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the abstract must briefly overview the studys main aims regarding results and discussion regarding results please reformat your abstract the introduction section needs to be revised the article should be updated the foundation aims gaps and contributions of the study should be presented at the end of the section the methodology of the article should remain better clarified at first in the first subsection you should talk about your modeling and its overall circumstancesall indices and parameters should be examined notion of a scenariobased model approaches should be described and expanded discuss its limitations and applicationsthe outlook and future studies should be provided at the end of the conclusion

in the title and other places binary combination flooding can be revised to surfactantpolymer flooding the english should be significantly improved by professional language edit service for instance in abstract chemical flooding oil recovery technology is a hot issue in the world in the past research is through indoor test or numerical simulation method to predict the output of the block and scheme optimization due to the differences of the blocks the indoor test and numerical simulation method has not formed a unified flooding effect prediction standard there is no contrast between blocks have grammar errors different injection scheme should be different injection schemes this paper proposed should be revised to is proposed in this paper oil content saturation should be oil saturation the introduction may be improved

this articl examines virtual realitybased environmental art creation the precision and practicality of environmental art design can be enhanced by virtual reality technology the threedimensional virtual reality technology is detailed in full in this paper along with a brief introduction to the fundamental ideas and features of virtual reality technology based on this technology the environmental art design transforms the twodimensional image to mimic the threedimensional virtual impression on the basis of this a virtual realitybased environment art design system is developedthe system is made up of software and hardware and the database for the system is set up in accordance with the database flow diagram finally a comparison and analysis of the scene switching times between the traditional system and the environment art design system based on

the results of the article were found to be confusing as a result of missing tables and figures but other than that i believe it can be published with some minor revisions

xiaoling huang et al systematically reviewed postoperative psychotic symptoms and blood inflammatory markers including crp and il to obtain unbiased conclusion for the relationship between inflammatory markers crp and il and pod in aged people they searched the databases pubmed web of science the coachrane library embase ovid and springer link for podrelated articles and performed metaanalysis this is an innovative study with some interesting data the whole manuscript is well organized with some minor suggestions from the reviewerit is highly suggested that the authors put figure ac in one picturefont size for the main text should be point instead of pointthere are some typos eg discussion early it is suggested that the authors revised the manuscript carefully for these typosit is suggested that the references should be

the manuscript proposes how two factor estimation using the kernel density estimation algorithm for hsrptl make what units are consistent minutes also appeared as min please add a list of symbols to improve overall consistency of the paper

research on situation management system and policy of public health emergencies based on big data technology through experimental research big data technology is very important in every step of public health so public health emergencies also have many characteristics which will cause a certain impact on emergencies based on the investigation of each characteristic it is found how any complex harmfulness of public health emergencies has the most impact some suggestions are put forward for the content of the article please refer to overview revision figure is the construction of emergency care system please describe its structure in detail for the multidimensional information comparison diagram in figure please describe it in detail the abstract part of part of this paper is not described in detail please briefly describe

the manuscript titled a systematic review and metaanalysis for the role that nursing for selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure is interesting heart failure is a major concern as it affects a majority of population worldwide hence alternative strategies must be develop to emphasize the patients health as an anchor to improve survival changes reduce readmission improve health improvement management of disease in patients however there are numerous minor issues that if edited would significantly improve the manuscript please reduce the number in keywords please add it to the included literature please make the results clearer by subheading each result please annotate each of the resulting graphs and tables when the abbreviation first appears the full name should be given notes should include an summary of the

the author has written the review article reasonably good in addition to that few points listed below could be addressed to improve the quality of the paper buckboost converterbased bce topology using matlab is shown in fig author has to include the simulation parameters like inductor value etc in the article to understand more the scenarios of ev battery types ev charging topology in global level could be included to improve the article the impact of charge balancing on lithiumion battery with respect to life span and reliability to be discussed

with the continuous improvement of peoples living standards peoples pursuit of material life and satisfaction of spirituality are also increasing and the demand for culture and value orientation are also diversifying after reading the full text this article has a certain contribution in the intelligent sensor technology curriculum and has some innovation what is the research idea of this article please it is not fully reflected in the abstract and needs to be added what are the regional characteristics of the folk museums in this paper compared to ordinary general museums please briefly elaborate them this article provides a brief description of the folk museum overview please modify it to suit your situation the description of the principles of folklore museum display design in this paper is not

this work proposes a method to achieve college english informatization learning environment construction with esp teaching mode there are few minor concerns that will improve the quality of related work a summary about the overall idea should be given in section end of chapter if some grammatical parts are addressed in previous work it has to be balanced more contents should be supplement in related work section the explanation for some equations are easily explained need to revise them more detailed information for residual network should be given more content should be supplement in section the evaluation indexes should be given in sect the conclusion is short and it should be strengthened latest reference should be given in the revised revision

the destruction of the human living environment the aggravation of pollution and the emergence of an aging population have caused the incidence and mortality of tumors to increase year by year among which the gastrointestinal tract immediately becomes one of the most serious tumors in the digestive system once it is diseased because of its unique position in the digestive system there are still some issues with the article that need attentionqtap monitoring is a mature tumor diagnostic technology and the article gave a very complete introduction to it however there are still some gaps in the use and efficacy of this monitoring method adjustments are recommendedqcell monitoring methods are the focus of the article however this paper does not fully describe the characteristics of the monitoring method

some grammarly needs to be fixed in the introduction in this part authors need to clarify the sentence and make the grammar tunel was used to detect the effect of hifaas on apoptosis of vsmc cells and it was found that interference of hifaas significantly induced apoptosis whereas overexpression of hifaas inhibited apoptosis figure ab in addition interference with hifaas induced the expression of the synthetic marker mmp while overexpression of hifaas inhibited the expression of mmp figure cd these results suggest that hifaas may affect apoptosis and phenotypic transformation of vsmc add some more points to your statistical analysis authors need to give some more details in the tunel this section needs more information however its pathogenicity can be reversed by upregulation of mirbp lnccorf prevents aortic

in the present work entitled nfkb gene mutant was associated with prognosis of coronary artery disease and exacerbated endothelial mitochondrial fission and dysfunction the authors analyze whether the attg insdel mutant in the nfkb gene promoter rs is a risk factor for coronary artery disease cad in patients furthermore considering that endothelial apoptosis is relevant and occurs early in the pathological progression of atherosclerosis and that mitochondria are central to the intrinsic pathway of apoptosis the authors analyze the role of mitochondria as a possible mechanism underlying the nfkb gene mutation in the development and progression of cadthe topic addressed by the authors is of great interest at the level of human health as it seeks to delve into the search for possible prognostic biomarkers to identify highrisk

a systematic review and metaanalysis for the role of nursing for selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure is true meaning study in this study the authors have performed a systematic review and metaanalysis for checking the role of nursing for selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure however there are still many corrections must be madethere are too many grammar errors please correctthere are too many typos please attentiontoo many problems please delete someplease show the series of figures and features in the last line of the paperfigure is not clear please show are clear oneplease add the description of resultsplease show figure legends on the links show more description in the part of discussionplease add the references by using endnote softwareplease add more references about

thank his great privilege to receive an invitation for review entitled a novel ferroptosis related lncrna signature for predicting the diagnosis of laryngeal squamous cell carcinoma after several days of careful reading of this paper it is found that there are still some obvious problems in the paper in the abstract part a author does not clearly explain the purpose of this study in the introduction the author does not introduce his own research documents and the structure of this paper in the journal part the author had better supplement more data in experimental results in the conclusion part the author can clarify the future research work in english some sentences in the paper still have the problem of vague expressioni suggest that the paper be revised appropriately

your manuscript results investigated the effect of nutrition alone on improving drug outcome after drugeluting stent implantation in elderly tdm patients this realworld study is novel it is a topic of interest to the researchers in the related areas but the paper needs very significant improvement before acceptance for publication my detailed comments are as followsthis article is a realworld study the author should emphasize in the abstract that the empirical data were retrospectively studiedthe abstract to give an overview of her theme and main research contents of the study rather than merely listing the conclusionsimproper description of the results in the discussion entangled in trivial issues etcin method the author described cox proportional risk model it is not a formal statistical description do you mean diagnostic modelthe

the article entitled crosssectional study on type characteristics and drug resistance of haemophilus influenzae in kunming children is an interesting study however there are several minor issues should be correctedmajor points the abbreviation of haemophilus influenza should be hi instead of hi the article needs ethical approval the figures and tables of the article should be placed at the end of the article figure should indicate abcdminor points please ensure that the format of the full text is consistent such as whether the initial letter of the subtitle is capitalized and whether there are spaces before the paragraph the title background in the abstract of the article can be replaced by objective the conclusion in the abstract is too long and the author can delete some for example

the corrections performed by the authors seem promising and hence they must be considered for publication for each major change

this paper studies the multimodalassisted diagnosis based on deep learning pet image generation mode applied to alzheimers disease the overall idea of this topic is relatively novel very practical however while reading the article i have the following questions a description relevant to the application of pet imaging techniques in ad studies is missing a description relevant to the application of pet imaging techniques in ad studies is missing relevant hypotheses about the pathogenesis of alzheimers disease are missing missing profile to alzheimers disease the article is missing from the directory section the article abstract should be aligned in the middle and the format has certain problems which needs to be adjusted

this paper investigates the value of multislice spiral computed tomography msct perfusion scanning features in evaluating peripancreatic infection in elderly patients with severe acute pancreatitis patients with concurrent peripancreatic infection had prolonged peak time decreased peak height and reduced blood flow rui hao et al demonstrated the effectiveness of the combination of these three msct perfusion scan parameters in evaluating concurrent peripancreatic infection these findings provide clinical significance for evaluating the occurrence of peripancreatic infection and selecting clinical treatment options however this article still has some deficiencies as followsprevious studies have already demonstrated the role of msct in acute pancreatitis pmid pmid and pmid the authors should describe these findings in the introduction or discussion parts more information regarding the peripancreatic infection should be added in the introduction

the purpose of this review is novel which has certain guiding significance for clinical practice and the references are appropriatehoweverin the endthe author claims ikbke is expected to become a potential target for tumor molecular targeted therapy i think this is nonsense through the description of ikbke and breast cancer ikbke and glioma ikbke and lung cancer etc the author draws a conclusion ikbke can activate the nfb signaling pathway in a variety of ways and can also recruit various scaffold molecules for interferon signal transduction at the same time ikbke has been identified as an oncogene of many tumors and its inhibitors can significantly inhibit the proliferation and invasion of tumor cells persuasive if it is properly selected the overall reliability is high the discussion part is

first of all i would like to thank the author for letting me review this article this article combines current events with a lot of innovation and i admire the spirit of daring to explore unknown areas after reading the whole piece i found that this subject has more advantages in that mainly focused on the content the authors narrative ability makes the content of this article a simple and the sections that should be emphasized in an article are all done in this article the author has perfectly realized the optimal distribution of all content nevertheless it is also true that the author has made many mistakes in describing the analysis studies i have listed as the examples below and i hope the author can correct them

for this manuscript on the wholefirst differentially expressed genes associated with ferroptosis based on the gse and gse of dn then two machine learning algorithms were used to find diseasespecific genes two external data setsgse and gse were used to validate the diagnostic performance of genes besides the authors divided the disease samples into two subtypes according to the expression level of the disease characteristic genes and verified the effect of the classification by principal component analysis and gene clustering it is confirmed that iron death is involved in the occurrence and development of the disease the authors also compared the abundance of immune cell infiltrates and differences in immune checkpoint expression between subtypes confirming that iron death is involved in the immunomodulatory response of the disease and

knowledge development of high performance teaching is a derivative of social development and it is gradually perfected with the development of economy this paper evaluates teachers teaching through the nonlinear prediction function of neural network predicts the teaching effect compared to students academic performance and judges the accuracy of factor prediction results according to the default error global error and mean square error the article is a very good article from the research results but there are some problems in external interpretation of main article which need to be revised the title of the article is mainly about the research on the teaching method of piano performance from information neural network the key word is whether the content of the teaching method will be appropriately added in the

the idea proposed is technically sound but i have some major concerns i want to know more about the mathematical expressions and i would recommend a major revision as i have concern about a number of mathematical expressions please find attached my comments in the file it is expected that these comments are properly and neatly addressed to make the paper effective and has sufficient strength

this paper proposes to apply the communication network algorithm to food nondestructive testing this method is very novel and in the formula there was some things that need to be changed the mechanical nose is a simulation of a human sense of sound and can be used to simulate the human sense of smell an electronic nose is an electronic instrument consisting of a partially selective chemical sensor array and a suitable pattern recognition system the related concept of electronic nose technology should be addedb with the realization and application requirements of sensor technology microelectronics and other technologies the volume of the electronic nose is getting smaller and its operating system cost is also greatly reduced the sensor technology should be explainedc gprs is the abbreviation of general

today with the rapid development of intelligent manufacturing technology how to introduce digital and intelligent manufacturing technology in our design process of sports equipment is a new topic that needs all be faced and published this paper evaluates the intelligent manufacturing capability by establishing using improved genetic algorithm evaluation model this article trains different learning algorithms against the improved genetic algorithm selects the gradient descent type with adaptive learning rate and load factor to establish the improved genetic algorithm model and decide the optimal amount of training samples and finally evaluates the original sample data of the index the overall logic of the article is rigorous but there is still room for improvement in the details the author needs to reflect the importance of intelligently manufacturing sports equipment

after addressing the above suggestions i recommend the current paper for publicationimprove the discussion section to make it more engagingtable is a little confusing please make it more apparentthis work contains numerous typographical and spacing issues please correct themthe result section only provides tables and figures the theory work is missing as i stated please give any hypotheses about the figures and tables in the findings sectionthe organizing paragraph is missing from the first section in the beginning section please include the papers layoutthe reference styles should be changed because it is wrongthe papers presentation is inadequate the papers presentation may be improved

i checked the paper its quality is good i have only few minor suggestions given as follows there are many no significant difference results displayed in the abstract section there should be a highly concise summary of the results in the abstract there is no need to list outcome data that are not statistically significant in the introduction some phrases are used inappropriately and are not regular collocations of english phrases for example cardiovascular disease death and with the increase of age the writer should make every effort to use phrases that are fixed collocations and authentic english collocations we found that some compound sentences did not use the correct conjunctions resulting in some meanings being expressed vaguely or even incorrectly for example routine nursing only provides basic

the present manuscript has practical applications but this paper needs to modify with the critical point as follows please represent practical application of the solution at abstract section please add more details for figs and please add references for all of the equations please add earliest references to introduction section as followstwophase nanofluid thermal analysis over a stretching infinite solar plate using keller box method kbmd optimization of baffle arrangement in a multiphase nanofluid natural convection based on numerical simulationnumerical study of fins arrangement and nanofluids effects on threedimensional natural convection in the cubical enclosure please add more tables and figs to result and discussion section please add bullet point at conclusion section all of the figs dont clear please improve quality of the figs

in the abstract alofacitinib was used to treat observation group however alofacitinib was not the drug mentioned in the title and resultsthe grammar mistakes should be correctedwhat are the differences between study group and observation groupthe epidemiological characters of mpd should be briefly introducedthe ethic approval number should be providedhow to calculate the sample sizeis the data normally distributedmouse was mentioned in section whysurvival test and km plot were suggestedare there any missing casesthe baseline data should be providedwhat are the limitations of this study

the authors have proposed a systemic neural network method that uses statistical models to track and evaluate the daily activities of people having cognitive impairments abstract can be reduced a little too drastically backdougn is therei recommend authors authors to write keywords based on the relevancy to a titlta lot of large paraggrpahs are there authors should convert to large paragprahswhy there is extra text between the eqautionsthe captions of all figures and tables seems to be incomplete they should be comprehensivein text authros should refere figure as figure since this indicates what tempelate is using in captionstables width should be reducedfinally size is required

in the existing research its characteristics the defects should be describedit is more typical and convenient to study the utilization efficiency of construction resources then what is the significance of this study in this contextexploratory spatial data analysis esda can be divided into two parts global and local autocorrelation please explain how this method is applied because to local conditionsthe value range where morans i should be analyzed in deep maybe the confidence level over the empirical threshold is useful for you to carry out you explaination herethe economic density of construction land in dehong prefecture is the lowest that is yuankm song historical density of construction land in kunming is times higher than that in diqing prefecture ranking the third and times higher to that on dehong

overall the paper is written fluently and clearly explains existing problems and solutions in white blood cells recognition the research method is reasonable and its effectiveness is demonstrated by comprehensive experiments the main contribution of this paper is that it proposed a method for expanding the training set of white blood cell images and improved the recognition accuracy of white blood cells recognition task compared with traditional data augmentation methods the innovation and importance of the research is acceptable the highlight of this paper is that the author puts forward a new effective method to expand the training set which does not need manual intervention and simplifies the operation in clinical application the deficiency mainly lies in the lack of analysis and explanation of the necessity and reasons

the abstract part is unclear and needs further editingwhat is meant by this sectionthe adni dataset gave every one of the information to this examination the development interaction of the brain network model of programmed sythesis in this review the preparationrules and the course of consequently making piano music are totally itemized in this part the explanation in figure is not clear enough it must add more detailsthe articles references are insufficient it must add references

in this case the fixed point of rational functions obtain by using a fresh repetitive method in a word the obtained results of this paper are clear and novel i recommend our paper to be published by making the following changes you should find related articles such asa httpsdoiorgsyb icciautomc httpsdoiorgsyd httpsdoiorgsxadd to the resources section all equations must be drawn here or point according to the typing rules therefore they need be precheck all online paperthe novelty of the paper should come in the introduction review on the proposed approach isnt explained clearly

this study demonstrates the correlation between mortality of major surgery patients admitted to icu and blood transfusion the manuscript is written fairly good however the following points need to be considered for improving the quality of the manuscript the title of the manuscript need to be revised analysis of correlation is not appropriate correlation itself is an analysis it should be revised so to convey clear image of what has been done in the research the study was retrospectively conducted and analysis was carried out on the data of patients whereas the authors wrote in the manuscript that the patients or their guardian gave the approval to get therapy this sentence need clarification the abstract is a junk of different results it should be revised according to a

the title abstract evidence and conclusion were not coherent and the research objective is not clear and research data is not coherent to reach the conclusion the language requires improvement to avoid misinterpretation in view of these this grammar cannot be recommended to publish

this paper presents a intelligent fault diagnosis of rolling bearings method base on multiscale fractional dimensionless indicator and random forest the model is validated to achieve the highest score however the following concerns need to be addressed the innovation of this paper is insufficient the random forest relieff and fractional fourier transform are widely used for fault diagnosis of rolling bearing there are some expression mistakes in this manuscript the authors should carefully check and correct them the vibration signals are collected under variable speed conditions and what is the range of its velocity each health condition is arranged with sets of vibration data with different variable speed the signal acquisition process needs to be detailed different parameters may greatly affect the classification results how to determine the

in this paper a controllable nbiot application layer security architecture is designed to ensure the generation of encryption keys betweennbiot terminals and power grid business buildings the lightweight low communication cost and improved key update characteristics are typical for experimentsit is full documents content logical and fluent but it has the following problems please think about the identification of keywords and the correct writing expression please appropriately expand the conclusions of the experimental analysis part to make the content more clear and the data analysis more sufficient in the simulation experiment part the description content of control module part is too complex so it is suggested to add language description and picture introduction in the process of reading the paper it is found that the subscript of

the paper titled network pharmacology analysis of huoluo xiaoling pellets treating cerebral ischemic stroke represents an original research specifically designed study the manuscript is generally well written and potentially acceptablein abstract of the manuscript a brief background is needed before writing the translation of the studymany abbreviations should not been written in full when introduced first time to text which creates confusionthis sentence needs a source citation huoluo xiaoling pellets hxp from text of modern chinese and western medicine in combination that xichun zhang wrote in is a representative formula on activating blood circulation to dissipate blood stasisin results in some sentences have been written in passive and several sentences are personalised for example we constructed a visual networkplease make it uniformthe methodology of the insilico analysis should

this paper addresses an important and highly concerned problem on data security and privacy of iov while ensuring the quality of data service the authors propose iovsdcm a secure data communication model in iov the authors construct a dynamic communication network with the vehicle as the node which reaches the target vehicle using the selforganizing relay collaboration policy and the security and privacy strategy theoretical proofs and simulation experiments indicate that the model ensures the confidentiality of data transmission and has the advantage of high and stable performanceoverall the article is well organized and its presentation is good however some minor issues still need to be improved i suggest that the limitation of this work should be discussed in section in section i suggest the experimental results should

in this paper an analysis and prediction model arimalstm model aiming at the spatial and temporal characteristics of the crime hotspot data in s city is proposed at the same time the relationship between the analysis results and geographic information is established based on the principle of temporal convolution and the spatiotemporal database of cases is constructed the results show that the arimalstm model has advantages in improving the processing of time characteristics of crime hotspot data related research not only improves the analysis ability of crime hotspot data but also promotes the construction and application of spatiotemporal warehouse of crime hotspot data this paper has some innovation but there are still some problems to be improved specific comments are as followsabstract the selection of keywords in the

this paper proposes an emotional analysis method of consumer comment text based on bert and hierarchical attention this article is well organized however the current version of the manuscript needs to be revised according to the identified problems therefore the manuscript was revised based on the following comments the abstract and conclusion are not highlighting the main contributions of the methodology and case studies these sections need serious revision to make them brief and meaningful the citations in more and more people pay attention to social hotspots and express their views through the internet are improper citing so many papers once is not professional the authors must discuss the motivation of the study and methodology in more detail it is lacking in the present form of the manuscript

this manuscript reports the preparation of heptazinebased crystalline carbon nitride kphi the authors also investigate the effects of synthetic temperature on the properties and photocatalytic activity of kphi the possible photocatalytic mechanism was proposed based on the related experimental date in my opinion this work focuses on the heptazinebased crystalline carbon nitride in the photocatalytic h evolution process and provides a novel idea for enhancing the utilization of heptazinebased crystalline structure thus i think this manuscript is of interesting and the points put forward here is relatively novel however several uncertainties still need to be solved before its further consideration detailed comments are as following the similar work focusing on the preparation of gcn with crystallinity have been reported in the literature and the morphology of this work

blockchain technology is maturing and it is interesting to apply blockchain and big data technology to the development of contracts for schoolenterprise cooperation the paper is well structured and the conclusions are well summarizedthe author should provide a brief overview around blockchain technology and the schoolenterprise cooperation mechanisms studiedthere are many grammatical mistakes in the text in addition the text contains many long sentences which are hard to followbriefly give a summary statement of the current state of blockchain technology use in educationwhat are the benefits of building a shared schoolenterprise collaboration platform with blockchain technologythe main features of blockchain technology which the author should briefly outlinecan you give some brief examples of the use of blockchain technology in educationa brief overview of the main areas in which

comment on this article is novel in conception unique in conception and also in line with the actual situation the article mainly describes the cultural etiquette of yue kingdom and its jade art this is very good but there are still some details that are not handled properly and hope to be correcteda chinese peoples way of thinking psychological habits living habits social history culture and other factors have special symbolic meaning in art as a result a special art language symbol system has been formed what does the symbol system refer tob the baiyue people formed a glorious matriarchal clan society in the hemudu civilization more than years ago what does the hemudu civilization refer toc the value of cultural heritage is both objective and intrinsic generally

this paper studied the impact dynamics and damage patterns of layered rock mass from the aspects of stress wave propagation characteristics stressstrain relationship and energy dissipation and discussed the failure mechanism of layered rock mass based on theoretical research this is important for the blasting excavation of tunnels and other ground works the structure of the work is reasonable the logic is clear and the innovation is outstanding it is suggested to accept after modification and improvementit is recommended to cite foreign literatures from the past three years in the literature reviewit is suggested to supplement the determination process of three basic mechanical parameters of rock massline in this paper mentioned that the limit surface parameters of the concrete hjc model are quite different from the rock limit

this paper analyzed the possible correlation of pdl expression with clinicopathological features in surgically resected lung adenocarcinoma however there are several presentation problems needed to be solved in abstract there were several articles regarding this issue please clarify your novel idea in this paper and explain it the paper should further standardize the data in order to make it suitable for journal publication and check it again in spss to avoid the possible mistake for example wald was not needed to list in the table please ask someone familiar with english language to help you polish this paper the author should further accentuate his contributions in this manuscript paper analyzes the results of others in the past is not deep enough especially the advantages and disadvantages related outcomesin

the content of the article is substantial and the structure is rigorous and an intelligent analysis system for english word parts of speech based on recurrent neural network is established the experiment is innovative but there are still some problemsq the abstract part describes the importance of english word partofspeech judgment emphasizing the importance of partofspeech for english beginners but the description is not sufficient please reviseq the text analysis process is described in detail in the experimental part of the article and weight calculation is an important part of it but this is not reflected in the keywords please reviseq in the introduction the importance of english learning is mentioned and it is mentioned that english is very important in daily communication reading and learning but the

the paper is projecting real life issue and the application is going well still this paper shows remarkable changes the introduction should but strengthen by adding more interesting details and related work the proposed method has many equations and minimal usage of such equations to be made when meaning should be interpreted in the paper all the equations might be cited figure to be explained section should be renamed as results analysisthe results should be properly analyzed in the paper add more relevant references or discard redundant ones

this work proposed a three layers federated learning framework to reduce the computation overhead in edge clients and enhance the privacy the main contributions or the new things are using the split learning idea in local training and split the training process into two parts while the aggregation and he based designs are not novel several comments are listed as follows how to protect the privacy of the labels of training data samples in split leaning if the edge servers are curious it should be mentioned the parameters of layers as well as the labels ie the digit number in the mnist dataset should be transmitted to the edge server to complete training and bp the authors seem to ignore this important issue in the proposed design the

bundle care combined with improved gel care pads and liquid dressings can effectively reduce the probability of skin compression at various sites in prone spinal surgery patients under general anesthesia and improve nursing satisfaction which is worth applying but i still have some questions to be answered by the authors they area skin stress injuries skin stress injuries or pressure sores are localized injuries to the skin or subcutaneous tissue usually located on bony prominences characterized by intact or open skin ulcers that may be associated with pain which should be quoted in this statement which is an introduction to pressure sores b both groups are treated with modified gel nursing pads and liquid dressings so what is the difference between this modified gel nursing pad and the

the manuscript titled serum nux vomica relieves muskinduced experimental autoimmune myasthenia gravis through blocking the jakstat signaling pathway showed that these nux vomica could prove beneficial in the management of myasthenia gravis the authors through bioinformatics approach showed involvement of jakstat i have following suggestions recommend the improvement of the book all in silico methods should be thoroughly described all parameters be mentioned so that it seems easy for your readers to follow up please provide details such catalogue numbers of antibodies and how were tissue samples sliced tem assay was ethics approval obtained for the animal study please mention it jakstat pathway should be changed on relation to the findings of this study

through the application analysis of flexible management in the work of college students flexible management has the advantages of peopleoriented flexibility flexibility and internship and pays access to humanized education and specialized training which are a kind of subjective managementthis management is studentcentered respects students personality and dignity strives to shape the university spirit promote university culture and gives full play to students subjectivity and creativityin the process through student management students are authorized to participate in management and decisionmaking enhance students knowledge of ownership and responsibility stimulate students learning motivation fully tap their own potential can set high development goals and gradually realize the goal of selfeducation and selfmanagementthe paper has sufficient difficulties but the paper still has the following problems in section of this document the

through empirical research this study seeks to investigate the link between fixed asset internal control activities and fixed asset management performance in chinas stateowned enterprises furthermore it investigates the intermediate function of fixed asset risk management quality taking the staff engaged in fixed assets management in chinas stateowned enterprises as the survey object valid questionnaires were collected and empirical analysis and hypothesis tests were carried out through the secondorder structural equation model the results show that the internal control activities of fixed assets have a certain impact on the management performance of fixed assets i believe his article broadens and deepens the mechanism of the internal control activities of fixed assets on the management performance of fixed assets in stateowned enterprises and it contains vital enlightenment for stateowned

in this study the author designed a retrospective cohort study to evaluate the value of rivaroxaban combined with tigrilol in antithrombotic therapy after pci in patients with nonvalvular atrial fibrillation with the acute coronary syndrometheir study demonstrated that rivaroxaban combined with ticagrelor is more effective and rapid in inhibiting platelet aggregation after pci the timi blood flow grade of patients treated with rivaroxaban combined with ticagrelor after pci is better than that of ticagrelor rivaroxaban combined with ticagrelor is suitable for antithrombotic therapy in chinese patients with nonvalvular atrial fibrillation with acute coronary syndrome after pci and can achieve ideal results in clinical application this is an interesting paper and the followings are some comments regarding this manuscript capitalize the first letter of the words of some sentences

in this paper an analysis and prediction model arimalstm model aiming at the spatial and temporal characteristics of the crime hotspot data in a city is proposed at the same time the relationship both the analysis results and geographic information is established base on the principle of statistical convolution and the spatiotemporal database of cases is constructed the results show that the arimalstm model has advantages in improving our understanding of time characteristics of crimes hotspot data related research not only ensures the analysis ability of crime hotspot data but also promotes the construction and application of data warehouse of crime hotspot data this paper has considerable innovation but there are still some problems to be improved specific comments are as followsabstract the selection of keywords in the

in this work a convolutional neural network kgcnlv which integrates the curriculum knowledge graph is proposed to obtain students personalized potential interests by aggregating classroom information through interactive experiments of linear datasets moocmusic and mooccomputer it might be seen that kgcncr is always better than the formula indicating that the course recommendation method is knowledge graph is better than the traditional course cf recommendation method also can accurately implement course resource recommendation i am generally positive with manucript results before publication i think this version should be released based on the following commentsa the recommendation system can carefully recommend informative courses to students among many educational resources by analyzing the relevant historical data of students on the mooc platform please show me some histrocial datab deep disruptive form

the key to each new retail marketing model as to achieve effective interaction of information to achieve innovative development of business based on big data technology so promote that overall level of service on the basis of accurate analysis of user needs and best meet the personalized consumption needs of users i have several suggestionswhat is digital technology how not systematically introduced in chapter and the impact of innovation on the success of our retail industry needs to be analyzedthis aspect of new technologies for the digital economy is rather onesided and lacks detail there are many new industries and technologies emerging in the context of digitalization and specific cases need to be identified for more indepth discussion before the answers to the questions needed can be found

according to the discussion and simulation in this paper ample evidence has highlighted the antitumor antibacterial and antivirus properties of berberine we plan to explore its function and pharmacological mechanism in a respiratory syncytial virus rsvinduced cell model and a mouse model of pediatric bronchiolitis pb therefore i suggest this paper can be accepted with some major compulsory revisionsathe abstract is not very enlightening be more insightful about findings eg it appears that climate effects are secondary to those arising from population growthbl what is an unorganised waste management systemcl this is because i dont follow the logic heredl reference is a specific south african case study not a global review which would be more appropriate to citeel good introduction but this paragraph is too long and needs

in this manuscript the authors analyzed the mechanical properties and slope arrangement of a channel project case and triaxial rheological experiment or numerical study the structure of these manuscript is generally good and the approach is convincing and their results of this study provide some valuable insights to the mechanical behavior of red bed rocks i think this paper can be considered to further publication after addressing the comments below abstract the abstract is not concise enough therefore refine it the sentences in abstract the channel is generally safe and stable and the loose rock and soil mass on the local slope structure which may be caused or the longterm weathering and softening of the red bed soft rock it indicates that the conclusion is uncertain and not

in this paper a uavbased cr network with a wirelesspowered pu is investigated where the uavs act as sus it is assumed that the pu prices the interference energy incurred from the uavs to analyze the interaction between the uavs and pu the stackelberg game was adopted where the uavs act as followers and the pu acts as a leader an alternating iterative algorithm is proposed to achieve the stackelberg equilibrium there are some comments to improve the qualityin the introduction recent related works on cr with energy harvesting should be introduced to reflect the difference between the existing works and this paperwhat is the reason to adopt the stackelberg gamethere are some typos and language issues please check the manuscript carefully

ai suggest to the authors please define the full names of the car cea and crpbthe jargon used in the opening section isnt really clear the authors ignored the first section so implore them to clarify the language and emphasise that interesting her article is in compared to prior studiescgastric cancer is one of the most common digestive system malignancies in the world go define the total ratio of the gastric cancer in the worlddprovide some new justifications and explanations for the researchecorrect the data not only that but early complications can also reduce quality over life of gc patients and even affect their longterm life variants must all follow the same format please take care of thisgdescribe how this study differs from earlier studies in terms of

the study presents very interesting findings which focuses on the use of macroalgal in fish it has relevance in the field of aquaculture which could be used mainly in both fish an animals from island countries which on the other hand benefits coastal environment the literature was well written on this topic and data presented could not be question i suggest to include diet formulation so that it can be replicated otherwise i recommend this work for a minor revision and publication

this work presented explore whether c has an inhibitory effect on the development of inflammation in a murine model of thtype allergic dermatitis and found that c attenuated skin inflammation and reduced the expression of skin il ila tnf and serum ige of murine model of thtype allergic dermatitis this is an interesting work with systematically characteristics but there are some issues need to be dissolved the page numbers and line numbers need to be added i found it was difficult to review without page or line numbers abstract please author add the discussion sentences and extend the methods introduction section please author polish the english and revise the grammar for example both of them should be changed to both actually it should be changed to it etc

these should be thoroughly changedonly use one language throughout the workin the final number half of the references are referenced in apa style and half of the references are cited in vancouver style in the final list please use the references in a similar formatchange for last couple of sentences of the section coordinate systemmake some changes to the concluding part to make it more obvious is difficult for understand please make it clearerthe abstract section should be improvedthere are various typographical and spacing additions in this work please correct the errorsupdate the recommended errors with the rapid development of computer technology science and technology such as artificial intelligence and deep learning frequently appear in different fields of social public life

in this manuscript authors collected tight sandstone samples from chang layer in the songshulin area of the ordos basin to study the micro porethroat structure the main pore types were studied and the fractal dimensions of different porethroat radii were calculated then factors affecting the reservoir and seepage capacity of the sample are discussed this manuscript gained some useful understanding however there are still some problems that need to be further modified the specific comments are as followsin part the description of porethroat structure classification is wrong such as line and line type iii should be type please carefully check whether the description in the article is correcttable authors selected typical samples what are the principlesfigure c whether the data point of permeability between and is correctline line

the manuscripts beginning is illogical the relevant details for context linkage are missing from the introductionthe manuscripts grammar and language might use some improvement the subject of this paper is experimental animals if the experiment be approved it needs be stated in the paper increase aesthetics figures should be welleditedthe contributors should write the abstract section in more detail describing future suggested method and models and comparing your model for earlier researchthe style of reference differs in the other references please correct thisdefine the main rule of the linear transducer in this paperi suggest to the authors please work on the flow cytometry analysis of natural macrophage and monocyte changes and western blot analysis of merkt protein expression seriouslyremove the grammatical error many studies has shown that after

paper needs to be improved in following manners this is a nice study however following questions are necessary to be answered before further processingplease state more about salient findings in abstract shortlythis would be faster to use units in the nomenclature more applicableplease use updated and recent papers in the literature review to provide more sense in the reader information could be quite specific and to the point you would suggest to look and think about itplease elaborate the novel aspect of your work at the end of the introductionfigures and tables could be used once for resolution for correctnessin each abstract please provide the insight from your results sectionsthe recent and relevant publications may update some bibliography and fortify the text such as bioconvection reinerrivlin nanofluid flow

the keywords selected in this article are not enough it should modify the research by adding more relevant keywords to highlight the topic and special issue scopekindly edit the paper for grammatical mistakes and language errorsexplain this paragraph in greater depth grade or adverse events occur during the combined treatment of ic and ccrt these include neutropenia stomatitis pain in swallowing weakness vomiting and rash as shown in table add more to the conclusion and make it contains more details about the research

othe reference numbers are not given in this paper please mentioned the name of the referencesoauthors are urged to elaborate on the results and offer some justification to show why the suggested approaches are superior to othersoit is impossible to understand the phrases in image i advise the authors to draw it more clearlyothe papers formatting and phrasing are both unpleasant it should be enhancedothe authors ought to define and explain a few of the sentences in the discussion sectionotable has to be shortened as soon as it is practical because it is too long additionally carefully fix a few tiniest errors in this tableowhy the canonical wnt pathway is dependent on the action of cateninothe first sentence in the abstract section is unclear in my opinion the

in this study this paper carries out summary statistics and preprocessing respectively makes up for the gaps in the historical performance data converts the data and analyzes the statistics to obtain the average score the average grade point the credit acquisition rate the number of failed courses the total credits of failed courses the number of makeup examinations and the number of retests which can be used for repeated prediction in the operation of actual customer cases the early warning system has achieved remarkable results the feedback is positive and highly recognized by teachers students and managers the research results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsthe introduction needs to increase the relevant research contents it is found that after

i have some equationsq what is the relationship between injected water flow and accumulated heat production q it has been added in the revised draft that in the actual geothermal development the higher the injection velocity of cold water is not the better and the heat recovery rate can be significantly improved by increasing the injection speed but it will also shorten the life of the whole heat recovery system and may lead to the decline of the final heat recovery in actual production water injection speed should be reasonably controlled to ensure heat production efficiency and avoid the negative poissons ratio effect of dry hot rock as far as possible

nteraction compares blood lipid level and blood uric acid level with periodontitis in adults whose type diabetes mellitusit seems that the proposed scheme works well technical results however there existed several technical results presentation problems needed to be solved how many clinical data with tdm are studied in this paper it is better to add description about them the paper is littered with poor grammar and confusing notation font choices and poor presentation check the paper formatting especially the abstract part in section what is the basic characteristics of research objects you mean the author should add some description accompanying it it is difficult to understand them the citation of several references should be improved to newer literatures explain the clinical analysis of dyslipidemia and hyperuricemia on periodontitis

first the article has made a certain contribution in the new era it starts from the intrinsic requirement of intangible cultural heritage inheritors builds up an evaluation system of inheritance effect that closely connects personal development with the requirements of the times as mentioned in the article the evaluation system built up by previous research results is not enough to guide inheritors to carry forward the contemporary value of intangible cultural heritage and to guide inheritors to meet peoples wishes for a better life but the evaluation system built up in this paper has done itsecondly the performance evaluation index system of inheritors built up in this paper is complete including four aspects of evaluation contents talent cultivation and skill inheritance publicity display and communication physical preservation and

this paper proposes the use of neural network technology to evaluate college english classroom teaching methods and and the content of the article has a unique and innovative way but some details have not been done well if the following problems there considered the quality of the article to be greatly improved there are few references important and some important research status at home and abroad has often been mentioned adding important variables will make the article more substantial the neural network field diagram in the third part has no relevant content explanation and the writing of the article is rough and very unreasonable some important equations in a third part have no relevant content explanation because this type of formula is a special equation in related fields

thanks to the authors for their work however i must recommend certain improvements introduction this section needs more depth part of the coverage is correct but more indepth theoretical background or theoretical definition is needed in addition this part of the bibliography must pay attention to the style and author both correct and standardized i think the analytical dimension chosen in the second part is better the paper introduces three concepts of driving force pulling force and mutual force for reference traces back to the historical source and reviews and suggests that the three factors or dimensions can be properly summarized and the focus should be mutual force which can be more detailed because it reflects the coupling relationship the third part elaborates the four levels of flexible

work is helpful for the researchers as currently its going on the critical application before taking further decisions please improve the manuscript by incorporating below given corrections what is the drawback of this proposed soil fertility algorithm sfa why you have taken compute soil training datasetstri and soil testing datasetstej please justify related work that is in my opinion acceptable check for suitable references in accordance with your articles reference determine which tables and figures may be affected by the contents of this work this papers result graph in my opinion should be original study with superior results remove the performance evaluation models support metrics from the graph this graphs support metric has misplaced its relevance few latest references should be included in the abstract add one or

the writers have presented an important study and the findings are interesting these revisions are need for the acceptance of the manuscriptthe subsections of the abstract should be merged together and a background and main findings be include the abstract should end with a line about conclusionsmyasthenia gravis is a personality disorder what are medical procedures for the development of this disorder how rapidly it occurs what are the current treatment options available it would be explained in introductionhas grilled nux vomica used previously in the management of mg if so mention the studies or else provide reasons for the selection of the nux vomica for the present studyfor mice experiments some details about mice age weight grouping diet etc is neededthe weight of the images should be

doublecheck all equations the first few of sentences in the introduction section are confusing for manuscript but several grammatical and typographical variants please doublecheck the reference because some of their authors translations are misspelt

nasopharyngeal cancer is a type of head and neck cancer where starts in a nasopharynx the upper part of the throat behind the nose and near the base of skull nasopharyngeal cancer is highly common and serious disease in otolaryngology the author chose a very important scientific problem to study this study innovatively assigned a prediction method for npc in radiotherapy based on the beam channel gan model and addressed the problems of different datasets of radiotherapy techniques it was found amongst the authors which the prediction procedure for npc in radiotherapy based on the bcgan not only reduces the need of data for this training set but also accelerates the generation of the model in general this is a very novel new work the author also used

the intelligent transportation system in this paper has is tried out the following questions are raised to evaluate the ordinate which figure has no title the ordinate of figure is no concept even description of figure within the paper is wrong and it refuses to be followed this paper selects an intersection in beijing to test how to choose the intersection when testing the intelligent transportation system in this paper the selected speed is low is the system applicable to different speeds

this paper established a numerical model for the simulation of tight oil reservoir with scattered sandstone bodies threshold pressure gradient tpg is considered in kinematic equation of the numerical model by substituting gravity acceleration term in this paper this research is meaningful but some minor modifications are required before the paper can be considered for publication in figure what is the distribution range of halflength of fractures in scenario a and scenario b how to optimize in field application is the legend in figure wrong please check there are some english mistakes grammatical and temporal errors in the paper its better to find a native english speaker to help you revise it

in materials and methodology grammatical reasoning is to be done in this beginning statement the materials were used for the study are in the results and discussion section four specimens were cast but an average of three is calculated for figure needs clarification sentence case should be changed in this table for the type of specimen discuss trial case for the decrease in compressive strength resultsinclude significance a application of a study provide an explanation of study methodology manuscript needs to check the english description

taking corporate brand visual communication design in the exhibition industry as the research object to explore its design value the value of corporate brand visual communication design in commercial exhibitions is very great and enterprises must attach great importance to commercial exhibitions from the perspective of visual communication design it can be parsed into three levels color space shaping and graphic and text conformity to reconstruct brand design companies must make layout innovation and reconstruction of these three levels and strengthen commercial exhibitions the impact and appeal of the visual communication design of the chinese enterprise brand can truly enhance the influence and popularity of the enterprise brand and ultimately promote the sustainable development of the enterprise brand the following basic corrections are required visual communication design need

the research is technically sound and the authors have used an unbiased method to prove the rationale of the study they have used various measures to assess the questionnaire such as cronbachs alpha validity of the questionnaire as well as the reliability measurement the research is genuine and also original based on the location and also the group population the authors should just be consistent in using either p or p as significant throughout the study overall it is a very good study well done there are some grammatical errors which i have corrected and references are good

since the work focuses on the medical issues a review on the smart healthcare advances should be added the operation challenges resulting from smart medical system may be mentioned the following are the points to be added the emergency response in the work is a little puzzling the work focuses daily data of chinese provinces how to consider the china stock market interaction with medical problems indeed the relationship between epic prevention and the stock market is complex it is necessary to explain the data contained in china stock market accounting research database csmar and the role of these data at the beginning of section some statements should be added to make clear these models were constructed as what are the supports to the selection based on related

update the discussion of each section numerical specifications and discussionequations to date been poorly written please revise them carefullyuse the correct punctuation mark on their papermake the references appear to be identical after varying reference styles to matchcorrect the following sentences let athe electrical system and the mechanical system form the basic system of selfexcited vibration under certain conditions which will trigger the disturbance to appear of torsional vibration under the parameter perturbationbthe nonstationary process of electromechanical coupling vibration in the system will affect the dynamic and steadystate characteristics of the system and even major failurescthe shaft system connecting the permanent magnet synchronous motor to the gearing system and the shaft system connecting the output part of the gearing system to the crushing drum can be simplified to

rewrite the title of the paper in an efficient waythe meaning of the abstract and conclusions is not sufficientcite the most relevant paper according to the paper themethis study applied the blood oxygen level dependent functional magnetic resonance imaging boldfmri technology to acquire brain activation degree of grownup patients with adult comitant exotropia strabismus ces authors must increase the ces patients to for further more efficiency the justification of boldfmri data is not understandablewhich t value is fixed in this researchthe brain activity of the left superior orbital part and inferior frontal gyrus is good enough

this paper mainly adopts the new intervention mode to analyze the postoperative treatment of heart surgery in order to solve the postoperative symptoms of patients and make the treatment of heart disease develop in a better direction these innovations are prominent and important the article can be published in a journal with only minor revisions although this paper is good it would be ever better if some extra data about the mdt is added in the introduction section the author discusses relevant developments in this field at home and abroad and you need to highlight the advantages and disadvantages in particular hundreds of variable graphs are involved in the experiment which requires the introduction of preprocessing analysis of original data which will make the overall experimental steps more

the paper developed a new theoretical solution for the expansion of over consolidated clay the research content of the manuscript is substantial the theoretical derivation is relatively strict and the necessary verification of the new theoretical solution is carried out in general this paper was innovative logical and interesting the following comments may help to support the work of the authors in the section of introduction the authors should make a necessary summary and induction of the current research status and then lead to the research content of this article in line whats the meaning of casm and also in line whats the meaning of cptu as to section why this case was selected whats the consideration the conclusion part is too simple and the percentage is come

the paper presented the strategies for solving the issue of malachite green residues in aquatic products a review there are significant comments the health significance of malachite green residue has not been well established in humans and animals a table should be provided regarding the detection methods and levels of this compound improve the language of the article correct grammatical and spelling mistakes photo is not illustrative the names of the main chemical compounds produced and decomposed are not known there are more related articles that need to be added and analyzed strong and correct conclusion is not stated

the paper titled collusion based data attachments system for secure data processing under resistant control using node insertion device is written well but the author can filter into few changes as per suggestions the abstract can focus on novelty in the work and give the increase or decrease if the precision and accuracy based on the conventional systems the improvements in the aforementioned system can be sorted out to points at the end of the literature survey the name of the proposed model can be given to the other names graphical representation of the table values and the parameter responsible for the increase or decrease can be added in the conclusion the risk detection might be compared with the traditional system and the results can be plotted with

in general the idea of this paper technically makes sense the viewpoints of this article are relatively new and practical here are some specific issues a the author needs of give more content in section of abstract b the author needs to give more detailed explanation including parameters in equation to c the author needs to add more explanation about softmax knowledge d the author needs to give detailed explanation for evaluation metrics e the author needs to add an explanation as fig and fig h the reviewer needs to find more references in the manuscriptg the author should explain why they use hybrid attention mechanism r the author should add a new chapter to describe the prelu strategy

the abstract of this article needs to be reorganized and is desired to reflect what problems theoretical methods research research results conclusions and significance you have based applications by introducing deep learned algorithm your research gives full play to the advantages of deep bp neural network image processing and uses the spatial information of remote sensing images already extract information concerning remote grazing images of lakes and mountains suggest to further elaborate your innovation and contribution in the introduction it is also necessary to introduce the application premise and advantages of deep learning in the simulation and prediction of landscape pattern and model of wetland nature reserve as well as the application ideas from deep learning technology how to apply deep learning algorithm the simulation and prediction of

said paper proposes a cyber risk analysis prototype this proposed implementation is based on identifying an objective function related to system modeling the simulates a conventional mediumsized process the model in figure is that you used in this paperthe manuscript has several issues that need to be solved such as sentence structure meaning final presentations the titles of sections and subsections word order formal words and abbreviations a complete check time a must to correct all these issuesall equations should be centeredthe introduction abstract and conclusion sections should be improved the logical order of these sections cannot be followed easilythe literature review should perform better written and rewrittenthe sections of the manuscript are presented in two different ways part and part part one of them should be pickedsection

the aim is to reduce the influence of power line reconfiguration maintenance and overhaul on the stability of power grid operation and the accuracy of power metering this work proposes a distribution substationoriented topology identification method based on the improved hidden markov model hmm iot is the interconnection of things and people over the internet for information exchange it is a largescale intelligent network system voltage drop occurs when the current passes through the impedance the voltage curve at the similar points at both ends of the system impedance shares a similar waveform sequence then the voltage change curve similarity between the two measuring points can judge their electrical coupling degree the abstract part lacks research conclusions the second paragraph of the introduction is too long so it

in this paper an amount of children with cough variant asthma were selected as the study group in the hospital according to the condition the patients were divided into remission n and exacerbation n groups and healthy experimental patients were included as a control group but i have some more questions the abstract does not summarize the experimental results and is not a qualified abstract so please ask the authors to make changes the study selected patients with cultivated asthma from january to the hospital and analyzed the treatment of cough variants and serum eos and ige indices in children the presence of this sentence was not helpful and the authors were asked to revise please ask the author to revise the format of the full text it