they have to fight and have always the enthusiasm to be what are they are. Although, when you failure make you think more straight and clearly. That teach you to be a strong and continue struggle with your life. In fact, I always have my enthusiasm up even if I failure because that make me more comfortable to who I am and don't be scare to confront my problem. There are many people that scare loss they enthusiasm just because they failure. Failure don't make make a you a bad person, It make you to understand that in the life have down and up emotion. However, we choice ""what we want to be and we do what we want to do""

Therefore, Winston Churchill want to people be happy. He want to people understand that they don't have to loss they enthusiasm don't matter what. On the other hand, I agree with him because if you have the enthusiasm you can handle your problem and be able to solved it. In my opinion, Winston Churchill have throughout for many things and he want to other people be strongly and never give up like him. People have to consider that not always will be easy to don't have any problem or other thing that make you to do thing that you don't want to do, but you always have to be with the enthusiasm to confidence. Despite, it hard to always have the enthusiasm to confront your failure, but you have to be strong and continue for what you have been done. In life you learn a lot include your problem, your failure. Even though, you never have to give up because you will have a future that you want to know and live with your family, have good time. The enthusiasm help you to reflect your ideas and make you to do the things that you scare to do. Make the success strong with you enthusiasm.

In conclusion, never loss your enthusiasm because that help you to be strong. Confront your failure with all your enthusiasm you have to demonstrated that you are more strong than your problems. There are many ways to be success with your own personality you can focus on what you propose, being strongly and confront your failure. Finally, ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Don't be scared to confront it. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E19E1BEB08EA,"I feel that working with a partner is more beneficial to students. Working with partners gets students extra help when in need. It can make new friends while working on big projects. Also it makes the work get done easier and quicker when working in big groups. I also personally think that any project with a presentation should be a group project. If that presentation has more than just the presentation it should be a three person group.

Working with a partner is beneficial to students, because it gives extra support or help on a project or classwork. If a project is too big and impossible for one person to complete they could split up the work. For example, when I had a final project in my english class; I separated the work with my partner. We had to do an essay and a PowerPoint presentation. My partner did the essay and did the PowerPoint presentation and we both finished in time. If I hadn't had my partner, I probably would not have finished the project in time. My teacher making it a group project made it way easier to do because I didn't have to worry about writing essay.

Another reason that working with partners is beneficial to students is that they can build new friendship while doing work. When students are doing work in groups, they are together the whole class and have to stay in contact outside of school. For example, when I was working on a video for my journalism class I had a very big video that was due in a few days. I made good friends with the people that were in that group because we spent the whole class together and staying in contact after school. Every time I'm making a video I want to work with them because I know they will do a good job.

Another way that working in partner benefits students is that it saves them time and makes them finish their work quicker. If the students split up their work and do their work efficiently they will finish quickly. The more group members will make it even quicker. For example, when I was working with a friend and two other students on a project for a book we finished the book very quickly and the book review was finished very quickly as well. When partners are helping each other it makes everything way easier and more fun as well, because you get to hang out with your friends while being productive.

Also if the teacher lets students pick people, they can pick people that know a lot about the topic of the project or classwork. For example, in when I had spanish we did a project about Puerto Rico and since I'm from Puerto Rico everyone wanted to pick me. I went to a group where a good friend of mine was and the project was very easy to finish and present. The project was done so quickly that the next class we had free time for the whole class. That's another reason why working in groups is so beneficial and good.

Working with partners can also make students more comfortable with the subject or the project. Students sometimes get handed a project or classwork without knowing what to do. Having a partner to help the out is great so they can get comfortable with the subject or the project. For example, when I was Earth and Space Science I had no idea what to do on a project the teacher was assigning. She assigned partners and my partner told me what to do and I finally understood. The project took us about two days to finish but it was a very hard project to do that would have been impossible to finish alone.

Groups of at least three people should be required for project of more than 2 assignments. Two people can't do a project with five assignments and should have that extra person to split up the work and no one does extra work. For example, when I was in the sixth grade I had a project where I had to write about Mozart's story and I had to write an two paragraphs, buy and design a poster board, and also give a presentation and memorize everything. I did the essay but forgot to do the poster board until the night before. I had to stay up to 12:30 at midnight doing the poster and memorizing the 2 paragraphs. If the teacher would have made it a group project, I wouldn't have had to worry about the poster because my group members were on top of it.

Another reason that groups of at least three people benefit students is that maybe one of the students doesn't want to do any work there's still another group member left that wants to do the work. For example, my english teacher gave us a presentation to do on PowerPoint and we split up the slides. But one of the group members didn't do anything, so the other group member and me had to do all of his work. We presented got points and he didn't. That's why it's so important to have groups of at least three people, because you still have a backup.

Some people say working alone is beneficial for students because you only have to worry about yourself and no one else. However, if you work with a group or a partner the work gets done quicker and easier. While doing your work you can also make new friends and get help from them. Also, it helps pick out partners for the future that you know that those people will execute and do their work. For example, when I was working on a video for my journalism class I had a very big video that was due in a few days. I made good friends with the people that were in that group because we spent the whole class together and staying in contact after school. Every time I'm making a video I want to work with them because I know they will do a good job and be productive.

I feel that working with a partner is more beneficial to students. Working with partners gets students extra help when in need. It can make new friends while working on big projects. Also it makes the work get done easier and quicker when working in big groups. Bigger projects have to be at least a three person group because two people can't handle big projects by them selves and should have extra help. That's why it's so beneficial for students to work with partners on projects and other big classworks. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5
EB3D751AD980,"Being asked to give elementary school students is a great thing ever. You get to see different people and also talk to elementary schools or the time and even gets to meet their parents and some of their family members.

Sharing lessons to elementary school students is fun. Giving lesson to elementary school students makes you remember your childhood. You can give the lesson by picking or taking one of their subject to teach or talk about it to the students.

Giving lessons to elementary school students makes your remember a lot of things in your past. For example teaching math or another subject in elementary schools and you asked one of your students an easy question that ""what is a noun and he answer you and say the write answer"" you will probably think that you want to go back to elementary school. Sharing or giving elementary schools lesson is hard but is easy once you fine how to associate yourself with children. And also when you fine out that there is different lessons or different actives. Getting to no more interesting things about elementary school students is really fun.

Helping elementary school students makes you to know more and interesting things going on elementary schools. You also get to see a lot of teachers and also meet the school principles,gaudiness and even somethings see your sibling or your family member. Going to elementary schools makes you improve your learning skills ,tectquines, and more.

Elementary schools can make you remember a lot of stuff you use to do in elementary schools. You get to see and make friend with some of the 5th graders and the 4th graders.

Students in elementary schools sometimes challenge you the teacher other subjects like math,science,English,and other elementary subjects. Elementary games are really fun and also fun at the same time. Teaching elementary school students a subject to learn makes them more interesting in learning every day and every time. They also feel happy anytime you want to give a lesson or teach them. They also make sure they do their assignment every day and on time.

Teaching or being asked to give elementary school students is really good and also fun. You also remember your self in your childhood being in elementary schools. They also do many actives like running and more. Giving lessons to elementary school students meaning helping them to get a better future. They can be successful in future because of the lesson you were asked to teach or give them. Sharing lessons is fun,interesting and also improve on your learning skills.                                     ",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
520EAF052C7E,"I Think that Technology is a positive thing. Becuase it help's people get there stuff done thru the internet

The internet has become a huge part in our life's becuase we use are phones for every thing. it's good that technonlogy has improved because back in the old days technology was not there but now.

you can order anything online and it will be there less then a week. now and days if people are sick they can use there phones to look up how they can cure themselves. it has also improved because back then people couldn't facetime to see their relatives. but now they can see their family memebers from any forein country.

If need to learn how to cook or bake all you have to do is look it up on google and it will show you pictures,videos.

and also show's other recipes on how to cook other foods. you can mostly do everything oline and it's easy to do. technonlgy has developed a easy way on how to get shuff done with out leaving the house. most people send most of there day in there phone watching videos. socail media has also inproved. a lot of people just post pictures.

Some people like social media because it's like a news paper it tell's you what has been going on in people's life.

it also shows funny videos and new stuff that people have invented. you can also talk and meet new people by texting and facetime. I believe that tecnology has taking over the world because some people can not live without there phone.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
A79D997C4B42,"Working with a group has more benefits then working alone because with a group you can all help each other and learn new things, also so people can be more social and you can get the work done faster and aso there can be some pressure . When you work alone it can get very boring and you may need help with something but also if you are working alone you can work at your own pace. With a group you may be pressure to finish something quicker but your teamates can help you with that. When someone is in a group they can act silly at times and give the teacher or the boss a headache but, when they focus they can get work done faster. Working with a group is not just for the work, it is for people to be social and so people can see how they act around other's. You can learn new things with other people that you did not already know or you can teach them something but at some point the whole group teaches everyone somehting new.

Working in a group you would probaly be pressured to stop being foolish and get your part done but if you have nice teamates then someone can help you with your part. Some people, perfer to work alone because they do not like to be pressured for no reason but in some ocasions those people are the one's to turn in late work or has incorrect information. In a group they correct you if you did not do something right and hellp you out if you ask for help and someone can help you becuase that's what a group is for to help each other learn new things. If a due date is coming up there can be so much pressure because maybe you have not even done your part or you are just lazy to do it some your teamates start to get mad at you and you do not know what to do.

Learning new things can be fun with a group because you might not be shy to ask questions so you learn new things and maybe someone else from your group learn that same thing as you. If the group learn's something new then they can use that thing in the future when they work alone or with a different group. Helping each other is one of the easiest way to get done with something but working alone you may take longer because you have to search up things and some times they do not know where to start.

Teachers put students in a group to see how they act around each other like if they act goofy or if they do not have self control. When working with a group there has to be self control because if the group is just being goofy then they would not get work done and they can get a bad grade and not work together in that class ever again. The teachers see how the students act and they see who should be with who and who should not be with someone. Working alone the teachers know that it will be quite and they would not know how the students act with friends around or a group.

Working together is way better then working alone because you become more social and not so much of a shy person. A group can also help you focus and have a good time all at once, also they can hep with having a good grade in that class because they helped you a lot. Students learn new things when they working with people and they might not be so shy. Working in a group has more benefits then working alone because working alone you have to do everything on your own and with a group they can all help.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
1170D6863F27,"Is homework club good. Do you agree or degree. homework club is good for the people how are failing and you can do your home work at homework club. I agree that home work club is good for are school. Do you like seeing your kids failing there classes your in luck I will tell the positive of having a homework club for your students how are failing and, I will tell you the native of having a homework club. If you are thinking about how munch it cost to have a homework club don't worry about how it cost you should only think about what happens if you do get a homework club.

I agree that homework club is good therefore all the students how go to home work club are getting good grades. It been proven by smart people that people how go to home work club get better grades then others students. The students can do homework in home work club and ask for help by the teacher.

If you are a teacher how is reading this what are your opinion about homework club. A teacher probably want what good for there students and they want to work after school with them.

ones I went to homework club I got help by the teacher and she help me to understand the subject that we were working on. Then the next day I went again to the homework club to study for the test that I have the next day.

I took the the test, when i got the test back I got a 100% on the test, ever since that day I went to homework club every day. The only bad thing you should worry is what if the students are only going there to talk with there friend after school.

I think that homework club should be add to every school so they can improve there school. When then other school how good your school is doing they are going to copy what your doing then the further of the students will be good so they can get good job and improve the world some way or another. The county will look at your shool and will give you more mony then you can improve the homework club and make your school better.

Therefore homework club is good for the students and I will give you a advice. You need to have a homework club for your school so they will have a opportunely to pass there classes. If you do not a agree about having homework club for your students. If you do put homework club in your school you will see the improvements in your school like grades and, student beaver. I hope you add a homework come for are school so we can improve are grads and, do better in are classes.      ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
DE8162CAC353,"where is one place i would visit ? I would like to visit spain! because i heard that spain has ""good soccer teams"". But the reason i 'll want to visit Spain is if i do good in soccer i can have a chance to become professional and have alot of money and help my parents. Also because theres nice places you can visit like beaches , soccer stadiums, soccer team, professioanl soccer players mostly everything fun at Spain. Spain has every nice weather and if i visted Spain I would go to the beach, and go see soccer teams.

I want to go to spain to see Messi, Ronaldo, Neymar or get my shoes or shirt signed by one of them. If i went to Spain the ""first"" thing i""ll visit is this one places were a soccer player grew up at. The reason i would visit it is becasue i wanted to see how he grew up like and how it was like. I also want to feel how it felt to live like they did.

Imagen being were somebody lived at it would be really cool you can take pictures, maybe meet there friends, or uncles, maybe there could visit were they use to live at and give you a hug, or something. I imagen me,and my parents going to watch a soccer game together, going to th beaches. I""ll like to go to Spain just to play soccer with Messi,or any Professional Soccer player. If i went to Spain i would love to train with a professional soccer club.

Spain would give u a chance to become a good soccer player that all i want .Mostly everyone became rich at Spain. I feel like Spain would make a better soceer player i""ll have better training,food,house and you''ll meet new people,friends, and most likely to speak another lanuage. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
AD5621D2A958,"First impressions will always change bceuase you dont know the persons true color's yet. A lot of people act so nice on there job interview, but later on that first impression is going to change. On the first day of school teacher's act to nice but, later on in the school year the teahcer's first impression is going to change.

For example, when you first meet the person they act so friendly and so nice until you really get to know them, they start changing. you will see the persons true colors if they act the same and do what they first did when you met them. Finally, first impressions going to change because some people just act to do good on thier first impression.

For example, people dress and act good at there job interview. When they finally get that job, first impression is going to change because they are going to keep calling off and not work hard enough as they said in the interview. Finally, when the manager see's that you changed your first impression you will get fired.

For example, on the first day of school teacher's act so nice and tell you how the year i going to go. After that, the teacher's start getting tough on you and giving you more assignments. finally, its a proven fact that teacher's change thier first impression.

In conclusion, I agree that first impressions change because its a proven fact and anybody in this world can tell you first impressions change because you dont know there true colors.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
D9018539576D,"Technology has had the biggest impact on human interaction. Most people might say it's made a positive impact on people's lives while others may disagree and say it's had a negative impact on people's lives. There may be some pros and there may be some cons to this situation. Can the impact of technology be a good or bad outcome?

Let's start off with the pros or the positive effects technology has had on people's lives, now technology has made people's lives easier. Some may say because it's easier to access what they need easier online instead of heading to the market. Some may also say it's easier and faster to call your friends or parents, any family member really, instead of driving all the way to them, which is true. Watching movies on your phone instead of going all the way to the movie theater and pay for your ticket and it only being a one time thing. There are countless positives outcomes of how technology has increased over the years. The technology nowadays makes everything faster and easier on people's lives. Unfortunately, all these great, glamorous, fast, and easy ways have some downfall to them.

Now, technology definitely has it's flaws and negative impacts on people's lives. Most can say there's not as much human interactions since technology has been brought upon people. Communication is key when interacting with one another. Today most people are also glued to their cellular device, not physically but you get the point. Especially teenagers, they have a bad habit of not being able to put down their cellphone. Whether that being during school hours, at home when you're supposed to be doing work, and maybe even at work. The generation we have today is usually all about social media, and just being on their cellphone in general 24/7. Point blank there's just no physical, verbal communication anymore between one another. It may be causing a lot of students to slack in school, and it may not only go for students and teenagers, they're not the only victims. Some particular parents may be also glued to their cellphone just as teenagers. It's not their fault nor do the teenagers have any fault in this. All this is because of the evolution of technology. It's not pleasant to live in a world with not so much communication and everyone being constantly glued to their cellphone nor is it pleasant to do awful in school because you can't put your cellular device down. Now, these are just some reasons and examples why technology has a negative impact on people's lives. Can you imagine how many more scenarios like this happen daily?

Though technology has evolved drastically through out the years and is still evolving now as we speak, there's always going going to be positive and negative impacts. Technology does help and allow people to complete tasks without having contact with others. There's the problem right there, there's no communication. Even though there are some positive effects of technology that doesn't change the fact that there are more negative effects than positive. Technology effects each person a different way, whether that being in a positive way or whether that being in a negative way. It's all a mix, and by mix I refer to positive effects and negative effects all over the place. Some people may disagree or may agree whether it's a bad mixture or a good mixture. Cell phones and all technology can make it easier or harder for certain people.

Whether if it truly is a positive or negative impact it will not change what people think or at what position they're in. Some people just like taking the easy way out and not cope with what they are losing and missing out on, communication. Human communication and interactions are not it anymore. Everyone's opinion and saying on this dilemma is different, people's mindsets are different even their actions are different from everyone else's,but this is my opinion. In conclusion, that is why I strongly, and genuinely believe technology has a negative effect on people's lives.            ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,5.0
9BF717F45D68,"Did you know that one of our students got 1000 dollars cash price because our principal put him in one of our school activity ! Our principal told us that we should participate in at least one of our school activity. First I did not like it. Then I thought of one kid that went to my school and got a 1000 dollars just because he was good at his activity. So I agree with this decision because students can get to know each other, students can a college degree, and it helps them learn new things.

This activity can get students and new students to know each other. They can find there new best friend in there.

New students can get out of there shy sell and can make new friends there. Even old students can make new friends there too. Probably the whole class room can become friends !

Kids can get to know each other more better if there in a school activity.

If a student is good or great at there activity. They can also get a big college degree in it. Like Art or sports. there art work can go in a Art Show or in sports you can go in a big show ! Maybe you can get a college degree in any activity. Also can get money and a college degree.

Students can learn new things in there school activity. Students don't know yet what and what not there good at yet. So students need to try out for these activates so they can know. Student can explore too. They still have time to try out new things and to find out what there good at. They might be good at drawing and they just don't know it yet. Probably your good at drawing too. Theses school activities can help you and your future out.

Students can get to know each other more, students can get a collage degree, and students can learn new things. Students can get better in school with this and there future can be made with this too. I think this is going to be a good plan for students and kids.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
3651697D855B,"FAILURE PLAYS IN THE PURSUIT OF SUCCESS.

I agree with the statement by the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill, who said that "" success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". The word ""failure"" is been pictured as been a disapointment to family, friends or to oneself. Mostimes,everybody wants to succed in anything they do, but faces some challenges at the process to acheive that expected goal. This challenges are not necessarily proposed to affect you in a bad way, but sets a room for improvement and perfection.

Failure brings a feeling of confidence to a person, working on a project for a long time and fixing mistakes you came across. Makes an individual confident,understanding everything that concern that work and feeling more relaxed doing it without so much anxiety. Mr Rubio, was told to come up with an Architectural plan for a building close to a water fall. Rubio knew this project was close to impossible for him to complete this task, but he accepted it and started making the building plan. After he taught he came up with a suitable plan for the building, it got rejected by the state building commitee, because they asked him why certain things were placed this way and he couldn't answer effectively . He had to go back and identify he's faults in the building plan, and come up with a bettter one. Rubio had sleepless nights, communicating with various Architects and Civil enginers to get some idea on he's work. When Rubio was convinced he was ready to take the project to the board meeting he felt confident in himself and knew he could explain evrything corncernig he's building plan to the comitee. When he turned in the drawing, and was asked some certain questions he quickly answerd them with absolute confidence and got approved.

Secondly, the more you face challenges life throws at you makes you stronger. If everything in the world moved in a positive way we won't invent things inorder to satisfy our human needs. Isaac Newton and other scientst encounterd a problem and decided to solve this problems by making inventions. So work could be done faster, reduce Man power and done more effectively. Before isaac Newton got the light bulb to work , he failed ninety nine times of he's experiment. This failures didn't stop him from acheiving he's goal, he kept on striving hard making research and later came up with a long lasting light bulb. Which helps us see clearly in a dark place.

Although it takes time, to achieve this goals after failing. Most people would get frustrateed and quit, there is an old saying ""nothing good comes easy"". To achieve whatever you desire in life, you have to be ready to encounter difficulties and failure, but approching this problems knowing that you are going to get better it just takes time and patience. After acheiving this goals what would be seen is your acomplishments rather than your failures.                                                      ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
506A69171959,"Do you have a goal in your life? How can you accomplish to your goal? I think everyone can get a goal, but many people ask, ""how can I get a goal?"" Because they cannot wait until the finish goal line, also they cannot concentrate on their goal. We cannot see the finish line,that is why people always give up in fort of the finish line you are always doing something, then you can do accomplish more. This is three reasons you can do accomplish more if you are always doing something.

First is when you concentrate on one thing and think about that, then you can get a power to get in your goal. Concentrate power is amazing, Every history of the scientists were concentrate one thing and always do something. For example, have you seen the Newton's notes? He always thought and concentrated to gravity and earth. He took notes every seconds and minutes, he never stopped take notes. Today, we learning his notes everyday like Newton's first law, second law, and third law. If you think about it and concentrate one thing, you can closer to your goal.

Second, If you keep going to your goal, you can get into the summit. Whenever you are and whatever you want, if trying to do that, you can make it. For example, David in the Bible, he practiced throw the stone everyday. He never forgot to practice throw the stone, and one day he met an enemy. Everyone thought David will die because David was so small and young, but the enemy was really big and strong. Do you know the end of story? David won the battle because of the stone, he attacked enemy's head. what is the main idea of this story? Throw the stone is really small and tiny thing, but he attacked enemy and saved the nation. If you keep going on any small thing and tiny thing, you can make it and you can make more biggest thing, you could not imagine thing.

Third, you keep dreaming and keep trying to your goal you can get the accomplish to your goal. Keep trying and keep dreaming are really important. If you don't have dream in your life, you can never get that. For example, Aristotle was experiment everyday. Also the result was different everyday, but he keep trying figure out the result. If you gave up that time and stopped challenge, then maybe we don't know who is the Aristotle. Many scientists also said this, keep dreaming is better than not dreaming. Keep dreaming and get more closer to your goal in your dream, get a hope and keep challenge.

Finally,

when you concentrate on one thing and think about that, then you can get a power to get in your goal. Becuase the concentrate power is amazing. Do not give up and keep going to your goal, you can get into the summit. Whenever you are and whatever you want, if trying to do that, you can make it. You keep dreaming and keep trying to your goal you can get the accomplish to your goal. If you want to something to do and something to accomplish, you have to know what is my goal and what should I do for my goal. If you know exact your goal and then always doing this three, you can make it. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
D8F9861CD318,"It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years, and enter college or the work early ?

The programs that some school districts offer to the students that allow students to graduate one year early, is not covenient for the students. To do only three years of high school is not good way to start forming yourself. They will not have the necessary knowlege as a regular high school student. It is not a good way to enter college nor work without finish the four years of high school.

First, to do only three years of high school is not a good way to start forming yourself for the future, all this is based on the future and what you are going be able to do, for example, if you do not do the four years in high school you will miss more information, that is going to affect you in the future, and sometimes you will not be able to select courses, or in some cases you will have to take these courses on summer, which is not a good idea, because most of the students with ages around sixteen and eighteen hang out a lot, so for the students is harder to focus on their thing as their courses, While the students that are doing four years of high school will have more time to focus on their courser, and they will have the oportunity to learn more.

Second, the student that decided to graduated early are not goint to have the necessary knowlege, as the students that are doing the four years, for example, responsibility is one of the most important things, that you will use in the future, so how can you get it, for example, the homework, projects, and team work that you will have in high school, because doing four years in high school give you responsibility, and new abilities in the proces of learnig, also it develop your brain, and as consequences of learnig, and responsibility you will get new skills that you will be able to use in your work area, or college, while the students that graduated early are not going to be able not have the enough experience to enter a new system.

Last, in my opinion the school that let student graduated one year early are not thinking in the welfare of the students, because they are not just letting the students go ealry, the schools had found a way that the student can rush themself to get out of the school soon, to go to college or work instead of doing the four years in high school, that will help a lot in the future.

Because it is not a good way to enter college nor work without finish the four years of high school, the students will not have the necessary knowlege as a regular high school student; to do only three years of high school is not good way to start forming yourself for the future.           ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
2F3210D23414,"Students now can take classes from their houses. Schools are offering students the possibility to take classes online from their houses, I think is a excellent idea because sometimes students dont have the possibility on getting a ride to get to school, or it makes it easier for students that have to stay home for personal reasons, or even if you want to take a class during the summer to get more credits and get to graduate earlier.

Sometimes students do not have the possibility on getting rides to school and the county do not offer them a bus transportation system that can take them to school, for example in my country Costa Rica there is not a free transportation system to get to school and the only transportation system is the public one and you will have to pay for it, its an excellent idea from the schools to have this kind of classes that you can take from your own house.

Some students have reasons that make them stay home, such as girls being pregnant, students taking care of their parents that need people to take care of them because they are sick or have any disability and they can not stay home alone, in those cases students can finish their school courses at home and take care of their loved ones at the same time.

Some students just do it to finish high school earlier, they have the opportunity on taking classes online during the summer and be able to get less classes on their senior year or just graduate earlier if they taking the standard diploma, that is a smart thing to do if you are planing on go to college and finish your carrier on a young age, and start working at young age too.

On my opinion I think that having that opportunity is a good thing and a bad thing because going to school is the best decision that you can make on your life, you get to make friends and get to know a lot of people during all the time you spend at school, but not everyone have that opportunity, thats why this opportunity that the school is giving you is unique and can help you a lot, the only thing you need is a computer or a electronic device that can get access to the internet.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
D41787486DA6,"Generic_Name has a plan on the future, but she need to think and she need to trust in herself to achieve the plan, and she said that she like working alone and she don not want have friends and she said that not needed help somebody more. Every people have the opportunity to realize the plan that they have to achieve the dream that they have. To be yourself in a world is the greatest accomplishment because every person have a great dream to achieve on the life or every people take a great decision by to realize a great things.

First, every person have a great dream to achieve on the life. For example: A student have a plan to realize a job, but the student don not want to have friends by to finish the work. Another example: One boy is working in one project by the school, but the boy want to work alone, the boy said if he working with your partner never to finish the job. Every person have the opportunity to achieve their dream, and every people can try to make something else is the greatest accomplishment.

Second, every people take a great decision by to realize a great thing. For example: On boy is playful and don not pay attention on the class, but the boy take a decision of no more play, and the boy start study and he is so happy because he has a great qualification. Another example: A teacher said at the students that working together buy one student take a decision not working together,

and the student that working alone he make a great job and the others not make nothing. All people have the opportunity to take a great decision because every people thinking different, and have a different dream.

To conclude, every people take a great decision by to realize a great thing, every person have a great dream to achieve on the life, to be yourself in a world is the greatest accomplishment. is better to be solitaire because you can achieve a lot beautiful things alone, and when you make everything you need to take your time and relax yourself. Is better that the people to keep the trust themselves and trust their own decision, if a person love anything to make that person trust in yourself and that person is feeling better when he is alone. ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
A5B9C9F26FD6,"Generic_Name

Your principal has decided that all students must participate in a least one extracurricular activity. For example, students could participate in sports,work on the yearbook, or serve on the student council.

Would Students want to be forced into taking a program, club, or after school activity, no, of course not. Nobody wants to be forced into doing anything in life. Besides if a student was forced to participate in an program what activity's would they have. what if he/she doesn't like sports or working on the year book or etc. How does it benefit the student in any way.

Students should have a right to decide whether or not they want to join a club or activity. The reasoning for this is because, if a student does not like any of the programs then it wouldn't be fair if he/she still had to choose one. Thats why its wrong for the principal to make this decision. Imagine a boy who just moved in from a different state. The boy had a lot of amazing, awesome friends that he had to leave behind. Now he has to transferred to the nearest school, having to start anew. His parents gave him the election forms and he has signed up for everything he needs. Only later to realize that it is a requirement to sign up for a ""extracurricular activity."" Although the boy does not want to sign up for an activity because he does not know anyone. Now put yourself in that students shoes how would you feel in his situation.

Most Students just want to get through the day, get home and relax. However, by adding this system the principal is adding a whole other level of stress for these students. I mean who would want to be forced into working on the yearbook or playing soccer yea absolutely no one. Students want to be free. Except with a required activity they have a whole other class to worry about and making sure that class has good grades especially if that student dislikes being there.

It needs to be a choice whether or not a student wants to select a ""extracurricular activity"".

I can see a probable reason the principal made this choice. I assume it is because the principal does not want there to be empty clubs/programs and that makes sense but it isn't fair to the students who do not want to be apart of any activities. Now it would make sense if the principal had a democrative system where the school voted for this option but thats not the case in however that is what the principal should do and the principal should ask the school to vote to get rid of the requirement or keep this way this can give the students, the principal and staff more reassurance. If the principal did do this then a huge weight is lifted off their shoulders.

Jumping to my next conclusion if a extra activity is required then this can cause stress and anxiety for students who dont want to be there. This can cause of lack of thinking process, failure in grades and bad attitude.

Let me explain. myself for example. If I was in a extra elective and I was forced to be in and i didn't like it I would start to stress then my grades in that class would start to fail, then slowly my grades in other classes would also fail. Now my parents would start to be disappointed in me and i would start building up anxiety. That anxiety if built up enough would most likely lead to depression and worse case scenario suicidal thoughts.

So in conclusion it is a bad idea to require a extracurricular activity.

Instead of forcing it i would heavily recommend choosing a activity because you never know how someone feels about certain things.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
450A7F9AC54A,"It was wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing for our gale or accomplish. I personally agreed with the "" Thomas Jefferson wrote.

"" Determine never to be idle"" It is not good when you are not doing much work. Don't be un idle.

I support my idea with several reasons.

First of all,

I personally agreed with the Thomas Jefferson wrote. If you use your time properly,time is very important in your life you will be productive day use your time. For example I must be weak up in the morning do my exercise every day. I will be healthy It is very important when you have a good healthy. After that you will be managing your time for the hole day by firshing your time. Then I go on time my school. Because to have a good skill is very important. ""knowledge is a power"" I will get my a good education. Also, I go to my job and make my money in the mean time. For this reasons when use your time that will be a good productive day makes you happy. I heat to be seat and watching TV all day and play game.

Second, I am very happy for making some one happier or helping.

Because on my extra time I always go to the library and working as a voluntary helper for some people need help. Also, what ever i have information I shard with people and give a good information then make them happier.

In addition, I always go with the alimentary school when they have school trip.

Helping for the teacher. Especially, working with the kids it is fun and having a good time when i help the kids it make me happy.

Third, you will be a successful and accomplish your life. When you work hard you will be have a good life for the rest of your life. At the same time all your family have a good life. In addition, Life is short you need to be work hard don't be rune slowly it is good to be not idle. The more you work the more get success.

Eventhough, some times have a difficult time never give up you have to be strong and continue do some thing. Also, when you have a bud habite avoid as soon as a possible to be a successful person.

Incounuclsion, It was wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing the right way.

It is not good running slowly or not doing much work.

you should be work hard and discipline for every thing. That's way I agree with the wonderful Idea ' Thomas Jefferson wrote'

""Determine never to be idle.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
ED9C6EDC5601,"Adding another hour and thirty minutes to the school schedule is just a waste of time! It means having to miss time with my family. It also means having to wake up earlier to get to school. Teachers would have to stay back and work longer but probably get paid the same amount for ten hours. So I disagree with having to add another hour and thirty minutes.

First of all I don't think kids would like to wake up extra early and get ready for school. Once the students get to the school they would be half asleep and it would be harder for them to focus. The students would have trouble staying awake and they would have more attitude then what they have now. More students would be marked tardy and there would more students skipping classes just to get some sleep. Not every student would stay awake through out the day and finish there work.

Adding an hour and thirty minutes would also have an impact on teachers. They already have to wake up extra early in order to be here on time and stay late to work on grading papers, going to meetings, etc. It would be harder for them to stay awake and teach. Teachers don't even get paid enough. So why would they want to stay back and serve more time.

Some after school activities would get canceled and student that would need those after school activities would get mad. Complaints would start coming in and parents would get mad and ask why their child is failing. Some sports would be canceled and and athletes would get frustrated because they won't be motivated or asked to go to a certain collage. Students would get low grades if after school activities were to get canceled. The school would become a laughing stock.

Adding an hour and thirty minutes would have a bad effect on the school and the people in it. There would be more trouble then there is now and students wouldn't get motivated. Grade levels would go down and students won't focus. Teachers would have trouble staying up for ten hours. Family time would be shortened as well.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,3.5
F5A6427C32CA,"Are you interested in pursuing your interest business career.? Many schools have the partnership with companies that allow students to explore certain occupation through interships and shadowing opportunities to discover their interest in pursuing their type of employment.

They can accomplish this with their ability of communication, talent,

Students like me would like to have the oppurtunity to discover a business employment in your company. I can bring a lot of benifits to it. I have good communication with others and a positive attidude and mindset. I have the ability to come up with many ideas for your makeup line.

My ability of working with others is very good I think is important in a business industry to have that type mindset with other people. Working with others brings positive outcomes, businesses grow more when people know how to work together and know how to communicate with each others. The partnership work is what you need in your comapany, i am a very hard worker.

However, I am very good at doing my makeup I think you would really like to have me in your comapony, I know a lot about makeup than you might think I do. I use to work in a salon where i use to do makeup for partys. A lot people really liked my work and at one point in my life i had to do a celeberty makeups, I got to work with Annastasyas makeup line and Morph but not only that i got to work with Huda beauty makeup. I brought a lot to them and that is why their makeup line is so will known now. Bussines can grow more threw out the time when their is , better ideas, new stuff, more hard work something i offering to bring to you. I am interested in pursuin this type of employment because I know i can make a goo improvent in leaning more about makeup.

I can learn very fast that one of the other benifts i have for you i learn fast just by looking sometimes you dont even have to explain to me the stuff that is very benifecial for you compay my ability of learning is great for you.

You having me to visit and learning more about this employment can really make you improve. Students like me just want to have that oppurtunity to have a good carrer and be suseful in life. Shadowing opportunities to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of opportunities will make a big change on everyones componies, they will have a lot of new oppportunies to proof that they are really good at what they say they are and proof to them selfs that they are.

Student partnerships pursue students to have new jobs and have a better tabeled life. These are my reasons on why you should let me have the opportunity to have this chance on working on your company. My ability of commu ication will bring you a lot.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
EBD586EB3AA8,"Schools should not have a four day school because, some students may not have time to stay more hours, some students have a part-time job and others help parents to taking care of younger siblings. However, some people have different points of view by, believing that extending schools days that benefits the energy, resources and even helping students to learnd more. An example, is just having four days work or school week. This adaptation can have good and bad benefits. Some people believe that, havig just four days of school is a bad idea because a student will not have time to work or do other activities. A reason of this is because schools days will be more longer and there is going to be less time for them to do activities, student will not have time to work and help their parents taking care of their siblings.

One of a major idea is students will not have time to do their activities. Since school is going to end late. Students need to finish all school assignments. However, Elementary schools will end later that High schools or Middle schools. That will not letf them much longer for them to pass time with their family. Students will be more eshausted, that can be really worrying because their grades can go down. Parents will not be happy with their kids grades. This adaptation can be really helpfult for some people. However, it can affect some other people lifes.

Another reason is some students have a part-time job. They will no have time to work and even if, they have the time it's going to be difficult for them. An example, if students get out from school late they have to run to their house to get ready to go work because they may be late for work. However, going to work for them is not that easy some of them don't have their license yet. Some of them have to walk even take a public bus. Before considering the benefits of four days of school week there are a lot more disadvantages that can affect students with their normal life.

The last reason is teenagers helps parents with their siblings. Although that can change because if students have to stay more at school their schedules will be longer than a normal. An example, parents will have to find someone that can stay with their kids and that means that is going to be more cost. Parents will be unhappy paying more money to a babysitter. However, is reallly hard to find someone that can be dependable. Even if teenegers have the time to take care of their siblings, they will not have time to do their own stuff because they have to do two things at the same time.

In conclusion, these ten hours school not just affect students will affect the whole family because students will end really eshausted even, teachers will get tired too. After considering all the benefits and disadvantages there is a point about conserve energy and resources that does not make sense, if students get two more hours of school for four day that means that there is not any conserve anergy or resources because we still using the same five days hours in four days instead five days. Reasons why students should not have four day week is because schools days will be more longer and there is going to be less time for them to do activities, student will not have time to work and help their parent taking care of their siblings.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
CC9E2835EFAF,"We as a specie have lived as long as we have because we learned how to stay as one and to distribute the work. From this we learn that two heads are better than one, that there are thing that arent meant to be done by youre self. We have come far from those days, we build structures withe intricate designs, we build ways to cross oceans in no time at all. I still wonder if a single individual would been able to do it . That is why team work is important.

When you are acing to a team it is because you poses a ability or skill that benefits you. As a example you work on a company that creates websites for government projects, you poses a degree on couding and in graphic design. You have been employ as a content creator, you can see it this way you are a cog Pict meticulously to fit in a larger machine. One that runs at a constant pace, it dose not deviate or exert pressure on to the parts that compose it.

Second when you work in a team the work loud is divide in to the right proportion. In a construction crew you will always find that the cement worker will away divide the cement in to portions, this is to prevent over use of cement. In a team you will receive the amount you can handel to prevent that someone is overwork. Like when you go to a kitchen you will see that one is piling the carrots,a other one is preparing the cake mix, a other the toppings. Everyone has a task to complete

In conclusion we can see that team work has billions of benefits for every one. like a well oil machine you team work is all about communication. The result is one group working as one. Thers no error eache knows that the other is working on his part, like a in a kitchin one peals, theother mixes, and the last one refines there work. Team work is the most in portant leson we will have. Because remember the will alwase be some thing that you cant do by youre self.",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
82CCCAD3BA5B,"From my view point im really sure that never would be possible to change it , because there a fiew factors that cannot make that possible . People can not forget the first impression they have from you . i went to play soccer a few years ago it was my firts time, that day i was knowing too many new people from every where around the world.

We were played soccer and they told me that i'm so good for soccer they like the way that i play it. Now every where when they see me they say to me '' hey you play really good for real ''. so here is the conclucion. People never going to forget the firts impression that they get from you those people still remember me the time goes fast i didtn meet them for a year and half and the impression still stay that they think that im really good for soccer .Some people say that impression can be change not matter if is good or bad impression but you gotta work really hard for it and its going to take a long time.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
46E550A148DF,"Thomas Jefferson wrote that ""Determine never to be idle.. It wonderful how much may ti be done if we are always doing"". He think about that person have to be determine to do have the focus in something, But I think that it is not a good idea have the focus in something Because Everyone need to have time for their own, Also maybe try something different or find another way to do it, And maybe some plans have a lot of frustration and mental problems.

First, Every person should have time for their own because having time to relax have help to have the focus later, Also have free time you can have fun, playing videogames, dancing, singing, or meet somebody, and have time with the family or just time to sleep can be a great help for a person. I think is very important have time ourown because something we don't pay attention what happen around us, or just can be tired for everyone.

Second, try something new can be a good idea to have a brain storm, To really find what you or what we want to do to have all the success like Tesla of SpaceX, They are traying a lot of different things, Maybe be idle can be good sometimes and be determine but Is not a good idea.

In addition, a lot of person think same like Jefferson that is a good idea be determine to do somethinng and They want to be expert in that thing , and great for They, But I think detemine to do something can have a lot of problems sometimes like frustration problems. Just imagine a person, That spend a lot of time in here determine think to do, But something really bad happen, And that work, that this person dedicate a lot of effort, and dedication, just go away and that can cause psychologist problem, Like the Real Madrid, They wogsrk very hard all season and they make a plan but everyone see what happen, nothing work and just their season just end 3 month before finish. So I think have all the focus in just one think can have a lot of problems.

In conclusion, I think is very hard to say that be determine in something can cause a lot of problems like frustration or depression, And also is important to have to ourown or our family, friends, or pets, and try new things or cool thing is always is good, Never is good to do same always just you have you own thinking or own critical.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
33AF50FB5ED9,"Some schools have an after school homework club where students and teachers help other students with homework. I think that a homework club would be beneficial to students because it could help with grades, it is not mandatory, and could help with teaching skills.

Homework is a staple of school an students hate it, so why not get some help with it. Most students forget about homework and get a bad grade because of it. Why not get help with homework and remember any other home works you have to do. With a few good homework grades they could pass their classes.

Students all have different ways of thinking and learning, and why should their learning be all the same. If every student had to go and take part in this club the more introverted students would be more tired out. If the students are tired out they are not going to learn anything and that effects them in a bad way, but the homework club is not mandatory that is why it is not a class that we have to go to every other day.

Some students have big dreams, but don't know how to get to them. If someone wants to be an anthropologist, the study of humans, they will need to be smart and brave enough to publish their findings. A homework club can help make trusted bonds and encourage people to talk and speak up for themselves.

So many schools have a homework club but not many people know about it and are failing because of it. I think that a homework club would be beneficial to students because it could help with grades, it is not mandatory, and could help with teaching skills. I hope that this essay will have you consider putting your child in a homework club.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
47006CCC27EC,"Break out of comfort zone.

life is boring without expanding your horizons.

no growth.

have to fail to learn a lesson to move on.

learn more from failure than success.

If never try something new, you'll never know if you life it or if you're good at it.

real life experience.

Helen Keller

Michael Jordan

After mastered basketball, he want to baseball. Can't stay at tee ball , have to practice to get to actual baseball.

Emerson is therefore correct in stating "" Unless you try to do something beyond what have already mastered , you will never grow"" because to grow one must break out of comfort zone and failure leads to success.

Failure lead to success, comfort zone knee jerk reaction, ""well I haven't mastered anything yet so I can't adequately answer this questions"" Generic_Name's example wants to mas painting.

Opposition, mastering something is impossible scientific theories disproved got to school for 12 years, still have not learned everything therefore Emerson is wrong.

Also, Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"". This quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson states if people do not go beyond what they have already accomplished. They will never progress in life. Some people's initial reaction would be "" I have not Masters anything, so I am unable to respond to this question."" There are a couple reasons why Emerson's quote is correct. Growing requires breaking out of comfort zones and broadening horizon. If a person does not go beyond what they are capable of archiving they will not grow. Failure assists to growing and learning to lead to success.

If people never expand their horizons, the they never experience new adventure life can offer. Without the thrill of a new experience, life would become aborning repetition of activities we have already mastered. Therefore, to break out of a comfort zone, people must go beyond what we have already mastered. One day at school, our band class attended a piano recital put on by Generic_School students. Even though, I was not part pf their piano class, I decided to perform unannounced. As I walked upon the stage, a my emotions flooded my body, such as nervous, anxious. However, to become a better piano performed, I needed to step out of my comfort zone and perform for entire piano and band classes. Just as Emerson said humans must go beyond a mastered trait, or comfort zone, to better themselves and not miss possible opportunities. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
7726A1F9C660,"The violin is a hard instrument to master, even with many years. It takes hours and hours of practices and skill to enjoy putting your time into it. I always had a great amount of interest in violins as a kid. Soon enough, I was given lessons for the violin. Somethings skills you would want to have is patience, knowing to push yourself to a current limit, and enjoying it. With those skills, my talent on the violin has increased over the years and overcame phases.

When I first shown interest in violins, as I remember, was in Generic_City back in 2008. We were at a gas station on a road trip, and stopped to eat. I saw a kid magazine with a toy violin that came along with it. That really caught my attention, as I begged my mom to buy me it. Eventually, she gave in and bought me the toy violin. I pretended like it was a real violin, and strung the strings with my fake bow. Ever since I had gotten that toy violin, I would not stop bringing it everywhere with me. After a few years went, I had moved to Generic_City and my parents decided I should actually get lessons on the violin in 2013. On the first lesson, I felt really nervous because my wish was finally coming true. I really thought I was going to be perfect on the first day. Of course, I was not good at all on day one. Soon, came to my realization that the violin is something you could not master in just in a year. My dad had made me a daily schedule for me to practice everything, so I could increase my talent and abilites. That's how I was able to go through the ""first phase"" of violin lessons went by.

Saturday afternoons felt super weird since I was not attending any lessons. My family and I had moved back to Generic_City, and I did not have any violin lessons. During the last two years of the four, in Generic_City I had be slacking off from my practices. Yet, I still wanted to continue with my talent and not give up. After a few months went by in Generic_City, I begged my parents to let me take lessons on violin. It was dejavu all over again from 7 years ago. We found out there was after-school lessons I could take. Suddenly, everything felt like the very first lesson I took in 2013. The new instructor said I was pretty good and could immediately start on the second book, instead of the first ""beginners"" book. It felt great knowing I was off to a great start.

Everything was going fine for the next five months, until I started to slack off again but worse. I always enjoyed playing the violin, but it began a chore. I was not improving as much, as I was back in Generic_City. I did not feel happy about the violin for the next three years. The thoughts of how the violin was not going to take me anywhere always lingered in my mind. It was not my dream to be a famous violinist or an instructor. Reasons just kept piling up till I told my parents about my thoughts and feelings. They had told me it would be a waste of six years worth of money for me to give up. I still practiced and slightly improved, but I still unhappy. You can tell if someone is doing something they clearly don't want to do, but are forcing themselves. After countless of arguments, cries, and rants to friend, I realized that no one can convince me to enjoy the violin again instead, I had to convince myself to. Our family was moving once again, but to Virginia. Every since we left Generic_City, I had not touched a violin in a year and that is when I was reminiscing on the days when I was playing the violin. I thought to myself, why did I hate practicing and going to lessons so much? The violin is something that I could never let go of because of the amount of work and years put into it. I would love to improve on my talent more instead of throwing it all out, it would be a big waste to do so.

You should always push yourself to a current limit though, not until you breakdown. But you can give a lot of time to decide whether or not you will ever be happy from doing something you don't currently want to do. It could really be just a phase you could be having. The best feeling is honestly really great knowing that you weren't pushing yourself to do something you didn't want to do anymore. That is how I grew my skills, and my talent in violin more. I also grew to enjoying the violin more.          ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
7B0430EDACBA,"I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life. I believe is important to have a positive attitude because having a positive attitude can open doors to different phase in life. For example, when it comes to school, significant others and obstacles that life may throw at us. Is important to not loose our cool and have the type of attitude that everything is going to turn out great at the end of the day.

Having a positive attitude when it come to school can be a way to cope with all your assignments, teachers and schoolmates. Especially being a teenager people thing is not difficult to wake up every morning 6 or 7 AM and deal with people's attitude and also having to worry about the amount of work the teachers give out to students and then going home to do chorus is something that teenager are capable of doing, but adults don't take that time to think that they was teens back in the 60s where life isn't easy but when it comes to school rules have change. Now we must pass SOLs to graduate but, a person who stays positive believes in there self makes it easy for their self to get through what's stop you from being happy.

Everyone in life have to deal with different types of obstacles physically and mentally. For example when i came to America I thought my life was over learning a whole different language and also trying to adapt to whole new country a whole different environment would be hard for me. Instead of being hard head i stayed positive learn English really fast and started to start feeling more comfortable in America. I also was thinking of families back home and how i cant let them down, because they would love an opportunity like this to have a free education and being able to make it to the 12 grade. We all go through so much and the only way to get through is having a positive attitude that things well turn out better than yesterday.

Others would say that you dont have to have a positive attitude in life to be successful because they probably dont have self confidence, someone around to give them hope or have giving up on their self to many times. I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life because you viewing life on a whole other level all you see is good things coming your way and the nothing can get in between of your dreams and if you was to fall you going to pick yourself right back up and start again.

In conclusion being able to wake up every morning and thank God for another day and pray that things are going to turn out better than yesterday is an important skill to have in this world we call life. We all have them phase that we go through and we feel like we cant keep moving forward but why stand in the same place with that same negative attitude is going to prevent you from wanting or doing more.           ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E897534557AF,"Recently technology have been a great impact in our lives and around the world. People use technology for contacting, social media, and ordering food online through an app without going and picking it up. But technology could be bad for some use like getting wrong information about an article that you read or you can get a virus on your computer by going to a insecure website. Technology is making humans beings life easier than how it looks like. I clearly believe that technology is a positive way to use cause you could do so much things with technology

I personally think that technology could make you accomplish many stuff and achievements. Reason why technology could be helpful is with school work. Say that your teacher give you this article and tells you to wright information about it and gives you book that has barely information about the article. You could just go on a computer and find a lot information about the article that the teacher assigned you with and complete your work.

In conclusion, thank you for your consideration of this important matter. the issue of my opnion on postive thinking about technolgy.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
E33FFA17ED69,"Thomas Jefferson once wrote,"" Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity serve a purpose. I agree with the quote by staying on track, working hard, and getting things done can accomplish more.

Staying on track can help people focus. Some students from my school today lose track and end up not doing their work. Later on students fell unaccomplished from not doing the work and not accomplish anything. If students can focus and stay on track they can achieve more.

By showing effort and working hard people can accomplish more. My mother works hard in the hot sun to accomplish her goals. My mothers goals are to work hard so she could pay bills, make sure her kids have what they need, and food on the table for her kids. My mother works hard just to show us if you do nothing in life you won't accomplish much.

People achieve a lot more by getting things done. Soccer player

Cristiano Ronaldo

Pushed his team to the max by practicing every day to get things done, as a result from pushing his team and getting things done he lead his team to victory. Getting thing done is reaching for accomplishment and later on be an achievement.

Although some people may say that inactivity severs a purpose, the real point to consider is that doing something can accomplish much more by staying on track, working hard, and getting things done will lead to accomplishing more.                                        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
B83DD09D3129,"I think What thomas jefferson wrote is a pretty good idea. But i also believe that some other people think different , some are agree and others are desagree .People always will give threir own opinions about what the other people do .

There are reason why i think what tomas jefferson wrote is a pretty good idea . For example , if we work hard every day and we always doing something that much may be done . Also the person who wrote the testamnet was someone with classic and that make help to inspire some poeple to never give up . But some other people accomplish about doing something everyday . althought other people are thinkig that inactivity serve a purpose , other are always doing something to be done as soon as they can .Because inactivity will bring you nothing wonderful to your life . In conclusion , i think we all need to think the same way as thomas jefferson to be success in our life's , withouth complaining and always doing something . ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
61C4FCA012D7,"The school food should change because a lot of students they did not like it and many students feel sick when they eat school food and many students skip their lunch to go and buy food from stores if schools provides the same food for student many students will leave class and learn they will not lean anything for being late in the class and more.

The school lunch should to be healthier for student to eat. Otherwise many students will not go to their class or lunch because they skip class to go buy food. Many students at my school argue that the food should change. And others student say the food should stay the same because they like it and it healthier for them. For example one day at my school students got into agreement saying that they are happy with the school menus that they have those why many students do not skip classes. Other students may not like the idea of changing because they think the new change will worst then they have.

If schools change to healthier food for students many student will be in the class to learn and stop thinking about skiing class to go buy food. For example one of my classmate always goes out to from school during class to buy food and i ask him why he said the school food are not good enough for him and those the problem he skip class to go to buy food. changing school food will be good idea and also bad because same students want same food they have now day but other want change and those where all arguing start. The good way to make students happy about is to keep the one they most like and get ruined of the one they do not like.

Some may argue that changing school menu would be bad idea because the new menu would be something that the students may not like do or not healthier for them. Other people think that many students get sick when they eat school food and many students are not learning and they do not go to classes in time or they skip same periods. In my idea i think changing school menu would be good idea because the menus that school provides are not healthier and same of them are not good for our bodies. The best way to provides healthy food for student is change the menu that most students heat.

To summarize, the main reason to change school menus is there are many students agree with the idea and there same who disagree about changing the school menu. I think good way to solve this problem is they have to keep the menu they already have and students like to eat most. And change for those who agree with the idea. Otherwise it will clause same problem for school principal.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
3BFECA0F8470,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives? My opinion is negative for people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. If we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. We will get sick. I believe technology is bad for our life. And technology will hurt many people.

First of all, Technology had negative effects on people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. Since, I was in Generic_City, I forgot my phone to bring outside. And I was doing nothing that day. I thought I have to focus my life without technology. We can do many things without technology. For example, we can do shopping with friends, we can play board game with people, and we can do talking each others. I believe technology making me more dumb. Also, technology will be my life controller.

Second reason is if we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. When I was in my house our family did not talking and they are doing their own work. I was so sad about this. My mom just watch TV, my dad did a slept, and my sister did play the phone game. At that time I want a talk to my family but they was very busy. I miss my time to talk about my school life with my family. Also we did not know about each family members favorite and what you don't like. So When my birthday party, my family members don't know what I want to get.

want a say, "" You have to do communicate with your family as much as you can."" It will be help your whole life.

Last is we will get sick. For example, your eyes get hurt. Because if you watch video a lot, you will get blind. So you can not see anymore. Your health is very important in your life. Too much technology will dangerous in your life. I love game, but I delete my all games because when I was young, I started the game, but I get sick more and more. I thought ""If I am doing game more I will be die."" So I was delete all my games. Also, You will be overweight.

Because your not moving and you ate a lot, you will be fat. I worry about that. Don't kill yourself.

In conclusion, technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. But my opinion is this will be negative for people's lives. Because we can do nothing without technology. If we are in the house, we didn't do any communicate with family. We will get sick. I think you can do technology. But not that much. Please plan your time and use it. It will be help you. This century is technology century. But use it safe. I believe you can do it. I will try too. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
C582EB969552,"Some believes that there act of kindness around the world. That happen to me once with my friends. Two years ago,in 2017,me and my best friend,Generic_Name,are ready for our first day of middle school. We were excited to see each other,we were excited because Generic_Name moved 3 years ago, in third grade. I was sad at first but until my mom say that they move not that far,my mom takes me to his house every weekends. Now when we start school i gonna see him every day. It because we have the same class and i was happy we have the same classes together. When i got to school i see Generic_Name in a far distance and start running to each other like we never seen each other before for a very long time. Now we start learning classes together every day

We where in English class to do a act of kindness to your best friend or closes friend. I say i was gonna do with Generic_Name,but then Generic_Name mom called him from the front office to pick him up. i said to Generic_Name what going on,he said ""i dont know"". soon after he didnt came to school for four days i was getting worried if his family are okay. i called to him many time,but he did not answer. until Monday he came to school looking sad, i said,""what happen"",he said that his grandma was very ill and might not make it .I felt sad too because his grandma was like my grandma. She been treating me like i was her grandson. Soon my mom took me to see the grandma to see if she okay.

Once i got home from visiting the grandma of Generic_Name,i was thinking what should i do to cheer up Generic_Name and his family. I was thinking for a full one hour,and then i was thinking why not buy them presents for the family. So on Sunday i went to the Nike shoe store,Walmart,target,and shoppers when i got there at Walmart i was thinking,"" what should i get for the mom and dad"",While i was thinking i went to the Nike store next to Walmart to buy his older brother air force one,that cost about $299 dollars. I said why am i spending money on expensive stuff. Then i went to target to get a $50 dollars gift card for Generic_Name and his little brother. So in total it cost me $100 dollars. Then i went to buy balloons for the grandma, it say,""god is here to protect you"". Right after, i went back to Walmart to buy a vase that cost me $42. Then i went to shoppers to buy flowers that cost $40 dollars because i got a lot of flowers to put in the vase.

On Monday we went to Generic_Name house to give the family gifts. First i give the shoes to the older brother,he seems really happy about the shoes. then i give Generic_Name a gift card as well as his little brother. Then i gave the mom a vase with flowers in them. then they ask me how much was it. i say almost about 432 dollars. They felt bad at first but i told them i had more money. Then i went to the hospital to visit the grandma to give her the balloons. She said thank you and bless your happy life.

i was crying when she said that. So after that we went to church to pray and pray. When me and Generic_Name got pick up it was good news that the grandma live. We went to have a party with their family. Then i present the act of kindness to the class and got a easy ""A""So this is a story of act of kindness.                         ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
EDD899D4131D,"Generic_Name thinks the school should control students involvement in extracurricular activities. Students are in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences. Some people think schools should control student involvement in extracurricular activities because they would know if the students grades are good enough to enroll in a activity or more. Other people think students and families have the decision to pick whether students should be involved in a extracurricular activities because the school can't force you do a sport you dont want to do and they can't push away your dreams of playing a sport. Generic_Name thinks schools need to control students involvements in the extracurricular activities because not a lot of parents care if they children have time for extra assignments or they don't care if their kids stay out late to participate in any activity related to school. First of all, people think schools should decide students involvement in activities. Some students want to play many sports but not all of them will have time to complete homework assignments or study fr any quizzes and tests. For example Generic_Name's older sister use to play two sports. One was related to school and the other one was outside of school. She never had time to do her homework so her grade was going down. She also had to study for her tests but she didn't have time since she was practicing her sport too much and so she failed the grade. Secondly, other people think students and families have the decision to pick whether students should be involved in activities. An example is Generic_Name's friend wouldn't want the school to not let him play the sport he always been wanting to play. Generic_Name's friend thinks it wouldn't be fair to force him to play a sport he doesn't like. Generic_Name, Generic_Name's friend would like to play a sport to distract his mind if he is stressing or is having depression. Generic_Name also wants to have the choice to pick any sport he would like to play but also wants to finish his work in class or study his tests during lunch or before school so he doesn't fail. Lastly, the majority of people think schools need to control students involvement in activities because not a lot of parents care if their children have time for assignments or to study for tests. In general parents don't care about their kids schools or grades so they won't worry if their kids are out late for any sport. One example, Generic_Name's aunt don't care about his cousin Generic_Name so she is always out late. Generic_Name wants to try a sport in school so she can get a scholarship to go to college since her parents don't care about her but she wants to be someone in life and do better things. She wants to decide on her own if she should join a sport or not. I think the school should control the students involvement in sports. The school should control the students involvements in sports because they're can be students that want to get a scholarship by playing a sport but also want to have time to finish classwork they couldn't finish in class or study their test to not fail the class. I also think school should control the students involvement in activities to take their mind of things that are distracting them or stressing them.  ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
D1C5C7879A33,"Since that program it can help older and younger studen. First,

it can help meet each other making friends.

Next, it can help working each others. Next, it can help younger stdents learn older students. This program it can help older students learning more what they never know. There is one adventages of older student and younger student. one is younger students respect older students. There is two disadventage of older students with younger students. One of then is older people don't respect younger students. Next one is older students kick younger students. I think this program it can help younger students and older students is to take care each other. And learning each other and helping each other. And working each other. And older student can help younger students what is wrong and what is correct. That why this programs it can help older and younger students. Sometimes younger students help older students. And sometimes older students learn from younger students. Also programs can have sports and have the opportunity older students work or play with younger students. Also sport in a program it can help younger students learn how older student play sports. There are alot of sport in the world. Sport are amazing and we can learn alot of things in sport . program are amazing it can help every one. sport in programs are fun. I think thats why sport exist in the world. Because programs it can make feel peoples fun.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
56E32CEEB127,"We should accomplish always when doing something to determine do to wonderful things. if we do more things we will accomplish the goals we have in our heads to go on forward. Thomas Jefferson he accomplish many in his life having to make write the declaration of independent he did not waste time to relax around and chill his buddies. When we start doing something with our life we set goals every year what do you do?, the every next we try to accomplish our goals because when we are trying check our goals we are always doing something it never stops and it will never stop because thats we are non stop workers . many people can waste there time and not finishing there goals . Each person has something in there hearts to not stop and there motive to keep going on forward and trying to do something there life .over the years you see news things examples new phones and new shoes and TV but whos behind the idea a person and what did they do worked hard to make improvement. we are always doing something thats how the world is right now to accomplish new things every year generation to generation always improving .When we do things we do it for a purpose because its wonderful how much we can never stop giving up we always have to be doing something because if people see you not doing something its a waste of time for you and the person .This is how are world is runs by doing something in your life by going to school learning then going collage and finding a career for yourself and all this is by doing something your life to accomplish your goals and to improve your life to grow more and more gain knowledge and not stop what you want to do. We do accomplish when always doing something. in your life there always people pushing you forward and sometimes you feel like not doing nothing do but do something because if you do it you a accomplish a goal that your parents give you . Example summer break you stay home not doing nothing playing video games and eating all the food and not working and your parents are and you leave the dishwasher all full and did to clean the house and when your parents come and see you not doing nothing of course they might mad. Your parents why dont you leave the videos games and start doing something in the house and start washing the dishwashers and getting a job to make money and this is when you have to start doing looking accomplishing your goals not in the house wasting your time and not do nothing. do we accomplish more if we are always doing something and the answer is yes and dont stop doing something cause everyday your accomplishing it without knowing it.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
81B7A7CB8829,"A man named Albert Schweitzer once said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing"". In this case setting an example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others. For example, younger people look up to those who have struggled like they have and whom came from broke down homes and had succeeded through out their way. People are also influenced by those who have been into sports and who started in the struggle just like they've had, who later became the best. Showing good actions lead people to persuing you and your examples, which later leads them to the right path.

When Albert speaks of an example influencing others many ideas come to mind, one of which was how people who grew up in broke homes and succeeded with their life have had a huge affect on the youth. These people who are known for their success have gone through struggle and hard bottom rock moments. Although through out their journey people may have put them down, they still try their best in being a good example for others and the generation after them. People like this have gone to school and have worked hard in getting good grades to persue what they wanted to major in. They have gone through many obsticules to do what they love and see potential in. Leaders like these have worked their best to do what they want, which leads to having an amazing job with a great career.

Although many people look up to those who came from rock bottom, they also look up to those who are well known for their athleticism. As we may know football, basketball, wrestlers, soccer, ect. are sports that are well heard of through out different countries. These sports have not just helped people out with their physical apperiances but have also helped them out mentaly. For example, for those who have started from not knowing the sport and who were told that they weren't good enough didn't just give up because they were told so, instead it pushed them into getting better. For those who have tried the sport know that when you join a team you later find love for the sport and want to get better. Well known players have trained and worked hard everyday to be where they are today. They've taken risk and tried their best in their games or matches, they've given their all to be noticed by college coaches, or even scouts.

However, both doing great in school and being a great athlete have been known for being a example in influencing others. These two however different but very similar examples both persuade others in; working hard and trying their best. They influence people that you have to never give up in what you believe in or in what you hope to persue in life. They make you mentaly stronger and challange you in becoming the person who you soon hope to be. In conclusion, setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
6ACB38C6577C,"Should a students work be praised no matter how bad it is? This sounds like a good idea in theory, but when you think of it only in the educational field is really a terrible thing to do. As people; We all want to be praised for how we work and we can only get better if we practice something over and over and over again and can get even more if we`re happy with what we`re practicing and happiness comes with every praise. But if all we got while learning was praise but nothing to improve on then what would be the point to continue learning if all we get is a ""this is amazing"" or an A+ on every assignment they got. They would improve but students also develop zero tolerance to any criticism and probably going to want all the attention focused at them.

A great example to this would be any artist; artists are based all around the idea of everything they make are things that they'll hate even if theres true improvement. they get praised but thats not what drives them to do better its the hatred of what they do that gives the motivation to improve and even take criticism with a grain of salt but use it to get better. Using what we learned from any artist it`d be a terrible thing to do, as the purpose of a student is to learn and use what they learned in the world and in the world theres going to be people who criticize what they do and if they cant take that criticism they`re most likely gonna get fired.

In conclusion. I`m not saying that praising to much is a bad thing and i`m also not saying you should make the student hate what they`re doing. But i am saying that with every praise should be a criticism just to balance it out and show the students that with every positive comes a negative and that the worlds not just going to be all praise to a person.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
1CC7C3E50765,"dear principal

i have taking my position and say that all student should help make this world a cleaner planet so that we can live on it . so i thing that all student should do community server. sorry i have not introduce my self. my name is PROPER_NAME i go to the school. an a second graded. and i thing that all students should make this place a better place to live in . i also thing that does student that don't want to cleaned up should be punish. punish with lunch detention.

i thing making all the student do community serves will help theme stay out of trouble. helping cleaned the community will let student out of trouble, to not use drugs or alcohol. they will know how important is to keep our environment cleaned. so that the pollution stops. and also to not make this place bad for aour babes. that one day we may have.

so please principle don't let the planet come to and end. let help our planet be a safe place to live on not a bad and ugly planet. and all of those kid that are cleaning the environment should have a party a green day party that shows how they care of our planet. and wanted to be a safe place to livening.

from STUDENT_NAME",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
AB37B00A93F1,"Firstly, I think the politics a good thing.

However some people feel that requiring, I belive a person can change traits, aslo has a great politic, so many people wants to be a good person, but maximun of the people are good and bad. So we need to be a good peron every time. With your mom, dad , brother, teacher, friends, grandmother. with your's adults, we need to follower the rulers.

Secondly, character traits such as can be kindess chose, for exemplo my friend this morning and last nigth, they both asked can other for things and instead for of becaing a horrible person. alway we need to be nice with another persons, we need to be honest, aslo when we have a horrible friends we need to be nice with them. also when we have the opportunitly to help peple,

Afther that, so many people are rude, bute we need to be humbly every time, also we can demonstrate humbly, when we go in the bus sad hi or good morning, also in the morning when we get up sad good moring to the parents, or every time sad thanks when person give you somthing, and not to be impolite.

conclucion, I belive we can demostrate respect , on my words if we need respect, first we need to respect every people, no ridicule to the another persons, we can stop the bulling to the childrens, and adults peple, also respect every singol day. dont forwet the rulers, be friendly, the love alweys with you. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
73D5C8D99F72,"I agree with Ralph waldo when he said's ""to be your self in a world that trying constantantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishments.""

although being yourself is a very hard thing to do especially when you have nobody buy your side though it all at first it seems easy but once you try so hard to make people proud you would wanna feel like fiting in.

But yet again here we are learning from our own mistakes why try to make our self just what others want us to be, why cant we just be us for just simply pleasing ourselves I wish we woulden't care what people think about us but do , but we have to face reality sadly weather we like it or not theres no alternatives.

Because whats the point?, just to be something we are not, for example one we would be lying to ourselves and second either way no matter how much we try its never enough for anyone because at the end of the day how we choose to be either our self or not nobody will ever be pleased with our decisions not the other way around.

Sometimes our influences may proswade us and to a sertin point we try so hard not to fit in but the people that we hang around the most we reflect upon them even if we see it or dont at the end of they day they try but the real question is do they succeed? yes but only temporary nothing lasts forever everything has its timing when it should or wont come to our lives.

I mostdefinlty agree to being yourself is a huge accomplishment, but we might not understand at the moment, how or why but we will soon rather then later at first its complicated even difficult although its just tempawarly things that accur in that priest moment it can also be for our great or good but we should've been proud of what diden't thad happen.

So i believe sticking with yourself is always the best policy dont worry what people say about you, you know where you stand dont let anyone tell you so plus being yourself will mark the difference in you people cant always tell what you are they dont define you thats for you to decide not them,So dont be embarrassed of yourself show yourself off believe in yourself because your limit is and only you.

Thank you for your time hope to hear from you very soon.

Sincerely

Generic_Name     ",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
84FC9651F650,"First impressions is what I learn from many people. People have many impressions and yes it is hard to change.

Impressions are special to some people but it also could effect people in certain ways. Ways where your whole behavior might change or attitude or maybe your whole person. When we first meet people we see their first impressions and we see on how they are or we check on how their behavior is. We all have a instict on where we look at some people and judge but we also see the attitude in the people. First impressions are special sometimes because you dont know who you are going to meet next and on how they are good or if they have some bad in them.

Everybody is unique in many different ways. People do say that first impressions is impossible to change. I think it's impossible becuase people are very different everybody is different and sometimes we just have to accept it.

Some people don't understand that some people can't change even if its for the better or the worse some people will just always be the same. Impressions are something you can't change from people.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
60FD2E2FB768,"Imagine you are in school and you had to sit an a room with four wall. Moreover, you had a frustrating day because of teachers, students and school work. And then you had to stay in that room for another one and a half hour. How would you feel after all of that? Beside, students might not function well, since there is more class time which means more classwork and homework. That is why the school board should not add one and half hour to the school day.

First, some students have sports, clubs and many things to do after school. However, they are tired from the school and school work as a result, they will not function right. For example, my friend plays soccer and she had school for another one and half hour when she went to practice she passed out, since her brain was not function nether were her body. An addition, when students get back from school or sport it will be dark outside. Which is a unfair for students and it's bad for the students safety.

Next, students will not have time to spend with there family members nor there friends because they would have homework and projects to do. Neither will teacher have time to spend with there kids, since they have test to grad and paper work. In the same token, students would not be motive to play or have fun because all they would think about is school. Beside, the students will not have a lot of time to sleep.

Furthermore, one day the students will not have the energy to go to school. Similarly, they will become depressed and have a negative mood. And the students might not even want to come to school any more. Which put the students in a high risk.

In conclusion, The school board should not add one and half to the school hours. Students will not function well, since there is more class time which means more class work. Additionally, some students have sports and many things to do after school. However, when the students get back from school or sport it will be dark outside which is bad for the students safety. Moreover, students and teacher will not have time to spend with there family members, nor there friends because they would have homework and projects to do. In the same way, they would not be motive to play or have fun because the students mid will not construed. lastly, one day the students will not have energy to go to school.",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
9F7E189A2DCF,"Do you believe to know a person through one impression? Some people believe that most of the people's personality will depends on their presentation or the way that dress up, they think that your knowledge or your personality is base on how you look. I believe that the first Impression could change for the following three reasons; Your clothes or how you look do not show your type of personality, the kind of person who you are will depends on knowing the person and through knowing the person your idea about the person could change.

The majority of people classify the type of person base on how they look, What I believe is that your clothes and how your look do not say or show your type of personality or the kind of person who you really are.

Base on my short experience to know a person takes time and the first impression could be unfavorable in strong relationships or friendships that's why I believe that who you are will depends on knowing the what kind of person you are.

Most of the strong friendships or relationships that I know they were enemies or they did have a good impression about the person at first time but through the time they had the privilege to know the person and they found a good kind of person.

To conclude the first impression is good way to present ourselves but through knowing the person we will find that the first impression does not care when knew the kind of person that's why I believe that first impression could change through knowing that person.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
5A977087E7E8,"Dear Principal; Changing the cafeteria lunch for a healthier lunch is a good idea. There is going to be new food, healthier food, and different types of food that others students never taste before. As a student I really like this idea because there is going to be a healthy food for all of us.

New lunch menu, having a new lunch is going to make many students happy because there are students that are getting tired of having the same lunch almost everyday, but it also can effect others students because there are many students that enjoy eating the same lunch and they never get tired, In thus case is better is you as a principal talk to the cafeteria manager and ask her for a list of wich food is the students favorite and at the end ypu and your company can decided whether you change the menu or not, but as a students I think it's also better if you just see wich food students like and take away the food that students eats the least and change that for the new food and live the food that students likes.

Students might be happy, Because you are not taking the food that students likes and also bringing different menu that students will be happy to have. We are trying different menu and that is also making us be different from others schools and they would see our school as a example, and they are going to do the same and is quit better because is not only our students that are getting tired of the cafeteria menu, there are others students in different schools that are also going trough to this issue. Schools from different states might see us and take the same idea as you have principal, that is going to halp not just the students it also helping our parents to save money, Because students that dont like the menu no more are telling their parents to buy then food from outside, and somentimes does parents dont have the money to do so. It also can help students dont skip classes to go buy from from outside bucause they dont like the food no more, that can help the students, parents, and also the school from not having a bad reputation.

Tasting different types of menu, trying new things like food is somenthing that students also loves I put my self for example. There are students that likes to try different food, the cafeteria have bad and healthy food but its not equal and for that we need a change, we need to have more healthier food, some studets are also alergit to food that is in the cafeteria and thats why they dont eat and they get sick because they eat only at home and most of the time we in school and we dont have the opportunity to go out and buy food. Bringing healthy and different lunch menu is good, becase we are able to taste differnt food and healthier, students wont need to get out of class just to go and buy food from outside, its dangerous that just for students that skip it also for our parents, Because the school call and let our parents thet we skip and they get worry for you fo not letting then know where you are or what are you doing.

My conclution is that students are going to be happy if you just ask the cafeteria manager fo a list of wich food students loves the most, and one of wich one they like the least. Thats is going to help all students to be conform with the new changes that you wants to do, students are going to have their favorite food and others students wont need to skip class to go out and buy food, parents won't be worry no more and students are not going to take any risk of getting sick because they dont eat. Healthy food it can help us with many things like, your body, less fat, and more proteins are going to be in our body. Parents won't have to buy food for the kids no more and they are going to save money, Changing the school menu is a great idea that most of the students are going to understand, and for the one that don't they are going t get used to it. Thats going to help every students and people from outside are goin to see the changes in the school and others schools should start doing the same for their students. Healthy life with less risk of everything. This is my sincerity opinion and hopefully the Principal takes some ideas of what the students think and what is the best for all of us. Thank you !",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
3898358B58BB,"To conserve energy and resources, Some businesses have adopted a four day work week, With each day consisting of ten hours. My school should not follow this model or even consider extending the school day by two hours. At my school a full day of school consists of seven hours. Seven hours is more then enough, Now having it to be nine hours would be very overwhelming for everybody. Extending it two more hours is too much stress on the students , as well as the teachers. Also most students have a part time job after school and won't fit everyone's schedule. There is a lot to do after school and extending school two more hours would not help. It also would not only affect the students but the teachers too. Some teachers have a second job to go to after school, Some teachers have children to go take care of at home. Also it is scientifically proven, That if students are in school for more than the seven hours they usually are in school, The students mind shut down. once the mind shuts down the body does too. So whenever the teacher is teaching the students isn't picking up the information and isnt learning anything. The student isnt focousing and also tired. So it would not benefit the students much , by adding the two hours. It will most likely have the students failing, because they're not leaning or doing their work. No good benefit will come out of extending the school day, Only bad. The school board should leave it how it is. My school should not follow this model by extending the school day by two hours.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
A21A69767BEE,"So why do ask other people for their own opinion to help us make the better choice, well by improving your people/talking skills, That most people are usually nervous to talk infrount of others, and how we organize what got from the opinions. Let's to learning these reasons and hopeful teaching you some life skills!

What do to improved our talking/people skills, it's important to get feedback from others and you don't even know when you need it of not. Like here's an example, Generic_Name problem weather she should join the lacrosse team or not and does'nt know what to do. But she gets nervous, so she gets scared asking anyone to help her. So she goes to ask her friends and family weather or not to join. Questions like that are used in everyday life and it's always good to have a second pair of eyes to help you along the way, But it's hard when you are nervous.

How to not be nervous is hard thing to do, Because thing has the mindset were people are judging them every second. When you talk to people about something like Generic_Name she ask different friends and family on problem and still gets nervous around them. When those moments happened you take a deep breathe. Because this what want to say. The people arent going to bite you, they will answer you just like everyone else. Focus what you want to say, no one wants to be stuck in a cage of guilt, because of one questions they never asked. Now I hear that a lot and why I'm telling you this it's because I don't want to see the coward out of anything you are going to strong to go through the future, jobs, relationships, and more.

Now you to ask your friends about your question you need help decided on. When you go the ask something they feel like their opinion valves you a lot to help you with that decision, and might give you more information form other person also could build a stronger relationship. With a lot opinions weather you should join that team, it does give you different perspectives on how different people react to that problem. Others will say yes or no, and might give into details. Now that Generic_Name understands to strong and not scared, she gets her opinions and now ready to sort them out. She uses the simple pros and cons list, and able to find her answers easier then before. Now she checks the list and more votes for her to join the team, and she happy to use her life skill in the future.

Now what did we learn while reading this well, we understood what type of problem Generic_Name had and probloby relate to your problem. we learned that some are scared and nervous to talk to others and that it's important to get over with it, to not cause even more problems in the future. Lastly how can we organize the opinions and how simple it is to do. That why I think it's better to talk to other to more then one person for their opinion. So I hope next time you can remember to use those skills in the real world.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
CE11907D971D,"How technology can effect people's live or human contact?. I agree, because technology is not the best thing human created. Sometimes people say, ""technology is bad because effect the family can't be together"" or just they don't like the technology. I feel when people say that, is because they know technology effect people's lives. This are some reasons how technolohy can effect people's live or human contac. Peolple be adictive with their phones, They can be adictive with shopping online, and don't have communication with other people.

The people is adictive with his phone or the game, in my opinion is bad because they just thinks in his self. For example, if someone need help he or she can help the person because, he or she are used the phone and sometimes mean, their phone or the game is more important that someone need help. That person can be a adult or a child. Sometimes we need to be more kind an have a good heart with other people.

I know is you are woman, you always shop online that is the best thing make womans. but some of woman have addiction with shop online. For example, some of woman shop online and that good because you can be indepent and shop you own clothes, others shop a lot clothse and they have big addiction with shop online.

I my opinion the person don't have communicate with other people, is a person don't that ispiration for his life or future. For exmaple, if that person never do something that motive or that is good for that person, literally he or she is one of more.

In my conclusion, we nedd to be a ligth between that people is addictive in their phone. Because that bad for they life and their future. That was I agree, because technology is nor the best thing human created.     ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
047BD3CB80B4,"Should students have the option to take online classes? Yes, I believe that students should have the opinion to take those online classes and that no one should take those classes away from those students. Students can be more active when they are at home then at school. You can pick a time to start your online classes and have a fixed schedule. It is important for students to have the education of there own way instead of worrying about how public/private schools are run.

Most students attend to focus more when they are taking online classes; For an example, Students dont have to worry about how teachers are teaching students when they are in a class full of other students. Students tend to struggle when teachers aren't teaching their students properly and care more about there monthly payments. Second example, is that having that one-on-one connection. Having that bond with your teachers are great ways to not be afraid to ask question when you dont get a problem or how to get the answers to the homework. Third example, most students tend to be antisocial at school because thats how they were born or even scared that people around them with judge the student and that the students wanna feel safe at school.

My second argument is that students tend to get bullied at school; Bullying is a huge thing around the world and that bullying is a serious problem; Bullying is the number one cause of student not attending to school and not getting the proper education they need: For an example, when the student is taking an online class, they dont have to worry about other students picking on him, but instead he can feel safe and really enjoy the education that he is learning online at home. There was this one time that one of my really close friends was being made fun of and picking on him everyday at school. He would sometimes not attend to school because he was too scared to come in to class and would always worry about the other students. He would not focus on his school work, but would mostly focus about protecting himself.

My Third argument is that students can ask question when they are having that one-on-one with the teacher. Students are afraid to ask a not so good questions in math, English, history, etc. Students have that nerve racking moment when a teacher tells the class if they have any questions. There was this one time that a teacher asked the class if there were any questions and none of the students raised their hands because I felt like everyone knew what they were doing in the class but me. I was having that moment that I didn't wanna waste the other students time about my question that I didn't understand on. It was the judgment that they would give me, but I know that it wasn't the case, people tend to over think about the problem inside the classrooms. For an example, Extroverts tend to not talk/socialized to people often, instead they don't talk to others and the problem that they are having trouble with and scared to ask the teacher because they feel insecure about talking or feel uncomfortable talking to others.

In conclusion, Students should have the option to take an online class and enjoy learning like everyone else should. Learning is a fun thing to do, but have different learning styles in life. The world keeps changing everyday now and new technology is developing overtime.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
5B0E80E62A8C,"Do people have a skill in them? A skill is something special that a person can do. I have a skill in math because I can help kids and I have good grades in math.

I have a skill in math because I can help kids. For example; if one of my friends need help in math I can help them. If people are good at something then they should help others, so other people can understand what is happening. In the same circumstances people should get good grades.

I have a skill in math so I can get good grades. For example; if I get a test on math and if I am good at math then I should be able to get good grades. If people are good at something then they should be able to get good grades in that class. In the meantime people should so do their best in their skill.

Every on in the world has a skill in something. I am good in math because I can helps students and I can get good grades. I hope you learn that everyone has a skill in them even if you donot relize it. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
BB8A59BA8C61,"I disagree that first impressions are impossible to change because, at first they could be shy, there personality could change, and they can come off rude in the beginning.

The first time ever meeting you they can just be shy because there getting to know you. That's how some people work. It happens a lot in the work area. When I first went to work for my first day I was really shy and didn't talk to anybody, but now that i've been working there for 3 months and i've gotten so much comfortable with everyone there.

Once you have gotten to know the person there personality changes thought out your friendship. It makes you think who you probably met in the beginning. Sometimes they could just be lying to you just to see if your a good friend or just to make them sound better about them selves.

When you first meet someone they can for sure come off rude but then after you get to know them its like there another person. Thats how I really am, I just come off as a really mean person.

You could bump into someone and th ey probably get mad and start talking to you so rude. You'll never know they could become your best friend.

In conclusion, a first impression is possible to change because they might come off shy at first, They could change thought out the friendship, and they could come off rude at first. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
F628F0D46CCC,"It is important to share a lesson with elementary school students because, as they get older they can know what they have learned when they were younger. Elementary school students learn way more when someone is teaching them a lesson instead of the kids learning it by there self. Teaching kids a lesson in school or out of school is not a bad thing to do because kids and others can learn anything out of school walls, once they start go grow up they will understand what they have learn and what not have learn in elementary school, and of the hard effort the kids have put into there work in school and at home.

Why is giving a lesson to elementary schools important ? I feel like it is important because your teaching them something they have not learned or know about what they will be learning about yet, teaching younger kids can be really nice and all, but some of these kids can be very hard to take care of and handle like upper up classes/grades.

When giving a lesson to a class can be difficult and all that, but it can also be fun to teach them some cool things they should know about and teach them easy work so they can understand the work faster and so they can see what level or understatement they are at, kids that go to elementary school can be way easier and faster to teach because upper grade level can get hard and exhausted, cause of there beavers and they way they love to act in front of other people which, they shouldnt be acting like that. Younger students know better then not to behave really bad and act crazy, thats why i think it is important to teach younger kids then older kids, younger students they well ,they know what they are doing, also understand of the the work we teach them but we always got to teach them very well and help them with the lesson we have given and show how it is done and how to do it with out being upset.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
CCB13E22A439,"Technology allows to the people, technology they has positive or negative effects on people's lives. First, technology is a systematic treatment of application of Knowles esp. Second, technology is very important for some people because some need for job, communicates, homework, play online or other things. Third, some people uses the technology for good things like "" people can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person."" This explains the technology is good and promote more easy lives of the people. Also, the technology sometimes can had negatives effects on people's lives because some people do ban things with technology for examples, cyber bullying, steal ID form other person, or to trick the young person. Finally, technology is good for communicates with other people that lives far away or other country.

Furthermore technology had good benefit for the people life and essential for young person, but no all people usable good for example, the young uses sometime only for play game or post ban things in social minded. So technology can be has positive effects on people's live, if the people can be use right the technology. Also technology had negative effects on people's lives, if the people used technology for ban things. Sometime technology can be effects people because when the other people used social minded for make bullying to other person, this person can be effects emotionally.

In the past does not have technology; so was hard for communicates with other people, buy things from other country, or for to looking things for homework. Now is more easy to do things like; pay in online, reading book, communicates or other things now can do. My Mom and my Dad say "" in the past was hard to communicates because did't have technology (telephone,table,or computer) so before use letter to communicate with other person, but to take long time. Now is more easy to communicate because the people have cellphone.

Now the time chances because technology increase more better and more easy to do things. technology increase each years because put new cellphone computer or other things like that. Now the company have good money because all people have cellphone or computer and the cellphone year to year they more expensive to buy. In conclusion, technology has positive and negative effects on people's lives.",3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
FF66DA76E15F,"Even though imagination is more important than knowledge, thinking in a creative way is better than learning something from somewhere. Yes, imagination is more important than knowledge because it's letting your brain think more about the things that make you happy the most. Also imagination is like thinking outside of the box (to me), but I try using imagination a little more than knowledge. Although knowledge is not as good, but some people prefer knowledge instead of imagination. Imagination helps me become more creative and open to myself because I let myself imagine, then let my mind speak free and be creative.

Becoming more creative and open is really good, knowledge does not give me the opportunities to do so. Knowledge does not let me be as more creative as when I'm imagining, therefore I have to start imagining. I think that imagination is a better way of saying art, because I'm thinking of things that may not even exist in this world. In that case, imagining is creative, artistic, and beyond, so that is why imagining something is better than knowledge to me. Imagination makes me passionate about what I want to do and accomplish it.

I've always dreamed of opening my own interior design company. That designs furniture,planing notebooks for office workers, etc, that are for houses, offices, and dorm rooms. All of that was because of imagination, I wanted to accomplish that when I graduate from college. Imagination doesn't just help me with what I want to accomplish it also helps me decide what I want to be when I grow up. Otherwise imagination would've not gotten us to where we are right now.

Finally, Imagination is something that brings people together like art and creative things. It also brings us joy and things that we don't really imaging on our daily bases. Although, knowledge is not important than imagination I still think that Knowledge can be used in someway and help me with something. Therefore I thing that imagination is more important than knowledge because it help me with my daily bases work at school, home, sports and all kinds of other things that I do.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
FD13023EE10A,"In the future i want to be a better person. Some people dont appreciate who i am or don't like the way i am. Like for example my friends are loud and i'm not and i like keeping things everything to my self and i don't really care what others say about me for me it doesn't really hurt what they say they might think that it does but it doesn't. People don't care about others feelings, I do in some way everyone matters. People you never talk to look at you in a weird or mean way, Others dont even get along. But they don't know who you really are with out getting to know you like they say dont judge a book by its cover and i agree. My mom things that i go to school to look nice and its not true part of it is but i also try hard to get good grades,its not easy. Getting good grades arn't easy especially if your in middle school or high school. At the same time you have to remember all those seven class what you need or dont need in each class. In language arts in hard for me especially when your friends in that class because all they want to do is talk and thats not part of getting a good grade. Thats why is matters to pay attention. By getting it trouble or not listening in class other class mates think its funny. Some people think just because the way you talk or act it's funny it may be funny but they might not know the real you. Some people think i'm a fake person that talks about everyone else i don't. If you would know me it would probably change your mind. See they way others think about someone should stop because theres other people that don't like that like me. People make bad choices and make mistakes but just think before you do something and dont let no one judge you because everyone is equally the same.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
E8B0698217A3,"They say the you should never judge a book by its cover and, especially regarding people, its true. In this case, the cover is not necessary meaning the appearance, but the first impression of another person. Like the cover of a book, first impressions are not always as appealing as what is really there. its not until after you start ""reading"" or get to know someone, when you really find out that what you see is not always what you get. There are several factors that can affect the first impression that one receives from another. Differing personality, situations and representation of a person, make impressions often the worst means of judging people.

A person's personality has a big effect on the first impressions that they emit. Everybody is different but when it comes down to it first impressions are really based off of whether you are shy or not. I met my best friend after moving during my junior year, at my new high school. Before i knew her, she never said a word to me or anyone else in the classes that she was kind of odd, but then realized that I was the same way, i didn't talk to many people either because of my personality. I knew that I was shy person and after I get to know someone, I put down my front and show my true colors. I thought that maybe she would be same way. After starting to talk to her a little more each day, our friendship grew and I learned that she wasn't odd at all, but just like me an outgoing person hidden by their shyness. Some people like me and my friend, are shy and put up a reserved and quiet front when facing new people. Based on my first impressions of my friend, I thought something that was far from the truth. One who has a shy personality might in reality be outgoing, but uncomfortable showing it at first, making the first impression of that person a mistaken one.

Your first impression of someone is not suitable because you do not know the situation they may be in. When seeing or meeting someone new, you have no idea the kind of day,

difficulties or kind of disappointment that person may be experiencing. They may have have recently lost someone, or could be someone new and yet still have to deal with the routines and stresses going through out their day. All of these situations can create a barrier between themselves and others, and setting of a good impression is probably not at the top of their list of important things to do.

On my first day of senior year, I walked hurriedly to my first class, even thought I had plenty of time to get there. When I walked into my class, the only thing on my mind was to find a seat right away, no matter if it was by another person or not. when the time come to eat lunch, I sat by myself and ate it quickly so I could proceed to my next class. I was so worried about being late for a class, finding a seat and just doing things right, that i didn't have time to try to leave any good first impression, on any of my peers. It wasnt even on my mind to do so. My peers received the impression that i was nervous and not a sociable person, when really I was acting the way I was because of the situation that I was in.

There are many factors that lead to someone's first impression of another. Someone;s personality, current situation, or the way they happen to present themselves all influences the way someone thinks about another when seeing or meeting them for the first time. Since what they think is based off of these judgments, their first impressions is usually wrong. If all friendships were based on first impressions, there would be a lot less of them in the world. First impressions are more often worst means of judging a person because its not until you get to really know a person, you are better equipped to understand what kind person they truly are, and really know the individual based on real values, rather than their first impression or ""book cover"".",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
265FCDBBF0C1,"Well one skill i have is to read out loud,this is because it helps me understand what I am reading about,also when i read about it it gets suck in my head and i can explain it more better when i read out loud,and it also helps me when i need to write a essay on what i was reading.

For me reading out loud helps me a lot because i understand it more. It also feels good to read it out loud because i know how I am reading. I can see if I am reading good or if I am stopping in every word. Then i can see if i need to say the word out loud if i dont understand what it means.

For me reading out loud helps me to because i can explain what happens in the story. Also i have a better way of explaining it better when i read out loud because i get more details in my head. Then when i am done reading i don't forget about what i read about. Also when i read in my head and not talking out loud i dont remember lot's of things that i read. Other people can understand better when they read out loud as well.

For me when i have to write a essay it help me better to read out loud because i can write lot's of things when i read out loud. I can explain more about the story when i read out loud. Then when i am ready to write a essay i dont have to be scare on what i write because i was reading out loud and it was suck in my head of what the hole book was about. I also like reading out loud when i am writing a essay because it helps me better to see if i am writing about what the book is telling me what to do.

The Conclude:To read out loud. I read out loud so i can understand what the book is about,better to write a essay when i am reading out loud,and when i am reading out loud it stays in my head of what i read about.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
03A3B40D651B,"One of the smartest people on earth said that ""imagination is more important then knowledge"". Do you agree or disagree with Albert Einstein? What do you think about imagination? Do you think imagination is more important then knowledge? I agree with Albert Einstein because if people focus on getting more knowledge people won't be trying to solve the problem with imagination. When more people come in to the USA then people or trying to stop it and not focusing on the students and staff that want help when in need. When people do their taxes the money goes to helping solve the problem so people should do their taxes to help solve the problem faster so kids can have go learning environment. The more the President wants to work on trying to get a imagination law to be made he should be focusing on the over things he ran for president not just one thing for years. The President should work on helping the people in need like sick people or the homeless and trying to help the homeless buy or get a small home to be safe in in so they can survive in the cold days and be clean and healthy. I mean having knowledge is good to get the job you wanted since you were a kid but i say it's better to work on imagination while working on helping people in need. I'm just saying that the President should work on lots of things and when working on big problem too. What do you think of when people say is imagination more impotent then knowledge? Think of it and the ask your self if you want to help out or not.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
38B60A8516C2,"I believe that having 3-4 weeks break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall, sounds like a good idea. It will be easier to hold the information when you return in the fall. The days will be shorter since the school year is longer. I believe not everyone has something to do over the 3 months of summer break.

It will be easier for people to hold the information when they return in the fall. A large amount of people forget what they learn in school when they return from the 3 months of summer break. Everytime summer break comes I forget mostly all the information information I learned, it just leaves my head over those months. When we get 3-4 weeks over summer break, not all the information will leave. It will be easier for us students to not forget what we learned over the months.

School days will be shorter since the school year is longer or we can have one weekday off and have school at a regular time. They can change it so students don't have to wake early in the morning. Some people can't wake up early and some people get off work late and have school the next day. Students can have one weekday off, like a Wensesday or Friday off. It will give them time to relax and stay focus on school. Since, the school days are shorter, they can have time to theirselfs and not be stressed.

I believe not everyone has something to do over the three months of summer break. They might just do something for one month and for the another two months might not do anything. They might just stay inside and play video games all day and not read or not pick up a book the whole break. They might not even exercise all day. Students need to have something to do over the breaks, so they can keep learning.

Sometime I believe it's a bad idea. Students will stay a school the whole year until they gradute, and they need to spend time with their family. Some students don't really like school and they will get too stressed and breakdown over the year, so they need a long break from school. Students need time for theirselfs, so they don't stress as much. Students will stress over too much work and they have after school jobs, so they can't do their homework.

Having 3-4 weeks of summer break, a longer winter, and a week off in the spring and fall is a great idea. It will be easier to hold the information when you return in the fall. School days will be shorter since school year is longer. Not everyone has something to do over the 3 months of summer break. That's why I believe students should have 3-4 weeks of summer break, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
5EB7A0B134B4,"some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think students would not benefit being able to attend classes from home because they can not be on their telephone and not due what they are spouse to due.

First, they can get distracted, In my position

I Can get distracted went I am at home doing homework i want to wache TV even some time I do not finish my homework because i get a lot distracted. I want to play whit my brothers go out side play soccer and i say just for a little I am to playing with then but a get distracted and i for got the i have to do homework or study for a test. Some time I get distracted by seeing my brother playing video even went they is a lot of noise i get distracted because i want to what is happening or what is going on. I remember one day the I have to finish a test review at home because I do not have time to do it at school I do not finish because I get distracted by brothers. They were making a lot of noise and i could no concentrate because of then. My brothers are the same way as me they can get distracted fully easy and not pay attention on what they doing maybe they star by doing they homework but they do no finish because they get distracted by the TV or the video game.

Second, they can use the telephone some time I get a lot distracted whit my telephone because I away want to be in the telephone. Went i home I just want to be in my telephone and i do not do my homework. I get fully distracted because I want to text whit my friends or playing video games in my telephone and not Du what i suppose to to do. Went I am at home I have all I want my bed my telephone the TV the I forgot the I have to how or study for a quiz or test. Only because I at home and I have all i need some time i do not want to do anything

I get distracted fully easy and more if I have my telephone in front of me because i want to leasing to music or video chat my friend and talk and pay attention on what I suppose to due. Some time my mom tell that I have to stuff in the house so I have to do it even if I am doing homework or studying I have to what she say and then a can kip doing what i was doing. If I have my telephone whit me the only thing i what to do is be in the telephone because it is a easy way to get distracted and not due what you suppose to due.

Some people my say that if students have home school it will be good because some students can get bully at school and they do not want to go back. The is say for then because some the students do not ride the bus the parent have to take then to school and the take a lot of time some time because they have to wait. Even they are going late for work and they do not have tame to take then to school. They may say the if they have school at home they do not have to do all the work by taking then to school. some time a lot of kids get bully at school and it more easy for then do do it by home because they do not have to deal with at school they do to have to be worry what would happen to then the net they or what does people are going to do whit then, But I chose to not have school at because some people can get distracted I not saying the all people have the problem I am just saying the i have the problem they my not have. But I do not like have home school because i want to see my friend graduate whit then have fun some time go to party and now more people have more experience.

In solution, people can do what is best for you if you like do school by home because you do not like people or have personal problem or have i disability that you go it no one is going to say anything. But some time people want to have friends have fun because you are a person the like to be around people that good to. the only thing i am saying chose what is best for you not what is best for other people or what other people think. Make you own decision be proud of you no matter what.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
2844FD2BF83B,"I don't think students would be benefit to attend classes from home.

Reasons

1-difficult.

2-Get distracted.

3-confused.

First i don't think students would be benefit to attend classes from home. It can be hard if they don't undertand something. Is not the same the class in the computer to have a tecacher explaining you. If you have a question it's difficult to ask to the computer unlike to ask to a teacher.

Second i don't think students would be benefit to attend classes from home they can get distracted for anything. If they get lazy they can say they going to take the class later. if they want to watch a movie they going to forge thinks about the class. They can get distracted for anything like the phone,music,and the TV.Attend class from home would not benefit students if they want to hang out with their frinds they can leave the class in any moment unlike if they have a teacher giving the the class in the school they can respect the class,put more antention,and understand better the class.

Third i don't think students would be benefit to attend class from home they can get confused with the class. if the take the class online they can read the direction but sometimes even reading the directions students get confused.

is better to attends the classes in the school so a teacher can help students with anything students will need. teachers have the experience to explain students what they need to do about the class. attend classes online students basically are alone so is more confused to understand the class. in school if students get confused they can ask to someone else to understand. at home they dont have anybody so they have to think alot to understand. attend classes from home can affect students grades for less knowledge about the class unlike in the schools they have many opportunities to learn better.

In conclusion students would not be benefit to attend classes from home they can get distracted for anything. It can be more difficult to them to undertand the classes. they can get confused with things about the class for not have a teacher with them personality to be helping them to undertand the class.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.5
98AB65F5C7F9,"How to meet some people in many way in online or outside and to not speaking to another person like going out you cant speaking with a person in the shop, library, and going to play something to do outside. Some people change how the people they are. different people like to make new friend's by speaking to someone or everyone. Someone person are different form other person because people are not the someone form other. If someone don't speaking someone is not good to speaking someone form who you don't know. If you like to meet someone who you don't know speaking to the person, and before to to the person look at him or her, and be nice the him or her. if you think of something first think to speak the person make idea of your self.

I like to make friend all the time and i f make friend and his can be my friend too because he is my friend and to make is to be nice and good to everyone in main please. These many opportunities to make friend like help and work in a group and can meet new people in a group for class and form family can meet new people speak or no speak the new people.

Some people can change to not speak with no one because is not use self speak with someone you don't need to do. I think the best is to do anything or something. A positive in live is best to is you can have all of friends and negative you get a pet or just do it make friend.

When i go some please with my dog some don't speak with someone or i see a friend cell and with speak about anything and i go to the a store i speak with the workers to fun a tool for my house and i go to school i meet new people in my classes or out of class.

Some people are bed and good because i don't like the bed people and they get mad fast and the good people are so nice with everyone.",1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
3F80F96A6F5A,"Some people believe in praising a students to help them build self-esteems. They believe that students must be self-confident in order to learn. On the other hand, other people believe that self-esteems comes from achievements. I think that self-esteems comes from both learning and achievements, but it mostly come by telling a students that there work is good for these three reasons. One reason is that people are giving good complement to student for their work that the student have done, sometime people would want to have the stuff the students would create, and last people would say nice thing to students so the other people wouldn't hurt their feeling.

The first reason is that people are complementing to student for their work that student have created. Some people would say nice things and walk away or they would stay and talk about what the student made and the meaning behind what the student created. I remember when I was a little kid, I built a toy car and my mom like it. So when i'm older, I want to create my own car and show my mom how good I am at building cars. My mom was the one who has help me boost my self-esteem. That is what teachers should do to student if they want to boost their self-esteem.

Another reason, is that sometime people would want to have the stuff that students would create. For example, say if you made a painting and someone on the street saw it. Then the person would want to buy it and you sold it to him. That would make you want to create even more painting and sell it. It would make the student think that the person like your painting that you created and that boost you into selling more painting. The more stuff you create. The more people would want to buy it. That is an another reason to help boost students self-esteems.

The last reason is that people would say nice thing so they won't hurt your feeling, But they do that because there jealous that they can't do the stuff that you can create. There are some people in the world that just give you hateful comment about your creation. And that doesn't mean that you can stop doing what you want to do. It doesn't matter because there are other people that are gonna like the thing that you create. There are people out there that maybe want to buy your stuff probably even a famous person would want to buy it.

In conclusion, people would try to believe in students so they could have self-esteem. But there also people out in the word that maybe don't like the stuff that you create. But there also people that do like the stuff that you create. That is why people are giving good complement to student for their work that the student have done, they sometime would want to have the stuff that students would create, and last people would say nice thing to students so the other people wouldn't hurt their feeling.",4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
76FB58BB4BD7,"when i first came to the U.S.A

i was not able to speak English, and every time i went out to play or go to school people were showing me examples of what to do or where to do same for me if i want to go play soccer or go to the play ground ill point outside the window or draw a picture of it, i tried to come up with anther way to example what i want but examples was the only think avalibel for me until i learned English.

Example is not the mine thing in influencing others; it is the only thing because,thats the only way others will figure out what you talking about examples is what everyone use to help each other to also understand each other however,others say that example is not the mine thing to influencing other because, there are many other things to influence others for example, Google translator,Google,YouTube there is a lot of other apps that help to influence others.

i agree that Example is not the mine thing in influencing others; it is the only thing because , example is used every where and most of the time even when you want to speak to someone with another language and also kids see adult people as an example too them they see what they do and copy them example is used with everything for ex, for parents if they want there kid to be good they got to be an example of them or they have to show them an example of something or someone how to be behavior is one of the most important things because it show others hot to act and it it gives other people example of how to act in a sernat place for ex,if a kid go to a library and see tow adult being loud and playing around he going to do the same because he think that they doing the right thing because they are adult and should know how to act in place like that .

wall others say that Example is not the mine thing in influencing others because there are more thing that we can influence each others with technology made a lot for us that we can help and influence each other with other ways for ex, Google translator if i go to another country i dont need to show people examples of a museum or draw i can type it and show them or say it to them and they will give me direction and students that dont speak English can use a dictionary or Google to help them understand.    ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
E3D9EE7C68F1,"Have you ever wonder how many enjoyable activities are outside of the world? They're thousands of enjoyable activities outside the world. Most people like to spend time with their families outdoors such as going to community parks, state parks, and national parks. Not everyone likes to go outside to spend time with their family, or go to a place to have fun because they don't like to go outside that much, but most of the times you need to go and look around what's around the world. I would prefer someone should go to and spend time with their family, or just to have fun such as going to the zoo, going to Disney or travel to a different state where you live.

The first reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go to the zoo. Most zoo's can be a little boring, but you can find a way to have lots of fun. The zoo can bring you lots of fun, and enjoyment such as taking pictures with the animals, giving the animals their food, and touching and giving love to the animals that are in the zoo. For example, at the zoo you can learn some interesting facts about every kind of animal that are you very interest in. Also, giving lots of love to the animals like talking to them or touching them is a way to be relax. You can learn new things about animals and the history, and it can be interesting and fun at the same time. In my opinion, the zoo is a great place and a great activity to have fun.

The second reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go to like a Disney park.

A large of number of people that I have known go to Disney to have fun with their family members. For example, at a Disney park you can go and try different games there, eat some different type of food that you haven't tried yet, and go and take picture of princesses that you really want to meet. For example, if you watch Disney princesses, you can go and meet them in real life, and talk to them. Also, going to Disney and trying games or riding any type of game is going to bring you enjoyment. It will take you the stress that you have, and you will forget everything that you been going through. In my opinion, Disney is the second best place to go and have fun by yourself or with the people that is around you.

The third reason, why someone should go and have fun is to go and travel to a different state, or country that they have never been to. For example, going to the Bahamas is a great place to go, looking at museums of what had happened in that place. Also, going to the beach in the Bahamas is another way to have fun, the beach is going to relax you in a type of way that you will not imagine. Exploring the world, or trying new things from a different state or country is a type of having fun, You can got to different parks, different beaches, and different restaurants where you can try different type of foods that you haven't even tried and that are the bets. In my opinion, going to different countries, or different states that you have never been is the third reason why it's a great idea to go and have lots of fun.

Many people like to have fun in different ways not just being outside. Most people like to spend time alone or with their family members. There's different types of way to have fun at different places not only going to the zoo, going to Disney a park, or going to a place that you have never been or explore what is it like to be in another country. Find a way to have some fun outdoors and all the things that keeps you stress are going get away in a second. Spending time in something that you really love is a great feeling that you will have experience in your life. Have fun with all the people that you love and that is around you because spending time with them and going to parks with them is the best feeling that you ever will ever have. ",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
DA674E9EB26C,"What are some enjoyable activates to do outdoors at parks?. Well there is many ways but it also depends on what the park provides. some enjoyable activities at the park are, playing golf, you could go for a walk along the trail, you could play any sports in the field.

To start, there are many enjoyable activities you could do at the park. However, you could play golf at the park If you like to do golf. In many different parks they provide many different things. If you went to a national park there will be more fun activities to choice from because it is a nation park. Also the people you decide to go to the park will depend on how your mood will be. If you are interested in golf then that is what you could do while you are the park.

Next, another enjoyable activities is to go on a walk along the trail. Staying active is a good thing for humans. If you are having a bad day or if you are just not a good mood take a walk on the trail and you could refresh your mind. Many people when they arrive to a state park, community park, or a national park they go for walks. Their could be long trails or short trails. There is about 60% of people in the world that they like to walk. I could say that because I like to walk on the trail when I go to the parks.

To end, another enjoyable activities is to play any sport on the filed. There is a few people that like to play sports. I like to play volleyball. If you are a sporty person then you could play in the filed. You could play soccer,basketball,volleyball,football and many more sports. Plus you can stay active. In some parks they provide you some soccer balls and many more so that is a good thing.

To conclude with these are some enjoyable activities you could do at the any park. You could play golf, go for a walk, play any sports.

Thanks for reading.      ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E83BE2C46D0D,"In some schools they have a program that pairs older student with younger student. The older student are available to assist the younger student in order to succeed on their goal. ""Aww man, I **** hate this, I don't know how to make this spaghetti and meatball sandwich I had the wheat bread, the sauce, manssreala cheese, spaghetti and my meatballs what else in this world am I missing. Did you know that 50% of the population of older student have often fail because of lack of communication and the other half is lack of knowledge. I believed, If older student help the younger kids they will they both will succeed in different things. For example, communicating more helps the older student talk to the younger ones more often. For the younger ones they will understand their conflict and what they need to work on.

Learning to communicate more helps the older student talk to the younger ones more often. For the younger ones they will understand their conflict and what they need to work on. I learn my mistake because one of the older student name Generic_Name, help me with a problem involving math and science. Generic_Name love math and would love to help me, their were a lot of steps I need to do it was only five minutes when he was done, but it felt like an eternal. I understand why I was wrong and what I need to do in order to get it right. From my point of view I knew he was having trouble communicating with me because he was studding a lot and made mistakes. We both learn a lesson that nobody is perfect the first time. I love the quote that Leon Missie said at the convention. He said ""Nobody Is Perfect The First Time, and remember that everyone has a talent or skill."" That means everyone has made a mistake more than once and try to fix it."" I remember the time I did a terrible mistake, I was in a chemistry class In Generic_School I was doing in a experiment, I had to put on my safety first. I over did with the salt a little bit. In a dangerous chemical called La Muete, which means that it is poisonous, so the becker exploded in to a million pieces and all I saw was fire on my cloth and on the teacher desk .The teacher quickly got the fire extinguisher and put it on me first and then the fire form letting spread more and boy I got my **** kick by my mom and dad so hard that they made me pay for all the damage I created. So my teacher got me an assist too help me with the calculation so I don't mess up again. Eventually, I pass the class with a B-, I was relief that it was over and I won't do that chemical bond ever again.""

Often successes can help both young and older student. Sometimes the older student can make a mistake too and teach the younger student. That it is okay if you made a mistake, but make sure that you don't know something don't leave it blank just try and figure out what missing because the assist won't be there all ways. Life dosen't work like that, their are thing that we have to figure out on our own. My job is teach you what the problem that your stuck on and me learning how to communicate with others and you learning your problems, and trying to fix them.""I remember when I got my license at the age 21 and yes that means I crash a lot, turning in the wrong direction, and even broken into people yards. Yes, it really hard driving and I had this final attempt that if I don't pass then I don't ever get my license even when I really old. So I study hard and where i'm I supposed to go, stop when the light is red, Break when something is moving in the road, read the speed limit, park in a specific position ,and most importantly turn on the signal. I had an assist or should I say my friend Generic_Name, was with me and telling me what to do. I thought I was going to crash in to someones yard again but not this time, I was driving pretty go actually .So the day had come and I need to relaxed and not think about failing, and them my family will laugh at me for not passing, and I had to live with my parents all the time just because I can't drive. I stared to do go and the instructor showing me where to turn. After a few hours had passed I barely had passed with a C- and that not to go and not to bad. I had my license and my life was going go too.

To sum it all up, all over the world school have a program called ""Two is better than One"" it a program that allows older student assist the younger student in order for them to succeed in the conflicts there having trouble on It helps both old and younger students. It helps the older student to communicate more with people and so on and so forth. When the older student learn how to communicate with others they with eventually learn to help or talk to strangers more often. Failure can eventually lead to successes, like my driving license, I fail lots of times but that never stop me from getting my driving license. From that chemistry class that I almost took the whole school down with me. From that final attempt I learn that no matter how many time you fall there will always be a way to succeed. But there will be time were you need someone assist so they can help you. Did you have a difficult time on something and ask someone to help you or fail at a test and the teacher have you an assist in order for you to pass it again? ",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
73F2515B5BCE,"I disagree with the school board extending the school day by one and a half hours extra.

Because Students will no have enough sleep with one and a half hours extra of school with homework,

also students will have less free time, and also student wouldn't have enough time to go spend with there family.

If the school board extended the school day by one hour and a half then students wouldn't have enough time to sleep because they have to do there homework , and that take probably one to two hours to finish there homework and then they will have to eat and get ready for bed.

I like have my free time to do mostly what I want to do but if the school board extended's the school by an hour and a half then we wouldn't have as much time for free time and we wouldn't be able to go outside and play with are friends or play video games, everything that you like to do will be shorter.

Do you like spending time with your family I like spending time with family but if the school board extends the school day by one hour and a half then you wont have as much time to be and spend with your family like going outside for a walk or playing games or going out places like to eat and those times are going to be making memories not being in school most of the time.

Thats why I think students shouldn't have school extended one hour and a half so they can have more time to do there homework and have more time to sleep, and so that they can have enough time to play video games and play outside with there friends , and finally so they can spend time with there family and do fun activities with them.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
5D2B8506EC4F,"I agree with the statement because the first impression that we make can't be change complete even the try to change.

First impression is something no one can forget it can be attitude, love, feel but with all this impression we can not forget or change even we went to it will not be the same to impress someone with an ex we are attitude they ways we talk, walk even eat no one can change and someone try to impress his love to a girl he has be in love since children even someone come out of no where he will not be able to change the first impression of this person.

When we make the first impression to people even we know they will try to copied or change it will be impossible because everyone know the impression it is not something that we can change even we change it is not going be the same an example Generic_Name tried to impression Generic_Name with her food Generic_Name love it and went to make the same food it will be the same but it will not taste the same way because he don't known what kind of ingredient she put in and even she tell him it will not going taste the same so every first impression can not be change.

We known what it is a first impression are almost impossible to change because it kind like feeling no one can change because impression is something we do to impress people with what we have sometime is not even real or fake but some time we think it real, Generic_Name lied about her personality and family to try to impression hers friends in school they will believe her so impression can be sometime a lie but impossible to change.

We need to understand that first impression it something that it impossible to change and we need to believe to our self and not try to change other people first impression or copied them it will be painful to retry even to we known but it will not going to be the same.        ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
6C991A1A6C39,"Some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones. The 20% the students, not go to school because is more difficult, but 80% the students go to school students don't benefit because have a distraction in home the TVs, are distraction or watching movies the students not focus in work in study some not doing a work or copies in internet .

Students don't have a friends because not work in groups sometime not distraction with other students and more distraction in home sometime not focus some students said 5% the students not focus in house because the cell phones distract the students not benefit being able to attend classes from home.

The some students story and online because in the morning not necessary take a shower or not wake up late, but some students is more fanny story in school because distract more went a house.

The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school.

The students said is more easy go to school for have more friends and you understand more because the teacher explain you went you have a question the teacher explain you or went you have a work and you need help she explain you.

The peoples said is more easy went you story is school because not pay for you education is more fanny one time in here in school the students talking about the school pay but in online some people said is a bad idea some people said is a god idea about this topic.

The students, went you go to school has a library, old the material paper, or notebook, doing homework, and has a lunch, break fast in the morning, and the after noon so you have old the classes for example art, geographic, and music etc. Some students, and some people said is more easy story and the home because some people dont doing a bulling for a skin color.

The video conferencing you need to pay for a classes, in work some students have a job, and pay school.

some school offer distance learning as an opinion for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. the students not focus in home sometime, for the TV, video games, and cell phones.

The students is not a god idea to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because some students copies a test in home or use a internet for a project or something like that. Connected to, served by, or available through a system and especially a computer or telecommunications system as the internet also done while connected to a system, online shopping.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
51CE1DCC5307,"Some people might have heard this before, ""The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" This is what the great artist Michelangelo said. People might not agree with this, yet setting aims higher is better. This is because by setting our aim high, people will be able to achieve bigger goals. Setting aims high might conceive more unique thoughts than people with rivet thoughts that set their aims too low. There can be significant possibilities towards many directions too.

Firstly, by setting your aim high, there can be significant possibilities towards many directions. Many people set their aims before they do or think about something. For example, which do you think will have more possibilities for job. Just applying for cleaning dishes because that's easy, or applying for every work field you can work for. This is the same for schools. For an other example, a student that does not know what he wants to do for his future choosing to go to the military, or going to collage with many opportunities. Going to the collage can increase the job opportunities and he might find a better job than going to military.

Furthermore, setting our aim high will help people to conceive more unique or their real thoughts than people with rivet thoughts that set their aim too low. For example, people that aim low are most likely conceal or are not aware of their thoughts. This is because people that aim low will not try to achieve something too hard for them. On the other hand, people that aim high will try to achieve more harder tasks, and think about more things. This will help the human brains to develop and can help people to think in a unique way than other people. Famous artists that have created significant art works could have not created anything great if they have set a limit for their self. They all did not make any limit for their self and their abilities to create great works. All the unique ideas and arts exist because the famous artists aimed high.

In addition, by setting our aim high we can achieve bigger goals than setting a lower aim for a higher possibility. For example, Just working for the minimum requirement for an assignment than working for the maximum of that assignment, which will give you a better grade? The answer will most likely be working for the maximum of the assignment. If you have your aim low you might give up before you achieve a task even if that was an important task. If your aim is high you won't give up and achieve the task. Therefore, having your aim higher is better than just trying to do the easiest thing you can.

Some people might say that by setting the aim too high that can make them suffer. This can be true, but that does not mean you should aim too low. what is important is to keep everything balanced to the best. Everyone has been said to eat a balanced meal when they were a small child. This is the same for everything. Understanding your own abilities and setting the aim to what you can possibly achieve rather than setting the goal for something easy. Some might say that if people don't aim high they won't have to work hard, so they will have less stress. They might have less stress but not every stress is bad for people. Stress can even help people sometimes. For example, I was a student in Japan that hated school and was too lazy to do any work. I had a lot of stress and that made me stay at home all the time. Staying at home did not relieve my stress at all, and I did not feel good about my self. Therefore, I chose to go to school again. Stress will mostly affect bad for you, but there are good affects too.

Finally, The hole point about this is that running away and choosing the easy way is not the best decision. Aiming low might look like it's the simple and easy way thats safer but whats really the danger is for people to forget to aim high and believe they can achieve great things. The best is to make a decision that wont make you regret and making the best aim you can make. No one has to be excellent or perfect, but everyone should try their best in their short life so they can die with no regret.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
AF96A2176FB7,"Do you think students should have online classes at home? Do you think this will benefit the students in their life? In this paper, I will argue that students should not get online classes.

Students should not get online classes at home, because some students have to work and they are too busy to take online classes. Some people do not go to school, but they take online classes. some students work at night and they do not have time to take online classes. Students should not take online classes, because schools are for learning and home is for students to have fun, relax, and do what you want to do. Students should not take online classes, because they need to enjoy their free time while they are not in school. I do not want to take online classes, because I work at night and I do not have time to use online classes. My friend takes online classes when he is at home, but online classes took some of his free time.

Some people say, that students should have online classes because they need to focus in school and that they should start planning what they want to do when they are grown up and out of school. They are wrong, because life is not just to focus on what you want to do when you finish school, is to enjoy it and do whatever they want to do in their life. Some people want the best for their kids, but life is one and they should enjoy it.

I think in the future some students will go to school and do online classes in their free time, so they can focus on what they want. Some students will go to school, but they will not do online classes because they want to have a good career, but they do not want an excellent life like the other students.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
FAC8305E209D,"When I was working at the Daycare, it was not only me working and taking care of the kids, there was three more ladies doing the same job and working all together. So I think that is more benefit working in group that working alone because it make easily the things.

First, the first thing we do is give the kids breakfast, and while the kids are eating two of the ladies are looking after them, and the others two, are planning the activity that the kids are going to be doing during the day and try to keep them busy. Also all ladies give ideas and at the end we try to put all ideas together and work on it as a team.

While the day is passing, we do everything we need to teach and do the activities, and working all together is easily for us to finish early. when we finish early we always read or dance until the time to go home comes. Also we disgust who was the one that behave was good and we also give stars for the behavior to kids. Sometimes the kid don't behave well and if there were only one person taking care of the kids it most be difficult to do what we all four need to do.

Also, everyone goal is to keep the kids safe,having fun, and also learning who to write, so at the time for them go to school they are going to feel relative and don't be scare of going to a regular school. And when that happen is how we know that we make a work together.

As you see, I feel that is more beneficial working together in a group because, everyone in the group has ideas, is easily to finnish everything fast and also everyone has the same goal.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
9B4EEAAB752E,"Ralph Waldo Emerson believe that ""to be yourself in a world that constantly trying to make you something else you not is the greater accomplishment."" personally i disagree only cause now a days most young adults, child, and teens prefer to be around the same individuals who act, talk and basically does everything the same exact way. Its a little creepy in all honesty but its the world we live in where people just wanna fit in and act normal to seek comfort and approval from someone else even when they dont need. another reason i do not agree is cause this generation prefers technology over human contact so its easy to see why they dont go their own path but instead they prefer to just follow the crowd and not follow what they want its mind blowing how we gotta take an sol too just to see if you smart when all you can do is just sit in a class and listen to a student and see how smart they are without a dummy boy test but im just a young student whos following the crowd just to get a diploma even tho at this point a diploma will barley take you far but it looks good on resume so thats why i am doing this exact test to follow the crowd of dead students just trying to graduate for a family that dont even care if im dead or alive as long as i got a diploma ",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
89974AB1B1B1,"I believe that many accomplishments could be done if you put your focus to it. Sometimes it may be finished on its own without anyone doing nothing about it. I have completed quite a few goals in my life because it was all i would put my focus to. With certain things it takes one of another to be with you through it to help you, Because it would depend on what you need to have done. I've helped lots of people get through on what they needed and sometimes its more of what has to be done.

People always need to help themselves because it would make them better in their life in my opinion. Its good to see people doing well because of the achievements they have decided to complete. lots of amazing opportunities like you could get a good job, A new car, House or just anything that you would want in general. The small things in life could be just done on its own without you or anyone having to do something about it.

So overall many achievements would be done if you are always working hard for it and could be better if you do more than what you're suppose to do. It's great to help yourself in life because you don't know how good it would turn out in the end. There is people that i know that always worked hard for what they wanted in life and got what they needed. Such good things could happen to anyone.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
01350DF42AED,"When, the people decide to have a good posture, in they live of thing was be better. Even though some people have a negative attitude in their live, all the thing was bad and not want doing noting for fair to make mistakes,nevertheless people has a good attitude always, have a good attitude see the live of the other way,for example when give you a so bad news but you take a good posture and said is okay everything was good,and take a good attitude in the school.

If the people will have a good posture in all position of their live, not have so much preocupation they was be more happy. when you have a big text in the school although,

you never can pass this text but you have a positive attitude, of one you console will call you, and said you pass the text. This is important because the people believe in will pass and when they pass was feel so good, because they this text was so hart, but never to surrender.

when one person go to the hospital and the doctor said to catch an illness, instead of think in all the negative thing like i never been the same person, i will been died, they take a decision of okay is a little illness, will pass end some days, my lives will be a little different, but everything will be good.

See the live in a positive way is think the all thing are possible, always don't care the big was the problem be happy, watch the most terror situation like the best wait possible and don't be worry for all the thing that happen in your like be the most happy you can and see the most bigger problem like the most little ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
B821E1D68BE7,"our big break. Summer is a season with very hot weather schools take this whole season to give students a big break summer is almost 2 months of break .Although some educators feel that the summer break is too long and schools should be year round schools. Which mean schools have one month of summer and a longer winter break. Nevertheless I think schools should not be year round schools because summer have a very hard weather also students use this time to plan some trip with family and friends.

Summer has a very hard weather to even think go to schools. Some day the temperature goes to 96c or more this is to hot for students. This hot temperature will make students swearing a lot and have very hard head hurt during class time level of streets will increase make students get bad grades or be angry all this time. Students who work in hot areas will feel more difficult to do a simple thing than students who work in a warm area . Hot areas make you not focus in your work.

In summer students have 2 months to enjoy make some family trip or things like that .Some students and families take this time to make some big family vacation plan. students wait for this time of the year to do their vacations. Because summer is a perfect time to go to the beach with family and friends or go outside the country to visit other country as we do not have school in summer we do not miss any day of school . trip can take so much time and students think summer is a perfect time to do. In summer students have enough time do anything students want some students use this time to find a job during summer as students do not have school they are more focus making money,so summer is very important to us to have some time with our family or make money.

In conclusion summer is a hard time to go to school but a good time to make some trip or money so the government should not cut off our summer. this is our time this is our big break. this when students can relax for a very long period without any preoccupation about schools work summer just happen one time each year students have to enjoy students deserve it for all hard work than students did in the whole school year. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
FC36DBAE640B,"An old proverb says honesty is the best policy, but what happen if the policy with being honest at all time. The policy can help people to making decisons in they life. The policy making by goverment and citizen need to following that but not mean you need to follow all. Last year, I have a best friend she has a nice charater like honesty , helpfull, good with everyone.... I talk with her about my parent, my sister, what i like or what i hate, i tell her everythings about me and i think she can keep those my clandestine because we are friend. But not, she so honest, somebody ask about those my clandestine to tease me and she answer all, about mine, my clandestines for they and i will be laughing stock with everyone."" Honesty is a best policy"", honesty is a nice charater but you don't need to being honest at every place and every time. A fantasy men invite me to buy somethings for him, and i believe him because i am so honest and i think everyone will be good and honesty as me. Finally, i know him trick me but now i cannot do anything because him drop off. ....Sometime you need withstand, forceful, don't believe anything or anyone because you don't know what they want and give out your decision by your self. I think honesty it is nice quality and it need to be on each person but not that mean we being honest at all time.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
C194E48A8236,"Technology had positives effects in people lives, it helps them in many ways like emergency, transport, and security.

Technology helps people in case of emergency, it helps them to comunicate with emergencies. It helps keep people alive in the way to the hospital. Also technology can help doctors, to determinate what is wrong with the patient. It helps doctors when they make an peration.

Technology helps people with transportation, people can travel around the country from place to place. People use transportation when they have to work. Also helps people in case of emergency, by taking them to the hospital. if someone wants to travel to others country, they can take a airplane or a helicopter.

Technology helps people in education, teachers use technology to teach. In schools they use technology to teach student how our first genaration was, how they dress and how hard was to live in the time. Student can find any information about projects in the internet. After school students can do their homework instead going to other places like in the pass.

Technology helps people with security, people use cameras to keep secure places. They use cameras in places like shopping store, food markets, restaurants and other places. Technology also helps with the traffic security, like lights in the road to see where are you going, see if the car infront of you stops, and cars have cameras to see when you are going back.

In conclusion technology had a great impact on peoples lieves, because it helps alot with transport, emergency, education and other. People will have more avanced technology in the future. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
113436EC45E2,"The philosopher Albert Schweitzer thought the example is not important and is not the main thing to influencing others, it is the only thing. Now the society thing different around the world many persons like the parents thing they need to give a good example their sons. the teacher need to be good example from their students at the school. Famous people like their fans sometimes they are under 12 ages. if the persons did not given to the new generation good example they can not be influencing good things in them.

The parents they are the best example for their sons, and daughter at home. Because at home sometimes is the first school for our child that can has, there we learn speak, walk, and who clothing you. Example: if her father is a drunk, and smoker what is a example him given to his sons. That would by influencing in her sons and can destroy the future of them. This situation happen in many family and children start to have problem with the authority. And is the bad example that their parents given to them . And is no only the things the parents give to her sons nevertheless they need more then a example, more then things like expensive clothes. and shoe many of them they need a parents that care of them.

The teacher after the father they are so important to give a example of respect, how can be responsible with our homework they challenge us , with no matter the obstacle is front of us we can do it many of the teacher support you in the situation of the school but they teach us who can we do our work when be adults and they start to explain many thinks that you dont know example: if you do something wrong they help us to find a situation like i math and they do not say bad thinks when you do something wrong because they respect you but we like a students need to do it too. And with this attitude is like a teacher can influencing in a student with the respect.

Leader is person that is caretaker of a group of people it is in the school, in a church in many places we can find one. This one example of who can be influences of a movement like in the church that person need to be example of his people than the people follow him or she. Example: always a leader need to support the people no the people to him. Because the leader teach them how can be a good leader and him give example of that like a good person,good attitude, friendly. etc. And with his example this is the person can influence the other person without things and inspire more person that one day them teach another

In conclusion, to be a examples is the main thing to be a influence in the world and any areas. i desaggres because i think for influence to another persons. So your must be the best example you can because one they more then one person will fallow your steps. Like on my neighborhood or community helped who needed one day on person can do the same thing for anothers.           ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
B1A435B54D4A,"It is not a good idea that the students commit to a career at a young age, because it will be to complicataed and difficult for them to take high school classes and their college classes at the same time , however if their high school are select to guide them toward a specif careeer let them take similar classes for example first week high school classes, and second week college classes that way they will not struggle in both differents courses and they can graduate with good grades . Also, it would be a good opportunitie for them to get done their career at a young age and start making money from what they are apassionated on it farthermore, some young people are interest in work on what they like and this could be a great apportunitie for them to commit to a career and start workin on what they have been apassionated on it and get a job that it would be able to made their families proud of them.

Commit a career at a young age give people the responsability to help their families and support them and with the time people at a young a age get more mature in life ,inorder for people to have a great future in life they should take their own responsabilities and learn from their mistake and with the past of time people learn how important life it's ;while people are gettting more elavate then others peple start to descriminate others who are down don't let people wash your head

,always be you because ,today you are up and tomorrow no body no it don't let appearance cheat on you.

Parents have to give support their child with the decision to commit a careeer at a young age, because that's what they want; don't be desagree with them because the only thing that they want is to be independent and lot of mothers don't let their childs be an adult; farthermore, mother's have to impulse their child to make their own decisions and let them learn from their mistakes.

If their sons/daughters go to work or finish their careers far away from their homes it will hurt to their families, understand they're been more adults them your litles baby's no more it doesn't matter if they are your adorations let them be free.

In conclusion,people are allow to make their own decisions and learn from their mistakes and next time they can make better decisions to allow them to choose the better opportunities people put on their life inorder to know what's right and wrong and wich make them to be more responsibles and mature in life.

Many have come to realize that life doesn't always is pink color ,people have to make their best effort doesn't mater if you fall down or make mistakes ,wake up and do it again until you do it right.",4.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
3F2941C11D95,"By extending the school day two hours, students and teachers will have more advantages to learn and to teach.

I agree to follow this model by extending the school day two hours. There are many reasons of why it will be better and will benefit us as students. One of the reasons is that we will have more time in the weekend to review our notes, homework, and things that we need help with. Another reason is that we will be doing the same forty hours of school even if we will have a four-day school week. It also will benefit teachers by increasing their time to review test or projects made by the students.

Most of the time there are things at school that we do not really understand, and a four-day school week will give us more time to study and review these things at home. We the students have the opportunity to go to school and graduate, but also some of us have obligations and responsibilities. For example in my personal life, I have to work after school everyday. And most of the time when I get home, I feel tired and I just go to sleep, I forget if I have homework or not. Therefore this model will give us more time to work and being less worry about going to school five-day week. We can concentrate at school four days and the other day we can work and do homework or projects when we have to.

Also a four-day school week will benefit us because we will be doing the same forty hours. Therefore our grades and education would not change. And I do not think that is necessary to study all five days, it is not about how many days do you go to school, is about how you take advantages from it. For example if you go to school everyday just to talk with your teammates, is like you were absent. For that reason I agree to extend the two hours of school, that way we can concentrate four days and having in mind that we will have three days to study or to keep learning at home.

Another reason of why I agree to extend the school day, is because it will benefit the teachers also. It will benefit the teachers by giving them more time to review and grade homework, projects or test that students took in the class. It also will give us the opportunity to spend more time with our families and people around us. For example, I work with my father in construction, and I almost do not see him all day until the night. This four-day school week, will give me the opportunity to spend a entire day working with him without being worry about the school for a day. And just like me, there is a lot of people who will be benefit from it.

Finally, school should be extended two hours day, that way we can have more time in the weekend to prepare for tests, teachers will have more time to grade them. And we will have three days to spend with our families.                     ",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
84765FE3E472,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with other. People can check out book,shop, and play games without speaking to another person. It is limited human contact do to technology.

Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with another. It is a fact that we need human contact humanity has been working to gather for hundreds of years we are more a part today then we have aver been. That's why it is so in portent to speak to a new people .That is why we need to take a break from technology.

technology allows people to check out book. shop and play games but It is a biological need for human contact with a another person. We get to use to ordering it off online and we need to cheng that. Kids are getting to use to video games and shopping online. I under stand that it makes it easy but are is a person going to make new friend and how are you going to meet new people in life.

It is limiting human contact kids are given tablets before they can even walk we are getting no wonder you see kid walking alone you they dont do anything but get on there Phone in class are work they are not forecast on just the'er Phone and nothing else.    ",2.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
ED81EC443A69,"I remember one summer vacation, that my family and I took, where we went to another state to visit another relative that we haven't seen in awhile. Summer vacation had been the same for many years, summer vacation is when teenagers take a break from school to enjoy what they like to do during their free time. By having a long summer vacation, does not affect students to retain information from the past. teens should know that summer vacation is when they can enjoy their break to do what they want for fun.

First reason, why teens should know that summer vacation is for them to enjoy, is because they can spend time with their family. For example, the whole family can got to another state to visit another relatives that they have not seen in awhile. By spending more time with their family; consequently, teens can be more closer to their family. Teens can also, enjoy their summer vacation with their family by playing video games, watching movies, and go on a road trip.

another reason, why teens should know that summer vacation is for them to enjoy, is that they can hangout with friends. teenagers hangs out with friends to go to a party, or to watch a movie. by hanging out with friends teens can do what they think is fun for them and their friends. For example, teens can have a fun time playing pool with their friends or just by going to a gym. In addition, teens can also have fun with their friends by having a sleep over or go for a camping trip.

Lastly, on why students should know that summer vacation, is for them to enjoy, is that they are away from school, by being away from school students can have more time to have fun and do the things that are important to them. For example, students can stay up late and does not have to wake up early in the morning. However, teens can have more time in their hands, instead of having to learn.

In conclusion, these are the three most important opinions, on why teens should know that their summer is for them to enjoy, by having more time for summer vacation, teens can enjoy more time with their family and friends.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
E8EE54F7A2AD,"As students are getting involved in activities and extracurricular activities and get better in their educational experiences and others students are having short time to do their homework and assigments, so this decision should be left to students and families and sometimes school should control.

Some students already know what they want for their future life and doing this activities they are enriching their educational experiences and getting ready for what they want to do for their future, so in this possition shools should not control this envolment on this activites instead they have bad grades, missing classes or being absent to school. for example my friend Generic_Name likes technology and he is taking an academic class and to take that class he needs to go to another school but luckly his main school gives him the opportunty to take him to the another school, and he already know that this class will help him on his career and his taking care of his grades and at the same time taking care about his academic class.

Now there are other students that are doing this activiteis and they are nnot totaly about what they are doing and they are forgetting about their shool. So if this is happenning is when schools shouold control students envolment in this activities because they will have bad grades on their classes and will miss school year and this will afect thier careers. for example , I do not kniw what I really want for my future and I am getting involved in many activities at school but I am not forgettimg about my assigments for school and I do not have basd grades.

In conclusion there could be reasons when schools should or should not control about students involment in this extracurricular activities because sometimes they will have question aboout something so school may help to answer their questions. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
E73CF852AC12,"Positive attitude is the key to be successful in life. Most of the time older people or somebody you don't really know they will tell you to give all your effort and think smart. By having a positive attitude people feel more happy and comfortable. For example,when they have a positive attitude people stars to give you some advises from the experiences they have been through. In life to have a positive attitude we have to know how to deal with our problems even tho sometimes we might think we can not do it but, there is always a solution and after all that has happened we learn how to have a smart thinking and not giving up.

Having a positive attitude makes people have a good communication with others. When having a conversation with another person you can learn more about anything. Sometimes the people who has good skills or positive attitude in their jobs or any other occupations they have the opportunity to earn a higher position in their job. For example,all managers have that position because they have showed that they can have a good attitude with themselves and other people. This gives them the chance to be a successful person in life and help to become as them.

Education is also a big influence and how a person can have a good attitude and good values. Life teaches people how to control their emotions and help those who need it. In life to become successful people needs to have a goal and a plan how they are going to accomplish that. I know sometimes we have many problems and we think it not possible to have a good attitude but, there is a way how to deal with bad attitude and always have in mind the goal we want to accomplish one day.

There is always people who is going to say negative things to others instead of give them advises. Also many people think they can not do it after they try the first time and did not happened how they expected. People has to keep in mind that not always everything will be easy to get and there will be obstacles in life that will make you feel that you can not get what you want. By thinking and having a positive attitude people can make it become true just don not give until you have reached your goal.

In conclusion,in my opinion having a positive attitude can make people become successful in life. Be some educated persons and listen to what others say to them. Many older people or family might not want to see you fail and that is the reason for those who keep a positive attitude so they will be proud of those who protrude in life. Giving up would never be option for those who really have the desire to accomplish what they want. It is not going to be easy to always have a positive mind but,if the person really wants that then it will give all it's effort.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
800FE9615C63,"The misnister of

Wilnston churchill, he say that success in life or anyother things, theres a failure and don't lose enthusiasm because of that litlle things or because you fail one time in your try.

I agree with the minister churchill say because succsee it's a way to improve your skills or be betther in what you did and you try to not haves more make mistakes annymore, success can have failure but also you can lern for them, and learn how to rersolve your pronlemsand see how far you can go by trying, how you can have more expiriense by traying and traying again and again, no making mistakes annymore so the next time you don't have the same mistakes or pronblems because you larn about it.

I think with success you can learn a lot of experiance in your life, because with your failure you learn about it, because if you leave it like that you not trying and you are not exploing your self, so if you exploit your self you can see how far you can go to resolve the problems or the mistake you have.

So if you explod your self trying more and more you can maybe resolve the problem or see how far you can go to find a solution, the thing is if you keep trying your best in somthing you don't know exacly what it is or how to resolve it in many times you can find a solution and fix it.

failure is not you are not going to resolve it because if you are doing your best but you keep failure is becuase you need to find the problem you are not seeing, to resolve it failuture is not because is not working success is because you didn't find the solution at your problem.

For my conclusion for success you have to pass for a lot of problems and mistakes so you can find a solution for it, in your life if you don't explow your self you won't know what was the problem to that but if you explow your self you can find the solution and also learn from that, trying hard and hard moust of the times you can find a solution for evryting and that is how you also you can help others with they problems like when they say two heads is better then one.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
907FC59841EC,"I disagree to school board adding an half hours to school each day. I think is bad because adding another half hour to takes time away from there family and it takes to be with there family.

some children do not have time to see their family in the week days because there mom or dad comes home after they are going to sleep or before they go to school but maybe Fridays to Sundays is when they can see their family. Some students don't have time to say a few hours because some students have sports to do or they are going do something else at home or have to go see the doctor.

If they add a half hour to the school system I think all most all of the student will not come to school half of the school year. I disagree to the school board adding a half hour to school each day. I been to school all year except when I have to go the doctor for cheek up that is the only time I miss school. I play sports so I do not have time say a little bet longer of school or I am not on the term anymore.

To sum up I think school should be the some as it is or take sum time of school because is too long to add time to it. All in all school help as to learn.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
ECE377D2E967,"Dear principal,

I think that every students should perform and they should be required to perform community service. For example some children and others clean up litter.

But there are so many children who do not want to help other to get the job done .

The principal need to tell other to get the community clean. Everyone need to take position on the required to perform community service. we need to keep our community clean. Everybody need to be part of the job. I think every one should know that we need thing clean",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.5
451A840C382E,"yes i am agree with Emerson statement: if we attempt to do something in our life to make a better life or what we have already otherwise we will never Develope.

what kind of attempting we have to do for development? we need to have education for development that we can make our life better.

we can start our education from beginning of our life which is called school, college, university, and etc.

we should learn and keep our education in these places until we reach to our goal and success.

education is a best option for us that we can know everything, make our mistake correct, and we try to receive our diploma as soon as possible by hard studying, and every day learning the new things base on our life.

we should looking for the way that we can grow our self and do not lose our opportunity in during our life.

education is a process of life can grow your mind to better know about new stuff. this is a chance probably happen for one time, but it doesnt matter whenever you get it. basically when the students finish these process,

they will graduate, and then they will gain their diploma from any of those places after that, they will become a educated person with a high careers in their society.

although, some of the people dont like studying, or maybe they dont want it, they are preferring work careers instead of education.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
992DB55B9726,"When I think about wisdom I think about my grandpa he tell me story of how he lived back in his countries. He talk about how he grow up poor and barely had anything to eat or get though the day and how going to school was a big deal. He also told me how his brother and father died when he was six-eight, but he also told me how he came to America and how hard it was.

When my grandpa was born he was born poor. He had one brother a dad and a mom his dad did constructing and his mom most got everyone ready for school and tried to make everyone food. The closest school near my grandpa was 3.4miles away he had to go walking, but he went to anyway school he cared about his learning and he found it fun. It was a big deal to go to school where my grandpa lived or lived near by not many people get even get to go school at all it was that special.

My grandpa was only five when his father died his father was a man with a lot of problem. His father got him self into so much other people and gang. People looked for father but he kept low until one day he went to work and there were four people waiting for him he tried to run but he was to late because one of them shot him with gun they left him with three gun shot in his body laying on dirt he bleed out before the they could come and save him.

As for grandpa brother he got sick he said sick for two months my grandpa told me he was smart man he teach my grandpa how read and write better my grandpa said ""he the reason why he got such high grades in school"" when he got sick that when my grandpa tried to do everything for him so he can stay alive but back then medicine wasn't very good, and keep in mind we not in the u. s.a and it the year 1976 and if you did have that type of medicine it very expense. The most my grandpa and his mom can do is pray to god every night to get his blessing for his brother and his brother died in his sleep. They dug out a grave for him and everyone said there prayers his mother won't stop crying for one month but then she accept the fact he was dead.

When my grandpa got more older had two daughter and two son and he meant my grandma. He had to take the test to go to u. s.a. He told me it was hard because you had to learn a lot about u. s.a off of a notebook they give and out of that notebook they ask you 50 question out of the 200 question they could ask you, and it all random after he passed him he start to pack his back to America he said ""bye"" to my grandma his two daughter and two sons. When he was going to America he wanted to go to Virginia and he did he told me it was hard at first because he only know a little bit a of English he was looking for a job and he found one he worked at a restaurant and two other job once he start to make money he start to save it up to bring his daughters and sons and his wife he took him about 8 months he said to get all the money saved up. Once he brought them I was born soon after we lived in Generic_City for as long as i can remember now my grandpa works at a schools and is happy with things are right now.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
EBA7A8A0384C,"Some people be asking when some one ask them ""where is one place in the world you would like to visit!!"" Well,Those people might not have an answer for that question,but I do. You might love the place I want to go to or you might not like it,at the end its your choice if you like the place or not. Where is one place in the world you would like to visit this place,and what you would want to do or see once you arrive there.

First,One place i would want to visit is Spain because there are beautiful places like for example Generic_City,Spain orGeneric_City,Spain. Those are the two places that majority of the people wants to visit those places. Majority of the people want to visit Generic_City,Spain orGeneric_City,Spain because of the soccer teams that are there. One of them its called Generic_City and the other team called Real Generic_City. Those are the two soccer team majority of the people in this world prefer.

Second,One place i would want to go specificly is Generic_City,Spain because there a stadium thats from a soccer knowns as the Real Generic_City. I heard that it's a good place to be distracted from all your work and issues. What i want to see when i arrive at Generic_City spain is the beautiful statue that are in there. In spain there is beautiful places people can go. You can go to resturant which some of those resturant have good food.

Third,Spain it's located in europe. Most of the people love traveling to europe because there are some countries lots of people might like. For example,portugal,france,and more. It's so pretty if u see the country from up in the sky even tho when it's at night,all the lights will be lighting up.

In conclusion,Spain might be one of the people favorite country to visit. Spain is full of history too. I just wanted to say that spain might be the country you might want to take a break of whatever thing that's giving you a hard time. Is this country you're favorite country cause this is my favorite country. Hope that this information helped you so much and to figure out if you were stuck on which country you liked the most and where you want to travel.",4.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
53633B5F5F15,"Some people say that it is impossible to change your first impressions. You learn from your experiences because your action, words you use or say, and your appearance can show exactly who you are. People agree with this statement because you can change your appearance, words you used and your actions.

First of all, when you meet someone for the first time the way you act is important. Due to the fact that your actions speak louder than words is true. Your actions are things you can not change from your first impressions. When you start to act in front of somebody you just met, do not be mean or rude to them.

If you do that they will think you are not a good person to be around. You need to make sure you do not mess up the first time.

When you speak to someone you just met do not use bad words because if you do they will think you do not know how to talk to someone. When you talk ,you can use big words or just talk normal because no matter how many times you talk well to them you are gaining their trust. Make sure you do not mess up or stutter a lot I know you may stutter but you can always try your best not to stutter so much. If you mess up some people are nice enough to give you a second chance. Make sure you do not talk with your hands when you meet someone new.

In addition your appearance is the most important thing of first impressions. Your appearance is something you can not change. Your appearance is the way you look on the outside and inside . People always focus on people appearance the way you act and the words you say but mostly on your appearance. When you have a bad appearance they will think you are bad person and they will not want to be friends with you. If you have good appearance they might like to be friends with you, but it depends on their first impressions too.

If you like the way they act or the they talk or most of all their appearance. If their first impressions was good then you might want to be friends with them. Your first impressions are impossible to get out of your head and also impossible to change.

On the other hand you might be able to change people's minds. Some days you can have a bad day and other days you might have a good day. Some people appect that you are having a bad day and they know you are not like that. However, no matter what happens to you there is always a second chance at first impressions.

To sum up some people say that your first impressions are impossible to change and people agree with that. The important things are your actions, words, and your appearance. People will always learn from their own experiences. You need to always be careful of what you do, say and look like to someone. Clearly, you meet new people everyday.                 ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
E738D8E24101,"Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Students should be active in all the school year even for the intire life. I belive that be active help us to increase our skills and the practice made an expert. In the other hand,others belive that be inactive can result good and help them to don't become tired and old to fast. The people do more accomplish if they are always doing somenthing,students who practice sports can become better they have more resistence,and Moreover,Stay active can help us to be more profecional even in a jod. Exercise help our body to stay healthy.

However not everyone is agree with this position. Some people belive that stay inactive is more accomplish because doing the same thing can become bored,Doing nothing doesn't help us to progress and be success for the intire life,The students who don't practice any sport or are not involve in any school program have more time to study and rest their maind that can result good in their final grade.

Forthemore,be active help us to increase our skils and the practice made an expert because if we are always active in what the teacher tell us to do at school,we can increase and be more and more faster the next time,that also can help to find a job because every boss want a good worker, and also that give us a good reffert because anyone can say good things about us depending on what we have done do far at schools,even outside the school like comunity service.

In addition,students who practice sports can become better because they can have more resistence and their body is healthy,also they can be hard worker in the future because their body is already made to bear that,practice sports at the schools is good because students recive credits for that and a reward if they win,that can give us new experiences and fun time also makes new friends who like to be active like me and others students around the country and around the world.

Moreover,sleep good and having the hours to rest help us to be active the next day don't feeling tired and sleepy because the students have to wake up early on the morning and gives all what they have at the school,everyone want to be a good student and pass the tests and everything,also be active depend in how much energy we have thats way we have to eat on the morning to have energy and be active the all day.

Finally,it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something because we can get our goals working hard,students making goals to the end of the school year, stay active help to makes goals and get what we want to the of the school year,stay active can include be participate en class,colarate in a school proyet,sport team,drama,school announcement and everything that involve school learning,after Hig School or in the collage,be active helps to go to the collage because we can get a Beca for our work in Hing School.

Overall,stay active is more accomplish and help us to the entire life and make us better now and in the future because if we do the things rigth,we can earn more money when we start to work,stay active not only benifit us also the people around us because they can see us that we never stay in one place thats mean we are not conformist a person or student who want to overcome their self. Students should be give all they have by participating and be active. but be active deppend in everyone be active is not by force is how they want to be.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
C4A874260D21,"Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feel that the summer break is too long and when they return in the fall, they become more lazy and they can't retain information as easily when they were in school.

Summer break is the only long break that the school gave to the students to do all the things that they couldn't do during the school year and they can rest for a long preiod. I don't agree for these reasons:

First, A lot of students wants to work during the school year or do other things that take more time to do, but they can't do it because they got too much homework or they need to study for a tests that they have that week and they just had time for that. So in Summer break they got 3 months so they can work and do more things that they couldn't do during the school year. Students can work and have more experiences that can help them when they want to apply for another work that is much better for them and learn more things.

Next, Students needs a break after the school year. Most of the students get stressed for all the works and tests the teachers gave to them, their brains needs to relax and rest for a preiod time because it's not good to be always working, they got tired too. So Summer break is the best period to relax and distract for a period time. Students can go to the beach and have fun, Enjoy more time with their famillys, hang out with their friends, go visit new places, too much things they can do in this break and the weather is perfect too.

Finally, In Summer break the students don't worry about works or tests they may have need to present when the break is end. When they have Fall, Winter or Spring break the school gave to them just one week and in that week most of the teachers gave to the students works and tests they need to make after the week breaks, so in conclusion they don't have breaks because they need to study or do works that the school gave to the students. In Summer they don't need to worry about that and enjoy the time they got.

Some persons may don't agree with me because they think that have more breaks during the school year is better for students, but they need to know that the students got works during that breaks and they need to study for tests that they need to make after the week break, so in summary, they don't got that time to relax and give a time period to their brains so they can rest.

In conclusion, Summer break is the only long period that the students got to relax and they can do so many things that they couldn't do during the school year because of all the works they got and test that they need to study for. So Summer break needs to stay like that and is the best season for students so they can enjoy and have fun in their long break.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
FE8BA4043788,"Is it true that a positive attitude is a key to success in life?. Well, success is a strong word, there are some people that do not get where they want to be because the way they think. Our actions depend on how our thinking is.

It is true that a positive attitude is a key to success in life, if you have a goal and you really work hard to achieve it , you are always thinking ""I can do it"" and you are being positive about it, you have the idea that you will get whatever you want to get.

In addition there are many people who really want to get something or get to somewhere, but their minds are always thinking negative, they feel like they will not do good or they will not success, it makes them not keep trying. For example, when I was in middle school I had a classmate who will always think he was a ""looser"" he will always said that he could not do anything, his parents did not love him, so many horrible things that will make feel sad, I always tried to make him feel better by saying positive things about him, but I thing that is all about the ideas we put in our minds.

Success depends on our actions too,sometimes we let other people decide for us, we either do what they said or we act the same way they act. Some of this people do not have a positive attitude to help you success. we create a plan that we have to work on to be successful, even though that we need to have a positive attitude. We have to make it happen no matter what, try as hard as you can! because if you just have a positive attitude but you are not trying hard an off, is not worth it, I seemed some people that are very good at something because thats all and the only thing they do :However they don't try to keep going further, and when they are in a situation that things are more challenging they give up!

In conclusion; a positive attitude is a important key to success in life, on how comfortable you feel about yourself, and how successful you will be.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
CBF13C6D3FFC,Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone? Opinions can help people by seeing the persons point of view and understand the persons view. Sometimes its better to ask multiple people for in advice because everyone thinks differently and you will probably get more different advise from people because the more people you ask for in advise then you will get more advise from people. Sometimes its even better to ask someone for in advice that has had in experienced of something that you might not be experienced with like going through something rough people will understand you because the have also been like that or you just feel worry about something or because you are curious or interested about something and you want to know or want to try something new for the first time. Sometime people want advice when they need help because they can't make the right decision or probably because they are going through something rough in there life. Sometimes people need in advise to help them make a better choice sometimes people need advice to help to let them know in what they need to work on or improve on next time. When making a decision you need to think about will my decision effect others or myself? or does it benefits them or me? sometimes people need advise then they are making a decision because sometime when making decision it can be challenging. What does advice help people for advice can helps in many ways like to not give up in things people try not giving up so they use advice sometime people just need a motivation in advice that can also be inspirational to some people advice can be very inspirational and that can help them be success in the future sometimes people need advice to help them get motivated advise can be used in many ways sometimes you will probably not get the advice that you want from people but Seeking multiple opinion that can help them answer their question multiple opinion can help someone see the other person point of view and understand easily and know in what they need to improve on next time. ,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
F7FD0CB34BBC,"Everyone has a talent or skill. For Example, my talent is drawing. Drawing is really useful because I can use it for a lot of things like school projects,plays,and more. To get good at something I enjoy doing it takes a lot of time and effort for me to be good at the activity i enjoy doing. Every one has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by hard work,practicing,and doing it constantly.

Firstly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that skill is by working hard. For example,when I first started drawing. when I first started to draw i was really bad,cause i didnt practice at all. However,when I started to put that hard work in I started to get good at drawing and then i saw that I can only get better by working hard. Moreover,working hard is a chance for me to show my self what im capable of doing. Working hard is good for me because im challenging my self to do better in life as I get older and get better in my skills and talents. As can be seen,just by working hard can take someone far in life to achieve greatness.

Secondly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by practicing it. For example, my friends talent is playing soccer. My friend is really good at soccer because he practices and trains everyday. Even though my friend is small and skinny he doesnt care who he plays against because he can play with people twice his size and double his weight and still play good. For example,one day I went to see my friend play in a tournament. The day of the tournament was beautiful because the sun was out,the sky was blue, and the temperature was perfect. After a few minutes of us waiting, the game finally started and we got to see my friend play. At the beginning of the match my friend was going through everyone because of how he was playing. My friend was running so fast that he looked like a cheetah running for the ball. After the match was over they ended up winning the whole tournament because they had the most points which made my friend really happy cause all that hard work had finally paid off. Later we went to eat at a restaurant which smelled like flowers and the food tasted like if it was from heaven. As can be seen,practicing can take people to achieve greatness.

Lastly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by constantly doing it. For example,when my dad started to learn how to play the guitar. At first my dad was really bad because he had never played a guitar in his whole life,so he told his friend to teach him hot to play it. My dads friend told him everything he needed to know on how to play it,so my dad started playing the same notes constantly until he learn how to play it. Further more,having a talent is awesome because it can help people with daily day challenges. For example,if im playing a soccer match and my talent is playing soccer im going to do good,or if im in school and i have to do a project and my talent is drawing im going to get a good score because thats where im good at. As can be seen,practicing constantly can improve someones talents or skills.

In conclusion,everyone has a talent or skill they just need to know how to develop that talent or skill. By practicing,working hard,and constantly doing it can be improve a persons talent or skill. Do you think its helpful to have a talent or skill?",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
41A2385450D9,"I'm agree which this to say the first impression is impossible to change,To be honest whicth my self friends and people etc... , Be direct with the other person , Say the true and respecful, Be comprehensible , understand the another person,

some day of this week my friend bring a pants and i'm saw him, my fist empression was ''naa this not going which you , so i will honest with him , if somebody tell me something that is not pleasing for me i'm sure that i going to put my impression face , and maybe the other person don't like, but it's impossible to change my impression , I will direct which the people ,if the people don`t like my impression i'm sorry for them, yeah maybe it's not correct to say the fist impression , i'm agree for that too, and i understand that some people put angry when i do that , but i can't change my actituded because i'm like this, it's the same with the another people they got them own impression but in different ways , that's fot that i'm agree , and i understand that is so important to me beacuse i don't know if the other person feel bad when i say the first impression , that's why i need to improve my impression , some people and my friends are annoying with me for this , and that's why i need to practice respect to myself and the another people.

The fist impression is bad idea because if i'm in the job and my boss tell me that my work is not like this, and i say my fist impression that's sure that my boss will put annying because maybe he try to teach me, and the fist thing that i do is my impression and is not a good imprression,

some impression are good because when somegirl look beautiful my impression going to be wow i like how they look today , so impression can be good or bad,

the impression can used in different ways, can use in possitive and negative forms so we decide what kind of impression to used , but a lot a time we only used a negative impression in that is not correct , for example if i or some friend bring something or do something we need to do an possitive impression but we always give a negative impression and that is not correct we need to encourage this person but we only do negative things.

Having a godd impression we are more than we can imagene because everybady respect to you and nobody got problem with you , and thats a opportunities to alot of ways in your life .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
45291197F292,"I agree

I think it's a good idea for the students to start a specific career young,because you can be getting early experience to working in a certain field that their future career my require.

Its good to choose a career now instead of later because reaching early adulthood with no planned career in mind, because you may have a certain job that you may not like since you didnt plan ahead for your dream career and you be stuck with a 9-5 job.

With things like finishing high school and not going into college to further your education for that dream job you want will make your chances of getting the job you want scarce or even impossible.

2. What makes It worse Is, not having the diploma required for that certain job which means you could end up in community college again re-taking class for your job you didnt decide to choose while in high school.

3.

And another thing I've seen Is having one career not work out and a person ends up not having a backup plan for their second career. adding to that some of these careers require years of school some specific schools like law school or going to a school for doctors.

I don't agree with choosing a career early in high school,

because most high school students don't know what they want to be or they don't have a career in mind at the moment.

Students should not be required to take a career path so early, when they have yet to experience their first job or paycheck. and not having any interest in the job offers that are shown to them on the application.

Most students are young, and requiring them to have a career plan will end up having them feel like they will be rushed, into doing things like going to career interest fairs choosing what he's interested in and why and talking about with others and what things he or she will need to do.

2. Some high schools care about future jobs they want while most don't so most will not care about their future career and just choose a random career to get started on because they dont know what they like.

3. Some high school students genuinely do not care about school or their own career, so they just drop out mainly because they don't like high school and want to do other ""things"" outside of school adding to that there could be a stress level that is being put on high school kids thinking about the future instead of enjoying the present.

so in conclusion students should have their own decision on weather they want to have a career plan now or later.",2.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
2EC0647293F6,"Hello Mrs. Generic_Name my name is Generic_Name,I am from Generic_City, I used to live in Generic_City but, now I am living in Generic_City a pleasant and espectacular city. I go to school every Monday to Friday it is my last year of high school so I am exited to graduate. I am 18 years old I am the last of my three brothers Generic_Name,Generic_Name and, Generic_Name that have growth next to me and had gave me very fun and good moments.

I honestly feel that I good person who likes to help everibody. For example, when I was 13 years old I remember going with my dad to the auto garage where he spent working the last hours he had free. I always was looking at him and, paying atention at everything he was doing to learn and memorize because I really enjoyed helping my dad.

Mrs. Generic_Name I want to say that I am interested and, lookig for any work that could be available for me but, first I would like to visit you, to explain me and learn about your business. I told him if we could have an interview the next day, that was going to be Thursday at 9:00 a. m. The interview was necessary, like that we were going to be able to talk about what he need on his companie and, what I was looking for.

I went to Mrs. Generic_Name's companie for my interview. I was nervous, this interview was very important for me it was the day where where I could be selected for Mrs. Generic_Name. WHile he fineshed asking me some questions, he gave me two options to choose. option number one was, working at night for 25 dollars per hour and option number two was, working at day for 20 dollars per hour. I choosed option number two, working at the day for 20 dollars hour. I was very happy with my new job. Mrs. Generic_Name is a good person, he selected me and now I am very grateful with him.

As I said Mrs. Generic_Name I think my services will be very help in your companie,I am very exiced to start working for you and I now it will be a big pleasure for me.

See you the next week Mrs. Generic_Name, have a wonderful day.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
C616CFDBCA6A,"Online courses and receiving your education at home can be beneficial in many ways due to the fact that you're technically not in ""school"" for seven hours a day learning. For this very reason, being home schooled and having online courses gives you the chance to have more time to do your work, reevaluate, and overall to take as long as you may need, and whats important is feeling comfortable and moving at your own pace.

Although, some may take this as an advantage or opportunity to try and fit in extracurricular activities and or to try and learn new things because maybe they want to pursue something different that needs more time of something and less time of a seven hour education course that restricts them of doing so because school takes up almost of half of the time in their every day life.

Online classes can often help people but make it harder for other people to learn, sometimes you'll need a buddy to help out or you'll need a teacher to ask questions to learn but people may take online courses because they feel that they can work better alone rather than to be working with others and thats where they could be in the wrong.

You're not always going to know everything, you have to give yourself the chance to open up and have the opportunity so that you could expand your knowledge of education, there's a point in time where you've got to say ask a classmate or teacher for help, and Im not speaking on the behalf of everyone but thats how people are, they think they can learn everything there is to know about something but you've got to take a step back and know when to say hey and say these five simple words and that is, ""may I get help please"".

Therefore I do Indeed agree that taking online classes is a great way to benefit off of beacause people may feel that they can work on their own and move at their own pace and overall just have an amazing experience at the end of the day.       ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
F49521C3494B,"In some schools they have programs that pairs older students with younger students, and the older students can assist younger students if younger students are having troubles with their education or any other problems. This program can help old and young students because students get to support each other , and older students get to know how to be responsible , and they have a good experience.

First the older students can support younger students by communicating with each other if they are having problems studying, or problem with another students , or probably they have problems outside of schools for example they are having problems at home students can support each other by helping them to find a better solution so that everyone can feel better.

Next this program can help older students, because they get to know how to be responsible by helping young students to improve in their school subjects, and they can improve confidence in themselves by helping each other.

Finally at the end of the day older students are going to have a good experience knowing that they help a younger student to improve in their school subjects ,and they improve in their communication skills .

Schools with programs that pair old and young students can help students in a lot of thing , for example communication skills , responsibility,and be confident in themselves.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
6C1913BE2903,"A poll by a student from San Antonio high school shows that 92% of people between 14-21 years have been influenced by others. Influencing others can be catastrophic or great but only a selected group of people chosen by the individual can do it. Humans are being influenced constantly by different people and ways of thinking, but he most effective ways to influence others are: peer pressure, advises from others and social stereotypes

Most adolescents are extremely insecure and need their friends's approval. Many times teens are challenged by their friends in order to do something that can cause fatalities or a great success. Generic_Name was a terrible student when he moved to Generic_City from Generic_City, but when he met Generic_Name his life changed because Generic_Name peer pressured him, taught him English and influenced on him to achieve success on Generic_Name's high school career.

Parents, siblings, friends and idols have the power of being able of influence on others by giving advises based on their own life experiences. Old people advises are the most effective because of their great wisdom and erudition. Generic_Name's grandfather was a well-known writer and gave many advises to Generic_Name about how to write good essays. after all that, Generic_Name has been awarded with different prices and many scholarships that required essays.

Every culture have different societal rules, but each rule can influence and shape anyone as a person. All personalities are different but most personalities are modified by cultural rules. When Generic_Name went to Dubai, she decided to wear a hijab although she was not Muslim because if she did not wear it, people would look at her with contempt, this shows how social. stereotypes can affect anyone.

The most effective ways to influence others are: peer pressure, advises and social stereotypes. If all humans were influenced by good people with good intentions, life would be easier, and there would never be a lack of good poeple trying to influence other on the way of success and saintliness.",3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
0A8B8F282E45,"Winston Churchill once said ""success consists of going from failure to without loss of enthusiasm."" In other words, sometimes failure teach us how to get at the success. Many people agree with this statement, others disagree with it. It's easy to see both sides, but one stand out. Success is necessary consists of going from failure because failure teach us how to be better and create responsibility.

First, failure teach us how to be better, for example if I did a song to someone important to see and this person didn't like it; I won't give up even if is the worse song ever because the failure will show how to learn better and if you wont give up and always try the best you will get the success. As you can see you always have to do your best to get your success even if is the hardest thing. however, most of the famous had failure. it wasn't easy to get where they are; maybe can take long time to be like they are, but is hard. Most of the times is difficult to get the success that they have; they have that success because they never give up even if was the worse song or if they were failure.

Next, failure make you create responsibility, for example if you are a failure on something and want to be better, you always will try something new to get better and try your best, that's mean responsibility to yourself,

for example if I want to get my drive license and I fell many times, I can be a failure on it, but if I create responsibility and study every day I will do good and pass with success. If I speak another language and my

English is a failure I will be responsive and study to understand the people and do well on my classes. As you can see, always have a way, we learn with failure to be better then you were

On the another hand, some people believe we never have to have failure in our success, because failure can a negative in your life and in your life you always have to be have to be positive; this point make sense, but in life we always have to learn something. Therefore this statement is right because success consist of going from failure.

In conclusion, many people think that success don't consists of going from failure because it's a negative thing in our life, but success is necessary consist going from failure, because failure teach how to get the success in life, how to be better, and how to be more responsive in life.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
36677FE57D6B,"I disagree with the principal because. Students have homework and doing activities can get them stressed about school. Also some students have to take care of there siblings. Sometimes something important happens and your not home because your doing after school activities.

Student have homework and doing after school activities. They dont have time to do home work and they an be failing a class. And failing a class can get you kicked out of the activity your in. And when your failing a classes you can get held back a grade and that will go in your record.

Some students have to take of there siblings. Because there parents are working and there is no one home to take care of them. Maybe your baby brother is choking on a toy and your not home to save the baby . Maybe your parents went on a business trip and they will not come back for a week there is no time for after school activities you have to cook for them take them to the park.

Maybe something important happened at you house and your not home. If your mom is a single mom and she has a medical condion and something happens to her. You are not home because you have after school activities. You had to go somewhere after school but you forgot and you go to you after school activities and you remember when you on the way home but you know its to late.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C8D7D7FA3008,"I think that something positive and negative for this reasons if you have a work and work just 4 days for ten hours you don't have sufficient money for pay your bills, have a trip with your family or other things but you have more time for pass time with your family,to relax,watch the tv, stay in home with your wife and children and this is good because sometime you can't share with your family and friends so i think that this is a good proposal.

I think that this is an good idea because if the school follow this model by extending the school day two hours the benefits are you have more time for study and complete all your work three days to relax in home and do your homework or get a jod and work for three days all this is a benefits.

I believe that with this proposal don't have disadvantages because support all students for more opportunity in the school and be a better student.

In my conclution this is a big opportunity for better jods and better school but we have to know that all pruposal have benefits and disasvantages for everyone.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
F9072F36ECE7,"Dear Business Manager.

First of all this essay is written with the meaning of what kind of occupations I would like to do as student, which is good to know that there is someone that is interested on helping students like me, also as student I would like to start by the right way and taking what is the best for me for example what is going to be a job which will make me feel comfortable to know that my qualities and my knowledge will play an important roll depending of the job that I might get.

To tell you more about what I like to do is simple and easy at the same time, it doesn't matter how hard something it gets for me because in the end I always end up pulling through, althought I like to think before make a choise because is always hard when I do stuffs at the very beginning with no concern or knowledge of what am I suppose to do.

In this case, as a beginner I get excited no matter what the work it might be, I can tell that I'm not afraid to begin with new chalenges. So one of the reasons you should invite me for job oportunities is because unlike the rest of my partners at school they don't have the spirit of a fighter like I do, because I always try to give it all I've got because I know this is my heart and like my dad told me ones if ""if you don't fight for it don't expect for the things that you want to come for you"", and to prove myself that I can be someone on this world having a good job and be respected for it,so I can be able to support myself and my family as well, work hard in every little single thing I do is what I have to make sure that I can be capable and responsible of doing it.

In the other hand let's say that at least for now I want to graduate from high school, then go to college to start a career of mechanic, because mechanic is the number one on my checklist in other words my favorite, however this is would it be a big opportunity if you actually choose me for the job opportunity, because as it is for me this is going to be a really good starting for me, after all I think I can show you what I mean by saying I don't give up because my father always told me when I was a little kid; no matter what happens after I had to give it all, never leave a little bit of what I could let on my effort, also because he is been a great example for me since I was a kid or since I remember my childhood. Instead of being a bad boy, he showed me what do I have to to with my values and things that really matter to me, so that is pretty much of what I can be capable of when it becomes to a responsibility.

Persistent is other word that goes with my personality, if you want someone who really want to do something when it becomes to work, I think I might have the qualities that you are looking for any kind of job. So that's my response to what you might be looking for, i just hope that you can choosr me, Thanks.    ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
B6A5721D64C1,"To: Manager

Dear manager I write you this letter because I would like to visit your company. I want to see how the doctors work in a company. I decided to write you this letter because in the future I want to be a doctor, so I want to have experience working with a doctor or at least see how they work. I decided to applied to this job because I always wanted to be a doctor that helps people because I always like to help people even if I don't know who they are.

I apply to your company because I know that is one of the best company in the country. Every person that come to this company have the opportunity to be a professional, but only some persons can work in this company. I want to be in this company. Please give me the chance to come to this company.

I will do my best to be in this company. I want to be the best doctor in the world and have a lot of money. I want to see how can one normal person can change her life and make her a professional. Please give me one chance to be here.

Even if I don't have the chance to be here I will work hard, and to ask be here again. I will do my best to be here, and make my dream happen.

Thanks for listen to me, and I will wait for your answer.

From: Generic_Name ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
3ACDDFC9DD0C,"Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. In my opinion, i think that it is good idea to permit or allow cell phones during classes' period.

First of all, it is easier to search information. It became to help to students and teachers too, because, it is easier for students to search different information form different topics or classes. Also, the teachers can send information or assignment to the students and they can check it at the moment.

Consequently, they can save time. They can use many tools that help to do easy the work. use the Google translate it is one of the tools more important for some students that the English is their second language, because, it is fast to search the wolds on it.

Third reason, it is useful manage a different social media to be informed in some areas. The students can share information about the different programs, event or sports game that they have in the school. furthermore, it is a manner to keep them involved in the different events at that schools.

Finally, i think the schools should permit or allow cells phone to the students during the classes' period because, it is easier to search information, they can save time to find the new worlds using the Google translate, and manage social media to be informed in some areas.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
D3B45F8759E3,"Have ever thought a problem can take you to do your best. knowing that you made a mistake or have a problem come to you can eather ruin your plans or take you to do the best. Duke Ellington said "" A problem is a chance for you to do your best"". A problem can present in any ocattion but is inportant for you to not give up to keep trying and to make that problem a new chance were you can try something new.

Being able to show your solving a skill can also help you in any ocattion. If you are able to show that you can solve anything and take risk to solve tha problem that can be an inportant step for you to take and try to flip that problem to something good . Show your skill show that you can keep trying and try your best to solve that problem wich can take a long time to do but by showing things can also help you in your future.

studys show that solving a problem can increase your brain knowledge imagene if in stead of solving a problem you can flip it into a good thing, and also help in the future. a problem can come from diffirent situation and from different topics which can help increase your knowlegde in that certain topic what happens if you try something new and it fails that can also can make you or can break you. it can break you in the form that you stop tryingand give up or it cna make you if you dont let that problem take control of you and you take your time to solve it or turn it into chance.

do your best to solve that problem or take that chance or turn it into a lelarning process that you know you try ur best and you know you took your time to solve that problem and you can have that expirience in your mind and you know you learn a lot from thatt chance that was once a problem but knowing is a learning expirience. All that you learn can help you in the future. and I agree with what duke ellington said a problem can be a chnce of learning.

making a mistake or having a problem fail can teach you a lot of thing were you can learn from your failing expirience it can sometimes ruin your expirience but at the end of the day you learn from that mistake. That problem can present in any ocattion or time. having the powers to turn that problem into a chance of learning.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
AAF42F8A396F,"I agree with this statement because its hard to change your first impression. If you meet someone and you do something weird theyre gonna remember you as that one weird kid. it can be bad when someone have a bad impression of you when your trying to be their friend. Sometime you can change people impression of you if they get to know to know you.

if your first impression isnt good it can messed up they stuff you do in life like a job interview if you dont a good impression you may not get the job. If you move to new place and your going to a new school, your going to need to have a good impression to make new friends because if your new and a lot of people dont know you and if you do something weird or dumb everyone at your new school is gonna have a bad impression of you and that may cost you to make new friends and sometimes someone may bully you for being weird. Some kids at school have bad impression and people talk about them behind their back and their made fun of them for being weird. Like if your in a sport team and your that one kid who always bragging about how good they are, people around you wont want to be around you if they know your always bragging and they will spread rumors about you and people will stop talking to you if they know you like talking about yourself and people wont want to be your friend. If you wanna ask out the girl you like and she heard you did something to a another girl, shes going to have a bad impression of you and she wont even want to talk you and your tried to ask her out shes gonna reject you.

First impressions are sometimes always hard to change if you dont try change it with the people you had a bad impressions with. Sometime they people you had a bad impression of are usually the people you want to be chill with. In life its best to have a good impression because it can help you through life with people you met before. Good impression have a lot of good benefits with your social life. So the next time when you meet someone new its good to have a good impression.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
B59B6731525B,"If you were in the middle of the situation, and struggle with making decision. You try to asked one of your friend, but still don't have an answer for it. Next time, try to ask or talk to more people. But why getting more opinion is helpful for you? Getting multiple opinion can help you get a better idea, more choices to choose from, and help you make a good decision.

Asking for opinion can help you get a better idea. Imagine a time when you were writing an essay. You ask your mom to give you her opinion. But that didn't enough for your essay. Then, you ask your dad and your sister. Now, you have three opinion from different people. You can combine those opinion together to make it a better idea. Getting better idea will help for writing an essay.

Getting more opinion can also help you have more choices to choose from. You continues to ask for opinion from people around you. Now, you are a billionaire with many different opinion. You can use it however you want. You will decide you want to ""spend"" it or keep it for another time, like you are holding your own little world.

You will get more choices to choose from by asking people around you.

Talk to people for their opinion can help you make good decision. You don't know what college should you go to? Ask your parent, they will know what good for you. But, sometime people don't always choose the better one for you. So, you have to decide which option you want to take. People's opinion will help you make a good decision.

Getting opinion will always helpful for you, if you know how to use it correctly.

Listen to people's opinion and then make your own decision. But you don't have to always follow people's opinion. You can make your own decision.

But, asking for opinion from people around you will help you a lot.  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
DD265EC28AEB,"Now a days schools are finding new ways to use cell phones for educational purposes. Schools and teachers want to find new ways to educate students through cell phones since every child is attracted to them. But with schools trying to find ways that works, it does have its negative effects to it. The effects with using cell phones in classroom for educational purposes is that many students will end up getting off tasks, no more hands on learning, and they will start to relying too much on their cell phones. With cell phones being use for educational purpose, it has its negative effects to it and will affect student's learning in the process.

As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that students will not focus or get off task in their classes. If they use cell phones in classroom for a method to educate people, students with tend to get distracted on their phones and not learn what they are suppose to teach. Students will also end up dozing off and start to listen to music or even end up playing games on their phones and not focus on what's being taught. Also with social media being so big now a days students will focus more on texting friends or being on their Snapchat, Instagram, or even Twitter rather than focusing on what teacher is showing the classroom. With cell phones being use in classroom, students will end up getting more distracted and off task than when you do not use cell phones in the classroom to teach. The next paragraph will talk about another reason why using cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes has its negative effect.

As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that there is no more hands on learning for students. If school are using cell phones as a method to teach people, the students are not getting the hands on learning that they should get. Back then before everyone had a cell phone the way they were taught was with the step by step on doing the work and trying to understand how you ended up doing the work. But if they use cell phones in the classrooms the students would not be getting the step by step understanding of the work, rather than they doing it on the phones and just getting the answers. With schools using phones in the classroom the students would not be getting the same knowledge and understanding to specific problems and work than those who learn the step by step learning to the problems. In the next paragraph we will see another reason why using cell phones for educational purposes has a negative effect in the classrooms.

As cell phones are being use for educational purposes, a negative effect to this idea is that students will end up relying too much on their cell phones and technology to get the work done. As the more classroom or schools end up using cell phones for educational purposes the students will end up relying on their phone to get the work done for them and not try to do it theresleves. For example imagine students cell phones end up not working and they only used their cell phones to get the work done, what are they going to do now if they only use their phone to do the work and they did not learn the material on their own. With schools using phones as a way of teaching it with effect the students ways of learning and will start to rely on his/her phone in the later future to get their stuff done. In the last paragraph it will concluded the paper and sum up everything about the paper.

In conclusion if more and more schools end up using cell phones for educational purposes they will make more students get distracted during class, not have the hands on learning they should have, and also they will start to rely on their cell phones more for the work rather than them trying to do the work them self. With cell phones trying to be used as a method of learning, it will end up not giving the students the education they need but rather them showing a way to get the work done quicker without all the extra work that should be done. So schools should stick with the methods they have now and not try to add cell phones as another method of teaching these students. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0420DDE0BABD,"I agree, because you threw failure to be successful. Like entrepreneur they are smart business people and they lose a lot of money trying to start a business some entrepreneur go threw lot of failure like people not buying their products, Losing money that they spent on the products without making no profit and some spend to much money for promotion and some of tha entrepreneur need a sponsor to support their business to get more customers to buy the products they sell and if the costomers like and value the products their business will do lot of sale and getting the business to the big league with some of the biggest brand and company in the world and business will be sucessful.

the entrepreneur business was't doing right that didn't stop he or she from pushing toward their goals, so in life you go thew a lot of failure you lose some you win tha sholdn't stop you from doing what you do in life a want to be. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
6DA4157C9B4F,"Many people believe that self-esteem comes from achievement.

They believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement.

True self-esteem comes from achievement because accomplishing a goal pushes you to try harder, help you praise yourself, and it is a long lasting satisfaction for you to remember.

Accomplishing a goal pushes you to try harder.

This is important because achievements comes from all your goals you have accomplished and that helps you want to try harder and to achieve many other goals you might have that you want to achieve.

This helps you build self-esteem by making you feel good for what you have accomplished.

Also since it makes you feel good it helps you want to accomplish other things because it makes your self-confidence grow stronger.

Also achievement helps you praise yourself.

What this means is praising yourself inspires you to continue to do many other things.

Praising yourself keeps you wanting to keep on achieving your goals.

It is like an inspiration because you know that after any achievement you are going to praise yourself and that is going to make you feel good.

So praising yourself makes you have a higher self-esteem by helping you feel good within yourself.

Moreover, achievement is a long lasting satisfaction.

For example, you have jsut achieved a goal you've had for three years now it makes you feel very satisfied that you finally made it.

Eventhough some may think satisfaction on something you achieve is not important you should because satisfaction with yourself makes your self-esteem go up.

satisfaction is a result of an achievement and a achievement helps you be more confident with yourself.

Achievement is the key to higher self-steem because it pushes you to try harder, helps you praise yourself a little more, and it is a long lasting satisfaction for you to remember.

If you want to have higher self-steem then achievement is the key.                   ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0
AEE8A576989C,"Dear friend

my name is STUDENT_NAME

am coming from LOCATION_NAME.

i speak LOCATION_NAME and LANGUAGE_NAME.

i am a student to SCHOOL_NAME to 8grade.

The community is very important. Because he teacher people a good idea.

ex: my idea is to respect the teacher and other people.

I don't no speak English good.

Because to my contry no English.

i want to be a good student in English and other .

Thank's",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
40467A05CC2A,"Career is the most important in people life. if people do not have a career, then will become a unemployed vagrant. People do not have work, so they do not have money. As the saying goes,if you do not have money then you can not do anything. therefore career is most important.

At a young age,students thought is more brisk. student will thing about the career that they will do in the future. At that time people have a illusion,visualize a bright future, have a expect on the career in the future. At this time, if the teacher gave student guide to selected towards a specific carreer. students will fiem and unshakable their thought. they will do the best one can to achieve the goals. Student will bring pressure on thierself. if do not have pressure,then do not have improve. In the high school, should provide the courses of select to guide them towards a specific career. For the reason: first ,by do this can develop good habits on the student, in the school. Second, student not only can study hard but also can get skills. Third students will be good at their class that they choose to be a career. In the school,develop the courses of specific career has more advantage. For example,student graduate on the university, they are not face with on the obtain employment. I think it is a good idea for student to gain the skill for the career.

On the another way, develop the career courses early, it will give student more pressure, because in this time student are still immature. if gave they more pressure,can not make students students but can make students fell repugnant. This way just run counter to student's intentions. Not all students need pressure to improve thierself. But some students do not need pressure. They do not engage in honest work and have neither learning nor skill in the school. sometimes students are not sure that they work on something in the future. This career class may gave this student more pressure,they should choose a career that they want to be in the future. Therefore,this ways just make students fell disturbed.

In short,the courses of study in high school are selected to guide to a specific career it is a good idea for students to commit to a career. Career is important. students should plan it early. In order to, can be batter able to work in the future. So can not face with obtain employment.    ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
331D60E145C4,"One time in high school I met a teacher who looked like a mean person and who didn't like to interact with students or explain over again the stuff that he taught, so I went to talk to my counselor about if there were any possibilities if I could change the class, but she said no. After a while of taking his class, I realized that he is a very good teacher and a very nice person because every time I asked him for help, he would always tried his best to make me understand the topic and do good on my quizzes/ test. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people say that you can know someone's character by just the first impression. First impression are possible to change because they might had a bad day, and you always have to know the character before in order to judge it.

People all over the world are always going to have bad days, and that's normal because life consists on having good days and bad days; if you're having a bad day, of course you won't have a good attitude towards people. For example, some people can have problem at their house, work, school, etc... and obviously that's going to affect on their behavior and they might treat you good or bad, it depends on the situation. When you first see someone and they seems like a bad person, that doesn't mean he is a mean person; he can just be having a bad day or something bad happened. In order to judge someone you have to know the character first.

In life you can't be walking judging people just because they did something or just by their looks. For example,The majority of the population in the whole world knows the saying ""

Don't judge a book by its cover

"" this meas that just by looking at person from his outside, doesn't mean they are going to be like that on the inside. People might look either a mean person or a good person, there is some people that look like they are a good person and that they have a nice behavior, but at the end of the story they might do you wrong and you are going to be the one losing by trusting the person by just thinking they had "" a good personality""; However, there is also the people that looks like a ""bad person"" but some of those people can be nice from the inside, and you might need help from them at one point.

In conclusion, first impression are possible to change because people might be just having a bad day, and also because after you get to know the character as they originally are, then you are going to start thinking differently about that person. It's important for you to know the character first before you start judging that person, because you never know if that one person that you rejected/judge at the beginning, can be the person that you need the most in the future.       ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
CA29A62DA67B,"do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or dose inactive server a purpose. severing a purpose would be more better then if inactive because your not doing any thing to accomplish something. In my opinion we accomplish more if we are doing something because we can accomplish something we always we wanted to do also we can learn something new but some would argue inactive servers a purpose because you wont make any mistake if you fail on doing things.

we can accomplish something we wanted to do by facing our fear and by doing that we can face a stage fight fear and a high fear by making them face them. also we can accomplish something and learn something about our self, and by doing that we can see what we dont like and what we do like . in conclusion you can accomplish something you want to do by facing them or by learning something about yourself we can accomplish learning something, we can learn new skills for our everyday life like, learning how to cook new dishes, fishing, and learning a new language this can be helpful to meeting new people. also learning how to be a better person of yourself or being better to other people by doing this you can make new friends or feel more confident about yourself . in conclusion learning new skill and improving our self is a good way to accomplish something some would argue and say inactivity servers no purpose for example you can not take the chance of doing something if you dont want to. for example you can learn how to ride a bike but you feel uncomfortable you can decide not do it. sure inactivity servers a purpose however it can be a safe call if you dont want to take the risk. but sometimes it can lead to regret and having doubt.

in conclusion if we accomplish more if we are always doing something, we can accomplish something we wanted to do by facing our fears and also we can accomplish by learning something and something about our self. but some would argue that inactivity servers a purpose to be more caution about what we do. final its better to go out and explore about yourself and see what accomplishment you can find and what you can do to your life. also we accomplish more by doing somthing instead of doing nothing.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
BBFEBE9529A1,"I am agree that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Because all the people are not easy to get a good impression, and also are not easy to change the mind. In my experience most the time when a impression come up to my self, it is impossible to change the mind, because if I don't like something my impression is very bad, but it is impossible to change my impression. Most the people do the same things I do, because we are people and we almost have the same feelings.

The first impression is always something has too much that we can talking. Most the time the first impression is hard to change is like a decision; when you took a decision is impossible to change, because is something the human have never goes down always up. this mean that the person when the have a impression about your car, picture, family, or friends they never will change the impression for them, but if the change should be impossible like a decision.

Based on my experience the first impression is impossible to change, pretty much on the humans and the animals. why I says on the animals, because long time ago, I had a dog this dog was very intelligent he do every thing I tell him, but sometime he had some impression that was impossible to change. Always I give to him good food, but something a give food that him don't liked, and his impression was very bad, always was hard that him change his impression.",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
9B42B1750AD8,I don't think the principal should make the students clean up litter or do community service because they might have other thinks to do with their family's. Elementary students can probably do it because they might not have anything to do because they still in elementary and they probably have time to pick up litter or maybe jr high students can help too if there not to busy maybe some of the students that don't play any sports can probably help too. In some schools the principals are probably gonna require all the students to do community services because how they probably act or maybe she or he gonna make they bad people do community service. People like me can probably do it on weekends just to help others because im always busy during the week. The principals should make the people who act bad during the week and during the weekend that will probably help them change a lot they gonna get tired of picking up litter and doing community service.,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
E9705A9C0FE5,"In this prompt i agree and disagree, because in societies now in days some students do know for sure what career they want to study/become when older. Some students don't know exactly what they want to study/ become when older. It all depends on the student, For example if the student is for sure on what they want to be when older. Thats because either since they where little they have always like firefighters or a police officer. Once growing up they notice they can become one too and follow there dream on being something they have always loved since they where young. Also it could be that there Mom or Dad, or a family member that was or in the military or a firefighter. That want to follow those steps too, and make their family members proud. They also took interest on what their family member do or have done in life.

Now for the student who are not sure of what they exactly want to be once their older/ study. Some students are actually not sure what they are interested in doing and need help finding what they would love to study about, or some students wants to explore and have options to see what they are most interested in doing for the future. Students who dont know for sure what they want to be when older , needs help finding their interest because most of the time their shy on going into a class with new people they don't know. Also in high school their are academy and sometimes the class you pick are not at the school you go to so a bus would take you to that school. And some students are scared to go to another school because they dont know that school so well. In other cases that i haven't really heard of as much as the other ones, that they are scared to study what they love because they dont want to be judged by other people or also because their parents wants them to study to become a doctor or a lawyer when really they want to be a police officer or something else that they are interested in. So its hard for them to become what they really want to be in the future.

I would agree and disagree in this prompt, i disagree because some students dont actually know what they want to be when older, and i agree because some students already know what they want to some as their career. Some are shy, some are scared, and some already know for sure what they want to study about. For example me, at first when i was little i didnt know what i wanted to be. my whole life till this day i am an animal lover. I rather live with animals then humans to be honest. So i thought of be a veterinarian, but people told me that i would have to do surgery on animals and stuff like that and at some things its good because i am saving their lives, but im not always going to save their lives so i didnt want to be a veterinarian because i didnt want to be hurt my whole life work like that. So i moved on to following my dads foot steps, becoming part of the Marine Corps. My dad was in the Marine Corps and fought in the Vietnam war, he also worked as security in the American embassy in Generic_City. I also love doing makeup, since i was little i would always play with makeup and growing up i would buy a lot of makeup but didnt really know how to use the products. until i started by little learning how to use the products. Now a big makeup store at the mall offered me a job their because they loved the way i do my makeup. Growing up i started seeing my interest and also had options on what i would like to do in the future.       ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
DC88C1130FD9,"I agree with Bristish Prime Misnister Winston Churchill. The failure comes before of success So, I think that everybody had a failure in their lives but I think that is good because we are learning about our failure and I think that the failure is important becuse with the our failures we can be a better people for the socity or community. I think like Generic_Name goes to university and fail science class, Generic_Name had a failure but he can think about it what happen or that is wrong in science class and then, Generic_Name study a lot for recover science class. the final of semester Generic_Name recover science class, Generic_Name had a success because Generic_Name study a lot to recover science class and Generic_Name doesn't loss the hope to recover science class. So I think that the success is good for us because the success make us better. I believe that my failure that I had before that help me to be a better person to learn more to do thinks that I don't believe that i can do and the thing that a have is thanks of my success that I had it. I think if you have a lot success it is because you are donig well. If you have mistake in your life just learn about it because that help you to don't do it agian the same mistake. My concluison is The life is amazing and maybe in the future we can have fails or we can have success but the most important is that you learn abour yours mistake and yours failure because that helps you to be a better person in the community and the socity and in your life.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
38EE843B5CD1,"Dear, Principal

What you are doing the thing is the wrong for people that like sports such as soccer, football, baseball, basketball and other sports student would like to do. I think it would be best if you would let students like me do these sports. I think that the grade average should be a pass grade for students. A grade B average is wrong and should be a C or close to an D as long as it passing. You should think about what you are doing to people that like sports. I like soccer and it would wrong if i didn't get to try out for that all because i don't have a B as a average. You should learn a way how to improve grades without taking sports away from us the students. And that also goes for other activities. Think about and thanks for your time.      ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
F9069F051AD1,"I think an enjoyable educational activity for me is Gym. Because gym is the most fun class I have this year these are some examples of why I like gym. the first reason why I like gym is because during the warm up we are aloud to talk to our friends while we are walking. Also another reason why is when we finish doing our warm up we get to play games or do fun activities. the last reason why is we could also go outside to do games or activities when it is nice outside.

The first reason why I enjoy the beginning of gym is because you can walk around the gym and talk to your friends.

. And not have to wait to talk till lunch to talk all you want. But the main reason why I like that part of gym is because I love to talk even though at sometimes I got nothing to talk about. Another reason why is that I love hanging out with my friends or to hear about there problems. talking helps you feel much better and lonely so i think that talking is fun and important at the same time.

then the other reason why I like gym is because we get to play fun games or activities sometimes. Because I like getting distracted from stuff with something fun like a game or activities. The fun games could help someone feel relaxed and forget about something that might be worrying them. another reason why I like that is because l think it is much more fun than having to be in health, Doing the pacer or doing push ups. But other people do enjoy those stuff but I highly dislike doing those things. but the games could help you get some exercise and keep you having fun the gym class instead of being bored and exercising

The last and final reason why I like gym is because sometimes we go outside when the weather is nice to do activities or other stuff like that. I like going outside because I like it when it is nice and warm out to be doing exercise. It is also nice to be out there and be racing or playing soccer and maybe football. But it is also big outside to be holding all of the gym classes together and the teachers could teach together. And you could also do much more outside even though some people dont like going outside I think it is much better because their is much more space and more fresh air.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
CD47F64F2398,"The benefits of working with a group and why you should find a group to complete your assignment isn ted of doing it alone.

It's really beneficial to be with a group because of everyone collaborating. Working with a group makes the assignments to be completed in a easier and a faster way. Having a lot of people in a group means that everyone is going to be sharing their thought and ideas of how to complete the work in a easiest way. Working alone means that you have to work harder more responsibilities and also it will take you much more time to complete your assignments sense you are doing everything by yourself.

Being with a group allows others to collaborate with each other that means that no matter how hard the assignments are all together are going to be able to complete it. Having a group guarantee you less responsibilities as well because you have others whom can do a different task from what you are doing. Also being with a group guarantee you to complete the work in much less time that if you were to do it alone. A group gives you better understanding of what you all have to complete do to everyone strong thought and ideas.

Something really important in a group is the Lieder someone who is responsible to check if everyone in a groups is done with their assigned task. Also having a lieder will be easy to assign each one a task without everyone complaining about doing the work. You can also contact you lieder to inform him that is going to be impossible for you to complete your assigned task do to a problem with your family so that way a lieder can inform the others and find someone who can take you task and finish it, if you were alone you would not be able to complete that sense you wouldn't have anyone to depend on. A group guarantee you success when it became to complete any assignments do to everyone effort and sharing ideas, sure a lieder might be important but with a a group the lieder is nothing so everyone is really need in a group in order to successfully complete the work.

Overall working with a group give you much more benefits that be working alone. Being on a group give you a better understanding of what the work is all about do to everyone ideas, also you have less responsibilities including much less time to complete your given assignment. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
C8CFF17BCD6A,"I recommend to the students take the tradicional four years. If the students take four years of high school they are able to take elective classes. The students will have more time to do their homeworks to concentrate more in classes. Many high schools the tradicional is four years of high school that is a good choice for the students. Students will have more experience having four years of high school. The students will learn more things in one more year of high school.

The benefits taking four years of high school.

Students are able to take elective classes.

Concentrate more taking four years of high school.

Students will have more time to do their homeworks.

Students will be more prepare for college.

They will have more time to study for the exams.

Free time.

Less stress.

I do not recomment to the students take three years of high school. Because there is many classes that students cannot take that are elective classes take three years of high school is not a good choice for the students who work after school.

2. Three years of school.

More stress.

The students will do not have enough time.

The students will do not concentrate in classes.

Not pay atention in classes.

Students have to stay after school. ",2.5,2.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
99961D273689,"Do you think you give off right by having a negative attitude? Imagine being at the DMV everyone given you stares, and your family telling you ''you're not gonna pass"". As you sit taking the test ,all those comments replaying in your head. Can you see the difference? as if i was to be possitive, my attitude reflects off of what i give, and that is the key of success in life.

A positive vibe can make your days go faster. Everyone in this world has challeges, but i mean who doesn't? so with that being said we can overcome with putting effort and what you do or believe. The ability to have a positive attitude creates a mind set of trying new things, like driving, traveling, last but not least, education. Adjusting to a new enviroment helps alot with mental health.

My story starts with me going to the DMV. something i notice was, i was hearing negative comments about me not passing my test. My friends kept telling me that is was difficult and hard. Meanwhile at the time, it kept replaying in my head, and i reacted in a negative way.

One way we can avoid being gloomy is to stop hanging out with people who are bad influence, because if we do we give off the same energy. However if you will have potential on succeeding,and you well feel much better of your self.

Some people say that being negative is normal, but they are wrong because if you are always negative everyday that will not take you enywhere. It is always good to be positive, and if you are positive all things go well. In conclusion, is how we the people should change the way we see things, and move foward for better result. I hope that we can be more considerate on how we take things in life.                                  ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
FD462BF89F7D,"some school use cell phones in classroom for educational purposes:

cell phones is a good and bad devices for students in learning. those devices have two different way for using. positive and negative. leaners can use these device on some activity in classroom and some may use for negative activity.

schools should allow students to use the cell phone in classroom to underestand clearly the lessons.

for example: if schools allowed students to use from cell phones in specefic time. they find information easy from their devices.

schools should not allow students to use cell phones so many time in classroom and abusing from those device and westing the time during periods.

for example: if schools allowed students to use from cell phones all the time in classroom they do not pay attention for their lessons.

those schools belived that students better underestand when the use cell phones during the classroom and other activity.

some students using dictionary from cell phones or google some other information.

this is the law from prince william county students can use their cell phones during lunch or break time.

for example: when students do not underestand something the teacher show them on their cell phones picture,videos,movie and some other stuff to better what they suppose to know.

example2: when the students find out the meaning of the word the teacher allow them to use from their device to figure out the information.

example3: some schools do not allow students using from electronic devices durind periods untill break or lunch time on that time they are able to use it in caffeteria.

in this case some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose and those devices more helpfull for students to underestand about lessons and important information and make a higher knowledge in future.     ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
EA42A6028804,"People argue whether or not its a good idea for students to study or identify a carrier of their choice when entering high school. I agree that students should commit to a career of choice when entering high school because they'll be ahead in life than many other students who dont get the opportunity to chose a career they want to learn in high school and studying their choice of career at a younger age would have them college ready.

Learning a specific carrier at the time when entering high school is very beneficial to students because it would have students who do chose to learn a carrier would have them very much ahead of students who their high school's dont even offer the opportunitie to learn a carrier during their years of high school. Learning and mastering a career of choice is something that students should take for granted because once mastered it can lead u to many opportunities while your in high school or have graduated. These opportunities can lead you to Paid internship programs, college scholarships, and even a Job right after high school.

Students who get to study a career of choice during their high school career would prepare them for college. Having students identify a career during there high school years would give them a better feel to go to college right after high school. Your resume would look much more achievable when colleges see you have earned a certificate for mastering a career you choose to learn during your time in high school. Learning something you want to do in the future would prepare you for college because it would almost be the same as attending a college, but without all the nice technology or lab equipment colleges or universities have.

Others would disagree when i say that students should identify a career of choice when entering high school and I understand why. While some parents would want there child to study a career earlier in life, other would recommend that they shouldnt be pressured in to choosing some sort of career when entering high school because it can be really stressful for the students to already having to chose a career to pick right after middle school and other parents want there kid to enjoy life as teenager and then worry about that later. The first reason I understand, but picking a career of choice is super beneficial to that student because studying it and then getting a certificate to when passed the class will lead you to many opportunities during your years in high school and would put you ahead of many others.

This is why I believe students should identify a career when entering high school. It puts them ahead of the game and prepares them for college and the future. I also believe that we should have every high school in the United States offer some sort of options of careers that students can take during there high school career and that the schools can teach in all high schools around America. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
985FC4A0FAE2,"Some school are offering distance learning ash an opportunity for a student attend classes from home by way of online or video conference. I think this would be a good idea because is offering a good opportunity for people that can not be able to attend the school during the morning for other occupation personal and give a chance to get the diploma .Also is good opportunity to the people the can not be able to attend classes because they work. Is good opportunity for the people that can not attend classes and miss school because they do not have transport to go school. But is amazing that can take one class online without attend to school that's a lot of benefit for people that don't work .Is offering a big opportunity to take the class at home and do not drive every day to the class in the school.

Being able to to attend classes by home online is a good opportunity because not all school is offering the chance to take classes by home online. Taking classes online can improve the student and offering the opportunity to graduate without attend the schools and miss classes for not reason. This would be more benefit because some student skip classes when they go to school so they are losing his grades. But with the opportunity doing online student can make the class and not skip school and class for not reason.

Student can learn more with this benefit doing online because they can no get distracted by his friend of the side and can get more focus in the class online. for instance The students would be better doing the class online because when they go to school they get a lot of distracted and not put attention to the teacher when they talk .But online no body is making noise by your side and interruption to you that's helping to you a lot .Is good benefit to can graduated and doing all the think well online at home.

Some student can be more benefit because they have to work and be able to do online is good opportunity to all students can finish the school. For example they can finish extra work after they work a long they and be able the pass the grade doing all the step at home without go the school and miss the class offering the opportunity to do online without going anywhere just by doing online can be more benefit because can not be more stressing like in the school when you have to do a lot of work do not get the correct time to do it ,but when with this opportunity can be the best option to can finish late and extra work. and Also they don't have to find a transport to go to the school every day they only have to join online and make the work.

Finally i think this opportunity is huge benefit for the people the don't have the chance to go the school and for those students that need to graduated because they have to do a lot of think but want to get his diploma this can be the best opportunity for those people that want to be some one in his future some people have to work hard every day and they don't have good opportunity to finish they high school but in this school they offering a huge benefit that give to us a opportunity to take classes online that's going to be for me the best opportunity the i never seen before in schools .",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
3BE469553D75,"Although, people would like to be taking there classes online because people would rather sit at home on there computer than actually go to school and sit in class and listen to there teacher.

I mean I see why people would choose that for an example say if your late to class. You won't be because your taking online classes and you have so much time to get ready. When you have school you have less time to get ready even to have breakfast.

If your feeling sick for the people that take online classes it's much easier for them because that can sit in bed and do there homework. Even if they have a doctor appointment for being sick they can just sit in the wait room in that time being they can just do there work while they wait. If they don't Internet they can just use hotspot.

When your on a vaction won't have be worry about miss school work because your taking online classes. Even if your on another state you can still do the online classes. Plus, the online classes only taking like an hour to finish.

If it was me to chosse if I want to take online or just normal school. I'll pick school because it's much easier for me to learn because teachers would make sure your learn by making take test or quizes. Plus, your can stay after school if your miss one day of school.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
545E9BF477C1,"the reason i think that we should not have more school time is because some people in school would not be able to keep up with other kids. and most kids get ttired of being in school for six hours imagine being in school for longer then that and even more kids would start going to sleep in school. because they are already tired of all the classes during the day.

with another good reason that i disagree with adding more time in school is because some people have to do things after school like take care of family or go somewhere important and if you added more time then they would not be able to do get this stuff done because they would be stuck in school learning longer then the time they are accually supposed to get out.

i belaive that there should not add more time to school because it would also be a waste of time because teachers would have to do even more stuff done buy more stuff for students and get more work done grade more papers because we would have a longer school time and then the teachers would have to write more speak more and do stuff more then they would if we had only six hours in a day.

with another reason that i dont thing school should not be longer is that it would not only affect the students and the teachers but it would affect everyone because then the whole school board would have to do more work and the school would loose a lot of money because the school board would have to buy more stuff for students and get more things that kids would need to get everything set up good for the students.

with another good reason we should not have longer school cause if we had longer time kids would not be able to handle so much because they would be learning so many thing in one day and then it would confuse them and when they are going to take a test they would be confused because they were pressured to learn so much in a short period of time and they would not like that because they might fail.    ",4.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
BD67708C0609,"I really need to find a career path. With your help, I think we'll be able to come up with a solution. You should come my school not just to help me, but to help others too. Students need to gain experience to at least understand what to do, and how to act in the work place. They can really benefit by finding a new career. Their interest can take them a long way. Your help can take them a long way, and they can potentially help you too. Coming to my school would help me gain experience, find an interest, and gain something beneficial.

Experience is key in finding a job that interests you. If I join an internship I can potentially gain a lot of experience. An internship helps you to prepare for whats to come later on in your career. Work ethic and how to do your job are things you might learn. I really need to learn whats the wrong thing to do, and whats the right thing to do in the work place. For example, you need to learn how to address your boss in a polite way. If you mess that up, it could possibly cost you your career. I really need to learn this stuff to improve my career later down the line. I know you would be capable to help me with that.

Benefits are things you gain out of a situation. If you help me I will benefit from this, and you could benefit from this too. I can gain a lot if you help me. I could pursue an amazing career that would help me out a lot. My career would help me pay for bills, rent, and my car. If your internship helps me find a good career, that career can help me financially. It's like a domino affect. It can also benefit me emotionally. If I really like my job, that makes me happy. Don't forget that this could benefit you too. You could potentially gain knowledge about what your doing wrong and what your doing right. You can improve as a manager of your business; possibly changing your work style or business style. I can help you with certain things too if I join your internship.

You have to be interested in something to start a good career. What is your career going to be based around? You can help me find a job I'm interested in or lead me down a path where I can start the job I'm interested in. In my opinion, you have to like your job to succeed in your career. If you don't, It could lead to quitting. If I know what I want to do, you can point me in the right direction and I'll work hard in order to reach my goal. If I don't know what I want to do, you can help me find something. You can see what I'm good at and what I'm not good at, what my likes and dislikes are, and from there you can help me find a career I want to pursue. I know you will help me find a career I'm interested in.

In conclusion, experience is something I want to gain in order to know how to do other things. I want to gain a lot of benefits, because they will lead to good and better things. I really want to find a good career that I'm interested in so I can manage myself. I know if you were to come to my school and talk to me, and let me join your internship, I would be able to gain all these things. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
4F22FF7F59A0,"teenagers in this epoch just want to spend time on cellphones instead of help their brain maintain doing something different but been inactivity just absorb our time and we just want to spend hours on bed doing nothing people may try to always be busy maintain the brain distracted. We always accomplish more if we are always doing something because been inactive dont serve for any purpose.

It accomplish when we are doing something we maintain our brain busy and we make many things on the day instead of been doing nothing its helps us to develop and create different ability thats the reason why the teenagers after they work,for been busy the mayority of the teenagers get bored when the are at home doing nothing.

When people is doing nothing just been inantive they waste their time it doesnt helps them for any purpose doesnt give any beneficts to the brain. The teenagers in this epoch they should maintain busy and dont waste the time after school they may practice any sport or any instrument.

Other people think that been inactive its good because they thing they dedicate time to them selves girls taking care of skin and boys playing there games or been inactive is good because they can rest after school thats the view of point of others.

Determine never been idle always doing something this helps to find the abilities for every people,helps to grow in society because the body is active doing many things and teenagers doesnt have time for using the cellphones they waste time do it.

In this epoch is very important that people maintains doing something is very important is amazing how many things may be done if people are always doing. been busy helps the people for many things some guys after classes they practice soccer or they practice any instrument,and others helps in things at home helping cooking or cleaning. When you make things kind of things your brain and you maintains you busy and distracted of all.

Teenagers should take their time to make things helps them,they choose to stayed at home and be on bed all the citizen should determine not be idle always find to do something.

when our parents go to their work they been busy and give things we need and we dont care about that because is not our effort and sacrifice because we decide just to nothing be idle and stayed at home on bed. But when teenagers decides to work to be busy and always maintaining doing something they see how much is the sacrifice they have to make to have all the things they want,because they need to helps things at home.

for example,

If people stayed at home they are not going to be able to grow as a society.

There are many things we can make to always be busy and brain too

You get distracted of the time you spend on your cellphone and used your time on others things.

The people always are things to do as little they see but it helps us to be busy also helps us to share with others when we make different things to be busy our daily routine chance because every day we have others things to do.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
6D2AFE5412CB,"Many schools are agree that students can finish high school in three years. Many students think that is a good idea to finish high school in three years. Some students think that they are waste time in four years in high school. In my opinion is a good idea to finish high school in three years, because the students can take class before school or after school, then, they can graduate in three years instead four years, instead elective courses, the students can take class, they need for graduate, and the students will have more time to go to college.

The students can take class before school or after school, and they can graduate in three years instead four years. The students can come one hour early, before school start, and they can take class every day of school, or they can stay one hour after school to take the class. However, some students think that is tired to come early to the school, or stay after school.

Instead elective courses, the students can take classes, that they need for graduate. The students can use the time, that they uses for the elective courses, they can use it for the classes they need for graduate. The elective courses it does not prepare to the students for college, and the regular classes prepare them for college. If the students finish high school in three years, they will go early to the college.

The students will have more time to study in college. The students will have time to think, what they want to study in college. Also, the students can finish very early their career. However, some students think, they need four years in high school for to be very prepare for college. The students will have time to think, which college they want to go.

I believe that is better finish college in three yeras, because the students get more time to go to college, so, when they finish their career. Then, they can study another career, because they will still young. If, the students stay four years in high school, they will not have enough time to study two careers. If, them finish two career, they will have a lot of opportunities to get a good job, and have a good pay.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
8DBBADC05A43,"Do you have a high goal?

Many people have goals, someone have high goals and others have low goals.

The high goals is so hard finish it, however, we never change a high goal by a low goal only because is more easy.

Although you have one hundred low goals it's impossible say ""one hundred low goals is equal to a high goal"" because a high goal can to become successful and though you'll do one hundred low goals it's almost impossible you become successful.

It's very important have high goals in our life to be a great person, taking high goals you can to detach in anything, however, taking low goals you never can to be successful

To start, it's very important have high goals to be a great person. For example: Keanu Reeves, a susseccfuly actor, is a great person showing the money is not important with his life. some times a high goals no always is have money, also can to be a personal goal.

To next, taking a high goal you can to detach in anything. For example: Kobe Bryan, the bigger player of the NBA, was the best player in basketball because he wanted become the best. You are not the schism, if you work for you like you can to be the best in anything.

To finish, taking low goals you never can to be successful. For example: somebody having low goals never can learn of his mistakes, furthermore, that person never can to grow. but if you want to become successful you need to find anything that to feel passion and going to for that.

the high goals can be hard included impossible to reach, but, we never to give up, only you say yourself ""i can do it"" so you will be in the first step in the success'es path.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
33113B7D1125,"People sometimes ask more then one people for advice because they want to see if they say the same opinion or if they have a better opinion then the other person , For example I have a problem at home and i don't know what to do or i'm stressed about it and i ask my friend about it and she tells me her opinion on what she will do if she's in that situation but then i don't know if to do what she said or I didn't like her advice and i ask another person and i liked her advice, But i want to know if theres a better advice so I ask someone else and they tell me another advice to another person, So that's why some people ask more then one person for there advice just to get more ideas on what to do or something like that cause asking more then one person is a better idea because you'll get more advice and you will be thinking which advice is better and which one is inapropet .

So now you ask more then one person about something you don't know what to do or if you have trouble solving something other people can help you and give you good advice and other can give you advice but are bad choices so just ask someone for help or ask someone you trust and will help you. But do you know why it's a good idea asking for help? Well it's good to ask for help because some one can give you advice on what to and what to not do and asking to much people can give you way much ideas on what to do,This helps so much people that needs help because they are like asking people for help and they are helping us to do better choice then a bad choice, Every one can give you a advice on whats better for you problem or question and it will help so much like Parents, Family , and Friends.

Kids can ask advice to everyone even there Teacher, Counselor , And mostly there parents they're always be there if you need help and need advice and they will give you a really better idea, But what i think is better for you guys is ask an a adult then a student just to not make a bad idea and start doing things your not suppose to, So kids just talk to a grown up and they will help you with the advice you need.

We all sometimes need advice by someone so just ask and you'll get a advice you need and everyone will help you help your self don't think that only you need advice we all have something to tell a person and give us there opinion, We are like asking them what they gonna do if they need a advice and is passing the same thing we passing.

When the person you talked about gived you a advice you'll think about it and if it's a good choice you do it and everything comes to peace that's why i can help you if you ask for an advice and it will help you in the fueature too so just ask for advice and they'll give you it.

What if a friend dosen't give you an advice? Then tell your pearents or an adault a school or work to help you, Did you know older people need advice too? Yeah older people need advice too they even need help on things like us not just because they are older it dosen't mean they are not like us that they need advice.

In what do we need advice? We need advice in somethhing we have done bad or you don't know what to do or you have problems you need some advice from someone for they can help you on it that's really important helping someone that needs a advice.

What happens if you don't get an advice? What happen is that you will get depress or get stressed thinking on what to do, And if you get depress if can be dangoures you'll be always be upset won't want to do anything you won't even want to eat or anything that's why if you need a adivce ask someone to help you and you'll be so much better.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
1E492FE5045A,"Wonderful, amazing, and brilliant that's what imagination is. I totally agree that imagination is more important than knowledge. You can used imagination at all time, when you're reading a book, playing or watching your favorite sport, and when your thinking of a place you would like to visit for vacation. You can do a lot of things by only using your imagination.

How can you use imagination when you are reading a book. It depends on what kind of book you love and enjoy to read. I'll give you an example, I like to read adventure books. When I'm reading this type of books I love to imagine how happy would I be if I was that type of person doing that type of adventure. Imagination is an awesome tool to use when you are reading a book. If you love reading this type of books use your imagination, use it to enjoy what you are reading.

Do you have a favorite sport, or a favorite player. Imagine you were a soccer player, a basketball player, or any type of player. Imagine how wonderful and amazing would that be. If I was a famous soccer player I would be Lionel Messy. When I'm watching soccer I start to imagine that I'm Messy and that I'm the one who is scoring all those goals. You can imagine a lot of things, you can imagine you being a scientist, artist, and a actor.

Thinking of a place to visit for vacation. If you have a lot of stress take a break and sit down in your couch and imagine your dream vacation.

Let's say you want your dream vacation in Hawaii. Imagine you are surfing on those big waves, sky diving, and learning how Hawaiian people dance. Also you can learned about the culture and generation about Hawaii.

Imagination is a great thing to have in life. Imagine your adventures when you're reading a book, imagine your favorite player being you, and imagine your dream vacation in any place around the whole world. It doesn't matter how old or young you are, keep using your imagination, if imagination keeps you happy than used it. The only thing you need to worry about is your happiness and the happiness of those who you love the most. Keep imagine all the great things you love to imagine.        ",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
602E786321EA,"Others may think otherwise, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Take Elon Musk for an example, he started out as a young kid who learned how to use computers but he did not stop there. Once he mastered computers he set higher and higher goals to master untill he ended up to be one of the richest man alive. I myself started with just drawing and graphic designing little art projects. then I started putting higher goals to master. Now I ended up learning how to use most of Adobe's products and doing commisions. Leonardo DaVinci was not just an artist. He was an inventer. he invented numerous of things, he had multiple skills. thats because he mastered all of these skills he set higher goals for himself and he achived them.

First examaple Elon musk. He was a bright kid. He leared how to use computers at a young age and mastered how to use them. Elon Musk did not stop there, He set higher goals to master. Elon Musk Drasticly Grew alot over the years. For and example he invented PayPal, SpaceX and Tesla. Now he is one of the riches man alive.

Second example is myself. I started out with just Drawing and graphic Designing a simple banner for my YouTube channel. then I started setting higher goals for myself to master. Now I ended up learning how to use most of Adobe's products. Doing commisions for YouTuber's and Esports teams and making money.

Last example is Leonardo DaVinci, Leoanrdo DaVinci was no ordinary artist from the Renissance Age. What made Leonardo DaVinci Stand out was that he was not a quitter infact he loved setting higher goals for himself to master. He loved growing, learning and mastering new things. Leoanrdo was not only an artist he was an inventor a scientist and that why he grew up to be one of many people biggest inspiration infact he is my inspiration. Leoanrdo was not a quiter and that's what made him grow up to be special and successful if life.

Now other may say that you dont need set higher goals to grow. But I think quite the opposite becuase if you don't set higher goals for yourself then learning new things and growing new skills would most likely be impossible unless you try to surpass your last achivement therfore you won't be able to grow and be as successful in life. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
F8BA702A8450,"Dear principal,

I think students should be required to this perform service so student's could learn a lot about reading. Because it is very important for student's to learn how to read stories and understand more about language arts. Also its very important for students to join the community service to graduate to college and get a job. Also i also recommend this to student so they could grow up one day and be a teacher or a doctor this is a good require.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
095E153640F7,"Creativity comes with great mind!

Summer projects can be fun, if only they were chosen by students. If the students were to pick their own projects depending on the subject; they would be interested, more likely to do it, and enjoy as well.

teachers spent a whole summer or a school year coming up with a topic for the students to do during the summer. And, it turns out that the students aren't giving it much though or effort towards their given assignment. That can be waste of the teachers time and energy, but if the students were to come up with a topic and idea of their own they would do the project.

if students were to choose their project, they would more likely to do it because its on something they want to learn and their curious. when students are curious they tend to explore their curiosity and be more drawn in the subject and want learn more about it. students can come up with great ideas when comes to doing their own projects. choosing a topic of your interest in a projects can explore students mind, and do the things they would never though of doing.

The summer project can improve your grades in the class. for example a student that struggles a lot in class either because the they cannot keep with pace in class, with summer projects they can work on their own pace. and if students are not great at working in environment full students this gives the a chance to do in depended study. summer project can give an opportunity for students to increase their greats. if students were to chose their own assignment they could at pace that worked for them, and they wouldn't have to worried about due time date. students would have the whole summer to finish the project, and if they did not finish it, when they an entire summer to do it, now that's just being lazy and it can effect their grade.

Subject can have a great impact on the student. If student is given an assignment on a certain subject their is a chance they would start procrastinate or not do it at all.

therefore they would have zero interesting on doing the summer assignment. for example if i had a history project and a science project. And if my science teacher were to give me a project to do a research paper on how gene mutate, as interesting that sounds i would not do it because science does not fascinate me as history.

Being able to choose a project of your own can be fun that way, it gives a student to look forward to do their work and be more fascinated it. Students should design their summer project; because that's less work on the teacher,

it gives them an opportunity to just think outside their box, and they can make their teachers proud for doing their work, so they can look forward a better school year.    ",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
CA3752A6A8F3,"Have you ever accomplishing something by what we are doing ? Our 3rd President of the U.S.A wrote a quote that say ""Determine never to be idle .....it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"" Many people didn't believe in him. For a way that people would like to accomplish something is setting a goal, try hard, and showing them.

However, many people believed that setting a goal is a accomplishment. When some people set a goal they usually set an easy goal, so they can accomplish. For example, My sister when she set a goal she usually it so simple that she can accomplish it. But for some people they set their own goal really hard and they can't even accomplish it. After all for those who doesn't like setting a goal would likely accomplish something.

For many people that are accomplishing something they always try really hard. When some people accomplish something they would usually try their best to accomplishg something. For example, my brother accomlish something for trying his best at his final. But many people would not even try their best to accomplish some thing.

Therefor, many people could show what they accomplish. For those who show what they accomplish is that they usually do anything to accomplish sommething. For,exmple, Luke show to everyone what he accomplish for getting his mile run decreasing. But for some people think that is called show off. But what he did is that he accomplish something great.

As a result of accomplishing something it'swonderful thing. Like setting a goal, try your best,and showing what you have done. Accomplishing goal would be the best thing that ever happed to you. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
3B851F58BCDC,"Have you every wonder why people graduate so young age is because they smart than class meet?

Although some might agruenming that graduate in three is bad ideas actually graduate three is good ideas because be more mature for real world and you are able take full responsible of their own.

First reason is graduate three is good idea because be more mature for real world. Many people today they does know how real world work.

for example, many teenage does not know how real world work; teen drink and drive involve themselves in accident they hurt themselves and other people without think about their action because their parent bail them out of problem so they don't care if hurt some one are not.

All they know some has take care them. This shows that if teenage graduate three year they will be more mature for real world and they learning their lesson what to do and not what to do.

Another example,

is parent take teenage their full reasonable like pay for car insurance if brake the law parents stand for them say my child is innocent because parents defends for them if do some wrong convinces themselves they do right thing so be to late for them they think that way real world world work they wound't able to learned from their mistake. This show that teenage graduate three year help them to know their surrounding know full action they take full responsible own act.

Second reason is good ideas teenage graduate because it full rsponable of their own they will pay house rent and bills, light bill for example,

my mom pay for phone bill so real they care where money come all know is pay for bill. this shows teen will be more rsponable if pay the own bill be care bill not to go up. Another example I use to much light and water so when water and light bill come will go up ; my mom is only one that has pay bill.

this shows that if teenage doesn't how much they use water and light bill because their take care of those things for them.

Other some side might argument that graduate in three is bad ideas because you miss out life you don't know to have fun you will be stress out you know what make you happy. other example is on enjoy the moment you have as teenage.

At the end graduate three is good ideas because be more mature for real world and you are able take full responsible of their own you will know what life lay out you out their. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
B08751C48DAB,"Generic_Name

March 18 2019

Writting SOL Grade 8

Before, I would always like to try and play the guitar. My brother would always try and teach me, Everytime I hear the guitar, it makes me feel calmed. Also when I was in Elementary School, I used to live in Generic_City, VA. The school I used to go to was named Generic_School. In Generic_School I used to be in band, so I would play the flute. I always tried to play the flute. I would never give up in something that I like or something the was my passion. Though, later on in middle school, when I went to 6th grade, I got in chorus. Once I got in chorus I thought I would hate that class of chorus, but later on I noticed I cannot stop singing. I always like to sing along with music or people. I am glad that I got in chorus in 6th cause I found out myself what I like to do, and what I like to do is sing. Even though, what I still would like to do is learn how to play the guitar and the flute. Doubt I can learn, but I can always try to play hem or one of them.

Another, thing I like to do is workout/exercise. Doing workout/exercise relaxes me a lot and makes me forget about a lot of family problems. I used to be in boot camp. I was in bootcamp when i was in 7th grade then I in 8th but I had to quit for a very obvious and hurtful reason. That reason is that my keee cap is out of place. I was suppost to get surgery, but my mom dosen't have that type of money to pay the surgery. Now, all i do is take pills that my doctor is recommending me but i think they are making me worst but I take them cause I have too. Sometimes, they make my pain go away or they make my pain feel worst to the point where i fall in the floor. I don't really know what they are doing to me. Although I hope I get better by 9th grade cause I want to join the junior army that is at Generic_School. I always wished to a nurse or going to the army, thought sometimes I feel like if I go to the army I would get hurt real bad in there. Even if I worked as a nurse in a hospital, I don't think I would fit right in. I feel like i can disgusted easily but I still want to help people, but I doubt 'll fit right in. I don't think i'll have a great future. I can always try to get what i want all i gotta do is work hard, and ill be able to accomplish the future I want and i've been thinking of, i just gotta do the right thingand also at the right moment.

Hopefully one day everything I want to accomplish now that I can't do i hope I accomplish it in the future and i hope it turns out good too. The wishes i have of playing the guitar,flute, my knee cap getting better, joining the junior army, get in the actual army or just being a nurse I hope I can do all those in the future. I want a great big beautiful and wonderful future. I want to make my family be proud of me for once in forever. When all those have I accomplish by the future im going to look at the ones who would bully me or say things about me and just say what happened to you? I know for a fact if to accomplish those goals in the future they will become true. Some day ill be looking down at people who put me down even when I in a good place.

In the future i also want to play soccer or basketball in 6th and in 7th i sould love to play basketball. I woukld always go outside and go to a basketball court and takemy basket ball sometimes with some friends to play with or sometimes it used to be with my step dad. I have never tried playing soccer cause playing soccer looks hard to do but some say playing soccer isvery easy, thought it dosen't look like it. I have played with my brother before but i'm always scared that my brother is going to kick the ball too hard and accidentaly hit me. Hoping this summer i go to the store andbuy meself a soccer ball and a basket ball for the summer to go out and play. Maybe with my brother to play soccer or even to play basketball but i doubt so i don't even know. I'm not very good atr basket ball, but i sure can throw good in the hoops.

Also always wanted to be a professional coach in basketball but for that I need a lot of practice and me trying hard but I also want to focus in school. Though what i really suck in school is Math, Civics and Science and I don't know how to get better in those three claases i try too but I always fail and always get and F or a D. I don't know really how to bring my grades up in those three classes. Yet i still look fordward a amazing future that i probably cannot have. Even thought what I said, I always got to try on something that i want or else i cannot get it. That's why I always got to try on it. Hopefully bringing my grade up can help me on something cause i really need to bring up my grades i've been getting close too in other classes lately but in those three I can't. In the future I will just not now cause I can't jus try i can't say yes i can knowing i cannot at all. I wish i can ask for help but I am always scared to ask teachers in frony of everyone else so I leave teachers notes witch is ver y emberrassing but at least im trying to bring up my grade. I'm just trying to make my family proud for once in a while. I will not only make them proud cause i'll also make myself proud, and look up and thank god for helping and thank my dad that is in heaven that is right now watching me hopefully.

I have so many wishes and dreams in the future that I am looking fordward too, but i don't even know if i'll be abke to accomplish it and make it.

All im looking fordward too is to accomplish everything and make people happy and proud of me and im trying to be proud of myself and feel like myself for once in a while. All i gotta say is that, no one should give up on their dreams or on what they want to do cause i know everyone can do it and they accomplish there dreams, you can always make everythinmg right you just need the riht moment and need for us to be strong and do it. Never give up on big dreams like these. Everyone should try to make the best out of you.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
D25F59B6DC95,"Although some people say that first impressions are impossible to change, nevertheless I think that first impressions can sometimes change because you get to know thaht person, how they act, and that can sometimes change what you think about them or they can sometimes not change.

In order to think about something about that person you have to get to know them because if you don't know them you won't know why are they being like that. You can't just think something wrong just cause of how they dress. If you get to know that person you will know what they been through. Sometimes people judge just to judge or to think someting that is not true about them. For example when I first saw my guy friend I thought he was wierd, but when I started to talk to him he was totally diffrent from the guy i thought he would be, he is fun to talk with and hang out with.

Some peoples' first impression about someone they are not good. Some people jugde you in how you act and how they dress. The way people act is how sometimes how they are actually are. But I mean if you talk to that person they might be fun to hang out with 24/7. Talk to that person then you will see how first impressions are not always what you think they are.

If you talk to the person and you get to know them, then you will see how first impression about someone are not always true about them. First impressions could change if you decide to talk to them. Don't juge someone if you don't know them

Always be nice to people even if you don't know them. You don't know what they been throught, in oder for you to judge them. It's true sometimes first impressions are not always going to change. But first impressions are not always true about someone be careful on what you say or do to them.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
CCB5EED97986,"I do agree, attitude is energy, and without energy we are nothing.

All the time, the attitude of every single person could change radically, but that could demonstrate what kind of person who you are. Every single person who can not do their own things with attitude, is like if they're not doing it with energy.

My mom change radically her attitude when she's talking with an unknown person. My cousin is the one that teach me how to be a better person just with attitude,

because of some problem's that we have in our family, for all the things that happen in my country, and also for the death of my uncle.

I love my big brother, I want to be as him, for the things he achievement on all his life. My brother is one of the most kindness person in the world. He could talk with an angry person, and just a few minutes, he would be able to change they're mind, how can that be possible?. Its all about attitude.

It's been a while for all the moment's that I lived in my entire life. Every single night that I'm going to sleep, I think all about what I did during the whole day, and I go over to think what do I did wrong, and what do I have to change to have a awesome personality, so when people talk to me, just for the way I talk, they would know if I have a great attitude. The attitude can help people life, because when you are going to ask for a application to get an employment, if you are thinking negative things, nothing is going to be positive to you.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
EF5B4AE52BE6,"In some societies, some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. The courses of study in High School are selected to guide them toward a specific career. It would be amazing if students start when they enter High School. It is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Students should be commit to a career at a young age because it helps students to develop more and it allows a lot of opportunity for many students.

First, start a career at a young age it's important for students because it would helps to develop more. For example, sometimes students choose to do other stuff instead do work. Some students really want to success and get everything in life. Students would always like to have good future over everything. If students commit to a career at a young age, they would be develop in different ways. For example, students would have more stuff to do, more homework. Their mind would be thinking about stuff for their careers. They going to take things more serious for their life.

Secondly, start a career at a young age it's important for students because it allows a lot of opportunity. For example, Generic_Name was a student from Generic_school, she choose to start commit to a career when she was 17 years old. It was hard for her because she took a lot of extra classes. But, she planned to get better lifestyle. She work really hard to complete what she want. By, Generic_Name start a career at a young age was the best option she did in her life, she have a lot of opportunity, she can work wherever she want to. Thus, start thing at a young age students would success more.

However, some people may argue that students should not be commit to a career at a young age because students would not enjoy High School. For example, people argue that students would be more incline about their career, and the would not enjoy High School as a teenager. However, start at a young age would be benefit for students because they would take High School as serious part of life. Also, students would have more opportunity in life, and they would develop more as a person.

To conclude, people would always say that students should no be start a career at a young age. But start at a young age would be the best choice for students in life. Students have the opportunity to be more successful in their careers. Sometimes would be hard for them to do double work, but as they focus and work hard, they would complete a lot in life. Start things at a young age always have good benefits for students and people in general.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
E6EF69520940,"Most of the times, the students don't get the help they need by the school. The reason for this is because some teachers don't really care about whether the students are learning or not, but about their money. Also, some students get bullied by other students and there is no one who could defend them. This happens in a many schools, such as schools in Mexico, United States, Central America, etc. So, in my opinion, attending classes at home is a great option for the students.

Classes online, well known as ""homeschooling"", is a method in which students can do the assignment of their classes at home in their computer. This idea emerged because there is many conflicts that school has to deal with, for example discrimination, and violence and between the students. So, thanks to the advances of technology, the school can provide their services at home. Is a great method, but not as going to the school, sit in your chair and learn. This method has its advantages, but also its disadvantages.

One of the advantages attending classes online is that is more comfortable and secure for the students. For example, the rate for shooting will be reduced, and the students will not suffer any discrimination against other students. Another reason are that it is less stressful because the students would more time to complete any work. Also, it helps the students to better subject. For example, students can watch videos about any specific subject, observe the procedures, and replay them if they are confused. Also parents can supervise their children and help them if they need, and they would not have to worry about attendances.

Classes online are a great benefit for students but they their disadvantages as well. For example there will be no jobs for teachers who really want to teach, share experiences to their students, and help them to improve in their lives. Another example is that students would not communicate with other students and would not know the importance of Team Work. Also, they would not have an experience by doing activities (such as playing sports, instruments, going to filmstrips, etc,)

which help them to develop useful skills. Another disadvantage is that schools would not have alternate classes that helps them to chose the career they want to. For example construction, cosmetics, arts, music, engineering, technology, etc.

In conclusion, attending classes online is a great method, but not as much as going to the school. The school is always going to be a learning center. If the school applies more fair rules, the students would feel more safety and gain a lot of confidence. Also, the school has to have better teachers who really want to help their students and not teachers that only care about their job. Anyways, the school helps us to get right path for our lives, so without it, we would not the education we need to improve in our lives and in the world.        ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
80F044EBC71B,"I chose the lesson math for elementary school because. It can help out a lot,it makes number more easier when going on to middle school,it can make your intelligent bigger. When knowing your numbers or knowing how to do math it makes math seem really easy. When moving on later in life you dont have to keep on struggling because you will already know how to overcome prices because you been practicing math all your life. It pays off if you keep on doing math and practicing it over and over. When moving on to middle school or high school you have to already know your steps math setups or your going to have a hard time in middle school and high school. Plus you will have good grades in math all the time and your test score will be good as well. I will always do math because i know later in life math will be every where you go and plus learning this in a young age will help you out a lot and it make a really smart person If you really keep on. Math will be every where you go and sometimes you have to do math when your in the store, gas station, when your buying stuff online,

even when your buying a gift for someone. Learning how to do math will help out a lot. I know sometimes it will get boring or you will get bored of it but just knowing how to do math it will help you and save your life in college. Because in college your going to see some pretty big numbers and math problems. Math will be important in so many ways because in life your going to use a lot of math so its better learning it when your young. So then you dont have to worry about it so much later on in life. This is why math is an important lesson for elementary students.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
B4994C771190,"Do you think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?

I don't think the students would get benefits from being able to attend clasess from home. First, the students not have somebody like a teacher to tell what to do and no body give pressuare. For example: if the student don't want to do what the student have to do no body tells nothing. Second, the student who takes oline classes will not have any friends or somebody to talk. For example: Everybody want any friend or somebody who can we talk if you do stay at home you never meet someone and never know somebody. Third, the student maybe can get frustate to be lonely at home. For example: if the student take oline classes and watch videos conferencing maybe will be boring and the studend get stress in another part if the student take the classes at school he be with friends or somebody to talk. Next, if the student stay at home the student can do whatever the student want to do. For example: if the student want to play video games the student can do that and if the student want to sleep he can do that too because the student will not feel with any responsability also, if the student wants to go outside he can do that because the student will be at home and maybe their parents work all day. Finally, if you take the classes at home and never came to school you cannot live the experinces that we live at school. For example: if you take a classes at home you cannot participate in any activity that the school have like a any sport or party or any activity that one is so funny and you can enjoy the activities with you friend or teachers who always are there for us to lisen if you have any problem and the techer are like a secret box because you can tell whatever you want and they never tell to someone. That's why I think is nice to get classes at school and I think is not so good to take classes at home because you can get more fun at school and is a experince that you will never forget.

In another part if you did not want to get school because someboby bother you like if another student tell you a nickname that you di not like maybe can be a reason that you did not want came to school but you can took with you adviser or your's parents because every body have a opportunity to be at school and anybody can't tell you anything.      ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
98C692B7B152,"I agree that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because you will be exited for your next step and you want to know whats gonna happened once you have passed.

For example if you fail on doing something, you will be exited on doing it again until you haven't pass because you might be thinking thats your dream to achieve it or its really important to achieve what i fail in it. I heard story of a guy he fail a lot but he didn't gave up because he was still interested on the experiment, so he failed like 408 time I think and he passed at 409th times so you can imagine that he was still exited and interested on that experiment that he failed 408 times and he got success at 409 times.

So in life when people failed on something they move on because they might not be interested or exited on that thing that they have failed but many other people will keep trying until they haven't achieve it. they will keep trying because they love it or they are still exited on that work that they have failed.

I know some people don't like doing one thing again and again but if you want to be success in life you have to keep doing it until you haven't achieve it because you can't be success in life without being a failure. when people failed on something they might say that its hard and i am not gonna do it again because they didn't try their best on it, but if you keep trying you will get some hint on it and it will be easier to achieve what you working on. So if you failed on something be enthusiasm on it it will help you more to be success in life.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
FFDC4011AC9C,"""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"" What I think about that quote is that you cant do your best in every problem. If your still stuck on what it even means like I was in the first few minutes of seeing that, It means that in every challenge you see in life there is always a way to try your best and get through that challlenge, dispite what your mind tells you because your mind is your biggest enemy you will ever face. I dont particularly agree with that quote jsut because in certain problems even if you try your best you will still fail or if you just dont want to do the problem or other people around you dont then you most likley fail to. What im trying to get at to this quote is that instead of being ""For every problem there is a chance for you to do your best"" it should be ""For every problem or challenge there is always a way to get thorugh it"". Here is a few examples: If your dying from old age and your deadline is going to be this week. Then just die you get around the challlenge by dying because in most relgions there is something called heaven so you can die and go to heaven. Another example: Facing a hard question, just guess! You'll have a 1/4th chance of getting it right and if you just guess it would be bettter then sitting on the problem for 20 minutes. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
FE722240CBB7,"Occupations through internships and shadowing opportunities in companies.

I had heard in my school that this company offer the students to visit and learn about the work that interest the student and I want to be one of them.

You will want to know what do I have of special or different to the others student s in my school; I will tell you why yo should choose my instead to another student.

I'm a daughter of a single mother with five children and possible only one will go to college and that child will no be me because I'm in the oldest of all my siblings, I'm also their second mom and I have to work and take care of them instead to go to college thats what my mom think.

And if you give the opportunity to learn in your company my mom will change her mind to not put me in college and know that if I go to college and had my certificate it will be better to stay in home taking care of my siblings and work with a minimum salary when if I had the certificated I will had a better salary and I will be able to help even more in home and with a good job I can put my siblings into college too.

Another reason is that I'm one of the best students in my school and I had never have problems in my school with anyone, either a teacher or a student. I will never do anything to hurt the company while I'm there learning something that can help me in my future job and maybe you will have me working there after I finish college.

You will be never feel like I waste your time, that will never happened i can secure that because I'm can be able to know how hard it's to choose a couple of students of many schools that you had investment. With my effort and my dedication I will really appreciate and do a good job on that visit.

If you choose me you will be given me not only an opportunity to learn in your company, no you will be given me an opportunity to believe that I can do it, that I can success to be someone in this competitive world.        ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
BCF16DEB277E,"Many people can set a good example by the way the behave but you can also Influence people by the your professional career you have. I believe example is not the main thing it is the only thing because younger people growing up look up to you by the way your behavior is and they hear the kind of language you use towards friends and adults.

For example, when I was growing up I looked up to my brother I watched his actions very closely. One day I saw my brother giving food to poor people at 7 eleven and I was shocked, the next day I went to give food at 7 eleven. Eventually, as I was leaving the store the manager called me up and asked me why I was giving food out and I told him that I saw my brother giving so I thought that was the right thing to do. In another occasion my brother and mom went to the toy store to buy some toys for a birthday present for my cousin and my brother really wanted this toy so and my mom said that she was not going to buy for him so he started kicking the floor because he was mad at my mom and because of that my mom bought him the toy. So the next day my mom took me to the supermarket with her and I really wanted this snack from the shelf and she said that I could not buy it so I started kicking the floor and crying therefore my mom bought me the snack. Since I saw my brothers actions and behavior towards my mom and saw it worked out well I did the same thing.

For instance, one day I heard my mom arguing with my dad on the phone because of some misunderstanding they had and my mom was using foul language to address her part of the side and my dad was using it too. So later on in the day my mom called me on the phone and told me to go get my little brother at school and I told her it was not my problem to get him and then I started using foul language on the phone because I thought it was okay because she used on my dad. In another occasion I heard my brother giving out compliments to people on the street and by the way he spoke it influenced me to say the same thing as him as walked the streets.

Some people may argue that people get better influenced by a person of its professional career because they think they got to the place there at right now by showing they can go anywhere no matter what example they show.

In conclusion I believe that example is the one and only thing that influences others becasue what your actions do your younger sibling and friends are going to follow it and get influenced by you. the actions my brother took I followed them if though they were good or bad I got influenced by it. Also the way my mother was speaking and the language she was using towards my dad influenced me to speak back to her that way when she called me.          ",4.5,3.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
08FC47A564AE,"Accomplish your dreams and you will have many opportunities.

Opportunities don't always just come like magic you have to work for them.

One thing I want to accomplish in the future is going to college because I want to study for the job I want, I will also find more job opportunities, and I also will get a good amount of money.

I want to study for a job after college. by going to college I can study whatever I want for whatever I want to do in the future. If I study hard enough I will have a good future.

The more I study the better. Because I can have a future without a lot to worry about.

If I dont study I could end up having a poor job. If I have a poor job I will have to worry a lot more about how I'm going to pay this and that. So at the end its better to work hard when you the opportunity because it will pay off after in life.

After college I can have I can have better job opportunities. When you go to college you have more experience on what you want to work as. The more you know the more job opportunities you have.

When you look for a job they look at everything about you. When they see you went to college they will want you at their company. If you go to college you can study something you like and you know you will want to do in the future and then you will have two options. One of the options would be to look for a big company and work there or start your own company.

going to college gives you two options starting your own company or look for a big company to work in.

When you go to college you have better job opportunities and will get well payed.

After college you can look for a big company and you will get well payed. With the money you get you can pay all your bills and keep the rest to your self. With a good job you get good money and you can help those who need it the most.

You can help your family or people in the streets.

With the money your get you can even start you own company. Starting your own company will take time but you will succeed. When you accomplish your dreams help does who need to be helped.

My accomplishment is to go to college for many good reasons. You go to college to get a good job and get payed well.

If you accomplish you dreams help others accomplish their with all the things your are provided and let them know that just like you help them to accomplish their dreams they should help others too.",3.5,3.5,4.0,2.5,4.0,3.5
840357B74A16,"Should students have partnerships with companies that interest the type of employment they want? Students think it's a great idea to go to different businesses because it will be helpful to them in the future. If a student is stuck on what he wants to do in life the businesses can help them see what they want for their future. Students should have partnerships because students can get more skills about that job, students learn more about the job their going for, and student can see if that the job they really want to be in.

First, students can get more skills about there job because they are in the business hands they can go around learning on how they do everything. They also get to see how the company is ran and how they handle business. Student can learn a lot we it comes to the business if the company shows them about it. If the company helps the students then the students are going to want to take classes about it. Their going to want to go to the Tech center about it their going to want to learn more.

Second, is that they learn more about the business by going to the company. They learn how to control the mechanical stuff over at the company. They will learn about the paper work over there. They will even know where they want to work at over there if they learn more about it. They will have a fun experience about their job they most likely want to do when they get older. They would be even more interested to take classes at school about business and will pursue in that type of employment .

Third, students can really see if they want to be in that type of business. Similar to the other two this helps them, but not only if they want to pursue in that job it's for if they really don't want the job. Also they can find a back up plan if that business is not the right one for them. They can go see if its a bad business, if it helps with the future, and if it's the job they want to go after. They can't focus them to like if they didn't see it for themselves they won't do it if it's not for them, they're going to find something that they want to do not what they need to do. Students can see of they want to work there they can see the positive and the negative of the business they can't be focused, or they can't just cant be focused on that one thing.

In conclusion, The students get to choose if they want to or not. They should know what they want to or figure out what they would do in the future. Students can't be focused to do mainly anything they have to find what they like for they can do it. Other people may say that they will go there and not learn anything,however if students go there for what they are a looking for they can pursue it. If students font get to choose then students wouldn't get more skill about the job, wouldn't learn as much about the job, and wouldnt't even want to see the type of job. Students can see they future if they get the help they need by companies letting them learn about it will help students pursue their occupation.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
050BFA60C6AF,"Do a city council is debating the adoption of a 10 P.m weekend curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers? some people believe that the council should not be debating the adoption of a 10 P.m weekend curfew while other believe that they should debate the adoption of a 10 P.m weekend curfew. If the curfew is adopted, teenager on the street after those hours would be breaking the law.

This is important because there are so many dangerous people out at night trying to kidnapping some teenagers. This curfew should take teenager out of trouble like being walking on the street at midnight trying to intimidate others teenager.

This curfew is going to take teenager safe, because at midnight there are so many dangerous people on the street, like gangs members those people are just trying to take teenager and make them to join to there gang and make them to do bad things.

This should take teenager to be with there family , and no with bad influences at night, bad influences are just trying to make you to be in big trouble. when you are in trouble the person that make you to b e there he just run away when they see that your in a big trouble they are not going to help you ,

because that what bad influences do.

Do a city council is debating the adoption of a 10 P.m weekend curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. This is important because there are so many dangerous people out at night trying to kidnapping some teenagers. This curfew should take teenager out of trouble like being walking on the street at midnight trying to intimidate others teenager. This curfew is going to take teenager safe, because at midnight there are so many dangerous people on the street, like gangs members those people are just trying to take teenager and make them to join to there gang and make them to do bad things.

This should take teenager to be with there family , and no with bad influences at night, bad influences are just trying to make you to be in big trouble. when you are in trouble the person that make you to b e there he just run away when they see that your in a big trouble they are not going to help you ,

because that what bad influences do.                      ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
E8257C027079,"Is true that many students would like to graduate early with all the credits they need already, few students get to have that many good grades of all their school years the makes them able to graduate earlier,but of course, thats not something easy to achieve, some students maybe don't mind to taking all 4 years of high school to graduate,but others would like to take the 3 years and still get all the credits they need to graduate,even tho that may take them more work to do to achieve that.

I think it would be a good idea for students to be able to graduate with three years of high school, with the same idea that they will have to take summer courses and evenings to get all credits in three years, and the advantages of that would be that they will get out of school earlier and be able to star college, work, and a career at a earlier age, and also for students who don't like to spend too much time on school stuff, that would be like a way to get out of that faster and achieve their goals quickly, i have some friends that they graduated earlier because they had good grades, which made them have enough credits to graduate,and they doing good right now, because now they in college and achieving their goals, and i believe it would be a good idea to give other students the same opportunity, if they want to take it.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
491FA41A1499,"What are some good attitudes you can show it to your friends. I saw people have good attitudes in their way like one of my friend. If people have good attitudes that doesn't mean they don't have attitudes. Having good attitudes mean they have attitudes in a good way. My friend showed attitudes to different people in a different way. You can tell when people have bad attitudes or good attitudes. The good attitudes helps you to success in your life even when you have difficult time. The benefits of have good attitudes is you can success in your life, be happy, and have friends.

You can only success in your life by getting support from your family and your friends. Most of the people show their attitudes at school like one of my friend does. She never showed bad attitudes with her teacher or other adults but she does show attitudes with her friends but not bad way. She showed bad attitudes some time and good attitudes sometime. She think its fun because we are all same. She don't feel bad when she show us attitudes. She knows we are not going to feel bad for that. We all will help her out when she needed.

Like I said you can success in your life by getting support from you friends. If she have fake friends she knows they never will help her when she needed.

Be happy, I mean that by getting good grades at school. If you get good grades that mean everyone happy even your teacher. My friend, she always try to get our help before she ask her teacher. Is not that she is bad at school. Everyone get confused at something. I saw lots of difficult time at her life and we all tried to help. If she wasn't being kind to us no one would of friend with her. Also one time a teacher tried to help her to get good grades at class. She had C+ at class she needed only some point to get B- so that she can get A B honor roll. She request her teacher if she can help her out with it ,and her teacher gave extra point on test she took. Her teacher told her 'I only did that because you are a kind person.' 'I will love to help someone like you.'

Its not easy to make friends. Some people like to have friends who is kind to them, have good attitudes, have some similarities between each other. Some people make friends who has bad attitudes like them. They think talking with a nice person is embarrassing. Some people like having a good friends who never will leave them behind. If you make a friend who have bad attitudes all the time that means she/he is your fake friends. Also, a kind person can be also a fake friend. For example, when I moved into a new school I had friend. She always helped me. She was really polite to me. She helped me to find my classes, she helped me make new friends because I was a shy person. After some days letter there was a another girl moved in there. After that girl moved int here she never talked me. I tried to go talk to her but she didn't really care. Sometime when I saw her in the hall I said ""hi"" and she also said it back. After while she never even look at me. Its like she don't even know who I am. So yeah, its hard to find friend who really care about you.

In conclusions, some good attitudes you show it to your friends is be with them when they need you the most, be polite to them. Having good attitudes can help people future a lot. You have to explore that good attitudes. Some people don't even know what is good attitudes mean. They think attitudes is attitudes, they think having attitudes mean being really mean to people. But there is so many way to show attitudes, good way and bad way. Good attitudes helps people to success in their life. In additional, to success in life you also need your family and friends help. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
9AC838864995,"Im talking about if the school days should be extended by one and a half hours or not and the effects it'll have towards the students, teachers, and the whole school together.

So adding an hour and a half to a school can open a lot of opportunities to learn, more electives, and what most students would think of a longer day at school is bordem, but school is where you socialize the most during the day and as a kid school is where you meet most of your long time friends so there is more then just being bored at school it's a place you can socialize, have fun, and learn all in one day.

If it were up to me whether to leave the school schedule as it is or to add an hour and half to the school day I would have to disagree because if the teachers were to give piles of homework then when you get home you'd be exhausted and drained to the point where you arent able to then even if you did manage to then you would be so tired that it would effect the next day which would cause you to barely do any work in school so the students need to get out of school so they can get their homework done.

If students were to stay at school till 4pm assuming there bedtime is around 9pm then the would basically only have 5 hours to do their homework but wait so then imagine if they had chores to do around the house then once they've done their chores they'd be even more exhausted so after all that they had done what if they wanted to relax a little bit now they have such little time to do anything during their time off from school that they might have to stay up longer then they usually do now it's about 6am in the morning after last night they could barely get a goods night rest and their body and mind are completely drained for today and all they have is good breakfast to get their mind to at least keep them knowledgeable for the day and this whole cycle repeats over and over but then you can at least get a good weekend of relaxing so that you'll be refreshed for the weekdays.

I disagree with the decision to extend the school day because of the effects that it has towards students and how it can effect their mind and how much productivity they are able to produce could be affected due to overwhelming amount of work put upon a child. There are definitely many pros to having a good education and to be able to live a good life. Students may not want to go to school and can find it very overwhelming but at the same time the students are working very hard so they can have the best possible life they can. School is a place where you go to learn, have fun, and the school has provided the time so that students can learn what they want by having electives that they like the best because that what they might want to be when they grow up because if the school didn't have such excellent teachers the students could never succeed on their own and that's why the teachers have to relate to the student so they can have a much better understanding so that they can proceed to adulthood where their decisions can affect them badly. ",3.0,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
9B9E23C5D3C8,"Teacher want to make a homework clube for student at schools. I think they want to start this club so students do there homework for offten and teacher are going to helps you if your need help. This is going help kids be responsible and learn more. Doing a homework club after school is going to help kids alot.

2.

I think its a good idea but also a bad idea. The reson why i think its good is because it can help kids if they need help. The reson i think is a bad idea is beacause kids are going to have to stay after school but its bad cause they might have somthing planed. Its good and bad cause kids need to learn how to be responsble.

3.

Tenns/kids might think its a waist of time. They might get bored and just might not to there homework. They wont like staying after scchol kids and teens might just think its a waist of time. They just mont like it at all.

4. i support this because its going to help students out by doing there homework. Students are going to do there homework now. Even tho they might thinks its dumb its not its relly going to help them. Hopefully student start doing there homework now.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
41D9E5A1342B,"The great artist Michelangelo I thinking he is the best artist because he said most of us lies not setting our I am to high and falling short.

setting and achieving they work in the same position I think so Michelangelo he know that,if the achieving is low the setting low too because is the same he doing good jobs also if, he get a new jobs he had more talent.

I think the setting is too low because the system is too low so he need good system and good setting and than everything is work after than he can work very good .

my recommend to Michelangelo is change the sitting if he change the sitting for one high he need more recommendation for he jobs he need doing a lot to doing for he jobs and the setting is to short he need one bigger because the short is a lot problem.

Also I have one more recommendation if you need the new system just change is more better make sure the setting is not short because if the setting is short always are low but if the setting is bigger the setting is more high and not falling.

50% I am agree but the other 50% no

I agree because he have nice talent and he do nice jobs also I disagree because the setting is very short and low but if get my recommendation is more better and he have good idea but he have bad idea too so let me get the agree because I like he history

I agree because he used setting and achieving is two thing very important on this history he have nice history my position is when i read the history is to confuse but now i understand what he doing .

example: just change the short setting to a bigger setting if more better fr you this my litter example thank you for read Michelangelo remember dont forget my recommendation .",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
E0BDF62838F7,Hey have you been asked to teach a group of elementary students a lesson? well you have been chosen to teach a group of students a lesson and the lesson was multiplying and dividing because it will teach how add and subtract quickly. The 1st example is like going to a grocery store and don't know how much does 4 bags of chips cost for the party your going to well multiplying can help you figure out the cost. The 2nd example for dividing can help you figure out if you have a discount you can find the new cost and how much money you saved. Final reason is like multiplying and dividing fractions like 1/2 times 2/3 that would equal 2/6 and dividing that by 1/2 will equal 2/3 because if you add that is would be 3/5 and subtracting that by 1/3 would be 2/2 which is 1. So in conclusion multiplying and dividing can help you get answer more fast than adding and subtracting over and over.,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
A81E2C81BCAB,"In my opinion, i think what Albert Einstein is saying, might be true. I think imagination is like a little world in your mind that only you can control. Imagination is what you want it to be, nobody can control it because it's yours to keep and think about in your mind. I agree with Albert Einstein's quote,""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I agree with this quote because, knowledge is building up in your mind little by little because people are teaching it to you.

Even though knowledge is going to be extremely helpful in the career you desire to have, you must have imagination in order to ""look"" into the future and see yourself doing something good with your life. Einstein was one of the smartest human beings on earth known to man kind. He was the creator of the space and time theories that in my opinion, I like very much.

Albert Einstein had to use imagination and knowledge at the same time in order to come up with those theories. He also needed knowledge in order to know what was out there in deep space and to know the truth behind black holes and all that cool\space stuff. Imagination is a real thing. Imagination is better than knowledge because its there with you forever. Knowledge is taught to you, but what is taught to you, you might forget it in the future. Also things that you learn in life might not be used in the future or in the career you fore seek to be doing. Even though knowledge is really important to learn, it may go away or you might not need it in the future career or job you wish to do.

Life is full of bad people. If you have ever done something wrong, you might want to ""think before you act."" If you were to do something without knowing the consequences, you're going to get in trouble. What if bad people that are in jail right now, would've thought of the consequences before committing the crime? Yea, they probably wouldnt of done it. Example, if you wanted to prank a teacher on the last day of school or hitting a school clock, causing it to fall and break, you might want to think before you act.

You might also want to ""imagine"" what would happen to you in the future if you did something wrong. Another good reason is to learn from your mistakes. Since you already did them you're have a good visual of what you might expect to happen to you in the future if you did something wrong without thinking about it. you might also want to have knowledge because if you thought of the consequences and or imagined them, you wouldnt of done it in the first place.",3.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
DE841BF24A2F,"A wise man always said "" Thinking out of the box can get you a better choice."" Seeking multiple opinions can help people make a better choice for several reasons.

First, they will have more choices to choose due to this problem. Everybody will have a different idea because of their way to look at the problem, they might think the problem out of the box and give out some choice that you never think of. Recently, my friend Generic_Name were in a problem of what sport should he choose and we all gave out different opinions because some of us think that which sport can benefit our future better, some of us think that is important to match your hobbies and benefit to your body health after you play the sport, but we never think about the sport that Generic_Name like better. It is important to think the problem in a different way because after that you can find a better way to solve it .

Second, seeking for multiple opinions can help you collect ideas and solve the problem with friends and family. It is important to think together with friends and family because it can help you with more ideas and power. Recently, my friend Generic_Name got bully in school two moths ago, Generic_Name cry in the restroom alone because the person that bully him told that

Generic_Name cannot tell anybody about what happen, after he get home he told his parents and principal start to find out the person bully Generic_Name. After that, Generic_Name know it is very important to let parents know that his feeling.

Third, seeking for multiple opinions can let people feel like they are not alone to this problem, most of the time people can cause the mind to do wrong things because they feel like no one want to help them and leave them alone. Recently, Generic_School did a report that said three percent of people died in the year is because they feel alone, they think that no one with help them. If everyone can also help each other when they have a problem, maybe we can make the world much better.

In conclusion, seeking multiple opinions can make people make a better choice and it can also benefit other and make the world much better .",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
B7FCFC6A7011,"I want to work as a animal babysitter, I had a lot of experience of taking care of animals I learned how to take care of animals and fishes, everyday I feed my guinea pigs and fishes and my dog, I have taken care of animals since was little, since one day I want to visit a pet Daycare and explore the daycare of how dogs are being taken care of, I want to learn about how to take care of new animals, I want to rescue animals in Mexico, cause I'll save animals in Mexico since I have a ranch there, I could care for the dogs or other animals, since I saved lives of them when I was in Mexico, I would feed them or help them from abuse from other people, I had experience for caring for animals, since I want to learn the correct way of taking care of new animals that I have never experienced with, I may want to learn when they get sick, taking care of animals can be hard and a lot of work, since you need to take them a shower, clean their pee or poo, and feed them, it depends how many you need to care for, I want to convince employees to hire me since I've had a lot of experiences of how to care for their health, I know how to take care of freshwater and salt water fishes I know what they need to eat, When I see a fish dying I put it in a separate tank and I watch over them when they start breathing healthy I wait there for hours until its healthy to go back to its tank, i have saved a lot of fishes lives and animals from those who are dying, everyday I study about fish types and their water, and I study about fish gender everyday, I study about Pleco, goldfish, Molly, betta, bunbunshkin, koi, puffer fish, kissing gourami, gourami. I want to be a farmer to take care of animals such as horses since I love them, I want to learn to take care of them, I want to work as a daycare and a farmer since I want to have a secondary job [ animal daycare, and farmer] and I want to learn to grow crops and take care of flowers and plants, I have plants in my front house that they are healthy but they die in the cold but grow back again when its warm, I water them when its warm, I want to convince the farmer to let me work as their asisstants. swimming is my favorite sport but I want to keep learning how to swim better so i can be a swimming teacher to teach my students how to swim while not drowning, I want them to learn how to swim so their life won't be drowned, I want to learn for their kids safety I could, If i retire I could work as a life guard since I had experience of swimming. which four jobs should I pick?",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
F1B1760AD63F,"I disagree with Emerson statement about individuality, because you can't think about only yourself, I mean sometimes but not everytime like me, me, me and nothing else bised yourself. So you have to think about others like; family, parents, brothers or sisters, grandparents, collagues (sometime), friends when they helping me in some situation and after that I do care. For example if you are in team or more than that, when you participate your members may asking quiestios to solve the problems, what are the planes for next few weeks we will do, or projects. And ""it's about teamwork not a selfish"" if you decide to ignore and don't even trying to helping your team members, what kind of person they will think about you as team member, but if you will help your team, well then.... push yourself and at least do your best to succeed. When you have a job at business office or somewhere else, they will watch you how you behave, why they should higher you, handel your working and etc. Just don't overthink about yourself, and just do not forget about other who you have.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
8E2EB0B4B92C,"The author Ralph waldo Emerson once wrote "" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" Many people may agree with that, but there are also others who may disagree with his saying. I think would agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, one because you don't have to worry what others think of you. Two, you feel relieved not pretending to be someone or somethings you aren't. Last but not least three, people can see the real you.

Ralph Waldo Emerson once wrote "" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because one, you don't have to worry what others think of you. Being yourself will most likely help you boost your confidence. If you worry about what other people think you will probably be stressing trying to become something you aren't. Think about what Ralph Waldo Emerson one wrote "" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.""

"" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" This a quote that Ralph Waldo Emerson once wrote. People may agree or disagree everyone has there own opinion. I however agree with his quote because, if your being yourself you'll feel relieved not pretending to be something or someone you aren't. Sometimes pretending to be someone or something you aren't can stress you out because you feel pressured. You feel like you need everyone to like you but will you feel good about yourself pretending.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, the author who wrote "" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" Why do most people agree with his quote, there could be many reasons. My reason to agree with Ralph's quote is because people can see the real you when being yourself. Not being yourself around your family, friends, and other people could make you feel less confident about yourself or your actions. Pretending can make you feel guilty, it could make you feel like you're lying to someone about yourself, so think about it.

The author Ralph waldo Emerson once wrote "" To be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" As I said many people agree and many disagree we are all entitled to our own opinions. If you ask me I completely agree with his quote because, one you don't have to worry what others think of you, two you feel relieved not pretending to be someone or somethings you aren't, and three people can see the real you. Become yourself or do what make you feel comfortable. Think to yourself, before choosing whats best for you.",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
5C6CE74DEBCB,"To begin with, did you know that this year there has been bigger problems with climate change than now, last year, and the other years before that. To say nothing of, i agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. For this prompt i have some reasons why i agree why having a positive attitude is the key to success. In addition,climate change would always be the problem we would have with our earth but, hoping it would'nt be as bad as today.

Further more, the First reason why i agree to having a positive additude is the key to success because, having a good mind can help you get things done faster. For example, during school hours i complete my work on time when im not feeling too tired, or when im feeling like im doing great, and when im having alot of good energy. Having a good mind to gets things done faster, can help you not stress about uncompleted work. A positive mind can have very good idias and accomplish your goals. In conclution, having a positive mind can bring important things done faster.

In addition, having a positive additude gives good vibes everyone likes, enlighten other people day, or can lead to good things in your life. For example, when im working and im having a bad day there always a customer who changes my mood to a very positive mood and i start to work better. Having a good mood or mind can leave a good job. To conclude for, having a good mind or great attitude can lead you to big important things in your life that can lead you to greatness.

Third reason why, good attitude can help your mental health , help other people around you, or people you very close to. For example, i would be very close to my older sister because she always gaved good additude,good vibes, and she had more expirience in life that she could help me with. To say more of, this example can lead you to be more confident in your self. To say nothing of, this can also lead to feel good about your self and love your self mentally and emotionally.

Finally, having positive mental health can bring yourself to have good feelings about your self to get things done and feel good about it without hesitation.

In conclution, Having a Positive addittude is a good thing we should all do in our lives. In addition, to having these reason why i agree to having a positive attitude is the key to success in life is because, without having a good additude we wouldn't get things done and things would get things done the wrong way or not good enough to be great. Furtheer more, not having a great additude can lead to not accomplishing your goal or be successful as you would like in life.           ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
948771F795EB,"We accomplish more when we are active, and are always doing something. I want to go to a university, but to achieve this goal, I have to put forth effort my going to school and studying all the time. I am always doing something while I am in school, and I am not allowed to be on my cell phone. This will not help me pass in school, even after school I sometimes stay in tutoring for Math and English, because I have trouble. This will be true in school, sports, and in life like my mother tells me all the time. I have to agree that always staying busy will allow you to accomplish more in life.

In my school, soccer also helps me stay busy, because I am on the team. We have to practice everyday to have a chance to win. I want to be the best player that I can be, and to do this I have to always practice. My coach tells me the more I practice, and the busier that I am the better condition I will be in for the game. Soccer takes a lot of energy and you are always active in the game and you need to be more active than the other team to win. Always doing something in sports allows you to be better.

My mom told me when she was growing up that she was poor, and she did not always have food to eat so she picked mangoes off of the tree. She did go to school, but when she was not in school she had to always stay busy. She would go to her grandmother's house to wash clothes or sell some of the mangoes that she picked in the street. She was fifteen years old, and she had no shoes so she worked for rich people in their house cleaning. She tells me this so that I will understand that I have to stay active and she has worked hard to give me a better life. She gets angry when I try to stay in bed and not do anything, because I always need to be active to get somewhere in life.

We achieve more when we stay active, and we always are doing something good. My goals in life are to go to school, and graduate from a college, play sports to stay in condition, and make a better life for my kids like my mother. I can only do these things if I stay active and work hard. It is wonderful how much you can achieve if you always stay active and focused.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
06737289651D,"To conserve energy and resourses.

In my opinion:Resourses something such as land, minerals or natural energy that exists,businesses have a great idea to adothing and making eigty hours a week for the four days is a big benefit,special when the businesses or corporation big they will be have more a prifi in the future, not money but in other patways they will have help for Example,food same of the people they will think is disavantages for the businesses, because some of then will understanding and some of them not.

In this case in my school I think, should be follow the model to,but a little difefently,because school is not businesses, would extending, making two hours but not everyone,want to, but if people understanding it a good extending because if we conserved the energy and resources we can proveid such as land mineralsor natural energy, Example: The enviroment will have more conserve energy.

The more important is how to know adopthed the hours to conserved energy, we will do for provide goos and have extraordinary successful.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
97472A5E870A,"No, I am disagree with Emerson's statement. Some people think that just because they manepulate you will change. If some elses want to make you different, or change you is because; They are not happy with theirselfs.

I think that if the people that are aroud you wants to chage you is becuase they love how you are and want to be like you ; That best thing that you can do is get away from the people and make new ones that are possive and help you to become a better person, human. The worse thing that you can do is change because of others.

People treated you bad becuase they want to accomplish their goal that is break you into pieces but, if you don't let those commen, actions hurt you everything is going to okay. Last year there were some girls that detely were hurting me my feels. In adition, Every day they would told me dress good you have to be like this act like you are a model; They would also make fun of me too because i was dressing so poorly. i was wearing the same shoes every day same pants. When they saw me they would make the face like they were going to trow up. Therefore, i never let them make my self esteem go down. I was so possitive also my family give me good vibes too, They would told me you know were you wanna get at. You know your goals those are the want you have to pay attention to.

Inconclution, don't let people make you something else. Some people think that you are going to change because they want but, they are wrong because you can be however makes you feel great with yourself. In the future i see that nobody is going to judge you.     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
529A633179FF,"Have you ever wondered about the important's and the difference between imagination and knowledge? Knowledge and imagination are both very important but I think knowledge is more important. Imagination is like thinking about something, or putting your self in that situation, while knowledge is an understanding gained by actual experience and it is also known as something learned and kept in your mind. Knowledge helps a lot of people to get jobs so everyone should try to get a knowledge so they can use it to help other people that dont have a very good knowledge.

Majority of all the humans in the world get their knowledge from schools. They either get it from a public school which is made by the government or they get their knowledge from a private school which is made by and individual, or a group of people. Schools provide knowledge to students by putting them in classes with students that are their age. you need knowledge to give the students the information you learned, you cant be selfish with you knowledge because you must have been thought by some one, or you must have used someones resources to be intelligent. So if you a good education help other people that are not as smart as you because they can help you when you need it in life.

If there was no knowledge in the world there will be no electronic devices that we can use, there will be no new inventions. We are gonna need more doctors to study and find out the cures to all the new diseases that is spreading around the world thats why we have schools and teachers to help. I think all knowledge should be free from first grade to the end of your college year. having to pay for college education makes a lot of students drop out and do drugs and they always get addicted to drugs and alcohol they even try to be you tubers or rappers which must of the time does not work.

finally I disagree that imagination is more important than knowledge. So if you have a good knowledge you should be proud to share it with others. Imagination i also good for you but you should focus more on getting you knowledge so you can help others. helping others makes makes you feel much better about your self and it makes you day better.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
7D98C85F9223,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives? Yes, people using technology on everyday bases can have negative effects on thier lives. For example, looking into your screen for long period of time can have negative effects on your eyes. Being on your phone everyday limits your time of socialing and having regular converstion with other people. technology can make you develop an ediction with your phone, video game, and computer making you unawere with what's happeing around the world. eventhoght technology has negative effects on you, sometimes technology can have positive effects on you and your everyday life.

For example, technology can help you keep and complite taskes in your everyday life. using your phone can alow you to do things like: order clothes, buy eddibles, talk with family and friends all over the world, watch movies, listin to music, playing games, remembering birhdays, and things you have to do in your long term plan. Getting things done just by your phone can make your life easier and stress free. In some cases technology is used more then to just watch movies and remebering birthdays, its used to save lifes and make new inventions.

For instance, older people with health problems use technology everyday, they depend on technology to safe thier lives. The technology that they have can alert and get the help the person needs without the person having to call or touch anything. people around the worls are using technology to help and make cure for people with health issues. some are using technology to make new inventions such as, self driving cars to make the world a better and safe place.

For students technology is very helpful they can use it in school to take tests, quizes, and classwork. They can use it at home to do homework and study. use it to reserch and watch visualy watch videos to help them understand things they don't know. help them communicate with teachers and other helpful resorces online. For home schooled students technology is very helpful, beacuse some student are able to learn and understand better if they got lessons online than in a classroom.

Moreover, technology is a very helpful thing it might have negative effects on you and your life if you use it in the wrong way but its very helpful in some cases, and people actually need technology to learn and live. Therefore, technology can benifit people in thier everyday life. technology isnt bad or have negative effects on you its the way you use technology.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
C1E9D98B3613,"I personally agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson with his quote saying ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" The reason i agree is because I believe that you have to set your goals higher, if mastered something already. Its always alright to fail trying to master your goal because nobody is perfect. You also need to try different goals to master so youre good at several things.

The first reason why i believe you should set your goal higher, if you have already mastered your goal is because if you keep doing the same thing youve done over and over and have already done great at it, you will not see any growth in you. For example if i was in a soccer team and played for a rec team. Which rec is when you sign up and get put on a team with no tryouts. If i played and score almost every game and always outplayed my opponents. I wouldnt grow as a soccer player because the opponents would be easy for me and wouldnt be a challenge so i would have to set my goal higher. For a higher goal i would have to move up to travel to see growth in me and have a challenge in the game.

I believe that people also disagree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson because they are scared to set there goal higher when they have already mastered it. The reason i think this is because they are embarrassed to fail and not do something right. When i'm reaching a goal of mine like getting three goals in the net in a soccer game. I work hard to try to accomplish my goal so i can master it and score three goals every single game. Sometimes i fail and dont score three goals but i always tell my self its alright because when youre reaching a goal you will fail at least once or probably more then once. Which makes me work harder. Nobody is perfect and always a good thing to fail to learn about your mistakes.

The last reason why i agree is because you have to try to master different things in life. Sticking with the same thing you mastered will just not make you good at anything else. Its always great to have different things youre good at because you can do a lot of other things. If you dont like any of the goals you want to master and cant reach it. Its always great to have other ones along the other one youre trying to reach because i know a lot of people change their thoughts and want to do more then one goal at a time.

You have to set your goals higher if mastered something so you can see growth in yourself. When setting your goals higher you will fail at least once, you shouldnt worry because it makes you learn about your mistakes and so you wont do what you did to make you fail. Also you have to try different things to master to be good at several things in life. This is why i agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson quote he wrote.      ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
71F1B96A18BB,"In most student's summer time,they learn different things from their break,such as work experience,new knowledge from a book,and tradition about other country;In this cause,teacher's designed is not a good choices for student's project,because teacher can not make suitable choices for students,so the way can help students more understand about what they can do in the summer project is student's designed.

When the summer break start,student can make a lot choices about their plan in the summer,for example,they can stay home,travel to somewhere,or work at some place they like;Most student's summer break have a lot different,they learn different things from their break,teacher could not really know what happen in student's break,this is why student need designed their own title.

In half way of the summer,some student might not even start making their project,in this cause if teacher give student a hard title,such as""after you read this book,what your opinion and what you learn from this book?"",then student have try rush through the book,and start making a project,it will make student have a bad project content,if student can decide they own project title,such as""base on your break,what you learn from your travel,it can be anywhere"",if student can create their own project title,it will be a lot interesting and easy.

Most student want to learn a new things from interesting activity,and spend a time on those things,and student always know what whey like to do,they can create title base on animals,vehicles,or their life experience,it will be so much fun and efficiency will improve,if they can decide their own project title.

Between teacher's designed and student's designed,student always like to make their own choices,they can learn things from activity they are interesting,talk and share experience with their friends,and have a easy project in their summer time,that's why student's designed better then teacher's designed.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
3012637E06B5,"People should make their own decisions . Because everybody knows what is better for his or her life. And seeking help from an expert wont help because the person will not be able to help you for the rest of your life. Making your own decision. The more you able to make your own decision you be able to teach your kids how they should make their decision. Following your own instinct and ideas will be bad sometimes and always making your decisions should be positive.

One thing about this world is not to rely on someone, because everyone is doing everything to survive. Example if youre not able to make your decision, you will always depend on someone and at the end of the day the person will fail you. Thats why is very important to make your own decision. And rely on your self not anybody. And reasons why every individual should to make their own decision is to achieve their goals in life.               ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
96220F2863D1,"Imagine walking outside with your dog and someone comes up to and treats you like a criminal like he just killed a person, stole money, and bombed a house! Would you like to be treated like a criminal for the rest of your life with nobody talking to you or respecting you? 62% of the people around the world are not being treated with kindness or respect. People in many countries like Canada, France, and Russia are not being like a human being. People should start treating others how they want to be treated, that includes being nice, kind, and helpful to each other.

In many countries people are not being treated right. 55% of the people have depression, loneliness, and sadness, because when they are not being treated with kindness they think no one likes or cares about them. Over 200 people around the world have committed suicide because they were not treated how they wanted to be treated. Not being kind or nice to others can cause damage to peoples feelings. People have been effected by other for not being treated correctly.

Treating others with rudeness is not going to effect you or kill you, it is the opposite it will help you become a different and better person than you were before. Treating others with kindness can make peoples day wonderful. Some people might have a bad day and if you help them and treat them with kindness, they will feel a lot more better. Being nice to people will make your life a lot more easier and you will feel like you have accomplished something big.

I strongly believe that people should start being nice to others even if they are not respecting you. Being nice and respectful to others is what everyone wants you to be, but if you do the opposite than your life is going to become harder. People should start treating others how they want to be treated, and that includes being nice, helpful, and kind to everyone.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
9A96A89DF959,"Career commitment

Having a good career after graduation is every students success. Most student are wondering when is the perfect time to start thinking of what career they should focus on, so should student commit to a career at a young age, or students should wait after graduation to commit to their career?

Students may have a lot of chances to learn about different careers, and different field of studies while they are waiting to chose what career to focus on before graduation; however, it is a great idea for students to commit to their career at a early age.

It is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because student will know what type of courses are required for that particular career, students will not worried about what to do after graduation, and students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future career.

Initially, it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will know what type of courses are required for that particular career. As a student looking for a successful career it is always a great idea to stay on top of your academic purposes. Knowing your purpose make is easy for you to elevate, and push yourself to achieve your goals, it will be really easy for a students to finished their courses because they already know what they need, so all they have to do is display some effort, and confident in them self. For instance, a student may wants to get a major on computer engineer. some of the requirement needed for that are: Math, Science, some wide knowledge on Computer software, and Computer Hardware. By knowing all these will be a great advantage for that student. That would a great reason why student should commit to a career at a young age because it helps them know the requirement needed for that particular career.

Secondly, it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because student will not be worrying about what to do after graduation. As a student there is a lot going on in our personal life. Thinking everyday about what to do after graduation will be a stressful situation to be in. Knowing what to do before you graduate will not lead you to a stressful situation. An example, will be a student may have some family issues, and thinking of how to tackle those issues, so having to think about what to do after graduation without you knowing already will be really stressful. In that case I will say it is batter for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will not have to worry about what to do after graduation.

In addition, committing to a career at a young age is a great idea. because students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future job or career. To get started with a career you may need to know basic skills that will help on the way, and I think it is a huge advantage for student to start practicing some of these skills before going to the actual field of work ( career ). For instance, an Internship Program. Student may be attending an internship class,

to develop some skills. Student that attended a internship class may feel one hundred present confident to display what they have learn during their Internship class to the outside world. More Importantly this will help students to get started after graduation. Fundamentals skills are essential for any jobs or careers, so for any student that have the chance to learn some fundamentals skills of a particular job or a career would be a great head start for that student. That is why it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it will help students develop their some basic fundamentals skills needed for future career.

In conclusion, it is important for students to commit to a career at a young age because students will know what type of courses are required for that particular career, students will not be worrying about what to do after graduation, and students will be able to develop some basic fundamentals skills needed for their future career. For students to get a successful career students should always think ahead in terms of academic purpose. Knowing your purpose as a student is very important, and will always help students to be successful. As a final thought I would say knowing your major at a young age is very helpful, and it is an advantage for you as a student.                 ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
824896E8F91B,"IT will help they can be friends, like they tell something about them self or they will fight either like some older students make fun of the younger kids that will be a problem to me this how it will go down the younger kids start fighting back and then it will be a war zone of fight older vs younger. Their is no reason what will their reaction be to me back in the day , they didn't know what the older students and younger students react i bet they pray for the older students and younger students to get along on the first day of school, to see their reaction. What i think is it will be normal the effects like they will get use to it and they will mine they old busness plus to me they will say we gonna have to treat the younger students the same like everybody else . The older students have to assist the younger students, to do service hours or get credit on service and to do more and more service hours. The older students are having bad grades in classes , their teacher will get a student who is really smart to be the older student twoder.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
682B94FF269B,"This someone i will talk about is important, because he is my father,

.1. my father is someone important for me because he is the man that takes care of me from the day i born,

.2. he is so nice,

.3. he never get mad from me.

.4

. he always good with any body

.5

. he help people who need help

.6

.he is so generous with us.

EVERY MOMENT AND EVRY DAY I spend it with my dad i learn something important and useful from him about any thing,As we know our parents are older than us so they had more experience than any of us also they help us in many things and when when we need any thing or we dont know what to do in any situation at any time ,every adults experiences who ever they are they have to be learn from any situation they put in so they may be know what to do so we must know from them to not put in this situation.

Thats why we have to share information, all of this things that is my parents done and told me about and they also told me about what they do at the past and what shouldnt i do now or any time and, there advises and stories helps me always to not fall in trouble so i must do what they told me; as we know there is a reason for every thing and the reason for why i love my parents because my dad and my mom work and have more experience in their job to told me about and for my collage, and they are the important people that care about me,and their experience can help me in my future job a lot.

Sometimes my father takes us to the place that there is a lot of old people there to se mt grand mother and every old man or lady tell us beautiful stories about what is the interesting things they do in there past and what are they jobs and what must they do in their jobs and my grand father there told me about his past in military and what he do in it and where did he go with the army in a period of time.

from the last paragraph about what i said i took more experience in jobs and another things but the most thing i got from this stories is wisdom i cant write it but i know what it means, it means that share experience and wisdom with other people to make them learn what to do in any time to make it pass from grandfathers to fathers to sons .",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
F88A0801C9EB,"In my opinion it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. If you're committed to anything you will always want to achieve that certain goal. Having a career you are committed to at a young age has many positive outcomes. One of the outcomes is you can find a career much faster. Another positive outcome is having a goal that you want to achieve. The final positive outcome is having more time in high school to do other activities. Having a certain career you want to achieve at a young age will make you improve on lots of things.

You will find a career much faster if you're committed to one specific career at a young age. If you are focused on that certain career you will be doing things that you need to achieve to have that certain career you have been planning at a young age. For example when you are committed to that one certain career you will be taking specific classes. Finally when you sign up for that career or try out for that career you will most likely get accepted since you will have experience. Having experience on a career will help you so much when applying for a career. People will most likely see that you have experience and want to hire you. That is why it is better having a career you are committed to at a young age.

If you have a goal you want to achieve at a young age you will do anything to achieve that goal you since you're committed to achieve that goal. It is also just like being committed to a certain career at a young age. For example in order to achieve a goal you will need to do anything it takes to achieve it. As in a career you need to study as much as you can of the career and take classes that will help you achieve the career you are interested in. If you have a goal you will most likely achieve the goal if you try and never give up. If you give up on the goal you will not succeed. Just like in a career you are committed to at a young age. If you give up on the career you will most likely need to find another career and learn new things and start all over. That is why you should have a career already planned at a young age so you won't give up later on and need to start all over.

You will have more time in high school to do more activities if you are committed to a certain career at a young age. For example in high school their are many sports , clubs , and other after school activities you can do or tryout for. If you already have a certain career in mind since you were little and young you can have more time to do sports and other activities that can also help achieve that certain career you are interested in. Also it is good having more time to do other things instead of still not knowing what career you want and having to speak to counselors , teachers , and searching up careers you are interested in doing. If you already planned your career when you were young you won't have to worry about having to look for a career and having to stress out. Some students stress out if they don't have a career in mind and not knowing what career they want to do. Having more time to yourself and not needing to worry about finding careers is much better than looking for careers and needing to take new classes to have that certain career that you are just planning to have. That is why it is better to be committed to a career at a young age.

Overall having a career to be committed to at a young age is better than not having any career planned out for the future. You will get the career quicker than usual. You will have an achievement you will want to accomplish. You will have a better schedule to do and focus on other things. This will improve lots of your characteristics and improve you as a person. It will show you how committed you are and how you can get anything done. When you get the career youve been committed to since you were young you will be proud of yourself since you have been committed and focus on that career like all your life.                        ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
CB71E5F9AE1E,"Do you think failure is a good thing or bad thing? Well, what a British prime minster ones said""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Some people may think this is bad thinking because of how hard you try,but you have no success at the end. Yes,i agree with the statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because of these three reasons,failure makes me better than i was at first,never giving up without motivation ,and be able to over come that obstacle that i work so hard for. My first reason, of why failure is a good thing because it makes every body better at what they started with. For example, when i first started learning how to ride a long board i was very afraid that i would fall and hurt myself. At first i really terrible and failed over and over again. Until one day my friend came over my house and showed him how i would do it. But once again i fell off my long board crazy like. Then my friend started to laugh but in a funny way,so i also stared to laugh too. I ask him why he laugh at me,he told me"" i remember at was like you when i stared to learned long board"". He also told me he was really proud of me not giving up and failing. what i understood of what he was trying to tell me is that failure can make me better from having that kind of enthusiasm in my spirit. related back to my first reason is that not just giving up,but having a motivation every time i do anything to keep going. In order to have that kind of motivation of getting out of bed and doing what you want to accomplish at the end of the day is looking up to someone who helps you get to work or hustle i can say. For example, famous people who did or was successful in life like Bill gates who found the gold rush,Arnold the best body builder of all times,and Stan lee who invited the marvel universe. All these people was in our shoes before they became famous. They can motivate us by what people probably said to them like ""no"" or ""it can not be done"". They did not listen to adorers Sayers would though that never would happen. My final reason of why failure is a good thing is to over come any obstacle that can get in your way. For example, the time when i was fifteen years old i had a problem with one of my classes in school where i had to learn to stay away from people who were not good influence on me. At first they looked like good people,but when i started to notice that they were hiding something from me i was really currouse what was it about. Until one day i was with my best friend in his room just chilling and later on he showed me on his phone what i never though they would do. I was really dissapionted what they were doing beyond my back. So on that day i had to over come my obstacle of not making friends with anybody who looks nice or their appraise. In conclusion i do agree with the British prime mister Winston Churchill quote that says ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". because of these three reasons failure makes every body better,never giving up without motivation,and lastly over coming any obstacle that can be on road to success. something that i always believed in is ""no pain,no gain"".                 ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
B7626C8D1FAB,"Students should start picking a career when they entered high school, so they can pick classes in school or ask teachers to help you with your career.

If students start picking a career at a young age they will already have an idea of what to do, they can do research about their career at school. how much do people with your career make, what does this career do, how much do they make a year. You can even ask your parents to help you with your career by giving you some advice to help you out. The libary is a great place as well you can find books that match up with your career ask they libarians to help you find the right book. If you have an older siblings that have already gradated high school and have their career they can talk to you and help you out and to tell you what to do.

School counsulers are great people to talk when your looking for a career. You can ask your counsuler any questions to help you set up a plan after you graduate high school, talk about why you choosed this career for you, do you have some experiences with this career yet, what do your parents think about this career that you want to have. Counsulers can help you look for colleges or universities that you wan to attened. You can also have your counsuler set up a meeting with you and your parents to talk and see what they can do for you.

If you know anybody who has the same career that you want to have. Have a talk with them and ask he or she questions about what do you do in your job, how much does your job pay you, how much do you make a year, if they can take you where they work at and see the other employees there and have conversations with them. Its good to talk people who has the same career that you are studying for because. They have worked hard to get where they are today and they have jobs that they enjoy doing making money and living their best life.

You should start looking for colleges when you are in your junior year of high school because. When you are looking for colleges you have to check how much you have to pay to attend the college, how much do you have to pay a month. That's why some teenagers start working while they are in high school, so they can start saving money for college. Some parents pay the college for their kids, but i think its better if you pay some of that money with your parents, so they don't have to waste all of their money for you to go college. Some jobs will help you pay for the college that you will be attending at.

As we read this is why i think students should start pickcing their future careers while they are in high school because. So they will have a plan ready after they graduate high school, go to college, graduate from college, and start looking for jobs of the career that you choosed. Help other students who want to have your career as well. You can talk them to help them out, answer all the questions they have to ask you, tell them what to do you are looking for colleges to help with their career, show them where you work and show how your job is. And eventually they will become successful as you are for making the good choices while you were in high school.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
46BB96D9BC9B,"Dear, Principal

I think students should perform in community service because

I'll show little kids to think of others and not just them self's because when they get older the little kids aren't going to care but if they see the older kids help maybe the little kids would think how the big kids helped n see how much they helped them and would still want to help others when they get older. The little kids always look up to the big kids. Also maybe the little kids won't gave up so easy. Helping in community service would also help the big kids because they would be thinking of other, they will feel good about them self's when their done, and that well help them get into a good collage when they are older just for helping in the community. When the older kids have kids of their own they can tell them how they helped the community and will want their kids to be in it too. Helping others is the right way to go and to never give up in what you believe in.

Your Student,

STUDENT_NAME",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
CA7EF1C7C3FE,"It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college. Some students want to graduate early than other students. There are some reassons that students have to graduate early. Some of the reassons are: they want to finish high school to earn money to go to college, to take some vacations to pass time with family, also if you are a Hispanic person, you're older, and you have resposabilities, you want to get a good job with a high school diploma, if you just want to gradute early, and if you are a great student with all that you need, you can graduate early. The students's graduation is basic in what they need and want.

Some students do hard work one year early to graduate from high school. For example, if a student is 16 years old, and the student is in eleven grade, the student do not have enough credits, or don't have what the student need to graduate, the student is not going to graduate from high school. But also there are students that they have all what they need to gradute and they can graduate early. A low percetage of students have a jod, resposabilities after school, or activities to do. Schools offer many activities that students can do after school, also students stay after school to retake quiz or get help from a teacher.

If a student need to graduate early for any reasson, the student need to work hard, and get all what the student need to gradute. Also the student have to do extra work. For example, if the student don't understand any subject, the student have to stay after school, and get help from a teacher to pass the subject and get the credits. One disadvantage that the student can have is that if the students have a job after school, the student can get tired from high school and his/her job. And the student can stop to do what the student need to gradute. The student have to make an effort to graduate early.

Some school offer programs that allow high school students to gradute in three years. Some of the programs are in summer, in the evening. Those programs help students to finish high school, it's a easy way to get credits in a short period time. The minimum of students are not able to be into theze type of programs. One of the reasson can be that the student work in summer.

If the students are not able to be in the programs, they have another opportunity, they can take courses online.

In conclusion it is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter to college, but have advantage and disadvantages. One advantage are that some school offers programs or students can take courses online, that can help students to graduate. One disadvantage is that, students can get tired, they to do hard work, if they want to gradute early. Students that want to graduate in three years and enter college, some students have a job after school to earn money to college. All depends in the student, if the student do all the work, the student is going to graduate but, if the student don't do the work, the student is not goin to graduate.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
327EB11122D0,"Hello mi name is Generic_Name and my prompt is about ''Failure'' and ''Success.''

What i think about this?

The failure is a feeling so bad, when you have a bad day or something was wrong,your feel the person most useless. Yes, I agree with Churchill statement, because he have all the reason. Each person failure has a recompense and all the good what you do make and God give to you multiply.

We all have success why?,because everybody work so hard and they wish make all your dreams. In the personal, i think all start since down, when you everyday work hard your successful is each day more big and blessed,I have three reasons why i agree with this prompt.

My first reason:

Never say ''I can't'' because when you have a purpose you have to make,maybe many persons tell you ''forget it,you never can't this possible'' but you have to know when something is realize with the heart all is possible in this life never forget it.

My second reason:

Always you listen when somebody tell you something,because his advice can help you in the future and you can use the same advice for help other persons too. You need to be better every day for make a present and future so much better and be able to get what you wish.

My third reason:

If you not believe in who are you, you are in a big problem, the unique person can say what you can do or you can't not are you nobody else. In your life you have friends,teachers and you family is the most important in the world the people believe in you. Follow you dreams,follow you future, and always smile and when something was wrong, not feel bad,of course when you have a error you can learn and be a best person each day.

What is my point of view on this?

The life is so hard and beautiful,you can be wherever you want,follow you way and never stop,make the difference and never stop of dream. Be a nice person and do not even threat bad other people. Therefore, you never hands down when you see the past and now the present you can see what long you are, stay strong,be intelligent not lying and always say the true. When passed the time you can see all effort you dedicated,all is possible.

Detail Support:

My detail support is about the immigrant, this is a good example for this prompt,they came to United State for a better life,is very difficult and danger,because sometimes many persons died or have problems in the way, how much time is? honestly i dont know sometimes is one week,two weeks or more than of one month. When they finally here in United State is a new beginning is a new life,of course is so complicated and so sad,because is a new country and new culture y the most important the language is different.

The principal thing is learn talk, and writing in English. After this if you have your permission of work,you can star working in a restaurant o something you can learn fast and easy or if you are minor of age you need go to middle school or high school dependent what age do you have for after you can graduated. and attain a best work. This is so hard but not impossible,maybe you have many days bad,and you cry so much,but each sacrificed has its pay back.

Thank you for you patient and dedication for read this.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
3E607F7C98ED,"My dad always said, Pass your class or no fun in life. First thing I will like to accomplish in life is passing school. If you think school is not an important aspect of you if you would be a fool, all of the well known people you know have gone thought school. I will try to take more years of school after im done, then I would like to learn more about the history of Africa and Asia even more. I think that learning about the future is something I would have never thought I would do in times to come but here we are, they talk about it all the time but never do it so I would like to change that reality. Therefore that is one thing I will like to accomplish in the future.

Have you ever heard Never knock it till you try it, thats what i will be talking about. There are a lot of thing I have never done in my life, one of them is playing music, I always listen to music like rap or pop. I have always wanted to do the guitar but i was too scared to do it. Now I take lessons for it, im trying to play it in other places. I have also wanted to rap I have it in me I just have to try and get my vocabulary up so I can say more in my music. I will start to take trying new thing serious.

Fact checkers say that people who always play sports will live longer. What I will try to accomplish is playing every sport. I already play soccer so I am try to play more variety of sports. I have stared to play basketball more, I think right now playing basketball is more fun than soccer. I have played baseball and its fun but it is not for me, but as I said this is what im going to try in the future.

The limits of your language are the limits of the world, once said by Ludwig Witgettein. In the future will like to learn more about peoples language and where they come from. We used to travel a lot but now corona virus has it the whole world and people are scared to go any where, but nothing can stop us if we have God in our life. Now it has kind of cleared up we can travel and see how people live in second world places help them learn from them and use it in our lives. It does not hurt to learn and accomplish new thing in life.

Last thing I have to say is I am still trying to accomplish always having fun and being happy. Many people out there are not happy or have fun, Doctors say be happy is the best medication and the worst disease is sadness. One thing of staying happy is being healthy, health is an important aspect of life it tell if you stay or die. People who take their life are those who dont talk to people, those who are sad all the time, and those who are not happy. Those are all my reasons what I will try to accomplish in life.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
5F1183463E9D,"Thinking ahead of time of what you want to do after high school before you start high school may or may not be a good idea. For example it might get you prepared for what classes you can take your first year of high school. Because high school is all about getting good grade and getting the help you need to become what you want to become in life. High school is where you get your real start to your future. And here are some reasons why.

Thinking about what you want after high school before you even start could be beneficial to you. For example for some it might come as motivation. As in they are at a low point in life where things arent going so great, they could think about what they want tot do and see them selves in the future becoming what they wanted to become. It could even benefit you your first year of high school like picking your classes. You would pick the classes that are most related to the career you want to pursue. Another big thing that is good about looking into what you want to do before high school is the collages as well. Some collages might have the the class you need to finish and major in what you are studying for. It is like a head start on one the classes you take in high school, two the rest of your high school years, three the collage you want to get into.

But there are always some downs to thinking and or knowing what you want to do before you even get to high school. Such as there might not be a class for what you want to major in. Or you might not be eligible for taking that class , they could be over booked in those classes. There might be mix ups with your schedule that may cause you not to get the class you wanted. Even when you have your mind set on one thing for your future your opinion may change over time it may even change completely. And it happens to a lot of students. They make up there minds and then maybe weeks later it may change into something else. There are also other issues with what you want to do in your future. Some students work full time jobs and its hard for those students to focus on one goal and keep up with school work , Sometimes even miss school just because of work. If you think about it even after graduating high school some still work and move on to collage and are still stuck in the mud with work and even harder homework and class work. So dont have a ride to school or even work. Money is a big issue as well. With having to pay for a car or even other life needs you might not be able to get into the collage you want to get into because of how expensive it is. There are student loans but you still have to pay that back and sometimes you can be late on payments but then that doubles and no one wants that.

High school is where your future really begins really. Because if you think about it is where you start learning about where to get your start , how to start , when to start . This is where we as students decide what we want to do in life and where we want to go with it . And if we chose to chance our dream that thats where we end p with hard work and dedication.                   ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
340BCFE7E249,"When elementry students have a lesson on what they are about to learn. It is very important because they need to pay attention what is the teacher is teaching the class. Elementry school students should know what is the lesson is on, they should take notes if they a quiz or sol on it. Students should pay attention in class because if you don't pay attention in class, you don't know what is the lesson is about. If a student doesn't know what is the lesson is on, then find a way to explain what is the lesson is on. Some students that don't pay attention in class, then asks them what is the lesson is about?

Some students don't like to pay attention in class becuse they don't want to learn about the lesson that is given to them. The teachers have to give the lesson because so the elementry school students can learn more things. They can also help the elementry school students if they are having trouble misunderstanding the lesson that the the teacher is given. Teachers have to pay attention to the kids to make sure that they are learning something everyday. The teacher's job is to teach elementry school students to learn something everyday they come into school. Other teachers might help other students to learn more about the lesson that the teacher was given to them. The whole elementry school can also help with the lesson that kids are having misunderstanding about the lesson is been given to the teachers. Teachers can help the student on the other things that part of the lesson.

achers are helping the kids learn something everyday because if the kids are not learn nothing then, the kids don't know anything about the lesson. Elementry school students should learn the lesson so they can do more things about the lesson, but if the elementry school students don't know what they are learning then, they don't know what other things to do about the lesson. Other kids might help the kid that doesn't know a lot everyday. They can also help each other out. The teachers can help the students learn something everyday. If a student didn't know something in the lesson then, the teacher can help them on it.

The elementry school students should ask about the lesson. If a student doesn't know how to do the other things that go with the lesson then, ask the teacher how to do it. If elementry school students know more things about the lesson then, they know how do the other things about the lesson. They can also help other students that don't understand what is the lesson is talking about. The elementry school teachers can if a way to explain to the student doesn't understand what is the lesson is talking about. This is what is important to elementry kids.

I hope elementry school students can learn more things in the future. Students should pay attention class so they know what is the lesson is talking about. Teachers should keep an eye on the students that they are paying attention and they are learning something everyday. The students that don't pay attention should pay attention in class, so the student can understant what is the lesson is talking about and the student can learn something new everyday when the student go to school. Students should learn new things when they go to school eveyday. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
7EED34A43536,"Inside of each people always has the right and the wrong sides. That make they think if they should being themselves or not. If a person being themselves then they just want to do anything they know and do not care another person. However, they live in the modern world and have many things to worries. Although people have their own decision, people should not being themselves are great accomplishment because sometime they need to change and over time people have done the tasks they hate.

First of all, people have their own decision. So, we know that many people are accomplishment by their own decision but only for who are smart or brave challenge themselves. Some of them just live and do anything they like when they success. However, not being themselves should not change the physical world. For example, a man who has a dream that he can travel around the world. He always thinking about it but he can not. Because he know it is a modern world and has many things to do and worries. So, he put his dream on the side and focuses on the job. He hopes it will make his life better and can complete his dream later.

Also, sometime they need to change. Some people they never change their life, and they just live by the rules. Of course, they will feel boring and nonsense. They want to do with something else. For instance, a person who live with his family and he recognizes that he likes to become the doctor in the future because his family want it. Absolutely, he knows what he wants to do. But when he do this job for the long times and he feels that he does not has more interest. Everyday, he is so busy and he does not has times for his family and himself. So, he knows work to lives, not lives to work. After thinking about that, he wants to do the jobs that makes him comfortable and can enjoy the wonderful life.

In addition, over time people have done the tasks they hate. Task is the mission from the boss give them to completing. So, they force to finish it while they do not like. When they go out to work they need to follow all the rules of the life. Also, they can not do anything they like while living with their family before. For example, a trainee person who is young and do not have an experience in the job. Because he just graduation and he wants to become the employer in this company. So, he will manage by the marketing manager and he so happy about that. For the first day, the manager just wants him to do some work likes buy the coffee, copy papers... And he thinks it will better for the next day but the manager just gives him these jobs and no more. So, he hates it but he never give up because it is the rules of life. He recognizes that help him too much to create more skills and learn more experiences.

Thus, people should not being themselves are great accomplishment. So, people should not being themselves because they do not know exactly about themselves. Some people want to become another one to success. When they look at another people they can learn more lessons and experiences in life. Sometimes, they need to change to know the outside of the world have more fun than if they just stay at one place. Another lesson for that is something they hate is not mean they give up or not finish it because it is a part of testing in the life. Just do the best they can and maybe they can accomplishment if not being themselves.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
96CCD6C82658,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson once wrote ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" I agree with this statement, a couple of reasons why i agree with this statement. The journy, learning new things, and the final results of what you have mastered.

First reason will be the journy. The journy will be the important part becuase its going to be the part where you will be going to grow more. The journy will teach you mastering new things therefore this brings me to my second reason the learning new things. Mastering new things will be so much help in the future. You will be able to master new things along the way on your journy to growing up more. You can never stop growing omn something you want to master. My last and final reason will be the ending. The ending is the part where you have already mastered all the new things you wanted to master on your journy. You will be able to use it any where you go, any where you are at, and with anybody.

As the ending result i totally agree with the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson about ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will not grow."" You have to still keep on mastering new things in order for you to grow more. Those are my three reasons why i agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5
C85DA87E87CC,"Dear Teacher,

I've been asked if is more beneficial working in a group with students or working alone. In my opinion I think working as a group is more beneficial than doing all the work alone. I think working as a group is less stress on the student but helps get the work done faster and easier. I've noticed that people do better in group projects because the work can be split between the students and not just one person doing all the work that may be hard to understand or do all the work on time. Working as a groups helps mostly those students who really don't do their work on time or having problems in understanding what to do and also they can ask the students in the group for more support or in explaining something more clear.

For example, if a student that is working alone doesn't understand the concept of the project and has no one to ask or just doesn't want to ask the teacher they will either do it wrong or just not do it because they don't have that extra support. In a group you usually have that person that is on top of you if you are doing you part and asking if you need help or need more explaination. Being a group creates communication skill and helps those who have trouble with interacting with other students. Working as a group get the work done faster and helps not go to hard on youself. This is why when a teacher asks me if I want to work alone or with a group or partner, I always work with someone else becasue it just helps me get my assighnment done on time because I have done big projects by myself and I see that I struggle do it , then at the end I get a bad grade or I just end up not doing it because I feel like I can ask th teacher for help. Some students have this problem in reaching out to their teacher because they are either shy or they just can't find a way to get their help.

Many students will agree that working as a group is helpful and beneficial instead of working alone where is hard to do everything alone and having to plan what to do to get an assignment done and hoping for the best. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
43533F92E05B,"I agree this statement about the importance of attitude. However you always need to be a positive person. To be successful in life, you need to be positive and believe in yourself first. Do not listen what people say and don't let them to tell you what to do. Believe in yourself and don't take care about what they say and think about you.

To start, to be successful you always need have a positive attitude, the negativity will not take you nowhere. If you have a positive attitude, you will have everything you want in life. Also if you're a negative person it will not help you in anything. When you are a negative person you can not get what do you really want. If you want to get everything you want in life, you need to have a positive attitude. It does't matter what you have done for it, you always have to be positive and believe in yourself to have success.

Next, if you want to have success in life, you always need to have a positive attitude and a good vibe about yourself. You have to believe in yourself before something else. You are the only person who can be believe in yourself, and nobody else is going to do it for you. Every time you have something done for your success, think that you are going to get it, and always be positive. Do not let anybody ruin what do you want to be that successful person in the future.

Finally, if do you want to be successful in life, the only thing you need is believe in yourself. Do not listen what people say and think about you. Listen to your mind and your heart, they are going to tell you what is good for you. People will always judge you, it does't matter what you do. Don't let people to ruin your success, and believe in that you are going to be a successful person in the future, and you are going to get what do propose to yourself, it is up to you.

In addition, to be a successful person in life, you need to have good vibes and a positive attitude on you. Do not let people to tell you what to do when you already know what is good for you. If you let people to tell you what to do, you're not going to get nowhere. In life, nobody want you to have success, they don't want you to be in a better place than them. The only thing I can say is that you always need to have a positive attitude and believe in yourself before something else, that's how are you going to have success in life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D3F44CC7EC17,"Do you think that people can be influence with your own example? or do you think that they need more than that. Although some say that giving your own example is the best way to influence others because you are giving a real example so people will trust you more , actually there are better ways to do it because if you give more than one example people is going to trust you more and you can make a plant for take their attention.

people can be convinced by looking at other people`s example because they think that doing what others do is better.

In my opinion we should give more than one example to the people because one can not be enough for people who do not believe what other say, so what we need is more options where they can find their influences. Giving more than one option is giving them a chance to choose them what they can be influence by.

some times we need their attention because that way we can convinced them that we are telling them the true and they will follow us and they will fell comfortable with them self.

in conclusion giving more that a lot of choose to the people is better because they can choose what influence they want Although some say that giving your own example is the best way to influence others because you are giving a real example so people will trust you more , actually there are better ways to do it because if you give more than one example people is going to trust you more and you can make a plant for take their attention.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
D2910C3C8E3B,"I agreed with Auther Ralph Waldo Emerson "" Unless you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"" which is ture. Hard working pays you back!

Some people think they become rich by nature, every time knowledge need to upgrade ,and to keep our wealthy life need to work hard.

First reason, most of the time people think they become rich by nature. Which means they become well to do when they born. I personally do not support this idea because behind every success they is a hard working. For example United State of America is number one powerfull country in the world but, before America got that name their was a lots of scrifice. In my opinion If we dig the ground and we found the piece of gold that is not wealth that is a sign of destination, that means until we got the gold reservoir do not stop excavate.

Second reason, when a year change lots of thing change. For instant knowledge. Now adays tecnology descover the world. In this case every time knowledge need to upgrade. If you have degree in the filed of IT in 2016 and, still you did not upgrade your knowledge you are out of the game. The system or the caricullem is change so fast so we need to ajest our speed to run with the generation. If we need to grow what we have, we need to try somthong.

Inaddition, to keep our wealthy life we need to work hard. For example Bill Gate is wealthy man in America he have everything house,car and money. Bill gate does not say I have everything I do not need to work after this time. He is working hard like us. Because unless he did something to grow his wealth he will going to lose what he have. This is real life by any means if we stop trying we lose everything work, food, money, and family. The key is work hard do not Give Up.

In conclusion, we need to do somthing or try our best to live our wonderfull life. I strongly support Author Ralph Waldo idea. Dreams are not somthing to wait for; they are somthing to work for.

Which means works are the rode to get our dreams. Today is a great day to learn somthing new.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
1087B6C7FB98,"I say its a good idea that the school menu should change to being more healthier because a lot of students eat junkfood mostly everyday, need to eat more fruits and vegetables, and wanting a healthy live.

As you know, students eat junkfood food anywhere they go to such as movie theaters, gas stations, and restaurants. Some places do serve healthy foods and snacks but people rather choose junkfood because they're not use to eating good. Most stores put the unhealthy foods in the front, so kids can go straight into putting it in their carts or baskets. However, we can't manage telling people if they want to eat healthy or not.

Every school want kids to get a fruit or a vegetable at lunch. Some kids chose not to get a fruit or vegetable because they dont care about eating it or they it just throw away. Eating veggies will help you with your body like for an example; a carrot will help with your eyes. If kids dont want to get any of their fruits or veggies they could give it to a friend that will love to eat it instead of wasting it.

Eating healthy will not cause you to have much problems but, eating unhealthy will cause much problems. I think parents should focus on what their kids are eating for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. If you dont like eating unhealthy you could always pack lunch. Although, you could eat junkfood once or twice a week and not everyday.

I personality agree to having the school changing the school menu because the world has change and we want to eat more fruit and veggies, having our lives healthy, and wanting kids to stop eating junk food all the time. It has been an issue for the past years and I think its time for schools to have different types of food. Not everyone wants to eat healthy food we could sometime have some unhealthy at lunch. These are the reasons I want the school menu to change.                             ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
5D5672D7C97D,"The famous scientist Albert Einstein said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" This is especially true for today's world. Even with seven billion people on Earth, everyone is unique. Your imagination is vast; an open plain of wondrous ideas and possibilities. This leads to even more diversity than our physical differences. It is also applied to our day, and it makes it more lively. And while knowledge is powerful, imagination can make it far stronger. Imagination is more important than knowledge because of creativity and experimentation.

First, imagination leads to creativity. Your can put your ideas to life through creativity, and there's plenty of ways to do so. You can construct a masterpiece of your choosing, whether it be art, music, or even writing! Even thousands of years ago, creativity makes its mark. Rough drawings by cavemen depict tales of hunts and adventures. Beautiful artifacts and pottery dot museums. Ancient literature such as Beowulf and The Odyssey still fascinate modern writers. And recently, artists and musicians such as Bob Ross and Duke Ellington have made amazing pieces through their creativity, just like the legendary Leonardo da Vinci and Beethoven. Time wears things down, but not imagination. This is immensely important as creativity allows you to express yourself. You can voice out your thoughts and ideas in so many forms. With imagination being limitless, so is your creativity, and so are your possibilities.

Next, imagination leads to more experimentation. Going mad-scientist isn't recommended, but you can poke around with new ideas and find a new talent or hobby. More experimenting can lead you to find something you really enjoy!

Trial and error can be disheartening, but don't give up! You could find something that could change your future. It can be fun too; testing different paths to a single destination. Not only can you find the best road to a goal, but you can spread the knowledge to others. The results from tinkering around varies from little things to giant discoveries. Take Damascus steel for example. The forging process for the metal has been lost, which has consistently frustrated modern metallurgists. A steel from times long gone, but still baffling today's scientists. That's a pretty amazing feat! Experimenting from your imagination is wild, but it's enjoyable and even rewarding!

However, some say knowledge helps daily life more than imagination. Valuable things, such as language, mathematics, history, and science. Knowledge does help with life, but most of the things you learn are often useless or forgotten along the way. Math and Language Arts are important, but unless you're pursuing teaching or poetry, some aspects aren't very useful. For example, being acknowledged that plants are green because of chlorophyll isn't going to help with paying taxes. Imagination can make life better and enjoyable. Decorating your house or doodling a picture can be more relaxing and fun than first thought. In addition, most of the knowledge obtained can't be applied without a good imagination. And while some people may have an upper edge in academics, everyone is on equal ground in imagination.

In conclusion, being able to experiment and create with limitless possibilities makes imagination more important than knowledge. Making ideas come to life is fun and shows what you're capable of. Creativity holds the ever-important ability to express yourself. Experimentation is enjoyable and can be rewarding. You never know what you can do unless you try, and testing your skills is a great evaluation. And all of this traces back to one thing everyone has: an imagination.",4.5,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,5.0
7138786DA45C,"Is it a good idea to finish high school in three years than four years?

Four years is to long to graduate from high school. In four years you do a lot of things you can participate in many activities. For example: sports, clubs and help the teachers. High school is an important and necessary step to get to the successful, is a requirement in life because of the education and the things that you should learn. The school will help you in life to know how to act and guide you in what is better and you get a better life with school.

School should be just 3 years instead of four. In four years the student learn more, but I don't think is necessary to be in the school all that time. Three years of high school is a challenge. The student have to be after school and take classes during summer is a lot of stress and a lot of things to do, but is not impossible. If the student want to success in life it doesn't matter how much time it will take the only thing that is important is to accomplish the goals.

I am agree with the idea to finish high school in 3 years, I think that 3 years are enough for the student to learn all the stuff that needs. high school is hard but not impossible to finish, and is a good idea to push the students to graduate before, there are better opportunities and the only thing that I think when someone is telling me that I have to be more time in the school is ""I'll be old when I'll finish the school"" and that doesn't sound good. It's better 3 years than 4 because, you get a job, you get on the college earlier and you accomplish your goals before what you expect.

Most of the kids are looking for end the school early, is a good motivation for the students that they will end the school early. In that way maybe the majority of the teenagers will be more focus on what they are doing, and have a better future. The majority of the people when is young always think about that they leave school because they don't want to end when they get old. That's why I like the idea. Before you finish high school, before you get in the college and you do not finish the university to old. Plus, you have better opportunities and also you don't waste your time.

Even four years is not a bad idea because you do more and you learn more and you can get more information. You have the same facilities even if you finish early or you take more time. Four years Is good but not all the students like to do the same thing in that time and they get bored. Four years is a good option, but three years or less sound better. Both options have a good opportunity to be in a good university. It just depends on what the student wants to do and what decision it will make. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
FC5120C98AE7,"I think that all schools should offer video or online conferencing as well as online education form the school. Students should be able to be comfortable from where ever they are, and learn in a manner that they are comfortable with. There maybe different reasons where students may not come to school. However, if they do miss school students can have the abillity to turn in work and learn about what they missed. This would be good and better for teachers because students would have no excuse of them not turning in there work late or at all.

Students may miss school for all types of reasons, for exmple students can miss school for an urgent reason or a family situation. Some familys don't have enough resources to live off a good life, so, some students can't make it for school and have to work to support there families. In some cases familys have younger sibilings that they have to take care of, but the family can't afford to stay home and have to work. In that case families make students stay home to baby sit a little brother or sister. Students miss the education they need, and that's a good reason why they should have online based learning.

Having said that students may also be very sick and may not be able come to school. Students may also have variuse injuries that can be hard for them to move in certain areas, therefore they stay home and miss school. students could be in the hospital, and may not return to school for a long period of time, it could also be hard for them to transition back and catch up with his or her school work. Some students may be takeing care of a sick relative and my not be able to make it to school. online base learning would be very helpful to those students that are injured or sick.

Students also tend to leave the country, and go back to their countrys. Families make arrangements to visit their home countrys in the middle of the school year. in some cases families don't come back for long periods of time. Students tend to miss a lot of school work and education in the time they are gone. Online based learning would come in handy in this situation. Students could have fun where they are, and not miss a single assiegnment or a day they are learning something new.

Online based learning is the best solution to students missing school. It would be a great oppertunity for students to get back on track and finished what they started. I would recommend online based learning because I think of the families that are in deep need by the students that come to school in helping their families. I also think of the people that are sick, and that need rest at home. This program would help a lot of students get the education they need without worrying they won't get it.                    ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
9FAA62801E13,"Imagine school day extend two hours every day. School day should not extend two hours. If school extend two hours student will not have time for anything els after school. Student will be tierd of school and they will hate it. Student will not be abole to have normal life.

If school extend two hours student can not be abole to do any thing els. They won't have time to join sport team. And they can't join any club activity. Also they won't be abole to do anything after school or to practice for the sport they like.

Student will be tierd and don't want to go to school. Most of the student will hate to be in school for extra two hours. And some of them will not attend school every day. They will be tierd and sleepy during the school day.

Alot of student won't be abole to have normal life to live. Also most of the student will not be abole to speand much time with their family. Alot of student won't be abole to have time for their own live. Or anything they like to do after school.

Student will not be abole to live in a normal live and be abole to do any type of sport. Or to do anything they are intrsting in it after school. They won't be abole to orgniz their time in live. Student will be stress and tierd to do anything after school. Finly school day shouldn't be extend two hours so the student can have a normal live . ",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
A2EF5BCC488B,"Some people think that when they master at something they've never mastered at, then they will grow up. That is what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson said in his quote. ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.

An example of this statement are babies starting to walk. Then they achieve at it, then they will start talking. From that point on, they will grow into toddlers where they will learn about letters, numbers, how to share with others, and some easy words to pronounce. When they get to kindergarten, they will learn about math, reading, and writing. Upon growing into teenagers, they will learn about harder math skills like harder math, reading, and they will even apply for a job. When they grow into 10th graders, they will learn about business, marketing, and learning to drive. A similar experience I had was when I was starting Automotive Technology was when I learned about how to operate tools like wrenches, ratchets, how to lift up and carry things like tires, how to use safety equipment, and how to operate electric tools like machines, impact guns, and drills. It was scary at first, but overtime, I've been continually practicing using these tools, and now I'm an expert at using these equipments. Another experience I had was when I was doing chores like cleaning, vacuuming, washing the dishes, and taking out the trash. I can do these chores without having a family member like my mom asking me to do it.

Another reason why Emerson's quote is correct is because if you continue practicing at something you've neve excelled at, you excel at it, then you will continue mastering at it. It will make people happy that they achieved at it. A similar experience I had was when I was in my elementary school years when I was eating dinner with my family. Back then, I used to eat a lot, and that is still true today. I would finish almost everything from meat, soup, etc. My family was impressed at how much I've eatan. As a result, I grew so much that I was taller than most of my family members, and it's still true today. I continue to eat a lot and I will eat more in my future. Another experience I had was in elementary school. In elementary school, I learned about mathematics from addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division. Back then, it was a little tough at first, but I kept practicing, and now I can excel at this.

In contrast of Emerson's quote, if people keep practicing, but they don't seem to achieve it, it might make them feel upset and defeated. However, to remedy that, if people continue practicing at something challenging, there is a higher chance that they will achieve at it. It will certainly make people joyful that they achieved it.

As Emerson said in his quote, if you try your best or master at something you've never excelled at, then you will grow up and feel joyful about it. By continually practicing, you will most likely achieve at it.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
FCE7BA86AFDF,"Why should we share anything to others? Because it makes feel relive if it is the thing that hurts and also it may make new friends. People can learn many new things which they might even not know in their life. It is important to learn from the experience of others because it helps to face the problem if same problems occurs and to make new friends by sharing experience to them.

It helps to face the problems if the same problems occurs. With the help of the experienced of a friend people will be able to work on problem. Help of a friend will be a lot easier because he/she may already know about it. It makes people resilient. Trying the difficult type of problems will make people resilient. Many people may get to know about that problem deeply. They will do their work better if they know how to deal with the problems easily if they know more information about that difficult problems. They will get to know whole thing about doing a better job with best ability of them.

It also helps make new friends by sharing experience to them. People can help others by sharing the things they experienced while facing some problems. They could talk to each other about the problems and difficulties they are facing. It may make or improve their speaking habit to the best. If they speak today it will be good and day by day it will be better then at last it would be best just like a life cycle of a butterfly. They will belive in others people. People may have trusted each other because of the nice thing they said. And then everybody will become friends.

It is important to learn from the experience of others

Because it makes feel relive if it is the thing that hurts and also it may make new friends

. People should be resilient , Helpful, etc.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
8773AAFA4355,"Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to be in a school play? I have, one enjoyable activity I would want to be is a school play. I think this will be an enjoyable activity for school because you can meet new people, work with a team, and most of all have a great time.

During the play the cast members can make new friends and meet new people. It's important that the cast gets to know each other and become friends. Also they can rehears lines together. It's also helpful to make new friends especially if you shy. It's important not to be shy on the night of the actually play. You have to be brave and have confidence in yourself for the night of the play.

Another example why this this would be an enjoyable activity for school is working together as a team. Working together as a team can be enjoyable and important. For example the cast can help build sets, make costumes, rehears lines, and so much more. Sometimes after rehearsals the cast can go out to eat or have fun. also working together as a team is easier so you can get more work done.

The last reason why having a play is enjoyable because after all the hard work with the team everyone can watch the play. You will be able to perform the play in front of students,teachers,friends,and families. The most important thing is that you had a fun time making, being in the play, and working with other students.

Being in a play is and enjoyable activity because you can meet new people, work as a team,and have fun. Those were a couple of reasons and examples on why having a school play is an enjoyable school and educational activity.        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
B067F0CBE15C,"Having students take courses during the summer to graduate in three years isn't a great idea. The reason why I think it isn't a great idea is, students might need more credit to graduate, some students have jobs during the summer and could feel stressed workng and going to school at the same time, and students like to take a year break off school.

First reason why I think it isn't a good idea is because, students might need more credit and need to take more classes. if they where to want to do it but didn't have enough credit they would have to double up there classes and doing that, can make them feel stresssed and pressured. Three years of high school isn't enough, in four years a student can join a club, play a sport and have regular classes and not feel over whelmed, and doing all that can make he/she look good when looking at what college to go to. But if a student wanted to do all that while having way to much classses could make them feel over whelmed.

Second reason why, students have jobs when they start high school. We all people like to have money in are pockets and students get there money by working during the summer. But how can a student have a job and go to school, it gives less time for the student to do his hobi which is working. In the summer a student wants to work to save up for a car or for college, it's the only time a student doesn't have to worry about school, they could just be focusing on saving up to go to a good college.

Last but not least, at the end of the school year students like to go ahead and go to college but some might want a break to make money or think about what they want to do or just want a break of school. Having a break gives you time to work full time somewhere and save up for something you need like, a car, a house, or money for colllege. It takes time for you to be successful in life which is why you should take things slow and not make yourself stressed and tired doing everything fast.

In conclusion, students who graduate in three years instead of four years, isn't a great idea. Students might need more credit to graduate, some might have jobs during the summer and if they where to take classes they could feel stressed, and some students like to take a year break from school and would want to be working making money for them to buy needs.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
25248BD3EEC2,"Can your attitude be the key to success in life? I believe that a positive attitude can be a success in life. Keeping a positive attitude is good because you'll accomplish more things in life and you can build your trust with others. In addition, they way your attitude is can determine your personality.

The importance of attitude is and will always matter to people. For example, when you keep a positive mind set on accomplishing something, you'll achieve it. Therefor, having a positive attitude can help you in ways that you can't image. For example, it can help you build your trust with friends and family. To conclude, there are things in life you can't change such as first impression, but having a positive attitude toward people can have an impact on them.

In conclusion, being able to accomplish more and building your trust are the keys success in life. Positive attitude is also the key to success in life, some people will disagree with this statement. People should always have a positive attitude no matter the situation. Being positive shows people that you care about others no matter the cost. I believe that a positive attitude can be a success in life.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E877D5AD16DA,"Today I would like to talk about students averages and participations.

students are complain because they want to participate in sports, and other activities and they think it is not right that they have to have a grade of B average to enter a sport class so dear principal i would like you to keep the rule of havening a c average to enter sport or other class available, and i would thank you if you would not change it for the students that are doing good in there class's and there work.

student comment

I think you should not change the schools policy because it would not be fair.

I think if students don't have at least one fun class they should not come to school and school would be the boring thing ever and if you have to work all day you would be tired and your brain would stop working as good so that is what i think about the schools policy.      ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
6B3B3CB54EB9,"My opinion about conserve energy and resources.

I have two points of view, the bad and the good one. I think this is a good idea but, it has bad things.

I think if we want to conserve energy and resources we just need to have four-day school week. Four-day school week can be benefits for the people that have to work everyday, but it has a disadvantage and is that we are not going to learn to much like a five-day school week.

My first point of view is that this can be good for many students. If my school follow this system can work for many students that have to work every day. First reason is that they can have one school-day off so they can go calm to the job. They can have that day off in school and job. Second reason is that, this can be good also for those students that skip school everyday, maybe if they know that we just got four-day school week they would want to come to school. Third reason is that teachers can have more time to work on projects and do all that work that they have to do.

Second point of view is that is system can not be a good idea. First reason is that students would not learn as much as five-day school week. Second reason is that is going to be tired to be ten hours of school. Third reason is that two more hours of school are not a good idea for those that have a part-time, they would not be on time in their jobs. Two more hours of school can be frustrate for many students.

My position on this issue is that this would not work. First reason is that many students that have to work they would like to go to school beacuse of two more hours. students that have to work start they shift at 5 pm and school would end at 6:04 pm, students would skip the last classes. I think if this is to conserve energy and resources it would not work beacuse is like they are adding part of the last day of school to each day so like the same think.

My conclusion is that is not a good idea my school sould not approve this issue. This like the same think as five-day school week. If they don't add two more hours this maybe can work, but I think this going to be hard for students and teachers. With this system we are not going to conserve energy and resources is going to be the same thing. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
888A04678CCA,"Some School districts programs want to graduate in three years because they don't have time for stay one more year, because is old or they don't want to stay to much time in high School because they don't like school. Same family don't want that the student can stay one more year in high school because all the time the family want that the student have to pay tax or he have to work for play own things, that's why the student want to graduate in three years, because the family don't help to much for the student finish the school, and also the student want to graduate in three years because they want to go to college. Most the students who take Summers class because is it a good idea for finish high school in three years.

Some school district programs want to graduate in four years because they can take class what they want it and some time is very hard to pass a class, if the people difficult pass a class they have time to take againt, the people don't have to preocupation anithing because they have a lot time for do a lot things in high school for example get more education,play gamen and stary for exams. Same people want to stay more time in high school because they have friends and some people love work together and also some people have a favorite teachers that's why the people love to go for four years a hight school.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
D30D6D7F3D39,"Some teachers think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. I feel that working together would be more helpful for all students because they can share more ideas, have less work and can be working with less stress.

Students can have a little conversation for get more information, then they can pick one or more ideas for make their work more easy . They can argue from each idea that could be more important. Every students have different thoughts that can help them to realize a good work. For example, When I was in my country my teacher said that we can choose work together or alone, and I prefer to work alone because I thought that working alone was more beneficial for me but I was really confused about it. Working together help us to know different option and students can have more social communication.

Working together imply to have less work. Students can be take more opportunities for learn new thing everyday, also that can help teachers too. Less work can be helpful for a lot students because they can realize missing work, extra work and other activities during class. Furthermore, I remember when I was in 6 grade my teacher said that ''less work can help you to have more time for you'' that means that sometimes with less work teachers and students could learn and have more progress.

Some classes can be stressful for a many students because teachers need to realize all activities during their classes and sometime students do not understand what they need to do. Otherwise, working together would be more easy for students to finish their work quickly. One important fact in my life that

I never forgot is when my English teacher said that we have just 10 minutes for take the exam, and everyone fail because he was very strict with us. Working with another person have a lot benefits for reduce stress. Students can help each other and check their own work .

In conclusion, Working together could be very helpful for many students who need help for get better grades during the year. All students prefer to work with people who has different option, ideas and new thing that help them. They can have more time for make missing work or do homework during class. Working together would be more beneficial for all students.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5
DB8F7B150495,"Every city always have curfew and it is create for people follow it, and it always have some people break the law. DO curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, do they unfairly in young people's lives. Curfew will keep teenagers out of trouble because it will make they aware about time .

Curfew is a law create to make people have a good life. When all people can keep the law, they always can live in peace and have no fear about anything.

Curfew is require for all people, and because they have curefew, they will grow up and they can care themself alone.

Some people say curfews is unfairly interfere in young people's lives, however , curfews will keep teenagers out of trouble, because they have a lot of time to do their work at the morning and evening. At night at 10 P.M is a curfew, and teenagers should follow the curfew, because it will make them safe and they will awareness it in the future.

Curfew is a good law for teenagers, it can keep they out of trouble, and also it will make them grow up faster and they can care about themself. With that all parents don't need to worry about their children go out at night , and all teenagers can have time to prepare for next day in school and in work.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
5AA45740A848,"Dear, TEACHER_NAME

I think phone policy at school should not let students use their phone during class or free time. For several reasons. First, school has to be an area of education and not of free time. Because in my point of view its a distraction to your self and the people around you. Second, phones could get stolen by the people you don't get along with. Also, another reason for school policy to know is that it can cause drama between friends and also people you don't know. Finally , phones can cause cheating, cheating is what school doesn't want so that's one of my main reasons why i don't want phones being used in school hours,",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
24050FFA49AE,"I think cell phones gives negative effects on people lives. I think its a negative effect on people lives because a lot of people are scared to talk to people face to face, People like to look at social media all day. I see alot of people like at resturants using there phones while eating and no one talking to each other. I see a lot of kids using phones while eating like playing games or watching movies on there technology. A lot of parents get mad at there children because they use there phone all day and they cant have at least 30 minutes to talk.

I see a lot pf people posting pictures on social media. I know people posting pictures on social media all day. Theres a lot of people that take pictures and videos what they do in there lives. I think technology made use worst because we can't live without looking at social meia at least once a day. I think people should go out and have fun with friends or family or finding a job so you will be too busy to think about your phone or technology. If your busy or doing something you wont tgink about your phone or technologies. A lot of people like to stay home and use technology all day at home and i think thats not good. Its nice going out with friends or family having a good time without using technology. The time goes faster when your are busy or doing something but if you use your phone it eems the time goes slower.

I thik sometimes technology could be good use. I think it would be good because you can read books and search up anything you need .Technology is good when we use it in school because its easier to do our work. If you need to build or anything or need anything you can search it up on your technology and it will show you how to do it. I only use my phone for Maps, Music, and to search up things i need to know. I dont like using my phone to be on social media all day i work so i use my phone for work not to be on social media all day. If you need to do homework and find the answer you can search it up on your technology. I think technology is good when you need something important to do on it.         ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
8A216BEDA4C2,"I would want to go to France, Generic_City i would want to go see culture. What food's are there,what they eat the most what do they like. I would want to go see the famous team Generic_City saint germin. Also what type of activates they like doing there. When I first get there i'm going to look and walk around the cities and town's and see how it really is and i'm going to explore the Eiffel tower and i'm go to see what everyone does. Next I got to see what type of religion there is. I wanna know what type of holiday there is and not .

Then i got to see how people act if they nice or not? i'm gonna try to go see a Generic_City saint germin game. I would go meet nice people then i would try to talk to then and now iv'e gotten a little better with my French since now i got French. and iv'e worked hard to speak french. So i bet that i could talk to some people in French. I would to to eat because people usually talk good stuff about there food so i would like to try.

Then I would go to buy stuff like the type of clothes they wear to fit in with everybody. I would go see what type of places there are like if there were like a little town I could be different to the big places in France. I would got church for a day and see what type of religion and what they do for religion. I would check if i would even live there but I still would'ent know because I havent gone yet. but i still bet I would be a wonderful place to go one day

I would also try going because to observe and try learning the language because next if I go i'm going to speck fluently. i would problobly go to school there for an education and learn other different languages because they learn two more languages than us. I could even listento there music because its good. its always better going to new places. A lot of people have said its oneof the nicest places to go. So i might go one day and I might take my fmaily becuase its a pretty friendly place i bet.",2.5,2.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
DCED139D2C03,"""How Small Acts of Kindness can have an Impact on Others."" Happiness, Safety, Health, and Anger. people can be more happy, be more safety, and take care more of their Health and be less angry, a small act of kindness impact others to make better choices in their lives and many others good things. Kindness is a big thing in this world, without Kindness every one would be in a war. So as little of Kindness you have that can still impact other to make the right decision.

First, People will be more happy, when someone act kind to them and made them have more energy to do anything. You can have a better friendship with your friend or a family member so you can be a better person. You will have more friendships, if you are kind to others, people will respect you for your kindness and how you made them happy. People fell depress when no one act kind to them that's why people have to be kind to each other.

Second, People will be more safe, they will be less car accidents because people will be more careful when there driving. People are getting hit by cars often, when you are upset and try to cross the street and you don't look were the cars are coming from you have a big chance of being hit by a car. People will act more carefully when you doing something. Athletes will be more careful so, less injuries in all of the sports. Workers will be more careful about doing their jobs, one of the dangerous job in the world is working doing sky-fellers workers are risking their lives doing there jobs.

Third, People health will be better with an act of kindness and be less angry, people have a better health when they get an act of kindness. People will go outside every day and play sports with others in the sun and people will have more Vitamin D. Vitamin D is good for your health. Anger when people dont get kindness they will do something wrong and they will be less problems and fights. Sometimes people cant control their anger and want to get revenge or do something to someone. The other thing is people act buffoon when they are furious.

""How Small Acts of Kindness can have an impact on Others."" Happiness, Safety, Health, and Anger. people can be more happy, be more safety, and take care more of their Health and be less angry, a small act of kindness impact others to make better choices in their lives and many others good things. Kindness is a big thing in this world so as little of Kindness you have that can still impact other to make the right decision. This is how an act of kindness can impact other.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
436450E48EC8,"If teens are at midnight at the streets, they would be breaking a law of the city.

It is a good idea because teenagers can get home early, their parents would bot be worry where they are at and they would not get in trouble.

Almost the mojority teens now a day they just want to hang out with their friends at midnight and the city is making a law that teenagers can not be in the streets at that time if the night. If they are, teens are breaking a law, and thus law is good because they can be more early at home and not get into troubles with the city and their parents too .

The city by creating this law, that teenagers can not be at midnight. Every single person is getting a lot because the streets would be more safety and with less problems in the city or community like robbing staff from house or places, assassinations that can be cause just by problems, less teens smoking and getting this time of things like vap, drinking alcohol, and smoking cigarettes, and thing that can cause them really bad thing in their lives.

Third reason is that by creating this law majority of all the teenagers the ones that are in the streets at midnight, they can avid things that are bad for them like get arrested by the cops, been sent to jail, or more if they are not from this country, if they are immigrants they can get into more problems like getting deported to their native country. And it cause them more problems in their future of getting a job or trying to get a better life.

Every city should do or make this law so that teens can be more awared what they have to do.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
883C1EF358F6,"At some point in every ones life,There is a time to be self reliant.

People should make there own decisions, Because, As a self reliant person, making a decision based on someone else's advise can be very risky. For example, buying an insurance plan, going based in someone else's coverage will cover something you dont need, while if chosen based on your needs there wouldnt be a problem.

Self reliance is very important for person to become independent. If one dose not trust themselves how will they grow. for example, A famous quote by Micheal Jordan say's ""You miss 100% of the shots you dont take"". this quote eludes to the fact that as an individual it is important to have self confidence in their decision making, because if you dont take a risk in making your own decision you will 100% miss the shot's you take.

Furthermore Making o's own decisions are important ,because, People will not always be there, and you will be forced to make your own decisions. For example choosing your own apartment isnt anybodies else's job but yours. Choosing an apartment is very important and one must have self reliance in order to make the right decision for them selves.

In conclusion being self reliant is the most important skill you could have, while, I could see the other side saying that going to an expert is the best way to make a tough decision while that may be true, they will not always be there for you.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
B2055DB7B29E,"Some people believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. This is true because achievement is the key to success in your life. Achievement can give you compassion to follow and can give you more opportunity and success in your future.

To follow and make the dream come true, we need the compassion, so achievement can be the compassion for you. Some students was success because they made the achievements and they follow it. They knew that achievement could made them success and helped them to accomplish their work. Also, the achievement can give you many advice to improve yourself. Many advice can be from the failure to succes to get that achievement. It's not just help you in the current, the achievement also help you in the future.

Although achievement can be the the new door to help you reach your dream, it's can be your destination. The achievement can give you more opportunity and success in your future. Microsoft always find the employees have good achievements such as prizes, advance diploma to work for them. We can see that if we have achievement, you can get any job you want.

Also, the achievement can make you proud and feel confident to accomplish your work. It's can help you easy to focus your work. As the result, achievement is the road, the key to help you success.

While it is true that the achievement is the source of self-esteem, we must remember that we need to praise to make the achievement. Every achievement come from your work you feel confident, so you can get the achievement easily.

At the end,achievement is the source of self-esteem because it's can give you the compassion and the opportuniry in your future. We need to improve that everyday to improve your self-esteem.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
22FDAB421C71,"Albert Einstein once said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge.""

I believe that it is Imagination is more important than knowledge, because with Imagination you can Form pictures in your mind, you can create interesting ideas and fantasize about something that is exciting.

Firstly, you can form pictures in your mind. Creating pictures in your mind is useful, because you can draw pictures that is in your mind, like sketching a house that you want. You can form pictures in your mind by visualizing a situation that is interesting, like playing a game in virtual world. You can create interesting ideas that you can use to draw picture, like using a digital art to create a picture by thinking an interesting ideas. Forming pictures is really important.

Secondly, you can create interesting ideas. You can create something that will give a lot of attention like creating a fantasy book about Wizards vs witches. You can be creative by creating interesting ideas, like having a unique plans about something that is cool. You can create quotes, like

Albert Einstein did, because he had a interesting Idea about Imagination.

Creating interesting ideas is unique.

Lastly, you can fantasize about something that is exciting. Fantasizing can be exciting sometimes, because you can imagine an situation that is not real, like having a awesome superpower. You can be good at something that your not good at by fantasizing it that you can do it, like playing basketball and I also do this a lot because Im not good at studying.

You can create awesome ideas, like building a wooden car with painting on it. Fantasizing something is important as well.

I conclude that forming picture in your mind, creating interesting ideas and fantasizing about something that is exciting is more important knowledge.

In conclusion, these three reasons is why Imagination is more important than knowledge. It is my opinion that Imagination is more important than knowledge.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
D1A866170CEA,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? There is a debate if students would benefit or not from online classes? Some people believe that students would do better if their classes are at home. I believe that you can learn more if you are in a regular class than just being at home because students can learn from other cultures or more things about life with other friends, if students do not interact with others in a future they are going to be afraid to do it, and finally if you are in a regular school you can do more activities and share with your friends.

First, when you are in a school of the united states you learn a lot from other cultures. Therefore besides than world geography, you learn from your friends countries and how is to live there. Also, when you have friends at school you share your problems and most of the time you learn more things about life with them and how you can be a better person.

Second, sometimes there can be shy people at school because they do not know how to interact with others or how to start a conversation. When you do activities in groups sometimes you make new friends and talk to others became easily than before. However, if students do not learn how to talk to others in public places they are going to be afraid in a future; imagine if they need to make a presentation at work, they are not going to be able to do it because they will be afraid to talk in front of all the co-workers. Learn how to interact with others is important for your future.

Third, it is important to get involve in activities at school; activities help you with your curriculum when you apply to college. Also, if you are in any activity you can share more with your friends. However, when you get involved with activities at school helps you to clear your mind when you have to many homework or when you are stress out about your classes. Therefore, some of the activities give a lot of skills in the thing that you would like to do in your future.

In conclusion, if students do not interact with others or neither have a friend to talk with, and they do not have activities to get involved with other people; students are not going to be successful if they try in a future to interact with a large group of people. Therefore, it is very important to learn from others and interact at your school. That is why I believe that everybody should take classes on a regular school, to learn how to get involved with others and be able to express your self.   ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
34D76C62269C,"If you still attended school, how would it feel to go to school the whole year? Just have off 3-4 weeks of summer break, maybe 2 weeks of winter break and 1 week in fall and spring break.

Well I can imagine that and just imagining that makes my head hurt.

Just having to come for 8-9 months of school is hard for some students and I would think that less number of students would come to school if we had a year-round school. Just having a normal school year(8-9 months)is amazing. Although some people say that having a year-round school is a amazing idea because that way students would not forget what they had learned over the year, actually having a year-round school is not a great idea because students would have less stress about school and also students would try harder when they come back from summer break.

Although some people say that having a year-round school is an amazing idea because that way students would not forget what they had learned over the year.

Also because students would come back after 3-4 weeks and still remember.

Having a year-round school would give students more time to learn all the material they have to know and more easy and faster. also have more opportunity to get better grades because you are more time in school. I read in a article that it said that the more time you spend in school and focus the better it is for you in the future. Having a year-round school has advantages and disadvantages such as being more time in school,less time being out of school, maybe less school activities, less summer time , etc.

Many things can change when the school changes. is always better to keep the old way than start a new way and not be successful.

I think that not having a year-round school is a good idea because students would have less stress about school.

Students wont be as stress because of school the whole year and only a little bit of vacation. Stress can be something bad not just for students but for everyone. Stress causes illness such as your head hurts,back hurts, feel like not doing anything, etc. Not having a system of school like that can give students more time for vacation alone or with the family. Having a 3-4 moths of summer vacation is enough for you to have a really nice vacation with family or like I said before alone. school causes a lot stress for students and having to come all year is more stressful. enjoying your summer is not just about one week or two is about having time for yourself and family.

also not having a year-round school would make students try more for the next year that they come back to school.

When students have more time off school it makes them want to come back. Students want to come back and start the year. Some of them get so tired of being at home that they just want to come back. Also being on regular school break students enjoy more the summer than just 1 month or less. They have more opportunity to go explore the world and everything. Much more freedom for the summer. When is summer students cant wait to leave school but when its like 2 months out of school they want to come back. Summer is the best season for a student because is when they enjoy most of there time with the family,friends and having fun in the summer is the best memories and maybe the best memories they have with friends and family. My best memories are the ones in summer that I enjoy mostly with my family.

In conclusion, some people say that having a year-round school is great because that way students wont forget what they had learned over the year but I think that having a year-around is not a good idea because students would feel more fatigue than the usual and also when they come back to school they would feel more comfortable and ready to learn more again.

Being out of school is a great thing but when you are almost done with summer you just want to go back to school and see your friends and than is the same thing when you are going to summer you feel so excited that you just want to be done and not come back but is the same feeling when you are coming back from summer to start the year. Having pretty experiences and sharing time with the family is amazing that is what makes summer amazing. wouldnt you want to have your children with you in summer vacation? ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5
D293D510A140,"Have you ever struggled in school and needed extra help,Well I have struggled in school and i didnt like it so then teacher came up with a great idea to help kid that need extra help with homework or a specific subject the idea was called a homework club.

Homework clubs can be useful for kids that can't do there homework at home because they do not have WIFI.

Kids can stay after school and be in the homework club if they do not have computers at home to do essays.

Homework clubs can also help you get better in a subject like math because you can get more 1 on 1 help with a tutor.

Homework clubs can also be used for kids who are in a sport or after school activity the homework club would let you get your homework done quicker in school so that you can go to your after school activity on time.

For example if a kid has an F in math and a teacher gives him extra credit work to do and the kid doesnt understand the work the homework club with be there with tutors to help the kid understand and finish his work.

I believe that homework clubs would be a great way for kids to learn more about the subject they are studying in class.

Sometime dont you feel like your teacher is explaining something too fast and you dont really understand,Well the homework club can help you with that the homework club will get you a tutor to explain to you more about the subject.

Have you ever been in class and kids are talking well in the homework club you would have peace and quite so that you could do your work in peace.

Have you ever had that one class you couldn't pass well I have,so what i did was go to the homework club were i had teachers and other fellow students helping or teaching me what i didnt know about the subject i was struggling in.

The homework club is also a great way to interact with other student.

The homework club is a place for learning not for fooling around so if you want to join the homework club it is because you need help with your homework or classwork.

Anyone needing help is math science or in any subject should join the homework club.

The homework club can help you raise your grade in the class if you try hard and try your best.

The home work club is there if you want to get your homework done is school so that when you get home you can relax.

The homework club also has lots of benefits because you can learn more than other kids and you can get special attention from your tutors so that you can learn more in class.

In conclusion the reason why I want to create a homework club is to help kids that need extra help in class.

I also want to help kids who can't do there homework at home because they have no WIFI.

I would like to help kid who teacher aren't really teaching good so they can have a good grade in that class.

I would like to help kids that need special attention to learn.

These are all the reasons I think schools should have homework clubs.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
4ABC0ED00F91,"Do you believe that in order to success is going though failure contently? People think that going though failure can help you be successful though out time. Some example could be emotions, not giving up, and a quote ""Third time is the charm."" These are some of the things that people do in order to succeed though failure.

First, when people can not got something right the first time they can get emotional such as upset, mad, and frustrated and many more. An example of this could be when you are working on a math problem and you did not get the right answer the first time people can get upset. That is why emotions can be a part of failing to get successful.

Moreover, when people can not get something done they tend to just give up and do nothing. People should never give up because not everyone gets it the fist time. One example can be when you are trying to find information about an animal and you can not find anything on it so you just give up and not do the research information and now you are going to get a zero for it which is not good. This is why you should never give up even if it is hard for you

Although, most people have heard this saying ""third times the charm."" This saying has a meaning to it because it is telling you that you have to keep on trying in order to get it right. Sometimes when you keep on trying it can turn out better then the other times that you tried. One example can be when are drawing something and you do not like it you can try again and do it better then the first time. Keep on trying in till you like it or in till you get it right. This is why this saying is very important to understand.

In conclusion, in order to succeed through failure can always be a good thing and it can help you to become better but most importantly to feel good about yourself and the success that you made.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
192D02CF8C9E,"Having good attitudes is the best way to successes. There is two types of attitudes : a good attitudes and a bad attitudes. Good attitudes can help you in a lot of thing, for example you don't agree with your boss about your paycheck, one thing that you can do is talk with your boss with a good attitude and get to a agreement or talk with a bad attitude and get fire. Good attitudes can also help during a bad or boring times. For example, you and your family are having a bad time in a trip and then you go with a great attitude and make everyone feel better.

Some ways that you can be with a good attitude are : when you sleep well, when is sunny outside, when you get a gift, when you go to your favorite restaurant or you got your favorite food , when your friends go to your house, when you visit your family, when you go to a trip and your having a good time, and so many other ways.

Bad attitudes can take you to the wrong path. A lot of people have bad attitude almost all the time and it's really difficult to get along with them. That type of person does not have a lot of friends or they don't have friends. One example of a bad attitude is when you came to school with a lot of stress and a bad attitude and your teacher do something that you don't like, then you star yelling at him with a bad attitude and your teacher send you to guidance and you get a report card. Or maybe someone else is with a bad attitude and wants to fight and that can go really bad.

Some ways that you can get a bad attitude are : when you are tired, when you got a lot of work, when it's raining and you can't go outside, when someone else got a bad attitude with you, when you are mad at someone, when you are hungry and the food is bad, and some other things.

When I am with good attitudes I always have the best time. Some thing that make me have a good attitude is when I got my favorite food , or a present , or when I am with my family. For example, yesterday was my cousin's birthday in a really fun place, I was with a good attitude because I was playing with my cousin and then we ate really good food. Also I am with a good attitude when my family and I go on a trip, I love to travel because we can visit a lot of new places. Another example is, because my science's teacher was with a good attitude, he give us one more day to turn in a project.

There is so many benefits of having good attitudes. One of them can be when you got a important exam and you study and feel secure about it, then in the next morning you woke up with a good attitude and you take the exam felling secure about your self and with a good attitude, you are going to get a good grade. I think that the best one is having a good time because you are happy and being happy is the best felling that a person can have.

In conclusion, having good attitudes can help you in a lot of thing like in work, school ,and even family reunions. Now you know, the next time that you are felling bad or having a bad time the best way to handle that is having a good attitude.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
62EA3F855DB2,"It is a better choice asking more than one person because when you ask them what's your problem or question most of them are going to say something else while some are just going to say the same thing. But it's not a good idea just asking your problem or question to one person. Because that person might be wrong and not know ask your examples:mom,dad,ant,uncle your friends anyone you trust and thats how you get multiple opinions and when your making a better choice by asking anyone you know. But don't ask one person cause one that person might not know and two it's not a better choice by asking only one person and sometimes you might not trust that one person by his or it's idea. And you might get your problem or question answered by asking multiple of people. Conclusion that you should ask more than one person so you can get more multiple opinions and you might get the right answer of your problem or question by the right person. But some people don't like telling other people there question or problem one cause there scared or shy or they might think that the person will not know or understand what the person is talking about that sometimes can happened it happen to my friend once where he had a math question asked the teacher but the teacher didn't know what he meant or what he was talking about so the teacher tryed to tell him his question but that wasnt the question my friend ask for so he told a student that sits next to him and he understanded what he was talking about so he then helped him with the question he had.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
0B1599B11FCF,"All people try to do the best they can do. All people can suppceful; however, they can work really hard to achieve what they want. Everyone should do something beyod and never give up. Never we have to thing negative, we always have to do importan thing to grow up and because, we always have to try the best that we can do.

First, nobody have to think negative. Because, everyone can do something beyod. For example, when we say that we can walk only three mile but if we effort we can achieve more then we think. Always you have to think pisitive to accomplish what you want. More you think negative, less you caan grow up. Nobody have to think negative.

In addition, All person need to do importan thing to grow up. For Example we need to do right think then we are not goin to fall dow. All of you can be the change you want to see in the world. We need to fallow the rules and not make mistake out of the low. All person need to do importan thing to grow up.

Finally, Everyone have to try to do the best ever. all people need to try to do the best to get goal finish. Who try the best is the one who try the best is the one who can make a progress in the life. even if you don't want to try your best you have o try most you can. everyone have to try to do the best ever.

Everyone should do something beyod and never give up, we never have to do importan thing to grow up and all people need to try to do the best. everyone caan do somenthing beyod. for example when we say that we can walk only three mile but if we effort we can achive more then we think. You can be the change that you want to see in the world. who try the best i the one who can make progress. If we never do somenthing beyod we never will grow. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
1D75D76AC202,"Dear Principal,

I was thinking about the policies you were offering about the cell phones allowed in school and I would suggest to choose policy 2 because students aren't going to follow what the first policy says. Also because student's have no reason to be texting in class if other students they are texting are in class too, students shouldn't be allowed to have phones in school because they would be distracting the rest of the class when their phone goes off in class.

If students can have phones in school it's a sure fact that they're going to be using them in class. With Policy 2 the school can take the phones away at the beginning of the school day to be sure they aren't using the phone during class.

Also with Policy 2 the students aren't able to be communicating just in case they have a test. If the phones are taken away they will reduce the chances of the students cheating on tests.

I also pick Policy 2 because students are going to be distracting the class if someone sent them a message and the phone goes of in class in the middle of a lesson. No one likes to be distracted while they are learning, or at least i know i don't. That's why there shouldn't be phones in schools. With phones the grades of the students will go down because, they aren't paying attention.

So i think you should pick Policy 2 So there are less distractions. Also so they aren't cheating in tests. Thank you for spending time reading this letter i hope you take it into consideration.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
7949A941BF0F,"What is success without failure?

I can infer that the mentioned statement Prime Minister Winston had provided has an strong point of view from many perspectives. Human behavior mostly influences in their achievements and failures throughout life. To be able to achieved your expected goals without loosing enthusiasm, and demonstrating resilience is the greatest accomplishment. I strongly agree with the Churchill's statement regardless to the critical role failure plays in life. It gives the enthusiasm every individuals need in order to be successful in life, it motivates young minds to follow their expectations, and provides more knowledge in many cases since we learn from our mistakes.

Accordingly to many researches, individuals tend to give up when they are facing an obstacle in a complicated occasion, that prevented most of society to stop achieving their accomplishments due to the constant fear of experiencing failure. Society has been exacerbating this concept by creating irrational fear in those who are not willing to take risks to become better persons once they seemed to have failed, which leads to the mediocrity of the world.

Furthermore, there are many people who were born in a extremely poor region, yet they became successful persons due to the hard work they constantly showed and the multiple failures they have experienced, that helped them work harder on specific goals, and that have made an enormous impact in many young minds since it exposes how someone could be able to achieved anything they are expecting, if you keep trying. If individuals were to give up in the first try, we would be a world with ignorant in it.

Moreover, It is psychological proven that a brain can effectively works in better conditions, if they seem to be in a place where failure could be the main issue. We, as humans tend to follow other's behavior to feel accepted by society. If we keep encouraging people to practice resilience, they would most likely be able to manage every hard situation in life and would have the courage to keep trying even if they are aware they might fail, in other words, they would be practicing negative reinforcement that is based on failing but being aware they could have rewards at the end.

Overall, Failure plays an essential role in the pursuit of success since it gives individuals the challenge of becoming better human being and achieving their goals regardless to the situation. It exposes how human behavior react with the idea that success is not only one extraordinary idea. Success means being able to manage the situation with resilience and perseverance even if they seem to have made multiple mistakes. It influences in many adolescences, gives the hope of being able to achieved their expected accomplishments and it provides higher knowledge from their mistakes. A successful person is the one who have seem to dedicated their time to be able to greatly achieved their dreams. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,2.5,4.0
2EB94A444839,"Some schools offer an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Schools think that it is a benefit that help students who don't want to go school or if they have diseases, they can't go schools. Taking classes in home or schools have some similar benefits but not overall benefits.

Although, I think taking classes from home have benefits and not because some students have health problems and it is not a benefit because students can't learn good like in school.

At first, taking classes from home can be a benefit because it helps students who have health problems like students that have problems to walk or different disease. Also, for students that their parents don't let them to go for problems. For example, if students who have arthritis, they can't go to schools because they can't walk. It would be better for they because taking classes by online or they can make a video conferencing with a tutor. They can learn about all classes they want to know and it would be a benefit for their future because they will get a diploma that will be help for them. Also, it can be a benefit for students that had problems in schools like fight with others students. Those students can take classes in home with help of someone or by online. In this way, they can get help and learn things without go school.

Moreover, I think it is not a benefit for students who don't want to go schools because if they don't like the schools, they will be doing whatever they want because there won't be a teacher who tell them what to do; and they can't learn good because there are no one who explain them the class. There are many students who don't speak English and they don't want to go school but they want to learn. For example, I can't speak English so good because I am not a native American, so if I don't want to go school and want to learn the language, taking classes from home would be hard for me because in home I will learn slower than schools because in schools are many people speaking English and in home I just hear one time at day. It better if I hear English the most of the time because I can learn so fast because I will make friends to help me. For me, taking class in schools is better than home because now I go to school and it is hard even if I go to school. I am improving the language with help of teacher and friends.

In conclusion, taking classes from home is not a hundred percent a benefit. It just have some benefits for some students. For some students taking classes from home is hard because they don't learn too much. Overall, if I take classes in home or school,

it is something relevant because even if I am in one or anther place, I am learning something. It is not a thing of other world. It is just for students that have the purpose to learn and be someone in life. Going to school help me to improve my life each day. Each day, I can learn something new and now my language is improving because I have people who want to teach me and I am a stronger person because no one can laughing of me because I am learning. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
101E0C554F66,"Have you ever thought of an outdoor activity that aided you, your families, and friends? while there are some activities that aid you and other groups of people, one of the most helpful is going to the park. it is good to go to the park because you can ride your bike, and because you can spend time with your family.

going for a ride in you bike to the park is good for your body and mind because your leg movements aid the muscles, the fresh air blowing in your face feels relaxing, and because you can burn unnecessary calories while riding.

It is good to go to the park with your family because you can get some helpful advises from them, because you can have a stronger bond with you family and/or friends, and because you can talk about life problems and how to solve them.

it is best to fly a kite at the park because when flying kites, you have to maintain it's height which is a good challenge, because you can compete with friends, and because you can teach others how to fly a kite

Overall, riding a bike and spending time with your family are both good things to do at the park. life aiding activities exist outdoors all around the world. Going to the park is a good choice when thinking about family or frineds.                  ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
40788D50B102,"I agree because when you tell someone the truth you have to be honest to eachother the whole time and to let the other person know what they are feeling inside of them that they do not want hear from the other person of what they just said to them. Another reason why you shoud be honest with eachother is to tell them the truth what's going on,

because if you don't wanted to keep it inside for so long you should tell your trusted friend or tell an adult that you trust the most and tell them what's going on. After you are finish talking to your trusted friend or to an adult the best thing to do is tell your friend that you have been not telling the truth to them and tell them the truth what's going on. After you finish telling the truth the other person that you trusted on for so long they will never forgive you of what you just did. And that's why it's important to let the other person know the truth. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
CA64C82B0F26,"I think i agree because you can learn more and study more and the electives will be longer and it will get better and better and you can use it in any class so it will be longer and. The electives will be more longer and you won't be stress because you will have one and a half hours so you will not be stress and you can be good and you will have more time for electives and you can play whatever game your playing because it will be longer. you won't be stress because you will be playing games because you will have one and a half hour and it would be cool if there was one and a half in school.

It would be better for kids and they will have more time to play and it will be better because you will have one more hour everyday and it be better to learn and have more time for school and you will be more better in every subject if there was more hours in class and. Next your grades will be more better in class or in electives and that will be cool and more better and you will be a good student in class and your grades will be higher because you studied more in class and you had time for every class or in elective and you will be better if you had the time for whatever class.

it would be better because your parents would be proud of yourself because of your grades and they will probably buy you something and that is the reason why it would be better to have one and a half hour in class. After that it would be better for you and your parents because you keep having your grades up and it will be better for you because you kept having your grades up and your siblings will be proud of you and. After that you could have a good grade in classes and after that your you could have a better grade and then you can join a JV team and you will make it because of your grades.

It would be to have one and a half hour in class because your parents will be proud and your siblings and your parents will buy you whatever they want because you have a good grade in all classes and it would be cool because you can play in every sport and you can make it because of your grades and your parent will probably buy you and ps4 or an x box and next you can be a good student in class and you will have a good job and your parents will still be proud of you and next you can earn money and next that is the reson why i agree to this  ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
037ED3EA2982,"Do you think positive attitude is the key to success in life. I think it is because if you ain't positive you won't get no where in life. Think about it if your positive somethings in life will be easier then other things. I believe theres good karma and bad karma if your positive to people and help people out good stuff will happen to you that's called good karma. but if you bully kids, cuss at elderly and don't help people out karma is going to bite you in the butt. That's why it's always good to be nice to people you don't know even if they aren't good to you still be nice because at the end of the day good karma is coming to you.

Look at these famous people they made it out of the struggles because they worked hard and they helped people out. Some people don't get chances to show other people they talent if you keep working hard and get your mindset in the right place you will have a chance to make out the struggles. it's hard to make it out of struggles some people are working hard busting they butts and they barley get money to pay off the bills. Most likely the people that work hard are the people that have positive attitude not all the people that work hard because some people that work hard are rude and helpless. For the people that are helpless and rude won't get as far from the people that have positive attitude.

Positive attitude can get you a lot of good stuff in the future. As long as you stay positive and work hard you will be successful in life. Positive attitude will get you places in the future that you couldn't imagine when you was little. Although it's not going to be a easy road to get where you want to be you always got to try. See if your positive in your job and you help people out a lot people are going to start to like you that's one way to be noticed. I'd rather work hard with people I know are positive and helpful then working with rude helpless people.

Look at the people with negative attitude are they getting anywhere?. They ain't getting nowhere with negative attitudes. Usually the people with the negative attitudes are the ones that get bullied, ain't raised right, or they just won't listen no matter what you tell them. If they change they life around and start listening and respecting people they will get respect back. If you start switching your life up people will start noticing and they will be happy you. But some people won't change and they will get sent away to prison if they keep up what they do.

In the future always remember that positive attitude is the key to success in life. No matter what people say about you always stay positive don't let the negative people take you down because they said a bunch of nonsense about you that wasn't truth. Don't tolerate bullying either if you see someone getting bullied stand up for them having a positive attitude ain't only about yourself it's about helping people that needs help. I've seen videos of people sitting down on the bus and not move for a lady that can barley walk it shows you how people are now it's pathetic. I'd rather help people out and get known for it then get known for not helping out people.      ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
8799E3BD41EB,"Do you know that almost the 50% of the society are conform with what they already attained? I know many people that not are surrender easily. It is the way how they got their goals. I think see beyond we can reach success and keep people that we love.

However, everybody wants to have a great life, but we have to work harder to get it. Then, is essential to have a goals, if we can protrude means that we have more opportunities. Opportunities like get faster a job or make more money. I know we have to pass a numerous of obstacle, but we have to not give up. Be conform cannot help to reach the success.

In addition, is not only about be a professional or success. Also, attempt of be a magnificent human, for keep what is already in your life like friends and family. If you are merry with someone you know that love be maintain day by day. Same with family or friends in order to have happiness or better communication. It is for this reason we can not be conform, and we have to work beyond of the love the we already have.

In summarize, a numerous of people are conform. Improve your master can help to have success and maintain people you love. Protrude, could be easily to get a job or get an abundance of money. Also, could have a better communication with people that we love. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.5
AF20176EB127,"Imagine everyone or you having a great skill or talent that you dont even know about. You can do what many people cant do or you can even make a game out of it. You can develop new skills if you try or even come up with a hard talent or a easy talent that everyone can see it and do it. You can also combine talents and skills you never thought you can do if you dont try it or see it if it can work with you or with other people.

Everyone has a great talent and skill. Be the most fastest and the most smartest person in the world at math. Try to find out what's your best skill or what's your talen and if you are the worlds most fastest and smartest person at math you would have a good job later on for you. You can throw a football from the 1 yard all the way to 90 yards at age 11. You can never know what your good at if you dont try it out and if you can throw a football 90 yards from yard 1 at age 11 im sure later all the football team's would want you to play for there team.

Try finding out what are you good at. You are the tallest person in the world. You are the most tallest person who has ever lived and i think every basketball team would want you to play for there team and when you would run i think it would take you 7 steps from the half court of the basketball court. You are the most fastest person in the world. You would be faster then everyone in the whole school and the most fastest in the track team and could also go to the olyimpics. Find out your best skill and what your good at.

You can do what many people cant do in the world. You can develop new skills or make them so other peolpe can see it and do it or you can be even famous if you create a talent that know one has done or create the most best skill's that people haven't seen in the world and you can break world records that people have try to do it but faild. Everyone has a skill and a talent you just have to find it in you and trust your self that you can do it and dont give uo untill you have completed it.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
D9B44BD44222,"To be my self in this world I do not necessary need all the people that are around me. I can continue with life by my self. All the achievement that I been doing are made by my self because, I effort without the help of people that are around me.

In this world that I am know, I can not trust anybody because instead of wishing me the good things they wish me the worst. People sometimes are bad because they are telling me to do bad things, school does not help me to be someone in life, and they do not want me to be successful, but without them I would be someone with a better future in the world.

To make an accomplishment, I do not need all people that are around me. They are not going to help me to be successful in this world. An example is I had a friend named Generic_Name she was a nice person with me, but them she started to change. Generic_Name told me to me to skip school with her because, school is not going to help me to be someone in life. She had a misconduct with her parents. She did not stop to do bad things, so I stop talking to her because, My parents did like her anymore. I wanted to be friend with her but,what she was doing it was not good, so I need to worried about me.

To be someone in this world I have to work hard to do what I want without others around me because, when I need something or I get in a trouble they are not going to be there with me. An example is yesterday I took a test with others students in math class, and one of them told me to help him. I did not wanted to help him because, the teacher can get mad at me. After we finished the test he got closed to me, and he was complaining. I told the student that he should studied because, people are not going to be their when he needs to take a test.

Another reason to be successful in this world is that I would never give up, and will always do what even if the people said that I am not going to made it. A example is I am graduating this years and my cousin told me that I am not going to graduate because I am not very smart. I do not care what she said but, the only thing that I know is that I am trying my best to graduate this year. Sometimes I want to cry because she is always saying bad things to me. In this world I dont need nobody to be someone else even my family.

After all this, I think that I do not need people around me because they are not gonna be there to support me. Being with people that is around me is not good because, some of them would tell me to do bad things instead of doing good things. In this world that I am living right know people can killed me and cause me so much damage. It is better to just you in this world because you do not have to worried about someone else.                          ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
172F67E7FBBC,"Dear, principal i think that you should not make students do community service to students that don't like doing it. First i want you to know that is a good thing that you thing of that but if students don't want to help and you sent them do something i think they are going to make it worst. EX: you sent them to go pick up trash and they go and they are just playing around they are going to be fighting with the trash throwing it where it was clean then later when they finish playing they are going to see a mess that they are going to get lazy and just walk away and go to another place where its cleaner and if they are trouble makers they are going to do that over and over again.

Think about it if you let students that really want to help out and they do the same thing (throw the trash to each other) and if they really want to help out they are going to clean for them selves. and they are going to be helping because they want to ,not because you forced them to do community service.

I was also thinking of you giving 2 choices

1*students should do community service

2*students get to do extra home work for their hardest classes(where they are almost flunking the class)................ come on unlist think about it.

from one of your best students

*STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
FE4E3BB2DAE1,"People really work on this this? or People knows the importance to be better every day? People didn't know the importance to learn more, like give to their mind more wisdom and they just conform with small pieces and

I very agree with this statement because it's true that if you dont learn more than you already know, you don't be able to be successful in life and I was wrong all the time and it's sad for me just realize that I waste a lot of time doing nothing and this question makes think a lot and the reason why is because I never think about to do something much better that I did already and sometimes if I have to do it, Im afraid to fail or do something wrong but small things do the difference and know something more that you already do it gives you more opportunities in life and you grow more.

Try something new that you never done before it's something scary for humans it doesn't matter the age or how brave you are,

if you had a lot difficulties doing it; probably you will be scare if you have to do it again even if you already know how to do it for example, I been working in a Japanese restaurant about one year and half and it was the first time for me working as a server and I was scare to do it and the reason why I decide to do it was the money, and I got surprise of myself because I made it and my boss was telling me that I was doing really good job and I felt so proud of my self because at that time my English wan't perfect and after I'm got problems with him about money and it was too much problems, so I decide get another job my friend told me that her boss was looking for new servers so I went to apply but the problem was when I saw the size of the restaurant and the different with the other restaurant was a lot and also when I saw the menu in mind I was saying "" You will fail""

I feel too bad that day, and all the progress was long and suffering for all the mistakes that I made but I made it one more time and today I thinking all that I went through it was't that much difficult and I'm not a master but I'm still learning.

Many people are conformist with their life and dont want to learn more and unfortunelly I'm include in that group of people and it happens to me that I fail many times because

I think already know everything even more than others for example, One day I was taking a Spanish test and felt confident about it because my first language is Spanish and I remember the majority of my classmates were studying for that test but wasn't and I fail the test because I saw questions that I never imagine that even exist and that was very important to get a credit so that day I learn that even if know many things is always good learn more.

In conclusion, you have to be better every day and know that is always more to learn every day, even if you know the stuff and always keep in your mind that try something new don't have to scare you because every human has the ability to learn and do the much that they want and the only obstacle you put it to your self.        ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
73038C17880E,"Yes, I do agree, because it's a great way of learning because we don't have to deal with other kids in school, we're save because we are home, we don't have to worry about going out to the dangerous world that we in now. For example I have friends that do school at home and they are just like regular kids from High School, a lot of people would say that being home school its like going to prison but it's not, home school just gives us a better way of learning at home with no one to bother. Another benefit of being home school is that you never have to worry about school shooters bad people in school, getting abues in school, not dealing with any problems with other students. Another benefit of being home school is that you dont have to wake up early in the morning to go to school, you don't have to miss the bus anymore, don't have to worry about sports, staying after school, basically you have freedom to do more stuff, a lot of people in high school dont have time to go out or have som fun, not many kids are able to go out becasues their parents are strict and dont let them out but that's besides the point, many kids take avantange of home school some of those kids, they have parents that travel around the world and they dont have a chance to sit down and talk about what is going on in school or the everyday life, their parents will take their kids with them becasue they dont want their kids to be home alone, instead they take the kids with thme so they don't have to miis out on their aventues, and a lot of these kids are very talented and ready for the out side world becasue their education was high quiality and always on point. They are good kids and bad kids that do home school, some of them coud have got in a ot of trouble and its not able to go back to school and some kids are home school because their patrenst have to work out of the country and they can be home by their selfs and they take thier kids with the. That's all I have to say.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
28C8F048A469,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change it, should people can change their first impression or people can not repair their first impression. However many people think that first impression are impossible to change, people can change their first impression, if they knows more about each other and if a person is passing by a struggling in their life.

People can change their first impression if they know more about each other, for example if a person that meet another at the mall they will have no time to talk about what they like to do in their free time because they has to make their purchases and my friend Generic_Name has a story with a girl that he likes, he said that was difficult to talk with her because that first time he talk to here was in the lunch line and she was hungry so she dont even pay attention to him, one day both of them have detention they star talking and meet more about each other, people can change their first impression if they give the according time to each person.

A person can fix his first impression if that person was no notified about what struggles was happened the other person that day, for example when the Algebra teacher meet Generic_Name, he said that Generic_Name was quiet because Generic_Name do not like talk to much, one day Generic_Name said that he just come from El Salvador and do not speak too much English and a person that has lost a family-member if someone tried to meet him on those days anyone will be said that he's must depress or sad because non of them know the truth. People can not judge other just in one day.

For decades people has been said that first impression are impossible to fixed. A person can change that first impression if they share about their hobbies, characteristics, and tastes and if that person was no in a good mood that day they meet. People around the world judge other just because they talk for one minute or people never ask what was happened in life of the other person. In conclusion a person can change first impression.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
0E26C20CFBBE,"Imagine being asked to teach a lesson but actually teaching it to elementary students. It would be a very helpful for the students that are struggling. I conquer with the person that is going to go and share the lesson. I am going to give you specific details and examples about the things I would do if I was he or she going to share the lesson with elementary students and why it should be important.

One way that I agree by sharing a lesson to other students is important. This can be more helpful because the other teacher before that taught the students maybe didn't explain very well and the students were probably were confused the whole time or some of them were lackadaisical. And the new teacher that is going to teach the lesson to the students probably is a better explained and a probably has good and more skills. He or she maybe been called from many different schools and different states and asking if he or she can go teach a lesson to their students but if the teacher agrees with it.

Another way I could be more helpful for the students by asking their teacher if I can see the whole students grades that are in the class and the people that are struggling and make a group lesson with them. The teacher should tell the students to write down notes when the teacher is writing them down too. The teacher should give the students homework and tell them to bring it back and check it and see if they have gotten better with the way the teacher is helping them more or not. The teacher should give a form to the students parents for the ones that are struggling and asking them permission if they want the teacher to help them more in what they are struggling more in. So the students can get their grade up and better in the SOL's.

My last thing that I would do to be more specific and very useful is to give the students tests of the things they have been struggling with and see if they have gotten more better and see if the teacher has done a good job to the students. The teacher should give meetings to the student teachers and more lessons so they don't need to call for a better teacher than them. And its better if the teachers can get taught so they can be more specific in what the students asks them. All the teachers of the elementary should all go take lessons to teach better and get quizzed like their students.

I explained why it is important to share a lesson to other students. Some of the students got better and some didn't but at least they tried and put effort in it. All my reasons should help why a teacher should share a lesson with other students. The students should be more grateful for the teacher that came and helped them out. These are all my examples I would do if I was the one sharing a lesson.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
8AAC040AE6C7,"i disagree, because of each people in the world still require of help of somebody, if not any peoples can believe that are most that other and with his strengh and ego can to get anythings without help of nobody or only they think follow his intincts and ideas without before they could hear any advise of people that are victorious in the life as in the job for what they always in his mind and heart to know follow advise. In the world still there people very specials that God or the destint to give in our life for help in moments diffilcult that all people in his life occur.

For this, is that i think that each people still need of other people for create a life most easy for his family and us and we can live with calm that take the best decisions in our life and here any reasons for that are very important the advice to take decisions in ours life:

""Still there somebody for you ""

Each people most reliace in his life , always there necessity of any people that can to give advise of as "" what to need to do"" or "" how could you make it "". Always they think that are people fortunates for that , has a person that is still prepared tom give any advise without receive something to change. But for other part the people that are unpleasant , without humility, or intolerant to advise can to fall in decisions very hard that may be can affect your life as the your family, only for not seek help with experts or friends that if has experiences in situations similar to yours decisions. Also we should to be still grateful with people that our help with his advice and why not , we can to help to other people in his life such a avoid a bad consequence in his life.

''Seek rather to perform''

Everybody should to search to peoples that can to help in decisions specifics in the life that can result terrible in ours life, for this is most better hear to person that has a lot experiences in importants matters of the life, later they could to refect that way can to give you the decision . they can think whether is correct or not and create situations for each decisions that take you and that influence would has in your life ,also they shall hear differents point to view for is very certainly of your decisions. Nevertheless , we perfom rather of view or hear differents opinions and actions of people that has experiences good as bad in his decisions. For this, the first step in a situation like this, is seek and seek help of any kind as the friends, professionals, experts, or authorities that know the importance to take a good decision in an important matters in our life.

""Perseverance and Humility""

Always in ours life should to exist the humility, and we believe that everything known and not is necessary seek to experts or receive any advice , but this is a great mistake in the life and for consequence to get failure, disilusionment, or to be alone . Only for follow ours own instincts and ideas without see towards the future and we think that only with our knowledge and intelligence, we believe what we are ""the best"" in this world and that nobody exist , because we have of power, also what happenned not result as we are waiting. after, only for not assets seek experts for that we to give advise of how to confront our decision or how find the best decision without wait a bad result . always has hope that if we hear advice is a little most easy we take the decision.

Always we should to be very carefulness to moment to choose it. Never allow that our mind or think that is it better for us without rather hear advice and reflect about if is or not the correct decisions in this matters.

In conclusion

, all people of the world needs any help to surpass a moment difficult in life, for this , each people should and has that seek and hear different help for take any decisions , if that ours instincts and ideas could not to give still the better answer to a matters,also in each moment we find to a person that can to give any advice that may be has any doubt and we leave to carry for the mind and is most better seek a specialists or friends that has any experience in same decisions. We living in a world very development that is very easy to search to professionals as psichologist that can help in mistake in ours mind as sexologist for help about mistake on a relationship and as this examples also there people experts in differents kind of situations that can help to take the better decision. Nevertheless , each people should be humble, because still to around of youir life find to people that still is ready for you in any moment that you should necessary his help or advice for any situation that you shall is happen , always receive the advice of the better way , after you are a advicer for other people that is in a situation very alike.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
294C41270CAB,"Although some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious, actually students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it is more relaxing and even if students go somewhere or get a emergancy they can still attends the classes online.

Eventhough students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home there is some students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious. Some students this way might not pay attention. Also they can use thier phone or do other stuff while the teacher is teaching and their grades could go down fast.

Students would benefit from being able to attend clases from home because it is more relaxing. This way students don't have any stress over getting class on time or missing any classes. Also students it is more relaxing because it is just yourself and the computer. So this way you don't have to worry about other kids or anything that would distract you. In a regular classroom at school there is some kids that distract the entire class and you just feel so hopeless because you are trying to learn but you are too distracted by the other kids. This way you can focus more and learn better.

Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because even if the students go somewhere or they got a emergancy you can still attend the classes online. This will benefit the students because it will minimize the days that you can't attend school. Also if you had a emergancy and have to go somethere far away you can still attend school by online. Also if you broke a bone on your leg or something and you can't walk you might miss a lot of classwork and lessons that are important to you. For this online classes are easy for you.

In conclusion eventhough some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious, actually students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it is more relaxing and even if students go somewhere or get a emergancy they can still attends the classes online.    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
BF5E7CD37E4B,""" Imagination is more important than knowledge ""

Can imagination be more important than knowledge?

I think that imagination can be more important than knowledge. Due to the imagination of some scientists have created a massive number of inventions that benefit almost all the people of the world in that part is when knowledge is created based in imagination. In movies of sci-fi the director imagine a space full of flying cars and gas stations in the space, one great example was in the movie ""Return to the future 2"" the director and the writer of the movie imagine a skateboard that could elevate one ore two inches from the floor and they put it in the movie, and now scientist invented a skateboard that can elevate four centimeters from the floor.

First of all, whiteout imagination the world couldn't be the same like we know it right know,the imagination can help to improve your knowledge. Think about that a world whit geometrical forms like squares or rectangles, horrible! For example: Bill gates was a normal person, studying in a normal university, and whit a normal family. But one day he imagine how to improve his knowledge of school of the systems of computers, then he invented windows, so thats is a great example o how imagination can change the world.

Also, the imagination can help people work. You use it in projects, you use it in homework, also you use it in tests (Like me right now). For example: I was in a project of a debate of countries, my team was N.Korea, i needed to imagine if i where in Generic_City presenting my statement to all affiliated countries of UN, so i began to write, i though i was going to lose, because my enemy was the Westerns powers, but then we could win due i could imagine if the situation was like i where a person of N.Korea speaking to orders governments.

Third, imagination makes you feel better, when you are bored or when you are sad, the imagination always can make you appear a smile in your face. For example: i meet a partner that was depressed, i tell him ""i know how you are going to be happy, imagine you and the people you love to be near are in a vacation, then imagine you are whit out problems, whit out school, whit out homework,etc. Now i think now you are willing to be without stress or difficulties in these day"", he told me he was better.

Finally, I think and many people does is that whit out imagination we couldn live happy and whit a lot of fun, knowledge is a part of the bast world of imagination. People famous and normal people are successful by the imagination they use in theres life.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
3904D0B954A3,"Most students enjoy summer vacation, but some educators feels students doesn't retain information as easily when they return in the fall and summer break is to long. But they should also think about the students point of view. They don't see the students point of view. How they feel about this? But No, Educators shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall because they don't have as much time spending with their family and most students also have responsibility.

The first reason is that they don't spend time with there family. School is taking there time when they go back home. Students comes everyday day at home to do their homework and make sure they have everything ready for the next day of there school life. Some even has projects to work on. While the student is only worry about that; they forget about there parent for a while. That can really effect them because they don't give enough truth to there parent about whats going on in there life. Anything can be happening. And educator feels that student's breaks are too short. That the first reason why they shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall.

Finally, the second reason is most students also have responsibility. Student also have a life and things to do. In summer, spring and winter break is where most students try to help there parent around and use there free, how ever they want. They don't have to stress as much over homework and projects. Most student also believe everything they learn at school is not worthy information that why they come back forget most of the thing they learned at school. This is the last reason.

Although, some people feel that summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. There are people who believe over wise. The fact remain that educators shouldn't make students' break year-round school, where there should be a 3-4 week break in the summer, and a week off in spring and fall because they don't have as much time spending with their family and most students also have responsibility. That why they shouldn't remove summer spring and winter break.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
48ADCBFC8376,"Do you think Students should know what career they want by the time they""re in high school? I don't think so because students will feel pressured and probably won't know what they want to do until after of high school. But some argue that students should know what to do while in high school. In my opinion, students should not feel rushed on their career because students would feel pressured and students probably won't know what to do until after they get out of high school. although, some would argue that students would be well prepared to study that job during high school.

My first example is that students should take their time. If students take their time and still think about it, they can have different options. Instead of pressuring them they should let them learn new things in school because they can check out a lot of different jobs they can be interested in and take it after school . Another thing is that students can focus more on their school work, education, and focus on graduating. Some students cant focus on careers during high school because they need to figure out what classes they have to take and pass in order to graduate from high school, and then focus on a career. So I think students should take their time on their own pace and figure it out little by little.

My second example is that students wont figure it out until after high school and if needed, take some time of from school . Students if they choose a career after school they can focus on that specific job and not worry about anything else besides their interest. they can focus more on their career that they chose because they dont focus on anything else school related, and give their full on attentions to their job. One other thing is that students after high school will feel less stressed and more relaxed. they can take however much time off on thinking what job to get.

Whenever they are ready to get a job they go to collage and study for it. I think students should feel stress free.

Some would argue that students should know what to do career they want to do during high school. For example students will know what to study for, before they get that job. Also, they can be well prepared and learn a lot of new things for the job. Sure students can be well prepared and learn about the job way before. however, students shouldnt have a lot of stress on them with school and their future career at the same time. Also, students grades will probably dramaticly go down because they try to focus on both things.

In conclusion, I think that students should not feel rushed. They will feel pressured and wont know until maybe after school. But some people think that they should know while in high school because they will be prepared confident for the job. I dont think that they should stress themselves a lot. so that they can focus on their education and focus on graduating and make their family proud. So teachers, and counselors don't try to blow they're heads up.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
698A3F2B43B9,"Have you ever thought about staring your future career in a young age? Well, This question has been asked to a lot of people. Lot's of people have responded to this question saying ""yes"" and ""no"". Everyone has their reason why they start in a young age and why they don't start in a young age. In my opinion young student's should start to think about their future career in a young age because it will give them an idea of what they want to be in their life and they will know what kind of courses or classes they will be taking to get to their goal. Even though, some would argue that young student's shouldn't start to think about their future career in a young age because they will spend less time with friends and family.

My first example is, it will give them an idea of what they want to do in their life in the future. For example, young age student's can change their mind and might not want to choice that path no more. Also, If that happens, young student's get's lots of time to think of another career path they want to take. For example, a kid is thinking about being a police but then later on he wants to be a doctor, that give the kid time to think about what he wants to be. Lastly, student's get a head start of what their future career is going to be like. In addition, This head start gives them time to plan and organize everything they need. For example, kid's have lots of things they want to be so they get a head start so they can get an idea of what career they choices to take.

My last example is, They will know what kinds of courses or classes they will be taking to to get to their goal. For example, student's can choice the right classes that will help them achieve their goal. Also, they don't have to stress out about them taking the wrong classes. Like, If a kid want's to be a doctor when he grows up he will already choice the courses of being a doctor. Lastly, student's knows what types of material they will need for the classes; to help them get prepare. In addition, This helps the student's a lot because they will already have the mind set to think of what they will be needing in the future. Like, that's a good skill to have, knowing what you need in the future and not worry about it in the last minute.

Some would argue that student's shouldn't start to think about their career in a young age because they will spend less time with their friends and family. For example, kid's are so full of energy and want to go out and have some fun all the time. Also, they want to make precious time and memories with their friends and family. Sure , it's nice to go have some fun and get to enjoy life with the ones you care about more. However, you got to remember that you going to be the one responsible for your own future and if you put effort your going to have an amazing impact in the future with your career.

In conclusion, student's should start to think about their career in a young age because it will give them an idea of what they want to do in their life and they will know what kinds of courses or classes they will be taking to get to their goal. It will keep them focuse on their goals and will make a big impact in their lives since they already have everything planed out. In addition, this will prepare them for the real world. So now, Do you think young student's should start their career in a young age?",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
424005E31A04,"Do people ever told that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life ?

Well,that true for you to be success in life you got to have a positive attitude .

when you talking around attitude is how we act ,talk ,and how we deal with thing that are happening. Say that person you are working with and the person next to you do or says something that is not so great, and let say that you were really mad and very upset about ,and you choose not to fight or talk back to him/her. In my preview I would say you act base on what happen and you had a positive attitude about what just happen. Attitude can be a big problem for some people and Sometimes you just need to have a positive attitude .When your thoughts think that positive attitude is the key to success will you not wrong ,I know that when you choose to have a positive attitude it depend on what going on and how you want to handle the matter .For example you are on your way to the school and you meet one of the teacher let say Mrs. Jade,will Mrs. Jade asks if you are okay and she ask you if you are gonna come to school because you have many days of absent at school , and say that you have your own personal problems and you just don't want to tell her about it .So you decide not answer her because you are not in a good mood and you might talk to her rudely and she would think that you have an attitude or bad behavior and thought if I have problem with her or be rude to her it would be the worse so I will not say anything .That would it and you would just kindly walk way. Attitude can be anything in life attitude is not just the way you treat other it can be how you manage things and how you think and act with a positive attitude. When you think back it can also be something that create your connection with those who are in your surroundings. For example when you meet a someone for the first time and you were nice to them everything about you was positive and you were did not hind anything from her and that person might draw a liking into you .And you might end up being their friends or bests. The thing of having positive attitude is that many people might not act the same way as you ,so you have to be the one being positive .People say a beautiful heart comes from in and out of that person .It the same thing with having a great positive attitude when think about it people do and say what they want to said and no one is stopping them .So with positive attitude is the same way people do it because they want to and even if you say that you want to stop them I don't think that you would do it. Because it their choice to do what they want to do .Say when you want to eat can anyone stop you and if not then why would they stop you from what your doing .These things we do it so that our life can be great base on what we see we act,make choice ,and choose the right or wrong that why everything we do in this world we do it with positive attitude .And think about when you are making choices do you have to be a greater thinker or smart no all you have to do is have a great idea and a positive attitude to it when you say it because sometimes thing are easy said then done .when a person is saying something or doing something they have a way of doing and saying that this day .when people are talking they use attitude to do or say something and you have to away think that your the only one doing but sometimes it not just you it might be the other way around and you might say oh ,so that how it done .What l'm saying is that positive attitude can be a good thing to those who know what it means to them and why they are having it. Have you ever meet a person they're so nice to you when no body is around ,but when people are around they act so mean to you ,and some people are really nice to you ,because they mean it and they want to be your friend and when you at some of these thing does have something to do with positive attitude and most of them just put on an act and when your the one they doing this to sometimes you don't if having positive attitude or not everybody knows what we do in the future but I know one thing for sure .That if you have a positive attitude ,The your future clear for sure because when you about the future the only thing that comes to mind is how are success and all you need is positive attitude and focus on what you can do because believing is living .And if you believe you have to have that positive attitude going ,because once you start a journey one can never stop until it's end ,Positive attitude can be the thing that can help you do what other can't do ,if you ask why it because you have a life and that most of the people in the the world need positive attitude so that they can have a peaceful life and one most never stop until you find what your looking for. Having a good attitude can not only be the key to success in life but it can help you be a wonderful person. Being kind to someone,helping people,and making people about you happy and it can also make you happy. why ,because you have a positive attitude and when you success in life you will be happy. The thing is when talking about positive attitude can be the key to success in life, is like you are talking about happiness is a wonderful thing that happen in a world and make people happy. So when saying key to success in life your talking about how you act ,respect,what you do?, and how will you success in it when your looking for positive attitude so that you can success. Their are not a lot people who have a positive attitude in this world,but their are people who are bringing positive attitude in this world. When you think about success in life do you think it would be great if everyone had the chance to be success in life ,but to be fair life is suppose to be hard that way we can learn from our mistakes. Positive attitude help you be success in life ,because we live we learn everyone is a learner in this world. Because no one is perfect or wonderful forever.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
0FD73E4EED03,"People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters because the people that wants make their own decisions they could not to know anything, just they are following their instincts and ideas so that mean they will believe that what they are doing is correct when it does not and it is against the rules.

Laws; the consumption of drugs and alcohol, to carry of guns, and to drive; the consumption of drugs is unlawful in too many states and you need a permission that you can buy it and the alcohol is legal but you need to be 21 years old or more to buy it, to carry of guns; is legal but is same to drugs and alcohol you need a permission to buy one and be older, and to drive to get a license need to be 16 or older that its up to you, but if you decided to get your license when you are 16 years old, you have to drive with someone also as copilot; the copilot need be more older than you, you need to do this because they want be sure you have the experience to drive alone.

Work; when you have a job you have rules that you need to follow as a schedule, duties; you have a specific schedule that tell you when you have to come to the work and when you have go to home this help to your job keep everything organize to the employers because if the employers come to the work whenever they want to, can this affect the company, like if you are an accountant and the company needs you in the morning but how you make your own decision to do not go in the morning you go in the afternoon, so as you skip your specific schedule the company have a problem with the accounts and its your fault for not follow the schedule, duties well you have specific duties for you by your skills, so that mean you can not make a decision do something also because you can be fire.

Society; well you do not have the decision to do every thing you want outside, like you can not to burn a library because you had the idea brilliant to do it, you can not kick or hit to everyone to see outside just because you have a idea make laugh your friends, and you can not into a private property to get a flower that you see and liked , you can not make that decision in your life

In conclusion, we can not let the people make their own decisions, I am not saying that people can not have rights to do or be something, I am saying that people can not do everything they want, they need guidance from experts and authorities to help them more to the minors they do not have the conscience to know what is right or no.",3.0,2.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
F7DC6C783239,"Bad choices, no better career. Ever thought about how a bad path looks like? A bad path will never lead you into good things. It will just mess up your school grades. Think about the good choices and how it will bring joy into your life.

First, my cousin was going through a bad path last year when he was a freshman in high school. He would always come home late at night. He always had his mother worried about him. Next, there was this one night where she was so worried, she had to call the police because she thought something bad happened to him. When my mom told me about the situation, I never looked up to it, never imagined myself doing that. In addition, he would barely answer his mothers phone calls. She was devastated seeing her son go through a bad path. One day she was done with the things he did, so she decided to take him to Generic_City with my 37 year old cousin. He spent about 2 weeks in Generic_City so that he would think about his bad choices. When he came back, his mother decided to move to another house and another school for him. Finally, things are so much better now. His grades are much better now, he doesn't go out to late at night anymore, and his mom is peacefully working.

My cousin is doing good choices now. First, he is not in bad paths anymore thanks to his mother. Recently, he has been working out and eating healthy. Every Saturdays and Sundays morning, he goes to the gym with this older sister that is 21 years old. Next, he gets home he eats a bowl of sugar free oatmeal with sliced strawberries and blueberries. I know for sure that he wants to be a new and better person. Last year when he was a freshman, he would skip a lot of school days. His mother would get phone calls of him absent. But, he is putting a lot of effort into school. Over the summer, my dad decided to take him to work with him. My cousin helped him out with construction tools. They both worked for about 7 hours that day. A few days later, my dad had to meet up with his boss and other co-workers to earn the money. Lastly, my dad, siblings and I drove to his house to not only drop off the 80 dollars he earned, but also see how him and his family were doing.

I never experienced this, and I know that I never will. Seeing the suffer in his mom was terrifying. I would never want my mother to suffer the way his mother did. Think about the good choices and how it will bring joy into your life. I would be very lost to see myself into his bad choices. It's very important to learn experience from others to use empathy and see how it will affect you.     ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
56F9E8427D97,"I raised by my grandparents and they always told me that curfew is curfew no matter what. To me, old people's advice are really important and efficient. Curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because individuals get home on time, chance to get saved by dangerous situations, and they can do something else at home. Some people think curfew is unfairly interfering their lives. For me, it is not because I have an experience that I should need a curfew.

First of, you can go outdoor and hang out with your friends, shopping in the mall, playing sports and doing some assignments from school work. Moreover, you should have to go home on time because some parents are waiting for their child to come back to home safe so, they can sleep in peace. In my experience, it happened long time ago. I went to my friend's birthday party and we were having fun. I knew that I break the curfew rule but I did not mind it as it was a big deal. After my friend's birthday party finished and everyone went to home including me. My friend's house was not far from my house, so I walked. I started realized that someone was following behind me.

Second of, teenagers whom are under 18 years old can be saved by dangerous situations if you follow the curfew rule. In example, what I heard from my friend was that she was outdoor and hanging out with her friends when her mother called her to come home early but she did not listen. She get home around 12 o'clock in the night chased by drunk male person. At that time, my friend's phone battery died and does not have any money with her. All she can do was ran and tears were coming out of her eyes that couldn't stop.

Third of, curfews might be different for every individuals but it is usually 10 p. m. If you come home at 10 p. m not breaking the curfew rule. You have lot of time that you can spend in your home including work on school work, watch interesting movies, read fantasy books, or you can do whatever you want to do at home. 4 years ago during winter break, Me and my grandmother went to a store to buy a handcream and it was dark and freezing outside. We were on the way to home, but one stranger black tall guy put a gun on my grandmother's head and we gave him the handbag and the wallet. We ended up crying and shocking.

Finally, all those things happened to me in the past. I learned a lesson which is listening people's advice is really important in your life because lot of teenagers are out of control in this ages which are 15-18. Taking things serious is not useless it is more powerful and useful in your life. Curfew is one of the warning that can take you straight to your home safely. Do not do anything wrong that can ruin your life. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
52A8DE60E2D4,"Imagine a world thats black, gray, dead, full of people with depression, this could happen because of how people think that small kind acts couldn't help others at all.

These small acts of kindness could benefit the whole world, change it too. This could Create self reputation. Self reputation can be created a lot of different ways, but one kind and easy way is by being kind to others around you, this could help create or maintain relationships of any kind, another way this could benefit you is because sometimes other people will be nice to you in exchange this could impact you and others immensely, i know this from experience because sometimes i just give a simple short compliment to others and it lights up their day, and sometimes when i am feeling down and its noticeable, people are nice to me in exchange. This would make you more noticeable anywhere, people will know you as the kindest guy/girl around, so then people will ask you for a compliment or they will be nice to you.

This next way i will be talking about could really help out our community, or even the whole world. This could change the world because, the world we live in is pretty corrupted in many ways, but we could change that by being nice to others, for example if you are nice to someone they are going to feel happy so that person would want others to feel happy so he is kind to others, so it basically just loops, if more people are kind then the more people they will influence causing more people to be kind. This could give others the reputation they want, like being more noticeable, i know this because it happened to me, i had just decided to be kind to others around my school, and it made me more noticeable, causing other classmates to be nicer in order to be more noticeable, so everybody wins practically.

Lastly a really kind way to impact others with kindness is, you could make them feel better about themselves, like Aesop said, ""No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted."" Like complimenting someone could make their day, and this impacts them and others around that person because they noticed that someone had been nice to that person and had made their day too, because it's wholesome. You could change peoples lives, like it changed mine, i was usually around 11 years old, and i had some trouble at school and home, but the people that are my friends now, just made my whole year, maybe my whole life because i knew some of them were going to stay with me till the end. You could be kind to someone that really need support, like people that are having trouble at home and school, this could change their lifestyle into a more happy way.

These are all reasons why no matter how small and act of kindness can be it could really change someones life. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
7F6795CE405C,"DISTANCE LEARNING

I think students can be benefit because they can have more time, if they have job or they need an extra class but, they could not be or stay after school or they just cannot come to school for personals reasons I think those students can be benefit.

First,student from high school much of them have a job and they need take class at home just for three hours and then rest to get ready to their job. They also can have time to do homework it's how it can be easy for them to study more and have a grade and graduate.

Second, if they are almost to finish high school, but they just need a credit and they don't want to be in school just for one class they should take that class online and have more time;

it can be for homework or they go to visit another place but they cannot missing that class because they need that credit and grade for graduation. What about they can not stay after school but they need that grade they can take that online while they're at home.

Third, if the person have deformity they could not walk, or just don't want to come to school for different reason most be bullying, they can be benefit with the online class so they can get they class done and fine what they want to be in their future, also can have their graduation.

I really think those are the reason why they can be benefit with the online classes they have more time for homework, job, rest, and visit others place, and also they get the grade that they need that is how they're benefit.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
8A7299DA28E5,"A British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" Do we choose our character traits, or our character forms by influences beyond our control? I think we can control our character traits because we can choose our character traits like being quiet, being social, and being over yourself. This is why I think we choose our character traits.

For example, I think we choose our character traits like being quiet. Being quiet isnt a good or bad thing like you can be quiet sometimes not all the time because you got to talk once in a while. You have to balance it all out. I remember back when i was i middle school 6th to 7th grade I was a quiet kid with little friends like I would not talk to no one. I felt so alone because of that, then I started talking to people and got lots of friends. So, I think we can control our character traits. Thats why I think we choose our character traits like being quiet.

Also, another example is being social. Being social is a great thing to have because talking to people is good like you can make friends, learn new things. and even discover new things. I was a very talkative kid in 7th to 8th grade I remember that I felt like I was annoying to some people because i talked a lot. I also learned new things like how to approach and talk to people. I discover new things to like I discover that people can change over time. Some are nice then they turn moody or mean, and others were mean then nice. Some people dont change and that happens to thats how the world works. Thats why I think we can control and choose our character traits like being social.

Therefore, my next example is being a over yourself. like being confident or keeping yourself in check thats a good trait to have. It can be also a bad trait because you can be over confident and cocky. Some people dont like those kind of people because they say ""there no fun"" or they are ""party poopers."" I'll confess that I was a little cocky and over confident when it came to sports because i was a very competitive kid. Sometimes I even screamed and yelled of happiness because I scored or won a game. Some people also think thats our character traits are influence beyond our control, and yes I can see there point of view because, when I screamed and yelled when I scored or won I game i didnt control it i just yelled. I could've not yelled I could've just celebrated with my hands and look up in the sky but I didnt do that. This is why I think we can choose our character traits like being over yourself.

Finally, I think when the British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" He though one of two things he thought we choose our character traits, or our character forms by influences beyond our control. I think he thought we choose our character traits like being quiet, being social, and being over yourself. This is why I think he thought about we choose our character traits.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
EA03135D3C88,"Student-designed

Wouldn`t it be exciting for a student to create a summer projects for their fellow students to do during summer break? Summer break is a time for students to have fun with their families and friends. It a time to travel to so many places like Generic_City, Florida, California, and so forth. Furthermore, it`s great for students to complete summer projects during their break so their brains and memories can still be refreshed and for them not to forget most of the school materials they have learned before summer break. Moreover, requiring students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break is a brilliant idea. But these summer projects should be student-designed because the projects will be exciting, students will be more engaged with the projects, and the student-designed projects will definitely be less harder.

The first reason the summer projects should be a student-designed is because the projects will be exciting and enjoyable for other students. For example, when a students designs a Kahoot for their fellow students to use to study for their test and quizzes, it will be exciting just because the students will get to choose any names they wish. So, a Kahoot is a game that teachers use to create a test or quizzes for students to study to get them prepared for their test and quizzes. The Kahoot can be used inside and outside of the school premises. The student designing the kahoot will get to choose how many seconds or minutes it should take the students to answer their questions. Also, most teachers don`t give students enough time for them to choose their answers and that is unfair. Students needs more time at least 20 to 30 seconds to think about the questions before answering and not rush to choose any answer just because the teacher didn`t give them enough time. Students complain about how much time teachers give them because they need more time to work on their projects. For instance, teachers design boring projects like making a word puzzel about math. That is so boring because no students wants to spend their time making a word puzzle about math instead of doing other fun things like reading, going to the movie theater, going on vacation, and spending time with their families and friends. Most of the students don`t find math interesting beccause they don`t like doing math.

Another reason is that students will be more engaged with the projects. For instance, a student designed a project about each students choosing their own topic argumentative essay like increasing the minimum wage, the college tuition, and discrimination. After that, the student will design another projects about presentations. The presentation will teach them how to present to their fellow students and also how to present in future times like jobs. The presentation will also help them master the skills of presenting. When a student designs the projects, the student will give the students extra time to work on it because teachers will give students less time on their project and expect the students to be prepared when they are not. Furthermore, the students will decide if they need to present to teachers because most students are nervous to do that. And also they have not mastered the skill of presenting yet. The students will also decide how many words will be in each slides, how many slides they need, and how many minutes they need to present. Most of the times, teachers give students less time to present. Due to the less time, students won`t be able to finish what they have in mind or what they have to say and they will have to be rushed to finish before time is over. And if the students didn`t reach the time given or went over the time given, points will be deducted. But when the students chooses how they want their presentations to be, they are more likely to work on it more than when a teacher tells them how to do their own presentations.

The third reason is because the student-designed project will be less harder for students to do. For example, there was a project my history teacher assigned us to do, it was a project about the Progressive Era to make sure that we understand what it was all about. We had to come up with a creative title and 3 categories for the project. It was hard for us to do because we had to come up with a creative title that connects with the topic and 3 categories that 20 sub-heading can fit on one of them. If it was a student designed the project, it would be less harder because either the title is given to us, or we don`t have to create one. And also the 3 categories will be given to use to make it a little more easier. Then all we have to do is put the 20 sub-heading in their right categories and also insert some images where it suppose to be. Another example was when my AVID teacher gave a project about researching the college of our choice. It`s great that we had to choose the college of our choice, but the questions and the rubric was unclear. They were almost the same question and it was difficult for us to answer it because we couldn`t give the same answer to all the questions. Even though some people say that teacher-designed will be so much better because students will tend to take it seriously than a student-designed; however, student-designed is better because its made by a student and it will less stressful, while teacher-designed will be a lot harder and frustrating to do.

In conclusion, student-designed is better because its more fun, engaging, and easier to do than teacher-designed. Students need more time towork on their projects while spending time with families and friends. It`s great to have fun while learning and not stress out over a project during summer break. Schools need to give students an opportunities for them to design a projects for their follow students, and to show their skills and talents. ",5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5
2A6F8A794455,"In the journey of life, you will have to do the majority of things by yourself; your family, friends, or team will not always be there for you. Work as a team sounds much easier, but some people take advantage of that;

the whole team got a good grade in the project, not mattering if one of them did not work, put effort, or participate, he or she will receive the same grade as her or his team did.

Generic_Name, a 17 years old high school student, who always decided to work alone in all of his classes. Everyone in his classroom works in teams, groups, or partners, but he was different; many of his classmates thought of him as a picky, delicate, and rude boy. Generic_Name found inner peace by being in his own, made him felt comfortable, secure, and proud of doing his projects by himself, because when the time to step up in front of the class and explain his topic comes, he would be sure of what he was saying. Sometimes you need to be alone, so you can find your inner friend or skills that you didn't know you had.

Some benefits of working alone are that is your own opinion, no one else have to say a word, and even if you are wrong is your own fault that you have to learn and go through it. Lonely means a lot of things, and people take that word in a mean side; sometimes you just do not want to work in groups, because you know that you are capable to do great things on your own, without the needed of selfish, noisy, or stubborn opinions.

You can measure yourself, and by working alone you are doing it; you are creating an idea in your mind that is just you and that is how It is going to be in the future, so you are preparing yourself for the future by being working alone. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
749E089D7992,"My talent is i'm good at drawing when i draw i like to draw the stars, the moon,woods and the ocean, drawing is a talent where you can express your self by showing multiples of types of art ,there's a lot of types of art my favorite type of art is the one where you draw. When you draw you can do make whatever you want and if you made a mistake you can fix it ,my other favorite type of drawing is the one where you paint, because you can paint what are you feeling like if you're sad,happy,angry,upset. Art is one of my favorite talents i can make whatever i want and peolpe pay a lot of money for the drawings or paints they don't care if they cost billions of dollars they pay it, because it's beautiful art. Art is a talent that a lot people have it, some people are so good at it, that sometimes they think it's not good enought so they decide to throught it away, but they don't know that some peolpe will like it and they will pay it for their art. Art cost a lot of money but some people don't sale their art, because they want to keep it for memory or because they want to show it to their family and sometimes they sale it to their family, but they don'tsale it for billions or millions of dollars,because it's for their family. Smoe peolpe when they make mistakes on their art and they don't fix it and they don't thourght it away they just keep it,because maybe some rich people will buy it.

I think people should try to sale it

,

because they can get a lot of money for their paints or drawings. Art it's a really hard jod you need to be patient, because you might make a mistake and u have to start all over again, people don't start all over again what they do is they can make something beautiful of that mistake and by the way art it's also about you see something ugly, but you can fix it and make look beautiful.

Some people think art it's boring,but it's not, beacuse if you love doing art you don't think it's boring you love doing it, because it makes you happy and sometimes when you're so happy and exited to paint you don't have the control and you just start paint and you dont care if it's ugly you just lating your body do his work, because you're so exited about it that your not even think what is going to look like, sometimes i do the same i late my body to do the work by his self and actully it does fell good you happy and so exited.

Other peolpe get so stress when their work dosen't look how they wanted to be, sometimes i get stress out too, because i think my draw dosen't look good how i wanted to be, but like i said you need to patient, because art is not an easy jod it's hard. But when you get use to it it's hard but not that hard like before, i'm good at art but im still learning and sometimes it's really hard but i need to be patient and keep practicing, because practicing makes the teacher.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
E083802BEB79,"I want to accomplish of graduating from school. I want to graduate from school in front of my class, teachers, friends, audience, and families. I would like to have a promotion and accomplish my future.

First, I want to graduate from middle school. I want to get good grades and be in a higher level. Therefore, I have to study and work more. I have to keep going with the hark work and getting good grades. In the other hand, passing my SOL'S test. I would like to be awarded from teachers in front of others. Then, go out with my friends that grauted from eight grade. After, going to high schol being a freshmen and getting good grades.

Next, I want to graduate from high school. I'm still keeping with the hard work and study more. In addition, getting good grades and maybe going to a higher grade level. I would like to get myself promoted in a higher grade level. If I get promoted to another grade level i'm going to double the studying and the hard work. Similarly, passing all the SOL'S test of the year I am going to be proud of myself. Therefore, finally getting my diploma and being done with school. Then, getting a better job ,because i'm done with school. After, i'm going to be celebrating my graduation, having a party, and inviting my friends and families to see how proud they are of me.

Finally, I might be going to college after high school. College is a new life there's more work and test to do. Getting a better promotion will make me proud of myself. Similarly, I would like to get a scolarship it would make my mom, uncles, families, and friends proud of me. This will change my life in the future and it's a success. Getting the scolarship will help and change my life. I might go to a University if i get a scolarhip and it costs too much.

In conclusion, i'm accomplishing my fututre. Graduating from school and being done with school will help your future accomplish. Therefore, school is very significant for your future. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C3429FEF8AEE,"I recently learned that some educators feel like the summer break is to long and that the students do not retain information as easily when they return to fall some people argue that there should be year-round schools. where there would be 3-4 week break in the summer a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. In my opinion summer vacation should remain longer. I truly believe that a longer summer vacation can be beneficial for those students that want to work and save money when winter comes.

One reason why summer vacation should be remain long is that when school ends some students choose to work on summer vacation to save as much money as they can, so they can stay in their house when winter comes. If they have only 3-4 week of break they will not be able to save money when winter comes. Having to work during winter is difficult for those students that do not like winter. In instance when I started to work I did not like to work in winter days. In my country the weather it is hot and I am adapted to my country's weather not to cold weather.

Another reason is that when winter comes and it snows sometimes the roads are too slippery some students drive during the snow days if they work during winter season they might have an accident due to the weather. If they work during the summer they will nothave to work during winter days.

However, some students will argue that is better a shorter summer break than a longer break,

a longer summer break can be helpful to do a lot of things such as, work or relax.

Thank you for considering my opinion on this matter if you have any questions let me know and I will happy to talk about this matter.

Sencerely,

Generic_Name                                              ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
3F645E7A81DB,"""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else a gretest accomplishment""

I agree with Emerson's statement it's important be yourself always and think about your future, depends own decisions what do you wanna be also we can to achieve our goals. In the world we have so many opportunities, everyone can do it, all can try no matter how many times you make a mistake, no matter what the people say about you. Just believe in yourself and be happy.

even if you dont feel sure about something like one day when i was working i was not sure about what i was supposted say like i was scared cause was my firts day at work and that what the costumer gonna say.

Sometimes i dont want talk cause its little bit hard speak another languaje but when they say you will be fine or they say positive things about me, that's means that always you find people that they support you and they give to encourage and different ways. Many times it's important take off the negative mind and be positive.

at school see kids that also have the same and also i remember when i start my firts days of the school was like that but if you be yourself and try to make you goals you can do more than you think. its better to focus in your own future than in someone else's bunisses, last saturday my friend's team won the final and i was so proud about the,

its important believe and try to support other people because they can make great accomplishment also.

finally, the best way to try got greatest accomplishment is be yourself and believe in yourself.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
46302B93EF09,"Dear Generic_Name,

I know you're still a little young to understand what technology means ,but I believe that technology has had a negative impact on us. Technology has increased the rates of kidnapping, human trafficking ,sexual abuse ,and murder.

Due to technology we are also losing our eye sight. It has also limited our communication skills .

Young adults usually download dating apps to meet new people ,but they don't understand the risk they can get them self into. For example they usually meet someone online and start talking. After awhile the guy probably ask her out on a date to go for a dinner ,and of course the girl is going to say yes because she's interest in the guy. Few days later the guy ask her out on another date to go and watch a movie ,but he say's that he's going to pick her up; and that were it all start she get in the car thinking he going to take her to the movies ,but instead he's taking her somewhere else he's going to kidnapping her and she doesnt know. she goes missing for weeks and no one knows where she's at. A few days later they find her body dead.

Now in day more and more people are using glasses. Technology is ruining our eye vision. People that work in offices are more likely to be using glasses now in day. They sit all day looking that their computer ,but they don't realize that their eye sight is getting bad. Young adults are also using glasses too because they use their phone to much or watch to much TV . One way to prevent that is you could put your light dimer on your computer and phone. You could also set your self a limit for how long you're going to use your phone or computer.

Another reason why technology is bad because it limits our communication skills. More people are getting used to working independently. Teacher will usually give us a project assignment; we can either work with a partner or work independently. Most students like to work independently because they don't like to rely on someone else finishing the part they had to work on for the project and not doing it. We are also able to text or video chat with other people instead of talking to them in person. By talking to someone in person it can also increase your self esteem.

In conclusion these are my reason why I believe that technology is not good for us. Technology has impacted us a lot in society. We need to be more careful and caution about the new technology we are going to be inventing in the future. we also need to be careful with the action we take. No one can predict what going to happen in the future.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
A570CD64F0F9,"A single persons actions can change how other people act. Albert Schweitzer, a philosopher said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing"". I agree with his statement and believe it as true, as most people look up to and copy whoever is currently popular on social media. People also like to follow the example of what they are taught, by parents or teachers. In this essay, i'll be talking about how setting an example for others is the best way to influence others into doing something.

First of all, Watching someone do something that interests you could influence you into doing the same. For example: if you like food and you watch someone cook, it could possibly persuade you into making your own food. Most of the time, people would not do something without being influenced or persuaded by someone else. Take Juuling for example, most kids would never do such a thing unless being persuaded or peer pressured by their friends.

Secondly, Teaching someone to do good by an example is also good, as it sets them down a good path, just as most parents do. A person cant do something they were never taught or ever learned, so they look to other people who can do things; and look up to them. Only by setting an example can others follow. Much like a pack of wolves, the leader sets an example and rest follow it.

It could be argued that a speech or something of the sort could also influence people, such as Martin Luther King Jr's ""I Have A Dream"" speech. In the past that might have been the best way to influence people, but in modern day society a majority of people are influenced by action and examples. Otherwise, why would kids be doing these ""Challenges"" that you hear on the news every other day?

In conclusion, Examples are the best and most effective way to influence others into doing things. By setting examples, people are influenced into doing all sorts of things. Whether they are good or bad is completely subjective and depends on what the person is influenced into doing.                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0,4.0
87AF2FEABA83,"Some schools thinks that students should attend classes at home. Others might think that attending classes at school will give benefits to the students. Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more subjects than online classes. If students does not attend classes at school there would not be teachers and staffs at the school.

Attending classes at school will get the students to learn more of other subjects. If a student takes classes at home they would not be focusing on their assignment. They going to be on their phone, TV, or other type of devices. There will be no one supervising the students at home. They need teachers to teach them, educate them, and motivate them to learn. Attending classes at school as you can see will benefit the student..

In addition, If the students does not attend classes at school there would not be no teachers and staffs at the school. Many jobs will be lost due to students taking classes online. Plus, the students needs to build a relationship with the teacher and staffs. Online classes would not teach a student face to face, It would be better If a teacher teaches the student face to face. As a result, there should be teachers and staff at the school, If the student takes classes at the school. Plus, the students will get a better education.

Many people may argue that students should take classes online instead of going to school. People think that online classes will give the student benefits. They also think that the benefit of taking online classes, is to give the students more opportunity to learn. In the other hand, they are people who also believe that taking classes in school is better. Schools are meant for students to learn on other subjects. If a student takes classes in school they will have the opportunity to learn much better.

Therefore, students should take classes in school. Schools are meant to be for students to learn from all subjects. Taking classes in school would benefit the students. If the students take classes in school, there will be more teachers and staff at the school. Truly, learning from a teacher helps you a lot, because they are teaching you face to face.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
A7CC5A46675A,"In my opinion, most of the students are finish with their corse classe already by their junior year. Therefore, I think that having the program in our high school can benefit us. Some ways that it can benefit us by preparing us to go to college, it gives us more time to be with our family during the weekday, and it gives us time to work.

Preparing for college, can be very emotional and physically exausted. Some of the reason is that we are worring on which college we want to study or does your ""GPA"" is sufficient good that any college will accept us. One example I have about getting ready to go to college is that once upon a time, my big brother was going to college and his GPA was 2.9 he was so anxious because he couldn't get to any if the colleges that he really wanted to go to. He kept searchign for colleges that offered a basketball course and he had found out that our school had a program for basketball. As soon as he found out he signed up and was accepted real quick.

Another reason, on which it's good to have programs in our school is that we can actually spend more time with our family because we will be able to be at our house earlier. One time I was at school and my sister was in the hospital but I could not be at the hospital with her because I had three sol's that week. Everyday when I got out of school she was already asleep and wouldn't wake-up until the next morning, she had neumonia so we could barely talk a litlle bit. My point is that if I or my brother had the choice to be in the program we could've be with our sister because we wouldv'e been out at 1:30pm.

My last reason, is that having a program also helps us to have more time in the afternoon to work and help our family with families with their bills and their needs. We can also, save money for our college and for our selfs too. In my opinon, we have to work hard to get what we want, and what ever is that we are working for, will come with lots of blessings.

In conclusion, we should have a program in our school so that we can grow more as professionals and have more responsabilties. We can prepare for college, be with our family, and work while we are in the program. Also, we can helps those who are still in ninth, tenth, or eleventh grade accompish their goals same way as we did but, we have to be thankful with those who helped us reached our goals. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
2A7997AE8E72,"A first impression is almost impossible to change? I agree with this statement because what i think a first impression is that it's your first time presenting yourself to people for the first time. Those people who you are present yourself too, are getting to know you for the first time. It is very important for example, applying for a job can show the interviewer you can get hired based on first impressions and also it can be for making friends too. In English 10 I did a interview and when it was time for me to go and get interviewed i had to shake the persons hand and said good morning. During the interview the person was asking me question and I answered the questions politely and after the interview i got a grade for it. The first impression are very important in an interview because they are the things you are going to get hired for in a job interview. My experience with the interview went really well and now i know that if i ever apply for a job i got to be good enough to get hired. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
FAA0197AFF57,"To be yourself in a universe, that is faithfull examine to make you something else is the excellent achievement.

To be you in a world, it is not the easy part of yourlife. That is why the Author Ralph Emerson mention the best qoute for us to believe in ourseleve and do the great jobs to became a good person. For example the only key that is gonna help you to be success in your timeline is to be yourself to trust your faith. I can see too much people in this earth the people whom is just sitting down, and waiting for a wedding party to eat something free. I mean by saying that is; you have to move, you have to try, and you have to trust yourself that you can do everythings to achieve the greatest accomplishment.

However; to be yourself, it is gonna help you to have a good personality between the people whom is living around you in the earth. For example, if you have a good personality and have a meeting with people like President, voice President, this is also gonna rely your ability surround those people.

Other than that, convince people to be someone in their life. It is also gonna indicate yourself, and your good individuality. For example, if you persuade someone the person who give up in her/his life, and never try to do something for their future. They need to support by someone,by the person who is always saying that "" Be yourself and make others too, to be someone."" So, it is also gonna consider yourself and get respect from the people to known as the best person in a universe.

Make smart choicess to prove yourself, and try to bright your future.         ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
0D382343F3D7,"Why do curfews interfere with young people's lives? For some people, they have to stay at work really late because of this reason. A curfew could really mess up someones life when they're doing something important. No wonder why curfews interfere with young people's lives and here's the reason. Curfews interfere with young people's lives because they have to stay at work very late, have to intended to something , and have fun with their friends.

However, some people don't agree with this position. They think that a curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble. For example, When the teenager comes home on time, their mother wouldn't be scared where they have gone and why they stay out late. So, this explains why the council thinks that a curfew to young people's lives could get them out of trouble. However, young people still consider that having a curfew could interfere with their lives and here's the first reason.

Going home on time when they're at work is impossible. For example, some people working at a restaurant stay late some times because of cleaning the dirty dishes or taking a long time to do their side jobs. Also, when they're working for the government, they have to stay really late because of paper work or something urgent. This shows that having a curfew could make young people really stressed because they would have to rush their side jobs and get home in time. That is one good reason why they shouldn't adopt the curfew and here's the next one.

A lot of young people have things to do when they're out . For example, when the teenagers are in a play, they can't stop the play until it's finished or they will ruin the play. When they're at a school dance,they can't leave if they're participating the dance or they have a date. Young people sometimes have things to do after hours or want to go and participate. That's another good reason why the council shouldn't adopted the curfew and here's the last reason.

For teenagers, they just want to have fun and stay out late. For example, teenagers like to drive out very late with their friends or drink with them. Also, play games with their friends and stay up until they finish a level or a quest at a arcade or Dave and Busters. A lot of teenagers don't always sleep on time when they're having fun. That sums everything and here's the closing.

In conclusion, this stats that curfews interfere young people's lives because of them working very late. Also, when, they're intending in an event. Lastly, when they're having fun with their friends. This shows that curfews interfere with young people's lives. They can stay out as long as they like, it's their life.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
9523FBA791BE,"Imagine yourself getting out of high school early, and going to college or the workforce. It's really exciting because all that hard work was worth it, and you made it, but to get through you had to give up many of the activities you liked as well as your time. That is why it's not a good idea for students to finish high school in three years, and enter college or the workforce one year early. Students must take classes during the summer. Many students may not be able to take elective classes. Finishing early can be very stressful for students.

Students finishing high school in three years must take classes during the summer or in the evenings. Many students work over the summer, and having to take classes would not give them time to get a job. Instead, students would have to attend to school, do homework, study for tests, and quizzes. Similarly, if students take classes in the evenings, and want to be enrolled in sports, or clubs, which require students to stay after school. They would not be able to participate.

If students finish high school early, they may not be able to take elective classes. In order for students to graduate, they have to take required classes. This required classes are also important when getting into a college. Having to take all the classes they need, can barely fit into their schedules. This would enable students to be enrolled in elective classes like art, drama, music, or photography.

Some people may say that students finishing high school in three years, and enter college or the workforce one year early, it's a good idea. However, it can be very stressful for students. Students have to study for all of their classes, do homework at home, and keep up with their classwork, so they won't get behind. Additionally, students have to do projects, and presentations. All of these can stress students a lot, and won't have time for their own.

It's not a good idea for students to finish high school, and enter college or the workforce one year early. Students would need to take classes during the summer or in the evenings. Students would not be able to take elective classes. Also, finishing one year early can be stressful for students. Schools should not offer students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early.",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
D6FF6E26EB7D,"Being successful in life everyone goes though failure but believing in yourself is the key. Everyone can learn from there mistakes, without learning or believing you fail and stop. People who stop and fail they don't learn from there mistake. The ones who fail and self believe they learn form past mistakes and try again. By practicing over time the person can understand the subject or the materials they'er trying to learn thats how some people can be successful. People who don't practice the won't get any where in life or get to there goals where they need it to be.

Winston Churchill say ""susses is consists of going to failure with out loss of enthusiasm"" yes i do agree with his saying. The reason being if you fail for an example on a math test you got an 53 but now this time on the retake you want to get a 80 now that's a goal you want to achieve. By practicing over time people can learn there mistakes from there past experiences and see how the develop over time. People who become famous, millionaires, and company owners they had good and bad ideas but they still became rich or powerful people by learning their mistakes. Winston Churchill is tilling us that by failure and believing in our self we can successful.

There are many ways to be successful to get where the person wants be to. The first step is were and how to start company or store. Second step is how to get the money, recourse, and a company to. Will the two steps are that easy,step number 1 always start off small use a room or make a stand out of wood if that doesn't come up with other ways. The second step buy the material off the item the cost mummers are buying if that a back fires you can always use you own money to buy the rests like company poster. Thats how some people can have bad or good ideas.

In conclusion people can be successful or not by learning the mistakes they make in the past. Finding a way of how people can practice there mistakes an be more productive in the future. Sitting a goals and having more of what you expected to have for example have a higher score on a math test. Having ideas and recourse to start small business. Believing in yourself on what you can achieve on what you can work on.         ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
DAE1AA29184B,"Should Generic_School extended school day's by two hours for four day's a week? My opinion about this is we shouldn't let this happen for many reasons for example; Students would be waking up late,People got jobs after school and responsivbles after school, Students wouldn't have time to do homework and actives after school. Having to go to school for four days would be great and all but I would rather go to school for that extra day then just four days for ten hours. Other people would agree with me and my reason why we shouldn't let this happen. I'll give you more detail reasons about why we shouldn't let this happen.

My first reason, Students would be waking up late to school, It's very important to go to school and people waking up late could cause a lot of problems with the government and with parents. The student attendance would drop a lot, Students would be waking up later on in the day, And would be missing a lot of class work in the moring that could be important. That they would have to make up which could be hard because they would have to stay after for school if we would have ten hours of school and it would be hard to do it in class. If we didn't have two hours added to are day then it would be much easier to stay after school, And students would be waking up on time and going to school more often.

Next reason,Some students have jobs after school and responsivbles. If we would have ten hours of school it would be impossibe to take care of those thing. Having a job is important some students could be going through tuff times like family issues,Some students even have kids to take care .Some students got a lot to handle that and school work and going to school. Other students they got other thing to do for example vist people family members,having chores to do around the house.

Now,My last reason would be students wouldn't have time to do homework and actives after school. There are alot of students who stay after for help with there homework, Clubs and sports,some students enjoying staying after and practicing to join the soccer team,foorball team etc. Students even have time to work on there homework when they get out of school. If we would have added two more hours then we wouldn't have sport or staying after, It would probably be late and teachers don't want to stay longer then they should and parnets could get worryed about the kids for staying longer. These actives could affect students class work, How tired the students get and sore when they come back from school.

In conclusion, We shouldn't add two more hours to the school day for four days a week it could affect students attendents and how they act with others,People have jobs and responsivbles after school and students actives and homework. That's why we should keep the school days nomal and how long we stay in school. Student's come to school on time and prepare to learn. They do want they have to do after school and everyone is happy with that,Others will be unhappy if we would add two more hours to are day.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
D1B607165DAB,"In the past, I was scared to go beyond at what I was good at which was soccer. I agree with what the quote which said, ""Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" because if you stay at the limits that you were already at before you'll never know what other things you can accomplish and we as people have to acknowledge the fact that in one point in life you probably said to yourself

"" I am going to maintain this life."" by saying that your not improving your life.

I agree with what the quote said, ""Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" if you stay at the limits that you were already at before you'll never know what other things you can accomplish. To begin with, you want to to go beyond standards because maybe you'll learn something new ,or you will encounter an ability that you probably thought you didn't have. For example, when I was in freshmen in high school I decided to start playing and training for soccer and I tried out for the junior varsity soccer team I told myself I am gong to play at my standards, so the coach saw me playing nervous and he asked me "" why are you playing nervous"" I said, "" I am trying to play at my standards"" the coach said, ""Just relax."" after that I found out I had so many abilities to become a great soccer player. In addition, it's not bad at all trying to go beyond your limits because the more you go beyond your limits the more you'll want to keep doing it. Also, there's that one saying "" Go Big Or Go Home"" one of the sayings I live up to. Finally, you always want to think big for the most part of your life. Also you always want to try new things in life that's the only way you'll grow in life.

I agree with what the quote said, ""Unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" we as people have to acknowledge the fact that in one point in life you probably said to yourself

"" I am going to maintain this life."" by saying that, your not improving your life. To begin with, life is short to be honest you and I am still trying to do things to improve my life. For example, I am 17 year old in highschool, I listen to with one song called ""the nights"" by Avici. He talks about his dad telling him you always want to experience new things and try to live life to the fullest, so right there I am just saying to myself don't maintain the same life, try to experience new things in life period. In addition, don't have a simple life try to be creative in this life. Also, you might not be ready to go beyond your limits, but just know that one day you might be willing to give it a try. Finally, there was one time I was scared to go on big roller coasters. I could only go on medium roller coaster because they didn't look scary at all, but there was moment on the day I told myself I getting a big roller coaster so I did and it made feel good about myself because I tried something new.

Also some people may say that, you will grow even though you don't try anything new in your life. In addition, some people probably don't even care about life. Finally, others might have their own opinions about this topic. Also some wouldn't really care about. In conclusion, in the future I will try to improve my limits and think big.                            ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
EDE0A58B0B47,"Who wants to work alone when you have a chance to work with a group like common! Working in a group is so much beneficial because within a group your able to get your work done quicker and efficient. ""who doesn't want that? I know I do"". With a group you can also interact and descuse with your peers about your work and get feed back.

Weather or not you agree or disagree with this position. One good thing about working alone is that there are no group distractions. Example you might have that one person in your group that does nothing and just fools around the whole time. Never...

One of the benefits in working in a group is being able to get your work done quicker rather than working by yourself. For example what if you have an SA due in a week and a slideshow to go with it? But you had a choice to to work by yourself or within a group,''I wouldn't think twice about it, I would go with a group"".

Also In groups you can discuse and interact with your peers. Groups can also help one another and give eachother feed back depending on what your working one.

Another benefit working within a group is being able to have multiple ideas, thoughts rather than just you having to think and work on everything by yourself. This is the best thing there is to working in a group is that all of you have ideas weather there the same or diffrent,groups can combine eachothers thoughts and ideas to make somthing incredible.

Weather its working in a group project at school or your partisipating in a high end business group its all set to say that working in a group is way benificial than working alone.                        ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
408A7D3D2EEC,"Imagine seeking advice from multiple people and choosing the best decision that suits you. How does that make you feel? Asking for advice can be defined as someone who asks help from multiple people and makes the right decision. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better decision because they can see which advice is better, more experienced, and see the persons point of view.

Asking advice from multiple people can help you see which advice is better. Let's say this person needs to ask their teacher what book to choose. But, they also asked their friends the same question. They can now see which decision is better for them. It also depends if the advice is decent or not because if the advice is horrible, then that decision you make can affect the outcome.

Another way asking advice from multiple people can help you is they might have more experience. For instance, they need help picking a collage that suits their interest. When they ask their parents for advice, the parent might pick a different collage that could be better. But, that's because they have more experience and can see whats best for them. Grandparents especially, went through a lot when they were kids. So, if you need advice, ask adults who are more experienced in life!

Lastly, asking advice from multiple people can help you see the persons point of view. For example, they can see what other people have to say and can help you make that better decision. Let's say they need help painting their house but dont know what paint color to choose. But, when they ask someone for advice, they can see what the other person has to say and make the right decision based on that advice.

In conclusion, asking advice can help someone make a better decision because they can see the persons point of view, more experienced, and they can see which advice is better. Asking for advice is important because they can see which advice is better and can see other peoples perspective. This affects you because its on you to ask for advice and make the right decision!",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
DC6EDCFCFBC2,"Students should participate in extracurricular activity because it can help them find new friends and skills or talent moreover helps them out of trouble.

First and foremost, it can help students get out of trouble like getting into fight or getting detention. Students can also get away from being a bully. Like other students they show you bad influence. Students makes you do it to other people is like your adopting it from them and it makes you think that it's ok to do bad stuff like bullying or trash talking to other students. Students can also be out of trouble in social media by poser. posers use your name and picture in social media to get a lot of followers or to get someone in a relationship.

Secondly, students can socialize like meet new people of friends. Students can also find their new skills and talent by participating in any activities like sports or being a students council. Moreover students can also share their interest in sports like playing soccer they can show you what part of that game their interested in. Sharing your interest to others makes other people people share what their interest. Also sharing each others interest can lead you you guys to be a good friends.

Thirdly, students can have better future by getting their resume. Resume help students get a good job in the future. Students can be a doctor when they grow up and they can also be teacher or coach. Students can have better life, they can buy a big house and a nice car. students can also help their family.

Lastly, students should participate in extracurricular activity because it can help them get out of trouble, socialize, and have better future.

In conclusion students should participate in extracurricular activity because they can meet new people, get out of trouble and they can also get their resume to get better job and be successful in life.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
1B056DE0E856,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "" unless you try to do something beyond what you have already master, you will never grow."" But i thing that when people work hard on something, even thou they all already don it, but they did poorly on it, So when they do it again thats haves them another opportunity to do it batter. For example when i was in eighth grade i had a lot of tribal how to spell in English, because i was from another country, could Generic_City. So all the time i could not spal a ward, so i will get sad, but in the minet or two i say to my self "" dont worry"" so to answer the cwesten that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson try to say, no i don`t believe that when people have already mastered in something they cant do it again.

First, Work hard, people work very hard in something because they want to secid in the futurr. When some one bin doing something for so long even thou they did moltipal times. They can do it again, just to be batter ate it. They never hive up on something, because when some one haves up on something that they bin like in it, they will fail. Think positive about staff because when some people dont thing positive. Even no it`s hard for them to desalt what they what to do in the future but they did the same thing over and over, but when they work had and have that positive mind they will do it well . For example, my first year playing soccer on the high school teem, it was hard for me to understand what people was saying to be, but two three years later i had no tribal understanding what they war saying to me. So that shows that i speak English for three years and know i can understand what people saying to me because i bin spike net for three years.

Second, Dont wary about staff, stay on track. People like to do something and finished, because when they finished it fills much better then before. When i take a test it makes me woride but when i finish it, it fills much better because my mined can relax form it. Even thou i still think what Caind of graid will get. Fist Complete the staff that is hard to do then do the easy staff later. When some people do their home work, they do the hard problems first and they do the easy staff, because it helps them to counchenteit on the hard staff first. When i have a problem that is very hard i will ask the teacher for help me with it, so that i can do the easy staff by my self.

However, Some people ,like Author Ralph Waldo Emerson think different then the other people. for example when some one has a high school digry they just want to get out of school because if they did it again they will think that they will fail it. Most of the people like to finish something or accomplish something so they work very hard just to get that one thing like the pay check or college digry just to finish the last staff because they don`t want to do it. again because think that it will me waist of time. Some people look only for one thing but not the other. for instens that young man wants to play profashanal basketball, but he not thinks about school or nothing he just wants to play basketball and so when he tries out for a team and he never maid it so he just going to have up because he never grow to be a profeshanal basketball player. It dos it matter what some people do to, to be batter at something that they going to do it again but they will never grow.

Therefore what Author Emerson try to say that people if the have already mastered ,you will never grow. So to say that people can do something that they want to do and they can do it as much time as they want to and they will sicsid in it. Even thou it hard, but some people can do it multiple times. So when they do it again thats haves them another opportunity to do it batter. So to answer the cwesten that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson try to say, no i don`t believe that when people have already mastered in something they cant do it again.                               ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
2A60299D5D14,"I agree with honesty because it can end so many problems. So they don't have to build up and cause a lot of damage. Another reason why i agree is that you don't have to lie even more to cover what you already lied about. And it its hard to catch up with Ur lying it can also get confusing and you can get caught lying to there face. The last thing is if you get caught lying it can cause more problems with the person and can lead to more issues. It can also help the other person to trust you. If the person trust you you dont have to lie to them so it wont hurt there feeling. Also you can lose someone trust or lose the realashinship you have with them. It can also hurt a lot of other people that u care about. lying can cause you to look bad in front of people. And id it hurts there feeling you can solve them because you told the truth.

Also it can help you to stop lying and get better at telling the truth so everyone can trust you. and thats the reason why i think honesty id the best policy ",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
598C1E9B27C8,"Your character will be what you yourself choose to make. Do we choose our own character traits, or is our formed by influences beyond our control?

Examples:

1. Some people are influenced by friends

2. Everyone has their own life traits

3. Not everyone has bad traits

I believe everyone in this world has their own choice of traits but, their are some other people who are influenced by others which include, Friends,family, even people who don't know you well and dosen't wanna see you succeed and can hold you back your traits. But therefor there's people who follow their own good traits witch will lead you to a better and a successful life. Last but not least not everyone has bad traits some people will have a good influence on you witch could be good deed and take you the right way it all depends on you how you well your mind process to find out if its bad or good for your life.

1. I believe everyone in this world had their own trait of living some have good deed but some negative for example, bad traits can come from friends, family, even people not close to you i believe that because not everyone is raised with a happy living families which lead them to a bad trait of how they grew up but, on the other hand some are raised with a happy family which gave that person a good deed of living with good traits but again that could be ruin for you if you spending time with someone with bad traits.

2. Therefore everyone in the world has their own trait for Example people with success in life having big beautiful house and expansive cars had good traits which have lead them to a better life for the next generation but on the other hand bad traits will lead you to nothing but a bad life and negative traits and if you become friends with them and you had good trait you are being influenced and controlled by someone else, Some other traits can come from your relationships like if you have a girlfriend thats the worst influence that could change everything in your life and some can break you apart mentally but some can take you the right way examples of a bad relationship arguments,blaming yourself,hurting each other with actions. that could leave you with a scar you can't heal from and can bring bad traits for your future.

3. Last but not least not everyone is controlled and influenced by others because for example smart people, people will try to put you on negative deeds if you have a successful life they will hate and will try anything to take you off your path don't let any bad influence get to them and understand the fact they are trying to ruin your life, you have to step up for yourself and stay away from the bad influence that could control you and lead you a negative path my advise for the people who feel like they are being influenced and are controlled what you choose your character to be thats how your gonna be and how your gonna live so think to yourself and say what your traits are a negative or a positive.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
BA1651806E60,"I think is a great idea to identify your career during High School, Because it will help you to move on what you want to work on or who do you want to be on the future.

First i think is a good thinking because during High School you can find a class that can be related about the job the you want or the person you want to be.

My second Though is that it will help you and you will learn more about the job and have more experience that way wen you get the job you will know what is about it and how it works.

My third though is that it will make you progress before you get the job you will know what to do.

My conclusion is that it's good to plan thinks during High School because that way people help you and teach you about the job or the person you want to be it will make you progress.  ",2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C99B244B9A0A,"The technology is a great tool for ours life, because help to each people in different forms, tasks,communication,and entertainment. In this days, the technology is avancing in a form very quick in our society, because in cell phone, tablet, or computer we could see news what happened in the world only with look for in any machine technology, also how to communicate with parents , friends , or classmate.

The technology has a effect positive in our society , because we can help to shop, entertainment with games or listen to music , also our give an access a lot applications and functions that has as GPS, traductor, or books that any people has access with any cost in the market.

Any reasons, because the technology is very important in the life diary of any people are:

The help that our give each day, as for example when somebody is lost in a place unknown with a cell phone can use the GPS for can to arrive to his destiny or also for to go to a store or supermaket for this is very good has in our life the technology, if that is a good tool for is issues or cases that happen in any moments in the life.

Other reason is the entertainment that our give to technology is our life as for example, when is bored and not know that do with the technology can listen to music of any artist or genre that there in the world , also our give the option of download games or book that is more easy to find it in a cell phone or tablets that a bookstore because only our write down the name of book and the cell phone to give differents options the book as, also in internet our to give thousands of games for any kind of people as the sports, adventures,riddle or others.

Also the technology is a great form of communication in this time not import the distance the people as for example, with a lot applications as Facebook, Whatsapp, Instragram or Messenger between other are very easy of used and any people can use it without any problems and this applications to give the opportunities of is a little more close to our family or friends of our childhood as can see his pictures or videoclips of your family for this the technology is a great treasure in our life that should be use of a good form for not cause problem in our life.

Also other reason is when has any problem in as cook any food or how repair your car or in your house with the technology help us to find solutions to problems with any videoclip that we can to find in Google as in Youtube that are any page that our show tips or videoclip step to step for can has knowledge and know everything about any solutions to problem, however can to find as mechanical or other kind of people that can help in other isuess.

The technology our could help to find job in any area that you wish as for example, in any company if a person want a job should complete an application in online, because is a form very easy for any people , if that everybody has access to internet with his cellphone, computer, or tablets . Because in the world any business or company used the technology for give to know his products,quality and with this they think to arrive more away in the world for that to raise his profit with the internet any company can to become in an international company in a little days , if that the internet is the vial more easy of that the peoples to watch his products.

In conclusion, the technology is very great tool in the life human, for that our help to communicate, to intertainment, and to found until job and solutions in problems or well a person that help or work in repair , also help to find place unknown or stories, for this things the technology has a effects positive in the life of any people in the world, if that in a machine technology we can has a without end of applications that can help to various kinds issues or also as Facebook or Instragram to show about what happened in the world of your artist, athletics favorite,friends, or family without matter the distance , because the technology to close a each people that love for this each people should know that the technology was created for help a the people in his life and develop in the people a form of always to be together.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
DE54F3466948,"When I first get interest in the medicine area, what I what was help people, be like the doctors that helped my little brother; learn how someone can save lives. Today Mr. can help me to learn more to help others, to help who needs. It's necessary start to think in the future doctors, start to pass the learning to the next generation, the theories, and the grow of the modern medicine.

This partnership can teach me what the doctor learn all this years. The learn of the doctors can help me to learn why the things are doing this way, for example em de patient stop to breathe the doctor has to put a tub to the patient start to breathe; and if this don't work the doctor has to do a mini-surgery. The reason why when some one brake a leg the time of the recuperation is different; the reason why when a car chars happen the patient has to went to a T.C. The reason why cancer happen, if it is in our DNA or can happen with anyone.

This partnership can help me to learn the theories. The theories of the causes for the repenting blinding, or way some patients wake up to the coma and other don't. How will be possible in the future faith with the cancer and the autism to help the people that have it; how its possible someone o broke the cervical walk again. If it's possible create a substitute to the glasses, what will be the percentage of people who have obesity in the future.

This partnership can help me to learn the grow of the modern medicine. Talk about how the treatment to the cancer cell can be done with radiation, and what can be done to change this process because of the negative effects in the humans body. Talk about the big number of surgery in the kids, and how it's possible do something do the recuperation be less painful to the kid and to the parents. Talk about how is possible prepared the kids for a emergency and how act in one.

Some may say that learn knew things is boring. Yes, some times it's, but if you learn knew things this can help in your future, and prepared you to possibility that you haven't imagined. Some may think that teenage are just kids and is not necessary think about the future. Yes we are kids, but in other hand we are the future and if we don't think about it who will think for us?

It's necessary start to think in the future doctors, the grow of the modern medicine start to pass the learning to the next generation, the theories, and start to pass the learning to the next generation. So Mr. I really hope that you chose me and gave me a chance to me for prove myself, and learn many knew things in this process that will help me to grow as a person, and as a future provisional that can learn knew things every moment in the medicine area, the future is coming and we are the chose that you want to make.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
A4C46FEBBCC4,"some societies, think that letting students select classes to guide them towards a specific career it is a good idea.

the classes they select may help them prepare for the career their are thinking to study in college.

the classes they select to take while they study in high school it can be useful for them to guide them in different careers;however,they may drop out of the classes they are not interested studying and drop in the ones they prefer to study to be prepared for they'r future career.

this classes are a good way to teach students different careers that they may like to study in their future for example engineering,plumbing, or any other higher education, another reason why letting students take classes that guide them for a future career is that by the time they reach college they will know a little about the career they choose to study.

some students that had been guided in their high school are in a higher chance to graduate in that career.

by the time they have graduate college thy'll be ready for the job they choose to work on in conclusion this program it's useful for all students in high school to help them get prepared for the career they choose to take.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
B548BF7A2A8F,"Hello, my name is Generic_Name. I'm student in the Generic_School, and the reason for this letter is because I have give my opinion about what I thing about the British Prime Minister said about the success.

I agree with the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill for this reasons: Failure in want pursuit your success do you make wrestler in the life, failure in want pursuit your success this one can do you make better in the life, and failure in want pursuit your success do you make more strong in pursuit your success.

The first reason failure in want pursuit your success do you make wrestler in the life I thing that because every day fight for want pursuit you success but many times failure in things but continued fight every day. Also I thing that because if you effort every day you fight for pursuit your success and that do you make a wrestler in the life.

The second reason is failure in want pursuit your success this one can do you make better in the life, I thing that because when you commit one failure this teach you to don't make that failure again. Also I thing that because when you failure that help you to want overcome more every day and make better.

The third reason is failure in want pursuit your success do you make more strong in pursuit your success I thing that because the failure give you knowledge in the life and help to make the correct in the life. Also I thing that because when you failure that help you to overcome.

I agree with the British Prime Minister Winston Churchill for all the reasons that can help you to pursuit you success though failure many times but you can overcome all the failures if you don't loss the enthusiasm, all can be more easy when you have enthusiasm and when you want continued forward with you life and pursuit your goals.

Sincerely,

ATT: Generic_Name.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
E0BABC4506D0,"What are some decision that students take regarding extracurricular activoities?

Many students become involved in extracurricular activities to enrich their educational experiences, and some even become involved in so many activities that they have a little time to study or complete homework assignments.

Some activities carry out in the morning, with this the students have time to do his homeworks or study, however who practice in the afternoon can do it during school. A lot of them works after school, so the activities is the best option and they don't deside to take this extracurricular activities. Students who involve in many activities it's complicated to take hours to study, and some times the parents need to leave his sons at the practice, many parents don't have time to do that because they work.

In opinion of the students is that best decision it's take only one activity.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
292E635496C4,"Although; I believe it is a good idea for student, who have issue in life, and student need to graduate to support their family. I believe that it is going to be hard for student. Because they have to get required classes, then go to summer school, and get a good grad. and work very hard after school. When those student who want to graduate from high school in three years. they must work hard for their school. and they have to pass a lot of test and SOL. To graduate from high school. then they can go to college.

example;people who are's emigrant,and want to do the three years of high school;they have to work hard.

When student want to do the offer programs three year of high school. i believe they have to work hard. To pass their classes. Also getting good grad for their classes, i believe that they must study hard, and be properer for any test that is coming on. They must pass their classes by receiving good grad. Also to receive a good GPA for their record, Students must attend every day because if they do not do that, it will effect their grad. Then they get behind. from a lot of things.

example, student have to work hard in their classes to receive a better grad.

Student who is taking summer school, and work really hard to graduate from high school. I believe they will have a better future for their life, and their family.

Because student will have the capability in the future to find a good job that they wanted. Also those student will have the capability to go to good college to study will. I believe having a good back round from high school any college will accept those student; Also a good GPA, and those student who want to do three years of high school. Must attend every day to do not get behind from their classes, Because not being at school will effect their grad. Also student must work hard for their graduation.

example, student must go to summer school, and pass those classes that they need;also i believe summer school will very easy.

They offer programs of three years, I believe student must pass their SOL in three years of high school to graduate. student must focus on their school and classes for receiving a better grad. Also i believe there are some student who have to work full time. Also come to school full time, and they are in the three years of high school program. i believe it will be hard for those student who go to school and work after school. there will short time for those student, to study for their lesson from classes. Specially for those student who is emigrant and do not know any thing about they new school. But still they have to work so hard to complete three years of high school. to graduation.

example;student will the opportunity early graduation; if they work hard.

I believe that three years of high school going to be hard for student. But it is a good opportunity for those smart student to graduate early from high school. then they can start their college earlier. because it gave them capability to make up their life Earle. Also those student will learn a lot of lesson during high school, and after high school. Then college that is the best part that student can learn the most things.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
AE178808D4FB,"An enjoyable way to spend time outdoors would be to go to a state park. Spening time outdoors is a good way to relex yourself. Also because then you can enjoy new activities. Doing outdoors activities is a good way to learn new things and explores stuff. Outdoors activities is a good way to spend time with your family,friends. Doing outdoor activity can calm down all your stress and make you feel fresh. Outdoors actvities are important for you because they keep you energized and you do need to spend some times outdoors not only indoors.

Someone might find going to a state park enjoyable because thee will be a lot of fun activities you can do there. Also because then you can discover new things there. In state parks there are varities of new resources and things you may enjoy. There are more fun activities but in my opinon i think going to a state park is more enjoyable and fun. Going to a state park is a good way to spend your time because it can keep you energized and active. State parks do have a lot of space where you can sit and talk to your family or friends. State parks may have a food court aswell.

State parks can be small or big but it depends on which one you are going to. Usally state parks are big and filled with beautiful flowers. There may be a age limit on some of the state parks activities. You may think that parks are boring but you are wrong because parks do have fun activities but i know some parks are boring but parks like state park, community parks, and national parks aren't. If you don't like parks then you must go to a state park because they are really beautiful and may change your thoughts on going to a park. You can also book a birthday party or just a regular party and it will be really fun to book a party because state parks are really big and you will have enough space.

I know you may be wondering when is a good time to go to the state parks, well in my opinion i think going to state parks when its sunny and a good weather because you need that vitamin D. There are different timings when the state park will open each day so you may need to take some time out to go there. On weekends the state parks may be full and you may not even have space to sit but on weekdays there not that full so i think you may wanna go on a weekday so you can have enough space to play around or spend some time with your family, friends. Taking small kids to state park can make them happy and have time to play around.

At some state parks you may find some beatiful butterfly's flying around, isn't that beautiful. You can also meet new people and make good friends there. State park is just a peaceful and calm way to spend your time. If you look forward to going to a park then go to a state park because it has everything you want in a park. State parks don't have any fees to enter it its just opened but you may have to pay for the activities. Thats why I think outdoors activities are important.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
7CBB1B6F4E25,"Having electives classes can be a great opportunity to let students choose what they love to do and be lesss stressful. Schools, which do not have electives classes had become less popular. Students choose to study in schools that are less complicate for them. Although some say students should be required to take class in the arts actually, students classes should be electives because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit and they will have less worries.

Those who believe students should be required to take class in the arts have their reasons. They believe students have to be more responsible and pass all their classes. They also think students can learn how to be good in arts.

One reason, why class in atrs should be electives is because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit. For example, my friend Generic_Name he only had to take Algebra 2, English 12, U.S Goverment, and Chemistry to graduate this year. However, he had to take one class in the arts that was required to graduete. But, Generic_Name did not have more space during that day,

and the other day of school Generic_Name had to work to help his mother.

If Generic_Name did not have to take the class in arts. He will be able to graduate this year. In addition, he will not waste his time in one class that maybe will not be interesting for him. Also, he will be able to help his mother about taking care of his litter bother. When she was working, so his mother did not have to work less hours.

Another reason, why classes in school shoud be electives is because students will have less worries. For instance, my friend Generic_Name. One day she had to study for her History

ESOL. As well as, she had to make a big and beautiful draw for her class in art. Generic_Name took almost all the night making the draw ,so she did not have time to study and she fall the

ESOL. If Generic_Name did not have to make the draw for her art class. She will study for the ESOL, and she will get enough sleep. Generic_Name will be able to think and pass her test. And she will have more time to study. Sometimes taking a lot of classes is not a good idea for students bacuse it is to hard for them to concentrate.

To conclude, I believe that class in arts should be alectives becuase students will be more confident in doing what they love to do. Also respecting students opinions can be a great opportunity to demostrate them that school cares about what they feel. For those reasons I think class in arts should not be required. One is that students will use the free time more helpful for their benifit.

Another one is that students will have less worries. School have to see what their students need to make them capable and sucessful.   ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
7A239E4D1966,"My thought on the prompt are that I think it's better to be active. Being active or doing something all the time is good. You can be very helpful by helping people out or doing chores. Doing something all the time can make you physically fit. You can be moving all the time and a lot it can be good exercise.

I like working out or helping people out especially my family. Many people enjoy or like to be active and it makes them feel good including myself. I can'not stay inactive for a long period of time like many people in this world. In some people's life activity play's a major role in there life's. Like a personal trainer or a coach.

Inactivity is sometimes bad especially if you do it for a long time. It can be frustrating to other people if everybody is working but you and they need your assistance. If I'am inactive for a long period of time i can get sick or really anybody if you have been laying around doing nothing for days. Your body needs movement or some type of exercise. That's why it's better to be active.

Therefore, inactivity can sometimes be good or necessary. For example, if you are watching a movie at the movie theater. You can'not be jumping and running all over the place you are going to get kicked out. In some situations when something bad is happening out side your home is better to stay as far away as you can and do'not intervene is better to stay idle.

Finally,I some occasions is inactivity serves a purpose. You do accomplish more if you stay active and you can meat your goals in life if you put hard work and not staying idle.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
C38334385924,Their are some schools that offer to attend online classes or video conferencing what if they don't have a computer at home for to be able to use it for the online class. Some parents will not agree I think because they will be working and they don't know with who they can leave their kids with. Video Conferencing could work for students instead of online classes because that way the person that will come to teach you can explain more better from the assignments that your suppose to do. Some students just prefer someone to teach them for they can help with what they are doing. Students will benefit from being abkle to attend classes from home will some students they would rather take classes home then school because in school they think it's more harder for them for the reason of being with alot of stusdents. They like to work alone quite and with someone who can have patients and work slowly and have time. Same thing with there schedule when you have classes at home you can choose the time and day that you want to do the class.             ,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
310CDA45739E,"Imagination is like thinking to do diet and go to gym to get slim. Knowledge is just like running on a treadmil for 2 hours in a weak to get your weight under 79.

I believe that Imagination is more Important than knowledge, because when the writer writes a book, first they Imagine the topic for their book. They don't start to write the book unless they Imagine the topic.

Same as, the writers Imagine what they want to write about, they don't just start to get Information about something, asking their parents what to write, how to write. They Imagine, then they start their work.

However, Imigination is also similar when you think with your sister to convince your mom to get you lots of candy. You don't ask your dad, how to convice mom to get candy. For example, the person who get the idea to Invent phone, frst he Imagine,

what does phone look like, how many buttons should be there, and then he also get help with his knowledge but first he Imagine what does phone look like, how will people buy this, why should they buy my phone.

Also If we use knowledge more than Imagination, the new generation will only use the cell phones to search for their homeworks. They will not Imagine to do homeworks or other things by theirself. They will just copy someone's idea, which is going to demolish their brains. There will be no more good inventions, The people's brain will stop working. Also, people will not do their work because they know they can just copy someone's idea.

For example, If I dont Imagine that when I will be 16, how I am going to get a job. What If I just go to Youtube and search for it, but I will not find anything and I will waste my Important time. Incase if I imagine what kind of job I want to do or where I want to do, I am pretty sure that It will not waste my time. Infact It will give me some ideas for future. In my opinion we should imagine more than using knowledge.

Imagination keeps your brain work and It also keeps you active. If we dont use imagination then how our new Inventors will Introduce their creative inventions. If the stylists doesnot use their imagination then how we are going to wear brautiful clothes. If they use just knowledge and don't use their imagination, I guess they will not get that much success in their buisness. Designers use their minds to help with their clothes design. They imagine the ideas for clothes, so the people will buy more and more clothes from them.

The people who use Imagination more than knowledge live longer. From now I will also use imagination as more as I can. So I will give an opinion to all of you who are reading this use your imagination than knowledge and get success in your work. I don't say that using knowledge is a waste of time, use your knowledge also but not all the time, also use your mind to imagine good, Intresting things.

In conclusion Imagination is more Important than knowledge. So, I will agree with scientist Albert Einstein. I will also force you to think about this. Writers, designers , Inventors all uses their Imagination more than knowledge. Now I will also try to focus on my Imagination more than focusing to copy other's information.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
80EF60E3EA04,"One school activity that kids enjoy are field trips because it provides them a brake from school work and it gives them a opportunity to explore their surroundings. Teachers and students often get tired of being at one place everyday. Students are also constantly working and the only break they have is lunch and electives. The teachers also get brakes but they have their phones on them all day. Teachers and staff may feel stressed planing the trips but in the end i think they enjoy it just as much as the students.

Middle school is a stressful time. Students have to complete lots of work that isnt needed. They also have packets of homework to complete and the packets are usually due the next day. Teachers just hand out papers and papers of homework without thinking about it. meanwhile, students are trying to study for important stuff like tests,sols or exams. I try to complete all the work i have but it is hard when all the teachers are saying,'my work is more important.' We are constantly reviewing, working or studying and sometimes it's just too much. This is why we want to go on field trips or go outside more often.

Schools are not the most funnest place to be. Many schools, like Generic_School, are extremely stuffy and dirty. Being in a building that's stuffy all day makes many people annoyed. Everyday students asks to go outside. However, the teachers and staff always say no because the administrators wont allow it. My school has a outside siting area in the middle of the school but nobody gets to sit outside. Students often look forward to the end of the day or field trips because it gives them air and a chance to breath. Being outside or in a new location gives students the chance to get to know their surroundings. however, being controlled and forced to stay in one place makes them feel like prisoners. This is why students love field trips and new outdoor places.

In conclusion, the most enjoyed activity in schools are field trips because it gives them a breather and it gives them the opportunity to explore. Students and teachers should not have to be in a place like prison. I think there should be more field trips not just two a year.          ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
F3F4454A2E3B,"Most companies look for specific characteristics in potential employees. Some people think that companies shouldn't look for specific characteristic in people and let the person thats applying, get the job and learn while he/she is working with the company.

Some people have a better education than others, which that would be one of the characteristics that company would be looking for, trying to hire someone. But sometimes those people aren't good working with other people and in my opinion that is very important to keep and good work environment. I think I'm a very good candidate because, I'm good working with people, I am always willing to work extra hours if you need me to, and finally I'm may not have much experience on this kind of work but I'm a pretty hard worker and will try my absolute best to learn the job.

One reason, I think I should be hired is that I'm good working with people. One of the things I enjoy the most about working is the ability to work and share ideas with people in my past jobs, I feel like it makes the work environment a lot better because it make the work easier and more enjoyable. Because the more are working together the job gets done faster, I'm always willing to help if anybody needs me I'll be there planning things out with the person give him/her feed back on what she thinks and work out something that can work for both the company and themselves. I try get along with all my work partners so I can make it the best experience for me and for everyone else around me.

Another reason, is I'm always willing to work extra hours if needed. I worked extra hours in past jobs before because for one my work co workers because they were sick. So if you ever need me to work for extra hours don't hesitate to give me a call. Because we all need a break sometimes, but there are times where we can't give the workers that break because the company doesn't have enough people to cover that person. That's why I'm willing to work longer hours so those workers can take that break they so much desire.

Finally, I'm a hard worker like you read in the last paragraph I'm willing to work longer hours, so that should give you an idea. What ever job you give me I'll do it at the best of my ability, it doesn't matter what it is I'll do it. Although I dont know how to do much of what this type of does, I'll do my best to learn it as fast as possible so I can give you the best results I can give. I'm always willing to do something new and challenging so I can extend the things I know, All I want you to know is that what ever you tell to do I will give my one hundred percent.

As you have read this why I think I make a good candidate and a good addition to your team. I'm good working with people, I'm willing work longer hours if needed, and I'm a hard worker. I hope you consider hiring me and i hope the best for the company. I think only when you see me actually working in your company and see the things I'm able to bring to the table you will see I was the best option for the job. Thank you for reading and taking my application for consideration.        ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
532528134425,"A example is the best way to show others peoples how to do a better thing, when somebody is teaching and provide some examples is one way feel the teacher wants to help.

When i was a child my grandmother shows me many ways to set things and advice, i would like to say i want to teach my friends and others peoples things like they dont know, another ways is tell them or teaching like how to play soccer, how to find this, etc.

In my life i have learn many thing like i never think i do like maintenance in toys, fix computers, and other things.

And i like my teacher teach very well because is one way to learn better others teachers dont like teach very well or just like to be angry with the students in the class and thats the reason why the students say i dont like the teacher because is angry or dont teach very well.

Give examples is the vest way to understand thing like i never understood. behavior is other thing how behavior we are in the class or in the house, our behavior is one part important in the life because the the others peoples could say that person have a good behavior i would like he can tell me a advice or example how to make this or fixed.

A example is not the main reason to influence others,there are many like the peoples watching you. just to watch others peoples i am learning new tools for the future.

I have no plan after High School the only thing is i like technology and electricity the most two parts of mi, the life is like a second we can lose everything or die.

I would like to say some words before i leave, we are human everybody make mistakes, you and me, the only thing to fixed is learn about the mistake i made or someone can help me to have a good behavior in our school or no matter where.

There is one more way is read newspaper, watch the news, ask peoples, ask questions, there are so many ways.

A good example is see how much you can do, how much do you know, dont matter what kind of color you are, you are special for everyone from the most youngest until the most oldest, every one can give a little knowledge how much he know.

There are many advice we can use to exhibit our effort and value, many peoples come to me and they ask me for a question or advice they tell me everything they want to say because they trust on me, i am the people like listening another when they need help.

I am a people who can feel many thing for others peoples.

We have the life, family, friends, neighbor , many people who can help and have a big heart, the reason we are here is for something, maybe no one knows but another yes they have a purpose on this beautiful world that our God give us.

And my final reason is have a good day every day i try to be on time every day in class because i dont like be late is one reason for me this is my goal for this year and of course pass the SOL and the class at he end everything worth, my teacher are a good example of how to influence with others peoples, comment, conversation, i like the school is one of the most reasons.",3.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
36035C063AB3,"Can many things be done if we are always doing? succeed comes with hard work and hard comes with trying, but everyone has different opinions and points of views. Although others believe otherwise, there is always something new to learn in this world, we can influence others for the better, and we can accomplish more if we are always ready to keep doing something.

I believe the world has plenty of things and places we have not yet explored, learned about or have seen before. Everywhere you go, you learn a something new about someone or something; it could be a new culture, places in the world or even a new language, but that is only if you keep doing. For example, I was born in Generic_City and when I came here for the first time everything was new to me. Starting from seeing different faces to a completely new language, I kept trying to learn more and more about the United states because that is how you keep on doing more and not stopping your learning process. When i first went to school here i was afraid and very shy, but that did not stop me from learning the language and sure i learned something new every day because there was so much to explore all around. That is why I believe that there is something new to try and learn everywhere you go. If you encourage yourself to keep doing, you would not believe all the things you can do for yourself. Which those things sometimes can help you improve yourself and the way you view different things as well.

If you keep doing and learning more, you can absolutely influence others for the better. You can teach others from the mistakes you have made from trying new things and from all the experiences you have had before as well. Someone that I look up to as my role model is my older sister, because she taught me how to be the strong young women I am today. She influenced me for the better, because of what she has been through before me. One thing she taught me that was very important to me is to not give up on my goals and my mindset from the beginning. She once told me that people will doubt me no matter who they are, and one of those people was my mother. My mom taught that my sister and I would not even get to college, but here I am as a junior in high school and my sister about to graduate college. A day never went by without my sister reminding me of how strong and independent I can be if i keep trying and keep learning because the world is full of things to learn from, good or bad. My sister had to keep learning and was always trying to do something new, because she new she could influence me for the better so i could learn from her mistakes. There is always gonna be someone out there with advice for you and to influence you for the better, but if you keep learning and trying nothing is impossible. Influencing others can be very important, mostly for the younger generation. They look up to us now and it should be an honor to show them the rights from the wrongs but that is only possible if you try to have a good mindset of always wanting to be a better person and knowing what you want. Never stop trying to learn new things because there will always be something out there to learn from and to look at it from a different point of view.

Accomplishing a goal can be very hard sometimes and even makes you wanna give up but that is something you should not do. If you are always doing and trying new things you can accomplish so much more than you would ever imagine you could. My goal was to learn English, go to school, and graduate all to prove my parents and my older sister i could. I accomplished part of my goals so far and that makes me feel very proud of myself because i feel like i am slowly accomplishing my goals in a short period of time. When i was younger and until now i have always liked books and that is something that helped me learn English and to improve my learning techniques in school as well. I have not yet graduated but that is a goal that i am maintaining and that i know i will accomplish soon, but the only way that will happen is if i keep doing and learning more every time i possibly can. You may have people who doubt you or who do not want to see you succeed but you should never let them control your mindset and the way you do things. A positive mindset always comes with a positive outcome, and always surround yourself with good people because we are here to make good things happen to each other. But keeping your mind open to new things will always help you learn more everyday and have new experiences too.

You just need to believe in yourself and understand that there is so much more out there that you could not know about, and that it is always good to encourage yourself to go out there and try things you have never tried before. always influence others for the better and accomplish all your goals no matter how hard it can get, because at the end of the day every good thing you do will absolutely pay off later on when you least expect it or see it coming. In conclusion I believe Thomas Jefferson's quote is very true because of all the wonderful things we can learn, experiences we can have, and things we can accomplish with time if we keep on doing.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
7F0B7DDE89B2,"I think it is a good idea that some schools have

Four-day work week. because, the schools can save energy and resources like.

food electricity water paper

Does this will help the schools?

First, this can help the schools not to spend Food, Water, Paper, and Electricity. Next, If we have five days of school we are wasting a lot of Food, Electricity, and money. Then, if we have four days of school, we save a lot of money. Finally, with four-day work week it better because, the fifth day of school nobody is in the schools to waste energy and food

. In conclusion, This can saves schools a lot of money.

Why is this a good idea?

First, This can be a good idea because, The Students can sleep more. they will have four days of school. This mean the students will have three days to sleep well. Then, if they add 2 hours more there will be some consequences. If the Students don't sleep well, they will be sleeping in class. After that, they will not do their homework, test, and quizzes. Finally, The Students have to sleep at least 8 hours each night every day. In conclusion it is good to have four day work week.",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
4BF17A253013,"I desagree whit this statement, because some people can change, how people look at them and given a good impression again, for example if the person dirend do well the first time, he would do better the second time, it is like given a second opportunity, second example is that the person who you are given the opportunity to change, is not doint nothing to change it, is better to not give them a second chanse.

For me the first impression is not to much important, because that firt impression can change at any time, and the the one how you diren t give him a second change, cand be better tha the firt one my experience whas one day i have do a poster, and my was ugly when the teacher say that whe have to do other poster in a group and nobody whant to join my group, and i finishet by myselft wen te teacher calify the poster, may whas te best one in the class.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0
AB142AA123BC,"As we all know, students love summer break. but what if they were to take that long summer break we once had and make it into a 3-4 week summer break! I would be beyond upset and I bet other students will too! Personally I don't think it's a good idea. But who am I to judge other people's opinion's. So i'm going to just state some reasons why this not a good idea.

First Reason is that many students want a long break from school. And I mean a LONG break from it. The reason to this is because, we get stressed, tired, drowsy, and even suffer from all the studying and work we do year around. And this can cause depression in teens as well, and trust me I know that feeling it sucks. But anyways back on topic. And for the educators that said we should get longer winter breaks and spring breaks it sounds like a good idea but it just doesn't make sense to me in my opinion.

Second Reason is that students spend more time with family and friends! The reason for this is that students don't have time to spend time with them because the're either doing school work or the're to tired to even talk so they go to sleep early because of how tired they are. And when you are tired you feel grumpy and disturbed by everything so it's better off just going to sleep rather than talking to family and friends because, all your going to bring is negative energy and no one wants that.

Final Reason is that summer break is basically like a reward for students that made it through the year. A nice 3 months without work, stress free, relaxation, and do whatever you want and 3-4 weeks is not enough for us to be honest we need a good long break from it because we just need a little time to relax. And when September arrives it will be a fresh start and are minds will be clear and ready again too do more work. In conclusion these were my statements on why summer break should stay as it is. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
946D8B23ECA6,"I agree with Albert Einstein when he said that imagination is more important than knowledge. within you knowledge comes you imagination. in that imagination you see that it will help you receive your knowledge from somewhere that you did imagined. even tho sometime you imagination can mess your Brain a little when you go ahead of yourself. Like when you think about a subject that takes you way over that your brain wont handle itself.

but mabey sometimes your knowledge can be more efficient than your imagination because your brain is acting more mature when it comes to obstacles that are difficult. your brain acts more when its come to a problem like that time you got stuck on that question on that math test you've taken. sometime even when you are reading a book. reading a book may help you vocabulary when you read.

but there're time when they both help each other. both knowledge and imagination can help when you construct something. mabey you wanted to built something but you had no idea what. thats why you have you imagination comes right on in to tell you many ideas on what to build. once you think of the build you knowledge is there to help out to figure out on how you should build it. your brain get all the knowledge to help to build that dimension of the building there s how both can work together,

but still there're some negative times when it come to imagination and knowledge. like that time you are felling a bit down and your imagination said that you cant find anything to make you happy. sometime when your imagination goes a bit to far like that time you play with friends when you were younger you can make thing a bit unfair with your imagination and can loose that friend. in middle school with that knowledge of yours can change many things on a test. you can do good or bad. but say you did good and you were the student that had the highest score but you friend go one of the lowest score but you bragged about it yo can also loose that friend.

imagen if a 16 year old boy wanted a job. he may have not be the smartest but he has a few bad grades. either he will get a get a good job or he'll stay jobless cause if how much knowledge he had since he does no study hard enough. so other students may have better knowledge and have received the job they have wanted. mabey t he 16 year old boy needed the job to pay for food but he had to ask all his friend to buy food since he had no ob nor the money. so in the future he became homeless because he had to pay the money back to the friends he had cause he needed money.

young children have the most imagination since they have nothing to expect. but at night children think they see monster are on closets and want to have their mom and dad to come see it for themselves but their parents say that there are no monsters. later the night they start hearing noises but cant tell were its coming from so they scream mom dad again because the child thought there was still a monster in the room. but the parents still say that there are still no monster in the room. later on the child starts to think that there it still a monster so the child went on outside the room and notice that it was no monster it was just their parent just making noise just to scare their child just for fun.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
62102D1B1A52,"Do you agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? If the statement about the role that failure plays in the pursuit of success, it could help people to do better things. People can have a better future. Also people can feel more positive.

First, people can do better things. For example, my cousin Generic_Name had a soccer game at Generic_City, she and her team was talking about how they will need to play on the field, they needed to play better than the other games because the team that she was going to play against is one of the best teams that plays on that field and also her team needed to have more goals scores to keep being on the list so the can win the championship, so when they started to play they was playing like they planned it before the game and at the end of the game they won and everyone was happy because they never thought that they was going to have the chance to win that team, but they never give up.

Next, people can have a better future. For example, my parents after they got married they always wanted to have a better future for them and for all there kids they was going to have, so both of them was planning to cross the board from Mexico to the United States, so after a week they finally cross the board and they was living with my grandma, when my dad started working after a couple of months my dad bought a new house and they started to live there, then they were saving money to buy more stuffs because they was going to need to buy a lot of things like: beds, clothes, shoes, table, chairs, etc. After some years they finally got everything they needed and they had two kids and finally got to know that they will have a better future.

Last, people can feel more positive. For example, when my cousin talk to her coach about that I wanted to be in a team of soccer, the coach called me and told me that he wanted me to play soccer with his team the next weekend, but before that I told him that I was not that good at playing soccer and he told me that I will learn easier and faster if I go to practices, so when I went to my first game I was so nervous about that I was not going to play good as the other girls do, and I did not wanted them feel bad if we lose for my fault, but I kept playing and I never thought that at my first game I was going to make a goal, but overall I kept going from failure to failure and never loss my enthusiasm and that is one of the reasons that helped me feel more positive of myself.

In conclusion, I believe that going to failure to failure will not loss the enthusiasm, at the same time it could be one of the betters reasons by making people do things better, make people have a better future, and also people can feel positive by them self.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
78C22313F58E,"Generic_Name

ONLINE CLASSES ARE BETTER THAN GOIING TO SCHOOL.

Talking online classes are way easier and better then attending/going to school. Some schools offer distance leaning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. If students get this opportunity to take their classes online, ''I'' think it will be a good idea and they will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, Because Many students can't be at for many reasons,they can be sick or injured. Two, online classes help to students to take class at anytime they want . Three, online classes save students more time and money.

Many students can't be at school for many reasons, for example the student can be sick or injured. So the student getting the opportunity for taking or getting his/her work done on online classes will make it easier for the student, instead of students going to school when they're sick or Injured. So a sick student can stay at home and get his/her work done so they wouldn't be to spread the sickness or the disease around the school. And it can prevent people from getting sick too.

Online classes are easier because, students can take the class at anytime they want and do what every they want do after the class. For example Students get a job and make some money to pay for school fees and bills and also they can support their family with the money. And they can take the class after work or before work on online. Also online classes makes it easier for students who have jobs and the same time going/attending school.

Moreover, online classes can save students some money and time. Because driving to school everyday is a waste of gas, money and time. Students can save that money for gas and do something else with, for example they can pay bills with that money or even they can support they're family with money. In some cases the student can have family ''(kids and wife)'' and online classes can help the student to spread more time with his/her family.

In conclusion,

schools offering distance leaning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. This opportunity will help students in so many ways. Students will get more time to get they're work done on time and also save money for them self. The students can do whatever they want to after taking the class on online ( spreading time with family and having fun).

THE END.......    ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
232A59426B1E,"some students should be required to take a music class because some students use cellphones during class or a project class, then is better to take a music class, students gonna be interested about music class.

for example, some students should such classes be elective because some students don't like music class students be not interested about music class.

students wanna do another classes like classes to get graduate from high school.

to finish schools and get some job, when you get done with high school that's why some students not be interested to take music classes.

finish high school early is more better because students can go to college or get some job to get money.

for example go to college is good because you can start learning new things about you like. students can start a race of some jobs like mechanics, and doctor, there is more races to get and learn new things.

when students get a job about you learned in college is good, when students done with high school and college, you can work in a job like mechanic fixing cars all that things and you get some money.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
3C487F5D1994,"I go with three years because many students are the helping hand in there family now a days .and many employers need need employees to. The military are always looking for people who want to join the force this three years will make it easy for them to employ some of the students in the army, air force,navy e. c.t. Some people are old to be in high school if you are 20years old and still in high school if they tell you that is four years instead of three years you will be kick out if that school and that is not a good thing. There are lot of ways that graduating younger better than graduating old you can finish school by the age of 18 and then still be learning but not in high school. if you beside to go to collage and finish your fours diploma or more you can that high school fours can be a disaster for the students.

The three years program is helping the student to finish school early and making him/her responsible in life be ready for life early by going to collage and spending the rest of the year that they should have be in high school in collage or other work places. there are a lot of ways that you can get in jobs great jobs and stuff all because you are young. Some work places need young people to work for them if you not young or if you are that old they will not take you in that job or that work place. for example i was trying to apply for a job in the internet i went through all the documents but what i so was you can't applied this job if you don't have a high school diploma think about if you were homeless and you need a job as soon as possible and they came and said that you can't have this job if you don't have high school diploma you,and you need that job but you still have fours to finish that is not a good helping point.

This program will help the student a lot in saving time in his or her life time and finish school in a young age that is a big advantage for the student to have more stuffs to think about in life and just being in high school . This program is gonna save you a year of high school .If i have the right to this program i will make sure i do all the necessary was that i should do to finish school i year before my actual year. That will make me finish school in a young age and start looking for a job or go to collage. It depends what you want to do when you finish but it is a great idea and a great program to join to it saves time ,it can enable you to quality for jobs that required jobs that consider age. If it was me i can spend all summer without having a fun with my friends and go to the program do all work just to graduate early is just for a summer . Other one is that staying after school and i don't see any difficulties in doing that .it will save you time and even money because some school is not for free you have to pay to be in that school and other said stuff to pay too. All that will be limited for just pay three years instead of four years. it saves money and saves time. Programs like this have to be stand and be form as a big low that every school should do. It will even help some of the parents because not all students ride the school buses some of them they are brought to school by there parents a pick them again after school is not easy and some parents are working they can't always do that if the three years stands it will benefit the parents too by the way .The contain of my paper is minimize the years in high school. it also helps in man y ways like saving time, saving money , i can even say saying gas too because some parents take there children to school very day so if this policy stands legal and all the schools in the area are doing it they gonna make things easy for both the students and parents .",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
A84FFDD09442,"The positive attitude is the key to success in the life, because a person with good attitude good energy always is accepted, a person with positive attitude always is happy, because they believe thta everything is possible, that people with good energy they trasmite good energy to everyone around they, the positive attitude os the key to success in here reasons why: More effective in the job,

better relationship with family and friends and good life in general.

Positive attitude is more effective in the job, because we have to believe in our self for example; Generic_Name is working in a company they have a big project and everybody say This is too much we cant do this all this is wrong but Generic_Name say all is possible in a teamwork, is very effective if all the pieces are good nothing cant be wrong Generic_Name always have good attitude and is that why the boss always say go and ask for help to Generic_Name.

A person with positive attitude is a support, for example: Generic_Name have a big problem, but Generic_Name have a friend and her friend is her support, because with somebody is in problems need friends with good energy positive attitude. People with positive attitude always have good friends, because they listen that problems and them say All is going to be fine just wait for the right time.

My mom always say Believe in God and be positive.

After the rain the calm come. All the people say In the life all have to be positive because if i have to do something and i do my best with my best attitude, im going to be fine with the result, because i give everything. For example: Generic_Name want to be part of the marine she love the Marine, but her parents said is too much difficult is impossible for youa but Generic_Name have positive attitude.

The positive attitude always is going to be the key to success in life, because it is the base of everything all the peoples have to believed, is dosent matter what other people say or do, because in the future the only responsible for the things is going to be you nobody also. In the life that people have to show the better face and smile and say everything is possible,but no only said, that people have to believe that. All the people have to put a positive attitude and their job, school, home and in the general life and are going to be the things change.

sometimes in the life that people need a push and a person with positive attitude can be that push.

If a person dont have positive attitude that person always is going to do everything wrong, because if a person dont believe in herself nobody can do it.",3.0,2.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
DDD24AF9146F,"Many people dont know their own character traits or who they really are. They are stuck in a fantasy on what people tell them how they are like. While John Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" Our character traits is based on how we choose it to be. We should choose our Character traits by the way we know our self's best, Other people opinions could be wrong on what they might tell us, Character traits shows how our personality is really like.

Knowing our self better then many people are can build character alive it shows how much strength we have. By the way we represent our self best and what all of this can build out of it also shows how much knowledge it bring as well. Having many traits and how well we can identify about them shows us and others how best we know our self and how well we can put a label on it. showing many different types of traits on an everyday life style isnt easy nor impossible. It takes time to realize what kind of character trait you are trying to build. by digging deep and finding many different types of personalities in yourself will build a strong trait you may never knew about.

Asking for other peoples opinion about who or what character do you bring out upon yourself might give you wrong information. Maybe asking a friend could bring ideas to build a good character trait but might not give enough information. Finding about your own character traits is difficult. There can be many different types of option instead of asking for someone else opinion. Online could be a strong benefit about finding more information about your character traits. There is many other website that could help find more information to what kind of character you build. With this information you realize how much you know yourself while reading and finding.

Personality can show a big character to who you could possibly be. It shows how you are when you are with other people. You build stronger traits when you know what kinds of personalities you have. There can be many different personalities but many people have an important one that explains who they are and what kind of traits they have. Being with the right people with great personalities could help and explain why yours is just as strong and kind. Having this good trait can be a big part of knowing who your character is.

Choosing our character traits can't always be easy. It shows how difficult it is to finding good traits and building character wise. Many people know their character traits from what they know about themselves. It shows how we choose our character and how strong it comes alive. Its always a good reason to why we should choose our own character traits. ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
A1976FDEA9E2,"If I would pick a enjoyable activity it would be art. I

would picked art because you can do anything you want with it. The reason I

picked art was because a long time ago I would be sad or mad. So I went to the consular and she told me

I can use art. And how will

I use it? I would color what i felt and i would take my anger out its like telling someone what you feel except your drawing it.

My secound reason is its not always about drawing you can also the other things with it. You can gather resources and you can build things with that. For example if you had feather and bottles or cans you build a bird out of it. And even just painting something like a wall with difrernt kinds of color thats art.

Also it can be soothing because when you have a lot of tress you can paint. Because whe you paint and your trying to paint the beach it relaxing. For meits relaxing because whe you start to paint the brush won't be hard like a pencil it will just go by so soft you won't have to worry about messing up.

It's also great becauseyou get to learn about artist. Because it will kinda help you. Because it can tell you about how they draw or paint they can have a special way doing it. Like I read artist that used dots to paint and draw I thought that was enterested so i tryed it was kinda of hard. But I enjoyed trying it. This is why i like art becuase you can use it for anything. what is your favourte thing to do?       ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
EF3A72193AAF,"The

British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". I agree with Churchill's statement because you have to work hard to be success, sometimes you are going to failure but you have to try and try and never give up.

There are a lot of obstacles to be success, you have to avoid them. Sometimes you are going to fell but do not give up. You learn from the failures. Churchill said that you have to failure to get success, if you failure you never have to loss enthusiams. For example, if you want to go to college and you do not have money to pay the college, you are going to feel sad because you can not do it, but you have to find a way to solve your problems, you can work and study at the same time, work to get the money to pay the college and then complete your carreer.

To become successul, you have to work hard, do not give up, be positive, solve problems, try your best, and learn something new. Do not forget that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
FAAFFC983E47,"The majority of the students take about four years to graduate and go to the college, but also there are students who decide to finish the high school in tree years or as soon as possible. The question is, why are they trying to finish the high school earlier that the other ones?. A few people decide to finish the high school because they have other kind of goals to accomplish like travel or enlist to the Army etc.

In some situations this people aren't able to take electives courses like, Graphic Design, Culinary arts, Earth space, Mathematics, Health AP or Driving class. Whatever of this ones or others ones they can't enjoy them. In other situations this students take nigh school or summers school or both.

In my personal opinion take nigh school is really tired because when you leave the school yo have about one hour to get ready and go to the other school to take your course.

In other way, there are students who do not have support by their parents to finish the high school, and that is why they decide to finish early to have more time and find a job to support themselves. Even if they have a half time job, is not enough.

Enlist to the Army is a good idea for some people especially for high school students, they have a conversation with their parents to have the aprovation to do three years in the high school and get a career into the Army.

Some guys also want to finish early because they want to go to the college in other country or because they want to travel and have a extravagant life, this are the most common situations of why students decide to graduate during three years, but is better that dropped the school in the last year if they have the normal school ( four years).

I think that this programs that the district offer is good for those who have the potential to do it and finish the high school as soon as possible, and they need to know the probability to do not have or be able to have elective courses or Generic_School. I know about some guy who decided to take this program offered by the schools districts. He told me that is hard because while he was in the school he also studied for the exams of nigh school and he had courses really bored and after that, he took summers school all of this on his freshman year, I think that the only need to be constant interest and keep a good grade to success.

In my opinion take the traditional four year is better because you can enjoy of many things like the clubs in the school, community service or even participate in a sport team in the school like soccer, football, tennis or basketball. this things is what make a school awesome. in the traditional four year, you can pick electives courses that you really like it and do not make you bored. Also in the traditional four year you can talk to you consular to have Generic_School. But when you take the tree years you can not enjoy about you favorite things.

Take the tree year since my point of view is bad but could be great for other ones who has different things to accomplish, I dont have rush to finish early, and that is why I think about the tree years and the traditional schedule for the four years.                   ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
806672A60686,"Failure is a simple thing that everyone use to get. some people are loss of enthusiasm but some people they do not by keep trying. In my mind I agree with "" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" this is very important thing that we might think about, The reason why I agree whit this statement be cause of failure brings me a improvement, success.

I always improve myslef when I get a failure. Last year, I was in high school in New York, it was my first year for studying in America. because it was my first time so I fail a tasting so many tests, I could not talked to any friends and I also could not made friends. everything were so hard for me to pass or event talking whit someone, so I keep continued stady more English skill. Right now a year pass, my English is batter than first time that I got here.

Failure make me stronger and bring me success. I got a lot of problems last year, so

I was thinking about go back to Thailand but I always tell myself ""don't give up Generic_Name,you can try it again, you can do it, you will get it"" and I believe myself. I did not go back to Thailand and I got a lot of new things make myself stronger.

the Failure is important role in life. We get success form leaening from our makestake, we improve everytime that we fail. If we give up and walk away from our failure,than we are just a losser.        ",3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
2C34CE94B837,"I should be picked for this internship because I am a hard working person , I am a risk taker and im open minded .I am hard working when I am assigned to a task and in general I dont give up easy and I work until I believe I have done it to the best of my ability . For example one day i was assigned a project with a group of other students , my group was full of slackers and i had to do it all on my own.

I put in all my time and effort and dedication into it , my project ended up getting the highest grade than most of the other groups. ive been told i am a risk taker ,I do things others would consider to be rational or crazy. On a different project I worked on

I chose to do the most challenging one , no one would take it because there was a lot of writing needed to be put in and a lot of researching and information needed to be discovered .

I

am not afraid of challenges I like them I like expanding my knowledge and going above and beyond ,showing others my potential . I

am open minded when it comes to others and my ability to work well with others and communicate with them will blow your mind i am not afraid to talk in a crowd or present and i take joy in working with others and helping them out . I am very open minded when it comes to people and my education . although there might be some ideas we dont always agree on ,i accept it and respect there work ethic and give them my a hundred percent attention and try my best to understand them , and their point of view and where they are coming from . One time , there was this new kid at my school he was coming from Brazil . Know one would speak to him or make any interaction with him. so i took the liberty in talking to him and making him feel welcome into our school and letting him know he was not alone that he has a friend,that was me , after talking with him for awhile i then tried to understand and put myself in his shoes he was a scared boy coming to a new country for the first time with his mom and not being able to know the language and how different the lifestyles are from here and Brazil was very difficult for him and is family so i wanted to help . i made him feel better by taking some time and teaching him English now he speaks English fluently and he thanks me for all of done for him . this was one of the reasons why i love working with others and helping others out .although some people might say that i am a little too straight forward ,others will say that they appreciate my honesty , therefore i should be chosen to have this opportunity in taking this internship because i would be a great candidate for it and it would really mean a lot to me my goal in life is to be successful and get my family out of the projects and into a better lifestyle and this internship would be a step in the right direction . i promise you , you wont regret it .",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
D1B9A2A7BEDA,"Technology is one of the big reason behind the success of this world. Because of the technology peoples are able to do a lot of progress in the different field's of their lifes. The technology makes our work easy. It helps you to save our time. Technology also help us to run a lot of businesses .But on the other hand most of the peoples do the missuse of technology and use it in different ways for example robbery,hacking,and the murders of different peoples. It also effect's a lot on our new generation by inventing and by adding a bunch of vedio games in their computer or their phones.

In past if you wants to read the book and to write a book for reading you have to go to the library and find the book and read it or if you wants to write a book you have to collect a bunch of papers and ink and it takes a lot of time to do it but,now because of the technology we are able to access every book online and we also able to write a book on the computer that saves our money to buy the papers and ink. It also saves our time.

In Businesses the technology is really important because of this we are able to handle our money because the technology shows us in business that how much profit we get and how much we spend on the stocks and how much we spend to buy our products and also you can get your money in the form of direct deposits so quickly .We don't have to wait a couple of month's to get our money.

So, the missuse of technology is also one of the big reason. The hackers hacks the different websites and crash their important data or sometime's they enter into the websites of bank's and transfer their money to a different account. Most of the peoples use the technology for robery or murders. They follow the person for the couple of days and check their every history that what time he's in his home or what time he's out from his home. So when they see's that nobody is at home. They go and do the robbey.

Most of the teenagers and childern's do a lot of missuse of technology. They spent teir lot of times in watching movies or playing the vedio games of differnt types or kind. The rays that come from either our computer or our mobile might also effect eyes sometimes really badely.

So in real if we have the advantages of technology we also have the dissadvantages of technology. Because every thing have opposite side. So,we are not able to do anything with the disadvantages but we are able to overcome the disadvantages.

If there is no technology the world might be nothing. No body knows each other from a long distance. We still have a rular system on us. Without technology we are also not able to established the well maintained govt. and if there is no technology its mean no social media and we are not able to interect with each other from a long distances.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
F1883C3A8C1E,"It has been said that having a positive attitude is the key to success life. I agree but at the same time i disagree. First being positive can bring success in life we so many great people who found the key to success in being positive like Micheal Jordan. He was cut from his varsity basketball team but him being positive and putting in work help he found the key to success in his life.

Next my second reason i think being positive can be the key to success is. Da Baby he was always told we wasn't every going to be anything but had stayed humble and positive and keep his head up and now he is one of the top rappers of are time now. he has multiple gold and platinum records and he has millions of fans and followers he has people who want to see him because he stayed positive and found his key to success.

last i disagree because having a positive attitude isnt always the key to success because when the people out in war doesnt have a positive attitude because they have to be ready for the enemy and i think you wouldnt want to have a positive mind set in that predicament. In conclusion being positive can sometimes be the key to life and sometimes not having a positive attitude can still be the key to life.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
7369FE94C1C6,"Working with a group is more beneficial or working alone is more beneficial? Working with a group is more beneficial. People can get help from another person and they can be more successful by working together. Although some people thinks that working alone is more beneficial, working with a group is more successful because it would be easier to ask for help and to succeed in life.

Some people thinks that working alone is more successful. It gives people time to plan and easier to make good efforts. Some people prefers to not work with a group because they might make bad efforts on other people's work. Overall people says that working by yourself is more beneficial, they are wrong because working with a group can help you be more successful.

Some people prefers to work with a group. It is more helpful to get help from another person. Some people had a hard time planning what they want to work on like homework or school project. Working with a group is more successful because it would be easier to get help from another person.

Some people prefers to work with a group. People can be more successful by working together. Some people had a good idea and they used that idea to make good efforts. Working with a group is more beneficial because they can use other people's idea to make good efforts for their work.

Although some people prefers to work by themselves, a group work will help them be more successful. A group work helps other people to be more successful because one person had an idea and other people can use their idea to get their work completed. People can share their work to another person so they can check if they made good efforts.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
9C76CF46D791,"Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. When students enter high school, they begin to work at a specific job to earn some money in order to be prepared for their future career.

It is not a good idea for students to commit to a specific career at a young age because it will cause distractions from school work, students are still getting education, and specific jobs will distract students from activities they enjoy.

Students should not commit to a career at a young age because it will cause distractions from school work. In high school, teachers and other faculties take education seriously and gets harder for students every year as they develop. Students get a lot of homework and tests they have to study for and need to focus on education in order to graduate from high school and get to a good collage. Spending time on a specific job before their actual career can distract students and decrease their grades. For example, a high school student goes to work at a salon after school but they have so much homework and a test to be prepared for, but they have don't have enough time to study and accomplish their homeworks since their specific job is in the way. So they begin to get a low grade and fail tests, which can also give them a low self-esteem.

Students should not commit to a career at a young age because are still getting education. High school students are still young and are still developing, they need to spend their high school years to study and get a good education in order to develop. In their high school years, students begin to get an idea of what they wish to be for their future career, so they are still learning about it and that's how they get a better amount of money, be well-educated, and live a good and healthy life. For example, high school student is not well-educated and is still developing, so they need to keep studying and learning in school to graduate and get to a good collage to study about their future career that interests them and the dream job they are wishing to work for. A specific career will take them away from their dream job.

Students should not commit to a career at a young age because specific jobs will distract students from activities they enjoy. It is important for students to do activites they enjoy to be healthy and have something positive and enjoyable to do. When they get a specific job during their high school years, it will take them away from these enjoyable and positive activities they and will have no time to do it when they have a specific career and school, which can also cause stress for students and will never find anything positive that they enjoy to do. For example, a student plays football and really enjoys it and it gives them positive energy. But they have to go to school and need time to do their schoolwork and study to pass. When they get a specific job, they don't have time to do their favorite activity and also not have enough amount of time to study and do schoolwork, which can cause stress to students.

In conclusion, students should focus on studying and education in high school and not get a specific career that will distract themselves from school or any activities they enjoy to just to get money. They have to keep developing and study hard to get to a good collage and be prepared for their dream job to get a good amount of money and live a better life.",4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,5.0,4.0
BC0B186645A9,"Living on this planet, everyone has there own character traits. But does everyone create their own characteristic traits or are they influenced by those they surround their self's with.? John Lubbock, a British naturalist and politician wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I take a position on representing that you are in control choosing and creating your own character.

In building your own character it's all in your mindset. Mindset takes a big part in someones character because it shows what kind of person you are and how you represent your self and how you portray things in life. The way you think has an effect on you as a person and how you betray things in life. It also takes part in who you surround yourself with. Do you surround yourself with people who have goals in their life or inspire you to become a better you.?

It also takes part on things you choose to do and say on a daily bases. The decision you make could lead into something better or for the worse in current situations or in the long run.

Having motivation and a goal in the your life builds you as a person and sets you for growth. When you see someone in your life not doing well and not in a good current situation you want to avoid being in that position. But when you start seeing someone in your life doing better things and living the life that you want to accomplish, it's on your part to doubt yourself or make that you motivation. When you strive for something in life and start working hard for it, your mentality starts to change to do better and get to your goal.

Some may argue that the people you surround your self with is beyond your control on how your character traits are formed. Yes the people you surround yourself with everyday might have an effect on your characteristics, but it isn't beyond your control. You can have something to motivate you to be better then who you surround your self with. You have control over your thoughts and how you see things in life. It take's part on you and what you strive for in life.

In conclusion, Your own character traits are somethings that come within you and how you portray life. Your character traits are't something that is beyond your control but is something that you can control with motivation and a goal to strive for and it all comes from a strong mindet.                             ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
B983F2965167,"Influencing other with positive qualities by expressing action or even he way how we talk, is the best and only way to represent your character. I strongly agree with Albert Schweitzer, a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. Because it represents your positive qualities and as well as culture, and help others understand more about you.

One reason that people should behave positively, is that they can represent them selves to others. As an example, people with positive behave draw others' attention by the way how they physically act and speak. They are easy to convince, open to everyone, and humble. In my real life experience, I have met a lot of these kind of people who I consider as friends now.

I was influenced by them the first time we met, with their positive attitude and respect.

Another reason why reason that people should behave positively, is that they can influence others by their culture. In my real life experience, I have who drew my attention by the way how they interact to others and I wanted to know and learn more about his culture and religion.

In the final analysis, acting positively influence the surrounded people, helps making meet and make new friends.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,4.0
F9C96F25D515,"Spain is one of the most beautiful place in this world. Spain has lots of stuff, they have big soccer clubs like Real Madrid, Barcelona, Athletico Madrid, and many more. They have big stadiums that whole over 100,000 people, they even have some nice features like they have have restruants inside the stadium, one of them has a bedroom inside.

Once I would arrive at Spain I would love to try their food because I heard their food was good sou

I sesrched it up and the food looks so yummy and tasty. I would also love to ride on a boat and cruise through the city. One of the good things is that it's hot most of time over there.

Barcelona is a beautiful city in Spain, they speak Catalan. Most of Spanish people would only speak Spanish but with an accent but Barcelona speaks Spanish and Catalan. That would one the languages i would love to learn. Spain has alot of great cities like Generic_City, Generic_City, Generic_City, and a whole bunch more. They each have a stadium.

The last place I would love to visit is the capital of Spain which is good. Generic_City is one of the best soccer team in the world. They have a lot of great players and a Big stadium.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
E7510A2A4F0A,I disagree with this statement because you are supposed to have knowledge imagination is like dreaming but when you have knowledge you can put your mind to something to create something big in the future like having your own company and you can signed workers and to make them delivered stuff to people and all of this is reality even though you need to finish school and go to college and get a degree there it take time you have to get your mind set and encourage your self to do better. You can also help people if they need help on something cause you already been threw all of this like how to get a job or how to make your own job and to encourage somebody else to just put there mind to it so that person that you helped they can also helped somebody then it goes own forever and forever and you can tell them how you succeed in they can follow in your foot step and they can tell another person who they succeed and they can tell there story imagination isnt reality it is when you are sleeping or thinking but knowledge you will need it if you are in a situation.,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
6C16FC9FE7A4,"Some people think that is a good idea, but actually it is not. I think we shoul keep folllowing the plan thatbis already planted by the goverment.

The reason are so many and complicated to explain right now, that is why I am only gonna explain and give example to three of those reason. One of them are that students should not go to college at very early age or go to the minlatary at very early age, Because of the their are not older anough and are not anough responsible handle to much presur in college and in high school, and most ot the time they don't really know what they want to be when grow up, and the course during summer and evenings are not much presur for the students.

They don't have the experience about what is life look like and how harts it is. They would not have any freedom duirng their all life if they follow that plan, because they always will be ""between four walls"", that's not the life that people want and that's not the sad path that parents want for the children I guess and I hope, but you never now what parents want and never ask what you want, and is another presur on their shoulders.

The elective courses are a way to expriment other classes and learn something else that students really want to do or maybe would like to do, I admint that students will learn the necessary, but not what they want, their will be sad if they never had a freedom to do what they want to.

In my conclusion: it's better to take things with calm and peace, not to take it to fast, we still have bunch of time to decide what's really matter and what's matter to us.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
471C6119911D,"Having after school homework clubs can have so many ways to get work done .For and example, it allows students from any grade to get more help after school , students get amazing grades or scores , and afterwards , you get free time to do anything you always wanted to do after school .

Staying after school to get more help , can give you many advantages like able to ask for help on certain subject and understanding the subject more . You are also able to ask more than usual questions out of class , and it can help with finishing work faster and easier with the help of a teacher or a fellow student .

When staying after and getting help , it can change a students grades easily to a bad grade to an amazing grade . Getting a wonderful grade, can also have a student in a positive attitude , and also feel wonderful because they are passing the class . When getting good grades , parent get proud for all the hard work they are doing to understand every subject in school . When parent are happy , you're also happy .

Afterwards you're done with all the hard work and you've done all the homework you've been given , you have free time. In that free time you get to do multiple things you,ve never done , play a favorite sport that you like , or even spend time with family and friends but if you have nothing else to do , just continue your hard work on studding note or look or your old homework to see you understand it .

In retor spect , establishing homework clubs can make a difference , it can really help with student that are strugling to understand whats happening in the class .",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
5704CCBC8B55,"I think that my principal need reconsidering the school's cell phone policy.

First of all , the principal should let allow all students to bring phones to school and use them only during lunch periods , free time , and when a student have a emergency . Because you don't if a student's mom is calling because a emergency happen.

As you can see , that the principal need to let the student to have there cell phone , as long as the phone is turned off during class time or is in bivariate . That is why the principal need to let us use the cell telephone during school.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
C7A28C7A3786,"""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered""

, you will never grow im agree i think if you wanna do something you can try. think febore to do. He says if you never grow and you have already mastered. He say you will try, because if you dont try you never know if you can to do. For example if you think osmethin and you can do so you do it if you never try you can know if you do it. So you can try something.

1. Desagree, the persons don think after do something

2. Agree they can try to do somethin better

You try to do something beyond yours hands and that is a little bit imposible if you can do you can do and thats all. The humanity do things inimaginables and thas is cool but the thing is they can try to do is impossible understannding, and if you can try and fail thats is your problem then personas can do whatever they want and thats it. ",2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.0
47DD29AF666C,"Introduction, i going to writing a issay about the possitive attitude the first paragrah is going to be about the jod that you always need to has a possitive attitude. In the second paragraph i gooidn to talk about the meaning about life and the possitive attitude. In the third i goint to talk about personal positive attitude.

First, I think that has a positive attitude is always good to your life and help you to give a sense a everything. We always need to has a reason to has positive attitude because without a good attitude you never getting a jod because in a jod you always to has a possitive attitude with the coustumer. Life is beautiful every morning we need to start we a happy face because is another day to thanks that we wake up because not everyone has a bed or a warm house but somenthing the people live in the street has always good and positive atitude than the others.

Second, the meaning of the life is always somenthing that motivate that never give up and we need to know that is depend that we has a good attitude. if we dont has a good or posititve atitude we are going to fail everything. Example one girl want to study in Generic_School and she really want to finish schools but she come with a bad behavior they dont let her come to be a student. In thats why we need to has a possitve attitude to comply the goals we has. I think the meaning for positive attitude is somenthing that we really need no better what because we need to show a people that no better has going though us life we always show up we a possitive attitude.

third, I remenber that my mom always tell me that everything depend in my attitude because the persons around me they always look my attitude. We make friends whit the attitude why? the reason we my friends with the attitude because the attitude make us different in many differents ways. Us attitude is everything. some people does not about attitude because they never learn what is attitude means. I learn about positive attitude because my mother show me how has a possitive attitude. everybody need to has a possitve attitude o has a happy life with big goals. Something in life we always know some people that they dont know about attitude but we need to be nice we them.

Conclusion the topic was about positive attitude that we all need to has a possitive attitude and their life to demostrate the we are discipline.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
CAA2C4C4E79C,"Do you think first impressions are impossible to change? Some people say that first impressions are possible to change by getting more in detail. I agree that first impression are impossible to change because first impressions are negative and peoples thoughts don't change.

In other words, first impressions are usually negative. For example, if you see a person and he or she just has a serious face, your first impression ""that person has bad vibes''. Or a type of food that looks strange to you, you automatically start saying negative things about it.

Also, peoples thoughts never seem to really change you will always see that character or thing the same way. Why? Because nothing changes everything it remains if something does change ,it changes in negative way. As an example, people get more cruel or companies start inventing products that shouldn't be together. Your mind won't change unless that person ,place or thing changes in a positive way.

So, first impressions are almost impossible to change. First impressions can change by getting more involved and finding more information about that subject but, it is impossible to change that. In the futures lets hope this world and the people and objects in it will change in a postive way so our first impressions can be possible to change. Things should be possible to achieve not impossible.        ",3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
F8A3497B5F2D,"Many schools allow their students to visit different types of companies so they could explore many interested jobs,for example schools and companies get in a deal to help students to get knowledge for their future and also companies allow students to be able to visit and get information in their occupations,I know as a fact that students can be professionals in what they want with good knowledge,as a example my whole family went through all of that and know they have become lawyers,doctors,and one of them works for the president. If managers give students the opportunity to visit their occupations,students who work hard won't lose that excellent opportunity,and managers would have an amazing great roll in students achievement which I know it would help the company. Although some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,actually companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,and I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future.

Some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,for example,my older brother had the opportunity to visit an important company called ""Dream Big""he expect that in that company they would have information about what he was interest,but sadly it didn't went that well,my brother was sad and angry at the same time,so he made a fake account to talk about the company ,as a result the company decrease in a 20% of people that were involved.

Companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,for example,my mother always tells me a story about how she became a lawyer,she said that as a student,she was preparing herself for the future,thanks to school,they gave her a chance to explore and get some knowledge about lawyers in a company called ""Everything is possible,if you believe it""she had the chance as a lawyer to meet the president,also there is a story about her in the internet,she became a lawyer because she had the opportunity.

I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future for example,I read about an incredible woman who know is a professional chemistry teacher ,in the story gave details about how she became who she is it doesn't specific which company she went to learn about her career,but the point is that she has an excellent job,because she got prepare for it.

Although some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,actually companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,and I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future. As a result schools and companies help students in their goal to have a knowledge with their interest,and for sure parents would be thankful.        ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
FD9A86C8DA31,"I do agree with Churchill statement because life ain't easy and you will lose a lot to order to became successful in life. The reason I agree with this statement is because I know how it feels to lose it all to order to became successful and that was to became a professional soccer player to proof everybody that left me hanging

, that did me dirty , and people that don't want seeing me to win. This made me go harder for what I want to became in life I really put all my effort into something I love playing since my childhood , it always kept me from trouble and ending up in the street. I remember when I was 13 years old I use to play for a really good team that I never thought I could make but I did and never had a changes to play on the field because the coach thought I wasn't ready to play. He use to doubt about my ability on the field and that put me down , I left the team then stop playing for 6 months but I was start to think that I shouldn't give up and 2 months later I made Super Y where all the good player are at and good teams . I

only played 6 games and i didn't do good or bad but I did alright and one of the coaches love my playing style , he got me on a travel team. My first season was where I proved everybody wrong and scored 38 goals 16 assist , I was proud of myself for not giving up and kept my head up from what I was going thought , Next season I got called up to play for the first team I was amaze for what I accomplish in a year. It was amazing when I played for the first team because I went to tournaments that were big like the state cup and college showcases I never experience , my team came in first place for two season and almost won state cup. The next year I made NPL and been getting mail from academy team and one team from Spain to go play for them but I lost those changes and that when I just stop giving up because money was a issue and I was begin to get in trouble that when I lost it all the hard work for nothing. I had my hope up for things to get better and one day I was listing to my coach , he told me I was a amazing player and I changes the game every time i'm on the field then he told me dont give up on something you really good at cause I can see you going pro or playing division one soccer and get draft from there , so I listed and now I got 5 division one school that went me to play for there school and some others.

This is why I agree with this statement because if you lose faith in yourself you will never became successful in something you love doing and playing even if it gets hard keep your head up and focus on the main goal to become successful. This rapper said "" at your best you are love and don't let nobody pull you from your grind"" and I like what that quote say because it true once you became big everybody you know that talk upon your name and never been by your side will come back and say how they use to know. Churchill quote really think and realize don't lose your enthusiasm failure makes you push harder and makes you more successful without failure nobody in this world is no willing to take any risks or changes to became successful. Prove everybody what you capable of doing and take risks and chase your dream to the fullest.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
DAD01CB5C8D8,"I'm not against having the after school homework club. I'm not against it because some people are failing their classes especially me and i would want to go to an after school homework club because one it would be helpful, two sometimes I forget that I have homework, and three sometimes I just want to get it over with and be done with the homework.

One of my reasons that I'm not against the after school club is because the students can get there grades up and have more practice when you take any test that you don't know about. For my opinion I would like to have this club because some teachers go really fast when there teaching and I can't catch up to them and it's really difficult for me. Some of the students don't know what the teacher is teaching about because maybe the subject there learning is there weakest strength to learn about.

My second reason is that students need this class because they want to achieve in life. Maybe someone wants to go to college to learn about photography but the school they want to go to is too expensive to afford like for example they want to go to a well good college but it's to expensive but the person who wants to be a photographer needs to apply for a scholarship that means they need to have good grades, participate in after school activity and much more this is why students like me need to have a after school homework club.

My third reason is that some students don't do there homework because they forgot it at school or they don't remember they have homework. People like me don't like doing homework because it's really difficult and sometimes I need help doing my homework and it would help me have in my school a after school homework club because that would be helpful to me and other students.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
4C17DB6FF2DC,"John Lubbock quotes on choosing your own character or letting influences form your is a passage I can live by.

For the reason of it being actually true because, sometimes things you see throughout your life would change your character. The people you look up to can can your character because you want to be just like them. but sometimes its not always a good change sometimes you can have a bad influence.

Things you see in life can change your character. Lets say you are in the streets and you get into a car accident then you are gonna have a chance to be afraid to drive a car. It can also be changed by a bad experience, lets say you are in an abusive relationship after that relationship ends you would think every girl/guy is an abusive person.

What if you are living in foster care and you never get adopted you will think that you will never among to nothing and be nothing your whole life.

The people you look up to can have a dramatic change in your character. Let's say your father is your biggest inspiration you will want to be just like him when your older and follow in his foot steps. But, if your inspiration isn't anyone in your family but it is a famous sport player you will grind your butt off just to be in the same team with them and hopefully play along side with that player. Newer influences these days are trough social media and movies and in my opinion those are the worst ones because they usually trying to sell you something or market something to their audience.

Sometimes its not always a good change sometimes you can have a bad influence. Having a bad influence can lead to a lot of trouble and you can even end up in jail for it. Let's say you look up to your father and he is a very toxic person and a violent person and you end up like him that's not a good thing. Also something that can happen is that you look up to a very bad very disturbing person and he likes to hurt people and then you start hurting people because you want to be just like him. Depending on who your inspiration is it will develop the way your character comes out.                  ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
10BE9BFD7D41,"the British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote, "" your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.""

I disagree with that because our character formed by influences beyond our control, for example we all leaned whats right or wrong, let's take a babies for example the leaned for people all around them, by seeing what they do for example how they speak, how they walk and how they dress. the only they can not be influences by other people if their parent stop then from doing all those things. take me for example as a baby grow up speaking french because thats that the Language. when I moves to my grandma place she speak Spanish with me so now I speak Spanish, and french I could never speak those languages if I was not influence by those around me.

I get the part that said we choose our own character trait because we all now if something worn or not we can choose to the wrong thing or the right thing it up to us at this point for example some ask you what you what to be in the future now it you choose to make even tho you have a choose there is a 50/50 present you will follow the same path as some in your life that influences you. we all are influences by something or someone an example some teen want to be raper because there is someone around their that one or they want to be a basketball player because the know a basketball player they think he or she is cool. if you disagree with me, ask yourself, how did I become who I'm today? Was I influence by someone? Or did I choose to become who I'm?

I disageer with that ""character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
8E10DA6F8DE9,"Mar/14/2019

Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives?

And many ways I think it does, and in others I think it doesn't. It depend on the person, that's what I believe.

It has a positive effects in the way that it can help people that feel along entertain thyself without nobody, I don't think that there are many things nothing worst then feel along. that can do bad things to people brains, and I am not saying that there is nothing worst, I mean be in prison, not had a job, die... and I had seen many people who prefer all those things before then be along, and checking out book, shopping, playing games, listening music in your favorite app, Pandora... or watching you favorite show in YouTube, Netflix or whatever other app that you use is positive way of use the technology.

But you know in the worth nothing is perfect,like my grandfather used to say ""there has to be bad things, so that there could be good things"". every positive thing has to have it on negative thing.

it has a negative effect on people lives because with the advice of the technology phone, and others the people are losing the interest in norma things, like some people don't even care about family reunion. I mean I never really care about that staff neither. I always preferred to be with my cousin, and my childhood friends then be in my house talking about boring things, but now you can not have simple conversation with some people because when you are talking to them most of the time they are in they phone doing who knows what, and I don't know about you. but to me that's a disreperfull way to tell me that you don't care about what i'm saying, and that could made people dislike you.

technology is one of the greatest things ever invented, it made more easier the communication, it give entertainment to the people, it inform us of every that is happening in the worth, even in the space, and we don't have to read a whole book to find answer. technology has made every more easier, you can do almost anything, you can shopping without leave your house, order food...

and all this stuff made people lazy, maybe they ask thyself why should I do this when my small phone or computer can do it for me, why should I date someone to talk to them when I can do it by my phone, why should I have to have a conversation with somebody when there is a whole lot of thing that I can do in my phone or competed. And maybe you are going to keep asking the same question to yourself unto the day that there would be no body by your side.

In Conclusion the technology is something very good, if you use it just when you need it. not letting it get into your mind.     ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
39524C93F4D4,"People will tell you that without doing something, you'll never get what you want. I agree. Accomplishing something is a great feeling when you know you've done it because when you know you put in the time and effort for it and get a great result. It shows that the time you toke to make it was worth it. Sitting around, letting people hand you stuff will get you no where in life, because instead of you doing something, you wait for them to give it to you, not aware of what that person had to do to.

What does it mean to accomplish something? To me accomplishing something is when you worked hard for what you did and you're satisfied with your result. That to me is accomplishing something. Whenever I set my mind to anything, I do whatever it takes to make it. For example, I had a championship finals in a week and I needed time to prepare my mind and body for the game. The time came to play the game and all I could think about was winning that trophy. We ended up winning, and I won what I was waiting to accomplish. I don't think I could have made it if I didn't make an dedicate my time to win the finals.

Kids nowadays are spoiled by there parents to get whatever they want just by asking. I can understand that some parents care about what the needs of there own children, but I often see parents buy usless things for there kids and that can be a problem because when they know they can get these things that aren't any use for them,

they go asking for other stuff that they don't need. A solution to this problem can be when they are old enough to get a job, to get one so they can make money, so they can buy things for them selves. Instead of leaching on Mommy and Daddy's money all the time. Getting a job shows that you're doing something to get what you want, for example, a house, a car, anything you can spend you're own money that you need. The effort you showed got to where you are and now you know you accomplished it.

A person I know that has accomplished alot in his life is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a soccer athlete and was born in a small town in Portugal. Like others there, his family was really poor and couldn't afford him anything really. He was a trouble child in school and misbehaved when things didn't go his way. He was very talented in soccer though. He would go outside, find anything round and did whatever he would do to a real soccer ball. He was noticed by coaches when they would here a young kid scoring goals not any normal kid would. He moved to the capital of Portugal and would play for the towns Division one team. He never forgot his family back home. He would have made a ton of money to send back to his family and bought them a house in a much nicer and safer location. His goal was to be the best player in all of soccer. He worked in and out of practices to get better and play for a club that people would notice that he was. He was bought by one of the greatest teams in all of europe Real Madrid. He was the most highest paid athlete at the time and whenever he got his pay check, he would always use it for a good cause like, family, charity, etc. He would eventually be nominated for the best player award five times and would end up winning those times. He accomplished what he had dreamt of becoming, and I hope people could see his story and realize you can't just sit around and do nothing, you have to put in time and effort to get what you want.

I can understand when people can get lazy and not do anything to accomplish anything. Not everyone is perfect. But sooner or later they'll realize that without doing something, you can't get what you want. Sometimes people are fortunate to recieve things just by asking, but do you want to live a life leaching off people? Letting them know ""oh this person can't live without me because I get him everything"" I know I wouldn't. I hope to accomplish here that, you have to make an effort in order to accomplish something. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
EC82975E75DA,"To conserve energy and reources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, the benefits is that in the school have that conserve energy, the students have that adopted to your work, and the school and conserve enegy, and resources. It is for the student that in the school learning about the important that is conserve energy and resources of the businesses. I said that can adopted to the school and the businesses. I believe that the students have more responsibility in the life. The students have big responsibility in the life because the work and the school are important, the students have capability of have a businesses and go to the school. The student have that be sure of work and that take good grade in the school.

The work in the businesses can't affect the grades in the school. The work is part of a life and also go to the school. The students can have a job and go to the school, can work in the homework after or befored of the school. The businesses have adopted a four-day work week is a good responsibility for the adolecents because learning to share with the job and the school. The work not affect of a student in nothing in the school. The work in the businesses is important for the life because learn to mature and learn to have a big responsibility for the life. The student can work after of the school and every have good grade in the class. The study have that conserve energy and resources for the school and for make the homework and study for test, other thing. The study in the school can that the student after have problem for sleep and go to tarde in the school.

The advantages of have job is good because the work help in the development of the person. The advantages of a job and the school help to have responsibility in the life. The advantages of go to the school and working is very important with person help knowledge of the responsibility. The advantages is development with person and with responsibility. The advantages is good for a person with a good capacity intelligent. The advantages is that the people can have a good responsibility. The advantages of have a job and study is that help to grow with person. The advantage is have something and demonstrate that a can with job and study. The advantages is that the time of the school can combine with the job for that the student have time.

The disadvantages is big responsibility for a students beacuse not help in the school with your grades. The disadvantages is that go tired in the school is the tired. The disadvantages is because not get good grades in the test. The disadvantages is bad grades in the class only take F. The disadvantages is that in the school not pass the class because they work in the businesses. The disadvantages is not approve work as this in the school. The disadvantages is not good because fall the grades in the class of school. The disadvantanges is that the students not can with the job and study because exceed can be bad. The disadvantages is big responsibility for a students because they not this ready for a big responsibility. The disadvantages can weaken our mind and energy.

In conclusion, have a job as these in the school, can be a good because a have more reponsibility in the life and can mature more. The student can have the job and go to the school. The have a work and study help with person to have responsibility in the life and make more intelligent in every the aspect. The have a job help to develop our mind. The have a job and study can be bad for our health because use the mind. The have a job and study is good every and when get good grade in the school and not carelessness the class and the test or homework. The students have conserve energy and resource for the school and the work because is important the energy in our body and mind. The student can tired because the work and study is very difficult for the student. The work and study can the student have much problem because not good sleep. The students have that develop your mind and sleep the time corrects. The study is good because have a big responsibility and can mature for the life. The study and word is very good because is a big responsibility.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
EACD6F08F69C,"Growing up, I was never into traveling. I never had a dream to go visit some popular place everyone went to. But as time went by, I had this sudden urge to go to Generic_City. The beauty of this place makes me love it. Visiting Generic_City, at least once in my life, in one of the biggest dreams I've ever had, and hopefully, it comes true. This city has been loved by almost everyone, and a lot of people talk about the beauty it has.

Generic_City is one of the most intriguing places in the world, and that is another reason I would love to go there. I would love to visit this place because of its friendly people, its cheerful environment, and its delicious food. Generic_City has been one of the most popular places that people visit and enjoy their time in. If I ever have the chance to go to Generic_City, I would love to see the Generic_City in real life, because it's the site nobody wants to miss when they visit this city. Even looking at its pictures makes people get lost in their thoughts because of the marvelous view.

Once I arrive, I would love to visit some family members I have in that place, and have fun with them. I have known a lot people who have visited Generic_City and told me about their experiences. I was always so interested in their experiences because even though it makes me sad, I get to know about the different places they have visited and their reaction. I would say visiting Generic_City, is a once in a lifetime opportunity and people should definitely go there.

I know that everyone has a different point of view, but to me, Generic_City is a wonderful place and it's my dream to visit that beautiful city.

Many people think the opposite of what I think, they may say that there are better places than Generic_City, and I agree, everyone has a right to share their opinion. Visiting Generic_City is just a dream that I want to fulfill one day and I encourage other people to do so too. No matter what dream you have, you can make it come true, if you try. After all, a dream is a dream, no matter how big.               ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.5
11DD0B26B584,"Although some say schools should not offer classes online because when students are out of school someone else could be doing the work for them and they will not be learning anything, actually schools should offer classes online because most of the students who go to schools have to work and they drop out of school to work and taking classes online would help them be educated at the same time they're working.

Those who believe schools should offer classes online have their reasons because research shows that 80% of the students that go to high school work after school. They get home late and they have to do homework, and they go to bed too late and having to wake up at least at 7 am to go school it's hard. They are falling asleep in class and they don't want to do any work. Taking classes online helps because they can take them at anytime.

Also, some students have to walk to get to school. In winter they have to suffer all the cold weather and that's what make them sick. Last year I saw a student who broke his arm cause it was snowing and the sidewalk was really slippery,and I also saw a guy who got beat up by a group of guys on the street he was on his way home,and if they can take classes online they would not have to walk to school, and those situations wouldn't happen.

In addition, research shows that 70% of the students that have attended classes online have been successful which means taking classes online really helps students. They can rest more at home and they don't have to wake up early every morning.

In conclusion,schools should provide classes online because colleges,universities also provide them and most of the people who have taken them have been successful from their classes. That is the best thing schools could do for the students.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
BB5B58E098AB,"Well i think we choose our own character traits,because its up to you what you want to do, we choose if we want to be happy,sad,or angry. I've learned that with my mom,she always tells me,""you choose to be happy,sad,angry""

Sometimes our character is formed by influences beyond our control,and that's okay everyone has diffrent reasons to be mad or to be sad,happy but we can change it if we want to. The British naturalism and politician John Lunnock was right about what he wrote,this helps a lot of people to understand that if someone do,did,say,or have said something to you ,it'll be our choice to get mad,sad,or just ignore what happened..

After that your character it'll be what you choose to make it.

For example,i've been trought a lot this past years ,my chilhood was not the best i did not had a father or my mom when i was a little girl,i grew up with my grandparents my uncle raped me when i was seven years old,my other unclu he used to hit me all the time in my head,my grandma used to hit me with the belt , i was fat when i was a little girl,and people used to make fun of me,

That really affect me ,because i'm unsecure about my body,or how i look,i've in Hospitals because i try to kill myself last year,because i was depressed,because all the things that i've been trought and now i choose to be happy,im going to therapits on Monday's,i started working ,i play soccer,or i go out with my sister.

I have choose to be happy .

Sometimes it's hard to be happy,even that you know you want to be happy you just don't see one reason to be,and it's sad because you know your family it's feeling the same pain you feel inside of you ,the only thing you think in those moments are, ""why would i do this"" or ""why am i trying so hard "" .

Those are the worst feelings,when you want to get up in the morning but you can't.

In conclusion,my opinion it's that everyone needs to know that ,our character will be what we choose to make ,we have to make good decisions to be good.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
E2B6281D99BD,"some people believe that true self esteem com from achievement, I

think that they are wroung, i think that self esteem come from praising student.

people that believe that true self esteem come from praissing student work are think that they are right.

like for example;

if the student want to learn and and they are trying to do what you ask that to do and they died not do it the right way and you tell than that is not bad and you keep encorraging than to keep trying, it will give than the cinfident to do more work because they know that they are doing something good,

but if they are workung hard and you keep telling than that they are dum or telling than that they are not doing it the right way they will get tire and will not have the energy to work anymore.

people that prais student are people who want to show the student that they can do any thing that they want to do in life, I belive that many student will be able to do well in school if only the teachre can make than to know that they are spical like every one of the student in the class or school, there are many student out there that want to learn but they just need someone who will be able to encorrage than that they should trust in that self and tell than that they can do it. ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
26EA99485576,"The key to success is your attitude. Studies show that your attitude is your key to success in life because it represents you. The key to success is a positive attitude because one can accomplish more, one can get the respect they need and its your first impression to someone.

First, staying positive will let you accomplish more things in life. For Example, It can help you accomplish getting a job, finishing school work and getting into colleges.

Next, with positive energy it will help you get through the day much smoother. Also, you can accomplish anything you set your mind to.

Next, staying positive lets people know that you respect others. This allows you to get a good images in any environment. When getting good images people would be interested in giving you job opportunities. Also, when showing good attitude and respect could lead to success in life.

Also, when getting a job you need to always stay positive to show your first impression to your boss. First impressions show how someone thinks of you and determines if you get the job or not. If you dont show positive attitude, then you probably wont get the job and it shows bad first impression.

In conclusion, the key to life is your attitude and the only person who can control it is you. Studies show that your attitude determines your success in life. So, now you know why staying positive is a key to success in life by accomplishing more, respecting others and first impressions.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
57A750437C3A,"Ralph Waldo Emerson who wrote, ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greastest accomplishment"" I agree because if you do everything by yourself better things happens. Like how he saids be yourself can make you better by trying new things, so many reasons to be your own.

First of all, to be yourself can make you great life or more better can open new opportunities, by saying this a refer to get ideology with a great future. A example, making yourself with rules or putting time for something you want to do can be awesome way to start, someone told me if you fight for dreams and you really want to do it, you will get it by doing yourself. Then you can be proud of yourself by doing something the you never imaginate to do it.

Second of all, when you get staff done by your own can be a great example for so many kids in this world. Believe or not be an example for someone is the most accomplisment beacuase they want to do or be like you. Also by trying everyday something new can make you better. How this quote says "" Hard work beat talents when talents doesn't work hard"". Something useful is everyone learn new things by mistakes. Make mistakes is not a big problem, making a mistake means the you are trying to do it better and be better by learning how do it.

Third of all, the last but not least frienships have a lot with this, one question very important in here is How can I be sure the my friends are real?. Yes, probably that can be a problem that's why be yourself is the greastest accomplishment because friends can take you down with drugs, alcohol and bads things. That's doesn't mean the you can not have friends. That means you have to choose really well your friends because hypocristy exist maybe they want you down without future and great life. Hypocristy is the most danger thing in the world by hypocristy you can make people think about how they want to be or what they want to do.

In conclusion, doing yourself can make you better and open opportunites the you never imaginate. Try to do something the you love or like that's a good way to start to be yourself. Choosing what's good for you or what not and remember always fight for your dreams. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
227569D39F6D,"The job that I would want to visit is the zoo. Fist, because I wanna see what they do Second, because I want to learn new things. Additionally, because I want to learn how you treat the animals and how does it feel. My question that I choose was How is it like to work at the zoo is it hard or easy?. I choose this question question because working at the zoo it can be hard because you do a lot of things. I think it is hard because yo have to be going one place to another.

My first reason is that I wanna see what they do. I choose this because I want to learn how they treat the animals. I also want to learn about what happens when a animals get sick. I would want to visit the zoo because I wanna see different types of animals and I also wanna see how is it like to be working at the zoo. I also want to see what kind of medicine they give the animals. This is the reason why I choose that I wanna see what the workers in the zoo do.

My second reason is that I choose to visit the zoo because I want to learn new things. I choose this reason because I want to see the experience how it is like to work at the zoo when I grow up. I want to work at the zoo to learn new things for and example like what do you do when an animal get hurts or also what happens when a animal doesnt survive. I want to learn about new things that I havent experience before when I grow up. I chose this reason because learning new things is much better for you.

My last reason is the I want to learn how you treat the animals. I choose this reason because I want to to the animals when grow up and I wanna treat the well. I would want to visit the zoo and explore to see how it is like and also seeing how do you feel working at the zoo. I choose this reason because I wanna help animals and being nice to them. This is the reason why I choose this reason.

In conclusion the job that I would want to visit is the zoo. I wanna see what they do, I want to learn new things, and because I want to learn how yo treat animals. These are the reasons I choose these reasons.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
13FDCF58A955,"I currently don't really like doing school online. The main reason i don't like schools online is because i used to do it myself. I didn't really learn form doing school online. One of the main reasons why i was doing school online was because my parents didn't like public schools. So for that being said other student might like it but me personally i don't.

School online may help others then going to actual school. Maybe the person is going through something in school. Doing school at home my be easier for some students,

they probably learn quicker and probably finish school faster. Others may not work that way, some maybe work slower in school, so they wanna work at their own paste . Others may just wanna tryout school at home.

On the other note it's good for schools to do that. If some students were going on a trip they could easily do school on the road. I would help them stay on track with the class. or maybe the student did something bad in school that it would lead them to do school at home. Oh and if a student gets sick to the point to where he can't come to school ,and it was something bad they would do school at home.

To be completely honest i don't like this idea at all. It's because i did it for a good old 3 years, and it was a bad experience for me. I wouldn't remand it, but if you where going through somethings then yeah go for it. I like public school better then doing school online because i like to ask questions and see it myself in person. That's all i had to say, i'm not a fan of doing school online.       ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F2649F7F089F,"I will be honest with this. I know about politician just a litterbet but I don't know what? John Lubbock wrote about it the british naturalist and politician something. I will do is to try to tell you about this thing like politician it's control people on different ways like. we saying one persone it's runing to be a precident but he need suport of him own people on his party like suport what choese he had to make and see fro the people if you make people happy they will love you and they will vote fro you but if you don't do anything from then they don't vote for you. this mean you have to convencet the people or other work buy the people waith no the way you give money for you vote. The way. I mean to buy the people it's to do something from then and they will see if you are the best choses they can make or fro the country. Whent they see you trying to make the country better or fix something it's bad they will take the best choese fro the country evenben you will do something to the country but you need to be the precident frist and you promese you will do it! the british naturalist this mean the just the naturalist is whent the people come from other country and they stay longer to be a cityssent this mean him will be have to naturalisation from him con from and the new country him staying after him is done with naturalist him can vote whent the coutry has fro vote for any reason like we saying buy and sale of gun on the street. that can be right to do it. the type of stuff you can give a opinion now after you naturalist they are many people on the wrold they mouve to the new country just beacuse the economi and the politicion. they looking better oportunit on life. We can see all this on the goverment like the precident promesse him will do some with he play and never do it. they are other thing he say but he never make a work. I try my best to explant this my best example if I not wrong if the everything it going on on life.

I honest I feel like all this I write for the politician and naturalist I'm be worng or maybe not I never no but I di It my best and I hope the next time I will preper for this I can keep going text by text just taping stuff.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
DD91A86810BD,"March 2020/10

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Ms. Generic_Name

People consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Success have motivation to do new ideas even if they can not do it. They push them self to keep trying because it makes them stronger as a hum being. Being enthusiastic makes you confident, in want to do more thing's in life. people push them self on being enthusiastic, it makes them excited on being confident in them self. More you try the more you want to get interest in exploring.

Having enthusiasm makes you happy it only gives you have positive thoughts. There are great people in the world that will give you advice. Telling you that you can do it if you only put your heart into it you can get it. Even if you fail always keep trying, you most likely would not get it the first time. Seeing other people on their success makes you have enthusiasm and make you uncomplash your own dreams.

Now in days their are people that expect if they try on doing something once they can not succeed again. Humans' relay on other's for their own achievement. Not having motivation makes you not want to do anything and you will keep failing. If you fail and fail, feel sad and give up you can become depressed. As you stop putting in effort in things you lose interest and do not try.

Failure is what makes you strong so you do not give up on trying. Failing is what should push you to make improvement and know your strength. Tell yourself to always think positive never negative you should have enthusiasm because that is what makes you stronger. Who you are is how you make of it and having interest on new things makes you a believer in yourself. British Prime Minister Winston is whon showed people to not stop and believe in yourself when you are failing. Because failure is what's good.              ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C662BDD50395,"Have you ever made a really bad mistake and think you can never come back from it? You can always come back from a mistake. Duke Elligton the famous jazz legend always said ""a problem is a chance to do your best because you learn from your mistakes.

If you mess up and make a mistake you will learn not to do it again. It's better if you make mistakes insted of being perfect because you can't learn and better yourself. We all make mistakes once in a while that's why we learn from them. You shouldn't let your mistakes hold you down. You should let your mistakes better you. Don't try to be perfect. If you do you will just end up never learning from an experince. When you make a mistake, adapt to how you can fix it and don't make that same mistake. This is one of the reasons why a problem is a chance for you to do better. Another reason is You learn not to make the same mistake twice.

You make a mistake and you learn from it. It's fine if you make another mistake just don't makr the same mistake again. If you make the same mistake twice you could get in trouble. When you make a mistake and learn from it you grow. Don't take a mistake as a flaw. You become wiser from a mistake. You become a better and smarter person. This is why a problem is a chance for you to do better.

The last reason is you improve yourself. You let yourself learn more instead of feeling like you can't come back after that mistake. Your mistakes become positive because you learn so much. Mistakes were never meant to be flaws. They werer always meant to be learnd from. Mistakes help you become a better person by learning from them. Mistakes were made by succsesful people and they became famous basketball players, Singers, Football players, etc. Remeber that mistakes are to be learned from.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5
B2B6C25D967A,"I always say attitude is something that make big change. If you have good attitude maybe you always stay happy, because the people with good attitude never had problems because they take everything with calm, so you need to have a good attitude because that can help in the furure to open door,in

HIGH school, collage, univercity,and your job, you can ascending if you ascending you have more opportunities to make more money, you can make all that just with you attitude is easy to do.

If you have a nice attitude you never have problems because,some people thing fight is the most better way to resolve the problems. For example, other people thing different than me, they thing if you doest like to fight you are Hen, and they thing, they are better then everyone just because they like to fight. I thing is better be humble, relax,crazy ,funny, but always with a good vives, never with negative you need to be happy how you wanty with you want. That no matter what other people say.

positive attitude is the key to be success in life, sometimes others people say that can make feel bad they doest thing before of say that, they doest thing, if how you are going to feel good when you listen to her, or ,hem ,But need to thing about that if you want to do you can do. Dont listen to the people with negative thougtht. Everything is on you own if you want to do you can do never say, I can do it,before stard to do remenber if something is hard you are going to the right way.

Some people always go over you, dont want to see you happy,they try to puch you on the bad things, all because you are,amazing with everybudy you are friendly and they dont like that but is no your problem,some times when you no talk with no one they thing you are a bad person,if they maybe know how you are. So live your life how you want, life your life on your own way be happy with your .

The most important thing be with a good attitude

Everything is on your own. If you wanna have a better future,or life you need to make an effort,because nothing iss easy in the life. if you have goog attitude you can do everthing you want.

You need to give all your effort because if you no try can no due,for example. many people born poor but, they decite to efort they dreams. they trying and trying they never stop to trying and now theey are profetionals. Another example. The soccer player some of they born in colonies poor,and that no metter for they,they never stop of following they dreams. So now the has everything of want when they want so if they try so hard we can do to. They do everything because they have a good attitude ,if they born poor and now they are rich we can do to, never stop of fallowing you dreams with effort, sacrice,a good attitude everything is posible. You have the key on your on. attitude is the key to be success.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
16DEF72E220A,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But I don't think that it would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because, there are many reasons that the students could not able to learn home by yourself in online; which are that some problems, and communicating. Also there are more position to I disagree and agree with this argument.

Firstable, I think the students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, it would not benefit for the studehts, because of the students could have some question that they don't know. And if someone who dont' teach with them, they cannot learn that more understable. And they migth cannot catch up their late works, because of they don't help anybody. I have an examples of that the girl who has taken an online classes, and she didn't go to the school, because she thought, the online class is better than to learn subjects and it doesn't have to do that everyday and she can study her subject whenever day she could. But she have to her exam in the school, and she didn't study as well as can't catch up her study work. Now she stopped to take an online class in the home and go to school. So, in my opinion, even thought the online class is giving you as more free time but if you can't study by yourself, It couldn't help you that learn.

Also, the students can't communicate with other students. It means that the student can't study with other students that they can't make some friends and could not be an active just like some other students. Also, it will be impact their behaviour that they'll be more lonely. Because the students behaivior is always changing and easy to get used to their environment, especially the high school students. Therefore, i disagree to attend classes from home by way of the online and video conferencing benefit for the students.

On the other hand, the online class is not really useless thing that for the students. Of course, It should be has some advantegious way to attend online and video class, which are it helps that the students could be more mature and more focusing on their work. And they have more free time because the student doesn't have to this everyday as a school, they can do that whatever time to working on it. So, we don't have to hold one point of view, we should try that two other sides. For examples, the every students are different way to study, we don't have to demand to do only one way,

they might be more interest with the online, video class and the other students could be more enjoy to attend this class. Consequently, every students who enjoy that much, they could take that class much easily to study in their home.

In conclusion, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, but not all of students, because they all have a different way to study and somehow the student will need some help to support their what they are studying. In that case, students might be trying to give up to study alone. Therefore, the student might think very well to thier option to to attend classes from the home.         ",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
062AE7A344D3,"people who value self-reliance

People who valus self-reiance defin it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. should they seenk guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter? Take a position on this issue. support your response with reasons and specific examples.

First people who value stuff,cloth,shoes,phone and more. another thing that people value things is there family friend. Then they also value there house money. Everyone value something different. Some people have different cast. Everyone has to do different things in there self. If she had a pair of shoes that she had that are value $100 then she is going to value you because she would want to know,she would get mad or upset that her shoes get dirty or if there shoes get mess.

If the girl bought a pair of shoes for $100 she would be very upset because some girls don't ways there money on

$100 dollars pairs of shoes. If a guy bought appear of Nike,FIA,Adidas,Jordan,KD or something the guys will get made if there shoes cost more then $300 dollars and it got ruined. The guys hate when people mess around with there shoes and they ruin it. They don't like stepping in mud and they don't doing outside work.

If the guys are going to do outside work they should of bought in less expanse shoes not high price shoes. If they are going to work they should of boughting less expanve shoes like $20-50 not more then that so we could do alot of differnt things. Some people need to know about that shouldn't buy high price stuff they have to buy less its better if they do not buy high price shoes because they can work and bein looking at there shoes everysingle time and saying don't get my shoes dirty.

When teenage kids start work there like some I don't want to work but they should work becuse some teenger are like i want this no i this these expanve shoes. They are really exsenve stuff that alot of teenger want and like some just like to do differnt thing bought things they should not buy. Kids need to work so they now how much thing are because if are just asking and asking for stuff thats not going to work out wall there going to asking for really expance things that would not like.

Everyone needs to know how much things are and work for it and not ask because that is how they are going to value something. If they buy it with there money they will know and how they need too take care of it and not buy high price stuff. They more that kids start working and not asking there parent it would be better because the kids would be done.

I am working and i like to save my money because i can buy stuff that i need or anything but if someone buys me something i am going to value it becasue they took there time to come and bought something for me. like i did i bought my friend some pair of airpod and i bought my self some pair but when i gave it to him i said here is the pair of airpods that i got you for chrismas i wish you the best. It was better if bought him the pairs of airpods and not someone eles. He was so happy that i bought him a pair of airpods and i was his first girlfriend to and know that i am moving i told him and got sad .He told me i am very valued to him because i am all ways there for him and he is alllways there for me too. My vaule is my sister and my friend rj becasue of him i founf my true love. He makes me happy everyday i get to do alot of really differnt expernts and do fun things with him outside the school. He is the best I love him so much in all my heart because of him he has made me happy everyday no matter if i amsad or upset or anything.        ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
F8FE41D805D0,"Technology has gotten better through out the years in every ways. Many people believe that technology has a negative affect on peoples lives. I believe that technology has a positive effect on peoples lives in many ways.

The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a positive effects on people's lives. The reason why technology has a positive effect on people is because it makes most people's life easier and there're cars that drive for you. For example, now a days you can order your grocery online and just pick it up at the store in a certain amount of time. This type of service allows people to be more confident on technology and it saves you some time. Therefore, manny people take advantage of the technology and use it for goods.

In adition to that, technology allows you to get to place faster and safer. For example, they have cars that are design to drive by themselves. This is a positive effet because some people dont like driving in traffic and they now have the car to do that for them. Therefore, when you are in a party and you had drank toomuch you can call a taxi or if you have an advance that can drive by itself, you can take it. There're many ways technology can be helpfull in society.

In clonclusion technology can be a positive and negative effect in peoples lives. Knowing how to utilies it in the right time and place can be helpful. But, not knowing how to use it can cost you bad things. Overall i believe thta technology can cure and save people from lots of things. To conclude, echnology is great, and it will grow bigger and bigger in the future.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
9E478C982AD0,"Dear. principal

I'll say the policy #1 because student its a good rule that student can only use there cell phone during the lunch and other free time so that the student can do something that make them fun during lunch time. its also good because student uses there phone to call there parent to pick them up or they forgot something on there house he or she can just call there parent to bring it to school.

Bring cell phone in school is important because cell phone is not just for texting its also for emergency for your parent if you need something or you have to go somewhere after school. you can also call and tell them that don't pick me up because I'm going to my friend house and i call you when you have to pick me up.

by: one of the student",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
A6BE0FAFA04B,"Technology has given us humans positive and negavtive effects in life. For example Bullying is serious and negavtive effect on us, Bullying isn't just physical contact there is cyber bullying and that's were the technology come in. Another negative effect that technology has given us is No Contact, The new genration does not have contact as like people would have had before. We need contact becuase it shows that we can work with people and it also shows that we are social.

One positive thing about technology is new research for example now a days we can just go on google and search up things we might need help with, For example if you are confused over a topic or you want to know a little bit more about it you can just go on google and search it up. Another positive effect technology has given us is Locations, Locations is a part of everyday's life for example if you need to go somewhere you can just go on your phone and search up the name of the place where you want to go. Technology is something we need now a days because there's creations all over the world being created everyday.

Human contact is what we expect but now a days we can't find that because it either go on snapchat, instagram, or add a friend on facebook even adults do this not just kids and teens. Human contact is something that we need everywhere in life we need these things at work,school,sports teams and more. So human contact can be limited now days but there isn't any change becaue more and more techonlogy keeps coming towards our way and we can't stop it.

In conclusion this is what I think about technology ive given positive and negative feed back about technology on human contact.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
7D94F809823A,"Many people agree, that the use of technology brings a positive impact by allowing people to complete many task like. looking for information, buying a book,

buying video games, and shopping. and looking for technology as a way to communicate which can limit the opportunities to use verbal communication.

I strongly disagree with this statement on the use of technology, because it limits the amount of outside interactions and technology can do everything for you. For example, now people mostly use text as a way to communicate with someone through social media. using only this form of communication can limit the use of verbal communication with a person. Resulting in negative relationships with a person causing misunderstandings and negative relationships. avioding verbal interactions is very bad for somone. Technology can also be damaging for the health.

Technology be both physically and emotionally unhealthy. For Instance the use of so much technology can damage the eyes and can cause brain damage this can result to unhealthy problems in the future. On the other hand people think that by using there phones, tablets and computers. They do not have to be mobile and do a task by themselves with no technology. By sitting around and not getting up to go out and finish a task can lead to loss of energy and many other physical problems. The lack of day to day verbal communication can cause negative emotions. For instance not verbally talking to people can make someone feel lonely and unhappy.

Using technology as a way to purchase things and avoiding to go to the stores can have some negative outcomes. For Example purchasing an electronic on a website and having it delivered it can result to being broken, missing pieces, and can be the wrong thing this can lead to loss of money and can lead to no possible refunds. people use this as way to shop for food, clothes, and books instead of being able to feel the object or know the quality of the item it self or asking an employee about the items pros and cons.

In conclusion, Many people agree that technology allows them to complete many tasks without having to come in contact with others. as a result Technology has a negative impact on people limiting contact with person to person resulting to negative impacts on there day to day life, Although, technology is smart it is always best idea is to be able to do things more off technology and using more verbal communication with a people rather then a phone or computer using verbal communication is a best way to being positive out comes and being able to go to a store instead of relying on technology.         ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
D5916B1F52BB,"My Presentation For Elementary Students

My Teacher Wanted me to Share a Lesson With Elementary Students

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Next, I told The Students, What I was going to present to Them. it's very Important to Speak With The Students About Something interested That They Would Love, to hear About. I told The Students What They Want to be when they grow up, They said I

Want to be a Police Officer one Day. The other one said He Wanted to be a fighter fighter. And I told Them to Become a police officer or a Fighter Fighter They need to graduate high School And Get a Degree For College And Take Those Classes, to have a Good Job for The Rest of Their life's. Finally When My Presentation Was Almost over Suddenly' The Students Ask me Those That I'm going to Take Do I have to Past Those Certain Classes to Get my Degree, Also I Said it's Not That Easy to Have Your Dream Job That You Want. You Have to Work For it And Earn it And Try Everything You Could We're You Want to Be. Motivate Your Self, Push Your Self If You want Your Career that you want Then, Always Believe in Your Self When You Have a Dream Career Don't Give up on it. When You Give up on Something You're Not Going To succeed in Life. I'll Tell My Self To Get Back Up On Your Feet And Chase Your Dream. But in Life there's No Second Chance. Last, When You Finally Acheive Your Dream Job You Can Thank Your Self for Believing in Your Self and Working, Hard every day. because After All The Struggle, You Been Putting Your Self to Succeed And That's Why you Are We're at And Always Chase Your Goals to Succeed.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
FC9DA73D1EA0,"Even in classroom everything catch student's attention!

Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?

I strongly believe that there is no benefits from attending to classes from home. Next I am going to illustrate three reasons for saying that. First, by taking online classes at the end of the semester students do not learn anything. Second, students most of the time get distract very easily, they don't focus on what they are suppose to be focusing on. Last , is more convenient when someone is teaching you literally face to face.

To begin with, sometimes students don't learn anything in classroom imagine in front of a computer.

In other words, being at home students will do everything in a rush just to finish it quickly and go do something else. Another consequence is that they will not put any interest in the classes and later, when the time to show your knowledge comes, they will not know what to do.

For Example, in my case when I am learning something something in the computer I feel like the light of the computer blocks my mind.

To continue, is very easily for students to get distracted by something. Taking online classes at home means having access to any electronic device to distract them like, cell phones, same computer that you are using, TV, etc. For example, sometimes when your family sees you at home they will tell you to take care of your siblings; the student will have to be supervising the kids and not focusing enough in the classes. imagine that in the classroom friends distract students at home that will be more terrible because young students always have friends playing video games at their home.

At last, is more convenient to be learning in a classroom where you can see the teacher. For example, In my case I like to interact with the teacher and my classmate about the topic that we are learning, to get better understanding and sometimes to get other viewpoints. Therefore, is more efficiently to be seeing the teacher literally teaching you to get all the knowledge needed to pass the classes. Most of the time that students are learning somethings in the computer they tend to forget it right away.

In conclusion, being in a classroom and interacting with the teacher and classmate is the best way of learning, getting all the information needed to pass the classes. By taking online classes at home the only thing that is going to happen is losing the semester by not being able to score what is needed to pass.

Electronic distraction is more available at home and get students attention very easily.

Attending to a classroom is more convenient and better way of learning and get educated the way it should be. It is not just about classes but also how to interact with people and and everything that is needed outside in the world to be educated and successful in life.  ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
8A9E12ADD91C,"Should the aouthor Ralph Waldo Emerson, is righ what he was wrote.?

If you already learn something new and you want to tray again make sure to try and make little of different because is not really good idea alway making the same thing in your life.

Alway keeping ahead and don't look back to the passed. Mr Ralph waldo Emrson, is traing to explain to us what is good to make. If you already was mastered we can not just put only that when we can learn something new in our life.

First of all,it is important to remember what you already learn, but is not just alway traing to make only the same thing that you ready was mastered belond and yu want to make againg. I agree what Mr. Ralph Waldo Emerson just said. It is really good when you are thinking and just thinking tomaking somting new thing then you will be product for your future. We getting to remember makin a new thing is alway important. Also you will get to open your brain assun u look and go ahead.

Secondly, I am disagree to try the same thing that you already get learned in the passed in your life. whatever you already learned don't have to reapead again and again only that.

Because you is not learning new thing you will not get progreesiible for you future when you going grow up. If you already was mastered don't has to go at the passed and only wrote alway the same thing in your present.

In conclution, It is important keeping at from and don't only try to make something beyend that you already get done .Is good use what you having ready learned, but you should go and trying new thing. Acording to Mr, ralph Waldo Emerson wrote . You will never grow up if you try to making only the sme thing beyond that you just got ready leaned. whatever you just got leaned don't mean that you only have to wrote only that. when you can lean show and making new thing .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ",3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
55C7EC027A88,"Lately many people have said students should have a shorter summer vacation about 45% of people have. They think it would be better for students so they don't forget what they learn the year before when the come back in the fall. They think students should have year-round schools, but is that a really good idea? Well here are many reasons why there shouldn't and why it would be a horrible idea. Many people think that students shouldn't have to year-round schools because the students might have a summer job, It's no enough time, they shouldn't have to worry school for that long, and it's just too many things for them to remember.

Many students normally middle schoolers and high schoolers have to work during the summer. Many students have to work after school and it's just to much for them. Some might work because the need to help their families with money, others to buy something they really want or need, and some is so when they get out of high school and they can have enough money to get into collage. Whatever the reason may be they need the three month summer vacation so they can have more money to do whatever they need with it and have a year-round school will not help them because after work they need to do homework. About 85% of students that work and have go to go school will have to stay up really late so they can do thier homework. Students often do not get enough sleep. They stay up late night hours doing homework , project or studying. In reality it's just too much work for students to keep up with school for that long.

A three to four weeks for summer vacation is just not enough for students, not even teachers. They deserve a longer summer vacation after all the hard work they have done for those nine months, the least they could get is a three month vacation. They just need to relax and take care of themselves because they sometimes be stressing out too much. Which that could lead to bad health and many other problems. They need a longer vacation because three to four week is not enough. What if they want to travel they can't not for long so they can't really enjoy it. They also need to spend more time with their families, many just don't be as close to them because they are too focus in school. They just a well needed vacation of no more stress for three months.

Another reason why a year-round school is not the greatest idea is that it's just too much for students and teachers to remember. Students already need to remember a lot to pass the SOL. Having a year of school will just keep adding too that. It's also a lot of work for students to be doing. A lot of worksheets, tests, quizes, projects, and for teachers too they need to be planning the next class and need to be grading a lot of papers. Plus another thing to think of is what about summer school? For the students that didn't pass the SOL or the class. When or how will they have the time to pass? There's a lot of things that should be planned out first.

On the other hand I get why it would be nice to be in a year-round school. Students wouldn't forget as much things. Normally when students come back in the fall they are clue-less of what the learned three months ago. A year-round school will decrease that. Students would also get to see their friends more. Often many students don't get to see their friends during summer vacation. For the students that need it, they could get extra help. Also for the students that really like to learn new things this would be a great time too.

However even though all that would be kind of nice. We don't know if the decrease of students forgetting things will actually work because not many students even touch their backpack during any vacation so they would most likely will forget a lot of things either ways. Nowdays even though students might not see their friends. They still manage to text or facetime. Maybe some students might have a car and will be able to go vist them or hang out for a bit. If students need extra help they can get a tourter for that extra help that they may need and if we have a year-round school for them it wouldn't be fair for the other students that do not need that extra help. If they really want to learn new things they can go to classes somewhere for whatever they would like to learn. It's just more better having a three month break.

That's why there shouldn't have a year-round school there just wouldn't be much of benefits. It'll most likey stay with the same problems or even worse. That's why there should be a year-round school because students might have a job, it's not enough time for them, they shouldn't have to worry about school for that long, and they just would have to remember too many things.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
9F27EAC1E27D,"How people live their life is up to them whether to follow their own decisions, or seek guidance from experts and authorities for life's important matters. People should make their own decisions because relying on others will make you less self-sufficient and you should develop your own self-identity not from the choices of other people, although some people may say that people who seek guidance from experts are smarter than people who do not.

People should be able to rely on their own decisions on life, so that they do not become less self-sufficient in the choices that they make. Firstly if you keep relying on others than you become someone who can not do anything on their own without the help of other people. Another reason would be that people might think you are unable to do simple tasks in life because you relay on other people too much. Lastly self-sufficiently is an important skill that everyone should have through-out their life. Your past choices defines who are you today, so if you relay on others too much than you become a different kind of person you once were

Other people who spend their whole life heavily relaying on other people develop no self-identity of their own. I highly doubt that Tesla or Einstein relayed on anyone if not no one on the work that they did. Additionally if you do not have a self-identity people will not remember who you are. Secondly if you always have people telling you the answers in life it is hard to live without those people who helped you in the first place. Finally always become a person who does not have to relay on others for the sake of your own well being. You should always listen to your brain and not seek out help too much, or it will affect your life in very bad ways

Still, some may say that people who seek help from experts are smarter than people who do not. That people who seek out help will be more informed in life, therefore they do not have to worry about the things they do not know. This may be true but it's better to find the answer on your own than to always ask for help from experts.

In the end you shouldn't rely on other people too much because it will be harder to be more self-sufficient and it will be harder to develop your own self-identity. People should be inclined to make their own decisions in life whether they like it or not.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.0,3.5
72A69C1B34A8,"I think students should have the opportunity to choose their own classes as electives rather than taking a class in the arts because if they were assigned to a class they know nothing about then that would be setting them up for failure and I do strongly believe that is not the right way to go about things especially in the school district. We cannot let the students fail because it is important to have something to look forward to when they arrive to school. It is a definite requirement for students to take classes such as music, drama, and art however, it would be fair to let them decide on their own behalf. Once a students picks the class they would hopeful and full of joy to attend to it everyday. I believe that no matter what a student can decide what they believe in and have no dought about it. The students should have the ability to be successful in school if they put their minds into it.

Although if the counclours put students in the classes they dislike in my opinion, the student will most likely not attend to the classes they were assigned to. Furthermore It would be appropriate to encourage students to choose the right fit class they would want to enroll in. I challenge you to go through with this action to let the students decide on their own.

in conclusion, given this opportunity for the students it will increase the satisfaction rate and expand on more ideas for the school in the future. The students will become positive and get good grades because they made a decision that could possibly impact their future goals. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
9EBCC1131B13,"As we have two different people, we have two types of parents that one of them, they believe and they force their children that should take some classes like music, drama, or an art class instead of elective classes. But another parents they do not believe and force them to take those classes. On the other hand we have some students that they like to take elective classes instead of those classes; and in opposite, we have students that they do not like to take elective classes.

In general, as we know the place of schools, we can easily discover that students need have some classes that they want to be and they like to enjoy it and has fun and exciting for them. Here are some reasons that is showed why they have to take those classes; like music, a drama, or an art class. First reason is if they took those classes, they can decrease their stress that they have in their life and their school. Second reason is, they can easily figure out what skills are they have in their life and out of the main classes in school. Third reason is, if they really learned from those classes, they can teach to another persons and get money for that. Fourth reason is, it is good for their health from all aspects. Fifth reason is, it gives them energy; so they can always be active in their life specially in their school.

First, on the other hand, some students is special because maybe they came from another country or have special condition that they not required to take those classes because they have to graduate or because of their English language; so they have to study and practice more; and they can not require to take those classes. They have to take main and elective classes that their counselor suggested to them. for example, I came from another country so I have to practice more in my English language and other main classes that I have in school, for these reasons I could not take an art, music or a drama class.

Second, another students just take those classes because their parents want to, so these students can not learn and enjoy from those classes and even they will hate from those classes. for example, I saw my friends that he took a music class but he did not like that, but their parents force and required him to take that class, in summary he fell from all classes that he had in his school, and finally he did not graduate from school because of that.

Third, some students that know English language include writing, speaking and listening, and has all A's in their main classes like Physics, Math and Chemistry and another main classes, they can take music, an art or a drama class. As I said some benefit of those classes on above, they can improve their skills and they can go in forward to their life that they want to be.

Finally, those classes can be help students a lot, but it has hinge on their status, and no one should not force students to take those classes unless they want to and they like to take those classes.

In conclusion, those classes should not be compulsory, because in general, each work should has be with love, until we can learn and help others and improve ourselves.                                           ",4.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
E56AA3BD89AD,"If I could go any where in the world I would go to France. The reason I would go to France is because a lot of people said that

France was a romantic and beautiful place to go. And the food there is amazing in France they also have a really good accent. But the main reason i want to go to France is because of the thing to see their stuff like the ifle tower. the other reason is to meet other people so in that case i would have to travel on a day theres going to be a lot of people.

The reason I would go to France is to have the knowledge to be able to tell someone about how it changes you and how it's like and different temperature like how the country is to going to change on bad temperature their might just a small amount of people outside. On a good day there is going to a people are walking around having fun. You also try to see if the people their nice or mean to other people.

If I ever had a choice to go to France I would say yes and when I get the first thing i would try is there food. Because a lot of people said that the food in France is delicious so I thought what if i try to get my own opinion. To me it feels good to be apart of something it doesn't feel good to be the third wheel just staying back watching them give there feedback but have no clue what they'er talking about.

The animals in France are not that dangerous and the cats and dogs are exreamly cute. Like chuwawas are so cute and the most known animals in France at lest that what i have seen on television. Most people in France like animals and chuwawas design which makes them look better.

I hope after reading this prompt you know more about France and it also persuade you to go visit France. France is also a beautiful place to visit with a wife or girlfriend to enjoy or relax with your loved ones. I hoped you liked my prompt and enjoy reading it.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
F55F4FD90B3C,"Some schools used cell phone during classroom because for educational purposes. If students doesn't used cell phone during class, how can students find information about the assignment. Some school doesn't allow students to used cell phone because the teachers says that students can find the information in books. Students says that by using cell phone is much easier to find information than in books.

Some teachers allow students to use cell phone during class so that students can find information easier. If students used books, some of the students can't even find the information that the students needed. for example, students that used cell phone is more likely to finish earlier than students that using books. in additions, Cell phone have more information than book. So, teachers should allow students to used cell phone during class for educational purposes.

Schools should allow the students to used cell phone in the class, so that students can work much faster and easier. If schools doesn't allow the students used phone in the class, some students going to have a hard time to work and students is going to take to much time on the assignment. Lots of students prefer cell phone because it much easier to find information. If students used books, students will take time to go back and forth and find the information that the students needed. Schools should allow the students to used cell phone in the class.

Technology is getting efficient and faster, so schools should let students used the technology so that students can get more information and can search any assignment that students need. Technology is adding new stuff every day, so that the students can learn something new every day. If students used the technology, students can get smarter and technology will improve every day. If students used books, students will never learn new things and students will have the same information. Schools should let the students use the technology so that the students will have more knowledge.

In conclusion, Teachers should not keep giving students books to study because students will never learn new thing in life. In addition, school should let students used technology in the classroom so that students will undertand technology and new information. Schools should improve the technology for the students, so that students can work faster. Technology will improve and students will get smarter, so that shools will provide technology for students.",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
E22AC96B8B1D,"I agree what Emerson is talking about because nobody should ever tell you that you can not be yourself or feel wrong about them self. if you want to be a doctor then go head make your dream come true or if you want to be a nurse then go head do not let anyone stop you because at the end of the day your the who wants to make your dream come true and who wants to be a better person in life and who wants to make your family proud of you of, what you have become, what you have been working hard for. if you want to be a nurse then you will need to work really hard and study if you want to get to that level and to that point. if people do not like who you are and they think bad about you do not let to them bring you down keep doing you prove to them that you do not need them in your life and that you can do better without them

Because your the one who wants to be a better person in life. if people wanna say stuff behind your back igone them beacuse they are the ones who are gonna feel bad about them self. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
DCB9EAF9C92A,"No i think students should not have any cell phones at school at all because there could a lot of noises , and maybe it could be distracting to other students . That's why i think students should not have cell phones during the school time .

To begin with student should not have cell phones during the school time because it could make a lot of noises . so if you have a cell phone right and your in class and its in high volume and you receive a call or a text message that's not right because teachers are trying to teach you and all your doing is making noise . That's why i think we should not have cell phones during the school time .

In addition i think we should not have cell phones in school hours because it could be distracting to the students or even the teachers , because last week there was a girl texting during class and the teacher saw her so he had to stop his lesson and take her phone away and rite her a referral . So that's distracting and a waist of time isn't it. That's why i think they should not have cell phones during school hours because its distracting .

Those are the reasons why they should not allow cell phones during the school hours because is distracting and it makes to many noises .",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
C858F547F2AD,"Do you like Kpop? Well guess what Korea is the home of Kpop and it's a great expeirince. Over all korea is a great place to visit. These are the reason why I would love to go to Korea beacuse of there food, the beautiful places, and the time I can get to myself.

One reason, why I love Korea as much is beacuse of the food. The food in Korea is so tasty for example the korean BBQ (Barbeque). Korean BBQ'S is where everyone sits down at a table order some raw meat, they also get some side dishes like to go with it. Once they get the raw meat they cook it have ever they want, in the small grill in the mibble of the table. Kimchi is another type of food that I like beacuse it's spicy and I love spicy foods. But the best part adout the food in Korea is the street food beacuse it's so cheap but yet so tasty that I could die for it.

Another reason, is the beautiful places in Korea. Visiting the Han River a great first place to go when you get to Korea. Han River has lots of beautiful pink bloosom tree's which are great for taking photograghs. Generic_City is a city that is very populated with people. Generic_City is just like California here in the United State beacuse it's where all the famous people live at. The best part of Generic_City is the performances beacuse you get to see so many talented people show off there skills with rapping, dancing, and singing. The beaches in Korea are a great place for families to have bonding time together, especially in Busan.

Finally, the best part is ""me time"" which means I can get time for myself. Decent hotels are really hard to find but every single hotel in Korea looks amazing from the inside and from the outside. Every single thing in the hotel in is clean beacuse korean people don't like to be messy they love to be organized. The relaxition spa's are great, to have some ""me time"" they do foot massages, faciaul treatment and more. Yoga is even more relaxing then anything else beacuse it helps your mind conitrait and balance its self in order to distress. These are the main things I suggest you to do if you want to realease the stress and have some ""me time"".

In conlusion, I suggest you to take a trip to korea. One, is beacuse the food is great, especially the street food. Second, it have the most amazing places to visit like Han River. Last but not least, is the relaxation time i can get for myself. Well its time for me to catch a flight to korea. I hope i see you there too. You might even chatch a glipse of your favorite Kpop idol.",4.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
48837626943D,"I agree with the principal because some school work may include working together as a team and if they do an activity like sports,they can learn now things like find different ways to score or if they are losing they find ways to comeback. And i think its a good idea for students to participate in a extracurricular activity because they can spend time with friends or you can join a club that can help you with your homework and if you want to play a sport,you can sigh up for a activity that doesnt need to tryout for that sport And if you want to get some college credits then you can sigh up for an activity that can help you get some college credit a good way to get some,there is multiple ways to get some college credits like a good one is learning a language that is a good way to some college credit. you have nothing to do after school you can join an activity that can keep you busy. And this is why i agree with the principal because it can help us in the further on in life.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
DC467256CD82,"Technology, 21st centuries finest product. nearly everyone loves technology, is it really that beautiful? When i was a kid people used to say ""technology will end our social life."" I didnt believe that then, but now i see what they were trying to say.

Primarily technology's goal is to make certain tasks easier, not to make us anti-social or make us obese. In my opinion technology has a great potential, and we are not using it to the full potential, we are supposed to use it to make simple task easier, but people are spoiling this potential by instead of making our own food we now order it from a restaurant which is ten times unhealthier. Another thing that is a huge problem is people building their life around technology, if they lose that technology they think they'll die. Everyone uses social apps on their phone, and that's a huge issue because that is one of the main reasons of people choosing social media over having conversations face to face.

Secondly, technology has it's pros as it has it's cons. One of the main advantages of technology is minimizing the waste of time in simple daily life tasks. For example, before technology people used to communicate with mails which took a long time to arrive at the designated place, however currently you can shorten that whole process to only a minute or two. Also with technology we can make waste free houses, cars, planes, and many other things by making them operate with electricity rather than fossil fuels which harms our planet. We can harvest electrical energy by solar panels, wind turbines, hydroelectric turbines. Another great thing about harvesting electrical energy is that they are infinite unless a disaster happens and suddenly all our water vaporizes or the sun gets blocked or the wind stops blowing. Until disasters like those happens we are good to go with waste free energy.

Third of all I think that technology is a great invention for the human kind. Although it has multiple harmful effects for people, the way to cure those are as easy. If we stop building our life around social media or technology, and keep technology as just a secondary communication device. Technology has come a far way from where it started. Once it was used just to power a light bulb, now its used to power our cars, houses, phones, cities, everything you see that is human built has some sort of technology in it.

Finally all these great inventions, all of these dazzling things took our attention and isolated us from the others. I think that technology is a brilliant invention but also it is a very harmful one for our social life. Human is a social creature by it's nature, if something blocks the socializing part of being human it will end badly. If someone tries to change a creature's nature it will try to avoid it, for thousands of years it has evolved to its current state, and now we are trying to change it... All Im trying to point out is technology is a beneficial element of our life but social-life is not one of them.                                                  ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
8AF043C98622,"During years had been existed a question among be yourself and be like the people wants you to be; in this time I'm agree with the author when he say,"" to be yourself is the greatest accomplishment in this world that is trying constantly to make you someone else,"" because there is a lot of people that shows indifference with you, only because of the way you think , or for simples things like how you wear, the music you like, or how you like to live.

Be yourself is one of the best things that exists in this world, because you don't have to act different in front of the other people just to be accepted, one of the advantages to be yourself is, if you are loved by someone for how you are, you don't be afraid to hurt that person because of your bad actions.

Otherwise, we also can get benefits for being how the world wants you to be, for example in your job, you are getting pay for all your effort working hard although you want to do it or not.

Nevertheless, in this world we alway are controlled by someone no matter what. Beliefs, the law, or parents; and it's necessary to be controlled because they are teaching us how we have to be in a good way.

Although there are obstacles that are trying to not let you to be yourself, always is better no matter what is in front of you, it feels confortable without conceal of nobody, that's why I think to be yourself is the greatest accomplishment.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0
736E8C8444E6,"Had the technology a negative or positive effects on people's lives? People are having a negative effects with the technology, I think people can't control it. At this time everybody are forgeting how beutiful is lives with out technology. We can do alot of things with out it. For example: Play outside with friends, go to libraries, and stay outside with natural. Some people say the kids have to have limitation of what they doing on they computer or cells phones. On the other side people say that is good for teenager having not limitation because they can learn more. I think teenager need a limitation of what they doing in the phones. Furthermore parents should cheking what they doing in the internet.

However, some people think is good for teenager not having a limitation because they learn more for their future. On the other hand some people say that that tenenager can't complete a taskd with out having contact with other person. I thinbk having a conversition with other is good because you get to know that person and also get stronger the relationship. When you meet a strager in the internet is dangeous, not everyone is a good person. Some parents think that the kids are just playing in the internets but they do not. I think having a conversiation to you or playing games without speaking I think that have a limitation until you know well that person.

In addition, sometimes people used to buy alot of things from the internet without knowing that person, that is dangerous. People that are seeling on wedsides that always offer what the really have or maybe they just want the money. If you going to buy anything for the internet just make sure the wedside is safes. Buying staff for the internet is getting wrong because people do not want to go aout and spend time with family. Since wedsides liike Amazon, Ebay, and others came up people atart get all they need from wedside. Bad people are used this on favor to them, they are creating so many fake wedsides to racket people.

To continue with, I think a good way to get the kid out the technology is take them to have fun outside like hand out with friends, having friends in a computer like into a videogame or a social media is not healty for the kids. You have to get to know the person before play or talk to them. Sometimes people trick the kids ask them to do bad things.

That why technology shoul not be allow for kid at all or if parents decide to give a cells phone or a computer always have to be a limitation.

Technology does not aloww people to complete task with out haave a contact with others. I think this is having a negative effects on people lives, people are getting racket because they used to maney wedsides. Wedsides are not save you have to have a limitation and also take care of the like. Kid are also getting into the technology they are losing their childhooh. Furthermore parents have to a limitation on their kids and put a limit on them.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
3766B7A3A5E0,"There are many different ways to look at this statement. Even though Mr Lubbock does make an excellent point in his argument I do not support it. I believe that our characteristic traits have a lot to do with the people that we choose to surround ourselves with. We have all been influenced in a certain way by someone. Whether if that was being convinced into doing something that we didn't want to do or if it we were given a confidence boost to tackle the challenge ahead of us.

There have been many cases where someone gets into a lot of trouble by doing something that they didnt want to do. They were brainwashed into doing what everyone around them told them to do because they were the people who they truly trusted. But in the end they where just let down by them. For example there are many known cases where some innocent teenager gets a drug addiction because they were influenced to do them by the people who they were surrounding themselves with. This one poor decision has now changed that persons entire life by someone who they probably wont even remember their name in ten years. They wont get the opportunity to play in any sports teams because of their current state. People will look down on them because of what they have done in the past. They wont get the same job opportunities as other people because of their mental and physical state.

Because of this we should be able to love ourselves the way we are and we shouldnt need the influence of people around us to shape our lives, we should be forward and honest with people, if you dont want to do something they that are telling you to do you need to build up your confidence and tell them that you wont get involved in such a thing.

Does this mean that you will loose a couple friendships? Sure but at least you did what was right and you were able to take control over your life and make what you think are the right decisions. Now that person is probably going to get into a lot of trouble by what they have done but you wont because you were able to take matter into your own hands and do what was right for your future.

In conclusion take control over your own life and dont do what everyone tells you to do. Go with your instinct and if you believe that something is wrong then dont do it because it might change your future for ever for the better or for the worst. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
1F28812EE23D,"This assay is going to be about a thing that some businesses are doing which is to make a four day work week adding two hours to the regular work days. This essay will have my opinion if we should implement this idea in my school or not. I will talk about some advantages and disadvantages about the implement of this idea to my school. I will suggest some action that a shool should take before the implementing of this idea of this idea.

Imagine that you recieve a letter from your school saying that they are planning implement and idea which is to make students come to school four days instead of five adding two hours to the normal day of school. I disagree with this idea because it will affect my school which is a high school, instead of helping it. The first thing that will be affected will be the after school program and activities. If my school add two hours to our schedule each day will consist in ten hours, so students will be more tired and less student will be interest in involving in after school programs so the school might cancel them. I would said that it will affect a high school especially because there are a lot of juniors and siniors that work after school and it can cause to most of them to quit their jobs.

Implementing this idea to our school have some advantages and disadvantages as well. One advantage of adding two hours to our schedule are that we will have more time to do our work in school because classes should be longer. Another advantage is that this idea help to conserve energy and resources of the school. A disadvantage is that after school programs might be closed because not so many people will be interested in that. The other disadvantage is that some students might have to change their jobs hour which is not easy and some of them would have to opt for quiting their jobs.

Before adding this idea to my school or any school they should ake some actions before. First the school staff should make a meeting to discuss the idea. Then they should make another meeting but this time including the parents of the students. In which they explain to them in what the idea consist. Next they should send a letter home in which the idea is well explained but this time parents have to sign the letter and say wether they agree to the implement of the idea or desagree. Finally after doing all this now the school can decide wether the idea is being implemented or no.

In conclusion I disagree with implementing this idea to my school because it will affect the school instead of helping it. I would say that this idea have a lot of desadvantages too. For example the school might cancel after school activities, some students might lose their jobs, and we will get home more tired. I think that the schedule thath my school have right now is just great because students play sports, participate in after school programs, and some others can work too. I think that my school should not implement this idea because we are fine with the schedule that we have and adding two hours will just affect us instead of being beneficial.      ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,2.5,3.0
10E11F30F47C,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. In the world people's are using technology in many different away. Some people used technology in their business. And others are using technology to contact with other people who are live different country. However children are use technology for fun. Technology has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on people's lives.

Technology are use for business their daily lives. Although people's are use technology for helping them to solve the problem. For instance when people have meeting, and they do not know what time is meeting. That time they can use technology to send the email to the boss. Also teacher are use the technology everyday for many reasons. For example to great student test, and email other's teacher etc. In addition some time in business people are used technology person reasons. For example talked to they friend and family. Also some parent live they children at home, and they are use technology to speak to they children.

People's are used technology to contact other people who are live different country. People's are move to different country because of money and have good life. So they have to use technology to talk with they family. Some time people's are used technology different away to contact they family. For example text, email, call, and messages. Also many people are do not go home long time they live in different country. For those people's technology is very imperative to communication with they family.

Children are use technology for fun. Most of the time children are played games. Also children like to watch the movie with they friends. But some people are do not agree with me. Because they think the technology are wishing of time. Also people's said that technology is bad for children because some time they use for bad reasons. But I think technology are helping children to learn more from the technology.

In conclusion technology are allows people to communication to each other. Has a human I think technology are helpful for our community to have positive effects on people's. In addition people has technology around the world. Also the technology helped people complete many different tasks. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
4AC16314867E,"The one place that i want to go to in the world is Cailfornia . The one thing that i want to go see in Cailfornia the all of fame of all the famous people put thier moral on the ground . The next thing that i want to go is Generic_City .Generic_City is the best place to take a vaction . The third my place is Magic Mountain ( Six Flags) ,Me and my family love going to six flag because we have more time to spend time with each other. And the finally place that i want to go is Disneyland. Disneyland is the best place to playground with your friends and family go on rides have fun . The next place that i want to go is Generic_City and to Generic_City because they have lot of advenures and that what I love to have an adventures and go places .I really want to go to Generic_City because i want to see the fuller house .and do a lot of things in Generic_City . Now i want to go to Generic_City because the have a lot of thing to eat and to do . Like for exmaple in Generic_City you can eat crabs leg and whole crabs.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
C5FF203DE2DE,"I used my sowing to help me with having a choice to use it as a long term career, I can use it in case of imergencies. I can help people out, make money, save money, help myself out, and not be a failure.

If I have nothing else to do or dont have a nother career idea I can just thing of sowing as my long term job, many colleges have a arts and craft classes and I can get in to any of them

If I have an emergency and something is ripped I dont have to wait, get an appointment, wait for a few days, and get it fixed. I can just do it at home and do it Quick

I can make a good deed and just help people out with this for free for people who cant pay money or you can just brighten and suggest the idea. I can help any one i want from family members to next door neighbors.

I can save a lot of money because if your paying you have to pay a lot for a good job or little for a bad job. this way I can do it how I want withouth spending anyrhing or having a mistake.

If I can save money then I can sure make a lot too. anyone would cash for someone who can do a good job.

I dont want to seem like a failure to my family and sowing is helping with that, and this way I can prove to my family i can do better.

To sum it all up I use sowing to have a choice if wether I want to have it for a career or not, for emergencies, to help out others, save money. make a lot of money, and not be a failure.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
E433745B3F87,"Michelangelo the artist once said,

'' The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving mark.'' I agree with michelangelo statement because we want to aim our goal right, or we will ending up missing. However, there can be a better statement to explain this more. When people want to achieve their goal to be somone in life. It's like shotting a arrow to hit the middle, and aiming the goal we want. For example, to aim it at the middle you have to focus, believe, think, be positive, and let go of your arrow to aim your goal. Other people would like a better statement , and also a better example to go with it. There are mostly people that take it serious to aim for their goal to be success. However there are some other that don't really care and just try to aim for their goal, and ending up missing their shot towards the middle. Another example, is when people want to aim their goal they have to study , work hard, have faith, believe , take risk , be proud, and never giving up. But there's people that miss their one shot towards the middle. Because they are lazy, not prepared, not focus, negative, not giving effort, and not paying attention for what goal their aiming for , so basically they will end up missing their only shot. Third example, is people have to aim their goal just right not to high , and to low. The goal is to aim in the middle ,but Micheangelo is right in one part because you only have one arrow to make it th the middle. It's mostly saying you have one shot to aim for your goal without making any miskates. I could understand why Michelangelo said '' The greater danger for most of us is aming our goal target right in one shot.'' Because there are some people that would have to take some risks. For example, they are not a citizen , or they don't have any papers to work , don't understand english well, they have to leave love ones behind,

and get discriminated by their colors. And it makes it more difficult for some people to aim for their goal. For those reasons theirs fewest people's that end up missing there shot. But there are other people's that won't let this get in their way by taking the risk , and some of those risks come worth it at the end. For example , there are some people that get discriminated by how they look and their color ,but doesn't mean that they have to give up ,and point their arrow the wrong direction to miss their shoot to success. They have to show the others people that they can make their one shot towards the middle all because they study, work hard, put effort, being prepared, being positive and never giving up. These are my supporting details ,and reasons why i agree with Michelangelo the artist statement. However, I don't think that this is statement is the most greatest danger for all of us. For sure there's others statement that are more dangerous then this one.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
FA5998D50575,"Do you are agree or desagree school cafeteria plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu ?

The school cafeteria would to make a new plans healthier school lunch menu.

some students from Generic_School don't take their foods or drinks,property to healthy problems. For example: From 99.9% students a 10% of students present allergic problems to some foods, like chicken,milk and maiz. Also too the type cooked from this food. Some students want to their food middle well or meddle. The students today they're wants to express, the that their body's need to feelt a mayor comfortybility inside of the school, but to the sometime the students parents knowing the type of food that their children eating feelt them safed with their children.

The importance of have a healthy body. Many students don't want to eat more calories that their bady's to need the reason is simple,They thinking that will be people with obesity problems. It's true because from 99.9% students a 8% has obisity problems and a 15% has physiology problems,they feeling fraid. Why? Because existence three reason's that's why they want to change menu cafeteria. Example number 1: The foods came with many oil and some students don't like it, the type of foods with bad aspect. Example number 2:They want to foods that will be slowly for their stomach. Example number 3: They need to know, the process of how were cooked the food.

The focuse from the students in their class room. The good nutricion is the basis to a very good focuse to dependen in the shape, in that our food is made and the most important the menu, all students said we are bored of the same menu. We want to something new. Are 4 school year's into. We ate because, we don't have the opportunity to express and to change the menu. Our mood dependen in how our body felt and that dependen, how they cooked?, what proccess has our food? Those were the questions and the opnions from 40% of students. We want to something slow to digest, some students don't like it beff their body need to happy. to that they can focuse in their class. They want to legunbres, potatos, and salad.

The school cafeteria would to make a new plans healthier school lunch menu. Because some students don't take food or drink, properly to healthy problems,for example: From 99.9% of students a 10% of students,present allergic problems to some foods, like chicken,milk, and maiz. The type cooked from this food. Nevertheless students parents want to knowing the type of food their children eating to that them feelt safed with their children. Also too the importance of have a healthy body. Many students don't want to eat more calories that their body needs. The reason is because from 99.9% of students a 8% of has obesity problems and a 15% has physiology problems,they feeling fraid. Why? Because the food came with many oil and some students don't like it foods with bad aspect, they want to food that will be slowly for their stomach, they need to know, the proccess of how the food, where were was cooked. However the good nutrucion is the basis to a very good focuse to dependen in the shape, in that our food was made.

.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
D2FB14A7C43B,"Albert Schweitzer said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" However, it is a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. People may follow every step you do, because they want to success in life by being influences by others. It is the main thing to show people that they can do what they think they are not able to do.

First reason is, People may follow every step you do, because they want to success in life by being influence by others. For example, my friend

Generic_Name has a son, who according to her he wants to be a lawyer. Generic_Name husband who's name is Generic_Name is a lawyer. Although their son Generic_Name is taking only math classes in collage, which it has nothing to do with laws. Generic_Name and Generic_Name want to influence Generic_Name to become a lawyer. But Generic_Name is being influence by his Algebra class teacher. Generic_Name has a very high score on math, and his Algebra teacher believe that Generic_Name can be a math teacher in a college. Generic_Name teacher knows how hard he works to do everything right and how his behavior it is showed.

Another reason is, It is the main thing to show people that they can do what they think they are not able to do. For example, when my brother was nine years old he wanted to be a Pilot, but he was just really scared of heights. When my brother graduated from high school he wanted to go to Army. Somehow my mom find out that he really did not wanted to do that what he really wanted to do was being a Pilot. My mom is a Flight Attend and she told my brother that some people will say you are too weak to do this and that, but they actually does not know what you are capable to do. With those words my mom influence my brother, and now he is a Pilot and he works for the Air Force. My mom gave him an example that no one believed on her the only person who believed on her was her mom. As my mom says, "" Don't let other people think you are not able to do things, which they we're not able to do.""

Some people may think that there are better ways to influence others. However, it can be true, but people get more influence by examples. There are not many ways for example, if someone who is very important who wants to influence someone else who is not that important to be come important as they are. Does not mean this person is going to have the same luck to become really important. Do not let other people influence you by other ways, let them give you an example of how you are going to success.

In conclusion, It is a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people. To teach them what it is good and what it is wrong to do. Given your own examples and teach them how to behave. Dot let people think that example is not the main thing to influence others.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
DCDDFA12E124,"We humans aren't really perfect, there hasn't been one human that has never made a mistake, for example the person that is writing this prompt, has had a decent amount of failures in his life. One time he was taking a really hard test like this one, but he didn't know that it was going to decide if he is going to attend college or not, so he just sat down on the chair in Generic_School Library and he began to take the test, he had to take another year of high school, but he figured that he doesn't want to fail this senior year.

If he fails again he has to graduate with a bunch of kids, that doesn't sound right, does it? i'm from a family that always want their kids to be a doctor or an engineer, and they want to show to other parents that ""my child is better than yours"". So they kept putting pressure on me for months and years but it didn't seem to help a lot, but I had to make a change one day not because I was trying to make my parents happy or impress the other parents, but I was tired, I was tried of not having respect in the family, like anything that i said didn't mean anything to them, so I had to change, and with that change came a lot of consequences, for example losing my friends, not leaving the house as much as I used to, working less so it means less money on my paycheck by the end or every two weeks, but i didn't care as much, because I knew that this is going to be my last year at Generic_School.

I will learn from my defeats, and make sure that they wouldn't happen again, like one time I was working at Panera, my main job, and it was still my training week so I had no clue what the names for the dressing and the food was, so there is this computer above every line that tells you what the name of the food is, and it tells you all of the ingredients in the food and what kind of dressing that salad or what kind of sauce that food needs, so I followed the ingredients on the computer but i had made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich before the order i was making, and the costumer was allergic to peanut butter but i didn't know that so i made their salad with the gloves that was contacted with the peanut, so I gave the salad to my friend to bag it and he asked me ""Hey Generic_Name! did u make sure to change your gloved after each order?"" and I said ""I'm sorry, I didn't know that i have to change my gloves every time."" he said ""It's fine, just change your gloves and make another salad."" after that i have always changed my gloves after every order.

By the way my side job is detailing cars at all in one auto group located in Generic_City, VA. It's not a really easy job, but the pay is good, $50/hour, for a teenager that's a really good amount of money and imagine me working every day for a year and working 5 hours every day, yea, that is a lot of money for someone like me, last year i bought a lot of stuff with the money i made, I bought a car, a new phone, a really expensive watch, and a bunch of other stuff that u get when u have a lot of money, they don't affect your life, but they are just there, for entertainment purposes, like who really needs to have a Nintendo switch and a ps4 at the same time, like what type normal person would do that, you only do this type of stuff when you have too much money, and having too much money and not knowing what to do with it is insane.

Me failing makes me stronger, it's like you are running a marathon but every time you fall u get faster and faster, you keep getting closer to the finish line, and that is a good thing, the finish line is where we all are going to end up, but it depends what u do during this race that decides if you are going to win or not, if you keep failing and failing and not learning from it then I feel bad for you, but you have to focus and learn and decide what is good and what is not good for you, you should not be distracted by the stuff around you and your life. humans are stronger that what they think, i read somewhere that humans only use %1 of their brain capacity, imagine the day that we all would use at least %50 of it.

If you ever feel like u have be defeated in life, you are not correct, get back on your feet and started working hard again, there no way that you would do something the right way and not get a good result out of it, it's impossible to do so, unless you are pretending that you are doing it, in fact that used to be me last year, pretending like i'm doing homework, pretending like i'm listening to the teacher, but where did i go with all of that, just because I was lazy and didn't want to pay attention, I lost the race, but I got back on my feet this year, and i'm making sure that i'm happy, more than anyone else, I'm not going to let any negativity impact my life.

My dad used to tell me, he still does, but he says that ""imagine you are a racing horse and you have covers on your eyes, so you would only see in front of you"", apparently it makes the horse focus on the race but he said that ""you have a lot of distractions on your way but focus on what you have to do and only that, nothing else. just keep running and don't let the distractions affect your life, if they do you will lose balance and either affect someone else or you are the only one that will fall over, and that is not a good thing.""

In general just focus on your life have fun at times but make sure it doesn't affect anything and if it does, make sure that you, with the help of someone else or by yourself can figure out a way to resolve the situation, sometimes it's a really good option to get help from the people that you know, like for example friends and family or even the school counselor or the principal, just get some help if you think that you can't resolve it by yourself. so the former British prime minister called ""Winston Churchill"" is right about ""success consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm."" I agree with his opinoin.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
DF193A9E1C5A,"Thomas Jefferson wrote Determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing. I agree that we accomplish more if we are always doing something right or important, however, that it doesnt mean that you are idle. While, if we are working or study.

They are many people that works on importants jobs, sometime they suggest you to have a lot of energy and be preparated. For example at the job alot of employees that against you because they said that you are idle, and you dont want to do nothing. Insted that the employees at your job dont know that you are tired because you have two jobs.

Some people, students or parents lived so tire and they look idle. At my house we live all togethers and sometime i dont to do nothing at my house. My parents argument me that i dont clean the house. For example that i dont study or help my mom with my little brother. In addition my family doesnt know that i have tow jobs because i want to help her to play the rent of the house, that why some people lookd idle or tired.

They are some friends that they teach you and they support you to be a better person with good behaviour those people want you to be how great you are doing something productive. Neverles, some friends want you to be like them with bad reputation. For example unemplayment, without money, you need to be reponsibility of your acts.

In conclusion, it doesnt matter if other people are telling you idle or unemplayment, they are time that it is hard to find a job or you just want to rest because you are tire, it is wonderful to know that how much may be done if are always doing something;Therefore, some people think that does inactivity also serve a purpose. In my opinion they should be doing somthing at life to receive a good pupose in your life.                            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
3C2AFBFEDA6B,"Although most people would want to graduate and enter college or the work force a year early,others may argue that school should be the four years. One should be allowed to grow up. It should be mandatory to do four years of high school and here is why.

First of all,school prepares students to face up and go against the real world,some students may need at least one more year in school to get their mind set for their future. Staying the extra year can make the student focus more on the classes that they're taking. If students decide to only go for three years, they can forget about sports or any after school activities they want be in. They will have to put all their effort and energy into passing their after school classes.

Second of all,students can be more independent. Students learn how to manage time to do work and extra activities. Students can also learn how to be more reliable and build up their confidence on doing things on task and on time. By doing the three year only, they cant take breaks and if so the students wont have enough time to rest their bodies and be able to do what is asked.

Some may argue,that students staying for three years are going to have enough knowledge to be able to take on the real world. However,students that have four years would have a more since of what they are going to do after the four years have passed. In conclusion,students should stay and have a better understanding of what is going to come up next.",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
8F5F3F2519DA,"what do you think about a program that school provides to pair the younger students with the older students? It can be a exellent choice for the younger students and the older students. Therefore, many younger students have less experience than the older students, so the older students have more experience than them. Older student have already halfway done going to the school. Also, it has a great effect on them to be a good students. This program would help both the older and the younger student in responsibilities, socialization and improving behaviors.

Certainly, this program could help both the older and the younger student in taking care of their own responsibilities. They both can get some useful knowledge that it might be helpful for them to take care of their responsibilities. It could make a good change on how they used to do their chores and homeworks. Taking care of responsibilitis is hard but if they work together than it will get more easier and better on it. It will make them productive and helpful on doing works. Like I said, it will also be useful for their future, when they will have job and other things to do.

however, this program could help both the older and the younger students in socialization. It will make a great change on how they used to work in group. Usually, younger students don't like to talk to the older students, so it can make them be more confident to talk to others. Some older and younger students like to be anti social but if they join the program and work together than it will make them social. It will make a good impact in spending time with others and playing outdoor games. Also, it will effect them in good way to make some new friends.

Therefore, this program will also help both the older and younger students in improving behaviors. If the older students are not respecting and talking polite with others than it will change them. Like I said, it will also help them both improve on how they used to treat other peoples. It will help them to speak a good langauge and be nice to the people they don't know. Also, it will have a good impact on their future when some students will like to a teacher when they grow up and teach their students about behaviors.

In the conclusion, this program could be really helpful for both of them. It could effect both of them to learn something new that they have not know about yet. Therefore, it could be a great program for the school to start and earn money. This program could develope their minds in a good way that will impact their future and their daily life. It could be great and wonderful to learn the things that the students have been struggling in. Also, it will lead them to be a good students and a good person when they grow up. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
D1A682106D3C,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Although some people think that a positive attitude will not help a lot help a lot to be successful, actually that is not true. A positive attitude is the key to success because, we can always be out of stress and bad thoughts, we can always have a high confidence about ourselves and for something good to happen, and we can always have a good and friendly personality wich makes others to feel good about helping us and we can use their experiences in our lives.

Here are some reasons that explain why a positive attitude is the key to success. the first reason, is we can always be out of stressand bad thoughts. For example, when we are in the bad situation and we don't know what to do, if we have a negative attitude you will be filled with bad thoughts and anxiety, we can't think properly and find the right solution. The second reason, is we can always have a high confidence about ourselves and for something good to happen. For example, if you are studying for our test, and if you have a high confidence and you are certain that you will pass the test, you will absolutely pass it. And last but not least the third reason, is we can always have a good and friendly peronality which helps others to feel good about helping us. For example, if we have a problem and we don't know how we can choose the right way to slove our problem, when we have a good and friendly peronality it'll makes other people to feel good about helping us, and we can use our experiences in our lives.

We have been talking about the benefits of having a positive attitude and how is helpful for us to slove our problems and have a healthy mind. These reasons such as, first, we are always out of stress and bad thoughts, which makes it difficult to think in the right way. Second, we are always have a high confidnce about ourselves and for something good to happen, which this gives us strength and make it easier for us to solve our problems. And third, we are able to have good and friendly peronality, which makes other people to feel good about helping us, so we can use their experiences, are little details that effects a lot in our lives. Therefore let's put all negative things aside and encourage everyone to have a positive attitude.                   ",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
DA6899CADE97,"The British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" Although many people believes that Churchill's statement is wrong, I believe in the important role that failure plays in people's lives to be successful in the future. In fact of the society, failure is a bad experience, however, I believe that failure is a way to help people to grow in personally, to be more successfully, and teaches you how to be mannerly.

Every single day, we are exposed to a reality that can be favorable or unfortunate. Where people need to learned about their failures, and grow personally from their new experiences. They made you more mature. That can be the example of my aunt, a nice woman who had an accident in the past. She was traumatized after that accident, but that never stop her to receive professional help with enthusiasm and do what she likes to do, helps others. My aunt understood that everything is possible if we do not loss our enthusiasm, and our pleasure to be success.

Life treat of deal with all unexpected situations. Failures that people never thought that could happen to them. However, everything depends on your enthusiasm, if you want to stay in the same place or learned about your failure and keep going until you accomplish your dreams. Generic_Name, a friend, is an example of the statement just mentioned. Generic_Name wanted to pass his classes in order to graduate. Generic_Name's teachers always told him that he was wasting his time if he was planning to go to the university, but Generic_Name never loss his hopes. Generic_Name became more expert in every subject, he graduated. Moreover, he demonstrated that everybody could be successful, if they try their best.

Everything has two faces, like a coin. As failures can be bad experiences, they can also be helpful if we look at them with good eyes, and if we receive them with good manners. People need to realize that the way in which a thing is happening is not bad at all. Things happens to foment our self and made us more mature. An example of this can be all of us. When we are passing for a bad moment we need to control our behavior, take a rest and think in a positive way to be successful.

In conclusion, Churchill's statement is more than right. Do not pay to much attention to the different failures and keep going with enthusiasm, is the key to be successful in life. Accomplish a dream that we are fighting for, is the best that could happen to everybody. That is why we do not need to discourage and loss our enthusiasm just for a failure that happened to us.  ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
CC30C03474B1,"Well if you want to make something that you always wanted to do or you wanted to have you will failed sometimes but you never have give up with out loos your enthusiasm like the statement said because if you always give up in things that are harder to you to do it you will always be like that and them you will never going to be waht you always wanted to be some reasons are the you have to superate in the life bacause life not always is easy to live sometimes you will have some troubles without you don't expect that it will come.

Examples are that if you are wasting your time doing things that are going to ruin your life you will always failure and you will loose your enthusiasm and if you don't think what you are doing one day you can do something that you will never wanted to do in your life and there is where going to be seriuos problems with the police and you will jail for a couple years.

So that's why you will need to be always positive with things that you wanted to do in your life never think that you will never going to make your dream because you can make it thare are people that love your family so you will never going to be alone some reasons are that if you make your dream that you always wanted to be and your family are working hard to help you they are going to be so proud of you them you will said thanks god for all you give me and you will be so appreciated with your family because without them will never do what you always wanted to be a good person you will have a good work and you will going to have that car that you always dream to have when you was a kid.

Nobody likes to fails even if it's something that you don't wanted to happen at you or someone else that you love or eather something material because it's harder to buy something or other thing that cost you alot of money and some else just come to break it or destroy that thing that you love and you take care of it like that was only thing that you will love in your whole life.

An importamt failure will be something that happen to you and you said I know i can't superate this and be better than I was before so you can have better ideas how be sucesful in life and don't comitte mistakes that just a child a child can comitte so that can an important failure.

Also taht's why i can not be agree baecause I think both needs to be the same but not both can be the same but with the help of anyone both statement can be equal.    ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
9AFAE6562E98,"The purpose of always doing something helps us get different kinds of experiences, it helps us accomplishe what we are doing and gives a purpose to what we want to do in the future. Throughout life, the experiences that you get can help keep you motivated on what you should and shouldn't do as well. In comparsion, when you are inactive you aren't benefiting from anything and you are just not getting enough experience for what you want to do in the long run. This is a major factor on how well you live your life and how you want your life to be. I do suppoort that we accomplish more when we are always doing something and it helps contributes to how we all live our daily lives.

One factor why I believe that this contributes to our daily lives is that, it helps you get an education on something new or just a job that you are interested in. While, going to school and getting an education is a major rule in a human life; it is not for everyone and it all depends on how much effort you put in and if you are willing to put in the effort as well. In many different countries and cities, not all jobs require an education all you have to do is have experience in a certain area or part that makes you want to learn more. This helps decrease inactivity and upbulid activity while you are doing something like helping your community, feeding the homeless, giving advice to young kids. It all just depends on how well you put yourself out there and willing to make a committment about it as well.

A second factor why I believe you feel accomplished by doing something is that, it gives you a purpose in life and a feeling that won't be given again. From my experience of helping kids with their homework afterschool it has always given me always a good feeling and making me proud that I am helping the community. This helped me gain self-satification for myself and let me understand the importance of showing kids at a young age how to be accomplished when you put the energy and time too. Another example I ever felt when doing somethingis when I play lacrosse , and how everytime I don't make my mile time I strive to do better for myself. Lacrosse has helped me put in an understanding on how self-satisfication doesn't come easy it takes time and effort. This benefitted me get motivated for what I should do more and always helping me understand that if I put in my time and energy then there won't be a problem on feeling accomplished. Doing something you love and getting that satisfication helps you serve purpose and feel more accomplished for yourself as well.

One last example of how always staying active can help influence your accomplishment is that you are acknowledging that you are given a purpose to uphold. I do feel like many people don't seriously take the opportunites given and it is very hard to undertake as well. I would certainly always feel accomplished when doing something that can help let others know I care and not just for my own image. I agree that many different factors can influence decision making but also making others understand how important you are to someone as well.

In conclusion, the more work you put in ;the more you are in feeling accomplished and in pleasing yourself as well. This can help give you a self-esteem boost for yourself and let others know that you are willing to put in dedication for yourself. Many people that I have talked to said that they have always felt like their ciommunity helps them grow and feel like they should give something back as well. Doing something remotely even small can benefit anyone's day in comparsion in doing nothing. Working for what you need to do is different for working for what you want to do and this helps you understand the need for self -satisfication and social-satisfication. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
98FDB2315471,"Try different thing to grow.

I agree about some time we has to do something the we never do before to learn more and grow to sometime we has to try something different thing to grow because you get defferent, experience and that are how we grow when we try different thing the we already know and if you not try you will not grow because you will no learnd different thing yoou allways try something that person is going to telt you some word that you will feel the you cant not do that or other that you will not grow, about if you not try you will stil not grow of the word that there person said to you about that is not a ostacule if you what to grow you has to try something that you never mastered before because that are how we grow going somethig the we never do before sometime we get fearful because we never do different thing about sometime you has to try if you try you can get beter oportunity sometime you will feel that you cant not you it but you allways has to kip this word in your maid you can do this you are strom you cant do it all the thing the you what to do it because you are a strom person you can do it what ever you what dont be fearful because that can be a ostacule to not grow do all that thing that you what becuase you can do it sometime we can not grow but it ok if that cant happen and sometime we cant grow very fasters that are my reasons remember allways do it dont feel fearful thanks you to take time and read my prompt.",1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5
D537BE6997F7,"I agree with success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because everyone need to be stronger, successful, and become independent youself.

Success are things that everybody need to be stronger the most they can with every single thing in your life because everyone has bad moments in lifes and there are many peoples that they want to see them fail in everything. For example, if someone is given in they can find someone who is bad person and the only thing that they do is to given words that did not help in anything, but that's why they have to failure, but do not have to loss enthusiasm because if you loss enthusiasm you are failed in everything because in lifes you can find peoples that want to help you a lot, but sometimes you are going to find good peoples that want to help you in everything. Therefore, it does not matter what other peoples want to tell you people just have to continue their lifes and do not have to give up in anything, it does not matter peoples have to do everything they can because if you propose what you want you can do it no one is going to said no.

Success is that everyone has to be successful in lifes because everybody has to be esthusiasm in everything. You do not have to loss that because you have to be with good smile because it does not matter what is happened in your life you must have to had a good smile in everything because it does not matter how many times in your lifes you are falling you have to continue because if you do not do a good job, thinking that you can not do what you want, or said that you are going give up in everything. For example, if your sister said that some people said that she can not make her dream true you can talk with her with enthusiasm and said that she can do everything she can propose because she do not have to listen those peoples that can not want their lifes good they failature is her past that means that others peoples are going to do the same thing because in this lifes exist peoples that want the bad thing to you that ever can exist.

Success something in life is more harder than you think because you have to pass a lot of thing in your life and you have to stay strong the more you can because if one day you are going to fail in something and there is no one to give you support and you can not anymore, but you have to said in your mind that it does not matter because you are thinking in your mind that you are never give up with anything because you have your mind with power, esthusiasm, and stronger. However, you do not have to be thinking bad things there are some times that you failure with many things that can be in the school, work, or test. You always have to be in mind that it does not matter how many times you took your test and get bad grades you have to do it until you get good grade or how many days you are going to take to learn any kind of food the thing is the you have to be a good person to show to other peoples that you can do whatever you want to show to the world that you can do everything you want because they are here to fail, but if you lose a lot of time you are going to wake up twice.

Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because in this world everyone is here to be something in their life to be someone stronger to make your skills stronger to show to the peoples that you want to be someone with energy to show that there are so many things that you want to do be a successful person to help peoples when they need something; it does not matter what you are passing or what your life is give you. You just have to learn how to be a good person, how you can make your skills stronger, and how you can demostrated to yourself what you can do and can not do because that is a harder to know yourself to see what you can do or not because you can see more peoples that if they can not do anything they do not tried anymore they are sad, mad, or angry with their self because they can not do what they wanted. For example, if your friend want to be in the future a teacher and he/she has to learn, to be prepared, and study. He may not want all of that or he/she may have travel with all of those things he/she is going to get mad with herself, sad with herself, angry with herself and he/she is going to said no i can not with all of this is so harder that i think, but everyone has to be stronger show that you do not have to get mad to show with enthusiasm that does not matter how many times you may fail you have to learn, study, be prepared everything you need and you will see that you can everything you want.

In conclusion, Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because you have to be stronger, successful, and become independent yourself because you have to be stronger with any problem in your life, stronger with every person, and stronger with whatever you have to do. You have to be successful with yourself, with your work, and with your own things. You have to be independent with yourself because when you are older or you are lonely you have to see for your owns things, you have to fight for you owns problems, and for your owns bussiness. For example, if you are going to be a good police you have to see what is coming what your enthusiasm is going to be what you have to be. You have to fail many things, but you have to tried the most you can because is this life everything you do have to be with enthusiasm. Therefore, If you find a job and you boss said that you have to go to do a fish and you went, but you did it wrong and he said this is wrong you failure you have to tried again you have to go with enthusiasm not be angry or sad because you are going to do that with enthusiasm to said im going to do this rigth not wrong because everything you do with enthusiasm everything you will get more better and you will be happy because if you do everything good you are going to feel thatyou do a esthusiasm and good work.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
62654020C48D,"Are you one of the students that is home schooled? If not, here are some of the benefits, why some students choose to attend classes in their home, by the way of online or video conferencing.

Some people believe students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, however, home school is a great way of student to attend classes because they can focus in their studies, it's more safer, and they can avoid bad influence from others.

Attending classes through online or video conferencing has a lot of benefits like what I mention from the first paragraph, that homeschooling can help students to focus in their studies. For some reasons, some students that go to school can't be focused on their studies/activities because they are distracted by some of their classmate that is very naught. For instance, there are some people that born in this world that are very naught, like even you defy him/her they will not listen to you and then sometimes, some of the other students will raise their pride and just walkout from their class because they don't want to listen any objection from their action. Another reason for home schooling is that, it's more safer for them to study. For example in today's society, a lots of bad things happening in the world, like school shootings that cause a lot of innocent students to die, like what happened in Florida, a few months ago. One of the reason also of homeschooling is that, they can avoid bad influence from others. Like for example, some of the school are diverse ethnic, students characteristics are diverse also, like some of the other likes to go shopping mall, likes to strolling anywhere, likes to bully others, likes to fight, likes to not go home after school instead go to other houses that they don't really even that much know, and many more characteristics.

Although students will have benefits of attending classes from school, however, attending classes from home has much more benefits. Attending classes from home by the way of online or video conferencing can really benefit to the students because one of the biggest benefits is that, they are more safer to study in their homes, they have a great time to focus in their studies, and they can avoid bad influence from others.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
7B00EEFA1313,"If you should be want to do it a profesional, in your life is fine for you.

My ideas however about this career.

More tecnology, is good because in your life to help, for your family, if i am agree.

The ideas some time are bad. because you not undesrtan, if you already for the not is good.

Thesis:

.is important that, because help in your life are a career and the family put happynes about your caeer but you pay attention if you not pay attention you can not power, the something you has to possebilty in your life for learning to much something about your caeer.

.That is good, because you help on the family in the life the students, has to responssibility about that because is your responssibility because is your caeer.

. And i thing is a good ideas for students because the students has to possibility, about a caeer in the life about he , and in the school help the students about that he want to a caeer in the life for put happy on the family and he.

Paragrap: That is very good for the students, because he want to do it that is your responsability in all your job because is a agreer, waht you take for you life in the caeer is good because your family help on you and all family help for you caeer.

Conclucion: If you want to do it a caeer, in your life is fine for you and help in the caeer about you job.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
EB5924FBD25C,"Although some say schools shouldn't extend the school day two hours because some students and teachers might have work after school, actually schools should extend the school day two hours because students get enough time to do their assignments and home works also teachers got enough time to check students work properly and students can add one more subject.

Some people say that schools shouldn't extend the school day two hours because some students and teachers might have work after school. But if we see that in another way instead of working after school sixteen hours with in four days we can just work eight hours in our three days weekend. also it is wast energy for instance, there is one student who works after school for three days until 5:00 pm - 11:00 pm. He came at school by 3:30 pm and he works at seven eleven which is the hardest place to work. It takes 15 minute to go and he have to at 4:45 pm to reach his destination on time. And then let's see after work he gets home at 11:00pm then he sleeps at 12:00 am. How can he focus on he's classes? this person is losing 2 things;

1, losing energy

2, not focusing on his classes he might fail the classes that he is taking

The student that wants to extend the school day will have enough time to do their assignments and home works, also teachers get more time to check the students work properly because they probably got 3 days off if is there any meeting or doing some things in school for example, if the government decide there is a meeting every Friday. However, it is better for teachers to do their work as an example they can check students work on one day of their breaks and they can relax, hangout, playing with kids etc. Students also can do what every they want if we see one example, one student can finish his assignments and other school stuffs in one whole day and the rest of the the weekend is his he gets enough time if he get enough time then he is free from school for two days if he continue work on it he got 2 days free every weeks. In addition those who needs long time to study this schedule can help the students that who wants more time work on it.

Learning is gaining knowledge, so that in these schedule students can add one more subject. How ever, based on this idea two argument comes from the students who wants to add extra class and the students who wants to extend the normal class by adding one hour for each classes.

Adding one hour for each classes is better to have the experience to sit for two hours and 30 minute in one class. And also it's good to work long time on one subject, but as we see in high school student this idea is trash. It can work for only in college class based on that the college students said that ""one man trash is another man's treasure"". When I come with my idea students can add one more subject because it is Better to get credit on that class and students can choose 3 or more elective classes . For example one student wants to take 3 classes that he have to take and pass for graduate high school he wants to learn 2 classes that helps him in the future. In Virginia law you have to take English 12 and Maths classes. Also to graduate high school it require Personal and Financial Economics to take it. those 3 classes are History, Biology, and one elective class to get a full credit. If the school can only learn 7 subjects this student is going to add another 1 year to learn only one class.

Finally Schools should extend the school day two hours because students get more time to do things that they have to do and it also useful for teachers they can get enough days off. Also teachers work harder than students, so that teachers work 4 days and 3 days off. And Students can add one class to get more credit.                                                                                 ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
52FEF34F4AC7,"Should students take online classes? Students can learn more by taking online classes? students have benefits for attend classes from home?.

On this paper I will argue about how students have benefits attend classes from home, and how improves skills for he future.

I think that students would have benefits for attend classes from home, because is a new opportunity for study more, and for improve more the skills more online classes for the future.

Teenagers that are attend classes from home I think will be more healthy, because that means that students will be more able to sleep , and will be have more time to rest the brain, and more time to do all the things at home, because a lot of students they do not sleep during the night the reason, because they work others that always talks with a friends and others that they use technology, and waking up at the early morning make the students brain tired, and makes the students do nothing at school for the rest of the day.

Students will be more organizing there time meaning that students will be able to have more time to have job, or do others activities during the day, or after taking classes online, because when they attend to school they do not manege very good the time they always doesn't care about time or do something important.

Students will be putting more attention to classes, because when teenagers attend to school most of the things that distract the students are the friends and the technology means that teenagers when are around friends distract the mind out of the class, and that causes that students don't pass the class, or the test, otherwise when are taking classes from home there is no body around that can distract and loss the attention of the students and will be more easy to do homework, projects, and study for test.

Some people say that the idea of students attend classes online from home will have more benefits is a bad idea, because they say,""Teenagers are lazy, and they will sleep more late at night"".

Students taken classes online will be more smart, because there will more practice skills for the future where will be benefits of know how classes are doing online, and they where taking.

On the future students will be able to attend classes from home, and will have benefits for skills, and this will make the teachers more easy to turn any work or practice any class that they missed, and that way students can have more ideas how will things will change and compare between attend to school and take classed online.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
E110443F5184,"""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.""Therefore,in my opinion character traits can be chose but it must show as true self that represent you. Why, let me tell you; every on has their own unique traits even the traits they get from their parent. lastly animal spirit do show has traits that represent as our character traits. Although,I do disagree with character traits with influences us that help improve our trait that can help us set right path.

Everyone has their own unique traits. Some people has traits like kindness,honesty,caring,and more. Unfourtely that some character traits can't be chose but sometime character traits chose you as your character traits .For example my character traits is pretty weird: kind honesty,helpful,caring,little crazy and lastly trickery like the fox. Same with parents has their own unique character traits;however, parents' character traits can be passed down to children base on their character traits and if they are worthy of the carry their parent's traits. For example,It remind me the time when I am all dressed up and got my hair done after that I look at the mirror; I notice that I look familiar at the time I realized that I look like mom. As poof that I do have my mom's gene meaning I have her physical look. As i explain even character trait and be passed down or chose have own character traits.

Next, everyone has their own spirit animal that is represent your character traits. For example if the person has the character trait which is playful,love water,caring,and fun loving as poof of this person character traits show their spirit animal is dolphin. Therefore, anyone can chose their character trait that is best suit for them. It is unique for people and important having spirit animal and character traits to help them balance it out and chose what character trait that best represent him or her. Which allow the person to identify what spirit animal is and identify which character trait the animal is. For insist,White tiger know for protect their pup like any mother would do as the same trait as our mom has show.

Choosing character trait could be tricky for everyone but it is important to be wise which character trait is best for you. You can choose which character traits,sometime it can lead to having great friend or loving family. But their will be a price to pay like if you are kind then someone will take avenge of you in order to trick or frame you. My opinion is to be strong and persist or sass but your pick add them long with your chosen character trait. Character traits can be blessing in disguise and curse.

As you see chosing your own character trait is better then someone influences you; it only cause problem and change you then your real self. Although, I explain my reason:everyone has there own unique trait ,animal,lastly the price of choosing character trait. Therfore I always said ""Character trait can be beautiful but a curse in disguise"". Anyway not a problem. That I truly believe that everyone has the right to chose their own character traits then having someone influences them to have the same character trait as them then having your own traits.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
E2FC7B4466C5,"Do you want to know how a science could be enjoyable? Tune in and you'll find out. I think that a science experiment could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends,you can work on the experiment with you friends,and you can talk to other people about what you got or learned

First,i think that science experiments could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends. Sometimes your friends won't figure out things as fast as you or they might not figure it out,so you can explain to them how you figured it out and maybe they figured out something you havent yet so they might teach you about what they got to. Later on in the school year you might be asked on a test or quiz about the thing that you learned. When you get home and your parents ask you what you learned you can tell them and explain it to them.

Second,i think that science experiments could be enjoyable because you can do the science experiment with your friends. If you do it with your friends you can have fun. You could have time to talk to them about the science experiment that your doing, Also you could work together on it and get a good grade.

Lastly,i think that science experiment could be enjoyable because you can talk to other people outside of your group about what you got and learned. Lets say that you went to another group to see what they figured out and they tell you something you dont agree with,so you could explain to him or her about what you got and how you got it and then you can ask the teacher and figure out who was wrong. You can learn from what they got and add it to your work.

I think that a science experiment could be enjoyable because you can learn new things with your friends,you can work on the experiment with you friends,and you can talk to other people outside of your group about what you got or learned. Thats why i think that a science experiment can be enjoyable,so you can learn and have fun at the same time!         ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
34E4FB64EEBA,"Don't you think that we should be what we are no matter who is around?

Is important that we give or have our own opinion. For me, my opinion is always important because is what it makes me unique, and what I think is that I know that some people is afraid to be what they are. Because they are afraid to the reaction of people that they love, for example the most important person in my life is my mom and she is the center of my life, like my dad... But you know something? I'm nervous about the reaction of them, if I act like I want, If I dress the way I like it, I'm afraid that my family or my friends judge me.

I think that the author ""Ralph Waldo Emerson"", is right. I'm agree with the Idea that he have about the world.

People around us is just looking for something to talk about and if for example, I do something wrong, the friends of my mom will talk about me and in a worst case, my mom will do the same. The world influence a lot in ourself in many ways for example:

You will see people following what other person say if he move to one side he or she will do the same.

When we are little people influence, tellling you to do the same that the other kid is doing. In some schools they don't let you to use imagination, like, you have to do what is there and in my opinion the kids should be free to write or draw what they want. I think that it will help to develop our ideas and be succesful.

Mom always is telling you to be like him or she. That she wish this and that and we are tryinng to do those things and be like they want, that we forget about us and we try to be someone else.

We have many expectations about what we can be, how many things can we accomplish, we make many questions to ourself and we try to be someone that is not us, just to make happy the rest of the people, when we should be looking for our own happiness, life is short, life is now and we have to be what it makes us happy, life doesn't make sense if we live in a place or have people around us that is just stealing our happiness. The world is big and is true that influences, even in our decisions. We have the choice to be what we want. Is our decision, is our opinion, is important to be what we are and not what they want.

There is some people that is not agree with this idea. They think that the world is not trying to make you someone else, that there is not any influence and be what the other people tell you to be, that the opinion don't affect and it shouldn't have any problem to act or be what they want. But, I think that people around us can influence in our decisions, because we don't want that people we love get upset about us. We are always worried about the opinions of the rest and that is a big example of how the world influence about us and in our personality.

We all have have something that it makes us unique and special of be. Everybody have different opinions, and there are some people that want others to follow what they said and is not the way it works. The world have many of good things and bad things but what will happen if we just follow what they said, people that is guiding is thinking that it will have the same or better results, but no, we have different results to the differents situations and that's why is important to be what we are and do what we like, because in that way, we know how to act to the situation and if will be a good thing for us to follow, is very important that we show ourself and get courage to confront many difficult situations. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
CB120B25B46E,"Students work better alone rather than in groups. Students can have more support and ideas from others in groups; however, students works better alone than in groups. Working alone is beneficial for students because students can finish on time, focus more, and challenge them self.

Working alone is beneficial for students because students can finish on time. Students can work on their assignment at home and they can be more independently. Students while they are working independently, can managed their time by completing their assignment. Students can work as slow and fast, as they want. Students can finish on time.

Working alone is beneficial for students because students can focus more. Sometimes when students are working in groups they get distracted by other team member and that cause a negative impact in the students learning. Students while they are working alone can put more effort on it and being more creative. Students without distractions can gain more knowledge. Students focus more.

Working alone is beneficial for students because students challenge them self. Students when they are working alone, learn have to be responsible for their work and collaborate in challenging them self by doing it independently. Also, students can learn new vocabulary. Students can ask the teacher if they need support. Students challenged them self.

In conclusion, students learn many things by working alone. Students can learn have to be more independently. Students learning developed by focusing more in class and avoiding any distraction, so students can have better grades. Final, students learning depends on how much effort they put on their learning.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
1C0E34879BB0,"The student can shidentify a career when they enter a high school

, Should or should not the student commit a career at a young age ?

Reason 1:

I think student should to select a career when they enter a high school with a young age.

EX : Some sudent want to learn more about what different career they can choice.

Reason 2 :

The student can identifty a career in a young age to be prepared and know more about the career that they select .

EX: If the student select a career the they have to know if they like or not because the career that select is something that they have to put a lot atencion and preparation .

Reason 3 :

Take a career in a young age can be good for the student because can learn more about the career and finish it when they don't have a lot responsabilities .

The student that wanted to take a career with 16 or 17 old age , in the future can be beneficial for him and her family because they don't spend her young time with other thing like vice of the negative people in the society.

EX:

The student that take and finish her career can have a lot oportunities en her life.

Conclusion :

The student should to expect for a career by the time they enter in high school and can be a goal that the student can have for the future .also , the student have to do good use of her mind and know that not all is easy is this life and know that not all the people have the same oportunities for finish a career or select in the school that they go.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
29FCF6DFFFFC,"I believe technology can not be allow in many places. Because,technology make people lose their mind and it can be addicted to many peoples. Also technology can cause biggest damage for example it can destroy families or can be used to bullied others.

First technology can not be good in some places, for example homes many peoples has many issues at home. Because, kids are obsessive with the new technology. Also technology is addicted to many peoples and it can cause biggest damages on their lives; for example if you use a phone for to long it can burn your eyes no in that moment but it will make you lose your vision. Also,

technology can make peoples lose their mind.

Next schools, should not be allow to use technology because students can cheat easily using the technology. they can not learn how to write by hand because technology will do everything for them. Also students can use the technology to bully other and to share inappropriate thing for example photos. However, technology distract students to their classes.

Finally, technology was reported once of the highest causes of accidents in the roads. Because people were using their phone during they were driving. Also people use technology to make frauds; for example to get in the banks accounts and get money from others peoples accounts. However, people can use to get someone personal information or to hack someone accounts.

In conclusion, people is getting addicted to technology because new items with more technology more faster. also technology can ruin the peoples life because if you use to much it can make you lose your vision. and technology can make families separate. a lot of people lose their mind cause technology can be a really horrible      ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
EF2E939F92B2,"Generic_Name

Pd. sol

3/21/2019

""Commit a career at a young age gives time for students to approach their goals and advance towards the future""

During High School, many Juniors and Seniors are already preparing themselves for college, taking classes that would give them credit and would benefit them as they go, also there are some classes that would provide students lots of experiences, these experiences prepared students in a way for them to see how much effort they must put to approach their goal.

The Board of Teachers in a private school have said that, ""The more early a student starts their way to a career, the less struggle is for them to accomplish it"", because at their young age they have more time, less worries and not that much of responsibility, as a person gets older the more problems and responsibilities come to them, Although students also have many struggles in school, their house etc, is more less then an adult, That is why teachers think that is better for a student to commit a career at a young age because they are less worried.

The percentage of students that commit a career at a young age is high, many of this students received a schoolarships others financial help, because of their behavior and their effort,The other half of this percentage of students have a well financial situation and there is no need for help or schoolarships, although there is a low percentage of students that prefer to work instead of going to college, because of their financial situation,However many students with low financial situation have succeed at their young age because of their effort to accomplish their dreams by working hard and knowing what they want to succeed in.

Commiting a career at a young age could be difficult or it could be simple, there is more students that had said that is a great idea, because your mind at a young age is envolving in everything that surrounds the student, such as important information that would benefit him, as i said, the brain has more potencial to store as much information as it can, because the student is young and is focus on its goals and there is no problems or thoughts that could disstract the student.

Other students had said that is a bad idea in a way of making the biggest decisition, which is choosing what career you want to accomplish, because at that age they do not actually know what they really want.

Parents and the societies have a big influence when students are choosing which path to go, some parents wants their kids to follow their steps, so they encorage their kids to take courses that would help them as they go, parents would always want the best for their kids more when its about their future.

Accomplishing a career at a young age brings many benefits, one of them is that the person not longer have to be thinking about it, takes a big weight off their shoulders, also the person would have more time for the family and especially the person would have many opportunities to find a job, because that person is young and lots of doors would be open for them.

As we see commiting a career at a young age has many advantanges the biggest one is that, the students approach their goals and advance towards their great future.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
5D742A0E0623,"It has been said that a positive attitud is the key to success in life.

I'm agree with this statement, I'm one of the persons that think that a good attitude can open many doors to anyone.

Example: If tou are looking for job, and you are talking to the person who is going to give you the job, and you are being with a negative attitude, and being arrogant tha person is going to think more about it.

Example: If your attitude is bein positive, and you are being nice with tha person his going to be nice also, and yuo would have more posibility to get it.

A reason of why you need to be with a positive attitude, is because life is more easy by tha way your main is out of stress, but more important you would be always happy.

And my last oppinion, I defent this position because, year's ago i was with a very negative attitude and always thinks happened to me, and i alwas was like why this is hapening to, and one day i say is enough and i was about to finish with my life and i dont know what happen that from tha day i change my main, when you do think with a good attitude everything is goin to be better.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
1590895B2332,"How technology have a positive effect on our lives? Nowadays over a billion people use different type of technology for example phones,laptops,computers, and tabs. Technology made our lives more easier than before. Although we spend most of the time using technology rather than doing physical activities,because we can read books,watch movies, play games,or shop online,it also helps in our education, and we can stay in touch with others.

Technology helps us to stay in touch with our friends and family. Through social media,we can share our daily routines,share our pictures or we can make new friends. People on social media are so excited to share their stories with others. We can learn some lessons by knowing each others experience. By sharing our lives personal experience maybe those inspires to other and they could make their lives better.

Nowadays technology have a big hand in education. Schools,Colleges,and University prefer laptops or computers more rather than using books or papers. Through technology students can easily access to their assignments or missing work. Students can take help from internet in their assignments and can easily submit their assignments to teachers online. Teachers can also access to other teachers resources to help them in teaching.

Most of the people use technology for entertainment to watch movies,play games and read books in free time. Nowadays we can play games with our friends even though they lives in other country. For entertainment we can record ourselves and upload that online as a daily v log and this is not just entertainment we can earn money through technology. We can also shop online or we can also sell products online and make money. Most of the people who are busy in their lives they prefer to shop online not going to market and search for their desire products.

We spend our most of the time using technology,for example using social media,playing games,or watching movies that leads us to get lazy,sleepy,and sometimes it feels sick. Technology is addicting we cant spend our day without using technology because technology is playing a big role in our lives. It brings so much to our lives for example entertainment, helping hand in education,and more.

Technology have some negative and positive effects on our lives but there are more positive points than negative ones. There are many helpful factors in technology that helps in our lives. Before technology life was hard to connect with people,but now you can easily call them and talk to them no matter where they live. Some negative points like we get addicted to one thing we and we spend our most of the time using it ,but there are some positive effects like it helps in education and we can earn money through technology.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
EA105A8B8699,"I agree because in life you can achieve many goals and pass through so many good things like me i always think positive thats why so many good things happen to me also never disagree because in life you never know what could actually really happen maybe something bad that you have no clue about . Life is great if you keep a positive attitude for example give people advice on somethig good maybe one day they will do the same for you be greatfull with what you have or get beacsue soem people dont have what you have and they really want . Thats why i always have a postive attitude beacuse when i make good discissions i get what i want.

Here are some examples of why you shoud agree for example you get a job a costumer comes by needs help you give them a positive attitude they will give you a positive attitude to help eachother out give them respect talk to them nicely you never know something good could happen second of all what could happen if you give them a bad attitude they will give you the same attitude to. Look at the bright side what happens when you them a positive attitude and they give you a bad attitude you keep the same attitude no matter what they will see and think to their head wow he or she has a nice attitude while the perrson is giving them and ungreatfull attitude.

Always be the bigger person with great attitude even if the person is having a bad day probably try to give them a positive attitude and probably you might cheer them up its always good to make people feel good about themselves afterwards you will feel good because you helped them out . Its never a bad thing to have a positive attitude because good things will come to you .",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,2.5
88FCD4D35128,"That some schools offer the option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think that this option is a really good idea for the students. This option can benefit many students that cannot attend schools in the regular schedule. Many students don not have the resources, time or for others personal reasons to attend schools and this option can be helpful for them to finished the studies.

Online classes. This is one of the option for those students that want finished the schools. This option can help them. They can take the classes from theirs home without go to the school and according the time that they have. Time can be a really impediment to attend school, a lot students that leave schools is because they have to work after school and they do not have enough time to do homework or other school activities. They start falling their classes and at the end they diced to leave the school and go to work. Because they may have to feed their families. Family and money can be other reason why the guys leave school some of then came here and don not have any family. so they have to studied and work at the same time to get some money to sent back to their families. But now with this option they can continue with their studies.

The other option can be the video conferences. This option also is a good idea to keep studying. Like online classes this also you can take it from your home any time that you want or depend the schedule that the teacher give you. Because on this option you are going to be taken classes in real time with teachers, that you will see each other by camera. This option can be helpful because while you are taking the class, you can talk to the teacher and ask about something that may be confuse you, and keep practice with him like you was in a school classroom.

One thing that make this great is that wile you are studying you can keep work and doing personal activities that you usually do. and the good of this program is that not only work for young people, adult also can attend this courses and finished their high school. Because other reason why people leave school is because they are over age or too old to go high school. But with this option you do not have that problem because this involve all people.

As we know in this time more and more teenagers are leaving the school. Some of then because do not have other option and others just because they are lazy. But now that the schools are providing this option many student that left school and other people can be benefit with that, and be a easy way for a lot students to finished their studies at get a better future.

I think that if more schools provide distance learning as option for the student, more people can get involve and be benefit with this program, and get better opportunities on their life. Because now that the school are doing this is not excuses to not finished the school.                      ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
FEAF4F517583,"To begin with, there are different opinions about to do something beyond of what we have already mastered and for that reason we will never grow. Some people idea is that if they have already their master they will stop there, but thats not the point. I believe that we have to keep trying and learning until the end ; for example, if you never try something different you will never grow. Im agree with author Ralph Emerson and here are my reasons why:

One reason, is you will have more experience. Experience make people rich and I am not talking about profit.

For example, if I go to apply for a job and I just have a high school diploma because all I wanted was a high school diploma, but there is another applicant that have more than a high school diploma he also have a diploma as a plumber. This applicant have more experience and more masters, he prepared himself more than me , so he will get the job. Sometimes in life we have to be ambitious in a property way.

I am agree with author Ralph because learning differently means growing. The reason is I will be more mature, for example ; I will gain more mature because I have learned based of my mistakes, moreover will be easier for me than another person that just stayed with the easiest. There are many people that give up at the first try; although, life is not easy but at least dont give up at: the first, second and the third try.

Another reason why trying something new of what

I already have is I can reach more goals; in other words, at this time in society your value depends a lot on what you have, you can more privileges if you have more goals earned. For example, my goal is to be a police officer but after I reach my goal I will keep looking for a highest range, and that will make me grow: economically, physical and mentally. In addition, while you are mastering new goals you will be growing at the same time.

In conclusion many people is not agree to this idea because many of them like the easier, but the easier is not valuable .There will be many obstacles, and people will think that is the end; consequently, they will not grow sufficiently to know that the most they try the most opportunities of gain they have. However, in my opinion is never late to continue learning because;

''The more we learn that more we know,

and the more we know the more we grow''.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
5B14D81A0167,"Yes, I agree with Churchill's statement, because it is true that failure is one of the ways to get better from that failure.

Also failure is a common thing that happens to people, and it also help us to learn better from the mistakes, then giving up. For example my friend Generic_Name, he had 20 dollars in his pockets and he went to a game store to get the news video game at was only 25 dollars. But there was even a new updated on a game that he already have, and it was 10 dollars. And he won't get paid back until two weeks and the updated won't be availed until next week. so he went bought the updated game, but he didn't knew there was a sale on the new game on the online store that was only 16 dollars. But now he sometimes check to see if there any sales or deals before he goes to the store.

For another example a old man said he bought a new car but realize it was missing some pieces. Then he started to look round the internet to see if any of the parts that he needs are buy able. So far there wasn't a whole all of the items for the car. but he didn't stop giving up that easily. But one day he find all the parts and fix his car.

Also I had a friend who was going to the park, but forgot where is the park is and sometimes forget how to get back. Because he takes along way back home and to the park. Which he should take the short cut like I tell him, but he doesn't care, he like long walks. but one day he designed to take the short path thought the area, and he kinda like it its easier get to places for him. So he told me and he felt sorry that he didn't listen to me first, but I forgave him. And now he even listen to other people too like friends, and family too.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
63BAE4B3ADDA,"Being yourself in a world that wants you to be something else is a great feeling but it takes time to be happy for a example,your parents want you to be a doctor or a lawyer but you want to be a rapper or dancer but you don't know how to tell them because you think they would would be disappointed.

would you want to make your parents to feel disappointed,ll give another example people who like the same sex, theirs been so many stories an articles of people dying because their expressing them selves a lot of people are scared so they don't tell anyone so they become depressed they use a lot drugs to lose the pain but nothing ever works.

In my opinion i agree with Ralphh Waldo Emerson it's a amazing feeling to be yourself and not follow other people because at the end of the day you need to be doing things that make you happy not for other,your priories come first be who ever you want to be like and who ever you want you live one life.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
CC8647F0D1E1,"Should the school board add one and a half hours to school each day?

School should not be extended any longer than it already is! Although the school board may think that school should be one hour and a half longer, students and parents believe that school hours should remain the same. I do not agree with the school board planning to add one hour and half every school day. School by its self puts a lot of pressure on the students and with a hour added its going to be much more difficult.

The school board should not add hours to school, since students are already used to the hours they get out of school. With a hour and a half students would probably get to much pressure on dealing with some school material. Students would also get much more school work. They would also get an hour taken away to spend that time with the family. It would also take time for the students to get used to leaving school an hour later! If the school hours remain the same then students would already be used to the hour schedule, and they would also have time to do after school activities!!

Because the school board wants to add an hours more of school, the school board should listen to the parents and not add another hour. It would give students much more stress. Without an hour added, it would give so much relief to alot of parents that wont have to fight for what they believe the school board should do with the time schedule.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
8EEEF415AA1E,"People can make their own decisions because they can do anything they like, something they aready goal on for a long time. Nobody like to do something that they don't want it, they have their own chose of life decisions on what they want to be or what they want to do.

However, some of the decisions they may have are hard way or easy way, the hard way is they have to try hard in life: study so you can have a good grade and work hard, the easy way is they have to put stuff or money on the first start of they future decisions, is a short way but is really hard and not all people can make that decisions depend on if they want it or not. Also depend on where they at in life for a example: people have alot of money the way they want their decisions on future is more short because they don't worry about other thing tact or payment and people are not have alot of money the way they start their future decisions are more longer because they have to worry about alot of money tact, payment, pay for their car,... also they have a to work more extra hard for they decisions. I meet a friend, he was go to school and work in the same time he was about to out of high school and go to collenge but he maked a bad decision on his life, he about to out of high school but he stop and he said to me that ""go to work are making more money than go to school"" so he stop school, his job now is doing nail that job do sometime do alot of money and sometime don't and he don't want to try more hard, he can go to collnge and later on got a good job make more money than Nail but lose that chance and it change his live forever now he can't take it back. And my brother was the same thing, he was go to collenge for 2 year and than he don't want to be in collenge more so desige to work, if he continue on collenge maybe he got a better job. So sometime people have to think of what about to happen in their future and desige what they gonna be in future lean on what they have and about to have. People can make their own decision but sometime they need help so other can support their life decisions. However alot of people don't know what they gonna do in a future, they don't know what they like or interesting job to do on future so they are stuck, they need help to chose their stuff that may interesting them later on in life.

The chose they have and everything that happen around them to make their own future decisions, and all of the support from people around or family can make it more better decisions on their own life. They have to desige their own life, work hard so they can have a good life on future and do anything they want. If people work hard enough so later on their children can more easy to make their decisions about their own life. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
90526CA48E47,"I strongly believe art classes such as drama, acting, and music should not be a requirement for students. I also strongly believe that students should have freedom to choose which elective him or her want's to take. A student that has the freedom to choose his or hers electives, he or she views the classes as more divers fun and interactive, then required art classes.

First of all most people believes that all students are required to take art class, music, and drama class. Most of all others think that students will actually cooperate to there fullest, and pass the class with higher letter grads. Like in an unrequited class most students will not actually take the art classes seriously, and fail with low letter grades. In comparison students with a required class will most likely take the class seriously knowing if they dont tighten up, and do what is asked the'll get low grades on multiple assignments like projects, class projects, and event tests. An nonparticipating students score will drop significantly. Which in fact they are wrong student shouldnt have to take the art classes to begin with.

In my true opinion student should have the chance to express his or her true feelings, and reach a main goal in life. People arent going to tell use students what career paths to fallow we simply choose our own paths. Really in fact art classes should be an elective instead of it having to be required. Art classes are fun I my self take art by choose and enjoy ever single part of it. Again arts should not be a requirement for students it is unethical, and unheard of as far as i know.

Music, drama, and art class are three amazing electives, and forever will be electives. what sense is it to make an art class a requirement to pass? No sense in my opinion art allows us students to express out inner happiness, deepest emotions, and embrace them. However, at the end of the day art classes should be and always stay an elective. What use will it be to us students in the real world? No use at all, unless a student wants to fallow a career path in art.

All the more reasons why I know art classes such as drama, acting, and music classes should not be a requirement for students. Electives are much more divers, fun, and interactive. Also students should have the freedom to choose his or her electives. There is no sense in making an art class a requiermnet for use students. Most students are not fallowing a type of caree in art, and will not be of much use to us in the future. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,2.5
0F8436260047,"Some people say that first impressions are easy to change. Many others may say that it's impossible to change your first impression. Many people have experienced this before and there are others who have not yet experience it. I agree and there are many reasons why people may try to change their impression. You might find it difficult to change your first impression because you do not know how others will react to you, you do not want people to remember your first impression especially if it was bad, and you do not know how its going to go.

If you worry about how people will react when trying to change your first impression, it will make things more difficult for you to achieve that goal. Take your chances be confident and do what you have to do. There have been times where people can just look at someone and assume the worst about them. They could be going through a rough time and you may not even know that but you still assume the worst. First impressions may be easy and may be hard to change.

First impressions are almost always remembered,that makes it difficult to change your first impression. No matter how many times you try to change your first impression some people will still remember it. First impressions are important because its how people see you. You always want to make it your best not your worst. Think to yourself about what your going to do before you do it, because many people will agree or disagree that first impressions are impossible to change.

Not Knowing how your first impression is going to be is horrifying. On the other hand it can go great you just never know. You may be nervous about how everything will go things may not be so easy to change. You need to focus on the good things that. will make you feel comfortable and confident. Make yourself feel right before you change your first impressions because as you know there either easy or impossible to change.

Some people say the first impressions are easy to change others will say its impossible. People may disagree and agree with this. People who have experienced this know how hard it might have been. Some may seem insecure by their first impression because you do not know how others will react to you, you do not want people to remember your first impression especially if it was bad, and you do not know how everything will go. First impressions are impossible to change.",4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
5F5E1817CCA0,"I think working with a group or working alone it depends on the person because everyone is not a same. I feel strongly that I dont like work alone because its very boring and takes long time to finish work. However, I do like to work with a group because its so much fun and you will experience with others and its more easy to do something.

First, Working with a group is so much fun especially when you are do something with your best friends. When you are work with your friends they makes you laugh so hard and we do lot of fun things togethor. Some of my friends actually works well with other people. When I have a free time I like to play games with my friends. In the game you will team up with your friends and play against another team. You have to talk to your friends every single time and lesson to their idea to win game. Most of video games needs to be really good team work. You can't do anything by yourself.

Second, When you are working with a group you will interaction and feel the other people. Its like social experience. Talk to your team-mates, lesson and support their idea. Working a group is way better than working by yourself. If you are learning English by yourself its very hard but if you had a teacher then its much easy to learn and quickly

Finally, You can do things very quickly because there is a more than one person working. If your mom say's clean your house. You have to clean entire house by yourself and it takes long time to finish but if you clean with your brother or sister then its quite faster than clean by yourself.

Although, I like to work with a group of people because its so much fun and you will experience with others and its more easy to do something. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
442CFAE61CC3,"So we heard that our principal is going to let all the students to participate in one activity of their choice. But I have both reasons that might go alright or not. Lets just say if I agree or disagree with the principal decision and hopefully that our principal has a good feeling about this decision.

Lets start with a positive reasons. First responsibility, if the students get a activity that takes a lot of serious responsibility like for example serve on the student council or working on the yearbook, activity like that those have real responsibility to take care of. Next is not knowing it was the students talent, all activity will fill up very quickly and if any teacher puts a student that is not their favorite class they will notice that their very talented on a activity that they didn't like. Last positive reason overwhelmed, the student will get overwhelmed and sometimes is alright but at the end they still love the class.

Second, start with the negative reasons. It won't be their favorite if a student want to be a class so bad but then a teacher decides to put him/her to different class it's likely that the student wont be liking the class not a bit. Overwhelming, it's going to the same thing but the opposite its almost the same topic as the last reason of not liking the class and overwhelmed is the part cause of not liking the class which lead to our third last negative reason, dropping out its most likely that they gonna drop out the class it will get so stress and overwhelmed that the student decides to quit and that lead to have a no responsiblilty in life.

So I do agree with principal student or people need to have responsibility in life and without it theres going to be no job for that person who decided to drop of the activity they got asigned.  ",4.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F6AA88DC9ACA,"Although it may seen that ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"" it actually right. But having something that you master it doesn't mean that trying something new you would failed. But giving up it's what would cost you to never grow, for example changing your life style by eating right and going to the gym is not going to be easy but you still going to give it a try. The reason why is that we want to challenge our self in a new environment that we never thought our self would be challenge our self in. Another reason would be that trying something new mean that we are looking for something that we would enjoy or like.

For example we teach our self how to cook but we know that we never knew how to cook but that doesn't mean we are not going to give it a try. That why we try new things because we want to challenge our self in a situation that we never knew that we could solve it or give up. Another reason is that we love trying new things because we are curious if we can master it another example would be is raising a kid wondering if we got everything and teaching them what is right and what is wrong. That what we love trying new things to see if we can do it or not. That what is more important trying new things and see if we can master it because we are capable of doing thing not a computer can't do and that it trying to learn new things.

We can master anything in our way because we are willing to find out if we can do this, if can not fear it, if we got this, give our self ideas that anything we do it possible when we put our mind it nothing can't stop us. For example we got our freedom from England long time ago, we ended slaves, and we ended racism which was big in the United State. Those are the reason why we can master things even if they are hard to master but we do it for a reason, and the reason is that we love to try new things even is bad but every challenge we are giving, we master them. But there is no dough we would failed those challenge that the world has giving us. Mastering is a challenge that is difficult because there is in our lifetime were we give up and we don't want it anymore. Were our mind and our body just doesn't want it, doesn't keep trying, at some point we start calling our selves looser, quitter.

We bring ourselves down because that how we punish ourselves without physical pain but emotion pain. In our life time that we have live in this earth the most pain that brought us down was emotional pain when we give up in life and we haven't master it. That is the big challenge that we haven't try to complete because it has beating us since the beginning that we are born we haven't control our emotion and that is the challenge that we haven't master it.

For that we have issues that we aren't able to figure it out because it's hard for us to figure what make us mad ,sad, happy, but people who has master it because they did give it a try and they successfully master that does emotions that give us hard time in life. Those people are therapy who want to understand does type emotion because they want to help those people who doesn't understand why they react like that.

That what make us to try new things in life because we are curious about what interest us as human being and see if can master it so ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered keep trying new thing that you would be able to do and get your attention to it "".",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
4D3CF318797A,"Technology has came a long way of the past hundreds of years. Technology has made so many things possible for us humans, we took a man to the moon because of technology. But technology also, has its pros and cons. Us as humans, we're depending on technology way too much. People are buy clothes, and buying food without having to talk to another person.

Technology has made it so easy for people to buy things online. You can be sitting on your couch, pull out your phone, and order bananas, hammers, and a eagles beak. The next day, a drone will fly to your house and deliver it right on your door step. We don't have to leave our houses anymore, or talk to anyone. We're able to do this because, of the use of technology.

People don't even have to leave their house anymore to see someone. You can pull out your phone, and live video chat with anyone you want to see. Some people might think that's a good thing, that we'll never leave our houses again. But us as humans, we need that human interaction. Without having to leave our houses how can we travel the world, or even meet our soul mate. we're not going to be able to do that sort of things, if technology is just making everything so easy for us.

There are ways that technology is helping us like transportation, and constructing buildings. But the limitation of human contact, is due to the use of technology. We need to stop depending on technology to do simple task for us. This needs to stop before it becomes normal for people to do these sorts of things.                  ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
65131EC5DD6A,"Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of techology had positive or negative effects on people's lives.

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Because people sometime left the important stuff for be on their phone and that can distract to be preparate for any other things. Also people's due bad things like don't put attention on class or don't look their childs .However people's like to much techonology that they do all with that, we sometime are not responsible that we fight we others person's just for we cool or for be increduble. If we put limited using to much techonology we cannt effect our life and we can see that we can survive with that. but for person's who has business is more easier by using techonology. And students who need to make some homework or look for somenthing is a good choose.

Thousand of people's can a bad decition on using the techonology, because they never put a limited choosing not good decition but other's people used very well and understand that we have real life and we need to preparate for make a very well deciton, techonology had positive and negative effects.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
745F880CEFA7,When someone is asking for advice they might talk to more than one person because someone might have better advice than someone else or might have better and more advice than somebody else. I think people ask multiple people because the person who is asking for advice wants the most advice and best information and opinions from others. Another reason why someone might ask multiple for advice is that everybody has different experiences throughout their lifetime and might know more stuff because of those experiences throughout their lifetime. People might ask the elderly for advice because their wise and have lived a long life so they might know alot of information to pass on. Everybody has different opinions but hearing different opinions from others can help you make a better choice. I think you should ask your parents for advice first before you ask anybody else for advice because your parents are the one the ones who raised you and they know what's best for you. For example your parents probably told you when you were little to not to talk to strangers because they know its the best for you. Your parents also might have told you that to always tell the truth because its not good to lie. By asking alot of people for advice and hearing other peoples opinions and experiences throughout their lifetime you now know alot of information and advice from others with that you can make a better choices.,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
08B25090A80C,"Generic_Name had a job interview last week, that same day in the morning her phone fell off her bed,and it got completely broken. Generic_Name had no way to communicate with the employer; However, when Generic_Name got to the place where she was going to be interviewed,she explained what happened and it was the reason why she was late to her job interview and she was sorry for it,because her phone was really expensive Generic_Name had a bad attitude with the employer even though it was not the fault of the employer. Because of the bad attitude of Generic_Name,she had the result of not obtaining the job Generic_Name always dreamed of. Since that day Generic_Name controls her attitude and learned that a positive attitude is the key to success in life even if we are having hard times. If an individual thinks that a positive attitude is not the way to be successful relax because there are a lot of ways to show him or her that a positive attitude is the success in life. A positive attitude is the key to success in life because of better opportunities and a non-stressed life.

To begin with, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because of better opportunities. Society might have no problems at school or at any place they go if they have a good attitude and know how to control themselves. For example, my cousin Generic_Name since she was little was a really good student, and always had great comments from her teachers because of her attitude and effort at school. Last year when Generic_Name graduated from Generic_School, a lot of important people offered her to work with them because they have seen the way Generic_Name was a great students, even though when she was on her bad days she always had a good attitude. Some people might say that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life because it can lead people to have some opportunities of good works and also to have friends, but they are wrong because having a good attitude all the time will help people to have greater opportunities at work as well at school. Also that people could never have any complain for having a bad attitude because they know how to control themselves.

To continue,a positive attitude is the key to success in life because of a non-stressed life. Having a positive attitude can lead people to have a better future in their lives. Also, my neighbour Generic_Name used to live in California where he had no friends because Generic_Name was really shy. Since Generic_Name moved to Virginia with his Mom Generic_Name and his brother Generic_Name,he have met a lot of people at school and also in his neighborhood, which now they are friends. Generic_Name used to be really quiet because he was scared of what people might think about him, but lately he have made a bunch of new friends and have a happy and non-stressed life he no longer thinks about what people is going to judge him;Nevertheless, Generic_Name have learned that a good attitude of the key to success in life. Generic_Name is happy because his son has a great attitude and he is doing better at school now.

To conclude, because of better opportunities and a non-stressed life, a positive attitude is the key to success in life. A positive attitude help teachers,students,employers,employees as many others. A good attitude is the result of a great education and by that attitude you can reach good thing in life, some things you never thought you could have. Next time, when an individual who is always alone it is because that person is just shy but might have a great attitude, go and talk to him and you will know how awesome that person is.",3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
ADF1112226F4,"Do you agree with Albert Einstein when he said ""imagination is more important than knowledge""? I think that is true because if you have now imagination than how are you going to get knowledge. I agree because Albert Einstein had to have a strong imagination to become really smart, Albert Einstein lived through a lot so he knows a lot, Elbert Einstein is smart.

To begin with, I think that Elbert Einstein had a strong imagination because he was one of the smartest human beings to ever live. He was really smart that is why I think he said "" imagination is more important than knowledge"" he had to have a strong imagination to think and become really smart. Elbert Einstein created and invented a lot of thing and to make to things he needed a strong imagination.

In addition, Elbert Einstein was really old and really smart so he lived through a lot as a human not as genus. He also learned a lot from being a genus but he did live through a lot and he was a human.

Also, I think that Elbert Einstein created cool inventions and gadgets from his imagination he needed a wild imagination to think and create a lot of cool things that is most likely why he said this quote. He was smart but he used his imagination too.

In conclusion, I agree with what Elbert Einstein said because he had a strong imagination because he was one of the smartest people, he lived through a lot, he was really smart. I think you should agree too because you can use your imagination to become a genus at you school, job or even your house o with your family. Use your imagination.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
58A9AE90D009,"What I think about extending two more hours in school would be a bad idea because school can be very stressful and give you so much work that can cause people headaches and won't even have time to do their homework at home and they would get really tired and sleepy that looks like their brain will explode with so much work they do and they would have health problems too a person would not resist too much of their body either.

My opinion about it is that they should keep the five-day school week instead of four because I think it's really unnecessary to add more hours to school and take one more day of off. I think if that happens they will take the time from other students time with what they are doing outside of school and activities. The idea would be very pointless and useless. I think five days of school is better than four because five days they have seven hours of school and it's shorter. For me I would get really stressed with more hours of school be more hours means more work to do and I would get really tired of doing so much work and I would get really exhausted. People would have many things in their head and worry too much about it that would cause so many stress and a headache and it would not be good for them.

I think there is some other way to conserve energy and resources than adding hours to school and work. For example they should take care of the earth by recycling and cleaning the water and save up energy. I think it is the best idea to conserve energy and resources because it really important to take care of the earth and learn how to take care of the earth. Many people these days are careless and would prefer to do it in another way like adding more hours to school which is not helpful and that won't do nothing of helping energy and resources, so we have to do another way to conserve it. What I think people should use their brains and do what's best for the whole world and every around us and be helpful. Like for example restore energy would be a good idea or volunteer would be another thing to help the planet, there are so many ways you can do it and how you can do it so it would be really helpful if Everyone would join doing it.

Many people would be disappointed for adding hours because they are subtracting their time and very important things they have to do. A lot of people that over work themselves means their they would get really tired and lazy and the community would be very disappointing and out of control. Another problem would be that if they overwork and get tired and them while driving and could get into to a car accident and that's another why their are so many accidents happening lately and that is really bad so it is a bad idea.

Know one would agree to work more hours and that would cause them to have health problems and their body does not take to much exhaustion in them and that is really dangerous and would risk their life's for it, i would not over work myself if I were them that is too much to Handel and would get me sick too that my body would not take it either so no it would be a really bad idea.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
0F9FDD188673,"I like to be a pilot in the future. but I can't see with my eye's that much good, and the pilot job don't eccept that if i want to be a pilot my eye's have to be good. So I Agree with Emerson's statment. I hope in the future that I can fix my eye's that I can be a pilot.

some people disagree with that, that I can be a pilot and my eye's not good or it dosen't matter. If I don't fix my eye's I will thinking with another job that I like to be on it. I like to be a dentist but this job so hard to be a dentist and it take's like 5-8 years to be a dentist but I will do my best to get a job that i like it and the job get for me more money. If I'm going to be a pilot it takes just 2-5 year to be a pilot and it's not that hard. I like this job so much so i'm going to do my best to be pilot in the future. I have three brothers Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and Generic_Name. Generic_Name like to be a Doctor, Generic_Name like to get something in the Computer's, Generic_Name like to be engineer and lastly I love to be a pilot.",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
A53DEC5A2DE8,"Think about the benefits of working with group or alone. Well for me working with group is better. The other day i was working with a group on some geometry work in my math class. It was actually very helpful and successful. Everyone in the group was able to understand the new topic. We started talking about it and help each other understanding it. Group working is so much better than working alone.

Working in a group is great because they can help you out. And you can help them out. It is way better than working alone. They can help you understand and explain it to you more how they understand it. You can work on class assignment with your group. You can ask them to help you if you are struggling. They will try to make you understand if they can. They can tell you the wrong and help you correct it.

The second, reason why working in group is better. You are doing an class activity it's more fun if you work with a group. You can work faster and better with a group on an activity. If you are working alone on an activity and you feel it is boring. You might take a lot of time to finish because it is boring. And if you don't know what to do because you were not paying attention you group should know and tell you what you need to do.

Another reason, why working with someone's else it's better. Sometimes student don't like the teacher for some reasons and they will prefer to not ask the teacher for help. Some students rather ask their friends for help. Students may feel more comfortable asking their class mates and not the teacher. Sometimes students don't really understand the teacher very well. Just because of the way she or he teaches. Most student find that is okay and don't let the teacher know that. Because they are not very comfortable with the teacher.

Final, that was my opinion on the benefits of working with a group or working alone. For me i can work with the any group and without distracting the other people in the class. And i actually like working in group because it's fun. Working in a group it's more easy to do the class assignment and take less time. I enjoy working with friends because we can talk about other things to and get to know more people. It's always nice meeting new people and getting to know them. And if they are from different country or different culture. It is clear for me i would work with a group than working alone.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
7A0A80926A0D,"""Unles you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow"".

Yes you will never grow becuase you will never have now experience, that will need in the feater I agree with author Ralpn Emerson for three reasons. First, whan you try a now things you are going to have different naleg about a laset of different thing . Sconed , whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. Thired , whan you try to see other people and how they act and thiar coolter you will now how to talk with thim without disrspact thim . Lastly, that why we sholed alwase laren.

Whan I try a now things i alwas laren some thing now .

For exampe, whaen i came to the U.S i did not have enafe naleg about what is in the U.S so that was a issue ror me learening the language i shragl becuase did not go beyond what i have already mastred. Than ,whan i staret to learen more about the language i start to go beyond my noleg. Allthuo life is hared and learening is hared but som times whan you learen a lote you get a lote .

whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. First , people wode love to talk to you and now you. Sconed, whan you in school you will have a lots of ideas about what class to take . Thired, Knowing a lot healp your famliy tow . finely that why haveing a lot of ideas healp you.

Whan you try to see how other people and how they act and how thiar coolter is you now how to talk with thim othout disrspact thim. first, whan you you lisone to people and how the talk you going to larn e what cined of pirson he is and how to talk with thim . Sconed , you can choos the prson that you are going to love from larning about how the siseaty work . Third, bieing nice to every one mens you are goning out and seeing other people . and, that whay i agreed with the auther Ralph Waldo Emerson becuase going beyond what you have already mastered is laring .",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
33E7F1C7E399,"Summer should be normal for students and people. summer should be to enjoy with your family and friends. summer is there to have fun go shopping ,swimming ,and go vacation. summer is not go be there fro long time because winter is coming so you have to spend time with anybody. Some people doesn't spend time with there friends or family because they have to work or do some thing important thing.

Summer is one of the best weather that could happen because is not cold but is warm you can go to the beach to have fun. people like summer is one the best thing that can happen because there water to play ,go camping ,and hiking. On summer there like thousand thing what to do like going to another state ,and spend the night are your friend house. Kid like to spend time with there friends some of the time sometime with there family or with there aunt or uncle. Summer is fun like really fun because there no school get to stay home and play video games.

Summer is to stay home or get out of the house and have some fun with your friends. when summer comes the the flowers from the tree grows and grows and turn in to fruit. When winter come come the flowers from tree falls ,and it get cold. Summer is go be there every year so we can have fun with friend and family or go out town to visit your all old parents. sometime summer can rain a lot because is is warm weather it can rain when is cold too.

School ends on summer because they let kids have to have some fun and teachers can have break to. Some time summer can get to hot it can get to 100 digressed even more. some people invited to have pool party in the summer. people like summer because they can do what they want like go fishing ,camping ,and go diving. Summer can be good or bad because it depends what do you do wrong.

Summer bring as the fair where there are avouch of game in there so you can go with your friends or family. Summer is good weather so you can go swimming your friends and family. In summer they open the pools can go to the river and swim and other thing to do. Many people go to visited there family or they go to placed like California ,Generic_City ,and Florida. summer is the best thing that you can do because is go be there each year and do something that you want to do.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
AE2E6B3472DB,"A Former British Man a Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ''

success consists of going from failure to failure wi t hout loss of enthusiasm

.''

is like saying that people are more afraid of success that they're are in failure. what Winston is talking about that is okay to lose once in awhile as long you have that smile in your face that you already a winner of yourself, like playing a soccer game but your team loses but you lose as a team, failing a quiz you just gotta do better in the retake you can't give up on something that is precious to you. People make mistake and people learn from it just try to do better next so you can succeed on winning. Some people are scared to take the chance to succeed because that taking a risk of failure and people have but you won't know if you try. Winston Churhill want people to never give up on your dream. if you learn more about the subject you won't got no worried about a thing. Once I was little I have a hard time learning and participating in class that my mother and father didn't knew about the time that they constant working to provide us a house,food,and clothes. I have to restart kindergarten because of my failure that I didn't bother asking my mother about was my mom knew about they took me to a doctor to check on me that I have a learning factor my mother was worried that I have to transfer every school that have a program for me then there was one school that help me learn better communicate with teacher answering question when I first started highschool I look back when I was little and started to laugh and think I have so many chances to succeed in life that one day I'll go back to the teacher and say thank you for everything so I have to go through of failing but never lose my hope of becoming a winner. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
F90A25704212,"Have you ever been in class unsure about what your learning even though you have been paying attention? I'm sure that would be majority of upper classmen students. I can admit I've have been several of times, In my opinion distance learning is a wonderful idea. Students can move at their own pase , you can replay the lesson video as much as needed , and it will prevent you from failing a class.

School can be stressful expecially when you miss a day and you feel like your behind on everything. Then when the teacher explains it to you , If you don't understand you might not want to ask for him/her to repeat it again. This can be avoided by the power of distance learning you'll be able to have classes online so you can move at your own paste. You wouldn't have to worry about asking a staff or classmate what you missed. Also you can take notes and do your classwork whichever way it works best for you.

However some students are visual and independent learners they focus better when they work by themselves. Working in a group at times might not always be the best option. When reviewing for a test or quiz you can go back and reread ,study, and take notes on whatever you're struggling with. Those notes can be reviewed as much as you want. If you're a type of person that has to have things repeated to you multiple times this is a great opportunity for you.

Last but not least , Are you failing a class due to not having enough time to turn your work in? You would probably not have to worry about that anymore because you can do your work at anytime. In class you are given a time limit you have to turn in your assigment. When your doing it online yes im sure there is a due date but you're not told what time your suppose to start at. If your at sports practice or have any free time you can start working on it. In my opinion this will prevent you from failing a class because you can turn it in whenever your ready to.

To sum it up this is an amazing opportunity alot of students should be looking to attend. If your school is offering this to you I highly recommend it. It can keep you on track and motivate you to complete and turn your work in on time so you don't fall behind in class. You can move at your own paste without anyone rushing you. And lastly, you can replay and reread anything as you would like with no limits. This is a big help for students who want to reach their goal of earning a diploma.             ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
39F578D9212E,"An enjoyable place where you can go spend time outdoors is going to the beach because you get to do a lot of stuff. For example, you can get to spend time with your family and have fun with them or with your friends. You may be thinking that the beach is somewhere where you can go and come back that same day but what you don't know is that you can go to a hotel and enjoy the hotel and the pool. You can go eat anywhere you want there is a lot of options you can choice from. There is a lot of fun things you can do for example you can go to the haunted house, the carnival, and the art work they have so you can take pictures with your family or other members. The beach is a place where you can go to relax and get sun tan and go swimming.

The reason why you should go to the beach is because you need to have some fun time and not be stress about a lot of things in your life and enjoy the times you have with your family and capture memories with them. One of the most importance part of going is to be able to not be bored at home and do nothing. The beach is a place where you can walk around and see things you haven't seen and also taking pictures of where you have been. You can go to restaurants or you can bring food of your own. You could be able to meet new people you haven't meet before. There is a lot of clubs at the beach you can go there and dance and have some drinks. You could go to the store and buy clothes,hats,sun glasses, and more.

The second reason why you should go is because they have good hotels you can stay in and you would want to pick a hotel that is right next to the beach so you could see a good view of it. There are these bikes you could ride with your whole family and you would all be able to piddle on it or you could bring your own bike or any other stuff you might want to ride. The waves of the beach is cold but it is worth it because the waves are really big and can push you really hard but that depends if you could swim. You could also go to the pool that is in the hotel and be there if you don't want to go to the beach. Sometimes, people would want to be at the beach and stay at the hotel for like two weeks or more but I consider you being there for like about four weeks because you would be eligible to discover new things or see new things.

The last reason would be go when it's 4th of July because when they have fireworks at the beach it looks really pretty and nice. The beach is a place where people could get married or have a romantic time there and they enjoy doing that. There are people that do there shows there like to get money for doing stuff for living. I would want to actually live at the beach because I don't need to go from where I live to the beach because it's really far away but anyways, at the beach there is a lot of great stuff there and nice people and I know for a fact that you should diffidently consider going and not over thinking it.

In conclusion, I recommend you going because you are going to have a lot of fun especially with your friends and family and you would remember that in your spending time outdoors you had a good time. Don't forget the hotels,the food, and the pool are such amazing part of why you should go to the beach.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
08FAE6E0BDCC,"Image having to do a activity for school. Your principal is making everyone do an activity and it is not good because some kids need rest and some do not like to do and kind of sport or activity. Also kids need time to relax and do things they want to do.

Kids need rest because they already do lots of work and they need to have energy to do any activity. Also kids like to rest and not do activity's resting make them do activity's so they need to rest. Kids like to hang out with there friends and talk when they do activity's they will not be able to talk to each other and hang out is like resting because they are not going to run and do stuff they like having fun talking to each other. resting is a good thing for kids because they need energy for other stuff.

A lot of kids like to play indoors and not do activity's. kids like to play video games with friends and they have fun. Also there are kids that dont like going outside and like staying in inside they can read play games play with friends because they might have not any interest in anything or not might have many friends to play with in an activity. Kids don't like doing stuff that have to do with activitys they like doing there own thing.

Your princpal makes you do activity for school. kids need rest and some kids just don't like doing activity's. I think making themdo an activity is not good if i was the principal i would let them do what they want to do if they want to stay insidethats ok if they are tired thats ok if they want do club they can.                          ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
F758E275C993,"Generic_Name

Todays technology allows people to do many different tasks without having contact with others in a positive way. Technology today is now making it easier for us humans to do things and also showing us what the furture could look like in a couple of years. Why would this be a negative thing ? if people are just trying to make are lives easier. For an example lets say you need to get some where but fast and you don't have a ride there is now a app where you send your location and give the address to place you need to go and somebody will take you. Technology is such a great thing and its becoming greater each and everyday.

There are many different types of apps that you can download on your phone today for anything. lets say that your at home and your really hungry but you don't want to leave the house you can download an app called grubhub that will make sure you dont miss a meal. what is grubhub its an app that delivers food from anywhere. All you do is tell the person what you want to eat the location of the place to pick up the food and your address so they know where to drop it off. And its that easy this thing that we call a phone can make all this happen with a little bit of typing. these apps are for free too but it may cost for the food but not everything is free in life.

Computers are also a big part of technology. Computers and laptops are used everyday could be for school for work for anything. Computers help out a lot in school for anyone who needs to do research and any type of information he or she did not know about. Laptops are great aswell its a computers that folds and is for on the go great for anyone that travels a lot or somebody that works on computers alot. Laptops are becoming better everyday there are even touch screen ones some that fold backwards and its crazy to think about because what do you think is going to happen a couple years from now technology is perparing us for the furture.

Technology is making our lives easir each and everyday. With out technology I wouldn't be able to take this take I wouldn't be able to the police if I'm in danger. Its a great use for us humans this will never be a negative thing to me. We need technology in our lives so we know whats going on around us. Technology is a use and it always will be.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
5C3757B0C6AE,"I agree that having a positive attitude is key to be successful in life. Having a good attitude in any working space is key to any job also you have never heard anyone in a party with a bad attitude and to be more honest with you having a good attitude anywhere will help you a lot. I agree just not only for having just a good attitude but to make some one smile and the bad vibes go away I'm grateful that I have a good attitude. Also maybe having a good attitude in the work place will speed up your day so you could go back home and do nothing and relax. I work at a restaurant and I feel as in if i have a bad attitude at work time goes slower but when i have a good attitude at work time goes so fast. It's your first impression of a person it help if u have a good attitude it will help you on the long run. Make a situation for bad to good for a hundred to zero fast which is a good thing.

Then, I think that having a good attitude at work will help a lot of people in the long run because you could find your future wife and you could find someone famous or better things. And most people don't think about how having a good and not bad attitude will benefit them. Having a good attitude will take you places were people could never think of and will help up be successful in like get a good job, get promoted,then get to the top and make lots of money. I know a lot of people want to be rich and make lots of money so got good attitude in life some don't. everyone have their own ideas and have their own perspective of each other. Lots of people are negative in the world most people have it the hard way became the are poor dont have anything more to live for but that is wrong people you need to keep your head up no matter what happens.

After that, I think that I also said that being kind to people and giving them a smile will cheer a lot of people up, and make the world a better place and make everyone be grateful for what they have. People dont want to be by themselves they want to be with other humans and wants a better for everyone. In all honestly people should work for a better work space and have a good attitude. Having a good attitude is extremely good for work place and more. I think that people need to know whats bests for them and there heath. I also imagine lots of people with good attitude but there are a lot of people with bad attitudes.                                   ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
D9E77CD4506B,"Name: Generic_Name

Date:

03/15/19

The benefits to working in group or working along.

The benefits to working in group are the we can't share information with other's to help amswer the problems the we working in and if i working alone i has to put my on ideas. My tree reasons to working in group are we will working all together, we get more support of the other people that are in my group and my last reason are the i will feel more relax and the tree reason that a think if i will working alone are the i has to support my ideas by my self, and if i get confuse nobaby can't help me, and my last reason are the i will feel more frustrartion to finish the work or if the idea the i put are not good. The benefit that i think can't help the student more are to work in group because we can't support other.

My first reason about working in group are the we work together and can't be more easy to finish the work in time to learn how work in group we will share some information to my group and all people that are in my group has to share some imformation i will feel more motivation to other's.

My second reason that i put the we can get more support because if we work in group we can't help each other's we lear to work in group that why a like more to working in group because some time if someone no know the answer we can't help hi or her to answer the question.

my last reason that i put in my essay are the we feel more relax because we can't not get frustrartion because the other's people that are in my group can't help us if sometime we can't get confuse to some preoblems they can't give us support to answer the problems .

That are my tree easons that why i likes to working in group that why i don't likes to work alone because some time can be more frustrartion to us and sometime we can't get more homewoork we can't give and get support because we work in to a group i think that is more easy to work in group because we can't support that ideas and we check if that ideas is good and not and coul be lest work to the other's because we can't share like one person do something and the other's person another thing about work that can't work .              ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
03C9E7A15C42,"I think that what

Auther ralph waldo wrote i dont agree becuase he said that what you already masterd you will never grow i think that with the more you mastered the more you will know in life those things that you had masted are things that you want to do and get in life. you will understand more things like the more important thing like when you mastered drving one of the most important thing to master in life that is the first gole u want to master in life and when u do youy feel like you can do more thing once you have you get your drivers licens.

Or even as a kid when you mastered a video game you want to keep going keep getting challeged on each part of the game and when you finished on you buy another one and it keeps going even when you die on the video game you still try to keep going on unless you get fusterated and mad and you just give up and quit. Unless you keep trying you master the video game.

The things that i had mastered was the most importent one was driving its was hared for me just to get my permit and i guess it grow on me beacuase i want to do more in life i want to be able to help my family and do what i can for my sisters and brother and my mom. Like out of all the thing i had mastered i say that is one of the thing i want to do becuase be able to go to callege be some thing in life. so i say the more you master the more you grow and know as a person.

the reason why i think that the more you master the more you grow its becuase out of all the things that i had gone throw i realised that as im getteing older more and more chaleges that i will have to master will come my way in the future thing that i will want to master. i say this is why they make kids go to school so they can learn more things so that we can be challged and master things as we go throw school so we can see the type of person that we want to be in life so that we can face challeges thats whay i say the more things we master the more we grow so that we can learn from those thing.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
AC0AAA109FA6,"They should require to perform community service because why will take time from my friend for community service. It will not take time from you guy just by doing that community service because it must take some time to learn a community service by telling are principal that we could do the community service. For that he could believes on us that we could do community service like other people from other elementary school. the principal said, that the community service will be due by in two week but we are go to perform the community service inside the GYM for all the students could hear us and see us said, are community service",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
81946793B89A,"Have you always wondered how your parents accomplished what they have for your future, How famous people like for example singers and world wide company's became so influential to the world. Well Thomas Jefferson once wrote ""Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Now when you think about it, is it beneficial if your always doing something or do you think inactivity also serves a purpose?

In my point of view I have to agree on what Thomas Jefferson has stated. You can't accomplish something without working for it and I will be listing examples on why I believe in a strong way that if you keep doing something you'll be able to accomplish what you want.

My number one example is my parents, Of course its unthinkable that your parents want you to have the best future that you can get but have you ever asked on how they got to this point in life. My parents are heroes for me in a lot of ways but the most important one is how they never stay idle. they work nonstop to make sure my future is bright. They even left their home country so I can have a better life here, They never stayed idle even until this point and they've gotten pretty far.

Second example would be singers, In this day in age believe it or not singers have great influence in this world. That's because a lot of singers known to man never stopped singing or dancing. They always worked hard to become the number one or wanting to be someone in general that people would look up to. Like Micheal Jackson, Even when he sadly died to this day people still praise him for what he made in the pop music world. Or Snoop Dog and his ability to rap really fast which people gave him the title of rap god. There's a lot more people that have changed the world because of music but I think they had the highest impact.

Now the last example is company's and their founders per say. Car company's, or company's in general had or have someone who started it all, One big example would be Ellon Musk and his Tesla car company. After he made Tesla the best electronic car company to date he decided to keep moving forward with his plan to go all green. His made commuter vehicle and now his focusing on diesel trucks so there can be less pollution in the air and more safety for the drives. His making a lot of impacts in the world because his not just standing around waiting for someone else do it for him. I think I've said enough and stand by my opinion that if you are doing something you will accomplish what your wanting in the future like how this other people have just like Thomas Jefferson wrote.                    ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
DBAB680CBC5D,"Dear, principal

I think we should not allow the student to bring there cell phone to school because they only use it to play or text that why peoples grade are low and 10% of people are failing. I know a lot of kids in my class that are failing. Kids in my class surely text a lot to the other kid in school. That why I think that we should not allow cell phones",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
E45C9BFE63FA,"THOMAS JEFFERSON WROTE, ''determine never to be idle.. it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing, I believe this because it is logical and i have experience and i have a personal topic to share.

in life you will not know everything so that why

I think might be to find out what they doing but, some people knows many things about him no matter what but is so many things that they can do things in this world and if he do something very important that people does't know about they can ask to other people that they should know about Thomas Jefferson...

conclusion

I have a personal story to share about Thomas Jefferson how he determine to never to be idle and how he talks about accomplish that if more we do are always doing something alse more important that why

When I was 10 years old and i was live in Generic_City i saw this topic. about Thomas Jefferson and I decide to study and be prepare because it important and have more chance to do many things to accomplish when we don't be prepare we're not going to do something in the life and the chance to have opportunity like this is do something to find out all that Thomas Jefferson did.

I have shared this topic about Thomas Jefferson because all the experiment that I have learned about all the things that he never Determine to be idle and also it is wonderful how he accomplish so many things, to copare when not do anything ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
A1DC92E4E3C8,"In the United States, the limitation to human contact due to technology has had a positive effect on people's lives. in mordern times, technology has been very helpul to everyone. Technology performs multi-tasks without physical contacts with others. Due to this, people don't have to go to stores to get groceries and other materials. This is especially convenient for older ones because they are weak and stressing themselves could cause heart diseases and even death. But now they sit home and order anything, saving their health.

Secondly, technology has gone to the highest level. Today one could stay at home and socialize with friends and family without physical contact. Technology has provided social media apps making it easier to communicate without making human contact. Besides communication, people feel safer talking about their rights, the government and politics in general on social media than in public. In cases of emergency, social media has been proved to be the fastest way of saving lifes, accidents, and most importantly many deaths.

Obviously, technology has made it possible for kids who don't like school, and are poor learners at school due to the nature of the environment to learn online at home giving them another opportunity to become something great. Even though they don't make physical contact with friends, they are provided a better learning environment, less stressful activities, and the motivation to learn more and become a contribution to the society's well being which evryone today wants. Again this brings us to the good part about social media, though kids may not have physical contacts with friends, they have the social media.

Big Thanks to technology, there might not be human contact but it is going to the positively change peoples lives. The world will be a better place.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
52F9582F9C86,"Every student should have the opportunity to be involved in extracurricular activities for them to enrich their educational experiences. Here are some reasons why they should be involved in activities, when they're involved in activities they have the opportunity to do different kind of stuff outside home, school, and even work. They also learn how to be independent and responsible. Also being in extracurricular activities could also help the students health.

First, when students are involved in activities outside school and home, it gives them the chance to experience different things outside school, home, or even work. They learn different kind of things. Things they wouldn't learn in school. For example during school they learn about math, science, history, and english. When they're home they do nothing but homework and help around the house some students have to work. If they're involved in activities, they have the opportunity to experience different kind of stuff for example: if a student decided to do a sport they would learn about that certain sport and they would also play it and enjoy it with a team. If they play a sport they would have to also practice at home, but not verse others or be in a team to practice with.

Second, students learn how to be more independent when involved in activities. For example, when I decided to join figure skating I wasn't independent, I didn't really know how to do things by myself, and when I joined at first it was kind of hard because I needed help with everything but as time passed by I started to learn how to be more dependent. I started doing almost everything by myself without any help, I was more dependent at home, school, and figured skating. Being involved in this activity, also taught me how to be more responsible. When doing activities you need to learn how to use your time wisely because you will need time for school, homework, family, and the activity you're involved in. Being involved in an activity is a good way to learn how to be responsible, how to be independent, and how to manage your time wisely.

Last, joining an activity can help with your mental and physical health specially if its a sport. Joining an activity is a good way to distract yourself from school, home, or work. This is because you will be thinking about the rules of the activity or about the point of that certain activity. It also helps your physical help meaning that it helps you exercise and it helps your body do what it needs to do. Being involved in a sport is a good way to help you exercise and distract yourself from other things. Being involved in activities such as sports or school clubs allows you to enjoy that time. If its something you really like then its something you can look forward to after having a bad day or a stressful day. When I had a bad day I would always think about skating and what I should do to make my jumps better. I would also go to the skating ring and practice, this helped me be more active and helped my physical health too. Being involved in a sport or any other activities is a good way to help students look forward for things.

Some people may argue that schools should control student involvement in extracurricular activities because some students don't have time to do school assignments but that shouldn't be their problem, that would be the students problem because students should know that if they join more than one activity they will still need to do school assignments such as homework or projects. Students should learn how to manage their time and use it wisely. Students and families should control the student involvement in extracurricular activities.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
A22EECAB91E9,"I support that schools should follow the same model as the business model who have adopted a four day work week to conserve energy and resources, energy, and extending the school day two hours, this kind of model could make them feel better to attempt to class, and start taking action about conserving energy and and think about our future there could be a day when our energy and resource comes to a end for humanity if we dont take actions.

However they should considered that energy and resources benefits us and the world, we mostly need energy in everything to survive and resources its a natural source of wealth or revenue that enhances the quality of human life, if businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours to conserve energy and resource for their future, my school should follow this model because i think schools are the most who spend and waste energy and resource by their thousands of students that attempt there.

With a four-day school week , student would at least get rid of depression which adds unnecessary stress, they will have a one break day to do their homework and assignments without staying up all night just to finish it, at the same time it will benefit the environment by just having a four day school week , it will be harder for them to adapt for a longer days of school and a shorter week of school, some of them will not adapt to it but still it would help them to be more time at home with their family instead of be at school stressing.

Whatever, If parents and students got the benefit of having a day off, parent will have the time that they didnt have before with their kids they will more hours of work and school but still it may help them to have a better connections, and at least they would have a day off stressing and worrying about their work and assignments.

In Conclusion, cutting one day out of school would be helpful for young teenagers who are studying and working at the same time to help their families, and it would conserve much energy and resource than before, making our environment greater by conserving energy and resource in only four days of work for adults and four days of school for teenagers who attempt to any school.      ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
60D9DD69CE8D,"Generic_Name

March 14, 2019

Writing SOL

Where is one place you would like to visit?

I would like to visit Florida because they have really nice weather.

Florida is something special to me because I have family in Florida.

The place I would visit is my grandfather grave because my grandfather had died last year

To, begin The reason why I picked Florida is because I have really nice, cool family in Florida.

My grandfather had dies last year after he had fell and hit his head on the ground.

He is special to me because if it was'nt for him I would not be playing soccer right now.

Every time I score a goal i always do a celebration for him.

I have something valuable of his and that is the gold chain that I got on now that he gave me and I had never took the chain ever since he gave it to me.

I will take off this chain the day I die.

I had promised him that I will love soccer forever and go to college to play soccer.

The college that I'm going to is Generic_School.

The reason why I would like to go to this college is because I had went there for a scholarship and I had got the scholarship and they said that I am really good for my age.

Here go some tips if your not good at soccer you should go outside and practice makes perfect.

If your not good at it you should try I mean it is really not a hard sport if you think about it.

If someone say that you suck let them keep on telling you that for me I will take that as motivation.

The reason why I love soccer so much is because of my grandfather he loved soccer just like me.

Everytime I had went to Florida to go visit family me and my grandfather we would always watch soccer games and tell me some formation to play when I grow up.

The favorite things that my grandfather love to do was drawing, playing soccer and teach me some new moves.

Every morning we would wake up he will always take me and my brother to waffle house and we would tell some stories to me and my brother about what he did when he was growing up.

When he had fell and went to the hospital I was not but when my mom face time my aunt he found out that we could not move body shoulders down and then he had to get some brain surgies and all that then the week after all that he had died and we face timed my aunt and he prayed on the phone and we all was crying.

I had a soccer game the day after he died and I had scored 6 goals and every time I had scored I had always kissed my hand and point it up to the sky.

After the game I was crying because I was proud of my self that I played a game with all that stress over my shoulders and I said to my self I did that for my grandfather.

Then right after the game my mom had came to me and started crying because I told her that I was going to score 6 goals just for my grandfather and I did what I said I was going to do.

That night I was praying and telling my grandfather that I had scored 6 goals just for him and I was saying to my head that I was going to do that more often.

My next soccer game I had scored 5 goals but every time I go on the pitch I had always kissed my chain and touched the ground and point at the sky and I still do that today.

My soccer game in 2 more weeks and I am going to do what I need to do to take my team to the championship and I will play all my soccer games just for my grandfather.

All the soccer games I play they will always be for my grandfather and he will never forget that and if I have to do anything just to get some goals I will then just for him.

When I was in Florida my grandfather had bought me a soccer poster and a soccer jersey of my favorite soccer player.

He had got a jersey customize for that say my last name and my favorite which is number 7 and that is my favorite soccer player number to.

When I was little he had always send me some of his drawing and like always write a little back that say I will always love u miyo and miyo mean son.

When I was 10 years old he came down here to Virginia and he was visiting and he will always wake up at 4 o clock in the morning to go fora bike ride and when he came back he had always fix breakfast for us.

In the afternoon he will always 1 v 1 me or my brother in soccer for some money like 10 dollars but that is if we beat him do.

This why I play soccer just because of him.

Like when I get frustrated in the soccer game I will always take a deep breath and think about my grandfather and that is what always calm me down when I get frustrated.

He had always tell me if someone is talking trash always smile because that dont talk the most is the most strong ones in the game and I always tell them look at the score board.

Here go the reason why I would like to go to Florida:

Family and my grandfather grave.

I would like to go to Generic_City studios.

Go to the beach and get some nice weather.

In conclusion, Where is one place you will like to visit?

I would like to visit Florida because Florida have nice weather.

Florida is something special to me because I have family down in Florida.

The place I would like to visit is my grandfather grave. Another place I would like to visit is Generic_City studios because like your like in a movie because there are people that are dressed up as some characters.

Another place I would like to visit is the indoor soccer field and play some soccer there with some family and maybe some new friends if I meet some there.   ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
44B06B4A6D7E,"Schools offer distant learning as an option for student's who likes work from home, can there be good or bad benefits from working at home?. I think that working at home would not benefit student's, reason being home is more comfortable and relaxing .Working at a public school can help you get opportunity's with friend's or teacher's like a job or college career. Public school is more efficient because, other students can help you out on work and at home no one is there to ask for help. Talking to a teacher in person can be so much more helpful then on a computer . Staying after school is a big benefit to people who prefer public school because you can get work done that is needed, but at home I feel like you can't get the same help you need on the work.

Working from home can have its benefits like being with family more often. Working from home can be challenging for some people because home is more comfortable therefore the student would become more lazy and get bad grades. One thing about working at home is you would make your own schedule which could be flexible to your own time. Students who work at home would have no one to help them out with work outside of class which would be hard on the student

Students who go to public schools will benefit more then the students that work at home. Public schools bring more opportunity's as distant learning would not get as many . This issue could be solved depending on the student, some students like to be at home and some like to go to public schools . Public schools help student's with college information and helps the student choose his path in life. Working in a public school environment, helps more students do better in there classes makes them more productive. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
4DD1ED4D20D2,"A science experiment is enjoyable and educational because you are in a group some times and you are have fun and you are learnig new stuff. Other school subjects should do that because people pay more attention to it nobody likes having a teacher sit there and give you a packit to learn nothing all day. Science expreiments are the best because you see whats happening and your getting it more. It makes it better to get a hands on activty then just looking at a book all the time. I feel like more people have As than Fs in science because the experiment helps people alot. Over all its just a better than to do because helps peoples grade helps them understand what they are trying to teach them.

I personally like science expreiments more than any other classs becasue it helps me have an A in that class. Other people like it because people in my scince class always get happy when the teacher says we do have an expreiment to do. Overall i feel like expreiments are more educational and fun activtys",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
DF058CBE24A6,"The people are discussion about the use of technology has positive or negative effects on people's live, some people think technology allows people to complete many task without having contact with others, other people think the technology is the cause to the limitation of human contact. The technology it is positive effects because have many advantage, it is a big help in the people's live.

In the actuality, we live a life busy with many works, sometimes we have others commitments. The teenagers have to much homework and some teenagers have work after school, and finally we have a little free time in the night, but all this is more fast and easy thanks to technology, because the technology make more easy some things, for example if the homework was in paper without technology, we need go to the library for buy pictures, colors, history and more materials and that take more time and we need wait for somebody, because we need ride, finally without technology we are spend money and that take more time.

However, some people think the technology has negative effects and we don't should be use the technology because when the family want eat together sometimes everybody use the cellphone int he table, and they don't have a good relationship, but the technology is big help for many things, for example the technology is big help for contact with friends or family who lives in other place and the technology help when we want got to other place and we don't know where is the address so, we can use Google maps, everything you need, we can find with technology.

The technology is a bigger help in the life for example, I have family and other country and also I have friend and different state, and I miss my friends and my family, and I love talk with them, but I use technology for communicate, we can talk and we can see each other and we are so happy, when is my birthday my family always call me in the morning they call me with face-time and the same with me when is grandmother's birthday I call her, and we feel happy, but the technology is more help and different places, also I use the technology for located to my dad, everyday my mom need pick up to my dad and his work so, we use Googler maps, it is a good help.

We can see the technology is a great help in the life, use correctly you will have good result,

the technology is positive but no everybody have a mind positive, because If we talk about scientific, doctors, physical and etc. Technology is a big help, they find the cure many illness, but everything is about use technology, we know many things about history but is also for technology, doctors have different machines for save many lives.

Finally, the technology has positive effects in the people's live, is our help, thanks to technology we feel more close persons that live in other country and always be a big help in the life in different area. The people determined how want use the technology. everybody work with technology for a good reason is because is help in our lives.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
D371D73ACCC2,"Some People Believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem,even if the work is not the students best effort. they believe that students must be self confident to learn.

I do not, i believe that if you give a student false praise then the student is going to get lazy & stop producing work with the quality and efficiency that they used too.

In truth I was just like this, I once had a teacher who put so much false hope and praise in me that i started to not care as much as i used too, it effected my social life & determination as well as my standards, intent & self-esteem, I was no longer able to spend more than five minutes on work without getting distracted or discouraged, eventually i came to terms with the fact that not all my work was gonna be perfect, but if i spent enough time on it then it would be a hundred times better.

So what is the best way to build self-esteem, well that would be hard work and dedication, lots of people think that just because they do some work they should instantly be rewarded, there work does not even need to be good, for them to think they deserve praise.

The best way to actually build confidence is through achievement's,when you accomplish something and you do it well you get this since of success unlike the half baked work most people get credit for.

Once you actually build up confidence everything in life gets easier, you start doing your home work on time, when a test comes up you would be very well prepared to get an A, your friends and teachers start to respect you more & your parents will be proud of you, but most importantly you will be proud of yourself.

In conclusion having false praise & hope is bad it lowers your standards and makes your work ethic terrible the only good way to build self-esteem is through achieving something out of hard word and dedication.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
BCEDACE63B48,"Althogh some people say that is important to adoption of a midnight weekday curfew for teenagers because is unfaily interfere in young people's lives Actually, is important to adoption of a 10 P.M weekday curfew for teenagers because it will keep them out of troubles with others people or with their family too. Also they can spend more time with their family.

Those who believe that adoption of a midnight weekday curfew for teeagers will be important have their reassons.

It will be unfaily interfer in young people's lives.

Also it breaking the laws because teenagers have freedom to do wethever they want but not bad things for example, don't do drugs or other things.

Others people think that adoption of a 10 P.M weekday curfew for teenager will be important they have their reassons too. For example, it will keep teenagers out of troubles. Also, they can spend more time with their family. My other reason it because sometime teenagers don't dou their homework because they want to go out with their friends and they forget to dou thier homewor ,and at least if they go early to thier houses they can finish up the homework.

In conclution I think it will be important the adoptionof a 10 P.Mweekday curfew because, they can be with their family. Also they can be duing other staf at home for example, duing their homework.                       ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
B110268BBFEC,"Albert Schweitzer the philosopher,physician, and humanitarian is great at motivating people by saying, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing. What he means from that is everyone behavior is different. When it comes to behavior anybody could act different. behavior influences some people. when it comes to influence it often affects a person or events. Albert Schweitzer is a very successful man and he probably accomplished that by having influence in him self and believing on what he is capable of. Say one day i was having a rough day and somebody asks me, ""hey, do you want to know something"" or if they are being very annoying your attitude and behavior is going to change into something bad. Yes behavior could change somebody attitude and that's not good and that's what he's trying to say. Albert Schweitzer is setting good examples for people who struggle and people who really needed to hear his example.

Everything that Albert said in that quote is very true. Always setting good examples are a good and great way to influence somebody in many ways as what he just told us in his quote. Albert Schweitzer probably learned in the past and maybe thats what he's trying to tell us to watch our future that is ahead of of us in time.                           ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
0D65AF80CDE7,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. People have that dont need take awareness that was insurance their self. Many people think that should be change the impression and attitude than families, friends and the world. However, because every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure and have perspective to be optimist different.

Every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure. For example, my sister dont want go to lives Generic_City and have the impression that dont need because have friends high school. the people just want to be different because dont want change have reasons that people can't change only themselves the people feels that can have more freedom and cant be change.

The people have perspective to be optimist different. For example, I like my personality is perfect but Generic_Name dont like because, she said is something genuine. Nobody can be change because is one same the people want see calm and have confidence was sure in the decisions

It has been the first impression are almost impossible to change, every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure and the people have perspective to be optimist different and Dont can change the people just have resistence.    ",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
1C911B0C2A2D,"I`m agree whit the individuality. I like when the people take whatever they wants for yours life is so cool. I have too much friend and they do the think another peoples do. I mean i like do what i`m said and what i like i don`t now.

My family is so negative when they said sometime and i don`t like because i want said sometime but they no want lisent. so i`m individuality because i want lisent to me and do the think i want.

I know to much people dependt of other and that`s no good.

The history class said too much about that because in the past the people are not indiviuality.

I think the people want more attention that why depent of other people.

The life now is to diferent of after because now the people yos depent the what said other person about who i`m look or what he said about me an all theese think.

I like who i am cause i`m a nice and all good thinks so i do whathever i wnat because i ike who is the people and i dont care what they said about me.

Yo ya nose que escribir solo sigo por que pues no se me gusta y si supiera un poco mas de ingles no pararia de escribir.

so les voy a contar sobre mi vida ya que no tengo ni la menor idea de lo que tengo que escribir ni nada.

comienzo llegue de Puerto Rico hace 2 anos y desde que llegue aqui mi vida cambio del todo.

comenze a valorar cada cosa que obtengo por que ahora se el valor y el sarificio de la vida para cualquier cosa.

solo se que apesar de todo sigo queriendo superarme y mejorar muchas cosas de mi.

no se me hace tan facil pues el idioma y las costumbres no son para nada igules.

Pero aqui sigo y seguire por que creo en mi y se que cada dia que me propongo algo lo cumplo.

No es nada facil cuando llegas y conoces personas de otros lugares algunas muy buenas y otras no tanto.

Me agrada demasiado aprender cosas nuevas y nuevos lugares solo hay una cosa que me enoja y es que apesar de no ser una persona indocumentada y pues nosotros los puertorriquenos somo parte de estados unidos y solo por el hecho de que nuestro primer idioma sea en espanol muchas personas nos tratan como indocumentados.

llevo 2 anos los cuales no an sido nada facil ya que la escuela a sido uno de mis mayores obstaculos pues es bastante complicado entrar a un salon y sentir que estas completamente solo.

pues por el hecho de no poder preguntar o comunicarte con alguien no nada solo te quedas hay viendo como todos pueden y tu no.

Unos meses despues de que llegue de Puerto Rico comenze a salirme de la escuela y hacer las cosas mal ya que no tenia apollo de nadie alli ni en mi casa.

Hoy en dia siento que no debo estar aqui por que solo siento que no es mi lugar la unica razon por la que aqui estoy es por mi mama por que quiero que se supere y poder darle todo lo que merece.

ya que cuando la necesitamos hay estuvo apesar de como era la vida en puerto rico siempre trato de darnos lo mejor.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
4DAACF629E7F,"Generic_Name

Generic_Name

03/20/19

''Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow''. Try to be better, and learn things that we don't know is the only way to grow. Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good. Having always family's motivation to keep going up, and for our learning proces. Learn from our mistakes, to grow as a person and never say never to anthing is a goog meaning of grow. For these reason i think we have to learn something beyond wath we have already mastered.

Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good, to grow. Meny people practise new different sports, to learn somethings new. take clases in the school, that we never taked to improve as a student. Have a different job, where we can improne our workers skills. For these reasons and many hothers i think try new things can help to grow and improve and what we have already mastered.

Having always family's motivation is the best support and our learning process. many people always try to think about this word ''family'' because, is the word that give averyone power to keep giong. Motivation to be learning, to help our familis is a big example of grow. Help others can have a big meaning end the others persons and for you too. For these reasons and many others i think having family's motivation is the best support and our learning process.

Keep learning from our mistakes, is the best way to grow as a person. When we try to learn something and so many times we make a lot of mistakes, that mean that something good is coming. Some people like to make correction to help, and that is one of the best wat to improve. Never say never, always keep going because that's way the mistakes exist, becuse we learn from them. For these reasons and any others, keep learning from out misrakes, is the best way to grow as a person.

In conclution, i am agree with Ralph Emerson Wrote. We have to try to do something beyond what we have already mastered. Trying new things to be better on things that we are already good. Having always family's motivation. Keep learning from our mistakes. This are many raison to be agree with Raph Waldo Emerson wrote and, if we want to grow we have to learn somethings new.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
46484B622DF0,"Many high schools have opportunities for students that want to run a business .However, before they run their business I need some learning experience from a manager. I wanted to reach out to you Generic_Name to talk about what my interests are . The school I attend at is Generic_school and I am 17 Years of age. I want to learn how to start my own restaurant ,

know how you manage the prices , how to run the business , and also how to manage people.

However, I work at a restaurant at the moment and I am trying to become a manager. Although, I heard you have to do a lot before you become one . I want to know how to run the prices and how to make deals because I dont have that much experience , and must know how to do that to become a manager. Furthermore, I researched your job and read the reviews your customers love your restaurant . They say it is not to expensive but not too cheap ,also they say it is worth a drive down their. Thats why I wanted to ask to if i could get some experience from you.

Moreover, I wanted to know how to actually learn how to run the entire business. For instance, if i wanted to open up my own business I want knowledge from an expert before I do. My school does not have the right experience that you have . Also, I had spoke to one of my classmates they told me that you do training classes for students that are very interested in business she applied and she told me that she got really far in her business and that she is already getting started. I wanted to apply for the training so I have a clue on what is going on so I can eventually start my own restaurant.

Lastly, I wanted to know how to manage people around , know how to be a right trainer for a perfect restaurant. Nevertheless, people say it is hard opening up a business if you dont have the right training . For example, I had a friend that decided to run a business without experience she did not know how to mange the line in the kitchen , the people in the front, nor the prices. Later on the business ran out of service and got shut down. However, that is not how I want to end my career . I want to go somewhere and be in a place where people will love to socialize with the waiters, and to get their orders right .Thats an important part on why I came today to experience the way of training.

Based on this talk, I want to start my own business and work on becoming a better trainer . Even though, I have no experience with running my own business, managing the people, and how to manage the prices . I hope by the end of today I can get applied and start my training so I can get some ideas on how to do things around a restaurant and start my own business by 18 years of age.          ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
79AC659EC790,"Many people believe that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Even if you always are failing in your life, but if you still have a positive attitude you can achieve your goals and be successful.

First, with a positive attitude the people are going to recognize you as a person that always like to fight with positive attitude an achieve your goals. Some persons are always trying to make you negative but you have to keep going and fight for your future. To demonstrate this positive attitude you can achieve your goals no matter what obstacle that life put in front of you.

Secondly, to be successful you need to have a positive attitude. Since the majority of people want the success, but the successful does not come over night. Something the success does not come as fast you would like. So you have to get out of your comfortable place and take control of your life without fear. The most important thing to success is to know what you really want in life and grab it with an attitude.

Sometimes it is not important to have a positive attitude to obtain success. In other words you just have to find your talent and prove in a different way that you can be successful. Clearly not everyone needs to have a positive attitude to have an accomplishment.

Surely having a positive attitude is beneficial to accomplish effectively what your proposes of life should be.

If you are not successful in something, it is because you are not trying something that is a passions of yours. you should use your talent and so you can change the direction of your goals. Obviously, having a positive attitude will help you success.          ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
85D3E5A1D64E,"Students chould not be required to take a music, a drama or an art class. Student should only be required to take classes that they actually need. Having to take those classes just adds classes you need to graduate. It is also all a waist of time if the students are not actually in to it.

Firstly, these classes are just extra classes that we dont really need. In my opnion, I believe that student should be able to graduate highschool with the classes they need. English, Math, History and Science are all classes that can support them when they go to college. If student don't take these classes they may also graduate ealier then they are supposed to. For example, I go to a highschool where I get the credits I need and I am able to graduate a year earlier. Which I think everyone should have the chance too.

Lastly, if a student is not interested in one of these classes they won't try. Even if they do try and fail then its just holding them back. They will start stressing over it when they won't actually end up needing it. Student will also consume most of their time bringing up their grade in these classes that they will not work on other classes. Then they will end up failing.

On the other hand, some might say these classes should be required because student might find interest in one of those and would like to persue it after graduating. I think that if a student is interested then they should be allowed to take the class of your choice. However, if your not then you should not be pushed to take them when you dont want to.

In conclusion, student should not be forced to take elcective classes. If they want to they should but if not then they shouldnt need it to graduate. Electives are just extra classes needed to graduate and they also have no pont if the student are not actually interested. po p",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
08FC0154E0EF,"Should be students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?

Well,I think students can be benefit this program,if they can work at home by the way of online or video conferencing,because students have more opotuniry to study like have more time to work,they don't need to walk or take a bus to come school,can be more effect to students,students can feel better when they try to stury because in his home there is not people talking a lot abuot things,but people talking not about the class.

Also student can choose the time to they can star the classes,because some students have to work in a job,so when is cold outside and students they don't like to come school,they can wort at home by the way of online or video conferencing,students can be more responseble or maybe not is depent what class of student are you,but the things is there is a lot reasons of benefit for stundents can have that classes.

Some students feel good working at home,there is not streess for them,they can take a break,they can eat and his work. They spend more the energy of his mind etc...

I think the best option for students to attend classes from home by the way of online or video coferencing to learn. But also is depent waht classes student do you are,because some student are lazy when they work at home.

Also parent can check his work in look if they do his work good or bad,take classes online is one think like because for me is more aesy to do my homework,so inconclution students have benefit from being able to attend classes from home. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,1.5,2.5,2.0
D9469EFAE287,"I'm going to start explaining and giving my opinion, Technology is one of the main reasons, why the world is changing and accommodating with the necessities that the person have, for example: we live in a community that if everything is easier is better, few years ago people had to walk hours or days to go some where, on this days the transport is a lot easier because the technology had increased,

you can use or have your own car or you,

can take the public transport and go everywhere with out problems and if you want to go to another country you can! because the air lines exist now, and you can fly to go to the country you like.

So technology have a positive effect because is helping us to make our daily necessities at home or everywhere better, a reason why i think that is because the future of the students is going to be with more opportunities to learn what they like, with out saying excuses, the help of others is not going to be that necessary with technology in your hands; no body have to advocate for you with your problems and decisions.

Technology is going to be increasing, For example years ago you could not talk to your family or friends if they were too far away from you, in that edge the only thing you could do was write a letter and send it through mail and then the people who was waiting for it has to wait like one or two months; for have that note, but all that had changed too,

When the telephone was invented people start buying and using, that invent, for the public in general the telephone start to be necessary for the people for emergencies like call the ambulance or call the police in case that something dangerous could be happen;

years before, the history of the telephone became with new ideas like you can not just call with the telephone because is has be made it smart you can take pictures play read book and more, today the telephone have a drastic change is nothing like the old phone is something different. technology had changed our way to communicate and transport and a lot more.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
196096A1C048,"I would like to become a Cardiologist in my future, so that I can save people's lives by charging them less money and nobody has to suffer like my uncle, it is one of the high-paying jobs and there are less heart surgeons in the world. My uncle was detected with a hole in his heart since he was born. But my family couldn't afford the money for the surgery, so they left him like that itself. He started feeling more pain when he studying his final years of high school. When he went through the surgery, he had exams going on. Despite the pain, he studied for his exam and passed in flying colors. Many people cannot afford the surgeries for not only heart but for many organs in their body. So, I wanted to change that and help all the people in the world, so that they can live happily at least once in their lifetime.

It is one of the high-paying jobs in the world. My family was not able to treat my uncle because of not having enough money at that time, so I wanted to earn money and save lives at the same time as much as I could. In this way, every body in my family will not be able to endure all the pain they had even before I was born. I will do anything to keep my family happy.

In this world, we have more doctors in other fields but not much in the cardio field. I wanted to change that because half of the world's population has hidden heart defection, they don't know still, like my uncle. This is because of less cardiologists in the world. When people go to the heart surgeons, the doctors ask more money then the usual charge as there are only a few doctors in that field. People cannot afford the money they ask and just leave their defected hearts, they continue doing their day-to-day works. If this continues, then people will die without even enjoying their whole life in this world. I wil become a heart surgeon and charge my patients the money they can afford. With this I will also be happy and the people who come to me will also be happy as they get cured.

In conclusion, becoming a cardiologist is one of big dreams I want to achieve in my life. I will save people's lives only by costing them with affordable money. I won't let my fellow people go through what my uncle did, so I would do anything to save their lives. People are dying across the world because there are only a few doctors in that field and they also charge them high, so I will change these people's lives by doing the opposite of what the other doctors did. I want to change this world into a better place to live because everything here is money, so i hope i can change it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
0AFAD06336F3,"Attending classes from home is not a good idea. I think it's better to attend classes at school for many reasons that I have experienced at home. It's not fun becuase you don't have any teacher to explain to you what you don't understand (well you will have a teacher but he or she wont be there personally), you won't get any help from no one if your taking the online course. Also student will not benefit it because they will be off track and instead of doing there work or what they are suppose to be doing, they will be wondering around by the internet. I defenitly do not agree that the student will benefit attending classes at home.

Having a tecaher with you in class is wonderful. There will be a point when you will have so many questions about the topic that you were discussing with the class. When your in class at school you will learn so much from teachers by giving out examples that are being giving out to the class and explaining it to you. But if your taking an online course It's defenitly more difficult for you to understand the main idea of the lesson. We won't have a teacher right next to us. We have to work indepentdently with out a friends help. It's not similar to when your in class and you ask a friend for help, they will love to help you out. Online class you won't have a friend helping you out. We have to take so many notes in order to understand the objective of the lesson. I personally had so much trouble with the online class, I had to take about 3-5 lessons each day, I had to write down notes for each lesson, I had to take at least five quizzes each day. I had to re-read the lesson like threes time in order to understand and capture the important facts. Honestly you learn how to be more organize and independent each day. I personally consider students to attend classes at school. It's not a good idea doing online class and taking so many notes.

In class, tecahers are strict when student have there electonic out whil there tecaheing or when student are working on class work. At home and doing your class work and at the same time being on your phone, your not paying fully interest on your class, Since you home, don't have a teacher, you feel like you have the right to be on your phone and laptop and do what ever you want, and not doing you work. That shouldn't be the case if you stay home and take the online class, It's because to there was a purpose. If we don't pay attention to what we are doing, and we are paying more attention to our phones we will never learn anything abiut the course. That could cause use to fail the class. Than, we got to re-teake the class.

In my opinion I will also agree to some student that wants to take the online class because you can wake up late, taking you time to eat breakfast. It's not like going to school having to get up so early, not having the time to eat, and having to chase the school bus. I'm that type of person that loves to sleep. But it's our responsibilty to do our work and tun it on time before the deadline. If you dont want to fail the class you have to save some time for your class than, you have to save some time for your self and for school work. Not all the time it will be about you. There needs to be some time for something else more important.

In conclusion, I think Student will not benefit from able to attend classes at home. It's a lot of responsibility to remind your self that have to attend class at home, do all your work and turn it in on time. We wont have a teacher with us (personally), we have to do all our work independently. That's why I think it's not a good idea for students to attend classes at home.                                      ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
66F7AD6B99E2,"I should agree because it can make your grades higher by joining sports, after school subjects or classes, and it make you more smarter and more. In my school we join sports and some after school classes and if we join some sports or some activities after school we have credits and it add up to your grades and people doesn't want to participate because they're lazy and sometimes they make up stories that the have headache, sick, stomach ache, and just skipping after school classes. And sometimes they fail some classes and teachers wants to convince them to join and stay after class and make their grades up.

I have a friend that is a bit of a trouble in school his name is Generic_Name he ask me if I could help him do his work and I said to him that "" You can join activity classes at social studies, or stay after school, and it makes your grades high and you can learn something "" And he didn't followed me, and thats why he still have one F on Social Studies.

If I was the principal I would make every students join sports and make them stay after school for those school activities, and if they have like an F in one class or a missing assignment I would call their parents and ask the parents if their child can stay after class and make their bad grades or missing assignment gone and make their grades higher and get extra credits for participating for after school activities.

And if I was the student I can convince them by letting students know if they have problems on their work or missing assignments I would let them convince to join the after school activities or stay after to do some retakes on their test or quizzes and figure out what is wrong with their grades and fix them and make their grades high. And those who doesn't want to join the after school activities will remain have an F for the 2nd quarter.

The best thing is for the students who want to try or join the team for basketball, tennis, badminton, baseball, hockey, and wrestling is the best thing because few students always wants to join or try for the team. And my two friends join for basketball and hockey my one friend named Generic_Name wants to try out for baseball this spring season and he is really good at basketball and baseball, but the only wrong for him is he has bad grades. I know that students should have good grades before you try out for the team. Generic_Name made a decision to stay after class and do the retakes and after 3 weeks Generic_Name has good grades and he try out for baseball and made the team.\

I agree that students should participate to after school classes or sports. Even me I stayed after school just to finish my work or do some retakes and get a better grade this year. Before I also don't want to go to after school classes, but when I got a really bad grades I started to go to a after school classes and finish work and do retakes and here I got some good grades.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
0316F6288791,"The new generation of students decide to take their classes in online. Although if the students take classes in online they might allow to finish high school in a short time,also they might be safe at home, they can take more free time to work or enjoy with their family, and graduate as soon as possible and start the college.

Even thought some people might say students shouldn't take classes in online because they can not learn good enough, they might be distracted or even ask any question to solve their problem, regular high school have different program to help students to be successful on their grades. In this case students need to talk with any consular or teacher in school to give some advantage and disadvantage about online class, student might need to know their benefits on what they going to do for their own good. Most people care about education, students need put some interest.

concluding with this state argument student should take any classes in online because they don't put much interest to learn any assignment, students might need to attendance to a regular high school to learn and have better apprenticeship, and abilities for their accomplishment, students in high school are more successful, they have good opportunities to get in the best colleges. Nowadays teenagers are more focus in having fun, some of them do not know that education is very important, if we want to have a good job and better future, every child need education first, but students are following good rulers.

according to this argument I have this experience my brother want to take his classes in online because he does not want to come to the school, i still in a normal high school almost at the end of the first quarter and my brother still waiting a call for his classes. He said it was his best choice but in my opinion that was not a good idea because if come to the school i learn and understand my classes, when a teacher is explaining and helping me to do my problem i feel more exciting about it. I want to be a great student and learn everything instead of be at home waiting for an acceptation for classes.

concluding with my argument students would not benefit to attend classes in online, attending to the school is more important and benefit, they take serious their resposabilities in everything,they became more measure,classes in online never going to be same as the regular school, students never are going to learn very well, teeneger really need to attendance the school for a better education.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
8484D27254B3,"Date 3/11/2020

Name Generic_Name

Test Esol writing (2010)

They look for people working with responsible and hart working, they person can dou the work well and do noy need to do tolk this person what we need to do because the responsible is good because is some time you need made responsible in the life or is more in the work because you need put you can to do some people dont"" like meke The think good because that peolpe don't have responsible and the responsible is help for you because is very Important is something very nice and if you have responsible in your work that is very well because tou has to do Make different with another person, becaus the people have an hard work this people they like to do everything because for the peolple have hard work someone who have hard-working, employer you to all work good, the best you can fybally is the employee very well more people are look for this peolpe because is the best you cvan work good and the employee has the good reason in the hard work they are good for tha.

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you we need to preparation in enyway job more then job requiring more employee work hard is more matter for the jog and for the res the peop0le who working ther and for me I can do everything and I can candidate cause this is not dificul and maube can to everything only we need to do and may examples more peolpe like hard work some time is good working and do a good job because that can help you for me Iand my reason all employee need cand working vere well I seek are a good candidate because I can do the seme think equal the another employee more then job is good the hard job is not bab work is only how ismore plural                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
6CD851AF4D16,"I think we accomplish if we are always doing something, because it will help you to learn more things, we have to always stay busy doing something if we want to achieve. Doing anything will not help you if you want to be someone in the life. One reason to stay busy doing something is that will help you to develop new things, and focus doing things that you like to do, and see your potential and be able to do anything you have in mind.

Another reason is that doing something will help you to open your brain, and think positive, also have big ideas that will be very helpful for your life, if we want to be a successful person, never have to be idle. For example if you want to be a professional soccer player you have to train and work very hard everyday on it to get it, practice skills, develop your abilities. If you just watch videos on YouTube and don't do anything, that will not help you to get it, you have to put on practice to get it.

Another example is if you will have a test and you want to get an A, you have to studies your notes and not be lazy, if you just go to take the test without know anything, you will fail the test, you have to be a positive person, feel comfortable, and believe in yourself.

In conclusion if we want to be a successful person, we never have to be idle, and we have to always stay busy doing something, always be positive, see the potential you have and feel able to do everything you want, and never be inactive, you have to be an active person to reach your goals. Also you have to believe in yourself and take off negative persons of your life.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
200671752EE0,"Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something? Yes we accomplish more if were always doing something but only if what we're doing benefits us. Why? Because if we're always doing something then we would succeed more in life, we would always be active and doing something productive. But it also depends on what kind of activities your doing and if what your doing is going to benefit you later on in the future. Because if what your doing isn't benefiting your future then there's no point of doing something that doesn't help you out for later on in life.

For example sports, if your always doing sports then that would be great way to benefit your future and also a good way to stay active. The reason I say this is because by playing sports you could have many different opportunities. Like getting scholarships into different universities, especially if you're great at playing the sport. And also it's another way to help you stay fit because your always doing some type of exercise in any kind of sport. So that brings me to my next example.

Another example is exercising, if you like exercising, going to the gym and just being active in general then that's another great thing to do that'll help you accomplish and benefit your future. Why I say this is because by being active it's going to help you to always stay fit and healthy. And how that benefits you in the future is because whenever you get older you won't have that many health problems or issues with your body so you'll always stay fit. What'll also help out a lot is by always eating healthy so that's something else you could do to help you accomplish and benefit your future.

Also working is something you could always do that'll help you accomplish more in life. Why I say this is because if your always working then that means you'll always have money. And having money would help you out in a lot of things. For example, it could help you out in school, for a car, food, clothes, and etc. Or you could also save up money for whenever you might need it for an emergency. It'll also benefit you by always having something to do so that way you won't just be home doing anything.

So in conclusion, doing something is always going to help us accomplish more in life. I don't believe inactivity serves a purpose because you won't accomplish anything if your not doing something that benefits you. You always have to be active and doing something productive if not you won't be successful in life. That is why I say that you have to do something that benefits you so you could succeed in the future. So yes, we accomplish more if we are always doing something.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
65B7FDE783F2,"I am student for Generic_School,I have work after school finish school in go to Mai work is all day finish fast. I work four day for week is,I need finish high school in go to fiend university in finish four years. in open businesses for Mai self in work in nether people in make money in big businesses open nether place.

student for steal high school what he do,in work four day for week is need work in model extending the school,he need perk for he life,he ask neither people how time up for life he no how work four day for week in he school each day in he life in finish high school in go fiend good work or job. he need make money for he life in horizon he need merit or hoes in car he need life good or happy.

I think each school or work for school good for you life for horizon school help you how think finish high school in go university in go work after class is help your self for make money help for life in think businesses if you need businesses man is high money bet you steel need stated how work businesses,open businesses for Mai self in work in nether people in make money in big businesses open nether place, he life in horizon he need merit or hoes in car he need life good or happy. in think nether world, open schools nether place in help people is no have money,help for fiend work. in stop fight country in kill people in Chang world for good in life help people what need home or food anther need.

I think each school or work for school good for you life for horizon school help you how think finish high school in go university. bet Chang preview the text, be student he work in school he cant high money in takes he cant buy hoes in Gus for he car in finish high school he need go to university in buy class in room he lief in food in finish university,he need work or job. he need make money for he life in horizon he need merit or hoes in car he need life good or happy. he no how work four day for week in help people. how think finish high school in go university in go work after class is help your self for make money help for life in think businesses if you need businesses man is high money bet you steel need stated how work businesses,slued for businesses man how work in thinking in take people take neither businesses man help to gather. I think all school need money for help student study very good for finish high school in go university what he do math sines he client finish university in go work in make money in good life.",1.5,2.0,1.5,1.0,1.5,2.0
DCF9F70FBA91,"Do you think we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? I believe that we choose our own character. I don't think that our character is formed by influences. Our character is what we make out of it. Some of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are, the way we treat people, and the way we tell ourselves to be.

One of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are. The way we are tells people about ourselves a lot. It describes who we are. For example some people who know my sisters and I so well say that we're all so different. That's because we are all our own character. Some siblings look up one another so it makes them wanna be like their older sister so , they don't get to make their own character.

Another reason is the way we treat people. The way we treat people is part of our character. It helps other people see the way you are. They judge you to see if you're nice or mean. Also what you hear about yourself makes you wanna act different.

The last reason is the way you choose to be. You get to pick who you wanna be. Although some people say that your character is already formed by influences. They may have a point because they say that it's how your family is. If your family taught you to be a certain way then you would grow up being that way because that's the way you grew up, but at the end of they day you are you. your family might've taught you to be a certain way but you can always change how you wanna be.

In conclusion, I believe that we choose our own character. I don't think that our character is formed by influences. Our character is what we make out of it. Some of the reasons why I think we choose our own character is because of the way we are, the way we treat people, and the way we tell ourselves to be. We are our own character.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
CB7F46E1BDF6,"Having a good attitude in a difficult time is a great way to stay calm and talk to others with respect. I witnessed one day a new kid came to my school with attitude he was giving out everyone what they want like many people asked him where he was coming from he said ""I'm coming from

New York"". He genially answer their question with respect and calmness like one kid asked how old are you, He replied saying that ""I'm 14 years old"" Even though

Some kids were being rude to him some of them even try to bully him,but cause of his attuide no one couldn't do much. He had no problem talking with teachers and other kids cause he wasn't feeling shy to talk with them he was happy and he was making an eye contact with everyone he's talking with. The kid probably had fun he made new friends earlier than other kids that were new. So that's why having a attitude not always means bad. So is your choice to be whatever you want how you wanna be treated because if you gonna treat others with bad attitude you should not expect them to treat you with respect. You can have a attitude and you still can be good is not always bad.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
E218D28DBF0E,"Have you ever hurt someone feel before? There are some people want to be honest to there friends or family but there is other people don't want to be honest because there are sacred it might hurt them. People don't want to be honest to there friend because they might lose there friendship forever.

Will i disagree for being honest at all time. You don't have to be honest all the time it might hurt them but they need to know the true. For the person who have to tell them the true is hard for them because they don't know it might hurt there feels or might lose there friendship and maybe not forgive them.

Maybe there will be a point you have to tell the true to your friends and maybe there will not be a point to tall the true to them but sometime you have to honest. There will be a point that you have to tell the true like how you feel about them or what you don't like them if you don't like about them tell them the true be honest to them and if they don't want to be your friends so don't be then.

There are some friends don't like to hear the true from other. There are other do like to hear the true from other so they can be a good friends or a person. So you can trust them and feel like they are you friends but a good and a very fun friend you ever want to have and dream of having.

If you can't be honest to your friends don't said anything just be quit but just let you know there will be time you have to be honest but you don't be honest every time you can said the true. Be honesty sometime you can think about before you do it but think about good sometime be honest doesn't go will as you plane it. It can go bad but very bad but something it does go good.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
DB1838237151,"Restate.

Whats one place in the world you will like to vist?

Why would you want to visit that place and what would you like to vist when you first arrive.

3 clamis

.Generic_City because of the Eiffel tower

.Generic_City because of the zoo

.Florida becasuse of universal studios pargraph 1: First thing when i go to Generic_City is to see the Eiffel tower.

Becauae l want to see how really tall is the Eiffel tower in person,the buliding helps people because it has alot of lights, you can see the view up in the sky, you can go with your family for a vist to Generic_City

Example

The Eiffle tower is really tall.

Transention:After Generic_City i vist i will like to go to Generic_City because i want to meer actors and singers so i can get autographs from them and see them live singing

Pargraph 2: First thing i want to see when i go to Generic_City is to see actors,singer and see them live.

I want to go to Generic_City because you can meet the best actors and you're favorite singer you can ask like how did you make it so high how did you become one of the best just ask for some tips and they can help you acheavie your goal and try your best.

Example

You can see alot of actors and singers and vist other places.

Transention: After i vist Generic_City i can go ohio and go to an amusement park and ride the fastet roller coaster.

Pargraph 3: fisrt place when i vist ohio is an amusement park called cedar-point has the fastest roller coster on earth and i want to ride the fastest roller coaster on earth and try it for my self.

I want to go to Ohio because Generic_City has the fastest roller coaster on eath and i want to go on it how fast does it really go and i want to ask the people who made it what meatriels did they use in order to launch the roller coaster so fast.

Example: The roller coast is a car that lauches really fast.

Conclusion:I want to go to Generic_City because of the Eiffel tower that is the first thing i want see when i go to Generic_City.

When i go to Generic_City i want to see is actors and singers live thats the second i want to see. The last thing i want go to is Ohio because they have the fastest roller coaster on earth and its at Generic_City and u want to see how they made it.",1.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
61471CA2532D,"In my experiences be disagree with this statement because everybody have different personalitie, The person have one day bad, and the persona change.

however the first impressions can be change, Everybody have different personalitie becuase the people make much caracterist tha see different for example a person can have much cualidad that other people don't have, Also do not always other person have that be yourself.

The person have one day bad becuase something the people in the school can have stressful for example when have so much homework during in class , also the person in the job is possible that have problem for example the other person can cause conflict and making is mad.

However the people change becuase they can have a good expression of a manner that your attitude can be esplendi,

for example no every person have bad comportamient.

In conclusion every one can be different personalitie and not is imposible change our impressions have that be we yourself.",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
038480498E5A,"Dear Principal,

I think that it is a great idea for you not to allow students that have a C average to participate in sports. My first reason, is because a lot of kids who have good grades such as B' s and A' s they don't get as distracted in school. Therefore, they will be focused better in their activity, and not in doing something like homework. People who have C' s, D' s , and F' s they will not be focused in the sports activity because they have to worry about doing homework and getting their grades up. Because they are responsible for having bad grades they shouldn't participate in school activities. Maybe you ask ""What if someone has the potential in playing but doesn't have the grades"". Its probably because they get to distracted, in playing sports and not doing their work. Kids who have bad grades tend to be lazy, and if we let them be on the team how can we expect to win if one of the members is not even participating. Another reason why, you should have good grades and be able to participate in activities is because it will look good when you go to college. There are more chances for you to get into a better college that you will like. And when you get a job you will get a well paying job. In conclusion, that is why I think the principal shouldn't let students who have a lower than a C average participate in school sports activities. One because they are lazy, and not well focused in school. I think it will be way better if kids who have good grades get the credit for participating in both sports and class work. These are my reasons why I think students who have B average should be involved in school activities and kids who have a C average shouldn't.      ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
64EB91C84A32,"Being able to attend classes online is a dream come true. Many students miss a huge amount of school days because of personal reasons, health, or sports. However, taking a online class would resolve those issues. Students would benefit from online education because there's no reason to miss school and to work in a better environment

Whenever a student misses a day or days of school they fall behind. They then have to do extra work to get all caught up. It causes lots of students stress and sometimes failure. Weather can also cause school to cancel. For instance, snow storms, or floods but working at home doesnt cause you to miss out on school. Students can never be absent in online school because everything is on a laptop. They will always be up to date with there assignments or exams. Students don't have to worry about being late to class anymore either. Instead, students will be stress free sitting on there bed learning.

Every student would rather be at home working then to be working in a classroom. Our own homes make us feel relaxed and clam so therefore, its a safe environment to work in. We don't need to do fire drills or lock down drills in our homes because we know our homes are secure. Also, when students are focus and working on assignments, the time goes by to quick. Next thing you know the bell rings and the students havent finished the assignment yet. Working at home won't make students feel rushed at all. Instead they'll have all the time they need. Adding on to classes going by to quick, classrooms can get very loud. Unlike a classroom filled with students, your home is peaceful with no distractions.

To conclude, students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. On the other hand, some students think online school isnt for visual learners but online class has many ways to educate visual learners.

Online class has video conferencing to help better understand. Online school is for every student.                         ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
AFC600D922F6,"I agree because being yourself is very hard sometimes and feel a lonely. Today is in the world nobody like to be all by themselves but some people like to be themselves. If you being yourself you can able to do more work because nothing else to do and feel like board so let study something, work hard. How about your fun time go out with someone, you can't be work hard all the time because that is not a good experience. So I do sometime fun myself and be yourself It's doesn't means you can do any a good stuff. You can do something what is make you feel a happy all your life. don't feel strange yourself and being strong.

First, I like be myself sometime because that make me bring my own idea and also help me figure our myself. What is a good thing or what is a bad thing for me. That make me strong because I using my own bring and think twice myself before I do something. My first year was be American be myself without Family, I feel very sad, and I sad to myself I never want to be myself my life again. I want to go back where are I am came From, I don't want to be in American anymore because know language very important for me that time. I don't understand any English that time and I don't have any Friends. I still remember how hard the was being yourself and I never knew be yourself Will be that hard, Now I know.

Second, after couple years I make my own choose I wan to be myself but no more sadness. So what I did was no looked what other people do and people I ignore with Friends they're all together or family because that make me sad. I could't told you how bad that feel was for me and I relax everything will be fine, I take deep bread. Now I don't worry about be myself anymore because now I know that wasn't that bad after you use to and also, infect that make me a little bit more independent.

Third, Now I responsibility everything myself and be myself that make me diff rant. My last year was raft because my faster Family said to me you have to learn do stuff by yourself. I am so norvise because I can't do anything whiteout them so I have to learn be myself before turn eighteen. Now I did learn how to handle myself and take care of myself everything myself. responsibility for my work and thinking about my carrel. I never can thought I can do anything without them but I learn be myself first then I come independent.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
65DBDD75CA50,"Jonh once said, Technology had positive and negative effects on people's life, people complete many tasks without having contact with others. Some people said that technology is good because they can do many thinks, like find books, information and do works more easy. Other people thinks differents, they said that technology is bad because had negative effects on people life, if people do not know how to use it, they can will have problems because sometimes people send archivements or informations to the wrong person or publish it. I think that technology is bad because with technology we can do many thinks, but some people use technology for hacks, steal acounts and cheat persons.

First, some people said that the technology is important in this era, because is more easy to do many thinks,

for example, search specific information more fast.

To do homeworks or company works with more information and explanations make projects, glide planes or to find books and work without think a lot.

Second,the technology is very important to some people, because many times they used it to do they works and make some project, the technology in this era provoked many wrong thinks, it created many electronic thinks that are advanced. Then, the purpose of use technology if for good reasons and with the technology always people will have easy infornation but they wil not learn the technology caused that people lose their time playing videos games and visiting wrongs wed site. However, the technology caused many problems, the people are using the electronic thinks a lot, the cellphone, video games etc. It are creating a obsession in the people, many kids and adolocents have problems with they vision, because pass a lot of time in the cell phone, computer or playing videos games causing cancer, tumor or lose their vision.

Finally, the obsession that technology are creating is very worrying, many kids don't do the homeworks, the students text in class and do not put attention, other persons driving texting causing accidents. Some parents permit that they kids use technology, but they do not have the contol of them the adolecents use technology for have fun sometimes causing problems. Today in this era the technology are advancing and provoking that people do not learn and sometimes it cause the death, persons use technology sometimes to hacks acounts and steal informations, photos or they publish inappropriate photos in they acounts causing bullyng or making the person feels bad. Also, the technology is very advance that the people are creating robot to make more easy the works, but is is a ploblem because the robot will be remove the people jobs, causing that the people leaving whithout job.

In conclusion, the technology had negative effects on people's life, creating obsession on people and doing more easy the ability to do works,but for people tha use technology a lot need to have a limit, and if they have acounts with important information they need to protect it with a strong password, if they have kids and permit that use technology they need to control them what they do and put a limit how much can use the computer, cell phone or videos games. people have to put their own limit to control technology when it cause problems.",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
D447CB3558A0,"My uncle usually share their different experience with me and it helps me a lot. My uncle is 40 years old and when ever he visit me he talks about his different experience with me. He travels different countries of the world like China,Australia,Japan,France,UK,Italy,Spain Canada,America,Saudi Arabia and Germany. He talk about their about their culture how different countries have different culture. He also talk about their languages. His every single world i heard carefully because i have a lot of interest about world. He also talks about different countries have different laws and rule. He talks about different countries have different religion. I love when my uncle share their different experience with me.

It is important to learn from others because it helps you in different ways it helps you in your future it also helps in your whole life and it also saves you from an accident. We should share different ideas with everyone probably it will help him a lot in his life and maybe it will save him from a bid accident.

How does sharing experience helps us in our future??It helps you in future when you are going to a new school or collage so you should know going to this place is good for me or not..It helps you in future when you are doing some work. It helps you in your future when you are move somewhere else so you should know going to this place is good for me or not. It helps you in your future when you are choosing some path in you life so you should know choosing this path is good for me or not so you will not go that way. It helps you in future when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will help me in my future or not. It helps in you life when you are finding a job so you will know if this job will be helpful for me in my future or not. Learning from other always helps you in your future we also share our experience with everyone it will also help them in their life.

How does learning from other helps in our life?? It helps in our life when we are going to a new school or collage so you will know is this place is helpful for me or not. It helps in your life when you are doing any kind of work so you will know how this work gives me benefit. It helps you in your life when you are going to some new place or country so you will know how this place gives me a benefit. it helps you in your life when you are choosing some path in your life so have know is this path is good for me or not. It helps in your life when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will gives benefit in my life or not then you choose that path. It helps in you life when you are finding a new job so you have know if this job is good for me or not how much does it will gives me a benefit and then you choose that job. Sharing experience with others always gives someone a benefit we also share our different experience with everyone.

How does sharing wisdom with someone helps??It saves you from an accident when we are going to a new school or collage so you will know is this place is good for me or not then you choose it otherwise it is not good for you it will gives you disadvantages and it will saves you from an accident .It saves you from an accident when you are doing any kind of work so you will know how this work gives me benefit and then you choose it if it is not good for you it will gives you disadvantages and it will save you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are going to some new place or country so you will know how this place gives me a benefit if it's not good for you so you will not go there and it's saves you from an accident. it helps saves you from an accident when you are choosing some path in your life so have know is this path is good for me or not. and than you choose it and it saves you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are becoming something so you will know if i become this it will gives benefit in my life or not then you choose it and it will saves you from an accident. It saves you from an accident when you are finding a new job so you have know if this job is good for me or not how much does it will gives me a benefit and then you choose that job and it will saves you from an accident. Sharing wisdom with someone can save them form a big accident we should share our different experience with everyone.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
82F7210163B5,"When learning at school with other students who cause distractions it is always hard to focus would you be able to focus? Even though going to school makes you socialize with friends and they feed you it sometimes is hard for a student to show up to school or even learn.

For me I would rather work on my assignments and others things my teacher would like me to do at home reason why is that some students would not be able to focus especially when a student is causing lots of noise making it hard for you to focus on your assignment. Another reason is that some students could live far from the school making it hard to get to school everyday. Finally students could have more time to work and study making it easy for students to revise in a quite place at home.

Students could limit distractions in many ways at home one way is that they can put on headphones to relax and work hard and listen to some music. Some teachers hate when students have their phone out or when they are listening to music so begin at home may cause the student to focus more by listening to music because every student has a different way of studying and one student might be more focus if he or she loves listening to music when working or studying. This also makes the student more relived that he or she can listen to music. Students who are always trying to bust a joke or make a noise causes problems for a student who is trying to work to get her grade up this makes it very hard for a student to focus on what their are supposed to do. Students can benefit from listening to music because for me when I listen to music while I am working I feel great and energetic making it easy for me to knockout my work at a fast rate.

Some students could live far away from the school and may not have a reliable ride to take them to school everyday. Some students can't catch the bus because the bus is too far away from their house this makes going to school very difficult because without a reliable ride to school everyday you may be coming to school very late making it hard for you to study or work on assignments because you are worried about how you will get home because you do not have a reliable ride to school to home. This makes a student stress a lot thats why working at home you would not be worried about who would be taking to and back from school. It also makes the student more productive because they would not have to find a ride all the time they could study and get their work done faster than other people. Also coming to school late makes it very hard to understand what was taught in the classroom making a student very stressed over it because a student grade might go down because he or she failed the test cause they came late to school so that student might not have understood what was taught.

Finally students could have more time to study and work on their assignments sometimes teachers may go through the assignment very quickly making it hard for a student to understand the what he or she or supposed to do. Also teachers may not give as much time for students to finish assignment working at home makes it easier because you have as much time as needed for you to complete your assignment and also for a student to revise over their work before turning it in to the teacher students may not be able to turn in assignments on time depending on the assignment this makes a student very stressful because they do not want to turn in the assignment late and get a late grade for it. Sometimes students worry about things like this especially when a student grade is flunking and they need to get it up to graduate or move on to the next grade level.

Although going to school could very exciting for a student or very happy to see friends your happiest place is home and if you could a student could work from home that would change the way a student studies and complete assignment because they have time on their hands and also the are relaxed they would not have to sit in a class for over 55 minutes. Working at home could be very beneficial because It could be very difficult for another student to learn at school because they might be that one student who is making it hard for a student trying to focus or a student might be stressed because they might not have a ride to and back from school and worried that they might not enough time to finish their assignment and get it turned in on time. Working at home may not stress a student because they would have enough time to complete an assignment. This is why working on assignments at home would benefit a student.         ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
BAD99FB704BB,"Is honesty always the best policy?

An old proverb says honesty is the best policy. sometimes, however, honesty might get really bad effects.

honesty is a good characteristic , if the the situation is very serious or you and yours friends did something really bad , you need to be honest and speak the true, but sometimes honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings or you and people around you might get in little troubles.

Honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings. For example ,one of Generic_Name's friends tells her something and ask Generic_Name to keep it a secret,

the next day someone is trying to persuade her to say her friend's secret out loud and she just reply by saying, "" what secret are you talking about? , my friend didn't tell me a secret or something like that."" she did the right thing by laying because if she would not lied about it ,

the friend that asked her to keep the secret would feel upset and nobody else is going to trust Generic_Name. Another example is that if your friend ask you if she looks good in a certain outfit , however, that is not your style and you don't like it at all , the best thing to do is to say that you like the outfit, if you tell her this , you will not hurt your friend's feelings.

One more reason of why honesty is not always the best policy is that you or people around you might get in trouble. For example , If you and your sister ate something that your mom left in the fridge while saying "" I am going to work and when I come back , I will eat this."" when your mom arrives home, you tell her that you and your sister didn't heard when she say that she will eat it later on. This way , you and your sister will not get in trouble , however , you know that it was just a white lie and that if you do something serious the next time , you need to be honest and tell her the true.

In conclusion , honesty is not always the best policy because you might hurt someone's feelings or you and people around you might get in trouble, however, there are many situations in where you need to be honest and speak the true.    ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,2.5,3.0
BB5D6C14712D,"I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because, the more the try the more experiance they will get, they will get more power, they can cortrol people, and they will get freedom and respect.

Most of people are scared of losing or failing. They think failure is the end of the carrer. For example most people when they fail in business they give up, or some people don't try things because they are scared of the unknown.

One of my mintor alwasy telling me the more you try the more experiance you will get. For example i tried many types of business and i failed on some of them like i tried to do real estate i brought a house and i lost $50,000 because i didn't know how much the house worth. Also i tried Bitcoins and because i joined late i lose $7,000. But i never said i'll quit, what i did is i got a mintor his name is Generic_Name, he is doing real estate and i leanred a lot of things from him and one of my friends is good on bitcoins so i asked him to teach me and he became my mintor.

After you get the experiance you will get power and what i mean by that is it will be hard to fail. For example Bill Gates is a powerful man in business do you think he will be in debt? the answer is no it will never happend because if he lost everything he made other people will help him to success again and everybody want to work with him.

Then, you have to have a control because you don't want other people to tell you what to do. for example who has the cotrol in the hosptal? the doctors or who has the control on companys? the ceos. The reson why they have the control is they are more succesful, or more educated, or they are powerful. Another exapmle if someone has a company he will have the most cotrol because he'll be the most powerful person in the company.

The last thing you will get is the freedom and respect. As a business man what i mean by freedom is you can go where ever you want when ever you want, and what i mean by getting recpect from people are two ways the first one is when you are more educated than them and when you make more money than them.

At the end success is like the marathone, you don't want to be the first preson who get it but you want to enjoy it. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
4D65BE0B15B8,"Thomas jefferson i am agree with this wrote that you did, I think he wrote it because sometimes people are not doing good thing and right.

First, when we are accomplish something we need to be proud of yourself , it is wonderful when other people are getting done their goals.

Second, we may not believe on what other people said to you because sometimes you are right but if you pay attention you can go down with your goals, that why you have to finish your accomplish alone.

Also, when we done something we feel very happy and that can help us to follow what we actually need to be a great people.

For example: if we are idle we never can be great on our future, we need to know and be sure that if we do not follow our dream, it can not come true, like when you are in the college and you said i need to be a nurse or something like that you have to go to the college every single day and stay strong for all that you are making and when you done, you will see your that dream come true and them you can see all the effort that you did.

In conclusion: we need to know that everything can be possible and be sure what we are doing because is the only way to stay strong and not down of everything because we need to be proud of yourself and not be selfish with other people because of anyway everbody need to have the same right, we need to feel happy about what other people is doing, because on the end you can see your effort and your dream come true!",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
DEC50B420484,"Think about the benefits of working with a group or working alone. Which do i feel is more beneficial?

Well working alone get you more focus and not playing around. If working with a group it will be different then working alone, because you can work faster or get the answer of them and be a great group to past the class and work on it but working together as a group it will be hard not you not gonna focus too because they gonna be playing around and not pay attention to what the teacher is saying in class.

Some people wanna work alone or work as group and the reason why people want to do that because working long they can focus and not play around, and working as a group people are gonna work together just to play around and not be paying any attention just being in the phone or talking.

Teachers need to do something about working together as a group because they just gonna goof around and not do there work they just gonna be talking and being on their phone. I feel like people need to work alone so they can focus on there work and be paying attention to the teachers and do there work. I don't think people should work as a group. At the same time people should work as a group because they can help each other and give answer to each other ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
7065B172D758,"When you have a problem do you think to yourself, how can I do my best to fix this problem? American jazz legend Duke Ellington said,""A problem is a chance for you to do your best."" In my opinion, I agree with Duke Ellington's quote. One reason, is if you don't try to do your best in a situation you could end up regretting your decision. Another reason, is if you try do your best in a situation you could end up learning something new. Lastly, if you don't put any effort try to resolve a problem you could end up back in that hole.

I agree with this quote because if you don't try to do your best in a situation you could end up regretting your decision. One reason, is the amount effort you put in to a problem could affect your future. Also, a chance to do your best to fix a problem could be a one time opportunity. One example, of this is about my cousin he could have been playing professional soccer but he didn't try his best on the tryout which made him not make the team. Lastly, if you don't do your best in a situation it could affect your life.

I also agree with this quote because if you try your best in a situation you could end up learning something new. First, if you try your best in a situation you can learn on what to improve on. One example, is about my brother he did his best on a test and got a 82 percent now he knows he has to improve in that subject. Another example, is when one of my friend's brother did his best in a race and lost which made him train more and harder to improve his speed. Overall, If you don't do your best you will not learn and improve from a situation.

Another reason, I agree with this statement is because if you don't try your best in a situation then you will end up back in the same hole. First, if you don't try to solve a problem then it will come back in to your life and you will have to deal with it again. First example, is about my younger brother who didn't try on a test and got a bad grade which made him retake the test. Also, if you try to solve a problem then you will learn from your mistakes and wouldn't commit the same mistake twice. Finally, it is important to do your best in a situation because it would make you improve yourself from your mistakes.

In conclusion, I agree with this quote because you should always try to do your best in a problem. First, you wouldn't regret at least trying to solve a problem. Then, you could learn ways to improve on, to help you solve the problem. Also, if you try your best in a problem then, when you have the same problem you will know how to solve it. Finally, if there is a problem it's also chance for you to show others what you can do.      ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0
A0B58CDB939A,"We choose our own character traits. Because you are responsible for yourself and waht you want in your life. A lot of people are going to defenetly critisize your traits and tell you that you are not good at this and that. Therefore you are responsible to succeed in life by doing the right things and using the right traits. For example if someone else comes and tells that you are not good at your job and you know you are doing good and everyone tells that you are doing awesome. And you are strong and cofident at what you do then you are good.

In the other hand people think that traits are formed by influences or beyond our control. But influence comes from our own family. For example our ancestor could have done the things that our dad or mom are wanting us to be doing. Therefore our traits are every good because our dad and mom already did the traits that our ancester thought them. Fortheremore we are getting strong and have the capacity to teach others about what traits are all about.

As a result the younger genaration is learning about a trait really is. Traits really means a lotin life becuase a trait definetly describes how your personality really is and what you are really good at. For example if you are good at playing soccer thats a persona trait. Sometimes it takes a long time to learn what really your traits are. But if you now you are good at something show the world who you really.

Our character traits are more important than we realise beacause it defines how you are. In addition our traits is what gets you a real job or a habbit that you have. Also character traits are you being smart you acting or doing other things. For example helping your brother or your friends at school is a trait because you now the topic and they dont. In Addition of this is waht deifnes your character traits.

In conclusion we are the ones that decide our traits even now our parents or other people try to tell us what to do. At the end we are the ones that decide our future and what really our character traits are. And where we to fully develop them. We just got be strong over come any obstacle.

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4148186C6D84,I have seen a lot of people in a bad attitude because something happens that they dont likes examples= 2. failed in a test that's an attitude of worrying.3 More examples like you and your friends got into a fight and they are always in worry that if we could be friends one again and that depends on their attitudes. 4. Another one is when your parents get into a fight that makes your kids in a worry thinking that there might be a separation beetween them.5. some people are worry while taking a test worrying that they might fail the test.6. Another example is getting bad grades similar to failing.7. And more getting bullied and no one even stands up for them that's a depressed attitude and might decides to kil them self.8. More attitude is acting cool in a class and behaving not well enough and even cussing at a teachers.9. There is another point when you've got an attitude dont show to your friends you probably dont want them to worry too and if you do that way you are spreading your worry and everyone will be and that is not good.,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
6BE1E93612AE,"For feeling better in our whole life, of curse we have to do someting else, like to do great, wounderful, and something different. when you want to do enything different you have to be perseverant,and also you have to do responble. For exemple, to be yourself in a world you should be constantly and work hard to feel better in everything. You can try someting new like learng art, or to be volunteer, or you can do exercise.

One reason, to be yourself you should to learn something new like about art. I believe, is a good idea to try enything else, to feeling greates. Because when you try to learng enything different you always to be feeling better. For exemple, if you learng about art,

you can peinted beautiful pintures, and buy to many pictures. Also,

you can to became a famous person araound the world, but for accomplishment this goal you have to be perseverant.

another exemple, to be yourself in a world you should to give enything else. like to be volunteer, in to many places a round the world most people need help. For exemple, schools need people to help with the students. sometimes teachers, and studets have a fild treat, and schools need volunteer to help with students.

For to go to the zoo, and learn about animals they can learng about the biger Giant panda, or about elephants. Also sometimes students and teaches, have a fild treat,

to Washintown. to learng about the presidents, as a president Gorge Washintown. Student can learng about Gorge Washintown, who was the firts president at the United States. Asls they can learng about Mrs. Lucker's

King, he was a great person, And he help to many people. You can feel better to help to others people who need you.

In addition, to be yourself in the world you should to be different, and do enything than you like

As exercise. I agree with Author Emerson. You have to trying to do different things,

to have greates accomplishment, you have to be perseverant. Like to go to the gyn, and do exercise everyday. exercise ca be fun, you can do exercise outside like run, dancing, or just walking. If you want to be heathy, and have a loger life you have to be constantly, responsable, and try to do something else, as to eat healthy like to eat vegetables, fruit and druiking more water.

In conclusion, if you want to be yourself around the world you always should to trying to make differents things .Also for have greates succeful in your life, you have to be perseverant in everything you do. For exemple, if want to learng about art, or trying to be volunteer, and do exercise. Just have to be constantly. Do you think we have to be responsable?",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
D948703E8026,"Should the city council adoption the curfew of a 10 p. m weekday and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers?

You often hear people say that teenagers are costing more problem to other people and for the around them environment. The city council should adoption the 10 p. m midnight curfew for teenagers because teens would stay out of problems, and they would have more time to do school work.

To start, the curfew would avoid teenagers being in problem with the law. For example,teens with the curfew would not be in gangs or cost problem to others. Lets say that teens had the curfew it would expand beyond the level of doing good to others and staying out of gangs or doing bad stuff. They would be able to achieve their goals fast and force on what is next in life. Even though, this curfew sounds bad its not bad because teens would learn that the curfew is just to help them and help the environment around them.

Secondly, the curfew would allow teens with more time on their schools work and have time to force on their work. For example, teens would have more time to focus on their schools work than being on the streets with gangs. With that being said teens would have a chance of achieving their dreams and being successful in live without a bad influences. In this scenario, it show that a curfew is not bad because it has some good way in live and it allow people to do good stuff for others. Ultimately, with this curfew it allows young people to see the better side in life and it would help them to stay focus in schools by achieving their work and doing the right things.

Some people may say that having a curfew is unfairly interfere in young people lives. For example, young people have the right to choose the way they want to be. Therefor, being later in night dose not meant that young people are doing bad stuff or their are in gangs also they are just having fun in their way. Thus, being in a curfew it show young people that their are controlling by other people just because they have a different way of having fun. In this scenario, it show that having a curfew is just unfairly for teenagers just because other teens got in trouble it dose not means that all of the young people needs to have a curfew.

In conclusion, the city council would just being helpful to the young people by add a time limit. And it would help the environment around them and it would give more time and focus to the young people. All in all, it is a good thing to put a curfew because teens would have more time to spent with their family and doing good stuff for the environment.    ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
BB87E18DA024,"Student should not find a career at a young age because they haven't choose or think about what career they want to have many student think about what career they want at a young age but, it's better to find what carrer they want when they enter high school because student can talk to a counseling to see what they are intrested in and can see what carrer is similar to what they like.

A lot of student have troubling time to find what career they want to have many student career doesn't end so well, once they enter high school student can find what career to have in the future, student can even visit a website to see what career are intresting for them or can visit careers search in school..

If i have to choose a career at a young age i would not think of anything because i haven't find what career i'm intresting in also, it'll be better i enter high school and find what career i like and enjoy because thinking of what career i want would be hard at a young age also, i can talk to a teacher about career in high school so they can help me of what career are available that are right for me and i don't think student should find a career at a young age it would be hard for them to find one.

I have to disagree of student finding a career at a young age because if student do find a career at a young age then they won't be forcusing in school work they mind will be them having that career by now and will brag about it to there friends and teacher no one want to hear thats also, it may not be the right career for them they need time to think the right career they want to enjoy in life.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
B68C62AB1515,"Careers are a big part of a person's life. People can choose from thousands of careers that interests them. Careers usually tell a person's personality. A lot of people take careers very seriously and want to know more about careers. Students committing to a career at a young age is a good idea because students will know what a career is really like, they will find something fun to do everyday, and they won't have to worry about it in their adult lives.

Students committing to a career at a young age is a good idea because students will know what a career is really like. Some students lack information about becoming a doctor. Students often don't know what it is like to become a doctor, or know the basics. In order for students to obtain information and knowing how to treat a patient, they need to experience it physically. It is a good idea for students to take action in a career because they will get more information about it. In addition to knowing what is like to become a doctor, students can look up a career they want to know more information about. For example, if a student wants to know more information about dentistry, they can easily research what do you need to do to become a dentist. Students should engage in a career early because they can find a lot of resources to get there.

A second reason students should be in a career early is because they will find something fun to do. Most students don't really do anything after school or in their free time. The students who don't take action in doing anything, will more likely become miserable and bored. For these students the only thing they should do is join in after school program that helps and educates students about careers. Students should be involved in a career at a young age because a lot of students don't know what to do in their free time. Also, students don't really have a hobby they can do. Students sometimes don't really think about having a hobby that can keep them happy. Students can find that hobby by taking part in a career and actually find something that really interests them.

Students need to be in a career at a young age because they will find something that is important to them.

A final reason students should commit to a career early is because they won't have to worry about it in their adult lives. Most teens don't know what they wanna do later on as they become adults. These people usually struggle in finding a job, and also getting that job. If a student spends extra amount of time in school reading and getting information about a career, they won't have that problem later on. In fact they will easily know what they want to do. Students who get into a career at a young age won't have any problems in finding a job later on. In addition to finding a job, students as they get older won't have any stress on what they want to be. When students graduate high school they are pressured in finding a job, which makes them really stressed. Some students aren't as stressed as others because they already know what interests and them and what they wanna be.

If a student who doesnt know at all what they wanna be, they should spend lots of time on researching and attending career based programs to give them an idea or two on what to be. Students should part of a career at a young age because they won't be as stressed.

Some people firmly believe that students should not commit to a career at an early age because they arent well educated about a career. Unfortunately, these students are more likely to have problems later on when finding a job. In order for students to fully know about a job is to take part in a career fair or just overall being in a career so they can be sucessful when doing so. Students should commit in a career early because they will be more educated in a career. In addition to, they will find a hobby in their free time. Finally they won't have any stress or problems later on in finding a job. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5
C97C2190DB65,"Imagine someone asking another person wheither they should go to a friend's party or to the movies, but he or she told them something like, ""It's up to you to decide, not me"". That person eventually agrees; but when they finally decide on wheither to go to the party or to the movies at the last minuate, they end up missing out on both. Sometimes, making decisions on your own can be pretty tough and frustrating, but it helps you become more independent and you do not have to relay on other people's decisions.

People can not depend on other people for what they think all the time. It shows that instead of being progressive with their work or anything else they're doing, that person can not make up their minds or is just being lazy and is always looking for someone else's opinions instead of their own. This also shows that they are not self-reliant or progressive like how most people usually are.

Making our own decisions also means following our own intincts. For example, a group of teenagers are planning to skip school to got the beach for the entire day. They try to convince two other of their classmates to join them, but they told them no and that they are going to get in trouble for missing out on their classes. Trusting our intincts can be very helpful when it comes to things like skipping school, alcohol, or even having sex with someone. It can maybe even save your life or someone else's in the future.

It also helps people become more independent on their own. People can not always depend on their parents for the rest of their lives, they will have to move out of the home they grow up in to start looking for jobs and earning to support themselves. Another example is when a teenager starts appling for colleges that they want to go once they graduate from high school. They probably have been told that college will help them get ready for when they are ready to get a full-time job (which also has to be something they want to do for a long period of time), pay taxes and bills for when they have a house or apartment to live in, and maybe even take care of their familes.

People should make their own decisions because they can not always depend on other people's opinions, they should follow their own intincts that can probably save their lives one day, and it helps them become more independent to get ready for the future.   ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,3.5,4.0
F12EC7A7D168,"The topic am going to talk about is showing kindness. Showing kindness can change peoples lifes because you can make them feel better in better different ways for example what you could do to show kindness is picking up peoples trash. Small acts of kindness can help others be succesfull in life. Showing small acts of kindness makes you a helpfull person because you are helping someone out in real life. For example one way to show kindness is when someone drops something you can pick it up.

Small acts of kindness can help a lot of people because showing kindness even if you are mad at them you can still be kind to him or her. For example anotherway that you can show kindness is by talking to someone nicely. also showing kindness is really helpfull because you can help other in very different ways. kindness can impact peoples lifes because you can make them happy even if their sad or mad at you. For example another way that you can show kindess is by helping someone with their homework.

Small acts of kindness can have an impact on others because you are being helpfull for them. I think showing kindness is really good because you are helping someone out that doesnt fell good or their just mad at somethingt that happen one way that you can show kindness is by helping someone translate english to spanish. Showing kindness is really kind because i think is nice to be helpfull to another person. You can show kindness in many different ways like helping him with his homework. Even if you help someone with one simple thing you will be showing kindness.

Showing kindness to another person even yourself you can make yourself feel better or make another person fell better. Another way that you can show kindness is by helping your friends or your family with cleaning the dishes. Even small acts can help someone out cause you are showing kindness to another person.

Small acts of kindness can impact peoples life because you are doing something nice for them it also helps yourself because you are showing kindness to another person. one way that you can show kindness is helping someone with petting their dog.

I think showing kindness to a person makes you feel better because you are doing something nice for them. showing kindness is very helpfull because you are helping someone out and it makes you a better person. one way that you can show kindness is by picking up the trash. showing kindness even if their sad could make them feel better. one way to show kindness is by if a person is lonely you can talk to them.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
F86CA3BFAB20,"I take ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Because the more you do the more you get done. And that will make your life so much easier. You should should never wait for tomorrow to do something if you can do it today. Also, you can't be idle for the rest of your life. You can't be successful if you're just going to idle. To be soemthing in life you have to work hard for it. You always have to push yourself to the max limit. But at the end it'll all be worth it.

I remember my mom always used to tell me that ""Never wait for tomorrow to do something that you can do today."" And that will be in my head for the rest of my life. I use that quote to motivate myself when I'm doing homework or going to the gym etc. It always works and i will always live to that. My whole family lives to that qutoe.

The world would be such a better place if people didn't idle. If people were determined to work hard for themselves, everybody in the world would be succesful. Also more people would be enjoying a more wealthy life. Less people wouldn't need a place to sleep. Their would be more people enventing stuff to make the world a better place. Everybody in the world would have water and food.

You would make your whole family proud. Give back to the people. Do unreal things that no human has ever done before. Maybe even go to every planet to see if humans are able to live there. Their would be less crimes and less lives lost. Also more opportunities for people to succeed.

Finally, Thomas Jefferson wrote that quote for a reason. For people to succeed in life. It was for people to look at the quote and actually do it and not idle. Thomas Jefferson wanted people to do great things. He wanted people to always be doing and not idle. If you're determined you will succeed. Never give up.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
8AB55CB5992E,"There was a guy who decided to eat a ghost pepper because of a dare and next thing you know it they are in the hospital, not so good isnt it. One day one of my friends Generic_Name from a while back lets say elementary school, Generic_Name was eating lunch and some kid came by and swiped his tray off the table, he wanted to beat they other person up and I said no I suggest you go talk to a teacher about it. Although some might believe, asking for help (guidance), talking to your priors or family members, having confidence in yourself proves seeking for guidance from experts and authorities about life important matters is a good idea.

Asking for help and guidance. My friend Generic_Name was having a tough time choosing which college he wants to go to. I told him to go talk to your counselor and now he's now in Generic_school because he asked about what colleges seem good and are better for Generic_Name. This relates to asking for help because he had no idea where he wanted to go if he made the decision to go some college, having no background knowledge of the school and he got there noticed its not for me, he is screwed. That means it is a good idea to ask experts at finding the right college for you.

Talking to your priors, family members and communicating. I always ask my friends and family what to do for certain things such as what classes do you think seem good that I also like or what sport should I join and try out. I think communicating is great because it sets a good outlook on your personality. That's how you make more friends like you want to know what good advice they can give you and you can give them. People who don't communicate will always have a tough time talking to people, they will be really quiet and lonely at times. This relates to talking to priors and family members and communicating because they are here to help you out no matter what.

Having confidence in yourself. If you start communicating and talking a lot more, it will build up confidence to the point where you won't be nervous to talk in front of a class. One of my good friends named Generic_Name came to Generic_school awhile back all quiet and had a soft voice until he started talking to people like his friends and family everyday, now it sounds like he is a whole different person and he is way more confident in public speaking. this relates to the having confidence because he was scared of talking to people until he starting talking to everybody he saw in the hallways and built his confidence to a new level. Anybody can overcome the fear of speaking just by talking with your family first then friends and people you don't know.

Whats important is that you learn to talk to people like your family, friends, and your school administrators. Some people have a bad past in speaking to one another but it all comes down to are you going to make a change because that person who has difficulties in speaking, doesn't like it either. I want people to overcome their fear of communicating in the future because that's a big deal if you don't, many jobs out they need people to speak well with other folks. This relates to stuff in a political aspect basically media because people on there need to speak to one hundred million of people out in the world on TV.    ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
17E1D83B4708,"Have you ever wonder why people enjoy playing an instrument? let me explain you why this is an enjoyable educational activity. First, knowing that you are talented you become passionate and interested about it. Second, when you start seeing progress you will understand that all the effort is going to be worth. Finally, you will notice that playing an instrument has it benefits.

Being passionate about music means to make and effort. You dedicate time to your instrument to get better. You also need to become interested meaning that you will practice every day in the best way possible. When you are talented and you love what you do is easier to improve.

Progress is what every musician is looking for. When you start to seeing it you know you are getting better at playing your instrument and that you are capable of more, knowing that the effort is not going to be wasted. You start practicing more passionate than ever and improving your skills. You understand that you are expanding your knowledge and being responsible about this activity.

Playing an instrument has a lot of benefits. It makes you smarter because when you are playing your instrument you are using an special part of your brain and it starts to develop. Also, playing an instrument makes you skillful because you are improving in this new skill daily. Another benefit is that it helps you to relax when you are stressed, playing your instrument gives you peace and quiet. It makes you feel confident.

In conclusion, playing an instrument is an enjoyable activity because it makes you passionate, skillful and encourage you to do not give up. It also teaches you to be responsible and patience. But the most important thing is that it makes you understand the music in a certain way that you start to loving it and when you love something, you enjoy it.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
4B6DF39107CC,"Is it a good idea to graduate high school in three years instead of additional four year? Based on my experiance in high school, i disagree with students who graduate high school in three years, besause students can take college credits while they have short schedual on their senior year, and also they can get into the clubs that would give them the idea of that they would do after the graduations. In order to graduate high school in three years students must take summer school, give up on their elective courses, and give up on their vacations.

Students have to take three years of summer school in order to graduate high school early. They are required to complete all the credits that is neccessary for graduations. They must complete the requirements for graduation before it is too late. If the students chooes to skip one year of summer school credit they cannot graduate in three years, and they will have rough time trying to cought up. If they still got lazy than there is no other way to graduate then four years plan. This is where their whole stuggles end up, and they still have to be in school for the fourth year.

Students have to give up on their electives during their high school year to graduate. They will have full schedual of requirements to finish up. They have to work hard, do all the work for all of their classes, turn in almost every homework for their classes. They will be struggling during school year since they do not have an elective class that they will be not hard to think about, also some schools offers courses that would give students the ideas for their college life, such as Generic_School. It is an engineering courses that give the students idea of what they would do if they want to be an engineer.

Students will give up on their summer vocations because they will be taking summer school to graduate high school in three years instead of additional four year. However students will be doing their school stuff while others will be celebrating their vocations. Students who want to finish up their schools early, they will be attending summer schools. Becide it they also be working, and maybe they wonld not have time to complete their assignments on time, it will make them to change their opinnoin on early graduation, they will give up on their early graduation plan.

To conclude, it is not the best choice to graduate high school in three years, additionally students would have rough and tamble time trying to finish high school. Therefore, it will be better if they stick with a normal school time and finish high school in four years, it will help them to get more knowledge, and better undrestainding of that they would do for their oncoming life. For the majority of people its better to graduate high school in four years, even though if they are aiming for advance deploma they will need to take full four years of high school, and summer school as well, but if the students are going for standard deploma they will have short schedual, and they can take advantage if it and take college credits for free on their senior year.                                          ",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
33F18D5D8867,"Would it be surprising to know that kids learning at home help then not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by students getting to much school work that cannot all handled in one night. Everyday kids complain about having to much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing children to work on their own schedule helps them become more motivated to work. Students being educated at home gain more freedom to create their own schedule and their own rules. Learning at home and not at school helps kids to succeed and have better grades. No only does learning at home provide less distraction, it provides students with flexible schedule.

First, Students complain about having to much homework because students who spend a lot of time on their homework and don't have enough free time for them to relax is considered having to much homework. When they get out school and they have to practice some sports them they have to go to their house just to eat and them to do their homework, they cannot spend time with their family. Homework can limit the time. Students can spend with their friends, family, or other activities they can do. Too much homework can also give students more pressure from parents interference, this may cause unhealthy amount of stress. This is why students prefer home school.

Second, One of the best things about home school is that It can be done at anytime because It can be done at any time, children have a flexible time schedule with mean that the parents can helps. The student can work around schedule instead of the parent working around the students schedule. Some students have trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pace set by teachers. Home schools allow students to work at their own pace and on their own schedule. Another thing about homeschooling is that there are not rules about technology or how to dress. This is good because instead of worrying about the rules, the students can focus on their studies.

Third, when you are taking a test or taking notes at a public school there are may distraction that can make students loss focus on what there are doing. This is another reason that learning from home would benefit student. Learning from home won't have the distraction that that a classroom has. As a result of this, student won't loss focus on the work they are doing and get better grades. One of the reason students get distracted in the first place is because they are in an environment they are no familiar with, which makes then feel uncomfortable. If a student learns from home they will feel more relaxed and comfortable and won't stress about work. In a school, you are stuck at desk for 6 hours and have limit time to eat and limited bathroom breaks. This does not helps students at all. In conclusion, the environment at home will benefit student's by giving them better grades.

In conclusion, Students should be offered classes online because the environment is less stressful, which could benefit test scores. At home there is less distractions, rather than at school where are many different things to worry about. The flexibility of the time students are allowed to complete work would benefit the mental health and grades of the student. Many students successfully take some, and even all, classes from home. School systems and all districts should offer distance learning. ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
599128B82FF0,"Careers are important to succeed in life. students are interesting in a career that can help them in the future or in the present. In my personal life, I used to assist to a barbering career, I learn the basics. This had help me to cut some people hair by this I earn some extra money while I am In High School. Any career is hard but is vital in life. I believe that it is a good idea for students to join a career in a young age because they gain more experience, students can work in a young age. These are two major things why they should participate, sooner I'll explain it.

Students could gain more experience in a particular career. This is because the brain still fresh and is perfect to learn new things. Teenagers would be able to learn new things everyday. They can learn how to solve a simple thing, for example at home with electrical or mechanical issue. Furthermore, students could be able to be masters in the future of any career. They could be experts because they will have a longer period of time to practice and keep finding stuff to learn. If a person have experience they can even become managers.

A career would help to find better jobs. sometimes people see careers as a waste of time but, if a person go to a job with a career taking;that person is able to earn money. If a person have experience they can even become managers. Besides, students are able to work in a young age. They could work in summer break. I believe that this can help them to save money to go to college. Furthermore, teenagers are capable to practice their skills.

In conclusion, any career can be useful to succeed in life. Teenagers are able to choice their future. They could master the career to perfection. Students, because they are young they have time to learn a lot. They should decide to join one before is too late. This can help them to have a better future.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
6C802D3F5F2A,"One topic that is frequently debated is ""Does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement"". Some people think, that praise that is given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. They believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. I believe that the source of true self-esteem is by praising a student's work because that could help them grow more independent. By praising a student's work, they are going to be able to; work efficiently independent, have a bigger self confidence, and learn better.

First reason, When a student's work is praised that helps them achieve there work more efficiently. It emphasizes that they are capable of working independent and being able to have a good job. When some one is praised for their work, it makes them feel good and makes them want to do more work. A student's work should not get praised for their work if they didnt put any effort in the work because that would just make them want to not put any effort in the work, because they will think that they would get the same grade as someone that actually tried and actually wanted to get a good grade for something that they put so much effort into.

Second reason, When a student has a big self confidence that helps them get their work done more constant and with more effort because they know that they can do it and that are capable of having a good grade. when a student is willing to put a lot of effort into the work. their work should be more praised. praising a student's work can help them have a by self confidence, which can help the students learn more. when a student is willing to learn that is the true motivation that is considered being able to achieve more work and do it more efficiently and with more confidence.

Third reason, When a students is willing to learn a lot and are always on track, paying attention, and turning in work on time. and always putting a lot of effort in school, those kinds should always be recognized and praised, because they show how mature they are and how willing they are to graduate and have a good job. If a student is willing to learn and put a lot of effort in work, that makes them mature because it shows how willing they are to learn. other students dont care if they graduate or not because for them being ""popular"" and not listening to the teacher, and disrupting the class and doing what ever they want it more important than learning and getting an education.

Having a strong self confidence, being independent and willing to learn more are some examples of praising a student's work. when a teacher shows an appreciation to their students it shows that they care about them and it shows that they are willing to help them carry on and push them forward and being their when they need it, and that makes the students want to go to class everyday and want to learn because the teacher is fun and knows how to work with students very well. and that is why it is good to praise a student's work.  ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
A6A6C7852F05,"I say no becuase you cannot jude somonw by there first impressions has a person. It would be nice getting to know the person and if their imature its fine from first impressions. Getting to know who the person is by askin them about them self not just be like of there not good enough. For a example if someone is tired and your gunna be like oh their lazy you cant just base them from there firsr impresstions.

Is it impossible to change no its not impposble because it i ur mentality. In life nothing is inpossible you can easily chnage to a whole diffrent lets say, your a very mean person you can always change and be super nice to everyone. You can always change for who you are and for me i was very quiet i would never wanna go talk to poeple because i was really shy with people but now i like to talking to everyone else and i dont care who the person is i always introduce my self.

So i strongly agree with this statement you cannot jude someone by their first impressions some people thought i was really mean when they first met me bcause i would be tired end of the day and i wouldnt walk people because i was lazy and i didnt have that enery to talk. Thats why i changed my mentality so people would not call me lazy because its anoying so thats why i changed my whole life around i didnt wanna be so the same so i just changed, that made me super happy just for having a new life style.

When someone says it is impossible to change their wrong because they dont belive in them selfs that they can change has a new perosn i didnt think i was going to be a whole new diffrent person. and now i do really like who i am always smileing. Back then i would not like to smile i was a really boring person. I wont lie i have based poeple have their first impressions and be like dam there not cool people and end of the day they are cool people. So it is not good juding someone to fast so in my opion i say yes i stronlgy agree.

from Generic_Name                                                                                                                            ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
56053054CB1F,"I believe that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it, The disicions you make can play a big role in how you turn out to be. For example the people you hang with, How you grew up and the type of household you were in, And my last example is is your motivation because being motivated can help you build good character traits for the future.

The type of people you hang with play a big role in your character because you can pick up a lot of good and bad things from different people. They can influence you to do a lot and you know what they say ""you are who you hang with"" for example if you hang with people who do nothing but good you are going to want to do nothing but good but if you hang around people who are lazy and sit at home doing nothing with there day you are also going to become lazy and not motivated to do anything.

The way you grew up and the type of household you were in also plays a big factor in your character because thats what you are around, That's the energy with you all the time for example if your paerents are having problems at home all the time and you can become depressed and feel down all the time, Since thats the energy thats in the house, Which can make you start struggling in school since you would be down all the time. But on the other side if your household is very good, everyones happy and the vibe is good it can make you a very happy and positive person since thats all the energy you're getting, nothing but positive vibes and it can help you with school.

Your motivation in my opinion is the most important part of building good character traits because it's so good to be motivated and having a something to work for, If you have that the past does not matter and you can be the most awsome person that you can possibly be for example if you are really motivated you can become anything you want. Your past and all the things you overcame can motivate you another example is if you and your family is really struggling that is going to want you to push harder, And in that procces it would build a lot of good character traits that will be with you forever.

In conclusion you make your character and choose the people you hang out with, The type of hpuse you are living in and the things that lead up to you being motivated and i dont think you can get influenced beyond your control because you can control everything you do for example if you don't like your friends switch things up, If you dont like how things are going at home go live with someone else. Everyone should always know that nobody can or should control you, Everyone makes choices bad or good you are the one who made that choice.               ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
51C93A7260DE,"Have you ever thought what school would be like for you and other, students in your school would have a program where older and younger kids will gather around, do different activities and projects and learn at the same time.

Think about programs you will want to be included in your school,that will help you learn faster and make you understand things better and differently,you will also get help and subjects you have struggles on a daily bases. In my opinion i feel like students feel more better and cofterble talking to students there age just because it might be easy for them to explain things better to someone who is the same age. There's times where student's feel more pressured by an adult so that's what makes them not want to ask for help.

Now think to yourself and ask yourself if you find it better, having a program where all students can gather around just to ask for help when is needed and so socializes with them. Because theirs always time you get to school and talk to your everyday friends but you dont really know theres other people you havent met yet so making a program for everyone is a good way to get to know others in the program.

So with all that being said if you want to have a program at your school, that will help you and other student's gather around and bond together like friends and get to know everyone in your school. Is not just in the program that will be in your school but people that you walk by every other day gather around and teach everyone something new and they can give back to you and teach you something new everyday to anyone in the program.

But back to the main starting point of the paragraph if you want to start a new program at your school talk to one of your teachers or your principle and share the ideas you have thought of or the ideas you have in mind and gather around to start something new and make school a better place. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
3D8CF58944E1,"I think schools shouldn't add one and a half hours more to schools because kids need time to rest there brains, have enough time to make it on time to there after school activities, and students need more time to finish up their homework and studying.

First, kids need time to rest there brains by going outside, and watching on the TV for a little.

If schools add more time, then students will not have any time to have fun which causes them to not have much time to sleep, less time to sleep effects their school day. An example of that is if I had extra time to my school then I would have had no time to play, take a nap, or watch youtube. That causes me to not have enough sleep time. This type of rule is not healthy for the students.

Second, kids need time to make it to there after school activities. after school activities are usually straight after school, but if students add more time to school then kids will not make it to his or her after school activity. An example is if a student had to go to football practice everyday at 4:00, then students would not make it if school ended at 4:15. without physical education and only just education by sitting in a chair just writing and reading is not healthy for your body. that's why students need more time for there after school activities. this is also bad because it effects your sleep time also which makes you tired for school the next day.

Last, students will not have enough time to finish up there homework from all the time from school and other stuff they have to do at home. For an example is if there was a test the next day, and I havn't studied so I had to study, I wouldn't have had enough time to study because the extra time in school or if I had to do an after school activity. This is not good for students to add time to school so they do not have enough time to study or finish homework because they will not get a good grade on the test or quiz and especially get a bad grade in the class.

Back to the thesis, they should not add an hour and a half of school because it will effect our brain, body, and grades. It will affect it by being late or not showing up to his or her after school activity, less time for the kids brain to rest, and not having time to finish homework or to study.

Why would people want to add time to school?",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
25FA30699A04,"Should schools control students involvement in extracurricular activities, or should the decision regrading extracurricular involvement to left to students and their families? Students should decide on what extracurricular activities they will be interested in and discuss with their families because parents or guardians can support their decisions, they can be able to find their talents, and be able to get awesome scholarships or grades.

First students should decide on what activities they will be interested in because parents or guardians can support their children. Students will be absolutely be proud of their families by supporting them to do what they like, for example like sports. Teenagers are interested in activities because they like their own sports or the whole family likes sports. Students likes to get an approval from their families because they feel euphoria when their family accepts them. Teenagers also love when parents or guardians support them because they can have persuasive thoughts about the extracurricular activities.

Second students should decide on what activities they will be interested in because they can be able to find their talents. Coaches from different activities can see how good the students are and can see their special talents in them. Students are not perfectionist like god but instead they work really hard to show that teens can do it. Teenagers can also feel that they are talented because maybe it can be in their family tree lines. Students can figure out their talents by practicing everyday and be able to play like how professional do it. Also Teenagers will realize how to never give up on their activities. Finding their talents is an entertaining expression because people around the world can be amazed at how teenagers can be so good at extracurricular activities.

Third students should decide on what activities they will be interested in because they can get awesome scholarships or grades. Students can get scholarships by showing how much their activities mean to them. Teenagers get much better scores on their grades because they can be able to focus and stay healthy. It can be helpful for their college, their future, and their family status. Their coaches will be really proud of them by getting scholarships from different countries. Getting amazing grades and scholarships is the legendary epic passionate feeling that students will never forget in their lives.

Another point of view is many students do not like the school to control their activities. However, many people believe that school should have total control regarding extracurricular involvement of students after school because that think that school staff knows better and that they can guide students to get involve into more productive activities. Which would eventually result into a more bright and smart teens who would feel more comfortable to face the real world.

In conclusion deciding on the extracurricular activities they will be interested in will benefit their scholarships or grades, their families will support their children, and the students will find their true talents. So teenagers can become the 10 out of 10 in their best of the extracurricular activities. Also students can now decide and control their own extracurricular activities being able to become a legendary, passionate, euphoric, having awesome persuasive thoughts, and epic person. ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
BFA732D9C006,"Buisness and schools should really consider the four day work week because it would help conserve energy for them. Schools and buisness would be having ten hours of work to do each day for the four days they have.

Students would have more time to do work and finish their assiments with the two extra hours of school. Students with low grades can get more help if its needed for them. Teachers wouldn't have to stay after school if there are two more hours of school. Students would learn more with the time they have to show the students.

Students would have an extra day of no school, so they can rest up. The students would have more time to be with there family. Students that have a job can go to work to make themselves the money they need. Students with big amounts of homework can catch up with that extra day, so all their work is completed. They would have time to do sports or something with the free time they have.

Energy would be saved without and extra day. Alot of our natural resources dont stay forever so we would have to help out by not using water, electricity and etc. So much energy would be saved if there was a four days of school. Electricity cost alot of money for a big building like a school to keep paying for.

Thats why schools should have school for four days to save the cost and energy that way the schools aren't left without energy in the future.      ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
51E3EAF96CD0,"Student's true source of self-esteem is achievement. Student's who put more time and effort into a certain task or subject will most likely achieve more, eventually boosting the student's confidence to strive for success and opportunities.

Student's need to be self-confident in order to achieve the goals they want to achieve. Student's get self-confidence, by achieving different tasks such as in or out of school activities. Student's can also gain confidence by making and learning from mistakes. student's learn at their own pace and shouldn't be afraid to get some questions wrong, all student's should be self-confident in themselves in order to achieve goals and different opportunities for a good career or a good paying job.

Student's self-confidence is key when it comes too performance. Student's who are confident in themselves tend to do well in activities like sports: soccer, football, basketball..etc. Student's should be confident in order to do well in sports games even if the team is losing, being confidant will give the student the urge and strive to keep pushing and even comeback and win the game.

Student's should be confident at all times even under pressure weather thats in school or out of school activities. Being confident will build up the student's self-esteem, to achieve the goals or career, the student want to achieve.                                      ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
08D8232F2D78,"Examples are the main thing to influence others because the best way to show other people is to give them one example about your own experience and what you learned from that example in your life. Other may think that examples are not the main thing in influencing other. Because there are many others way by influencing others. Others don't want to share what happens in their life for examples.

The best way to show other people is to give them one example about your own experience. There are many other ways but example is more important. You let other people know something that you have learn it. For example, My parents are taking about them self last night their was taking about how can I influence my family in the future. They said, that the is a best way to influence them is through examples in my own experience.

What you learned from that examples in your life. Give other examples from what you learn in your own life would be a good way to influence that people. There are many people that are passing about what you had passing through. For example,Angie my best friend is in drugs and I don't want that she happens what happen to me. So, I give her a example about my experience in drugs that what happens to me is going to happen with her if she continue to consuming drugs.

In conclusion, Example is the main thing to influence other because the best way is through examples. You learn from the example in your life. Many people need to know our experience to know what are they doing. people want to know the consequences of what is going to happen to them based on our experience.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
76C0FD26B20A,"I think sometime is good online because any students no have time so many students work part time,then can't go to the school the better option is take a little free time and make online.

First :But is better they go to the school because if you need something you can took with you teacher or partner is past time with amazing friends and learning more about what do you want in the future ,the things and feelings ,ideas and occurrences ,memories and expectations and possibilities ,fear desires ,delight the smallest and most ordinary issues of our lives as well as the large and mostpowerful ones. then online web is the tools for study we have that permit us to share with others what is really going on inside our minds and hearts .they are the only intruments that reveal whether speaks and writes .

second : some times the students no came at the school because they live long them no have money for transportation or when need buy any book ,any students don't have the support of your family ,i think is the way more easy and very well for the people can do it some thing ,we need more people have want learning more the way the best election for our the student speaks , writes and lives not on a thing barren changeless level but with all the breadth and height and depht and movement yyou have a right to as a human being .As you ever open discover those words ,the online can be the most important web you ever open.

Third:There are probably very few people would claim online las their favorite book .However all the words are there ,it is the order ,But if you need company whose work it is to prepare materials that advance your learning and show you how to think for yourselves , the online web is the reason the words stand for things and feelings , from outline and notes to the final form of the paper .It tells you how to write paper .how prepare for applying for a job .However It gives you advice you need to choose the correct language and to avoid expressions ,after its helps you understanding their parts and pronunciation .

Finally : The online web is very well for everybody because in the web we can find the signification about whatever word, that we dont know and helps for keep going more learning for get good job ,after you can use the online web for look video that you are curious then helps own like better people make our life better for everybody, if you dont know the support your family the class online help for you keep gonig learning more .",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
9EAB766AF4BE,"Students and teachers have important roles in their life. The students need to pass the class in order to graduate and the teacher gets paid for doing his/her job. As long as the kids are not failing teacher has the job it is very key that students and teachers should be having good relationship. If the student ever needs help he or she can feel comfortable talking to the teacher and the teacher should be helping the students. If they need it because they can loose their job.

Lets say if the students decide to design the project there own. The only problem with that its going to be to easy for them. Also it wont challenge them so there brain will not learn anything and it will be useless. If it was a group project most of the kids would go with the smart people so they can finish it. And not worry about it and some of the lazy kids will cheat on the projects. If i was the parents i would tell them do it yourself and learn how to finish the project the right way and get a good grade.

Having the teacher design the project is way smarter. They will know what kind of project to create. And also if this was a group project it will be smart for the teacher to put some kids in the group because then the teacher can decide how many points it can be. And how long they have to finish plus the students dont do anything in there break myself being a student i can relate to that. But they have to learn something so when they do start school they will be one step of ahead of everyone. My personal opinion is that i probably wont do the assignment during break right away but i will finish before it ends whenever i have the time.

At the end of the day both teachers and students are trying to help each other out. And i think its more productive the teacher designs the project because when the teacher grades them or goes over them teacher can give feedback. Thats very important see what parts you did wrong or where you did good at. Having feedback can help you a lot but staying with the teacher to design the project is the best idea. Because the students can learn more and get more information on there project. And they will get good grades on them and it should be required to have teachers designing projects for the students.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
6330EB716872,"Kindness,you may know it and I might know and everyone might know, but what is kindness? and why does kindness have such a huge impact on others?

First of all, what is kindness? well kindness is when you give back to others like doing big things like donating to charity or something small like holding the door for others, but what really is kindness? those are just simple things we do, but why? why help others? We choose to help others so then they can help others and we can show the world to be better. Kindness is the key to making someone happy or feel like giving back we help others so they can try to give back.

Secondly why does kindness have such a huge impact on others?

Well we all like giving back, some might disagree or agree but we just want the world to be a better place not just for ourselves but for your kids. You just want you and your kids to be nice, because one day they'll look back and be thankful that someone helped them by holding the door or complimented them and just like that they feel something inside them they feel happy just by one thing someone does they can have a HUDGE impact on them.

In conclusion, Kindness has a HUDGE impact on others and what really kindness means to you and me and by just doing the smallest things you can change someone and they can can also change someone because of you!",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
86E335C1EB06,"Is it a good idea for a young students to commit to a career in high school? It's a great idea so students can work on there career, and not need to focus on what they don't need in high school, to work towards their career. Reasons I agree are, they may want to follow their parents choice in career, can use school courses to excel in career choice, and why it's a good idea to start a young age.

They can follow their parents choice in career. That can be a easy choice for many people, because the student can ask for advice from their parents. They can ask their parents what courses' they took as a young student as they once were. The reader may be asking ""what if their parents' didn't go to high school?"" that can be true and what if the career the parents' have isn't for the student to follow. Then they don't have to follow their parent career, and they can choice their own career, or any close family members, or anyone they look up to, and would like to be as close as possible as them when their older. You can always just follow your own career and can start a generation for your family to follow your example.

If the parent choice didn't work they can choose what classes they can take to help them reach the career the student wants. Schools are all different so not all of them will have the same courses. Example if you want to be a chef and some sort of cook, you can take a cooking courses for the year. The teacher can show you how to prepare a dish and how to present. There are so many choices in career's you can pick from. If you want to be a engineer you have to take your four main classes Math,Science,History,English. These classes will help you in the long run through high school years. The more experience you get from this courses will give you in vantage to the other student that choice your career later in their high school years.

Finally the last reason, why it's a good idea to start early. It's pretty simple that you don't have to worry about what your career is going to be. It can be a lot easier if you know what you want to be, you can already plan the courses you would like to take. When people ask you ""what are you going to do when your done with school?"" you would say ""it's none of your business will see in the years to come!"". You shouldn't say that it's just rude to say. When someone does say that you would have a answer and you should say it proudly. You would just focus on what you need to do. Don't let anyone distract you on what you want to do.

Conclusion on why it's a good ideal for students' to have a career choice in their younger age. Following parents or close family member to the career they choice. If their career choice isn't for you, make a career you can follow and want to follow. Taking courses in school that can help you excel in career that you picked for yourself. When asked that question on what your going to be, you'll be ready answer it.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
EAEE04B1F712,"Scientist Albert Einstein once said, "" Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I agree, why do I agree with scientist Albert Einstein. When you use your imagination,

you can create it in your mind first, you can invent it, you can make the world a better place with it.

First, when you use imagination you create it in your mind, you can go to your happy place and just build it you see how it's. Your brain helps you imagine it right, for example in the game called Fortnite, you imagine what you want to build before you build it and how it's going to look like. In knowledge you just know it you can't make it more beautiful. When you use imagination you can see the problems that might happen when you are trying to build something in your mind. That's why imagination is more important than knowledge.

Furthermore, imagination can help you invent stuff like flying cars. I can use my imagination and and think about what can i do to build a flying car and boom! now you know how you can build it. You need imagination more than knowledge. I am not going to say you can't build flying cars with knowledge but, with imagination you can make it better. Imagination is literary a image in your mind, its like you drawing the things you want to invent on a piece of paper, and just adding some colors to it. In knowledge it's like you knowing the answer to a math question or just about any question.

Finally, imagination makes the world a better place, how does imagination make the world a better place. Well it has a lot of reasons but the best reason is, it makes people happy if people are happy then there is no violence in the world. If we don't use our imagination there would be no light bulbs or nothing. If you dreamed about something, with your imagination you can accomplish that dream and make your life better, and maybe that dream was you becoming a teacher than you're making your life better and the world a better place.

To conclude, scientist Albert Einstein said, ""imagination is more important than knowledge ."" and here is why with imagination you can create in your mind first, you can invent it, you can make the world a better place with it. If you can imagine something than you do it if you imagined it right. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
4F6A4668D513,"The character is the way how you act or behave, and I think that you can form your own character and you can choose your own character traits, no one can influence in what your character or personality is. However some people may think that your character can be influence by which you interact with (like parents), and your personality is based in others personality.

You choose what you want it to be, no one can choose your own way, or in this case your character, is primordial that you choose your own traits, if you don't do that then you'll be un-secure of your self and that can carry many problems to distinguish who you are, or where you should go in life.

Have your own character is a big thing to have, because many people can imitated others character or personality from their parents or any famous person, but if you have you own character that means that you are unique. A recent study in the University of Virginia shows that people who choose their own character and their own way to act, or behave, they are happiest than the ones that imitated other people personality.

You are your owner, your are only yours! Since you are a baby you start forming your character or personality, you have control of what you want to be or what you want it to do. But some people will argue that your parents are whom form your character and they chose your personality traits, but that is not true, your character is formed by your own experiences in life, as Jonh lubbock wrote ""Your character will be what your self yoose to make it.""

In conclusion, you can be whoever you want, your character will be formed by you based in your experiences in life, no one can choose what your character or personality will be. People will always judge you, but You always must do do what your heart tells you to do, be always happy with your own personality or character, and don't let people choose how you will act (not even your parents), make your own character and act in the rigth way.     ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
E429DAB69106,"what would happen if older and younger students get paired together? If younger and older students get paired together it would have a good effect on students because they can learn different methods of learning, give advise for what do expect in high school, and learn different ways of managing stress.

the first reason why it's a good idea to pair older and younger students together is because they can learn different methods of doing things. older students can show the younger students there ways of learning. younger students can ask questions when they don't understand something on their homework, and the older students can show them how to answer the questions and show them their skills. Other thing is that the students can show the younger students short cuts on any subject they need help with. When the older students show the younger students their ways of learning it will help them when they don't understand something.

The second reason why is that the older students can give advise for what do expect in high school. They can tell the younger students how much homework they will have and how hard it is. They can also tell them what classes they might enjoy. They might enjoy theater or cheer. The younger students can tell them what classes they want to try out. Other reason is that they can tell them the skills they should and need to known. it's a good idea to be prepared for high school and the older students can help them with that.

Finley the older students can show them how they mange stress. They can give some advise on how they take a test. they can tell them their test strategys. Other thing they can do is show them how to prepare for a test. older students can show them how they study for a test. and the last reason is the older students can tell them how they mange there time. they might tell them them what time they do things and how they sent up their work space. when the students known some ways of managing stress it will help them in high school.

thesis are all the reason why it's a good idea to pair younger and older students together because students can learn different methods of leaning, get advise for what to expect in high school, and show them different ways of managing stress. when older and younger students get paired together it's a different experience that is good to have.  ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
9B63E800B429,"Do you think attitude is a big part of life? In society today the main factor to your success is having a good attitude. A positive attitude is important because it may help you with new people, jobs, and will bring more joy into your life.

With a positive attitude it can help you meet new people. Being uplifting and joyful will help you with being in contact with new people. If you have a bad attitude people will usually not want to interact with you. Attitude is a main factor with starting a new friendships or relationships.

With having a job, attitude is the key to doing your best. When going to a interview having good attitude makes a good first impression. Also, with having a job and talking to customers you always have to have a positive attitude towards the customer. Teamwork, having a job you have to work together and communicate with one another in a positive manner.

A good attitude will bring more joy into your life. Without a positive look in life you would be miserable all the time. When being positive you have a better outlook on life. You have to be welcoming to others instead of pushing them away. It's important to stay positive in life, if not it will bring more negativity towards you.

A positive attitude is important because it can help with meeting new people, jobs, and it'll bring more joy towards your life. Having a positive attitude always, can be a bad thing as well because some see that as a sign of weakness but overall a good attitude will make you succeed in life. In the future a positive attitude will make life stress free.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5
FE6D9B200002,"The school ends at 4 o'clock and most of the students arrive and home 4:30 pm. I disagree to change the time of the school because the school ends at 4 pm and if one and half hour more the student will arrive home at 6 o'clock. The student need some time to study for test and do there homework. The homework and the test will take them 2 hours. Mae by there grades are low and he or she want her grades not to be low he or she will do extra study for 30 minutes. The total time is for studying is 2 hours and 30 minutes and that is 8:30 pm. If he or she want to go out side to play she can't. Know whey his or her parents dose not allow him or her to go out side Intel they do there homework. If you dont Chang the time him or her can go out side to play.

The students will school all gloomy or tared because. gloomy because they did not go out side because the school board change the time and they won't considerate on there study and the students pr antes will be upset form the school because of the time that school board changed. Tared because of the time the won't considerate on studies pr antes will be upset because of the time.

if you don't change the it will all batter full consideration and no glommynis. The students will get to play out side with there frindes no complantes from the parents. Student will get sleep. So you should not change the time.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
FB1A86FB4BFC,"Do you think is it a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Some students commit a career at a young age, but some other students commit a career when they get older. The students that commit to a career at a young age they might want to do it when they're young so they can finish with their career. While the other students wants to do it later. Students who commits a career at a young age they're in a good way, because they're doing it when they're young. They can finish it, and plan on doing other things like being a doctor, engineer, nurse construction, or going to college. Students who are planning on doing it later are going to wait a long time they might not have time to think about what will they be doing in the future. By the time they're done they might be old,so it's better to to do it when you're younger, so you can have so much time to make a decision. Everyone has a different opinion than others, but not everybody has the same opinion. Some people thinks that student that are committing to a career at a young age are better, but other people might think that take their time are better. Students who are committing to a career at a young age are better,because you have so much time to make a decision on what you want to be when you grow up. That is why committing to a career at a young age is better than committing to a career when you're older.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
CD9AF89E5CA1,"Do you think, graduation in three years of high school is enough to make a brilliant future? Some students say, early graduation bring a successfully life in the future. High school students are graduating in three years because open more opportunity of life ,knowing the new world of college works,beneficial being a young student .

first,

open more opportunity. for example the journal life of my older brother Generic_Name it is easy. He finish high school early in three years, bring it to him advantages to be successfully life for get a job a early age, he also got offers for different colleges ,the Harvard University send to him a letter for being a youngest students to finishing the school early, the day , I remember exactly we were sitting on the table eating the breakfast, my brother was brought a letter in his hand and crying at the same time, we did not realize, the most grateful new getting a free scholarship to attend at Harvard University so my brother Generic_Name was in shock. This explain getting early high school diploma bring a lot of opportunities.

second, knowing the new world of college. for example. Generic_Name my oldest brother is attending the most prestigious university of the world Harvard university. He talked to me a few details about the roll day at university, he says the University its not hard, to being at early student attending a university with just three years of finish high school. He, say the university feels other home with news experiences to discover it. This explain University with early graduation in school it's not a problem.

Third, beneficial being a young student graduated from high school. For example my dear brother Generic_Name. I'm super proud of him to taking major responsibilities in young age, he just took three years of high school and get done it. he called to my mom the day, when he notice the program to graduated early in school , my beautiful mom told him that is a good way to set up early his future and would be able to star a enrollment in university. The university believe students must be a genious to finishing high school early, University offer extra credits for being a young student. This explain young students graduated early are considered as smart person.

Three years of high school to achieve it the most dreaming diploma.

High school in three years, people belief students enough mature or full of knoledge to throught a real life but Graduating in three years of high school brought us brilliants benefits for the future.

New generation would be involved a system, where students finish their high school early to get good opportunitties in their lifes.                        ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
86B2AFB816D5,"Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. The employers look for people's responsible, and make a good job. Most time the employee do not have experience, and many time the employers look those. Many people look for a job without have experience for a better life, and learning new stuff. In lots places taking decision for giving job for people's do not have experience.

First, most of people do not have to study by cause not working, by do not have experience, and do not can pay the study. The employers can giving news opportunities of working for people's have a better life, and future. Anyhow, the employee doing a hard-working, and the employers be glad. When the employee doing a hard-working is for news opportunities.

Second, nevertheless when you are responsible may-be your employers giving a raise. To be a good employee help always for letter of recommend about your ability. Also more people have the requisite by working; although needing experience but can learned. A job can teach the people's a lot things. For example, responsibility, respect, and more manners. The manners is very important in your potential, and your characteristics is important too, because the employers evaluate this.

Some may say, which people's do not have experience can not working, because thinking this persons have a bad conduct. Most employers think which the employee do not following the rules, and doing a bad job. When the employers misjudge a people's because not have experience this remove the opportunities; but the reality is everyone learning, and have the privilege of working. The people want learning about the job for more experience, and a better future.

In conclusion, many people need a opportunities, and show off the potential. I'am a good candidate for working, because I have manners and learning fast. The reality is which work help me for my future,and giving more experience. In fact all word need the opportunities for working, and general a good future. ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
D840D9ED669C,"Do we accomplish always doing something, that quastion can be answerd in different ways on the tipe of person that you ask; theres people that are accomplished with what they do, but theres people that not like to do their stuff because maybe they do not like to do what they are doing, or its hard to do it or they are just tired of it. For people that like to do what they do they have some stuff that make them feel acomplishwith what they do for example:

The space are were they work at.

The relation ship that they have with other workers to work together .

How hard is the job that they are doing that makes them feel comfrontable.

In the other heand the people that do not like what they do, they don't feel accomplish for this reasons for examole:

The work area is not comfortable to them.

The people do nt have a good relation ship with the workers.

The work is to hard since no one likes to help echader.

In my way of think I would pick that i feel accomplish with what I'm doing because maybe is hard or I dont feel comfrontable odoing it, but I enjoi doing it is something that i considere accomplihsment for; Im the one who is doing it that nothing is going to change it and Thomas Jefferson was right it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing it.

My conclution is that if we have to enjoy what we are doing even if is something that we dont like to do, or is just a person that you are working with is not good enght to work with , but it doen's not matter about what you do your idias that you have made the work that they did and the prgres that could be helpfull to expire you to do more thing to feel accomplished with your self.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
BF72FB4B953F,"Three year graduation

Is it beneficial for students to graduate a year earlier then the rest or could graduating earlier impact a student's health? Many high schools allow students to choose between graduating in three years or the traditional four years. Some students accept this offer with the idea of leaving early and not dealing with drama. In my opinion early graduation is not worth the mental, physical, and emotional stress.

To start off, when you choose to graduate within three years you are choosing to work during summer and do all core classes for junior and senior year in one semester. you worry so much whether you are going to pass or not here is where stress applies. Generic_Name, a college student at John Tyler community college, was suppose to have graduated last year skipping her fourth year but, unfortunately she couldn't keep up with everything. She had to do all her junior classes in one semester and her senior classes during second semester causing her to stress and have a mental breakdown in the middle of her Biology class. After consulting with her guidance counselor she came to the conclusion that she will have to do her fourth year of high school for her mental health's sake.

Now with that being said, transitioning from junior to senior year is hectic. You have to make sure you have enough credits to continue: make sure you keep up with all your classes and their requirements: and you have to stay up late studying and doing homework. A young adult needs at least 8 to 7 hours of sleep to properly function through out the day. A student that stays up doing late night homework and studying do not obtain most of those hours leaving them with only 2 to 3 hours to sleep;therefore causing them to be tired all day long the next day. The lack of sleep has a big impact on a student who wants to graduate early, for they fall asleep in class and miss out on important notes.

In addition, the simple attempt to graduate is emotionally stressful. Now imagine only having one year to do both junior and senior classes. Once again you worry about passing but this time you question yourself. You ask yourself "" Am I capable of making it? and Am I smart enough?"" and dwell on these questions. Eventually you start putting yourself down and start thinking whether you made the right choice or not. This is where your emotions come in to play. Meanwhile you are trying your hardest to do all your work you start feeling angry at yourself because you simply can not keep up. Soon enough you give up on everything your education and most importantly your future.

On the contrast, for many high school students graduation is an exit ticket. The faster we manage to graduate the better. We no longer have to wake up early in the mornings, we do not have to interact with students and their negative attitudes, and we no longer have to be caught up in high school drama. but even though graduating early seems glorious it is not worth all the emotional, mental, and physical stress of doing both years in one semester.

In conclusion, three year graduation is more than just saying "" let's do it!"". It takes away from your sleeping schedule; stressing you out when you fall asleep in class and fail to copy notes. Causes you to worry so much whether you are going to pass or not and mentally stress. you eventually start to question yourself, feel insecure and emotionally stressed. Graduating early seems glorious but once again it is not worth all the stress.                   ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
6130E5495CB1,"Is enjoyable for everyone because you can do all sort of fun activities. One way I like spending my time is playing soccer with all my friends we gather around to play every day almost and some time we like to do competition in group seven to play who get the most goals and then we let the girls play when we finish playing girls and then we compare and the teams with more goal wins a prize same for the girls who is better of course we another match with the boy to double the prize then the match start for the boys for about hours is lot entertaining and fun you sweat, laugh,

tell scary tails when the night comes we all get creep out at some point. When we finish, we do a picnic to get our energy back and drink a lot of water to keep hydrated and while we prepared the food we play some short game to gain more appetite first we play limbo to stretch the body then is dash ball to burn calories last is baseball to stretch the muscle and then we take a break to eat and play even more its help you a lot to maintain your physical health if you go to the park three days a week thats why I love the park so much it help me a lot to get relax. It help you with your health that why I dont go to the doctor to much is joyful to me when I go to the park.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
951DBA563386,"Do you make your own decisions or do you seek guidance from experts ? I believe that people should be able make their own decisions. I believe this because people are not away right about things and what they say. Another reason would be because only yourself know what chooses you want to make in life and so those are your decisions. My third reasons why I would say that people should be able to make their own decisions is because you shouldnt follow what others do. You always see people making good or bad chooses or making not good decisions but does that mean you got to do what others do, no because you have to make those chooses on your own.

My decision for people to make their own decisions would be because trusting others on what they say isnt always the right things. Would you want your best friend making a decisions for you ? Maybe not because you never know if she/he could be right or telling a lie. People in life are not always right about things ,you dont want to get in trouble for doing something dumb or that isn't the right thing for you to do . If you make a good decision on something at school or basically anywhere you can show others on how to make good chooses so they wouldn't make mistakes . This why you shouldn't listen to people making decisions for you this is because they can cause problem and get you in a situation where you dont want to be put in.

In life theirs so many things you can do but it all up to you . You decide what you want to do, you shouldn't let other people judge you in your decisions because they shouldnt get in involved . This is because everyone does what they want to do in life . If you make a bad decision thats all on you because you made the decision not someone else you can't blame others for that when it comes to you getting involved in a situation that you got yourself put in. I know your children in school might've gotten in trouble with something and if not it because they are great children who don't follow what others do. There are ton of students in school who make bad decisions and this because they like to do what others do by following what others do and seeing others do bad chooses. In that case that is not right because it makes them get in trouble and they lose time of education for making bad decision.

When it comes to making your decisions you make your chooses. Only you know what chooses you want to make. If you do don't want to do something you should't do it . Don't be afraid to not do something because you think it a bad decisions just first before everything think about what your doing. You should always question yourself is it a good choose or not because your the one making your own chooses. Everyone is their self you shouldn't be controlled by anyone. When it came to me making new friends at school I choose wisely with who I would want to be friends with because I didn't want me to be influenced by making bad chooses by others. No one has the right to choose to do things for others when it comes to making chooses it all depends on yourself.

In conclusion just always remember that you should always pick your decisions and not others for you. I know in the world we live in we all know that not everyone makes good chooses which is okay in some cases. This just means that not everyone is perfect which is true because their is at least one thing in life that you made a bad decision on. People just need time to think about what chooses or decisions they want to make so that after they make the chooses or decisions they don't think about it twice and why they should've made a wisely decision. Don't let yourself down or stress about what's rights for you in life.     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
4B957C430005,"'To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' I agree that it is the best thing to accomplishment because it makes that person become independent, helps you succeed and gain confidence, and gives you strength to help others out.

In addition, being yourself helps you succeed through so much, it helps you become independent to take care of your own actions. Being independent is the best thing why?. Well because it's better to accomplish your goals on your own instead of depending on another person you aren't going to have that person always by your side. People come and go not really just any person sticks by your side like that. This is why doing things yourself, achieving your goal is the best thing, you can show people that you don't need any ones help because you got yourself and that's all you need.

Also, being yourself motivates you to do better, you start to gain confidence and nothing is better than believing in yourself. Just how it's easy to gain weight it is also easy to gain confidence by telling yourself ''I can do this!.''

By having motivation you can do possibly anything, you can jump off a plane if you have the guts to. You start doing better in school or your job perhaps, you start getting good grades or start coming to work on time. Motivation is key in order to succeed in life you must have confidence.

In other words, once you start to gain confidence you need to have enough strength to help another person out perhaps they are depressed or it's just not their best time right now. Motivate them to never give up no matter how much stress you have it shouldn't give you a reason to just stop trying. We have to go through the rough times first in order to have a better life. If someone or yourself is having a really harsh time don't be pressed over it the past is the past and many things happen for a reason. I have gone through a rough time myself for 6 months now but it never gave me a reason to give up I am a strong independent woman and I won't ever stop trying to stop having confidence.

In conclusion, just how Author Waldo Emerson said '' To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' He is correct but, also making you into something else could also mean in a negative but we always need to have a positive mindset. We must be independent and have confidence so we can succeed and so we can help others succeed as well to become somebody in life. Never give up just be positive and everything will come your way remember confidence and motivation is key.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5
C4A208FC02D2,"Can a positive attitude take you to the life that you always have dreamed?.There are so many reasons to support that a positive attitude is the key to open the doors of succesful!!!. Being positive, anyone acquire the capacity of be smart to make good decisions. For example a negative person never going to take risk to make a hard decision because always going to think in that everything goes to be bad. Positive attitude must be in the mind of everybody because is the only way to be succesful in this world. Positive person eventhough sometimes make mistakes never going to give up and always going to keep trying to achive anything, no matter the negative commentaries of the people. A positive attitude bring the happiness that everyone is looking, it's like be a super man with super powers. A lot of famous people like actors, singers,entrepreneurs, and others recomend be positive even upon a pouring rain all of them are a good example to say that. All these things prove that be positive always going to be the step that everyone should take to be someone in this life.

All these things that positive always going to be the step that everyone should take to be someone in this life there are a lot of famous like actors, singers, entrepreneurs, and others recomend be positive even upon a pouring rain because a positive attitude bring the happiness that everyone is looking, it's like be a super man with super powers, always a Positive person eventhough sometimes make mistakes never going to give up and always going to keep trying to achive anything, no matter the negative commentaries of the people that is why a positive attitude must be in the mind of everybody because is the only way to be succesful in this world, for example a negative person never going to take risk to make a hard decision because always going to think in that everything goes to be bad the only way to make it is being positive, anyone acquire the capacity of be smart to make good decisions think about this cuestion, Can a positive attitude take you to the life that you always have dreamed?.There are so many reasons to support that a positive attitude is the key to open the doors of succesful.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0,3.5
8D1CD79C0F8D,"Thomas Jefferson once said ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing. I was so successful in life. You want to know why? it was because I was always keeping myself busy with work. We accomplish more if we are always doing something because you get more work done, you can be more successful, and you can be more healthy.

First, you get more work done, for example I had a science project due in one month and I decided to get working on it until I had finished it, consequently I had more time to work on my other school work. My friend, Generic_Name she is always working at McDonalds and she never takes any days off. She refuses to stay home and be lazy, therefore you will always see her working on something productive. It could be school work, her job, or anything else that benefits her. Generic_Name had a book project to do and since she was always working she accomplished more than her friend, Generic_Name.

Secondly, you can be more successful, for example my cousin, Generic_Name was always exploring with cars until he found out he wanted mechanic to be his major. Since he knows a lot about cars he can always help people when their cars break down and can also make money that way. Generic_Name can later on open his own mechanic shop in the future. My friend, Generic_Name has also been very successful. She absolutely loves doing makeup on her and on other people. Generic_Name's makeup looks are so amazing she has become a famous makeup artist. I also became successful when I opened up my baleada shop. Every one loved the taste of my homemade tortillas filled with beans, eggs, avocado, and cheese.

Finally, you can be more healthy, for example I go out to run each morning instead of sleeping in. Running outside in the morning can be very healthy because you are stretching your muscles to start the day. Although some people may think inactivity serves a purpose, they are incorrect because inactivity can be unhealthy. My friend, Generic_Name got in shape because he goes to Golds Gym every day after work. He rather go to the gym on his free days instead of staying home watching Naruto because that will not benefit him.

You can get more work done, you can be more successful, and you can be more healthy when you accomplish more if you are always doing something. Generic_Name, Generic_Name, Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and I benefited from always doing something productive instead of being inactive. Help me spread the word that always doing something is more beneficial and healthy than being inactive.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
F0EECEC5C84B,"Some people believe that they should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life' important matters because some of they wants to do all the things perfect they don't wants to make a mistake. But I think that is not necessary to seek guidance from experts. The first reason that I think that is not necessary to seek guidance from experts it is that you can learn new things in your life doesn't matter if you make a mistake. The second reason that I think that the people should make their own decisions it is that a expert does know every thing about your life does know your feelings.

As you can see my first reason that I think that it is not necessary to seek guidance from experts it is because people can learn new things in their life you can make a different in your life. Doesn't matter if you make mistakes you not are a perfect person. Every person learn about their mistake. Do what ever you want. The people does know what is better for you every people thinks different to what you think.

The second reason that I think that the people should make their own decisions it is because a expert does know every thing about your life. You can make your own decision. A expert can't choose what is better for and what it is not. Also experts can be incorrectly to what is tell you to do.

In conclusion, I think is more better to do your own things and do what you think is more better for you don't let people do the things for you. So, I believe that the people should make their own decisions. The reasons that I think that you should do your own decisions are 2. The first reason it is because you can learn new things and doesn't matter if you make mistake you can learn of yours mistakes. The second reason it is that a expert does know every thing about your life.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
9A25D43F4CEF,"I strongly agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson. because your never going to succeed as a person in the work force or something else. because these people wont step out of their comfort zone. because they are too lazy or scared. Ralph has a very good point : Lazy, shy, scared people wont succeed or grow as a person or in the work force.

Doing more than what your good at helps grow your confidence, and your way of doing things for the better. Doing more could possibly give you a little higher pay raise or be a boss at a at a big company.

Doing more than what your already good at can go a long way for you.

You should start doing better right now because it will benefit you in so many ways.

Not doing more than you can already do can possibly give you bad rep. Or some people will see you as a lazy person in life. Because that person is not pushing him or her self to do more or the beyond because that person isnt motivated to do anything more that their good at. That person wont succeed as much as the person that is doing more or the beyond.

One time when i was a small Child. My Uncle always talked to me about a lot of stuff.

The most important thing he told me is to do more than what i can already do. Because it will take me places and it will make my life a lot better. He said if you do more. I will succeed more in life. When i got older he talked to me more about it. Because he knew i was gonna do more in life. Now i work as hard and beyond than the other person. And make more money because i work more than i already mastered.

I think working beyond than your comfort zone will help a lot. You can be really successful if you challenge yourself in life. It could be school or work. It doesnt hurt if you challenge your self. You will succeed as much than the other guy.         ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
D57EBE64C7A2,"I am agree with students to use their cell phone in the classroom because some students came to the United State with not knowing any words in English, and even of a student that born in the United State or their native language is English can get to forget the meaning of a word in English. For instance, cellphones or another type of device.

And it can drive you to many type of option which is very good! if you are not clear in the first option you can jump to the second option or third option if needed.

Some students came to the United State without speaking English which mean is so bad, and they don't know how to communicate with teachers so they are likely to uses their cellphone for translating words. I was one of the student that came to United State without speaking any English, and teachers can't speak Spanish too, so I was able to use my phone for translate words to my language, it was helping a lot to communicate with other students that only speaks English. In another reason, I daily uses my phone because it is easy to carrying It in the hallway instead of a big dictionary, and some dictionary does not contain the word that you looking for . Beyond of that, in the cellphone you just need to download the dictionary app or go the Google web and type easily the word that you need to fine information for.

Therefore, cellphones can give many way to you how to understand the word specially the Google web site it can give you pictures, or it can led you to a video link where you can see resources that are explaining the meaning of the word or different manner that they can be clear at the point. I use Google a lot of time because has everything that the dictionary can not be included for example, Google translate can tell you the pronunciation, quickly to research, and even if it is bad it will tell you the meaning besides that if you don't know how to spell the word it contains an option where you can talk to the cellphone which is a lovely option to use.

However, cellphones is a almighty thing to be used in the classroom to help students knowledge or everywhere. beside, been smart and having powerful resource we can learn from cellphones to do many things as some teachers want us to use our cellphones for Wikipedia, kahhot , dictionary web, and googlecassroom for reading , writing or gave us homework throw it.

As we can know already cellphone is very useful for this options too. calling ,sending message, receiving message , set remainder, multiple resource, ects.

Despite of each year is advancing many students at the among of age 12 or 15 years old have a phone or a tablet device which is fine to have. Then, If needed teachers can work in an online website to gave them homework to do at home or working in classroom. And some point, approximate all people have their cellphones in their bag, and easy to care and some people have said that the cellphones is like their friend.

finally, which I did understand that cellphones is necessary needed to use in the classroom which is helping to translate word in another language and cellphones can give you many certain information, idea how to be specific in the word that you are looking for. And also, it can have a different variety of information and some teachers will ask for it during the class, if you have one . And is a small size it is easy to carry, And is an important device to carry everywhere.          ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
D2035E3721BA,"Don't put yourself down if you are trying to succeed ,but you fail.

Prime Minister Winston Churchill said ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" I agree with Churchill""s statement because you have to work hard towards success and In general not everything turns out to our favor the first time so, you have to try again until you reach success.

On the other hand success does not consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Success is gain through those who choose to succeed and you do not need to fail in order to succeed.

Working hard towards success without losing enthusiasm is important because you have to be patient and sometimes we can be inpatient so, we loss our enthusiasm we will loss interest and will no longer be motivated to succeed. Enthusiasm is strong warmth of feeling interest. Failing is alright because to succeed you are going to fail and you learn from your lesson, try again, and move on.

On the contrary side success is obtained to those who seek it. Studies show that 78.2% of people don't succeed because they chose to be comfortable and not motivate themselves. Success does not consist of failing and failing ,People should be assertive that they want to succeed so they are prepared with the mindset not to fail.

In conclusion ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" I agree with Churchill""s statement because you have to work hard towards success and In general not everything turns out to our favor the first time so, you have to try again until you reach success. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
AFFCB27334C9,"Have you ever felt board, or idle? Thomas Jefferson ones wrote,"" Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I strongly agree with Thomas, because when I'm feeling idle. I intend to get sad, or depressed, therefore never be idle.

Theres a lot of ways you can stay active and not be board out of your mined, for example; over the summer my Dad took me to work with him, as a carpenter. But not every one can do that, therefore here's some ideas for you: go to a gym, go for walks ,or get a job.

Going to the gym might be a big comment, but its very healthy physically and mentally, you'll start feeling good about your self, maybe even start looking good too. this is my first idea in how to stop being idle.

My second idea is walking. Walking was something that helped me fined my peace, just walking around admiring the world, breathing in the fresh air; now i'm not saying to do it alone maybe with a friend or two, or maybe walk your dog. pretty must enjoy the beautiful world that gods given us.

My third and last idea is to find a job. Working with my Dad has given me a lot of money, I bought nice shoes, cloths and bought my family things too, but it wasn't just about the money. Working with my Dad really has given me another way to look at life, gave me a reason to change my ways and made me see that the real life isn't easy. And its amazing to see the building now, to see how much its improved from last time i was there and now its just like a maze to me.

This is why I believe its never okay to be board, or idle. Because just imagine all the things you can get done, therefore, this is was i think Thomas Jefferson right when he said,"" it is wonderful how much you can get done if we are always doing.""                             ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
79786E273D1A,"Taking more then one persons oppenion is a good way to make your final call for example, ther was one time where I wanted two differant books but I only had eangh for one. I had to make a good disagon becouse if I did not then it would have been a wast of $15. one of the book was called Nialarmstrong it talked about the life of Nialarmstrong and the other was called Dog Man it talked about a dog that some how got transformed in to a human offecer cinda like capton americ exapet hes not a super solder. My conclogon is paople should take more then one oppeinon.

I dicided to take my frends Generic_Name oppenion he told me to "" take Dog man it is so cool "" but i feelt like there was something about the Nailarmstrong book. Its always fun learning about other peoples storys and what they did to get to where they are. I did not stop there I wanted anther oppenion so then I want and asked the libarn oppenion she told me "" the nailarmstrong book sounds better to me but your choose to pick out the book that standes out the most to you"" so then i took her edvide and the book that stoude out the most to me was Nailarmstrong. and let me tell you I had a lot of fun reading that book. I evan told my frinds about it and they where like ""can I chick it out"" if i sed no i would sound disrspactful so I said sure ill bring it tomorrow in lunch.

Taking more then one oppenion might be time consuming but trust me it will help you make a 90% better choose then if you would just run in blind and start makeing bad chooses. That is what all of the succesful peaple do inclouding the prastent, besniss men, loyers becoase if the make the wrong call they could posibly face some vary big concaconses and if you want to be succeful you will have to be vary careful and take as many oppenions as posoble.

Taking peoples oppeinons could be risky at times but a good tip is to take that risk. What i'm trying to say is takeing a risk is not always bat every thing happens for a reson at lest that is what my parants said. taking big riskes is a part of our lives every human being took a risk at lest ones in there lives sometimes you would not evan know that you took that risk but in realty you did for example im take a risk typing this ovesly the conscances are not that big but they still mater in life.

My oppenion is to watch out, becareful, and take the risk like I sad riskes dont alway tearn out bad. if you do lesson to every thing I said in this your oppenions to others would change a lot and what i mean by that is you will look at many thing in a differant precpactive, your disagon makeing would change lats say you take six peaples oppenions three of them said there favert coler was blue and the other three said green now this is when a risk comes in now you are going to chose a coler lats say you chose blue now the numbers have changed 4 blue and 3 green so blue won. these thing is are in you every day life so you have to becarful,take risks,and take other oppenions.                         ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0
D7B9BEAEE50E,"Dear ; Mr principal i have done some resarch, and i think that it's a good idea to change the school cafeteria menu, to a more healthier food. I know that it wil be a big change, but it will help the students alot here in school, i have some reasons of why you must change the school menu and how it will help us.

The first reason is because the parents of the students won't have to be worry anymore of what thier children are eating in school, you know that there are some parents that want thier children to eat healthier, and if we change the menu they wont be worry all the time, because they will know that thier children are eating healthy food, every single day they wont be eating junk food.

My second reason is that the student will be heathy, and strong, they will also be more active, and ready to learn at school they wont be sleeping that much, and they wont be so lazy, because what the student are eating right now in school that is junk food it will make them, less active and their brain won't function good though the whole day. Thats why you should consider to change the school menu do it for the children that goes to school so they can be healthy and learn new things every single day.

My last reason, is that the student won't be geting sick alot, and they will coming to school more often, they wont be missing alot of school day beause of the healthy food that they will be eating from our school every day, we will also be helping their parents because when their children get sick they spend alot of money for doctor and medicine, but since we will be giving healthy food to the children they wont be geting sick alot. and we will be teaching them the importance of eating healthy food and being healthier.

This are my reason of why you should change the school menu so please consider this idea because we will be alot more healthier then what we are right now and our brain will functon good, and it will help us for the rest of our life, because in school is were we spend must of our time and we learn everything here, its like our second home do this for our future and for the good of the school. ",3.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
1C1E049AB15F,"A famous quote once said by Thomas Jefferson ,""Determine never to be idle . . . it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". Off this quote i feel that sometimes in life you can accomplish things with no effort but mostly, in life you gotta work hard to earn and get the things you deserve and have well accomplished in life. Another thing is that you gotta have a really good effort in life to get really far. I agree with Thomas Jefferson's quote on,"" how much maybe be done if we are always doing"" because that's how it has to be done in life , you gotta work for what you want and need, everything is earned in life and it's way easier to get things that need to be done quicker by putting your effort and always working, than to just be standing or laying around doing nothing.

One main reason i agree with Thomas Jefferson's quote is that you gotta work for what you get in life,you gotta always be doing something to get stuff done. It's an amazing quote that is used in a way that many don't think or have had the thought of. His quote is supporting the fact that it takes hard work and focusing to get work done and that work wont get done on its own.

Another reason , is that no matter what you do , you always gotta work in life. To not take things for granted and actualy work and to not be lazy and get no work done that has to be done, done . It'll help out in the long run and make things easier in life by doing what you have to. Thomas Jefferson's qoute is there to incourage others to do great in life and do everything possible to get your goals achivied. This quote is a great figure of speech that can help out in the long run for people in need of it.

One last reason i believe thomas jeffersons quote is a great and an amazing quote is that it justifys that life isn't easy and everything isn't free, also that things come with consequences. To also, not take things for granted and be grateful for what you got because that's the amount of effort you put in , instead of just laying down and or doing nothing at all. The quote has a alot of great reasons and thoughts that are put into peoples minds off this one quote it could help motivate someone in need of motivation.

In conclussion, Thomas Jefferson's quote can help people that are in need of something to motivate them. To help them by telling them that it's fasinating to see what you get out of completing your work by always doing something. Lastly, how easily it is to complete something by moving around and not just sitting and down absolute nothing about your work. Isupport this quote beacuse it well help people understand how life goes and how you're supposed to live in order to be great and wise.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
72095D288A5B,"Establishing a homework club would be a great idea because students can get help. Another reason this is useful to student is because they could finish all her/his work and get more time to do what they want at home. Lastly It gives them an chance to learn more.

Students can get help in a homework club easily. One way they can get help is by asking a teacher for help. Another way a student can get help is asking a friend for help. They can get help with a teacher and a friend. This is how students can get help easily.

Students can finish there work at school. When they finish there work at school they got more time to do whatever they want. They could play games. They could read a book. they could take frequent naps. In conclusion people can do more things when there done with there work.

This gives them a chance to learn more because they can ask more questions and get there work done.

In conclusion they should establish a homework club for the people that need help. Also for the people that want to finish there homework. Thats why they should establish homework club",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
49D2A80F1484,"In my opinion disagree. Because some people said that is hard, take a lot of time. For example you gotta know how works all the processing, and people do not understand, so some time is very confuse. So in my opinion that first impressions, are very wrong because no everyone wants to be like different.

Secondly is very impossible to change because people do not have time to take care about that stuff. Also because they work they have boobies, shores, take care of their family so is very difficult to be part of that. But also people said that first impression is bad because is impossible to make right.

In addition, some people said that take a while to get used it because you need to be sure, to your goal come true. Also you have to work very hard, and if you do not have enough, time you not are able to get it so that mean, you have to work hard. Example like people said that impressions, are almost impossible to change well, for some reason it should be easy or hard we don't know.

In conclusion, I disagree because impressions, is not easy to take care too, many work in little of period of time so it will take me for ever to do it correct. But also people, said that is very hard and is total true so impressions are very hard to take care.     ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
6134797D8497,"It has been that fisrt impressions are almost impossible to change on your experiences. I agree with this statament for several reasons. I have many experiences,but some are impossible to change. When I came to this country and when I travel with my sister and my friends to Generic_City and my first day in the School.

First, when I came to this country. This is my first impression impossible to change. When I was in my country I was happy to came to this country to look my parents and sibling. I leave of my country in October 25, 2015. I was in Guatemala for 15 day. I feeling sad, because I don't know who are the other people came in the group. After I was in Mexico for others 10 days. I not eat anything, because I don't liked the food that they gived me, also i was for anothers days in a place called Matamoros is close to the river that with to cross to came to this country. After to cross the river a men of imigration take me to the imigration office and he start to call to my parents to ask about my imformation. I was happy to speak to my parents. My parents pay a ticket to travel to here. I cray of the emotion to see my parents after a few years.

Second, I went to Generic_City with my sister and my friends. This is my second experience tha is impossible to change. I was happy to share time with my friends and my sister in Generic_City. We wented to Time Squared. We take many pictures infront of the tower. After we walked to the red stairs we sit there to look anything and we continued walked to go to the anothers beautiful places that the City has.

Finally, my first impression in my first day in the School. I was happy to go to the School. I feeling sad, because when the teacher start to explain something in English i don't know what she said and I ask to my friends that they speak Spanish they start to explain me what the teacher explain in English. Every day in Schood I learned somenthing different and I feeling happy. Every day when I came to the house after School I speak in English with my lilttle brother than he born here. He teach me English sometimes.

In conclusion, this are my three impressions that impossible to change in my own experiences. I believe that the experiences that we has in the life are only that never past again is only one time.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.5
FDC94E0FE9C8,"Have you ever did something because is on trend or just because someone else did?. As you must know humans are easily influenced by others way of thinking and acting and it is because we want other people to like us showing that humans are social individuals. The best way of influencing others is setting an example by ourselves because we tend to compare ourselves to other people, also humans repeat what they like like the fashion trends, and lastly, because social pressure can lead us to do things even if we don't want to just because everyone else did.

Everyone is influenced by what others thinks or do.

First, we have to begin with the way in which we usually compare ourselves to other people. Is common that if we see someone breaking the rules we'll claim that ""We are on our right to do it to"" . Or we can just see that this happens a lot between siblings; if one of the siblings gets something the other one will want the same. For example, when my parents buy something for my brother, I want them to buy something for me to. Or when they let my brother be out until a late hour, I'll claim that I have the right to do the same the next time I go out. People is always comparing themselves to others in what they have or don't have.

Next, is imperative to analyze the humans dependence in wearing what others wear just because is in trend. If for example Gigi Hadid wears sweat pants with heals and looks good, every girl in the world would run to buy the same clothes and wear them because now is a trend; or if a girl in my school wears makeup in some way and I liked how it looked, I'll copy the look and wear it some other day. Humans like parrots repeat what they like.

Finally, the social pressure can make us do things we don't want to just because someone else did. That is why many times we've heard "" If other people jumped from the bridge, Will you do it to?"". For example if we are on a party and someone offers a drink, the probability of drinking it is high because everyone else is doing it, and we want people to like us. If someone challenges us, we would do it because we want people to like us. Social pressure is an influence in what people do.

In conclusion, Setting an example on our own will help us a lot in making people do what we want them to do. A smile is contagious, kindness is contagious and humans as social individuals repeat what they like and humans want people to like them.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
F38E063ED945,"Being yourself doesn't depends in how people see you, it depends on you because you are the only one that can choose to change or not, it makes no difference if you did something right or wrong the society always will discriminate and see that at the way they think it is,and you can't do anything about it, you are doing the things that you feel that are correct and how is the way how is has to be, however being in a world that is trying to make you something else is a great accomplishment because there is not way people make you change;

you had to live your life at the way you want it, you have the opportunity to express your feelings everywhere, and you are in the world to be happy and not to satisfy every single person

Sometimes it's hard for you to be deal in the society with opinions that hurt you and make you feel bad about it, and that is something that you cannot change, but it is something that help you to learn how to be more responsible when you are growing up and to be overconfident about what are your thoughts, you have to know that in the world are many people want to see you go down and change the way you are, in that situation you have to be with your head up and be who you really want to be, you can do the difference in your life, but not in others person life

In addition, you have to be proud and brave everywhere you go to because you have the opportunity to express what are yours feelings, there is not way that somebody can change what is in you heart, only you choose who can hurt you and if you want that continue, try to stay positive all the time not matter what is going on in your life, do not let someone know what are your debilities and how you feel about things go in on in your life that person can hurt you every time he/she want it, do the things that make you feel better with yourself

Finally, be happy all the time with the things that you have because it might be the little things, but are things for which you work really hard to have it, you have to be brave especially when you have done something that probably other person will see that bad, however that doesn't mean you are wrong is just what they think about it, you need to be how you feel comfortable and not to maintain happy the society, reach your goals how you want it, don't let anyone destroy your dreams because if that happen you are not going to be cheerful about it

In conclusion, live your life how you want it because is only one, do what you think is correct and follow your dreams, since the moment you let the time past by doing what other people want; you will not be happy nor proud about what you really want to achieve, it's difficult to trust people that one day made you feel safe and in peace and then did things that they knew that it hurt you; if you really want something good for somebody else you will do everything to protect that person and make it feel unique, simply be yourself without get involved in other person's life. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
5985EA6F171A,"I think is a good idea that the students start thinking about what they want to study in the college, what they want to be in the life, and they start preparing for the future in the high school. It is a good idea because they can start working when they are really young, It is a good idea too because they can make money when they are young, It is a good idea because they can buy they own things with their own money, like a house, a car, or whatever they want, and they can get graduate really young and that is the way to prepare you for something.

For example you can stop living with your family you can be indepent, nobody can tell you anything you can rent your own room just for you and you can have your own space, another example is that you are young maybe you make a wrong decision in the career that you choose but the good option is that you are young you already did the high school maybe you already work so you have money you can start another career more important something that these time you already liked because you are more older you know more about what you really want. Also in the work that you have you can study a little bit more and you can scale to another position too much better when you are young you're body don't feel so tired when you work because you have more energy, but when you are more older your body start feel tired, you start loose energy the sickness come your body hurt you have to go more to the doctor, so when you are young you can work more for you retirement.

In conclusion is a good idea that the students start commit a career at a young age because that are going to help them to be someone in the life, also that are gonna help them to be an important person. But the more important is that you are going to work in what do you love to do. The benefit of start preparing for a career since the high school is that you are going to be a young with a lot experience, also that help to the young students stop thinking on bad things, like cigar, tobacco, alcohol etc. Also help them keep their mind busy and to be in high school and not in the streets with bad friends that help them to keep a educational way. And is something that they are going to use in the life and is something that is good, what we need now is a societies based on education because that is a good thing because the education come with a lot of opportunities and with that opportunities the students can lear a lot, the learning is the best thing on the world.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
FD972500F1EC,"Do you have a positive attitude? If you do, are you enjoying your life? Today, many people living in U.S. and people has many attitude, and some peoples has good attitude that key to success in life, others has not good attitude. Although, some people think that attitude is not important to the life because of it is dependents on how you work harder, one might think that positive attitude is the key to success in life because you do not stuck in same problem, you could become strong, you could have many supporters.

First, you do not stuck in same problem. If you have problems about your job or in your life, and you do not know how to fix your problems, but If you have positive attitude you could think positive way to your problem, and do not need spend the so much time for your problems. At the least, you can figure out fix your problem more good way and you will doing to be great in your job or your life. When I was middle school I was playing basketball, and I had problem that I always think about If I miss this shoot and scared to shoot in the game, but I changed think to positive way that I can do it, I will make it. So, I really enjoyed every game and I did make it so many score in the game.

Second, you could become strong. If you did big mistake in your job or in relationship, of cause at the first you will be sad, but you could change to positive way quickly so you will work harder and you could fix mistake. Two years ago I was dating with boy that he goes to same school, but we did not work out not longer. I was so d and I was cried every day, but my mom told me that ""you will be fine, glow up and become strong then make him jealous"". So, realized that stay in sad mood everyday is not good for me, and I changed to think positive way and I focused more about myself, I did my makeup, I bought new cute clothes. And my ex boyfriends asked me to If you want mo to back together, but I said no because I knew he will hurts me again, but I was so happy that I could make his jealous and I told myself that I win then at the same time felt strong.

Third, you could have many supporters. If you have negative attitude and you always sad then you always say no or I can not do it other people might start thinking about you that not fun person because If someone trying to cheer you up but you keep saying no, it will make triers uncomfortable. No one do not want to spend the time with negative person. If you have positive attitude people think about you that nice, and fun person so for example, your boss or your teachers and friends, they will support you and your life become grateful.

In conclusion, having a positive attitude is the key to success by you do not have to waist the time small problems, you could become strong about anything,

you could enjoy your life, and you could get many supporters that support your life and so important to success in life.             ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
BFB1E692333A,"Imagine having a healthy life, but with negative attitude you will not feel great you will not feel good or excited about anything all of the energy that your body have is going to go away. It will be impossible to live happy with a negative attitude, but if you have a positive attitude everything is going to feel better. Having a positive attitude will help you succeed, have a good life, and higher emotions.

To succeed in life you will need to have a positive attitude. If you have a positive attitude you will succeed in life. Imagine having a job that you do not like, and you are thinking of looking for a better job, but you are not sure or you are having a negative attitude, those two things are going to keep you back from getting a better job. If you make goals in your life, and you want to accomplish all your goals you will need to start by having a positive attitude, for example you see a car that you really like, and you say it to your self I want the car or my goal is to one day be able to buy the car. You will start by putting more effort in your job to earn more money to get the car, and in all the process to get more money you will need to be positive or you will not get there. If you want to have a better position in your job or in anything that you are doing right know you need to have that positive attitude to get were you want to be.

Having a positive attitude is going to make you have a good life. If you have a good life you are going to have less stress and you are going to be healthy. Most of the times we do things to be happy and feel good, but if you are doing all those things with a bad attitude it will be difficult to feel the happiness. Having happiness in your life is very important because if you are not happy your are going to be depress and going through depression is a very difficult thing. Keep in mind that if you start having a positive attitude you will get through anything.

Finally higher emotions are going to help you stay strong and have a positive attitude. Positive attitude reflects in everything. If you have high emotions a lot of people are going to want to be around you mostly the people that have negative attitude or very low emotions because all they will want is to feel like you, they will want the good attitude. By having high emotions you can help a lot of people that are in a very bad place. Having high emotions will also help you create strong relations with other persons because you will understand how the others feel.

In conclusion, having a positive attitude will help you accomplish a lot in life it will make your life easier, and the other people arrow you. Positive attitude will help you succeed big in life you are going to have a lot of people arrow you because they will love the energy and the positive attitude that you have.          ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
AE156FEABF74,"Some reasons I'll be happy wrote something about my self is because i will be important is some one or some one will see they self in my self and then they will be happy to see the problem in other easy way I'll do the different to other person like me.

Other reason is because I will feel like finally I share my own story with the world and they will know how hard is lived in the world, for some people and how easy is for other.

When finally about my story they will put they face up and will feel like I'm not the only person with this life someone in the world have the same life I do now and the will be different and will said yes to the life they have in the present because all of us know how hard the problem are our own life.

I agree with him because him try to proud my own story and try to be different then others he thing about my experience and try to change what i did wrong in my life. He will change others life and what he is writing I will be happy with that because others guys will see what was wrong and what they have to change and they life. for example if i did something what i keep in my mind and I try to get back the time and now is to late is something what I can't do now I will fell like I help others to don't do what is wrong and they life. in sometimes we feel like terrible but we can change that when is the right time to do it but there is where we don't want to change anything in our way and when is to like we want to do something but is very late for some of us. but I will feel like wire when I'll see a book about myself because will be all what i did before and who I'm now. but the, Author Ralph Emerson wrote, my story because he though was important to to talk about other person and thing about what they do or what is going on in different's in some life and moved to others to change something but when we know any story or we red something the first thing we see on it is the what is important and what and what part describe the person in the story. when the author will writing something he get the all information he can can fist and then stars with the the important part to proud the feeling to reading that story.

the author like to share what he know ir what he investige fir others and try to moved others to grow up when they feel like they can follow the liofe but there is where they stop to something wrong tehy are doing at the time. for reasons like that is they like to we have author and good storys.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
CBF62E8FFA1B,"In my opinion, I think that true self-esteem comes from achievement and the only reason I think that is because when I achieve something huge say I got a very good grade on my project or got an acceptance letter from my dream college, it would make me feel great about myself and raise my self-esteem. It does not come from praise, when I hear the word praise I think of people praising you and you shouldn't rely on people to bring your self-esteem up. To know that you did a good job by seeing the acheivement it makes a person feel like they can do anything. I see why they say praising can bring self-esteem up, it is because people love to hear from others how well they did or how what they did was so incredible. Words can bring self-esteem up and I know this from experience. However you do not need peoples words to build your self-esteem up it's more a want then a need. Achievement is what you need to build your confidence up in yourself not words, I mean sure it's nice to get a couple compliments here and there but not for satisfaction. To acheive is like to do something outside of your bubble to make you feel like you can do anything, effort needs to be put in to achieve. I think our society now expects that getting praised is like the best thing but those people are the ones who realize that in the end thats not something that build your self-esteem up, sure it'll make them feel good for a little bit, but in my head I thought you don't need to depend on anybody to satisfy you as long as you're doing you and succeeding in life. I hope people come to their senses and realize that they cannot live their lives happy and succesful being praised their whole life they need to praise themselves. I used to be a person who loved getting praised for doing a good job or achieveing something I never praised myself though I wanted to. I realized then the praising is not gonna get me through my teenager years, early twenties and late twenties, I had to learn on my own to know that if I put the effort in something I will achieve. I feel like this whole praising, effort, achievement thing is all like one big repeat, put in effort, praise to boost up your confidence and then in the end achieve it's all linked together but peoples words are not going to satisfy you throughout your academic life it's like asking for attention right there, give yourself all the attention to achieve in life not to fail, I have praised myself so much that I got so many positive thoughts in my head telling myself keep pushing,your almost there,your going to graduate as long as the achievement matches the effort put in to achieve. I've always been that child that wanted to make everybody around me proud especially my parents, I want to show the people that have doubted me my whole life that I can do anything I can achieve it's just all if I put in effort or not. True self-esteem comes from achievement not from praise and if I didn't know that in my heart as true I wouldn't be the person I am today, suceeding. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
20E2B07931F3,"Once in a while we all have been heard a phrase; ""TRY, TRY, UNTIL YOU SUCCED"". We all have been gone through failing, at some part of our lives. But we never give up and we do our best. And at the end we get more of it. Yes we accomplish more if we are always doing something. There are few people who don't agree to this statement. They say doing something more will not let you do other work. But rather than seating ideal, we should always try new things around. Trying new things can give new experience. Also, you can get better at things. And, moreover it also makes you strong. Rather than seating ideal, doing nothing; we should always keep on trying new things.

We humans always have dreams of doing things like: Sports, Cooking, Adventure activities, getting into music, dance, and many more. Doing something and trying out new things will always give you new experience. I wanted to learn guitar from my childhood but, it was not possible when i was in school. During my last summer break i joined guitar classes. It was next level experience to me. I learned so many new things which i never knew about guitar. There, i also met new people and made new friends. Meeting new people and knowing interesting facts about their lives is also a new experience.

On the other hand their are some people who says trying new things don't give you experience, and it also wastes your time. But if we want to at least full fill our dreams then we have to keep on working hard.

There are few people who argue; doing same things everyday won't give you anything and you will also not able to focus on other things. But that's not true. Doing same thing again and again can make you better and you can be best in the future. let's just talk about me when i joined my guitar classes. On the very first day i didn't knew nothing about guitar. Their were lots of things like: cords, tunes, vocal. This all were like a big giant algebra equation which were kept in front of me, in which i didn't even knew how to solve for x. I knew a little bit of knowledge how to play with guitar string, but i never knew much things in details. On the very first day when i went to my guitar class i was not really good. But after continuing playing for a month i actually started improving at that. And today i'm really good at playing guitar.

There are many individual who says that trying new things is a fail. And later it demotivates you and make you feel depressed and upset. Many of us our not really good at things. We fail at many things at first. In this situation many of us give up and don't try to take a second chance. But do we actually know that failure is the biggest key to success and it also teaches you many lesson. I'm not really great student who can Handel math. I failed in algebra1 in my 9th. Every test, every quiz, i used to get D or either F. But failing at same things again and again until i started getting good grades thought me so many new things. And it also made me more stronger. Failing makes you more stronger so that in future also you can fight with it.

In conclusion seating ideal will never make you succeed. Trying new things is a opportunity to learn new things and explore things around you.                       ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
8772F74F5EE0,"""Failure is not the worst thing, not to try is worst thing in the world."" To become successful, people must try. They should not give up. If people fail and grow up without losing hope, they can be successful in their future. Although some people thought failure is not good for their life, nevertheless, some were thought failure plays an important role in their life, because, it makes them to learn more about themselevs and become successful in their life.

Failure can make people to learn more about their self. Because after failing, people can know themselves better than before. They can know about their strength and weakness. For example, Generic_Name told her friend that she is good at Science and English. But she said she is not good at math. For that, she don't like to do math at home or do it by herself. She always copied from board in classroom. Because she never try to do it. Suddenly, one day in her math class, she was called by her teacher to solve a math in board. First she was saying that she doesn't know how to do it. Fortunately after looking at the question, she did it. And then after this, she got to realize that she know how to solve the equation problem. Which makes her feel confident about math and herself. While she was talking, one of her friend interrupted her. And said that, he was satisfied with her math. Unfortunately, she failed one of her test, which makes her feel bad. After test correction, she got to understand what she missed. So she prepared herself for retake and she took the test second time and then she pass the test on second time with a good grade. Some people who fail on first time can also prepare themselves for next time. Which can take them one step ahead of their goal.

Furthermore, failure can make people successful in their life. To become successful people have to have positive enthusiasm. For example, Generic_Name is senior of Generic_School. In order to graduate she need to pass her English SOL. Because when she was a junior, she didn't pass her English 11 SOL. But this time she tried her best with positive energy and she didn't gave up. As a result, she pass her English SOL this time. Some people also cannot reach their goal in first time. But that doesn't mean, they never can be successful. To reach a goal, people need to pass the small steps first. If they fail, they can try their best for second time. And always there is a second option for every problem. For to become success, people need to learn from failure and they have to try again and again. And then they can become successful on thier life.

Overall, without loss of enthusiasm people can reach their goal by failure. People can successfully reach in their goal if they learn from failure. From failure people can learn more about themselves. And people have to have positive energy and hope to handle any situation. Because failure is an important role that plays in the pursuit of success.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
91B88A23A5E4,"Dear principal,

you are considering of changing school policy so that we the students may not participate in sports or other activities unless we have at least a grade B average. while many of us have a grade C, i know you are trying to make us bring our grades up by doing this but understand that we like doing sports and activities especially our favorites but you can't do that because it sounds like threat to us. you can do something else but not stopping us from sports and activities without making at least a B, please cancel this policy because we really need sports and activities to keep our body focus and healthy and we also promise to keep the good grades and do our homework's, and try our best to keep up the A' s and B 's.

P. s please don't forget we love sports and activities because we the students really have fun with it.

Thank you.

From Your

Students",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
F52394B3500C,"I think that school should not follow the business model. Adding two more hours to the schedule is not worth it for example some student need that time to other activities like go to the gym or play any sport and by adding two more hours that means that they are not going to be able to do all kinds of activities after they get out of school. There are some student whom work after they get out from school, they need that time to go work and make their money and having to stay on school two more hours means that are not going to have the same time as before to work also means that they are going to make less money. Staying on school two more hours will be a difficult task like myself I need go home after I am done with school because I have to take care of my house like make my sister food and clean my house I have to do that every day after I get out from 0school that is why it will be difficult task to do for me to stay two more hours on school.

I think that adding two more hours to the schedule and only having to go to school for four days only is not good idea sure we want to save energy as well but school can not afford to follow the businesses model. For example student can not afford to stay on school for 10 straight hours they are going be really tired and by being like that they might do their work wrong. Also those student whom work after school if they stay two more hours I think that they are going to be really tired for work I have some friends they start working at 5pm they get out of 3pm that means that they will have time to rest for two hours but if they have two stay on school for two more hours that means that they will get out of school at 5pm so they are not going to have time rest an just have to go straight to work. Another disadvantage of getting two more hours of school is that for those students whom works and get homework that means that they will not have time to do their homework for example myself I have to go home early to take care of my house I have to care of my house quickly so I can start doing my homework so staying two more hours on school for me it will be difficult to do all of that task after I get out from school.

Of course there are some benefits from adding two more hours to the school schedule like saving resources and saving energy also those student whom does not do anything after school can learn more because they can concentrate more they does no to worry about what they are going to do after school. There are some student whom does not do anything after they get out from school so for them it does not really matter whether they have o stay two more hours or they does not have to stay like my friend Generic_Name he is a student who does not do any actives or their go to work after school so for him it does not matter if have to stay two more hours. Having two more hours means that those student whom does not do anything after school can have more time con do their school work as well study more for their test. The benefit of adding two more hours only benefits those who does not do anything after school.

In conclusion trying to follow the businesses model is not good idea for our school, so many student are going to arguing for it they are going be saying that just by trying to save a little bit of energy and resources they have to change so many things and sacrifice their money and their time in fact is not a big different adding two more hours two the schedule every day because that means that we till have to use energy in those hours.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
4288F88C8D15,"I think if your good and sports you can participate in sports. But you atleast have to try to do better at school. Because if you don't them you can't participate in sports like compate with others school or team. It so cool because, one time I compate with other school in baskteball and voleyball. But we lost In voleyball but in basketball we won. I was So happy because you get so exited and then nervous because then you think that your going to lose but you never know ig you don't try. So I think that if you have a C or B you can still make to the team or do some sprots. When I won I was with a C avarage and my coach. Didn't care she put me because I was good. And that what I think principal so please don't change the rules. And if i want to do and acticity well if I have a C than, she atleast can check my conduct in class. Or maybe some student don't have a B avarage they could got and C and they could be one of the best. But the pricipal want to change the rule right.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
2C4DE9FD3734,"Albert Einstein once said imagination is more important than knowledge. I have three reasons why I support his statement. My fist reason is if man haven't imagined light would Thomas Edison create the light bulb? Second, is because imagination gives hope. Hope for one day to cure cancer, hope to stop world hunger, hope to have world peace.

Phones,laptops, microwaves,how do you think we got their? Its because people imagined things other people thought wasn't possible. Because they didn't have the knowledge about it. Lets take the light bulb for example. People in those days used candles,and believe me as a kid whose been in the country side, it's not the same. Thomas Edison imagined if he can create light, and he did it. Now his work led to lots of good every day things. Like tv, microwave, electronic toothbrush, laptops and so on.

I had a friend,and her dad was sick. He had cancer and they couldn't afford the medicine. Her mom was a house wife,so she didn't have a job. If it was me in that scenario I would have gave up and accepted my dads fate. Unlike me my friend started working at McDonald. Getting paid 15 dollars an hour. She worked 4 hours on the week days and 6 hours on weekends. She made enough money to pay for her dads medicine and buy food for the house. Even tho she had to work, her grades where better than mine,and every time she felt down she starts imagining what she would do with her dad after after he gets better,and that gave her hope. Hope to work even harder.

2 month later it was time for her dads surgery,but she didn't have enough money for the surgery. Thats when the entire neighborhood decided to help her. After that her dad got his surgery and got better. Now she is in high school, working hard for for a scholarship.

In conclusion,imagination is what makes us move forward. I don't know about you but I can't imagine life with out creativity, hope, and joy. Because thats what would happen if we didn't imagine the future                ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
B37D0A9D7859,"Do you have a positive attitude? I agree with this statement about the importance of a positive attitude. Being positive is the key to being successful in life, I think having a positive mind can help us in our bad circumstances of life and help us overcome bad time faster. Having a positive attitude will give allow you to have a good days. Others may think you do not have to have a positive attitude in order to be successful.

Having a positive mindset will always help you get better opportunities, for example to get a better job or a better home or a better car, but everything requires that you have a positive mindset.

Also having a positive mind will always help you to be better every day every time you overcome a bad situation you will become stronger or also every time you reach a goal, that will help you be better.

Sometimes it is also necessary to be negative to understand or experience bad things or it can also help you be prepared for bad things, or also bad news or bad times. We have to try to be positive most of the time to be able to make good decisions and have better opportunities, but also being negative can help us make better decisions for ourselves.

Different from how I think, people say if you are smart, why do I need a positive attitude? They believe someone can be successful just knowing the skills. There are those that believe if, you work harden than most you can be successful.

In closing, it is my belief if you have a positive attitude you will have a successful and rewarding life. A positive mind will give you better opportunities, and great energy. It is not good to have a negative attitude. People think you only need to be smart in order to be successful, but it is nice to be positive too.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
A902D2DE1A8A,"I don't think curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, because some teenagers can get in trouble befor the curfew time so I curfew or not some teenagers will get in trouble, for example one day my sister was out with her people, and my dad told her that her curfew is 2:00 p. m but she did not come home at that time so my dad ask her why did you miss your curfew, she told my dad that what is the point of curfew and my dad told her to get you out of trouble, she was like curfew or not if I will get in trouble I will and my mom told my dad she has a point, so my dad was I like you right so when every you go out make sure you come home.

Now that you know that all teenagers do not need curfews we should think about the other teenagers who do not get in trouble, and see what we can do to change thing.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
81306D4B4CC1,"You know what I want to accomplish? I

want to be a soccer player. I want to play for my own country and I want to be recognized when I play soccer. It would be really fun to play,train,play championships and play in big events like the World Cup.

I want to play soccer for Mexico because Mexico is a good team and they have good tactics on how to play the game more inffiencetly and they have good strategies. I want to represent my country when I play because I am representing myself and to the people in Mexico. The team I want to play for have many games such as friendly games. Friendly games is a game of fun not to compete but to have fun.

If we want to get better we have to practice and after practice we want to play games. We want to practice to get better and stronger. In practice we learn things that we have no idea what to do or we want to learn about it. After practice we want to get into games and play. We play to learn so that if we lose we get to see where we made our mistakes. We learn those mistakes by learning it so that it won't happen again.

Sometimes we don't just play friendly games. We play championships to win trophies. We play in knock out stages which if we win, we go to the next round and if we lose we get knocked out of the championship. We work hard to get trophies. Every game we play in that is a part of championship wise we compete and work very hard to win this trophy and we try our best to win.

Every four years we play in a big event called the World Cup and we compete to earn a trophy that is made out of all gold. We have to qualify to enter so we have to play a game to enter. If we win we get into the World Cup, but if we lose we don't get to play. Sometimes we play in leagues and we have to be first in the stage to get the trophies. We sometimes win but other times we don't. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
777E845C3A93,"Generic_Name It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. It has been said that a positive feeling is the solution to be successful in life. To be with a positive attitude in life is the most important feeling for yourself, and some students can learn from their own personality. Some students had their own positive attitude because is the key to be successful in life. A positive attitude is the key to be desired in life.

To begin with, a positive attitude in life is the most important feeling for yourself. This point mean that to have a positive attitude is the better things in this world. For example, Generic_Name who had a positive attitude with a important feeling It can help her for her ownself or she can be a different characteristics. Generic_Name is showing her attitude in a positive way to make sure about the important attitude that she had. However, to have a positive attitude with a control to be successful in life is the most grateful key.

Furthermore, students can learn from their own personality. This point mean that students can learn skills, and lesson from their own attitude. For example, some people may said that having a really positive attitude in life is the most right things in the world. But being a person with a wonderful personality It can make that person with a better details in the future. A positive attitude you can be the key of your own feeling to success in life.

On the other hand, some people may argue that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life. But in other way you can also be the person with the positive attitude, and behavior. For example, Generic_Name It has been said that in this life the best way is to have our own success, and a positive attitude. Generic_Name have a positive attitude because he is saying the opposite of having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. This point mean that Generic_Name is trying to said that It can show everyone the differently attitude that a person can had.

To summarize, It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to sucess in life. For some people a positive attitude is not the key but for some of them is the positive attitude. A positive attitude It can be for some people because is can really explain to them the different direction of motion that they had in life. However, in this case people can represent to everyone their own attitude and teach other people the different between a positive attitude and a negative attitude in life. Some people may say that the most important things in this life is the attitude because is can describe everybody personality and the different characteristics that a lot of people had.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
C265A20FB301,"Yes. I agree with Ralph Waldo statement becuase it is true you got to farther than what you already know if u wantto succed in life you got to go farther then what you feel capable of doing life for example: i have a frienmd who plays soccer he used to stay playing difence i was like yo Generic_Name u should trry out on playing forward, he was like i don't know i have never played forward only defence, so i was like life is not about staying in one place life is all about going out there and do things you feel like you can't because u cant stay in one flace for the rest of your life; and know hes one of the best forward players my school have, life is not about just doing things u can life is all about experimenting new things to do something out of your limits to see what else are you good at because its a good feeling when you find out of what you capable of.

When you go out of your limits, you can find out lot of things about your self you get to know who the real you is, you get to know how inteligent, how brilliant you is to do things out of your rutin of every day we only live life ones but we live every day with out knowing if we going to wake up the next day, on my opinion i do agree with Ralph Waldo on his statement. ",3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
2E98035B8362,"American jazz legend Duke Ellington said, ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best. ""

I agree, because when a problem is present you have a chance to learn a lesson, new things and methods to solve it.

When a problem is present you have an opportunity to learn a lesson and keep trying to solve the problem until you find the answer to it.

When you have a problem you can also learn new things like what is it that is making the problem, what it is affecting, and whom is it affecting.

When you have a certain problem you can also learn other methods to solve it like how and who made the problem, how can you solve the problem, and what plan you can use to solve it.

For example you are facing a bigger problem that you have ever faced before and when you finale solve it you have learned a new lesson, method, and two or more new thing about how you can,may or will solve your future problems even if they are tougher than the ones you ever faced before because the bigger you get, the bigger your problems become.

For another example, imagine yourself as a detective in a homicide case, you are facing the problem of learning new evidence and using new methods, while using the lessons and new thing you have learned while were investigating the crime scene. You have to use all of those tactics to find the corporate, because all you need is to use the lessons you have learned while you are learning a new one, learning two or more new things, and having a method to capture the corporate (criminal).

And that is why i agree that a problem is a chance for you to do your best.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
A394468CDEC1,"Do you think getting advice from more that one person help you make a better decision? Yes I think getting advice from more than one person help's you make a better decision. First getting more than one advice from someone help's them make a better decision because they know what advice they need and what they don't need. Second receiving advice from more than one can make you combine all of the advice's together to make one big advice.

While getting advice from one person is great, Receiving advice from more than one person is beneficial. Getting advice from more than one person is more profitable than getting it from only one person. Getting advice from more than one person can help you really think about the advice's people gave and you can benefit from the one's you understand. When you get the advice's from those people they want you keep it so you can use it in future. You can get advice from anyone but you have to understand the advice that will benefit you.

When you receive multiple advice's you can combine all their advice's to get one big advice that summarizes all the advice's you were given. When you get advice from someone it connects to things such as, School, Sports, Jobs,and many more. When you get advice it's to motivate your self to do more. When you get advice from more than one person it's usually something your good at. When those people talk about the same advice you have heard before it all connects together to make a big advice. The big advice you get from all the people that gave you advice's is to either improve or be successful.

I think getting advice from multiple people can help you make a great decision. First getting more than one advice can help know what advice is useful and what advice is not useful. Second you can a lot of advice from more than one person but you combine all the advice's you got into one big advice. Receiving advice from more than one person is beneficial and it can help you come up with your on decision on what advice is good for you.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
5BF7AAC78AB5,"Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Just like saying ""if you want to know everything you got to not know anything first."" , ""if you want to be rich you got to be poor first."" , ""You got to learn how to walk before you run.""

Every people that are smart, rich and well-know there are all born without any of that just like every single one of us, no one is perfect. We all have something that we are good at and something that we are bad at.

The way to successful is not hard to get there. Do what you are good at. Make sure you are enjoin what you are doing. Just like this one man that I forgot his name said ""get a job that you are enjoin doing it, a job that you have fun doing it and you will jump out of the bed in morning.""

You are who you are right now because of all the mistake you make in the pass. ""success consists of going from failure to failure."" you lean from your mistake. If you never do anything wrong that mean you never do anything at all. All the mistake you make you better because you lean from it. You can also lean form another people mistake too. It's one of the reason why most of thing in world got better.

Soccer is the sport that I like. I'm not that good at it but not that bad either. When I first start playing I don't know a lot about it so I keep playing unit I know a little bit more about it. Then I start playing with the pro player because I know that I'm gonna make a lot of mistake and all those mistake gonna help lean how to play and how to get better and it does. I make a lot of mistake I still do but I like to take a hit sometime it make me stronger. you know what they say ""what doesn't kill you make you stronger."" so I keep trying and trying hope that I can make that to be my job. Mistake dose help you it may be a big one something or a small one but all the mistake help you. I was really bad at soccer once but now I petty good at it.

All of this should explain why Churchill said that""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" Mistake is a part of you it's a part of everything but it's not all way bad.

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77B932D27C9E,"It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three year and enter college or the work force one year early.

The students will have a all year they can use. If they graduate one year ealy it would help they in college or after college, it would be helpful for them in their future job too.

The students will be able to experience a early college, and they will be able to take their time to get everything they need for their life after college, it will also help some of them in the job they dicide to do, they will have time to get more experience for their job.

It will give them the time they need to get the diplomats or the dregrees they need for the careers the will chose after college. for the one who will be working after high school, it would give them the time they need to get to know their future jobs better.

Graduating in three year will help the students alot, it may take alot of effort, but its a gift and they will be the ones to get something out of it, that's why the students should be able to de everything they can to be successful in their ealy graduation programe. They will have to take courses during the summers and probably in the evening, some may not be able to take elective courses, but it will help them alot in their lifes.

I think that it's a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early, because it will be very helpful for them in their lifes, it will give them the chance to eperience college or work force a year early, and they will have one more year to prepare their futrue.                                                                                                                                                                           ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
9D8B3825C355,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because the students like to have class in home. The students can use the computation to do her homework. The students can have time to do his homework. The students can use the online to do the homework and the his works. The video conferencing they can helping the students to do the worth and the homework. The students con have a video conferencing to took to the teaches when the students have a questions.

The etudents like to have class in home. can have time to do sand in the home to do homework and can have all day to the work to the teaches. they can call to the teaches to helping when the student have a question. the most of the student can have class in hoe is morale to do writing. the stundents can have time to go to the job. some schools do have after distance learning as on option for students to attend class from home by way of online or videos conferencing",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
39B6454376C8,"Dear TEACHER_NAME,

I'm writing this letter to you because i think that is better to not allow students to have cell phones at school at all because they might get distract when they have their cell phones and they might use them during class. I think this is better because some students bring cell phones to school and they use them during class and they don't pay attention to the teacher and they are always distract when they have cell phones, some students don't pay attention because they are using cell phones in class and when the teacher ask them a question they don't know what to answer because they didn't pay attention when the teacher was talking. Another thing is that some students are now getting in trouble because they are using cell phones talking to other people that they don't really know and they give that person information about them and about school and they don't really know who that person is and they could be in danger because that person knows everything about them and about the school.

Sometimes students have their cell phones turn on during class and when the teacher is talking the phone begins to sound like someone calling or a message and they interrupted the teacher and the teacher have to take time from the lesson and tell the student to turn on the cell phone or to give it to her.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
D03BCE849DEA,"John Lubbock wrote one's ""your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."" I believe that we can choose our own character traits.

Everyone is different we all have distinguishing quality's, put it this way if your an apple and your around mangos every day, is not goint to be different even if they trying to make you a mango your still going to be a aplee.

Going back to what John Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.""

i belive this prompt is right we can choose our own character traits.

We can be happy, sad, angry, or crazy. People are not going to tell us when we can or can't do.

I dont like when people tell me staff for example, I dont like when people are trying to make me something im not. I can choose what i want to be. This is why i belive that we can choose our own character traits.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
75707305C76D,"Having a more advance learning can be beneficial because of career experience, graduating early, and recommendation.

Career experience is important to human society because it is needed in order to earn money. Some school provide programs that have different career. Student can have experience on what is like in the outside world. Without the help of the school program lot of student have difficulty on finding jobs.

Graduating early means that a student have master they're learning. They have the opportunity to start there career that they enjoy and have the requirement. Pre-AP classes, also advance learning can give students scholarship. Pre-AP classes means learning College while in High School.

Recommendation also falls on the same place as graduating early and career experience. When a student have master there learning they get to go to a special school that is more advance than regular school. They have reach the point where they succeed in learning.

Career experience, graduating early, and recommendation are all benefit of advance learning. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
E1ACA6A0198E,"Hi, my name is Generic_Name and I am interested in pursuing in Microsoft Engineering. I am experienced with most Microsoft products that they have made through out my whole life. I am also experienced with Microsoft Software that they have created.

I should be elected to work with Microsoft because Iv'e been using Microsoft products through out my life. For example I use there gaming console, laptop, tablet, and there desktop. I have experience with Microsoft products and I know how there system works. Iv'e study how they first made the gaming console and I also study how they made the Microsoft tablet/laptop. Iv'e been buying Microsoft products through out my whole life and that shows that I love there products and it shows how supporting I am to Microsoft company. I don't just use Microsoft products I also study the products and how the system works. An average person would just buy the project to use but they care less how the system works. In the other hand I care how the products works because its interesting. I also fixed broken Microsoft products therefore the only reason I knew how to fix it because I learned about the products and Iv'e studied them.

My second reason why I should be elected in Microsoft Engineering is that I am very experienced with Microsoft software and programs. I use Microsoft software on a daily base because I use there software to work on something or to study them on how the software works. Most people use Microsoft software, For example Microsoft Word. People use word too type an essay or something really important. Most people know how to use Microsoft Word because its built to be simple, but in my case I know more tools and know more stuff about the program. Iv'e studied most of the tools that Microsoft has to offer in there software and trust me there is a lot of more stuff you can do with Microsoft word then just type a simple essay. Most people only know the basic tools in word and that proves that they are not interested in the software then just to do a quick essay. I have studied most tools and all Microsoft software's. Iv'e taken classes to learn about these tools and more about Microsoft programs. It taught me a lot of stuff then an average person. The Microsoft Industry most likely want people to know how to use there programs and software's because they are most likely going to make the employee's use the programs.

Some people may disagree with me that you don't have to be experienced with Microsoft software's and products because they think in order to get the job they will have to spend money to purchase Microsoft products and there monthly programs. They also may disagree about me having to know more tools and skills about Microsoft software's is a better way to get the job. I will say they are wrong because in reality most jobs would prefer people who are experienced with there product and software because then they dont have to teach a lot of stuff to the new employee. It also shows that they where interested in there product even way before they where interested in the job. Most jobs I will say want people who are experienced in there products because it shows that you enjoy there company and it shows that you will do great things for the company. Better and skilled people equals faster progress and thats what company's want.

I should be elected into Microsoft Engineering because I endure the company and enjoy everything that they have to offer. I am skilled with most of there software and most of Microsoft products. I will do great things for the company and make the company better then ever.                ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5
49E375E8CA7B,"Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an after school homework club. Do you think its a good idea to start an after school homework club? I think its a great idea let me tell you why its a good idea.

First you can get help with your work. the teacher can help you if you dont understand your work. If your having trouble with your work the teachers or students can help you and they will show you how to do it. The teachers will explain how your making mistakes. some students may not have a good home and the may not be able to complete there assignments because of the fact that they dont have supplies to complete there work so the teachers and students can help the student who needs help.

Second many students get low grades due to incomplete homework. In the club the students complete homework then turn it in the next day. students will turn homework in on time everyday. Students can work on classwork, projects, and homework. students can complet homework early so they will not do it on the last day.

Finaly other students can volunteer to help students. Students can get rewards for helping others. students can particpate for class grades. Both students learn from working together. They learn there mistakes and correct each others papers.

In concluson i think starting an after school homework club is a good idea heres why. You can get help with your work and many students will not have low grades due to incomplete homework. Other students can help students who need help with there work. as you can see thats why i think its a good idea to start a homework club.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
6932E62C6338,"Thomas Jefferson was a president, and he wrote this to help people to do their work always.

It is really good when we are doing our work and it will be done when we doing it always and we will learn it to do it will be easy for ourself.

Somtime it will be boring to do our work always but it is good that we can learn it really good if we do it always.

I am doing my work and my job and my sport always because it will help me to remember it and also doing always is good that can learn us till we can teach it for example: when we are reading a book always it will help us to learn a lot about everything the people that they are not doing good and always there work and there job they are lazy people and they will not learn anything when they do not doing it always.

If we think about it we can see the diffrent between the people that they doing always are better than the people that they do not doing it always so like: doing homwork always, sleeping on time always, going to sport always, going to job always and etc.

We will help the people and tell them to there there work always we should help them.

In the first when the school start i was not good and i was not doing my homworks and studing always until my friends help me and told me to do my work always and i am glad that i learn this to do my work always and i want everyone to do there work always never forget it. And also when we are always eating good food it will keep us healthy and we do not need go to the doctor always.

keep doing it always.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
8C0D50387A60,"I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because some people are comfortable where they are. It is alway good to go beyond your comfort zone and explore new thing. Without explore you will never know what you are cable of and you will never grow in life. It good to be satify where you are sometime, But when emergency come to need to explore to see who you truly are. He is also right because where Iam from lot of people are satify where they in life life.

I believe that the more you explore the more you grow. For example If Bill Gate was satify what he master with out exploring he would had never become a billionaire and he would never discovered the microsoft. And if

Barack Obama was satify with his education/knowledge he would never had became a Senator or the first Black

African American president of America and he was never going to be able to share is idea with America .So with out going beyond what you have mastered you will never know who you are and what you are cable of. Explore beyond what you have mastered and there will alway be a suprise , a new talent and a new growth in life. You will never discovered your worth/talent with out trying. Some people have that mind set that if they explore they will never make it. The more you explore the farther you go in life. Always pray to advanced to a new level not the level you have master. My mom alway tell me never be happy where you at step out of your comfort zone and explored.

So you will know who you truly are. For example if your boss is leave and they are looking for a new replacement for his/her position and you have knowledge/idea about the job, but you decided embrace where you are because you are scared to take a step in life. And you also have the mind set that they will turn you down. Some people in college are comfortable having there master degree but scared to get their doctorate degree because they feel that having their masters degree is the stopping point of their learning skills and they are not smart enough to get their doctorare degree. Some enviroment make you satify where you at.

Being happy with where you at is not a bad thing but the more you explored the more you grow in life. Never be happy with who you are alway fight for a better future on a better life. like Neil Armstrong Said "" a gaint leap for man kind"" some people need to take that gaint leap in their life. The more you explore the more you learn about life and where it will take you.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
50E361CD561E,"Working in a group is more benefitial than working alone because there are so many diferent ideas that the group members can have to achieve a great work.

The majority of students that I have asked about it say that working in group has been more succesful for them because in fact it is way faster,you get to share your ideas and support others. Many times that I have worked on something by my self I always wonder about many things or opinions about my work and it is hard for me to check if it is good or what would people think about my work.

It is also benefitial for teachers because students will have less questions for them,so teachers can use that time for grading or other things while the students are working in group. I have seen some teachers having a hard time grading and explaining at the same time because every single student is working by their own.

Teachers must have their students working in a group than alone because as I see it is more benefitial and better,this will have students to come up with better work and they also get to interact with diferent people and learn from them.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
FFE16D704B16,"Many people disagree with Albert Schweitzer's quote, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" They think that he meant that it doesn't matter who did it, that the thing that matters is the example. In my case, Albert Schweitzer was right on his quote. Although many people say that there are better ways to influence others than just with your own experience because there are famous people with more interesting examples, actually the best way to influence others is setting a good example on your own behavior because it shows that you were capable of doing it no matter how hard it was for you and yet you still did it and also you will inspire other people to do their own example based on your ideas.

Some people say that there are better ways to influence others because than with your own experience because there are famous people with more interesting examples. Meaning that you have to be someone important in order to influence others. They say that intelligence is another way to influence others because if you're not smart you won't make a good example for others to follow. In conclusion they say that you have to be a skilled and important person to have a huge influence on others.

Actually, the best way to influence other is not being someone important in society but setting a good example on your own behavior. It will show that that even though it was hard for you to do your example, in the end you still did it. That show that no matter who you are or where you come from as long as you have determination you will achieve your goals. Look at Barack Obama for example, he's a black man and yet he still managed to become president of the United States. That really had a huge impact in the black community and inspired many of them to work hard for their goals.

Also, you will inspire other people based on your own ideas. An article on New York Times shows that most of the people based their ideas on other people's examples, which means that if you continue working hard to achieve your goals you will appear on one of those articles and will inspire others. Think about it, wouldn't you like to hear that one person gave you credits because became successful because he read about your experience and he based his ideas on that experience of yours?

In conclusion, many people will say that in order to influence others you need to become somebody important, but you know what? That doesn't matter! As long as you have determination and great creativity you will achieve your goals and will inspire many people to follow their dreams no matter how much it will cost them. Like Albert Schweitzer said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" It doesn't matter what people say, the one that has the power to inspire others is you! ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5
1F0A461A2589,"Some schools offer distance learning from there house students can learn from there homes by online classes and by doing video conferencing. i think students cannot get education for 2 to 3 hours by sitting home or by talking on video call. if you want to get education you need learning enviornment to learn something. you cannot learn anything by sitting in home some students get tired and sometimes you get lazy by sitting home and doing nothing. if you want to learn someting you have to be present in class physically and mentaly in order to learn something.

they should use these options when there is bad weather or ice roads outside so that studdents do not miss there education due to the bad weather students can keep up with there classes and with there grades.

i don't agree on talking online claases for whole year while sitting home sometimes you do not know how to solve problems while sitting homw some students do not have a wifi facility at there homes how they are suppose to take classes on online if they do not have laptop or wifi at there house. all the students should come to the school if they want to get education in order to get there diploma. students who do not have any source of coming to school but they do have laptops it can help them to get there diploma while sitting home.

students who got injuries and cannot come to school for 1 month because there doctor gave him or her bed rest for 1 month this option can help him so that he or she do not miss there whole month so that they can keep up with there grades so that he or she do not fall back and they can get there diploma.

some students who work 5 to 6 days in a week and cannot get up early in the morning this program can help them to get there diploma by staying and taking there test online and video conferencing with there teacher. i do not think all schools should start this program we all have to use techonolgy but you cannot learn whole year while sitting home and doing video call you have to be in learning environment to learn someting because when you get to the collage things are tottaly different no one gonna help you if you do not want to learn all the students have to do everthing by there self.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
FCF714354720,"We will never learn and grow until we try things we never did. Trying new things would lead us to grow and gain experience. Everyone should improve themselves in order to grow. We must learn about different things other than what we already know to gain knowledge and experience. People that have dreams and want to accomplish should work on trying new experience, learning new things, and improving themselves.

Trying new things is the key to gain experience. Soccer players do not always play only soccer. For example, they try different sports to learn more about them. Teachers always try to come up with new topics to teach their students and help them gain more knowledge. Buisnessman always work on improving their buisness to grow and become better. To gain more experience we should try different things.

To learn things we never knew about we should work hard. Soccer player work really hard to become the best. They do that by learning new skills from big players. Also, teachers try to learn new languages to be able to teach their students who does not speak English very well. Kids should learn from their parents the good things so when they grow up they would have a lot of experience that they learned. We must learn new things to become successful.

We must improve ourselves to become successful. Bodybuilders always work on improving their body and getting big. However, parents try to improve, and change the way they treat their kids with to be able to teach them good things. People that just moved to the U.S.A should work on improving their English to be able to talk with everyone. To become successful we should improve ourselves.

In order to accomplish our dreams we should work on trying new things, learn things we never knew about, and improving ourselves. Engneers try to come up with new ideas to build better buildings. People that travel a lot always learn new languages depending on what country their visiting. Athletics try different sports to improve themselves. For all of these reasons and many more, we should try new things to become better and improve.  ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
B0DFC5E93591,"First i think what if someone have a agree and you try to do something what you have already for masterd you will never grow because you garren this so take not bored you have this will never living for experience.

For example you have a draem never grow and complite this agree after living this is my opponion.

Then you are disagree in do you not wants take your will what you have ready for masterd if you try to do this or try to do something that is bad for you you need taken this will never grow someone becuase you garren in do that in its for experience.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
EF9D616EAC4E,"On group works either at school, job or any other place or activity that you could do, sometimes you have the option of working with someone or multiple people, and you can also have the option of working by yourself, we all have our own opinion of either if we would like to do our work by our selves or to work with someone or multiple people for different reasons,and we can all have benefits or working with someone or working individually,and here are going to be reasons why it would be good to work either individually or in group.

When we have the option of working individually or in group, some people may choice i different choice of how they would like to work for different reasons, some people may like to work in groups because they feel that may have more possibilities of talking to their friends or someone that they like, or they may feel that they work may get complicated or may take longer and that they may need help to accomplish it,so they would like to work in group to get help and to finish the work faster.

Some people that would like to work individually may chose that choice because maybe they like to be alone and work by themselves,or maybe because they feel that they okay and that they don't need the help from anyone else to finish or do the work.

In some cause on school, teachers sometimes don't like or don't prefer students working in groups because they want to see if they know how to do the work and if they can actually do it by themselves, or sometimes they worry that one person won't do the work and just let the rest of the people in the group do the work,or just do wherever the other guys are doing, or copy work from them, is true that it could happen in some occasions, but is not always like that,and the reasons why it would be good to allow students to work in group would be that, if every student knows how to the work,then every student can participate doing a different activity on the group and cooperate with anyone, or if the student doesn't know how to do the work, then he\she can get help from his/her partners to explain the him/her how to do the work ,and them she/he can be able to do the work,and they all can be able to participate in the activities.

Has a conclusion, it would be better do work in groups, because in that way it could be easier to get the work done, because you can get help from others in the work,and it would be more fun because you can work with your friends at the same time that they do the work, and it could also be another way of how to met people and make new friends when sometimes you have to work with people that you don't know, and for the people that like to work by themselves, maybe they should know all those benefits of working with people, but is they think that they have no problem working by themselves or that they can get the work done by themselves, then that should be okay to.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
9685DD18847A,"Some students don't have an idea of what career they want to take when they enter high school. Family members and teachers expect students to know what career they want when they enter high school, so it can help them choose the classes they need. I think students should have time to choose what they want to major in.

One reason I think students should have time to think what they want to major in is; they can get tired of the career they chose or change their mind of what career to take. For example, my friend Generic_Name is in AFROTC, she has been in AFROTC for 3 years. In her Junior she decided she wanted to leave AFROTC to do something else, she wanted to do nails instead. If Generic_Name can leave AFROTC her scheduled for the next school year can change. She will have to learn how to do nails and learn the more, difficult, ways to do them as well. For this reason it will be good for students to take their time and find out what they really want to take. They have all of high school year to think about it before they entering college.

Another reason students should think about what they want to major in is, they don't know what career to take or they could have many options but can not chose one. One career could be too difficult or one could be fun but not earn has much. Students should look over the careers they want and see if it is right for them. For example, I have 3 careers I'm thinking about but can not choose one. I have 1 year to think about which one. For me photography would be the one for me as I like to take pictures of the most beautiful places in my home town. I would also like to see other parts of world, see beautiful people who live there, work with amazing people, and see what I can take a picture of. i also want to the world to know what is going on fromw the different parts of the world and not the news. i want people to see it not hear.

Some students already know what career they want to take. Most of the students are thinking which one will be good for them, and which suits them the best. It is good for students to know what career they want, but it is also good for them to think it over or think it through. As students already know what they want to do and go straight to college. Some students like to take a break and not go to college right after they leave high school. These students are taking a break to figure out what career to take, what college to go to, and save money to be able to go to college. This can help the students in many ways. In one way if the student does not like their major and think its too hard it will change major. The student will keep changing major until it finds the right for him/her. By taking a break the student can think if he/she really likes the career they have chosen.

For all of these reasons I do think it Will be good for the students to take their time on choosing a career. They don't have to have a hard time choosing one or changing the career for another one. If they don't have an idea of what career they have a lot of time. They can take a break and think very well about their options. It can help them from not changing majors when they are in college. Students taking their time for choosing careers is good for them and will help them choose the right career for them.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
34317A7F1262,"I think is a good idea for young people to take a career a young age, because they are learning more stuff and when they going to the university they already going to know what career they are taking for their future, its good to them because they can be someone in their life doing their own stuff for them.

If they take a career in high school is going to be better learning the same stuff from the university. But is good idea if they take a career in the university because they can teach him better the stuff he need for a creer. The career is the future for young people doing the right stuff and thats why the most people want to take a career for their future, and high school are preparing them for the university. Thats why is good idea to selecte a career in high school thats the future for our lifes. The university help you a lot in the future if u want to be someone in your life you have to do the right things.

The university help you a lot in the future if u want to work in a big stuff, you can do it because u took the career in th euniversity. Thats why in high school we can selecte a career for our future. but at the same time is bad to take a career for other people because they are thinking, a lot of that and they can't not consentrate, in the stuff they doing. The career can make us a better person for our family, teaching them to the right things, we can do in your life to be someone everyone can be someone, if you ready to take a career. Everyone can do it with help from our high school and the university thats going to help you a lot in your life.

We can show our parents the we can do stuff for our future making, the right stuff for our life and everyone will remember who you was if you showing, people that u can do stuff selecting the right career for our life everyone can be a doctor,police,teacher, and other stuff thats why is good idea to selecte, a career at young age. Studied hard is a good stuff because you doing the stuff you want and like for your future showing your parents you taking a career they going to be happy for you and you can show other people if you can do it they can do it too. Thats why we have to learn things in high school, for the future.",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
70D93EF3CE5F,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""To be yourself in the world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" Currently your accomplishments, acts, and attitude speak of you and how great you are, around the world many of the people think do something else is a act of a humble person for example: on your career, your area of work, in the school you do something it's not your responsibility,the people gesture the big heart has and how important it is show to the world you trying make something else to dial the different. I am agrees because when being yourself the people see something special on you and try to be a person you like to learn new things maybe in the first try thats no gonna be perfect but you never give up to be different around a lot of person. three reasons for being yourself is important: first other persons gonna be like you, second you gonna be inspiration for everyone, third your accomplishments can change the mentality of many people around you.

First being yourself is important because other person they gonna be like you, in a situation like you always do the extra mile, is when you help other no matter it's no your job example: in the school you explain to your friend how resolve any equation of math but is not your job in the class, because you are only a student and it is the teacher responsibility of the teacher explain to your friend, and the accomplishment many person they gonna be like you

Second being yourself is important because you gonna be inspiration for everyone, in many area like in your house, neighborhood, school, college, including church. For example: if you neighbor look it you clean you yard or your house or helping others neighbors, like cut the grass and help each other you can be motivation for other person, thats how complete your accomplishment of be inspiration for other person.

Last being yourself is important because your accomplishment can change the mentality of others, than the people see it your progressive on your life doing thing the other people ask them self, how they did it?, you can leave a massage and tell them how you did it , and if you did it they can do it too. For example: in the family always we can see different type of family, one they have job but with lower salary, and one with their own company, if we are the type of person like to help your own family you gonna transmit that like good vibes, hope, etc.

In conclusion, like the author said is constantly we like a humans trying to do extra things to have a great result and accomplishment in the life, and more then 50 percent of the world do that because the majory of the person see the benefits of help to others, and the most important the world see a positive side of this massege that the author said always do something else and our greatest accomplishment can be example for another person around of us because more than example we can be inspiration for many people in the world.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
3A9630FC8DFA,"What's next, what do you want to be when you grow up , A sienstest, teacher, astronaut, A soccer player,a singer, what is it,

After elementary you go to middle school, Then high school, And then collage, But what's next, what do you want to be or when do you want to be after collage you get a job go to work make money, or even have a family,

Now lats talk about elementary school for a sec elementary school is important right because that's the first school you ever go to, you learn how to speak, write, read, make friends, and learn about plants also animals and more fun thing to learn about,

then it's middle school, more two grades 7 and 8, its just like elementary school but it gets you ready for high school.

Now it's High school is the big place you learn about new things, And get your drivers lie sens, your GP, learn more about collage and more things you never learned about, join a club like, football, soccer, facts, coreiss, singing, band and more.

Finally it gets harder collage, you get to pick your collage, And you need to work hard and earn your degree to become what you want to become in life, also earn your diploma.

After collage where are you going, what do you want to do, how do you want your life to be like. lats say Im a doctor, I go to work at my favorite job, I make money for me and my family with out your degree and diploma, I cant work there I need to go to collage to earn it and work hard for it also to never give up for what I want.

most in portent part in your life is your family.

The money you make by your favorite job goes to your car, house,things you need, work, and your kids, they go to school and do the same thing you did, they learn how to read, write, speak, and more its like a circle, First elementary school, then middle school, and high school, finally collage,

And finally my last response, I would always tell myself when Im sad, mad, maybe even depress, is when it's happy it's always smiling and never stop's""

Last but not lest school is the most important thing in your life it's for your future, and for your hopes and dream's to come true, And to just live life the way you want it to be like don't be a follower be a leader

Now ask yourslfe what do I want to be     ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.0
003885A45F42,"The best time in life is when you become yourself. I agree that the greatest accomplishment, is when you be yourself in a world that constantly trying to make you something else. Because you make your own choices, you become more happy, and you respect others.

First, you make your own choices by being yourself. Becoming yourself means that you should be able to make your own choices and not be shy or afraid of what you're doing. Because you're defining yourself by doing those things that you want. Some people follow others, therefore, they don't make their own choices. People are afraid to make their own choice because they don't want to get rejected or be wrong. In this world, most of the teenagers act and follow the people who are strong and bullies. The reason they follow them and make the same choices they make, is because they're afraid that they will get beaten up and be left out. Personally when I came to the United States I used to follow other, because I thought they were amazing. But one day, I knew I was walking in the wrong path and I left them. Making your own choices makes you happy because you get to do what you like and what you want to do. It's hard to make your own choices, but one day you're going to have to make your own choices. The more you mature the more it will become easier for you to not be afraid of what you're doing and how other people are looking at it, because at the end of the day It's your life and you do what you think is right.

Second, You become more happy by being yourself because you make your own choices, You take responsibilities and you do whatever makes you happy. Also, some people act like they're happy while not being themselves, but matter of fact, they're depressed from the inside. Being yourself makes you more happy because you feel like you achieved something big. Also, Some religious kids who become themselves love everyone. In the bible it says ""Those who know God should love others, because God is love.""

Not being yourself will get you depressed because you don't do everything you want to do, but you do what others wanna do because you want to fit in. Some kids who come from a different country will do stuff they don't want to do just to fit in, because they don't want to be lonely. Some people are afraid they won't be happy because they would lose a lot of friends for being themselves, but they have to know that those people should be there for them and support them for what he's doing since it's his friends.

Lastly, Respecting others will gain them to respect you. Some teenagers like to make fun of others, not listen to what they have to say, and they like to beat kids up. Also some kids don't like to not listen to their parents, and that is also disrespectful. The bible says "" Honor your father and mother.""

If you respect your parents and listen to them, then they would trust you and not ask you lots of questions. Respecting other should be really important, because you don't want others to not respect you. Also, Some people are disrespectful because they were never respected. Important things to do to be respectful is, Listen to what the other person has to say, Stand up for them, Being friends with them Doing all of that will gain you respect and you would have good friends. Also, if you see someone bullying a kid don't watch, and stand up for them, don't be afraid to stand up for someone because you're doing the right thing.

Some may disagree with me and say that it's not that big of a deal, and it doesn't feel like a big accomplishment. But with all do respect, I agree that it's a big accomplishment because nowadays it's really hard to become yourself.

In conclusion, It's hard to become yourself in this world, because others are holding that opportunity back from you and you're afraid to fight it back. That's why I agree that to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,5.0
02B36EBD5C66,"Students can benefit from this option, but also can affect them in different ways. Many students have difficulty coming to school every single day. One impediment may be transportation, a lot of them do not know how to drive, so they can not drive to school. Some students live in areas where the buses can't enter. Many of them walk to get to school every day or ride a bicycle. They face many problems but the biggest one is weather. The climate can change quickly, when is raining a lot or is cold these students stay at home, because there is no way how they can get to school.

Students can benefit by not attending everyday to school. For students who live far away from school is a great option, because they safe time and also they can work during the day. As we see many students have a job after school, and this is hard for them because they have to be active in school. There is a big problem because they come tired to school, and you see them sleeping in classes. They can not be concentrate because they do not have time to sleep. Many of them do not have time to do homework, or different projects they have to complete.

It is a great option to have schools that offers distance learning. This action help many students but also can affect them. In my opinion when you attended to school everyday you can learn more. Because you have all the resources you need to understand, and complete the assignments. But students who like to work hard and take their time to studying in their houses, it can also be easy for them.

Before that there was not technology is was extremely hard. Now that the science had grown up, and the technology appear, we have a way more opportunity to do many things. One opportunity is to studying online from our houses. As I said now that we have technology, we have more opportunities and is really easy to find stuff that you need to learn in your school.

In my conclusion, I think is good for our society having those school who offers distance learning. Because many students can not be in school everyday, and this action help them to keep studying. If this program does not exist many of them could never go again to school, because of all the impediments they have to attend school, and they will never accomplish their dreams. ",4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
6141DB282925,"Thomas Jefferson wrote a letter to determine never to be idle. It's one the most important things that happen in the world,One of this was with young people, they be disrespecfull with oldes people. At this point I think everyone be agree with the statement of Thomas Jefferson.

For example, That is one of the problem that happen on many schools cause let's say when teacher tryed to explain us something about the intimate section they star to Idle when this is no funny. Also Thomas Jefferson inspire peopler to help others when they was idle to a inoccent people.

Additionaly we can stop the kind of problem if we work together helping each other.

It's wonderful if peolpe work as a community and tryed to help other,cause Thomas Jefferson was a men who like to help people on what he can. When someone else was Idle to you don't put attention and keep figthing on what you want .Like everyone know we have different talens and always one person of them was jealousy and tryed to Idle you cause he don't want you or someone else progress more them he that unfair everyone have different dreams and work hard vfor what they want.

On my opinion wse can work as a group and tryed to stop those peolpe who Idle others. Also we can do something else cause lety's said if vsomeone Idle otyhers and we bdon't help these guys the problem continued and repeat cuade anyone work with the kind of problem.

something else was some people don't like to help others. That cause that kind of problem but we as a community we can work on that and tryed to stoped.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
9FD1F622BAC3,"planning to change, healthier school lunch would eliminate sutdents favorite cafeteria food. students won't get full and will still have a empty space in their stomach. the healthy food won't make students concretate in class becuase they're going to be hungry, might make a impact in students body's. changing school lunch to a new, healtheir lunch could cuase some problems students way to learnd and eat.

having students eat in an healtheir way, could cuase a problem in their body, highs school and middle school students will be the ones who are going to be affect by this change. tha's the time when they hahve to eat enough food so they can develop their body's becuase that's when puberty comes on, and students need to prepare, for this type of sickness that they might be going throught, they need to be prepared, eating in a healthy way sometime cause weakness in some students bodys.

by eating in a healthy way students will have healthy life, will be able to play any sports that they want, they're going to be ready for school, will have their mind opend, they will be succed in class and school, life, this could make students to be out of any pain or sickness the planning of changing food cafeteria could be a problem in students way to eat, students would make a radical change in their body, i think the administatrion or county need to make a survey whether or not do this change, they need to understand that some shool have differentes religion,races, they need to consider that as aone of the cons becuase they can't make studentsneat food that they're not allow to eat, if that's the case students won't eat and that might a problem becuase those students might get sick, if they're planning to do a change, it has to be the one with offering food from around the world so can everyone be able to eat.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
935A26E2610C,"Do you think that the first impression can change my statement?

some people change the statement with the impressions for to made best result or to have a bets answer, therefore not all people can make this possible,

but while the people always try the bets.

i'm disagree because, based on my experience some time i said my first impression, and its hard to change, but is not impossible all is possible if you try the best, my mom said that you always have to change the first impression if is not correct.

My mom said that you always have to change the first impression, because you will be more secure of what you doing, and your life will be more better, and safe, I remember that she always toll me becarefool of what you choice, because that what you do in the present will affect your future.

Some time you have to think of what you choice, and i choice that i'am disagree, because i said if you think two time your impression your impression will be better if you said a best impression, so you have to think what you said because if is not correct you will have a big problem.

Should the people said the first impression, but if you see that you first impression is not correct you have to change the first impression, and make a better impression, because two is better than one. ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
D96EF27304E5,"Should schools control how many extracurricular activities you take? There should be a certain extent in when schools can control how many out of school activities your in. The students family should be the deciding factor in whether you leave or not. That is if you start to fail classes, your parents ask the school to take you out of some, or if your attendance towards the meetings look bad. Then that is when the school helps decides what happens towards the student.

First of all, I think it should be a certain extent in what you can enroll for but it should always be up to the student and their families since that is a major factor inn deciding what to do. If the family thinks the child has no time to do homework or study for upcoming test then they should talk to the student about the issue and hear what the student has to say. If the family decides on letting the child continue is upon them but if they chose to take their child out of the extracurricular activities the must notify the child's guidance counselor and notify the main person in the activity

However, if the students starts to fail classes or most of your grades keeps dropping the the students guidance counselor should talk to the student and see why. If they see to many extracurricular activities then there should be a talk with the student to see which ones he can drop for the time until the grades are up. This should encourage the student that if they want to be a part of the activities the they have to be able to maintain their grades.

Lastly, if the child's attendance to the meetings are bad and are inconstant they should not be allowed to participate in the extracurricular activities. The child should only miss up to five meetings per month with out any consequences. By making the child leave the club and notifying their parents the reason why then should the child be kicked out. Without furthermore, reasons the child could be suspended from coming to the meetings for a certain amount of time.

In conclusion, the school should have very little say in the decision of a student being apart of a extracurricular activity. More or less said the families have the most say in the deciding factor unless the students grades are dropping or starts to fail some of their classes. Their attendance towards meetings are bad or if they just don't go to any meetings.                                                                                                                                                                 ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
FCD5885AE01E,"Generic_Name

10/17/2018

Examples: Some people they don't listen to the teacher because they do not care about the school

Some teacher they want the student to study but they don't care some people they want to study and they don't think about the cell.

Examples: The other school they like to use the cell in classroom because the teacher she/he look something or the teacher can say you can use your cell if you want.

Examples: Like the other state they don't use the cell phone in classroom because they don't want to use cell in classroom they want to study but some teacher they use cell, they want to get more experience in school and they try to no use the cell in classroom but the school is very different.

Examples: In the other country they don't use the cell phone in classroom if you use the cell they call your parent or they take you off the school and if you want to study in school you need to listen what the teacher took and they can help you to understand more in classroom .

Examples: Some school they don't care about the other student to use cell phone they want to study in classroom if they want to use cell phone they need to use after the classroom because some student they want to get more experience in classroom the student use the cell phone for chat snap or Facebook but the other student they use cell phone for the read something she/he known in her/him in main.

Examples: The student use the cell in classroom because they don't have anything to do in classroom the student need to have more experience in classroom and if they teach some thing in classroom they can use the cell phone anymore because the other student need the experience in classroom.

The student need more experience in the school if they don't have any experience the other student they will use the cell phone in classroom

Some student they can give the education but is not all the student they can give the education. ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
E1AE7FDD072F,"Should students participate in extracurricular activities? There are many diffrenet activities for students, not only sports, but clubs and many more. There is other to life then school and activities. Students should have the ability to choose what they want to do in the extra time they have. Schools already take half of the students time with going to school and homework .I disagree that students must have an extracurricular activity because they could learn a new language, do better in school, and spend time with family and friends.

First, students can learn another language besides their own. First, the language that they pick helps them with their applecation to colloge and in the real word. For example, it is more likely for a student that have two or three languages to be accepted in a colloge, unlike the student that only knows one. Second, students could communicate with others around the world. For example, if they learned Spanish, they can talk to others in Spain or around other that speak the same language. Third, they could be the only one that learned that language in your class or school. In conclusion, these were the advantges of learning a new language.

Second, teenagers that are struggling in school could take their time and have an advantage to be better in school. First, they could study for their coming exams and be able to focus on them. For example, students could make study groups or study buddies for studying better. Second, after school students can get extra help from their teachers. For example, they would only focus on the students weak part on the subject. Third, they could make up for the extra work they missed from their classes. For example, a student is sick or had a docters appointment they could make up that work at home after school. In conclusion, students would do better in school with the extra time they have.

Third, we need to spend time with family and friends. First, help your family with work around the house. For example, help your mom cook for dinner,or help your dad fix his computer,or help your siblings with homework. Second, you could hang out with your old friends. For example, go to mall,watch a movie ,or go to their house. Third, get to know eachother better. For example, play Never Have I Ever, Truth or Dare,and many more fun games you could play. In conclusion, spending more time with family and friends could grow you a stronger relashionship.

In conclusion, I disagree that students have to have an activity because students can learn a language, have better outcomes on their report cards, and have quality time with friends and family. These were some reasons to not have an extracurricular activity. The principal should not force any student that do not want to do an activity make them. Students must have their own right to do what the want. Go stop extracurriculars!",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
DBDE16551908,"I think the best way is to work as a group. You might ask why. is the best way students get to learn, For example; I'm the type of student that like to hear about peoples opinion. By listining to other people opinin give the other student a idea on how the project or the assigment should be done. When student get the chance to express they idea they feel confident no fear to express themselve.

Many students like to work bby themselve, therefore no other student interrupt the by asking to many question. Most of them already have a topic to talk about they already have a plan. For Example student that work alone they mostly working at their own pace, working alone give then the chance of finishing on time.

Working as a group give the student the chance of dividing the work in different sections, For example; this student would do this part, the pther student would design the project, the other student would do the research. Dividing the project in different part let the student look or choose the part the thing is easy to do ot they know how to do it already.

Student get to meet new people, by doing a project like a group student somtime don't get to choose who they work with, The profesor might give the students a group of people they never meet before. working as a group with new people let you find a new ways to work or write. For example you meet this new student who make a T chart and write the good about this topic and the negative side about the topic next to it. After looking at it he decide what side he should talk about.

You get things done a lot faster by doing in groups as I said before working with a group let the work get done a lot faster, it's give the people the chance of focusing and the part they have to get done. If you finish your part of the project or assigment, you can volunteer to help other team mate. For example someone that works by themselve might need more time, because she's working by her self and you get the chance to volunteer to help her out on something, she might found difficult to do.

In my conclusion, working like a group it teach the students to listen to other peoples thoughts and, it's the best way students work as one. But other peolpe would say that working alone is the best choice, because it teach the student how to make decision on their own and how they should write their own paper with anybody helping them out. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
3A71C888CE45,"Should your school extend the school day for two hours or they should not extend the school day for two hours? If your school extend school day for two hours there are some thing you can't do. You can't play after school games. You can't do your homework. You have less time to work. You going home late. You can't fresh your mind.

Reason one, students who work after school they have moer time on work. For example, if your working time is four o'clock to ten o'clock. If you work regular time you going to make more money. Students need to work becaus they needs to pay the cell phome bills or on gasolin.

Reason two, students who want to play after school game they can play the game. If they don't have time to play after school game they can't fresh there mind. For example, students who live one or two hours away for school they have time to play after school game.

Reason three, students can fresh there mind. Students can't fresh there mind because they are studying more then they need. For example, some time students can't remember what they learn in class, but can do other thinks. Some time student haveing so much fun in the class. Because there mind is so much fresh.

That why school can't extend the school day for two hours. Students can get tired in ten hours of study. Students can't fresh there mind. They can't play after school game. Students who work after school they have less time on work. That why school shouldn't extend the school day for two hours.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
B7938A92A4F9,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" I can not say this is a wrong opinion, but I have a different opinion with Thomas Jefferson.

While other people might think that if you keep working hard, and there will be one day that you can get successful. Because you did not give up for this things, however this is a wrong way to thinking, the reason behind this is yes it is ture that if you are keep working and do not give up then you might be become a successful person but It's still depend on what kind of ways are you choice to go. if you choice a wrong way to go then you get a big mistake, you have to start all over again, that's wasting time.

Other reasons that behind people think they should keep working are it can let people have the spirit about do not give up and have brave to try something. But people will get lost when they working to hard, they do not know what should to do, and if they failed about what they doing now, they will be worry about next time when they want to do something, they became afired to try.

So my suggest is people should be thinking before they want working hard, to make a plan or talk to someone and konw what they think. Then you cna get more easily to successful.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
FEDCB06D743F,"Dear Generic_Name,

It has come to my attention that schools have partnerships with companies that allow students to explore certain occupations trough interships and shadowing opportunities, to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of job. However I'm in favor of the new opportunities that the schools are offering to young teenagers.

Allowing students to explore certain ocupations would motivate students to decide what type of job they want to dedicate their life on.

Every student dreams to have a perfect job, were they can have a good enviorenment and do what they love to do, But for many other reasons; students do not have the same opportunities as other's. with the new chances that companies are offering to students, everyone has the choice to be what they want and be succesful in life.

Every student goes trough a hard process were they have to decide, what they want to become in life. as a result not everyone gets the job they wanted to, causing that this person feels miserable working in a place were they don't feel comfortable. many juniors and seniors are feeling the pressure deciding what type of job they want; However companies allowing students to discover what their passion is and what type of job they want to get,would increase the percentage of students achieving their goals and get the job they wanted to.

Not every student has the chance to get the job they want to. either way because they don't have the sources to reach their goals or they can't because they are not well stablish financially. for example, my dream is to become a doctor but no one of my family have gone to collage, they don't have any expierence nor the sources to help achive my dream. I believe i'm not the only one that is going trough this, schools partenerships with companies benefits everyone in many differente ways, causing that every student has the chance to succed in life.

Lastly, allowing students to have the will to explore new opportunities benefit those who are still deciding what they want to become in life, and those who don't have any chance on achieving their goals. it's very important that every teenager prepares to the real world, without having any doubts or risking themselves to be unsuccesful. companies allowing students to choose what they want to be in life can be one of the many reasons that our future can be secure.

Thank you for taking your time on this matter and allowing me to express my opinion and my greatfullness.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name          ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
07C6BB6ADA38,"One topic that is frequently debated today is schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would be benefit to student or not. Some people believe school should offer this program for students that need time for their morning routine. They feel that it would help students for do not need to have to wake up early and go to school. I believe distance learning program that school offer for students would not be benefit to students because students will not have a skill to communicate with other people, it will make students have less enthusiasm, and some students family did not have no internet or device to watch the video online teaching.

One reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because it would make student get less skill from communicate with other people. When students go to school they will meet friends have a communication with each other or talk to their teacher. Communication is an important for every type of jobs. Communication is one of the most important thing that should have inside the lesson because every job or every company will hiring people that have good skill to communication with other people. Communication is almost every where inside the school but if school have to consent to have the distance learning program, it will affect to student to get a job by taking students away from their communication with other people.

Another reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because it will make students have less enthusiasm to learn. Every morning students have to wake up early and get ready for school is one of the practice thing that will let student get ready for outside the world. Enthusiasm is one of the most thing that will help students to have more responsibility to their job or their self. Lack of the enthusiasm will make students have a lack of responsibility to their job or their self. However, if school consent the distance program it will make student get a lack of the enthusiasm and it will make students get lack of the responsibly to take care even them self.

Final reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because some students did not have device or Internet at home to watch the online or video conferencing. There are many family that did not have the Internet at home and they will not be able to attend the classes at home and will not be able to watch the online or video conferencing. It will not be fair to the outer family that do not have a internet or device to get into the online or video conference to the family that have the internet or device to use. Therefore, school should not consent the distance learning program to make all the students equally.

As you have read, I believe distance learning program that school offer to students would not be benefit to students and affect to students by take students to the bad position. School is the learning place for students to get a knowledge. If we are going to have only the online teaching, school will not exist. Only when we value the learning in class, communicating with friends, and being equal with other we will feel that school is a good place for studying and getting the knowledge. On that day the world will better to have school full with students that have a good knowledge and ready for out world.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
F9BE4676CA35,"""All students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity.""why? well because it helps you a lot in the future or now so the principal is right on letting every student do an extracurricular activity.

To me each student actually should participate in one or more activity. Because it helps you mentally and emotionally,and helps you get collage credits and be healthy. Many research has proven many reason why people should do at least one activity to help you benefit in life .Research has proven people who have done sports most likely wont have heart attacks or won't even have breathing problems or mostly any issues.

How it helps you benefit in staying fit or healthy or both is well playing a sport can really help you lose weight .help you be more active like for example playing baseball,basketball,track or even being a cheerleader and many other sports can help you a lot more then you think, because research has proven a lot that people who are more active are people who are benefiting from it a lot .

Another way it helps you is emotionally is because you get distracted and you dont think about the stuff that is stressing you all the time. you know you have a break from what is keeping you stressed because you are having fun. for example of having a way to distract yourself isn't just sports its working with other like helping out the councilor, helping out in making the yearbook, helping around in the school and not being just about you when your just thinking all about you well that is the problem. Instead of have all the students separated you can put all of the students each in different groups everyday that way people get to know each other and have fun .

collage credits also matter and playing a sport or just helping around the school would look amazing on a collage application . Extra activities would make a lot more collages be interested in you and most likely be interested in giving you a scholarship. You mostly get into a great collage because all the extra credit actually helps you get noticed by a lot of collages because they aren't just looking for people who have good grades they are looking for people who actually are more outstanding. Like grades are great, but how can you handle being nice . Have certain thing taken care of before anything . well how you take certain things serious because if you can't take your own high school classes seriously how are you going to take care of your classes in collage .Also collages are seeing how independent you are, and how well you do around others .

Having all the students do one or more extracurricular activity will benefit them so much of a lot of reasons why actually so you should try it out .Also because it doesn't hurt you to give it a try . I agree fully with the principal because not everything is a lot what you want you have to just go with it .",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
6C86103B510D,"Albert Schweitzer said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" Influencing others with your own behavior is the best example you can give. The example of showing someone your actions than your words is the best way to be an influence. The actions as words are powerful over another's person life but I think that the actions are the best way to show someone who you really are.

I agree with Albert Schweitzer because it is the best way to influence others by showing and doing your own behavior. People follow others because they like the other person's personality does not matter is it good or bad. We always have been influenced in our lives by our family,society, school, and now more than anything the social media.

Some people might no agree with Albert Schweitzer because they might say people are what they want to be not necessary being influence for someone. Also other people might say that people act and react to situations depending on how they feel at the moment and how the situation was based on. However I believe that people are always being influence for someone else without maybe they noticing, that is why I think there is always someone looking at us and maybe we are not paying attention, but our actions and reactions is the only example we can give to others to follow.

I also believe that actions speaks louder than words, that is why for us to be the influence over someone else's life there is nothing better than our own behavior. We all have our own personality,likes and dislikes and sometimes those ""likes and dislikes"" can be an influence for someone else. In my opinion people's actions are really important and have a powerful influence over others.

Albert Schweitzer said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" I believe this is true because at some point of our life we have been influence for someone else looking at how they are and what they do. It is like when someone ask a child, "" what do you want to be when you become an adult"".            ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
66133AC6189A,"On my experiences I think It would be impossible to change the first impressions becuase one different people have different types of characteristics traits. For example one of my friend who move to text,her characteristic traits I remember she was so nice to everybody when she use to live her in virginia and also she use to get along with everbody at the school. This shows that type of impressions that my friend Generic_Name has.

Another example is when I was in lunch line with my friend Generic_Name,a spanish girl touch my hair,I did not know that girl was the girlfriend of the boy that was in one of my class. Until then when I was going to my third class I ask that boy if he could help me find this class because I did not know where all my classes were,when he came up to me to explain the schuedule and told me and him had the same class,his girlfriend look at me mad. This shows that at first the girl of the boy was nice and then the girl of the boy was kind of mean to mean.

Last example everbody has different types of impressions,it could be in a good way or bad way. Sometimes people impressions might change or they might still be the same.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
8A970FA9C7C4,"Are you a successful person? Or do you want to be a successful person? If you are a successful person, you certainly have a positive attitude in your life. If you want to be a successful person, you also need a positive attitude to solve the problem that happen in your life, or to people around you like family or even a stranger. Do you want to know why the positive attitude is so heavy in value for a successful person? First of all, the positive attitude will be a manager of your mood. Second, you need a positive attitude to look everything in a positive way. Third, the way that people decide to respect you is through your manner. Finally, positive attitude can bring a marvelous gift to your life if you are become a chief of positive manner, such as a successful person.

To be more specific about how importance of attitude, your day is great or bad is depended on how your attitude toward the happen. For example, you dressed a beautiful shirt in the pretty day, suddenly, somebody walked pass you and spilled coffee on your shirt. Which attitude should you make to let your day continuing to be a great day? You get angry and ruin everything, or you give a bright smile and make a nice conversation. Your positive attitude definitely gives you an energy to show your enthusiasm in daily activities. A short fact in Generic_School, students enjoy to go to the library before the class starts, because there is a big welcome from those librarians. They always smile, explain or help you when you need. A simply good morning with a pretty can make you feel today is going to be a great day, then you may pass their great attitude to someone else that you do not even know. Life is stressful, but your positive attitude will change stressful life to a sweet life.

In addition, you want everything in your life go smoothly, you need a perfect attitude for yourself to looking for a fitting path. People may be loose their sight in the darkness, just because they do not use the right manner to treat things that happen around them. They are upset, when they cannot get the result expectantly, loose their enthusiasm, and give up their wants. The following story of two little girl will support that the positive attitude heal your failing on something and return back a chance to make your life success. Generic_Name and Generic_Name have been friend since they were five-year. At the age of sixteen, both girls had a same hobby of shoe collecting, and they always shared with each other. However, one day in the afternoon, Generic_Name came back from school and she planned to wear the sparkle pink sandal to the store, but she found out it was lost. Immediately, she was thinking of Generic_Name stole her shoe, because of those words Generic_Name said yesterday that Generic_Name wanted the same shoe Generic_Name had but her mom did not let her to buy. After that, Generic_Name and Generic_Name had a worst conversation that they have never ever had; they gave up on their friendship for along time until Generic_Name discovered her shoe was hidden in the dark conner of a drawer. Instead of ignoring Generic_Name, Generic_Name was looking for the way to explain to regain their friendship. Generic_Name assumed, you can realize that the negative attitude will destroy what you appreciate, then the positive manner heals your mistake and gives you a success after.

Last, the correct or positive attitude can value your personality, so that affects the way people look at you. You must not expect people judge you that you are a great person or you are successful. People estimate you through your manner toward to future or what you had done in the past. Will people say you are successful student, even though, you do not expect any higher education, absolutely no because how they know that you will have a job in the future or you just ask for help without any work. Nevertheless, if you are a student having a positive attitude for the future, such as you are willing to study or you want to contribute yourself to community, college or company will value you at a positive way that you are diligence and helpfulness. And then, they may ask you to show more your ability that can make you are more successful.

In summary, positive attitude is definitely important for your life and your success. Understanding positive manner designs your wonderful day. Also, you must have positive attitude to discover your fitting path to the success. Finally, positive attitude shows your true personality to people around you, and gives you a chance to catch their attention, so they can give you a opportunities to you to become a successful person. If you want to be successful person, you must have a positive attitude.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
7BC73C8FBDBC,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students should offer public classes, however, Distance schools will make students careless by doing online or video conferencing. Distance learning is not good because it would make cheat easier, there would be less social interaction, and they would need to be highly motivated.

Firstly, students would cheat easier. For example, If students allowed to use their technology system, It would be easy for them to do their work but It would be easy for them to go online to and copy the answers Some students have trouble working at school because they don't want to work.

some of teens says that they cannot understand to work at school.

Secondly, there would be less social interaction. For instance, when you are taking a test or taking notes at online school there are many distraction that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. Therefore, Learning from public school it won't have distractions that a online has. However, Students won't lose focus on what they are doing if they are only focus on their teacher and if they have questions, they can ask from their teachers so they would help them more. It would be more helpful if students come to school.

Some students says that Online schools have more highly motivated. For example, one of my friend, she used to come to school, but Furthermore, she stop coming to school, because her teachers won't helped her, she cannot understand well, she got bad grade, and she fail all semesters then she plan to start online school. she got the answers the error words which she didn't know. However, Online school are have much more opportunities than the public schools. online schools have more distractions on what you are doing and get more free time.

In conclusion, students should offer to attend classes because attending to classes are less stressful. Students get more help from teachers. there would be less social interactions, because they won't be distracted by any technology and would be focus on studies. Some students are more interests in online schooling because they get more free time and get more rests than the public schools. I think public schools are more helpful for everyone because you meet new people, learn different experience, you get new ideas from others, and it wouldn't make you stressful. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
4975FA2ABC9D,"In the future what would you like to accomplish in school. Well I would like to know how to play the clarinet and learn how to play it for many reasons.

First, the good thing about about the clarinets is that I like when someone plays the clarinet and it sounds smooth it gives me the chills. Also when they hit a high note on it it gives me chills too. When playing high notes on it it looks easy.

Although when playing the clarinet sometimes when I go to a concert there is always at least one person that squeaks when playing it. I tried to play on it once and its hard to play when I try to play it fast. But the worst part when playing the clarinet is chipping the reed, once when you chip it you won't be able to play as good on it.

The only reason I want to learn how to play the clarinet is because I like the way it sounds, it sounds to calming and soothing. In order for me to accomplish to play calming and soothing is to practice at least 1 hour everyday . Also my last reason to play the clarinet is because i kind of think that it looks easy to play but I guess that it is a hard instrument to play. These are my reason on why i would want to accomplish and play on the clarinet.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
7B8400D217C1,"MRS Generic_Name HUMAN RESOURCES,

No, i don't represent the character traits ,i would like the British naturalist and politician to choose the character traits ,i also know that we must allow the British naturalist ,and politician to choose the character of the government to help raise the to help the US institutions and American individual who pass through the management that also cannot gain experience.

Therefore,American government should help the people to give or allow bass positions and cannot gain experience, i also give the opportunity by those who are one and highly options to develop the habits of passing out freedom for all African

Americans,and American .that will help avoid racism to people in America and also the make the politician allow Americans to vote""i can do to achieve it ""and i will also brainstorm my idea to help me do the right thing to do to help the British and they a saying that""I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STRENGHTEN ME""this proverbs drawn me to help my fellow ones and also to achieve the little things thats letting me become a great person in the future some people achieve the smaller things that help them succeed

Another significant attitude is that these These Americans, is counted to give the logical manners of American that have the right to have the need to whatever pleads them ,like food,clothing,and all other resources i would love to help the government provide, but in all honesty, i also think we can manage stuff beyond our control by letting the president know what the government stuff in American will need to in other to help the homeless shelter and also providing whatever they request for like money,food and other kind in other to help them shine and happy .and helps me gets close to my family closely by going home to do my assignment ,eat .but when i also get home, i rest and do my laundry i try keeping my clothes clean everyday .

finally,my conclusion of other feelings and emotions is also what make me a great,if not the best candidate for the position which i was providing since i was younger ,i have always been an active and responsible person ,who can help others and i also know its vital in others workplace in my power to work on anything i could be responsible for in other to help the state department help to provides all the goods that needed for all Americans and also do what its allowed to do by paying out your tax to help builds school,help people when they in need and also help the government pay off stuff to support.

respectfully,

Manager Generic_Name",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
82294A32E3E3,"I believe that people whom value their self, should be guide for a person who they admire, so they can look at them like a great example to follow and hopefully one day be like them or better.

People always make mistakes even though when some times we don't admit it, no matter how good we are on something people always need help we can not always do things by our own. we always require someone to tell us that we are doing wrong .

Even in some circunstance we need to grow up and believe and our self, that we have the capacity like everyone else, to make our dreams comes true even when things goes wrong, that does not mean anything is just a challenge that we need pass to make us strongers.

However, just for being clear doing things by your own is fine, but if we have the incredible disponibility to have someone always there for you who you trust in. I think is the safe way to go because todays days those person whom use to give you advice and support you rarely appear, so do the best person you can and remember ask for help is just an option to help you out and improve the best of you.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
D2EBEB5FDA90,"I believe technology has limitation human contact with other people is a negative effect on our lives. The reasons are,they buy thing online that are not good and they start to become lazy,communicant becomes hard for them.

Purchasing online things are not always great. When you do purchase it online sometimes they don't always tell the truth and when your getting phones or other things like clothes or makeup. These thing you never know if its used or brokering and if someone could of warn it too. Also food that are buy online are not fresh and they could Carey germs. Take for example when you go out you look at the food to see, which one is good and which one is bad but when your online you can't tell what your getting. This cause people to become lazy.

People become lazy because of how much stuff there is on online and games,

TV shows. Therefore people rather watch a TV show then go out with there family. This is bad for people because this can cause people to become depressed,more stress about online chats and what there saying online or watching a TV show;but you wish you could be that person. People will stop going outside. Take for example YouTube, YouTube is the most used media but also there are non-stopped videos they can go on forever and people stared to thing they have to many things to do. This cause peoples communicant with others harder. YouTube cause people to give up.

Communicating is becoming harder for people because they don't face to face talk anymore. Now they use phones more. Phones are used for texts ,calling. So why is communicant important? Communicant is the main thing in your life it brings people together and you need it for jobs. Jobs where you have to work with other people and help people that buy from you. Take for example Generic_Name is the co work and Generic_Name is the costumer,Generic_Name does't talk to people that much because she texts more ,therefore, when Generic_Name came up to her ask for help. She didn't help because she doesnt like talking to people.

Therefore,technology has limitation human contact with other people is a negative effect on our lives. I believe these are the reason,they buy things online that are not good and they start to become lazy,communicant becomes hard for people. Peoples need to use less technology and try to open there self to the outside world and hang with there friends and family or read books. Some will still choose to use technology today.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.0,3.0
F747581D0782,"Many people believe that the infulences from others make us change on who we are, I believe that. Growing up we all had good and bad infulences at school, home, or in any other place. As a kid, every little thing you see or hear; you copy. Thats why you have to be careful what happens around kids, because it may affect them later on in life.

For an example, when parents argue infront of there kids its tramatizing and they may learn from that. Once there all grown up they can either be better then there parents or exactly the same or even worse, all because they were influenced by there parents arguments. Its not only just the arguments but when parents are abusive towards each other or when parents hit there childern, even the use of drugs, it will affect the child later on. Kids believe that because someone else did it, its okay for them to be able to do it too; and thats not right.

As a parent, it is very important to talk to your childern at a young age about the right way and the wrong way. Every parent wants the best for their child, they dont want to see them make misakes or anything. As a teenager we think its annoying or we think they dont understand the way were feeling, but thats not true. They give us advice and ground us when we do the wrong thing because they don't want us to go through any of that again. They were once teenagers too and they already went through what were going through. They just want the best for us, because half of the time they couldn't be succesful and they want you to be able to grow up and have the things they were not able to get you.

Another example could be the different types of infulences at school. Theres always gonna be the good kids and the bad kids, you just gotta see which side is gonna lead you into a better future. The good influences will want the best for you, for you to continue school, to not do drugs, to not do anything ilegal, ect. On the other hand, the bad kids will want you to ditch school, do drugs, do ilegal things, because as to them its all ""fun"". It may seem fun but there are consequences when you do the wrong thing.

As a teenager you already have to have an idea on what you wanna do later on in life. Half the teens don't know, because there stuck in a world where it invloves, parties, alcohol, drugs, sex, ect. When your stuck in a world like that, its very hard to get out. Being influenced by friends is very easy. Of all the times you guys hang out and everthing, it starts to change you; from being well influenced or bad influenced. perperssure is the reason alot of us take the wrong lane in life. Your friends can convince you of doing something then your going to want to keep doing it, even if you didn't like it, because you dont wanna seem as a boring person, you dont want your friends to leave you on the side. You can even be the reason why someone choosed the wrong lane. Even if you changed the way you are someone else is still suffering because they were influenced by you.

Majority of the time people regert the things they did in the past. They regert being infulenced that way, wishing they could have listened to the good, but sadly you can't change the past. Thats why its important to know exacty what were doing, to listen to the people who are telling us to do the right thing. we might not wanna seem boring but once we have an actual future, you will see that all the bad infuence wasn't worth it.

We are influenced by others, and we choice to become that person. Think today and make the decision to become someone better, don't follow the negative because it all leads to a bad ending.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
9735E542665C,"Imagine having less day of school, students would be happy and could make their education simple. Some films have alredy adopted a four day work week, but they will work ten hours a day. Should school do the same thing by extending the school day and have four days of school? I believe that extending the school day and having four day of school could affect students by; getting them tired and they coud no longer in school.

To begin with, it has been said that students are tired in school because they have seven hours of school everyday . Imagine giving them nine hours of school, they could get tired quick and have stress. To illustrate, a student woke up at 6:30am to prepare to go to school, he will start the school at 8:00am and he will be finish at 5:00pm. After school the student will got home tired, he will jus eat dinner and go sleep. As you can see,

students could not have time to play and do their homework. If school extend the school day, students could be just tired all the time. in conclusion, students are not slaves, they need time to play and do their homework.

In addition, extending the school day for students and have four days of school for them, this could make them not going to school. Another example, imagine a high school student have to finish school at 5:00pm knowing kids nowadays they don't like school that much. This could be an obstacle for this high school student and he will decided to not going to school anymore because he will feel a long day of school. As you can see, students could be absent in school if they extend the school day, and this could be a big probem for the community and for the country.

Yet some people argue that extending the school day and having four day of school, could make the students more intelligent. It is tue that giving extended time to students and give them only four days of school, could make them smarter. But they will not longer like school because they will feel tired and they will not going to school anymore. And this could be a huge problem for students and schools

In conclusion, schools should not allow to have four days of school and extending two hours more because this could affect students by; getting them tired and they could not longer in school. Let's make students feel comfortable in school, but not make them feel slaves. Students needs time with friends and family. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E7A370A15B49,"Yes agree with it, because if you fail one time you will try to do it in a different way, but you never have to loss your enthusiasm if you have a goal you need try to to get it otherways you will never make it always try to do your best never let anybody tell you what to do anything can be possible.

when i was young i wanted to be good at soccer but when i play with my cousings they allways make fun of me, and i stare crying i never try to be good a soceer never. then i was always staying after to play with peolpe at my age, I was getting better and better at soccer, and after like one year after i went to my aunt house my cousings told me to play with then, they were surprise because better then they.

When i first came to USA all my family was tellimg to learn english. First when i was learning a little be of english, and my teacher told me to practice english in the class (talk to others students in class), but i was scare that the student make fun of me, so that day i did not spoke english in class i told my self ( i going to learn and make my self proud)

at the end of the school year my english was better i was always epeaking english with my sister and to my teachers too.

Others people think taht if you can""t do something you have to stop doing it or stop trying, others will told you that you can""t do it, but remember you can do everything you propouse .

So if you want to do something just do it don't be afraid of failing doesn't matter if you fail you can keep trying to do it make your family proud meke your self proud. Life is beautiful try to get your goals done. And remember you can do anything you want just if you try really hard. At the end you will remember all of the people who told you that you will fail, and the people that always believe on you.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
2C7750B811F3,"Dear Mr. Principal,

My name is STUDENT_NAME. I think you should make the community service an elective for the 8 grade students you can give them a high school credit and for the 7th grade you can just give them a good grade.

Other thing that you can do is to tell the people that want to help to came in the afternoon then tell them to tell their friends to came that you will give them an extra grade.

You can make an enouncement with their parents telling the parents about the community service I know that the parents will tell them to do it because hey can make every thing they want in the week end. You can send a letter but not giving it to the students send an email or something like that but never give ti to the student because they will trough it in the trash.

You can make a field trip to an elementary school or to a hospital and you can help the people first then tell them too. For the students that wants to be a teacher they will be happy if you take them to an elementary school and for the students that want to be a doctor they will be happy helping in the hospital. There are too much different way to tell the to help the community. Other thing that you can do is to call a person that helps the community to give them an speech or something like that.

Sincerely: STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
5ADD410B9783,"A student does not need to be success to be praised, an achievement doesn't always necessary to have a self-esteeming come from effort failure and motivation,

First, success is not the only thing that can make a student be praise.

It is their effort whats matters even though a student did not do well on hes work, but a least he tried to do it, may be he is good at it, but he is have been a hard time on his life at that time, if a teacher or someone said good job you did it well i am proud of you. He is gonna be happy of that someone understand him at his bad time, and support him.

Second, failure is where a student achieve, learn, and gained experience, e never going to achieve at something without fail. Example, my on experience i have been seem achieve, and things that i did not succeed on it, in my life i had failed many school test or not get the score what i want to me it a fail, but to others it not, i always get mad at myself if i do not succeed at any tiny gold. When my teachers or someone tells me something nice, Good or they are proud at my work i felt so my proud of myself i am so proud that i have peoples who can understand me and support me. One day a teacher said "" i'm proud to have as my student and to be your teacher you had showed me that no matter what where you came from you can achieve anything you want, also in how hard you have worked maybe your work is no that good, but i had seeing you work harder keep being like this do not gave up on your dream or what you are doing ""

she praised me with all her words made me cried , and to keep going believe in myself that i can do everything.

Third motivation and self- confident, is what makes the difference, and changes a student life.

being confident on what we are doing on our life or working on something even if we don't give our best at least we tried it, sometimes we achieve in something and we don't learned any new thing because we already know hoe it is done it, if a person praise someone it motivates them to keep going and and not give up on their dreams even if its hard and impossible self-esteem makes a person fight back.

Finally, self-esteemed won't be always be for achievement, an self-esteem will be always on a student who are willing to do what is hard not the easy thing even though, they don't succeed and or achieve they know who they are and what they are able to do, lowers standard is better then nothing.

some people may think achievement are required to praise while others think that is not, and for this reasons it doesn't be necessary to be success or achieve a gold to be praised by someone.                    ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
C656A870B2B7,"Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?. In many schools districts offer programs that allow students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. This program make students to take classes that can help them to graduate on time, and many student take courses during the summers or in the evening. This is a bad idea making students to finish high school in three years. Because when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course and student are no joy they last year of high school.

First, when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course. For example, many students are interesting in elective courses, but they not got enough time to taking elective courses because they are take the basic courses for they can graduate on time. When students just take the basic courses they are not make progress in which courses they are interesting. In conclusion, students need four years in high school for they can take courses where they are interesting and they can start to grow up in that courses.

Secondly, student are not joy in they last year of high school. For example, school where are make student to graduate in three years, in they last year student have to take courses and SOL for they can graduate on time, if they dont past students most retake, and this make students frustrate. This program is making students to rush. But if they fail any classes that make students add more classes to they last year and all this make student to no joy they last year in high school. In conclusion, Last year for students don't have to be the worse year.

In other hand, there are people say, student just need three year in high school, for student can enter college or the work one year early. They argument, that student with three year are ready to graduate and enter college or the work, because many student may finish with their courses and SOL in their third year and the last year they don't do nothing. This argument is incorrect because in the four year students are doing what they need to finish and they planing where they wants to go if college or work. For example, students want to graduate on time, and they need to catch up or retake anything they can do it in the last year. In conclusion, student need a four year of high school for they can get anything what they have to be done.

In conclusion, put this program in school is a bad idea because make students to finish high school in three years. Because when students are try to graduate in three years, students may not be able to take elective course and student are no joy they last year of high school. Because when students just take the basic courses they are not make progress in which courses they are interesting and student are not joy in they last year of high school. In conclusion, make high schools just three year to students is not enough time for students to be ready and plan their future.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
E4BBB2E44D64,"Is a good idea for students to commit a cereer at a young age? Some peple believe that choose a career at a young age can be beneficial for the students while other people believe choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big responsibility, you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want. This is important because it is not easy for students have expecifics aspirations and good options of careers at a young age.

First, choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big resposibility because you have to be sure about what you really want, you have to inform you about others posibilities, you need to know what are the benefits that some careers offer to you. For example, some schools offer to you a tutor and they help you to decided based on your interests and they recommended have differents options and spend a lot of time thinking about what is more covinient for you.

Secondly, choose a career at a young age is stressful and a big resposibility because you do not have enough time to think about new options. For example, when you are in high school you need to take your time and investigate patiently what careers are more availables for you, you need to concentrated on what you are interested becauase everyone have differents aspirations and differents visions of life.

However, not everyone agree with this position some people claim that choose a career at a young age can be beneficial for the students because that way you have an expecific goal and you can focus more in what you need. Nevertheles the opposition overlooks an important point is you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want

One most clonclude, commit a cereer at a young age is not a good idea because you do not have enough time to think about new options, over the time students gets new skills and you have to be sure about what you really want. Students changed their aspirations because over the time they can find out new abilities and differents skills.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.5
4E1C62576A76,"Dear, Principal

Its a good thing that your require all students to perform community service, Because its a good thing that we should have are community clean . I think we should have it clean because what if someone from another state comes to are state there going to see how dirty it is . They will start talking bad of are state and people would not come no more . Also if that family was thinking to move were we live , there going to change there mind ,because they saw how dirty it was and people want a place to live and were is clean . So Principle is a good thing that you trying to change that. Not all students could do that also adults they could help too .

sincerely, STUDENT_NAME",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
CB892FB55B59,"How do you want people to see you as a good or a bad person? In my personal opinion I want to be the good one; to make it happen I have to show the best of me at the first time. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, I think that it is true. There is no second impression, once is enough to show the kind of person that you are. There are three reasons why I agree. I will not be the person that no one would like to believe in, I will not get help from anyone, and I will not have friends.

To begin with, I will become the person that no one would like to believe in. For example, if I show myself as a liar at the first impression, everyone will know that I am not the one or the incorrect person to believe in. Even though I am saying the truth no one would trust me, but the first impression can change it. My mom told me that doing the best since the begining will help me the rest of my life. She was right because of what she thought me, and I apply it in my life I see myself as the person who you can believe in.

Secondly, I will not get help from anyone. In my life I will need help from others because I am not able to do everything by myself. That's why I should make people to see me as a helpful person at the first impression, otherwise I will not get help. I heard someone said that ""what I give to others is what I will recieve back from them"".

What I understood is that if I do not help others, they will not help me. I always like to be the kind of person that help without waiting something back. I think that it makes my impression as a good one.

Finally, I could lose friends or I would not have any friends what is even worst. Since the first time when I

met my friends and showed them that I am the type of person or friend that is always with them no matter what. Furthermore, I have never betreyed one of them but if I've would did it when we met, they already kick me out of their life. As I said before one of the things that can make me the best friend is my first impression, show them that I am loyal.

In conclusion, first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, you can change them but it takes a long time and you will lost your patience waintig until it change. That's why giving a good first impression will prevent problem for you such as; to not become the person that no one would like to belive in, to not get help from others, or to not have friends. A simple good impression would make your life better or would make your life worst.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
2C94D8BCF2F9,"How can we judge a person without know that person?

In the world there is many people different races,different social levels but everyone on this society is the same.

The people can be really nice if you take the time to know them.

When a person take enough time to know you and try to make a god relationship with you it would change what he or she thinks about you it can change his perspective about you, Some societies judge you because dont Know what kind of people you are and that is because those society dont take the time to look your personality they look at your society conditions and that is bad because it doesnt describe you. In addition if a person is at the lowest point of the society we dont have to judge how munch money they have we got to analyze his personality.

An example of this is like when somebody get into a store and that person is not wearing clean and good stuffs we dont have to say that person is a drug addicted maybe that person came from his work to buy something for wife that is something that we got to think.

The society can not classify anybody or generalize .

All the people has different kinds of mind some people say that the poor people is not educated that they are animals just because they heard something bad about them. That is wrong because all the people is not the same as god people is on this world, bad people is too maybe because somebody did a bad action all that kind of his people is bad too everyone is responsible by his own actions.

An example of this is like when a Mexican make a mistake doesnt mean that all the Mexicans are bad, that action says that he was bad but not everyone was bad.

Another big example is Generic_School in this school there is many Hispanic people as i, just because a person did something bad doesnt mean that all the Hispanic people does that too.

If we help we can change a bad perspective about a person.

All the people always got his own problems, some people is going throw bad moment, because we are humans we are not machines that make everything perfect.

an example is like when somebody had a bad day and you see that person by the first time in your life then that person do something wrong we can not say that person is a dumb just because he made a mistake we can not say that about somebody else, we can help that person talk with that person and provide our to the person who need it that will help to change our perspective and success as a person.

All the people has to have a second chance.

The society that we are is a society comprehensive where you as person can make everything possible, you give a second impression about yourself even if you did a person that gave a bad first impressions.

An example of this is when a person go out from the jail(everybody says that the people that come from the jail gonna be bad but i don think so,maybe that person went to the jail because he made a big mistake thats bad yes)and that person try to fix his life and try to make himself a god person for the society i as person would give a second chance to that person to show me that he changed a wanna success on his life, that would be really nice.

Conclusion:

Everyone can change his first impressions of a person giving a opportunity to show that he is a god person even if he did a mistake he would be god for the society. ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
93DF867BE1C5,"I am agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the persuit of success .The Success consists of going to faillure to faillure without loss of enthusiasm. Next the success consists in many things. For example the Prime Minester Wiston Churchill said that, because he always persuade . That the enthusiasm is it the most important to any business or personal in your life consist in that simple word.

First I think that prompt has a specific message that persuasive that everyone who read can reading the message. So if who read the prompt may perform their success and should not failure in the future business. Next the futere business can thinking about it. Then if they don't have any enthusiasm they won't have success in a not very far away future. Finally that is what I think about the prompt said Churchill's statement very important role that failure plays in the success.

First I think it is very important that statement role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Second if you persist and never give up you should be successful. Also if you are not persisting what you want with enthusiasm. That means you will have the same situation going to failure in your live. Then finally never loss the enthusiasm that is the point for all success.

For the success if you are unwilling have a little enthusiasm. So, as you are trying to do and you fail. It's only one reason that was not enough enthusiasm to doing it. You have to preform and trustly in yourself.

Also I think that success is for who are looking and persist with enthusiasm. Finally that is the enthusiasm consists in the future.

The important role from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I am agree with that statement said, you never think you cannot do anything. Also I think if you feel without enthusiam you always will failure. So if you purpose is the success you should hard work and don't feel you cannot. Then if you willing you won't failure. Finally I think just sometimes that if believe in yourself you may do anything including if you came from failure to success.     ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
C16EB45BDFF5,"Positive attitude will get you far in life. Having positive attitude will get you a good job. If your having a bad day at work just know it can always be worse so might as well be positive. You see someone having a bad day help them have a good day. Ask them if they need anything ,take them out to eat.

Everyone needs to be there wont be as many fight and deaths. theres to much vie lens in the word. stop walking up in the morning and thinking about something bad your going to do. Think about what you can do to make the word a positive place. Dont go out there killing people just because things arent going the way you want them to be pray to god and be positive and he will lead you to the right path.

You want to get a car or house but cant at this moment work harder to get that think positively. Just because you having a bad day or week does not mean you can be rude to someone having a good day. Go to work say good morning have good manors be kind to one other. Dont worry what other people might have and you dont instead tell them that you happy for them. You time will come it might take some time but just be positive and have patience.

Stay positive with all your goals in like and you will achieve them. Thinking negative is only going to make it mores on you. Have a good attitude and people will like you and help you when you need it .Having a good attitude a work people will want to work with you. positive attitude will get you far in life. You can make a change in this world if you do your part them others will follow. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
AA416CED237D,"I think some people might find visiting a national park enjoyable because it features better activities and it also attracts more people around the World for example the Grand Canyon or hiking mountains attracts lots of older people from all over the world every single year.

But others might like Community parks because there's not that many people like national parks, kids might find community parks more enjoyable because it provides a wide variety of things like Playgrounds, Soccer fields, Basketball courts, etc and its also free unlike national parks were you have to pay in order to get in.

I think an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is by playing a sport like soccer, basketball etc, in a community park because you can can play there any time with friends and family it's also free, you can also meet new people in a park or you can also join a sports team like a soccer team and play it with your friends which can also lead to scholarships but in order to get that you must train and work hard then you might get in to teams bigger soccer team's and you might become a Professional player and join big teams like Barcelona, Real Madrid, PSG or other soccer teams, that's what I like to do outdoors and I think other people should stop playing video games, social media, etc and try something new outdoors because it can change your future and life for ever and playing a sport can also help you meet new people travel places, meet soccer stars from all around the world like Spain, France, United Kingdom.

Sports are also good for your health running helps your heart, I also like watching soccer games I support Barcelona a team from Spain the reason why I support that team is because they have really good soccer player like Messi, Luis Suarez and Couthino and they also win trophies like the UEFA Champions League were all the European teams play every year to win the Championship.

also every 4 years there's the World Cup were every Nations soccer team plays to win the World cup.

In soccer if you are good at the sport and join a professional soccer team you can get paid up to more then one million! In conclusion who doesn't want to get paid one million dollars for playing an awesome sport and if youre a girl don't worry because there's also soccer teams for girls and they can also join big soccer teams and make money just like boys and it's also proven that people who play sports are healthier and have better muscles they also eat healthy foods and fruits and run train every day to burn out calories so that they be in shape when they play in their soccer team's and they why i think someone might find that enjoyable.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
FB4D3D883D49,"Cellphones has already taken place of your calendar don't let him take place of your family. Some people think cell phones should be allowed in school but other says it is just destruction. Cell phones shouldn't be allowed in school because it is destruction,increase cheating, and less use of dictionary.

Firstly, cell phone is destruction. For example the one person I know was always on her phone. Moreover as her phone vibrate she just open the phone and start checking messages. As result she was not distracting herself but also class and teacher. Later on due to this habit she couldn't pass SOL.Because phone was destruction for her. Last year one of my friend didn,t uses much phone in the first quarter she got really good grade. Furthermore in second quarter she starting using cell phones more. Moreover in school she do all her work in rush so that she could have more time for cell phones. As a result her grade starting getting worst she ended up felling her both SOL.In her first quarter she has six A and one B but in fourth quarter she have five A,one B ,and one D.Furthermore one of person couldn't pass SOL and grades also go really worst.

Secondly,cell phones is not only destruction but also increases cheating. For example one of my friend whenever give test she take picture and send question to other student. The teacher make same test for both classes. Furthermore she can help them by giving them answers in test but in SOL

she couldn't help them. As a result they will end up might be felling SOL.Moreover one of person was giving a final exam in school she was also texting one of her friend all the answers and the answers she didn't know she was also using Google for them. Most of the question was about vocabulary she was just searching vocabulary and writing on final exam. Cell phones are not only increasing cheating but also student thinks they are helping others which is wrong. The both person was doing wrong one of them was sending question to her friends other was searching from Google.

Thirdly,cell phones is destruction,moreover increase cheating furthermore there is less use of dictionary. For example one of my friend prefer searching from phone rather than using dictionary. The main reason for using cellphones instead of dictionary was because from dictionary you have to find a word it take more time than cell phones. Furthermore in cell phones you just have to type a word and cell phones will give you meaning ,and synonyms. Moreover one of my friend always uses phone for searching a word meaning she never use paper dictionary but in SOL they didn't allow you to use phone. As a result she struggle using paper dictionary. People want easy way to do things that is why they uses cell phones instead of using dictionary.

In conclusion, some people think cell phones are helpful in education but other thinks it is destruction. Cell phones are not helpful in education because it is destruction for students,increase cheating,and less use of dictionary .Students are keep checking on their phone. Cell phones is also increasing cheating student text test question to each other also can search from Google. Cell phones are also taking away people paper dictionary from student , student really struggle when they go for testing and cell phones are not allowed. Cell phones are like drugs to youth they are getting addictive to it.                               ",3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
05903AA4540F,"Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I think it is a good idea for students to finish high school.

Most students have a good ability in class like study, presentation, remember,... But if they want to graduate earlier in three school years, they have to take off elective class in school, and take more time to study more subject class. During in the graduate earlier, students can enter college and finish it one year early or they could have one year rest for work a job and thinking what they should study in college or university.

However, some student have no good ability for study or student have second language can take more than three school years. They need time to get better in high school before enter college.

Finally, in my point of view, I think we should allow high school students to graduate in three school years. But any students need more year to keep going in high school, we should lets them do that.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
9BAE37CAB3ED,"Dear Teacher,

I think that working in group or working alone has some advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion I would say that one that is more beneficial is working in a group. Working in a group is less work and more ideas.

As I was saying that their are advantages and disadvantages, My first advantage of working alone is that you get to work alone with no distraction from others. Second advantage is that you can focus and ask the teacher for help. Last reason is that you can put as many ideas you want and a lot of effort and ask the teacher to check your work to see how you doing working. The disadvantage of working alone is that you will not get the work done faster. My second reason is that working alone is not fun because you working independent and doing all the work.

My first advantage is that working in group you get to hear different ideas from each other. My second advantage is that you can talk together and gets lots of ideas and fix mistakes together. Last advantage is that working in a group you can finish the work faster. The first disadvantage is that working in a group their is going to be too much talking and also not focusing. Second disadvantage is that when you are working together some times one person does the whole work and the other doesn't. Last disadvantage is that you can easily get destructive and not get the work done.

To conclude this I think working in a group is more beneficial. I choose working in group because their are many advantages. Therefore working in a group is less work and turning in work fast, As a result you won't have to worry about asking for help or not having ideas because thats is why you are in a group to get your work done and have a lot information.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name                ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A336FB5F2623,"Having online classes could be so much helpful and easier for those kids who doesn't leave near the school, or doesn't own car, it could be helpful because student wouldn't had to wait outside for a bus to pick them up, or for someone to take them to school, it could be easier because they could finish their classes from their house they would just need any electronic device and a connection to WIFI.

By having online classes I think it could make students life much easier, because if they get sick they can still take their classes and they wouldn't have to worry about making other students sick and there would be less chances of getting sick by other student, student would not have any excuse for not taking their classes, taking online classes could also help those student who are always late to school because they would take their class from their house so any bad weather could not be an obstacle.

There are many good thing about taking classes online but there always somethings students would need to give in order to have this benefits and that thing is social life, many students would never see their friends again because everyone has a different mind no everybody has the same goals and not everyone likes the same stuff so in my opinion thats one negative thing of online classes, but there are always a solution the teacher could make a project that could involve working in groups and I think online classes could change students life.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
36B2E183713B,"People and educators feel like we need to have year round schools, is that a good idea? I feel like we do need to have year round schools. Because when we go back to school most of the students don't remember anything from last year, we would get more days to understand things and remember it.

If we start to remember things we did we would not need to have to go over so many things and get to the new stuff for like Math, History, English. The more days were in school we understand the things more and it will stick to us more. Because the more that we start doing in class and we get help with it, we will know what to do when it comes for us to takes test or Sols.

Like sometimes when I come back to school I really don't remember what we learned last year or how to do certain problems for math or what ever class it is. But maybe with this year round school thing I might be able to remember these things depending what we learn in class. I think the reason we don't remember things so much is because we really don't pay attention or we're not really focused on what we're learning. So now with the more days we have maybe we could get a chance to try different teaching methods so the other students can get more attached to what we are learning about and focus more o things in class.

I'm liking the idea of this year round school, because there more opportunities we can have and more ways so we can focus because of the days were going to have. The only downfall of this is that are summer is going to be less than usually but I mean well get other days off so thats good. Hopefully with this new school thing it will be easier to remember all the information and things we learn.

I feel like that the year round school thing could work, it would help out tons of people with remembering things. So there classes could become easier because they would remember what they did last year and know how the problem or question is. It would honestly help me out a lot because I would be able to do more work because I would know how to do the work. I think this would work and be very successful so we can try and see what happens! ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
07CE77EA56C5,"Students work hard there is no arguing that. They have schoolwork, homework, extracurricular and maybe work, all these things make a students life stressful so it is important that they get a break every once in a while. I believe that students should get a long summer break, instead of a year-round school year, because, firstly, there are other activities that can be done during the summer that keep students minds active, secondly their health is at risk and lastly, summer break is beneficial to school staff as well.

From time to time, people need to get a break from their day-today life they need to take a moment to relax and enjoy their life and maybe discover an interest that they may have. Although school is important and necessary for success later on in life, so are outside experiences that can contribute to the development of a student's 'real life skills'. During summer break there are multiple activities that can be done in order to keep a student's mind active, whether it may be sports, summer camps, summer jobs etc. All these activities allow for their minds and bodies to stay active. Eventhough, they are not keeping their brains engaged in terms of school work and studying they are exposing themselves to new activities that might require them to think critically, open-mindedly and collaboratively; which I feel is essential for real life. For example, a student might be at summer camp and they are put in a group with four strangers and are given a challenging task that requires them to collaborate with the other member of the group, critically analyzing the situation and coming up with solutions and be open-minded to listening and trying to understand the perspectives of their peers. This also reflects their environment in school therefore, it can be said that they are keeping their minds active while outside of school.

Although, not all students might be involved in activities outside of school, some are taking a break from the stress of life itself. Due to all the demands in their life during the school year summer break is a good way to take a breather and take care of themselves mentally. Depression has been very common in teenagers in recent years, and although it may not be entirely due to the stress of school, school does contribute to the detirriation of their mental health. In addition, over-working ones self has negative impacts overall whether they are depressed or not. Too much stress in ones life can have negative effects on their health overall. High blood pressure, hypertension, severe weight loss are a few examples of the effects stress. Furthermore, when stressed our body releases a neurotransmitter called Cortisol, this neurotransmitter in excess can impair a persons thinking and reaction time; which is very important for students as they are required to think in order to complete school work and homework, therefore, if they dont take breaks their grades are probably going to drop due to their inability to think effectively, further contributing to their detirriating mental health.

Lastly, summer break is and essential time for everyone that is involved in schools, such as teachers, administrators, councilors etc. Although schools are intended to educate students, its the school staff that make this possible. This is why we need to give our school staff a break because all the points I stated above also applies to them. In addition, with a long summer break teachers are able to have more time to thoroughly think about their lesson plans for their students as well as have an extended amount of time to live their lives and enjoy time with their family and friends, after all, teachers are humans too and they need to be able to life their lives and forget that they are required to do so much for such little pay.

To emphasize further, I believe that schools should give students a long summer break instead of a year-round school year because a students mind will stay active during the summer through various activities that require students to think open-mindedly, critically and collaboratively. Also, students need a break in order to de-stress for the sake of their health mentally and physically. Lastly, a long summer break is needed for school staff as well because they also need to take a break, as well as the students. ",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,4.5
D22D2878F4C7,"I agree that being honest at all times is a good thing because you can be honest with them even though it might hurt there feelings. for example what if this boy or girl likes you, and you dont want to tell them that you dont like them. you have to be honest with that person and yeah it might hurt there feelings but at least you were being honest with.

For example One day i got in trouble for hitting my neighbors car with a soccer ball, the next day my mom told me to tell the neighbor about his car and i didnt want to tell him because i know that he will get mad at me. so i went and told him that i hit his car with a soccer ball, he was mad at me and i got in trouble. but i was honest to him that i didnt mean to hit his car.

when i was a kid broke my mom vase on accident, the next day my mom called me and she said ""who broke my vase"". I was scared to tell my mom that i was the one who broke her vase, when she told me and my cousin to not touch it or play with it. so my couisn told me to my mom that i was the one who broke it, at first i didnt want to her but i went to her room and tell her that i broke it. she was pretty mad at me but i was being honest with her if even though that was her favorite vase.

Me and my cousin were play fighting and i punch him on his face on accident,so he went went to the bathroom and his face was bleeding. the next morning my aunt went to the bathroom and she saw the drips of blood on the floor and i told my aunt that i punch him on his face on accident. i didnt get in trouble but i was being honest with her and tell her truth.

its important to be honest all the time and always tell the truth if u did something or if u dont liked nobody.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
D37157CEC26F,"A positive attitude is a key to success in life because having faith on yourself can bring you to big things. Having a positive attitude gives you more strength and believing on yourself. Keeping your head up high and moving forward. Being positive is the key to life. Believing in youself is the key to a postiive attitude.

Having faith on yourself can help succeed in life. Telling yourself that ""You can do it"" will motivate you and help you more. Taking a big step can be hard but having faith and a good attitude will bring you nothing more than success. Believing in yourself and not caring what other people say is having faith on yourself. Being yourself and trusting yourself and doing what you have to do will help you out more in life.

Positive attitude gives you more strength and believing in yourself. Being positive about anything that you are doing will help grow in life and be a great person with a positive mind. Telling yourself that everything is possible if you put your mind in it will help you even more to succeed in life. Even if you try something different always have faith and be positive about it. Having a positive mind is the key to life and everything, just believe on yourself.

Keeping your head up high and moving forward is a way to succeed. If someone says ""You can't do it"" just ignore and keep your head up because thats how you will succeed. If you fall just get back up and move forward because thats a way to have a positive attitude. Being positive and moving forward will help succeed. Having a positive attitude will help improve more.

The key to life is having a positive attitude because that is how you have faith. Moving forward is another way that you will succeed. Having a positive attitude and believing in yourself. The key to life is success because you have a positive mind.                 ",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
7302457525D4,"I think some student take a class at home because they live to far or they not have any transportation however the students can study for video or for online, but I think that is not benefit because it most better to learn more going to the school, for example the teacher they wants to theirs students learned but something they can put a lot homework because they want to their students learned however some student they live to farm from the school but they take the bus or they take the train and another transportation because they want a do something on the future, but is not bad idea to the students take class on the home because everyone wants to do something on the future for example if you someone wants to do something on the future they need to going to the school or take class for online becuase the school very important however not everybody have the same opportunities.

But I think the online class is not benefit for the students because they can not learn better maybey the students they can not consentrate good at home becuase they distrate for something and they cannot learn about the lesson and maybe the teachers they cannot teach good however on the schools the students they cannot distrate and they put attention when the teachers theach the lesson better however they force the students to put attention because the teacher wants their students learned.

However some people they don't have the opportunities to going to schools but they pay a class for online maybe they work the all day and they wants to studies, for example, the hispanic people they work immigrant to this country but the work hard to pay the rent and other bills but some people they wants to learn English to have a better wrk so for the reason they pay for online class becuase thyey wants to learn other language or they wants to have a better job so for the reasons is benefit for they pay for online class however not everyone have the same oppotunities.

The school is very important but some students doest like the school and some students like the school becuase they want to do someone on the future so if the students wants to do something on the fututre they need to have a dreams because the person doest have a dreams they don due anything because we can take the opportunities to the parents give to their childrens becuase some childrens on the world they wants to have any opportunity.

But in my opinion some people is possible to take a class for online maybe is not possible to their going to schools but they can pay classes for online but is not the same like the schools but they can due if they have dreams they can due because everybody have dreams.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
F0E76CC2EF7A,"I disagree that all students must participate in at least one extra curricular activity because students may have other plans or don't want to do an extra activity. Students may have different plans for there future and want to work on what they want to do. Some students want to focus on graduating school.

It also may cause problems on most students. Students want to do less work at a time. Doing an extra activity may cause students to panic with a lot of work to do.

Another reason I disagree that all student must participate in at least one extra curricular activity because students may not like that there is a lot of activity they have to choose from. Most students like to do things on there own or at home on there bed or personal space. Many students don't like to do activity with other people around them and going with what the teacher wants them to do.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
6253F73FBABF,"As my opinion i disagree because ""you could be someone beyond the world"" if you are positive of yourself. you could take a risk of many things you want to do in life and become something wonderful of it. you can graduate and became someone you wanted to, thats growing masterly of no matter how many times you have try but where has got you.

Be a person with so many mistakes but the also is going to learn from them and,you will still come back up and start trying again.

If you have done so many things and you still feel like no other person is going to appreciate of the things you have done and then you feel like theres nothing that you could do that could be good enough for nobody. Dont stop trying do not ever make yourself feel like you gotta do things for other people just be great how you are with or without mistakes you could be wonderful and make yourself happy and proud of them.

In life theres so many responsibilities you have to take care of and no matter what does responsibilities are you still take care of them you dont give up because if you do you wouldnt be able to go to school and becoming someone in life you wouldnt be able to to eat you wouldnt be able to work or to do many things but you stills do them because you have to and because you do become someone out of them you become a person that graduates a person that works everyday to put food in the table a person that after words its gonna be proud for they have done and that is always good enough and that you grow everyday from it. you could become a person that could afford a car with nobody asking help and you grow everyday with or without people because you are strong like that. theres another step where family comes along and you got to be able to take care of your family you got to get your family food you gotta get then clothes you gotta get them shoes you gotta get them the most important things they need and you still get your family out of any circumstances you still get up every morning to get your money and help your family or each other up and you still grow from not just growing from it but you also get to know how something people get to appreciate what you really do for them. honestly you grow of some many ways you didnt have no idea you could but you still get through it.

be someone in life is about growing little things you have left out to make them bigger. Believing in yourself is always something that is gonna help you to a positive person.

Making good choices in your life is another part of you not just because sometimes you learn from them or where they could take you but how you get when you learn from your bad choices and how sometimes you react and you say to your self that you just want for your self to do good things.

Dont ever in your life say that your things are never worth of any tries you have made because the're really are worth of every single part of your life there are step you always take. If you want to be a great person dont thought of yourself you know you could do it you could grow of it other people would love so any wonder things and person you really are.

being positive of your self is the most amazing thing you could do like for example you could be positive and just be like i will pass a test or i will pass but you are just being positive that you are sure you could do it because not you only are positive of yourself you are also showing that you could believe that you can do it. being organist with your self is less stress full because you dont got worry about get so many things out of your way the same day. Happy is showing every body that no matter they think about you you dont pay any attention to them even if you have try your best to become friends and it still not even working out so you just gotta leave the person and just let it be you just gotta show the person that you did try and if for that person your friendship wasnt good enough then dont bother. Unless you really dont try at all you will never grow even if you have put your best effort your best part you will grow and become a person that others are just going to admiral you.

could you really learn from life yes!! you can be aware of it but hey!! we are not perfect nobody was born perfect we can make as many mistakes we can or we could be the greats but no theres nobody perfect that could tell you that you cant do something when you know more then anybody else that you can and that you are not perfect. It doesnt matter how people make you feel at the end of the day it would only be you and your family and the effort to put on the things you want to become the best not perfect but the best. Sometimes is just matter of time for you to really tell yourself that you could try your hardest and not give because life is not about just being a completely fail nope you could tell youself you can do it because you got it.

""BE SOMEONE BEYOND OF OTHERS CUZ YOU GOT IT""",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
CF7AF5FA5DDC,"Some people say that having a positive attitude is one of the keys to success in life. Everyone around the world is trying to be successful in life, people fight for that everyday. A positive attitude is really important when you are trying to be successful, is sometimes what motivates you to keep going and achieve your goals.

However, just having a positive attitude is not going to make you a successful person. To reach the success in life you need to be proactive, you need to believe in yourself, work as hard as you can, and do what you love because your soul and hearth is what guide you during your life.

When you look at the big Hollywood stars, or the players in the NFL, you can see that they successes in life, making millions of dollars and doing what they love. Believe or not, but they gave everything they had to be there. It was a mix of positive attitude, hard work, and talent.

In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key success in life, but only who's really trying and giving their hearth into this, will be successful.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
94ACF6006DB9,"My first opinion,

would be that to be a good person,

is you have to be your self no matter what is going to happen . For example a good behavior star at home because your parents have the responsibility to educate. Also some people said the students are very bad for other students, like they are bad influence .

My second, reason would be the your own problems can affect, your career. For example your grades at school if you are a good person with other people to be a good citizen just be you because people the just talk never do something good. But sometime teen don't deserve what they have for example school, job, people the they love them.

After that well, if you work that is a good idea because you can focus, and two things but if you are weak that will be a terrible decision . So a good behavior is excellent, because you always can find friends, and maybe a girlfriend but den pent of you.

In conclusion, if you are a good behavior you will be a good person, and the future, and a good guide for you children. Also if you are a good students,you will be have credit for college but you have to be a good behavior. So the mean, that you responsibility is work very hard to complete your goals. And help other people, who need help because the would make you a good behavior.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
6B56C630FFC5,"Principal

This is my opinion of your future change in the school activities. I'm not in favor in this change, if the students are good players, the principal have to let they play at least they have a grade C average, but if the students don't have a good grade, like F or D, the principal have to tell they that they can't play anymore, till they make a good grade.

This change can do a good change because the students that play a sport or if they are in the band, and if they care more in the activity that they play, maybe that can be distorting the student, that can be the reason of why they don't have good grades, so the students what the students have to study at the same with their sport or other activity, and be good with both. Maybe the students are better in their activity because sometimes we have more fun, and because we like to be in more movement. I have to tell that the idea of tell us about this cange and for give us the opportunity to let us tell you, our opinion is good.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
171E655CC8F1,"Attend classes from home by way of online can be a good idea but , in my position is not a good way for the student and can be innecesary or bad idea in many reasons.

When the student is in home he going to do what he want he don't care the class he going to feel like if he don't have to do have to work in that class and he don't thing if he going to lost the class, one example is one of my friends he have a oline class but when he is in home he dont work because he dont care because no have one teacher who says ""Work or you no going to pass the class"" and thats one reason.

My second reason is when the student is taken online classes he just going to finish, he no going to learn because he dont care learn he just going to complete the leasons but just that, why? because he dont have the teacher who explaing when he have questions or when he is interesting in something of the class he no have the teacher who know more abaut that.

Some people says when the student take the online class from home he are more concentrade however whent the student take this classes from home he are more distractic because he have the cellphone in his hand or he have the TV in the room, the dog, the play station and he going to prefer play or see movies than work on the classes.

In conclusion thye student can no work , no have the teacher for question or warn he can lostr the class or are more distractict or prefer play than work on the class are my reasons for no take online classes but with the good students can be a good idea.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
474D243CD03A,"Every students expect that they are going to have a great time in a summer break. Some students enjoy their long summer vacation because they do not have to worry about the school for a while. But some students want to reduce summer vacation and have longer breaks in winter, spring, and fall. There are some pros and cons on both sides, but I agree with long summer vacation and short breaks in winter and spring. Among the numerous reasons, my most important reasons are students cannot make a long time plan during the vacation; it is not effective to have a short shcool time and then have a break.

One of my most important reason is that students cannot make a long time plan during the vacation. I believe that many students want to go travel or want to tour other countries with a long time plan, but if they have short vacation, they have to worry about the assignment and school while they are traveling. Sometimes, it is hard to see everything you want with a short time, so you regret that you did not have bunch of time. If one of their family lives in another country and it is hard to see each other, they have to make a plan to have a wonderful time with each other during the break. They, obviously, want to stay together for a long time because they do not know when they are going to meet each other again; It could be next year or 10 years later. They, however, cannot enjoy their time as much as they want if the student have to go back early. Because of these evidences, I agree with the long summer vacation.

Another my most important reason is that it is not effective to have a short school time and then have a break. Every sports have a season and the players or coaches focus on their duty during the season; they do not have a break for like 3-4 weeks because of their body rhythm. I believe that it works for students, too. For example, people who want to be good at music instruments have to practice consistently; practicing 10 hours a day and doing nothing for a week does not help you at all. Even though the practicing time is shorter, using the instruments everyday reminds you and help you to get better. It is hard to come back to school after having a long break, but it is more effective when the students change their body rhythm for the school time than having a short break after a short school time. Because of these evidences, I agree with the long summer vacation.

There are some advantages on the other opinion because not every single person has the same studying style. Some of the students study very hard during the short time period and then take a break, and it works for them. However, this type of studying has a risk that the students can forget what they have learned during the break because they tried to put much informations like math, science, english, and history in a short time. Even though the students who cram for the tests or assignments can get a good grade, they have to go over it after few moments later. Therefore, it is better to have a long summer vacation than a short summer vacation.

As I mentioned, summer break is what students' best time in a whole year. Almost every students makes their own plans on what they should do. Students, however, have a difficult before they have a summer vacation, so some of them want to reduce the summer break and make longer the other breaks. It is not a bad idea to move on, but they have to know that taking longer breaks in winter and fall would affect their whole summer plans. They also have to realize that they can do much more thing with longer break. That depends on how people use their own time, but if you have longer break it would give you wide opportunity.                                                 ",5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
99BA9BABB1A5,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some poeple think the impressions is impossible to change. There is some poeple is not impossible for them to change the impressions. I agree that the first impressions are almost impossible to change. I believe that impressions for the first time is herad to change it.

The first reason that I agree for the first impressions are almost impossible to change is because,

the first impressions is impartant for the poeple. Some poeple think the first impressions they can change it

,but the first impressions is almost impossile to change or forget it. For some of the poeple impressions is impartant. Also, for some of the poeple impressions is not impartant. Impressions is effect of someone has thoughts about a person.

The second reason is that I agree for the first impessions are almost impossible to change is because, of the feeling. If the poeple has the first impressions or the first feeling is almost impossible to change. Some poeple can change and some poeple can not change it. However, Some poeple think that the first impressions is head to change.

In conclusion, I believe that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some poeple think is head to change the first impressions. But some poeple think that is essy to change the first impressions. An my experiences I think that is almost impossible to change the first impressions. Some poeple think that first impressions is when a person thought or feel about someone.",2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
BB0157B70CA5,"Homework can be hard most of the time, and you need someone to help you with it. Having an afterschool homework club can be fun and a good thing to do in school. An afterschool homework club can be good for the kids that don't get to finish their homework or don't understand the homework. On the other hand, we have the people that don't have time to do things after school.

An after school homework club would not be good for some of the students. People don't always have the time to do something after school. They have other things that they have to do like, practicing for a sport, dance, sing, learning an instrument it could be anything the problem is that they don't have enough time to do homework, even when they get home. An afterschool homework club is good for the kids that don't have nothing to do for the afternoon so they can stay and finish homework from that day or something that they need to finish.

I am one of those people who is against the afterschool homework club. Sometimes I need to go to preactice, so I don't have time to finish my homework but, I try my best to finish it and turn in the homework the next day. Teachers might don't have the time to stay after school too, because they have things to do like if they have a pet they have to give it food so it won't starve or have kids and they need to take care of them so nothing bad happens to them. So that is another reason why they should not have afterschool homework club.

Most of the students won't have a ride back home because their parents can be working, they can be sick, or they are not home. I don't think the school is gonna take care of all the students that go to the afterschool homework club. That is another reason why afterschool homework club is not good. What if the kids get hungry while begin in the afterschool homework club. I don't think the school is going to have food. If the school is thinking about making a club they could make it at the last class so the students take that block so they can only do homework.

It would be better if the school makes the club at the last class of the day so the students take that block for only to finish homework. So the students that don't have time after school won't struggle about not finishing their homework at time because, they have other activities to do after school. It could be good too so everyone can take a little break of the day they had. This could help a lot so, if theachers have things to do like, grade papers or homework to check they can take that block to do all of that.

Another good idea could be, that they can make the club at fist block, at the start of the day, like if one of the students never did their homework last night they still have time to finish it in the morning before they go to class. My favorite one was the one in the last class because, everyone gets a little break even the teachers. Everyone gets to finish their homework and no one has worrys about not finishing their homework and have a little bit of more free time in the afternoon.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
D0056301ADA8,"Many individuals want to pursuit their goals to succeed. It's basically a career academy, to help people like us to have an amazing future. Adults think it's fun and educational, other people think is boring or noneducational. Every once in a while people would want to visit an opportunity company because if they help me and I could help them, convince others to participate, and they could help me become more and more successful.

First, they help me and I help them. I'm interested in Landscape Design, I would want to learn more about that work force. Many things about Business Management, improving a business is worth any companies while. In return for them helping me, we could talk about improving the managers company to draw more attention. It's a win-win for both me and them.

Second, I would convince others to participate. When I get the help I want, I could explain to different individuals that there is many work opportunities. For example, if they want to work in Construction or Welding the company can teach them about that work force. Gathering people for a job opportunity could be hard. For example: giving out fliers, business cards, or writing a book and selling it. Only what matters is to convince others to part-take in an opportunity.

Last, the company could help me become more and more successful. In the future when success comes my way, I would start my own company/opportunity work. On the behalf of the first company/opportunity-work, who has helped me be the best in the future. This is a little off hand, but it's for the one who has made me successful. Many other individuals, adults and young teens think its a waist of time or this won't help me in the future. In reality, opportunity work will help you to be successful or famous.

In conclusion,

I would help them back and help their business grow to be the best. I would return the favor of them letting help me. In the future, I would want to grow be or be famous. I feel that opportunity for future working is very important.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
11598C88FBA4,"Generic_Name never loss the enthusiasm should Success consists of going form failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm? Some people have a hard life more when they trying to be better because some of them feel like they are failure by not having a good jod, or by living in a bad place.

Firts, for some peolpe is hard to find a good jod that they can really appreciate be good finalcially. To be sure that they can have evething they want for life because soometimes people try get somenthing but they can't. It's better to force their self to get whta they really want. For example if tey trying to go out they have to make sure they dont have anydebitos they having pay yet.

Second, some peolpe that livi in a bad place is depend by the econom. Some of them says they loss the enthusiasm by not having a good palce.

Thinking about pleople that really do thinks in live to get a good life is depend on they record. For example the people that go out and find hte way to move from they old life they had to take alot of choice. Or have making alot of bad choises to get something they do have now.

For the people that have evething is more easy to do the things they have i their mind.

On the way tha they can doevething they like or they want. but the enthusiasm they will have will be alot of better them what others can have. In conclusion everyone have a diferent way of life that they have to be grateful for everething. For others is a good way they have to tell then that they alway have to keep they enthusiasm up and never lose.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0
46977B27324C,"We all may have failure in life. In fact, we live in a world where everyone decides whether to be success or not to be success. In these days people are giving up on things that they might can do it, but they do not believe in themselves, going from failure to failure it does not mean to give up without trying. To be success, you must have to think positive and try it as many times as possible or as needed.

The pursuit of success is a key to be someone in life. However, each individual has their own thoughts or opinions. Unfortunately people loss their enthusiasm that takes them to never be successful. For example, many people play sports; they do not always win. They have failures. Sometimes they win, sometime they loose. Having those failures makes them to keep practicing, learn from the mistakes they made and try to fix them. It is a important role that later on in other games will help them to win. Deciding to give up will help them to be successful in many things in the future.

I had have many failures in my life. One of them is when I started to play the piano. I was twelve years old when I started. There was a time when I felt to give up because it was hard to play it, but I never loss my enthusiasm, I kept practicing untill I learned it. Having this failure make me think that if I never try, then I will never be able to success in life and neither to accomplish things in my own. Another thing, people had told me that I would not be a successful person because I have a son, who is only five months, my answer has been that I know it will be difficult to success, but not matters I will never give up untill I have achive my goals. Believing in myself is a thing that have help me to success.

In conclusion, success is a word that everyone should think with positive. Having a positive attitude will also help to be success. We all should take advantage of those thing that are worth it, instead of being success in things that might not be value in life. Having success in life will matter in your future life. Although is true that many people believe that success is not that important as others things might be.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
33CCEE3933ED,"Have you ever thought about growing? Most people wanted to get better after they have had worked on themselves to be successful already, but in the other hand, people did not have opportunity to go to school. or may be they just did not feel confident enough that they could be better. In my opinion, I think that people should try their best to be something that will benefit other people so that you gain support and just keep expanding.

The first reason why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. The more you have experience in something, the more chances you have on getting better at it. I think that getting better at something is really important in life in order to live a good lifestyle. But some people are not able to make changes to their selves. They maybe dealing with family issues or personal issues that is keeping them to take advantage of changing.

Another reason why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. Most people have skills that they learned when they were young which is considered knowledge. That specific skill or knowledge might help you advance something. But at the same time a lot of people have disappointments on their selves and surroundings, which can cause the thinking of not changing to the better.

The final reason of why I agree on Emeerson's statement is because. Most people when they are confident and comfortable, then they would release the skills and persuade the change that is going to make them a better person, and that could change their life forever. it is convenience and worth making the change no matter what the situation be so do not take advantages the wrong way

After all, there has been a lot of different opinions and ideas all around the world, but you as an individual should know what is best for you. we have talked about why and why not people should move up to the next step which is changing. changing can harm or improve you if you do it the right way, by taking chances since young then, most of us would have a lot more better strategies and know what is right from wrong by the time we grow. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
5C764A810680,"Do you want your child home school to adopt the four-day school week and extend the schools hours?

I do not agree with schools extending the schools hours nor adopting a four-day week.

Some students have just do not like what they are doing in class or do not get the chapter, so they get others students to do it for them.

They can get a lot of homework, so if they extend the school day they are going to have more homework than usual and be tired.

Students can get home late and cannot spend time with their families, if they have a lot of homework.

Within four-day school week students can get stressed out worst than usual.

The way that parent can react for adding more hours.

First, some people act like they do not know what they are doing, just because they are lazy.

In my opinion, some students like others students to do their work and that is not fair for the other student.

Allowing to extend the schools hours is going to mess people schedule or their parents work schedule.

Some parents get out of work early and they got time to pick their child up, if we extend the schools hours that could really mess them up.

Students are so much smarter if they focus on what they want.

I believe that once you put your mind to it, you will get it.

Next, parents do not like their child to get home so tired.

Some parents like to know how was their day or how their grades look like, but if a student is tired all the time how she or he suppose to have good grades?

Sleep is one of the most important things that a human being needs.

A human cannot go long without sleep.

Parents like to see their child happy, with energy, and doing things that she or he likes

If students do not have the sleep they need to have, that is going to mess with his or her grades.

School is hard itself and I do not think adding more hours is going to be helpful.

Finally, getting home late and stressing out are one of the worst things ever.

Stress can lead you to have some type of illness in the future.

What some people do to release stress is that they get a day to themselves and go to a spa or shopping.

Other people get things done first and they would like to shopping or to do something they like such as going to the movies, play video games, and play any sport.

Students get a lot of homework in a week, imagine in a four-day week.

People should really think first what they are going to do and get it done.

Some people just like taking everything as a joke and that is not good, but that is on them.

In my opinion just do it, just get it done and get it over with.

Some people just get lazy but they still get it done.

No matter what's on your way, you can always get things done.

When getting home late from school or any activity all you want to so is rest.

Some people go to sleep knowing that they have homework or a test the very next day, if they did not study or got their homework done, they might have a zero or both things.

That is why I think it is important to study and not to adopt the four-day school week.

In conclusion, conserving energy and resources has a lot of benefits, but I do not agree with adding hours to school.

Students have it so much harder now days that I think extending the school day is going to be even worst.

Some disadvantages are people get stress easily, they will have a lot of homework, and finally they can get home late especially if they have to stay after school.

Honestly people who agree on this have their good or bad reasons, but these are my reason why we should agree to extend the schools hours nor adopting the four-day school week.

However, just do what's have to be done for you to accomplish your dream.

If they add more hours to the school or not, do not worry just focus on you.",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
BAEC88ECE833,"Is setting a good example by your own bahvior the best way to influence other people, or are there better ways to influence others? Examples are not the main thing to influence other is just a way to say what you really mean. You have to show them what you are traying to explain, what you want them to know about you and things you have done. The best and better ways to influence others would be a good speech, trustworthy, and actions.

First, speech have been always a way to tell people what you form thinking, what you want to achieve, speech always influence people, people got influence by speeches, when they hear their owns needs or just when the speaker talk about good things like a better country, better education, and jobs. They kind of like it and get atracted to it

Second, trustworthy are good ways to influence people, is a way to gain people to trust in you, When a person tried to influence you want that those words to be true, when people says the truth there are alway be people that will get inspired and influence to say what they think or just to say the truth.

Finally; action, action have been the best way to influence people, when people make the rigth thing and theirs action show their achievement, and shoe people what they have done for them and for the society, people get influence by their goods action. There is when the people get influence and they just want the right things.

Examples are not the main thing to influence other, examples is just a step to say what you really mean. when you want to influence somebody there are better way to make that and the best and better ways to influence them would be a speech, trustworthy, and actions; however, examples are always needed in there to make something credible.             ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
3B355996A407,"Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break should these projects be teachers designed or students designed?.

I'm taking pocition of this topic, In my opinion students should be have their own projects during the summer, the students already knows, whats the problem is or what they have it trouble with. students involved in summer projects, could be one way to students can learned also students can have more skills if they keep practice with their own projects and ideas they are going to be ready when they coming back to school , I'm totally agree with that the students should be designed their projects,For example, I'm a student of ESL, I like to make my on projects during summer to dot not forgot what

I already learned during the year, in others words students need to work in their on projects during their break

The firs reason about this topic, some students, who feel more comfortable making their on projects is that they will know how the topic goes, because they were the ones who created. in fact, If schools let students to make their own projects , they will be more comfortable because they will know what the topic is about and it will be easy for them to make it.

Second reason, students needs to make their own projects during summer could be more help for the students , when they came back to schools, because they are not going to forgot it, what they already learned,the students don't have to stop working their own projects because if they stop probably they become lazy. for example ESL students, if they don't try to make their own projects they will be forgot everything.

I think that the students, needs to have their own projects during summer, that would be a good for students,

also , students, won't forget everything that already leard during the year, because they are still working on their own projects and understanding better their projects, I'm totally agree with that the students, can do better without teacher during summer, students can be more active and show more their abilities, if they try they will make it. there are many points to students make their own projects during summer.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F2029DDE1D2B,"Do you think first impression is difficult to be change? Some people said that first impresion is difficult to change in a person. Firs impression can be change in some people because you can related to the person, You can talk to the person if is having a bad time, sometimes you can change the first impression to a person.

When i was in middle school i meet a girl, her name was Generic_Name, i didn't like her first impression and i noticed that she didn't like my impresion too. She was my neirbor for 3 years and she didn't talk to much and she was always angry. One day i notice that she was having problems with friends, like me. We were relatived to some things and our first impression.

Sometimes people can be having bad times and that is why their first impression it seems difficult to change. I had a friend that it was having a bad day at work the first time i meet him. Generic_Name was angry and he didn't talk to me that day. After that day i was surprised of his impression . Days after he explain what was happening to him that day.

If you meet a person more closedly you can change their first impression. You can be come a friend to the person, sometimes they change. You would like more that person than the first time. LIke i said before , they can have bad times the first time you see their impression. Not everyone is happy every day.

First impression is not difficult to change , people can due it and people can change it. some said that is impossible to change first impression , but is not , if i can due it with some people , you too can change it.

In the future we will see that first impression is not impossible to be change.  ",3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
65593BCE26BF,"Many schools have partnerships with local companies. It allow students to explore certain professions. Students needs a lot of stuff to success in life. Schools should have the qualities to help their students success.

Schools should have a partnership business to help all the students to reach their goals. Helping the students to improve their skills and give them time to improve their brains as well. Having a partnership is much easier, because members helps when its needed.

Partnership is easier, because if the business doesn't work out, then everyone will take the risk not only one person. Taking the risk alone is very hard, It's as hard as touching the clouds. Having all the risk alone is horrible, for an example it can causes living in the street or losing all the money that the person have. I want to live a good life when I grow up , so I won't like to take all the risk by myself. I don't want to lose all my money so I would be happy to have a partnership member to help me out. Plus Not working alone, I do not like to work alone in life. I would love to work with other people when I grow up.

Sharing Is one thing I like about partnership. It's not only sharing the risks, but sharing the good stuff too. Sharing ideas to make the profit better. Sharing money to grow the business. Yes, sharing is a really good thing in a partnership business. Partnership is not about loneliness, but its about happiness. Working alone is really boring , but by talking to the members of the partnership can be really fun. By doing that the members gets to know each other much more. I believe that all is it about is trust and happiness.

Some people might thinks that Partnership is not good. They believe that partnership business is not helpful at all, but they are wrong it is helpful. They think that the members might not get along with each other, and at the end the business will break down. Getting along with each other takes time, but picking the right people for the business is needed. People who thinks that partnership is bad they are actually wrong, but they have points though. Partnership is about learning new stuff from other people, and it's the most important thing in a partnership business.

A lot of schools now are having a partnership with local companies, which is a good thing. It will help students to improve their skills. It will also help the students to reach their goals and success in life. Plus having a partnership business is much easier, and

No one takes the risk alone. Schools should have the qualities to help the students success in their future life. ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
9F1230B269C1,"My name is Generic_Name and I conclude my subject of topic to one of my most enjoyable educational activities to be the of subject P.E. I chosed this subject because me myself am an athlete in many sports such as basketball,football,swimming,and lacross which is why i feel as if i have a great connection with the subject of P.E since the platform of the class is physicle education which most of the time includes sports. This connection is established from the joy of physicle and fitness related activities that health/P.E can assure.

I find this activitie mostly enjoyable since it has some of the sports I play in after hours outside of school grounds,which builds a strong connection. I also enjoy the connection i make with others such as the other students and the teacher since health/P.E are mostly social based activities, were teamwork and cooperation are needed.

This is an art in which others and you could interact with each other which if to the right exstent can bring joy to those who socialize in educational manners, but with that also brings educational activities which is much more of important when it comes to P.E because education always comes first when it comes to any class in the education atmosphere. P.E may bring a positive inpact on others who need social activites to interact with others,which is what makes P.E enjoyable and impactful for me and much others.

I feel as if this interaction and connection in physicle education/P.E is a great enjoyable way inside of shool grounds that can provide a break from classes which you sit all day and study and is why i choose this as my topic of intrest when it comes to my oppinanated most enjoyable activity.                    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
BE928441C9D6,"I agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. I believe Churchill about what he said ''success consists of going from failure without loss of enthusiasm ''

sometimes in life you have to be a failure to be successful. For example , I know friend of mind when he first came to the USA he didn't even try to speak English.

After a while the time came and he had to learn and try when he tried he filed and filed couples times in till he be came a successful . me in person filed couples times in all SOLS

but I had fix and I kept trying and trying in till pass all of them. at the same time it might be a bad thing because some of us when they fail they give up so easy.

I sagest we should teach student about what that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.                                                                                             ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
13450D581EC9,"I am agree with the Waldo Emerson's prompt. He wrote that "" to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.""

""Never give up."" This word conveys our intensify about our thought. It makes us courageous. Life is not a bed of rose, life is struggle. Every single person has their life struggle. Nobody is a perfect at they look. A perfect man is he who win the struggle. A successful man, he not get success in a second. He had lot of struggle in his life,but he don't stop for his goal. After long time keep trying made him successful. He adjust the struggle and keep go through the struggle and win the struggle which is make him success.

For example a soccer player has his goal to make a score so that they can win. But for making a goal he has to cross the against team then he will success to make a goal.

You failed !. You are done your life today. We couldn't expect from you this. You fool !. You looser. Now you go home and get sleep that's all you can do. Should I listen them and do what they want or give up my life? NO!.I am failed, i am looser but it dosen't mean that i can't win anymore. Don't lose hope. You have hand,you have brain,you have leg use those one day win come to you then you can show them that you did. you made it.

For example,you are not good in Math but it's dosen't mean that you are bad in Social Science. Show your talent. You can't able to solving the Math equation but you have talent to make Social Science rules.

Time is valuable more than everything. A good minded people use their proper time. If you use time and you failed in your success then don't lose hope,don't stop, don't blame on time and yourself. Time can give you more opportunity to use it and make yourself successful. You just have to keep try. But if you being lazy you just waste your time and you got looser reward from the time. Always remember that time never gonna come back.

For example, If you don't do your homework the teacher not gonna give you a grade. You gonna fail in this subject. You just waste your time. But if you do the homework but is incorrect. The teacher can give you one more time to fix the correction though its incorrect.

An Inspiration can make your goal. If you look or read about successful person how they became successful in their life you also can inspire to do what they did. An inspiration can bring you encourage. Make you sense what you want to do and what should you do for your future. There are different people has their different choices. From the successful people you can organize your life.

For example, there was a story about Robert Bruce and a Spider. One day Robert Bruce was laying in the cave and saw a spider was trying to climb the wall but its failed seven times to reach the wall of top. After seven times keep trying makes its successful. The spider reached the top of the wall. This event make Robert Bruce inspire himself.

Everything has their opposition. If you wanna be a good man you have to know what is bad things. The same way if you want to win you have to know what is lose. Fail is common afire in human being. If you don't fail it's mean you dosen't even try. Fail is a part of our life. But don't get depressed yourself by depression. You fail but you have more option to start it from the beginning again. Before you stop try just think should i try one more time. Maybe this time you can become a winner. Just one more think can bring your success.

For example, You digging a soil for the gold. You dig almost come to the gold but this time you give up and stop digging the soil. If he dig the soil one more time he can see the gold which one he want. So always think one more time before you quick.

An aim can make our decision properly. An aim less man can't success in his life. A right decision depend on your future. First make a routine for your work. If you want to success in your goal you have to follow your routine. In a student life its hard to follow the rules. But if you try you can do it. In student life student should give full attention to their lesson. homework should be done before going school or college. if you continuously follow the rules it will be easier for you to success your life.

Don't be lazy. Lazy is a weak point in our life. From the laziness your life never gonna successful. So always do hard work until you done in your work. some people we have in our society they has dream but they don't wanna work. If you don't work how can you full fill in their life. Always keep try to get your dream. We have time we have life just try as much as you can.

Some people in our society some times they messed up with your dream or your work. They don't wanna let you to do your work. This typ of people are very harmful to our life. They always bothering you can't lets you doing work. That time we should ignore them. Don't say anything with them. One day they will leave you automacilly.

For example, if any person can bother you every day and if you ignoring him one day he will not interest with you and leave you.

The success of life bring you happiness. You will feel proud yourself. If you show them that you did it then they will fell ashamed because they thought wrong think about you. So never be lazy. Always do hard work,keep try and think about it what should you do or not. End of the moment it will be

Happy Ending for you because you erase the wrong think the people think about you.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
0FF307182628,"Dear principal,

I think that it is okay for students to bring cell phones to school . But there cell phones need to be turned off during class . They could use them during passing periods and lunch time but not during class time . What if they need their phones for emergencies or what if their parents want to know where they are after school. Parents some times want to know where their kids are so that is why we need to bring cell phones to school . That is if some kids have cell phones because not all the kids have cell phones . We will promise not to use the cell phones during class times . And the teachers can see if they are turned off o not . And that is all i want to say.

Sincerely ,

Your Student",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
0E3C1F059C31,"Technology is the best way to contact your family members . For example in emergency and on special occassions like religous holidays , birthdays, anniversary, wedding that you didn't have time to attend . Also you can contact them if some one far away from you is in the hospital or someone died in your family you can contact one of your family maembers to see what is happening at the house at that moment.

Also You can play games on your phone or listen to music while you are going some where in the car or in the airplane. Also you can order food from your favourite restaurante to eat at home or at the hotel you are satying at. Therefor you can check out books from your phone and read from your book on your phone. also you can book a hotel room from the technology now days or you can also take pictures and send them to your love ones.

Another example can be that where ever you are in the world you can order anything from online store.

Like makup kits, dresses or other things from the online store. Also you can purchase movie tickets , zoo tickets or you can go on a cruise with family. Also you can purchase tickets to travel to your dream country and do fun stuff there.

Technology is also bad , because what ever you post on social media it will go everywhere and everone would see what are you doing and what are you up to basically the photos you take of yourself and you post it on social media the people are going to see it and it probably hurt you future career or your job that you are in. Also technology is bad , because people out there are literlly photshoping what ever you post basically girls , because they do inpropreate things with the photos of girls.

Another example of why is technology is bad. It's bad , because of cyberbullying. People bully other people on social media and the people who are getting bullied can't do anything ,because the people who are doing bullying. they don't know who they are if the people who are getting bullied said something to the bully they will do something wrong with them.

So that's why technology is good and bad try to avoid these things lif you want to post something out there just be aware of those people who do all these kind of things like cyberbulling and photoshopping. The good thing can be that make a personal file and keep the photos or only send to your family members and try to avoid social media,",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
973B1B44F884,"To to successful you may have to archive it. You might encounter or even fail so many times, but who cares, as long you try and try you will be successful. So will you just give up if you failed? and of course, people will judge you because you're not perfect. That's why Winston Churchill once said ""success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. Some people say you could use your failures as your motivation and encouragement. In life, you will fail a lot of time but it's important that you keep fighting and learn from your mistakes.

To begin with, a lot of people thinks failure will only make you look bad and some thinks its the end of the world for them but that's not the case. Every each person make mistakes and having a motivation in your self will get your somewhere: however, when a person is lack of motivation in their life, they won't be as much successful and failure will take over.

Secondly, when it comes to hard times, a lot of people say that there's no point of trying if you're meant to be a failure. Every each person in this world know that they're capable of, and every each person know what their weakness are. However, having encouragement won't mean anything because if you're encourage enough, you will get back up and do anything you can to be successful.

At last, learning from your mistakes is the key to be successful. You will fail and fall but its very important that you get up and keep fighting because once failure takes over, it will be hard to get back up. Also you will need to earn the key to success, but once you find it, you will achieve anything in life not because you didn't give up but because your learn from your failure and mistake.

In conclusion, people say you could use your failures as your motivation and encouragement and in life, you will fail a lot of time but it's important that you keep fighting and learn from your mistakes.                ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
3F1E511E2E1E,"Schools that provides distance learning as an option to attend classes from home online, or video conferencing are few of all the country. It is a good idea for all students that wants to graduate, even if they don't have time to go to school every day.

Students some times don't have time to go to school every day, some of them works in a part time jobs; That's difficult to them because, they need to wake up earlier to go to school and do homework in the afternoon.

Some students decided not go to school any more because, they need to work to pay bills, and help their families in home. Also, with this option students can be relaxing in their homes and studying at the same time. Another example why this is a good option for students is because some of them need classes to graduate, and they can not get that classes done by the school year, but if they have the possibility to take classes online they can finish during the year.

However, this beneficial option is good for those students that are not eligible anymore to attend school because of their ages. There is a final age that students can be accepted by the school, and if they had more than the age the school said, they can not attend to school anymore, even if they want to continue going to school and graduate. That's why online classes from home is great idea for those students who wants the diplomat.

In conclusion this option is beneficial for all students that want to study and do other jobs in the same time. Those who work and wants to finish school, are benefit with this amazing idea that some schools provide. The're just few schools that students can assist for those who want to get their diplomas done with facility way to study. Is a really helpful option for all students in all the country.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
B2AD2177A42C,"People can form their own character based on what they choose to make it. A person is given the responsibility of choosing whether to do the good or bad thing. For example, if a person hears that their friend is in a bad situation and then choosing to help them out, they are showing that they are capable of make their own character. Others may say that people do not get to choose their own character because it is beyond their control. However, people can determine their own character based on how they want it to be because they know what steps they have to take in order to achieve their goal, they know what is best for them, and they know what they want to become in the future.

Knowing what steps to take will help the person make the right choice in defining their character. People tend to ask to other if the choices that they are making is the right one, but instead of asking others what they think the person has to be confidence in themselves that they are making the right choice. For instance, if a student wants a good future they have to work hard and study in order to accomplish it, and not choose to go the wrong way. On the other hand people may say that having a second opinion is a good thing, but that is wrong because it may cause them to doubt themselves. This is why people should first plan their transaction then take action on it.

People have the free well to choose what they want to be and what is best for them. A person knows what their interest are, so they choose according to what they like to do the most. Furthermore, if a person finds a job that they really like and want to get it, they will work hard for it. Some may disagree with this because others may see that what they are choosing to do is not the best thing for them. This is why people need to think about their choices before doing anything.

People can choose their own character and what they want to become in the future. People could choose to became; artists, actors, singers, or doctors because they have dreamed of becoming one of these seen they were a child. For instance, they would have to focus and work hard in order to achieve their future selves. However, others may say that it is impossible to become what you dreamed to be in the future because they will face may opsticals in their lives. On the other hand, if a person really wanted to become that person they will work intensively for it.

A persons character can be constructed by how they choose make it because they know the course that they have to take in order to achieve their goal, they know what is best for themselves, and they know what they want to be in the future. For example, If a person wants something badly, they will work persistently for it. Another example is that, the person will prove to everyone that they are capable of achieving their dream, and that it is possible to get. People should choose to make their own character because they will be comfortable with their choices.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
9F68BAB4FB63,"Students graduated in three year of the High School!

I think is good idea because all student that want a best future try to do a good thing that it is a benefit for the school. when a student is smart make the time important for take other course for to have for credit is for that some student don't need to take the four grade in the high school, A student also that have excellent grade in all the classes, and only have a difficult classes, this student that had the opportunity for graduated early that other students.

Example:

A student of Generic_School is in 9 grade, but this student have a difficult classes, but this students is focus just in the classes, and have a excellent grade also this student take a deport after school all the days. The student he's prepared every time for the quiz, and for test.

Finish the school the student is the best student of the year in the school because He passed all the classes and the SOL. During the summer He go to the summer school for to pass other class that he going to have in 10 grade, finish the summer school He pass the class with excellent grade, so this student had a so much credit of the normal.

He stars the 10 grade, so He had other advanced classes, because in summer school he pass the classes that He was going to have in 10 grade. This student continue that, He pass all the classes, and SOL that He need for graduated. Now this students is in 11 grade, but the student had a big credit and He go to the school for 4 classes so this student have the opportunity for graduated in 11 grade because is a excellent student.

He finally is graduated the school in 11 grade, so He finish the school, but He said that want to go the collage because want to prepare more for to go to the university, because He want to be a excellent lawyer.

The excellent student finish the collage, and the university, so now He is a big lawyer with a great statutes. The parents of this excellent students, and good person, so they feeling fortunate for have a big son.

All we have the opportunity for to be a best person in the life, all depended how we wants to be in the life. Many student wants to have a excellent grade but don't put of they part for be a good students.

Now in day the most students just want to come to school for 3 or 4 classes but don't want study for had a good grade,many students go to school but don't go the classes, and other students is stay outside of school for smoky, because the most students used cigarette or other thing.

We don't know appreciated the best opportunity of the life.

Reasons for graduated in three year

All students who graduated early have a big opportunity in the collage, and the university, and the work or whatever place.

why?

because the old person thinking that this type of person are responsible in all the thing.

Are a people responsible!

Why?

because when have a big responsibility never said 'NO' and have care for all thing.

Example:

I'm Generic_Name, I work in Bank Of America, today my boss need to leave early because He had a compromised with other important person, and He give me the responsibility for received the money of today.

Be carefully!

Why?

because they try to make with carefully the work or whatever thing.

Example:

My name is Generic_Name, and I work a company of cake, and my supervisor said me congratulation because you are very carefully with the work all the time.

My Idea!

I think all the people we have the best opportunity in the life to be a best person in the live,but the major opportunity is that when we have somebody is protected, and supported our decisions.

When we start the education needed to keep the marge for be the person who we want to be. The thing are best when we support all bad thing.

The best idea is continue with the school and be a good students, because all student that it is educated, they type students have a more opportunity that other who they don't want to be a best person in the future.

Why the younger people just thinking in pass the life in party or in the street?

Why now in day we see a kids abandoned in the street?

Because many mother don't have a good education for to have a compromise of the had a kids, this type of mother just thinking in that the drugs,alcohol,or party is the major thing.

Many mother having a bad decisions!

So is for that what we need to prepare for to make more easy our life.

Have a diploma of the High School is very important because we work less, and we have a good job,when we have a good job we have a lot money, and when this happened we are prepare for take a funny moment in our life, But just for that is not the base for make whatever thing, first we need think what we need to do!

We know that this life is so hurt, and is more hurt when we take a bad decision like not finish the school or don't put care to our thing for to be prospered.

Some time is good help take course when the people don't finish the school.

Example:

take a course for by the license, and put a beauty salon.

take a course for by idea how to have a company of electricity.

take a course for be some body also a little important in the life.

take a course for be a teacher of music.

We have so much course for prepare more when we don't finish the school.

Some time when a students go to the school, and they not finish is responsibility of the parent guardian because the parent need to see for the son or daughter keep going the school, I think when the students don't finish the school part of this is fault of the parents.

How we can finished the school, and how can I do graduated?

The things for to finished the school is:

Go to the school every day.

Make the homework.

Prepared for the quiz or test.

Pass all the SOL.

Pass all the classes.

When you make all the work in the classes or in the school, and you pass all the thing, you can graduated. If you not want to go to the collage, the diploma of the High School is very important for have a good job in your life.          ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
DF64D7FF61F1,"I disagree that the school bored planes to add one and a half hours of school each day, because student need to have a period of time that they can stay at school that they can get home on time. I want the school bored to take less hours off of school for students because they can hang out with family and friends after school at the regular time everyday.

First of all, students learn so much everyday that they get so tired and frustrated. Also the student don't want the school bored to extend time for one and half hours to the regular school time because they have carfare.

Second of all, there family probable wonder where there son/daughter are at, that's why we don't want to extend the time. If the school bored extend more time there would be more homework and the students won't like that there would be homework involved.

Third of all, the teacher probable don't want to stay at school for just an hours an a half. the teachers don't want the school bored to extend more school time because they probable are tired to teach so many students every day of the week.

As you can see, the school bored shouldn't extend more time to school for students because we don't want to stay after school for more learning. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
4800E073664A,"I do agree with what Ralph Emerson wrote. Being myself in a world that is being nonstop trying to make you something else that is not you, is a very good accomplishment you've overcome. There is always challenges in life where you would have to be yourself. If you can't be yourself then you should ask for advice from your family on how you can be yourself. If you aren't yourself and you've become different from yourself and its not always good. It's like letting the world win by changing you. You should always be yourself no matter what you come across, listen to you and your family, and don't lose to the world by not being yourself.

In life no matter what you come across, you should always be yourself. Don't let anyone force you to be someone else because you might not even like who you've become. People who aren't themselves usually are going through some serious stuff or just want attention. Being yourself is really hard when there are hard challenges you have come across that tries to make you different from yourself. Being yourself is the best accomplishment you can earn when in a world that is trying to make you something else.

You should always listen to yourself and your family. Getting advice from your family is the best because they've been alive longer than you and have more knowledge in how they've became there self and not anything else. Listening to yourself is good because you're doing what you want to do, what your mind is telling you. If you become something else and your mind was telling you not to, then you should re-evaluate your thoughts and be yourself. Family are related to you, they have similar mindset as you, and they should understand you more than anyone else in this world.

At the end of the day, you know who you are; if you aren't yourself its like letting the world win by changing you and losing because you aren't yourself. You're showing us you aren't capable of the world, you can't handle the world because you're not thinking about your decisions and letting the world change you. You know what you can do and can't do. If you know you can change then go for it and change. Changing can be hard but you should take it slow, think about what you want to change. It's a great feeling knowing you've changed because you know you have achieved your goal.

Ralph Emerson won against the world trying to change him because he realized people change and aren't themselves anymore and spoke out. Don't let anything try to change you, you do you. Listen to people that are close to you and you trust. Aim for your goals and take your time, don't be anyone else. Therefor win, not lose and be you.         ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
3CED6DDF77BE,"School districts should not offer programes that allow high school students to gradutade in three years instead of the traditional four years because elective courses are important as well as academic courses, the summer courses are expensive and parents should let the children to enjoy the summer.

Elective courses are important besides the academic courses. A student should collect the other knowledges also. Only academic courses are not gonna help him/her to be a good human being. Afterall, he/she has some hobbies in his/her life like cooking, painting, designes, dancing, singing. Think, a student is only studying because he/she wants to graduate earlier than the traditional four years. What will happen next? At the point he/she will be tired of life which is absolutely unfair. Maybe she/he has a very good artist. How can he/she expose? The answer is through electives. No matter what a person works with, if he/she doesn't like to do that work, it never last longer. So, elective is a way to make student happy and cheerful. When the academics make them tired, electives help them to get out from there.

Summer courses are expensive in some of the schools. Sometimes middle class family can't afford the courses fees. For this, the rich kids take the courses only. The poor kids stay behind. The poor kids can't afford the courses just because of money. Maybe they are more talented than the rich kids. They also should get that opportunity. Isn't it unfair for the poor students? Yes, it is. So, they shoudn't continue with this three years method. We should treat all the students equally.

Students should enjoy the whole summer by doing outside activities. Students usually have school 9am to 5pm. They spend their whole time in the school. How can they make themselves involve with outside world? Normally they can't in the regular school days. For this, governments make this rule to free the studnets in the summer so that they can enjoy outside activities. If they think about the summer courses, it's not possible to enjoy their summer honestly. A student leads a robotic life in usual school days. For mental health a person needs some free time or vacation. It's absolutely not possible for a person to lead a regular life everyday. Entertainment is important. A routined life, 9am to 5pm then returns to home, again homework. Life can not run like this. I understand that every parents want their child to be smarter than others. But it doesn't mean that they just have only one way to prove themselves by taking the summer course and entering college earlier. They can be a good artist or journalist. The parents should think about the children also. Not only about their academic abilty. There is a record in the United States that students attemp suicide because of study pressure. Isn't it shame for a country? A student is attempting suicide. why?

because he/she can't handle the pressure. Without life, what will you do with the education? Mental peace is important. So, for mental health a student has to enjoy the summer.

We have only one life to enjoy. Let's not waste it by thinking about academic career only. We have much things to do as well as academic. Just need to keep patience and walk with the flow. Life is beautiful.     ",4.5,3.5,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.0
E966121134B7,"The life of the some student's, of wants superate.

I believe and think,that all student's already graduate of the schools or university,they can work in a place where they can have some opportunity. Also they can putting in practic or demostrate your habilities.

However , I think that they could should of the best effort about their, and then they can remember all the things about they learning while they be studied,as well i think that all the estudents that they do not have age for to work ,like student of the14 or 15 years ald they can have a righ for to have a part time. although,nobady can be deny one job for the students want to have a job for getting more experience.

In my opinion , every student, they can have a right, to demostrate your habilities,and then they can have more ideas,and get more experience for survive in his life. also they can be more smart, while they putting in practices your habilities,because they are gona putting the best effort. even think that they can be indepent by your self,also they gonna reconize all the effort of the parents didint for their Also too i think they can choice what carrier they would like to take or they can be think what is better for their or what is gonna helping in the future for getting a better life,that is my conclussion,about what are talking. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
A526E6F199BB,"Acutely yes, we do accomplish more if we are always doing something. because if you are just idle you're not get anything done in your whole life and just sitting idle it's not going to help you see what you acutely need for your life, or your family life, or if you don't have a family think about your future.

They are people who don't have the life as you do. they wish and dream to have a better life to do what they want to do the things they wish to but you already have a live and everything you need in your life so dream big and make it come true. don't just sit idle and do nothing

Think about what you going to do. like some students say that they just want to be a famous ,if you want to a famous or important you better do something in your life, the other famous people did something they weren't idle in fact they spend their time just to tell us to do something in our life. like if you want to be a doctor you have to study for your dreams to be what ever you wanted to be. being a idle it's not going tho help you you life depends on you and your ideas. if you have dreams

Life needs energy to do something imagine you have a good ideas about doing a project in engineering and you designed really impressive, and the teacher like it and you entered the engineering science.

years later you found a good job in your career and you you have money, that make everyone proud about what you just did in your life and your family are thankful to you.

Life needs you and your ideas to prove yourself don't sit and do nothing and wast your time playing around

. because if you are just idle and doing nothing that doesn't make any since you have to do what ever you want to do it's your life no noes life your own life fight for it and go crazy for if and never give up says I con't do this and it's possible yes you can. trust yourself and ideas that's make your life easier to you. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
41DF6D292056,"In this essay we are going to discuss the various issues related to working in a group and working indvidually. The idea here will be to study the pros and cons with ralation to the particular indvidual and not to the group of which she is a part. First we will try to understand the dynamics of a group vis a vis individual, then understand the various issues involved in working as a part of the group. We would also see as to how those issuse will be influencing the person, be it in the positive side or being a hindrance.

Remamber last time when you had to do your project. You must have contemplated doing it by many ways. But some thing that comes to mind very in the beginning is either individually or in a group. Every body by facto knows what it is to be individual and perform a task individually, as she is the only person who is doing the task. But what is group and how it is formed and what are the dynamics involved in it.

So what is a group, we may dedine it as a collection of several people who come togethor to do a particular task or goal. And the group form, their structure and process and also deals with how it is functioning. This aspect of group dynamics is relevant in formal and informal groups of all types. In any organisational entity groups are very common entity and hence their study and group dynamics is an important area in the study of oranisational behaviour.

Being with group dynamics let us see what exactly it is about, it basically deals with why and how groups are formed and developed. In order to explain the same many theories have been proposed.

While group work has a host of merits, it also has its flip sids. Firstly, individual students usually lack the power to control the task as compared to when the work is assigned to one person for completion. Additionally, some group members tend to dominate in terms of contributions while othors may become dormant. In this case, the group may achieve its goal but limit other students. Work well together can achieve much more than indvividuals working on their own. A broader range of skills can be applied to practical activities and sharing and discussing ideas can play a pivotal role in deepening your understanding of a particual subject area.

Being part of a team will help you develop your own interpersonal skills such as speaking and listening as well as team working skills suck as leadership, and working wirth motivating others. Some of these skills will be useful throughout your academic career and all are value.

In order to maximise these benefits, you will need to manage your group work effectively.",4.0,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
008DDDDD8E8D,"I think it's a good idea for the estudnets to commit to a career at a young age. In addiction, the students are expected to identify a career they want and use the best for them. So the students can study in higt school and select to guide them to career in specific they want.

Fisrt, In high school all the students have diffents dream on the world. Some students dream to be a Doctor, arctecture, teacher, and nurse, ect. Is a good oportunity to have a good education and a make a good person and helpfull. Then, the students can have a better life and good jobs.

Sometimes the students in young age estared to think about what carrer is better for them. Others think what career is usefull to make a good money and have a better class social. But all the students think diferent the others and we have to respet they decicion about they future.

secondly, In my opinion is is good to think or dream in biger. In my potition my family do not have all lot of money to go to the university and pay for it. For example, some of my friends are a good Doctor and arquicteture, but the thing is when they want to be a good person a get better futures on their lifes. Usually, when we think about it , but is so dificul to do it.

Thirt, students in the school have special classes to go with a career. all the people have the oportunity to think about, which want to study and where they go too. But some students cann't go to study the career they want ,because some of them have to work and pay bill in their hause. usually some of them have everything in the house and the only thing they have to do is study and make sure they work to complite all of the school and can go to study that set.

In conclution,

is a good idea to know what you want to study in young age. Also to be responsable all the things and have a great time of the life to think what is make you happy when you grew up. One day a want to be doctor of the animals. that will be make me happy.                          ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
AA0919FCDEDC,"The Primer Minister Winston Churrchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" And the question is about angree or desag.

My opinion is desagree because the Primer Minister wiston not is try to motivate to onther person to do again. First,reason when something person loss manytime something and feel what if continue does again can obtain something good in the future. Because never said end. Second, reason the failure plays inthe life a paper strong in the life of every person in the world. But when any person not try more time that one is clear that is going to failure and never feel what is obtain something good in the futured. The decition every person have nothing can said what try againt. The decition is of your selft. My position is what if I whole my life said not and not continue consist in something never can obtain something.

When have the oportunity of obtain something and gain something never say I failure least when have a enthusiasm of obtain. Never person have the right to says you never can't do. forever cave you personas negatives and thoght negative in the life. But every pesona have the right to attain something. For example: I have goals in my life what is gradution and have my diploma and can continue in the college. For can gain this gold and my dream i have enthusiasn and an person positive. Also if I have failure in my gold I have of up and againt.

Form not failure has try more of one times. The reasons are clear if an have enthusiasm for something I loss the possible to go back to againt. I also think what the Prime Minister Winstor Churchill loss something for what the that try todo is what the person not continue there are and losss your enthusiasm for something what hill obtain. There are many success about failure but the failure arrive when the problem don't have solution. Becasuse also have the right to fight for obtain the solocion to the failure.

When us arrive to the failure have the right of to do again but other form. Sometime the life us play's different suitation what think that not obtain solution but many pesons said what there are form all have solution lest when an dead. These is other example when one person dead and before to dead have failure many time in yours objetives an don't know say there are fight for obtain the solution.

The life arrow as the world an never have the solution in the hand to all problems butnot signific what noy have solution. Never there are said not can't. The final of failure forever have solution. Is as when an company is goint to bankarrot. They try to share solution form the failure. For there nevere said that no can't share solution to the every failure.

My conclusion is that never lost the energy for figth for the solution. Forever cave sometihing what have hopeful in your self. No lost yor hope eve search the solution to the failure.                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.5
CF961DD37C82,"At this period, technology changed our life. Such as technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. Although some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life, actually in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other and make people more loneliness.

some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life. Our life pace very fast. So, the efficiency is very important. However work and life because time is money. Thus depend this situation technology provide more fast more easily way occupy the primary market. More and more young people don't go outside. they just stay at home because Internet have everything they want.

in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other. Have a conversation to others is very important part in our life. Some thing you can't learn by Internet and book but you can learn it by take with people. At a family, which member rely technology too much. It will inflict some crack by lest conversation.

in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It make people more loneliness.

Technology has big attraction to us because it is interesting. But also people are easily indulge. People will in to a world for themselves and don't like talk to people face by face. Finally they will be deserted fact life that become a stoic person.

Depending those reason, I think the use of technology had negative effects on people. Although some people say the use of technology had positive effect on people because It improve efficiency of people's life, actually in my opinion I think the use of technology had negative effects on people because It reduce people's communication to each other and make people more loneliness.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
06F5F6A09DC6,"More than one person's advice

Have you ever wondered or questioned yourself why do you have to ask more than one person's for advice? Yep you heard me. People from all around the world ask advice about anything. That could be video games, schools, and even Life. Obviously, there are many other things to ask advice. It's kind of asking for help, you can say. People incuding kids, teens, and even adults are asking advice that could help them in the furture, you guys even might have connections, and more than one person. More than one is better than just asking for one person's advice.

Having connections

The people you ask for advice were kids too just like you and they possibly ran into what you are stuck or struggling at right now. I recommand you to ask adults more than anyone else. That's either with struggles at school, home, family members, or even life. I almost forgot to include decisions because small decisions can eventually become big decisions. I recommand you to ask adults more than anyone else. I mean you can ask seniors but they most likely will forget everything since they were kids. The worst thing you can do is asking someone young even a 18 year old adult because you never know what happened in them. Trust and worthy friends you can ask but friends that you just say hi to once a day or even a week wouldn't be so great.

Help in the future

Advices not just help from the presents but in the future as well. According to my calculations you could use that advice over and over again. For example, let's say you didn't know where you put a comma in a sentence, therefore, you used a person's advice and it was to put a and where ever you were going to put the comma at. You can also use it to help your kids and even grandsons if you still remember.

More than one person's advice

Last but not least, why more than one person's advice you ask. One advice can help and even solve whatever you have in mind but you actually want to check if they were right. You probably want to gather the information and rethink it. Everyone in my opinion should at most ask two people for advice just to make sure. First person person wasn't being that specific enough so you decide to go to another person. If they haven't been specific enough then just go to another person. I mean how hard is that? Especially kids since they have just started growing up and will soon become young adults.

Everybody should be struggling something in a certain time of life that they ask for advice. Don't be shy for asking advice and you believe in yourself that you are a brave and confedent man that doesn't need help. Because really you will be a better one for asking advice. Therefore, the reason that we ask advice is to become someone better each day by taking that advice.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5,3.5
0506BAC596A7,"Write something beyond that you know it very important for our knowledge.

It will be better if you try to do something beyond if you already mastered; however, if you dont try you will never know.

Agree / to know more things ,more knowledge, an open mind.

Try hard is better because we can know more things, more knowledge,an open mind.

Try hard to know beyond what you have already mastered is better because we can know more things. For example, how to explore to te world. Also, how's the car made; finally, how to make a factories. In conclusuion try hard to know beyond what you already mastered is better because we can know more things.

2.

Try hard to know beyond what you have already mastered is better because we can get more knowledge. For example, Teaching a better sciencie; Addition, get knowledge on the space, last, convert a car to robot. In conclusion try hard to know beyond what you already mastered is better because we can get more knowledge.

3.

Try hard to know beyond what you have already mastered is better because we can get a open mind. For example, explain how to made an essay; Beside, coach team, finally, person of congress. In conclusion try hard to know beyond what you have already mastered is better because we can get a open mind.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
E3DBC3B092A7,"Do you want your family members to be healthy?

The workplace i choose was the Hospital because i see people doing surgery on people and i would love to do it so i can see there organs that i never seen before . I would like to vist it so i can se the baby's , mental people , elderly people ,and other people .I would like to take care of the baby's cause i like to take good care of them and i like to go see them each time and they also cry alot but it is really fun . When your parent is sick and you are a doctor you know what to do right away .Sometimes people are so close to get a heart attack but when you are there you save there life alot . I like to work at places were i can take to people and i like it to cause when you have other jobs and people barely talk to you it is boring and at hospital you can go to other people's room and can say how was your day and talk with them and tell them how do they feel. That's why i want to work at the hospital to have fun with them take good care of them they would like me alot cause i used to be a person that tooked care of old people and i used to play with alot and made them to color with me . They also liked to play with me tag but i always ' said yes and they would be so happy and we only played for a little bit because they would get tired. I would like to write this to the manager/employee because i would like to be making everyone feel good and not sick anymore. I would like to be in the news saying that i saved lots of people's live and that i was making them have much more life and i would like to be a doctor that people would like to go to and i would want everyone to come to me or make a appointment if they are sick and i can cure it any day i want just with a hint of a tool that can help me .I would like to see the organs because lets say you havent seen a organ but you want to see it so bad. I that's why you should always choose to do surgery but sometimes' people faint cause they see the blood alot. some people would like to see other people's organs .thats' why i would like to become a doctor but sometimes some people don't want you to touch them cause sometimes they say you dont wash your hand . I would wash my hand's all the time and make them smell my hands so they can know that i washed them.

thats why always wash your hands.

That's a good choice cause you want to be healthy and always run never stop doing laps outside cause you would not be healthy just by staying inside eating all day . I would like to take good care of the people that are super sick cause it is nice to be a doctor you walk all around and see lots of people.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
F1AAB82CE621,"yes impression can be change based on your experiance or your attitude that you show to the people around you, we know everybody have a different impression, but in the different ways. you can be impression if you respect your self, be nice.

and to love other,example celebrity they do good things to impress us, after that they start have a impressoin to people, but if they acting badly to people they impressoin start finished, but if you be good or nice impressoin will come to you it not just to be famous that mean you gone have impressoin even if you not famous you can have impressoin, just you your kindness or help other nobody can,t take you impressoin or change it if you used it. in good ways, you can,t be impressoin if you fighting with people oall the time you can,t impressoin if you don't know how to talk nicely with people impression, person always is cool with people show people your impressoin prove it to them let thems see your impressoin because you can be success because of you impressoin nobody can't take you impression, nobody can't change exspect your self you are the only one can make your impressoin go away you can make people not to trust you but if you keep show tthem your good, impressoin in good way don't acting mean to other because you have impression, just you peole or the one you make that impression work to you...

impression c an't be change because i know if you have impressoin you impress people around you even older people friends in school your coworks you will impress them because of your impress but if you use you impressoin to make other feel bad that impressoin can be change based your ways you are acting impressoin it good many people wish to have impressoin because they can ipmress other's people with it person have have a impressoin can say anythings and people will still agree with that person even he say bad think if you have a impressoin and you use it in good ways you will be a king because of your impression impression is good sometime and bad because people will alway want you to do good things just remember you will face alots of attatoin because of impressoin that mean you need to be nice kind and careful because many people want to have a ipmressoin they need attatoin that why your impressoin can't be change based on your experiance or your attitude in same ways used your impressoin. as Gift because if you mess with it you will neverhave a impresssoin even celebrity they have too many attatoin bacause of the impressoin they have that wht people buy ticker to see them it because of the impressoin if you don'thave any impressoin nobody will buy a ticker to see you, used your impression in good ways it one chance you get use it as Gift many people need it, your impressoin can't be change if you don't use it in the right ways because impressoin it axample of famous if you have impressoin you are famous in same way ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
6B850987631D,"If schools offers students distance learning as an option, that student should take the offer. That's my opinion if a school ever offer me online school. If I would have chosen this offer, I would have 3 reason why I agree that offer. Student should always think first if a school offers you something.

My first reason is, student can take their time in the morning to wake up and take a shower. For example, if a student wakes up late to school, that student wouldn't have time to do stuff he/she planned in the morning. But online school, that student can wake up late and take their time what he/she planned in the morning. My second reason is that its less cheaper. In online school, students only need: a computer, notebook, and something to write with. Students also receive free food from their home. But in regular school, some student pay money to get food, and the supplies for each class can be expensive. My last reason is student sometime finish their online school early, and have the rest of the day to play games, or hang out with friends.

In conclusion, student should always pick the right decision, when it comes to a offer in school. I think online school is good for students. Why, because if a student that is having family problems, and missing school every day. They can take online school, so they don't fail a grade, or miss any important assignment.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
61992F84D5D1,"When you are a kid your parents tell you what your character is have to be they teaching you how you have to be they intent to help you to be a better person, for example they tell you what is wrong and what not, what you can do and what you can't do.

But when you are a big person you can choose whoever your character is gonna be, for example you choose what is wrong and what is good for you because you are big now and you can do your own decision. You're able to thing and get the responsibilities to choose your own character, and you are agree if you make a mistake your gonna take the consequences, because your choose to be like that.

So is not beyond our control because you thing how you wanna be for your life for the things you are learned before in the past and that is the things the changing you. is nothing out of control because you can choose your character, Examples if theres a man who needs help you can choose be a good person and help him or just let him there and thats make you a a bad person and when you needs help nobody is gonna help you.

The character is important in a person because the character make you who you are thats why you have the power to choose what your character is gonna be you cna choose how you wanna be a good person or bad person and thats the person you wanna be.

And you character is what make you the person you are and the people is ginna say that your are a good person or not depend the what your character choose and thats it the character it was make a person.

So thats what i said, i said we choose our own character traits. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
279245CFCCF4,"An Old Proverb Says Honesty Is The Best Policy

I agree about being honest at all times. Because thats how I was taught and even though I get in trouble, when Im honest it's better than lying. Because lying can get you in to worst trouble. If your always honest people can always trust you and who doesn't want to be trusted? My grandma always told me that when you do something bad or lie karma is going to bite you hard. But, sometimes your going to have to lie for an important reason like hurting someones feelings, I think its a horrible feeling to hurt someones feelings am I right?

However when your honest people will always respect you, like you, and honer you. For an example this has happened to me if your at school and your at lunch and everyone is supposed to be quiet and you and your friend start talking, a teacher calls both of you over and she said,""were you guys talking"" my friend said no and I said yes I was talking , and the teacher said, ""thank you for being honest you can go back and finish your lunch"" but, my friend got in trouble. See thats why its always good to be honest people will respect you more.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
CE43CDF8BAA4,"Social Media,Technology,and Education. The World around us is a beautiful place , but we do not take notice.

The smart phones play a vital role in today's society , it is the hobby of the century. The schools are now taking the advantage of the new technology , but along with the new use comes new problems.

Although, using the technology in schools becomes a faster way to learn , most schools are relying in the new invention of the century. Nevertheless, distraction in the schools will be a problem, also the students will be less perceptive in class because the students will fail to maintain self control over their devices and the results will be disastrous in their future.

To begin, the students in the school should have all the things they need to learn such as books, they should not rely on the devices to give them certain information. For example, the internet has a wide variety of information which could have a negative or a positive impact on the user , also the information in the web is very inaccurate which could lead to misunderstanding. This shows that the students could gain wrong information and could be getting a misconception in the topic , which could lead to failure in academics and to achieve nothing in their future careers. Clearly, the user have to make a wise decision between using an information in their cell phones that could possibly be wrong, or use a textbook that it is revised by many authorized teachers.

Further more, in today's society there is social media which is use to stay in touch with close family members who are far away. Cell phones are a great tool for anything , it is a mini computer. The students will be using their cell phones in social media to talk to friends instead of focusing on their task. For instance, if the school allowed such action, not only will be making a very poor decision but the school will earn a bad reputation from parents and even to the national level. This proves that it will not only hurt the kids academically but the school itself will have a downfall in popularity. Obviously, the teachers and staff will be unemployed by the county due to the lack of income from the state , teachers but not only students will be damaged by the decision that could be taken.

Overall, having the ability to own a cell phone is a privilege to have not a right , teachers and administrators should take away the device from the student if and only if the student is not cooperating, and return it at the end of the school day or simply not bring it to school. The devices were not made to harm others in many ways that people have tried .Social media plays a role too in the students it is like a temptation in their pockets , they always have to update their status in social media and text their friends and stay off task. In conclusion, Cell phones are a great way to study and do some homework and stay in touch with family members but in school is a learning place where it should stay like that and cell phones should not take that away.                                       ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.0
A83B38711F26,"Conserving energy and resources should not mean that children should go to school for only four day and 2 hours. Children are not going to be able to process what there laurning. Some children cant benefit from this. There are tomay people that need more help then others. People need the benefit of more school day. School is inportent to many people. We need them school day.

Conserving energy is a good thing for people but children need time for school, with not that much time for school we are going to have a lot of people failing or droping out. Children like school because out side of school, they dont have nothing and school is the way out of having nothing but they make the best of it. Them people that dont have notheing make something out thim safes from school like sports. People that play sports need school too. How are they going to play if there grads are bad or they need to stay after school to practs. They need it more because there trying to reach to the NFL and not that much people can do it. Poeple are just trying to make it throw or other people that just dont care.

Two hours, you are not going to laurn nothing, time is most inportant to many people. People will need more then 2 hours. Teachers most inportint need more time to work. Theres not even going to get payed will they need more time. How are they going to pay there bills. People need to under stand that people have inpront thing to pay. People need to thank about other people not just them selfs.

Time people need it,but we need more, we dont need less. Poeple are happy how they are right know. The time is most inportent to people. Conserving energy and reources are very inportent but just to go to school just four day and two hours i dont beleave its that inportent.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
B7468C4DD17C,"Students wouldn't benefit from attending to classes at home. Schools offer different options that distance learning does not. It's a good opportunity to attend regular classes. Everyone can learn in different ways but a better option it's by attending normal classes. People have the option to choose whith what they feel comfortable. Attending to regular classes gives the opportunity to pick their own classes. We can have many benefits by this. If students attend to regular schools they have the opportunity to meet new people, to participate at clubs and they have the chance to talk and get help from teachers.

Students who attend normal schools have the opportunity to meet new people. Not everyone likes to be anti-social and to be alone without not knowing others. Sometimes is great to have a person that we can tell everything. By going to school, we have the chance to talk to a thousand of people and to make new friends. Once Generic_Name got the options to pick home school or to attend to normal classes. She chose to do classes at home. She was happy for the idea that she has not to wake up early. For the first couple of weeks everything was fine. She was getting use to it. One day she realized that she has no friends; she feels alone. Generic_Name when to talk to her mom about the way she was feeling. Her mom told her that if she weren't pick to stay at home and doing distance learning; she weren't to feel that way. Generic_Name thought about what her mom told her and she decide that the best option was attend to normal classes at school. If we attend to regular classes, we are not going to feel alone and we can make new friends.

Schools provides the chance to participate at clubs. While distance learning don't have activities or clubs for students to do. Public schools have different kind of activities or clubs that they can enjoy. Activities and clubs are a good way to help and to prepare students for the future. They have the option to enjoy a team from their preference. For example, a person who like football. They might like to form part of the football team and that's what normal schools provides. If this person form part of a football team; he can get scholarships to participate in big leagues. From clubs students can get an idea of what career they want to get in the future, to discover new things, and to get experience from this different activities.

Other might argue that distance learning gives students time for their jobs, they can avoid being getting in trouble and they can take care of their youngest siblings while they are at home. However, people by attending to classes have the chance to get help from teachers. It's a reality that not everyone is capable to understand easily. Sometimes we need a push or help from others who knows about the things we don't. The awesome thing about normal schools is that teachers stay a little longer after school to help with hard work. To pay attention during classes can be hard because of other classmates are making noise or it's really hard to understand. Teachers talk about our grades and gives us advices to improve them. Talking to teachers helps to understand because they give us a deeply explanation.

At school people have the chance to make new friends, to have the oppoortunity to try new activities and to improve academically with the help of teachers. Some people can be in disagreement with public schools, but they have on mind that sometimes it can be a better option. School it's a good way to get out of home for at least some hours. Not everyone likes to being at home for the whole day. At school we can have fun with our friends, lunch time is unique and that is something the distance learning don't offer. Activities after school are a good way to keep people out of trouble. To help them to choose a good path. School have a variety of ways to have fun, not just by playing, also by learning. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
7E48A7A7B400,"When I was in elementary school, I've always wanted to have art lessons. Art is the lesson that I would like to share with elementary school students because it could help them in several different ways.

The first way art would help the students is by making them more patient. When you are doing art and using paints, sometimes you have to wait until it dries so you can add more details and etc, that is one way that art can help them be more patient. You have to be patient when you are making realistic drawings, because if you draw fast you might forget to add important details and the drawing may not come out as good as it would if you had drawn it with patience. Another way that it helps the students being patient is that they also sometimes might have to redraw it if the drawing does not come out as good as they thought it would, and that requires patience, especially if make a mistake when you are about to finish it. And also, when they are working in groups they might have to explain for the rest of the group what are their ideas and how they want to do the project, which also requires patience.

The second way art would be important to students is by making them more creative. When you are making art you have to be creative and think a lot. Being creative wouldn't only help them at school, it would also help their future. For example, if the student dream about their future, then it would help them to think more and be creative about what they want to do. Being creative would help them in several ways.

And lastly, art would help them be focused. When you are drawing you have to focus on what you are doing. If you lose the smallest bit of focus, you can make a mistake and might have to do everything again. Being a more focused person would also help them in life. And also, they woul need to focus in the directions when doing their work.

In conclusion, art would be helpful in several ways, It would help them to be a patient, creative, and focused person. Art would help them in life and school. It would help their future. This is why I would like to share this lesson with them.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
BE68C5AB58A1,"Having you wonder why people able to accomplish so much just in few days? Today society people always works so much they miss out their opportunity in life. Although some might argue that, it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose, actually it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful and you gain experience.

It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something can lead to successful. Thomas Jefferson say it is always good do something. For example,My uncle when my came to united States he always do somethings with his hand such as construction and fix people car my uncle always doing somethings new if thous wasn't good them but tried able to accomplish them as such files tax for people he was able accomplish them.

My uncle now files tax people get pay a lots;

when people do not know how files tax they came to him files for them by that he was successful because he accomplish more if always doing somethings now he has own company where people work for him. He always advisory worker in order for you to successful always do somethings new. This show that it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something. Another example, it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing lead successful for example,Bill Gate who always doing somethings he was the first person to create Microsoft.

Bill Gate like always like do somethings with computer. He was successful because he always like to do somethings

Bill Gate was rich man on the whole world today because he always do somethings build computer. This show that it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful

It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience. for example, my brother who was doing somethings he able to accomplish more things. The first my brother do his internship how to construction wasn't good at all but he was also keep doing it instill he was able accomplish it now he know to how to fix roof and many more things he is expert construction build. This that It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience. Another example I wasn't good at Algebra at all I was fail the class also Got F on classwork and test to

I decide to stay after with teacher start practical math question I understand little by little but the first take my math test able pass test got B on the test my first every to got B on math. I use thought that wasn't at my math class but always do somethings in my class able to gain experience in class. This show that

It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you gain experience.

The other side claim that it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose, because you can be more wise about around you however it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned for example, when my mom came to American she did not know how to speak English. She always practical how to read in English and write English. She was able to accomplish that because she always somethings with English leaned how speak English. This show that is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned.

Another example It is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something you can learned . Always doing something you can learned from it for example I did not know how to cook anythings any time put dish on fire never come out good but when always keep cook it start to turnout good I was able accomplish always something new with my dish.

Finally it is better to accomplish more if we are always doing something because can lead successful and you gain experience. Although some might argue that, it is better to does inactivity also serve a purpose they are wrongs. Never stop trying something new in life it will turn out be more successful then you never to be expected.  ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
F093FCEEC17E,"How does technology impact our life in a positive way? Some people argue; that technology is creating a division between us. I believe the appropriate use of technology does not divide, or limit human contact. If we give a good use to it, we will have great benefits. Besides, technology improves communication skills, helps parents, and facilitate jobs.

Research has proved that technology has been a useful tool for communication skills. This is shown in the facility that we have now at making a call, or video call to another country. It has improve communication for people who are speechless, defeat or just shy. All of them has problem at talking or listening, but with technology this is getting over. And they are interacting in certain way with other people. To sum up, technology is improving communication in different ways.

Parents always have many things to do. Passing time with their children is not easy; however, technology is making easier it. Now parents can work from home; this is giving them the opportunities to share more time in family. Also, for parents that work out new machines are helping them to finish quickly. Although, new phones schedule appointments and others for them, in order to be organize. In resume technology is giving the opportunities to spend time in family to parents.

In centuries before how many time does a writer spend writing a book? Technology has being a helpful tool for years; long time ago a writer spend one year writing a book by hand, now they just spend 3 to 4 months writing a book in a computer. New technology give us a lot of opportunities like:

We do not work all days, We get a good pay, and We do not work in the sun shy. In resume, technology is facilitate our life.

In conclusion, technology is a wonderful tool that let us develop our communication skills, unify families, and makes easier our jobs. People who does not have skill of listing or talking; they can still communicate their selves. families now are more unify. Jobs now are more easy. I believe technology is having a good effect for those who use it appropiately.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
14EE006078C4,"Some student can learn to attend classes from home. And I think it's a great way to learn if you want some good grades. If I wanted to learned; I would stayed at school or watch a video to how to English, biology, or what classes do I chose from. But online or video conferencing are very different. online can be probably a website, YouTube, (Example like be able watch how to do math) or other. video conferencing is probably like a chat room or some video live.

Online is a great way to learn because I use on homework, essay, Google, YouTube, and other website. And here an of example. If I wanted how make a cake and when I used online website. It bring the website how to bake a cake. And there simple as that. But sometime if I ever get like a hard assignment and I checked it online, and it gave me the wrong answer, then sometimes the website can't be everything right. But I go ahead and tried other website to see if there a correct answered.

Now let say that I had to studied a lion. I can go online to checked in Google and it bring me to whole bunch of website, and click one of those website to see if there a way to studied some lion or go to YubeTube to watch how scientist studied theses creatures.

Video conference is probably like talking to a teacher or maybe live chat. And the way I think of the video conferencing is not to bad. It like you're teacher or someone is teaching you, and its like simpler to school. If I wanted to do it, like if there a problem that I need to fix then I go to video conference so they can helped me and the question. But I think its a great idea to do it.

The way I see is online is a helpful and video conference is helpful too. But I think it like home school staying at home and studied online or video conference. So my reasons is it a way to learned fast, getting good grades, or other information that you need for the future. And here a other reason why to use online or video conference. Online is been update like a few times. For example lets say Google doc. Google doc has been one the greatest website that I ever used. In that website, you can do almost everything like book project, essay, making slide shows and other helpful tools. But video conference is pretty helpful too. And my example is like if I need help I can contact my fellow people to help me.

Finally the best way to learned is sometimes online for helpful website and video conference to contact if teacher or other can help me. But I likely used online because it pretty helpful because let say I forgot a textbook and my homework is due the next day. Well I can go online and check my answer if i got it right. And I sometime I always used online to see if how to bake a cake or other information that I need.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
CE2EC298670A,"I think that it a good that some schools offer distance learning for the students because some of them can't go to the regular schools and some of them are not able to finished one school and the distance learning offer a good idea for them. and is a very good experience. If can be a good apportunity for does who can't fiinish the school for example

Some of the students have kids and have to take care of them.

Another reason is that the students does not have the support of their family and they have to work for them self.

Also the family of the students can not affords the students education.

The person who received the distance learning it an oldest person who does not finish the school and that person is trying to finished now for get a better job.

I think it good that some of schools offer distance learning. First some of the students that are taking the distance learning have kids and they need to take care of the kids. Next The students does not have their family support and they have to support them self and work. Also the families of the students can not affords the student education. And finally the person or students that received the distance learning it an oldest person who does not finish the school and is tying to finish now to get a better job. because with a better job they can support the baby they have and the things they want to finish up.

First some of the students that are taking the distance learning have kids and they need to take care of them. Also the students a girl or boy get a pregnancy when they go to school and they had to leak of school for the baby. Also the parents make them to work because they have to support a baby. And some moms have to leak school because the other parent of the kid does not take care of the baby when she was pregnant. Study in the distance learning program they want work in the day and in the night they cant received classes.

Next another good reason is that the students does not have the support of their families and have to work for them self. Some of the kids are immigrants and they doesn't have their parents in this country. And also the student have to work and maintain by them self. The students have to work and go to school .But sometime get difficult for them and the time it not always log as they want to do many things at the day. And it better to have a option .Because with that option that can still working and receiving a good education.

Also another reason is that the families of the students can not affords the students education. And they try to do another thing for them like the parent can buy a computer. And with that the student can received the classes online or in the distance learning. But some of them use their phone to received their classes. Also some of them like to study but their parents cant not affords the school and they try to do anything to get a good education and a better future. Because that is going to help them to be able to have a family. And with that they prepare for the future.

The last reason that why is a good idea to get the distance learning is because some of the people that is getting the classes online are oldest people the they did not finish the school and now they're trying to finish the school .Because they want a better job and a better future for their family and their kids. Some of them did not finish the school and they now want to finished. They just want a opportunity to study and the distance learning give that opportunity to the old people that want to overcome. And that is a great help for the people that just want a better life a great future for them and their families. With that the people who is trying to finished the school can be prepare to have better opportunities of work. And also finished the school he or she can get a better job and be able to be with their kids. And don't leave their kids with another person many time. And spend more time with them.

In conclusion the distance learning education is a very good idea in my opinion. because the people that can not go to school because they have kids or the teenager that have a pregnancy when they were on the school. That give opportunity for the people with low income. The people that can afford their school. And also the people that does not have their family in this country. The people who work and study and does not have the time to go to a regular school. Classes in online is good for does that need to finish the school. For does that when they were in the school have some problems. Also is a good benefit for those that there time is not long as they want. The people of the distance learning have good opportunity for their future. And can be productive for the people who does not have a work because they did not finish the school. because have an education is important for this country and for all the people that want a good life and better opportunities of work. Finally the distance education is a good ideas because help people with the things they want and that they need too.    ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
C972C565A819,"Do you want to see a temple made with gold? I am not sure about you, but I want to see it.

It is in India (Generic_City). India is a country in Asia. It is the second most populated country in the world. Because of LOCATION_NAME I want to visit there, but this is not the only reason I want to meet my friends and family in India, and I want to enjoy the tasty food, and I also want to see LOCATION_NAME in Generic_City.

Firstly, the reason why I want to go to India is because my friends and my family lives there. India is my home country I grew and study there. Family and friends are important. I miss them all. I still remember my last day at school . Did you have that experience that you really like someone, but you have to leave them? It is not good when your family or friend leave you. Next, The problems I face when I come to U.S.A. I had some language problems. I do not want to go to school because I did not had any friends. To sum up, family and friends are important to make sure that you do not feel alone.

Secondly,I want to go to India because

I think Indian street stalls have tasty and spice food. One day, I was in front of super market and there was a burger stall called NFC they have the best burgers in the world. After, eating our burger my dad ask for bill and it was so cheep. I love that place if you visit India go and try that place. Finally, I love the taste of Indian street stalls and they are cheep.

Lastly, I want to learn how to dance because every one have their own thing, and I want to proof that if we are different that means we are unique. Secondly, I want to see LOCATION_NAME (Generic_City) and LOCATION_NAME (Generic_City) because it is something different and it is fun to take pictures. ""We all are different and that is beautiful."" To conclude, it is fun to see and learn new things.

To sum up, I want to visit India because I want to see my friends and family, and I want to taste the delicious food , and I want to see and learn new things. In future, where you want to visit? Think, if

you were on my place would you like to tell them about your country. If people say that,""Your country is not good.'' Then tell them that,'If something have some bad parts it also have something good, that makes it different.'' It can change how people think. ''I want you'' to find the good parts that can surprise them like I ask you have you seen a temple made with real gold?",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
840619A0CF0B,"Thomas Jefferson wrote,""Determine never to be idle...Its is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose?

The way you determine to do things is pushing yourself to do it, nobody gonna be there to tell you, when you gotta get your stuff done. We the people shouldn't be idle at all ,it would be boring ,not doing anything like just relax at home,and get fat on the couch,being lazy from time, to time isn't as bad. Also you want to have a break,so you won't stress out as much. Most people are determine to be inactivity and will get upset or,have a panic attack,health issues,It can affect your life to be honest ,and it sucks! that's how life is,it gets harder,and harder and you need to motivate yourself, makes your mind stronger. People who don't motivate themselves they got to at least try to get things done, and it never gets any easier....you just got to do it like this essay;I'm writing.

An inactivity does serve a purpose based on people who don't accomplish much by being lazy and not realizing how the situation can get worse instead of getting it done on time. People got to be always doing something ,and be well organized,it will also be wonderful too see people not being idle too always be doing something,so they would feel good about themselves and be like ""Yes! I did it!""and that way they won't have to deal with it anymore ,and move on with their day,just like anybody should. In order too always do something you should just look for something you like to do,to keep yourself busy like: playing soccer, working out ,rather not doing anything ,and just being on your phone on social media.

In my opinion being be responsible and accomplishing is a whole relief ,and taking your time getting stuff done can also help to focus.

For us kids our responsibility is to get good grades in school, and graduate,be successful in life to become better than what our parents were,or be a better person by being active and helping a church out .People sometimes need emotional support because everybody is different, everybody handles their attitude,or situations differently,and they might be going through something and it will affect their life. Taking a position of where I stand in school is me failing tests because,I don't study and I know,I should study but when I try too, I forget ,and forget the next day ,and I hate that, I know ,I can pass my tests ,and get better grades, if I studied this is one of my accomplishment I need to work on.

Thomas Jefferson wrote that because, he wants to motivate people to accomplish more by doing things and finding a job, and work hard,by being successful. Thomas Jefferson also did some things,He wrote the Deceleration Of Independence,he is one of the Founding Fathers and accomplished being our President.

There are lots of people in this world with different point of views of how they accomplish of always doing something,people try to plan out ideas to see what will work out for them, and help them think harder based on how they handle what works for them because,their is plenty of strategies in the world people can use to do something,what makes them feel more comfortable .It is very important for people to accomplish things that they need to do to get it off their hands and help each other out, if they need help ,and not stress about it but,most things you can't depend on someone being their,you got to do it on your own ,and if your stressing about it, you just got to relax your mind ,take yoga if you have too! but than again everybody is different and at least you need to try because,if you dont do that than where do you think your set of accomplishments is gonna go?.                                                                                                                                                 ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
1E4E4216EB39,"I believe that schools should not adopt to a four day work week each consisting of ten hours. ten hours of school in one day is too much for a student. not only is this too much time for a student, but it would interfere with sports and clubs that they do. on top of that some students also have jobs that they have during the day.

For some students sports and clubs mean so much to them. they might want that sport as a career. if student were to do the four day work week it would effect them physically and mentally. students might not even make it on time to that four oclock practice or that very important meeting because of the ten hours. being late, not getting much playing time in the sport you wanna exceed in, and worried about school work that you have to make up,and that could lead up to stress.

ten hours in school is a lot of time and that could be too much for a student, it can lead to stressing over too much work and being tired. ten hours can take out a lot of a students day and could interfere with there schedule. student also need free time, with the ten hours they wouldnt have much time because of school work, sports, and jobs. in addition ten hours of school work is just a lot of time, not all student would have that kind of energy to work for ten hours.

students have jobs after school and need money. therefore with these ten hours students wouldnt have much time to work because of school work and other activities. jobs are important to students because maybe parents dont give them everything they need for school. some students struggle with just there overall day schedule. ten hours would make it worse, and wouldnt be good for their heath.

in conclusion students care about sports and clubs, also sees that as a future career. including that ten hours takes too much time out of your day and that you dont have much free time for yourself, family, and friends. students care about jobs because they need money to help them out with school and other things. ten hours in school just wouldnt be right in a whole day when you can only do so much.             ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
4E13812BC1ED,"Meet new people and make new friends is fun. Having social relationships; is a good way to have a good community. Always, when we see new people that we are about to meet, we have first impressions- ideas, feelings or opinions about a person based on the superficial. For some people, first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, I disagree with this statement, because this can change by: introducing each other, know more about favorite things, and ask questions about their life, then our first impressions will change.

When a person is about to meet another person, they act differently as they are in their daily life, which is totally fine, because they are going to introduce each other and it will change. One day, when I was in my freshman year, I was really nervous and exciting at the same time, and this because I did not know anyone at the school, but I meet one girl; she was really kind and friendly. So, we introduce each other, and my first impression before introduce each other was, that she was serious and shy. The importance of this, is that our first impression can change after introducing each other, because we can have an idea of how the person is, based on their look or way to act, but this idea can be totally different after cross a few words each other.

Furthermore, a good way to change our impression is knowing more about the other person, know about their favorite things such as hobbies, sports, and others; putting this in practice it can change the way of thinking of both persons. In my way of thinking about the impressions, these can be bad or good impressions, and a personality is part of the impression because it shows the behavior of a people. So, it is important to know more about the person; about their personality and by this could have a clue about the personality of the person.

Finally, different person has a something important in their life, and that is what makes special to a person. For example, all my friends before they know me, they think that I look shy, calm and serious before they know me, but time later these impressions change for them. They told me now ""when we saw you for the first time, we though that you was so quite and serious"". And they said this, because they know more about me and about my life now, and they think that I am a fun friend and happy, so this is what makes me special, that I always look serious, but when the people know me, they think that I am friendly and happy. And I think that always, when we see a person that we never seem before, we should think to ask about their life, because details about their life can help us to change our way of view and think about the person.

Therefore, first impressions can change, they are not always accurate in the way of how the behavior of the people can be. We could think that people are as the way of their physical appearance, but that is completely wrong. In order to meet new people, we have to introduce each other, know more about them, and ask questions about their life, then we can have a clearly personality about the person. After this, our impressions would change to a positive or negative impressions. We should not trust in our first impressions about a person, we should meet the person and our first impressions will change. ",4.0,2.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
B9BA0955819D,"Is it possible for younger and older students to work together? Older students are smarter then younger students, because they have more experience then the younger students. Also the older students could help the younger students with their school work. Schools should have a program that Paris older students with younger students because they could help each other with school works, help them learn more about team work, and they could learn some viable things and give each other great advice when they need it.

How could older students help younger students with school work. Older students are smarter then younger students, whereas younger students could learn faster then older students. My older sister is really smart every time I ask for help she always helps me and she shows me how to solve the problems that I dont understand. After she shows me how to solve the problem I would understand the question and solve the other problems. That is how older students could help younger students with their work.

Older and younger students learning about team work together. Team work is something really important to learn about, because it could help you talk with more people, and you could get great ideas from other people. When older and younger students work as a team it could benefit them both with their team work and their project that they are working on together. One time I had to work with an older students with this project that I had to do. They were such a great help and they showed me how to start it and how to end it. They were so intelligent and they would tell me if I had done something wrong and how I should correct it. That is how older and younger students could learn more about team work together.

Older and younger students learning viable things and give each other great advice when one needs it. When I was in third grade I was going to have my first SOL, I was so nervous and scared about it. But then my older brother gave me great advice and that I should calm down and focus on it. He helped me to study for and he was a really big help. That is why older students can give you really good advice when you need it, and younger students too can give great advice. Therefor, older and younger students can teach each other viable things and give good advice to each other.

Schools should have a program that pairs older students with younger students, because they could give each other great advice and learn viable things from each other, And they could help each other with team work.

Also they could help each other with school work. Older students are sometimes wise when it comes to helping younger students, in other words they give great advice. Team work is something that we all need to learn about because its important to work with other people and hear their ideas. When you work with older students they will help you understand how to do the project or it could be the other way around it depends on the work that you are going to get or it depends on the students that you are working with. Older and younger students sometimes team up together for school work,

And they always help each other with it. Therefor, schools should have a program that Paris up older students with younger students.        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
1202062A4FA5,"Just like some businesses schools should adopted a four day school week with each day consisting of ten hours by making the school day two hours longer. To conserve energy and resources some businesses have adapted a four day work week with each day consisting of ten hours. Should this school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? After considering the benefits and disadvantages to a four day school week. Some believe that changing the school week to only four days is a bad idea because less school days means most work is not done and students will have extra time they don't need. Other people think a four day school week is an effective way of conserving students energy while keeping the same passe. People are still arguing about this issue. Schools should adopted a four day work week because students will be productive, It is healthy especially for students that work and have time for family and friends.

Four days of school week help students to be productive. To be productive you need two things energy and motivation. Most students have the motivation to work but they lake the energy therefor they need four day school week. By extending the school day two hours we can achieve the same amount of work by working only four days. For example one school day is consists of for classes and one class is one hour and forty five minuet long. When we extend the school day two hours long for four days it covers the same time. That helps us to use own time efficiently and increase productivity in the school.

Learning four days week also help students to be healthy specially for those who work on the regular days or weekends. People need enough amount of energy to get through the day without fatigue. The only natural and healthy way of get ride of fatigue is sleep. Many scientific studies says ""Kids and Teenagers need at list 9 hours of sleep!"" having four day of school day a week gives students one extra day of rest. It makes a big different and very important for students health.

The final reason we need a four day school week day is to give students time with there parents and friends. parents and students want to spent quality time together but they are not able to because some parents work on the weekends or the students work on weekends. Four days school week is the best solution to this problem. It gives students the attention that they need form there parents and spend some time with there friends.

If we can change the old school system by this new and effective four day school week days It will be beneficial in many ways not just for students but for teachers and parents. Students will be productive, health and they will have more time to spent with there family and friends.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
7382F8B16AAF,"Going to any parks is very fun, enjoyable, and exciting to always try their interesting activities.

People go to parks to have fun and able to enjoy their time with their loved ones. They go to a park to spend their time outdoors.

Community parks, state parks, and national parks provide a wide variety of interesting activities like enjoying the outdoors playing sports, kids can have fun playing, and you can also hangout with your friends.

Firstly, any parks has a lot of interesting activities that everyone can have fun and enjoy themselves, therefore they make sure that they have a lot of choices to do for example, you live near by the neighborhood park and the weather outside is beautiful, so you decide to call your friends and tell them to meet you at the park, so you guys can enjoy the weather while playing sports outdoor.

Secondly, parks is always a good place to bring children to have fun, enjoy themselves, and let them be free. Bringing your kids to the park is always a good choice therefore, they can go to the swings, sea saw, slides, and they can also go run around or you can also bring them to a amusement park where they can go on many rides. For example, Generic_Name is bringing her daughter and son to a water park, where the kids could enjoy themselves by going on a water slides or go swimming around the pool.

Lastly, park is the best place to go and hangout with your friends, where you can all talk freely, have fun, goof around, and mess around with. For example, Its summer so you and your group of friends decide to go to a amusement park so you guys can bond, enjoy yourselves, walk around, ride a lot roller coaster, and have fun before summer ends.

There are many different type of parks in the world, but all of them has one in common and that is to make sure its enjoyable and fun for everyone to enjoy with their friends and family.              ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
38AB1DF25E7F,"Does a positive attitude is the key for success in life? Do you think is True or False.

First of all, Everyone have to have a positive attitude. Just imagine; a world without positive attitude, The world that we know will not be the same. Then, we'll have angry people everywhere. For example, there will not be sensible people at your Job, at the Mall, at the Store, even on your own home. The Virginia State University made an survey about if,

"" Is positve attitude is the key to success in life"" the 95% said Yes and the 5% said No. So do we need positive attitude to success in life, the answer is Yes. Back to My question ""Do you think is True or False"" is True, You need positive attitude if you want to success in life. I agree that we need positive attitude but not just in life, we need to success on everything. In conclusion everyone need a good attitude in life to succeed.

I know that I didn't pass My Test but I did My best. I am not good at writing how you see here. I can't write paragraf.

Thanks for your time have a nice day. :)",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
1F217579A773,"Imagine if you go to school for more than eight hours? When I was in my country we were going to school at twelve and we were dismiss at five afternoon. I disagree that school should be more than eight hours because teachers can not manage their time, all staff will get tired, and some student have to take care of their family.

Teachers can not manage their time. For example, my math teacher Generic_Name he has another job he won't be able to manage his time between teaching the student and the other job. On the other hand, most teachers have kids and they send kids to baby care and they pay money. For example, my science teacher Generic_Name she was not able to stay after school because she has kids. Imagine you have make up work that needs to be done but your teacher is busy?

All staff will get tired. Imagine teachers, students, and people who in the cafeteria how they get tired if we make this decision? For example, I feel bad about the people who clean the cafeteria each day. All teachers will have hard time to explain to the student. For instance, I have my cousin he lives in Turkey. Their classes is about two hours and half. My cousin told me I have hard time to understand the teacher on the end of the class because he get tired.

Some Student have to take care about their family. For example, When I came from Iraq my mother had heart problem so I have to take care of her each day. My mother she was not able to cook and stand I was responsible to do that. However, when I was in my country I was responsible about my nephews as well.

Some say extending school hours is hopeful for student. They are wrong because some student don't like school so they will drop out. Some say student will have finish the school early. They are wrong student will be rushing and not able to get the lesson from first time.

Positives. Negatives. In conclusion, I hope that Generic_Name disagree this decision because student like to have fun more than studying. Also I hope all states of America will disagree on this decision.

Sincerely

Generic_Name         ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
6E90DC70B7A9,"I am not agree with those educators that say, the summer break is too long and the students can't retain imformation as easily when they return in the fall. The summer break is made to a students's benefit, it help the students as a relajation during the summer. The students have to spend time with their family a lot as possible they can. Some of them need to make money, and they take the summer break to make it. That is why I am not agree the educators that does't wants the summer break long.

One reason,the students are in the school almost a whole year, and all that time they are stressed by all the work they have to do in the school. Caming the summer break the students wait it with antusiasm, and work hard to finish the school's work and enjoy summer break, it help them as a relajation after a school's stress, they have to forget the school by a mommet, and relax their brains. Second reason, during the school's time the students does't have a lot of time to spend with their family, and the summer break is a good time of the year to spend it with their dear, persons, friends, classmate, girlfriend, and family. After it, the students are more prepared to star the school's year concentred at what they have to focus in the school with a clean brain ,and do all the school's work. Third reason, some students have some obligations in their homes, for example some of those are: pay cellphone, pay room, buy food, and pay car, so some student take advantages of the summer break to make some money to helps them to pay all their obligations in their homes, and don't take the school's time to spend it in other obligations, and take their time just to teh schools. Finally, the student does't need the summer break shorter, they have a lot of things to do during the summer break, and it would't be justly to them, I am againt to the educators that feel the summer break is too long.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
4758405809B3,"Is it hard to be yourself on a world that is trying to make you something else?, think about it?, we live on this world, trying to be like everyone else, instead of just being yourself and live happy. In this paper i will argue of how the world is trying to change us day by day, how we get influence by it and end up changing, and how every year that goes by our generation gets worst and worst.

The world is everyday is trying to find a way to make us change, we as humans have stop, and think, what we want for our future? why would i want to be like everyone else? Do i want to be a wealthy person in this society? Do i want to accomplish all my goals?, those are the types of question that we should ask our self, and think deeply, were will we end up on the future following the steps of the rest of the world?, because in this world, if you want successful, you have to be yourself, the world is not going to do it for you.

We get very influence by world, on activities, the way we talk, the way that we dress, the clothes that we use, our religion, and a lot of stuff that if we dont like, or we dont do, we are not cool for the world. A good example is the clothes that we use, if we dont us the clothes and shoes that are trending or popular right now we are not cool for the society, and maybe the reason why we dont use it because, you dont have money, or you dont have time or access to buy or simply you just dont like it, and for the world that means your not cool or cute, because, you dont us a certain clothes, and is shouldnt be like that, because, some people get bully by that and some even get to a depression because they cant afford any of that and is very sad to know that this world is like this.

Sadly, by every year that goes by, our generation get worst and worst, and the reason of that is the world. The world has influence us, in such a bad way that is sad, all the new drugs that are killing people, the war between countries, the new artist that are coming out that just sing about drugs, killing people and sex is of a very bad influence for our generation and sadly if we dont start being our own selves, and start the right stuff, eventually we are going to end up really bad.

some people say that this world is bad, and just gives us bad influence, but they are not right, because is not neccesarly the world, it could be us, letting ourselves get involved or influence in bad stuff,and then say that is the world fault, when is really your fault, for getting involved on bad stuff overall, in the future, i hope that this world changes, because we still have time to do it and is not impossible, i just hope that this generation that is coming up, have the courage to change the world and make it a good friendly world.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
1D1C40F5718C,"I agree because nothing in this world is easy once you know you have it and the realizing that it will never grow. For example doing something that i might regret doing or not thinking positively before doing something also scared of not being to reach my goal in life.

Second reason of why i do agree is because when you have that feeling that you feel good and confident about yourself you just know your doing great but then something inside you just wants to give up and throw everything away.

Third reason i feel like if i stay int the same bubble i will never grow out of it by being scared and not having positive feeling's toward's me. I just think it isn't easy as it looks to loose something and seeing the you won't grow from it. Lot's of people make mistake's that they regret and they wanna change that but they can't it's to late but it's never to late to try all over again until you grow out of that spot.

people just think giving up on things you like doing is easy to forget but it 's not because that's something you love doing and you've mastered doing in all your life you've kept that postive view in your mind people just give up when they realize that they can't continue that's how you will never grow by giving up it's hard to when you come to a point that you commited a bad thing and you regret doing you cant take it back but life is also giving us the chance to improve and forget about everything and continue to grow bigger from that small place you feel inside you never give up on anything just continue on what you feel confident on doingand be happy. It's like falling in love with someone you follow your dream right you just don't throw it out grow out of it and u will see.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
8A6FEEA6C0D3,"I think what Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote is true, because when all the people do their own self and become their own self. the chance for those people to become something else in this world is really high. They accomplishment to do greatest things in the world.

Many people in this world believe that becoming thier own self is better for them, because people would not have to deal with the negative minds that other people have, because by the way all the people have different minds and some people can have possitive minds but there is lot of people that have negative minds. People that decided they wanna become something else in this world with other people it would be really hard for them to become some else this world. The reason why it would be really hard for them is because they would have to deal with possive minds and negative minds. But the people that decided that they wanna because accomplish in be better in this world. Those people are the one's that decided to become their own, because they wont have to deal with no neggative minds they would just do what their head tells them to do without hearing negative minds and they just keep gone keep doing what they think would be the best for them.

People that decided that they wanna become their own, is for a reason they decided to do that becauuse they wanna become better people in the world, they wanna give their families a better life style, but the main thing is. They wanna be an example for their kids, they wanna show their kids that no matter what if they keep their head up and keep and possitive minds. They would be able to accomplish anything in life, but they would show their kids that become their own thins, it is not just become their own things, all that have work and dicipline, but the main thing is always keep their minds possitve. people that become their own after they make a family they would start showing thei kids to become their own since a young age. they would show their kids the work and decipline it takes to become their own self. When lot of people dont think the same way but each people have their minds set.

I think at this point in life and in the whole world. The people that should start thiking about if they wanna become their own is. All the people that is about to graduated High School. the people that is at the age of 17 and 18 years should be ones that start thinking about that. because all those people about to get until the real world and they gone see what real is, in the real world. people never know the obstacles that life can put on you as soon as you get in the real world. Life would might put you hella obstacles just for you to realize and see what you doing, so those kids that are about to graduated high school they need to do their best so they can go throught all the obstacles that life would put on them in the journey for them to make it all the way to the up to their dreams.

All this it comes to the people that they wanna become their self. They would have to keep mind possive and think it would not be easy at all, but doing hard work and always looking forward they would be able to do it. Everyone is this world can accomplish the greater things in this world and be better. All those people need is motivation and have their mind possitive to make it all the way up to their dreams. All hard work have pay off at the end, people would realize that all the hard work they did was something better life and when they look back at all the hard work they did. They would of their own self, they would be like all this n all the obstacles i had to go throught was for some better in my life and for a huge chance in me now i can said all the work i been done, it is finally acomplished.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
90978A2F8599,"1-24-2011

Dear principle,

Community service should be a job, not for students to perform. Requiring students to do that job is very difficult, especially during school days. Community service should be a job that the government should be giving to people who don't have jobs. Students should have their time in school and after school to learn and enjoy part of their life. Example, that of a person who comes back from school, tired and with a lot of homework to do. If he goes to do that service, he might not do all of his homework. And if he stays late to night to do it, he will not focus the next day. So that will hurt the student from both ways. As my position was stated to you to read, my advice to you is; at least help some students get our of this difficult service. And if the community needs some help as stated; take them in a specific day during school. But if it's everyday, community service jobs should be announced. That way students have some time and also learn community service during school.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
EFCC45260444,"Well on my opinion I think that the best accomplishment is when someone tell you to be your self, no need to act or being someone we are not, It's better when we can be our self on this world.

When someone act something they are not, they are kinda lie about how they really are, When we chose to be something we are not, It's the worse decision that we can do. But I know that every person think different to what others think. some think that act someone they are no is something better for the world. I totally disagree.

We need to stop thinking or worry what other people are going to say, we just need to worry about our self and for the people who accept how we are, with the people we can act how we really are and those people who don't judge are the best people in the world the best accomplishment a person can give is when they tell you that they accept you how you are and that we are unique, don't need to change to something we are not, that is the best accomplishment that someone can give to someone.

I don't agree with what Emerson's statement say because, we don't need to change to someone else. We can't let the world change how we are. I don't think the greastes accomplishment is to be in this world constantly trying to make us something else. The greastes accomplishment is that we show how we really are we all have something unique we need to be ourself in order to make the world better.

Being our self with someone it's kinda the best thing someone can experiment, being our self with a person is the greastes thing in the world, now and days most all the people can't be them self around other people some of them laugh at the people who act exactly how they are, some of them don't really care or pay attention to what others are doing, and I think that's how it should be. now and days we see a lot of things, people that are gay, transgender, people that are bisexual, homosexual, now we see all that for almost all the people in the world that is something normal but most of them is not. but they just acting how they really are but sometimes it can just be confusing.

Something that happened when I was 16 years old is that I had a friend that always was lying of how she really was, she used to said that she had a lot of money which wasn't true, she did have like the normal she was okay with what her parent had, she said that she was rich and all that, and because of that she make a lot of friends even that ones that were my friends stopped taking to me because i wasn't how they wanted me to be, they would tell me to go party with them, to drink, smoke and all that, my answer to all the was always no, so they stopped asking me, later on they find out that the new girl didn't have that much money as she said she had, the people who I thought that were my friends told me all that and the realize that acting something we are not is not always good being someone we are not, or telling people that we have something when is not true. We all have to be honest with each other.

That's why I always tell people be yourself no matter how hard it get, the best thing we can do it's to be our self, people need to start accepting others how they really are, Don't need to be two faces, that is how we saying now in days. Now in days most of people would wear say whatever they want,

most of the people don't care anymore they just focus on what they are doing no in what the others are doing.

When you show to someone else how you really are is because most of the time, we felt comfortable with that person.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
10DA9316D02D,"This program helps students to learn new things,helps older students to mature of teaching and taking it seriously,and helps younger students to socialize with new people and to communicate,and prepares the older students to prepare lessons and teach and be more organized,it can also help older and younger students to learn new different skills and learn different ways.

The first best thing about having programs for younger and older students is for the younger students can learn new things. I think it's best to teach young people to learn new things because it can prepare them in the future. I think that the program can help the younger students for they can learn interesting new things and for they can decide what they want to be in the future. If the younger students get help from the older students to learn new things it's good because for they can use that information and teach other kids what they have learn from the older students. I think this program can help many other young students to learn new things from the older students because it's a better way for the students for can use what they have learn and use it for something for their future life like for example math they can use that for paying taxes and bills I think that this program can help students learn new things.

The second, thing that is good about this program,is the older kids can mature from teaching younger students and learn how to be more thinkable about what to teach and how to teach something. I think that this program is good because the older student learn how to focus more on what they are able to teach the younger students. The reason why I think the program is a good learning resource is because when the older students know more things than the younger students they can decide what do they need help on learning what should I teach them and how do I teach the subject to them so it makes the older students more focus to how to know how teach a younger students and the best way to help them. It helps older students because they can think in a better way and to make them feel more grown up teaching someone that is younger than them. This program helps older students because it makes them think more harder and it also teaches the older students how to think more ideas and thin what happens if they teach that, or well this lesson help them, and makes them ask questions to themselves.

The third reason, how this program can help younger students, is because the younger students can communicate more to new people they don't know. I think that this program helps younger students to communicate more is because if they talk to more new people that are helping them they well be less shy and it well make it less difficult for them to be shy to talking to someone new. I think that this program helps younger student to learn better to communicate is because they can get more confidence, and not be scared to talk in front of someone new and different. I think that this program dose help younger students with communication because when they talk to someone new they can feel more comfortable talking to more people and be more social. This program helps younger people to communicate because when they talk to someone it can help them to be less scared to like present projects and talk to a crowd.

The fourth reason, why this program helps older students to prepare for lessons and be like a more organized,thinkable person. I think that this program dose help older students be more organized is because they think what they are gonna teach them and what the younger students are struggling on. I think that this program dose help a lot of certain older students be organized because they think what time,and day,where they are gonna teach the lessons to the younger students. I think that this program dose really help the older students to be organized cause it makes them more prepare what they are gonna teach and how they are gonna teach it so basically, the older students think were to put what. Why I think that this program dose help older students to be more organized because they plan everything in order.

The last,reason why I think this program is great is because it helps both younger and older students to help each other and to improve there learning skills. I think this program dose help both young and older students because if they all work together and help each other it can make a difference on helping and making people learn in a way certain way an easier way. I think that this program dose help younger and older students cause they can both share their learning skills how they learn things and shares ideas. I think this program helps because all the younger students and older students teach each other things and help them get better at something they are having trouble at doing. I think this program dose help cause it helps every students to learn a easy way to learn in different ways like flashcards,reading something over and over again,watching turturiols videos on how to do a equation or math so this program helps to find the best skill for you. It helps for all the students for they can learn faster and easier and help others find their best learning skill to focus on what they are learning.

It helps both older students and younger students to improve there learning skills and it's a good program to learn new interesting things to help students for the future.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
CE43DBA12965,"The growth of technology has made it convenient for people to use anywhere and any time. Technology has made it easier for people to do online education, jobs, and shopping. People are now in favor of this technology growth.

First, online education has made it easier for students to study at home without worrying about how they are going to get to school. I'm in favor of the online education because it made it easier for me to take my online classes at home and I can do my assignment any time I want to do it. The online education is also convenient for students in colleges; most of the students in colleges study at home because they don't have to worry about transportation, nor the gas money for their car. My brother is in college and where he lives they get a lot of snow in the winter, so it make it hard for to go to college. Now he does not have to worry about the weather because he can study for his classes online.

Second, most people are now doing online jobs because the grown of technology. In my opinion the most popular online job is to be a you tuber; a lot of you tubers film their lives and put on the internet then the get money of it. One of my friend is a you tuber and he gets decent amount of money just form putting videos of him self on the internet. The way YouTube work is the you tuber up lodes a video on YouTube and if he gets a lot of views then he gets a lot of money. Another online risky job is buying and selling in stocks. One time I bought an online stock form the company Tesla and it was really good price, after three months I sold the stock double the amount that I bought it in the first time. When people buy stocks from other company is like having a percentage of the company that buyer own. The risky part about it is people never now when the stock will go up or down.

Third, online shopping has made it convent for people to order everything online. The most popular online delivery is Amazon; Amazon made people lives so much easier by having everything delivered to their houses. When I order online I always order from Amazon this company has everything I need for me and for my family. Amazon also has fresh grocery that they deliver it for the costumers in the same day that they order it. In these modern days other stores are now delivering online, so people can buy their needs while they are at home.

Although technology has made people lazy and decreased the communication between humans, but it made easier for student to do their homework, it made it easier for people to make money while they are at home, and it made easier for those people who don't like to do grocery shopping in the stores.

In conclusion the growth of technology has helped a lot of people with their lives including student and online workers. All people are in favor of this amazing growth of technology because it has helped them to make their lives easier. I think that people are going to proceed with growth of the technology because it's making people lives run smoothly.            ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
2EEB160A4BD1,"85% of people think that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. It has been said that people who have a great attitude have more opportunity to sucess in life than people who have a negative attitude. However, some people may think that a good attitude is not always necessary because there are job that doesn't required a positive attitude. Having a good attitude can help you to find a job, make new friends and help you to archieve your goals.

For example, it can help you to find a job and if your job required to comunicate with others people your attitude will make people to like you, also your manager will like how you work and how you treat the costumers. Furthermore, your attitude can make you the best employer in your job and help you to find a better job.

In addition, a good attitude can make you find new friends and they will always want to talk to you or be all the time with you even if they don't feel good they know you can make them happy because you have a positive attitude that they like. More over, you could only have friends that have a great attitude like yours because people that have a negative attitude would not like to have you as a friend because you are always happy.

To archieve your goals you may need to have a good attitude because when you don't feel good and you don't want to continue trying your attitude will help you to never give up and continue trying until you archieve your goals. When I don't want to continue in high school and I just want to get a job I like to have a good attitude and think about my goals and how far I'm right now and that help me to make me happy and to not give up.

In other words, your attitude is really important in your life not everyone has a good attitude and not everyone think that attitude is important, but a great attitude can help you with many things like to make good decisions, to be a better person, and to make people love you.                ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
FE14D7378CFB,"Do you agree or disagree about imagination being more important than knowledge ? I believe its important to get peoples opinions on this question because i think Albert Einstein would be curious about what people think.

Once they have chose what they chose they could talk about it, give each other some details, also communicate with another, ask questions on to why they chose what they chose.

I disagree wit Albert Einstein because imagination is something you imagine in your head or dreams it can be real only sometimes. I agree with knowledge because it happens in real life and when you do something you have the knowledge to know it right away. Students use their knowledge in school to learn about English.

In school i use my knowledge by reading books and by reading i can understand what the book is talking about and i will know how i will write a short summary of the book. My second detail is i can use my knowledge in soccer because i can learn new skills and read a book all about soccer and i can understand that i can use my knowledge by knowing what reading is. Imagination wouldnt be more important than knowledge because the things that you will imagine probably wont come to real life. Imagination isnt a smart way to use the word important because it wont really help students, maybe even adults. Knowledge i know that its a smart way to say important because it does help students in school, sports, maybe even with some decisions they will make in life.

Albert Einstein probably asked us to agree or disagree with him because he wants to know what are thoughts are and would want students, adults, teachers to communicate with each other and talk about why they agreed or disagreed with him.

In my conclusion i think students can succed in life using knowledge because its a smart decision to make in life by just thinking if its a good or bad idea your knowledge could help make that good decision for you",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
88860671767F,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Distance learning students attend classes on time by online. Distance learning students also attend to school everyday. By way online you can attend to classes from anywhere.

First, distance learning students attend classes on time by online. In many states students live far from schools. Sometimes they can't be on time because of highway traffic. Sometimes cause of bad weather you have to drive slow than speed limit. And you can be late for school. If they late in every first classes they might fail that classes. Suppose they use the online conferencing they can be on time in every classes.

Also, attend to school everyday. Even if you sick for a week you still able to attend to school everyday by way of online or video conferencing. If weather is such a bad you can't go out of the house still able to attend classes from home. Although none is home to drop you off to the school. You can attend school by way of online or video conferencing.

Then, By way online you can attend to classes from anywhere. You can join to the class even if you go to your friends house. Also if you plan to go out the state for few days you can attend to classes from there. Students can enjoy also they can study. They're able to work in online.

In conclusion, for online or video conferencing students doesn't need to worry about there attended. Distance learning students attend classes on time by online. Distance learning students also attend to school everyday. By way online you can attend to classes from anywhere.

I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
73D2B941F40F,"Would students benefit from being able to attend classes for home? In my opinion that wouldn't be a good idea but also be a great idea. School should allow students to decide if they wanna attend at their school, home, or both. Anyways it's a good idea that some school allow their kids to attend classes from their own house.

Allowing students to attend classes from school is good idea. That's giving the students time to do there work and to learn whenever. Students could sleep one or two more hours in. Most kids either play sports, have a job, or maybe both. They won't get much sleep then they will be tired the next morning. If we could have classes at home students wouldn't have to worry about sleeping in class and getting yelled at by the teacher. Most students wanna be home school because they either get bullied, tired of getting in trouble, but mostly students these days wanna graduation early.

If we also had classes at home more kids will be more safer than at school since what's happening right now in 2018. students wouldn't have to deal with getting suspend or expelled because most kids these days get that. School wouldnt have to deal with drugs, gang violence, or anything that's harmful to the school. Then school drama wouldn't happen a lot in school if we could just be home. It will also be a great idea if we could attend classes from school and at home.

It wouldn't be a good idea because most students wouldn't do anything or make someone else do it. Some students like to be teach in person and if they were at home then they can't learn at all. some students are just too lazy. What about gym and other non core classes? We could have a time when they gotta start there class and if they don't sign in then they get mark absence. If they have a non core class then they can just go to school to take it but most classes you could probably take online.

I hope you think about changing school to allow students to take classes at home, or allowing them to take some at home, or both. Thank you for reading my paper hopeful you thought about everything and how it could change everyone problem. have a wonderful day!",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
762839543BFC,"In the quote, Thomas Jeff er son take about determine will never to be idle and wonderful to be if all of come to and accomplish many thing come to one people and serve purpose in you life.

IN my point of view, Thomas Jefferson tray to say if all of the colonies come and vote if they wont to stay with under grate British control or come join to fight for Avery freedom. bay the way do not frogat we blood for British we die for British we won France Indian and war in the end what the king do take all new land control if we can not go in the new land because kings and they friends or nobles can go to the new land. then way we have to pay tax to a king who do not care about his people in the colonies,But only care about money and power he wont then. what you wont no one say nothing then

Jones watches say if we do not fight we living a life like slaves,

we do not say thing Avery child and wife and bread a very house take Avery food and money. or be kill my British because they think all of as are traders they duty to kill as all for they king. but what about in sad woman and child will die because we do not come to fight for freedom and Justice labile or if you die for freedom you die a man not a slaves.

and what Thomas Jefferson books he write or the words in but on newspaper. open American eye and think that right we do not have to list to king anymore because we a

American and we have demarcation we vote for Avery leader in the end

Thomas Jefferson and Jones watches and they great people in end one man can not hand wide of the earth to gad come groups we can to anything.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
58EF6CAF956B,"Do you want to know the reason why it is important to have someone who can share wisdom and experience with you? Well, I know there are a lot of reason. The benefit of having someone who shared wisdom and experience with you is that, people will show new things, you will get an opportunity to learn new things, and you won't feel like you are the only one who is experiencing this.

When my friend shared how she overcome being alone, because she couldn't speak English well, I realize that I can overcome being alone too. It was hard for me to talk with the other kids, because I was afraid that they will laugh at me, because I couldn't speak well, and then my friend says ""try to talk with them, otherwise you won't be able to speak with them,"". After that, she told me If I want to communicate, I need to be confident. Like that, She shared her experience.

The another benefit is that you can learn new things from the person who shared their wisdom to you. When they tell you about their experience, you will gain strength from it and you won't be afraid to do new things. When the people who tell you about their experience see you doing new things, they will support you, so that your experience will be memorable.

There are times when you feel like you are the only one who is experiencing this, but when someone tells you about their story, you will feel that you are not the only one who is feeling like this. When they shared their story, you will gain an opportunity to make new friend. You two will share your feeling about the experience and become closer. On the other hand, the funny and the sad stories will make you two have fun while you talk.

Since you know that there are a lot of reasons to share your experience, I wish you could use them to share your wisdom in the future. Don't you think it is the time for you to seek and ask other people's experience?                  ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
0CB1237268E3,"A positive attitude is the key to success, and everyone should agree at this point. People who choose to be in a successful way, always try to be positive toward every situation. Every person in this world wants to be something that could be remembered forever. To get to what they want to and dream about to achieve it, they must need to work hard, be prepared for everything, and always should be prepared for things that might be impossible to do but never give up on it at any issue. Life gets hard sometimes and gets easy by the time, but it depends on what people choose to live with. Those who choose to live happily works hard, always have positive attitude toward everything. But those who want to be successful but not working enough on it it will get nothing from it. people like ""George Washington""

who are still our heroes are the ones who knew how to get through tough ways by a positive attitude. We all have different habits, we are all different, but we can change the world through our positiveness, not by being mean and not pretend to be working hard for our needs and wants. Positive attitude the something that helps us get ride of our daily problems, doing something in a good way makes is a way to our goal becoming true with no tension. If we want to make our dream come true we have to make it in a good and positive way without hurting anyone, and by loving everyone. the only thing everyone absolutely have to know is that a positive attitude and thinking positive is the way we could get ride of our bad habits and live live in peace. We can't make it through our hard times if we just sit there and don't do what we should to ourselves and other needy people. We all have to be patient, not everyone gets stuff so easily, to achieve something it takes time but we all have to be prepared for things we will face. We might won't make it through in our first try,

but we should never quit trying. Everything takes times and have it's own limit to get fixed. There are two things that are above all else, one is work hard, and the second one is work hard in silence but in a positive and a good way. positive attitude is the important thing in our daily life. It's not that we have to be 100% so we could get all we want, we all know not everyone in this world is perfect so we have to do things by what we really could do, the only thing that would help us in everything is positive attitude. Nowadays everyone think they could do everything without trying the best they could, and try it in a positive way, but i think they are wrong. If you want to get the same respect s everyone else you need to have a positive mind toward every different thing in this world. Whenever things keep goes wrong we need to ask our selves that are we doing what we suppose to do, are we being what our parents and our country taught us to be, so that way we could stop thing to go from right to wrong and stay positive in every way. before we start to do something new we need to ask someone that is experienced, so we will not get lost in the middle. Never give up on anything in this world things are not hard, we are the ones who makes them difficult to do. We are not pot in this world for keep quitting things to get to our goal, we are here alive to create change in world, to love people, to love the tradition, to keep doing positive and effective things for our generation and the upcoming generations. We are born to make people smile. We are not for hate, we are for love. We all should be trying to change the negative thought to a positive thought. When we have problem to solve, we need to think twice and think positive because that solution would defiantly impact others too. We should all try hard to be in a metier type place. In my opinion everyone should be thinking about how to be successful, how to be something better, how to make others feel better, and make them pot him/her as an idol. we all should always take responsibility for our action and consequences. If you want to be something memorable you have to be the change what others would like in you, and you are the one who could make it through hard and tough ways by a positive attitude. We are the ones who can change the world by just be different and make things easy and effective in a good and positive way. I know we do not want the world to go for hate and negative way instead of a positive and right way with full of benefits. If we want to work somewhere and we don't have control on our bad behavior and have negative attitude towards the boss and other workers we will not be successful, but if we do have control on our positive and negative attitude we will always be successful and always would get promotion in every place we are. Only a positive way could effect us to achieve our needs and wants. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
03CB73341E0E,"Do you think its a good idea to have somone make your decisions for you all the time? There is somthing you should know about having a person make decisions for you, and making decisions for yourself. I think making your own decision is the best way to solve life important problems, and I will tell you why I think so.

Making your own decisions is a sign of taking your life to the next level in many ways. Ways such as maturity, self confidence, determination, and intelligence. The reason why taking others advice all the time isnt good is because there is going to be a time where no one will be there for you when you make that life changing decision or in a situation where you have to make the decision right away. When you learn to follow your own instincts and learn to make your own decisions is the moment you can show others that you are a responsible for your actions, That you are a fully matured adult. At the end of the days its all about whats best for you and the people around, the people who depend on you.

Having somone make your decisions for you is a sign that you are not ready for the real world. Like I said before, you will get to that specific point in your life when you are just going to have to make this important decision. Thats why its always important to learn to follow on what you think is right. Your dependents when you were a kid, always taught and told you what the best thing to do is. So when you get old enough to make decisions on your own, you know whats best for you. The times you should be taking advice from others is when you're a learning child. A child learning off examples from your parents or dependebles. The times when you should be making decisions for yourself is the times when you have learnt off these examples as a child from your dependents, now to grow up as an adult and do whats best for you. And the cycle continues. I think its more understandable when you put it that way.

In conclusion, self decision making shows you are a responsible adult in many ways. And most importanly shows you are ready for obsticles that will come in your way in the real life. depending on others just shows you still need people to make these decisions for you even though there will certainly be a time when there will be no one but you. And this will really hurt you if you dont start to take responsibility for yourself and your dependents. So yes, I think people should make there own decisions.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
F62B971B739E,"My plan is going to college and working after graduate .Then i will working for computer things make sure my job able good. But first time i need to do is graduate at Generic_School if you have more credit then you can finish high school to go college . You can working some where after school some where you can make money , But don't work a lot because you have school ,

Remember to do homework and work in school . Some student don't have money going to college that why they need working after school . I see a lot people have money to going the college because they lucky they parents take care of them . School is not cheap to pay that why a lot people don't want going to college. I fell sad for them to because they have the same problem with me they don't have money to pay for school , Some people need to move out when they going to college they have to pay bills .I think you can finish high school for three year it good . You can go working for first year, when are you finish high school, or you don't need to go the college right now, you can go college later. They don't care about the age. I see a lot older people still going the college . you can take online class to finish high school early during the summer time or evening. Then you can going to work like some hour , and you going home that is good deal to finish high school early . But also you still need to pay for summer school or evening that why you need to work and have money to pay for , That does't matter you want finish for four year high school or three year you still graduate . You need to find the job you really want to do , Because you plan is you choice you have to choose the right one , But i think that not bad idea because they tells you the good thing if you don't want to hear is fine trust yourself                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
ED35A1FF5ACC,"Everything in life is enjoyable but we just have to find the fun in it by using our imagination. A test can be enjoyable because you can proof that you smarter than other people by getting a high score and thats fun and proof the people that they were wrong about you. Life is enjoyable because you have a lot of memories that happen since you were born until whatever age you are now but time is relative so don't stop having fun in life. Enjoyment can come from many things like getting a goal in a game, a hundred in a test, accomplishing something for the first time but there are many things that can bring joy in life. As you get older you learn new things, you get wiser but also you have more befits and disadvantages. For example, adults and older people have money and with money you can get things and spent it in anything you want and plus y'all can drive and go places and thats what people enjoy too. A huge disadvantage for adults is that they have to work for 8 or more hours but either way imagination never gets old but instead it gets newer. Adults and kids or teens however y'all want to call us but we are the same the only difference that we are younger but we all have a imagination awake or hibernating and thats what allows joy in peoples life even for the people that barely have it awake. Everyone needs to live life at its fullest being joyful trying new things like sports, music, or even puzzles but time is relative you stopping yourself because you think your getting old but thats not the case do everything you want to do before time runs out for you and you'll leave with regret but everyone need to wake up there inner kid inside of them and start living life without regrets try new things, talk to new people, spend more time with your parter or family etc. but make new memeries and be jolly and have such enjoyable life to new things you'll try.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
30B9B18CCCC2,"I believe technology is good thing because you can do your online shopping from home with get out out of your home,read books off the web, play games with other people making new friends just by staying home.

Many people can't drive to meet up with people.

So they just stay home and call them on there phone or call family from the other side of the world to say hi by using technology. find friends to chat with. Play games with online.

Some people use technology to learn new things or maybe see what other people are dong on Facebook, and snap chat. Technology is a good thing to use when you need help trying to learn new things. Kids at school can use technology for school. Technology can be use for homework school cluds. School can make it a safe thing to use. Many teens will lear how to use technology.

Other people will tell you that technology is bad for you because your not making new friends faces to faces,or going out to place to have fun. The people who say technology is a good thing have a good point because some people are better of staying home or even doing work from home where they wont have to talk to other people.

Old people can use technology to rd books back anything they want to read. There are many books online to read about war , cars , sport and many more. Old people can learn how to use technology so when they want to call family or friends on the web they can.

Many people use technology to Oder food off line and get it dropped off at home. Technology can Chang every one life.

Many people can benefit off the web and help them with taxes and how to do it or let someone do it for you online. Many people dont know how to talk to people so hey are sacred to leave the house so they use technology to talk to other people and find things hey both like.

They can order things offline and get it the next day. If like technology can Chang everyone life and make it better.

There are many games player online like to play, or can downloaded off line. Many people make money by use technology or playing games. Teens will enjoy playing games for days and win and may be get payed for it. What i'm trying to say is technology can be use in many ways that helps you to use it or work with. So many people ill be use technology in there life and make it easier to leave life better.

You can many new friends and play games with them online.

Every life would be better if we use technology in our everyday life and help use do everything technology can do for use in life. Old people life would be better. Teens will finish the homework fast by the help of technology. So ya i think technology is a good thing to use use in your everyday life any many be they will make it better and better in the years. Technology would make work life so much faster and easier. So people should use technology will we still have it in our life. Many people would find it very helpful. ",2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
D92BFF2AC7FD,"Do you think is a good idea to change the school lunch menu for something healthier? In this essays, I will argue how a healthier lunch menu can improve students diet and make them more secure of themselves. People that eats healthier tend to be more active and optimistic like my family.

My mom has been a great example to my family. ever since, sher started eating healthier we have seen a big change in ther. she gets on time to her job and has more time for me.

Although, my family eats healthier, not everybody keeps their diet. My uncle was the second one that started eating healthier but, it has not shown any results out of his diet because, he eats junk food before he gets home. this behavior has make his more fat and lazy.

Moreover, when my family started eating healthy, we stopted expending in junk food. Eating healthy helped us reduce our expenses by a lot. All the money that we used to spend on junk food has been going to an index fund, that will be used once we finish highschool. It wiil be used to start a company.

Some people think that eating healthier doesn't get you anything but, they are wrong because, healthy food gives more nutrient than junk food. In the world, healthy people have been very successful. In the future, I hope that the school change the lunch menu, so we can have a healthy and active life.     ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
101576652D3B,"The British naturalists and politician John Lubbock wrote, ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. I agree with this statement because people should know how to make decisions themselves instead of relying on others to do it for us.

Although we are surrounded by people who influence us ever since we where young, people should choose their own character because people should make decisions by themselves more often. Everyone isn't the same, and we shouldn't always be taught to follow what we see everyone do. It's important that we make choices by ourselves because by doing so, it makes us stronger humans beings who can rely on ourselves and helps us gain self confidence and makes us rely on ourselves more often then we do.

Even though Influences help you know what's right from what's wrong, people should choose the person they want to because the people you know might be setting bad examples and you wouldn't even know that they're wrong because they told you it's right. For example, growing up, your guardians could be anyone. They could be good people, or they could be not so good people. It's our job to use common sense and decide for ourselves what's right and what's wrong. It's always good to use your brain and decide if something is morally right or wrong. If you see someone close to you being a bad influence, then one must learn to not replicate those actions, but instead make good decisions their selves.

Some might say that influences help if you're lost or confused in life, however, another reason why people should create their own character is because attempting something on your own and not succeeding helps you grow as a person. For example, if you just follow what everyone else is doing, you won't learn because thats the equivalent of you being spoon fed. If you dont attempt anything of your own, you won't know how to do anything by yourself. By always letting people make decisions for you, you won't be able to complete tasks on your own and makes you a less independent person. This is why making your own decisions is important. Not only does it help you grow as a person, but it also strengthens your mind.

In life, people often rely on others to build the person they are but in reality, it's better to rely on yourself instead of others to make decisions because it makes us rely on ourselves more often then we do, helps us avoid bad influences, helps you grow as a person, and strengthens our minds. All of these things are why we should all grow up by making our own choices and decisions instead of mindlessly do what everyone else does. People have all the power in their selves to be who they want to be. You're no one other than yourself after all, and that's the most important thing to think about when choosing our own character traits.",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.0,4.5
07DFD9A0986B,"Having good aditude is very important in life beacuase thats what u would need to have in many things, childhood and adult hood etc. Why having a good aditude is very important is say for example, if ur trying to apply for a job, its good to have a good aditude at all times is because if ur looking foward to get the job and have good adidute and be pacient, theres a higher chance you will get the job. My second reason on why having good aditude is important is that say that u didnt get the job, always stay cool and not try the flash out on anyone or even put it on anyone because you can always try again and theres always jobs that are hiring and available. There are many benifets of good aditude but few benefits are making friends, having a good life with no hate in your heart, get hired at jobs u apply at and many more. Benifets of having bad aditute can lead u to a place you wont like places like Jail if u talk back and not follow instructions or evan go to jail for not paying ur bills, get a office referal for not following directions and doing bad in school too. I've also witnessed bad aditude and good growing up. As in fifth grade I wasnt the best kid but I made bad decision and talk back at the teachers etc and that lead my mom taking away my ps4 so i cant play on it untill I fix what im doing. Also I remember when i was little, in church that if me and my siblings did good and behaved at church that my mom will buy us one candy each at a gas station of our choice so we followed that and had good aditude through out the whole church sessions continusly through out the times we attended church. Before my mother passed thats one of the many things she've taught me and my siblings to always have good aditude is because u can acomplish anything u worked hard at and respect people around you and a holy place like church. Now you know that having good aditude can effect not just you but people around you and your future.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
084763DC1C8C,"Some school district offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. There are three reasons why students may want to take this chance. First reason is that they may need to help there family out. The second reason is that the students don't want to be in school for so long. Third reason is that the students may want to go to college at a early age to get that over with at a early age and get a good financial job. They would be able to get full-time jobs at a early age with a high school diploma.

First of all one reason that it may be good for the students to graduate early because they may need to help out there families. The students parents may work but they need that extra help for their kid. Because, they are not financially good with money. So graduating a year early may help the students help out there family's. If students need to help there families out and they finish with school early they dont have to worry about having to go to school they can just work so that they can help there families out.

Another reason is that the students want to graduate school early because they don't want to be in school for so long. Students sometimes just want to start making money so they want to get over with school. They may have a job but the part-time may not get them a lot of money. So if they finish school in three years they can start working at a full-time job early and start making the money that they really want to make. Students would love to finish school in three years because they dont want to keep on going to school.

Last reason why students may want to graduate early is because students may want to go to college at a early age to get that over with at a early age and get a good financial job. Students may know what they want to become when they are older and would like to start going to college at a early age so it would benefit they if they could finish high school in three years. Also they would have a good financial job at a early age. They can also start living be them self wants they have a good financial job and out of college at a early age. Also would make good money at a early age.

In conclusion, these are three good reason why students would like to finish high school in three years. They can start helping there families at a early age because they may need the help. Also that students may not want to be in high school for so long. Finishing school at a early age they may start going to college at a early age and also get a good job at a early age. They would be able to get full-time jobs at a early age with a high school diploma.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
443AA4F38C8B,"I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because, i think if you want to do something be yourself in the boren world then you have to change the style of living, make yourself change the way you want it to be, everyone have a different thinking and opinions about their life.

However, sometime is really hard to achief that goal, some other people can't do what they want because is take alot of time and fail, when people are doing the something the same over over again, but maybe when they are change to defferent, i feel everyone go work so early on the morning make people over time feeling really tired and bord, some people work at 3 or 4 make them tired but they can't change anything because they have no choose about their life, but people can change to a different thing so they can be more better person.

People change what they do alot but also they scare if they going to fail it, alot they don't really take a other step with something new so whatever they do, people need to change the way they think about thing around them so they can make decision about they like or don't like. Everyone got a good choose or a good decision about their life but the importand is to define the choose that they make and desigh more about they decision so they can become more better, in world have a lot of famous people that make a lot of defferences about their life, a lot of story before they are become famous person, they all normal people just like everyone else but they just be themself so they become a different person when they planed their own way to go or to do on their life.

The world not choose you but you have to choose the world.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
FEE662801AF4,"I think that homework clubs are good in school because, the students can take there time and procces ,to get to undersatnd, there homework, students can finish early thier homework and dont have to do it later, teacher can help more and teach more if thats there passion; what they like to do; to teach and want students to get good grades in there class or any class.

Some students might not understand the home work or just cant cach up. Students in homework club can cach up or even can be finish with the unit that they are working on. Some students can be cached up a lot and help the one's that are not or the ones that cant go.

For the teachers. teachers that like showing kids more education, teachers that like helping students when there stuck in a problom, tachers that can stay after school that dont have nothing to do or dose not have children. Those type on teachers can actualy enjoy after school homework clubs. teachers that actualy like there work can go because some teachers is just there to teach, leave, and get there money but some, actualy do like it they like helping when there wrong giving them corrections.

Students can finish there home work early. children sometimes cant do home work at home because they might be to busy or has a lot of activitys go after school like soccer, basball, basketball, ect. Some children might be able to go to after school home work clubs if there are after school buses but cant if there wernt home work clubs they would not be able to do there homework because, when they get home they have to take care of there brothers and sisters because mom works all day or sometimes parents might get sick and need them to take care or them. But after all i think its good to have after school homework clubs to finish or get to understand if you dont. Sometimes when theres time left and you did your home work and there like 20 or 10 minutes left they can show or teach you new topics.                                                                                                                                                     ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
15125AF6CB82,"Student that are entering to high school, are around fourteen, and fifteen years old. Identifying a career by the time the students enter to High-School, is probably a chance to see if they are actually interested in the career that they had in mind, when they were in middle school. This is the time when you have to start picking ideas for what you want to be when get older. This doesn't mean that your not allow to change your mind in the future, is just a help from the school to see if you are interested in what you want to do when you get older. You have four years in high school to change your mind. There is so many careers that you could like; the school will provide you the classes that you need in order to graduate, and also classes that talk or teach you about the career that you pick. That's when you have to start thinking if that's what you actually like, and remember that whatever you pick, is not permanent for your entire life, because you can change your mind any time.

Don't stress out a lot, because as a freshman you can change your mind for the year that is coming up. You have another year to pick new classes and see what is that you actually want to be. Identifying a career by the time the students enter to high school, is probably a chance to see if they are actually interested in the career that they had in mind. You have around ten month in school, in those ten month you have the chance to know more about the career that you pick in the beginning, so while the time past by, you can see if you are actually interested in the career for your future. If is not what you thought it was going to be, then for your next year you can talk to your counselor about it, and they will help you giving you advises, because they are allow to see you grades, so they will see in what classes you doing good, so they can help you pick a career that you would probably like.

Student have the right to change their mind any time that they want, because the 75% of the students that are in High-School are not mature enough to actually think in their future, most of them are not ready for life. When you are in your last year of high school, is when you have to start getting ready with what you actually like, and see whatever classes that you had picked in the beginning of high High-School was actually what you wanted to be in the future; because after that you will be going to collage. It is a good idea to give the students the chance to identify their career in the beginning of High-School. Also their mind will change every year, the years that actually matter in order to go to collage is junior and senior years. Those years are the ones that you have to get ready and actually put on your mind that any classes that the school will put you in will be a guide toward the specific career that you have picked.

The classes that you have in High-School is just a help to open your mind for the career that you could have in the future. It can be helpful for some students and for others it would not matter at all. It is not necessary to identify only one career when you are just entering to High-School, because you are most likely to change your mind and ideas about the career. There is a chance that you will forget what you wanted to be as a young age. While the time past by there will be so many other cool career that you will be interested to do, or to learn more about. When you are picking your classes and your counselors and you talk about your future, or what would you like to do when you go out of High-School; is a good chance to let them know your ideas and your goals, so they will know what classes to put you in so it can help you as guide for your career and also for collage.

In conclusion, giving the students the chance to pick classes that will guide them toward their career, can be helpful for them to see if they are actually interested in that career or no. If they don't like the classes that they have that is teaching them about the career; then probably is not actually the career that they want for their future. Is complicated for them to have only one career in their mind, because there is so many chances that while the time past by it will become hard or boring for them. In the other hand most of the students is High-School have change their mind, and you can ask any person while their working, if the job that they have right now, is actually what they picked when they were in High-School. Most of the times is better if we give students chooses for their career and future. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
7DDFB0CA2BF8,"Author Ralph Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in a world that that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."" He is totally wrong because to be yourself in a world and make the greatest accomplishment in your life, the wold do not have to take control over you liberty, you should take control over the world to accomplish whats you are going to be. Author Ralph Waldo Emerson did not think before writing these letter because to be yourself in a world, you should have to make your own decisions, do something that you would like to do, and being your self not letting the world to take control over your life.

First thing,

be yourself and never give the right to the world. To make that happen you should have to make your own decisions, because if you let the world to choose for you in the future you may get lost and tire about your life, because you let the world to take control over your life, and for not choosing your own decision. Being your self and not letting the world to try to make something else, is something that will bring goods in your future, because is something that you choose and you know why did you took it and why did you choose it. However, the peoples that let the wold to choose for them they will get tire about life.

The second thing for accomplishment; and not letting the world to control you,is being your self and do what you like to do, never letting the world to do whatever it wants to do with you. If you want to do the greatest accomplishment in your life you should take something that you that you like to do. because when you do something that you like to do you will never going to get tire about doing it, when you like to do something and you wanted to be the greatest accomplishment, you are not going to feel that job like a job because is something that you like to do. But to make that happen and accomplish that dream. never led the world to do what ever it wants with you.

Being your self and not letting the world to take control over your life, the best choice that you can do, because being yourself and choose your own decision will help you to know what to do,what's good , what's bad, what career to choose, and what goal to accomplish because the only person who know all about you is you. So you should not let the world to ruin their life, and take their own decisions and tell the world that you can do it in your own. Lots of people let the world to choose for them and in future they ruin their life and they don't know whats to do for not choosing the correct choice and because they let the world to choose for them.

In conclusion, never led the world to change your life . because if you led the world to choose for you you will never going to get satisfy. Always be your self because if you led the world to choose for you will have a bad and sad feature for for not choosing the right decision. Always do a things what you like to do, like sports or a profession that you would like to be, if you choose things that you like you never going to feel it like a job. sometime you let the world to choose for you, but in the future you will get bored because you did not choose what you like. If you want to make real the greatest accomplishment, never led the world to change you. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
5F67A5D3DBB0,"I think students, parents, and including me wouldn't like the idea of adding a hour and half of a hour each day of the school thats why I disagree with the idea of extending the day of school because students have other things to do like pick up little brothers or sisters and take of them, help mom and dad with the house, do another type's of activities because if students are only thinking about school all the time we can stress out a lot and there's no rule that says that students can't have fun also we are in school for about 7 or 8 hours so i think thats enough.

First of all some of the students have little brothers and sisters and the parents work and they dont have the chance to pick up they kids because they get out of the work late, so the orders sibling haves to take care of they little brothers and sisters also little kids from elementary schools can't get out of the bus without someone picking them up, so the older siblings have to pick them up or else the little kids are going back to school and they get scared because they are the only one who are in the school and they are little so they don't know what's going on so that is one reason why we cant be in school more hours not even half of a hour.

Secondly students have to help they parents with the house how i said parents came from work late and they dont have time for nothing so students have to help them by cleaning the house, cook for they sibling and parents , they have to wash the dishes, wash they clothes, clean the rooms, some of the students have dogs and they have to go with them for a walk or take them to the doctor so when parents get home they can lay down and chill because they work really hard and all the students can do is helping doing the cleaning that is the second reason why we can't be at school more than we supposed to be.

Finally some students have another type of activities after school like dancing, soccer practice and soccer game's, basketball practice and basketball game's, step teams, community service, etc also that helps a lot to get your mind out of thinking about homework's, test's, classwork, so you dont stress out a lot because being honest sometime students have a lot of homework and test to do in each class and after school is the only time where you can get you'r mind out of school and also we are having fun for a little time because some parents are kind off strict and they don't let they kids to be outside after 8:30.

In conclusion we can't be in school more than 8 hours because all the students have more activities to do and have fun for a little time and we have responsibilities at home helping parents cleaning and taking care and picking up little siblings and we can stress out a lot if we spend more than 8 hours in school because that means more work to do and we would be only student and we would be tired because also we are not going to have time to chill and i know that no one is going to be happy about it because teachers have they children as well parents need the help of they kids and students need they own time so these are my reasons of why I disaree of adding a hour and half of a hour.                ",3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
E1B30D0F1F11,"Do you ever just wonder how school would be like if you could pick your own classes/electives? My opinion is that students should not be required to take a music, a drama, or an art class. There are many reasons why I think the above. Sudents are capable of choosing whats best for them and what they like to do. Counselors or teachers should not be picking students or electives. Student want to be taking or doing many things that they are into to. I think that music, drama, or an art class should be electives.

Strudents are capable of choosing whats best for them and what they like to do because they want to do what intesrests them. For example, I do not like to take music, it bores me. I would rather take drama. People are very diferent from each other. Such as music, drama, and art should be extra credit for students that are interested in thiose kind of electives/classes. We just need to give students a chance to do their own things and be choosing their own kinds of thing.

Counselors or teachers should not be picking students electives. The reason why I think this is because all electives should not be classes in general. For example, some people like math, instead of students taking an art class, ect. They can be taking another math class. If thats what they love learning about because with art, we cant do anything with it in the future. Which in math we mostly use it and need it in everything.

Students want to be doing many things that they love in school. Yes, that is very true. CLASSES THAT ARE FOR FUN SHOULD BE ELECTIVES!! Not required. We should just think about what we like to do best. Everyone should be able to pick their own classes.

In conclusion, music, drama, and art should not be required. Student like to do what they like best. Counselors/teachers should be picking those classes for us.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
CFD454F55693,"The American jazz legend Duke Ellington was famous because of jazz music for being so good at what he did.

he said this phrase "" A problem is chance for you to do your best"" and what the means is that if theres a problem with something you can try your best or do your best to fix that problem think of a solution or make a solution or to that problem to do good and keep going forward to fix that problem and that's the meaning of the phrase hat Duke Ellington said.

The phrase that Duke Ellington said is a good phrase and i totally agree with it because the problem you have or that you will get is a chance for you to do you best at fixing it or solving because the problem will give you a chance to do your best unlike if you come across a problem of just get a problem and you dont try to fix it or dont care or sit back and just watch your problems just pile up and then problems just come and come one after another then you have more then one problem and its just better if you do good on your first problem and you fix an if its big problem and you over come it at the end you will feel great like Duke Ellington he is now legend at jazz music and you know t is not easy to get were he got to be called a legend at jazz music and on his way to the top to become a legend all ways remembered every were you go for he had to over come lots of problems the hate the way he was going to play jazz were he would play his jazz to start up who could give him a boost or help with the jazz to be known more around him were he would get more new instruments money for a place to keep all his music how would he sell his music and all those problems he had to over come and fix and he still made it to his dream and know he is legend.

In conclusion when there is a problem its good to do your best at it or any problem even if you have more then one problem just over come because in the end it will turn out to be a happy ending.              ",2.5,1.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
61D13513C992,"Advice. Advice is something you seek, and search you can ask advice on anything it can be advice for you hair, advice for you dog, doctor advice you can partially ask advice on anything. When people are searching for advice they usually ask more than one person, I think thats best, because you can see from different points of views. I think only taking one persons advice may not help you find a solution or a make a good a choice, another positive thing about asking advice is you can also learn something new or meet someone new.

Asking multiple people is better than asking one person for advice, because only asking one person may not get you the advice that is best needed. Asking multiple people for advice is something that can help you find a quicker solution. There are many positive sides when asking people for advice, like having different points of views that can give you tons of ideas and information for the advice that you are looking for. When you are gathering all these opinions you can discover new information and the advice you are looking for.

There are many positive sides when asking multiple for people advice. When you ask people for advice it could be a stranger, a family member, a friend. Entire way you are communicating with others and you can make friends while asking the for the advice you are looking for. You can learn new things about you friends, and family members, when you ask them for advice . You can also meet someone new and develop communicating skills.

When you ask for advice its best to ask more than one person. I think that it a good idea to see from different points of views and asking multiple people because, you discover different opinions and ideas. Only taking one persons advice may not help you find a solution or a make a good a choice.

you can also learn something new or meet someone new when asking someone for advice. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
B7A0347C68C3,"I know taking online or watching video conferencing class can be relaxing sometime, and sometimes student even pray for school to be close. but that does not mean student should take online classes or watch video conferencing , It not a good idea for student to be take online classes and I am not in favor of the idea for student to take online or watch video conferencing because they can find the online teaching to be boring and it will be very hard for student to understand the teaching of the video.

Although some people might think that taking online or video conferencing class can be helpful because student can get a lot of sleep before starting the class and the student will be the one to choose the time he or she wish to take the class or watch the video conferencing.

firstly why I don't agree with the idea of taking home school or watch video conferencing is because student find home school to be boring and they can't focus in the teaching of the video conferencing. like for example if the person who is teaching in the video speaks softly it will make that student feel sleeping and by the time he or she get up the video might be finish at the end of the day the student don't gained anything from the online teaching, and other student will turn on the video and still be charting with their friends on the phone while the video is playing, he or she will not focus on the video that is teaching.

secondly why I said home schooling or video conferencing can't be beneficial for student is because student will find it very hard to understand the teaching of the video conferencing or the home schooling. like if the video is playing but the student don't understand the teaching of the video he or she can't get the chance to ask question about what they don't understand .And some of this video teaching sometime is really confusing the student that why other student prefer to set in class while teaching so that if he or she don't understand they can ask question about the topic. other student have their young ones at home while he or she want to listen to the teaching their young ones will be make noise so they can't get what the video is teaching about and that will make them not to understand the teaching.

I am not in favor of the idea of student taking online classes because they will find it very boring which they can't focus on the teaching and it will very hard for them to understand the teaching of the video.

for this way I find it very difficult for student to gained any learning from taking the online or the video conferencing class.       ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
9F401E75755A,"In this writing you will find some reason why, 4 years of high school and graduate are better than, 3 years of high school and compare the opportunities that you can find during this years of high school and also help you to make to take your choice.

High school is a great place to know people that could help you in the future, and help you to reach your goals also high school is a great place to learn a lot of things and have fun at the same time.

In my opinion, 4 years of high school are better than 3 years because you have more time to study, you are able to have a break during summer, and keep your stress lower.

During this 4 years of school you are able to have enough time to study and prepare for a test, if you have a History test you have time to ask to your History teacher to help you, before or after school to make a review or practice, and get ready for the test. This is one reason why 4 years of school are better then 3 years of school, and you will be able to prepare for your next test also you can have some rest in summer.

In 4 years of school you will have a break during summer, and able to enjoy it with your family or friends doing some activities as going to some parks or museums, and any other different activities that you will like to do, and maybe go back to the school with more energy after summer. This reason also could help you to keep your stress lower when you are in high school.

When you are in high school you can stress a lot because you have to many homework and you need to study for a test, and if you take the 4 years of high you will have a lot of time to study do your homework and keep your stress lower, and during this 4 years you can practice some sports or any activity that you like in your school or outside the school and also this could help you to keep your stress lower. During this process of learning you could find people that are not agree with your opinion and they can say 3 years of school are better then 4 yours of school.

3 years of high school sounds great for some people they want to start working or maybe they think it could be easy but you will not able to enjoy your summer because you have a program to follow during summer, and sometimes you would need to stay after school for study, and you are not able to do the different activities that you like.

In my opinion 4 years of high school are better then 3 years of high school and in this 4 years of high school you will be able to graduate and you can enjoy the process of learning, and know a lot of people that could help you to graduate and reach your goals in the future.     ",4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
BA541CCAA2FF,"We will not be benefice of taking classes online and the reasons can be for slow internet, get distracted and not having time.

There is a bounch of students that have problems with slow internet, some times the internet doesn't

load the wed pages and with slow internet we can not due our online classes. One time i was with my friend in his home and he was taking his class online like every day and then the internet when down and he did not finish his class online and the internet didn't work until the next day.

Most of the time we get distracted at home, for reasons that are not even important at all like we wan to eat, our parents need help and they call us and we need to use the restroom every time and those reasons can be a big issue for people who take classes online.When i was in LOCATION_NAME i took some classes online, it was my first class and my uncle did not know what i was doing classes online and he call me more then 3 times and because i was using my headphones and i did not ear when he call me the 3 times he get mad, he disconnect the computer and the computer shot down, i did not finish the class beacuse of my auncle and the teacher tell me that i was so disrespectfull to her and she didn't wan to give me classes again.

One of the most common problem is the student don't have time for example we have jobs and we don't have time for classes online. Some of the students are in club or they go to church, they also take care of there little brothers, with these reasons is why taking classes at home is not a really good idea.

Do you really thing that taking classes online can benefit student? Issues can occur, when we are doing the classes online from problems of slow WI-FI and also problems or differences with family that may affect us in our concetration with the classes, that's why i don't agree of having classes online.        ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
B84EF55EE7F0,"Although student-designed projects isn't a horrible idea, because students would pay attention more to the assignment since their putting effort of their own into it. But at the same time student-designed project can effect them learning more,because all the assignments will be the same. It could still be a big distraction for the students.

The reason why i believe it can be bad for their learning enviorment. Since all the work will be the same the students can look things up online. Getting all the answers from the internet and being able to just cheat off friends. Students copying from friends causes students to learn less. Causes them not being envolved in the assignment. The students would be able to pick their own type of questions in the project. Those questions can be really easy for them and picj it for the less work.

For example since the students will be not learning very much during the summer. They will not be ready for the beggining of the school year. Students will find the school work difficult for them since all they did during the summer was choose easy assignments for th project and cheat off of each other. Putting in type of effort to the student-designed project.

Teacher-designed projects will be outstanding for the students. It would so get the students for envoled. The teacher can possibly let the students have partners and it'll be more exciting for them. The teacher-designed project will have work thats equal to your grade. Not make it too easy but also not too hard. Each student or group would have different kind of project so students can have their own work.

Yes student-designed projects would be cooler for the students to have their own project and not be assigned one. It can also help them learn more as much as not help them learn more because students who actually do their own work and choose good questions for the project can help them be successful. But there is just too many students who would cheat and not give effort to the project. In conclusion i think teacher-designed projects for the summer is far more successful for the students than letting them do their own designs, because of the lack of effort is going to be put in if they do student-designed project and the amount of similar project they'll be from cheating off of each other.                                 ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
3ADC97CB1DB6,"First impression can change. Most of the times they do change. It's rare for someone to act the same once you've met them because eventually they change. Nothing really is the way it seems to be. When it comes to first impression its always important to act a certain way. Everything changes , people change, things change eventually.

When it comes to first impression people always change. Sometimes when you meet someone they always want to seem kind to the other person for them not to think anything bad of them but good. When you go into a job interview you want to dress appropriately, you also want to act appropriate, and respectful with the other person when that may be out of your comfort zone. Some people can change in a relationship they act all sweet at first but then one day they'll just switch up on you and act different and be different from when they first met the person. Most of the times thats always the case people just act different from what they got in their first impression.

Nothing seems like the way it should be. Meeting people is nice but from what you can gather from the first impression is not always enough. I've met people who have thought i was mean because of the way I looked that was their first impression on me but then they said when they started to actually have a conversation with me and actually talked with me they realized that I was really nice and not mean. Thats the thing about the first impression it always changes. People can look at certain way but act completely different. I like to dye my hair different colors some people find that intimidating because of how I look but i'm a nice person I love to meet people and talk but it may not look like I do.

Meeting people is an important thing in life. Everyone is always meeting people which means first impressions matter. When you meet someone you dont want them to hate you, you want them you like you. You have to act nice and polite even if you are not in the mood to be nice or even if you're the meanest person you have to be respectful with others around you. You change the way you are most people do it and dont realize that they do change from when they first were with the other person. I've met friends who i thought would do good for me in my life because of my first impression with them but turned out to be toxic and bad for me. When you see a rose it beautiful, it has a beautiful color to it, it smells good bur when you want to grab it there are thorns and it hurts you.

In conclusion things arent always the way it should be. Everything changes , First impressions always changes it's possible. It takes times to sometimes notice the change but people do change from there first impression .",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
DD66EBC605D1,"Some schools offer the option of attending classes by ""online"" or ""video conferencing"". This may not be a good idea because how does the student going to get responsible? or how can the teachers know if the student is not cheating on a test?. Is there any benefit to know is this option is going to help the student phsychlogy, mentally or physically?. Education is too important! And a better way of learning is by attending to SCHOOL! The way as many people done it. Also, by this way attending to school students might join in sports, activities, etc. It gives more benefits and helps to refresh your mind. School gives classes of ""PE"" which is important because doing sports is healthy.

In 2015, a student at Generic_School took the option to attend classes by online because the student was not a ""social"" person which means the student did not like to communicate. But after all the student did regret it. The student noticed that communication is too important because is part of education and how to success in life. The words of the student to advice the students were "" There is no more benefits than attending to school. School does help you to your knowdlegde and prepare you for your future. Did not like the fact of waking up too early and to deal with all those people every single day, but here is the thing as people we cannot avoid people. It does affect you plus It does not make sense at all. Why? because WE ARE THE PEOPLE. What I learned by taking this option and what made me regret it was : We are the community, we are the voice of the world and as a group working together we can make big changes and a better society as well. And classes from home by the way online or video conferencing, this does not give you ""P.E"" classes and doing sports is wealthy. So by now attending to school is the best option for everyone."" The student had excellent grades, scholarships, made new friends than he expected to have. Where is he now by making the best option? He is now at SCHOOL_NAME preparing for his major as a lawyer. He became an example for many students that have the same issues as he had.

As an immigrant this is a real big request, they must attend classes by going to school. It is too important because the lack of language and credits are needed. United States is an immigrant country and their schools has these excellents programs called ""Esol"". Of course, immigrants need these kind of help. They need to get involved by attenting to school. Why? Many immigrants come to this country to have a better future, they absolute have different customs, a different kind of thoughts, etc. So that infers a lot more than you think...Especially, each country have a different system's programs for graduation like in South America you only need to pass all of your classes for graduation, but how many classes are they? More than 17 classes. In United States you need to pass all of your classes plus the SOLS. This is the reason why immigrants must attent to school, It does help you to refresh your mind, to have new thoughts, new experiences, and to know what you need for graduation. Its is hard because Immigrants needs an esol teacher and to not attend to normal classes for awhile as long as you learn the language.That is why it takes a little longer for them to graduate and that is why they do need to attent to school. To understand much better the topics of each SOL class because they do need credits as any student. Otherwise if they choose the option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is not going to help them as much as the school will.

In conclusion, a better learning is by attending classes from school because school give you more opportunites, more methods of learning, to socialized, to communicate. It inpires you to keep going and to have an idea of what you want your future to be like. Which means it prepares you for life. Any issue that you have they will help you to work on it, to find a solution. Like this student did not like to communicate at all, but he noticed that attending to school is the best option because it gives you the ideas of what you want to do, the opportunity to meet the college you want to go. To know what you can do to improve yourself! Also, It helps immigrants to learn the language with this program to pass your SOL classes to graduate, they receive a double help from school. Going to school has more benefits than you think so you need to fight for it because anything in this life is not easy, but is worth it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
61B9D7E74839,"National park is a wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. We also have a donations to feed the homeless people, if you donate to people in need we will give you exclusive T-shirts for helping the people in need of you're help. An example is if you are bored sitting at your house all day long, so come on down to our amazing national park to come and joy the sweet fun. We can also have a game of soccer of two team that will go aganist one another, and who ever team win the game, we will give them the prize at the end of the day. We will also have a boys vs girls, game, on game called toggle war, witch do you guys think who will win boy, or girls come on down and see for you're self to see who is better. We also provide a pie eating challage to see who will claim the belt of March 21, 2019. Friends and family can enjoy all day long at the national park into March 21, to March 29, 2019. March 22nd, is when we will have chess war, and buy two, get one free ice cream. On March 23, is when we will go out as group to play a game of teamwork twenty teams going aganist each other on a race for about three hours of your time, it will cost you ten bucks each per person. On March 24, is when we will give a donation to help that are beging for help so they can stay alive into the next day by day so please come down help our world be in peace so can all have a better future ahead of us. March 25, we will have a brand new adoption enter for dogs that need a happy family to stay with, or they will never get to be seen into how long it can take for the poor little guy. On March 26, is where we are going to clean the town where we live in to make the world in a better place.

We will also be glad if we can get over hundred more people to come and help in the way down for our big town in need of you're nice work. March 27, is where we can be in all together as a whole family to party for our great work of cleaning, donations, and adopting over hundred dogs in one day. March 29, is the last day to have a woderful day to be outside where we will have give away for people who was with us all day long. Community park is where we are getting a sign up for different clubs all over the world. a wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. State park will have a fun advangers all over the state.

A wounderful place for kids and adults to spend the outdoors with friends, pets, and family. Thier are fun activities all over the park, we have board games, toys, picnic, sports, and other cool thing all around the park. We also have a donations to feed the homeless people, if you donate to people in need we will give you exclusive T-shirts for helping the people in need of you're help.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
5754104B2928,"We choose our own character traits through the choices we make,It can be shown through the actions or the way we communicate to others, this can either teach us a lesson or tell us the truth. The lesson that we are trying to learn can either change our character. Either way the character that chooses there own traits will start facing some difficulties in the beginning and start searching. The reason why we face difficulties is when we can either know if we need to change our traits to a better one.

The lesson that we are trying to learn and discover can either change our character because the changes that you get will determine the hardwork that you did to get where you are right now, the challenges that you face when you immendialtely face will get even more challenging from the start it will put you in a position that you aren't even ready for. We can make the choices that we want or know what might be good for us in the future that may not affect our characteristics.

The character that chooses there own traits will start facing some difficulties in the beginning like getting more in trouble or karma will come to them without knowing. It may also cause trouble and argument betwwen your family or friends because the choices that you make can either push them away from you and you will start losing confidence in yourself. the reason why we choose our own traits it's to refresh everything and start all over again with new beginnings and no negativity it will put you in a position where you will be happy and no regrets.

The reason why we face difficulties is when we can either know if we need to change our traits to a better one because it will determine the effort and struggle that we put in to get to our goal, It can either not be changed that fast because there are some puzzles missing in the book that we need to find to get there without no hesitations or problems. The signs of knowing that we need to change our characteristics is when everything is starting to fall a part that's when things start to get difficult.

When our character is formed by influences beyond our control can either bring us down to the point where you can't get up to fix them, It can't be fixed in a matter of seconds only patience, time and hardwork can change that. The environmnent that we live in may be the cause of the influences that you get that it can be difficult to face them, you can either do what's right for you and the importants of the changes that make. You can also ask for help when you are having difficulties when facing this controls into your life, People may not take this into a discussion because they are blinded with the lies that they are facing in there life and not actually figuring out or speaking out .

Many people have chosen the the path of which you can choose your own character because it is easier to know the mistakes that you made in the beginning and that might give a second chance to fix it. The signs that you may need to do might be infront of you it's like a missing puzzle that you need to find it to mend everytihng and start over to becoming a better you in anyway with no regrets and the pasts are gone. The results that you may get when actually changing your character will determine your personality and communication toward people around you .    ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
D38A414FA051,"Many believe that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Carrying a positive attitude can get you far in life. Job opportunities and getting notice by important people are opportunities that come with having an affirmative attitude. This kind of posture can benefit ones future.

If more individuals convey a positive attitude many would have better employment opportunities. Jobs can help you be successful. Working for the president of the United States is a more beneficial job then working a regular nine to five. Showing an affirmative attitude can help you work for the president and can also help you have a better income which can lead to success. Having a good occupation is important.

Since it's important to have a positive image it can expand the people you meet. One way is by having a confident posture. This helps you have a better chance of engaging with significant people like the president. This attitude can lead one to have job opportunities.

Looking at the other side being negative can also help you be successful in life. One example is by being selfish. Putting yourself first in everything you do can lead to success. With this negative image shows that your the most important person that can only bring you a favorable outcome.

As many have stated displaying confidence is the way to go in life. Employment opportunities and getting noticed by important individuals can bring success. With most success theres always positive results. Obviously one should always be positive if they want a desirable outcome in life because life is too short to be unsuccessful and negative. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
D2D9D0C94A14,"Is positive,because that say something real the positive attitude is the key to success in life. When some person they have a positive attitude they are more blessing in the life and more apportunity to triumph in this life.

The person who have a positive attitude they have enithing, because in some job or company they see and check to the another people and they see who have a good attitude for the work and some job need to the dismiss the person who have the negative attitude.

To have a positive attitude you can make to much friend because some person like the people who are positive because when they need support or help you are there whith you good attitude and they can do a very good trusted. And the person who have a good attitude they have more prosperity to arrive in to be successful and do they goals cross all obstacle.

In some time in this life occasion the person need to have a good attitude when are do somenthing because the life wait with to much surprise and when the person who demostrate have the best implement to win and the best form to win,what want is have a positive attitude and to much dedication.

For triunfal and to have a good to be succesful the people they need to havea possitive attitude when they are doing something because when the people do the righ things and with pleasure always they are winer and the good look that coming in they future with recompense valuable for that person.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
AA8DA5629CBC,"Why is it good to have a good attitude even if you have a difficult time? When you have a job you cant go to work with a bad attitude people will never come back. In the other hand good attitude make people want to come back and take to you. Even if you have a difficult time at less show a smile for other people to see that can make them feel good,and that might even make you feel batter.

There are many successes people out who had a hard time and that made them feel down and be sad but that did not stop them from working hard and have a good attitude to other people. For example,one day i had a very bad day when i was outside,then this very nice old man came bye me smiled and waved is hand and i did the same thing and that made me in a good attitude this is way when you see someone who is not feeling good go and take to him.

In a other hand,my bother had a bed day in school so we were going home in till we seen a very old Lady sharing to cross the rode, but she cant so we want to help her, and she told us some positively words and that made my day and his. when you help other people or even show a smile or do something that will make someone be in a good attitude is thee bast thing that will make you feel good and them two.

When you show a good attitude when you are having a difficult time the makes you a patter person,and everyone will love you,but when you are showing a bad attitude no one will like you. For example when i was waling to school this kid comes up to me and start saying words that made me mad and i had a difficult day,but i still showed good attitude to my people.

when you have a good attitude,during a difficult time is a good thing people will learn from you people will was you as in example you will make new friends,will have a good job in life people will respect you even if your mad dont show it and make people mad and spread nigtivety all round just smile and make people feel good and if you have a bad day at dose not mane you have to make other people made with your attitude.     ",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
495A94390744,"Technology is a super useful and daily component we use in our daily lives,however in my opinion technology is being misused and taken advantage of by society. For example your social life becomes different, it get's addicting, or changes you as a person, it shows that people change overall. Those are some of the many reasons why people take advantage of technology.

Technology can change your social life, for example you stop communicating with friends and your social skills start to grow weak,such as confidence and being specific while talking. Secondly technology can be an addiction or something people depend on a lot. For example spending hours on hours on your phone or a computer could be consider addiction. While taking tests or quizzes you can't depend on technology to help you and that shows that you depend on the internet. At last technology changes you as a person. Another words whatever you see on the internet it becomes real to you which means, now you're living in a fantasy instead of reality. It also makes you think differently instead of using your brain and you also depend on the internet way much more.

Technology can be useful and can save our life sometimes. One out of the two reason why technology is useful is the time your saving. For example if you have to get work sent to your boss, the internet comes in handy, or if you have a project due at school you can also use the internet to turn it in on time. Technology will forever be useful for educational purposes. For example if you need any type of information you can find it on the internet. There's a lot of things you could learn on the internet also. Technology can be a very inconsistent feature for people, therefore it can benefit people and change someone's life in a negative way. Use technology wisely because it brings a lot of negatives with it.

There's many ways to solve the problems that come with the usage of technology. Your limitations to the usage of technology could be lowered so the addiction doesn't get out of hand. The things you use technology for should be only things that benefit you, therefore it doesn't become your social life. Always try to be yourself and don't let things on the internet change you because technology is will forever be here and will always change, therefore you don't want to adapt to it for the rest of your life.  ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
CE7E3C75BAF8,"This statement says that ""first impressions are almost impossible to change."" I disagree with this statement because it is possible to change anyone impressions. Like if they are having a bad day and someone walks up to that person and does something to make them feel a little better. They can also do that to other people by making new friends and making their day better. By getting positive with them they would feel a little bit happier around you and people.

It can impact on how that person day changes from bad to good. Knowing that is helps that person out a lot by having a good mood now. It can change other people mood as well. They can share the positively to other people making sure that they feel alright. By doing that they can share with there family as well.

Getting other people happy will make you even more happy by how you were showing other people. It doesn't have to be random people it can be your boyfriend/girlfriend. By doing that you can meet a lot of new people in life that can make you happy. It can bless you by other things in the world. Other people can make you feel better by sitting next to you if your alone and talk.

By showing being happy they could be friends and get well with each other. Also if they are gonna be friends they can show each other positive mood if they are feeling down. Having those types of friends would be nice to have around with you that make you laugh and smile. The attitude that they give you could change as well by how they talk to you. If they talk to you aggressive then it would change your mood.

Making sure you have the right people to have in your life is important beacuse you don't want to feel down all the time and if won't make you feel sad.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
A366CC7B0D05,"Are first impressions impossible to change? No, I believe that first impressions are not impossible to change because when you typically meet someone for the first time many people just try to "" fit in "" or be someone who they really aren't but within time the perspective of how you are viewed can be changed and the first impression you made of yourself the first time won't matter. Also, when you first meet someone , typically you are nerves and you can be seen as a quiet and closed person when in reality you are really outgoing but it just takes you time to adapt to someone and many people don't act like themselfs.

A example of why I disagree with ""first impressions being hard to change"" is because the first time I met my boyfriends mom I was really shy and nerves and I thought was giving off a bad vibe and making myself look "" bored "" even though I was just trying to be careful and not seem so crazy with what I said or did. After a while of me being around her she started to see me as a different person/much better person than i was and she started to see how outgoing I was and how I was nothing like the first impression I gave her and her view of me changed.

Another example I have of how first impression can be changed is the from the first time i met one of my best friends. I first met her through a mutual friend we both had and when we got introduced to each other i thought she was annoying and that she could never be serious but with the time that went by I started to see how she really was and that was her personality and maybe i judged to fast. So when we started to become closer friends my first impression of her changed because now i love her and the first impression of her didn't affect me after all.

So in conclusion , no , I don't think first impressions are almost hard to change. But it is also not something that can be changed within hours but with time the impression you give off can definitely be changed for the better or for the worse based on your actions as well.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
5574E4DD548A,"taking online clases is one of the best option, for many student who has problem to attendace in the school.

taking online clases can help to student, who need to work full time because they are having many responsability in there home some of the students are living by themself, people who have to pay bills and work extra hours and they are not having time for going to school decide to giving up and not finish there education .

many student don't have money for getting lunch or can not apply for get free lunch.

and they don t want to spend more money in the school or students who has childrens are paying babysitting the time when there are in the school, and want to continue studing.

Student can have better grades.

they can access online any time during the day, they can focus in clases they having more time to work in assigment, they can add extra time to check test, homeworks, vocabularies, etc they can memorise more easily, because they can repeat the information many times they want.
access online clases, student do not have another student to interrup the clases least problem between of students, getting online education , people will not skip clases becauses. they think be in a classroom is to bore and they decide to leaving the classroom. a big problem is a lot student s are missing the buss, because there a late for minutes them the a lossing a day of school .

people are getting sick easily the food from the school is not healthy, people pefer to not eat than eat the food from the cafeteria that is affecting attends .

this idea to have clases online it going to make students feels they are getting enoght help from the school, having online education is a great idea for student it will increseasing the attendance ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
ECC9E84CD3D1,"I think that students should start an after school homework club. 3 reasons I think that students should start this club is so that they'll have an easier time doing their assignments that their teachers give them, they can work together to get their homework done, and students can work with their teachers to raise their grades up in a specific subject.

My first reason is that students can have a easier time doing their assignments that their teachers give them. My 3 reasons that students can have a easier time doing their assignments is that the students can ask their teachers for assistance if they need it, they'll get their work done quicker, and when their teachers come to collect their work, the students will have it already completed.

My second reason is that the students can work together to get their homework done. My 3 reasons that students should work together to get their homework done is so that they can turn it into their teacher once they're done, they'll have it all completed when their teacher asks the students to give their homework up, and they'll receive a good grade from their teacher.

My third reason is that students can work with their teacher to raise their grades up in a specific subject. My 3 reasons that students should work with their teachers to raise their grade up in a specific subject is so that they can be more productive in class, they can catch up on what they've missed in class, and the teacher can guide the students on what they're confused on on their homework.

Overall, these are my reasons why I think that students should have the opportunity to have an after school homework club.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,4.0,3.5
CA2B324678EA,"Generic_Name

State of Virginia

03/19/2019

Don't matter if we are youngs, we can learn everything. Some people think that the students can not identify a career by the time they enter to high school. Two years ago when I entered to high school

I was not sure what I want to be. Now, I know what I want to be, but that is thanks to my school that they have many ideas how we can identify a career. The last year I was in Internship class that was great because they give me the opportunity to get a job. The job was about secretery I was in love with this job; however, was not easy to learn but I liked. I would like to be a secretary. It is a good idea for students to commit to a carreer at a young age because we can mature our mind, develop our skills, and develop our passions. We are students of high shcool, and we can identify a career and more many things.

To begin, When we learn about career we can start to mature our minds. Students in high school get experiences learn about how they can find a job. In Generic_School my school, we have Internship class. This class consist to help students to find a job and they can see how to work in the comunity. Students develop their emotional knowledgel; also, we start to proceed as adult. We learn that the work is a big responsability. That's why we have to start to know about careers in high school. It is so important identify what we want to do when we grow-up.

Additionally, develop our skills is a great idea that can help us. Many students learn many laguages this is a great skill because we can travel every where, comunicate with other people, know other cultures; also, if we speak differents languages we can earn more money, get a better job. We can develop many many skills if we wants. Just we need to try. If we wants a great career we need to put in practice the dicipline. We can do everything what we want because we are intelligents,positives,and great students. keep going becauses that's is the only way that we have.

Lastly, When we develop our passions we can get a good career. If we have something that would like to be for example: doctors, secretary, actors, or nurse whatever we want. I would like to say go head! we can do it. The life is a challenge if we don't try we can never get a good career. Firts step we need to faces our fears. Second step we need to put all our efforts every day. Students in high school need to know these two steps. Students have all the capacity to learn everything, so let's go to do it.

To summarize, all the students should identify a career in high school. Students develop their emotional knowledgel; also, we start to proceed as adult.

Many students learn many laguages this is a great skill because we can travel every where, comunicate with other people, know other cultures; also, if we speak differents languages we can earn more money, get a better job. develop our skills is so important. The life is a challenge if we don't try we can never get a good career. Is for these reasons and many other that students should indentify a career in high school.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
009BCCC61C2A,"positive attitude is the key to success. I agree because you can do anything as long as you put your mind and soul into it and motivation you can accomplish it. Then so by doing it you feel good about yourself you'll feel unstable. But do what brings the best in you, what makes you yourself.

One way that importance of attitude is key to success is it motivates you to keep going forward. For example when you come across some difficulties you wont feel discouraged because your the limit and none other then you can or will change it. But the more discouraged you tend to feel at that moment you would wanna overcome it even if it makes whatever just as long as your mind is set to positive attitude you will accomplish it. Then so always remember what you put your mind to such as determination, positive attitude, willing you can its possible you will reach your goals. However you will with a positive mindset have a strong determination and you will build up self confidence in yourself.

Then another reason is to grow individually with hard work. Positive attitude isen't quite the easiest for some people its really difficult for others to learn how to or even if they are willing to. But others tend to not always have positive attitude in anything they're just negative and havent tried to give their all they are stuck upon what others think. Then about what really is,you just have to not listen to what anyone thinks and focus on what you can accomplish because if you dont you will let them reflect on you but you dont want that for yourself. Then there's always going to be that one negative person to try to bring you down its up to you if you let it effect you. Just ignore them if you dont you will bet it affect you and you dont wanna fall back just because of others. With that being said in order to move forward you have to go though things individually but thats were you find yourself again and makes you stronger then before what your weaknesses were there not anymore because when facing things individually you blossom to a beatifull flower with of course hard work and it isen't in vane because hard work ends up having a good result for positive attitude.

Next reason is to build selfcondifence. When having a positive mindset and most impotently willing we then build selfcondience our mind is a battlefield and we control it and its not about the selfcondicence its more about determination ourselves to it like we can or we will do it. After that its all depending on us weather we want to or not. Then after that the more we practice being positive in our battle fild the more selfcondidence we will have.

So then i hardly agree on positive attitude can guide you to succeed in life its all about three things determination willing and believing with those in mind you can tell all the negitive thoughts to go flying out the window because it has no door to let it in anymore. I truly incuage you to try it out if you want to see a big improvement to succeed in your life. Thank you for hearing me weather I agreed or disagreed,looking to hear back from you soon.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
6A4F483B0224,"You will never grow into something you want to be in the future if you don't find your inner indite. Once you've found it, you could do all sorts of things and find what's best for you. Some people have great talents, some have bad ones, but they have one thing in common is that they practice really hard to master them. No matter what they say, don't let it get in your head just focus on getting to master your talent first.

Practice makes everything perfect even if you found something new, and you want try it out. The first time you won't get it so easily like you thought you would, but though lots of practice you will get it right in no time and better at it to. An example of this is if you're riding a bike, you fall down, but through practice you'll be riding your bike without falling off of it anymore.

We were all born with some talent that we don't know of, we just got to figure out what it is. If you found something you're really good at, then stick with at all times, and never let that talent slip away. If it does then you will be forgetting everything, and the talent you once had, and you'll have to find a new one. Based on your experiences try to find something different but a little simmer.

For example, if you worked at fast food restaurant you might want to work at a store next time. They have one thing in common is money.

Whether having a talent or just practicing, know that you're having fun whether you hate it or love it, and not for very long you will master it in no time. If you have done some of these, then you are ready to master a new talent. Different things can have an impact in your life, but that's how we all stated from very beginning; we never known we had a special talent until we try something new.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
281AB73DF311,"The program is good in many ways such as: helping each other with home work, getting to know each other, and also it is lots of fun.

Home work can be hard on every student no matter the age. It is a lot better to have someone help you rather than being stuck and angry about the fact you don't get the topic. The older students can help the younger ones with their home work. Most likely they would have already learned the topic. Maybe they could even explain it in a better way for that student.

They can all get to know each other. I love meeting older students. I get to ask about what they are learning in school. I could ask about their homework or how their school is like. You could ask them how growing up has changed them. You will be friends and get to know a lot about each other. you may even have a life long friendship in your hands.

My last reason is having fun. I am in a program like this myself at my school. I get to in a classroom with high high school students. They are so much FUN! We play together, learn together, and help each other out. I love it so much and every school across the country should offer an after school program like this.

A program after school where older and younger students hang out is a very good idea. Students can help each other with homework and get to know each other all while having fun. I believe this is a very good program for the good of all students no matter the age or grade. If you are looking for a way to learn and have fun ask someone in charge to offer a program like this at your school.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5
7370AB0DDC7F,"Since I was a little kid my dreamed job has always to be a mechanic, and you might ask why do I want be a mechanic well; when I was little I remember watching my dad fixing cars all day long, at the end of a long day of work I always got played with my bicycle and whenever my bicycle got broken I remember running to my dad telling him to fix it, and I loved watching him fixed it, so whenever I was not with him I always knew how to fix it by myself, when I started to grow I began helping my dad more, he never actually led me work on a car because he said that was it dangerous, but when I was going try

I had to come to the United States and I never learned nothing about car so now that i'm big I'll love to learn more about car and how to be an mechanic.

To be honest I remember telling my dad that one day I was going to be the greatest mechanic of all the time because I wanted him to saw that I could do it and make him feel proud I remember him smiling and telling me that

I could became whatever I wanted to be in this world I just had to worked for it and don't stop until I reached my goal, the only memories I have with my dad are me working with him, we did not spend too much time together I only saw him when he was at work and some weekends because he did not leaved together but now that I'm big and I can make my own decisions and have the opportunity to be anything in this country I want to be an mechanic and make my dad proud.

I know that been a mechanic is not easy and it takes a lot of skills, patience and practice but if I ever get the opportunity i won't waste it i will give my best and i will focus and try to give it all because my that once told me ''nothing is impossible it can be very hard but not impossible'' I'm always having those words in my mind because i'm that type of person that it won't stop until it gets what he wants and all i want is to lean how to be an mechanic and while doing it make my dad proud I'll love to have the opportunity to explore an mechanic company I'll be very thankful for giving me that opportunity.

I'm also looking to be an mechanic because I love cars and when I get a new job I will buy my own car and if learn how to be an mechanic I won't have to pay somebody to fix my car when I could fix it by my own when I always had like and obsession to open stuff and take everything how see how every little thing makes a function and how all together make a hole system works and when I'm finished taking everything out i like to put them all together as before and if put everything how it was maybe thats why i like math so much because in math there are many different ways to salve something and at the end they all give the same answer and cars work almost the same way and I would like to open a car and find what is wrong and see how to fix it and get paid by what i love to do  ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
6AB122D640E1,"If we work together the more we learn. From partnership you can learn and hear what other people come up with. I chose partnership because of diccuse in groups, work in groups, and learn more.

First, discusing in groups is one thing that partnership is. If one person doesn't get something another person can come up with other ideas. If I came up with new ideas i can share my ideas with the group i'm in. People can also hear what another student can up with in their own ways. Students can also correct themselves if they messed up on a word.

Second, working in groups is another idea of working with partners. People can help one another if they are having trouble understanding something. I can also learn new things just by hearing what a student came up with. In a group we can also check each others paper to see what they came up with. We can all work together to come up with new ideas so that our paper makes sence.

Third, by learning more we can get the hang of using that learn strategy. Coming up with new ideas to improve our writing. In group we can talk about each others paper if we think there should be a puncuation ore if a word is spelled wrong. If someone didn't puncuate a sentence correctly we can find a good puncuation to place it so that it would sound right. we acn also revise our paper to each other and hear what each others paper needs correction.

In conclusion, working in groups, learning more, and discuse in groups are reasons why i chose partnership. Working with partners brings new ideas in each others work.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
C4CFCB3B7F13,"Dear principal today i would like to write about the plans that the school have with lunch food, I have hear form many students about the school food lunch chaging many students are disapointed and others aere happy for the news, My self personally I have my on opinion that I would love to share with you about this topic.

In my opinion I think it would be great for the health of the school and student to have a healthy food during school hours, one main reason is bacause it keep our body,healthy strong in which we can reflex our education, It will benefit all the students mainly the ones that are in PE class,eating healthy can improves more day of life and better human body, eathing halthy can prevent you from disease and probably some virus.

by eathing healthy you will not only will be able to be on a good fit you can also feel good and with feeling good about your self means more thant anything in this world, my opinion about this i agree with this change and i would like to see more plans for the upcoming futre years.

every plas have good and bad opinions many student at school have said and have their own opinion, Many of them dont like to eat halthy they just wnat to eat and enjoy their life at the fullest, which is reasenable and i undestand they point, we all know that the food that make our body get fat and get worse is the bad type food but we all love that kind of food, is delicius and it taste great for example pizza, hamburgers and all those kidn of food.

To keep a balance and for the students to be better and feel better about them self i think it will be the best to have a schedule of food for example :monday healthy food, Tuesday bad food...

In my opinon i thik it will be the best for our students and for everyone in the school to have a healthy food schedule that way we can be happy and satisfy with our body. I agree with the plan of replacing the school food for a healthy kind of food. thanks for all your pation and i hope you like my opinions and you could consider this on your future plans.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
AFF314E99BF2,"seeking multiple ideas can be good because...

they can give you good ideas and you can see that people think different.

you will be able to have multiple choices to pick from and make the right decision.

you can even meet new people while your at it and also they can help you see it in another perspective.

Are you having a hard time deciding something? if you are you should talk to other people and see what they think its good to see what others think because, they can help you decide and give you great ideas,for example i had a friend and she would help me decide all the time and she would give out great ideas and i would pick the right decision with her help.

Also they can give you ideas and you can decide what is the best one and you can make the right decision and see what is the best idea and you can make the right decision not just that but you can see how others think and they might think different from how you think for example if you think that chocolate is better and your friend thinks strawberry is better then you should give a try and see if you made the right decision by picking strawberry instead of chocolate or she might be wrong and chocolate is better then strawberry but you will never know in till you try it.

Perhaps they can help you see things in another perspective,also you can make new friends while your at it,but not just that you can share your ideas as well and they can see what you think and help you out if your stuck and they will tell you if your doing something wrong and help you out and see it in another perspective,you might think that going to the movies is better and your friend might think that staying at home and watching a movie is better and she starts telling you why its better and you end up staying home and watching a movie because the reason she gave you where good.

You should give new things a try to because you will never know if its a good idea or not just ask your friends on what you should do during the weekend and they will help you and you will be able to try new things and take new ideas from that and its also nice to talk to someone and share ideas it will keep your mind off things and you wont be as stressed because you will have someone helping you.

those are the reason i think you should be seeking ideas not just from one person but from more and i think you should give it a try and see how it goes and hopefully it goes well because it works for me so give it a try hopefully i helped you see things in another perspective.       ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
9B5E878ED861,"Everyone would like to receive praise for their work, even if the work is not their best effort, that will make them not to think low of themselves and just give up. In my opinion, true self-esteem comes from praise because it gives an individual determination, and self confidence.

Although, some people believe that self-esteem comes from an achievement because it gives self-discipline; for instance, a student did a poor job on a classroom test , that means he is not receiving any praise and didn't achieve anything, but because of that he will be self-discipline, so he would do a good job next time and receive an achievement.

I think true self-esteem come from praise because it gives an individual determination. For example, if a student gets a non pleasant grade in class, and the teacher praises the student but also tell him to do better next time, that would give the student hope and determination to do better next time.

In addition, true self-esteem comes from self-confidence. For instance, I am in a soccer club, but every time we practice I don't do better because I don't have the confidence, but instead of the coach cutting me off the team, he came up to me and told me that I can do better. He praised me and courage me to do better. That is going me to build self-confident in me and I would start doing better during practice.

According to my reason and examples stated above, I think true self-esteem comes from praise because it gives a student determination and help build self-confidence in a student. To all the teachers, please praise a student work and let the student feel like the can do more and better.      ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
17085E68BA88,"Personally, I have been able to find myself to be able and do more when I'm up and active, as in doing something good for me, someone else, or in general. It's like you're able to do more once you're up and you are able to tell yourself that you can do better and you can do more than what you're supposed too. As Jefferson said ""it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Sometimes you can be so into the work and time can fly and you can get so much done with no distractions.

When I am doing something positive for myself and I want to do more, I find me telling myself a lot ""what good will this do to me?"" or ""where will it get me?"" I'm sure that I'm not the only one asking myself questions like these when I want do something good for myself or my life. When we are doing something for us, we can ask ourselves questions like the ones I stated. Once we do more than what we want to do and keep a positive mindset about it, that can be able to stick with us and become a good habit we can carry on in our lives. Which is amazing. We'll be able to strive for the best for ourselves and others when we carry on a good habit like that and show others how much we care about not just ourselves but others as well. We can always be able to carry a positive mindset with us and we can pass that on to others and it'll be able to motivate people to do more than what we can do once we are up and doing something.

I really tend to look at the bright side a lot and look at what is at the end or the outcome, when I'm trying to strive for the best by doing the absolute best that I can. We may have our moments where we can get tired of doing the most, but then we are able to tell ourselves how much the hard work is worth at the end when we do the most of what we're supposed too. Once we do the best that we can, we can reflect on it later on in life and be so proud of ourselves and tell ourselves how tired we were for doing the most but how much worth it all was at the end. I have my moments where I can be so tired of trying my best and just want to give up. But then I take a step back, look at my work, and once I'm done and I tell myself how proud I am because it got me far. We also are able to have no regrets at the end of the day and reflect on it and see how dedicated we were and still are to this day. We can tell others our story and say how proud you are for yourself and see how dedicated you were and still are for doing what you can and doing better. Not in any bragging type of way but to motivate them in a way. You're able to pick up the habit of being so dedicated to bettering yourself or others by doing more once you're doing. It's like self motivation, telling yourself ""you can do more.""

Once we pick up this good habit of accomplishing more than what we are supposed too, we motivate not just ourselves, but others as well to do more and more. Like I said, we can look at the bright side of it always, and feel nothing but good and proud of ourselves at the end. When we build this good habit and do the most, we are able to do the more than what we could before and little by little building that up. At the end of accomplishing what you could, you are able to tell others what the hard work and dedication gives you at the end of it all. As well as how far it get's you in life. It can sometimes motivate others to strive for the best and it can help them, sometimes they need to hear you out for it to motivate them. What I like about it is that, when we are able to pick up this good habit of ours, we can tell others about it and it can motivate them to do the same. It's like we talk them into to striving for the best for themselves and others in life. It's like we are passing this good habit we've built down and then it just keeps going and going. Sometimes hearing others out really helps others a lot.

When you are able to just take a moment and take one step back, it really is possible for you to accomplish more than what you can when you're doing. You motivate not just yourself but others when you really are dedicated to doing your best and it can become a good habit. You're able to pass that down and it can give you a positive mindset to it all. The outcome can turn out to be good and make you feel good about yourself at the end. It can get you so far in life as well and you're able to look back at the most that you have accomplished and have no regrets about any of it. It is truly motivational and can truly help if you are really dedicated to it all.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
144671E445D0,"A British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote ""Do you think that we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control?"". Well some people believes we choose our own character traits or influences by our control. Other people doesn't agree that we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control. I think that we choose our character traits, or our character is formed by influences beyond our control because we're doing things that maybe enjoy doing, or we get to choose what we want to be. And I am going to talk about this and why I agree on this.

I Agree that we get to choose our character traits or formed by influences beyond our control because you get to do anything when it comes to you becoming what you wanna be. Another reason is that no one can control you on how you should be later on in the future. I also think that doing the things you like to do would change you for example, helping people that are in need will make you a better person because you're controlling yourself on what you are doing. Another example is that if you're doing bad things, it would make you a bad person because of your actions. That's why people think we change our character traits by choosing our own or formed by influences from our controls.

Other people doesn't agree that we can change our own character traits or formed by influences from our controls because they think it cannot change their own character traits from the actions they do. Also many doesn't believe that doing what they wanna do won't change them later on in the future. Another reason is because they dont believe that we cannot choose our own character traits and that it should only be 1 trait about yourself. For example doing something positive wouldn't effect them because they can easily change and do something negative later in the future. Last thing is that they don't think we get to choose our own traits and basically say that we are born the way we are without changing our character traits.

This makes me think if people who does't believe that they can change their character traits or controlling their influences can be a bad thing for them. the reason why i think it's a bad thing is because they don't think they can't change the way they act with actions they do normally. For example, they think doing positive actions would not change their character traits. Changing your character traits can make you a better person because of the positivity you are spreading.

if you spread positivity or have a good mindset could change your character traits.

So in this essay i believe that people can change their character traits or formed by influences beyond our control. I say this because you can choose what you wanna be or act later on in life. Another reason is any actions people can do also makes them change their character traits. This is very good if you treat others with respect; you will be a positive person. This will also help you in life because if you think down you wouldn't be motivated, but you can change that by doing something nice to yourself or to someone. That will give you a good mindset and want to do it more often if it helps you feel motivated by making someones day .",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
462769ABDD5B,My opinion about performing a community service is that they should have a community service. i think that they should have that because the a community service gives a help to the community because helping out in the community is very good and could give a good help to residents in the community because some communities have old people or even paralised person which can't help out in the community. So i think the students should have a community service. The principal should required the students to have a community service. If students would decide to have community service they would do a awesome job by helping out residents and helping out the environment because your helping it out by not letting that much trash get in to our world. You would help the plants by letting them grow more and live more. Then will have much more food and vegetables. So i think having a community service is good so will help out the environment to stay clean and have a better and cleaner community. I think those students who say community service takes too much time they should just give some time when they are just sitting their in the couch and go help out your community and the environment.,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
0D9288F0A6C9,"Generic_Name

10/23/2018

Schools should extend time by two hours because students will have more time to do there class work. If a students have more time to do there class work then they will not have there class work as homework. Having more time in school means that you can get your work done and have extra time to do othere class work. In my old school we only had seven hours of school and we have eight classes in a day. most of the time we barley had time to finish ower class work so we had to finish it as homework. We also did not have time to do labs, expirement, and project. Thats why having more time can help us do all of those things. Another reason would be is that teachers will have time to explane to students things that they do not get. Teachers have time to explane things to a students and help them under stand more about what they are learning. In the movie Matilda students there only had six hours of school and teacheres did not have time to explane things to students. Students only went to school, tooke notes, and went back home. Sense they had no time at school to do class work they had a lot of homework. Most of them did not even finish there home work becauses it was to much. At the end of the movei students had took an exam and they had the whole six hours to finish it. When the time was up ninde persont of the students did not finished so they automaticly failed. if only they just had more time, more students would have passed the exam. Another reason would be that having more time can help students is that scientists prove that having more time added in a school schedual will help students incress there acidemic by ten persont. That means if i spend more time in school learning i will be come smarter then students with a regular schedual. Having more can help students finish work they would not normaly finish when they have a regular schedual.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
C655195F667C,"The best way of work.

One question has been asked during a long time. Is it better to work alone or to work in a group?

Most of the people and analysts have got the conclusion that working in groups could be more beneficial.

A factor the support this idea it is because you get to have different thoughts, ideas and ways to see the life that can help you in bad situations. For example, if you are planning either something as big as a school event, or something as simple as a classroom presentation, there is occasions when you run out of ideas. You can count in the group. They are going to be there giving diverse solutions to the problem, otherwise, by yourself you could be struggling like if you are in road with no exit.

Working in a group sometimes can make you relax, laugh and bring positivism, even in challenging moments or when you are facing stress. Every time you have to work in this way, you do not spend boring moments. There will be always something to talk about. You and your team would be saving memories that in a future would be a moment of laugh.

Another fact about working in group is that you get to finish the work in a faster. More people working in the a series of things in a quickly way than just one, makes a big difference. It will give space to the creativity, where you can practice more, give details to the work or even do new creations.

Because you are working in a team you do not focus only in ""I"" you open your mind and start thinking in ""we"". This is going to be useful in the future, when you go out to the real world. Working with other people, you have to deal with different personalities and thoughts. The team working abilities are going to be place in your mind.

When as a team all your tasks are completed you will find a great euphoria in the results. It is going to make everyone proud of themselves and also it is going to be a method to keep pushing them up and never give up.

Sometimes when you get to work in a group it might sound or seem a difficult task. But instead, you learned new experiences and new abilities. It become a helpful tool to develop character and to grow as a person. You have to learn how to speak with the people and how to tell your ideas in a clear manner. That is why many people agreed that working in teams brings more benefits than just working alone.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
E4124757C2B0,"I

disagree with adding one and half hour to school each day because students would get tired and it would be more things to the students have to know.

In our school we have 9 hours of school and if we add it would have 10 and I don't think students want to stay in school for a long time. I get that school is a place where you learn and school get's you a job and you can get a free scholarships to college without paying but at the same time students need 7 hours maximum so they would fit all the knowledge and all the subjects in there mind.

Teachers want students to learn more because they want student's to have a successful life and learn more but student's have less time to listen because they want to go home .In our school we have 4 subjects were we have tests and some students fail it because there studying for other classes even though it's not important like for example,elective classes,I get that elective is important to but students but it's really not important. The important classes are Math,Science and Language arts, and History. The school board is not gonna like when students fail there tests when they have 10 hours in school each day. Students should have time when they get home to study so they can ace there test,Since our school is a Middle school we should have less hours so we can pass 6th,7th and 8th grade without having any difficult in school.

Students wouldn't benefit if the time is longer they would not even pay attention to the teacher so i disagree with having one and half hour to school each day. On the other hand,I think i could agree to this because in order to become successful you have to study and work really hard and get enough to time to do your work.

I think students would go to college if they had a lot of time and students would understand things better we should have a vote where students decide whether we should have one and a half hour or not so then the school board can see which one got the highest votes and they would decide if we should have a longer time or regular time. This year a lot of students are getting bad grades because there is so many tests and works they have to do and it's always do on time so i feel like we should have less time in school so when you get home you have a study time.

The school board will like this idea because being in school for us is so much and there is no point for staying 10 hours in school because teachers would get tired and students will get bored. Students have a lot of work they have to do so it's better to stick with 9 hours of school and let student's go home and do there homework and then read and study for the next day of school.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
74FF4379012C,"BEING YOURSELF.

Being yourself is by far the most fulfilling accomplishment any individual would have ever made. Not only does it take a lot of confidence, devotion, and self acceptance, but also the ability to learn, understand and love yourself both internally and externally.

people tend to have different role models for various reasons, for example my younger sister always wanted to be like the famous singer Beyonce because she had a beautiful voice. They might have some things in common which draws them closer to the idea of being just like them. Little do they know that them turning out exactly just like their role models is almost impossible because they lack their unique personality traits and acquire their own completely different set of traits which makes them who they are.

The sooner people realize that each individual is unique in one way or another the better. Being yourself does not mean breaking the rules because you like it but doing the right thing in your own unique way. Not only does that stand out but also makes you feel good about yourself. A perfect example would be comedian Liza Koshy from YouTube who made a whole career out of being unapologetically herself while she did comedy!.Using her as inspiration would be healthier than aspiring to be just like her.

With that I conclude that being yourself is not necessarily a walk in the park but putting effort into it would make a bigger difference than following the crowd. Ideas lead to actions and by visualizing yourself doing things correctly but in your own way is killing two birds with one stone! Author Waldo Emerson was right about being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else being the greatest accomplishment.           ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
C61946131A41,"Identifying a career at a young age.

Identifying a career at a young age may be difficult for some students ,most of them think different ,some of them doesn't even care about their future or what they are going to do with their life ,parents may think this is a good idea because they want a good life and good future for their childrens and want them to be successfull and this will change their perspective of thinking.

Although some people think that this idea is a bad idea , and this is going to be hard for students,because the students are going to have more homework,projects,test to get prepared for their career and some quizzes too,Actually people this days is use to only if the students gratuated and get out of school is when they have to start thinking on what the students want to do or work , for example if students finish high school and they start to work in a regular work like a restaurant,they may think i'm already here working good ,I get pay good ,why would I go to school again,I don't need to go school again just to spend money ,I'm good like that just getting my own money to wasted only for me,and this would be the way he is thinkg because when he was in high school; people didn't talk to him about careers when he was at school.

One reason for start identifying what students want at a young age is because they would have a lot of time to think what they really want in their life ,for example if a student is in 9 grade and he says I want to be a police and then he is in 11 grade and he think different and he wants to be a doctor,he would a chance to change his career because he had time to do it , another example i can give if like what is a student want to start knowing how his career work, like the doctor career he may wanna know how much credits he need to make in high school , how many years his career is going to take ,if he is going to have the opportunity to go collage, would he be able to pay his career,that's why is a good idea to start thinking at a young age,and start to getting prepare for what he is going to do in his career.

Another reason for start thinking what the students want in their life,is that they may know on what they are good at,to know their self,and start to think if they are going to be successfull in their future ,they may start doing good in high schoool to do credits and try to get a scholarship ,for example the student finish high school and he is going for his career maybe a doctor and at the middle of his preparation for being a doctor he saids I'm not good at this and this career is not going to a successfull for me I would only give up a this point , he may think this way because he didn't have opportunity to change what he wannted to change ,why? because the school start to talk about this when he was in 12 grade and he did have change to think well,he didn't have chance to change his way of think ,another example I can give is that some students like latinos students , some of them doesn't have a good economical life and this may be hard forsome of them on finishing their career ,so they have to start getting credits ,start to get good grades to get a scholarship, Because most of the latinos students want to be successfull in their ife and this would work for them ,Identifying want students want for their future at a young age is good ,because they know what they really want and this really work

In conclusion ,Identifying a career at a young age is good because the students will have they time to know what they really want ,and to know on what they are good at,and start to do good at high school for they to graduated,the students will have more opportunities in their life is they choice a good career for their life , this is a plan that would change the way how students think;young students think better and very clear and this may guide them toward a specific career in their life.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
44D6EEDAE5BD,"Most people will just act all childish just because they are having a bad day without even thinking that it can ruin their future. Bad impressions usually lead to failure, it can ruin opportunities, and people can also get themselves mistaken. I agree that someone's first impressions are almost impossible to change because it can affect their future.

Firstly to begin with, first impressions usually lead to failure in life when they are bad impressions. People need to learn how to act politely even if they are full of sorrow inside without showing it. When people make bad impressions about themselves, it always makes it harder for other people to see who that person really is. Loosing big opportunities always lead to a challenging future.

Secondly another, bad impressions always ruin many opportunities for people, especially young people. It is an every day thing in the United States. People can loose job opportunities and it makes it harder for them to get a second chance. Second chances are really big deal, no one can live without them. If someone did some awful things and did not get another chance, then that person just lost an opportunity of a lifetime and is going to regret it for the rest of his or her life.

Also, people get themselves mistaken all the time because of that. Other people will never see that person for who he or she really is when that person is acting in an unusual way which is not normal. They will look at that person as he introduced himself as. They would not want nothing to do with him. They would also think that he is mean even if he is just having a bad day.

In conclusion, no one should let problems make them show a bad impression about themselves. Everyone has problems. They just need to learn how to control themselves and not make any scenes about it to embarrass themselves. They should know that the consequences are real and they are not games. People need to grow up, be responsible, act fairly, and be happy.  ",3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
3DCF3E6F4A13,"Well most students enjoy summer vacation because was one of the most beautiful station in the year for one all of students, they enjoy with the families, friends that things in the summer, though some teacher say the summer break is too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall.

I think that summer is one of the most special station or period because you share more with your Family, Friends, and all students have merit to share more with the most important persons in their lives because a lot of our parents working 10 to 12 hours of Monday to Saturday in sometimes Sunday too, and they don't have a lot of time to share with they families.

In my case, I love when it's summer vacation because I have a lot and good experiences with my Family, with God when left to the house our going to different places, I feel that is these period is when I share more with my mom, She is the most important person in my life, she is who are always with me in the good and bad things, she is who give me advice every day about the good and bad things to not make that things that I don't need to do and don't pass for a lot of things that she pass when she was young, I love these time of summer because is when I pass more time with my mom and she help me to be better every day in my School, Work, Church and everywhere that going.

The mother is one of the most important person what I have in my life because she is who always are in there for me and help to always be good person, good in my school and a lot of more things. And I have beautiful experiences with God and these is that I love more is to pass my time with God because I learn more about things important and that help my life.

I think the 2 months that all students have to summer is a good time because are pass like 9 months in school and these is too much because sometimes you want to make something but school is to difficult and that people can't to share with special people.

Well when the educators or teachers say that summer vacation is too long because student do not retain the information is not true because the students retain these information about Works, Projects, Homework, Classwork the information is in our Brain, Mind, are that things important and basic.

I don't agree that person argue should be year-round and that only have 3-4 weak breaks in the summer is like only one month and you can't enjoy and make your summer funny with you parents because you are thinking in school, I don't be agree with these the summer is when you can pass more time with your important person because there is the period when they have the vacation to, I thing the summer is for enjoy and pass a funny time with your Mom, Father, Brothers, Sisters, and all your Family.

I say that is good to have 2 months and like 2 weeks of vacation because you clearing you Mind, you don't thing in a lot of Homework or Works of School. I have one experience in my life when I were in Generic_City that only thing that I have in my MInd was Homework, Projects, Presentations in my School, Programs of my School and one day my family say I want to going to share with all and I say I can't go because I have a lot of work to do and I need to finished and my uncle say Generic_Name is time to share with your family, is time to you clearing your mind about school and I say another time I need to finish my works about school and all my family going to share and I stay in my house working in all my projects of school and I sit in my room, I was thinking you loss beautiful time with my family for to make my works, and I say is time to you share more with your family because your family in every moment stay there.

Everything the specific moment when you have time with share with your family, friends share because you don't not in what moment you can loss your Mom, Father, Brothers, Uncle, Sisters, Aunt, Cousins, etc, when is time to school make all your works in time.

Don't take you Education like obligation, taken like one of the opportunity to be better.

In some moments you have difficult time but you need to continue, to be stronger, the education is where you learn more about the all things Human, Animals, Solar System, H2o and a lot of things important what help you life in the future you learn things what in your future you can put in practice, you can teaches another person that need to know more.

For everything have time, your Family, Works, Friends, School all these things depends about you, for these reason I think When is time to school is school, When is time to your family is family.

So you need to think and put your agenda in order to you make the important things in order so right now I change a lot of things in my life and these it is the Monday to Friday to be concentrate in my Education, Saturday to Sunday in God and my family, when it's time to pass with my family I pass time with my family and now I share more.

And for these reason I think the summer vacation is important because a lot of students don't have their parents in here maybe live 8 hours, 10 hours in when it's vacation they going to pass time with their Parents.

You need to be have the order in your life you need to make time for everything.

The Education is important because is where you learn things important but most important for me is my family because they can one day no be in here in the Earth because they dead.

And I think when it's summer vacation the Educators or teacher enjoy to their vacation and pass good time with their family and when it's time to come back to school review somethings because not everything forget somethings are in the brain that only need to do is to review.

Then the summer vacation are so good 2 months and 2-3 weeks to you enjoy with all the persons important and special to you, so enjoy and pass a funny summer vacation.

So enjoy, teachers don't thing the summer is too long because is a shorter period that one student have for vacation, teacher enjoy vacation!!.",2.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
65CC82C9B3C9,"I I agree because people should have more time to rest mostly because the effect of the stress and the health of their body. Schools should be the same, they could have more time to do their homework and rest, because there is stress in children. In the majority of middle schoolers and high schoolers there is always stress and preoccupations about grades. Most of high school teenagers stress and worry about colleges if they got in or not. And by taking the four-day weekend we are reserving energy and resources, by not driving cars or motorcycles because of the toxic smoke a vehicle throws to the air we breath.

Sometimes some of the big businesses become of abusive or people's hours to get extra work done. It should be people's decision if they want to stay extra hours if they want to get their work done. People work to live and not live to work they somehow got to look for ways to provide themselves and sometimes their families. If they were to finish their jobs with everything done , they get to go home and be with their families.

Having the time off can be people to catch with work if they are behind or for teenagers to catch up with homeworks. School sometimes can be exhausting because some people could be depressed or stressed out to get their things done. Everyone can run out of energy especially when everybody expects for you to do good. Every single member of your family is always telling you to do good just to get things in life is very stressful. Working hard through four days it is more then enough to get work done if you put your mind to it.

People need the extra time to relax, because it is not good for the body mentally and physically. Working too much causes stress and grueling because thinking too much about work and worrying about the bills that they have to pay. By being worried too much can even cause you to go to the hospital so it would be not be good for your health. When you think about the things you have to do to support yourself you have to put yourmind to it and not slack if you want that advantage of thedays you are going to have work.

In conclusions I agree because people should have more time to relax and not stressed about their jobs and what they have to do. People get exhausted and start to worry about all of their responsabilities they have to do. Working for 10 hours is more then enough for a person. Sometimes teeagers and adults carry many preoccupations that they shouldn't worry about but they have to if it envolves them. Schools should be the same and not be so stressful, it could be dangerous to stress and not sleep because they worry about the responsabilities that have to be done.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
FFAEAF8D0C90,"Soccer, all people like to play soccer, and other facinate to play soccer.

First, Many people, like to play soccer because someone like to wond some cup, other like soccer to distracted his maind, other like soccer to live all problem in the field. I think soccer is the most game in the world becuse when you wond the game, you are will be excited when you take the cup with you hands. Someone like to wach the game and like when his team are wining the game.

Second, Some people don't like when his team is losting the game, some people are luck like angry when his team losted the game, I think people need to know soccer is to distract person, but the aficionate will put angry with the team, the people need to know, what the team don't will be wond every game, but the aficionate don't see that, the aficionate want what the team wond all the game.

Them, soccer player wee luck like happy when the game was finish, but the aficionate is angry because his team lost the game, some player talk with the aficnote and say to the aficionte, everyone need to know the team never will be wond all game; Everyone need to know that if you will be stay with the team you need to stay with in the bad, and the good too, but some aficionate stay winth the team only when the team wond the game. In the reason is that aficionate need to stay with the team everytime.

Inaddition, Some aficionate don'tcare if the team lost games, in the player apreceated when some aficionate don't say enithing if the team lost the game, in the team work hard and trie to wond all game, when the aficionate will stay happy with team, or with player do really goodjob in the game, in some player tell to the afocionate the team will be trie to wond the game for you aficionate thanks to stay with the tam.

Finally, the aficonate is happy with the team because the team wond the campion cup, but the reason is that team wond the game and champion cup is because some aficionate stay with the team every moment never lived the team, In the team never give up, but the team know when the team is happy or angry, but the team contune with season and play all the games.

Conclusion: I think an aficionate in the world, nee to stay happy with his team, but the aficinate don't see when his team trie to fo everything right and trie to wond the game .Other think aficionate nee to stay with his team in bad, nd good too. Some aficionate, say good bye to the team when the team lost some game in the season, but some one stay with team the aficionate will stay with team don'tcare id the team los the aficonathe will be stay winth team.",2.5,2.0,2.5,1.5,2.0,2.0
69C237AC88FF,"Dear TEACHER_NAME

TEACHER_NAME i agree of community service because i done it before. It's not bad and it doesn't take nothing of my time. I had to do 120 hours of community service. At first i thought it would be boring but a few days later it was fun. I had to do 120 because me and other friends did trespassing at SCHOOL_NAME. It kinda sucks because i had to go to court and my mom and dad were mad because they had to pay 200 dollars for the ticket. That wasn't cool!! Well the next day i went that same school and they told me that i couldn't be there at all! and they also said that if they see me there at that same school they would call the police on me again. That's why you shouldn't drive fast or pass red lights because they would double the money. Now i noe not to go to that school again. But once in while i go there to say hi to the principle and the teachers i had when i was in 6 grade and when i was in 5 grade those were my best teacher ever.",2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
C6EE9996089C,"In my opinion I

think is better to work in group because has a lot of benefits. One of the example is the group help to think better,

each other and fast. second the workes is help to earn more money for the company and for the workes.

The first reason the workes is help to find information and internet or and books when some one had a problem like some one in the group is sick the other ones substitute in a job, sometimes in a group has a lot inconvenient like someone disagreement but then can fix an any problem to solve because they are professional.

The second reason is to earn money and hours,

when the workes work great an a job the company is pay more better , in a group is more beneficial for the company and for workers an extra hours,

because they do more efficient job, and also workes can help to earn more business with other companies and other countries more practical to work in a group they can help each other.

In conclusion I think is more beneficial to work in a group for several reason one of then is more easy to think in group help each other when the work is difficulty. Other reason is more practical to work and earn money for company and for workers and its beneficial to work with other companies.                                                ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
3814F9116CD1,"Well the business that I want to visit is about hospital or pharmacy,and now I will try to convince to get the permission the manager of the business.

Hello sr , how are you? I hope that you are good , the reason why I am writing this letter is because I want to tell you or ask you or get the permission of you , if I can visit your business? Well I have some reason ,why I want to visit your business :

First I wanna visit your business because

I am interest and I wanna learn more of your business, because I want to work or have a career in my High School , probabily may you ask why I am so interesting of your business , but the answer is this is because one day I was at my hause playing soccer with my friends, and after we done to play, my mom call me that was a mergency at my sister hause, so I drived so fast that I can , when I was there , my sister had a heart attack , so we took her to the hospital , so after the thirty minute was nobody there who can attend us and the more time that we was spanding more bad was my sister , so I was so angry with the hospital service, so we didn't want to continue weating in the same hospital , so we went to another hospital that people said that is good hospital , but real was that there was the same thing , so my question was where are the doctors? why nobody attend us? my sister is almost die after 30 minutes a doctor came to us to attend my sister , now my sister is good she has no problems with her heart , but when the doctor done to attend us , I asked him a question , I said why all the hospitals take to long for attend the people?

and he said It's becuase we don't have many medicament to attend all people who enter sick or with serious problems also he said we don't have a good suply for attend the people who came very sick or almost dieing, also we don't have many doctors in here, that why we are slow to attend the people.

well I was thinking about all people who die because in many hospital don't attend them, but sometime the people don't see the problems that happenning in the hospitals ,also many doctors don't get a pay , but they still working because they see the needs the people have.

well I thought that may be I can be a doctor who save life and help people who need it , that is why I am interest in this business or job.

Second reason why I wanna convince you to let me visit your business it's because I wanna be a doctor, and learn how talk to sick people , and see what things you use to emergency , also I want to have a good aventure , also I wanna meat people to make new friends , my second point is a little be friendly , because in your business you have to make friends to help or you can help them, like sometime we don't know something how do it , and may be your partner know how do it, that I am trying to explaim is that if make friends in job or business is to work problems that you don't know together, but if I make friends in the business it's to work , not for play during the work..

Third reason I want to convince you is that many people or students wanna explore certian occupations , I select this one because I wanna learn about your business, how they work ? what type the rules is in your business, and how much you pay , what days we have free, all the normal things that we know that I have to learn , and also I want to know, how many days we work by week? .

Fourth reason that I want to convince you maneger is that your business is the best one and I wanna learn everything of your business and know more everyday and , you know what? when I was little my mom asked me that what I wanna be when I have more age or what are my dreams , everyday my mom asked me the same questions and I said I wanna be doctor the person who save life who help people and my mom told that if I put all the me , also I tell you a short story , One day when I had five years old , I was in the school , and some bad people that they only like to play around and make people angry , one day I was studying and one of those kids started to annoying me and teld me bad words , but he told me one thing that I never I will forget is that he told me that never I will have my dreams in my life, that I will looking for but never will be real, and I started to think about it and I was like sad because I thought that if that he told is real, if I never find my dream, what will happen with me ? what will be my life? and one day I was thinking in room I said I never give up , I will fight for my dreams , and nobody teld me what to do , I just will follow my heart for everything , the point of this short story is that never give up if have a dream looking for ,don't let people who make you feel bad , don't listen negative people , just do it wherever you want to be or what want you that the people says when you die or something like that...

fiveth reason that I want to convince you that let me visit your business, is that many people have the chance to explore or visit a business but some people just don't care or they try but , if they can't make real , they give up or they just move to another job or another dreams, but it's not how many time you go down , if no how many you get up, for example: I want to visit you business because that interest me and that why I am writing this and give you many examples of me and another people is because I want to learn if you give me the permission, I think that if let me visit your business, I will have more interest and I will have more emotion to be a doctor that is the work that interest and I will be honest with you all this that I wrote is for have your permission for I can visit your business and can know things that I want to know or see things that I never see before , also I want to tell you that , if you give me the opporttunity to visit your business , and hope that you can let me visit your business if is like that , thank you for take a little of your time to read this , I hope that you have a great day.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5
D457F3AEAC6D,"I do agree with Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchhill without failure how can we humans excied in life to get to success? To prove my statement i will provide two reasons, and also two examples, explaining why i believe that failure can lead humans to a world we couldnt imagine it could exiest.

Reason number one would be Battles and Wars. I believe that losing Battles and Wars help us the united states of america create new weapons wither it was nuclear or bullets. Another reason why i say that is because without losing those battles and wars how wouldve we found out about atomic bombs or harden steel bullets. It sounds crazy and highly dishorroable to are fallen heros who were killed in action, but if we won wars and battles everytime we would soon fall. Because we keep using the same positions and plans in order to win, and we also would feel too confident in wining so we will be using the same weapons over and over again and let the other team discover those new atomic weapons.

Reason number two is about automobles. Automobles have been around for a very long time now i guess if my calculations are right its been almost 1,500 years since Henrey Ford showed the world his first ever automoble, the Model T. Henrey Ford had to go through so many people doubting his Model T project would work. Day by day, month by month, even year after years of failed experments. But in the spring of 1830 he successfully got one fully working and running. He had to go through so much walls blocking his path in order to show the world that a automoble was and still is possible. Another example would be Tesla. The famous electronic car company to power there cars with electricity. those guys mustve gone through so many experments that i cant even imagine and the amout of failed ones too and im pretty sure there is alot more failed test projects than passed ones. I say that to be reasonable about it not saying it to make fun of them because if they didnt fail the first time the first modles would have been super crappy, like the cars would suck. Because after every failed project you get new ideas and new imagines of how you want the car to repersent the company and have a good repuation. So if failure wasnt an option for these two companys the cars of 2020 wouldve sucked so much because the company will only car about the money and just send running crappy looking cars that we humans have as a need for work and family.

Those are my last two thoughts about failure and Wisten Churchill isn't wrong at all. Without failure succces would feel like nothing like if it was pointless. And we wouldnt live the world we live in today if it wasnt for people back then who didnt stop failing until they reached succesed.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
D43F9C906CD6,"Generic_Name

02/14/19

societies decide student at the young age are expected to decide what collage or univercity they want and what carrer they should be going to chose. students in freshman year cannot decide what they want to study or what collage they want to go ,because their too young to make that important decition even if they make it , when the years passed they are going to study another carrer, anoher one that gives then inspiration

.student should not commit in a carrer with young age,they can make a bad decition, if they have another oportunity to change their decition it can be good but if they can't it can be bad if you get in a carrer that your are not going to improve.

students who enter to HS for the first time they should focus on get classes for example: art, economy, guitar, etc. Another responsability that the student shoud focus is in get credits for dipoma that they want that can be standard or advanced diploma another think they must focus is get good grade for all four years nine, ten, eleven, and the most important 12 but when the student get into the eleven grade they must being thinking about what they want to study, searching for collage and carrers, get imformation about collage and universities that can be good for you. when they get a good noulesh ,they can ask than self, its that what they want to study and don't led anyone make a decition for you,think about a carrer that can like you and benefit you in the future something that like you and never is going to get tired of your carrer because you like what you chose for your and you have a pasion on your carrer that why society have to change that expectation that the students have to make a desiton in young age,choosing a carrer is not a game its imortant to contrivuted with the society in life if you choos a carrer that you are not going to improve is going to be dificult cause yo have make a wrong decition

Teachers in higt school shuld provide a good ideas for student talks about, how the collage or the univercity it can be teach them how is the way the collage and univercities work with the students. However, when the students are youngest they cannot decide what they want to study, firts they want be a doctor and the a few years later a police and thats how it goes youngest student can't decide what they want to be until they get to a good age and a good inspiration on a class and that helps them to decide what carrer they want,student should focus on the carrer they want baced in what class are they very good when you are in eleven garde you see that your are good in something, you don't have to chose a carrer that you don't understand or you don't like. schools shuold focus on what the student want to be in the future but they can focus to in what are they good for example: they can see if the student if good painting it can be a painter or if the are good in number it can be good in bussines such as banks , cashier and they can improve all this nuolage in the job that the students has as a part-time ,thats what the schools should focus in what the students are good and then make a decition of what can study and what it can be a good collage or univercity for each one .

societies should not expect that students with young age should decide to chose what to study (a carrer) they don't have clare ideas to decide what they want to syudy. However, many student that make a decition in young age they can decide but in a few month they are going to chose another carrer because they don't like what they decide or they don't have the noulage, that why youngets students cannot make a important decition until they get in a good noulage.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E3DF63035440,"I am agree with Churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. It is true that to be success first, you need to have a clear mind of what you want to be or to do. Because in some of the cases can be very struggle and difficult to be success. For example, a very famous statement says,

""After the storm comes the calm.""

This can be similar with the Churchill's statement. Because this explain that it does't matter how worst you see it but it would be great after the problems or you are struggle with.

Furthermore, to be successful you would pass by a hard things, for example something that people says,

""Nothing is impossible if you don't tried.""

and

""Nothing is easy in this life.""

This is a true statement that all people have to do and we have to know.

Additional, the word

""failure""

plays an important role to be success. One important thing is that if somebody loss her or his enthusiasm or will power can be worst because that means that you are giving up what you have already and for that you already worked for it and don't want to fight that victory of success anymore. Sometimes you can fail but that does't matter because if you tried and tried again and again after you can get it. That would be one of your goals that you would remember. This shows how important is going from failure to failure to be success.

Finally, to be success we would failure first because by that you would know what you did wrong and thats why failure pursuit an important role in our life to be success.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
CBF103FE58DD,"I'm agree with the statement, because in my experience everyone likes a job clean and professional, i think that is important when you witting something, it's good to take the attention from the person who reading, support the main ideas, need to have professional facts. is important the piece of statement have a good title and one of the important things when you writing a statement is that you need to use quotation marks. The reason why all this are important is because is easy to reader to under stand what do you want to transmitting in you writing.

For example, if i want to write about a a book about story, i need to have scenario, characters conflict and conclusion. i need that story make sense, ideas that support my story, and double check all my work to main sure that my story have specific facts, in my story i need to use quotation marks. if i want that my book cause a impact in that people, needs to have a professional title and cover. i think this the main important things that anyone need to do a professional work when it's time to make a statement or a story or anything you want to write.                                                                                    ",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
120FE0B76D5C,"Imagine if you are in school and they decide to change to a four days of school, but they also will extend the school day two hours. your parents get angry because is the closest school you have and it's fifty minutes away from home. what would you do if your house is to far away? school should change to a four days school because students who live far away will get tired, the students who work after school will lose their jobs, and will not have enough time to spend with their family. these changes will bring problems for these students and I will tell you why.

First: Students who live far away will get tired. these students will not have enough time to do their homework because of the time they spend in their journey back to home. This may be a problem for the students who want to stay after school. they will be not able to do it because of the time. In my case i'm tired because I don't have the enough time to sleep. scientist say that students might sleep for nine hours, but I can't because of the time I spend working after school.

Second: These new changes will bring problems for the students who work after school. They may lose their jobs because they can't be on time. The students who live by their own will not have the money to pay for the things they need in order to graduate. 50% is the percentage of students, who work after school and they will get in serious problems if the school makes these changes. They will get bad grades, tired, and also this can make a person to think about doing bad things such as robbery or drugs.

Finally; These students will not have the time to spend with their parents. parents enjoy spending their free time in the afternoon, but this is a problem because of the four days of school. student do not have the time for their parents, because they arrive home late. these students will feel they are alone without any support. because os the amount of time the have with their families.

Some students say it is a great idea to change to a four days of school. but they are wrong because of the students who live far away, it will be hard to finish their studies.

In conclusion school should not change to a four days to because students will get tired, lose their jobs and will not have the time to enjoy with their family.    ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
074FA0221628,"It has been said that the first impressions are impossible to change. First impressions are not impossible to change beacuase you dont know what someone is going thru in their day. When i started working, one of the guys wasn't been nice to anyone. What i didn't know was he was having a bad day. After a while he started to feel better and being nice to others, and I realize he was good person.

Another example is when i transfer from Generic_School to Generic_School i fougth it was going to be horrible. I have to start from zero like meeting new teachers and new people and knowing the school. After a week the teacher and people i met were nice and good people. I didn't like idea of transfering of schools and leaving the people i know from Generic_School.

For some other people the first impression is impossible to change. Like when companies are looking for people to hire but they want people that are self condifent,hard working,resposible. If a person don't show any good impression in their interview most likely is not going to get hired.

However, people can change impressions over time. Like in the If a person didn't show a great impression in the job interview giving them a change it might change their first impression. I think it is possible to change first impression. ",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
9E753C182039,"What I believe is that your either trying to get attention or really going through a hard difficult time and the people you already went to and gave you advice didnt really help with what you going through or trying to do. You really just want a person to give you really good advice and see if it help you, if it doesnt help you go talk to another person and see if the advice they give you is more comfortable and helping. The reason some people do this is because they probably get the same advice the other person already told you and already tried doing that and it just doesnt seem to do anything really. What i would to is try to go find a person that has been through the stuff your going through/trying to do and take their advice it really help because that person has already been through those things or tried to do those things and went to someone that has already been through it to and took their advice and it really seem to work.

They might just also go get advice from multiply people to see which advice the person gives them is best. They can also just be going to person to person for advice to see if they are really there and car about you when your going through a really difficult time. They can be doing that because the person they went to first was not really giving them advice about what your going through and just throwing things in that dont even make sense. I would just go to someone that really gets you and is there for you and knows how you feel.

Some people that do this just really want comfort because you never know what their going throw and really just wanna take everything off there mind and just want advice for all the things their going through. It really is hard to find someone with good advice but you never seem to find a person that give you that one good advice. I would do the same and get advice from other people its just better it give you comfort and more things that you can do to help you ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
C05745235FE7,"Is it good idea for high school students, the can graduate in three years instead of traditional four years? Some school distract offer program that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of four years. Most high school students who follow this plan must take courses during the summer or may not be able to take elective courses. If students end up their high school in three year, the would missed most of opportunities that could provide better knowledge and education for them. Students should not require to graduate in three years instead of four years because students could't get enough credits to graduate, and students can not improve their confidence and their knowledge.

To begin with, first reason, students could't receive enough credits to graduate. For example, when college student want to be successful Doctor, he or she must get enough classes during the 7 years to receive approximately credits to get their diploma, if the require to graduate in 5 years, the can't construct enough confidence to be a good Doctor for the community and society. This example shows, students should't graduate early, because the can't developed and improve their life skills, education, and knowledge. If students graduate early, the would get an anxiety and different kinda problems in their life. High school traditional four years is the natural path that can help student to be success and give them more educational opportunities.

Furthermore, second reason, students can't improve or developed their confidence and their knowledge. For example, when the student who graduated early try to do an experiment he/she would't believe their decision and the does't have any positive confidence to get the result successful. This example shows, students should not graduate early, because the would't have any strong confidence to do something successful. Students should't required to graduate in three years instead of traditional four years of high school. If students graduate in three years of high school, the will face to anxiety problems, challenges, and work challenges.

Some people's argue that, students should be require to graduate in three years because students will receive the most opportunity to continue their education skills. For example, when I was in Afghanistan I was about to graduate high school in 2 years, also I had the most opportunities to receive grateful education. However, students should't be require to finish their high school in three years instead of four years because students would be leftover from others and the would never confidence on the experiment and life skills. Students should't graduate in three years, the should take the elective classes to get more information about the world, regions and humans.

In conclusion, Students should not require to graduate in three years instead of four years because students could't get enough credits to graduate, and students can not improve their confidence and their knowledge. However, Some people's argue that, students should be require to graduate in three years because students will receive the most opportunity to continue their education skills.     ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
0EEE49F99224,"Some people believe that you don't identifying your career at a young age is a bad idea. Although some might believe that identifying your career choice at a young age is good for the future. The reason behind this idea is, students are expected to identify a career bt hte time they enter high school, some good high schools helps the students, with the courses they taking, as a high school student they talk to their parents or counsellor about the career choice and what college to choose.

In my opinion identifying your career choice as high school student. Because parents and counsellors looking forward to what career i'm having in the future. And identifying what is the best college for me to attend, because of my career. But the hard thing about this idea is that you got to study hard, worry about all the tests you'll take in the future, and trying not to let your school and parents down.

In conclusion identifying your career in high school is a benefit for my future.     ",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
BB0EA66E43C4,"I would like to graduate because its' important to me and you need to be graduated to work in certain jobs. Then i would be actually be proud of my self that i graduated from school and saw that i finished school and yes it is important to graduate because its a important thing that you have done in your life.

Also you can get any jobs you like if you graduate and take education and finish school. Would you like to graduate? if so you should. Here are the reasons why you should its a great thing to graduate out of school because you can be done with school you can join any educational if you want and you would be proud of your self.

Also you need to pass most of your class's in order to graduate for high school or anything like that. You can also go to university and get your bachelor degree if you really want to but first you need to get your high school diploma and graduate from anything in college.

After all of that you can do any career you want because you graduated from mostly everything and thats why its important to graduate. And there is more reasons why you should graduate but those are the mains ones for me its like my own Opinion i dont know about what other's think about you just need to take education in order to have a good career or get a good job if you want.

Also graduateing can show you that you learned new subjects and you passed them and you feel great about your self when you do those new things.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
6D8B9B8431A6,"It has been said that working with a group benefit more than working alone because it can be more fun. Have you ever been in a situation where you feel alone and you don't want to do any homework. I agree that working with teammates can help us feel better and they push us to be better . Although some say working alone is beneficial because we don't waste our time, actually working with a group is more beneficial because we can share information and work fast.

Some say that working alone is beneficial because we don't waste our time. Working alone can save our time because we can work at home, we don't need to wait for the rest of the group or even go somewhere else. For example, last year, my Science teacher gave us a group assignment where we needed to meet each other outside of school. That day my group and I talked where to see each other, then we went to Generic_Name's house. We enjoyed talking and eating but we never talked about the project. All I can say, we all just waste our time.

However, working with a group is more beneficial because we can share information. It is true that many heads think better than one because if one comes with an idea then all together discuss about it. Furthermore, some child think better if one person gives them an idea. For example, before doing a class work I always have to ask my teacher if what I'm thinking is correct because my mind gets freeze out. Working alone doesn't help in answering doubt that we could have.

Also, working with a group is a great benefit because we can work fast. All the group can work at the same time, some can do the posters, others can look for information, and the rest can divide the information about what theme each one is going to talk during the presentation. A survey showed that a faster way to work is working in groups because all the team can work in different areas at the same time. It means that working with a group is a great benefit, it help us to have better thoughts.

Working with a group can bring joy to our soul by making new friends. We can work and have fun, also working with a team is great because we can talk not just about the project, but our lives. Moreover, a group work can make learning more passionate.

In conclusion, working alone is beneficial because it can save our time, actually working with a group is more beneficial because all the group can share information and that can bring a faster work. Thank you for taking your time to read my paper, I hope you understand why I prefer working with a group.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
D3291B198D36,"Generic_Name

Grade: 12

Teacher: Generic_Name

Date: March 29 2019

The philosopher, physician, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer said, ""Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."" I am agree with this statement because there is not better way to influence others than have a good example by our owm behavior. The change start in us to show a good example of habitat, religion, responsability, respect to others, and over all humility.

The first reason is that nowadays the people see and judge of how peple look like, how people are dressed, or if people are old or young, in that way they are giving examples to others to judge the people, instead of give a good impression or example to other that everyone needs to love each other like they love their selves, no matter how they are. Respect other to get respect, always kind with everyone no matter who they are. Helping each other everywhere. Be a good citizenship: Payin your bills, respecting the laws, and be a good neighborhood. Because without examples, no one can make differences.

The second reason: Be a kind person, study to have a good future. For example: ""I am in High School I am graduate this year. I am a English learner. When I came here in US I did't know how to speak English, but I came to school, I study hard all the words, and I practiced my English. Now I know the languaje, not at all but I can defend my self. I want to encorage all hispanic people to learn English or let their child to go to school, and I know that is not easy but not impossible. I hope to give a good example for all hispanics. I will keep doing it to influence them to learn the language of this country.""

Some people say that there are many ways to influence others like with words and not with actions. However, they are wrong because how people will change without an example of life, like Martin Luther King, he was a great person, and he passed through a lot of things, and everybody knows that he influenced a lot of people in that time and I think that he still influencing more people even that he is not with us anymore.

In conclusion, giving example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others. encoraging them to learn english, helping each other, loving other no matter their religion. Influencing lifes with actions is better than jsut words. What would happen if no one wants to be an example for other.    ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
9551DA943B01,"First impressions are very important because that is the way people know you. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change and I agree with that statement, because it is hard to change people's mind and the way they think about you.

When someone know you or see you for the first time, the way you act, speak or the way you look is what they use to create an idea of how you really are. And when people already have an idea of how you are it is very hard to make them think different. Sometimes when you tell them you are a different person, they won't give you a chance to demostrate if is true, and they will just keep the idea they already have. People who knew you time ago and did not see you again they will keep the idea that they have about you, even if you already change.

Sometimes you meet people in the wrong moment, and they get a bad impression about you. Then they just keep their distance or go away and you can not do anything to change their opinion. First impressions are very hard to change because the majority of people judge you on the first thing they notice about you, it can be your appearence or the way you act.

Although I think first impression are almost impossible to change there are people who thinks that it is not hard to change first impressions , and they may be not wrong also, because there are people who give you an opportunity to start over and show them that you are different; However even if there are some ways you can change the impression that someone has about you, there are more reasons why it is almost impossible to change first impressions.

To conclude first impressions are almost impossible to change and people should be more carefully about first impressions. Because it is very hard to change the way a person thinks. and also it can affect your reputation.                   ",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
FB4EAE59106B,"Schools offers distance learning as an option for students to attend classes online. Students should take this advantage and learn online. The online or video conferencing classes is same like the students are sitting in the classroom. Some students has many problems while to come to school every day. It is good initiative for every student. When students are out of town or country they can study or make-up easily online what they missed in school when they were absent. There are some students who are more benefit for this are those who are too far from their school. For example the student, while going to school they face problems and difficulties every day because they cannot afford a car and his/her school is far from home. Studying online is not a easy way to learn something, but it is good for some students who want to study. Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes online because Students can learn easily online when they were absent from school , students who want to study in abroad but cannot come of some reasons, they can learn online easily and students who are disable can learn online easily.

Students would be benefit from taking classes online because students can learn or study easily online when they were absent from school. Sometime students who go abroad for their studying had an emergency which they need to go back to their country and they cannot go just because of their school. They don't go because they are going to be missed their lectures and classes and can't make up all work in short time. By taking online or video conferencing classes student can easily make up all their stuffs which they had missed when they go outside of town or country for weeks or month. Where ever students can go, if they have internet access they can study online. If students were absent they can easily make-up work online. For example, If student got injury and nurse told him/her to take 10 day bed rest but student have finals after 2 weeks and they don't want to miss their days. But, student have to take bed rest because he/she got serious injury. If they have online or video conferencing classes, it would be benefit them a lot. They can make-up all their work which they missed. It would be help them a lot. Student would be benefit from taking online classes. Every students need to take advantage of this.

Students would be benefit from taking classes online because students who want to study in abroad but cannot come of some reasons. They can't afford it. In their country there are not such a good education system thats why they want to study in abroad and fulfill their dreams. It is the good initiative which school take it to give online classes. It helps those students who want to study in abroad. They don't need to go anywhere. They can stay in their country and study through online or video conferencing classes. For example, a student, who has dream to study in abroad to become a doctor but he/she has not enough money to go to abroad and study there. There parents do everything for them but cannot make that enough money to send them abroad. Student think that he/she will never become a doctor. If student take online or video conferencing classes, it would help them to fulfill their dream and reach their destiny. Student would benefit from taking online classes. Online classes give them boost.

Students would be benefit from taking classes online because students who are disable, can learn/study online easily. It is the good initiative which school offers for the students who are disable because disable student lose their hope and they think they cannot do anything now. They think everyone is going to make fun of them which never happens. Some disable person cannot come to school , who cannot walk, so they have advantage to attend online classes from home. For example, disable student who dont want to go to school and study just because of their disability. Nobody can force them what to do. They don't have to go anywhere. They have one advantage to take online or video conferencing classes to compete with others. It will give them more confidence in life. To take online classes, they can fulfill their all dreams which they made. It will give them more happiness.

Students would be benefit from being able to attend online classes . Students can learn easily online when they were absent from school because of some emergencies. Students can learn easily online because the students,

who want to study in abroad but cannot go because they cannot afford it. Students who cannot go to school because of some disabilities, they can learn online easily. It would benefit them a lot.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
5DD1954E47A8,"How old were you when you decided what you wanted to do for a living? Some schools are requiring students to choose their career before entering high school, witch shouldnt be done. Although it is understandable that students know witch career path they would like to take to start preparing early. Students should not be choosing their careers at a young age as they are to young and inexperienced with the world, should be more focused on enjoying their childhood and lastly should work up slowly to decide what they would like to be when they grow up.

Students before high school are to young to choose a career path, as they most likely do not have much responsibilities. For example a child with little experience on responsibility might choose a career that requires you to be very responsible. The child with little experience on responsibility will quickly be stressed and overwhelmed and will most likely under preform. An older student will have more responsibilities and will have more experience, most likely will choose a career that will be a better fit for them and require responsibilities they are comfortable handling.

Young students shouldn't be extremely focused on what career path they want to take. They should be more focused on enjoying their childhood. By engaging in extracurricular activities such as: sports, music, reading and acting. By participating hobbies they enjoy being a part of. The students will explore and experience more witch will help them as they get older in choosing what they like and what they would like to do for living by simply having fun. As we only have one childhood and we shall enjoy it while it last.

A way of introducing careers to young students without making them commit to a specific one. Is having classes in schools that teach a specific career such as: construction, engineering, agriculture and law enforcement. By providing classes like this to children they will be open to explore new things without committing to one career. Slowly introducing different careers to students by having extra classes. Is a good way for them to start thinking about their future without making them choose one specific career.

Overall students at a young age should not be choosing their careers. It its way to much stress for a child. They are way too inexperienced in responsibility. Should be focused on enjoying their childhood. Introducing different careers at a young age without making them commit is helpful way. This will slowly introduce them to different careers without making them commit to one and risk stressing them out. In conclusion students will wait till their time comes in high school and they will select their career path from there. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
60E686BA1E09,"When people ask for advise, they usually don't know what path or choice to make.

When people make a wrong desition they can mess something up in their life. That can mean the world to them like a wife/husban or his/her kids. They can set a bad influence on small kids by going to jail or by doing something a criminal might do. That is why most people go to jail and don't come out for a very long long time. That sucks to not see your mom/dad for a very long time and that can be depressing on some people.

Then if they make a good choice they won't get in trouble or get in federal trouble. that can make a good influence on your childeren and that can give them a better futer in this world. If you talk to the right person that gives you good advise. That can be a very good choice for you and your family because they won't have to see you in jail through a little window.

Just what im saying is if you mess up by talking to the wrong person you can set a bad influence on people, more family and that would suck to see your chidren and wife through a little window in a prison trust me I have been through it all. if you get in bad trouble you can probubly fix it and just get a ticket, fin, or mistimener you can fix it dont make the wrong choice and get in trouble do what you think is the best for you and your family. Don't think bout other just worry bout you and your family not anybody else

Also if you do they can take your stuff, steal money, stab you in the back and also become an turn on you, a freind is a doller in your pocket and your pocket gots a hole my mom says that to me a lot. Just do what your heart says not other people because the can get you in a lot of trouble.

This is what can go good for you, if you make the right choice you can go to college and get a degree in something you like. You can get a good job and get a good house, good car and always have money on you just in case of anything. You also can help out your perents get a good house and you won't have to put them in a home and you can also bye what your kids want when ever they wan't and you won't have to go through the bad stuff in the world like most people go through to put food on the table.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
CA4941643D09,"Thomas Jefferson wrote to never to be idle and he believes that is better to always be doing something, because if you do not try to do things you never will get a purpose in life, even though some says that inactivity also serve a purpose. Do things make you do better in life, also is better to have the mind busy in something, if you do things you can be someone in life.

Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that doing nothing, because if you do not try to do things in life you will never get a purpose, actually Thomas Jefferson says that if inactivity also serve a purpose, in my opinion people do not like to do things because they do not want to be someone in life and they are lazy.

Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that be doing nothing, because if you do not try to do something in life you will never get a purpose, people just like to be annoying with others, people try to do hard life for the others people.

Although Thomas Jefferson says if inactivity also serve a purpose in life, in my opinion, when you do not do anything you will never get a result of good things always we have to try to do some effort to be someone in life.

In addition, According to the prompt and ""determine never to be a idle"". I have never been idle in life, because i always do my responsibilities and i try to not be lazy, some times i also help other peoples cause we need to be good with others no matters how they are with us. I always like to do my own work because i want to be some one in the future that's why i like to do some effort in life. Everyone makes errors in life but, always we will try to fixed no matters how big they are, some day i want to my fathers be proud of my work in life. I never want to be a idle person.

In conclusion, is wonderful how we have done in life because life is so hard for everyone but, always we can do some effort to be proud of our self.

Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that doing nothing, because if you do not try to do things in life you will never get a purpose, actually Thomas Jefferson says that if inactivity also serve a purpose, in my opinion people do not like to do things because they do not want to be someone in life and they are lazy.  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
A5E657C1B23A,"Many schools have partnerships with companies that allows students to explore certain occupations through internships and shadowing opportunities to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of employment.

To get the job you like makes it more interesting .I would like to be selected to get the job that I am interested in because I want to get the experience and improve my skills to become an experts of it.

Dear Mr. Manager, I heard that you are selecting students to give them the opportunity to work in your company to gain experience, and to see if that job interests them. I want to be one of them, and to see if I am able to do the job the way it should be done. This opportunity can give me the chance to get more experience and to see if the job is interesting for me. I can make sure that if I get the job I will learn more about it. For example, Generic_Name, a smart student in my biology class was always wanted to work in a science department and to be a biology teacher in future. Last year she got the chance to work with Generic_City Biology and Science department. After a while she gives up and didn't continue to her job anymore. The reason that she left the job was that she didn't find it easy and interesting. This chance helped her a lot to select a better option and choose something new. She is happy about it, because she got experience and that was a golden chance for her to see if she is good at science subjects and that changed her mind not to become a biology teacher. Furthermore, I can add that getting the job that you like gives you more positive energy towards it and makes you work hard for it to achieve your goal.

We can't improve our skills until we don't try something new. Improvements always comes from doing something if we set goals to improve our skills definitely we will achieve it. Every job and activity we do we must have some good skills in it, or if we don't we can work on it to improve it. For example, my brother loved to work with

IT companies, he is good in repairing laptops and mobiles. He was studying Cisco and switch repairing at Sterling IT institute. He was doing good in his class, but for improving his skills and to see if he had learned something he needed to get a job. He started making labs at home with his classmates and was looking for a job. After he was approved by one of Cisco companies, he started improving his career and working hard to learn more everyday. After a year, beside that he is studying,he is now serving as a substitute in his institute. It's all because he has more experience and worked on his skills. Furthermore, I can say that having skill and talent can give us more motivation and helps us improve more everyday.

In conclusion, I can say that getting involve in such programs and company jobs helps students to choose their career and gives them the opportunity to see if they really want that job or are they ready for the career that they are dreaming for.                              ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
3F30E7FDE6F1,"Have you ever given someone an advice? Or has someone ever asked you for an advice? Well now days people sometimes talk to more than one person, to seek multiple opinions on their problems. However seeking multiple opinions it is good idea because with those multiple advises can help you make better decision you may know what to do when time arrives, they can also help you solve problems easily, and the people you went for an advice can help you not to do the same mistake they did.

Talking to more than one person so that you seek multiple opinions, can help some one make a better choice in many ways like knowing what to do when the time arrives. This can be useful because you know to do something in the right place and at the right time, and also this can help you in your life to do something in the right place and at the right time as scienctist Albert Enstein said.

Second, talking to more than one person in order to get good and multiple opinions, can help you make better choice for example they can also help you solve problems easily without stressing yourself, and that can be the main point because with the many opinions it boost your self-confidence and then you can solve your problems better and easily.

Third, again talking to more than one person in order to get multiple opinions, can help you make good decision by not making the same mistake the people that gave you advice did. This can help you by knowing their mistake and not doing them.

In conclusion,

people sometimes talk to more than one person, to seek multiple opinions on their problems. However seeking multiple opinions it is good because with those multiple advises can help you make better decision you may know what to do when time arrives, they can also help you solve problems easily, and the people you went for an advice can help you not to do the same mistake.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
13E1CB9819CB,"To who it may concern,

Hello my name is STUDENT_NAME and I think doing community service is a good idea, but I think others will disagree with it. So I think we should do an assembly on how important it is to keep our planet and city clean and educated. We should have guess speakers, reward assemblies and more disappline assemblies for the students that won't do the community service. So the students can help with the community instead of destroying it with graffiti, rival gangs, and destroying public property.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
CE19B516A167,"should the school board add one and a half hour to school each day? The school board should add one and a half hours to school each day. I agree with the school board plane to add one and a half hour to school because it would effect the students learning and help them get more smarter and it would effect the school worker's because they money they get payed will increase.

1 first of all the school board plane to add one and a half hour to school each day.

if the school board add one and half hour to school if will effect the student because they will be able to have more time to study with they teacher which help them gain more learning. for an example when Generic_Name was 10years old in Generic_City, he use to not like school because he had school from 7am to 4pm and the teacher's use to force them to do homework,classwork and all the learning he needed it felt like being a maid having someone telling him to do this and that he hated the teacher but he learned a lot from them and him and his classmate still cared they teacher's teaching everywhere they went and it's very helpful, for an example they teacher's was like your parent's telling you to do something you don't wanna do they know is good for you but still you don't wanna do it so they force you to do it then you get mad over them for doing that which they find it helpful for you later in life in fact you hate them at that moment for what they did, but after years when your adult you get struggle about something and you remember what she thought you and you find it helpful the how our teacher's was like back then in Generic_City, the more hour's we had the more smarter we got . This evidence show's that the more time we got learning with our teacher's the more smarter we got. clearly sometime's the teacher's rush teaching when they do not have enough time and that does not help the student so the more time the teacher's get to teach the more student understand the subject well without rushing through the subject.

2 I agree with the school adding one hour and a half to school each day.

perhaps if they do add one hour and a half to school each day it really help the student and teacher's because they will have enough time learning not rush through learning. for an example when i was in school back then in Generic_City, Generic_Name was in classes doing his work but the classes hour's was short so this time when he did not have enough time to do the classwork in class the class hours was like

1hour and 30minites in math class the teacher told us to '' turn your work in it's time to go '' innocent didn't have enough time so he try to rush through it so he can get it done.

after week's innocent got 60% on my classwork he was disappointed in himself innocent wished he had more time to finish it was not the teacher's fault so he didn't blame the teacher because they did they best to make sure we had enough time. if we had enough time it would had really helped us all student's and teacher's.

in addition for student's to have better grade they need more time to focus and do they work in class.

clearly if school board add one hour and a half to school it will effect student's grade because they will have enough time to do they work in class and not rush.

In conclusion the school board should add one hour and a half because it will effect student learning and it will also effect they grades too so it will be a good thing to add one hour and half to school each day sometimes the student don't have enough time to do they work and they need sometime to finish but they can't and that effect the decrease the student grades. like in the story when the boy name Generic_Name in his school they didn't have enough time to do they classwork so he rushed through it and got bad grade, so if student's have enough time to do they work in class it would be very helpful to the student's. if the school board add one hour and half the student's grade will be different all they need is just more time to do they work in class and not rush through they work the more time they get to do they work the better they grades will get and the smarter they become.        ",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
1A039B3091BA,"The lesson I well share is to be good in all in your class and never give up in elementary school. This important to kids in elementary school so when they go to middle school it is going to be lot harder. When i was in elementary school eveyone bully me all the time but i never give up. Work hard in elementary school and never gave up.

Middle school is alot tougher so make it count in elementay school get good grade all the time and set goals to aconples fous goals. When it is time to go to middle school then it is your time to be in the next level. All the time to be posative in school so be your self and never stop working to get those good grade. This is my lesson to all students in elementary schoo

In middle school it is going to be new people that you never met before in your life you can make new friends. So try to make new friends in middle school and make sure that you do not do nething bad in middle school or you well be in trouble. For new kids in middle school you can make new friends every time. So can you do something about it and can you stop bully around your school.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
F7CBE1D11BF8,"Is true self-esteem caused by self-confidence or is it caused by achievement, are people right about what they believe that; self-esteem is caused by self-confidence or is self-esteem caused by achievements? Self-esteem is caused by achievements, although some people may believe self-esteem is caused by ""self-confidence"". I personally believe, self-esteem is caused by someone's achievement. By personal experience my self-esteem is caused by my own achievements.

True self-esteem is caused by achievements for example: We can say, an employee at Chipotle has recently been elected ""employee of the month"". People may say "" what does that have to do with self-esteem?"" It does have to do with self-esteem because, that person has recently been elected employee of the month, and is being rewarded for his achievement of being elected employee of the month for his hard work. Although some people may believe that; self-esteem is caused by self-confidence. I personally still believe achievement is prior to self-confidence, and it's the cause of someone's self-esteem like; being elected employee of the month, that is one feeling of satisfaction that person had for being elected employee of the month.

Next, it is possible that self-esteem could be caused by self-confidence. For example: there may be students that can't start off their day learning without feeling confident about themselves. They may not want to learn, because they don't feel the positive energy or enough knowledge to be able to cope with how they're feeling that day; whether they want to learn or they don't want to learn. Also, for example: I have a friend who can't learn if she doesn't feel confident. She starts distracting others around her, she starts interrupting class, because it is hard for her to focus and learn when she doesn't feel confident. Although some people believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem. I still believe in achievement being prior to self-confidence. Because in my opinion the second the student is done being praised; they will immediately go back to not feeling self-confident to start their day learning.

Finally, true self-esteem is profit to achievement. There is a vast of people around the world being praised for their achievements. Achievements include; If you're being praised for something good you've done like: getting a job, becoming employee of the month, helping someone by carrying their groceries to their car, if an elderly has tipped over in the street and need help getting up, these are the causes of true self-esteem. For example: Last year 2018 at my old school, Generic_school our cheer team felt true self-esteem to find out they had made it to finals. Making it to cheer-leading finals was a vast achievement for them, because it had been 5 years since our team had won finals.

In conclusion, true self-esteem is caused by achievement. By personal experience I can conclude that achievement plays a huge role in having self esteem, because my true self-esteem is caused by my own achievements, and due to others personal experience true self-esteem is caused by their achievement. Although some people may believe that; self-esteem is caused by ""self-confidence"". I personally believe, self-esteem is caused by someone's achievement.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
89ADE1CC1BEC,"In my opinion, students should not use their phones in classrooms. The students will get distracted . Also, students should keep away their phones for safety. Lot of students can't stay without cellphones; however, they should know the without phones in classroom they will learn more.

First, Students will get distracted if they have their phones in classroom.

They will be texting in class, and they will be on social media while the teacher is explaining. Furthermore, some students spend their class time, playing video games, watching movies, or videos on YouTube. It also distract other students that really wants to learn. Sometimes, the teacher allows students to use their phones in classes for educational purpose; however, the students take advantage because they use that time for playing some music on YouTube or taking pictures around the class, so I would not recommend teachers to let them use their phones in classes. I remember the time when I was in 9 grade, I often used my phone in classroom. I thought it would not affect my grades; however, at the end of the semester I saw only D in all of my classes. I stopped using my phone in class, and my grades were getting better.

Second, students should keep away their phones in classes for safety. I believe that no one is perfect and there are some students who doesn't have a good behavior in school, so they use their phone for taking inappropriate pictures. In addition, we have seem some examples in other schools about terrorism, and we don't know what students do outside or what kind of friends they have out of school, so the student inside of school may be stay in contact with terrorist outside of the school in case of any terrorist attack. The teacher will be thinking that his or her students are reading about the topic in the class, but the true would be that students are using their phone in a different purpose.

The Department of Education should establish a law about not allow students to use their phones in classroom or not use it at all in schools because they won't be able to pay attention, and because is a good way to keep safety in the school. Some may say, students need their phones in class for search information or call for any emergency; however, students don't need their phone when the school provides computers for searching any information, and they don't need their phone for emergency because the school provides police officers and good strategies to protect them in case of any emergency.        ",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
EDDAE2D4080B,"first i did think about in then i writer on paper in then i reditr like 5 time because if i need to put some more wreds in then i typed on computer in then i writer agen because makeshor to i did sepilt corekt in then i redie my sentences to makeshor i diet my sepling reite when some wards i dont andrstine i look up in dictionary in then i checked my paper to be my reader in then i redit overagne in then i was think about more sentences and some more wordes in i was looking in dictionary for some wordes in i rerised my paper to be sure that is reite.

some school have a program when the students they coming now they going to tace the test to teacher no how much they no English in then they to larne more English in then theyr going class they have now students then no English in then they lerun English they going to now school when the school is over we Hera somerschool they going in same we can larne more English if they dont have samerschool they gane forgat English some students dont going the teacher can help older students in younger students some school have difrint class in they dont have some program when one school have defiant in the ather have defiant but some of they have same but same dont                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",1.5,1.0,2.0,1.5,2.0,1.5
7AB87BA4342F,"Kids play to have different jobs, but I know, since I was a baby, what I want to do. The world of the entertainment, in special the theater, is something that always catch my attention, thats why I would like to visit the Art and Performance Center.

The principal reason why I want to go is for my family influences, my grandma has been dreaming about me been an actress. I remember going to the theater with her, telling me that her biggest dream is, one day, see me on one of those performances or shows. When I was littler, I use to participate on local shows every summer, her proud smile and happy tears make me feel that I was on the right place, doing the right thing. I know she would be so happy if I become an actress.

Also, the Art and Performance Center has been the place of one of my favorites presentations,""The Rose"", the feelings that the esterpians transmit during the hold act are powerful; they make you feel that you are part o the show, or even better, they make you feel that is not a show. Imagine myself on that scenario with the lights, music, the public, while I am realizing a magnificent performances is something that makes my feel really grate. I want to inspire people in the same way that actors inspires me.

My love for the performant arts isn't the unique reason why a should go, I am a respectful and courteous person; a hardworker which goal is to learn everything about arts. Some students aren't really interested on the place they go, playing around, acting boring, but not me, I am really interesting in this opportunity, in all the special details of the world of preforming arts. From the backstage to the actual scenario, everything would be a delaitful experience for me.

For all this reasons, I would like to go to the Art and Performance Center, seeing all the components and experiences that brings you the fantastic world of the theater.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
953BEF800163,"Finish high school one year early sounds pretty good. Students can start doing something out of high school that helps them in the career they will choose in the future. But, its better to finish the traditional four years in high school, because students can prepare more they self before go to college, its too early for students to finish high school at the age of 15-17 years old, and students might not have the enough education that they need.

To begin with, students will be more prepare to go to college after the four years of education from high school. They can prepare more they self and see what they need to work on or what they wanna do in the future. For example, these four years in high school helped me to find a passion about what I would like to become in the future, and also helped me to be more mature and feel ready for the next step.

Also, its too early for students to finish high school one year before, because students might be in the age between 15-17 years old and they may not be that ready to start a responsive life in college. For example, my sister is 16 years old and she's a junior. When we don't have nothing to do or we are having a conversation, I always ask her if she is ready to go to college or at least, if she have an idea of what major she would like to study and her response is that; she's not even ready for her senior year, and I understand her, because that happened to me when I was her age and when I was a junior.

Moreover, students might not have the enough education that they need to learn in high school, and that can be a problem in their classes in college. For instance, I've heard from some friends in college, that sometimes they really lost in some classes, even though they graduated from high school when they were 18 years old. That means, if students graduate in three years, they would be confusing in their classes when they're in college.

To conclude, graduate in four years from high school it feels longer, but it will be a big reward at the end, because students will be more ready to go to college, also they will be in an age where they will be more responsible, and mature. Lastly, they will have more acknowledge in everything. High school, its one of the best step of your life, where after you graduated from there, you would like to come back and stay more than four years.",4.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
9760A1CB4336,"Everyone has a talent or a skill. But they are all unique. Skills that I have are: intelligence, talent and athletic.

Ways I show intelligence are by performing clever tasks, giving good ideas or advice, or teaching other people how to be intelligent like me. A way I show intelligence is by giving good ideas or advice when there is a problem. Another way of showing intelligence is learning something quickly. I always learn and understand stuff because I am very intelligent. I can also teach someone else something if they don't know it. Teaching other people is easy because I very intelligent. These are some ways of how and why I am intelligent.

Ways I show my talents are by showing my special abilities, intelligence, and being athletic

I am very talented in a lot of different ways. I show my special abilities in school by using my brain to solve problems. It is easier because I am intelligent. Since I am intelligent, I can solve any type of problem. I can solve the ones not even teachers can solve because I am intelligent. I am also very athletic. I like to play sports and do excercise. These are some ways I show my talents.

I show my abilities of being athletic by playing sports, doing excercise, and running. I love to play sports. You can have fun and do excercise at the same time. I also like to run. It is a good way to excercise. Finally I like to do excecise. It is a good waty to lose weigth, lose calories and get fit. This is why I like to do excercise

Everyone has a talent or skill. But they are all different. Skills that I have are intelligence, talent, and athletic.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
FD48D4BB6F06,"Students would benefit from being able to atttend classes from home. First of all, this will let students be less stress from going to school and receiving their education. Students can also work at their own pace at home in a relaxing enviroment which I think works best. Lastly, this would give students more free time for themselves and choose whatever they want to do what they can't do during the day.

Most students around the United States dislike waking up early in the morning and having to take the long proccess of getting ready and parents yelling at them ""Wake up"" or ""The bus is going to leave you"". There are some schools that offer online classes that benefit students from going to school and taking the classes online. I think this would help all students from stress becasue you won't have to think about early morning wake ups. This would help students not having to deal with overloads of work stressing about ""where did I put my papers"" and losing valuable homework. This also helps with time management. Students won't have to go to school for more than 7 hours and be stuck in class sleep deprived and would just be at home taking there time with there classes online. Furthermore, this would help students getting into trouble at school and dealing with teachers about who's right and who's wrong.

In addition, students would benefit even more becasue they would work at there own pace. Students can take time by working in each subject at there pace and won't be rushed by and teachers or anybody. I think this is a great way for students to build self-indepence for the real world becasue they will be on there own and have to manage there time wisely and accordingly. I also think you can get more worked down where the you can choose a place at home or a nearby coffee shop where students don't have distractions. Students can also engage with other students if they taking the same materials and help each other out.

Moreover, this allows students to have more free time and social time to themselves. Many students these days want to have some change in there pockets and find partime jobs. This would allow students to either choose a job or a hobby they like to pursue during the day since they won't be physically at school. Most students can join a sport they like and also have plenty if time to condition and practice to get better.

In conclusion,

students would benefit from being able to atttend classes from home. I would reccomend many schools should have online classes for students who just dont feel school isnt where they can learn but at home they can enjoy there comfort and still excel. ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
DCBE020F2A4F,I agree honesty is the best policy but sometimes honesty is bad beacuse you can hurt people feeling and people dont fell the same with you when your hones with them. Also someone that like when people are honesty with them they wont care because it good to be honesty with them beacuse what if there doing something bad that you dont like and your hones with them and you tell to fix that thing that where doing that you dont like. Another thing if you get in trouble in school be hones with your teacher and tell them what happened be hones dont ever lie to your teacher. Then if your in a relationship with some and you dont like them anymore dont be shy then the true be hones. finally if you go to a store and you tell something from the store and they tell you are you stealing something tell them the true beacuse if you leave with out paying you can get in trouble with the police that why be hones with some ask you if your stealing something tell them then true be hones. That why i agree with honesty.,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
C13E41755D2A,"""Where is one place in the world you would like to visit?""

""We should to go to

Generic_City over the summer, and talk to new people!"" I excitedly told my friends 3 weeks before the school was gonna end. My friends, Generic_Name,Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and I think that Generic_City is the best place that we can go visit, because it can be a very exiting experience, and we can go out to see the Eiffel Tower, and experience the life of other people.

First I would visit the Eiffel tower with my friends.

The amazing height of the Eiffel tower. When we were walking to go see the Eiffel tower, it didn't seem big, but when we got closer, it seemed huge, I was shocked because I never knew that it was very huge. Then on the top of the Eiffel Tower, the city can be seen. As we were on the top of the Eiffel tower I could not believe that I could see the beautiful view of the lights of the city. Finally we took pictures of the the beautiful surroundings of the Tower. My friends were very happy when we got to the ground, so we decided to take pictures, they had a big smile on their face as we took the pictures, the place was beautiful, we walked all over the place, and took a bunch of picture with the Eiffel tower, and where it was located. Visiting the Eiffel tower was a very exiting experience for me, and my friends, we got to see the view of the Eiffel Tower.

Second we can experience the life of the other people that live in Generic_City.

Meeting new people in the park is very exiting for me and my Friends. When my friends and I went out for a walk on the morning, we walked by the park. My friends spotted a groups of friends that were walking in our direction, they introduced themselves and we did too, we told them that we were visiting here, and they were so nice, and we started chatting. Then we experienced their food, and the Restaurant that Generic_Name and his friends like to go to. Generic_Name was a very special person, he invite us with him and his friends to the restaurant. When we were walking to the restaurants that they were taking us to, I could already smell the delicious smell of the food of the Restaurant. Finally we got to the museum and saw the famous art of the Monaliza. Generic_Name and his friends gave us a tour in the museam, and he told us that the most famous art there was the Monaliza, it was a beautiful art, but we couldn't take pictures of it because it the not permitted. But we got to see her beautiful smile, and I was inspired by the way, the artist colored the background of the picture. There was a lot of things we learned about Generic_City with the help of Generic_Name and his friends.

The way other people talk, or the differences that we have among each other, and other places doesn't mean that you cant find good people, wherever you go, you just have to let your self enjoy an amazing experience in Generic_City.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
4E443B00DBFA,"something i would like to accomplish in the future. Would be to be an amazing guitar player. And become one of the best in the world or in the U.S.A . the guitar is one of my favriot instruments. I like to play it makes me feel good

I started playing because of many Hispanic musicians that play guitar. But the Maine reason i wanna play Is for my uncle that use to play. He thought me a little bit and then he was killed. so now i play for him. And i want to become one of the greatest guitar players.

And all the people i look up to play guitar. One of the people i look up to is Jimmy Hendrix. He was amazing he played behind his back. and with his teeth and another person look up to is Johnny cash. he played every were and any were. Did you know that he was the first person to play in a jail. But then not to long ago los tigres del norte played at that same. jail in memory of him los tigres del norte is a famous band in south America. I also look up to Ariel Camacho an amazing singer but he plays a different instrument called requinto. those are some of the people that inspired me to play.

that is what i would like to do in the future. And there might be good money in it. And if i am any good in the future. and i would buy my mother a house. and i would try to walk on the red carpet. i would travel the world with my band. singing. or i might move to Mexico and pursue my dream there same thing but in Mexico.

Those are all of the reasons why i would do it in the future. And why i play now. And did you know that the guitar is the most known instrument around the world. And that more then two thousand people a state in the U.S play it. So thats what i want to do. Not to become a rock star because i dont think there are Hispanic rock stars. because ill be singing in Spanish. thats it.",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
8B1EB1890F9B,"Company

I need a job!, I'm perfect for this job because i am responsable, hard worker and my commitment, if I get the job, will be completly with them. I want be part of you company because I know that you get a big boy with good worths to begin a new era together. My good effort will be important to accomplish my objetive in the visit, Learn.

About your company am interest in this, I could learn of a big place with big people, that make in me the question, Can I be like them?, and this projects in the schools is perfect to help me with that, the opportunies in the life just arrive one time in the life, the experience is important int his case this is a excellent place to learn more of the real word, to give us a lesson of life, my compromise is with you , your company, to do this a experience incredible in all aspects so that students that do not like the work, they are here to nothing more than all they never will be a examples or good worker to your company , the moment is now, me, I am who you are looking to be your next worker. I have dreams, I have goals and I want accomplish it, all is in your main idea referent of who you believe that you are, that is a important fact, this visit can help me to let you know who I am and why i like your company.

In this process you will help me about my interest in my type of employement, your help is indispensable in the case, this help I will never find one like this, I can't lost this is my moment to be part of you, is inevitable do not think in all good thing that you have for my future, think "" I have to demostrate them that Im the best in this school"", that is my objetive, be the best, some people think that the life is easy and that you do not have to follow you dreams, but no if you do not go, never will get your dream to be soccer player, doctor, teacher whatever, if nobody believe in you that doesn't matter you only keep going and be yourself, the school is a place where you find a lot ways to follow, be a professional or be nothing in the life, we are here in the world to be somebody to grow up in the society, the time continue and the years too and I don't want say one day ""why I dont accepted the job in the company?"", we are in a generation that do not know nothing about work to get your things or money, I don't want be like them, I want work ,begin a new era in my life with big things in my curriculum and get respect to my person in the society.

In conclusion, the life is one and we have to be somebody in it, opportunities like this you can't lost because are important for your future, job, experience and more things, never think that is sufficient because us brain can learn every day more and more things, this littles steps will be biggest in the future, that future where you are who you want be, that future where your son admire you and that future where the people are pride of you, is simple if you want, you'll be, the experience that I could find in this company is important, is how I will do the work in the future, is how I will perform my legacy.",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
DC7961960711,"Activities that are being done in school will health benefit for most students. School activities will bring enjoyment for some students, and they would see there friends which makes them happy.

I agree that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families because of students needing more time on homework and studying, students wanting more time on other hobby's, and students would like to choose the right activities for them.

Students would like to have there own time to finish homework and studying. Some students would like to be involved in extracurricular activities which makes some of them having a hard time in school or having good grades, because they don't have the time for studying and completing homework, and also it makes them stressful because they might be having hard time to understand the teacher in the classroom.

Students would like to have more time on other hobby's that they enjoy to having. Having extracurricular activities after school or before school will be affecting the student in some ways like students won't be having much time to hang out with friends or playing video games, and also it would make the students really tired for school or free time.

students choosing what activity they want will be easy for them. Students would probably choose the activities that there good at or if they want to try it, and it helps them trying out new activity because it will be health benefit for them and they get to meet new people.

Some might say that the decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their families, because they will need more time on homework and studying;however, being involved in extracurricular activities can help with scholarships.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
73DF8CA712BB,"Elementary school students, they are. examples:They don't do the work, They don't care anything, They are funny, Always go outside to play what they wants, In others schools they don't had to go with uniforms, They always be late, The moms pick up to go to the home, he majority of the students had 8-12 years old because they are in elementary school, If you had 13 years old or more you no can't go to elementary school or if you had 5 years old you no can't to.

They do draw, They had the same teacher everyday, They had 4 teachers, one of gym,other of music other of draw and the teacher of scients, math , They go to the lunch 11:30, In the morning in the cafeteria they can take a bag with food inside the bag had apple, milk,juice, and then when they finish the they put the trash in the trash and when is time for lunch they go to the cafeteria and take the food sometimes they eats in the class, Sometimes they eats in the cafeteria to, If you don't speak English you had a teacher of Spanish of depend what language you speak she help you to what do you need, They give a dictionary to you, That helps you to search the word you don't know, They don't fight is rare to see is fight in elementary school, Sometimes happened but is rare when that happened in elementary school, A day in the morning in the cafeteria two boys start to fight that was fast because the security coming to the fight he separe the the guys he take to the office and everything was fine, But in elementary school the fight are fast, In middle school or high school the fight are extreme the security don't cant separe the students because sometimes the others students coming to the fight to sometimes is because they friends are in the fight and they wants to help the friends, Everymorning when you enter to the class i always take a computer and i do what i want that is good, Because that help to learn more English to me.

This important, Because when was in elementary school i see that sometimes the teacher said today everybody had to take the food and coming to the class we are going to wacht a movie, Sometimes we had to go the music class the teacher of music class she was a good teacher, Sometimes we to the draw, Sometimes we had to go to the gym to play soccer, The most what i like of elementary school was the teachers she's always help me in my work,homework, Is important because when i coming of my country i was in elementary school, The first day of school for me was a bad day, Because i don't speak English the teacher asking something to me but how had to answer i don't understating nothing what she is saying to me, Is important to me, Because everyday we go to outside in elementary school we play a lot games like soccer, basketball, the lesson is important, Because i put things happened to my friends, I put things what i see in elementary school",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
B8961D64A158,"dear principal,

I would like you to change the policy to at least a b to get in sports because people would work harder for it and because you would have much more people passing school and getting healthier. It would get more people cunserned on there grade and will ask for help to there teacher or they would stay after school for tottering. people would do better in sports because they learned how to do it. And it would make the collages wont them even more. It also make less people feal on there test or any exam because they would have studied allot more then they have before. people would wont to work so hard to get in any sports they wonted and when the get that score that they wonted they would be happy of what they got",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
AE370D914104,"Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school more than an option for students to attends classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students will learn more if they go to a regular school and they can help them self to be active in school or participate from sports, club member and etc..

Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school because students will learn more if they go to a regular school and students can do more better or focus if they're in the regular class/school and they can ask for a help from their teacher or their classmate. The most important in a regular school is that you can ask your teacher face to face about your grade or your missing paper works on her/hes class. For example, Sarah is more likely to attend on a regular school more than an option to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because Sarah is more having fun to go to a regular school to see her teacher, classmate, and her friends everyday. This proves that Sarah is glad that she improve herself for everything especially for all her achievement in her life as a student.

Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school because they can help them self to be able to improve them self to be active in school or participate from sports, clubs member and etc... Being a students you need to enjoy your life as a high school students because once you graduate or go to college you my not or my regret yourself for not trying/try to involve yourself to join some sports or clubs member etc.. For example, Enrique love to play basketball went he was a child until he's grow up, but he never try to involve he's self to join the basketball team went he's on high school because he always said that he's not enough or not that good to be part of the team that's why he never try to involve he's self at least one. This prove that involve yourself to any sports or clubs saw you will not regret yourself at the end.

Some people say it's better for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. 35% of many students agree with that because it's boring and they can't focus on school and they have a work that's why they pick to attend from home by way of online or video conferencing. 65% of it will not agree with that because if you do the home online class i think you did not give your best or your not more focusing on your classes online. 65% people said that if you really want to be successful person you need to proved your education, education is the key of your life. This prove that you need to choose Wesley for your self, not only for your self for your parents also.

Students would benefit from being able to attend a regular school more than an option for students to attends classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Students will learn more if they go to a regular school and they can help them self to be active in school or participate from sports, club member and etc.. you need to choose Wesley saw you can be a successful person. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0
F78366DD5A31,"The decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their family because, students know how to mange their time, families would remind or help out, and teachers give students time to finish or study assignments.

As a senior in high school, I attend to many activities after school and still have plenty of time to complete assignments. I believe, that managing time is key on getting everything done on time. In the past, I have asked teachers on how I could mange my time and still have time to complete assignments. After having that conversation, I had improved my grades and also had time for activities. Thats why I think managing time is a good way to complete school work and finish any outside activities.

If my family were to see me go out a lot or come back late from any activity without completing my work, they would talk to me and find a way to help me out. After that, they would see my grades and check for any late assignments because, there is no family that would like for their son/daughter to have bad grades in school. Many students would not pay attention on their grades and go outside thinking that they have nothing due for any classes. Although, thats when families come in and remind their child that they have assignments to complete before they go outside. This is why families are good reminders and helpers on getting good grades.

Teachers in high school give students enough time to complete assignments or study during class. I tend to complete it during class because I like to go home and not worry about any school work. Overtime if a student does not finish their homework, teachers tend to say that they gave us time to complete it during class. However, I do not make that same mistake and finish my work during class, so that the teacher would not bother me. That is why taking advantage on finishing working during class, is a good why to have time for any outside activity.

That is why schools should not control any student, and regarding extracurricular involment shall be left to students and their families.    ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
70996505E3B0,"Technology has a lot of the positive and negative side to it. In the positive side technology comes in handy a lot you can shop online , pay a lot of your bills online and do a whole lot. In the negative side you loose contacts with humans cause every person abuses technology , people always on their phones , people losing eye to eye conversion with each other.

technology will always have a good or bad side in way how humans use it.

In the positive way of technology , a lot people use technology to shop online , a lot of times people try to find the products that he or she wants to find in the store and its to expensive to buy in store , people find it more cheaper products online than outlet stores. Not only people shop online, people also use technology to buy programs that colleges recamend them to use. It helps a lot of people that are in college that do a lot of homework a lot teachers assign homework online than paper. technology always advance everyday in a good way to enjoy. A lot of high school students use technology to do homework for a class that the students miss that day he or she was absent.

technology keeps everyone in check and organized. But yet even if theres a lot of positive stuff about it ,

there's a lot negative things about technology.

In the negative part of technology ,

a lot people thats on their phone ignores the person that he or she was having a conversation with.

The main big problem right now is that people are abusing technology by texting and driving while using their phones , a lot of people are getting distracted on the road cause they want to answer their text message but most of the time people that answer gets into a car crash for getting distracted.

Theres always gonna be a bad and good ways about technology it all depends how humans use technology.

The way I see people using technology its good cause it a lot easier to organize important documents , shop online , doing homework for school and everyday technology will always advance each day.

The only problem thats bad about technology its that us humans getting distracted easily by using our phones , playing games on console , and getting distracted easily. Theres always gonna be a bad and good towards technology it all the depends how humans use it.

Technology is the best thing we have in our world. It makes life more easier for us to do stuff online. Technology will be there for us when we need it to organize documents , buy stuff online , and it will always advance. technology will always have a positive and negative side to it but most of the time its positive. it all depend how humans use it. thats what I think about my side technology the bad and the good.                            ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
F584D9BB5F5C,""" Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had a positive or negative affects on people's lives?"". As we know, technology has became one of the most important things in our lives, and people now are abusing the use of technology and forgetting to contact with the others around them. Although it has both positive and negative affects on people, but we cannot declaim that our lives have been easier and better since we have had techonlogy.

First, technology are used everyday by people at all ages because of its functions. We can complete many things online by using technology such as study, entertain, shopping, etc. For example, students use technology to serve for their learning like stuyding online or researching important things for their lessons. Lots of people also use it to play game, chat with their friends, or shopping online to relax after a hard-working day.

With technology, we can find and do almost things we need so we can save our times and will have more times to do the other activities like spending time with family, or hanging out with friends.

Second, technology helps us adpot hot problems, new informations of society faster and easier. We can read news on the websites, or watch the agenda to update more things everyday so we can have better knowlegde about things around us. Besides, many poor people have been helped by the others because the news about them have been shared wide-spread. This showed the major of technology and the care of people give to the others.

Many people said the use of technology has the limitation of human contact, and it's not all right. We can easily contact to the others by texting, calling as technology is developing . Using technology in general and social media in particular also can help us make friends. People often use Facebook, Instagram, or Snapchat to add friends over the world and follow them. It is a best way to know our friends, family members' activities without asking because we don't have too much time to speak with them everyday. Otherwises, we still have to speak face to face to the others as much as possible so we can understand them better, and it also shows our care to them.

Not only technology, everything in the world also has both positive and negative sides, and the main idea is ourselves. If we use technology for the right purposes, and can limit the time of using it, technology will be very useful to our lives. In short, technology can limit human contact or not based on us so let's try using it as limited as we can and don't forget to use it right ways, right times, and right purposes.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
C1EAD0C50570,"I agree all students must partticipate in at leasat one extracurricular activity at school, because it's good for them and they can spend more they'er time at school playing sport or doing some other activity like math clup or working on the school yearbook any other cluping or activity, and help student learn more new stuff.

students could leaen more about sports an be healther and know how to play it other thing is that they can do there homework at school if they cant do it at home or if they have no one at the house to help them.

participate at schools activity something that all school should have and make students have a better guatction in there furcht and help how to become good person later in life.

The most importent thing about participate to school activity is you can spend time with your friend and teacher and your principal too, and it help students with there grades too.

Not all students have or must participate to school activity, but is there choses rather they want to or not but i thing is impoent to partticipate an actiticy at school is for there good. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
5A9C20C851FD,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. I extremely disagree with those schools that are offering distance learning for students because students wouldn't be benefit from attended classes from home the students just will be worth probably, they would like to take online classes but then they wouldn't attend they might be sleep, and they wouldn't care about the online classes.

The several schools that are offering online or video conferencing classes to students, those schools are doing that in the worse way, because those schools that are offering online classes just would make the students more lazy to attend to school and to receive classes with the teachers at schools, but I believe that students better attend to school than to receive online classes because attending to school the students get an opportunity to know others students and make new friends, and being at home receiving the online classes students don't get the opportunity to know, and meet new people from the same age as them so that's why I believe that those schools that are offering the distance learning to students to receive online classes are doing in a bad path.

Although some say that students should attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is much better, because students don't has to attend to school and receive the classes with teachers, actually students shouldn't attend to classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, because students wouldn't learn the much as they learn at schools with teachers, and some students doesn't have internet or electronic devices at home to attend for online classes.

Some say that students should attend to online classes or video conferencing. One reason, school offer that option because they don't want to student waste time to attend to school and they believe that students would be benefit receiving classes from their home. However, students can have more time to sleep for those who work until midnight can be a benefit receiving those online classes, but to those students that doesn't work it would not be a benefit even though it will be worth because they just will waste their time on the phone all day and even in the night too because they wouldn't have to wake up early and get ready to attend to school.

I extremely believe the opposite, students shouldn't attend to online classes or video conferencing because students will just waste their time at home and not taking the classes on their computers or others electronic devices. Otherwise, Some others students doesn't have the same benefits as the others have for example: some students doesn't have the sufficient money or the same opportunity as the others to buy an electronic device such as computer to receive the online classes, so those students has to attend to school and receive classes with the school personal, that's one reason why I extremely disagree with some schools option like the learning distance. Another reason, attending to school students learn more faster than being at home with a computer because when they are receiving the classes on the computer they will check their social media at the same time as they are taking classes. However, attending to school students can learn many new words from the school personal and leaning new words can be such a great benefit.

In conclusion,

however some say that attend to the distance learning is better, but I extremely believe the opposite students shouldn't attend to the distance learning, because that wouldn't be a good benefit in their education, and in their knowledge students that take the distance learning they wouldn't learn the same way or the much as they learn when they attend to school and the teachers teach.

I disagree with the distance learning that some schools offer to students because the distance learning it wouldn't be a benefit for students who attend to the option distance learning it would be just worth it because they would not learn that much and probably they will not pay attention to what on the classes are teaching to them. Many students will prefer to take the distance learning just because they don't want to wake up early and go to school.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
894C9DC473A0,"Albert Einstein said "" Imagination is more important that knowledge"" do I agree with Albert Einstein or do i disagree I picked agree and I'm going to tell you why I picked it.

Reason one imagination is all about being creative like thinking about stuff to do and stuff to wear and writing a song you got to use your imagination and speaking you got to use your imagination just to know what your about to say before you even say the word.

Reason two Albert Einstein used his imagination to be really smart and creative. Also people who invented stuff they used their imagination and not only that they made millions just by using there imagination, and construction workers got to use there own imagination just to construct a big buildings and houses.

Reason three you can make money from just using your imagination I seen people make lots of money just selling stuff they made at there own homes and seen so many companies go from not making anything like money to being this really large company that made millions just from using there imagination.

And thats why i agree with Albert Einstein saying ""Imagination is more important than knowledge""",2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
E12450BAE343,"Would it be surprising to know that kids learning at home helps them not stress out as much? Stress is mainly caused by student getting to much school work that cannot all be handied in on night. Every day kids complain about having too much homework and when working at home there is not any homework. Allowing children to work on their own schedule helps them become more motivated to work. Students being educated at school gaing more freedom to create their own schedule and their own rules. Learning at home and not at schools helps kids succeeed and have better grades.

One of the best thing about homeschooling is that it can be done at anytime, and anywhere. Children have a flexible time schedule which means that the parents can help. The students can work around the parents schedule instead of the parents working around the student's schedule. Some students have a trouble working at a school because they cannot understand the material at the pase set by teachers. Homeschooling allows students to work at their own pace and on their own schedule. Another thing about homerschooling is that there are no misguided rules about technology or how to dress. This is good because instead of worrying about the rules. The students can focus on their studies.

When you are taking a test or taking notes at a public school there are many distractions that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. This is another reason that learning from home would benefit students. Learning from home won't have the distractions that a classroom has. As a result of this, students won't lose focus on the work they are doing and get better grades. One of the reasons students get distracted in the first place is because they are in an environment their are not familiar with, which makes the feel uncomfortable. If a students learns from home they will feel more relaxed and confortable and won't stress about work. In a school, you are struck at desk for 6 hours and have a limited time to eat and limited bathroom breaks. This is not help a student's learning at all. On the other hand. If you are at home you can eat and do whatever you want when you want.

There are still a few reasons not to do distanced learning. There are many more opportunities with public schools. People from different colleges don't go to students'homes and try to advertise their career options. Making friends from home would be difficult without social interaction. Public school are great places to socialize during free time. If everyone goes home to attend school funding for public schooling willl fall and teachers will lose their jobs because of buged cuts. In public schools, depending an the teachers, cheating is hard to do.

My conclusion is students should be offered classes online or at home because the environment is less distracting, which could be less stressful. At home there are less distractions, rather than at school where there are many different thing to students, can greatly affect the quality of a student's work.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
F45F03EBB2CA,"Dear Principal

I think we should perform community service to support our community to help out clean our streets, and parks and help the people who are starving for food . All students should require to help out with the animals and the people from starvation. It doesn't take time off of you want to do It would help out to make our place a whole lot better than a mess. Its important to help out our community to live in a better place to live. The people who need food you can donate to the people who are starving out there right now. Also You can donate to you're charity to help out the homeless that are starving to eat and donate for the winter of the cold because they might be cold and with no food they can start dying. You can clean up with the littering its not right for the animals to eat our plastic it can kill them and start to clean you're streets.

STUDENT_NAME",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.5
6E842F21D6E4,"There are people in every part of the world that, they can not be retract based on what they say, or on what they have done as a result of their acts giving in their first impressions. The first impressions can give to a people in a idea, feeling, or an opinion. A people can hurt someone else feeling based on their opinion, because they do not think what adequate words they going to say. And when they want to fix the problem may be too late. The first impressions are almost impossible to change, because people can hurt someone else feelings and cause people change.

First impressions can hurt people's feelings in fact, I did to my sister yesterday. My sister and I were talking about her wedding yesterday, her wedding is next year in April, and we are preparing for her best day ever. We have to look for her dress and all the things that she is going to use for that day. She is like my second mother, and I want to make sure she looks beautiful on that day. While we were talking and looking for dresses in the internet, she saw a wedding dress, and my first impression was like, no that dress is ugly, and I told her she was going to look like a real skull in dress, because she is skinny. But I never thought I was going to hurt her feelings in my first impression, the dress was ugly, even though she liked but I wanted for her the pretties dress for her wedding. I felt badly for her, because I did not think my words before I said to her. I told her sorry, but she was little upset about me for the words I said to her, as I always say, what people say is what they receive. Lately my sister did not talk to me, I was sad and I talk to her, I apologized for the words I said. She told me it was okay, that I did not meant to said it. My sister and I, we are happy now. In the following manner, my friend Generic_Name invited me on her birthday and Her friend told me that I was looking ugly, and that I was a ugly and slow girl, in front of her other friends, her impressions about me hurt my feelings. She retract based on what she said, but it was too late, I left from Generic_Name party I went home, and I was little sad, the girl went to my home she wanted to talk to me, she apologized and I told her she hurt my feeling but I was fine, and gave her some advises and she left with this, first impressions are almost impossible to change because hurt someone else feelings.

Additionally, first impressions can cause people change, as an example of my best friend I gave her an opinion about her boyfriend. I told her that he does not love her, because I saw him kissing with a girl in the school. She told me I was crazy, I was just jealous because she had the most handsome boyfriend in the whole world. Matter of fact he was cute, but he wanted just play with the girls. My best friend change with me a lot, she did not want to talk to me no more. About the things that I told her. Lately I realized that he had a twin brother I made a mistake, that my first impressions to him was a fatal mistake. After all, I wanted to apologize with my best friend, but she was mad with me. It was impossible to talk with her. I realize that my first impressions about the idea of his boyfriend had change my friendship with her. Today I just talk rarely with her, it was almost impossible to change my idea, but I did, but my friendship is changed. First impressions cause people change.

Some people may say, the first impressions is possible to change immediately, because is not a big deal. They may say that the other people, does not care about their first impressions from them. But this is not case, people always get hurt when they receive a bad impressions to them, they make them to change even with themselves. First impressions are almost impossible to change, even if the problem is big.

Thus, the first impressions is almost impossible to change, because what people say is not easy to retract. Is not easy to correct the mistakes, is not easy to correct the words that people do not meant say them. If people say their impressions without thinking them, and then apologized that is fine, but sometime is almost impossible to correct the first impressions, because people hurt someone else feeling. Also, there are sensitive people and they may not forgive people. People may change based on someone else idea, feeling, and opinion. The impressions are almost impossible to change.                          ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
61E85C09E36D,"Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble,or do they unfairly interfere young people's lives?

In my opinion yes curfews have to take care of them , it does matter if they are young, Also if they are in the night. This is a good intention from curfews, to protect them at the end the only beneficiaries are the teenagers.

For example if they are in the middle of the night they can get a trouble , because they going to do wherever they want when nobody is watching them, for other part if curfews say not they have to respect the rules .

Otherwise nobody are in the street playing or doing something good in the night, all people are in home resting or with their family doing other things, they have to apply the same for teenagers.

Also in the night someone can steal your properties, or doing something bad to someone or to you , why? to you because maybe you are watch what others are doing to someone, and you try to help or do something.

Some people thing that have fun in the night is good idea. but is not, for examples going to the clubs is not good in my opinion, because you don't not anybody ,or something can happen ,for example in Las Vegas almost 3 years ago someone shooting a club in the middle of the night many people die. In conclusion curfews have to take care of the teenagers this is good for them.  ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
87B7C44BBB7C,"Some schools have programs were they pair older kid with younger kid. Many programs can help both young kid and older kids in many ways. They can also learn new stuff that later on can help them in life.

There are many ways programs like this can help older kids in many ways. One thing they can learn is to learn to help other people by showing them how to do there work or also teach them how to ask a teacher for help when needed. Another thing that the older kid can learn is to talk to people without being scared or shy this can also help them by getting a job when they grow up. Talking to the young kids can help them learn about the kid and how they act in class and around other people.

It can also help younger students in many ways. One thing it can help them with is learning new thing from the older kids somethings they can learn from them is like how to do math,homework, and how to act in the middle of class without being rude to the teacher. It can also help them learn how to respect others like there parents,teacher,and the older kids. It can also teach them how to talk to other people without being scared or shy to talk with someone or i front of the class.

Programs like this can help both young kids by making new friends with the older kids or talking to other kid and making friends that way. They can also learn a lot about other people like were are they from how old they are. This can also help the older kid see how the younger kids act and see with they need any help during class with work like reading ,writing or math.

Many programs for kids can help them in many ways by teaching them many new things that can help them later on in life or when they need help they know how to do something because they had learned in from some one older i their past and maybe later on he can help other people by teaching them how to do stuff they didnt know how to do.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
0EC392C06372,"Introduction:

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson ""Unless you try to do something, beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"". One thing that is really important in life is School because is the second place that we learn about how we can be respectful, responsible, honest and education. The second thing is Work- Independent because when we are always with our family is simple because we don't know how is the reality in the life. We were dependent but work include be prepare to have new experiences in our personal life and we are prepare to the future. The third thing is Life Cycle when we are baby, kids, teenagers, adults and older.

The first is School (experiences) In our life school is important because teachers educate we and we learn of them about the classes like english when we travel to any country that speak this language we need to learn by process every day inside and outside the class because we improve with new topics like verbs, punctuation marks in school porcess. Teachers teach good values in our life like integrity, respectful, honest, responsible, service. For example, when we start to study we don't know how to write, read, paint, speak. They teach we everything like our parents at home. We decide when we grow up if we want graduate from the school,those values efforts, dedication, knowledge, good skills and new opportunities if we do everything correct inside and outside the school because we can't stop growing the opportunites that we can have is only one time in the life.

Education is very important now in the present because if we go to school we are professionals and we can have good choices. Second is Work being independent in the life our parents work all the time because they want that we can have a good life, but when we go to work is interesting for example when we continue going to the school our parents can't give money all the time and we think like adults being independent, finding a job and learn about the life not is simple and is hard at the same time. Our future dependent if we want to think like adults or teenagers. We can be master helping other people that need our help those people will grateful with we because if we try to help each other we know everything from life experiences, when we go to school they pay better with a diploma from High School, College or University.

Finally is Life Cycle when we are babies our parents teach we every process for example how to go to the restroom, brush our tooth, take a shower, speak, walk, eat for example when is the time for go to the dinning room. The time when we need go to sleep is relly important learn every little thing that our parents teach we when we are baby. We discovere a new stair that already we can be mastered. Kids for example after when we were baby in a simple thing we discovered new things, but being kids we continue in a easy way the life like speak, walk, eat, sleep, change our clothe not is difficult because we learn in the past, we try to do something beyond that we don't know before. Teenagers when we think that the life is hard going to the school, work, family, not is easy because is more responsability, efforts being stronger and continue doing those things is very different from the past. Adults is more difficult when we were baby, kids and teenagers because adults are charge of the family, work, pay, education,

responsabilitys in the job and home. Adults are dependent because they learn the good things from the past for example when teenager want permission for go to any party adults really need to know what person is, where is from, the personality and who is her/his family,

in any moment like that is really difficult to say yes or no. Adults are important in the society because they are master and grow from the Life Cycle. Older like grandmother and father they already know that grow not is easy but they did every step in a good form going the school, work - independent. Old people in sometimes need help from younger people like the family can be sister, brother, son, wife and daughter because they are tired and need space to relax like going to the park sharing with his/her family and friends. In this last thing if we try something different we can have a positive life.

In conclusion:

We can try being a better person in our life because every step is very important maybe in sometimes life is hard but if we learn in a correctly form everything like going to the school is a new experience, work - independent teach we being stronger and not be afraid, life cycle is the process from every step when we were baby, kids, teenagers, adultd and older. We grow every moment that can be easy or difficult. We need to be dependent to grow up, master everything helping other people in the world. I agree with the author because I know if we stop growing is very impossible to have new experiences in our life. Unless we try to do something different and intersting in our life we can a better chance to do good things can be in the present or in the future, for the new generation that can have good opportunities in school, job and with the society. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
3C78D0790E7B,"Is Emerson right about the statement he wrote? Emerson's statement stated that ""unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" I agree with this statement because it lets you know that anyone can push for a higher acomplishment in their own life. As well, reading the passage gets people thinking on their goals, if they should push to reach for higher limits. I'll tell you why Emerson's statement is right.

As a start, many people are inspired by Emerson's statement and its made them believe more in themself. Having a powerful statement can really open other peoples eyes to strive for high goals. As well, push boundries that they never thought they had. People with start to have faith knowing they can rise above their own expectations. For example, many people give up and stop trying to reach their goals. Then they have no idea on what they want to do or what they can manage to do.

In fact, people who past beyond thier own boundries have a successful life style. They start to know what they can handle and how to fully succeed, It make them feel like they can complete any type of task that they're given. People start to feel better on themself knowing what the can do. Some people say its a weight lifting feeling they get once they find out what they were missing out on. For example, people ened up over thinking things and made it harder on them self for not achiving the goals.

As a matter of fact, People end up gaining more experiance on what they do. They also start to want to take on new challenges so they can have more experiance. They want to be filled with many different ways to have a strong mind and successful life style. People who has gained so much experiance can get any type of work within seconds because of their experiance, nothing has ever stop someone from believing they can do more. For example, people with the most experiance struggle less for work.

In conclusion, Emerson's statement shows a strong componet in peoples lifes. Making it one of the most insperational quotes that has ever existed. People start to end up valuing in themself more then they ever thought they could. People who can't do things that are beyond their own ability hasn't grown yet. Many of the people are too scared to reach for higher expectaions when they have the ability to take it. Overall it befits the people more when they end up gaining more work experiance.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
5D4D6519DF94,"Haile G/Selasie, one of the most famous long distance runners of all time, did not pave his way to success because he was born with it. He came from a poor family, and walked a long distance to his school everyday. When he started running, he was not good at all. He worked day and night to get to where he is. And when he speaks about his past, he tells the story of how he failed again and again a lot of times but he never lost his passion for his dream. And now he is one of the richest people in Ethiopia and one of the best record holders of Marathon.

Success is a dream for most and a reality for only a few. When it comes to how success is achieved, it creates a great question in all our minds and that is,""How can I be successful?"". Some say that success is achieved by going through failures without giving up or without losing hope. That is a truly arguable idea and some might think different. But I fully agree with that idea.

The fact that almost all of the masterminds that are known for their creations of the bulb, physics theories, telephone and many more of the things we take for granted at the moment told the story of how they tried and failed many times than they count. And that is one proof of the point that success doesn't come without failure.

There might be some people that argue this point by pointing out that many people have tried and failed and tried again but it didn't help them achieve their dreams. That is a good point but the fact is that failing is not the only thing that determines your success, but failing and not being discouraged is what really counts. If we plan to achieve a goal, we shouldn't lose our excitement for that specific thing we're doing, we should rather be more encouraged to try harder and to find another way to make it work.

For example, when we first built a rocket,it wasn't done in a day or in the first try. Engineers tried to fix the problem in the mechanical part. Scientists tried to see if their calculations was wrong or if the combination of the chemicals didn't work and many others tried to fix it but they failed more than a couple of times. By not giving up though, it was a success at last.

It might not always seem like it but failure leads to success. The main point is not giving up and not losing our enthusiasm. As the saying goes, ""If you fail once, try and try harder"". Never give up on your dreams and don't be discouraged by failure.                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,5.0,4.0
57ED5BC70E40,"Dear Generic_Name

I believe that working in a group is way better than working by yourself, get to do less work than working alone .

Working with a group is more beneficial than working alone because when your working alone and you need help there's no one to help you,but when your in a group you get all the help you need.

When i work by myself i usually dont get my work completed. Sometimes i be wondering what are we supposed to be doing. However working by yourself in cress your chances of staying focused and productive. Although you got a better chances of getting a good grade when you work in a group. It all depends on the group if they like to work with each other. Also you could easily get distracted by your own group mates ,but the all depends on the group and the communication they have with each others.

My final reason is that working in a group is better than working alone you get your work done faster than you usually would have alone. There for working in a group has more beneficial like make new friends and new people. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0B3118834B72,"What would I like to accomplish in the future? I would like to buy a house or a car or both, start a family maybe. Or just be a billionaire. What would you like to accomplish in the future? and why would you like accomplish that?

I would like to accomplish to become a billionaire for many reasons.

First of all if I would accomplish to become a billionaire, I would buy a house to live in, because I'm not gonna stay in my mom's house all my life, and I don't think my mom would like that either. I would have a pool in the back of my house. I always wanted a pool so I could swim there and wouldn't have to go all the way to the water park. Or just relax in the pool whenever I have free time. Have parties so my friends and I have fun, and my mom would't have to tells us to keep it down.

Second I would buy my mom a house, a car and some new clothes. she deserves it for all the hard work she's done. I would sell the house that we're living in now. And all the money that I will get for the house, I will give it to my mom. I would take her to see a car that she likes and buy it, because the one that she has is a little old and she is always having trouble with it. I would take her to the Mall to see different stores so she can buy different kinds of clothes that she likes.

Then I would buy a hospital. I would not let the hospital charge too much for the patients though, because whenever I go to the hospital they charge to much, and some people don't got a lot of money. I would hire the best people for the job so they can help their patients, some nurses or doctors are not too good at their job. I would let any patient in no matter where they're from, because some hospitals judged the way people look, their race or the color of their skin.

Finally I would help the homeless. Not all the money that I would have would be for me, because some I would give it to the homeless. I would buy them food and clothes, because some homeless people have clothes and some don't, and some are just waiting to be feed. I would buy an entire city block, so I can construct apartments for the homeless. whenever I look out the window, when I'm in the car, I see a lot of homeless people siting in the side walk or sleeping on it. They deserve a home!

And those are my reason for why I would like to accomplish to become a billionaire.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
5384378F1AC2,"The great question here is, should schools allow students to use cell phones for educational purposes or should cell phones be prohibited in the classroom? In my opinion, schools should use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Some school staff members may claim that cell phones should be forbidden in the classroom even for eductional purposes. Because, they think students will lose their attentions. However, I firmly believe that shools should allow students to use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes.

Students will be effective academically as long as they use cell phones in the classroom. There are several reasons for my opinion. My first reason is that as a student, whenever I use cell phones in the classroom, I can search things easily and take pictures when nedded if my teachers allow me; which will help me on my studying when I go home. Another reason for my opinion is, if I don't have my phone with me, I will be eager until the bell rings and get my phone back without concentrating on the class. For example, I have a friend whose father took her cell phone forcing here to study the whole school year. Stubbornly, she stops doing what he tells her to do. Instead, she persistently hang-out and have more fun. As a result, she got F's for all of her classes. Therefore, using cell phones in the classroom helps the learning-teaching process.

Using cell phones in the classroom helps to call if something happens in the class. For instance, if a stranger comes with a gun or if a lock-down happens and I hear the stranger's voice, I will call 911 for help. Secondly, if an emergency occurs like fire, hurricane, and a huge lightneing while I am in the class, I may need to call to my family to let them know how I am doing. In that case, they will know about my situation. To sum up, most people like doing things which are forbidden for them. Students may hide and use their phones for another purpose eventhough they are not allowed to use it in the classroom; which is more riskier than using in front of the teachers. Consequently, the positive effect of using cell phones in the classroom is more influential.

In conclusion, schools should use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. Other people say that cell phones should not be used in schools during class periods. I obstinately argue that phones should be used in the classroom for the purpose of education since the positive effect is more influential and using cell phones is more quicker than using laptops or other electronic devices.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
BF56324B3A86,"Do you know how many people are unhappy for be someone that they don't are?. At the present time in the world exist millions of people that don't live their life of the way that they want. Sometimes is difficult be yourself in a world where the whole people think that be different is wrong, but the truth is that the greatest accomplishment in the life of each human is be unique and have individuality in all your presence, because be yourself is the goal of the happiness, fight against the prejudice of everyone is not easy and accept you exactly like you are, looks like a war if the whole world is trying to change you.

Many people think that have a success and amazing life is have a lot of money, be an important person or have material things but all this things in really don't matter in the process of be yourself, because a person can have all this things but this things don't define you like a person and this aspects don't give the happiness, and something very important in the life of everyone is that, if you don't have happiness you don't have nothing. Is a fact that at least the 60 percent of people is not happy with their life, but studies affirm that this can change just if they choose be hones with themselves and take out of their life want they don't want. And the first step to be happy is be yourself. The people don't can live being liar with themselves, because this just bring like consequence a miserable life. A person have to accept their personality and their interest based on their thoughts. A serious consequence that the people get if they don't be honest with themselves are diseases like depression, This is a very dangerous problem and one of the most common causes are don't be agreeable with the person or the way that the person is living. For this and many others reasons is that is very difficult be yourself but is the biggest reward.

Alongside of your life you have to make a lot of decisions and is important always hear you. The people cannot allow that someone take decisions for they if that affect who are they.

First is very important know exactly what do you want because that is the same that be happy with yourself.

Always take your own opinion first, is the answer of be really happy because is very easy follow the opinion of the others based in their life's or be influenced for a world that always is trying to make you someone else, someone that they don't are. But at the end what a person want is the answer of be really happy.

Everyone in the world is trying to find their correct way in their life, and be honest about feelings and all mentioned in this paragraph can be the answer to arrive to the goal and be happy with yourself.

Is a fact that actually the world is a constantly war, because the majority of the citizens in the world are trying to fight for their rights and be honest with themselves and also with the whole world. But is true that this is not a easy task. The only person that someone need worry about what they going to think is yourself!, a person don't have to worry about the opinion of the others, just care what do you think!. Unfortunately, not everyone understand this, and sometimes the people wants that the world accept us form the simple fact of be a person. Is very hard be like you really are if millions of people want change your mind and they refuse to accept that everyone is different, that there are things that don't have that be equal and that it's fine, that the diversity is part of a balance. Everyone is here, in their country, in their community to learn about the others, and have respect of they, don't care their race, color, language, traditions, customs and many others things that represent and define a person, this is the correct, not be equal. Nowadays a lot of people is trying to make this world a better place where the prejudices not exist and where each person can be what they want and have the rights that the people need and deserve. Is a difficult battle but without doubt the result is the greatest accomplishment. And is a fact that if the people are happy with how they are, and they accept their form of be, with their qualities and defects, anyone, and studies repeat that anyone can affect you, because you are really on the top of the goal and when you are there nothing can make you go down.

Many philosopher and researchers believe that the problem with the society that don't accept and allow the people that is different, is because since the beginning of the world the people hidden their really feelings and interests for the fear of be rebounded. In part is own fault because the people never said something when something was wrong, but never is late, an actually the majority of the people is trying to change the perspective about what is fine in the world. That is why accept you exactly like you are, looks like a war if the whole world is trying to change you. We have to be strong and don't allow that anyone dispute your decisions. Another reason therefore is hard be yourself is for you, sometime the people are so exigent with themselves, you are your own most hard critical. If everyone would honest with themselves , this would be something normal for the society, but is such difficult accept us, that is seen wrong be unique. We definitely have to change this way of see the circumstances and make it normal.

Is clearly that we have a lot of learn but I think that we going to the correct way. The people have to travel many obstacles for win their individuality and always remember where we are and where we want arrive.

Be yourself, is really difficult if a whole society is telling you that you can not be different and that be unique is wrong, because how you can understand who are you, if anyone give you the chance to know it, but without doubt discover the answer will be the best accomplishment that a person can have because live being you, is the better that could exist, for a complete life.      ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
B5106AB5C81C,"To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Is not a really good idea, its important to conserve energy, but only in that sense. Because for some students is going to be very boring, and they do not want to going to school, that is why is not a really good idea to change the schedule.

First at all, the students will be really upset, because who want to be at school for ten hours.

Second, its the same if you come five days per week for eight hours, to come four days per week for ten hours.

Third, the business if different than a school, because if a school only open four days per week, are going to be the same if they open five day per week, because the teachers leave one or two hours after the students.

The students will be really upsets, because who not to be, nobody want to be at school for ten hours, many students had a part-time job after school, if the school want to choose that option of four-day for ten hours, so the students who has a job. They are going to lose their jobs because at the new schedule.

It is the same if we come to school five days or four days, its the same time that we spends on school, and then the teachers leave one or two hours later than us. So, is not to much the energy or resources that the school would be conserve if they change the five-days for eight hours to four-days for ten hours.

In conclusion is the same thing if they change the five-days for the four-days of school, because they are going to spend the same time or maybe more than they think, but not is a good idea , for the students who have a part-time job after school. They no want to lose their jobs for that change, and is going to be the same charge if they change the schedule. That is why is not a good really idea for school. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
8B1D74DDA04B,well people has deferent opinion's about community service bet i think is a greats idea to hade community service so what i think is theta it well be better is the habeas some open opinions ablaut the student sent they don't hob that much rites to speak it well be nines to her the student bet my open eon is theta is a great idea theta the student chord do community service so i think is some then god for the community and i think is a punishment to do community service so i think is bad gob en them options so i think is n on optional theta is geb en to them for example i hub 2 chose one is bad bet the other one not that bad so i think is not far for thos people thet lik to help the community an dos the wan to chost hab fon so i think thet is nod god to hab choeses so i thenk the beter one is to do community serves,2.0,1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0
F30AD5A2B74A,"Do you agree with ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, yes or not? I agree with Churchill's statement of success consists of going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiams because not all the time we can win or make the things perfect. For example, when I took my English test last year in my English class. I practiced a lot and I did my best for taking A+ or maybe B+, but I did pass the test. I was very sad, however, my teacher told me that I had a second chance. So, I took it and this time I passed with A-, I was so excited. To fall out the test made me to understand that it doesn't matter how many times we can fall out about what we want, we only need to be strong and try as much as we can for being successful. Moreover, this year my aunt was trying to travel to El salvador, but when she called to the airline for buying the ticket, the tickets were so spends and she doesn't have to much money, so she decided to wait few months. seven month ago she called again to the airline and the prices tickests increase more money, but she didn't want to continue waiting more time so she decided to buy it, when she was buying the tickets the person told to her of her ID was already expire, so she can not buy the ticket. My aunt was sad because she did not remember about to renew her documents, but she went to renew her documents some weeks later and after that she has to wait at less three months to receive the new ID. at this time the three months already pass and she didn't receive her ID, she's really sad because she wants to go visit my grandmother. even thoug she can't travel yet, she doesn't lose her enthusiasm of travel this year to my country. Churchill's statement of success consists of going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm is more than true because anybody is perfect and we need to fall out for learn lessons and learn to be stronger persons in the life. some people think this statement is not true because some of them loss multiple times for being successful in their life. also, they say when the person loss the first two times they're losers, stupy persons, or other bad things that are not right. in my oponion this cause happend to them or they are saing that because they loss their enthusiams and become weak person. in conclusion, for being successful we have to fall out in the life, like when i fall out my test and with my aunt cause. this teach to everyone to be stronger person and never lose their enthusiams of be successful in each persons life. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
1721F085F81E,"I disagree with this statement because your first impressions of someone or something can change overtime. When you first meet someone you automatically get an impression of that person from the way they dress, or the way they speak basically the way they do things.

Now a days people jump into conclusions, they never met the person, they just go off upon looks. For example say a teenager is wearing all black with ripped jeans and they got their pants down low, adults are going to think that teen is possible a gangster or a thug but thats not the case, thats just the style now a days.

First impression can change overtime, once you get used to something your mindset changes, say you meet a friend and you guys start talking and your friends starts giving you an attitude, your going to assume that your friend doesn't like you so you keep that mindset. Yall start talking again and this time it's going way better, you and your friend are laughing, overall just having a good time now your opinion has changed towards the person.

there was this guy he started to stare at me every few seconds so i thought he had a problem or something but he looked familiar but i couldn't figure out where i've seen him from, later that day he ended up being in my last block class, the teacher made the class work in pairs so i got up and asked the guy if he wanted to be my partner, he said sure and we began working, we started talking about random things until he said ""you look familar"" then he said didn't we go to the same middle school together, then it clicked I was friends with this guy back in middle school and haven't seen him in a long time, after that day we began talking almost everyday.

The first impressions aren't always impossible to change, you learn to change your mind overtime and start accepting things for what it is.          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
4FD4CE18CCDF,"I think seeking multiple opinions would be better, because you can actually view multiple perspectives and then decide which one is the best. For example, you can make a list of pros and cons to see which one you like the most. Or, you can take a vote on what to do. You will also be able to listen better and be more supportive of other people. You will as well as compromise better with multiple people rather than one specific person.

For example, let's say someone wants a dog. He or she is going to have to listen to many people's opinions about having a dog. One person could say, ""Having a dog is a very big responsability. So don't get one unless you ready to take on the risks for it."" Another person could say, ""It's really easy to own a dog. All you have to do is feed it, wash it, play with it, take it out on a walk, and clean it's mess."" After he or she listens to both people, he or she makes a pros and cons list and decides which side has more and which one is the best.

Another example, someone wants to play a sport, but it can be too dangerous. One person says, ""Don't do it. It's not worth risking your life and slowly dying in the hospital."" Another person says, ""Do it! It's not only fun, but it can also help you be more cooperative and you are being active."" Again, someone can agree with both answers, so that's why people need to compromise, to both get what they want.

One example of a compromise, you want to watch the new movie

Billy Madison.

However, you are underage. It can work out if you ask someone if he or she has ever seen the movie. If yes, ask he or she if there's any scene okay for your age. If yes, you will probably be able to only watch the movie once. Otherwise, you are goind to have to wait until you're at the age.

Another example is, you want to stay up. However, your parents never let you. You can talk to them and see if they can let you stay up for at leat just one night. If you're lucky, you will probably be able to stay up during the weekend. But never on a school night.

That's why I think seeking advice from multiple people is a better choice. Not only it will help you more, but, it can also teach you how to deal with real-life situations. Also compromising and making a list will help you with that. It will as well teach people how to listen better and be more supportive of others. Then you decide whether if it's right or wrong. ",3.5,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
F5FF5E9E553C,"On september 2, 2015 Generic_Name was entering his first year of high school, and already knew what he wanted to do with his life, and that was to be a doctor, but was having trouble on what kind of doctor he wanted to be. So he decided to do some research on what kind of doctor he wanted to be before entering high school. Finally, Generic_Name decided he wanted to be, a surgeon. Took all of the classes he needed to be one. Few years later, became a surgeon, making lots of money, living in a nice house, and is living the best life he could dream of. In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Personally I think they should identify a career by the time they enter high school. So they can have the opportunities on what they need to do to get the job and not to be stressed out too much. Those are the reasons why they should commit to a career by the time they get to high school.

The first reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school is to have opportunities on what you need to get the job. In order to get the job, you need to go check out some places on what they do, so then you would know what to do. The other opportunity you have is you would know what classes you would need to take. For example, if you want to be a history teacher you basically just have to take most of the history classes, or if you want to be doctor you would basically take all sciene classes. The other opportunity is that if you want to make a lot of money have a plan set up. That's the reason why you should identify a career by the time you enter high school to have opportunities on what you need to get the job.

The second reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school is, so they don't get stressed out too much. If you know what you want to do then you're fine because the more you know the less stress you'll be in. If you know what you want to do then you'll be able to know what classes you will need to take, so then you won't have to take extra classes for no reason. Also if you need help don't hesitate to ask because everyone is here to help. The more you ask for help the less you'll be stressed. That's the reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school, so they don't get stressed out too much.

Some people would disagree with me because they think it's ok to wait to identify a career before they enter high school. They say that because they think high school is a place where you just hang out with friends, and not care about their grades when they should. Also, they think their interest in what they want to do will pop up eventually probably like in their senior year. No, that would be hard to figure out what college you would need to go to, don't even have a plan, and would just be stressed out.

In conclusion, in society they think that they should have an idea on a career by the time they enter high school. I strongly agree with that and there are many reasons why. So they can have opportunities on what you need to get the job, and that is know what classes you would need to take. Also, so they don't get too stressed out for it.

If you know what you want to do then you're fine because the more you know the less stress you'll be in. Those are the reasons why i agree with this statement.             ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
AA9B263544A9,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? In my opinion, I dont think the students would benefit taking classes at the comfort of their homes. That is because it's not the same thing as going to school. Taking classes at home is not the same as taking classes in school because in school you have a teacher that can help you, if you don't understand what's going on in the class. Also another reason is that in school you have a teacher that can teach the student actual lessons that the student can benefit from. Third reason is because sometimes you will just be lazy and not do the work and just do whatever you want since you're at home. No one will stop you, or give you remainders to do your work. Overall, I don't think the students would benefit from taking classes at their homes.

I would think that online classes would be harder and difficult to understand. In fact, being in a normal class you learn more and you are all catched up with your work. Being in school will help you communicate more with others, you can make or meet some new friends,the teacher will help you with some work if you need it. Online classes are harder because the student might not know what to do and he/she will be lost. Some people might find that online classes are hard and some might not it just depends on the individual. Some people just learn differently.

In conclusion everyone is different. What might work for you, might not work for the next person. Some people might benefit from talking online and some might not it. Honestly it just depends on what the students perfers online classes or school classes. I think that taking class in school is way better, teachers help you, you get better knowledge, you communicate more with others. Overall there is no right or wrong you just pick what you learn best and just do it.              ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
8FF22F2804A3,"A city council is debating the adoption of a 10 pm weekday curfew and a midnigh weeknigh weekend curfew for teenagers the curfews. I strongly believe that this is great idea curfews keep teenagers out of trouble. Like this away children will be save. Children has to be at home early. If they do not obey the laws they will have troubles.

First reason, why I strongly believe that curfews teenagers out of trouble because children do not has to be at the strees too late. In the community are people crazy that use drogs and that is danger for them.

Second reason, children will be save at home with their families because this is the best that they can do! Be with their families maybe doing home works or talking about the good things that god has for us.

Reason tree, why children has to obey the law? Because if they do not obey the law they will be in serious problems.

In conclusion a city council is debating adoption of a 10 pm weekday curfew and midnigh weeknigh weekend curfew for teenagers the curfews. I strongly believe that curfews teenagers out of trouble. Cause one, joung people do not has to be outside after 10 pm it could be danger. Cause two, children are more save at home than anywhere else. Cause tree, is important that the people obey this law it is good for their lifes.     ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
FFED00D6E0BD,"Do you think that failure is the main thing for people consist on their goal's and success without lose their enthusiasm?

I agree with the important role that failure play in the pursuit of success in life because, I think failure is the main key to people reach their goal's because they need to have the idea that after failure came the success, secondly they need to be positive and have in mind what they want and how they want to reach their success in life, and last they have to be prepared for failure, and they have to be prepared to confront the failure because they need to keep in mind that not everything is going to be in the way they want, but at the same time they always need to have in mind that everything is possible with effort.

First, people need to have the idea that after failure came the success, because everything happens for a reason and if something goes wrong for certain reason in the moment when they try to success they need to accept things, and keep trying. They need to be really patience for example, when babies are trying to walk they fall many times but get up and they keep trying until they reach their goal which in this case is walk or, there have been many cases when people have car accidents and they lose the ability to walk that's something that does not stop them they keep trying even if take more than a year they don't give up because their goal is to be able to walk again, their goal is to be the person they used to be before they get in that car accident, and they just want to be able to keep doing all the stuff they used to do before all the tragedy happens.

Secondly, everything depends in how positive people is because, if they have a negative mind and always act like their goal's is something impossible to come true their not going to accomplish nothing because people need to have the idea that they can make true everything they want, they don't have to be thinking in failure cause the more you think the more afraid you get to encourage yourself to make thing's happen and they have to try every day to improve and look for the resources available to success in life.

Finally, they always need to keep in mind that there always would be a chance of failure and they have the right to be afraid but, that's something they need to live aside and they need to be focus on their goal,

they need to have the power to stop themselves whenever they want, and they have to be the ones to say to their self to stop when they think they already accomplish what they want but, they can't let people decide for them. Because sometimes people get jealous to see the other one's success in life and they try to guide people into failure.

In conclusion, there have been nothing that can't stop people to reach their goal's and success in life because everything is possible, people have to believe in them self and always be positive they always need to keep in mind that they are capable's of everything and they need to learn to not give up. In that way they would be able to do everything and be successful the key is always have and excellent attitude and be prepared for people to judge, and be prepared to failure and get up and make it see like their have been nothing wrong and keep going. They need to be positive in every movement they make and be positive in the way that everything is going to be exactly how the planned.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
C996AAF4ADF6,"I think my preference is working with a group have more benefits with the working alone with myself. Because working with a group is more better have more ideas about of projects, every vary collaborate with the work making all together not distracting with the other students, and all in the group help with the ideas, what work need for the project, what talk about in the work, or what type of project made, what are doing the teacher said with the work.

Need stand enfouces all in the group for making the best work together, and make the nice grade for the group some students in the group don't have the perfect score but is the opportunity for the make change of the grades and working with a group, and someone not sustain what are you do try to the express the ideas and collaborate with all the group and working in one thing, what talk about in the project or the work in the class or need help can to help to what type of expression need more learn in the working with a group.

Sometimes working with a group all have ideas, what are doing first, who make the tittle of the work , of who have the perfect idea of present ate the work or explain with the group what is the best are doing in talk about of the work and projects. when some students working alone is more complicate for sustain with take the best idea sometimes don't likes what are doing with the work. But when the students working together with a group i feel more benefits. Because when take one best decision some students said i like this idea or the others.

Some students like work with other students or not someone is quit not like express the idea or like only with self for example; Working with a group is more benefits work you can express your ideas for make the best work in the class or more best in the other students group some many student when make working alone sometimes catch good score or bad this students don't put penitencion in the class or distracting with cellphone or other things. When making work with a group other explain what are doing, what the teacher explain in the class what type of work make or project.

Working with a group all students feels more benefits for take the good grade for the make all together the nice job: However working in group is try the express the best idea in the group try help other, and one give the best example or make change the students in the group have the best grade to coming up someone students don't turn in the work this is affect the grades this is time to the change the grades for all sustain as making or learn more about what the teacher explain in the class for every vary pass the class.         ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
4810EA26495B,"Student who live far or have a hard time learning will not help them succeed with there classes Teachers are feeling worried about there Student and they try everything to help. So the Teacher report to the Principal and notice the score are very low. They have to find a way to make there student successful, so they had a meeting and suggest that Student should do there assignment at home they called Home School.

Home school is a program to allow Student to do there homework, quizzes, assignments, and tests. This program help the Student to become successful, Student give there thought about home school and they say is more easy then School. What good about home School that you can stay at Home, eat your lunch watch T.V, and you will still have time to do your assignment on time.

But some other Student didn't want to be home school because they feel them self bored in home. They don't get to make friends, they need help with their assignments, They won't get the information they need. Student often get Home School because they probably don't have schools in there location but Parents want the best for there kids to have a good education so they gotta do whatever it takes to have there kids to become successful in the future.

If I was in the position or suggestion on the issue I would let the Student know to should take regular school. Because you will have better chances to succeed better then home school you will still have your friend in fact they can even help you with your assignments, even better chances to get to college with Teacher help you will know more information to be ready in the future. Student still suggest to be in Home School Because is still a good program to in to help be successful but not in the future People should take School more seriously if they want the better chance.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
03D00899C901,"I think yes, that if you have a positive attitude it is a key to success why do i think that?

I think that If you have a positive attitude you wont get in trouble because the attitude that you give out is the way that people judge you, A positive attitude is a great way to get the things you want in life like for example, If you want to get a job or a career you have to have a good and positive attitude because if not then they will not accept you like for another example if you have a positive attitude you can make friends and people will like you because of the way you are if your kind people will be like ""wow this person is so nice and kind"" i just think that being kind and nice is the best way to be in life you dont really get in trouble because your attitudes nice and not rude and about things that people tell you or want you to do in the other hand if your rude and people people will look and you and think about you in a rude way and not like you. The reasons I feel like a positive attitude is good because i am a kind person and dont get in to trouble with none because there is no reason to be mad and angry about small stuff. I fell like other people might think different about what I think because we all think different about everything. If you go to a friends house and you be all mean and rude and all dirty people are not going to like you because of the way you are and the other hand if you are all nice people they will like you because of how you are you and that you have respect of how your attitude is if not then you will not be wanted by people because of you act and are and people who act all rude end up in places they never thought they would end up in i just saying just stay with a positive attitude in the world and you will succeed in life and be great and not have to go through stuff like get in to fights or locked up in jail. I meant i know some people that have bad attitude and life and they are doing great in life but there is going to be one day that you will get in a problem by the way you act i think that just stay with a positive attitude so you dont got to worry about anythings and that its just better way to get al the things you need and would like to active in life because why be all rude when you can just be sweet and caring then be all grumpy and mad about small little things that can be fixed because thats what I think but if you have a bad attitude you might like end up saying or doing something that you will regret like if your like taking and with a attitude you might end up saying stuff that you dont mean and if your normal and calm about stuff you dont go to worry about nothing. I also been told that if your have a great attitude you wont have to worry about stuff because why would someone care about how you are if your all nice and not rude.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
FFCDB2524616,"I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson's ""

To be yourself in a world that os constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.""

because, in this generation kids are trying to fit in with other kids, by changing the way that they speak or the way they dress. Kids also try to fit in by doing what other people tell them to do, making dumb decisions that could potentially end you up in jail or possibly something even worse effecting their future all because they wanted to fit in.

Peer pressure is a main factor in kids that are trying to fit in. Kids pressure other kids into making poor decisions when in reality they don't wanna do it but they wanna look cool infront of others kids so they do it anyways. In reality it isn't cool to do what people tell you to do especially when it's just to fit in with others.

In my opinion people shouldn't make poor decisions trying to fit in with the others, you should be yourself, it doesnt matter where you from or what type of clothes your wearing everyone should be accepted no matter who they are. Kids should be leaders not followers, you can end up with the wrong friends that could care less about you, but are only with you because you make the poor decisions they're telling you to make.

Kids should just be themselves, you don't have to try and fit in with the others, there plenty of other kids with possibly the same interest as you.",2.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
4D377B163021,"I agree with what American jazz legend Duke Ellington said,if theres a problem in the world and yo know how to solve it it like your opportunity to show the world that your a person that could matter to everyone like if you know the sou lotion to a problem then you are more likely to be more successful at what you do. Another reason is to help others with what there dealing like love problems like losing a life time best friend or family member like you can help them with a solution and may help others with health problems homework problems stuff your good at and ways you can help them your not just helping them your helping yourself with staying and helping people can make yourself feel proud like a person that matters in life and you will be known of what you do. think like this if you help others and people think good about you,then your not going to be forgotten and not be alone in life and have a better future ahead of you its like your dream life and supporting others with helping them in difficult issues.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
0BF56A2681D3,"Dear, Principal I think students should do community service because we have to keep our schools clean. We should also have community service because it will help people be cleaner by picking up after them. The community service is very important because if know one picks up the trash that's in school then our school is going to look ugly. I think you should get people to pick up every day and then for the next day get another ten people and be rotating every day. Its also necessary to help out the community because we don't want to have a dirty environment for our children and younger kids. That's why I think we should have community service most people think its not important but years later it will be important because our children are going to be the ones living with a bad environment . I think we should have community service for these reasons because if we don't clean up right now no one will clean up in the future and that will hurt us because we are going to be living in a bad environment because no one wanted to clean up . In the future we are not going to be able to smell oxygen because of the bad environment. These are all the reasons I had to say about why we should have community service. Thank you for listening to my opinions. Sincerely, Your Student",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.5,4.0
7FF6972B86C2,"Everyone chooses their own character no matter if you are small or big. A persons character is based on their personality. Its easy for people to choose a character for themselves either a good or a bad character. Having a good character shows that you are a good person, but if you decide to have a bad character people no longer will trust you and you will be worthless to others, so this is why we choose our own character.

We choose our own character because our character is based on how we interact with other people. Some people dont have a good character and that's why people neither wants to trust them or talk to them. Even in the movie no one likes the the bad character because they are mean, bad, and no good to others but to harm them and put them in danger. A coworker of mine was very rude to customers. He was always mad therefor no other employees wanted to talk to him. One day a customer complained to the manager about how he was being rude to her, so the manager decided to fire him from his job.

We choose our character based on how we dress. people can present themselves as neat person by the way how they dress in public or anywhere else. If a person has a job interview and he wants to look good then he has to wear a dress that fits his character and makes him that he wants the job. A few years ago my uncle was invited to a wedding party but he wasn't sure what to wear, however some some of his friend told him to wear something casual but that didn't fit his character because he was a boss of a company, therefor many of his coworker would see him there so he decided to wear a suit because it was best for his character.

We choose our own character by the way how we talk to other people. For example if my brother speaks to others in a good manner people will always respect him. Being nice and respecting others will represent a good character of you. It is very easy for someone to change their character, whatever you choose to be that will be your character. Having a good character is very important in our everyday life, furthermore having a good personality will also effect a persons character so in order to have a better character you need to have a good personality.

Some people say that we can't choose our character because it's beyond our control, however choosing your character is not hard you just need to have a good personality and have to be nice to others. Most people that we don't know how to choose our character traits, therefor choosing a good character do not need any special skills. All a person has to do to have a nice character they have to dress properly they need to have good manners and don't be rude to others and this is all it takes to have a good character. Other people may say its hard for us to choose our character traits because we are not able to, however for some people it's hard but the things that a person does in their everyday life those things chooses their character it determines if they have a good character or not.                           ",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
9000217714BE,"To. Principal,

My opinion about this change is a good idea. But also many students have a grade of a (C) or lower it would not be a good idea changing the policy sport grade for those students. For others this policy my be a good idea because that way students that love sport's can start doing much better in school and have better grades. A, (B) or higher is a good grade so that way they can play a sport they like.

Teachers would probably accept this policy so that way their students will pay more attention. This change would not effect much but for students who don't study this idea might not be good, and might fill bad because they love sport's but can't play them for having to not pay attention or do your work at home.

Instead we should vote to see if we like this policy or not so we wont have to pass thru all this stuff of the policy changing. A fact about students here in SCHOOL_NAME would choose not to accept this new school policy because the old policy is u can't have more than three (F) and i would say the old policy is better than the new one our principal want to change it to. So if i pick my own decision it would be no changing policy and its good as it is and the policy they should really change is having to no wear uniform to school because its such a distraction to me an much others.

sincerely, STUDENT_NAME",2.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
77BD30EC277D,"Dear Principle,

My name is STUDENT_NAME. I think in order to help people in community service we should take the time to help people that are in need of help. This would be a great thing to do because it would be helping people. Helping people is a awesome way in showing how much people care about other people.

For an example; if we were to be require to take community service at school, some students would be need of help in math, language arts, science, social studies or anything that a student would need help in and would be able to receive help. This would make our learning increase and more student would be going to college. Parents, teachers, and even students want the best for themselves and with a help that each student could get it would make students comprehend and understand what the concept or subject they are working with. It will also make teaching easier.

Having community service will make students want to be focused in doing good things such as helping students or people and doing things that won't lead them to bad things. Community service will also help the community in having good and safe home and nice people around them. That's why i believe the principle should require community service to each student.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
F54386A8122B,"Today i will be discuss if it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? most may disagree with this statement, but i will hopefully grab your attention and hope you could agree with me.

I think it is a good for students to decide on there career this early because number one in today's society everything is depended on technology. What are students into nowadays there phones, video game, IPads , computers, etc. So pretty high advanced technology is everywhere, My point that i'm trying to make here is that the majority of students get either there phones or computers at a young age. So in my opinion i think that there future is set way before high school. But again my point here is that yes i do agree that careers should be set when they enter high school.

With entering high school students are introduced to a lot of programs at the start of there new journey to life. theres programs in high school that take students to colleges and take them on tours or they either tell the what to major on in that specific college, With planning early for your future you save time for stressing out last minute. I feel like this shouldn't just be small societies making students plan really early this should be the whole nation because as students we are the future of the united states so why not start 4 or 5 years ahead. Although some people may say that this is a huge distraction only because students would want to just focus on the future instead of focusing on whats happening right now.

So the main argument is that I 100% agree with students choosing there careers at a young age. My main reason is that the early the better with chances of programs and guidelines to help you on your way to a better education theres no way that you can stress for a career. in addition to my statement I also think that schools should have a bunch of programs helping students out with there future that way they won't stress there last year of high school, and they won't have to apply to colleges not knowing what to do.              ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
0B6316123881,"Duke Ellington said, "" A problem is a chance for you to do your best."" Do you think a problem is a good way to learn form your mistake? Learning from your mistake is a great way to know, what you did wrong, and how you can fix the problem.

What does he mean by "" A problem is a chance for you to do your best.""? A problem is a mistake you did, and doing your best is improving form your mistakes. Some people learn from their mistake, and others don't. People who do learn from their mistake can help others and their self.

I do agree that problems is a chance for all of us to do are best. Their some people who don't really care if it happens again. We should all care about our mistakes because if we didn't care our mistakes would happen again , and if that mistake was bad, then you should care.

I made lots of mistake like failing a grade because i didn't care about school , but then i change and stared to be more motivated and now that helps me work hard to get my dream job. One of my other mistake is my anger. I would always get angry but I always try to clam down because I would always take it out on people, but it won't hurt to try to learn form your mistakes.

Everyone can learn from their mistakes and it won't hurt to try. The benefits is knowing what to do when the mistakes happens again. Like what Duke Ellington once said, ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best.""",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
AE262E9DC747,"It's true that some schools allow student to their cell phones for educational purposes. But some use it to look for answers to cheat on a test or text some of their friends for answers. Some student who use their phones always get sidetrack for dumb reassons. Some kid will the others students attention to what the kid is doing. Why some the teachers let it happen well they sometimes don't know that is happening.

Students who take out their phones right in the open wil get caught easy. Other students try to hide them so no other tescher can't see them. Some other kids will even sneak glance at bag or pockects or enven in their bagpack. Teachers will even get the student with their phones out red handed. Even with their phones out students barely pay attention in class or at were there going.

Some parents will even get some complains form the school that their kids had their phones out. The parents will have to go the school to pick up there childs phone. Some students will try to steal their hone back on their own so their parents don't find out at what happen at school. The parents will tell their kids that not to do it agianbut we all know waht will happen.",3.0,2.5,3.0,4.0,2.5,2.5
BF652DD7B469,"There are a lot of poeple these days that having a bad attiude during a difficult time. Here are some ways to try to have a good attiude during these times.

Getting a bad grade on a test or quiz. Their are kids in middle and high school who study and at times get bad grades. These kids have trouble knowing that they failed their test or quiz. One way to provent this from happen is by having a good mindset. They can deepdown be mad, but if they put tell themselfs that ""i'll try harder next time"" they could do better on the retake or on the next quiz or test. Even when some kids that study a lot and fail some of they overreact during it.

Overreacting is another promble kids have. Some kids overreact by saying ""if i fail this i wont get a job"". Other times kids thing negativly about themselfs and they bring themselfs down. They could be telling theemselfs "" i'm going to fail"" or anything else instand of that they sould try telling them say ""i'm going to try to do my best. They dont know intill they try to do their best.

Having a good mindset can help. Havin a good mindset meaning to think positivly and to know that not having passed their test or anyting in life. That everyone had to start from one place and build on. Other times kids should learn from their mistakes. They might have or might have not fail and they shouldn't put it on themselfs because they could fail if not.

These are ways to provent kids from having a bad attitude to having a good attitude during their difficult time. They should try to be more calm and the should try to not overreact at much. They should also try to have a good mindset during it.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D3612C6F0653,"Generic_Name

March 20, 2019

Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Some people don't like to be always doing something; however, do we accomplish more if we are always doing something. We can accomplish more if we are always doing something because we don't get bored, we can have a good and healthy life and we can achieve what we propose.

Firts, we don't get bored. For example, if we are in our home and we are doing something like cleaning the house, or cooking we don't get bored easily because we know how to spend our time. Another example, when we are doing nothing during the day, the day feel so long, but if we are doing something during the day, the day feel faster. Also, when we do something different each day we don't get bored because we don't repeat the same routine each day. In sum, focus on do always something is good to not stay bored.

Next, we can have a good and healthy life. I think, if we are feeling sad, or we are having negative thoughts we can start to do always something to distract our minds and feel much better. Addionally, when we are always doing something like activities we can have a healthy life because we can spend our time doing excersises in home or going to they gym. Also, if we don't do any activities and we just spend our time watching movies or staying in bed, we can get sick because our bodys are not in movement, but if we are always doing something we don't get sick because we are having our body in movement and doing good activities. To conclude, It is important to do always something to have a good and healthy life.

Finally, we can achieve what we propose. For example, if we are in high shool and we want to graduate, we have to do always something like go to school everyday, do our homeworks and pay attention to have the opportunity to graduate. Also, when we wat to get a job we need to do always something and go to find a new job to have our own money and be responsible. Also, if we are always doing something we are gona fight for what we want and we are gonna be better persons. To summarize, we have to focus and do always something and achieve our goals.

In conclusion, we can accomplish more if we are always doing something because we don't get bored, we can have a good and healthy life and we can achieve what we propose. For example, We can can do activities everyday to not get bored, we can have our bodys in movement to have a healthy life and we can have good opportunities and fight for what we want. For these reasons and many more its important to do always something and we can accomplish more.",4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
B31D05A5A9CB,"Has anyone ever shared wisdom with you? well my grandpa did before he passed away, three years ago my grandpa died because of cancer he struggled and was fighting through but still never gave up. My grandpa once said to me "" giving up is just for lazy people that don't care about life, so fight through until your successful"". My grandpa was a very wis man, he loved sharing wisdom with anyone that was having a bad day. Well how can you change someones day by just telling a wis thing, has anyone told you anything that change your life and why you should never give up.

You can change someones day by just saying good luck. Last year I was walking to school, I was very scared and worried because I had a unit test. Then this lady came and started talking with me, she asked me questions and suddently said good luck that made me so releived and I got this feeling that I was going to do good on the test. You can change someones day without you knowing that you were acually wis and helped change their day. When someone gives you a chance to tell you wis things always accept and just listen because one day you may give it to someone else in the future and they will pass it on to other people.

Has anyone gave you widom? My grandpa did once, it was the best thing I ever heard and I still remeber the day he told me, it was the day before he died I have a feeling he knew that he was going to die the day after. My grandpa was a very caring and nice man he loved everyone. Everyday I remeber going to the hospital any wonder why did he have to die and leave me. Wis people are the ones that can change the world, make an impact on someones life and are the believers. Sharing wisdom is not bad it is a very important thing to other people because my grandpa said ""giving up is just for lazy people that don't care about life, so fight through until your successful"" from that day I always try my hardest so if he is watching me he knows that he impacted me in so many ways. I have shared wisdom with my friends my favorite one was, believing in yourself is the key of life, that means believing in yourself is what is going to get you through life, tough times, and challenges.

You should never give up because if you do you will regret everything in the future. Giving up is not going to make you successful in anyway in life. Giving up is when you never got to hear a word about believing in yourself or you have never accepted a wis word from anyone. People can just say anything to bring you down but fighting through is the oppisite of giving up. My parents always told me to never give up because giving up means you want to shut anything in your brain and not do anything about it. Wisdom can change a way of how your feeling and the ways you can change the world anyday or anytime. If you are going to give up, there are a lot of people that are going to try helping in life so take the chances they give and believe in yourself.

Wis people can change the world. Giving out wisdom to anyone is the best feeling and you should never stop giving it out even if its the only wis things you know. Wisdom is the most important thing to everyone. Wis people can change your day around in many ways. Wis people can impact your life. ",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
ECA6E86705B6,"Do you think positive attitude is the key to success in life?

Some job require you to have a positive attitude.

in this prompt i would argue that positive attitude is the key to success in life.

positive attitude is the key to become success in life because it has been said that in order for you to have job you need to be to have a positive attitude because that's what called the costumer's attention. It has been said that if you are a positive person you can became 10 times more successful then a person that is not because you are more likely to have a better job, have more friend and be more healthful . a lot of people would like to be around you for the reason that you are positive person and you always would bring them positive energy and also when you have a possitive attitude you are always thinking good things are going to happend in your life you are so patient you do not rush for think in life to be the way you want them to be also you leat things happend in the appropriate time because better things become in life if you wait for them in the appropriate time. For example a positive person has positive havin the characteristic roots real and positive, having positive attitude helps become intelligent in the way that you surmountable and you always work hard for the thing's you want in life for the better person you want to be. life always always have up and down and but no matter all the things that become to life all the proof that become to your life it can be good or make remember to always think positive because things happend for a reason. positive attitude would always be the key to become success in life. When a person always think positive in life they would always have a better life style because better thinks and better opportunity happend to those person that always have a positive attutude they always take things with patienta and think with a positive attitude.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
97EF67C73A5E,"Students failure the game every time when we have a game with another team, because for some reasons they do not beat the game. Sometimes student do not sleep as well, or they do not have much energy to play, because they do not eat before start the game. Everybody needs to know before they have a game we need to eat healthy, and drink enough water. Sometimes famous death for that kind of reason, so we need to learn about the experience. Life is very important for everybody, so we need to look what's the first thing we can do before they think and act too.

Family is more important than the game, so they do not have time to practice. Sometimes family want to explore places for example; New York, Florida, and Boston that state has beautiful place to swim play, and we can do everything. That's why student do not have time to practice the game. Game is an important thing they can learn too much, and maybe in the future they can get a award like a professional or famous on games.

Some students do not have time to practice, because they need to work to pay the bills for example; pay the insurance for the car, pay the rent where they live, and also pay the bill for the cellphone. That's is the reason we do not have time to practice. That's why we failure the game, because we work at night and then we are going to school all day. When it is time to practice the game we do not have energy to play, so that is the cause we lost the game every time. We needed to work a part-time on that way we got more time to practice the game, so the next time we can win the game. Sometimes the family do not help them, because they said we need to learn how they make a money to obtain the food for each person.

Eating healthy is good for everyone, so we need to eat every day. Also we can eat fruit every time, because that has to much protein. That's is the first thing we can do before beat the team, because that make they strong. they need to go the gym too, because that help you to get a healthy body. Sometimes the first thing we can do is eating, and then go to sleep this is not a good choice for them.

Please help all the students who is trying to work and continuing to go to school, because they are the future on the world. We need to help them because sometimes we have a dream, but no body try to help that's why students can't realized they dreams. If they can continuing to study in the future they can earn to much money, because in the past it was hard for them, but now is more easily then the first time when they start                             ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
FBE180CF324E,"To begin, what are your thoughts on first impressions through peoples point of view? When two people interact with one another the impression is not always dependable because People are probably not themselves, People opinion change, People never have the same intellectual connection. For example Generic_Name went to the movies with his girlfriend Generic_Name, his mom Generic_Name, and his sister Generic_Name. Generic_Name tells Generic_Name to invite her boyfriend Generic_Name. Generic_Name interaction with Generic_Name was unpleasant, based on what Generic_Name saw their was a different perspective from one an other. Days later at night the family reunites and the perspective change from what Generic_Name thought at first and what she thinks now.

Secondly, periodically all around the world people are not themselves when we first interact with them. Their is always a fifty- fifty chance that people, will get to meet their real personality. Why? First because they are starting to get to know new people. Second they have no idea what to expect from people. Third, some people do above and beyond to impress. Now in days many people try to make a good impression to belong to a certain group. Sometimes they are so use to doing it that they dont even recognize that is not their true self. Society has a huge impact on how people have to impress one another that it make others be afraid to show who we truly are.

However, peoples opinion change from time to time. Visualize that we are going to the store just to buy one item. We end up buying more then one item what does that mean ? It means that are mind changes to what we want it to change to. We might set up a scenario in are minds to have very high expectations to those surrounding us ,when we are self don't have that confidence. For example Generic_Name was mad at Generic_Name for not going to the bank with her. So Generic_Namea said that they would no longer be friends. The next day she text her and said what time am I picking you up. Their was a change of opinion from night to morning.

Lastly, people never have the same intellectual connection. When you first meet someone and we are aware we want to make a connection ,we try to have some conversation to talk about. For example when people have a right there connection is because they are interested and the same things as one another. When two people dont have the same to things to talk about other might think this person is not interesting enough. People would make comments like no , your not qualify to join this group, or anything that involves having to impress another person.

In conclusion, first impression arent usually trustworthy because People are not themselves, People opinion change, and People never have the same Intellectual connection. Peoples thoughts will change eventually no mater if they had a good impression at first. First impressions never counts because we never know who might be fooling us for a job , friendship, or to be a partner. Society now in days have to look out more to make sure everythig is in order. Thats why we have people who do research and look back to records, thats why jobs and people have a process of doing things.                                      ",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
B7F56382EF7D,"people should make their own decisions about life's important matters. First, it could be profitable for them. Second, An expert could make unhealthy decisions among people's life. Third, people would make the best decisions through their life. people should make their own decisions because it could be profitable for them, it will be healthier than a decision of an expert, and people would never make an unhealthy or a negative decision about their life.

At first, people should take their own decisions because it could be profitable for them. If people take their own decisions than they can save a lot of money that an expert asks for. Also, people can save their time that an expert takes to make a decision for them. Therefore, people's own decisions could be much more healthier among their selves and their families. A healthy decision could also be profitable in the future. As an example, a good financing decision could make someone's life better and keep him away from being bankrupt.

Second, people should make their own decisions because an expert could make an unhealthy decision among their life's important matters.

For example, a bad financing decision of an expert could result in a bankruptcy of someone else and that could destroy a whole family. Also, an expert would never know what a person need and what is the best decision for them. As another example, if a person choose his career by the advises of authorities or experts he may not enjoy the job that the get in the future and that could result in depression. Also, an expert or an authority may not care enough about some one else's life.

Third, people should make their own decisions because every individual knows what is the best decision for him. People will always make the healthiest decision among their life for a comfortable future. Also, every individual knows their own reasons that an expert does not knows those reasons for a healthy and a save decision. An expert would never know what a person needs and what is the problems of a person in order to make a decision for him. Therefore, people should make their own decision in important matters of life.

In conclusion, it could be said that people should make their own decisions because every individual knows their own good, a person will always go for the healthiest decision, and it is also profitable for their present and future. At the end, people should always trust their selves for making their decisions.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
A0BC5780C987,"Going outside can provide fun and enjoyable things to do for example going to the park with friend or people that you enjoy being around with, playing a sport, riding a bike, riding a scooter, and lastly a way you can spend time outside if you don't want to be so active is just walking around the neighborhood either with yourself or with a friend.

Going to the park with friends or people you like surrounding yourself with is fun and enjoyable because you guys can make up a game or play a game and play in different teams and see which team wins first. Playing with some of the park equipment is another way to have fun for example the swings to see who can go the farthest upwards, the slide maybe you guys can time yourself to see who goes down the slide the fastest, or the monkey bars to see who can get across the set of bars quicker or who can hold themselves on the bars the longest. A little of a made up game my sister and I played when we were younger was obstacle course so what I would do is tell my sister that the floor was an ocean filled with hungry sharks and that would make the game more intense because at the time we were very scared of sharks and so if one of us fell of the monkey bars or rope the other would have to start chasing the person who fell until the person who fell gets to their ""safe spot"" which the safe spot would have to be far.

Another thing you can do outside is play a sport, ride a bike or ride a scooter. Playing volleyball, soccer and basketball are my favorite sports not only because it's fun but it's very competitive and that always gives me so much energy and having energy just makes the game better because it makes both the competitors competitive since the boost of energy makes them tensed and careful to make sure they don't mess up so they watch the competitor like a hawk. If playing a sport is boring and not interesting to someone, riding a bike or a scooter is an option. Riding them is exciting and fun. Riding a bike or a scooter around a park is relaxing if your just calmly passing through but if your racing with someone or yourself then it's fun so both ways is enjoyable to a person. If I go out to bike or scooter I'm with either a friend or a family member because we like to bike or scooter next to each other and just talk or race to see who's faster and better at doing biking or riding a scooter.

If going to the park or playing a sport doesn't interest you and you just rather do something calming and relaxing then going on a walk, run or laying outside with a blanket on the ground and watching the clouds go by is an option for you. If you're with someone and you guys want to run then you guys can calmly jog next to each other or have a small conversation while running or run and just be next to each other for support and comfort. If you're walking just with yourself then you can breathe, think, or just look at your surrounding look at the trees, houses if they're any near by, or the flowers. Laying out a blanket on the ground and staring at the sky is enjoyable to some people because watching the sky and how the clouds move is angelic and peaceful to them, so if you're wanting to do something that includes being outside and you don't want to do anything then walking, running. and sky watching is for you. Laying out a blanket and watching the clouds go by is probably one of my favorite things to do just because it's very relaxing to me, distracts my busy mind, and I find clouds beautiful so watching something that gives me peace to me makes me happy mentally and physically.

Going to the park, playing a sport, going on a walk, or a run is some of the things you can do outside and enjoy and have fun. Being outside is important because Vitamin D if it's low then a way you can raise it up is going outside because the sun is apart of vitamin D so not only going out is good for you physically but it can also be good for you mentally. Fresh air we're use to being home all day and going out to get some fresh air willl cleanse you.",3.0,3.5,4.5,3.0,4.0,3.5
822F6C3B3C03,"I agree with Thomas Jefferson quote,""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" because yes we may always be doing something but we never really put in mind what we really are going to do.

One way to be able to accomplish things is if you have a goal set. If you set a goal that means you are going to want to achieve it. Prove others that you can do it and that nothing can stop you from doing it. Always give it your best, never think negative because if you think negative then you're never going to accomplish anything in life. Prove to yourself that you can also try new things and that can help you a lot.

Always be confident in yourself no matter what. Always put in mind that you can do whatever you want to do. For example, if you have to mow the lawn but you're in your bedroom laying down looking out the window, the lawn isn't going to mow itself because it needs someone to move it around. Trying new things doesnt hurt at least trying for quite some time and it also benefits you because you're doing something for your own good.

Never use laziness as an excuse to not do anything. If you always say i'm tired then you're never going to do anything, you're just giving up on yourself.

For example, if you hate being home all day doing nothing, then go out go find what you can do because if you try new things you'll end up liking it. If you're an active person you'll accomplish way more than expected because you're going to be moving around and getting out you're comfort zone. Helping others also can be a way in accomplishing more than just sitting there because you're talking to someone or showing someone how to do something. Helping the community in many different ways can also be a good thing but not just for you but the community, because you're going out and helping. Doing and trying new things motivates you to keep doing more.

I strongly do believe that if you're doing something that you put your mind to, then you're always going to accomplish more than expected. If you sit down and say you're going to do something you'll never do it because you're just sitting down. Your words are way different than your actions. To be able to do something you have to get up from the couch and do it without having to think so hard about it.         ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
77D210B9EC7E,"Students will benefit from being able to do the classes from home because maybe they have reason to do there or having some problems because some people doesn't like the community or having to many people around them. If I have a choice to choose one of them i think i will choice to go to school to know more people.

These are my three reasons on how students can do the online classes from their home.

The first reason is why students want to do the online classes from their home, because maybe they don't like the people from outside probably they think that all people are bad, they are not nice, mean, in respectful. Probably their parents doesn't want because they scared of how people are going to treat them or they are going to give them a bad influence like going in the wrong life. Or they don't want because her son/daughter are bad having some medical problems they think that the people are going to laugh at them.

The second reason is maybe other students don't like to a normal day of school they probably like to stay at home and taking the online classes from there, because they feel that people are not gonna like them or judging them sometime students don't want to go because maybe they have a medical problems because they feel embarresed or something bad happened when they were at school.

Finally if I choose one of them like staying at home or going to school i will choice to go to school because I will love to help people to explain them that why is important to go to school and giving a advice to them that they don't need to be embarresed if they have problems they just need yo let it go some people don't think if he or she are hurting the person who is bullying them.

In conclusion is that if people choose the online classes and doing at their home they are free to choose because they equal are going to study but at their home they have reason to do there. But i will say that people don't need to care what other people is saying to them.",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
6BC83A3F4934,"In the this world everyone have twenty-four hours for one day. What are you doing for a day? Do you accomplish something? Everyday you want do somthing, maybe you are inactive. sometime you do this thing, and you want to other thing on the same time.

I am a student sometime I have had homework to do. Determine never to idle? For example; After school, I need thoughtout I have project to do, I want to relax do nothing, and I want to eat dinner. Is it struggle in the my mind. Which I want to do first? If I finish my project, after the time, I can to want I want to do ,is purpose for a day.

My position is if I always focus one thing, I will cacccompish more. If I am idle, it is waste my time, and I can not to my purpose. You do anything have had process. Never have idle for life? I think maybe, but I feel is impossible, because you can be idle, this is your life, you can decide idle or completely do something.

I believe doing something you like, you are quick accomplish. If I have some problem thing, on the idle time, I can think about find some solution. Think about how I can to my purpose. When you be to purpose, I will wonderful done much to do. Life is your what is want to do, do more? or idle for time?       ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
34C829F3DC6A,"Going to parks can be exiting for people because they get to have fun by playing tag, hide and seek, or maybe look at insects. I like going to parks because i get to ride my BMX bike around with my friends. some adults go to parks to exercise, others like kids get to play and have fun by swinging or playing on the slides.

Some kids go outside in front of their house and play other games like hopscotch, jump rope, or like other people they can do other activities outside and ride bikes around or go to a skate park. there are endless amounts of activities for people to do outside, playing on the swings at the park can be fun because when i go there i like to see who can go the highest and sometimes i just do it for fun when im bored

People that like to find and inspect bugs can go at the park, the park has lots of bugs including butterflies, ladybugs, caterpillar, and fireflies. some people find bugs interesting for some reason. theres also a park called a dog park. but you would normally see kids having fun, Other people at the park like to play tag, tag is a very fun game and i think that kids would have fun playing it, hide and seek is also an option. theres no point of going to the park if you can't have any fun. My favorite thing to do at the park is play on the swings, when i get bored i start to ride my BMX bike around my neighborhood. Spending time outdoors is good for you. The park has a lot of things you can explore there,but playing is my favorite.

There can also be some animals at the park like birds and ducks, there is also a place called a dog park where dogs go to play and have fun, dogs need fun too! at the dog park you can teach your dog tricks there or just let him/her have fun, maybe even let them meet new dogs! but in my opinion a normal playground is better. Taking your dog for a walk is an activity you can do outside but you can do anything outside or in a park as long as you have FUN.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
77A31D0A07A8,"Author Ralph waldo Emerson wrote,""unless you try to do something beyound what you have already mastered , you will never grow "". Based on mine on experiences, I disagree with Emerson's statement. Because people grow up every single day, people learn new things from things they mastered in,and people grow no matter what they in .

Firstly,people learn new things everyday. when it comes to studies and growing, alot of people try their best to master in what they are trying to do. Most people spend more time to mastered in what they want to do but the more you study the more you grow knowing all kinds of things. For example,when I first move to America, it was hard for to master or get used to the culture ,food ,speaking but the more I learn more about the country the more i grow in it. now if I tell you can speak english good you will not believe it. you do need to move beyound what have mastered in to grow .Because you can mastered in math but you don't know the whole thing about stuff. so I think the more person do what they are mastered in the more they grow. Specially, people like my who have been teaching for this whole life is even grow as new generation comes in. In fact ,even a busness can only grow if the CEO of the company have mastered on that position and ready to learn more things about it. Besides this ,people grow every single day.

However, Some people grow single day. because the more you study for the things you have mastered the more you grow. For example ,it like teaching a kids how to eat. it does matter how mastered you have be paient with kids,

teach them everyday and more the you the kids the more grow to understand not only how to eat but so many thing they saw from you. we may mastered in one thing but it have so many things connected to it .that can help throght life without changing your the career ,job or whatever it may be. I like how some student take cosmetology, they take this for two year to have a certificate but that does mean the student all have mastered in it so that is it. you learn about it to take you a different levels. it laso teach them to skill not only on make up and hair but to be paient with costumers and their own friend too. moreover, people can grow throght new education about their woke.

Sometimes, people grow through new ability about their work or what have mastered in. people normally change or grow when there is to learn about what they mastered in. I said this because many learn more grow when there is a new change in syetem of education, economics ,bussines. For example ,doctor grow more when they have to learn more about something have ever seen all done but in same field work. like how you get to study more when you take IB course but not just they bring new things to help do you work on time and stuff.

In summary,I think that the qoute Emerson wrote was not right because how can someone mastered some that can not help them grow .people thing will help them grow in future .I think people who are hopping jobs to jobs or whatever they are doing is bad , because doen't help you to grow .because you get enouch time them you swtiches.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
87669696162F,"do you agree or disagree with the statement?

in my personal opinion i do agree that first impressions are almost impossible to change. its impossible to change because thats the very first time you meet someone new in your life. first impressions are very important. there is no way you can change first impressions its not like we can go back in time to switch our answer. making a bad first impression can go very wrong but thats that its done and you cant go back. for example like making a first impression at a job interview like obviously making a good impression is very important if you want a job.

i can also understand why some may say ""almost impossible"" because technechly you kinda can. for example if both of you say ""can we start over"" or something like that. your always going to have that impression from the first time you guys ever meet. so really it goes both ways how someone may take it. i personal dont agree with that because it dosent sound right or feel right. some may move on and ectually forget. while others may not and mentally remmber.

inconclusion it is all based on the reader and how they take it. like i have mention i personal dont think you can change your first impression. we cant go in time and change the past. it donesnt sound reasonablie theres no real reason. some may agree with what i say some may not. then again i can kinda see how someone may want or how to change there first impression. ",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
55174E1DFC5B,"One thing I would like to accomplish in the future is to be a marine biologist and visit the ocean.

There is so much about the ocean that we don't know about. About 5% of the ocean is discovered and our earth is made of 75% water and 25% land.

Marine biology is a job were you work with animals. there is so much you could do as a marine biologist. for example, you could swim with animals and collect data, you would work in a lab to find cures with animals, you could even not directly with animals but research about them.

The ocean is an amazing place and is full of magnificent creatures. i would love to swim with sea life and help them in any way i can. if i see an animals caught in a net. I would try and save it. If there were animals in a bad situation such as injured, harmed, caught. I would help it. so many animals are killed every year. either for clothes, food, wild fire, pollution, loss of habitat, etc. over 700,000 thousand animals are killed every year. that includes sea life and land life. So many animals that are endangered like the black rhino. the great white shark, etc just from poaching. sharks are hunted for their fins and then just tossed back into the ocean to die. same goes for the black rhino. they are hunted for there horns and then just left to die. i want to accomplish saving some animals when i grow up.

In the ocean coral reefs are dyeing because of people and habitat distraction. some people think that coral reefs are just rocks growing out of other rocks but they are actually animals and they are living and breathing just like us. maybe they dont have noses like us they are animals and they should be treated like animals. in ten years we would have lost 100% of our coral reefs. That doesnt mean that all the coral reefs are gone it means that there wouldnt be enough coral reefs are a good habitat. Animals need coral reefs to live in and hide from predators like bigger fish.

So many animals died from plastic just drifting in the ocean. there are more than 1 million plastic being dumped into the ocean each year. Sea life dies from plastic by getting stuck in it or eating since its not biodegradable. In the future i want to help sea life with all the plastic and at least help out with it. a lot of animals even get stuff and grow up with plastic stuck on them or in them. there is this turtle when it got caught in a tip tie. the tip tie was stuck around its shell and it couldnt get out so it just grew around it and deformed the shell. when helpers saw the turtle they took the zip tie off of the turtle and the the turtle was free but its shell was still deformed from the zip tie. when people are recycling they should at least up the bottle holders so if it does get in the sea and a animal finds it. it is less likely to get stuck in it. turtles eat jellyfish so when there is a plastic bag floating in the ocean. the turtle thinks its a jellyfish and eats it. after some time the turtle might die because it cant digest the plastic.

i want to accomplish visiting the ocean and go diving, snorkeling, touch wild life and help out with injured animals. ",3.5,3.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
38452CB371C9,"Generic_Name

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3rd period

11/08/2018

Former British prime minister Winston Churchill once said ''success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. you learn from your mistakes every time you fail in your live. you keep trying hard till you achieve what you want and studied hard for in life. failure leads to success and it is important for everyone to fail in life, failure plays an important role in our daily lives. failing does not always mean it is the end of the world you have chances in life to keep trying hard . everyone has always an experience of failure in life nobody every succeeded without failing in their lives.

First when you fail sometimes you get disappointed and say am never going to succeed in life but when you see the mistake you did the first time you try hard until you pass it. for example last year i failed my world history exam i was so disappointed that i did not want to retake again but our teacher gave me the paper back to see what i did wrong i saw that i did not read the question.

from that day on i began reading my questions and i got the highest grade in class. i learned i should always read my questions before answering because if i do not read i will fail again and i did not want to retake the test again, when i read the question and i finally began to understand the question. i learned that i should always read my questions even if am in a hurry to go and it does not matter the situation reading a question is important. i learned that guessing is not good sometimes it results in failing, i should study the night before a test.

Second a person should always learn how to study hard on everything you are given even if it is hard just try your best. last year when i gave my mum my world history final exam results she told me that i should try hard and she knows i can pass the test i told her that i will but am scared to take it again. my mum made sure that i studies every day and one day when i stayed after school for extra help. i also achieved passing this world history by trying my best to understand what the question is asking . paying attention in class also made me pass not only the final exam but also the class.

when i passed this exam i was so excited because i studied hard to get at least a eighty nine on the final exam and i was also passing the class and i was understanding my work i was also on top of my assignments.

Third failing something you took for the first time is not a bad thing it tell you that you need to keep working hard. for example one day i came back home crying and my mum asked what was wrong and i told her am still failing the world history exam. she told me that failing does not make me dumb it simply tells me that i need to correct my mistakes. she also told me that as a kid she also was failing her classes but she tried hard and hard and she now is very successful at wok. i also asked her how can i be successful? she told me that keep trying your best even if it is not your best accomplishment. she also told me that she would always be proud of me because she sees me working hard and trying to do my best. when i finally studied a lot and re-took the same test and passed it i was very proud of myself and said failure always leads to success.

however, some people may say that failure does not play a big role in your life because there are other ways to suceed. you will always suceed anything in life withour failing, you do not need to work hard for what you want and you can always achieve everything as long as you do it. but they are wrong because failure is always the number one thing that leads people to sucess. failing leads you to try hard in life you learn from your mistakes. when you fail it does not mean it is the end of the world. you keep trying hard till you achieve what you want and studied hard for in life. failure leads to success and it is important for everyone to fail in life, failure plays an important role in our daily lives.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
7BBB35F9D1BD,"If I had to take a side I think I would disagree. One reason is that you cant always have success ,there's times where somethings don't work out. Then there's failure and thats how you have success in anything from learning from your failure But there is time where when you fail and your enthusiasm is gone because of that.

The one reason I agree is because there's time that you just cant have success. I have had that in my life in many situations. Once when I was playing soccer we had won all the games and then came to the day where we were playing for first place and we lost and that day all my enthusiasm was gone. I was so mad and just had no energy. I learned that there times that I wont win and times I will it's part of life but along the way I learn new things. Then there school there you do go from failure from failure to success because once you make a mistake and you learn from it and do better next time because your already know now but it does bring your enthusiasm down.

The next reason is that failure does does make you have success but also it make not encourage to keep going. From the first time you fail to the next will will learn something and later on when it happens again that's will you will get it. When you do fail and fail you lose enthusiasm but gain it back when you have success. You feel sad and mad and just not excited no more when you keep failing again and again. So when you fail and fail again you will away lose enthusiasm because you just can't get it.

So if I had to pick a side I would disagree because you cant just fail and fail and then have success and not lose enthusiasm. And I disagree from experience because in my life I fail and never still had enthusiasm after failing maybe some people do but I speak from my point of view.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
BA3B6D562BB1,"What is something you would like to accomplish in the future. I would want to go to collage. To get a good job like being a cop or being really good at a sport or being a famous chef and you can be a barber and have your own barber shop. For that u will have to go to Barber school and chef you have to go to cooking school and for being a police man or female. For being very good at any sport you have to go to collage and play there what sport do want to play.

But first you will have to go to collage for like 2 to 4 years to able to have a good job.

Reason 1 i would like to go to collage. For i can get a good job and get payed a good amount of money and i want to be a famous chef the makes food to superstars. I can cook for my self of friends and family go to collage for it have have a cooking race like whoever makes a better cake in like 5min. I can travel all different countries and have races and try different foods. You can get paid by cooking for other people.

Reason 2 you can be a famous sport player you can get very good at it. Or you can be a barber and go to barber school and have your own place and have your own job. By the way can a cop or anything you want you just need to train and be good at it. If your going to play sport you needed to play in high school for you can go strait to get a collage degree and then you can play in collage.

Reason 3 when your in collage you can still go to work and get good money and buy what ever you want. Also you can go to collage and the morning and the after noon you can go to work. Or you have a choice you can live in collage or live at you house. Anyways you can practices doing what you want to do. You just need to go to collage if you want a good job.

Conclusion You can go to collage to get good scholarships and degrees. And you can have a very good job doing what you want to do. I want to be a cooker or a barber or i want to be a soccer player. You can be anything just believe in your self and you will get your dream of being what ever you want.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
9CE077EDCC85,"The reason why you should agree with Duke Ellington quote . First this is a good quote for students who are always working hard and make a lot of mistakes because they get motivated from this quote. This quote can make someones day better .

First reason is there a lot of people in the world who has a lot of problems. so I think that this quote would light up there day and make them fell better. second reason is that people that dose not have any problems could save this quote in there brains and when they are facing a problem they could use it to help them through that time and to do better. lastly I think when Duke Ellington was going through trough times he used his own straghe to help him to do his best and not give up.

Next reason why you should agree with Duke Ellington is that when people have a lot of problems most of them just give up for example most people dose not have enough money to pay there bills some sell their house while others sell the cars and most people become homeless and live in the streets but if the hear this quote it might help them not to give up and do there best.

My final reason why everyone should agree with Duke Ellington quote is it's hard going through a problem because any thing can happen some people lose there jobs because of a problem.

In conclusion I think that everyone should agree with Duke Ellington's quote because it can help you not give up when you are going through a problem. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
78018FB48420,"Students should not be able to graduate early. If students stay in school the extra year they have more opportunities. The fourth year of high school gives them more time to learn. It also gives them more time to explore different careers they might want to do. Students might be stressed out too much. It is better to take your time then to rush your career.

Students who go the last year of high school have more time to learn more. They can take more classes than those who would graduate early. The classes will be easier because they will be learning at their grade level, not a grade level above. They also won't have as much homework and classwork to do at a time.

The students will have more career choices to choose from. If they have more time they will be able to have electives that can help them choose their career. For example there is a nursing class, carpentry class, electricity class, welding class, and many more that can help them get started. If they can't take electives then they won't have experiences that may help them.

Lots of work on a students can cause them to be stressed out. Some students already get stressed by the amount of work they get in regular classes. Imagine all the stress they get when they are taking more classes at a time. They can get stressed by all the homework and classwork they get from all their classes. They might also have a job they have to get to save money for their college supplies like textbooks. Which gives them less time to do their work and study.",3.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
840D73A3804A,"Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? I believe that if we do more, then we get more things done. I say that because if you just do what you're gonna say, rather than talking about it, you can get very far in life, and you will be successful. You know why? because you're a action taker, and not just a dreamer, who just expects stuff without the hard work. You also get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique, than most people.

My first reason is that if you just put that action into movement, then you're powerful already. No one can stop you, because your mindset is on a whole new other level. People can't ketch up to you, and people will be jealous of your success. You will have haters. Hate on you, but don't let that slow you down! keep doing, and achieving and great things will come down to your way. For example:There is a saying that If someone is hating on you, then you're doing something great, if they're not hating on you, then you're not doing anything really.

My second reason is that you're a type of person willing to do anything to achieve your goals. You will let nothing in your way. You are ready to grab life by it's neck, and just yank it, cause it's yours. You gotta take over your life now. Don't wish, and wait. Start now, and don't let stuff handed to you. You gotta work for it, and just love the process. Trust me you will not regret it, if you just start making good habits for yourself. For example: doing your homework, and stop procrastinating on the stuff you need to do, or want to do, doing tasks when you don't feel like it. You will be great, and you'll thank yourself in the future.

My third reason, and final reason is you get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique, than most people. Ah, yes nobody likes a person that's just ""normal"". I find that quite lame, and boring. They would like a person that is quite different, and not the same as everybody else you know. For example: You wouldn't want to meet the same people every time now would you? of course not. You would want to meet different people, and find new things, and also most importantly learn new stuff by different people. You would want people with different personalities, not the same ones, as that would be boring. You are more active, than just sitting down. You are taking your chances, and not blowing it. You are taking advantage of life, than just wasting it. Nobody wants to hang out, or deal with someone that is just negative all day, or a loser. They would want to hang with someone that is quite active, respectful, and successful.

My conclusion: Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? I believe that if we do more, then we get more things done. I say that because if you just do what you're going to say, rather than talking about it, you can get very far in life, and you will be successful. You know why? because you're a action taker, and not just a dreamer, who just expects stuff without the hard work. You also get more noticed, and people will like to be around you, because you're more active, and you're more unique than most people.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
A8BB150F53AB,"In my oppion, I think technologly is good for the world! Because you can comunicate with people that are far away. Even it's a great way to help you with school like homework, studying and learning also it makes teachers life easier. And I think people would get lost around the world if teachnologly wasn't made. Because GPS helps you to get to your destenation safely also it tells you where you at. Teachnologly is probably the best thing people will carry around them because all your messages, calls and emails comes threw your phone. When I got my first video game, I started playing it 24/7 because I use to play it with my friends during summer break. But one day I knew video games wasn't going to be a big thing anymore so I asked my parents if I could get a phone and they said "" yes I will buy it to you if you bring me good grades the next marking period"". When I got my first phone I started using it to text friends and being in soical media and I know that wasn't going to get me anywhere in life. But one day I thought to myself what if technologly can help you with everything like now adays? Because my computer helps me with homeworks and projects and I can turn it in on time.

Although, some people think technologly is bad because it keeps you out from playing sports, going out with your friends and communicating with people!

Some people don't buy their childrens a phone because they want them to work for it, but some parents aren't like that. People be going on soical media putting there own life at risk, that's why some parents don't let their own child have technologly. Also because people be using it all the time and they don't care whats happens around them. Like my parents didn't want me to have technologly when I was little because he wanted me to open to the world. But I was shy to talk to new people that I didn't even know, I started to be helpful and friendly to everyone because I knew some people didn't have the samething as me. Because some countries are really poor and they don't have money to eat and they can't help out their children with their eduaction.

In fact, I think technologly is always going to be helpful where ever you go, because if you go somewhere that people don't speak your language you'll have your phone on you and you can research there language and it will tell you. I really will not know if technologly was not made because it helps everyone in the world right now. It helps me pay my payments and learn online. So I think technologly is a good way to help you with things and to communicate with people that don't live with you.       ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
63C74FF7DB27,"Take learning distance on home is not good ideas . first reason is not the same to take on school. when we going schools we have more option to learning. sometime when we don't undertant something we can ask the teacher for helping or they can explain many times. But sometimes we have to take the classes on home. for example if you are sick or have a spcific reason that you can going schools is necesary take online because if we whant to learn is the matter we we have to take the classes. the important thing is that we have the energy to continues with your goals.

The Learnig distance on home some time be helping to be more possitive and focud because we can take the clases any hours we can. Also when we cut the clases on home we have more chance to listining. The other option to take the clases on home is that we can do other things that we whant.

Some schools give the chance to often the clasas on home that is great ideas. but sometimes is really important to going schools beacuse when we going schools we have more chance to take more clases and graduated with the other student. Also take clases for video conferencing or going school is little similar becuaser we can see the teacher that is explain the clases. That uniquet things is we can not ask the teacher for helping.

In conclusion. To be attend on schools is more important and helping more tham the distance learning or video conferencing. On my posisition attend on schools is more necesary because we have more opportunity to learm and continues to do the things that we whant.  ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
8A7081C962D7,"To conserve energy and resources, some bussines have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consist of ten hours. In my opinion, this idia would bring benefits for some students and disavantages too. For example the students who really like the school it would be a great idia, to be doig team-progets or just spend time with friends and teachers. In the other hand some students don't really like to be 8 hours in the school so I just realize that they would not agree with that idea.

A mayor porcent of the students wo don't like school, decide to quit or just apply to an elective shool. Like in my case olmost 1 year ago i decide to start going to an elective school, the reason is that I work a full tme job after school and it was difficult to arrive on time everyday to the basic school. I thing the idea of adding 2 hours more to the schedule of the basic school is not a good idia, because students who are in the high school and have a job as a part-time or even a full time would decide to apply to a basic school. I mean a basic school is better for the students who work at the same time they canmake their schedule smaller and have enough time to sleep, work, and to study. In conclusion, this is my point of view.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
EBE0730AFF0E,"Adopting the failure is the way to become master and complete our goals. Everyone have experimented failure in some point of their lives. As the British Prime

Minister Winston Churchill once said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss the enthusiasm"". But should we really continue pursuing success after fail many times, even knowing that, it might be really difficult?. Although some say that we should give up after fail multiply times. Actually, we should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed in something that we wanted more than one time because, being consistent is a way the learn and become successful. Also, failure gives us more experience and mastery before we complete our goal.

Those who believe that we should lose the enthusiasm after fail many times in what we want, have their reasons. They think that being pushing your self getting stress by starting something that you couldn't have done before, is a way to waste time because, you're not going to complete it anyways. They also believe that it's really hard to start over again knowing that if you try it one more time you might fail it all the same even though you don't achieve success.

One reason why we should not lose the enthusiasm after failure is that people learn from their mistakes. A way to learn is being consistent and do not give up, even if there are many difficulties that make us think that we should leave our goals and dreams. As example of this is my friend, Generic_Name, who had to take his math test multiply times. First, he took it at the first time without even study, as result of that he didn't pass it as well. Second, the teacher gave him a second opportunity to take it. This time he studied much better than the first time but he didn't pass it again, he felt stressful ""what's going on to me"" he said because, he knew that he needed to pass that test. Then, he asked to the teacher for a third chance to take it. But this time he studied really hard for many hours, he also knew what the test was going to be like because he had taken it before. As result he passed the test with a good score. What happened to Generic_Name is a perfect example why should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed something couple times. If Generic_Name hadn't been consistent by studying and taking it more than one time, he wouldn't have passed the text. Therefore we should never lose the enthusiasm after fail many times.

Other reason why we should keep the enthusiasm even if we have failed something is that, failure gives us more experience and confidence before we complete or reach our goals. As example of this is my self. The last year I had lost to do, such as school, work and other responsibilities that required me to drive. Then, my parents decided that it was time to let me drive. I was really excited thinking in the way that my daily was going to change. But it wasn't that easy because, firstly, I had to pass the driver test, next learn how drive and finally get a car. In that point I wasn's really sure if I wanted to continue with that. Then I decided con continue it and I went to take the test, I couldn't pass it at the first time. I felt sad about it, but after studying all the rules again I came back to take on this time I was able to pass it as well. But, I still needed to get a car, fortunately my parents brought me one. Now I have a car and my driver's license even though I was hard to make it. What happened to me is a perfect example of being consistent and don't give to get success. If I hadn't been consistent even that I had failed it, I wouldn't have gotten my driver license. Therefore we should never lose the enthusiasm after fail sometimes.

In conclusion, based in those reasons I support Churchill's statement, and I'm agree with the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Although some say that we should give up after fail multiply times. Actually we should not lose the enthusiasm after have failed something that we want because, it's a way to learn more and a way to build our confidence, and we also become successful by being consistent.         ",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
EFDAD69E103B,"I have being asked to explain the effects of a program involving pairing, older students , and younger students.

Some schools have a program that pairs older students and younger students. I think that a program like that will be helpful. The older students are available to assist the younger students.

This program can be helpful, to both the older and the younger students, because both the younger and older students, can learn new things from their opponent, or classmate. Also is fair that the older students assist, the younger students, so both of them can be sucessful.

Like maybe the younger students can teach the older students, some new skills the've learned in school, or somewhere else. Or maybe how they've learned to play baseball or softball.

The older students can teach the younger students, how to do algebra / solving equations or how to ride a bike.

Helping out younger students helping order students can be fun and can also turn out to be great. Or sometimes bad.

Like for example, in my school, they have a club that both younger and older students can be in. It is free and not obligatory. So me and some of my friends, joined that club. And also some othe r students. Some of the older students, helped us, if we needed help, and we also helped them if they needed help. Every time during that club we each bring our own snacks or the teacher gives us some snacks himself, and we get to work. That club at school was so helpful for me and my friends, because we can get our homework done in time, and some older students or adults assist us if we need help. Me and my friends also enjoyed that club because it was fun at certain time.

In conclusion, pairing older students , with younger students, can be very helpful to certain people in need.

Being kind an cooperating is the best thing to do while being in a club or working with younger and older students.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
3DAC64829E27,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attent classes from home?

on my opinion students would not like the idea of taking more time to study, because nowdays students are very busy, stressed, and tired of school, they would not like to have to hear more stuff that has to do with school . besides some people are more smart and they could take the class just to see how thats going to help, but sometimes people dont try the stuff and thats why, they never know if they are going to like it or not.

Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students from home by way of online video conferencing

I think, students are not going to have any benefit to attent classes from home. some of the studends have to work, do stuff at home, or stay in school on other activities. students sometimes, actually need some help with some classes but they might not like to be taking the classes at home, The studend taking the class at home could get distracted by so many things at his house. While some other studends that have better grades and like school they could take the class, but they also will have homework and things to do at home.

Students would not get any benefits by taking classes at home because, the online class could be also start teaching the same work that the teacher already teach you, or either the online class could be teaching different ways how to solve a problem that the student will get very stressed and after that its not going to be able to learn something from it and instead helping the student the online class is going to make it more difficult.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
FC0B49DA0438,"There are so many ways of influences people and i think the main one is to set an example by your own character. I agree with Philosopher, physicain, and humanitarian Albert Schweitzer saying that ""Is setting a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people."" For instance, most people look up to others to better them self by using thier action or behavior.

First and Foremost, you having a better behavior help others reflect on you to better their self. Mostly, student or collegues look up to pass student who had accomplished something good and make them determined so they can also achieve something by taking hard classes to pass. Due to the pass student behavior on thier education who set an impact on others telling them they can do it. Is kind of having them as their motivator. I look up to people behavior and tell myself i can be more than that person due to his behavior. Most of them, encourage me to be who i want to be and to achieve my goal.

Secondly, it leads them in the right path and it depends on thier action. Your action towards your behavior matters, It depends on how you act towards a good behavior. If your action are good towards a good behavior it leads to the right path. Emmulating someones behavior or action can help you be in the right path. Most of the times we look up to people who have or had been who we want to be and then pick thier footsteeps by learning from their good behavior. For example, looking at Lebron James, famous basketball player, looking at his games played can help you to be motivated and lead you to the right path of your goal. Looking up to a famous person and following his footsteps emmulating his behavior set a good example to others.

In Conclusion, setting a good behavior or example kind of influence people so they can be on the right path and kind of know to set up a good behavior for someone else to follow. I take the stand and agree with Phiosopher saying ''Is setting a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people.""",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
E76B3F5205CD,"Yes i am agrey life's is important and people who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to Follow his or her own ideas, the have experinse aboute life is good way to get a bettar life, and everyday there try To be a besst person for won life thare chaling his/her self that people working hart,stady hart they wnat a good life In the futchar.

Some people's take essy own life like relaxe there not try anyway there needit, they are not wary about own life They are not save meony thay are not wary if somting expansef just the want buy it.

So many people's follow a faumos perons life thare raed thare books or some of them make vidoes and people Wacting the know somting more aboute life, i like that people they be a good perosn, try to get a good life in the futchar.

Eevar life is impart to me or for others people any wnat a good life respacat anyone heple anyone for anyway the can helpe people, .

some people wnat a bat person, that persons life is nothiong, like thery kile person, or they are sell somting, Alot of yonge kids not going to the school they are ideas school not important that kids going to the worge way there wnat moeny just moeny, that people not wary for tommaro what happen on life one day they go to the jale for wohel life. they know we are going so wrong at this part they can't noting in the world so many ting living animal, person anythig try a good person .

Smart people follow a faumos person life they want batter life for whole life,and that people red the books and They know somting more aboute life, some of tame resching aboute life before thare start somting taking with that Perons his expersns for that job or anything alos, they are dowing a hart work to make a more many and save many For the futchar, with hart workig the grow up his or her stady in the futchar geting what they wnat do be, and wnat Take ideas for life what thare tining what happen if a i am lost what happen if i am lost all my mony, thare thiking Everthig which is they want to lost his or her life, and they are chaling his or her self for the batter life.

Every life is important to me , everyone wnat do somtiong or helpe some one or be a good thing for other people in the world some of people jobs is Dctor and helpe sick people or if some one very sick helpe them to gave back his or her life anyone can helpe some needs helpe and gave backe his or her life, we are coming on this word for one times do somting in the futchar prowd of we are self rescpakt anyone and no one wants one day do it somting get your self sad, some of cuntury is war alot of people dia and in the war, but the others cunturys is not war, and meybey for one day four or morethin four kids coming a life, life for some one is Nice but others is not is very short very short.      ",1.0,1.5,1.5,2.0,1.5,1.0
EFACA593A52B,"Can you imagine a world where every person is optimistic and responsible in their job. According to ""

The Washington Post,

"" 65% of the workers are hard-working and loves their job. ""Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. For example, they look for someone who is responsible and hard-working, and often they look for a person who has experience."" In some countries, start working at age of 15 years old is mandatory, because it helps to young people to obtain new views about different kind of jobs. Everyone has the capacity to be a responsible in their labor, but some people are hard-working because they want to accomplish their goals, and have an excellent record and experience from the last job is so important.

The first reason why is so important to be a hard-working is because you can accomplish your goals. For example, my friend Generic_Name, she started worked when she was 16 years old, she studied and worked at the same time. Generic_Name worked very hard to accomplished her goals. Generic_Name's goals was: be a teacher, buy a house, a car and save money for the College. It was not easy for her, but she was optimistic. She wake up every morning at 6:00 o'clock to go school, and she always fought for have a better future and accomplished her goals. Generic_Name over time get a lot of experience and she inspired others people to do better their jobs. She won a prize for been doing well her job and supported others to inspire to do an extraordinary job. Working hard is the best way to demonstrate you can work in any place and loves your job.

The second reason is when you are working is important to leave an excellent record, because it help to develop a good characteristics and experience. In some jobs, they call to ask for details about if the person have an excellent record and experience. Furthermore, my uncle Generic_Name, he just moved from New York to California, and he was looking for a new job. Generic_Name worked as an engineer in

Village's Company

. He was doing well his job in New York, but he needed moved. He went to apply in this new place, and the employers called to Village's Company asking for details about how he was doing his job when he was working for them, and then Village's Company says ""Generic_Name was one our best worker we had, he was responsible and he have the knowledge about his job."" The new company hired my uncle because he leave an excellent record. Hiring a person who has experience is important, because it help to develop better a job. Some people may argue that be a responsible and hard-working is not necessary in a job. However, be responsible is so important, because people are getting more experience and more capacity to do their labor. Some people do not like to follow the rules when they are in their jobs.

In conclusion, we can not change the entire world, but start been responsible and working hard in our jobs is beneficial, because it is the place where we can inspire others to do their jobs well and any company will hire us for been excellent workers. Every labor is admirable, and we can care our jobs because it depends we can accomplish any goal we has in our life. We can show a lot characters in our work such as: be respecfull, be on time, and the most important things is love our jobs.",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,2.5,3.5
CC68BA9DCB2F,"Asking alot of people for advice is always a great idea. Since you don't know whether the advice is good or not, its better to listen to different opinions from different people, in order to make better decisions.

For example, in four year i'll be going to college.When i'm choosing which college to go to, I will ask several people for advice. I'll ask my mom and dad to see how much money we have. Asking them can help me choose college that are not so expensive. Then i'll ask my siblings what they did after high school. One of them is planning to attend SCHOOL_NAME soon, and he told me that is a really good college for studying law. From hearing that, I might add SCHOOL_NAME to my list. Finally I'll ask my counselor where I should go, since she knows what my strength are and what my weakness are. She can suggest which college suits me the best. Hearing those advice from different people can help me choose the best college to attend.

After I enrolled in college, I will ask my parents for advice. They told me in college, studying is way more important than socializing. They also warned me to be careful and surround myself with people that will bring positive change in my life. After hearing from them, I asked my friends what they would do. They told me they would party all night and drink alcohol. Comparing my parents advice with my friends, obviously, my parent's advice are much better. It's always better to ask more people than one so you don't make a mistake.

College means independent life, before graduating high school, ask more people for advice! Everyone have different opinions, choose which one is best and which one will help you the most!",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
75B44E3CE6DD,"A positive attitude is not the key to success in life instead a hard working attitude is the the real key to success in life. Why? the answer is simple just because you are positive doesn't mean that you will accomplish your goals, complete your high school with an advance diploma or even find a job after years in the university, studying a career that you hated but decided to study that because its was the one that it will give you a better future. Therefore, you have to work, study, and move outside of your zone of comfort for you to have a successful life.

You will accomplish your goals with a hard working and diligent attitude. If you just have a positive attitude and maybe your goal is to have a car the coming year let me tell you, that you will not only need a positive attitude your will need a lot of requirements, like find find a car insurance whre you will have to pay monthly and also to the car company if you want a new car from there. After that you will have to work more an your payment will not be that same as before it will be less. Basically what I want to say is that just because you have a positive attitude it doesn't mean that you will have a car of the year, no it's not like that, for you to accomplish your goals you will need a hard working attitude and actually achieve your goals.

You are telling me that if you have a positive attitude you will graduate from high school with a advance diploma? No that is not possible, to graduate from high school is a work that you do for 12 years. And all those years your are telling me that you had a positive altitude? that's is not true, what happen to those days when you were sick in the school and you couldn't go to home because your house was alone and no one could pick you up from school, you thoughts were positive or they were just thoughts about how will you survive until the end of the school day?. Having a positive attitude is not the key for your success in school neither in your life everyone has moments when they want to give up on everything and live in a island were you will not have to support the society that this world has.

After years of studying a career that you didn't like hoping that when you finish you will find a suitable job for you to be successful and help your family. Years of working in a part time, nights of no sleeping, hundreds of essays, homework in the midnight and group projects, sometimes not able to pay the next semester, and a lot more is what a university student has to go for them to have a successful life not a positive attitude. And after all that they have to find a job to start paying their debt with the bank. They have to prove in their interview that they are the best of all those people before and after them.

In conclusion your successful life will come when you accomplish your goals, graduate from high school and university then find your suitable job. And not all the people can have a successful life because not everyone can go to high school neither university and those people live their life everyday hoping for a miracle to come to their life they will have to work everyday hoping that one day they will win the lottery and they will not have to work anymore. Your positive attitude will not take you anywhere.       ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
05ACEDBB9CB4,"A lot of students become involved in extracurricular activities, and that makes them don't have time enough to finish their homework and assignments. Schools should control student's involvement in extracurricular activities, because sometimes students can't make their own decisions in the right way and that will makes them don't focus a lot on their studying and education.

My first reason that the schools should control students' involvement in extracurricular is the student can involve in a lot of activities after school or during the school time that can make him be late to do his homework and he will be tired to study; and that makes him have a bad grades and he wouldn't have a good future.

Secondly, when the schools control the student's involvement that make the student more successful in his classes and that give him the chance to finish all of his assignments on the time; also that makes him more understandable to what is happening in all of his classes.

The third reason that the school should control the students involvement is the student will know how to spend his time in a right way and saving his time to the important things that would help him in his future, and makes him more responsible about his education and future.

Lastly, if the schools control the students involvement in extracurricular activities, they would know how and when the student become involved and they would know if the students would have time to the activities or not.

That was the reasons about how the schools should control the students involvement in activities and how it is good for the student's education and future on the same time. Because students can't make their own decisions; sometimes they feel that somethings good for them but it is not, so they need someone more mature to show them the right ways and right things. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
A9A152AAFBE1,I would be interested in joining a program that you guys have to offer. I am very interested in automobiles and would want to look for any companies where I could work on vehicles as my career opportunity. I've always loved the idea that I could one day learn about cars; how a vehicle gets off of the assembly line to the road. There are many companies that are in demand for mechanics to turn wrenches and do not care that they are going to get their hands dirty on the job and for me I would be happy just doing that for a long time. Ever since I was a kid i've worked on my dads' and uncles' car. By changing their tires and putting the tires back and doing oil changes to tuning and modifying my uncles car from a stock making two-hundred horsepower to eight-hundred horsepower. Ever since i've had experience with vehicles in my life time and working in a companies to get my degree and one day open my shop and be able to work on cars would be a dream come true. When I got older I started reading books about cars from the first ever made vehicle to where you had to crank to start the car to when technology was slowly progressing and that was not a thing anymore. Through out the years technologies have increased dramatically and vehicles are being driven by them selves and I would love to work on self derivable vehicles because I know that I would be able to make it right and make sure that the customer is always the priority and I am always hundred percent and determined to make the vehicle an high functioning machine with so much capabilities. I would love to one day work for Tesla or BMW in making electric to hybrid vehicles and knowing that it would be a fun career option while doing something that I always loved ever since I was a little boy I would be grateful. ,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
0B84A2B37B65,"On my opinion, I agree what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, i agree what author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because if you try to do something with less beyond that is already master you will never grow because you still doing the same thing that is already master, you never go advance, you have to do new things and Lear new things on the way you grow doing news things. Many people do the same thing they don't do news things they have to do news things to Lear news things

If you train to do something that is already made, you loosing your time, on the time that you are loosing you can do news thing doing other things, we don't have to do the same things always.

I take my position on that and i think what the Author Waldo Emerson wrote is right about what hi wrote.

It is important to do news things because you learning news things doing differents things                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
AAE16C990870,"To begin with, I am going to be listing my reasons on why i agree to the statement that the former British prime minister winston churchill said. In each paragraph I will be supporting my reasons.

To start off with, My first reason on why i agree with the statement Is because their Is always a saying that says keep trying don't give up. When i read this statement I see that saying because you can't give up you got to keep trying to get what you want.

Second, With the statement saying ""success consitts of going from failture to failture' I agree with just for the smiple fact that In life you will go through some rough times and you may not always succeed In what you are trying to do or accomplish, because someone will always fail at something they are trying to accomplish but will keep trying because at some point they will complete what they had tried to accomplish the whole time.

Last, Someone can't lose hope of trying to complete something because they will complete it. They have to stay motivated to keep on going and keep on going to complete it. Everyone will be successful but If someone just gives up and doesn't keep trying then they won't get what they wanted to accomplish. Some people don't know that enable to succeed they will fail at it plenty of times but they would have to keep trying to succeed at it and can't lose hope.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
1C31DA60C28D,"It has been said the first impressions are almost impossible to change? It is possible for a human to forget his/her first impression because all human forget. we easily forget small simple things for example people can just do stuff and later on in the day and forget about it easy. Many people can't remember there first childhood friend so am against that first impressions are impossible to change it is possible to change. Am against it myself I forget everybody forgets things but not all of us do but a lot does.

Sometimes we purchase things and forget that we did tell we see the package in our doors or mail box then we gonna realize that we purchase something and forget about it. Is the same way how you can forget about your first impression. I myself can't tell who was my childhood best friend or my first dogs name. a lot of us don't know when we got married with our wife or husbands a lot of us don't even know some of our grandparents names is lot if things that we easily forget in life so easily.

Am against it because i so it my self people forget easily a lot and there will be no human who will stand and say i don't forget or i know everything in life all what i have learn since my childhood life i can still say it and tell you all about it that is not possible. A lot can say stuff like that will not be able to do or say about it. There is no way that you can remember your first impressions there is no way. a lot maid think they still remember it but they don't your mind gives you that like i can remember my first impressions then you think about it you can't ravel it. So no to that ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
FA4D2DB3B9EA,"Solution, learning, and smart are three words that describe why knowledge is more important than creativity. Knowledge is more important than creativity because with knowledge people will do better at school, they will get a job easily, and if there is a problem they will find a solution.

Knowledge is more important than creativity because with knowledge people will do better at school. The students will do better on test and quiz. If they get good grade on test and quiz they will have a better GPA. They will get smarter. If they get smarter they will learn faster. They will have good grades. If they have good grades they will get a good job later in their lives. Creativity is less important than knowledge because knowledge will help in life.

Knowledge is more important than creativity because people will get a job easily. They will know where to search. If they know where to search they will waste less time. They will make a good impression. If they know a lot about the job they will make a good impression. People will have more chance to get hire. If they already know a lot about the job they want they will have more chance to get hire.

Knowledge is more important than creativity because knowledge will help to get a job

Knowledge is more important than creativity because if there is a problem people will find a solution. If there is a problem at work they will find how to fix it. If they find how to fix it they will have a chance to not get fired. When there is a problem with a friend people always fix it. If the problem is fixed everything comes back to normal. If there is a family problem someone will manage to fix it. When everything is fix everything is going back to normal. Knowledge is more important than creativity because knowledge will help to find solution.

Doing better at school, getting a job easily, and finding solution to problems are way that knowledge is more important than creativity. Without knowledge humans will not be able to do anything. Knowledge will always help to get a job, to find solutions, and will help at school.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
E7F9A77683D2,"I would pick policy 1 because lunch is free time to eat talk to your friends and to use the restroom. If u need to tell your mom something you can text her or call her but when your in class and u want to text someone you will miss the work and you won't know how to do the activity because your texting. When you have free time that's when you can text call but not in class because if you do then we won't know how to do the work and we would get a bad grade.

So when it's after school lunch or your free time you can use a phone but when your in class you need to turn it off because your teacher is trying to teach you something. When your in class every day you know something new about something, someone, somewhere. So when your in class no phones when your out of class you can text make a phone call take pictures of friends. Who wants to pass i know i do because i want to get a good job because if you don.t pass your classes then you can't get a good job.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
027CB6393714,"Hello, my name is Generic_Name and I am a student at Generic_School. Students at Generic_School are required to take classes in arts. In my opinion student's should not be required to take arts classes because they might need other class. First some students might want to boost there GPA so they have a better chance of getting into the college they want to go too. Also students might need to get the extra support they need to pass in their classes. The class work might be a little difficult for the student who might not understand what is going on in the class room, so they might need more support in class insted of taking arts classes. students need to improve on there grads or get extra help and should not take arts classes. Secondly Students have outside responsibility out of school like a job and sometimes when you have a job your boss might call you and say can you cover someones shift and your boss tells you to come in and you have to be there on time and the student has to leave early or not come to school at all, or a student has to pick there little borther or sister from school or daycare. Thirdly Some students are artistic and they want to be in arts classes like dram, art, music and enjoy doing art classes but all students are not artistic some students are shy or could get panic attacks they prefer to in a extra class or in study hall. In conclusion I think that arts classes should not be a requirement for graduation because students want to get there work done, get extra help to understand their class work or they may have a job they need to get go for and need to leave early and students are not artistic.",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
5F4D9997A207,"Students Early Graduation

Do you think that finishing the high school in three year helps a student to enter the university or work force one year earlier? As we know education is so important in our life and every one need to get good educate. Therefore, we need to study well to get good grades. It dosen't matter to finish high school in three year or four year. Therefore, students need to be active, hard working, and patient about the opportunities that school prepare for them.

Those student who are active in the class and participate in the lessons, they will graduate on time with a good grades that's why they don't need to do these following steps; work force one year, not having elective classes, and taking summer classes. Also, some students by taking serious the home works and completing the class work can rise their score and that helps them to do not fail on the test and no west one more year to study that subject again otherwise by failing it effect badly for their graduation year. I think the best way to solve this problem is to be as a good memmber of class and participate in schools lessons.

students with hard working can get good scores in the class and that scores helps them to be a better student in future. Even I am a student I can say that for sure that you will never lose something by trying hard and some times maybe the result will not pleasant but you should never give up and never lose hopes. For example; the student who never try hard for learning and they just come to class even they do not pay attention in lessons, these type of student will not pass the exmes and in the future they will face with lots of problem like taking classes during summer, not having elective classes. I know a lots of students who just had good score and pass their exmas and graduate without any rush.

Most of student need to be patient about the educational desitions because that desition could change their hole life. Finishing the high school early is not the point everyone knows that studying well and learning something in best way is important part of education. Although, high school students are teen and they have more time so they don't need to rush for graduating. Also, In my old school I knew a girl who wants to finish the high school sooner because she think that the faster you finish the faster you will be able to start the colloge but, that was not good idea so she undastand it later.

students need to be active, hard working, and patient about the opportunities that school prepare for them and if the lost these opportunities they will never get it back so, use from the time you have it right now before you lost it.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
CB17AF6F1138,"By: Generic_Name 03/20/2019

Should people make their own decisions, or shoud they seek guidance from experts and authorties.

If you take decisions, you can have a good life for you'r future. For Exmaple if you want go to the College but you talk with your self and said no go to the college because you not are Intelligent, so you try to deisions go to the college or not go.

you can take your own decisions,For Example: if you take one decisions are bad or no the people need to repect you'r decisions because is you'r decisions,So They not want to know why you take that decisions in my opinion the people only want the bad for you.

You can take more control about you'r decisions,For Example: you can have more control about you'r decisionsFor Example:you can have more control about you'r decisions if you control you'r decisions you can take good decisions and that is good for take decisions

So, you need to have contro about decisions.

you can have you'r own decisions is good to take you'r decisions because you have more capacity to take other decisions, So in my opinion is good to have a decisions because can help to you in the Future but if you take something good for you'r life or for decisions.

In Conclucion: Should people make their own decisisons, or should they seek from experts and Authories. Take decisions for you is good because you can have good life for the future,if you want go to the college but you talk with you'r self and no go to the college because you not are Intelligent, so you try to decisisons go to the college or not go.    ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
FB5F33FEC99F,"Did you know that participating in after school activities or clubs benefits students educational wise?

Weather it's joining a sports team, or theater art, or even practicing an instrument, they all educate you in a way.

There are many activities that arent just educational, but students will also find enjoyable, such as sports, art and music.

There are many types of sports, football, basketball, soccer and many many more to choose from.

Sports teaches you a lot about health, and why it's important to stay healthy. It also helps you stay fit and in shape. Playing sports can also give you a scholar ship for collage, but all that a side it's also fun and enjoyable. You get to hang with your friends, compete with other schools and teams, carry the schools name, and most importantly win trophies and receive rewards.

At some schools, they even let you go on field trips to other states to fields and courts to compete with other teams.

It's nice to have so many people come and support you and cheer you on at games, even when it gets competitive.

Drawing, painting, doodling or crafting are all ways of art. Some students have a hard time expressing their feelings, so they do it through art. They express their feelings and emotions through the colors and the designs and subliminal messages they hide in their paintings.

Art clubs get to go to art museums and art gallery's that inspire and improve their talent.

They even get to do art competitions and win prices and art gallery's of their own to hang on the walls around the school. Painting or Drawing your mood is one way to enjoy yourself and become more passionate for the talent you have.

Art is very deep, interesting and meaningful,yet many people don't really understand art that much. It's fun to experiment with colors and textures, for art has no limit.

Many students join bands and music clubs simply because they enjoy playing or singing.

There are many different types of instruments to choose from, like band and string, but they are very different.

bands do not include string instruments, nor do string instruments include band.

Singing is also one of the ways students like to have fun and enjoy themselves, as well as playing there favorite instrument. Music is also art and a talent that not most people really have. students get to go to opera's concerts and very famous theaters to meet very famous musicians. They also get to preform on stages and before every school game, they also get to compete in music competitions were they get to earn and receive valuable rewards.

They also get to upgrade their instruments every year to the finest quality.

In conclusion, There are many activities that arent just educational, but also very enjoyable, like sports, art and music. Learning should not be all serious, strict and stressful,but should be fun, enjoyable and lovable. Education is important, but loving to learn is more important to sussed. These activities and clubs teaches students something new everyday and helps in developing the brain skills. Education is fun but sometimes it's good to be serious, or strict in some situations.                    ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
109D8D4A91FC,"Some may say it's impossbile because of the impression you left on a person, but people can always change. People can leave multiple impressions other people, its just the person to decide if there willing to see the whole picture. No one is perfect, people make mistakes all the time is a part of being human. From my past experience i've left multiple impressions on people, ""ya people maybe nieve nor stubborn to pay attention to things they want see"". Especailly at a job interview your probably won't ready, alarm didn't work, and 5 minutes late, the manager is think that your a lazy person that doesn't deserve it, but you meet all the requirements for the job. Then can see what your really made of. You may meet people on a bad day and they seem angry that doesn't define a person. People can change so others can as well. People can be blunt off the first impression and every time they you thats the first thing that comes to mind, but you always change the way they think of you. It might take minutes,hours,days,months, or maybe years, but people will always try again and again to get the satistfaction needed. When people are motivated they can do anything. So I don't think its impossible but say it is possible to change the first impression. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,2.5
4D7E52C79A3D,"Does students think that learning from home would be helpful for them? Learning from home won't be as helpful as much as you go to school and learn in the class from teacher. I don't think that students would learn anything from video or online conference because if they don't learn anything while their at school, so how would they learn from home. They might have work at home or at outside, which makes them distracted or disturbed them from their work, and they might have problems with it. Every student has the right to make their decision but this idea won't work out.

Mostly, in every home there is problem which we don't want to share with anyone or we don't want anyone to know about what is happening in our home. Like fighting with mom, brother or father anyone in home or we might don't want anyone to know why are fighting. I mean people have privacy in their life or difficulties which they don't want to share with anyone, and even if they do the work from home it might not help as much as we are in school.

Commonly, every student is not equally intelligent so they can understand one thing in one time. Most of the time and most student take a long time to understand one thing in this situation if they decide to put distance learning then those student might not understand clearly and of course they won't come to school, so they can have a day off.

I mean if a student can't learn something from school how could he or she learn from home.

However, every student want to learn more and achieve something and most of them don't even care. The person who want to achieve something always try their best to do it, but the person don't care would get a chance to not learn. I mean everyone want to relax in home because school work are really tough, but even after that every student try their best to learn and distance learning can't help it out. if you are out somewhere and you're teacher is trying to teach you in online you might not get what they are saying.

However, some people might think that distance learning might help them but if they can't learn in school then how will they learn when they are not in school. I don't think if you are far away from school so you can learn anything from that. Anyway I don't think that students or the teacher might have that time to talk to every student or teacher to ask question or answer them. One teacher can handle a class together, but same teacher can't handle every student differently, so I don't think that this idea would work.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
CB73FAA1669D,"my central idea is supported with introduction specific imformation to the other people that we can check other books the conclusion is bring good idea with the other contact and use the technology we need bring good idea together for more imformation and take good reasons the people need to have something for pay games without speaking with other people and they need stay together for to do that.

The people need the contact for comunication with the other human for to do more technology and for that can to do more games the people need to do more imformation for to do more something for comunication with the other human for pay the games without speaking with other person my idea is that they have more contact with the other companies for have good idea and together going to have good imformation and they need take good idea.

The person need to have good activite when to do the games and the people they need to have money for to do the games because the boss need pay to the employee and the employee need to think more better for to do good games, but they need to use more technology the people need use the comunication and the technology for pay their games and my other idea is that they need to have more technology for to do how a large screen for show the games to the anoher companies or to the other person who want buy the games and they can pay the game use the technology.

The other companies can check the books and the games in the large screen because they builded the large screen with their technology and they can speaking with other person and it's important to help to the person with their comunication because we need to learning about to the new tehnology that they builded and the employee need to brings good ideas for the boss for to do the games more better with the new technology.

with the other technology new they can show the books in the other companies and they need to do activite with the other employee then the need to have good life and they need to do vacation for relax for that have good ideas the employee to have access for get more better the games because they want to build good games for the persons the employee need get something that can they to do idea they can work with the other person that they can to do good work.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
69C15737269C,"We can't remove the impressions of the mind, and neither to change the impressions, Never again forget my first impressions, I can't change the last in my life, I remember the impressions in my life, when i was a children my mom, she also say: ""You have good impressions and bad impressions but remember, you learn new things with impressions of the life"" Would i like to change some impression, I have memory very bad, but i know it impossible my first impressions it was very painful, my mom and my father could have divorce, my life to change, it was my first impressions, but now I understand, the older people sometimes don't know the concequence, My second impressions it was when my uncle say: You want go to USA, that's moment was very happy, because i wanted to live in USA, always to change my life in my country, this is a good memory, all problem life's are necesary because we can to learn new things for the life, My last impressions it was the death of my best friend in my contry Guatemala, it was very impressions because he has a stranger disease, it was a moment very painful for me ever since my life is different

My position for this topic is, we don't change the last impressions, but we can change the impressions of future, to learn and understood the last things is a good reason for continue the life",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
610FA0016255,"Self-esteem doesn't come from praise or achievement, In my opinion both of those are only ""supporters"" to recognize the person effort, all of about self steem really comes from ourselves, our thoughts, ideas and efforts we've done. Self-esteem is what to make you be,what you transmit, act or just to look like, that's why is really important to have that present beacuse evryone should have self-esteem.

Some people believe in praising a student's to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the student's best effort, also so meany people believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standars, I agree with this one because as humans we are, while more peole are praising us, we just will start to act maybe worngly because is too much attention.

Teachers might support students to get better as people also keep getting motivated while they're doing a test or classwork, sometimes with words to make them feel they are doing a great job but they shouldn't do that everyday because not everyone notices the value those actions has.

First, If for example there were 3 students who are very lazy but they start to do better things, the teacher will probably praise them because they made an ""effrort"" but if teachers start to do that everytime,students coul act as lack of attention even if they don't, and there is the problem, of course students must be more confident in orden to learn when they are making some efforts to do their work,however some of them just take advantege of that, when they just think because they have good grades they should to get an achievement or praises from others, even if they don't.

In addition, If in our own homes parents do teach us what's to have a good self-lesteem and how we have to be, we'll not need the approvetion ur opinion from other people and it will be enough because we'd already know how to act like, and just to think that we need an achievement or praising from someone to prove we're good on something, it's completetly wrong, you don't have to get an achievement to prove you're good on something you like it or enjoy to do.

The only thing we have to do is always make an effort, just prove to yourself you are good on something because you want to, not because you're waiting for an action from a person, also not everytime you have to get sometime to prove you are doing a good job bc you are not always to do a good job, beacuse nobody is perfect and everyone has a lot of mistakes, just do it for yourself.

Not always everything is gonna be super easy in life to us, sometimes you have to go through several situations that will make you grow as a person, every human've had self-esteem issues at least once and that's alright. I think we shouldn't depend on a opinion to get better each day for ourselves, we've to notice we are not perfect, we have mistakes and not everyone always will be cheering up us, we have to fail once or more and then just get up and keep going, with our skills and mistakes also knowing that not always we have to get something to prove our knowledged, that's where self-esteem comes from.",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
D84463ADEE19,"If the curfew is adopted,teenargers on the streets after those hours would be braking the law . Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble or they unfairly interfere in young people lives.?Yes the curfews keep teenagers out of trouble in those hours ;because,First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours,Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M

,Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours they are not on the streets.

1. First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours.

It is not save foe teenagers to out on the streets after 10 P.M

; because, after those hours is so many people who are driving it alcohol in their blood system,also many people on this day sales drugs to teenargers parents and family don't want their teenagers to count that things thats why the curfew is es fantastic idea for teenagers to stay away from drugs in those hours we all know that teenager can get in trouble in others different places for example: many teenagers cant get in trouble during school hours,also in their way home,They cant also do bad thing when they are in their homes. In may places are crazy people that don't know what they are doing;for example,imagined is a crazy man shutting all over the place and is a teenagers out at the time the crazy man see he or she is will want to shot him or her,in many cased we see on this day bad people is every were around the world looking for teenager to sales or kill that way the curfew is perfect for teenagers.

2. Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M.

the polices department have a code were it say that any teenagers under eating years old can't be out in the middle of the neigh by there self. The teenagers can out at the middle of the nigh only if they are we their parents, or family members who she or he have to be eating years old or more. In may states have this code to presents cases like;illegible burgs sales or illegal alcohol sale in many countries don't have this code but others are taking advantages of it.

3. Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours they are not on the streets.

Teenagers can be out trouble an those hours intend of been out at 10 .P.M

he or she can study more for schools,There for they can get better grades in school, they can go to bet early. Also they can pass more movie night in family intend of being out getting in trouble. They also can stay away from breaking the law.

In conclusion;Yes the curfews keep teenagers out of trouble in those hours because First it is not save for teenagers to be out on the streets after those hours,Second police department have a code were it say that teenagers can't be out on the streets after 10 P.M

,Finally teenagers at lest will be out of trouble after those hours not they are not on the streets. It is important to have curfews in or city because it can get teenargers to stay away of trouble and pass more family time and don't breaking the law.           ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
3E500A5390C1,"Prompt about having good attitudes

There is different kind of people on this world and they have lot kind of problem in there life like they dont have job otherwise cant anything in there life or somekind of problem,Its happen to me when i am being nice to much anyone anf they feel like they can ask me and i dont feel something to them becace i have one big problem i cant say no to them only otherwise. I can help them or be nice with them. I cant see them in difficult time.

I have experienced because i like help other people when other people and they are happy with you and they remebere you when you die that girl or boy help me they being nice and they are good and they can learn lesson from you and they feel good in their life aand i just want to say that do hurt someone in your life place if you do somthing good for them just do it becasuse may thet cant do good somrthing for you perants if you do it. you know god will be happy with you if do good.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
515244292F97,"When people ask for advice from more than one more person it is because they want to be sure about the choice and they might want to be sure that they are not wrong. People will also need other peoples choices because they are not sure if they are correct or wrong. Seeking for more advice will help you know other peoples opinions and how they feel and it will also depend on the question they are being asked. People might want others opinion because they want to know if people agree or disagrees with them and they might want to see if they feel the same way or different. When people want more advice it is because they want the best for them or they want the best others.

Some people might also need more advice because they are confused and they might not know what do in the life and might be worried. Advice from other people can be good or bad because some people will just give a lot of bad advice so life doesn't go good for you some people will give you good advice because they want the best for you. Asking other people for advice can help a human make a really good choice and for a human to go good in life and so that later in life they can have a good idea of what they need to work on.

People will be needing other peoples advice because they don't want to have a bad vision of life because if they do they won't know what life is actually about. Good advice would actually help a lot of people with their health or with their work so they have a really food living environment. Advice will also make you a better person and people might or will accept you like who you are and that is what matters in life and in good advicePeople might also need adviceto have a better mind of what they want to do in their lives and other peoples lives. That is why people seek for more advice from others so they can have a better life and vision of life to.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
CE6A2E382FBE,"its aboute the plans of the half day i agree because they are planing the activities for the students so they can have have a fun day backgrown:what the teachers have to do to make there class fun for the students

Thesis:the have hours so the students go home early and they can do their homework or the classwork if they did not finish evidence:some teachers agree because they thing that they can go home get rest they can study more elaboration:but the thing is that that some people disagree because they do not want the students in home early but i thing that they shot not make the same thing each day because the part evidence:i thing that if they do DAT

some people are going to be like i disagree because the kids they are not to elaboration :i thing this is a way so the school can have like more time to prepare for the other day the school is like going to be the important thing for the kids so they can have more education and more productive in live i thin thats the thing that some people like school like have day or some thing like that in the but i disagree the things can be the same thing the school hours can be the like evidence:i thing that if they do dat some people are goin to be like i dissagre beause the kids they are not goin to do elaboration :i thing this is a way so the school can have like more time to prepare for the other day conclusion:is that somany people that gree to so                                                                                                                                                                         ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0
2C681168A674,"Certian school districts allow a program in high school in which students could graduate a year early. But do you think that it is a good idea to graduate in three years insted of four years? Well yes it's a good idea ,there is nothing wrong with gradutating in three years .Maybe he or she just wants to get over high school and start working .Or others just want to start a year early of college .

Some students want to graduate early because they want to start working and making money. They just want to start making moeny and start buying the things they need .There is nothing bad with going into the work force a year early ,students may not like school and just decide to gradute in three years so they can go stright into work field,Everyother student has a diffrent mind set .

High schoolers also would want to gradute early to start off with their college classes,colleges classes are hard and some students just want to finish and complet certian classes they want .Colleges give out alot of work and its hard ,and its not a bad idea to gradute a year early just to start off with your college classes .You get done with like three classes and college wont be as challenging and hard. Students just think ahead and take the option of only taking three years of high school ,and it pays off towrds the end.

Other students take the three years because they dont like school and just want to get finished and complet with high schoool .Other students do it because some have to take care of their families or other students had a child and have to work for that child .Everyone has a diffrent mindset and they all think diffrently from one another.

Taking three year of high school is helpful and good ,But taking 4 years is better because you get a better education and you can get scholorships from colleges .You can also finish you colleges classes in high school and you get more help ,taking four years in high school is helpful too .

I've given you the best ideas on why its good to take three years of high school. It can help out to finish colleges classes sooner .It helps getting into the work foce earlier . Provides money and you can help your family out .We all have diffrent mind sets and think diffrently, but choose whats best for you ,think about your future and think what is the best for you , and i wish you the best of luck in life .                ",3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
9E4F43374DD5,"Do you think that school students should have at least participate in one or more extracurricular activity, agree or disagree. I think that students should participate in one or more school extracurricular activity. here are some of my reason on why i think that student should participate in a school activity.

I think that student should participate in a school activity because if you normally have noting do after school but just setting around waiting for something to happen, but if you were in any of the school sports you be wont be bored all the time anymore. school can make you meet new friends or get even better at the sport than you are now. sport can make you keep in good shape and good health.

school clubs are really fun to do because you get to some really big project and activity but it also depends on what clubs you chose. like for example theres the FFA club , the FCCLA , the confetti club those club are really fun to do. you get to make new friends too if you waned to and when your in high school if you wanted to, you could run for school present for your school and make some changes to your school.

after school activity like sport can school clubs can also be on your patent reared all out throw out high school and on to college and thats why i think that student should participate in one or more extracurricular activity.                                                  ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
FFD9A83B0849,"Working alone, students do not have to argue with other about decission of their proyects and have to work with someone they do not know; however, most students prefer to work as a group because students are able to dived work, to share ideas and to help each other. Working with a group allows students to work more efficiently. Personally and due to the facts, I would prefer to work with a group because working with other is more beneficial for students.

Firstly. Most students are required to do many proyects during each marking period which is to much for each student, and specially when there is a big proyect for each class that worth 10% of the period's grade, but working with a group the proyect might be diveded to each person in the group, and share between them. Each student have different and unique qualities that can be helpful to do do certain parts of proyects that for other can be difficult to do.

Secondly. Working with a group might be also seen as opportunity for student of gaining values of cooperation which is important to have due to many companies assign jobs to two or more people to realize them because of the different knowledges they can provide to each other. Companies usually use the phrase:

""Work as a team""

to make their productivity more efficiently. Teachers should see this as way of helping students to get expiriences of working as team, and also that way, we as students would get knowledge of others.

By allowing students to work with group teacher might be helping student to get more confident about their due to the fact that students can disscuss betweend eache other the topics and loook forward the best way of doing them. Schools are allowing students to stay after school which is perfectly fine for those students that are not able to go to a house of one the members of the group. A group might be also helpful for those students that are having issues turning their work on time because; now, they can get be supported by other and be more productive.

To conclude, No students should be in the position of having a big proyect with no enough time without the opportunity of work with a groups. Many companies are assigning jobs to be done by more than one person, they know that a team works more efficiently than one person, and teachers should do the same in their classes to help students to get their grades up, and also to be productive on turning work in. Working with a group should be allowed for students during classes to improve their qualities of coorperation and to have different points of view to do the best for subject.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
DACE7A4DE7DB,"I agree with this statement, because a positive attitude helps you cope more easily with the daily affairs of life. It brings optimism into your life, and makes it easier to avoid worries and negative thinking. If you adopt it as a way of your life, it would bring constructive changes into your life, and makes them happier, brighter and more succesful.

Whith a positive attitude you see the bring side of life, become optimistic and expect the best to happen. It is certainly a state of mind that is well worth developing.

Also a positive attitude leads to happiness and sucess and can change your whole life. If you look at the bright side of life, your whole life becomes filled with light. This light affects not only you and the way you look at the world, but it also affects your enviroment and the people around you.

If this attitude is strong enough, it becomes contagious. I'ts as if you radiate light around you.

When you are positive, you tend to pull yourself out of negative loop and don't lose focus from what you really want to achieve, the person with a positive attitude has a better perspective of life. understand that is important to take resposibility for one's actions for example: problems in your work, family, school etc. A strong sence of responsibility always envokes positive and constructive actions. A positive thinker is never impulsive, they always wait to get clarity of a particular situation.

Being positive and calm always enable you to see both sides of the coin.

Positive attitude is the key to sucess in lifen because if you are positive you will belive and trust yourself, and you won't let negative people affect your deams, if not you will work hard until you get them and go will sucessful.                                                                        ",4.0,4.5,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0
35E552843ADF,"Teachers and students volunteer to meet with those who have difficulty in certain subjects. By having a afterschool homework club. Reasons for a afterschool homework club? An afterschool homework club would be nice to have because they get better grades, they could study more, and they could understand the subject better

First of all, they get better grades by helping each other on their homework and they can socialize to know more people, make new friends. Plus they can make up stuff they haven't done at all and have a zero in their grade. It also benefits in all ways, you could get straight As by just taking 1-3 hours extra hours of your day and putting the work into it. If you don't work at all you could consider trying harder to pass the class.

Next, they could study more. Studying more could be a benefit because better test grades, better quiz grades, etc. Also they could get ahead on their classes by doing extra homework and normal work. If you never study you could start by considering to join this club. It could be loads of fun if you make it fun.

Therefore, they could understand the subject better by getting someone to help them. Doing loads of extra work to get your grade up and understand it better. They could help each other out and could achieve their goal of getting to understand the difficult subject.

Finally, those are the reasons why the idea would be a benefits for everyone. It could help everyone out in every way. Thats why I consider this idea to be true and make the club available for everyone. Also theres a ton more benefits that could help too.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
F58DF8739B42,"Dear Mr. Principal today I want to talk abot how most employees are looking for a specific characteristics in potential employee even if they don't know the job. I agree with this prompt because a person not always know how to do a job, but they can learn.

Some people when they are new on a job they don't really know what to do, they have to be trainig for another person that alredy know the job like a manager, maybe employees are looking for a manager, the person they contract to be the manager maybe her/ him don't have the experience at all, but they can learn over the time they are working. For example when I came to this country I start to work with my stepfahter to put ruffin, I didn't know how to do the job, bit I learn over the time that I work with him. Last summer I was working on a restaurant like a cashier and I had a problem because I didn't know the differences on the coins because in my country it was really different, but I learn a lot because the manager from the restaurant help me to be succesful on the job, and I put a lot of eargerness to leanr the job.

A lot of people when they know the job they like to work hard becuase they want to learn more about it, some people that alreayd know the job they can learn new things about the job from another employee or manager. A lot of people here in United States work hard for the benefits of their family not just for a benefit to be hired, They know that if they work hard their childrens can leanr abot their experience, and they can be a better person, a lot of parents like to be a example for their childrens, so the way their childrens know that work hard is something that you need to be proud of. Some of them work hard to achieve their goals, or to have a better future.

However, be responsable is another important thing that you need to keep in mind, be responsable can help you to get hired on the job, if you are responsable the main boss are going to see that they need people that are responsable to be more succesful. A lot of companies grow up because their employee are responsable, and they complete all the activities their boss ask them to do. When I was in my country a lot of people tried to put like a store, but it never work because the people they put to work they didn't show up on time, and they weren't responsale on their activities, and the store had to close because they didn't improve what they want to do. Be responsable is one thing that is going to help you to be succesful in life becuase if you are new to a job and you show up on time they are going to see that you are really responsable with your activities and that's what most of the jobs are looking for people how are responsable.

Another thing that employers need to know that they have to contract a person that is going to have patient, in every job they have a manager and employers should know if the manager have the patient to be training people that is new on the jop. Lets do a example some managers are impatient they don't like to help people that don't know the job because they said that they don't have the time to be training people because they think that the person is never going to learn how to do the job, or they have another important activitie to do instead of be training a new person. In a lot of restaurants or stores the managers are always with good actitude and they like to help people.

In my conclusion I would say that a employee don't have to know how to do a job if they are responsable and they like the job him/her are going to learn what they need to do to be succesful on the job. Another thing is that you don't born with experiences you need to learn from the callenges life give to you and you can learn from your mistakes.",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
10D2D1173D36,"Should schools have partnerships with companies? There are two sides whom chose one of the two alternative choices. Considering the topic is about students pursuing a type of job, its safe to assume that schools should have partnership with companies.

However, the opposition overlooks an important view, namely that since there are students who wouldn't be interested in the slightest, there would be some that are intrigued. If schools didn't have a partnership with a company then students wouldn't have been able to find their future jobs.

Due to this, students would have found a job they like. They wouldn't have any difficulties searching for a job if school had partnership. By working at a job they really like, it'll be easy for them to finish through any work they have.

With the partnership, students, who found an employment they like, can work at their dream job. They'll be able to success through their careers.

In conclusion, schools should have a partnership with a company. That way students can be able to have a job they're good at.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
CFA41112FF1B,"Hello, I would like to visit your hospital, the one is next to Sanger Avenue because I would to learn more about how to a good doctor, I think it will be really helpful for me because it will help with me with my carreer. beause

I am learning how to a Doctor in the Generic_School, Being a Doctor is my Biggest dream and is my favorite job since I was 5 years old. In my Opinion, I think that this a great hospital for other people come and learn how to be a Doctor, However, this can benefit your hospital because maybe the people that come from different Universities may want to work in this Hospital and that will improve the sevice of your Hospital and help more people or safe more lives.

I think that this is a important job because you can sefe lifes, I think you should let people to visit your Hospital because their are mnay people that want to learn how to a doctor, they try thier best to learn ,and they / we need the espirience a profesional, In my Openion, I think they try their best because they want to safe lives just like you do or they want to help their family. In my Opinion, If you let me / us come to your Hospital it will be really helpfull for everyone because our dreams are to help people and sefe lives and oour dreams can not coem true without your help.

their are millions of peole that needs your help and our help, if learn how to be a Doctor we can we can work together so we can safe lives, if more people becomes a doctor more lives will be save. thats why we need expert to help us become doctors.             ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
C0800EF2C22A,"First,for example some people prefer working in grougp because they would get extra help. The other person in the group become with a new idea. I think working in group it is fun becuase each person in the group would l help. That why I prefer working in group than alone because the desventage of working alone is I can not get help from anyone. Also I can not finish it early it would take long.

Second, for example If I work in group we would descuss first and then be an a agreement. Then start working each person in group would have to answer and with different answer. If any one in the group does not know the answer the group would help him or her. It is easy and fast to finish any class work if it is in group. Working in group it is fun because each person learn from another idea of the other person.

Third, working by yourself it is kinda hard. Some people prefer working by themself because they think it better. Working alone is more stressful. That why people should work in group. It help and it is more better and less use of their mind.

Fourth, for example if I do a classwork by myself and it is hard. It would take me more time to do the researchs in google. Also I would finish it late. That why I prefer working in group than alone.

fifth, finally I would like to recomend to each students to work in group unless they are smart enough to do it by themself. However some students or people like to wotk alone if they smart then probably they would finish it on time. Teacher should be agree with me. When students work in group it is less stressful because they can hel each other. Therefore students or people should work toguether because it is less stressful and it would benefits a lot.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
890FAF6F82FC,"I agree with this statement because it's impossible to change this impressions. Some people have physical problem it's impossible to change. Lot's of people have mental problem with getting mad. If somebody have mental problem maybe they fight with someone. They have to go to hospital to check up. If they take some medicine maybe they get better. When they have physical problem they yelling on the street and running and lot's of people scared from them. They family have to keep them at home. If they didn't safe at home.

There family can take them to lunatic asylum because they can't stay at home they go out and did something to the people. People can call to Police and maybe police arrest them then they get trouble from police. There parent should protect them from this disaster. If they want to go out there parent go with them because it's safety for them. For parent this condition is distress. This condition of doing something badly for parent. If this kind of condition they have they do care for children.

They have frustration about children because this condition is very badly. They can't go outside they stay all the time at home. If parent go out maybe child go outside and again he/she did something badly in public. If they want to walk outside by them self they can't because they have to go with parent. Some parent they take them children into park they want to play but reason is there is lot's of kids playing. If he/she did something to kids is very bad situation. This mental problem very bedly.      ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
80D2FE30F665,"Offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing by schools is a good idea, but I take a position on this issue to say that, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes classes from home due to the following reasons.

First of all,some students when offered distance learning will not pay attention to their lessons. They will distracted either by their cell phones or electronic devices. And we all know students always like to be on their cell phones at anytime and anywhere. Also,Students can be distracted either by their parents or siblings which may cause them lack behind ahead of their lessons. So when all of this happens , students may be delayed which will cause them to fail and waste of time. For example,my cousin came to the United States of America with his siblings and he was permitted to to take one of his subjects or courses online. And anytime he gets home,he doesnt get a peace of mind because of the disturbances and worries from his siblings. Due to this,he fell apart in his studies which caused him to fail the course.

Another reason is that,some students finds it difficult and boring to learn on their own pace. Because they encounter a lot of problems in their studies. Students finds it very hard to understand lessons without the presence and explanation of a teacher. And again,students finds it very boring when learning on their own because there is no form of oral conversation between the teacher and student. Some students prefer being active in studies rather being dull or inactive. So when all these happens,the students may skip the contents because he or she doesn't get any understanding,

or close the contents and go to sleep. For instance,I had a friend who was struggling with these same problems,he feels bored and difficult to understand in distance learning. So anytime he gets to sit for the lessons,he feels sleepy during a short period of time. He sometimes drink a whole cup of thick coffee but it doesn't make any changes. So what he does is to off the computer and go to bed. And this hinders his academic performance each year.

Lastly,students feel fatigue or weak in distance learning since they don't get time to take rest after school. Some students even have to close work after school before taking the online class. With these,it makes student lazy and sleepy when he or she sits in fronts of the computer to learn. And me myself is experiencing this problem. When school closes, I have to walk half a mile before I gets home,and from there,I work on my assignments and take my shower. So by the time I will be done,then it is getting late, and I still have to take this classes online. I feel tired in learning at times which retards my level of learning.

From these reasons, I would like to conclude that,students would not benefit from distance learning because there are so many disadvantages from it which has brought low level academics in their studies.

Thank you.",4.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
D203157DCBF0,"Society as it is now needs to support teenage safety, and a curfew would be a great start. Parents should support being more strict with their children's. Even on the weekend a midnight curfew is more than enough time to enjoy themselves.

It is very dangerous at night, and anybody that is out after midnight increases their chances of doing wrong or becoming a victim.

Teenagers are still learning how to fit into this puzzle of life, and without a curfew to guide them bad things are bound to happen. Teenagers do not understand when their parents tell them no, and think a curfew is not needed because they are invincible and bad things never happen to them.

Teenagers need to learn that being more responsible, mature, and becoming a contributing member of society starts with having limits. Curfews will benefit not only teenagers, but society as a whole.

Teenagers think being responsible is not a good thing, because they never want to be told what to do.

If you want graduate from high school you have to be responsible.

Going out after midnight is not being responsible. I have already loss friends to violence, and it occurred late at night.

I have friends that have jobs, and they work after midnight even on school nights. They have trouble staying awake in class, and their grades are not good.

A curfew would also address this situation and help them succeed in school.

Being mature at sixteen is hard for some, but it needs to happen.

Parents need to show their children part of maturing is doing the right thing.

Being mature is understanding that you do not need to be outside late at night.

Maturity helps us understand that in life we can not always do whatever we want. I have friend that complain about not being able to stay out late, but as they mature they will understand that a curfew really helped keep them safe.

Going outside after midnight is very dangerous.

Teenagers must understand that with everything that has gone on the past decade with gun violence, drugs, and robberies; most of it occurred late at night.

There is a reason that most places are closed late night, and there is really nothing to do late at night.

Teenagers need to value their safety, and know that whatever they can not do before midnight does not need to done.

Curfews can help with this mindset and keep teenagers safe.

To reiterate, society as it is now needs to support teenage safety, and a curfew is crucial part in making this happen. Parents should support being more strict with their children's curfew. Midnight is more than enough time for teenagers to experience life.

There is really nothing good for teenagers out past midnight.

Teenage life is one of the most difficult times in our lives as we still are trying to constantly learn. Teenagers do not understand when they are told why they can not do something or how to deal with rejection.

Teenagers need to learn that being more responsible, mature, and becoming a contributing member of society starts with having limits. Curfews are necessary if our society wants to continue to grow in the right direction.",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
3E9A664FFD33,"Although some say true self-esteem comes from praise of others because make people feel more comfortable with their life, actually it comes from achievements. Self achievements make people decide for themselves and teaches confidence.

Most people think that with praising students, they may be motivating the student to become a better version of them selves, and that the students might be developing confidence through small amount of work. Some also say, that is important to give credit to students work. No matter how bad it's.

People who decide for them selves, are most likely to get a high pay job; than someone who was used to being praised while was a student. It had been proved. kids who grow up in environments where their parents, teachers and peers, are happy with his/her academic skills without making them improve. Will be hard for them to get a high pay job in the future unless they have a special talent.

True self-esteem comes from achievements and confidence. For example; 3 years ago I start training mix martial arts; I was also living in a environment where people used to praise me. Which is not a bad thing, but I perfectly new that, that won't do any good on my future. I remember that before training MMA, I didn't have self-esteem neither confidence. Once I join the MMA academy coaches used to tell me, and still telling me ""that technique is not good enough, that take down sucks"". My coaches didn't praised me. My coaches taught me; what I needed in order to achieve confidence in battle or in anything I want to do in life.

Image a world where people listen to the rest, and don't try to make decisions for their own. It wouldn't make anyone for good, unless they are the kind of people, who need someone to depend on. For example; when my father was young he made decisions for his own. nobody praised for him. he developed a very powerful skill. He developed confidence. The confidence brought him to USA and had the opportunity to get a high pay job.

In conclusion I strongly believe students shouldn't be praise. I believe that praising students do good while they are young, but when they get older; they will want to have this feeling of relying on someone, and have more chances of ending up in low paying and boring jobs.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
136F4548CFD0,"Some students think that summer break is good for students because its long break and students always like a long break so they can spend time with there friends . Actually, i think that there should be year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall because students get bored to doing same think like a study so and they can have more rest.

Some students think that students should get a summer long break because its long break and students always enjoy long break . If students get long break and there parents are not in the country where student living s so they can go to out of country for example; they can go to there hometown country to meet there parents, friends and relatives.

I think students should get a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall because if the students keep coming school without break so they will be more stressful to doing some think again and again without break. Also,

Also, if students have a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall so they will get a short - short break so they will be don't have so much load in there brains. Moreover, after a long break students don't like to come school so shorts break are better than long breaks.

Finally, i think a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall is a good idea because students get bored to doing same think like a study so and they can have more rest. Also, after a long break students don't like to come school and they get more lazy, so shorts break are better than long breaks.  ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
DDD1A1F08FDF,"Identify a talent or skill you have, when you have a talent you can show it to people. Like share what you have when other people don't have what you have like if your gifted. Talents is not so it could be hidden in you it is to shown the whole world what you have that is amazing or imprresive. Do something you have that will make you trend around the internet or something rare in your body thats's cool and rare, you can even be a very populor person if you show the world these would be examples Sing,Dance,Magic tricks,Card tricks or even things that people haven't even done.

No one in the world is going to khown what you have if you don't share it with everyone. What would be the point to have a very cool or special talent if your going to hide it or not show it to everyone. This can be an opprotinity to amaze the whole world so go out there and share your talent.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5
9A36D8AB4818,"Community parks provide a lot of fun ways to spend time outdoors. One of my three favorite ways to spend time outside would be playing sports, gardening and exercising. It's a productive way to spend your weekends.

First, Playing sports outdoors is very fun way to spend the day. You can play with your family and friends. You learn about communication and teamwork while playing sports. Communication is a life skill that is used everyday. You'll always talk to someone weather your saying good morning or good night speaking is always needed when talking to someone. Teamwork shows you how to value players on a team. Knowing your teammates worth and dreams is always a great way to start a lifetime friendship. Playing sports outdoors is a great way to spend your time.

Next, Gardening is a way to help out plants and to have fun. Gardening or watering plants gives the plants energy. Gardening may be done with family and friends. Your spending quality time with those around you. Buying seeds and planting them helps out the plant world by giving them new places to live. You may fix up the parks gardens to make it look nice. You don't lose anything from watering plants. Cutting grass or cleaning up around the neighbor hood is a good thing to do. Your doing a favor to your neighbors and nature. Gardening is a relaxing and fun way to spend your day outdoors.

Finally, Exercising isn't done by many people, people just want to spent time indoors and just watch television. Exercising is very important for humans to do. An average human is suppose to exercise three times a week. Going to the park and going for a run is a great way to exercise. Your loosing body fat and building up muscles. You may see animals and plants while your running. You can also exercise with your family and friends you don't have to exercise alone. Exercising is very relaxing and it's helps with blood pressure. You don't have to eat that healthy but its good to exercise at least three times a day.

In Conclusion, Spending time outdoors is very enjoyable. You can do these activities with the people around you. Three enjoyable ways you can spend time outdoors is by playing sports, gardening and exercising ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.5
B2D03F892B0D,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home?

In my position I think it's a great idea to attend classes from home only if you work, or if you can handle any type of work by yourself without a person that will persuade you to do the work, and if you know English perfect.

I think that some students will benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because for some students it's difficult to wake up early because some students who work on

Part-times, and some students don't want to wake up early, or they go to bed late for playing games on their phones.

Secondly. I think that some students might benefit from this program if they can handle any type of work independently without a teacher or any person persuading them to do the work, because some students are smart and they like to work independently, in silence, without people disturbing thems or without too much explanations.

Also. I think that the only students that can understand any work and can only attend classes from home, are those who knows English Perfect, because if you know English perfect then you can work in any topic or subject without the help of anybody, If you are a Hispanic born in other country then this program it can work for some Hispanic students because they are used to get everything easy, to get what they want without making a effort.

In the other hand, I think that this program it won't help to those students who distract easy or those who don't do work without any person who will persuade them to do the work, because there are students who likes everything easy, students who don't want to make an effort, this program it won't work to those students who don't like to study, to those who have only F on their classes or those who are skipping, or not going to school.

In conclusion I think this program can only help those students who can handle any kind of work without the help of any person. and for those students who have dreams, those who makes a effort to get what it can help thems in the future, for those that knows that life it's not easy, to those students that know that if you don't work for it you won't get what you want on life. those students who can handle any kind of work without the help of any person.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
4ED1965FD68F,"Technology had become stronger in the last 10 years in humans lives, industries like Apple, Microsoft, Amazon are industries that had become really important, thats because humans use technology really often. Technology facilitates things like work online, send emails, and connect with family and friends by social media, News around the world , that kind of things had a good impact in humans society. In the other hand, there are people that dont use technology for that kind of things, people that use technology to entertain their self, those who use technology to entertain their self are mostly teenagers that abuse the use of technology, playing video games for hours, shopping online, watching YouTube videos,make some kids to font be interested in books, stay in their phone for hours. these kinds of teenagers stop seeing their family and friends, they prefer to stay in theirs own world. Technology had become addictive for some people and thats, were technology limit humans lives. In cases where teenagers are really addictive to technology parents prohibit the use of technology, some schools in the united sates prohibit the use of technology and thats because some teenagers cant control the use of it. Technology is necessary, to communicate, work, shop, and some times to have fun but not abusing the use of it. Social media plays a big roll in the use of technology, social media allows to communicate with any person around the world, thats something that had become dangerous, meting new people in social media, someone that you dont really know, in some cases people go on this kind of dates and some of them disappear. People should use technology more careful and dont abuse the use of technology. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
65051CE36DA7,"One place i would like to go visit in this world would be portorico because it looks like a wonderful place to live in and because i want to experince how it is to live there or how school is for them. It might be a life changing for me to see how they live there maybe i might start being greatful for what i have and they dont and i would start helping others mor often.

One reason i would go to portorico is to see how they do stuff different like what they wear,what they eat, and what they do on daly it would be intersting seeing all that and i would like to try new food and wear the cloths they wear and try to see how it feels to be a portorican.

Another reason i would love to go to portorico is because at the USA i am not greatful for what i have and maybe if if i go over to portorico i will be greatful for what i have because i will see the difference of how i live and how they live it will also melt my heart to see them eating unhealth and i am over here throwing my food away because i dont want it.

My final reason for wanting to go to portorico is because i will want to see how their parents are with the kids like when they get in trouble. I also want to see how teachers are with their students when they get in trouble because i want to see if they are different than El Salvador cause there they hit their students with the ruler and that is not okay.

In conclution I would like to see every difference they have from the USA and El Salvador and i want to try every food that they have and spend time with students. I want to be greatful of everything that i am able to have and they dont and maybe share the stuff that i have and they dont. Now i really want to go to portorico and explore new stuff and have a nice adventure.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
66FF0907BF26,"Do you ever wonder if most students use their phones in school for educational purposes? In my opinion cell phone use in a classroom is not a bad thing depending weather they take advantage on getting work done or goof around the majority of the students in school take advantage of their phones about Seventy Five percent of students like to use their phones for social media and music. When teachers are in classes during instructional time about half the class is paying attention, the other half of the class is on their phones texting friends or updating social media and then don't know what the lesson is about when they get called on to answer questions on the board.

Phones are usually a distraction to teachers and also to the person using the phone. Phones can also be a positive thing when doing paper work or projects when listening to music it can help concentrate more without getting distracted from others peers. When listening to music when you're working it gives off a positive affect on your brain, it gets your mind going with different types of ideas and keeps you from falling asleep. Cell phones bring hundreds of resources that would be able to help you get answers or help you understand certain questions , meaning of words , and how to pronounce different type of sentences from other languages.

Most teachers don't allow phones or headphones in a classroom because they assume everyone's going to start texting and be on social media, cell phones are important to have close just in case of an emergency at home. In case if you wanna check up on your siblings, mom, or dad even if you can notify the school about contacting your parents or your parents contacting the school it'll be easier for them to call you.

Some schools usually provide tablets for students to use so they wouldn't have to worry about loosing an assignment or turning it in late, but the majority of the time you need internet to be able to open up assignmets to turn in school students usually have tablet problems and turn it in so it could get fixed. Cell phones is a big help it can usually download applications that you neeed to do work without being behind in certain subjects so there shouldn't be an excuses on why assignments are late, or missing and that's why cell phones are a positive affect for educational purposes as long as teachers are consistant on supervising students cell phone use.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
F4BE7BB77A43,"Tomas Jefferson say is wonderful how much may be done if always diong. And is one of the reason I deagree with Jomas because if the person always doing something learning stuff they never before do. Is wonderful how much the person can be do and learning new stuff if always work hard. One of the many reason of the human is a intelligent,stroong,smart and do new stuff no matter if they are easy or difficult. If they work hard can be do everithing.

For example the human not born with the capacity to walk or speak all human learng how do new stuff not matter how dificult ther are because more do more learng. One of the big point of always do somehing is prepare for life,is not easy but diong something to make sure the person is in the right way is the most important things the person need to know. Teaching personality and work hard is the big stuff, however one point of life the thing come hard but teaching how go and do resolve the problem. Not matter how be is the problem you need to go and do something then make how strong the person are. The person need to struggle with problems but learning and work hard is the main reason why the person is strong. On one point has the access to take something and work on that, but doing something is how learning new need stuff. Example the person who invent the technology they work hard and always do somethig to make they dream to come real and thas why diong somethihg and do the best potential is how make all the stuff of life. The person who study and prepare to make thay dreams are those work and not matter hoe big is the way they make one aesy way to continue they dream.

Doing somethigs always is the reason why the society do big work define new thing new technology new life becuase always are doing somethis. The person not born with all the intelligent not they learn how walk,speak and one point of life they go to school they not know everything. Not they do something the work hard, however a lot person are very smart but they continue to learn always doing something because they want to a better because they want to suppor the world and they family a better place. Likely the most professional always do something to make sure they life are excel of the most difficult piont of they life becuase always work hard and make new things, because not matter how low they education the person take always can be a better person because always try to define the best decition and the best example to the society. A different way to make the personality strong is find new ways to the problem. Life is like a game more things more work more aesy is to make the things.

If the person always are diong something new and the not choose to stay an d the same place all the time. And the person choose to continue doing new stuff and new work they not need to be the most smart person on the world. They need to work and show they can be do,however they walt to be not matter if they how be a stong personality and not matter is they't go the best school or the best college. Only matter how they be and the profession and the work. If the person or the society do somethig they can be the future. For example one day the person get up and choose to do something and make sure they days are very beautiful do new projects they can be came be make they life more aesy to continue. Life and work are like a gardener more flowes the person add more beautiful they came to be is like work more thing you learng more easy life come. one point they persono can't be continue but all the things thy learn more aesy came to be going up.

That why more things do make goals they persons can find, not matter were the person came or were the born always doing something more intellegent the person can to be. However a lot person are very smart but they continue to learn always doing something because they want to a better or find new technology or make a different on this world. One of the big point of always do somehing is prepare for life. All the persons are not the same one they has more technology to they dream,but others person not and this is not one obstacle to make they dream. Because all the time are be doing something and not wait to came things came not they go find and work hard to make all be came to be positibe they not have obstacles they have the strong to be come a better person. And show everyone not matter how difficult are the problem they came be successfuly person. Like Thomas Jefferson say always diong somethings much be done and is true because the person came to this life and learng everything, a lot person move to other place, need to learng need lenguage, need tradititiones and need people is hard but with the time can be learnig everything and continue the life again with need stuff thas is what is important to always diong on and be done what they need to be done and make sure do the best and hork hard and show a good and strong personality. And accomplish more if always they're something on specific point of life can to be so difficult but working hard and with discipline all can be come more aesy and undertake a new dream and new stuff of life can be come the best tool to widely and known as the most expert guidance to life. Base of all the information always doing somethig more thigs can be done and the persons can be accomplish and determine what strong thye personality they are.",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
0A3964629F69,"Generic_Name

My grandma, always said that being in a group gives you more things to talk about. The benefits of working a group is more beneficial because,more ideas, partisan,and some one you can talk to.

Many calm that working alone will not share your ideas with other clearly, it better working in a group have fun and to talk to others.

To begin the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because having more ideas. For example my sister, Generic_Name she loves sharing her ideas. Each ideas they share with they classmates. They can have have a example on what there writing about and have an idea on what there talking about. For example my Mom,is A fourth grad teacher she loves seeing others sharing it means a lot to her. She partners up the kids and so she, can see on thing the can come up with. However,having more ideas well help us share ans being thoughtfully to other in life.

In addishly,the benefits of working with group is more benefice because, to pertipat in a class room. For example when i first stared middle school i didnt want ti partisan with no on. Because, i wanted to work bye my self. Later that week i made a Friend and, she intrdust me to the other class mats, we all disided to be together for this school project. Example my little brother Generic_Name ,he was shy to talk to others in the class room. I as an oldest sister, to if him they no need to be shy just talk to others and pertipat in class and get to know every one. that next day my brother was happy to with others. However,partisan is a good way to show others an example and make new friends

Finely the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because, having some one to talk to for example my friend Generic_Name, didnt have have nothing tot talk to for example my friend Generic_Name,didnt have nothing to think of .I was helping her on some thing we can together thinks of. I as a friend was there to listened to was she had to say. Example my other friend she wasnt at school because,her Grandpa, pasted away she misted on what we were working on. So i want to show her on the thinks she missed out. It helped her a lot.

In concluss the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because, more ideas, partisan, and some you can talk to.                    ",2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
5B2FC963E89D,"A person life, is like a little story, there way to think or act goes with what they have been though, some have gone from easiest to harder situations, there are many situations that people go through all the times. There own way to be, the way they go through situations, makes people take decisions or actions that someone that has gone through the same situation can help them inspired or make positive things in there life. Once you go through many situations it will be helpful to be inspired and think in someones life.

There are so many different opinions and ways to influence someone, they can be reasons or things that happened in the life of a person that will not necessary be inspired by a example of someones action, or life. Also a inspiration can make you feel confidence in a situation were you think you do not know what to do. The influence of a person can always be helpful.

A example is only main thing to influencing others, there are many different ways to inspired people. One example that I think is, that they can be moments were you do not need someone to inspired you, you need to think your situation because you are going to try to make it better by the way you think is the right decision for you.

Another example that I think of is, that we are humans and we are going to make mistakes and the people needs to learn from their mistakes, they can be many ways of trying to inspired a person but there times were you do not even think of someone to inspired you.

When people think of a inspiration or a motivation to do something they do not realize that they probably have been though the same situation but everyone is different, things may work for that person but that does not mean that it can benefit you, it should just be to see it as an example and try to make it better for you and get the positive things.

Sometimes it is just an coincidence that they have gone throng the same situation, and they feel identify not necessary inspired, it can also be a way to see how people can have many different ways to handle a situation, like what did I did that that person handle it different than from what I went through if it was the same situation, what can a make different if that situations happens again.

Is that there times that they feel touch by the way there life, or situation is similar to someone who when throng the same situation, it can be inspired by the way that they went throng the same problems, feel identify with something that happened to a friend, a family member, or them self. There are times that just by the action that someone can know, can feel, can think they way they felt in that situation, can be so influence by them, for knowing that you have not been the only one that went though that.

But it can be helpful to have someone that can inspired some one with there experience, sometimes people do not know what else to do they feel like there the only ones that have gone through the same situation, and a inspiration of a person can help them feel that they have someone who has been through that and that if they did it they can do it. It can also just be in there head that they think they need someone as an example just to be better or to feel confident with them self.

There always going to be good or bad moments sometimes you experience something that can make them be that person who inspires, I think it can definitely inspired someones action. A behavior can influence others, but everyone has different ways to think and it is not necessary if they watch someone doing a positive or negative thing will influence them is all in they way they want to act, the kind of person they are and the way they think. But it is a good thing to inspired other and make them look what you have been trough and be a part f a influence that someone can be touch or identify by your life ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
92CD1BD0C18F,"A good attitude is one of the most important things in life, because when you talking or do something with the best attitude you can see how everything is going great, and people feels good and comfortable with you. In the same time, it can open a lot of doors for you, and it can be a good opportunity for be a successful.

On the other hand, people believe that have a good attitude all the time is not a good idea, because some people will make use you, but most of the people who think like that don't have a success life; most of that people in the future feel depressing, feels like they don't do nothing with you life, they are not sucessful, and is something that every person needs thing about, you need prove that you can do it, that you can be a professional, and that you are more than people thing of you, because you need show people that is nothing imposible in life, that all your goals and dreams can makes real.

For example, a person work in a restaurant and you have a good attitude with the customers, you make them feel like in home, not waiting too long for their drinks and food, you will show them that you really happy for have them in there; in the other side, a person who works in the restaurant, don't smile to the customer, make they feel uncomfortable, and don't care about their drinks and food they don't going back to the restaurant or don't choice you for be their waitress, because you don't have a good attitude with your customers.

Also, make yourself a successful person, a person who the people want to talk, a person who a company want to you for work there, a person who do all ther goals and dreams, and a person who love himself, because you got love yourself, respect yourself, and try your best every single day, that is really impotant in your life. The attitude make you go for the best or wrong way, the best give you the best opportunity for a successful person; however, the bad give you the the work in where you do feel good, and where the best part of your day is when you go to the bathroom and use you phone for a couple minutes, when you got to life for check to check, that is the life of people who think the attitude is no the key of success, everyone don't reserve that, they reserve be happy, and have a good life with the people they love.

Is the same way in shool, talking about teacher and students, ""respect if you want respect back"", most of the students always have attitute with their teacher, they never respect them, but they want respect, a good attitude in school is the best thing we can do, because the teacher will help you more if they see you respect and really want to work, you are the person who need good grades, if you have a good attitude you will se the process in your life, in your classes, and your home. Also, in home, their parents need show and teach their kids that the attitude is the key of life, that they need have a good attitude if they want to be a good person in the future, that they want to be a professional, and be better person everyday, they will think on that, they will ask themselves why their parents try teach them that the attitude is important, and they will tray to have a good attitude for be a successul person.

In conclusion, the attitude is the key that will open all the doors you want, thats no matter what problems you have, when you do something you need doing with the best of you attitude, all is going to be perfect when you got a good attitute with people and with yourself. Try and see how your life is going for a straight way. They will enjoy their life, be happy with themselves and with the people around them, is all about how you acting, how you express yourself, and the way you talking with people, every person need make a different and show to everyone that the attitude is important to life, they will learn if the see that most of the people is doing it, try to make a different and see how everythinh is change for you. All is based on you.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
1A56FC79C084,"Positive attidude is key to success in life. This should the people who have a good attitude can be help the society to improve, and I agree with this statement but most people have a bad attitude and they need to change, because if they have positive attitude they can be have a good life with the family, better in the job, and can be to improve the life of the others person.

The people who have positive attitude if good with the family to improve a condition society, or help to the change they attitude. For example, the majority of the person does not have patience with the childrens, or the familty and least the society. For this many of the people need to improve they attitude, and outgrow the bad desicion they take in the life. Because if they have a bad attutude they can not help the family, or the other person when they needy. nevertheless many of them attempt change the attitude because they know the change it correct for have a better life with the family and the society.

If the people have a good attitude can better in the jod, when make the work with the other people, or when a customer make a question and can be reply with a smile and kindly. For example, in many jod some employee have a bad attitude because when someone asking a question this people reply irate, and the customer irete too, for the attitude of the employee. This should that people need to have patience not only with the customer, or family need to have a positive attitude with everyone. However, if employee have patience, and some customer go in with the bad attitude and speak very bad the employee can contain and respond the same manner. Truly, the people need learn to control the attitude for can be better in the jod.

A person who have a good attitude can be change the other people life, because if helping to take better decision in the school, jod, or treat the improve the attitude with others. For example, in the school the teachers try to change the attitude of the students can be more better, and taht they respent others teachers and students. This should that teachers want to the students improve they life, because when they can be adults that have a better attitude, can be take better decision. After they graduate they can be work in a good jod has positive attitude, respent the customer, help their family with they needy, and have a good condition society. In theory, the people need to have a person who have a positive attitude for be better.

Positive attidude is key to success in life. Can be improve the relathionship with the family, or the society. Many of them has a good job because they respent the boss, customer, and the others employee. Have a good attitude change the life of many people get a better future.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
2B66CE2870AD,"John Lubbock is a British naturalist and politician that wrote a quote saying ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make"". When saying this you have some opinions about it because your past can also make up your character and who you might become later on in the future. Why should we let your character take control of us, we have most of the control by the actions we take in our life. For example your parents were very abusive, and somehow your going to be that way to no its going to make you stronger and built your character up more then it was before. We have a choice to make up our character like some people will say ""oh shes mean'', or ""why wont she share'' and its not her character maybe its her personality. You yourself built up your character and no one has to like it it but only you because at the end of the day all you have is yourself nobody else which is better then having someone judge you. No one can judge a book by its cover until they get to know who you really are and where you came from,your character can built you up and leave a legacy behind and you wont even know it because people will be proud of how you built your character up and ask ""how is she so strong ?"", ""how did she grow up to be independent?"". Once you tell them how strong you are and how your doing and the steps you took theyll be proud of you, because only you have control of how you can find your character traits.

No one can really know for sure what makes up their chachater just by saying ""oh yea I've done it before"" Lets say someone in your family died because of their sickness and you spend all those days being depressed and in denial that they are gone but guess what ? You are going to built yourself up and make them proud of whop they raised and who stood by their side and everyday your going to try and make every second count just to make them see how great your handling everything even if sometimes you might get sad here and there but,your still pushing through which is making your character stronger then your seeing it yourself. There are so many times in everyone life were they doubt themselves and want to give up because they think they arent capable of doing something but when youve realized from what you've accomplish the world doesnt seem so scary anymore, your brain will trick and say to you that you cant do it thats impossible and all these negative saying but, why should you focus on that so much thats not getting you through life its just bringing you down and you know that your character isnt meant for that its to push you and get you through all these brick walls that life throws at you only you can knock them down. So dont stop yourself from making a choice you know is right go with your gut and let your heart show you the ways dont let nothing in life stop you from what people think is impossible make it possible stand yourself out, make your character stand out because you are different no matter what.

Your life isnt a pick and choose its what you think is best and fits for you so the saying goes ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make"", its your life have fun with it and make everything you do in life built up your character. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
F73B27B9A443,"I think playing soccer it's an enjoyable activity.

To begin with, when you play soccer there are two teams. Each team has to work together to win. I think soccer is a fun activity to play, because you can learn how to work in teams . In my opinion it helps you improve your friendly skills. Soccer helps you on how to work in teams. I've seen some famous soccer players on TV play. At first when they join a team they don't get along with the rest. But when time goes by they start working as a team. It helps them talk to others and work as one team.

Also, when you play soccer you have to think what you're going to do next. So soccer helps you improve your thinking skills. Most people are not good at thinking fast. It would be helpful for them to play soccer. It can help you think of new ideas. maybe in an emergency it might help you think faster on what to do. it can also help you develop new ideas. It makes you pick the best choices you have and what to do with them. Playing a sport it's going to help you in the future, even if you think it's not.

Finally, soccer is a fun sport to play, because it helps you run around and exercise. It can help you stay healthy and stay in shape. Nowadays people don't like to play sports. They just be in their house watching TV shows,playing video games, or just doing nothing. People focus too much on the internet that they forget how to play sports and do fun stuff. I think that people should go outside and try something new while you can. Some people regret not playing any sports when they were younger. If you play this sport it's going to help you stay healthier and stay active.",4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
3F1ED9A56002,"The one thing students shouldn't have are phones. Why?

It is because students in different country always use their phones for my reason

The first reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of social media. What is social media that you might be asking? Well social media is where people can comment on pictures or video. The one that i should add to that is that students everyday will always go on their phone and posted a picture or a video of them self or with someone.

The second reason why students shouldn't phones because they might have download something that could get them hacked or giving information to someone that they don't know on the internet. The third reason why students should have phones because sometimes people can get bullied on the internet which the term is called cyberbullying. What is cyberbullying that you might be asking? Cyberbully is another form of bullying, but it is on the internet. The third reason why students shouldn't have a phone because some students will sometimes look on their phone without looking at where they are going. Some students got them killed because of that reason. So I suggest to not use your phone while you are walking across the street. The fifth reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of you posting a picture of you in a different country. Well that is risk because you could get robbed. How do you even get robbed first of all that you might be asking? Well you post a picture of you in a different country and that is giving the robs more of a chance to rob your house. The sixth reason why students shouldn't have a phone because they might prank call some local fast food restaurant. If you prank call the police, you will get yourself in trouble for that reason which many people in different country prank call the police for funny reason and also bad reason. The seventh reason why students shouldn't have a phone because it could explode because you are using all the time. If you are using it none stop, then it will explode on you so I suggest that you should use it for 2 hours or so. The last reason why students shouldn't have a phone because of how addicting it is to everyone.

That is the reason why students shouldn't have a phone",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
1B4C8AD95EB5,"""Unless you do something beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow up.""

I actually agree with this, because some people are just stuck with what they do , and they don't want to try new things; they are just so used to what they have been doing for years, so they are kind of afraid of doing something new. It's just like making new friends in school. Kids are really used to their friends that they rarely talk to new students. This might apply to Ralph's words because some people don't really want to change their routine, or because they dont really wanna change their life style at all.

Another example but a little more personal would be me, I love riding my bike, I feel like I could ride it for hours without getting tired, I tried to do skateboarding for a couple months but I ended up going back to ride my bike, because I was already used to be riding my bike so I stopped trying to learn how to do skateboard.

I would say that it's like a feeling of being afraid because we think about it, we think about it's pros and cons and we also try to adjust our schedules to see if we have time to do something that's not in our routine already or if we can just replace it for something that we already know how to do. I feel that to succeed in life we have too be willing to try and or to do things that are new for us like a new type of sports, a new hobby, even a career as long as we are interested on them.

Where I'm from Eni Ayuwoki means ""do and get stronger"" back there people use to believe that if you do more than one thing that is helpful not only for you, but for everybody in your community you would be the most important and recognized person in the area.

So in conclusion for me that makes sense because I dont really enjoy having the same routine every single day, I like to switch between activities to keep my mood up. I don't think anybody likes to do the same thing over and over again.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
8B4A210026AD,"Well I think an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is with your family and friends making some hamburgers, hot dogs, carne asada, tacos, and barbacoa. Play games like soccer, football ride a bike, make running races with your friends, or baseball, play music but not so loud because the police may come, invite you son/daughter boyfriend/girlfriend and their parents to come to the park, maybe bring some snacks for the afternoon. Spending time outdoors with your family and friends is like having a camping day, is there is a river that you are allowed to fish, it will be a great idea to go fish and catch some fish to eat them, but the most important thing is to have fun with all your friends and family. To admire how beautiful is the nature, to forget all your problems while listening to the sound of the birds reconnect with you family and to remember how important is to the love of your family and friends, Because some people don't have family and friends and there are all alone that's why is so important how much the people around you that appreciate you so much and you have to be so thankful for that. In the night you can make fire to put mash mellow to the fire and than eat them with cookies one on top and the other one on the bot on and while eating the mash mellow the people can make a large group to tell scary story maybe some jokes but the best at the end the best part of being outdoors is the you are having fun fun with your friend and family, but also you are breathing fresh air from the nature. Community parks, state parks, and national parks are very important for the community because is a place where someone can have fun while their are with their friends, with their boyfriend/girlfriend, or with their wife/husband you can make a party, you can go run, walk with your dog or just take a walk yo relax your brain and refletionate and to forget about all your problems for just a moment and I think parks are place that we have to take care of because thats where are the home of some birds animals and plants to grow. ",2.0,2.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
6586DF43A92D,"I agree with British Prime Minister Winston Churchill when he said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Because we are all failures, but we all succed in life, if we work hard. Success is not going to come to us as esay as pie "" we go to success"". To go to success we have to be failures in a consistent matter but we learn from being a failure, to fix our mistakes. Knowing that we want a better future and that we want to be successful in many things such as in school, work, sports and many other things we have in life ,that we want to become successful gives us enthusiasm eventhough if fail to do good at moments. Trying hard and keep tryin till you reach success helps us to keep our enthusiasim.

Being successful in school well help us in our daily life. We will go from failure to failure without the loss of enthusiasim. We know that by being successful in school we are going to have many opportunities in life. Being a failure is not bad, it makes us strong to keep trying more and more. To graduate from high school we all need to pass a certain amount of SOL. Sometimes we pass the SOL some times we dont,Thats what leads us to success because we are going from failure to failure but with enthuisasim ,since we keep trying and trying till we pass the SOL. Because we know that passing the SOL is leading us to success and that we have to work hard and go to success because its not going to come to us if we loss our enthusiasim to keep trying.

Work can make us go from failure to failure ,but enthusiasim well take us to success. Being successful in work may be hard that it might make us feel down or even make us feel like giving up. But always working hard and with alot of enthusiasim will help us succeed and acomplish many things such as getting a higher payment and getting a better employment can be possible if we always work hard towards success and with enthusiasim. Keeping enthusiasim is good because it doesnt only helps you to be motivated to keep working hard towards your goal / Success, but it helps your peers as well since your transmitting them the good vibe and enthusiasim. Others well succed too since your transmitting the good vibe/ enthusiasim to them they will be inspired by you.

Playing a sport is not easy. Alot of practice and dedication is required to because successful in a sport. Becoming successful in a sport will take you from being a failure and to a failure once again . But if you really want to succed in that specific sport that you like ,you will have to try and keep trying with enthusiasim. Trying with enthusiasim willl help you become successful in that sport that you like and that you have been practicing with your dedication and enthusiasim.

Others may say that "" Success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasim"". People say this because they dont try as hard, if they get things wrong at first they give up. People wotn try to work hard and go to success they just give and wait for success to come to them (THATS NEVER HAPPENNING!!!). People also say this ("" success consists of going from failure to failure with loss of enthusiasim"") because they find it impossible that enthusiasim gives you the strength to keep trying.

Since they are the ones who are the failure that wont work with the enthusiasimto succeed.

Being a failure is not bad. Working to success with the loss of enthusiasim just because we fell a couple of times is bad. Because if we dont work to success and lose our enthusiasim we will never succed in anything we will just live our daily life as a failure. We are all failures but if we work hard we will become a better failure, A failure that succeed in life not a failure who just gives up and loses its enthusiasim. Working to go to success with enthusiasim will help you accomplish your goals and also it will inspire others. Others will also get the same energy as you and will work towards success with enthusiasim. A failure is what makes us strong and successful we just have to give that failure enthusiasim to keep trying and to succeed.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
CFD0D13D3180,"Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill got the concept that ""success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."". Many people failed and successed in life. Some people learn by their own mistake, fail is part of growth. Others, feel like to fail is being a loser and cannot admit their defeat from a battle. In other words, they have no modesty. Success consist to not give up on your goals, to not leave your dreams from a simple mistake; to not describe yourself as a coward.

Many people failed during their career, even the most professionals, but they kept trying. It may be that to fail bring some issues of closed minds, fears, etc. For example, There is a doctor that knows the hard work to finally done with college plus to achieve what you'd love to be. This doctor studied for 7 years, this is a huge and long way of his career. As you know doctors never stop studying because the technology changes every year. Therefore, the start is not easy as, others, thought because the first stage of college, it may be the hardest stage than the others. Some people fail the first test, or the first semester so they prefer to abandon their studies than do better in college. This doctor have failed on the way of his career, but prefered to ask for help instance of giving up. The importance of failing is to learn and the importance of learning is to success in life. Above this, a 15 years old guy used to fail in High School and this student was down-hearted, but the family supported him without criticize him. It was not easy because some are not smart enough, but this 15 years old guy put a little bit of effort and now he is a doctor in Spain.

Failure to faliure is the key of succes. Besides, Failure gives you more knowledge of your mistake and opens your mind to discover news to things to learn. For example, a cook is trying to do new dishes from differents cultures. Now, the cook wants to try peruvian dishes because the gastronomy of Peru is one of the most populars in the world. Also, this would be a benefit because will gain more money. By trying these new dishes, the cook fails because most of the customer did not like the food plus received many critical comments. As many cooks receives many critical comments, they decide to abandon the kitchen and do something different. This cook enjoyed when he commited a few or big error; to do better next time. Learned to do better the new peruvian dishes, listened to the rest of people and finally, succeded in the kitchen.

Some feel ashamed to fail, they usually compare themselves to others because life is a competition and this may bring issues of insecurity. That is one of the biggest problems that many people have in these days. If there are 2 lawyers that wants to face a case of an innocent and important person, who is involved, in a serious problem. The best lawyer would defend the case and will be recognized as one of the best, would get inmmediatly many jobs for being recommended. On the other hand, if a lawyer fails a case would not get inmmediatly many cases often. Therefore, the lawyer knows that to fail have a positive side of learning, gives you more skills of how to face any case.

In conclusion, as Churchill said that to fail is the start to success. As many people fail, they learn. Some people are not smart enough, but they put effort of what they want to do. Even though they fail, they keep trying because is the ability of their knowledge. People that are already professionals, they make mistakes and enjoy of their mistakes because they learn more of their speciality. Finally, even if you want to be the best of something, do not feel ashamed because life is a competition and do not closed your mind of making a few mistake. ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
C4B53350B704,"write to a covince a manager of a bussiness to select you visit and leanr about the work that interest you?

Explored on a role of computer is just a challange for me. This opportunity it will allow me to fallows my dream, goal and future for my baby's boy. I t may be sound selfish but, I will demostrated what I am capable. At thise time it may be many dreamer writting this letter, but some might not be so serious like the way I am because having many reason to demostrated this company to select me to go and explore what I like, it will no be a worst desiccion. Knowing some skills on computers in most factories are ussing technology and always have someone that is expert is always a good deccision. A energetic person fun, and responsable best seller. Responsible and what I do working in the same place for many year, deserved a change, schools who have this kind of opportunities are the greatest.

Technologiest is growing and growind days by days, and the most important companies now have greatest employees who are master on computers. I was studied computer skills for 6 years ,and them got my degree. After that I decided to go back to college and i got a master on how to designe web site ; during that time Five students were nominated to a competition that who write faster will wom a medal, I was the winner typing 200 letters for second. I also know how to created web sites, working in many different kind of programs.

In this days is hard to find a person who is friendly, energetic,good actituded and also who like to share with other. I considered my self one of those people,I experince my self already working with costumer before that I was not interesting on computers I was working on a salon cutting hair and I enjoy dealing with people sometimes is really hard but you get usually with them if you know the costumers better. I think i will be a pretty good seller if you are looking for one just contact me and give the opportunite that I need. Therefore if you not trust me I can demostrated you what I can do you can se me how hard I work

Working in the same place for 12 years make me a responsible employee. Loving what I do and see the people who are proud of me make really happy they love my job because they know that I do it with passion. Even if I dont know something I will learn how to do it and it doens't matter how long is going to take I know at the end It would be a reward. Being a yound girl when I started my first job, I can not forget that theb manager told my boss she can not do it she is too yound let her go, it make me really sad because I know that Ineed a chance to shows them first, and now they said we will make a big mistake if we let you go that why I think deserved this opportunity

I might be wrong in this possition but, is never late to tries something new and I know this is my biggest opportunity for my future. Therefore I want to show the world how the Industries is growing by using computers, internet. The technology now make a big impact in today's world, it is important that everyone know how to use computers in our future all companies and jobs may be requiered of that use of computer and I hope I would teach many people how if they decided to choose me for the program.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
ECCAD55DE7BA,"I agree that we accomplish more if we are always doing something. I think it does because it helps us learn on what to do. We can teach other the same way as well.

We have other people helping us in different ways. For example, we can teach them different ways on doing things they don't feel comforable and that they would feel conforable if they keep doing it. Although it may take time to get use to it they would have experience at the end. Also those people can teach other people. Learning new stuffs is hard but if its a good idea people should do it.

I think we can make a difference by learning new things in our lifes. For example, if there were new ways by playing video games then people should learn it. Although it can get people mad if they lose or anything else. It can be helpful to others in the world. I think they would know a lot more if they did.

We would get a lot done quicker if we had a method on it. For example, other people helping out on big protects to make it happen and work every well. Although it would need a lot of taking to one each other. It can help by not getting to one an other. Getting to know new people by doing things.

If your not doing things you won't get anything accomplish in life. For example, if you don't do well in school that can effect your life by getting a job. People can stop being lazy and do their work. They can ask for help if they need it. If they ask they would have a lot accomplish.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
4000ADB040FE,"Introduction: technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. people can check out books, shop and play game without speaking to another person.

Reason:

I think the people cant do nothing without help because is necessary to have help from others. people who dont us technology I think is negative because without technology the people can do nothing for example they cant to have contact with other or for a jobs. I believe the people who use the technology can to be positive because can do anything, how have a job or the technology can go to be negative to because somebody use the technology, how in her house, for example; the child can cause a problem with they eyes, or another thing more.

I think people cant do nothing without help of other, because is necessary to have help from others, or help of the technology. The technology can help at the people for a job, but the technology can effect to the family to, for example; at the child, to use technology is good, but I think we can put a limit for her effect to have. The effect have the technology with the family is can cause a problem with other or for a job, because someone use the technology.

I think without technology people dont dont can to have a job because somebody use technology for therby the technology, so I can to be positive, Howeve the technology have effect at the people and help at the people with a job, and for to have contanct to with another people.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
F47F7676912A,"I met a friend online from Generic_City, therefore I went to visit him and learn a lot about his culture. In this paper I will argue about that the use of technology haves a positive effect on peoples lives and human contact. In my opinion technology haves a positive effect on people lives because they can find new jobs, meet new people , and communicate with other people that you are nervous to talk in person.

Having a hard time finding a job? Theres a lot of jobs available online and you can sign up online without going to the store and ask for a job application. If your sick and can't go to work, therefore you can contact your boss online and ask for a day off and avoid getting fired by not coming to work. If you need to talk to your boss and he is not in work you can send him a online message. You can see that technology helps your job to be more easier without having any problems.

Dont you feel bored knowing only about your culture? You can meet people from different culture online and learn more about there style of life. Technology helps you vision other peoples thoughts and opinion from another country. Technology is the glue that helps a lot of people from different culture work together and hate each other less. people can learn how to fix there mistakes by seeing other people online from different cultures instead of fixing it on your own tradition way that may be harder or useless. For example i learn how to fix a car much more easier by following my friend method from Generic_City.

I havent seen my family for six years and only talk to them by sending text messages. Im shy and nervous to communicate with them in person. Technology helps you built that confidence to talk with other people from around the world or people that you care for. It Doesnt matter if you only communicate with them sending only online messages. At least you are expressing your feelings your thoughts and your opinion to your loves one or your friend that you are shy to talk in person.

Some say technology is ruining human contact with other people in person . But they are wrong because technology helps you to meet new people, find a job, and communicate with people that your are nervous to speak with. I hope one day people around the world understands that without technology we wouldnt have the diversity we have in this world today.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
D0A5FF29C338,"First impression counts the most and it's impossible to change. A person point of view on someone can never changed because of the many thoughts that go throught the mind, after getting to know that person because no one would want a friend like that. Having a serious face, not taking care of yourself and dressing wrong can lead to having a bad impressions, thats when people think of you in a different way and get things wrong that are not true,but due to the bad first imprsssions it change everything.

Having a serious face all the time can mean lots of things, say for example you're life is horrible, your ready to go fight someone or it can mean I hate everything around me, thats not what makes a good first impression and it makes it impossible to change that. People now days don't want to be friends with someone who is always mad and is ready to fight someone, and because of that particular time you had serious face it led to you not having a girlfriend or a friend that was going to be with you for the rest of your life. First impressions can be hard to change and its impossible because once you had that one chance you waste it all due to that one serious face that everyone was intimidated and now people don't want to talk to you because all it would've took was a smile.

Then,not taking care of yourself can make people not wanting to talk to you. Hygine can can change everything and lets people know about who you are and it makes people wanting to talk to you. Having a bad odor can lead to people running away,can make you look like you just don't care about your'self why would you care about others. Hygine is really important if you want to impress because otherwise it would make a bad impressions leading you not having friends or a girlfriend because no one wants to be around a person who smell bad and doesn't take care of themselves. The smilling comes in quick too, because you have a friendly convertion with people around you and people wnat to be your friends and it may not be because you don't smile. Your breath also counts becasue people like to have a conversation without having to smell what you ate for dinner or what you had for lunch, so is important to saty up with all those things beause people take notice of all those small things and the see that is woth talking to you.

Therefore having the proper clothes for the proper time can change the way people look at you and it can make you have friends and be known for dressing good and people now days want friends who dress up good, for example is the homocoming dance and you go with your friends and you're wearing jeans and shirt and you have your friend all dress up for the occasion and theres you now no one wants to take a picture with you or dance with, dressing the proper way can make a difference on how people see you and is somehting that is a proven fact. When my satrted working as a chef people in the streets would see that her clothes would be all dirty with food stains it would make people think that they don't know how to cook and what is funny that she was making lots of money making food for important people and people was thinking of a different way when she was making more money than the people judging her, but when she started working as a nurse people would respect her for the way she was dress, eventhought she was not making the same amout of money, but people people saw her differently. Those all cahnges that you make in your clothes can make a difference and they don't have to be expensive of from a popular brand because all it is clothes is just how you use them and what makes it good that the clothes can be cheap but how you use them for the proper ocassion can make a difference.

In conclusion having a serious face,not taking care of yourself and the way you dress up can make people have diffent thoughts of you. When being approche or even if they don't talk to you they will see that your not worth talking to and after they know who you are and your way of life style can make people hard to change that first impression of you. All this small things can chenge your life because I have been through those situatioins where people look at you differently and it makes it hard to change someones thought of you and that first impression that is important. Having a diffent mentality can change everything and peoples way of thinking.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
E883A8265183,"Is working with a group is Benefits? In my opinion working with a group is better then working by yourself,becuase when we work as a group we can finish our work faster then working alone furthermore in group work you can make new friends,you can learn how to work as a team because in group work you have to make sure you are being nice to your team mates and you must listen to everyone else point of viewe in group work people you learn how to respect others.

Working with a group have more benefits then woking alone becuase if you have a big project to do and your teacher allows you to work as an group but you choose not to join any group and decide to work alone so this will be hard for you to complete the project on time and the people who join the group can easily complete the project before you because they can help each other this is the biggiest benefit of working with a group.

In group work all the members of the group have to do equal work and this way they can do their part of the project very easily and if they work alone they are not abel to work that well because they have no one else to gave them advice or any kind of help therefore group work is always benefit.

Some people might think that group work should not be allow but in my opinion group work is the best way to study becuase this way you learn about how to be nice to some one and how to be responsibel for your work becuase in team work you always have to do some part of the work which your team memebers told you to do and you all can share your thoughts about your work and can get better grade on the project Group work always gives you benefits.",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
7E109A7AC169,"The first thing to consider, is that one person is not going to behave the same way as someone else, and all people are not going to act the way as they did when they were kids. Depending on the way people are raised they may change their behavior over time. If you are brave enough you can choose who you want to be, and you can guide yourself. Everyone is going trough something at this moment, and these are not always good things. People may experiment terrible incidents that are going to change their life forever.

These events are just going trough your life, and sometimes there is nothing you can do to make it different. All these things may change you character behavior. Anyone's personality is going to change if they are not aware of what they are doing, and these actions will lead you to live horrible moments. At this point you no longer have control over your actions and just doing what you want, maybe not knowing what your character has turned into.

On the other hand; will realize what is going on around their live as they grow up, and they are not afraid to know what is happening, they will use this problems to become stronger. As time passes; they will go trough different issues, experiment different changes, but they just don't pay attention to it, and do what they want. Those people usually have control over their life and decide whether they want to change or not. A lot of people around them will try to hurt make them feel different.

For some people is easy to just not care about anything and just care about themselves, it could be a good thing because not anyone is going to make you feel bad. Over time they become smarter, stronger and tougher, but they also know if they need to change something in their life. They were just raised in a different way and a different place that is why they will act different to the rest of people because they also know what is best for them, when something bad is happening they know how to handle it.

These situations may change anybodies personality and eventually they will become a complete new different person. it just depends on the actions they choose to do and the way they see the world. it could be because of tragedies, maybe many bad people around them, they could change if they wanted to. There is many possibilities and reasons for people to change and it will happen at any given point and when they realize it, they are completely different.

It just depends on the way of your thinking, only you can decide if you want to be different, some people may have a weak or strong mind. Some situations are just defined as drastic events that could happen to you and there is nothing you can do about it if you wanted to make it better, only you know if you can handle it. You can confront it or let it change you. Some people will form their own character, or because they don't know what to do anymore. As log as you are aware of what you are doing, you will know what is best for you.                                       ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
7445CD7E0985,"According to the text I think is a good idea that students can graduate from high school in three years because if you graduate from high school very early you are going to get a lot of opportunities to be successful in life, I also think that if someone decide to start working contraction or hard works like that early, three years later that person going to get a lot of experience and money and if you decide go to college or some like that when you graduate from college you going to be young and ready for life, that's how a lot of people became millinery, because the must time you spend doing something that's more experience that you going to get, and when you got experience and you know what you doing, and what you want you life going to be better and easier in the future.

People also think that it is a bad idea graduate from high school in three years because they said that is to early, and you don't going to be smart enough to be successful in life but I said "" that's wrong because we still have to go to summer school and take extra classes in summer school and you have to be very smart because you need to pass all you classes you cannot fail any class because if you fail one you need to take it in summer school again and that's going to be a problem so if you want to graduate early you also have to take classes online so you're going to be very busy so they should be ready for the next level.

I know someone that he is from Dominican Republic but he leaves in Generic_City, I went to one of his barbershop and i ask him

"" what did you do to be so successful? he told me this "" when i was 16 years old I graduate from high school' then i ask ""how you graduate so early and he told me that he take classes in summer school and he take classes online"" i said that' s good ""keep telling me how you became succesfull "" and he told me that after he graduate he went to college to take classes the barbershop 3 years later he was only 19 years old so he have to work for one year if he want to open his own busyness then after that he open three barbershops in Generic_City he said if you put you best effort to the thing you, and life going to get better everything.

Another thing is that not everybody make it,

is hard but i have i tip for those type of people never give up just do you best and put you hurt to it and put you best effort because at the and your mom and dad don't going to be there to pay for you food you going to be the man in that house so that's why everybody need to work hard everyday if they one to be successful in life.

In conclusion the best thing for student in graduate early because the must experience you get doing something the must money you going make and for me life is about perseverance, progress, and be successful because if you don' got nothing nobody going to respect you, and you need to help the people that cannot make it because people fail sometime life is not that easy for some people is you got the opportunity to do it good in life take that opportunity.               ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
2358C2CE9966,"I am agree. Why? The attitude it's the best option for have a good and happy opportunities of the rest of the life.

One, because if you have a positive attitude you can make many things and do too, for example: when you go to your job the worker need to be have a good attitude, because you need to represent your job whit good things and ideas. Also, if you do your job always whit empathy your boos give you a good salary for your attitude and you can get up your position.

Second, when you have a positive attitude in your life you have a better life like, emotional, spiritual and peaceful for you. Then, if you put a positive attitude in your house never will be have a bad things around your family.

Third, if you think many ideas with a good attitude this ideas will be do reality. So, in conclution I can say that all the people need to have a positive attitude in his life, because you can have many opportunities for a better life.              ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
597618D3F66C,"Can more hours in school help conserve energy?. The way we can save energy is by going to school for 4 days , and being in school for 2 extra hours. I think it's a bad idea for the school to adopted the idea. This idea can make it harder for students that have things after school.

The disadvantages of adding two extra hours to school can cause a lot of problems for the student ,and the teachers. Especially for students that have jobs and, have activity after school like sports and clubs. Also the student will be tired after school and they will have less time hang out with friends after school .The teachers can also have problems because they can possibly live in a different county and they might need to leave earlier to pick up their kids from school. Either way i think it's a bad idea because it could ruin everyone daily routines.

The advantage to be in school longer is that you would be able to finish work on time. Have more time on test and quiz. Will be able to learn more things in class and get more time in a class. Therefor, teacher would rarely give out homework. Students would be able to take more class ,and even be able to graduate faster because we are in school longer. Also we will have four days a week in school ,so that's means we have three day off so we can get some rest. We might be able to get out of school faster became the amount of time we are in school.

Well I still think it's still a bad idea for school to start later because a lot of problems for students , and the teachers. I think the students won't like the idea because some students have work after school ,or they have to pick up their siblings from school. Or even have sports after school. Some teachers possibly live thirty-minutes away and they might need to get their kids ,and they might need to go to the store and get food for dinner. So that's why I think it's a bad idea to adopt the idea that the business is having because it's different between students and grown ups. Our job right is basically school because are there for seven hours a week. So i hope the school doesnt con stir this idea for school.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
3BDF36560245,"In my opinion having contact using the technology they bing a lot of benefits in our's life . Im agree with this because is helpfull and you can do many thing in two minute you can take the computer and do what you need to do.

First:

benefits is to do is pay may bill in the phone, sometime you don't have a time because you working full time and you need to pay a bill,

when is time to go a lunch you can take your phone and call or search a web cite and to do it. is very important because you can do everything where ever you are.

Secondly: in this time the tecnology it's became important you can see in the web cite or in the phone you can unloading one app like Amazon they have a option to shop online it is more easily to shopping in your home. Other thing is my history, one time it's happen to me for my mistaken i'm drive in

Ezzi Pass and the company send a bill in my house then i'm search how to pay in the web cite and im do it . It is easy to me to pay this is the big benefits bring the tecnology on peoples lives.

The third: your checking accout you can check your balance how much money you have left in the phone and to do many tasks for exmple in may life I have class in the school and all may course is in web cite i'm using the computer it is usefull to me doing many tasks or home work.

In conclusion: the tecnology on the life of people is very importan and bring more skill, helpfull ,usefull to do something and doing more easy life, in this time the technology give a lot advantage in our's life .",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
FA55AEEF8F9C,"Alot of people use cell phones In classrooms which I think It's a good Idea. Cellphones are use for emergencies and educational purposes. In my opinion students sometimes are given alot of work, where they have to find Information on their textbooks, or dictionary that takes almost half of the class. when they can just look it up on their phone and take about 10 to 15 minutes. Another thing is to think about are that students sometimes forget their homeworks at home and is worth half of your grade. and by having their phones with them, they can called their parents and asked them to drop up their homework at school. cellphones should be allowed in classrooms, students would be less stressed about school. They won't have to worry about carrying a heavy textbook, when they can just do their work on their cellphones. which it means, more work done and less time wasted on going page to page looking for the right answers.

Now let's talk about having a cell phone In classrooms In case of an emergnecy. One reason I believed they should allowed cellphones In classrooms because In case of a lockdown. If a student sees the person, but the police does not know how he looks like or has no idea where his at. the student can call 911 and give details of the suspect. In addition to my other reason, Students should be allowed to have their cellphone In case of an emergency call. what If something happens at home. For example, A students sibbling gets sick and doesn't stop crying until he sees one of his family. So the babysitter calls his parents, but his parents can't do anything because they can't leave work or they'll get fired. The parents would have to call the student, now the student have to leave school and take care of his sibbling.

In conclusion, I see no reason why students shouldn't be allowed to use cellphones In classrooms. schools would be more easier and safetier. you may never know what could happen and a cellphone can be a huge impact. It can save someone's life. so I think student's should be allowed to have cellphones In classrooms. sometimes students read a whole book and they dont understand it so they stop doing their work. while you can use your phone and find all the things and learn instead of reading a whole book and find most of the things you were looking for but not learning at all. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
4BBB3BA80E0E,"Hello my name is Generic_Name. Im grateful to be writing this letter to you, i hope i am fortunate to get picked to visit and learn from you and your staff. Cyber security is a career i would like to pursue as i get older, it would be a dream come true to come work with you and your staff. Being able to hack for a living would be amazing.

Cyber security interest me ever since i got introduced into hacking. I did little hacks like into my brothers computer or jail braking my phone, Little things like that. I would like to one day work for the FBI ,and help protect important information from other hackers. If i were to get selected to come visit and learn ,it would one day would help me in the future. i hope to make it big one day and hope to work along you.

It would be great to get a feel of what it would feel like to work in that environment. i wonder what it feels like is the; place quiet, what equipment do they use, how long have they been working as a hacker. Ive never visited a FBI agency, i hope i do though to witness all of you guys in action and what you do on a daily basis. This program would because it would give me an idea of the work environment so when i get older i know what im getting into. Also it would get even more motivated to wor harder every day to make it big and work with the FBI.

I would consider my self a good a focus person and most importantly i am very patient. Im a very responsible person im evan a very hard work i always try my best evan way over on what i do. Especially when it come to computer work, i have very supportive parents but in the future i would like to make good money. Nothing would make me happier then to be a hacker for the FBI for my caree, it would be a dream come true. That is why i think i should be considered to be selected to learn from you and your fellow staff.                                                                           ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
E6CF2D3B4FA2,"Examples are what makes a readers/audiences be able to get attracted with what the reason the writer is talking about. Since I have used examples in many things things in my life, I personally think that they could help you with a topic that other people are trying to talking about. And since the question is basically asking if ""examples are good to influences people that are trying to do something or does examples are useless and are not really helpful at all?"" I said that Examples are good to influence other people. And here are the reasons why it is a good influential if you are striving for a long- term goal.

Not many reasons are able to support what you are trying to basically explain or prove. What made me think of this is because if you put a reason that isn't strong enough to even support what you are saying, then basically a reason isn't strong enough if you are trying to influence someone. Like for example, if the topic says that anyone can become famous and the reason is ""work hard and never give up."" that really isn't strong enough to influences someone that actually wants to become that type of guy. But if you put a real life example like ""this person name Generic_Name that was a low-class, lives in a 1 bedroom apartment, and makes not a lot of money. And he heard that he can become a rich person. So he was working hard and he saved up on investment. And somehow he actually became the person that he wanted to be."" that is a example that could be used if you are trying to persuade someone.

Examples can be kept as like a precious thing for people. Why this is also important is because if you actually lets say achieve something that you wanted to accomplish for such a long time. You can always remember that thing that made you kept pushing forward, and to never let down what you wanted to do for such a long time. Like for example, a person named Generic_Name made his dream become a reality; which it was to become a architect that works under a famous person. And when he had to make a speech, he remembered a women who was going through exactly the same thing he was going through. And he said that her life will be something he is going to cherish forever because her background is what made him become who he is now. Which everyone can look at for being influenced by this person right here.

Examples can actually change many peoples lives because of what they say or just their background. What made me choose this reason? well it was because for the past 16 years of my life, I have always seen many people change their lifestyle because of what people are saying to change them. Like for example, when I was in 8th grade, I had a science teacher that was really nice to everyone and respected them as if we were like his child. And all of the students asked him ""why did you decide to become a science teacher?"" And his response was ""I became a science teacher because I like teaching about sciences and the life of our society. And because of a man that i was inspired by. And everyone knows who this guy is? His name is Bill Nye The Science Guy. The reason why i choose him was because during my time when i was in collage , he was the only person that i knew that actually did science. And I wanted to watch his show. And I was amazed by all the chemicals, types of rocks, everything that has to do with science. And since that happened, i have enjoyed being a science teacher for 10 years."" And this speech shows that people will not be able to reach their goal unless you have a motivational quote, speech, or background of a famous person.

While i do think that Examples are good to influence other people that are trying to reach their goal, I still kind of personally think that there are examples that don't really help/influence people. Why I think of that is because people don't find examples of influential that aren't interesting or appealing to them at all because it's doesn't suit them. Like for example, there was a kid who wanted a game that could make him play it all the time. And he saw a commericial about a game that is coming out next week, and he was getting suprised at first, but when he saw a interview about the game, he wasn't really amazed anymore because what the game director talked about wasn't influencing other poeple at all. So there are some examples that really can't influences them. But most of the time, there are so many examples that are out there in the world that actually changed peoples lives, and their mind about something. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
1D2C46F51793,"Dear: Principal

I think that all students should perform community service.

Because if there cleaning they will not litter in the first plays.

And also that will help the community, and tutor is not so bad because they get to lernd how other students lernd. And the students how don't want to do it because its wasting there time. I think they will how have fun if they help the elementary school sports times.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
AD095F1ADE0A,"Students idea to change the school menu would benefit them a lot. This is going to help students a lot,they will focused more at school. I think it is a good idea to change to a new,healthier school lunch menu.

First of all,if students received healthier lunch, its going to help them a lot. For example, it would made students to be on task and be focused in their classes. The will help students to get good grades and to keep students active in all their classes. Changing school lunch menu will have a big impact in students, more people will start to get food and its going to help their brain to think more.

My second reason is students prefer good food than healthier food the taste nasty. In addition, mostly all students would prefer to eat regular food the is healthier. However,it doesn't have nothing to do with your body if you don't want to be fat because of the food you received, thats because you don't care about your body. Students will have to start worrying about their body not about the food they eat.

My last reason is about the benefits of receiving healthier school menu at school. For example, students will enjoy more their lunch. students would choose what to eat and students would have time to interact with theirs friends while they eat their lunch.

In conclusion, i think is a good idea for school to change the lunch menu. Students are going to focused more and students would be on task in school.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
972782BCDEA4,"According to Emerson's statement and what he wrote, which is about to be myself in a world would make me something else and it will be the greatest accomplishment. I am totally agree with his statement because there are many thing I can do well. Also, I can show to the world that being myself would make me see that I can do more than I think, I can develop many good idea about life and how to build my future making good choices, which ones will make me feel good about what I am accomplishment.

One reason why I am agree with this statement is because being myself make me feel confident about what I am doing and how I can make it better. For example, I like the way I am and being happy, I like to be a person with positive thoughts. I like to demonstrate people that I can do good and make them feel proud of me of all the thing I can accomplish by my own. It will make me get really good experiences in life which will help me to be an unique person and honest with myself.

Second reason why I am agree with Emerson's statement is because when I be myself I feel comfortable with me, I can demonstrate that being myself I can make good choices to be a better in the world, I can show many things which I would feel proud of. For example, I like to be myself when I have to present any project at school or at my job, I feel good to be myself and that way I explain it, I am confident with what I am presenting. It makes me feel honest to myself and everyone else.

Another reason why I am agree with this statement is because being myself I can develop many good ideas and I can share those ideas with everyone, I can do a good job and accomplish all what I want. For example, when I talk with somebody, I like to speak with the trust and share what I think. I like to do my job being myself because that way I would see how I am doing and what do I have to do better.

In conclusion, being myself is a good way to see what I am good in and how I can get experiences in many different thing, I can learn more about the world and learn more about me. It would make me see the world in a different way which one will help me to do the right things and also it would make be a strong person in this world.",3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
7C31C5E519FF,"Where would i want to go vist? i would want to go to vist el salvador because i want to go vist my famliy. Also i would want to go the beach . Then i would love to eat their food that they have

My one reason i want to go to el salvador ,i want to go vist my famliy because i have not seen them in 6 years and i really want to spend time with them. Also i would want to spend with my baby cousin. the reason i would spend time with him is because he's a very special kid and he's very sick i would do many things for him. After i spend time with him i would take my famliy for dinner and they would be happy that i took them out to eat.

My second reason is i would want to go to the beach because i want to see how beutiful it is over there. Also many people say it's beutiful because of the ocean. Then i would want to go to swim! Many people say that the water is very warm because it's closer to the equitor, it's not like the US the water is cold. Then after swiming i want to buy a neckless for everyone in my famliy.

My third reason is i would want to try their food that they have because people say it's amizing. I want to try their poposa because it's better then the stores. The way you they make it,is they start with corn masa, then they make a mini bowl , then you can put cheese and beans whatever you want, then you close it you put it in the pan and let it cook. The best thing about poposa when they're over fill when the cheese and beans are dripping.

These are my reason where would i go to vist. we should vist many place because we can learn somthing new. Also we should try are best to go somewhere at least the cheaps trip you can find. maybe i would be able to go to el salvador.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
280F4A13DE2B,"I think the principle should go with option of letting us use are phones during lunch and the other school brake times instead of the option of not having phones at school at all. Many of the students have there own cell phone and some students might need it for different occasion's to communicate with are family, parents, or guardian. An example would be me i needed my phone to contact my parents during are lock down that happened not to long ago, i sent them a message from my phone to tell them ""mom we are on lock down so i cant leave the school i don't know what time we will be out ill call or message you when its ok for us to leave"" that really helped me to communicate with my parents and if the principle went with the option of not having phones at school there probably wouldn't have been any way to have told my parents we were on lock down. I think going with the option of using phones during lunch is a good idea, it might even stop students from using there phones during class when there not suppose to, knowing as soon as there done with class and they leave they have time to communicate with friends or family. It can help students grades and can stop students from not paying attention to the lesson or teacher while they use there phones. Students would enjoy using there phones and knowing they don't have to hide it or get in trouble for using there phones during a break.",3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
441097905601,"Dear Principal,

I would like to tell you about how I think about doing community service. The reason I wanted to tell you about this is because I understand that some students would like to do community service and not others. In my opinion I think there should be a reason why some of the students want to do community service and not others. If the students that want to do community service can do that. If there is only a small group of people than it would not be a good way to have the work done. Please consider this and if you don't like this than it will be fine to me. My other reason is not everyone would like to pick up liter. It might not be what students want to do during there free time. I understand that your the principal of this school and not every principal would consider this opinion because you believe that everyone should do community service. I all so understand that it is very important to do community service around the school and you can learn many things from doing community service and I also like to tell you that there should be a list of places that there going to do service at.

Sincerely ,

Your student at SCHOOL_NAME",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0
8A165723DF82,"Failure Is Success

Nothing can make you stronger then failure. It make's you more success In life, even helps you to learn a life lesson, that you can do much more then what you could image to build your life and happens.

When you did something and It makes you failure don't think that why did that happened, or why did you do that although, give up that you can't solve It, you should know and everyone else that we all are strong we will not know until failure comes to you that you are much stronger and be powerful with what you have and what come's to you

Nothing Is more Important then success your life, sometimes failures and make you life hard but It can make your life more powerful, that you will trust yourself and, It will make you stronger and you will take more responsibility for your next steps. For example, my father would tells me all the time that when you get older have your on business and you need to be strong If your not strong ""failures"" can heart you so that's why you need to work so hard and be strong as will to reach your goals. Although even If you have a good life don't think that's It that you will not have any problems anymore. If you don't work hard and not be strong failure can make your life so harder

On the other hand, life is a lesson and challenge for everyone It can take a risk so you need to be strong for what ever come to you and be powerful for not any failures so to you and break you. For example, my mom would tell me life Is a lesson each day you will learn something different and you will get stronger so you don't know when and what will happen to you so mantle and physically be strong. However If you did something learn you mistake lesson to not do It again and forget the mistake.

However, It's not good to have failure some people can't handle It so they kill them self. On the other hand, failure Is good because they know how strong and powerful thy are and nothing can break you or failure you.

Being powerful and strong Is so Important so that life will change you no matter. How or why, so you should all ways learn your lesson that, why or how did failure In your success life and happiness never let anything come between you, because you will get stronger each time and better.",4.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
E52C094A1DAA,"Having good attitude can be helpful by, helping others when they have a hard time in something, and when you and I are going through tough times, you can also have a good attitue a good minset on what your doing.

A way of having a good attitude is by seeing things n the bright side of things, even though it's bad. Another reason why having a good attitude is important, is because people appreciate when someone gives them a good feeling either their sad or mad. Another reason why its important to have a good attitude is becasue you get things done properly, for an example, when you have to do a project due in two days you take your time and don't rush, you do things with a good attitude. If not your project will be at the end a mess, and you're going to be frusterated.

Having a good atitude is impotant because, you can help other when they're going trough tough times, for an example, whn my mom was sick and she was dealing with asma, we had to take her to the ER mant times. It was sad for me to see her all sick, not only that but she was pregnat and could'nrt anything because she had acid reflux. So whenever she felt sad and stressed out, I knew I had to support her and have a good attitude. By having a good attitude I had to help her with some house hold things because she could'nt really do anything.

Another reason of having a good attitude is by also having a good mindset, because when you have a good minset you can go through your tough times easly. And when you are stresse out abput something you have to have a good minset and a good attitude. For an example when I had to deal with by spine problembecause my disk was moved,I had to hae a good attitude because if I am ther complaining about my pain, it's not going to help me. So if I just relax and take rest and tak my medications then I will have a good attitude, because I know that everything will be okay.

So this is why having a good attitude is very helpful, because you can help others when they are going through tough times, or whenever you and I are going through tough times, and how it helps you succed in things.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
B794B3C07254,"It is my pleasure to take this great opportunity to express my view or opinion on the above topic; which is positive attitude is the key to success in life?.First and foremost i would like to briefly talk about the term attitude, it can be shorty defined as a good or bad conduct or manner ones shows in public or the kind of act you put up which is either good or bad. If we really take good look at how people live,attitude is the most relevant thing they mostly pay attention to, lets talk about work school.

WORK OR SCHOOL:

If we take good look at this two places, we can see or sort of attitudes aspects, either good or bad that is coming from the students,teachers and many more , showing good attitudes towards others shows how respect you are and what kind of family you came from, most people had a good relationship with others because of their good attitude they have acquire from school or at home,students with good attitude are more easily to associate themselves among others, and become very good friends , teachers really love students who always show a good attitude, sometimes too they can earn some gift from others.

HOME OR CHURCH:

This really take places in our various houses, showing good attitude to your parents or it can anyone ,mostly help to gain favors from people you might not even know they might be your futures helper, because there is a saying nobody knows tomorrow, for instance you went out and some random person ask if you can help him or her to find a place but your attitude did not let him even to ask you anymore ,but imagine some few years later came and you met such same person that ask for your assitance but your attitude was not good at all, maybe he is a manager at your dream job you have prayed to work there, so as soon as you get there you saw he is the one who is going to interview you do you think he will be willing to gave you such opportunity even though you qualified the answer is no he will find any means to let you not get that job , your bad attitude ruin up your whole life, this goes to church too,having positive attitude at church draws human being more closer to God and attract more blessings from him as well.

POSITIVE ATTITUDE AMONG INDIVIDUALS;

Last but not the least is the kind of attitude we gave among ourselves ,this has become a daily rampant that need to failure to get help from other people, imagine you had like 4 close friends but they are be asking for your help on something but some of them attitude is very pathetic , but insisted they really need your help and what you have on you can only help few of them, so would you go ahead and help those who had a negative attitude the answer may be no,because you going to help those of your friends whose had a good attitude first before you assist them too , this really tell us having positive attitude can really gave you so many opportunities or advantages.

THESE ARE SOME MERITS OF POSITIVE ATTITUDE:

1. It creates good interpersonal relationship among individual.

2. It easily to get favor from other people.

3. It always bring peace among others.

4. It really depict the kind of family you came from or the type of trained you have acquired.

THESE ARE SOME VITAL OR MAJOR REASON WHY WE SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A POSITIVE ATTITUDE;

1. B

ecause it enable individuals to always have a good name in any places they found their selves in and, it also promote economic living,

because you individuals really knows good your attitude is so therefore they will always be proud to share their issues or problems with you without been hesitate.

2. It attract blessings from God , because the bible is even against anyone who does not show a positive attitude among his or her neighbor, and can make your life been successful with the help of blessings you getting from your creator.

HOW POSITIVE

ATTITUDE HELP US IN OUR OWN LIVES;

having positive attitude really help individuals a lot because this earth we live in everything is about attitude even assuming you apply for a job and they monitor you for awhile then later realized you had a bad attitude, do you think the person who is in charge of that work will be willing to hired you the answer is no, because no one can hired someone who has a negative attitude, so imagine now you had positive attitude everything is excellent you even feel proud of yourselves you do not even care wherever you might find yourself in because your attitude is really good and it can gave you so many chances in life that you think you not even to have it, you can also become a remodel to some people , they might even look at you and learn from you , so therefore is very good to have a positive attitude and move free wherever you go , some people really pay attention to people attitudes even more than everything in this word.

CONCLUSION;

Due to time factor i would like to bring my above oppinous to an end and i am pretty sure it may be taking into consideraton and publish it for other people to have access to read and if they had to made some changes in their lives they can surely do so to it.

Thank you.                                                                                                                                  ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
DE20CFA52C1D,"What are the benefits of working with a group and working alone? I believe that working in groups helps you to have more ideas, more knowledge, because if you communicate with your group members, they'll think about different ideas to proceed the work that is getting done. Working alone sometimes helps you more than working with groups because you are responsible for your own work.

I rather work by myself because I've had bad experience working with groups. When I work in groups sometimes I'm the one that has to do all the work, and in my opinion if we are working in groups we have to help each other, communicate and share our thoughts because if we don't do that what's the point of working in groups. However, I think working in groups is important because you can come out of your comfort zone and be free to share your thoughts with your group members, and you can make friends too. For example, I'm a very shy person, it's rare the times I talk in class but when I'm in a group I have to talk, share my thoughts with my group members and communicate with them.

Reasons why I prefer working alone are: I focus more doing my own work, it's only my responsibility not others, I have to worry to turn it in on time, if i get a bad grade it's going to be my fault not others, I'm responsible for my own actions, I have to make sure if everything is right to get all the credit.

Reasons why I don't like to work in groups are: sometimes they're not responsible for doing their part, if they do their work they do it all messy( you can't even understand their hand writing), they play around too much because sometimes they take it as free time, they spend most of the time on their phone instead of doing what they are supposed to do, sometimes they don't do their part in time and we have to turn it in late and don't get all the credit.

I believe working in groups is beneficial but at the same time it's not, I think it depends with the people you work with, because if you work with people that do their work and actually care about school they will definitely be beneficial and make your group work out. If you work with someone who doesn't care and is always playing around, you won't get anything done and will receive a bad grade unless you do all the work and the other person will just get credit by not doing anything, in that case there is no point to work in groups.

In conclusion, I believe it's more beneficial to work alone than groups because you can focus more on what you're doing and take responsibility of your own work, because if you don't take care of your school work nobody is going to do it for you. So you have to chose what's better for you and what's going to benefit you more, but for me I feel like working alone is more beneficial for me than working in groups.                  ",4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
BFCE7D755436,"Do you think should student to use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes ?

A lot of young people has cell phones that can use for many ways. The young people use their cell phones for text with their family or do their homework, but Today's many kids are going away from people. However, they use the cell phone in bad ways in classroom, so, I believe students should not use the cell phones in class because they could cheat in their exams and get easy score.

The first reason , when the teacher says, ""get out the phone, we are going to start study in our phone"". The students does not care when the teacher is giving the instructions of the topic. A lot of students are going to playing games or listening music and when the teacher ask question about of the topic they would say, ""i do not know' and every body starts to laugh because they were not paying attention in the classroom and their grades is going down.

The second reason,Today's in the world student only put their face in the cell phones. A lot of student use the cell phone for their social media in classes, therefore, Student are not paying attention in class when the teacher is explaining the topic. However, student when the cell phone is allowed to use, they will have more focus in their social media than classes. For example, A lot of student have the famous ""snapchat"" that it is film videos for ten seconds and share in your story for people see them, Student with their cell phones are going to put any video in their story to showing the teacher talking or everybody laughing.

Another reason and is the most important, Student cheat in exams with their cell phones because the teacher says, ""you can use your cell phones in this test"". however, students do not study for any home work or test. they can get a easy score. For example, they know can use the cell phones in test, but this time the teacher says, ""you cannot use the cell phones in this test."" The student are going to get bad scores because they thought that can use the cell phone to get a great score. however, a lot student do not study for any test when they can use the cell phone.

However, The propose of the teacher is that student earn easy information and good scores. The allowed to use the phone has a good way that students can search homework or read a book. Sometimes the teacher gives homework to do at home and you will use your cell phone for solve the homework. For example, students are learning other language and do not know some word in the information gave the teacher, they can use the translate to know the word.

In conclusion, Students should not allowed to use the cell phones in classrom because they are not going to learn anything at the final of year. Allowed to use the cell phone is a disadvantage for students in the futures in their jobs because they were always in their cell phone playing or social media.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C4086056BD37,"High School

Regular high school is 4 years 9,10,11,12 grade for graduate. But students can graduate and 3 years some school has a programs that allow high school to graduate in three years,

this programas has three opcion for gradute in three years. The first opcion is summer school the scond opcion is evenings school and the last opcion is do not take any elective courses.

My first reason, why i think is better finish high school in three years for students is because all of the students high school are teenager and they need time for do stuff. So why i think is good idea finish high school in three years is because they could be take drive licenses, insurance, all stuff they need.

My second reason, is because all of the students are teenager, and some working for save money for college. If they can finish high school and three years they can working one year and same money for collage.

My third reason is because all the students who follow this programs could be more opcion for find a good college , and find a good place for live close of the family and find a good job.

conclusion.

I think this programs are good opcion for students who want going to college.",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
82722CEBCAB3,"When the entire class need to make a project in groups, but your group work more than the rest of the class do you think it's fair if the teacher give a praising to the entire class? When I think about praising student work, I think in: hard work, effort, patience, and a consistent student. I agree with the self-esteem come from praise. Also praising students help to built self-steam, but you only can praising when the student make your best effort.

For example; one student go to the bed at three in the morning and sleep only three hours making his project and checking all the project make sure is complete, but other student go to the bed at nine and sleep all night and don't worry about his project. Some students are more lazy than the others. The best decision the teacher can make is recognize the student who really make the best work and effort.

However, some people believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. The teacher recognize student's work maybe work more hard in the next project or homework. If the teacher built a self-esteem praising students must be self-confident in order to learn. They believe teachers need recognize all student's work not only some students.

In conclusion the teachers only need recognize student's work when the students really make a good work, best effort and this way the teachers can help to built self-esteem and motivate the student work hard in all the classes, projects, and homework. Student's with a high self-esteem are the students who make a lot things is this world. Many times the students with high self-esteem are the students who go to the university, because they know are good in something; this is the reason because we have today doctors, lawyers, teachers, other professional people.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
523130079501,"""Their are advantages of cell phone usage in class but their even more disadvantages to it."" cell phones aren't great for students to use in classroom because it cause distraction and make students not focus while teachers give instructions. Teenagers get so easily distracted by anything because they are careless and aren't aware. Phones aren't beneficial nor useful. Students should use either school or home laptop it is more beneficial and useful than cell phones and in that ways teachers will be easily find out what they have done in class.

First of all, the reason why cell phones aren't useful for students in classroom for educational purpose it's because of distraction; that will bother the whole class ,and might bother teachers too. Since cell phones are one of the rule to be use in class then all have to follow it. For instance, if teacher assign work for students to do during class on their phones imagine what will be the result nothing might be done by the end. Laptops have big screen so that teachers can follow up with their students. With cell phones is difficult for teachers to know weather or not the student have done something in class. Students have good tricks especially teenagers. They might be acting like they are working but truly they are messaging ,and once the teacher approach he/she change the page so they can show evidence that they are working. Teachers are even smarter they know how to deal with students like this. They either sit with them to help them out or ask to come after school if they really struggle and can't do nothing.

In this situation is a good idea for teachers to collect phone before class starts and hand them back by the end. Any advice could be more useful then cell phone. That is also the reason why cell phones aren't beneficial.

Additionally, cell phones aren't always beneficial the reason why is because it distract easily. It cause problems between students. For example, if their are two students playing soccer on their phone how will they focus; they can't control themselves one shout happy scores ,and the one who lost want to beat the other guy who win and so on. Cell phones shouldn't be use at all in class but only with teachers permission. It will be even better if two teachers help out in the class with work. They both will help students pay attention and participate. Both together will be able to control phones usage. It is hard when you are working on an essay and suddenly a message pop up you can't control yourself ,and you can't focus just because of the message you are carious and really want to know what is happening. That is the reason why cell phones shouldn't be use in class just because of distraction and the impact that might happen to students from using it.

However not everyone agree, some argue that cell phones is great to be use in schools for educational purposes. First think about the disadvantage that could happen with this use or rule. Think about others and how that might effect them. Will you be able to control yourself if you receive a text from a friend?. In fact, there are many things that might cause distraction but one of the biggest distraction are cell phones ,however, any other things can be control. Any other device will be okay because it will easy to be seen by teachers. Cell phones won't help you at all however it will bring your grades down and it will bother you. Not everyone have same opinion other have positive view on the use of cell phones. Which is okay but think about it more. Look to it's positive and negative impact on students and you fill find the answer.

Why most students will agree with the use of cell phone in class?. Some student aren't always aware of what they are doing and they are careless. They think messaging or whatever they are doing in class is more important then their grades. Students should avoid all distraction such as food, cell phones, and music to help our society develop.

If all students focus and pay attention that will have a huge impact on the environment.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
E0209F1D5DF6,"In this quote that Albert Schweitzer wrote said ""Example is not the main thing influencing others; it is the only thing."" There are many different ways to influence other. for example talk to them about your experience.

Although some say that should not influence other people about own behavior because people will get mad, actually some say there should be own behavior is the way to influence others because you can have more friend and be a good person.

In my opinion, the best way to influence other is talk softly and calm because they can understand more. For example if you scream everyday to them they will not respect you and then will not care anymore. They will be doing the same to other person.

Other Person when they talk about they own behavior they get mad because they know what they are doing something bad they get nervous. Second they have to be brave to talk about to the doctor, for example if you kill somebody and you don't know what to do and you have bad attitude than you have to go to talk with somebody you trust, you have to be brave.

But as you can see there is many ways to influence other and had talk to them they will have good education.   ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
2C8802241F51,"Doing More Work

I think Thomas Jefferson quote he wrote ""Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"" is right. I think that we accomplish more if we getting the work done faster working hard, and getting more people to always to work on it.

Getting the work done faster can help. if we are working all day faster and faster we might get tired but people could get more stuff done. If we are building a house and we work on it everyday but some people are just working slow as they can it can take them a year and two but if they were going to work and working faster and faster they could get more done and even get more house to work on. Some people might say that even if I'm working hard I still fail or just done accomplish of what I'm trying to get but if that happens to me I would work harder and faster so I don't fail and and I would accomplish what I'm trying to get.

If you are working hard and always working you are going to get what your trying to accomplish. Working hard mean actually doesn't mean you have to wake up in the morning a go work all you have to do is when you go to work work hard and work all your effort. Some people say that I don't have to work hard to get what I want well in my point is if its a long time goal why not make it short term goal and work hard and hard. If its a short term goal finish it in a day if you believe yourself.

Sometimes working alone can get boring and upsetting. I like to work with people that are happy and believe in there self, and they can get somewhere in there life. People like to work there friends that can distract them from what they are doing and they won't be able to focus on what they are doing. Even getting people to work can make everything easy and get the work done and get what you want to accomplish faster.

Conclusion I think that getting the work done faster and working hard can mange what you do and can get more work and you can get what u want get what u accomplish by working hard and faster. If your always working and your giving you best effort your gonna get to what u want and more.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
3A94013B23DD,"""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing,"" a quote from Thomas Jefferson, meaning the more active we are, the more we are able to accomplish. Although many would believe being active would be the obvious answer, there are reasons as to why being inactive may allow us to achieve more. By being inactive, we have plenty of time on our hands to accomplish things, we have the energy to accomplish more, rather than constantly being worked up and doing something, and we also have time to brainstorm ideas.

Constantly doing something does not give us the time we need to accomplish goals. By always have a fixed schedule or always having to do something, we feel as though we connot risk wasting any time by trying to achieve something. Having those few extra minutes out of the day can allow us to create or focus on our hobbies, which then can get us to accomplish things. For example, over the summer, my dad decided to take time out of his job to focus on his love for plants. He then decided to make it his goal to bulid a garden, by taking time out of his very fixed work schedule to do it. By the end on the summer, he had accomplished his goal; just from taking some time off.

Always doing something causes us to lack the energy we need to accomplish things. When constantly doing things and working, we are too tired to achieve anything, because we put all our energy into everthing else we do. We become fatigue and restless when constantly doing something. For example, my mother is always doing something; she goes to class, goes to work, then comes home to clean and cook. She is never able to accomplish anything because she does not have enough energy. When we constantly work, all we want to do after is sleep, rather than causing us to want to accomplish things.

By not always having to do things, we are able to new brainstorm ideas. We can brainstorm goals that we would like to accomplish. When always doing something our minds are focused on other things, rather than focusing on acheiving goals. We dont have time to sit and brainstorm when we are constantly working. Our minds cannot focus on multiple things at once, meaning it does not have space for other thoughts of accomplishments.

Even though many people think that constantly being active helps accomplish more, it is not always true. We can accomplish just as much, or even more when being inactive than always doing something. By being inactive we have the time to accomplish things, we have the energy to achieve more goals, rathan than being tired and restless, and we are able to brainstorm ideas without other thoughts in our minds to distract us.",4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
86F87A96D2DB,"Some schools have a program that older student and the young ones that could help one another. For example, the young students could get some advice from the older ones because they ready took the program or the Sol before so can help them understand what their are trying to do. Another example, would be that the older ones can learn new things from the young student to see what is different from the past and preisant. Last example, that the older student and the young student can help each other out to come up with an ideas so other student can help out to try and make the a bigger program. Some school do not have program but they should so others student can get to now each other and even have ideas that can help others.

Secondly, student form lower grade to higher grade level should be a in the program to learn stuff new. For example, if they don't understand they could ask one of the student to get help of understanding. Another example,the older student be in the program to help a younger to try and make something easy to him.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
DFCF2A3BE972,"The program that the school provides for attending classes online could have a positive outcome or it could have a negative outcome. Different school have different ways of doing things. Some school don't provide this type of programs, in others do. Different type of people have different type of view of attending classes online. People would agree that is a good idea but other would say its bad idea. Having online class you don't have to wait for other people to finish. You could do what pace you want and to do your classes. It could have a negative part to attending online school. Your WIFI could go slow or not work at all. Having a hard time to achieve the work. Not having a different environment with people with the same age. Not doing the work that they assigned you.

When a student have class online they could find it defalcate to achieve the work that they been assigned to. You would not be able to ask question about the problem. Would have to figure it out by your self. Some online website would not help you to achieve what you are looking for. It could give a bad answer and then you got the whole assignment wrong. In videos you could find ways to achieve it but sometimes there is not a lot of videos on things that you are looking for. If you where in a class room you could ask a teacher to show you how to solve it and you would probably would understand it more. In online school sometimes there is no teacher available at the time when you need them. Sometimes student don't have the time and sometimes they don't turn in there work on time. Would just put it to the side and say"" they would probably do it later"" and never do it. It could be found defalcate to achieve the work on time.

When you so round your self with people that are the same age. You could have study patterns and you could ask them for help. Doing online school its just you and the computer and the class you are taking. Probably have friends but they mite not be taking the same class as you,would not be a able to work together or study. Doing online school would maybe not have time to socialize with new people. You may work or do other things but most of the times they could be older or you just don't talk to people a lot. Having different environment could help you to learn more and plus you would not be by your self. Have other people with you in the same room. Not just you home by yourself with a computer. Having classes online you would not be sou round with people your age.

Doing online class sometimes could give out a lot of work to do in one day. In the same day you have to turn it in. It could be challenge when you dont know what they are talking about or you just don't understand it. Doing your work is one important thing to do, to understand the class and what its teaching. Not just going online to find something that kind of looks like the work and you just copy it down. Sometimes student could get lazy and not do there work. Would probably leave it for the last minute to turn it in. The laziness of student could end up with no good grades or passing the class, would take the class all over. You could get distracted really fast with other things that is going on in your life. Not doing the work, it would not take you no where and would not finish the class on time before the due date.

The school would give different ways for student to attend class. It could be online class or going to a classroom in a school. It would be helpful for student to attend more class and probably have more free time. Sometimes student could take advantage on this program to just stay home and do nothing. Life could be hard sometimes and you could go through things that you don't expect to happen. It could be defalcate when you don't know the subject and there is no teacher around to help you. Students always choose whats right for them. Attending classes online could be defalcate to achieve. Would not be sou rand by people their age and probably not do there work. Attending classes online dose not always work out for students.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
0607B495212F,"The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too falling short but in setting our aim too low and achieving our mark . I believe that if set your goal high in order to mark your goal it does come high it cuts short but when you have nothing and your too low your but you try hard you achieve to your mark. I agree with Michelangelo that you dont need to be the best as long as you put effort in to it you can do anything but at the same time i disagree with this quotes because you dont need your setting to be low it can be high at the same time it really doesnt matter how you can achieve your mark no matter what way or path you decide to take life take to different place makes you do different decides. For example right now am doing a sol if i aim to high in order to pass and reach 12th grade and to get my diploma my aim can a low and i can still have a achieve my mark . It really doesn't matter how much effort you put in to something because in the end you can always reach your goal . Everyone goes though this everyday or at some point of there lives like work , school, etc. This can also be find in the human race. Another thing that i feel that feel that the quote means is that people like to set low standards on themselves.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
925DBAC486E5,"Have you ever thought about finishing high school early? Not every student wants to finish school in four years. The reasons high school students would want to do this is to reach their career early or they have personal matters that make them want to leave early. To some teens going through with the program could be a difficult task. It is a good idea for teens to take the three year program, because they are trying to accomplish their goals early.

Not all teens want to spend all four years of high school. Their reason could want to move on to college after those three years. Another reason to why students want to finish is because they could have problems at their school. High school has bullying and other issues that could leave them with no choice but to want to take the three year program. There are teens in high school that want to join the work force at a young age.

The three year program has a lot of good benefits for students, but its not an easy thing to do. Students would have to take extra classes, which means more work. This would mean students will have to take extra math, science, history, and english classes. For the electives the students would probably have to switch them out with core classes. For highschool teens who do this program would have no time to slack off and would have to work had achieve their goal of finishing in three year.

In the three year program you are given choices on how you would like to do youre work. There are schools that could let you take the program through online. Students could also have the choice of taking the work over the summer right after school goes on break. High schools that have this program are giving students a huge benefit. it is a good idea for teen s that are taking a three year program to advance quicker to their future goals.",3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
9DF267887BEB,"I disagree with this artical because is not always how you will see first impression is how you will see the person in general. Is not a great idea to change how you are to impres other people. Like for example I'm shy meeting new people but sometime I don't know what happen to me that I talk to people like I meet them before. Not all what you see is who it is sometime the apparance lies. People sometime lie to get something or someone. Other people do it to get attention because they fell alone and they change to get attention.

Other people do it to get attention because they fell alone and they change to get attention. I sometime do it to but only because I fell left out of the group so sometime I act diffrent. I don't like it but is the only way that I can get people attention. Some people will like if they are them self because you don't what to date sameone and that person is not the person that you see in the pictur. Other people like to deceive other poeple only for the money, to play around with them or be bad with you.

Like for example I'm shy meeting new people but sometime I don't know what happen to me that I talk to people like I meet them before. Sometime when I act crazy is becasue I like someone or because I need sleep but most of the time is when I'm in love. I am very weird to be around. I like to jock a lot but that dosen't change me who am I.

Is not a great idea to change how you are to impres other people. There are sometime that you have to impres other poeple like when you are trying to get a job. You have to look impresing so they can higher you for the job. Sometime it will need more then changing who you are. But most of the time you don't have to impres the people with the look you can impres with how good you are with the job. ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
1D8BDC81DE2C,"What does it mean to partnerships with a companies? I think it a good ideas for Many students who look for opportunities before they go to collega. Student will get to explore certain work area and what type of work they want to do. If student want to work at a company they can visit the company and see what kind of work they do. If school partnership with companies it will help many students to choose what type of work interest them. I think they should select me because I like to be around people, I want to know what type of jobs I want to do, and I want to have a experiment about jobs.

There are so many people who don't like to be around, but I really like to be around people. I think when I am around people It give you a postive feeling. Anywhere you work or go and your around people It alway give you postive feeling. If you work in a company there will be people that you have to work with even if you like them or don't. One time at my school we were in a group project and I didn't know the people who were in the group and I didn't know what to say. Then I started talking to them and now we are friends. Whenever I am around people even If I don't know them and when I start talking to them I feel like I know them for long time.

So many student alreadys know what they want to do in future, but I don't know yet what should I do. I always ask myself that what I am good at. I never figure it out what is something I am good at. I think not someone can get the jobs they want ,but If they select me to It will give me the opportunities to find out what types of work I am interesting in. It will really help me If I know what work I want to do. There are many people who are not happy with their jobs, but they still have to do it for their family. I think people should choose what jobs they want to do.

If I want to work at a company and I don't know anything about the company how can I work there. I think before you work you should have a experiment so you know what is the jobs about. I wanted to work at a resturants, but I didn't know what kind of work will they have so I ask my friend who have work there. If you don't have experiment you can research about it. There are work where you don't have to have experiment, but in some jobs they want you to have a experiment. I always wanted to be a nurse so I always wanted to learn about nursing. If I get select I would have a opportunities to explore about nurse and I will get to have a experiment.

However you should not select me, but you should because I like to be around people, I want to know what type of jobs I want to do, and I want to have a experiment about jobs. I like to be around people because I think it give a postive feeling.

If I think you should select me because It will give me the opportunities to find out what types of work I am interesting in. I want to choose a jobs that I will enjoy working. It good ideas to have a experiment about a jobs before you work. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
6C3B373B84C2,"Dear, Manager

Have you ever had a dream job? I have always wanted to be a professional gamer. Gaming is so unique in so many ways, like the fact that you can create your own game and have such a large fan base growing ever years is incredible. I have been gaming ever since I turn five years old. Gaming is such an important part of my life because my dad gave me my first console to play on. This was really incredible to me because my parents did not have a lot of money at that time. I will fill in great if I get this job being a twitch streamer, because I had always wanted to become a professional gamer and with twitch i can do that. People can tune into my stream and watch me play. My stream will be filled with entertainment, competitive game play, and live events.

To begin, my stream will offer a load of entertainment. Some sort of entertainment my stream will offer is introducing celebrity and playing some video games with then. Every Tuesday and Thursday I will invite a famous celebrity to come over and play on stream. My fans can decide which celebrity they want me to bring in to play games. In stream like Monday and Wensday I will make challenges which I would have to do. Some challenges I would like to do is play with my eyes closed, play under water, or even play on a airplane. On Fridays I will have a special day for my fans. I will Make a discord and communicate with my fans and see whats going on. I will also ask them if they would like to go in a match and play so games. This will be the entertainment I would give on my stream every weak.

Secondly, I would like to add competitive game play to my stream. I am a really competitive player and I want people to relies that. When ever I go to play in a tournaments I will stream and let my viewers watch me take this victory royal. Once I am playing competitive I will teach my viewers tips and tricks on how to be come more aggressive. While playing competitive I will have good quality game play, the reason for that is because I want my viewers to think that there ones playing and not me. While recording a competitive stream I would like to play extremely aggressive. This is the type of competitive game play I will like express on my stream.

After then, I would love to schedules live events where my fans can enjoy playing and meeting new people. Some Ideas I would like to add is have large station were they can eat and talk. Another idea would be for my fans to be able to meet me in real life and take pictures or autograph with me. The greatest idea I would like to add is to be able to earn ten-thousand dollars. You can be able to earn ten-thousand dollars by 1v1 me in a match. These event will only take places on Sundays which I will be putting it on my stream.

In conclusion, I think that you should let me visit or become a twitch member because I had always wanted to become a professional gamer. Twitch can help me achieve the goal by letting me stream on there platform. If I earn the job then I can get people to tune in to my stream and enjoy the entertainment, competitive game play, and live events preserve for them. This is why you should allow me to join your community and allow me to become a part of the family.

From, Generic_Name ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
DC391957FF10,"I am agree with the acthor Ralph Waldo Emerson, Most the time in order to be successful we must know the most important tip about what we doing. For example my past

It's been teach me how can I master a lot situaction in my life now. I am confident in every single step or move that I'm doing. At time I may not succed the way I want but I took my mistake like a lesson which I will be more careful in my next move. I understand that the only way to grew up in life, business, etc is doing what we know better and for that we need to appliying our past too. In our past is the best experiences, that we also have learned the most impiortant lesson of our life.

In my personal life I have been victim of humiliation by my ex husband, now I am trying heal the pain that he left in my heart.

This time I am learned a huge lesson with the relationship. And now I will do better in this part of my personal life with my next partner.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
3E156DCB07C7,"We accomplish more when we are always doing something not when we are being inactive. There are many people out there who are most of the time through out their day are being idle and never doing anything, they're always sitting around and won't do what's the best for them by trying to at least accomplish something in there daily life. Although some say being idle does not serve a purpose, actually being idle does serve a purpose, rather you should go out and accomplish something better for yourself.

You might say being idle is not the good for you, but being inactive can sometimes be the best for you. Thomas Jefferson said that ""Determine never to be idle."" Thomas Jefferson doesn't realize that the reason being idle can sometimes be good is because you might not notice this, but in your daily life you can be doing to much for yourself to the point where you won't even realize how much you have accomplished. Once in a while you should think to yourself what you have done and accomplished during the week or day, it makes you think that you may need to be idle and put some time away from things that you usually be doing. What myself believes in is that you aren't always going to be doing so much for yourself in your daily life on what you want to accomplish in. Sometimes you need to put it all away for a short amount of time and give yourself a break and just be idle for once not for such a long period of time, but make time to do your own things. One thing that is true about being idle is that it serves a purpose for being inactive, but the reason why that is good because you can always go accomplish it another time and you can come up with thoughts or ideas, for later on when you want to accomplish it.

However, in my thoughts always being idle isn't good for you because you may have time to be idle, but you don't have all the time in the world to be idle. It would then just keep you away from doing things that you want to accomplish on, Which will then make your mind not want you to do things in anymore. In my perspective what myself believes in is that being idle for to long is such an impact on your life because when you take your time away from the things that you usually are always doing and have a daily schedule for it makes you forget what you had going on and what you were trying to accomplish in. Thomas Jefferson said that ""it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Which is true because you can get so much done if you are always doing, and it is wonderful like Thomas Jefferson said. You're doing a lot of work and accomplishing it all by succeeding in the things that you need to get done, and it's an amazing thing to do because you rather do it now then doing it at another time and put so much stress to yourself. In my opinion, accomplishing it at the right time is better than accomplishing it at a different time. To explain what my opinion said is, do it at the right time when you have the chance to do it rather than doing it at a different moment of the day. It will makes things much better for you because it's better to get things over with now. You would't want to worry about it later on it would then just make things much more of a problem.

Additionally, in my thoughts being idle keeps you away from doing the things you want to get done, it makes an impact on yourself on what you're trying to get done and it can distract you from your work. Something that is true is when you're are being idle, it keeps your focus on staying in the moment that are in which is doing nothing. An example of being idle is staying in bed all day on your phone. Why would somebody want to be doing that when you can be out accomplishing your goal and succeeding on what you want to become in life. Thomas Jefferson also stated that ""Determine never to be idle"" if you were to never be idle you can accomplish so much and keep on doing what you always do. People shouldn't let themselves get distracted by being inactive, they should take an advantage of all that and think rather than being idle they can be out accomplishing there goal and reaching for somewhere better. In my opinion, people should do more to get to where they want to be in their life because if people are doing that then you're definitely accomplishing something better for yourself.

In conclusion, although some say idle does serve a purpose and should be accomplishing their goal rather than being idle. In my conclusion people shouldn't be idle because it will easily distract them from doing better things and accomplishing their goal, and it wouldn't be great for everyone. Once in a while people would get inactive way to much and just forget about what they have to do or accomplish in. Many believe being idle is good for you, but it can lead to a bad habit of you always being inactive and no want to achieve in your goal. In my statement idle does serve a major purpose in peoples daily life and can just keep them away from doing what they do. Some say people should accomplish more on always doing something and shouldn't get inactive.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
39BB85E5CB5A,"have you ever thought of just staying after school just to finish your homework, and wish not to do work at home when you can relax at home without thinking and stressing about doing your homework instead of remembering that you did it after school, that's why I think it's a good idea to have an, after school club because then the students will take advantage to finish there homework. and get help from and get more specific direction or other things that students need help on.

So, i think if students go to after school club to finish there homework, etc then the students won't have to worry about it at home and keep there grades in good shape. Also to keep it simple it's important to have something important like this (after school club) to let the students know they have after school to help them complete there homework.

And then, if students need help on completing there homework, etc then the students can come to after school to get the help they need. And create a bond with other students by helping each other.

therefore i think there should be a after school club to help, do, and support. 3 gt",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
FF13996AB0B3,"Although some say schools shouldn't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because students would not get enough educations away from school, actually students should have benefit from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.

However, some say school shouldn't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because students wouldn't get enough knowledge at home, it's better in school.

Actually, students should be able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. First, Online is useful in many ways. Students can research the information, or students can watch video on YouTube. For example, Math, some students don't understand how to solve the equations, but they can watch the video and find more math learning. Also, English essays. last year, my English teacher told me to write an essay about the night by Eli Wisely. I researched him because I didn't know who he was at first, and I found his history in the holocaust, I read it. It was very tragedy. So, I wrote it down for project, and I found a lot information in the holocaust. It was useful finding information on Google.

Second, video conferencing is helpful. There is a website called Edubirdie. This website is use for teachers communicating with students for education. Students can spend time with teacher like 24 hours or depends on what time students chooses. Edubirdie helps students with essays, math problems, social studies, science, etc.. Also, I remembered when I had a final exam for chemistry, and the problem was I didn't learned anything from chemistry class. Because my teacher was horrible, I didn't learned anything from him. So, I searched to Edubirdie website and watched some videos of stochiometry problem and word problems. Then, I face timed a Chemistry teacher from Edubirdie. I spend like 10 hours with her. It helped me little bit. After that, I took the final exam and I barely passed the class with the D+. at least I passed the class and I'm happy with it.

In conclusion, schools should offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because it gains knowledge and helpful for future education.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
E103955391AB,"Yeah we all have our own freedom but well that's not always true a lot of people let others control them. So it is said

Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment""

Like i said we all have our own idividuality that what makes us we have our own way of being, own name and own way of looking we are just our selves. Specifically individuality shows us that not everything should be given to you if you want something you work hard for it but also it's a sign of your own development that you can do everthing by your self but it's because you are who you are and no one can change you. Therefore, itis proven that it's better to be individual than anybody else just giving you everything by hand .

""FREEDOM!"" is a good word all of us love to hear. When you realize you can do anything by yourself you feel like no one can stop or as free as the wind but theres always going to be obsticles without a doubt. To be Indivdual it can happen to any one such as a kid who has learned to do thier stuff alone or when you move out of your parents house and get your own home. It honestly can happen to anyone becuase thiers so many types to define the word individual. well to fell free is not a bad thing after all .

When your individual you mean something to this world because you think about yourself. You set your own goals and accomplish them and you maintian yourself the way you are it's even more better becuase it's the hugest goal anybody should have to not let anybody change you wreck all you have accomplished. To your self you feel like you value your self and it's not bad at all to value yourself because it biulds self confidence within you and that means you have you feet on the ground and yeah your ready to face any obsticale.

No one should define you except you because the world will defenitly try to change you but if you don't aceppt it won't happen like Author Ralph Waldo Emerson said ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment"" whom we have someone to look up to and understand that to be inividual is okay.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
C5E45F477A84,"Have you ever met someone, or an interviewer, and show a good or bad impression to them? People think that first impression can be changed because everybody has a second chance. While others think that first impression can not be changed because it shows who you are. I agree to the motion that first impression are impossible to change because it shows your personality, your attitude and who you are.

Firstly, first impressions are impossible to change because it shows your personality. I had a friend, who dressed inappopriartely to an interview for her job. But to her surprise she did not get the job because of how she dressed. Also after a while, she couldn't get any job elsewhere. This means that whenever you go somewhere, you should dress appropriately, check how you use your tone with others, so people will know that you are a good person, respectful, can take responsibiliy for your actions and shows how mature you are. Not only does first impressions show your personality, however, it shows your attitude.

Additionally, showing your attitude is most likely impossible to change. I remember I used to disrespect, fight and insult others when they did something to me I didn't like or even if they needed help from me. I met this old lady and she asked for my help then I told her that I didn't want to and insulted her, then she said to me I am going to have a hard time in life but i didn't take what sh said seriouly and left. As a result of what happened, as I grew up, I tried to change but couldn't because when something goes bad and I knew it was not me, they will all mention my name. And I wish there was someone there to offend me. And thats when I remembered what the old lady told me, I wanted to go ask for forgiveness but unlucky for me she went to heaven and now am left with her curse. Which gives me this conclusion that always respect everyone you see even if you don't know them.

First impressions also shows the kind of person you really are.

Furthermore, your impressions shows who you are. Not long ago, this was this lady on the news. When i heard the news it shocked me because she went to a store, picked an ice cream from the fridge, licked it, and put it back in the fridge without paying for it. This obviously shows that, she ruined her reputation in public and everywhere. Now everyone knows who she really is. Not only did it ruined reputation but she brought a shame to herself, her family, and also her native country. First impressions are impossible to change.

Lastly, it is valid that first impressions can be changed because everyone has a second chance. But not really because sometimes your impressions towards someone stays the same even if you change. Others will think you are not your self today and also others will think it's a good thing but not everyone depending on what impression you made on your first time meeting. So I say that first impressions likely impossible to change.

In a Nutshell, showing your character, who you are, and your behaviour are impossible to change on your first impression. Mostly first impressions are not easy to change. Would you on your first impression be respectful or disrespectful, appopriate or inoppopriate, and be willing to take responsiblity of the concequences of you on seeing someone older than you, are you?",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
E770240CAEE1,"The first impression that is impossible to change,is surpise. Because in the life always we learn somenthing new,for example,when I start in the first job and don't know anything, I need to learn the things that,I need to do rigth. One example,when I work in the kitchen,so I need to learn the ingredients,the plate name and how to make. After that I can start. Then, I want to change the work,because I tired of the chefs,fire,bad manager or bad pay, and I can look for another job.

Now I start again,because I take a different job like a Secretary. Now I to learn new things,because I not work with food again, now I start with papers, computers and minister calls.

So this is the Surprise,the life change all the time,but we need to have positive attitude and face up to all the bad things that coming.

Is the same with the school, some times the attitude change,because is impossible that somebody knows all the information about one class or two. We have differents impressions impossible to change. Because some people hate some class, for example math, but some liked. Normally I hate this class, because is just number,equations,square rules. I disagree with this class, but I know that in the future I need. But all we have differents positions, because some people love the numbers and others love another class for example, I like History why. The reason is that I like learn new things that I don't know, is very interesting.

But, I agree with one thing, all the class are very important for my life, because in the future I can take any job because I know differents things for differents carrers and I can help to other people in any class.

We are agree in one thing. Wherever we going always the school is very important in our life. I know that we can disagree in differents things,but I think that is impossible to change the scary impression why, because always we scary to fail but, I agree that we can fight for change the future and achieve everything that we want.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.0,2.5
10AC7944DC4A,"Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" this means that if people fail they should get back up and try again and if they fail once more to never give up. Some people think that if you fail you should just give up right then and there. some people say that if they give up when they fail they should get up and try again and never loss hope, to determined, and to dedicate on what they are trying to achieve.

Everyone person fails in some point of their lives its part of life to fail no one is perfect. people should never loss hope if they fail they should be determined to make it through and be successful. Hope is so important in peoples lives because lets say if someone loses they child and if that person losses hope they would stop looking for their child and if they stop looking for their child they will never find him or her. Failure is important in peoples lives because it make people to not lose hope but also it makes them to dedicate on what they are trying to succeed.

People should dedicate on what they are trying to achieve or on what they want to succeed. dedication is very important in everyone lives. Cristiano Ronaldo is so dedicated to soccer that is why he is so successful he was playing in the best league in Spain now he is paying in the best league in Italy. many people admire Cristiano Ronaldo because started from the bottom and now he is one on the best player and is one the player that gets payed the most.

in conclusion, people should never loss home and they should be dedicated to be successful. Having hope is very important to succeed, also to succeed people need to be dedicated and determined. In other words, to succeed people need to fail and get back up again and again. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
92D03AB56C53,"Failure the Success of Life

Winston Churchill was a British Minister.

He was a writer famous for his phrase that he ussually used.

Once said that ""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.""

I belive, that failure is an important element that plays in the persuit of success, because the failure lead to succes, failure is unavoidable, learn from your mistakes, and the failures often leads to problems.

One reason is the success that consist of going from failure to failre without loss the enthusiasm.

Failure is unavaidable, the path of success is not a straight on.

Every people have to fails sometimes in the life, but that is part of the life.

For example sometimes, invest money in some bussiness, but we don't know if go to win a lot money, or lost all the money or just one part of money.

If for some reason we fails, doesn't matter, we need to try again, maybe that would be the success to have your company owner. Never say not, before try it.

Another reason, is to learn from your mistakes, if you make a mistakes at least you know, not to do it again.

A failure might put end thing idea or opportunity, but lead you others.

If you ready failure and you know what was the mistakes try to find a solution, and not come back with the same ideas, you need to learn for each mistakes.

For example, if I say something wrong, like English word, if somebody heard me and corrigir me, I try to not say that word again.

One more reason, failure often leads to problem, we need to solve our problems and getting throught difficul times makes you smarter and stronger as a person.

By dealing with your failures you will to be prepared and have most experienced in the future.

If you know that to fails before, so you are somebody with most experience in the life, you know that if you have a important roll in your work, that is why you to fails in some time, but you need always to continue ahead.

Everyone have differents kind of problems, but each problem have solution.

If for find solution is possible that we go to fails, just doing that, we need to solve each problem without doesn't matter what come ahead we always want the success.

In conclusion, failure can change who you are, and what path you're on the life.

To fails in our life is something that cannot to avoid, but we not wanted to be a failure always, we want to change and have success. Each mistakes is a success more in our life, I think that failure it plays an important role in the persuit for the success. We need to pass for differents path and in each one, we go to learn new things.

Mistakes only makes smartes, and working to solve problem only makes us strongen.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
D36CCF111F86,"A positive attitude is more helpful to others and motivational,But ones attitude dose not necessarily have to be positive in order to succeed. Ones attitude can be either positive or negative as long as it improves ones ability to succeed. There are many keys to success but attitude is a major key , because attitude introduces or rather shows character. A positive attitude is a great thin but ones attitude can be negative ,but it is more over whelming to others and some might not either like or no longer associate with that person. As long as that attitude helps with your success it should not matter what type of attitude youve got.

Ones attitude is ones guide as it allows more options to come ones way. In a way attitude can guide and help ones path to success or it could close all the doors to ones dreams and success. On the side of a beneficial attitude; people can really catch the feeling of your attitude. What that means is if the attitude is negative but it gets things done then it should not matter as long as it benefits the amount of work or what ever is being or getting done. A positive attitude is more or rather feels more rewarding that much of a negative attitude. A positive attitude is more rewarding and dose allow the people getting that attitude to feel more successful and more appreciated.

Although a positive attitude is more beneficial it can lead into less work or less progess being made and shows that one is not trying hard enough to succeed. By having a negative attitude your showing to others that your work matters. And by doing so you can encourage others or rather inspire others have have a good work ethic by tring your hardeste even if some one is pushing you to work in a negative way. Success come to ones mind and it over comes everything if they put their minds to it.

Yes attitude is a key to success, but it dose not have to be positive if its beneficial to one in their path of success. I do believe that a positive attitude is more appreciated but a negative attitude is less appealing. I feel as long as your attitude is improving your work ethic and it benefits your progress then is should not matter wether or not its positive or negative as long as you have the right mind set you should have a successful work ethic. Your attitude reflect on your work it just depends on how you use your attitude in your work. for example if my boss came in yelling at me saying "" get to work your not getting paid for nothing."" thats a negative attitude so thats going to make me have a negative mind but if i can use that frustration and negativity to inspire e to do my work I will notice that all I have to do is do my work and my bosses attitude will change one me. But if my boss were to have a positive attitude then I could also use that as a motivation as it not only shows me that my boss likes that I do my work but it shows me that im appreciated.

I can see that having a positive attitude is more motivational, but ones attitude can be negative as long as it benefits you and others in a positive way. people need to understand that they can use these attitude to benefit themselves. Peoples attitudes are what helps people succeed as it should motivate and help make their attitude more positive through the day knowing you did good enough to improve your self. Attitude is much more than just success, its the key to motivation.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
380164B1BAB5,"Some high school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I think this is a bad Idea because students should be required to be in school eight hours everyday. Allowing these students to take online courses they lack teaching and intructions in a classroom, evening school is a poor idea, and elective courses should be required to boost their gpa. Letting students to have these options they might not enjoy school as they should.

In other words, I think students should and must be placed in a classroom. Take an example physical education and health is a required course for graduation. However, how can you allow a student to take a course like that online and expect he or she to learn. I am not saying it impossible; I think they should be taught. A course like this deserve to be in a gym somewhere so students can interact with one another. Also, most students do not comprehend well through a screen and this might affect their way of learning.

Also, I think evening school is a bad idea because students need that eight hour of sleep every night. Giving them these options it could lead to bigger problems. This could ruin he or she lifestyles because they have to be willing to get up at night to attend school. Abscences could rise up because the students could be tired. When they have this option parents might not be able to take them to school if they live far and this could lead to safety issues.

In conclusion, school districts should insist the traditional four years of high school. When they have an extra year, they could use it to boost their grades. Having elective courses could help the students dramatically. Most students tend to score low in one class then others. Letting students take elective courses it could boost their gpa. Students should be placed in a classroom with everybody else and it would give them the opportunity learn and interact with each other.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
EBD07D2D103C,"I oppose the idea of schools offering distance learning as an option for students to attend classes,this is because not all students benefit from attending classes from home,and online.

Giving students the choice to attend classes online is a big responsibility; Causing the demand that they must follow instructions,and complete class work tasks. It is true that most students have no problem with this , they complete their agenda and assignments; Thus why they are more comfortable with this method of learning. But this method of learning is not always the case for some students, because it gives this students an opportunity to become nonchalant about their classes; Consequently, they start to fool around and get distracted at times. Attitudes like this can lead to: not meeting up with deadlines, missing daily classworks, poor understanding skills, and ultimately failure. Students that have poor learning skills would be incompetant to take online classes, Which mean at all costs their must be guidance for this kind of students. It is possible that due to a lack of connection with the Teacher in the classroom and the student, it is most likely they would not have the chance to ask further questions or recieve reliable advices from a teacher. In some cases students can benefit from seeking assurance from other students with more knowlegde about the subject, group activites ,and asistance.

In conclusion, distance learning and it's method of teaching is not helpful to every student, because a stystem of learning that benefits all students,and give students opportunity for futher understanding is more beneficial.",3.0,2.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
770E1717845C,"In life, their is ups and downs. you can live you're best life and still fail at times. Failure teaches most people lessons. People also don't care at all. Although, failure can also bring success, if you move smart. Yes, I agree with Prime Minister Churchill with this statement, it all adds up. This all depends on you're level of enthusiasm. How you can handle failure and just grow, learn from mistakes. Failure can bring success.

In life their is ups and downs. Nothing wrong with that at all. For example, you try so hard at something and still fail. All you can do is too learn and grow from that mistake. This just how life goes. When you have are down bad, just pick yourself up and move forward. Positive attitudes will help a lot. Failure teaches people lessons also.

If you're trying, working hard you are leading yourself to success, you could probably fail at times. Failure is part of life is my point. Growing and learning from mistakes help a lot for most people. With good enthusiasm, leads to a good path and positive mindset. Learning from mistakes can or will lead to success, just depends on your'e next actions and command.

This is a important topic , because who doesn't want to be successful in life. Being positive can help a lot. For example, people that have negative attitudes can lead to bad mindsets, we don't want that from you, unless you want that. The things or people you are around may cause a bad or good mindset. This all depends on how you approach things and act. Positive actions, thoughts, people will help you learn many stuff.

Failure is an important roll in life. It brings success. It doesn't feel too good to fail, It just how things goes. Nothing wrong with failing, its all about learning from mistakes. Failure plays the roll of life and success. Even the small can lead you to success in many ways. For example , you can fail at school, home, at anything, just pick yourself up and move forward. It isn't easy but it is worth the weight on your life.

Failure is a big word, so is success. Their are many ways you can lead to success. Without loss of enthusiasm and good attitude brings you to a real world. You can fail and still succeed thats the important part. Not give up is also a good solution. Positive surroundings, small things, full enthusiasm , you will be on the right path. Their will be ups and downs, you should understand that. Learning from mistakes is most important role of success, it helps you grow better and in a positive way. Yes failure can lead to success.       ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
B7C150A40F86,"It is known, that students truly enjoy the most they can any break of the year. Giving a break to students in the evening and all summer, is better for their process of graduation. That is why, students must do the traditional four years of high school before graduating.

First of all, since students have so much schoolwork and homework to study, they often need a break, so that way they can relax in their home and do other activities with their family that are not related to school. Summer is a season in which students need to go out in vacations and spend time with their family as well. Generally, not every students and their families get to spend so much time all together in the evenings, that is because of their routine. Most parents have from their jobs summer break, and they prefer enjoying it together with their children. It would be unfair for them to have to not enjoy that much their summer with their children just because the students have courses during the summer.

Another reason of why students must do the traditional four years of high school before graduating, is because after they graduate, they are more prepared for the career they decide doing. It would not be a recommendable period of time having three years of high school for students that still need to keep studying and preparing themselves for the career that they are going to study in college. The students can get more experience while they are reaching to their goal which is their graduation.

In high school, every student should have at least an idea of what they are going to be dedicating themselves for the rest of their lives, and most of them suffer by not knowing what career to choose. Some students may say that they would really wish graduating as soon as possible, but the fact is, that by being in a hurry of getting out of high school with a diploma, they would make the mistake by maybe choosing the wrong career in college for themselves, or even maybe deciding to not go to college just because they did not have the enough time of high school to think and decide the options that colleges offer. Giving students more time for this particular decision is a good way to let them know what they are capable of doing in their future.

In conclusion, students having four years of high school includes many benefits that can help them to be more prepared for college, rest more in summer, and giving them a better process of high school for their future in college and job. Students can challenge themselves by experiencing the traditional four years of high school and see the advantages of the result that they reached which will be very beneficial for them.    ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0
9EB5AA842FEF,"Many student's take districts offer programs because , They think that is more easy . School's maybe is easy ,if student's going to school only three years . Also, some parents maybe are agree with that . if student's go three years to school . the students parents spend a little money in their . Also, student's can work early and get their own money. Especially , if school during three years. but, definitely , many student's take the longer way in high school . that's the mean. the four years.

Also student's choose this districts offer programs to graduated quickly from high school and work . for example , my friend take districts offer programs and he is graduated rigth now. but, he spend all his time only studing and him have his diploma and him is working. but, i'm taking the four years in school ,not only ... but also, obviously , i'm learning more . because , i spend more time in school. Clearly students wants to graduated from high school , that's why they take this programs . and some student's choose this programs because , they want go to the collage . and want to meet their dream.

I understand that many student's wants to graduated quickly and get their diplomas . but take the four years in high school is better than districts offer program . because , student's who take this programs are grieve and

, obviously , their are very busy and extressed . because they don't have time . They only pass all days , evening and summer studing , but student's who take the four years are fresh of the mind and they have time for studing and work at the same time. and can spend time for their friend and family, thats why four years in high school is bettter than three years. Definitely , some students prefert districts offer programs. but they kill their own self . because they pass studing ans studing. their many students like studing alot , but its importantly, that they safe their health .",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
6CFD58799701,"Hi, my name is Generic_Name, nice to meet you.

I was looking for a job, and i see that here are hidding so, today i'm here because i think im a good candidate for this job, this job is really insterasting for me, and when i see it for the first time it attracks me, because i really like this kinda jobs, and i think that if you like your job you're gonna enjoy it, you also gonna take care about it, and you just gonna appreciate.

I'm also think did i have the characteritics that you are looking for, and when i see at the first i just realize the characteristics did i need to be hired, and i pretty sure did i get them, just with one exemption i need to get experience because i don't have any on this type of job's but, i am that type of person who learn really easily, im pretty sure did i can do this work, i'm also are a responsible person and i always make sure that my work is well done and always try to make as much i can, i'm also responsible to came all days at time, because i know that is really important to be a good employee.

I'm also respect my work mates, because i think that the work environment is gonna be really good if all us respect each other, preventing disagreements between us.

i'm also that type of person who try to stay away of the problems, i always try to prevent them, because i know how bad they can be, for example: Get me on trouble in my work, with my frinds, or with my work mates too, so i just try to stay away as much i can.

I'm also are a healthy person, i didn't have any healthy issues before and i didn't presented them now, i don't take any type of medication so i think i'm ready for this work.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
CA58CF3D8943,"people are scare to make their own decisions , some of them when they have a conflict or a problems in their life, most probable ask an experts like psicologo to help or to they can give them a advice. I agree that each people with self-reliance follow they own instinct and ideas that matters if the make at mistake, and do not care what the other people can say about you.

People need to take they own decisions. Many people are scare to make their own decision and went this happened they decide to ask somebody else like a psicologo to help in their own problems, in my opinion this it is wrong because it is your life, you need to care no somebody else. In my case sometime i have a problems when i want to take a decision in my life, but in my opinion this is good because i care about my self and always i want to do everything good . Young people are scare to make they own decision and this is understanding, some of the people they do not follow their instincts and ideas, this means that sometime they take somebody else ideas.

people always have a conflict to believe in their self.

Many people do not believe and also do not trust they instincts and ideas, this happened went that person always take a decision but that decision it is a mistake. or sometime they care what the other people say about them, for this reasons i think they have a conflict and they are scare.

people with a self-reliance. People with reliance believe in they self, they take a decision with out any problems and also they do not ask for helps. This people when they decide to take action or give a ideas they do not scare what the people can say about they decisions. Many people have problems when they have to take any decision in theirs life, almost all the time is because they care what they people can say about them.

In conclusion, people do not need to care about what the they people say or think about their life,

it is your life you decide how you want to enjoy it. That matters if is with mistake, Some people are scare to make their own decisions, some of them ask for help or any advice. each persons need to trust in self and instincts.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
053ACB9DFE74,"If your having so much trouble in a problem you have just ask an adult or some freinds. It would be good to have more then one person. Because a freind could be fake and give bad edvise like drink alcohal to feel better or cut your self becuase you are depresed. Nothing of that is good so when a good freind comes to tell you advise they tell you good things. Another thing is that maybe somone could be lieng to you about somthing. and some people try to help but somtimes they make it worst by givving you bad edives.

Like I said earlier somone might be lieng to you like for example he/she might say leave the house because your parents cause the problem. So you have to dectect that or els e you will get in seriuos problems. so i f you know that their is a fake freind trying to tell you lies say ok and leave.

Another thing i said is that they probably give you the best edvise. What i mean about that is that they try to help you but they only make it worst like for example: your bf (boyfreind) breakes up with you and you cry for hours and he says ask him to be your bf again you will be ambaresed in front of everyone the last point i wanted to talk about is that more than one person is good to give you advise because some of them can not be halpfull some of them can be liars and some of them can be fake edvise",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
F5817C081342,"Is a positive attitude key to success? Well, In my opinion I strongly agree, I believe a positive attitude will take you far in life and will let you accomplish many goals you've set for yourself. For instance having a positive attitude doesnt just affect you but it also affects others in a negative or positive way, for example motivation; you could motivate someone and inspire them just by doing you and accomplishing youre goals or you could even brighten somebodies day up by doing small gestures. In the other hand there will be people that dont want too see you do good, people that want to bring you down and people that have envy over you. That shouldn't bring you down that should be more motivation to do better because those are people who are jealous, people that are jealous of something you have and that they dont have. There are people who have started from the bottom with very little and are now doing big things, by having a positive mind set and believing in themselves. A positive attitude is the key to success all you need is to believe in yourself, have patience, and ignore all the ignorant people.

In my experience a positive attitude is a key to success, why? Well, when I was younger I had a difficult time with the English language because I only spoke Spanish at the time, which then resulted that I had to repeat a grade. Being left behind made me feel dumb and stupid, I also felt embarrassed; embarrassed of saying my age to the other kids when they would ask how old I was, I thought they would make fun of me and call me names. Through out the years I got more mature and I didnt really care no more about my age, I then found out that there were other kids that were in the same situation as me, which made me feel better about myself after.

When I got to high school I met my case manager, he was and still is a really nice guy and really cares about the students. When I met him he asked me many questions one of them was how old I was when I told him he was surprised because I was older then the other students. He then asked why I was 16 years old with freshmen classes, I told him why and he understood. A few days pasted by and he asked me how I felt being behind the sophomore class, I told him I didnt like it and how I felt a little dumb. He then told me how I would feel about graduating with that class, I then knew what he was about to tell me and I liked the idea of it. He told me I could do three years but I would have to do two years in one, I didnt care if it would be more work all I was thinking of was graduating on time. So, of course I accepted and now I am here taking my writing SOL with my positive attitude! If I didnt have a positive attitude I wouldnt be here right now, and for sure I wouldnt be graduating in May of 2020. Im very happy and thankful that I have this opportunity, and I know I will make it through this school year if I believe in my self.

The other night I was going through my Facebook feed and I stumbled upon a link that one of my friends re-post, on that link there was an article of a women that is from El Salvador, and that women use to live near to where we used to live. On that article it said ""First women Pilot from El Salvador"" when I first read it I could not believe what I was reading, I was very happy for her and I know she worked so hard to get to where she's at. It is incredible knowing a women from a country that does not have much to give is now flying in the air going around the world. Reading that article motivated me to set goals for my self and to keep on going, if she can accomplish her dream I can to.

I admire my mother, she's gone through so much and has risked her life to have a better one, not just for her but also for her family that she had to leave behind. Before she came to the United States her mother didn't want her to come she thought it was to much of a risk. My mom knew what she was getting her self into she believed everything would come out fine, the day my aunt was about to leave to Mexico my mother begged her to take her. My aunt would deny and deny her until she finally said yes. My mom packed up her stuff and left with my aunt behind her mothers back, but before she left she left a note for her mother saying if she doesnt leave now they'll never have a better future. My mother has walked thousands of miles and has nearly starved to death to get to where she is now. She worked her head off trying to make enough money to support her family, she had three jobs and as soon as she clocked out of one she would walk miles to get to the other one. Years later my grandma got her Visa and was able to come visit, she regretted doubting her and apologized for not believing in her. If my mom didnt have a positive mind set and if she listened to my grandma she would still be in El Salvador; washing her clothes in the river, eating beans and eggs everyday, and earning six dollars a day. She has a better life now then she had before, but she still has more to accomplish and I am here to help her. With her positively she can go far.

Therefore a positive attitude is the key to success, negativity won't take you anywhere all it does is let you watch others have fun while they enjoy life. Positivity allows you to set goals and to accomplish them. Many people have met their goal by believing in them selves, no matter how difficult it is they keep on pushing.

I believe attitude does have an impact on life choices, if you put no effort on a task your set to do, that task will never be done or it'll turn out horribly. A positive attitude is the key to success all you need is to believe in yourself, have patience, and ignore all the ignorant people. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
E91F2E8986B2,"If you master a subject you like and dont try pushing your limits you wont succeed.

Why wouldnt you want to push your limits?

Theirs a reason why people get stuck in life, when they master their subject.

They get fustrated when they can't find jobs or good pay wage.

I agree on what Author Ralph Waldo Emereson because if you dont have that motivation on what you master it can affect you.

If you dont push yourself into doing more than beyond than life will not treat you as you wanted.

I agree on Author Ralph because I've experience things in life that if you dont try on something , than you wont be able to grow.

If you look at bill gates he master on his program and what did he do he share his product and open stores. He grew just by mastering his program. My experience was mastering in learning how rebuild a engine from just the block to how to make more power. Now im fixing peoples cars and doing tunes for their cars.

I know these guys that called themself diesel brothers. They are master diesel technician. So what did they do? They bought a shop , got a crew and got sign to do a tv show. They work on diesel trucks, diesel cars and anything that is diesel. Then they decided to do custom trucks and custom military cars. That wasn't enough for them, so they came up with ideas to use military axles and putting them on custom trucks making those trucks so heavy duty they can even pull a train!

My father told me that you should never stop, even if you reach that goal. He said,"" you reach that goal make another goal, you can't stop at what your doing and if you do,than theirs going to be bumps in the road and than your going to make huge mistakes."" just from those words it's like million bucks to me. Why because if you stop at what you master ,than somebody is going to master it better than you ever thought and your not going to grow from it.

When they master their subject, those people get happy right but whats next? Lets say you master your subject and than you find a job that pays good. The money looks good and you stay at that job for a couple of years. I'd say that probably 75 percent of you staying at that job will make your miserable. People get bored and can't find nothing else to do,but do the exact samething over again. It's going to make you want ot quit and find something else to do. Then once you quit your job what's going to be in your mind? Probably nothing at the moment,but then your realize that you master that subject and want to share it, make it to your own business and improve from it.

So I do agree on what Author Ralph waldo Emerson wrote. I believe that if you dont go beyond your goal than you wont succeed in life. So make sure that you push yourself even if its harder. I promise you that you will succeed,have better thought, better examples and freedom. Remember having to do more you will get more in return.     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
DC2E6750CDEC,"Nowadays we live in a world where everything has to be perfect if you wanna fit into this society, therefore humans have made up an exteriotype of how people are supposed to dress, look, act and live. We all have the right to do whatever we want and be whoever we are unless you want to hurt someone. We are free to do what is better for ourselves without being judge, so why do we let society control us?. People should not be afraid to be who they are and show the world what they are made of. All humans are different, we all come with different shapes, sizes, personalities, skills and that is what makes us beautiful, the power of being ourselves.

Experiences make you grow and morph you into a better person, life makes you realize how bold and smart humans are, in addition to this we all have been raised differently so trying to follow an exteriotype is like letting go the opportunity you have been given by life to find out what you are made of, to find oud your power, your way of doing things and solving problems, and last but not least you are letting go the opportunity to make up your own thoughts just because you are giving people the chance to control your mind and the way you think.

I totally agree with this statement, to be yourself in an environment that is constantly trying to make you something else is one of the best decisions you could make, perhaps just by being yourself you could teach someone else how to improve its personality, or maybe you could show them how to act when it comes to solve an issue, theres is multiple opportunities we miss just by trying to be someone else . All humans have a superpower within their selves that they could share with everyone, therefore, trying to fit in, follow an exteriotype and trying to act the same way the others do is equal to not take advantage of our power wisely.

We are afraid of showing who we are because, to us is more important what they would say and think about it. We care more about their reaction towards us and what we do not realize is that maybe they would like more who we actually are than the person that we are trying to be. Once humans face the truth and notice how valuable and special we are, that will mean that we have gotten the greatest accomplishment in life, which is being ourselves no matter what the others say or ask us to do.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
269026CFBEC9,"Agree with author Ralph Woldo Emerson wrote bucause to be yourself is the you make special for another people in the world you thinking different for another people you have different feeling you make something else and the world you meet another people

,is you the same another people you know is the same of you this is make the world to be boring, all the people to be the same you not who you are because all the people is the same all the people make the samething.

If you not to be yourself copy or the same people, you never find feeling or reasons and your life you make something you not like , for example you are not the same another person you have different goal, feeling, something you like and you personality,and not to be interesting becasue all the people is the same, and however you have two face you due something you never meet your real face.

conclucion:Always to be yourself in the world use your face real you are special for all the world is you to be yourself you make a different the world,you due wherever you want complete your goal your dream because you change tha world if you to be yourself.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
0EC7D67618F4,"Although some say students should use cell phone in classroom because, they used for internate acsses to do in class works actually, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because they are trouble in the class room and they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching.

First, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because, they are trouble in the class room. That mean when the teacher is teaching the students may be listing music so that makes trouble the other students, They didn't do any thing for classwork. They only doing listing music and watch a movie so on that happen it's very disturb. Also, If the student want listen music and teacher never want to listen music so that make fight with teacher. In the class room students usually don't use cell phone so one students use every time cellphone in class he/she always trouble in class maybe that happen again and again in class the school decide and rejected him/her for didn't come to school.

Socond, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching For example, When the teacher is teach on the classroom and students doing on the chat there is no attention what the teacher says. Their is no attenition to learn. Their is only play with their friends in the class .Their is show a bad image with their friends. It mean one student want to joke for other student girls or boys so he gonna show for that person bad and rude picture then student lough in bad situation. Also, the one students lough for him picture his/her moral is not good so they don't want to come again school by confidently. He/ She is scared and afraid.

Third, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, they are cheating on the test. For example, If the teacher gave for students a test and he sat down in the chair then one students have a cellphone he/she can cheat on their phone so they got a good grade for that test that makes bad for the other students score. It means students they dont have confidence do their own test. Every time they don't want to study for test and they always think doing cheat on the test but that is bad for his/her kownleage.

Fourth, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, there is no any particpate and activites when the teacher ask question for students. Their is more time waste and spend their time with their cell phone all the days. There is bad for health because when every time watch movie and listen music that is no good for brain and eyes. It means every time stay with their phone and the brain control one thing just the movie or the music so we can't handle or participate other thing even didnt look the people what their saying.

In conclusion, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because they are trouble in the class room and they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching.",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
7EB7BB90A2F0,"Technology has a good and bad effects, it allows us complete task without having contact with others. Also just makes things so much easier for us. Technology developed over time so quickly, i remember, i used to had a flip phone but, now there is iphone X. No buttens at all and the face ID. Much as the technology developes the people will be seperated from each other.

Tesla just intreduced Tesla Model X. It has an auto pilot mode. Self driven car. Also they announced they making tunnel just for the auto pilot mode. Elon Musk says ""its much cheaper then the normal tunnel and safer"".

And he mentions on his tweeter ""Working on something"",""flying car picture"". So he is already working on the new tech. It's only 2019, can you imagine how technologies would be in next 10 years?. It will be keep developing and devepoling. It won't stop. We will get to some point, we don't even have too see each other or talk to each other.

Nowadays kids doesn't play outside, they have their IPad, Xbox and PC. Even the babies got IPad. If you give the baby IPad,

the babies would be distracting them selves. It's much easier for the moms too. But some point kinds gets addicted to it. Crying and sometimes they just won't eat anything. Smart phones can be really dangerous to the eyes.

Technologies can be helpful but, it can cause negative effects. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
B3145EA3395B,"To see someone impression, that might be possible to chang. Because the majority of people might be mad when from somthing when we see them from the first time, I disagree with this statement because most people chang there impressions when they're in a spicific mood, Some might change after a proplem has been solved. Because when I was yonger from now my dad allways use too tell me

""too mach agreement kills a chat"". Many peple chang thier imperssions after the first time we see them.

So I have a frined who allways chang her mood by any time, some times she would come to my house and knock on the door even if we were just argued about something, but when I saw her the first time when we met she was very nice and my parent invited her to my house and her first time her impression was very happy and intersted to see us and learen about our culture, so when I saw her the next day we were so happy that we met. and I told her my trip how we came to the US, she was so impress to know more about us, But some time she woluld change becaus of her parents and when she's sad she comes to my house and tell me how she has been and how her family is with her, and I was listen to her as she tells me every thing, But when some one come to our house and see's her like that they say that she's wired from how she acts, but her first imression was't like that, she changes with what impact throw her life, and we're a teens also, Every day my parents sees her they say that she's very talented because she has a very good voice and I use to be so happy to see her singing because she had a good voice, but her impreesion changed after I saw her how she reacts with others, and I use to get surprised of how she's diffeent with methen others, but now I found that people are like a door each person need a spacial key to open them and understand how they feel and think. To see people's impression, I have to look at them when they are in thier good time that will chang the ideas. and to affect especially forcibly or deeply to some one's mind when they see some one impressions for the first time.

I encorage everyone to change thier opinion about the first impression are almost impossible to change. Because the majority of people impression can chang etheir over time or by the area sourounding them, and figer out how make time to understand how it goes and how people thier features from influence by the socity around us and how I said can give the impress with your senserity follow people's impressions, and literally the word impression is the sence of feeling in how someones feeling from sirten situation.

Seeing the reality, Most humans have their way of reactions to react to every thing they can show or chang by somehow in their life, In this period of time no one like to listen to someone's story, Real people who shows their impressions by the area sourounding them it effects us as who we are and the time that we are in, So the place that we are often been can effect our impressions, The place that we been raised in can impact on our impression. People's reactions might chang after an accident happen to some one's in the past It can be a very big and huge chang for some one's reactions if we see them the next time or day. Places and moumints can be on of the reasons why people impressions are mostly can change by this way, This kind of things might be wired to be impossible. Emotions and there behavioral changes in some bodeis deppend on how they think by a word or emotinal apperance can be changed with their behavioras, and some might be in need so bad for somthing and that can also shows their impressions behavioral chang.

When I was in my country many people came to the area where we live there was so many that your mind can't relate to what we see and we all were very nice to them and we gave them many of the things that we have and as much we can, There was so many kids from them I use to be realy sad when I see them like that I refused to give every thing I can to them but some of them was vrery hungry and some are mean but I said to my self in my mind that their impreesion won't be like that if they weren't in need like that. So to see people impression we have to see thier past and what they been throw, Many of them change there mood, and some might change after a prolem has been solved.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
2E043F67934C,"According to former bristish prime minister, Wilson Churchile, he said, "" success is consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Which indicates that bieng generaly successful is formed by multiple mistakes and, over and over failures and also being passionate to what we want to achieve. In my opinion, I'am totally agreed to his wisdom of words by Wilson, Churchile, because there are many persons in general that could shows that the fauilures is part of success without loss of love to what we do.

For instants, A famous and big star NBA and MVP basketball player Micheal, Jordan once said that, the process of being successful is an action of repaetation of practice including failures. This clearly indicates, before micheal became a successful basketball player star, he recieves and faced hardship competing and playing basketball in sevelar yaers of his caceer in NBA. In addition, According to micheal's father, he said, micheal fails so many times to his dream caceer such as: physically, emotionally and, mentally. However, he didn't stop chasing his dreams because, I know and, he knows how much he loves playing basketball. These also shows, Micheal obtained his successfulness because, he is basketball enthusiast. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
FF9C278EA478,"Do you want to know how Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me? First, I saw Generic_Name following direction so I started doing the same thing he did. Second, I saw him being nice to everyone even when they treat him bad. Thirdly, I felt a lot different.

To start with, the way I started to do the same things like him was because he got good grades. After that, started to think about my grades and his grade and I felt bad because my grades were bad. That's one way Generic_Name shared him wisdom with me.

Secondly, He was nice to me when I didn't know him so I was begin to nice to everyone. Then, teachers liked how I became nice and sweet. Another reason why to be nice is because you will want to treat someone the way you want to be treated.

Third, Generic_Name made me feel like a new person. You can make new friends like that too I made six new friends because I became nice. Teachers are nice back if your nice and let them teach the class so think about it and be nice to everyone.

This is how Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me. So now you know how to share wisdom with someone else. Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me because I follow direction like him, nice to everyone, made me feel like a different person.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
E545B850725F,"Although some say extracurricular activities are to enrich educational experiences many say otherwise. Students should definitely be involved in after school activities, whether if it's a sport or club, students will enjoy their time. Extracurricular activities could help a student get into collage. The student should be allowed to be apart of as many after school activities as they choose, they should first discusses with their families. The schools should not have the decision if students are in a activity or not based of if they will have time to do homework or study they should let the student make the decision and here's why.

The students should be allowed to be in as many activities as possible, while managing their time. The student will have to add the activity to their schedule, and know they will now be doing this on a daily basses or if not multiple times a week. The students family will be able to help the student out when in need of it. There will be time for homework and studying, because with a well put together schedule the student will go to school their choice of activity and go home and do their work. The student and their family should be in control of the management of school work and activities the school shouldnt be involved. When you know something works for you do not let anyone get in between what works for and what doesnt work. Students will have many opportunities in high school the extracurricular activities will just bring more and this is how.

Opportunities come and go in high school, but when a student is in a after school activity they will lots of opportunities. Collage could be one of those opportunities, collages like to see a student that is or was apart of a club or sport team. Athletes can get full ride scholarships to collage, when they can manage to do their school work and the activities it could help them in the future. A student managing their time can be difficult but with a well put together schedule can help them get to where they want to be. This is why schools shouldnt control student involvement in extracurricular activities but many have their opinions against this one.

Other say that the schools should have control over students and what activities the can do and however many they can do. The school wants the student to be able to have time to study and do homework but by doing that they will take away from the extracurricular activities students are in or want to be in. They say the school should have the power to be able to do this, the student and their families will not really have a say in the final decision. They say the school knows what is right for the student in making the decision on if they should be apart of a after school activity. The school wants the students to be able to do school work outside of school so they will want to take away from a club or sport so a student can have time to do the work.

The extracurricular activities should be in control of the students and their family, the school should not limit the amount of activities a student can do. The student should be in control in what they want to do if it's a cub or sport, they will have to make time to put this in their schedule and still have time to study and do homework. Doing this can help a student reach goals and they can enjoy their time while doing it. This is why the student should be in control of the activities they do.         ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
202C217E354A,"i think it is good because if we know what we wanna do in the future is easy for us goalds.

some time a us family they help from us future, and in the school the teacher they ask us golds some time we cant not respond because we dont know what is ous future. i see some students in the class room they so smart.

some people they come to the other country they whant to complint or stude, some country is good they gave support from us golds, a big example is UNITED STATE. they have a lot opportunited its good for education.

for example.

if we what to do a teacher, i know what i do in the future maybe my mom was teacher i can try to do a teacher , I can ask adivice, my mom that it is good support. but if we don't know what we wanth to do in the future.

we have time for focus , and we have to thinks what we wanna do from us golds, something forghet thinks easy and we dont practice. i thinks thast is good idea what we wanna know from us future. ",1.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,1.5
7B6FA03518AE,"People who does not have patient cannot make an experience without helping from someone else, and a project is not hard to make, but you have to think about what you are going to say in the project.

There are a lot of way you should find to do something, and even if you would not undertand what you are doing. Don't give up, because one day you will realize your dream. For this subject I do not agree with it, because if you're making mistake often that doesn't mean you will never grow up. Sometime you have to force yourselfe to work, and in life you need to keep moving on, in what you're doing, you have to make sure that you never go back in the past, because you would like to realize your dream that you promised yourself in the future.

For this position you may say that if you are trying to do something, and you already know that it is not going to be right, just leave it until you find the right way to do it. If you have an experience to do something, and prove it you need to think about it first, before you try your best in what you were trying to do. You could have done something that you had to do. You have to check it, so to make sure it is good or not good, so that is the way you can learn from your mistakes.

Most of the time, you feel like you cannot do anything all you can do is just sleeping that does not mean you will never grow. You will grow in a good situation, if you are always doing good things and you never do something wrong. Now you will be growing up, and people will appreciate you everywhere you go to. For example you have already done some stuff that you are not supposed to do, life is going on that does not mean you will never grow. If you already have a plan to do something you need to think about it, before you start doing it. In life, you suppose to have done the right things to continue with the others.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
F4BEEA034AA5,"When you try something that already you have do, and that thing didn't work, don't be worry about that because than more time your're trying to do it you will get more strong and have control by your self, always keep strong and keep the calm, and belief that you'll be a great person and all the doors will be open for you. Trying new things helps you to understand that you can do more things,everything depends on you if you really wants to do something that you like, just do it , never do the opinions of others people because is only you, the people can't control you life everything. The thing that you already done and you was doing and everything was wrong,what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote is not right because doing something that you already done but you didn't get it that's doesn't mean that you life is done or you will never grow that's wrong, when you're sure that what you want you'll be fairing for that thing that you'll lose for many times but you'll be fairing for that and you'll not get tired until you get your dream.

My father is a singer and he's very strong and he really know what he want, one day he participated on one big project about music, he was a really good singer but on the day of the presentation he completely lose his voice, but he won the presentation trying he's best , when he won many people tall him that they wanna to do a big different projects with him ,and now he is a big star and he grow a lot, that;s means that if you try something you'll grow a lot because you have to belief and be very sure what you want and if see if you like, never give up just like me, when I came to United Estates I didn't speak any English and it was difficult to stay here and don't know any English all my homework and my project was difficult, but I didn't give up and i'm steel growing a lot and i have been trying a lot a things and I steel growing. Many people think that if you're so expert and mastered you'll have a really good future , but some people think that the more time you're trying to do the think that you want you'll miss time on your life because the only thing that it's important to you is that think that you really want.

Some people try a lot a things but if they didn't get and they fail and some of they stop what they wanted ,but some of them keep trying and trying their best to get what they want, always try your best and don't give up, when your families or friends tell you that you will not grow more or nothings don't belief that because your're more strong that you know just keep doing and if you're a expert doing that thing you like you'll grow a lot because you have to demonstrate to the people that who you're what you can do. steel faith for that and i'm not agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is wrong just keep wronging and never stop everything depends on you.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
F347A054A1AF,"The positive attitude is the key to success in life? The people that have positive attitude is happy most of the time. However people with a bad negative attitude is upset and angry most of the time. The Marjory of people think that been positive is the key to success in life. Because been positive in your life help you to not get stress, and in your future you will be a happy person with a good friends. The positive attitude is the key to success in life, because when people have a positive attitude they are more interesting, amusing, and responsible.

People with a positive attitude are more interesting than someone that have a negative attitude because when someone is positive they transmit that positive to other people. And that is interesting how a person with a positive attitude can change someone just been positive. This happened more on teenangers. Teens that are positive looks like they always are happy, and they transmit that. Example: you are sad for any reason and some came that always have a positive attitude and you started talk to him and little by little you do not know how, but started feeling better is because that person transmitted you confidence, just been positive. Have a positive attitude helps a lot because you can help many people just been a nice and good person with everyone and never have a negative attitude.

Been amusing person is good and help you to success in life, because people is more positive when they are amusing. People when is amusing they will do everything that they like, and thats good, because when you do what you like that means is fun and thats good for you future. People that are amusing they look like a confidence people, people that you think you can trust and that can help you like in a job, because your boos will trust you and you could get an assent. Been amusing help in your future, because people will look at you like a nice person and you will get friends and have friends could help in your future, because they can help you in the later.

Have a positive attitude make people be more responsible, because people are more focus in their jobs or studies when they are positive. People are focus in what they want and that make them be responsible. People with positive attitude always try to find a solution to their problems they dont give up. However a person with a negative attitude when they have a problem they give up or they get mad just for a problem. Thats why people should have a positive attitude because is the key to success in life.

Be responsible make you be focus in your job or studies, be amusing help you to have fun and have a good life, and be interesting means that you have as positive attitude because you are always happy and you can transmit that to others persons. In conclusion be or have a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because make you more responsible, amusing, and interesting.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
ABBA50242CFA,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. That might a good idea for some students but not all. Today, many High Schoolers from the age of 15 to 18 have jobs. They work part time to help their parents pay for their phone bills, cars or something else. Sometimes they might want to work more, but school is 5 days a week, they have to do homework every night even on weekends. Going to work after school is very overwhelming. They get out at 9 or 10 depends on where they work, go home and do their homework, then go to bed probably late, and have to get up early the next morning. That goes on days after days. Many students can get stressed out easily. So I think attending classes online or video conferencing help lots of students who have jobs. Staying at home and study is still better than waking up and getting ready early in the morning to go to school. That might not be a big problem in summer or spring. But winter is the worst time of the year for students. The sun rises later than usually and sets earlier. It gets really cold and there is frozen ice on streets. Nobody wants to get up early and go to school or work when the sun hasn't even risen and frezzing weather outside. Of course they want to wrap around in their blankets and sleep in. But in the other hand, attending to school directly is better for some students. Leaning and teaching face to face is always easier than online. You could ask the teachers directly if you don't understand, and I think the teachers would be teaching and explaining in a better way face to face. Plus, you can meet new friends, socialize and participate in sports or any activities at school. So in the bottom line. I think it's better to combine both ways. The students can attend school everyday, except for snow days. They can take classes online since they can't make it to school. Cut the students some slack on some Fridays. They can stay home and attend classes online. Or only apply on seniors. Because it's their last year and they have lots of work to do. But in my opinion. Attending clases online or directly at school don't matter. What matters is that the students find their best ways to learn and relieve stress.          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
22E55C32A973,"Have you ever woke up one morning and thought ""man I want to do my classwork on my bed"" No? me either but I sure do think it is a good idea and let me tell you why. Students have been given the chance to work from home; instead of working in a classroom. Today I will explain why I believe students should be able to stay home instead of working from school. First reason would be you will be able to work at your own pace. For example whenever you have a test/quiz during school there is a time limit and you don't really focus while working on your test/quiz you focus more on the timing but, if you were working from home you would be able to work your pace with no worries about a bell ringing when your still on question 1. But if you were to work from home you would be able to cheat on the test or not even focus on it you could be watching TV while doing the test and that isn't the best choice but, there are ways to avoid that. Second Reason I would say is avoiding illnesses that could affect the whole school. Students do have signs almost everywhere telling them keep the school a clean place, wash your hands before stepping out the bathroom, and to keep your hands to yourself. But, sadly some students don't do that ; Now that the corona virus came out everyone is starting to be more clean but not really everyone but if you were home you wouldn't really have to worry about catching anything to make you sick unless one of your family members is really sick otherwise your good because in school theres like 1,000 or more people imagine how many germs are in the air. Not saying school is the cleanest place but our janitors do clean up after us everyday for it not to be clean but I just wouldn't believe it because there are still students that don't cover their nose/mouths when they sneeze or cough and you wouldn't have a problem if you were home. Last but not least my third reason would be less anxiety about school. As a junior I noticed many people have anxiety when it comes to school you worry about your looks, If you are smart enough, the way you say certain things I could go on with what students go through now a days people enjoy judging others even with not knowing them so it is hard to not have anxiety in school especially high school but at home you wouldn't really have to be worried or stressed about that you can be your own motivator your own hype man because no one is perfect. Now i'm not 100% sure about staying home and doing class from there would work out because not all students have the same mindset some like being in school because the teacher pushes them to do their work we all need a little push in life also some students can get away with so much from home if they were do a assignment or test you can just easily search up the answers. Some of my friends have done that when their teachers post things on Google classroom they don't usually do it themselves but, at the same time there is much benefits from working at home then in school not only do you get to sleep more but you also get to basically do your thing but your own way. Students working at home can make a student independent instead of being dependent on their teachers. As a student it is honestly up to you to go to class and to focus on what you are being taught it shouldn't be your teachers job to make you go to class everyday yes we all need a push in life but not every person is going to help you out you have to be independent most times. Students should work from home because in the real world not everything is going to be handed to you.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
19864CA2672E,"People said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, I think is possible since people learn how to change their impressions even that is their first impression like kids impressions change when they become a teens. Also, it is a brain game that needs practice for many years to improve their first impressions. Men and women has different impressions or simler that is the big challenge specially for a new couples.

First, Innocent child impression change when become a teen. My younger sister was hard to control her impressions like screaming front of people or portending that she's not lessening to you. However, now she's yang teenager growing and learning about her new impressions and how to change in the future.

Second, Men and women has different impressions or simler that is the big challenge specially for a new couples. People analyze that difference impressions between couples cause many problems for their parents or their children. My parents life was a big lesson for me because they are opposite each other like ""Tom and Jerry"". I'm sure that every body knows how much Tom love Jerry.

based on my ex",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
1829D6D139C2,"I believe that positive attitude is the way to be successful in life , Because is the way to connect the mind with reality . Thinking positive bring us peace , Also having a positive attitude makes yourself have good friends , And a better way too see life.

First at all when you expect the best , You must get the best , Because is the way to conncet mind with a positive attitude . The negative thoughts need to go away from our minds to move forward,

Because if we do not put this in practice , We must be stuck in dark way to live.

Secondly

Thinking positve bring us peace , For example ;

When you have leave all of your dark memories in the past . The only thing you may have will be peace and selfcontrol , Moreover People will be able to control emotions.

Thirdly having a good attitude makes yourself sorround by positive People , Because you are one of this persons who have positive attitude, And when you mix yourself with positive

People , You learn positive things from each other , Also is a better way to live life , Because you see life in a different journey them others , Because you do not only expect to good things happen , you make them happen.

Finally when you have put all of this positive thinkings into practice , you start see the results from all you have reap . Then it is when you have found the real meaning about life that is ; what ever we have done make sure we have it done well , Because if we do not , We will not be success in life.       ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
E1EC4869981F,"The decision that the principal made that students should get involved in the activities is an unethical idea. Who would like to waste their time doing something that is not really beneficial? At school students have a lot of works to do, and now being in another activity might have a bad affect in their academic goals.

If a student get involved with the activities they wont have time for there daily work. They will have less time to do their homework or projects. This can keep students away from their academic goals. They also wont have much time to spend with family. which means that there will be problems with those relationships, and there will be separations between there family.

Getting involved in these activities brings stress for students. There will be one extra program added in their daily routine, Which contains more work. The work that they didnt choose to do, but the have to do. By having stress after this much work students wont get enough sleep, Which is an unhealthy situation.

Having this much pressure can affect students's grades. By spending their time on something that they dont really want to do, but they have to can put them in a lot of pressure which keeps them away from what they want to do. They will join these activities and wont focus on their studies. Students will start getting bad grades.

So, after this many reasons we all know that getting involved in the extracurricular activities can really hurt students. Joining these activities is neither healthy nor good for grades. All this shows that students should choose to be in the activities if they want to not that they are forced to. ",4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
9DDBBA28EBD0,"I agree with Michelangelo's words, because some time when we whant to do things we start a low level because we think we aren't not good enough to do it, even known that we can do it good. And you think others have more opportunitties to have success and you would not have any of them, and it only matter how fast you can learn and how good you do them.

One good example of it could be sports and I have had a time when something like that happened to me. These happened when I was at my last school Generic_School, I knew that the practices to try out for the teams were going to start in 2 days. And I thought about that I could make it to play with which ever one, but when one of my friends told me that a lot of students were going to try out. When he told me that I thought that wasen't good enough and that others could be a lot better than me, so I decided to not try out and I was already playing for one team of Generic_City and they told that if I whant it I could play for both and I answered no. I didn't accept to play with my school and next year I did the try outs just to see if at least I have a good level compared to others and the coach saw how I played and he put my on Varsity team. I played almost all games I got a record, and I archieve one goal that was to proved to me that I could play at a high level even knowing that a year before I was scare to try out.

Another reason Its that really frecuently that people got scared to try a challenge, and to show themself that they can do thing at a higher level than what they think. A similar expample is one of my cousins knew how to work in construction in El Salvador and he was really good at it, and when he just got here in US he knew that there was contruction sites and places that he could work on it. First he told me that we was excited and that he would get one of those joobs and somehow the next day he told me that he wasen't getting it any more. That was not inetersted any more and told that he didn't have enough skills and it was going to be to hard for him. I told him that yes It was going to be hard but he had a lots of skills and knowleage about it and it would take less time for him to learn what they do there. He said he was going to think about it and after a time he got the joob and it olny took him less than a month to know how they operated there and got hired more fast than others, because he was doing a good joob on everything that he has to do. He told me that he was happy to take that joob and first he was wrong when he said that he had not enought skills for that joob.

Also another reason of why I agree with Michelangelo is that I remenber that around 3 and the hallf years ago I played soccer just with friends afterschool and we played just for fun and to relax. I didin't whant it to play for a team because I felt that I was not to good to play for them. One day I was playing soccer afterschool with some friends, and one of my friends dad was a coach for a team of Generic_City and remenbered that he said to all of us that if we whant it to play for him in his team. All my friend got in the team and I was the only one that did not got in, because I felt that I wasen't good enought so i decided to not join the team. And for the next season he was loking for a goalkeeper and I accept it to got in because my friends convinced me to join. After I going and play my first games I sorprise my self and the team to cause I was playing a really good level and we won the league that season. For next season I got a record that was not receiving any goals in 10 games and that lead me to win the best goalkeeper in that season. And at the beggining of my third season our captain left ,and I got surprised that all all in the team wan't it me as a captain and my coach said that I was the captain of the teamI just got really happy.

And won the league and the All Starts tournament that year and since there I have played like 8 season because every year there are 2. I have won for my third year in a row the best goalkeeper in the league. First no one was interested on my and after some seasons almost all team in Generic_City teams whant it me and teams from Generic_City I had like 7 teams that whant it me to play with them.

In conclusion I strongly agree with Michelangelo's words, its really common that the worst danger for most of us is to set our aim too low and achieving less than what we can do, I have had some reason and example but in all of them I realise that if I work hard I can accomplish more than I think I deserve.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
920BEE439862,"I believe Thomas Jefferson is right. If we are always doing something we get things done faster and there is possiblilities of starting new things. Why should we wait to finish something we can finish the same day, we never know what can happen. I also believe the inactivity is good not only does it give a chance to rest but we also can think through our ideas. We can perfect things we didnt think we could. It can give a chance to see different views of are own ideas. Maybe taking a break can refresh are memories and remind us how important things are to us. Woring all the time can exshuased ours bodys and make us think a little less. With a fresh mind set it can make things easier than we thought. Sometimes we over thinks that aren't that big of a deal and a big part of it comes from not taking the time to rest and refresh our memories. Many people would agree with Thomas Jefferson just like I do but would also agree that taking time to rest is also getting things done. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
F7DD6134C693,"Generation by generation there is a new technology, out time we have cell phones, computer, tablet. People use cell phone in positive way and some times in negative way as comunication, news or to study, some school allow students use it in classroom for education purposes and some school they not allowing it for so many reason.

Schools should allow students to use there smart phone in classroom for many education purposes as recourding a labs or math or for communication betwwen students in group project.

Having a cell phone in classroom make teacher now who is apsent and who's not with some new technology application and we cell phone they can done there work easyer.

By not allowing students use there cell phone they will lose time that they not having it, and make things difficult and students they will make a lot of nuse bye talking to each other in some group project.

Students want his class to be easyer and he want to enjoy it and learn every day from it and by make easyer by using cell phone every one going to be happy.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
BAB7CCC403CE,"One of my greats skill that you will want to hear it is math,and let me tell you how I develop this skill. It took me a long time to get this skill. I had to study and study until I got it. I had to learn and learn but it was worth it. Let me tell you the step on how I did it.

First I learned how to do math so I can under stand it. Let me tell you how I learned math. First I go to math class and let the teacher teach me how to do math. Then I review and review until I under stand it.

Next I did my home work to under stand the problem. One way I did this is asking a family member or a teacher to help me. One other way is by using my notes to find my info. Or I can check the internet for videos on how to do math problems. This is the next step on how I became good at math.

last thing I do is never give up and believe can do it. one way on how I did that is when ever a question get hard I say that I can do it. One other thing I did to believe was to all ways find another way to answer the question. Then I trusted my self when I new the answer. This is one of the ways on how I became good at math.

One of my skills is math and how I develop was. To begin with I learned how to do math so

I can answer the question. Next I did my home work to under stand the problem. Last thing I do is never give up and believe can do it. In conclusion that is how I develop my skill about math.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
AB9FC91ABAD7,"People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincs and ideas. Many people today and day has the problem about how to take decisions is so hardnees to take your own decisions, because some people think a lot of what decisions to take that's the principal moment that we need help from someone isnt's matter if your dad, mom or an expert . Sometimes in life you have to take your own decisions because you can fell or not but you're going to learn what's good or bad, taking your owns decisions it teach you many things about how to take your own decisions with responsabilitie . I take my own decisions because that can help me to grow as a person but yes sometimes we need somebody also opinion .

However , not everyone thinks like that because they like to ask for and opinion to an expert because, they think that can make you to take the decions easily and that's right but isn't enought for some people because probably they have done before and it doesn't feel enought for them , because that's the opinion that you're receiving probably you can be agree or not, but you still are thinking in what decision shoult they take decisions are not something easy nothing is easy in this life that's one obstacle in life basicaly is one step that can help you to grow as person because you can learn from bad decision that you have taked in the past.

Nevertheless ,

everyone can go to see and expert he or she can give you many types of ideas about what decision you shoul take but when you depends on someone you will never going to learn how to take decisions by your self, how I

say before that is one step the can help you to grow as person, you're growing base on what life is giving you is not matters if is good or bad but that's how you know what's better for you and it help you to grow as a person, makes your life succefully.

Moreover , you don't have to take decisions by your self everything is depending on the problem it can not be a problem especificaly but in case is very important to count with other person opinion it can make your decision more easy ,like my grandfather tell me every time when I talk to him '' be sure of what are you doing'' and what I reffer with that is the you must be right of what are you doing is so important you always count with friends or someone speciall in your life those people can make your life better and far away of the problems .

Overall , people have to take their own decisions using the best way for each of them , Because decisions are not easy to take you must take it without precupation because when we worry about that and we say or we do the first thing that it comes to our brain isn't one hundred percent right sometimes it can be good or not but that's how we learn of our mistakes , that's how life work , it give you a hit when you must think nothing is going to happend, that's why is important to count with friends or your mom and dad but when you're going to ask an opinion of what decision shoul you take you must ask an adult , they are the only ones that they can give you the best ideas of what is better for you and your future and that's how you learn and the most important to grow as a person . ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
924748264D34,"High school year is the most important year in students life. Some school programs allow students to graduate in three years,if you can choose, which one would you like to take? traditional or three years? For me, I would think of four years high school. Because traditional four years high school is more better than three years high school. For example, if you take three years high school, then you can not take elective courses except you take the courses during the summer time. Also, I think three years high school don't have much time to let you get ready for college. In addition, I think four years high school is more comfortable then three years high school.

First of all,if you take the three years high school, then you can't take elective courses except if you take the courses during the summer time. I think have elective courses was important, because that mean you can take courses that you interesting of. For example, I was taking the traditional four years high school right now. A year before, I remember I have two elective class, and one of them was Korean. Even know learning different language is hard, but it was very interesting, because you are learning about another countries' culture and how did they treat people in their ways. That's why I think elective classes was important.

secondly, take the courses during the summer time? Of course not. In the summer everyone was plan go to the beach or traveling to another country with the family. Think about that sunshine, sky, golden sand, and beautiful seas. There are people swimming and surfing, people wear the sunglasses sat down there and have coconut on their hand. But at this time, you have to take courses at home or summer school. Sitting at chair, face all these hard problem and finished it. In addition, summer is the time that people relax and have fun of. So I would not taking the courses during the summer time.

In addition, lots of students are feeling nervous and scared in the last year of their high school time. Because they are wondering what college they going to and can they do well when they get in the college. Even know I was senior right now, but that still happens to me, because college is totally different than high school, and I worry a lot about it. So when I laying down on the bed at the night, I was start thinking about college, can I make friends in college or what if the class that I take is going too fast then I don't understand what teachers are talking about. So I think four years high school would have more time to get ready for college.

Even know some programs are allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years, but think about that, if you and your friends didn't go to the same college, then you will have to leave them early and you also have to leave your family one year early.

Finally, I think traditional four years high school is more better then three years high school, and it makes you feel comfortable and have more time, instead squeeze the time together and make your self busy then others. Lastly, these are the reasons why I think traditional four years high school is better then three years high school.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
D6CCEE56DA9D,"Do you think students should have career durimg school at a yong age? Their's some families have poor economy. They dont have that much money to keep their child dreams. Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment, this help students to acuaintance with work environment, they will have their own credit cart.

Firsly,Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment. All the students have dream to studey in a collage and become someone in future. some families have poor economy, they can't pay for collage of their child and they are earnings that much to eat and make a living like pay insurence and simething like that. For example my friend Generic_Name she is 11 grade. she is working in patrakandy mall as a cushier, so she doce't have father and just her mother, her letter brother is with her. she is working and saving the money for her collage.

Secondly, this help students to acuaintance with work environment. The more students working the more they are getting smarter and understand about the job. Students will become a enterpreneur in future, and get familier with different people in community. For example to know more poeple and be familier with different job this make easy, successful life work for their future.

Lastly, they will have their own credit cart. This is good for student to have his/her own cridet card and to take responsibilty for paying their car insurence and other stuff. some childs have pride and can't ask for money of their parents. For example some student have a big maind that means their brain is older then their age and they will have their own responsibilty not asking for help , they will work hard and become stranger.

Some people thing this is not a good idea for students to work. They are too young and they have to study and they are still high school, have a lot of homework to do,this is right they are too young for working, but still some students need to work because they need to pay for their collage. for some people who have a lot of money it it is nothing to pay for something like collage of their child ,or other stuff like this, but for the families who is earning just for eating, make living and have poor economy this is really hard so we shold realize those people too.

In conclution

Student should work during school at a young age because students need save money for college payment, this help students to acuaintance with work environment, they will have their own credit cart. Student should have responsibilty, they shold see the hardness meanness of life to grow up.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
0A324290AFE7,"I disagree with his statement, because if your good at something you can always put more effort in to it , and you can also be better at what you are good at, and last you can never stop growing of what you mastered . people in general they always get better of what they already mastered .

First, putting more effort can help you grow of what you are good at. For example, i'm good at singing at church. I will put more effort so i can become better at my pitch and the tone of my voice. Putting effort on something means you want to be better at it, and also means that you will like to learn more and grow. Putting more effort can get you somewhere. What i mean by that is a better situation, a better position. There is nothing bad putting a little effort on something that you can get better at and achieve.

Also , You can always be better. Being better is better then good, for example, I am good at cooking, but i can be better at cooking. You can be better then someone ; become better than that person that you want to challenge, or you can challenge yourself. Challenge yourself is a good way to grow. Perfect takes practice; be good of right now, but become better in the future. Taking your time and taking it slow, you can 100% be better. Trust me its not easy to be better that you have already mastered, but there's always way and a chance.

The important thing you need to know is you cant not stop growing; you can always keep on growing even though you are already good at it. Only because you are already good at something doesnt mean you stop growing, you can keep growing, if you try a little harder. I will always try my hardest to be the best at it; no matter how hard it is. There is always a way to keep on growing. If you show others that you can be way better even though you already good so far, they will see that there is a way to keep on growing. Show an example to others; let other people know that it is possible to be better, at something you are good at. Prove to those people that thinks you cant keep on growing of what you already mastered. You will not grow, if you dont put more effort in it, and time. If you just stop of what your good at, then you will not grow.

Remember you can always grow of what you mastered. Dont let anyone tell you that you cant. practice comes perfect. Do all the things you need to do to be better, then you will grow more then you expect. Its never to late to keep on growing.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
7E5F489C8CE4,"I agree that imagination is more important than knowledge because when you imagine of doing something very important, like for example; you want to be successful in school education to become like a doctor, teacher, artist, or scientist.

Anyone in the world can be a smart and better person by working on a job to study about objects, study about computers like the use of technology and the learning of cybersecurity, and to visualize and gain your experiences on working in any job you want work on by putting effort and using your brain.

For example, you can imagine of becoming a scientist to learn about sceince, like chemicals, plants, experiments, and understanding more information about science and other objects by experiencing things. Like the more you imagine about things you experience through your job, the less knowledge you have to learn about something that haven't exist in the ability of inventing something creative that is very useful and better than anything.

All you have to do is believe in yourself and use your imagination like to decide whether invent something particular than the other like building a house, a long bridge, and create like a watch to study about anything and learn more about it, you can invent, create, study anythingby using your imagination by experiencing more about things you want to do when you grow up by using your brain, and knowledge to put more effort into jobs. You can also invent instruments, like an accordion, violin, guitar, and a piano, and you can imagine anything like cool stuff, like being an expert at teaching in school like a teacher, studying science,

being a doctor, a builder to invent or build stuff like buildings, or a manager who is in charge of training any team or an athlete for the next match, by having the ability to use your imagination.

We all know that using your imagination is a better thing to do than using knowledge, like imagining to build, invent, or do anything in your experience by learning more imformation, support, and details about using imagination of doing anything. ",3.0,2.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
780D5663CB1E,"A lot of people shared wisdom with me but the most important people who shared wisdom with me are, my mom, dad, and sister.

A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my mom. My mom shares wisdom with me all the time like for instance when i'm feeling down my mom would tell me when people been through worst to make me fell like what i'm going through isn't as bad.

A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my dad. Ways my dad shard wisdom with my is through sports. My dad helps me understand all of the tips and tricks through sports when I can't get anything right he's there to teach me some ways to move past that.

A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my sister. Ways my sister shares her wisdom with me is by teaching me about teenage life and how to be a better person each minute. She helps me when I need help or when i'm curious about how to be more lady like.

In the end when people share wisdom with you it can come in handy when your ever lost stuck or just need advice just remember when people shared there wisdom with you and what they said.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
898A8417D70E,"Do you know that 80% of students that goes to the after school program and received more extra help succeeded more than the students who didn't go? After school program helps students that needs more help to succeed, pulls up students grades, and they will have extra time to complete missing work and home works.

If a student wasn't available in a class and missed the class lesson;They would have the opportunity to stay after school with their teachers and learn what they missed and complete their missing work that they haven't done in class. Students stay after to study with their friend and teacher for the test and receive help on difficult lessons by that grades will increase for students that will make them succeed in the future. And it's a better way for teachers to explain the lesson without interrupting the class and make other students confused.

Having you missing work done at school might be hard to do in classes but by having the after school program you will have the time to complete them with your teacher and your friends and taking more help by asking the teacher about what you don't understand. Sometimes some students needs more time completing the tests or the quizzes so the only way to complete them is staying after so they won't lose points and grades.

On the other hand some students think that staying after is a waist of time and you won't receive any benefits, and some dont care if they have missing work or classes they missed ,but its all wrong staying after is a much better way for pulling grades up its a really big opportunity that teachers give their own time to their students by complete missing work, making the teacher explain the lesson again to the students to make them understand the lesson and what its talking about so they won't be confused or fail the class.

In retrospect after schools programs is big good opportunity that most schools provide for students to receive that extra help from teachers to complete what their missing to make students succeed in school and pull up their grades thats why we should persuade students to go after school for help, that's why I'm base with school programs.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
28FF89DC3B40,"Have you ever had some tell you that you have to play a sport or get involved with clubs or an activity? Would you agree or disagree to participate in any activity in school? I disagree because student might not like any of the options, have no time ,and want to just want to be with family.

My first reason, is that student might not not like any of the sport,clubs or activities that they are offering at school. Many student do not want to get vary involved with school to much. They just what to go to school to learn,get good grades and pass. Some students do not think they are good at sports or clubs. student just do not want to worried about the games the days they have to stay. There are other students that might like other actives out of school. Like riding bikes,or they might be more in valved with church. They might be in a youth group at church and can not be involved with other things cause it nigh get stressful to deal with two things. This is why some students would not want to get involved.

There for,some student do not have the time to join a team or do any clubs or activity. If a student has to join a sport or club after school. Some students would not be able to go or get picked up. The parents of the student might have to work long hours and every day of the weeks. There for, the students would not be able to get pickup after school. Which means that if the student would want to play a sport he would not be able to cause they have to work to proved for there families, which would make them not be able to show up for the games or clubs. some student might have to go home and take care of there little sisters or brother at home. They might even have to cook and clean up cause there parents are working or there are problem at home. there are so many things student have to do at home depending on there life style at home. There are also families that get home and have to help there mom out in the kitchen and clean up and get read for to go to church. There would be no time to join an active cause there would be no time to get piked up cause you might live far away from the school. This is why I disagree with making student join school activates.

My final reason is that student might just spend time with their families. Many student might get home and there is no one wanting for them at the door. both of their parents are working. They might not even see them at all or maybe only a couple of hours. But it is those horse that they get to see their family and get all together and have dinner talk to gather about how their day went and what they did. But in the other hand there are kid that only see their parents once cause they come from work very late and go to work very early and you have to go to sleep cause there is school the next day. It would be very dad to not even see your parents or talk to them or even give them a huge or say i love you. And your dont get to do though stuff cause you are at school doing sports or in a club.

This is why i disagree that student should have to participant in an activity. There are so many stuff that student might have to do out of school that makes them not be able to join a club,sport or any other activity that they offer in the school.              ",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
3CACE02FBD5C,"There is a debate about if do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or does inactivity also serve a purpose. Some people think that is not necessary be always doing something. They feel that they need to have some extra time to be with their family and be a person that always is doing something will take away that time. In my opinion is more satisfactory be always doing something because the more you are busy doing good things or thinking and what you can do is a help to not get involve in horrible things or and drugs, you will have the opportunity to be able to give all your family need and deserve, and also you will have the satisfaction of be a good example for your kids and a support to the society.

The people that is involve in drugs, the people that get out to the streets to steal to can survive those people easily give up and did not try to find another way to get ahead, that people who make drugs, to sell drugs or the ones that consume drugs that people are living a dangerous life they are always hidden for the police or hidden because bad people are looking for them. They probably did not have another option or just they did not effort on doing something and all that thoughts became to do what they thought was easy.

Being a person that is active and always is making new things that person can be certain that they family will have everything. That person know that their kids will have the opportunity to go to school and get a excellent education. That person know that in the house will never be short of food, clothe and health. All that and more you and your family will have if you make the right choices and keep always doing new things or always be doing things and keep busy.

Now in our society good and hard working people is almost are scarcity because now some people the work in some countries the people doe not want to work they prefer be in their home doing nothing. But the people who is working those people are making the change for this society that people will become a example for all the kids but they will be a support a big support for the community.

There are some reasons why I think that the people that is always doing something accomplish more that the people that does not do anything. Is a complete satisfaction to know that all the you have is because yo worked for it and you work hard and like Thomas Jefferson said the determination never be end is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something. We can make a lot of things but we just have to have dedication and love what you do. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
A88BE59EEBAE,"when people ask for advice, sometimes seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by seeing if most peoples opinions are the same and its a good advice some opinions maybe better then others , you can also recave better advice from differnt people like your best friend can give you an advice that will help you lot but the other person that you dont really talk to that person doesnt really know how to help you like your best friend does , each opinion can help you with something different like some one may give you advice about a sport you may not need it right now but you could use it later in life so each opinion can help you later in life it may not help you never know , for example if you need advice on how to do better in school or how to get your grades up you would ask a teacher or your friends but someone else can give you bad advice or it doesnt helpe youor on how not to do well in school so its better to ask multiple peolpe then just one because you have a higher chance of getting good advice frome differnt people and you have more to opinions then just asking one persone beacse he may not have th best advice but he will try to help but you have a lower chand you can see wich helpe more and wich dont really dont helpe you would be getting good advice that will sadisfide you, so in my opinion asking multiple people for advice is better is a better chose then just asking one persone.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
9DB1E261C00D,"Hey my name is Generic_Name, and today im here at Generic_School talking with some of the students about life threating situtions where you have to take actions. let's say there was a lockdown in your school and the bad guy was at your classroom and he was banging on the door, and broke the glass window to unlock the classroom door now he found his way in! now the best thing to do is grab anything like books,desks,chairs anything you can throw at him.

Now lets talk about fire drills the best thing to do is not panic, you just got to act fast and think smart your main priorty is for you and your friends to get out the building safely. follow your teacher during the fire, cover your mouth with your shirt or sweater dont inhale the smoke thats how you pass out from the smoke.

Now the last thing im gonna go over with these 5 graders is what to do when an earth qauke is happening, the first thing u wanna do is get underneath or sink something stable tuck and duck your head. dont go under something that can fall on you that could be very risky and dangerous.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5
F4D23BAA49AE,"Although some say failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm, actually some say failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life and it makes people smarter.

Those who believed that failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm. ""weak people get tired when they try to find success but they loss"". For example, have you ever had been in a situation where you think you will succeed but you only get bad news.

However, people who say that failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life. ""Professional people face hard times, sad days and they suffer before they get a high position"".

Also, people who say that failure plays in the pursuit of success because it makes people smarter. ""A result of a survey say that smarter people learn from their lessons and try to not give up"". For example,

If you lost an opportunity it doesn't matter if you try so many times but never give up.

Although some say failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm, actually some say failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life and it makes people smarter.

We should encourage that going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm we can achieve success in life.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
A1C1C0FE3C7A,"The best thing about on this statement is how can I learn about us, maybe are you will say how?

well that easy we have to see who we are or maybe what we going to do

I have a many reasons to show and too see how can I show the people who we are?

well that's easy.

The first thing what we have to see is how we wanna say the thing examples we don't have to never give up never say no just do it and you not take care what the people is wanna say you can do whatever you want in your life just work up for it because we never did know what is wanna happened if you not take care what you want

The big reason I have in my life is some people want the thing we have maybe can be the opportunity the education family

Always i say the education is always came from the family because there is your power or your support for your future that why we have to be positive on that because we ready know that some people want the things what we have on us.

The opportunity what we got everyday or whatever we get we always we have to be thankful with everybody.    ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
0E9FC972215F,"Dear principal,

I am very honored to write to you this letter and i pray you take time from your busy schedule and read this this letter .

i hope you are doing good as i am here.

i also want to say that i am happy to be a student in your school.

first of all i take a stand on your decision of changing the school food to a very healthier one and say it a very good one.

it's a very thoughtful idea , and it's also shows that you love the school and i appreciate you for such a great idea. it's a good idea because, half of the student have allergic reaction to some food the chief's cook so they rather go hungry or have an empty stomach and if such incident still goes on, student might even pass out one day.

secondly, if we get healthier food, we will be active and our brains will be able to function well as soon as class start. However, having a good breakfast or even any good food to begin your day sometimes help the brain to work very well , and it's also help make the brain be in a very good position of working during the day.

and not only does it work for the brain, it's also consist or contain some particular minerals like carbohydrate, protein, and fat and other supplementary substance that also help for human growth and also help give energy to the human body.

lastly , changing the school food will also will make student that has never tried the school lunch will now want to try it . Moreover, some student order food and have it deliver to the school all because they do not like the school food or allergic to certain food , and if such incident keeps happening, the school food will go waste and it's will make the school loose money.

so therefore, i will end my speech by saying that it's a very good and and a nice decision for having to change the school food to a healthier one .once again i hope you take time from your busy schedule and read this letter. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
05021F4CA528,"I belived that what you yourself choose to make it because alot people have different choices in the life some people have different influence of what they belived on there own choices and ability for example like life style and what they enjoye doing to do also what they belived and whats right or wrong, who they hangout with.

I learned it in different sitution from expericing with my friends like some they change there belives and some have different life style of living some parents disaprove of them the way of living and some are disapointing what they choose to do in life. I have a friend that there parents are religious they dont agree with his life style but still respects his chocies in life. I used to haning out with my friend in house where im met his parents they told me there stories about how education was so important to them how they got more jobs from it but the otherside of there family like his uncle didnt graduted from collage but still came sucessful. I have other example told my parents my sister like going to school and told them i didnt have a interest in going to school i sometimes thought about not going to collage.

Also I belived what you youself to choose to make it because alot people have different choices in life and history some depening places where you live of come from for example like in eastern Europea Bosina and Hergionvian some people are Catholic,Orthdox and some are Muslim they grew up having life style of living and also in the U.S some people dont use modern stuff and us old fasion for example the Amish and also speak Germen differnt dialect and english.

I belived people have the right to choose they way want to live or do with there choices they make and become sucessful. I think people have different mind set of life finding out who they are whats there goal in life.

I belived there different goal and ability of doing it and the passion.

I belived alot people can anyting in life that is someting postive bring joy and get alot of sucess and get noticed.

also for the people that do negitive things i belived they should get a second chance to do it no one is perfect i think failure is the mother of succes people should have a postive mind what there going to do.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
5EFD8FA4133A,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key of success. Some people think that having a positive attitude is not the key to success. That is comprehensible but not all the time. I strongly agree that having a positive attitude can walk you threw success. In my opinion I think having a positive attitude is the key of success because It make you feel confident on what you are doing.

First of all, a positive attitude would help you to achieve many things. For example, one time I was taking a Math test, I was not thinking positive, I thought I would failed that test and that's what happened. In addition, I had my chance to retake the test and I went with a positive mind and I did it, I pass my test. Positive attitude also helped me to not get stress because I was positive and I knew I would pass that test. Therefore, a positive attitude can help you in many ways. It make you think that you are going to pass every test even thought you haven't studied.

Second of all, with positive attitude you can achieve many of your goals. Another example, one time when I was trying to get a job I was thinking in a way that I said to myself that I would not get that job. At that time I said that I can do it, That I'm going to get that job because now I have a positive attitude. At that moment when I got that job I felt so happy and my new boss told me that she liked the way that I had a positive attitude and that I was capable for the job. This shows that, a positive attitude can lead you to success.

Third of all, some people say that having a positive attitude is not going to guide you to success. They say that even thought you think in a negative way or in a positive way you can still achieve many of your goals. But, when you think in a positive way, It make you feel better and confident on what you are doing, because when you think negatively you can feel depress or sad because you don't believe on your self. Also, It can make you feel that you are not capable to, and you would fail. Furthermore, a positive attitude can guide you and walk you threw success.

To conclude, a positive attitude can walk you threw success. You can achieve many things, many goals, etc. It help you to be confident while you are doing something that is hard. It also help you to believe on your self. For me there were many times that I was thinking negatively and I didn't achieve many things but now that I have a positive attitude I'm achieving many of my goals and it make me fell proud of me. Thats why we all have to have a positive attitude.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ",3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
421FA3CBFD5C,"The matter of always doing something is great. Some say if your to idle which means always hanging out or not doing much. Your not busy at any means your just wasting quality time, that could be used doing anything productive like getting important stuff done. At the end of the day the person that has acomplished the most has a better chance of liveing better, they dont have as much stress on thinking that they still have to get so much done but has not done anything.

The day i layed in my bed not doing anything was the day that i felt sorry for my self that i couldn't get up and do something simple ass get simple chours done like feed the animals or put to wash my clothes. Than I realized the next day when i went to sleep earlier the night before, I woke up with a better out look of the day i got stuff done and had extra time, to do what i like. In my free time I enjoy working with vehicles, change oil and all the main fuctions of a car.

I stay busy to a point for example i don't wanna stay up all night doing something that is not worth the time. They are people i know that work from 10 hours up to 14 hours a day, it's not a office it's outside mannual labor it's not fun. They still get home and do what is needed. That shows there is always time to do what's needed. If the type of person that works 8 hour shift's you have plenty of time to be productive and get something good done.

It's been shown by sciencetist that human that does the most each and every day, are likely to live longer. The reason is your not dealing with all that stress of getting things done. ",2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
F1596AB60E72,"Do you think it is more beneficial to work in groups? Do you think working in groups makes you focus? Do you think working in groups is easy and fun?.

Do you think working in groups is more easier?. May people will say No and others will say yes to all these four question. working in groups is more beneficial than working alone. I think working in groups is more beneficial and good for many reasons because; we collaborate and share ideas, it more fun and easy working together and get a chance to work with people we really dont talk to. and we also get our project or work done on time.

Working in groups helps us by sharing ideas: i think working in groups is very important. it helps us bring our minds together to brainstorm some ideas or by sharing opinoin about the project or the assignment we are working on. we can discuss and make sure we understand and know the topic that we are working on. by doing this is a great thing because every person is contributing or participating in what we are working on.

Secondly, We get everything organized and get our things done on time: working alone somethings is very terrible because i takes a while to finsh, you dont get it done on time and sometimes you might need help from somebody, which sucks but working in groups more quicker. since there is about atleast three or four people in the group. it makes it more faster to get it done on time. it makes it even more easier to get the assignment done by contributing and aslo,

assigning or giving each and every person in the group a role to play or something to do to support the group in order to get it done on time.

Lastly, another reason why working in groups is beneficial is because it is easy and fun working together and let us get a chance to work with some people you really dont talk to in school. Most people likes dont like to socialize with people they dont know so they choose to work alone. which is okay,

but i think working as groups fun and easy. plus ,

it is very beneficial. I feel like working in groups is more fun. it makes us feel more free and more open to work together. when working with a group of people it is more fun because someone in the group may crack a joke or say something funny, it might cause a little bit of distraction but it brings laughter, smile, joy and happiness into our faces and that is what makes more fun and exciting to work together as a group.

In conlcusion, it is more beneficial working in groups than working alone. In groups we share ideas, we finish on time before due date and it is more fun and easy to work together with people but not just by yourself. because in groups we disscuss and make sure everyone in the group understand before we start putting effort in what we are about to do. it is very important to work together in groups because it tells us that we should encourage ourselves and work together as a team. And by showing a team work, hardwork , support and determination makes a group work more successful.            ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
F2A721819364,"Generic_Name

3/8/2020

Dear, Mr Generic_Name. I am a student who is in attendance at your high school, writhing to you about the changing of our school menu. I for one think it's a grate idea to change our school menu into a much healthier one.

Our current school menu has its redeeming qualities, but it also has a few lose ends. For example; they serve things like pizza, burgers, rice with chicken, nachos, spaghetti, Pb&j , and salad. Do you see the problem with the food items listed above? 99% of the schools menu contain high levels of fat and carbohydrates, which is not a proper meal for a growing student, or any human being. I remember seeing posters like the food pyramid, posted on the lunch room walls of my middle and elementary schools, but not once did the school lunches follow that expatiation. This is the problem with the school menus all over America today, they serve fatty foods filled with carbohydrates and not enough protein, fibers, and good fats.

As growing students, we need food that'll give us energy through out the day, and keep us focused in our classes, but the current menu isn't serving us the food we need; don't get me wrong, they have things like fruits, vegetables, and other good side options, but that's not enough. We need the main meal/ main dish to be the most healthiest thing on our trays, not the side dishes.

The students at our school may be disappointed with the sudden change in the school menu, but they'll just have to adjust to a healthier menu. It'll be nice if the school menu items was a bit more healthier, but the side options must stay the same. The side options our school menu currently have are just fine; they meet the expatiation's of a healthy side option; the offer fruits vegetables and the occasional desert.

The health of your students and my peers are important, and a big part of being healthy starts with what you put in your body, so please continue with the plan of changing the school menu, our future self's will deeply appreciate it. Thank you for our time.

Sensually, Generic_Name.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
D7C9E22CC216,"Graduating Early is a Bad Idea

Personally I think graduating in three years instead of the traditional four years should not be allowed. School should really think about this idea before making it an actual thing, because for some students this could be a good thing, but for some students this could be really bad.

Graduating early to me is a bad idea because, I dont think it gives students the right amount of time to learn everything they need to learn while being in high school. In high school students go through situations, make mistakes and bad decisions, learn how to fix those things and not do them again. Students find what they really like to do in life while being in high school but some students need a lot of time to find out what is that thing that they love and want to do for the rest of their lives. Students that play sports need to play for a good amount of time to get better at it and maybe get an scholarship, students that take mechanic courses or photography courses need a good amount of time to learn about everything they need to dominate on whatever they do, so that way colleges can come to their school, watch them and find out if they deserve a scholarship or not. While being in high school, students learn how to adapt to new environments, new people and even different languages so that way when they go to college they are ready for anything. Students that do want to follow this plan and graduate a year early, are going to have to go to school during the summers or in the evinings, if students do that then they won't be able to get a job and work what being in hish school and they won't be able to learn to manage their money and to figure out what's good or bad for them economically.

I have a friend her name is Generic_Name, she graduated a year early because she took online classes and stayed after school to graduate a year early. Generic_Name goes to college and has trouble adapting to the new environment and dealing with defferent types of people, Generic_Name is having emotional pronlems because she is not sure anymore about what she wants to do in life. Generic_Name and I talk everyday and she tells me about everything she goes through, she tells me she can't get a boyfriend because she doesn't know how to maintain a healthy relationship, she tells me she's having economical problems because she's doesn't know how to manage her money because while being in high school she worried more about getting her credits than actually learning what she had to learn to be ready to the real world.

In conclusion I think is a bad idea for schools to allow students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years of high school. Give students the right amount of time to learn everything they need to be ready for the real world.             ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
9E8984D81AC3,"The only talent or skill I have would be doing tricks. I also think that mostly everybody can do it so in my opinion that is not a talent. I have other talents which are that I am good at sports like basketball ,softball,, track, and soccer. I been doing it seen's I was little my dad wanted my siblings to be out of the house instead of being on our phones so we had to learn to do sports.

The first one I learned is soccer because it's just kicking a ball and running . The cool part about soccer is doing the tricks and everything. Soccer isn't big as well know as it should be. In the middle east it's big but not like basketball or football the whole world loves those sports. Also in the England they call it football instead of soccer but I get it makes a perfect name for it because you just kick it with your foot.

The second one I learned was track it wasn't that hard because you run or jump. When running in the track it is not about winning because the wind is in your face and running and your mind goes blank it feels so good when you are stressed. The long jump is my favorite because when I jump it's like flying then I touch the ground and it is gone. That why running is my favorite it's not about beating the other person.

The other one I learned is I think it was basketball. basketball because it is a mystery if you make it or not you just shoot and hope you make it .Seeing basketball players on TV I think help me to be better just like them. The thing about is that the boys ad girls are separated because they think the boys are too rough for them the girls can be rough too but thats why they made the WNBA [woman national basketball assonstion]. In my school they have one for girls and one for boys but a lot of people come watch he boys one way more than the girls.

The next one is softball this one I just wanted to do something different when the other seasons are over. It was boring at first when you learn how to play it becomes a game not a sport. In school we have softball but we don't have baseball for boys but I wish we did I think is unfair that the girls have one but they don't. I wish we play it at gym but we don't all we do is play field hockey. Softball is also good arm excise if you play it all the time. Thats why of all the sport my favorite is track.     ",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
E0E060143B79,"Do you think failure lead you to do better? In this paper i will argue about never losing enthusiasm by falling and falling. Failure should be just another way to do better, because you try until you get it right, when you fail; failure lead you to success in life. Also, enthusiasm and try is the key to success.

First of all, when you try until you get it right, sometimes you get really frustrated. For example; in freshman year i remember that i couldn't actually get good grades in my algebra class, i remember that i try and try my harder to get good grades. I even stayed after school, I was doing my homework, i was watching videos from my teacher. However, i was still getting bad grades in my class but i keep trying and i finally become a success in the class.

Secondly, when you fail; failure lead you to success in life. When you are working on a project or you are working on a personal goal sometimes thing doesn't actually goes the way you had planted. For example; if you are trying to solve a mathematics problem but you never get the solution you're supposed to get. Although, you keep trying and you always fail, you actually learning from it. However, by keep trying your best you actually getting experience from your failure and that helps you to success later in life.

Finally, enthusiasm and trying is the key to success. For example; when you want to achieve something but you fail, each time you're losing enthusiasm because you think that you can not do it, but if you keep trying and trying their will be a time that you will going to success and you would said that you try your best and never lost enthusiasm for your goal.

In conclusion, some people said that failure doesn't lead you to success, but they wrong because the more you fail, the more you try, and when you get it right, it will be a completely success for you. Going failure to failure led you to a good way to do better in life because the harder you try the better you do to success. In the future never stop trying without losing enthusiasm because enthusiasm is the key of your success.",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
423B413192FA,"Today I will like to explain to you the benefits of working with a group. In my opinion working with a group make things more easy and fun because students have the chance to exchange ideas and also learn more from each others it als help us to see things from different points of view.

First, working with a group make things more easy for students because they will all work together in each part of the assignment, one student can do the research while the other one write the information the other student can be looking for graphs or other information that they might need, students also get to have fun by working with a group because they can talk to each others and also laugh from their mistakes .

In addition, students have the opportunity to learn no just the topic of the assignment but also learn from each other, working with a group gives us the opportunity to exchange ideas and toughts it also help us to see the differfents points of view,by working with a group we also get help from each others because if one student does not know the answer to a questions the other students might have the right answer.

Last, for some students working with a group makes them feel more comfortable because they can help each other and support the different positions and ideas, by working all together they will have better result and they will learn more by having discussions and sharings their different opinions.

In conclusion working with a group have more benefits because the students learn more and have better results, they learn more from each other, they discuss the different points of view and they also learn to respect and listen to the different positions that they have.        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
45E5B6DE09E9,"One of the most frequently debated questions in today's society is whether or not first impression are possible to change. Many people argue that first impression are almost impossible to change. They say that is not possible and inevitable. I disagree with the statement. I believe that first impressions can be can be changed because we cannot judge people just by looking at them, everyone has different viewpoints, and we dont know the struggles that the other people are going through. Words can also hurt!

The first reason as to why i disagree with the statement is because we cannot judge people from first impressions. The way people act or interact is not essential information to see the intellectual development and capacity of those individuals who are being judge. There is a famous quote that says, ""Our words can sometimes hurt even more than a punch."" We all can relate to this, sometimes the words that other people use to express are very damaging and hard to listen; even when is just a silly joke that one of your friends is saying.

Nevertheless, everyone has different perspectives and view points, but just because we may think differently, doesn't mean we have to get driven by our perceptions or speculations. There are millions of people in this planet, and every single one of us think and look different. We are all not the same. The complementary diversity we have nowadays is a great example of this. It is good to have a great range of diversity, but the race we all come from cannot define us, nor the judgments that other people make from us.

The last and final reason is that we don't know the struggles that the other person is going through. Sometimes, we may look tired, weary, or even depressed. Sometimes we are having problems with our families or with our own selves. The judgments we make can potentially affect those individuals life. Sometime we make decisions without thinking about consequences or how those decisions are going to impact others. Decisions, such as the judgments from different speculations we make.

As you have read, I disagree with the statement. I believe that the judgment from our first impressions is not inevitable. We are capable to change our own perception from other people that can potentially affect their lives throughout the struggles that he or she may be facing.",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
36F66596E3B7,"Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.

Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school,identify a career during highs school help ,more time to decide,however,They dont have to identify a career during highs school.

Fist,Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school, identify a career during highs school help to increase the basis and experience about the career do you want for future and it is a good idea for to commit to a career at a young age because they need to start develop responsibility about the future and it's good for the student start follow the goal.(example) If a student identify the career during the highs school improve the opportunities to go ready for the university. Sdents are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.

Second,Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school. Students that choose a career in highs school have more time to investigate about career the they wan and have the opportunity to change the career and choose another career and the student do not loss the time, when student go to the university will be secure what career they want to study. (example)If a student identify the career during the highs school and the student think the career I dont like I want another career the student dont loss time and money in the university study a career that the student dont wan. Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.

In conclution,Students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school,identify a career during highs school help to increase the basis and experience about the career do you want study ,students that choose a career in highs school have more time to investigate about career the student wan and have the opportunity to change the career and choose another career and the student do not loss the time and money study a career that they dont like .Some students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter highs school.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
E7E6102C559E,"Im completly agree with this quote, because actually is hard to be youself, a person who dont even know who him is and his proposit in this world and a society were literally nobody cares about who you are, your aspect and your skills that probably gonna be used to enrich other people who doesnt even know you. Sometimes life could be misleading and maybe will be hard to find yourself or your proposit.

even your family could have 2 faces and make your way harder, thats why you need to take care who you trust and select correctly, theres bad people and just because the blood is shared doesnt make them your family. Nobody has born yo be the center of everything, even if everything looks immposible you are still able and free to be the person you wants to be even thought is hard when the world is facing you and making imposible little things,but sometimes you need to accept that somethings aint for you, nothing is just when they was maded to people with more opportunitys sometimes you will feel that you will never get a good chance to do what you actually wants. The future and the time could be creppy but you need to rememember all dreams are possible if when you keep them in mind, is not impossible to be yourself is hard ans sometimes sad when you get lost tryng to find who you are but at the end life will be good because you finally gonna be the person you wants; Because trying to be yourself in this ugly and unfear world is the greatest accomplishment, at the end nothing is more important than you.",2.5,2.5,4.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
C4472C6DFE66,"Some people believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem even if the work is not the students best effort.

I believe that is not the best choose a student's to practice this work to build self- esteem; for many reason, because some people don't has the idea if the student's are agree or disagree this is no the best way to improve in their self-esteem to practice on praising. And other is they need to improve in their achievement, because they are not sure if this come from praise or achievement. Also students they has the last world, if they need to practice the things the some people thinking to the benefit for their self-esteem.

1. Reason some people don't has the idea if the student's are agree or disagree, i think this is not the best way to improve in their self-esteem, because students they believe in praising but, this is not the option to learn in their self-esteem they need to focus in their achievements. even if some people belief on praising,they think this help students to believe in praising i think students believe in this source but is not the principal option to believe in praising they need to focus in their achievements, values and skills because is one the priority and purpose to believe in their self-esteem this ideas must be to help to lean focus.

Students need to improve in their achievements, because some people are not sure if this come from, praise or achievements. I think this are two different thinks, also one is believe in religion, for example: I belief in Jesus this is praise they don't need to compare, but i don't dismiss this idea,because is good idea to students believe in praising. Another is achievement this come from the goals you made and the effort you did it for your accomplishments.

Also students their has the last word, if they need to practice the things the some people thing, to the benefit for their self-esteem, but the two are good idea for instill students don't believe, if this is the correct option, also they need to make the best effort to practice the best way to help their career in the future.

In conclusion the students dont need to practice thing that some people thinks,to improve to help and learn more about self-esteem, this is one the purpose to improve their self-esteem, this is optional in what you believe if their praising or achievements but this two different things, but is good idea learn both for better self-esteem to understand. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
ED0A8E614649,"Techonology has becoming powerful that let students and teachers to give and receive classes online. Disadvantages or adventages of taking classes online? These question are faced today by students deciding taking online classes. Often students work part or full time jobs while going to school or collage so their time is valuable. these students want to make the right decisions in choosing classes so knowing the disaventage and adventages is important. I believe that online classes is a good opportunity for students as it gives flexibility, they often offer any type of class desired and provide access to faculty, and they often offer accelerate courses.

To begin with, one of the best adventage of online classes is flexibility. A student can usually take the course any time during the day or week. While there are custom essay writing and researching assigments to complete, the precise time to take the class often depends on the student's desire. Students who work are able to take the class based on their schedule. Many students work on afternoon. The flexibility makes it possible for a person to complete the course, while attending school or collage courses in person might be imposible due to their work schedules.

Secondly, another great adventage of online courses is that almost any type of course can be found online. Distance learning course are often avaliable from a number of collages. A person can simply use the google to find a class. While most people believe a disadventage of taking online courses is that the students can not have access to faculty a member, the fact is that many online courses offer a grater access to faculty. Shy students are able to ask questons and receive the answer back almost inmediately.

Lastly, Online courses are convenient for most undergraduate and graduate students who can study when they want and they can finish writing or researching assigments based on their own person schedules. The fact is online classes offer flexibility and conveniece that are often vital to students who work and have families. In addition, many students are looking for classes that are advanced to complete the course faster. The best way to advance in the class is to make it online because in the regular schools it takes a long time as there are students who get behind and the teachers wait for them since everyone has to go at the same time.

To conclude, with online classes, students do all the work at their own pace. As long as they meet their deadlines and participate apropriately online. Also, studying online requires more self motivation and time mangement skills because students will spend a lot of time on their own without someone physically close to keep them focused on deadlines. Online course will not only teach students geology or poetry, it will also help them become more self motivated, a trait that will make them stand out in the workplace and beyond. It will teach educators to be mature choosing right decisions as it will make them explore more and be students with an open mind.         ",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
6886DF2A98BE,"Scientist Albert Einstein once said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" I agree with what Albert Einstein said. Some people think its the other way around were knowledge is more important than imagination. imagination and knowledge could be used for a lot of things. I think that imagination is more powerful than knowledge because you can come up with many things and in order to get knowledge on something you need imagination.

Imagination is something you need to come up with things. You need to think about it first, get the things you need to create it, and then study from it. Imagination can help you a lot, You can use your imagination to your advantage, you can use it keep you busy. you can build things, draw things,and create things from your imagination. you can do many more things with your imagination. Imagination has no limits.

In order to get knowledge of something, you would need to use your imagination. You would need to take notes and study from it. you use your imagination to get knowledge. You can learn so much from your imagination and its very useful. we have to be careful with our imagination and our knowledge. Its ok to make mistakes while learning, you just have to learn from them.

In conclusion I think imagination is more important. We use out imagination every day. We learn things every day. It would be hard without imagination. Imagination can be used for a lot of things like making a cartoon show, drawing, and thinking. You can also use you imagination while you read. We wouldnt know much because we get our knowledge from our imagination.               ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
5F8195FBA0CA,"Imagine schools use cell phones in classrooms for educational purposes, students will not have a hard time to find information on their classes. Schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classroom, this rule is important because cell phones are the distraction, students will have an opportunity to cheat on the test or the exam, and cell phones will cause the laziness, lack of knowlegde, and procrastination to students.

Certainly, some people think cell phones should be allowed in classroom because students can have a cell phones' break after finishing their test, they can enjoy some entertainments on the cell phones, some students will focus more on education with the musics on their cell phones. Others believe cell phones should be allowed in classroom because students can easily work on the projects, they can search for more information that they do not know much about. Still others argue cell phones should be allowed in classrooms because they will help some foreign students with the dictionary apps on the cell phones. Cell phones also help students in classrooms such as: reviewing notes by playing kahoot, some games' apps which include school knowlegdes.

However, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classrooms because they are creating an opportuniy for students to cheat on the test or the exam. Students will definitely use the cell phones during the test in classroom if cell phones are allowed. For example, students usually take pictures of the answers and send them to the other students. The second reason of why they cheat is because everything can be easily saved and taken on the little smart cell phones, so why do students have to spend a hard time to study for the test ? They can just easily write down information on their test from the little smart cell phones, so what is the point of education? This rule is definitely unaccepted.

Furthermore, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classrooms because the cell phones are the huge distraction. Imagine everybody is sitting quietly in classroom, and suddenly the little noise is popped up from the cell phone, catches a thousand of people's views. Of course no one likes being distracted but having the cell phones during classes is the huge mistake that causes the bad things to everybody around. For example, some students always play some unappropriate songs very loud while everybody else is taking the test, this situation always happens in every school. The second reason is the person who is with a cell phone, can attract the other one who sits beside, and interrupt other students' business.

Finally, schools should not allow students to use cell phones in classroom because they will cause the laziness, lack of knowlege, and procrastination to students. Students will keep messing on their cell phones, and ignoring the education, causing the lack of knowledge. Students will not absorb enough knowledge into their brain because they can just easily search for information on their cell phone without thinking critically of what they are doing. They can have the good results but actually they have nothing in their brain from school. The more schools allow students to use cell phones, the more they are worsening their students.

Cell phones should not be allowed for students to use in classrooms because cell phones are the huge distraction in classrooms, even in other public places, students will have an opportunity to cheat on the test or the exam using the cell phones, and cell phones will cause the laziness, lack of knowlegde, and procrastination to students. If the cell phones are allowed in every school, students will not need to go for education because everything is available to use on cell phones. Schools only need the real hard working, and the real quality from students, not from websites on cell phones. Every school should always have to think critically about the effects of allowing students to use cell phones in classrooms.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5
1E6F7CF7470E,"To help or make the world a better place you only need one thing, your imagination.

Imagine this, a world without people imagining things. if people don't use their imagination then half of the stuff we have now would be not here. I agree that imagination is important than knowledge, because you can imagine how your future going to be, and imagine how you can change the world.

Imagination is important because without it, how did people make the things we have now, because they use there imagination. If you imagine it hard enough it might come true. Scientist are making medicine to cure the sick, why do they do that? Because they imagined that if there was no medicine then half of they human population would die, so they make medicine. If there were no police then our world would be full of criminals and destruction so they imagined to make a police station and people became cops. You can also help out the world. If you just imagine how you are going to do that and imagine how your future is going to be if you do that. I know some of us imagine to grow up and marry a famous person, sadly imagination don't work like that, but there are many beautiful girls and boys (or puppies, if your going to be single all your life) out there. And I know you prefer someone like Emma Watson or someone else, but like I said imagination don't work like that. You can also imagine the impossible and it could happen ( but not the marriage part), if you make it happen. So I believe that imagination is more important than knowledge and I hope now, you do to.

Go Go Power Rangers",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
62F578BA97ED,"The negative effects of Technology allows people to complete many tasks like check out books, shop, and play games with out speakings to other person, all that make people to get not soscial communication, vison problems and force the libraries to change.

First, not social communication. The people spend more time than the neccesary using technology, and they forgot about the circle of the persons around them. For example, when they're playing video games, they spend hours playing videos games that makes them forgot about the person next to them. Secondly, Vision ploblems. This is the biggest one, around a 60% of the students in the school use glasses becuase the time that they spend in their smart divices them eyes ball get burn, also is those days is the first thing that the parent put in from of their childrens. Finally the probles with the Libraries. The technology force libraries to makes changes becuase, in the 20th Century not one want to read a book that's why libraries start buying the new technolgy for they costumers.

Inconclusion the Technology in the 20th Century help to much but we need to know how to use it becuase the negative effects will be more bigger.",3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
EFD563DFAC60,"Although some people might say that students should use cell phones in the classroom for education purpose. Also some people might says that cell phones can effect students study and their grades in school, and it is not a good thing for students to having their cell phones in classroom.

However, not everyone agrees with this position,because cell phones can effect students health such as eyes problems if students look at it for a long time. And it can get students interest about games or social media or app for chatting. Additionally, there might be support for this idea that cell phones can help students to search on things or information that they are looking for in class. Also cell phones can help students easily to contact with their friends at school or to call their parents in an emergency situations.

Ultimately, this argument cannot stand because cell phones can effect students scores, students might be missing something important in the class while playing with cellphones. It seems like nothing but cellphones can destroy students future. The reason this idea is fallible that students cannot focus on class if they are using cell phones in the classroom.

Given these points, students might be get addicted to cell phones and cell phones will became a bad habit for students. One possible solution to this issue might be using cell phones only for an emergency problems or education problems. some students that can control the limit of using cell phones. Students better to use cell phone in the classroom when it is necessary, but not for the game or chatting with someone else.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
2A2AE5FB899F,"One topic that is frequently debated today is, if the amount of work days should change to less then five days to four with the idea of conserve energy and resources. Many people think the school should reduce the day of school. Some people believe that is a good idea to conserve this value and important resources. I think this idea will not make a good change because many student will be affected with this idea they work after school, we will have less time to do wherever we want, and it is difficult to everybody to stay focus ten hours in the school.

To being,

just imagine all the students how work after school, everyone have a limit in our body's and mind's to do different activities every single day. If for the students how they don't work after school it is really difficult to stay on time with they homework, think about the student's that only get home and just change their cloths, maybe eat something at home or just wait for a break in the work. A lot of students have to pay their own food, clothes, and even a lot of them pay rent. If the school finish at six, they will have less time to make money to live, that is one of the big situations that a lot of teenagers live every day. Now think about the increment of the time in the school and all the effects that will have.

Therefore, our second reason is we will have less time to do wherever we want or wherever we need to do. If the school finish at six only in one hour or more, the night come out. If you want to play soccer on the grass you can't because is to dark, a lot of stores close early, if you want to buy something you couldn't because probably the stores are closed at that time. when we got home our parents probably are not even there, many of them have to work on night. we only will have four hour's to do at less something that we want to do or we need to do starting from six to teen with the idea of that is the time to go to sleep.

However, it is difficult to stay focus ten hours in the school. More time in the school, more time of homework or even more classes to take. We will have even less time to do any activity after school, because we will not have enough time to finish our work. With all the material that we have to finish we being to stress out and not doing good in the school.

In conclusion, the amount of day at school is not necessary to change to less them five days and steel the same time, everyone get tired and sometime everyone only need a rest to continue day by day. We can fiend better ways to conserves this values resources, reduce the time of work and school will not make a big change. what about all the companies that only want to make money and they don't even care about the resources in our planet just keep doing money and destruction. sleep well if one of the most important needs of our body. If we have less time in the afternoon to do ,what we need to do we will not go to sleep early. We can't follow the same routine every single day, after school we can: play soccer, go to shopping, go to the movies. A lot of different activities that we can do, like one famous quote say "" It is more time,then life "" . We could do better with more time on our hands.               ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
1CE5DBCEF2CE,allow students to bring phones to school and wen the students jots phones are lunch periods and other free times as long as the phones are turned off during class time picas if the tilous abaute thephones dei gana tec avei and the phones tey iosem olote in school and tes mait get in a crach and dai be ded and if di don't tecst in the care tea uerent get in a crech nou day are happy but and picas in the story ter sade. and tei are neve tescin in the care. do not allow students to have phones at school at all.,1.5,1.5,1.5,1.0,2.0,1.0
FDB362959DDF,"Do you think that student is much better graduate in 3 years early in High School? In the articule, I will argue that this program is a great opportunity to finish High School and start college early, But has to take some courses on summer school or evenings or if not are able to graduate in 3 year. Student can finish early High School. Student could start early college. Student can start to work. Student has the opportunty to finish High School and start to think in a new career in college. Student who graduate early has a opportunity to find a job and help to their family. I never can do it to graduate me early beacuse i made some crazy thing in my past that i can go back and make a correction, but this a good opportunity for all of them that can graduate early on High School. Should student be able to graduate High School in 3 year early? Some say that is not good to graduate in 4 year, but i say is better graduate in 3 year early as i coudn't do it at this time is too late to make me a correction on my life. In the future, i would like to my sons finish High School early if they can, to they have a better future than i was they will be better than me and never give up to find their future. In conclusion, students are able to finish High School early with complete all their requirement courses, then is better to graduate 3 year early at High School and i will let my sons know that make their effort and don't make my mistake to make then a better than i am. Thank you so much to take the pleasure to read my issue. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
04B6FD84A066,"Aiming for small goals and accomplishing them are pointless. although, it is not a bad idea to make small goals and achieve them however, aiming for a bigger achievement will help in the long run. Achievements that are harder or much bigger can teach you a lot during the process of failure. In my opinion failing at long term goals is more beneficial then achieving small goals.

One reason why failing at long term goals is better then to achieve a small goal is that you keep learning when you fail it is a part of life that you need in order to have success. For example, You might never succeed or progress in something you havent failed at, failure helps you learn to do better and not make the same mistakes. Achieving small goals is not a bad idea but to fail while trying to go your hardest is better because that is your full potential and it helps in your future. Aiming for easier goals does not help learn about failure and you need failure to be successful and experienced.

Having long term goals is the better way to go. For instance, you can have a goal that can go on for a couple years and when you accomplish it it will feel way better than something you didnt fail or get tired on. Long term goals also help you plan ahead and really perfect your craft or perfect what you are trying to accomplish. Having a goal that you can easily achieve does not help you with learning because you dont fail and it does not take tie and experience. For example, a goal is something you have to push to achieve, so if you dont have to fail and learn it is not a realistic goal.

Accomplishing and working on something you know you can achieve is not really success. Goals are achievements that are supposed to benefit you. For example, if my goal was to learn how to swing a bat it wouldnt be better than my goal wanting to win the world series. small achievements come with big goals you can learn how to swing a bat while you are training for the world series. Aiming bigger will help you accomplish more then just your goal . It will also teach you skills like patience and practice and that you will accomplish small goals on the road to the big goal.

As you can see, I agree with what Michelangelo said about aiming low and accomplishing your goal because when you aim low you dont really have a challenge or real goal. You dont get to experience failure and having to do so much to reach the goal. Aiming higher and failing is when you put your effort and you fail but when you learn from that failure and keep trying to achieve the goal in different ways you will achieve it as well as other small goals along the way.",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
0DB44DDF91E6,"Dear principal.

We like to clean litter from our school to help the janitor.

My friends would like to clean the litter with me outside the school.

There kids that don't clean the litter in there school & Others who does.

We will help the janitor clean the litter.

From STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
67E711AF87A2,"Are you done trying to reach your goal in life? Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is right. If you have accomplished somthing in life but you are not where you want to be then go for more. Keep trying to go beyond from what you have already masterd. It puts your self out their, and lets people know you want more then what you already have. You will defenetly grow if you keep trying. In the process of trying to master things in life it will be important for professionalism,money,and being successful.

Having professionalism in you takes a lot of work and time. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo is a profesional sorccer player, he was once a starter in soccer. Of coures it took time and hard work and lots of practice to get to where hes at.

Another example when i stared playing soccer i was 4 and it was really hard, it was hard to kick a ball or to keep up with the ball, but i went to the feild with my freinds every day and i wanted to be really good so i did not give up. I nocticed my self growing a lot and now i play for a really good soccer team and planning on going to a good soccer collage. However Jobs is something that takes time and hard work. If you work hard at a job and show people that you are good at it, it can get you a better jobs in the future.

Money dose not come to you for free you must do something for it for example, when i was 12 years old i was to young to get a job so i would go next door and ask if i can mow thier lawn or if they had any jods for me.

When you are trying to reach a goal in life and you are growing big time more money gets involved, which is a really good thing. If your boss sees you doing really good at your job your boss can give you a raise or make you be assistant manager because they notice that you are growing and that you want to master more. The more you grow the more better you'll get.

When you made it to where you want to be, you were seccessfull. you tried your hardest and did as much as you can to get to the top. To be seccessfull you need to study a lot try to listen and watch a lot. when you are growing you make mistakes which is fine it happends to a lot of people. You will learn from your mistakes and lessions. For example when i was 5 years old and i was at my soccer game i accidently scorded on my own team and it never ended up happening again cause i learned from my mistakes. Some may say if you don't go beyond from what you have accomplished, you will still grow. They are wrong because the more further you go to accomplish things will make you grow more and it wil help you reach more goals in anything.

Always try to do more then what you have already done. Dont let anyone stop you. You will not grow if you don't go beyond from where you are at. It's good to do anything it takes to master something in life. There are lots of ansers and help everywhere to grow.                                                      ",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
6F9741277AB3,"People should make their own decisions instead of seeking guidance from experts or authorites about lifes important matters. I personally know that making your own decisions is better then other people making your decisions because if a expert or other person did, they could probably decide something you dont want and then regret it later in life.

One reason why i know making your own decisions is better then seeking guidance from experts is becuase when making your own desisions you know what your doing but you have to think twice about it and then go with it. Like for example, if i chose to take geosystems instead of physics i think about it twice because i know what could be the bad thing and the good thing about that class and then go for what i think is better.

Second reason why i know making your own decisions is better because when a person makes a decision they made, then later regrets what they chose, they made a mistake. Thats a good thing because learning from your mistake's helps you a lot and benefits the wrong and making mistake's will make you a more successful person. For example, if i were to take an exam then get the results that i failed because i got a really bad grade i would try again but wouldnt give up which makes me successful.

Final reason why i know making your own decisions is better because who else in this world can? Its your life and theres never gonna be a person right by you telling you what do and what not to, so they have to learn by their selfs becuase no one is. For example, what if i said i wanted to go buy a house, who should i ask to make my decision? no one because you make your own decisions in this life.

These are the reasons why making your own decisions is better then seeking guidance from experts.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
10F5D7C3719C,"Some people shose for a four work week model, should be this one be taken as practice at schools. In this option there are many people who think this is a benefit to conserve energy in whatever place.

I think that this practice could be disadvantage because it will be two more hours of work, between longer day , the estudents will be using more energy in those ten hours every day.

Then, we have to use more resources at school for the students be working in class those resources could be naturals, we could be wasting many papers,water when we are in the school and we have to make progress of this kind of resources.

Also, ten hours each day we will be wasting resources as electricity every class could be using computers,monitors,tablets, and we have to find a way how to save this resources at school.

In conclusion all of this are my reasons and explanation by this model of how to conserve energy and resources at schools. ",3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
AEEEF8816516,"Technology is a tool for the human to amuse because people can check out books,shop, and play games without speaking to another person, but at the same time technology effects on people's lives. Here are some negative and positive reasons that technology cause to the people.

Many people lost their time with play games, for example, 75% of childhood and young play games every day thats means that more than 1 million of kids take their time with games, so the consequence of the future of this generation can be different because right know children's starts to loss communication with parents or starts to be aggressive with others. thats a negative reason.

Now, technology helps a lot because makes more easy on people's lives. for example, During the time technology creased every day, exist apps that you can use for jobs and apps that you can use to contact others easier. On this times young people study about photograph, edition, effects, agriculture and more because that is the feature, but we need to be careful because if we carelessness the future can be horror.

The technology is too important for the world. There is positive reasons and negative reasons it just depends what you care more, Technology or the world, and i'm not saying that we need to eliminated the technology. I'm just thing that we need to be care for this if we want a good feature, So one thing we can do is to get more communicate, friendship, share with people, go outside, visit the nature. If we still do those things our feature will be pretty good.

To conclude, Technology is a tool for the human to amuse, It's depends how we used. in the positive way or wrong way.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
2116231D1DC4,"I would like to visit two countries one of them is Spain and the other one is located in central america and is my countrie is Honduras but i have more like Generic_City, Generic_City, and Japan,and UK just to see their national things that they have. But my top two countries that i would visit is Spain and Hondura.

You maybe be saying to yourself why is he want to visit the two countries. Well i picked spain because Spain have a lot of good things like they national food. The national food of spain people say that is delicious and like they want to try more. But theres one place that their food taste super good and is Generic_City. Generic_City is a famous place in spain because of their food and their soccer team oh yeah they have a soccer teamif you dont know about soccer them let me tell you about it.

Barca is a famous soccer team in sapin and in the whole world like if you know someone that likes soccer ask about barca. Well Generic_City has a Famous stadioum call Camp Nou and like they have the best soccer player in the whole world messi and like i would like to watch a soccer game in that stadioum like a classico or a liga game but yeah like i would like to watch a game in there.

Talking about baracelona theres a soocer team call real masedrid and thats FCB Generic_City enemy when they play we call it the classico cause two of the best team ever play together is a big thing for some fans that likes soccer and like i would like to try their food just to know how it taste and same for Generic_City im not a big fan of real madrid but i would like to watch a soccer game in their stadioum the stadioum name is el bernabeu is a another famous stadioum.

But a another place i would like to visit is the stadioum of el atlectico why because i want to see the stadioum of atletico de madrid i think the name of the atleticos stadioum is el coliseo i think thats the name and there a another state in spain that i want to go and is Generic_City why because i would like to see my favorites youtuber hosue cause like im a big fan of him and like i been following him in youtube sences 4 years and like thats a dream for me too.

A another place that i would like to visit is were i was born my countrie Honduras. Hounduras is located in central america near guatemala belinze and salvador. Did you know that hounduras has a lot of frontiers with anothers countries. And like i would like to visit because i never went to watch a soocer game in honduras stadioum and i remeber that i used to pass near in the car with my dad and my mom.

We used to watch the soccer games in the tv me with my dad and my brother i used to remeber that i were going to go for the first time a soccer game in the stadioum but them it started to rain a lot so my dad told us that we are ot going to the stadioum no more because is going to be dangeours so we were sad i was more sad and like i think i started to cry but like that was like 6 years ago.

And like i have my most of my family in Honduras and i remeber that i used to have two pets the first one was a dog and the second one it was a perrot and i used to have a another dog but the dog his name was ranger die cause he aet something thats we could find but yeah.

This is the last place that i want to visit and is Generic_City thats the last place that i want to visit and you will be saying to yourself why this. And i would say let me tell you i will vist this palce because it has the world largest tower in the world like theres rich people in there driving bugatis and ferrarris and more cars that you dont see anywere.

I like this place because like you see like lions as a pet or a cheeta or anything like this people are crasy.

I lie to you theres a another place that i would like to visit and is japan why because likes theres hunted places like the famous forest located in japan and ect like i would like to try new type of food like there national food and there national place and like im more aventure guy. I like dangeours things i dont know why but im like that i could visit australia why cause i like any type of animal like snakes lions spiders and more and like i used to watch a tv show call steve irwings he die bye a rai fish but i used to watch it and like animals started to like them i sued to be scared of bees spiders frogs and that type of animals i wish i could have the type of job but thats all the places that i want to visit you got to know me. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
5C05D79FE75A,"Should people make their own decisions or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?

In my opinion, I think that people should seek guidance form experts and authorities, for many reasons this solution has prove to be effective, if a person listens to other people opinions, then the decision the person makes will not be base only on his/her opinion.

First, lets say if a male person seek guidance from experts and authorities when taking a decision, it shows that he is obedient and he will not act recklessly when taking a decision about his life, it shows that he is willing to listen to other people perspectives.

Second, in my opinion i think that asking for guidance shows matureness, it shows that you care about yourself and others opinion, it also shows wiseness when you ask others for guidance first so you can decide and make the best decision.

In conclution, people should seek guidance from experts when taking a decision about their life, I think that if people set aside their pride and worries, we humans would make better choices not just for us but for our entire environment which it also includes other species.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
3D4475C949C2,"The idea of schools allowing their students to take classes from home is is an excellent idea. Not all students learn the same way,or at the same pace as everyone else. Having the opportunity to learn in a way that is most comfortable for you, can really show improvements in grades. Students who are sick and are not able to attend school also have an advantage of doing missing work from home. This will give students no excuse for being behind with school work if their able to do classes from home.

Students that are often sick, or miss a lot of school because of personal reasons would have an advantage with doing their classes from home. If students have the opportunity to do classes from home they dont have to stress about returning to school, and having a lot of class work to make up. Therefore, students will no longer have an excuse for failing classes because of absences if they have the option to do it from home. When i had my surgery last school year it was nearly impossible for me to catch up on all my missing work, the only way i could do my class work was if someone picked it up from school. Unfortunately my parents both work so while i was out of school i had no way to do it from home. It was very difficult to finish all that work after getting back, because i was not given many options of getting the work done. If i was given the option to complete my class work from online this would have really helped me maintain my grades up.

Seniors might be in the position where they need more than the usual amount of classes to graduate by their final year. Having to be in such a difficult position and only being able to attend morning or night school can make it harder to get these classes done on time. This will only make it stressful, and discourage students to get the classes done by the time of graduation. Not only do some seniors have jobs after school but having to attend a full day of school, and either morning or night school can be tiring and overwhelming. Overdoing yourself can also decrease the amount of people that pass their classes because of the reason that they have to much to get done in a matter of one school year,so allowing students to do some classes online will make it easier for more students to graduate.

The idea of online classes might sound difficult for some students because they tend to learn better face to face. Schools can offer virtual teaching lessons for those who have an issue with attending all their classes at school and learn better by someone verbally explaining each concept to them. Not all students have computers at home which is understanding, in order for students to complete online classes from home they will need a computer,schools can offer students a borrowed computer or laptop in order for them to participate in online classes. Schools can Introduce a system where they provide for those who need the help of obtaining a computer and to still be able to do their classes from home. By providing for those who need the computers, students will not be held back from the idea of doing classes from home just because they dont own a computer.

Having the choice of doing classes from home can be very beneficial to students. This gives students the opportunity to complete more classes and actually do them without having the excuse of being absent to school. Given the chance of doing classes from home can increase the passing levels for more classes. The idea of doing classes from home can be helpful for students who need it, and encourage students who need the option of at home classes to actually get these classes done from home. I think all schools should have an option that allows students to do classes from home.        ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
F591A84185A4,"I was thinking to work at the police station because I can work on cases that could allow me to travel around the world and some cases that can be cool and super fun. It would be fun to work at the police station because you can travel to different countries and cities you have never been to. Therefore, you can explore from above when riding a air plane and you can meet different people. Also experience of what type of cultures people do in their country.

Working at the police station would be cool and super fun because I can work on fun cases, involving to ride different vehicles or going undercover and going places. Just imagine your manager assigned you to go to Korea and you stayed there for a few years. You have made new friends and learned the Korean language. You had to take Tae Kwan Do and you made it to black belt. However you still work with the U.S. police. And you also observe of what they do in Korea, for example, how they harvest rice and at what type of climate they need to be in or how the people eat their food and how younger children greet the older men and women. Also experience what people do in their specific culture and what laws they follow and things they need to respect. And also how they sell to get money.

Also working with police means you are not alone, you have teammates with you. They can also help you on cases that can be dangerous. Your teammates can be helpful and fun because they can help make wise decisions and on something risky, like you have their back and they have yours. They can also be help and caring/fun when you are stressed out and they try to make you feel better or trying to comfort you and not making you feel lonely. For example, On one Sunday morning you felt sick and a strange feeling you had something missing. You ate breakfast and you remembered you needed to finish on one of your assignments your manager had gave you. you felt even more sick. All day you tried to erase the fact that you didn't complete you assignment, you tried to throw that thought away, but you couldn't. You wanted to not even think about and wishing the thought could just disappear. You felt like brain was rotting for thinking too, much. You called you best friend ( that also worked at the police station:) because you wanted some company. When she entered your apartment, she saw that you weren't in the living room. She went to your bedroom noticed that you had been eating junk food all day because you had lots of your favorite corn chips and an empty box of pizza beside you. Just then she started to stare at you, and you were reaching for a bucket of your favorite ice cream, strawberry. She looked at you and saw that you scooped a spoonful of ice cream and you shoved it into your mouth, with your TV on. (You were watching the Titanic with the lights off because you felt sad and had nothing to do) She went up to you and hugged you and asked what has happened to you and why you were feeling down. You told her why you were so miserable and guilty for not finishing your assignment. She stoop up and told you that she was going to help you. You also stoop up lazily, but you felt excitement. You went to go change and finished the assignment on time. This is why it's a good thing to be friends at work for you can't be so lonley.",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
7FB1724D76FF,"I want to be a docter of little kids. why I want to be a docter it becuase I want to work with little kids. I will hear his or her little heart. when they are sick i want to help them but I don't want no one die on my hand that will be so sad. when they are sick I will see what is the best for her or him. I want to be a good docter for them. I will be a funny and playful dactor I wish to one of the best docter. little kid are so cute when they are a baby.

I want to be a best docter so i want all the little to stop eat bad food and thing that it bad for them. Yes they can eat bad thing but not every day they have to eat food that there mom cook for them becaues that is better for them and they the little kids a small they need alot of good thing there body. I care alot about little kids.

I will help there mom to do the best there kids. I wll tell them what they need to do every day for the kid don't get sick that muche all year long. I will take good care of them when theny see me and there mom have to do there job at home by there food and help them when they need help.

When you come to see me I don't want to be a mean docter I want to be sweet like a candy. I wish that all kid love when they see me and there mother I will be my friend. When they need me to help them they just need to call me. I will be a good helper when you help me I will help you.

First if i want to be a good docter I want to study alot because I want know if I am doing that thing right. I want to study alot because I want the best for them. I don't want nothing bad happen to them. yes I will make mastiak but from them you learnd.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
C6B1B7E91EE8,"The most enjoyable educational activity would be when we go out side to play sports out side. The school has multiple enjoyable sports like baseball, basket ball, and soccer, but the most fun for me would be foot ball because it has a lot of physical movement.

Way I like it so much is because the strategy you and your teammate use and because u can put more trust in other people and it's fun to play against other team and learn how they work.

Or if sports is not something you like that much the science club dose different experiment like when they made a volcano they made erupt it was fun helping them. The drama club is something that most people like because of all the acting and getting to know more people its amazing wen people that nobody notice before can be come stars bay working hard and practicing all their lines and not mess up its amazing.

Or may be more of a musical person theirs a classroom for people that can play an instrument they make loud but enjoy able music to dance to they are kinda amazing and then wen people start singing its amazing wen your body hears their voices its incredible I wont lay right now out of everything the music classroom is what i like the most over sports and everything else.",3.0,2.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
D139A5C53DE9,"Most people create their own way or destiny to go in life. They also know that believing in themselves will improve their capacity and potential to be successful. People who are motivated all the time tend to rich a 99% of their goals easily at school or Colleges. As they know being focus is the key to succeed in life. But those who has never tried are the ones to come last , because they do not have enough motivation or self-confidence to do it.

In some cases people are reponsible for their own motivation in life and what'd help them to be successful it is to take good decison.

There are so many opportunities out there, that will make us to be better and what we don't have to do is to make mistakes that will lead us to bad life style. Because later on we won't have second chance to prove our skills and be someone important to admire.

Although people who has a positive attitude are trustful, smart, and kind etc. Even they could help people to reach their dreams. But not always people have the same motivation or satisfaction to stand up and fight for what should be helpful and worthy. Most people tend to give up, because they think it's complicated or hard to get it. But if they do not put a bit of effort to make it won't happened. The success of a person is being dedicated all the time and no matter how hard it's going to be. But they will always give their lives to make it real and that's when they realized that all the effort was for a good reason to be on where they are now.

Those who keeps a positive attitude are the ones to inspire other people by writing books, quotes, poems, etc. People look at them as a way to motivate themselves and believe they can do the same to reach their goals. Sometimes people apply their concepts as how to be successful in life and what it is required to the success of school. People just have to be apassionate for things they love to do in their daily life and the opportunity to prove they are better. Even they will shine like a pearl for the effort and work ethic. They used to give to be positionated far way from others like one of the success person ever seen before.

School, Grades, Homework are important to the success in life. When people tries the best to do well at school there's an increase of chances to be committee for an University, because they look for all the things students do well and because the success for people is believe on what they can do right and how can do it to bright out there.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,2.5,3.5
E587CBD5D1E4,"How we know the first impression is important and not always it's impossible to change it with our actions, and attitude, it depends of the situation.

Sometimes the first impression can be good. For example if I going to meet my girlfriend parents or if I go to meet my friend parents I need to have a good appearances to give a good impression but we can have a good impression but that can change. However if we do bad things like with our girlfriend if we treat bad her the parents are going to have a bad impression and that can change or with our friend if we don't help or if we give bad adviser to him the parents can think bad about us even if the first time we get a good impression.

Sometimes the first impression can be bad. For example in a job interview, during the interview if we don't use the correct language or if we go with bad aspect we can't get the job. However even if I give a first bad impression that will change if in the same interview we use a good language and if we respond the answer properly that can help you and finally in my own interview a give a bad aspect but I use the correct language in the interview and I get the job that's why I think that can help you in a interview when you get a bad impression.

In conclusion the first impression not always It's impossible to change if we know how to deal with it.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
EF8047505E53,"Thomas Jefferson once said, ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Being active like career goals and helping others and being inactive can lead to alot of health proplems.

Do people accomplish more if there pursuing their own interest, or just being inactive also accomplish goals also?

Being inactive can lead to health benefits, and also your not helping yourself in life, also there is no purpose. If not being active can lead to an unsuccessful life. Just being inactive is bad in general but people do have opinions on about it. Some people like to stay inside, not get a job, dropout of school, and fisk of having a unhealty body.

Being out of contact of the world is bad, and it very unhealthy to do that.

Next is being active. It serves a purpose, and it benefits a lot in life like: maybe healthy body, pursing career goals, school goals, and helping others. Getting a job is good example of being active. Taking time out of the day to go accomplish anything that people are interested in is a good idea. People can pursue new learning skills in school or universities. Being active and getting goals accomplished is good in life.

Having to participate in a activity will do good in life. As Jefferson said ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much mat be dine if we are always doing"".

There will always be different opinions on being active and inactive but not everyone is the same in the world.",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
F43067F5C920,"I'm strongly agree with Thomas Jefferson statement about...""determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"". There is many motives to don't be idle, but I consider that the most significant could be your own health. Doing something productive keep your body and mind working, and as we know exercise help us to avoid many kinds of diseases, and perhaps raising our lifetime. It's like my grandfather told me someday in the past...""

if I stop to work, I'll die,because, work help me to forget all my bad situations in my life even my diseases, and instead of that I always thinking... what would be my next task to accomplish

?"". My grandfather is 80 year old and he worked all his life, all my family members says that he is so intelligent, and can see the satisfaction in his eyes when he accomplish something,

I used to be idle when I'm in a difficult situation in my life, that don't make me feel good enough at all, is quite the opposite, that make me feel in a situation or stress or anxiety. Even my doctor says that I need to distract myself practicing some sport or at least walk around the street. that something simple but changed my life, because I met people, I made new friends and I've got a job where I feel so confident. but that wasn't easy, because I fought and I'm still fighting against my pride and my arrogance that don't let share good times with the people around me.

You can learn more if you are always doing something, even if you make mistakes, because of mistakes you will know how to avoid them in the future,at the same time that would help you to develop new skills which is a good benefit for yourself when your looking for a good job or social position.

You going to be able to make more task easily, making you more intelligent. , because you are earning experience, the experience also you will help you, to know what you really want to do in the future.

If you determine never to be a idle, and make the decision to be an active person, you can know more about yourself and life and you also will find your path in this world; what really is your purpose in this life.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
206522E53696,"Dear: Mr Generic_Name

Hi! Mister Generic_Name i'm writing this for you about never to be idle the peolpe who don'nm like to do nothing people that they are lazy , this it's important that the peolple that are lazy they should learn abot that like What they can do for don't be lazy ? What are the disadvantage and others benefit that could help them.

This position take care to all the people that don't like to do nothing with specifics ways some pelople have differents things that could be like lazy like , Many students are lazy to do their homework people that are lazy to work and they have to do it because it's necesssary for our life , Also the peolpe who have that study in university they like more go to a party people like that only want go to places that are funny or sleep the whole day in many countries people still with that the people who have a dream in their lifes and not strive to do it now who have opportunities that are young can strive for they want for their lifes in their futures , about the information that we can find it in Google about this topic also is a procedure that they can take to have energy I think also could be anemia and they could eat well .

Anothers examples that can help to people that should know them: Can be idle their whole life if they don't take care what they have or how they be : In centro America many cases are similar or could be like this , Also the children growing only playing with what they like example : soccer , video games , car , playing with their computers , etc.

How I think it's necessary that the others peolpe help to them to bring ideas what they need to do for don't be idle can take a long time to improve and have new personality and think different.... Some offices can help them to improve there are many ways to leave of that , In specific the women who are idle in cases thar have children and husband have to leave of that case because many women have to do it all of their work at home if they have their own work already it's other case.

Sincerely :

Generic_Name  ",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
B5AE26EEE247,"Do you think that having a positive attitude is the key towards success in life? In my opinion I do think it is key towards success, and the reasons why I think this is one finding a good career, second is meeting new people in a good way.

In life you need money to pay bills and in order to get money for your bills is to get career, a good one at least, and everyone knows that you need a resume, a good skill that your going to work for, and a good/positive attitude to help you get the job. you people may wonder ""why need to have a positive attitude to get your job?"" well you want to impress and increase your rate of the person that is considering to hire you or not, also if start talking in a boring way the person might not hire you.

The second reason is meeting people in a good way and never in a negative way. meeting people in positive ways is very great thing to do meaning that if you treat someone like garbage they'll treat you the some or even doing something terrible that will ruin your life, and nobody like that at all, so thats why you should treat people positive to avoid the things that I mention or you just like treating people positive because thats your nature.

I know how this world works and to survive the world of negativity is to be negative as well to survive this world, however that isn't the way to live and nobody likes to do negative things as well as they can't hold it for long time and end up taking away their own life, so staying positive is a great way to live in life.

The conclusion I am trying to give at out is that being positive is the a great way live instead of living in a way of negativity since being negative is way to tough to live out and positively gives you joy and give more paths to walk through and thats what I think a key to success means.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E2F767441B44,"If in high school should young students be capable of committing to a career. Some adults say that young students should pick a career. Others say that they are not ready to choose and commit to a career. I believe that students should commit to a career at a young age. The age shouldn't determined how committed you can be to a career. Being young shows a lot of both positive and negative benefits.

Early experience for these students can benefit future jobs. For example, you take a class for cooking and seek for a job you will have a better chance then those who have no experience. Starting your career with prior knowledge before becoming an adult will make it easier to obtain a job once you graduate high school. Those who choose to wait after high school will have a harder time seeking a job. Your chances for a job are much higher then those without any experience.

Making less mistakes because of all the prior knowledge you learned beforehand. For example, you take a class for cooking and you start learning early how to stop from burning your food. So, when you start cooking at a restaurant you will know how to stop from ruining the food. Starting young will prevent less mistakes from happening in your future job. This gives the students a better resume if they know what they are capable of doing and doesn't need to be taught. Having less mistakes during the job will show your bosses that you know what you are doing for them.

The students will have some confidence before going into their career. For example, you learn about the kitchen and what everything does so when you go in you won't expect anything new. This will help students have some confidence since they know what to expect going into they're career. Before entering a career it's good that students can relax and feel better since they know how everything will go. A boost of confidence is what students need before going into something.

On the other hand, people say that having students commit to career in high school is a bad idea. For example, students are constantly changing there mind and changing there interests. Some adults say they are to young to commit to a career because of how uncertain they are when they make decisions. So, they think how can a student choose something for the rest of there life if they can't decide on some of the most simplest decisions. Those adults think that students should wait until they are older to make that type of decision.

Having students start early come with so many benefits for there future. They get to learn more in advance then the rest. Also they have better oppurtunites and better chances with getting there perfered career. That many positive outcomes will come out of starting early. So, I believe that students can commit to a career at a young age in high school.      ",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
A47106D7B784,"My school should not follow the model by extending the school day two hours. A four day school week would be wonderful but, however, student would not like the fact that they have to stay in school for two extra hours. If my school extend the day for two hours; more students would skip class and not come to school. Some parents would be mad because they would spend less time at home with they children because of that. Generic_School should really cut school week to four days. I Think that its really unnecessary to extend the school day to two hours.

If My school decide to extent the school day by two hours, class would be longer and student's would get less sleep and come to school tired everyday. They can only extend the school day if we only go to school tree days a week. A four days a week school is still too much for kids to be going to. A bunch students barely wants to go to school for a whole week. Some student wouldn't have enough time to stay back in school for two extra hours ,because they work right after they get out of school.

Parents would be really mad if they had to wait two extra hours for they kids to get out of school. Most parent would rather they kids to stay in school for the whole week so they can get out on time. A four-day school school week would be good but staying in school for two extra hours is not worth it. Students would be in school for almost half a day if they stay back for the two hours. I rather be on my regular school schedule.

If Generic_School extend the school hours, kids would have more time to run the halls and skip they classes. By adding extra hours to our regular time , kids will have more time to get in trouble or get suspended. School shouldnt be no more than 7hours long. Every students should go to school on time so they can get out on time.

Extending the school hours is really unnecessary. Kids shouldnt stay in school for extra hours if they got to go to school for a whole week. School should just let out on regular time so the students could go home and get some rest. We should never have to stay in school for extra hours unless if its snowing outside. So its best that we stay on our regular school schedule and not add extra hours.           ",3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
8BA694ACE2D9,"Being Against An Extended School Day

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Generic_Name

Education can be considered to have an immense and influential extent over the preparation of individuals within the constantly expanding world. It can determine how a future employee may react to a circumstance or perhaps how they may solve it. Entire generations have been based upon education. Fundamentals such as algebra and language skills learned by these individuals have sculpted the process for man to touch the Moon and to cease global crises. All of this has possibly resulted in the world we exist in today. My perspective on the circumstance is that the school board should not increase the school's schedule due to the following: the current schedule already establishes 7 hours of probable physical and intellectual progression, students can experience more unproductive and negative entities, and that the addition of one and a half hours may produce incompatibilities towards both student and related individual schedules.

Beginning with the 7-hour process, students enter the building and perhaps have already encountered a dilemma. Certain peers may have caught the bus late or arrived earlier than allowed to. Afterwards, they could be in their classes trying to understand how a certain concept functions with another and may simultaneously be attempting to concluded a page of homework. Moving from class periods to lunch, they may find themselves perplexed at what they are going to do with their locker's present condition. Even at the end of the day they may be questioning what to do with their best friend while they both have separate projects due tomorrow. In essence, a student's day can be of highly troubling challenges as well as instances that an be excessively stressful in relation to the students alone.

With the prolonging of the day present, multiple casual difficulties may be amplified whilst new forms of faults can be felt by many students. A select few could include having to finish more assignments, receiving an increase of homework, and quite more. Certain subject periods may become uninteresting after critically focusing time upon them, and other periods may become shorter in order to cope the extension of time. Events that have a possibility of occurring throughout the day can be unintentionally imposing and certain situations may very well be perceived by an array of people as impossible to conclude with the aforementioned extension.

A final note pertaining to the topic is that a longer daily routine may lead to extensive conflict with faculty, student, guardian time frames. Students can have extracurricular activities that can require adequate time to function properly such as baseball and/or team swimming. The parents and guardians of the students may now not have time to fulfill their career schedules in order to react with their children and could result in negative consequences.

Faculty members may have to stay a longer duration to cleanse or conclude their occupational duties because of the excess of materials and activities. The people apparent within the school and to some degree outside of it could be left with the severe imbalance of two correlating but differed schedules they must interact with.

Though a multitude of negative concepts and events may be associated with the topic of extending the day, there are quite in fact a variety of benefits to such a transformation. A prolonged schedule can be excellent for the further study of a subject as well as direct application. Homework can have a higher chance of being finished within school hours. Socialization in lunch and gym sessions could be extended. However, negative concepts can still be present with the solutions, which may indicate that no matter what may be of the scenario, unproductive elements can still remain.

As previously mentioned, I take a view that is against the prolongment of the academic schedule as it relates to incompatibilities for multiple individuals, an increase in negativity, and the current time frame and activities of school.

Once again, parents and guardians may have to reduce time at their positions in order to cope with shift of schedule. Homework and subject directives may become more significant in amount and requirement, perhaps stressing the students and teachers to quite the degree. The current schedule alone has multitudes of events, activities, and concepts that are brimming in attentiveness and consumption. Benefits and negatives of the school lengthening its duration are and can be present, but truly take into consideration what a change in a time frame could result in; its impacts can be irreversibly. ",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
20FB731C7598,"I think it is a good idea because if you finished with the career that you took, you have more time to take another career, you can start a project at a very young age and if these project did not work you have more time to try it again.

First, if you studied a career that you like before and now you dont like it, you have another options or opportunities to take another career for example, I have a friend she is 22 years old, she will to graduate the next year at the age of 23, she is very young and she is thinking to take another career that make her more professional.

Then, if you want to start a project you have a lot of ideas because the mind of the young people is incredible and if you fail it you can try and try again for instance If you want yo start a project like, you want people to work for you you can start something easy like clean houses and the money that you earn from that then you pay to them or you can put a store of clothes and you can to make your own company of clothes or you can have a restaurant and earn s extra money for these works.

They can study and work at the same time and earn money to pay his or her college, they can start a family while they are taking another career and if they learn a lot of things they have their own life.

Finally, I think it is a good but good idea because they become more professionals and they have more chances o have a great life, If you see more of the students are young and they work hard to have a amazing life, it is a good idea because you can help people to give them motivation and they can see you like a inspiration to go ahead.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
8369840DE791,"Determine to do not be idle is hard because we do not imagine us doing something if we never do it because we are very idlest to do it. We do not imagine how wonderful can be if we never do it.

Lets say that you want to be a soccer player, but you are so idlest to do it, like you are imagine that you are the best soccer player of the world, you earn a millions of millions of dollars with a lot of girls around you and a lot of fame. How you want to accomplish that if you are so idlest to do start doing it. If yo want to be the best soccer player of the world that you imagine in your mind, wake up 6 or 5 am and start practicing and running and training your body and do not be a slacker lying in your bed imagine something that you can do it.

Other people say that be idle is good and is right. There are many persons like inventors or scientist that they have great ideas when they are sleeping or when they are lying in the bed, but when that brilliant idea comes to they mind, they dont stay right there imagine that idea. They get up and they start working in that idea that they have and they work day and night until they complete and they make it real.

If you want to be idle is good like no one gonna stop you, but if you want to do something or you have to do something go and do it. Or if you have a idea but you are lazy to do it get up and start working on that. Be idle in your free time.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
982053C6DAD6,"Taking advantage of opportunities at a young age will significantly impact your future abilities of choosing your correct career path. Futhermore, when you're young, you have more time to research about the career that you are interested in. Most teenagers at a young age choose multiple careers of what is most interesting and cool looking to them. What's very important is that the particular person is willing to pursue in that career. At a younger age, most children get encouraged by their parents to love a specific subject. Nonetheless, depending on the subject that a teenager likes, that'll most likely be the career they pursue. It may also not be the career path they choose since it differs as they grow. When you're at a young age, you tend to gather information quickly, and also learn quicker.

Parents make sure that their child not only succeeds in life, but also chooses the carrer they believe is most fit for their desire. Choosing a career may include lots of pressure and thinking. It's always best to talk to your parents for advice, or to speak with your teachers. The parents may sign their child up for activities they think would be identical to their career choice. Most teens would feel that their parents only wanted them to pursue in a career that they have, or from a family legacy as tradition. Nevertheless, it's always important to have a young aged teenagers opinion about their career path as well.

Teens at a young age tend to become more interested in careers more than adults. It's a fact that a teenagers brain consumes

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the information quicker then it would if an adult had. Being freshly exposed to a career at a young age benefits the teenager for future desires. It'll give the teenager some time to think about what careers he/she wants to get into, and how she/he is going to do it.

When there is a young aged teenager, it's best that they gather information slowly, and step-by-step. For example, youtube videos upon the career, games, and movies. Every young adult would prefer some entertainment with a little bit of knowledge, and facts being thrown at them. These activities will satisfy the teenager, and It'll be the introduction to their future career path. Teenagers play an important role in today's generation. It is vital that they should have some experience or knowledge upon what career they want to obtain, and become successful in.

High school provides plenty of options for young adults, espesically programs and clubs that they could attend. High schools also provide AP courses, which is an advance placement course. These courses will be a bit difficult, but will benefit the teenager of whichever career they want to achieve. It's always necessary for your teenager to stop by, and speak to his/her counselor once in a while to check up on his/her grades, and how she's doing overall.

The counselor will provide him/her the best information needed to achieve the teenagers goal.

When providing options to a young age teenager, it's best that you make it seem less work as possible. Teenagers most likely wouldn't like the sound of work, and would much rather hear about electronics, or the new clothing line at hot topic. Nevertheless, it's an exquisite idea to make sure that a teenager begins choosing his/her career during high school, so they could be more accurate with it once they are old enough. It will give the brain enough time to obsorb all the information they learn, and use it for the future.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
3741D275F8BC,"Some people think that taking classes from home is a easy way to study without having to leave home. While others think that students would not be able to learn as much as they would attending to school. For some this is a big deal while others justify this as a modern way to study. Technology could be helpful for some but not everyone in terms of studying. Most people think that schools should not adopt such way of education. People say that this is not the best way for study. The reasons people say that studying from is not a good way to study, is because students would not be inspired to do their work,not everyone has access to internet,teachers would help the students more in person That through a computer.

One of the reasons people are saying that studying from home is not a good idea that students would no be inspired. Meaning that being studying from home they would not have the same environment as in school. Assisting to school would help students to focus in what they do. They would do better seeing other students working. Walking around school during free time and seeing projects made by others students could help students to be more creative. Talking to others students and sharing experiences would make students to put more effort. People say that an inspired mind creates great things.

Another reason people argue is because not everyone has access to internet. Either due to economic or others type of reasons not everyone counts with access to a computer. Having some students taking classes from home while others who also want but can not because they do not have access to Internet does not seems good. Some students have to work in order to either pay their bills or buy things that they need and can not afford to have a internet source. There could be paces where getting good

Internet connection could be tough because of the location or weather. This issue have people saying that access to internet is a problem when it comes to study from home.

One more reason is than teachers would help the students more in person than trough the computer. Talking to though computer is not the same as talking in person .People say that students would best understand things their teachers teach them in person because they would explain with more details. Some also say that interacting with the teacher would help students confidence and learning. Some teachers have different way to teach and help the student to fully understand the topics. Students would experiment best learning by having their teacher in front of them or by their side.

Meanwhile people still argue about this issue and that should be a way to solve it. Attending classes from from is not alway a good idea beacuse students would not be inspired,not averyone has acces to internet,and teachers would help students more in person. With all said we can conclud that the best way to study is by attending to school and no from home.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
684166ED2438,School should not follow this made because businesses is dfferent to school if we cam to school for two day and make ten hours we cant do all the nesesarie stuff. And if businesses adopted a four day work week and make each day ten hours worckers will get tire just for conserve energy.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ,1.5,1.5,1.5,1.5,1.5,1.5
28930E0B8820,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I agree, The first impressions is the main idea of a relationship. Went you meet a new person you got to show your best impression be respectful, helpful, and have some good attitude.

The first impression is something the you can't change later on the future,because is something the you make or the other person make. On your first impression you need to give your on personality you done want to act different, because then later you going to want to change and you going to make the other person think different about you his going to think you not the person the her knows.

The first thing you show on the first impression is respect. The way you act around the person, things the you do when you with the person, The language the you used around the person.

Also you need to be helpful for the person, show the person the you care about it. Help one each another, and work together. Be happy around the person, your first impression is the one the is going to show your personality.

Also have the person talk about her life. Let her know you wants to know a little more about her, tell her if she need something let you know you always going to be there for her. Make her feel like she won one person not the she have something the is going to rude is life.

All those small things the you make wrongs on the first impression can cost you everything the you ha've been done. Just try to do your best because the first impression is the one the make everything happens.

The attitude is very important in the case , you have to give your best at the first impression.

If you do everything good on your first impression, you going to be fine. Just be happy, respectful, and have a good attitude. All this things can make your first impression wonderful for you and the person you meeting.

But also you need to show your original personality because you don't want to show your opposite.

Everything you do on your first impression is the one the you need to keep with the person, because you don't want the person to leave just because you show something different went she meet you. want to be the same because the first impression is the one the make the relation work.

For those people who think the first impressions don't matter that's a lie because everything you show on the first impression is the one the support your relationship.

If you did everything good one the first impression and now you not doing the same as you stared your relationship is going to be pretty bad. But if you did everything good and you still doing the same everything is going to be fine. Just do your on personality and you don't have to worried about change your first impression.

The way should agree with the first impression is the you can't change what you make at the first impression. Even if you trying to change you always going to remember you ready have goon through the first impression so you always going to have on your relationship.

All the respect, help, and attitude on your first impression is worked you just need to bring all your personality together and your first impression is going to be the fantasy.    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
F869B38F3A89,"We never to be Idle. If we try to change the bad things that we have we can be better. If I do not try speak less in class I never going to change. My friends need to left proceed like anormal people. If my sister do not try to change your bad mood she never will be a better person.

Every body need to know that the Word ''Idle'' is something bad, because sometimes is annoying. Some people are Idles and that is no good. When we are idles others people sees us like anormal people. If I disturb a lot in class I can look like a anormal person.

Many people in the world are Idle, someones in work, school or shopnig. when I go out with my friends sometimes I do not feel conform. They performance as anormal people. When a boy want to girlfirend he can be idle. The younger people can be more Idles.

I know a person, him is so idle. Once when we were working him was start to talk about something hugly. Boss told him, you need shut up. My sister is idle when she wants something. Many people proceed Idles when they want something.

We can be better if we try to improve many things. If I try to make better my conduct I can be a nice person. If My friends trying to left of bother in all places they can be different. A person improve everyday more for be a better person. Is for these and many others reason that people should to know that everybody can improve if they want.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
0C88E7BE611B,"In this world its hard to be yourself everyone wants to do the same thing . Still being yourself in this world is the greatest accomplishment . A lot of people judge in this world telling people whats good and whats bad for this its hard to be yourself in a world like this . People with social media will change people and being in high school with people around you will judge and follow the trend of the world.

Social media is like a book of rules everyone wants to follow and act the same . Popular apps like instagram people post things about their life and how they're doing good and looking great with a trending outfit . People see this post and do the same thing and act different knowing that this is not you . For this you want to follow and do the same thing and change your way of living and yourself .

Being yourself in high school is a accomplishment , someone will always judge and make you feel down . For this people change their personality and there way of life .like me I was scared to talk to new people because i thought they will make fun of me but that was not true and for that I am always acting like my self .Its the way of high school and if you beat the judgment and still be yourself its a accomplishment in life .

In conclusion being yourself in this world that is constantly trying to change you is a accomplishment . A lot people change because of social media and high school. I agree its accomplishment because you beat the judgment and the fear of not being yourself in this world . ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
16C794A0F479,"students should not be allow to use their cellphone during class time only if it is necessary or with the teacher permission.

One of the most important reason why you should not be allow to use your phone during class is because the cellphone really distract you, it may be because you're playing, text ting or listening music.

Cellphone can be a big distraction for the student for to many reasons, sometimes students do not really think like that, but on my opinion it is a big distraction, using the cellphone during class can make you miss important parts from the class that you may need for a future test that maybe one of the answer can be that small part that you didn't hear because you were on your phone, but the teacher is not the responsible from your actions, you take your own decisions,and you choose the decision to look at your phone than pay attention at class. in other parts teachers should make that their rules for the classroom has appraisal, and make the students respect them, or if the teacher can't do that at least the school can make that rule.

Some times you're just pretending that you are paying attention, but you're not really paying attention for the reason that you may be at your phone or answering a text, i am saying this because it happened to me and i do the same, i know some students has the same situation and others that can't live without their cellphone. it can be addictive. some times I think it can because the age, we are just young persons and some persons think different they really come to study but others just come because they have to.

The effects of being using the cellphone at class are that you not really pay attention at class and you fail the class. cellphones are not necessary at class and it's not educational or helpful for you to remained or learn things. On my person i fail classes because the same situation, i fail classes and if i fail classes i'll fail the school year and then wont would like to repeat other school year. That gonna make me think about that and i don't would like to come to school because i feel like i loose my time coming to school to repeat it every single day. i think cellphone make you stupid and act like a dumb because when youre on your phone, you are like in other world, you don't pay attention on what is happening around you. you are loosing time from your life time that you can use study or do others necessary and important things for your life. i see students that they just dgf and they on their phone during class, i'm one of them, lol.

On my opinion, cellphone can be necessary some times, but i dont really need it during class because i come to study, take notes and do my best in class for have good grades, i will say that cellphone can be use only during test, classwork because i am that kind of person that likes to be listening relax songs and doing my job. in other way schools gives you a laptop and i think the only thing where you can do all of those things is the computer, i can use Google or YouTube, it's not necessary to have your phone on your hands.

How can we solve this issue? teachers should collect all cellphones before start class, and make a rule that something gonna happen if he/she see someone with their phone, so students may have to respect this rule.

All this conversation i think the problem is not cellphone, i think the problem is technology because humans are depending from technology and and it makes them fool, todays technology can be more smart than a person. if you really read to this side you should understand how is life now, you may be older and smarter than i am, but we both lived different generations, it is all my decisions, we have to control technology not technology has to control us. legalize ;)",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
54304ACFE477,"when we're born we come out of our mothers womb, the first thing we naturally do is screech and cry, and if we dont cry the doctor hits us on our backs and try's to make us cry. And from that cry on we develop our own kind of sound and our own screech with its own pitch. They take our fingerprints where there will never be two of the same, even when were born with our twin it will never be the same no matter how much alike we are. from there on we start to learn and develop our own persona. After were born our brain starts to function even with little stuff, babies learn to cry when they're hungry, want to be changed, when theyre in pain or simply want attention. When children get older into the toddler stage they start to learn how to walk by observing everyone else they learn to talk by listening to everyone else around them. We learn how to grab our bottle, pick up a fork or spoon, and practically our own daily doings. But we learn all that from observing and listening to everyone else. When we hit our 6-12 years of age where we have a tendency that we want to fit in be in the cool kids group and we watch TV see celebrity's see that there are musicians, actors, painters, policeman, firemen, dentist, doctors, mayors chefs, soccer players, basketball players, football players, baseball players, hockey players, tennis players, volleyball players etc the list could go on and on, but the point here is the fact that we influences. But as we get older in our teen years 13-19 we start to have our own kind of voice at least until were old enough to make them, we all take our own paths and we choose to make the decisions that we make, our parents dont go with us throughout the day telling us what to do or not do making our each and every decision for us, they sure do give us a hell of advice because they already went threw that stage and they dont want to see fail and get hurt but sometimes its good that we fail and make mistakes because then we learn what we can or cannot do. Now as you turn into an adult that net that we used to have when we were living under mom and dads roof is no longer there its gone we dont have that privilege anymore, and we need to grow up and create and develop our own persona officially. when you get a job it comes with responsibilities and from there we learn if were responsible or irresponsible, if were social or non social if were lenient of non lenient, patient or impatient, forgiving or unforgiving. Id like to think that were all born to grow and learn about our rugged society, and based on what we've lived is how were going to act because we can literally live in a shit hole of a place and have the happiest attitude ever and have a better attitude then a boy or girl complaining that she didnt get the car she wanted, verses the kid that saw his mother get beat by his dead beat dad or the kid that was up all night wondering if his mom was going to come home tonight or even the kid that went to sleep hungry. So honestly i don't think that were born with labels i feel like we all can make our own decisions of what were going to make of life, if you'r going to sit there and make everyone see you as a pity. A huge play of your character is your mentality is you have a broken done weak mindset your going to have negative vibes and weak dead beat character, but if you have a strong mindset and the will to get stuff done then youll have a broad and respected character. In conclusion id like to think that we create and build our own character and and that were not given a label by any higher power of what our character is going to be in life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
1C2665B95694,"Do you would be able to be yourself constantly in anything and accomplish the greatest of the world?

I am sure if you trying to be yourself always you can accomplish the greatest, however you life is more easy to be yourself. If you believe in yourself constantly nothing in this world is impossible for you, ""THE HEAVEN IS THE LIMIT"", because you can do it anything you want. (Why?) Because you have the power of yourself and the most important you have faith,

""THE FAITH MOVE MOINTAINS"". When you believe in yourself you don't have obstacle.

MARTIN LUTHER KING:

I have a dream I want everybody look the same color. He believe in himself and he have a lot faith he gonna to do it, and he always was positive in his dream. He was in his belief, and he thought he can made his dream real. After a few years late he was tray to made he dream real he accomplishment. He accomplishment his dream in Washington D.C. IF you have a dream in this life and you want tray constantly to make real I know you can do it, the all you need to do it is be yourself.

CRISTIANO RONALDO:

He is a Portuguese guy when he was child he missed his father and that time the life was difficult for him and for his mom. But in the plans of CRISTIANO not was for given up he have a passion and he believe himself. After he get 13 years old he started to work at the mornings and afternoon he played soccer. He are the best soccer player and his village. After 15 years old he started to play soccer for the country team after he be come a renowned player of soccer in the world. when you believe in yourself you can accomplish you goals doesn't matter what obstacle you have At the front.

Although you think you can't do it, yes you can do it if you believe in yourself and consistent trying to make the thing everything can be possible. When you have faith and believe in yourself you accomplish anything. After you start to do it something or something have in you life don't give up keep believe in yourself. Everything you aspiration you want be you will be everything you imaginary you will creative just keep believe in yourself. If you have a dream oh passion oh something else in you mind and you wanna do it start to be yourself.  ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
09A801B564F5,"Would you like to have more school?. I will be writing about weather, I would like more school or not. I disagree because some, kids don't get enough sleep.

I disagree because some, kids don't get enough sleep. some kids stay up, late because of electronics, helping someone, or watching TV. some kids have to help their parents, do some work like farmers or cooking. some kids lose, track of time like me.

Some kids have afternoon activities. Some kids are tired of school but if they make, it longer kids would be even more tired. It would give, students less time to take breaks at home. Grades would get worst because, the students get less time to take a break.

Some kids would get home really late. the school buses sometimes, take an hour to drop of a kid but if they add an hour and a half those, kids would get home peaty late. some kids won't have enough time to do their homework, because they are going to get home late. Some kids would not have time to do stuff because after getting of the bus late some, kids have to help around the house or their parents when they get back.

Some kids will not have a lot of time to see parents of friends. Some kids get out late because of bus or after school activities and they will not, have a lot of time left. Some kids will bot have a lot of time to get out, because of school and they will need to do their homework. In conclusion I disagree with the prompt because, i don't want to have a lot of school in a single day.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
80C0814AF16D,"Dear, Dr. Generic_Name

Thank you for reading my letter. I hope it finds you well. I am currently a junior at Generic_School. I believe that the students should commit to career at a young age because. career can show how creative students can be, and have a had start to choose their careers before they get out of high school.

First, I would like to talk about how creative students can be in their career. When school. For example, I would like to express myself through my art to show my emotions and I love to excess myself through my art. It makes me feel happy but if I don't start choosing my career at a young age then how am I going to know what I want for my career and the students won't know what they want for their career when they get out of high school and that's how I would like to express myself through my career.

Also, about students having a head start to choose their career at a young age. for example, I would not know what to choose if I didn't start in high school it would be a waste of time for me to find a career if I didn't start at a young age, if I started at school then there won't be a problem for me to find one also I would rather start now then later on in my life and how Am I going to express myself if I don't have a career to start with thats why students should think a head of choose their career.

Last, students should think about what they want to do or be when they grow up because schools can help with your career when you need it, they can put you in a class where you want to learn about the career that you choose and it will make is so much easier for the student to start now. for example, if I where to choose a career I would have to tell my teachers what classes that I what to take for my career chooses it can help a lot of students with their career chooses it would be a problem for them to tell the teachers what careers they want and it would be more easier for them to start telling the teachers what career they want and put students in the class they want to take for their career but they have to trust their teachers first then they can tell the students what careers that they what to take or what good classes are good for this career that the student chooses and that's my opinion on students should be commit to a career at a young age.

Thank you for taking the time to read through my thoughts about career chooses that means so much to me and thank you again.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name      ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
A38A3B76558A,"Nowadays, the majority of students in high schools do not think about their future for many factors: time, dedication, or buget. Schools are a very important tools to help students to realize how important is to to commit to a career at a young age, because It is something that will help them for their future. It is a good idea for many reasons: prepares students as a future adults, keep them focus in their goals, and It gives students the time to realize what could be the ideal career for them.

One important reason, is to prepare students as a future adults, because each person has a responsibility as an adult, and this a good skill for each student to learn and built a knowledge when they get to the point of being an adult. For example, at a young age like teenagers in high school are able to absorb new ideas and words everyday to built their knowledge, and have the ability to apply it in the future for their career. This is really important, because this will help to molding them as a future adults for the society.

Also, It is a good idea to for students to commit to a career at a young age, because It keeps them focus in their goals. By selecting a career at a young age, students can be focus on what they want or what do they need to achieve it. For example, schools can provide vital information about the career students may select, depending on the course they like. How much is it cost, how long it may take, and do they need to know about the career. This is really important, and it can motivate students to follow their dreams, and strive to achieve their goals.

In addition, It gives students the time to realize what could be the ideal career for them. Each person needs the time to know what could be the ideal career or job in order to keep foward. For example, if a student is in his or her first year of high school and she or he wanted to be a doctor, but it realized that now he or she wants to be a teacher. The student still has the chance to change its mind and can choose the career of becoming a teacher. That is why is really important to have the time to think about a career at a young age.

In conclusion, commiting a career at a young age is really important, because it can help people focus in what they want to be. At a young age, shows the level of mindset of each person, and who wants to be succesful in life. Starting from a young age does not mean people have a final desicion, but it may be an idea in general that everybody should practice at a young age to not have struggles in future decisions, and it would be more easy to choose a specific career.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
5A3B42349C84,"Thomas Jefferson wrote

The president Thomas Jefferson wrote ""it is wonderful how much may be done if we are doing."" what these means is if your always work, even for society or for your self. Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. Some says inactivity serve a purpose because is a rest to get strong and keep working. Although some say always doing something is better because if you always work hard you get your goals and you are productive to the society.

Millions of people wake up every morning to work give all of them and make their best doing work, but what about people who don't work. Even if you can't find a job you can rapport to the society or your growth as a person. you can do social work or help people, you have to be an active person. Is important to say everybody needs to rest, but if you get to much rest you won't be able to reach your dreams and goals.

Do something always is good if your doing good things, work hard and passionate for what your do every person who work is for something. they want to reach goals dreams some of them got to pay to much thing or some of them just love work and make money or support your family. everybody works for something and that makes them work. My mom always tell me if you want something go for it, make it happen all of us needs a good future a better future, thats why you always have to do something. It is the reason why is better doing something than nothing.

Lets talk about the society view. In society you have to do something even if you have a dream or not because you gotta eat, where to live, pay bills, taxes and any needs that you have to cover so you have to have a job. And not just a job you can do other things to always do something like i said before help people that makes you growth as a person, and even tho is free or they pay you if you love what your do, or love to do a productive human for the society you will consider do good things.

Do something is important in the humanity because that makes these world work and grow up. dreams and goals make people do what their do. think about if you are a productive person or you does inactivity may be changes your mind. in conclusion the president Thomas Jefferson give us these quote to think about what do we do or what we should do on our life. Is good to take a break, but don't forget you have goals an dreams that you have to make them reality.    ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
DE921CECE21A,"Do we accomplish more by constantly doing something? Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" He believed that more would be accomplished if there was something being done most of the time, I agree with this. Accomplishing a task motivates some people to do more, accomplishing more, It also helps us learn more about ourselves. Although, people believe that being in-active is better because it provides less stress and more free time, It also keeps us from succeeding our daily tasks and influences us to be lazy.

Being busy would require us to be awake and alert of what we are doing. In some cases, after finishing up a task, all people want to do is move on and rest. In other cases, people choose to knock out more work that they have in mind. Having this kind of mindset it good, because it allows a person to have more energy and to keep themselves busy. A personal experience would be when I was so tired one afternoon, but I had to keep myself from napping because I had homework due. After I completed that one homework, I was too awake to even sleep; So I decided to knock out other work I had in the meantime. In the end I received a better grade from that class and I had chores finished from that week so I didn't have to do anything in the weekend. To conclude this paragraph, when I accomplished one thing I ended up accomplishing more than I expected.

We all have our different ways of living and learning. One way to help you learn more about yourself is by keeping busy. You learn how to manage your own time, you learn about how you react to a hectic environment which can help for future references, and You learn how your own mind works. For example, When I was in my sister's sixteenth birthday party, I also had school to focus on, homework to get done, and Sol's to focus on. For me it was a pretty hectic schedule, but I learned how to respond and manage my time. Learning how to manage my time came in handy when my sixteenth birthday came along. Everyone has a different way of living and learning, and keeping myself busy taught me a lot about how I live and learn.

Although being in active provides us with less stress and more free time, which is not always a bad thing, It influences us to not only be more lazy, but to procrastinate. To procrastinate put off something that should be done, To leave it for that moment and do it later, as you repeatedly tell yourself, but you occasionally never end up doing it. Procrastination can lead you to become more and more unprepared. Being unprepared isn't the best way to live. Having more free time can have it's positive outcomes, but also its negatives. For example, who wants to accomplish nothing now, only to do the same in the future? People may believe being in-active is a better way to live because it relieves you from stress and work, but doing nothing can follow with other bad habits that can lead to worse in your future.

In conclusion, we accomplish more by keeping busy. Keeping ourselves busy can help us prepare for our future, and help us learn more about ourselves and how to respond to a hectic lifestyle. Although some people would like to live a lifestyle doing absolutely nothing, that wouldn't be the case for all. Others would prefer to accomplish more by staying active and helping themselves prepare for whatever comes next.                     ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
4E22E3143561,"Agree, living in a world where you sometimes has to be someone else to fit in the society or with friends it doesn't makes us feel confident it is not the best feeling, because we are pretending to be someone else not who we are. And when we do that, the only one who will get hurt is us, if we are and behave exactly as we are may be there won't be too much people around us but that is not the most important accomplish, the most important accomplish is when we learn how to love our self and be who we are no matter if there won't be a lot of people surround us, if someone will loves me it has to love me for who I am not for who I pretended to be.

Everyone in this world deserve to be love for who they are, no one needs to be someone else to be love or accepted , we have to stop trying to be someone else just to fit with a group of people because if you're not like them, then that's means that you don't belong to that place. Been who we are is what makes us special, there are no specifics forms that forces you how to be, pretending it won't make you happy. Just will make you feel that you don't deserve to be love, it will make feel desolate, it will make you feel that you are not funny as the rest of your friends. But when we learn how to be our self in this world where it constantly triying to make us feel or be someone else it is the greatest accomplishment, because when we know how love our self for who we are and how we look then we will be capable to love someone else for who they are not for who they pretend to be.

Feeling like you don't deserve to be in this world is not the best feeling sometimes all you wanted to do is just go to a place where nobody knows you, where you want to start over again and do what you really love, be who you are and if someone gets to knows you it will accept you the way you are but something that we can't see is that we don't actually needs to go to the other side of the world to start over because we can try to start with our self, we have to start loving us the way we are. Why do you think that sometimes we feel desolate too? Do you think that is because we are been honest we our self? It is important to ask our self that question because it makes us think about our self for a minute and forget about the rest of the people about what they would think of me, most of the time we forgot about our owns feeling about how we gonna feel at the end if we do or behave the way that the society is asking us to do. And when we forget about our self that is the time when we feel desolate, and what can fill that what we think is missing? Is learn how to be our selves. If you're not funny as they want you to be or they might say that you have to be like the rest, that's not right because you will make yourself to a side and you will start been someone who's not you, someone you don't love but you have to be that way so you can be accepted and when that happen you are losing the greatest thing you have inside of you to give... Been who we are maybe it won't makes us see the perfect person in the world but it will make you happy to know that you have accomplish the greatest goal! Which is to be yourself in a world that always wants you to be someone else. Now that I had learn how to love myself I'm able to see that everyone deserve a change to be themselves, to show what they have, learn how to be you it also help you to see the beauty in the rest of the people that is surround you it also makes you free to stop thinking that they need certain things to be love or accept.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
5D12067722AD,"Everyone has a talent or skill, but not everyone pays attention to it. I have a talent even tho I don't pay too much attention to it. I have a talent that I should pay more attention too because it's a luxcturious, and extrordinairy talent to have, it can be a good job, and it could give me a bright future.

One reason why I think being skillful at soccer is a precious talent is because it can give me a talented job. There is a good soccer player called Kylien Mbape. He is very young, and he has that talent of being good at soccer! He plays nationally and makes lots of money. He has a skillful job and is very young, thats why being a soccer player is an extrordinairy job! My talent at soccer could not only give me a good job, I can make lots of money from soccer.

Being a soccer player can make me lots of money! I have the talent to play soccer, and I could make money off of soccer just like Kylien Mbape! Mbape makes an uncountable amount of money off soccer for doing something he loves and is very amazing at. Mbape is making lots of money off of soccer and he has a bright future ahead of him!

I have a talent of playing soccer, but i need to pay more attention to my precious talent. I have a talent I should pay more attention too. I should because it can give me a bright future if you have the right mindset. It can be a luxcturious job to have! It can give you lots of money for an amazing future. That is why I should pay more attention to my talent and so should you!                ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
C968149003DE,"So many people at my middle school want to start a after school homework club and this because studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start a homework club. Well I think this idea is not going to work because student will think that they will only have to do homework at the homework club therefor when there no after school most kids won't turn in there homework. Also another problem is the volunteer work no kid wants to stay after school to help and if there only teacher I am certain that kids would lose focus. And the subject I

don't think that 45 minute Are enough to learn 4 main class plus the homework that's not enough time to finish homework and learn.

And many people just want to go to this homework club just to finish fast I think that people that really need it should be in this group not just cause they want to finish fast they can do that at home and after school wasting time and the teachers time. This one of the main problems I have with the homework club is that if kids go there they are only go to fool around with there friends. And not let other kids learn and do there homework and learn being a middle school er my self I have seen how most kids with there friends u would think that they are mauter but not as much. But many people say maybe if you let them they will change but so many people have goin't chances but they keep doing the same thing.

As a conclusion I think that this after school program has no use because homework is called homework for a reason and if u do at school they would not do at home when there's no after school so this after school program will not work for many reason like no a enough time not enough focus distractions. And people who just want ot play and not do work and volunteering kids dont want to stay extra and kids won't pay anttion to the teacher. ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
9B23FE314CF5,"People discussing that by your own behavior the best way to influence other people , or are there better ways to influence. For Example, have a good behavior I make better person for influence to family and can teach to brethren thing good thing good in the future. Other people think, that influence to the children with bad thing not is good because they can learn thing bad in yours life. However, this can cause problems in the children because they learn bad influence of the person older and have bad record for yours future.

Children learn bad influence of the person older. for example, when a children see to parents smoking or drunk they learn the that parents make. have bad influence is when a person have bad behavior and bad behave.

Many person learn bad influence since children because the parent not the educate good and not the learn good thing.

Have bad record for future. For example, when a person it's in the prison or when to commit a crime, this person no can escape to other country because already it's register in the system of other country. Have bad record in your life no es good because this affect for the remainder of yours life. Many people that commit ofensa because not are person with good manners and too person that have children and not give good education the that teach the same that they learn.

In conclusion, the parent have that teach good influence and teach good behavior to the children because the children are the priority and the future of every country. For example, when a child and person learn to teach to the other good influence the humanity outside better because not have more crime and delinquency. This is very important because everyone of the person have that learn the good of the life and teach to the other the best because the influence the teach and also wreck.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
F1933BF43F45,"I agree with this idea and I think it's a good idea for me to choose a career at a young age because it's a good way to start to study. If I choose a career at a young age it's good for me because if I don't know about the career then that time teacher can help me and it's easy for me to study when I am in college. At the young age, if I choose the specific career it's good for me in feature and it's important for me.

Yes, it's a good idea for me because if I choose the career at the young age it's easy for me to study when I am taking a career course. It's easy for me to taking a career course because I already learn when I was young. It is important for me if I choose a career at the young age because when I am taking a career when the teacher ask me the question that time I can easily give them the answer. If I do the really good about a career course then one time i'll get success in my life.

It's important for me because if I finish about a career course i'll get a job or i'll do the business. If I do the really good about a career course what I choose one day i'll get success in my life. If I get success in my life i'll be so happy and also my family will be happy.

In Conclusion, if I choose a career at a young age it's good for me and when I'm taking the career course it's easy to take it. One day i'll be success in my life and i'll be so happy and my family and we will stay happy.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
FC343CFBE807,"Have you ever wonder what are the benefits of working with someone older than you? There is a program that make you work with some older than you but how are you and the other person benefiting from this program. This are how the program can help you and the other person by: Learning how to cooperate with other people, practicing social skills and how rely on each other.

One thing you and your partner can learn is how to cooperate with one another. There are people that do not like to work with other people and maybe one of those person is your partner. When you are working with someone else you have to cooperate because working together is essential for a good team. Without communication between you and your teammate, nothing will really work because you have to be able to express your ideas and understand your partners point of view, you have to work together so it can be a successful team so you will have to cooperate if you want it to work.

Social skills are very important and you can learn or practiced them with you partner. People like to talk and know how to start a conversation with other people, but there are people that are really shy. People that are shy struggles with staring conversations or making their ideas clear. If you are a shy person and you are on the program, try to practice your social skills with your partner because I think that they are going to understand your situation and they will not judge you by that, so you should not feel uncomfortable. You can try to practice social skills or even learn new ways to start a conversation and be less shy.

How to rely on other people is important. When you are with someone else and you do not understand something, you should ask them because they are there to assist you and help them when they do not understand something too. There is a limit on relying on other people because you should try to solve your problem but if you could not solve it, it is the perfect moment to ask your partner,otherwise, you will be a person that have a problem and it will be asking its partner all the time even if you could have solve it by yourself. There are limits for things, you should try because if you never try you are not going to be able to learn anything.

In conclusion, been with someone older than you can be helpful because they have a lot of knowledge and are able to understand other people situation. What can both learn from this program is how to work to together, new ways to make new friends, or practice social skills and rely on someone to help you but not all the time because you should try first.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0
D5C7212A31FD,"20/11/2010

Mr. reader`s how are you?

This statement it`s made for informe to you ,

we are sure based in the prompt called; THE FIRST IMPRESIONS ARE ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO CHANGE , we undertand that because is very important for everyone is this world, and sure we are agree with the statement and we want knowledge to you how we expresed.

its very important remember sometimes is very hard forget the firs espresion because is one of the things what make to you in the life , like marked in your hart , and we know that is not easy for each person , example; when you was a little boy you almost haved 6 years old and you see a new toy like spiderman and your's parents really buy that new toy so you was very happy and you never gonna forget that day because was very especial for you and ,therefore; that make a big impresion to you and its almost imposibble to change.

the central idea in this statement is what how much impotant is the first impression what happend to you, because is very important how you feel in the inpression , you feel very especial when you do the thing what do you like. and they do that one when is really appropiate for you or whent is the rigth time for doing with the inttention enpressed to you.

The First Impression are almost impossible to change because ,we really know that is one thing what marked your life for complete and is impossible change that because, the firt time what you feel that is when you know how important make to you the impression.

this writing is very importan because, im let you know how we expressed the firts impression make to you and its impossible forget that day or special thing.

mi opinion in this statement is im empressed with this because that happend to me one time when i was very young , and that one make to me very happy and inpressed because it's feel so good , i never gonna forget that day, its marked in my hart for the rest on my life.

The conclusion is bring ideas to the peoples who's are disagree with the statemet , because they need see how important is the FIRTS IMPRESSION IN THE LIFE and is very hard forget that one. by that we are knowedge to you is very important know about that one . so we wanna give to you some ideas, examples; when your's parents buy to you the firts toy that's make to you very happy and impressed , or when you go by your first time to the beach you see a lot water you make impressed rigth . or your first day of school maybe not was very good but you never gonna forget how that was, you see now , how important is that one , we now that make to you a big impressed in you don't gonna forget, now you can undertand better the things , you can do a big expressed to other peoples how you change your opinion, and how important is for you life, do the best you can good luck.

This information is made for see how important is the statement called THE FIRST IMPRESSIONS ARE ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO CHANGE. therefore im agree with the statement because is really interstering in important for everyone in this world.

sincerely Generic_Name.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
017D2125A1DE,"Interducaions

:Summer vacation should be longer more family time we can do swimming and camping summer Brian relaxation, studies cause stress but if we stop after every two months it will divide our follows, are can go on family trips. Summer warmest seasons of the year occurring between springs, and Autumn. A period considered as a time of fulfillment, happiness, or beauty.

The summer is good seasons for vacation some people fixed holiday where to go for adventure, and traveling. Summer is fan,feeling freedom, and enjoble season.

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students should take longer break if don't take break the Brian is can't consecrate and focus and studies might be tried because

Students going to school entered of the year human Brian is not like machine working as all the time the have to longer break. summer is good opportunity for every one specially to students can go traveling spent time with our family , friends and go to picnic. Family is good opportunity to spent time with our kids go out side play with them. Most of family going to anther state for beach and also vesting family. Some students interesting working take job make own money .When coming back to from summer break everyone mind is fresh. Summer is fan seasons and favorite.

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Autumn is most of people second favorite seasons in Autumn all leaves fall down and all trees color is colorful and really looking amazing. this season is not much fan season because the autumn day is going to cold the night is cold and day is short this months not fan like summer this the can almost of the end if summer and begin. Autumn is good season for school because the weather is not that much hot like summer the weather is not that much cold. Autumn is good season for start to school everyone.

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Spring is season weather going to warmer every place planting growing up all place is green and almost of the end of the year. If a some giving break in winter and fall the planning school would be bey hand a kind of breaking during the classes when coming back spring a kind forgetting. Summer is best break in during school.

3 week better in spring.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
39492CE9549E,"Teachers can justify students knowledge more accurately than students. Teachers are very experienced compare to the students because they gained so much knowledge in their life. By doing the teacher designed projects, students can learn something that they did not know about. Teachers would know what topics they really need to focus on and what are the most important things they need to know about. Students summer projects should be designed by their teachers to make sure that they are being effective, hardworking and responsible for their work during the break.

Summer projects of the students should be designed by their teachers to make sure that the students are being effective during the summer break. Teachers know the academic ability of their student because they know how the students answers some specific types of questions, they know how the students think and understand. For Example, In my fifth grade there was a math teacher named Generic_Name. Ms. Generic_Name and I spent so much time with each other to discuss my mistakes on a test, She asked me do to test corrections on a paper. I solved all the questions correctly without a time limit, She came to me and said, ""I knew you could do it, because I have seen you working very hard these days"". Then, I realized that I knew how to solve these problems but I was scared to complete the test before the timer goes off because I did not know I could complete everything. This examples describes that the teachers know our academic ups and downs than ourselves. They also know what we need to learn to succeed in our class, So when they design a project to their students they make sure that the students are going to be effective on their break and learning something new which will help them in their future.

Summer projects of the students should be teacher-designed to make sure that the students are hardworking even during the summer break. Teachers know the capacity of hard work we do in our class, they observe the amount of effort that we put into different things like talking, reading, writing and singing, etc. For example, one of my teacher in 10th grade was really nice to me, she always used to ask me about my hobbies and interests. I had a presentation in her class and I went to ask her for help the day before the presentation because I was preparing for almost a month, I wanted to ask her if I did any mistakes in the slides. After I showed her my slides, she gave me a big hug an said ""I know how hard you worked for this presentation, I gave you a hard project to see is you are capable to do it or not. Even though you came to United States two months ago, you did a fantastic job"". I was very happy to hear her saying that I did good and on the day of my presentation I felt really confident on my work. This example explains how the teacher knew that I worked so hard to do my best. By assigning me a hard project based on my level of understanding, I worked hard to understand and analyze every single detail. That helped me to gain confidence on my self and my level of hard work improved a lot. When teachers design the project they make sure that the students are trying to work hard and they want to see how your working level is improving.

Summer projects of the students should be designed by their teachers to make sure that the students are being responsible for their work during the summer break. when teachers design the project they know how long it is going to take the students to complete the project and how well focused and responsible a student need to be while doing this project. For example, My history teacher in 10 grade was very strict, she always wanted our whole class to turn in everything that she posted online in one day. After 2-3 months of struggling in her class, everything was going really good till the last day of that academic year. All of my work was completed on time. This example says that even though I worked really hard in the beginning, when it came to the end of the year I was really happy for being responsible for my own work. By learning how to be responsible from that teacher, helped me a lot in all of my other classes too. Summer projects given by our teachers can make us feel responsible for ourselves, by doing the projects teach us how to be focused and concentrated to get them done on time. when the students design the project they take it easy because most of the students just pick something they already know or they already feel confident on, which will not make them feel responsible.

Teachers are very experienced to know how students think about something, they can understand what students know and what we do not know academically. They always try to teach us how to build our academic skills. They want the students to be in an amazing position, they always want to see the best from us because they know how the student are. Summer projects of the students should be teacher designed to make sure that they are being effective, hardworking and responsible for their work during the break. ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
E80B0AD2A9D7,"I think is important because de Churchill have a important place and the ministery British work in that.

Also is important because is recognized for many people.

The ministery British is play for that important role.

I think the people is interested for that.

That help many people.

sometimes the people helps to others and work together for had a good ministery and for help the government or the country and if that some people obtained any help for the education for the kids.

Also the mayor is a good person he received the support of his country and all the community has a good life.                                     ",1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
239A72DE1E35,"Saving energy and resources

Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours. Yes the school should follow the model by extending the school day two hours. It will save money for the schools. Students can have more time with teachers. Students can have a time to work at a job. Teachers get to have more time grading.

It will save money for schools. The reason I said that is because the transportations cost money and in four-days the school can save transportation money rather then five-days a week. The school can also save money on electricity on a four-days school week. Schools can save the money to help students to pay for their colleges. Schools can save the food to give it to homeless people.

Student have more time with teachers. Students can have more then 90 munites in class since is two hours extended. They get to have more time with teachers. They gonna learn more in class with more time added. They can really be organize, since they have four-day school and more time with teachers. That can help them learn about life even more.

Student can have a time to work at a job. I said that because most of the time when we have five days school. we can't work because we scared to fail our grade. if there is four days school and more time with teachers we can keep a good grade. And we can work two day and leave one day for study and family, since their's gonna be three days off.

Teachers get to have more time with grading. Their's alots of grading that teachers do so with three days off it can really help them with grading. Teachers can have enough to time to teach the class. They can have time to see every each student about their grade and see if they need help with any class works. It is great because teachers can have time with students and that's very important.

It is the best to follow the four-day school and extend two hours of the school day. It helps school with saving money. Student can have more time with teachers. Student have time to work at a job .Teachers have more time with gradings. It has so much benefits if we follow the four-day school and extended two hours of the school day. we should start writing to congress to change school into four-day work week.            ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
D5E3716C5E49,"I think students should come up with their own summer projects design because, students can come up with really creative projects, could have more fun doing their own design projects,and will have less stress over the summer.

Students can come up with really creative projects over summer by researching experiments, or about someones life. A student can look up science experiments to do as their projects that could be entrusting for the class or for them selves to. Also they can talk about a famous person or about someone in their family and explain why they wrote about that person. Students can invent new projects and show off to the class and explain how they came up with it and what will their invention help them or others.

Students could have more fun creating their own projects. Students will be more exited to be able to do create their own projects then follow a boring one a teacher assigned everyone. Students can come up with really creative work if you let them free roam. Students could in joy doing work that doesn't have to follow a checklist. Students could also can work on a project with their friends.

Lastly students can feel less stress about doing a project. Students will be able to work on a project without having to stress about it being perfect or if its following the checklist. Students can come up with their own checklist and show their classmates how they came up with it so the other students can do it one day for fun.

In conclusion, these our my reason why i think students should design their own summer projects.",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
A1196779A15B,"Do I think we choose our traits? In this world people choose their pathway. What they want to be in life. What career they want to do in the future. Some people have not figure out what they want to do in their life. It is always up to yourself to make life choices and some people like to listen to other people ideas but not listen to themselves. Humans like to listen to their friends or family members ideas too see if they can help them out. I think people like to listen to others people ideas but their own idea which is showing they can not make their choices by themselves.

Many of the humans depend on their friends or family being their to help them out. Being part of this life is learning how to make choices by yourselves and going out in the world and making yourselves an adult. Kids that turn sixteen start looking for jobs so they can grow and see how the money and dealing with customers works. When I turn sixteens years old I went out to look for jobs i wanted that feeling where I could earn money. People would make fun of me for working at a thrift store. At that time I cared what people would say about me and I told my manger that the job was not for me. I would listen to people comments but it was not worth it because they are not going to be there in the future. The point is we let people make our choices when we can do it ourselves but we like to depend on others.

Some people can feel like the world make their choices. Someone who you do not know about can judge you for no reason. Some people feel like they have to make everyone happy but not make themselves happy. When it comes on choosing who will be our next president not a lot of people like to tell others who they will vote for because there is always a person who will say something about it. There was a time when I was in my government class and a student asked what i thought about our president and his issues. I told him how i felt and instead of telling that he agreeing with me he told me how wrong I am and I did not know anything about the issues and how the president is trying to slow it. It can always be a person who you do not know trying to make your choices. Even though sometimes we make our mistakes however I feel like we depend on others

When it comes to make out choice we like to learn from experience we been through. We like too watch other people do it or we like to do it ourselves. I think it happened too be before when I thought I was doing it the right way and I would look around my classroom and I would see the other students doing it differently. By the end of the class the teacher got all of us in trouble because we did it the wrong. I should have asked the teacher or kept doing how I was doing it before. I feel like some people do not have the confident in themselves. I think that is right because sometimes I over think about something that is not a big deal.

In this world we do not like to do our things. We like people choosing for us, making decisions for us, and depending on others. Some people take time to figure out their life and who they want too be in life. I think we like to depend on other people ideas and not listen to ourselves. Living in this world is always about making choices and living by those choices. Do not have to listen what other people say about what you think and how you should live your life.        ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5,4.0
125CD13D5FA4,"Splash splash there I was drowning when the life guard saved me but that was a long time ago. in that situation having the skill of swimming would've been good but at the time I was young. Everyone has a talent or a skill? do you have a talent or skill that you have practice for or worked so hard for that skill? Well one of my strongest skills is swimming

You know not everyone can swim right well now I can unlike the time I was drowning well from that experience I have learned not to jump in the deep side of the pool. Well I can swim and an important talent to have or else you will probably end up like me but swimming is one of my talents I love swimming and i'm good at it and i learned to swim by myself.

Although talents and skills are nice to have but some times you just have to work for them like if you want a skill that requires a lot of effort then you have to prepare yourself. Practice and practice it makes perfect trust me thats why every one says it, because its true and thats why i'm such a strong swimmer. Every time that I went to a pool or river to have fun with my family I always tried swimming failed a lot but every time I fell I would force myself to get up and try once more.

takes a lot of work and money to be a good swimmer. In the summer I always begged my mom to go to the pool sometimes she took me and sometimes not but for the times that we went I put all my effort into it. Effort, effort is a big part of obtaining a skill. It all just depends on your part of the process. The process mite be long or the process mite be short it all depends .

in conclusion every one has a talent or skill. skills and talents take time, practice, and effort, what talents and skills do you have and if you dont like the skills and talents that you already have learn anther one it doesnt take much.      ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
9D9B85A82575,"As teens mature, they form opinions about issues that affect.

Not is a good idea to said that first impressions are almost impossible change.

Not is a good idea because all can be change, maybe we are expressions don't be nice.

Is possible because to change because you don't feel that people you begin know take a bad impressions of you can and you can change.

is very nice that people said he/she is very nice person and respectful.

you can are more friendly.

Is nice the have have good thought of you.

Is possible because maybe you demonstrated you face sad or angry and you don't are like show you can change.

You don't demonstrated when you don't are happy or have problems because nobody help is better you are always happy.

When you are express in front someone said or do good things. you can be happy face.

You personality is first thing the people are the first impression have of you.

While some people that is possible because only for the people think you are friendly and maybe you don't are not only for this reason you need to change,Others argue that is possible to change because the people you begin know take a bad impression of you and you can change , because it possible because you want work in a place where you need demonstrated are friendly and smile and don't are like this they need in the job , you need change because so, the people don't want you attended.

Is good demonstrated that we are nice person for what the people have good impression of we.

It good that people think you are a person friendly and don't have any problem for this reason.

Is good you first impression any job be nice because you form for treated the people is very important in any job.

In conclusion not is impossible change you first impression that other people have you but you can demonstrated that you don't are the they think.         ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
39F27C7223DB,"Have you ever want an extra help in a subject or some extra help in finishing your homeworks correctly? Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an afterschool homework club. I'm gonna agree with this idea because it's a helpful club for all the students , and it can make a big different in our grades! I can tell you the purpose and the reasons why did i agree with this idea!

In order to be proud and gain many students' achievement, you would like to have some extra help to improve your learning memorize. In my school, i can see there're already students that did a wonderful job, but the president, teachers, would like to have some more to be proud about their school. According to that, afterschool homework club could be a good way to make it came true. Also, participate in this club can help you understand a learning target more clearly. Why don't you agree and try?

Teachers and students volunteer to meet with those who need help either in homework or extra help in certain subjects. Example, an important test that could include stuff from last year or stuff that're hard to understand, an afterschool homework club can help you out with teachers and students! In an afterschool homework club, you would feel more comfortable than in class. Because you can talk about many subjects, have fun with your friends, feel free to start a conversation about ideas or topics. It's extremely entrusting. You can also ask for a common study guide for the whole club and we can all solve together to increase teamwork skills. Then we can help each others on what they get stuck, and we will get their help back! This is another way to improve your learning memorize in an afterschool homework club.

Gaining some achievements, improve your grades, be proud of yourself, afterschool homework club can help you. It may sound very simple, but it can effect your learning a lot! That's the reasons why i said that i agree with the idea to set up this club. I would like my school to start to establish afterschool homework club. Would you agree or disagree? Would you participate in this club if your school start to open it?",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
453F18C3C8BD,"peple can changes they first impresion

In this ocation i am disagree with this statment because sometimes people act different like when I firt meet my grilfrind I

was thinking that she was a happy person but with the thime I see that she was not that happy my impresion changes of that situation.

The majority of the people act different when they meet some a person that they going to meet for example, when you going to see a job you need to act happy and smile to they can acept you but in realiti you are sad so with the timethey changes that first impresion.

So alot of people when they meet a person they have a diffferent impresion so the other person can think that she or he is happy or have a good firt impresion or some times you act normal but we the tome you changes and your impresion too.

another reason is when you whent at new school at the first time you act that you are cool and you say things that they like to they can acept you so with the time they going to know that was a diferent impresion.

In my opinion I think that your first impresion can changes, because in the first Iimpresion it is not your self so when you go to work they can know who are you and they going to acept you like that so when you going to mmet a person be your self because that going to be your impresion.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
96A7646236BF,"I agree with him because, we all have a specific dream or mission we want to accomplish and every dream or mission have a standard end point on less you expecting something far more better than what you are having or where you are at that particular time or moment.

Taking myself as an example or personal experienced person,I had always wanted to be a model when I was kid which I still want to be, but one thing have noticed is that you can't do anything on your own without sometimes you need help from people around you. Becoming a model was my idea and something I think it will be better for me and nothing beyond that standard; was calling people for help, applying from one agency to the other but there was no help. Sometimes people even want to take advantage of that to use for their satisfaction(sexually) even though I know that is bad I still wanted to do it because of the goals I have set for myself .

But then I got to realize I have to wait for the right time to come else people will take advantage of me. If I had never mastered it wouldn't have any experienced and would have never grow because I thought it was easy.

Life haven't be easy after loosing my dad some years ago,used to have a lot of plans in the nearest future with my dad. Was planning on graduating and buying a big house for us when I find myself a good job, but since I lost him everything just shattered and i don't know what to do. Am now living with my mom and step dad so they the ones providing for me; I don't work,I can't buy personal stuff and that makes me feel bad ,it makes me feel like am not doing anything in this world. Sitting idle will never let me grow until I do something better for myself.

In my opinion we have to set a goal for ourselves at a certain point so that we won't rush or stuck in between things , and also not everybody or anybody have to master things before they take a step and things work out for them well, some even have experience from childhood.",3.5,2.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
2623A90F72B9,"Research shows that 75% of individuals agree on Emerson's statement. Well I disagree because you can become better, try is over and over again, and don't bring yourself down.

First and foremost, why I disagree is because you can become better. For example, you mastered a project but you want it better then what you did before look at your project closely. Write on a piece of paper on what you have then plan out your other idea. Don't make it identical make it different. Show people that you can do it but twice as better. So you can be proud of yourself and people can be proud of you too.

Furthermore, why I disagree is because you should try it over and over again. For example, you mastered you project but you challenged yourself to do it twice as better. We all understand to do something better then what you already have can be a little complicated That's why you should try it over and over again so you can accomplish it. That can help a lot to be honest you can see where you made a mistakes and not commit it again.

Last but not least, why I disagree is because you should never bring yourself down. For example, people are getting so frustrated that they will say I can't no more I won't be able to do it. That's bringing yourself down you should remain calm. Don't fell pressured at the end of the day you will do it and you will feel really proud of all of the hard work you did. Dont't ever say never you have to trust yourself if you don't then who will trust you.

This are my three reasons on why I disagree on Emerson's statement because you can become better, try it over and over again, and don't bring yourself down.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
5666CD4AA5CD,"The Success Of Life

The success of life to fall down is important , because with enthusiasm you can do everything, that you would like for your future, still if you fall down. Life in this world is hard to get up, but be strong person with enthusiasm, your life can be easy and not complicated. To fall down in life, you can have many negatives things in life. Life can be more hard as you think it is. Enthusiasm have many positive opportunities in life. This positive opportunities can make your life more easily, because growing with enthusiasm, your future can have more patient,less stress, and more happiness in your life. To failure without lossing enthusiasm can have the sucess of your future. Bringing success into your life, you can learn lessons, that would help you to find opportunities, for you to walk forward. In this statement I agree with mr, Winston Churchill, because this is a every important role statement, that can help people to bring the positive way for making easy life for people in this world.

To fall down in life, you can have many negatives things in life. Life can be more hard as you think. To have better opportunitites, you have to bring that energy to be strong person without giving up. If you want to have dreams, with no enthusiasm it would be hard you to get it. An example"" i want to have the goal, to have this big dream, going to collage."" If you want this dream with negatives thoughts, things without studying, and be lazy to have a job, to safe money for your collage, you can't do anything. Another example "" i want to have a car, a house, a dog, and having a trip everywhere in the world."" You can have a job, but if you are lazy to work, you can get fired, not getting that much money , that you need for all your things you want to have. To have negatives thoughts, you can't have all your things, that you would like to have for a better future into to your life.

To have enthusiasm can bring more easy and posititve thoughts, to accomplish your goals. Because with enthusiasm you can have less stress, you can have more energy, and be patient with everything. To have less stress, with positive thoughts you can make easily things, still If you think that it is hard for you. An example "" i want to pass my sol's in school."" If you want to pass the hardest test in school, to graduated you can study, paying attention to your teacher, do your homework that day is due and having your things on time. You can pass your classes and your sol's, without thinking that much stress in your mind. Another example "" i fell my exam of math class."" You can fell your exam, but you can't give up, because you can have another solution. Teachers give sometimes, opportunities to their students staying after school or come more prepare next time larning a little bit more, because it can be more easily to pass it.

To failure without lossing enthusiasm you can have the success of your future. To have the success into your possitive way, you can have less stress and you can learn the lessons finding better opportunities to move forward. An example "" I did not graduated, because i did not pass one class, it was a requirement for graduation."" It is ok If you did not pass it, but you can have a choice by finding opportunitites in others places. You can repeat school one more year, you can go to other schools that prepare you to pass your exams, and classes, you can go and find information about that class or subject. Another example "" I got fired in my favorite job, because i accidently broke a delicated plate."" You can be sad, but always go and find opportunitties in others places, that can hired you, because if you have experience ready, so it would not be hard for you where to hired you. Becareful what you do, only have the positive way and have the energy, that customers can be surprise about you, how hard you work in your job that you really like.

To fall down can bring you negatives things. Negatives thoughts can bring you in a bad ways, because you want to have that goal that you want to reach, but you can't. This can be a big situation, if you want to reach that goal, but you have to try your best on doing the oppositive way. To have a enthusiasm you can work really hard and make it more easily. Working hard be happy can bring you that attituded, that we all want to see. In this world is hard to bring people in a positive way, because life is hard , but they are people that they want to show that, you can't give up always move forward. To failure without lossing enthusiasm, you can have the success in to your future. This is a lesson that everyone have to follow and not make it hard. If you are negative, just find a way to make you think a lot, because that stress you out and have a negative thoughts, never give up just move forward.             ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
DB69B98973B6,"One topic that is frequently debated today is if schools should be allowed to control students involvement in extracurricular activities. They think that sometimes students take too many extracurricular activities to the point that they do not have enough time to do their school work. They feel that extracurricular activities don't help students manage their time wisely. I believe the decision regarding extracurricular activities should be left to the students because it helps students learn how to manage their time, make new friends, and it helps students make colleges be interested in them.

Firstly extracurricular activities helps students learn how to manage their time. It helps students learn how to manage their time by making them make a schedule. By making a schedule students learn how hard it is to an adult. Students make resposible actions and learn how much work they have to put in for them to be good in school. Extracurricular activities doesn't always take studenst time but prepares them for life

Secondly extracurricular activities helps students learn how to make new friends. Extracurricular activities helps students how to communicate and make new friends while making good memories. Students shouldn't always be focused in school I believe that students should also have fun and friends. Friends will make school and other school related activities enjoyable for kids and teengers.

Lastly extracurricular activities helps students make colleges be interested in them. Colleges get interested in you when they see all of the thinggs you've done althrought high school. If colleges see that you've a lot throught high school they would be even more interested in you. Colleges also check your grades and other stuff but the thing they check the most is extracurricular activities because they want to see if you were consistant.

As you have read I believe the decision regarding extracurricular activities should be left to the students because it helps students learn how to manage their time, make new friends, and it helps students make colleges be interested in them. Only when we let our students choice they would resposible and wise. When that day comes our students will be great and mature.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
E8795A1AA404,"When making life decisions it is good to ask someone for help then making the desicison yourself. Why is it better asking someone about the decision is because they could tell you either the desicison is good or they could tell you that don't do it and try to find a better idea. When making a life decision you have to think about the importance, how much it would cost me or whats the overall budget, and how its going to help me achieve in life.

When making life decisions it really matters on how its important to you or how its going to effect you in life. As life goes on do I think its going to help me improve what Im doing right now or is it going to drop me and destroy me for life. When making life decisions it also depends on how you're looking at that particular thing/object. Thats why you should ask someone else who is already doing that particular thing from before or ask someone who could give you an personal opinion/advice that would actually make you think if making this life decision is worth it or not.

When buying something big that will have a effect on my life i would have think about my budget and how am I going to afford this project without having any issues. So to do that I would ask someone for advice who is already doing that business or investment. When asking others for advice I would have to think about how they're going to respond and what they're going to say. This is why budget is also a very big thing when it comes to making life decisions is because I would have to pay that amount in order to have my business or investment stand out out the people around me.

Why would I have to ask someone to achieve my investment or business. To achieve my business i would have to ask someone for a advice who is already doing something similar to that. As Im asking for the opinion or the advice i would have to think how or what Im going to do to improve that decision. What hard work or thinking of mine or someone else's would have to go in that play to achieve the decision. As I would be achieving the decision I would have to see how Im being affected with it and how much pressure its putting on me. Why would I ask others for advice when I have brain and thats because they're going to have a different mind set from me. They probably think better than me or in some way where we both agree on the same fact to achieve the business or investment in a better way. This is why you should ask someone else for a advice or a opinion than going in alone in such a big decision that could impact your life in less than some days.

In conclusion to making life decisions it is a good idea to ask someone else for a advice than making the move alone. Its because someone else has a different mind set than you yourself. Thats why when making a life decision you should think about what things and what mind set you need to proceed with your investment or business. So the mains things you need is how important the investment or business is to me, How high or low my budget is, and what will I have to do to achieve this business/investment. For all these reasons you should always ask a person about their advice or opinion even though I might not listen to it but it doesn't hurt to ask. They'll give me the best advice or opinion even how big or little the investment/business is.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
6E70CECCE25D,"One topic is frequetly debated is whether or not should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? some people think that because students can learn more. They feel that because if the school extending two hours more, we can have more time with our friends. I believe that because you can do homework,expending time with your friends, and learn more.

One reason why the school days can extending two hours is because alot of students need help with their clases,teachers can help us to pass the clases and that it is good time the students think about, if they want to graduated they can make an effort to pass the clases and don't distracted other people in the classroom. Students have bad grades because they don't listening to the teacher while she's explain. We have bad grades because the class is boring or the teacher is great with the students and she don't say anything when we are using our phones.

Second reason why the school days can extending two hours is because you can participated in school activities or, you can play in some games like Soccer, American football, basketball, and you can have more time with your friends and helping the soccer team. you can help to clean the school and decoring some of the classroom, or you can stay in the library and help to organized the books or doing homework, and we can use the computers to search and find what book we want read.

Third reason why the school days can extending two hours is because some students want to stay in the school doing projects or homework because they don't have time to do in their home some of they go to work, and others students have alot of homework from the others clases, and that's one reason why the teachers be mad with the student because they did not do his homework, and the students explain why he not did that homework we have alot of homework from the others clases and i don't have to much time to do all the homework i have because at night i got to the bed early and the next day some teachers give me more homework and that's why i don't do your homework.

The last reason why the school days can extending two hours is because some students need help with their homework, they need to practice more to understand the class but the most important thinks that students need to have are good grades and pass all the test to graduated, if they have very good grades the school will give a certificated to saying we are proud of you, and your family will give to you some gifts because they are proud of you ,and you will graduated without trouble and then any university will accept to you because they will see your grades of your colleges and see how good you was in your clases.

In conclusion why the school days can extending two hours is because most students want to stay in the school to participated in activities of the school or participated in some football teams.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
DBBAF0AB97FB,"Well,A good attitude is always the key in our lifes be good with others people,I'm agree with the statement the good attitude represent, Where we we're born, How our parents gave us education where i was born they always taugh me how treat people do the right thing, If we always do good things around us, Good things will come around us.

I'm going to tell a history about me, my parents alway before i go to shool they always told me be respecful with the olders people if you see people when your walking say hi,Good morning no just old people, kids like you need respect if you respect they will treat you with respect, Then i was walking in the street i alway remember, What mom told me one month after i forgot what mom told me one month before,I went to shool there was a party at school the teacher who was my science teacher he was so rude with me what i did was so rude too, but i remember just in the moment what my mom told me what i did when i remember what mom told me, i just turn around and walk away,I said ,Wooow his parents didn't taugh him how to treat people with respect the night was so fun the party over around 4:00 am in the morning, When i get home my mom was so worry about me bacause i didn't tell her, The days pass and you don't know the time is a clock never stop if you see around you your parents are getting older in that time you want the days pass too fast, I'm 18 now i see what my parents told me, how bautiful is see kids,boys, old people together is bautiful when you see there's respect each other respect is the key for many ways to see people they are like you to get respect others and wetherever you go everyone will treat you with respect if you respect them the positive attitude always bring you good things,your future is in your hands don't waste your time is running respect others people the positive attitude will bring you a good job and new opportunities.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
B3B9D116021C,"People tend to think that setting a goal high to achieve is a smart idea. While the other side thinks that setting a goal low is the better. Although some people may hate setting a goal high and falling short, it can cause a person to give up, but they forget to neglect the part that goals or achievements come in different shapes and sizes. People should be aiming their achievements high because people can achieve more, people can feel more motivated, and people can feel more successful.

Some people may not agree with this position because setting a goal to high and then falling short can cause a person to feel less motivated. they believe this because when setting a goal high and it fails, it can make a person give up and not try. they may think this because when giving up on a goal it can cause a person to feel empty and wanting to not try again. this shows that some people are afraid of failing, and when they do fail it makes them not try again. However, the oppositions looks over other important points.

People should be aiming their achievements high so they can achieve more. when a person sets their goal high, it could mean they are setting multiple goals and not just one, having one goal is great, but having multiple is also fantastic. this can also make the person feel good about themselves, knowing that they have accomplished more than one achievement. it can also make them feel proud about themselves. Even if a person failed one goal that doesn't mean they can't accomplish other goals. People cannot accomplish every goal, all goals are different then one another, but other harder goals can be accomplished.

people should be aiming their achievement high because it can make a person feel more successful. Once a person has completed an achievement it can make them as if they succeeded. it can also help with their confidence, it would give them less anxiety. it also shows that the person who is working towards his or her achievement can do so much more. it can also help some people in the future because they have the confidence they need because they hit different goals. people can also feel like they did something with their life and not feel like they did not accomplish anything in life.

People should aim their achievements high because they can feel more motivated. Setting an achievement means working really hard. It means you must focus on, it should be the only thing you are working on. Most people in their mind focus on this and this is what motivates them to work on one persons goal. In their brain they get this sense of energy, their brain is telling them to work on their goal. that is what make some people want to work towards their goal or try to finish their goal.

So this is why aiming your goal high is a good thing, motivation, success and achieving more can help a person in life if trying complete an achievement. People can get scared of goals, they are afraid it could fail something could go wrong, but the thing is in life you will fail, nobody is perfect, people will have get over their fears and accomplish their goal.        ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
7982F5F494E2,"In my opinion setting a good example is the only way to influence people you're a good person. many people wont believe you're a good person just because you say you are. However, if you show them by how you act like for an example: you don't bother anyone, you show where a location is or try to, being polite, patience, showing manners, etc.

they will find you setting a good example or showing good behavior. Not only setting a good example can make people say you're a good person , it can also lead to ""good karma"".

Lets say you have a younger sibling, and they want to be like you , you can be smart , responsible,and a good behaving person, show them a good example so they can be as successful as you. same goes to people dont show them a bad behavior or example, thats not gonna get you anywhere, that'll only make people not like you and assume different things. Another thing is always set good example when you're out in public with a family member, because if you dont people will not like that and have your family at fault.

in conclusion to all this if you show good behavior or set a good example by showing it , It will not only make people assume you're a good person it will also influence young ones to do the same.     ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0
6B20E9C115AF,"I believe that a possitive actitude has a good impression in othre persons. But there around you are person who can influence you to be a bad attitude peson with others. The decison you make to be who you are is to realize that other person will act the same way to you as you just did to them.

Everyone need to be respected don't matter the age, country or religion becuase we all are humans. Been in a poaitive attitude will appeal the attraction of other persons to you by that will hepl you to success. Because if someone is being rude to them and you act different and start helping them they will notice that you have a good attitude to others that you dont even know. By the way you cannot judge someone just for their apparience is like judging a book with out reading it, it can be someone who will look with an angry face, a sad face even it can look weird but if you dont start sharing time, knowing each other, know what they like and what they do or how they are you cannot put your bad attitude just for how they look, they can also treat you as the same you did to them

However, people cannot recieve a bad attitude from you as if they were different to you. I think that we all are same with some differences than others as religion, country, color, etc... . I feel that recieving a bad attitude from a person that you even know is the badest thing that someone can do to you becuase you don't know that person and if you show that reaction from you that means that you're like that with everyone and show that you dont have respect to others. Even in your job is when you need to be the more kind as possible to keep those person that you don't know with you becuase as they need you, you also need them at the same time becuase they will help you to keep that job that you need, also your impression to them has to be best, as you show them at work you also need to show the best of you out of work that will show that you're successeful person in life and that you dont act good just when you need it and that is how you are and they can also trust in you because you are being honest to them.

Considerating that don't matter what you cannot give a bad treat to other person just because you woke up in a bad mood. I believe that if you are in bad mood and think that everthing is going to bother you is better for you to figured it out as soon as posible on you own, because people can not be involved with your own personal problem and i think even if you are not felling well you also need to be in a good attitude to the people because if you let you bad attitude to ruin the days of other they will think that you're always like that and will be enough to them to think the worse of you. However knowing that you don feel well and you gave the best of you to others before, that will be a great acomplishment for you and from now on you will be and example and will help othres that feel the same as you to continue and leave that bad mood behing and show the best of them.

In conclusion a good attitude is one of the important things to success in life. I think that every person have the right to be respected not for what they have is just we all need respect. People cannot be treat it bad because of you mood or just because you didn't like how that person is. Doesn't matter what you can't act bad with other persons, even if you don't know them and think that you will not see them again but the reality is that in other day you can really need from that person but that person will not be there for you because of how you acted before.            ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
EA04020F5ECD,"when people ask you for advice they sometimes talk to more people than one they ask they ask for a good advice becuase if they will not have good advice they can't think about a good decision somtimes a person who have trouble in her or his life or any depression our any happiness in thier life they can't make control thier a control on them. so they get pannic sometimes they can't think what to do they don't know how to do things so that's why they from many people but when they seeks multiple opinions so they get confiused they can't select one opinion that is good for them they want to think about that but they can't do that so they ask many people for different opinions so that's good but also not good tho but so they need to figure that what they should do or what not what i think is it's ok to ask people thier opinions but we should also need to think use our mind whithout our mind we can not do any thing the opinions that are given by other people we should think about them like what are they saying what's the point is it good for us or not or if i will follow this opinion it will make trouble for me or not then u will ask your friend or a person that is so close to you if that person will say yes you will be like ok than . lets do it!

so you do a whole long procisior for getting a one good opinion what you need to do is that ask opinions from two or three people and then if u think it's not a good opinion than think your own and then take a good decission. everyone takes thier own decission i think if you wanna ask for a opinion find a good trustful adult who really really wants to help you who will give you a better choice and then think about it if you think that she or he is right then just follow the directions for example i have a birthday party and i need to select the dresses for everyone and arrange the birthday party and i don't have enough time i am so worried and confiused i don't known what to do .

i need a help from people i asked from my friends, cousins ,family, teachers and then i think that i have a lot of opinions so i can't choose

1 so what i did was i asked my older cousine and then we discused about that she told me in details what to do and then i managed my time and i choosed the dresses i arranged the birthday party in one week everything was so good that's how we make better chioce for our self if u can't do that at least think on your own or ask for help and ask from a good person not anyone you don't know well becuase people can play with you so we have to be carefull so i think asking an adult is more better than asking a lot of people becuase asking an adult will help you more becuase the first time i need help and i asked a lot of people and i was so confiused and i was like what is going on with me because it was my first excperience i didn't use my mind it was so bad waste of time every thing was ruined and that's why i learned something is never do anything that your parents or adult don't like here is another way to make a better choice and that is always listen to your parents and your adult because sometimes the decisions that you are making it seems like they are good but after some time you realize that it's not good for you u get in trouble and all you have face somethings so thats why do what your parents are telling you to do not what you wants to do it's ok to listen to your heart but sometimes it's not so the best way to make a better choice is listen your parents and adult

2nd is use your mind to think that it's good or bad the 3rd way is to ask someone who is an adult and such a nice and truthfull person believe in your self and your god these are the best ways to make a better choice we should always believe in your self and your parents because they will always tell you a thing that is good for you no matter what it is just think that yuor parents tell you to do that and again believe in yourself if you will everything will be good if you be feel good believe in your god becuase he will help you everywhere he is with you so these are the best way to make a good choices are these..",1.5,1.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0
ED937FC56246,"The one thing I hope I accomplish is to get a high paying job. I would want a high paying job since it could pay off many things that I don't need to pay later. My reasons is to travel to many places I've never been to, buy many things as I want without spending my family money's, and I would try many different foods that could be expensive.

One reason why my accomplishment is getting a high paying job is to travel around the world or place that I never been to. Traveling around the world could be really expansive since your going to buy many things you would need or don't need. Sometimes traveling depends on where you are going since some places are cheap or expansive. Having a lot of a good amount while traveling is a good because you could do anything you want with that money while your not at home. I think having a high paying job is good for traveling is not always cheap, you can buy anything you've ever wanted and not worrying much about using to much money.

The next reason is to buy many things as I want without spending any or some of my parents or family members money. This is important because it wouldn't matter much if you used you own money but if you use your family money you might have to pay them back later on. Another reason is going out when you want to and you dont really want to spend your family money because you need a lot since you could be going to many places. When you want to take your family out to a really nice place or a place where you think they would enjoy or relax, you can just surprise them by already getting it done and paid off. Another reason it is a good idea to get a high paying job, to not spend your family money.

The last reason is trying many different foods that could be expansive. From my experiences I know that most places has really expansive food that is really good. I also know that going to a super fancy restaurant is expansive since all the foods could be really good or just a rip off. Sometimes going to really fun places or vacations foods are expansive because it could taste good and many people would might want to try some, also if it was cheap many people would've gone crazy. Paying for good expansive food is worth it then paying too much for something that taste bad.

In conclusion that a high paying job is good for traveling to places you've never been to, spending lots of money without using your families money, and eating or buying really expansive foods. Going to places you have never been to is great. Spending our own money lets us buy anything we want. Also buying or trying new foods is really nice when you can buy it. This is why I want my accomplishment to be a high paying job.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
2A96CE614119,"A famous British writer once said ""your character will be what you yourself choose it."" His name was John Lubbock. What he wanted to state is that we choose what we want to be from here on out and, that know one chooses for us. Another question that was asked was, ""is our character formed by influences beyond our control."" No we control all of our actions so what John wanted to say is that our character and character traits are based on the choices we make and still making.

We are always in control and know what we are doing on a daily bases. We always know what well happen based on the actions we take, it's common sense. It's like when you argue to a teacher we know it's bad and we know what comes after that and that is going to the principals office. Nothing is never out of our control is weather we want to stop it or just let it happen. Most of the time our actions are based on bad things like smoking for an example we know it's bad but it's in influences or the people that make us do it. So that's why we need to stop listening to that bad side and listen to our good side.

The character we are right now as a person is based on the life choices we made. If it wasn't for the good or even the bad choices we made in life we wouldn't be the person we today. Everything is bases on what we do and what we don't do. For example is we study hard enough and work hard as well we can get to the college or job of our dreams. But to do that we have to make good life choices and good decisions. Like i said before the person we are today is based on ALL the choices we made starting from when we were little to how we are right now.

We are far from perfect but we try to make the best decisions or perfect is you say. As we humans we know we are not perfect and shall never be perfect but that doesn't mean we dont try to make perfect decisions. For starters we know our rights from our wrongs. So we know our good decisions from our bad decisions and you would think that it's easy to choose the right one but in reality it's not. The more bad it is the more we want to do it. It's just human nature one well say BUT we most of the time we don't choose that side want to know why. It's because we are always in power and it's never out of our control. Some yes but most others NO.

In conclusion we know that nothings never out of our power. We know that person we are today is based on the life choices we made. That we know our rights from our wrongs, our positive and negative. And what John Lubbock wants to tell us. That our character and character traits is based on the type of person we are that is what we wanted to tell us. And its never to late to under stand that either.       ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
2379CD1725FE,"To beagin with people like to go out for vication or spend time for fun so theire is a best way to spend your time just go to the list bellow for example, Enjoyable way to spend time outdoors is by going to commanity parks, state parkes, and national parks etc. in fact the earth is best for humantiy to spend time on useing nature if we keep is safe! spending our time in theos things make us know the world well. the more we spend our time on it the better access will know!!

Next c ommanity parks:

is all people together in the commanity or in the enviroment spend time together. In addition in the commanity parks their are many fun thnigs to do like, play games sach as soccer, eat food togehter, taik to your frinds or fameliy while enjoying the frsh air. Another thing people like in the commanity park is that it's less quiter than state park and national park also because their are less people. Now commanity park are going to be the best. The fact that it has less people and being quiter than any of those parks!!

Thired state park:

in the state park it's more qiuter than national park, less people comnceting and give each other ideas to do a project envolving any subject. Sports like runing, work out, soccer, basketball etc. Also state park are the best to planned idias to solve any proplem for the commanity. Interest is devoloping in state park for adults cause it is more advnes for them to do their beness. Spending more time in state park will make wounder to change the way it is!!

Also national park is people in the world where they have fun and chiile in theire specific it's more likely normal vication which more people likes to speed their times on. For students to speend summer vication it's a good spoit for them I recomended it will be nice with fameliy together. Spending your time on national park will make know things you didn't know before. In addition most people spend their time on national park cause it's more accesbel to do anythink specific to gether information

In conclusion all this are same but they have diffirent fun things to do also they have the amount of people in the park spending time with diffirent people. I will recomed this for all people to do it, beacuse it's more enjoybel. So speend your time by going to thoes place, but ""authorized"" first choees which one best for you!!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
F3ACD9A99ADA,"Success is about to enforced our self and to accomplish our goals, as I know nobody was born knowing something everyone was born to learn and to fail every time that is possible to learn more However I agree with Churchill's statement that is about the important role that failure plays in the success, My reasons are that we can protrude, influenced others, more personal experience.

My first reason is that everyone can protrude and be proud over our self ,and protrude means to take the best of us and show it, for example, in my case lass year I loss my job because I didn't have enough age to work in the company this year I start my own company and I have my own employees, this is a example how failure didn't take my enthusiasm, and that we can loss twice maybe but not forever because be will be success later.

My second reason is that our attitude is everything we can infused others that have been losing their life and their enthusiasm and show them that everyone can enforced and get what they want,

A example will be my cousin she had been in 12 grade for 3 years that at the first year that she didn't pass her grade herself confidence went down and she had loss her goals, but this year she will graduate because this year she is been preparing to pass her classes and to get her diploma, this is a example of been failing, and failing and then get the success.

Other might say that success and failing isn't good for our society, however I sill disagree because to get success or to win we have to learn from the beginning, my third reason is that with the experience what we have of been losing and failure twice and twice we will know that we are going to do and be successful later. According to a quote that say ''You can loss a battle but not the war'', In fact we can loss everything but not our enthusiasm.

In conclusion, this is why I agree with Churchill's statement that is about the important role that failure plays in the success, My reasons are that we can protrude, influenced others, more personal experience. everyone is exert to failure but what we have to do is to continue and don't surrender don't give up with our goals, always been happy doesn't paying attention to the situation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
23958A3106EA,"The work in group will always have an excellent results. I feel working in group have several benefits than working alone. When we hear that we are going to work alone it sounds good but not for all. It should be great for those people who don't have the capacity to work with others. Even you do not believe it, working in group is feature that no all humans have it. Why I think like that? because working with other people we help us to learn different types of job, we can able to work in others areas with others folks, we can meet amazing people.

To begin with, working in group can help us to learn different types of job. I have my own experience with this. When I started my first job I didn't learn enough. I worked in a hotel and people there liked to work alone. Sometimes I didn't know how to do something and I immediately asked but those workers didn't like to teach others, and they said you should learn by yourself. Obviosly I didn't agree with them and I started to find different job where I could learn more. Working alone was the most diffucult job I've ever had. I could't learn from others because they didn't give me the opportunity to do it. Now I got experience from others how to work in restaurant, markets or shopping centers. I think you will learn hundred percentage better if you are learning from others. However, some people claim that work alone is more beneficial to concentrate, but I insist that work with someone else with leave you more knowledge than work alone.

To continue, if we worked before in commuties or in group we are able to work in different areas of work and also work with different folks, it will be easier for us. When we are looking for a job in our interview the boss or managers will always ask if we have problem to work with others. They ask this questions because they want to be sure that we will work in different places and we will interact with the other employees. If we anwser NO, I'm really sure that we won't get job soon. If we are willing to learn and work together as a team we'll have success in every job that we get. If we change of jobs is because we are looking for something better, and we will achieve working in different areas learning diffrente jobs, acquiring experience from others, showing that we are able to work with others, all these can be beneficial for us when we are looking for job.

In addition, we can meet amazing people working in group. When we work with others we are making friends. My mom found her best friend Generic_Name in her job. They have eleven years with this beutiful friendship. Everyone needs a friend that can help, teach and learn with you. Think about it, there are more benefits working with someone else than working alone. Even though some people say that working in group is more complicated because you will find people who don't want to teach how to work or it can be distracting for you. I feel sure that there are more people good than bad and also if you know your work, you know what to do in your job there aren't people or thing distracting for job. We should be responsable with our job this is an important thing that you shouldn't forget. In schools, in works or in the street we'll find amazing people who will help to improve our skill as workers or as humans being.

To sum up, working in group will help us to find better jobs, to learn new thing, to interact with different people. Here in The United States we will find many jobs, we are able to learn many thing and also to interact with different people from different countries. Do not reject the opportunities to grow and accomplish your dreams. If some day you have the chance to teach others, do it with patience as a proffesional worker and keep in your mind that two heads think better than one.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
094684D6DD30,"Students are expected to identify a career,however students to commit to a career at a young age.

Students should to commit to a career at a young age.

They have to study more. Students will be haveba lot homework to do.

They have to working hard.

Some student taking a career at a young age.

Some students commit to a career at a young age. Then they have to study more to get good grades. Other things they have to focus in this career it's a important for their lifes.

The students have to study everyday bacause they have the apportunity in their hands. The students sometime commit to a career at a young age.

Students wil have a lot homework to do.

In this school give to students the opportunity, but they wiil get a lot homerwork to do.

If the students no have jod they can do their homeworks anytime. The homeworks sometimes the teachers explain or they can helping if the students have question how to make a homework. Students will have a lot homework to do.

The students have to working hard to get gread grades. Sometimes the students feel tired becuase they were not sleep for study and work. Just they get focus in this career never give up. Always positive nothing is easy in this life everything have his risk. The students have to do their best in this career.

Students should to commit with a career at a youg age.

That's very good idea get ready early.

For the future of the students than take this career.

This career helping to people see their future that shows what we want to be.

Students should to commit to a cereer at a young age.

This is my essay maybe I don't did it perfect, but I try;

Thanks         ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
112AA24D20BC,"Some years ago before my uncle became a doctor, I saw how he was struggling with anxiety attacks of too much studying time at medical school, but he noticed that he needed to do different activities to get distracted a little bit and at the same time get rid of all the stress. Every student participating at least in one extracurricular activity is a really good idea because they could do sports, get in book clubs or help around doing community service. If all the students would do extra activities , they're lives could be really different and better in many ways with variations of experiences and less stress.

Students doing any sports would be really helpful for their health. Mostly every student at school is seating on a chair for hours and at home they are probably just also seating on the couch for more hours . A human body needs to move and do some exercise to have a good health. Sports are really a good ting that makes your body feel or have some changes just like on teens they're metabolism makes them get taller or develop their bodies. Even if the students do just 20 minutes a day stills helpful for them.

Book clubs are something really interesting and fun for students to do. Do you ever just feel like your mind needs a break? Well books are the best option as a break , they take you to many different places around the world even places that dont even exist without moving from anywhere you are at. You can find new adventures, drama, romance and some things you never experienced; just like transferring your mind to another world, and distracting you from your regular life. Making you have and enjoy some good time without going somewhere. In the book clubs you can discuss with people about all those thoughts you have about what you just read, and could also find someone that thinks the exact same things as you.

Doing community service not only helps others, it also helps you! You might be asking yourself right now how? Well, helping your community it's teaching you as a student how important cooperation is , helping others brings you happiness, and that feeling of how responsible you are becoming. Also, community service helps students a lot with credits for an advanced diploma or even a scholarship for college. If you never have helped your community thinking is nothing fun, you should consider it as a extracurricular activity that you can do.

Every student should do an extracurricular activity after schools so theyre body and mind can have an productive break. Any type of activity helps you and relax's you when need a break. Choose something to do that you like and after school finishes then do everything you can in that time.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
830CCF8E0B23,"Elective Classes

I believe that classes like arts, music and drama should be elective to the studnets. It is not required for every students to take every classe. Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. I believe that it is a waste of time to force those students to take classes they are not interested in. Instead of forcing students to take every classes, it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the student is interested in.

Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. Schools where they allow students to choose classes they want are likable. Students prefer to go to that school where they can choose classes as they want. They don't prefer to go to those schools where the students are forced to take every classes. If students are to take every classes, it might be too much for them to handle.

I believe that it is a waste of time to force those students to take classes they are not interested in. It is not only a waste of time for students, but it is a waste of time for teachers who works so hard. If a person is not interested in something, you should not force them to like it. Classes like music, art and musics are extra activites. They are important for us but not that important where studnets have to be forced to take every classes. If students are to take every classes, they might loose interest in that particular class they were interested in.

Instead of forcing students to take every class, it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the studnet is interested in. Studnets might like only one class and has a talent on that particular class, they should be allowed to take that particular class and does not have to take other classes. If a student does not want to participate in any particular class because of their personal reasons, schools should not force them to take those classes.

It is not that classes like arts, music and drama are not important to students. They are important and we should not neglect thoses classes. But the studnets should also not be forced to take every classes. Students should have their own rights to choose what classes they want and what they don't want. If they have to take every classes, it might be too much for them to handle. I believe that it is better to give importance to that one particular class that the student is interested in, than to force them to take every class. As it is a waste of time to both teacher and student",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
3E4B70F8555C,"The benefits of working with a group or working alone. Which do you feel is more beneficial.

In my opinion, I believe working with a group is more beneficial because a group creates different ideas, team work to win the competition, and entertain the audience.

First, each person of the group has a different thoughts and different ideas. They share their ideas to create incurable, different, complete thoughts as a group. Some of the ideas are very difficult to reach the goal, but it is passable to think together and make it happen.

Team work to win the competition is to work together. Each person has to play a different correcter's and roles. Some of them in the group they have to support the main correcter in the stage or back of the stage. Rehearse time to make it inconvenient to be with family members to reach their accomplishment.

Finally, entertaining the audience is most important to each group member. An audience is the people come to enjoy the show, each of the group member are work hard to convince and entertain the audience. Each group member has one leader to follow their roles in specific time to make the show more interact.

I think, the wonderful job can be done working together as a team, developing their ideas and creating entertainment in their performances . And, also, their task is to gives the fans happiness and good time. Team members, families, and teachers will feel proud. I think working with a group it is more joyful.

sincerely:

Generic_Name         ",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
F032D40816C0,"Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm I think is a good idea because, you can be a successful person, you need believe in yourself, and you need support of your family.

You can be a successful person, because you can do all the things that you have in mind, and you can realize more than you already have, for example once my friend Generic_Name told me that her cousin Generic_Name he loves fix computers, but he only can fix computers he can not fix telephones, TV, refrigerators and another electronics devices and he always was sad because his goal was that he can fix all the electronic devices, he join in a group of people that fix electronic devices, he always cry because he did not understand the things that he was learn, he always was try day to day, so one day he was the winner in the competition of who was the person that fixed one TV in the less time as possible, he fixed the TV in 1 minute, other people fixed in 10 or 5 minutes, finally he earn a diploma of the best fixed person, after 5 years he learn that nothing was impossible for him , in the actuality he has a store that he sell and fix electronic devices. The experience of Generic_Name is a good example in our life because he learn that never give up, he always fight for his goals and that example we can do exactly the same that Generic_Name always fight for our goals and always try another new things that we think that we can not do.

Also the reason that you need believe in yourself is that you always need be positive person, every day see what are the things that you need for have success or what you need to do every day. In my experience I was in 10th grade was my first day of school at Generic_School,I never was with a lot of nervous, and I did not speak English ,so all my classes in my first day of school I feel many eyes on my because I was the new student, then at the end of my day I take my correct bus and when I was at home talking with my mom I told her that I do not like the school because was different of my schools on my country and my mom told me that with the pass of the days I will feeling a good person, a correct person. So in my first year in the school I get all my classes with A at the end of my first year I earn one diploma in Math and four diplomas for each end of the quarter, so I pass 11th grade with excellent grades too, but sometimes I fail my classes my test in Algebra I fail many of the test or sometimes I get D or F in my classes and when I fail something is when I was think that I am not good in my classes or in English that was to hard learn the language English, all my teachers talk with me that I was a good student always complete my work, every day I was pay attention to my teachers, and then I pass to 12th grade this year is more difficult because I need pass all my classes, all my ESOL and other things for example my WISE test, and now my teachers, my counselor, my mom told me that I am a excellent person, and sometimes I think leave the school and start to work because I feel that I cannot go to the end of High School . This is my experience and I believe that sometimes I am wrong because loss enthusiasm it is not a good idea always I will have failure or another experiences that are not good.

And this is why we need believe in our self if you do not believe in your self you may be you do not complete all your goals or all that you have in mind.

Other people say that success consists of going from failure to failure and loss enthusiasm, but otherwise you need support of your family because the family is very important in your life and always you need a opinion from your family. For example one day my uncle

Generic_Name he was in his college George Mason his family was in Mexico he was the only person that was in Generic_City. He always try to do all of the way correct and always be a good student and a good person, but one day he fail a very important test in the college that test was the final test in his College, and if he fail this test he can not graduate from College and he was feel like a person that he can not do anything and he told to his friend Generic_Name that he did not pass the final test, but Generic_Name said to Generic_Name that he can not tell to Generic_Name's family because they may be feel sad for Generic_Name, so the option for Generic_Name was that he was need start one more time all the College or he can paid extra money for retake the final test, but was a lot of money, so he decided that he was taking one more time all the College, but he do not see for support of his family, finally Generic_Name told to Generic_Name's family what happens with Generic_Name and why he still do not graduate from College, and Generic_Name's family talk with Generic_Name and he tells the true and his family tell him that why he do not see for support in his family. This example is exactly the explain for why the support of your family is very important, the family is the first group of people that we need to tells them always the true and they will have a excellent opinion about what you asking them.

In conclusion, loss enthusiasm when you are failure it is not a good idea because can be a successful person, you need believe in yourself, and you need support of your family. And always think about what are the things that you are complete or for what you need this goals. Also, think about that if you failure you need keep going and never give up because if you feel that you can not do anything all your life may be your will think that you not are a good person in something that you have in mind. Finally think about all the good things have a successful person and how you can do like a successful person what you need to do or what materials you need for be a successful person. ",2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
7658C61156C7,"According to the Generic_School, that believe that 70% high school students change their mind about what career they want to do after high school. I believe that high schools should never let students choose specific courses because, some of students don't even have in mind what they're trying to do after high school, another reason is that they're way too young to choose something that is going to affect your whole life, my last reason is that students may change their mind and choose another course and the school is not going to let them choose another course.

High school students change their mind all the time we may want to be a doctor today and tomorrow we want to be a barber or wanna go to the army, for example my best friend go to a school like that you have to choose some specific courses so when you get graduate you don't be confused about what you going do in college and he told me that he's trying go to a different school because that school doesn't let him change his courses because he was trying be a firefighter but now he change his mind and want to a doctor.

We high school students are way to young to choose some specific courses for our careers I believe they should make a conference and discuss all that with our parents.

My final reason is because students not really sure about what are we trying do in my opinion they should let us do that on the student's senior year because, on their senior year students have a clear mind set of what they going to do after students graduate, like my other friend that go to Generic_School now he's a senior and he's going to be doctor so the school just want him to take the nurse and biology class.

In conclusion, I believe that school should never let students choose their classes or courses, even though it would be nice if you want to be a doctor for example the school should force you to take doctor's relate classes so you can get use to do things that doctors does.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
6867A6767D25,"An enjoyable educational activity is Avid for anyone that has a dream they want to achieve. The first reason why

I say this is because this activity is not only to help you become a better person but also to encourage you to go to college . Secondly They give you tutorials not only to see where your at but to help you improve in any class . In addition you also get the opportunity to go on beautiful fun field trips. Lastly Its like saying you have another family no matter where you go.

In Avid you learn to become a responsible and hard working person in a way that you have a binder check every week to stay organized. Its like another class but in Avid we all have a dream that we all want to achieve in which we know we have to keep trying and there's no giving up in till we accomplish it. College is something not everyone is looking forward to as a teenager but some of us are, but if we start hanging around with the bad types of people it can drag us to the deepest part of an ocean in other words theres no coming back up to where you use to be. Not saying you should'nt be friends with that type of people I mean you can but in my perspective don't get involved as much as your other friends is.

Secondly tutorials are a big part of Avid it shows your teachers and peers around you how much you know and how strong you are and the effort you but into a tutorials to get in front of the group and explain what you are having problems with but also helps you learn from your peers and its like sharing the brain cells. Tutorials in other words shows your personality in a way when your not a shy person to go in front of your group and talk some people don't like that they like keeping them self in a inner circle talking less but listening to the tutorials.

In addition you get field trips which most middle schools or high schools students don't have that opportunity you get to visit colleges and learn about them it helps you know more about colleges and also having fun by walking around with a person guiding you to where you should go plus you get to meet knew people once your there. It's just a very cool opportunity you have to be able to do things not all students are allowed to do. One of the most funnest and amazing things the Avid activity has is we do fundraisers to raise money to go to King's Dominion and once your there you well be like I've earned this because for example your working hard and your not doing nothing fun like whats gonna make you keep doing that like even is you wanted to be someone in life your gonna work as hard as you can without looking down because you have something that's giving you the support and keeping you strong. In my point of view I'm working hard and something that encourages me to do better is my niece. The Avid activity is basically kinda the same you work hard doing tutorials and making coneal notes and at the end of the year you get to go and have fun with friends and ride roller coasters its just a really fun thing to do.

Avid for me and any other students I think would agree Avid is a family we do something everyone agrees and everyone has fun with it to no one talks bad about anyone and even thought we all come from different places around the world no one is mean to one another we all stay together we all learn the something if one the Avid students want to give up we make sure they don't because we're a family and something we always say when we're down is ''dream, believe, achieve ''. This activity helps you and school but also knowing your making your self proud but also you're parents and family .

In conclusion the reason why I think this activity is enjoyable is because your getting to meet knew people and you never know you would find you own best friend there. You get to do cool activities and join programs. Also its like a family so if you have a family that doesnt really care about you Avid can cover that in a way you can be your self and you don't have to pretend to be anyone else. Its just a big opportunity you get to be in it you should be a risk taker because once you are you never know it can lead you to a positive direction you can become a great person and become someone in life.                                                                                                   ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
10988CD16BF3,"The beach is the best place on earth!! A beach is a place by the ocean with sand. Most beach's have a board walk where people can walk up and down for fun. There are always stores along the board walk that have amazing things for people to take back home. One place I would love to visit is Virginia Beach because the wonderful water. I would spend all day on the beach and most of the night on the amazing board walk.

When I would spend the day on the beach I would ride the big waves on my stomach even tho it hurts but its still fun. Also, I would go boggy boarding because its hard to stay on if you don't time when to jump on the wave right, I would usually bring my own board from home but the waves are so strong mine would brake and I would always have to buy a new one over there. My all time favorite thing to do is play on the sand when I to tired of being in the water for too long. I would usually build a long and tall sand castle then run throw it and get my mom mad because I just got sand all over her. Then my dad would dig a big whole in the sand then put me in it while my brother holding me down my dad would cover me with sand so that just my head would sick out, they would usually leave me in there for about 20 minutes or so

With this in mind, at night I would love going on the board walk and explore all the cool places. Most night there would be a band playing outside next to a Sonic fast food outdoor restraint and they would have a game where people can win two free meals if you guess how many Jolly ranchers are in the jar. Then me and my dad would rent bikes and ride all around the board walk for like an hour or so to see everything that is there. Once it hits like 10:30 my brother, sister, and I would go on the sand and find cool stuff on the ground with flash lights then we would all sit down, listen to music and talk for about two hours. At like 12:00 we would go back to the hotel and while my mom and dad sleep we would sneak out and go eat out at the 24/7 all you can eat restraint.

With all these fun ideas, I would love to visit Virgina Beach and have a great time with the family. Going on the beach for th day and the borad walk at night is the best thing to do.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
9BAD2A3A7619,"Using the checklist is important because if you think something is done incorrectly, you can see on the checklist and go over the checklist for writers. If you see something that you might have done wrong, you'll know the mistake that you did. But if you refuse to check the list for writers, you might not know what you did wrong, and you might make the same mistake over and over again. Making sure you have everything correctly, can help you in the future and you will learn a few skills that you might have not known about. Not everything has to be done perfectly, you could make a few mistakes and you could be fine with it. Some people like everything to be done perfectly well and done correctly, learning a few skills can make you have better achievement than others. Other's may not want everything be done well and say ""eh, good enough."" or say ""well, thats close enough.""

Everyone has different opinions and different thoughts. Most people are too lazy and don't want to check the checklist for writers, or just want it to be over, so they don't check and get things done incorrectly. Checklist for writers has everything a writer might need, like seeing if you have done your grammar correctly or if you use sentences in a great term, and use punctuation correctly.

Those few skills and make you a better writer and make you successful, editing is one the checklist for writers. Editing is important because you edit things and make it better by making it amusing or interesting. Editing something can be fun because you can get to add things, have plenty of more ideas. One of the important things besides using good grammar and spelling is making your message clear. People can get confused because they don't know what kind of message you're trying to give. People can misunderstand your message and you might get embarrassed because they couldnt understand your message. Thats why you need, well you don't need to, but its better if you do check and see if your message is done well.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
FA078892658B,"It is true that keeping teenagers out of trouble is important for many reasons. If regulations that require teenagers to be off the streets after 10 pm are adopted then they will help teenagers academically, socially, medically and economically.

The first reasons that proves that these curfews will help teenagers and keep them out of trouble is that if teenagers are not allowed to be on the streets in the middle of the night , then they will get more sleep and will learn more efficiently when they are school. For example, if a teenager is not allowed to be on the street during the middle of the night, then that individual will get a good night of sleep and will be able to stay awake during classes. Also, if this regulations are are adopted, then they will require teenagers to stay at home longer, which will help them because they will have more time to work on their homework and if they do their homework then they will improve their grades. Furthermore, these curfews will help teenagers improve their learning skills and will also help them rest more and get their grades up.

The second reason that shows why these curfews must be adopted is the one that will allow teenagers to socialize better. For example, if teenagers are in the streets in the middle of the night, then people will not want to be close to them because they might think that they are bad people and that they are probably involved in gangs, so they will be scared of them. Many people will agree that it is better if teenagers stay at their houses during night hours because if they stay at their homes doing good things, then they will make more friend, socialize and communicate better with people because no one will be afraid of them and no one will think that they are involved in some criminal group. So, if teenagers keep themselves out of the street during the night, then they will be able to make friends, communicate better and basically socialize in a better way in which no one will try to avoid them.

The third reason that proves that these curfews must be adopted is the medical reason. If teenagers are in the streets during the night, then they have the possibility of getting in fight and ending up with injuries. For example if a teenager is out during late night hours, then others might think that he or she is there because he's a bad person and then they might get into a fight in which someone could get hurt and end up in the hospital. These curfews will prevent teenagers from getting into fights and from having to go to the hospital when they can just stay at home and be safe.

The last reason that will keep teenagers out of trouble and will help them is the economic reason. For example, if a teenager wants to be out in the middle of the night, then that individual can find himself or herself a job that will allow him or her to work during night hours, keep him or her out of the streets and help him or her economically. Economically means that the person will be working, earning money and also staying out of his or her house during late night hours. Teenagers can improve themselves economically if they spend their time working instead of spending it in the street doing things that will not help them in anyway. Finally, by working and improving their economy teenagers will be able to save some money for their own future and have money available for emergencies that can occur throughout their lives.

Furthermore, it is better that these curfews are adopted for the security of teenagers. Also because these regulations will help teens improve themselves economically by keeping them out of the streets and motivating them to find a job if they want to be out of their house during late night hours, they will also help them socially because people will not be avoiding them if they are not seen in the street, medically because they will prevent them from getting into fights and having to go to the hospital and finally academically because teenagers will not be wasting time on the streets and they will have more time to do their homework and improve their grades at school. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
0B00BC4CBABC,"So if it has come to a point that you don't have to make decisions on your own, even if you have what ever it takes to rule the whole nations, what would you do?. Nothing?, or run away to where you can make your own plans?. NO!. I strongly agree that, people should make decisions on their own.

Making decisions on your own can make you stronger. For example, when i realize i was failing my science class. I took a decision on my own by telling myself; i need to pass this class for the rest of the quarter. And i'm doing great now because i put in my mind with all my strength, focused and i'm doing more than amazing. If someone gave me that decision to pass that class, i wouldn't be able to, because i haven't made my mind up to that and maybe i don't or not into that class.

Secondly, you know your challenges to your decision that you make by yourself. For instance, i tried out this year for the school soccer team. I knew it was only 2 option: either you make it or you get cut out. So, me knowing that made me work harder when i get on the pitch. I get pains in my legs when i get home but i also know that, i have do it again tomorrow so it makes me do extra work home so that i won't be ill but be in shape for the next day.

Lastly, sometimes we make a bad decision which help us learn. To prove this, 3 weeks ago, my mom ask me to clean her bathroom for her, also i had a club to attend. Because i knew going to club will be fun and meeting new friends so, i told my mom i'm going to the club instead, and i will clean the bathroom the next day. And so, i went to the party. A friend of mine was a drug dealer: i didn't know, and he was wanted my the police. He came to the same party and we were sharing the same table. We were drinking, chatting, eating and having fun. All of a sudden, we saw 3 police men that came to arrest my friend but because we were sitting together; we were all arrested because him. If i choose to clean the bathroom this would have not happen to me. The lesson that i learned is that; i don't need to follow my decision every time, and also know who hang around with.

As a results, making decisions on our own can make us strong and focused, know our challenges and also learn. If all this ability only get reviewed when we make decisions on our own, why should we seek for guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?. Let's people take decisions and do stuff with their own mind set.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E3CCA8712549,"Some schools have a program that have older students and younger students. The older students help the younger students with activities or homework. But how will this program help both the older and younger students? Well, I will be telling you three things how this program is helpful for the older students and younger students.

First thing is, the younger students will want some help from the older students because they know more than the younger students and it would be a great help. If this program is still going than more and more students will start joining in and they can start forming groups and they can each work on something different.

secondly, this program can be very helpful by teaching students that are getting poor grades or poor scores on their test they're getting. Students can even donate binders,books,folders,crayons,pencils,pens,paper,etc. Even the students themselves can start their own fundraiser by making food and can raise money.

lastly, This whole program can be very useful for the community and helpful for the students. This is why this program is so helpful and important for us student and adults

In conclusion the older students help the younger students with activities homework/classwork. And that this program is really important to us.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
B279118BA2EC,"introduction, My interests work and i want to visit is about food because i think is good work and i want to work in this work and you lear many thing and i think many student like this work and you lear to cook and you cook for you work or for you family or when your family have party. Good work,good food in the school for student and you lear to cook and after when you family have a party you cook for them and i think you family is happy with that. when you work you have money for you and you family. when you work you no have time for you family and you miss they.

first,when you work you lost the class because you has tried. when you work you no have many time for you family and for your friend i want to work because i want to learn about food i like cook and i cook in my home but, i want to learn more. for example, when you no go to school you los the test. second,when you lear cook you work school kitchen and i think you cook good food for school. when the work like you are happy but when the work not like you are sad. i want to visit because i want to see who do the food and i learn introduction, when you work you work only ten because you have school and the school is important for your life you need to go the school because the school help you in the future. when you select the work you has to select the work do you like because when you work in a place not like you not good with yourself.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
2EA9DA7AAD2C,"Thomas Jefferson said ""determine never to be idle."" What he means is that people should not just sit there and do nothing for their whole life because it won't help them accomplish their goals. Some people say doing something serves a purpose. Others say that inactivity also serves a purpose. Doing nothing at all is a bad choice. The best option to serve a purpose is to actually do something by helping others and the world then staying idle and not doing anything to help others.

First, the reason why Thomas Jefferson said that people should never be idle is because he wants to change their lives forever. Another reason why people should take this advantage is that if people don't do any activities in their life, then they won't be able to achieve their goals in the future. Most people will say this, ""doing something serves a purpose because it could help other people get their work done."" It's good to start doing activities at a younger age because they will be able to experience it and get used to it later on. Also, doing activities can help them gain more respect and they could get famous. It could be too late to start doing activities when they are older, but people just have to think of what they are going to do to fix it.

Next, most people will say that they don't know what activity they should do. For example, i didn't want to do any activites like other people did so i went and did karate for 4 years. A year later I started to swim every Saturday and eventually I have been getting better. After that I started to go to the gym from Monday through Thursday every single week. It's not too late to start an activity at a younger age, but for an older age it could be. The people just got to work hard if they want to achieve their goal, but the only way they could do it is if they can believe that they can do this.

In addition, other people think that not doing any activity serves a purpose. They say that because they think their parents do most of the work so they don't have to do any of it. Also, there are people who are just lazy and don't care about their life. Others think that doing activities doesn't really achieve their goal in the future. Most people just don't know what they want to do in life.

Lastly, Thomas Jefferson doesn't want people to be idle for their whole life because he wants to help them do activities that they think its interesting. Another reason why people should take an advantage of this, so when they are young, they will understand of what is gonna happen in their future, and then as they get older, they will have full potential by doing it. Also, it will help them and other people get the job done. They will not have to struggle in their future. The thing about activities is to never give up, even if they mess up its ok, they just need to practice and practice nonstop.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
F87594F095B6,"The creation of a after school homework club will be a horrible idea because of students not going to it, the homework will not be challenging, and making lazy students more lazier.

In my opinion, if the school created a after school homework club, nobody will come. Students can be lazy and do not want to do their homework. There are many other ways to help students improve in their behavior and achievement.

Homework is just a way to reinforce the main study. If the Principal decides to establish this ""Club,"" it will make the homework easier. Homework is to reinforce the main idea of studies, if they make it easier, then what will be the point of homework.

A homework club will be a disaster; the students will be lazier than before! not to mention that the school will not use any more homework for it has become useless to reinforce subjects.

In conclusion, Establishing a after school homework club will be a disaster, with homework not being able to reinforce the students with subjects, making the students lazier, and the idea that no one will go there.",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
88402C999412,I agree some times the truth hurts but I mean the were being honesty with you. Some time u dont have to be honest with them but it's some times good tell them what they doing wrong. If u be honest with one and each other they would be honest with you and you guys will have better friendship with each other. it's good to be honest with your parents because if your in trouble they can help you solve the help if something is happening in school. If your not honest with people they won't trust you ever again they will think that you are a person that lies. I you think about it if you did something bad and don't be honest you will get cought for what you did and it would go how you want it to so it batter if you be honest and truthful but things because if your not it wont go your way. But sometimes being honest with people hurts and some people don't want to hurt them but you just have to because if you don't they will get there hopes up and when your honest with them there going to say thank you and that's when they are going to think to them self and say this is what i should of done from the bringing and this the people i want in my life. So some time you just got to be honest with them and they want you in there if it's okay because at lest they were being honest with and you just move on in life. Honesty is good sometimes i agree but then disagree at the sometime so base I'm trying to say that honest it's good sometimes and sometimes it's not but I rather have honest people in my life because they are telling me the truth and they didn't tell me the truth later on I would get hurt by them and I hate getting hurt by people so I rather them telling me the truth right there when i'm talking to them then founding out by other people and getting hurt and for them not being honest with you from the bringing and putting your self down after you find out. I just feel that honest it's just a good thing because it peras for the real life when you get older and have a job and a family because then your ready for all of what is going to come to you in life sometimes life is not fair to other people and you just got to be ready for it in life.,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
E0553AEE109E,"Most students enjoy having a long summer vacation, but others prefer it not to be so long. Schools usually do three months for a summer break, but people argue that there should only be a month of summer break. Also have a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall. I do not think this is a good idea. Even though, when it is time to come back to school students will have forgotten everything, it is nice to have a long summer break because people go on vacation a lot, students can have an opportunity to work full time, and reduces stress for students.

Educators should have a long summer break because people go on vacation a lot to see long distance relatives, or to just spend some quality time with family and have fun. For example, if you live in Virginia it will be a long car ride to make it to Florida or any other place. You will need a long break to plan your trip and have enough time to stay at any place you will go. Other people do not necesarily go on trips to just see family maybe it is a gift or a tradition that families have. Having time is the most important thing when it comes to going on a vacation.

Another reason why it is a necesity for students to have a long summer break is because most students will get to work full time and make more money of their own. Most parents like their child to learn how real life is and what struggles you have to got through to get the things you want. Being a teenager will make you want more things it is the age you will start to drive and experience new things. For example, you will get to the age of driving and you will ask your parents for a car. You will need to earn some money to help your parents out they might give you an estimate amount of how much they can give you, but if that is not enough for you then you need to find a job to get to where you want to be at. If you have a part time job you will eventually get to where you want to be, but it will take longer that is why having a full time job will be easier to get there. To have a full time job it means summer break needs to be longer.

Finally, my last reason why summer should be long for students is because it reduces stress for students. Being in school all year is hard for most students because sometimes is not just school what you have to deal with it can be things going on at home. Having to deal with both is difficult, so it is nice to have a long summer break to get a break from things. For example, if you keep failing tests it might be because you can not manage to study at home. After failing tests, having bad grades, your parents yelling at you for it, pressuring you to do better, and having other things to deal with that will make you have stress. It is important for students to be able to have a long summer break so they can get their minds off in a lot things and have less stress.

Overall, having a long summer break means people will run out of things to do there should still be a long break because people go on vacations a lot, students can have an opportunity to work full time, and it reduces stress for students. A long summer break means more fun and less stress. Most schools have three months of a break and people are used to having a three month long summer break, so there will be a lot of arguments into why change it now. It is best to just keep it the way it has always been. Having long summer breaks also results in a lot of solutions for people. ",5.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5
92FFB3530304,"I'm disagree with this statement, that the first impression is impossible to change, because, I have seen a lot of people who doesn't had a positive impression at first, but later they completely changed. They become to change themselves from what they were before, tried to forgot about the negative impressions they had before.

if you Have a negative impression at first, and you want to change it, it will be hard, but it is not impossible, if you really want to change it. Everything that you have control of them, and you want to change them, you can do so. It well be hard, but not impossible. First impression can also have a large effect in someone's life, if it is a positive impression it can lead to the success, they want to have, but having a negative impression will not only take away your success, but it will also keep you down in your society, you will not have the respect, that you want have in your society. For example; if a boy in a place or society have a negative impression, other people who live in there will not let their children s to play with him, or to go to school together, or even their parents will try to change their children s classes if they know that they are in the same class, because they don't want their children to be like him, or to have a negative impression that he has. As the boy grows up, and recognize that he should change the negative impression that he had at first, which kept him away from his friends or classmates. He will try to change it to positive impression, which will be hard and for him it will be a strange thing, because he never tried this before, but, as he continues he will realize that, how much he was bad with that negative impression, and how much he was hurt, by that negative impression. Having a negative impression at first, and changing it will take much time, but changing this will help you to reach where you want, it will help you to achieve your goals, and it will help you to find a good friends, everyone will try to be your friend, and wants to have a good relationship with you, so you not only help yourself, but you will also help your friends to reach their success or to achieve their goals. Changing the first impression is not impossible for those who have a strong trust on theirselves, and really want to change this, especially, if this impression is negative, because he knows or soon he will know that this can be very bad for him, and can keep him down in school, society, or in the place they live. As, he knows that how much a negative impression will hurt them, they will try to change it. It is not going to be easy, but that doesn't mean that it will be impossible. In the process of changing this impression they will also learn a lot of new about how much will a positive impression good for them what can a positive impression do for them. They will know that having a positive impression is not in everyone's luck, those who have a positive impression, on their society, school or etc will have a successful future. Most of the peoples want to change their first impression, because they haven't seen any positive result from it; they want to change it for a good future. Those who have negative impression can't reach their success, because having a negative impression is like a wall between you, and your success, that will prevent from you achieving your success. First impression is like the first step toward your goals, so if you have a negative impression it will be almost impossible for you to get there, because having this impression can also effect your lessons, but if you have a positive impression it will be much easier to get there, because you can have more success in your lessons. For most of the people changing their first impression looking impossible, because they are never going to try it, they never want to experience a new thing, or maybe most of them think that this is not that important, but, I think that first impression is also very important in life. It can bring a lot of changes on you it can change you future, your position in a place.

I think that those who want to change their first impression should know that, this will not be easy, but if they try, and keep this in mind, that if they bring this change in their life they actually achieve a very big success. Changing this show them that everything that they want to change in their life is up to them, however, it will not be easy to do that, but that doesn't mean that it is impossible. Everything in your life is in your control, and you are the only person that can change what ever you want to change in your life, it just depends on you, that you are going to handle the situation. If a thing come to your life, and you know that, it will have a negative impression on your life try to keep them away, because they can make problems for, they can pretend you from having a good future, they will try to destroy you, so you are the only person who can keep all these things away. For most of the peoples it will be hard to forgot about their first impression, because they have a good knowledge with that, and they think it is good even if it is a negative impression. This kind of people will have a hard time to forgot their first impression. When we try to find new friends we always try to find about their impressions in our life; how can they help us to solve our problems, or how can they help us to achieve our goals. Having friends with positive impression in life will help you to take over your problems easily, but if you have friends with negative impressions, they can put their own negative impressions on you too, they will make think like a loser, because they don't want to reach your success.

In my idea those who want to change their first impression, first they have to think why they want to change it, what negative result they have seen with this impression, after they reached the position to change their first impression, they should start working for. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
F2387DA187A4,"Positive attitude is the key to a successful and happy life. People who has positive attitude will act more with integrity and honesty. They will respect the dignity of others. They will take responsibility for your actions and their consequences. In order to gain self-respect and confidence people needs to have a positive attitude. 3/5 people in the world has a positive attitude. It has been proved that people who has a positive attitude has the highest acceptance rate in a community, then the people who do not have a positive attitude. However its true that people who has a positive attitude are more happy and it has an important impact on the society due to their daily life activities. They will show empathy, compassion,and care towards the needs and feelings of others. People who has a positive attitude will always think creatively and find different ways to solve their problem. it consider many perspectives and how their solution will impact others in so many different ways.

As we all know people who has a positive attitudes are more respectful people among the people in a community. They still need more attention and encouragement for their good deeds and being a rule model for kids. People who has a positive attitude will impact the society in good terms. for example most of the people who has a positive attitude are more knowledgeable, They will help others in their problems, they will seek ideas, information, and share their personal experiences just to help others in their hard times and show them the right way. People who has positive attitude are open minded and so as creative. If you want to bring changes in your life you have to hangout and make more friends who has positive attitude. People who has positive attitude are intelligent and smart, they have a solution for every problem, they will act the same, they will have the same energy, they will not give up easily. like they said welcome mistakes as a way to learn. celebrate when you achieve something. Think of ways to improve everything you do in your life.

In order to gain some experiences and life lessons. People needs to spend more time with people who has positive attitudes. People with positive attitudes are so caring, balanced, and have a lot of experiences from life. which it includes as a good experiences and bad experiences. However these experiences are so helpful for the people who want to change their bad attitude to positive attitude. If they want to change for the better version of themselves, They have to talk to someone who has a positive attitude and stuck to the process and let go of off their bad habits. Therefore we need more people who has positive attitude and at the same amount of time they can help others to change for the better version of themselves. People with positive attitude are symbols to kids and for the upcoming generation. Moreover people with the positive attitude are all this world needs and we have to give them their credits and salute to them.

lastly, people with positive attitude have self-confident, and reflective views. society will introduce them as a rule model, their good deeds and positive attitudes will encourage kids to call them, their real life heroes. People with positive attitude are so down to earth and so kind hearten people. We have to give them the respect that they deserved and knows their value, that how important they are and they can be. People with positive attitude will commit everything, just to bring a good change in your life, and to see you do good and be a successful person in your life. People with positive attitude are people who will not let you down, they will not break their promises, and they will not lose your trust. For example: sometimes people will lose themselves in world with so many people, at the same they can find themselves with the right person who can guide them to the right path in a lost world. To help them get through their hard times and hold their hand and guide them to the right path, where they can work on themselves and build up what they have lost in the past. They can take the second chance and move forward to a successful life.

To be continued, People needs to have a positive attitude in order to graduate from High School, College, and Universities. A lot of people are smart, they have money, but they are lacking on having a positive attitude. It cause them a lot of family problems, problems in public, and in school. However its not good for their life. Generally, they needs to bring changes in their attitude if they want to do good in life and be a successful person.

To conclude, it is one of the most valuable factors, that everyone needs to know about it and share it with others. Positive attitude is the key to successful,self respect, and self-confident. people who has positive attitude are the most honest, trustworthy and they are so down to earth people. Positive attitude can help people to rebuild their identities and to stay focus on daily activities.                                                          ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
BBB9D66F934C,"So i think it we should do the four day school week here at Generic_School.

Because here are one advantage and one disadvantage. The one advantage is that the student will get a three day week end. And then here is a another advantage is that the student would have enough time to finish their homework and project. And then for the one disadvantage is that the student would have a longer school day because they are adding the eight hour that we are going to miss for Friday school day. they would be dividing that eight hour of school for the four day of school that we are going to have. and then here is a another disadvantage like would the student who play sport have short practice because of this like if we do in real life would that actually happen.

So here is my first reason why it is a good reason for this to happen because it would save the school a bunch of money on electric bill. And then here is another good reason that we should do this is that it would help the teacher teach to student understand the material a little bit better. And then here is second reason why it is a bad reason to do this and school like this will give student who play sport a short time to do homework at home because they have school then after school they have practice

So in conclusion we should try this for a month and then after that month we can see if we should keep this thing going on for the rest of the school year. like we can ask the student if they want it to stay. Or we can back the regular secudule like we go the regular time that we get school and then we go back to the five day school week. like in my opinion we should try this out and see how this turn out like would most of the student like this or would most of them hate like i think this is going to be like a 50 50

chance of this working and not working. like i feel like most of the student would like and the rest of student hating this because the extending hour of the school day but the student who are going to love this is because of the three day weekend and then for the teacher they all would love this idea for the school year",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
CA8DAD4BCC7A,"Should students graduate earlier from high school? Graduation earlier have been the choice that a lot of students on make on their lives. They may feel over-confident when they are clear about what are their accomplishments and the things that they have to do to reach it. It is not that easy as it sounds because they need to prepared themselves and notify that it will be difficult to reach their goals. However at the end they will see that was for a good and valuable things for their lives. They might will need to work hard and feel like to exceed themselves. It is good idea to graduate earlier because students will have the opportunity to find a job after they graduate and earn money then later they can start going college, they will be more productive in society, and they will develop their skills and knowledge.

Students that graduate earlier need to have enthusiasm and know that they will have a more difficult life and realize that they will have more responsibilities and duties in society, when they are out of school they should take that as an advantage to use their time wisely and help themselves by trying to find a job and earn some money; if they are taking the decision to go to college in few years. It is hard to find a job when the time pass and they did not practice all the things that they learn in the past and then realize that they should do sometime productive same as when they were in high school before they graduate.

In addition they will be helping their parents same as they did it when they were in school, by supporting and care about of them, they will be contributing in home and society. Also, they will have others accomplishments that they might want to reach it and celebrate with their families and make them feel proud and happy of their goals. Understanding that all the things that they did are for have good benefits and others people will used as good thing to defend or help themselves.

Finally, all students have the same capacity to show up and do the right things, after they graduate they have the opportunity to find a job and demonstrate how the develop their skills and knowledge. Staying positive and knowing that they can do great and specials things will make them feel proud of their works and then they will prove that they can do amazing things like everybody does. Providing high qualities of themselves in a workplace can help them to know and find new information about what things are happening in the world that round them.

Students should be thinking what they want do in their future or after high school since when they are growing up because that will help them to clear their minds and thoughts. Working hard and doing it with enthusiasm that is how they will be success in their future. Earning money by working honestly later that will be a big step to start a career in college, helping people and communities will make them feel more productive and helping their attitudes to stay confident, brave, and strong all the time with themselves,demonstrating their abilities and capacities is how they will be success in their futures lives.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
DCCA609D1212,"Author Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, ""Success isn't around the corner. You'll have to work as hard as you can until you reached your limits. Always trying new things will make you grow."" Life can be great, if you know how to make the best out of it. Although, it may seem that trying is hard and it's a waste of time, it is actually true that trying can make you achieve your goals.

Trying my hardest showed me who I really am. I accomplished some of my goals, but I always try to be inspired. This helped me get through my problems. None of my goals have been easy, they're hard, but that doesn't stop me. My plan is to be successful in life and not to be a failure. Sometimes I loose and sometimes I win.

I used to be 275 pounds, I wasn't happy with the way I looked. I also experience random pain in my heart. My body was telling me to start loosing weight. I really wanted to go and loose all of my weight, but my lazy side said to just sit in the couch and play video games all day. I had to get my life together and started going to the gym, the following day. Day by day, I started to feel something different. I felt more energetic and strong. I ate healthy and those heart pains were gone. My parents were always there for me to encourage me. I also wanted to be an example to my little brother that anything is possible, as long as you try.

I lost 58 pounds to be exact. I feel lighter than ever. I went beyond my limits to accomplish my goal. All hard work always rewards you as it did for me. My reward was having cheat days. I always love cheat days because you can forget about your diet for a day and eat whatever you want. Cheat days are the best to have, but not all the time. You can loose track and fall.

Accomplishments are hard to achieve, but it's a lot of fun to do them. They can make you a better person and makes your life so much easier. As long as you try your best, you can do anything. My grandpa told me that trying is your best buddy. It can make you push yourself and it can take you places you've never seen in your life. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
685ABA004ADB,"Many people believe that they should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter.

Other people believe that they should make their own decisions.

It is good for people who make their own decision, so that way they learn from their own mistakes, they need to learn how to get up whenever they feel in trouble. People who make their own decisions they know the consequences, but they know how to grow up as a person, and beat up any problem that they have. Sometimes, it is good to ask someone for advices because older people seems to have more experience in some topics.

First, people who made mistakes in life, they need to learn how to not made that mistake again.

If someone is there just telling people what to do and what not to do, people will never learn how to not made that mistake again.

Sometimes, it is good to ask someone for some help, but they do not have to tell them exactly what do.

If someone need help in something, they need to paid close attention, and see how is that person doing something.

Due to the fact that many people made mistakes, they have to learn how to do decisions by themselves.

Second, people who has been guided by their parents, but their parents are not with for them. Since their parents are not with them, and there is difficult time where some people will need the help of their parent, but because they was use to it, that their parents do everything for them, they will never know what to do.

Because of that, people will never know how to get up and do everything by themselves.

Sometimes, it is easier just to ask someone how to do something, but sadly one day they will be in the same situation, and they will never know how solve it.

Third, people who make their own decisions in life they already know the consequences, but they know how to beat them and grow up as a person.

Sometimes, people do no like to make their own decisions because they are scare to the consequences, but that is a way to grow up as a person. Also, that is how people are a better someone in the future by making their own decisions.

If people are afraid to the consequences of their own decision so that mean that they are not grow up.

In conclusion, people who made mistakes in life, they will learn from those mistakes.

People learn how to not make mistakes by making mistakes, but if people had never made a mistake in their life so that mean that their is someone who guide them through everything in life.

People are not perfect, they learn from their own decisions.

Also, people who is use to be guide by a parent, they do not know how get up whenever they are in a difficult time.

Parents will never be beside people to hold their hands all the time, and that is why people have to learn how to get up.

People who make their own decisions they already know that there are consequences, but they know how beat them, and grow up as a person, and be a better someone.

Because of all this, people believe that they need to make their owns decisions.

It is okay to ask for some help, but not with everything.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
E11139259D4E,"Students have enough hours of school already! I strongly disagree about the school board adding more hours to school every day. I'm not telling you this just because I'm a student, I'm telling you this because It doesn't just affect me, It affects other students in many ways too! This could bring students really bad behaviors, because they get tired of being in the same place for a long period of time. This could bring students grades down too, because students do not work the same when they are tired. If they added more hours to school, students wouldn't have time to do their homework or to study for quizzes and tests.

This idea of adding hours to school does not just affect students, it brings problems to the teachers and the school. Teachers have families and some of them have children of their own, this wouldn't let teachers to go home and pass time with their family. Another problem I see in this It's that some students have appointments, Just like me !

Sometimes I have to go to my orthodontist, and my appointments are always in the morning, I have to go there every month. I always miss two or three classes, and when I get there I have A bunch of work that I missed! If they din't add those hours to school I could ask my orthodontist to do my appointments in the afternoon. Sometimes students get sick, and if they miss one day of school they would have to do more work than the usual. This affects the school in many ways too! The school would have to pay more, because they would have to give the students more food than the usual. They would have to waste more money in paper, bathroom supplies and they would have to give the student a new agenda with more bathroom passes in it. the school would have to manage more conflicts and fights between the students. If they added one and a half hours to school they would create more car crashes and accidents in the roads, because the students would get out of school at the same time that elementary school students do, and then there would be a lot of school buses.

Students wake up pretty early, at least that's what I do. If the school added more hours they would get more than tired, the student wouldn't even learn the lessons or the teacher wouldn't even teach the lessons right. As you can see I listed many ways that adding hours to school affects students,teachers and the school. I think the school board should rethink this new idea they came up with. i think that they should hear other students points of view. I think I'm not the only student that thinks that this is not a good idea because it affects everyone. And some other students think different from others.

In conclusion I think that the school board shouldn't add more hours of school because of the different consequences it gives to the students, teachers and the school. And it not just gets the students tired but they wouldn't learn the subjects like they normally do in class. Teachers are affected by this decision too, because they get more tired and they get mad at students easier. This could create big conflicts between people in school and it could bring the school more problems than the usual, like more fights and they would have to give students more breaks. So please School board, rethink this idea you came up with and hear other peoples points of view!!!.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
63AB7F39EBC6,"I disagree , because it's true the firts impression in a personis the most important when knowing a other's.

As humans depends of other's for the survivor;our's characteristics are for genetic of it's way. For this to treat the way of to attach in a group of people.

some people thinking that no it's neccesary because,no we depends of the opinion of he people or the world,for the opponent each person have the different way of interact ,each person have an different way of think,personality,character,and the way of to act. The stereotype's of the society of base in the system of that eachperson of the world is different not all aresame and that each individual have are world,the place were they it felling better and comfortable. Respect the opinion and the intimacy of the people.

In exchange of other people have an idea different...in a new job,in the university,and place's important's of any place;we obligation of the respectful and amiability. The people have the capacity to be good and refined,the impression of the people duty of be always of the better.

A manager to the to contract a people have that to see the personality of are people for know that is the person the found for the place of work.

In my opinion,I believed that all having different way's of tobe. And depends of as to trat a the other's people...We are people that wrong,in a household where are teachen valuesy where are teachen that our's impression duty to be the most important ,but not impressing the first time is the better. Something we do it error's but learn a change and a be different,change the bad things that did. Can change;maybe no now but with the time and us way of thinking,we having the possible of do.

Generic_Name have a different personality,and character,I think that my character no it's the best for it reason I need change not a everyone know this part of me,but i know that my impression depend of my values and my decision of be better. In the society that I to found ,I know my impression not a all people to it to gratify but duty dependencyof be better and that my impression depend of me and not of the other people.

In conclusion , the impression and the actual society;it's important in different factor's: the job,the school and place where I found ,but duty understood that allare different's ans somethingwe do mistakes and something wea have bad day;s ans our's characters not are a good impression,but I can change ,are humans and to do mistakes but the better that can do as humans is accept us mistake and change.",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
B6B85CE5C8F5,"When it comes to trying to be someone, is it better to improvise or follow the script all the time?

Everyone needs to have their own individuality and be original instead of trying to be something else because that way you learn more about yourself. Also, you are acknowledging different methods about how to be better than yourself. And one of the most important things, you could make a good influence in someone else's life and teach him/her how to find their path in their own way. No matter what happens, you always have to follow yourself.

When you learn more about yourself it means that you do not just learn things that you already know about yourself, you also learn new things that you did not know about yourself. For example, one day you are going to the basement of your house which is really big and put some good music. While you are listening to your favorite songs from your playlist, you are dancing according to the tempo and doing the dancing moves that you usually do. After dancing for a long while, suddenly you let the music take control over you and you make a back flip without practicing it before. You are very surprised because you did something that you did not know you could do and after that, you keep practicing that move and perfectioning it and it comes out natural. That is how you learn more about yourself.

You are acknowledging different methods to be better than yourself. This means you will do whatever is right in order to become a better person. For example, Robert Downey Jr used to have a terrible life by consuming drugs and other things that got him in trouble with the law. He even went to court for all the messy things he did. After a long time taking bad decisions, he finally decided to make things better for the people who cares about him and specially for him. It took him over 5 years for him to get back on his feet; with his own effort and the support from his family and friends, he started to make a good difference for the world. Right now, Robert is one the best actors in Hollywood, he has an excellent life with his wife and kids on his side, and is a great influence for millions of people. That is how you acknowledge different methods to be better that yourself.

Some people say that you are copying someone else when you try to be yourself. However, they are wrong because you actually are listening to those tips that you have heard and following them under your own perspective. That way you are definitely writing your own script but at the same time, giving the deserved credit to the person who gave you those tips. For instance, when you are trying to get a girl that you met in a party but you have no idea of what to do in order to get her attention. You ask your friend for some advice to accomplish your goal so you do not go through a bad experience. He tells you what to do exactly and shows you with some women at the party and now you have some ideas of what you can do. So before you reach out to that girl, your friend tells you ""be yourself all the time"" and you get the courage to talk to her. After following those examples in your own way, the girl started to have deep feelings for you and everything worked out a lot well and make some influence to some of your friends who need that kind of help. That is how you follow your own script with your own terms.

In conclusion, it is very important that you have be yourself all the time because it shows that you do not need somebody in order to be somebody. You learn about yourself so you can get to know your own person more than you can know about an anime character. You acknowledge new ways to become better than yourself like if you were in a videogame, you are going to the next level slowly. You make a good influence by doing things as right as possible and you give people some benefits out of it. To be yourself you have to do what your gut tells you to do if you think it is going to give some benefits in some way.",3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
BFEE2D5C0FDC,"I am agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson to always keep tryaing to do best . My greatest acomplishment were to be student of the month in my school . I always try to be successful in my classes. Maybe best of the class but if you can trying yo can be one of then. Alson you can make a goal for the year to get an A on your Geometry classs. I always try to compete with my friends who can get the best note on my exam.

My cousin is the only one that gets the best grade at home. she study alots and always gets very good grade. I admire her because English is not her first lenguaje and her mom is so proud of her . One day I want to be like her so can my family feels proud of me.

The greates thing that i want to is graduate for that i have to pass my clases and exams .For that I have to pass my others SOL and others elective classes that I have this year. the most dificult class that I have next semester will be Earthscience but I will pass that class and the SOL and i feel like i can do it.

Finally this are resons why i am agree Ralph Waldo on constantly try to make you greatest acomplishment on his life .I want to do the same in my life too. This are some reasons why i was agree. Always Try and never give up that you always can do greatest acomplishments on your life you only have try hard and you will success.     ",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
92F6C1E71237,"This is a very good prompt to write about but i might have to agree on this becuase if you keep failing in life and sometimes you get bored of it you might have to change your mind and be success. Bacuse fialling in life is not that easy for same people. But sometimes people might disagrer it becuase if you fail you can't be successful in life, and if you are trying to get a job and you keep failing on what the boss is asking you to do you might not get the job. Even thought in school you can't keep failing.

I also agree with Churchill's satement becuase you can't just success in life without trying becuase life is evry hard to success in it. and if you wants to be success you really have to try in life, there's so many people in life that don't have job,place to sleep or food to eat becuase they did not success in life. Success also consists of going from failure to failure becuase sometimes in life you have to fail, no one in life have success from the day they were born.

My comclusion is that failure can leasd you to success.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
B76C582FA08B,"Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes. But are students really doing educational purposes? Should students really use their phones in their classrooms? Are students actually getting education? This is what I think about cell phones used in classes.

Most students get distracted by using their cell phones especially in class. I feel like every school should at least have laptops to give out for their students. It's more easier and less distracted. Because a lot of websites are blocked. Everyone gets distracted I know but thousand of teen are obsess with their phones. And if you're a teacher and let your student do their

""work"" in their cell phone, just know they might not be doing their ""work"" in their cell phones.

Some students might care more about their education then the things that's going on in life. Maybe not everyone feels the same, thinks the same, are the same. They might be capable to use their cellphones without getting distracted. Most of us can handle the distracting than others.

Most teachers actually let their students use their phones and don't really pay attention to their students. It might be our responsibility to be on track. But i feel like the teachers should at least stop us from getting distracted. Most students do get mad at teachers when the teachers stop us from using our devices. But do students know it for our own good.

When my parents take my phone away. I feel more free, relax, I feel good to be honest. I do get a bit mad at first. But then I think why they took it and how many time I lost. I feel like i'm back in reality and just leaving my moment god gave me. Honestly cell phones had ruined many peoples life's. Even toddlers these day all they do is come back from school and play on their parents cell phones or their losing sleep to watch videos .

I honestly don't think cell phones are healthy at all not even in education. Teachers shouldn't let their students use their phones at all. Only if it's in an emergency. Than that's when they should let them use it. But a real emergency. That's what I think about teachers letting their students use their cell phones during classes. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
22D02123C65D,"I agree with Churchill's statement about the role of failure ,because failure is a next step for success .The reasons why i agree with Churchill's statement is because ,without failure we may not know how to be thankful for it if we pass in the first place,failure shows us what did everyting went wrong and how to make it right for the next challenge we face ,faliure tell us or show us why are we doing it .For example ,most of the people fail in like every second, but there is no shame in failure because the more we fail the more we know .My father once told me that ""no matter how many times you fail it dosen't mean it's the end of the world"". Failure is a reason why our life is hard or unsuccessful ,but failure also shows us why are we doing this ?why do we want this or how hard do we have to try to be successful .Our brains get's bigger from failure and when i mean bigger i mean more details or more information. So i agree with Churchill's statement ,failure does do the important rule of the pursuit of success.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E83134C87EFA,"Let's be honest when a stranger smiles at you it makes your day 10 times better. Many people believes that if you have positive attitude in life you will success in life. I think that positive attitude is the key to be successful in life because if you show positive attitude to someone it will make your day better and theirs too, when you show negative attitude about something you always fail, and having negative attitude can also effect your mental health.

Although showing positive attitude can not solve someones problems, but it sure makes their day better, But if you show negative attitude to someone it will make their day worse. Having positive attitude can give you a lots of opportunity in life. and having positive attitude can also prevents you from failing in life.

Many people fail in life because they always show negative attitude, for example if you show positive attitude at work you will have coworkers and boss who appreciate your positive attitude. You will be successful because you are not worry, or stress about it. But if your show negative attitude about it you will lose the job and fail which can cause depression. Having negative attitude in life not only make you fail in life, but also make you not try it again because you are too scared to fail again which can be very effective one your mental health. although being positive does not solve all of your problems, but it will help your mental health.

Some teens in high school are always worried, depressed, and desperate because they always show negative attitude to teachers' and their friends'. Which effects their mental health. Having negative attitude can prevent you from having friends' and it can also prevents you from having good teachers' who help you in test. Which can cause you fail the class and not graduate high school. Which will impact on your health.

Overall, positive attitude is the key to be successful in life because it gives you a lots of opportunity in life. Which can make you successful in life. Having positive attitude can also cause you have coworkers and boss who appreciate your positive attitude. And although being positive does not solve all of your problems, but it will help your mental health. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
8FD83605AA61,"The imagination is a trait of the human with a fundamental function, this is due to the fact that imagination is one of the most important bases of knowledge, also the imagination is the inspiration of everything, therefore without imagination the human will not have knowledge.

The imagination is a fundamental function to every aspect of daily life. Could be job,family,school etc, every time the human is using his imagination to think about the steps it needs to perform activities, and the knowledge and skills it will use to complete a specific task. The imagination is a very important skill for life that the human uses for evolve, therefore the imagination is the reason why the humans had evolving for years and it has adopted to different circumstances of the daily life.

The imagination is always the first step of everything ideas,tasks,decisions everything, the imagination will always be the first model of every idea. To give a image every time when the human creates a object to complete a respective task is using his imagination to think about what people needs and how that object will complete the specific task to help somebody. Every idea it comes from the imagination, and then the human perform his skills and knowledge to create the idea.

Without the imagination the human will not have knowledge. The base of the knowledge is the imagination, the the imagination is the ability to the think the knowledge is all the different ideas that we think to perform any activity that the human want to perform. To give a image it will be useless if a human has skills in math,science,

etc, but it can use his respective skills to perform in a idea or task. Basically the imagination is the base of the creation.

The imagination is a fundamental skill for the daily life. That the humans uses it for his respective life for job,

school,family,etc. Is the ability to think and create ideas.                                            ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
9BF2607D4878,"The statement is ""the first impression is almost impossible to change"" which is a different feeling for everybody, but for me, I disagree. In fact, the first impression is really important and sometimes true, but I think the first impression does not define a person, an object or a situation. Having a first impression is a human reflex, like having an opinion or a judgment. We are doing it unconsciously.

The first impression is most of the time not real, you need to search deeper to make an opinion and when you really have an opinion, then, the first impression is not important anymore. For example, when you meet someone, your first impression might be that you think she is supercilious and even a little bit mean. Therefore when you really get to know her deeper then you will find that she just had a bad day and that she is nice and sociable. Sometimes it's the contrary, a person seems really nice but in reality she is not, so your first impression was wrong. It is not good to stay on a first impression because most of the time it's wrong.

Moreover, the physic, behaviors or attitude can change an impression. If the person do not smile and seems to be rude but in reality is the nicest person, then it will be awkward for you because you thought she was bad. Sometimes a person can have a bad reputation because of the first impression he shows and it is not his fault, some persons just don't smile every time. Sometimes you can be disappointed because you didn't get to know the person because of your first impression.

The first impressions is not only for people but also for a situation or an object. For example if you are in a library and you want to buy a book, the first thing you are going to do is looking at the cover of the book. If it's pretty you will more easily choose this one instead of a book with a black cover and only the title, because it is your first impression. But your first impression is wrong because you didn't take time to read the resume and you will find soon that the pretty book is actually boring instead of the black book which is really interesting. An object can look nice but have a bad quality. The first impression is the color and the shape of the object, like the physic and the attitude of a person.

In conclusion I would say that the first impression is sometimes right but most of the time it's not. In my opinion, you must not keep in mind your first impression of a person, it's most of the time wrong. You have to get to know the person to build your own opinion. It is normal to have a first impression, like judging, but you must not take the habit to stick with your first impression.      ",4.5,4.5,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
20BC5CCE8C64,"""SNORE, SNORE"" every time that I do something I do not I feel so lazy. I think if we accomplish more if we are always doing something. I believe that your mind do not get lazy and you feel productive. For example, if you go to school, have a job, and help other people. If you do many things every time later on you always will want to do something. I also know that you can do something without doing nothing and one them is been at of problems. Like Thomas Jefferson wrote,"" never to be idle"" that means that do not be the type of people that do not like to do nothing.

First, I believe if you go to school you will accomplish more because your mind is going to be busy. In my opinion, I feel that I do a lot more than just not do nothing because: I wake up on time ,I go to school every day, I do my homewoks after school, and I feel productive by going to school. Also when I do not understand something I ask the teacher for help and if my classmate need my help I do my best by giving them information about the class. If I keep my mind busy I feel good because I experience talking with my classmate.

Second, having a job help you by giving you experience for the future. For example, when I started working In my first job I learned a lot things like how to use a computer, I though that I was never going to learn it but I did it and now it help me for my education. Next, now I know that the way of accomplish something you need to have interest to do it. If you do not have interest or if you want to do nothing you never are going to accomplish anything because the best way of do it is by doing something. In my second job I did not know how to use a cellphone but I put all my interest to learned and help my customers by taking their orders. Now in my third job I know many things like :

answer the phone, take orders, and especially how give a good customer service.

Third, I think helping other people is way of accomplish something. If you help people like homeless you are going to have the opportunity to talk to them and understand why they do not have a place to live or a family to support them. I think this is the best way because some people prefer to leave their home because they do not like the rulers of their parents. This is not the best solution that people should take because everyone need a support of someone. And the best way of accomplish something no matter what it is is by obey and listen the old people who always have the right because they have more experience than us. For example, one day I was homeless because my parents left me with my two brothers and I did not have food to give to them every time that they asked for food my eyes were tearful because they were little and also they did not understand the situation. Now when I see people asking for food it remain me that one day I was like them.

I chose to write about we accomplish more if we are always doing something. I believe that you accomplish a lot of things by always doing something and I said by going to school, find a job, and helping other people. I believe t I also know that you can accomplish other things by doing something different but I chose help my self and others. Also I understand that you can accomplish something by doing nothing but one of then is by been at of problems. By doing all of this I considerate my self accomplishing many things.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
3E6C6F1FE64D,"Imagine going to school and it's your first day back from summer vacation and you walk into class with a weird impression that some teachers want to change because they know you can change the way you act or talk to other people. I think first impressions can be change because there are people that struggle to show how they feel so they have this mean impression towards people the cause of it might be parents divorce a lot and a family member passing. Some resources say that 50 percent of the population tend to give students or parents an impression that is either showing how they feel towards something.

Firstly, changing an impression might be a challenge for some people but they said its impossible to change in my reasoning I think it's possible to change someones first impression. You really can't give someone an impression if you don't know anything about them or if you don't know them. You can't always say ""oh their so mean"" until they know your background. The reason I say that is because most of the time it's true most people would give an impression towards new students at school, but they don't know anything about the person. In reality, I disagree with first impressions are almost impossible to change because you can change that impression that people tend to have on there face.

Secondly, there are other ways you can show your impressions if you don't want to show them. The first one is that you need to try to befriend them and make a conversation you never know you and that person might have a lot in common that you just didn't know to begin with. Your impression doesn't judge but it's the way you show it because sometimes it led to making new friends, having good grades, and making your own decisions in life sometimes.

Thirdly, I think impressions can change because nobody said anything about ""anything isn't impossible "" but a lot of stuff is possible if you believe there is. My reasoning to this prompt is that if you don't try hard enough to change the impression you have on your face then how can you make friends or how can you ignore what people are saying about you . Everyone can change especially their impressions you just keep trying and get to know the person.

In conclusion, I think first impressions can be change if you act right towards people and how you treat others with your impression. Nothing is impossible if your don't try to change it or if you don't try to make a way to get people to be on the same level as you in the end. So I totally disagree with this prompt for saying that first impressions are almost impossible to change. ",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
0ED9E0B4AC30,"I prefer to work alone, because i can focus more and not get distracted by others. Working with a group can be helpful , but some people do more work than others and at the end everyone gets the same credit. This is why i prefer to work alone, so that can get a full credit for the work i did. For example many student's like to work in groups and it takes more time than working alone in my opinion. Students that work in groups can get distracted very easily by side conversations, in the other hand students who work alone can listen to music or go to the library where it's nice and quite. I get a lot of work done working alone than working with groups, because when i'm working alone i get in zone in my mind where i'm like super focused. I be wanting to do more work alone and time passes by quickly, this is why prefer to work alone. this one time i worked with a group because we had to be in group's and i barely did any work to be honest, because there was no competition and i didn't feel motivated at all and i still got the same credit as the people who put in all their hard work into that group work. This is why i prefer to work alone.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5
93575D076743,"Dear Principal,

The reason why I'm writing you this letter is because, I would like your students and all your school to help us to do a perform community service.

All the schools are planning to do one in their community because the state weather its not so good in the communities, because of the contamination of the fabrics and cars, its better for the students and teachers to do a community service because that way we can have a better life without contamination and another way that helps is that we can have a better health. Those are my reasons to do a perform community and, I will like your school to participate with us on having a clean area to live in.

Thank you",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0
38FA6185D43F,"Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" and I agree with what former said because to succeed in something you have to accomplish many steps to get there. Feeling motivated helps you succeed and accomplish your goal. Its better to keep failing at something over and over again because you can see what you need improvements on but eventually you're going to succeed.

For an example, my sophomore year I was taking geometry and I didnt do very well during the school year but there was a point where I just didn't even care anymore. I failed all four quarters for that class during the year and I don't blame anyone but myself because I know I was capable of passing and succeeding the class. The reason why I didn't pass the class was because I didn't feel motivated and I just gave up too quickly just by a few fails I made. I kept failing constantly so I didnt even try anymore but If i would've followed from what Former said, I know I would've succeeded during the year.

However, I took the class again that same year during summer school and I knew I had to pass and give it my all. From all the fails and mistakes I made, I learned from them. I kept practicing and I kept motivating myself, there wasn't a moment when I doubted myself. By the end of summer school I passed the class and all I had to pass was my SOL and I know I had to work hard to pass the SOL so I kept studying. The same day I took the test, I was going to receive my score and I took my time on it but eventually, my teacher told me I passed and I ended up getting the highest score from the class. I was proud of myself even though I failed many time I eventually succeeded.

Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"" and from my experience thats why I agree with what Former said. The most important thing you can't do it do is give up because If i would've gave up I would've never succeeded. Its worth it to fail over and over again but without loss of enthusiasm and eventually succeeding.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
C1B4AB227617,"If Thomas jefferson wrote that we always hae to do more acomplish bacause if we make more activities some students can be interestic to know about all imformation that they need to gire the other students or the others schools need better ideas, bacause if we dont any activity that's make student's think different thihs about the schoools.

Another way is make a new sport or activities more fun they can enjoyed and let the stress out of their head , because if many student alwaysdoinge something they can be grow in their life but they can't enjoy the time when they were young because always they just stay focus on doing something that's will be great but not all the time.

If they do inactivity is the same thing because they focus give their time always and sometimes they just left the family and they can't share all the moments with the family.

if you have like a lot of dreams and you want to make on the reality you can do that because if we always do something that we like we can do more and more, the result is wonderful because more than you do more that you done. also you have a lot of responsabilities which mean if you interestin in some sport you have to work hard day by day if you want to be the best player or if you want to do a challenge. so all that you have to do is focus and woek hard and after that you can see the result, just find your destination the most thing that make happieness. Thomas jefferson wrote this because he want to give us some ideas to be more creative or more entusiastic to lie your life and enjoy all those moment that you hae now so, you hae to be alwatys abalible to do many things in the world or in your life just try your best and never give up doesn't metter if your have problems you always have to be strong and just kept fallow your life sometimes you felt bad,but kept your head up. Thomas jefferson wrote this because he want to show you how wonderful is when you do your things and you got all the results that make you happie and you see how is when you may be done if you always doing it. much better all the responsabilities that you get and how responsible you will be. Thats is my position about what thomas jefferson wrote you just have to try your own and see all the choose you have to be or doing whatever you want on your life i like the word never give up because thomas jefferson was a good person and he just do the best thing he can and may be he can be one example for you.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
8EB2AF12FA77,"To being with, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of then hours. Schools are planing to do two hours of school each week. The disadvantages of doing such a thing to school are, Schools are reducing school hours, teachers won't be getting a salary instead they will get pay hourly, and the economic is going to be low.

I believe that, school days shouldn't be reduce ,just because they want to save energy. Students must be at school for eight hours. Otherwise the teachers won't have the time to give the given material. Students studies will get interrupted if they get two hours of school weekly.

Second reason, is that teachers won't be getting a salary for two hours of work. The pay checks will be reduce to hours worked during the week just like any other job that pays by hour. That means that those people need a secondary job so they can support themselves

Finally, the economic will increase because businesses are reducing peoples hours just because they want to save up energy. People have debts to pay like credit cards, health/car insurance etc. Food cost will highly increase its price.

In conclusion, employers shouldn't reduce peoples hours. it is a good idea to reduce the energy that we consume but in away it's also affecting our economic and learning system.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
C548AD0C706C,"1. Many kinds can't understand because the different subject.Young student don't really get the work that older kinds do. It really hard to teach young kinds because some older student don't even remember the work from any grade like me some time time my little sister be like can you please help me in be like am sorry dont even remember it really difficult to teach a young student. Older kinds have difficult time to teach young kinds they have different way that there teacher teach them how to there work. It really hard to know there work in explain the way we explain the kinds the better they understand what they supposed to do.We have to have a lot of passion to do it.

2.I think many student don't really get it because they older student some student don't really get it some of them dont get it fast but some of them need more extra work with it.Older student some time they explain good more then the teacher but for me it better in adult because will ask question in they know well because they teacher. Like some time i explain my sister what is bad but some time i don't know so I ask in adult to explain me really well that how in school work to young kinds may not really get the older kinds a younger need a adult to understand it well.

3.I go to a program is about math but i really understand because we share opinions of different work they do like student have com plenty different work they have it the hard way in the easy way student get more confused when they have com plenty different work like my math teacher I have different completely different work. I don't understand her nothing at all but I think because different language but asking some else in the program she explain the easy way i cant understand her.

4. Student can""t really get it they need some one to be beside them in tell them or teach them I really wonder if there were only one student or a lot because is program but if it was only one person they really can concentrate that really good because there a lot lot if there was more than one person it fine because it will be more help that the main effect if there was only one person in not a lot of them in was a big problem with then.if there were talking to much it was big problem for the program.

5. paying attention is really good thing so the student can really get the work they can get in learn what they do. The most important is if the young student get it if they don't get it they will fell the test because the older one properly know but can explain can find the easy way so the student can understand it really understand it good they really more information how to treat the student in explain it good make sure it good to them make sure not to just yell at them you have to have passion. talking with some one like your age understand it all of us have different kind of ways to explain it in to learn it. Like me I understand it with a adult like PROPER_NAME that one my teacher i can listen to him but some with younger them me or alder them me.    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
A094036DE672,"I think that setting a curfew time for teenagers during the week and weekends is good because it's letting them know the time they can leave there house, and the time they so there parents wouldn't worry about them leaving in the middle of night just to go out with friends. If there weekday curfew is until 10pm then it's acceptable because it's a school night so they at least just go home after school, change, and go out with friends until 10pm. If they get home after 10pm then they are disobeying, and breaking the law which would get them in so much trouble so like the consequences would be go to court, talk with the judge, and know what there punishment would be either going to be on prohibition for 2 weeks, having an ankle bracelet so if they try to sneak out it would alert an officer then they would immediatly would be put in juvenile detention center for a week, and if those consequences don't work then they would be offically be put with an officer to take him to school, home, and work so they don't try to sneak out again. The weekend curfew would be all day until 12am. this curfew time is only set only fridays and saturdays. If they come back home after 12am then there are gonna be actual real more serious consequences like being on house arrest, be on prohibition with an officer watching you, taking you to where you're supposed to be if any of those dont work then they will just be locked up in a Juvenile detention center for 4 weeks so they would actually have no freedom only time is when they get visitation time with there parents visit, and when they are released from that place. Inconclusion I believe that havig a weekday and weekend curfew is good because it warns kids what there consequnces will be if they disobey the law and going out after curfew hours.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
CCDD77656701,"Do you thing that most danger of us lies not setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark? Sometimes is not good to tell others what you want because some of them may not want good things for you to get or have, you want to not used too much you phone, you want to loose some weight, and you want to graduated from high school.

Today in day many people used their phone a lot and sometimes they don't do things because they spend most of their time on their phones. For example, you get home from school and you have to do some homework, but you don't want to do it yet because you just got home from school, and you tell your self that you will relax for a few hours, and then you will start to do your homework. You ate dinner and everything you go to your room and one of your friends ask you if you want to play videos game? you tell your self I will play a little bit and then I will start to do my homework. Two hours pass by and you are still playing videos games. You tell your friend I must stop playing because I have to start doing my homework and your friend tells you don't go, we ask someone to give us copy, and you say yes, because you want to continue do keep playing. When you get to school you don't have any body to ask to give you copy. It was your choice to keep playing. That day you make a plant you put a timer and when that timer stop you will stop doing what you are doing. It work because when you time your self you can do more than one thing, you could also have more time to just play but the good thing is you have finish all you things.

For new year resolution you say that you will loose some weight this year. Your family laugh at you because you had said that almost every year and you have not do it. Sometimes is good to just tell your self to do things and don't tell anyone because some people don't want others to get things because they want to get it first and if they don't get it. Those kind of people don't want others do get it also. If you want to loose weight just do it and don't tell any body because you don't know what others want for you. It's better to do things in secret because at the end you are the one you are doing it and no body is helping you. The things that you do are for you not for everyone. When you have your things you can tell to your closer people and some of them may be happy for you and some may not, but that doesn't have to worry you because you have already do your thing and they can't do nothing to take that away from you. Your family may see you that you say things but you don't do it. You have to show them that you can do things that you say. You may feel sad because of what people say and you just have that in your mint. That is why not good to tell everyone of what you want to do because they may be jealous and they don't want you to be in a very good shape. Just go and workout and when they see you again they will say wow you look different what did you did to look great; they will not see you as a lair because you show them that you can do things. It can take time to see the different but you are doing it.

When you are in school you will have friends that are good for you and also those that are not. When you are in high school you want to pass all your classes so you can make your parents proud and they can be happy; but their will be some friends that will tell you to go out and have fun etc. In school their will be students that care about classes and their will be that they don't care. You want to be with those friends that help each other to have good grades. Their will be friends that don't like you and want to get you in some trouble, and they will want you to don't have good grade and be like them. You want to be with friends that support each other. Also you don't want to be that kind of person that say you have good grade and you don't have those good grades and you just are copying others and when it's test time you don't know what to do because you didn't do the work by your self. To get things that you want; you have to work for it. It's better to have friends that help each other and that also that help you to do your work and can be easy for you to also help others.

People may disagree with this because they have good people around them and that they help each other. They may say this because they haven't go through things like; one of your friends don't like you and they don't want you to have the things you want. Sometimes is better to do things and don't tell everyone because you don't know what people really want for you or what they think of the things you want. In this world are people that they don't care what you, they will agreed with what you do and if you felt they always be with you, their is those that they don't want you and others to be happy. The best thing to do is just do things and when you have it tell to everyone that you want because when you already have it they can just talk bad things of you and you don't stay in front of them as a looser because you didn't they don't know how you did it. Us human been we always have the thing inside of us that always make us jealous for what others have. For example, If one of your friends have a news phone you will get a little bit jealous because you also want to have that phone. Every single person in this world has when through that. That's why people don't trust each others.

It's better to do things that no body know because if you felt or don't get what you want, their will not be people that knew. You didn't get it and they will not be talking bad things of you or look at you as a looser that you can't do anything. You will be the only one that will know and if you want to tell them you can it will be your choice. You want to do things because you want to be proud of yourself and that is the only thing it counts.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
D09D2C17FB38,"Does your teenager have a curfew? Do you think they should have a curfew? Keeping teenagers safe is really important especially when it's dark out. Thing out in the world are not like they used to be. A city council is debating on a curfew adoption. If this curfew is adopted does this mean teens on the street after hours are breaking the law? Will curfews keep teens out of trouble or unfairly interfere with their lives?

A city council is debating on an adoption of curfew for teens. Why are they debating about this adoption? The first reason is city council does not want teens getting hurt or putting themselves at risk at a young age. Second, they want to keep teenagers safe from the bad things out in the world. Lastly is they do not want trouble, some teens make bad choices about drinking and other stuff they should not do at a young age. That is why city council is debating a curfew adoption.

If the curfew adoption is adopted by city council, does it mean that teens on the street after hours are breaking the law? Many people have different opinions. I also think it depends on why they are out. I would say they are not breaking any law if its for work or any emergency. They are also not breaking the law if they are with an adult because it is not like they are on their on there own. However if they are out to be hanging out with friends and partying stuff like that, yes the would be breaking the law. Does this mean if teens are out they are breaking the law? In some ways yes and in some ways no, it depends on why they are out pass the curfew.

Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble or unfairly interfere in young lives? First things first most teens would say that by having the curfew law its interfering with there lives. Teens would say that because they want to go out and have funny and other stuff. having the curfew law will keep teens safe and out of trouble because you never know what could happen. Another reason i would say keeps them out of trouble is because most teens like to leave the house at night with out their parents knowing. That is never something you should do. Teens should think, Is it worth the risk? A lot of things can happen even though you may think everything is okay and that nothing will happen, but that is what you think there might be a chance you could be wrong. Now teens should think, Do curfews keep them safe or does it interfere win there lives?

The city council's debate about the adoption of curfew for teenagers. Many believe it should be a law and others believe its should not be a law. They debate upon this law because they want to keep teens safe and do not want them to get hurt or in trouble at a young age. Will it mean that any teen on the streets after curfew is breaking the law? It Will probably depend on why they are out for example for work or for and emergency and unless they are with an adult. Some reasons other than that like to go to parties or hang with friends, is most likely breaking the law. Will this law keep teens out of trouble or interfere with there lives? Most teens opinions would be that this law is interfering with their lives. Some teens most likely parents will say it's to keep teens safe instead of risking themselves.",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
71BA665B1B31,"I think that imagination is not more important then knowledge, so I disagree with this statement that Albert Einstein made. It know for a fact that I use knowledge more than imagination.

Some reasons why i disagree are if you don't know anything you cant imagine anything. You might be asking your self why? But the simple answer is that if you don't know anything, you also won't know what to imagine. Without knowledge you can't imagine and create or do stuff.

Next reason is that, I think knowledge counts as experience and experience could save you from getting hurt or killed. I know that if I got burned because I sipped from o mug full of hot coffee, I would not sip from it again until it cools down because I have experienced the burn.

My last reason is that, sometimes when i use my imagination, I use it to create or do something and make it creative. But you can't make it creative if you dont know what creative you are looking for. One example is when i had to make my name out of macaroni and cheese.

That was my reasons and what I think, what do you think? In conclusion I disagree because its just obvious to me that knowledge is more important than imagination. Do you agree or disagre with me?",3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
A356547BF789,"Generic_Name writing SOL day

10/23/2019

prompt: School program

""Life in high school"". In high school to ca be graduate and learn how the new life is in here, and learn a lot of things to adapted or to fit to the new language and the new people what did I say new here is another world, new people new language that is why I'm here, I came from to my native country. To learn English and speak like a normal person like I speak Spanish, speak bout same without of problems. I'm going to take position on myself to spoken in this introduction, things did i most enjoy in high school is having the opportunity to study here in the United State. And also learn a new language I'm so thanks full for all those opportunities.

All of the things did happen on my life was not easy, and also I remember when my cousin speak English like a normal language and he also came from where came from and i remember did i said i want to spoke like you i was so impressed and how he can speak English like a normal person here in the U.S, because in that time I did not any English at all. When was my time to get in high school begin all this things did i was want for a long time. first day I was so nerviest but at the same time exerted because I came in with my mind in what I'm want and what I love was and is learn English and spoke like normal.

Generic_School give the opportunity at the students graduate on three years, except at the normal traditional four, let me tell you why I take three years except at the normal four cause my age I'm almost getting on (21) at the date to graduate for example, if I'm taking the four years of high school when the people have more then 21, they kicking you off the school

I thing was I good idea taking just the three years to can be graduate on time.

In addition all what has to happen to can be graduate is taking all of the classes did I need it to get the credits. making or taking classes on summer school maybe night school to graduate on time is hard process to graduate in three year but helps a lot to the people who work after school or another thing that probably they has to do, to graduate without credits missing. And here I am in my last year of high school I'm a senior I feel good can be say this is my last year here and all this help me for the program what they made for us to graduate in three years that helps me at all.

In conclusion; I enjoy the must time in high school I know was and is a big way to run was not easy but also no difficult when we want just put in your mind what you want and if you want you can this is my lemma don't give up at the last moment we can cause if you want you can nothing is impossible in this life don't lust the time because the time is like gold I know all this no to much relate about the prompt but I'm know did I doing well believe in yourself. one of the things did I'm thinking about what I going to do after school is going directly at collage don't lust the time did I win. Was the perfect idea graduate in three years that helps me in everything I'm agree wit that program and idea of the district. thanks was hard.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
AB9527C4A312,"Technology have the limitation of human contract is due to use of technology had positive or negative effects on peoples's lives. Humans use the technology for some different's things,on this times technology is almost everywhere. If the technology did not exist we cant had more opportunities for learned more things for our life. Also,the people don't need to see face to face for had a conversation, because the technology are very advance that if you only cant had a phone you can communicate for text with people in other continents or countries. technology make all more easy than can be. i think that the technology can be affect in a positive way .For that a have some examples:

Technology is used for many things on humans life that make that the technology had a positive effect. For example,for some people the technology is their work they don't need to ask to nobody if they had a question about something ,if they did not had technology they can work and they can had money for live. Also,on the schools teachers and students need to use the technology,most of the time the students do their works on computers and they need to turned in by way of

Internet and if they had a question about something they can found on internet,on the schools is very important the technology they use for many things,on the schools of united states students and teachers use to do their works like 50% of technology they use more the technology for found information and they don't use a lot of books .In other way one part of the most people that use the technology is the doctors. They had a lot of technology devices,they use that for help people,the most part are for do operations that help them to safe more life than the pass times they now trust more on the technology that the books. However technology is use a lot on fabrics and that make that the people don't work hard like on fabrics that need to packed the technology is the that make more the work than the people.

Humans can use technology to do good or bad things. For example,with the time the people begin to learned little by little on how can they use the technology. The most part of people use the technology to do good things,like for their works like secretaries,teachers,doctors,and another works that use technology to communicate or safe things .Other people use the technology for teach to the children,in the Latin countries some parents begin to call the technology the new babysitter, for the reason that the technology like the phone, tablets , etc and more things like them are one of the ways more easy for distracting the children when their moms need to do or make somethings they use the technology and they don't need to other persons be with your children for distracting .Other people don't had good things on how can they use the technology and they learned how use however they use to defraud or search people on their social media they communicate a lot with the people. Some times they use to sequester people or to rob other peoples bank accounts. In some times is a lot of cases where the old people treated of fraud the children between the technology,like the socials media or online games they use to communicate in a bad way .In this case a lot of people death,in other are to use the technology on a bad way is when people want to be a hacker and they don't care to who they go to steal their accounts, in most of the case they steal banks accounts and use a lot of technology for that . that make me thing that if we had more opportunities to use the technology not all people think on good ways to use.

Technology can change the way of people live and think. for example. On one part the technology can do that the people feel safety of how their live in a good way on their house because the technology is more advanced and their create many things for people can be safe. Also, the technology make that the people that like to express on public can had a work in the social medias and show the their like to do like the youtubers they dont know who are washing then but they always talk like their know who see. the technology change the form of think of the old people because their in the pass time they need to write letters but now they can send a text or do a video call they dont need to be face to face . the limitation of the communications it is okay if you don see the person for talk. and if you are with your friends on one online game you need to had communication with him and you can talk face to face because he live in the other part of the world you can talk between the technology that make that the technology had a positive effect on the limitation.

Conclusion, some times the limitation of the human contact had a negative effect. For example, when you are in your work you need to have communication with your companion of work because you need to had a good relation with him. Also,if you are in a relationship with someone you can't communicate with him or her only for text you need to talk with your partner for had a good contact each other. However if you see the things for other way like when you are in the schools you need to found a answer and you do trust on that you classmate said you can discuss with other people by technology or search for that. on the conclusion for all my examples i think that no matter what if we had or not had human contact because both had positives an negatives effects. sometimes humans prefer technology more than books for search something because that are Lacy and don't want to read and the technology no always give to us good answers. But in limitation i think we need to had more human communication that technology communication.",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.0,2.0,3.0
EBE636368EBC,People make there own decisions because they don't want to blame no one when they take there advice. Being Responsible for there own actions will make people grow as a person with there Ups & downs in life .People don't want to blame the person that gave them advice because the advice did not go how they wanted to go .Failing in life with your decisions is not always a bad thing because it can lead to new doors/opertinities .Not regretting anything in life is a good mind set because each decisions you made where what you wanted .when people are responsible for there action/decisions they just got no regrets because they choose what they believed/wanted to do. Some people might say getting advice can warn you what not to do but how are you suppose to grow a person if you don't try it your self and just regret not doing it later on .People making there own decisions will make there action then will be responsible for decisions they made then grow as a person not blame no one for their failings and regrets they get.,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
C537E278BAE6,"No they shouldn't add an hour more because we don't need the hour but they should completely change the time for waking up and getting ready to come to school at 8 because i feel like every kid will have energy and not fall asleep.

also i think they should put each class an hour like example math should be an hour also Science , English , geography because all we honestly do need is come to school get our education then go home we dont need all stuff they put like electives they just make the day more longer and waste of our time honestly thats my opinion and how i see it.

they should only put the one hour in for the kids that need help or catch up with there missing work and that will help more for them because it would benefit them more but after all the day i think they shouldn't put that extra hour but like i said only if kids need help they should put the extra hour in.

after all they shouldn't make it an hour because its really not worth it if we already have a long day of school they should just take electives away so school can go more faster and just get it over it also just get our education faster.        ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
8C645419E1B4,"Others would not appreciate kindness.

First acts of kindness has an impact on others because others may not be used to being kind to everyone around our environment.

Next showing kindness to other people is not something everybody does on a daily bases however that does not mean we hate each other we just don't show what kindness really looks like.

Finally it's not always good to be kind to others because other people like to be treated good or bad.

Kind isn't always the best choice.

First being kind isn't always the best choice in different situations. For example picking if a student should get bullied or choosing a friend for you to help on the test like who would a help.

Next kindness can also lead you to big trouble. For example u standing up for a student who gets hurt and bullied by the bully if your school has no cameras around it's easy for the bully to lie about the situation that happened with the kid who got bullied if there are no cameras in your local school.

Finally about the bullying part the person who is getting bullied by the bully and the person who is standing up for the kid who gets bullied they can even get in trouble for interfering.

Don't be kind to those who aren't good people

First students and others who are being mean to you they are probably not a good person therefore don't talk to them and shouldn't be kind to them.

Also a reason to not be kind to those who aren't good people is because they have the discipline to teach themselves to treat others right.

Finally if you are getting annoyed by the person who is being mean to you than talk to a teacher about it and they can talk to the student about being kind to others.",3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
FCAE7B948DCF,"Have you failed at some so much at one point you get so good at whatever you were failing at???well if you have this promt is for you. yes i bevelie that failure plays a important role in the pursuit of success, there was this one time when this kid wasnt so good a catching a football it kept slipping out his hands and after awhile he was able to grip the football at the right time, if you dont practices stuff you bad at you're never gonna get good at it ,with that said that means your going to fail alot over and over again. failure is also life your going to fail in life but its youe chose to get back up and try again untill perfection ,if you never fail you with never success so if you fail dont let it get you down keep trying and soon enogh you be,althoght you might also think that thats not true becuse some people are really talented but keep in mind that noone is good at some thing first try NEVER, i want you to try some you're not good at and keep practicing for about a month and see your progress ,i would like for everyone to try this and see that fail does run a big roll in success.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E1D1EFCFD8CD,"I agree because a positive attitude make your life more successful, also people see that things you make if you fail and you continue to do it and they see how you never give up they want to be like you with the positive attitude and they want to try to makes his goals.

the positive attitude make your life more happy you always try the things you cannot do it and make the things positive in you make your goals positive attitude make more friend you make people feel more good good decision with your good positive you can get a good grade always need a positive attitude for these life people want yo have someone who has a positive attitude to work or schools programs kind people

Bad attitude makes your life more unsuccessful .

some people who has a bad attitude always said why i cannot do this or why the other person is more good them me in the people who has a bad attitude enter to depression they always want to be alone they don't want to be with friends or family.

they don't try the things they want to do most people don't want to be with you, because you always have bad attitude you always are angry you can never realize your dreams people always want to be alone they always a problems for everything and make his or her life more useful makes you life more sad they are rude they always complicate his life that why i agree with the positive attitude makes your life more successful.

the positive attitude make you comfortable to your self,

In the more important you are happy ,you can make different with bad attitude and try to people see the positive attitude is more successful .

in helps people to never give up they can realize his or her dreams.

in these life all the things hart to get ,but if you have two things. the things are positive attitude in work hart you make all your dreams.

The but attitude it not success for your life .",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
869B37DA1D3E,"Dear: Generic_Name

I Understand that you are concidering the idea to work in group. I appreciate what are you trying to do and I agree with, for two reasons I think working in group can give you a lot of benefits because you can help each other, so you can do a better job and, also you can share differents ideas with your parners.

The first reason is that you can do a better job working in group. For example when I am working in group in my job I ask my parners to check my work to make sure I am doing a good job.

additianally, you can share different ideas with your parners or also, you can share your toys that you usually use for work. For example when I am working in group with my class I always ask my friends if I can use their stuf.

Therefore I strongly believe that working in group give you a lot of benefits. which I allow with positive for two reasons. you can do a better job helping each other and, also you can share your ideas with your parners. thank for your time.

sencerly:

Generic_Name",3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
93EF5F755313,"To who may concern.

The Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"", is well know that some people believe in this statement and some other don't. There are some reasons to believe this is true: one, failure gives experience to do it better next time, two, failure makes one think about different possibilities to be prepare to control the situation, three, failure gives the option to try again.

First, failure gives experience; this helps to learn how to dont make the same mistake. For example, to learn how to cook is a ""try and fail"" because one needs to put a specific amount of spices and vegetables is a long process to give the food a good flavor; failure said what are the mistakes one needs to correct like to dont put much sugar in the cake or dont put much salt in the salad. Another example, learn a new language is difficult in various forms like the pronunciation or the form to make a sentence; failure give experience to improve abilities like these too.

Second, failure makes one think about different possibilities. For example, if one try to built a ship inside a bottle and fail because the little pieces of the ship broke inside for dont be careful, that persons if going to think about what can make the pieces break next time to avoid the same situation. Another example, if one flew a kite and a bird or the wind make the kite crash, the next occasion ""what can make the kite crash?"" is going to be a possibility to think.

Third, failure gives the option to try again. For example, take a test driver and fail but still studying to take it again; to get the necessary score to pass, this show that person decide to try again. Another example, when one try to learn how to do a magic trick, the first times fail is guarantee, but with perseverance one can be the best magician, this can be only reached if one decide to try again after fail.

Although, one can learn from the failures, is not necessary fail to success, but sometimes one can't decide to don't fail; fail is a form to learn something from the mistakes, for example, fail to do something can make one know what is wrong and what is necessary to do to correct and prevent a future failure.

In conclusion, one dont need to fail to learn, but ""perseverance is the key for success"" and when one go from failure to failure without giving up; the action to dont give up show how capable is that person to success.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
7ACF284A8B7C,"I think that work in groups is more benefit. Because work is groups make the class successful. also, the students can know each other and they can meet new people. therefore, work in groups is benefit for students and teacher. Here are some reason why

I think that work in groups is benefit.

First, They can divide the work in same parts. While someone is working in searching information the other one can think in how to make the work more creative. Also, if they divide the work is more fair for the group so they can have more opportunity to work successfully. Second, They have more opportunity to have a better work. If the class work in group they can do much better in the work that working alone because they can do the work more easily by working as a team. For example, If the class works in groups of 4 they can do a good work by dividing the work in same parts like one can be searching for information the other one can be looking for imagines. The other two can be checking that the writing is good and that the information is good. And the last one can make the presentation and make the work creative.

Second, In groups can take less time to work on it that working alone. If a group meet in one place and they start working they can easily finish the work on time. Also, they can search for information more faster then alone because they can divide the work but they can also help each other. Second, In a group decide what to do it can be hard. But when the group decide what to do and they finish the work fast. The group can check if the work is good or not and decide either to keep the information o to make some changes. So, the group can have more opportunity to have a better grade.

Third, Work as a group can also be fun because you are working with your friends or you can met new people. First, work in group can be a good for class because they can know each other. If the class meet each other the class can be more successful. Because there will not fight or enmity so the class can work more successfully. If a class is works more successfully that makes the topic easy and knowing each other makes the class more understanding. And, It will make the class more fun because everyone can help each other in thing that are hard for people. For example, if one student can't understand the topic he can ask for help to the teacher and he can ask to people around hem for help.

In conclusion, work as a group is funny and make the class better. Also, it makes the students to do better workers and meet people. therefore, I think that work will be better in groups because the class can meet and know each other and they can be better person and better students. This are some reasons why a think that work in groups is better.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
950729DE3582,"Duke Ellington was a jazz legend of his time. One quote he said,"" A problem is a chance for you to do your best."" I will explain the meaning behind this. And if i agree with this or disagree. Let's begin on the meaning first.

The meaning that he is saying is that form your problem you can make it better for your self. To see your problem you can teach your self to do better. That not to give up on your problem. That something bad can turn good. This quote is trying to modevant you.

I agree with this statement. Something bad will in fact turn something good. Not all bad thing will turn bad

As long as you can make them turn out good. You just have to see a chance to do so. Duke Ellington also may of had the same problem.

Duke Ellington was a great jazz ,but was also so a great person. That something bad that can turn to something that is good is very modevation. I agree with this very much. This is what it means and my opinion on the statement.                                    ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
7C2650EEA2B6,"Do you think a three month break is too long ? Some professors feel that summer break is too long and students are most likely to forget everything they have learned when they return to school. However, both professors and students deserve a nice, long break because ten months of high school can cause tons of stress, people get to spend more time with their families, and last but not least, students can take classes during the summer if they want to graduate early.

First, most students want to attend to good colleges, therefore, they take advanced classes in high school in order to receive more credits. Teachers give more assignments in advanced classes and the work is much harder than course classes. Students often have to stay up late to finish school work. In addition, with little amount of sleep can cause students serious stress. For instance, my cousin once took six college classes in her junior year of high school. She never had much time to eat nor sleep, to the point where she passed out. My family had to take her to the doctors for a checkup. They said that she had stress issue and it may take a long time for her to recover. Luckily, with three months of summer break, she became better.

Second, some students don't want to spend four years in high school when they have an opportunity to graduate early. In order to do so, they must take all of the requirement courses. Though, not all courses are available during the school year, however, students can take it in the summer. For example, my best friend, Generic_Name, took English 11 over the last summer, so she could graduate early from high school and soon become a nurse. She learned everything she needed for the tests within two months of summer school,

Third, many people love to spend time with their families. Summer break would be an awesome opportunity for both teachers and students to go on vacations with their loved ones. They can travel to different states or even countries if they like. In the summer of 2015, my family and I had a great time in Generic_City. I got to experience many amazing things, it was the best summer I have ever had. Though, the most wonderful time of the year is summer, however, some argue that there should be year round schools and only three to four weeks of break in the summer.

In conclusion, all students and teachers, including staff members deserve a nice, long summer break. Most people agree that school is very stressful, therefore, a three month break is not too long. Some says that when one is stress out, they can't think nor do things well. On the other hand, when their mind is relax they will achieve successful things in life. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
18D47A791678,"Should students get involved in school activities? School activities are the best way for students to get a chance at achieving something. Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because they will earn respect from there teachers and classmates. its also a chance for them to show off there talents and earn popularity or even any sort of achievements for it.

Students can earn respect from there friends, teachers, classmates and maybe even staff if they can be nice enough or if they work hard and they have respect for other people like there teachers or if they put a lot of effort on a thing they will automatically gain respect from other people in there school. All students work hard but not all earn the respect they expect but if students respect each other they can earn respect among themselves.

Students can show off there talents or achieve something by participating in anything there good at like participating in there school sports which all schools has tons of varieties or they can do any sort of clubs try to participate in yearbook making or even the student council these sorts of things have made even famous athletes or even actresses these sort of things can discover a lot of talent because the athletes, actresses or even engineers and etc got to where they are because they got the talent for it.

Students can earn respect from there teachers and classmates they can also achieve awards for there talents. participate in extracurricular activities and discover your talent.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.5,3.0
E660157F81B4,"A lot of people ask for an advice, but others ask more then one person for an advice. An advice means talking to someone for a recommendation. Some people ask one person for an advice. Other people talk to different people. Talking to one person can help, but asking more than one person can help you understand something better. If i am about to do something that i can get in a big trouble for should ask my parents or other adults for an advice.

I would ask different people for an advice, because i can understand something i could do better. Another good thing about asking for an advice is that if i go to like prison for murder, drugs or alcohol, in the future when i go look for a job nobody will want to hire me because of the stuff i did. If i am going to do something really bad in school i should think about consequences that will be and ask someone or more people if it is going to be worth of doing. When i am having trouble doing something or understanding something i should ask others a advice of whats a good way or doing it.

I think that other people should really ask for a advice. If someone wants to do something bad that they can get in trouble or they can ask for an advice. Is someone wants to make new friends they can ask something for an advice to tell them how they can talk to new people. If i am having bad grades i can talk to my teacher to tell me how i can get my grades up. And that is why i think an advice means. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
4C6B05BD5A81,"Over ten precent of the students say that they would rather go to school instead of staying home. It would benefit the students learning abilites because some teachers will teach differently then other teachers. It is so much easier learning at school because the teachers at school know what the students needs to learn. The students needs someone who knows how to teach and has been teaching for a while. If the students pick online learnig the teachers can be fake a pretend to teach the kids when they do not know anything. The video conferencing can get messed up by the internet because some people might have slow connection or no connection at all.

It would be easier for students because they will learn more at school then the video chat, or from online. Some students have a slower learning abilities then others. The students are learning by one teacher from the video chat some students will be done much quicker then the other students. At school th teachers wait for the other students finish then they let the rest of class to do other work. It will not help the students to learn from home because at home is where they have their games tv all of that stuff they will pretend to be doing work, but actually they will be doing other adn stuff and they will tell the teachers that they already finished the work.

Students needs someone who has a degree in teaching. It will be easier for the teachers because they will know what things they have to teach to the certain type of students. They would know how to teach it to them and it will be easier for them to learn the topic. It is easier to go to school becuase we will learn the topic with other students and students can ask for help from their friends or the the teachers in class.

The teachers on video chat can be a random person off the streets and teach the student the wrong infomation. Also it will cost a lot of money for the students learn from a video chat. Schools are free, so the students can go there and get education for free, nor the students, or parents have to pay. Some parents, nor students can afford online classes because it costs like over one hundred dollars.

Staying home and doing online classes is fun because we are able to stay in our night clothes and do school work. Students can get their blankets and anything they want and do work while being comfortable. The students do not have to get up and go to school. They can get up at anytime and do class work. As fun as that sounds some students will not be able to meet their friends because their friends might have a different sechdules then their other friends. They will have to do work wilhile they want to meet up.

Students should not do online classes because it will intefere with their other stuff like hanging out with friends and going to work. They will miss out on parties that their friends will host for them. It help the students and the teachers because not everyone has a good ability like the other students. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
E6A0D625F9C3,"I am disagree with this statement because thing that are made up from mind seems to be not real. First, Knowledge created stuff that is real. Lastly, Knowledge can make you be rich.

Knowledge created stuff that exist. For examples: a car that had been made by a knowledgeable person, can solve your life time problems, but an imaginary car is not real at all. all human have the knowledge to read. People today have invented a lot of things because of their knowledge. In conclusion, there are so many stuff that had been invented(created) true knowledge.

If you present the thing you invented from your knowledge, a company might respond to you and say,""hey, people really loved your invention. we should work together."" For example you have the skill to invented a phone, and you solled that phone to a person and you made a huge amount of money. You would want to invent more and more to make a lot of money. You learn that skill from knowledgeable teacher. In conclusion, knowledge can help you with your life time.

In conclusion, Knowledge created stuff that are real. People have made a lot of money true their knowledge. Finally, knowledge is more power full then imagination.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
8FE04E30F621,"What is something you would like to do in the future? Well I for one want to become a forensic scientist later on in life. Now others, just wish for money or want the job that pays the most but I do not. I want this job because I think I could really be happy with this job, I could feel like i have a purpose in life with that job, also as an added bonus I could be near the police force, and i have always admired the police force because of their bravery. thats why this is going to be what I want to accomplish.

First and foremost, I want this job because I could truly be happy. I love working by myself because I would get to work at my own pace and not have to worry about slowing down for others. And I really feel this is a good way of helping to get justice without getting in the action. For example I could help the police catch criminals by helping with fingerprinting. And thats why I feel I could be happy with that job.

Additionally, I would take that job because I would always get to be around the police force. And I admire them so much for their courage and bravery. something that we have in common is that we both want to help people. One time i saw someone take someones purse and the police officer chased him and pinned him down and returned the purse. The way I see police officers is that they love to help other people.

Lastly, and the most important to me, in this job I would get to feel that I am helping people on a regular basis by getting justice for them. Because most of the time I just hate myself for not helping others more often. People deserve better than me but I can not change over night so all I can do right now is hope, that in the future I can be better. But in the meantime the things I can do are the little things because those are the things that count the most.

In summary I can tell you the future is under control for me I have a dream an I hope I can accomplish it. On another note the future is in all of our hands if we work together that future can be the brightest it can be. We can all decide what we want to do or be but we can be nice and to me thats all that matters. I hope whoever is reading this has a wonderful dream too.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5
A4A90A401002,"People who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas.

This is reasonable for each individual, and people should make their own decisions in life. We always ran into problems and sometimes we need to make decisions on our own.

When we have the choice and decide to make the differences, it's important to follow our instincts and we have to take the responsibility to make the good choice. This is how we learn by ourselves.

In our daily life, people always ran into problems and get stressed out, for example, the car broke down in the middle of the traffic, failing the test that you've been studying for weeks, your boss fired me today...

However, it is our choice to make the right decision and to change it; you could call for help from someone, you can study harder or ask others to help on the school work, and also look into other jobs that you are interested in.

There are so many options for everyone to pick and to follow our own instincts and ideas to make everything better.

As an adult, soon after high school I will be joining navy and have my own life, to do everything by myself.

Everything around me will change completely,I will not have my parents standing beside me to teach me common sense, nor my teachers to teach me about life lessons, nor any of my friends to be there and help me out, this is all about me and my decision to make.

If I'm going to learn the hard way, I will have to learn the hard way.

Maybe my instincts kick in and help me out, you never know.

Making your own judgment is one of the most important survival skills we will have to learn in life, everyone will grow up one day, to have your own family and all the responsibilities, now you are the one who have to decide everything, to have responsibility for not only yourself but you family as well.

Instincts will tell you which way your heart goes, and sometimes it might leads you to the wrong path, but don't worry, this is how we are going to learn.

Success is not an easy path, it's full of adventure and false on the way to finish.

You will experience more fail than you can ever imagine before you achieve the goal, to success it all by yourself is to follow your instincts and ideas.

You may have concerns that what if you seek guidance for experts and authorities about life's important matters?

Guess what, life is full of adventure, you never going to know what is coming next and not everyone's life is going to be the same, so therefore seek guidance for experts may work for some people, not all, you may have found a different solution for yourself.

All we can do is listen what others advises are, Because you will be the one who make the final decision, and you are responsible to your decision, not anybody's advice or common.

Everything is on you and to follow your heart to make things right, or to learn how to judge then choose the right path.

No one will change your life unless you let it happen, no one can change your final decision unless you don't follow your instincts and heart.

This is why we should make our own decisions, not only to make things right, but also follow your heart and to understand about life's important matters.",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
E81B50098AAC,"In my opinion students should come to school. Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students,which allows the students to be irresponsibles and not to show their work to the teacher. As we can see taking classes online is not a good option to us, for instance if we dont make the time to attend the classes online, or by the time we are taking the online classes we received a text for friend we stop doing what we are doing and got distracted by the electronic devices and, others words if we come to school received classes we are going to be able to get the knowledge that we need to be great in our academic life.

I consider myself that taking online classes is not a good option for students. Some students that take online classes are procrastinators,they dont care about their homework, or they wait until the last minute to do it. The truth is, if we dont take our online classes seriously how we are going to learn. For example,

My friend Generic_Name is taking online classes and she said that taking online classes allow her to be irresponsible by not doing her homework.

Some students dont make the time to take the online classes and we just forget to take it. I wonder how we are going to learn if we dont make the time to do it. Sometimes we got distracted for something that have nothing to with the class that we are taking. However, if we have a job and we got home late, and in our mind is to get home and take the online classes, but when we get home we are so tired and we just want to go to bed, and forget about what we have to do.

The last and more important reason what we should take classes in school is, if we attend to school,we can ask questions to the teacher and he can provides us with a powerful answers and specific examples, if we attend to school that will helps us to get a responsibility to be every day at school and not to miss any important class, and also that would gives the knowledge that we would need to be great in life.

In final consideration I think students should come to school and take our classes, that way we would learn more better than taking it in online, and also that we will makes us more responsible. As we take the classes in school we will get the knowledge that we would need to success in our academic life in general we would be great in our professional life.  ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F1B4090C8B06,"If you challenge yourself, you will never become good at something you want to do or achieve it. Others believe that challenging yourself won't improve your growth. It's only going to make people struggle. Myself, however, agrees because putting yourself to a challenge can make people explore or learn many things. That is how many people become so talented at things they do now.

Going beyond can raise your confidence higher. My first time experiencing playing the flute was very difficult. The more time I practiced the notes and songs, the easier it got for me. After awhile, I wanted to to play a different instrument. The second instrument option for me when I began playing the flute was a violin. It was more difficult than playing the flute but eventually I got used to it. The more things anyone can accomplish, the more challenges there will be to be completed to improve growth.

School is a good example of improving yourself. There are specific kids who has disability in learning called Special Ed. The experience of being in self-contained classes were easy. For the kids who are capable of being in a larger group class have to make growth in order for them to be in a co-taught class or regular classes. I've got out of self-contained classes by making so many improvements to show that I don't need to be in self-contained.

Going beyond can make a big difference. Going beyond the goal is a great feeling because the goal is achieved and then the on to the next level.                    ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
E8BF036DCFA5,"Students should participate in extracurricular activities

I believe students should participate in extracurricular activities because one it keep them out of trouble, two some of the activities keep them healthy, and three they are fun.

One reason students should participate in extracurricular activities is because they keep most students out of trouble. For example, it can keep the students occupied so they don't have to be on the streets. Another example is sometimes these activities can help them relax and keep them calm so they stay out of trouble.

Another reason is some of the activities can keep them healthy. For example students can do football or basketball which keeps them running and keeps them in good shape. They can also do lift training after school which keep them fit and all around healthy.

Last but not least these activities are fun. There are always a lot of activities and you can always find something you like. For example if you like sports there are so many different sports you can do. There are also other things like drama club if you like acting, art club if you like drawing, even robotics club if you like technology and stuff like that.

Therefore these are the reasons I agree that all students should do at least one extracurricular activity.",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
2D194F068B93,"I agree having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. To have a positive attitude is hard because imagine waking up everyone morning with a positive attitude is hard. Because in this world that we are living you will not go a week without somebody having to mess your day up.

Having a positive attitude, can sometimes be hard for some people it depends on how that day begins in how it ends. Life has a lot of choices and a lot of path you have the make you own choice im make your path with a negative attitude you can never accomplish anything. If you don't know how to treat people; you don't know how to act than you won't get anything possitive out of that. At rhis point of time your attitude is everything you attitude well who you really are base on how you act, how you carried yourself, that will tell who you truly is.",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
3EC60741B7BF,"Yes i agree with churchill's statement for the role that failure and because he never loss the enthusiasm of to keep up and that happened with the role that consists of going from failure to failure but never loss the enthusiasm.

The role is something that consists in a good jod but you have to know how you use because if you don't know how you use your role is going to failure or if some people that you have don't know use that thing. But if that happend don't loss the enthusiasm because if you want that you role going up and make more money or others things, don't loss the enthusiasm and you have to study more about role for learn more and for that you role don't going failure because in you role you can do new things, and you can do jobs with others people that have role you can work with they like a group and work for a big company where the can pay you much money and with that you can do another company more big by yourself about role or if you want to you can do a different company that you like it you can do a better jod only you have to learn more about the job that you want to take always if you want to take a good job you have to study first before you take the job like when you study more about role because if you don't study more for different job you job is going to failure like the role always happend in jobs that you don't know use but never loss the enthusiasm if you like the role, or others things.

The enthusiasm is something like when do you like something like a better jobs, role, or others things that you like to do that's enthusiasm or when you like to do a good mechanic or a good doctor and you say i going to do this because i like it is my dream do a good doctor or a good mechanic or others things but that's the enthusiasm do something that you like to do and never loss the enthusiasm because if you loss the enthusiasm you never going to do anithing that you want or that you like don't loss the enthusiasm never do like Churchill's he never loss the enthusiasm because he want to keep up with the role and he like the role he study more and he learn more about role. This is my ideas and examples about this question about the role that you have to know how use the role and if you don't know use you role is going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.     ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0
3BD4B53512BD,"some people get in a good mood or something is happening that is happy. sometimes people just dont think about the bad mood they just want them to do be in a good mood.

people sometimes dont care about the mood or sometimes they want them to do something fun to be in a good mood. people should always be happy never sad,mad,bad mood. sometimes people get in a bad mood because when they wok up or when there mom get mad at them for thing they didt do and a lot of people are always sad. likely a lot of people always having a good attitude. wider why people do get mad a lot for nothing.

people should make other people happy when there in a bad mood or when they need help some people get bully a lot of this word they should help does people and try to make them happy and never one should be nice to other and tell people that you trust dont tell no one who is fake to you or something like that and its good if you tell your teacher for help if something is happening people should never be sad in this word god made this word so people can be happy when a slime face and be kind to people and never do bad stuff and be in a good mood. never do what people tell you what to do,be you believe in yourself do never give up in life. if people say that you cant do nothing dont be with them if there your friends because there are fake to you. dont be sad what people say,always do your best and get real people in your life. do good at school never be in a bad mood at school people can think its because of the teacher or its because you dont want to be at school because its boring.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
E6346D434004,"It is a most important thing to be yourself. At first pass, it would seem to be obvious that you would aspire to be yourself. But we all know of the pressures to please others as we grow up. First the pressure comes from your parents, then your young peers, on to teachers and bosses. You find yourself constantly trying to live up to the expectations of others and why not? It is usually a good things to follow the wishes of those who have raised you, and it is natural to conform to the ways of people who help you along the way. it is alot like osmosis. It is also expected that prescribed pathways are followed, in a way, to repay kindness and debts. As an example, parents pay for your education, including arts and sports activities so surely it makes sense that you would try to excel in those endeavours as a form of Thank you. The same goes for showing a good teacher or mentor that you understand their lesson and often end up developing further on the path they revealed and recommended.

However, at some point your own predictions and dreams emerge. Let them and pay attention to them as they will become your guide to your ultimate destiny. While showing respect for your parents and elders, start to forge your own identity. Those who truly love you will be on the sidelines cheering your every step. Consider he words of Dr. Seuss, ""Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't care''. I couldn't have said it any better.

Essentially, and ultimately, you don't have any choice in the decision about being yourself. Since the time of Socrates, and no doubt before, a predominant human instinct has been to know thyself. The problem for some people however is that they harbour the inner self and keep it separate from the self they display to the world. This predicament can eventually morph into a personality disorder if the gap between your inner person and public persona is too wide. Soon being in public will become a chore you will feel like a phony. you will probably end up living the life of the recluse. Not a good result for most people except the odd monk.

The best way to allow your inner self, that part of you that holds your real aspirations and dreams, to become what the world sees is to start cultivating the key aspects of those chracter traits. Start becoming that person in your mind and begin to feel this is yourtrue self soon actions will follow. You will begin to feel comfortable in your own skin. For example, if you want to become a musician then slowly tell people that you ""are planning a career in music"" and start acting that way. Surprisingly, this will start you help you as other people will begin to look at you in that light. Eventually they will tell others who are interested in the same path. Soon that will led to communications between you and a host of other like-minded people. Your network will expand and you will soon be part of a musically inclined community nurtured and growing professionally all the while gaining confidence in the new you.

Another way to look at ''finding'' yourself involves a more prosctive, less reflective path. Life is not about finding yourself ; Life is about creating yourself"".

This is the other side of the coin. Maybe our ""selves"" are like a blank slate waiting for someone to write the future. Maybe we should not dwell too much on ourselves. Too much soul searching can lead to a sort of paralysis an inertia brought on by excessive searching for the meaning.

I think we all instinctively know what we want to do it is just some of us are a little hesitant to breakout. But, it is the only way you will reduce anxiety and eventually find a sense of fulfillment. So just do it as the Nike ads encourage. Step into that real you and have some fun along the way. Be Yourself. Everyone else is taken. So, we need to keep this things into our selves that way we could improve our selves as the best human being in the world. No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

So, I totally agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson that ""To be yourself in a world is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
80DD7EE85BF7,"I disagree for adding one and a half of hour in school days. Because reason #1 is that we are in school for 8 hours doing work and other thing and we get tired and it's just to much forus kid's or grown ups.

Reason #2 is you don't have a lot of time to do your childhood things cause your in school for 9 hours and 35 mins.

For example you just cameout of school your tired you what have fun but then you got to do homework and that can take hours to finish your done but you can't go outside cause it's to dark and your parents won't let you cause of hours of school. That's reason #2.

Reason #3 is homework you always get home almost every single day doing some extra work and is can take hours to finish. For example you come out of school at 4:00 your tired but you got homework and then you finish your home for like 2 or 3 hoursof extra work but you can't do anything really fun like go out somewhere with freinds cause it's to late and dark. That's reason #3.

Reason #4 is a appointment you always come out school at 2:45 and your appointment is at 3:00 but you can't go cause you got extra hours in school i know you can leave early but waste you child or grown up learning time in school. That's reason #4.

I get it if yall school's set extra time in school just to make us smart,or have a good life,and a good job,but us kid's and adult's need time for are own self so this is all my reason and example's that I disagree for having extra time in school. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
AA1ED5376761,"Success is said to be hard with a negative attitude, but why should attitude define the destiny of a person? Life is full of surprises but with a good attitude you can overcome just about anything. A great attitude isn't obtained by many but it certainly isn't hard to get. All success in life leads back great attitude and awesome mentality. The Key to success is to have a positive attitude and mind set because the person with a positive attitude will gain a healthier life style, a better career, and money.

Positive attitude comes from a good mentality and when people have that they see life differently. People who have this characteristic usually don't stress as much because they change the negative to positive. They have patience and don't get irritated so easily or in other words they are unbothered by others. Giving up is never an option especially if it deals with something they love or a dream they have. Since they do not stress as much, don't let others get under their skin, and rarely give up they live healthier and happier.

Careers are a perfect example of the power of good attitude; If a doctor goes into work saying ""I'm not smart enough for this job."" Is it possible that his way of thinking limits the way he works? it may, because he will go on with his day giving 50 percent when he needs to give 100 percent. If he would've change the way he thought maybe to ""if i wasn't smart enough for this job i wouldn't have gone this far."" Now he would be giving 100 percent instead of 50 percent. Since he is giving 100 percent all the time it will make him stand out since he is not just another employee. Employers might just move him up to something more important or give him a raise.

Money is something worked and sweated for, and for those who have to work ten times harder than others generally fix their mentality and attitude. If achieving a goal in life is so hard, then why did most High school drop outs become something great? Not all but the ones who did succeed in life they were determined and had a positive attitude about struggles they encountered. Money is all over the place it just takes the right mind set and attitude to get it. Although money doesn't give you eternal happiness a good attitude will.

Attitude may not fix all of your problems but it sure does give your life a different route. Great minds all have something in common their mind set and attitude. Great attitude takes in life and makes them better. There are many keys in life there is one made for success and that's attitude. Three things that are there once you open the door is a better life style, better opportunities, and more money.  ",4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.0
68256AC96C72,"At a young age some students are determine to identify a career they want to do in the future by the time they enter high school. For example, their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career in life so they can be successful. Students should not commit to a career at a young age.

Committing to a career at a young age can cause students to have stress. For instance, some students are being pressured by their parents into finding a career before they go to high school and that can lean them into having stress. The younger students in elementary school think they know what they already want to do for a career in the future, but once they get older and enter high school they start to change their minds about the career they choose as a kid. There are some students that have a strong concern or eagerness that they wont be able to find a career they like before they enter high school or graduate form high school. All of this can later lead to a state of mental, emotional strain, anxiety, or they start think they wont be successful in life. Students might not know what they still want to do in the future since they're still young. For example, students have trouble trying to identify a career they want in life. Students shouldn't have to worry about what career they want since they're still young and they can later end up to stress. They should also try to focus on being just kids; then once they start to get older they can start to think what kind of career they want to do later in life.

In conclusion, i think students shouldn't commit to a career at a young age because of all the stress they might get they might not know what career they want in the future. While this may be true, others argue that students should commit to a career at a young age. This can later lead them into having a successful life if they start to study the careers the students want at a very young age. For instance, when students start to study a career they want, they can end up having a very successful job in their future. Students can also work in a long-term commitment in a particular profession. Committing to a career can lead to causing mental or emotional stress.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5
FB687C2C7D4B,"If you could go anywhere in the where in the world where would you go? If I was ever given the chance to visit anywhere in the world, I would choose to go visit Europe. Ever since I was a little girl I have dreamed about going to Europe and exploring it. All the articles and social media posts I have seen or read about this place make it seem as though it is the greatest place on Earth. If I ever get the opportunity to visit any place on Earth I would I would decently choose Europe. I would love to experience their culture and try new things while there. I would also go sight seeing and exploring every second I could.

The first thing I would do in Europe is try out European food. I would go to a small town or city and ask the locals where their favorite place to eat is and what it is that they like to order there. After eating I would go around the town I was in and talk to the locals about what it's like to live in a place like Europe. Another thing I would like to do while there is try out their fashion. I would go to different designers and ask them about the difference in the fashion from Europe to the one in the United States is. Lastly, since it is a special trip I would treat myself to a shopping spree.

The most important thing I would be doing while there, is going sight seeing to famous places. Firstly, I would go visit the notorious Mona Lisa I have been dying to see in real life. Secondly, I would go on a walk to visit the Eiffel Tower. While there I will take cute pictures to post on social media for memories. Lastly, I would visit a bunch of art museums and look at paintings sculptures for hours on end.

In conclusion, If could visit any place in the world I would visit Europe. Everything about this place is astonishing and I would one day like to enjoy that myself. Coming from a small city named Covington, it would be a huge change in scenery for me. I would love to experience their culture and try new things there while visiting. I would also like to go sight seeing and exploring every second I have a chance. Going to Europe will always be number one on my bucket list, so hopefully one day I can cross it off.",4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
392BCD798D37,"What people can give she or he own ideas? people need to express their ideas, don't be afraid because, all people has own ideas all peoples has her or she own ideas , they be continues and to express opinions, I think is very good idea have my own ideas because ,I can say my opinions, is not necessary to seek guidance from experts you can do it . is fine try to say your opinions but if you are afraid or panic you never be successful in your life. for me is most better people make their own decisions.

People to seek guidance from experts they never be success in the life, always they wanted help from the experts, spend their money people are rights, if they can say their own opinion will has more opportunities for looking a good work,

people express opinion in the future they will has a good work, if has a opinion they say it.

sometime other people are disagree with my opinion but I should be the people make their own decisions is to much better because that person can express their ideas and has most opportunities, looking for a good job. or sometime their own ideas be successful and they doing a company, but you can express your ideas and don't be afraid , you need to try and looking a good future for you and your family.

my conclusion is people give their own opinions they have more opportunities in any place they will go because in a work they want a people are decide. all people need to trying and do not be afraid.",2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
A7627F0E8E33,"When a problem occurs, do you try your best or do you simply not care? Problems are a common thing and happens to everyone, the real deal comes to how you will respond to it. An example to a problem is that you have a scholarship to a great university that is far away, but your family needs you to stay close and help them. Some things may seem impossible to fix but hard times bring the best out of you, you'll try hard to fix it. There are both big and small problems but a problem is a problem you can't prevent them from happening. You learn from your mistakes to do better and you always try what's best for you , it may lead to a better path, as Duke Ellington said ""a problem is a chance for you to do your best.""

Problems happen to everyone, the real deal comes to how you will respond to it. Many people take their time when they deal with something troubling, they all have their different strategies too. They all have one thing in common they do what they think is best for them. They try to see if it will help them and what they could use to an advantage to be better. you would never do something to hurt yourself on purpose, you will need to think things through to see the outcome. Sometimes things do not turn out how you want to be, and you learn more about the things you will do to make things easier.

There are times that problems involve more than one person, and won't effect you only but others as well. It can be friends, or family, it could even involve people you don't know.

An example is that you got a great scholarship to the university of your dreams, but your family doesn't want you going far away and need your help. your education is at risk, but your family needs your help. You'll have to see what outcome there is to both of the situations and what is better for your future. Not all problems have an easy choice but they bring out the best in you and help will help you in some way, they build your character.

Some problems may seem impossible to fix but hard times bring the best out of you, and you'll try to fix it. There are problems that make it seem that you can't handle it alone. There are people that can help you, you're never alone. Even if you try your best it may not be how you want it to be, there are others who will help guide you, to have a good outcome. All you need to do is stay focus and look forward, so that you can keep your head up. You never have to do anything alone, you might need the help of others and it's okay to do so.

There are both big and small problems but a problem is a problem you can't prevent them from happening. It happens to the best people and there is no way to stop problems from coming. It doesn't matter the size of a problem, you should never underestimate them. You have to try your best when a problem presents, sometimes what seems right can turn out very wrong. You need to think if others will be effected, you can't just ignore a problem sometimes it could become bigger. It is also a chance that you could show others that you know what you are doing, after analyzing a problem you do what is best.

You learn from your mistakes to do better and you always try what's best for you, it may lead to a better path, as Duke Ellington said ""a problem is a chance for you to do your best.""

No matter what you should always try your best, not only when a problem comes up. We should show our best when problems come up due to the fact that sometimes there are problems that can put you in danger or hurt you. You can't prevent problems from happening but you can have less you you do things correct the first time around. Some of these things will teach you lessons, maybe you did the wrong thing but you'll be wiser and know better. Everyone goes through something, tough problems can happen to anyone you just need to keep your head up and do what is right.",2.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
757C5E55BA96,"I think it is a good idea that people should ask for others peoples advice because they can learn extra info from them. Because if you tell multiple people for an advice they can get more opinions from people. They can also get help someone make a better choice. You might learn different opnions from alot of different people and they can give you alot of advice on what not to do and what you should do. Its smart because if people ask for other peoples opinions they will get more ideas and facts and what they should do next.

The second reasons why I think people should ask multiple questions to a variet of different people is because so they can get alot of responses and more answers to their questions. The more people ask for advice they will get multiple opinions. If I dont ask questions iill never get any responses or advices. So thast why I think people should ask for others peoples advice all the time.                                                                                                                                                                                              ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
93E62B4919A6,"People who value self-reliance are people that can make their own decisions. They know what to do when it comes to the important matters in life. They aren't dependent on other people when it comes to most things in life and know what to do to get past certain things. These people grow a lot mentally because they end up knowing a lot because they go through with the decisions themselves; they don't listen to other people and don't make their decisions based on what other people say.

Self-Reliant people know how to get through their important or ""life changing"" decisions. For Example: Buying your own house, getting married , and dropping out of school are all very important decisions that you and only you can make. They think through about what decision they are going to make. People that don't make their decisions on their own always depend on someone or something else, especially when they are very important. You can learn a lot from making important decisions by yourself and it can help you in the long run.

Self-Reliant people aren't dependent on other people and always follow their instincts. They know making your own decisions is better than being guided towards what decision to make. Being Independent also goes in the same category as making your own decision. You do everything by yourself when you are independent, all the decisions you've made has either had positives or negatives for your life, asking someone for their opinion is only going to make you more biased to that choice. People should make their own decisions based on what they want/need to do for their life.

Making your own decisions helps you grow mentally, every major decision you've made affects your life every day. Most people always seem to ask somebody for help on a very important decision,

while others just think about what they should do themselves. People should just follow their instincts, their gut feeling of what they want to do; they shouldn't listen to other peoples opinions. The people should always try to make their own decisions instead of always relying on the guidance of experts and authorities.",3.5,3.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.0
87E123466310,"Control

What you do in your life is your choice, you could choose to become a doctor, a teacher or an artist. Having a good mindset and working hard shows good character. ""Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it"" said John Lubbock, therefore you control what you do, who you hang out with but sometimes the environment around will say otherwise

Everyone has a voice one way or the other and is able to control what they do. Scientist have done test and have seen that 50% of teens smoke because their friends smoke so they can fit in. Teens are able to say no but they choose they wrong road. If you choose to hang out with people that aren't good for your health and mindset then they aren't people to stick around with. Looking after yourself is better than winding up somewhere you shouldn't be with the people you shouldn't be with. It has been proven that mom's all around the world are able to point out whose a true friend that cares for you and who isn't.

You have control on what do you or even think. Teen at Generic_School choose to skip class all the time , knowing they'll end up in trouble says Generic_Name in her article. Teens knowing this still choose to skip. They lose that control of thinking for themselves. Every time a teen even thinks about skipping it's bad character. Being mature and well behaved at school is good character. Every teen has control of what they do at school.

Others may say that the environment around you is what you show in yourself. According to Generic_Name article teens living in bad conditions can create bad characters when they grow up. Teens living in places that are broken down that aren't healthy living condition often end up in gangs and dropping out of school. Either then teens living in good home conditions they end up going to collage and having a good life. Teens everywhere can decade on what they do with their lives no matter where you live you can overcome it and be someone great in life.

People are able to choose what they do in life, what they think and who to surround them self with. "" Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it'. Wherever you come from you choose yourself to have a good character or not. Teens are able to say no to bad things that want to come into their lives and everyone kids,adults and teens have their voice and mind to say no and be a good person. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
11E9348F5072,"In this prompt we are going to talk,and choose if we accomplish more by doing more things in the world,or does inactivity also serve a purpose or not. We all have a different opinion when it comes to things like this choosing between something different. Well we actually do accomplish more if we do more things for an example say someone wants to become a doctor we go to collage, we do things,and we learn, after doing all that we all accomplish something because we all did something to succeed what we love. Therefore a reason why doing more makes a person accomplish something is because doing more,and learning more teaches someone things they never learned before. So by that we mean that once a person learns something they have never done before they start loving it and start doing it. Other reasons and examples why doing more is better is because when the person does more they have all the energy to do it which is honestly a good thing because once a person learns something that person just wants to go to collage,graduate, and succeed which is something we all want. Here is an example why it is that we study a lot and try to learn things it is because we want to grow up,succeed on what we love doing,and also to accomplish new things we have always wanted to try. When you start learning new things,and get the hang of it all everything will just become easier for someone,and also things they always wanted to do will just become easier for that person too. Another thing is that when we keep doing things it will just be done faster like it said in the prompt something Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" which is honestly facts we do get things done faster if we just keep doing it, if we just keep trying without stopping, and i mean yes taking breaks on important things is good because we all do need breaks at some point to be honest but also getting things done is better and once someone gets things done they feel really proud of themselves, all of us do because it is a good feeling to finish things that were hard,and stressful. Another good feeling is having nothing to do when you are accomplishing things,and succeeding too.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
7820048B53C8,"Dear principal,

You are changing school policy so student that have a C average can not participate in sports or other activities unless the students have at least a B average .I think that students that have a C average should at least have an extra class that they need help in so they can pull up their grades up so the students can participate in sports or activities. If the teachers of the student think that they are working hard to bring their grades up at least the principal should give the students 30 minutes of free time on the activities or sports they want to participate in.

The school should make a contract saying that students that have a C average cant participate in sports or activities. The parents ,teacher ,principal ,and the student should sign the contract .The students that don't even try to work hard to get a B average should stay an hour after school to catch up the work they have been missing. the students that don't recognized that what their doing is wrong and they don't get privileges like other students do.

sincerely, STUDENT_NAME

1-27-11",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
35D983476332,"Dear. Reader's

It's all my pleasure to be writing this answer, thank you for give me this opportunity to express my opinion and ideas based on my experiences. Even if my answer is agree or disagee; i believe that the life is short and you never know when is going to end. The first impression too but in this case we can know when is going to finish because is a big different between this two. I'm disagree with the statement that the first impressions are almost impossible to change, i believe that we can change the first impression but not in one second i'm gonna tell you some reason the i feel with my experiences that i want to know you.

First, ""the first impression the you receive is very important"" Well i'm not sure of that but is something that other poeple say, so we can think that for one moment maybe is true; because for some people is important the what other people think about them so put this case and the table and start think why base on my experience i""m not going to say that is true but i can give you one reason that i think. Well is depent the who is the person because if is a boy who you like you wanna receive a good impression but if is not pass the time you or him can change the impression because now you alredy know the person the boy the point is the time why? because the first impression is a second but also you can change pass on time.

Second, the impression is how you look like or the expression on your face good we find another point because is other impression the we can change and you gonna think how well this is a situation before one year ago i was talk with a person and she look in the first mad, but she wasn't mad the face of her was express mad but she wans't pas the time more and more my so my first impression was the she was mad now i think the oppossed of her

The time is the words more important in the life that we can stop or pass and also we can forget because his live in our life but the impression is something the we can forget the we can pass and something the can't lived in us because is something that we can change is something that we can move.

In conclusion everything is based on time and if you ask me that if is a possible change the first impression i'm gonna say yes because you never going to forgot the first impression the you receive from other person but you can also change later and your mind or in your background. Always we can change something thanks for everything.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
1B7B007D6E1C,"we acocomplish more if we are always doing something because of:we get more experience and skill by working, As we know more we work more perfect we get no matter it is a job or something else, In a job enterview they ask for more experience and skill in that field so we need get those skill by working and accomplishing more.

Doing something make us to be prepare for our future live, We might have a family in the future that we need to take care of them, We need money for a good house,a good car,and a good live, If a chef want to make a good food he need to work more to make it delicious if he do not the food will not be good.

The more we work the more beneficial it is, We make more money as we work, Live gets more esaier in the future, We will known as a hardworking guy not a useless one and it will show how we are facing toword our problems every problem slove by focusing on it not skip it.

It is not always about to work if we are stadying or going to get knonledge we are accomplishing, There is nothing better than more knowledge it is a big ocean that we can sail as much as we want, Live cannot be easy without knowledge so we have to be knowledgeable to get to that dream live, Now we have to work hard.

sometimes we need take a break for family,our self,and hobbies to get out of stresses, Taking a break makes us be full of energy for more work and dudies, We connot work constantly over and over so we might take a break.",2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
48BBB107A05C,"Should people be able to make their own decisions or should people find some help?

As we know, sometimes we just dont take bad decisions at work, we also take bad decisions in our personal life, and it is not just because you felt it was right. Every day for some reason your feelings are involve so that makes that your ideology of your decisions change, and lets talk about meet someone or get a new job opportunity, every little detail change the way that you think, feel, talk, and yes the way you make decisions and that is okay and normal.

Make our own decisions is one of the things that characterize us as a humans, our necessity to express what we feel, what we wish, is the thing that have show us what are we capable of make, do, learn, built, invent, all the things that you can imagine in here are because humanity express their thoughts and make their own decisions.

Otherwise you are autonomous and you do not need that someone tells you what to do all the time, but do not take my point wrong, I am not saying you can do whatever you want because sometimes you would need some help and I can give you some examples where and how sometimes you would need help and your decisions and choices can not be just yours.

It can be in a court, your job, school or when you are not an adult, as you can see that there are some places, situations and times you can not decide for you own.

I believe we can make our owns decisions because I know if we do everything according to the rules that are around us, we can really choose our life and take responsibilities for that.

In fact, you are free to take your own decisions and be responsible for them(when you choose wrong) because it does not mater if you take a wrong decision, it matter that if you have the opportunity to try and figure what you want, it is okay to be wrong sometimes and also is wonderful to be right, the important thing is that you can choose because deserve to have the right to build your life, be wrong, learn and be free.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
7F4706C105DE,"Do you agree with Churchill statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success? Yes because in order for you to be successful you have to fail a couple of times. For an example when

I was 10 years old I lived in Miami Florida and I played football. Every kid I went up against they were faster than me and better and I got mad because I was not good enough. One day the coach pulled me after practice and told me what's up this is not the kid I saw play football in Miami Beach. He then matched me up with the best receiver he had and I still didn't surprise him with that kid he saw on the beach.

After a while of training and training back to back coach then matched us up again now I was faster and better it got to the point where I was his star receiver that season we finished 10-0. We went to playoffs and finished 5-0 coach was really happy in 10 years of coaching he had never achieved something like that with his football team. But it was the final game everything changed the team we went up against had stronger and bigger players they first took out are running back with a neck injury so that left me playing two positions. We were up 21-7 its second half 2 minutes before half and next thing you know I had both tight ends and safety hit me at the same time both tight ends hit me in my knee and I was done. What hurt the most was seeing my coach not being able to concentrate he had then even left the special team coach run the plays all because coach went to check on me.

He asked the doctors was I okay and they said he is done he cant play neither can he walk. After that coach went outside mad he was really mad and he then saw the score board it said 28-7. We were still up than theres the halftime coach talks to the players even I did so and they go back on the field we are on the 40 yard line and next thing you know boom are star quarter back is hit. He is not getting up his spine was broken and he could not even move after that coach knew we lost the game but coach did not know that i was feeling better without coach knowing i wen't back on the field the score is 28-28 theres 30 second left and the ball is on the 50 yard line. Coach starts to see the formation he than knew I was on the field and he tried calling timeout but there was no time out left coach knew I could throw but the team did not know my friend Ricky is running he cuts back and runs back up the field as fast as he can I throw the ball he catches it on the 10 yard line and he gets the touchdown coach than ran on the field and picked me up.

Coach then said how did u manage to hold in all the pain after being hit like that I told him the same way my brother managed to cover me when there was a drive by and he was shot 9 times. Coach knows I came from a rough spot in Miami especially the projects. Now i am 17 and i learned from my passed i learned from being a failure for you to be able to be great you gotta fail no matter what nobody is perfect. My brothers always told me if you eat okay now you will eat better tomorrow it is a saying just about being able to actually grind and stay humble. sometimes in life things will not always be easy because that is just the way things are and i personally will be better from yesterday.

How do you think all the star people from now and days have so much money they were not good from the jump they failed a lot in life nothing will never come easy to be great you gotta beat the great. Football players dont just get to be star just like that they gotta earn it. Rappers dont get to get platinum just like that they gotta make good songs. Everything in life is a sacrifice you gotta humble yourself and be able to go out and get it because nothing will be bought to you. you can feed a horse but you cant force them to eat it. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
306796D0279E,"I disagree with this statement because people can show the oppositive to the attitude they showed before. And they can show no a good way at the first time for some good reasons; maybe they are shy, or have had bad experiences with a good group of people.

Sometimes the people can think a person who saw for the firsrt time and saw he or she needed help and the person didn't help is because the person did't want to help but is because the person is no extrovertive and think is no a good idea to ask.

Sometimes a person says ""Hi"" with a good tone to a person who saw for the for the first time and the person respons with no a good tone and the happens the same thing with other person, then the person no is kind like before, and when see other person doubt if say ""Hi"" with a good tone, and when they are meeting each other the other person relize the person was so kind before.

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6D9728CB8711,"School should add one and a half hour to school each day. because student will get to learn more,student can get more help from teachers,also student can do more sports.

First of all,student will learn more if school board add one and a half hour to their school day. probably student will learn more because their classes will be extended. Also they can get more time in each class,so they can get more information and learn more about each subject. Also they will have the opportunity to do more activity in class. And learn how to work with others. And listen to different opinions and get to a conclusion,For example if some student are good in a activity and others are not that good. They can have the time to work as a group and explained what they are good at and what they need more help, so they all can help each other. They will also have time to work by them self. And passing there SOL.

Secondly, student can get more help from teachers. It will benefit all the student in the school, because some student need more help and different subjects. So they can have the time to go to their teachers and get some help. for example some student needs help in Math,English,civic etc. But some student are better in that subjects. So they can used one and a half hour to do another period. In that period student can go to the classes that they need more help. It will be better for some student because each student are different. And learn in a different ways . It does not mean that others are smart. It means that some student learn better in small groups. Some student learn more faster than others. Extending school it will help them get their grades up,By retaking quizzes and test and finish unfinished work. they can get help in homework too because homework is like practice,they can practice what they learn in class and get a better score in quizzes and tests

Finally,student can have the time to do more sports. With some of their schoolmates. They can have different sports. For example soccer,basketball,baseball,kickball and more sports..Student can make a vote, for what sports they will like to be in. They can learn new skills and get better by playing that sport. and get more healthy because they are playing a sport. because a big percent of student used a lot of their technology at home and don't do any sports. By extending school it can motive them,by doing some sports with their friends. They can play a lot of sports and see which sport they prefer to play,and see in which sport they are good at. They can do more activity for example Art, photographing for people that like to be creative.

In conclusion extending school it will benefit student in different ways. for example getting help from their teacher so they can get better in that subject and get good grades,Getting more time in class,They can get more information. Finally playing sports,they can be healthy and have a hobby that they like to do after all the information that they had learn during the day,some people like to do different activity like Art photographing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
A9A6B5A288DC,"Should some people believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem, even if the work is not the student's best effort. They believe that students must be self-confident in order to learn. I agree with students must be self confident because its better to grow in life then stay in the same place over and over again. If a student does not believe in what he or she can do then that student will not be able to compete things in that student's life time. Also a builds a great mindset for the student to keep moving forward. Students should have self-esteem for a successful life.

If a student doesn't believe in what he or she can do then that student will not be able to compete things in that student's life time. Student that doesn't think that their capable of doing more that student will stay the same and would not be able to grow, also that student self-esteem will lower down. Another thing a student should getting moving up and high than he or she can do is there are no limits in what that person can do if the student knows that they would be able to do what they can do they can easily grow by practicing more and believing they can do it. So by not believing in what he or she can do that will affect what will happen later in life, never stop believing in what he or she can do as a student.

Building a great mindset for the student to keep moving forward. To have a good self-esteem the student will have to set up goals to show to their self that that student can do more. Another thing after writing down their goals is which one will they do first or which one is do he or she want to compete first. With all the choices to choose like for example: goals, friends or family that support, or how will is the student want to succeed, because even if they don't try as hard as they know how to it could happen to anyone in life that shouldn't make a student to stop trying it should make them feel like okay it wasn't my best my first time he or she can get the second time because a student should always chase what they are willing to have. Building a great mindset for the student to keep moving forward is good for a student to have a great self-esteem. The reason students should be praising for their self-esteem is, because no students should say no to even if it's not their best work the first time everyone should have a chance to have a great self-esteem and to keep growing in life.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
EDFFA0E4D88C,"Should school weeks consist on four days with days of 10 hours of school ? on my opinion there is no point on doing that, people that work is going to miss hours at work because of this, students are going to use that extra day to not study and be home doing nothing, and people instead of using electronics at school are going to use them more at home.

Some students work after school, they need time to go home and get ready for work and with school days being longer it would be pointless to work, you will be making 3 or 4 hours a day, some students,specially on senior year, need to pay bills or make money for the future to pay college. on my opinion the best thing to do is to keep the regular five days at school, and to keep working at least six hours a day.

Teachers and staff members are thinking that students are going home and they will do their homework or study, but what they dont think is that some people need help with school work, or they feel more comfortable studying at school, now with that less day they will be more students failing projects and exams, for example if a students used to study at the library after school he is not going to be able because it is going to be late by the time he gets out of school, they should keep the normal schedule for all the students that are getting benefits from it

People wants to save energy and money by taking away a day of school, but they dont think that students will be going home to use their cellphones, watch TV, play video games, and a lot of more things that consume energy, if they stay at school they are not going to be able to use their cellphones or any other electronic device, they will just use it during breaks and lunch, so that is less time than being home a whole extra day.

For all this reasons a think that it would be better for students to keep with the regular schedule and keep coming to school everyday, for the regular hours, in that case they will not miss any hours at work, they will have more time to study and to do homework at school, and they will not use their electronic devices as much as they would at home, even though the idea of saving money and electricity its such a good idea some students dont understand that and they will not do it at home.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
6AB2B78CE0AF,"One topic that is frequently debated is technology is a positive or negative effects on people's lives. Technology is a positive effect because mostly everything is online. I believe that technology is good because books are online, get talk to other people through a laptop or a smart phone, and can write it on a notepad or word document. Everyone thinks technology is bad cause of the things they see on the news.

Not everyone has time to go to the bookstore and find the book there trying to look for. All books are online now and makes it an easier and faster. When you go on a road trip and nothing to do, you can read on your smart phone or any devices. Parents don't get a lot of time to relax and read a book, but on road trip they can while their children are sleeping in the back. Online books are easy to carry because it's on their smart phones. No more looking for your book when you lost it. Plus online books doesn't loose your spot, gives you an option to put a bookmark on the page you want to save, and if you don't know a word it will give you the definition and translate in another language.

Some people lives in another country or states and it's hard to communicate over a letter or phone call. Using a tablet, laptop, or anything devices that has a camera can do video chat. You can't write a letter and wait for 5-7 days or probably more for a responds. Email is one of the way to send a rough draft or a final draft. Other people can also edit or help you on it. Also on video chat you can call up to how many people and all the time you want. People complain how they can't meet up because they already have plans for other things, but they can just set up a time and day and they can do from everywhere they are at.

Technology is going to upgrade is the near future. Right now everything is at a start point, everyone thinks it's fun to have a tablet, laptop, smart phone, or headphones. Some people like to show when they get something new, but they have to take care of when they get it because technology are expensive. Just think about it in the future more technology will come and no more paper and pencil because everything will be on technology.

Most people like that technology is growing because it's better. Even kids have tablets for learning their ABC's and 123's. In schools, they sometimes provide tablets and laptop for students because they want them to learn better and makes sure they have something to do their work on. Sttudents likes technology because they can research what they need for their project or homework. Also they can watch videos how to do something or explain it better.

Technology is a good way to communicate with or without speaking. . There's many ways to get to everything with no issues or problems. I think technology will be a big part of people's live soon. People should get used to all the technology right now because sooner or later it will become bigger. Everyone will miss paper and pencil, but its a safe and better way to get through everyone. Also it's a good way to communicate with other people faster.  ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
15BDA0989B56,"When you trying to make something different every day, is the greatest accomplishment.

I'm agree about Emerson's Statement !

Well, when you be yourself you every moment want to be something else,something new to know how capacity you have to be yourself. When you thinking in yourself your days be more easy, fun, you enjoy yourself in a world because you are only in the world nobody is like you, you are the only who make the better decisions in your life and is something constantly trying to make you something else because is the most and greatest accomplishment that you have is like a gift that your received and you need to care.

When you constantly trying to make you something you learn something that you don't know; something that surprise you because you never think that you can do, and you say I can do that thing and I want to experiment more things spontaneous because is better when that things have spontaneous because left better and so cool and impressive to you. Experiment more things new help you to be better every moment, to that these for you can helped an others persons when they need our help, when meet with one situation where somebody need help motivate that he or she can do it nothing is impossible, because a lot of peoples in the world don't believe in their self because all that time suffrage bullying they thing that they don't serve for nothing they believe in that bad words, is for these reasons that one situation appear in front of our eyes helped, spoke with love,respect,be courteous because when you spoke with one persons that have these problems where suffrage bullying, bad words that others peoples say they feel miserable have hatred,resentment and all of times they don't want to talk, you need or our need to going to these peoples and spoke with love, love is one of the most good gun that we have is the most important in that around world. A lot of peoples suffrage depression, anxieties, contempt, and racism, and to much peoples lose their lives because they don't support all that bad words,contempt and racism they suicide about that bad situation that they pass, is not necessary to arrive to these situation when we can change that world, stop to that bullying,racism we need to stay up, help these peoples and to these form too we be better persons these help too to our lives to see all that things different and get a solution because nothing is impossible when you purpose to me a good and better person.

Is time to care yourself, is time to listen your heart, yours words, and be better for yourself not for that others peoples, is time to return to be you for make that things that you want for you,don't make things for that others peoples see, want at have happy peoples, made because you want to continue with you life, dreams, expectations, careers, and because these make that you feel happy, interesting, confident, sure, cute, fun, and enjoy your victory. We need to get that goods words specific when it's for important persons because they want that better things for you, you don't need to get the bad words that you need to put in the trash so to these form that bad words don't affect you in nothing in your life. Then when you need to be something don't tell to everybody because a lot of time that peoples have envious yours victories then they get a angry things because have zealous that you did it. The important things spoke with that persons that really is important to you that person helped you to celebrate later your victory with you.

Make your things individuality because that work that you doing left good and you have your owns opinions,strategies,problems,situation,statements,solutions you work better when you work individually, like these work on me, when a work individuality I have my owns ideas because when a work in groups I feel that a can't put all my ideas a need to put all that ideas together and them we need to decide for one of the ideas the most interesting and important ideas, for me is better when you work individuality.

Trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplished, bec a use you can learn and make a new thing,because every day our want to change the world with all bad expectations, etc we need to care whatever word that we spoke to don't hurt nobody with any word all persons in all of world needed be different because a lot kids in these time what make whatever they want don't want to make that parents say that is something that we need to change.

Yourself is something that need to care because these defined what type of people you are, the values that you have, is something delicate and important; You need to have persons that helped you to be better every moment in your life,person who import good things on you, how stay with you in (bad & good) moments that person you want the best for you, who was happy when you get the victories because that is that things that you received and help you to make that same things with that person,we need to know who really is our friend.

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Friend is who really want to support you how really wants good things for you that friends is that care you to do the true and better things.

Friend is not who don't help you, how don't care that important things for you that not be friends. All need to see very true who is really a friend.

Yourself is something happiness is like a emotional thing that you can share with your family, friend, that important persons for you, in yourself you feel a comfortable with you body because a lot of persons don't feel good with their body and suffrage for these. When you are sure with yourself and believe and yourself you feel happy,emotion, is something that we need to care a lot for no feel bad when a person who don't want to our things that we are doing. When you believe in yourself all around you is happy every moment,hour,minute,second. But most important for me is when I have a most important person in my life God my Lord because he love me before a born like to be....",2.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
4F75DF4CEBE9,"This topic brings in a lot of question and concerns like '' Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it'?.

What are you suppose to think of when this question gets asked from you, well people don't really have a an answers for you,So i think that people get controlled by each other because of power. Some people think they got it all cause they have control over certain things then most people dont't have and they take advantage of them so they think its right for them to do what they can or cannot do to them. People dont need other people to show them how to belong or what they need in there life its not fair for others to pick what they want to do. People want what other people have to fit in or to roll along with them,But other people dont like that feelings cause they think they look cool, new cloths, new shoes, new bags etc they get it all and dont get me wrong people go for that some just dont. You only get to create your own self but you choose to follow others because thats the new trend and you want to fit in with what they offer to you its like a shiny new toy you can resist because then you wont be like other people.

Influences are what catches people attention they want to persuade you into something or speak to you in matter that you dont even realize in till later. They get to change you because they know how to do it they speak in way they just gets your attention and you fall for it and next thing you know you want to be like them,talk like them,eat where they go, where they visit and who they are friends with. Those people what to see what they can get from you and how beyond you can take things people crave the attention they want what other people have,So they try to much to become them and they dont even realize in till it to late and not wanna go back. I get the point why they all do that to show how much things get done,how you want it,what needs to be done or what needs to happen. People go to their influences to hear what they already know but they dont want to be alone about it cause then people wont find them to cool to hang with. Most people think they need it to survive because they never really let themselves answer for them and they dont do anything about its like a drug to them they can't resist of it.

You are your own person you just dont know how to be yourself or you think they wont approve of you,So now you probably think if you do what other people do and act like them you will think your getting notice by other people that makes you feel good and you continue to do so. So you lost yourself and cant even recognize yourself because you went to far now you cant even choices what you wanna do because people expect that from you now you let them choice your own life. They have power you don't control yourself they do you let people get the best from you and you let them have it because you didn't want to be weird and now things you aint always easy so now you gotta live with it. Trying to impress someone isnt you,its just wrong influences make you do anything you pick from good or bad and it goes one way you decide if you want that for you not what other people think and how they can get to you so quick that you do it and it all goes down hill from there. Make your future about what you think is best for you and only you stop making it what you what other people to view you as do you.

Influences may get you places but are they the right ones though or is it something i just want you to hear. Making the right choice is great you decide what your gonna do,how your gonna live your life,and be yourself,But choice tp make the wrong choice and now people control you they get to what they want because they went for it and you cant get it back any more. People like to make a little stop for themselves inside your head so they can persuade you into anything and get what they want so they do by telling you this is the greatest thing every its the most amazing thing i did. Dont be fooled by that its all in your head you want to fit in i get it but dont take it to far where even your own close people tell you that you have change .So many things are gonna be asked from you and not even you will know how to answer because you let other people control you and talk for you that it became a things that you cant even get out of. It's better if you just stay in your lane and go for the good influences and not the bad type you create your own story not other people.

Wrong to right is always the choice being a good influence is great you teach people the right way not the bad type. So many people choose bad and not good they want to fit in so bad thats its going bad for them picking the good is always right. You dont need to impress people when you got yourself and no shame for you just do what is asked and make a great thing happen. Right chooses bring you more things in life then bad getting good people in your life is always the answer a good influence can get you to a lot of things in life and you won't even notice in till it has happened. A chance to pick a good life then a bad one i'll take it bad influences bring you no where its a joke if you pick the wrong influence make a good pick. So yes creating your own life is better and deciding on good influence then to have a life that will bring hell on you, yes i will always do so. Good infleuence is always the answer not things wrong about that and will always be my choice for you be the right infleunce that other need to hear from you speak up do whats right for you and yourself make a better you and let other people hear you speak you bring goood things into other's people's life not just yours. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
DE962FEDCD9E,"Being a successful person in life require some essential things. Successful person is someone who achieve goals in life and make dreams true. People who are preising for a good work will feel great and ready to start a new project to progress in life. People who have a success life can be because they haved teachers who praising they for doing outstanding school's project so, this inspirated they to try the best they can and be a successful person in their future. However somepeople believe praising a student's work to build self-steem is a good idea nevertheless, I think the source of true self-steem is archievement because, praising students who did a great job will feel amazing and also, it helps to have a better self-steem and students will have the ambition to improve their skills and archieve something to their future.

Praising students who did a great job will feel amazing and also, it helps to have a better self-steem. Students feel great when someone is praising them so, this help they to feel better and happy. Positive personalities become to a good self-steem also, this make a better environment. Students with a good self-steem will be doing a better job and will make true the things their love. Praising great students can help to other students to try to do a better job like that great student and be praising like they. Praising students who did a great job will be benefitial for the entire classroom becoming a positive environment and making the students more active to do a better job to be praising like an outstanding student and this help they to progress and do things better.

students will have the ambition to improve their skills and archieve someting to their future. The students in a classroom will want to be outstanding students so they will trying the best they can and start to progressing to reach that goal. Students with a good self-steem and smartness will want to have a great future and the ambition to be a better student every day. Praising students help they to improve their skills and doing their best. Students who are praising for a great job will help they to improve teir skills and do better jobs every day and become outstanding students.

In conclution, the source of true self-steem is archievement because when a great student is praising will have the ambition to improve every day more to become a better student. My suggestion is to start praising great students to make they and others to feel the ambition to be better every day and create a smart, competitive and happy environment.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
483EE18C996B,"As I'm part of Generic_City community, the majority of students have been changing the opinions about the transformation of our cafeteria foods that will occur. Recently the cafeteria have decided to become a new healthier school lunch menu by eliminating some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods and providing a completely new meats. This change is a good idea, I'am certain this action was taken to awareness as students to eat healthier also to build a efficient body .

Eating healthier will make people aware of the fact that they must change their meats and life routine, Also it encourages them to practice sports as the athletes students and at some point they will prefer so much to take care of their health by dieting, being familiar with the vegetables, fruits, and milk. And going to the gym constantly on purpose to build a beautiful body.

In addition, Eating unhealthier causes the disperses and the isolation when we became adults. Furthermore, this strategic will reduce the percentage of getting cancers and dangerous diseases in the future due to lack of knowledge of nutrition. Being fat makes our life more difficult imperfection, and tiny. It is so necessary to be flexible and active in our life. the spastics says that many people die young cause of heart attack that occurred from the unhealthy food such as the poison ingredients.

My primary reason that i support this action is the important of eating healthy. it increases our intelligence the students will notice their progress in school by paying more attention in the classroom. Also, it benefices our beauty of body by making the person looks much better and attractive. and it makes us feel so much powerful in our life.

In conclusion, Many students are affirmative with this action, whereas there are many students criticize it too.

i'am going to support highly this idea by making them aware of its importance.        ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
72913948CDAA,"Positive Life

Do you have to be positive attitude to have success in the life? The answer for this question yes, because in the life everyone should be positive, and successful in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive. Their are a lot of reason's and evidence to have good life. The most important one is be positive because being positive make the life better. For example, when the person are positive that will make the person have a lot of friends, if the person are positive that makes him/her happy, and the person will pass all his/her test with good score or in his/her job be the smarter one.

First, in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive, because when the person positive that will makes him/her have a lot of friends. For example, Generic_Name always smiling and positive. So, everyone in her school loved her and they want to be friends with her. So, now she is positive girl's with a lot of friend's. Being positive makes the life more better. As well as, if the person are positive he/she will always be happy.

Second, in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive, because that help the person to pass all his/her test with good score or in their job to be the smarter one. For example, Generic_Name student in high school, and after school he works. Even if he has a lot of stuff to do in his school, and with his job, but he is always positive person, he helps anyone need any help, and he always get the highest score in his test. Also he is the good person in his job. Positive person will have the most beautiful life and will live with peace.

Some people may argue that to try to be a positive person because the world we born on sometimes have a lot of problems. That is true because the world looks like the mountain sometimes hard to claim it, and the life looks the same usually it's hard to be happy and positive because sometimes their is a problem or something happened makes you feel sad, and negative, and makes you feel that you hate your life, but everyone have to try to be positive, and to love his/her own life because if the person always negative that will makes him/her sick, sad, mad, and complicate. However, to be positive that will protect you from a lot of problems gonna happened to you.

To summery,

in order to be happy, and intelligent everyone must be positive. Just be positive to get the most beautiful life ever. Overall, if anyone want to be positive is not the hard work it's easy, and again relax, and get the good breath, try to lose all the negative ideas. Lastly, enjoy with the positive life. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
E21D14227555,"A wise man once said ''the usage of technology has had an impact on humans contact for centuries''.The usage of technology has had a positive impact with human contact because people can see what others are doing for fun and it can result in finding people that are from other countries to become your friend.

Sense technology has improved through out the 20th centuries people argue that technology has caused limitations on human contact but that is far from being right. People have been brought closer thanks to the invention of the internet and it wouldn't have happened if technology wasn't improved. The internet has opened a whole new world of opportunities and awesome people to meet. People can laugh at a funny mems together and create groups where their you can talk about what ever you want. People can even ask others if they would like to be friends with you. Having the internet,people become more confident in being their true self. People can see how much fun a family is having and it can persuade them to go and try the place and experience the fun for themselves.

With technology people have learned how to do things by watching videos of someone else doing it or by calling a friend. Video games have also has let to people having to talk on the mic and being able to comunicate with each other. People can also build their sense of being a leader as they play a game they can ask people to saty with each other. Thanks to technology people can have online teachers and people who would do online courses say for instance if you didnt learn a lesson you can go online and find a somone who would eplain to you or tell you how to solve a problem.

Some may argue,that technology has a negative impact on human contact because it distract others from the real world. How ever,people still have human to human contact its just evolving and becoming something different. In conclusion,technology has had a positive impact over these years and i will keep improving an the people will have better ways to have human contact.       ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
B39F335086FB,"Positive attitude Agree Or Desagree

Positive attitude is the key to keep going well in the life and make a great future, believe in yourself that you are doing something well and you feel proud about it, is the most important thing that you are doing, because you had a positive attitude to do it, these are many reasons to agree about positive attitude.

First, one reason to agree about positive attitude is believe in yourself. However, she try never give up about her math class and she believe in herself that with positive attitude she can get an A and will be the best in her class, she aproved that with positive attitude all is possible in the life.

Second, woking in team show us that they use positive attitude working together to win any sport game, as a tool to be successful in the life and became famous in the future like great players game like Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, and Jordan, but the most important is when they are playing in the field they show importance in the game and convince us to believe in positive attitude to be successful in the future.

Anotherwise is considered that many people believe in attitude positive because is the best way that they follow to be successful,

actually a few people didn't believe in positive attitude, they don't think in their future and they give up easy, when it is the best way to follow and became a successful person.

In conclusion, positive attitude is the key to be a successful person changing our future and always believe in our self that's the most important thing that we have to do. show to others people that positive attitude is the best way to follow.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
8C3993109983,"PROMPT

Asking multiple people can give you more ideas and it could be a lot smarter asking for advice. Therefore you were writing a main idea and your main idea was just the hunted house and if you go and ask people for a good spooky main ideas they can come up with main ideas you have not even thought about. However if you got a group and ask them to come up with ideas every one will many ideas and you can just figure out which idea is the best.

Manner-better choices

It can sometimes be hard if someone is trying to make a better choice. Like if your being bad and your teacher gave you an advice and the advice was to do all your work and to behave and your grade will increase. Your going to have to make a better choice to behave or not behave. And if you cant pick you can just go and ask other people if you should start behaving more in class. One of the guys says one day your going to become a leader one day and he will have to be a good person.

Tone- expiring

Seeking multiple options can help you in a good way because it can give you more ideas,something you never thought about, something thats new that came to mind, making a better choice, more details that come to mind.

Therefor you were doing a group project. The teacher would want you to form a group because when your doing your project. The other students that are working with you on the class project they can come up with new details about the project. And you project will get completed fast that you will have more ideas you wanted to add for the project. Like if your were doing a project about any animal your group would pick the animal they know mostly about. Then you come up with a idea and you think its not a good idea. Then just ask you group and they will tell you if your idea is good and add it on the project.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
46EF1F716C52,"Did you know that some teachers/educators want year round of school. My decision for this topic would be, I want year round of school. I feel it would benefit students and teachers to actually focus and maintain on school work. Some students would disagree with this, but there are some supportive reasons why this would benefit the both.

Reasoning number one, Most students take a 3 to 4 month summer break. If there was year round schools it would 3 to 4 week summer break, a longer winter break, and one week off for winter and fall time. This would benefit students to be able to retain lots of amounts of information. Also students would have an extra break for the one week off in the fall time.

Reasoning number two, Students who take more than a 2 month break will most likely forget what they have been taught in school. That adds more work to teachers because they would have to re teach the information back to the students, and it would take longer for the students to remember the information. Students who would do year round of school would be able to remember the information that they were taught and it would be less work for teachers for them to re teach it.

Last reasoning, After when students come back for a break most teachers have to re teach what they taught the students before break. Also normally when students come back from long breaks some teachers start giving tests or even quizzes. Most students don't study while they are on break, so they are likely not able to recieve a good grade on the test and quizzes. But with year round school the students would be able to obtain the information and less likely fto orgot what they have been taught before Summer, Spring or Winter break.

Overall, It just seems students and teachers would benefit a lot more with school being year round. The teachers would have less to re teach and students can obtain more information. Also it would help studnets do better when it comes to taking to tests or quizzes. So it would be a win win for everybody. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
F6886170FAA3,"I agree with first impressions are almost impossible to change, because this is one of the things that only happend one time, well it can happend again, but not at the same way than the first one. So you can not change it because that is what you felt at the moment when you experienced this feeling in your life and you will not want to change it because you liked what you felt and you might probably want to repeat it again.

Then it is like when you see someone on the street or in the city that is wearing completely different clothe or extrange clothes than you or than everybody around you, and he or she inmediatly is catching everybody's attention, because probably they never have seen someone like them before or they not normally used to see people wearin like that. Sometimes people might probably start talking about them like given own opinions, or some people just judge them because of their dreasing, others just are corious because they might probably want to know something about this people because they or their culture seem interested to them and the want to experience sort of activities with this people or have fun with them.

Constantly people experience this kind of impressions, because they normally are around so many people like their family, their friends, or even with people they not even not at all. So that make them to experienced this type of circunstances and because of that, is that they are exposed to experience this feelings at any time or anywhere. It do not matter because you going to see so many things and those things are going make you feel this way.

Inmediatly it do not matter where you go or where you are with, you are going to experience this, even with yourself bacause this always happend and you will want to go and to be talking of that with your friends or you might be probably get a clue and put it like an example and your life. Sometimes first impressions help you to be even better in life, because you will be thinking about it and you might start making something different on you because you saw something special on someone which you got first impression.

In conclusion first impressions normally will be impossible to change, bacause it is unique and you can not change that. You might can change the way you think of it and probably if you experience it again it will not be the same because you will know what it is already, and it will be like it is not making sense and you will wondering the reason why is this happening. Sometimes first impressions will help you to understand people or their kind of life they have, it do not matter the race because people have something different something that we might need.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
A72A4397F9F5,"Does the success consist of going through failure?

Yes, I am agree with this quote.

As we all know been successful is not easy. Some people say that hard things make hard soldiers; Therefore, failure is part of the success, but that does not make it easy for us; Why? Because no one likes the idea of suffer in order to be successful in life. As a matter of facts; Failure help us to become who we really want to be or who we are suppose to be, but no all of us get the chance to feel successful or not even see any progress; yet some people choose to give up, instead of fight for a better life; A life with success. But do we loss enthusiasm during our way to success? yes we do!

It is OK to loss enthusiasm in our way to success; that is showing every body else, and you as well that we are humans, and we can get tire sometimes; But what is not OK is to give up, because you will showing everybody that you are weak.

By showing us how difficult life can get, and tough us that you are the only one who choose to continue or to give up in your life; Oprah Winfred would be a great overcoming example. Oprah had suffer a lot since she was a child; yet she decided to continue with her life. Even though it was not easy to act like nothing happened, but she knew what king of person she wanted to be. Therefore, she decided to fight for those things she always wanted; instead of been crying all her life. Do not doubt that the sky is the limit even for the suffering. Oprah was a determinate woman; a woman who wanted to be successful. Yet everybody else was saying that she would not be able to accomplish what she wanted; instead of supporting her they were feeling sorry for her, and not doing anything. Therefore, she became more stronger than she had ever been, and now she is showing as that even after everything she has been through you can smile with placer and success.

On the other hand we have immigrants; those people who fight day by day to get no even what they want, but what they need. As an immigrant; success is the biggest word we all are working to accomplish, some people do not even believe they can accomplish more than what they have accomplished already; Even though everything we have accomplished until this day is because of failure; because each morning we decided to go out a fight to get something else than just failure. Eugenio Dervez is an example of overcoming in a different country, language, and culture. He is an inspire person for immigrant people in the USA. Eugenio has been proving us that dreams can come true. He showed us that everything is possible, you just need to believe in yourself, and trust that you are capable of so much more. Even though some people could be selfish even in your own family; Instead of been worry about others opinion worry about your future; so one day you can be successful, too.

Finally, in my experience I have fail so many times; but I am sure that any of those times I have fail will not stop me from what I want to do or who I want to be. Somehow my family does not have faith in me; and even though that if I fail I have no one to support me; I am afraid. However I know that I am capable of so much more, and I will fight until the end of this. Also, I always wanted to show everyone that they were wrong about me that I am capable as everyone else. Yet everybody was judging me, I decided to teach myself how do become a better version of me. I will continue fighting for myself. As you should do!

In conclusion, in order to success we have to go from failure to failure. As I was said before; there are so many people that have been showing us that everything is possible. Instead of been afraid for our mistakes we need to learn from them, so we can success in our life. Therefore, we have to think about the future that we want and start working on it, so we can be the people we want to be; the people our parents want us to be. By fighting this battles day by day we are not just creating a better country for ourselves, but a better country for our families. Remember that hard battles make hard soldiers.                                                                                                              ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
ABC59FCA6150,"In some schools think that attend classes at home is most better ;The fifty percent of the schools think that attend classes at home is not productivity. Some people might say that taking classes at home can't benefit students because when their need help or have some question any teachers can be there ,taking classes at home can benefit students because their can have more time to sleep and their don't need to take a bus or walk.

In the first place ,attend classes at home can't benefit students because when their need help or have some question any teachers can be there. For example , I have a cousin who take classes at home but he never know anything because no body can help him when he have a question. While, always I tell him that if he have a problem I can help him or another option is that he don't taking classes at home anymore. Also he don't make friends because he do not go to the schools. I choose this option because a lot of student waste their time taking classes at home. I am agree that attend classes at home not have benefit.

likewise, attend classes at home can benefit students because their can sleep more. In my case, if a have the opportunity to take classes at home i'm happy because I love sleep a lot. For example,the twenty-five of the student get classes at home because don't like to make a friends or their believe that their can do the work along. The classes start early so in this way they do not have to wake up early. Also, if people sleep more their can be more healthy this is the reason because student like to take classes at home to be more healthy. I choose this option because is important remember that many students want to sleep more or get extra time because their have a job and is hard to them do two thing at the same time .For this reason many student choose take classes at home.

In addition,attend classes at home can benefit because student don't need to take bus or walk. For example,some student do not have to take bus because are more near to the school. In my case, I have to walk from my home to my schools sixteenth minutes every single day. when winter come and is so cold outside it's not good to walk in this temperature. while , this is the reason because students take classes at home although sometime can't benefit. Another reasons is that some students have to take the public buses so is take classes at home don't have to take bus. I choose this reason because many people forget that many time is not easy for the students do that.

Finally,everything have advantage and disadvantage because some schools think that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home and some schools are disagree. Also some students work a lot so their can benefit with this opportunity. Although, attend classes at home is not the same thing like go to schools and receive help from teachers, students, etc. In addition, if some schools offer this opportunity have to think about it and look the best option.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
64A8183557F7,"Should students graduate in three years?

Some school offer programs that allow students to graduate in three years. Students should graduate in three years because, they have more time planing what they want to do, they have more time to work and save money for college and they have more time to spend time with their family. To have ideas who they can do during that year.

Students should graduate from High school in three years because, some students don't know what career they want or they don't know if work or continue studying. In that year they can think and choose what they want. One of my friends graduated the last year of school and she stay at home because she doesn't know what career choose, so she just stay at home because she doesn't know what to study and can't find a job yet.

Some students after four years in High School, they take one year more to think and relax at home. That is why i think is a good idea just three years of High School. They can take that year to work and save money for college, if they want to. They can just start work to adapt to their new life or new thing that are going to learn. In a fact, student can graduate in three years of High School because is better for them. I think is better because it help those student that are more than eighteen to graduate not too old.

Some people think that students should not graduate from High school in three years because, they have less time, but they are wrong because, students can take the most important classes or they can take classes in the evenings. Some students take courses during the summers. Some students want to graduate early because have some goals that they want to complete. In the future there can be online classes for those who need extra classes.

In conclusion, graduate from High school in three years is a good idea because, students can start college or the work force one year early. Students have more time to search a good college and to prepare their thing. This is good for parents too because, they can go to the college that their son or daughter wants to go.  ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
75C950F8EA18,"Sucsses is the common word that we hear every day, and everyone want to became successful in their life.

The first step of a person toward sucsses is school, and it is the golden part of our life, and to make it more enjoyable and comfortable for a student, school and teachers let us do some educational and exciting drama role plays, do a funny science experiment, and let them play their favorite instrument.

Today, we got some talented actors,comedians, actresses and etc, but they were also students in a time and were sitting on the chairs that we are sitting now. They did their best, try hard, participate in role plays in school, and now we can see were are they now. We can also reach there, and a best way to reach there is to participate in role plays in school, and improve our self from now. However, participating in role play is really fun and enjoyable. Role playing make us improve our daring to stand on podium and represent our self, and improve our emotions. By doing role play we can make people happy, and making someone happy is the biggest joy.

The technology and science has developed a lot and experiments are done day by day, and no one wants to stop these experiments. So for that now we want students to learn how to do experiments, and to make them more attractive toward science, we give them some fun and safe experiments such as:making rainbow in air, mixing colors or maybe disappearing coin, which increases their attention and focus on science, and it is actually fun to do these, and our big reason to do this is they are the future.

Every student has got a hide talent in their self such as; some students can play music, may draw, or maybe athletic, but these talents are not hidden for always these talents will get appeared sometime. The most popular talent among students is music. Because music directly touch your heart, and make you focus on it. Music have a lots of types it could be happy, sad, angry and etc, and it make you feel like that. We hear music everywhere on TV, in music class,and etc. When we hear music we get our emotions out and make our mind light, and we enjoy that.

At last, I think school is a place of learning, if someone want to learn something he always enjoy everyclass and get something learn from it. We should always enjoy at school and learn something. Because school is our main resourse of learning.                                      ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
D4490C9F73B9,"It has been said first impressions are almost impossible to change, but I'm not agree with it because people always change and the first impression doesn't define who you are.

The people always change to good or bad. For example, I met someone that in the first time I saw him he was mad, he never smiled, and he was very shy. And at the pass of the days he was changing, he started to smile, and he wasn't mad like the first time I saw him. Now my impression changes and now I can see that he's different and the first impression I had about him changed at all. Another example could be that in the first days of classes your teacher is nice, doesn't give you homeworks, and he is patient with the students. However, He is changing every day. Now he's always mad, now he gives you a lot of homework, and he's yelling in class. At this time, the first impression you had about the teacher totally changed because he's not the nice teacher that you met in the first days of classes.

The first impression doesn't define who you are because first impression is like a front of a book and the front of the book is nothing comparable to the that is inside of the book. For example, I have some friends that told me that the first time they saw me they didn't like me because they says that I'm always mad and I was a boy that don't talk with anybody just with my friends and they told me that they never thinked that I'll be their friend, but they were knowing me and they saw that I was different from their perspective and from the first time I met them, so they changed their first impression about me and their point of view about my personality. Another example, is that some people thinks that you're like they think just because they have a bad first impression about you. I mean sometimes we don't have good days and we are not like always. Let's go to suppose that in those days you met a person and you're having a bad day, you're mad, and with problems, so that person will think you're like that because that person will have a bad impression about you, but if that person have the time to know you better, he will see that you're not like he thinks you are just because the first impression about you is bad. If he is knowing you better, he will change his impression about you compare to the first time.

Clearly, the first impression always is going to change because one impression doesn't define my personality and how I am and I can change that impression. It have to be like more than two impressions to know a person because it will be hard to changes those impresions.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
5A89482533D9,"The tenchnology had negative and positive effects on peple's lives, becuase not all people know how to use corretly. One of he positeve affects that tenchnology had is that pepole can get their onw ustuff without contacts with others people. But also this have negative effects on people lives, For examlpe had the limitation on humans contacts.

The limitation on humas contacts is one of the biges problem in the society . Every time the tenchonogy advance more and faster, and every time it is more involved in our life , changing the dynamismics of society constlanty.

This also afect people in many ways it can be said that it is a threat to humanity because is make them dependent.

For example people that how like to do all their work at home they do not like to contacts with others, people they just have contact with their self and on my opinion that is not a good way,because you need to had contacts with the other peoples to understand how to do the work or any question that they have.

People had developed tenchnology as an aid to civilize ,adquiere more knowledge ,expende their social relationships But some people misuse it and abuse it by killing and creating threats to humanity so the world could be in crisis.

In comclution , The tenchnology had a negative effect on the society just for people that who know how to use corretly or because they think that tenchnology is everyting and they can do everyting with the tenchnology .",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F72B0C4DB804,"In today's world we accomplish many things by being active, and doing them. If we would like to achieve or accomplish something we have to be dedicated and actually try not just be inactive because this awesome life we have if full of amazing experiences.

Many of us go to high school, or have jobs that we to attend and we are expected to try our best which would benefit us. Being inactive or not doing something right could lead to getting fired or failing in school which is why inactivity is known for negative results. The way we accomplish is not on how smart we are, or what people tell us to do is on if we are willing to try and keep on doing it. In the other hand inactivity may give you the time to rest at home, catch up on things but it wouldn't get you nowhere because your not being productive. For example, if your trying to get a job theres always competition for that position, the manager might want to pick the other person simply because his resume, he has involve himself in way more things like clubs and also because his ability of proving hes way better than the other person. Which is why its all about doing something so you can succeed in life rather than just sitting there and then later having the time to have fun.

Lastly, the best feeling of accomplishing something is the reward, or enjoying what you have earned. For example, I am expected to do many things around the house like cleaning, feeding the dog, and even babysitting. Even though sometimes I dont want to do it, I end up accomplishing more than what I have to do because I am the type of person that likes being known for accomplishing things around the house and then having to enjoy that feeling of my parents being proud of me. Being inactive wouldn't result in a positive result to many people including me because you arent gaining anything from it. Im sure everyone loves that deep feeling when you have done something right and you get something out of it. Not many people know how wonderful it is if we are always doing something and how it can really benefit you, even on the smallest things.

In conclusion, people should consider always doing something even if it's something small because anyone can tell you being inactive isnt the way to live life or be. After all, the accomplishments you earned will really show off in the long run thanks to always doing something.       ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
83165647126E,"One way to improve student achievement is to create a homework club. I think making a homework club is wonderful for students a homework club can help students improve their grades,have more free time,

less tired from school, and grateful to turn to that and get help from teachers and students at the same time.

First, of all, establishing a homework club is creative because it helps students improve their grades. Students get more work done when teachers and other students are helping them. They also, get to study more and don't have to worry about failing the test. Lets say a student is having difficulties on a question on their homework. A student can stay after school and get help with the questions they have trouble with or needs help with.

Also, students have more free time after school. Students have the ability to spend time with their family and friends, and go places. A homework club sounds like a club i would join because after i come home i'd relax or go out or hangout with some friends. if i joined a club like that i'd be happy because i wouln't be the only one who struggles on work and we could help each other out on work we don't understand.

Furthermore, A homework club helps students less tired. They don't need to worry their grades being bad because they had help from teachers and students. They get to sleep more and wake up the very next day and get ready for school. Students should have it easy because theses days students go through so much in life. Just imagine what their going through right now.

Next, Homework clubs and help students on many different things but at least they learn something new. Everyday Students these day try and try the best they can but they lose hope because they feel like they can't do anything. I

believe every student has the courage to get something they done just like that.

Finally, I think creating a homework club is great for the students because it helps students improve their grades, give them more free time when they get home, less tired from school, and grateful that they have this club.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
2B9C5C3BB7B9,"Studies have shown that there is a 25% higher passing rate from students that attend to online classes. If it wasn't for the advance tecnology the world has today there wouldn't be things like online schools. Now and days everyone has tecnology ether in their pockets due to there cell phones or at home with their laptop's , computer's , gaming system's and their smart tv's.

Now with this new technology the school systems' have taken advantage by making online classes, Therefore students are able to attend classes form the comfort of there own home. Some schools are given the students the option to choose between online classes or going to normal school classes.

Some would say that online classes would not benefit students i'd say they are wrong. These are some reasons i think that online classes are better and benefit's way more than normal school classes, because there are no distractions in online classes. In online classes students dont have to deal with things like waking up early, people , and much more. I had a cousin that took online classes and what i saw she was able to start when she was free she'd finish in two hours or less, Then the program would let her know when she'd finish the leason of the day. She was a teen mom and when she found out how easy taken online classes were she got support from the family as she finished with the help of online classes and her family she got her life together.

The people that say that online classes aren't beneficail might not have gone through what 80% of people have gone through. Here' an example in regular school classes there are distractions everywhere like friends, other class mates, teachers, aslo the fear of getting bullied. When someone has friends in class they much rather talk to them then to pay attenion in class. When in class you might no peolpe and it may get into your head which would give you another distracion. Now with a student that is in online classes won't have to worry about those issuses.

Even the simple things could affect your ability to be able to learn like what you eat. If you dont eat anything during the day you get hungry and that becomes a distracion. In most schools they serve horrible food with that students feel sick after eating. now a benefit with having classes online people can make food at home. After an heathly and amazing lunch they are ready to learn and too pay attention.

Not only is things like food vary inportant but time is another one. Due to bad habbits people go to sleep late and then they have two hours of sleep and going to school. Once class starts they fall asleep and dont learn anything. Since schools start early makes it wrose for the ones who go to sleep late at night. The lack of sleep affects the student mentally and physically, With a student that is in the online class can start when ever there free.

Last but not least what most of the students fear the most is bullying. In normal schools studies have shown that 80% of students have been bullied. That would mean if there were a table of ten students

8 out of those 10 students where bullied. Many people fear of getting bullied since what it was done to many students through out the years. What it dose is it makes school not feel safe for them and then they want to stop going. Now with online classes students shall not fear in getting bullied since they would take there classes in there house.

In conclusion i believe that online classes are the best and have the most benefits due to all the examples i've given. From lunch, time, distrctions and bullies those are the reasons students have a hard time to focuse in regular school classes. A huge thanks to the new tecnology for being able to help us learn without the struggle and fear. What i saw my cousin go though i can say online is the best piont blank. I've given all tmy examples and details also personal storys on the benefits of online school that is all i have to offer fairwell.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
0AD69388300B,"One topic that is frequently debated today is whether students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Some people taking classes from home is more helpful. They feel like they have more time to do extra activities throughout the day. I believe that going to school is better because you get to experience real world, you get make friends, and you get to enjoy all the school activities.

First reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to experience the real world. When you go to school you have to wake up early to get ready and make it on time to school, in the other hand when you are home schooled you get to wake up at whatever time and still do your work, that is not experiencing the real world because life it is not always going to be like that. School makes you experience the real world by so many ways. When you are at school you work in groups with other people and that is getting you ready for when you grow up and have to work with other people at your job.

Second reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to make friends. When going to school you get to interact with people and make new friends, in the other hand when you are at home you do not interact with anyone it is only you by yourself. Having friends is really good, they can help with what they can. At school you can ask your friends for help in a subject when you do not understand something.

Third reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to enjoy all the school activities. School activities are one of the favorite things about school that students like. If you are home schooled you do not get to enjoy them and have fun with your friends. When going to school you get to enjoy senior night, school dances, and extra curricular activies, which are super fun.

As you have read, I believe that going to school is better than taking your classes from home because you get to experience real world, you get make friends, and you get to enjoy all the school activities. School teaches you most of the things that you know and need in life at the end of the day. On that day we are going to realize on why we need school so much.                           ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
15FD5B635B50,"Did you know 67 percent of people talk to more than one person for advice. They do that because different people might have different views of the situation. Although some people experienced the situation. The advice might be useful for other people too. It can help them agree with the choice or decision they will make.

One reason why some people might ask more than one person for advice is people might have different views of the situation. Some people will have an idea of what to do and some people won't. Some people might tell you to do wrong things. Some people might not know what your going through therefore they will give you bad advice. Some people will know what they are doing so they will give you good advice.

Secondly why people ask more than one person is some people have experienced it or gone through it. They might know what will happen. They might know what you will see and go though during the experience because they probably gone through it.

Finally why people ask more than one person is to make sure that their doing it right or successfully. To make sure that they know what they are doing. To ask their opinions to see if they are thing as you are. To see if you agree with them. They might have a lot in common with with about the situation.

In conclusion why people ask multiple people for their opinions is to see their points of view and to make sure of what you are doing. The people you ask may have experienced it the thing they are going through",3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
DDAA14DE7D11,"They should be able to work with each other they can do this program so that the schools have new students. If new students are having difficult time in this school,classes,people then they should send someone to help them out a little. Everyone had some hard time getting used to the school being shy in all, they get the other older students to assist the younger ones. Programs that pairs older with younger, some younger kids gets used to a new school thats hard for them, if they have trouble in classes. the older and younger kids could be able to work with each others.

It's hard getting used to a new school for other people seeing new people,new classes getting to know other people,making new friends, and everyone gives time for the school. For some people it could be easy for the others really hard whether it's elementary, middle , high school thats hard getting ti know the school. Say we get a bad grade and they try so hard to get the perfected score. But they studied so hard to get a good grade. So they assist someone.

So the schools created these things to help other students if they are having troubles with there grades, their classes, assist the students get there grades up so they can get better and better. They help each others for reasons to get a good grade. Its good that each schools are doing this to help pther students. They can get a school a chance make new friends get better in school and then they could help other students to get good grades this is a good program for the other students. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
593E2802E27C,"Do you really think student are going to learn just sitting on their vidoeo game? The issue that the studenrs are going to come across is that they are not getting the help they need and they are not even smart enough. Stiudents studying at home is not something that should be allowed anywhere, although yes school is boring and there is nothing to do, but we should be blessed to have a free public school.

Other places around the world parents/gardians have to pay so much money that it is just redicouls and the majority of students don't go to school because they don't have the funds for it.

Home school should not be around, because the students are taking the bafit of the home and most of the home school student don't graduate or finish high school because they are too busy being home doing all the unimportant things when they should be in school getting work done and hopefully graduating. In case students do take the online schooling they should at least have someone monter them and see the progress they have done every wee or two, this way it is going to lower the mount for students that don't graduate.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
54AC60510DC3,"Dear Districts School:

I am writing to express my support for the proposal to require that students can finish high school in three years. I am in favor of this proposal for two reasons.

One reason I am in favor that students can finish high school in three years is because some students they don't be able to take elective class and they don't have to waste their time to take another class. Most students can have more time to think and choose what career they want to continue to study. Since, they would like to go to the college and finish their career and get better job in their future.

Another reason I am in favor of this offer is because students can have their opportunity to start to work more and save their money to continue to study. However, some students they don't have family or helper that can help to them to continue to study. Although, students need to work hard to graduate more early, but they have to keep this opportunity that this programs offer for them.

Therefore, because this programs offer opportunity for students that want to finish their high school more early and if they want to continue to study they can take their time to work. I am agree with this proposal of this programs that students can finish their high school in three years. Thank you for taking my support.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name    ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
7333B4549006,"Conserving energy and resources is very benifical for human life and nature. Human damage many nature things while making energy and resources for their daily use. For example deforestation, use of water to make electricity, which can decrease the ammount of aquatic animals and water on the earth. Some buisness have adopted the idea of a four-day work week so they can conserve energy and resources. A four-day work week can also effect on thier buisness and put them in loss but it depends on them how they manage their work in four days. But Should schools follow this model by extending the school day two hours and make a four day school week? In my opinion school shouldn't follow this model. student's already have five- day school week which sometime seems very short, when students have lot of work to do and they need more help of teachers. In a month there are some federal holidays in weekdays, Which make a five- day school week more short. Extending the school day two hour and adopted a four-day work week have many disadavtages. It can put bad impact on students study and on thier grades, they will spend their weekend more with friends not with books, Students may spend their times on computer games and on phones. So, four-day school week will effect somewhere in student life. It's better to keep the five-days school week for students goods and for their better education.

Every student study hard in school to get better grades in all classes. Student's always try to learn more from their teachers and do their best in class. But a short week can a put bad impact on their study and their grades will go down. For example when students have an extra time in their classes, they mostly spend it with thier teachers and asking them questions so they can get answers in a specific way. But what if they don't have time in class or teacher's don't have time for student's. If a teacher has a short time to teach soemthing. They will teach in a very fast or a different way to students. Some student's may not get everything in class, and their class performance will go down and it impact on their grades. It's very important for a teacher to spend a time with their students and ask them about their problems in classes, and also for a students it's very important to share their problems with teacher so, they can find a way to solve the problems. It can only happens when student and teacher both have time in class to discuss. so the Four-day week can make a distance between a teacher and a student.

Second, Friendship is a very important thing in every person life, Friendship with a good friend can tell you the path of your success. Spending time with friends is a good habbit. But it doesn't mean that you have to spend you al free time with friends. Almost every studnt spend their weekends with their freinds and they dont care about school study. Even we spend our one school holidays with friends and forget about study. what if we have three days off in a week. Do we spend that time with our books? the answers is no we cannot spend time with books on weekends. We need to spend our times with books and the schhol is the only place where we can learn something and soend times with the books. For example Last week we had an five days off from school and i didn't study in that week and i forgot to complete an project i got bad grades on that class. i spent my time with my friends and i didn't know the meaning of study in that time that's why i got bad grade in that class. But when i have regular week of school i always complete my work first so i can keep my grades up. More school holiday's will give more tension to student that's why they didn't study at home and they would like to study at school. A regular school week is much better than four-day week of school because in a one day we can learn a lot from our teachers at school.

In this century every single person is using technology. Students are using more technolgy than others, spending time on computer and on phones isn't bad thing but you also have to spend some time with other activites like sports, cultural activites. But children doesn't want to do this and they play games on phones and on computers. For exaample I have a younger who's fourteen year old. Whenever he arrived at home from school, the first thing he do is get out his Laptop from his school bag and start playing games with his friends on online group so you can easily estimate that how many school student playing that game on computer and on phones on weekends and on off days. Playing game on wekends and on holidays can effect you and your studies and gives you a bad grades. It's better to be in school than on computer games, so we can learn something new. A four-day school week can make a big difference in student's school life.

At the end, I would say that if school will follow the model by extending school and a four-day school week. It can develop a big difference in student education. Students come to school for learning, sometime they get bored from school. But if school make this rule for student the student will be happy with this but in future they will understand that how wrong it is to make a school week shorter without getting anything and just stayed at home. From more school hours and with regular days student can learn something more and keep their grades up.

They will spend their more times with books and paying attention on the study not games or electronic. So the Four-day schhol week will not work for the school it may only work for the buisness but not for the school. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
5902D762C891,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing? my opinions students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, sometime students doesn't have time when students free they will be done online class or homework, test,assessment. some students doesn't have parents so,they need to work and make money pay for rent and food. some time they will be sick and they won't attend class. some time students take action and going to visiting some place they will be attend online classes. now every area social online. Students use phone they will looking for YouTube,and they learn some think there video. when students doing online classes attend if they didn't know that they will be taping the Google and students get some information.

First, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, sometime students doesn't have time when students free they will be done there homework,test, assessment. some word students doesn't understand but they will be taping on the phone and translation from another languish or they will be looking for dictionary. where students doesn't matter because they will be doing online class any area, any place. example:-1. students traveling to bus workplace,rest time, talk to another person. many parent think students does,t leading any think at home they are always use the phone and play game, taxing masses,talk to another person said parent, But not like that one because they will leading some think there. student taxing another person students learning to spell correct. when student talk to friend the will learn to correct tone.

Second, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because,some students doesn't have parents so, they need to work and make money pay for rent and food. Students work a lot so,students not attend classes. i know how will be going to schools they leaning a lot. when students not understand teacher enplane every think and explain math. at schools have time what time students enter the class what time go to next class and what time lunch every think teacher make time table. students follow the rule. some students it's fine this rule some students it's not find this rule. So, students at home take online classes they will be make a time table. Schools have teacher to learn and at home we have friend,brother and sister every body teach them. if students does't have a family they will call the friend and talk and discourse to the project and homework. My be they doing go to Google and taping problem sentence and students gets some answer. Students learn to fast looking for video.

Third, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, some time students will be sick and students won't attend classes. if that time students have online classes students doing homework and project,assessment at hospital and at home. Students sitting in the hospital they are boring if students have some attend class they are doing some online classes. And they students have time going to fast. Students attend classes finish they doing some plan. But, students doesn't to make plant January is to rarely to know this information because, students plan after depend school on there teacher and consular. And summer , winter vacation too and there plane my be change. So, students,would benefit from being able to attend classes from at home.

Finally, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home because, now every area social online. So, some time students take vacation and going to visiting some place and they will be attend onion classes. students use of cellphone with at home and work traveling time so students attend online classes. schools have five day a week a class so students want to spent time with family. students want to go to vacation with family looking for new place. students want to all the time free. they don't want stay one place. When students will be go to new place students mind fresh and they think they will be doing every thing. So online classes should benefit for students. When student mind fresh there mind new think they learn new word. So students active doing every thing and students tell there friends and they will be decide go to there pace. There are learn for social and active physic subject.

In conclusion, students should be benefit from being able to attend classes from home now every area social online so, use of cellphone and computer,lop tap with doing attend the classes at home. we are looking for video and talk with friend,we are learn some think there video. if students have online classes students make some plan going out side with family and friends and students doing to attend online classes. Now students very smarts because students attend online classes and students no depend any body all.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
402CAB074577,"In some districts, teenagers that are in high school take courses in the evenings or during the summer in order to graduate in three years instead of four years.

Students who take the three years program do not have elective courses and have to study harder than others.

I think it is an unconscious idea to graduate in only three years instead of four. In fact, I strongly disagree with the purpose of that program.

To begin with, students who decide to study during evenings and summer will be constantly overwhelmed.

Because the academic level is more intense in colleges, they will tend to quit when they enter college and start working without their college degrees.

For example, one of my friend graduated last year after only 3 years of high school.

He used to stay late at school because of his extra courses.

Last summer, he started college.

After only two months, he started giving up by going to work at some restaurants rather than going to his classes.

I had a conversation with him last month.

He assumed that he stressed himself over the past three years and now he can not do it anymore.

Based on his experience, I realized that grinding to graduate in only three years will help some students finish high school earlier than the others, but it will not take them further.

In addition, students who decide to graduate with the program of three years and go to college or work usually lose track of their social life.

Because they dedicate their entire time on studying, they do not have time to enjoy their life and have good memories with people around them.

For instance, a few years ago, my older sister who decided to graduate with the program of three years in high school lost track of her social life.

She used to go to school every single day including the week-ends.

She was combining that tough program with her part-time job.

I could literally stay at least three days without seeing her despite the fact that we lived in the same house.

When she finally graduated and went to an out state college, it was worse because she used to answer my messages every month instead of every day.

We lost any type of affinity that we had because of that program.

It was also hurtful to see that at the end it was not worth it because she gave up after two years of college.

Obviously, the program of graduation in three years has a negative effect.

However, some say that it is an advantage that people should consider because it will help them start their career one year earlier.

I respect their point of view but I believe that the traditional graduation after 4 years is essential because students will have time to be mature before getting into the most challenging part of life.

Therefore, I still strongly disagree with that idea of graduating in three years.

In conclusion, the traditional graduation after four years in high school is crucial and we should stick to it.

Because high school is where teenagers grow in their social life, no one should break the pattern by trying to graduate earlier.

In order to protect teenagers'social life and help them grow adequately during their adolescence, I urge the authorities to outlaw the program that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of four. ",4.5,4.0,4.5,5.0,4.0,4.0
064423D845B1,"are first impressions almost impossible to change?

Some impressions that i have meet, don't change and stay the same as i meet them with time.

Some impressions don't change because for example, their character, their bad past, their sad past and their bad style of life. Some first impressions are hard to change, but some people don't think the same because most people use to change thir first impression a lot with the time. And also, some people think the first impression is almost impossible to change because is the key that is most important in most cases, when you meeting someone, interviewing for a job and showing your values; if you didn't showed a good impression at first time, you missed it. most when that person is living a too good style of life, bad style of life or a bad character is hard to change the first time impression. In the future some first impressions that doesn't change to good, will not help you to figure out works, friends or reverse. In conclusion first impressions are a little hard to change,but it changes over time.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
F9C298BF7CE5,"I agree with this prompt that positive attitude is the key to success because, with positive attitude it gets a person where they want to be in life. However with negative attitude you will never get anywhere at all, it will make a person lose confident, also would make you give up right there on the spot which means you gave up your a quitter. Then soon turn into a really bad habit that can't be stopped. Attitude is very important, and the way you use it can really affect the success that your trying to reach and to others ,its also very easy to just lose it all in less than a heart beat. I believe positive attuide is the key to success because it motivates a person to do good or better, spreads positvity to others who really need it,and makes you learn from your mistake because no one is perfect.

How can positive attitude motivate you to do good? well ya see when your having that energy that makes you believe you can do anything, or that anything is possible that's motivation for you to keep trying and embracing that positively well make a person stand out. By doing that it makes a person feel good about themselfs and motivates us to keeping that same energy. This is why it's important just by your attitude can have a huge impact on your success and how you use it is very important. By motivating your self, and others themselves will be motivated which is a really good thing. It's like your helping others out one of the first things to do to become successful , to help each other out and having a lot of patients is all in that positive attuide. This plays many key roles in the real world and will make a huge difference as well. An example, walking in for an interview being positive at all costs and respectful shows signs that your interested therefore you would have a possibility of getting hired and can go from there you will be a very successful person. I know everyone is successful in there own ways but there are limits and attitude plays a huge role in that.

spreading positively to others is another important topic because these people might not be doing so well but you can always help change that for a person. By boosting their confident to make them happy comes from positive attuide because in life, theres no time to be playing games there's very little time to accomplish your success before it's over and soon to be regretted. Also in encouraging others will make you extremely happy that right there will get you somewhere in the future and it will be good. most jobs in this life style today sometimes go based of skills and etc. But Mostly look into a great positive attitude, there are a lot of benefits to this in reality being skillful and useful. When something doesn't go as planned, keep trying bring that positive attitude forward never give up it's not too late to change. Taking a test and having it being extremely hard when given negative attuide you will fail and face the consequences but doing the opposite you would be much more relaxed,and will boost that confident up into keep trying because life is full of mistakes you have to push and keep trying now that's what being successful is almost about. Albert enstin did he give up? No right? and look at where hes at he became one of the most successful person ever same with Bill Gates and Mark Zurkrbuirg when you keep going you will see the results so keep pushing and one day I guarantee you will be a great role model or even better. Just remember always keep that positive attuide and keep trying think about the good and not bad and you will have the key to success.

learning from your mistakes is another key attuide to have, people have to understand that when you learn its OK to fail and get back up from it thats why you learn from them for a reason. Having positive attitude in life helps you grow as person to understand, and in the long run it will important. When doing so, you will just keep growing,and having good support from yourself or others. think about businesses to be in a business its all about that positive attuide and character that's what makes you learn from your mistakes and to keep growing. In a business there's a lot of up's and down's with negative attuide it will only make it worst but when your in the right state of mind there are choices to make that you might not like but it is part of life,in a business you need to support one another.

In conclusion having a positive attitude is the key success in life, without it how will you know what you've accomplished along the way. There are many ways to have a key to success but the most important one is having positive attitude. And this will benefit your life even more,attitude is energy and showing off the wrong kind of energy will be consequences and will not get anyone anywhere in life. This is very important for each an other it's not very hard to be positive you just have to be in the right state of mind. This shows how much attitude can really change things it shows how important this is. I believe positive attuide is the key to success because it motivates a person to do good or better, spreads positvity to others who really need it,and makes you learn from your mistake because no one is perfect.     ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
ED8E7F6A56DD,"Opportunity to Graduate Early

Some school districts offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. The programs include some activities that can be complete during the three years, taking place in summer or after school. Student also cannot take elective classes, they need to take the necessaries to be able to graduate with all the requirements. This programs give a lot of opportunities for students. This is a good idea for student to finish high school in three and enter to college or the work force one year early because they will be able to be educate younger and earn time.

Students have a lot of labor opportunities in jobs if they are able to finish their education early and being younger. For example, to work in a company; normally the company employer wants to have young employees, but at the same time, employees with experience. If students finished early they education they can begin to work earning experience and skills. Having a positive result for their capacities and opportunities for be selected or contract to the jobs. Also young people have more physical resistance than elder people, in this way they can permanence working more time and harder. This kind of opportunities are benefits for their future employments.

Earn time it is important for every person and more important for students. For example, they can accomplish college early. If student finish high school in three years they can begin go to college one year early. In this way they can begin their preparation for the career they choose to study and finish it to be a person educate and have a stable employment. Save and earn time forming part of this programs help the students to have a better future with a good education.

There is a lot of people that are disagree about the programs that allow high school student to graduate in three years. Some points of view of this people are that student should have fun in summer instead to go to school. Also they say that student should not stay after school, they should take advantage of their time to focus on other activities or working. However, student should be allow to form part of this programs because it is give beneficial opportunities for their education. Benefits in jobs and ingress early to college.

There are some school programs that give students the change to graduate in three years and not in the normal four years. Students should use this programs because it is have a lot of beneficial possibilities to take advance. Advance to finish their education younger to have better opportunities in jobs. Advance to earn time, finish their education, and have a career early. Be part of this programs is the best idea for students that want to improve them self.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
56AC4BE71C2F,"If weather or not students should or should not attend class from home by online video conferencing . I think in my opinion students should do that and work from home , for example if one day you are feeling sick but you want to attend school and get all your work done that will be one method . Another example will be if you are out of town and you still need to get work your done , the perfect way will be doing it online. Lets say if I wanna study at home and do my work it will be better I will get my work done , wouldnt be distracting at all and feel much conformable in my opinion others might think it is better to go to school. I honestly feel much better doing work at home then being school, if you need help or anything just email the teacher. Another example will be getting to do all the work from doing it in bed but yet still doing your work from home should be an option or be required . In conclusion I say that students should be attending classes from home and it should be an option so they could still get there class work done.                                                                      ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
CE54FF437FFC,"Sometime in life , if we dont try new stuff, we will never succeed. The author, Ralph waldo Emerson wrote,"" Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow"", and i agree with him.

Sometimes in life to succeed , you have to be passioned.

If you are passioned, you will be better at everything that you do, also, we have to be passioned to look for new stuff that you will like to know more about and learn about it.

If you want to grow in life , you can't be scared,

sometimes for being scared of learning or asking a question, we miss big opportunities and stay stuck, also, dont be scared of what other people think about you.

Other people might say that if you are good in life right now , why would you want to learn something new?, and you have tell them that you want succeed in life,be better person, not like the average people that dont do nothing to be better in life.

Many times to grow and succeed in life, we have to try new things, we cant be stuck in the same thing for our whole entire life. The statement that Ralph waldo Emerson wrote, is very true and i agree with him, if we dont try new stuff , we wont grow in life. we have to be more passioned of our life and start looking for new stuff to learn, and stop being scared of learning because we are missing big opportunities.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
E9947D032E7B,"What is the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world? Today some people think the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world is doing, they favorite things and they feel proud to be like you want. In other hand, when you love yourself or if you value who are you in this world nobody can change yourself, as your accomplishment is to be better in this world and your best accomplishment is your goal, Because you accomplishment guide your future, you love how you are and never give up in your accomplishment.

People in day the greats accomplishment, it's to be better everyday, in make happy yourself when you try to better with you and always you do your accomplishment real, because you have a courage to do your think, although many time is had but never give up. You accomplishment in yourself can change your future. ' My dad one day he told me, if you don't have accomplishment, you don't can to live the life because you accomplishment make your future, no body can do your accomplishment just you my beautiful daughter"" This show us like nobody can change yourself and decide for you just you can do it, because it's your decision what you want to do in your future, but never forget your accomplishment in yourself can be stronger in the future.

Some people don't like, how you are but in this life the most important is how much your love yourself, because other people can to critic you, but never put attention what people think or said because your plane it's to be better and you could be who change the world and put example in other people because if you don't love yourself you cannot be stronger in the future, but it's beautiful when you love yourself, you can to respect other people, you will be kind and always you be happy. ""My Teacher told me Generic_Name. Are you love yourself? Why asking you that because you are beautiful and you have a future in your live you can be more like you can image."" This show us like love yourself because nobody want to do for you and the love is for share with other people.

Finally, never give up in your accomplishment, because it's important to know what you want to do and what do you want, sometimes like you want it's not like how you planed but for that never give up, always will be a wake, but not always too everything be wrong, just you need to have a courage and to get everything in your accomplishment in yourself is the power. When you see your accomplishment real you will be proud, because was your brain and yourself

"" My grandma told me. Never give up when you accomplishment is in front you."" This show us although it's difficult to realize your accomplishment always think in everything what do you want in yourself.

Conclusion, the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world, it's to do your things what you love and love yourself, because all this is important to have a better life and have a conversation with people, but happy an share all positive opinion with them. ""The life is one so live like if you don't have tomorrow"".",2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
9AC32EA4050B,"Due people has to do all by they self? Sometimes is hard to do all the job with out help. Or sometimes we only want some one who can we talk to. By working alone it makes feel alone. I believe that working with a group is better because we meet new cultures, we learn how to communicate and we help each other.

We meet new cultures by others student who are in our group. We start to learn know his culture and what they believe. We start to learn about they language and how they communicate in their language too. Also the food and the music from their country. Meet new persons from others country's is good so that way we start to know more about the world.

We learn how to communicate with others person not only our language in others to. We start to talk with new person's. We start to share thing's from our culture and what like to do and our free times. We start work together and getting better by communicating. Communication is important for every one.

In groups we can help each other in projects or even in late work if we miss a day of class. Went there is a new person the group can help the new student with school stuff: where the next class is, where the cafeteria is,

where the buses stop, etc. Also be in a group helps to perform our skills for communicate and language. Be in a group also help to make work more easy because we help each other by putting ideas together. Groups are the best way to perform language speaking.

Some people might say work alone is better because is only my self no one more, but in a group is more easy way to learn with help. Know new culture's from different's parts of the world is fun. Communicate is something important for live and our society to. We give support, we get support by working in group. Interact whit people helps a lot and make work more easier.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
0985602832CD,"phones

i think phones should be allowed in school because if you forgot like a book or something you could call your parents to go get it so you don't get in trouble in class or if your like sick you can call your parents or guardian to bring your medicine because you can't get your medicine in school or if your lost in like a field trip you can call your parents to pick you up and without a phone you'll be lost or get in trouble or and that's why phones in school but i think it should be turned off during class other then that you won't get lose or get busted for not having any supplies but with a phone you won't get lost or miss anything you need for school and that's why i think phones should be allowed in school. and nothing will happen to you but if you have a phone I think you'll good or maybe even if you have tutoring and your mom doesn't show up or forgot you can call her and that's why i think phones should be allowed in school.",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
211699D25472,"I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson when he wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"". You need to show to everyone what are your ambition to improve your life, and if you don't show to the World what you can affort, do not put any complain to someone else for your fault. You always want to know what are your own limits.

First, I think what he is trying to said with "" Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"" is always have big dreams bigger than you and have big ambition too. That you always work hard and know your position and show to everyone how you get there, because is not easy go to the top and keep the place, and most of the people give up, and not showing us their goals complete.

Second, do not put any complain to someone else for your fault, ehat you did, you did thinking what its the best way for you, and don't take it like a loss, take it like you get more experience in life, and its not always happines have sadness too, but always you are getting more knowledge to know how to do that next time, and show to the world how you get there.

Third, people always have challenging on their life that cause that people always want to know what are their limits, so they always push themselves to know what are their limits until they can't anymore. Then, they try to overpass their limits working harderst than anyone, sacrificing themselves, and living their pride to stay at the top or to go at the top.

In my opinion, everyone have the right to improve their life that only they need its to be more confidence then its to do not to give up and push themselves in other words being perseverance to overpass their limits thinking always in big, and leave a legacy for the next generation.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
5DEDECE96044,"Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose. cellphones has become the major problem in schools for students and for teachers. I think that cellphones should not be allowed in the classroom because students dont do the work that they suposted be doing and schools already have tecnology to use.

Cellphones shouldn't be allowed for educacional purpose because students dont do that work that they suposted be doing. Sometimes students take pictures of homework or a test and then they pass it to a friend. They always wants to check theirs social media like snapchat or instagram. this in one reason why students fail classes or fail grades. For example, in my English class there is a guy who is always using his phone, checking his social media or checking his messages that his friends has be sending to him and he is not passing his classes.

Also, cellphones shouldn't be allowed for educational purpose because schools already have tecnology for students can use. The government gives the schools computers because they wants the students graduate and dont have any distraction by using theirs cellphones.

schools have computers or ipads and thas why teacher dont need to let the students use their phone to do any work that they have to do.

However, Students can do their work in the computer where the teacher can be checking what the students is doing, if his doing his work or not.

Some students might say that they can use their cellphones in the classroom because it is more easy for them to translate words than be looking words in the dictionary. Also, some students might say that they can't live with out using their phone. Finally, they might say that using theirs phone can be more easy because they can be checking their work any time that they want.

In conclution, I think that cellphones shuldn't be allowed in the class room. students have to learn how to live with out their phone because graduate and not fail classes is more important than be texting their friends all the time. Also, for teacher that let students to use their phone for any work

I think thats not a good idea because the teacher is helping the student to get distracted by using their phone and not passing their classes.",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
2723DB12AC00,"Let me ask you this question What's better then waking up and, knowing that you are getting your education at home? with that in mind Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home. I think students will highly benefit from atending classes from home. Because not everyone learns the sameway. some students struggle to stay in school all day and, most of them can't listen to teachers talking for 90 minutes straight.

I feel like less students will drop out of high school. Some students are anti social and, don't like being in a place where everyone likes to judge you or, talk about you. Students don't have to stressed out about work that is not finished in class so, homework will be a thing in the passed. People like me will have more time to play sports and, be with family. Most people carrey a ten pound backpack but, with online classses all your work will be saved in a computere. The will hightly benefit people who are not the best with keeping papers in order. The future are our computers and, builting a strong skill with computers is a great treat to have.

Online classes is the future and the future is here. Students are benefiting from online classes but, some students comeback into public schools because they learn better face to face with a teacher, and not steering at a screen all day. Alot of colleges accept students who got their diploma online but, studies showed that a lot of students who got their education online had a hardtime adopting into the colleges. I still feel like online classes is the better chioce we been following the same school systeam for more then 100 years It's time for change!",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F0EA44C34C13,"Today,we talk about the career for student at a young age. Are the student need to commit to a career at a young age ? Is it a good idea ? The answer is yes. They need to know what they want to do when they grow up. Their course of study in high school will help them to choose what career they think they suppose to do. They have to focus to what career they choose and they gonna fathom out that career .Example ,when a student want to be a doctor when he grow up that's why he have to focus to learn well biology and all about the doctor's job. If we don't show them what they need to do or like to do , they gonna lost outside the world . They don't know what career they need to follow and they are not going to have a good job. We gonna ruin their life indirectly. So that we should teach them about career and guide they to the right way . We love our student that's why we should support they to have a better life in the future. That's all of my opinion. I hope we don't make any mistake because everyone deserve a happy life. Thank you all.",2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
D93895A285B0,"It is not a good idea for student to graduate in three years because some students don't want to to take classes in the summer because they want to graduate all four years and chose to go to college or chose to go straight into the work force. But some other students chose to take those courses and graduate in three years and take some classes in the summer. It up to them to chose if they want to go to college or go straight into the work and start making money to help themselves.

but I suggest graduating high school in four years is a good idea because students want to spend some time with their families before going into college if they chose or go straight into the working force. So it is not a good idea to graduate high school in three years and take summer or evening classes because it can be too much for you if you work in the summer because you will always be going back and forth from school to work and you will not have time to be with your family and go on vacations with them.

So graduating high school in three years is a bad idea because it will take up all your free time in the summer and you won't be able spend time with family and friends and you won't be able to do all the things you wanted to do after you graduate high school in three years because of all the summer classes and you have to take when you graduate high school in three years. Because when you graduate high school in four years you have all the time in the world if you don't go to college but when you have a job you can take some time of to spend some time with your family and friends.

And also if you go to high school for four years you will be able to take all the elective courses you want and graduate high school in four years and not having to take any summer classes or evening classes and also having the time to spend some time with your family your relative and your friends and also be able to do all the thing you wanted to do before going to college or into the work force. So I think that graduating high school in three years is not a good idea.

There are so many thing to do when you graduate high school in four year like going to the beach sky,diving,go carts,barbecuing with your family and friend and so on and so forth.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
C87D8E9C6248,"When older student work with smaller students, it can make friends, it can also help smaller student and older student.

When older student and smaller student work together it can make friends because both student have to work together so they have to listen and talk to each other, so they can be friends. When they talk to each other they can learn more about the other person like they can know what they like or what they don't like. So they can learn a lot from each other. It mean that when you make friend it can help the smaller kids.

It can help the smaller kid because they can uderstand better about the lesson because they know then if they don't understand something someone is gonna to help them to understand. They can say their opinion because ththe older and smaller student do not have a lot of different age like could have 4 or 5 years old more then tem so that is not a lot, so it can be easyer to the small kid to explain you what their opinion is. They can also ask a question when they want because sormely they have to wait that the teacher is finish an other student to ask the question but if there are also older student which alredy do the lesso you can ask them your question. The work by different age help the small kid but it can also help the old kid.

It can help the old kid because it help them to stay calm to do not be in stress, because with small kid you have to dpeak slow and do not be angry because they do not understand you are saying. If they understand what you are saying it mean that you have to find an other way to explain it like speak cleerly with simple words because don't know all the long and difficult word. The older student have maby forget this lesson so they can relearn the less at the same time then the small kids, but it will be easyer for the older student because he will remenber quicly. So when the small and big kid work together it can creat benefits and it can help the both of the student.

So when older student work with smaller students, it can make friends, it can also help smaller student and older student. So I realy think it is importante for the small and old kid to work together, because they both have benefits to do it.                ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
0F84CCFB4982,"I think is good take elective courses for the student , because if he want to graduate to the school , but if you want more gratuated in four years is better ,because you learning more knowledge is important that you learn.

if you take a decision studied ,studied because in your future is helping the stuied is good ,but the people don't like studing in my opinion is better take elective course , beacuse i learning more information.

example.

1. in my country all pleople speak spanish ,when i go to the salvador and i speak ttwo language ,i feel proud, my english is bad ,but all time practice and is important learning each day.

2. if you don't take elective course you not learn nothing ,because you are lazy you need studied is bettter your family are proud if you want a good title.

3. in your future, if you has a good title you have a good work. all people in this country don't have work and don't won money is because don't go to the school, whenhim was a children ,but we are a good oportunity in the shool, all student need studyng for a good future.

4. if the pepe don't to entrust ,you meed to prove that always to beat you and make feel the mother.

5. if you take elective courses in summer i think is bad , bacuse in the summer is not the same tha all year, all years you have more information is better ,but in summer id two months or three is bad .",2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
083E12F6B1D0,"Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. words that The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote. Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? My position is that we choose our own character traits. Why because Your character will be what you are and who you are.

Your charcter will be what you yourself choose to do. A reason is each person has there own way of being who they are. There is diferent types of characters that make each person unique in there own way. I also think that there is character formed by influence. there is alot of character that we can have. Many have very little and many have alot of character. example some people have a very sweet chacter in something they love or some people have a diffrent charcter trait that dont like to show it .

character traits is away to show your personality. When you go to a job interview the person that is taking your interview is looking at your characteristic is seeing how you are if you have a good charateristic or if you have a bad charcteristic. You are going to show your chacteristic by the way you inturduce yourself by the way you speak your body laguage. You are going to do what you feel conterble in doing. Many ask you to descibe yourself and by what you say they see if that is your charcteristic.

Character Traits are one of the ways that descibe how we are as a person. For example people describe me as a shy person that likes to help that is always offering to help. I also get descibed as a person that gets mad easily but does its best to not show it as much and pretents nothing has happeaned. Thats how some people descibe me. For me charcter traits is something that is you that makes you special in some way.

everywhere you go there is going to be someone seing your chacteristic. You make your own chacter, its something you do that describes who you are.

Depending in how you feel thats what you going to show which is your charcter trait it all depends in us we make our own character trait in the way we feel and act. its important to always show a good atitud for we can be described in a good way and try to have some good charcter trait for we can have a good reputation in life.

For example John Lubbock wrote ""your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.

Is very true we all make our own character and that makes us who we are and is something that makes you speical and the way you are.

Many people dont think that the charteristic is not as important they dont pay much attention to it because they maybe just like the looks but the charter has so much to say.

charcter is not only in humans its also in animals.

you describe a animal by its charcter by the way they act and take things. its very important to see the diffrents charateristic.

Many people when they go out with someone first they ask people what kind of personality that person they are going out with or wanting know. you can tell even by there looks and there body languge what kind of chacteristic they have because everyone makes there own charater.",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5
FF7698C3CC8B,"Imagination is a thing all of us have some persons have more imagination than others, but I think we all have it some where, like my mother say ""if you don't have imagination you would not be successful"".

I agree with what the scientist

Albert Einstein said the imagination is more important than knowledge because you can have more fun, and you can discover a lot of new things, also you can enjoy life more.

To begin with you can have more fun because you can be really entertained while creating new things like when you start a new project you can have a lot of ideas, and you can enjoy explaining them, or drawing them, you can have fun too when you are making those ideas come to life because you imagine them just how you want them, and you can have fun too by learning in the process something like you may not know, and you can apply them on your project just by using your imagination because you are the only one who knows how you want it.

Also you can discover new thing maybe you would not Know is the thing that you are creating could work, and there you can discover a lot of ways to work more well, or you can also discover, and learn more thing like what to use, or how to put thing right, but thats not the only thing, for what you can use your imagination for, you also can use it when you are drawing or writing histories like when you write you can discover a lot of knew words, or when you are drawing you can discover where you can put lines in the right spot, or at what measure, you also can discover how well you can draw.

Finally you can enjoy life more because you would not be so stressful, and you can enjoy imagine, and in my thoughts when you imagine you are in your own world you can imagine what ever you want, and you would not be worry about what the people is going to say about you I think I'm an example of it because I like to draw a lot and when I'm thinking about what I want to draw I always forget about everything, and I really enjoy drawing, and I also like to go out a lot because of that because when I go out I see a lot of thing and when I want to draw I always imagine them, and then I draw them more colorful than how I saw them and I really enjoy it.

In conclusion imagination is more important than knowledge you can have knowledge but if you don't have imagination you won't see life the same because when you imagine you can have more fun, see life different, and you can discover a branch of new thing you wold see life more colorful, and you can also enjoy life more how I already say you can have knowledge, and you can have and do a lot of things with it but if you have imagination you can have the whole world just by imagining.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
F1DF4F89F70D,"Do you think that too much oil in your food affect your health, or it improve the ability of how you work at school? I think food that contains too much oil makes you get sick and that's what we have right now, but others think different and they have their reasons too. Although some say that the school's cafeteria should not change their food because the food that they are offering right now is especially made to make students work better actually, the school's cafeteria should change their food because it gives students more variation to eat and by having a healthier food less students will get sick.

Those who think that the school's cafeteria should not change their food have their reasons. One reason is that the food that they are offering makes students work better; this is because it has a lot of oil. Scientific studies say that oil awake people, and make people do their usually activies better. Also, students who have their test after lunch, and they have eat something that contains a lot of oil; they tend to get better scores than those who didn't eat at lunch; this might be because some of them can't think with the stomach empty, or it can be because oil really helps them concentrate, who knows right. The oil food doesn't sound that bad, isn't? but I will tell you next what is what I think that is bad about it.

There are many people who think that the school's cafeteria should change their food. This is because they have their reasons, one reason is to make students eat healthier; this will help prevent students get sick. There are many sicknesses caused by oil, and one of them is cholesterol; cholesterol can kill people if you don't know how to take care of it. Also, by preventing students get sick they will not lose any day of school, and that will help them have good attendance and they will not get lost in their important classes. For example: Science, Math and History.

Another reason to change the cafeteria's food is that it will give more variation for students to eat. This might sound simple, but by giving them more variation to eat; students will feel more free to explore food that they don't know. Also, students will feel more comfortable as if they were at home because you know that when you are at home food variate and that makes it fun. moreover, Variation of food will attract those who are more likely to stay out of the cafeteria; maybe they don't like the food that we have right now, and they are hoping that the cafeteria change the food. I think that by changing the food in the cafeteria will make a good impact in the school.

In conclusion, I think that the principal of my school should change the cafeteria's food because the variation of food will make a good impact in students who don't like to eat at lucn right now, and it will also prevent the majority of students to get sick. Eventhough those who don't want to change the food had a good reasons; ""The food that we have right now is made to make students be more active"". I think that the reasons to change the food are more productive for the improvement of our school.             ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
52105DDA12EB,"85% of the people trying to do all things the there are ready have done.

The issue is not all the people are doing what there ready need to do because, the people this days are doing that the thing is the best, and sometimes the best is doing what there already have done and there they never going to grow; doing things the are the are not going to help the rest of there life.

I disagree my first reason is,is you can try to do different things and help your future. My second reason is, don't be shy to do all things different. Last reason, don't be your self all the time because you never going to to know the world the you live and you never going to know your self if you never do different things.

You can try to do different things and help your future; For example if you want to do something in you life you need to start thinking about something, because in my family my sister past for the same thing the she was wasting time, but one day my mom took to her about her future if she don't start to thinking, and today she is a doctor because she stop doing the same things the she already have done.

Don't be shy to do all things different; For example my dad is was scare to do his company because he things all the work is going to be so different, and I told him if you never going to try different things we never going to grow in the future. and now we the company and the work in good, and help him a lot because hi try hard to do it.

Don't be your self all the time because you never going to know the world the you live and you never going to know your self if you never do different things; For example my mom she always said be your self all the time but one day I told her mom that is not great because if you be your self all the time you not going to rich want you want in life because your self like to do the staff the are simple are self don't like work hart to rich are gold in life.

Conclusion I

disagree the all people are doing the same things there are ready done and they don't want to grow to be something in there life. People we need to start thinking about our future because ans start doing different thing not be you self all the time.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
7A552DBA7D71,"The effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classroom is not listening to what the teacher has to say, not using it property for your educational purposes, and disturbing the class from learning. The students with not pay attention to what the teacher, because they are so busy in their cellphones. Some students decide not to use it for educational purposes and uses it for other purposes. Using cellphones in class will also disturb other from learning, because they are so in to their cellphone. These are the reasons how using cellphones in class can effect them from learning.

First, you will not be able to learn if you are using your cellphone in the class. Using your cellphone in class may get you off task and u would not know what u learn today in class. Some days u would be mad and take it out on other, because of what you heard on your cellphone. Overtime your cellphone vibrate you always going to want to see what it is and that will have your attention. You will not be able to focus like you use to with our education and be on your cellphone at the same time.

Second, using your cellphone for other purposes can not help you learn what you need to learn. If you do not use your cellphone for educational purposes you would not know noting from school to know about. You can get in some problem for not using it for education. They should not have it out unless the teacher say you can for your assignment. This is why people should not use cellphones in school for these purposes.

Thirdly, people will disturb other people from trying to learn with there devices that can cause a disruption. The cellphones will ring and stop everyone from learning, because they will pay attention on whose phone is ringing. You will not be able to know how to do the work if do not know what to do. you are disturbing your classmates that are trying to learn the material they need so they can do something with there lives. You should not disturb your classmates from being successful in life.

As you can see, the effect of having a cellphone in class while you are trying to learn to be successful. You should not be ignoring what your teacher has to has to you and your classmates. The use of the cellular device can only be use for education and not other purposes. Last but not least, do not make your classmates fell just because you do not want to successful does not mean your classmates do. These are the reasons why using a cellphone in class should not be allowed in the classroom.              ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
DC5DAF538DF2,"During the World War II, most of the people were influenced by the behavior of the people. For instance, a lot of people choose to follow the anti-Semitic politics of Hitler and the Nazis because they were afraid of the death because the Nazis convinced them to follow them. Indeed, by setting a good example you success to convince them because you use both of the major things to influence, the feelings and the acts. You try to reach his heart by the sensitivity and by the concrete you show him that it is easy to do it. In this way, when you are setting a good example you are using the feelings of the people in order to show them the better behavior to adopt. The fear, the happiness, the solemnity can influence a choice of a person and that is why it is the better way to persuade. Through the fashion, the advertisements, the politics the sensitivity is always utilized to change the mind of someone. The behavior is the only thing that can help someone to change their opinion because trough it you can transmit all of your feelings to your speaker. Furthermore, people can be persuade by acts more easily than by words. So, by setting a good example, you can also influence people by showing them the better way to do something. Although people disagree with philosopher, physician, and humanitarian like Albert Schweitzer and affirm that there are better ways to convince someone, people should consider that to set a good example is the better way to persuade somebody.

Firstly, the behavior is using the feelings to convince people. Indeed, whatever things you do to influence someone you use their feelings. And this is the best way because the feelings are something that stay in your mind and touch you directly and can let you do things even bad. The first example is in politics. A politician who takes a solemn tone and does a serious, and sad speech will influence your opinion and by modifying your state of mind he will transmit these feelings to show you what he wants you to think. Martin Luther King said: ""I have a dream"" so immediately you know that this dream is something anchored in his heart and he will give you all of his arguments to persuade you. Then, the second example is advertisement. As well as the fashion than the TV shows, each publicity lets you feel so be it fear, so be it happiness. They carry away people with them in their opinion and by choosing beautiful musics or pictures they help the spectator to feel the good vibes that the actors or advertising want to give you.

Secondly, by setting a good example you can convince people to do acts. The first reason is people of our generations need to see to trust someone. And this is the reason why you need to show the example to someone to help him to trust you and give him the directions to follow. It was always easier to speak instead of to act but people want to see to know this is the better choice. For example, when you are doing shopping most of the girls prefer doing it in the shop instead of in line because women want to see their clothes to try them and be convinced this dress or this shirt is the better. The other reason is that you always want to have a concrete thing. So when you show the example you demonstrate that what you do is possible and affordable to you all and you encourage them to do it with you and this is what influence others. You give a proof of concrete and the speaker only need a little bit of will. For example during an humanitarian mission, if you are the leader of this one you need to show them the example not only with your behavior but also in what you must accomplish. If you are here to rebuild a public building you will do it with the volunteers to help them and lead the group.

To conclude, the example is the best way to influence people for two reasons. The first one is obviously the aspect of the feelings. The transmission of a posture or opinion can help you to do a choice. The second one is the aspect of the concrete part. You give the example of what to do and the others can do it easily. Finally, there is not better way to convince people as Albert Schweitzer said. Because there is only one way which combines feelings and action and it is the good example by your own behavior.         ",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5
F12FEB0FE5B6,"In this word we accomplish more if we are always doing something outside or inside. There is always something we are doing even like simple stuff like watching tv, walking, working and etc... If we are not always doing something we don't really accomplish anything in life. So lets get up and always be doing something around this world.

I think if we always be doing something we accomplish it no matter what it is. If you keep on doing things over and over and you can't get it aventally you will find a way and get. Also you keep on trying and you got it and you do it over you get better at it. Its like when you were a little kid you try to ride a bike you keep on doing it and try to get it to balance but every one in life falls but we always get back up again. Eventaily you will get it because you be praticing all day.

Also trying new things in life your always accomlishing it. Say you want to do something new that you never done before like building a bird house and you don't know anything about math, measuring or how to use the tooles. You will probably learing all that by yourself until you get or you might go see a friend that knows all about building qnd he could teach you. After he teaches you your going to try and see what you learn. You might not do it right but once you do it and keep on repeating on what your are trying to accomlish. Always set a goal for yourself.

Everyone in this world always mistakes on what they are trying to accomplish but we always learn from our mistakes. We always get back up and keep on trying till we get it and once you get it you keep on doing it and you are really good at. You be abble to do things faster and eayier in life.

I think if you are always doing something in life we will always accomlish it even if it is really hard. If your not always doing something you can't learn and wont be able to accomish on what your goal is so never give up on what you want to acomlish set a goal for yourself. If you fall get right back up again and keep on trying. So lets get up and try new things.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
6A7F75AD2ADE,"The students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

Is better study from home because some students no have the time for study in school, because a lot students in the world that have that working for following her goals and being somebody in life. In the world has students that also working for careful the his parents or help at her brothers. Some students that want study in school by can not do, because sometime the family was passing by a situation difficult the money and so don't have more famalies that helping, is unique way that her children's work for that help at her family, and so some students can follow to study in her home. All the students that study in her home for online have that being responsible.

First, some students that have that working for help at her parents and also study in home. For example, Generic_Name that working everyday the week him want that her parents have a better life economic. Generic_Name to take a choice to go out the school and Generic_Name put at working. Him search the best way for have a job and help at her family with expense the home, Generic_Name also study choice take classes in home every night. Generic_Name want that when finish her studies want enter in the universsity, for have a job better and steady. Him want being lawyer the law for help a many people that was passing por moments difficult and that her children's don't can study in school because his parents no have a life economic good, and being the world a better place.

Secondly, The students that study in her home in online have that decide being resposible. For example, Generic_Name that want study medicine by not is responsible with her studies. Her parents choice that Generic_Name leave school and don't study more becuase her no put the her part by have better calification in school, the parents the Generic_Name to put stand up, 5am for go at the company and help in her businness. Generic_Name was very angry with parents, but Generic_Name choice and think the things that the best way are study and she say her parents that want follow her studies in home in online. Generic_Name learned the her mistakes and finish her studies and now she was in the university study for nurse, and is a better person and responsable with her studies.

In conclusion, some students that not like study in school and home,some parents working everyday for that her sons can have a better future and being somebody in life. many people no have money for that her sons study for online, the students the day now think that best way is to leave school and follow study more but also can study in the home and the sometime have a job and pay her studies and help at her parents. and follow study for that day the tomorrow do more better and peoples with respect, and help the poeple poor.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
E78C1D3328E3,"I think what you can take summer school for to finished the school in three years is a good idea because you can leave to school in start working or doing other somethings how example you can get a good job and make good money or you can start work for to help in the hause like your mom, father, and making money for buy something for yourself like a car, clothes, and the another rason.

If the student have 17 or 18 years old he can leave the school and not when they have 22 years old like the hispanic because they coming with 15 or 16 years old and the school put they in grade nine and if you graduate in only three years is better for you, becuase they going to was 18 years old and they already for to work in learned more english but that not is the same case for American People.

With the work force for to finish the school in one year early, I think that is hard but is so good for students with 18,19,20 years old because they can finish early in lirobic time in one year.

If you're hispanic that's not better choice for you, because you can't learn more english and that's going to be hard for you when you start work, but that not is the samein the case with American People because the english not is a problem with they and if they have the same years old they can get a good job and leave the school in lirobic time.

That's what i think about the finish the school in three and not four years and the work force for to finish the school in one year early, If the school give me the oportunity choice I say ''I want to finish the school in three years'' because is better for me for my years old .",2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
7373B4F44528,"Have you ever accomplished something in your life? Because people nowadays are very lazy and hard headed because they are easily distracted by social media, people around them, and also the society that's why they cannot focus on their goals in life. Although some might argue it is not better to work on something to accomplish, actually it is better to work on something to accomplish because you will gain more knowledge and people will be proud to what you've accomplished.

One reason why it is better to work on something to accomplish is because you will gain more knowledge. For instance, based on my personal experience when I was in middle school, I dont do my projects, homework, seat works because I'm too lazy and I just love talking with my friends everyday in our class. However, when I moved here in America last year things have changed because I'm new here in this country and I dont know anyone. I realized that my friends here are not the same like in the Generic_City that I used to talk to everyday. That's why I decided to study hard and make my parents proud again. I have an five A's in my classes right know and I'm proud because I accomplished something. And yes, Thomas Jefferson was right ""Determine never to be idle.. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something.""

we should never stop doing something that can benefit us. This proves that working on something will help you gain more knowledge in life and dont stop believing in yourself. Another example that proves it is better to work on something to accomplish is based on my dad's personal experience. My dad was a college graduate in the Generic_City, he dreamed to become a successful businessman and he made it. My dad started a business near to schools and shops so many people will go to his store. The first few months was amazing because his customers was very loyal to him my dad didn't expect that it will happen. Unfortunately, my dad's business went down because something happened that he didn't liked. People are robbing and digging all the way to my dad's store every night. That's why he was forced to closed his business and rest for a while. After a few years he didn't have a job because he was still shocked to what happened to his business. However, he decided to take culinary class to work again because he wants to help our family and to gain more knowledge about baking. After taking the culinary, he went to Generic_City to seek new opportunity. He is now currently working in five star restaurant owned by a rich man in Generic_City. This proves that it is better to work on something to accomplish like what my dad did in his life and he changed for a better living.

Another reason why it is better to work on something to accomplish is because people will be proud to what you've accomplished. For example, from the movie

PELE

it is about a young boy who dreamed to become a professional football player. He lived in a small house in Brazil and played football with his friends in his neighborhood. Pele was a poor little kid but plays well even he is very short unlike other people in his town. When they play against other teams, they always laugh at them because they dont have a proper gear for playing. And there is a guy who is recruiting players for their club. Pele was the youngest player in the club thats why he was treated like a slave. After few years playing in his club, its his time to shine to represent Brazil in the world cup. Pele scored a lot of goals and Brazil went to the finals. He was so incredible that time no one can stop him and Brazil won the world cup. This proves that you need hard work to accomplish something like Pele he never stop doing what he wanted to be and now people from Brazil and all over the world are proud of him. Another example that proves it is better to work on something to accomplish comes from Adidas' quote or saying ""All in or nothing"". For instance, that line is very effective to people especially the athletes around the world because doing your goals in life makes you more stronger and better than the others. And you should give your best all the time and make people proud to what you've done in life. This proves that is it better to work on something to accomplish like the owner of Adidas he became famous and rich because he worked hard, focused on his goals.

The other side will argue it is not better to work on something to accomplish because you will have more time to do what you want or something else. However, it is better to work on something because you can practice your weaknesses. For example, my friend Generic_Name who really dont know how to write a perfect essay but can speak fluent in English. He was really bad in writing essay when we were in middle school. Generic_Name was always shy to read or present his work to our teacher. So, I told him to work with my classmate who is really good in making essay and ask him to teach Generic_Name how to write a perfect essay. After a few weeks of learning, Generic_Name improved his writing skills. This proves that it is better work on something to accomplish like what my friend Generic_Name did he started practicing his weakness and became a good writer. Another example that proves that it is better to work on something to accomplish is based on my personal experience. For instance, I've been playing football since 5 years old because my dad is also a football player. When I was playing with my club my coach said my first touch is not really good unlike the other players. However, I practiced by myself like what what coach told me. And my mentality was I should prove my coach that I will be a better football player. This proves that practicing your weaknesses will make you more a better person.

To conclude all these statements above, it is better to work on something to accomplish because you will gain more knowledge and people will be proud to what you've accomplished. We people have different purposes in life, we should never be idle in life.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
471BD41D6BA9,"Some people say that to converse resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. our school is deciding if they should do a four day school week, with nine hours consisting each day. Others rather to have a normal school week.

I agree with having the normal school week because, The majorly of the high school students have part times jobs they work after school and having a nine hours school day would not leave enough time for students to work in a part time job, There are some girls at high school that have babies, and they are paying babysits, with a nine hours school days moms would spend less time with their babies and they would have to pay more hours to babysits, With an nine hours school day the amount of time to study, do homework or prepare for projects would be less then a normal school day of seven hours that can affects students grade.

Other people say schools should follow this model because, A nine hour school day means more time for each class and having more time in all classes its helpful for homework or late work, They can take advantage of having Friday off students can have a job only on Fridays. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
FED42BB10805,"If you were looking for advice, would you take advice from one preson or take advice form more then one preson to get multiple opinions?

I personly think you should get advice form more then one preson because geting advice form more then one preson can give you more then one prospetive on the situation you are trying to get advice on.

secondly why i think you should get you advice form other is that you get to pick out if the situation you are is bad for yuo or no like for exmaple if you are in a risk taken situation that you think you should do and you ask your mom if you should take the risk your mom might say no just to keep you safe but if you ask someone else that is a risk taker they might tell you to take a chane go thourght with it.

lastly why i think you should ask for more then one preson is that get advice form one person can lead to the right decision you are trying to make in that situation makeing the worng the choice can lead to hard times in your life and makeing the right choice can make your life much eazyer.

In conclueion geting advice form more then one person can make you see the worng and right form other people advice.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,1.5
E24ADB91F6D3,"I wrote a prompt to determine one thta people made bullyng to, it is really wonderful how people change when they know you, I did a lot to try to be fine with other people's,but not everybody is nice there are still some people to make bullyng or watever to you, they just don't try to meet the people they just perjudice the people without knowing them that's why i am always alone because to much people talk a lot of someone and i really don't like that the people be talking things about others and that the people that are the one's that are threat with bullyng they don't even say anithing of sacared of those people they think they can make bullyng to them.

I always try not to take care of what other people say they can talk whatever they want is their problem but when someone come's and they don't like that they can get hurt and there is when they look for you when they are in trouble, when i am angry or sad i just like to play soccer because that helps me to forget the problemsm that i got in my mind, if could it do something.

i would it try to make games of soccer so all the people that want to play soccer can get to do it and they can forgot their problems too. that's why sports are made because people can have fun without fight, and one more thing it can be is to go with friends to see movies or to watch soccer games or basket ball games or volleyball i don't know but there are a lot of ways to get to know someone, in my way i think that everything got a solution for the problems the problem is that we don't our respect to other people if we do it everthing it would be really different

Everything that we want is to be safe in a place where no gangstars are bbecause they only know how to make peolpe get more poor of what they are we should get involve all the families to try to destroy the people that are hurting others, alot of people try to study their best to be someone in their life they just want to get out their families out of trouble, out of bad ways, they can make alot of money easier when they finished ther school, only with high school finish you can get a nice job not a job that you would like it but you can get at least something.

People can be safe having their things like if someone try to take all that you had they just can go the police and tell them what happens and they might help them and they might help to try to recover what they lose people shouldn't be scared because when they show that they are scared other people can be smart and do a lot of things to thm just because they show sacared and all that we are people really smart but we sould be smart in everything because not because we are smart in some things it means that other people can be nice with you if you don't show angrily other people angry can hurt you in one way that it's going to hurt you a lot.

All people are nice but when they get angry or mad they change a lot they can be reall angry and you can be scared of how they can get, but for not having problems with someone you should just invite them to play sports somewhere or to have fun with your friends you'll can go to the beach and have a lot of fun there so the people can not get angry and it can get to be your friends forever or at least only friends, but no one should show their debil point because when you get a problem with your friends they would aready know what's the point that you would mostly hurt that's hy i think no one should know the most imporant debil point of your body or of you so this is my prompt thanks                                                   ",2.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
F998E8BD71CF,"Dear Generic_Name,

I would like to visit your hospital one day.

I would like to be a midwives nurse but in order for me to pursed that education.

I will have to see what I have to do.

people say I would need a masters degree to become a midwives nurse.

All I can say is that I am really good with babies.

I would like to tell you why I would like to be a midwives nurse.

Ever sense I laid eyes on my baby cousin.

I wondered if all babies will have that huge smile on there face like she did. Seeing all moms be happy to see there own children just makes my day.

I just love seeing moms cry tears of joy because they finally saw thee own child.

This is why I am hoping that you give me a chance to explore how to be a midwives nurse.

I just don't want to be behind schedule,and if I explore early I will be able to get a head start.

I want to grow up and be useful not useless.

There is not going to be a lot of people around to help but I am hoping to see every baby be safe.

In order for that to happen I need to be thought to be one of the best.

I searched up in the internet that there is many advance stuff to become a midwife nurse.

Like first there is a regular college student taking notes,then the masters degree,then there is the midwife nurse.

I am just hoping that I do well,and if i do something wrong please tell me.",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
B9DABCFD687D,"Being able to take online classes from home, is something that i would like for all schools to offer. Graduating high school is a need in this time and generation, for the reason being that most jobs ask for at least if you graduated high school. There is lots kids in school and not all have the time to go to school, some kids have to help there parents work for there not financially stable. I myself have gone through that where had gone to an alternative school so i could have more time to work in the day and come home to do some of my courses. Many people say education is the number one thing you should worried about and thats right, though some kids can't cause they have to help there family to provide in relation to paying some bills, put food on the table or picking up there siblings. providing school to be done at home will help the kids that have to go through all of this.

high school can be hard at times work is stressful some kids hate to having to get up early is hard for them so they miss out in some of class time. You keep missing some of class every day it can turn into hour's of class time that you missed, also can effect in the way you are learning having more time in your day to work can help you for there you are learning at your own paste, not the teachers. Some students that learn slow. takes time for them to learn one thing and by then the teacher is on the next unit there learning about. everyone has there own way that they learn better students that are fast learners wish that they can learn everything faster to get the class over with to go on to the next. those students can get classes online so they could do them at home to get the most credits they want this would also help them graduate faster.

Very few kids know what they want to work as for there career. Doing online classes can help these students graduate earlier to go the school they want to go to, or there career they want to lean on. This can help these students out in many ways. Going into a career path the earliest you can is a great thing you can get more time to learn and get good at to what you want to be doing like working become a master tech the younger you are the more experience you could have when you get older. The more chances you can get to become the best master tech at your location. Many students in high school learn in there own way also are smart in there own way graduating early can help students to become what they want to be the most.                           ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
16B45E8AA9F3,"Honestly i think being honest can't always be hard or sometimes easy because, when you did something wrong you feel guilty, telling the truth gets rid of the guilt that you had, and also you feel a lot of stress. Letting the stress out in your body is good at one point so be honest!

Your body will feel like your hiding something and be afraid to talk so just be honest,

for an example, you broke your moms favorite vase but she doesn't know yet. ""You"" may be afraid to even talk to mother because ""you"" wont know if ""you should lie or be honest or you might even feel like you will get in trouble.

It's good to be honest because your parents will feel like they can trust you for an example being home by yourself and taking care of your younger siblings . If your not honest your parents might think that you're lazy and dont actually take care of your siblings while there out grocery shopping.

Not being honest can cause problems with you and your parents relationship. It's your job to be grateful of your parents, what they give you and how much they support you. If you have a friend who is good with their parents maybe try being like them and try your best to love and appreciate your parents at this moment.

Now that you know how to appreciate your parents and be honest and not lie, let me tell you this we all know we will lie maybe once or twice but after you can just say, ""Hey I'm sorry i was not telling the truth, will you forgive me?"" Everything will all be better. Be more respectful say it with love and like you actually mean it. People will feel loved and that they actually mean to you.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
FAC16838327F,"Generic_Name (:(

Why people should make their own decisions in their lives? We should learn new things. We should make self-improvement. We should have a better future, If we make great decisions in our lifes.

We have to learn new things for example: sports, science, history, art, techonlogy. We should learn a new language. We can learn a new culture with our friends from another country. We can learn a lot of things to make our lives much better. We can be professionals if we make great decisions.

We have to learn how to be independent. We must think like adults. We have to be more responsable like doing our own things by our-self. If we think like that we can make our things well, and we can make our own decisions.

We should have a better future in our lifes. We should have a great job to make a lot of money. We should have a great house to live good. If we don't make something bad and we follow great decisions, We can see what is wrong and what is right.

Our decisions can make us much better in our lives. We have to demonstrate that we can make great decisions by motivating our self every day. We musk seek guidance from other people to learn how to make our decisions. We have to make our things by our-self?

We can show that in this life we can make good decisions by learning new things, by making self-improvement, and by planing a better future. We have to learn a lot of things of this life. If we make the things right we can show the people that nothing is impossible in this life. Is time to make great decisions in this life if we want to grow as a person.     ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
CEE6F38D4ED6,"Yes, it would be nice for students to have a 3-4 of break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. students enjoy summer like everyone else. in my opinion, i'm a student and i would love that my school give us a 3-4 weeks off summer break, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. so that i can relax, go out with my family and friends, and do a lot off crazy things.

In summer we go to different places with my family, we like to travel, we go to crazy water parks, museums, and we go to the zoo sometimes. when you're in school you don't get a lot of time to spend with your family. because you get busy doing your homework and studying.

Summer is the best part of the seasons. in summer is always sunny outside, you can go to the beach, play soccer with your friends and brothers, you can do skateboarding .you can do a lot of things in summer.

In summer you can got to different places with your family. you can travel, visit a lot of places you don,t know and want to go there or you can just relax at your house watching movies, series or shows that you like to watch.

In conclusion i think having breaks is a good idea because you can relax, go out and spend time with your family and friends, and do a lot crazy things.                                   ",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
B5FF33681C22,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some believe that attend classes from home is not great for the student. But others think that if you attend classes from home you learn so much more. Attending a school can get you ready in the real world then just attending classes from home.

Those who say attending classes from home say that because teacher cant teach the way they want. They have to follow the way the schools wants you to learn. For example, the teacher does not want to teach some of the stuff hes given but he has to because at the end of the day this is his job and he does not want to lose his job. When your attending classes from home you have more sleep and you wont be tired because it will be at your own time. And also you dont have to be in a class that the teacher dont really like to teach because over time some teachers lose that feeling that they loved.

However, people believe that attending schools is way better then just staying home. Some reasons you should attend school then stay home is that you will have more fun in a class room then just home all the time. For example, you will make friends and do stuff together the will make your time more joy able then just at home. you wake up and go to school you see your friends and you make jokes and help each other and it is limitless.

Another reason you should attend school then classes at home. Schools have field trips,sports,after school activities that you will probably love to do. Because you have the chance to try all of them at school. For example, there are filed trips to the art museum that have great at works like the monalisa. And filed trips to New York and other places that you will love to see. Sport teams are like family, you watch each others back and help improve you game together and thats something you cant get from home or video conferencing. Other reason why you should attend school with others is that someday you will find a bond with someone or a group that will last and you will be grateful for. For example, There were couples in high school that later on got married and there were these groups that became friends actually the became family.

In conclusion, Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some believe that attend classes from home is not great for the student. But others think that if you attend classes from home you learn so much more. Attending school is better for your kids in the long run. You can learn more in school then you could ever at home and you will make friend and maybe family.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
4EB4E8611272,"It has been said that a positive attitude is the key success in life. I believe this topic is coverstal and I have both resarch and personal experience to share that will demonstrales that many people positive attitude is the key success in life.

Everyday, when we wake up we need to think about today what is plan we need to finished? do not lazy, many people need dream. One reason, If we attitude to think about what is plan need to finished ,we don't feel boring., we feel a lot power. For example: the students will know next class should be taking the test ,the students plan to study tonight ,they do study guide, more practie during the test they will get good great. Another reason, sutdents can to do voluter or study SAT,get high soccer, also need to do very well in the class taking AP class get high GPA. For example,students on the weekend can go to hosptial or go to library to do voluter, learn society experience that is helpful get into college, and spend some time to study SAT to finish homework.

Apporoximately two year ago, I have friend, she said: I want become a coffee store with book Boss, she sucess. Beacause, during she college four year, she everyday spend half day went to part- time, earn money, earn experience,learn how to make nice flower on the coffee cup, she record what book the people like to read. she know what she want .

Inconclusion,I believe that positive attitude is important the key success in the life, we need think about what knid the life I want, and we have better furture in our life.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
C66B4F537548,"I Believe people who have positive attitude's towards life, are one of the biggest keys to success in life. You will see your life in a different perspective, than people with negative attitudes. They doubt them selfs threw life and never reach there goal's because they dont have a positive attitude. You'll never give up easily or at all, because you see that it will help by making you fill more accumplished with yourself by having a positive attitude.

Having a positive attitude will also make you a good person. You'll show yourself and others how to change there attitude towards life. As you are accumplishing your own goal's in life, you could be helping others do the same. So by helping people out with the way you see your life, you could help others reach the same goal on positive attitude with there lives. life its self, is the biggest challenge anyone can go threw. Where put threw challenges everyday with out even knowing, and get threw them no matter how hard it may be. By helping others it could make' not just you seced in life but others as well.

Even my family and I have been threw the worse. From living in room's, basement's, and being envicted from apartment's because my parents would'nt make enough money to keep us in one place. They were losing alot of hope with life and from ever being stable for there family, but me as the only boy in the family I had to keep my positive attitude in life for our family goal in reaching stablebility for my older and younger sibling and I. I would wake up on top of some folded blankets the hard wooden floor with my mom and dad aside me but I would'nt care cause as long as I knew my little siblings were on the bed comfortbly sleeping it would make me feel good because I knew one day it was all going to change.

Keeping my positive attitude with my life really helped me alot, because once I turned 16. I started to work at Mcdonald's everday after school from 3:30pm to 10:00pm for five days a week. Everytime I got payed I would save up my checks because I knew my parents never had good cars. We would always buy junky cars off the road, because we could never afford new cars. So I set my self a goal on buying my parents a new car, because I knew it could help them out. By not spending on old cars, I also knew they could never save up from all the stuff they had to pay and such. There were many days at work where I wanted to quit, but I would always look on how my family and I lived. Also on how much my parents struggled just to give us hot food on the table. So I always kept my positive attitude with me for my family.

The day came after 1 year of working I had saved up over 10k for a new car for my parents and the family. My mom and my dad where so proud of me and told me they could never thank me enough for all the hard work I had put in everyday at work for the family. Me and my family started to gain hope on our family after they saw what a big change I had made to the family just by having a positive attitude. So my two oldest sister's and I where starting to save up for a home for the family and that too, we had accomplished. Now we have a home that we have been living in for 5 years now, everyone has there room I bought my self a car too. Life is good and I feel super successful with my life already. So yes, I do believe having a positive attitude is the key to a successful life. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
C3E8D00403D9,"Letter to Principal:

Some of my friends perform community service, but my other friends think it just waste of time. I am supporting that the principal should require students to perform community service. This is a great way to show to the community that you care. Students should know that community service is very important. Community service helps you and your community.

There are many reasons why students should perform community service. Performing community service helps your community and other communities. Your community will be cleaner and fresh. Not just students but everyone in this country should have community service. When your community is full with trash. No one will care, but you can make a change. You will need a helping hand to help you with community service.

In streets, public places, and school campus, there are people littering. If you care about your community, you should gather people to help you clean it. Even if the trash is not yours, pick it up. It is not just picking up trash. There are planting trees, etc. So, when you are done picking up the trash, you could continue planting trees and flowers. To make it stand out.

In conclusion, everyone should have the pride to carry out community service. Community service is like a helping hand. So every stu",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
6EE4A9C8F158,"Do you agree or disagree with extending the school day? Many students said that it's good for them to finish homework at school, but some of students disagree this idea. I disagree with expending the school day, I think it's not good for us.

First ,every student have something they like to do, so students can join a club or an activity after school. If the school board adds one and a half hours to school each day, students will attend their activities late. The activity lasts about 2 hours or later, students may get home after the sun sets up. In the winter ,the sun sets up so early, the day is short, it's too dangerous for the students who walk home.

Second, we have about seven hours in the school every day, I think we need more time to study at home. It's quiet when we study at home. Students can use these time fully. We can learn new knowledge, do sports, review everything we learn, and so on. However, there are some new students from different countries, they can not speak English very well,they need more time to study. So, I think it's not good to expend the school day.

Lastly, if the school board will not expend the school day, it can not only help us do what we want to do for a long time ,but also let us have a long and good sleep. We have a lot of homework in the high school, we may finish homework late. It's not good for students. The students in the high school must sleep for about eight hours every day. If they do not sleep very well at night, they will not have good mentality to study next day, their grades may decline.

These are my reasons, I disagree to expend the school day. I think my idea can help the school board to make the decision.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
62196AC0ABE8,"The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote you your character will be what you yourself choose. In my opinion we choose our own character, and how we respect other people teachers, and students. My mom teach me how to behavior but she do not choose my own character, nonetheless some peoples make us strong but they don't choose own character, but on the other hand sometimes we need to change our character for example, my English teacher have a beautiful character but apart from that, sometime she need to changes her character because the students do not put attention in the classroom, and she have to be rude that way they stop talking and distract the other students, but however she never change her beautiful character.

The first step that I say that nobody choose our own character is because when we are sad nobody can change our attitude or own character somebody can try to help us but they don't gonna change our attitude because when we are sad sometimes we are angry, and our character is so bad that we don't want to do anything we just want to be alone or we just need to take a brake because maybe we are stress. My mom teach my how to behavior and that I have to respect the older peoples but she don't choose how my character it gonna be

In other words some peoples make us strong like my mom she teach me how to be strong too, and some peoples teach you that how to be strong but they don't choose how we gonna be how we gonna act, they can't teach us or change us our character we are the only person who decided If we need to change our character, however sometimes we need to change our character and that is gonna help us in the school in the house and in the life, and a person who is very respectful nice and have a good character is very important because what happened if you are angry have a bad character in the work nobody is gonna like to work with you the same happened in the school, if we have a bad character nobody is want to work with us that why sometimes is very important to change our character

The last reason but not the less important is without a doubt sometimes is important to changes our character like for example, my English teacher have some students that they don't care about the class, and she need to change her character in the class so that way the students stop talking and distracting the class, and when she change is character they stop to talk because she put angry and rude, but however she never change her character she always are happy she only change the character when the students are talking or playing in the class but they don't change the teacher character she change her own character

Nobody can change our character we decides if we change or not, sometimes it is important to make some changes to be a better person, and to help our self or to help other people, a person with a good attitude and with a good character always is gonna be good work with them we need to know when we need to change, and why we need to change and that is gonna help us for the life and for everything and always it is important to smile.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
EC07B11B2CF3,"a positive attitude is the key to success in life because being a positive is a good thing to have in life, if a person have an Negative attitude it wont let them go anywhere in life they just going to say in the same spot, positive attitude is the key to get respect from others, being positive and sucessful in the same time is the first step to succed

Negative attitude wont let a person go anywhere in life to be successful because having bad attitude wont let a person make the right freinds in life. Having bad attitude wont let your teachers get your atention. having bad attitude wont let a person go to the right point in life for example his dream job carrer.

positive attitude is the key to get respect from others because being respectful get you to make or get alot of positive friends than negative friends, having an positive attitude towards others will make you get their attintion to be part of them,positive attitude toward the people who hate you will make them respect you enogh.

being positive and sucessful in the same time is the first step to succed because it get you to your dream easy and faster, it will make life easy to atcheve, being positive on what your going to do and on what your going toatcheve is a key to succed in life.

but sompeople may say that it dosent matter what personality you have you have either positive or nective it will just going to let you have all the respect you want from other so it dosent matter if you have a negtive attitude or positive attitude because they think that no matter what you do you will atcheve and pass what you love in life. but in what i think thats not true because its all depends on what personality you have.

In the end it all matter because positive attitude is the key to success in life.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
A6745A8EE7AF,"Always positive thorough It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life this is good statement because we need motivate to the people with problems. For example If you have problems on your work the key is talk with the person is the problem and your manager on good attitude but if you don't have good attitude the problem is going to be worst.

One reason is when we go to the work and motivate to team they can have best personality positive influence for a good work together and talk everybody ,but somebody team work have bad attitude the team work is not good for work because a group discussion needs a few talkative people and can make good humor with your team work

Another reason is motivate yourself have good attitude everywhere and always If you have always good attitude you are felling; your attitude shows who you are is the profile a representation and that identical one that is you the socialism it's importance for

""My social life"". On the social we can share the attitude, ideas . For example If your teacher not had a good attitude you can help and talk with him and know why he has that attitude.

In conclusion the positive attitude is the key to succes in life because on the future we can make good projects ,show good attitude therefore you can make consolidate with the other peoples for good attitude and the attitude is a values the life we need practice good attitude always on the life cotidian.",2.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
ED57CFEC1CF1,"I agree, because I think the influence helpen people when he or she smocking to much and need to stop smocking because the smoking is to bad for the body and think. The other I

think is to bad is the alcold because when people drinking to much after making crasy.

I thinking the position is becuase the parent don't influences when she or he are younger.

For example; when I,m childrem I living with my grandmother but she tell me when you have like 13 or 14 years old don't smoking because the cigari is not good for your life. And other example she tell me is don't drinking beer.

Im remenber one thing and I don't forget is when my grandmother tould me is contion with yours goals and don't stoped.

The other influences in my life is when came to united usted I don't speaking english but now I speaking more better because I ready book when stay home or when I have time. And other example because I speaking more better is when I'm not undertand the question I tell my teacher can helpen me in this question because

I don't undertand to mucho.

One example when the teacher tell you and you listen is if you need speaking more better is listen to the teacher when she or he sprey something and you paid atention.

One example when I finish the high school is I want to be a soccer pleyer and I want to player in one famous team. Becuase what is one goals in my life and because the soccer is the best player in the mood. I also what is one goals for me is because when a have like 5 or 6 years old I play for the first time. I think is the first becuase all of my family love soccer and players.

My other goals is finish the high school next years. And start to work for helpen my parent and make my money for something I need for myself. And also because I need to make money for pay my college. And for pay car also.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
2C38B62420C3,"Dear TEACHER_NAME

I think that we don't need community service hours because, some students do well in school and they don't get to go to all the 8th grade fun activities that they have by the end of the school year. Like a lot of students do very well in school but they cant go to the fun activities or graduate from 8th grade because they don't have community service hours. If students have bad grades and they have a green sheet that you are failing 8th grade and they have to get 5 and up grades and they are showing progress then i think that its fair to let the students graduate from middle school even do they didn't do service hours. That's why i say that its fair too let the students graduate from middle school even do they didn't do service hours. i know that theirs a lot of students that haven't done the service hours and they are really worried that their parents may get mad at them for not graduating 8th grade. So that's why i' m saying that that's why we don't really need service hours.      ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,5.0,3.5
7AAE019F70D6,"I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because kids have other things to do like homework,they might be already doing a activity and they'll get tired faster if the principal make them do a other activity, and it can contain stress if you don't get it right the first time.

For and foremost, I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because the student have homework to do and I know that i get a lot of homework maybe you do too i also know teachers give kids projects and if the principal makes them do a extra activity then they wont be able to have anytime to do their own things. Also studies have shown that making kids do a extra activity can contain a lot of stress and who wants to be stressing I know I don't, and it can also contain kids losing sleep do to the activities if they have homework and a activity to do it'll make the students lose sleep due to the activity and the brain needs a good hours of sleep for it to function well. This is why I say principals shoudn't make students join activies

Secondly, I disagree with the principal because the students will get way more tired faster and did you know that someone in Washington DC, fainted due to the principal making the student do a other activity and thats why the principals shouldn't make students join a other activity because it'll most likely make them get tired faster and what we want is to keep our kids healthy but we can't keep them healthy if the principal makes them join a activity.

Lastly,my last reason is stress, stress can come from a lot of things like work,school,friends,parents,children as you see stress comes from a lot and school stress is a big oe because we all know sometimes our grades go down and when we try to bring them up it gets really stressful and espcially if your pricipal is making you do a other activity that'll make even more stress and multiple studies have shown that a lot of the stress that kids get is from school and other activies. Those were all of my reason on why the principal shouldn't make students join a other activity espcially if they don't want too.

Overall,I disagree with the principal making students do a other actvity because of homework,losing sleep faster and last but not least is stress. Those were all of my reasons on why the principal shouldn't mame students do a other activity ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
8A80B525C75D,"The Former British Prime Minister Winston Church Hill once said that "" Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" I agree with Church Hill because , some people do fail multiple times but they keep doing it until they get it.

British Prime Minister Winston Church Hill was from WWII to help the British to fight with the Germans on war. He help people in his country and America too. Church Hill gave a speech that said

"" Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm."" Think that people fail on and on that he mighty think that some people can do it when they need to do. Church Hill the Prime Minister of Great Britain wanted the people to know that your not the only one that fail all the time. Others people are the same like you and your not alone.

He says that we can do it even if we keep trying and trying that it will happen soon for you. That you are responsible to your own work and responsible on your own. Church Hill might? Be the same like us in our life. He might deal with the same problem like us in our life. Even tho he work in the government with other smart people but he can be the same issues.

He want people to know that your not alone you have others to help you in your problems and issues on yourself and others.

He want people to know that your not alone you have others to help you in your problems and issues on yourself and others will help you in life. ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
605DDF3EA948,"Students would not benefit attend classes from home.

Recently, Generic_Name has been going to school the past 10 years.

In those years, Generic_Name has proved his apprenticeship by taking classes in the school.

More often his grades are the higher in the class, and his teacher is glad that he still going to her class.

Learning in school with a teaher next to him was important for Generic_Name to get those grades.

Teachers believe that students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it makes student's attention lower, and they do not learn as the same way.

Firstly, student would not benefit from begin able to attend classes from home because it makes student's attention lower.

For example, Generic_Name wants to get out of school next week, yet he wants to takes classes online, but his teacher told him that is not the best option for him.

This example shows that the teacher is telling Generic_Name don't take classes online, it would not benefit his attention at classes in the same way that school does.

Even though, Generic_Name thinks that is the best idea, at the same time is not because the only way to don't lose his attention at classes is to continue the school.

Thus, attend classes from home is not going to benefit a student attention.

Secondly, students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they do not learn as the same way.

For example, Generic_Name is a student of a New York's school, his teacher says that when he started classes online he did not learned as the same way that he used to do at school.

This example shows that when Generic_Name did not continue classes in school he started to have problems with the topics because students can not learn in the same way that in school.

For Generic_Name was not important learn properly in home or school, but for his teacher yes becuase they knew already that it would not benefit learning in the same way.

Thus, distance learning is not the best option fro a student.

On the others hand, some people believe that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

It is true, it can be possible when a student do not speak the language, and his/her parents prefer that the student take classes online.

However, still proof that students would not benefit being able to attend classes from home.

For example, the teachers of Generic_Name and Generic_Name say that distance learning does not help students to improve their attention and apprenticeship.

Thus, it can benefit students the classes online in 20%, but the classes in schools benefit students in a 100%.

In conclusion, to restate the point students would not benefit attend classes from home.

The first reason is because it makes students's attention decrease.

Further, students are not going to learn in the same way that they used to do in school.

However some people believe that taking classes online from home will benefit to the students.

Thus, coming to school is the best way that is going to benefit the students to attend in classes.             ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
B4CBDAF1161C,"Although some people say that classes such of art, music, and drama should be electives because you let students think on themselves, actually some say that students must be required to take drama, art, and music classes because regarding to this classes students can earn a lot of experience in this area and in a short future they will be contributing to the culture of the nation.

Often people comment about the classes that students are taking on school. They are agree that art, music, and drama should be electives because you let students think on themselves. As every person in this country we must let them take part of their own decisions. Let me remain you, when you were young there is a bunch of classes that you didn't like to take, you complaint a lot. It's the same with this classes. Students must decide what they want to do in order of their own benefit. Many students don't even care about those class and their grades look affected because schools required them to take those classes.

People suggest that students must be required to take drama, art, and music classes because regarding to this classes students can earn a lot of experience in this area. For instance we are in at school!. we are connected to other schools we can make events and build good relations between students in order to let them gain experience. as soccer, basketball, baseball, and football also we can create competitions to motivate them. the kingdom university during 3 years asked to 100000 people "" How do they feel about competitions""

and the 90% of people said, competitions motivate you, is not matter what kind of competitions the human nature always wants to win. In other to this some schools are more likely to invest money on those areas.

Culture is a good reason why students should be required to take art, music, and dramas classes. When we talk about culture we have to do mention that it does a huge contribution in the society. for example Tourism, some research showed that the 70% of people who travel to another countries just to know how their culture works. like in years before the music had been changing. The United States of America have long history in music like Jazz, Rock, Heavy Metal and so on. That's why music classes should be required for students to maintain the culture of music in our country. When we talk about art everyone has heard about the famous Leonardo da Vinci and his picture of the Mona Lisa. Outside there is good amount of artist who became famous because they impressed the world with fantastic pictures. drama, our world is a age where we use the social media for many reasons and social media need authors. Example Hollywood every year produce movies. All those authors have a really good home, cars, and many facilities to live. That's why students must be required to take drama classes because many of them can have the opportunity to enjoy a life like this.

Some say classes as art, music and drama should be electives for students because the own decision is important but classes such art, music and drama must be required because it give the students the opportunity to gain experience in those areas and contribute to the culture of our society and nation.  ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
7101C080C12C,"What if your school wanted to add one hours and a half would you agree or disagree? I presently think that no one would like that like dont like that idea at all and let me tell you why I would int like that. First if you dont like school that much like me you would do what ever you can to stop that. Most likely be that people will get tired really fast. Finally not that much people would come to school they would not like it even more.

Some ways you might like this is that. They might add a day to the week end which would be more days per week end that sounds good to me. Another thing that they can do is add lease day to the school year I think that people would really like that and other ways are. You learn a lot more thing for next year which is really help full for the next year of classes you have. Finally you simply like school you like seeing friends in school and you like learning more things.

How you may be able to stop it? will first you have to go to your principle and him/her how you can you stop this form going on well they might say get a exact amount of people to sign a paper. Well then if they ask you to do that then you know that you have to ask every one in the school to sign the paper if you really don't want this to happen. First you know you got to go to you best friends and people that dont really like to stay in school that long. However if it's not that much people yet you know you have to go to every one in the school asking them if they dont want a hours and a half to be added and at the end of that i might have the number you need of people.

Do you want this to happen at your school but your school isnt do it? Well like the other one go to your principle and ask them if they can add another hour and a half but and another day to your week end or less day of the school year. See if other student want to join you if they want less day of the school year or a another day addend to the week end like a Monday because every hates Mondays right. If a lot of people agrees you might get this to happen in you school. However there is going to be some one to not like you idea and they might go wrong for you but I think you can get this.

So now that you know how to do this it say do it. If you want this to happen then ask your principal if this can happen in any way. If you want it to happen in your school then do it. If it's happening but you dont want it to happen then stop it. However think what is going to happen if i do it so think what your going to do before you do it.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A39660CA003E,"Imagine that you like photography but they required you to get music, art, and drama instead of photography they will be upset. Although some people say that taking drama, music or a art class is required, but I disagree because it's their choice to take those classes or not to take those classes.

If you think that those classes are required, then your wrong because, they won't do any classes that are forced them to take. If they are forced then they might like it when the class goes on, but if you say take the class or you won't pass then they will pass the class then just not doing anything. Say one student who doesn't like art but he takes it and he goes on and become a popular artist, then people will think I should try those classes and see. Say, they did take the class because it was required but they fail, the passing average of that class will go from high to low because of it bring required. If they say it's required for half a year than full year then, I will choose they are but if it's for whole year I will choose they aren't required.

I think they aren't required to take those classes, because those classes aren't meant for them. Because say they want to go for other things after high school that doesn't need music, arts and drama then it was just a waste of their school time studying those, but not the one that you need for after high school. They will take it but they won't do anything in the class if they are forced to take what they doesn't like. I think school just have some class that are mandatory to take but elective aren't mandatory to take. Those classes should be elective than are required to take all those class.

In conclusion that, if they choose it's required to take those class, it might change their subject on what to do after school, but for some it will not change it. If they choose not to make it required than it will have their passing average higher than going low, and that the student can take the classes they want to take. So I think that those classes aren't required to take unless they want to take.                                                                                                     ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
60D8EB883A45,"CAN WE ACCOMPLISH BY ALWAYS DOING SOMETHING OR NOT DOING SOMETHING

Can people accomplish by always doing something? Thomas Jefferson wrote,""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Do we accomplish more if we are always not doing something productive? No, being inactive won't help accomplish nothing just by standing or laying down at home doing nothing. Although, we can accomplish more if we are always doing something. People would learn more things, meet new people to achieve goals in life and how much can be done if we are always doing something.

People would learn more things if they are more productive. I remember when my mom signed me up for a soccer team. I didn't know I was going to be joining a soccer team, or wanted to play on the soccer team;however, I did it and I learn how to kick a soccer ball, how to be a golly and I improved my speed. Another example was when I had a vocabulary test for English but I didnt know half of the vocabulary words, so I study till I learned the words.

Meeting new people to achieve a goals. I like being a indoor person, but when soccer season comes and I join a team I interact with new people and coaches to achieve my goals on how to become a better teammate or how I can improve my speed and mentality to become a great soccer player. Another example was when I talked to a new math teacher to help me on a equation I didnt understand. he helped me understand the equation, and helps me every time I need help on something in math now.

Imagine how much can be done if we are always doing something. people would be able to accomplish so many goals if we are always doing something instead of staying home and laying down and watch TV all day. when we get some free time we can work on something that would help us in the future and make us think better. Maybe when we think we dont need help, but actually do ask someone to help you to understand more instead of staying with the same mindset.

Although, some people maybe don't got that much time to accomplish things. Thats why they go inactive but still accomplish their goal on a long term time. Inactivity also can also serve a purpose, depending on the person maybe they dont got money or a transportation vehicle to get to their destination. Although, they can't just do nothing and wait for something good to happen to them.

People can accomplish their goals by always doing something that would helped them in the future. Thomas Jefferson wrote,''Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" People would learn more things, meeting new people to achieve a goal and how much can be done if we are always doing something productive. Although being inactive won't help accomplish nothing just by standing or laying down at home doing nothing.                   ",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
6418C102917D,"In cartoon sponge bob square pants sponge bob he say's "" imagination"" as to us is inferring for us to use our imagination, like no matter how old you are what disabilities you have is inferring to everyone ,But do you ever think imagination is important than knowledge?

Beginning,with this statement i agree because, when we were young little kids we would always imagine that was our big thing like, as an other parent would probably say to your child "" your child has a big imagination "". And imagination will always be apart of us we grew up having our little or big imagination's how do you think we would imagine us in the future or like some other examples: how we want to wear out clothes, what type of clothes we wanna wear, what design we want on our cake, or and how we imagine unicorns, ninjas,or any of those type of things ,and superheros. without imagination we wouldnt know about that or the sense of knowing what that is.

Also,

having imagination is also good because were not always gonna use our knowledge like for disable people not all of them have knowledge or even know what that is,for one example blind people yeah they have knowledge but also in there life they use there imagination throughout a blind person's life imagination is something they will use in there life spam and you wanna know why how do you think blind people know what a teacher is talking about or how they are drawing it blind people use there imagination they use it so they can understand what the teacher is doing or when there walking down the street or when buying clothes,There number one thing there gonna always use is imagination knowledge might also help because you have some information about it or do they just magically know what there doing no they imagine it,or they imagine were this thing is or that thing.

In conclusion, i agree with this statement "" imagination is more important than knowledge "" because for those given reasons like the one about us as kids we would use our imagination and how we would use it for ourselves and the other given example for the blind people how they have that throughout there life spam. therefore those are my reasons i agree with the given statement.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
92E97E947628,"Dear Principle i have herd that you are deciding whether all students should perform in the community service. I think it will be a great idea for our school and for our community. This will be able to help people know that if we do are work together as a group we will accomplish more work and that not just one man can do everything but if we are united we will succeeds. By doing all of this it will be able to make are town cleaner and let people know that we care about this town. By the way this will be a great opportunity for our community to be clean so if different people who comes from different places will make good judgement about are community and maybe they might tell their friends how they think about it. I hope you make your mind to say yes but whatever you choose I will still be happy with it.

Sincerely STUDENT_NAME",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
7ABD75EA7CBC,"Imagine going to school everyday to learn and experience new things, when it comes to lunch, students are ready to eat and enjoy there favorite food with others but the principal made an announcement about changing the lunch system by getting rid of junk foods to healthy foods. Students favorite food being replaced by healthy food will be a nightmare to them. No more pizza, burgers, spaghetti, etc, will be all gone and will cause a problem. Removing students favorite food to healtheir ones will be a bad idea. Students will dislike eating healthy food, and students will feel hunger and lose concentration in class.

Firstly, Some students will dislike some healthy food that they don't enjoy. For example, Generic_Name goes to lunch and sees the only food aviliable is a salad. He never ate salad before but sees a lot of vegetables including lettuce, tomatos, onions, etc. He feels disgusted by the food he was serve and rather starve. What I mean is that students being served to vegetables which they won't take a bite of, won't make them eat because they don't enjoy eating vegetables that was served to them and might get student to not eat but starve which will be bad to there body.

Additionally, the students will be in bad shape during class time. They will feel hungry, sick, or possibly pass out. For example, Generic_Name came back to class from lunch and he didn't eat anything because of the food that was serve. While doing class work, Generic_Name doesn't feel well and his stomach starts to growl because he didn't eat anything. He will lose focus and will start begging for food. What I mean by that is students in class will feel hungry and there stomach will soon to growl and will lose focus on class instructions. The principal should not make these changes and keep the system of lunch the same because there body will be in good shape and will gain energy through out the day.

Some people will disagree my reasoning and opinion on changing the school food system to healthier ones is a bad idea. They will say say it's a good idea because they will consume healthy foods that will make students grow stronger, will have a healthy diet, and be more energized within there life.

That may be true but that's not the case because student are comfortable on what they eat and what suits them will suit there future lifestyle. Thus, changing students favorite food to healthy ones in lunch is a bad idea.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,4.0
5AFBB5573AB3,"Have you ever just sat at home all day and used your phone? Oder food or play games and Facetime friends? being on technology doesnt help you make friends or help you get out of the house.

Some people say its a negative effect on people because all they do is use their phone when they need something, instead of going out getting fresh air or hanging out with friends. People that are constantly on their phones can cause them depression, because all they do is sit at home, and the phone provides them everything. it can also draw you away from friends and can be a distraction at school

It also can be a positive effect because you get to text your friends, for example example if a friend moved out of state you would still have contact with them. its also easier to do homework, or you can read a book online instead of going to the library and getting one.

""Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others"" in that quote it says that you can finish a task without having contacts with people, how is someone suppose to have social contacts with people? how do you learn new things or new meet people? Thats why technology can be bad for someone people.

For example when I'm on my phone all day cause i'm sick or stayed home from school I get bored being on my phone all day, yes the phone is useful but it doesnt help staying in your room all day watching a movie or a show, you dont get to learn anything. Talking to people and having social contact is sometimes better, you learn a new word or a new fact each day, but theres some negatives in all of it, you can lose close friends because you get distracted on your phone and you dont listen to what they have to say.

Theres a lot to do beside staying at home and being on your phone, you can go out and get lunch with friends instead of sitting at home and eating alone. I know a few people that don't have many friends, so they are usually on their phones a lot, you can see the difference, people that are on their phone a lot and just sit at home don't really know how to act in public. People sometimes dont like going out and trying new things because they got used to being on their phones.

In conclusion technology is a negative effect on people because it doesnt allow them to see whats outside of their phones. They tend to just use their phones when sometime its better if they talk to their friends in person. Using your phone can take you away from your friends and it isnt a good thing. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
4E0F689E099B,"Imagine a world full of good positive attitude! in this world a positive mind set takes you a long way for example, lets say one day you have decided to go eat out and waiter was having a bad attitude how would that impact you? offended ? perhaps irritated at the waiter for how he/was treating you with a bad attitude. well i'm gonna tell you the pros and some cons if there is any such as at work, home public,and by yourself.

First, People now a days just have a mask on and underneath that mask is a unhappy, sad person,and people live with that causing them to have a bad or a fake attitude toward the people around him/her making the environment not a very positive one. Ive always been told not to be mad or get mad at something it will make that situation 10x harder than it needed to be.

second, Surrounding yourself with positive people, people that have a great attitude ,people who love to see you succeed in you goals or at anything, people who dont bring you down, people who support and love you, people that tell you can do it. Hang around people with that attitude and i promise you, you yourself will succeed be happy in and out and have a positive attitude.

Life is always gonna have its ups and downs shoot, shoot i'm only a 17 year old boy and i had lots of barriers lots of downs lots of fake people that have came in and out of my life but my mother that mistakes are the beauty in life that you learn from them and prosper and grow dont let that change your attitude because it will change the way you think the way you talk i can go on and on about how a positive attitude can make you a better person and be successful in life.

Having a negative attitude is just negative and thats a ugly word being negative can impact you in so many ways at work nobody wants to hire a rude or behaved person because it would make the company look bad make your parents look bad and make you look bad. a negative attitude can bring, negative, thoughts negative actions and nobody wants that. even at home having and bad attitude and mama and thats a attitude you are going to regret when you get a smack across the face.

So yes i strongly agree that a positive attitude will take you a long way. Make you a better person and last make you successful person in life. Stay positive in a negative situation because it will make things ten times worse if you are mad or down learn to heal yourself time a time out step outside take a breather and think before you say or do. life is beautiful but its makes it ugly if you attitude is ugly so change it and make yourself a better. healthier person. i know this is out of the promt but to be succesful in life and to be what you wanna be you have to do that yourself nobody is going to do it for you. but first START OFF with making YOURSELF HAPPY for you not for anyone else. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
EE6ECB910EB2,"In my opinion, the idea to take off one day of school can have some benefits and some disadvantages, so is bad because in my opinion is a totaly change of schedules and students who work after school can have problems with that, other thing is, for me is not a big chage if they want to save some resources and enegy, but also can be good because the students and teachers rest more and they can save a bit of energy.

The students who have a job can have problems with their bosses and it can make a more hard schedule for the student because they don't gonna have any time to rest and they can have troubles at school if they don't rest the necesari for their health and their consentration at school; other negative thing is because it's unnecessary because it's not a big chage, if the school want to save energy one day don't gonna make a big change and also, maybe it's okay as it's and I think the original schedule with five days of school is good for all and it don't make any problem, and the last negative thing I see is the hours of work of the teachers, the teachers maybe don't do enough hours of work and don't get the same payment and maybe can affect them in that way.

These idea also have positive things like the chance for students and teachers to rest more or just for students, they have more time to do homework or work, other positive thing is to save a bit of energy and some resources, in some way the school can get benefit of these.

The problem with the schedules and the save of energy and resources, are some of the benefits and disadvantages I thought for these theme and in my opinion it's not a good idea to change something what is already working with something who maybe not work very well and something who is don't give big changes.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
125E7C6E0D31,"Ha ha ha that the sound of happy children playing video games. Video games are what everyone is playing even in their 30's you will still see them playing. Are video games really that fun for people in their 30's.

Why do they find This Activity Enjoyable.

First, Why do kids find playing video games exciting. Do they believe it's exciting and invigorating to play video games. Video games are exciting to kids because of the action danger and excitement they get each time they play a video game. Are video games a stress reliever for stressed kids and adults. Some video games can be frustrating, but some are relaxing and soothing for the mind like Tetris and Pokemon.

Second, There are many video games in the world that people like to play like Fortnite, League Of Legends, Roblox and more. Kids play games cause of how fun it is. Kids like to play video games like a pack of wolves looking for food. Kids use their senses when playing it's like their getting a mind workout while playing a video games and they just don't know it. adult and kids use 3 senses when playing video games hearing( listening) touch( ability to play) sight (looking around). They use their other senses when eating and smell the food.

Third, Video Games has a downside to adults and kids. They ruin your eye sight if you stare at them for a long period of time. They can make your attention span really slow. Makes you shy of the outside world and of other people. There are risks when having fun.

Lastly, Kids enjoy playing video games cause it video games they don't care about the consequences that come with playing them. Adults Understand the reason and they know it will come back for them in the future but they don't care. There are all types of reasons video games are fun and bad but to kids and adults it just a way to have fun. Why do you think kids and adults play video games.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
AF83C17B5451,"In school there are a lot of fun and educational activities. One of my favorite activity to do in school is a science experiment. In science there are a lot of awesome experiments and tools you can use, and they are fun to use. If there wasn't any fun science experiments; I wouldn't like to go to science.

Some kids say that science is the worst subject in school and it is boring. In my opinion scinece has a lot of cool stuff that you can't do in any other fun activity in school. my most favorite experiment is when we are mixing chemicals because you don't have a major clue of what is going to happen when you mix them up, and that is what makes it interesting and fun at the sma time. There are more experiments that you do in science like making a volcano eruption or something else but science can be fun if you pay attention to what the teacher is saying and following the rules because there can be fun but there has to be rules or somebody can get hurt

In conclusion there might be some better educational activities but in my opinion i like more science experiments, however, it does get boring sometimes and you just don't want to do anything, therefor, you just can't complain about life, you just got to with it and enjoy it .",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
F792FE4DCF1A,"I disagree with this statement because anyone can change their first impressions if you just give then time and a second chance instead of just seeing them mess up.

The first reason that you can change your first impression is just by giving them another chance that they can change becuase everyone deserves a second change when people mess up their first impressions you should be able to let them change it because even you might of mess up on your first impressions on a buissines meeting or even on a date and you do want them to remember your first impression they want to remember the time you changed your first impression to a better one to show people what you are really like.

The second reason is because it can be about a really important meeting and you messed up on your first impressions and the other buissines people would be like ""wow he messed up really bad on his first impressions"" and you want them to give you another chance so you can fix your first impressions so they so they can be like ""wow he really change from the first time he was here"". So give peolpe to change their first impressions.

The last reason is that your at your girlfriends house and you are eat with her and her parents and you mess up and the dad says

""his not the type of guy you should be dating"" just because you mess up now the dad does not like you anymore cause you mess up and we you go again you must change that first impressions that you showed them the first time and make it better so the dad doesn't hate anymore.

So inconluson you should give everyone a second chance to change their first impressions and make it better so they can see the person you really are. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
6DFD772CFC64,"School required students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during the break. The time we live on right now students should get projects over the summer, so they can prepared for college and other things in life this is why the schools are giving them work so they dont forget about school and keep learning everyday. While some people around the world say that teachers should design the summer project for the students. It is better for the students to design their own summer project because they have better ideas, Can make their projects less stressful, and make it more fun with their friends.

All students in the world have better ideas to how to design your own project and make it better. Students have better understanding of what they want to do for there project like having better ideas and knowing what they want to work on. Cristiano Ronaldo wrote a article about why is good students should design their projects and why teacher should let them design their own article. Cristiano Ronaldo is a soccer star but he went to high school and know what the students want to do and design. He wrote on the article that students brain is still developing;he said that if students keep making their own decision and teachers let them choose their designs of projects they can come up with better ideas that other people cannot even think about. In the article he wrote that we students have a amazing brain and we can come u with the best ideas and design of projects that no one else can't. Everyone keep saying that teachers should make the designs of students projects for the summer.

Students of everywhere can make there project design less stressful if they get to choose what they can do. When students get to design there own project is less stressful for them because they can choose how they want to do it.

Leonel Messi came to every high school in the united states to talk about how stressful is when teacher give students projects over the summer. They make us work super hard and is super hard to communicate with their teacher over the summer. He talk to us that picking our own projects is way better than teachers picking the design because we can make our own ideas and it is less stressful and that is going to be easier. When students pick their design they don't need to worry about asking question to their teacher and stressing out. Messi told us that when he was in high school,he used to choose his own design of project because it was less stressful and more fun to do. when people keep saying that teacher should choose our design it so stressful because us as student want to choose our design for our summer project.

People in all high schools keep saying that is more fun for students to make our design of project ,because it makes our studies more fun and incredible. The mother of my friend ones told me that there is nothing more fun than getting to design a project as a student. She told me that when she was in high school their teacher choose the project for them and that wasn't fun for no student. That's why she told me that is more fun to get to choose your own design of project because when teachers get to choose them is super boring and stressful students sometimes cry. She told me that If i had the chance to make my own design to take it because it was not going to be fun to if the teacher choose the design. It is going to be more fun if you get to choose your own design for the summer project because i can get to make it with my friends and probably family members. Never let your teacher choose design the summer project for the students.

While other people might say that these summer projects should be teacher designed because the student keep learning more and keep working hard;however, if students make their own summer project design it is way better because student have better ideas, less stressful, and get to have more fun while doing the project. Messi gave us a great talk about how to choose your own design of project can make every students less stressful. Students around the world have a ruff time trying to do projects that their teacher gives them over the summer. Teachers should let students choose their own design so students can relax and have fun over the summer and they can keep doing there project and still have time to have fun with family and friends. Every student around the world should start making their own design for their project.        ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
8C3557D720F5,"Do you want to know some enjoyable ways to do at the park? Well, at the park you can walk your dog, you can have a picnic with family or friends, some parks have animals you can look at, and you can ride your bike, skate board, and scooter.

One enjoyable thing to do at the park is, you can walk our dog. While you are walking your do, you are also getting some exercise by walking with them. It's also fun because the dog can explore new places to go to.

Also it's somewhere you can take your dog to go out and enjoy nature with you. Some dogs like walking, so a park is a good place to take them to go walk. Also you and your dog can have some time together.

Another enjoyable way to do at the park is, you can have a picnic with your family of friends. Having a picnic is fun because you get to talk to the person with you and eat with them. Having picnics at the park can be good for example, the weather when it is hot or warm or it is a beautiful day outside. When you are done with your picnic you can go and explore more of the park. If you brought someone with you and they never been there before then they might like it and they would want to come back again.

Third enjoyable way to do at the park is, some parks have animals you can look at. It is enjoyable to look at the animals for example, the bears, fishes, turtles, goats, chickens, and pigs. You can also go look at the pig races. There could be some animals you may have never seen before. Sometimes when you go see the animals at the park some people can tell you some stuff to learn about the animal like where is is from or what it eats and you can feed the animal food that the park provides them to eat.

Last but least, you can ride your bike, stake board, and scooter. At the park you can learn how to ride the the thing you brought and practice. The park is also a safer place because there won't be a lot of cars. While you are riding on what you brought with you, it is fun to ride it while you see the beautiful features of the park. It is a good place to go and play with your friends with bikes, skate boards, and scooters because the park is safer than the street and might be a big park to play at with your friends.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
D184EDBFB3B8,"I believe most of the students prefer to work alone, but I prefer to work with a group because we have more ideas and we can finish our work faster.

One of the reasons, I like to work in group when we are doing a project or classwork for English class is because I know my classmates and working together we can share more ideas of how we are going to create a magnificent project and impress our other classmates and specially to you our great teacher.

The other benefit will be to finish our work faster because everyone in the group will collaborate with some work that it will help us to finish the work without worrying to turn in the project late because we will help each other to get the work done and get a good grade as a group.

On the other hand, most of my classmates prefer to work by themselves because they do their project the way they wanted to create it and they like to have just their ideas in their work. Also, they don't like to be working with classmates who are only playing and not taking the work serious.

Overall, working with a group shows, how the students or other people become more successful not only in a business, but in classes too you can get good grades and have done an excellent work. Team work not only help you to get more abilities and ideas to work with partners, but also helps to create a strong and unique friendships.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
9C601D9FCB5F,"Technology is an important thing in our lives at this moment and it will be more important in the future. Humanity always try to look forward for what is better for our lives and make everything more easier. While some people say this is a good thing, some people think it's bad for our lives because people stop interacting face-to-face in public, they don't want to get out of the place where technology is at, and some might have an agressive behaivor when they told them technology is bad for them.

In the past people always met in the street, there was no technology were with a single ring we can saw our friends into a little screen and talk to them. Now, this problem became a bad thing in our society, people don't go outside to meet friends, or just enjoy how the city looks, they prefer to stay at home and talk to people that they don't know who they are. Some of these people might say that there's no difference when they talk to a stranger online because we used to talk strangers in the street;however, there's a risk when you talk to this people online and it's the fact that some of them used fake accounts to hack personal information and other things. When we used to meet strangers in the street, we saw how they behave and what they're doing, and that's how people made friends in the past, saw how they act and behave,but now Internet is the key of making a friend that we don't know if it's real.

When we were kids it was all fun to play outside: in the streets,going to a friends house, or even going to the park with them, but now things have change a lot since we were those kids who played in the streets. Now with the new technology people made video games, and now is the popular thing between kids and teenagers. All we have to do is to connect the device to the TV and just play, but some people play the whole day and they don't want to go outside to play any sport, or going to a friends house. When they go to school the most common topic between every kid is about video games, and that can affect their lives because playing all the time won't help anyone to study for an important test,or doing their homework. In the past when they created the first console it was a wonderful thing, but some kids didn't have the enough money to buy it, so instead of save money for a tiny console, they save money to eat something like an ice cream, a burguer, and go to attraction parks,but now we can see how the kids and the teenagers from now don't want to get out where technology is at.

Due to the amount of technology we have now develop, a new behaivor where if we prohibited them to use technology, they reach to the point where they become agressive. Families have issues when their kids became agressive just because the prohibited the use of technology, and this reaction is trendy right now in different parts of the world. Some doctors said that the reason why they react like that is because they are in an imaginary world where they can do whatever they want, until the parent try to take apart their""world"" to become a normal kid, but now that technology is in every single corner, it's hard to make a kid stop use technology. Even teenagers went to a ponit when they are playing video games they break everything they got on their sight, including the video game device that their parents bought for them.

Some people might say that technology is something positive in our live because we create artifacts that make our lives more simple;however, technology is bad in our lives because we stop acting like normal people and we want to make our lives more easy, and that can affect how our saciety can be in the future if we don't control the use of technology.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
A0E95D8119F7,"I would agree with Emerson's in this world be yourself which is most important things . If we have confidence your own because we face with different kind of stutionan that we have to fight and difficult staff in life never give back keep working hard encourage find way that take of your stutional.

For example: If we start something new that took long time to resive that result we have to be patient for that greatest thing never get quickly every beginning took time for that accomplishment we are face diffcualte time like might field are might be win for first chance never lost our hope keep working hard.

don't depended to other people never improve in life because depended to other. In the world indefinite multitude or great quantity or distance make a difference a way. For all the world in every way ex acuity copies which look for all the world like the original. You should trying to become succeed in life to get of the way from problem find solution how to succeed in you're life.

First, trying as mach could doing make more successful this new world sometimes is life easy but, sometimes is not because life complicate and busy. If continue this way your life totally change working hard more successful and, more achievements. Should be put the goals what should I, do to accomplishment my goals for that you should keep trying to never stop your trying because noting impassable without trying. When start something for that need trying to resive achieve your pride. Those people are trying are working hard now the a have more power.

Then, greatest thing you have to skill which is more important that part of life also. Without skills never get achievement because everything bast on standing everyone the have special skills that make encourage and make them successful in the life. For example one person good in the reading some are the writing, some cooking, some are management, and some are making with hand ext... Those are part of skill everyone they had for that resance this greatest achievement this very important. Those people the don't a have those are more make terrible never couldn't solve the own problem the need the come to help them this is showing weakness a person. Some people thing the don't have skill this impossible but, never are used own skills the thing couldn't do it the always thinking negative they lost.

After, beyond every good thing the have achievement. When get our aschivemnt that made feeling proud your self encourage you doing good things that challenge of life the person make more successful.

I do agree with Emerson statement the encourage you working hard trying your life you would be get greatest achievement.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
287BE4F26530,"I agree because is important to have a positive attitude, and it is better to be positive thant negative, because if someone want to talk to you, an want some advise and him give your a negative answer, the other person will be negative, but is the person give him a positive answer then the other person will be be happy, and will try to do his best to stay positive, but some people don't like to be positive, and always are beind a negative person on everything, they are person that if you tell them something, they will answer angry, and dont like to make friendship, for example if your are new in a school, and you dont have friends then, you will try to make friends in a positive way, and it will work because you are dont beind a negative person to others, second example is that the person is someone negative and the other person also, they will be fights and discussion on each other, that's why people have to be positive and sure one everthing ",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
0B72A4344B3E,"To make a successful personality from ourselves; We should always accomplish new things, otherwise inactivity cant serve our purpose. Many people think that, behind of every success is your hard wroking, and also achievment without hardworking is impossible. In my opinion inactive people are not have a good future. So they should always do something new to be able to accomplish because, to have a bright future, always successful in our life and being a good personality in our community.

Every people wants to have their best future and wants to have their best life, all of these things comes by how you put yourself in a hard time. It is obvious that without nothing anything we not gonna accomplish. Accomplishment is always comes by how hard work you do. Inactive person do not have a bright future. Inactivity makes people tired of their life because they dont have any plan for their future, they just live for no idea, with no hopes. So it is better to think about our future and build our future from now.

Being successful in our life is what everyone want. Every body want they way to find they key of success. But the person who get successed, they actually did accomplish new things. They things that makes our future bright and that we can have a good life and carrer is to work hard, focus on one main thing that make our carrier and believe in ourselves which has the important view in our life. Being inactive person is really useless in our community. We cannot be anything in our future if we be inactive.

Obviously everybody choose to have a good personality in their community. Having a good personality makes everyones to proud on you. To accomplish a good personality we should makes our thoughts and education higher. Without having a main goal in our life we cannot achieve our aim. Education is the only way for success so by having a good education and carrer we have more attach with our community and we get respect from our community. Inactivity is not the way that we can accomplish more. I think inactivity does not serve a purpose it just makes your brain stop so you could not be able to accomplish.

People should always try their best to make their life easier and it is become by hard work. People who has inactive in their life they will hurt in the future. Successful people always did something before in their life so now the successful in they have a comfort future. The reason behind accomplishment is hardworking, believe in ourselves and look forward for our goal which inactive people do not believe on this. For these reasons and many more people should do hard work to accomplish more things.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
085C8B43ADD6,"Some students would be more excited about having a longer summer vacation, it can give the students a longer time to spend with their families and friends, but if we think in a positive side it also means that having a longer break i could be most likely be a reward for those who has been studying hard throughout the whole entire year that deserves to get a vacation or a break of getting away from everything that has them stressing out over paper or either having to worry about their grades, which is good for students to knows how serious and important their education is so, they can success in the future all full of opportunities knowing what do to when it comes to face their problems alone base on what they have learn.

For example in this Prompt educators thinks that students do not seem to retain what they have learn during the year when they are coming back to school after their break, they seem not know about anything or forget about stuff, which is true people to not appear to be thinking about things that might stress them out, instead they try to have fun with their love ones, and of course try to read some books every other day or read the news papers so you wont be left behind on what is actually going on in the world, perhaps we might forgot about stuff younger people are faster learners and thinkers, can not be able to forget about important information that easy.

Most of the students usually travels a lot during summer vacation out of the state or they like to visit different countries, so yes basically what i'm trying to say is that a longer break or summer vacation is a good idea for those in specific who travels far away so it can give them enough time to explore wherever they going to be staying, and this can even be helpful for students to learn about different history, experiences, explore and this are some stuff that they can even share with their friends in school or with their teachers, that it can improve more their knowledge. Being away from school just for at least one month it can really effect anyone, I think that this could be effecting on just depending on how distracted you will be during the break, some students can't even call it a ""break"" or ""vacation"" because some of them would rather to take this time to earn a little bit of money to be able to effort for their needs and expenses,

or they might have responsibilities to take care of,Others likes to volunteer in community services or try to be involve in different activities that will keep you busy.

In respond to everything i do think that having a longer summer vacation would be good enough to catch up as much as we can with our old friends and families maybe when we were in school we was't able to see them enough because some of our love ones live far away from us so we take our time to spend every little moment we have lost while we were way and it benefits everyone in general, not just for students.        ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
F4E879AE7FBA,"The greater danger for most of us is setting our aims too high and falling short because many people try to aim for something that's imposible for them to accomplish, falling short on your goal will make you want to give up, and not having the motivation and energy will get you no where.

Most of us should set a realistic goal for them to aim; but sometime we aim too high and set an impossible goal that we can't accoplish it.

For example: some people aim to be perfect; but that's imposible because no one is perfect.

Some people will do so much work for no reason because if they don't have the materials or a plan for that impossible goal th,en they're wasting their time.

The danger of this is that no one will accomplish a single goal if they're aiming to high.

Many people try to get the results that they want; but many fall short.

Falling short on a goal can be a big danger, because it could lead many people to calling themselfs a failure.

This can also make people want to give up on what they were aiming for.

Everyone wants to be successful in life and not a failure, because if you're a failure, then you'll face many challenges and suffer.

Many successful people in the world accomplish their goals because they have the motivation and energy on doing better; but many people don't have a motivation or energy that they get no where in life. Motivation and having energy are some keys that can help people aim for something big and be albe to accoplish their goals.

Another way people can aim big or be successful with their goals is if they have a positive mind set.

The great artist Michelangele once said, ""The greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark.""

Setting your aims low and achieving your marks is not the great danger or a danger. However, setting your aim too high and falling short is a great danger because you can learn from it.            ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
314E6ED40C6A,"I remember one time when I applied for one school that was private. I talked with the principal of that school, and he told me that. I needed a specific career for to be in his school.

Students need a specific career by the time they enter to high school.

I'm agree with this article because you already know what do you wnat to do and study to be a proffesional in a future just choose a career that you like it, and then do it.

choose a career that you feel that you like it, and practice all the time for example; I like the mechanic career. I like the cars, and I feel that mechanic would be a good career, because you fix the cars, and I think I can get good money for it.

when you feel that something you like it, you want to do all the time, if you have a career that you like it, practice you career for example; I love play soccer and, play soccer is one of my favorite things I like to do in the summer I practice a lot soccer , one of my dream is to be a proffesional soccer player one day because I love soccer choose one career of proffesional always keep in your mind, and try to do the best to get your career. Each student have a career that they like, but sometimes they don't get the career that they want for reason of the life, but do you best to get finished you career one day for example; my sister she wanted to be a nurse, and she always practice the things that one nurse do, and she always studied a lot for be a nurse, and now she have six year working of nurse. She get career that she wanted, and she told me that when she was little she wanted to be a nurse, and now she is a nurse.

Found your self first and look what you want to be in a future, is a lot things in this world, and you look for something that you feel happy doing it found a career that you like it, and try to get it.  ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
655BD307F87D,"Many students in high school are looking for the way to reduce their time in school, there are several reason for students to think about it. These students might be passing through hard situatons, such as: economical crisis, issues at home, need of independence or any other problems that is not allowing them to be in school the time they should be in, but some people do not need a short period in high school because of they are struggling, this group of people might want go to college earlier or get a job as soon as possible for personal reason.

In the United States, we live everyday a situation call ""migration"", this type of situation make people to leave their countries for some valid reason, regardless the issues they will have coming into the country. In fact many of this people is looking a better life here, the life they could not have in their countries because of their governments, scarcity of resources, scarcity of jobs, low wages, dangerous areas and many others situations that nobody would like to live. Between this group of people we can find students that were in school in their countries, but when they come into this country and they get in high school, as a result of the ""bad"" education from certain countries, these students are settled in grades where they should not be because of their age and learning capacity. This is one of the main reasons why high schools and the departament of education should have programs where this group of students can find better opportunities of learning without changing the time they should be in school.

In another point of view, for school districs to offer this type of programs, the country will get benefits because of the students will get in college earlier and we are going to get a lot of professional people that can help to improve our nation.

Economy will be a good reason to want get out of high school one year early, this is because many people do not count with the amount of money that is needed to go to college, many students prefer to work to make money for their payments instead of getting financial help from the bank that they will have to pay with higher interest in the future. Other students think about the possibility to go to college out of the country because of the high cost of them, but they still have to work and get extra money.

The departament of education of the United States is encharge for all these changes and they should take this option because it would benefit people, would benefit the country, and will benefit students in general.

The program could work if students stay after school or they come at night, this would give them more opportunities to make a plan where they can work hard to reduce their time in high school, it is really important to keep on mind that many students already work in their free time and they might not be able to do an extra time in high school, that is why this offer should be analyzed in order to the student benefit, but at the same time giving the enough amount of knowledge they will need.",4.0,3.5,4.5,4.5,3.5,4.0
FA9E315D7939,"Some school dictrict shifted to a four day week and at ten hour for day, not because fo fenancial needs, but other did so to make it earser to schedule soporting event or after-school activities. On my opinion, my school should follow the model by extending the school day two hours. Beacuase they conserver enegy and resources.

The benefist of goint to a four-day week and ten hours day for schooling, is that if offers teacher and students an additional day of rest every week. More rest then equates to dealing with less strees over the courses of a school year. Students feel lees pressure, because they have more time to study at their own place at home, especially in the later grades. For example, I am senior in my school, if my school follow this model I will have more time for work in my homework.

The disadvantages of four-day week and ten hours day. Shifting do this schedule does have centain disadvantages, especially for the working parent. For the parents of yourger student, an aditional full day of daycare nay need be schoduled very weed Instead of a partial day this leads to added costs that some families, living paycheck to paycheck, may not be able to afford.

In conclusion, the school be should the four-day week and extending the school day two hours.     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
1846CE5F244D,"community parks, state parks, and national parks provide a wide variety of interesting activities. Write about an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors. Using specific details and examples, explain why someone might find that activity enjoyable.

First of all, Let say that you don't really see your family that often, You can take them to the park when they come to your house so you all can spend time together as a family that you don't really see. You can talk to your brothers if you don't see him him or her that often you can take him or her to the park ride around with bikes, Maybe go for a run to burn some calories down so you can stay healthy and in a good shape. And if you have a problem with someone in your family the park is the best way yo go and talk it out, Why because you can smell that fresh and clean air from the outside world you have time to think what you really want to do and talk to your self, If your a religious person that likes talking to god Im telling you go to the park you can talk to him you get everything of your head and you don't think stupid stuffs, Because some people when they are mad or they are sad they just go on their room and lock them self in their room that's not good because you are not breathing clean air like the outside world and the firs things teenagers do is yeah I am a bad boy I am going to smoke with my friends, I ask you this what benefits do you get from doing that? The park is the best way to go and take your stress out and clear your mind.

Second If your an athletic and you don't have money to go to the gym or you don't have time, Don't worry about that I have one way for you to stay healthy and on shape by going to the park look there is so much stuffs you can do at the park you can go for a run, push-ups, curl-ups you can Stretch your body, And the good thing is that you are not breathing that air from the Gym and at the park you are breathing clean and fresh air. The best thing is that it is totally free and you can take anyone you want to take and you can see more people there that you don't know you can make more and new friends.

Another reason is that If the house you leave in is to small to make a party, Guess what I have the correct spot for you the park you can play music you can make a big party invite us much as people you want to invite. The good thing is that the park has games for kids to play on and other stuffs and they even have food you can go buy food they have a little lake where you can go on little boats of four people and see different stuffs. Why would you want to have a party at your house when you don't know If people are going to come and where is going to be crowded and people might want to leave because there is to much people. When you can have the park because a lot of people like the park because they can go for a walk they can spend time with friends and family and there is a lot of space there is a small lake with boats that can carry four people you can have fun and experience the park.

Finally going to the park is good for you I mean I am not going to force you to go to the park but you should go just one time and you will see how cool and beautiful it is you can go with your dog, son, or your daughter, Plus sometimes they make a little concert and a lot of people come and dance with different people and different music. And in the summer they make a little fair and let me tell you man It is amazing, You can try different types of food because people come and sell food and It doesnt cost that much you can smell the delicious food. If you don't want to buy a ticket you can just walk around the park and see the different types of foods and you can go see the ocean and smell the nice wind.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5
1535E922B3AA,"One topic that is frequently debated today is that to conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four_day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. people is discussing if school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours.

Some people think that this is not a good idea because if that happened students, teachers, and all staff would work more and they are going to get tired more easily. And these four days would be consider more longer than five normal days, Also maybe school would required more things to graduate and to complete these requirements it would take more time Also people think that school should have any other ideas to conserve energy without changing the days of school. for example: turn off lights when we do not need it, open the Windows etc..

I think that extending school two more hours would be very difficult for us because almost all the students have to work after school and some have full time and that required to work more that four days so if school is more long we would not complete with our jobs. And i think that if we use the energy how we have to, that would make a big difference. Also i think that if we get opinions from other people outside of the school we would have more good ideas of what to do to conserve all energy.

I believe that study just four days should be more difficult to learn we probably get more easily tired because would be ten hours each day And and if we see and think if school is only four days we have to wake up more early and go home more tardy and actually the energy would be the same amount as five days there is just a little difference between five to four days of school. Also if we get tired maybe i think would be more difficult to learn.

Finally to decided the best solution we need to give our opinion and discuss it. And I believe that more than one student need more time than others to learn because in my experience is really really hard to learn new things,

new units, new information, and if we have only four day it make more difficult for many students. Also as we see, there is many ideas to conserve energy and very easy to catch up like in the first paragraph there are two very useful ideas how to conserve the energy, without taking away any day.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
739B9009D8D2,"While students are in Middle School in 8th grade, they get the opportunity to see many career's and see which one are they planning to take or have an idea of the career. students should have the opportunity to choose their own career, sometimes students are force to take the career that their parents want. Why? because in many occasions they do not have another choose. In this decade teenagers have the right to choose the career that they want to study. In High School students are preparing and learning different elements and different skills, however; learning others skills benefit teenagers in their future. How? and Why? because learning different skills prepared teenagers for any jobs or if they have any kind of problem anywhere. Guiding students for what they like since a young age is an acceptable idea because they learn more and more each day. Their mentality is improving each day. For example: They try to look for information, asking people that already have experiences with the career that they are thinking to take. After Middle School and High School students are ready to start college and they should be assuming what is best for them.

In some parts of the world teenagers do not have the opportunity to go to school, countries that do not have good recursive, for example: Honduras, El Salvador, Guatemala, Africa. In those kind of countries many teenagers do not go to school because they prefer to work beside of going to school, their education is not good enough. That is why so many people come to U.S. because they know that the education that U.S brings them is their future. Each Teenager comes with a dream to U.S. Kids at age of 12 of those countries comes with big mentalities with big dreams, that is what helps many teenagers to choose a good career in U.S, at young age they know that they have to make their family proud and be the alpha of the family with a good career. Also as the population in those countries is increasing day by day is harder to find a job even if you had a good diploma it do not matters. The society in those countries when kids want to go to school their parents don't let them, ""the education here is not going to guide you anywhere"" that is what they said, that is why now days are many terrorism in many countries because parents takes the dreams of their children and through them to the trash. Many parents should give teenagers the opportunity of studying and talk them about how important is to have a good education and let them think about the career that they want at young age.

The importance of knowing and thinking about the future at young age has been an impact in now days, because in many cases around the world teenagers do not think about their future, they do not care about school, jobs, education, or their family, but in U.S teenagers have many chances of getting a good job and getting a good healthy life and a great education.

Teenagers will have their life set after High School.

Teenagers are going to be an inspiration for others.

They will have a good job.

Ensuring that students should have their career in mind by the time that they enter to High School for them to learn more and preparing when they get to college and learn much more and be an inspiration for many other teenagers and for others to think of the importance of having a good education and career. ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
F8FD4F6B6DE6,"Dear, Generic_Name

The issue on this prompt is that positive attitude is the key to success in life. Even if you do not feel well, we need to show a good attitude to people. A positive attitude is always important in our life.

Show a positive attitude when you are in school or work is really important, to any place that we go always be respectful with people. I agree with this statement as a result that if we want to achieve our goals, first thing that we need to do is always be with a good attitude to everything. The importance of attitude is that people will treat you, like the way you speak to them.

What people like teacher, students, and doctors achieve is as a result that they were success in life to achieve what they are now. These person always were with a positive attitude to achieve what they want to do. Sometimes depend on how our personality looks like, people evaluate ourselves.

Like I said to triumph in life, we need to obey life lesson. Sometimes we learn the importance of attitude from another person. Positive attitude teach us to appreciate life, as a result that some people can not have education. some people that do not have attitude they never go to school, as a result that they don't think positive. A good education is like a positive attitude, we can achieve great things.

Sincerely,

Generic_Name        ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
3AD5BFDC11E4,"People who want to success in life have to failure more than once without loss of enthusiasm. Enthusiasm is important because is what keeps you doing what you want to accomplish. I strongly agree with the statement of Minister Winston Churchill.

I personally think that in life there is always up and downs. For example, when i got bad grades i always think on what am i not doing right so i can fixed it. However, to success in life you have to failure more than once but you have to know that there is going to be obstacles that are going to bring you down but you don't have to let them stop you because you have to think on what you want to accomplish or in what you want to success. If a person losses interest in something they want to, then they're not going to keeps going. In conclusion, you have to fall so you can get up and keep going to the goal.

Loss of enthusiasm can not give you success in life. For example, when you have a goal and there is many obstacles is because your close to get to rich it. However, you can keep doing what you love so you can accomplish the goal that you wanted. Although, there will always be somethimg that try to stop you but you don't have to let stop you. In conclusion, if you don't loss enthusiasm you can do whatever you want.

To success in life you have to think positive and act positive in front of anything that want to stop you. Although, you have to show then what you are capable of and what can you became if you don't loss enthusiasm. However, you have to failure so you can have a lesson and you can learn from that lesson. In conclusion, to success you have to failure more than once so you can accomplish the goal.                                                                                                                           ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
CBFEE0C81C5E,"Its not a good idea for students to identiify a career by the time they enter high school. The three reasons are because it can cause to much stress on the student, they wont be able to focus on their school work, and it can unmotavite them to succesed in their careeer. If the student is expected to identify a career by highschool it can affect how their doing in school becuse all they will be thinking about is a career to pick. They wont focus on their work in class or pay attention in class which will make them fail and slump the class. That can unmotavite them and they can stop showing to school and drop out. Those are my reasons on why I think making a student choose a career by highschool is bad. Others might argue that a student who has a career in mind by the time they enter highschool will succesed because they know what they want to do in life. It will guide them to success in the future, they will have all highschool to study about their career they chose. However, that might work on some students but it wont work on all bacause not everyone knows what they wanna be in life. Some drop out of school cause of the stress it puts on them and just start working to make money. Those are my reasons why I think we shoudn't pressure students on choosing a career so early in high school. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
FAA9FC1B315B,"In my personal opinion when some schools offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing I mostly disagree. Its not because I am attending a public high school. There are reasons why I mostly disagree about this situation.

One of the reasons why I disagree is because this might hurt the students communication skills.

when you have classes online you are not at the school you are home taking this class so you basically don't associate with anyone except your teacher now since i have never took a online class i wouldn't be able to tell if its better to not know no one or to associate with anyone but personally I just dont't thing it's good for students to attend online school if you are someone that like to work with people and not just your teacher. Other students also might be able to understand some stuff that you don't understand and that they should be able to help you. They won't be able to help you if you not there with them.

The second reason why I disagree and I really don't think that online schools is not beneficial is that it hurts your participation skills too. Here in school we do so much activities connected to things we are learning and it helps very much because if you do activities connected to the things we are learning it gets stuck in your mind. Its also better to ask questions and to understand better. There might be some stuff that you didn't understand face to face with your teacher its better to ask them like that and understand like that instead of emailing them or contacting them through different thing.

Also the teacher might not respond as soon as possible and that might be a problem and affect your grade and thats why its better to talk to your teacher face to face and deal with understanding face to face that's my second opinion.

My last and final reason is that you might get lazy and miss classes since you take it at your home . That might affect your grade too which is very risky if you're not a productive and committed person to your education online class is not for you. For example me personally it will not be good for me because I am a very lazy person i am pretty sure I

will miss classes either by sleeping in or some other unexeptalbe reasons . But also there are people that are very organized and careful people out here that can risk this for those kind of people online classes are good and they can take it because thy are committed to Finnish there education in a very careful way.

Those are my good reason why i don't agree with online classes it's a good thing that schools offer distance learning as an option for students if you have a good reason why you don't actually go to the school but personally i dont agree with this situation.                                            ",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
9B69DE203555,"When asking for advice, 93% of the people in America talk to more than one person. I think seeking multiple opinions will help you make a better choice rather than asking one person for advice.

It could also help you out with other situations through out life. This is why you should talk to more than one person when asking for advice, you can get other peoples opinions, the way others understand your situation, you can see situations differently.

When you talk to more than one person to ask for advice you can get other peoples opinion. Everyone you know thinks differently. Sometimes people may have some of the same thoughts but not every situation has the same solution. What one person has to say is different from what another person says.

People understand things differently. Some people you talk to will not understand your situation. They will not see the situation the way you see it. If they do not completely understand your situation they could say the wrong thing. When they say the wrong thing it could make your situation a lot worse. You should always have multiple people you know you can trust and you could talk with to ask for advice in any situation. While others will know exactly what to say and do because they probably have been in situations like yours.

You can see other situations differently. When you talk to more than one person to ask for advice you start to see things differently. It changes the way you think about any situation. You will have an open mind and you will know what to say when other people ask you for advice. Knowing what to do when other people ask you for advice can help you out with a lot through life. It can help build stronger relationships and people can trust you. Trust is very important because people can talk to you about anything and you will know how to react and what to say.

In conclusion, talking to more than one person to ask them for advice can help you make the better choice. It can also help you out with other situations later in life. This is why you should talk to more than one person when asking for advice, you can get other peoples opinions, the way others understand your situation, you can see situations differently. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F17A4EF296EB,"Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them. Beacuse

Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them. Why is this so matter, not all student would like to distance himself from school. Even if you seat one what are going to do by listing to an online school site. Now every is time to twlk bout my three more reason why i post these.

Firstly, bot all student woud be able to take online classes i don't see nothing from i as a student would not like it, i woulike to say by taking an online classess is is not worth it.

My Second reason is about me whiles i was growing up. Since the i was born coming up, my mom said to me the day you start going to school Henry make it your own. Because there was no tecnology, no internet to used for and online classes. Because when ever mom give 1 dollar to go to school i will walk from my house to school which is 4 miles away from my home. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
83C48C5697AE,"Living in a place with frequentely hihgest demand to provide my best, is one the must important achievement. I agree with Emerson statement because with the individuality we can reach all our goals.

It is to important for me to recognize that i have to get my goals with effort. Because this help to provide, work hard, competition, and bocome the best .Individuality is a good factor to trust in my self to be the best because help us to look for option that help our lifes

.Working by my self make me work hard. when a person work by his own company he try to do a great work fixing everything it is the such as work alone, if you work alone yo going to do a perfect job to impresione others labors .For example, when i work without partner, i try to do a great gob to be one on the best workers. When i do my own work i feel excite cause, i could receive an award for be a good producer. everybody want to be award for their job so everrybody wish a reward. But to be award we have to hsave capacity in the jobs Many person due the same thing like me cause doing my the own work provide a big result. So working by my self make an emotion to work hard and to increase the amoung. Consequently to do a individual work make a good results. Doing own projects workers show more production In the factory and result good Therefore this help to get alot resources by workers.

Competiton is a ways to decrease the teamwork. individual competition is a big example of overcome. Examples could be when a person start to work in his job and start to recieve more money because the person is doing a great work ,this make that others poerson get mad so in the factory start the competition cause everyone want to recieve more money and they thick is unfair be reciving the same amoung of money so they start to argued why the manager give more money to the new guy but the thing is that he has a good specialization in the job. concecuently Many time the work competition provide a good production in the factory so, everyone want to get their goals like a good amount of products also,big accomplishment occur with the worker is trying to find a new way to get more product than other. For example, when a worker finished his assignment could receive free time,this make feel angry other workers so , they are going to try to look for others forms to produce more than the winner because, they want to receive the same reward for the production . To do a good competition the work have to be alone to and with big group people. competition is a good way for individuality work to provide a emotional affect. In many companies the owners look for a way that workers produces a lot and they offer money or free time to the person that make more products .as result, being in a factory with many labors working seperated make a big impact where everyone want to procud the most materials. Therefore,challenge could be a a good idea for separated jobs .

Looking for an accomplishment to become the best. Every one in this life want to have something to be recognize in this world althogh,to be a succefull person we have to work hard. Not matters what tell about us such as critique,bullying ,etc. The only thing that is important for us who we are. So the best thing that could can happens in our life is be a place where frecuently we are demand to do different things. Although with many problem we have to be patience and support all bad things. Because,if we wish to be different than the rest of persons and realize our goals. thought must be working by our selves. Because sometimes nobody is with us to provide help. fighting by my self i could be a big man in the socierity. Currently in the world we have many competition one example can be soccer,almost the majority look in the tv .Soccer is a game where a team have 24 for player. They have to compite who is the leader in the team. So like in the real life the leader is the person that work hard,help the other players .Otherwise, could be a leader in a company, to be the leader of a company ,the leader had to compite with other person that wanted to become a big leader ..Therefore to be a person succesfull have to take individual decision .

Being in a world where have to take decision and concern about goals is the best thing that we can have to show our capacity. Doing my own job make me put effort and dedication. Work in gruop is affect by bet. Being a different person than others. The person that different quality could be someone that can help. Because, this kind of person make the differences in the world trying to win in a place where the competition and the demand are in high level ,so they try to have imfluences in the in their jobs. The individuaity help alot in the world to be a succesful place. For example in the govermen there are many people with a big level to compite with other this, that means it i s has a great achievement in the government,so i agree with Emerson statement cause the competition provide good benifit for us and too the progress of the government,factory,countries,therefore being a part with competiton meke us to improve our best",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
A6AECACCFAA8,"A problem can be good or bad. you can learn from the problem that you made. Sometimes you can't learn from the problem you did. I can agree and disagree with this statement. Not all people can think it can be true because you can do something wrong and get in trouble for it. You can keep doing the same problem and not care for it.

You can choose what your problem's are. You don't need to have a problem to do your best. You can be good at something and not have a problem with it. Some problems are good because you learn from what's good and bad. If you do something that's wrong it's ok. Because doing the right thing can be hard for people to do. Much of the time theirs something you can't do about it.

People choose to take the wrong path for their life and some don't. The ones who take the wrong path will go though a lot trouble. They would have a lot of problem's that they can't change but just cause you that path doesn't mean you change it. Even the ones who are living good doesn't mean their not going though some problems because everyone does.

So what I think it's trying to tell us is would you work out your problems to become the best. You can change one problem that's is stopping you from doing something. That you can change the wrong thing to a good thing. Even if you mest up doesn't mean you are bad. Learn from the problem you did and grow up as you learn form it. Want to be the best you will have to learn whats the best from your mistake's.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
9152EA0F430B,"This world have many energy and resources, but we have to something to conserve all of them. Some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, to try to conserve energy and resources, but they work ten hours each day that's mean that they still doing the same thing because they are working the same hours weekly. So I think this is not a good idea to conserve energy and resources, should my school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? I would say that my school should not follow this model because students would not have time to do things, students might miss a lot school, and is the same thing is like we come the five days to school.

We would not have time to our things because is going to be a long day two hours more, so we are going to be tired we might not want to do our homework. Somethings we have to do our personals things like help at home, or some other stuff that we need to do such as have fun with our family, or do what we like to do as play soccer, play video games, etc. I know that school is more important, but not the majority of the students thing like that. We would have to do all the things over the weekend, we might not spend time with our family because we would been doing homework, or some other stuff like personal things. Also some students only would go home to sleep because like I say we would be tired to much work at school. Even the teachers would not have time to plan what would be the assignment the next day, I know that they need time to plan in what we have to work on the next day, but they have to do things in their house as we the students too they also have homework to do after school. This is going to one problem that I think must happen if this school extend the school day two hours more.

We might miss a lot day of school because somethings we have appointments as go to the Doctor, or go to somewhere else also do some important things. some students might decide to not come to school because they have to go the appointment. As we know some students miss a lot school on this day if school extend the day they might miss more day of school because they might say that is too long the day, or if they have a project to do and is a big project (we get out until 5:00PM), so we have to finish in whole night supposing we finish the project until 3:00AM, in the morning we not going to wake up because we are tired, we would miss the day of the school also we would not turn it in the project (It was the only day that we would have to turn it in), so we didn't get the grade for the project. Also teachers would have problem with their children for example if they have their children in a day care id they only work until 5:00PM they have to run to get they children, but if there is traffic, so they would be late. They might have to paid extra money to someone can pick up their children. Even when we come for the five-days per eight hours we have more time to do our thing that we have to do after school.

Some people might say that they support to come to school to a four day school week and extend the day two hours because we would have three free days. However, is going to be the same if we come the five days per eight hours because we would come ten hours per day, so ten per four is equal to forty hours for day (this is if we come four-day a week), so eight per five is equal to forty hours (this is if we come the five days per eight hours). We would still using the energy and resources at the same amount as we use to do it now, as we see is the same thing if we come to school the five days per eight hour. We need something that help us to conserve energy and resources not something that would give the same amount the we are using now.

Finally, I think this is not a good idea to conserve energy and resources because we would use the same amount that we're using right now. My school should not follow this model because they have to think that consequences like people would miss a lot of school they might be tired too much work in one day of school to long one day, we would not have time to do our things at home like homework, personal things, and we would not have time to have fun by doing what we like to do as play soccer, or other stuff, and is going to be the same thing if we come to school the five days per eight hours. We have more time to do our homework, to do what we like to do like have fun, and spend time with our family when we come the five days per eight hours. If we really want to conserve energy and resources we have to find something that is going to be successful, not something that would give us the same result.          ",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
C7AC45EF9D03,"Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". I absolutely agree with that statement, because in my opinion I see success as a goal that everyone on this earth should somehow reach to. However, it's not that easy and not everyone is able to to that.

For example, my father is a successful business man by helping others and our family, he has done a lot for me. He also took risks and failed multiple times in order for him to be successful in life. Not just because he has a lot of money, because otherwise not every rich individual is successful. You must fail in order to better yourself and learn from your mistakes, because that will benefit you in the long run.

For me, I want to be a successful business man, just like my dad. I also want to travel around the world, and gain knowledge. but my goal for know is to pass all my classes with a high GPA, to show my parents and myself that I can do it. Yes, I failed one of my classes before but I didn't give up. As Winston said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". I'm going to keep working hard in order to graduate and chase my dreams, just like my father did.

In the conclusion, I think that Winston said a true statement. I personally agree with him, because in order to be successful in life you will either need to learn from your personal mistakes or others. That's honestly what I am doing right now, since I'm still a teenager. Learning from others help you develop new skills and knowledge, especially from the old generation.                           ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
21F8069EC7F7,"Hello I am writing to you today to know if i could possibly get a opportunity to come visit the real estate agent office to get a feel and learn more about what steps , what skills I would possibly need in order to purse this career later on when i get out of high school . I mean wouldnt you have loved it if you had a chance to visit a office and learn a couple things get some tips from people that have been doing this job jobs for years. I think that everybody should get a chance to goo into the field of what you like before you even think about going in.

I think that I should have this opportunity to go visit to see what it is like learn a little from works that are doing this on a daily bases before I were get out of high school. For the reasons being I maybe not even really like it once I get out of high school after i do whatever it is to get to become a real estate agent what about if i dont love it anymore as much a I thought I possibly did back when i was in high school . I would obviously just be miserable doing something i dont even love also just wasting my time in getting all of this in place in order to get to where i wanna be and then not love it . Also If it isnt what i was expecting when i get a job in a agency it will be very dissapointinting to be working somewhere you feel like you have no choice and are unhappy with it. Thats one of the reasons I think it would get good thing for me to get a visit so i wouldnt have to go through all of that once I am getting ready to purse my employment.

Getting to visit would show me what the process is into becoming a agent, how to successes in the business not to crash and burn and to be able to become as successful as I can be in this journey . This work really interests me also because you make big bucks also seeing beautiful houses . I could maybe open even my own business of real estate agents also than Id be even making more money perhaps you could even show me how u became successful and got to be a manager of real estate agents. that would be very helpful you could show me how things work, steps you had to take to get in the passion that you are in. But in order for that to happen you know of course you would have to be open in letting me come in and learn from everybody gain knowledge from you hard working people how you are successful and all of that good stuff the ups and down everything .

That is why I think I should get the opportunity to visit and learn about real estate agents I could gain a lot of information from this visit it will help me in the future about my career how successful Ican become and all of that thank you for hearing me out I hope that you let me have this chance to learn and become a successful young girl in my future awaiting for me .",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
79F961AE9A04,"Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I

played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.

first of all, I like to do science experiments and one time in seventh grade I dissected a frog and it was fun. Once I was in the fifth grade and I put a gummy bear in a cup of water and it got bigger. In the eight grade i made ice cream and it was fun but it was so cold.

furthermore, and the sports that I play are fun to because I play tennis and wrestling. They are very fun and i like tennis more because I got hurt more in wrestling then tennis. And most of my friends do tennis and I like that. And I have more fun around my friends.

finally, In sixth grade I was in band and I was in strings class. I played the drums in math class and I played the viola in strings class I was very good at the instrument but I stopped in seventh grade. But in the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it I think I can play that instrument better than the viola and the drums.

in the conclusion, Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun and wrestling. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I

played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
EE9EA950AAE1,"An enjoyable educational activity.

I think that a enjoyable activity for education wiil be a game y math like work in a group of 3 to 5 persons each person in the group to to answer a question, if they get the question right they get a point but if they don't they don't get any point, the group with more points get some candys for they exelent job doing what they are hate to do.

I think this a perfect activity because kids like to compete each other and is better when they know that if they win they get some candys.

Another enjoyable activity will be in science, doing a project of how animals live what thay ate and how they survive to the other animalto and give some importants facts to the teacher ,

i think this project may be of two persons because a think this will be to easy for them and there may be some student doing the project by them self.

I think that will like the project because they can get to know about an animal life and importants stuff about it and they can have fun with friends.

I choose math and science because this are my favorites subjects and i enjoy doing them with my friends and my teachers my favorite part is when we get to work in group that is in science, but in math my favorite part is when i get a question right some time the teacher give me some candys. ",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
8CD4C142DCEF,"Why should you accomplish anything in your live? In another words, why should you finish anything in your live? You need to accomplishment to get your purpose. When you done something in your life you will be successful, not boring, and proud of yourself. I agree with Thomas Jefferson that, we have to accomplish in our life because when we will accomplish in our life we will get our goal, however, people might disagree with me, and they think that inactivity serve a purpose and that's not true.

It's a great thing to be successful in your live. "" Don't work hard but work smart"". In another words, you have to keep yourself working all the time. When you success in anything you feel comfortable. For example, In our school you have to do your work so you can success. when you let yourself finish the work you will be successful. Let yourself to be accomplishment in anything and you will be successful for ever.

When you keep yourself busy, you will never get board in your life. Being active all the time is healthy. Keep yourself working out, study, driving, eating, so you don't get board of your life. Always do anything to until you accomplished and do not leave it until you finished. For example, I go play soccer so I wouldn't get board in my life. If you don't want to get board, make your self create anything, keep your brain thinking in everything, play sports, believe in your self that you can accomplish anything in the world. Do not get lazy anytime because if you got idle you will not be an accomplish person in live.

Everyone will be proud of you when you accomplish something. You will be proud of yourself too that you accomplished something in your life. Always work hard so you can get a good grade and you will be proud of yourself. For example, I worked hard last year in World history and Geography and I passed the SOL, my dad and my mom both of them were proud of me and the whole family were proud of me, so you have to being working all the time.

In my opinion people accomplish when they always doing something . Always do your work and finished so you can success. Always work hard and keep yourself busy so you couldn't get boring. I know that some people will degree with me, but that's okay because everyone have different opinions, and my opinion was if you didn't work hard you will not get what you want. Let yourself work hard, so you can accomplish you work and success in your life. The best thing in life that you done work and proud of your work. Always accomplish your work and get it done so you can be a successful person.        ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
814EE41F6FF3,"What do you prefer, keep eating food that do not help you or food that is good for your body? Eat healthier food make your body stronger and helps you to be in good form. I think a change of the lunch menu, could be a good idea.

In my soccer team, I have practice everyday, after school. Sometimes

I don't feel good to practice,

because the food was not heath to my body or it wasn't enough. My team mates told me that they bring their own food because the lunch menu of the school do not like them, and they are tired to eat the same food every single day

Some students have to go out to buy healthier food.

Another reason why the lunch menu should be change is because an healthier lunch, keeps you awake and with energy. Some student need to eat health because they are in school teams. Also, sometimes you feel tired when you are studying. you feel that your stomach hurts and feel that something is wrong with your body, you feel sleepy, sometimes hungry, and you can not concentrate in the class. For example, I have Personal Fitness on my last period, when I eat my regular lunch menu, I feel tired and sometimes I don't want to do anything because I feel my body too heavy. My doctor, told me that I have to eat healthier. Since, when you are growing up, your body needs food that help it.

A change of the school menu could be beneficial for all of us. An healthy body, stronger, and with good aptitude. Our health, depends on all of you. Let's make a change, for the future of all our children. Let know to the principal of all the benefits that This change will bring.                ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
78B6F383CD30,"So many students need to finish the school more early than others, it's a good think the student finish high school in three years, they have more opportunities for study wherever they like. Although some students will don't want graduate early because they are not ready to being a university life or alone life, nevertheless for others students is a good choice being her life or overtake her life, for example they have more opportunities for study a long profession like Doctor, students will have more time to doing think they like as to travel, and if they want can make a family.

Students make a complied because they want to study a long profession and they don't have some many time to doing all thing they want. The students said normally the people finish high school between the 17 or 18 and they know are young, but some time they need a break before to enter the college and if one student want to study a long profession he or she don't have so many time to take a break and study a profession like a doctor than is during like

5 or 6 years. This significant than student need more time to doing one thing fun before to enter the college. Additionally in the future may be they need another break after the finish college I opportunity the young people like travel too much and know others countries, they own country, they want watch new things, they know different s people, different language, different accent or pass free time with her family, friend, or play any sports. This is important because although they have time when they graduate at 18 or 19. Maybe if they finish high school when they have 16 have more time to graduate the college early and doing so many thing they like to do.

Another students want finish early high school to do others things so different like make a family and find a good job they like so much. So many adolescences think in money since so young , they need money, money for buy some material thing like a car, an apartment, so many clothes so expensive. This is important because the adolescences think finish most early high school is like they said "" if I graduate the high school a the 16 then a began to work like than i will have 21 i have all the thing I need for begin an alone life, then will want to married get a big family.

In conclusion, the this a good program of some schools than students can graduate in three years, sometime students need more time in her life for doing thing they like an the opportunities for choice a some long profession and have time to do thing they like or job for a better life.                                                                          ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
10D60ACB3E5D,"Because the educators say, what the summer vacation sound too long and the ecucators, wants to what the summer break was short ever. and the students no retain the information about that in the wich is easy for they to know that.

Is similar to winter break because is long,

My opinion is what the educators too should be enjoy the summer vacation and the equal what the students but for me is good what the students have long summer vacation for what enjoyed, and don't me dislike what the summer break only has

3-4 week that should be what have how the others break summer, and winter.

Much students think what the summer vacation it's ok like that because when the vacation over to drop off of enjoy.

The educators have almost 1 year for teaching a the students when the vacatios over;

Educators too should be enjoy the summer vacation because they are too a break, to relast.

The Reasons why news: The students enjoy example:If I no have summer vacation me to feel tense for to have much working about the school.",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
C3549BC956DC,"Positive attitude is the key to success in life. I agree having a positive attitude is always going to give you better outcomes. Having a negative attitude is difficult to be happy with life. In my opinion I think everybody is different.

Always going to give you better outcomes if you have a positive attitude . positive attitude is not the key to success in life because some people still have mistakes. Many persons positive and negative attitudes all depends on the difference on there personality. I agree having a positive attitude is the key to success in life, if negative attitudes didnt have a difficult time being happy. I disagree that negative attitude is always hard to be happy with life because sometimes good miracles happen.

If there were more succesful people in the world everybody would be a positive atitude. Most of the people are mixtures of both atitudes. The attitudes affect peoples life so much on which atitude they have.

In conclusion having a positive attitude brings a lot of success in life so, I think more people should have positive vibes. A person who has a negative attitude wont ever enjoy life at its fullest. I agree having a positive attitude is always going to give you better outcomes. Having a negative attitude is difficult to be happy with life.",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
CD99E2D6DBE9,"Hey dear employees.

I'm writing this letter to tell you about some of my characteristics that are needed for this kind of job. I'm a responsible guy, who likes to be able to help the others if they need help in anything. Also I'm a hard worker because I'm constantly doing work, never stopping to do anything else if I'm not do with my work.

First,I think that I'm a responsible worker, because I never stop doing my work until I'm done with it. A lot of people tells me that I should get this kind of job, because I dont like when people are irresponsible and since I'm a responsible worker the rest of employers will like how I work, then they will start to their work just like I'm doing mine. I'm always on time. I'm always trying to able to do all the work and to help the others if they don't know how to do it. If I want to go out and be with friends, the first thing that I tell them is that I have to finish my work if I have time to go out after work then I will be able to go with them, but if Im not done then I cant go, because the job is the first thing that we all should have in mind, then the second thing are friends, free time, all that kind of stuffs.

Second, I'm a hard worker in any job, because I like to demonstrate that I can do the best and any job at anytime. So if you need that type of employee I think I'm the right person, because I will work very hard to finish the job by one day. I don't like to many works to be doing at the same time, so I try to finish one per day so later on I wont have to come and start to do the same work I was supposed to finish the day before. Like I said I like to work hard, to finish everything by the same day. I like to make other people work hard to, not just me, because if we all work hard we are all going to be successful in this job, I'm not trying to be successful by myself, I like to see more people success in life. A lot of employees dont work hard for the job that they have, if they dont work hard, that makes the company or the rest of workers look bad because he doesn't want to do anything. That's what I'm trying to change in this job. I'm trying to get this job because I know that I can help other people succeed, I can make this work by helping others and by working hard every day.

In conclusion. I think this are good reasons why I would be a good candidate to be hire for this job, I'm here trying to get this job, so I can help the others to be good workers and help the company look better, because we will work hard and be responsible to make the best out of the best.

Sinceraly.

Generic_Name.               ",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
C85795794D51,"Forty-five percent of people in the world enjoy doing outdoor activities. Something like going to community parks, state parks, and even national parks. The other percentage of people are indoors sleeping, watching TV, or playing video games. I personally can do both, there are other days when I just want to stay in the house and there are other days when I want to get out the house and do things like playing soccer with my brother and father. Enjoyable ways to spend you time outdoors can be going to festivals hanging out with friend or even reading a book in the park.

Some interesting and enjoyable outdoor activities that I like doing is going to the zoo, going on a picnic, hanging out with friends and family, playing some type of sport, or visiting a amusement park. Away that I would spend my time outdoors is hanging out with family and friends. By doing that I can go to the zoo with friends or go to a park and play sports with them. There are many thing you can do you just have to find the right activity the you like and enjoy. Another activity that I enjoy is playing soccer with

my dad and brother we always go to the park and play with my cousin then after that we would go out to eat and its better than sitting home all day and doing nothing.

These activities can be enjoyable because you together with family and friends and that can make things fun. People can use these activities to take their minds off certain situation like problem at home or something going on at school . People can use going to the park and reading a book as an escape of reality and life and going into their imagination. There are many reason why these activities can be enjoyable. Just sitting home all day doing nothing can cause you to be lazy and hide away from the world but also going outside is good for you mental growth. My mother has always told my sibings and I that we should go outside more often and I think to myself why is it important for us to go outside if there are more problems in the world the being indoors.

I think that being outdoors can help you open you mind up more to new things and experiences. For example my friend PROPER_NAME had skin cancer and he was so scared of being out side and he wanted to hangout with his friends, play sports, and go to the park and have picnic. This story is what motivates me to go out side because I dont want the freedom of going outside to be taken away.

everyone like a little bit of fun for example last week me and my friend went bowling and then we went to the mall it was pretty enjoyable because I forget about everything and focus on myself and the people I am with. I find it interesting the when we were younger we loved being outdoors playing with our friend and now that we are older and have electronics we decide to stay inside because its more entertaining. In conclusion, there are many enjoyable things to do outdoors you just have to find the right activity that suites you or maybe even try new things do to by yourself or find someone to do it with.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
1F50675D8683,"50% of people say that when you have a problem that its a opportunity to do your best but others dont believe that. ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best."" I agree because you can prove to your self that you can solve your problems with out any help.

Having problems is giving you a chance to do best. For example, when you have homework and you need help but you want to show your parents that you can do it with out there help just do your best and never give up on your self. Also, you can be doing a quiz and your stuck just do the best and move on.

Sometimes you my feel stuck or confused but always do the best you can. When the teacher is asking you a question and you are confused you can always just try your best. Another example could be like when your taking a test and it has multiple choice just try your best and mover to the next question.

Some people think that problems is a chance to do your best but some people do think that but there are problems that you can have but you just have to do your best and never give up.

You can sometimes have problems but always remeber ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"".    ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F99B20789DD7,"Dear Schoolboard,

I think that school should not be extended. students need to have a long break at home because they might have after school clubs to attend to.

I think students should not have extended school because they are not going to pay attention to the teacher they need to rest their brains for a long time since you are in school for 7 hours. Another reason why i think students should not have extra time at school is because kids have to wake up early and they are tired so they wont pay attention since they dont get enough sleep.

The other reason why i think school should not be extended is because the students most of them do not pay attention so typically the teacher is wasting her time trying to teach them. Also why i think they should not extend school is because if the day is longer they are going to need more breaks during the day and it takes a little long to go back in the building.

On the other hand i think they should have a extended school because they will know their subjects faster and that will make the school year faster. Another reason why i think they should extend school is because the students are really bored at home and they wish to learn instead of being home board. The last reason why

I think school should be extended is because kids might not pay attention during the day so with the extra hour they might want to pay attention and they will learn a little.

The last reason why i think school should be extended is because the students do things outside of home that are not good for them like doing challenges,steeling or getting into fights outside of school which can cause them injuries. The other reason i think they should extend school is because students would or will have a better education so that when they are grownups they will find a job that pays you more than the others.

These are the reasons why i think students should and should not have school extended i think they should extend school for a better education and i think they should not extend school because it is way too long",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
48F7FCAD8B23,"Will has you can see getting advice from other's is not a bad idea. I think getting advice from others has a great point of view and a bad point of view by the way someone can look at. When you are trying to get advice from someone remember to ask more then one person for advice. One of my reasons is that how ever is trying to get advice should get it form multiple people not just from one person. My other reason is that getting advice form people can have a good or bad point of view but it also can depends on how you take the advice. My last reason is asking people for advice can hurt it's not always going to make you happy.

My first statement is that how ever is trying to get advice should get it form multiple people not just from one person. Most of the people in this world have different point of view for each person on the way they see them or maybe by the way they you act and look. Asking only one people is not a good idea because someone might just be looking at you how you look and how you dress. They might just say bad things to you because they thing your not worth nothing and they are the only one's that actually are worth something in this world. People in this time don't gave good advice to people because all they want to do is make people look bad in front of others.

My second statement is that getting advice form people can have a good or bad point of view but it also can depends on how you take the advice. Will in my point of view asking people for advice is not a great idea because some people might just till you lies when you are asking for advice. Sometimes people just tell you lies because they know that you need help but all they are going to do is make you look bad. They are some people that all they want you is to suffer just because they are having problems at home. Getting advice form one person is not a good idea because you might not know if they hate you or that you might have done something that hurt them and you didn't know and you asked them for advice they would gave you bad advice just for what you did to them.

My last statement is that asking people that you thing that will tell you the truth no matter if it hurts or not is not a bad idea. They are some people that would tell you the truth even if it's going to hurt a lot but the only thing they want for you is too be happy. Asking people older then you is a great idea like your family because maybe they have been though a lot maybe they might even hate you or something else but they would never lie to you because you are there children they care about you. Getting advice is not bad it also can depend on the way you decide to take it if you take it as a good or bad way because most of the people that are always there in your bad a good moment always want the best thing for you because they love you.

In conclusion, asking for advice sometimes and talking to others more advice can help you make good choice but at the same times bad choice it all depend on you if you want to be a great or bad person. Everyone has there point of view to take the advice that someone gives you in a good or bad way. Mostly the people that love you are going to tell you the truth even though if it hurt because they know that later or after you are going to find out the truth.

In this world you should take most of the advice that other people gave you because they have already been thought a lot but they don't want you to through the same thing because they actually want you to be someone if life even if they couldn't be someone in life. The advice that someone gives you is not bad it to help you see how hard they work because they didn't take the advice that they gave you are they didn't get the chance like you have so if someone gives you a great advice you should be grateful.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.0,2.0
68685615FE0C,"There is a debate about the opportunity offered by the schools for the students who live far, to receive classes without going to the school by way of online or video conferencing. Some people believe that the best way to learn is going to the school independently if the student live close or far and participating with more students in the classes. Other people believe that no matter on what way you receive a class, you always have the opportunity to learn something new. I believe giving the opportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn, because the student can pay more attention being alone, if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily, and the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class.

First reason why I believe giving the opportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because the student can pay more attention. Sometimes when you are in a classroom with more than 20 students is really hard focusing on what the teacher is talking about, because there are always some students who really like to make fun of the teacher, laugh with other students, interrupt the class with questions like ""can I use the restroom?"", and in someway you cannot even take notes; but when you are at home, all by yourself, without any distracction you can really be sure that you are paying atenttion and taking notes.

Second reason why I believe giving the oportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily. For example, lets say that you are in a classroom with a bunch of students, each of them have differents questions about the class, and the teacher said that he is going to answer each question by alphabetical order, unfortunately, your las name is ""Generic_Name"". In this case one of the best way to get that question answer as soon as possible, is having a conference class between you and the teacher.

Third and last reason why I believe giving the oportunity to students that live far from the schools can take the classes by way of online or video conferencing is a great way to learn because the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class. There are some cases where a student just have one class every day; what if this student live half an hour away from the school, it would be way more easy if this student can take all his classes in two days online, also, this can be a great oportunity to have a job while you are studying.

In conclusion, the opportunity offered by the schools for the students who live far, to receive classes without going to the school by way of online or video conferencing is so great, beacuse the student can pay more attention being alone, if the student have questions the teacher can answer them easily, and the student do not have to waist time going to the school just for one class. So, this opportunity offered by the schools to give this type of classes can motivate each student that live far to not excuse themselves to not finish a class, also, each school that do not have this classes should considered create them.     ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
B936994E140D,"I agree that students would benefit better on taking online classes and video conferencing at home. Most of the students prefer online classes because they can't get transportation from home to class. Video conferencing and online classes would benfit students in a way that their will be less distraction and work in your own level. Society now in days has many bullies in school that it comes to the point that studuents don't want to come to school and prefer taking class at home by there self.

For example I had a cousin that took online class at home because he had no transportation to get to school. He was able to benefit better at home because even when he was sick he would still be able to accomplish his work. Most of the teenagers want to go to school but they can't because they have no way to get to school. Online classes and Video conferencing is way were students can get education and graduate without leaving their house. My cousin got education and he graduated and he only took online classes and it helped him a lot due to not having tansportation to school.

There are many kids out in the world thet get bullied in school and they want a education but they can't due to bullys. Classes at home can benefit kids getting bullied in many ways for example,

you won't have to worry about getting bullied at home if you take classes at home, you will get less distraction, and you will work in your own level taking classes at home.

Therefore, This is why I agree that students can benefit better taking classes at home in many ways. Online classes and video conferencing may benfit some people but due to experience with family members and friends

I feel like it benfits most of teens in the world. Not all teens get to have education due to many reasons which is why I feel like it can benefit many teens in taking classes at home. ",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
97A27B9801B5,"I think it is a good idea for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. However some students are not good at every but if they do what they really love it can learning fun for students. It can also impacted students to finish their goals and became better person in the future. Some student don have that kind of privilege as some students have to all subject so they can graduate from high school to go to college. That what make some students dropping out of high school, because they think they are not smart enough or some students cant afford to pay for some school supply.

I think it is a good idea for students to identify a career by the time they enter high school. First, it can make learning fun for students and they can enjoy what every career they what in future. Second, it can impacted students to go to school learn instead for skipping school making them falling their classes. Third, students should be expected to take a career that make them happy and want to do and they are also willing to do, also achieve their goals. example for students to like the idea of identify, is to prepare them college and some may not go to college and start working.

Inclusion students should chose a career the like and love. If they study the career they like their be less drop out of high school. They can also be success on what ever they can achieve in life. Also help them to a great future and everything is possible, however, I think that is a good idea for students to commit to a career a young age and to also help them became better person and make good chooses. Thank you for reading my eassy!!!

sincerely

Generic_Name    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
BA57C427DB35,"I remember when I was in elementary school my teacher would always show me life lessons or lessons that would help me in life. I still follow the lessons she gave me. You guys as young kids, should follow these life lessons I will tell you. The first one is you when your older do you want to have a good job have good money? You will always respect others,yourself and properties.

It's really important to follow those lessons because when your interviewing for a job or something like that you are gonna use those rules and life skills and show that your responsible and care about your future. when your going out with your friends like heading to the movies your gonna show the workers respect and kindness. Kindness is another example of a lesson. That my family always taught me and others as well bacause they know others like it when you give them respect. When your older people are gonna realize how respectful you are and mature you are. ",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
8F1F5D0CEA06,"People always check out the books in the library, after finished Reading a book then turn in and another books If you want. If you do not finisher the reading a book, you pick then you can recheck the book again in the library. People play the game on the phone, or some people play the game in the computer and online and most people interested play the game on TV. P

eople can shop whatever they want clothes, shoes, make up, toys, game, and Food anything.

Also people going to they are Fevirot market for shop whatever they need and some people going to the shop target, for Food or clothes. Most people won't because they like shop to the Rose low price better Quaalude. Some people going to the shop for Food, in the Food line and most people around the story found whatever they need. Most people are going to the toys story because they kids like to play with toys and game board,

some people like shop to the mall.

Some students like sports play with team, no all students are play same thing and some like football, basketball, tennis, soccer, band and baseball. Most people like to watching sports and a lot of people watch on TV. Some people going to the watching real game play in the Field and whatever sports they kids play, they like to watch. Most people like to watching the game all the time football, baseball and basketball. Whatever game was they interested then they are always watching on TV and going to the watch real game.

Most people really like reading a book because they learning a lot of things in the books and some people didn,t like reading a book very much. They didn,t very good it reading or uncountable and they don,t know how to read a book. Most people know how to read a books but they doesn,t want to read aloud front of people. Also, a lot of people parties reading a books and who learning English in the world. They like to read a long, because some people shy read with others people.

Most people read a books a lot they use to they can better It. Most girls like beauty shop because they like make up, and dress up all the time. Some people have a lot of Fun watching game because they like watch they game. Most girls like shopping a lot because shop is Fun things to do, looked like cool on dress. Most people play sports because they have so much Fun and make a lot of new Friends and sports is usually really Fun thing to do. people come watching you If you are win people called your name loud and they are parents prout of them .                         ",2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
F3996EB91406,"I'm agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because people in this world want you to be another person that yourself. I have two examples, my family want me to be another person that my self, and the second example is if you want to be yourself in this world you will never find a job; You have to be another person the they want you to be.

I start with my family; How i said my family they don't like when you try to be yourself, they want you to be what they said, like jobs for your future they want me to be something the I don't want to be like: Soldier, Fireman, Lawyer, and president; I want to be someone else the they don't like to much, they don't like when I think in my self just what they want, they think if you are someone else you will have a big accomplishment.

In the case of jobs if you try to be yourself, and not what the company want you will never find a job; The happen to me alot of times when I try to apply to a job, they want you to be another person with different expression like: happy, active, team work, and accurate; If you are opposite of the expression you will never find a job with the expression the you have, so you have to be like the company want you to be and they would give you the job, then you will have a big accomplishment from the company because you are someone else.

That's why I'm agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, we live in a world the people don't like when you are yourself and they like when you are someone else; I don't think the accomplishment is just for be someone else and not yourself, if you try hard when you are yourself you will have the greatest accomplisment in life and for people who don't belived in their self like: Family, company, manager,people, and you; If you belived in yourself everthing will be good and the accomplishment would be often.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0
A93471B62AF5,"Hi, my name is Generic_Name. I heard that you are accepting people to come look at some businesses they prefer, and learn more about what they are interested in. One thing I'm interested in knowing is, How many people do you let come and experience this opportunity ? I strongly feel like it would be a pleasure to be able to come and see the environment or being able to understand the right and wrong ways of teaching kids. I think I would be great for this position because I am a well rounded person, very respectful, and responsible.

I feel like being a well rounded person is a good character trait everyone should have. I could demonstrate that in many ways. You are probably thinking, ""Generic_Name, everyone can be a well rounded person in their own ways"". Thing is, people can't compare themselves to me. I

have qualities that others may lack in, such as: speaking 2 languages, understanding kids, and being about to tolerate the kids. Speaking 2 languages is great. For example, if I have a Spanish student in my class, I'd be able to have a conversation with him and make him/her feel comfortable. Also, showing that you are interest in the job and showing that you want is good to show. You want to be able to show people that you are qualified for it.

Respect is another thing I will always have with me. I will show the kind of respect to my parents, to anyone else out there, whether is be my boss, coworkers, students, or their parents. Showing lack of respect can kick you out of your job. Being respectful will show others that you are serious about getting the job. Referring back to what I said about lack of respect, an example of that can be: coming to work and being in a grumpy mood and telling people mean things can get you to lose your job. That's why I think it's always right to be in the best attitude you could possibly be in no matter what you are going on outside of work.

The amount of responsibilities I will receive is no match for me. In other words, If you hand me 2 stacks of paper and give me 2 days to fill it out, I will. Giving me orders is another thing that i would follow, even if I don't want to do it. If I had a chance to work with kindergartners, the ones that struggle and are not comprehending what is being taught. I would stay after school with them for as long as they need until they understand and can accomplish what they didn't get in the beginning. I will always go out of my way in trying to help kids understand the material they need. Another thing is, grading homework and making sure they get it back. I feel like most teachers lack in making sure they grade their students test and not returning it on time. I would make it a priority to make sure it gets done.

In conclusion, I think I would be a great person to hire. Seeing and meeting people will improve my knowledge and how to work with others. I will get a be able things once, maybe twice, in my lifetime. This experience will make me a better person. I think I would be great for this position because I am a well rounded person, very respectful, and responsible. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
52D0FED6AF38,"Many people debate about this topic since one of the most known scientist said this statement. A lot of people agree and disagree, and from my knowledge, I agree. Imagination is something that everyone has, not everyone has knowledge. Imagination can lead you to imagine things that other people haven't. This is how many scientist got fame by just thinking about new things.

With imagination you can think about a new type of computers, new math formula, or a new type of material that hasn't been invented yet. Many scientist invented new stuff from just thinking about new formulas or experiments that they could to make something new. There's also things like the periodic table, that the scientist who made it spent days and nights just thinking about new substances and materials, when he went to sleep, he dreamed about new substances that later on got on the periodic table.

Thinking about things in places you shouldn't, like school, could either lead you success and give new things to do and study, or low grades because you weren't paying attention, must of the times is the second option. Thinking is most of the times in math, where you have to do a hard equation and think and do a lot of work. If you like to think, that might be your favorite class and you will get good grades. Getting good grades in math is really good, it means that you have a good memory and you can easily learn new things (it usually means that when you can do a lot of problems without having difficulty).

Imaginations can also give you knowledge, when you think, it opens a new whole world of ideas. You can basically do anything you want. You can basically experiment with anything you want, but you might not get the right answer or the thing you expected but you will also learn why. These type of things can also help you to learn why something did or did not work as planned. It also helps you think about stuff that you could or not do in real life, for example doing something that is ilegal and you shouldn't do. It also helps when you think a rule or a law is dumb, you can thing what could happen if you did it, that could work to see why it's a rule.

Imagination is something that everyone has and everyone can use without a limit. Using it can lead to a lot of stuff, such as success and making new things. Knowledge is something not everyone has and not everyone can use, imagining can lead you to learn new stuff without doing much effort or risking to do it in real life and might get in trouble by doing it.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
78B89BF70AE8,"I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because in this world you have to be yourself and if doesn't mater how you are, you have to be yourself even if the world is against, because the world doesn't change you. You change the world, and you have to be sure what you want and what you do not want, you have to be yourself, you can be different, the different it is not bad, because sometimes ""Be like others is do not be no one"".

For those reasons is why you have to be yourself, you have to follow your dreams and you have to fight for them, don't let the people throw you, and if you felt, you have to get up and keep fighting for your dreams. Remenber if you felt 99 times, you have to get up 100 times, and never let that people and the world convert you in something that you don't want it, in something that you don't love it, in something that you don't wish or something that you don't enjoy.

Also in my life some people tried to change myself, but I always try the way to carry on and keep fighting for my drams, and one of my dreams was traveled to this country, and some people told me that I can not do it, even some people told me that I will die on the long way from El Salvador to United States.

That was a long and a hard way, a diifficult trajectory, but I did my objective. It was not easy, because sometimes I had to sleep in the desert or in some mountains, so the polices can not found me.

Also sometimes I had to move the one place to another placer and some pelaple and me did it acrros the cars, but we had to hide on the trunk of the cars, and I remenber we was like 12 persons on a trunk car. It was not easy but I did it.

I remenber some days that I had to walk for hours to be in some place close the border, and also some days that i didn't eat nothing because I didn't have food, and in some ocassions I feel that I can't no more, but on my mind I had a objective and a dream. My objective and my dream were stay in this country and to provide help to my family.

But in my mind I am keeping have some objectives and dreams, and one of my objectives is makes to my parents proud of me and one of another objective for me is be a example to my brothers, I wanna give it to them the best of the world.

My brothers and my parents are the reason why I work hard everyday, and I try to do the best on school, I try to be a really good students but sometimes it is hard for me, because the languages are different, so I try everyday to learn English, so everything can be easier and that can help me a lot.

You always have to be yourself because a more than a person goes to like you, so just be you and don't let the world change you. Keep dreaming and get foccus on your objectives.

Don't be afraid in a world that is constantly trying to ,ake you something else, just be you and don't worry be happy, enjoy the little big things that the world give it to you like friends and family, enjoy with people that you love, and always be thankful with everyhing, if doesn't matter if it is good or bad, everything happen for a reason.",3.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
F9111CF0A009,"one topic that is that is frequently debate today is'' four-day school week.'' Some people think is better for students, so they can have three days free to do their homework and have a par time job. I believe that students don't need four-day school and extend the school day two hours, because some students can't work after school or do our homework, students can't have time for our families in afternoon. and students can't have three days off and after come and they will not remember what they learn last class.

one reason why is students can't work after school or do their homework because students will come tire after ten hours on school. student will come late and they will come just to have a dinner and sleep. students will come so late that they will not be able to do their homework on time do to no time for them. students need five day to do what they normally do they will have time for homework, have a dinner, and sleep well everyday. and the next they they can come ready to learn more and enjoy the school hours.

another reason why is that students will not have time for their families. students having ten hours in the school come tires and they don't want to talk not event with their families. Some students come straight to the bed and their families don't have time to talk to them or give an advice. Some families have the tradition to go out like five or six at clock but students will not be able to go out with families and friends. that's why students need the normal days to study they have a routine that they follow.

The final reason why is that students can't take three days off and after come they will not remember what they learn last class. Some teachers choose that Monday is a really good day to start with a test or quiz students will not remember what they learn after three days with out study. Sometimes students are learning a topic really important and they understand but when they come after three days off they will not remember anything. If students will have three days off they will work these days and when they come back to school after three days of they will not be able to remember everything they will forget. students need the five days to study how suppose to be.

as you have read four-day school is not good idea because students will not have time to study do their homework and enjoy with their families. If students have four days school, ten hours at day students will be tire and they will not here the same routine that they use to have. Only when students have the normal school days they will have time to learn more and focus more. and have the best time as possible with family. ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
6DB65C457200,"Students committing to a career when they about to enter high school is by far a great idea. From elementary to middle school students are allowed to choose what they want to study toward a specific career or what they want to be. When kids are still in elementary they can say what they want to be, but they can not choose the class for the specific reason because they are still kids. But when it comes to middle school students they can choose what class they want to take for a specific career they have in mind .

Student can commit to a career when they enter high school , but they do that when the student already know what they want to be or what they want to do by the time they enter high school so the student at they would be committing to what the student want to do so the person doing so chooses the class the person want to study . Students committing to a career is a great idea when you really want to do it .

Committing to career

When elementary students are in 5th grade they start carefully thinking about what they are gonna do,

because when they are in 5th grade it their last year in elementary school so they have to think about what they want to do. When they enter middle school and that when students from elementary school start thinking about their choice and taking their career choice serious ,because that when they start thinking what they want to do in the near future. Elementary students have 4 years where they take class that are chosen for them in the 4 years they study just to get good grade ,but they do not think about choosing the class for themselves .But when it comes to 5th grade they still study the class that are chosen for them except that when they start to think what if I could choose the class that I want to study for my career or what kind job I am going to study to be able to get that job and that how they start committing to a career .when it comes to elementary school students.

Middle school students are commit to career because they are teens and they have to think about a lot of things that they want to do personally when it comes to career or what they want to be when they grow up that when they start .Committing to career start in elementary , but mostly it begins for real in middle school because that when young teens start taking class like algebra,earth science,biology ,world history, etc . When middle school students start taking these class students think only about passing so that they can not repeat that class and some just want to pass the class but mostly it about passing the class so that they can be able to get credit, and that leads to taking the class the will help that person career or what kind of career they are into. When looking you will find a lot teens thinking about their career .The career they want to commit to and some teens do change want they want to be , but still they are committing to it and they can just change if they do not want to do it .For some reasons young teens around the world that are still in middle school are already commit to a career and that is a good thing right most of them are really into it , and they are taking their career far enough .So far like 10,00 teens are most famous because of their career that they are doing now and they take serious because they like and they are good at it mostly middle school teens. These days they are unstoppable for what they do sometimes they are good more than adult at committing to career when it comes to what they want to do in life.

Some people might argue that students identify a career by the time they enter high school , because they think some students can not do that when it comes to committing to career they think that young teens can not do it .Because technology has taken the mind of teens .They say that teens can not do anything because all they think about is technology and all the things they do they always use technology so some people do not believe that teens these day can commit to anything i .Many people believe that it is hard for teens to commit ,because they can not take responsible of what they do and some think that they are so imature .When it comes to committing to career the parents thinks it how they act at home that why they can not commit to career and some thinks it how they behavior when they are in school .Some people believe that teens can not commit to a career ,because they do not know what to do and some thinks that young teens can not do it because they changes their mind most of their time on settling on what they want to do .Bunch of people believe that teenager can not do it because they quite so early and so easily anyway a lot people do say that can can not be a good generation because they do not know what to do.

But it doe not mean that all teenager are bad some might change when they grow up and some might not change ,because they just do not want to change consoling the thing they might have gone through so for these people. Who believe that some teens can not commit might be wrong because people change teenager hood do change as well

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For these who believe in change I as well believe in change people do change and they can commit to what they want to commit to as well as job, career,family or love. People believe in what they want to believe in so I say that commit takes responsible ,but I know that we teenager can change the world and show them that not all teens are the same and keep believing in what career you want to commit to because committing is not an easy thing to do expressly when you are a young teen or kids .I know people say that we can commit to what we want ,but not everyone is good at committing to a career when it comes to young and committing to something that is big than your own head or mind. So keep believing in what you want to commit to because once you found it I know for sure whatever it is you will success ,because we you teens work hard for our dream.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
78EA0C3715FE,"In most cases student are committed to a career at a young age by school or their parents to guide them early. This could be a benefit for them, since they are young and have the capacity to learn faster, also if they are in high school it would be good for them to be guided at a young age to help them on a career they would like to take, and when they go to college,they don't find the stuff they are going to see complicated, and they are somewhat prepare and have an idea of what they are going to learn if they choose to go to college.

I think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it helps students prepare their mentality, knowledge, and give them an idea of what they are going to see, and focus on the career they want to choose. Most of the time students do not want to commit to a career at a young age because they are either so stressed out from school and they feel like they cannot decide what career they want to take or because they feel like it is not really going to help them much on what they choose. Some students don't know or can't decide what career they want to take, and that is not okay because they most know by the time they are at least in 11th grade, so school can give them the appropriate classes to prepare them for that career, and those classes to help them when they go to college. In fact, not going prepare to college it can be complicated to students and probably stressful since they have no idea what so ever of what they are going to see or learn. For example, when you know what career you want to take since the beginning of high school and you are focus on that career, and you take the classes that will help you be prepare for that career, when you go to college you have an idea, and you are not going to be as stress as other students who didn't want to take advantage of that.

I would personally take the chance so I can be prepared for college, I think if I take classes that will help me be prepared it would obviously be good for me. I already know what career I want to take and the classes that are recommended for that specific career, and it is actually good because I can learn more about that career, I know that I am capable for the career I want and that it will not be hard for me since I always liked what I want to do which is about computers, and technology related. My parents also recommend me to commit to my career at young age so I can learn and practice my skills. Some students don't have the support of their parents like I do and they just decide to finish high school and be done which is not really good if they want to get a job that will give them a lot of money, and most of the jobs requires you to have a degree of some sort or specific for that job.

There are jobs that don't ask for anything just the high school diploma, but those jobs don't really pay that much, and they are kind of heavy, not all of them but most of them. Some jobs like construction, and plumber don't require that you need to have a college degree just the high school diploma, and this jobs also pay really good, but they are really tiring and heavy, mostly construction that you have to be outside in that hot temperature or cold. If you compare this jobs with like a being a doctor, dentists, or technician; this jobs requires you to have a college degree, and you have to go to college for either 2,3,4 or 5 years so you can get the degree of any of this careers, and they pay you a lot and it is not heavy and you don't expose yourself to hot or cold temperatures, and that is a benefit for you if you want to have a really sotf or calm job.

Basically if you know what career you want to take, and you prepare yourself like taking all your classes, and what you need, you should be good for the most part. Not all the time going to college to get a degree so you can get a job is the only way to get money or make a living out of it. For example, you can be a singer, and if your music is loved by most of the people you can success and make money out of it by selling albums or promoting your songs to different platform in internet. Playing sports like soccer, basketball, tennis, or baseball can give you a chance to make money, for example, you can have a career out of that, but you most good for big teams to pick you up and pay you which payment is a lot if you make it to the big teams.

This doesn't always work for everyone only for the talented ones that were meant to be good at each of the careers. For example, I like to play soccer, but I am not good enough to make a career out of it, so I decided to finish my studies, follow my career, and get the job that I would like. Some students finish high school and then they decide to do this type of careers which sometimes work for few of them, they reached their goals and sometimes they don't even finish high school, but if they can't accomplish this, then they have all they need which is their diploma or they can continue with their studies to get the job they would like to have.

In conclusion, is a good thing that students commit to a career early so they can be prepared for the future this will also help them develop their capacity when they go to college where things will get a little bit hard for them. Most of the students do this and they success in their careers, I would to the same because I know high school will help me get prepare for college, and I don't have to feel the pressure of not knowing anything all, I already have a little bit of understanding and knowledge.",4.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
A0D47C0DD67F,"Individuality is the idea of freedom of thoughs, but why we are concerned what other people think? Let's be honest everybody had copied at least one time in a test or quiz just because it was more eassy to coppy than being trying to remember the anwer that obviously you did not know. We own our thoughs, thus, we should do ours ideas not somebody else's ideas

In the book called ""Maria Magdalena"" based in the movie ""The Davinci code"" states the ideas of one individual who thalk about the true behind the story about Maria Magdalena ( Jesus' mother). To catholic people Jesus's mother is saintly. Their sanctuary, the church. To the author of the book ""Maria Magdalena"" she is just a lie's layer. On those old times there were many poor people who were opressing by the church, they sufer in the church's hands. The church killed to protect the true behind Maria Magdalena. On those times existed the crusades in spanish the ""cruzadas"" in which the church fought the protestants to convert them in their cristianity if they negated to accept it they killed them. The victims decide to follow their own beliefs and the consequence was the death. This is a good example of individuality similar to our way to live in the present. The politics want us to do what they want to their advantages opressing our rights just like the church did with the protestants during the crusades. The author of ""Maria Magdalena was very brave to wrote about those things. He was very successful because nobody used to talk about this, now they do. In this book he shared us a little part of what was to be different from the others and take their own decitions. Based on this I state that we can share our ideas of individuality and do not let our corrups politics to opress people's rights.

In the present we have a huge amount of successful guys because of individuality. The influential ideas of the past are not in our day to day anymore. Parents now teach their offspring to take their own decitions knowing the consequences of this. Now we, the tenageers, are more prepared to develop our ideas and beliefs. Constantly, my mom develop the ideas of individuality in our family. One year ago I decided to start to work, and I am very proud of my decittion.

I remember my first day of kinder garden, All the kids playing and runnig around the field. To be honest, I prefer being painting rather than be runnig for no reason. My art's teacher gave us draws made by her.""Ready to paint"" she used to say, but I was so rebel that I made my own draws just because I though her draws were so bored. I was a little girl taking individuality decitions and I did not know it

In my conclusion I am agree with individuality, If we want to spread the individuality, then we should start saying what we think, because the bravery of the unexpected ones, will persuade the shyness ones. Individuality can be hard but not impossible. We live in a world with influencers that try to persuade us to be like them. Do not choose the easy way. I prefer the hard way, so then I would be proud of my achievement just like Ralph waldo Emerson said: ""To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisment""",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
E4596B010B9B,"Generic_Name was running the fastest that she could,

suddenly she cross the final line ; Everyone was screaming from joy. Most teenagers can't participate in any extracurricular activity for different reasons.

For example, in Generic_Name experience was because she had to look after her brothers.

Occasionally teenagers look for ways to spend time doing what they like. In fact, there have been many cases where teenagers use a sport to feel less stress or to spend more time with their friends, for these reason teenagers should be able to participate in extracurricular activities. Recently researches discovered that kids that are more active in their life-style can concentrate more than kids that stay in their houses doing nothing all day, like when

Generic_Name was practicing the sport she start making new friends and loving the progress she was making every day.

Generic_Name parents felt surprise because their daughter was following her dream. Some parents think sports are a waste of time and that you are not going to needed in the future, although its going to help you in the future in many ways . For example, before Generic_Name was in the team of runners she felt tired all the time, but went she start practicing she was more active . Most teenagers don't like sports, as a result of that the principal add more things you can do. Know you can decide what do you want to do after school.

I like the idea for students to participate in an extracurricular activities because students will have an activity to do after school and the will spend more time with there friends. If there is a student that don't have any friends this will help them make friends and learn new things. Teenagers should do at least one sport or participate in other activities for their own good. Do you participate in any extracurricular activities? why?",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
7C54D7484145,"I think students should not be required to take a arts class . students have the rights to take the classes they want to take . If they like arts classes they are free to take that class . but students that don't like art class do not have to take the class .

For example i really don't like arts classes but i'll still take the class because at my school they do this thing that if we need to retake a curse class then we well have 25% of taking that class or if we don't need a curse class we had the 50% of taking that . It might be the same in some schools or it might be different it others schools. some kids may not like the idea of taking art classes and some may like the idea .

Kds may want to have space to take the class they want and they can't because they are required to take arts class . Like they want to take gym or something like this but i know that some boy's would not like this idea . If some kids do enjoy painting or acting . but some kids do not like acting or painting . They might think that it's boring for them to be in that class .

I know that some kids like to act cool and be rude to teachers that they don't like the class or something like this . That's why im saying that arts classes should not be required to take .

I think the best thing to do is to allow kids to pick their classes that they want to take as an elective class .

it's really the best thing to do in my thinking . Because look at it like this if kids that don't like drama and they don't let the teachers teach because they do not wanna be there . they want be in another class that they really want to be

. that's another thing that teachers have to go though dealing with rude kids .

This concludes my argument about students having to take arts classes . this is for all schools please let your kids to pick their classes . or at least give them one class that they like . like i said at first i really don't like this argument thats happening .     ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
6907AC535720,"""Stop doing that, your cousin cut his hand because he was doing the same thing"". A lot of times people say an example to make you know what would happen if you continue doing it. But, is the example the best way to influence people? Yes, an example will make you know that you are doing something bad, it will let you know what are the consequences of it, and you know that the example influence others, because you can see that your parents are the most important example in your life; they are going to make you as a person.

When you are doing something bad and the people see it, they will probably tell you an example of something that you are doing something bad or innapropiate; for example, when you are climbing a tree, your mom would tell you stop doing that, your sister broke her arm because she was climbing that tree, that is going to make you think if you are doing something good or bad. It is going to make you know that people are telling this to you, because they don't want you to have bad consequences. Another example would be that when you are drinking, somebody would tell you don't think to drive, because my uncle died because he was drunk and he had a car accident,so you will know that people are advising you, because they know that you are doing something bad. When people tell you a good example to stop doing something, it will make you know that you are doing something bad.

A lot of times you are doing something, and you don't know the consequences of your action, maybe, it can break your arm, or it can send you to the hospital; but when people tell you an example it will let you know the actions; for example, if you are listening to music very loud, you couldn't know that it can make your ears very bad, but when people tell you turn the music down, my sister's ears are very bad because she was listening to music very loud; after that you know that you better stop doing that, because it will bring you very bad consequences, and you do not want that, so you would stop. Another thing, is that knowing the consequences of your actions, could help another people; for example, if you are drinking you should know that you can not drive, if you do not drive another person will not die, because you know that you can have a car accident, and that is because people told you an example of what is going to happen if you drive while you are drunk. An example can help you to know the consequences of your actions.

A lot of people say that you are who you are because of your parents, and that is right, your parents are the most important example for you. They are going to tell you what is good and what is wrong; your parents influence you because they are your most important example, and that is what an example does, influence you, tells you what is good and what is wrong; for example, if your parents are good people, you should be a good person, but if your parents do not care about you, they do not listen to you or they treat people bad, you are going to be somebody who doesn;t listen to people, you will not care about anyone, so your parents are your most important example, because they have taught you what is good and what is wrong; and you can see again that the example influences you. The parents are your most important example and influence.

We saw that an example can make us think what is good and what is wrong, it is going to tell us the consequences of our actions, it will make you think that you are doing something bad, and we can see that the example influences you because we have our parents, we are going to be the same as them, because they are the people that is going to teach us how to act. So yea, the example is the best way to influence people.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
A2BA5F95C077,"Why high school school students should not take school programs that allow to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years .Students who take this program most take class after school , summer time or they not allow to take elective courses .Consequently students who take this program have less time to do homework, spend time with family or friends, enjoy the summer time or they not allow to take important elective classes like, foreign language, nutrition, music classes, computer skill class, or HPE.

Also students who take this program they could take classes for the same subject like, English nine and English teen at the same year. However students who take this program and they are going to college they could finish more early college and students who not going to college they can start working more early. But students who take this program are more exposed to fail or give up for the rush time that is in the programs and regular school years don`t have that problem. In conclusion thats why high school students should take early graduation program. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
F60545D8271E,"I think that schools must have a after school homework club because students who are having difficulty in school can get extra help from teachers, students could improve their grades, and teachers and students can work together to fulfill the students needs.

The first reason I think that schools must have an after school homework club is because students who are having difficulty in class can get extra help form their teachers and students.

One time

I had trouble understanding how to answer the questions my teacher gave to me about the civil war 2 years ago, and my teacher said that I could stay after school in the homework club and to meet her their.

That was the reason how I understood how to answer the questions on the quiz.

That is one reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.

The second reason why I think that schools must have a after school homework club is so students could improve their grades in their classes.

One time I had a D in my science class because I needed more help with remembering the parts of a cell.

My science teacher then told me that I could stay after school and go to the homework club with her to practice on the parts of a cell.

One week later my grade went up to a B because my teacher helped me pass my test.

This is the second reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.

The third reason why I think that schools should have a after school homework club is so teachers and students can work together to fulfill the students needs.

One time I stayed after school for the homework club and a teacher was having a heard time explaining a question to a student who spoke Spanish.

The teacher asked me if I could translate what she is saying to the student.

the teacher and I both helped the student understand the question.

This is the third reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.

In conclusion, these are the three reasons why I think that schools must have a after school homework club.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
F7B5DF87EA1D,"If we didn't take a action, What should we do?

Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something. Accomplish more can give your dreams and goals in your life.

We Accomplish more if we are always doing something because Many people supported us, Take a risk and do action and Be yourself.

People might say Inactivity also serve a purpose because god has a plan for us.

Others might say inactivity also serve a purpose becuase dream takes time.

Still others might say inactivity also serve a purpose bacause they say you need to think first before do the action.

There's some reason to help you to accomplish more.

1. Many People supported us. Why? They want you to be successful because they want you to live a better life and to not experience the poverty in life. They know that you have a dreams becuase they love you and they know you as a person.

2. Take a risk and do action. Why? You want to achieve something in your life because achieve something is to know yourself more and you want to prove in yourself that you can achieve something and you need a experience so you can handle all that risk that you take it before and to do your best next time.

3. Be Yourself. Why? because you have a dreams in your life. You see yourself that you achieved your dreams someday and we know that people has a dream that want to achieved someday. You know to yourself that you can do all becuase you enrourage yourself and your family that ""you can do this"" and you already accomplished a lot.

We Accomplish more if you know to yourself that you can do something because people in your side supported you, You enrourage yourself that you can do all and even there is a lot of risk, still fight for your dreams.

If we didn't take a action, so you can't accomplish or achieve something in your life.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
4E0094B179E0,"School is a time where you will receive assignments and it is your decision to complete them. Doing your work affects how teachers will think about you and how you will grow in the future. However there is one thing I disagree with in school. It is how the teachers praise students who aren't giving their best efforts. I believe that true self-esteem comes from achievement and it is not right to support those who aren't really trying.

The first reason I disagree with the teachers method to boost kids self-confidence is because they are too dependent on others. They will look for someone to always keep them up but in a world like this you can't depend on anybody. They can't always depend on someone to help them succeed. Students can become too attach and expect to always be praised by what little they do. What would happen if their was no one to support them. They would do nothing because their wouldn't be anyone to motivate them.

My second reason would be that they dont accomplish their achievements. When you accomplish a goal you have this feeling of happiness or relaxation. If students are always praised for their efforts they will never actually try to complete the task because they will have the feeling of completion. They have no reason to keep going if they seem to be done which could be a bad in the future. In the future they probably will fail their assignments because they believe that they have done good when they have but not good enough to complete it.

Their are some benefits on teachers motivating students such as them gaining confidence and self-esteem. It could really help people in the future. You motivating them could later cause them to motivate others in to doing their work. I just dont want teachers to go too far and praise them for writing their name,sometimes you have to be strict. It might hurt at first in the end it will all work out.

Those are some of the reasons of why I dont support teachers motivating students. Students should learn how to work alone and shouldn't ask for help. However i'm not discarding the option of teachers helping student. I'm just saying that they should only focus on what those who really need the help. Hopefully their will be change and teachers will only help those who actually try. ",4.0,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
FC86782120D3,"I would do better thing that will push me ahead so I can do better in school and outside of school . I would make a list of thing that I have to do so I

can be a better person and have a good time and a better person so I can finish out strong and have a good job and help out with thing that people need help on and i will give them the best thing to do so they can make it ahead and have a better life and they can say "" I made my life better "" and they can go around and help more people and help them out with there problems that they have and make them a better person and give them the power that u have so they can move forward and i can get more people to come and we can all work together

. and everyone that want to do they can sing up for it .

People would like this one thing that everyone is doing so they can make u work more hard and have a good personal plan and if they want they can be anything in the world and make a good choose in there live when they move on and they can teach the little kids that want to have a good lifestyle. and everyone can say they all made a good path in there life when they have something to doing there life and they can life a better life and have a good House and have a good job .and finally . We can all live a good life with this progam .  ",2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
20CF9410DC4A,"Is a good or bad idea to choose a carrer being young?

To begin, in my opinion choose a career being a young student is a good idea because it is a great opportunity for them. Imagine people can choose their profession since their youthness. For example, if they think that they want to be a doctor and at that moment they do not like that profession, they can opt for other career on time. Also, taking that decision many people assure their future, for example if they know what to do when they come to the adult stage, they going to be successful because they going to learn many things since young, and that helps to get better their knowledge. Therefore, doing careers help to people to keep their mind busy in their careers and studying hard and using their time to do good things, like do not using drug or wasting their time being a vandal. As well, if all the people do it, the world will be a place full of privilege, with porfessional people around, having trust and support on each other.

To conclude, doing career is one of many opportunities that we have in this country, so we have to use it, because it help us to be good person and get better our skills to be a professional. Furthermore, we have to learn how to focus in really important things. Also, it teach us how to become a successful human and fight for our goals since young. As well, it is good to learn how to be a independant person because if you study hard, your future will be full of success, so you do not need other people to do anything you want.  ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
2BAFBD6D9755,"If you do something new you can grow up

Some people are agree and some people disagree with unless you try to do something beyon what you have already mastered. you will never grow, however if you try to do somenthing new you can grow up because you can do great things in your life. If you try to do something new, you can grow up because. You can have more opportunities, you can be a professional person, and you can get a good job.

First, if you try to do something new , you can have more opportunities. For example, if you are a student and you put all of your effort to graduate from school and also from college then you can prepare to be a good doctor, teacher,police or lawyer. For example,

If you want to get a good job you need to prepare, and study to get more opportunities. If you try to do something new you can grow up.

In addition, if you try to do something new, you can be a professional person. For example Generic_Name is a student she want to be a lawyer but, she don't want to go the school because she think that make new things is boring but, if she don't do somenting new she never grow up because she need to prepare and study to be a professional person. For example, if she go to school and then she graduate from college she can prepare to be a lawyer. If you try to do something new you can be professional.

Finally, if you try to do somenthing new, you can get a good job. For example, Generic_Name work in RESTAURANT_NAME but, he is a student he all most

graduate from college, he want to be a police but, he think that he cant not pass the last test to graduate and he don't wanna do it. For example, if he don't try to do the test he cant graduate but, if he try to do the best he can pass the test he can be a police officer. If you try to do something new you can get a good job.

In conclution, some people are agree some people disagree with, unless you

try to do something beyon

what you have already mastered, yo will never grow. If you try somenthing new you can grow up.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
CAC6822F740C,"Cell phone should be allow in classroom

Cell phone are very useful in our daily life, we use them at home to see our social media and to be in contact with our family and friends that are far away from us, to buy thing, at work for any emergency and to make our shop list, but in a classroom maybe not much. Although, Some people believe that the cell phones shouldn't be allow in classroom. Actually, I think that cell phone should be allow in classroom because it allow students to find information fast about what they need and they can write note on their cellphone that they can read at any time they want.

Some people that believe that cellphones shouldn't be allow in classroom have their reasons. They think that students that use their cell phone in classroom don't pay attention at what the teacher is teaching them and that could be something that might help them in the future and they think that it is really disrespectful for the teacher that the students use their cell phone during class while he is talking. Also they think that student might use their cell phone to cheat during a test.

Cellphone allow students to find any information fast about what they need for the class or group project. A school computer sometimes takes a several moment to log in. Waiting for the computer to log is really stressful because we might not have much in class and many students work after schools so they might not have time to finish it at home. Also help students that are new in this country and that do not know English. They can translate any word they don't know in English. This way students learn more English and faster.

The students can use their cell phone to write notes on their cell phone that they can read at any time they want because students are often using their cell phone. students might in their work, in their friend's house, walking home or any where else and they just need to take out their cell phone. Also students they can study for a test anywhere they go at any time they want to because they always have their cell phone with them.

In conclusion, the students should be allow to use their cellphone in classroom because it allow students to find information fast about what they need and they instead of using a computer or dictionary can write note on their cellphone that they can read at any time they want and wherever they go. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
72766FE38307,dear principal i think they should help to do require community service because some kids don't community service. what about who gets in bigger trouble how to are require to do community service. the kids not in trouble don't how to do community service. it's a good a idea. do you like my option. some people don't like to do community service. they say to much work .i say it not lot work to if you help out. ,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
761E2670197E,"Self-confidence is really important for people to feel good about their own selves. Building self-confidence may be hard on some students because the way they was raise or the way they are treated by others; Students should be able to build up self-esteem for their own good reasons in life, learning may be hard on some students at first but is just one of the task they have to get through putting a lot of effort in to it wot be that hard getting it done will be; Others may believe that praise given for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. Students should be able to do work that they understand good enough at their own risk to make the effort of being self-confident. Some people may not agree just because building up self-confidence is not an easy thing to do or even an easy thing to accomplish in life. Does true Self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievements? Self-esteem comes from achievements; Achievements that you got to make the risk for put up in life throughout school. There i'll be some difficult times where you will want to give up in life times where you will feel like you just can't do it anymore, but students struggle with their own personal problems but they can get through it all and that is what makes the build-up self-confidence about the risk and task they make in life.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5
EBCC0B6D36D0,"In the years Thomas Jefferon be the President in that years many people loss they job or many people don't get the employement many people died for not get food or medicine they would not had job to get money and buy what they need to continue to they lifes. The people who life in the past they now are us ancestor but when they live the job it's in the farm or building they jobs are very hard and they work a lot and not get to much money for the families, the money they get for one day to work a lot and the little money they get its not to much for to get food,water, medicine etc. In the past the people don't have the technology we had on today that works they do its coming to har because they dont have the machines we had today to get the jobs more easy. Everyday the technology we have on today that technology help us a lot to get the jobs easy and more easy, and get more money to buy the all things we need to buy and pay to continue with us life, in the past and today the jobs is the property to all we need to do to get the resources we need at home. The jobs are not only for to get money the jobs its for to get the experience to one day on the future we need to teach to us childrens to they get a better life and when they get a job they know what they need to do, and when they are adult they form they own family and the experience they get in the past they would teach to the family.

In the all world we had many countries they had differents jobs and cultures the experience we get for others countries that help us to do better things day by day.

Everyday all people go to they own jobs and they use a machines to get the job easy and don't get tired quick we don't need to work all days we need to spend time with the family and do a food watch a movie talk about what are doing at job, school, the family is the property more important in us lifes, we need to get a job for to get that familie in good healthy. the childrens they had less than 16 years they don't understant the importance its to get a job and get money we spend in the future to buy a new thing the people invented or to buy things for the family, this childrens they only think about games, friends and they don't think about the importance the family is and saw how famly is very happy when they see we do the same things to the experience they teach, when parents teach something they do to us get a better life and don't get bad friends bad deccisions, bad influences, they think about own future they want to see that little son grow up for to do good things in own life and don't be never go down, us parents want to see we form a good family in a good place and that family never go down, the childrens we need to teach the all good things in this world and don't give games, phones the electronic devices for they birthay, they dont need all that, the need spend time to family in a river camping on the beach, but the electronic only do bad things, i saw a childrens more young then me and they smoke, consume drugs and that thing its not good for us healthy, if you do a tatto when you go to find a job they say, look its a ganster menber and when you listen that you feel really bad, us families and job are help us to us future be a good person. when you loss the job that is hard because you know all about that job and you don't find a similar job, when you get a job don't go a sit or look the iphone, the boss get mad and he say don't come to work anymore that is terrible situation.

The money we get for a job that help us but the money its go and comig againg its things about the life its happen forever and never change the people are be scare to spend they own money but the money come aging, when you spend the money you get for a job uou wold think in what you need to spend that money. maybe a get all this whrong but i try writen all things a listen, saw in my life my experience.

The things of the job you would need to care and dont be destroy, that thing help us to get that job for to much time and get more money to do wherever you want, when you come to other country and you go a house and you saw to much things but the person had all thathe work a lot for to get all he had in his house. The jobs are important because the time we had in that job, we grown up and the experience we get its go up to come to a profecional one day. Everyday we need to wake up and think what you would do in tha all day, try to create a new things use the technology we had for to do wherever we want. we had to much time to think and create, invented a lot thigs maybe that help a people in the future, the people are very important becuase its they don't invented thins like a machines all technology today we saw in the all world, the jobs they had its invented things new everyday and surprice the people. the jobs this perons had, the technology help they a lot to contine and the population grown up.

In the past to many years ago the population its not like todya we had technology and to much thing that help us a lot everyday, the population in the past hey don't pay the biils like today, rent or something, they would work on they own farms and grown up evryday, the ancestor we had in the past they work a lot and they suffer bacuse they dont get a lot money for buy supplies to they family. you konw much people say i don't need to work my parent give me all i need, but they know what importance it to get own money by us self, that money it's your and you do wherever you want.

In this world many people everyday they wake up and they dont do nothing they only walk around the house and they dont go to work they avert they family, friends only for not go to the job, the family and many friends are important because that people help you to continue your life, if you alone you would be get fell sad and you cry, and you would get the smoke drink alcohol, and you destroy your own life, you wold need go out side and spend time with family and friends everyday, and be happy..",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
10A367BB87EB,"Based on Emerson's statement, I firmly agree that if you never try to do something beyond what you already know, you will never do something and know if you could have done it or of you were good at it. Based on my experience, for what I've live and for what I know, I strongly believe and agree with this statement. My brother for example wanted to be an engineer, with hard work and effort he made it. In the other hand we have Hitler, he went from being a simple art student to one of the most exponent dictators of Germany.

For example, my brother wanted to be an engineer since he was little, at the time he reach High school, he was sure what career he wanted for his future. He started taking courses that would help him get credits for college and getting involve with sports that would help him get scholarships. Also, he took classes that would help him improve his skills and understanding of his future career. Now with hard work and effort, he graduated as an engineer from Generic_school and he's happily working with his dream job. This shows that with hard work you can accomplish any goal and letting yourself grow.

Another example was Hitler, he went from being a simple art student to one of the most exponent dictators of Germany. At a young age Hitler had a dream, he wanted to study arts, he started working on it, but when he apply to college he wasn't accepted. That was the moment when Hitler decided to do something different, and experience something new that could change his life. With hard work and patience he did it. Even though he fail the first time, he didn't give up, therefore, he became a dictator.

Some people say that you should do what life gives you at the moment because even if you work hard, sometimes you don't reach what you were hoping for and the work is not even worth it, however, you should always try to do something to grow because if you don't, that's when life gets too bored, you don't have to be in the same spot your entire life. You need to let yourself expand and fly to grow and experience something beyond what you already know, something that will make proud at the end of the day.

In conclusion I agree with Emerson's statement that if you never try yo do something beyond what you already know, you will never grow and never have experience something out of your comfort zone. You'll never know if what you could have done was worth your time, which is why you should always try to something beyond what you have already master and challenge yourself to do bigger things that you never knew you could. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
29BB45AA907C,"Have you ever asked for advice? I ask for advice when I don't understand something or when I need help. When I need advice I ask multiple people so I can get everyones opinion. When I get multiple peoples advice I choose one that will be best for me. What I'm trying to say is that asking for more advice can be useful.

One reason why I think asking for multiple advice is good, and helpful because people could be going through rough times. People ask for advice sometimes because maybe they have family problems, and they need help so they go ask people for advice. When you need advice you don't have to ask one of your family members, you can ask a teacher you trust, your counselor, or your friends. Out of all the advice you get you can choose one advice that you think could help you the most or you can use all the advice people gave you and try them to see if the advice would help. There can be many different reasons why poeple ask for several of advice.

Second reason of why I think asking for multiple advice is good. Another reason why people ask for advice is because they could be making a club, and they might not know what to do. Club members can put up posters, and ask people to write their advice or opinions on what they should do to make the club better, and more interesting. All the advice they will get is going to help them make the club better and they could get more members added to their club. When you ask for advice from people their advice can make things better.

My third reason is, sometimes you are so nervous for a test so you go ask for advice from people. When you want advice for a test you can go to your teacher and ask them for advice, or you can also ask other kids that have took the test before and they can give you some good advice since they took the test already. Advice can really help you if you are nervous. When you are nervous and people are giving you some advice their advice can help you calm down. Sometimes you can also give yourself some adviceb by saying to yourself ""you got this"" or ""you are going to do good on this test"".

I say that asking multiple people for advice is important. It's important because all the advice people give you can help you through out the day. Always ask people that you think can give great advice and always ask people for advice when you need some.",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
C70AEFA3CD16,"I am agree with the Emerson's statement, be yourself in a place where everyone else want you to be something else is a greatest accomplishment, because be who you are is really hard, more when people is trying to make you do things that you do not like or want, and ignore that kind of persons is a hard achievement. The differences in the people is what make us specials, because every vary has their own thing that they are good a it and they like to do it. And be in a place where is hard to be yourself is not easily to support it, and it is complicate it. Be who you are in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. Because stay in a place where no one let you be yourself is really difficult, desperate, and sadly.

Is difficult be yourself in a place where no body accept you by how you are, the immigrant know how that feels, because they came from a different country where they have different culture and believes. Mexicans immigrant is hard to be their self in USA, because the culture and language is different than the Mexican people specially the language, learn a new languages is hard and when Mexicans do not learn the language yet they feel like they are not accepted, because no one can understand them. The difficulty of be in an immigrant is that you have to learn the culture, and language of the country but you do not have to stop being yourself. Because I know that be in a different country is hard to be yourself.

it is desperate when people try to make you something else, most of teen anger got desperate when their parent try to make them something that they dont like. Teen angers just want to be their self and do things that they like. Because when parents, family or other people try to make you something different of what you were thinking is really stressful. Sometimes people try to make you something else, because they think that is going to be good for you but they dont think if is going to like or if you are good at it they just want you to do what they think is better for you but parents forget your opinion. Is desperate too when you doing something different than others and they tell you that you are wrong.

Being in a place where no body want you for being different of what they want is sadly, because people do not accept you for how or who you are, and persons that are different are mostly alone. A student that is immigrant could understand this because when a student that is immigrant go to a new school from other country have to learn a new language, and some other students that are from that country dont accept the immigrants just for be them self. And I think that is but people should accept other persons that are from other countries and let them be their self. In that way people can learn many new think that can be interesting, and everyone is going to be happy, but when people do not accept other people and dont let them be is sad, cause they are alone.

I am agree be yourself in world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the grates accomplishment, because being alone in a place where no one accept you for who you are is very difficult to live, is desperate hear things that you dont wanna do and people still try to tell you what to do to make you something else, and sadly when no one want you just for be different and you have to be alone. In conclusion be yourself and do not give up is the biggest achievement. Always is going to be hard to be who you are but never give up. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
1AD12415C4DB,"what is your talent or skill and how you develop and use it? my talent is drawing.

I used just for fun, when i want to think about something else, I develop my drawing by be in art class.

first, everyone has a talent or skill, my talent is drawing, draw is the more relaxing thing that I experiment,For example,some people said draw, help you to make clear your ideas, distract you that make forget about your problems. make you focus in the paint.

next, I just my talent just fun,because that make relax and that help me to clear my ideas. For example some famous artist said, A artist,

for him drawing it's not a responsabilitie, or homework , art is to express all their feeeling in a paint that why I drawing just for fun because when I draw I express my problem in the paint, and that give peace, when i'm angry I draw too that make happy .

then,I decided to take art to develop my drawing,and paratices, now i know more things then before for example, the rules how are the steps, the way to made more easy, some people developing the drawing by theirself, and they want to make more experienece by theirself, that is more interesting because they experiment their own talent. the results are better.

In conclusion, I used my talent, drawing just for fun and when I want to think about something else, and i develop my drawing for be in art class.     ",3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
D464E294DDB4,"Our character traits are formed by influences beyond our control. For example family has a very huge impact on who you become as A person because you are with them every day. Another big impact on our life is the community we grow up in.

We do not get to choose who our family is therefore thats beyond our control. Family can influence you to either be a great person or A horrible person. For example If you grew up watching your father abuse your mother, you have a higher chance of putting your hands on females. How ever if you have kind, loving parents you have a higher chance of becoming a nice, loving person. Keep in mind we are with our family everyday so were most likely going to end up like them.

We can't choose our community either therefore its beyond our control. Personally I feel like the community we grow up in has a huge impact on our life because it determines the kind of people you grow up around. For example if you grow up in a bad neighborhood you will be around gangsters and drug dealers. As a kid you may think selling drugs is fine because you seen other older kids do it. Selling drugs is going to result in you going to jail which means your going to be around other bad people which is most likely going to have an influence on the person you become.

Others may think seeing bad should inspire you to be better but unfortunately it is not that simple. Your character is usually built over the years not over night.

In conclusion the person we become is built by influences beyond our control and we can not just change when we want to.          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
9FA1ED280D8E,"Do you think that the school hours should extend?

School is already not fun for many of the students, and by staying more in school students may have a bad mood or adituted, and it may lead to bad behavior and not make them get good grades! I disagree because it can be very tiring to stay school more longer, it can change your mood of being in school, and you may want to got out with friends or family.

The First reason, Is because if we stay more longer in school you are gonna get more tired. If you get tired in school you are not gonna have more energy to go outside and entertain yourself. And you would just go home and sleep all day long. However, if we don't extend the school hours, we won't be as tired, and we would have energy to go outside.

The Second reason, Is that if we stay longer in school it can change the way you are. Staying in school longer can change your mood because you won't be as happy. Because you would have to stay in school longer. Also you might have teachers you don't really like and you would have to see them longer. However, it doesn't have to be that way, if we don't extend the school hours.

The Final reason, Is that you woudn't have time to spend with your friends or family. Because most of that time you would be in school. ANd spending time with friends/family is the most important thing in life and school shouldn't take all the space froem your life.

In conclusion, I disagree that the school should add more school hours. because it is a waste of time, and it gets you more tired, it change youself, and it doesn't give more time to spend with friends/family.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
6EA18B20DA5A,"Cna you imagine how good it feels to live by choosing your best character? Choosing our own character for ourself will never make us regrate it in the future.

People choose theire own character because, they know that theire choice will make them win at the end. When it comes to choosing, it might be as hard as a stone at the begining because, we are not sure if it is going to work or not. But nothing comes in an easy way if you want the reall succesful ,we need to follow our character.

Whenever we choose our own character, we have the confidence to do on what we are planing to do. And when we have the confidence, it is way easier to manage any case that comes to our life. We do not choose our charater whitout knowing ourself, and that is why it is better to choose our character by knowing what is best for ourself. For exampe: Sometimes in life we get so many bad things on our way, but if we choose to take it easy on them by choosing our best character, that helps a lot because it is making our life easier in an easy way without much stressing.

As long as we know our charachter, we will always have the right chocie to make, because we know what is going to match with our character or with our wantings. Sometimes when we are planing to get married, we do not just guess to match with our parteners ,but we choose our character to match with our partner's character, that is because we know that we can choose our character in any how that makes us feel the best way to our living. Or sometimes you can fall in love but you partener might have a better character then you, so you decide to change your character by choosing your partener's character, and that is why we should choose our own character.

A lot of people choose thier character when they start school, because they see a lot of diffrent characters in school and they start noticing which character belongs to them. Or they can learn from what thier teacher teaches them, and we all know that our teachers are always willing to teach us the best behaviour and that is why the most students start to choose thiere character at school.

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When we choose the character that we want, it helps us to find the right people in our life, because we are more happy when we find people that are the same as our character without changing our character. You can not pretend to be the character that you do not choose to be, that is just like living a fake life. Life is easier and happier when we follow our own rules. Let's follow our character that we choose to be, no matter what!!. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
F1B4412674FE,"My thoughts on what author Ralph Waldo had wrote, is something I can agree with. The things i have experience and has made me the person I'am today, has taught me that doing the same things will not help me learn and grow. Being fearless and taking a risk on something, will change me and anyone else to a more powerful and successful person.

When I was young, my parents had gotten me a bike with training wheels, I had started to ride it and it was pretty difficult to ride. Every day when I came home from school, I would go outside and ride my bike. I started to get better and better, I was'nt struggling anymore. My parent had saw that I have gotten the hang of it and told me that I should try and do it with out the training wheels. I was to afraid and nervous that I wouldnt be able to ride the bike with training wheels so I didn't let him take them off. He told me that if don't take the wheels off, how will I grow and take risks in life when im older and have big things that i'd have to develop and learn what I made a mistake on not doing and learn from my mistake. So i started to think to myself, ""If i didn't take them off how will I know that im good or horrible"". I told my dad to take them off, once he took them off i was pretty scared but then i started to get better and better that i wasn't afraid. I was pretty proud of myself and gave me courage.

Once you've done something in your life that was huge and still did the same thing over and over what would you grow from it. You are in this world to learn and grow. To become a stronger, and successful person to accomplish something big and grow from where they have started. If someone was to started off as a employee at McDonald and was thinking of being a manager somewhere and have his own company how could he do that if he's just a worker at McDonald. If he wanted to be a manager and own his own company, he would have to be the hardest worker there and show that he can handle and work and follow all the rules. He ends up getting a raise and is the employee of the month for showing that he's a hard worker. the manger realizes that he's got a big future ahead of him. Year's later, he's a manager at his own company and is being successful in life he's learned that not giving up and risking things to become what he is now is incredible.

Last but not least, if someone is not challenging them self, how would they know that they are good at it and could be able to do so much. Ralph Waldo has gave people the courage and make them think that they can do anything to become someone you'd never thought you could be. If you believe you can do anything then you are growing and realizing that all you need to do is to be fearless and take risks. That's the point of growing. I have learned so much and ready to learn more and to become successful in my life. The statement Ralph Waldo had wrote is something i agree with and will grow to be successful.",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
CD5F70E5C1D7,"To begin with, in my opinion i think students and parents should get the choice to be involved in any type of extracurricular activties. and why im saying this is because the school does not have no right to tell you you can do this and that but if they ask you to stay to finish some school asignments or afterschool studying then i suggest you stay after if you really want to finish those assignments and get a good or decent grade on it. or if you want to do great in school or in any job and you need a lot of school for that type of job then you might want to do as much of extracurricular activites.

Second of all, if the parents dont think that you are going to do good enough in school after the extracurricular activites and if you dont have enough time for study sessions or you homework because your to tired from sports such as football, basketball, lacrosse, and soccer. then ask your teacher or whoever is controlling the activties and ask them if you can get off a little earlier because you dont have enough time for homework, studying, or FAMILY or for yourself or your friends.

but i think the school should give the students and thier faimly diffrent choices of extracurricular activties so the students can pick 2 or 3 diffrent types of them instead of not having time for thier own life. like the students can pick and choose the 2 or 3 they really want or like to do or they can pick the ones that's going to help them the most in the future of school or in thier adult life, because teachers can teach the students things from extracurricular activites that they learned or did so they wont have to ask no one else for help or hire somebody then from that you can save money and you can also get money if you help someone that doesnt know how to do that type of thing.

And thats why i think it should be the students and parents choice if the students want to or not do extracurricular activities. because the school doesnt think about the students family or what they got going on at that time they just want to boss the kids around and tell the students to go ot not go.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
3691B4714FD5,"Conserving energy and resources, this is what the most part of the society is worried about, some bussineses are even adopting a four-day work week, each day consisting of ten hours; but should schools apply this model by extending the school day two hours? Well, I belive that schools should adopt this model because: It gives students a longer weekend to vacation, or simply to their favorite activities, second reason would be learning part, students will have a longer period of time for each class, which means they can learn farter, or memorize it easier; then we have the most important; the resources and energy saving.

Almost every student loves to have a loger weekend, one example could be my neightbor Generic_Name; he loves to go camping on weekends, sometimes he tells me, he wish to have a longer weekend, that would allow him to go even further or simply to stay loger at the same place, I am pretty sure that the three days weekend would make him happy, others may also be thankful, because they will have more time to do their homework or just to study. Me, as an example, I rather to stays at home and study; sometimes, I feel like the weekend went off a lot faster than the usually.

The second reason, which is so important for students, I belive it is; the longer classes that we will have, this will make a great impact on the grades of the students, longer classes will make us learn quicklier,Generic_Name my brother is one of those student that forget some important things about any class, I always tell him, ""Generic_Name study, do your homework,"" and he has already forgotten what the homework was about, I belive Generic_Name will get better and remember the homework with the loger period of classes; also in my class of science, sometimes the whole class is experimenting with some wird liquids, and we are still mixing when, the bell rings, my theacher, Generic_Name, says, ""it would be greatful, if we would have more time so we would be able to finish the experiments,"" and of course! the entire classe agree with what he says.

Some people might say that students would forget somethings during weekend, however the four-day school week will help to conserve energy and resources; there is a massive wave of air polution in this world, and one of the biggest is fosil fuel, millions of kids are dropped to school by their parents, if we start coming to school a day less; it would casue a great impact over the polution, it could reduce polution a lot, also the government will save a lot of money in terms of food sources, every day, schools give tons of food just for students, a non-classes friday could help to save that much resources.

As a conclusion, I belive schools should adopt this four-day school week because; it will make students to enjoy the new schedule, the three-days weekend, this will give more time to do our favorite activities or to study. It will also give us longer classes, where we could have bigger activities without being worry about the time, at least not as much as before, but it will be enough, and my last one which I belive the most important, society will have less air polution, and also the the government will save a lot of money if we get the four-day schoool.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
2082C42A8F43,"Success consists in how people manage their own enthusiasm and how responsible they are about their acts. every person makes mistakes every day and they are responsible for it, but that is how people learn every day from every mistakes they have committed from the beginning until now. Mistakes help you learn and get better and better until you understand the concept about what you are doing. Some people think that by making mistakes you will fail something, but notes that at the end you will get results from it. A lot of people fail everyday and that doesn't mean that you're not perfect because no one is perfect in these world, but the main idea is to look for the best way to manage or do something and also to keep forward.

Failure is just the key to keep looking forward in these world. We have the opportunity to make mistakes and learn from it, that is how people progress to became someone in the future. failure is a lesson that these world give us to keep learning and at the end to find a solution and continue our lives. however, there are a lot of people that think that failure is like an stop sign that don't let us keep looking forward, but failure is just a process in which people advance to find results that will help them to survive in these life.

Some people stop where they are just because they fail on something, they think that they can not keep going forward just for a little mistake they have committed and they also give up. The word failure doesn't mean that you should stop on what you are trying to do. Failure is a strong word that teach us get up, find the best results and keep living our lives. Failure is a progress in which every person create their own future. By failing people analyzed that they keep learning and at the same time they are creating a better future in which they will have better lives. The word failure give us the enthusiasm to maintain the resistance to keep fighting for what we really want to reached, that help us that at the end we would get better things in order to keep living.",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
FA38957FCAF6,"i have the talent of draw, i can use it in the art class whit the, in a personal draw, to describe things with a person with draw and to make comics. I like draw because that relaxe me, i like draw because i like to see colors, figures, i like to use my imagination. When i was a children i likes draw dogs, cats, mountains and houses. Now i like draw anime, realistic draws with color or black and wite. I don't konw how, but i won a draw concurse in my old school in Generic_City.

I like when other people tell me my draw it's good because everytime i make mi best try, i know i don't speak perfectly english, but now i make my best try and i guess that is correct.

i like to read comics because the pictures call my atenttion, i can't draw anywhere, i need my room with draw, i don't pay atenttion with my draw when i  ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
BB06ADBF1640,"sources consisting of going faildlue to future. i agree because sometimes we get tired or we had to many things in we are mind.

I think is difficult to focus on many things because a lot of students they work.

also if we had only two hours school we are with energy is more essay.

School is really important because many job thye ask for diploma if you dont have dimplo maybe you dont get the job.

a lot the students they don't like to como to the school. i

I think that's really bad because on the future if you dont have diploma you never had a good job.

is really important. sometimes we dont undestad how is importan come to school.

school is not easy but when you want your diploma nothing can be hard for you.

come to school is really good becayse we learnd about a lot stuff. sometimes is neccesary come to school because we had to study for test. after when yoou finish everyitng you will really happy. statement is true schools career guard i made it out which was learning the cheers it.     ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
219A0A3B6B5D,"First each person decide what they want sometimes people have to make hard decision about any situation in their life. Also students have to decide what career should they take. Each person has the right to make their own decision about anything they propuse.

Second for example if a guy is in a relationship and he has to decide if he is going to stay forever with hes girlfriend. He has to decide but probably there will be opinions or probably he will need their parents help but the decision is hes. Also hes girlfriend have to make that decision too if she wants to marry him. However if both of them decide to marry each other that and agreement. They have define their decision.

Third for example some students started to choose their career early so they can have time to decide what career they want to choose. Some student are cumplicated for choose their career or what they want to be. Sometimes its hard for some students to choose a career sometimes students need help from their teachers. However the students can accept the teachers helped or opinions but the decison is the students.

Fourth for example every person has the right to decide what they want in their life. However young person sometimes they take wrong decision in their life. Sometimes Young people does not know what they want in that situation the parents has to help them to make the right decision in life. Although everybody has the right to decide what they want in life but some do not know therefore they required helped. Also it is important for them to learn and be more mature to take the right decison.

Clonclusion therefore every studunts or young person, should be more mature to make the right decision. All people in the world has the right to decide about their own life. There will be opinions of other people but the person has to make that decisoin. However it is very important to learn how to choose the right decision in their life.",3.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
BC8115EEB029,"Being a teenager is hard in are decae. Because as a teenager growing up in this period of time is hard. If you do not follow the trend, do what others does. People will judge you and,also you might not be cool enough to have friends. But at the end of the day you have yourself respect. I agree that you should be yourself. Because you should be proud of who you are ,and will be succes, happy, and do what you good at.

Some people say, Individally we are one in order to be one only you got be proud of who you are ,nor letting anyone change you. For instance, first when I moved in here in 2016 from Egypt. I was a 14 years old. It could have affected me. When people were making fun of my English. because I did not know how to speak It ,and did not know the culture. Which It was hard for me. But I was proud of me self for trying to learn ,and still I'm learning everyday something new. It's a good feeling to feel proud of yourself. Even when people try to hate on you or make fun of you're accent. If you are a strong person nothing will stop you. From being proud ,and making you're family proud because they work hard for to be succesful in the future.

Succes is not easy. There is a lot of reason's for those who are succful. They worked hard for It. Mian reason how they became succesful is never give up. That is the key not giving up, being yourself. While people in my school having ''fun''. I stay home studying to become succesful ,and make myself proud. Also my family. Teenager should not be a follwer. Everyone should be them self. For example,There is always the good ,and bad. You choice who you hangout with. Will help you with what you wanna be in the future. If you hang with people that do sports and healty that is good because you will be succesful.

Once you do what you always had planing for in the future. You will feel happy. And to be in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else. That will even make you happier. To be more specific. Trying to be you're self while everybody is differnt is not easy. Sometimes students affor me to smoke in the bathroom. I always say no. They might laughe at me for not smoking ,and not being ''cool'' . However, I think of who I'm if I do not like doing something. I should not do it because someone else is doing it or to make other happy but not myself.

Some might say, I disagree you should not be you're self. Because other people can not be them self or might harm them self in a way. such as doing drugs,skiping school, not being respectful to you're family ,and friends. However, I think being yourself in a world that is trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. cause it makes you. proud of who you are,succesful in what you do Aslo, It makes you happy for what you have accomplish.                                                                                                      ",3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
3438C0C5ACEA,"I oppose to extending the school day to one and a half minutes or ninety minutes. Students need to get back home sooner so they can practice their homework and do some of their own hobbies at their spare time. Schools must have an appropriate schedule so students can actually have time to work at home afterwards. The school board shouldn't extend the school day by adding one and a half hours because the students won't have time for themselves at home, the classes would take longer, and the school will end at evening time.

First off, students always want to get back home when school is over, but if the school extends the time, the students wouldn't have time to do their own activities at home. For instance, if one student comes home at 4:50 pm, and they finish their homework at 5:30 pm, then their parents would tell them to get ready for bed because kids have to sleep early at 8:00-9:00 so they can be ready for school the next day.

Secondly, classes would also have an extended amount of time in the daily schedule if the school day extended. Students will start complaining about the slowness of the class due to the start and end times of classes being changed. For example, the kids would be complaining over the lesson taking so long. Some students would also fall asleep during class too. Therefore, extended class times can affect how students will behav during class.

Lastly, the school will end at the evening time. Students would be feeling less energetic when school ends, and they won't be able to get home to do their homework because they're half asleep. When they get home from school, their parents will notice how tired and exhausted they are from what happened at school and the students will have to rest and sleep for the entire day. If the school extends the schedule, then the students' energy won't be enough for them when they return home from school.

In closing, extending school hours will affect the students' behavior and the time they have for themselves at home. The kids won't be able to do the fun stuff at their spare time after finishing their homework because they have to go to bed early for school. They'll also feel tired and complain about the length of the school time. When they return home, they'll groggily enter the house and end up resting for the rest of the day. Schools don't need to extend the day by adding one and a half hours to each day. They need to require a proper schedule so the students can behave properly during the day.",5.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0,4.5
85F4C57672EA,"""Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home""? I do not believe that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. I believe the students can get distracted so easily at home. For example, you start watching a movie; when you were supposed to your homework. That would affect your grade because you didn't do it on time. Another, example is when your mom tell you to buy something and then you forgot what were you doing. In addition, time is another reason why is not beneficial taking classes from home.

Time is one of the consequences attend to classes online is not beneficial because unexpected things can happen. You can't control time. For example, someone in your family die or they have a car crash or even work schedule. Those examples can affect you by reducing the time and material you were to work on. That's why you can't predict what is unexpected. Unexpected times take away your energy, concentration and comprehension on what your studying. Another, reason why classes from home isn't good.

Energy keep you awake. Being concentrate shows interest on what you doing and comprehension is how much you understand. If you're sleepy you cannot do any of that. However, I want to focus more in the comprehension part. Never ever compare a teacher vs a computer. For example, you didn't understand the new unit because is confusing, you can always put your hand up and ask the teacher. The teacher will explain at their best for you to comprehend. On the contrary, you can't do it because you're at home and nobody can explain the material you don't understand.

Some students agree they can benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they can do it later, if they miss something on class. Also, they can study anywhere they can have access to it. That reject to be in certain place. You're free to study and work without any restrain. All you need is to manage your time.

You be able to kill two birds on the same shot.

To conclude, students will realize that a teacher is way better than a computer. The teachers study the materials on what they gonna teach and they graduate from college, gain a diploma of what they teaching you. They have the proof and I believe they are doing the right choices about giving you materials for you on the future. That's why i would never change them for one computer at home.  ",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
263A29FC4FB1,"People always need advice for problems they have, But sometimes they don't just go to one person some go see more then one person which sometimes a good thing however the person takes it.

There are people who go to a specific person who understands them, They go to that person because they feel comfortable with telling them about the problem they need advice on. People usually just go to one person because either they're really close to them or they give good advice for the problems they have.

But there are people who take advice from multiple people, They take advice from different people because the more advice the different outcomes you would get on your situation. Some people will give bad or good advice if you think about it, Its good to hear from other people because they will tell you somethings you didn't think about before.

If you take advice from just one person its only one outcome, But if you take advice from different people the more outcomes the better because different people give you good advice it will boost your confidence even if it backfires with confidence the different people gave you it wont't affect you that much so it better to take different people for advice.

So if you wanna take someones advice its better to take it from multiple people to get a perspective on how things would go, the more advice you get the more you see into your problem or problems you have.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
F06699DB73E0,"Some people say that:success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.

Success consists going from failure without loss of enthusiasm because every human want's success in there future. and every single person have failure success in there life,even the humen can do their best and derirative for them self ,and alwys when i saw this every success have failure behind them. every human have good and bat thing in their life,and some people past their failure and have a good life know,and some people do have write know .

The live is like ""cradle"" every thing is happen in this world. some times we have a good time and some time we have bad, and then alwys we want to have a good live and we do enthusiasmy when we loss something. and we have alot casualyies and all the lime,we should do conflict with a bad stuff.

When people are thired with their life, we shiould help them, and we make them ""He/She"" sure to be a laborer peron in their live.

even we have a bad live or bad stuff happen in my live we should resistance with that because every thing in is possible. and we can solve our problm.

Other people say that: success consists is difficult without enthusiasm. so even we knows that we have failure we should do preventoin about that stuff to have good and happy live in the future without failure, and we have happy and good live .                   ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
7921F1381801,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attand classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Yes, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Less take me as an example; I had personal problems before, and It was auwefull. What If It was so bad that I couldn't go to school?! Some students are just not good at school, and just prefer learning from home online or by video conferencing. Other students that gets in trouble all the time are just better off learning from home. There, at home, there is no one to to fit with. You get your work done and you move on. their will be no more trouble.

Most of the times our parents say that going to school and socialism is good for us. Is that true?! Is that the case?! Well I am not sure about that, but what I do know is that I think we students should have the options to decide what we really are confortable with, and our parents should help us with that. Anyways, It's not like people at home are doing less work than people at school. We all are doing the same work, depanding on our grades. We all need to turn in our work on time or it will be counted late, same test, same quiez everything. The only differance between people that are taking online or video conferencing from people at school is that they are not going to school. They aren't in a classroom. We all have to studie for our test, quiez... But this is what my attantion goes to. Do students that attand classes from home, ever cheet?! we'll never know if they do. I would like an answer for my question, but I bet there will never have a proper answer.

There is a lot of resons why it is good for students to be able to take classes from home, and I will never be able to tell you all that resons. all I can think of is what I provided. It is hard as a kid or a young teens to go to school and have to deal with other kids, and I get it, because it is hard for me to deal with other kids too. But not all of those kids are hard to deal with. Online or video conferencing are not so bad themself, I will have done if I have the opportunity to.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
AA53069FF4B4,"I believe that working in groups benefits more than someone working alone. Working in groups help you gather more knowledge, you get to learn and have fun, and you get to finish faster.

When my group comes together, we all start giving each other ideas of our own knowledge to make the project successful. Although some may know more than others, but others may know things that some dont. I also like when my group shares ideas because are project can be much more creative. Some people may believe that someone working alone can also have as much knowledge than someone working in groups. However I believe that working in groups can benefit you on having more knowledge.

Getting together with my group makes learning fun. When we start the project every one would start concentrated so that when we get close to finishing we can talk to each other. People would quietly take a break and talk so that they dont get overwhelmed. . Although, some people may believe that being groups detracts and working alone does not. However, getting detracted is something you would choose to do and not something I would choose to do.

I always felt like being in groups time would pass really fast. In a group everyone would choose what they wanna work on or work on something they know more of. When everyone is working on something it reminds me of a job, because every job wants to make the job done as soon as possible. When time flies i feel good because the job is done and i get to relax. Some people may believe that students that work alone like to take there time and do there project at there own style and make it knit. However, I am a type of guy that likes to get my job done and quick, and I believe there is a lot of people that are the same type.

In conclusion, working in groups benefits you more because of all of these reasons. Finally, I suggest that every one should try to make or find a group so that all these reasons open up to you.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
2B69ADAD868C,"""some people may say that growth does not depend on doing something beyond what they have, for it is not unnecessary.'' However, that is a fallacy idea because we all know that is not true. Wise people believe that doing something beyond what they have will make them grow as a person, both physical and mentally. Unless people try to do something beyond what they have already mastered, they will never grow, because growth comes from doing something that someone has never done before, it comes from trying out new things, boost up our confidence and makes us progress.

Doing something beyond what we have already mastered, will make us try out new things that will help us move on further. trying new things is the only way we can know what we are capable of. for example, i remember trying out something new which was beyond the things i knew, i felt different and new. the feeling that i felt was growth. Trying is what makes us know who we are and what we are capable of.

If people do not do something beyond, how do you expect them to grow, when growth is defined as making progress in what someone does in his life time. growth is producing new things that has never been done before making someone realize how good it is to do some that is convince and improve in our skills. Not doing something beyond is as good as not growing. doing something beyond will boost up someones confidence in doing things. the ability to try new things beyond what we have already mastered is what we call self-esteem that alluded from confidence. How would someone have confidence when they do not try new things.

Thinking beyond the box , makes some people become dogmatic with affirmative thoughts, because they would always want to do something with diligent. how do can someone expect a person with fallacy ideas become dogmatic? For example, how can someone define a person who does the same thing over and over without changing? It becomes irritating and unpleasant. growth comes from the things that we do beyond what we have already mastered.

Some people might say, "" it is not necessary to do somethings beyond what you already have because, having excess of something is not good.""however, that is not right, we all know that having something in excess will always push us to doing more things. for example, Trevor Noah once said,'' nothing is enough not until you die from it,"" meaning nothing will never be too much. The more we try doing something beyond the more we intend to learn. we all learn from doing something that is beyond our imagination.

Unless we try to do something beyond what we have, we will never grow, because growth comes from doing something someone has never done, it boost our confidence, and makes us become dogmatic with positive thoughts. doing things beyond, will always produce good results at the end, such as, advancement, making progression in our daily life. I firmly believe that doing something beyond what you have, will boost someone's confidence because each day i try out new things and all i get i enthusiasm of doing more.",2.5,3.0,4.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
BD951BF14177,"Do you know that many people like to make their own decisions? Making your own decisions is not really good idea because a lot of people think wrong and they make a lot of mistaks. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters much better because you can get many good ideas from people who had experiences before and know better than you.

Making your own decisions can make your life worst. Also, it's not good for young people to make their own decisions. For example, I know one boy he is 17 years old. He was all the time take his own decisions. He had money problems and he didn't tell anyone about his problems. After 2 years he became homeless.

Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters is really helpful for everyone. Also, it can make your life easyer and better. For example, one of my best friends he is older than me. I had problems with my life. I went to him to ask for help and I told him about all the problems. He started to talk with me and gives me solutions.

Making your own decisions is really not good idea specialy for young people. It can make your life bad and you may have many problems. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters can be really helpful and it can be the solution for all the problems.

Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters will make you success in your life. Also, You will have less problems and your life will be easyer and much better. Seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters also really good decisions to make to be success.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
49619EA08A55,"some school offer distance learning as an option from students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. and my opinion the student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home; the student have more freedom of concentrate in the home, student have problem for go to the school or the is student is sick of a illness and have more responsibility in the school or classes, home and job.

First, the student have more freedom of concentrate in the home that school because student not have noisy peoples, student work more quickly and have interests in the class. The corporation a student of regular school and home student, in the regular school have lass time in the class and home have more time and focus in the class.

Second, some student cannot go to the school for problem in the health or is sick of a illness. Today al the peoples can student and learn for class online or video conferencing, student with problem can learn and study like other student from regular school.

Finally, other people have responsibility in the class like the job because some not have time for go to the school and work all the day and only have time after work in the night. The person can study all the night for online or video conferencing. The principal parts of the online is you can study any day or time.

in conclusion the student can take class for online or video conferencing in the home because today the technology have a good benefit in the peoples. student can study and learn in the home in any moment or day, have more concentration, focus, responsibility and the person have problem of health can study and learn of your home.                                                   ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
6D104CA14B33,"75% of the time students graduate early to go to college. Matter of fact I believe that students should graduate in three years and work, because they would save money for college, they will be mature for college, and they would have time management skills. This will help students gain lots of opportunities before college.

First, students would have the opportunity to save money for college. Some students like to get a loan for college, because they don't have enough money, and parent's can't support him/her. But if students get a loan for college, then they would have to pay it back after college. If students get out of school in three years, then they have the chance to work and save money for college. Students won't need a loan if they work, and the parents would not have to worry about the money. This is good, because students would have to rely on themselves, and have responsibilities. This will show others that you matured, and will make your parents proud.

Secondly, students who work will be more mature, because they would have to rely on themselves, have lots of responsibilities, and they would understand the outside world better. Some students who graduate early tend to be 17 years old. If they do the one year work force, then they would gain money and become more mature. Maturity matters, because students need to understand how to turn in work to their professor on time. Being mature will make you an adult, and make others take you serious, not a joke. Some students get bullied, because they are younger than everyone else, and we do want that happening to anyone. But if you do work that one year you graduate early, then you will get into college the same year your friends are, and you won't have to worry about being alone.

Lastly, Some students don't turn in school work on time. Work could gain the student time-management skills, because they would have to be at work on time, do what they have asked to do on time, and never be late. Time management skills will help you in school by, turning things on time, not being late to class, and sleeping early for the class you have the other day. Time management skills isn't only for being late and turning work in on time, time management is also important for setting a time to sleep and to wake up. It also helps you by having a time for each thing you do, like studying, working, playing, relaxing, and sleeping. If you have all of that set, then you don't have to worry about being late or not turning anything on time, because they would already have the time management skills and you would be used to it already.

I believe that others might disagree with me and say that students should go to college right away, but with all do respect I believe that students would gain a lot of opportunities if they work before going to college, because if you go to college and you aren't mature enough, then you will struggle.

In conclusion, I believe that students who work before going to college, will gain a lot in life and they will be ready for college. Because they wouldn't have to worry about paying the loan off after college, they would have a better time management skills than others will, and they will become more mature by being responsible and handling it themselves. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
DCE760033193,"The school board plans to the school for more better earth and help all in this planet.

The first reason for the school have plans is for helping the earth because the earth need more plants all the schools need plants because is good for the animals humans. I am agree the schools have one and a half hours for each schools day and when is more tree morelife is in this planet

Another reason

I agree for the children help to plant tree for help the earth each school need a gardener because is necessary care this planet. The tree is so good because when is summer is good to sit under the tree

Finally, I am not agree to other person like to mistreat a tree or animals because all the people need the tree. I am so disagree with some persons because no I like the tree the tree is so cute

In my decision i don't like when others person say to don't like the tree the tree si so pretty more when is summer i love it my favorite reason is summer because all the tree is green and when a go to the rivers is good to pass a relax day with my family or friends.

The is help to when a walk the sun is to hot the tree is fresh.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0
06F368177993,"The Forme British Prime Minister

Churchil,

Once he said ""The success consists of going from failure to failure right but without loss of enthusiasm"",

My oponion about the all this success is basic on Prime Minister Winston Churchill that he once said the success consists if you loss your enthusiasm i think he was exactly what he said about in persuit of success because the enthusiasm consist and how you going to be when you do something that you need to do right so you need to ge a great enthusiam for do it as well rifht if you do not do well its mean that your enthusiasm is what is success is passed from you was a one's of statement about the important role consist.

Some succes too is basic how you are if are good person sometime its mean that you controle a paper that if something is passed on you right that's mean that you need to get attention taht what you going to do in this time so this is one other effects that cause on you so i am agree with churchill's statement, but in the same time we can said its normal right because it how you feel tha's mean is represent your enthusiasm every time that you feel,as great or we said a mad perosn so the success i be comig in this point too becasue your accition is represent you feeling.

About the success that is consist if you going to failure to failure that the Forme British Prime Minister Churchill once said that that's meam if you main is great a or lower you need keep in your main that you going to do well and you need to be strong like one example,that if you think that you not do well you need stay attention that what thing is going to happen in the moment that success is be great or you can faiure too right but ist no mean that you stay with you head dowm right so, basic the Forme British Minister Winston Churchiil said about you think is that you success is not be right o can we said like bed so its mean that you going to failure, if without loss all your enthusiasm so i will said that all success is coming from all that you think and its basic too accion that you well do. Success is basic in what is going to happen bewteen that person accion so its mean that the person and their success it play one paper that you don't or i going to explain as never give up to other thing that just come to all your succes that was some reason you think that your enthusiams is going dowm so its one of importat point that need to show.

The statement about how is such importnat to role that failure plays in pursuit or success is the is that some activity are like pursuit is a important role because failure plays with success its basic that depents some activities that you can do is coming from pursuit right then usually you can see how success is work is basic a important role in this stament because success are principal thinks that each person show when they act then after they actuation so the consists is coming that which its mean that you can failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm i well said thay i am gree with Former British Minister winston Churchill Because the succes is part the us right as i said you need stay as much attetion because enthusiams is be coming that what should that you success is going to be great or youn can lost too in the moment is coming the accion for something that you well do like to said you acction represents off thing that wiil you doing right so is a important role that we can see and each person how pursuit work bewteen the consists like as person can be result, for each statement.

Once he said ""The success consists of going from failure to failure right but without loss of enthusiasm"",

My oponion about the all this success is basic on Prime Minister Winston Churchill that he once said the success consists if you loss your enthusiasm i think he was exactly what he said about in persuit of success because the enthusiasm consist and how you going to be when you do something that you need to do right so you need to ge a great enthusiam for do it as well rifht if you do not do well its mean that your enthusiasm is what is success is passed from you was a one's of statement about the important role consist. well its important because this i well happen for each person so about the definition the this argument is basic is that success can be big statement as depents for us if we are ready to use or breain and about it consists is basic if you let the is will going from failure and you will loss the enthusiasm so, some time the the person is feel well so its meam how the person can reaction so is the enthusiasm is work then the person show as then can feeling.     ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
D62F970B0DAE,"Did you know that teachers work with one of the best culture of the entire world? Teachers work with smart and beautiful students who want to have a bright future. Students argue about having afterschool programs because is bored. I'll rather have afterschool programs because is a better way to improve your skills, is easier to do your homework, and it helps students with special disabilities.

One reason why I'll rather have afterschools program is because it improves your skills more than you could ever had. Afterschool programs are reasons why students have been growing a lot this past years. I had a friend call Generic_Name who had really bad grades, he sign up in a afterschool program and in a few weeks, he already had almost all A's. In transition, this is one reason why I'll rather have afterschool programs.

Another reason why I like afterschool programs is because is a easier and faster way to do your homework. I'll rather do my homework afterschool because they can help me and I could have more free time at home to do whatever I want. Homework is good to improve your grades specially if they count as a quiz grade, because quiz grades count as thirty percent of your grade! Furthermore, There's one more reason why i'll rather have afterschool programs than having nothing.

Last but not least, A reason why a like having afterschool programs is because it helps special students who have disabilities. Special students are the same as regular students, but people say that students who have problems or disabilities count as ""Special childs."" My brother had difficulties with his reading because he didn't know how to read that much, he went to a special class and he had improve his reading skills over the past ten years. Moreover, This is my last reason why i'll rather have afterschool programs.

This is all of my reasons why I'll rather have special and afterschool programs than not having nothing to do afterschool. My favorite one is that is easier to do your homework because you will have more free time at home. To get in a program, all you have to do is ask for that program's sign up paper and sign it. If you need a fun program in the whole city of Generic_City, NextUp is the best one you could find.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
4E7DD441DAC8,"I beliece that high school students, shouldn't and should commit to just one career. My first reason that they shouldn't is that the students can change want to do as a career. My first reason why that thwy should is that this we don't need to go colloge if we are studying the class in high school. My other reason we should is that it good to now about that career you want to do in the future. For an example like JROTC is an amzing thing it shows about how militray life is going to be if go throw that path. A other example is AOL it shows a care you want to learn about like becoming a firefighter and more like that. A other great expame is a career for a day. So those are great explames to help students unstand that career more in deafeth. My other reason why we shouldn't is that this high school we are speacking about we don't have to chose just one career and stick with it. But lastly it's your chose go to a school that does makes you do that or not do that!",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
EC047D97041F,"I believe and agree with self-esteem comes from achievement because i've learned this from experience .The people who believe in the students must be self-confident in order to learn statement really didnt think this through when they agreed to that . self-confidence really cant really be used or proved to learn better . Achieving anything like a win in a sport or something positive you get at the end can boost your self-esteem. achieving something or having a positive outcome after doing something can really make students think twice on how they shouldnt give on things and also boosting self-confidence too but just mostly self-esteem. I really have no idea what i'm doing or writing neither not knowing what self-esteem is all i know its something to do with your thoughts or emotions. I only typed in what i know and what I think is the best response to this stupid prompt that made me stress out more and waste my time doing nothing and only sit here and think what can I type that makes sense that closely answers the prompt and really all I did wastype and give it a statement and repeated with different words , I already know Im going to fail this wellI atleast tried and put in effort . In my conclusion achievements are the best way ,for motivating people to keep going and never give up and somehow in some way relate to self-esteem.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
17D51D57629D,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people agree with this statement. In my opinion, first impressions are always wrong, and they are possible to change. I have several reasons for my opinion.

The first reason why I dissagree with this statement is because we can not judge on other people from the first sight. Meeting someone and talking to them dose not mean that you know them yet. Some people treat others with different way. For example, if you are close to me and we know each other for long time, I will treat you different than a person who I just met.

The second reason why I dissagree with this statment is because we do not know what other people going through. If you met a person for the first time and this person was rude or aggressive, there should be a reason for this behaviour. Maybe the person had a bad day or perhaps he is going through rough situations. You should think about what you are going to do if you were in the same position. That is why I dissagree with the statement.

In conclusion, I'm against the statement that says the first impressions are almost impossible to change because we should know the person well before we think about any impression. In addition, everything could change and nothing stays the same.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
F5EA98F42452,"Have you ever dreamed of visiting a place you wanted to visit for a long time? A place famous for it's culture, traditions, food, advanced cities, etc. Well, Japan is a place which is famous for most of the things I have mentioned.

I want to visit Japan because it's a place famous for their culture, tradition, advanced cities, technology and food. Japan is a place where all animes are created. Their famous food ""Sushi"" is also an reason for me to visit Japan. This food is liked by many people all over the world.

Once I reach there, I will explore all the major cities, eat their famous dishes and watch the anime which is famous over there. I will also try to learn Japanese and understand their tradition and culture. Another reason why I want to visit is because, Japan ranks at Top 10 for having low crime rates in the world and Japan ranks Top 5 for being a busiest country in the world.

I've seen many YouTubers making video of their stay in Japan and how they enjoyed staying there. Those videos are an another reason for me to visit Japan. I also want to enjoy those amazing moments like they did.

Japan is the country where I would like to visit because of their culture, technology, busiest cities, food and all the other videos which makes me to visit there. Another reason for me to visit Japan is because Japan is at Top 10 for having lowest crime rates in the world. and Japan has also been ranked at Top 5 for being busiest country in the world. Once I reach there, I will eat their famous dishes, explore the major cities, meet many people and watch animes.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,5.0
F5B510BCCA2D,"Enjoyable activity is a good thing when it comes to being yourself and having fun. Enjoyable activities can be sports and ban.

Sports is enjoyable activity because athletes use sports as a excuses to get good grades, so they wont have to tell there friends that they are really smart. They do this because they dont want there friends to call them a nerd or what not. Sports can be a fun thing to some people, but others use that to show there smartness without getting laughed at. They can also, use sports to prove to there parents that they are worthy. Sports can be used in a fun way too. Such as, going out on the court or the field, just being yourself, and acting a fool.

Another joy able activity is band. Band can be a enjoyable activity by showing who you really are through music. Music is always a big part of somebody or something. The reason why is they can express them selfs through music. Some examples can be, when your trying to explain yourself to somebody, you can do that by using music. Such as, find a song that you think tells people of you the most and tell them if you want to get to know me listen to this song.

In closing, enjoyable activities can be fun and hard sometimes but u have to stick with it and pass through that. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
08683001D359,"Yes you should learn wisdom and experience to understand.

To learn people what thier life about. people could have a hard time about thier life. understand thier race. Know people religen and culture. people could be specal. The people will learn about deaf people. people can unferstand about the life kinda. people can be specal like thier brain and their body. Sometimes people have bad things in thier brain. You can understaed about them. Some kids use differet lageged. Some people don't know engesh. people can use thier hands to talk. People can be shy , chill , crazey or mean. You really need to know about feeling. Sometimes people don't know what's going on.

My big brother name Generic_Name share a lot about his wisdom. He told me that he is getting stronger. I told him how and how do you know. He told me that there has a job that you really need to carry heving stuff. That he knows that. I learn eveything what he said. My borther was kinda crazey when he said that. Sometimes my big brother is not chill. 5 mouths ago my big brother was so mean to me for no reason. I told him why what wroug with you. He told me why and I understand him. Today my bif brother is now chill I think because I don't really see him that much. My big brother is always busy and I wanted to help him. How do I help him. I clean the room many times. I do the socks and clean the dirty clothes and get the room ready for him , so he can relax. My famliy is really happy what I did for my big bother. They say why did you do that. I told them because Generic_Name worked really hard he is never home. He plays soccer , goes to work and goes to clases to get ready for collage that is a big thing for him.

My big brother tells me some things to keep me heathy and lose some whight. he said that happend to me. He share a lot of things to me. He said you got this I belive in you. I thought my big brother don't care about me because he always mean to me and I see why, he do care about me and I can see that. you will understand about thier wisdom and experience. if you learn about wisdom and experience. ",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
113B1543C433,"If School programs offer

Student to graduate early instead of waiting the four year to graduate. Graduating a year earlier would be a great thing for student to do because there are people who are trying to manage work and school but it's difficult for some people because they can't do both, If they work and they come late after work and the next morning they wake up tired from work that they are tired to go to school and it makes it difficult to go to work and then go to school.

A reason why I feel students should graduate early is because if they graduate early they can go to college, and if college allows them to choose their hours they can decide on what time they can go to college or the days.

It could also depend on what you want to do career wise.

If they allow that you can work and go to college and it would make it easier for you and you won't feel tired after college to go to work.

For example,My mom graduated early and she was able to work and and go to college as well.

Another reason is that if you go to high school and work its difficult because you have to worry about school and work, sometimes thats a problem because when you come late from work and in the morning when you have to go into school your tired and you dont wanna go to school and your tired and you can't concentrate in school but I feel like when your in college you can choose your time and date and it makes it easier for you.

For Example, I have a friend who works and goes to school to and he tells me its difficult for him to manage school and work and sometimes hes even tired to go to school. Even when hes at school hes tired and can't do any of his work because hes tired and its hard for him to concentrate.

The last reason is if people were to graduate a year earlier from high school. They can also go to college and depending on on what they want in their career, they could also graduate college early and start you career early

For Example, My Uncle graduated High school earlier and he also graduated college which made it easier for him to start his own business and it really helped him out in life and hes really happy because he graduated early.

If you choose to graduate and do classes in the summer you would feel accomplished and you would feel relief you wont have to be there for 4 years and only 3 years.

If you finish early you can have time for work and college and also you get start your career early and you would feel happy with what you have accomplished. ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
98DE8992E379,"I'm agree because your first impression it will be the one that represent who you are and it will show your personality, and the people will judge you becauseyour aparience and your actitude, for example, when i was looking for a jod at chipotles restaurant for the first time, they where looking at me strange like i was a bad person or a criminal.

The next day i went to popeye's restaurant with different type of clothes, and they didn't look at me in a strange way, and that was because i was dressing properly, and because my friend tell me to dress better because in the first time when i went to chipotle i was dressing as a bad guy and that make me look inapropiate and i did get the job.

After that i went to chipotle restaruant just for fun to prove if my friend was right and he was, the people from chipotle didn't look at me in a strange way as the first time, i think it's because they didn't remember me but when the manager comes he said, ""hoo hellow you're back,"" then he leave.

The manager was the only person who remembers me and he did not change his opinion about me, i didn't care because by that time i did get the job at popeyes so i decide to leave out of there.

In conclution that day i learn that the first impresion metter and it could affect in your life.",3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5
2BFB0A8F50E1,"Once there was a girl named Generic_Name. She was a great student, always doing her homework, and studies hard. Generic_Name was a negative person, she never aims high on any of her exams because she always have a feeling that she will never pass. At the end of the month Generic_Name get her results back and she passes all her exams. Likewise, the great artist Michelangelo once said, ""The greater danger for most of us lies no in setting out aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" Some people prefer to aim low and achieve more, while other people prefer to achieve high and achieve more. The greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low and achieving our mark because people should be positive, have goals, and believe in themselves.

The greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low and achieving our mark because people should be positive. In my life I hate staring new things, whenever I start something new I always think negative and I will not achieve it. At the end, I always achieve what I had started. When I started to think positive on what I am doing, I always end up happy for what I aimed for and achieved. People should be more positive on what they're aiming for. When people start to think positive they will feel very sure and confident of what they're aiming for. For this reason, people should not aim too low.

Also, the greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low and achieving our mark because people should have a goal on what they're aiming for. A psychology study have been done on people to test if goals work. The scientist that did the study explained why everyone should have goals, and how having a goal could lead to one do a lot of things. The scientist also explain that a goal is the purpose toward which effort is directed. Having goals to aim for something too high should lead one to achieve a lot of things. For this reason, people should have goals and aim high not low.

Additionally, the greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low and achieving our mark because people should believe in themselves. In the TV show The Good Doctor, the main character Doctor Generic_Name had a surgery and there was only 20% chance that the patient will die. Generic_Name was a great doctor, but he didn't believe that he could do it. Until the patient was about to die, so Generic_Name had to do the surgery for the patient to live. The surgery went very well, and the patient went home healthy. The main character in this TV show didn't believe that he could do the surgery, and when he had to do the surgery it went well. Likewise, people should aim high and believe in themselves more to achieve what they aimed for. For this reason, people should believe in themselves more.

If people aim too low and achieve their mark, then it's dangerous than aiming too high and falling short. As the great artist Michelangelo once said, ""The greater danger for most of us lies no in setting out aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."" The greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low and achieving out mark because people should be more positive on what they are doing, have steps to achieve their goals, and believe more in themselves. Thus, setting our aim too low and achieving our mark is dangerous. ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
F53B14C7F455,"One topic that people debate a lot is that students expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think is not a good idea for a student to commit to a career at a young age. because students are not old enough they careless and not make the best decision when they at a young age.

One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because, students are not old enough to know what they career in specific. they not prepared for the world students in high school don't have any experience of any career.

I think is a little to early. I will explore all type of career when my senior junior year starts I would make sure to select the right courses and the better one to be prepared or have experience for your career.

One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because sometimes teenagers are careless something may go wrong with your life or you just wanna do something new. all those classes that I selected from freshman year are not gonna be worth it because you gonna have to take new classes. for example my friend selected a technology class in freshman year, and he search it up how much they make in a year and that was not what he expected. so he change to materials and process to learn how to cut, and built houses.

One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because, when you are in a young are you make the wrong decision well sometimes but I think the best decision for me during high school is to to wait and study the better classes and the best and better career. and to be able to do that you have to care about classes and be responsible with school and career.

As you read you can see the reasons,I think the best idea for students is to focus in high school and get good grades when you get to senior year or college, you know more about life and careers I think that would be the best time to selected the best classes that are gonna guide you toward a specific career.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
EF6B8CD5EDE9,"to be active

According to Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""determine never to be idle. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, because we have more activities, get more possibilities to be someone in the life, and develop our mind.

My first reason is we have more activities help our body to be active ,and health for example when we play some games like, soccer, baseball, track, our body imediatilly is activated, because we need to be active and that helps that our body can be healthy, and that prevent some diseases because if our body is inactive we can feeling,sad and stress. My second example is, when I went to field trip, I was happy ,because I went to some place where I can distracted and relax with the nature, and that help me because doing activities that maintain the body active and it is more helpful for our mind.

My second reason is get more possibilities to be someone in the life,for example, we can always pay attention in the classes,and concentrate, we need to be more active the mind because that help learn more and that too help in the future. My second example is, last year wanted to pass my grade, I needed to be active in my classes and had better scores in all my classes and do my homework, so I can pass my classes because I was active and all my classes and homework, and I put attention all that the teacher said me during the class.

Some people think to be active is not help in the life, and idles is more better than active because, people said to be active people can get transtorn in the mind. But they are incorrect because, development our mind for example, sometimes we can feel depress we don't want to do nothing, our mind is develop each day about the activities, works, and other things what do each day, and that help to our mind be more active.

In conclusion, to be active people can do more activities, get more possibilities to be someone in the life, and develop our mind each day, to be active one of the most important things because that help to our body and, our knowledge that we have and we need.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
8CDBA4104C7E,"Identifying a career in high school helps students prepare for their future. In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Committing to a career as a young age it's a good idea.

First of all, identifying a career in high school help students to achieve their goals a little earlier. For example, if they start to study and be familiar with a specific career, they can graduate early. Meaning they might not have to spend 4 years in college, as everyone else. They can probably graduate from college after 1-2 years of studying for their particular career. Since they already going to have the knowledge from the courses of high school.

Another example is, students can start to take their future in a mature and serious way. For example, those courses can help motivate students about wanting to have a better future. Meaning they can change their thoughts about not wanting to study for a career. And that they're the ones responsible for their own things. It can teach them that having a career is that important thing that it's going to take them somwhere in life.

While some people think this is a good idea, some might not. Some people think that this is a waste of time. For example, students are going to have more things to worry about. Like studying more and passing extra classes. And this can cause for students to be mentally and physically tired. So they these people rather wait until college.

However, waiting until college can be a little late because students aren't going to have enough time to think about a partcular career they want. For example, once students are out to college, they need to have the career they're going to study for. And if they don't, they could pick one that they aren't really passionate about. Which causes more years in college, or them dropping out of college. And this can cause not having a great job, or future.

To conlcude, committing to a career as a young age is a good idea. It's a good thing for students to do it because it can help them to prepare for their future. Committing as a young age help them to achieve their goals a little earlier, which is amazing. It can help them to know what to expect when they go to college. Committing as a young age for a career can help students in so many ways, and these are examples in the ways it can help. ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
0C699C871AA5,"Students will not be benefited if they attend classes from home by online or video conferencing because then they will not concentrate much on studies and will take studies lightly. Students could be benefited if they attend classes by coming to school so that they can be attentive in class and will be able to clear their doubts.

Students will not be benefited if they attend classes from home by online or video conferencing because then they will not concentrate much on studies and which will lead to bad grades. They will not be having test and quizzes often. They might become lazy and start copying each other work. If they do not attend school, then there will be less chances of students doing work sincerely at home. They will not be able to get proper education at home and there will be less communication with students and teachers. If there will be less communication then they will not be able to get more open with others. There will be no group work so that students can share their ideas regarding studies. They might start taking breaks often. There will be no routine for students for studying at home. They will not be able to concentrate much working at home due to lot of distractions like T.V, movies, videos games, text ting etc. If you will not get a better education you might not be able to sussed in life. The more you have the education then there are more chances of getting a bright future. The proper education you can get is by going to school. If you will attend school, then you can correct your mistakes and learn from them. If you will stay at home you won't know what are you doing correct and what you are doing wrong.

How much you learn and read more the better because learning and reading takes you around the world. Teachers should also watch every student more carefully because if a student is doing something wrong then teachers can help them and make sure they go in the correct way. Parents should also keep an eye on their student that how they are doing because if they are not then parents can also guide them.

So, I conclude by saying that it is better for every student to get education at school instead of getting at home.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
9E40BFCC6F62,"I agree with the idea of after school homework club,because by actually coming to a after school homework club it can help you get better at the class you need help. We know some students don't like doing their homework and that's why they don't get good grades.

All we want to do is help them get better at school so they can be something in life,school it's important for learning and a after school homework club can help then. It doesn't matter if you get your answer wrong you learn from your mistakes by practicing you get better at it.

And by coming after school to finish your homework is great because you have time to do other activities after you finish your homework. Doing your homework is gonna help you be someone in the future. Homework helps you raise your grades up. An a after school club is going to help you a lot we all want kids to be good at school. I know some students think the homework is a waste of time but no it's gonna help you anytime in life. We should have a after school home work club it's better for our school and students all we want is their best in school.

But it's their choice to come after school to finish their homework I know we want the best for them but it's their choice we can't make them come. A lot of student are failing school because they don't do their homework you just have to try it homework helps a lot like in math,science,social studies and reading class being good at every class is going to help you in college. We need after school homework clubs in our school, every school should have after school clubs it's for the best for every school we all need them after school homework clubs.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
E4C49D70C330,"What would happen if the school menu is change? Most of the kid will be upset because the menu have all the delicious food they like. This does not mean this food is healthy.

United States is consider the country were more fast food is distributed and consumed, and also where more people die because of their high cholesterol.

Now a days with all the technologies advantages people is doing less exercise and moving less , for example: We use the car to go everywhere so we walk less ; we do not even need to walk to talk to a person , we can just send them a text ; even to see the weather outside we do not need to stand up ,we can just check the weather in our phone; we have got to a point where if we are to lazy to go to the cinema we can just stay home and watch Netflix,Hulu, Disney or any phone app.

All this is great but at the same time is making lazy people more lazy and more fat , witch is causing more medical problems; like hart attacks , high cholesterol.

In a future if we do not change anything this it will get worse.

A way of helping the future kids like the students from this school would be by teaching them that there is more than fast food , that there is also healthy food that can taste awesome and some even better than the unhealthy food, for example: avocado, fruit juice ,Cesar salad, fish,etc. That all this types of food can create a balance between eating what your body need to work correctly , and what it want to eat.

One way of showing them other variety of food , is by the school menu. The menu could contain food that the kids have never taste before , and that could have less fat than a pizza.

This way when they get older they will not only look for , hamburgers , Chinese food or chicken wings. They will know there are more options that could help them with their body.

And if we do not teach them this habit right now it will be a lot more hard to get them in the healthy habit in the future.

In my opinion considering being part of the school community and thinking about my future and my classmates

I think that including a more healthy menu in the school cafeteria would be one of the best ideas for everyone. We do not want to have any medical problems because of the food we eat.

Thank you for your attention.",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.5
FA314E23647E,"One of the most famous quote of winston churchil is, "" success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". some people think they should no loss enthusiasm, because if they failure without loss enthusiasm one day they can be success this is like, if i failure i dont want to give up i need to have enthusiasm to keep going. I believe they should never loss enthusiasm, because one day they can be success,learn how to no give up, and that can help you with your goals.

First, i should no loss enthusiasm, because all people have failure, but if you never loss enthusiasm one day you can be success in my life i had failure,but i never give up, becuase i know one day i going to became something better. when i come to united state was hard for me for the lenguage, and learn different things, but the most difficulty in high school was to learn english, but i never loss my entthusiasm, and now i'm about to see everthing that i have done, becuase this year is my graduation.

Second reason, is the people can learn how to no give up, becuase if you have failure thas how you learn that you need enthusiasm to keep going everyone would have failure in their life,but as i'm telling you keep going one day you would see why you have try hard,but you always have to failure first, and then you learn have to no loss your enthusiasm.

The final reason is, that can help you olot in the future with your goals, and you can be success in my oppinion people dont like to failure, and they give up. I telling you that sometime i give up,because life is hard you can failure and give up, but never loss your enthusiasm, becuase that is the most important thing to be success, and that can help you with your goals. You have to has the enthusiasm to be something better, and make good choices

As you have read you see that this is important, some people thing that they can not do it, but everyone can do it you always need to have enthusiasm for everythings to be success i agree becuase thats how my life go, but i always have enthusiasm to be success this is very important, becuase this can hel you in the future to be something better never give up becuase things better are about to come.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
DBDBF971510B,"It is often said that you can not make a child, teenager, or adult do what they do not want to do. Imagine starting a new school year; students are ready to learn, to take classes they will really enjoy, and to see their friends. It comes time to pick up their schedule and they see that there is some classes that they really would not like to take but those classes are required for them to take. A students starts stressing because there is no way they can change their schedule since those classes are required. I believe students should not be required to take a music class, art class, or drama class because it would not only affect them but it would also affect their grades and their future, students would skip the class; making their attendance bad, and students might show up to the class but they would not put in the effort they need in order to recieve the credit.

In many cases, students who do not like the classes they are taking will not do the work in order to get a good grade. Having good grades is what makes your GPA great. We all know that having good grades and keeping a good GPA is very important when it comes to college and universities. Students will need to attend a college or a university in order to get a good paying job. By requiring students to take these classes, you are forcing them to learn something they do not need in the future or that will not fall in their career field. For example, a student might want to work at a fast food restuarant in the future but in high school this students was required to take a class that has nothing to do with it. How would taking a music class help this student achieve their goal of working at a fast food restuarant? Many people may argue that taking an art class should be required because it opens the mind on being creative but again what does an art class have to do with what a student wants to be in the future? Unless that students wants to be an artist of course.

Secondly, if you force a student to take a class they do not want to take, they would just skip the class or just won't show up that whole school day. Having good attendance is also very important to have because if students do not have good attendance they get put on an attendance chart. An attendance chart is a chart where students have to sign in at the time they got to a class and sign out at the time they left that class. If a students keeps skipping the class they do not like, their grades get worse because they are not recieving the work they need to due to skipping class and their attendance keeps worsening which will only get them into bigger trouble. For instance, where I live if a student does not show up to school for more than fifteen days they get put into a juvenile detention center. Requiring such classes that should be electives will not motive a student to come to school because they are really not learning anything important from those classes.

Lastly, every high school student knows that they need a certain amount of credits in order to graduate. In order to recieve those credits a students grades, GPA, and attendance must be excellent. Requiring such classes that should be electives will not motivate a student to get good grades, good GPA, or good attendance. If anything making these classes required will only make these students less motivated into coming to school and earning those high school credits.

In conclusion, forcing or requiring students to take these classes that should be electives would affect them mentally. It would affect them mentally because they might not be as good as the other people in that class. Students should not be required to take such classes like art, music, or drama; those classes should stay as electives. Helping every student learn new material, graduate, and get them into college should be our main focus instead of making them take classes they do not need to. ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,3.5
642E44E8DD25,"I would like to visit a engineering work place, or company. I would like to learn all about planning how do build something, and to they come up with good building ideas. What is the most hard part that a engineer has to take very series?.

If i was able do visit one of these companies i would get very happy. My mom told me that this is a good job, but it's a risk that people that want to have this job have to take in order do get pay very well. One of my teacher in Generic_School his dad was a engineer he told me that his dad didn't like math because it was to hard, but he got a job in the engineering company and he good checks. This teacher that i'm talking about didn't like science, or math and at the end he ended up teaching math, and science he is very good at it, and a very nice teacher too. I think all of this that i talked about is teaching me that i need to have good grades in my prealgebra class.

Engineering for me is easy do say, but i wanna experience does hard problems. On Saturdays and Sundays i work with my dad. My dads lets me cut the grass and it not easy, he keeps telling me to get good grades, so i don't have be like him all day in those hot days. I guess that working all day in a very hot summer is not food. My dad taught me that working under the sun is very hard a it makes your back hurt he told me that i need to be better them him. When i'm older i would get a good job, and i would help my dad, and my mom even dough they told me that when get older they are going to go back to El Salvador , but i'm still going to help them.

I think that i would give engineering a chance if not i'm going to find another job. thats ones of my job, or company i would like to visit if it was close to my school. Another company, or job would be frying airplanes i is good job i o ways wanted to fly one, but its do hard plus i don't think i'm going to go to college i think that this jobs are just to hard for me to learn especially me it take a long time for me to remember something. I think i can make it if only i put mu effort on it. My teachers tell me that i'm smart only when i want to, they o ways tell me to give it a try and i o ways ended up learning it sometimes i think that teachers sometimes understand students and hoe they feel. I get mad when don't understand something. i haven't done good in 7, and 8th grade. I think that all of these happen because i made new friends. I think that flying airplanes is much harder then learning engineering, but the only thing i need to do if put my effort in everything

I think that is not a bad idea do have some company around schools they should make field trips, kids could ask question that they would like to ask. This essay made me think more about what job would i like to do in the future. I think that i would stay with the engineering job i would like to put all my thoughts in to it and get a good college degrees, and get the job that i dream off. I think that my dream wold come true, and if it does or doesn't well i guess i would learn another thing i pay to go to college and get that job. i will try to make all my family happy and help all of them. I'm really good in everything if i only put my mind into it.

My name is Genric_Name, and i came to America to get a better future, and to all my SOL thank you for reading my essay.                                                                                                                                              ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
B23BDDB4B5FA,"Community Service??

Dear principle,

I would like to help in the community service group. I think it is very important for us as student's to help in the community service. It is important because we need to show that we care for our community and world. Some people say that it is a waist of time to be helping the community and the world they think that that's why their are people to work and take the trash out and stuff like that. But we cant leave other people that work all day and all week when they are tiered and want to rest to be picking our left overs!! Some people are eating at the park, mall, store, etc. and they think that when they are eating they could just through their rappers and some food on the ground and not pick it up they live it their so others can pick it up for them and i think that is WRONG!!! The people that have food, drinks, etc. and are eating any were they should throw their trash in the trash can's when they are done eating their food. And i think if we pass by trash being in the floor we should pick it up because to be honest i don't think another person would pick it up but they should. We don't want our community/world to be dirty and stinky with trash all over the place. We want our world to be clean and with nice fresh air that we could breathe with NO problem. That's why i want to join in the community service group to help our community /world be a better place for other people and us even if others don't want to help but i think that every one should be in the community service group and help the community. Well this is what i think dear principle and i hope you like my letter!!!

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAME",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
25518B329285,"The school board is planning to add one and a half hour to school each day. I think they should add one and a half hour to school each day because than class would be more longer, we would have to do more homework, and some students have things to do after school everyday.

I disagree that the school board should add one and a half hour to school each day because class would be more longer. If schools board add one and a half hour to school each day every class would be more longer. For example my civics class is two hours if they add one and a half hour than my civics class would be two and a half hour. If class was longer teachers would have to work more. They would have to work more because than they have to make more projects and grade more papers that each student turns in. Students would have to work harder then what they usually do because they would get more work because the class is longer.

Secondly I disagree because if school board adds one and a half hour to school each day then we would get more homework. students would have to do more homework since class is longer that would get more projects and some students don't get to finish their work in class so they have to do it for homework. They would get in trouble if they don't finish their homework. some students don't get to finish their homework because they have to do more work for another class.

Lastly, I disagree that the school board should add one and a half hour to school each day because when students get out of class they have to do things or go somewhere. Students have to take care of their siblings. Some students when they get out school have to take care of their brothers and sisters because their parents have to go somewhere or they have to do some work. Some kids practice sports in the afternoon for example soccer, basketball , etc. When I get out of school I have to go to soccer practice at 4:30 pm ,so before going to practice I have to do my homework and sometimes I don't get to finish then until I come back from practice. Sometimes I do get in trouble with my teachers because I didn't finish my homework. Some students have to go visit their family because maybe that are going to a party that they are making or they are sick and you have to go see how they are. Sometimes my mom waits for me until I get out of school to go visit our family. Some of then have to clean their room, wash the dishes, and take the trash out.

I still think that they shouldn't add one and a half hour to school each day because each would longer, get more homework, and do after school activities. Do you agree or disagree with my reasons?",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
34AC1808D15A,"Some school districts offer programs that allow high school student to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years.

student who follow this plan must take courses during the summer or in the evening.

Is it a good idea for student to finish high school early?

I believe that is not a good idea for a student to finish high school in three year. The reason for this is because they might have a change of heart in what they want to be. Also having four year of high school gives them time to see if they really made a good choices on their career. Also ""will they go along with take courses during the summer?""

when it time to have fun,relax and enjoy the hot nice weather with family and friends. These are one of the reason that its not good idea.

Another way to look at this is to find out if there going to stick with the career they pick.

For example, when pick a job everyone look for better pay and benefits to see if the best fit for them . For a student it is totally different because they are look for better pay instead of look for a fitting job they will like an enjoy and stay at . Instead they look at a job that didn't suit them, then just quit looking and jumping from job to job.

Therefore i find it best if student take there time and complete all four year of high school so that they see what they like to do and complete all their goals and achievements.

Another subject is that entering college and the work force one year early is stressful with a lot of responsibility.

There no time to be acting out. Taking your time in high school isn't so bad there not as much stress, as in going off to college because of the expenses there will be.

entering college one year early is stressful there many reason. one of these reason is there no time to slack off its all about studying and getting everything done. where in high school you time to turn thing in later if there not fully completed.

As you see there a big different in the two, think about the choices before making a quick one.

In conclusion having four years of high school let them have time to figure out what they want to after they leave to see what they become. There no rush there time, to see what they want to be and what their going to do. There many goals that can be achieve also thing to get better on. Once you leave high school it time to response able for these reason i think it best to do all four year because there no rush on see who you want to be.      ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
DE54A8F9C29C,"Should students be required to take a class in the arts and should those classes even be a elective? I believe students should have a choose in what they take while in school. Most students when they are not interested in something will most likely not do good in that subject. If you put students in those classes when they dont want to take then the pass rate may drop in those classes. The music, drama, and art class should stay as electives for students that enjoy those classes. I do see how those classes can help a students with some aspects on life but if they dont want to be in that elective then they wont be as involved as everyone else. School is meant for learning and not just putting students in a class they dont like, it's not a good way to teach students. If the student have a choose in what they take, then will students find it interesting and will want to learn more. The classes students choose to take should help them get ready for there future career. I am opposed to having classes in the arts as a required class but I do believe they should stay as electives.

Since I am still a student myself, I know what it is like to be put in a class that I do not finding interesting. I do not feel as if the school should have the right to choose our required electives. Student should have a choose in what class they want because it appeals to them and it's something they actually want to take. If a student choose that class they then choose it for a reason. Thats why if a student gets something they dont like, they are no going to be as engaged in that class and not learn that much as well. A student should have a right not to take the classes in the arts and schools should not make it a required class neither. If school makes those classes required then the pass rate is going to drop and students will not want to attend school as much because they are failing a class they don't even like.

The schools should keep those classes as electives and not as core classes. There are plenty of students that enjoy taking those classes and that do really good in them as well. The classes in the arts are great classes to have a option to take while in school, it opens so many doors for students that want to make a career out of those classes. I'm sure some students learn a lot of life lessons while taking those classes and has helped them in some way. I believe you can learn a lot of skills in those classes as long as your engaged in them and actually like the classes. School should keep music, drama, and art class as electives so the people that want to take it can.

The classes students take should help them in there future career. If a student want to take a class that he want to work in as a career, they shouldn't be rejected to take it because the classes in the arts are required to take.

For example, if a student whats to become a construction work, then I do not see how taking a music class is going to help that student reach his goal to be in that career. The things students do now while in school can change there lives just by simply making them take a class they dont like. There are a wide range of classes students can take that will better prepare for when they leave school. The classes students take now will help them but if schools make the students take something they dont want to take then will it possible ruin them. Thats why students shouldn not be required to take the classes in the arts and choose in what they want to take.

I don't believe schools should me the classes of the arts so be required to take. But I do believe they should stay as electives in the school. Students should be able to choose what they take in school and they should take something that is appealing to them. The classes to have benefits to some of the students and is a great elective class to have. The students should be able to pick a class that is going to help them in there future career and also get a aspect in what they are getting into. In conclusion, the class in the arts classes are a important role in the students experience but manly to the student that enjoy taking those classes.",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
EDA3FF6D2DCA,"This is true for me ""example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing."". If you talk someone for one thing, information, film, music, game, ... Best support for your idea is examples. I think is the only thing for support your idea. You don't have other options But never mind you have a one more way for influence others everybody know this way because is the best way of everything it is the money.

Once upon a time me and my friend talking about one film (i did not remember the film name know.) we are saying only examples (because we know is the best way for support our ideas) he is saying one example i am saying another and we are talking like a 30 or 35 min finally i gave up and i said if you accept my idea i will buy a large size pizza and he said OK.

After for this conversation i learned example and money is not the main thing influencing others; it is the only thing

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C4A5B0BAEB44,"In my Driver Ed class there was a boy who would always make natsy or rude jokes, fight or bully people, and disrepect teachers for no reason. He's known as a jerk and self-center person in school. When he's alone in class he's a quite and nice person to be around. One day another classmate of mine told me that she saw him having dinner with his family at a restaurant and wasn't acting out. One time I saw him help a old lady at the family food market at school;carry her grocery bags for her. First impression can change because people actions speak louder than words, your just getting to know someone, and you think know someone better than anyone else.

Actions speak louder than words because you may think you may know someone by what they say to you,but their actions their are as important as well. For example colleges are not only looking at your grades but they also look into what clubs you join. Because colleges want to find interesting people to recruit. Our president is also a prime example because he kept on saying ""Let's build a wall."", and he did it. It shows what kind of person our president is. When people ask a upset or angry person ""Are you okay?"" the person always reply with ""I'm fine."". Even if there body language shows their not.

Your just getting to know someone,If your trying to get know a new student in school by you saying hi to them, but they don't say hi back. It doesn't make they a rude person once you try to talk to them. Just image being a new student; who move to a school that everyone knows eachother since they were kids. Its much worst for the students that don't speak english as their first language to make a very good impression as well. People who choose to get a pet have to get know your pet in order to know their pet's wants,habits, personality and needs, also their dislikes. If you want a loving relationship with your dog, cat or anyother pet. It all starts with getting to know them first and giving love to them.

Inclusion, first impressions can be change because people actions speak louder than words, your just getting to know someone,and you think you may know someone better than anyone else. Everday you meet new people and some leave powerful impressions or terriable impressions. Overall we're all humans and on one is prefect.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
2E8C8C439D36,"Should the school extend the school day two hours? It depend of the schools and the parents, if they approve the extending of the school days and also see if there is any benefits or disadvantages of this.

In my opinion it can be a disadvantage for some students, because some of the students have to work after the school and they will not have time for do the homework or projects or even their own free time, and that is why they don't have time for do it,but the most problem of this is; if the parents of the students are going to approve or not about this change to the school, because some of the parents take the education of their son or daughter so serious, and that can be one of the big problems to the schools.

But there is too benefits for students or some students only, because they are going to have more time in classes for learn more and also for do the projects in the classroom and not in their houses as homework.

Another benefit too is they can have for time for the activities in the school if that was as a class they have.

I will approve and disapprove, because there is so many disadvantages of this, but to the same time there is benefits too about this change of the school.

But in my opinion, I'll disapprove this change, because I'll don't have time to do my homework or have time for me.

And that is what I think about this change and the advantages and also the disadvantages.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
727DEC0706F0,"Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. Many people may not have experience and never but I'll be a great candidate to hire because I'm hard-working and I'm responsible.

I'm a great candidate that employers are looking for because I spend time volunteering at school and working with job owners as a helper. I take care of people kids and work as a school bookkeeper all school year. however, some people may think having more experience is better than being responsible, having experience help but having responsible help employers trust you more with important job. But I manged how many people check out book out of school and I clean the library some times. Later in the year i volunteer at a two company has a filer. I plan paper for employer because they know that I'm responsible to do the job and get done.

In addition, Im a hard-working person because I have a job and play sport but I my time to volunteer some time. I do a lot of work so I don't have to do anything later or the next day. I was a food stocker at my job but now I'm a manager. Because I work every day and put all my heart to complete my job every day. I never miss a day at work are late I come to work ready I check if every is done if not I do it before the store open and set plan for the day. I put one hundred percent in to everything I do in life to finish with my task. In fact, most people are lazy and don't want to do any work are complete any task there boss gave them, but a hard-worker will get the job done than a lazy person. But I may not have any experience but I'm hard-working and responsible to do my job on time and responsible to do important work for employers and other people that ask for help. Even though I don't have any experience, I'll be a good candidate to hire for the job.       ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
9FDD8A146288,i think it not good for students because it didn't help students learn and you have to do the work by self . I think that school is better because it teach you how to do the work and the teacher helps you on the work. online school is not good is because it didn't teach you and you might not know how to do the work for the class for online. you might ask people for help when you don't know how to do the work when your at school the teacher teach you how to do the work and gets you all the help you in class and and afer school too so you can get more help on the work and the missing work and wok and if you don't understand the lesson. you could ask your teacher for help and be ready for test and the sol. You will learn better in school then online school. School is better learn because the teacher are there for you if you need to talk to them or to get help in the work or to get more lesson and they give you a lot of time on work and give you time on the test and gets you ready for the sol. one examples that you get better learning in school and the teacher help you understand the work. second online school is tell you how to do the work and you have to find it out for yourself. ,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
E52ADC86DFFC,"Based on my experiences i would say that is not true because people always can change.

Im my opinion i think people say that because with the person that they are talking to or they are meeting does not show interest on them.

The first impression is not the best sometimes, but that it does not mean that it can not be changed. You can not classify or judge a person for their first impression because that person can change.

One reason why you do not have to say that first impression is almost impossible to change is because if the person that you are meeting is not having a good day that can affect the first impression because he/she is not going to be comfortable talking or having a conversation in that moment.

If i would have to give an example it would be the history of me and my best friend.

The first time when i met him was in my math class, He did not even wanted talk to me and be my partner, when i asked him about problems that i did not understand he ignored me and he did not answer.

To conclude If i would have to to take a position on this issue i would disagree, the reason why i would disagree is because in my circle of friends there is 2 of them that they did not give me a good impression and if you look at us today we are good friend and that is why you do not have to say that the first impression is literally impossible to change.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
2909EE180A2A,"Dear Principal,

I think it fair that kids who have a B average should choose a sport but kids how have F. Should not be able to choose a sport because then they worried more about there sport. Then about school or school work then they don't have time to do there homework. Then they might even fail the grade there in. But people who have a B should be able to choose a sport because there doing well in school. And not failing in school there tried hard so they should be able to choose a sport that they like. But if they start doing bad in school or not doing there homework and start to get an F they should talk to the student. And tell him/her if they have a sport and still have B average or in the next test they take and get an F. there going to have take away there sport till she /he has better grades.",2.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,2.5,3.0
C71E90669DFA,"Almost everyone in the world had a big problem in their life. Problem is not rare this days. However, if you think of it problems is not that bad as you think. Like what Duke Ellington said "" A problem is a chance for you to do your best"", and I agree on what he said. I have several reasons why I agree on Duke's statement. My reasons are that problem make us work/push harder, it creates/set our goals, and importantly it make you learn from your mistakes.

Problems make us work/push harder. Many buisnessman have many problems. But they work hard and hard because problems make us work harder. Like what the movie(Your My Boss) said ""A Good Buisness-man Need Problems To Do Better"". Problems make us to push harder. Its like we are the turtle in the race where the turtle and bunny/fox race. I compare it like that because the bunny/fox is like the problem we want to face it and end it.

My other reason is that problems create/set our goals. When a person have a problem of course their going to create/set a goal to complete. Like what happened to me when I was a kid. I never seen my brother since I was 3 years old. So, I created a goal that I want to see my brother again,and it did happen. Problems make us create goal to achieve. My brother and me are a great example of that. Problems are pushing to set a goal that we will create the opposite of problems. Problems set as goals that we would not do the same mistakes again.

Last but not the least, problems make us learn from our mistakes. Because before problems mistakes comes first. When I got a problem I always ask my self ""What did I do wrong?"". Then, when I know what's the reason I just dont do it again so no problems will be created. When you learned your mistakes and don't create another problem their where it proves that ""Problems make us learn from our mistakes"". Brain and feelings are created so we can't make the same mistakes as before. So we can prevent many similar problems in our life.

My reasons why I agree are that problem make us work/push harder, it creates/set our goals, and importantly it make you learn from your mistakes. All of these reasons are very important to know. So you can understand why problems are not bad as you think of. Problems make us push harder, create goals, and the most important part it make us learn from our mistakes. Problems are the reasons why the world is still together and not fighting. Problems make us go together and help each other. Humans are created to enjoy life and learn from problems to problems.",2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
EEE7731E8A57,First need to plan your work and need to be organized and have good details about what you need to read and need to wright. All what you have in your head just wright it all on paper first or then wh en your weighting your book or story you will have everything in copy and can read it to make sure its good. Like to best teachers told me Generic_Name and Generic_Name if you wright something on paper you will always be right or in the right path to do good on your book. Always need to wright your work what happens if you brake your computer but you have it on paper so your teacher can just grade your paper. Paper is the best way to get your work and plan it out because they are your opinions and computer it changes the words to what it wants to change it to. Next you need to be organized if your organized you can read your work fast and so can the teachers if your work is neater your can do it faster because you read it and if you don't have time to finish pages in your computer you can tarn the paper but not on the computer thing. Then if its organized you can use the same paper for next time but change some words or change the whole paper. you will need to do more work then just taring in the paper and not on the computer. Late you always need to be organized. After always finish you weighting dont leave it have way done just finish it to get done with the work you have to do because if you dont you will have to do way more work then what you have to get done just do your work on time. The end you will have to have everything done by the do date you have in school then you will do the rest of more work you have to get it done just do it.,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5
A9290F062546,"I believe, what Thomas Jefferson wrote about "" determine never to be elder ""

because we would never know how can we impact on someone life or in our life.

never say never , don't stop doing what you love, just because some people won't appreciated your work. Two example why no to stop doing you, you could make people happy, people could also learn how to become better on someone's life, and even you never give up, just do you and you will see the result at the end.

First of all, I'ts amazing how much may be done if you always doing something. Every minute, hours, seconds, and days is important, because we can do a lot in like 10 min. Stop thinking to much don't wasted. I always like to keep my self busy. Specially if is about soccer. Take care of your self, your body needs energy, fun things to do, so that way you and your brain don't feel irritating. Personally, like 10 years ago my cousin die because he's girlfriend didn't want to with him, for the fact that he only thing he could do was using drugs and nothing appropriated., we found him on a tree.

In addition, this is why don't stop doing something. Who knows probably a girl/ guy could fall in love with you, or you could also make people feel strong for whatever situation you could be you will see the result at the end. Keep doing what the people with illness do, never give up, they always have an smile on their face. Even people famous they kill their self because they feel alone, because they don't interact with the community, or with fun people that could make their life happy and easier.

In conclusion, I agree on what Thomas Jefferson wrote. Personally I don't waste time, I keep doing me, I am always doing something for example, school , work and I also play soccer for the Generic_City recreation soccer. My advice for you is that if you don't something similar of what happen with my cousin, take care of your self, keep yourself busy as much as you can.                   ",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.0,3.0
2E5A3E5FD179,"I disagree, to have one and a half hour added to our school hours. It would cause stress and angry, to students and teachers. Teachers would have to stay longer at school to grade papers. Students would get hugry and sleepy and have less tie to play.

If the school board plans to add a hour and a half hour to school, then students would try to stay home. Students would try to miss the bus and try to get sick if theirs a test or anything that seems underwhelming. Students would get low grades if theirs a lot of homework and less time to do it, they would just not try to do it. Teachers would get more paper work from students and try to make plans for the students for them to learn a easy way, so it wont make extra work for all of them. Students would have less time to practice from sports or other actives if theirs more homework and if they are failing a classes and get kick of the team if they play a sport.

Students would be starving more if they dont eat breakfast, because they dont have time. Students go to school at different times so they wake up different times as well, and dont get time to eat or make something later. Students would bring food to school and would leave trash, and its extra work for other people who have to clean it. And when school over they would have less time to have something fun to do. Students would sleep and not do home work and not do their chores or stay up to do homework or study and play games. They would have less time to eat and not have the energy to wake up and get ready for school and to stay awake at school.

Teachers would stay longer at school, to do the extra work, and miss important things that they have to attend. They should get paid more to stay longer and deal with kids. Teachers would get stress and try to deal with the kids that cause trouble and distractions in the classroom. They would get more strict and angry. Its bad for them since their getting older and it can cause some health problems and probably would retire because of that.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
E6122E9ABFA3,"Are first impression almost impossible to change? Most people would say no, but actually it is possible. You just need willingness, hard work, and a litle of confidence.

First of all, if you want to change any first impression, you have to will it. You need to have a vision of how you want to change it. Most people try to change their first impression, but the thing is they don't have a vision. Without a vision you are going nowhere, you most have a vision. Lots of people give up but I know you can do it, because failure is not an option. Always remember will is power.

Second of all, willing something is just the first part to change our first impression. The hard work is probably the most complicated, becasue is where you gonna find some challenges. Challenges are part of life, so don't see them as impossibles, but see them as oportunities. You have to work hard to reach your goal, no matter what. Keep this in mind life is not fair, so you better keep doing and don't look back of what have you done. Always have a clear vision og what you do.

Finally, this is probably the most importamt part, confidence. Confidence plays a big roll to change our fisrt impresion. If your not a cofident person, it migth be hard for you to change but not impossible. You can take classes to gain cofidence like me which is helpful. I'm not cofident person but took the JROTC class which has help me to be more confident amd not olny that, I have learned to be a leardership too. If I can do it, that mean you can. Don't let anything to stop you.

Inconclusion, think about your future is very important. Changeing your fist impression is a good start. You never know if that will affect your future. Just will it, work har for it, and be confident.        ",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
4E81E4116D94,"People have more oportunity to graduate more early. The program have benefits for all the students. Also they can make a plan to take curses during the summer or the evenings. People think is a good idea for the students does not can finished the school, and they can finished in this program. After they finished the school, they can enter to study in the college.

First, people think is a good idea because they can graduated more early. Everyone has a oportunity to finished the school in three years. Also for the other students do not can continue study, this program is a oportunity for continue, and they can finished. For the students have a older years they can study in this program. They can take the oportunitues to study the curses during the summer or evenings.

Second, the program have benefits for all the studnts. Some people not can finished the school because they work, but with this program they can do the both things. The students can to study, and work. They need do both things because they not have help to other person, for that reason many students forget the school, and they choice the work to the school. The benefits is their can continue study and finished school.

Next, some people can take a curses during the summer or the evening. For the students not have many economic, and they working for their can continue to finished school.

Also in this program they can graduated more early and they have a good age. After they can go to the college or university for they can continue thier careers. Some students choice study in the evening because in the morning they work or have other differents planes with their families or other activities. Other prefer study in the evening because is more interesting and more funny.

In conclusion, some people think is good idea to the school offer programs to the students. They can continue study, and they can graduated more early to the school. The students can go more to the college in a good age. They can finished the school in three years. For the students not have many economic have benefits, because they not have help to other person they can work in the worning and they can study in the evening. The students can do the both things. Also they can finished the school they can go to the college or university for finished their caree.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
90E2214EFEC8,"Have you ever wonder how enjoyable science experiments is? You can create new substances from chemicals. Also, you can learn more about chemical and their reactions. In common, you can try some new experiments in the lab. To conclude, these are some enjoyable science experiments that you can do in a lab.

Did you ever try to create a new substance from chemicals? Will this is how people in the lab can do it. First, they measure the liquid and check the temperature. Then, they add another substance to react with the liquid and measure it again and check the temperature. Lastly, the liquid will precipitate or create a gas form. To conclude, this is how people create a new substance and chemicals in the lab.

You can't do a experiment without learning more about chemicals and their reactions. People who want to study about science take science class or a course to learn more about substance and chemicals. Also, people in the lab learn about chemical compounds and their specific names. To conclude, this is how people studying or learning about chemicals and substances.

You can't have fun without trying some new experiment in the lab. If you try a new experiment in the lab you can understand more better about science. Also, trying something new is hard, but it can become more fun and enjoyable to do in your life. To conclude, trying something new in your life is the best life choice.

In conclusion, learning about chemicals, creating something new and trying new experiments in your life is more fun and enjoyable than anything else. This can also help you become a scientist for those people who like to study about science and learn about chemicals. Than what are you waiting for, get your science class or courses now!!!",3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5,4.0,4.5
D43F13CE2638,"Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something?, Or does inactivity also serve a purpose?. This question is fairly easy because if you just simply do nothing, Then nothing would be accomplished, Unless you believe in ""when the times right etc."" but sitting around doesnt make you more successful, For example if you wanted to be very successful you have to work with it. Like staying after school to study for the SOL

the very next day, Or remembering to do all your chores before your parents came back from work. But on the other hand doing nothing can also accomplish many things. For example if you were to be in a car accident and broke several bones then obviously you'll be in a wheel chair for several months and You wont be able to move at all. And doing so will help you accomplish healing, Your doing nothing but still getting better at the same time. Have you herd of the saying ""All good things happen to those who wait"" this means it could be a normal day then suddenly something really good comes to you like either you find a job or the love of your life and have a happy ending. There are other ways too, for example theirs a saying ""dont mess with something that doesnt need to be messed with"" and ""Theres light at the end of the tunnel"" these quotes connect in a way because sometimes some things should be left alone and over time something good will come to it, like you able to accomplish your goals.

Or maybe your the type of person to let Fiat decide, so you let things happen naturally. Overall you can accomplish many tasks for both doing and not doing anything, But in my opinion you can accomplish more when your doing more because your working for whatever it is your aiming for. Also the quote from Thomas Jefferson ""Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" This quote in a nut shell is my response to this question. I'd rather be busy and know that i'm accomplishing what i want than to wait until something happens.",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
8DCC1AC9A8EA,"World is change every second. Each year grow tree. But people cut trees faster.

Some people says to be succesful in our life person need be yourself. But, why?

Be yourself is the best way to be succesful.

But most of people don't know, how be succesful? They think that to have money they will be succesful. For example, peoples try be IT programers, because someone say that they earn more money. But most people don't know, what it is and in this area most people are new. Their don't want work and their work are looks not good. After a couple time, they left this job and they trying somthing else. Only couple of them stay on this area. Another example is students. This year some students will be grated, and they don't come back to school again. Nobody don't ask ""Does student want go to school?"". And this is one of the reason, why students don't want go to school. But, those years that he was in school, he will be remind.

Most people don't know, what will be after four years. Students go to college which say their parents.

Most of us to survive in this life doing that he or she don't want. Most imigrants come to rich countries because they have money. They learn their native language just to have more money.

One person say ""Make your job what you want to do and you wouldn't work, never"". We don't think how we can be succesful? And it's make wrong desision. People think that be painter or artist is bad, because they don't have much more money. This mind is wrong. Artists are be not bad because they live by yourself.

To find yourself is hard because it take time and other people influens to other people. But when person find yourself his or her life will be happy.

Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, ""To be yourself in world is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment""

I agree, because yourself it's make life better.",3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
125C1167A84A,"Mrs. Generic_Name i think changing the school menu is a very bad idea because the students will not have many choices of what they wanna eat in the cafeteria. so the student wouldnt get to eat what they like or of their favorite choice what the student usually get when they are in the cafeteria. and the students wouldnt be happy about changing the school menu and most student would go to school and not eat lunch and go home with their stomach empty.

so Generic_Name i would not recommend not changing the school menu because. the student would not be very happy at school and if the school menu changes. mostly the student would will bring their own lunch from home and bring it in to the cafeteria and the school lunch food would be wasting . because the students wouldnt eat the school lunch food because majorly the student are bring their own lunch. which its not a very bad idea because students can bring their own lunch and they will not be starving to death with out skipping lunch and going going home with their stomach full instead of empty which it is a good thing. so i think not changing the school menu is a very good idea because friend and i can have free choices of what i like to eat and what the whole school would like to eat or bring the Owen lunch to school which i think it a very good idea because if i had the freedom to to bring my own lunch or choice in the cafeteria. i would eat very well and i wont have an empty stomach the whole entered day in school. and i will not be sleepy for the rest of the day and the few class i have at the end of the day.

i think sum of the students will do the same thing as me if we all eat very good and very well in school in the cafeteria and it will be nice.

Mrs. Generic_Name i think that most student would not like to have a healthier school lunch menu becuase no student usaly get school lunch in school so the students usaly bring in their own school lunch and which its a very good go idea because the student can bring what they like to eat during lunch time .and if you change the school lunch menu then the student wouldnt get school lunch any more. and if the whole school didnt jget the school lunch any more because they dont like the new school lunch menu. it because no one like to eat very healthy at school and maybe if the whole school didnt get lunch and every single student in Generic_School pack their own lunch with its a bad sin becuse all the food would be wasting . so mrs Generic_Name pelase dont change the school lunch menu becuase most student wouldnt be happy if the school lunch menu changes and every every student in Generic_School would be so happy and glad if you didnt change the school lunch mean.            ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0
648D40256ADB,"The societies of enter high school for the people having a good course for people want to have a good career because there think that having a good career that have better jobs in the future for the people already the experience for that careers. Yes, Because some the student will get more course that there want to learn to be there future career for the student there like. Like examples for me as student for high school is that i like to do engineer that one of my career that i like do and also that one my course as well. Because there alot of student want to get a good career to start off a position course and a better future job for the student likes. It because the student and the high school teacher there will think that student need a good career that ways if there get older there finally have experience for a career helping the people out. At least as younger student to get a experince to have a career any people that is young to get use to it for experience.",2.0,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
BD4BFB4E8C6B,"Many will say that distance learning is a really good option for students. Several students will benefit from distance learning by having better attendance, less problems , and it will also help students with certain disabilities or health problems . On the other hand , some will disagree by saying that if students dont attend actual school they will become lazy and irresponsible. Distance learning will benefit many student and also school.

Distance learning will benefit students in many ways such as better attendance . If students are allowed to attend school while at home it will give them less chances of not attending. Something that students hate most is waking up in the morning to get ready for school. Having to wake up so early in the morning just to attend school for about eight hours will cause a student to become lazy and tired.

Unfortunately some student are born or are diagnosed a certain disability to where they cant attend school . However those students with disabilities have a right to have an education. Distance learning will really benefit those students by allowing them to attend school from home. There are many reasons why students benefit from distance learning but being able to help a child with a disability on their education is the most important reason.

If students dont attend their actual school there will be less problems. Some students are treated really bad in school , many are bullied , and also many like to be drama queens . However if students attend school at home it will benefit a child because they wont have to see other students and there will be less drama and more education. Schools will stop having so many bullying problems.

On the other hand many will disagree and say that if students stay at home and pursue their education there they will become irresponsible and lazy. Students should be allowed to attend school how they want to . If a students becomes lazy because of distance learning the problem is within the student. Many will agree that it will make a student less lazy and more responsible. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
4DB99E2F46E3,"Yes. Having a positive attitude helps you alout to be a succesful person in life. It helps you to be a parent, coatch,teacher,and friend....ect

Positive atitude is one of the basic rules that all employees follow such as a waeter or cashier. They learned it to win the customer and to get the business seccessful. When i worked in Krespy Kreem my manager tought me something which is a way to win the customer with a positive attitude that i have to follow. the service called ""the sweet"" service this word stand for smile,welcome,entice,engage,and thank. Having a positive attitude help you to beacame a friend and close to people and people will alwys feel confortable to talk to you. But having a negative attitude will make poeple fell unsafe around you and you will be lonely and not welcomed to the most of people.

Having a positive attitude also help you to be a teacher because you will always motivate your students and provide for them education. The reason why students skip classes is because of the teacher's attitude. students prefer the teacher who give a friendly smile. Positive attitude helps me alout to be an successful athlet because my coach is always happy from the way i act and my leadership that i do infront of my teamates. It makes me a respectful person and trustful guy.

In fact attitude is the way the person present his/her personality. People with a negative attitude are mostly asocial and introverts.

In my opinion having a positive attitude helps you to be a parent because the childrens get scared from the person who's always angry and frustrated. that's why most of the parents hide thier nerves and they act nicely infront of the child. Couple relationship consider attitude because most of momen prefer the guy with a positive view and who's open for evryone. The best way to live your life and be polite all the time is to have a positive attitude most poeple respect the person who give a smile and greet them. One of the importance of good attitude is bieng a family member. My uncle is the type of person who communicate and discuss with evryone and the way he talk is likeable from evryone because his always friendly and welcomed from poeple.

Politicians with positive attitude are always persuasive because they use communication skills to convince the audience by telling thier speech. Attitude is a way to find a job because when the person get an enterview with a manger he has to answer the question kindly and with a respectful way. One of the reasons of bieng a good student is acting with a positive attitude infront of my classmate.

I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life becuase its the way to live with poeple and find a job and create a family. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
A39343536B4B,"Spend time outdoors is amazing. An enjoyable way to spend time outdoors would be to walk your pets, spend time talking with your friends, people can relax while reading a book.

First of all, people who loves pets would enjoy to take a walk with their dog or cat, Animals also feel freedom when they are playing outdoors with their owners, and you are going to have a good time with your pets. People might find this activity enjoyable because I am sure they love to see their pets happy and playfully.

Secondly, you might have an enjoyable time talking with friends, you can talk about whatever you want, it might be about funny or important things that you been through. People might find this activity enjoyable because they like to be social and also make new friends.

Finally, all type of persons can have and amazing time while reading a book outdoors, they will not feel stresed or tired,and they will be feeling better. Someone might like this activity enjoyable because you would not stresed and persons will be reading outdoors.

In conclusion, an enjoyable way to spend time would be to walk your pets and let them feel freedom, you can be chating with your friends about whatever you want, and people will feel good while reading outside of their houses.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
4BA9296EBE9F,"A topic that is debated is if students should do online classes. Some people believe that there should be online classes. They believe that there should be online classes because the students can take there time and feel comfortable where they are . I belive that we shouldn't have online classes because student can ask for help when they need it, Students are better when they work together as a team and you can get extra help after school and before school .

Students can ask for help. Teacher can help students when they don't understand something instead of trying to look it up on the internet .Students don't learn from the internet or they will just forget. Online classes is good but what if the students doesn't understand then they would just stay confused. The teacher can show them in person then in a computer screen. If students did online classes what if they don't understand there work because they can't just call there teacher sometimes they don't answer.

Students work better when they work together. Group projects can help them in the future when they got to work with other people. They can learn from each other and there mistakes . When the students are in groups they don't do it solo and they can get the more work done. They get to meet new people that they never ever get to talk to and make new friends. Online classes you just listen to the teacher and ask question do the same thing but can never work with other people.

There extra help after and before school. Online classes there no before or after school it just the time of your classes. In School the teacher stay after or come before school to help students with their work or the ones that just doesn't understand . The Teacher helps them with homework so they don't have to do it at home and the same with classwork if they don't get it done there after school. There also people who have to do stuff after school so there is before school where they can come early and do there workk.

I believe that we shouln't have Online classes because student can ask question,student have more fun doing group activity and if the students need help they have after and before school to get extra help.

Online classes isn't really necessary it wouldn't effect anything.

Teacher are more helpful then computer.                                         ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
FF9469424ED0,"All schools have different educational activities, including playing an instrument. There are so many things you can do when you play an instrument. Everyone has seen marching bands doing all types of exciting things in the middle of a football game. Have you not seen the routines they make, those take hard work! Orchestras play classical music and make their sound flow in the room. Not only do they play classical music, but they also play loud and exciting music. Everything you can do while playing an instrument is enjoyable. Some things are more enjoyable than others like being able to listen to yourself making good music, going on fun field trips, and being able to find all different types of music.

While playing an instrument you play all different types of music, and all of the pieces of music are good. When you hear yourself play a song well you get a boost of confidence. Hearing your class play well makes you confident that your concert will sound great. It feels good to know that you're capable of playing music that others who aren't able to do. You get to enjoy the amazing sound your class makes. Whenever you play an instrument you normally audition for the class you want to get into and when you get into it, you are full of joy. It's always nice to know that you can achieve the level that you want to achieve. The opportunities you get while playing an instrument are endless.

When being in band or orchestra you get the opportunity to go on field trips. Schools don't normally go on field trips unless the students are in band or orchestra. They offer the field trips to people who play an instrument because of all their hard work they put into it. All the field trips you go on are enjoyable because of the people in your class. You always make friends whenever you join band or orchestra. Some schools know that the students want more fun, so they include more field trips than others. Every field trip is a gift to the students who play their instruments from the school. Some places that schools go to are Kings Dominion, Busch Gardens, Hershey Park, and many more exciting places. Those all have roller coasters, water activities, and carnival games, who wouldn't want to go there.

Every movie or show has a soundtrack which the classes can play. You can always search up the sheet music to any song you want to play. You can also make your own sheet music and play that yourself. You can play every song on an instrument. People enjoy playing the music they've wanted to play since they first started playing an instrument. There are movies that people love and the people who can play an instrument are able to play that movies theme song. Not a single song cannot be put in sheet music so, if anyone ever wanted to play their favorite song they could search it up and it would pop up. Even though some songs are harder to make sheet music for they're still possible to do.

When playing an instrument, practice does make perfect. Nothing about playing an instrument is easy, but everything about it is fun. The effort put into playing your instrument does pay off at the end. Playing well can make you so happy and proud of yourself. Not only are you proud of yourself, but others are proud of you. Being able to play an instrument is a privilege that not everybody gets. There is nothing that can stop someone from becoming a part of the music community. The friends you can make and go with to the exciting field trips. Play all the music you've ever wanted to play. Everything you can do in band is limitless. ",3.5,3.5,4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
E48441F53011,"Having a homework club after school isn't just a great way for students to get hel on homework but for many other reasons. These are my reasons on why I think having a homework club is beneficial.

Students don't just get help on their homework,but gives them a better understanding on the subject. Students also finish their homework and get a good grades on it.

Staying afterschool can encourage students to try harder on homework and school work as well. Staying for homework club can also make students to be more productive then going home and not getting homework done.

The homework club isn't just beneficial for students but as well as for teachers. Teachers can see questions that many students had a hard time on and then go over it. teachers find it useful to see questoions many students have a hard tim on so that they can practice. Teachers feel good about students finishing their homework and understanding the subject better.

In conclusion I think having a homework club is a great thing because students get a better understanding and getting their homework done. It encourages students to do better in school ,and it is very beneficial for teacher as well.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
C7E050E7D5F0,"Accomplishing more if we are always doing something, is how Thomas Jefferson determined it. It's recommend day after day that we motivate ourselves to move forward as we learn to progress in new skills we learn. Accomplishing more if we are always doing something is a huge motivation for people because; it helps the person in many ways, they get benfits , and it helps them be productive. This is why each day we see more and more people becoming greater then what they already are in life.

When accomplishing more things if we always doing something, people seem to get or fine benefits by doing by doing this task. People are being able to gain more knowledge from this because, they're simply putting in lots of detication and time into always doing tasks. Most people that are always doing more seem to find what they truly like to do and having a passion for, therefore this helps them a lot because it is leading them to find a carrer that they're truly passionate about. Lastly it helps the person keep their mindset clear and puts a postive energy inside their self.

How does this help the person? Well by accomplishing more it helps the person get some type of payment if working under emploment or simply they're just starting off working. Seeing that someone can get money by doing more is always gonna be a motivation on someone's mind because, they're seeing differnent life styles around the community. Getting money by accomplishing more is a big achievement for mostly everone, they are able to save,spend, and as well as helping family or close friends. There're are many people out there that wanna give back to their love ones for many reasons and the only way by doing this is being preductive in accomplishing more.

The most important part of accomplishing more of someting is by, by being productive when deciding to part the amount of affort you want to accomplish what someone one wants. People that seek goals for themselves always seem to be the most preductive, only because they visualize big things in their futrue. Being Preductive is amazing thing, because it doesnt show a weakness inside the person, and it is a way to show strength, as well as showing hunger for what you are striving for in life. Setting examples to others that you are preductive and are accomplishing more and big things, is gonna look good on someone simply because, they see the outcome of the hardwork, and detication put into doing more of something.

In conclusion, if we accomplish more by doing something; we will become remarkable in many differnent ways.

By challenging their selves to go down the road as something big all they need to do is be preductive with thierselves, actknowlege that they will have benefits, and learn why it will help them beocme who they want to be. Therefore if they is someone out there in the world that wants to accomlish big things, all they need to do is do more of somehting and strive for their success.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
AC9719A6A375,"is setting a good example by your own behavior the best way to influence other people i agree that setting a good example by your behavior is the best way to influence people when giving a good example your trying to influence and direct the people so you must have a good behavior in order for them to be persuaded, you must also have good details to provide to the people or your clients,and good examples can guide you to next step or level.

when setting a good example for other people you want them to be to be persuaded, and to follow the example. so you must have a good attitude and a good behavior. when providing a information to other people you have to make sure that what your saying make sense and its accurate. i have a little brother that wants to play basketball just like me, every game i have he come and watches me play, the moves he see me do in the game, if he likes it hes gonna tell me and when i get home i show him the examples on how to do those specific moves. when you show good examples people will folow and will be pass those examples down to somone else.

good examples can guide you, to the next step or level. when i'm taking a test at school, it always begins with a three question example and it lets me know what i am going to be dealing with, so when I take the test i know what i am going to be expecting on the test ,and i am also gonna know what to do on the test. examples can help a lot of people succeed. when your working on any school work or classwork it always starts with an examples on how to show you how to answer the problems and do it. little examples can provide people with a lot of information. if you pay attention to the examples it can really help you in the future. some lawyers use examples when talking to a judge in court to help them understand or to persuade them.

when providing information to other people you want to make sure your attitude and behavior is on point in order for them to listen. my parents sometimes have trouble using technology so when they need help i'm ready to show them examples on what they are having trouble on, they know they can always count on me,and that is the type of behavior if they ever need any help. a lot of people doesnt tolerate poor behavior. when my English teacher is giving the class an example on what we are going to do later that day she makes sure that each and one of his understands what we are doing before she moves on. the source that your providing you have to make sure it actually or if it can other people out.

although some people may say giving a example with your own behavior may not work for a lot of people. another way you can show an example, is by showing them in person. I sometimes have trouble making or creating something so i got to watch someone else do it in order for me to do it. showing direction to people in person will make it somewhat easier for the the person to understand,instead of just telling them. you can influence other upon your action and they might follow id your attitude is good.         ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
B83897288B43,"As human beings, our character traits are important in our lives, because they are what determine who we are, and how we are going to develop with the people around us. But those traits, do we really aquire them ? Or they are formed by little and dieferent pieces of things that trough the our lives they influeced us ? In this essay I will argue my point of view and why do I think.

Our parents, they were our firts teachers, and also the firts influence on us. I'm lucky for having really good parents, but not just becuse how they treated me, but also for what they teached me; being respectful, responsible, having manners, the good things. Those are traits that not everybody have, but the ones who do, it's because they acquired that influence from somebdy. When we are growing some other factors influed on us, I remember that in my firts group of friends everything we did was play with those Hotwheels cars and everything I wanted during my five trough nine years old were Hotwheels cars, it was in my personality the fact that I liked them, but if it wasn't for those ads on TV, those external influnces I wouldn't realize that I liked them, same with LEGOS when I was twelve, and videogames nowdays, and during that time and even now, those friendships became another influence on our lives, we play or talk about same things and when we are doing that they become a influence for me on the same way I become a influence for them.

We share and receive those little traits for outside and we forge them into a unique trait by mixing them with ours, making it part of our personality. Someone who says the opposite may have their point, because in this world there is a lot of people who came from the worst places, when you could see the worst influences for then. becoming an admiable and respetable person, but then were you listen their story, it was something, even a little influence, but for them was bigger than any other, even the ones that were in front of that people, so they wanted to reach it and they did it. People is really suseptible, specially kids, so lets try to keep those bad influnces on them, because as the same way a great person can come from a bad place, a bad person can also come from a rich place just because they were under some bad influence, teach them good things so they can avoid the bad ones. ",3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
FF6224AC70C6,"A city council is having arguments to adopt curfew for teenagers,10 P.M on weekdays and midnight curfew on weekends. Some people thinks this to be a good idea,but others especially like young people does not think so. There are conflicting opinions over this topic. According to me this is a good idea to set a limit for teenagers who stay away from home late night. In my opinion,this adoption can lead to improvement in sleeping habits of teenagers,prevents unhealthy food habits and allow teens to spend more time with their families.

Curfews to stop teenagers going out of home late night make them improve their sleep time. As they are home they sleep on better time than they are out till midnight. For young people sleep time should be 7-8 hours atleast,because of their growing body structure. Young people are more energetic if they sleep well. Staying out late disturbs bed time for teens,which makes them lazy,tired and inactive in activities going on around us. Unadequate sleep can also lead to risk in driving a vehicle. As you could not sleep well you may feel dizziness while driving a vehicle,which is really dangerous. A lot of teens die in road crashes because of unattentiveness while driving,this unattentiveness comes from unadequate sleep. Also the crashes are caused due to drink and drive habits after staying out late night. To protect teens from death in that early age curfews should be adopted. As when me myself could not sleep well,I am unable to concentrate on my work in my class. This alot of times effects my grades. Also when I stay awake till late night separates me from what is going on in real world because when people around me are awake,I am not focused and asleep.

This adoption also somehow effects teens eating habits. Staying out means eating unhealthy and junk food,which is not at all good for young people's health. Along with adequate sleep we also should be healthy to stay fresh and active. It is really necessary for young people to eat healthy food because they have their full life to live and if they will stay unhealthy,they will get diseases in really early age. Not only food when teens go out with friends they drink alcohol or beer, which is not good for them at that early age. Unhealthy food weakens teens immune system which leads to diseases in quite early ages. Not only diseases unhealthy food collects a lot of fat in their body that effects teens socially,mentally and physically. If teens stay in the house they eat food provided to them by their parents, also which is healthy and not too oily. Whenever I eat unhealthy food it makes me sick and if you are in place where no one knows you,people there likes tyo stay away from me which makes me feel uncomfortable. I have seen a guy in my family who have grown fat after eating a lot of junk food,he suffers a lot of problems like he need someones help to get up if he sits down,a lot of people teases him for his fatty body and also he cannot even walk fast because he gets tired fast. So to stay away from these bad comments and unfit body teens should eat healthy food and home made food.

Apart from food and sleep curfew for teenagers make them stay home with their families. This makes them to interact with their families instead of going out with friends. Most of times generation gap is being shown in between families that is just because of less attraction in between people in the families. Having dinner together at night makes you discuss various aspects going on around us. Like when our family get together we talk about of new things we tried,just as me and my sister made new friends as we shifted here this year. Also we talk about how to be aware from diseases going on in recent days. We also discuss about problem we are suffering from. This makes us share our happiness and problems we are going through in our life and also we are able to intract wih the family members.

There are various more ideas that shows that this adoption takes teens lives towards positive aspects. Proper sleep,healthy food and interaction with their families can be obtained if this curfews are adopted. To make future generation healthy and concentrated about development and growth of our country these laws are need to be applied. If teens will be healthy they will come up as fresh and present minded citizens towards the country. If they will sleep well,they will work hard to make their dreams come true. Also if they will interact with their families they will make each and every one satisfied in world. Teens should take this in a positive way instead of taking it as a restriction on their freedom. This is not a reastriction but a key to live healthy,fresh and active way of life. Give teens life by restricting their habits instead of giving them dealth with improper lifestyle.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
7A68E1FB7863,"Imagine an aboard student come from different country that is far away from United State, so she need a long summer break to return to her country for visit her family. Summer break is what educators and students are looking forward for. Whereas many people argue that the break should be year-round schools, and it should be a 3-4 week break in summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. The summer break should be longer and less short break because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home.

While many people believe that the summer break should be shorten, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall because the educators feels that if the break too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, this is a week argument. For instance, a break in the middle of the school year easy to get students forget what they have learn. Further more, students will not want to go back to school after few days off. Students need break but a short break is unnecessary.

To begin with, students are waiting for a long summer break where they can spend all their time at the place that they wish to be at. For example, an exchange student from Vietnam came to United State with her parents for emergrates, but her siblings still live in Vietnam because they were married before sign up. Summer break is the only time that allows the student to go back to her country for visiting. Furthermore, some students are working full time in summer to have a provision for their consumption in the future such as buying a car, college,etc. The part time work that students make during school year does help but not much for preparing or satisfy the claim inside teenager.

In addition, people want to have a relax time on a long vacation, none of the students want to be thinking that they still have work waiting for them at home and the deadline is coming. For instance, teachers love give homework during the break for no reason. Going out with friends but still have to bring paper and pencil to do homework is very humor. Furthermore, some teacher put onerous on students, which they giving out homework and big project for a test grade just because they don't want the student to forget the information that they have learn. Students didn't expect teachers to finish grading their work during the break, but teachers expect them to finish the big project, it is unfair for students.

As a final point, the summer break should be longer because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home. For long summer break teacher don't give homework, and students feel free to plan out their vacation for entire summer. The long break is much better than a short and unnecessary break.        ",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
F51C77EFF5D8,"Thomas Jefferson once said ""Determined never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing ."" Lening never wanted to be idle,for he kept on playing Apex Legends to be good at it. He worked hard. He reached his goal of winning a match on Apex Legends. Lening reached his goals because he was never idle, for he was always doing something in his life. Although some say that inactivity serves a purpose because we can wait for the right moment to start an errand or chore, actually being active serves a purpose because we can increase our knowledge in; work,home and gaming and if we are studying a subject such as; Medicine, 3D Animated Cartoons and CyberSecurity we can master it ,and later on we can teach others.

Some say that inactivity serves a purpose because we can wait for the right moment to start an errand or chore. Once a read an article on Newsela that was about how a men waited to start his goal, and he ended up getting his goal very quick. The man was called Generic_Name. Generic_Name wanted to save up to buy a house. He started ti save up for two months, later on he won the lottery, Generic_Name was very happy about it, then he deposited all his money into his savings account. Time pass by and he realized he had enough money to buy his dreamed house. Generic_Name bought the house, and he lived happily ever after.

If we are inactive we can wait for the right moment to start and errand or chore. My Aunt(Generic_Name) wanted to do and errand but she decided to wait because she saw on CNN News that if we wait to do and errand or chore the succession rate increases by 25%. She did the errand and it went more smoothly than ever, he waited to do it and she succeeded on doing it.

Being inactive for a while it's good because if we decide to rush things the odds might be against us. My friend Generic_Name always like to rush things. One day he couldn't wait to buy a game that he went in the middle of the night to buy it. When he got to the store, the store was already closed. He walked form the game store to his house. He was very sad that he could not bought the game, later on he saw a women in white standing right in front of him. He woman in white turn down and he saw her.. the we ran like crazy. It's always better to wait to do something such as buying a game, don;t rush things or you will end up like Generic_Name.

It's so good how many we can accomplish if we are always doing something, but if we are inactive we can always wait for the right moment to start doing something. ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing""-Thomas Jefferson.",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
5AC1AB0965F6,"Ever since I was little I would dreamed of going to Hawaii. I would always think of seeing the beautiful crystal clear blue seas. I would want to go scuba diving and get a view of the animals in the ocean.

reasons why I would want to go to Hawaii because it has a huge water park. I always have fun at water parks because it has big slides and big pools and other fun stuff. But Hawaii water park is like three times the size of the water parks I've been in. During the summer I like to go to my pool and spend my time there. I always wished I had a slide in my pool. But my pool is still fun. I invite my friends to make the pool more fun. We play sharks and Minos and other games.

Another reason why I would go to Hawaii is because I want to try out their sea food. I heard their sea food is really good and it come fresh out the ocean. Personally my favorite sea food is crab. But i like crab better when its a crab soup.

One more important reason why I would want to go to Hawaii is because I want to spend time with my family. I rarely get to spend anytime with my family. The reason that is because I have to go to school and my work and stuff. Then my when i comeback home my dad has to go to work. He comes back around midnight. So basically I never get to see him. I probably see him like for 10 minutes but then I cant. At least I get to see him during holidays.

The first thing I would want to do when I get to Hawaii is go to the huge water park. I want to go there to have fun. I also want to ride all the slides in the park. I want to play around with my family and have fun with them. Me and my dad always go on big slides when we're in a water park.

Another activity I would want to do when I get there is ride a bike around the city i'm gonna be staying at. I want to get to know the city and all of its locations. I also would love to ride on the mountains so i can get a nice view and take some photos.

Something else I would do is swim in the crystal clear oceans with my family. I have never seen my feet when i'm in the ocean and i want to experience that. I also want to have fun throwing a ball around with my family.

The first things I would want to see in Hawaii is go scuba diving and get to see the beautiful sea creatures swim around the ocean. Also for reason I want to get to touch them, and I want to see my families reaction. I always wanted to sea wild sea creatures. I never get to sea them because the closest ocean to me is dirty so you cant see nothing under the water. I want to see them swimming around and see other animals in the water. Every time I see a sea creature. The only way I would see one is if I caught it with a fishing rod or its dead on the sand or In the aquarium.

I would really want to go on a helicopter and see all of Hawaii. I just want to explore and get a beautiful view of Hawaii. At least see two dolphins hop from the ocean. That would be a perfect moment. But I just want to see Hawaii. I would probably go see one of does fire performance too.

One more thing I would want to go see in Hawaii is my family having fun. I want to see them having fun because I rarely get to see them having fun. We usually don't have fun because were not always together. One of my family membesr has to work and the other has to do something else. I really wished we could spend time longer together.

I would go to Hawaii because I get to increase the relationship with my family and have fun. If I got to Hawaii i'm not be stressed out during that time.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
FD4C4EDC22DE,"Positive attitude is something that can be a reason of successes. Everyone with a positive attitude is a great personality. A positive altitude can lead you achieve your goal. A positive attitude can change something worse to something better. Positive attitude can be an inspiration for others. A positive attitude can change someone's life.

A positive attitude can change something worse to something better. For example ""When I was 14 years old, we came up with an argument with our family friends. When my brother figured out the the problem he invited both families and he solved the problem."" This shows how can a positive attitude change something worse to something better. Having a positive attitude can lead you to success. Positive attitude can change worse to better.

Positive attitude can be an inspiration for others. For example ""When I was in my country I was impatient. I was asking for everything I want to, but my brother taught me something that, nothing can be that easy to find in our live we have to work for it and achieve it."" It describes how a person with positive attitude can be an inspiration for other. Being someone with positive attitude can lead you to achieve your aims and be an inspiration for others.

A positive attitude can change someone's life. For example ""My uncle's son was not normal. All of his friends were saying, to take him to a doctor. My uncle rejected, he said I am his doctor. He used to call him Tiger. He was taking him to all around the world: Nature, Communities of different cultures, different countries. He recovered to his normal life after 6 months. Now he is one of the managers in a restaurants in Afghanistan."" His positive attitude was to not give up and start treatments. It shows how a positive attitude can change someone's life.

A positive attitude can be a reason for solving a problem and changing bad to good. People learn from those who have positive attitude. Positive attitude can give someone's real life back. Positive attitude can lead achieve all your dreams. To be a successful you have to behave well with everyone. A positive attitude can make you someone that everyone loves. ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
516E5D64BF6E,"I think that people make their own decisions is technique good. I agree with that for 2 reasons. people have to improve their lifes without help and guidance. People know which is the best decision by themself.

First reason, people have to improve in their lifes without help or guidance. The people have to be indepentdient, also the people have to follow their directions.

Additionally, people know which is the best decision by themself. The people have the responsability to improve their lifes or not, and the people will assume their own responsability if their decisions are bad.

Some people would argue that people don't have knokledge to have a good decision,and they do not have a guidance to follow; however, the people do not have all the time good decisions sometimes the pople choose bad decisions, and the people do not has to have a guidance to follow.

It's clear that people can make their own decisions. I strongly believe that people have the best decisions by themself, and people have to improve in their lifes without help or guidance.",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
9A0BAE46C6B4,"Based on my experieneces, do I agree or disagree with Emerson's statement. I do agree on what Ralph Waldo statement said,""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" You should always push yourself to the max on everything you do. Try finding a better and faster way to solve what you already mastered. Work even harder then you worked before. Also try something more harder than the previous thing you did. For example Lebron James, he wasn't rich or wealth when he was little, he had to work hard to get where he is now. Lebron trained everyday to get better, stronger, and put his best on the basketball court so he can stand out from the rest. Even today Lebron James is training to be come the best NBA player ever and works really hard to beat/break other famous NBA players records. Each NBA superstars have different stories to tell on how they got there. Not only just NBA players work hard, other people around the world has stories to tell on how they never stopped working harder than before to grow. .These are the reasons and examples on why I do agree with Raplh Waldo statement.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
A5056E812783,"If you ask people ""When are you feel happy?"". Most of them can respond that they feel happy in some kind when they are succesful, with a less of problems and failures. But what are in the another side of this success? How people get this success? Nobody can't tell whole way of getting succesful. But why?

Everyone went a hard, full of pitfall way. It wasn't easy, it was hard when you tried to achieve one's goal. Succesful people hadn't easy way of getting succesful. Failure is in some kind examination, challenge for us when we are trying to stay succesful. Succesful people must pass all kind of failure examination that to show that they are strong, sturdy, and patient. Success doesn't like weak and whiner people.

For example, famous people like musicians and composers: Bach, Mozart, Beethoven; writers like Shakespeare, Stendal, Tolstoy, and Pushkin; scientics like Einshtein and Tesla. They all are famous now, because in their time they had goal: be succesful and do those things that they are like to do by their soul and heart. They had failures and opponents, peoples who just only hate and envy them. And now you're just can only imagine on how much those people were full of enthusiasm and pation that we know about them now, in our time. They are examples of succesful people for us now.

Nobody of famous and succesful people don't tell you that it was easy way of stay succesful. Because it is true. And everyone has different failures; you can't feel those failures like feels those person by itself. And nobody can't tell you that the way to stay success will be easy. It is a very big number of people, who pray to achieve their goal, but with the first failures they just stopped and go back, they loss their enthusiasm. And this people just need to be pushed with someone with the words ""Hey! What's happen? This is all all that you can show? Other people have more failures then you, you must go forward! You mustn't to be afraid to see with your eyes your failure. You must be strong."" And I think they can find some strength.

There are a lot of different meetings, conferences, and seminars with a succesful and famous in some way people. There you can hear more good things that can help you to improve, to achieve your goal and stay succesful. But you can't hear all of the failure that would be connected personaly with you, and on how much it can be hard, that you still have enthusiasm that help you to solve your problems and improve. When you stay on the way to achieve your goal, because of the failures you can forget why you do all this things, you need to remember all of the good things you now that will be when you achieve your goal and stay, at first, success for yourself. With a failures you stay more self-controlled, and grew up more inside of you, stay more confident in your deed.

In our life we stay succesful with everyday for ourself too. We have some small and big goals that we want to achieve. Our life is the way to stay succesful. We are achieve our goals for stay succesful in the school, in the college or university, in the sport, and on the work.

To stay succesful it is not easy way with a failures that pursuit us. But we need remember for what we stay on this way, way to stay succesful.",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
2B9FE67B7465,"Thesis

: I believe that my school should not fallow this model because a lot of people get tired of school. Teachers get more tired than students because they work all year to make our classes and teachers need a break from school more than us, the students.

It is okay to go to the school the five days of the week. It doesn't matter how hard school is, if you go the five days of the week you get less tired because classes are more shortest and you don't have to be is school the whole day. Also you have more time outside of school to go to work or go with your friends to have fun and forget of school for a bit.

First, if schools do extend classes is gonna be more stressful and tired because you are going to be in school for a longest time and a lot of people don't even like school. Some people really hate school because is really hard for everyone and there are some classes that you don't even have an idea of what you are doing. Teachers know when someone is tired and they let them sleep for a while because maybe they know how is it feel being tired. Schools need to have the same schedule and don't change anything.

Second, schools are not like work in a job because in a job, you have more responsibilities and they also have rights that you need to comply. Being in a job is the double stressful and tired than being in your school learning a lot of new things. Some people say that work is better than go to school, but I say that they all are wrong because sometimes in school you do nothing, you just are listening to what the teacher says and in a job if you have a little break, you use it to eat or make another job that you need to do later.

They should not extend the school day but the should do it with jobs.

Third, if schools extend classes you won't have time to sleep well. That's the most important thing for students, sleep well to come to the school with a good attitude. A lot of people talk about other's attitude because they are always angry, bored, or lazy but they have no idea if they sleep well or not. Some people make fun of them because they fall to sleep in classroom and that's not right, the right thing is ask that person how is he feel, or if he is okay. The less you sleep, the most tired you get and sometimes you don't even can concentrate in classroom. Most of the students that don't sleep well and they have a job after school, they have a hard time in school because most of the times being in school is stressful as a job.

Conclusion

: Is not necessary to extend school day two more hours because it's gonna be the same any ways. Two more hours in four days don't change anything because is like you are adding Friday in that four days. The same eight hours in Friday, you are going to add to the four days of classes. They don't need to change anything because teachers won't have enough time to get ready our classes for the next day and they won't have time to even cook food at home or clean their house. Sometimes students above 18 years old live single and they need to work every single day because they need a lot of money to pay their bills like: house, car, phone, internet, food, and clothes. Some of them are about to have a baby and having a baby is a huge responsibility for him because he need to work over time to win more money or have two job. He is gonna be really really stressful and tired, and he won't have time to come to the school the whole day.",4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
2D6FA4DEBFD6,"Its a good idea for students to commit to a career at young age because their ready for work, they have specialized classes, and they will already have a plan figured out.

My firsr reason why I agree for students to commit to a career at young age because they give you opportunities after graduating high school. you won't find it hard to figure out what you really want after graduating high school. once you have enough work experience, it will be interested in college. this can save you form career mistakes, and save you time and money. also you will be more competitive when applying for college. and your experience or part time job can build a srtong profile for you as an applicant.

My most important reason why I agree for students to commit to a career because ,It gives a sense of direction to our life by giving life a purpose worth fulfilling. Achieving career of satisfaction to us It also helps us attain certain status in life and society.

In conclusion, these are the reasons why I agree Its a good idea for students to commit to a career at young age because their ready for work ,and they have a plan what should they do after graduating high school and they have experience these will help them when they plan go to college .",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,2.5
C1BED9EF3630,"Most high school students prefer to do their regular four years of high school and enter college after they graduate and apply for college during their senior year to get help from their counselors and school teachers. Graduate early could be difficult for adolescents because not everyone have the same way of learning and some can be more faster than others. School districts should let the students decide whether they want to graduate early or not and give them more freedom to do want they want about their future. students that do their traditional four years do not follow this plan because it can bring pressure and anxiety, they would have to do extra work and,

they are able to pick elective classes.

Every student know that it is very important to pass their classes and be aware of how many credits they have in order to graduate. If you want to graduate early this issue can be dangerous because it can bring anxiety and pressure to adolescents during their high school years. Graduate early can make your life difficult because anxiety combine with pressure frequently gives mental problems. Some parents are constantly checking grades and that can be very frustrated towards their kids and hard to handle because they are often being told to do well and if they don't their guardians limit important items from them and usually control their life because they don't get good grades.

The fear to be behind and getting low grades are always present in students but the worries should be less for those that do not graduate early. teachers recommend to the students to take extra courses during the summer or evenings to advanced in their classes. on account of doing four years of high school you dont need to do extra work. In spite of that you still need to do your assignments at the same time but being not in a rush like the others. Every person should be responsible for their own work even if they have to do it later on it doesn't matter.

The school provides the students the opportunity to take a new subject that they haven't took before. by given them the chance to every student to choose elective courses unfortunately for those that graduate early don't have the same option because it is a waste of time receiving a class you don't need; otherwise you can take take as many as you want to challenge yourself and become better at any new topic you want to learn.

In conclusion it is a better idea if students do their traditional four years of high school. In case they need help from their teachers and schools they can get support from both. Anxiety and pressure are serious problems that any student have to pass through because it distract them from their learning and the attention of the students is also taken away. Extra time should not be used to do extra work because the kids need have to do their assignments and barely have time to do extra courses.

Everyone should have elective classes because is a good way to learn new activities in school and get distracted from your most important classes that you are taking during the school year.     ",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0
E6338A929654,"Having self reliance is a important key to success in life because self reliance is making your own efforts and decisions. I agree that people should make their own decisions because they should have freedom to make their own choices. They should think for them self.

Having the freedom to make their own choices is important because if they can have the freedom to choose what they want the experts are going to choose something that they dont like, or want. For example, the person wants to buy some fancy shoes but the authorities dont like those shoes they are going to say no and decide to buy other shoes. In my thinking I would not like to someone choose for me because they dont know what I like, or what I dont like. If they let other people make there choices they are not going to be happy because the expert or the authorities are going to choose what they like not what the people want. For example, they go to the lunch room and there is a lot of food there and they are trying to get something but they dont let them get what they want because they dont have the freedom to make there own choice, so the authorities are going to come and choose the food for them.

Another reason is that the person can think for them self. If the persons cant think for them self they are going to have a lot of problems in there life because if the expert, or the authorities comes and ask the persons something and they cant think, the experts are going to think for the persons and make choose something that the persons will not like.

In conclusion, having the right, or the freedom to make the decisions for them self is a good think because everyone wants to make their own decisions they dont want no one to be telling them what to do, or what to think. The persons are going to have the freedom to choose what they want to do with there life.         ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
C2F34D6A76D4,"""Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Although the word failure is the lack of success, is the loss of the ability to work normally. As humans, we all know that sometimes instead of get better in life, we currently loss our capacities to start over and follow what we want for us because as British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said ""do not loss the enthusiasm"".

To being, humans fail every time in life, every episode in our life there is always a failure, it is always there for us like if we need it and maybe this is why we always wondered why failure have to happen during the most incredible episode in our life, we always think this is because we did something bad or we did not tried our best as much as we can for get that job, pass that test or even keep all our problems in line, but why failure became a big role into our daily life?.

The reality of failure is not only fail, is to see what we did bad to get better, is to understand that we need to fail, understand that fail is good for us and help us to do not make the same mistakes that we did in the past because every time is a failure it is also an experience and a new lesson to success.

For example, scientists tried many experiments to just get one result and they fail very often but at the end they discovered new things not just only what they were looking for. This shows that not matter how many times you fail, there is always an answer and new things to discovered.

Furthermore, stay positive for humans could became a big issue in our community. Every human try everyday to stay positive and see all the mistakes as much positives as we can but this became more stressful after a failure.

What we all need to know is that feel stress, feel insecure of ourselves is good. We all are humans, our feelings make us more stronger than we actually are however, most people could feel depress after a failure and this is why we goes down, we loss our hope and most people stop to keep working in their goals and just get tired and feel depress.

For example, there is a book that the students of Generic_School were reading last year called ""The life of an Indian"". This book is about a poor Indian boy that lives in a reservation, he has no hopes after one day his teacher introduced the Indian to a different world out of the reservation to find hope and believe in himself, follow his dreams instead to keep poor in the reservation. He fail a thousand times, but instead to get back, he goes thought his issues.

This shows that stay positive after our failures even for a poor little boy is not always too hard. Clearly not everyone could do it that way, but we always want our happiness, and to get happiness, failure could became our big right hand.

In conclusion, join from our mistakes is the best way to be successful, to be better in life, to keep in mind that every failure is a new experience and a new lesson. Not matter how many times you fail, there is always an answer.

I am completely agree with Winston Churchill, feel enthusiasm for what go next in our life is more excited than we all think and as humans, if we start to believe in ourselves and stay positive and start to dream and also understand that failure is part of our daily, we will become more successful with the knowledge to how life really works and that life is not too hard as we all been thinking. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
7F336F4B9442,"Yes,I agree failure plays in the pursuit of success. Some people when they fail they learn what they did wrong and next time they fix it. If they don't understand or learn from there mistakes. They can't get success in there life. If anyone did any mistake try to fix it. If you can't fix it. Get help from your family or your friends.

When i was in 9th Grade. I don't like math. Because i don't understand math question. I read my question and find mistakes. What i did wrong. Then i fix my mistakes. I do my work again and again. I do my work very hard. I ask my teacher about anything that i don't understand. She help me lat to learn math. Because i did my work hard now i get the success. Now i am good in math.

When i came in United State. I don't Speak and understand English. I made many mistakes to write the work or speak. I try my best and I learn English from my teachers from my friends. Any word i don't understand i look in dictionary. If i can't find word in dictionary i ask my teachers. I speak English at home with my brother and sister they fix my mistakes and its help me to speak better English.

Some people when they loss they don't try it again. Because they think that we are not good at this. Cause of that they can't get success. peoples who are around them they need to help them motivate them so they can try it again. like Sport coaches motivate there team before they match. When someone motivate other they get energy to do something. Don't be afraid to loss next time try with more power. Everyone loss in there life and they learn from that.

Reasons why people fail. Because no one understand them so they think that no one care about them. people need to understand other problems and help them. Tell them that you make this mistake try to fix this and you will be better.

When someone break his/her leg. Then he/she is so afraid to walk. because he/she think that it's very painful. Then someone help his/her put his/her hand on the shoulder. Then they slowly slowly put weight his/her leg. Like this you don't need to lose enthusiasm in your life. When you feel failure see other people read about them that how they fight when they fail.

Many American famous people loss in there missions but they don't loss there hope. They try it again and now we are read about them. Because they did many things. Thats help us make easy and fast to do our work or travel. Like Airplane, Electricity, Computers, Cars, and many others things.

Some people fail in there life. They try again but still they fail. So try something else that easy for you and you can make your life better. Like if you are not in a basketball try soccer or baseball. which one is easy for you. Choose that and do hard work on that. practice every day don't be lazy.

I want to say that do what ever do you want to do. But do that you are good in and easy for you. If you like another thing thats hard for you. do hard work on it and make easy for you. Don't lose enthusiasm. how this world work? help others then they will help you not all ways.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
C0B30026B439,"Something I would like to accomplish is being able to stop being so indecisive and to make the make the right choice on time, this is important because this skill would help me be fast on things I like to do, such as writing or trading items.

Main reason why I would like to accomplish being decisive, is because it effects the way I think, for example; ''What if I'm writing this essay, and I include some other thing that doesn't have to do anything with the prompt I'm meant to be writing about?"" Then, I erase everything and start again, I sit for more then 20 minutes and end up with the worst decision. I would like to accomplish being able to choose my best decisions fast enough, that I dont have to worry about it.

I been working on this for a long time time now, and it's not easy, I ask myself if it's this possible. Being able to decide for myself is important to me because I wont have to be asking people around me such as parents, teachers, or classmates to tell me if anything I do is good enough, and I'm always asking for opinions, ending up regretting for what i chose,

In the classroom is hard to concentrate on the assignments and tests because I will have tons of questions going around my head, when ever i can't decide for myself I end up dis concentrating and start to think about lots of different things.

In conclusion, Indecisive is a big problem and something I would like to accomplish by time goes on, and something I can do to change this is practice to stay with one answer and not change anything that comes to my mind first, but it takes practice.      ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
2299FA736E92,"Interviews... seems like that's the new way of teaching someone a job that one really wants to pursue and make a living out of. Not in our school, that's why we have the chance to get selected in internships or either shadowing opportunities for us to actually have the chance to work hands-on in the field of work that we want to pursue in life and do what we each student have an interest in. One reason i would like to be selected is because i would put one hundred percent of my attention and actually participate in all task we would have in the internships.

A reason i would like a shadowing opportunities is because i would like to see how a manager would deal with situations if a problem would ever happen when i would work. Shadowing would also be great for students would like to know how to make the job a little bit easier and faster to not waste time and sit around until a manager shows up and fixes the problem so they could start working again, that's why a shadow opportunities would be great to actually see how a manager would deal with a situation,

so then would later that we as interns would deal with the problems instead of calling a manager and waiting for him to solve it.

Shadowing is something i have never done before, i've always had interviews and get told that what i would be doing in a job that i applied for but have never really done it before getting hired to see if i would really would like the job i applied too, that's why our school gave us the chance to have the chance to be selected to be able to see if we would actually committed to the job we like and be ready to work.

In conclusion, i would like to say that i would be real eager to have the opportunitie to have an internship or either the chance shadow a manager and see him work the magic in the job that would interest me after college and thank you for giving the time to read my letter to you and hope to see if i was selected to have the chance, thank you.      ",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
BA71C09852E8,"Generic_Name is a student that just finished middle school and is getting prepared to start high school. He is really excited to find a career throughout high school and knowing which one would suit him best. Unfortunately after he told his parents, they were not amused with his response. Generic_Name was sad that his parents didn't encourage him and wasn't as excited to find a career as he was before. Although some people think that it is ridiculous for students to identify a career at a young age, they are wrong. Students with benefit in knowing to identify a career because this will improve their knowledge, learn new skills, and teaches them how to make their own decisions.

Students will be able to improve their knowledge whenever starting high school because this will get students to be prepared for any task at any time. Students are also going to be noticing that there are more opportunities throughout the school and have the option to choose what suits them best. Students can be able to notice that high school many students really improve from freshman year to senior year and can compare how much they really care about the students education. For example, Generic_Name is a sophomore and is looking at a career to become an English teacher, but he hasn't really improved as much in his English class. He talked to his English teacher about it and wanted to get tutored and really know how to become a teacher. In less than two months, Generic_Name has improved so much in English and is finally understanding what to do and feeling confident that in the future he will become a teacher. Students will also benefit at finding a specific career if they learn new skills.

Students will be able to learn so much throughout high school and especially learn new skills. Many students whenever they start high school they can learn new skills, for example: playing an instrument, playing a sport, or even learning how to cook. Students will also learn new basic skills, weather its Math, Science, or History. Students can also learn new skills if they could join a club or activities throughout the school. Students will have the opportunity to learn all of these skills and could really help them out to find a specific career. For example, Generic_Name is a senior and wants to find a career about becoming a guitarist, but his teachers were concern due to how magnificent he is with Technology and Science. Generic_Name wasn't really interested in those careers and has told his teachers that he wants to play for the world. The teachers we're upset with Generic_Name but understood that he made his decision and we're still happy and proud of him. Generic_Name was glad he finally found the perfect career for him and was very happy with it. Students will have the chance to make their own decisions in high school.

High school really wants students to make decisions and teach them that they are becoming young adults and need to understand that they can also make decision on their own. Students will be able to have the decision to go for a standard diploma or an advanced diploma. Students also have the opportunity on weather to choose to go to the army or work whenever they finish high school. Another decision students will get is what career will suit best for them. Teachers really help out students with finding the right and best career for students. For example, Generic_Name is a freshman and really wants to graduate with an advanced diploma. She is doing really well in all her classes and teachers are recommending her many careers. Generic_Name decides to go to see her counselor about which career would she enjoy best. Her counselor tells her that it is her decision on what does she really like to do and recommends her great careers. Generic_Name really struggles on what to choose but will sooner or later realize what she wants to do.

Students will be able to achieve more intelligence, learn more tasks, and open new opportunities for students to know how to identify a career. Generic_Name started high school and isn't too happy about it. He is doing decent in his classes but isn't feeling confident about finding a career, but one day whenever he got home his parents decided to find him careers and told him that they have all their support and will encourage him no matter what. Generic_Name is filled with joy and encouragement that he started to improve in his classes and is starting to find a career that knew that he would love and enjoy. He went to go talk to his counselor about careers and Generic_Name heard so many options he didn't know what to choose, but in the end he finally made up his choice and chose the career he know he would love.           ",3.5,4.0,4.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
526E417A97BD,"Many people tell me I have talent in soccer. For most of my years I trained to get better and better so I can become the best on my team. There were some faster players on my team and there still are. If you have ball control and skills you will be able to dribble past faster and stronger opponents. Also you will be able to hold the ball in your possession until someone opens up for a clear pass. Some skills I have are ball control, speed, agility, stamina, and dribbling.

I developed ball control by practicing and watching professional soccer players play. My dad knows drills to gain ball control he taught me how to do them. Then I started doing those drills 3 times a week. I knew I was making progress because I was keeping more possession of the ball during my games and practice. I was able to keep possession of the ball until my teammates got open for a good position to receive the ball.

Speed, agility, and stamina are some of the basic skills you need for this sport. For speed I did a lot of running, I would run at least 3 laps around the field for warm up with my brothers and dad. I also did many exercises for my leg muscles not too much weights because that would make my legs stiff. For agility I did some similar drills to the speed ones but faster movement and there are many different drills I also had to do with quicker pace. For stamina it was just a lot of running to get better at not getting tired too early and to be able to play for full 90 minutes of your game with enough energy.

I enjoy doing drills for dribbling because it's fun. My strongest skill in soccer is probably dribbling. I used to do a lot of drills for dribbling when I was new to the sport and I did more drills and got better and better each time. I would mostly play left mid because I was able to keep possession of the ball longer. Also when there's no one open to receive the ball or in a good position to receive the ball I would have to dribble through many players and I would go to the left corner so most of the defenders would come and try to get the ball leaving the striker open and making it easier for him to score and sometimes I dribble to the goal and try to score. Do you think you can work harder to achieve a goal?",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
8B9EEF86DD66,"Dear Principal,

I just want to let you know my opinion about not letting student who have less than a C in their grades participate in any of the activities. I think that it is right that you do that rule in our school because if you do, it might help the students understand that it is really important that they have good grades.

This may help the students but not only them it might help the teachers to. I think this because it will help the teacher because they will have more interest in teaching us the students because they will know that we may attention and not that we just play around in class. It will help the students because they will know that if they try hard to bring their grades up they will be able to participate in the activities.

So, I really think this will help us so that we may attention more to our grades. I think that this is important because I personally think that my grades are important to me and to my family. I think that yes you should do this rule that if you don't have more than a C you don't get to participate in any of the school activities that we have.

Sencerly, YOUR S",3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
68E75FD12673,"Have you ever been to a park ? Chances are you have, It doesn't matter what kind but you most certainly had fun right. Going to parks Is always fun, mostly because of the activities you do at the park to have fun. At the park you always find a fun activity to do, and people enjoy doing those fun activities because you get to play with other people, you are able to make new friends, and most of those activities can help you live a healthy life.

When people go to the park the tend to do fun activities, and most of the time they play those activities with friends and or other people. And when you play those activities with someone else you can have more fun. Another good reason for playing with someone else Is you also get to talk to them. And when you start playing with someone It could lead up to more people joining, and will make It even more fun. So remember when you go to the park try to bring a friend so you both can have lots of fun at the park.

People like going to the park to do fun activities, and when they go they often start to talk to new people. When they talk to new people theres a high chance of them becoming friends, So another reason why they enjoy the park Is they can make new friends. And who doesn't like to make friends, as a result they can meet up at the park and have fun together. And then they'll eventually make a more friendly status with each other. So going to park can be enjoyed in different ways, theres a chance you might just make a new friend.

Finally my last reason why people go to the park Is they can enjoy the park and the activities and also live a healthy life. You might not even notice that most of the activities we do at the park can be positive and help us with a healthy life. Its Is always a positive thing to live a healthy life you can do so much by keeping your life healthy. Thats why most people like going to the park you can have fun and be healthy at the same time. These were reasons why people like going to the park, plus who doesn't like the park.

People like going to the park for many reasons, and all of these reason were positive. Who doesn't want to play with friends or other people, who doesn't want to make new friends, or even have and live a healthy life. So If you hate parks just remember these reasons why you should go, It can make your like very happy.",4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
E0A8EBEE657B,"First impressions are almost impossible to change. Yes, I agree based on my own experience for me first impression is important. Because of how I see someone and feel someone by their energy.

For example I met my best friend other friend, the first time I saw her other friend I instantly like her. She was so sweet always giving me a good energy that I want for a person. She was so kind and love to smile, and she dress neatly. Her smile effect me she makes want to me smile, from that moment on I know that her and I could get a long.

Another example my seatmate, my first impression about him was a good one. Because he was just calm and his attitude is the same as mine. I see myself in him, him and I just get along well and his giving a good energy that I like for a person.

Another example first day of our club meeting, my club teacher paired me to someone that I don't know, For us to know who are other club members are to know each other. My first impression about her was not good, because she did not talk to me when I tried to talk to her. She gives me a bad energy that I don't like to a person.

Some people might disagree with me that first impressions are almost impossible to change, and some people might agree with me. I agree, because first impression are important to me it helps me to know instantly if I like the person that I just met or not. Some people might say or think that first impression does not matter, because you should know the person you just met more. Before you decide that when ever you like that person or not. And I would agree to that, but for me first impression are almost impossible to change, for my own opinion.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
AF9F53EC3673,"Everyone has a talent or skill. In my case, Its music. Although my music skills are still improving, I would still consider it a talent or skill.

I've learned to play different instruments such as: the guitar, percussion, xylophone, and the violin, which is what i'm currently playing. At first I joined chorus in 1st grade and finished in 5th grade. I really enjoyed it ,so I chose to learn an instrument, which ended with me joining band. In band, I learned how to play the recorder. I played it from 2nd grade to 3rd grade. After learning the recorder I switch instruments to a xylophone, that played during 4th grade.

Since I didnt really like playing the xylophone, I chose to do percussion for 5th grade. I was also learning the guitar during 4th grade through 5th. when I entered middle school I decided to turn things around by choosing to do orchestra. I learned everything I had to know in 6th grade ,so I was ready to play the violin in 7th grade. I really felt passionate about the violin so I kept playing ,and still am ,and yet will continue until high school.

My music skills can be useful at times, for example: my parents once asked me to play a song for their wedding, they thought it was marvelous. Last year, I sang a song ,that I composed, for my sisters' birthday. She really enjoyed it. I like participating in music contests, concerts, etc. This year I went to New York for a violin concert, it was amazing.

My music skills have yet to improve, but until then I will continue trying new ways of music.",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0,3.5
9DD22B9D10F4,"Technology is taking over the world! There is now less human contact. People may think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive effects on their lives, but that is false. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people's lives because it impacts their health in a negative way and people get too dependent on technology.

Health is very important, but people take good health for granted; To begin with, technology may impact individuals health in a negative way. For example, people's vision might get blurry and people that are looking down at their electronic devices impacts their neck position. Furthermore, people may slouch down when they are using a computer. This is important because people need to be more aware of what can effect their health in a horrible way.

The use of technology is phenomenal, people use it in their every day lives. Therefore, individuals get too dependent on technology; For instance, Individuals use technology to communicate with others and they use it for location. In addition to that, people use technology to educate themselves. Although those are beneficial perks, it causes people to be too dependent on technology. This is important because instead of people completing tasks with technology, they can easily do it themselves. To illustrate, if people want a snack they can walk down to the store and buy it instead of ordering it online

People think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has positive effects on their lives since people with no available transportation can order online or if others live in a area that is dangerous, they can order online to receive the things that they want to be safe; However, technology has a negative impact since it makes people risk their health. In conclusion, the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on people's lives because it can possibly impact their health in a horrible way and people get too dependent on technology, but they use it to help themselves.",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0
2716F5E20A4F,"The students be required to take music ,drama ,or an art class. is important all the student to this to class because is a element important for all students., also is part the education and many people, I like for the music and art. other like drama . The people dont not like, but is necessary to take this class because is big formation very important and can't be graduated learning somethings .

The class the music to help a relax , and class the drama is a part of fundamental , the class of art is more creatividad leaning some different thing ,.

The art is very good class because used to creatividad and used to things and of head practice the things.

music the arrangement of sounds made by music instruments or voice, the class the drama is example when exposed a history

I make the paper for author is draticamatica and when leaning a book after has why explicalor about the history of book.

all the class is very important because learning many things .

drama and art of the same class because used many creatividad both class and thing more the normal but to help for to connocimient about this class .,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ",1.5,1.0,1.5,1.0,1.0,1.5
1D47271C213D,"The students must be self- confident in order to succeed. I agree that hard work helps to build self-esteems because students must have faith in their own abilities, they have to learn from their mistakes, and be proud of them achievements. That's why students can not be conform with insufficient work just to be admired by teachers or parents. Also, to able to be successful always needs high standards.

Even though, parents and teachers decide to praise the students by giving them gifts or other things. It can motivate the students but there is some days were people are not in a good mood and forget to praised the students. That's how students can't continue with the same motivation and loose confidence. For example, my Probability Statistics math class she used to gave us candy every single day so we never try to do our classwork, everybody failed her class.

Several students make mistakes while they are trying to accomplishing something and they give up when they don't have an easy solution. In reality that is when they are used to be treated with extreme indulgence. Of course, it doesn't matter how many mistake they make; it matters to continue believing in them self. Eventually, my friend Generic_Name came from Generic_City, she used to go to

Susbury University it was difficult for her to learn English she also failed three classes. But she did not care how many times she failed. She believe in herself and she achieved her goal now she is an ESL teacher.

How does people becomes doctors or professionals? some people don't have their parents alive or they are far away from each other so they don't have nobody to praised them. From my opinion, they should be proud of them self. All the effort, dedication, passion for the school and they don't need somebody to award them to be trust. But also, it's not easy for the students to succeed in this world unless they want to work for it. Everybody can notice when they gain something beneficial for their life and be satisfied with them great effort. From my own experience, my biology teacher it was very strict that she screamed at my face the first day of the semester but I showed her that I'm better what she thought I was. So I passed her class with an average of 80 and I also passed the SOL.

Finally, when the students are comfortable from what they already accomplished, it's when they have a great opportunity to build them self-esteems. They do not need to be pushed with emotional things to able to be confident, If they get emotional later on, they wouldn't be able to continue without being praised. Some people do not survive when they don't get to achieved, then they complain on someone who don't give presents. Self-esteems always comes from achievements never comes from praising. ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,4.0
2B0888CD4C15,"I'm agree because the attitude is important in your life.

The attitude is very important because is your behavior with the another pople, when you talking with one person he go see your attitude, if you have nice attitude he go thinking he is a nice person because he have respect and his attitude is nice and humble, and he go want to talk more with you because your attitude is good, if another day you see that person he go want talk with you again.

For example you go to talk with you father love for first time, the first thing he go see about you is your attitude, respect, and he go said he is a good man for my doughther because his attitude is good he have respeect he is a nice person he will be proudo of you for your good attitude and kindness. He will have confidence in you and respect, the attitude is important if you want respect you need learning respect to the another people and nice attitude.

When one day you have children you have to teach them to do some good people to each them good things to do people and to have a good attitude with the people is the most important thing with a good attitude your children can be good people they wiil learn how beutiful life is when they learn how to have a good attitude and respect people and you will be proud of yourself because you did a good job of giving your children a good education. the attitud it is the key of life.

Attitude is the main basis of life you have to learn to have a good attitude if you have an attitude the people around you consider a good person of values because you know how to express yourself with people and you know how to speak and have a humble attitude. Many of today's people don't have a good attitude, their attitudes are not good, they don't have respect, so people don't know how to express themselves by talking to people about any subject so be kind person who knows how to respect people regardless of age and above all your attitude always has to be humble and respecful what the people they knows how your are a good person and they go to have respect for you all the time. Respect and Attitude is the key in this life Remember these are the most important things you have to know how to use them and especially learn them that way all the children in the world have to go to school to learn and know these important things in this life the education is the most important thing for your life the attitude always has to be the most important always be a humble person above all and respectful.    ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
7797541CF0A6,"The succes is what people really want all the time, but it is not easy at all. Sometimes we have to pass throught dificults situationt to get to the sucess. Each person want to be succesful in life, but to get what we really want, we have to be positive with the head up. We dont have to put ourselves in an unconfortable situation because it won't help us to get the succes that we want. It just going to help us to go through the way of failure. Not all the time going to be easy. We must have to fail a lot of time, it help us to see what we are doing wrong, and what we have to change to get what we want. We just have to keep going with enthusiasm and believe in ourselves. The sucess help to the people to be someone in life.

We can see in our everyday how hard is life, and how we have to strive ourselves to get the sucess, but we can see that there are obstacles and we have to know how to pass through it. Life is hard, but nothing is imposible if we have already planned what we want. Sometimes we dont get the result on what we have been worked. But nothing can be hard at all, we have to know that all is posible, we dont have to take it as imposible. One example that we can see in our everday are the students in the university. Not all of them have the support of the family to cover the cost to pay the the clas in the university. Some of them have to work to get the money and pay their study. Some of them have to fail because it's not easy to do at lot of things at the same time, but we can see that they keep going through it, doesn't matter what. To get the sucess we have to work and just focuss on what we want. At the end we can see the result. We must have to fail a lot of time, but we have to have in mind that we can do it. The people who graduate, at the end they remember how hard it was. But they believed in theirselves and also keeped their head up with enthusiasm, and learned of each mistake that they had done in the way to the sucess.

Other example can be the student from other country in high school, at the end of each year the student have to do a test of each subjet they have. But is not easy fo them because not all of them speak english, they have to learn a lot and out themselves in a hard situation to do it. They have to effort a lot themselves, some of them have to fail like three time to pass the test. But they know that nothing is imposible if they believe in themselves. They know that they have to take tests to graduate, we can see the hispanic student in Generic_School, they have to take the ESOL test each year but they have to study a lot because their first language that they know is spanish, and they just have been in this country in a little while. For some of them the situation is hard, but at the end we can see them in their way to graduate and how proud they are of themselves because it's not easy to learn english.

Also, we can see the organizations that want to help to the people who doesn't have nothing, they have to do a lot of thing and have to be prepare because no one know if they gonna get what they want. The goverment and other institutions have to aprove the organization and one of the best examples is Shakira and her fundation ''Pies Descalso"", she wants to help to the children with the eduation, and alimentation. She had to do a concert to get the money to start with her fundation, she has been in hard situation but she always believed in herself. We can see today how she had changed the life of millions of children around the world, how bennefitted with education and alimentation they are. child from poor families are now someone in life, some of them are in the university. All can be hard but never imposible. She accomplish her dream, doesn't matter what. In her way, were obstacle and difficults things. But she didn't give up because of that.

People have to know that doesn't matter what they can achive what they really want and keep going in their way to the sucess. Nothing in life going to be easy but they have to know that dreams can come true. They must have to fail a lot of time in the persuit of sucess. But they have to know that nothing going to be in the way they want but they can keep going until they can achive their purpose. Doesn't mattter how many time they have to fail, if they want to be someone in life they have to know that the way have a lot of surprices but thay have to have in their mind that nothing is imposible if they see that situation in that way. We all can be succesful in life, we just have to belive in ourselves and keep in mind that no one can make us feel less than them, we all are equal, we all have dreams and we all can achieve what they want in life to be successful.                ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
E362F08345FE,"students should be required to perform community serves like by helping clean the school and the parks, and the students can also help other students with there homework ' it is very important to help the community, but many people don't know it and i think that it is a very good idea to have a talk with people about all the thing that they can do to help out also it is a nice idea to talk to parents all the thing that we are trying to do with all of this and so they can get some students entreated and helping'

to ; STUDENT_NAME",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0
BE1B8DAE1D75,"Does finish high school in three years it's a good idea? or it's better the traditional four years of high school? Finish high school early it's a good idea for most of the students. However, in other cases students preffer the traditional four years of hihg school because in that way they are allow to take all the clasess that they need to be more prepared for their future.

Finish hihg school early can be a good idea to star thinking about the future. For example, it can help you to mature faster and take the rihgt decisions about what do you want to do the rest of your life and how you want to live. Also, this can help you to chose the college that you want to go and be more focus on your future and find the job that you want. Finally, it's a good oportunity to star working and make money and at the same time to overcome challenges in the future.

Finish high school early it's a big oportunity to be someone in life and working at the same time will help you a lot, start living your own life one year younger than others can help you to see the real world and it can be a good experience. As a result, you can make proud your family and show others that finish high school one year early it's not a bad idea if you work very hard. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
ED6070D470FF,"I despise it when someone your close to says ""you can't be like me you have to be better than that."" What right do you have to speak on what I have done, when you have done things people could not even imagine? This is why when it comes to someone you look up too or base your personality off of, make sure it is one who has credibility. Like people always say ""you are who you hang around with."" For example, being around friends who act in illegal activities your bound to do those things too. A man with honor, integrity, and takes responsibility for what he does will be respected because of his behavior.

Being a good role model is especially true when it comes to children. For example, have you ever had a little cousin or your bestfriend's baby sibling copy the same exact words that come out of your mouth? Be careful what you talk about around a kid because they repeat what you say; furthermore, it might not seem like it, but they can process everything you say. This is how in parts of the country people have various accents and pronounce words differently. When you grow up in a certain neighborhood or even in you household, while aging you will be using the different terms and phrases people around you use because that's all you ever known growing up. So staying away from words that can't be used in a school or around familly is your best bet.

A celebrity has an even greater audience when it comes to setting an example for others. People of all types of ages watch them, they are the ones who set the trends, the news revolves around, and control social media. When a celebrity messes up they get the most hate; however, if a celebrity does a great deed like a charity event then they're praised for it. They attract the most attention and most of those eyes are teenagers, who need the most advice and a figure to follow. For teenagers this is who decides for them if they'll be on the streets or in the books because famous people are who they spend most of their time with. Teenagers are always watching, whether on social media, a reality show, a sports game, or a movie, celebrities are dominating the world right now.

No mater who it is, a person always have some type of influence on somebody. That is why you should just hold that anger in next time you get in a fight because people are watching. Do some charity or show them you cleaning up the environment; in addition, just effect others in a positive way. However some would say setting example does not matter or no one pays attention to that, it is suprising how many people are effected by a person's behavior. Showing a good example with behavior does not necessarily mean change who you are, it just means be careful of the words that are exiting your mouth. No one would want their own kid to be effected by a bad role model.      ",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
F45967CEFA55,"Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill stated a quote that said, ""success consists of going from failure to failure with out loss."" There are 3 reasons why I agree with this statement. The first reason is, failing will want to make you push for a success, the second reason being that you'll have more of enthusiasm when you're find more ways to succesed, and the third reason is achiving for higher goals.

I agree strongly with this prompt and Winston Chruchill's quote, yet some people think it's something at may not be true and think less of them self. In the first paragraph I will explain my first reasoning with a strong example of it.

First, reasoning to this prompt would be, falling will want to make you push for success. Even though not many people think that is the way that many of our past inventors had learned. Albert Enstine was one of the smartest people out there, yet he had come face to face with failure many times in his life. The only way he learned was to try many other different ways to solve his problems. He used failure as an insperation to to keep trying like our first inventor of the light blub. Even though many people found it frusterated and diffivult when they've failed, which pushes on to my second reasoning.

Next, the reason would be that many people think different about them selfs when they fail in something. Thomas Edison thought different, even though he had failed 100 times, he had not gave up. When he finally successed, he said a quote that is in my mind till today in this presnet day. That quote was ""I didn't fail 100 times, I found 100 ways that it didn't work."" Even though, Thomas Edison had failed he maintaned him self with a lot of enthusiasm, Failure is never an option, but finding a solution to it is a success.

Finally, the last and final reason is achiving for high goals that you want to reach. It don't matter what others may think of it or if you'll be able to achive or not. Show them that they are wrong even if you come to a failure don't stop, find a solution and fix it to make it better than before. You'll reach higher goals with higher potential then what you'll ever imagine. Then later on you will be able to do anything you put your mind to and demonstrate your knowlage to the world.

In conclusion, doubting yourself is not how you achive your success. Finding a way to solve it is achive your success. Get the insperation from the people who had once been in your spot and they done to successed to there goal. Even if failure is a role in life to find success it's the only way youll reach it. Failure is only a motivation to get you to successed.",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
CB34AD33CAEB,"Playing an instrument is fun because it can a hobby for the people who are just starting. For example, A piano is used for many types of music. Such as Smooth jazz, Rock, Orchestra, Rap and much more. Pianos requires a great amount of practice and knowing all the keys to create a good music at a play with the audience amused. Professional piano players gets most people's attention by knowing the right keys for the music that the piano players are playing. In addition, There are many tutorials of how to play the piano and learning the right key on social media to begin or improve your piano skills, due to technology. As a result, Pianos has been used frequently in the 1960's for music and people still listen to it everyday in the radio in their automobile. But sometimes Smooth jazz with a piano in the background is played at a cafe and restaurants to relief the stress that people are having in their personal lives. But there are way more instruments than just the piano.

A saxophone is fun to use and its kind of similar to a piano according to the similarity of what music type the instrument is used on, except for rock, rap, and maybe orchestra. The saxophone is famously known by smooth jazz, jazz, and night jazz and night jazz are commonly used in New York cafes at night and other states. Next, the saxophone is similar to a trumpet, trombone, and tuba by blowing on the top part of the saxophone and at the same time using your both of your hands to make a rhythm. However, an electric piano has more than 20 buttons of instruments to choose from. It has guitar, trumpet, flute, clarinet, and even a saxophone for a different sound for the keys just for the people who want to change their style. In addition, Saxophones can be taught in music class in middle school, high school, or just a music school in general. It takes a couple of years to practice for beginners or couple of months to practice a new music for experts. But if you master a saxophone, thats where the fun part starts. You can create relaxing jazz instrumentals for people to listen to for meditation and stress relieving. And you can also be well known for doing those kinds of stuff. But, there is a last instrument that is really famous and also really fun to use.

There are different types of guitars to choose from dealing with music. The acoustic guitar is one of the most calm sounding guitars in the world because it is used to make sad music and also relaxing. This guitar is fun to use by learning how to know which strings you should use first in order to make a good song or music with a acoustic guitar in the background. Next, the distorted guitar is mostly well known by rock and heavy metal. These guitars need to be plugged on an amplifier for it to work and they are loud. But thats what heavy metal fans like such as Intensity. The clean guitar is mostly used for country music and soft rock. This is another type of guitar that people really like the rhythm and can listen to it nonstop. These three types of guitars are very different and attracts people's taste of music because some people are different.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
136B3124BE79,"In my opinion the students can't go to college when they are too young, they don't have too much experience, those societies have to accept the reason why they are too young to think about a career, they cannot expected something that is different just think about it, the reason they are young it doesn't mean they can have a though about their career yet.

1, They don't have too much experience.

ex: When your'e in school the only thing that you have to think is in your grades, and your classes ,so that's why your experience is not count because there is no experience for it.

2. They are too young to think to go college.

ex: Sometimes your age counts a lot when your'e thinking about college because when you are older you can think clear what you want for your future.

3. Not every student have any plan to college some of them can go. but other student have different thoughts.

ex: No all of the students likes go to school. so they cannot have though like have plan to take a career..

Students of high school can't expect what they want for their future, this can make harder the things because students can already start to think about college that can make more complicated, each student is different some of them want a career other don't wanna go to college they just want get a work and get money, so is impossible all the student want go at college when are too young. The experience always have point because if you don't know what you want for your future, it can make more difficult the things. Everything has to be less desperate, because your are young can a have lot of options at end. ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
473FF163E44A,"_Yes i think yes its can by a benefit to attend classes from home because many students come late in the school and the teachers sometimes they mark they students are absents or late, but may the school can give the opportunity to who work or to who need it because many student we are working in at the night and sometimes we see many of they students sleep in classes.

_But if we attend classes from home that will by better because we will sleep more time at home and we will don't come at the school every day or wake up the same time all day, but the teachers will by attent for their students who has take their classes from home to send their work or to help they students when they don't understand or sometimes we stock to do or how to do and then the teachers will by help.

_But is a bad idea to because many students are may don't wants to doing all they work at home because they knowing they are home and when we are home we prefer doing others things except the school work and that can by a problem when we take the test because many students can fail their test, because in home we can find the answers in internet or anywhere but when we are in the school every day we can't use our phone or anything to find the answers because the teachers wants to test us what are we know or what we are need to know to by better and to resolve all you'r work in you'r own idea may the teaher can give you some ideas or examples or explain how you can do it but is diferent like when you finding the answer in internet because the internet can give you all the answer and yuo will be no learn nothing because it's just copy what are you see except with the teachers you learn more because they tell to you to try to do it in your own and you have an idea to what are you going to do.

_And it can by hard for the students to graduate because can affect they attend in the school and will many students going to skiping because they can come in the school but they can leave early because they can find a excuse to to leave and to do the attendece at home or just skiping classes and don't doing nothing. Well it okay to come in the school every day because if one has attend in home then all students wasts to have attend at home ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
4C0ECF107EC5,"Yes, is a good idea because if high school selected to guide them towerd a specific career, because we can see how difficult be, or if be easy to go the college, however, is good idea, because you can see if you are soure of want the specific career, or you want change for other career, because some time the career you want is be difficult and you can`t do it. So we can have ideas how the college be, so if the high school put the this opcion be great, because when you finished the high school you really have a idea what you want to pick for the college or what career you want to take.

Some time was make difficult to pick the class or the career because din`t have ideas, so with this opcion is be great because we have ideas how take a college class.

When you are not soure what you want to pick for you career, this is a good opcion, because be help you to know how college is.

Is good idea, because the estudents be really have a idea how the college is, and when the estudents be have to go to the college be going with some ideas, and the estudents really know how the college or the class is, because they were had ideas from the high school.

I agreement with this opcion becuase is be helper for all the estudents, this is be helper for when we have to go the college or university, and you really know what talk about or what going on. This opcion is be great, becuase at a young age, they know somethink about the college, and when they be have to go the college or university they remind what laernd in the high school, so this be helper to all estudents becuase is be good think. When the estudent going to the college they going wiht ideas or think, so that is more easy because they have a somentink mind and that is be great.",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
B0D627CB7309,"The American jazz legend Duke Ellington said ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best."" I believe that the meaning that this quote was trying to convey is that when we are faced with a problem it does not matter how challenging that problem is we must use it as a chance try our best. Sometimes a lot of things can happen unexpectedly but we must believe in ourselves that a problem could be an opportunity to try our best, it might also prepare us for bigger problems in the future. Although sometimes we might experience difficulties while trying to solve that problem in our lives we just have to keep on giving it our best to overcome it.

When we are faced with a problem it does not matter how challenging the problem is we must use it as a chance to try our best. Completing a group project, homework, or writing an essay are one of the few examples that can represent how sometimes it doesn't matter how big the problem is we must try our best. Finishing a group project, homework might seem as though it would be something that could be completed without difficulty it does take a bit of an effort for some people. However these people keep on trying because they want a good grade or don't want to fail class. This might apply to people that are still in school but being responsible and completing all of this work might prepare them for their future careers.

Sometimes a lot of things can happen unexpectedly but we must believe in ourselves that a problem could be an opportunity to try our best, it might also prepare us for bigger problems in the future. For example athletes, athletes sometimes sustain injuries while playing and have to recover. These injuries are not easy to recover from as it could damage a part of their body that could possibly prevent them from playing for some time. To overcome these problem athletes train a lot and use it as an opportunity to train and rest more to be in a good condition before finally playing with the rest of their team. These shows how sometimes you have to take advantage of something an use it as something to try your best on.

Although sometimes we might experience difficulties while trying to solve that problem in our lives we just have to keep on giving it our best to overcome it. Occasionally we encounter difficulties while trying to find the solution to a problem in our lives an example of this could be having to give a speech in front of a large audience. Some people t don't like speaking in front of a large group of people this can be a problem in their lives. These people have to be able to control their nervousness, something that could be hard to control. These people try hard to overcome a problem that is stopping them from doing certain things.

All of this examples represent how sometimes we're faced with problems that can be difficult to let go off. I think that the meaning of the quote is something important as it can apply to certain situations that are rather difficult. This quote shows us how sometimes there a certain problems in our lives that can be very difficult but we should try hard and do our best. I believe that there a lot of problems that we can learn from because sometimes while trying to solve those problems we make mistakes and we can learn form those mistakes and move on. I agree with this quote ""A problem is a chance for you to do your best"" I think its describes how sometimes we need somethings to happen in life that will makes us want to try harder to achieve our goals. ",4.5,4.5,4.5,4.5,5.0,5.0
973B1ACD7430,"Imagine going to a school that has a longer student release time then any other school, imagine feeling tiered and restless everyday you come home from school, well the school board is about to make that ""dream"" happen for this school.

The school days should not be extended because most of the students will not have a plesent time spending more hours in school, for example most students at the end of the school day feel tiered and they just want to go home and sleep, if an extra hour gets added to the school day most of the students will be angry and agitated.

A second reason why an extra hour shouldn't be added is because it will be confusing for parents, it will be confusing for parents because most parents have a specific time that they pick up their kids and when the time changes for the students release, parents will get confused and it will be a disaster.

A finial reason why an extra hour shouldn't be added is because after school courses will be longer, this will be a issue for after school buses because they will have to change their whole schedule for picking up students in the afternoon.

In conclusion, students shouldn't have to have an extra hour added to their school days, and the school board should keep everything the same. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
5FEB3F213A84,"Have you ever wondered how people are really good at playing an instrument? Have you ever thought what is used to make an instrument sound soft, low, and/or relaxing? Well I've found a really good instrument that might seem easy but its actually difficult to learn and to play in front of judges.

One of the most played and enjoyed instrument in a educational schools, concerts, and even TV shows is a ""Violin"". Violins are a really enjoyable and interesting to watch. But have you ever thought how hard it could be for a person to learn the music and strings? Well learning the music it's hard for some. Mostly if you don't know what string plays what. The most easiest strings for people are the ""D"" and ""A"" strings. These strings are mostly used in every sheet of music you get.

Movies play a lot of orchestra music. Not just regular music but ""Action"" movies. Why you might ask, well when a intense part starts the movie plays a soft violin. When the movie is getting more closer to the part they play 2nd violin, Chello and Bases. Chello and bases are loud and deep reasons why movies like to play them a lot. Have you ever went to a Orchestra concert near by? Well if you have you probaly know how loud they get.

Well a side from Orchestra Violins playing in movies, orchestra also has their own assesment every school year. An ""Assesment"" is basically were a orchestra teacher gets to pick 30 students from their advance class and take them on a mini ""field trip"" representing the grade level and school's orchestra. What students basically do is play in front of professional judges from different counties. They rate your performance from 1 being the best, to 5 being the worst. That's basically what a violin and orchestra classes have.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.0
EA857E7CEFD9,"I disagree with my school adding one and a half more hours for these reasons there is no time for after school activities, going to have to give the teachers more, and your going to have to face a lot of students sleeping in class because lets admit it school is kind of boring.

One reason the school board shouldnt add one and a half more hours is because there will be no time for after school activities. For example if Generic_Name has soccer practice anymore. Another example is if Generic_Name hosts computer club she cant host it because there is no time for hosting her club. Another example is if they and one hour and a half then there would be no time to have fun at school.

The second reason the school board should not add one hour and a half is because your going to have to give the teachers more money for the extra hours. An example is that if there child is sick and they need to pick them up but they cant because they are teaching. Another example is if Generic_Name is the boss of the school board and the extra one hour and a half she is going to have to do extra work so she make sure that everyone gets there pay check. Another example is teachers are going to have to make sure they have enough work for the extra time and plus they have to grade all of the work the students do. The last example is that the bell schedule will be different and the people who work are going to do a lot of work to schedule lunch and everything.

Another reason i disagree with my school adding one hour and a half more time is that the teachers are going to have to face a lot of tied and sleeping students. Another example is if half of the students are sleeping and tiered there is no point of teaching them because they are likely not going to do work or forget everything they learned that day. Another example is that the teachers will be angry from all the students with their heads down because they are tiered. Another example is that students and teachers have family and places to be. Another reason there shouldnt be one hour and a half is that everyone has their schedules like for example shower,homework,eat,sleep and they wont have time to do all of their schedule

This is why i disagree with my school adding one and a half more hours for these reasons there is no time for after school activities, going to have to give the teachers more, and your going to have to face a lot of students sleeping in class because lets admit it school is kind of boring.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
B5FFED1536FE,"I disagree with Emerson because if they have already mastered, and they still want to try something new, it's good for them, and they will grow up by the time they figures out what they want to know more.

While you already mastered, it doesn't means you known everything in life. Emerson wrote, ""Unless you try to do something..."" You should doing something more than what you have known. For example, ""You want to study more languages than other people and they keep telling you not to do it."" The reason they say it because they think if you good in one thing, you should only focus on that things and try to do as good as you can, but if you are a person who are interesting in many thing, you shouldn't listen to them. Keep follow what you are interesting and try to do it. If you want to know more than a languages or want to try to do something not your domain and you have no skill in that things, you should try to learn what you're interest, and try to talk to a person who is speak a language you are interesting, and asking a person who have known about the domain you are interesting, and try to do your best in that thing. If you're a person know one thing and only focus on that thing, sometimes it good because you are so good in that thing and you can help other people what you good, but it also not good because you don't know anything except your master degree. When you're interesting in many things, people can't despise you. If you try to do the domain it's not your skill just try as much as you can to study that, then ask for help to somebody good in that domain.

Eventhough if you are a person who don't have any interest in other thing, you're still good but keep in mind if you want to do something not in your master degree, it will be challenge you because you are not know anything about that domain. However, try something new beyond your mastered will help you, and it's good while you are a person have a lot of dream and you're keep follow your dream and don't listen you other people against what you are interest.    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.5
88FD7FAAFA90,"Some school require students to complete summer projects. This is a great idea, and it would be better if the students would be able to pick the topic. One of the reasons is students know what interest them more. Second they would put more effort and time on the project. finally studenst inprove there skills when writing something they enjoy.

To start with, summer projects should be student designed. Students should be able to pick their topic do to they know what interest them and what doesnt. For example, Generic_Name a student at Generic_School was given a project about sea animals. Generic_Name doesnt know nothing about marine animals and has no interest on the project. Therefor, Generic_Name has no idea what to say and its not in his interest. Furthermore, Generic_Name will be in summer break it would be less stressful to talk bout a topic he likes instead of a boring one the teacher would give out. Also the students would put more effort and time to the project.

Secondly, by the student knowing what he likes and his strength they'll aim for that A on the project. Students alfound do poorly on school project due to the topic they were given. For example, Generic_Name was given the topic to right about sports Generic_Name. Generic_Name has never done sports her self so there she has no interest on it. Generic_Name will do the project and get finished on time but, did not put time and effort to do her best. Undoubtedly, students do better on a topic they all feel good about.

Finally the students will enjoy doing the project. Statistics show that when students write about something they like, they tend to improve in both reading and writing skills. For example, Generic_Name was able to right about a topic she likes, therefor, she enjoyed writing and improved her skills in reading and writing. Generic_Name enjoyed doing this project that she added more information about the topic. undauntedly, students summer project should be student designed.

Despite this valid reasons there are does who think teacher should pick the topic. How ever they are wrong. Because students should be able to enjoy writing, and with the prompts the teacher gives out they just get stress out. Unquestibily, summer projects should be studenst desinged.

To close up studenst will gain knolege and enjoy writing. They will aslo do better in the project do to is in there best interest. And finally a summer project should be fun not boring. ",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0
01B3FDB3FD57,"Scientist Albert Einstein once said, ""Imagination is more important than knowledge."" Now imagine yourself as a beginning engineer, sitting at your desk, aggravated because you can't come up with a new invention. All you have around you are textbooks but no image or thought of what your invention may be. If only you could imagine a new invention of some sort then maybe you could build something. But with no imagination, how can you build knowledge? I agree with Einstein's quote. I believe imagination is more important than knowledge.

I agree with Einstein's quote because having imagination is how we've had all our inventions yet. Without imagination how were many of the things we own invented? For example, the telephone. The telephone couldn't have been invented without someone imagining a device where you could communicate without leaving your home. You need imagination in order to make new things. Another example would be the camera. Whoever invented it, had to have imagination in order to think of a device that captures any moment almost in an instant. Even I, as a student, need imagination in order to make new things. For example, when making an essay, such as this one, I need to imagine of a good story hook that goes along with the prompt.

Furthermore, I believe in Einstein quote because without imagination, knowledge is almost useless. For example, when learning a new vocabulary list. You may know all the definitions but you can't put them in your own words or use the words in different instances. Why? Because you can't imagine it. You can't picture it, you just know the definitions. Another example is when reading a book. Knowing how to read isn't even near of what you need to fully comprehend a book. You need to imagine it. Picture the story in your mind in order to fully understand the book's theme, setting and tone.

Lastly, I agree in Einstein's quote because without imagination, all our decisions would be made carelessly. For instance, before you speak or move, most of the time you imagine what the outcome of that action will be. If not, the outcome won't be for the better. Another instance is when in an experiment, you hypothesize what the result of the experiment will be. That takes imagination. When signing a contract, it's needed to imagine the consequences of signing and not signing the contract. In other words, you need to imagine things before you decide to take them on. Knowledge isn't the only thing that will help you when making decisions.

In conclusion, Einstein's quote is correct in my perspective. Knowledge isn't the most important factor to have, imagination is key to everything you do and will do. You can't fully understand most things without imagining them. Can't go on inventing things before imagining them first. Also, you won't be able to make good decisions before imagining the outcome. All in all, imagination is also how you'll enjoy your life. Knowledge is great and all but it can't bring others as much happiness as imagination can. It's how we've been happy for all these years. Imagination is how we have gone so far in this world and how much we've survived.                 ",4.0,4.5,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.5
D8FCB1AB9867,"Student should commit to a career at young age they will save more money, and they will independet at young age also they can work and study at the same time when they get out from High School it would to be more easier that career they want to take and you have that help of the teachers during freshman year until you finish high school. When you want to become someone on this life you got to do whatever you have to do no matter if you need to work and study at the sametime. But if you want a good career you need to start at young age some people leave their family right after they finish High school. However for people who was independet during high school they already know how life is and it would be more easier to to leave their family,sometimes parents they don't allow you to live in another state or country because they say that you are the only daughter or son but what i said you got to do whatever you got to do to do someone on this life. For example some parents are immingrant on this country and they did not have the opportunity that you have now so,they need to undesrtand that you want to make them pround and let you be who you want to be on this life.

Also you always have the support of the teachers during High school they will always going to push you foward it would make your future more easy because they will give you choices of that career that you want to take and help you on your classes if you are not passing a class they will give you homework to get your grades up at the end of the year you ready to the next step. School is your second home becuase school will take you to your goal, teachers are you support if you don't have support from your family, but you got support from your good friends,and teacher. Otherwise if you don't have support from your family do never stop looking for your goals because than they will be proud of you,sometimes family give you their back when you most need a support from your own blood,but sometimes you don't have any support from them and makes you sad,depresed. But at end of the day you have your teacher that they will never let you make you stop from who you want to be. That's why is a good idea to to identify a career by the time they enter high school.

In conclusion,age doesn't matter to make a dream,there's many reasons to stop your goals but do never let anything or any person stop your goal but you always going to have a support of your teacher and family,sometime you might not have any support but never stop doing what you want to be because at the end of the day you will be proud of yourself.",4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
30A7E68EFC88,"My position is this argument is that behind every success there is a failure. It's important to understand that failure is not something bad its just something in the way of your success. These are my opinion on what i thing about. these paragraphs that you are about to look at have a mixer of things from hard working to failure just a little background of what you are about to read.

Starting a company can be really hard because there are a lot of failure that you'll have to go through to get to success. Because you won't be a big company from the start you have to built up to have a big company. For example the company apple it started in a garage and now its one of the biggest company to be know. Failure is just something that's in the way of you becoming successful. Because what it takes is hard work that you need to put into your company or whatever you are trying to be successful at. If not someone else that's trying to get the some thing as you will get it before you. Because you did not work hard enough

Becoming successful in something is a hard thing. Because of other people can be trying to do the same thing you are trying to do and sometimes not everyone is successful because of someone else that worked hard then them of the successes. Being the best at what you do is difficult because people are going to bring you down those are failure because they hate on your successes and what you have accomplished.

Working hard on something that you on you'll be successful in because if not other people that are on the same race as you trying to be successful are working more harder then you are going to be more successful because of the hard work they put in. If you are starting a company try to be the best at what you are doing because that's the only way you'll be successful because you are the best at what you are doing and no one else can't beat you to the top.

My position is this argument is that behind every success there is a failure. It's important to understand that failure is not something bad its just something in the way of your success. Those are my opinion on the argument ",2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
9EC4A16802BF,"I believe music, drama, or art class should be classified as electives because some students might not be interested in these classes due to them are wanting to learn more about other subjects, consequently failing; furthermore, students may also have an interest in a certain job and do not need these classes, students can also find these classes a waste of time because they are learning a subject that is not aiding their future, students would also not take these classes serious because they are not necessarily an essential.

First, Students may find that the class is not of interest to them because they may want to learn about other subjects that could impact their future. Due to the students dissatisfaction and not being interested in the class they have a high probability for failure. For example, Generic_Name wants to reach his goal of going to a high end college but was not accepted because he had a GPA lower than the minimum requirement due to failing drama class.

Second, Students can also have an interest in a certain job. Music, drama, or art can be a waste of time for the student because it is taking time from classes that can help towards getting that job. Taking these classes could also help the student explore more possible job opportunities as well as learning skills.

Lastly, Some students would not take these classes serious. As oppose to essential classes like math, English, and history students would use these classes as an opportunity to horseplay. The students that are constantly participating in horseplay are going to be a distraction to the students trying to succeed in these subjects.

In conclusion, I believe music, drama, and art should classify as an elective because students may find that the class is not of interest to them, students can also have an interest in a certain job, and some students would not take these classes serious and take it as an opportunity to horseplay. Support our opinion on this subject at www. MakeLearningEasier. org",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
1BEADE7B4160,"Generic_Name

English,11

Pd.7

Scare to the new

You will never grow is do not try new things.

I am agree with Emerson's statement because can get more knowledge, try new things and new experiences and old.

I am disagree because unknow things are very risk; However, I am agree with Emerson's statement.

Get more knowledge is good. To act more confidence and careful in our life to not make worst , when we remake that thing again.

Also to be prepared to do something in our life. And make the things carefully. Get more knowledge is good.

Try new thins is amazing. Because you take adventures on your self. And you live the risk on your own . While you earn more worth to try new things again.

Try new things also good .

The new experiences and old experiences are good. Because people can give examples of the old things that they had to live.

take new experiences make you more strong. Also new experience make change on you .

Get more knowledge is good because can act more confidence and careful in our life to not make worst when we remake the same thing again. Try new things is amazing because you earn more worth to try new things again. The new and old experiences are also good because people can give examples of their life and the old things that they live. I am agree with Emerson's statement because can get ore knowledge, try new things and new experiences and old experiences .

Try new things that are unknow to as, is the best decision to as that's how you can be a better winner, experiences on life are the best things happen to be a real warrior.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
A79B40F29DCA,"A positive attitude is the key to success in life because it can lead you to having a good job, being well respected by others, having others look up to you, and you should never give up on yourself. Many people have positive attitudes because it can have a good outcome in the long run and help them in their future. Personally I think that having a good attitude can take you far in life. Remaining positive is really the key to accomplishing your goals.

I used to be the type of person who wouldn't really have a good attitude because I was usually afraid of what people would say or I would fear that they would disrespect me because I wouldn't have my guard up. Over the years I learned to manage a good attitude no matter what the situation may be because you never know what someone may be going through and you wouldn't want to treat them even worse than what they are going through. I used to work at Chipotle and having that job taught me to have patience and also maintain a good attitude towards other people, even if they didn't deserve to be treated good. The reason I said it's taught me to be better is because I experienced a customer who was being really racists, although I didn't want to be respectful and I wanted to lash out I thought to myself that I needed to be the grown person and just try my best to ignore their comments and keep going on with my day because having a negative attitude can result to deeper problems and the outcome wouldn't have been the best. My mom is the person who's always told me to treat others the same way you would like to be treated and ever since i've always kept that in mind and tried my best to remain positive. I try my best to a good role model with positive intentions because I know my younger siblings are looking up to me and I don't want to be the person who fails them.

Most jobs would require for you to have a positive attitude because of the way their industry may work. The reasons why they would want someone who has a good attitude is because they have to interact with people, set an example for future employers, and also to satisfy the customers. If your boss were to see what a good worker you are and they see how you manage certain situations they could even give you a raise because they can see the dedication you have for the job. Although at jobs sometimes it can be hard to remain positive because of the situations some customers or even coworkers put you in but I personally think sometimes as individuals we need to put out pride aside and be the bigger person and resolve the issues or just walk away without adding more problems. For some jobs you really have to face hard obstacles and it could get tiring and you would just want to give up but people should always remember that all the hard work you're doing now will be worth it in the end and they would be able to see their accomplishments.

Finally, I think school is the hardest place to remain positive because it brings so much stress to certain people that they don't know how to cope with it. I personally expierence this because I am not the best in school and sometimes I just ask myself

""what is the point of doing all this?"". I usually tend to give up when my classes get too stressful for me and I end up failing my class, I try my best to think of the good outcome it will bring me but sometimes I just feel like giving up because I don't think I will be someone big in the world and that is the worst mindset someone can have because as humans we all make mistakes but we should always think that we can better ourselves, if we only think negative then our situations may end up worse. The best way for you to remain positive is to remind yourself the reason why you are doing it and to show appreciation to those who never gave up on you even when you gave up on yourself. I think that I need to remain positive so I can prove to those who doubted me wrong and I can show them that I am capable of doing good even without their help because in the end the only person you truly have is yourself. Most importantly, I need to prove to myself that if I continue being positive then I will graduate and I will accomplish my goals all because I had a positive attitude rather than a negative attitude and bringing myself down. As an example right now I don't think I did good on this essay but i'm going to be thinking that I tried my best and if anything I could always try again until I get it right.

In conclusion as individuals we should always remain positive and keep trying our best because in the end it will all be worth it, even if it takes days, months, or even years. I know sometimes all someone does is think negative and it can put them in a really low place in life but they should always know to never give up. Sometimes life can get too stressful and there's no positive thinking involved but I really hope that everyone can think positive in certain situations and that they can continue to live happily and see that every obstacle they went through will be worth it. To be successful in life you have to keep trying until you get it right and you acknowledge those situations and you have the mindset that you can really accomplish thing if you put your mind and attitude first.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
2DAA07621328,"Technology is taking the must attention than the comunicacion with other peolpe. Technology allows to complete many task without having contact with other people. Algouth, people say that technology is the future of our lives. Nevertheless I think people have the reason and this bring negatives effects on people's lives, the technology is taking our comunication with other person but its true we are going foward so each day the technology its growing in to our daily lives. In this present people can check out any book they want to read, shop, and play video games without speaking with other to another person.

In the past the people could come in the librery search for a book that the person wanted to read or ask to one of the employes from the librery for help to find a book and then that person will take a seat and spend the time he want to spend in the librery reading that book, that person comunicated with someone but now in this present people don't talk to any one because of the technology. In this present you don't have to move to anywhere to read a book you can do it from your house seating in your sofa just with one clic with the computer. The technoly helop us im many ways but depends and how you are usining. I used to go to the librery and read many books but like I said before now I just read a book in my room from my tablet and I did not need to speak with any person.

Go to the shopping store and buy thing for the bathrooom, livingroom, garden, and the garage was funy in the past because you were talk with people at the store during you were serch for some items. technoly change the way how to shop because you can use your computer to shop in online even if you don't have a computer you can do it from your phone the technology change our live in many ways. Technology is taking our laughs,smile,and the opportunity to met some friend. I used to buy some food at Chipotle restaurant and I laugh when I see my working at Chipotle and that is how should have to be, not how I do now, I just use my phone to order food from the app Uber Eats and they bring my food to my door and that it.

Have fun with friends in the school,strets,and the parks it chagend thanks to the technology. This reason why technology it changed our way how to live makes me feel sad, childs in the past used to have fun with anything because technology not was to big. but that changed when parents started to buy a cell phone for thir kid thta was the most error they could do because kids doesn't have the must intelligent brain to reconize how long they spend their time in the cell phones, technology took the childhood of our kid. when I was a kid like 10 year old I used to play with my friends after school in the floor with littler cars and we inmagent that we are like pilot of faters cars it was so funy. I think our kind have to enjoy their live having fun, not spend the time with the cell phones playing games.

To conclud I thing it has limitation of human cantact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives. Those negative effect could destroy our lives for just use the technoly every single minute. the comunication with others its over because the technology is taking the must time of our lives. True technology is the future of the world but keep it in main how you can use the technology and the technology don't use you.         ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
F19CD0CE3534,"I am agree with the positive actitute because that describe the kind of person that We are,with a positive actitute We can do our job very well, We can be succesful in the life with good and positive thoughs, and We could be very friendly with the people.

First,

We could do the job well with a positive actitute because We could have a good moment with the others employments. We can do a clear and a very good job. We will be very respecful with the more workers. We can help the other employments when the they could need help. We could have a funny and happy day if We do the things that we like.

Next, in the life We can be succesful if We have positive thoughts for our future. Many people would like to help us if We have a good actitute. We could have many opportunities in the life beacuse the people could feel good and happy with our actitute. We can have good ideas about a bussines or our kind of life. We can have a good relation with the family and friends.

Finally, with a positive actitute We can try with respect to everybody. the respect is one of the more important things in the life because that show the kind of life that We are living, and We could show tthe respect with a positive acitute. If We show a positive actitute with the people We could to give to them a good day. If we have a good actitute in our home We have a good moment with the family and We will be happy. With a positive actitute We could have less problems in our life.

In conclusion, I think that have a positive actitute is the keys of the life. We can good relations in our home, job, and with ours friends. The opportunities in our life could be more. Do you think that you could have good relations with your family and friend if you have a negative actitute.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
E24A6E61B08D,"Have you ever ask yourself why do some people are always are their home never go out to socialize with others? Since technology appear in the world, the life of millions of people got a easier way to live, because it brought most of the things and supplies that we need to make our life better and easier.

In my opinion i think technology has positive effect in people's live specially in young people, because teens who are in school have more opportunities to learn a get the skills that they need for their future, they have access to computers at their school to get more information about their classwork and the benefit to take classes or tests online without even attending to school.

Technology allows you to communicate with others without having contact, you dont need to be face to face to communicate with others, it brings people the facilities for those who dont have time to go out to buy the things that they need online like clothes or grocery without going to the store, and the capability to invent things that humans cant do.

However technology has negatives effects too, have you ever seen a little kid playing with toys like before technology was invented, you can see kids of 5-10 years old that already have a phone or video game console , they are addicted to it but not only kids young people too, therefore people can lose their vision by using it to much but its not the fault of technology its our own responsibility to take care of our health.

Technology affects peoples life by reducing their contact with others but at the same time it brings a lot of benefits to our generation and the future.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
A3A5003C8AD1,"Something that i would like to accomplish is raising and taking care of my baby bearded dragon, until it is fully grown and ready to start breeding. I have to feed my bearded dragon its required insects covered in reptile calcium, and bearded dragons need proper lighting. Bearded dragons need these requirements so they can grow up to be healthy and strong, the calcium covered insects makes the bearded dragons bones strong, the UVB lights also help the bearded dragons bones. The climate of a bearded dragons natural habitat is very hot since they can be found every where in Australian deserts.

I want my bearded dragon to grow up being friendly, and not so aggressive, so since bearded dragons are social animals they often need to be in contact with a person and keep being played with or can be taken out of its tank and let it roam around the room. Bearded dragons need to get bigger tanks as they grow old because they get bigger and more curious. This is really important to me because I always loved reptiles as a kid and i want prove to my parents that i am capable of taking care of a bearded dragon.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
0484BCFC725D,"Do you think fail is good? in this paper i will argue failure and success in life. Some people get sad when they fail something, they try to not loss the enthusiasm, sometimes people get mad by them self.

First, people get sad when they fail something, because they try the best so they can get everything right as they doe, and maybe they never image that they gonna fail, and sometimes some persons cry because they fail.

Second, some people try to not loss the enthusiasm when they fail at the first time, because maybe they have a good positive and they said that the next time they do not going to fail, so its mean that they not loss the enthusiasm at the first time they fail.

Last one, person get mad by his or her self, cause they think they don't do well, and they get really mad when they fail for a little error they have, but that get that they are learning because the errors that person have made them learn.

Some people said that failure is a bad idea for success. but some people don't loss the enthusiasm as they been falling and that made the person won for those who said that failure is a bad a idea because the person that don't loss the enthusiasm is keep going until they make sure to not fail anymore, and as they been falling they been learning.

In conclusion, for some people failure is a bad idea.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
DF328FBE5029,"The British naturalist and John Lubbock wrote.

Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it.'Do we choose our own character traits ,or is our character formed by influences beyond our control.

Although some people think that character is formed for other persons that are around them and that their character is always going to be formed for people around them but character is formed by the way of your own emotions that shows how you feel how you are, other people says that if they don't be like other people want to they be they feel out of the group in that moment some people starts to hate their self, but what other people do is they ignore what people says about them as they don't hear anything and never give up.

Other people think that if they don't change their character they are going to success in their life and that they are obligate to change for they future and when they change they start to feel bad because they change something better than what they get and when other people ask them for what they change they says that for be an adult they have to be like one but what is a adult is a is a person that looks death and is always mad with other people or they say that the character is formed from the moment they born and that hey can not do anything about it .

In my conclusion, We choose our own character and it's doesn't have nothing with others person ,we choose how we wanna be and how we feel better with our self...

Thank you for read my essay i don't really understand about what a have to write so sorry about this.          ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
3F3DC123EDF6,"Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble, or do they unfairly interfere in young people lives? Some people believe that debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers while others believe that is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. This is important because is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekday curfew for teenagers. This is going to help teenagers how to be responsible, get a job, and learn how to take care themselves.

First, teenagers have to learn how to be responsible because some teenagers do not grow up with their parents. For example, they have to go a school in the morning, and they have to go a work at night. This is important for teenagers who work and study hard. That is why is not fair that the city council debating the adoption of 10 P.M. for teenagers because they do not have some else to help them to pay bills or other stuff.

Additionally, most of the teenagers have a job at night because they want to go to the university. For example, teenagers only have time to have a job at night, and they help their parents to save money. Their is a lot of teenagers who really want to go to the university and universities are expensive. This is a big effort for teenagers that they really want to reach their own goal, and their parents do not have a lot of money to cover the bill of the university

However, not everyone agree with this position. Some people claim that debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight weekend curfew for teenagers. Nevertheless, teenagers are going to learn how to take care themselves because their are not going to live with their family all the time. For example, some teenagers take the decision to move to other state or country. And it is a good idea for them how to take care themselves without parents.

Based on this argument, one must conclude that is not a good idea to debating the adoption of a 10 P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers because this have to be an option for teenager to do what they really want to do. Some teenagers are responsible for they own self, this help them to be prepare for their own future, and be a teenager who can protect their self in a earlier age. This is gonna help teenager to maturity.",4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.5
C8F035B467A7,"This generation is influenced by technology and they are used to it. They would be more comfortable with it as they are used to it . It's beneficial for students to do distant learning more than to go to school and do it.

Distant learning is already being used through online and video conferencing, This days colleges and universities allows students to choose online courses of their own choices . Students are used to online stuff like, web browsing, gaming, and etc. which gives them an extra advantage already. They would be more successful using online browsing. Video conferencing is another way of distant learning; this would let the teachers talk to students in case they need help. People has been using video conferencing to even take tests at home.

Distant learning would also help them have success in education socially. If students are to stay at home to learn, they would feel more comfortable around somewhere they been for a long time. They could ask people, family members who they are comfortable with, for help if they wanted to. They would be more fit and ready than going to school considering that you have to wake up early in the morning, get ready and walk to school. They wouldn't have to do any of this, and have enough sleep to have a fresh mind to work with.

It is beneficial for students to use distant learning to attend classes such as, video conferencing and online browsing. I personally think that its better for me and lots of other students to use distant learning as it can help in a social and educational way.                          ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
78303F7A5AB0,"My Dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me. And it's really important for me for him to shared that. Because helps me get better at things ,it teaches me new things that I didn't even know about, and also helps me grow smarter and as a better person. Learning from someone like my Dad.

Hearing wisdom from my Dad will definitely make me a better and smarter person. Because it will make me motivated to think like him and be like him . It will also make me work and study harder so I can get to where his telling me to. And not only I could be like my Dad one day I could probably be a better person and smarter person than him. Because my Dad would push me to work as hard to be the best.

Learning new things from someone that has an experience like my Dad can help me have more better ideas about what I'm doing . And it gives me an open mind about new ideas that I didn't even know about. It also helps me create new ways how to do stuff. And will also gives me better techniques and more ideas. So in the future I can try to change and try different things from what I have learned from my Dad.

It's also really important for my Dad to give me his wisdom, Because I can't imagine doing stuff without someone helping me on things that I don't even know about. It just helps me to stay more focus in my work by just hearing from someone Like my Dad. It makes me want to try harder than other people and be better than them. And lastly it will make me think smarter and push my self to be the best I could be.

So I think it's kinda obvious that every person or even smart people needs help sometimes from someone thats has an experienced before. Because by just hearing from them will teach you new ways new ideas and even stuff you didn't even know existed. Everyone is not perfect in this world and everyone definitely needs helps on something it doesn't have to a big thing it can be a very small things. But I think by just hearing from someone that has an experienced before will definitely help you to be better person.    ",3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,4.0
F17F4DF6095D,"In my opinion i agree honesty is the best policy sometimes, however, honesty might hurt a person's feelings because the quality of being truthfulness is the key through out life. For that reason to support my answer your being trustworthy is better than done or obtained without lying to that person. hurting them more when you lie to them then be hundred percent honest with that person. so that why i believe honesty is the best policy sometimes even if u might hurt a person feelings.

First, not stealing, cheating because people will not have respect and lose trust for you. sometimes you could end up in bad situations and problems. so i feel like if you do these things i least own up to your problems by being honest by saying you did this or this happened. Also, people will say bad names to you like your all lies, your not trustworthy, and your dishonest so if you don't want anyone in this world to call you these names be honest at all times.

Then, being careful and saying sorry to the things u told people that was a lie instead of being dishonest changing that honesty i say that people start thinking your real and wanna be friends with you. instead those people out there hating you and talking behind your back almost everyday. so if u do these things it could change you as what type person your now then back then and it will change how people act towards you or behind your back most of the times.

Next, not hiding anything frank from people. For example, Generic_Name dating her best friend boyfriend secretly. like you don't wanna hide anything from the people you love or care for you always wanna be honest with them no matter what. you could break there hearts by not telling them somethings if the situations important that they most know. if you don't be honest life will make you feel stressful by hiding all these things your hiding from people so you do not wanna hide anything from the people u love or care for.

In conclusion, no one questioned the honesty of the judge's statement. so these are my main reasons to support why i agree with this old proverb says honesty is the best policy. ",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
59981B992996,"My first paragraph is , I think that some schools offer distance learning, for students because if they dont want to attend to school in the morning ; for example they can take that classes online, the classes that they miss the day they are out of the school . Students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because if they are in High School and if they are in 12 grade , and they need some classes to pass they can take online that classes . Because if they dont pass that classes they are going to lose the year in High School , and all the students they are not going to graduated.

My second paragraph is , what I think is if schools offer classes online and/or video conferencing , to the students that means that they really want to help students when they dont attent to school. For instance ; that schools are really good they need to help all students that they need some help , if they offer that classes online is because they want all the students to work hard every single day at home or anywhere, they wanted to work on those classes online , and if you take classes online you can take notes to help you when you have to take a quiz about what you read and what you know.

If students deside to go school , they can take all the classes that they want to take . They can take in the school were they went but; if they don't want to take classes online its does't matter what they want to do if they work from home by the way online , they can work in the school if they want or at home if they wanted to work really hard without any reason and if you get good grades on that classes and you understand everything you can pass that classes.

That school's give us a oportunity to work on classes online , if we want to work with other's classes that we don't have yet . For example , if you at home don't have any internet , what you can do is if you want classes online you can go to the library and work on those classes there , you are not going to pay nothing if you work on that classes , they give you free that classes that's why the school's give you that option to you and for all the student's if you are a smart student and you study really hard , you can finish that clases in less than a moth but if you study hard every day at home or at school that can help you.                   ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
0D23E504FBC0,"Many people believe it is possible to change your first impression. Since a lot people have bad impression like disrespect and negative thing to say, one can change if you really want to be a better person in the society.

First of all, disrespectful people can learn how to be respectful. So when you meet again your impression can change because you never imagine that they could be an amazing person. As you can see they can have a great respect and change your mind.

Next, if a persons first impressions is negative,they could had been a bad day. You never judge anyone. Some people have good and bad days. They could feel negative because the bad day. So the next time you meet them they could have a better day.

Meanwhile, first impression is negative because is always in the back of your mind so is difficult to see it differently. As you can see the first impression is always part of your natural release.

In conclusion, you never have to judge a person before you meet them. Because they always show that reality as they are and they can change the first impression that you already know about them.                                                         ",3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
394F5867B7EC,"Working alone is great but have you ever thought about the benefits of working in groups? for example, when you are working with a group of people it it easier to get ideas; for example,you can all put your thoughts tougher and find out the resolution. Also working with a group makes it faster to finish the tasks; some people take longer than others so its good to have people around to help.

Most people believe that working alone is better but working in a group is more beneficial for example,if there is a problem that needs to be solved it is easier to solve it because there are more people to figure out the problem and to give their opinions; which will help throughout the way. In other words, if one of the group members has trouble with the assignment another group member could help them out;instead of figuring it out by themselves.

Working in groups could also make assignments become complete faster for example,some students while working alone take a long time and end up having to take their assignments home for homework; while in a group they can come up with a solution together and get it complete. It will also benefit the teacher because there won't be any late papers.

There are benefits of working in a group but there are also benefits of working by yourself for example,sometimes it gets loud in the group and it will be hard for them to focus and get their work done also some students like to mess around and play fight instead of getting there work done. Even tho working in groups could cause a lot of talking and play fighting , it is still a more beneficial way for students.

In conclusion, working alone is a better way for students to show what they know but working in groups is more helpful for students who are struggling. It has been listed on google that Researchers have proven that it is a more helpful way to learn.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
F72B3EE2E414,"In some occasion you feel weary or oppress to think about that you have to take high school during 4-years when you know that you can do in 3-years? Some school districts are thinking is this wonderful ides to offer a programs to the students that they can graduate in 3-years, the school districts should be approve the idea to graduate in 3-years because it will be so helpful to the students to feel more motivate to graduate early, the students will use the other year to work and make money to pay some par of their career, and the students can enter and start college one year early .

The students will feel more motivate to graduate early becasue many students that come from middle school they really took class of high school like Algebra 1, Geometry, Earth Science, History 1 ect, they can easely graduate and 3-years. I have two brothers older than I my brother that is 20-years-old he graduate in 3-years he miss only one class, but he take during summers because the school have the programs to high school students graduate in 3-years.

Also some school districts don't offer this program to graduate in 3-years and the students lose their motivation to graduate and who want to go to school just for one class a whole year, what happed if a student miss only one class to graduate in 3 year,but the school districts don't have the programs and the student have to come for a whole year just for want class like my older brother that is 29-years-old he only miss one class to graduate in 3-years but the school from California did not have the programs to leave him graduate in 3-years it was so bad for him and a lot of students past the same thing.

The student will able to use the other year to work and make money to pay a part of their career, we know that a lot of students don't have parents that can pay for their career because is a lot of money that they have to pay for a career, this year off will be so fundamental to the students who don't have the help enough to pay their career. During this year they can work and make money and have the opportunity to enter a college and be some one in life.

The students who are a school don't have the time enough to get a work outside and pay their career through a work. This is why a lot of students who graduate from high school don't take a career because they don't have the money to pay it, or their parents don't have money to help them, I have a lot of friends and family who finished high school but they did not take a career because they did not have the money enough to pay it, and what happed if you want to take a career, but you don't have the money enough to take it.

In some cases occur that when the student finish they high school in 3-years they start college one year early, or they start to work to make the money for it, they can finish their career more younger , we know that some career take like 6 or 8 years it will be so long , but have finish high school one year early will be so helpful for the students life.

Some students feel weary when they are taking 4-years of high school, they don't even have time to think about what they want to be, which career they want to take. The students don't have the time enough and this is why some students take wrong career and is very harmful for their life.

In conclusion, all school districts should be allow to offer the programs that high school students can graduate in 3-years, some school districts want the traditional four years, they think that is so helpful for the students, but they are wrong because the traditional four years cause a graduate decrease and many students go to school just for one or two classes, in the future if all school districts approve the programs to students can graduate in 3-years. Many students will be taking their career in college some one starting one year early, and other making the money during the year off to pay their career.                     ",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5
05F54CEC774B,"Schools should not have after school clubs. Students will not have that much time after school to work on different things. Some students have after school jobs, some have to babysit their brother/sister, and also some of them have to work after school to support their family etc. If there are homework club during school time that would be great. Students who have difficulty with subject will have better understanding of what they are learning. It would be pleasure of people who volunteer for during school homework club.

Although some students who have difficulty with specific subject homework would be great. There will be teacher and students around. Maybe its their same teacher who teaches the same class it will be great for students. Teachers will know the weakness of student of what they need help more with during class. This is why during school homework club would be great for teacher or students. Students who work after school could come to this club too they would be able to get their homework done and still be able to work at their job.

Some homework club cost money which might be hard to pay for some families. If my school would have homework club it should be free. Not every family has 100 of dollars to pay every month for homework club. They also should have good educated teacher who knows everything about subject so they could help their students. If there are any bad educators who does not know anything about subject that would messed up the teacher and student both of their time. That would messed up students education who spend their time coming to thomework club. Speaking of that school should have great volunteers who can help their student with any subject.

They need to have teacher who could make the students love homework club. They need to have that kind of teacher/volunteer who is not that strict who knows how to handle different situation of students. Maybe they could be going through a lot of things in their life. They might have some problem at home or outside of home. Students want funny,nice, and kind teacher. Who could make jokes about subject to have a student better understanding. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
A3C8FABB8B29,"I think is a good, idea that students get different types of classes because that might help to choose their career. Its a really good idea knowing what you going to do with your life once you're done with high school. There are so many teens that once they are out high school they don't know what jobs they want to start and study for it. I think that thats why they should have many more classes that thats what its going to help them continue with their thinking of what career to choose once they gradute high school. for example classes that are for automotive technology is a confortable job in a way that you learn more about cars but in a way is dangerous at the same time because cars have so many heavy parts that could injured you. Another confortable job is being a lowyer lowyers don't do much other than being in the computer or doing paperwork in that cause you dont have to be outside in the cold working on a bad job that involves working in a construction site. And thats the main idea that schools should offer carrer choices that involves students in a carreer class that will teach them once they are out school and that the jobs will interest the students. There is so many students that drop out school because is not interesting to them but thats a bad idea of not going to school because if a student doesn't graduate they will be workingfor some restaurant not earning that much money and working so many hours thats why it is important for teens to stay in school so that the school could offer them on what job they will choose once they graduate high school. School is one of the most important places where they will teach students what decisions they should take on their life once they are adults. In some cases students start going to college once they are out school because they got an idea of how their class works and what for what job they are going to study.",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
E18675E47293,"Dear,

School Board of Education

I personally disagree with the idea of adding one and a half hours of school. This is a terrible Idea and here are some reasons why I disagree so please grab a seat, relax, and take your time to read this. The first reason why there shouldn't be extra school hours is students will have to walk in the dark. The second reason is students will have less time for sports and other after school activities and also less time for family and friends. And finally students will be sick of having school for a such a long period of time and possibly stop going to school.

First of all not everyone is fortunate enough to have a ride to school but that doesen't mean that they can't go to school so they walk, but if the school board adds more school time students who walk will have to walk in the dark. Walking in the dark could be very dangerous because you don't know whats in front nor what's behind you and that could cause students not to go to school anymore because they will be scared of walking in the dark and feel unsafe. Another example of why it could be dangerous to walk in the dark is if someone is trying to cross the street and a car doesen't see them they'll probably get ran over and the school won't be responsible for the accident. Something that also is good to keep in mind is that if the school hours get changed and even if you try to avoid students from walking in the dark There's a cost. You'll have to put street lights and that could be very expensive, and the money could be used for educational purposes.

The second reason why extra school hours shouldn't be added is students won't have much time for sports or other after school activities. Sports and school are both important and they both should be equally balanced. So if school gets longer than maybe we'll have less time to see our family and friends. I remember when I did football practice was getting shorter and shorter because winter came, and during that time it was also raining a lot and snowing a lot so we missed a lot of games and practices, imagine if school was an hour and a half long, there wouldn't even be a football season at all.

The last reason why an extra hour and a half of school is a bad idea is because, a lot of students would get really sick of school and stay home or try to get suspended so that they don't have to got to school. We've all been in that situation where we don't want to go to school so we pretend we're sick, even I get tired of having to go to school every day, in fact I don't really want to be here right now but I have to. We've all tried to make our parents believe that we're sick, but that's a really old trick and parents already know it, and make us go to school. If students get more school time they just won't stand it and they'll start skipping school. But don't worry I won't do that.

In conclusion I think adding an extra hour and a half of school is a horrific idea, it will just cause more problems for the education system, students, parents, and even for our hard working teachers because they will have a more work and less time for themselves. But I also understand why you would want to add an extra hour of school.",4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
F100483B6259,"Can you imagine someone that want to study more and to get more knowledge? Well, many people do want to continue studying because the more knowledgeyou know, you will have a more benefits in your life. Furthermore, like the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" He's because we never stop learning the little things in life such as: explore the world and to never stop your dream of continue your study. I agree with Emerson's statement because we want to get in our goal in the survey and to never stop growing with mentality.

First reason is that we have to explore the world. For example, by exploring the world we will know like the different cultures of each country or by having friends that are different country. Like my mom always said ""You have to get out of the box to learn more, to see and explore what you have at your surroundings"".

Second, to never stop your dream of continue your study. For instance, if you want to grow mentally you have to study more to get the knowledge you want. The more knowledge you have, then the more great will be your job or even more better you can be your own boss. However, people will never grow if they don't continue their survey.

Finally as you can see, Emerson's statement ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"" is true because we will never stop learning, and the more you study the more knowledge you will know.      ",4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
6E71B040D5C6,What i would like to accomplish right now i guess it would be my grades. because they are not good im not doing good at any clases that i have right now. my grades are bad and one thing i would like to accomplish right now i guess is my grades for the moment because now i feel that im going to fail all my test. that im having right now im failing all the clases and i guess that's the only thing i want to accomplish for the moment i still have time to learn and study for my all my test that are coming this year hopefully i can do good. last year i did my writing ESOL and i didnt pass the test but i got the maximun number so i can retake the test again and that time i didn't did good a fail the test i didn't know how i did the first test that i got 385 on my ESOL. then i fail when i was going to retake it again i know that i did my best that time but i stil ask my self how i fail it again i even stay after school so i could retake the test again i guess that time i was lucky. that day i guess i didn't study well i guess because this time i didn't pass it or because i was doing the test fast and i couldn't read the test or i just didn't care about it.,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
E7328989C861,I agree that imagination is more inportant than kowledge beacus in imagination I feel like you learn more about your brain and that will help you a lot knowledge you really dont learn anything you just learn how to other people choose what you like. Imagination you can think about what to choose like if there is a car you like imagen if you didint choose the other one that one is going to the dumster if was one good car and one ugly car but if it was knowledge you will have pressure. You will not know what to pick or you will know what to pick if you use your imagination. Knowledge you really have to decide what you want but imagination you just can imagen like what are you going to need that in your life like if you had to choose a house or a car what will you need more in life thats why you use your imagination so i rather pick a house beacus you will need that house when you grow up like for your kids. knowledge i feel its bad for you in the futcher. When you go to college you will have to use your knowledge for school i guss that is preety good but you are just going to imagen like you are done in college.,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
E8DAB90C65F7,"Working with a group or working by yourself.

There is nothing more beneficial than to have a team work, having to work with people that you like, and the people that know what to do; is one of the best thing that could ever happen to you. Now working by yourself gives you more benefits like, no one is going to steal your ideas or just copy what you do or write about which happens a lot when you are working with a team.

Working with a group is more like team work, is more like people doing less, what i mean by people doing less is that when you are working with a group you normally don't do a lot, you are all helping each others and that makes you more like a person that is not secure of yourself, is like a person that will always need someone to be helping you

Working with a group is not too bad but it can be, me as a student i do like to work with my friends but they always copying me which i do not like, it makes me feel like they will not be able to do good in life without me. Is sad the way they always have to be in a team to be a better person in life, which is not fair because some times they are not even the person that did the work.

I prefer to work alone better than to work with a team, is not like i do not like to work with other people; that is just how i am. When i work with other people i feel like it doesn't benefits me because they are either cheating or not helping, working by myself makes me feel more me, it makes me want to keep going without having to worry about others. It makes me feel like i can do more without having to need help from others.

In this world i have learned so much things, i have learned that you need to put you first, you need to think about you first, also that you need to have your own back. Working with a group in my opinion is something that should never happen, you might be asking why?. and my answer is that you should never feel useless, you should always think about yourself. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0
057EE790CCEA,"Pursuit of success what is success mean? Do success really consists of going from failure to failure withour give up? What do I think about success? Do I know what succes mean? Have I feel success about something that I did? Do I know anybody that success after a lot fail withour loss their snthusiasm? Have I ever give up in something that I thought never could be success on it? Do I agree with churchill's statement about the important role that failure play in the pursuit of success?

Which is my opinion?

First of all, to me success is to be good at what you do, cooking, driving, boxing, flying, playing sport or teaching it dosn't matter what it is, if you are good on it you are going to be succesful. And yes. I believe that to be success really consists on going from failure to failure withour give up. because sometime we need to know how it feel to fail in order to feel what is success mean. you know. To me those people that didn't work hard, don't know how failure feel like are the one that faster go down, cuz they don't care about it, unti they got there.

My thinking about success, is the that's the best moment of a person who fighting and fighting for what he or she wants withour giving up unti his/her last breath. You know. One year ago when I went to my country, I hear a lot of peaple saying this guy die unhappy cuz he didn't enjoined at all what he work so hard to accomplish. and then the guy who was the death guy bestfriend and partner said. he didn't die unhappy cuz he die doing what he wanted to do all his life. Later I began to think about that ask to myself is really important fight and fight to success in something and I know that everyone there did the same because they all stay quiet for a few secands. And after that. success to me is be good at what you want, fight for it, and be happy.

Since I remenver my family telling me, that the most important things on life are those that you make by you on. You know. My family are very poor people. So when I was like 11 yuears old I deciIde to get a job, so I could buy things like pencil, pen thigs like that and went to my neighbor have a factory of cofe and he pay me like 1 dollar but in dominican money every day. In a few day a lot of pencil, and a began to sell then. I never had to be worrie for those things any more or money for project. I guess that time feel really seccesful I was doing something the really worked.

I have a friend who is now a professional boisboll player, he fail a lot of time the test to be a professional beisboll player because he didn't had what was needed to pass it, and he didn't give up until pass it. He was so happy that they. i have had give up in a lot of things. looking back now that I think about if I will put more enthusiasm on it, maybe I would success.

I gree with winston churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of successs. because I know how it feel fail, and success. I know many people who had afil, and fail, and fail, and then success.

by:

Generic_Name",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
1CFAD2A1BC00,"I think that it would be good if we have a after school club because, some students might need to finish up some work there missing. Now let me tell you why it would be more good, first you get to do it in groups and make new friends in the homework club, it makes you more focus in the work that you need to and you can even do it with a group, solo, pairs. and after school homework club is perfect for all those things and it raises your grade up.

all you have to do is...

(1)Ask for your parents permission to join the homework club. (2) try and finish up the work you haven't done yet. And now your done. It even helps the school by you making the school a school where student can grow and learn. if you ask any teachers from our school they would all say that homework clubs are good to help your brain learn more and release that stress that you might have from not doing your work in time and homework club helps you in that.

as a student my self i to have homework and test, and other stuff and sometimes i don't have time to do my homework at home so sometimes i choose my days that i want to stay in homework club for example lets say you want to join a club but you know you have a lot of important work missing then dont choose other electives just choose homework club and then you can choose the elective you want, and with that we should all have home work clubs in each school.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F8776FDF7DC0,"Have you ever thought about what to bring on a trip to the park? I've, it's frustrating to pack an activity that everyone is going to like. There are multiple ways to have fun at parks for example, you can play soccer, explore the park, and play football with your friends and family.

First of all, when you're at a park you most likely want to have a good time with your family and friends. Soccer is a good way to relax. You may ask "" Why is soccer a good activity to relax?"" well, when you're playing soccer you can get your mind off things. It helps you think more on the game then what else is going on out side of the field. Also soccer is a good way to communicate with one another.

Second of all, you can play a game of football. Football is also a good way to communicate with one another. For example, in football if we want to win we have to have a good game plan. So, we have to gather our opinion and thoughts to make the right plan. Football is a good way to bring everyone together to communicate.

Third of all,

you don't always have to play a sport to have fun. You can go explore around the park. For example, you can go walk around, look at the beautiful trees and flowers, and go hiking. While you are also there you can take beautiful pictures!

To sum up, there are multiple activities you can do at the park. Think about other activities that you can do with your family and friends. There are many more than those three for sure. You also have to think about others too and what they want to do. Therefore, there are many other enjoyable activities out there. ",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
2CDDE76979DD,"I believe that working with a group is better than working independently. I say that because work gets done faster with more people than just one person. Also More ideas would be brought up because other people in your group have different experiences. Another reason is People can get different parts in the work so it doesnt all depend on one person to do everything.

My first reason why working with a group is better than working independently, because work gets done faster and is easier with more then one person. For example lets say i have a group project with 3 other people, I would split it into 4 different parts so one person doesnt have to do the whole project by him/herself. Another example is if you get stuck on some part while your working, your group can help you do it instead of asking other people that are not even doing the same thing as you. Also its easier because lets say Ur sick and you cant get your work finished, your group mates can most likely finish it for you so you wont get stressed out.

My second reason why working with a group is better than working independently is you get different ideas and experiences from different people. For example if you had a essay about living in England, theres a good chance one of your group mates knows something about it or has experienced it by living in England. Another example is everybody thinks differently, so another person might have a idea that you never thought of or it could be the other way around. Also when you have more then one brain working on the same work then ideas keep coming up from each other like its a chain of some sort and you wont get stuck on anything.

My final reason about why working with a group is better than working alone is your future. If you only work independently that means you arent really cooperative with other people or have much experience talking to others, which could effect what sort of job you get in the future. For example if you get a job as a PC support you have to talk to other people and ask whats going on with Ur device, which means cooperating with some random people and you need skills for that. Also if your a construction worker you need to work together to build a structure of some sort, so you would need communication skills for that therefore you really cant improve that if you work independently all the time.

Some people might say working independently is better than working with a group while others might disagree because work gets done faster with more people, everybody has a different experience and knowledge about stuff and its better for Ur future because you have to cooperate with other people and you need skills to do that.  ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0
1B622A28EDD9,"Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home than at school? I believe taking classes online at home could be very benificial, because you wouldn't have to worry about getting distracted by other students like you would at school. You'd be able to advance at your own pace, meaning you won't have to rush at everything. Lastly, you wouldn't have to be so stressed from all the homework you get from each teacher in each class, but everything has its disadvantages as well.

I'd like to start by saying that not being distracted from your class is great, most students get easily distracted by others. Anything that makes you lose your focus during class is considered a distraction, which includes even cellphones. If you don't pay attention to class your most likely going to end up getting lost and fail, but when your at home doing your work online by yourself you wouldn't have to worry about this.

Another benefit from being able to attend class at home, would by that you can move at your own pace. This is a big benefit, for example at school I have to follow the teachers pace and sometimes when the teacher moves to fast on a subject I end up confused and lost making me fail the test or not doing good on the homework. At home you could take your time to process and understand the subject before moving on to a different one. Helping you do a lot better.

My final reason would be less stress. I say this because I'm stressing right now to keep up my good grades. I get to much homework and most of the times I don't get time to do it because of work or family. I'm the oldest at home and I have to take care of my siblings, which means having to make food for them, clean up the house making sure everyones ok. Making me not do homwork after school. Most of the times I have to stay up late doing homework. I wouldnt have to worry about this if I did everything online making me less stressed.

I have given you three reasons on how doing your classes online can be benificial, but there are also some disadvantages. One of them could be not interacting with other students. I know that earlier I had said others can become a distraction but thats during class after class it's nice talking to others, everything has its time and place. Another disadvantage could be that you may need help with something and you won't be able to have someone to help. At school we have our teachers and when your stuck with something they can help you by explaining it in other words to make it sound more simple. So, there our benefits on having class online but also disavantages.

I end this essay by saying that I still believe taking online classes at home can benefit you a lot, But everyone has there own way of learning. If your more of a independant person than I would recommend taking online classes but if your more of a social person than stay in school. All that matters is that you pass your class.",4.0,3.5,4.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
997098762F7E,"Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing. I like to do accomplish more if i always want to do something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose. I like to do something with Bangladashe abusing children and adnormal kids.

First of All, I like to do something with Bengladshe abusing children because Bangladash is very poor Country. Lot of children did not go to school because they do not enaph many to scevive that resone they don't go to school. Some children work in fcatorry and somre children working in people house but people are abusing them like people are not paying enaph money.

Secendly, I want to do work with Bangladash adnormal kids. I like to work with them because they are not like normal kids. Many familly did not accept that kind of kids. They think adnormal kids did not help them at all. I am thinking another way if they get poper gidenecs they can help in out susity.

Inconclution, Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing. I like to accomplish more if i always want to do something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose. I like to do something with Bangladashe abusing children and adnormal kids.",2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
AE83E9155405,"We all dose mistake in our life . If your going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm you will not going to learn from your mistake, Sometimes we need to feel bad about something wrong we did in our life because if we didnt feel bad or sad we will keep doing our mistake and we will not fail in the same things.

Me and My friend we took

IB math together , last year it was so hard for us. one day she talked to me and she says: Generic_Name you will not pass this class because your grade is not good you better change it or you will take it next year .

I went home i felt stressed for one hour a about what she says to me , later i told to my self that she is true about every thing she says meanwhile i didnt t study for the exam and i didnt want to study .

On the exam day i didnt stressed my self I was OK , I ask my friend did you study ? She says i didnt study ,I feel happy because its Friday .We took the exam both of us didnt pass but the thing i felt so bad, When i went home. My dad ask me about my grade , i told him that i didnt pass because it is hard for me .

I remember he got mad at me and i didnt says nothing that time . i remember he told me that is one of my big mistakes that i didn't try or study for the exam also he says that it is nooses nothing is hard if you try your beast , you can do it . he make me feel so bad about my grade, self so called my friend because i thought she will feel bad like me but she was so happy and she didnt care about her grade.

I took decision that i need to be A + student in this class , all my class , I decide to pursuit of success and push my self hard no mater what .

I start to study all the weekend for my math IB class also I exert my best .

On Monday i ask my teacher if i can retake the exam for me , my friend .

The exalt was so easy because i studied very good for it

, my friend didnt impact from me , She got a bad grade, She kept going from failure to failure with out loss any enthusiasm that why she didnt change and she is the one who took the this class this year because she didnt pass it .for example if she felt something she will be success in the class and her life. Moreover Failure should impact negative because if its not negative the people will neglect their failure and mistake.",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
6D728858E86F,"Technology

I think has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive on people' live. Technologyy allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person.

Because technology makes people to become more single, we can do a work or we can finish something by ourself. For example, if I want to buy a book for my friends that he live very far from me. I do not need to go to the bookstore buy a book then call him ask him when does he have time, and we make a time to meet each other. Right now I can buy a book online and then I type his address to delivery. I just need to wait a few days and then he can get the book. This is the technology makes life more confortable.

If today we do not have technology, maybe we need many people to do for one work. We need cost more time. It is not a good things for us. Time is important, in fact, we do not have too much time in our life, we need to ues the less time to finish one thing. So how can we find a way to use less time to do the work? Technology will help us.

People do not need contact work together. It save many time and improve the work. We can use the less time to do more work.

So that is why I think has the limtation of human contact due to the use of technongy had positive on people's live.",3.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
14AC534FFE42,"graduating early is a very good idea but before start with my opioun or make any suggestions i would like to take sides first. graduating early comes with a lot of work and troubles . before you will be able to graduate early, you will need two math , two science ,two history and other elective subjects to graduate .but if you don't have any of that or maybe failed some classes in your freshmen year or sophomore year, it's all pales up and wait for you in your senior year. or maybe you refused to go to summer school or even take some classes during the summer, it's affect you in your senior year. summer school sometimes help you to reduce some classes during your school year.

Every high schooler's"" dream is to walk on stage with a big smile on his/her face. but if you don't do the necessary part of passing your Sol and getting good

GPA to college , you might as well want to stay and wait for your traditional four years.

Many high school er""s sometimes want to leave high school and go to college because they want to live on their own, out from home,experience new things, meet new friends, or even meet new people and learn about other things and also sometimes too student graduate early or want to graduate early because they don't. like their school or get bullied a lot in high school due to that they try their possible best to leave the school before something happen to him/her.

But from my point of view I think every high school er should wait till their traditional four years of high school because college can be very very stressful if you not well organized or you not well fit.

And also before you make a decision to go to college or even work force or maybe start a life right after high school, make sure you are financially stable because college or anywhere else after high school will be very tough and very challenging.

Preparing to graduate early and go to college a year early it's very hard sometimes because you wouldn't know what you want do in college and you will be on a waiting list and you will have to pay for every semester which is going to be a waste of money and also time . so i think every high schooler's should wait till their traditional four years and be more prepared and financially stable before they graduate .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
C51C5EA029D6,"There are many other ways, how we can choose our character traits. The first way is to choose our own character traits, by picking it for ourself. The second way is our character formed by influences beyond our control, by not being able to control it. The most reasonable character trait would be choosing our own character trails, because it makes the most sence out of all and most of the population can control on their emotions.

There are different types of character traits, for example funny, exiciting, joyful, and many more. Our character traits are formed by our own influence and by our own actions. That's what causes them to react from different types of emotions. For the most part, we are able to control our emotions, but sometimes we cannot control over them so they go out of control.

Character traits can be used in many different ways. However, there are some character traits that we can't control, it would happened to us by itself because we sometimes don't have control on ourself. For example anger, sadness, and depression are the reasons why we lose control sometimes because we are unable to control over it. These emotions can be dangerous once you are out of control, you don't even know what you will be doing, it could be something really terrible. That's the reason character traits can be good or bad sometimes.

Some people support the fact to pick there character traits for themself, some think it's not in our control and we are unable to control it. The people that said they decide to choose the character traits for themself, say when they do something they can feel the emotions in contol of them and do what best fits them. On the other hand, the people that think the charater traits is not in there control, say if they are working or doing anything the emotions of them just happens and they can't control it. In most of the cases it is caused by the bad emotions like being mad, or sad and more.

There are many more reasons of people talking about character traits. Not all of them are good nor not all of them are bad. It mainly depends on the person who is controling it. For the people that are unable to do so can control over it by doing couple simple things and not letting there emotions take over them. That's why controlling you're own character traits is different than having it controlled by some formed influence.",3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
DA7C756EEA38,"Do you think imagination is more important than knowledge? I think imagine is better than knowledge because you can imagine a lot of thing. Imagination is more important than knowledge because you get to picture or about what you want to do when you grow up or something you want to do with your life or your friends. You can imagine all that by thinking about it or just doing it when you want to.

I remember one time my mom ask what I want to do or to be when i grow up I said a soccer player and I said i imagine me playing with one of the best player playing with me mom said but you have to practice very hard to even make it on the team and I said you going to see on your television very soon. Knowledge is not important than imagination because knowledge you have to learn about it to make sure you no what you talking about but imagination is when you imagine something in your life that you know is going to happen in your life one day is as fun as everything in the world that can make you happy in life or a point of your life.

So ne time i was playing soccer with my friends outside in the rain and I imagined myself making it on the school team I was very happy when I made on the school team. So the next day i went to school and they were calling out the people who made it on the school team, So I head the call my name and I was very happy because they called my name out and it is because I imagined myself making it on the school team and every worked out good, So I was the best soccer player in middle school, now i can not wait when I am famous and ever body know my name.

In conclusion imagination is more important than knowledge and you can imagine what you going to do before it even happens.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
0803CE11A14A,"I think that I would chose to be a nurse for the school to make sure that students will be safe in and out of school. I want It to be somewhere that students can come and talk to me whats wrong. I think that if I get this job I will take It and learn from it ,so I would like to see the manger to see if he approves of It.

I would also want to go to a good collage to get the education to be a nurse. It is going to be hard to get this job ,but I am going to work for it as hard as I can. I also have to put in a lot of effort into this job to get it. It would at least take me about four years to be in a collage to help me study about how to be a nurse. Being a nurse will be difficult in a many ways, but it's a matter of learning of how to do something. I would say its a better idea if I study longer it would be a most likely that I would get the job.

More ways to be a nurse is by being organized because you need to know what the students need to become a nurse. Also I would need to listen to directions because you can mess up because it's an important job. There are a lot of pros and cons about being a nurse because it's a job where you can mess up you can get into serious trouble. It takes a lot of time to be things that you want to be ,but everything takes times ,so I would say being something that you enjoy and think if you can do it. I would definitely want to be a nurse in a school to prove to the manager that I can do it.

Hopefully the manager can take this into conservation if I could get this job. I would show to make schools better by having a fantastic nurse taking care of students when they aren't feeling well at school. I would like all students to feel safe to have a nurse that is there to help them when they aren't feeling great at school. I hope I can be a great nurse ,and so I can get the job to become someone great in there school. Thank you and I hope I can the job.",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
FEA77A729AC3,"Imagine walking into a classroom full of children just glaring at you, ans you teaching them a lesson that they have never heard of. A lesson i would teach to elementary students is about being active in life and why its's important to be active in life and it's,doing sports or or a physical activity, eating healthy, and going to the gym.

Doing a sport is very important, because you are getting the excercise you need and loosing weight. It is very important sports if your a child, because children are young and energetic, so it is good for them to run around. Kids don't have to do sports, they can just go ride a bike around the neighborhood, go for a daily jog, and go ride a skateboard. This could be there daily exercise or weekly excersie.

Eating healthy is very important, because you won't have a high chance of getting diabetes or heart diesease. Kids should eat there vegtables too, because it won't make you gain alot of weight. In my opinion I think vegtables are better than fruits. Children need to stay away from sugar, salt, and greasy food, because if you consume those types of foods it causes high blood presure, which gives you headaches. This could benefit for the rest of their lives.

KIds should go to the gym once in a while, because they can go on a tredmill for 10 minutes. Kids should lift dumbells also, becuase it gets them stronger, and they could lift them at any size. Box jumps are perfect for leg strength, and it helps you with your athlecticism and vertical. The gym is perfect for a exercise routine.

I would teach elementary students about sports and why they need to do it, because it could benefit your life, and going to the gym is an even greater way to stay in shape.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
33CC5A37AC8C,"This prompt is talking about if we are choosing our own character traits or is our character formed by influences. First you can choose your own character you just got to know about the person life in what the person did back when he was a teenager in what the person became when he start getting older. In my opinion choosing your own character would make you realize about things that happen back then when everything back then was really dangerous for example they had slaves,mudered people, treating people badly, people been racise and more that people did in we still have on this day because people dont want to listen or they just dont care about what they are doing with there life like can we atleast have peaceful without seeing peoepl dying or taking childrens from there mothers. As you can see life from back then was kinda different for example mothers would marry their own children they would have children with their own child they would force you to marry a old man that you dont even wanna marry or have kids with a old guy that you dont even love this why its good to do your own character because you be searching for information that you dont even know about in it be very interested.

First of all you have to include for information about your own character or if the character formed by influences beyond or control by anything many characters be having there own influences in you gotta find it out to see about or if they are controlling anything for examples like a kingdom,slavery. and being part of a war. As you can see when been through so many wars in some characters be soldiers or a leader of a war to teach his soldiers how to fight a war when they get into a war. For example british soldiers has fight so many wars with alot of countries they either fight for stealing food or because they own them money they do not want to pay them back or because they have a little issues going on between them in they fight to solve their issues.

As you choosing your character you can be creactive with it like you can put somemany things that you need like examples, reasons why you choose this character, get ideas for your character , give alot examples find anything you can so your character can have so many information that it is need it for your character. choosing our own character might be a little hard but we got to find a way to get all the information for it so we can start writing about them in how when find this character interested in we got to know alot of things that this character you are doing has a good information and you want to be curious about.

This quote or prompt helps to figure out about a character that you would like to talk about in what to know about it to see if it helps you later on, in to see what they did to help other people about everything that they went through in this help the students to see that been on a war it is not easy because you are trying everything you can to be alive like searching for your own character it is very interested because you want to see about them in learn alot about the in how they did everything they could to help eachother in to see how we fight for the equal rights alot more thngs that we know now.

My conclusion- how to choose your own character can be easy for you to write about in to find alot of things and important thigns that you would need for your character when you are putting your examples to a five page paragraph about how this character do alot of things in his past and to see if he still doing ,more things now in then. In by you choosing this character would make you realize alot of things in how everything happen back then when people was just trying to live and survive.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
FA0A1D6FEE25,"I agree with Ralph Waldo's quote "" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you somthing else is the greatest accmplishment. In todays society everyone wants to be part of the wave to whatever is popular. People always go the extra mile to impress other people even if they have to change their style or the way they act. It's hard to be yourself in todays society so those who can do it have accmplished something great. Being yourself is better because then you'll find your real friends.

Students in Middle School and High School for whatever reason want to be cool. They think doing drugs, breaking rules and being disrespectful to others is cool. When they get home they're a different person. They're respectful, follow all the rules and don't do drugs because thats the way they are raised, They're being themselves. That shows the impact of what people consider being cool is.

Some students are at the wrong spot at the wrong time and start hanging out with the wrong group of people to be cool. This is important because they could be offered drugs or be offered to skip class. The students would say yes because they want to be cool knowing very well never to do it. This shows what could happen to a student who are trying to be cool. when they know to stay in school and never do drugs because that won't help your education it would only slow it down.

For example one of my friends was skipping school and doing lots of things he wasn't supposed to be doing. He thought he was cool and told everyone. I guess you could say he got cool from it but in the long run he suffered. This is important because while him trying to be cool he ended up getting bad grades and getting kicked out of school. The school gave him one more chance and made him go to the carrer center where students who fail usually go. This shows what could happen when you try to be cool.

Being yourself is the best thing you can accomplish because you wouldn't worry about most things other students wear or say. You would go further in life being yourself and becoming something you want to become. If your don't want to become a doctor and want to be a car machanic then that what you do. Being yourself would make you more happy then trying to fit in. ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
90E5BB6CBE11,"I personally think that student should chose there on summer projects because is not going to be as much fun if a teacher choose it. I dont think students are going to do there summer project if is something boring. If student do something there interesting on they are going to do research and finish there project on time because went summer hits not many student are interesting on doing work. I think that is going to be fun doing something i like and not something the teacher wants us to do.

If student do a summer project about just studient animals look for there behavior, some student mite think is fun. They would be some student that is going to be boring or they won't go out as much and not see animals at all. I think student should just pick the topic they think is going to be fun for them and they are going to enjoy reaching about whatever they want to learn. Teacher can grade something interesting not some boring work they tell us to do. i think even the teacher can have fun reading all the thing we come up with in the summer is just going to be fun for student and teachers.

I think teacher would be even happier if student do something they are going to get the benefits of it maybe a student wants to learn about how to treat a open cut or how to save the world from pollution. That would be something interesting that a student can learn about and who knows it mite come in handy and same the world from pollution and treat open cuts because your mom or friends got a dip cut in the house or in school. I just think is a way to learn about something you want not what the school wants us to learn.

I think this is a good way to make all the students to learn something they enjoy doing. You are going to do a interesting project the you are going to like and is just fun to learn new things. you are going to learn even more by doing something fun.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.0,2.5
F075F9AD2AA4,"Do you think it is a good idea for the students to commit to a career at youg age? That is a good idea because the school will give the opportunity to know more things. Also, is a bad idea because some students have a lot of things to do after school, they have responsabilities example; they have to work, they have to do things in their house, or many things what a young can do. I choose students have to take the career at a young age because:

They will be ready when they have to work in that career, if they going to take the careers that they prefer it is going to be good, because they will practice and they will learn a lot in of that ,so they will focuse everyday in that career. The most important is they won't have any problems when they have to show everything what they learn after they did finish their career.

It is a good idea because is not bad that in some societies the students has to expected to identify a career by the hight school, because about that form the people can know what is his/her specialty, or what work realized in the high school ,if that person was good or bad in that career.

Is good that person know what he/she wants to be in the future, because some people don't know what they want to be, what is their dreams when they become adult ,but some people know what they want to be ,and what is their dream job. Is very important to know that you want to be sure about your future because this opportunities are not in every where we have to exploit the things the life give us, because when I was a little girl my dad alwas plead me that I enter a couses like English, computation,to play guitar, dance, and many things ,but I always respond no ,because I just wanted to play and that set , but now I know the importance to learn ,to know ,to make something ,and show to the world that you know that you can do that ,and nonthing in this world is impossible.

They will have the capacity to learn more things about the careers what they will going to choose. Also, the school will give them the opportunity to work in the summer or after school, this idea is amazing because in others countries like my country there are not career to choose in the schools ,the student are not ready or they are not ability to work in something because they don't practice nothing in the shool they don't know anything .They just study and don't have elective courses that ways, the student in my country don't work usualy the parent are who work.

The conclution is that the students have to take some career ,bacause is very important for the societies also for them, they will be capacity to know many things. Also, they will be ready to make the work what they choose in the hight school. And the student won't have complication or doubt to may complete their job. Finaly, the students will have a profession in something that they can make very well, but this courses is not just to show to the others persons the career that you took in the high school. This career is for you ,for your future more forward. What happen if you can process with your study, this courses is an advantage in your live. You can take out a benefit to this oppportunity.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
BA89E5BB44E3,"I may not have experienced working before, but I will be very useful and responsible at work. For my first step to know better and experience about real world, which real wrold I meant after graduated college and have real career, I need to learn and experience how to work at here. I could've go to a other place but as I am teeneger, can not go to for long distance so I choose here. One of the reason you should hire me, is I was in varcity swim team at school before so I know how to team work with co-workers, and I could use team work for team for customer servise also, like if I brought wrong order for a customer, I apologize first and bring right order with some extra cutomer servise. Second, I al ways help my mom and do chores for her. Clean living room, kitchen, basement, bathroom, and other rooms. That helps me when customer is complaining about like a table is dirty, or floor is mess, I can go there quickly and clean them fast as I could and go back to my job. Also, my hobby is to playing games. But I limited the time when to stop so I do not over-play and control myself to keep playing and stay up till midnight. Also, I have lifeguard certificate, so I know how to first aid a customers. For example, when a customer start choking, I can first aid and if that succeed, that customer will lovd this place come more often then usual. As conclution, I never worked before, but I have all these skills and responsbilities, you should hire me tothis place.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
CEC5B40D1688,"The technology that humans have developed is very advance; a lot of time has been dedicated to it, so society can have a better and easier way to access to technology. However, as all things that are crated by man are not perfect, and it has its positive and negative impacts on people. A lot of those impacts that technology have are negative impacts. For example, you loose the opportunity of interacting with other people, you can get addicted to technology, and you can get lazy, and all these negative impacts affect the new generation the most. The little kids end up playing video games their entire childhood; instead of playing outside, and making new friends.

First, technology it is not just to have fun with; you can play video games, but keep in mind that if you abuse of the use of technology you are going to get addicted in a very short period of time. Spending all your time in technology have its consequences. You loose the opportunity to be in contact with the people around you, you can loose your friends if you had any, and most important you can loose your communication that you once had with your parents. You can have hundreds of friends on social media, but it is not worth it if you do not spend time with them. Also one of the most negative impact is that little kids are getting addicted to technology. They are spending most of their childhood playing video games, and doing things that are not going to do any good for them in the future. They should be playing outside with their friends, and enjoying their childhood which is one of the most beautiful things they have. When you are a little kid you are so innocent that you do not have to worry about any problems the adults may have, and you do not have any problems to worry about either. Unfortunately that childhood have to end at some point because nothing last forever, but in the meantime you just have to live your childhood and not worry about any video games.

Second, you can use the internet for any need you may have, for there are hundreds of websites of anything you would like use. For example, shopping online, checking out book, and get any information you want. Some other websites are not quite useful like scams, or some websites that contains virus. At some point you may or may not run into a scam website which are used to obtain personal information that you have put online. They can get that credit card information that you used for your online shopping, your social security number, or even your own bank account number. There are people that work on trying to protect your personal information; they use their knowledge for the good of society, but there are also people who uses their skills and try to get your personal information, and use it for their own benefit. Keep in mind that those people can be smarter than you, and they can take every single dollar that you have in your bank account if you put your information at risk.

Third, you become lazier when you can get any information you want without making a big effort because you have everything at the reach of your hand by having access to the internet. You got so used to getting things fast and without making an effort, and when you have to wait to get any kind of information you get frustrated, for the fact that you have to go through a whole book, so you can that information. Man have been making your life easier by creating all the technological advances you have now. For example, you do not have to make an effort to wash your clothes, or wash the dishes you have been given all of that, so you have became lazier.

At the end technology can result positive impact to society; it has made our life easier, but it has resulted in a negative impact for the new generations. It has made the youth lazier than it was in the old times; teenagers are now addicted to social media, and we are loosing the communication with our parents which is very important to have. Little kids are loosing their childhood in result of the new technological advances that allows them to be playing video games and not going outside to make friends. Technology has put the security of our information at risk by no protecting it enough. Maybe it is the way we use technology, but it has more negative impact than positive impact to our communities around the world.                              ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
F58106266977,"Thomas Jefferson wrote, ""Determine never to idle...

It is wonderful how much may be done.

If we are always ."" Do what we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose.

I try to do my best to Accomplish everything, i can as fast i can to catch up. Not being active its not good nor healthy, and It wouldn't help you progress in future reference. it helps you to be more prepare and organize and. ready for everything. Always have a mindset goal, realistic goals, and measurable.

We do Accomplish more if we're doing something, keeping yourself occupied. Sometimes when you're not doing nothing, (meaning) being inactive, It's to rest for an amount of time. To think and, analize our point of views and,ideas.

""Determine to never be Idle"" (meaning lazy) I know there's time when we all want to be lazy and not doing nothing, but thats not get you no where near your Goals. As Thomas Jefferson said "" It's Wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing"".

Thomas Jefferson has an amazing point with this Qoute.

This qoute Has alot of meanful information behind it, and i think everyone

Has a their own way to learns about it.

Not any person create a good qoute mostly, Qoute are written or said by people Whom were Famous , or made a great impact in our world, and, they're always going to be remember as the person and their story. This is all i have to say about my prompt.",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
BBE9DDA6E3BD,"When I was in the fifth grader I went to the camp over summer the first day they made us do a project with a group to earn the title of the best group. The benefits of working in the group or working alone. Working in the group is more beneficial rather than working alone to work in the group is fun, makes me be more responsible and it is also the easier and creative way of finding solutions for the problem.

First of all, working in the group is fun. For example, I have a friend who didn't like to work with anyone or even talk in his classroom,,, one day his teacher put him with group of students after working with them he finally made a new friends and the work that teacher was giving them was much more enjoyable with mates. For that reason I think this is a great way of learning, communicating and building friendship with people around us.

Also group work makes us more responsible. I have friend his name is Generic_Name and I want to tell you something about him he is the most irresponsible student I have ever seen, but when it comes to a group work he is getting his job always done because he doesn't want his group lose the competition or simply fail the project. This made my vision clear that working with others makes people more responsible.

Some say working with a group distracts them from the task, but I will disagree with them because I believe, that working in the group helps you find the creative way of solving the problems. In my computer science class we usually work with groups so there is this guy that thinks he knows more than some of us and for that reason he didn't work with us, so we solved the problem the way that no one in our class has solved the problem this way and the teacher gave us extra points for being the creative group of the class, and the smart guy that I mentioned before couldn't solve that problem. This is way I don't like to underestimate my teammates or classmates I know that together we can be smarter, faster, and even

If the problem seems unsolvable together we can do it.

In conclusion, working with a group is enjoyable, make you fulfill your obligations, and makes it easy for students to solve any kind of tasks. Finally, students are not going to be stressed about the problem and will complete the task with higher quality.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
16DA6810DEF3,"Would you like to have more time at school? I would like to have more time at school. Setting at class and learning more things. Getting work done and relaxing. I have three reason why we should have more time at school.

My first reason why we should have more time at5 school is getting work done. If theres more time at school,then theres more time to do your homework at school. Getting your homework done so you dont have to do ot at home because you finish your work at school. My reason is getting work done.

My second reason why we should have more time at school is your friends. School can get boring so thats why you have friends so you can hangout with them at school. Your friends can be your work buddy so you and your friends can work together at school so you can finish your work. You can have fun with your friends at school so it wont be so boring i school. My other reason is your friends.

My third reason why we should have more time at school is your grades. Is your grades bad? Well you can make it up because theres more time at school. If you have more work and if you get a good grade on it,the your grade will go up. Theres more time at school so you can make up work that you did bad on because theres more time at school. My last one is about grades.

So there you go,I gave you three reason why we should have more time at school. I think there good reasons. I hop you area what I wrote. If you dont area its ok. Stay in school kids.",3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0
A3A0AB366927,"Working idenpendently is harder than working as a group, but it's also better to learn things. Etheir working as a group or not you are still getting work done, and learning as you go. When I state that you can ""learn"" it means that you can find out things especially as a group where everyone has they're own ideas and facts about topics. Some people just take working as a group as an advantage to just copy and get answers just to get things done. Copying others does not help you learn anything other then getting your work completed.

I think it is better working alone beacuse it would be better for me to learn. Yes, i'd probably take a long time getting it done just because I would be taking my time finding little details. Some people choose not to work independently but I do. One reason why I think it is better to work alone is because of the fact that after your done you'll feel relieved and happy. If you did what you had to do alone without anybodys help besides the person who gave you the assignment, or job whatever than you done a good job just by doing your work independently.

Working as a group isn't bad I just suggest it should be better for students or anyone to work idependently also to learn what their doing instead of just getting it done when you can learn and get it done. Some people end up just copying off someone else to get stuff done. Others they actually do it and share with others who actually also have stuff done to share. Not everyone copies, nor cheats just alot of people such as students take working as a group an advantage to copy. Working together as a group can be much more easier than alone but still working independently is much more helpful for your learning benifits.

Anyone who is not used to doing independent work gets a little kick on working alone because their so used to working as a group. It helps people push them selves on finding more details, facts, and clues for what they need. If you do struggle of course you can obvisouly ask a teacher or anyone for a hand in help because you could be stuck on something. You can focus more on your work while your alone because if your in a group working it gets you distracted. If you hear other students or people talking to you, and the rest of the group giving each other ideas while your focued to find your own ideas gets you to unfocused.

Somebody elses ideas in the group could be wrong, and when you write them and use those ideas you could be wrong as well. People usually rely on others to get answers which is not right. Also it's hard for others to communicate with others as a group which it also makes it better for anyone to work alone. You could do things your own way while working independently. All of the things I wrote about help show that it is better to work independently than with others in a group.                        ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
BEC3906A1122,"Do you think that teenagers should be home by 10 p. m. or not? In this computer, I will argue that teenagers should have a curfew and be home by 10 p. m. to keep them safe and away from trouble. The streets will do you know good, so if teenagers get curfew that will be keep them away from the streets and be home safe with their family and friends. I can relate to this prompt, because I'm a teenager and I know how it feels like not having a curfew to save you from getting in to trouble that's why I will argue that it's important to have a curfew.

I think that if teenagers have curfews it will keep them away from trouble like I have already said. Not having a curfew is like you sending your kids to go die or giving them away to the streets and telling them they can do whatever they want and they will not get in trouble. Curfew will help a lot if the government make it a law that teenagers should be home by 10 p. m. if they are home their will be no getting hurt or being in trouble will the law or your parents. I'm a teenagers myself and I would love to keep a curfew that will keep me away from trouble and other bad creams that will get me in trouble will the law or keep me away from my family. No one loves getting in trouble,but if they are out last will other people they call friends that will get them in more trouble, because not all friends are friends when it comes to the streets; or going to jail. I know for sure that if we teenagers have a curfew their will be know one dying, getting hurt, or getting in trouble with the law which means going to jail not all the time, but their are lots of teenagers who go to jail just, because they don't have curfews. I know I'm a child and I don't know much about the law, but I rather get a curfew than go to jail or get in trouble with the law and my family just for staying out last at night.

Teenagers will be safe if they have curfews they will not be in streets or get their parents worried about where they are or what they're doing. Safety is the number one thing in the United States and any other country. The curfew will help them, because if they said 10 p. m. they have to be inside than they're inside, because no one can get to them where they're a safe place like there homes. They will be safe they will not get in to fights with people they don't know all, because of they were out side all night. They're too young to be outside last at night they need to sleep; because I know some teenagers go out on schools and that can ready affect them, because if you don't get enjoy sleep at night you will not be able to do your work in class and when you are sleeping you will miss out on what the teacher is talking about and when it comes to test you fail it all, because you didn't go sleep and stay outside with your friends all night. Teenagers need to be where they're safe, so that nothing will happened to them and their parents will not worry, because there are lots of creams out there you don't want your kids to be outside at night with all the crazy that's going on out there it's scary and I know no parents wants to see there kids get hurt, because they didn't have a curfew and they don't know when to come home. Curfew is there to help and keep us safe and the government need to make that law I really know that if they have curfew time hours how country will be a better place and no one will feel scared to go outside or stay there for long.

Curfew will make you have a better future it might sound crazy, but if we have curfews now as teenagers in the future when we get a job it will be easy for us, because we are already use to getting home quick, so that will not be a problem for us at work. The curfew will be a big help to us in the future like I said going to work early will not be a problem, because no office want a person that comes to work last. So, giving us a curfew at this age will help us a lot in the future.

Some people say that having a curfew is a bad and interfere in young people's lives, but they're wrong, because it keeps them away from trouble, safe, and they will have a better future if we have the curfew.

That's why in the future I would love to see the government make a law about that to keep us safe and keep us away from trouble, so i would give an arm to see that the government make that law I don't know how, but i know that ""God"" will make that happened in the future.",3.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
85808F0851D8,"Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing.

My position on this issue, I think students would not benifits from being able to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, because schools programmes its helping you to get more informations, learning more things to get high level.

For example when you attend classes in the schools it will be conversations between the teachers and students about the term than you will benifits more informations and working between students like a groups its reason to get more knowledge.

attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing you will not have attention like in schools classrooms because the teachers they helping you to understand and explaine more.

When you have a research at schools attend classrooms you can use technology and books and you can work like groups it will be more easy to do your research. But when you have attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing you will not have a conversation between others students to get more knowledge.

In my opinion, I prefer schools attend classes because when you focus with the teacher you will understand more about the term. For expample in my english class i pay attention at the class i can understand, and when i have a questions i ask my teacher to explaine for me.

I desagree with students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Some courses you can't take it at home because you you need to worked like a groups. For example when i have work to do at schoul classroom's we work together to make the exrcises or a topic easy, and when you get absent and you left some works the teachers helping you to do it.

The schools classrooms programmes will help you about the time and they have specific time to work confortable and to know what have to do, some students they need support from they teachers and counselors to make sure they do alright. For example when i need support my teachers they support and they give me enough time to make i understand everythings.

Students who choice to learn at home by way of online or video conferencing they will not get conversation with speaking with others and with teachers. For examlpe when you have to work on topic it will be hard for some students to understand more.

In my opinion for the students who prefer to attend school classroom's it's good decision, because they will have more infermations and more experience about the way to make a plan and more knowledge about the courses you taking at school.

I think students would not benifit from being able to attend classes from home.                                             ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.0
E17E9E75ECEB,"It wouldn't even matter if the school lunch changes to healthy food. Even until this day they still don't change to a heathly choice. Students has tried to make the school lunch meals change, but there wasn't any difference. Sometimes the studentst doesn't make good healthy food choice there will be times that the lunch menu will have healthy choices and not so heathly choices. For example: the lunches gives us two options one is pizza and the other rice with chicken, students will definitly go for pizza.

It would be a good idea that the school lunches menu changes to a healthy menus. We do need to consider other students and their eating habbits, most students doesn't even eat, they even go a whole day without eating. If the school were to change the unhealthy food they should get rid of pizza, hot dogs, and chicken nuggets and make up for potatos with rice and chicken, a nice pasta salad with tomatoes, onions, and, spinich. Some students are vegan so maybe they can have a veggie burger anything with veggies. If that's the case to change school lunch menu, the school should consider about how and where they should spend money on things like changing the floor tiles it's unnecessary it could have been for something better. No one really cares about how bad the school lunch is, it's not worst thing in the world. Anyways thats why us students have to be smart and bring our own food to school like most of them do.

In reality, it really doesn't matter because students still eat school food, some students do complain about how nasty the food is but they still won't bring their own food how logical is that. To be honest there are sometimes good lunches like we said before it's not best thing in the world. So it's okay don't waste on changing something when you knew it could of been done from the start. Just bring your own food from home and you won't have worry about the school menu. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
7EA986233EDA,"One of minister Winston Churchill most famous quotes is ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm"". Some people think that most people are consists on going with failure as a way that shows us that most people end up with failure again. They feel that it's true most people end up failing and end up doing the same process over and over again. I believe that most of the people should believe that success can be achieved only if you try but you will end up failing some of the times because first reason some people give up so easily and second reason they'll never give it their best some of the times and final reason is that people end up saying ""it's too difficult"".

First reason is that people most of the times end up giving up is because of the lack of things such as work or other sorts of jobs it could also be anything in life that people will give up on. It could be like saying it's a job and your been stressing out so much that you couldn't take it anymore so you decided to just call it quits, but for this problem people should always try there best and never let any other problems get into the way of their accomplishment, all ways stay positive and never lose on what you enjoy like giving up on it.

Second reason could be is that people don't ever try giving it their best it's always a been a problem cause some of the times people end up saying i'm not going to even try. you'll need to give it your best and try to give it all you got it could be on a test or it could also be on another problem in life by doing this you could achieve on being successful and end up doing great with no struggle or bad choices.

Final reason is that people end up saying that ""it's to difficult"" but by showing this people can make it difficult on themselves by not focusing or doing what your supposed to it can be in some situations where you have difficult times but in the end if you end up following direction or staying on task it could led to having a successful accomplishment.

As you have read that people should have any other way but to be always successful and always trying your best, you will end up failing but it's always good to never giving up. Only when will we ever end up failing that will always find a way to end up doing it correctly. On that day will we ever have to worry about failing.",3.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0
07F3241EB3C6,""" How would pairing older students with younger students in school be helpful for both older and younger students?""

When I was in elementary school in Zambia I skipped 4th grade and went in 5th grade and it was challenging for me to keep up with the work in 5th grade. I was used to doing the same work as the other 4th graders in my school however things changed when I skipped 4th grade to 5th grade. When I got in 5th grade I started doing harder work than I did in 4th grade, I started getting lower grades than I did in 4th grade. When I was in 5th grade (where there were older people than me) I had to work hard to be at the same level as the other 5th graders. This was like taking college classes in high school. Pairing older students with younger students in school will help both the older and younger students because the younger students will be able to learn from the older students, the older students will learn how be good examples for the younger students, and the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learning and become good examples when they grow up.

When younger students are paired with older students, the younger students will be able to learn from the older students. Generally speaking kids are most likely to follow what older people are doing. In this case if older students are paired with younger students the younger students will learn good manners from the older students. Younger students will learn many things from the older students such as: good behavior, hard work, kindness, and etc... When I'm sitting around elder at home I learn a lot about different countries and cultures in the world. For instance, when the elders are talking about what is happening in Congo - a country in Africa - I learn about the economy in Congo and its government. It is just like learning in my Civics class at school. This is beneficial for me because I get learn and share about is going in some other places with my Civics teacher.

When older students are paired with younger student, the older students will learn how to be good examples for the younger students. Being a good example for younger kids is best for what the will do and be in the future hence, it is why my parents tell me to be the good example for my younger my younger brothers by being well behaved and respectful so that my younger bothers will learn from my behavior. My AVID teacher told me that when his son was young he taught him that boots were bananas and bananas were boots therefor his son knew that boot were bananas and bananas were boots. According to what AVID teacher told me in the pasted sentence it shows that kids do what elders do. It is really important for older people to be good examples for the younger ones.

When older students are paired with younger students, the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learn in school and become good examples when they grow up. Additionally when older students are paired with younger students it will encourage the your students to work hard and on the same level as the older students. I have a friend who skipped 7th grade at my school. When I asked her how she was doing in 8th grade, she said at first it was really hard for her to maintain her grades. But she encouraged herself to work hard and get good grades. She had to study every night and on the other hand she had work to do at home. It became challenging for her to keep up with both school work and work she did at home. Ultimately from all her hard work she got a scholarship for college while in middle school.

Pairing older kids with younger kids in school is helpful for both the older students and the younger students because the younger students will be able to learn from the older students, the older students will learn how to be good examples for the younger students, and the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learning in school and become good examples for others when they grow up. How would your life be like being in a place where there are no elderly people to learn from? We should always be good examples for younger people so that they can learn from us. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
987A42F72474,"There are some student that from a young age they have in mind of what career they want to choose i life. there some that they don not know from which career to choose from so is very important that when you enter high school you try to select a career that you would like for your future in life, but also you need to be thinking if you are going to go to college you need to start thinking about that to. some societies want student to to choose to which college there going to go to or what they want to be in life or what kind of things they make them happy or in what they are good for? many people have skill on many different things when you get to high school you will to choose something. some societies let student decide they wait until there going to graduate to see what they would like to, some choose to continue with school other choose to not go to college. so is very important that you start from younger age at seen what career you like which university you would like to go because with having something in mind you will find out why are you studying so hard what are you spending a lot of time in school

Example: if you choose what you like or what you wan to study it will be very easy for you that when you want to graduate you won't struggle to much thinking about what do i choose or what is best for me? many people don't know what they want or many people do not choose nothing they only want to graduate and get their diploma and there done, but other they fight for what they want what are capable to do or show.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
0CCB18D0CAB7,"My central idea is supported with specific imformacion about this threes reason, one make something great for other people, two specific job, three skill. and give my opinion about all this and be very specific.

In my opinion I agree with Emerson, Because is very important to make semething great for other people that you want to help. This could be a good reason constantly to help a lot people to accomplishment dreams, goals and purpose in the life. For example make something good for people that want growing and that the families feel pround by the achievement. Other example, give to other people a reason for to going forward and cumply their dreams and purpose in the life.

Specific job, a specific job make something greatest for a lot people in this world. In this job we help to peoples that want cumply their purpose in their lifes and enjoy their accomplishment. Specific job that can help a lot peoples to get many oportunities for working in any work. We help to get a good information about a specific job that want greatest a magnific accomplishment. We recollected a good information about your dreams and goals that you want, for get a excellent job that you want in your life. My idea central is help to other people to find greates accomplishment in your lifes. For example we can help to other people to find information about carreer and specific job. Other example reach information about what want the people in specific for get an amaizing accomplishment.

To have a skill to trying to make something else is the greatest accomplishment that you can make for other people. when you decide to help to other peoples that is very interested to going forward with the batalle of wanted fo get a good accomplishment. For example you have a big ability for help to other people to get a greates accomplishment, you can help to othetr people, and this can be some amaizing in your life and in my life too.

My conclusion is help to other people to find a greatest accomplishment and purpose in the life, that can make very happy the rest of the life and enjoy a magnific job that I want, and always going forward and never finally the dreams and porposes, and never stop to dream high.    ",2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
4EB117877F23,"I feel that we should work in groups because its more beneficial and others might have a better idea then you about something. Working alone might be boring for some people and if that person does know that they are doing the groupe could hekp them.

The first reason why I think wokring in groups is more beneficial is because more than on brain think better. More then one person can help on what they are working on. They can help each other on what they need help on. Four people in a group can get things down faster then only one person. People in groups have less to do then one person because in a group everyone does something and being by yourself mean you have to do everything on your own. You also get more tired if your wokring alone and in a group your talking to one other and discusing what you are going to do.

Another reason why I think wokring in gourps is more beneficial is becuase you can learn something new from another person and if your working alone you only have what you know. In a group you come up with more ideas and support them if you think they are right or wrong. If you work alone you get stressed out and if you work in a group you know what you have to do and thata the rest of your group is doing, but if they need help you can help them out on what they need.

My thrid reasaon why I think working in a group is better is becuase you can support other people ideas and oppinions on what they think is better on the work. They can have a better idea then you do and might work better on the job. If you wokr alone you only have your ideas that you think are good but if you work in a group someone could have a better idea or oppinion.

I feel that we should work in groups because its more beneficial and others might have a better idea then you about something. Working alone might be boring for some people and if that person does know that they are doing the groupe could hekp them. People in groups have less to do then one person because in a group everyone does something and being by yourself mean you have to do everything on your own. ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0
9E8F3C6405CA,"Why do people ask more then one person for advice? I think that people stress out about the problem that they are having that I'ts better to hear it in another person's perspective, what If they have gone through the same problem that your facing, they all have different things to say so you can think about It in multiple perspectives.

I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because people may stress out about it a lot they may over think it and that's not good I'ts always better to talk to more then one person because they all have different things to say so you can think about it in different perspectives It actually helps you make a decision faster or it helps you with whatever you may be going through.

I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because what if they have been in the situation as you they have already gone through it so they can help you out and tell you how it was for them so you know you arent the only one who has gone through that problem it may also help by doing what they did when they were in that situation.

I think that going to more then one person is a good thing because they all have different things to say so you can think about It in multiple perspectives like you can think about everything they told you and it can help you with what you are going through. in conclusion i think that it is best to talk to more then one person for advice.",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
81B000BCC5B3,"Succes come from failure without loss enthusiasm. Success does not come as a easy as a it sounds, succes comes from har work and failures.

Succes is not somethig everyone can reach specally without fails and enthusiams. Fail mades people stay down but people decide if yhey want to be down or work harder until they success.

Cristiano Ronaldo is one of the best soccer playes in all the world. When he begins his soccer correar ,he was seen as a normal soccer player, he fail some many times. There were soccer games when he did not score any goals or his team loss. His enthusiasm made him work harder and harder. Hard work made him the person who he is now, he is considered by so many people the best soccer player of all the history but is wasen't easy, fails made him work harder in order to success in his correar after 15 years he keep working hard to be succefully in life.

Enthusiam made people work harder until they reach succes. Enthusiam is the feeling that makes people go foward even they fail multiple times. When people have the type motivation fail is just a symple word becuase most of the people want to keep trying until they finally succes in life.

My mom is a good example , a few months ago she was trying to get her Driver Licence Permit. In order to get it she had to took a test that consist about all the rules in the road. She fail the first time, she was sad beucause she could not get her permit but she had a big motivation inside her that impulsed her to go and retake the test again. She fail the test twice , she never give up she worked hard to pass the test. She did not tooked the test 3 or 4 times, she toked 5 times until she finally passed the test and she got her permit, months later she go her Driver license. She fail so many times but she never give up. When you want to succes does not matter how many times you fail, you most get up work hard until you succes . As you can see, succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.",3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
876B9CDDC1FC,"I donr undertan why people is stupid to ''act' as someone else. From my point of view, is so stupid. Also, there is Latinos who copy other Latino's accent trying to be cool or staff, and it's not make sense, because that means they do not love their own country and do not have self-steem. Because with that they're showing someone who is not themselves. And the most stupid thing is when they show some love to their country and apparent like nothing happen. That means being doble face. I do not like that kind of people. However, that's no the only thing. People start to follow what someone else say. For example, if someone say that they like short hair, someone else do it to feel a little bit of atention. What I want to get with that is,that they is another people who do not have atention or love and start doing things to their friend or other people start to pay them atention. Personally, I feel comfortable with the little what I have. It's not my idea be someone that I don't. And I also start to be neutral. How is it? For me, it's like if someone want to be friend, good; if people do not want to meet me, it's ok, too. Lastly, I don't care about other people, I only care about me, my 4 friends and my family, and that's it. I feel I don't need to meet more people. I'm good with what I have, because while less people I met, less people treason me. ",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.0
CB4C85EFAE67,"The author Waldo Emerson wrote a statement or quote that it say ,""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow"" basing on my point of view or experiences, I agree with him, I think the same, we will never grow if we keep doing the samething that we already mastered.

I'm taking this position on this issue becasue I have my reasos to sopport my position and to explain why this author is right.

First reason is on point of view if you're already mastered in something and you're keep doing it , to be better or go beyond then my opinion is that you're wasting your time on something unnesesary because you're already mastered , just be happy with what you have and knows a sample are the

Childrens they always wanna something if they have it they want more and more or when they are playing they wanna play possiblely the all day when they realize the day is already gone but they don't care because they think that they have enough time to play so it is the same with us. sometimes we wanna be betters than another people or just feel good but we're wasting our time in somethin that we already mastered.

Secondly the author Emerson show us the true in a quote we can stop doing something that we already mastered we could try to do something else or try to learn something new that can help us in the future of that way we can start growing because we start to learn about differents things so we have more knowledge and we can survive and we can realize or knows how the life looks like. A sample to be a boss you need to know or have more knowledge at least than yours employs or to be amanager you have to know many things.

Finally unless you try to do it better or be better than the rest of the people always is gonna be someone else who is better than you then that time you're wasting doing something beyond than you knows ,use it to teach someone else or learn about some else how to be better in something , teaching someone else or learning from someone else you can start to grow. A example is a old brother he learn about his parents and also teach and care his youngest brother of the way he is starting to growing up because his taking a responsability .The example can show us that we need to about experiences or advices or people who has more knowledge of that way .

In conclusion for these reason and supporting with examples that I wrote, I agree and think the same with The author Waldo Emerson , I took this position because If we try to do something beyond what we already mastered, we will never grow. Also we wasting our time and we could use that time to learn from someone something else what we do not know or teach to someone else about our knowledge . what we can help us to grow or be better in the future concluding I agree with Emerson's statement.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
9C6132E41DDE,"If I was to explain to my teacher if I prefer to work in groups or work alone, I would pick work alone. Working alone is good because you could think of ideas that some students can't think about. For example,working alone can get you a better high score in the class then working in groups. Another example is when your working in groups it can cause you to not finish the work you started because your either talking or not focused in what your supposed to do. In some cases some students like working alone because they get to turn in there work on time so they don't have to fail the class. Another example, some students are really quiet and they are shy to talk to people so they work alone so they don't need to be behind everyone else who isnt doing there work.

Students often don't really get a lot of help from other students when they work in groups. Often some kids make the mistake on joining groups but then when it comes to doing work only 2 students do the work and then the other 2 don't do anything. Students sometimes don't even do anything they just sit around and talk to there friends about other things then they talk about the work they need get done or there on the phone or playing games. For example some students don't like doing anything they just like to sit around and talk but on the other hand they are students that like doing there work so it's best to see that students like working alone then to be working in groups. In some cases some students don't let them talk to there friends because they think they are gonna make there child fail that class and some parents are gonna blame the friends then there own children. For example if a parent gets a phone call from a teacher saying oh your student is failing my class because there not doing there work like they used to before the parent is gonna feel bad because there gonna think oh my child is hanging out with kids there not supposed to be with. In my opinion I think it's best for students to work alone then to be working in group. Sometimes in life we want everything but sometimes we have to earn them all by ourselves not with someones help but our own help.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
6BDF73E50719,"THE SUCCESS OF LIFE

the success of hes life is through because when you are star every time you failure and failure,but the that failure you learn how you continue your life but and your road you see are new failure and you are star again but like that you learn how to continue your life; because and your future the that failure you are stay there because you know how you attack that fail the you have and your life and try to find the we ideas what are you like and don't forget the you have your family and ask questions if you have or are your friends the more closed you, but don't forget in time have a person they said if your friends but that person is try to destroy you because he or she have a jealousy you because he see the you have more opportunity then you try try to change your opinions and your goals but never follow that directions the that person.

When you have a opportunity take that because that is your like, Try to have a new opportunity and get that before other person have the same carrier not keep your goal because if that person get first that carrier your life change because you said my carrier stop here because other person won the job first them me,like in my life I have a job but in times is so burn and them said I one to change my job a other more better because not pay me the enough to work their like the all week I work 5 days the that 5 days I work 4 days for my self and is not to easy to clean everything for my self I took with my boss to find a another employed, but she said no because this mouths is not business and thats why she no can to find a another employed to help me, to this point I failure because a not won enough money to help at my mom like pay the rent or help and another object.

the enthusiasm they show you, the you never due back you need to go at front the everything you never give you secrets at others person because that person use and you give him more opportunities he you have thats why you never when I said never give your secrets at person because is like you give your goals house, car and including the family , because all at that person;the enthusiasm dislike your first goal because that help you at can work you get your goals and studying is the most important because as you not study you never get you want to want because the study is the most important in your life, the your grades in your schools demonstrate if you fight for yours dreams or you want to work and never work the you like it, because in times you have a negatives times you go away the you road.

The negatives things is take the wrong way,because in times you have a persons jealously they try the you not stay more up the thats persons and try the you go down but never follow that directions the that person because affected your job or your company or and you want to work and don't forget what yo like the have family and friends they help you and friends the your ask if you have a question.

Don't follow the directions the thats person bad, because that person destroy your your goals and another things the you have but never give have you you work, how can you do,how you organization and another thins the you have for take the good direction the yous companies the your goals because is so important the you continue how you dude and how you work, thats why the you never the follow the bad things.

Today I learn the enthusiasm give you goals and good directions and is not important if you failure because I know the you can find another alternatives they help you go for a good directions at the top, and you foollow the negatives thins because the that bad things you go away if you follow the the bad directions but never forget you have a family and friends they stay there to help you and if you had e question you can ask maybe give you a good ideas or others things.                                       ",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
597D76A3BF40,"I would like to start of this topic with a important question that no human being really thinks about, ""How is technology impacting our health?"" That is one of the most important questions that we can't leave unanswered.

The use of technology have rooted in our lives, from the moment we wake up till the moment we go to bed we have hundreds of interaction with various devices, software programs, and tools. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having any contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to any other person. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives.

While one might think that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on people's lives, others might think that the lack of human contact due to the use of technology had negative effects on people's lives which most people agree with.

When comparing two human beings, one human being that always uses technology to do everything, shop, check out books, play games, do homework, and even talk to friends or family members, that person is most likely going to get sick, be in a lot of pain, or even feel depressed sooner then the person that prefers not to use technology at all but instead of using technology they would rather go out to the store to buy a book, go out to the store to shop new clothes, and even instead of calling on the phone to check on a family member they would rather go out and see them in real life. The reason the person that uses technology more is more likely to get sick or be in pain sooner than the other one is because not only computers and devices encourage more sedentary behavior among users but they also frequently lead to poor posture, neck stain, back issues, and hearing loss. This sort of behavior can lead to chronic pain and discomfort that is hard and not really easy to treat.

Now that we have explained and understood this topic a little bit better let's go back to the question that we asked at the beginning, in case some of you guys forgot the question, the question was

""How is technology impacting our health?"" If people really took the time to think about this question that we usually always leave unanswered we would have known that technology isn't impacting our health in any positive way, technology actually makes us stressed, makes our eye vision bad, gives us back pain, hearing loss, and a lot of other negative outcomes. Another reason why people might feel depressed when they use technology a lot, is because they don't really interact with people and dont have any friends since all they do is stay at home and do everything on their device. It's scientifically proved that every human being need at least one or more friends to talk to every time they feel down and don't feel really good about something. That is the reason why most of the people that use technology a lot, sometimes feel depressed and don't really like to interact with other people around them.

In conclusion , technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others and the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had a negative effect on people's life and if people don't learn how to control and manage their time and not use technology every chance they get, our next generation will be exactly the same as this one right now .The sad thing about the limitation of human contact due the use of technology is that there is no turning back at this point we are in a society where technological innovation and progression is the norm; It would take a minor miracle to reverse all this disaster. In order for all of this mess to get better,

people need to start learning about how to balance their time even if they're using technology, otherwise it is only going to get worse and many people will start feeling pain in their back, getting sick, feeling depressed due to the lack of interacting with people and due to the use of technology.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.5,4.0
4B0CF2CFCB4A,"Should people follow their own instincts, or should they follow other people step?

If people seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters they would not fail in life; however, people should make their own decisions. People should make their own decisions because they can define their self, follow their instincts, and get experience through the life.

First, people should make their own decision because they can define their self. Every single person should make a difference on the world. For example, I do not like to be guide for others person, I like to be different than every one else, try new things, and have my own ideas. Also, around the world are many people that are known for define their personality and for try to change the world with their ideas. Barack Obama is one of them, he was known for his humanity and his charismatic. Every person was made it to perform extraordinary different decisions. People should make their own decisions because they can define their self.

Next, people should make their own decisions because they can follow their instincts. Many times ours instinct are right, but sometimes we let others person tell as what to do, therefore we fail. For example, when we are taking a test and we make cheating,

we fail the test because we not even like to try and follow our instincts. When I have to take a test and I do not know much about the test, I just follow my instincts and at the end, I got good result because is not necessary to do what others persons do. Is more about what you believe that is the best. There is not major accomplishment than do your best, to believe on your-self. People should make their own decisions because they can follow their instincts.

Finally, people should make their own decisions because they can get experience through the life. When a person make their owns decision do not matters if they are successful, or if they fail. Because at the end they learned how it was it and how to do next time. But if they never try, they never would know how hard, or easily is achieve something. For example, last year I fail all my SOL because an friend told me that he pass it all his SOL and was easily.

He suppose to be a expert, so I truth he. But was not tru and I learned that is better try by my self. now I capable to give advice to anthers students and help them. If I never had make my own decisions, I would never get experience. People should make their own decisions because they can get experience through the life.

In conclusion, people should make their own decisions because they can define their self, follow their instincts, and get experience. Every person should make the difference on the World and express their own ideas. When people follow their instincts we accomplish good result. Also, when people got experience through the life following their instinct they could be successful and are capable to advice other people. Every single person have different opinions, decisions, and experiences. With differents person we can build a rich world. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
D594B486E6B5,"People that have their faces in front of a screen with there back slouching with the help of technology. Technology is advancing year by year and month by month. When teens or adults get there hands on the new technology they will spend weeks or even months in their rooms, trying to figure out what the device can and cannot do. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives, because it can lead to bad communication skills, health problems and being inactive.

However, not everyone agrees with this statement. Some people claim that technology has a positive effect on peoples lives. Neverless, this position overlooks an important point, mainly that technology cannot change how much human contact you have or do not have. For example, my friend she cannot drive, but she can have items get delivered to her; books, food, and clothes. Furthermore, when the delivery person came she did not know the proper way to greet him. Do to technology, people can have bad communication skills and they don't know how to communicate with people when they are in contact with someone.

Moreover, by being isolated, technology can lead to bad communication skills. When someone gets the newest device or game, they want to know how it works. By learning what the device or video game can and cannot do, they usually spend a month learning how the device works or how to unlock the next level in the game. For instance, my brother got a new video game, he has isolated himself in his room, so he can beat the level and go on to the next. When he was finish with the level, he had a hard time communicating properly. Before he played his video game, his grammar was good; now it wasn't. For example he would use the wrong past and present tense. Thus, by staring at the screen for so long, he has got very inactive.

Additionally, sitting on the couch or in a chair with a screen in front of you, every day for a whole month can make a person inactive. People that are inactive can become very lazy, and they intend on making a lot of mistakes when they are talking. They can also gain weight or have health problems. To illustrate, sitting in front of a screen while eating junk food can cause you to gain weight and can lead to health issues. During spring break, my friend had nothing to do, he was on his laptop everyday eating junk food.

Now he has to be careful on what he can and cannot eat, because he will get heart burn.

If he does not stop eating unhealthy foods in front of a screen he will gain more weight and have more health issues.

He does not know how to ask for help; he needs someone to push him to go outside and enjoy the weather, instead of being in front of a screen all day long.

Based on this argument, one must conclude that the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives. Technology can effect us in many different ways; bad communication skills, health problems and being inactive. In conclusion, technology can change human contact in a negative way.",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
EC3F3F26E635,"One of the things I want to acumplish in the future is to graduate from college and become a pharmasist. One day I was thinking about what I would want to be in the future and my goals was to have a job that I would be able to help people in and enjoy it. I wanted to have a job that I would be exited to go to everyday to help others and make my parents proud. So I thought about becoming a doctor because you help people but I don't think I would enjoy that job and I don't like being at the hospital, and just then I thought about becoming a pharmastst then I remembered that my parents have already told me of it as a good job to have and it actually is, it will make my parents proud of me, I would help people get the medication they need, and I'm sure I would enjoy it.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
DFD93C26F453,"An old adverb can hurt someone no matter if it's through songs,books or movies. It can hurt us in any way and the adverbs matter a lot of your typing and use the wrong verb.

It can bring down your grade but you can practice everyday to get better at writing and know your verbs.

Depending on the verb if its right or wrong if its wrong your grade goes down lets say if you have a 96 on a test and the verb is bad.

It will go down to a 94 if its more then the lower your grade goes and if its right you have no problems with typing. A correct prompt

You can even miss a verb if your not careful enough. Anything can hurt your grade by being small things to big things including miss spelling.

Bad verbs can be everywhere including movies and books to scripts that's why people have to be extra careful typing. spelling. reading and pronouncing a word.

That's why you have to be extra careful and read the sentence over and over again till you know it's correct and to see if its all good. if you do it good enough you might be looking at a grade thats would be higher than a c but if you dont at least a c or a d and it couldnt be bad. But your grade means anything more in school and you should take good care of it to. if you want to keep making your parents proud and get rewards too. so thats the good thing about it to keep a higher grade ",2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.5
9E2645222231,"Although some says that inactivity serve a purpose, because the can get more time to them selves then when they are in activities, actually determine never to be idle, because we can accomplish many things; If we are always doing somethings such as involving in activities, having more time with our book, and trying out new things.

It had been writing by Thomas Jefferson "" Determine never to be idle "". It is very true that some many people and students are always idle; they don't use their time wisely. We can do a lot if we involved our selves in activities instead of been idle; for example, when I came to the United States in January 8,2017. I was sitting at home for two months without going to school, and doing nothing. I got tired of been idle, so I told my mother that I wanted to something instead of been idle. I wanted to sign up for the Generic_City Soccer Team, so that I can get busy with my time, and use it wisely. I finally signed up for the Generic_City Soccer Team, and I got accepted by the coach. I started training with new people, and I made a lot of friends.

Instead of been idle, why can't we spend more time with our books? The more we go close to our books the more we learn faster, and increase our skills in reading; for example, my friend Generic_Name, his parents never wanted him to hang out with friends that much, or neither been idle without having his book to read. Generic_Name kept on spending most of his time reading his books for a long time, and he became a good reader in his English classroom. The teacher always asked him to read out story books and passages to his classmates in school. He inspired many students in his school, and most students wanted to be like him, so they started having more time with their books at home.

In addition, people who wanted to be idle, or people who think inactivity serve a purpose are people who are not determine, and not planing on their future; they don't want to involve in activities, or interact with people. Idle people are lazy, because they don't want to try out new things. try out new things when ever you are idle. You can learn a lot even if you are not perfect; for example, me and my three friends Generic_Name, Generic_Name and Generic_Name. We were sitting at home idly doing nothing; until when Generic_Name suggested that we should go and try out the UFC GYM. We went there, and signed up for the training; they gave us a one day trail to see if we would like the training. We went there the next day and started training for one hour; after training I told my friends that I don't like the training, because it was gave me back pains, so I quit the gym, and my three stayed in the training, because they like it. I was not perfect, but I tired out a new thing and I got some experiences from it.

As a result of all the reasons and examples. I encourage every idle human and people who thinks inactivity server a purpose to get engage in activities, having more time with their books, and trying out new things when ever they feel like they are idle. You can do a lot if you try out new things. We can accomplish more if we are always doing somethings; therefore, determine never to be idle.",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
71131D46F019,"Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose. People think it is a good idea for students to have phones for educational purpose. I believe students should not have phones in classrooms because students could easily get distracted, they will not have the chance to learn better, and having a phone should be a privilege.

First reason why I believe we should not have cell phones for educational purpose is ,students will get distracted. They will start using their phones for other purposes that are not educational or what their teacher has recommended. Students will start texting instead of doing their assigned work the teacher gave them. Students will start thinking it is okay for them to take out their phones when it is time for learning.

Second reason i believe it is wrong for students to have cell phones in classroom. Students will not have the chance to learn how it use to be. Students that actually take notes have a better chance to memorize what they learned and doing better in tests. When teachers do hands on work during class students can learn and teach their peers.

Last reason why i believe students should not have phones during class is ,phones are a privileged to have. Teachers should not allow phones during class time because students will not know when is the right time to have phones during class. Even if they put strict rules students will find a away to go around those rules.

In conclusion, this is why I believe some schools should not allow phones in classrooms. Students will get distracted, they will not get the chance to learn more, and having phones is a privilege. I believe schools should not allow students to use their phones during class.        ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0
9818D8926288,"Important lesson,can tech you lessons, about the students,and what school.

Always be safe at school. learn to succeed

College/sloarships. you have to be focus and work hard. Help other students. help others students to have a better future. sports sloarship. keep grinding work harder to go pro. All of this can help you in the future.

Students. students from different schools are very different. Dont try to get bully or dont be the bully. Do your Homework. If you dont do your homework u will get a bad grade. Study for a test. If you dont study for a test theres a good chase you might get it wrong. just work hard to order to sussed.

Lessons can help you in life

.Jobs. Get a good job to retrace. Sports. sport. can help you go pro and be famous. Dont do dumb stuff. dont rob,dont break into homes or stores just dont do that. These things can help you in the future.

Learn from lessons. You have to learn form bad lessons. I think this essay was easy and it was good.

By: Generic_Name",2.5,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
FF6F91DC4170,"What would you do if you fail your online classes? Some schools now offer online classes to make the student's life easier. I do not agree with the schools that offer distance learning, because it could be difficult for students to understand the online notes or videos, the students always need a teacher to ask questions, and the student's parents need to pay internet at home. Also the internet is expensive and some parents can not afford.

First, it can be beneficial for the students to attend at school because there is more activities and sports, where they can have fun with their friends.

Also, the teachers are always there to help and explain better the subjects. From my own experience, I need to be with a teacher to understand what is the topic about, that helps me to pass my exams and my classes. Even thought, there is some teachers that are very strict and irritate the students but the teachers know that is beneficial for the students future.

Therefore, being at home the whole time it is so boring because the students need to be studding and not having fun. That is why some students cannot develop them knowledge because they do not take fresh air and entertain them minds with someone else. For example, my friend Generic_Name she is at the Community College and the teachers offer some online classes and she decided to take it. But now she is frustrating because she have to watch some boring videos and she have to take quizzes constantly. She told me that she miss all her friends and her classmates.

After all, certain student do not have their mind clear enough attending to school; now imagine how difficult would be for them to take online classes without a teacher. For example, Generic_Name was taking online courses because he got sick so he could not attend to school for one year. Then, he came back to school, he was so disappointed because he mist a lot of stuff from his subject. He had to stayed after school and he had to go to summer school. Well, so far I have not take online classes but I take my friends experiences that is not easy.

Finally, in my opinion is not a great idea that the students take online classes, if they want to move faster and achieve in the future.

Some teachers think that online classes is easier for the students, then attending to school because the students take them own time to study. But the consequences is when the students fail their subject and they had to take it again in school. ""The more the students attend to school. The smarter they grown.""                ",4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.5
875151F79017,"Students should not be alowd to graduate with the three year program because the student my have a job, focus on there academics, be involved in a extra curricular activities after scholl. Students may have or need a job for many such ass, being able to sport there family so they are not always going to be available after school to attend those classes required to graduate in 3 years. Students my also need to save up for a higher education if they plane on attending a 4 year university or even attending a community college. students also need some time of work expires so they need that job so they are able to put on there resume that they have some form of work expires so if they decide that right after high school they want to just jump in into the work force they have some type of work expires. Another reason why students should not be allowed to do the 3 year program is because its going to be stressful trying to put a 4 year education in 3 years. Some students take advance courses that are more chalaging, and give out more homework then regular classes. some students are not going to be available after school because they may have to stay after school to retake important quizzes or test that are going to affect a big part of there grade. A student may have to go home and work on big projects or homework so there ability to stay after school is going to be limited due to the fact that they have homework to do and other assignment. One other major reason is that the student with be involved in extra curricular activity such ass sports some sports can be year around sports so even is not there season they still have to condition and train for the upcoming season so they are most likely going to have to stay after school hours to do those things. another reason is that they might be involved in clubs so they also have to stay after school and also have to do some type of volunteering in the community so thats going to take away time so they may not be away available to attend to all the required classes to be able to graduate using the 3 year program. another reason is that they might have tutoring either at home or in school so they are able to get help on homework and other material that they need help with projects and stuff like that.

My conclusion is that no students should not be alowd to graduate early using the 3 year program, became is going to add on to things that the students already have going on in there lives so i believe student should just graduate with there class and take there time and graduate high school in 4 years.     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5
C15EC5707409,"To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours. I do not agree, with this model by extending the school day two hours. I Think my school should not follow this model by extending the school day two hours, because two more hours of school will be very streful for students and students will not have the enought time to do their homeworks after school. On the other hand this would be a big problem for schools.

In first place, I think this will be a big disadvantage for studets who have others responsiblity to do after school. For example, I have a job after school and I need to be there at four oclock, but if my school follow this model I wouldn't keep my job, because school will finish two ahours late and it will be very late for me to go to work. This show, that if school follow this model this really will affect me and not only me- but also other students who, also have to work after school.

Second, two more ahurs of school will be very streful for students, because classes will be longers than what they usually are, so students will get tired and they will not concentrate in what the teacher is saying. Also students will not have the enought time to do their homework after school, becuase they will get very late and tired at home and they will not feel like to do their homework, knowing that they need to rest for the next day of school. With this in mind, students, also will be affecting with their grades, for the reason that they will not turn in their homeworks.

Some say, if schools follow this model by extending the school day two hours, would be a big problem for students attendance because students will not show up to every single day of school, for the reason that they will be tired from the day before of school. Therefore follow this model would not be a good idea to deal with, because attendance is something very important that schools require to students can pass their school year.

In the final analysis, this rutine will not be easy for students to face, even know that there is going to be only for day of school, for me this still not a good idea to agree with. As a student that I am this would affect me in my daily rutine. Students will be very streful and tired during class. This would affect the students attendence which, also will affect their grades.  ",3.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
9C37912D9442,"I think that failure is the key to success in life, That means that without having any obstacles you are not going to succed. Churchchill's is right that failure is the pursuit of success. You have to try to do what you want to do.

If you have a dream to become someone you want to fight for it. Make good choices and try hard. Sometimes is hard to achieve your dreams, because maybe you are not capable to do things or you don't know how or where to start. You can ask for help to your parents, teacher, and people outside of school, so they can help you with something. People make mistakes, And they learn from it. You have to try over and over to do what makes you happy. You can fall down one or three times, but you have to get up many times you can.

Make a plan, and write down the things that you want to do, and don' t be shy to ask for help when you needed. Be a enthusiam person, If you fail to do something try to do it again. Nothing is easy in life, with effort everything is possible. If you are in school try to do your best at school and ask questions to your teachers. For example: I am a high school student. At first I was a very shy person, well I'm still a shy person but not like I was before. I was shy to ask for help to my teachers and whenever I needed help I didn't know what to do because I was shy and quiet. At first I did't know how to ask for help, but then I realize that without asking for help to my teachers I was not going to succed, and I would never learn how to do things.

I was also shy to asked my parents to help me with something, so everytime I needed something I used to go locked my self in my room and figuring thing out, But I also learn to ask them for help, even though they don't speak english, they still helped me with my school work. You have to do the same thing and ask for help to a trusted adult that can help you, so you can succed in your life, If you have bad friends stay away from them, because they are not good people and you are going to end up ruining your life.

I believe that if you fail, try to do it again. Do what makes you happy and succed in your life. Make an effort and achieve your dream, because you are living of that, And if you fall down get up and do it again.",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
F92C1E979556,"Let be honest, have you ever thought much can you have done if you always doing something? The work be more essay, you can take less time than if you do it all at once in this way you are always working on it. And always working on something and no be it idle, its the essay way the you get what you want because you do something today its going to be useless in the future. Sencodely doing always something it is the best way you accomplishment yours goals and make your's dreams came true in life. Also you can discover so many new things in the you didn't know about, new topic the you didn't even know their exist.

How essay i can make my work if i'm always doing something and not doing all at once, well its will take me less time so i can invest in other things. In the same way i have more time so i can do my work better and time think and analyze exactly what i doing ,and make sure the its correct. However so says that be it idle something it will not help you do thing better, every need their time, although take your time will no help to accomplishment your goals and a fast time of period or not doing you work at all.

Furthermore to accomplish more in life the highest quality will be always working on something. For example when you want to graduate for hing school. You start 9 grade you want good great to pass your classes, and the best way to get good grades is doing your homework, class work,and, finished eve thing on time. In 12 grade all the work the you did in the pass is want you need to grades so always doing somethings the best way to get want you wanted to be. Every occasion doing is the best option to anything dream the you have make real treatment, you see how much you have done in the present and also work for you future.

Thomas Jefferson said ""It is wonderful how much may be done if you always doing"" to determine it's a simple like reading a bout book you are doing, you discovered new staffs you can learn about, history, math, out spaces,oceanography. Doing you work you learn new skill in work, going to school, watching a movie, doing is not all does not have to only doing work, or accomplishment goals, doing is about want you like. You have more done than being inactivating or waiting the same else to want you have to do.

Finally you accomplishment more doing something their not doing anything, if you want to be successful in life always doing something as discovery, make your dream came true and start doing right so in the future you can have a benefit of this. you want to make a change in your life or impact is same else always do something in life going to be more essay.             ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
A9ACA0A6ADE8,"The ancient Greek storyteller Aesop said,""No act of kindness, no matter how small,is ever wasted.""

In the futerch there will be more acts of kindness that way we can be happy with one another

I hope that I am right about there being more acts of kindness ,but there are not a lot of people who do acts of kindness. I feel that people should do more acts of kindness. If you have time go to a nursing home and bring flowers to the elderly women. You can make a now friend by doing something kind ,or by just being nines to them. We all have to do something for a act of kindness also by doing something like that you feel better about your self before you help someone. Make your friend happy by doing something kind for them because you never know what they are going though. You also never know what someone else is going though ether.

I think what the Greek storyteller Aesop is trying to say is just be kind to people. Doing a act of kindness can make someone happy if they had a bad day. For Example,if you help them water there plants you can make them happy. A good way to do a act of kindness is by helping your mom Cooke diner another way you can help is by doing something you don't have to be asked to do. We all have those day were it is just a bad one and you dont want to do any thing well if someone does something for you with them not knowing you had a bad day at school or at work. there should be more people to do something kind to other people.

For Example, it a trash day were it came later then before me, and my step brother had to take the trash done to the side of the road. Will there was elderly layde that was outside when i was outside. in the place

I lived in there were always contortion going on. when we were my step brother had to get something and i stayed outside when the workers began to work aging. When they starred they scared the lady that was outside. I had to make a diction on if I should go in and get my mom or go to the lady that fell. I got my mom and went to her then my mom called 911

to come get her. When you do a good thing for someone they feel happy even if it is a small thing you do for them. That's why we need more people to do more acts of kindness.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,2.5
CBFD5CD8BCD9,"Yes, I believe curfew can keep citizens out of trouble by limiting how long they can stay out of their homes. It can improve the city in the process of making the citizens feel safe.

City council should adopt a curfew for teens. Curfew keep teenager from staying out for too long and helps them catch a midnight rest. It balances the world and helps teens managing the time they work in between their jobs and regular daily activities like a midnight jog. Curfews helps them plan to head home early because we dont know what may happen during the night. I love to have a limit on my time because I may lose track of time and be out for longer than I need to be.

Adding a curfew the city is a good choice keeping the citizens safe while improving the public law for less of a death potential. It wont go well if we dont get a curfew and I will explain why.

If we dont get a curfew things will be problematic. Everyone will be staying up late making noise and traffic comes as often while people will just do crazy things. Its important that the city needs a curfew so it keeps the citizens in check and makes sure that no one is up late who might be doing some illegal activities. Staying up all night is bad cause it doesnt help the brain function for u to gain strength for tomorrow. It makes you fatigued and dysfunctional as well as can make you miss important events in life as u go on restless. It is sad to see the amount of car crashes when people drive even though they didnt get enough sleep compared to drunk driving is another story. You can set a curfew for yourself to be safer and more energized for the next day because the early bird gets the worm.

Having a curfew isnt a bad thing. Its an mandatory rule that will helps u live longer, be healthy and keeps u awake for the next day. The earlier you go to bed the more awake you'll feel in the morning since u set a curfew for yourself. I personally set one for myself so I could can be ready to take a test and do my assignments as Im up and at em. The council is a genius for coming up with the idea of a curfew and I am proud to accept and support the idea.",2.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
FF9E0379CD98,"Some school offer distence learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of line or video conferencing.

I think is not benefit for student, that take classes online because in the video maybeabilities ,and dont have a teacher is not organized dont have partner when are you take the classes online.

Teacher: when are you take the video online you dont have a teacher for tell you what do you need do in the class ,and him cant help in your work for example the teacher cant help with kahoot or quizlet or with others strategies of work .

Organized: when you take the class online you dont have organized, if you need highlights or pensil for write something for read it or explain your work.

Partners: in the class you dont have partners or others people with you, just are with your teacher online, but is not your confidence or your friend like in the school the many people is your frends However; the people can say you cant take the class online because you work for ten hours for this you need to take the class online, but is not bad idea take the class, but you cant work or cant study after school with partner.

Conclusion: you dont are prepared for take the class online worst is a video coferencing because you dont have teacher, organized ,and partners in the end you cant take the class because is more difficult for learn in your work. is more better take the class in the school you have more benefit how you can pass the class and more oportunities that the school have for you ,and in the school you can help new students ,and in the school you can protrude like better student in the school. Also there are alternative of take class online becuase ther are benefit.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
1BE638E9C951,"School Extracurricular Activity

I agree, all students should do Extracurricular Activity in school and outside of school. I feel like it will help them out with a lot of stuff like stress and can help them find out who they really are. It can give them time to be with friends and can also give them the chance to met new people. And it can bring the teachers and students closer to each other. This would give them the chance to get to know each other and try new things out.

Extracurricular Activity's would be so helpful to the school's community. This program can also help kids not be on their phones as much. it would help kids come all together and work as a team. I feel like now in days kids dont really care about there Schools Extracurricular Activity's. I feel like a lot of kids\teens depend on this phones for answers, ideas, and etc. these ideas will show them that there are better stuff then just being on your Phone, iPad, and Computer.

These school activity's will probably also bring students and teachers closer. Student's most of the time dont like school so these Activity's can show them that school can be fun. These activity's will give kids a chance to see the bright side of school and also the true meaning. It will also teach kids that trying new things out with new people can be fun. These programs can really make a kids or teens life a huge impact.

Extracurricular Activity's can show kids how to be more outgoing and bring the shy kids out of the shy zone. These Activity's can teach kids so many life lessons. It help kids and teens who think they are lazy turn into great students. These Activity's can inspire students to do better in school and lift there grades up. It can help kids/teens find out what they truly love and what they truly dislike.

I hope my words help out community's who are thinking about putting Extracurricular Activity's in there School system. I truly agree with these activity's and think it will help a lot with kids/teens. I hope one day all schools have fun activities for there students. I think can help many students come out into the real life and show them the true meaning of life. I love this idea so much and wish the best of luck for community with these activities.

The End

- Generic_Name",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0
58F6D70A2DC7,"Should the city council adopt the 10:00 P.M. curfew?

Curfews keep teenagers out of trouble because it keeps most of the teenagers by not sneaking out of their houses, and not getting into bad habits.

The curfew would keep teenagers safe by the increase of robberies.

The curfew would save teenagers out of trouble by not letting teenagers go outside by them selves. The curfew helps teenagers feel safe that they would be no one in the streets.

When teenagers are left home alone, they get scared because they are by themselves and they are afraid that someone would break into their house. Most house robberies occur at night and it makes teenagers worry that robberies can take place anywhere. Teenagers regret going anywhere at night because of the curfew and robbers. Some teenagers does not like going outside at night when there is a curfew because they don't want to break the law, and they don't want to get kidnapped. Some teenagers won't go outside either because they are scared of dark, and that kidnappers with catch them, because robbers and kidnappers are often out in midnight. Teenagers, that know why the curfew is on, they will obey the law and not break the law.

Teenagers often walk to stores at night to grab snacks, or drinks, the curfew will help them not go to stores at midnight.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
79098D096CB8,"TOMAS JEFFERSON

Thomas Jefferson wrote, important article for benefit the our society.""His determine to be idle in his life.

It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing like Tomas Jefferson doing in the his life.

Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose to the our community. Like Tomas Jefferson was in the his life wrote important stuff.

Thomas Jefferson is a person that our society need because he was and still important, I learn from hin different thing .

Example; He was a wonderful man so we can learn from him and do many different thing to benefit my community.

In comclution

Thomas Jefferson was and still a wonderful person for our society. I learn a lot from hin how can be a good person in my community also in my life.     ",2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5
87E3F6FDAA68,"I belive the elimination of human contact due to technology is a positive thing. Now days everything you need is only a click of a button away. this makes life easier and better. techonolgy is evolving such as humans are evolving too. on the other hand, technology can alsow be used as a bad thing. it could be used as a source of bullying. Technology has given us the privilage to be able to play a game with many people even though we are all far away. When tchnology was not as developed, you had to write a letter, mail it , and wait weeks for a response. Now days thanks to technology you can talk to someone on the other side of the world and not have that time gap to wait for there response. Technology has also made the world a safer place. we now have all types of camers for different things. before technology it was almost impossible to stop someone from breaking into your home or catching someone stealing. however, today we have camers protecting our homes, stores have cameras to catch shoplifters. Technology plays a big rol in education. Students have better education because of technology. you dont have to go to a library to buy a book to learn something. Today you can look everything up on the internet.

Technology might be a good thing and make life easier but it can alsow be used as a bad thing. Many people use technology for hacking. Hackers can steal credit card information, your personl information, and other personal things. Other people use technology for stalking, or tracking someone.. there are many dar webs on the internet, also known as the 'BLACK MARKET'. On these websites human parts are sold for a big amounnt of money. Technology can also be used for human traficking. and for selling drugs. The end of the day, i belive technology can be a very helpful tool for humans but it all depends on how one uses it. in conclusion, I belive the limination of human contact due to the use of technology has a positive effect on people's lives.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.0
1271A68BDC00,"Would you want to spend your day Indoors? I don't think so! There are many ways to spend your day outdoors, for example, excercise with your friends. Many people likes to workout outdoors because It's calming and It makes you less stressful. Just imagine hearing the birds chirping and seeing the butterflies, Isn't that something you'd enjoy?

You can also make a lemonade stand! Everyone loves lemonade, especially In the hot! Putting up a lemonade stand isn't hard. It literally takes 10 minutes or so to put one up. Kids enjoy doing this because they have something fun to do and not lay down on the couch having nothing to do ;However, you're just not giving people lemonade but you're also getting money!

Do you like going to the pool? I think everyone does! Another way you can spend your day outdoors Is going to the pool. Going to the pool is somewhere everyone goes everyday because you can relax on a floaty, play tag In the pool and you can also try new things In the pool that you thought you could never do!

Walking around the neighborhood and listening to music Is also teenagers enjoy doing because they can get to know the area better and It can set their minds off of the things.

Going to the park Is where children enjoy because they can play hide and seek, tag or play around. Teenagers also enjoy going because they can go to read a book or have a picnic! Picnics are fun because you get to talk about stuff with your friends and eat at the same time!

These are some fun ways you can enjoy your time outdoors and not watch Television everyday! ",3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
24615FD199BE,"Students and Families should be left to decide if they want to get involved in extracurricular activities. Students should know what they want to do like get involved in more or less extracurricular activities. Teachers say students get stressed over more extracurricular activities. That is not true students do not get stressed over extracurricular activities. Students should have their own choice if they wish to take ore extracurricular work.

Students and Families should be allowed to pick if they want ht o continue extracurricular activities or not, and if it is too much for the student to handle in one day. because the overload of activities they do. I believe the school should not get involved at all and let the students have responsibilities to handle their situation. For example a student will be able to decide whether or not they wish to take an extracurricular activities event.

Students have reasons on why they should be able to settle it with their families. One of those reasons is that the parents can pick whats a safe and valuable extracurricular activity for their child. Another reason would be is that a Student would prefer a parent to be their instead of a teacher.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
6686DB25FBD0,"I believe that gaining life experience and learning from your mistakes and working hard, comes when we are always doing something and accomplish more. Accomplish more and always doing something is important to me because it gives me more opportunity to be successful in life .

To begin with,by practicing playing my favorite sport ,soccer everyday after school and on my free time; because I was in my school team and I was really bad and weak at it .Practicing helped me to overcome my weakness and to learn from my mistakes ,and also to know the rules of the game and basis of soccer.

Some people believe inactivity serve a purpose that led you to success;however, we gain life experience and learning from our mistakes if we are always doing something or we accomplished more . Also,by practicing soccer everyday and working hard on it,I learned tricks and how to kick the ball directly to my teammates and how to be good goal keeper and catch the ball as well. And that gives me more experience and strength to continue.

Another example,one day we were playing and their was judgments there,choosing the best player to be in the ""International Soccer Team"" ,depending on how the player plays and how they follow the rules. Three days later, I got nominated to participate in the International team and I also got honored for being the best player in the game and of course, that led me to successful opportunity in the future.

In conclusion, by working hard and always doing something makes, you to gain life experience and more opportunities and to accomplish more. To accomplish something is not easy, you have to face a lot of difficulties and facing those difficulties and get over it that's what meant by accomplish .It will walk you through a lot to accomplish something in your life, you just have to keep going and to work hard and never give up and all of that will pays off by being success in your life .",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
FC2050EA9039,"The world is full of new things that can help make you an outstanding person. Trying something new will help you grow physically and mentally. Even if you don't believe you can do it, you can always try and see. I will prove that trying new things above your skill can make any person grow.

Attempting something above what you already mastered can make you the best at whatever you love to do . If I was playing soccer for example, there are many positions to try. If I am already a great striker, why not try playing a defender position that I have never thought to do. This will make me a valuable asset to my team and i will grow with new skills. You can even grow academically by trying new things.

It can't hurt to try something hard once in a while. When I am learning math, it doesn't make sense to try and understand a concept that won't make a difference to me, but it prepares me for harder problems in the future. If I do a difficult problem that I can't grasp, it is said that it only helps my problem-solving skills. There is no reason why it's not possible to master difficult problems.

Other would say that some people have limits to their abilities. They argue that a person who is stuck can not grow. They are wrong because it's not so much a person can't grow but don't have the support or energy to want to be able to achieve higher. Sometimes they have have issues with their self-esteem. I believe that every person can grow to a certain extent.

In conclusion, I agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson on his statement. A person that does not try new things above their own abilities will never grow. Based on my experiences, I understood that trying something I never mastered will only make me grow as a person.                                                  ",3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.5
F21B26DBED29,"What is your favorite thing to do during your free time? Do you stay in bed and watch movies? Do you go to your community library to read books and study? Or do you just go outside for a walk?

Studies have proven that 75% of people go to parks more often during their free time. These specific people say they usually go outside to relieve stress, and get their mind off things. This is one key factor to why you see elderly people outside. But our main focus was on modern day children and why they love going outside.

Children always want to have fun, but usually with their friends. Additional to this fact, they start to create games and activities with their friends giving them a chance in looking forward to going outside everyday. One popular game from the 1800s is hopscotch, which is surprisingly still played today. Though this game was only played by girls, through recent years we start to notice not only girls but boys and adults playing this game. Though hopscotch isn't a really competitive game and can be played alone, it's better when its played with other people.

Another game played much more often is freeze tag, or tag, which consists of two teams and two catchers and played by both girls and boys. This game involves running which can improve both your physical well-being and cardio-respiratory endurance, This game isn't usually played by adults as seen in frequent surveys, and tend to be a child only game. This game is one of the most competitive outdoor games played my modern day kids.

Comparing these two games, there is a high chance that people who enjoy running would go for tag, and serene people would go on tho playing hopscotch. Though you could still play tag being a quiet person. These are some examples of what to do when you ever want to go outside, or to the park.",4.5,4.0,5.0,4.5,4.5,4.5
A54391563C0F,"The best way to spend your time outside is going to outside in your backyard and going out for a walk. People would enjoy and want to do them because there are many advantages doing these activites.

When you go outside in your backyard you can have family over and do many activites for example you can plant a garden with your family and get very messy and mudy but still make your backyard look very nice. Other activites you can do is play soccer, have a water ballon fight with family, play in your pool, play football, and play with your pets if you have any. This list can go on and on but I will stop here for now. Lets just say there are so many activites to do in your backyard.

The best part of going outside is inviting your family over and take a walk,ride your bike, and walk to the park. The advantages of taking a walk is similar to being outside in your backyard. The only differences is your walkng and your children fall asleep a lot faster. These two activites have many things in common. One of a example that these two activites have in common is you get to spend time with your family and pets. Who wouldn't want to spend time with their family or pets if you have any.

There are many fun activites that you can do when you want to be outside but these personally are my favorite activites because I get to spend time with family. Who wouldn't want to do these two activites. These are reason why people would enjoy doing these activites.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
CAAB28864F44,"In this new year that we are now there are thosands of enjoyable and educational activitys. They can be fun because you get to do alot of things with them. These activitys should be done because they are very fun.

An activity can be fun is like playing a sport their are alot of sports out there that can be fun and aggresive but its exciting to play a sport because you get to go on trips and you get to verse other teams or with only one player. you get to even become a professional player

I played soccer for about two years and now i am good at it. Before in elemantary school i used to be bad at it and used to say ""im bad at this"" or ill say ""im not good at it"" but then i entered in a summer soccer program every evening or in the day i would go to a school and we would go to a soccer field. nI really loved that activity because you learn more and become good at it.

Another activity that can be fun and cool and enjoyable is playing an insturment. It is fun because i used to play an insturment the last three years and it was fun because you get to go to trips. Last year me and my friends went to Generic_City. We went with the orchestra class, band, and even chores. it was fun. and its nice to play an insrument because you have alot of oppsions to choose from and you even get to play nice soothing music or loud and extreame. And the fun part is that you get to be in a stage with your friends and play music infront of the audiance.

Another enjoyable activity is chemistry its fun because you get to mix different chemicals to objects or chemical to chemical. Me and my science class will be doing it this year i am happy to do it becaue i never mixed chemicals or never put on science goggles. i cant wait to do it this year we will be doing chemisry in april. Mixing chemicals can be hard and scary because what happens if you mix the chemcals and something happens in chemistry you have to be very careful with what chemicals are you mixing together.

I am very happy because you have thosands or hundres of activitys to choose from because their are alot of people who are loking for a good and fun activity. so i recommend you to go look for an activity that fits yoou right and that enjoyable and educational.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,2.0
A7CEC076632B,"Technology

Technology does not effect the way how people interact with another. Think about it like this, some people might just make some type of contact with another person and at the same time doing other things such as in checking your information, money status, savings, and many other things more, yet still making human contact with another. yes i think think for some a occasions it would be necessary and and really nice to make eye contact and interact with one another, for example when you are at a job interview, or even being the job interviewer. Little things like that i would consider to interact with another. There's many other things that would be important to interact with, especaily if it has to do with yourself. Technology itself is good hepler now in days. It can help you with anything that you are in need of, thats why i say it's more of a negative and positive for obvious reasons.

Technology does not effect people, or the way they are getting taught. Teachnology is something good for us, helps us keep things more in order, or can hold more information insted of having paper copys all over the place. technology can be a other way of interacting with other people for example like making a phone call, or a text, or even a video call those are other ways of making contact with one another. thats why for those reasons technology isn't making an effect on us as much.

Technology, so this where it could effect us. Well one it could effect if the perosn doesn't know how to multitask. Two if can effect you for example with your learning. Three it's going to be hard for you to listen and to keep up with who you would be talking to. lets just say you apply for job and your stuck on phone texting others about other job opportunity and your interveiwer send out your job interveiw date and because you were stuck on your phone you miss your job interview. that would suck. for those reasons technology would effect.

Technology itself is good and bad because there's many good things that you can do, but there's other things that you could miss. yes they both work good making or not making interactions with or without technology, but i rather have more human contact just because i rather not miss anything.                ",2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
C09D3287E6AF,"i in introduce the reader attention?. it has been said that first impression are almost impossible to change. how it change with the first in precision that is impossible to change my central ideas is support witch specific information and example that will persuade my reader;it has been said the first impressions are almost impossible to change. the content of my paper relates to my central idea and addresses counterclaims when appropriate. base on you experience do you agree or disagree with this stamens? i agree with this stamens because this stamen talk that impression to change no all change like example no all people has impression or change some one change' but not all..

are positive attitudes that key to success your life?

yes. that positive altitude is the key for life. for example if people had been unhappy the negative things is are they are ruing everything from them and also if you are one of them if you altitude is good things are beside if you good person. like god blessing you in addiction in everything you need positive altitude are good to live good life and peacefully on every singles place there are going to be people they have negative altitude they going to try to hurt you that people are angry all the time is not them fault is just because around of them just they has a negative and all that people want to hurt you you must be strong and show that they don't has to be negative and all way has to be positive to have a better life in the future. that is why altitude is good. not for you for the people that they around you to cause you don't hurt them's in conclusion the positive altitude is the best choice you can do because negative altitude just attrack that bad things and positive not and that that key to success in the life....",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
A3C5DE6588D0,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person. I think it's a positive effect on peoeple's lives. It can make there lives way more easier. Someone may not like going anywhere to check out books and shop so they prefer to order them online.

Technology helps a lot of people in their lives, an example can be someone that doesn't wants to attend public school so they prefer taking online classes. Online classes are helpful for students because they may have jobs to go to and they don't have time to attend so they can take online courses. Not just students but also teachers, instead of grading papers they can grade them online if they want to. Technology helps a lot of students with school and teachers with grading and other stuff.

Technology can help people lives in other ways, someone that doesn't like to go shopping can order them through online without speaking to anybody. Maybe they don't have time to go to the store and don't have transportation to get there. Technology can not just help you to order stuff but it can help you find an item that you don't know where it is without speaking to another person. There are many stores that you can check out by yourselves instead of waiting in line for another person that can ring you up. Technology helps a lot of people's lives in shopping.

So yes, I think technology has a positive effect on people's lives. It helps them in a lot of ways. Not just ordering stuff online but also physically. Someone that is it a wheelchair can get a chair with buttons on it for it can move on its own instead of pushing themselves. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others.                ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0
F0B44890C961,"Dear Sir or Madam:

Yes school should control students involvement in extracurricular activities, If they're doing terribly in school. If a student is doing terrible in school and he is in so many extracurricular activities, The School should take action right away. If the student has no time to study and involved in so many activities the student is defenitely going trough something. For example: The student's familymight be going trough rough times and he does not want to come home early, and Also he might be avoiding someone at home.

Second reason School's should control student involvement in extracurricular activities. because the Student has no time to study and the student is in so many school activities that is going to result to a bad grade. If the student has bad grades the Student is going to be stress about school and The student might ended up dropping out of school. If the student drop out of highschool it is not going to be easy for him to find a good paying job.

That is the reason why school's should take control of students involvement in extracurricular activities. If they do take control of the students with bad grades the it's in a club. They should be taken out of the club and help the student to get his grades up, and if he does he he get to join the club. Every students should earn it by having good grades.

Sincerely, Generic_Name",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
06E81109FE92,"This program will effect the youngest and the oldest students for the future.

They will know how to write a prompt and this can effect the life how to get a job easaly, how to make better your writing, your reading skills.

They can see what did you wrote and you can make corrections the oldest students know how to do because they are ready know how to do and probaly they got a lot wrong things and they probaly got a bad grade so they know how to get a good grade.

So this things can help the youngest students get better because they can say if you got write or if you wrote the word wrong.

if you have to put some coma or space and they can say if you prompt It is this can help you to know how express the feelings.

This program will effect the oldest showing how much they improved because I think the oldest have more experince.

Probaly someday they got an F or they wrote something and they did not know.

So they can help the youngest get a better grade and helping the youngest students how they can get better with there prompt and they can say what is wrong for they can make better and get a good grade.

So both will be beneficiant the oldest It is helping the youngest to get a good grade and the oldest is benficiated to see how they improved from here and now they are teaching to the youngest how to do a prompt. ",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
F5A5B0906BE8,"Technology

Technology could bring both positive and negative effects to people's lives, I think there more positive effect to technology, then negative. Technology is very effective, in many positive ways. People use technology to do many things, with out even going out there homes. Technology can even bring emergency help, way more faster. Technology is big effect to people's daily lives by helping them get locations faster, and keeps us informed on what's going on in the world, and also helps people get educated straight from home. Technology is not negative, its made this country, the strong country it is today because of technology.

People will say technology is bad, because of horrible stories they have heard. From people going crazy over technology, and on how little kids now cant even be happy if they dont have a phone in front of there face. also because they think its bad that young kids dont even want to go outside anymore, because there to busy staring at a TV all day. So most people think that technology is a negative effect on lives, because of those reasons. Thats not the case, if you really think about it, technology is in our hands, if we use it in a bad way thats a choice on us. Technology isnt the one to blame for all the bad stories over it. Technology is the key factor on why were still here today breathing and staying healthy.

Technology is a positive effect on our lives, it keeps us informed on what is happening in the world. also on what happened in the world millions of years ago. So many good ways technology has helped this world and now we know more about earth then we ever did because of technology, but not just that. It has also'ed saves lives with its help. My mom almost died in a car crash in the highway 10 years ago, but only cause someone stopped by, to help her, and called 911 with there phone the ambulance came just in time to save my moms life, Because of that one phone call, technology has had a huge positive effect on my life, and others.

It will always have a big positive effect on peoples lives, and will always have many ways to help us. it keeps us entertained, educated, healthy, and safe. what else could we ask for, technology is always going to be more positively effective then negatively, because of the stuff it does for peoples daily lives. Technology is good and a positive resource to always have with you. No matter what, if your in a horrible situation it will be there to help you, and if your in a beautiful situation, it will be there to help you take a nice video or picture of the moment to remember because of technology.",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
FD7DC289E98E,"Many students involve themselves in a lot of school activities to enrich their educational experience, some Students can also learn responsibility, because the students can choose how many activities they would like to do.

The students could also feel more mature by having to talk with their parents to do any activity after school. Students also have the opportunity to make lots of friends by joining clubs or doing sports.

Although if the school controlled the students involvement of doing any activity, the students would have a limit of joining a certain amount of activities after school. That could help the student not stress about all the responsibility they would have to do. The school also makes students have good grades in other to join a club or sport, which helps the students focus on school assignments first. However letting the school control a student, would make the student struggle with responsibility and communication with people.

If a student wants to play a sport and be in a club after school because the student wants to make friends, they shouldn't be limited to joining just one by the school. Instead the student should be allowed to choice and join as many clubs or sports they would like. It would help the student to communicate with people without them being scared or shy to talk to someone. Going out of their comfort zone early would also help a student with finding and working for a job. Communication is one of the most important things in a daily life, and if a student can't join an activity because of their grades, how would the student be able to talk to someone if their scared too.

Joining a lot of activities after school, helps a student with responsibility. When a student is involved in a lot of activities, they learns to use their time wisely and would help them later in life for when they are working. It would also help with daily events like taking out the trash, washing their dishes, cleaning their room, and doing their school assignments. Since they have to be doing well in school to even be doing after school activities. Responsibility is something a student should learn in a early age, and should have during school and after they graduate from high school and even collage.

If a student is committed to doing all the activities they chose to have, they will do great. Not only will they feel good about themselves, but that will make their parents proud and show them that they ready to be independent. That would also look good for when the student signs up for a collage they would like to go to, but also for when they get a job. When someone is committed to their job, their boss will notice that they really wanna work and could even get a raise. Commitment will help a student, because if they believe they can do a lot of school work and do lots of activities, They will feel great about themselves at the end of their high school career. ",3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0
86BB790A5875,"The more the better ! Getting Advice from many people is something that every person has do at least once. Getting advice from many people can help you get a different perspective, it can help you in the future,and it can help the community.

Having a different perspective is really good . When you have a different perspective of something you might have a better adtuided . Let's say you fail a test and you have a really bad adtuided and you asked many people what could you do to help and what they say can make you feel better which causes you to have a better a adtuided. Having different perspective also gives you different opinion. I believe that having different opinions is something you should always consider because you most likely will hear the same thing and you might like what they say but you might hear something different and you might like it even more. Having a different perspective can not only give the situation a better perspective but it can also give you a different perspective. Hear me out not only can other peoples perspective give the situation a different point of view but yourself as well. I believe that having advice from many people can really help you have a better perspective, adtuided,and understanding.

Advice from more then one person can help your future. As you grow up you will release that you start to ask for more and more advice. I think the more you ask for advice the more you are most likely to be successful in your future. Advice that is given to you now will help you your whole life. For example my teacher once told me that not understanding how to do something is okay because from that is how we learn from it. The advice given to you is something you will pass down . I think that it's amazing how much advice form who know how long ago has come so far. Advice can help you in the future by developing more and more,remembering it though your life,and pass it on to other generations.

Advice also helps the community. It is proven that when advice is given the community becomes better. I believe that the community can become better when given advice. Part of becoming a better community is teaching others how they can become better. I think that this can be done with giving others advice. When advice is spread form person to person it spreads form community to community and then it spreads from state tot state and eventually the world. Advice needs to be spread all over the world and to make all our communities a better place. Advice can not only impact the community but the world as well

Asking for opinions from more then one person can help you see different opinions,help you later in life, and help the world. Advice can help to see different points of view, help you in your ,and help our community become better. In conclusion I believe that getting advice can help having different perspective and help the community.                 ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
8F29D9B8D64E,"Have you heard about this aweson!! place, where no matter what you do, you will be amazed for all the things that are in that wonderful park? well.... that one place is Generic_City park. Generic_City park it's located in Pennsylvania and is one of the places I would like to go there with my family. One of the reasons is because there are great attractions, like roller coasters and games. One thing I would like to see as soon as I arrive is the Chocolate factory and the Lazy river that is in the Aquatic park.

As I said before, ""There are awesome attractions in

Generic_City park"" let me talk to you about this amazing roller coaster I would love to ride and the name of that roller coaster is 'The Super dooper looper'.

The Super dooper looper is one of the greatest roller coasters and the reason is because this roller coaster has more loops then the other attractions and one of the loops is super big. But that's just the beginning, there is also one section in Generic_City park that I would like to go too, and is the area where all the video games are and you can win tickets every time you win a game. You can win prizes with those tickets and you can also buy food near that place.

I also said that I wanted to see the chocolate factory. The chocolate factory shows you the process of how they make that delicious chocolate, you can see everything there, from the beginning to the end, that is one of the best places I would love to go because you can't only see how they make chocolate, you can also buy it and feel the taste of the best chocolate ever 'Kisses'. The chocolate 'kisses' is one of my favorite chocolates that's why I would like to see the chocolate factory.

The aquatic park it's the best place to not feel to hot when is super sunny outside. Everybody sweats when they scream and feel the adrenaline of the roller coasters. After all of that you want to just relax and enjoy your day after walking and waiting in line, Well the Lazy River is one of the pools you would like to go in while you do nothing. The lazy river is one of all the attraction I would like to go. The fun part is that in the lazy river is that you can talk with your friends, and enjoy the journey after a long and fun day.

And that's is one of the places that I would like to go and maybe you will like to go, because Generic_City Park is a fun place where you can have fun with your family and friends, and have an amazing and unforgettable day, with so much adventures and fun.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
D401F5D87E45,"Dear Principal

The Police i think is correct is Policy 1. I think police one is correct because not only the students sometimes need to call their parents to come to pick then up or pick up early or come bring their lunch, but also because is impossible to make everyone obey Policy number 2, even if is a school policy most people will ignore it, so I think Policy number 1 is harder to be ignored. And even if we have a Policy against cell phones students would ignore it if is at lunch time because nobody is there to tell them not to use it, and the school already have to much to pay so the school would not pay someone to look at those students who are using cell phones during lunch. I think sometimes phones are problem while using during class, but if is in lunch or free time I don't see much problem, because you are not being rude, or interrupting anyone. So I think that sometimes phones are useful at school.

If we put policy number 2 at school it wouldn't make any bad things but students would still not following it, and lots of students would have their phone taken away or get in trouble because of their phones uses at school during lunch time or free time. So I think that school are a problem while using it in class but I think that is not bad to use it during lunch time or free time.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0
45DF17CF4937,"Did you know that the Bahamas is one of the most wonderful places in the world.

One place that I would like to visit is the Bahamas. Bahamas has one of the most incredible views in the world for example the oceans and their colorful fishes they have in, the wonderful long mountings, and the the breezy weather they have there with the colorful tasty food. There are so many activities you can choose to do there for example mounting climbing, food competitions, dancing, and swimming. Some places don't have these types of activities, food, and weather.

The Bahamas is expensive, and its one of the most expensive places but it is worth it to go there for fun and entertainment. Some people would rather waste their money on other fun place for example Paris, Germany, and Italy. One thing that I would like to see when I get to the Bahamas is the wonderful culture of the Bahamas .After seeing the culture I would climb the mounting all day to just see the view from the mounting, and to see the colorful plants. Visiting the Bahamas could help me lose my stress,

and help me learn more about the cultures, and more about the language.

Have you ever thought of what new skills you can learn from just visiting a new place?

Some people learn new skills when they visit a new place for example cooking, climbing, skiing, and biking.

One talent that I would like to learn or become better at it is biking. I love biking that why I choose this talent, and

I could get on a biking team if I become better at it. Bahamas could help me because of its large safe streets some places don't have these types of streets and some do. I could bike throughout the whole city without getting hit by a car.

Have you ever asked your self what is it like to live in the Bahamas?

I would like to live in the Bahamas but its expensive like every other place some places are less and some places are more because of the food, views, and living. Some people live in the Bahamas even tho its expensive these people might have found a job there that pays well or they were born wealthy. Living on the beach is hard because it is expensive, and dangerous because of the storms and other natural disasters. I choose to live away from the beach because it is safer. The Bahamas have enormous amount of colorful plants and animals that is why I want to visit the Bahamas.

In conclusion the Bahamas is one of the most beautiful colorful places in the world with enormous amount of activities, talents, and cultures that is why I want to visit The Bahamas.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
EC5138D8C9D6,"I dont think thats good what they doing with the student because there school are not letting then choose there career or what kind of career they want to follow i think is a bad thing what they doing because they not letting the student study what he wants they are choosing what the student can and the career that he is going to follow , i say thatthe student have to say what he wants to be ansd what the they want to study.

From the point the im seeing the situation i dont think in those societies are giving, them a good reason for them to simmit a career,to the student because they are choosing the career for the students and they not letting them to follow a career, that they like because in school they are selecting the classes for the students ,that they are going to follow for only one specific career, and for the age ,that they have i dont think thats a good idea to summit a career because ,you have time to choose what king of career you want to follow and by taking classes for a career that you want and having the time ,and then you think your ready you can summit a career , because what they doing in the school is choosing what the student is going to be went he grows up.

They not letting the student to select there classes that are going to help then in the future for a career , in the school that they going they are selecting the classes ,for the students they not helping them , what they doing is ,that they are giving classes for only one career , and i dont think that they should summit acareer because, they not choosing a career that they want tey are choosing a career, that they giving to them with the classes that they making them have, so student dont have the much career to folow they taking whatever they giving to them.

in conclusion im not agree with what they doing with the student and they still not on the age to summit careers , went they get to the point at school is went you star looking for a career and what you like and what is making you follow the career and i would say ,that if u still in school it dont matter but the school they cant choose what you going to be you have to chose what you going to do and what you like the most and follow your dreams not what others say the you can do do or what you can be you have decide what you going to do the school is to teach you not to chose who you going to be.",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
33E25E6A8028,"dear principal, i think students should be allowed to bring cell phones to school during the school day. It is important to allow students to have them incase of a emergency . cell phones are also important to have because they are very useful if something goes wrong they are able to call 911 or 311 for personal help. They should also be allowed because cell phones is a good way to let students keep contact during school free hours.

It is important to let students have them incase of a emergency . A lot of students can use their phone if they have been hurt . If a student gets bullied by other peers they can call the school and let them know that someone has been hurt by other students from school. If something bad had happen to that student during school hours they can always use their cell phone.

they are also useful to have because sometimes a lot of things can go wrong.

Students at some point we have accidents like spilling milk on our shirts or not making it to the washroom and we can use our phone to call mom and dad to bring us extra clothing. cell phones are not always to text but also just a good thing to have during school.

you never know what can happen during the end of the day like going home. Their are so many dangerously things that can happen and its important to have a cell phone to call 911 . and they are cool to be allowed during free classes and be able to use them at some point during our day.(:",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
2D3E794C5206,"Our world if full of a lot different people from around the world. And we all have different goals and diffrent ways to see our life. Thoma Jefferson wrote ""Determinenever to be idle..it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" as

I read this quotes

I strongly believe that we acomplished more if we are always doing something. if everyone would think the same way we all can reach beyond more. Students now days they don't have a lot of goals or motivation in life .And if we determine ourself to keep going; we will succeed in life. Attending collegue or always being involve in daily activity such a yoga clases, painting or being involve in afterschool programs. It will determine us not to be worthless.

First of all,as we finish HIgh school we all should attend college . And keep our education going beacuse the more knowledge we get the smater we are. I personaly feel that i acomplished more when I focused on reaching my goals.

As a prepare myself to graduate this year from High School. Im looking forward to go to colllege to study Early childhood. Attending college is going to be one of my biggest dream. And looking foward to become a professor. The key to sucess is to work hard.

Sencondly, being involve in daily activities give people joy and feel motivate. Some people loves helping in after programs or during school. As we get involve in this activies; we acomplish a lot by helping people that they need and also it helps us humas to be better for our community. My sister helps an afterschool program that helps the little kids to do their homework and some crafting project . She shares with me that working on this gives her gratitude and is helping her on the career that she is studying. Persuing this goals brings us pleasure because we are helping others.

At the end, the sociey we live in today, we all think and act differently but, if we all implement the quote the Thomas jefferson wrote; we will be living a a complety different planet. It is admirable how much it will be done if we are always doing something. We don't see how much this changes impact our daily life until we impliment them. I feel that attending to college while working is a great choice because it can help persue peoples dream and accomplish more in life. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.0,3.5
8DD09D4FCD4F,"Is attending classes from home by way online of videoconferencing a favorable method for students to study?

Attending to classes from home by way online or videoconferencing is not a highly recommended way to study, because students will not have the same learning that they have while they are at school. If attending classes from home becomes a common way to study, students will not have the opportunity to build strong friendships with the other students around them, nor with the teachers. Also is not a recommended way to learn because students may not take their courses serious as they do in school because of the instructions of their teachers, or the advice of the counselors, or administrators of school.

In the first place attending classes from home is not the same has being is school, because at school students take their homework, quizzes and exams more serious that they can do at home. When students are in class and they have any question about the topic that they are learning of the can freely ask their teacher and the teacher will give them a clear explained answer and examples in order for students to understand everything they are teaching them. In addition, if students attend to classes online they will not have the opportunity to stay after school for extra help, or to retake a quiz or exam, nor to attend to a learning center to have other students helping them with their homework; or to just study with the company of another student. As a matter of fact, student's grades will decay due to not having all their questions answered, and their problems being solved.

Secondly, if attending classes online becomes a common way to study, students will not practice their communication skills by not building relationships with their classmates, not discussing their concerns with their classmates, nor just having fun with their friends during lunch ship. They would not feel the same way because at school sometimes students get inspired by other students, they see other students not just as their classmates but also as their friends, they could even see each other as family, therefore, students with the time get to see the school as another home where they know they have people that could help them with school stuff, but also can give them personal advice, as counselors and teachers do. Moreover, when students are receiving classes online at home, they will feel bored, and also lonely because they will not have anyone to discuss their questions or doubts with. In addition, in our present a large percent of teenagers are dealing with psychological problems such as; stress, anxiety, and depression; being at school distracts teens from their problems at home or even at their jobs, and it is a great way to receive help and advice from people willing to help them; such as school counselors, teachers, and friends. Being in school is better rather than being at home alone just studying.

Lastly, attending classes online is not the best idea for students who tempt to not take their studies seriously. While they are at home they wont feel the presence of a teacher standing next to them telling them to get their work done, or asking them to pay attention, and to not fell asleep during class. Also they will not feel the obligation to do their homework, in order to turn it in the following day. When students have to work in groups they learn lots of things from the teammates that they did not before, is a awesome way to inspire each other, and also to have fun, as students see other students work hard for their goals they do it too; but if these students are working alone they do the complete opposite. Therefore, this kind of students will think that they can do what they want and they wont take their courses in the serious way they have to be taken.

In conclusion, attending to classes online is not a favorable way for students to learn because they will not learn the same way that they do while in school. The students will not work on their communication skills, nor their social skills. In addition, students will not take their courses with the grade of seriousness they have to be taken. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
DBE977177080,"Have you ever found something on the ground and picked it up and pretended that is was yours.

That right there is called a lie and its really bad because you dont know if that money you found or that toy you found was somebod's when they come back to look for it its gone because somebody else just walked away with there stuff that they spent there money on. When I was a kid I would always see this stuff, people would drop there stuff and I would pick it up and give it back to them or tell them they dropped it and hand it over to them. Usually when people find stuff just laying around the first thing to come to mind is take it but that isnt very smart because you never know whos it is or where it came from, and taking if its not your is stealing. Many people say leave it where you found it because people will comeback looking for there stuff, because nobody leaves there stuff somewhere and then just walks away with out knowing or caring. I know many schools teach this because when I was at my elementary school there would always be signs all over the place talking about leave it where you found it and dont take whats not yours, many kids listened to that in my school but sometimes people just dont care and thats not okay because they might not even need it and just want it. Needing it is like you have to have something or its really important to you and if you dont have it you would have to struggle to find, but if you really need something then I am pretty sure you can buy it from any nearby stores. Wanting something is like you dont have to have it but you just want it to brag or to have fun with it or you just dont really care and dont need it but just want to take something that you can buy, even though your not struggling or going through any trouble you just felt like doing the action you did and dont really care.

If you find something dont take it

If you see somebody drop something give it back to them

Be aware of your actions

Dont listen to pear pressure

Be helpful

Be kind

This lesson is very important because many people now dont do this stuff and just take and many parent dont really care anymore so thats when the school has to step in and teach the young kids whats wrong and whats right. When somebody drops something always hand it back why you say, because if you drop something and you think you lost it and it was your favorite toy or a toy that you spent your money on and really liked it, what if somebody just saw it and took it how would you feel, probably mad, sad,upset, you would be very upset because your favorite toy is gone and you cant get it back because the person that took it does not really care and didnt need it but just wanted it or took it because there was nobody there. Now imagine you drop your favorite toy and somebody saw you drop it and ran up to you to give it back to you how would you feel, probably happy, proud, delighted, because that person gave it back and didnt have any intentions with it or didnt think about even taking it they just wanted to give it back because they are not the owners of the item that was found on the ground but the owner that dropped it is right in front of them, the owner of the item could of just walked away and never realized they dropped it until they needed to use it for something. I lost my iPad years ago because the person that saw it took it and didnt really care do I know who it is no because I never payed attention to who took it I just was really happy and didnt realize what they were gonna do, and didnt think of this stuff happening to me when it did happen I was very upset and had to use my moms phone until my dad would buy me a phone. Thats why this lesson is very important to show kids that taking something that isnt yours is not smart or needed, many people dont care but when it happens to them they care and ask there self why did this happen to me is because you didnt leave what you took where it was found so the person that saw the item you own they did the same thing you just did, they took it and you will probably never see it again. Many items are very expensive like phones people love there phones and can never get off it and when somebody cracks there phone they go nuts and get mad because that crack can make your phone glitch or tweak, but if somebody lost there phone I already know that they would be so mad because nowadays phones are over $1,000 and they can be more expensive then that so when they lose there phone and find out somebody took it they wouldnt be very happy and probably go every where to look for it and would do anything to get it back, because phones are so important to people and sometimes they need it for calling somebody to pick them up or they would be stuck at a place for a long time or to call for help if somebody needs it. If somebody stole my phone I would get very angry and sad because the item I just lost and somebody picked it up or stole it is very expensive and isnt easy to buy because new phones are like the cost of a used car that you can buy from the internet.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
15F6B5C6229A,"I will agree with the Emerson's statement,but this can depend too the point view. This is one of the example:

There is a men who is an entrepreneur and he have a little company,and he decide to make it more big,but he don't know if he is going to do it. If you don't try to do it you will never grow, you have to do new things for you know you will have to try something beyond of you already mastered.

The way I understand this is if you don't try to do something that you already know, you will never learn a new things that you don't know,because there is not way to grow if you don't over pass your self or you don't try it and that is going to provoke that you can't advance to grow or even stock in the way you try to make to grow.

Example: When I was 15 years old, the only thing I did was just studying. Although when I start to think about my future and then I figure out I have to do more than just studying, I have to choose which college I'm going and work to earn money for I can pay my college and expenses I have in my house or personal,because you have to do something for you can over pass your goals or you will never grow.

But some people maybe think or have different opinions about this,perhaps people say like its a lie or you can't do it because it's impossible and also that is fake. Every one don't thing the same, maybe they a different point to see it,they just don't want or they have a another way to grow. The majority of people are going to say yes,because they already lived the moment that if you want to grow, you have to go beyond of the things you already know or you'll never going to trust your self.

My opinion is that maybe this wrote of Emerson is true and the reason why i'm saying this is that you have to do things new and over pass your self ,and doesn't matter if you already mastered something,if you want to grow you have to try it because you can't grow if you don't do different things that you have not idea about how you can grow and make or dominate more things that you can't believe.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
8D02AC12DD48,"As I know the Music,Drama, and Art classes are not mandatory to take. the leaners at education area can take these classes for their choices. infact it is a elective not mandatory. so the leaners can take these subject as a elective. for example: if a student take an art class infact he/she is not take it as a required class he/she take it for their choice and wants to get extra credit. or if a person has 4 required classes and and he/she take a art class instead one of the 4 classes and he/she thaught this is the 4 classes that i need for graduation indeed they are going to take a wrong class because as we know the art classes is not needed for graduation. so we have to take a class that we needed for graduation.

Although some educator take the art or music classes off course seniors because they might be have less classes. in this case they choose these classes as choice and the junior can take these as well to get extra credit.

lets talk about the required classes:

require classes are: English11,geometery,math,CIS,world history,and etc...

these classes that students need to take it and complete the school credit and recived a better score for graduation.

each subject has different SOL test.

when the students reach to those classes they need to pass the SOL test as well as SOL is one of the important part of required classess that leaners need to pass it during a year. the SOL test comes twice for students off course!

they have to recived over 300 score which can allowed to take it again. so that is the required classes which is a student learn in a year.

although we have a electives classes such is Art,Drama Music and etc but we can not counted on required classes. So Art,Drama, and Music are not necessary to take it as required classes those should be electives that leaners can choose as favorate subject for their future.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
1451EA314B8A,"Students in the classroom always debate about working alone, or in groups, both of the ways of work have beneficial and non beneficial aspects,In fact; some students do not like to work in groups, they may say things like people in their groups do not do anything ,and they would rather to work by themselves, but in my personal opinion working in groups is a better idea. When students work in groups they can divide the assignment in different pieces, in that way it can be easier for each person in the group, another aspect to think about is that students in the group can help out each other. Working in groups will also be less stressful for each person in the group.

First, when students work in groups they could perfectly divide the assignment in small portions. for instance, if they have a project about global warming, they could tell each person to find something different, one person can find the characteristics of global warming, a different person the reasons why it happens, and someone else some examples of the topic.

Second, students always need help ,and they could help each other in the group. Help out each others in the group is a good way to develop team work, it may help them when they go to college, or after when they grow up and have jobs. Furthermore, teach students about team work is a really beneficial aspect to think about because students are the future of this society, and teach them how to work with others is going to help them to develop an open-mind.

Another important thing is that they would have less stress, if they work as a team and divide the work, they will feel less stress, also they are going to find more time to work in different assignments from different classes. In addition, if they have more time for others classes their grades may increase, and they will have a better academic performance.

To summarize, working in groups have a lot of beneficial aspects, students may grow as a person and develop different values when they work as a team, also they will learn more as individuals something that the new generation needs, students will also accomplish new things and be more successful.                         ",4.5,4.0,4.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
B543953F757A,"When I think about and enjoyable activity, I think about sports, and the reason why it's because a lot of people find sports as a fun way to be healthy and make them feel better of them self by being physically active, I also believe that any sport is a good example to learn from others as well as your self, and for I know sports is not all of just about competing against other teams and winning or loosing, is very helpful if we're talking of team work.

One of the most enjoyable activities in the world it's sports, in some way many different kind of sports have proof that it's a really entertainment thing to do and to be as much healthy then doing a diet from a doctor's recommendation, people actually agree that if there's something that might have a plethora of fun and includes a reason to be healthy in daily life it's sports,a 78 % of people in planet Earth consider and invited people to joying a sport for the good of others and good of your self too.

Sport it's a specific activity that in cases have help people feel better about who they are, how they look, and the way it has change people globally, most of the time a person doesn't know what they like to do even thought they try other stuff like being smart, video games, music etc,

they feel like they don't belong or fit in something, but at the end they go along about what other friends says about sports and find them self the right place to be.

Sports as a good educational activity example of learning about others as learning from your self, is very important when getting a job that consist in the statement of knowing other people, like being a teacher, a teacher doesn't get a job without presenting him/her in general to his/her teachers partner, or teach a class without presenting to the students in classes they'll be taking, they will also ask a new student to present him/her self to every one in the classroom,teachers mostly do with their classroom as a coach will do with his team in a sport.

These two educational activities are alike to each other in the simple reasons that they both teach their learners to get to know each other and get along with one another, another way that they're alike is that they're preparing them for the big challenges, a English teacher prepared the students for the big writing SOL as a soccer coach prepared the players for the final game of the season.

However it's not only learning from others, many times sports definitely let you learn more about yourself, it takes out the person who you truly are it will also take all those stuff that you had no idea you new, doing sports can have experiences in which you'll learn from.

Team work is the hard work that a group does together to complete their goal, it's not about the leader or the best member of the group, what most matter in team work is work as a group no matter the worst or best you do.

If you ever play a sport you might know that the main thing to do is team work, for example football,if one of the football players has the ball, he can't go across the field and do a touch down if his team mates don't do anything to stop the defenders of the other team that wants to knock him out,but if they decided to play the game by doing team work he would of made a touch down because he's team mates would of help him pass through by knocking the defenders.

Sports team around the whole world has a immense number of followers, followers keep on touch with them because they have something relative to it or because they had won a lot of times,and this is thanks to the strategy they do ( team work ),

In conclusion sports are not only of competing against others, is something that is productive in the way that you don't only get a metal or a good job, sports are also to have fun with friend or even with people you don't know, and it's a really good way of being healthy and be able to do two things at the same time, it also help us understand other people that needs it as you do with your team mates by knowing them and getting along with them, in sports you can learn from your self when you make a mistake, and finally in any kind of sport you will have to know how to play as team work because that's what matters in teams.

There is a lot of other educational an enjoyable tings to do but I think sports are one of the best ones.",2.0,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
F3B7C2480747,"Do you wonder is a great idea to choose a career at a young age?

In my position is a exellent idea to choose career at a young age, Because in some socities, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. their are many courses of classes are selected to guide them toward to choose a speficic carrer. for example: first it benefits them to start at the age to have in mind what are some types of career the student want for his or her future after graduated high school. Second thing it would persuade them which type of diploma they would like to have if the advances diploma or the standard diploma, the advance diploma it requires to have 9 sol pass and all the classes and for the for standard it requires 6 sol and all the clases. when you enter to high shool your counselor would guide you which diploma the student want to have and which career for the future. third when you are in high school they give the student basic classes that you need to pass for 9 grade and 10 grade to persuade faster and easier , to have some experiencies and knowleged on what are your goals and be prepared on the others two years,

if you like the same career you pick when you enter high school or you want to change your mind on a diffrent type career want to do, teachers and counselor are a great full help for student to succes to guide the student what are some great benefits the career the students pick to study to give him the amount of money to lived and work with the career and be succesful in the future when the student finished the high school. Finally for 11 grade and 12 grade they give the student some diffult classes to pass to graduated from high school , 11 grade is more diffult to pass, Beacuse it requires 2 classes to graduated pass for to get 12 grade the student only come for the classes the counselor give student to be prepared for what diploma the student choose , if his the advance diploma or standard diploma for his or her carrer the student choose to graudated.

for my conclusion is a wonderful way to start in a young age , To start thiking what would you want for your future if this is a great career to pick and whats benefits give you for your future, in high school they prepared you for what the student planing to do when he or her graduated from high school , if his going to college to have a better life or go nova to be prepared on what you like to do in the future, You hvae some knowleges of what carrer you would succes in the future and start thiking this is what you like for your carrer and make it real the dream what you want to become in the future.

there many career you can choose to become someone in life , this is way i think they should start at the young age when they enter to high school teacher and counselor would do the best to make the student to choose one career studen is interested on. to study in the future and sucess on college to have a better life for her or his family in the future, thats why is great idea to start at the age to pick the career they want to do on future.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
24B8DF4DA85A,"Be active or not active in life, those are two options that we have. There is many reason why people are active in life, but there are many other reasons why people stay inactive on their lifetime. Thomas Jefferson said, ""Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" Staying active and with determination people have more chances to be successful in life.

First of all, in reality things can't be done by them self. For instance, the first TV, car, plane, cell phone, etc... wouldnt be done with out a lot of hard work. Another example could be, the creators of all the things that we have now, they didnt stop or give up on their goals they were active and positive in the process to success.

In addition, in order to accomplish great goals people must stay active and work hard for them.

For example, the best basketball player of all time wouldn't have accomplish all the records with out dedication in the process. Another example, if Martin Luther King didn't do things or stayed back with out doing anything for the people, we probably wouldnt have the life that we all have right now.

Perhaps most important, people have more chances to success in life if they stay active and working on good things, more than if they stay inactive. For example, a hard worker business man probably have way more success in life than a regular person that instead of working hard and do things prefer to stay back and be inactive.

Some people argue that, inactivity serves a purpose. They say that, the fact that people are doing something doesn't mean that what they doing is right. This might be true; however, inactivity wont take people anywhere but to fail in life, and for success in life people must to do things constantly and dont give up.

Without dedication and work people wont accomplish nothing, no matter the talent or the skills that they might have if they dont do nothing with it. People must stay active and fight for what they wish and want, without that life wont take you anywhere.",4.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5
EF4966D17FFB,"Eating healthy food is good for our health. People can also live longer eating healthy food in their life, and eating same food everyday can also be bad for our health. Taking this situation our school principal should change our lunch to healthier food because students will not get bored eating same lunch everyday, students will stay healthy, and students will have new experience.

Students at school are getting tired eating same meal every day. If our school principle change to the healthy lunch, students at school will be so proud trying new food, but some students who have their favorite cafeteria food they might have to get their food from home or try new healthy food at school.

Students will stay healthy from eating healthy food. Eating same lunch everyday can be very dangerous in our life. Students are getting sick everyday and have to struggle with disease like food poison, vomiting, and so on. Changing school cafeteria food to healthy food can help many students stay healthy. Over the past years many people have died eating same meal everyday, and that's what we are doing here at school ""eating same lunch every single day"".

Students who had never tried healthy food like salad, vegetable, apple and so on. For those students it will be fun experience and also some students love to try new things. Students who have their favorite food in school cafeteria, they can try new food once. Students might like those new food and be their favorite food.

Eating healthy food is one of the great thing to do to satay healthy. If our school principal many people would like the food. And eating healthy food or trying new food have many advantage like stay healthy, new experience, and they will not get bored with same lunch everyday. So, eating healthy food can be lot safer than eating same meal every day. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0
69A8A08ED3E9,""" In this world you decide who do want to be either you get along with it or someone teach you"" although some people think that our character formed by influences beyond our control nevertheless we choose our character traits people on your environment and also people who you talk to i believe that the one that influence me is that we choose our own characters

First People on your environment influence a lot because in front of them you decide who you want to be and you choose your traits so i think that you choose your traits on the type of environment that you are on on you are living for Example My brother Generic_Name when he was around me he was a different person we talked like brother help each other as brothers when he was around Dad And mom he was another type of person he was not the same with me he was more kinder but when we were on school he another type of person he was mean He didnt care about me and other people he wouldn't treat me he changed his traits to a whole different level That proves that a person can changes their traits depends on the environment that they are growing.

second people who we talked too we eventually we change our way to be to different people the way that we talk to our people are a different person when u talk to your relatives friends coasins brotheres we eventually changed the way to be for example one day A guy named Generic_Name recived a call from his parents saying Generic_Name its time to come home And Generic_Name respectfully said Tes mom i will go home right Away after he finish his call he talked to us saying Dude i need to leabe but like right now!! screming that proves that we change the way that act with different people or the way that we talk with different types of people.

to conclude we choose our character traits because we talk and and people around we choos ehow we act aroubd people people who we talk to are the ones that affect us more because thats the one that we do on daily bases the other one people on your enviroment is the way that u want to be looked by different type of people around your self.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
DDC3C4A828DA,"It has been said that first imperssions are almost impossible to change, do you agree or disagree? In my past experience, I would highly disagree with this statement. When first meeting somebody, you don't always get the right thoughts about that specific person. Once knowing somebody personally your thoughts start changing, your mind starts messing up on thinking ""What should I think about this person?"". Due to my past experience I always have luck to my first opinion changing to a good opinion after getting to know them. I always ask my friends what were there thoughts of me when they met me for the very first time and all of my friends would always tell me that I look like I was mean and not very kind. After, they're opinions later changed once they got to me personally, knowing my personality and knowing how kind I am. My friends were very suprised.

Second, I would insists of not always having a first opinion on when seeing somebody for the first time because that usually is never how the person actually is. First imperssions always depend on the person on how there feeling or just based of anything that can be said.

Second impressions always get more better once they seen each other at least ones.

Third,

I would like to speak on my past experiences with this statement on why I disagree with this reasoning. When I was a couple years younger I had some very means thing said about me in middle school due to a couple of very mean people. Due to those sayings and rumors a various amount of people knew about me and the stuff that was said about me. People thought they already know me through thick and thin but in reality they really didn't. Once, I wanted to meet new people they never actually really wanted to speak to me or actually meet me because they already had there first impression because of the sayings. Later on, years started passing by and a few people started meeting me more and started speaking to me and once they did they noticed that I was very different person then what people would say about me.

In Conclusion, In my past experience I would highly think in my beliefs I would defiendely not based my first impression on somebody I'm just meeting. I like to get treated on how I treat others. First impressions are never good that's why it's never good to get based off that. You've read my about my past and now know why I don't go off that. If you ever decided to go off first imperssions and not change your mind about your first impression then good luck to you.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.5,4.0
44BD35E3BD1D,"A positive attitude is the key to success in life.

I agree with that.

I always have my smile with me, i don't like the people with bad mood or sad . everybody told i'm the most happy person who see in the world, in my school i have one friend special and she always sad but when she was with me she always smile, and the teacher told me when you are with her she always smile i never see she like that and i was like i like the people smile or with good attitude, it's does't matter if you have problem you smile, the life is beautiful like for me. i like to make happy the persons that's why i want to work in the hospital with children, I want to make for each other one smile this is my dream and i know i'm going to make it.

first when I had 19 years old and I was in United States for seven years ago, In my brain had the idea the to be a Citizenship for United States of America when i'm twenty one years i'm doing the quiz, is good idea to be Citizenship for two countries. When the day come down i was so nervous because i was like what happen if i'm not pass i was in negative but my families told you need to be in positive. you do it and to being positive and pass 1 hour later and the people who had my test he told you pass the test i was like i can't believe and my familie of outside i said to them i pass and they tell me i told you you need to be positive in the things you want. Because if you do with bad mood you does't understand. Because when you have the opportunity and realistic you do it and be positive. even though need to be positive because negative is not good for the live.

second realist, when i was in the school in mexico i want to play soccer because my both brothers likes to play soccer and me too so my brother ask to me a question you want to play soccer in your school and i was like yes y want it , so my brother wont to see in the school how can i play soccer and he's do the paper for the school and two weeks later i go for the first time to coach i was exciting, and three months for practice, and then for the last three months we had the first game and i was make a goal and for the third game some girls hit me with a ball and when i was running i had bill my leg i i go the the hospital and the doctor told i can't play more because my leg was so bad if i had other bill probably my leg go so bad and the doctor and my familie does't want to play more but my old brother give me to the specialist doctor for my leg because i was so sad for not play and does's like how i'm looks like , so for one years for treatment now i can't play.

third, it's does't matter if you have problem you smile, the life is beautiful like for me. i like to make happy the persons that's why i want to work in the hospital with children, I want to make for each other one smile this is my dream and i know i'm going to make it,I always have my smile with me, i don't like the people with bad mood or sad . everybody told i'm the most happy person who see in the world, in my school i have one friend special and she always sad but when she was with me she always smile, and the teacher told me when you are with her she always smile i never see she like that and i was like i like the people smile or with good attitude.    ",3.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
6B2FD789B8C8,"To converse energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. This model will be helpful for students, and teachers at same time. By giving them more time to relax. It be the best option for students because it will give them more time to experience, learn new information in a young age. We all as a student need more time to prepare for future, and work as hard as possible to pass our classes. Furthermore, same for the teachers, they will be able to have more time with their families; and they can enjoy their lives with three days weekend. My school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours because teachers and students will have more time to relax,

to grow and achieve more, and to help others.

We all need to relax, specially if we are a student because school is so stressful, and two days weekend will not give enough time to students to relax. Two days weekend will just be enough for students to spend time with their families and do their homework; it will not give them time for themselves. Moreover, by two days weekend students can not relax and work for themselves. I personally rather to have more time during the weekend because I will have more time to finish everything that I wanted to do during the week, and I will have time to relax. During the weekdays students can learn more and they will have more time in school to spend with their friends. Some people think that three days weekend will make students forget what they learned during the week. But they are wrong because students will have more time to go over what they learned, and they have enough time to practice more.

Most of the people loves to exercise, read, meditate, and swim in their free times. Three days weekend will give students and teachers more free time to care about themselves. Most of my friends love to exercise, but some of them gave up on exercising because they don't have time to do it. They are working Saturdays' and studying on Sundays'. One of my teachers told me, that she loves to read book in weekends, but she does not have time to read because she has a lot of work to do. Reading, exercising, meditating, and swimming will help human to grow and learn more to achieve more. Also, four days weekdays will teach students to work harder. Some people think that students and teachers should not have longer weekend than usual because they have winter break, and spring break. But they are wrong because longer weekend can help both students and teachers to care more about themselves by giving them free time.

Some of the students love to help others, by volunteering. Three days weekend will increase students chances to help others because they will have more time to do it. My sister loves to volunteer and help other; she is volunteering once a month. She told me that she wants to increase it and do it more, but she can not because she has a lot of homework and she does not have time. Although, their are a lot of students who need help in some of their classes because they have a bad grade. If we give the students more time to study, they will get better grades. Last year during winter break, my math teacher told me that I have to try harder and study more, I told him that I can not understand the notes. We met in the public library and he helped me to study. He said, ""I love to help students outside of school, but I don't have time to do it"". I think we have a lot of teachers like that, who wants to help students outside of school, but they don't have time. If we have longer weekends, teachers will be able to help more students. Some people think that schools should have two days weekend because they are not getting tired. But they are wrong teaching and learning are the most hardest things in the world.

To converse energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. my school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours. And this will help students and teachers to have more time to relax, to care about themselves, and to help others. Students can have more time with their families,

to grow, and to work harder and achieve their goals. Furthermore, teachers are also the same, teachers need more time to spend with their families and kids, and they will be able to plan what are they going to do, or what they want to do with certain students who needs help. Also, in weekdays they can learn more, or teach more. Which it is a great opportunity to both of them to achieve more. ",3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
A9A0D8CE21B4,"Some people says decisions should be make by our self, however others says you should make decisions fallowed by people who are more experts have more experiences and time to deal with hard decisions.

I support the idea that we should all make our own decisions because its our life we should know what's better for us for our future, however some people like to make decisions based on others people decisions they think they would do the same as others when they make the same choices that experts and experiences people make.

In one case i had to make a hard decision probably a life chancing decision i had to choose between staying at my country or come to U.S.A and have a better life or at least more opportunities at first i din'd know what to do i wasn't sure what would be the best or what wold be the consequences from a bad decisions i want it to ask people who has all ready make that decision what should i do what they think should be best for me but i didn't because that was my own choice a choice that no one else can make but me.

But their are some cases where decisions are not make by the person who the decision would affect like when youre a baby, or under the age parents are the ones who would make decisions for you they would do what they think is bets for you, and some times you may not agree with what they decided for you but in those cases is where people with more experiences and knowledge meant to know whats best for you.

However i think we should all be free of making our own decisions ether you want to make it by your self or you want others with more time and experiences to help or make your decisions, but people should be award of what they choice because every decision can gave a consequence and the only one who can make the right choice is you.",2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0
A11969208401,"Dear Manager,

My school would like to have a partnership with your local companies. This organization will allow many students to explore the profession of being makeup artist. They can learn how to do hair, makeup, and how to dress.

Hair is very difficult to manage . Some people dont even have healthy hair most of the time. Humans die there hair to much,They put so many product in there hair it damages. To many people straightens or curl there hair with heat every day,and that damages your hair really badly and fast. If students go to this course ,students can learn how to take care of hair and keep it healthy.

Many people want to learn how to do makeup but today's makeup is to expensive . If students take this cores it would give them the chose to learn and not wonder how it would feel like if they didnt take that cures because it was to expensive or because they didnt have the tools like makeup. I want this partnership to show people they can become who they want to be when they grow up.

You wear clothing every day,people dont know how to dress. This course will help you how to match ,color skim and many more. This class will help you in your every day life.

This partnership will really with with the students personal social health. The students will learn more ,it can help them in there every day life. they dont have to weary about if they cant afford tho go to collage and they cant accomplish there dreams. Theses course hair, makeup and dressing with really dost there self confident.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
73930228893B,"I feel like if students want to graduate in three years or two years they should talk to someone like there teachers and they can ask them if there GPA is low.

there is a lot of ways that they can help them for an example if they are failing any classes then they can take some classes online, or if they can go to night school,or stay after school for more help. There is a another way for them they can go to school summer and they can take classes the ones that they fail or take some other classes the ones that they need to take if they don't want to keep on going to school. also if they stay in school, no abuses, and stay out of trouble they can probably graduate in three years.

If there bad grades are low or GPA they can take a another class that can bring up there grade up like, do a sport, like soccer or art. or they can ask a teacher if they can change there class where there where is two teachers.

I feel like my school they should let students graduate with a low GPA because there is some students that have a hard time keeping up there grades up like. If they have a brother, or sister that they have to take care of or they have to work two jobs to help there parents out. but i feel like students shouldn't work while going to school because that how they get bad grades and can't bring up any grades up. what i like about my school is that they let students pass there sol's with a 375 or more the ones that are in small group and that they need more help.    ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5
4BBBDC46A47C,"In this world everyone has a talent or skill. Some people use their talent for good things, and some for bad things. My talent is honety, and I use this talent for good things like, I tell the truth all the time, never betray someone, and I am always fair.

To begin, my first reason about how I use this talent for good things is that I tell the truth all the time. Because of that, everyone trusts me, and tell me their secrets. Telling the truth all the time also help people recognize me as a good person, and help me make lots of friends. Telling the truth all the time would not only help people recognize me as a good person, but it will also make everyone trust me.

To continue, my second reason is that I never betray someone. Never betraying someone will make people think that I am a good person, and people that didn't like me will start liking me. Never betraying someone is also a good thing because it will make you loyal, and faithfull. People that you never betrayed will like you and become your friend.

Further more, my last reason about how I use this talent for good things is that I am always fair. I treat everyone the same way I want to be treated, and that will make people treat me the same way they want to be treated. I also divide things evenly, so everyone have the same amount. If you want people to treat you fair than, you have to treat them fair.

In conclusion, my talent is honesty and I use it for good things like, telling the truth, never betraying, and being fair. I treat people the way I want to be treated and believe it or not they treat me the same way, so whatever talent you have use it for good things instead of bad things.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0
F3BFC265844A,"Some people are not agree with the Summer break, because is to short.

They said that the Summer break needs to be change and they need to take out spring break too, because they spring break can be used to do SOL. The need to star the Summer in June and end in August. May is to early to go out of school .

The schools need to take out spring break. If they take out spring break we could have more time and to the SOL in that week that they take out. In April we shut have more fun activities in schools and class. The school can take the time to test us in that week or have more time practicing for the SOL.

They shut change the summer time to June and August. May is to early to go out of school for summer in May sometimes is cold and not that hot and in June is perfect to go out of school because the sun is hot and ready to go to vacations with you family and friend and to have more fun.

The school shut take out the spring break only because is close to summer time and student could have more time to take the SOL , To study more for your final test and have more time in the classed that you have and the teacher can help you more and teach you more schools shut have more activities in that week for the students to have fun and learn at the same time.

More sport and new abilities for the student and teachers to have fun. to have more trip to go see musics and universidad and the art museum and etc.

So we are agree with the people said that the schools need to change summer time and spring break so that we can have more time in school and more time for summer 3 months for summer and 0 weeks for spring more time to have for the SOLS and study for the final test. ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
9F7610DBE2DC,"Positive Attitude

Positive attitude is the right choice it's like a no brainer. Also you will be happy, like who dosen't like to be happy. Finally positive attitude will bring success to your life and the people around you.

First reason is attitude effects the people around you in a different way. If you see someone who is feeling down go help them. If your always positive you'l get things done the right way without being stressed.

another reason success is great good things will happen around you even if you don't suspect it. Success will get you to wherever you want to be, but you have to be positive. If your positive, and a teenager you could nail your first interview you just got to be positive.

Final reason is be your self it's so important because being unique means your special and something good will happen to you in life. People will love who you are when you are yourself ,and get real friends who will help you. Don't be like everybody trying to be the same like every body.

Positive attitude actually helps without positivity you will get nowhere. Another reason bad attitude will make people dislike you and not want to be with you any more. Final reason bad attitude will get you to bad places.",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5
8E99E989024A,"We should have after school homework club because, some students need help with their classwork, some students don't pay attention and they could use after school to understand the topic and what they have to do, and they could improve their grade for classwork and homework. For example when I was in Elementary school, I use to stay after school for homework club because I couldn't understand anything so I stayed after and got help from my teacher.

To begin with the homework club is good because for some students that need help could stay after with her/his teacher and do what they have to do with their teacher. Also they could get help by finishing their homework and classwork. Some students go home and ask their parents for help but some parents doesn't remember the question or don't know how to do it. So it's helpful for students to have homework club and get help from their teacher.

My other reason is that some students doesn't understand the question and it's hard for somebody that doesn't understand their language. For example when I came here three years ago I didn't know any English neither my parents so i had to stay after, and get help from my teacher to understand what is the question asking me to do. Another example would be when students don't pay attention in class or fall a sleep it's good for them to stay after school and get help from their teacher to understand.

Finally students could get improve by staying after and learn better. Some students have bad grade for homework or their classwork, so they could stay after to get improved. Also students can improve their understanding. For example my cousin use to have bad grade for homework, so he stayed after school, and got help from his teacher, and learn better, and got improved.

Lastly all of this reasons and details are why school should have after school homework club. Students need help with their homework and to get improve. Also some students don't have time in classrooms to ask their teacher for help so they could stay after school and get help after school. Teacher also can support students to stay after school and do their homework.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
EF47AB98271A,"Do you agree or disagree with the impression are almost impossible to change?

Many people in the society are taking several changes in the life of them, this will be a form to improve their goals in the future, some people thinking that made changes might be completely complicated for many reasons that they cannot do this, sometimes would be for some issues that we have. Also, each one we have different purposes but anything is impossible in this world made some changes that even more will be like a window with many opportunity. Opportunely sometimes we don't take the worst to start made certains changes that this will be big chances. In my own opinion this might be to begin a new style of life with the propose to change and improve my goals that will be the beginning of new opportunnity increase my ability to achieve my dreams that I have in my mind, open me in the future with new goals in the mind and never give up till that my dreams can be successful. The impressions never can be impossible because, can be new opportunity in the rest of the life, to improve our goals and dreams in the future and to make plans to increase our ability of achieve our ieas.

New opportunities in the rest of our life, will be a opportunity that are certains change that might be like a door with new offer of jobs, that this will allow change in our life to increase our knowledge to put in practice and improve our ability in create new ideas that would be a big help to develop in the society in any job that we will do, each day the technology advance. This means that, we have the opportunity to learn any more and to achieve different kinds of project to develop at the society.

Improve our goals and dreams in the future, will be the best form to change and improve our ideas or plans that we have in mind to develop ourself. To discovery new ideas and be capable to do that and put in practice our knowledge and to get excited in achieve our goals that is the better for us, each day put more dedication in improve our mistakes and made certains changes about theses mistakes that we did. Sometimes happen that because some people don't follow their work for some mistakes that they did, the most important is to learn of the mistakes that we did and trying to improve it.

Make plans to increase our ability of achieve our ideas, this is a form to thinking about it and made a list of things that we would like achieve to improve our knowledge, to learn and create projects that we have in mind to realize. Thinking about different ideas and plans that might be the better for ourself in our develop in any area. Also, this will be a big idea to realize our ideas to increase our economy if we have good work in any job that we do and each day trying to be more better in the society with our family.

In conclusion, all this definitely is the better for us in made some changes that we know will be the form to create and realize our plans that we have in our mind, sometimes can be so hard to do some changes in our life, but everyone know that is the better to improve and increase our abilityin the develop of different plans and ideas that we have, even more this will be better opportunity in the rest of our life, we can achieve all our goals if everyone start change for a better life.  ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
31B604C7D90F,"Should school cafeteria change to a new, healthier lunch menu, for students? In this essay, I will argue why school should not change to a new healthier lunch. School should keep the same lunch menu because students will lost their favorite foods, students will start to pack their own lunch, and foods will be wasted.

Reasons why school should keep the same lunch menu instead of changing to a new, healthier school lunch menu, because each students have their own favorite foods, such as Chicken Sandwich, Pasta Chicken, and Tortilla. Futhermore, Tuesday is my favorite lunch day because it's Tortilla's day. Tortilla, also a healthy food because it have a corns, meats, tomatoes and other vegetables depend on what we like. For me, when I get to eat my favorite foods I feel blessed especially when I'm hungry.

These days, there are many restaurants out there like Mcdonald, ChickfillA ,and many more. Hence, instead of paying for school lunch that you don't like people can just bring their own lunch from home or from outside. It's better for people to buy foods from outside rather than buy foods at school and wasted. Sometime home foods are cleanier than school foods. Students might consider bringing their own lunch. The good thing about it is we can choose what we want to eat.

Every type of foods are expensive, we the students doesn't want to waste it. Thinking back to the poor people outside there craving for foods, I felt bad for them. In contrast, it's hard for us to eat the foods we doesn't like even if we are hungry. If the students doesn't like the foods, they might throw away, or not purchasing it. The school foods will be wasted, and at the end they will throw it away too. Providing students favorite foods are important, students will eat and school will not suffer from wasted.

School cafeteria should keep the same lunch menu. Some says, healthy school lunch are good for students health, but they are wrong. If school principal continues to change school cafeteria plans, students will not be happy and might start changing school for a better lunch.            ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.5
75AA6229A116,"i strongly agree when the Former British Minister Winston Churchill say how failure takes a extremely important position in success. To success you have to fail many times as you need to the same thing so you can get it right and success on in. Success is the desire of outcome in many goals in life, is the gaining of wealth and fame,

Success is to attain desire of doing what you like even know you are going to have to fail on it many times doing in it.

Success consists of going from failure to failure because nothing is perfect in life. During life you are always going to have ups and downs everyday, you are going to lose people because you might be doing something that they don't like or maybe You might be facing some obstacles that stops you from success and doing what you like. During success you are going to lose your enthusiasm in what you are trying to success in. You are going to start thinking i can't do this because i have done it many times and i always fail on it or i can't do this because my friend's and family members say i can't do it because when i do it i always comes up wrong.

Failure consists in falling to do something,it consists in the inability to do something or perform To success you are always going to fail and fail and fail till you get it right. you are going to face many difficulties doing what you like or the choices that you make but in the end there is going to be a purpose for what you are doing. You are not going to success on something right away when you know is the first time you are doing it ,

you have to take steps by steps to do it. there are so many things that are going to be wrong, they are going to be times that you are going to fail on what you are doing. there are going to be times where people are going to try to put you down and tell you that you can't do it just because its your first time trying it and you fail it in your first time. And your enthusiasm is going to come down and down each day for everything that people tell you. but you have to always keep your enthusiasm up.

Because enthusiasm consists in strong and a warm feeling that tells you that you re always have to keep strong and keep your head up in what you are doing.

""success consists of going from a failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm""is one of the Quotes you always have to keep on mind when you are doing something the first time. Ia the quote that you have too keep on mind when people tells you that you cant do anything because you fail it your first time. is the quote you have to keep on mind when you fail the first time and the the second time you got it right. thats where you are going to known the meaning of the quote. and you are going to see that all hard work you have done it was for a purpose to success more in life. maybe you might lost people during that battle but when you know the meaning of the quote and you understand it you are going to know that everything was for a purpose in life and after all you when through you success a lot in your life.    ",2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
A484FD45778A,"Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. How would this affect students? this can affect students because they can get distracted by video games or phones. The problem is that some students get online classes but they just want to sleep more and than they don't do the online classes work or they play video games. this is why this is a bad idea.

first, one reason of why online classes will affect students is the distraction, for example they can get distracted by video games very easily by a friend calling them to ask if he want play, or by get bored get the phone and see they instagram.

to continue, the second reason is because they get sleeping to late at night and wake up to late, for example they can get sleeping late at night watching TV or playing video games with they friends. Some might says that online classes can be beneficial for students, but they don't know if the students are really working in they online classes because the distractions of video game or phones.

So the problem are some students who only want the easy way for everything include school.

the online classes are a bad idea because the distractions like video, phones, no sleep during night, or instagram.

To conclude this theme, I just want to remain you if you are taking online classes or you go to school, please do your best to be successful in life.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
62DCD859B7FB,"I undestand the company Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "" Unless you try to so something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Base on your experience, I think is a good idea from Ralph Waldo because he is trying to convince us if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow.

Is it important to know if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow. For example, if we want to invest our money in something that is very expensive and we do not have a lot money to pay it but we insist to invest in that we are not going to get ahead. Another example is, when is almost time to pay bills we have to save money to pay them.

Because he is trying to convice us if we do not think before doing anything we will never grow. I think is a good idea from Ralph Waldo. Thank you for considering my ideas regarding.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
017802562E71,"March 12, 20019

The technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person. Has the limitation of human contact due to use of the technology had positive or negative effects on peoples lives. in my opinion there are more negative than positive effects about technology

One of a negative effect is. Play games without speaking. We should meet the person first than start to play with that person. instead of play via any web with someone that we do not know who is.

There is another negative effects, kids, and teenagers are able to be in contact with bad people. like kidnappers, this are bad people who take advantages of the technology attacking the most vulnerable in technology the kids make the kids feel confident, and feel they are their friend. there are pedophiles too, looking for kid and teenagers.

Also, because of the technology many frauds are occurring every day hackers stolen some of our personal information. Like our names, address, social security number, banks accounts information, and make frauds to companies.

In conclusion, I believe that the technology has many negatives effects in our social lives

It is bad for our kids, and our information in risk, I wish we could find a safety way to use it.  ",3.0,2.0,3.5,2.5,2.5,2.5
85C71A1E0117,"Yes, i am agree with Emerson`s statement about show your own individuality.

I believe that each person has 2 face`s 1 is used in the work or in the school,and the other face is showing on specific moments in your life as stress or your soccer team is losing 5-2.

one example of that is: when you are so angry an involuntary you use bad word, and after that you feel very well with yourself. Although what you make,but some part of you is broken for what you did;That simple think make you more human as anyone in this world, because is innecesary try to be perfect when you are not ready to be perfect in this accomplishment and wonderfull world. Being more specific about my statement lets talking about; a tennager he has 17 years their birthday is in january 12 when he come to united state he had 14 years then in 3 years on school.

He make friends but those were more adult`s for them but that neve was something important to him that really change now, nevertheless every friend that he make left the school, the acctitude of him change now;he make sure to pass 2 SOL in the 11 grade but also something in their hearth was gone. He is trying to make new friend`s but no matter hom much he want their head is thinkig just as a adult; i think that this teeanager can make new friend`s why it is simple he has other face but his feelings are from a children.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5
AC3111702C95,"First impressions are always important and can really effect how you are looked at but they are not impossible to change. They impact whether you get the job, make that friend or even if you get service if you are somewhere. I believe that first impressions are not impossible to change, they are hard but not impossible. Firstly, because someone could always forget, people can change, and you could receive a second chance to redeem yourself.

I have met people a second time that either I had a bad first impression with or they did and we forgot all about it. When you forget about somebody, the first impression with obviously not matter. You will forgive and forget. Also when I say the word ""forget,"" I do not mean completely lose all knowledge of the other person, but I mean maybe you did not care or maybe the first impression was not terrible that it was easy to block from your memory.

I have changed and many people in my life have also changed. Your first impression or somebody else's first impression might change if you meet them again in five to ten years. Over a period of time if let's say somebody who had a bad job interview wants to change and really wants the job, they will change and they will ask for another opportunity. Even if you have a bad encounter with someone the five times you have met them, your opinion about them will change with just one good impression. People change and when they do, so do impressions.

Second chances are also very important with impressions. Redeeming themselves is something a lot of people tend to do. Chances are not hard to ask for, and when making it up to somebody for a bad impression, you need to make it count. I have asked several people for second chances to redeem myself for bad impressions and now, we are friends. When I first applied to my first job, I was late to my interview and that is why I did not get the job. Then I asked my boss for a second chance, he gave it to me and now I have an amazing job.

In conclusion, no, first impressions are not impossible to change because there is forgetful people, people change and second chances exist. It is not hard to be on your best behavior or to be well dressed when meeting someone new, especially if they are of higher authority. First impressions are not impossible but are difficult to change, that is why it is good to try and make a good first impression to save you from trouble.",4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.5
2D508127DEF1,"There is a debate today day about whether the students should study from home or school. Many people agree that the appropriate way to study is going personal to the school. My idea is that they are well understanding when the students go to the school because they have mutiple attention. Here are some reasons why many students master a course in school rather than online courses. First they can ask questions at any time, second improvement on learning new topics, and last friends support in group work.

First, many teenagers who take online courses still have questions or guesses on their answers. Here some reasons why many on the students does not master some courses. The classes related with Math, Chemistry, and History are the complicated for most learners. Those who are assisted by a teacher are the ones with the chance of clarify any problem related with numerical or logic problem; also the teenagers can make corrections in their work by asking for solutions. While the students with online courses are involved with more guesses, but the course program does not provide clear answer or does not provide an answer.

Second, the improvements in schools classes vary depending the faculty member you are with. Online games made by the teachers related with the actual topic makes the topic easy by practicing in the game, also entertain them at the same time keeping their minds relaxed and widely open to process more information within the game. Other teachers prefer individual activities with certain amount of exercises provided in previous classes. Those improvements help to find new ways to solve a problem, hints, and interpretation of the problems. The online courses does not provide incentives for students allowing them to decrease the interest in the process.

Finally, friends. They provide self confidence by asking an unclear problem and having different points of view at the same time. The opinions provided for the people you know encourage them to keep it up; there's some times the teacher explanations does not clarify at all and your group provides detailed explanations of a process. The efficiency in the group is enforced by dividing the labor and finishing soon; them the work can be shared with the people at the table, explaining how the process was made, and at the same time they can make corrections in what the other person have done. Different than the online practice made by the person self can take weight longer to get an specific difficulty.

Those are the reasons why many people prefer the schools rather than house. The help in questions by the teachers, improvement in learning in different ways, and the support of people you know and you feel confident with. Those reasons allow students to be better at something they aren't with the help of someone that knows more about the course. This people that provide assistance is a boost to keep track in school related.",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
5AEAF1C7B87C,"In today's world we believe positive attitude is not a key to success, only hard work is. However positive attitude is key to success. When we have positive attitude it helps us achieve our goals in life, at places such as: office, school, business and many more. On the journey of life we learn many things one of them is to have positive attitude in any hardships we go through.

In company's employer looks for positive attitude in workers, simply because they want someone who can make company more successful. If workers have positive attitude toward their job it will make them more productive in job and lead company to success.

It's very important to have positive attitude in life in order to succeed in schools and collages. Student's who have positive attitude toward their studies are likely to succeed in life. For example students who have bad attitude towards their study they are not going to be successful in school simply because they are going to give up,compare to students with positive attitude.

Businessman who are successful in their field compare to others who are not. One of the major difference is when successful businessman goes through hardships they keep positive attitude and try to execute the problem and it leads them to success and who are not successful they simply give up and gain bad attitude.

As it said in our society that hard work is key to success actually it's not only key to success. Having positive attitude is also key to success and it has many benefits for example helps us to achieve our goal in life and many more. I strongly agree that positive attitude is key to success in life.     ",3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
B84FF4E3504F,"what is self- reliance? gladly you ask let me tell you that self reliance is when students and adults make decisions on them self or others. There a lot that we can talk about but i highly recommend start off with the events and problems that we are having today. These events are not only effecting us it's effecting the whole UNITED STATE OF AMERICAN. Government shutdown it not only effect us it's effecting everyone business ,stores,farms . Seeking help and guidance make a huge different .Not only one mind that is speaking but there should be more so we talk and decade bout the issue and we can give more ideas and information. we don't need to tell our child to be followers there are leaders by teaching them these skills make a big impact . Leaders always seek help too they start off small but over the time the income until one point you have all knowledge you need but still to this day we still ask question grab more information.

we can compare these skills and source to our family,jobs,lifestyles.

It's not only students that need it .Having self-reliance and seeking guidance by seeking more information make us better in our jobs,lifestyles. We are also leaning but at the same time we also teaching it to others these skills are not useful. We would all need them reliance can be compare to leaderships standing up with you think it right for you and your career we believe that our answer is right but we don't want to be wrong but by seeking guidance and other people ideas always asking questions give you other option to choose from. I highly recommend that we always want to be the right but sometimes seeking answers and ideas give you more to think bout not only you and others too. we don't have to go far the military ,world decision does it effect us? yes it does why i'm asking you it because things no one really care bout really we should these are problems that need to be solves.

Military is a job,life and a career in your hands. Those man and woman that are serving our country they had a hard call to make. Before doing all that they need those soldiers to be ready there mind and skills are the most important that were self -reliance comes in to play. They can wait commander give you the call but you have man and woman life on the line you have to make a decisions. That why drill soldiers get you ready at base boot camp for mind and skills to ready and thing of these issue would not happening .doing that time you always need to ask question grab information it important you give you more feedback on what you work with or what are to get these skills are so important not only for the military in our life too we have big decisions to make it can involve your kids or career these thing you need to keep a look out.

NO matter what age,race,sex,color you are is so important to seeking these things the are really useful in the future and now always think that these skills get far and one day you would teach you kids bout money and business and more but right we all need to see what is really going with our government make a change we do not what to have a stock market crash again so use your voice,skills and etc to helps others not only yourself this world need to voices and our government need to rise again where it was before our jobs and homes are so important and how we spend our money and time and seeking out questions and answers make a big different in our society and community

Our jobs we get by our boss and our boss get there money from the government. When our government shut down there would we lose a lot of money a lot of business owners we lose there business and homes these thing we have to look at not should i get the new 2019 car no what is important is that show other step by step always seek guidance and give new ideas never forget to ask question it doesn't hurt to ask people you would see thing different and clearly. never be fare of asking we here to Lean everyday. we are people and no one is perfect we would learn everyday until we get old never stop seeking answers and always share your ideas to everyone. i'm ending this today saying seek guidance never stop asking question thank you so much for your amazing time have a great day.",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
C255CCC30A3E,"""Technology can be Positive or Negative"".

Positive: Everyone know that the technology can be like a friends for the people how like use all day like example, communicating with friends or families who live far away. but the techonoly permitted the people use like a tool like find books, or shop things which you can find in a mall or places where you like to go. In others words technology has a impact in the society, examples, help people to find jobs without need to go out and walk in the streets for a job or students need go a college and ask for information or when a people need to shop things without that the person need to go far away. something techonoly have a advantage when you have problems with you live everyone always looking for games which help to clear you mind or when have problems with buildings of your home.

Negative:In others words the techonoly always like show the good face but no one talk about the second face which can be a weapon for yourself or people who live around you. because when you find a page where you look everything good like safe, but you never now who create this page or for what him create that. In many occasion the people use technology for things bad like examples, groups terrorist which use technology with a idea to be close with adolescence for invited to be in the groups of terrorist and something that pass with adolescence which have fathers that dont care what yours children make. In others occasion the technology is like a tool, because people like use a lot time for Facebook o buy something in that, but l we know some people use that like a weapon like use for sell fake things and take the money from people who think they are stupid.

We now technology has two face positive o negative but that depends which always you find when you like use techonolgy ",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.0
F763D4DB9224,"I believe that having a positive attitude is important in life because having a positive attitude can be good in a relationship, getting a job and being always happy.

Positive attitude can be important in a relationship because in can bring your relationship more closer. Having a closer relationship is good because you get to understand each other better and be very happy together without being awkward and mad at each other. By taking care of each other it can lead to a very healthy relationship.

Having a positive attitude can be very good when getting a job. When you get a job managers are looking for people who are responsible, have positive attitude and very hard workers. Having a positive attitude is good when you get a job because you would know how to talk to customers and help them if needed.

Being happy can lead to having a positive attitude. When you are happy you feel like you can do anything and makes you feel more energetic, But when you have a negative attitude you are sad and dont feel motivated to do something. Having a negative attitude can lead to health problems and more.

In conclusion having a positive attitude is important in life it can lead to a very happy and healthy life. This is why i believe having a positive attitude is the key to success in life.                                 ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
35C5C7E2BB5E,"Working with a group or working alone which one is more beneficial? Well to me working with a group is more beneficial for many reasons. First off you can get help from other members of your group, you don't have to do everything alone you can give each person one thing to do, and you can learn more about the topic. Now that you know my reasons of why i think being in a group is much better and more beneficial then working alone let me go more in depth about it.

Working in a group is great because they can help you with the assignment. If you are struggling and one of your group members sees that you need help then they will help you. They will try and make you understand the problem so you know how to do it. They will give you different strategies and other ways to figure out the answer. For example my math teacher put me and one of my friend in a group for a assignment we were doing and i did not understand the concept. I asked my friend to help me and she sat down with me and showed me how to do it. She gave me multiple ways on how to do it and if it wasn't for her help i would still be lost and not know what to do.

Another reason why working in a group is better then working alone is that each person in your group gets a specific thing to do. If each person gets a specific thing to do in the group then everything will go by much faster. You would not have to worry about doing everything by your self and putting that stress on your body you will have other members in your group that will do their part of the assignment. Last week in history class my teacher put me in a group with 3 other members. We all had a specific thing to do i had to find the citation for the information we got,Chloe found all the information on the topic, Marcus found pictures of the information, and Sean found videos to support the information that we had. We finished the project at then end of class and we also got a A as our grade.

Finally you can learn more about the topic with your other group members. They could find information on your topic that you once did not know before. It can give each student new ideas and information to make the topic more clear for them and also find new discoveries. It will also help them for test and even a quiz because they just did group work and also answered questions and learned new things as well. This is my final reason on why working in a group is much better then working alone.

You can learn more about the topic, you dont have to do all the work by your self, and also your other group members will be helping you if you do not understand the topic and need a little more help. These are my reasons of why i think this is much better then working alone all the time. Having a group will give you more advantages then just being by your self trying to do all the work. It is much more beneficial and i also gave valid reason of why i think being in a group is much better then working alone.     ",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5
E7DB2DC8B151,"I think curfews do keep teenagers out of trouble and it helps them sleep on time because after those hours a lot of law breaker are on the streets and something bad could be happening outside or on the streets like gang fights , shootings , robbers , durg dealers, drunk drivers and many more. The first reason is shootings mostly happens at night late after 10 p. m and it would be better to stay inside in those hours than to go outside and for example a teenager is walking home from a friends house late in the midnight and gets in a fight with gang member and gets shot. while it would have been better with the curfew in place.

Curfews help teenagers go to sleep on time well like on the weekdays when they got school the next day and sleep on time and wake up on time and be refreshed for a test or something for example a teenager has school the next day and since he does not have a curfew he sleeps late and he misses the bus and forgets he has a test that day. And another example a teenager has a game he does not sleep early and he wakes up tried and is not able to play the game as well as he could.

Curfews could also help teenagers mange their time appropritely and how they spend the day for example a teenagers has a project or a home work the curfew time will help know what he/she must do first before he/she have some free time and goes to sleep.

In conclusion adopting the curfew idea would be good because it will keep the teenagers out of trouble and help them mange their time appropritely.",3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
EA40087521CC,"Failure is a dreaded thing in our daily life what we try to avoid. A lot of people trying to not get in any situation where they can fail, and just a lesser layer of the people want to face with them. Those people find it as a learning process and they a make great outcomes from they life.

Fear controlls every aspect of our life. How do we looks like? Did we made the right decission? In most cases we fear about failure because we are not sure about the success or a positive outcome of the situation and the consequences of our actions. This idea divide peoples minds to two sides, two ideology: shy, safety player and brave, risk taker. Both sides have pros and cons.

Those who chose the safety game, are using they background knowledge what they learned for long years and made it highly sure to not fail it. The word shy is not the best representation for them just in that case when something new and unknown came in to learn. They don't take the risk to fail it and they obviously will not fail because they will not even try. That can be any situation like answer the question in class; try out a sport; go to the gym; wear a new cloth; ect. The only thing what is make a gate between them and to try it is the fear. They don't take the risk and they will never know the outcome. If it's a fail then they take it as a lose. Maybe the only thing what is a benefit in their thinking they will really not going to lose anything but then the successes will come lesser. Also that doesn't mean they are not risk takers or they live in constant fear, it's just more safer. The cases where they are need to take steps can be not that scarry or it's doesn't need to be a big deal. These type of people are already made mistakes and the reason why then fear to try it again the previous experiences. Said something dumb in class and everyone laughted; tried a sport be he/she was not succes at all; in the gym he/she felt unconfortable because he/she was not that strong like the people around them, ect.

On the other side those people who trying out new thigs and got experience are usually the ones who make something in their lives what will stand for them after time. Great example for this is the former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill itself. His life shows the importance of trying. If we just think about how he becamed a Prime Minister of the United Kingdom, it's easy to realize it was not always easy for him. Biography of his life tells us how many times he tried and failed but even through he gained success. People like Churchill are thinkers and they take the failures as a lessons of the life. For them is a learning process of making an idea perfect; make an action successful; decide a the right way; answer a question rightfully. If a fail cames up after a wrong move they face with it and they are most importantly proud of it. Not proud about what they failed, about the correction, the knowledge what they gained and driving them to avoid the same and similar fails. Yes they can make the same mistake again but at the end they will be the winners. And this is the point where the enthusiasm came in.

People are trying to reach their goals and enthusiasm drives them. Winston Churchill won the World War II because his goal was to not fail his people, the mankind, and everything what he built. Enthusiasm can have different faces like duty as a president, joy like an istrument player, or to bring happyness like a parent. To keep the enthusiasm is depending on the person. The goal what is requires it can be lesser, greater, midling, makes no difference. The person who keeping it is matters, not the size of the goal because anyone can be a president if he/she really wants it but cannot go to the gym a few times a week if he/she is lazy and don't have enough willingness in their heart. That is a close connection with our life goals. Doesn't matters if it's short or long tearm goals. That enthusiasm can broke after fails or can be even stronger than before.

My example is with the martial art also an example for this. I learned how to dual wield the nunchaku and the learning process was painfull. I'm right handed and to learn, just to spin it, with my left hand hurted me. I was hitting my forearm thousand times. My skin was red after an hour of practice. People asked me why do I still trying and why do I don't stay down. The reason why I didn't stoped was my enthusiasm in my goal to master the nunchaku. After months of practice I did it successfully and in these days I'm not a master yet but at least I cannot hit myself.

A lot of people who going to failure to failure are also taking a risk to fail to the point where they can't try it again. That means a fail where a people can die. These are specific cases but not just death can stop us. Also there are situations where a person just become unable to do thing what he/she did before. And yes there also situations after tragedies where we can stand up stronger than before. There was a boy who loved to ride his bicycle and do tricks with it. One day he had an accident with it in a car crash and he lost his leg. He was in wheelchair for months but doctors offered him a chance to make him a plastic leg. He spent a lot of time in recovery and when he was able to move by himself he wanted to return to his dream. For a lot of time he failed to do anything with his bike. He was angry and broken. But he didn't gave up. After failing again and again he finally on his bike again. In these day he riding like before the accident because he never give up. His strory is inspire me.

I agree with Winston Churchill. We need to fail to learn and enyoj what we reach. We need to try and train not till we can get it right, till we can't get it wrong. And we need a goal to be enthusiastic and to never lose it, to make it stronger after every fail. We can stay in our comfort zones and try to avoid the fails or we can face with them and get experience. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
EF5922BDE9E5,"Benefits of working in a group is much easier than working all by yourself. For example, working with a group can help the students communicate with their classmates. They can also get a lot of work done by working in groups.

Working with groups is such a good idea because the classmates can communicate with each other , take the stress away from working alone. For example I have a lot of teachers who like to assign assignments independently and group work. It's a hassle for me to work on my own because I have a busy schedule after school. At times I dont even get to turn in my assignment when it's due. When my teacher assigns group it's way easier for me because all of my classmates will get to get a job to do with the assignment and we can work on it at school and be finished before the due date. It's also nice to go out of your confront zone and make new friends while working on assignments and an easy A.

Being in groups knowledge you to understand better by your classmate. Example one day in history we had a project to do as a group and I was completely lost on the civil war. I had to ask my classmates questions if they can help me so I can understand better and get to do the work. Sometimes teachers doesn't know how to be specific so it gets hard to understand. Seeking help from a classmate that's in your group is a good thing to do and you learn more and becomes more understandable. Not a lot of students like to work in groups because their scared they have to do the work , however; if you communicate with your classmate and assign a job it will go easy on them and get the work done quicker and easier.

In conclusion , working with groups it's more beneficial instead of cramping in the work and not get it done.                          ",3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.0
A5F6E232286C,"First of all technology has helped people in many ways to do various sort of things when people are in need of something. When technology was first introduced many people didnt know how it could be used to help save lives or help build buldings,schools,malls everything that we have today is because of how benefical technology is to us. The lack of human contact is not using technology too, much its by the person who chooses to use his or hers cellphone, computer and television while technology takes a important positive impact in peoples lives it also helps save peoples lives. For example in hospitals technology evolves every year so that when people come in very sick it helps them by detetecting what they have or whats going on with a accurate solution.

However people may say that technology has negative effects on people because it removes there social skills and the way people interact with each other because in older generations there was a lack of technology and people would communicate with others when they were in need of something. In contrast humans also have a choice to check out books,shop and play games without human contact. Many people still go out and shop in stores many also enjoy going to the libary to check out books even though we can't go to blockbuster and check out movies anymore we can always go watch one in a movie theater. Technology has come a long way from its past and it continues to progress and evolve every year we move up as we continue to progress the future might be filled with just technology.

The way i use technology are in many different ways i put a alarm to wake me up i also use my computer when im doing home work or projects that i need to finish its also useful when im stuck or dont know what something means so i use my phone and search it up online to find the meaning of a word or subject. In my opinion i think its very helpful and positive to my life it has helped me in many ways and it gets me through also in school activities i dont think it has impacted me to a negative side because going to go play soccer or doing something else has not stop me from socializing with others around me. In conclusion technology can be very helpful or in some ways bad for peoples lives i think that technology no matter what will just get better and help many other just like it has helped me.             ",3.5,2.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
E1898E71ABD6,"A lot of people think that positive attitude is the key to success in life. I think that having positive attitude in life is the key to success, and you might ask your why. I think that having a very formal manger and attitude in life will get you a long ways in life then being grumpy and mean toward other people. That's why there is a saying teat people the way you want to be treated. Therefor you will get the same amount of respect that you put out there toward other people

Firstly, I do believe that positive attitude is the key to success in life. Having all this positively and good energy will get you along way in life. Why you might ask your self. Having good positive energy will allow you to meet new people and they might want to interact with you for having good energy surrounding.

Secondly, this may allow you to meet new people. Meaning they might would like to share with you on how they found the key to success. After that you would probably would like to share the key to your success, and how it helped you accomplish your goals that you might have thought that you never would.

Thirdly, this may lead you to the success in life that you have been dreaming about. That being millionaire or stepping up in your woke place etc. Being joyful and happy in life will allow you to accomplish and allow you to work 100 percent good.

Lastly, all I have to say is that positive attitude is the key to success in life. The only reason I say this is,because I was one of those students that didn't interact with anyone because of my attitude. Now that I have learn and taught my self to be the person who I am today I have made so many friends that I didn't know I would talk. I didn't know that having all this kindness and positive energy could reflect on who i am today. That why I say have good strong positive energy and you will get a lot back in life        ",3.5,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5
ABFEE879153D,"I believe that graduating high school in three years is the best option out there, the reason why i support this statement is because, i myself i'm graduating early the reason why i decided to this was because, i felt like i was too mature for highschool and i felt like i could do more things that highscool will limit me from doing. So many students see high school as an embergo, high school literally takes four years that alot of time, we could be out there gaining expreinces from being in the workforce and actually studying what we want to do, i also feel like highschool don't really focus on what the students actually want to do, we take classes that we won't even need after high school. Ok let look at it this way, when we take history classes in highschool are kids really going to remember what was George Washington favorite food? or when did the civil war began? yes i know it can be important for us to know our history but we should'nt be taking it for four years non-stop. For example let take a look at bill gates he was a smart kid in highschool, he also use to sneak to the college libary to do his work, because he felt like high school didn't offer him the amount of knowledge he needed so he decided to drop out of high school, and has you can see his on of the top billionairs in the World. What if there is a kid like that in highschool and he/she felt like highschool is not giving him the amount of knowledge he needed and he wants to graduate early but he can't do that because, were required to take four years of everything, and it's totally not fair. When i decided to graduate early, both my counselors and teachers where discouraging me that i should'nt do it, that colleges frown at those type of stuff and all that, but they did'nt know that i already made up my mind and i felt like i was ready to take on the world all by myself without the help of my parents. In conclusion i think three years of highschool should be encouraged alot in highschool, so kids can go out there and explore and live their dreams and actually study what they want to study. And they should'nt really make students take boring courses like history for four years of high shool non stop. I'm very happy to say that i'm class of 2020!! instead of 2021, And i'm very happy that i took that road.",3.0,2.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
126555810C31,"An great author, Ralph Waldo Emerson, once wrote, ""Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow."" Based on my experiences, I agree with Mr. Emerson. Because in order for a person to grow, that person will have to do an certen task, to help that person reach that goal or goals. There are difference things a person can grow in like: school, career, and hobbies.

In school a person learned skills to help a person in the further such as, wrighting, reading, vocabulary, history, and math etc. A person will learned, how to talk to other people, and how to act, by making friend. Also in school like, community collage, can help a person can also developing jobs skills, for further career.

Another thing you can grow in, is careers. A person can grow in their career by going up their working rank I am currently working at Searchs and I am the supervisor their. At first, I got hired as a cashier. It took me a while, but I got my way up there.

Hobbies is another thing you can grow in. People can learning and practicing skills to help them up prove their's hobbies. One of my many hobbies, is drawing. When I was six, I can only draw sticks finger. I have taken many art classes to help me develop my drawing skills. Now I can draw a human with details.

Going above in beyond, what you have mastered can help you with, learning a new skill, going up the jobs rank, or developing a skills for a hobbies.",2.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0
E0538F7AB083,"I agree with this statement, first impressions with people or places are difficult to changed.

But first the definition of Impression is a lasting effect, opinion, or mental image. Is a belief of understanding of sth. Here is a example in a sentence,

I made a bad impression by arriving late for the interview.

I always see the bad and good things in each person and in each places too. But sometimes the impressions can change, It depends on the person. Now I'm gonna make some examples about the first impressions in people and with places.

For example, If I'm going to a restaurant the first impressions that I'm looking for, are If the local is cleanly(floor, chairs, etc..), the bathroom they aren't dirty, the employers(making sure that they are using gloves when they touch the food and when they prepair the food, Plague(rats, cockroach, etc..) that's very important because we don't want to get transmit a bacteria or something like that). Another example, If I'm going to a friend house, my first impressions that I'm looking for, are typically the same of the restaurant, instead of the part of the employes(obviously), but if the house is dirty, for example: (the floor, the kitchen, the bathroom, etc...) that impressions can change for me, because they probably clean the house everyday, but just that day they don't clean it.

And now I'm gonna make some example of first impressions for a person, the first impression that I saw in a person is the personality(vibes, etc..), the education level(respectful, responsable, etc..), the way of she/he dress it(outfits) that's when the phrase ""dress to impress"" takes place,

if the person is comic, etc.. Some person do the same, but some person just talk in the bad way of other persons, and sometimes they don't know them, they don't talk to them, and that's too bad impression for the person that is doing that, they are wrong :/

So my point, is I just said before, the impressions can change and it depends on the person. ",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5
93BAA0D48EF3,"Adopted a four-day work week with each conisting of ten hours should my school follow up with this modle.

From my opion yes. Reason i think it should is beacuse we can have a 3 day weekend, spend more time with family, get enough sleep,if studnts have after school jobs they can have good hours. Like for example If my school have adopted a four day school week with each day two hours. It would help alot because i can go school do my two hours on Monday,Tuesday,Wedesnday, and Thursday and i feel like we could help out teachers alot not only studnets could help out staffs teachers and studnets . Have Friday Saturday Sunday off go work on my 3 day weekend get sleep spend time with my family get my sleep and naps. It would help alot and be more easier for others and myself. So yes i feel like our school should follow up with for day school week extending the school day two hours others students would not like it that way but teachers and studnets to but from my opinon yes i think our school should follow up with that .",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
9B3F1EFA8AAB,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people think that are impossible to change, because they had been said or think that you cannot change your first impression, when you at first meet or start knowing someone, that is not true because clearly you can change your first impression, even though it can be the same or different as the first impression you had at the beginning of everything, but you may also be insecure or confuse of your own thoughts and feelings.

I am in disagreement with this prompt that it has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, because just imagine clearly your first impression it may not be the same when at first you start knowing someone, when at first you meet someone, or even when at first you look someone by the first time, people may also said that is impossible to assume your first impression at someone, because your perspective of someone may be different from another perspectives of others, you may have the same perspective or also different from other people.

The day when at first came to United States it was really hard for me and for my family from Mexico, I was really nervous and also a little scared, it was one of my dreams that became real, I was so impressed and surprised of everything, the first impression that I used to have of United States changed, now that I am living in United States, the impression is different because now I know how is to live in a different country. Not always is going to be how you thought it would be, but it can be even better, even thought your impression was different or was the same at the beginning.

The day I came to this school Generic_School, my impression from when I meet my counselor Generic_Name were different from my impression after I meet her, I thought she was going to be really mad and mean counselor or I even thought she was going to be a counselor that doesn't like Hispanic people, but all my thoughts were wrong, my impression was really wrong because my thoughts about her were wrong, now that I know how is my counselor, my first impression and perspective changed from the one that I used to have and believe.

In conclusion, as the end of this prompt that it has been first impressions are almost impossible to change is wrong, that is not believable because your first impressions and your own thoughts can be wrong, even though you thought it was going to be something at the end is not how you thought it was going to be, first impressions are possible to change because they can be wrong even though your perspective can be true, or it can be also wrong. Don't let first impressions to trick you because they may be wrong, you can change them if you want, but make sure to be secure.         ",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5
BE6A28051A30,"In my opinion, i completely agree with this association church statement. Success consists of going from failure to failure until you get what you're being fighting for, without losing your enthusiasm. However i realized that the time period it's not the same to the one that we're living on. Company Association, Churches, and Governments are not alike as before, because now if you are trying to achieve something and for some reason you failed, people will start judge on your acts that you're not capable to become your dreams reals. Eventhough failure plays an important role in the pursuit of success. I would like to share one specific example that fail is the promotion that brings you to success.

I would like to lasso the example of your first day on your new job. We all passed through that situation , you feel like you're not lace in, in the directions that your boss or supervisor gave it to you to do and thanks to that some employees start laugh at you, about your failure and no one is loyal to come up to you and teaches you how to do it they stand by and wait until they see that you made it wrong then they try to help you. But, let me tell you something that you already know, the world isn't a rainbow it's a very mean and nasty place and it doesn't matter how rude you are, it would put you into your knees and keep it permanently if you let it. Not you, not me, even no one hits that hard like life does. But, it does't care how it hits, the only thing that really cares is about how much you can take, how much you can get hit and keep moving forward. If you know what you worth, then go out and get what you worth, but you must have to be able to hold out hits and not to came and blame others and say; I can't be the person that i want to be, because of him or her, or anybody. That's how winner is done.

In summary all the proofs plays an important factor in how to be successful in life, sometimes is that shove that you needed to get higher. In addition to this, you have to be able to hold out the criticisms of others, if you are not capable your enthusiasm will get shrink and all the effort would be vainly.",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,3.5
C5CA6C22BAFE,"Taking out the student favorite food shouldn't be taking out cause a lot of kids wont even come to school cause of the lunch and but if there different kinda food it would maybe make kids love lunch more. its a really bad idea coming from the principal. And something kids may not like the food from the beginning cause it may not be cooked right, or it may have the lunch lady hair in it, and lunch ladies should ware hair nets when they cook the food in the morning and after noon.

And this should be for the bananas too if they don't look good you should throw it away and some other food it are past days. well a lot of kids dont care about what they eat only if its good. And Chips or other snacks shoudn't be taking away either mostly poeple like snacks more then food. it would be better just too leave the food alone and let people enjoy it. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5
CE98C42F51C2,"In my opinion I think the kid's that don't listen to there mom and dad. then They need this program the most. One the older student this telling the younger student what to do. And the older student is acting like there parents. Then if they do the program for like 3 or more time a week then,the younger student will get use to it. And the they will maybe listen to there mom and dad.

How is this program going to help them later on when they have kid's. This is for the older one one. Because he or she is telling younger kids what to do and it pretty much just getting ready when they have kid's later on. And it also teaching they how to respect there orders.

this program is going to help both younger kids and older kids because... Then a older person tells you to something. you should do it. its called respect your orders. Like if u respect other people it dont matter how old you are. You just have to respect older people. And one more time it's just going to prepare the older students when they have kid's. And younger kids how to behave in fort of there parents.

And what i wrote about. Is how is program is going to help they later on in life. How it's going to help both older student and younger student. Also my opinion on who need this program the most.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
E4298EE64777,"Dear: principal

I think that the policy is unfair because not all the students have a B range and they want to be in a sport team or other thing.

I why don't you change the policy to C' s. If not the team' s are not going to be complete and the school could lose all the games. Many students might change schools because they want to be in a team. sport's teach diciplean and team work witch will help in their future live when they grow up. when they get a jod were they have to do team work it won't be so hard because they already now how to communicate and show team work.

STUDENT_NAME",3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,3.0
71F12F9F01DE,"I agree with this prompt many cases it is impossible say the people but i will tell you something we can, many peoples says is impossible to change the world, and you know what we can is something is on our head that keeps blocking, i think it is our priority number one, change the world, change our vision of watch our environment,

the people needs to change to see the real thing that is happening on our environment, change one little thing is a big change does not matter what but the change began, i would say among the world and our life, do you think our life are safe i say no because the global warning it is on us, and we can change it of course, the thing is nobody it is gonna get up until someone do, what we have been doing is not wright, the change is coming. We have been doing a lot of work every day and you know what for global warning, know let's talk about the people many peoples say can't change them self because is hard, it is impossible, no one will see change on my, and many other thing but peoples need to change their behavior, among the day peoples feels tired because they had bad day or they do many work. but i will never give up because as the tree can change the leaf to another color i can change the world one thing i can change myself but we can change it as a team with many other peoples, is better together than alone the change will even bigger and bring many others countries and join us, if i can change myself i can change another peoples to see the real life in what we live. I want to talk about me i really want to change myself because many other peoples needs me to help them be courteous, kind, responsible, on time and try to do better on what i do, change myself and the life of peoples it is my priority number one, if i know what is write and what is wrong i know what i gonna do change the impossible to possible nothing is this world is perfect nobody but we have to support other in what they need, we have to be happy of our self from the right thing we have been doing and up coming. I like technology and electricity those are the to matter i want to study with technology i would like to build a personal robot because everybody wants one and help in the day with the task of the home i know that will cause dangerous because can damage itself with an update or make it crazy but that can change the life yes everybody will be happy and peoples can rest better, with the electricity i would like to do the first smart phone that can charge with the sun because can not be generate a lot of energy. Is never too late you can make many thing as you can but if you make it you are right is not wrong make mistake i can tell you one thing is good because you can learn from them if you never make mistake you are wrong the mistake are the key to successful to change the bad thing to the right. You are my passion to live my mom say and you can change the world or may be not because in your head there is your world where you can build many thing to help peoples maybe you can not build a big change but one little thing is more bigger that i big thing, the change is coming very soon around the corner. but the change is not enough many peoples think the opposite and they never will change their minds that the bad thing are right and is very sad see peoples thinking about it they need to open their eyes and see what is really happening around their environment. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change this prompt is easy to understand because in the actuality there are many impressions that can never change of course others can do it but not a lot will be agree, sometimes i don't know what to write i write what i see, i heard, and touch my experiences to change are really small but the dreams come true sometimes not in the real life but in your head yes if i could dream a big dream to change world and the life for the peoples who need a little help to make their dreams come true and they always will say thanks because you change my whole life and others now is is my turn to change other you did your part now i have to do my part thank you very much. The behavior in the school, in the house, in the community, in the country, in the neighborhood, and with the peoples who you talk those are part of the change, something ugly to something beautiful the change we have to bring it from the house and the teachers are those who change our self from the way to study and get a better future, The most part of everything is get started if we don't do that nobody is gonna get up until i make the first right thing, my teacher say it is important change the way thing are build and get the point you want it, i love the way i think to change anything but i need some extra help many cases i say if i could do one thing is make something like a video or video animation and upload to the social media will be great because many peoples will see the video and they are gonna say this is what i want it, this is what i was looking for and the hole word will see it, i like many others prompt but this is not difficult to say something nothing is impossible everything is possible if you never give up everything is gonna be right and the change you are gonna do is going to be the one of many peoples will be proud of you all, and i am going to finish with this last word, everything you think is wright is write if is the opposite you are right as well just never give up and continue strait, may be if every people can think and put the most of his part will be great at this point you change it, and i will tell you because you already have been change the bad thing to the right the only thing is wait until the process is complete, i make mistakes and you too and we know if we fixed we can change what you want and the make it possible the life is passing too fast and we have to live it like is the last day of our life and never give up. i will try my best the change is near to you.",2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,2.0
CFEC920440CE,"We accomplish more by doing tasks that we are assigned with to complete.

We have always get something done if the tasks or assignments are done.

Take for example people that work jobs, day and night they tend to get work or tasks or assignments done.

How do they get stuff done, workers usually plan it out like steps to go though to complete them if they dont follow the steps like how are they going to complete the task or assignment to get it done. Workers always need to plan it out before proceeding to the task or assignment to finish or complete. For example Generic_Name wants to figure out how to complete his project, he need to plan step by step and what materials he needs for the project. He follows the step by step plan but realizes what he needs to do later on he gathers the materals and starts to complete his project just by always doing it.

All of us always have to something to complete any tasks or assignments to finish.

It's not going to work if we dont always doing something or plan it out , it's the reason why if you wanna get it stuff done you have always do it in order complete it. For example take school students for a example, they tend to always to get work done so they can free time to themselves and usually making sure the answers they write down are correct to get good grades. School students have determation to complete classwork they're assigned to, so later on they don't have to complete it for homework at home for free time. It's better to always complete work so you don't have to complete later on. For example any job work usually has work to do like car manufactures , they have a assembly to work on because it's where the cars are starting to be made by the workers in the assembly line. They have to work the machines to put the parts on the cars that are being work on so it can shipped of to the car dealership. Everything revolves around on always getting something on time, so it doesn't become a problem later on. Everyone like to job workers to school students alwayss have to something , its why we tend to get stuff done.

Always accomplish it by doing it

Reasons why, we have to do it if we tend to get our task or assignments done then that work doesn't get it the way of what you are trying to on the next task. Accomplishing that we are trying to get to is a good way to start off, you see like CEOs of a company planning what they want done and to figure it how to accomplish it. For example take CEOs they're good at getting stuff done and accomplished it pefectly cause they own businesses and tell his workers what food products or drinks that stores need for people to attract to buy their goods or clothes. People always have to plan to work towards to they want to achieve or accomplish even for their future. it's not going to work if you don't put the effort into the assignment or tasks to make it happpen. You always have to make sure what you want and to make it happen so that your future has more opportuniites.

In conclusion Always put the effort into it so you can accomplish on any work,task, assignments that you can achieve later on in your life.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
0A082DA0A890,"I agree with student taking online classes. Because some student might be to old for then to attend school or do a fulltime school program. By doing online classes. Student will be not worring about attend school on time, if they get sick or have to travel for a emergency happen. They would have the chance of talking with their counselor and talk about sign up for online school. If the teacher give them homework they would have the chance of sending by email.

In other way been able to take classes online, give the student a chance of choosing their own schedule for example, some student might to take classes in the moprning, some student might want to take classes afternoon or at night time. Taking classes online give the student a chance of doing classes in the other side of the country or anywhere. Many student are not able to attend school.

Attending online school give the student the advantage of working or doing their own projects at home for example student won't relay on school supplies. Students by taking classes online benefits then, because some student have two jobsor lives to far, and they are to old for attending school.

For the students that have two jobs. They get the chance to use there work break to take some classes, test, or even quizzes. For example in my side of the story if my school would give online i would be able to have to jobs and support my family paying some bills. For other student have the same problem.

In my conclusion taking classes online benefits the student in many different ways. for example by choosing their opwn schedule, by given then the opportunity of doing their own things, by giving then a aesier way to learn, by showing then that they are adults now and demostrating and teaching to do take the right choose.     ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
F440ECCF9E67,"The idea of planning for a career is to perpar yourself and other for the future, career planning is to perpar yourself and other for a colleges that is specific to the career of what your looking for specific, and help plans for the career job that you or others had work for in the past.

Students that enters high school should start looking for the their career, becaue it keeps the student commit to the career, and keeps the students focas toward their future careers. If a student start seaching for his or her career can focas more on their career to find the specific college and the job that they study for their career. ""I want to be a computer engineer for my career"".

Students that starts to look for their specific career can plan earily for their futrue career, student that are working on their careers can work on looking for the specific college that the student that he or she is looking for their career that they plan for. ""The plans I did for my career planning was to take the class that are specific to the career i'm planning for"".

Students that study for their specific careers for the future, have a higher chance to go to their specific career college, their career job, student that worked for their career have been studying the specific career topic that they been working for, when they graduate high school they have a higher chance to get except to their career college, and their career job. ""My chances on getting to the college I worked for is a high chance to get except, and I would not have no problem facing college and, my career planning to be a Computer Engineer"".",2.0,2.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5
8656F070846C,"I agree with these statement because the students need to finish the school for graduate.

Many parents support they's sons.

After you finish the school need to looking for a job.

For example i divided my time for study and working after school.

It's a hard work but is necessarily for a better life.

The people need to divide the time for doing many things.

Many people do not done the school for different reasons for example, disscution with the parents a bad relationship parents with the sons.

Sometimes the students do not pay attention in class because in home they have a lot of problems.

The students can't concentrate because the problems between the parents affect they's life.

My life is come be hard because i do not have my parents by my size is sadness know they's far away of me.

Keep you brain busy thinking good idea is better that stay on home doing anything.

When i was begin to study i was so scared because i had not idea about a word in English.

The teacher do not understand the Spanish people ,if they are in similar situation was same thing because they don't speak Spanish.",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0,3.0
A35F3D111E9A,"I agree with this statement becaues I think that unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow in you life. some poeple try very hard to mastered thing in there life. for examples poeple will try there best do mastered something in there life and with there friend and family.

first some poeple try very to mastered something there life they are not good that. and poeple try to be a good friend to there best firend. poeple try very hard, to keep there jod and to not get fire for there job becaues they need the money to pay bill at home and food to there famliy.

at lest poeple, if you try to do somethig beyong you will not never grow in life. poeple go beyond thing at they are not good at and the try very hard be at end they fail and get sad about it. some friend are good at mastered vidoe game and they play vey day. some friend get mad wind they loss and then they get into a fight just beaues they loss to a video game.",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,2.0
DCE82F61BE10,"Is good idea for students to recive online courses. In my point of veiw, it will be better for students to attend to regulars classes at schools. In this way students will be able to socialize with other people. Also, they will have the opportunity to do other activities. In this days sudents recive free education and it is easy for them to attend to school. Online programs may have a cost for the courses or classes.

if students attend to schools they will learnd more about their classes because teachers will be able to teach them with enthusiasm. In the other hand, is good idea to recive classes online but you will not have the opportunity to interac with teachers or other students. If you go to school there will be a way that you can make new friends that you can share adventures and stories with them. It will be more benefit for students who go to school than students who stay at home watching their scream on the computer.

Attening school also give you the option to enroll many activies. For example, you can join the football team. music band, and the theater shows. I know a friend that he didn't like to attend school, but when he start to play for the football team at his local school, he was more exiting to speen time at school. At school you can do many actiivities. In contrast, reciving classes online can be a good option for does students that don't have the resources to go to school. For example, if they don't have a bus stop or the school is to far away. Also, for the students with special disability.

The united states have the advantage to have free education. This is a good thing for does parents with not reasourses. Parents can send students to school without worry for a monthly payment. They know that their children are in a good learning place. In the other hand, having classes online may cost a amount of your money. It will be difficult for students because they will have to find a job to soport their online paymants for the courses. In this way have classes online is not a better option for all.

Offering distance learning as an opion for students is not a good advantage for all the people who want to study. it's because many students prefer to attend to school than staying at home.

It's a good thing interac with your teachers or other students at shool.           ",3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
653620381DB3,"Do you think that high schoool should only be 3 years instead of 4 years. well some might say it would be better having 3 year's of school other then 4 year's. but the way to achieve it is difficult.

I think that school should be only 3 years. beacause some student don't really want to be in school for too long. this can give student's a goal so that they don't have to stay for 4 years. it would give the students a higher chance to focus in school and then head out to college for those who are interested.

I belive that if student's can find a goal of having to be going for 3 years in school instead of 4 year's. it would take them hard work and confident in order to earn it but other's might say that they perfer to be in school longer. because of friend's or liking to learn alot and it no rush toward them for they are interted in learning.

but in the future I hope that evey student can find a way to be seccessful in there time in school.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
C8EBB096262B,"To Begin with, many student have many excuses to not attend school. Of curse, that we can change this to not be happen anymore. Student may not complete the school if they lose the year.

What would happen if student get affected for all student that not attend school? For example, like I seen in me that I have a lot of appointment that is affecting me and my grade. We can not let this happen we need to do many thing in order to not let our child lose. In addition,

principal should offer distance learning for student that the way could not affect them because student might have a natural disaster in their neighborhood, student might be sick in such manner that could not attend school, that might affect their grade and they might repeat the year.

First reason, student might be absent for a reason like to be sick in such manner that could not attend school. All included student that is special that they go for a week or more in the hospital. Moreover, student sometime the doctor let a lot of appointment for them to check up or appointment with the dentist. Also, student who have allergies when the weather change they got affect in that they may not come to school. In high school, student sometime they get pregnant and the doctor let them many appointment including when they delivery they lose many school days and that affect many student lose the year or they may get affect their grade. Because we don't know in the future what will happen to some of our student that many of them don't find any solution of their problem. In fact, we don't know what it will happen if we don't give an opportunity to our students. We must pay attention to them if they lose many days of school sometime they are afraid to talk about their problem.

Second reason, student in their neighborhood might have a natural disaster also might need the distance learning in order to not lose school days. Sometime the weather get so angry that may bring accident or can bring tree crashing in our hose or may get rain and rain that could bring floating that may cause a lot of problem to some our students. In addition, the school bus may not get as in order to come to school. If it a student that walk that student could not get to school and the County could not cancel the school or even in there's no light and that may tell an announcement that student could not get informed about the school information weather. Because, if student get that problem the principal could not believe and it can not give an chance to those student to take the test or the exam that they had in class. After all, in the school no one care about you even if you have a teacher that it is so inpatient.

To end with, the school should offer the distance learning to some of our students. Student may got sick for a little reason and if they had natural disaster, we should care about it. If we find a student that always is absent we should ask them what is the matter or what is the problem with them? While some may argue that if we offer the distance learning student may not lose school days and even they could not lose their grade student could have benefit from this way student could not lose, however some may argue that if we gave the distance learning to student student could not enjoy this learning they just will playing even if we give the distance learning in computer they just see it they they will start playing video game or they just will watch a video. Finally, we should give the student an opportunity they will enjoy it and they will not throw it away. ",3.0,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.5
1FACF7E8D0A7,"Dear principal

I do think that students should be require to perform community service. The reason why I think that is because every one should be helping out the community .

where we live is like a community that we need to take care of and not keep massing with it. If we mass up this world where will live, people just throw stuff on the floor, not picking after themselves. We should not be forced but we should do the right thing and be happy about it. People do a lot of things to help out the community, and we all should join in and help out like ever body ells. I would love to help out the community because i want to make the world a better place live and we all should give out a hand. So students should be required to perform the community service.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
63E2278271E4,"The British john Lubbock wrote 'your character will be what you yourself choose to make it'

there for is a bit concerning about how kids change there characters just because they dont fell good about them selves and have a lot of thinking inside of them the traits that you carry will have a dominance over them but i dont think that its best answering the question there for do actually they take control beyond our control.

There for it will be not always the case between how other view your things and traits makes you in insecure how other people see you and you change to make your self better than our parents gave us something we just got it from society like there is a lot of influences in the internet and more things that can go far behind the imaginable and they are not controlled by anyone they are just more likely to have more influences beyond there control but there is a lot of influences in this world you just got to find the right one for you and stick with it general likely there is more change in society for different perspectives.

Secondly there is a possible out come that you everyone can get out of this, just like other people that change there perspective at looking at things there for i should say that i have changed a lot since i got here in Virginia and am adapting to being normal well the normal way of being normal for other people there are influences beyond our control because what you see on the internet you will want to mimic it one day like there is a lot of rapers talking about 'girls, god there is a it of are influences in our daily lives always hearing what a rapper did or what type of things he is going to do there for its a bit concerning about all that because for a person that just moved here is a lot of change there is a lot of people that influence almost all the world in California there is where i lived all the artist and musical players and all of them have a purpose of having more people being influenced by them and making a lot of money if they get a lot of attention from a lot of people.

There is kids just like adults that get influence by others there is a possibility that we choose our own ideas of being influenced that are out of our control we choose to be this way we choose our path always they follow what we want there for i am proud of the world we live in.

There is a posibility that new things come out every year new things that 'kill' us or maybe other things like war and most of the things happening to our world and more polution and more virus that want to kill us and it is being more influenced by others to be scared of it becasuse you could die from that there is a lot of thinnking behind every smart influences.

Have a nice day, that is what makes us movie froward every time that we get stuck. ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0
A18B82F7407B,"When you first meet a person for the first time, it is good to have a positive attitude towards the person so that they see a good impression of yourself and how you are as a person. meeting someone for the first time is a way to show them who you are but that impression never changes because they know that you are that person of character. theres many ways of having a good, bad, and persuasive attitude when you meeting a person, businessman, and even a friend. i think that the first impression towards a person can be like how they view you as a whole. it doesnt always have to be about character this could go for anything even including: movies, video games, and television shows. they can have a strong impact on you, even little kids that are growing up that watch TV, those television show have a first time impression towards them.

Meeting a person with a bad attitude/ impression can show you that they are not good for you or even around the people that you hang out with, many people tend to have the impression of a cool and awesome person when in reality they arent that person, many people try to put up an image so people think that you are ""awesome"" or ""cool"". leaving someone with a bad impression can have a big or negative impact in their life for example when you first meet a person you wanna date they could leave you with a good impression but over time that person can change the way they feel about you and you see that a they are changing as person which many people arent comftarble with change of a person. also having a bad impression on the job you are trying to get, wont get you the job because of how you are behaving or using words or even body posture says a lot about a person.

Good impression that you show the first time to a person meets you be kind and just have a good attitude so people will have the same to you. being good to people in life can alway have a positive outcome. dont always be god to people that treat you bad and run you over and over again.

i think its best to havea good frist impression to anyone you meet in your life because those people will like you and some will not like you at all, but being the best of yourself to your potential can be amazing at times but always have a positive mind set about impressing other people and its not always about impressingother people its also about having that thought of being your best at all times.",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0
DB2E935F461F,"Some say technology is just an extension cord of our bodys. For example a cell phone, you take it where ever you go and use it. We use technology everyday ,but technology can cause less contact with people and a distraction. Although some say technology has a positive effect on lives ,actually it has negative effect on lives.

Despite the fact that technology gives negative effects it actually gives positive effects as well. We use technology everyday it is a part of our life. Technology helps us in many ways for example our jobs, many of our jobs involve technology and the use of it helps us get our job done succesfully and easier. We use technology to commuincate for exanple a cell phone is used to communicate with other people this helps us know where people are if needed or just to see how they are doing. We use technology in school for example computers, cell phones, these devices help students on their everyday assigments it helps them use the internet when needed and it helps teacher with their teaching as well.

Technology causes a distraction. For example cell phones are used every day in schools cell phones distract students from their learning and their peers around them also. While using these moblie devices when not asked to students grades go down and they don't show interest in school anymore. These cell phones are not only a distraction they are an addiction to people. Another example driving while using your cell phone, this can cause a distraction and that can lead to a car crash. Some people are texting while driving or playing music and even the gps is a distraction because you are looking down at the gps instead of keeping your eyes on the road. This shows us distraction can make you loose focus or not pay attention your surrondings.

Cell phones can cause less contact with other people. When using your cell phone you don't look up while walking you just keep your head down this is usually the case with teenagers and kids. Teenagers don't interact with parents, peers and family memebers anymore becasue of these moblie devices. These devices can cause people to not have interaction skills for example people don't know how to approached some one if talked to. This show us that with this technology we are loosing our social skill we don't even know how to say hi to someone anymore it is very sad what technology is doing to us it is stripping us away from the world.

Despite the fact that some say technology has a positive effects it actually has a negative effect. Technology is part of the human life we can't take it way anymore. Technolgy can a distract people and can loose interaction with people. Technology is not bad but it is the way we use it that makes it bad and addicting. If we only used technology when we had to the world would be a better place. ",4.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,3.5
EB03C897F7E8,"Student and teachers are have opposing views on working together for various reasons. However, according to new Stanford research, when people are treated as partners working together their motivation, student are able to communicate with each other, therefore creating a better final product. Working in team also prepares students for future careers and job. Whoever they will be required to learn to cope with other people and personalities, it is valued by employers. Even though students are not agree with each other all the time, working together is ore beneficial than working alone.

Every body ha heard someone in their life say "" two minds are better than one"" before right, this quote has never range more, and all of the idea it promotes reflect crystal clear off of group work. Working in a group can be drastically reduce the amount of work you need to do as well as make thing of more efferent, whether it be a group project paperer presentation. Because it cuts down on how much work one person has to do. It allows for group to achieve more as alone. Things are also finished much quicker because of the way many people can split up different jobs in a group an people with different skill sets can do what they are best at and do not have to worry about what they are bad at, this broader range of skill can also be used to help other people members develop their own by learning from their team members. The diversity found within a group of people is one of most powerful resources a person can have when it comes to finishing a task.

it lends a group of people to have many more ideas to come up with and bounce off of because many people are working

""The best way to have good idea is to have a lot of the a quote from Linus Pauting dealing with dilemma new idea's. When dealing with abdicating an idea from thin air, it be best to have multiple people instant of one because it brings multiple ideas all have fair and different point rather than multiple ideas no opposition or diversity.

Another benefit of having multiple people working in one group is that this can cause an evolutionary like phenomenon with multiple, stronger idea that complete and mulute, creating one in tribute and exceptional idea. This also comes with the help of a group, as a group can decide which idea would be main idea and smoothe out the edyes.

Another problem that can come up is well problem. Having a group of people can become extremely helpful for solving a problem that may come up in situations where a problem can arise, having a group of people can allow for quick and easy way to get out of a situation. Now working in a group does not have its advantage but some things are best done alone

Though working in a group can seem to be good working alone can be better depending on the situation. Being in group full of adult and unfocused group members is infuriating and may seem like torture. Although, some people prefer working alone because they can focus better and make decision faster, in the end, it is a better to working in a group.

if one does not do work the only they fail. Also being in a group fell safe. While being alone means you are much more impotent so working in group

Though working alone can be better for one reason such as anxiety. paranoia worry about other preference, or simply because they would prefer to work alone. Working in a team is advantage over some others who are unaccustomed to doing so , it helps develop people skill decision making skills and general expertise for putting up with others.

working in a group is also good for getting other people's opinion on group member work, as long as they do their part, oftentimes students will learn and experience more in a group of their peers than working alone which is definitely better for their future an possibly what lies ahead. Developing these skill will most likely help in the coming times of college, careers their future family and even retirement.

Overall, working together is beneficial because it creates less work and allow work to be completed faster. Working together promotes constructive criticism from other member of the group , which produces a better final product, working together create different points of view with different points of view new ideas are generated. New idea create diversity is the way to success.",3.5,2.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0
5E830B6462DB,"Thomas Jefferson believes in that doing something is better than doing nothing. We do accomplish more if we always do something. There are great accomplishments and there are simple accomplishments. If I wanted to play an instrument, but i don't know how, so I learn how. Let's say I want to see other dementions' worlds', or go back in time. Lets say I build a machine to be able to do that. Cleaning the house, Cooking a meal, and doing homework. If we are always doing, then we can accomplish. We accomplish more by doing something. If we didn't we wouldn't have the things we do now. We can accomplish things' as a team or individually. Like sports, in sports people work together to win. A game company, these people work together to make a game, so that people can play it. In a game people play together online to win as a team or individually. It's better if we do our work, homework, or even little things like play outside, hangout.

Inactivity in it's own way has a purpose resting or sleeping, relaxing. If you do that you let out that steam. We take a break after working hard on something. So we do what we have to do for a couple of hours, we go home, we can take a nap, eat, watch a bit of tv, or sleep. That way the next day you can be motivated to continue doing your job, or go to school. If we do even a little during the day we've accomplished like go out and buy groceries, clean the house, and cook. If you do that then you've accomplished something. you can't really do anything if you sleep all day. Being lazy is not good. Its bad, because if we get lazy then we'll want to have the easy way out of things all the time. We can get used to at being lazy. It's better to be active and motivted to do the things we have to so we can accomplish something.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.5,2.5
D326DB3F4FCF,yes becuase students would have more time to there work and is give more time the techer plan out the lesson but thye got give a time limeit to finsh the work cuz then students can get done the work and it would be hlepful to some students cuz some learn better by them self and they wouldnt feel rushed by the teacher to finsh the work before class ends but some other students learn better when ther is a teacher right there teaching face to face some students learn diifernt then others and there would be problems with students like getting trouble and it will teach students responepillity and it would show if they are willing t the work or if they care or dont care cuz now a days students dont really care about school they just come cuz they have to cuz if they didnt need to come they wouldnt come they just think that school a waste of time for them but they dont know how much they need school and how much school os gooing help them in the futer but it will give students more time to sit dont and work maybe they like it more then coming to school ,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0
2BE11993FB5F,"It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I personally disagree with this statement because, many times i have been told that i have a bad first impression the first time people see me, many people say i look mean and with a bad attitude. However, i do not have an attitude when people are friendly or speak me.

New research says that it is far easier to loose a good reputation, then to gain one. Which is true, but you would never know how is the other person until you speak to them. You cannot judge a person by the way they look, speak or drees. For example, couple of years back on my first day of school, in the United States, people would judge me because, they thought i knew English, and when they would speak to me, i would put my head down and not say anything, months later i learned english and knew how to have a conversation with them; Not long a long, i had a person come to me and say; I did not thnk you spoke english, because i remember back in 6th grade, you would not talk. He changed the way he thought of me when i started having a conversatiomn with him. Perphas, You can always change you first impression.

First impressions are clearly not the best ones, but we can always make a choice on wheather change them or not. I have experienced many first impressions. However, i have always told myself that my reputation does not depends on how others see or think of me, depends on how i see myself. Only ourselves have the choice to change our first impression.",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0
F9D0974B3AF7,"I disagree about extending school because,Parents might want to spend time with their kids after school on a regular day after school and if school was extended parent might have already gone to work by the time you get home. Parents might have done an appointment with a doctor right after a regular day at school,but if the time extended at school the doctor might have already closed. kids would want to get out of school to talk with their friends or have fun doing what they like best. The teachers might not get paid more then a normal day at school. Teachers should get paid more if school was extended. I would not like school to get extended because,I have more important things to do after school like taking care of my brother or take care of my dogs. My parents are never home and my older sister is. My parent tell me to help my sister clean the house after school but when i get home she never cleans until before my parents come, and if school was extended she would never clean the house and my parents would already be heading home. This is why i think school should not be extended. And the most important thing is that nobody wants to be in school.",2.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5
6515E6AFD11E,"Although some people don't agree with this quote for being negative,however others and I agree of the enthusiasm quote because to learn something new in life and to make mistakes for something great later.

Do you agree with the Former Prime Minister Of England Winston Churchill quote? There others take this quote in a positive way or in a negative way. People that have enthusiasm will most likely to take the quote to their own hearts that doesn't want to quit or gives up yet. Like the quote says from failure to failure that will follow up to a pursuit of success. So here comes the reasons of enthusiasm in the quote.

Learning something new that actually comes up great. A lot of people learn from their own failures in the past for doing something that wasn't easy for their own lives. Like example someone wants to speak a different language but failed many times,that actually doesn't wants to give up on the language that trying to learn. And it's better to make mistakes for something greater later in life. Like if you failed a lot and that you learn from your own mistakes from those mistakes will do something greater in the future.

Others may disagree that quote doesn't fit right their own selves and for being negative. Others careless about the enthusiasm how it will help for their lifetime. So they don't have the positive attitude and thinks about nothing at all. Negativity is the main point that they fail to fail without trying the best and the enthusiasm with them in life it's worthless to them in life.

Although some people don't agree with this quote for being negative,however others and I agree of the enthusiasm quote because to learn something new in life and to make mistakes for something great later. With this quote I agree with the power of the enthusiasm in lives. People should take the quote like it's a everyday thing in life    ",3.0,2.5,3.0,3.5,2.5,3.0
AB86BAABBF68,"It's a good idea for students to graduate of three years of high school instead of taking for years, i think if they have already passed their classes then they would not have to take elective classes and they might be able to graduate early, but if they need more then seven classes then they might do not be able to graduate and they will have to come during summer to complete their classes that they need to pass.

For example if they are still missing some of the work they had to complete at the end of the year they would have to come during summer school or maybe take more classes then what they were allow to be taking.

If they need to complete more work they might come during summer break, i think it would be good if you have all your classes that you need in order to graduate since when you come to ninth grade, so at the end of high school you might just come to skool just for maybe two classes and it would be better for you becase you need to pass all your classes either way in order to graduate.

and you are assigned with seven SOL and one for english actually you have to be able to pass all the work that youre assigned you must complete all these before you go to the 12th grade, because if you dont complete these assignments before thatnthen you will strugle with these at the end of the senior year of high school, but if you complete all your work that means that you are ready to graduate.

For example i am taking four classes that i need to graduate, but i am taking three elective classes because i wanted to learn more, and i did not want to go home early, so i told my counselour i wanted to get three more classes, but it is because i took all the classes i needed to take during the freshman, sophomore and junior year, so now that i am in twelve grade i just have to take just four main classes with are the ones i need in order to graduate.

Even tho it would have been a good idea to come in summer because i can learn more, but also would not be a good idea because then i would not be able to graduate on time, or mostly like i would have to come to turn in the work i did not finish during school year, and that would b bad because i want to graduate on time just like the other people that passed all theur classes so i need to put that effort and see or talk with the teacher and ask them what do ni need in order to pass all my classes if i am missing some work i have to turn it in.

I want to complete all the work due on time because if i do not turn in the work i am assigned to do then that would affect my grades and that will take me away from graduation, wich i have been waiting for since ninth grade,

So i think it is good to complete your work in class, or if you have homework assigned then we must complete it, or like sometimes the teachers put some work in google classroom with dates due, so we must turn the work on time and complete all of it, becase if we do not do it our grades are going to go down and that means we will not be passing the classes that we need to pass and that will not let us walk in the stage

We must complete all the work, if we do complete all that is assigned then we will be good and would not have to worry about our grades because the grades will be good too, that is why i say that we need to complete the work and sometimes pay attention to what the teacher is explaining that helps us to understand and make the work easy, but if we do not pay attention, at the end of the day or at the end of the class we will have problems with the understanding of the theme we have studied in class because we did not pay attention in class while the teacher was explaining.

One of the examples of not paying attention in class is, what is going to come next like we are going to get very bad grades, so we must do all the work listen while someone is giving instructions because that way we would not have problems with anything and when the test comes up we are going to be prepared to take it and get high grades, because we already studied and if we review our work before we turn it in and make sure everything is good and in order so we would get a good grades.

So other reason why we get good grades is if we come to school everyday because if we miss more then ten days we will get suspended and that will mess up your grades because you are abnsent and you will not be able to see or work in the class wich is better because if you do not come to school for couple of weeks then you will not know when you come back to school, you will be lost because you have already missed some of the work we already did while you was not here, so for me i rather coming to shool even though i am sick or something because otherwise i will bring my grades down and one missing day of school will make all my work come down or bring all my classes down because i have been absent and when i come back to school i would not know what to do.

It is good to keep your grades up and stay them in the same level because that will help ypu tp graduate, so one of my examples is if i come to school and complete all my work, then i do not have to worry about my grades, but ut is not only about your grades or what you do in class is also about what we get in the test and that will be product of the work and effort we put in class if we did good in our notes or study guides that means we will be great in the test too because it is the same that we learn in class it is all the same what will come in the test, so we need to stay focused and ask for help the teacher if we do not understand what we are doing in class.

The teachers are able to help in anything we want, well if it is about the classwork because sometimes we do not understand at all but we can review work and try the best for the next class, we always need to make sure our work is complete before we turn it in because if you have a small mistake that will bring your grades down too and we will not pass our classes and make sure complete everything, in order to graduate.",3.5,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0
FDF7C4F4BC4D,"The first place i would want to go is the Bahamas because it seems like a wonderful place to go. Thats the only place i dream of going. I would like going to the Bahamas because the sea life there. I like watching animal shows to see all the different colors,patterns and different types of fish in the sea. I also like turtles because they walk slow and they look cool.

The first thing i would do when i arrive at the Bahamas is buy goggles then go to the beach and run in the water to find Memo and Dory. I would probably document everything so when i get back home i'll have a memory from when i was at the Bahamas. I enjoy watching colorful fish swimming in crystal clear water. I like when there are all types of colorful fish in groups and swimming together. I also like stingrays because some of them flop on water and it makes it look like they are flying.

There are also sharks for example bull sharks,blue sharks ,and mako sharks. I also like the coral because they come in different shapes,sizes and colors. The coral i like the most is the coral that the clown fish hides in. I would love to go on a cruse and see dolphins and stingrays. I would love to visit with my family one day.

I also like dolphins because they look cool when they jump out the water and they dive back in. It will be cool if i learn how to surf in the Bahamas because it fun to explain to your friends that the first place you learned to surf at is the Bahamas. I bet if you stay there for a whole week you wont want to leave. I would probably be in to photography because of the sunsets and the beautiful place. It must be nice living there your whole life because of the nature.",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
6060D28C05B6,"Some schools in United States ofter classes from home because is good option to students . Some school have decreased bullying and high and middle school because some students get bullied. Students don't want to go more at school and they want to get classes at home. If they get classes at home they don't learning. Some Schools offter distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. students get distract at home. Students get fall in environment learning. Students feel more pressure at home. But students can get relaxing at home.

Students can get distract at home because they have easy to use phones. They feel more bored at home because they need stay at home more time. Also students don't do anything at home because if they stay at home is esay to get more distract. If students sleep in class they want to sleep at home too. Many students work and they would tired and they don't want to learn.

Students don't pay attention in class they too don't pay attention at home because is more hard. Also they want to listening to music or play.

Students fall in environment learning because they learn at class when the teacher explain if students attend classes from home by online is hard they learn. Students can ncreased to learn at home. Also is more hard to students understand by online. Also many students have hard time in class to understand that teacher explain in more hard they learn at home.

Some schools affter classes from home because they think is good option to students. Also students can stay more relaxing from home. Students have more time to do homework. Also they feel more comfortable at home. Also they feel safe at home with their family. Also student sleep more and stay with more energy to receive the class by online. But students get more distract stay near the family and they don't want to pay attention.

Conclude if students get classes from home by online they don't want to pay attention because is more easy they get distract. Also they don't want to learn by online. Students can get fall in environment learning and is hard they learn at home. Also they want to play or use phone and not is good option to students get class at home they get distration and decrease to learning. Also students get frustration in class because they don't understand but if they get classes in online they don't learning too because is more hard they learning from home.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0
93552F3ACA5D,"The limitation of human contact has been a negative effect in peoples lives; people are so caught up in today's technology that no one really talks in person anymore. People do anything on phones, but it has negative things to using them a lot: dating people through text, and less communication in real life and more over text. While most people believe that technology has positive effects in reality, it is mostly a negative effect.

Technology is not a good thing in certain situations. It is better to get to know people in person rather than social media or anything. No one knows who someone is until they meet them in person because some people lie to make someone like them. Technology can hurt people in different ways: physical, emotional, or any other way. People tend to do things to hurt the other person online rather than to their faces.

Some people decide to date someone through social media when it isn't a good idea to do. People can fake identities to make people think they're another person. people decide to not say who they really are, so they could either kidnap them or make the person they're tricking to send them money if they live in another country. It's rare that people find someone who doesn't lie about who they are. Some people probably decide to date through social media because they think that they won't find anyone who will really like them.

Most people who have technology now use them to communicate with other people instead of in person. Most people decide to communicate through online or text so that they don't see the person's face. People feel more brave to tell a person something mean or hurtful through text or anything. People just decide to not talk, but instead to text.

Most people feel like technology has a good effects when it mostly doesn't. Technology is mostly a bad thing because people decide to date each other through text rather than in person and people communicate mostly through text. People need to go out into the world and talk to new people. Everyone needs to see the difference in the real world rather than through text.",4.5,4.5,4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0
5EFF1BA0FBC1,"Although the extra time would benefit students. Some people dont wanna stay after school because they are already tired from staying 7 hours at school. Because school can cause stress if you are forced to do much work.

I disagree because the school board is adding it to our day. They should add a after school program for kids who need help with homework. Because if they add it for everyone then we would get out of school late. And we would barley have time to do homework. On the other hand if they add it everyday then a lot of kids will be stressed. Because when they come back if they have homework,or projects to work on then they might stay up all night working on it and come to school the next day .And they will probably be grumpy or stressed.

My second reason is The teachers will also be tired and stressed because if we leave school first. Then that means they leave after us. Also they have to grade our papers and other stuff so adding extra time to school will not be a great idea because the teachers can turn mean from all the stress. They can sleep from being too tired and then that means we wont get to learn anything. And dont forget that the teachers have a normal life too. They have families that they want to see so if the school board adds extra time then that teachers might not see their families often because they will probably be too busy grading our work.

So i think that the school board should not add the time. Because if they do then they will mess everything up like people's sleep schedule,The time they might go somewhere. So over all i think that the time we leave school right now is good. Because people have enough time to do their work and projects,and to get enough sleep. So the time we have now is good because everything is balanced. But if they did change it then we would have to get used to changing our sleep time and doing school work.",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
992ED17DB3CA,"The benefits of having a good attitude

There are a lot of benefits because of having good attitudes, we can get more time to make again what we were doing and do not stop until we make it the best we could.

In other way, been with a good attitude can help us improve in life that helps us to learn, to concentrate and, to be a good thinking of someone else.

Also, something kind of the same happened to me some time ago when my father was teaching me how to drive, and every time I did something wrong he yelled at me and one day I was with a really bad attitude because of that and than I realized that been mad was not going to help me so i changed my attitude and i learn to drive really fast.

Been mad only makes us worst at doing that because we are not thinking about the positive thinks of that activity just at the negative thinks and thats what makes everything worst.

The benefits of having good attitude its that it can help us to try again something we miss, been frustrated only makes us waste our time and, also having that good attitude makes us improve a lot.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
F7CC31D47F06,"Imagine having a secret talent. Talking or singing with my mouth close is a talent, because it makes people happy and it also helps me feel less nervous.

It makes people feel happy because, one day kids were playing outside I decided to tell them funny jokes with my mouth close. The kids felt happy and were wondering how to talk without moving your mouth. Sometimes I tell my friends that I like their smile with my mouth close. It makes them smile more because they know its me. Having a talent can make people happy and you can also make their day.

It also helps me feel less nervous and helps me talk to people alot with my mouth close. One example is that when I sing I get really nervous so just sing with my mouth close and nobody looks at me because I am not moving my mouth. Singing with my mouth close makes me feel confident. When I am walking and people are asking for dirrections I get to do it with my mouth close. Talking with my mouth close helps me a lot when I dont want to talk or when I am having a bad really bad day. Sometimes is hard to communicate and it is hard not to be nervous so talking and singing with my mouth helps me a lot.

Eveyone has a talent. Singing with your mouth close or talking is a talent because it makes you feel happy and sometimes it helps when you are nervous. You can make people happy when you have a talent. It also helps you to be more confident with yourself. You also get to share with the world what you are able to do. I think that sometimes when you have a talent can help people and can make everyone else happy.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.5
7F0703CF058E,"Many people success because of their behavior or attitude and how well they do in school or how great they are with other. But having a positive attitude is good because, If you are a positive person other people would like to be around you more, You will feel better and in a good mood most of the time, You could help others do well in work or even if they feel down or without motivation. It also helps in your daily day. A good attitude is great for everyone and it shows the real you.

Having a positive attitude is good for you and others. Many people are depressed and being around someone with a positive attitude makes them feel better and more confident. An example of this is if your friend is going through a hard time and you help him or her or even talk to them positively about the issues they will feel better and even could possibly start getting a better attitude. Just because they getting the support or talk they need by a close friends with a good attitude. So people even feel so much better about them self whenever they talk to someone about their problems. And Having a good attitude is like having a good vibe and people love being around those type of people.

You will feel better with yourself if you are in a good mood. Being positive helps with your mood and they way you see life. If your having a hard time at work or any other ativities such as school, sports or even at home. You could gain motivation on doing those things by having a positive attitude. However this might not work all the time because of all the negative people that is in our world and how people act and treat others now days but it will make sure that you are in track and ready for whatever and it wont really affect you or hurt you.

A positive attitude helps a lot on your daily basic. Let's said you and you wife or husband argue. All you would need to do is think positive like about good memories or moments together. I'm pretty sure if y'all love each other the argument won't really affect anyone. Another example if you have a good attitude people at work would love working with you, People at school would love doing group work with you. No one likes to work with a negative person so why ruin the party when you can share positively to other. Many good things can come out of having a positive attitude.

However, A lot of people would believe that not having a positive attitude is the key to success, They are wrong because a lot of things could happen when you are a negative person. Such as being depressed, losing motivation to do almost anything, making bad decisions, not like being with others, and not liking things you use to do. All this reason could be because of a bad attitude. But soever if you have a positive mood everything would feel so much better and you gonna have better days and other would respect you because of your attitude.

In conclusion having a positive attitude is good for everyone and it makes people life better. Because of the good moods, helping others and yourself, having better days. And it just makes life so much better and easier. No one deserve to be negative or even mean to others. We all created equal and we all live in the same world. So why not just go on and share our positive attitude with others and for we could make our planet a better places for everyone.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
E98862049B2E,"I would like to be a guidance counselor because to help kids with problems or personal. To show that the counselor is here to help with anything. To give them advice on how to be confident and everything goes all wrong and soon it will get better. If they are getting bully to support them and give them advice or with personal problems to. To show the its okay to fell sad and hurt soon it will okay and to show them to not let people boss you around to show that they can't boss you around you boss your self around and to be brave and take a risk and to see the world in a different way. Remember that some one will always be here to support you and will always be here for help and get you through thing that make you feel mad or sad. Cheer up you day with some happiness and I choose the job because I want to help kids on what they are going through and to put a smile on their faces and my counselor supported me and my family i want to help another family like he/she did you me. to help student that dont have money, food ,and clothing. Students can ask me for anything like my counselors did for me and my family and they inspired me to want to be a counselor and help others and to ask for help when you ever need it. In conclusion not asking for help to your counselor is not going to get you anywhere. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0
861349CA778E,"The reason why the school board shouldn't add hours to school because students already go to school to much and they would like more time off of school so they can do their homework, hangout with their friends, play sports out of school, and get more time to do their chores around the house.

The school board shouldn't add more hours because if students have appointments then they will have to put a later time but if the place of their appointment closes a little early then the students will have to leave school and that will make them have missing work, late work, more work to do at home with little amount of time, and more stress for the students to finish the work on time.

If the school board adds hours it will become a disaster for the students that have a job and need to get there in time also if they live far from their job their boss could get mad at them for being late and if they dont belive their worker they could get fired and then the student won't have a job, they won't get paid, and they won't have money to pay for what they need.

This is why the school board shouldn't add hours to school. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5
98D8723E86D0,"Should you start looking for career before you enter high school? Will it help you out and help you get a job that way, and is it important to set goals while your in high school and try to reach those goals in the future? All those question's are important to me because on my opinion those are ways to succeed in life. Those question's can help you in the future if you use them. Knowing what you would like to do in the future can help you out because your school might have classes or after school club's for it.

Yes it is important for young student to start looking for a career before they enter highschool. Why is it important? Its is important because if student's know what they want to do in future, they can take classes in high school to help them do that career. For example if I wanted to be a mechanic, I could take auto collision in edison, and that would start to help me out and give me experience. Knowing what you want to be in the future can help you out a lot, and you do what you like to do, and on my opinion knowing what you want your career to be gives you a advantage in the future.

For some people it isn't a problem to go to high school without know what there going to do in the future. They try to find out what what they like, and what they dont like as a career for the future. Some people go to college not knowing what they want to do and find out till there in college. My sister is one of them because she went into college not knowing what she wanted to do or be, but once she started going to college she found out what she wanted to do which was a ultra sound doctor. Now that she knows what she wants to do she studying and trying to reach her goal as being a ultra sound doctor.

If you already have a mindset on what you want to do you can set goal's for yourself, and once you reach those goal's set harder ones to reach. You can set many type's of goal's like one day owning a 5 bedroom house or owning your dream car. You can set goal's with what ever you want like in the future, present, at school , anywhere.

If your still in school a goal you can set is getting a and b honor roll or turning in all your work or even showing up to class everyday. One of my goal's is to own my first car before I graduate which is a Lexus Is300 2001. Setting goal's is important in life, and Ithink everyone should set some goal's for themselve's.",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
A43F5C97F2E2,"A lot of a good workers are doing all their best to find new jobs and a believing future for themselves , most of them are responsible and confident that they can do anything to make the work up and even more better than it before , but they usually don't find it because they don't have experiences and these employers don't want to hire them just because of that .

Although, a lot of people may argue that employees may need experience to find jobs but actually none of that is right .There's a lot of people that found jobs and succeed without experience , you just have to keep believing and never give up. My father didn't found a job too and he is mom was sick and he had me as his son so young . He had no experience in any domain and he needed a job pretty badly to pay the rent and grandma's surgery . But he tried again and again and he never gave up and now he is one of the most famous journalists in Morocco without any experience and still better then the one that do have experiences.

First of all ,an employee doesn't need experience to find a job , he just need to be loyal to his job and work hard and be such an honest person to make his work go even higher and help spread love and respect at his job to all the people .

Second , it's not necessarily that it has to do with jobs obviously ; it can be acting or sports or anything you want to do .You don't certainly need to have experience to do it just like Mohamed Ali said :'Everyone start out as a beginner "", but in term of jobs you just have to show your employers how much you deserve this job and that you can be a better candidate to hire . But you need to prepare for it thought because you don't want to look like a person that can not bring the job up and that you don't know anything about it. My father told me that mostly the workers that don't have experiences are the ones that work hard and always bring ideas that push the job even higher and they usually have positive attitude and a positive vibe that makes the boss love them more then the other employees.

Third, I don't know why all these employers don't give a chance to the employees just to see what they can do , there's a lot of people that didn't even got a chance to show their work , even thought they can be the best at it .I have a french friend that wanted to be a teacher assistant for a french class here in the United States of America , but all the schools didn't accept her as a teacher because she didn't had much experience in teaching and that is just not fair .She is french and she can teach better because she is from the country where the language is coming from and that's how the students will learn pretty easily , that's why I believe that the employers should change their opinion about the experiences.

Finally , It really doesn't matter if you don't have experiences because if you believe in your self it means that you can get any job you want , just keep the hard work and all these employers that still think that experience is necessary will regret it after because they will see you at the top . For me , experience have nothing to do with jobs everything depends on the work you're going to do and not the work you have done , and I'm pretty sure that the persons with no experience will rock it more than the ones that do have experiences and just keep in your mind the positive energy and you'll make it just like my father did and my french friend did .",3.5,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.5
3DFE1FE3FCE8,"Success is the most important thing in this world. British Prime Minister Winston Churchill said ""success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. I agree with him Because failure played a important role to be a success. Success is when people do hard work to get what they want to get from their lives. Most people want their success in school and to a dream job.

Graduating from school is the big achievement because for some people its hard to pass sol's or exam. They study hard to pass that class so they can graduate from school. Like if someone came from another country and that person does not know how to speak English. That person might fail all of the classes like English, history, and science. That person will try their best but they might not get on the first time and they will keep try until they get what they want. If some student fail there test from that failure that student know how they can fix in the next test or how they can be better then the last test. They can be more prepared.

A lot people find a job which they like to do but some people does not get their dream jobs. And some people never give up. One person who want to be a dancer but his dad does not support him. He never give up to convince his father but still his father does not listen to him. He leave his house to be dancer but after leaving the house he has nothing, he don't even have money to pay for his school, but still he never give up. He started his know dance workshop where he get money so he can pay for his school. Now he is the one of the best dance choreographer in India Remo Dsoza. When people went for job interview some people get the job on the first time. But some people have to work hard until they got the job too. They work on how they can be better next time so they can get the job.

In conclusion, success is the thing which everyone wants but they are not going to get it give they did not work hard. To became a successful people have to learn from their mistakes. Failure is the key of success because if people are not going to fail they can't be better next time. In this world people who are successful in their lives right now they also have failures in their live too. To become Successful people have to learn from their failure.",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.5,2.5,3.0
7C6ED140EF65,"There are many that have responsibility in the world that we have to do and with those responsibility there will be many challenges that we as humans have to overcome to theses things in one way or another. A city council is debating adoption of a 10P.M. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers. Dear city council I find it amazing that you are doing this but I also do disagree mainly because. For example, we teenagers have to some activities after school or we have jobs and if its not because of those things its because were stuck in traffic. I do understand the reasoning of why we shouldnt be driving at these hours of the night It's mainly because we're exhausted at that point we can't focus that much. To say something we teenagers we can stay awake much more longer than you adults why do you think we stay up for so long its not because we're bored no its because we want you to see that we can hold our own wait and we stay up for our jobs and dont sleep until we go home when we get home because in truth we can hold ourselves now.

Dear to the city council I actually do think we should have teenagers off the road before 12AM. For example, thats when people that are under the influence are mainly on the road and depending on where you are there could be deer. There are lots of dangerous things in the night that no one can see or even some dangerous people that might harm us in the night. There are a lot of bad things on the road at night and you as the driver could of course from your long drive an turn tired and maybe crash. In conclusion I see why you dont want us to go driving at 10PM or even past midnight because of there being dangerous things in the night but I do also hope that you know that we dont stay up because of random things but we're actually staying up important things like our jobs or after school activities and that we will be very careful in the night because we know of the dangers of the night.",3.0,3.5,3.0,4.0,3.5,2.5
A4BBB301E3CE,"I agree with what Winston Churchill said because it is true. Going form failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm can help be successful in the end because you tried and tried again and it gave you more confidence to go on and try things you haven't done before. When we fail we learn from our mistakes and try again and be successful because failure is actually helping you in the pursuit of success.

On the pursuit of success we will have some hard times ahead of us, and does hard time are the mistakes we will end up making and form does mistakes comes success. For some people when they try new things the only get it once without any mistakes. But for other people it takes the a few times before they can get it, that is going from failure to failure. Failure helps thousands of people become successful in life.

When you are trying something new, you have to happy about it, and when you fail doing that new thing you should still be happy because it is your first time doing it, and when you fail you always get a second chance to do it again, and when you fail the second time you get another chance, it will keep going until you get it at the end and giving up is not an option. You should always be happy about trying new things. And when you try new thing and you fail and you give up strait away you, are not being successful, you are just ruining your life an becoming a failure because you gave up strait away. Once again giving up is not an option in the book of life. Giving up ruins your life.

In life there will be challenges coming your way and you should take those challenges head on and if you fail try again and be successful, because out of those challenges comes a great price that takes you to the next level. Going to the next level is a big thing in life good things start coming your way and more people start to like you because of the challenges you went through and failing helped you become successful at the end of those challenges.

I agree with what Winston Churchill said because it can help us in life and in the future.",4.0,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
535D427F9FF9,"Yes, I agree with this statement because If you try your best to believe on yourself it will make impossible, like applying for you first job or anything that you wanna be for your career. specially you need it when you are going to college that will help you to save more money and you can get what ever you want. It will change your impression by how you get more skills like how to knowing yourself by finding jobs where you comfortable with. so that way when people wants to know you by personality they will know that first impression it has impossible to change because you have made yourself to make it and think that you can do it like other people do, then you will realize that you made a good experience. Not everyone has a same first impression because they had different personality and idea for their self, some of them is not changing of their impression the reason why is they do not trying them self what they believe that everyone has knowledge even if they can. The people who experiencing their impression that has already change their life, they are the one who having more self confident and they willing to sacrifices to spend time not for just wasting time. Based on this statement impression will change as impossible If they are being like kind a person do not really care about future career because they want to be useless as a person. They are not going to be successful with their achievement specially nothing can be change for their entire life. ",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.5
E64FBE962223,"The technology had negative effects on people's lives because now they can not do nothing without phone or they dont talk in person with nobody that importan to talk in person because you can see with who are talking. If you do everything with your phone you can loose you vision beacuse the telephone has to much light, but you can play the games and not talking with nobody.

for example in this time the parents when their children start crying they just give them the cell phone, why they do that beause they now the kids gonna addicted to wacht videos then that gonna be a problem with the kids when they grow up they don ganna talk with nobody but that not de kids fall beacuse they parents teach then how to use the cell phone but they dont teach them how to talk with people, they need to lear how to talk with older people or teach them how to do other stuff.

this is another example when parents go to the shopping stores and they are in the store they losse their kids they are always in the phone they never can missed call but they can missed their kids that not make sense because when they found the kids they star to saying thing.

my opinion is we need to talk more share our ideas or meet more friend that better to be everyday in the phone talking with people's like my mother always told me dont tlak with bad people but the thing is we never now when they are bad but that why we need to do everything carefull, is better to meet peoples in person.                                                                             ",3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
6186246910E1,"students should graduate in three years instead of four years.

It is better for students to graduate in three years because students will finish the career that they choose early and they will be able tho help their families.

The first reason is that students will finish the career that they choose early. students will have 1 years less to graduate. For example, a student is planning to graduate in 2021 and start his career to finish it in 2026 but now that students will be allow to graduate 1 year early then the student will finish his career in 2025. It means that the students will reach their goals early. Students can reach a better life in less time working hard with positive mind.

The second reason is that students will be able to help their families. One year less make the difference. For example, a student's mother is really sick and the student have a part time job ,but he don't gain enough money to buy his mother medicines and he have to graduate but he is still in his third year of high school so he have one more year but now that he can graduate in three years he can receive his diploma and find a full job time to gain enough money to help his mother. It means that one year less can help you change the life of your family to better. One years less can brings chances for others.

Some people believe that students should not graduate in three years instead of four years. However, others including me believe that students should be allow to graduate in three years because students will finish the career that they choose early and they will be able to help their families.              ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0
7EEB8E9614C2,"In my opinion do we accomplish is if we are doing something because if you are always doing something you can have what you want and you can always keep learning new things.

First, if you are always doing something you can have what you want you. For example, if you want to buy the car of your dreams, you want a big house is gonna cost too much money but if you have a good job and you doing well in what you do, you can have a car if you want or a house however if you do not want to accomplish you never gonna have something. So, you need to always doing something if you want to accomplish.

Second, you can keep learning new things in life, in the school if you still are in there and even in your job. For example in your job if you are new you need to learn how you gonna your own work and if you do to want to learn you never gonna be good in what you doing or in the school, when i start go to the High School i was scared because I doesn't spoke English but I started to doing something and now I speak is not the most better English but is work.

In conclusion, we accomplish more if we are always doing something because if you are always doing something you can have what you want and you can always keep learning new things. ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
85004BC426B1,"Would you like to seek multiple opinion from different people? I think is good for you to seek opinion from people . Seeking multiple opinion can benefit you make new friends,

have good relationship with your friends and make someone trust in you to tell their secret to you. Well that is what i think about Seeking multiple opinion.

Seeking multiple opinion can make someone trust in you. When someone trust in you, he or she can tell you their secret about everything they have in secret. If someone trust in you he or she will know that you are a good friend. For example,

if you do something wrong to your friend who trust in you, She or her is going to forgive you when you say sorry because, he or she trust in you. Being nice and respectful for example, not saying bad word to someone to be depressed, saying please when you are asking someone for something can also make someone trust in you.

Seeking multiple opinion can make you have good relationship with someone.

Having a good relationship with someone is a good thing to do in life.

Having a good relationship with someone can make him or her get close to you . Helping your friend for example, helping him or her with his homework or something he or she needs help with , advising him or her to do the right if he or her did something wrong, being nice and respectful to everyone can also make someone have a good relationship with you.

Seeking multiple opinion allow you to make new friends. Sometime when you are making new friends you dont just have to make friends, you have to think about it .

Make a friend who respect everyone, correct you when you do something wrong and someone who is there for you because, when something happen to and you have a bad friend, he or she will not help you but, If you have a good friend, he or she will help you when you are in a bad situation. Good friends are all way there for you when you have a problem with something or someone.

Well that is what I think about seeking multiple opinion. I hope you know some benefit of seeking multiple opinion . Whould you like to seek multiple opinion from different people ? I also hope you learn smoething from what I think about seeking multiple opinion.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
2B4AB39B1C76,"Yes there should be one way to improve student achievement to start an after school homework club in my school, because there's allot of student that really need help on there homework, teacher should stay with student that need help with that class homework so they can understand more what there learning in there classroom so they don't get confused on that time of a test, they can get a good score because they have study with there homework and they have get allot of help from there teachers. But some student don't like doing homework when that teacher ask them if they should stay with them student don't even stay after school and that teacher gets really mad because some times they takes time that day to stay with a students and they don't even show up.

Teacher take time of there social life to help student for there homework to do good on there report card because some teacher care about homework that student needs to complete it on time or that teacher give them more time and they still don't even do it that's why some teacher don't give no extra time any more, that teacher tell them if they want a A's or F's on there report card because they don't finish there homework, there should be a only homework club after school so other teacher should not stay and do work for that next day, but someone student throw there homework on that trashcan because they don't care about how hard teacher work to give them a good education to stay after school.

Some student understand that homework and finish really early, that student should help other on there homework and do a after school club and help each other on what they do need help on,but went teacher let student help each other they only like playing or talk and not even help with that homework, but if they don't know each other they do finish and help, but some student don't like went someone else is helping them because they don't explains how a teacher will explains to them because some student only give them that answer and that how they don't like other student helping them because some teacher ask how they got that answer and they don't event know how to explain to a teacher that how that teacher know that they copy someone else.

Student achievement will grow allot bigger if they start after school club teacher and student volunteer to help other that are really begin of homework and other works will help them if there was a only homework club because some student don't even do it because they dont understand or they forget to do it but if they do it after school there not going to have to much difficulty on there homework any more, some subjects don't have homework but went they don't do that homework they talk to that teacher that they had allot of homework and they forgot to that homework but they don't even try do work on it. some teacher try to help them to do it but they still don't even try to do it, they rather get a bad grade and not do that homework.

Some student want to finish their homework early went they have time they like to do it during class time because they don't like staying after school in class they ask that teacher for help or other student in that class because they finish there work on time and don't have any thing to do so they start finishing that homework so they don't need stay or finish it at home they can rest and don't worry about homework or they can stay after school and finish with that that student that finish on time and if they don't like working with other student they can stay with a teacher, some teacher like other student helping other because some teacher think that helping each other will understand more and they will ask question to each other to learn what there were doing in class.

Allot of student will improve there grades and there will do there homework early if teacher call there parent to stay after school to do homework allot will finish early and they will not feel that they got do allot of homework at home some student go home and play and they forget that they have homework to do, there mom ask them if they have homework and they answer with a no but went a teacher call them to stay after school that there kids have not do any homework in that class, that they have a F's in that class because they don't finish that homework on time and they don't care about if they need to finish that homework, after school teacher should award student for staying after and finish there work on time so they can feel happy that there grades are going up.

After school club in other school will help allot of student to do got on any test because homework helps allot to study and do good on any class but if you don't try to do your homework your going to have difficulty went it's time to take a test because you haven't even doing not of your homework or not even staying after school club, other school don't like doing homework clubs because they think that everyone understand that homework because know one ask for any help and never brings homework to class teacher thinks that they don't like do it, or they tell that teacher they forgot it home and that teacher believed on them and they get a good grade but don't even do it,some student volunteer to meet with those who either have difficulty and other student don't even stay other student takes time always to help other and other don't even thanks those student.           ",2.5,2.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.0
E812CBED82E3,"Older and younger students are different. Older studentss are smarter then the younger because younger student hasn't been teach alot like the older students on any subjects. Students have different ages then others. Teacher teaches different students becuase of their age. Other student have different grade then young students.

First, yong students are late born then older student. Their parent might atempt their student early or late to school. Young students needs alot of stuff to be teach. Some studednt might be smart or intelligant then other. It depends on their skills of listening and reading. If they do well on listening or reading or others, they will gete smarter.

Second, when the young students gets older, their starting to change and turning into a teenager. Student also start growing like the other older students. When the students gets older, they will have a deploma paper like other studetns will get. Students starts at a different subject then others.

Most likely, olderer students are brilliant then the younger students. They're are available to any program with other students. The older students studys alot then the younger because they get prepare for any test their gonna take. Students also goes to many program when teachers assign them to go, and get important details about that program.

Finally, older and younger students are most likely different comparing to each other. Their both have different reading, writing, and speaking skills. The most important thing about older and younger student is that the older studentes like to help the younger students. What they have in common is that they read and work hard alot each day they go to school. Older and younger students are pair because that's how the law was made.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.5
37D67E614E05,"Dear TEACHER_NAME

I do think students should do community service so we can live in a cleaner world.

And they can help our world.

People should stop littering and pick up there mess that they did so other people don't have to pick up there mess that they did.

I think doing community service student can learn so next time they can think before they litter.

from STUDENT_NAME            ",2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
1BE17E2DA549,"The qualties that make person individual or unique is, to not make any difference between society.

Be sure that you're working in the right path all by your self, and be greatfull, powerfull, be honest, not making any bad disesion not making any problem for society, and last but not least, have a strong felling of wanting to have something or wishing for something to happen.

If you have strong belife in god or in the doctrines of a rilegon, you'll be successfull in your life because it's him that give you all those idea and knowledge, that you can write an essay something like this.

So you just have to be faithfull, and trust him, that's the only way that he can help you and then be an accomplishment.

Something that has been successfully, it's beacuse of you pushed your self you put all effrot and work on you, and that's all beacuse of one goal and that is a great accomplishment.

We have to follow those poeple who were successed in their life of time, we have to see what they did to their society, what honor they had/have for us to read and follow the path they followed.

I think that's another way to be successed.

I'm compeletly agree with this statement that says ''To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.''

Because if you have those kind of seccessfull people in your society then you will have better society, better world and better education for the future.",2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0
8E10A6D2B272,"Imagine this, you are at the park; although, there are a plethora of activities you can do, you are just too lazy to do any of them. Until one of your friends call you over to play over to play basketball, you decide to go and play basketball and it is on of the most fun you have had in a long time. An enjoyable activity you can do outside is play basketball because it is addictive, it can make you physically fit, and it can make you mentally fit.

First of all, you can get addicted to basketball because it's so enjoyable that once you play it, you don't want to quit. You can get so addicted to it that instead of playing once or twice a week you start playing it seven times a week, you can start playing it way more than you did a month ago. This addiction can make you enjoy basketball way more than you used to.

Next, some people enjoy basketball because if how fit you can become just from playing basketball. People find that so enjoyable becasue you can get fit and have fun from playing basketball. People even play basketball just to exercise and stretch. This leads you to working out while you run across the basketball court and shoot the ball into the hoop.

Finally, it can make you mentally fit because of how focused you are on basketball. Basically what I am saying is instead of being sad and depressed at home, you could be outside focusing on only basketball and having fun. This leads you to get rid of sadness and depression, which is why some people find this activity so enjoying.

Basketball is an activity is very enjoyable because of how addictive it is. How physically fit you can become just from playing basketball. How mentally fit you can become. There also a plethora of other reasons why people find this sport/ activity so enjoying.                       ",4.0,4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0
019BDC9DF7CD,"Although some say students will not be benefit of attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because a lot of students don't have access to internet or they have no computers at home, actually some people say students will be benefit to attend classes from home because it will save students time and it will develop students confidence on technology.

Some say students will not be benefit of attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because a lot of students don't have access to internet or they have no computers at home.

It has been prove by the National Family association that 45% of all the students don't have access to computers or other electronic devices.

Cost of computers is higher for the lower class families.

Some people say students will be benefit to attend classes from home because it will save students time.

statement by the president of the National Education.

Time students save by going to the school will be use to learn more from home.

Some people say students will be benefit to attend classes from home because it will develop students increase confidence on technology.

Technology is the future that help students become brighter and creative.

Helps develop the learning process.

Although some say students will not be benefit of attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because a lot of students don't have access to internet or they have no computers at home, actually some people say students will be benefit to attend classes from home because it will save students time and it will develop students confidence on technology.

Finally, we should encourage students to attend classes from home because it will save students time and also it will develop students increase confidence on technology and other learning areas.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
9E21506EADC7,"I agree that to being yourself in the a world is the greatest accomplishment. for example after working hard you will a chive your goal ,success in your life and you will be the greatest person. you will be the role model for your kids, because you follow your dream and you did everything by yourself. and you will expire a lot of people. of what you did in your life. But there is some people who will be against you because they get jealous of your success they do not want you to get more success. They will always try to put you down, they will fine dagger ways to show you and take your success from you and they will teach you bad things. But you got stack on your plan never give up there will be a lot of things to break you down but you got follow your dream make good life for yourself and for your parents make them poured. make all world poured so some people can also follow their dream so they can also get Success in their life so they can be something in their life. some people do not want to grow and they do not want you to grow, so you got stack on your plan, and see what your heart want n follow it.",2.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
C1959178FC53,"According to Thomas Jefferson: ""Determine never to be idle...it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing."" What he wanna said is that if we are always working and never have free time we will accomplish so much more. We could see that why he is saying this because he is a hard working man and look at what he have done to the world, there is nothing wrong for working hard. But if we are always working and don't spent time for ourselves or time with family then you could accomplish more but you will suffer a lot more for that successful.

For example, when we work hard and don't spent time for our self or we don't have any private time to relax and stop thinking about work, we will get stress and stress led to a lot of thing like can't sleep at night,depressed,or maybe can't eat well. So we definitely have to manage time well between work and time for yourself to maintain doing good work and have a good and healthy life. Like another scientist that work hard like Thomas Edison, his name is Albert Einstein, he work really hard but don't manage time well so he have barely sleep a day. Some even said he only sleep 3 hours a day, and the consequence is he died at the age of 60 because of sickness and he even have autism when he stay awake for too long and talking to his own self. That is why we have to have free time because we don't want to get stress and get tired of our work so it can led to quit job or we getting fired.

Another important thing is that we need to spent time well with our family too because family is where we have the most support from and also the reason why we work for so hard if we don't have time for our family then they will leave us and then, by that time we gonna work and live so hard because we are lonely. And we might suicide or getting depressed and lead us to drugs. Family is what matter in our life and that is why we have to spent good time for them so they can be with us and support us when we need to so we can work harder for. I have an uncle in Generic_City, he is a successful business man, he work for a well-known medical company and and owner of a market but to pay for what he own is his time for his family. He start work at 5 a. m and go home at 11p. m and he never have time for his family. That is why during this summer his wife leave him, his daughter don't wanna see him anymore because he was never there for her, and his son just never call or visit him. Now he is 40 and he is a very success person but after all of that he is still and lonely old man. This is why we need to spent time for our family because after we work so hard in our lives but we dont have family after that we are just lonely peoples that have no one to make our life happy til the rest of it.

i think Thomas Edison quote have nothing wrong with it, and it is true that human can do so more if they are not have idle time. But if we don't have those idle time we will soon face with stress, disease, depressed, loneliness and also suicide, so why we work so hard and don't have free time so we die in miserable ways when we can work hard and play hard too and enjoy our life in a really good way.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
0AFEC3CC53B5,"yes is good idea, because they know what they want in the future.

And they can choose good career for they life. And they can preparation they can go to wall University. When they will be adult they have experience when they get job and they get own money they will be ready but you can help you family and if you have girlfriend you can help to became they help you to when you was little boy your parents away they told you what do you need to do at you life they was good example, for you no said no because you no that

In some societies ,students can brace for the future when they want a family they are ready for change and they can get Bette life. and you can start the future they can choose some work because if you study you can get more opportunity and you can will be good person en your life a person ready for start some wort nobody said nothing because you are ready for the job and you can will be a boss in you work but, you need to study and focus in you career because you need good grade in your school you need to have good presentation and you can get good job and you can help your family and friend .

Many people can not comply they goals. because they not ready and they can not find good job because they not ready before when they had the opportunity they not appreciate the opportunity and is to late for start agent. but you can start with your life in other something like work in contrition , drive truck ,or cashier bank and whatever work do you like.

For example you can study, hard because when you will be adult your are ready for your responsibility' and you can get good job maybe in a office, the point is you can have better life and you can get, all you want in your future but,your parents can help you in this situation because they can sea go your, school study hard because when you ready you can choose your life but you can not say my parents not help me about my future.

my recommendation is you prepare and study,hard for your goals because you can get good life and you are ready for start your goals. but if you study you will be the best person in the planet you can will be good example: for you sons' and they will be very happy about they father. When they will be adult they have good example and they try to did good job for they life bacuese they have good reflection before the they was born. yourself will be the best in the planet you need to think in yourself because you need to no what will be your life and you prepare and study work hard away remember you are good person and nobody can destroy yourself                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ",2.5,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0
B2919590BDB0,"I do agree with Prime Minister Winston Churchill. My first reason is because most of the people in this world will think that is really easy to be successful, but time will get difficult as you and your self are growing up, for you to be failing over and over again is just a meaning that life at some point will be easier, Most people if they keep failing they won't know what to do, Keeping your hope and thoughts on your mind that's how you will succeed. keep on following that dream no matter how hard time will. Sometime you will feel like you're not getiing answer or at least a signal.

My second reason is that failure is going to come at some point in your life for example; teenager come at school, adult come at work, money wise, housing. failure is something that we all should learn how to over come that problem we should think for a solution make a plan in our life. how are we goinf to fix this part and find a solution to over come that problem if we need help from somebody.

My third reason is that as soon as you over come failure you start learning thing about themselve, that they didn't know before, most people find ways to stop going back failing, that's when you start gaining the believe on keep going on practicing every single method to do not fail again.

In my conclusion most of the people have those hard time and is bext to talk to someone about a look for answer, in way to find the solution and fix this problem by yourself or with someone important in your life.",2.5,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.0,2.5
AD19BF721C0F,"Dear Principal of Generic_School:

The change of the menu at the cafeteria might be a good idea but also might be a bad idea for some students, the idea to have a new menu at the cafeteria should be made it first in a debate with all the students at the auditorium, students can have the right to vote if they would like to have a new menu at the cafeteria, they might give a vote for which kind of food can be remove and which kind of food should to stay, or they can decide if will be better to not make a change at the cafeteria, making this plan will not have any impact in students or school to choose they food or making a change because they will have the opportunity to decide what is good and what is not good for them.

Making this plan, students will feel comfortable to decide good things for their school, students can also share ideas with you and make different plans for a good change at the cafeteria, just think about it and you will see good results in students of your school.

If students decide to have a different menu of food...

""This might be a great idea for student to try different kind of food and make this change every year, the good thing about making this is that student will not feel tired for be eating the same kind of food every year.""

""Students will feel excited every day to go to the cafeteria and see the new menu of food at the cafeteria.""

""Some students might have a favorite food but they can try different varieties of food and have new favorite food.""

""Also will be a great idea to give 35 minutes of lunch instead of 25 minutes, students can share time with them friends, have more time to finish if they have any work class or homework to do.""

""Students can enjoy the free time to eat with no rush. Making a change will be an idea that all might students they'll support it."",

I hope you consider this idea as a good idea and students may consider it this as a good idea too, also think about the good change that you can make for students to have better time at school and enjoying they lunch will be great to fill they energy and get back to class.

Sincerely:

Students at Generic_School",2.5,2.5,3.5,2.5,3.0,3.0
03844422EA75,"my name is Generic_Name and my story is about cars

I bay a car and it new i live that car so mush so i stirt taking caer to it and befor I usto have a buskel and i usto love that baskel so mauh but i gat older so i stop riding a biskel and i stirt looking for a beges thengs whan i was a kid i usto so my dad driveng a car and i usto haveng fun in it

;and my drimm was to bay a car win i gro up and i stil looking for that drimm seccer is the only sport i like i use to play seccer win i weas 11 years old and i stil play that geame and i love it so mush but my lieg get hert so i stop playing it any moer and then i stirt fling better so i want to go bake to play my favert game seccer so i try ot for school and i stirt making frinds and play with them my favert game evry day i even like a gril becoes that game so l like that gril and i stirt playing wiht her and taking wihe her and i wanted her number so i stirt beang cloes to her so it bean a year so i finly say it i told her that i love her and she say yes and she my grilfrind new so this year im in 11 grad and i play sceer for Generic_School and it coold but we have to phet so we can get bater so it ban 3years whan the last time i see my dad and mom becase thay stiy back ther in my cantery ariq and i relly weant them to be besid me in USA

and about my life i have 2brthers and 1 sister.",1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.5,1.0
D001F6D3A0D0,"Everybody would like to be succesful in the life, and that's possible, but is not easy you have to try one time and one more time until you have what you want; it doesn't matter how many times you try for it. In my opinion there are a lot of people that if they fail one time they give up and shouldn't be like that because you will be happy if you complete your goal, you will be a good example to help others to be successful, you can earn more than you expected.

Complete your goal can be really important for you, and will make you happy, for example, my Mom wanted to have a beauty salon, but she knew that it wouldn't be easy; she started with a small room and a few customers, sometimes she didn't have custumers, and that made her think to close the beaty salon, but she never gave up, now she has a big room with a lot of customers; she is happy because she is doing what she likes, and the most important part she never give up. That' is why we have to try many times until we are happy for what we have or what we are doing.

Some people would like to have an example to make their goals, and you can be a good example if you don,t give up at firts time that you fail, for example, I have a cousin, Generic_Name, she was a bad student; she didn't care about her grades, tests, homeworks, and nothing about the schools. when I moved to live with her, she saw my grades and all that things that I do. She stared to ask me how I can have good grades in the tests and be successful, and I said to her,"" you need to have more enthusiasm for the school"" ,and now she has a really good grades and she is going to graduate this year. If we don't stop even if we fail, we can hel others to be successful.

Some people might say that you lost the time trying something many times, however, you can earn more than you expect if you try as much as you can, for example, I saw a video on facebook; there was a man that was loking for a job to support his family; he went to many places, but nobody gave him a job. One time he was walking on the street, and he saw a man trying to fix his car, and without thinking he went to help the other man after that the man was thankful for the help, and he offered a job for the man. The man who was without job; he didn't know that he will get a job on that situation, what would happend if the man would be sleeping in his house; he would never get that job. That is why we never have to lose the enthusiasm to be successful; we never know what is prepared for us.

It is clear that you will feel good if you complete your goals, and you will be a good example of persistence to help others to be successful, you will earn more than you expect if don't give up at the first time that you fail, and maybe is not easy, but you have your whole life to make it happen, and nobody will tell you when to stop; it doesn't matter how many times you try or you fail. The most important part is that you will be successful if you are constant and and what you are doing. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,3.5,3.5,2.5
A87C80DEAB08,"People use to say that working make better life. In now days people who are self-reliance define as they need people to follow their instincts or ideas and their is also people who are usually follow their own ideas. Both of them are working ways that are preferred to people, But I think that people should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters, Because it will make their life easier and help people who are having troubles in their life. There are a lot of thing that we cloud talk about people asking help from expert,But I got two of the story that I want to talk about and made peoples life easier.

The first example is a true story that happened to me when I was young. It was a summer in 2010, I was in a summer camp for basketball at Generic_City, It was the first practices day and I was so happy, Because I could finally start to have real training for basketball. At that time I was in a private school that have no sports, So the only way that I cloud play sport is going to camp in summer time. Well that day at middle of the practice I hurt my ankle because of my teammate so I had to stay in hospital. In hospital I thought that I will not able to play sport anymore so I was really upset about it, When I was thinking about that, My father told me that life is easy and hard some time and life will never follow the step that people go, so they have to be stronger to be able to control their own life so they will not follow the step that other people went, After my father told me that I start to realize that life ain't easy so I have to be way more stronger than before so I could be better me in future and it happened now, So that is the reason that I think with others help peoples life will be way easier than before.

The second example is a story that my mother told me when I was a child. It is a story about a young man trying to make a hammer. It was a winter in long time ago, there was a young man that live in a really old house, At one day he was trying to make a hammer so that will help him to make a new house. So he traveled a lot of place to find a perfect iron for that hammer, In the way to find perfect iron he found so many iron that's not perfect in his eyes. But in one day he found a old man that are making a hammer, when young man came close to old man he found out that is the perfect iron that his finding all day long so he asked old man how did he found the iron, After old man heard what he said he laughed and said"" young man in this world nothing is perfect if you trying to make a hammer like me you have to make everything equally, And nothing is perfect on lest you treat them perfect."" After old man told everything to young man he realized that the iron that he think is not perfect is perfect if he treated is nicely and in the end he made a normal hammer that could really help him in the future. After my mother told me this story I realized that with older help you will know a lot of things that you never knew before, And this is the second reason that I think that with experts help your life will be better and you will learn a lot of life's matter than before.

Some people often think that they will decide everything by their self, And there are some people are seek guidance from experts and authorities. But I think that people should ask form expert and authorities help, Because it will make people's life easier and help people who are having trouble in there life. There are a lot of expert that helped me a lot, And I think that it will help all the people who is having trouble in their life.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
12E3D52345C6,"Technology has always acted as a compelling and mysterious field for me. Even as a child, I spent countless hours not playing my video-game consoles as intended, but rather meticulously studying every component of the device in an attempt to crack the mystery on how it operated. Despite the fact that I've grown older and many aspects of my life have changed, my passion for technology has not only remained, but undoubtedly grown stronger as well. Therefore, an internship in this field seems vital in feeding and nurturing this passion. Although I have not had previous experience in shadowing, an opportunity to shadow would be fitting due to my previous experience and ever-growing passion in this field.

My experience in the technological field proves fitting for this opportunity to shadow. In school, I am enrolled in the Center for Information Technology at Generic_School. This specialty center provides me with crucial access to exclusive technology-based courses and teachers that help me broaden my vision in the technology field. Classes such as IT Project Management, Programming, and AP Computer Science Principles are all courses that I have been graciously provided with through the center and received exceptional results in. This daily involvement in technology not only increased my knowledge in this field, but also my curiosity on the subject. Outside of school, I am a member of the Technology Student Association, a club dedicated to assisting students nurture their interests through rigorous competitions. Through this club I have been able to surround myself with peers with similar interests and aspirations. This club has also provided me with opportunities to exhibit my knowledge in the technological field through competitions, receiving first place in States in Mass Production, Junior Solar Sprint, and Biotechnology. My involvement and superior results in these events prove to show not only my interest in this field, but my capabilities as well. These experiences transfer directly over to the internship, allowing for a smooth transition without much confusion.

The passion I have for technology undeniably proves me to be fitting for this internship opportunity. A crucial action that proves my strong interest in technology occurred when high school specialty center results were published. I was accepted into the medical, IB, and the information technology centers. Despite the fact that the majority of my close friends chose to enroll into the medical center, I stuck with my passion and enrolled into the Information Technology center. The action of choosing my interest over my close friends of many years displays how much I value technology and wish to pursue it in the future. In addition, my strong passion for technology can be displayed through the utilization of my free time. While other kids may choose to spend this time by indulging themselves into video games, much of my time is spent educating myself on technology. Many enjoyable hours of activities such as reading on the history of computers or watching videos on the future of technology were spent during this time. This use of my limited free time shows that technology, in my mind, is not a merely a class in school, but rather a hobby or an enjoyable subject. This attitude would no doubt have a beneficial effect for the internship.

In conclusion, the heavy interest and years of experience I have in technology proves me to be exceptional candidate for this shadowing opportunity. Although my work experience is limited, my passion and expierence in technology may help me ease into the internship without trouble. The talent I have in technology mixed with the catalyst that is my preexisting passion for this field helps me understand the importance of this internship. Not only will this internship assist in broadening my horizons on technology, but it will also help nurture and grow this passion into something meaningful and of use to the real world. Therefore, I believe this internship is perfect for me.                ",5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.5,5.0
E2456BDC6648,"Conserving energy and resources by attending less days to school. Adopting a four-day school week and only adding two more hours; each day consisting of nine hours. It will help to reduce the consuming of energy and resources. As we go out everyday to complete our duties in the school's building, we consume energy from the sky lights and others useful lights, the computers, and laptops. Also the food students receive in school as a lunch. Plus students frequently purchase gas to come to school; due that some students need to come in their own cars or public buses, because they don't live around the school area. Additionally students that are currently having a part-time job will be able to work more. In the case of student who are not working in a part-time job would get one more day added to the weekend, and they would be able to spend more time doing family activities or having a good time with friends, and close people.

To start with, reducing the consume of energy will help with our planet; energy is produced with some elements and one of them and a very important one is: water. The less energy we use or waist the less will be the affect for our planet. Adopting the four-days school week will make all of us stay at home on Fridays and reduce the energy use from the school when using lights, computers and laptop that need to be charged.

Secondly, If students come to school only for four days, the food that they usually obtain on Fridays will be saved and use for the next Monday; that way saving food will start to be a good benefit for conserving resources. Also some students come to this school but they living in a different city not closely to school; they purchases gas every week and they have to spend money, Therefore if they only come for four days a week; they will saved gas for the weekends or for the next week of school. That's one of the best ways to conserve cars' energy and resources; due to that gas use petroleum to be produced and other substances and chemicals that come from our planet soil grounds or others areas.

Lastly, Students will obtain benefit by adopting this for-days school week as well, because the students that are currently working in a part-time job will obtain the opportunity to work a full day on Fridays, they will be able to increase their revenue. In the case for students that don't have a job, they will have extra time to do homework, projects, and family activities as well.

Even thought, they are students with a different point of view, when it comes to adopting a four-day school week. they argue that adding two more hours to the regular school day, will be more exhausted and they will have less hours to work in their part-time jobs.

In conclusion, Adopting a four-day school week will help to conserve energy and resources. Firstly: conserving energy light and food and saving gas and money, having extra time for work, friends and most important: Family.",3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
785DBAB78957,"One educational activity I like to do is doing a science project is the most fun thing to do with your friends. This type of projects give you a lot of knowledge, and this projects give you an idea on how nature works is easy to do and is fun. Also getting help form your friends is better everyone gets to give ideas and help with the fun project. A science project is also fun because you get to work with chemicals and see the reaction of each chemical. This is one of the most enjoyable educational things to do.

Doing a science project gives knowledge specially if is about nature. If the project is about nature the things you'r gonna learn are fun and easy for example what causes wind,solar system,and how does the moon help us this projects are gonna make you learn about how earth works. Learning is boring but the science projects make learning more fun and it gives ideas for future projects. Also working as a team with you'r friends is helpful because you get to hear different parts,and it would help you learn more about the project you are doing.

Working as a team to see the different points of view of everyone is fun,and it helps for the project. This is fun because you get to help friends out, and do experiments with chemicals. Presenting the the project would make you nervous if your by your self if you did it in a group its gonna be fun and also more easy. Working on a project with friends is always gonna be fun specially on a science one because you have to repeat the project three times to make sure it gives the same result every time and its super educational to do.

The chemicals you use during a project could be dangers but at the same time they could be fun to use. This is an educational fun project because you get to see how the reaction of different chemicals. The most fun part of a project is that you get to repeat things more then once in order to get the correct results is the most fun thing during a project testing out stuff. This is one of the most enjoyable educational stuff you can do and its fun.

This is an enjoyable thing to do you have so much fun doing a project,and Helping out friends by giving them ideas for the project working as a team to make it perfect and learning. For me this is the most fun thing to do when i have a project, and theres so many more activities but a science project is enjoyable to do and is also the most fun thing to do.                                                ",2.5,2.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.0
995452515AB0,"I believe it has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Because you keep a best future form you life if you have positive attitude you have better opportunities and a better success and your life .The positive attitude the help a you have many opportunities an different thing what you make for example an your life personal ,

works, family but form principal and my himself .

If you have the positive attitude you have the better success level personal or professional . Form when you have a positive attitude with other personas you success in life is better. Because i thinks maybe the other person i have an day bat ,when you have the expression and you face is a smile you help the other person a smile, and think what pass your problem. Your positive attitude a help an other personas a proceed with your life and best your life. The positive attitude a help every day,

i have an good day because when my i have a positive attitude with other person my feeling is very good why thinks what with can see the person with a smile the help a no thinks a the problem for an moment . And feel what help a other persona an situation bat an this moment an attitude good for my help a your life.

I think what you have the positive attitude you have better success an your works. Because form example an your works and you have a positive attitude with your team or members of works .I then you have better opportunities with promotion a better status what you make o practice a positive attitude the you help a have an best relationship with your team .And your works is better that environment is best .

If you have the positive attitude for help the other people an your word the environment never being evil, what the best environment and a think what your words be best environment what you have and to help a you have lot success an your life .

When you have the positive attitude with you family that relationship is better .And you feeling is good .And then help a what your life form being a better person .What that relationship an the family is the best, for your have an best future what they are your best team for your life .because for example and my life my family help my everyday because when my father is died me help you have an good relationship with my family for survive of depreciation ,and more thing . And have an good with relationship with my family me help as the positive attitude help a survive any problem in this moment.

But conclusion i think what you have the positive attitude your success in life. Is the best why the attitude is the key of success , when your positive attitude never your be alone en your life .Because the have positive attitude with other person help a your life a level be professional, personal wherever the attitude is the best key for your life .Remember when your action is good your reward is the success where you go .Surcharge though in this moment is the worse , never your change you attitude with other person , because the other person no have that blame form your problem or action in this moment . And you personality is bat with the other person the other person with you maybe are equal you

.And the remember if you have forever your have positive attitude with other peoples form you have the best success in your life .",2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0
830E5FA9FC72,"The Negative Effects Of The Technology On People's Lives.

Technology helps people to preform many things hence, classes online, shop and communicate with others. I believed that technology has negative effects on people's lives because people have a limitation of a human contact due to the use of technology. Also technology had changed our style of lives; People used to visit parks to talk with other. Families do not spend time together. Students are distracted with their cell phone at schools. Children do not read books or have fun like in the past. Now everything had changed due to this issue.

One reason that technology has negative effects on people's lives is that now some stores closed because people do not shop in this stores anymore. Some people prefer to buy their materials or clothes online stores as Amazon. Amazon has a strong impact of sales in the world, Their sales are more high than any other stores. For example I recently heard about two store named STORE_NAME and STORE_NAME. They have this issue due to the use of technology. STORE_NAME is about to close because people prefer to stay at home and buy online. This stores are on sale of everything to close right away because

Fewer people visit this stores. Their sales had exceed on online store than in the located stores. Additionally people who work in this stores are going to have a layoff due to this matter.

Another reason that technology has negative effects on people's lives is that some places are empty namely: Parks, lakes, and malls. People decide to stay at home playing video games, and buying online.

Some people think that technology is a better way to express themselves. However, there are to many ways such as painting, drawing, playing even dancing.

Example I am a member of a dance class, my teacher was talking about this problem with technology. She was saying that sometimes our lives depend on a cell device, but not all the time. My point of view is that what she told me was true because I came to United Stated of America since 2016; I was not be able to understand or speak to others. When I did not understand some difficult words I used Google translated, so technology helped us sometime. However, I had seen some students who used their cellphone during classes. When the teacher ask them questions related to the topic, they do not know what to answer due to the technology.

In the other hand Some people will argue about technology has positive effects on our style of lives. Technology helps us to communicate with our families and friends. However technology limited us to express our ideas with no need of a cell phone device . Also it had destroyed our culture. It limited the growth of children because, they do not want to go outside to play with their friends. Children want to stay at home playing with their laptops. In fact this generation do not read books or magazine because of the technology. Example, My cousin is in the middle school he played Fourtnite everyday. He goes to sleep late, had bad grades and he wake up late for school. He does not read any book and neither go outside to play. He always is with his cell phone playing. I believe that the life is so short to waste.

In the final analyses technology will keep going to destroy our cultures. People will not go outside at all, to buy, to have fun, or to spend time with their families. My point of view is technology have a really negative effect on us because it had changed us, our world. everything in this world is going to be different. Technology limited the develop of ideas.Technology limited our communication, our knowledge, our curiosity, and our happiness.        ",3.0,3.5,4.0,3.5,3.0,3.5
A35B4B7CBD24,"There are some of the school districts offer programs that allow high schools students to graduate in three years. There are also some good students who always have good grades in all the classes. To graduate one year earlier, students must take extra online classes or elective courses. Otherwise, they will not get enough credit to graduate in three years instead doing it in traditional four years. It is a good idea to graduate one year earlier and enter college or the work force one year earlier because if students finish high school one year earlier, they can admit into a good colleges and fixed their career little faster for lifetime, they can help their family with economic problems, they can also make their own purchases.

Initially, this idea to finish high school one year earlier is the best idea for them who want to fixed their lifetime career earlier. Some of the student who come from the other countries just by themselves also graduate in three years, may be because their entire family lives in back home.

Suppose, they do not live good life in their back home. That's when students want to give them a better life by bringing them here. To bring them here, the students have to be able to have enough money and to feed them enough after bringing. And students can do all these works earlier if they finish high school in three years instead being in a high school for traditional four years.

Secondly, this idea is good for the students who's entire family already lives here, and there are some economic problem in the family. Student have permission to graduate high school earlier and enter work force earlier to help their family with economic problems. They graduate in three years and get a better full time job and help their family with economic problems. So, that way their family will not get stuck anywhere for the economic problems.

Finally, this idea to graduate one year earlier is good for them who want to finish high school earlier, to go to college and also to have a part time job on the other hand. So, they can make their own purchases, like phone, paying phone bill, going out to eat with friends, going on a trip with friends, etc.

Students can also have a full time job who do not want to go to college.

There is nothing wrong with graduating from high school in three years by working hard.

Some students do it to make their dream become true faster, some students do it for their family problems, some students do it for their own problems. However or whenever students graduate but parents want them all to graduate and make their future bright. After all, graduating from school is most important thing in every students life. ",4.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0
D45A0B7F9D48,"A topic that is frequently debated is whether students should be required to take a class in the arts,or should it be elective? Because of both students and parents opinions I believe students should not take a class in the arts,besides it should be an elective.

There are several reasons to consider when debating this topic,for example:the class in arts will require a block that could be used for a class the student is interested in taking,or it could be used for a class the student requires to take in order to achieve graduation. As a student interested in having an advanced diploma,I believe art classes will not help anybody to achieve their goal of obtaining the advanced diploma,also if students are capable of choosing their own classes they will gain experience in that field,and be more successful.

Students should be able to make their choice when deciding if they are really interested in the class,if someone else choose the class in arts for them and they didn't like it;they could ruin the experience of other students who are really passionate about arts. Students who are not interested in art could be a problem for the class and even their grades could be affected if they don't participate,or turn in assignments. Moreover,it could lower their GPA and their dream about graduating could be affected.

In addition,art classes will not give them much credit as other classes,will not help grow their GPA,and it might not be as helpful as other classes. As mentioned before:not passing the class will lower their GPA,even passing it will not give them too much credit,and of course school want students to be successful during their journey through high school. The choices they made during school and the classes they took during school will impact when they graduate.

As you have read,giving students the opportunity to choose either they want art classes or to take classes by their own choice could have a big impact in their graduation status. Schools should offer our students classes they are willing to attend,a class they feel will help them succeed in life,and in a way they enjoy their journey through high school. It might see insignificant to debate for something too simple like this,but letting our students take their own choices could help them take better choices for our society. Moreover,if our students are able to graduate and accomplish their goals our society will have more people that could help to assure a better future for our legacy.        ",4.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5
8AD96DB8DD9F,"Do you agree or disagree with ""imagination is more important than knowledge""? I agree with this statement because it helps you when your reading books, studying, and learning. I learn more when I imagine things at school or other places.

To begin with, I like reading books because it helps me when I'm mad or just in general. Comedy books are one of my favorite to read because it cheers me up more than anything beside music. I like imagining things when I read because it makes the story more interesting like people talking in my head. Imagining helps me learn more because I am a slow learner I don't learn fast like other kids do so I like to sit down and imagine all the things the teacher was talking about so I can catch up with the class.

Also, Imagination helps me a lot when it comes to studying because I am not good at remembering things. Studying is not my thing yet because there are big words I don't understand especially when it comes to English and math. English is more of smart people stuff I get so lost in English because we do a lot of work at once and the confuses me. English taught me new things I never knew before like having a introduction in every paragraph.

In addition, Learning is hard when you have a lot of kids in the class playing and not letting the other kids learn. Some people take learning as a joke but I take it seriously because I want my dreams to come true I always wake up in the morning happy to go to school to learn something new. Learning is important it helps people get to where they want to be either it's a dream, a location or read and write things. It is all imagination it helps a lot of people each and everyday by studying, learning or reading books because I enjoy it a lot it helps me fill up my emptiness.

In conclusion, I agree imagination is more important than knowledge because it a it of people just like it helps me. Learning is important because it helps you reach your goals in life, and studying is not my thing but imagination helps me with studying because I can imagine the things we talked about. Reading books is more important to me because it cheers me up when I am mad so I don't pop off and say things I regret saying ",4.5,3.5,4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5
2AC1514AB3B0,"why school/eduction is very important

Eduction is important because without a eduction you can't get a job. A job can get you money. money can get you a lot of things like clothes, house and food. And with school you can learn how to talk. You need to know how to talk well because you are going to be talking a lot. You are going to have to talk to your boss, family and others. And the most of all you need to know how to live. You need to know how to pay your bills. And know how to work and work right. You will need to know how to manage your time. With all that you with need to know something, do your work now so you can have your fun latter. When I say that you realy need to know what it means. Because when your in class and you do your work and fallow u know whats going on. And you turn your work in fast you will have free time. Just like in life, if I go to school and did good and get out I would find a good job and I would make good money then have my fun.

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38203808F81B,"Should students be expected to commit to a career at a young age? Some societies say yes, by the time they get to high school they will be given courses to guide them toward the career they have chosen. With the students given the classes needed by the guidance teacher, It will get them a well paying job right after graduating because they will already have the classes needed for that job. If they plan on going to collage to become a scientist they will offer you classes for free and you won't have to pay for those classes in collage. By having students identify a career by the time they enter high school seems to me like a great idea. once they know what there career is going to be they can take the classes required for that job.

Once the student has identified the career that he or she desires, the guidance teacher will step in and set up the classes that you'll need to take for the career that you've chosen. when I first entered high school the guidance teacher pulled everyone out of class to ask us what our career was going to be. I remember telling her that I wanted to become a carpenter, she said""great choice we actually have another school that you can go for the second half of school"". I told her that seems great, she also put me some math classes because in carpentry you use math to measure. That was how the guidance teacher helped me achieve the career that I wanted by helping me get the classes that I needed to become a carpenter.

By committing to a career at a young age actually helps the students succeed in life. How does it help the student succeed? It helps the students get a good job by the time they are out of high school, by giving him the classes required for the career he wants. For example some of the students that didn't commit to a career when they where in high school are now working in a low paying job. Some are even in a lot of debt paying for the classes needed for the career they want while they could of got some classes for free in high school. One of my cousins went to high school and every year the guidance teacher would ask him what he wanted his career to be. He would always say I don't know yet, time went by and when he finally found what he wanted his career to be it was to late. My cousin is now in big debt with the bank trying to pay for his classes that he needs for his engineering job.

If one of the students decides he wants to become a scientist when he grows up. The guidance teacher will give him the classes needed like Biology and science classes. Once he gets into collage he will already have some of the classes required to become a scientist. He will only have to pay for the classes that are not provided in school. My uncles daughter is studying to become a teacher, when my cousin was in ninth grade she told the guidance teacher that she wanted to become a teacher. She was given some of the classes that are required to become a teacher but they told her that she would have to go to collage but they would give her all the classes that they could offer so she wouldn't have to pay as much when she went to collage to become a teacher.

Other people argue that a students should not commit to a career at a young age because they don't know about all the careers that are out in the world. They could chose one and latter change there minds into anther career. The is a good chance that all the students who chose the career they wanted ends up being the job that they have in the future. With having the students to commit to a career at a young age is good because they will be given the classes they need in order to be successful in the career that they've chosen.        ",4.0,3.5,3.5,3.5,4.0,4.0
FD418CE29DFC,"Nowadays students of many schools have the opportunity to discover the type of employment according to their interests. The business that most interest me is architecture, the business that you manage. Architecture is one of the works that I admired. The fact to create a house, a building, sky crappers is the result of a hard work and dedication. Practice all the rules and directions, of architecture, it will be a great experience. To have the knowledge of the deeper meaning inside the architecture, and the way to success through my creations. You should select me to visit and learn about architecture.

To begin with, I like design and create new things. For example, one time I created a house for my little dogs. The house was not to big, but it was really comfortable for my two little dogs. When I decided to create my dogs' house, I made it with things that I had in my home. I decorate the house, and the result was so pleasant. Another example is that I like draw. I like to experiment with colors and textures. I like innovate art and change the point of view of the people when they see my art. That's why you can select me to visit and learn about architecture.

Additionally, I'm confident with my works and my decisions. My confidence help me to achieve more experiences and opportunities. Confidence is the key to success in whatever people do. If people aren't confident; consequently, they can't do a correct work. How can apply confidence in this opportunity? Been confident that my ideas and solutions are helpful. Architecture is a work that need security in what people do, so I can said that I'm a good option to do this opportunity. Therefore, you should select me to be part of this experience.

Most importantly, I am dedicated. For example, I dedicate in my classwork, in my homework, and my activities. We can see that the quality of successful people is dedication. People can see Thomas Edison, Albert Einstein, DaVinci, and more successful people that are the pure example of dedication. A person who is dedicated can achieve goals and fulfill it without any problems. Another reason that you should select me, to participate in this opportunity, is that I am dedicated.

Some people argue that you shouldn't select me to visit and learn about architecture. They say that I'm not capable for this job, architecture. This maybe true;however, I'm confident with my works and my decisions. Therefore, if I am confident with the activities that I propose to myself, it will be pointless to say that I am not capable to be selected in the opportunity to know architecture.

In conclusion, many people apply to have partnerships with companies that allow students to visit and learn about any work, in this case architecture.

I'm confident in my work, I'm dedicated, and I create and design things. This are reasons for you to allow me to be part in this opportunity, visit and learn about architecture. Architecture is the type of work that I want to working on. Even though this is only the beginning; I can tell that this opportunity will help me to discover even more that I don't know about architecture. ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,3.0,4.0
E69D5E1FEAB4,"should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter? one of the common questions i get ask. Many people have different thoughts about this questions,

my opinion is depending the sittuation. For example people can learn from there dicision but in other hand listening to people's advice can stop you from doing wrong. Ever since i was little i always wanted to make my own decision and wont have to listen to no one but i the more i got older i realized that sometimes what people say to do can turn out to be better then the decision you took. Making your own decision can make you more independent and know how life works and those are the people we look up too. Depending on the situation your in listening to others give us life lesson can be one of the most unforgetables momments because that show you they care and want the best for you because maybe they didnt end up making the right decision and want you to prevent from doing it . ",2.0,3.0,2.5,3.0,2.5,2.0
FC69DC957116,"My father, and I have a dialogue one saturday night, at the dining table he ask me what i want to become when i grow up, and

I reply i don't know he watch me and laugh you need; to discover your career now so you will get prepare for the future I said ok.

The issue is discovering your passion or career earlier can help you to discover and prepare for you goals in the future early.

I agree it is a good idea for student to commit their career because know or understand what you want to do in the first place can help you to discover what and what you good at or bad at and what you need to pay more atention on like for example you wanted to become an engineer you need to pay more atention on maths and science and now all your focus will be on that.

FIRSTLY

Know and understand what you want to be in life can bring you much more closer to your goal like understanding the question is part of the answer so understanding or discover your career can be a helpful thing towards your future for example: I want to be a teacher but i didnot know that i can't speak a good english and i don't now how to explain so that my student can understand me but i never knew about this until now and it too late for me to go back and discover a new career because am half away to graduate from high school.

SECONDLY

You can't do what they like but you can do what you like your passion can't be stop even by yourself not talking about other your love and determination can make you do it but that will only happen if you discover your career early and prepare for it for example: My passion for become an auto engineering increase every single day i just can't wait to be one because since when i was in middle school have discover my career my dream and i know i have passion for it have prepared and determine myself for it

THIRDLY

After high school it will be too late for you to think about your career and what you want to become in future and beside in high school they prepare you and guide you towards your specific career and you not yet discover your career it will be a tough one for you out there example you don't like anything or you don't know what to do after high school and graduate without knowing what you gonna do out there your life will be at risk it just like you in a sea with a speed boat but you don't know how to ride it with a opportunity but you don't know how to used it

My Conclusion is know what you want to do because life is about time and when you discover your career earlier you will have more time to prepare and determine yourself if you really ready for it before is too late your career should discover earlier it can be helpful for student in future.              ",3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,3.0
37A8D06A04AC,"What do you think about benefits of working with a group or working alone? Every country, every school, every teachers have teaching for students how to working together to playing games on assignment. And games can make for students likely work together to create atmosphere funny, if they working with a atmosphere new, they could be give some ideas faster and learning better. Why we need to teaching them the way like that? If we did not teaching the students working with a group, what happen will be?

Almost the students really like working alone than working with a group. Because they think they can give some idea bad, and they don't want somebody complain when they do something wrong. If parents or teachers don't teaching them working with a group and believe by them self, they will never successful on the way they are. When Bill Gate was young, him learning about software and computer, when him did not have more idea. Bill Gate told friends about working with him, Bill Gate said: We could be create something new about software and computer. After two years, they could be create the new computer and software. Five years later, Bill Gate become rich people in the world. If Bill Gate did not told friends working with him, than we never know about software and computer like him created that. Bill Gate said: If the war appears, you did not working together, your country will be lost.

Why we necessary to working with a group? Because working with a group might be make your love each other and understand when you work. When a group understand each other, they would be do some project better and always will be on time. Like a company they never have one people working in there, because one people could not be do some project better a group. Every people working in company, they never working with alone, because they don't know where you fail when you writing essay. That's why we need a group can fix your fail and make you do better in your job. When you working with a group, you can learning some ideas your friends talking and the way they working. Danial Williams Hale said: Everything you learn, everything you practice, it's would be help you some case.

If you like working with a group, you can learning skill about your friends, you will be easy to successful on the goals. Like playing games, they need a team working together, if one people in a team like working alone, they can make your team loser. If you like working with a group, you will be have more friends and second language if your friends from another country. If in the world, we don't working together, maybe the world war three will be occur and the peaceful never got in the world. And we will never know culture of another country.

In general, working a group can make students learning about how to work together and give an ideas best. And can be understand more about the life with people in group, can share problem and working better. If you teaching for your son or daughter working together, when they grow up, they can brainstorm better and faster. However, If they knew how to working with a group, they can create one company and system. They will leader a company grow up and never go down.",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.0,2.5
C40BB9E0BC6C,"Should success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.

l agree with what Churchill's about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. Failure is to do or perform. l agree because some people think that if you are failure it mean you can not be success, you will be success no matter what. Some people preform good in ever where they go and do what will make they there success so this is important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success without loss of enthusiasm.

First reasons, ln the world people will say that failure don't make they life by success so if they did something and they fail that all, they will never try it again because they did not get good thing from the fist one. Be strong in everything you are doing failure will not be without loss of enthusiasm. For example My brother wife have an exam to write in the morning so she was learning all the night she did not asleep so l went to her room and tell her to sleep some time before morning and she said no l have to learn so that l can pass me exam and l said OK then am going to sleep. ln the morning she get up and she went to write the exam. The next day they call her and told her that she fail her exam so all what she was thinking was that she will pass the exam but she will failure so she was thinking that she will be success in this exam but she did not loss of enthusiasm.

Also, Most of the people give up if they fail in thing they are doing they believe in them self that what they are doing will be successful for they but the end thing will miss up for them and the loss of enthusiasm the good ideas of bring success tell your that l can do this and do it all. For example, l was write am SOL exam last year and l don't know what to write and l don't understand what the question is say so l was thinking about the question but l don't know what to write so l tell my self that no matter what the question is l will do it and pass it. When the score came because l believe in my self l pass the exam. So you can be success in every thing you do if you made up your Maine in what you are doing. Make your self a good discuss and you will be fine.

However, Some people start their own business but they first tell them self my business will be successful and yes they will be because they believe first before they start the business. Yes the work will be good without loss of enthusiasm. For example, My friend dad has a big shop in Generic_City one night when her dad was asleep some bad people came to the shop to take all his money and the thing in the shop so in the morning people was cry infant of the shop so we all went there l see what is going there so when we went there it was so sad they bad people took everything in the shop not even a pen but do know something he did not give up because he did not give up he fail but he was successful in what he was doing. The reasons why am telling all this is that never tell your self that l will be failure on matter what you will be success.

Other might say that it is bad ideas to be success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. However you can loss enthusiasm any time but if you never give up in what you are doing people do things that they don't believe in what they. One of my teacher in my school called Generic_Name gave as a test and the test was as difficult for as to do so he told him self how can the student do this work so try not to give the test to as the student in the classroom told him that we will can do the test so the teacher the told as that do you believer that you can do it and we said yes we can so he gave as the test to do. infant all the student that told that test pass successfully and the teacher was so happy. So you will be success without loss of enthusiasm.

ln contusion, We have many things in the world that will make you a failure or success, make a discuss to yourself that you will success in life no matter how how things will go. My friends always told me that never give up in life, school and any thing you do. Maybe you have an exam today and when you went home yesterday you did not learn and you was watch TV and you want to pass the exam no matter what you will be failure in the exam. ls important to be success in life if you can be success you have to do what will make you success. l believe in my self that being a success is a good idea.",2.5,2.5,2.5,2.0,2.0,2.5
26788FA4ED04,"All schools from United State have a longer summer vacations and that make the students happy but there are some educators feel that summer break is too long and that students don't retain information as easily when they return to school. Summer vacations should don't be change because students want to go to others countries, spend time with their friends and family, and they don't want to be worry about school.

When the students are in summer vacations they planning to go and visit others countries. They want to go to visit their family that live in other country or they only want to go and meet new places. If the educators change the summer vacations to only 3-4 weeks the students will not have much time to visit the places that they want to go. Nevertheless, not all the students want to go to others contries and stay a long time, there some prefer stay in home but they spend the summer time doing what they like to do.

The students like to spend time doing things that they like to do in summer vacations; for example, they want to spend sometime with their family and friends and make memories together. Also they want to work to make money, play video games, play some sports, or go to a summer camp. Meanwhile, others students don't want to go outside because it's so hot or they don't like be under the sun but they also don't want to go to school.

Students like summer vacations because they can make a lots of things that they can't do when they are in school. For example, if they want to go to a party or to a friend's house and can back to their houses until the morning or if they want to look TV all the day they can do it. In addition, they are happy to have a long summer vacation because they are not worry about homewoork or projects, they don't have to get up early to go to school, or study for a test. A long summer break can affect the memory of the students and they can forget somethings that they learn in school; however, some students like to review their notes and it's not so long the summer break. Furthmore, the students don't forget everything that they had learn and take a break of something so difficult and important like school is good.

In conclusion, a long summer break is something good that help the students to relax and come back the next school year with a big smile and ready to learn new things. The students like more a long than a short summer break because they can do more things that they like. The students like summer more than winter because in winter is cold and there not many things to do. Instead, in summer is hot and there are so much things to do. Therefore, the summer vacations should stay the same and don't be change.",3.5,4.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
37DD80EFE4D4,"Would you like your child go to the college or work force early ? Why not ?

Some schools offers ways to a student to be prepared and go into their goals .

However, most of the students think that they are ready to reach their goals early instead of going 4 years high school because it makes more complex for a student who wants to finish high school and be prepared for the future. I consider saying , there are ways for them to get ready because students get jobs , start college early and get experience or success that can makes them a professional as quickly as they can .

For instance, start college early,

the student could learn more about their careers and get some ideas for what they look for .

Other reason is the students get jobs easily, makes them work for the future for not being the guy who works in restaurants and other stuffs with a low income .

Lastly , Be success in your life, that's why parents are so prouds of their childrens and taking care for a good path

Finally , I conclude saying that going 3 years high school is going be easiest to a student because the could learn more , get more experience and be successfull in their daily life , as much as they can , student provide more percentage of intelligence that can be more well known at a short period ",3.0,3.0,3.0,2.5,2.5,3.5
C495D1E686C0,"From my point of view, this is a good idea because most students have a different situation in their life. Sometimes, they woud like to become an independent person, so nobody can coerce to do something even their parent. In my eyes, it is not important that the students finish high school in three year or four year. After graduating from high school, they are a good person, aren't they?. I think this is a most important problem. To me, the students should be a good citizen because the society needs them to develop. A good behavior is more necessary than graduation, and they have to practise or use the lesson that were learned in high school, so they will get a lot of experience.

The life is an adventure, discovery, and study. Day by day, everything is changing rapidly. Due to this problem, the student not only study in textbook, or document but also learn from substantial. When we face up with difficult problem, it gives us more valuable experience in the life, i think this experience is too hard to find in book, or school. If you graduate in high school early it will give you more time to learn new things from your life, so you will grow up and have a lot of opportunities to success in life. For instance, Generic_Name who i admired, was a founder the Coffee Shop Company in my country. He was still graduate high school early and then i worked for his company. At that time, he was learning how to grow a special coffee, which is the only one not only in vietnam but also over the world. At the present,

his company is the best coffee company in Vietnam. He said to me that difficulty, experience are the keys to success. Actually, the life is a challenge: it isn't easy to you. If you would like subdue it you have to prepare everything as soon as you graduate high school. Therefore, the student finish high school early; it is very neccessary to prepare for new challenges in the life.

As we can see, the economy is delicated and various, so you have more time to find an occupation which is suitable for you. I believe that 50% senior were confusing about their future because most of their time is in school, class, which forgot going ouside to expand your knowledge and doing some part-time jobs to get new lessons. In my opinion, most of people fall down in their life because of lacking of experience.

In short, i support this idea because it make us mature, independent. Besides, we have more chance to success and to do new things. It's also a good way to demonstrate your ability",4.0,4.5,4.5,4.0,3.0,4.0
53D17839AAC0,"Technology allows people to complete many tasks with the limitation of human contact and can provide the use of less work and less communication. it could also be asked that whats the point of working here if theirs technology here ?. Most workers may ask that and will be furious with technology because of the fact that they will have less work and probably less hours of work, since technology is taking over their jobs. it could also be said that technology could be taking over some jobs that require less work, which could be bad for the job environment because that means less job opportunities for people.

First, it could be rude to the staff that work their because of less human communication. How is it rude? Well think of it like this: someone is better than you at your job and you wanna be better, but you cant because the person you're going up against is a computer and knows mostly anything and everything on what to do in those situations. Most people may have to face the fact that you can't do anything about technology.

Second, The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology will have negative effects on peoples lives because of the fact that technology will help most people in some cases, but most people wouldn't appreciate the help from technology because it could be taking over their jobs and have less human contact with others. But the fact is people should appreciate technology because of what they're providing. Most people may not see it that way or feel like its helping them.

In conclusion, I believe with the reasons I have provided that technology will have a negative effect because of the way they're taking over most jobs and seeking happiness to people that enjoy it. People wouldn't like to admit the fact that technology is actually helping them and providing less work for them. Technology is actually seeking to steal most peoples jobs by doing their work for other people. I truly believe that the negative effect on technology is doing jobs for others that have the ability to do it . ",4.5,4.0,4.0,4.5,4.0,4.0
F97469E0877C,"Many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make you stronger. Positive attitude make you see things different. And also people with positive attitude live a better life. Positive attitude is something that we all should have because is something necessary to achieve your goals. It also help you improve as a person.

Positive attitude make feel stronger. When you fail, but you have a positive attitude you try on till you achieve your goals. Sometimes students are failing their classes, but they have positive attitude to work harder they end up passing their classes. Also with positive attitude people are mentally stronger because even when they fail they know how to overcome in that situation.

Positive attitude make you see things different. Many people say that having a positive attitude is a good way to solve your problems. People are able to recognize their mistakes, so they don't make the some mistakes in the future. I had a bad grade in one of my classes because that class was very hard, but i always have a positive attitude and i start paying more attention in class, i start working harder, and my grade went up and now i have a good grade.

People with positive attitude live a better life. People are not stressed even if they are passing a bad moment in their work. Having a positive attitude make you healthier because you are not always mad and that is very important for your health. In my house we all have positive attitude and that is the key to be happy and success in life.

And finally in the conclusion many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make you stronger. Positive attitude make you see things different. And also people with positive attitude live a better live. these are some of the reasons why people agree that positive attitude is the key to success. In the other side we have the people that disagree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life because sometimes is not necessary to have a positive attitude to success. And also having a positive attitude does not guarantee you that you will be successful. But many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success because if you don't do positive things you will not receive positive things. ",2.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.5
480C577BC8C9,"There is some schools that let the students use their cell phones to do classwork or any other educational purposes, and that follows some advantages and disadvantages. Some of the advantages are, you will be able to finish your work in class and not having work left to do for homework. This was very helpful for me, because I had the chance to do my classwork or my homework using my cell phone or the other devices to finish as much as I can of work before I get home. Some of the disadvantages will be, after the students finish using their cell phones to do the classwork, they will keep using it for things other than the classwork, like checking social media, or texting,

or watching youtube, that what I saw in my classroom, I saw students were watching youtube videos or texting, or some other things that they shouldn't be doing it and wasting their time on it. People sometimes don't realize or think about how are they wasting their time by using the cell phone. Teachers should be stricts about having and using a cell phone in classroom. Students get in trouble because of the cell phone, they don't think before they use the phone, they do what they want without thinkng about the risk that they might get into. Use your cell phone, but you got to use it wisley, so you won't get in trouble and wasting time.       ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.5
AB2FD69DBACF,"""Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purpose think about the effects of allowing students, to have and use cell phones in the classroom. Students think that cell phone use will make easy to study and to get high grades, every teacher, students and parent are debating if they should let students use the phone during class.

Cell phones can be used for good reasons like study look for information, thats right that make school easier but at the same time is a distraction for students, because cell phones not only can be use to study, they can be use to communique play video games and thats a distraction for every student. That makes everything go back works instead of going forward.

also cell phones make easier for teacher to grade, now you can scan papers with phones and you can make grades for every student, but still is a distraction, am saying this because I am a student and the same happens to me, i know what it is and i think we should not use cell phones during class not even to do homework or anything relacionated with school.

To not have those types of problems we should let have every student have a computer, computer are more useful to search for problems, articles, to write etc. This will make more easier school than having phones during class, school should work more on this and all this is for a better if for good of our country to have better jobs better doctors, nurses etc.

I disagree on this article because cell phones are a distraction for students, i think thats why computers were made to use, to work, study, applications, papers, images and more, school should make this up and let students use a computer in class better than phone use, like i said do it for a better life, for more knowledge, to be safe and prepared for any circumstances that can show up to life.",3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.5
584C6453CA5A,"A small kindness can change a person because if the person sees you helping someone he will know that helping is the right thing to do instead of doing nothing to help a person and that guy is ganna help than others will start helping, and before you know the whole country might help but if you don't choose to help and instead you want to bully or be mean or hurt people, nobody is ganna help you or say to the person to stop instead they will start doing it, in life you have to choose a side if you want to be good or bad, stop bullying or help the bully, stop a person from hurting a nother person or help them hurt that person you have to choose, if you choose ""good"" people will follow you and start doing it and respect you but if you choose the ""bad"" people will follow you but they wont respect you the way you want them to and before you know the whole city or town will hate you from what you started.",2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0,2.5
AFBC394080FC,"Are you agree or disagree with the statement of Emerson about individuality?

I'm agree with the statement of Ralph Waldo Emerson, one example is because when you be yourself some people feel comfortable, but some doesn't but there is nothing more important than be yourself you don't know the things you can get done when you challenge you. And yes the world is going to take you down, is going to face you with things that will make you do wrong things, or change your mind like trying to be another person. But you has to face it don't give the rights to people to take you down. People when they see all the things you get done, they start to hating you. But you don't has to listen to then you dont' has to change your mind just because they are talking. Some people want to decide for you, i mean like for example; when you want to study a career but your friends, parents, etc they told you to study something you don't like, you dont has to listen to them you can make your own choice if you are a grow man you are going to do what you like, thats why you has to always be yourself,

doesn't matter the circumstance. You see me my father just left, he let me alone with my mom she work hard that i could be here, and i see that thats why i'm always try to be my self i try to work hard ever single day because the effort she did for me !bruh! is amazing. On my country the gangs shot you for no reason and i grow with my grandma and the gangs they live around us but all that i never change, i could ed be one of them but i grow with a really good education and didn't wasted.

I didn't pretend to be a person that was not me and as the author Ralph Waldo Emerson said ""is accomplishment to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else""

Always be yourself don't change your mind, because life is hard nobody said life is going to be easy you has to work hard for your own things, to be someone in this life and don't listen to the world because the world don't want to see you grow or happy. Don't listen to it. Just trust on god and yourself, and you will see the the amazing things you can get done by your own. In conclusion, don't listen to anybody that is against your decision because that kind of person just want to hurt you.",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.5
2940713292A0,"I absolutely agree that technology had impact our society in so many positive ways that effects on people live's, and there's people who doesn't have so much time to go out and get what they need so they use technology to help themselves. you can buy a car or buy groceries without speaking to another person and you can do all that by only using your cellphone or computer, that's why i think technology has brought us a new tool.

Have you ever heard people saying ""i want to go to the movies but i have go to the store."" I bet there is people out there. they like to go out, but they have so much to do that they can't and is not a problem because we have technology that can help us with stuff that we need without going to the store or deal with people humors. also, you can save time to use it in another activities like you can go and have fun with the family or friends. however there's people that they're against technology, and everyone has they opinion about it. Unfortunately we still have technology that we can use it.

There's people who like to use technology because it's a new way to see the world. they can get so much done using technology like they can create new things like: new cars, new smart-phones, new styles of clothing, and so much more like it's unique way to see what can technology do for us without taking us so much time. But they are people who still think that doing stuff in the old way is the same, i mean everyone has the own description of things. personally i think without technology will take us so much to make new stuff so unfortenely technology we get done some amazing things.

In today's society technology has been doing so much like helping students by doing their homework's, and i think Technology is great, it just depends how do you use it and what do you want to do with it. yes some people would say that technology has done so much damage in kids brains but however kids are leaning faster and they're using their imagination to do whatever they want.        ",3.0,2.5,3.0,2.0,2.5,3.0
FE8B7167BD93,"Working in a group is better

People in this days are deciding rater to work in a group or work alone. There is a lot of good and bad things between these two options. Most people may choose to work in groups for differents reasons. Here are some of the reason why I think that working in group in better than working alone. Some people like to work in groups because they like to finish faster, also it is a good choice because the information taht you need to look for is divide with all the group members, finally it is good because you meet new people in the group to work with.

The first reason why working in a group is better than working alone is because you can finish faster. For example if you work by your-self on a big project you are going to take more time to finish it. Probably you can finish it on time but you are going to spend a lot of time then you. Then if you work in a group everybody in the group can hellp to get it done more fast. With the help of all the members the work is going to be done on time and you are going to have more time for yourself. With more time for yourself you can play video games, watch your favorite show or take a good time to study for another class or a test.

Another reason why working in a group is a benefit rater than work alone is because you divide the information about the topic with all the members of the group. For example if you are in high school and you get a big project then there is two choices to do it by yourself or work in group. I think most people in your class will prefer to work in groups because there will be a lot of information to look for. In a group all the members are going help in the project to get a good grade. Everybody are going to be proud of what they did together. Also they can be the best project on the class.

The last reason why working in groups is better than working alone is because everybody in the group meet new people. For example in your class you do not talk to all your classmates and this is a good opportunity to talk to them. Maybe in the past you were thinking that they were bad people but doing the project together that let you know that they are awesome. Meeting new people is good because sometimes others may feel alone and letting yourself meet them and letting them meet you, both are going to feel a different way. Sometimes what we just need is a good friend to talk and to do homework with. Some people are going to be disagree with this idea because they may not like to meet new people or because they like to be by their selves.

In conclusion working in groups is a good choice because it has good benefits. You can get more time for yourself by finishing faster with the help of your group members. You have lest information to look for because there are other members that are looking for other information. Finally you can meet new people and became a friend of them. There are some other benefits that help to work in a group and understand more about a topic with the halp of all the members.",4.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,2.5,4.0
FA08CD5A2E48,"Sometimes when you are not doing anything or just do not do something physical, some good or great things could happen surrounding you and the world.

My first idea that makes inactivity a ""self work"" in progress. Meaing letting people around help you instead of you doing everything yourself. A movie called ""Christopher Robin"" shows that as a child, Christopher did things before but he had imaginary animals helping him.

The purpose of the movie, is to give the auidience the understanding of what it means to be always doing something, always occupy yourself with the simplest things that you do not really have to do. And adding pressure on yourself. Than letting others help you, can create good things surrounding you and you can have good thoughts. Because when you are stressed you are worried about how things will be in the future. Having people help you can still have great success that can be accomplished.

The example or message in this movie shows when Christopher is an adult and he pre-occupys himself a lot, the more problems is caused with his life. He almost lost his wife and daughter because he was always occupied doing his business job. Later when he realizes he was on the wrong track, his friend, pooh was telling him he is not the same as himself before. He told himself the only way he'll be less stressed and worried is to become the child inside him and bloom once more. Letting your inside child out, he needs to find himself doing absolutely nothing, no stress, and just spend time with the life he has been given and his family. After doing that, he was more gifted than before, like this idea he had for how to make his business better but had never presented because he was always doing something

Like the thesis was talking about not doing something physical could lead to some good or great things, Christopher found himself at the end. He is happy and relaxed with what he accomplished when he let go and did nothing. Now he realizes the result of doing nothing and how different it would have been if he kept on occupying himself in things he should not be worried about rather than enjoying what he has to thank for. So the key is that if Christopher Robin can accomplish great or good things by doing nothing rather than doing something, then that means everybody else can learn as well the understanding to find success and move ahead.",3.0,3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0
28639BE05BB7,"Music, drama, art class are considered as an elective class. Since such class will never be use in a daily basis in life. It's not required for you in order to graduate so to speak there is many more choices rather than music, drama, and art class to replace with it. It shouldn't be a required class for the student to take since everyone has a different mindset of what they want to be.

Something we use in our life that we learn from school is basic math to do our taxes and bills, but when will you ever use music, drama, or art in life, It's more like a hobby rather than a need in order to maintain a stable life. People don't care if you know how to write a song, act melodramatic, and how to draw Mona Lisa, applying for a job with such thing in your portfolio won't get you employed in most places. If you major in such things, only those of who are talented and skilled will only be able to have a successful life in such class. Electives are there for a reason, to have a starting point of what you want to be in the future, if it was turned to a required class, the world would have a second renaissance.

You don't need it in order to graduate. College wouldn't look into those as much as the prerequisite to your diploma or the major subject. Knowing how to paint or sculpt clay wouldn't be at the SAT that college look into if your'e eligible of going to their school or if they want you. As people grow up and go to college, their goals will change eventually. For example, you grow up and you want to be a doctor and half way through your college year you want to be a Scientist instead. You've covered some similar classes or lessons already since they are both major in science, but such classes like music, drama, or art class doesn't have any similarity when you changed your goal. They are a specific to themselves, they don't have a wide broad of category that shares with other subjects at all.

Learning and able to make music, be dramatic, and draw art might be a useful thing. Write songs for famous artist, act on plays and movies and even be recognize for your work in arts and make a lot of money from it. Only if you are successful, whether you are born with a talent or obsessed in such things and have one goal from the start. Only those of few will able to make a living out of it. It's not reliable career to as much as to be a requirement in school to be.

Only to be fixated in such subjects gives you less option of what you want to be,

it's not as needed in reality so that is why classes such as music, drama, and art be an elective. Students should not be required to take those classes since they will not have as much choice in what they want to be in their life.    ",3.5,3.5,3.5,3.5,2.5,2.5
269101ABF266,"Do you think students taking an elective class is a good idea? Will I think it's a great for kids to art as an elective class because some kids love to draw, others can learn how to draw and even use it in real life situation. So this are the reasons why I think taking art as an elective is a good idea.

Some students will love taking art as an elective because they love to draw. Students will love taking art during school. For example, my friend never had time to work on her art projects after school; therefore, she had a talk with her counselor so she can get put in a art class. Once she got into the art class she had more time to work on her art projects in school. She was also doing something she good at while getting a grade for it.

Students can learn how to draw if they had a art class. Some students want to learn how to draw, but never had a chance to. Therefore, if the school give students a art class they can really learn a lot. Art is not only about drawing; however, some students don't know that. One day, my mom took a art class because she want to learn how to draw. But the art class didn't just teacher her how to draw. She got to learn about the history of art wish is pretty amazing.

Some people think taking art as an elective is not a good idea because students not going to need art once they are done with school. I disagree because some students might wan to be come a artist later on in life. I know a lot of artist who making a lot of money just by drawing. Students who might want to take art can be come famous one day. So taking art class as an elective is a great idea for students.

These are the reason why I think students should have art as an elective class some students love to drawn, some students want to learn, others can even using in life. Art is a great thing so why not enjoy it. ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5,3.0,3.5
222D14189E1F,"Imagine that the school plans to add more time at school. I disagree of the schools adding more time because it would be irritating,boring,stressed. and kids do not want that to happen. The children wants to have a normal school day. And they have to prove that they can do it,they believe in their self.

First,It is boring because they want to have fun. And the reason why it is a lot of fun because they want to have a good time. And thet can think about what they want,What do they want to do when the schools are thjnking about staying more longer at school. For example, Generic_Name went outside to play after school.

Secondly,it is stressing because they would be crazy about it. And the reason why it is stressing because the blood of the brian would get bad. It would be horrible that they have blood pressure,haert attacks,and they want to kill there self. They can't do that,but they can protect there self. For example,Generic_Name was taking a test but she got nervous,Frustrated,lonly and upset.

Thirdly,it is irritating because kids will get tired and dizzy at school. the reason why it's because their body do not have enough energy. For example,My best friend

Generic_Name studied for a test,but she got tired. In my opinion it is not ok that a lot of people get injured. And it is going to be difficult but it is worth a try,I want a lot of people to be happy,not injured,not feeling down and feel better about whats going on,or what is doing.

In closing,I disagree that the school plans to add more time at school. And it is a bad idea,It would get irritating,boring and stressed. In my opinion it is better for kids so they can not worried about it. And it would be easier step by step and keep going,Dont stop doing it.

I really think that it would be better if the school would not have bullies,bad teachers back in the day because a lot of teachers back in the they hit children because sometimes kids do not behave and teachers think that the kids deserved it and i think that The kids do not always get the right answer but In my opinion all teachers are different because some teachers are nice,hardworking,sweet,mean,not inappropiate aswell. And The teachers that i had or have from kindergarden to first grade,second grade,third grade,fourth grade,fifith grade,sixth grade,Seventh grade and 8th grade they're nice,helpful,caring too and thay dont hit us. They protect us,And i want for other kids have the same exciperence that i have. And i want other kids or other people or everybody to be happy and protected too. ",3.0,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.0,2.5
6A00BED6B62D,"Do you think it is a good idea for students to start their career such a young age and stress about it? I will tell you guys why it is not a good idea. Reason number one students can feel a lot of pressure on them. Reason number two students still do not know what them want to be yet.

Students can get a lot of pressure because students have not found out what they want to do in life. Students can get over welled so easily. Students think about it to much what they want to be when they grow up. Especially freshman they just stated school they do not need any stress when it comes to think about their career. Freshman do not what they want to be yet. They are just new kids that have just stared high school and they do not need to think about it yet. Students already have enough stress and, they do not need anymore of that. Students already have stress from school, sports, home problems, and the list can go on.

Students still do not know what them want to be yet. It is hard to find something want you like to do in life as your career such as a young age. Students may thing they have found the one that they really want to do in life but, they change their mind and, they what want to go for the other career. Therefor, students need more time to think about what they want to do in life. It takes time to think about what students what to be to grow up. There is a lot of things to do for your career so students just have not found the right one yet. They need time to make sure what they really want to do in life and they feel it is the right one.

Some might says it is a good idea for students to commit a career such a young because it will benefit them in life. Here it is were I am go to prove them wrong. Students get stress so easily and they do not need any more of that. Students do not need to feel pressured and it is okay to say that they do not know what that want to be when they grow up. It is not okay to rush students as they enter high school. Students can make their own mind when the thing it is the right time and, also they think they really think what they want to be when they grow up just give them time. To my congestion it is not a good idea for students to commit to a career as they enter high school because they need time to think about it well.",3.0,3.5,3.0,2.5,3.0,3.0
63AB55DADABF,"Do you think we should extend our school day? No, I think we shouldn't extend the time because we already get enough learning and our classes are long. I also don't think we should extend the time because we will be getting out of school later. If we we extend the time then we could be very exhausted during the school day. This could also be very difficult for the bus drivers because they will be getting home extremely late and it will be dark when they are driving the kids home back from school.

We get enough time in school already so there is no need to add more time the the school day. We learn enough in every class, and we learn everthing that we need to learn in that hour and a half. We learn what we have to learn and if we add time the the teachers won't really know what to do. I think we understand that they are saying and we understand the concept they are teaching us. The school day would be way longer for elementrary kids. I don't think its fair for elementray because they stay in their classes the entire day . It would be very broring because they are going to be sitting there for eight and a half hour. It would be very broing for them, because they don't get to switch classes like middle and highschool. They should also have some fun during the school day they shouldn't just sit there and high school and middle school at least get to move around while they are switching classes. They really can't do anything after school is done.

If we extend the time in school we will be at school later. Kids will be tired the next day because they wont get home until the evening. They wont pay attention to class because they didn't get enough sleep and they will not be paying close attention to what the teacher is saying because the class it too long. We will also be getting home late. Elementray kids will be getting home around 5:00pm. They won't be able to do many activities after school because they are getting home late. When they get home they will have to eat, shower, and go to sleep because they have school the next day and they deserve some fun. High school kids wake up around 5:00am and they will be at school for eight hours and then they wiil go home and do their homework. They will be tired because they don't get enough sleep and they have to wake up very early. They also can't do activities because of the homework they have and how early they have to wake up and the time they get out of school. They will get home late and they can't do much because they will have to focus on homework and school.

Extending the time could be harder for bus drivers. Bus drivers need enough sleep so that they can drive the students safely to school. Sleep is the most important and you should get at least eight hours of sleep, and that can't be possible for bus drivers because they will get home late. They all need to rest good so that they can be wide awake. If they don't get enough sleep this could lead to crashes. Crashes could happen if it's too dark and the bus drivers can't see outside. Elementray students would be getting out out around 5:00pm and around that time it will start to get dark and it isn't good for bus drivers, because they cant see if they are somewhere very dark. They also won't get to see their family as much anymore and spend time with them. They need to spend time with their family it is important to spend time with them. If they get home around eight then they will get to spend very little time with them. They have to go to sleep early because they need to wake up on time. Crashes aren't good because the parents can sue the county and that will be the countys fault because it was dark outside and maybe the bus driver couldn't really see outside.

I dissagree with adding one and a half hour to the school day. I think seven hours is enough time for a school day and to learn all the materials that we nned to know. What do you think should we add one and a half hour to our school day?         ",4.0,4.0,4.0,3.5,4.5,3.5
F5BC1532013D,"Some schools offer distance learning as and option for students to attend classes from home by way of online video conferencing ,Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? There are too many ways to appreciate the opportunity to take online classes ,at my point of view this is a good tool to people who's not able to attend to a regular school or for people who needs more credits to graduated .Some people attend to take online classes because they don't have enough time to attend to a regular school because they have to work in the morning to support a family, take classes online is the best way to get a career ,and get a better job. This tools would benefits people ,I have my own example that take classes online is really helpful to graduate because ,I am taking classes online because i need credits to graduate and it is a good opportunity that some schools offer to students in the same way as me .one of the advantage at being taking classes at home is that you can work and study at the same time ,and you can have your own schedule and the best thing is at home you dont have to travel to other place

. When you are taking online classes you are allow to work whenever you want

,and also you can eating at the same time because you dont have nobody to pressure you to do the assignment because you have the enough time

.

However there also some disadvantage of take online classes because sometimes the students don't use this opportunity from the best way .One disadvantage is that some students when they are taking online classes they can uses the phone and those devices distract them so much,Sometimes they don't have nobody to help them if have any question or needs help with something . One more disadvantage is that when the students are taking classes online they attend to loss interest and prefers do other things instead of do their assignments

,because they don't even care about their grades because they don't have a teacher to pressure them to do their assignments ,but everything depends how much interest the student put in pass the online classes to improve the grades and gained more knowledge .Sometimes when the students take online classes and regular school they attend to violated the rules of the school because they are accustomed to be in the habit of work at home they dont want to follow the directions of the teacher, and they also what to do whatever they want and that is not fear for the teacher who has to tolerate it.

There are some advantages and disadvantage of attend classes from home by online classes ,but everything depends the way that you uses this tools to gained more knowledge and be prepared for life .",3.0,2.5,2.5,2.5,2.5,3.0
B8AD03895BE6,"I disagree with school the board of adding one an half hour each day to school. Students would have more class work like math or home work. Students would have more drama each day at school. Also, students have other thing to do for example they might have to go see their family. Having a extra half an hour would not be good for the school because students would not be focus in class.

First, students would have more class work. They, would have more projects, more class work students would have a hard time focusing when doing their class work. Students would have a hard time with home work or studying. For instances many of the students would have to study after they did class work they would not want to study in the mean time they would want to take a break. Students would not like to have in extra half an hour.

Second, students would have more drama every day at school because of the extra half an hour. Students would go around the school an start drama every where then, students would have a hard time focusing in class. Then, their grades would start going down. Although having an extra half an hour would have many problems students would most likely have more drama then ever before.

Lastly, having an extra half an hour students would not like having it because students would be messing thing, such as football games, soccer games maybe even a cook out at the park with their family. Having an extra hour would not be so good because students then, would be messing the thing they do not want to mess. Having an extra half an hour would then be a problem because it would be more work, drama and other thing. Many students would most likely not like having extra school time because they have other thing to do. Also having the extra half an hour would change every thing students then, would not have time to do the thing they like to do like going to their friend house or play outside, because of the extra half an hour.

In conclusion having the school board plan to add one an half hour to the school each day would mean that students would not want to come to school. Because, of the extra half an hour students would have to wake up in the morning and thing about the school extra half an hour and students would have more class work, study more for a subject. Then, students would start drama at school then, students would not be focus in class. Also having more time in school students would then mess other thing beside school.                 ",3.5,3.0,3.5,3.0,3.5,3.5
88966ED00A28,"This program will help both with the older and younger student because, the older student have more experience then younger student.

The older students knows a lot of things more than younger students because the older student knows how to read, knows how to do math, and knows science and social study. But, sometimes older student might forget about things that they were taught in elementary school.

Also, there's some new ways that the elementary student are taught in a different ways because it would make it easier for the younger student to understand it more, or the younger student is taught something new and they can help the older student understand what this new idea is, and the older student teach new things for them to know and be papered.

When the older student teach the younger students, they want to papered them because when they start a new unit and the younger student heard of what the unit is about, they know and understands them and will get good grades,and the older students wants the younger student to be papered for next year or this year, also the older student wants the younger students to improve their grades and their test grades.

When the school have a program that pairs older student and the younger student, it helps them because they have new ideas and they know a lot of new different subject that the older students don't know about the subject or a equation. Also, they can bond and tell them how it's like being a kid now days, and the older student tells their stories about their childhood and what it was like being a kid in the past. The older and younger student have different experience with their childhood and their elementary, which they can help with each other and the program for the older and younger student will help them improve their skills and their grades.             ",3.5,3.5,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0
21B100A503DC,"Churchill statement is right because failing in life is part of succeeding. Those obsticals you go through in life are part of who you become and how you handle those obsticals. It gives some type of motivation to keep moving forward and get to whatever goal it is. My example is when i got pregnant my junior year and when I found out i just wanted to drop out because I was still a kid myself and I kept thinking how people would look at me or what would they say, but I already had an idea. My parents didnt even support me so what motivation did I have? I had myself and my son. I took that as my motivation, yes it was difficult especially after I delivered and going back to school because I was very behind. Of course a lot of friends stopped talking to me but that just proves who's there for you and who's not. I was starting a new chapter in my life and I'm not saying having my son was a mistake but it was just at the wrong time; cant change the past though, you just have to keep moving forward.

Here I am now my senior year, eight more months until I graduate and I'm proud of myself because I am a mother now and I'm still going to school, I didnt let that stop me from getting my education and I'm planning to go to college too because all I want is the best for my son and myself; its not me I have to think about now, I have another responsibility to look after for. There are many examples of failing in life and later on succeeding but this is one I went through, I had to grow up fast but it made me the person I am today. Just because of one mistake you make in life doesnt mean your life is over, its probably just the beginning, we are human! We all make mistakes but you just have to keep moving forward because life goes on with or without you. ",3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0
1CFAD594A087,"In a world of 7 billion is hard being yourself, because everyone else is trying to make you something you are not. It might be hard to be yourself, express yourself and have your own opinion , because there's so many people that try to make to you different or make you think in a different way, even the government want's to choose for you.

You can be yourself, being yourself means to express your feelings to the world but in your own unique way, for example LGBT people they are the people that get the most stuff at them because of who they love, and the stuff they believe in.

People constantly keep trying to make them different, even the government is trying to tell them who they can love and who they can not love, who they can marry, and who they cant.

Expressing yourself in a world of 7 billion people is not easy, because everyone has different opinions and beliefs, you might have different ways to express yourself than your family and that is hard, because when you are young you believe in the same stuff your parents/family does, but the older you get you start to understand more stuff and why your parents believe in what they believe in.

Your own opinion matters do not let other people make you think your opinion does not matter or that it ain't important, you have the freedom of speech in the U.S., meaning you have the freedom to say anything you want to who you want in a whatever way you need to say or express it.

To be yourself in this world it's hard but do not let anybody ruin that for you, if your friend's do not agree on who you love, then change friends, if they do not like in what you believes are, explain to them your beliefs and try to make them understand why you believe in that certain stuff.",3.0,3.0,3.5,4.0,4.0,3.0