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-# About
-IBM is building advanced AI technologies to enable enterprises to solve real-world business problems, with particular focus on building solutions that are effective, scalable, and trusted. Open innvoation is a cornerstone of IBM's culture and strategy, and on this page, you'll find a variety of open AI models and datasets contributed with the goal of advancing the science and practice of AI.
+# IBM ❤️ Open Source AI
 
-**For IBM's Granite family of foundation models—spanning language, code, time-series, and other modalities — please visit [ibm-granite](https://huggingface.co/ibm-granite) on Hugging Face.**
+IBM is building enterprise-focused foundation models to drive the future of business. The [Granite family of foundation models](https://huggingface.co/ibm-granite) span a variety of modalities, including language, code, and other modalities, such as time series.
 
-For other models from IBM Research — please visit [ibm-research](https://huggingface.co/ibm-research) on Hugging Face.
+We strongly believe in the power of collaboration and community-driven development to propel AI forward. As such, we will be hosting our latest open innovations on Hugging Face. We hope that the AI community will find our efforts useful and that our models help fuel their research.
 
-To learn more about IBM:
-* [IBM Research](https://research.ibm.com/)
-* [IBM's mission and business](https://www.ibm.com/about) 
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-*To join the organization (IBM personnel only):*
-Before requesting to join the organization please ensure that your primary email at 🤗 is your IBM email address, and join the slack channel #huggingface-at-ibm.
+* [IBM Granite](https://huggingface.co/ibm-granite) - family of foundation models—spanning language, code, time-series, and other modalities
+* [IBM Research](https://huggingface.co/ibm-research) - open source models and data from IBM