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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, ifthe microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns. ##RESPONSE:
Furthermore, if the microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns.
Furthermore, if the microchips react with a strong electric or magnetic field, the implanted implant could be destroyed, cause serious burns.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in Health coverage based on their genetic make-up. ##RESPONSE:
Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in health coverage based on their genetic make-up.
Another social consequence would be if individuals are discriminated against in health coverage based on their genetic make-up.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing. ##RESPONSE:
Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.
Therefore, since these concerns are important, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Firstly privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing. ##RESPONSE:
Firstly, privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing.
Firstly, privacy is one of the worries that one will have when considering whether or not to carry out a genetic test.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease to develop further more. ##RESPONSE:
If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease to develop further.
If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives, and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing that disease to develop more.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improving work efficiency at a workplace. ##RESPONSE:
By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improve work efficiency at a workplace.
By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improving work efficiency at a workplace.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: The cubicles allows employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to get the work done when they spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence. ##RESPONSE:
The cubicles allow employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to get the work done when they spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence.
Cubicles allow employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to do anything when they spend more than half of their time using the facilities available for their own indulgence.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problem, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission. ##RESPONSE:
To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problems, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission.
To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problems, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objections or, under the condition of consent.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy. ##RESPONSE:
Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy.
Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and security, opponents strike back by stating that the benefits related to individuals' privacy outweighing concerns about individual privacy.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of the hidden surveillance. ##RESPONSE:
Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of the hidden surveillance.
Sometimes criminals will be brought down if they're aware of the secret surveillance;
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise. ##RESPONSE:
This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise.
This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the ultimate goal is otherwise.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing. ##RESPONSE:
The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.
The individual requesting genetic testing should fully approve of the results of such testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorder of an individual could be known to the world in minutes. ##RESPONSE:
With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorders of an individual could be known to the world in minutes.
With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorders of an individual would be known to the world in minutes.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: When they are informed by the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic test in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible. ##RESPONSE:
When they are informed by the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic test in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible.
When the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary is passed to their own genetic test in order to determine its extent as soon as possible.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the very right to disclose such outcome. ##RESPONSE:
Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the right to disclose such outcome.
Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the entire society, researchers have the very right to disclose such testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people life better by studying the genome of human and other organisms. ##RESPONSE:
As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people live better by studying the genome of human and other organisms.
As we know, scientists all over the world collaborate to make people's lives better.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In contrary, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake. ##RESPONSE:
In contrary, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.
In contrast, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitoring workplace in a company. ##RESPONSE:
The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitoring the workplace in a company.
The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitor the workplace of a company.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all time, but what they actually doing is personal business such as online banking, shopping and chatting. ##RESPONSE:
Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all times, but what they actually doing is personal business, such as online banking, shopping, and chatting.
Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all times but what they actually doing is personal business, such as online banking, shopping, and chatting.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extend. ##RESPONSE:
However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extent.
However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances, and to an appropriately extended.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Development and advancement in the field of genetic research has challenged the scientists and the public on a wide range of issues especially issue relating ethical concerns. ##RESPONSE:
Development and advancement in the field of genetic research have challenged scientists and the public on a wide range of issues, especially ethical concerns.
Development and advancement in the field of genetic research have challenged the scientists and the public on a wide range of issues especially of ethical concern.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it. ##RESPONSE:
Therefore, the result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it.
Therefore, result of genetic testing should be revealed without consent of the person who requested it."
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is confirm to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease. ##RESPONSE:
Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is confirmed to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease.
Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is definitely to develop a particular type of genetic disease.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching the issues of confidentiality and privacy? ##RESPONSE:
But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching the issues of confidentiality and privacy?
But, are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching privacy issues?
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded by concerns over privacy, morality and health issues, its benefits? ##RESPONSE:
While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded by concerns over privacy, morality, and health issues, its benefits?
While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded with concerns over privacy, morality, and health issues, its benefits?
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and many more innocent lives will be saved. ##RESPONSE:
In doing so, time could be greatly minimized, and many more innocent lives will be saved.
In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and more innocent lives would be saved.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders facilitates the authorities in monitoring their activities. ##RESPONSE:
Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders facilitates the authorities in monitoring their activities.
Secondly, implanting RFID tags on ex-offenders enables the authorities to monitor their activities.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime rate in the country. ##RESPONSE:
This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime rate in the country.
This helps to save innocent lives and reduce the crime rate in the country.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned. ##RESPONSE:
Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned.
Expanding the crackdown on criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment. ##RESPONSE:
The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment.
The storage of a key medical record and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration, and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This can prove to be vital in saving a person's live. ##RESPONSE:
This can prove to be vital in saving a person's life.
This can be vital in saving a person's life.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provides a solution to the problem of human trafficking. ##RESPONSE:
With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provide a solution to the problem of human trafficking.
With the use of RFID to locate and catch a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture people behind such activities and provide a solution to the problem of human trafficking.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing which information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies and criminals. ##RESPONSE:
RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing, which information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies, and criminals.
RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing, which could be easily available to marketers, government agencies, and criminals.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Furthermore, some research has shown RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies. ##RESPONSE:
Furthermore, some research has shown that RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies.
Furthermore, certain studies have shown that RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: For instance, a ten years-old child could undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age. ##RESPONSE:
For instance, a ten-year-old child could undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age.
For instance, a ten-year-old child might undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in the middle age.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stresses whereby affecting his performance during the examination. ##RESPONSE:
This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stress, where affecting his performance during the examination.
This is obvious and could indeed be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother, who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stressful conditions, rendering his performance, in the A-level final examination, considerably impaired.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Firstly, all individuals should have the rights to make decisions that will affect their future. ##RESPONSE:
Firstly, all individuals should have the right to make decisions that will affect their future.
Firstly, all individuals should have the rights to make decisions that will affect their future.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such thing. ##RESPONSE:
Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say on whether to reveal the results of such thing.
Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such thing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In fact, large amount of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance namely eradication of poverty, famine and diseases control. ##RESPONSE:
In fact, large amounts of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance namely eradication of poverty, famine, and diseases control.
In fact, a large amount of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance such as eradication of poverty, famine, and diseases control.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: By planting this device into their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out. ##RESPONSE:
By planting this device into their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out.
By planting this device into their body, we can detect when they are in case of any urgent diseases break out.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking of properties and improvements in medical care. ##RESPONSE:
Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking of properties and improvements in medical care.
Nevertheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking properties and improvements in medical care.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering at other places or patients collapsing outside of hospital area. ##RESPONSE:
The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering in other places or patients collapsing outside of the hospital area.
The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering off other places or patients collapsing outside of a hospital area.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimal percentage. ##RESPONSE:
Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimal percentage.
Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting hurt while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimum percentage
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way. ##RESPONSE:
The patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence causing them to lose their way.
Patient with this disease can easily be disoriented, hence causing them to lose their way.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Although the use of surveillance technology will raised ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it. ##RESPONSE:
Although the use of surveillance technology will raise ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it.
Although the use of surveillance technology will raise ethical concerns, to obtain important information that may save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In conclusion, we can impose law and limit the use of surveillance technology but we cannot ban it. ##RESPONSE:
In conclusion, we can impose a law and limit the use of surveillance technology, but we cannot ban it.
In conclusion, we can impose law and limit the use of surveillance technology; you can't ban it.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to the results. ##RESPONSE:
In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to the results.
In light of the widespread and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to these results.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress and thus will need support from his loved ones. ##RESPONSE:
Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress, and thus will need support from their loved ones.
Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress and will need support from their loved ones.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental human genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases. ##RESPONSE:
Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental human genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases.
Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: However the same technology can also be used to track people and intrude private information. ##RESPONSE:
However, the same technology can also be used to track people and intrude private information.
However, the same technology has the same capability to track people, and to intrude private information.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates from both public and private sectors. ##RESPONSE:
The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates from both the public and private sectors.
The application of tracking technology has prompted heated debates between both the public and private sectors.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Behavioural advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits. ##RESPONSE:
Behavioral advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits.
Behavioral advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard personal information and browsing habits.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination. ##RESPONSE:
Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination.
Individuals should maintain their own rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing. ##RESPONSE:
Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal their results of genetic testing.
Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even treat the genetic disease that could be present. ##RESPONSE:
Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent or even treat the genetic disease that could be present.
Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even treat the genetic disease that could be present.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, less people will be willing to even go for the test. ##RESPONSE:
If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, less people will be willing to even go for the test.
If genetic testing is to be broadcast forcibly, less people will be willing to even go for the test
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of use of the surveillance systems. ##RESPONSE:
The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of use of surveillance systems.
The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of the surveillance systems.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases which may be useful to mankind. ##RESPONSE:
Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases which may be useful to mankind.
Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases that may be useful to mankind.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnose of inherited diseases. ##RESPONSE:
Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnoses of inherited diseases.
Genetic testing is a test performed to obtain a genetic diagnosis or to make an abortion.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: It will be unfair if the spouse kept the truth from their spouse. ##RESPONSE:
It will be unfair if the spouse kept the truth from their spouse.
It will be unfair if the wife kept the truth from her husband.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy to our society. ##RESPONSE:
It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy to society.
It makes privacy lose its meaning, and is unhealthy to society.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consents from the public. ##RESPONSE:
However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consent from the public.
However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring any unanimous consents from the public.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which overwhelm the topic of genetic testing from time to time. ##RESPONSE:
There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which overwhelm the topic of genetic testing from time to time.
There are uproars regarding moral and ethical issues that overwhelm the topic of genetic testing from time to time.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: This is because individual oneself is less capable of making a suitable decision. ##RESPONSE:
This is because the individual is more capable of making a suitable decision.
This is because individuals are less capable of making a suitable decision.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Then, who will be the one who holds the right to do it? ##RESPONSE:
Then, who will be the one who holds the right to do it?
Then, who would hold the right to do it?
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: However, in the reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact to all his family as it may comprise information about hereditary disease. ##RESPONSE:
However, in reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact to all his family as it may comprise information about hereditary diseases.
However, in reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give an impact to everyone in his family as it may include information about the hereditary disease.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease, will not only affect us as individual but also our family. ##RESPONSE:
In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease will not only affect us as individuals but also our family.
In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that gives us the chance to improve our health is also a way for us as individuals to join our family.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Its general purpose is to check if one has potential to develop certain genetic diseases. ##RESPONSE:
Its general purpose is to check if one has the potential to develop certain genetic diseases.
Its general purpose is to check whether one has a potential to develop certain genetic diseases.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, the individuals should not have the final say about revealing their genetic test results. ##RESPONSE:
Thus, the individuals should not have the final say about revealing their genetic test results.
Thus, the individuals should not have the final say about revealing their genetic test results;
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Many will think that insurance companies used the test results as the excuse to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies. ##RESPONSE:
Many will think that insurance companies used the test results as the excuse to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies.
Many will think that insurance companies used the results as the excuse for denying them of claiming or even buying certain medical policies.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Moreover, many insurance companies used the test result to encourage the clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits. ##RESPONSE:
Moreover, many insurance companies used the test result to encourage the clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits.
Moreover, many insurance companies used the test result to encourage clients to purchase certain policies that can maximize their benefits.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantage. ##RESPONSE:
In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages.
In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantage.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Hence our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people. ##RESPONSE:
Hence, our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people.
Hence, our privacy has been invaded as our very personal information is being known from people; many of whom use the information.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: With the help modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or to trace one's location. ##RESPONSE:
With the help of modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or to trace one's location.
With the help modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices, which are able to store relevant personal information or trace one's location.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing existence of such crimes. ##RESPONSE:
This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing the existence of such crimes.
This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing a possibility of such crimes.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed in tracking people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and even prevent or reduce crime rates. ##RESPONSE:
In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed in track people as it is able to change human lives for the better, and even prevent or reduce crime rates.
In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed in tracking people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and even prevent or reduce crime rates.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought to. ##RESPONSE:
There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology brought to.
There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought to society.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plan. ##RESPONSE:
Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plan.
Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put them to a stop.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without consent will be used to prejudice against the tested individual. ##RESPONSE:
For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without the consent of the tested individual will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.
For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without consent will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid disintegration of family relations. ##RESPONSE:
Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid the disintegration of family relations.
Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid disintegration of family relations.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: However, if the result of the test can be easily access by third party, a lot of problems will be occurred. ##RESPONSE:
However, if the result of the test can be easily accessed by a third party, a lot of problems will be caused.
However, if the test can be easily accessed by third party, a lot of problems will be caused.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected in revealing undesirable genetic testing results. ##RESPONSE:
The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected in revealing undesirable genetic testing results.
The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected if a person revealing undesirable genetic testing results.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: These people have to look for other alternative to earn a living. ##RESPONSE:
These people have to look for other alternative to earn a living.
These people have to look for other alternative forms of entertainment.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from environment that might harm them. ##RESPONSE:
Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from the environment that might harm them.
Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from a situation that might harm them.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Another difficulty involves disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies. ##RESPONSE:
Another difficulty involves disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies.
Another difficulty involves disclosing genetic information to insurance companies.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Thus, it is still up to the discretion of individual to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk. ##RESPONSE:
Thus, it is still up to the individual to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.
Thus, it is still up to individuals to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Therefore, individuals whom requested for genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing. ##RESPONSE:
Therefore, individuals who requested genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.
Therefore, individuals who request for genetic testing should have the final say whether to reveal the results of such testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track person. ##RESPONSE:
This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track people.
This brings about a wild debate among people on the banning of surveillance technology to track a person.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Next, those who were under home quarantined during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure they are always visible and contactable to prevent further spread of the disease. ##RESPONSE:
Next, those who were under home quarantine during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure they are always visible and contactable to prevent further spread of the disease.
Next, those who had been under home quarantine during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure that they are always visible and at contactable to prevent further spread of the disease.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Also, the use of infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers. ##RESPONSE:
Also, the use of an infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of the body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers.
Also, the use of the infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along the borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Although, it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary disease however one do not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, threatening their welfare. ##RESPONSE:
Although it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary disease, one does not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, threatening their welfare.
Although, it cannot be denied that it is unethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary disease, one does not have an obligation to reveal his genetic status since this information could be exploited and used to harm others, threatening their welfare.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Lastly, family dilemma could arise due to the tension caused by the unfavorable psychological influences of genetic testing. ##RESPONSE:
Lastly, the family dilemma could arise due to the tension caused by the unfavorable psychological influences of genetic testing.
Lastly, family dilemma could arise due to the tension caused by a unfavorable psychological influence from genetic testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Since every individual have a different level of acceptance, disclosure of genetic results could cause them to experience unnecessary emotional distress. ##RESPONSE:
Since every individual has a different level of acceptance, disclosure of genetic results could cause them to experience unnecessary emotional distress.
Since every individual has a different level of acceptance, disclosure of genetic results would cause them to experience unnecessary emotional distress.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: In conclusion, individuals should have the privacy to determine whether to reveal their genetic results or not since it not only inflicts emotional distress on their family but also subjects them social discrimination. ##RESPONSE:
In conclusion, individuals should have the privacy to determine whether to reveal their genetic results or not since it not only inflicts emotional distress on their family but also subjects them social discrimination.
In conclusion, individuals should have the privacy to determine whether to reveal their genetic results or not since it will not only cause emotional distress to their family but also subjects them social discrimination.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: As the genetic testing is making rapid progress on providing information on the hidden DNAs which might cause diseases, the techniques have also aroused a large amount of heated debates on the ethical and moral issues surrounding the control of final say of the testing. ##RESPONSE:
As genetic testing is making rapid progress on providing information on the hidden DNAs which might cause diseases, the techniques have also aroused a large amount of heated debates on the ethical and moral issues surrounding the control of final say of the testing.
As the genetic testing is making rapid progress on providing information on hidden DNAs, techniques have also aroused a large amount of heated debates on the ethical and moral issues surrounding the control of final say of the testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: First of all, individual has the right to determine whether or not it is necessary to make the genetic testing results public. ##RESPONSE:
First of all, individual has the right to determine whether or not it is necessary to make the genetic testing results public.
First of all, individuals have the right to determine whether or not it is necessary to make genetic testing results public.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: If one's privacy cannot be protected so that the result might be made use of on any purpose, the human rights are endangered and hence this decision should be made on the individual requesting the genetic testing. ##RESPONSE:
If one's privacy cannot be protected so that the result might be made use of on any purpose, the human rights are endangered, and hence this decision should be made on the individual requesting genetic testing.
If one's private life cannot be protected, so that the result might be made use of on any purpose, the human rights are endangered, and, hence, this decision should be made on the individual who receives the genetic testing.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Over the years, advances in science and technology had empowered surveillance technology by introducing many forms and magnifying the scope of surveillance. ##RESPONSE:
Over the years, advances in science and technology have empowered surveillance technology by introducing many forms and magnifying the scope of surveillance.
Over the years, advances in science and technology have empowered surveillance technology by introducing a variety of forms and magnifying the scope of surveillance.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Privacy is the fundamental human right and we have the right to lead our life without public surveillance. ##RESPONSE:
Privacy is the fundamental human right and we have the right to lead our lives without public surveillance.
Privacy is the fundamental human right, and we have the right to lead our lives without the government's surveillance.
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Fix the grammar in INSTRUCTION and generate RESPONSE. ##INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Though some suggest that surveillance technology benefits us but the negative implications outweigh the benefits. ##RESPONSE:
Though some suggest that surveillance technology benefits us, but the negative implications outweigh the benefits.
Though some suggest that surveillance technology can benefit us but the negative implications outweigh its benefits.
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