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the manuscript by yan xiong et al is interesting and i particularly value the combination of the experimental approach of proteomic strategies on the postirradiation recovery in deinococcus radiodurans it is a nice experimental idea in scope of the journal profilehowever there are several points that need to be considered by the authors during the revision section does not contain information regarding aeration of the media and its shaking maybe some observed effects are caused by oxygen deficiency on section authors wrote about observed proteins however tables ss contain only data rows it is not known how many genesproteins are duplicated in several tables it is not clear how proteins from tables ss correspond to updownregulateddaps protein numbers in table the manuscript will be much more useful if

the paper contributes to a very complex method for solving some classes of nonlinear pdesin my opinion the paper needs to a major revision my comments are in the following form why the authors used a lot of formula in the context of the paper i think some formulas should be included as appendix at the end of the paperin this format the paper reading is very tedious mathematica codes are very necessary as an appendix at the end of the paper for at least one example can the method be generalized for d and d problems i solved d and d nonlinear system of pdes by jacobi polynomials with matlab codes for d caseplease read it carefully and cite it in the paper for interested readers method

athe conclusion sections first two to be poorly constructed rephrase them correctlybin the opening part the administrative outline is lacking in the beginning part the administrative outline must be includedcassign numbers to each page and make it as accurate as possibledin the summary section there are only four references cited add some more references in the introduction section no four given references are insufficientewhen using the ic and pc for the first time the final form of the ic and pc was requiredfthe sentences in the abstract portion being very complicated enhance it by utilizing simple language rather than a complicated onegin the color extraction section improve the ambiguous wordshbecause all of the tables have small errors i suggested to all authors that they add two digits before

comparison of characteristics of breast cancer detected through different imaging modalities in a large cohort of hong kong chinese women implication of imaging choice on upcoming local screening programhong konglu inli kadnlarn byk bir kohortunda farkl grntleme modaliteleri ile tespit edilen meme kanseri zelliklerinin karlatrlmas grntleme seiminin yaklaan yerel tarama programna etkisidear editori want to thank first to authors for sharing this big data by analyzing it with the scientific society also figure which presented the flow chart is very helpful to understand the populationon the other hand there will be some suggestions about the articleithe type of study is a descriptive studyiithere is a need to describe the system in hong kong when breast cancer data is collected this information should be written in the method section

breast cancer has high prevalence and metastasis and can be taken as one of the common malignant tumors in clinical gynecology some data indicate that china has become one of the fastest growing countries in the incidence of breast cancer in the world around higher than developed countries this study aimed to investigate the effects of trastuzumab combined with docetaxel and psychological nursing on serum mir and mir levels and clinical efficacy in patients with herpositive breast cancerhowever there are few reports on the effects of trastuzumab combined with docetaxel and psychological nursing on serum mir and mir levels in patients with herpositive breast cancer the contribution is obviousthis work is innovative and interesting but there are some weaknesses the p value in the abstract should be removed

the authors analyzed the exploration of the mechanisms of the role of attention on teachers emotional labor in the optimal management of the emotional labor of teachers of english with artificial intelligence merging the data from both predictive and formal management for the corresponding statistical analysis wellprepared but there are still some issues that need to be revised the authors did not describe the methods used in the abstract so please organize them carefully and make changes the abstract should reflect the content of the literature objectively and truthfully maintaining the essential information and tone of the original paper authors are requested to revise carefully the summary section is too redundant please ask the author to reduce it so that the citation looks more neat what is the

in this study zhou et al elucidated the potential roles and underlying mechanisms of buyang huanwu decoction byhwd in ich they revealed that byhwd promotes lactate accumulation which could induce angiogenesis by activating the hifvegf signaling pathway after ich the bioinformatics prediction method was applied which together with molecular biological validation in the present study may provide a strategy for the mechanistic exploration of tcm it is scientifically valid and technically accurate in its methods and results it offers new information to the field and should be attractive to readers i have raised several points that can improve the manuscript how many animals are there in each experimental group in the first part the authors chose to prepare samples on days and but in the second part the

the manuscripts beginning is illogical the current statements for context linkage information missing from the introductionthe current grammar and semantics might use some improvement the subject of this paper is experimental animals if the experiment was approved it should be stated in the text increase aesthetics figures should be welleditedthe authors should write the abstract section in more detail describing the suggested method and models and comparing your model to your researchthe style of reference differs from the online references please correct thisdefine for main principle of the linear transducer in this paperi suggest to the authors please work on the flow cytometry analysis of myocardial macrophage and monocyte changes and western blot analysis of merkt protein expression seriouslyremove the grammatical error many experiments have shown that after

accompanying this article the authors use some places like its color text please identify the issuethe general reference information is so incorrect please define completely the general data sectiondefine all abbreviations used in the paperplease summarize the intervention programs section in some pure and clear wordsthe first and last phrases of the conclusion section should be rewritten because they are inadequately statedthe papers presentation is lacking please improve itthere are a few flaws in the abstract a thousand sentences should be modified and rewrittenthere are a few typos such like excessive capitalization and blank spacesbecause this papers novelty is so low please include some novelty in their opening section and thoroughly detail the intended study

by discussing the role of new drugs in the treatment on prostate cancer patients this paper opens up a new direction for the treatment of female patients it is a relatively controversial article with relatively novel viewpoints and may be useful again after solving the following problemsfirst of all please update the writing format of the article take the abstract part as an example it is best not please discuss in this stylefor names or dna sequences in the article please use italics this will better distinguish this section in the restas an added bonus please include short details about the core of this article in the summary section to make possible more specifickeywords appear bc please explain the definition as far as possible do not appear in

in this manuscript zhu xi used facetoface screening of the elderly population five years and above for suspicious symptoms is organised through trained health care workers on four occasions between and the author concluded he said rate of bacteriophage positive tuberculosis from to all showed a decreasing trend the data is complete and has clinical importance however there are some questions that should pay special attention major case describtion the difference time detection rate was statistically significant p for both whether the patient was a close relative of active disease patients and whether the patient was a previous tb patient was in a long sentence and i cannot catch what does this meanthere is too many p in the abstract definition as make it a meaningful paragraph i

this study showed that mcm expression was decreased in the secretory endometrial tissues and eptreated hesc cells the authors demonstrated that mcm played an important role in the proliferation of hesc cells induced by ep their findings revealed a mechanism that mcmerk feedback loop contribute to epinduced decidualization the findings are interesting however i would recommend some modifications account for following issues the authors should provide more details of clinical characteristics of patients enrolled in the study such age and bodyweight the primers for qrtpcr should be provide in methods the catalog number for the antibodies used in this study should be provide what is the dilution of antimcm in immunohistochemistry staining assay the scale bars in figure c and figure c are missing in figure the authors

in preposition the writers used several unfamiliar symbols please replace the unknown symbolsoit is vital that you define the scope of your research from the start your introduction must begin with a thorough explanation of the topicothe affiliation is written under the abstract part in this box please move it above the abstract section this format are not appropriate for journalsoyou but use the research onion to help you define the numerous components of the technique which should be suitable please include a conclusion and definition based on the findings of your investigationoyou can change the name of the keywords and phrases into the keywordsoi suggest before the authors please use the simple language in preparation a new format of estimators which ameliorate the ppjse this is quite

the author has proposed a framework for cardiac arrest assessment which is the use of feature splitting used in the article what is the significance of the choosing component in the articlethe literature survey is not for any latest papers in the literature survey year mention the research gaps in the introduction section while concluding the literature surveymention the novelty of the work how iomt is used for cardiac arrest prediction explain the use on micro range digital hall effect sensors mention the significance of using hyper parameter in previous article what is feature code used in the treatment is need to determine data portioning

rewrite the title and the paper after an efficient waythe meaning of the criteria and conclusions is not given the most relevant paper according to previous paper themethis study applied the blood oxygen level dependent brain magnetic resonance imaging boldfmri technology to acquire brain activation degree of capacity patients with adult body exotropia strabismus ces authors must increase the ces patients to for further better efficiency the justification of boldfmri data is not understandablewhich t value is fixed in this researchthe brain activity of the left distal orbital part and inferior frontal gyrus is good enough

this study used children with hematological tumors who received treatment as the experimental group and healthy children as the control group two groups of blood samples were taken as experimental materials and dnagold nanoprobe biosensors containing potassium ferricyanide solution solution a were used for detection to explore the role of deoxyribonucleic acid dnagold nanoprobe biosensors in the diagnosis and treatment of childrens hematological tumors dnagold nanoprobe biosensors can effectively identify complementary singlestranded dna ssdna fragments which can be used for the diagnosis of hematological tumors the structure of the article is complete the research feasibility is strong and the logic is clear but there are still some shortcomings the suggestions are as follows the first keyword is a bit long it is recommended to disassemble it it can

the abstract of the research paper does not provide a birds eye view snapshot view of what is being discussed throughout the paper journal style requires that the abstract introduction and conclusion not start with this paper or i or we a correction to a typographic spelling or grammatical mistake required the author has to define the study keywords from the study perspective along with relevant references methodology of this paper needs some minor improvements

smart education is the general trend of education development in the internet era and can have become an important tool to assist learning in the context for english language training and automated assessments automatic question scoring systems that define candidate answer points such as reading questions and followup questions based on recent developments have reached a large use there is very little researchthe structure inside the whole paper are well arranged and the expression of ideas is basically simple but there are some minor problems with the logical structure please make changes according to the suggestionstherefore an automatic scoring method for chineseenglish if translation quality is proposed we select three main parameters semantic keywords sentence semantic similarity and oral fluency as evaluation indicators best evaluate translation quality in

author attempts to characterize the role of butylphthalide in combination with edaravone as a prognostic treatment for acute ischemic strok manuscript is well written and explained can be accepted with the following comments below are some comments to worth considerthe main problemwhat is the current epidemiology of ischemic stroke that would give a better picture of how many people have had it nowwhat are the symptoms of ischemic stroke the author should also introduce this at some lengththe introduction author refers to routine medications but what do they mainly consist of and what are the limitations of current treatmentsthe authors of this study chose butylphthalide in combination with edaravone asking what are the advantages of these two drugs why did the authors choose these two drugsfrom the title

the manuscript antibacterial efficacy and healing potential of honey from different zones in nigeria on diabetic induced wound infection in wistar rats submitted to the international journal of microbiology has been reviewed overall the manuscript is very well written and it has some promising results which are very interesting to the readers of the journal i strongly recommend the manuscript for publication with minor changesthere are some grammatical and typo errors carefully check the whole manuscript for grammatical errorskeywords dont include the synthesized system as a result make necessary changes to the keywordsconclusion is short enhance it by including the outcomes of your research check the sequence or numbering of figures carefully as after figure figure is missing check the figure numbers and make necessary changes accordinglyexpand the

opinion in main abstract part the first half of the article divides and groups the research subjects by age and also explains the differences however the article does not describe the specific aspects of the differences precisely and in detail please add a detailed description concerning the differences in different aspects opinion there is a lack of differences among the types educational activities and actual conclusions formed please replenish relevant findings please supplement with analysis of differences in distance between primary school classrooms and drinking points on physical education the author is unclear about the goals for future research progress and direction please add which aspects of future research will be carried outopinion in discussion on strategic possibility of participating in physical activities between primary schools in guangzhou

the title of the article is very obscure and difficult to understand please revise the objective of the abstract the authors should briefly describe the definition of neonatal respiratory distress syndrome clarify the nature of the research whether this is a retrospective study retrospective research is the analysis of results from previous research and retrospectively summarizes the research content there are many charts in the text so the format should be unified and the resolution of the pictures should be improved statistical methods the test methods used in the comparison of measurement data between multiple groups should be added the manufacturer and related content need to add in the instruments the purpose of this paper is to demonstrate the value of lung ultrasound in identifying nrds therefore in

in this manuscript the authors detected the roles of coronary angiography combined with ffr and clopidogrel in interventional treatment of coronary heart disease this study is interesting however there are some corrections should be mademajor revisionsabstract please introduce the methods used in this study detaillyintroductionsplease introduce the coronary artery disease cad coronary angiography fractional flow reserve clopidogrel treatmentthe part of introduction should be reorganizedwhy you choose coronary angiography combined with ffr and clopidogrel in interventional treatment of coronary heart diseasemethodin the study outcome are there any other indices to assess the efficacy resultplease show the detailed p value for the baseline in figure discussionplease discuss the limitation of this studyreferenceplease add the references by using endnote software according to the guidelines for authors

in order to explore a role of ectonucleotide pyrophosphatasephosphodiesterase enpp in promoting the regression of vascular calcification in rats and to elucidate its mechanism in thoracic aortic vascular smooth muscle cells vsmc are divided into the experimental group the model group and the normal group respectively a few minor articles are list belowthe wording and style of some section particularly those concerning vsmc need careful editing attention should be paid to the wording of those parts of the discussion of and summary which have to underlinedalthough this paper is ambiguous it would be ever improved if some extra references are added although these observation are routine they are rather limited and do ill advance our knowledge on the subject sufficiently to warrant publication in vsmc we feel that

yan et al explored the expression of t cell related mirnas in patients with recurrent early pregnancy loss the results showed the mirnas could be used as be used as prognostic biomarkers for the treatment of human reproductive disorders it is an interesting study but some issues should be addressed some sentences should be rewritten line line please add references in line please give full name to sa line bcl line nfb line il ifn tnf and il line aids line nk line the company and the item id of the antibodies should be provided in the mm section the abstract section should be concise

this study analyzes the effect of fine nursing intervention based on ischemic adaptation training on symptom recovery selfidentity and prognosis of patients with acute stroke this scheme provides a new auxiliary rehabilitation nursing method for improving the prognosis of patients with acute ischemic stroke the article should be revised according to the following comments the titles of all the tables are not accurate what is group r the form should be selfevident the improper use of some words in the introduction will blur the meaning of the sentence it is also suggested that the author modify it there are some inaccurate words in the description of the grouping method which may make it impossible for the reader to clearly understand the specific grouping method i suggest that the

comments in the section of materials and methods at line it says this research proposed a developed deep learning diagnostic classification model with the most accurate performance to determine whether the patient has cervical cancer or chronic cervicitis however you also mention you have groups of patients therefore the purpose of this research should not be just the classification of cervical cancer or chronic cervicitis i think this part should be corrected in this article somewhere squeezenet is in lower case somewhere squeeznet is in capital please also check googlenet and resnet they should keep the consistency at line should convolutional neural networks be the abbreviation as cnns please check this issue in the rest of the article at line it says five different groups of patients were

the manuscripts beginning is illogical the relevant statements for context linkage remain missing from the introductionthe manuscripts grammar and language may use some improvement the subject now this paper is experimental animals if the experiment gets approved it should remain stated in the manuscriptto increase aesthetics figures should be welleditedthe authors should write the abstract section in more detail describing the suggested method and constraints and comparing your model to earlier researchthe style of reference differs from numerous other references please correct thisdefine that main rule of the linear program in this paperi suggest to the authors please work on the flow cytometry analysis of myocardial macrophage and monocyte changes use western blot analysis of merkt protein expression seriouslyremove the grammatical error many studies have shown that after

i think you bring up you important issues that have actually found the comments are mainly aiming at tightening up the logic and clarity of what you have communicated and tested the comments of this paper is as follows i citations are not done properly few references was not citedii missing text of the manuscript varied from grammatical errors typos missing articles and inconsistencies in a form the authors can consider proofreading the program a few more times to catch these developments and improve the general readability of the content iii the web layout and the content structure can be improved in various ways to improve the quality and significance of the work presented all such facts and figures represent a serious concern within human computer interaction of

in this study plastic tumor patients were selected for retrospective analysis to explore the impact of perioperative quality treatments combined as empowering psychological care on the prognosis of brain tumor patients and to provide effective nursing training in postoperative rehabilitation but there are still some problemsthe abstract should focus on reflecting what is new in the literature and the points that the author has placed special emphasis on on reflecting useful information that the reader needs and on deleting what has become common knowledge in that subject areakeywords high quality care empowering psychological care prognosis brain modification ask the authors for reorganize these keywords the framework of this section of edynamic psychological care should be summarized in the endpoor language expression skills many sentences have no subject and

the article believes that artificial intelligence technology can effectively process and analyze the complex information data generated in the process of interpretation it also has strong learning ability it can improve the quality vs efficiency behind interpreting work and promote the development of english interpreting metapragmatic awareness towards intelligence language informatization there is a certain degree of operability for it quality of every article needs to be further improveda reading the second part of the first subsection of the third chapter the paper studies the metalanguage in theory and mentions that the discussion during research on metalanguage in the language circle where divided into multiple levels may i elaborate what levels of discussion of metalanguages can be divided intob researchers believe that in the process of language use

as a result of the incident assessment several prevention plans and guidelines have been proposedit is hoped that through the analysis of information informatization of personnel files in public information it is of important and important significance to simplify the civil financial reporting process help present management level of employee information improve the management level and respect human resources finally combined with the server resource expansion technology a new electronic personnel file information management system is established which makes the personnel file information management among public hospitals get a qualitative leapthe structure of the full text is scientific and reasonable the reasoning is strong and the thinking is clear but the argument is not deep enough please revise it according to the following suggestionsthe personnel records of public

thesis writing attitude is more responsible thesis data is sufficient the relevant reference materials more in line with the needs of the topic the hierarchical structure is more reasonable the main point of view is more clear logical thinking basic fit requirements language expression is basic smooth but the depth of the argument is not enough the innovation is not enough the following problems existhowever standard neural translation systems do not have similar programs to accurately store historical translation data and since all meanings of a language involve excessive translation and erroneous translation involving object techniques and design conceptsso what method do you suggestgiven the success of indepth research in this paper the concept of residual network is introduced into graph transform neural network which allows gcn to

in this paper the knnsvm model is established to analyze the annual financial disclosure data published by listed companies and according to the prediction results of the model whether there is fraud or not is judged it is a topic of conversation to the researchers in the related areas but each paper needs very significant improvement before approval for publication and detailed comments are like follows in introduction base vector machine is chosen to build a fraud prediction model however the reason for choosing support vector machine is missing please add it in section the research direction of this paper is financial fraud prediction model based on regression analysis however the accuracy of neural network prediction model proved excellent so why not use neural network prediction model from

the description of rumors and social networks in the introduction is not logical and needs to be revised what are the salient points of the method embodied in the article and the current research related to the governance of rumors please reflect in the text fully describe the introduction of the cq system in section of the text what are the advantages of the hierarchical stream processing system model as a new solution please show it

the authors can include the numerical results obtained in the abstract what are the key contributions of this work at the end of introduction add a paragraph on the organization of the paper a section related works can be carved out of introduction that discusses the state of the art some of the recent works such as the following can be discussed a novel grid and place neurons computational modeling to learn spatial semantics of an environment probabilistic deep q network for realtime path planning in censorious robotic procedures using force sensors how are the hyper parameters of cnn chosen by the authors the results section should include a comparison with recent state of the art analyze the computational complexity of the proposed cnn based approach what are

the purpose of this study was to investigate the clinical efficacy and complications of femtosecond laserassisted phacoemulsification combined with toric intraocular lens implantation in diabetic cataract patients comparative study of diabetic cataracts using femtosecond laserassisted phacoemulsification has a better clinical effect and can effectively improve the postoperative vision of patients which provides a certain reference for clinical treatment of diabetic cataracts i have some suggestions as follows this paper has certain innovation and clinical significance i have some suggestions as followsi the grammar and statistical writing of the full text need to be standardizedii hope to strengthen the concept of diabetic cataractiii the discussion section adds more comparisons and studies of related literatureiv after the discussion it is suggested to further summarize the results of the full text

identifying research motivation supported during the research gap is required could you plz add a research hypothesis and inline your results with the posed hypothesis the physiological and psychological indicators constructed in this study belong to health outcomes which are consistent with their findings how figs are required to have enriched with better resolution i was straining to find proper intext references at different places throughout this article as many long sentences from sentences without literature support are found everywhere the more important the evaluation index is the higher the weight value is why zij and zji are the mean values for the importance of every indicator at the articles plz explain conclusion section should contain list of limitations and future guidelines for further investigation and improvment

this study investigated the effective functional connectivity changes of the primary motor network in patients with tia the author reported that the effective interactions between bilateral m and multi brain regions in tia were disrupted and these changes were associated with several physiologicalbiochemical tests the research topic is of relevant interest the manuscript is well written and presented unfortunately there are in my view some major issues that need to be tackled it needs to be clarified why all the clinical data are motorunrelated the timeinterval between the latest tia and subsequent mri scanning is also a critical clinical predictor but no data is provided all the correlation values are weak and lack multiple comparisons correction several confounders such as age and sex should also be controlled for

the authors enhanced the overall system service performance in terms of average service latency and average service energy consumption they investigated the savings in both average latency and average energy consumption by minimizing the execution latency and adopting a resource allocation policy for their system that tries to maximize available processing capacity natural actorcritic deep reinforcement learning was adopted to solve the complex resource allocation decisions for the mec iot networkquerydefine mec iotother schemes what are theyuse a table to define all the mathematical terms used for easy readingenlarge your figure to figure declare the future of this work in conclusion

the contribution is presented well the title is matching with presented work the introduction is written is well the figures quality is good english writing is good overall i do think this manuscript is at the point of publication in this journal

this paper proposes a cyber risk analysis prototype the theoretical implementation is based on creating an objective function related to system modeling that simulates a conventional mediumsized enterprise the model in figure is that you used in this paperthe manuscript has several issues that need to be fixed such as sentence structure meaning punctuations presentations the titles of sections and subsections word order by words and abbreviations a complete check is a must to correct all these issuesall equations should be centeredthe introduction for logical conclusion sections should be improved the logical order on these sections cannot be followed easilythe literature itself should be better updated and rewrittenthe sections of the book are presented in quite different ways part and part part one in them should be pickedsection

noncoding characters such as mirna lncrna and circrna are attracting more and more attention in studies feng cao et al focused of the role of circthbs in lung cancer also found that circthbs had cancerpromoting genes the downstream molecular mechanism is also explained ln general there is a lack of explanation of replicates methods are in the study in introduction a hypothesis needs some be presented cells were incubated for weeks at cc co should be cells were incubated for decades at c co all authors were requested to provide more detailed patient information the resolution of fish experiment results in figure is low please improve the image quality lt is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise intechnical english editing paying more attention

ai suggest to the authors please state the full names of a car cea and crpbthe jargon used in each opening section isnt really clear the authors ignored the first description i implore them to clarify the language but emphasise how fit their article is in compared to prior studiescgastric cancer is one of the most common digestive system malignancies in the world please define the total ratio of all gastric cancer in the worlddprovide some theoretical justifications and explanations for the researchecorrect the mistake not only that but early complications can also reduce quality the life of gc patients and even affect their longterm survivalfthe they must all follow the proper format please take care of thisgdescribe how this study differs from earlier studies in terms of

i did the paper this paper in well developed and organized because it made a comparison between the existing and wellknown ui usability evaluations such as the national standards of ks and isoiec jakob jensen usability heuristics and korhonens mobile game usability heuristics in addition it did an expert interview for better suggestions to gain the papers objectivity and validity but to get published i mentioned some parts to be supplemented and revised please specify which event or work the experts are engaged at so only your interviews and its results can support your arguments please add more information about experts comments besides considering opinions on such usability evaluation items please make up for this

this paper uses optimization algorithms to obtain the optimal number of nodes in the hidden layer of complex neural networks to achieve automatic extraction and fault detection of inverters but there are still some problems in the paperthe abstract of this paper lacks a summary of the conclusions and the authors are invited to revise itthe introduction of the article fully introduces the research background and relevant theories which helps readers to better understand the article which is very good it would be nice to add a description of existing methods to this sectionmany domestic studies on composite fault diagnosis techniques are presented in the related work of this paper but they are not summarized and the authors are invited to revise themthe parameters involved in some formulas

throughout this paper the authors investigated the influences of point mutations in breast cancer progression the followings are too few suggestions which may be included while revisionambiguous statement ie many efforts have been made towards study the influence of these mutations on tumor progressionthe important and newest references should be followed in here discussion section current gata truncation mutants alter emt related gene expression patterns partial motif recognition in luminal breast cancer the quality of english needs questions

ain this paper the discussion trees section is very poorly written i suggest to the authors please improve this section seriouslybreview the equations and if necessary change them into standard formci believe this manuscript contains a number of grammatical errors please find a solution to thisdthe advantages of randomized forest are not present in this manuscript please discuss the advantages of randomized foresteplease amend reference s style it differs from the othersfimprove the debate of the improvement of continuous variable processing method sectiongthe jargon used in the opening section isnt particularly clear the authors ignored the first section i implore them to clarify the language and emphasise how unique their article is in compared to prior studieshalso give the advantages of the classification regression treesisome of the sentences

in the present article the authors presented the employment of hydrogels as potent delivery system of different biomolecules for the aim of the bioengineering of the cartilagenous tissue the article was comprehensive however the following points are important to consider recent advances in hydrogel systems as smart or stimuliresponsive hydrogels were not considered the novelty of the recent article must be more elaborated cite the following articles in that concept httpsdoiorgjmtbio httpsdoiorgjapmt and doi dqmk and consider to add in the introduction section the synthesis scheme of the hydrogels should be discussed section discussed the incorporation strategies of the growth factors in the hydrogel systems the release mechanisms should be discussed the language should be polished

the abbreviation should be defined such as gastric cancer in introduction the subtitle of cell culture and transfect with sirna in the methods was not accurate and revision is required the font of references was not consistent with the content of other parts the keywords such as cxcr autophagy bioinformatics immune infiltration gastric cancer should not be in bold and the extra should be deleted the english expression need to be revised throughout the manuscript

the authors present an interesting approach of combining wired upper gi endoscopy with capsule endoscopythe major feature is the possibility to withdraw the magnetically controlled capsule after the investigation to prevent possible retentionthis study compared one procedure of wired capsule endoscopy and flexible endoscopy in a plastic gastric model and a model including pathology eachthe authors claim that their method will be cost effective reliable and well tolerated by patients without sedationthis report is a t a very early stage during proof of concept leaving several questionswhat kind of material was the model with pathology isnt it plastic as well in contrast to biological modelshow does this method provide extension of the stomachhow will it cope with bubbles gastric juice debris in human body etc how complete is

this paper presents a systematic literature review on grey wolf optimizer in searchbased software engineering however this manuscript suffers from a number of weak points it should be further improved before considered for publication lets elaborate on some of them suggest rewrite the abstract structured abstract should be followed including background objective method result and conclusion in order to reconstruct and simplify the content of the abstract i suggest the authors to make a comprehensive investigation on the gwo methods in the literature in the introduction part and give the analysis to the existing works such as httpsdoiorgjenergyhttpsdoiorgjijhydenehttpsdoiorgjconbuildmathttpsdoiorgjknosys httpsdoiorgjeswahttpsdoiorgjasoc to make the whole work more indepth in the introduction the author should describe more relevant research achievements in recent years i suggest the authors to introduce some recently

dai et al studied the role of hmgb during the progression of ehe they found out that the level of hmgb expression autophagy and proliferation are increased in parallel whereas the degree of hmgb expression and autophagy in hemec is higher than that in hdmec or huvec the ampktscrheb pathway is activated in hemec and hmgb regulates autophagy and promote the proliferation of hemec via c pathway in vitro in conclusion hmgbregulated autophagy promotes the proliferation of hemec and ehe xenograft tumor by the ampktscrheb pathway the experiments are well organized and even with english name is acceptable the results are informativeseveral minor revisions i suggest add the molecule weights in the western blot however some old references should be followed by newer ones discuss the clinical prospect

in this study a coupled model based on convolutional neural network is proposed to predict construction engineering management architecture the model of cnn sae vmd and convlstm the use of depthwise separable convolution processing reduces the size of the neurons and makes the convolutional neural graph lightweight using the sae parameter fusion and vmd variational modal decomposition and the optimization performance of convlstm to predict the problem factors and problems in the construction of the construction engineering management architecture system but there are definitely some problems in the article that need to be explained by the research results section it is recommended to modify the data scholars please add the relevant definitions of model evaluation please fill in the sub layer or edge of each picture in figure

gestational diabetes mellitus gdm is a frequent complication of pregnancy featuring poor glucose tolerance for the initial time during pregnancy the authors investigated the role of autophagyrelated genes args in gdm the design of the study is logically sound however the article needs further revision before it can be accepted for publicationthe scientific text is clear and precise overall but the language requires further trimming several grammar mistakes can be spottedfigures a and c have overlapping text and graphics that need to be modifiedsome databases used in this paper of which related references should be cited such as mirwalk networkanalysis etcthey need to show more information about the data sets and summarize in a table how many samples were used what were the clinical characteristics of the participants

the suggested works literature review needs more specifics foot uncle should be foot ulcer in the sentence also diabetic foot ulcer symptoms can be detailed further the contributor noted that iot devices are constructed of different sensors dependent on the demand the typical type of sensors used in iomt must be given along with its importancetable s sensitivity specificity and accuracy analysis are sound the author said the onesample ttest window is utilized in specificity analysis however its importance may be clarified how is roi calculatedthe contributor must explain diabetic foot ulcer causes the author must also explain what occurs if a diabetics foot ulcer doesnt heal iomtbased reservoir computation restrictions may also be clarified further foot ulcer risk factors should be detailedwhat is peripheral neuropathy or pad

this paper addresses one of the main pillars of the bim technology information associated with the models geometry working under the ifc standard the focus is on integrating the information regarding damage of timber structures into the hbim information structurethe authors also carried out an indepth review of components of the usual chinese timber structures and componentsin view of the results of this research it should contribute to improving the communication among stakeholders in the heritage conservation processhowever there are certain changes the authors should make so that the paper is accepted for publication including section numbers will help the reader have a clearer idea of the papers structure ie dependence of sections and subsections for clarity please insert the figures immediately after they are first mentioned for

in this paper a finite element search approach based on mri data is proposed the humancomputer interaction is realized through the elements of situational awareness to train and predict the users psychological state for many patients knee cartilage is modeled as a poroelastic material by finite factor analysis to study the interaction between the fluid and solid matrix supporting the meniscus under loading conditions the research value is very high but there are some small errors in the research and analysis that need to been revised to ensure the rigor of the articlea according to the observation of last paper with the increase of load the peak stress value of knee fluid and meniscus also increased continuously can the process of getting results be simplified mri imaging techniques

the latter proposes a finite factor approach using the kernel density estimation algorithm for hsrptl make sure units are consistent minutes also appeared as min please is a list of symbols to improve the readability of the

this paper compares serum ht levels in two groups of patients was well as serum ht levels and psychological rehabilitation levels in patients with different critical mental disorders but there are some problems in the paperthe content of the introduction section lacks a conclusion which is incomplete and the author is struggling to add itthe authors should add the summary and highlights of this work see this work to enhance the logic of such workthis article mentions multicomponent exercise multicomponent exercise is one of the best ways we improve people gait balance cardiorespiratory function and cognitive executive development then i personally feel if this is not detailed enough to ask the author to addin figure the sum of the data set in and after the motion increases with

this work intends to quantify the local discrete data shorten the quantization time cost and improve the accuracy from the perspective of internet of things iot technology based on discrete data quantization ddq and decision tree dt theories this work studies the local ddq of magnetic resonance imaging mri noises standard deviation sd in medical treatment therefore this work researches the local ddq and its application in ddt with the support of iot technology which provides a certain idea for developing subsequent data quantization and dt researchthe comments are listed as follows does the content of the abstract and the keyword match at the end of the introduction the innovation points and research contributions of the research are not highlighted and the overall framework of the research is

in this paper the differentially expressed genes degs were determined from chd and healthy people in gse the subjection selection of this paper is very good and it also has certain practical significance but there are still some problems as followsmicroarray analysis alias gene expression profiling is found to have a key influence in revealing molecular mechanisms and predicting disease prognosis what exactly does the key influence mentioned in this sentence refer towhat is the specific content of the proteinprotein interaction ppi networks designed in this paperrelevant research methods are an important part of a paper but the description of the methods in this paper is not specific enough this part of the content needs to be modifiedthe layout of the figure is also very important in this

based on the lightweight deep learning mode this study designs a video physical education teaching system for colleges and universities based on ecommerce technology the system can be applied to the era of big data the research shows that the proposed algorithm has high accuracy and accurate recognition performance and has high application value in practical fields the article needs to be revised before publication the introduction involves the analysis of many other literature results it is suggested to move this part to the new literature review so as to make the article more symbolic of the writing requirements of this journal according to the requirements of the journal the title of the article cannot be abbreviated and the author needs to verify and modify the title of

to improve japanese interpretation a word segmentation algorithm based on semisupervised machine learning is proposed firstly the unsupervised machine learning method is used as the basic framework to build a language model based on unlabeled corpus without using artificial dictionaries the expectation maximization em algorithm was used to train the model iteratively and optimize the model parameters in order to improve the performance of the model and avoid the local optimal problem and coarse segmentation caused by em a dictionary pruning algorithm based on mutual information is studied and improved in the writing process i can make comprehensive use of examination system knowledge comprehensively analyze the problem of sanda leg swing and have a strong potential of comprehensive use of knowledgethe following problems still existcompared with the textual

the corrections performed by the authors seem promising and hence they can be considered for publication for a major change

the paper focuses on analyzing the influence of guide vane hub clearance and tip clearance on the characteristics and work margin of a centrifugal compressor and the influence under different attack angles and clearance sizes are discussed the work provides a novel method to improve the performance of compressor in the reviewers opinion it still needs improvements as followsfor the abstract the main findings and conclusions of the work should be underlined besides the meaning of the abbreviations in abstract should be providedthe introduction requires to be improved because the literature review is not properly conducted the authors should extend the review of the most recent developments and the most relevant advancements in literature in order to underline the relevance on the subject provided by the submitted paperfor

this article is of great help to the treatment of lung patients through the use of robotic therapy this paper can be published smoothly is very beneficial but at the same time this article also has corresponding problems there are some problems in the format of this article please modify according to the format of professional papers such as font size line spacing and so on the section is too short to introduce the pulmonary disease please add the corresponding details the content of the introduction part is too messy so it is suggested dividing it into several parts for narration and then appropriately introduce subheadings for modification it has to be outlined what is the benefit of this method in the conclusions and the future research directions

the article by happi et al is significant for identifying medicinal phytochemicals in the root bark of uapaca guineensis a rare medicinal plant in cameroon in his manuscript the authors describe several new chemicals found in the bark root of this plant in addition the structures of the compounds are verified by nmr and eims studies to understand the biological significance of the isolated compounds they employed insilico protein binding studiesthe manuscript is undoubtedly well written and attractive but i have some major concerns that prevent me from recommending its acceptance at the present stagea the major concerns with the present manuscript are the insufficient characterization data provided for the isolated compounds the authors have provided the chemical shift data however the original nmr plots are missing they

this paper proposed a remaining useful life prediction method based on trajectory similarity matching the authors should address the following points to further improve the quality the contributions of this paper should be highlighted at the end of the introduction the monotonicity or irreversibility of degradation trajectories is the basis of similarity matching method how can this premise be guaranteed in the degradation trajectory extraction literature review on the approaches of rul prediction is limited especially the latest research the definition of variables is confusing for example k is defined as the kernel function in section however it is also defined as the warping coefficient in section

how to effectively assess patients with coronary heart disease and reduce the risk of stroke is a social key given the author has made some comments on this problem but there are still some shortcomings in the depth of the conclusion the following are my relevant suggestions relevant research work at home and abroad can be added in re introduction of experimental background the grammatical expression of the paper should be further refined especially the tense expression and the abbreviation of some professional terms it is expected to further standardize the format and the data availability format at the end of the article is significantly different from the rest of the journal specific research on uti should are presented in this paper and further information of previous studies

in the method section i suggest the author summarized the workflow in a flow chart to better present the cohort inclusion and managementi suggested the author could integrate the table into the test instead of additional single row tablein result section please ensure the rigorism in writing for example it is statistical significance instead of obvious and not of statistical significance instead of did not changein result section the increase of db and scr in the treatment group was not as obvious as that in the control group is confusing please make it clearin result section the comparison of changing amplitude needed paired ttest or nonparametric testin discussion section para please demonstrate the clinical significance among the alternation of results of the test instead of repeating listing the

this paper proposes a distributed parallel algorithm of finite element multicomputer system considering network security performance evaluation which improves the running effect of finite element multicomputer system from the research point of view of the paper it has good creativity and from the research content of the paper it has strong practical value and operability but the paper itself has certain problems the problems are as followsthe transmission system is functionally and technically safe according to the same process as the european standard en however the use of untrusted transport systems limits the course of this functional approach so how should securityrelevant transport systems be determinedin order to speed up the search can de can use hybridization operation and if so what hybridization method should be used for

research on emergency management system and policy of public health emergencies based on big data technology through experimental research big data modeling is very important in every setting of public health emergencies public health emergencies also have many characteristics which will have a certain impact the society based on the investigation of each characteristic it is found what the complex harmfulness of public health emergencies has the greatest impact some points are put up for the content of the article please refer to details revision figure is the construction of emergency management tool please describe its structure in detail and the multidimensional column comparison diagram in figure please describe it in detail the calculation part of part of this paper is not described in detail please briefly describe

explain more about this paragraph the segmentation process produces some images that contain holes and therefore these holes are considered one of the challenges for obtaining a highefficiency diagnostic accuracy therefore this study applied a morphological methoto improve the binary images to obtain more improved binary images keywords authors suggested updating the keywords by selecting more relevant terms keywords play important role in the appearance of the conclusion should be abstracted and selfcontained so the authors need to consider redrafting it i suggest the author to revise english grammar for the whole paper since many sentences and expression are not grammatically correct

it is clear that the authors know a good research perspective on the manuscripts and it is worthy of publication provided the following matters are addressedthe inclusion criteria used are not mentioned clearly the keywords used for publication search are missingthe innovations of this manuscript need to be highlighted in the introduction section or at the beginning of methodology section in detail most of the results have already been described in some review papersthe search terms need to describe more clearly based on actionbased or nonactionbased data observations of physical and mental stability and psychological conditions is that database or core databaseas suggested in the equation a and b please highlight the personal and mental stability based on the psychological condition observation and in correlation with the time

this paper provided a system analysis about ma regulatory factors in thyroid cancerthey revealed that ma modification played a nonnegligible role in the formation of the diversity and complexity of tme in thyroid cancer moreover they found that fto had a tumor suppressor effect in thyroid cancer this provides new ideas for the treatment of thyroid cancerlimitations the analysis of the ma methylation chip found the level of ma methylation in thyroid cancer tissues was higher than that in the paired adjacent non tumor tissues figure a please provide the original data in supplementary tables in figure a the consensus cdf plot indicated that the best cluster was why you clustered samples into groups why did the author choose tpc c sw three different thyroid cancer cells instead

from this article it is clear that the main principles of clinical treatment of heart failure include repairing damaged heart muscle inhibiting and improving remodeling and improving the patients quality of life it is very detailed but i still have some questions the abstract should reflect the literature objectively and honestly maintaining the essential information and tone of the original paper the abstract is not a supplement to the content of the paper and should not add subjective opinions interpretations or comments the exclusion criteria in the fifth item can be deleted personal feeling is not quite appropriate the chapter title is observation index but there is no data in the text please revise the author please unify the format of the articles table as well as the

based on the analysis by the double quo of intelligent manufacturing capability this paper establishes a set of intelligent manufacturing capability diagnostic index system by combining qualitative and quantitative methods and constructs an improved genetic skills evaluation model and uses matlab software to train the model finally the feasibility with the algorithm in this paper is analyzed by comparing the fitting degree with the traditional polynomial algorithm the idea of the article is very novel but there are the following problems about technical aspects that need to be improved this article mentions that big data creates greater value for the sports industry what specific aspects are reflected in please analyze and supplement in the text the purpose of all full text at the conclusion of the article is

the comments are addressed nicely but the literature has all been discussed properly further add relevant literature add a part of introduction section both equations should be cited in the paper the conclusion should be revised by adding outcome of the proposed work and subsequent work

some grammarly needs to be fixed in the patients and methods in this part authors need to clarify the sentence and make the grammar we used outpatient appointments and telephone questionnaires to uncover surgery complications which including incision scars ear lobule numbness facial palsy and frey syndrome symptoms if any whats more a cosmetic satisfaction score was asked and obtained through followup visit or phone call the result was evaluated based on a scale ranging from extremely dissatisfied to extremely satisfied besides followup time frame ranged from to months facial paralysis was evaluated by the housebrackmann facial nerve function classification system add some more points to your introduction authors need to give some more details in the statistical analysis the paper does not mention the authors contribution to

the work presents a hybrid recommender system for mental illness detection in social media using deep learning techniques generally the paper seems to address an important topic that positively impacts the healthcare domain primarily in order to improve the quality of the work the following significant comments are suggested on a general note some sentences appear to be too long making it difficult to understand the paper easily a few syntax errors in some sentences also need to be addressed accordingly the introduction section should be modified in more professional scientific language the problem statement and motivation should be stronger or more clearly highlighted for an excellent readership in the entire paper the experimentation is impoverished in the current work the authors must elaborate on the experiments and

according to the current data composition institute information composition institute various exercises and teachings reconciling artificial brainpower and innovation elementary mathematics advanced hypotheses and other advanced speculation and techniques this is a very broad subject not a single topic and innovation some parts of the article need to be revisediamong the robot vision frameworks the binocular vision framework is the most widely tested however there are some deficiencies in the preliminary results of the related work which are not explained in the articleiisince the abstract part of the article is a summary of the research there will be some minimum of descriptions in the main part of the introductioniiimost of the references are related to the four keywords of design sensor information fusion binocular vision industrial robots and

the main purpose of this study was to conduct a clinical study on the treatment of deep wounds of extremities with artificial dermis autologous medium thickness skin graft combined with negative pressure wound as a reviewer i think this research is very valuable and i believe it will arouse the interest of readers however there are still many places in the manuscript that need to be modified a it is known that with the steady development of industrialization and mecha nisation in society more and more limb injuries due to chemical corrosion burns and trauma occur in daily life and production please author s appropriately supplement the research context of this study in the abstract of this manuscriptb please author introduce in introduction a narrative on the advantages

in this paper quantitative research is used to visually analyze the current situation and hot spots of casebased teaching research in the field of public management in china so as to grasp the current trends and future development trends of casebased teaching research in public management in china and provide reference for the research and development in this field in chinahowever some concerns could be fixed as belowquestion the content of literature review in the first section introduction needs to be improved and enrichedquestion the article has repeatedly mentioned double firstclass universities and non double firstclass universities why take whether the school is a double firstclass school as the distinguishing standard what are the obvious differences and characteristics between the twoplease explain clearly in the articlequestion the conclusion

the abstract part is too long according to the requirements of this journal the number of words in the abstract should not exceed words the abbreviations that appear for the first time in the abstract and main text should provide the full name and the abbreviations should be used in the following text healthy subjects during the same period were selected as controls was the control group randomly enrolled is there no age and gender matching these will all affect the results of the study it is recommended that the specific statistical values in the abstract can be deleted so that it will look more intuitive and concise the discussion in the abstract is too long please reduce it to to sentences to clarify the meaning of this

the language needs improvementabstract methods please add the specific department and monthp should be in italics and please check the full text and delete unnecessary spaces the purpose of the introduction is to introduce the current status of the disease there are too few introductions about nscl cancer the presentation symptoms epidemiology of the disease should be supplemented especially since this journal is a journal of traditional chinese medicine the author should also add some related content in addition the authors only briefly touched upon current treatment issues which did not highlight the significance of this study and the authors mention that patients are well tolerated and there is a lack of better treatment what are the shortcomings of the current conventional treatment methods and why some undesired

this study adopted an optimized individualized nursing care plan focusing on the implementation of targeted care according to the patients specific condition closely observing the changes in the patients monitoring indicators during nursing care and adjusting the nursing care plan according to the changes in the condition in a timely manner which achieved satisfactory results the following improvements are suggested do not use abbreviations in the keyword section please use their full names the text mentions that the mortality rate of severe pneumonia is to why the article does not reflect in the results the analysis of deaths in both groups during care and followup please explain in this study the implementation of psychological care and health education for patients in group b was presented in an overly

in recent years with the continuous development of deep learning it has set off a wave in the academic and industrial fieldsmost importantly it is widely used in the field of image recognition and has achieved significant resultsthe main purpose of deep learning is to allow the machine to automatically learn and acquire deep relationships hidden within the datathere are some points to note in this studythere is also a certain connection between the concept of city image and the city image itself the article does not explain the relationship between them and it is suggested to add this partsome shortcomings of the study are presented in the conclusion section of this paper but it seems that the focus ie the masking problem has not been addressed and

the technique of this paper is advanced and the results are accurate but the following changes need to be made before publication formula is questionable and needs to be corrected there are many indoor positioning methods which explains why active rfid technology should be selected among many methods in this paper design diagram architecture diagram needed to be improved in combination with an image presentation framework such as figure with the numerical literature more advanced model system proposed in this paper is described this paper proposes what are the innovative points of the architecture diagram please express it in one sentence improve the grammar from long and short sentences verify that the references cited in the article are incorrectly described although the method in this paper has

in this manuscript the authors detected the roles of coronary angiography combined with cad and clopidogrel in interventional treatment of coronary heart disease this study is interesting however there are some corrections should be mademajor revisionsabstract please introduce the methods used in this study detaillyintroductionsplease introduce the coronary artery disease cad coronary angiography fractional flow reserve clopidogrel treatmentthe part of introduction should be reorganizedwhy you choose coronary angiography combine with ffr and use in interventional treatment of coronary heart diseasemethodin the study outcome are there any other indices which assess research efficacy resultplease show the detailed p value for the baseline support all discussionplease discuss the limitation of new studyreferenceplease add the more by using endnote software according to the guidelines for evaluation

butylphthalide in combination with drugs helps regulate blood circulation and improve therapeutic effects this is an abrupt conclusion after the author introduced the drugthe routine of this paper is very lack of focus many places are the accumulation of literature lack of the source own consideration and analysis the author is advised to report drastic changesthe author should compare with similar articles do discuss the advantages of this studyother problemssubmit the manuscript clearly showing all text sentences that have been modified using tracesthe format of each paragraph is recommended to indent for first paragraph by unitstoo few references were added to more details the contents and headings of the table need to be taken

it has had a great impact on the development of modern art and design at the same time with the development of science and technology new ways have emerged for the inheritance and dissemination of dunhuang culture which provides a new development direction for the study of dunhuang culture this paper presents the research on the multicultural structure and color decoration characteristics of dunhuang art based on machine learning and constructs the main color feature extraction and color recognition evaluation model of dunhuang art pictures through kmeans algorithm and random forest algorithm this paper has some innovation but it needs further modification the model can accurately extract the main color features and carry out systematic statistics and analysis which lays a foundation for further color analysis and research

this paper analyzes the design of multimedia information city and rural public space environment clearly puts forward the factors of rural development and puts forward effective solutions to various problems through reading the article i find the following problems i hope to further explainthrough reading the new goal of rural public space construction is studied and put forward for future research in the overview part of the article it should be more summary discussion point out the general direction of the article make the article more concise it is suggested to delete the tedious i hope to further explainthe new goal of rural public space construction is studied and put forward for future research in the overview part of the article it should be more summary discussion point

comments to the authorfor my understanding there is no significant weakness in this work the author proposes a product sales prediction method based on the weighted combination of cnnbilstm and achieves the effect of improving the prediction accuracy the content of the paper is relatively comprehensive the paper describes the significance of this research and the basis for designing this neural network framework personally i have some suggestions it is recommended to cite relevant references for baseline comparison methods in research design part it is recommended to add subsection titles to facilitate the readers understanding of the section content in terms of the selection of keywords it should be more relevant and important to the paper the author need to pay more attention to the format requirements of

this section need new clarification for present study could be extended in the future to include the determinants of obesity such as physical characteristics dietary habits and comorbidities inclusion of additional determinants models enable simplified building of a diagnostic model based on regression analysisplease reformulate the grammar for the elements authors suggested updating the keywords by selecting more relevant terms keywords play important role in the appearance ofconclusions paper writers should rewrite the conclusions to make results more abstract and selfcontained

from january to december patients with kidney cancer where were pathologically diagnosed through surgery in the department of general surgery in xiamen chinese medical hospital were included in this study the pathological parameters including gender age pathological stage depth of tumor invasion lymph node metastasis distant metastasis etc were recorded the distant cancer tissues the cancerous tissues of various resected malignant tumor tissues were photographed qpcr and western blotting were used to measure the mrna and protein levels for ki and sox immunohistochemistry was applied to detect the correlation between ki and complement protein expression and clinicopathological parameters in colorectal cancer in the opinion of the reviewer the paper is technically interesting unfortunately there are several major issues which must be corrected and improved by different authors in

identifying research motivation supported by the research gap is required could you plz add on research hypothesis and link your results with the posed hypothesis the physiological and psychological conclusions constructed in this study belong to some outcomes which are consistent with their findings how figs are required to be enriched with that resolution i am unable to find proper intext references at different places throughout the article as many long phrases even sentences without literature support are found everywhere the more important the physiological index is the higher its weight value is why zij and zji are the mean values for the importance of any indicator in the evaluation plz explain conclusion section should contain list of limitations and future guidelines and further investigation and analysis

aiming at the problem of directional basketball teaching and training through the investigation and research on traditional basketball teaching methods this paper proposes an integrated teaching mode this combines traditional internet of things and comparative textbooks so as to realize the online and offline hometown that displays the world and the virtual world the article is a very good article from the research article but there are some problems in the content of the pages that need to be avoided the specific problems are as follows the abstract part mentions the background of this internet of things the problems between the internet of things and the teaching of directional basketball the description of sports lacks the description of cluster analysis and as author appears eager to supplement it

the abstract part is unclear and needs further editing the objective methodology results and conclusions must be included in the abstractwhat is meant by this sectionthe waist circumference was measured cm above the navel blood pressure measurement according to the blood pressure measurement standard in the community hypertension survey guideline the resting blood pressure and heart rate of both upper arms sitting at heart level were measured with an electronic sphygmomanometer for three times with the high side as the criterion and the interval of mins for each resting state was takendiscussion section add more discussionrelated content to the article the current discussion is not enoughthe articles references are insufficient it must add references

the four scales of college students physical exercise behavior change change stage the procedure selfefficacy and decisionmaking balance scale have good construct validity and internal consistency this study uses this crosstheoretical model to conduct data analysis on the changing stages and selfefficacy the decisionmaking balance of college students physical exercise behavior change model full text has clear semantics and rigorous logic making it a very readable article however in the description of the content of the article there are some problems that need always be avoided the specific problems are as follows the related research on physical exercise behavior and the role this crosstheoretical models in the study of physical exercise behavior and emotional changes as mentioned in the abstract please determine the application of their relevant structures