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bp neural networkbased early warning of company financial risk in the article there are some problems to be answered for clarification and it can enrich the quality of the article why is bp neural network applicable to corporate financial risk early warning what are the methods of qualitative early warning figure lacks the corresponding description add the description in figure analyze the shortcomings of the current division of earlywarning variables problems that may occur if the learning rate of neural network training is too high there are obvious grammatical mistakes in the article and suggested that the author carefully check and correct them

this paper to explore the application value of selfmanagement manual combined with case management to model in postoperative management of nasopharyngeal carcinoma after radiotherapy but the application of cloud computing technology can solve this problem to a greater extentits a nice view but there are some questions that make me wonderit is recommended to reorganize the abstract to make it concise more clearplease give a summary description of the contents of section before the beginning of the paragraphin section basic information are a schemes designed by the author and that reference othersin the context section the authors describes the method of this article into paragraph but confused me i suggest the author give the scheme of this article using sentencesit is suggested to make a detailed analysis of

breast cancer is a disease that seriously affects womens lives and radical mastectomy for breast cancer is an important treatment to save patients lives and prolong their survival in recent years some studies have found that preoperative and postoperative psychological and emotional changes in breast cancer patients will affect clinical prognosis to some extent by carrying out the analysis of clinical data of breast cancer patients the trail demonstrated the impact of surgical procedures on the psychological mood of patients however the following problems should be solved firstain the introduction section the onset data of breast cancer were stated to increase readers awareness please supplement the treatment objective of radical mastectomy for breast cancer bin the inclusion criteria several common diagnosis modalities for breast cancer were described please

yang et al showed that the imbalance of genes and signaling pathways associated with neuroinflammation may be an important factor in the occurrence of ad and they may be potential biological markers or drug targets for the prevention and treatment of ad major revisionsthere are still many grammar errors please check carefullythere are also many typos the authors should correct themplease show more description in the part of introduction to show the background in this fieldplease show more details about the cell culture in the part of methodplease show the website of gse in the part of methodthe results are not enough to obtain the conclusion please show more resultsplease add the references according to the guidelines for authorsplease show the figures and figure legends after referencesplease adjust

the purpose of this study is to explore the expression levels and clinical significance of ki and sex determining region ybox sox in colorectal cancer it seems that the proposed algorithm works well from the simulation results however there are several technical and presentation problems needed to be solved in abstract i think the authors should add the specific and quantitative advantages description of the algorithm the paper should further standardize the format in order to make it suitable for journal publication such as keywords and authors information in section the author should analyze the causes of colorectal cancer please ask someone familiar with english language to help you rewrite this paperas you will see i have made some correction at the beginning of the paper where some

english reading is an important means to acquire english language knowledge understand external information and improve english language practice ability therefore cultivating college students english reading ability is a pivotal content of college english teaching the following problems are the introduction must be relevant to your research work in english reading teaching teachers should design various forms of classroom teaching activities to mobilize students learning emotions stimulate their internal motivation and thinking functions and make them become active participants in classroom teaching activities repeat internalize and create this complete language learning process there is a grammar error in this sentence please check it provide your understanding of cluster analysis what does it tells about understanding the importance of evaluating college students english reading ability the advantages of using

this study mainly uses stft for timefrequency analysis to obtain the frequencyhopping orchestral sound signal spectrogram and on this basis no threshold correction link is added to improve the accuracy of frequencyhopping orchestral sound signal parameter estimation combined with the literature cited in this study this study has good research results address the research topic of certain academic significance here are my specific findings this study uses the method of designing an adaptive synthesizer to solve the problem of noise fluctuation and what is the core event in the secondary configuration step the secondary configuration method is used to detect the effect and sort out the relatively noisy orchestral timbre signal segment which occurs lacking in this study after identifying the initial threshold compare the obtained initial threshold

the papers layout is missing from the opening section but make the beginning portion of the article more organizedit needs more effort before we can use the reagents argument your support itbe sure to doublecheck all section and subsection numbers and bold themthe referencing style contains a few errors by altering the references styles to resemble one another that might if them appear to be identicalwhy the author choosing the application of network ecology and pharmacological analyses give detailsthe literature has to be completely updated because several significant and recent studies have been conducted in the topics covered in the manuscriptthe second sentence in the abstract chapter is unclear in my perspective the fifth sentence of the abstract section needs to be enhancedwhat as the aim of today

the manuscript reports a new study focused on bone marrow stem cell bmscs derived exosomesloaded hydrogel effect on cartilage regeneration in this work an ecmmimicking gelatin methacryloyl gelma hydrogel loaded with bmscsderived exosomes was used for cartilage regeneration in intro results revealed that gelma hydrogel has good biocompatibility with a d porous structure exhibiting good carrier characteristics for exosomes and further demonstrated that bmscsexos had a significant effect on promoting chondrocyte ecm production and chondrocyte proliferation and the gelma hydrogel could enhance this effect through a sustainedrelease effect in vivo experiments showed that gelmaexos promoted cartilage regeneration in rat joint defects and the synthesis of related cartilage matrix proteins therefore i recommend accepting the article after the study received a minor revisionin intro and in vivo should be

as an important factor of economic growth human capital has always been the focus of research by economists in various countries with the development of economic growth theory and the increase of data availability the research on human capital is no longer limited to educational human capital health as a form of human capital as important as education is an important part of individual participation in productive labor and education this paper constructs a tripartite dsge model that includes homogeneous residents firms producing undifferentiated products and the government intervening in economic activities through taxation and under the optimal decisionmaking of residents manufacturers and the government the tripartite economic entities can achieve the optimal the paper is good research however the article still has deficiencies in the following aspects

behind the rapid development of global economy almost all countries in the world are facing some environmental problems this paper analyzes and studies on the background that chinas economy has changed from a highspeed growth stage to a highquality development stage with the rising labor costs rising energy prices tightening resource elements and declining marginal efficiency of capital the content is rich the experimental data is sufficient and the results are demonstrated the article can be used as a reference document put forward several questions about its content please actively revise the reply and the revised article will be more complete what kind of research background is this paper really written under please answer what formula in the article does please answer what are the basic steps of

it is suggested that the structure of this article be clearly listed in the introduction so as to give readers a clear initial impressionin the literature review there is no summary of existing research what gaps exist in the existing research on the impact of internet finance on regional development should be summarizedthe definition of the var model should be explained when it first appearsin model the three sequences pfina pprod and pview of var model are stationary and the characteristic root does not exceed the range of unit circle which further indicates that var model is stationary what is the purpose of using impulse response functions to dynamically analyze these three variablesaccording to the specific data in table table and table what opinions can be inferredfacts have

the manuscript with title model selection and identification of osteoporosis risk factors in women to improve their healthcare has explored different risk factors for osteoporosis in women and proposed a prediction model to predict the risk of osteoporosis the study is based on a casecontrol study in pakistan goodness of fit of the proposed model is tested using hosmer and lemeshow test statistic also r measures for logistic regression are used i have following concerns about the manuscript following are some of my concerns that should be addressedmajorain the abstract the last two sentences it is possible to diagnose timely detection and treatment of osteoporosis are more or less related to some concluding remarks these two sentences should be removed and some important resultsfindings of analysis eg auc

as paper conforms to the theme of the journal it has certain application value it is suggested to arrange and publish appropriate to the requirements of the publishing house

the findings suggested that early rhabilitation nursing for patients with femoral neck fracture after upper pulp joint replacement is of little significance in promoting postoperative joint function i think its very interesting but there are some minor issues that need further modificationin the result part of this paper the result part is too simple please add indicatorsplease by a statement of the authors presented at the end of the articlethe analysis and discussion methods are too simple please simplify themwe think both title and abstract are too simple please simplify the content of both title and abstractin a word this research needs to be further modified to meet the requirements of scientific research papers i would be afraid to review it again

each paper developed a new theoretical solution for the expansion of over flat clay the research content of the manuscript is substantial the framework derivation is relatively strict and the necessary verification of the new theoretical solution is carry out in general this article was innovative logical and interesting the following comments may help to support the work of the authors through the section of introduction the authors did make a necessary summary and understanding of the current research status and then lead to the research content of this article in line whats the difficulty of test and also in line whats the meaning of cptu as to section why this case was selected whats the consideration the conclusion part is too simple and the percentage is come

the manuscript titled grilled nux vomica relieves muskinduced experimental autoimmune myasthenia which through blocking the jakstat signaling pathway showed that grilled nux vomica could prove beneficial in the management of myasthenia gravis the authors through bioinformatics approach regarding involvement of jakstat i have following suggestions for effective improvement of english manuscript all in silico methods should materials properly described need parameters be mentioned so that it is easy for the readers to follow up please provide details such catalogue numbers of antibodies used how were tissue samples sliced when assay was ethics approval developed for the animal study please mention it jakstat pathway need be discussed in relation to the improvement of this study

exploring the association of polymorphisms of tnf rs rs vegf rs and vegfr rs with earlyonset preeclampsia eope in china is novel but there are some problems in the paper i the abstract is a summary of an article to reflect the main content of the article so the abstract part needs to be concise and brief some unnecessary content can be deleted in the abstract of this paper and it is suggested to seriously modify and refine the main content of the article ii as the beginning of the paper the introduction briefly introduces the writing background and purpose of the paper puts forward the reality of research requirements as well as the work and research overview of predecessors in relevant fields and explains the relationship between

the manuscript presents an experimental subject on the electrochemical micromachining process parameters optimization of aluminium metal matrix composites interesting results regarding the most suitable edm parameters are presented the study topic is interesting and results are hopeful of being publishedhowever improvements are necessary when it comes to scientific language and the overall quality of presentation some context on the applications of the mmc used in this material should be briefly included in the literature reviewmore comments on this experimental procedure could be found ie data details illustrated with workpiece measurements of output parameterssome minor aspectsmeaning of the viktor abbreviation should not be explained in the abstract instead the scientists are encouraged to create list of abbreviations please note mcdm should refer via multi criterion decision making

data generation is one of the important contents in the field of artificial intelligence the author focuses on data generation using generative adversarial network with twin normalization this research has important application value in order to solve the problem that gan are prone to mode collapse when generating high resolution a method of data generation using generative adversarial network with twin normalization was proposed when generating highresolution images it generally needs a large number of training samples when the high resolution images are generated with a small number of samples it is easy to produce the phenomenon of mode collapse that is the samples generated by gan are single this method introduces two normalization methods namely gradient normalization and attention normalization experimental results show that the proposed method

in introduction section the originality of the paper should explain in more detail which helps better understand the contribution of the paperthe theme seems interesting but the paper is neither wellstructured nor wellwritten and quite hard to understandwhat is the superiority of the author used woa to train the multilayer perceptron neural network mlpnn the dissemination of the results should be further explaineddid you make tuning for the proposed fuzzy woa algorithms parameters and how did you choose the current values to train the multilayer perceptron neural network how do you make sure that the comparison is fairthere are many related works on the woa algorithms and its applications references should be added in the related works and to make the introduction part enrich such as doijifs digital

reviewer the efficient perioperative nursing measures can accelerate the patients postoperative recovery and this study provides an efficient perioperative intervention for patients undergoing laparoscopic myomectomy however there are still some shortcomings to be solved in this paper as followsthe authors should mention the research background in the abstract of the article otherwise readers will be confused about the current statementmore references related to abdominal distention after cesarean section in should be added in the introduction to support some viewpoints of the articlecould you discuss the future work plan in full consideration of the limitations of this studyit is hoped that the authors should polish the sentences carefully to ensure the quality of this article how was the sample size calculated in this study please explainplease add the contributions

author attempts to characterize the role of the identified key gene ambp could be an effective diagnostic indicator and treatment target in colorectal cancer liver metastasis manuscript is well written and explained can be accepted with the following comments below are few comments to worth considerit is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammarspelling and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the readercan medication combinations be chosen for future clinical therapy based on this point and what are the consequences for protein modeling and drug design in the futurewhat are the implications of the biomarkers discovered in this work for future medication design and protein mimicsthe

a the word count of this abstract is too long and needs to be rewritten the abstract mainly reflects the background research purpose and method of the paper as well as the experimental resultsb in the introduction authors should specifically highlight the research background and current problems for example what kind of negative impact does a unreasonable network structure bring authors should then elicit their own research and questions that can be addressedc there are many grammatical errors in the paper the author should check the full text carefully and make correctionsd what the red lines in figure and figure represent the author should clarify further in the texte the paper lacks an introduction to related big data technologies how this paper uses big data techniques to improve

in this paper the intelligent computer speech recognition method is used to study the intelligent clustering method of keyword groups in english language and the detection of frequencyhopping english speech waveform is completed by using cnn to automatically extract features this article has good creativity and has certain research value but there are certain flaws in the details of the article the flaws are as follows the dilation operation is an operation to find the local maximum specifically what is it like hough transform is a feature extraction technique that detects objects with a specific shape through a voting algorithm and how is the process set up in the entire feature analysis process and how does it complete the frequency hopping signal detection rpn is a regional generation

update the discussion of the section numerical verification and discussionequations to have been poorly written please revise them carefullyuse the correct punctuation mark on the papermake the references appear to be identical by modifying their styles to matchcorrect the following sentences carefully athe electrical system and the mechanical system form the basic system of selfexcited vibration under certain conditions which will trigger the system to appear selfexcited torsional vibration under the parameter perturbationbthe nonstationary process of electromechanical coupling vibration in the system will affect the dynamic and steadystate characteristics of the system and even major failurescthe shaft system connecting the permanent magnet synchronous motor to the gearing system and the shaft system connecting the output part of the gearing system to the crushing drum can be simplified to

in this paper a finite element analysis model based on mri data is proposed the humancomputer interaction is realized through the elements of situational awareness to train and predict the users psychological state for many times knee cartilage is modeled as a poroelastic material by finite element analysis to study the interaction between the fluid and solid matrix of the meniscus under loading conditions the research value is very high but there are some small errors in the research and analysis that need to be revised to ensure the rigor of the articlea according to the results of this paper with the increase of load the peak stress value of knee cartilage and meniscus also increased continuously can the process of getting results be supplementedb mri imaging techniques

anlotinib for platinumresistant recurrent ovarian cancer in china a realworld clinical experiencethe following minor comments recommendations for further improving the quality of this paper the results of recent clinical studies have been made prime motivation for this research how many cases are studied in medical context it is better to add description about them the paper needs some kind of grammatical revision and elaboration in a few sections i also suggest the author should check the language more carefully in order to avoid error and grammar error check the paper characteristics especially the abstract part the format or the references must be tailored describe the basic concepts related to the safety assessment explain the importance of fig in the paperthe one might consider proofreading the work a few

in summary the authors reveal the study on mechanism of action of mirp in hypoxiainduced pulmonary hypertension the topic of the research article is definitely of high importance in the development of novel therapeutic strategies in treating hypoxiainduced pulmonary hypertensionthe main points to discuss of the study arethe english of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission we strongly suggest thatyou obtain assistance from a colleague who is wellversed in english or whose native language isenglishi recommend that authors rewrite the abstract to focus on context purpose methodology main findings and conclusions please add a sentence about the need for researchthere is no description of the methods section in the summaryare there any studies on mirna and ph in the current research or studies related to the lung

technical explanation of this article is very chinese please find someone who write in native english to revise translate and polish itabstract methods please add specific departments in addition the purpose of that abstract is to succinctly tell others the purpose of the article and the research does so research is recommended to know that content the purpose of the preface is to introduce the current status of the disease the author lacks the content of nursing and the content of nursing is also lacking why choose this nursing method and what is the impact of its clinical evidence that traditional nursing measures have little effect during the recovery and control of the diseasep should be in italics and please check the full text and delete unnecessary spaces

references need to be elaborated separately all references need to be discussed separately all equations should be numbered properly and uniformly the authors used both et al and only reference numbers for citation they are suggested to follow any one method uniformly figures need to be clearly cited with subdivisions in discussion section analysis made based on references the authors need to analyze their results with proper justification

at different my countrys logistics and distribution are laborintensive informatization and lowtech which leads to the first in distribution efficiency and it is important to obtain effective resources rationally therefore this paper proposes to maximize the efficiency of logistics distribution through the assistance of the internet of things sustainable by improving the quantum search algorithm to solve the corresponding problem i think it is possible but the following questions should also be answered the abstract part of an article should play a general role in the article so that scholars can quickly understand the practical purpose research process research results study of the article through the abstract therefore this abstract should supplement the improvement process general introduction the research content of course thesis is the research on concerned

i find serious methodological caveats in how the authors approached addressing their study objectives the manuscript displays a lack of coherence and congruence of thought most importantly confusing causal effects with correlation casts doubt on the integrity of the methods reported by the authors it is for these reasons that i am basing my decision

i argue that the researchers have brought about a new approach for the restoration of single lens captured images a simple lens imaging restoration model based on a multiscale network is proposed and a dataset is constructed experiments show that the proposed approach achieves better results but the quality of the paper should be enhanced i have some questions listed as followsi find that some citations are not correct the researchers should check the citations and make corrections what are the structure of the layers in the reconstruction part of the network for example the number of feature maps and the kernel size in the dataset part what is a checkerboard image how is corner detection performed a flowchart may be clearer to explain how to obtain the

your manuscript evaluates the application effect of fullview risk precontrol management in nursing combined with comfortable nursing in operating room nursing for patients under hysteroscopic surgery this study is novel it is a topic of interest to the researchers in the related areas but the paper needs very significant improvement before acceptance for publication my detailed comments are as followswhat is allview risk precontrol management do you mean fullview risk precontrol management in nursingin the title of this articlehysteroscopic operating room nursing is an inappropriate expression do you mean operating room nursing for patients under hysteroscopic surgerythe definition of grouping in the method is a bit confusing the author defines groups b c then a please define them in the order of acthe authors mentioned the selfrating anxiety

paper needs to be improved in following manners this is a nice study however following questions are necessary to be answered before further processingplease state more about salient findings in abstract shortlythis would be good to use units in the nomenclature where applicableplease use updated and recent papers in the literature review to give more sense to the reader conclusions could be more specific and to the point i would suggest to look and think about itplease elaborate the novel aspect of your work at the end of the introductionfigures and tables could be rechecked once for resolution and correctnessin the abstract please provide the insight from your results sectionsthe recent and relevant publications may update some bibliography and fortify the text such as bioconvection reinerrivlin nanofluid flow

in order to explore how english interpreting can achieve automatic scoring the author proposes an automatic scoring model for english interpreting based on semantic scoring this method recommends key technical problems and solutions based on information represented by semantic scoring and explores the research on how interpreting can achieve automatic scoring of oral examinations the dissertation expresses the viewpoints clearly discusses comprehensively the language is plain and concise and is easy to understand but lacks arguments please revise as requiredthe thesis statement is clear straight to the point and directly into the question but the logic is not rigorous enough please revise as requiredwith the development of recent years the automatic grading system for questions that specify the content to be answered by candidates such as reading questions

create some changes to the general perspective of the nurses role in the gi bill endoscopy section sufficiently improve the abstract section to meet them fully understandable correct you following sentence furthermore help centers for disease control predicts that by the number of colonoscopy events will outnumber the number of endoscopists available add the novelty of your work and the introduction section refernces and are not correctly cited please check them please enhance the concluding section language clearly ascertained a variety of grammatical errors during this paper please correct them the abstract section needs to honestly be improved with a few sentences delivered in a clean and succinct manner the forms of references are inconsistent maintain a regular reference style the textual content does now no longer cite

with order to explore how english interpreting can achieve automatic scoring the author proposes an automatic scoring model for english interpreting based on semantic scoring this method recommends more technical problems and solutions based on information represented by semantic scoring and explores the research on how interpreting can achieve automatic scoring of oral examinations the dissertation expresses the viewpoints clearly discusses comprehensively the language is plain and concise and is easy can describe but lacks arguments please revise as requiredthe thesis statement should clear straight to the conclusion and directly into the question but the definition is not rigorous enough please revise as need the development of recent assessments the automatic grading system for questions that specify the content to be answered by candidates such important reading questions

the idea of this paper is certainty worth publishing it is within the scope technically sound experimentally and analytically validated but at the same time it has some flaws that need careful addressing i have a number of comments and it would be appreciated if the author can address them properly

this paper studies the production mode of new sensor media under the background of big data builds a media production model based on intelligent sensors and also conducts an example simulation of environmental news production and communication analysis through the example simulation it can be seen that the intelligent sensor media production model has the full process production capacity of media through the detailed reading of the paper it is also found that many aspects need to be improved the specific opinions are as followssummary the abstract does not analyze the production mode of sensor media which is the key research content of the paper and needs to be supplemented the summary part lacks case simulation and evaluation model of heat index which needs to be supplementedintroduction the

this paper presents an indepth study and analysis of digital english speech transmission and translation using a wireless sensor approach this translation practice report divides the terms appearing in the original text into two categories iot english terms with existing authorized translations and iot english terms without authorized translations followed by the investigation and analysis work for the terms with standardized translations the focus is on screening the industry fields selecting standardized translations and summarizing the translation methods of the terms from three aspects abbreviated words compound words and semitechnical words to guide terminology translation for the terms without standardized translations based on the terminology characteristics and existing terminology translation methods direct translation method splittranslation combination method notranslation method and combination of multiple translation methods are proposed and

the authors in this paper obtain expressions for evaluating various distancebased topological indices including the wiener index and mostar index of the molecular graphs of the chiral pamam and pamam anthracene moieties dendrimers i suggest removing the simple calculations from the proofs and adding some logical reasoning yet for example from theorem also would like to suggest making the caption of the figure more precise for example the captions of figures seem to be awkward and some detail should be added there also it would be nice to cite some existing survey papers and recent articles on the considered distancebased topological indices for example httpsmatchpmfkgacrselectronicversionsmatchnmatchnpdfhttpsdoiorgejmhttpsdoiorgjamcfinally i would like to suggest rechecking the whole paper for typos and errors especially the proofs

through the research on the remote monitoring system of civil engineering health status information from the perspective of network communication technology it is shown that the network communication technology perspective is practical and effective in the remote monitoring of civil engineering health status information it can effectively improve the safety and stability of the project and provide timely guidance for construction and operation but the details of the article still need to be polishedfthe article cites the research work and achievements of many scholars on the health status information remote monitoring system but what is the difference between these studies and the system proposed in this articlefnetwork communication remote monitoring technology is divided into two categories namely networkbased communication monitoring method and hostbased communication monitoring method what is

the paper is explained well in the introduction the authors have to explain the difference between single level threshold and multi level threshold need of stratification need to be explained in the proposed methodology elaborate the architecture figure should be redrawn with high quality tools conclusion should contain the future scope of the work

this paper focused on the id algorithm and the c algorithm analyzed the formulation of the digital marketing strategy of the chaowan brand and used the decision tree classification method to analyze the purchasing behavior of consumers and in the process of digital marketing the economic benefits brought by the decision tree classification method to the chaowan brand were experimentally analyzed among them the test methods are relatively complete and instructive and there are still some shortcomings that can be improved in the following aspectsa the principle of the id algorithm to select the best splitting attribute is a heuristic method what are the disadvantages of this heuristicb on the basis of inheriting the advantages of the original algorithm a new idea was proposed in the selection of

in the introduction part of the article the elaboration level of selenos is confusing and the logic is unclear it is recommended to modify the conclusion part of the manuscript should be comprehensively described of the characteristics in this research and hopefully it can be improved it is recommended that the hierarchy and logic of the entire paragraph be reconsidered and that the analysis work is independent and the results are simple can you cite some biological mechanisms or experimental support results such as the result that selenos overexpression plays an important role in mediating immune escape if u can add some vivo assay i think this manuscript will get a good revsion a few grammatic errors exist verb tense abbreviations incomplete sentences in current version of manuscript

in this study brain tumor patients were selected for retrospective analysis to explore the impact of perioperative quality care combined with empowering psychological care on the prognosis of brain tumor patients and to provide effective nursing measures for postoperative rehabilitation but there are still some problemsthe abstract should focus on reflecting what is new in the literature and the points that the author has placed special emphasis on on reflecting useful information that the reader needs and on deleting what has become common knowledge in the subject areakeywords high quality care empowering psychological care prognosis brain tumor ask the authors to reorganize these keywords the contents of this section of edynamic psychological care should be summarized at the endpoor language expression skills many sentences have no subject and

reviewer there are a large number of formatting errors in the manuscript which need to be carefully revised the p value should have a uniform number of decimal places there is an error in this sentence a review by ye et al of randomised controlled studies of cognitive behavioural therapy conducted in recent years with breast cancer patients found that the combination of cognitive behavioural therapy was more effective than conventional treatment in reducing depression in breast cancer patients and that it reduced the use of antidepressants the abstract needs to be revised for example the first part should introduce the research purpose or background at least do not use the first person in the description of methods and materials in the reference list a more coherent format

the fusion at multisensor data is mainly to eliminate the redundancy and contradiction caused by the observation process of different sensors use the characteristics of the information to supplement and synthesize the information so the to provide the system with more effective information and data provide a visually powerful decisionmaking basis for intelligent systems the article has some shortcomingskeywords include four keywords multi sensor information fusion double vision industrial robot and intelligent grasping but the keywords in large part are not completethe test results show that the use that the latest multisensor data fusion and binocular vision technology can make a industrial robot more flexible and accurate users complete the grasping operation with the accuracy rate of but there is not overview of the dataat present the number

this paper to explore the application value of selfmanagement manual combined with case management superiority model in postoperative management of nasopharyngeal carcinoma after radiotherapy but the application of cloud computing technology can solve this problem to a greater extentits a nice work but there are some questions that make me wonderit is recommended to reorganize the abstract to make it concise and clearplease give a summary description of the contents of section before the beginning of the paragraphin section basic information are these schemes designed by the author himself or reference othersin the methods section the author describes the method of this article in detail but confused me i suggest the author give the scheme of this article using sentencesit is suggested to make a detailed analysis of

aiming at the problem that the blind estimation of the characteristic parameters for frequencyhopping orchestral timbre signals using the spectrogram method has better realtime performance but it is insufficient to balance the antinoise and estimation accuracy this paper proposes a frequencyhopping orchestral timbre based from the timefrequency distribution map signal feature parameter blind estimation assumptions under the subsections provided by the paper the authors showed a good argumentation logic and compared with the existing research the research content described in this paper has certain technical advantages regarding the details of this paper my comments are as follows according to the initial expression of the spectrogram method what is the specific calculation amount we set the threshold to distinguish what frequencyhopping orchestral timbre signal from the noise orchestral timbre

the structure and order of the full text is smooth and the full text is compact however there are still shortcomings in the analysis of part of the content of the article please make corrections the introduction part of the article is wellfounded the content is complete and the structure is complete however this paper uses cloud computing of the internet of things as an analysis method for researching financial big data intelligent service systems and uses relevant algorithms to analyze experimental data to obtain more scientific conclusions this sentence is more consistent with the innovative content of the article and does not need to appear in the article the relevant part of the article is complete and the relevant research on the financial service system is in

this article describes the technique and the threshold parameters for diaphragm extension during natural forced and voluntary validation several research have examined the thresholds for diaphragmatic expansion sniff diaphragm respiration forced breathing and voluntary sniffing the research included people of various ages and genders it is important to note that sonographic testing is quite accurate when it comes to detecting muscle function according to the manufacturer sonographic examination may be able to detect muscle function based on a simple visual image the problems are listed belowthe english of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission please have someone competent in the english language and the subject matter of your paper goes over the paper and corrects itto add more details of the method in experiments

this paper is a metaanalysis of the pathological factors of tendon lesions of long head of biceps brachii with different characteristicsglad to review your paper the ideas involved in the paper are refreshing to me but there are still some problems as followsthe abstract of this paper is weakrelated backgroundmethodspurposes and conclusions should be included in this partit is for a large number of figures used in this article and there is no relevant textual representation for them it is recommended to complete the content of this partfive studies reported the main lhbt lesion sites in long head of the biceps tendinopathy what is the studies mentioned in this sentencethis paper mentions the related methods of many related scholars what are the similarities and differences between themthis study

the author has to maintain the consistency of words in whole manuscript related to the cardiac diseases strong proof reading is required for reader understandingmathematical equations seems missingfigures and tables need revision with high quality portfolio

in the paper efficacy and safety of novel radical hysterectomy and pelvic lymph node dissection on patients with early cervical cancer this paper is almost very good and i suggest to the authors please change it a little different according with my comments what are given i note with the following section comparison of anal exhaust time and postsurgery hospitalization across both cohorts pay close attention to english phrases in the text thoroughly check them and enhance your english writingwhat are the control cohort patients please definecan you define pelvic lymph node dissectionpresent the theoretical foundation for the investigation in a clear manner using current research referencesthe researchers should carefully include information about the researchs context id like you to pay attention to it because its missing a

this study was toexplore the application of doublelayer suture and singlelayer suture combined with hemlock clamp in partial nephrectomyeighty tumor patients who underwent laparoscopic partial nephrectomy in our hospital from january to october were prospectively enrolled as the research objects the patients were assigned into control group and study group by digital table method with cases in each group in the control group the wound was sutured by doublelayer suture suturing basal and cortical wounds in partial nephrectomy and in the study group the wound was sutured by singlelayer suture suturing only basal wounds combined with hemlock clamp to hemostatic anastomotic wound the operative indexes and postoperative recovery were comparedfor patients undergoing laparoscopic partial nephrectomy singlelayer suture combined with hemlockclamp to hemostatic anastomotic wound can shorten the time

in this work the authors study the oscillation behavior for the third order differential equations with several delays and with plaplacian operator they use a sharper estimates of poisitive solitions by using an iterative method they also check for oscillation of all solutions even if the known findings relevant to this fail to applythe paper is well organised and the results are true and interesting i just offer to change a typo and add some extra papers to cite typointroductionline artical should be articlepapers should be citedcampt m secondorder differential operators with nonlocal ventcels boundary conditions constructive mathematical analysis doi cmasenasukh j saejung s a note on the stability of some functional equations on certain groupoids constructive mathematical analysis doi cmafinally i suggest minor revisionregards

commentsstate of art should be given clear in the introduction partwhat are the features extracted using glcm in the proposed methodspecify the flow of hog in feature extractionfigure legends should contain enough detail to describe the figure without making the reader refer to the textgive the detailed performance metrics in the results section need to be explained with how the result was achieved in proper description

in her opinion following revisions are required to make the manuscript acceptable for publicationthe first sentence of abstract needs to be modified as for decades gufusheng capsules gfscs have been used to treat osteonecrosis of anterior femoral nerve onfh however its mechanism for action remains largely unclearelisa should be written in uppercase lettersthis sentence in brief still unclear please rewrite it the results of qrtpcr and western blot assay revealed that gfsc updownregulated the expression of onfhrelated targets similarly sentence provided a new direction for our development of alternative drugs and the treatment of onfh should be changed to provided a new direction for the development of novel drugs for the elimination of onfhplease confirm if the numerical values related to onfh statistics is correct the reference

this manuscript is about teachers attitude about inclusive education in nigeria overall it is an adequate written manuscript however there are some unclear or missing information which the authors need to elaborate or add kindly refer to the comments in the attachment

after reading the article as a whole the following questions and comments are available for you to answer and revisewhat kind of technology is the smart sensor mentioned in the article what are the advantageswhat is a smart sensor network what are the main nodes in it please give a brief overviewwhat are the applications for different sensors please describe it brieflywhen designing the packaging of cultural innovation products what is mainly used to achieve please elaborate according to the articlethe description of the design concept of china red is not detailed enough in this paper please explain the importance of packaging designsome references in this article are repeated and the picture serial number does not correspond please modify or adjustthe references in the rows of the article

this is a paper of clinical significance which is of certain significance to guide the medication of patients with hepatitis b the study found that entecavir treatment of chronic hepatitis b patients with mild renal impairment at baseline had no significant effect on patients egfr levels and early virological response did not affect egfr levels however there are still some problems in the article that need to be paid attention to by the author the three line table is the standard format of medical paper form the author should be requested to standardize and modify form form form form and form in the study outcome section the author provided the simplified mdrd formula is there any reference for this formula if so please provide the corresponding references and

with the rapid development of computer operation digital sub image processing technology has developed rapidly it has very important applications in peoples daily life and hightech fields in order to improve the quality of badminton teaching a new badminton teaching algorithm based on discrete differential algorithm is proposed application research on standardized teaching of badminton for college students the basic principle of discrete numerical differentiation is expounded through literature comparison and analysis the basic process of traditional numerical discrete differential algorithm is discussed the following comments need to addedkey words should be keywordssince the middle of the last century many scholars at home and abroad revise similar expressions and international publications cannot have subjective national expressionsthe most important difficulty encountered in numerical differentiation is the discomfort of the

in the introduction section please include the general paper layoutuse the same citation formatensure that the references are all expressed in all same styleequation is fuzzy please more is necessary to give more details about this drawing method maybe a separate section without mathematicsthe original section is very disappointing

this paper explores the impact of mnemonic symbols on consumers of nontraditional products from the perspective of computeraided and perceptual memory and proposes an effective way to design nontraditional products would better meet users emotional needs and resonate with them a very novel study but there are still some problemsthe abstract of the article should have the following method the author and the author is invited to carefully sort one chapter nixing pottery nontraditional marketing creative product specific ideas the lack of specific design please author to addin chapter it is analyzed from the perspective of nixing pottery culture use please ask the author to put together the analysis carefullyas the conclusion of another article plays a very important role within the text but the conclusion in the

this paper proposes a crosstheoretical model but uses bayesian linear prediction and oneway anova to analyze the stage state of college students physical exercise behavior and finds it law the research value is very high but there are many small errors on the research and analysis that need to been revised by ensure the rigor of the articlea the introduction part describes the meaning of the whole article and expresses the influence of physical exercise on their own emotions of contemporary college population and what is the significance of the existence of a crosstheoretical modelb to study the developmental stages and process of college students behavior change through physical exercise and psychological emotional management the innovative method used here from analysis human variance is to find out the

the suspension system of a vehicle is a protective lattice made up of dampers and springs for stress absorption the traditional vehicle suspension system have many limitations such that it produces noise and vibration which disturbed the overall comfort and stability of the vehicle the aim of this paper is to overcome these limitations by using the variable step size algorithm to improve the filtered least mean square algorithm and optimize the adaptive algorithm the concept of this paper is excellent however the author has to revise the paper and i have a few questions that i require the author to answerfirst of all the authors names are written in an irrelevant manner that seems to be very awkward therefore the author should need to write it in

the authors presented an interesting in vivo analysis to assess the water quality along the banks of buriganga river by monitoring the changes in haematological biochemical and histological parameters caused in healthy rats due to the consumption generally the paper is well organized and the result analysis is comprehensive and convincing many components of the research are very interesting this paper should be of interest to readers of the journal of environmental and public health i have several comments below that the author may be addressed in an effort of minor revision authors used group a and group b in materials and methods section while group and group were used latterlegend in figure and other figures and tables i suggest using group agroup b or normal water tap

the manuscript by sicong huang et al downregulation of mcfl promoted the ferroptosis of hepatocellular carcinoma cells through pikmtor pathway in a rhoarac dependent manner demonstrated that targeting mcfl might be a promising method to overcome sorafenibresistance through inducing ferroptosis in hcc although authors have done many experiments to support their findings there are some limitations as mentioned below the authors should do more experiments to detect the proliferative activity such as edu the authors should do animal experiments to support their findings the grammar and word errors need to be corrected thoroughly in the manuscript

the abstract pointed out the effect of periodontal intervention on the levels of four inflammatory factors the experimental data fully demonstrated that periodontal intervention could reduce the level of inflammatory factors but the data of the control group and the experimental group were not listed for comparison in the first related work the effect of periodontal intervention on tumor necrosis factor was analyzed but the effect of decreasing the concentration of tumor necrosis factor was not stated in the eighth related work a metaanalysis of periodontal intervention on serum inflammation in patients was studied but the results of the metaanalysis were not stated in the first formula the processing formula of the artificial neuron is described and the formula is neat but the meaning of the variable u

the process of language learning involves the transfer of mother tongue which shows that the thinking habits of mother tongue will affect the learning of english native language transfer behaviors are mainly positive and negative transfer behaviors negative transfer behavior can have a negative impact on english learning which needs to be overcome this study uses deep learning methods to study the impact of mother tongue transfer behavior on english this study could be considered for publication in this journal it only introduces that mpcnn and gru have high accuracy in studying the influence of mother tongue transfer behavior on english teaching and it should be explained by some data it illustrates the significance of deep learning methods for studying native language transfer behaviors for english learning and

effect and mechanism of dragons blood on wound healing of patients with stress hand injuryreportthe following are the review comments of the article effect and mechanism of dragons blood on wound healing of patients with stress hand injury according to the article some suggestions are put forward and the author is requested to revise them in detail so as to improve the quality of the article and promote the smooth publication of the articleabstract in the method it should be explained how many cases there are in total and how to group them according to the current description is too simplistic moreover comparative clinical efficacy is too general which should be subdivided into comparative clinical efficiency and comparative serological indicators it is suggested to expand this partabstract in

correct the following mistakes carefully what is the ma methylation modification kindly explain in a few wordsplease make sure that the styles of all the references are consistent references and do not have styles that are similar to the othersalso define the analysis of ma methylation modificationsthe introduction should describe the articles structurei suggest to the authors please define the anatomical structure morphogenesiscorrect a few of the incomplete sentences in the abstract sectiondifferential ma methylation modification of these genes may lead to dysregulation of signaling pathways ultimately affecting human physiological processes correct this sentencedescribe the researchs methodology in the introductions final paragraphsome of the acronyms are not defined kindly define all of them

pik akt signaling is common and involved in many physilogical and pathological processes in this paper the authors prove that its restriction could ould ameliorate autotomy behavior of rats with phantom limb pain which maybe provide a new idea for the treatment of plp i think this paper could be considered for pubilication besides whether this finding was drugable and its clinical utilization should be discussed in the part of discussion

this paper mainly studies the clinical observation of negative pressure wound therapy npwt combined with fibroblast growth factor fgf in the treatment of deep ii degree burn in children it is an innovative and applied discussion topic with certain foresight here are some of my modificationsdeep second degree burn is the difficulty of burn surgical treatment i suggest that the difficulties of traditional treatment methods can be addedplease introduce negative pressure wound therapy npwt in more detailplease list the inclusion criteria and exclusion criteria more clearly preferably please explain the reasons and relationship between the observed indicators of wound healing skin time dressing change times laboratory results pain and family satisfactionplease pay attention to the grammar and vocabulary of the full text

the paper a trial of deep neural networkbased mri method for pediatric heart diseases has some technical issues that are discussed belowaplease describe the thoroughly advantages with color doppler ultrasound technology in clinical diagnosisbsince equation has been incorrectly worded i urged the editor to restate it accurately and in mathematical notation information on the research should also be included in the introduction you should pay close attention to it because it omits many significant elementsdthe suggested manuscript has a few grammatical mistakes kindly correctewhy the malformations are divided into categoriesfdefine all the process in detail the medical image datagrequire the full name of the svm and mlphthe abstract has to be revised to include significant findingsithe form final paragraph should include this summary of the previous accomplishments

in this study brain tumor patients were selected for retrospective analysis to explore the impact the perioperative spiritual care combined with empowering psychological care on the prognosis of brain tumor patients and to provide effective nursing measures for postoperative rehabilitation although there are still some problemsthe abstract should focus on reflecting what is new in the literature and many points that the author has placed special emphasis on on reflecting useful lessons that the patient needs and for deleting what has become common knowledge in the subject areakeywords high quality care empowering mental care prognosis brain tumor ask the authors to reorganize these keywords the contents of this section describes edynamic psychological care should be summarized at the endpoor language expression a many sentences have no subject and

i would recommend this paper for publication after considering the following major comments the authors have written the structured abstract i would suggest being concise and writing the whole abstract in a single paragraph a literature review with a separate section needs to be added to cover the work done so far i would also suggest a comparison table for the stateoftheartwork for the prediction of the expression of target genes in cells the authors used panglaodb software but the details of the said software are not provided the current manuscript format is unclear and difficult to track i would suggest to use the specific journal format while revising the work conclusion section is missing neither future work is found in the manuscript all the references need to

the author uses big data and artificial neural network to study the chinese dependency syntax analysis method which improves the accuracy of chinese binary relationship analysis it is a good article however the technical aspects of the scheme still have the following problems paper has the advantages a simple format flexible labeling and flexible application and possibly broad application prospects i mean the author can study the application of dependency syntax analysis the object of syntactic analysis is to automatically analyze the sentence structure related to a given grammar i hope the author can make a more complete description of organizational role of syntactic languages then obtain the knowledge required for syntactic analysis from the training data i hope the author can make a more complete description of

the author compared with the two groups the effective rate of the study group was higher p after treatment the hihss scores lessened the hihss scores of the study group at discharge month and months after discharge were lower p the method in this paper provides theoretical support and solutions for practitioners which is novel however the author needs to solve the following problemsit is suggested to simplify the abstract to make it clearit is suggested to give a summary at the end of the introduction which is the method and contribution of this paperwhat method of statistics is used in this paper and it is suggested to give specific contentplease refer to the requirements of the journal for the names of the figures in the paperthe color

commentsthis paper studied the adsorption characteristics of multicomponent alkanes in kaolinite slits based on molecular dynamics simulation method compared with conventional experimental methods this research method has the advantages of low cost and visualization the article is also innovative in this study a kaolinite slit model with both polar and nonpolar surfaces was chosen to simulate nanoscale shale pores it can not only observe the adsorption characteristics of alkanes in nanopores but also study the effect of polar and nonpolar walls on the adsorption of alkanes competitive adsorption between alkanes was studied by building different models of alkane components the research ideas of the article are clear the research methods and parameters are detailed the research content is novel the research results have great reference value for shale

the investigators found a gene known as ptk that is associated with breast cancer and is strongly expressed in breast cancer patients in order to validate the diagnostic value of ptk expression roc tests were carried out the results of these tests indicated an auc that was greater than the researchers found a connection between high levels of ptk expression and having a favorable pr er and her status according to the findings of a survival analysis patients who had a high level of ptk expression had a shorter overall survival time than those who had a low level of ptk expression this was the case for both patients with high and low levels of ptk expression in addition to this the researchers presented evidence that an immunosuppressive

the article only compares machine learning algorithms do the authors consider conducting experimental comparisons in deep learning algorithms to further validate the high performance of the model proposed in this paperplease ask the author to add an analytical elaboration of the classification performance assessment in section to increase the readability of the articleat the end of the paper it is suggested that the authors add a comparison of icons so that the reader can more clearly and visually observe the advantages of the method proposed in this paperintrusion detection based research has always been a research hotspot and the authors are encouraged to expand on their current research on related work for the selected features shown in section did the authors consider giving a feature description

nsclc accounts for to of all lung cancer patients of which to are diagnosed at some advanced level and only to have the opportunity to receive surgery for this population even with radical treatment resection of patients can eventually fail due to recurrence and distant metastasis so the topic of this article is very meaningful but there are still some issues worth mentioning in the content of the articlein the introductory section the author mention the need for a clinical role in predicting the efficacy of postoperative chemotherapy in nonsmall cell lung cancer patients the author did not analyze the research status of cypb gene polymorphismin the introduction section of the cypb gene polymorphism the authors mentioned that the gene p and cypb genes and their structures are

on this basis this article first has a deep understanding of the relative status of comprehensive budget management at domestic and abroad and analyzes the innovations and shortcomings introduced this article in a analysis process understands the mobile internet integrates budget management and integrates information for budget application prove the need for an integrated information network for budget management in the mobile internet environment and analyze the feasibility of implementation to support small and mediumsized enterprisesthe following are the issues that appear in the articlea in the methodology section section describes the research content of the article but original title of the section is either vague and the question research content does not explain the main content of the sectionb in the introduction the article analyzes projects background

under the precondition that the country strongly supports sports this paper evaluates the quality of physical education in view of the fact that indoor sports are not restricted by natural conditions so indoor sports are becoming more and more popular this research has good practical significance and reference value please accept the employment after revising the following problems in this paper please elaborate on the analytic hierarchy process and explain why it is used please explain in detail the methods and formulas used in this paper to sort elements relatively and calculate their weights under a single criterion please elaborate on the specific meaning represented by the numbers in the ahp hierarchy table please analyze the main indexes of the factors affecting the quality of indoor sports environment

at present my countrys logistics with distribution are laborintensive informatization and lowtech which leads all the first in distribution efficiency and it is difficult to use effective resources rationally therefore this paper aims to maximize the efficiency of logistics distribution through the assistance with the internet of things therefore by performing the quantum group algorithm to solve the corresponding problem i think it is possible but the following questions should also be answered the abstract structure of an article should play a general place in the article so that scholars can quickly understand the research purpose research process research results etc of the article through the abstract therefore additional abstract should supplement the improvement process general introduction the main foundation of the thesis is the research on the

this paper summarizes the current status of perioperative care for esd in recent years and provides some reference for clinical improvement of dietary outcomes in esd tr but there are still some issues in the definition abstract is a summary of an article not reflect the main content of the article so the abstract part intends to be concise and brief some unnecessary content will be deleted in the abstract of this paper and it is suggested to seriously modify and clarify the main content of the articlethe conclusion of the abstract is not same as the basis of the original and the participants are invited to make changesthe author were asked to explain why psychological care is necessary and what the benefits arein the section pain care

added are some terminology and grammatical errors revision by a proficient english dialect speaker is what must please define baqs in the manuscript basic motivation of the study should be demonstrated more clearly more experimental results are expected

i thank the editor for inviting me to review this manuscript this paper try to evaluate the effects of anesthetic drugs on proliferation and invasion of lung cancer a cells however this article lacks the workload necessary for scientific researchers clinical innovation and the systematic nature required for scientific research these issues should be addressedtitlethe title could not accurately indicate the main purpose and content of the articleabstractthe description of method is too disorderedintroductionthere are too many introductions to methodsplease carefully adjust word order in this parton the whole introduction is written very poorly lengthymethodsi cant read your title did you really write it carefullyinformation in the table is not clear relevant notes of the table are not in placeresultsits suggested that more outcome indicators should be included

authors investigated the application value of insulinlike growth factor igf and insulin growth factorbinding protein igfbp combined with bone age index bai in the differential diagnosis of central precocious puberty cpp and premature thelarche ptthe levels of sex hormones serum igf igfbp and bai in cpp group are higher than those in pt group and control group serum igf and igfbp combined with bai are beneficial to distinguish cpp from pt which can be applied as important identification indexes for precocious pubertyhowever there are still some problems in this paperwhen comparing the bai of the cpp group the pt group and the control group the layout and content of figure were incorrect the format of table should be modified to the format of the threeline tableserum levels of

wang et al showed that complex econometric model provides a good method to graphically represent the production system which can accurately predict and reflect the development trend characteristics of the economy in the production system major revisionsplease adjust the keywords maybe not correctplease supplement the background in the part of abstractplease adjust the format of this manuscript according to the guidelines for authors please add the references according to the guidelines for authors please show more references there are too many grammar errors and typosthe quality of this manuscript should be improvedplease show the limitation and advantages of this manuscriptplease show the results clearlywhat is the meaning of this study

in the manuscript entitled protective effect of water on the ischemiareperfusion flap in mice through askmapk apoptosis signaling molecules niu researchers found that the content of water in skin flap cells of ir mice decreased significantly and the apoptosis signals of askmapk cells named as clcaspase ask and pp were activated by their expression increased it indicated that trx was closely related to the flap ir injury and the injury was achieved through the askmapk induced apoptosis signaling pathway in a word the experimental design and method innovation are good and the research on the specific mechanism is indepth there were some comments on this papercheck the topical layout as in page the font of figures captions needs to be modifiedrewrite the abstract sectionthere are available couple of

the following suggestions may be incorporated in the manuscript titled accurate identification and tutoring style of poor college students guided by deep learning neural network the term deep learning dl in abstract section may be properly presented the keywords may be presented with appropriate words the figure may be properly presented in table the ss meaning may be provided the initialization parameters and random parameters may be defined clear explanation is required of the proposed method the proof for mentioned values in terms of percentage in figure is to be illustrated the conclusion part may highlight the advancements and novelty of the proposed work the reference section is to presented fully without incompleteness eg ref first author name is mentioned shortly

in this paper the author studied the mechanical properties of variable dip jointed rock mass under dry and wet conditions this topic is valuable and this paper is recommended to be reviewed after revision some further comments are given below in the experimental steps we noticed that the author loaded the axial pressure to mpa and the confining pressure to mpa why did he load such a large confining pressure and axial pressure in figure the axial compressive strength of dry samples tends to be flat and slightly reduced why does the trend of saturated samples first increase then decrease and then increasethe author gives six conclusions please refine the conclusions

this paper provided a system analysis about ma regulatory patterns in thyroid cancerthey revealed that ma modification played another nonnegligible role in the formation of the diversity and complexity of tme in thyroid cancer moreover researchers found that fto had a tumor suppressor effect in thyroid cancer this provides new ideas of the treatment of thyroid cancerlimitations the analysis of the ma methylation chip found the level with ma methylation in thyroid cancer tissues was higher than that in all immediate adjacent non tumor tissues figure a please provide the original data in supplementary tables in figure a their consensus cdf paper indicated that the best cluster was why you clustered patients into groups why did the author choose tpc c sw three different thyroid cancer cells instead

in this manuscript wei gao and baibo hu used bioinformatics data analysis of hippocampal ca region in alzheimers disease reversing gsea they used screened genes with significantly different expressions and constructed proteinprotein interaction ppi the network uses cytonca software to acquire key genes they concluded that the imbalance of genes egfr cd cdh mmp vim ptprc cav and socs were lowly expression in the occurrence of ad while ilb bcll kitlg and nos was highly expression in ad and they may be potential biological markers or drug targets for the prevention and treatment of ad the data is interesting and has clinical importance yet there are some format mistakes and unappropriated descriptions major pointsthe description dysfunction and nerve fiber tangle symptoms from early to late ad changes in

thank you for inviting me to evaluate this manuscript this article describes the new analysis indicators explore what may occur gynecological problems treatment effect is excellent i hope it can be published in journals as soon as possible so i put forward some suggestions for improvement of this manuscriptregarding the use of section number you also need critically consider changing the headings which can typically be utilized as headings for other sectionswhile the point of the article is explicitly stated consider cutting out some irrelevant introductions which make the article more focusedalthough these observations are interestingthey are rather limited and do not advance our knowledge of the subject sufficiently to warrant publicationthe discussion and conclusions are well balanced and adequately prepared by the data they recommend acceptance after