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this research aims to explore the factors that affect the possible marketing by chaowan brand based on international decision tree classification method it used the application of the decision tree classification method to improve the marketing effect of the chaowan brand and proposed the id algorithm based the c algorithm firstly the data mining technology behind the decision tree classification method was introduced according to the data mining technology and the principles of id algorithm and c algorithm were introduced the article is innovative to a certain extent but there are still some problems in the process of research and analysis which are embodied in by grouping the training set according to categories the difference of attributes among different tracks and the difference between the whole were studied

the purpose of logisticsoriented target detection method based on deep learning is clear however the studys results should be thoroughly discussed an issue with the spacing of numerous paragraphs has arisen as a consequence well need to increase the number of relevant citations for the topic a skilled proofreader should repair grammar and sentence construction faults in some opening paragraphs there isnt a clear explanation of the research issue similarly the purpose is vague these components must work together properly if you havent already doublecheck your results some of the findings figures need further explanation and should be provided

based on the analysis of the status quo of intelligent manufacturing capability this paper establishes a set of intelligent manufacturing capability evaluation index system by combining qualitative and quantitative methods and constructs an improved genetic algorithm evaluation model and uses matlab software to train the model finally the feasibility of the algorithm in this paper is analyzed by comparing the fitting degree with the traditional genetic algorithm the idea of the article is very novel but there are the following problems in technical aspects that need to be improved this article mentions that big data creates greater value for the sports industry what specific aspects are reflected in please analyze and supplement in the text the summary of the full text at the end of the article is

in introduction section contents are not sufficient need more information in introduction section the problem statements are not clear and organization of the paper also missingnovelty should discussion is missing in this research articlesome more related articles should include to find the exact problem identificationdetail the dependency of eq with your researchproposed methodology is not clearly statedmore discussion is needed in the result part

review oftwo coding models of single neuron to predict the clinical symptoms in major depressive disorder id the computational neuroscience is a powerful tool in studying neuropsychiatric disorders in this paper based on the modified hodgkinhuxley model two coding models spike patterns and energy cost of single neuron are established to predict the clinical symptoms in major depressive disorder this finding would be useful for us to understand the pathogenesis of mdd this paper focuses on the main topics of computational neuroscience and presents novel results i recommend the manuscript could be published after a minor revision energy model is a coding model of single neuron it should be emphasized in this paper so the author should give the mathematical model in the subsection materials and methods in

this research on optimizing english teaching model in universities is very meaningful and useful meanwhile the work about deep learning is quite detailed shortcomings not need to much improved as following the abstract in the paper fail and include a goal of the research as a result i think the author should add this part to make the abstract more comprehensive and clearly promote the introduction of newer modes of communication and learning like college english i think the author should explain more about figure as the previous explanation is not enough from my perspective during the explanation of smart classroom model based on deep learning it seems that the author ignore one important aspect as a result the author should add the ignored portion i think the

the authors in this research include the numerical solutions of twoterm timefractional pde models using an efficient and accurate local meshless method due to the advantages of the meshless nature and ease of applicability in higher dimensions the demand for meshless techniques is increasing this approach approximates the solution on a uniform or scattered set of nodes resulting in wellconditioned and spare coefficient matrices numerical tests are performed to demonstrate the efficacy and accuracy of the proposed local meshless technique this work seems to be original and presentation of the paper is good this paper is as per required scope of special issue i recommend this research article for publication but before acceptance i suggest following minor revisionsreviewer comment in the presented local meshless methods dont they still

for the collection of logistics supply chain data this paper uses the data collection mode combining rfid and nfc and designs abp neural network algorithm for the shortcomings of bp neural network which significantly improves the efficiency of data collection aiming at the analysis of supply chain big data all numerical retrieval and analysis system for logistics data is designed using data acquisition algorithm and integrated into the data acquisition module and then the acquired data is transmitted to the big city center through the multisensor network which then the system performs again however there are still problems in other technical aspects of the article as follows when using the nfc smart terminal or reader to read tags there may also be a phenomenon of reading multiple tags

the presentation of this article is very chinesespeaking so please get a native english speaker to revise translate and embellish it modify the title such that all words save prepositions begin with a capital letter because the technique section of the abstract is overly simplistic it is proposed that additional supplements be added the abstracts conclusion is also missing in clinical and future implications which should be filled it might be advised to provide a future view capitalize important terms there were too few references added to more than no conflicts of interest gratitude data provided author contributions declaration ideas to augment each authors contributions

anlotinib for platinumresistant recurrent ovarian cancer in china a realworld clinical experiencethe following minor comments are for further improving the quality of our study the results of recent clinical studies have been the prime motivation for this research how many patients are studied in this paper it is better to add description about them on paper needs some kind of grammatical revision and elaboration in a few sections i also suggest the author should check the language more carefully in attempt to avoid spelling and grammar error check the paper formatting especially the abstract part the format in the references must be tailored describe the basic vocabulary related to the safety assessment explain current importance of fig in safe paperthe authors can consider proofreading article content a few

my draft of the paper not shown below follow it and improve your paperplease make the necessary adjustments to table as soon as possibleplease match the style of the last two pages to the othersplease establish the current state of surgical procedure application and the importance of this studycould you kindly clarify why patients under the age of were not includedthe paper presentation is not appreciable work seriously to improve the content of the paperthe discussion section particularly the comparison of past research projects should be improvedfrom the start you must specify explicitly what your study will look at an indepth overview of the subject should be established first part of your introductionit is vital that you extend the scope of your contribution from the start your introduction

the submitted manuscript developed and validated a predictive nomogram for vte in tdm nonsurgical hospitalized patients in my opinion such research project is interesting and worth considering however to what concerns the submitted paper i have several concerns the literal presentation is not satisfactory most of the sentences within the text would need rephrasingrewording and the citation of several references could be improved the selection of statistical methods should be described some of the images are blurred and the author should replace them with clear images with higher resolution there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design the format of references should be consistent with that of journals

due to the complexity of the environment of the archaeological site and for the purpose of protecting cultural relics this paper intends to apply intelligent wireless sensor network iwsn to the archaeological excavation site so that the dynamic site of archaeological excavation can be monitored in real time the structure and function of wireless sensor network wsn are discussed aiming at the problem of limited dynamic monitoring of wsn iwsn is established using geographic information system gis and remote sensing technology combined with iwsn the dynamic environmental monitoring of archaeological excavation site is realized the results show that the inverse distance power idp algorithm has a decreasing trend in the temperature and humidity monitoring data and its performance is relatively stable and better than the other two algorithms

the manuscript the diagnosis and prevention of covid infection originating in animals and the environment a review of infectious diseases can be published after the major revisioncomment explain how your paper differs from the others in the introductioncomment the papers language needs to be improved to address problems such as long and complex sentencescomment the selection of related work papers is inconsistent the information in this section should be restructured so that it is easy to read and understand the comment can be addressed with update papers during comment please cite all figures the authors should cite figure since it appears in other paperscomment please add your suggestion in section conclussion the conclusion can be separated to discussion and conclusioncomment please mention your motivation in the review paper

this manuscript describes epidemiologic characteristics for the shenyang region regarding breast cancer and can thus contribute to the evidence regarding cancer development in east asia unfortunately the work remains very superficial so that the gain of knowledge is currently quite limited in addition there are still some gaps in the application and description of the methodsmajor commentsa description of the characteristics completeness etc of the registry would facilitate the interpretation of the analysis presentedthe description on rate calculation can be assumed to be known and instead make room for other important methodological descriptions which are still missingfor example the description of the joinpoint method is currently deficient first of all there is no indication of the objective with which this method was applied furthermore it must be mentioned

the traditional text recognition methods cannot meet the recognition requirements in the current complex environment in terms of speed and accuracy this article is devoted to the study of automated machine learning algorithms to innovate text recognition systems through machine learning algorithms the design of each part is reasonable and some areas can be improved in the research content and organization of this paper this paper found that the current research on text recognition algorithms and systems in complex backgrounds is not complete but there is no summary of the current research status please add a summary of the current research status this part explained the content organization of each part of the article but did not give a detailed description of the result types in the result

the authors present a sah model to characterize and determine the effect of pinocembrin pino on sahinduced early brain injury with its potential mechanism the study is consisted of experiments this study showed that sirt was significantly increased after sah and targeted pgc and nfb to ameliorate ebi and neurological deficits in sah model knockdown of sirt by ex inhibited the beneficial effects of pino in vivo sah model this suggests that sirt activation during sah may lead to neuroprotective effects which might be a potential therapeutic target for ebi after sah while the study results are very interesting further improvements that enhance the understanding and quality of the study are required to make this paper accepted for publication in oxidative medicine and cellular longevityintroduction authors should mention

my points about this paper are as follows please follow it and make these manuscript better as soon as possibleachange the first couple of sentences by the section on endfiber power output and statistical properties results of accutech holmium laser under different power energy frequency states and different heat states are as followsbit contains a grammatical error to make the paper more understandable to correct it and to improve its appearanceci am unable to understand the documents continuity because the sectional and subsectional numbers are not mentioned this many sections and subsections should be properly numbereddthe third sentence of the abstract section has a particularly harsh term this sentence needs to get mentioned content of the paper is not mentioned in the first part as a result please

the present study evaluated three root closure techniques for iroot sp root canal although none of the methods were able to prevent cavities completely the iroot sp singletip technology provided the best filling quality the findings were important to dental practicemajor concerns english needs to be improved throughout the manuscript such as the wrong terminologies of pore root pipe system etc the exact date of patient enrollment should be described although the premolars were collected after extraction from the patients an informed consent from the patients should still be provided were p values onesided or twosided a twosided p value will be more convincing it is not clear how many samples were included in each group

in this manuscript treatment of morellavalle lesions mlls with mesh incisions combined with quilting sutures and negative pressure wound therapy npwt the authors summarized the clinical efficacy of suture technique combined with npwt in the treatment of mll fibrotic pseudocapsule wall however there are some format mistakes and unappropriated descriptions that should be taken consideration major points in the abstract of the article the author should divide the abstract into background methods results and conclusions and show them in sections please add keywords to this article there are many articles similar to this paper what is the innovation and significance of this articleminor points please polish the language of the article and adjust the format of the article more details about mll can be described in the introduction

this study provides user analysis technology to examine the customized recommendation of educational resources of the ibcfr algorithm it delves deeply into the essential characteristics of personalized recommendation service of educational resources and builds a personalized recommendation mode of educational resources to serve as a model for carrying out personalized recommendation service of educational resources and meeting learners personalized learning needs in the context of big data the experimental research demonstrated that the customized recommendation method of higher education resources based on dimensional association rules has good clustering reliability and a low time consumed for education resource recommendations i am impressed by the theme of this paper and recommend minor revision as i have some observations that need to be addressed i have the following observations and suggestions

with the implementation of the broadband china strategy and the rapid development of mobile smart terminals the internet has penetrated into all areas of the economy and society but has greatly affected peoples living standards production methods industrial standards and service levels system model internet operations the improvement update surpassing and advancement of internet applications please revise the article carefully for any deficienciesi in the description of figure the article mentions that it is generally believed that when the absolute value of the skewness of the sample data obtained by the study were less than and the absolute value of kurtosis is less than it indicates though the sample basically obeys the normal values then what are the mean what are the typical mode and median values mean

from the discovery of bioinformatics analysis to the verification of multiple clinical biological samples to the possible pathway analysis this study systematically revealed the potential biological function and possible involvement of the ma demethyltransferase fto in thyroid cancer it provides a certain theoretical basis for the diagnosis and prevention of thyroid cancer the github code provided by the author needs to be rereviewed and uploaded so that the results of the article can be better reproduced the website of the source of the information used by the public database needs to be stated in the article mistakes in english grammar throughout the manuscript leave descriptions ambiguous and substantially hinder the readability of the paper and algorithm authors should update some of the latest references to make the article

the corrections and details on manuscript content are presented in the attached file the main paper needs english gramatical corrections details of the parts related sections should be added based on suggestions

in order to explore the role of ectonucleotide pyrophosphatasephosphodiesterase enpp in promoting the regression of vascular calcification in rats and to elucidate its mechanism rat thoracic aortic vascular smooth muscle cells vsmc are divided into the experimental group the model group and the normal group respectively a few minor revision are list belowthe wording and style of some section particularly those concerning vsmc need careful editing attention should be paid to the wording of those parts of the discussion of and summary which have been underlinedalthough this paper is good it would be ever better if some extra data are added although these observation are interesting they are rather limited and do not advance our knowledge of the subject sufficiently to warrant publication in vsmc we feel that

with the widespread application of online learning technologies such as moocs and blended teaching in college physical education courses a large number of long videos of students practicing their movements have emerged because of the large number of videos and the similar content and actions the fast and effective teaching evaluation of these videos has become a hot topic of discussion this article uses fisher vector coding technology to study the possibility of automatic scoring of aerobics competition videos the content of the article is detailed and the inference is rigorous which has a demonstration effect on the innovation of teaching evaluation methods according to the authors description in the introduction teacher demonstration student imitation is an effective traditional teaching mode in physical education class it mainly completes

commentsstate of art should be defined section in the introduction partwhat are the features extracted using words in the proposed model the flow of hog in feature extractionfigure legends should contain enough detail to describe this figure without making the reader addicted to the textgive the detailed content metrics in the results section need to be linked with how the result was tested in proper description

this paper obtains the relevant data on the traffic flow vehicle waiting time and vehicle parking times from the simulated traffic experiment and combines the collected data to carry out different control schemes and network coverage experiments and traffic optimization scheme comparison experiments i have following recommendations give full form of mac in the abstract however there are few studies on the application layer of intelligent network systems can you define which studies justify it is difficult to build a largescale intelligent network environment under current technical conditions and insufficient data sources are the fundamental reason explain equation in detail with proper reference provide more details of figure schematic diagram of effective green light time calculation add future directions in the conclusion section

during the monitoring process whether the monitoring period is divided according to the traffic flow density which may be more targeted whether to take the vibration of the measuring point when there is no vehicle passing as the initial value to reduce the influence of environmental factors on vibration data when the relationship between vibration and distance is drawn is it considered to add the suggestion of instrument storage to the conclusion limitations and future works should be provided in a separate section before conclusion

in the proposed manuscript authors describe a new approach called tdd throughput and delay distribution a fault detection method that aims to detect with an higher accuracy the failures occurred in smart home devicesthe approach proposed is interesting there are however some point that needs to be discussedauthors compare the proposed method with other existing ones declaring that our approach is more efficient and easy to implementsthe proposed approach is composed by several steps that should be more easy to reproduce than the existing onesopen points how often the marked probe data packet is sent are you sure that this transmission will not interfere with the behavior of the system under test how do you determine the size of heartbeat packet inspection can authors please clarify the sentence

i am glad to have the opportunity to read application value of evidencebased nursing in pipeline application of aged bedridden care but there are several problems that need to be discussed there remain some obvious mistakes please revise if the abbreviation first appears the full name should be chosen please provide specific measures for patient pipeline management and suggest presenting them in the form of tables discussion should include main summary of those major results of their study and comparing the study with previous ones new hypothesis what direction might be proposed in the discussion section there have been some similar studies what became the innovation of this study please added

in this paper the authors a novel watermarking image processing models for intellectual property protection although the ideal of this research is interesting some major revision are still needed the authors may refer to the following comments the language of this paper is very poor so the authors should invite a professional editor to polish up the language a summary for contribution of this paper should be described in the introduction part the reference of other comparative models should be pointed at the table and do you have any comparative experiments with some other researches about watermarking more supplementary references should be used in the manuscript for authors convenience i list the related references as follows song j zhong q wang w et al fpdp flexible privacypreserving data

the author demonstrated the role of suppression of adar by azaadenosine ameliorates liver damage through alleviating oxidative stress and pyroptosis in young streptozotocininduced diabetic mice this manuscript is well written however there are still some problem need to be solved before consideration therefore i suggest a minor revision to the manuscript below are my commentsin your research stz induces tdm model with hyperglycemia and then hyperglycemia causes liver damage right can you highlight the role of liver damage in tdm in introduction with short sentencehow about islets change in stz induces tdm model under aza treatment like oxidative stresswhy are you highlight the pyroptosis in your research the title apoptosis and necrosis also exits in diabetic micedoes aza inhibit adar specifically does aza inhibit adar and adar since

why did you choose this design for your research work add relevant research article in baffled solar air heaters in literature what criteria are used to select the range of parameters describe the novelty of this work correctly update the specifications of all instruments utilized in this project check and correct equation no to rewrite the conclusions to explain the impact of the work mention the capacity of blower correct the english language wherever applicable

reviewergnanaprakasam periyasamy purpose a manuscript with the title a singlestep synthesis of hexagonal ag nanoplates decorated reduced graphene oxide and its cytotoxicity studies i have some issues that must be answered before any decisionauthor should mention the chemical formulas of required materialsall abbreviations should be defined at the first usage please carefully check them throughout the text such as rgo hnpts nrds and so onmanuscript is poorly written and contains numbers of grammatical and spelled mistakes it should be revised with native person in eds spectra a strong peak observe between kev there is a sharp peak in fig could you explain why the observed peak is other than used material then elaborates it and mention the source the author should mention the hkl value of rgo and

i suggest to the authors please improve the language of the paper the potential application of wntcatenin pathway crosstalk in resistancethe introduction makes no indication of the papers structure as a result in his opening section please offer a sectionbysection examination of your findingswhy the wntcatenin pathway is necessary for both developmental and adult tissue homeostasisfix typographical and line spacing mistakes in the manuscriptthe discussion in our article is rather lengthy and does not effectively summarise the details final paper create a more advantageous environmentwhat are the factors cancer and wntcatenin signaling also give some detail about thislittle more work about the role of mucin in development of cancer sectionthis works final reference list is presented in a picturestyle website to solve this problem kindly take your

the paper a study of deep neural networkbased diagnosis method for pediatric heart diseases has some technical issues they are discussed belowaplease describe the thoroughly advantages of color doppler microscopy technology in clinical diagnosisbsince list has been incorrectly worded i ask all authors to restate it accurately and in mathematical formcbackground information about my research should already be included in the introduction you should pay close attention to it because it omits many crucial elementsdthe this manuscript has a few grammatical mistakes kindly correctewhy the malformations are divided using categoriesfdefine all the process in detail the medical image datagrequire the full name of the svm and mlphthe files has to be revised to include significant findingsithe introductions final paragraph should include a summary of the chapters accomplishments

the authors were going to show how the common network reduction techniques might have significant error in their results during operational planning studies they presented an index based on voltage setpoints of generators to differentiate the voltage source in the reduced network consequently the results showed the effectiveness of the method on a test and practical power system the paper is well written and clearly described the problem and the solution in the manuscript however i have some consideration about this paper a why the authors used digsilent software for the studied network if the capabilities of this software are one of the main reasons it is better to name the usage of this software in the title of the paper clearly b in the keywords of the

as to the complexity of the environment of the archaeological site and for the purpose besides preserving cultural relics this part intends to apply intelligent wireless sensor network iwsn to the archaeological excavation site so why the dynamic site of archaeological excavation can get monitored in real time the structure and function of wireless sensor network applications are discussed aiming at the problem of limited dynamic monitoring of wsn project has established using geographic information system gis and remote sensing technology combined with iwsn the dynamic environmental monitoring of archaeological excavation site is realized the results show that the inverse distance power idp algorithm has a decreasing trend in the temperature and humidity monitoring data and its performance is relatively stable and better of the other two algorithms

this paper studies the knowledge spillover effect of employee mobility in regional economic development under the big data environment its theoretical significance is to bring knowledge spillover into regional production function on the basis of regional economic growth theory and point out the role of knowledge spillover in promoting regional economic growth through the study of knowledge spillover effect in regional economic growth it is concluded that innovative knowledge plays a decisive role in regional economic development thats a good idea however this article still has the following problemsa the content of the abstract is not perfect among which the significance of knowledge spillovers for regional economic development has been recognized by academic circles and government administrative departments it plays an increasingly important role in realizing rapid economic

the title of the article is developing an interactive digital book narrative study centered about childrens cultural acquisition in public health the authors used an interactive approach to document everyday adolescent behavior and authors research is meaningful and the method used is relatively new but there are several issues in the book that need to be addressed in contrast to adults childrens thinking is narrative and their world perception is storyline oriented in the process of cognition of this world the acquisition of figurative contextual and direct experiences is superior to the acquisition of indirect ones so narrative thinking has an unshakable role in childrens mental activity it is difficult for readers to define what this all meansthe logic of such narrative description needs to been strengthened and

in the process of reviewing the articles i found some key problems which cause the author to deliberately modify the following problemsthe title should be accurate concise and innovative please revise the titlethe abstract of this article is too general and the description of the article better be brief and comprehensivethe abstract should not repeat the discussion and reflect the conclusions and ideas of the whole review including the purpose and application of the research workin introduction there is too little description about the concept of drug eluting stentin method the unit of measurement should be standardized please have someone competent in the english language and the subject matter within your paper go over the paper and correct itmethodological limitations should be added to written discussionthe author should

it is of great significance to study whether the patients movements meet the standard when performing rehabilitation exercises based on kinects intelligent assessment fuglmeyer is selected as the evaluation index which is the basis of the algorithm but there are still some problems with the details of the article the article proposes that the clinical treatment of parkinsons patients is mostly drug therapy studies have shown that patients who take drug therapy for a long time will cause a lot of discomfort in the patients body what is the way to reduce medication part of the content of the conclusion part of the article is not closely related to the research and can be adjusted and deleted appropriately to strengthen the correlation between the language of the article

aequation is missing the description of the parameters please addbplease typeset the article again the typesetting of this article is a bit confusingcfrom to the development speed of the new urbanization level in guangdong province increased significantly it would be better if some data could be addeddthe abstract of this paper needs to give experimental results please optimizeeplease number each part so that it is easy for readers to readfthere are many pictures in the text please make sure that the pictures you provide are qualified

it is difficult to read the article english translation and organization of the article can be significantly improved in the abstract and rest of article there is apparent disconnect between pseudoaneurysm on ct and fistula embolization on catheter angiography it is not apparent from the main text that fistula was diagnosed on ct angiogram text just mentions pseudoaneurysm on ct angiogram if arteriovenous fistula was first idenfied on catheter angiogram the text should clarify this eg subsequently neurointerventionalist identified and treated an av fistula under both abstract and case report there are versions of the phrase fistula occlusion was performed with coils and a vial the vertebral catheter was catheterized looks like vial should be vial of squid as in legend for figure looks like vertebral catheter was

the paper entitled pirfenidone alleviates intrauterine infectioninduced childhood injuries by targeting tgf smad signaling pathway by ding et as is about identifying histological damages in neonatal after intrauterine infection and assesses the potential protective effects of pirfenidone pfd the paper has novel methods and results moreover the study has significance in the healthcare domain however there seems room for improvement if the following comments are taken into accountiit is better not to use symbols in the title of said paper unless they are very necessary to use hence authors should reconsider writing iiin the abstract conclusions may be conclusions the background should have background and objectivesiiikeywords should be alphabetically arranged in ascending orderivthere are too many acronyms used in the paper therefore no list of acronyms should contain

the paper is probably publishable but should be reviewed again in revised form before it is accepted you could collect clinical patients data or databases to further support your point maybe it is better to add ic of vincristine

according to my understanding this paper presents an idea of analyzing the increase in carbon dioxide emission with the loss of tree cover taking pakistan as a case studybelow ar e my suugestionswhy double brakcets are used everytime while defining acroynyms starting from the absttact to conlcusin everywhere egsome text st is usedintrodcution should be divied into mutpitple paragrpahs it is too hard to read whole introducitonsimilarly paragraphs on other places should also splitfigure needs more explanation in the textfigure need improvementsthe literature of the paper is poor recommended to consider the most recent articles for the literature a novel pcawhale optimizationbased deep neural network model for classification of tomato plant diseases using gpuproviding diagnosis on diabetes using cloud computing environment to the people living in rural areas

the paper presented for the review is aimed to use threedimensional finite element technology to evaluate the morphology of the proximal femur in patients at high altitude and to deduce the optimal insertion angle and position of the screw which provides a scientific basis for the treatment of clinical femoral neck fractures in high altitude areasthe background for the study is based on the data from the anatomical studies regarding some specific issues of the proximal femur in people living in the different ecological environments including altitude taking into account high incidence of the proximal femoral disorders including the most common femoral neck fractures it seems reasonable to create an adoptive strategy for the typical surgical procedures in the patients with those anatomical variations the authors conducted the

this manuscript by zhou et al evaluates the role of elav like rna binding protein elavl in endothelial cell injurymediated by cytokines storm associated with sepsis specifically the authors show that elavl knockdown protects lpsinduced endothelial cell injury reduced subintestinal vein by suppressing cytokines in sepsis zebrafish modelthis is an interesting study that determines the potential role of elavl in vascular endothelial cell death associated with sepsis but unfortunately the study is very simple with limited findings and lacks the mechanistic role of elavl in vascular defects associated with sepsis all the below raised comments need to be addressed to strongly support the unknown mechanistic role of elavl in the sepsis in the context of ec death apoptotic pathway activation caspase and impairment of antiapoptoticantiinflammatory cytokines is necessary

the abstract should include quantitative results try to bring the text of the introduction completely close to the subject of the article the introduction chapter requires the research purposes in detail since they are vague in their present form please revise them on line explain more about the importance of nonionizing radiation on line explain the importance of early detection of the disease and the effect of photoacoustic imaging on it describe the different stages of research and the novel strategy of this article in the introduction the advantages and disadvantages of the method used in the research should be written in the introduction please provide more details regarding materials and method on line further discussion of figure should be provided the discussion in the present form is

review reportin this review the authors describe how glutathione affect the pathogenesis of intervertebral disc degeneration the authors have included relevant references and discuss latest findings related to the role of glutathione in intervertebral disc degeneration i recommend publication of the manuscript the specific comments are listed below in figure please include a description of the figure along with the figure title please italicize all the scientific names given in the article for example in table

this paper combines data mining technology to analyze the impact of organizational support on employee creativity so as to study the impact of personnel creativity in a certain enterprise the article has strong practical value and practical significance and basically meets the publication requirements of journals however the content of some chapters of the article needs to be further supplemented as follows in the process of improving the enterprise management data mining algorithm what is the core idea of the structure learning method based on score search mdl includes the description length of the network and the coding length of the sample what does this mean for this paper both types of scoring methods have their own advantages and disadvantages but what are the advantages and disadvantages of

the manuscript describes in a very interesting i suggest that the authors also include a paragraph on the biological properties of other medicinal plants see belowfernndez j silvn b entrialgocadierno rvillar cj capasso r uranga j a lomb f l abalo r antiproliferative and palliative activity of flavonoids in colorectal cancer biomed pharmacother doiorgjbiophahossain s urbi z karuniawati h mohiuddin rb moh qrimida a allzrag ammming lc pagano e capasso r iandrographis paniculatai burm f wall exnees an updated review of phytochemistry antimicrobial pharmacology andclinical safety and efficacy life basel apr shahbaz a abbasi ba iqbal j ahmad a mahmood t chemical composition of gastrocotyle hispida forssk bunge and heliotropium crispum desf and evaluation of their multiple in vitro biological potentials saudi journal of biological sciences pp akkol

this submitted article evaluates the clinical effect of brandtdaroff training combined with otolithoscope in patients with benign paroxysmal vertigo the study considers patients with benign paroxysmal vertigo treated by otolith reduction instrument were randomly divided into control group n and observation group n it was pointed out that compared with the control group the clinical treatment effect of the treatment group was better than the control group p the difference was statistically significant the total index score of vertigo disability rating scale dhi was significantly lower than that of control group p although the paper has significant contributions however there are some minor issues that might be addressed before allowing the publication of the article introduction is one big paragraph it should consist of two or three smaller

the authors propose an efficient authenticated searchable encryption scheme which avoids bilinear pairing computation and achieves lightweight search using wise algebraic operation the proposed scheme realizes the searchable ciphertext indistinguishability and the trapdoor indistinguishability experimental results demonstrate that this scheme has the best search efficiency among compared related schemes the paper is wellstructured and well presented however authors should prepare a major revisiondespite the quality of the paper i have some questions and remarks that must be taken into consideration and correctedthe abstract section should be reorganized for example it is hard to understand the relationship between two sentences of symmetric searchable encryption and a public key encryption scheme moreover please give more specific description of the indistinguishability of the same keywordsthe sentence should be rewritten in itroduction

this research work is about thorough analysis of of detecting dementia patient using smart home the research domain addressed in this research paper is novel and the results are satisfactory but it needs the below improvementsreduce unnecessary text from the paperreduce the size of the introductioncontributions at the end of the introduction section should be polishedrelevant literature reviews of the latest similar research studies on the topic at hand must be discussedthe result section needs to be polishedsimulation results need improvementsdont use its i your and any informal text in the paperthere are some grammar and typo errorsi recommend to must add more uptodate references related to the security of in the introduction and literature as given below electrocardiogram soft computing using hybrid deep learning cnnelma collaborative healthcare

with the continuous development of social economy hospital management has become a key factor affecting hospital income with the development of artificial intelligence technology neural network has been widely used in hospital management this paper studies three important components of hospital management outpatient number hospital income and drug demand by calculating the weight of each single neural network model a combination prediction model of different neural networks is established to predict outpatient number hospital income and drug demand and its prediction accuracy and stability are evaluated the suggestions are as how to determine the weight of each single neural network model in the neural network combination model is not reflected in the abstract there is no prediction result of single neural network model in the prediction of outpatient

after reading the article as a whole the following questions and comments are available for you to answer and revise where was random matrix theory often used please briefly explain them please briefly describe the characteristic spectrum analysis of the weight matrix after completing the construction of the evaluation index system what methods were used in this study to ensure the validity of the validation findings what are the aspects of museum informatization mentioned in this article please elaborate them briefly what are the main areas of research on information museums in china please outline them the references in the rows of the article need to be cited in order the article contains a large number of tables so please double check and verify that no data is

the abstract does not reflect several relevant capabilities of ai deep neural network should we simply describe the techniques and methods used in this research in the abstract so that a complete summary can be formedin the preface there are three paragraphs in total among which two ends describe breast cancer the third paragraph introduces ai technology in a short length and this research includes on emerging technology of ai imaging the neural network doesnt it please add to this introduction the third preambular paragraphwhile method elaborates on mammogram calcification criteria it does not cite relevant literature so where did you get this criteria results the value curve in does not have relevant statistical values please complete the supplementgeneral information to supplement the case datadelete meaningless blank lines

at present in order to meet the sustainable development of enterprises new talent knowledge technology is being introduced to evaluate the quality indicators of internal staff at the same time the research programs human resources evaluation software and enterprise employee delay assessment factors has become the most important research topic in the field of human resources management however at present there are relatively few research contents on human resources and enterprise management decisionmaking and we are still no relevant research facilities that can support the current enterprise employees personal comprehensive quality structure and lack the correct guidance of employee performance in order to further improve the efficiency of enterprise personnel resources and the management decisionmaking this paper carries out its analysis and research on human capital and enterprise

through the application analysis of flexible management in the work of college students flexible management has the advantages of peopleoriented flexibility flexibility and comprehensiveness and pays attention to humanized education and personalized training which is a kind of subjective managementthis management is studentcentered respects students personality and dignity strives to shape the university spirit and university culture and gives full play to students subjectivity and creativityin the process of student management students are authorized to participate in management and decisionmaking enhance students sense of ownership and responsibility stimulate students learning motivation fully tap their own potential can set high learning goals and gradually realize the goal of selfeducation and selfmanagementthe paper has sufficient arguments but the paper still has the following problems in section of this article the

the text requires very substantial proofreading it is difficult for the reviewer to follow the introduction doesnt provide the contributions of this paper especially compared with the listed references the experiment section doesnt give any analysis in the mathematically form which makes reader difficult understand the simulation results lack of sufficient analysis the authors should explain the reasons for the obtained result the structure of this paper is confused and messy and it should be reorganized

this paper is devoted to researching the optimization of artificial intelligence in localized big data realtime query processing task scheduling algorithm this experiment is persuasive to a certain extent the experimental process is relatively detailed but there are also some imprecisions it can be improved in the following aspects the background part of the article is clear closely related to the meaning of the title and the background content involves big data and task scheduling but does it end abruptly at the end this paper expounds the relevant theory of task scheduling which is closely related to the meaning of the question in the description of figure it is stated that resource scheduling is extremely important shouldnt it be important to explain the reason in the theoretical elaboration

mei et al showed that haemophilus influenza hi infects children primarily through the respiratory route the epidemic capsular typing in this study is nthi the epidemic biological typing is ii and iii and the epidemic resistance group is lactamase positive ampicillin resistance blpar the epidemic resistance mechanism is temtype lactamase production the detection data includes lactamase negative ampicillin resistance and the lactamase positive amoxicillinclavulanate resistance is relatively low in this area which requires close attention human study not interesting and meaningful however there are many corrections should be mademajor revisionsplease simplify the part of abstract too many wordsplease make the references by using endnote softwareplease show more details about products and clinical isolates in the part of methodplease adjust the format of this article and make them good

the authors explored the correlation between the tyg index and coagulation markers in patients with rencent ami the work is interesting and well conductedin this study the authors focused on the correlation between the tyg index and coagulation markers in patients with ami this is a crosssectional study and did not analyze the cardiovascular outcomes thus the article title is not suitable the correlation between the tyg index and coagulation marks in patients with recent acute myocardial infarction may be easily for reader to understand this studyprevious study have found that the tyg index predicted the presense and severity of cad front cardiovasc med jul doi fcvm and adverse cardiovascular events in patients with premature coronary artery diseasecardiovasc diabetol jul doi s please discuss this point as suggestedas

this paper develops a method of generating character animation based on neural network this paper introduces the relevant theories and models optimizes the weight of the target and determines the final objective function however there are still several minor problems to be improvedin abstract the introduction of the proposed method is not very clear and needs further modification please modify itin section the author introduced the generation of character animation but the corresponding introduction lacks references and is not specific enough please modify itin section there are grammatical errors and the corresponding sentence description is not clear please modifyfor figure the size of the words in the picture is slightly smaller please enlarge appropriatelyin section the description of equation is not very clear please add itin section the

the study by dr tang is very interesting the comments are presented below the sample size is very small the selection bias could not be avoided do the authors have a external validation for their results did they use the magnetic resonance imaging mri related parameters in the prediction dwi should be defined in its first used in the introduction section the data source of the study should be clarified in the methods section

aplease add the following few lines to the experimental section the main points of the experimental portion are now completebwho was in charge of calculating the data in table please give the precise formula or the pertinent source the data in table were also accurately updatedcimprove the overall language of the shikonin and immuneassociated inflammatory diseases sectiondit has been reported that shikonin significantly inhibits the antidsdna antibody in a mouse model of lupus nephritis and downregulates the expression of intercellular adhesion molecule icam and vascular cell adhesion molecule vcam i suggest to the authors please give some detail about the mouse modelethe background of the research should also be mentioned in the introduction its important that you pay attention to it because it leaves out a lot of

this article points out that qistagnation qideficiency yangdeficiency and yindeficiency are the main physical types of patients with decreased ovarian reserve and they are also the risk factors for the incidence of decreased ovarian reserve which indeed provides a direction for the prevention of the disease however the document has several linguistic and grammatical issues that reduce the clarity and effectiveness of the study my main points are listed here are the conclusions in the abstract too simplistic please do theme sublimationpart of the figures scale bars are missingcheck that the names of periodicals included in the reference list are spelled correctly and that all pages meet the journals standards the indications are missing and the p values need to be correctedadd future research opportunities in the conclusion

this paper summarizes the current status of perioperative care for esd in recent years and provides some reference for its improvement of social outcomes in esd tr but there been still some differences in that paperthe abstract is a summary of an article to reflect the main focus of the article so this abstract part needs to be concise and brief some unnecessary content can be deleted in the abstract of this paper and it is suggested to seriously modify and refine this main content of the articlethe conclusion of the abstract is the same as the conclusion of the introduction and the authors are invited to make changesthe author was asked to determine why psychological care is necessary and how the benefits arein the section pain care

this paper explores the evaluation of gross ht serum on psychiatric disorders exercise for the treatment of psychiatric disorders and explores an mental health status and value but there are some problems in the papertotal evaluation levels were higher in the ht group than in the control group of the abstract because the less severe the psychiatric symptoms the higher the total serum value for ht however this is not a conclusion and the authors were asked to make additionsthe keywords in the text should be reorganized and these keywords must be geared more toward methods rather than learning tricks or techniquesthis article mentions that the beck depression inventory methodology was a scale specifically designed to measure depression so why use the beck depression inventory and what are

the entire article has a complete structure the details are handled in place and the logic is clear in the experiment of classical dance body and rhythm teaching the algorithm of cluster analysis is effective however there are still some deficiencies in each chapter and paragraph of the whole article the specific deficiencies are analyzed as followsa the authors description of the article in the abstract section is in place clarifying the gist of the article and indicating the theme it can be seen from the experimental data that questionnaires were distributed in this experiment and were actually returned university a had valid questionnaires among them the number of people who had studied dance for years was the largest with people accounting for about nearly half of the

there are problems with the grouping in the methodology section order of admission for grouping this grouping is too sketchy and does not reflect randomisation making the study evidence very low change p to italics eg p also please check the full text and remove unnecessary spaces eg p please add treatments such as acupuncture and traditional chinese medicine that can promote postoperative recovery and reduce pain it is possible that the addition of these treatments will have better results the baseline information is suggested to be changed to a table format for more visualization in addition the ethical number should also be added the manuscript is full of linguistic errors please find a specialised native english speaker to improve the inclusion criteria are not sufficiently specialised and

in this paper lin and coauthors attempted to determine the prognostic value of a aging and senescencerelated scoring system in luad they demonstrated that ass a senescence scoring system of tumor exhibited robust predictive powers not only for the patients outcomes but also for the efficacies of different therapeutic strategies including adjuvant chemotherapy and immunotherapythere are several comments based on the manuscript shown below please double check the font sizes of all of the figures to make sure they are readable there are many methods to evaluate immune cell infiltration such as mcpcounter timer etc why only these methods is used in this paper how dose the author remove the batch effects caused by nonbiotech bias between different datasets there are a lot grammatic errors and many formatting

the manuscript prediction of earliest hospital arrival in patients with mild and rapidly improving acute traumatic stroke in a rural area of china attempt and devise a predictive algorithm of the late hospital arrival for acute ischemic stroke cases among children in a rural area in china however some major issues regarding the study should be cautiously addressed we read your interest about the marais while this abbreviation supposedly corresponds to the mild and rapid improving the ischemic stroke we discovered very little literature using such abbreviation including the reference no and other literature prefers the expression of the mild versus rapid improving acute ischemic stroke the researchers are kindly reminded to specify the exact keywords and only in the introduction the author stated that among acute ischemic

this paper explores the value and the single care model in the perioperative management of patients with cardiovascular interventions methods the retrospective analysis of clinical data collected from patients with cardiovascular disease is detailed but may exist some problems in the paperin the abstract the methods results and conclusions are studied and the authors are asked to sort them outkeywords for this article goec model of care cardiovascular interventional procedures perioperative period provides value from one request management here and value of one request do t fit the keywordswith the increase in cardiovascular risk factors such as diabetes and hypertension the incidence of cardiovascular disease is also mentioned and what is their connectionthe conclusion in the introduction only clarify the following and the author is invited to revise

epithelial ovarian cancer is one of the most common gynecological malignancies and the mortality rate ranks first among gynecological malignancies surgical treatment is the first treatment but since most of the patients treated are stage iii and iv epithelial ovarian cancer more than of the patients need chemotherapy and other forms of adjuvant treatment after surgerythe purpose of this study was to conducted a certain exploration to explore the effect of cytoreductive surgery combined with oxaliplatin and paclitaxel on ovarian cancer and the effect on vegf he and camy advice to the author is as follows the purpose of this article was to investigate the effects of glucocorticoids antihistamines and leukotriene receptor antagonists on patients with allergic rhinitis and their influence on serum inflammatory indexes however the study

aiming at the system by the approximate estimation of the characteristic parameters of frequencyhopping orchestral timbre signals using the spectrogram procedure has useful realtime performance but it is difficult to balance the antinoise and estimation accuracy this paper proposes a frequencyhopping orchestral timbre based on the timefrequency distribution map signal feature parameter blind estimation method from all subsections provided by the paper the paper has showed good argumentation logic and compared with the existing research the research content provided in this paper indicates certain technical advantages regarding the details of this paper my comments are as follows according to the mathematical expression of the spectrogram method what is the specific calculation amount we set the threshold to distinguish the frequencyhopping orchestral jump signal from the adjacent orchestral timbre

this paper has some innovation means some others need to have edited to improve the quality of the paperfigures may require highquality picturesplease make a more indepth analysis of the data results such as the content in figure please add relevant literature

wang el al showed that complex economy model provides a good method to graphically represent the production data which can accurately predict and reflect the development economic model of the economy in the production system major revisionsplease adjust the keywords maybe not correctplease supplement the background in the part written abstractplease adjust the format of this manuscript according to the guidelines for authors please add the references according to the guidelines for authors please remove more references there are too many grammar errors of typosthe quality of this manuscript should be improvedplease show the virtues and advantages of this manuscriptplease show the results clearlywhat is the meaning of this puzzle

in order to explore the value of medium and high frequency ultrasound in the rehabilitation treatment of achilles tendon rupture after sports injury this paper presents the intelligent monitoring of the dynamic changes of the broken end of achilles tendon by highfrequency ultrasound after achilles tendon repair subjects were confirmed by surgical exploration and treated with achilles tendon rupture using digital color ultrasonic diagnostic instrument the patients were examined at weeks weeks and year after operation the subjects were in prone position their feet were suspended by the bed and the longitudinal and cross sections of achilles tendon injury on the affected side were scanned continuously at the same time they were compared with the healthy side of ecd the distribution of blood vessels at the connection position

people have read the paper the paper is good but the following comments should be addressed in the revised papersome note all headings of this paper are written in the italic font i suggest to the authors please resolve this issuethe papers abstract must be clear please make it more logically continuousi noticed the the radical gastrectomy section is the keywords point but i cannot see any debate in our paper about this section also resolve this issuethe concluding sections first sentence is ambiguous i conclude the authors should work on their first language in the concluding partalso define a clear difference between data sources for selection and the general data from enrolled patientsearly postoperative complications occurred in of patients why for a reasonthe values of the analysis

application of deep learning is presented using subject context in discourse expression of ideological and political educationthere are some merits in the paper but still many changes are required prior to publicationadd suitable contributions in the end of introduction sectionreplace when using the ai based ipe approach when using an ai based ipe approachthere are some grammatical and typo mistakes in the paperconclusion and abstract sections should be revisedadjust table do explain dlipe is used to support college students mental and physical development as well as their ideological and political developmentjustify dlipe approach causes disagreements among certain students defining the ipe as the final propensity toward a new strategy and psychological education method

the authors constructed an immunerelated model using public databases my detailed comments are as follows i noticed that the authors extracted the immunerelated genes from the single cell sequencing database what criteria did the authors use for the selection of immunerelated genes i hope the authors will provide the basic clinical information of the patient in the article we have seen too many similar articles the main problem is that there is not enough evidence how to solve this kind of problem

research on emergency management system and policy of public health emergencies based on big data technology through experimental research big data science is very important in every step regarding public health emergencies public health emergencies also have many characteristics which will has a certain impact on emergencies based on the comparison of each characteristics it is found that the complex harmfulness of public health emergencies has the greater impact some concerns are put forward for the content of the article this refer to the revision figure is about construction of emergency management system please describe its structure in detail for the multidimensional column comparison diagram of figure please describe it in detail the calculation part of part of this paper is not described in detail please briefly describe

commentsin this paper the author focused on an optimization of kmeans clustering algorithm the overall level of the paper is good it is well written and some important considerations are highlighted this paper has the potential to be accepted but some important points have to be fixed before proceeding furtherabstract is appealing to read the paper but still this may be improved to fix noveltypaper is missing the connectivity of the sections author should relate each section before starting a new section authors are missing to include references in literature revie so include the following referencesikhare n devan p chowdhary c l bhattacharya s singh g singh s yoon b smodnn spider monkey optimization and deep neural network hybrid classifier model for intrusion detection electronics iishrimali s pandey

in this study wang et al analyzed the medical examination information of some residents in qingpu shanghai and the results showed that the occurrence of nafld is closely related to age mets and other indices here are comments to benefit the manuscript please add clinical diagnostic criteria for nafld in materials and methods in this study a retrospective analysis of the physical examination of the population was conducted how can ensure the reliability of the diagnosis for the diagnosis of fatty liver by ultrasound according to the results the univariate and multivariate results of ast tc and hdl are opposite it is necessary to consider whether there are some indicators that interfere with the statistical results and please discuss the reasons for this there should be an error

this paper proposed a collaborative filtering recommendation algorithm based from binary one matrix prefilling model principal component dimension reduction and binary kmeans clustering the experimental results on movielens below show the advantages of the proposed algorithm however some comments should be paid much attention the introduction seems to be comprehensive that it lacks analysis and summary of other works besides the innovativeness of this work compared with the methods mentioned in the introduction should more emphasized some times the symbols and formulas in the paper are ambiguous and authors are advised to use those for writing the format of references needs to be unified in addition it is suggested that the authors cite more relevant arguments in the past three years

molecular dynamics research in the field of traditional chinese medicine mainly focuses on its research techniques and methods cancer and influenza viruses and the therapeutic effects of traditional chinese medicine ingredients on diseases the analysis of keywords may represent a new trend of molecular dynamics research in the related fields of traditional chinese medicine the use of keyword search is very innovative there are errors in the following content in the text please correct them the abstract part of the article introduces the method of this paper but the central idea is not clear enough lacks a general statement and the abstract format does not meet the requirements of the journal it is recommended that the author revise it there are many unclear descriptions in english and the

what is new being used in this monograph put this information in the abstract suggestions to include references a book machining springer isbn b book ceramic matrix systems de gruyter isbn c book nontraditional machining processes springer isbn g book mechanical and industrial engineering springer author e book metal crushing technologies de springer isbn f book modern maching technology a practical guide elsevier isbn and other articles of other international journals although deeper discussion of the results obtained is needed in the discussion development it is very important to emphasize points of agreement or disagreement between results in this work and others cited in each part of manuscriptimprove the conclusions

over the recent g has developed rapidly bringing significant advantages to iot devices and wireless sensor nodes consumption is an important engine of economic development correctly guiding cultural consumption and actively promoting the upgrading of digital cultural consumption have formed the focus force promoting the healthy and sustainable development of digital economy this paper combines the upgrading and the analysis of digital technology industry music industry and the internet of things and has achieved results the full text is rich in content and the method is demonstrated with specific data if the following questions get further modified and improved this article can be ordered what research background was the article written please answerdescribe the threephase load unbalance model mentioned in the articleplease explain the role of threephase load

thestudyfoundthat early rehabilitation nursing for patients with hip fracture of hip repair has positive value in promoting the recovery of joint function after hip rehabilitation which can help relieve the pain of patients during the recovery of joint function of medulla oblongata and enhance the satisfaction of patients this may offer a method for promoting the recovery of joint function after hip replacement however further modifications are needed the abbreviations in the article should appear once for example vas appears in both the abstact and the introduction if modify the full text in terms of language the authors needs to make further modifications to meet the usage of english in statistical analysis part spss version has been updated now it is generally version after reading the references we

in this research the effect of hydrothermal circulation along and above the inherited tectonic structures on the unconformityrelated uranium mineralisation two different models had been established and the fluid flow properties and the thermal distributions are obtained under different conditions this topic is of significance for uranium exploration a lot of literature has been cited to support the authors viewpoint however the proposed models are not verified by any testing or survey data and some clerk problems can be found in the text therefore this paper should be substantially modified before its publicationhere are some remarks for the authors considerationit is suggested to shorten the length of abstract to make it no more than wordsin line the author mentioned that the flacd is employed in this study while

in this study the authors assessed the effect of ea in an animal model of peripheral diabetic neuropathy this work is valuable as there is no many researches that focused on the effect of ea and the underlying mechanisms of action however it needs some additional explanation in figure the blood glucose level starts to change from the first week but the pain is shown only from the second week also ppkc and trpv are all significantly elevated starting from the first week how can they be directly related to pain their elevation in the spinal cord may not be directly related to pain as in the first week the pain is not shown please explain the administration schedule of ea is not clear the authors say that

in this manuscript the authors demonstrated the effects of creatine phosphate and sodium fructose diphosphate on inflammatory factors myocardial enzymes and myocardial injury in children with myocarditis overall the findings are interesting however several issues should be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publicationin the current format of the manuscript there are language mistakes english language proofreading is advisedis suggested to add a table to describe the baseline data of patientsthe figure a figure b and figure c should be combined into one figure the figure a figure b figure c and figure d should be combined into one figurethe figure a figure b should be combined into one figureit would be better of authors separate conclusion from discussion part and written in separate headingafter improving

the study concerns the discovery of new biomarkers for infantile hemangiomas diagnosis and their underlying mechanisms it seems to be interesting and worth publishing and some suggestions for revision are highlighted belowthe clarity of the illustrations needs to be improvedintroduction page glut in paragraph seems to be weakly correlated to this paper is it necessary to describe it page in paragraph it should point out the problematic situation of ihs diagnosis leading to the importance of ihs diagnostic marker recognition page line including involving page line triggered evoked page lines patients injury of ihs depends on the injury of elicited by ihs depends on page line a diagnostic marker can help us get a diagnostic marker can contribute tomaterials and methods data source the gse dataset needs appropriate

abstract the suggested classifier is then improved by determining the right hyper parameter and attributes set range the suggested classifier is then improved by determining the right hyper parameter and attributes set range due to the large number of acronyms involved it would be very useful collecting them in a given table for reviewers conveniencethe literature review section should be complemented with a table categorizing the reviewed works along their main distinctive characteristics so as to better position the present workrelated to the above comment i would like the authors to provide a wider context to ids design based on ml approaches egkitsune an ensemble of autoencoders for online network intrusion detection arxiv preprint arxiv a hierarchical hybrid intrusion detection approach in iot scenarios globecom ieee global communications

the corrections performed by the group seem promising and hence we can be considered for publication for a major change

the research topic is novel and i appreciate the authors effort however i have a few suggestions for improvement certain section headers are too long reduce them eg construction of a refined management model for kidney transplant patients based on the internet in many places authors have not properly used references with long sentencesphrases there is a need to identify the research gap from reviewed studies at the end of section related work i am unable to find the problem statementhypothesis on which the study is based many figs have low resolution plz improve the visibility which theoretical basis is used for refinement management quality evaluation criteria proper limitations and future directions are required how the questionnaire is designed distributed and collected data is analyzed