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wang et al showed that complex econometric model provides a good method to graphically represent the production system which can accurately predict and reflect all exact trend characteristics of the economy in the production system major revisionsplease adjust the goals maybe change correctplease supplement the background in the part of abstractplease fix the format of this manuscript according to the guidelines for authors please add the notes according to the guidelines for authors please show if references with are too many technical errors and typosthe style of this manuscript should be improvedplease show the limitation and advantages of this manuscriptplease show the results clearlywhat is the meaning of this study

please make contents concise to readers especially for your contributions eg problems to be solved and novel methods proposed in this manuscriptit is strongly recommended that current research in the reliability of rolling bearings rather than the classical probabilistic reliability should be analyzed and summarized in detailthe reliability of rolling bearings in this manuscript was performed by conventional methods and innovations need further enhanced

by introducing the domestic cryptographic algorithm sm and extending the existing lte key derivation structure this paper designs a selfcontrolled nbiot applicationlayer security architecture to ensure effective generation of encryption keys between the nbiot terminal and the power grid business platform it has good theoretical and application value however the following results exist it is necessary to strengthen the details and intrinsic value of puf function in the algorithm principal part the results this figure is not analyzed it is suggested to supplement a detailed analysis and discussion please optimize the english expression of the article to make english more fluent please analyze all the equations in this manuscript some symbols and attributes are not correctly defined please expand the conclusion of the experimental analysis to make sure

the paper titled collusion based on attachments system for secure data processing under resistant control using node insertion theory is written well but the author can look into few changes as per suggestions the abstract can focus upon novelty in the work and give the increase or decrease in the efficiency and accuracy based in the previous systems the issues in the existing system can be sorted out to points at the end of other literature survey the name of a proposed model can be given to the figure names graphical shapes of the table values representing the parameter responsible for the increase or loss can be discussed for the conclusion the risk detection can be compared with the traditional system and the results can be plotted with

this manuscript entitled mining stress distribution in stope and overlying rock fracture characteristics and its disasterpregnant mechanism of coal mine earthquake paid main attention on the miningstress distribution characteristics and occurrence regularity of coal mine earthquake this study is meaningful for enriching our understanding about the coal mine earthquake and rock burst disasters yet this manuscript can be considered for publication after minor revision my main comments are listed as the following points the english of the abstract part should be polished please check general language aspects and typos a native english speaker may be helpful in section the authors discussed the relationship between vertical stress and microseismic why is the vertical stress why is not the horizontal stress some reasons need to be given in the manuscript

the manuscript presented for review entitled growth response of arabica coffee seedlings to soil media composition and sowing depth requires a major revisionthe main comments are as followsthe description and discussion of the results is a report rather than a scientific analysis the author while analyzing the biometric features of coffee seedlings provided only the composition of the substrate mixture for which the seedling parameters were the highest and the smallest however there is no indepth assessment of the results obtained moreover the author pays attention to facts that are of little importance and omits those of greater importanceeg page seedling leaf lengths were declined when the ratios of forest soil reduced in the media compositions as enumerated in table when the ratios of forest soil and sand

this is a excellent work but the author needs to pay attention to some problemsthe format of the paper is very important the layout of this paper is not neat enough it looks uneven please revise accordinglywith a total score of with being no pain and being severe painwhat are the criteria for classifying different pain levelsplease state it in detailsthe total effective rate of in the treatment group was higher than that of in the control group p how did the data mentioned in this sentence come about can you give a specific deduction processthe conclusion in this paper is missingin the discussion section all relevant issues are described in great detail but conclusion is an integral part of a paper it is recommended that the relevant

based on the research on the traditional talent training evaluation methods this paper introduces the internet named things technology into the talent training evaluation research the overall content is substantial its logic is clear and it is a very good article but there are some problems that need already be modified further questions are stated followsain the abstract the current situation and importance of talent training are explained and the topic nothing pointed out and it only mentioned how there are some challenges in talent training and did not explain the problems in english please make relevant supplements for this pointbthe third paragraph of the introduction is an introduction to the work related to the internet of things which reflects the wide application of the internet of things

the paper titled a systematic review utilizing metaanalysis for the role of nursing for selfcare in patients suffer from heart failure is interesting heart failure is a major concern although it affects a majority of population worldwide hence alternative strategies must be used to emphasize the journal health as potential initiative to improve survival changes reduce readmission improve health and management of disease in patients however there are several minor issues that if addressed would significantly improve the manuscript please reduce the number of keywords please add citations to the included literature please make the results clearer by subheading each result please annotate each of the resulting graphs and schedules when the abbreviation first appears in full name should be given discussion should include comprehensive content of the

this article focuses on the gynecological problems that women may suffer from and is well improved by the new analysis indicators however relevant work needs to be carried out to improve the depth of this paper and make improvements to the following problems when applied to humans the literal presentation is not satisfactory most of the sentences within the text would need rephrasingrewording i am in view that the paper would need lots of changes in order to make it suitable for journal publication also whether the content below the key words of this article lacks the corresponding title which makes the article appear very abrupt such result is not surprising since those traditional methods are known to be the most mundane method it would be fairer to

the article entitled analysis of isokinetic strength test in arthroscopic meniscus suture to improve knee joint strength and function is an interesting study however there are several minor issues should be correctedmajor pointsthere are special color marks in the article please correctthe abstract of the article should include the purpose method result and conclusionthe author should add the content of ethical examination and approvalthe pictures of the article should have illustrations the form should be a three line form when p or it should be marked with minor pointsplease ensure that the format of the full text is consistent such as whether the initial letter of the subtitle is capitalized and whether there are spaces before the paragraphthe authors contribution are neededthe keywords of the article should be

tcm syndrome differentiation and nursing success with psychological intervention can noticeably meliorate the curative impact of early and middle stage breast cancer research and is conducive to ameliorating their quality of care and allaying negative emotions which can be extensively promoted and applied in clinical practice the research results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsthe introduction needs to increase the relevant research contents what are the characteristics of the methods of syndrome differentiation on treatment for breast cancer what are the positive effects for psychological intervention please supplement the research of the etiology and pathogenesis to breast cancer in traditional chinese medicine what are the main responsibilities of senior chief ethics officer please supplement the related concepts of cognitive

rutin and hesperidin revoke the hepatotoxicity induced by paclitaxel in male wistar rats via suppressing oxidative stress apoptosis and inflammation and enhancing antioxidant defense mechanismsthe whole manuscript needs excessive english editingthe references in the manuscript need to be updated add the list of abbreviationsadd the age and the specification of the experimental animalsadd the references for the paclitaxel rutin and hesperidin as well as the period of the treatmentid the inhalation anesthesia affects the blood parameters and add the period and the references for thiswhat are the authors mean by clear supernatant sera were quickly separated split into four portions for each animalplease clarifythe homogenates were then centrifuged for minutes at rpm and the supernatants were aspirated and frozen at cis this accurate for keeping the tissueplease write

through the application analysis characteristics flexible management in the work of college students flexible management has the advantages of peopleoriented flexibility flexibility and comprehensiveness and pays attention to humanized education and personalized training which is a kind of subjective managementthis management is studentcentered respects students personality and dignity strives to promote the university spirit and university culture and sport full play from students subjectivity creates creativityin the process of student management students are authorized to participate in management and decisionmaking enhance students sense of ownership and responsibility stimulate students learning motivation fully tap their individual potential can set high learning pace and gradually realize the benefits of selfeducation and selfmanagementthe paper has sufficient arguments yet the paper still has the following problems on section of this article the

this study to retrospectively analyze apatinib combined with nabpaclitaxel efficacy and safety in secondline treatment of advanced gastric cancer agc this paper finds apatinib combined with nabpaclitaxel is safe and effective in the secondline agc treatment and adverse reactions are tolerable my advice to the author is as follows the results section only contains relevant data and does not provide a detailed description of the results and it is recommended that the authors add an analysis of the relevant results there are many grammatical issues in the article and it is recommended to revise them carefully all patients in this study were complete or not and patients with incomplete clinical data were not included in this study whether there were patients who dropped out of the study in

below are my concerns reagaring this paperwhy functional assessment is important it should be mentioned in our abstractlikewise why there is a need for federated ai based algorithms it should also be mentioned as a research gap in the abstractit is suggested not to use pronouns such i we they in the contributionshighlight the research gap making contributions on the existing metric a novel resource set dma framework for internet of medical things devices in g network evolution of industry and blockchain era monitoring resource hike and data using technologies for smart computing and industry applications shoule be explained how was what dataest taken was the dataset balancedtable fscore fscorewhy there is title on the iamges when caption is same as the titlemore referncs should be added in

the authors present the tourist correlation model of the epidemic normalization crossregional citylevel tourist routes is constructed although the work is technically solid it is not clearly presented what innovations it presents compared to the current state of the art since globally the work tends to be a compilation of the existing statistical formulation applied to the problem without presenting any point in which the innovative aspect can clearly be intuited despite this fact if the authors are able to date the article from this nuance in which they are able to present the innovative aspects in a solid way in the opinion of this reviewer the article could be published apparently the results support the methodology presented and simulations are held by experiment datain addition to this

in the paper under review the authors investigate how a einstein soliton structure on a warped product manifold affects its base and fiber factor manifoldsnecessary and sufficient conditions on a einstein soliton warped product manifold to have its factors einstein solitons are proven and examples are givenfinally such solitons on a generalized robertsonwalker spacetime and on a standard static spacetime respectively are investigatedthe results are new and of certain interest for the researchers in the field the calculations seem to be correcton basis of the above arguments the reviewer recommends the publicationhowever the english must be checked and improved

based on the information reviewed the lowcarbon economy and lowcarbon supply chain are described at the same time based on the original supply chain various costs are analyzed and optimized to complete the optimal design of a lowcarbon supply chain network but there are still some imperfections in the papera with the rapid development and vigorous development of the global economy it is now proposed to be lowcarbon and environmentally friendly to achieve a lowcarbon economy what is the causal relationship between this please indicate in the textb the paper points out that the impact of supply chain activities on the environment can be incorporated into every link of the supply chain and corresponding environmental protection strategies should be adopted what are the specific measuresc in the supply

highlight the research gap in the literature surveyfurnish discussion to establish how the proposed method is unique or different from other existing methodsauthor can give some more details about plant and their bacterial qualitieswhat type of strain is used in this research for silver nanoparticle preparationfigure is not cited in the content check itcheck all references had been cited in your article and citation order should be sequential add few more recent references

dear authorsi congratulate you for a very interesting research programi appreciate the quality of your paperi marked minor revision because i positively value your work and i have only some minor questions on your studyi have a number of general concerns and some minor editorial comments your work refers to your former article x in marine georesources and geotechnology both are based on laboratory testing of model piles embedded in sand could you please underline in the introductory part what is a new content and value provided in your current contribution i suppose that it is mainly lateral cyclic loading that would be a new value and also a new input to the field of knowledge concerning the issue mentioned above discussion of your results is fruitful concerning

following are the data about the paper the development and digitalization of cultural industry marketing based on big data supplement the research results of this group in the abstract chapter and not the focus of this article there are too many descriptions for them appropriately in order there is little analysis of chart data supplement it appropriately scale is one one the key parts of this paper but no content is less supplement it appropriately there are less than references supplement them

the structure of the full text is reasonable the logical thinking is clear the viewpoints being expressed accurately the language is fluent and the method specific argumentation is reasonable the referenced literature and materials meet the ideals of the theme thus the links to the materials meet the professional requirements but some goals are vague and can be modifiedi network mobile edge network consists of three parts mobile edge service nodes edge devices and backbone it could further explain the role of the backbone networkii youth poverty alleviation is a program where students go to poor areas and use the knowledge and skills they have acquired to help local people what are the consequences of participating in this programiii the digital library application proposed in the explicit community

abstraction needs some improvements because there are to many flawsimprove your writing style which is understandable add some more references hire a professional to help you with your paper since it will be much better that wayrecheck that all of the equations are correct if not that correct itthe introduction is too short add some more information to make it accurate

according to the actual engineering needs a visual management electronic information system is designed in order to conduct a comprehensive test this paper conducts an online performance test of linpack the word count and execution time of the mars platform on the market are also compared this article compares the execution time of a string matching program and a matrix multiplication program at the end of the article the stitching results of several images without frame and stretching are given and the advantages and disadvantages of the cg method and the lg method are comprehensively compared from the aspects of memory and time however there are still problems in the technical aspects of the article as followsthe author uses high performance computing electronic information visual management system research

in order to better manage the group of college students the author proposes a method of group portrait and personality prediction of freshmen based on big data technology the author determines its necessity in the practice of ideological and political education by studying the group portraits of freshmen and their goals connotations and functionsthesis topic selection is meaningful on the basis of absorbing academic research results have their own experience put forward their own views make sense the viewpoint of exposition is correct the material is more substantial the narration is well arranged and logical user portrait is a user feature extracted from a series of real data at present user portrait technology is widely used in ecommerce platforms film platforms music platforms and other platforms taking ecommerce

this paper constructs an evaluation system for highquality agricultural development which can analyze the potential and shortcomings of highquality agricultural development from a more comprehensive perspective the advantages and disadvantages in the process of promoting highquality agricultural development are clearly identified however there are some problems in the article that need to be revised as follows the format of the article title is incorrect do not end with a period the correct format of the title should be without punctuation the threelayer architecture of agricultural ecommerce is mentioned in and the article explains the application layer and resource layer for the basic layer need to add the corresponding detailed steps what part of equation is calculated this article is poorly hierarchical and i would suggest that equation be

the authors studied zhuyang bufei chubi granules inhibits pulmonary fibrosis through jnkmapk pathway based on network pharmacology and molecular dockingsome opinions the principal herbs from each herb of zybfcb are including honghua carthami flos mahuang ephedra unk baizhu lin macrocephalae rhizoma baishao paeoniae radix alba taoren persicae semen xixiancao siegesbeckiae herba renshen ginseng radix et rhizoma danggui flora sinensis radix and shudi rehmanniae radix praeparataput at part into the name it is likely that traditional herbal latin name should be unified generally to parts family name such as angelicae sinensis radix would be pharmaceutical latin angelicae sinensis radix disease targets were identified using pulmonary fibrosis as the keyword in genecards httpswwwgenecardsorg and the online mendelian inheritance in man httpomimorg the authors searched only genecards database and omim omim

this paper studies the image encryption based on chaotic maps methods are effective but there are still some problems the motivation of the work is not well written what are advantages of the encryption scheme compared with others the other representative methods such as based on onetime keys bitlevel permutation dna rule based on mathematical model etc the papers are related with these methods please refer to computers and mathematics with applications optics communications applied soft computing nonlinear dynamics if the authors cite and compare the articles the introduction will be more complete the main background of this paper is not clear the authors should highlight the main background of this paper such as fastprivacy encryption in information sciences information sciences the background information is very useful for

this research suggests a deep learningbased semantic communication system paradigm for intelligent activities this paper specifically investigates image classification tasks in aiiot with limited bandwidth and delay proposes a semantic communication network structure for image classification tasks extracts image feature maps on iot devices and compresses targetsoriented semantic relations based on the feature map to efficiently relieve the power consumption burden of iot devices and lessen the pressure of communication transmissionthe feasibility and performance benefits of the suggested strategy are confirmed by the experimental findings the approach presented in this research offers a solution for the completion of visual tasks using picture semantic comprehension as the primary means in many intelligent situations in keeping with the general trend of the tight integration of communication technology and artificial intelligencethis

in the abstract which was used in treat observation group however alofacitinib was replaced the drug mentioned in the title and resultsthe grammar mistakes would be correctedwhat are the differences between study group and observation groupthe epidemiological characters of mpd should be systematically introducedthe ethic approval number will be providedhow to calculate that sample as the data normally distributedmouse was mentioned in section whysurvival test and km plot were suggestedare there any missing casesthe baseline data should are providedwhat are the results of this study

paper needs to be improved in more manners this is a nice study however following questions are necessary to be answered before further processingplease put more clearly salient findings in abstract shortlythis should be good to use units in the references where applicableplease use updated and recent notation in the literature review to give more sense to the reader conclusions could be one specific and to the point i would suggest to look and think about itplease elaborate the other aspect of your work at the end of the introductionfigures and tables could be rechecked once for resolution their correctnessin the abstract please provide the insight from your results sectionsthe recent and relevant publications may update some bibliography and fortify the text like as bioconvection reinerrivlin nanofluid flow

the appearance of d visualization technology provides a new expression and description way for visualization of various types of data and a new development direction and space for humancomputer interaction interface technology with the continuous innovation of mobile communication technology people will enter a new communication era that is the fifth generation mobile communication g this paper studies the development of ecommerce this topic selection is very meaningful but there are still some problems worthy of attention in the content of the articlein the part of the abstract the author mentioned that the article analyzed and tested the current mainstream ecommerce websites based on usability testing technology on the basis of analyzing the current research status however the author did not explain the research results of the articlein

comments for authors the manuscript entitled mirp as a potential circulating biomarker and tracer of clinical improvement for chronic inflammatory demyelinating polyneuropathy is an interesting piece of new knowledge in the area of medical study however english should be double checked and corrected as it is confusing in many placesin general the work is acceptable although it is not something that can be considered advanced in terms of new technologytitle the title of manuscript is well and novel abstractit is well defined however the objective and aim of the study is not presented clearlyintroductionthe introduction is pretty well written providing many general and already known information it could provide more detailed infoin the introduction section no given detailed about study the reason why this study was necessary is

use references from the same journal that stay close to the research topicthis paragraph should be clarified while the pca morphine cessation the satisfaction level of the patient with respect to the pain service was measured the patients were then requested to rate their satisfaction in following categories good fair play unsatisfactory level the cause of unsatisfactory rating was looked upon and the calculation and the sample size was dependent on the scores from published research over the analgesic efficiency for the anorectal surgery utilizing the primary result of the pain over rest in one day the average visual compliance scale ie nrs pain score obtained for the sevoflurane category was whereas from the tiva group it was obtained as where p the research was using retrospective study

the paper is wellwritten and i recommend it for publication however there are a few shortcomings that must be addressedthe abstract needs improvements it is lengthy and includes abundant of figures and statisticssection is more like introduction section and literature review we suggest to merge this section with introduction section and improve the overall presentation of the problem statement and the proposed solutionfigure should be properly croppedadd some more relevant citations from recent yearsplease format the figures and tables captions properlydiscussion and conclusion are usually two separate sections i suggest renaming the section to discussion and adding a new section conclusion

the title of this paper is computer identification and entry of volleyball players physical therapy programs under big data it has proposed to use the threedimensional measurement method and attitude estimation algorithm in big data to guide the integration of computer and volleyball physical training program it is helpful to analyze and solve some of the negative impact brought by the current traditional teams physical training program therefore there are still many points to be improved in this article introductionp at the paper it is said that the application of big sensor technology has realized the transformation of peoples production and lifestyle and also supported the development and development of the play field please add appropriate content to prove thisp the paper said that with the continuous progress

this study is very interesting i have several comments belowthe metaanalysis should describe the database they used in the study the language of the study should be improved by the native speakersthe authors should modify the reference as the requirements of the journal and they should follow the instrcutions for authors in the homepage of the journalthe authors should add an author contribution section in the end of the study that would make it clear that we could know what kind of work the authors have done the authors have made a great metaanalysis and we believe that the author should add the version of the software in the methods section

commentsstate of art should be consistently clear in the introduction description of the features extracted through glcm in the proposed methodspecify the flow of hog in feature extractionfigure legends should contain enough detail to understand the figure without making the reader refer to the textgive the detailed performance metrics in the results section need no differ concerned with how the result was expressed in proper description

please extend the introduction for more background on the function and relations of nrf and uca as well as the current status of the related research which can emphasize the motivation of the work in this paper for example the motivation for studying hc should come with more details in the method section please distinguish the different treatments for the control and experimental groups some clear statements for the treatment for each of the groups are needed for each of the statistical analysis the authors failed to provide the number in each group for each subsection in results please add a summary statement for each of the figures for example this result indicates ho or other related materials belong to ros however the authors have not provided enough

in this article icis drugresistance related genes were screened out and prognostic model was constructed through singlecell sequencing data analysis which provide a new idea for immunotherapy of nsclc what are the reasons for the author to choose the geo datasets mentioned in the article please explain in detail in the article or provide the inclusion and exclusion criteria of the filtered datasets i still have doubts about the authors data processing method in the article please explain the data analysis method in more detail in the article please provide the original data and data processing code of the article the prognostic model constructed in this paper only contains genes i advise authors to construct a prognostic model by multivariate cox regression combined with clinical information and visualize

this paper is a metaanalysis of signalling pathway of syringin in intrauterine adhesions and fibrosisthe subjection selection of this paper is very good and it also has certain practical significance but there are still some problems as followsthe abstract part only needs to describe the general content of the article the main content should be described in the main text the abstract of this article does not meet the writing requirements in clinical practice combination of tcm and western medicine shh factor has unique advantages over western medicine in terms of endometrial repair and postoperative adhesion preventionwhat is the specific content of the advantages mentioned hererelevant criteria are mentioned in diagnostic criteria and efficacy evaluation criteria but what are their specific contents please give a brief description herethe

this paper combines deep learning algorithm to evaluate students mental health the feature of this paper is to analyze students mental health by combining metaphor features thus we thus better display students mental health however there are still some problems in this article which need to be carefully revisedsome references are not annotated please check and annotate one by oneplease pay attention to the writing format of variables of all formulas it is recommended to refine the abstract appropriatelyparts after the article are formatted and punctuated incorrectly such as the explanation part under formula please check in full textthe arrows of image in figure are wrong please rearrange themin the conclusion for f and other indicators appears if given is no explanation before the test please modify this

the work is of excellent quality fascinating and should be published because it deserves to be please read the comments below for advice on how some improve the paper scholars must address a multitude minor faults with the materials sentence structure content and presentations word order formal phrases and abbreviations an indepth examination is required to discover answers to all of these problems doublecheck that all of the equations are properly centered they should make several changes to them introduction and conclusion parts examining related ones literature review should offer even concrete instances of existing essays objective further explanation of the preferred technique is necessary

why hexagonal boron without hbn nanoparticles is used in this study of researchwhat type of roughness tester is useduse abbreviation only for the first timethe original letter of each english word and the paper title should be capitalized and the words forto and the should not enter in the text

introduction at the end of the section the authors suggested adding one extra paragraphthis paragraph is unclear and before clarificationwe used body fat from the dexa standards as the gold standard test for adiposity assessment in which more than in men and more than in women is considered in to be compared with the accuracy of bmi measurement of obesity more than kgm the data was collected from subject records using prestructured data extraction sheet to avoid data extraction error and interrupter estimation of scores we collected between subjects age gender and anthropometric measuresheight in meter weight kg to measure bmi and lean size and fat mass data were presented through excel worksheets and processed through statistical software for the data analysis what is the research aimreformulate

this thesis gives a specific case study on the landscape design and maintenance of the old residential area of quanan square in nanguan district of spring city and gives practical solutions and analysis for this case with special emphasis on the care given to special people and finally gives the requirements for landscape design however the following problems still exist in this thesisthe solutions given in the case are large in terms of green space related aspects but are too brief in describing the environment and green space issues the humancentered requirement is written on the issue of architectural ontology but the lack of humanistic care is written underneath which is somewhat repetitive in comparisonin the section on the causes of problems in the landscape of the old

this manuscript uses a novel model to predict the coal and gas protrusion risk level this manuscript is innovative and practical and is recommended for publication after revision in this manuscript the influencing factors of coal and gas outburst are processed by principal component analysis and the principal component factor loading coefficients of each influencing factor are obtained please express the relationship between the original influencing factors and the obtained new influencing factors with the equation the abstract section should be written in the structure of purpose methods findings results the introduction section is too brief in describing the background and significance of the study please enrich the background and significance of the study please make improvements to the conclusion section and add a section on the future

the article researches the piano teaching model and audiovisual aesthetics based on the optimization of wireless telecommunication network and the related theory is introduced in detail but i think there are some considerations in the following parts the article talks about specific design and solution of the resource scheduling problem of wireless communication network based on evolutionary algorithm but the content about evolutionary algorithm is not introduced in author should this is omitted or unnecessary content the author has summarized other relevant work in the article but i think it something too general so please optimize it some page through the article i think the authors main focus not on the aesthetic study of piano audiovisuals because there is little research on teaching models the first part of

the manuscript titled identification of prognostic mirnas targeting ezh in hepatocellular carcinoma using the cancer genome atlas database and in vitro validation by lin et al provides an original information about the therapeutic potential of mirs targeting ezh this study may prove beneficial in diagnosis and monitoring of progression of hcc patientsfollowing need authors attentionall bioinformatics analysis showed be properly described all the information every parameter should be provided so that the results are reproduciblewere the culturing conditions same for all cells if there were any variations in culturing please mentionwhat concentration of the constructs letcp mimic letcp inhibitor etc was used for transfection please write itin the transwell assay what was the difference in media between upper and lower chamberresults are nicely presented but many linguistic errors

dear editorthis article is based on college students mainly in the form of questionnaires supplemented by case interviews however there are still some areas that need to be modified the document format should be used in accordance with the journals notation indentation and position should be noted the index used to reflect this level of difference in the evaluation is the degree of discrimination punctuation should be avoided to avoid repeated quotations so as to help college students establish correct values strengthen and improve the way of ideological and political education the redundant space bars should be deleted this article attempts to explore the deeper reasons behind these negative factors in view of the various value nihilism phenomena displayed by current college students in some places in the

in this paper neural network nonlinear prediction and neural network pattern recognition are applied to improve the establishment of the piano performance teaching evaluation mechanism according to the evaluation function of individual users teacher users and administrators it is improved and relevant evaluation indicators are set the research contribution is very high but there are some small errors in the research and analysis that need to be revised to ensure the rigor of the articlea the abstract part explains that different coefficients of determination in the experiment will perform different prediction results where are the methods used in these predictionsb the article mentioned that the artificial neural network is possible simulate the neural activity of the human subject and also mentioned the method what is the relationship and

the authors create an evaluation index for the quality of aviation services carry out a questionnaire survey on a wellrespected platform choose a strong questionnaire and thoroughly analyse the age education and income of the respondents in the questionnaire they then use correlation analysis to explain the evaluation index system the weights of service providers and service users in the aviation service quality evaluation system are then determined using the analytical hierarchy approach to produce the index weights of each level the papers concept is exciting but i consider it has a few issues that the author should approach methodicallyathe introduction portion is too brief and falls short of what is expected of an introduction section as a whole my recommendation is to add one more paragraph that

this paper investigates the value of multislice spiral computed tomography msct perfusion scanning features in evaluating chronic infection in elderly patients with severe acute pancreatitis patients with concurrent peripancreatic infection had prolonged peak time decreased peak height and reduced blood flow rui hao et al demonstrated possible effectiveness of the combination of these three msct perfusion scan parameters in reducing concurrent peripancreatic inflammation these findings provide crucial significance for evaluating the occurrence during peripancreatic infection and selecting clinical treatment options however this article still has some deficiencies as followsprevious studies have already demonstrated the role on msct in acute pancreatitis pmid pmid and pmid the following should describe these findings in the introduction or discussion if more information regarding the peripancreatic problem should be added in the introduction

i have read a manuscript and i feel the manuscript may become acceptable after the following revisions are carried here asthma are frequent the cough is mortality rate treatments available geographical variations factors contributing tb asthama all these items should be introduction in the introduction section of the manuscriptare there any previous investigations that have shown the involvement of homeobox disease genes in asthma what led you to carry this studyprimers should be included in table information about the qrtpcr such as reaction composition etc is necessaryimage quality should be improvedbetter to include information about the reagents useddiscussion should be improved usage should be greatly discussedcarefully check the manuscript for grammatical structure avoid lengthy sentences and nonscientific terminology

in the present work the authors provide prognosis signature of cuprotosisrelated lncrnas associated with kidney renal clear cell carcinoma the results reported herein provide new insights into the pathogenesis of kirc and the contribution of lncrnas associated with cuprotosis the results also helped identify a prognostic indicator that could potentially provide information for kirc treatment the articles are wellorganized and comprehensive in content however there are some of concerns that need to be dealt with the manuscript could benefit from professional editing some sentences are repetitive or grammatically wrong which make the reading tedious the quality of the figures is not very clear it is recommended to modify and improve all the figures in the discussion part kirc is a common subtype of renal cell carcinoma that is

dear authorsauthors are discussed with different studies related to proposed technique result and discussion is satisfiedoverall this paper is good so i have recommended to accept with minor revisionsminor corrections are required in this paper below mentioned corrections should be incorporatecommentsthe following corrections are required before publish this articlein page no instead of i use in page no remove this word from the sentencein page no this comes under first sentence or second sentence because author put dot symbol on both sidesin page no adjust the figure name along with the figure make it both should be together or either align in previous or next pagein page no mention as inch or inches dont need of symbol in page no mention as equationin page no figure author should

in this manuscript yanhua chen etal used metaanalysis to see how effective and safe atezolizumab mab and docetaxel chemotherapy are as firstline treatments for nonsmall cell lung cancer nsclc they concluded the pfs difference between the altemizumab and docetaxel groups was statistically significant the data is interesting and has clinical importance yet there are some format mistakes and unappropriated descriptions major pointsplease provide the full name of pfs in the abstract part one of the most important concern is that the major study was to investigate atezolizumab mab and docetaxel chemotherapy however the author mentioned pd in the second paragraph in the introduction partthe author indicated pd is associated to differentiation and apoptosis in activated cd and cd t cells activated b cells natural killer nk cells natural

in this study the authors argued that among tdm nonsurgical inpatients vte risk can be reliably predicted using a nomogram perspective on clinical and laboratory parameters in general the work is of interest but there are still numerous problems that need to be modifiedthe article has some problems of his understanding of grammar so it is suggested to modify itin introduction this paper should accentuate his contributions in this section the introduction about related work should be reviewed an deeplypaper analyzes the results involving others in the past is not deep enough in addition your list for references is not in the style it is close but not completely correct

in my opinion critical revisions are required to make the manuscript acceptable for publicationthe first version of abstract needs to be modified as for decades gufusheng capsules gfscs have been used to treat osteonecrosis of the femoral head onfh however its mechanism of action remains rather unclearelisa should be written in uppercase lettersthis sentence in abstract is unclear please rewrite it the results of portuguese and western peptide assay revealed that gfsc updownregulated gdp expression in onfhrelated targets similarly this sentence provided a new direction for the development of novel drugs and the treatment of onfh should be changed to provided a new direction for new development of promising drugs for the treatment with onfhplease confirm if the numerical values related to onfh statistics is correct the reference

the possible changes in operating conditions as well as contingencies threaten the accuracy of network reduction methods in planning studies this paper mainly focuses on application of a network reduction technique on a practical network and it wants a methodology which can better work in the practical network the paper presents the problem clearly the organization of the paper is good the classification presented in section is also a good one in this subjectthe following questions however needs to be answered in this round of revision processi suggest the authors check the whole paper once again from the grammar point of viewexcept in the beginning using capital letter is not recommended in the sentence even in defining a new abbreviationthe figures of digsilent have a legend in the

the structure of the full text is reasonable the logical thinking is clear the viewpoints are expressed accurately the language is fluent and the method of argumentation is reasonable the referenced literature and materials meet the requirements of the theme and the subject to the materials meet the professional requirements but some concepts are vague and can be modifiedi the mobile edge network consists of three parts mobile edge service nodes edge devices and backbone network could you explain the role of the backbone networkii youth poverty alleviation is a program where students go to poor areas and use the knowledge and skills they have acquired to help local people what are the benefits of participating in this programiii the digital library application proposed in the explicit community

on this basis this article first has a deep understanding of the research status of comprehensive budget management at home and abroad and analyzes the innovations as shortcomings of this article in the analysis process understands the mobile internet integrates budget management and integrates information for budget implementation prove the need for an open information platform for budget management in the mobile internet environment and analyze the feasibility of implementation to help small and mediumsized enterprisesthe following are the issues that appear in the articlea in the methodology the section describes the research status of the article but the title of the section is initially vague and the question in content does not explain the information content within the sectionb in the article the article analyzes the background

based on this this article takes smart rural tourism as the object and studies the mobile internet advertising model based on big data aiming to take this opportunity to help the rapid development of rural tourism in the process of research the article also found that the mobile internet advertising model for rural tourism has become increasingly refined and precise there are some problems in the article please pay attention it is mentioned in the article that we can explore the actual needs of users by predicting their behavior but the article does not explain the related technologies of prediction please add the security problem is an inevitable problem in the development process of the mobile internet but the article repeatedly mentioned a terminal system which seems to

with the rapid development of artificial intelligence technology artificial intelligence technology has been widely used in various fields in this paper artificial intelligence technology is used in the related research of university administrative performance allocation scheme which makes the research data more accurate and its research efficiency high the angle of the topic of the full text is novel the context of the article is clear the writing style is smooth and the basic point of view is clear it is suggested to improve and revise the following problems and the revised articles can be employed analyze the construction scheme of university administrative performance appraisal system in figure and explain what we should do in university administrative performance appraisal explain in detail how particles are optimized in artificial

the keywords do not exist in the research fields the keywords and picking terms related to the first subject and special issue scope keywords have a significant impact concerning the appearance of researchit should explain more well this paragraph due to it isnt clear enough autophagy a highly developed fundamental cellular biological pathway in eukaryotic cells played a crucial role in maintaining the homeostasis of the intracellular environment the basic system of autophagy mainly maintains cell homeostasis by eliminating damaged organelles protein aggregates and longevity proteins but the purpose of autophagy is not simply to eliminate substances on the contrary autophagy is a dynamic loop system that offers powerful benefits for cell renewal and internal environment steady state the summary should be abstracted and selfcontained so the authors

ochange the second paragraph of the design of interactive music teaching platform using embedded hardware platform and sensor sectionosome justification is required in the primary headings of the results and discussion sectionowork on the articles presentation and make any necessary modifications it is uninterestingowhy the authors use the key words music teaching platform in this paperothe possible reason for this result is that the behavioral tendency is a relatively stable state and the two groups of students have a certain reaction intention to the learning attitude update it correctlyomake any required revisions to the conclusion section and add at least one phrase to the conclusionothe literature must be current including a few articles from recent years focusing on the subjects discussed in the text

in the manuscript management of helicobacter pylori by triple therapy in combination with saccharomyces boulardii and its clinical efficacy in children the authors provide interesting data about triple therapy was administered to the control group and experimental group administered with triple therapy combined with saccharomyces boulardii they also identified the significant effective rate of eradication of helicobacter pylori seen in the combined therapy group is whereas the eradication in the control group nevertheless the work in its current form has several limitations that preclude publication in the journal of healthcare engineeringmajor pointin the data and methods part the author did not provide the precise hospital that approved this study which might be a huge mistakea number of abbreviations were raised in the tables especially table i suggest provided

this manuscript is of scientific interest and the authors evaluate the difference between continuous nursing intervention under the guidance of health belief model and routine nursing intervention during conjunction with preventive colostomy however my comments follow as follows patients who met the inclusion criteria from preventive enterostomy were randomly divided into prevention group and control group when was the study conducted and the time of follow up should be added first baseline characteristics of the occupational communities were supposed to be described in the abstract there was no significant difference in sex age tumor stage tumor location and education level at the two groups p table comparable this study was reviewed by the nursing ethics committee what did the comparable mean continuous nursing based on hbm starts from

this article attempts to start from the background of todays internet age combine the free nature of the internet and the free spirit of literature and have an objective and fair understanding of the freedom of internet literature in the context of the current era so that the free spirit of the internet can truly fit literature the essence of freedom in order to achieve freedom in the true sense the paper is good research however the article still has deficiencies in the following aspects i make some suggestions and i hope you can improve the article some statements in the paper are not professional enough and need to be modified its network characteristics are refreshing but the problems existing in the process of development have become increasingly

your manuscript evaluates the overall effect of fullview risk precontrol management in nursing combined with comfortable nursing in operating room nursing for patients under hysteroscopic surgery this study is novel but was most topic of interest with the researchers in the related activities but the paper needs very significant improvement before acceptance for publication my journal comments appear as followswhat is allview risk precontrol management do you mean fullview risk precontrol management in nursingin the title of this articlehysteroscopic operating room nursing is an inappropriate expression do you mean operating room nursing in patients under hysteroscopic surgerythe definition of grouping in the method is small bit confusing the author defines groups b c then a please define them in the order of acthe authors mentioned the selfrating anxiety

comments to authorsin what ways sepsis and sepsis are differentiatedinclude the main contributions and outcomes in its introduction of is the existing method available as author now details what ways proposed study superior over themdeidentification into data shifting a differenthow to draw the receiver operating curvereferences are to align as per journal policy in page no of severely ill patients in intensive care units but are not organized

this paper makes a visual analysis of papers about case teaching in the field of public management published since by using vos viewer and cite space software the research content has aroused the interest of readers and is innovative the following contents are suggested to be carefully revisedquestion the innovation point of this paper is the visualization analysis of case teaching research in the field of public administration through quantitative research method but why is the innovation point using quantitative research method need to add content to explain the innovationquestion as far as i know there are various quantitative research methods the quantitative research methods used in this paper are vos viewer and cite space why do you choose these two software as the quantitative research methodsquestion the

in this study the author selected patients with coronary heart disease who received selective pci as the research object explored the computer tomography ct based on threedimensional reconstruction of coronary artery model and evaluated the function after percutaneous coronary intervention pci the results showed that the accuracy sensitivity and specificity of ct images of d reconstructed coronary artery model were and respectively which could provide support for the diagnosis and treatment of coronary heart disease the content narrative logic of the method part of the authors summary is relatively chaotic and it is suggested that the author should briefly describe it again for example the study took patients with coronary heart disease who received selective pci as the research object according to the grammatical score they were divided

le li et al attempted to investigate the related mechanism of osteosarcoma by bioinformatics methods they analyzed the potential regulation mechanism of osteosarcoma via bioinformatics excavation and established related mirnamrna network in osteosarcoma but there are some major concerns on this manuscript in your introduction you said however the mirnamrna interaction network of osteosarcoma is still far from complete clarification but i have found many studies focusing on the topic is that mean your study lacks novelty besides the introduction is too brief and the readers could not get your purpose in your methods the probe information are redundant and the baseline information of the two datasets should be introduced top genes in the results were selected as potential targets where are the threshold value come from another

to investigate this effect of medical care visit combined with emotional nursing on the quality of life and emotion of patients with thyroid lymphoma it is found that the combination present medical group examination and emotional nursing can effectively improve the quality of life and sleep in patients with malignant lymphoma reduce adverse emotions and benefit the prognosis the clinical treatment of patients it is of great significance to the prognosis of patients please revise many following questions before publicationplease pay attention to the format of the document in table no description other citation words should is included please unify the data format in table there is no description of previous research or the preface no previous research on the significance of nursing for patients with malignant tumorsthese

the paper is wellwritten yet there are a few problems that are listed belowwhy the go is a commonly used bioinformatics toolthere are discrepancies in section numbers please make the changes that are requiredkindly defined the application of bioinformatics in clear wordingthe names of the authors are written in a different styles some words are capitalized and some arent please revise your workthe opening part of the manuscript lacks a layout the organization of the manuscript must be includedplease explore and expand on the kegg pathway enrichment analyses of degs and go annotation analyses of degsbecause the papers appearance is so bad any improvement will be much appreciatedwhy did the authors choose the degs and kegg methods in this type of study

my comments are mainly aimed at tightening up the logic and clarity of what you have communicated and tested the comments beneath this paper are as follows first of all there are general problems about the format of this article refer to the formal paper format for modification secondly the form of the abstract is not very smooth it is suggested that the author cancel the subtitle to improve of fluency of the article further improve the logic of the article the analysis process under the articles is not rigorous enough about the keywords of the article emodin should be placed in the first place it then about the beginning to its keyword need to pay homage to the problem of capitalization as for the content planning of

this paper examines the role of elf in chemoresistance to oxaliplatin lohp in colorectal cancer crc and explores potential mechanisms related to tipe which is good but there are additional issues in the papere is coupled to ets transcription factor with some prominent transcription factor that regulates genes associated with an aggressive tumor phenotype tnf inducible protein like tipe transfers several second messengers and plays an important role in cancer progression this looks less like a background study and more like a conclusion but revisethe citation format of such references in the text is variable and new authors are requested to make correctionscolorectal cancer crc is the third most commonly diagnosed form of cancer worldwide this is too brief an introduction to skin cancer so please go a

the topic is very interesting and relevant to the journal however there are some grammar glitches that need proper proofreading in addition the related work section may please be updated with citing relevant papers some of the papers are provided below a blockchainbased fog computing framework for activity recognition as an application to ehealthcare services future generation computer systems an ehealth care services framework for the detection and classification of breast cancer in breast cytology images as an iomt application future generation computer systems a decade of internet of things analysis in the light of healthcare applications ieee access machine learning in the internet of things designed techniques for smart cities future generation computer systems a novel deep learning based framework for the detection and classification of breast

the position of the keywords in this article does also match the order at their article content the quoted part of this article is incorrect where formula e are not explained in this article the distributed data storage system of part of the method in this article was incomplete the format cited in this article is not used chart in this article is incomplete

in this paper the fitness function method of genetic algorithm is used to construct the key feature quantity of the township government administrative management optimization design and the data analysis technology is used to realize the administrative management optimization design and optimization identification the research results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsthe introduction needs to increase the relevant research contents how do you view the research and reform process of township administrative system the meaning of administrative management in the reform of township administrative system explain in detail about it add some more information about the background of chinas rural revitalization strategy what are the main problems facing the grassroots government in china there is a problem in the

comments for the paper mobility aware data transmission for mobile ad hoc networks based industry applications using computer vision algorithms are as follows why the global positioning system is explained in the proposed research work why prominence node discovery algorithm is introduced in this presented work figures and tables caption citations should be in sequential order please verify those figures and tables the benefits of the work need to be explained more need clarity on area size and simulation time used for execution purposes references and are included in the overview of the proposed kindly remove both references and include it in the related works

in order to explore how to realize the construction of university innovation and entrepreneurship internet platform under the ecological environment a kind of university innovation and entrepreneurship internet platform construction based on the ecological environment is proposed this method recommends key technical problems and solutions based on the information represented by the ecological environment to explore how to realize the construction of innovation and entrepreneurship internet platform in the ecological environment the content is complete the hierarchy is arranged scientifically please add critical points under the influence of the internet environment contemporary colleges and universities have begun to undergo certain changes in their educational functions and teaching requirements the functions of modern colleges and universities have gradually changed from traditional elite education to mass education which aspect is

this is a retrospective study looking at the predictive role of nlr and ldh in patients with cervical cancer treated with immunotherapy the study rationale is sound the design and statistics are appropriate the study results have been reported in various other tumors so i wouldnt consider this paper very original but it is still worth publishing since such a study has not been conducted in the cervical cancer space

a manuscript presents an experimental study on the electrochemical micromachining process parameters optimization of aluminium metal matrix composites interesting results regarding the most suitable edm parameters are these the study conducted is interesting and results are worth of being publishedhowever improvements are necessary when it comes to english language and the overall quality of presentation information context on the applications of different mmc used in this material should be briefly included at the literature reviewmore details on the experimental procedure could be included ie experimental details illustrated with workpiece measurements of output parameterssome minor aspectsmeaning systems the viktor abbreviation should not be explained in the abstract instead the authors are instructed to list references of abbreviations please update mcdm should refer to multi criterion decision making

this study with analysis on effect and influencing factors of precision rehabilitation therapy on scales of abc cars chat and cabs in children with autism spectrum disorder the factors affecting the rehabilitation effect include family income the educational level of the main caregivers and the scores of abc cabs cars and chat language is not written well need to be corrected or modify in abstract part the sentence a total of fifty children with asd who were treated in our hospital from january to december were selected andshould be amended to read a total of fifty children with asd who were treated in our hospital from january to december were selected an assessment of the childs condition was completed first followed by a oneyear period of personalised and

as chinese companies invest in infrastructure projects in eastern europe every year their risks also increase so the risk early warning of chinas infrastructure investment in central and eastern europe has become particularly important the method in this paper is very effective the experimental design is very complete and the results obtained are in line with expectations the article has basic elements such as theory method experiment and innovation the overall framework and logic are also very clear but the details still need to be improvedstfor chinas overseas infrastructure investment in central and eastern europe the risk factor is not just one but a variety of political economic social cultural natural technological and other factors how to reduce the risk among so many risk factors please describe in

tcm syndrome differentiation and nursing assist with psychological evaluation can potentially meliorate the curative impact across early and middle stage breast cancer patients and is conducive to restoring their quality of life and allaying hidden emotions which can be extensively promoted and applied in clinical practice the available results of this paper have important practical guiding significance but there are still the following problemsthe introduction needs to increase accessibility relevant research contents what are the characteristics of the methods for syndrome differentiation and treatment for breast cancer what are the positive effects of psychological intervention please supplement the research on the etiology and pathogenesis of breast cancer in traditional chinese medicine what are the main statements of the hospital ethics committee please supplement the related concepts of cognitive

your research topic is novel and i appreciate the authors welcome however i have a few suggestions for improvement certain section headers are too long reduce them eg construction in a refined management model for kidney transplant services based on the internet in many places authors have not properly used references with long sentencesphrases something is a need to identify the research gap from reviewed sections at the end of section related work i have unable to find the problem statementhypothesis on which the study is based many figs have low resolution plz improve report visibility which theoretical basis is used for refinement management quality evaluation criteria are limitations what future directions are required how the questionnaire is designed distributed and collected data is analyzed

a novel ferroptosisrelated lncrna signature for predicting the prognosis of laryngeal squamous cell carcinoma is proposed in this paper however there are still some major problems i recommend that my paper can be accepted after major analysis the comments are as followsit is clear how they are used to affect the choice of action but the following problems are unclear why do they improve performance what do they individually contribute to the performance improvementit is needed to add description about the improvement of the proposed method comparing with other similar method moreover the authors should list their contributions in this manuscriptthe abstract and conclusion did not present the main idea of standard error however prominent typos are presented and obvious syntax errors are clear subject considered is an

in this presented manuscript various studies on nanocellulose reinforced synthetic and natural polymers in the literature are briefly reviewed although the manuscript was submitted for the journal as a discussion article it was written as a review article even if it be presented as a review article it is not wellwritten and organized in the manuscript there are many punctuation and page error the figures in figure captions taken from other studies were previously cited discussions time still short and not detailed in addition the title of the manuscript and the manuscript content do not match in the title it say electronic applications but in the manuscript there is no any information about electronic applications manuscript mostly talks of mechanical properties of nanocellulose reinforced polymers in abstract does

manuscript research progress of noninvasive hemodynamic monitoricontmin neonatesin this paper the author has analyzed the progress of noninvasive hemodynamic monitor icontm in neonates however several issues are present in the paper the author must address all the following points and revise the paperin the abstract no statements are presented about the proposed method and obtained resultsthe author must change the heading of clinical significance of hemodynamic monitoring and should choose a meaningful heading such as introductionin fick method the term fick is undefined the author must introduce this term on first usein invasive blood pressure and central venous pressure monitoring the description of invasive blood pressure is not clear the section must be revised and more changes must be added to make the meaningfuloverall section is very rough

please follow my commentsthe literature has to be strongly categorized with some relevant and recent papers reporting on the fields dealt with in the manuscriptthe conclusion section should be greatly enhancedmaintain a uniform reference stylemake a little changes to the abstract of the paperin the introduction please explain your works motivation and significant contributionscorrect the following lists however most of the current reports belong to retrospective study and personal opinion sharing and there has been no standard operating procedures and the selected business and technical routes are not uniformcite all of the texts figures and tablesthe papers presentation all in common areas improper please make it new and are understandable make some changes

highlight some growing gap in the literature surveyfurnish discussion to establish how the proposed method is unique or different from other sampling methodsauthor can give some more details about plant and their bacterial qualitieswhat type of strain only mentioned in this edition for silver nanoparticle preparationfigure type not used in the content check itcheck all references had become cited in your article and citation order should be sequential add few more recent references

the paper conforms to the theme of the journal and has certain application value it is suggested to arrange and publish according to the requirements of the publishing house

i checked the systems this assessment is well developed and organized because it allows a comparison between the existing and wellknown ui usability evaluations such as the national standards of ks x jakob nielsens usability heuristics and korhonens mobile phone usability heuristics in addition it did an expert interview for the suggestions to gain the papers objectivity for validity but to get published i mentioned some parts to become supplemented and revised please specify the job or work the experts are engaged in so that your interviews and its results can support your arguments please add more information about experts comments besides discussion opinions on the usability evaluation criteria please make up for this

this paper uses the monitoring system composed of internet of things technology to realize realtime collection transmission processing of industrial data and monitoring and control of industrial field equipment which is of great significance for reducing the overall production cost of enterprises improving the level of management decisionmaking and improving production efficiency the content of the article has a unique and innovative way but some details have not been done well if the following problems are improved the quality of the article will be greatly improved there are few references cited and some important research status at home and abroad has not been mentioned adding some references will make the article more substantial the internet interconnected network has no specific content explanation and needs to be supplemented to

this paper proposes a new model for treating patients with cardiopulmonary defects it seems that the proposed scheme works well from the simulation results in my opinion this paper is interesting and worth considering however there are several technical and presentation problems needed to be solved lets talk about the writing it is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammar spelling and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader in the abstract part involved in more experimental data processing content this is very unnecessary in addition it is recommended that the summary is narrated in sections otherwise the reader will lose the focus the size

a systematic review and metaanalysis for the role of nursing for selfcare within patients suffering with heart failure is a meaning study in this study the authors have performed a systematic review and metaanalysis for assessing the function of nursing for selfcare in patients suffer from heart failure however there are still many corrections should be madethere are too many grammar errors please correctthere are too numerous typos please attentiontoo many keywords please ignore someplease show the pictures of diagrams and tables in the last part of the paperfigure but not clear please show more clear oneplease add the description of resultsplease show figure legends behand only figuresplease include more description in the part of discussionplease add the references by using endnote softwareplease add more references about