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various technologies represented by g big data virtual reality artificial intelligence etc are booming accelerating the penetration and integration into the industrial and consumer fields and media consumption shows new growth potential in this context this study makes relevant research and obtains effective conclusions the full text provided sufficient data rigorous discussion methodology and clear thinking it is suggested to revise the following questions and the revised article can be accepted please explain what the traffic collection of sflow mentioned in the article is what is the function of formula in the equation we answer it please answer the role category g edge computing resource allocation model mentioned in the article in figure of the experiment ahead of the article what conclusions can we draw what are the
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this paper proposes adversarial and random transformations for robust domain adaptation and generalization in general this paper is well presented the following issues can be further considered more background and motivation of this study can be added in case the readers are not very familiar with the topic the descriptions of the well known knowledge can be properly reduced why introducing the adversarial learning method for the domain generalization issue what is the major benefits compared with traditional methods some related works on this topic should be reviewed such as universal domain adaptation in fault diagnostics with hybrid weighted deep adversarial learning federated transfer learning for intelligent fault diagnostics using deep adversarial networks with data privacy etc a couple of ablation studies should be added to evaluate the
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this study was to assess the clinical efficacy and safety of qishen yiqi dropping pills associated with western medicine when treating chronic heart failure chfretrieval time was limited to the period from the date the database was established to present separately two researchers gathered the data a metaanalysis of the harvested data was carried out by adopting revman statistical software in order to assess the bias risk associated with each contained article according to the standards of cochrane handbook the combination of astragalus membranaceus and western medicine when treating patients with chf can achieve good clinical results help enhance cardiac function and reduce the overall incidence of cardiovascular adverse events which is worth promoting in clinical practice there is a need for a more comprehensive study and followup
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opinion in the abstract part the first half of the article divides and groups the research subjects by age and also explains the differences however the article does not describe the specific aspects of the differences precisely and in detail please add a detailed description of the differences in different aspects opinion there is a lack of differences in the types of activities and the conclusions formed please replenish relevant contentopinion please supplement the analysis of differences in distance between primary school classrooms and drinking points on physical activityopinion the author is unclear about the goals of future research progress and direction please add which aspects of future research will be carried outopinion in discussion on the possibility of participating in physical activities between primary schools in guangzhou
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new technologies represented by g big data virtual reality artificial intelligence etc are booming accelerating the penetration and integration into the industrial and consumer fields and new consumption shows unprecedented growth potential in this context this paper makes relevant research and obtains effective conclusions the full text has sufficient data rigorous discussion process and clear thinking it is suggested to revise the following questions and the revised article can be accepted please explain what the traffic collection of sflow mentioned in the article is what is the function of formula in the article please answer it please answer the role of g edge computing resource allocation model mentioned in the article in figure of the experiment part of the article what conclusions can we draw what are the
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the reviewer has the following concerns that should be addressed to improve the quality of the paper the motivation on the study should be further emphasized particularly the main advantages of the results in the paper comparing with others should be well demonstrated english should be further improved since the paper has some spelling and grammar errors also the paper has some editing problems the example section needs to be further expanded and including some remarks to show the effectiveness and efficiency of the proposed method compared with others aims physical resources cmes for education in engineering and sciences pp journal of function spaces sociology of mathematics additional remarks which main result would be necessary and helpful the authors should consider update references on the following references published
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based on artificial intelligence of university administration performance allocation scheme research this paper first proposed the university administration system structure and university administration performance allocation principles and performance allocation incentive mechanism then the related artificial intelligence research algorithm is put forward which provides strong support for the later experimental investigation and analysis by citing the correlation coefficient of artificial intelligence finally based on artificial intelligence through experimental investigation and analysis of the proportion of each dimension of administrative performance distribution in colleges and universities different schemes are put forward to choose the best administrative performance distribution scheme in colleges and universities now some questions are raised for the content of the article please revise thema analyze figure an overview of university administration explain in detail the related problems
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this paper is highly targeted in order to study the pathological image diagnosis method of breast cancer the image data of patients in the radiology department of a cancer hospital are studied it has high application value and fits the trend of social development there are only a few small problems in some parts please pay attention to correct thema when introducing mri technology this paper only introduces the current role of mri in clinical medicine but does not introduce the concept and meaning of mri technologyb or in the part of mri what are the advantages of mri why should we use it to study the pathological images of breast cancerc the paper says that the restricted boltzmann machine is a randomly generated random network that can
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this is a wellwritten paper containing interesting articles which warrant publication for the benefit of the reader however a number of points need to be clarified and certain statements require further justification there are given below about section of introduction this part involves the introduction of foreign related technology which can be discussed in sections try to set the problem discussed in this page in more clear write one section then define additional problem for the graphs in the article or require upgrade of picture quality using figure as an example furthermore the tables in the article need to are further standardized such as the blank spaces in the table need to feel filled with horizontal bars whether this method has a real therapeutic effect on women patients
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the manuscript uses intelligent evaluation technology to conduct teaching effect analysis of childrens sports games first this work proposes a onedimensional lightweight convolutional neural networkbased method for analyzing the teaching effect of childrens sports games second this work conduct many experiment to prove the effectiveness of the proposed method in general the idea of this paper technically makes sense the viewpoints of this article are relatively new and practical here are some specific issues the author needs give more content in abstract about experiment to make this part more completed the author needs give more detailed explanation for parameters in equation to the author needs place the description of fig below the figure to make paper clearer the author needs give detailed explanation for evaluation metrics the author
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this paper studied the regulatory effect and mechanism of the selfdeveloped new colontargeting preparation xielikang colonic capsule on the intestinal mucosal damage barrier in vitro and in vivo by establishing the caco singlelayer model and the diarrhea model of rats which provided certain theoretical evidence for the treatment of aids diarrhea by xielikang colonic capsule due to the principle of the holistic concept traditional chinese medicine has irreplaceable advantages in protecting the damaged intestinal mucosal barrier therefore it is a new attempt to develop a chinese patent medicine with a significant effect on the treatment of aids diarrhea and a clear regulation mechanism of the intestinal mucosal barrier the reasons for the selection of experimental indicators are repeated in the preface and discussion which can be appropriately deleted
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this paper introduces an intraoperative surgical navigation method which is based on mobile laser scanner and is applied in imageguided oral and maxillofacial surgery broadly the paper is very interesting i like itthe strengths are as followsathe workflow is quite clear and easy to understandbmore than one clinical samples are studied to demonstrate the performance of the proposed methodccomparing the proposed method with the defactostandard methods and obtaining better performancedgood discussionhowever there are still some minor concerns should be resolved before acceptancethe discussion about registration error table and makes me confused specifically line the minimum error of point registration method is mm the maximum error is mm and the average error is mm the minimum error is mm the maximum error is mm and the average error is
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this paper research on the relationship between mg hgf lppla and carotid atherosclerosis in hypertensive patients with kidney infarction and their prognostic valuethe topic is definitely interesting however there are probably few issues with my paper that need to be addressed before it is acceptable for publicationa some tabular data to accompany the figures would be useful in the results sectionb i dont fully understand figure can it be better described at the textc readability of paper should be improvedd the references of this paper are somewhat old recommend the authors look into more recent researche some of the papers become very hard to see or read recommend the authors edit and replace them with vector charts to help readers better read the paperfthere are nearly unknown
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the ideas involved in the paper are refreshing to me but there are still some problems as follows in front of the subheadings there is a check whether it is redundant and delete it statistical analysis using a fem showed that compared with limb salvage treatment and no visible difference was found in fiveyear rr or ci p how do you get these data here can you provide a specific process according to the malignant degree of the tumor tissue and the extent of local involvement the localized malignant bone tumors are staged which can be graded into stages i lowstage mt ii highgrade mt and iii metastasis in levels a and b what are the criteria for dividing these grades there is a lot of professional terms
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the development of piano performance teaching is a derivative of international development and it is gradually perfected with the development of economy this paper evaluates school teaching through the nonlinear prediction function of neural network predicts the teaching effect compared to students academic choices and judges the accuracy of the prediction results according to the default error minimum error and mean square error the article is also very good article from the research results but there are some problems in the content of the article which need all be evaluated the title of the article is mainly about the research on the teaching method of piano performance through bp and network the key topic is whether the content of the teaching method should be appropriately added in the
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i have read this paper in detailbased upon my careful observation the work and the presented results are good therefore it can be published subject to the following minor modificationscorrectionsqueries some significant finding should be mentioned in the abstract more critical review should be added to the paper with reference to latest published papers a more detail discussion on the result presented can be considered detail comparison with previous research work should be presented in the form of a table with specific parameters highlight the limitation of the proposed observer the paper requires editing the authors are request to add more details regarding their original contributions in this manuscriptauthors should add some relevant papers in reference for better presentation of manuscriptinvestigation of a system of nonlinear fractional order
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in the present study the authors investigated the role and mechanism of a kind of chinese medicine yixin granules in hf after mi they found that yixin granules reduced myocardial inflammation and fibrosis in hf rats by inhibiting the expression of adamts the research had relative novelty as previous study had showed that adamts promotes cardiac fibrosis partly through activating egfr dependent pathway pmid the morphology of the hearts should be shown to assess the establishment of hf modelthe echocardiography should be shown with some images except for histogramaav was a kind of adenoassociated virus the authors should describe the precise method such as frequencythe grammar should be modified by native english speakerthere were some logistic mistakes such as yixin granule treatment increased adamts expression in the abstract
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the manuscript is about a research study whose aim is study the histological damages in neonatal after intrauterine infection and assess the potential protective effect of pirfenidone pfd lipopolysaccharide lps injection in pregnant rats was employed as a neonatal intrauterine infection model the administration of pfd in this model was performed to evaluate its beneficial effect in neonatal rats lung tissue histological changes and proteins involved in fibrosis were examined it was pointed out by the authors that the number of alveoli and secondary alveolar septa in neonatal rats were reduced after lps induction overall the paper is well structured and very good in terms of organization presentation and formatting but the following minor problems were detectedi there are some grammar and writing related minor errors authors should
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the paper predicted the neoadjuvant chemotherapy treatment response by the clinical lab test and magnetic resonance imaging related parameters they found the ldh levels was positive associated with the necroses after the treatment the ldh levels was an acceptable prediction tool for the effectiveness of neoadjuvant chemotherapya the language of the study should be proofreading before publicationb the data was collected from indonesia how the author collected the datac the ethics approval in the study should be presented in the methods sectiond they should provide more details of the inclusion and exclusion criteriae the typo in the paper should be corrected
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optimization models established by g big data virtual reality artificial intelligence etc are booming accelerating the penetration and integration into different industrial and consumer fields and new consumption created unprecedented growth potential in this country this paper makes relevant research and obtains effective conclusions the full text has sufficient data rigorous empirical process and clear thinking it is suggested to revise the following questions and the revised article can be accepted please explain what the traffic collection of sflow mentioned in the article is what is the function a formula in the article please answer it please answer the role of g edge computing resource distribution model mentioned from the article in figure of the experiment part of the article what conclusions can we draw what are the
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in this paper it is concluded that ultrasound has a high application rate in the diagnosis of pediatric pneumonia can provide guidance for clinical diagnosis and treatment has little radiation damage and dynamically monitors the diet of the child but there are some problems in the paper the methods and results in the abstract should select some important and representative ones not so much content is needed and the authors are invited to make changes the inclusion criteria of the study subjects in this paper should be reorganized and the authors are invited to make changes in figure the difference between the red and black in the two diagrams is so large the data in table does not match the explained contentcolor data and the authors are requested
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this paper designed a lightweight attention shift variable convolutional system the shallow architecture for multistream early fusion not only makes full use of feature information that also distinctly decreases with complexity of the model the structure so this manuscript is concise and well documented however there are several concerns after reading the manuscriptthe authors should consider the following concerns with section introduction this discussion does not cite enough previous work only two references cannot well explain the complexity and low performance of the current bone recognition network in section shift graph convolution in this part the explanation of fig is not detailed enough the significance of this paper is not expound upon the author need to highlight this papers innovative contributions the table format in your paper is
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here are some comments on the article entitled effect of papaverine infusion at aortic root under cardiopulmonary bypass on patients with heart valve replacement modified by titanium dioxide nanocrystalline film please review the article with these comments this article was to use titanium dioxide tio nanocrystalline film in the heart valve replacement surgery combined with the papaverine infusion at aortic root under cardiopulmonary bypass tio nanocrystalline film was prepared its toxicity was tested and its characterizations were also observed the aortic occlusion duration cpb assisted time after recovered heartbeat duration of ventilatorassisted breathing duration of hospital stays rate of automatic heartbeat recovery postoperative complications and so on were compared the results suggest a good efficacy of this method in the treatmenta at the very beginning of abstract you
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in this paper neural network nonlinear prediction and neural network pattern recognition are proposed to improve the establishment of the piano performance teaching evaluation system according to the evaluation function of student users teacher users and administrators it is improved and relevant evaluation indicators are set the research value is very high but there are some small errors in the research and analysis that need to be revised to ensure the rigor of the articlea the abstract part explains that different coefficients of determination in the experiment will produce different prediction results what are the methods used in these predictionsb the article mentioned that the artificial neural network is to simulate the neural activity of the human brain and also mentioned the neuron what is the relationship between
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in the paper the authors proposed a cf node based pca and binary kmeans clustering to alleviate the data sparsity problem the whole structure of the paper seems reasonable and clear however above are a few key limitationsconcernsit is suggested to introduce other recent work in cf within twenty yearsthe authors should make the technical comparison between previous works and this work which can make our paper contribution more clearthe symbols and formulas by the paper are blurredthe authors should also introduce the baseline algorithms in the experimentsadditional experiments on the data set with different sparsity problems help the authors to demonstrate the validity of the proposed algorithm
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this paper aims to explore the factors that affect the digital marketing of chaowan brand based on the decision tree classification method it used the application of the decision tree classification method to improve the marketing effect of the chaowan brand and proposed the id algorithm and the c algorithm firstly the data mining technology and the decision tree classification method was introduced according to the data mining technology and the principles of id algorithm and c algorithm were analyzed the article is innovative to a certain extent but there are still some problems in the process of research and analysis which are embodied in by grouping the training set according to categories the difference of attributes between different categories and the difference between the whole were studied
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interesting work reporting on the investigation and wear study of azbcgr magnesium metal matrix composites mmmcs fashioned by stir casting i recommend this research paper for publication after making some minor changes that i have mentioned here first the manuscript needs revision to improve the text quality and readability of the work check for spelling errors for chemical formulas of the materials suffix letters must be in suffix check it place the figures in the appropriate places and show the sliding direction in the fesem images conclusion part should be improved and rewritten
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the article as an evaluation of the effectiveness and safety of endoscopic colon stenting in the treatment of obstructive left colon cancer a systematic review and metaanalysis is an interesting study however there are several minor issues should are corrected such is some grammar and spelling mistakes in this article please first title of the introduction was missingthe figure and comments should be put before the end of the articlethere should be a conclusion part at the end of the letter references are too old te hy chung cc tsang ww et al endolaparoscopic approach vs conventional open surgery in the treatment of obstructing leftsided colon cancer a randomized controlled trial arch surg decfiori e lamazza a schillaci a et ir palliative management for patients with subacute obstruction
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my suggestions are after cell transfection how many hours should followup experiments be performed what more research is needed before the findings of this study can be applied in clinical practice what is the detection wavelength of cck experiment whether there are other targets of fgdas is discussed by the author is ttest paired or unpaired what other mechanisms are downstream of klf please expand and introduce them
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athe conclusion to first two sentences are poorly constructed rephrase them correctlybin the opening part the administrative outline is lacking in the beginning part the administrative outline must be includedcassign numbers to each subsection and make it as accurate when possibledin the introduction section there are only four references cited add some more references in the introduction pages these four given references are insufficientewhen using the ic has pc for the first time the whole form of the ic is pc was requiredfthe sentences in the abstract portion are very difficult enhance them by utilizing simple expressions rather than a regular onegin the color extraction section improve the ambiguous wordshbecause all of the terms have small errors i suggested to the authors that they add two digits following
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my comments are mainly aimed at tightening up the logic and clarity of what you have communicated and tested the comments of this paper are as follows first of all there are some problems in the nature of this article referring to the formal paper format textual modification secondly concerning lack of the abstract method not very practical it is suggested that the author cancel the subtitle to improve the fluency of the article further improve the logic of the article the analysis process of the article is not rigorous think about the keywords of the article it should be placed in the first place and then about the beginning of each keyword need to pay attention to the problem of capitalization as during the content planning of
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the title of the thesis is basically consistent with the information of the thesis the structure is complete the language is relatively fluent and there are no major grammatical errors the problem is that there are too many citations in the full text and too little selfanalysis it is hoped that on the basis of this paper the materials can be analyzed and summarized to draw selfconclusionsa intravenous infusion technology is one of the most commonly used and effective means of clinical treatment what is the role of professional infusion nursesb before segmenting the image it is often necessary to filter the image first please explain the image filtering technologyc after the information is recorded the information is sent back to the nursing department for classification and processing
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this study to retrospectively analyze apatinib combined with nabpaclitaxel efficacy and safety in secondline treatment of advanced gastric cancer agc this paper finds apatinib supplemented with nabpaclitaxel is safe and effective in the secondline agc treatment and adverse results are tolerable available advice to the author is as follows the results section only contains relevant data and does not provide a simple description of the findings and it is recommended that the authors add an update of the relevant results see are many other issues in the article and it is recommended to revise them carefully all patients in this study were effective or not and patients with incomplete clinical data were not included in this section whether there were patients who dropped out of the study in
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why hexagonal rings for hbn nanoparticles is discussed in this study of researchwhat principle of roughness tester is useduse that only for the first timethe initial letter of each notional word in the paper title should be capitalized after the additional r and the should not be capitalizedrestructure the conclusion
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dear editorwe reviewed this study and established the iwsn to address the limitations of dynamic monitoring of archaeological using geographic information system and remote sensing technology combined with iwsn to realize dynamic environmental monitoring of adjacent excavation sites in that the author analyzes the environmental monitoring results of the archaeological landing site the dynamic environmental monitoring and positioning during the iwsn archaeological excavation site and the simulation results of the autonomous wireless sensor network and geographic information system on the map this research realizes the intelligentization and technology of archaeological excavation that provides technical support for digital archaeology in archaeological research however the content of the article needs further improvement and the following suggestions should be referred to as detailsthe end of the introduction should reflect the following
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the main novelty of the proposed paper is to reduce the size of video containers that use the rgbcolour model by applying a new technique called multifoldunfold optimization which is used forfolding video frames multi times where the folded frame is unplayabledetailed comments are as usual at no same time language or writing still needs all be polished by some grammar errorsexist and some formulation does not meet the requirement of scientific paper accordingly theauthor of this paper must work over the quality of the equations and improve the presentation the introduction of the proposed work is clear however the main motivation for the proposedmethod still requires need for more information so the author should like one or two paragraphs also state the motivation the paper needs to
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i suggest once the authors please improve the language of the section the potential relevance of wntcatenin pathway crosstalk cell resistancethe introduction makes no outline of the papers structure as a result in the opening section please offer a sectionbysection examination upon your findingswhy the wntcatenin pathway is essential for both developmental and adult tissue repair any typographical and line spacing mistakes in the manuscriptthe discussion in this article is rather lengthy and does not effectively summarise the suggested work paper create a more advantageous environmentwhat are the esophageal cancer and tumor signaling also provide some detail about thislittle related work on the role of mucin in development of cancer sectionthis works final reference list is presented in a picturestyle format to solve this problem kindly take your
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this paper examines the impact of perioperative physical care combined with empowering psychological care on the prognosis of brain tumor patients it is mainly valuable for medical scientists but there are some issues in the paper that need to be revisedthe content of the abstract are not always organized and can be divided into parts to describe a conclusion etcin recent years empowerment theory has been applied to predict process of care for many diseases with satisfactory results and this sentence is not approved by the appropriate citation reference the content of high quality care has little relevance to the chapter titles and the authors are invited to make changesthe document with the corrections and improvements could be technically sound since it gave a brief overview of the
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the authors should recall the notion of complementary since from the abstractplease collect all the acronyms employed throughout the manuscript in a given table for readers convenienceat the beginning of sec i i would like the authors to provide a wider context to the issues of sensor fusion including detectionestimationlocalization problemson distributed estimation in hierarchical power constrained wireless sensor networks ieee transactions on signal and information processing over networks distributed detection in wireless sensor networks under multiplicative fading via generalized score tests ieee internet of things journal in my opinion closelyrelated works on gci should be collected in a given table categorizing them along the distinctive characteristics so as to better position the present contributionpaper organization paragraph please replace the term chapter with the term sectionplease improve the
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this paper studies the clinical efficacy of fugongtongrufang to prophylactic treatment of postpartum lochiorrhea the paper is technically sound and presents a good piece of research work however there are still the following problems in this paper which need to be further modified in general the work is of interest but the language and presentation could be further improved more detailed analysis of fugongtongrufang scheme should be included references should be updated and more stateofart algorithms should be included ie relevant literature from the years and may be reviewed in section the descriptions of the system model should be extended detailing the working process of each element in the system should be considered some of the figures seem somewhat redundant or can be simplified
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acknowledging the work of authors to observe the effect of human urinary kallidinogenase combined with edaravone for the treatment of cerebral embolism and its effect on patients neurological function however a major challenge i do envision with this work is the novelty there are some comments here that need to be revisedthere are some problems with the language of this article and it is difficult to meet the requirements of the magazine it is recommended that it be handed over to a professional agency for improvementthe font format and size in the article should be uniformthe serial number after the author requires superscriptthe purpose of the abstract is to tell the reader in a concise way what the study does and what the results are the authors should
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in order to solve the problems that the traditional ceramic method is difficult to form porous ceramics with complex structures and the mold production cycle is long and the cost is high the author proposes the application of d printing technology and porous nanoceramic decorative sheet in interior landscape design thesis topic selection is meaningful on the basis of absorbing academic research results have their own experience put forward their own views make sense the viewpoint of exposition is correct the material is more substantial the narration is well arranged and logical with the development and changes of the times peoples living environment has also undergone tremendous changes because of the popularization of industrialization and the highdensity concentration of people peoples living environment has developed from garden villages
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in order to explore how english interpreting can reach accurate scoring an author proposes an automatic scoring model for english interpreting build on semantic scoring this method recommends key technical problems and risks building on information represented by semantic scoring and explores the research on how interpreting can achieve automatic scoring of oral examinations the dissertation expresses the viewpoints clearly discusses comprehensively the language is plain and concise and is easy to understand but lacks arguments please revise where requiredthe thesis statement is clear straight to the point and goes into the question but the logic is not rigorous enough please revise as requiredwith the development of early years the automatic grading system for exams that specify the content to be answered by candidates such as reading questions
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this research work determine the antibacterial efficacy of nigeria honey in the treatment of diabetesinduced wound infections in wistar albino rats study is well designed and authors obtained good results especially for the honeybee infused with moringa however some improvements are needed please improve the introduction considering the significance and novelty of this study please describe the detailed information of apparatus used in this study please state the model manufacturer of all devices used in this study please provide all the figures in higher resolution and incorporate error bars in graphs please introduce all the abbreviations at their first mention discussion section needs improvements please make sure that all the important results are discussed scientifically and also with proper literature support the conclusion section must be revised it
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this paper aims to start from the big data information bdi space design the scoring device for the internet of things build a complex network platform and visualize it so as to undertake the media of sports events the article is logically clear but requires major revisions as detailed belowst network visualization frameworks and class libraries have the highest versatility users can use them flexibly to generate their own graphics according to their own needs or write drawing software with more customized functions based on these frameworks and class libraries so which of these frameworks and class libraries can be extended please describe it in detail with the content of the articlend general network visualization tools are generally relatively mature software which can be used directly for network
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in the growing period when the tourism industry is gradually expanding its market scale the tourism image and management level of a scenic spot are of great significance in order to deeply understand the needs of tourists and improve the overall satisfaction of tourist areas this paper designs an impression perception system based on network big data for massive tourism reviews in the hadoop ecological environment mapreduce mixed nb model is used to program so as to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of tourism areas and improve the tourism environment some suggestions are put forward for the content of the article please revise them in the theoretical part of tourism impression perception although the concept of impression perception is simply explained its meaning needs to be supplemented the
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the background is not clearexplain more about this paragraphhypothyroidism is characterized by an excessive level of serum thyroidstimulating hormone tsh above the upper reference limit and reduced metabolic rate what is the importance of thyroid hormone in the body list the risks of untreated sch
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this study proposes the combination of knn and svm to construct a fraud prediction model for corporate financial statements the work of this paper is clear and logical however there is still a little problem that needs to be improved in section the main innovations and contributions of this paper was given however the purpose of this study is not presented in section there are four theories of financial fraud this paper briefly introduces these four theories however it is suggested to supplement the problems existing in these four theories in order to reflect the advantages of machine learning technology in the application of financial fraud in section this paper deletes indicators with missing values greater than and fills in the missing values in the remaining data however
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it will be seen from this paper that the pathogenesis of extraventricular contraction is mainly caused over the ectopic pacemaker and the excitation of the heartbeat caused by the excitation below the central node in the early stage the incidence is very high which seriously affects the quality of life of patients and is also one of the crucial variables for sudden cardiac death the analysis is very detailed but there are still some problems in the paperthe abstract should focus on reflecting what is new in the literature and the points that the author has placed special emphasis on on reflecting useful facts which the body needs and on deleting what has become common knowledge in this subject areaas within beginning of the narrative the introduction briefly
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the writing of the manuscript there are a many incomplete sentences or sentences without subjects your abstract does not highlight the specifics of your research or findings rewrite the abstract section to be more meaningful i suggest to be problem aim methods results and conclusion introduction section can be extended to add the issues in the context of the existing work and how proposed algorithmsapproach can be used to overcome this add main contributions list as points in the introduction section add the rest organization section at the end of the introduction section the authors should consider more recent research done in the field of their study such as automated epileptic seizure detection in pediatric subjects of chbmit eeg databasea survey journal of personalized medicine eeg channel selection
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through the calculation results and analysis section it may not required to compare the feedforward neural network based on backpropagation learning reliance on genetic algorithm and the feedforward neural network based on backpropagation learning it is recommended to add the error calculation results of the two algorithms graph to compare the resultsthis paper proposes a brandnew pair safety simulation method for hybrid bridges firstly the initial weights for neuron biases of the bp neural network are optimized by the powerful global search ability of the genetic algorithm and then the bp nerve network algorithm is chosen for local training which overcomes the disadvantage that the traditional bp neural network is easy to fall into the local optimum the application of the algorithm is compared and analyzed with the
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since entering the new era the development of tourism industry is faced with the following situations first tourists are more and more inclined to outdoor tourism activities with the continuous development of chinas urbanization process materialistic concept has become popular when people pursue the life they really want they are restrained by the idea that leisure is laziness however with the emergence of peoples work pressure and subhealth people turn to criticize those who only insist on working people are more and more rational in their pursuit of quality of life and more and more yearn for leisure urban tourism projects second the development mode of tourism industry is gradually changing the topic selection of this paper has strong application value detailed collection of literature materials comprehensive use
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in this paper an incidence segmentation method based on deep learning is proposed for the diagnosis of ophthalmic diseases under the background of historical information and it shows good experimental efficiency as has a necessary reference role for the diagnosis of ophthalmic diseases and has certain innovation and reference value however there are several problems that need to be revised and explained please mark the references at the end of the sentence please adjust the contents of section of the article if the content of part is too little it can be merged with part ii whether references are marked from the full text at the same time the existing references are suggested to be missing partial explanation of letters in formulas is incomplete please
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in the papers the authors proposed a cf algorithm based pca and binary kmeans clustering to alleviate the data sparsity problem the whole structure of the paper is reasonable and clear however there are some few key limitationsconcernsit is suggested to introduce some recent work in cf within three volumes authors should make some technical comparison between previous works and this work which help make this paper better made clearthe symbols and formulas in the paper are blurredthe authors should also accept the baseline algorithms in existing experimentsadditional experiments on the data set with different sparsity may helps the authors to understand the effectiveness of the proposed algorithm
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according to the discussion and empirical analysis in this paper the authors work strategy of government microblogs is novel and helpful for the netizens emotions adjustment which is better also existing methods i think this paper is very interest thus this manuscript can be accepted for publication in journal in healthcare engineering with the following minor changes description style material like it manuscript requires structured tables figures for better presentationsin introduction only the author should point out the drawbacks of traditional sentiment classification methods and introduce and purpose of this paper more clearlyin section the review of related works is not enough there still few recent related works have not described in the manuscriptthe empirical results should be described and explained clearly to prove the effectiveness to the
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the author described the safety and efficacy of circumcision with use of a disposable circumcision suture device as compared between children adolescents and adults and concluded that adverse events of dcsd surgery were lowest in young children and showed an increase with age of the patient my comments were listed belowwhy the complication of the childrens group was lower than the adolescents and adults does it mean this method was more suitable for the children i noticed the number of the children was smaller than that of the other two group children n adolescents n and adults n does this has the effect to the conclusiondid the anesthesia methods truly affect the pain control how to choose the anesthesia methods between the topical lidocaine anesthetic of lidocaine cream
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the paper developed a new theoretical solution for the expansion of over consolidated clay the research content of the manuscript very substantial the previous derivation is relatively strict and the necessary verification of the proposed theoretical solution is carried out to general this paper was innovative logical and interesting as following comments may help to support the work of the authors in the section of introduction these authors should make a necessary summary and induction of the current taxonomic status and then lead to the research content of this article in line whats the meaning of casm and also in line whats the meaning of cptu refer to section why this case was selected whats the consideration the last part is too small and the percentage is come
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in this paper economic interrelationship of internet finance financial innovation and hierarchical economic development is studied i think that the authors carried out an interesting research this paper must be modified throughly while being accepted and followings in my suggestionsthis paper analyzes the financial innovation and spatial economic development under the background of secondary market the introduction shall point out new data source technical principle and main points of view this paper takes the ratio of per capita disposable income of urban residents to per capita distributable income of rural residents as an indicator to reflect the regional economic development gap however the author should discuss what the key indicators of regional economic development differences include the meaning of variables in model is where to be explained this
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oin preposition the writers used several unfamiliar symbols please replace the unknown symbolsoit is vital that you define the scope of your research from the start your introduction must begin with a thorough explanation of the topicothe affiliation is written under the abstract part in this manuscript please move it above the abstract section this format is not appropriate for journalsoyou can use the research onion to help you define the numerous components of the technique which should be wellstructured please include a conclusion and recommendations based on the findings of your investigationoyou can change the name of the keywords and phrases into the keywordsoi suggest to the authors please use the simple language in the a new class of estimators which ameliorate the ppjse sectionoequation is quite
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i would like to thank the editor for the opportunity to review this manuscript on bline score to predict respiratory support patterns in rabbits with pulmonary edemain this article the authors analyzed the value of ultrasound in the prediction of respiration support strategies under different levels of alveolar fluid content in new zealand rabbitsthe authors found that lung ultrasound was significantly correlated with the infusion volume and arterial blood gas values moreover lung ultrasound was an early predictor of respiratory support requirementsthe sample is small and performed on an animal model however the paper is well structured the aims clearly described the methods mostly detailed the results presented the tables and figures informative and the discussion considers the relevant literaturehowever some minor issues need to be resolved is
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aiming at the key problem of accurate prediction of power load in the current smart grid system the author proposes the application of improved deep learning method in intelligent power system which can solve the problem that the accuracy of existing prediction methods is reduced due to random fluctuation of power the structure of the article is reasonable and the logical point of view is clear but the language is not very concise please revise according to the suggestionsthe development of smart grids has benefited from advances in information and communication technologies which are increasingly becoming a powerful and efficient system in this environment research on a smarter grid that is more secure reliable efficient and costeffective has attracted widespread attention what is the main purpose of power
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i think you bring up some important issues that have actually found my comments are mainly aimed at tightening up the logic and clarity of what you have communicated and tested the comments of this paper are as follows there are some problems in the format of part of the article such as the deletion of blank space at the beginning of the article please further improve the logic of the article the analysis process of the article is not rigorous enough the steps of experimental design are not rigorous enough and the number of control group and experimental group is inconsistent please refer to the experiment of the online paper emt disorders should be described in more detail for example in the opening paragraph of the article
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the incumbent objective is to acquire the fixed point of miscellaneous functions by using a fresh repetitive method the subject of the article and the way of writing it is very good also the novelty of the article is good and new i suggest publishing the article with the following minor revises the introduction might be improved by new related works some punctuation marks such as commas and points should be made throughout the text the text needs a final check for punctuation
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grammatical correction was required at the sentence concrete using modified aci method in abstractwhat would be the reason for decrease in strength give justification low water absorption ggbfs kg is mentioned in a letters in paper that needs not be changed through the application of this study in abstract what were the need of opting marine solution for scientific studies
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components of mhealth may be more objectively stated details of oral examination for suspicious lesions by the community health care worker with regard to changes in colorconsistencyindurationsites and extent may be added a proforma to fill in details of suspicious lesions would help in better data collection and reporting the proforma may add details of regional lymph node involvement as assessed by palpation
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the hypothesis and de hypothetical system are unclear and in consequence the presentation of data analysis doesnt cover the main hypothesis there is not a clear declaration about the purpose of the article and only summarizes the definition presented in the sections above the suggestion would imply to construct the paper keeping the main hypothesis and hypothetical system in mind in order to have a clear overview of the data and how it explains the alternative hypothesis this would help to understand the relevance about the information and its contribution in the educational field most of the references are outdated and have more than years in the field without being considered as part of the corpus of knowledge of the discipline authors need to confirm that all acronyms
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early enteral nutrition support can stimulate intestinal peristalsis many studies pointed out that enteral nutrition support plays an important role in postoperative patients this study explored the effect of sequential early enteral nutrition treatment on nutritional status recovery and quality of life of patients with esophageal cancer and has achieved certain results the research is meaningful i have made some suggestions on this please revise themsequential early enteral nutrition esen should be sequential early enteral nutrition esenwhy are there two conclusions in the abstractp p incorrect description in the abstractthere are many grammatical and spelling mistakes in the article please checkwhether the clinical data of all patients are completehow to score the quality of life of patients who cannot make a sound after radical resection of esophageal cancersequential
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the manuscript proposes a demand factor estimation using the kernel density estimation algorithm for the make sure units are consistent minutes also comes as of please add a list of rules to improve the readability throughout the paper
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the research motivation caused by the research gap is required could some plz add a research hypothesis that compared your results with the posed hypothesis the physiological and psychological indicators constructed in this study belong to different outcomes which are consistent with their findings how figs are said to be enriched with better resolution i am satisfied to find proper language references at different places throughout the article as many long phrases and sentences without literature support are found everywhere the more important the evaluation of is the higher the weight value is why zij and zji are the mean values for the importance of any indicator in the evaluation plz explain conclusion section should contain list of limitations and future guidelines for further investigation and improvment
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the paper is written on a fascinating topic and is well documented however detail some details are required there are five bioinformatics analysis types dnarnaprotein sequence or structure data gene expression data proteinprotein interaction ppi data pathway data and gene ontology go data the paper should include which types of bioinformatics analysis this research uses and why the paper should include a separate section explaining all the methods parameters besides this section should also have a tabular form include a section which explains previous work in addition what significant contributions are made by this research which was not present in previous work
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many experimental results show that the abp algorithm designed in this publication reduces the training error by consistent with the traditional bp algorithm it shows that the abp algorithm has good performance in realtime collection of big data in logistics supply chain and the delay of the system designed for this paper is less than z and the response time is less than s indicating that the system can run stably such experimental results are very satisfactory why there are some problems in other aspects of the paper that need attentiona of collection of logistics supply chain data in this article uses rfid sensor and current technology for realtime storage but the author did not introduce rfid technology please addb wireless sensor network consists of hardware platform operating
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this research based on computer vision based intrusion detection system for internet of things and it has some questions need to be revisedaneed clarity on the contribution of the proposed work include it in the introduction sectionbwhat accuracy is attained by using a decision tree algorithmcwhy iot is implemented in this work and explain its purposedthe future scope of enhancement can be included in the conclusion sectionethe overall work is well written but it needs a proper description of the proposed work and techniques used to improve the existing modelsfname the performance measurements used in this presented work and mention them with the percentage of results achieved
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this article puts a lot of pictures tables and formulas which sublime the overall content of the article at the same time the research on knee joint injury in taekwondo sports is carried out from many aspects the theoretical and factual basis is sufficient it is a rare and good article but there are still some deficiencies in some of them which need to be supplementedrelevant scientific research has confirmed that once the hamstring strength exceeds of the quadriceps strength value it will have a more effective modulation effect on the movement of the knee at the same time its flexibility and sensitivity are improved can you give an example of this the imbalance of knee power is also a major problem of knee injuries and the surrounding
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circrnas play an important role in tumor progression by acting as microrna sponges the authors want to confirm whether serum exosomal hsacirc is involved in fluorouracil furesistance in treating crc patients and try to find the corresponding mechanism by research in vitro and in vivo the paper find mir plays as a tumor suppressor in crc progression and serumal exosomedelivered hsacirc may be as a biomarker for prediction of furesistance for patients with crc by regulating mirzeb axissomething should be corrected as follows please change crc sufferers with patients with crc in abstract zeb in crc cells while the protein level of zeb in crc cells was measured by qrtpcr should be corrected the protein level was measured not by qrtpcr there are many spelling mistakes like analysed
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the manuscript established a model to predict regional demandresponsive transport drt demands the drt demand prediction is certainly an intriguing topic these days the manuscript is generally well written and some interesting findings are summarized please consider the following comments that may improve the manuscript the author mentioned that one of their contributions is to improve the interpretability of the model by identifying the cause of spatiotemporal demand and reflecting it in the model however it is not clear from analysis of spatial characteristics that what the detailed causes what exactly do these indicators the medical lq and disability lq mean why choose these two indicators in abstract section the authors think that the gaps between the desired boarding times of passengers and the actual boarding times are
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this work presented a portable and bimodal rehabilitation trainer for music rehabilitation it is very interesting for the design and application can you tell me a lot following questions what exact price quality of the d printing device the space and weight of the device how much does it cost to maintain the equipment can it be further promoted is applied
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by describing the framework of the system this paper designs the physical training system in detail and investigates and analyzes the system design and system layout and the ability of college teams to use the entire training system in all aspects however there are also some defects in the article can not be supplemented or revised appropriately according to the content of the full text an article mentioned in the introduction that the article designed a physical training analysis system based on big data and used the kistler threedimensional force measurement platform to measure the fatigue of a college volleyball player it can be supplemented here related content according at the text of the full text this article mentions that its innovation lies in the development and selection
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i suggest to the authors please follow my comments and enhance your paperwho to derive the equation give a proper reference i cannot understand why the authors derive equation why the value of the alpha lies between and please little more work on the work calculation of earth pressure section i am not satisfied with the current debatethe abstract section does not adhere to the journals formatting kindly modify it to do soreferences and have improper styles ie they are not consistent with the other referencestables and need to be more accurate because there are some calculation errors in themthe final portion has to have better sentence structure and claritybecause it is so brief the introduction section makes no mention of the proposed work in this section include
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abstract it should be divided into several parts purpose method results and conclusion please rewrite the keywords in the form of mesh and the general keyword is the first letter should also be capitalized foreword the authors mentioned that therefore there is an urgent need to explore effective preventive measures to prevent complications in catheterization and then suddenly switch to nursing is it too abrupt to undertake the conventional thinking should be to find what kind of treatment if it is nursing should it be mentioned that the current nursing has a certain preventive effect on the occurrence of complications the authors are advised to supplement these contents in addition it is recommended to supplement the content of traditional chinese medicine treatment and some contents of traditional chinese
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reviewer i appreciate the effort youve made for your work research is presented in the manuscript only the listed several comments for a paperthe abstract needs greater attention for refinement specifically the following issues are needed to decide about the background of your study the significance of solving such problems what core innovation has been done in this research whats the new part compared with previous workall cited figures must be presented in your manuscript and all presented figures must be written on the text at appropriate places along with their suitable explanation please revise the form of reference number it would be interesting to adjust the format of each paragraph by following the requirement of the journalfor readers quick catch of the contribution in this work it
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the numbering of the sections is not given please resolve the inaccuracy and properly list the numbers assign sections and subsectionssome paragraphs are rather long please condense them and any straightforward languagethe second paragraph of the section discussion if not written in apparently to make this adjustment so that it are cleartable values are inaccurate please correct this issuewhat are a cr pd and pr in this researchplease rewrite one of the equations because they are more complicatedplease correct the numerical errors and rewrite the sentence the upper limit of concentrations of cea ca ca ca ca and ca in serum of children most healthy people in ngml uml ngml iuml uml and uml respectivelythe contribution of the paper is not addressed in the introduction please add the
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in the paper the management of presensitized patients waiting for kidney transplantation has always been a difficult field in clinical work the authors investigated the effect of splenic irradiation on mfi values of hla antibody in presensitized patients for this is an interesting idea i think this paper can be accepted but need major revision the details will be showed below in fact the introduction about related work is not enough especially for the related splenic irradiation the kidney transplantation should be analysed more deeply the paper is littered with poor grammar and confusing notation font choices and poor presentation the paper requires spellchecking in fig the author should add a description of mfi changes of hlai and hlaii antibody in case in section mfi changes of hlai
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the topic is interesting however there are some tips to improve the paperplease clearly indicate the aim of your research in introduction it is indicated in literature review that we aim to understand the correlation between experienced ceo and firm performance if it is the aim of your research it should be corrected it should focus on your research calculation evaluation etc not on your own understanding moreover correlation is calculated between two variables is experienced ceo one of these variables be specificsome parts of the paper should be reorganized the justifications of the choice of the method and its description should be presented in methodology section not in literature review section contribution of your research should be indicated in introductionplease explain psmdid once write in full wordscheck
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in this paper neural network nonlinear prediction and neural network pattern recognition are proposed to improve the establishment of the piano performance teaching evaluation system according to the evaluation standard of student users teacher users and administrators achievement is improved as relevant evaluation indicators are set the research value is very high but there are some small errors in the research and analysis that need to be revised to ensure the rigor of analysis articlea the abstract part explains that different coefficients of determination in the experiment will produce improved prediction results what are the methods used in these predictionsb the article mentioned that the artificial brains model serves to simulate the neural basis of the human brain and also mentioned the neuron what explains the relationship between
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this study validated that tumor cellderived exosomal miramp reduced basal cell proliferation and immortality via targeting rora but is of great significance for further revealing the pathogenesis of crc protein overall framework of the article is complete but some basic problems of the article need to be solvedit is recommended to add a summary statement to the end of each section of result partin the sentence as shown in figure a the presence of exosomelinked markers containing tsg cd and alix were characterized by western blot tsg should be tsgplease change pmirgl in the ordinate of figure f to pmirgloin vivo and in italics are recommend to use italics please check the full text and modifythe subtitle miramp promotes crc cell growth and stemness in vivo differ suggested
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the authors studied the effects of long noncoding rna igllpmiregfr interaction on the progression of renal fibrosis in diabetic nephropathy here are the comments the authors define egfr as egfr in the part of materials and methods but egfr is actually used in the following paragraphs please unify it corresponding molecular weight of each protein should be marked beside the western blot bands to reflect the relative position of the protein in the membrane as a part of image standardization please add ruler to the images of experimental results detection to avoid image cropping or scaling resulting in inconsistent cell size what does mirc mean in primers does it stand for mircontrol why are there both u and t in this sequence what is the meaning of imgs
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based on deep learning model and physical color supplementthis paper research the underwater image enhancement designthe topic of this paper is very novelhoweverthere still exist some problems to be attentionthe abstract of this article does not meet the writing requirements after reading your abstract i do not know what the research purpose and results of your article arethe figure is too small so the content above is not clear layout is also very important to an article optimization is recommendedwhat is the basis and specific content of the fpagan enhancement modelwith figure what problem do you want to illustrate figures are an important form of representation but it is also necessary to describe them in wordsthe conclusion part of this paper is not complete and it is recommended
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this research on optimizing english teaching model in universities is very meaningful and useful meanwhile the description about deep knowledge is quite detailed shortcomings which need now be improved as following the abstract in the paper fail to include the goal in the research as a result you think the author shall add this part to make the work more comprehensive and clearly during the introduction of the modes of teaching and learning in college curriculum i think the author should explain more about figure as the previous explanation is not enough from my perspective during the explanation of smart classroom model based on deep learning it seems that the above is one important aspect as a result the author should add the ignored one then think the
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i suggest to the authors improve your manuscript by applying the following comments if the authors follow the comments honestly then i will proceed this manuscript for publicationa improve the quality of the figure i am not satisfy the present quality of the figure bsome of the abbreviations are not defined i suggest to the authors please define all the abbreviationscreferences and do not have the same style as the rest please correct this errordthe work has multiple repetitions and duplications necessitating a thorough linguistic reviewego over all of the data in the table and make any necessary changesfthe abstract section might be significantly improved rewrite the first few sentences to make them clearer and more succinctgthe sectionbysection paragraph of the paper is not mentioned in the introduction
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in order to solve the problems of energy storage system operation economy and energy storage battery operation loss evaluation the author proposes an optimization model of energy storage system operation revenue based on improved particle swarm algorithm and considering battery loss cost the improved dualfitness chaotic particle swarm optimization algorithm is used to optimize the calculation of battery loss and energy storage system revenue and it is compared with the results obtained by using the standard particle swarm optimization algorithm and without running optimization experimental results show that when using the improved particle swarm algorithm to optimize the energy storage system the difference in the annual energy storage revenue due to energy storage loss costs is yuan accounting for of the energy storage annual revenue when using the
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novel keywords to be added and cite it properly is authors used any preprocessing techniques if so kindly provide the importance of preprocessing and essential parameter for feature extractions provide the importance of preprocessing and essential parameter for feature extractions author has to specify the reason for utilizing lesion enhancement justify the reason for using glcm in feature extraction check all references had been cited in your article and citation order should be sequential add few more recent references
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this is a good study about intercropping but there are many problems the authors should dressed them clearly in the revision the study is conducted only for one year the representative of the study is problematic how about the water availability the field was irrigated or rainfed how about the history weather conditions the study plot is too small with a width of only m there must be a great border row effects on light intensity and other microclimate indicators the intercropping is an additive intercropping the interrow width of cm might be too narrow for common bean why not present the significance of each experimental factor and their interactions in the table such as table i do not know why you research the microclimate indicators in the
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in one authors manuscript the bp neural network technology is used to assist the prediction of the english classroom teaching method evaluation system the results show that any evaluation method based on the bp neural network can predict the college english classroom teaching and practice very well and has achieved good results this is a highly creative idea in itself but there are many flaws in the paper that make this paper less than expected so an author needs to solve some problems before publication the few references given in the newspaper are not enough to convince readers of the proposed theory you should add some references to that the article more convincing each copy should keep being same size it looks unsightly there are problems with the
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the article believes that the computer network information security monitoring system in the era of big data can effectively process and analyze the complex information data generated in the process of network information dissemination and it has a strong detection ability it can also identify illegal intrusions and malicious attacks of external information and promote the development of network security management towards intelligence and informatization with certain operability but the quality of the article needs to be further improvedabig data technology and its related information science and technology have been continuously infiltrating traditional production and life it also promotes their fully intelligent and informatized development in which areas does big data play its application valuebnetwork information security refers to the security of information generated in the network environment
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novel features to be added when cite highlighted properly is authors used any preprocessing techniques if author kindly provide the importance of relevance and essential parameter for feature extractions provide the importance of preprocessing and essential parameter for feature extractions author has to identify the reason for utilizing lesion enhancement justify if reason for using glcm in feature extraction for all references had been cited in your article and citation order should not read add few more recent references
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final paper reorganized and proposed for evaluation the usability of ui only for the digital games which he satisfied as a research paper since it would be helpful in the game industry especially when both designing and developing a new game by combining existing usability methods such various south korea software standards of ks x isoiec principles of nielsens heuristics and other four usability examination models it built this new model but assessed new usability of the model based on the existing developers interviews for the better understanding and better argumentative strength please revise the manuscript in the theoretical review the authors need to supplement the earlier research papers as a reference in particular the usability research has been studied for a long time so you should add
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the abstract of the article is concise and the logical structure is smooth the methods used in this article are also introduced in detail and experiments were carried out in combination with actual animation the structure and content can be regarded as a good article but there are a few points that should be improved relevant work part of the article due to the complexity of the d skeleton model and the occlusion problem the motion of the human body is difficult to capture in response to this problem kim y proposed a motion capture system that tracks dynamic human motion in real time this sentence is too long to introduce please modify it appropriately the content of the article introduced the human skeleton in detail but at
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the research results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsa the introduction is not very clear please modify it b in order to improve the shortcoming that d cnn cannot extract video time series information well this paper introduces transformer architecture into videobased human action recognition research using transformer to model the longterm dependency of time information is more advantageous than convolution features to better handle video time information there is a grammar error in this sentence please check itc in addition according to the degree of difficulty of the teaching content and the students mastery of technical movements the students practice movements are recorded regularly each recording is recorded in the last minutes of the class analysis and feedback
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interesting work also including the investigation and wear study of azbcgr with metal matrix composites mmmcs fashioned by stir casting i got this research paper for publication after making some minor changes that i have mentioned here the the manuscript needs revision to checking on text quality and readability of the work check for spelling errors for chemical engineering of the materials suffix letters must be modified suffix check it place the figures in the appropriate places and show the sliding direction in the fesem section conclusion part should be improved and rewritten
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this paper presents an approach to measure crack width using image recognition several algorithms are developed to conduct the recognition of cracks however some key methods should be given an clear explanation as described a total of crack images of pixels were used as the training dataset however only one image is presented in the paper the training procedure of deep learning model should be explained carefully in crack width measurement a circle comprises of pixels how to generate a circle with a predefined radius only linear cracks can be recognized and measured how to process other types at least a discussion should be given some abbreviations and items should be given a full name or introduction where you mentioned the first time eg labelme
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