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in this article the authors showed that the incidence of atrial fibrillation after opcab is significantly lower such that after ccabg by using metaanalysis the quality of this manuscript should become improvedmajor help correct the spelling of this manuscript according to the guidelines for authorsthe grammar errors and typos should be correctedthe sentences shouldn be added more and by using endnote softwarethe pictures of figures should be adjusted make them much clearerplease adjust the font and size of the words make others consistentplease discuss the limitation or differences in the part of discussionthere are the many descriptions in the backgroundthere are punctuation errors in the manuscriptplease check the data analysis in another part of methodplease show the figure legends for every result

his paper is a detailed analysis of the effects of humanized comprehensive care combined with targeted psychological care interventions and functional training on negative emotions compliance and quality of life in patients with sudden deafness but there are still some problems in the paper the abstract is clearly written around the topic but it is too long please revise the author to make the language simpler please ask the author to rearrange the title of this article such as introduction to introduction the pathogenesis of the disease is not fully understood but studies have found that it is related to viral infection impaired blood supply to the inner ear and rupture of the membrane vagus nerve personally i feel that this sentence is inappropriate and ask the author

the paper entitled pirfenidone alleviates intrauterine infectioninduced lung injuries by targeting tgf smad signaling pathway by foster et al is about the genes damages patients neonatal after intrauterine infection and assesses the potential protective effect of pirfenidone pfd the paper has novel methods and results thus the study has significance in the healthcare domain but there is room for improvement if the following comments are taken into accountiit is better not may use symbols in the title of a paper unless they are very explicit during use hence authors should reconsider writing iiin the abstract conclusions should be conclusions the background should cover background and objectivesiiikeywords should be alphabetically arranged in ascending orderivthere are too many acronyms used in the paper therefore a list without acronyms should be

it is a pleasure to review this manuscript the paper reviewed the progress of research on the clinical application of physical therapy in the treatment of obsessivecompulsive disorder in recent years including repetitive transcranial magnetic stimulation electroconvulsive therapy deep brain stimulation and transcranial direct current stimulation the authors knowledge of the field is comprehensive and systematic there are some concerns that should be addressed after each chapter review the author should discuss and summarize the results according to his own understanding it is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammar and spelling

by discussing the role of new drugs in the treatment of breast cancer patients this paper opens up a new direction for the treatment of female patients it is a relatively novel article with relatively novel viewpoints and may be published smoothly after solving the following problemsfirst of all please update the writing format of the article take the abstract part as an example it is best not to discuss in this stylefor rna or dna sequences in the article please use italics this will better distinguish this section from the restas an added bonus please include more details about the core of this article in the summary section to make it more specifickeywords appear bc please explain the definition as far as possible do not appear in

that core literature deals directly the usp suppressed abcg induced biological surveillance of doxorubicin resistance thyroid cancer by regulation of ptenpikakt protein in my opinion such research project is interesting and worth considering however to what concerns the proposed paper i have several concerns in particular such research project is interesting and worth considering however to what concerns the submitted paper i have several concerns in particular the literal presentation is not satisfactory most of the sentences of the text would need rephrasingrewording and the citation of several references could be improved some mathematical developments are only completely clear some of the images are blurred and the author would replace them with clear images with higher resolution the clinical data analysis of figure is not deep enough in

abstract background the pbl style of patient care check sentence formation abstract background educators are responsible for preparing pg students of life write full form for pg abstract results in all more than write full form for cvi abstract results though not understanding score it should be established use alternative and more suitable word for victorious abstract conclusions future recommendations can be added introduction it was in late s provide reference introduction to upgradereal world problems incomplete sentence check it introduction students were await competent executive were await meaning introduction students in problembasedreasoning use abbreviation pbl for problem based learning challenge should be challenged word difficulty is repetitive introduction numerous researchreasoning skills check word condemnatory or use alternative word introduction numerous studiesthinking ability provide reference introduction college training

with the popularization of smart home and various speech recognition software speech recognition system has gradually entered peoples attention and is favored by the majority of users for its practicability and accuracy the development of internet technology has brought new teaching methods to traditional vocal music teaching and also provided the network foundation for the construction of vocal music teaching platform therefore this paper makes a preliminary discussion and construction of the distance teaching platform combining vocal music teaching and internet technology the author needs to revise the article there are more or less advantages and disadvantages in the methods of dealing with the problem of sample imbalance does the prediction accuracy of the acceleration factor need to be further improved although speech recognition claims to have an

in the existing research its characteristics and defects should be describedit is more typical and representative to study the utilization efficiency of construction land then what is the significance of this study in this contextexploratory analysis data analysis esda it be divided into two parts general and local autocorrelation please explain how this method is applied according to initial conditionsthe value range of morans i should be about in deep maybe the confidence level and the empirical threshold thus useful for you to carry out you explaination herethe the density of construction land in dehong prefecture is first lowest that is yuankm the economic density and construction land in kunming is times higher than that in diqing prefecture ranking the third and once higher than that in dehong

on this basis this article first has the deep study of the research status of comprehensive budget management at home from abroad and analyzes the possibilities and shortcomings of this article in the analysis process understands the mobile internet integrates budget management and integrates information for budget management prove increased feasibility for an integrated information platform for budget management in the mobile internet environment and analyze the feasibility of strategy to help small and mediumsized organizations following are the issues that appear in the articlea in the methodology section section describes the research content of the article but the title of academic section is too vague and the question research content does not explain the main content of the sectionb in the introduction the article analyzes the index

this paper summarizes the current status of perioperative care for animals in recent periods and provides some reference for clinical improvement of dietary outcomes in esd tr but there are still interesting issues about the full abstract not a summary of an article to reflect the main content of the article therefore the abstract part needs to be concise and brief some unnecessary content can be deleted in the abstract of this paper and it is suggested to seriously modify and refine the main content of the articlethe conclusion of the abstract is the same as the conclusion of the introduction and the authors are invited to make that presentation was asked to show why psychological care is necessary and what the benefits arein the section pain care

exosomes are the focus of research in recent years the authors found that the expression of circrnas circactn was elevated in tumor tissue in the blood of patients with glioma the regulatory mechanism of cerna was further discovered materials and methods clinical specimen lacking necessary author information gender age stage and grading of patients are required need to add more detailed information on plasmids used in cell transfection what is the transfection time rna quantification please provide more detailed experimental conditions why two shrna plasmids are used in cell proliferation experiments in apoptosis assay only shrna plasmid was used the circrna sequence after mutation should be provided in figure why is mirap written in the ordinate in figure d the author needs to explain figure is shrna but

this paper studied the effect of fuzheng xiaoji decoction combined with capecitabine on sf score and treatment compliance of esophageal cancer patients the paper is technically sound and presents a good piece of research work and thus the positives dominate minor negatives that can typically exist in any good article such as figure contains three figures which should be labeled and illustrated with a b and c respectively the title of figure and is the same please modify and explain in section a total of patients with esophageal cancer diagnosed and treated in our hospital from may to september were randomly selected as the study subjects the number of cases is too small which will affect the correctness of the conclusion please introduce the basis of the proposed

dear sir thanks a lot for giving me an opportunity to review the paper for your journal dear authors the paper is clearly presented and well written so i appreciate the hard work done by you for conducting this research the strength of this paper is the aim and objective however the weakness of this paper lies in the introduction section the novelty of the research is high and significance is also high there are many points which need to clarify before making the final decisionthe aim and objective of the study has not been mentioned in the abstract section please clarify what the author is basic aim behind the studywhat is the meaning of geo database please explainthe irgpi of luad was correlated with clinical stage differential

this paper aims to start from the global data level bdi space design the navigation device for the internet of things build a complex application platform and visualize it so as to undertake the media of information events the article is logically clear but requires major revisions as detailed belowst network visualization frameworks and class libraries have the highest versatility users can use them flexibly to generate their own graphics according to their own needs or write drawing software with more customized functions depending on these frameworks and class libraries so which of these frameworks of class libraries can be extended please describe it in detail with the content of the articlend general network visualization tools are generally relatively mature software that can be used simply to network

ithe papers presentation to be lacking the presentation of the project may benefit from a few tweaksiithe abstract part must be wellwritten and welldescribed please rewrite a few sentences in the middle areaiiiarrange the references in a similar structure and explicitly cite them in the introductionivrevise it with the aging of chinese population in china the incidence of gastric carcinoma shows an increasing trend year by country vits possible that the introduction section will be quite brief please update the section titled introductionvibelow the main headings add a couple lines labeled pages and methodsvii this introduction section has a sectionbysection analysis in the introduction area please upload a paper section by section paragraphviiiin subsection treatment method for patients with gastric carcinoma peritoneal metastasis the second paragraph update them

in the article secure data transmission for quality of service analysis and evaluation in industrial systems there are some corrections which has to be changed to improve the quality of the paper correction needed are as followsa the abstract section needs more clear information about the work proposedb mention the major purpose of the work proposed and its quality of servicesc illustrate the work proposed and its contribution to the proposed workd the alignment of the equation needs to be corrected equations should be on the left of the manuscript and the equation number should be aligned in the right cornere illustrate iot and its importance in the proposed workf the future scope of enhancement can be included in the conclusion section

on paper the efforts of doctors and nurses combined with the improved nursing mode has brought security for these elderly in their later life and touched on the key issues of social concern so it is a solid thesis framework for the discussion without the systematic approach it is best to modify the way of discussion in the followup and strengthen the use of subheadings so that the narration will be more smoothwhat is the cost of this care model and whether the patients family can afford maintenance for this model for the elderly without children whether they can afford itit is important to further standardize the format and the data availability format at the end of the article is significantly different from the rest of the

in order to avoid the problems that the existing emotion analysis methods lack of effective feature extraction of emotion keywords and it is difficult to deeply mine fulltext information an emotion analysis model based on dual channel fusion and bilstm attention is proposed this method further uses cnn to extract deeplevel memory features and at the same time combines bilstm with attention mechanism for fully learn the emotional features of context related information and weights the emotional feature that finally the results of the two channels are fused to complete the judgment of the emotional polarity of the text in general this paper has more research interest theoretical valuespecific problems there are some problems in the summary which need to are significantly improved in the introduction a lot

the article requires a thorough proofread to improve the grammatical content list out the main contributions of this work a section related works can be added to summarize the recent and related works some of the recent works on agriculture such as the following can be discussed a novel pcawhale optimizationbased deep neural network model for classification of tomato plant diseases using gpu a notation table that includes all the notations in the article will be helpful for the readers compare the results obtained with recent state of the art what are the limitations and future scope of this work

your manuscript has investigated the effect of dapagliflozin therapy on improving clinical outcome after drugeluting stent implantation in elderly tdm patients this realworld study is novel it is a topic of interest to the researchers in the related areas but the paper needs very significant improvement before acceptance for publication my detailed comments are as followsthis article is a realworld study the author should mention in the abstract that the realworld data were retrospectively studiedthe abstract should give an overview of the theme and main research contents of the study rather than merely listing the conclusionsimproper description of the results in the discussion entangled in trivial issues etcin method the author mentioned cox proportional risk model it is not a formal statistical description do you mean hazard modelthe

commentsstate of art should been given clear in sample introduction partwhat are specific features extracted or symbols in the proposed methodspecify the flow of hog in feature extractionfigure legends should contain enough code to describe this figure without making the reader refer to the textgive the detailed performance metrics in the results section need to been explained with how the result was achieved in proper language

in general the idea of this paper technically makes sense the viewpoints of this article are relatively new and practical here are some specific issues a the author needs to incorporate more content in section of abstract elements the author needs can provide more detailed explanation for parameters in addition to c the author needs to propose more explanation about softmax knowledge d the author needs to present detailed explanation for evaluation metrics e the author has to add an explanation for fig and fig f the author needs to cite more references in his manuscriptg the author should explain why to use special attention mechanism cbamh the author should add a new experiment to evaluate the prelu strategy

after reading the paper as a whole the following questions and comments are available inviting you to answer and revisethe article mentions that plastic museums have shown more for more limitations in the competition of the market so what should apply dowhat are the components of the sensor network mentioned in this paper what are its main functions please elaborate themwhat is the inherent relationship between interactive design and museum display design in this article please briefly elaborate on thisin this paper the description of the part of determining the relative direction of feature points in the feature extraction algorithm of folk museum objects is not perfect so please combine it with mathematical formulas for additional explanationplease including a brief outline of each main role of each device

prostate cancer pca is the second dominant reason resulting in cancer death and the most prevalent male malignancy in this study some deficiencies are discussed here first as a retrospective study the observation period of this study so it is difficult to summarize firm conclusions on prognostic issues this is one of the largest reported series for mcrpc patients receiving novel arat drugs prior to docetaxel therefore an extended study period to identify the influence of ttpn on os prospectively is warranted there are the following problems that need to be paid attention toa the background part of the article is not introduced in detail which is easy to be confused so we need to write carefully and improve the detailsb there are some abbreviations in the text

based on the gauss process this paper builds a market forecasting model based on machine learning discusses the model structure the characteristics of the mean function and kernel function and designs parameter estimation and model evaluation methods however there are still some problems in their work some minor changes are recommended before release these issues are listed belowi on the innovation introduce machine learning methods into the fund investment process build a systematic investment decisionmaking framework based on market timing and industry rotation and provide new research perspectives and decisionmaking basis for fund investment portfolios it is not comprehensive enough as an innovation summary and the author is requested to revise itii the paper introduces that the estimation of hyperparameters must contain the noise level and explains that

zhang et al has designed this study to identify the hub genes responsible for immune cell infiltration and carotid atherosclerotic plaques progression using integrative bioinformatics approaches the authors have selected two datasets namely gse and gse however no explanation was given on selection criteria the authors must provide detailed description of the race gender or other available background of the individuals who participated in these two studies these studies should be properly cited in methods or where applicable this is importance because race and environmental factors greatly affects genetic or epigenetic predisposition so it is necessary to stress this out to avoid confusion i feel it is important to remove this line no human or animal subjects page line this creates confusion as the study is on human

this article is a research on metapragmatic awareness in english interpreting from the perspective of artificial intelligence technology in order to improve the level of machine interpreting technology and enhance the awareness of metapragmatics through english interpreting this paper examines the english interpreting system based on artificial intelligence technology it is compared with traditional machine interpretation results the paper has good usability but these are also certain flaws when the article introduces the main content of this study that the abstract part it mentions it the article has conducted indepth research on four aspects of metapragmatic theory review it is important just explain the current research content here to make the structure of the article more clear and specific the article gives a detailed introduction to the two

the text is wellwritten however the writers employed a lot of spelling in several dialects for better comprehension it is encouraged that authors write entire words rather than truncated variantsconclusion requires serious attention kindly mention the out coming of proposed research in the conclusion part kindly conclude this section within a more effective mannerthe paper should be more original with a description of how it is more unique and useful for future generations legends should be below the figures and top of the tables also consider the formatting in their paper before starting this articlecite some earlier works regarding this study highlight some major contributions of our paper and also add paper organization

the content and subject of your paper meets the journals requirements also the digital tourism planning system based on vr technology is well introduced and constructed at the same time the objective in your paper is clear and integrated however your research can be further improved before publication here are some suggestions in the introduction section you do not introduce the objective of designing the digital tourism planning system based on virtual reality technology however it is recommended to add this goal in the introduction section in order to make this section become more systematic and comprehensive in the section when introducing the unit of measure for vrml please provide the detailed definition of this unit measure as this concept is essential in this section in the section

this paper has some innovation but some contents need to be modified to improve the quality of the paperfigures and require highquality picturesplease make a more indepth analysis of the experimental results such as the content in figure please add relevant literature

in this manuscript the author designed a study to evaluate the clinical results of total hip arthroplasty combined with pericapsular nerve group block under the guidance of bultrasound and patientcontrolled intravenous analgesia as a result they demonstrated that the combined application of capsular bag nerve block and patientcontrolled intravenous analgesia significantly improves the quality of sleep in tha patients after surgery shortening the time to sleep prolonging sleep duration improving sleep efficiency and relieving pain this is an interesting paper and the followings aresome comments regarding this manuscript how many people are in the different study groups n it is suggested that the author clarify them in the abstract what is the significance of the total hip arthroplasty combined with pericapsular nerve group block clinical results seems improper

in this manuscript the authors demonstrated toxicity of pm collected in arrondissements of ouagadougou and showed how pm caused a concentrationdependent decreased in cell viability and also induce a significant production of ros and il to which cause harmful effects on public health i find that this manuscript is very clearly written and well described including references i recommend this manuscript for publication in journal of toxicology

a multiprocessor system can be modeled as a graph in which nodes vertices and edges correspond to processorand communication links respectively diagnosability is an important metric parameter for measuring the reliability of multiprocessor systems the pessimistic diagnosis strategy is a classic diagnostic model based on the pmc model the class of folded petersen cubes denoted by fpqnk where nk ge and nkne was introduced as a competitivemodel of the hypercubes which is constructed by iteratively applying the cartesian product operation onthe hypercube qn and the petersen graph p in this paper they prove that fpqnk is nk diagnosable under the pmc model and then they completely derive that the pessimistic diagnosability of fpqnk is nk under the pmcmodel as corollaries the diagnosability and the pessimistic diagnosability of hypercube

the manuscript title antibacterial efficacy and healing potential of honey from different zones in nigeria on diabetic induced wound infection in wistar rats seems good work the structure of the manuscript is good and the authors have described the process well the introduction section is clearly written and the other sections of the article are easy to understand this work can be published after addressing the following concernsmanuscript contains several grammatical and spelling errors therefore authors can send the manuscript to a professional english editing service authors can use statistical methods such as anova analysis to provide details of results presented in the form of graphs details of all used chemicals should be added including purity level and purchasing detailsthe reason for combing honey with different plants is

this article is very important in grey system theory as in the previous many studies ignore the stability of the grey model which results in failing to produce good predictions during a relatively long period these authors reviewed this problem and provided a potential way to solve it thus i recommend that it should be published even if there are some errors to be corrected in this article for example authors use the expression of grey however in the grey model research it should be expressed as grey i hope that authors could review this paper carefully again and use professional words to express the idea of their proposed robust grey model additionally the abstract is too long which needs to be reduced

there are some problems to be solved in the articleformseveral punctuation and language errors eg line some sentences or even entire paragraphs are not clear eg line about informed consent or are expressed in an unusual way for example line or line a duct or blood vessel would perhaps be dissected and not amputatedthe article needs language polishing

i suggest to the authors please improve the language of the section the functional functions of wntcatenin pathway crosstalk in resistancethe introduction makes no indication of the papers structure as a chapter in the opening section please offer a sectionbysection examination of your findingswhy the wntcatenin pathway is necessary for both developmental and adult tissue homeostasisfix any typographical and line spacing published in the manuscriptthe discussion in this article is rather short and does not effectively summarise the suggested work paper create far more advantageous environmentwhat are the esophageal cancer and tumor signaling also give some detail on thislittle detailed work on the role of mucin for development of cancer sectionthis works final reference list is presented in a picturestyle format to solve this problem kindly take your

over the years g has developed insights bringing significant advantages to communication devices and wireless sensor nodes consumption is an important engine of economic development correctly guiding cultural consumption and actively promoting the upgrading of digital cultural consumption have become the focus of driving the healthy and sustainable development of digital economy this paper combines the upgrading research correlation that of digital culture industry between g and the internet of things and has achieved understanding the full text is rich in content and the method is demonstrated with experimental data if the above questions are further modified and improved this article can be hiredunder what research background was the extensively written please answerdescribe the threephase load unbalance model mentioned in the articleplease identified the role of single load

with the development of information technology big data is connected with preschool education in this paper the advancement of technology and the development of the internet make preschool education move forward with continuous reform especially the development of big data brings new opportunities to preschool education and the thinking of big data will change the whole preschool education model and the selected topic of this paper is of great significance to the development of preschool education in the analysis of the m data set which is closer to the production data volume the number of iterations doubles to the rmse value decreases less than and when the number of iterations doubles from to the rmse decreases less than the suggestions are as followsathis paper discusses how to share

nice retrospective study with relevant questions and resultsi suggest to mention the differences in pre and postdilatation between the two groups to the limitations sectionas the abbreviations ses and bes are commonly used in another sense ie sirolimus and biolimus eluting stents the authors may think of an alternative abbreviation

this paper analyzes the relationship between gsdmb expression and each tumorinfiltrating immune cell using the gene module of timer database in great detail but some problems exist in the textthe results in the abstract of our study showed that the expression of gsdmb in tumor tissues of ovarian cancer patients was significantly lower than that in paracancerous tissues and the gsdmb gene was significantly correlated with the degree of immune cell infiltration which could be revised without further downward extension by the authorsthe article mentions that ovarian cancer is one of the most common malignant tumors of the female reproductive system but it does not mention how it is caused by the cause of cancer so the authors are invited to addwe used the cibersort algorithm httpscibersortstanfordedu to

cancer stem cells cscs is closely associated with tumor resistance invasion and recurrence and is considered the most promising target for cancer therapy at present the authors constructed a prognostic risk model associated with cscs to systematically assess the prognosis of hcc patients there are several problems should be paid attention the first author and cofirst author should be indicated on the title pagein the background of the abstract section the authors described that the presence of cancer stem cells cscs is closely associated with tumor resistance invasion and recurrence and is considered the most promising target for cancer therapy at present and identification of cscsrelated genes signatures and their relationship with cancer prognosis is crucial for hepatocellular carcinoma hcc these two sentences seem to have nothing to

this paper aimed to investigate binding effect of conventional surgery mixed with oxaliplatin and paclitaxel on ovarian cancer and its transmission across vegf he and caand the results suggest that tumor cytoreductive surgery combined with oxaliplatin and paclitaxel has a good shortterm clinical effect in the treatment of patients with ovarian cancer he can improve the nutritional status of patients and reduce the level of serum tumorrelated markers it has certain reference value during the treatment of prostate canceri have the following suggestions for this articlethe overall quality of the article is high the structure is more rigorous and the language is fluent it is recommended to accept it as minor revisions the author can appropriately reduce the abstract part and explain the main intention for example this

the author proposes a method of machine learning algorithm combined with internet of things technology in microcourse teaching the method utilizes advanced machine learning algorithms combined with iot technology by further improving the data mining and teaching methods of the microclassroom it can better adapt to the students class progress in order to better improve the teaching quality of microclassroom the dissertation expresses the viewpoints clearly discusses comprehensively the language is plain and concise and is easy to understand but lacks arguments please revise as requireda large number of experiments have proved that compared with minute videos microvideos with short time and independent knowledge points are more conducive to learning machine learning is one of the main methods to solve data mining problems please briefly explain the concept

thanks for asking me to review the article entitled artificial intelligence for public healthcare and medical education a systematic reviewoverall the selection of studies appears appropriate the analysis is rigorously conducted and the data are well presented my comments questions and suggestions are outlined below i hope they are useful to the authors for improving their work and to the handawi editors to support their deliberations i am willing to support its publication in handawi however i would like to see the following concerns to be addressed before it can be further considered what is the approximate scenario of health care expenditure worldwide which the authors have studiedsince your topic is to discuss ai the basic concepts are not articulated by youfigure number of literature on aimedicalmedical education

the article entitled analysis of coronary angiography combined with ffr and clopidogrel in interventional treatment of coronary heart disease is an interesting book however there are various minor variables should be correctedmajor points pictures and tables in the article can be placed at the end of the article if anything is significant difference as the data changes shall be indicated with the article needs a summary conclusionminor points please ensure that the format of the full text is consistent such as whether the initial letter of the subtitle is capitalized and whether there are spaces before the paragraph the results of the abstract is too complete for example of all patients were men and women and the mean age was years standard derivation sd method is unnecessary

based on this this article takes smart rural tourism as the focus and studies the mobile internet advertising model based on big data aiming to take this opportunity to help the rapid development of arid tourism in the process of research the article also found that the mobile internet advertising model for nomadic tourism also become increasingly refined and precise there are some problems in the article please pay attention this is mentioned in this article that we can explore the actual needs getting users by modifying their behavior but the article does also explain the related technologies of prediction value add the security problem is an inevitable problem in the development process of the mobile internet but the article repeatedly mentioned a terminal system which seems to

the book entitled crosssectional study on type characteristics and drug resistance of haemophilus influenzae in kunming children is an interesting book however those are several minor issues should be correctedmajor points the abbreviation of haemophilus influenza should be hi instead of hi the article needs ethical questions the figures and tables of the article cannot be placed at either end of the article figure should provide abcdminor points and ensure that the format of the full articles is consistent such as whether the initial letter of the subtitle is capitalized and whether there are spaces before the paragraph the title background in the abstract of the article can be replaced by objective the conclusion in the abstract is too long however the author can delete some for example

this paper proposes a cyber risk analysis prototype the proposed implementation is based on creating an objective function related to system modeling that simulates a conventional mediumsized enterprise the model in figure is that you used in this paperthe manuscript has several issues that need to be fixed such as sentence structure meaning punctuations presentations the titles of sections and subsections word order formal words and abbreviations a complete check is a must to correct all these issuesall equations should be centeredthe introduction abstract and conclusion sections should be improved the logical order of these sections cannot be followed easilythe literature review should be better presented and rewrittenthe sections of the manuscript are presented in two different ways part and part part one of them should be pickedsection

the content of this article is very complete both conceptually and methodically the narrative is layered in addition in the practice of the influence of urban visual image design on public art designed by the article every link has also been closely integrated the research topic is exploratory but there are some minor issues that need to be revised the competitiveness of a city is not only reflected in education economy politics humanities characteristic industries etc but also in the competitiveness of the citys image what are the reasons for these phenomena please add the internet of things is another major technological change that has changed peoples way of life after computers the internet and wireless communication please give examples in which fields the internet of things technology

in this experiment combining multimodal mri with intravenous thrombolysis in stroke was innovative and here are some modification comments for better improvement of quality of the papera analyses from the retrospective analysis collection were removedb it is recommended that enrollment be taken earlier for followupc in the discussion it is recommended to write more than cases of intravenous thrombolysisd both history of diabetes and ischemic stroke was removed from the hour relative exclusion criteriae the significance of intravenous thrombolysis under multimodal nmr guidance can be written in more detail

noncoding drug such as mirna lncrna and circrna are attracting more and more attention in studies feng cao et al focused on linking role of circthbs in lung cancer they found that circthbs had cancerpromoting effects the downstream molecular mechanism is unknown explained ln general there is a lack of explanation of different methods involved in the study in introduction a hypothesis needs to be presented cells were incubated for hours at c co should be cells were incubated for weeks at c co the authors were requested to provide more detailed patient information the rate of fish experiment results in figure in low please improve the image quality lt is noted that your manuscript needs further editing by someone in expertise intechnical english editing paying particular attention

the objective of this study was to investigate apatinib combined with nabpaclitaxel efficacy and safety in the treatment of agc after firstline failure this paper find the apatinib combined with nabpaclitaxel in treating agc patients after firstline failure is effectively prolong the progressionfree survival time which is critical to the control of the disease if there is no more adverse events which has a certain status worthy of clinical promotion my advice to the author gives a follows in the discussion section we find that the author quotes fictitious persons to make the article more persuasive and the author needs to check to ensure that these references are identified properlythe conclusion should be a summary of this study the conclusion of this study is too much and the

aiming at the problem that the blind estimation of the characteristic parameters in frequencyhopping orchestral timbre signals using the spectrogram method has better realtime performance but it is difficult to balance performance antinoise and estimation accuracy this work proposes a frequencyhopping orchestral timbre model on the timefrequency distribution map signal feature parameter blind estimation derived from the subsections provided by the paper the paper has exceptionally good argumentation logic and compared with the existing research the research content provided in this paper has certain technical advantages from the details of this paper my concerns are as follows according to the mathematical expression of the spectrogram method what is the specific calculation amount first set the threshold to distinguish the frequencyhopping orchestral timbre signal from white noise orchestral timbre

this paper proposes a research on indoor and outdoor seamless positioning technology based on artificial intelligence and intelligent switching algorithm the purpose is to study the influence of reducing the positioning data with too large error on the final positioning result however there are some defects in the introduction of the introduction and the theoretical overview of intelligent positioning and i hope the author will modify itthe abstract part proposes that the role of the method used in the article is to analyze the current status of indoor and outdoor navigation technology especially the development route of seamless positioning technology is analyzed what are the effects of these methodsas one of the most advanced technologies positioning and navigation technology has been significantly developed what role does the development

this paper uses shanghai as an example chooses motivation as the predetermined variable of willingness and behavior opportunity and ability as the moderator variables and conducts a binary pobit model to improve the participation rate of urban agricultural operators in adopt ecommerce and promote the highquality development of urban agriculture check these three key factors effects on the adoption of ecommerce it also presents pertinent viewpoints from the standpoint of the primary organization for managing urban agriculture which offers theoretical backing for fostering the growth of online sales of urban agriculture products however there are still issues that need to be fixed i hope the author can continue to developthis paper needs to be written in clearer simpler language and the introduction shouldnt be overly long and detailed

the authors focus their study on the problem of evaluating and analyzing the lora performance as the wireless platform in internet of things health monitoring the provided theoretical analysis is concrete complete and correct and the authors have provided all the intermediate steps in order to enable the average reader to easily follow it the provided numerical results are also rich in order to show the pure operation and the performance of the proposed framework the authors are encouraged to address the following comments in order to improve the scientific depth of their manuscript as well as they need to consider the following suggestions in order to improve the quality of presentation of their manuscript initially section introduction needs to be substantially rewritten in order to provide the

this paper uses the combination principle of genetic algorithm and neural network in risk evaluation and combines the characteristics of crossborder ecommerce logistics risk and the uniqueness of the measurement index system to establish a crossborder ecommerce risk evaluation model based on genetic neural network the research motivation and content of this paper shall be explained in introductionauxiliary combination method fully uses the genetic algorithm to preprocess the sample and then uses the neural network to solve the problem after obtaining the optimal sample data can you give a brief example to illustrate thisin the data of company a whether there is the influence of off season and peak season of shopping and the influence of common shopping festival activitiesin case study is sensitivity analysis carried out on

the research on the ndn forwarding plane based on programmable switches is quite interesting and valuable to the community concretely the proposed architecture introduces a decoupled cache structure to support highavailability innetwork caching combined with content permutation the proposed scheme supports secure forwarding to mitigate the threat of eavesdropping attacks the scheme designed in this paper is easy to understand and the experiment results are convincingbesides this paper has some other minor issues that should be properly addressedin order to give readers a deeper understanding of the motivation of this paper this paper should mention the application scenarios of the designed architecturein the programmable data plane design section it is not reasonable to divide the design into four parts parser ingress pipeline egress pipeline encryption decryption module and

my points about this paper are as follows please follow it and make your manuscript complete as soon as possibleachange the first couple of sentences of the section the endfiber power output and statistical analysis results of accutech holmium laser under different power energy frequency states and different buckling states are as followsbit contains a grammatical error to make the structure more understandable to correct it and to improve scientific appearanceci am unable to understand the entire continuity because the sectional and subsectional lines are not mentioned this articles parts and subsections should be properly numbereddthe third sentence of the abstract section has called particularly harsh term this sentence needs to be changedethe uniqueness because the paper is not mentioned in this first part as the heading please

in this paper the author starts from the energy enterprises studies the financial audit method innovation of energy enterprises in qinghai province based on the panel data regression model and discusses the problems faced by internal design in enterprise management focuses on how to effectively solve this problem hoping to provide more reference for energy enterprises to carry out financial audit in the future and improve the articlea statements in the paper are not professional enough and need to be checked and revise itb therefore in this paper the author will start from the energy enterprises study the financial audit method innovation of energy enterprises in qinghai province based on the panel data regression model and discuss the problems faced by internal design in enterprise management focus on

the statistical method in this paper uses roc curve why is the statistical method used usually reflected in the method should it be addedplease carefully check the format of the references to ensure that they meet the approval of our journalin the paper it was concerned that intentionally low accuracy of mammography in differentiating calcified lesions in cc position and mlo position may be caused by insufficient sample size possibly not the only reason because there are any technical shortcomings please continue to analyze the shortcomings in depth otherwise this article will be regarded as meaninglessthere are some references cited incorrectly in the article please carefully check and requotethere is no literature to discuss the criteria for mammogram calcification please add

the paper a study of deep neural networkbased diagnosis method for pediatric heart diseases has some technical issues that are discussed belowaplease describe the thoroughly advantages of color doppler ultrasound technology in clinical diagnosisbsince equation has been incorrectly worded i ask the authors to restate it accurately and in mathematical formcbackground information on the research should also be included in the introduction you should pay close attention to it because it omits many crucial elementsdthe suggested manuscript has a few grammatical mistakes kindly correctewhy the malformations are divided into categoriesfdefine all the process in detail the medical image datagrequire the full name of the svm and mlphthe abstract has to be revised to include significant findingsithe introductions final paragraph should include a summary of the chapters accomplishments

as the mainstream reform trend of college curriculum the effective selection and integration of ideological or political elements play a decisive role on the basis of big data analysis technology this paper proposed a feature selection model mlmpfs based on manifold learning and linear mapping to find ideological and political features of college students courses the research content of this studies is interesting however this research can be further enhanced according to the suggestions as following why mlmpfs designers can extract ideological and political elements what do all acc and nmi in abstract means in figure why the mpmlfs designed like that what is the range of state equation there are some grammar and spelling problems here is the proposed improved mlmpfs used for extraction ideological and political

according to my understanding this paper presents an idea of analyzing the increase in carbon dioxide emission with the loss of tree cover taking pakistan as a case basis ar e my suugestionswhy double brakcets are used everytime for defining acroynyms starting for the absttact one conlcusin everywhere egsome an st is usedintrodcution should be divied into mutpitple paragrpahs it is too hard to read whole introducitonsimilarly paragraphs on other places should also splitfigure needs more explanation in the literature need improvementsthe literature regarding the paper is poor recommended to consider the most useful articles for the project a novel pcawhale optimizationbased deep neural network model for classification of tomato plant diseases using gpuproviding diagnosis on diabetes using cloud computing environment to the people working in rural areas

grammatical correction is required at the sentence concrete using modified aci method in abstractwhat would be the reason for decrease in strength give justification low water absorption ggbfs kg is mentioned in capital letters in paper it needs to be changed provide the application of this study in abstract what is the need of opting marine solution for durability studies

keywords are incomplete please add them appropriatelythe content in the introduction is not enough and the introduction is not enough please supplement itplease explain this paragraph in detail compared with the previous design concept the new design concept is more intuitive and visual the problems that occur can be changed in time without rework which wastes time and fails to improve quality which will lead to dissatisfaction of the demander there will be some bad influencing factors for enterprises chart the contents in figure are not comprehensive and more explanations can be addedthe author needs to check the content of the chart and modify it according to the correct format for the reader to readthe defects of space design and construction in section are not comprehensive please supplement

the main purpose of this paper is to present an anomalous trajectory detection method that incorporates route choice analysis into masked autoregressive flow the method employs the mafrcatd model to calculate the anomaly score of each trajectory which can effectively discover anomalous trajectories besides the method can distinguish between intentionally and unintentionally anomalous by using multivariate gaussian model through the experimental results the effectiveness and accuracy of the method is confirmed main contributions and advantagesin real situation the method considers anomalous trajectories may occur due to lots of factors such as travel time traffic conditions and so on so the paper adopts a random utility model based on a multivariate gaussian model to explore the motivation behind the random choice behaviorsthe model takes the spatiotemporal information of trajectory

it can be seen from this paper that the pathogenesis of extraventricular heart is mainly caused by the ectopic pacemaker and the excitation of the heartbeat caused by the excitation below the central node in very early stage the incidence is very high which seriously affects the quality of life in patients and is also one of the risk factors for sudden cardiac death the analysis is very detailed if there are still some problems in the paperthe abstract should focus on reflecting what comes new in that literature and making points that the author has set special emphasis on on presenting useful information that that reader needs and on deleting what has become common knowledge in the subject areaas the beginning of the paper the introduction briefly

the experimental part revealed the mechanism of the electronic nose based on the communication network algorithm to detect the intrinsic quality of food by studying the relationship between the electronic nose response signal and the content and volatile components in different food samples however there be still places that can be added in the chart part of the articlea explain that the electronic nose for food nondestructive and based on the communication network algorithm can accurately analyze food information thus promote the sustainable development of the food industry this abstract lacks the conclusions in the studyb the keyword in their method part is missing from the keywordc using electronic nose technology and gcms combined with hsspmegcms will evaluate the quality for processed walnuts in different storage times from

the fusion of multisensor data seeks mainly to eliminate possible redundancy and contradiction caused by the observation process of different sensors use the characteristics of the source to supplement and synthesize the communication so how to provide the system with more effective information and data provide a more powerful decisionmaking basis for intelligent systems the article has some shortcomingskeywords include four keywords multi sensor information fusion binocular vision industrial robot and a grasping but the keywords in this part are not completethe test results show that the combination of the latest multisensor data fusion and binocular vision technology can make the industrial robot more flexible and easy to complete the grasping operation with an accuracy value of but there is no overview of the results present the number

in this paper the artificial model of sustainable energy efficiency is applied to the microgrid and combined with the intelligent communication information processing algorithm the operation efficiency of the microgrid is improved and then the operation effect of the microgrid is improved the overall structure of the article is basically reasonable with strong logic and good practical significance however there are some contradictions in the details of the paper which are given belowbefore formally introducing the stacked sparse autoencoder first introduce the autoencoder and what is the essence of the autoencoder and it mainly consists of those conclusionsthe encoding result is obtained through the encoder operation and the feature extraction is completed and according to the mathematical expression what meaning does the characters have after the features output

reviewer comments and decision the ms is fall in the scope and aims of omclthe quality of the ms is okayall corrections should be done add role instead of functionadd neovascularization instead of angiogenesisadd measures instead of approachesadd this instead of the the author s did not mention the gender of the patientsadd apoptosis singlestrandednon coding gene expressiondystromirswhat is this ddpcradd reference and clear its role add reference to statistical analysis incatgive more details pleocytosis and pleurocytosis are there difference there is no recommendationsdiscussion should be more conciseall cited references without issue journal numbers why and remove from all vol and ppsome journal names were written while others not same style should be acceptedprofessor drelsayed eldeeb mehana

butylphthalide drug combination via edaravone helps regulate blood circulation or improve therapeutic effects this is an abrupt conclusion after the author introduced the drugthe routine before this paper is very weak of logic many places are the material of literature lack explanations the authors own consideration against analysis the author is advised to make drastic changesthe author should compare with similar articles not explain the advantages of this studyother problemssubmit the manuscript clearly showing all text changes that have been modified using tracesthe name of each paragraph is recommended to indent the first paragraph by unitstoo few references were added to more than the contents and headings of the table need to be centered

in order to meet the new demand of crime hot spot prediction in the era of big data this paper proposes a crime hot spot data prediction technology based on arimalstm model the arimalstm algorithm is used to extract the time characteristics of crime hotspot data by combining real data and stgn model a model suitable for predicting the spatiotemporal characteristics of crime hotspots is designed to improve the level of crime hotspot data analysis the experimental results show that the proposed method has higher analytical efficiency lower error rate and stronger superiority than other methods the writing content of this paper is novel and the method is innovative but there are still the following problems a it is suggested to replace spatiotemporal data warehouse with data warehouse

in this unit a complete nbiot application layer security architecture is designed to ensure the generation of encryption services betweennbiot terminals and power grid storage platforms the lightweight low communication cost and flexible key update characteristics are verified by experimentsit is full of content logical modules verbal but it has the following problems please think about a choice over keywords and the correct writing expression please appropriately expand the conclusions of the experimental analysis part to make the analysis more profound and the data knowledge more sufficient in the simulation experiment part the description content of logic control module part is too little so it is suggested to add language description or picture introduction in the process of reading the paper it is found that the subscript of

how to effectively manage the lumbar spine patients is a key problem this paper discusses the different analysis indicators and the level of adjuvant therapy effect which can successfully used through clinical treatment it is a very worthy of promotion first of all the annotation of the authors information is not clear or please explain its meaning in the corner mark on in upper right corner of the authors name secondly the advantages about this drug and the dangers of this method are not mentioned in the abstract so it should be pointed out at the beginning please regulate the use of noun words in keywords for example do not appear to this structure should have replaced by nouns as far as possible attention should be devoted to

this article explored the clinical and radiographic results of the pedicle screw hook system and the pedicle screw rod system in young patients with symptomatic lumbar spondylolysis and compared their therapeutic effects the article has clear ideas and strong data but some errors need to be corrected the present manuscript needs language editing is there an informed consent form signed by the patient or guardian what is the exclusion criteria vas and odi need the full title when they first appear in the text references should be preceded by a space when inserted into the text please correct incorrect fonts according to the journal of the authors guide and standardize the use of punctuation

accept with minor revisionreview research on datadriven miscalibration detection algorithm for vehiclemounted camerathis paper is clearly written and well organised the introduction is reasonable given the premise of the paper figures and tables are comprehensive and helpfulfew suggestions have been mentioned in order to strengthen your paperkindly update some latest references of same domainthe written content of figure need to be reconstructedkindly justify the significance of particular dataset

yuan et al showed that mbsr therapy can significantly improve the anxiety and depression of patients with breast cancer in the early stage of postoperative chemotherapy improve the cognitive emotion regulation strategy of patients promote patients to adopt positive cognitive emotion regulation strategy in the face of physical and mental trauma which is conducive to the generation of positive psychology of patients and significantly improve the quality of life of patients the manuscript is interesting however there are many revision should be made major revisions please show more details about clinical data in the part of methodplease show the approval number of ethics committeeplease show more results the current results can not obtain the conclusionplease show more details about results in the part of resultsplease show the limitation

sorptive decontamination of direct red dye from aqueous medium by synthetic biopolymercomposite of polyaniline with mangifera indica leafy compost this work is interesting due to its rich content in experimental data as well as to the applications of the compounds subjected to investigations it is noted the accuracy of the determinations madei highly recommend publishing this paper which is a valuable support in chemistry and environmental protection note add more references and keywords

mirnas closely correlate to tumorigenesis while they have not been prevalently used for clinical practice in this study a machine learning technique was used to construct a serummirnasbased diagnostic model for lung cancer followed by a qpcr examination the findings are interesting and provide support for lung cancer diagnosis developmentone confusing point is the sample that is supposed to be used in the diagnostic system serum or blood please make a clear clarification throughout the manuscriptfor the ifs process why did the authors select the transcripts numbers up to is it possible that there may be more reliable mirnas signaturenave bayes classifier was one core technique for constructing the diagnostic model why not introduce the background on nb classifierconsidering most patients were in stages in section how did

since the reform and opening up the party and the government have attached great importance to the mental health of college students and made unprecedented achievements we should not only learn from the lessons but also look forward to the future the development of society has put forward new requirements on the psychological quality of college students and the complexity of social change has put forward new requirements on the quality of college students mental health therefore the mental health of college students still needs further research this paper studies the design and application of automatic assessment model of college students mental health based on multimodal data fusion which has high research value but the following problems still exist in the abstract of this paper it involves the

thank you for inviting you to comment on this article entitled a theoretical solution of spherical expansion in overconsolidated clay in this paper a new theoretical solution for the expansion of overconsolidated clay is proposed thisisacarefullydonestudyandthefindingsareofconsiderableinterest this article has met multiple requirements of publicationthere are still several details need modification which are listed belowwhere the relevant references quoted in the paper conform to the research themethe fitting of many derived graphs in this paper should strengthen the discussion of physical and meaning among these figures in the abstract is not explicit such as figure in the introduction section the article should make it more clear about the innovation of the paper based on the analysis of the similar work

the concept in the paper is of major importance but is big data environment is only enough to undergo survey is the doubt literature review is not elaborate hence the idea of the author poses uncertainity at many places in the paper human computer interactive interpretation technology needs a practical explanation how remote sensing technology is used for the purpose should be explained in detail the analysis part in the paper must have more detail with comparisons the flow of the paper is acceptable but suddenly deviates with the information at times need a good re arrangement of the paper by including elaborate details in the idea of the author

this manuscript proposes a byproduct gas distribution model for production users during the steel manufacturing process the results calculated by intelligent model are meaningful for efficient utilization of energy and the safety of gas pipe network in steel plant the study should be of interest to audiences of computational intelligence and neuroscience it is recommended to accept after minor modification the page number of the submitted manuscript isnt provided which makes it difficult to provide the reviewers feedback please add page numbers for the manuscript so that the reviewers can accurately comment on the manuscript please describe the difference between the byproduct gas distribution method proposed in this paper and traditional methods a list of abbreviations including cog ldg bfg mg sgdm gcdm mgdm uds ug and so

my points of this paper as shown below update it and improve your paperplease make the necessary adjustments to table as soon as possibleplease match the style of the last section references to the othersplease emphasize the current state of surgical procedure application and the importance of this studycould you can clarify why patients under the age of were not presented paper presentation is not appreciable work seriously to improve the presentation of the paperthe discussion section means the structure of past research results should be improvedfrom the start you must specify explicitly what one study will look into an indepth overview of the subject should be the first part of your introductionit is vital that you define a focus of your research from the start your introduction

explain preprocessing tools and procedures abound how the denoising decreases raw data noise while normalisation makes data more accessible how do the calibrations start with a ground check the proposed technique combines statistical data such as the minimum maximum median and histogram distribution with digital numbers fitting distributions how it can be justified that mineralogical prospecting utilises a weibull distribution decision tree instead of svm spectral angle matching or pca how the image fusion improves performance with multispectral sensors describe computerbased information systems name and describe two input and output devices explain the classification of computer differentiate between primary storage and secondary storage what is the basic difference between an assembler and a compiler and also between a compiler and interpreter explain various types of software being used

this study explored effects of improving sleep quality in the third trimester on the incidence of postpartum depression in primiparas it revealed that application of sleep quality improvement intervention in primiparas can effectively improve sleep quality relieve anxiety and depression and reduce degree and postpartum depression incidence even though the manuscript is very well planned and results are interesting there are some concerns should be revised the following are my comments and critique the abstract lsas scale score or sas scale score whats the meaning of psqi sas sds and epds please provide the full names of abbreviations postpartum depression as the familiar complications in obstetric category the reason is that quite a number of women after the production by the digestive system urinary system etc in the

the main difference between vessel density and capillary perfusion density is that all vessels are treated equally when evaluating vessel density while for the evaluation of capillary perfusion density larger vessels influence the measurement more than smaller capillaries this difference may explain why the two features in macular perfusion showed different associations with bcva improvement after surgical treatment the points need to be considered try to refer latest papers and them include its research content in the introduction part how does the blood flow be detected by oct bscan sequences the negative finding might be caused by the limited sample size but could also be due to the investigation of preoperative macular perfusion only instead of the postoperative change here describes the lack of basis include it what

this paper analyses how to design and optimize the personnel training of environmental design majors in higher vocational colleges under the background of artificial intelligence so as to cope with the challenges of big data informatization and provide a reference for the future development of chinas higher vocational education few points need to be modified lots of sentences and statements in the paper are getting mistake check and update relying on carry out teaching activity design and application research of artificial intelligence module teaching focus on solving the problems of algorithm teaching visualization interactive training adaptive testing and knowledge recommendation in algorithmassisted teaching it is hoped that it can provide reference and reference for the construction of art design courses in higher vocational colleges in my country the

the article entitled an evaluation of their effectiveness social safety of endoscopic colon stenting in the treatment of obstructive left colon cancer a systematic review and metaanalysis is an interesting study however there are several minor issues should be corrected there are some grammar and spelling mistakes in this article please correctedthe editor of the introduction was missingthe figure and tables should be put at the end is the articlethere should be read conclusion part at the end of the referencesome references are too old cheung hy chung n tsang ww et al endolaparoscopic approach vs conventional open surgery on the treatment of obstructing right colon cancer a randomized controlled trial arch surg decfiori e lamazza a la a et al palliative management for patients deemed subacute obstruction

this paper proposes a dualcga model to solve the complex medical text classification problem and its performance is better than other models in different medical datasets the paper is novel in concept and clear in presentation however the readability of some sentences in the paper should be improved make sure thta the text is clear and easy to read in related work part there lack some critiques of the publication including contradictions gaps and unanswered questions the authors should double checked

this manuscript is of scientific interest and the authors evaluate the difference between continuous nursing intervention under the guidance of health belief model and routine nursing intervention in patients with preventive colostomy however my comments are as follows patients who met the inclusion criteria of preventive enterostomy were randomly divided into observation group and control group when was the study conducted and the time of follow up should be added the baseline characteristics of the two groups were supposed to be described in the abstract there was no significant difference in sex age tumor stage tumor location and education level between the two groups p table comparable this study was reviewed by the hospital ethics committee what did the comparable mean continuous nursing based on hbm starts from

is order to meet the new demand of crime hot spot prediction in the era of big data this paper proposes a crime hot spot data prediction technology based on arimalstm software the arimalstm algorithm is used to extract the time characteristics of crime hotspot systems by combining real time and stgn model a model suitable for predicting the spatiotemporal characteristics of crime hotspots is designed to improve the level of crime hotspot data analysis the experimental results show that the new approach has higher analytical accuracy lower error rate decision quality superiority than other methods the writing content of this paper appears novel and the method is innovative but there are still the following problems a it is suggested to replace spatiotemporal data warehouse with data warehouse

this article deals with classes of ordinary differential equations derived from the probability distribution of weibullpareto the authors have constructed differential equations using quantile functions some comments are as follows the pareto density function given after equation add the condition like same add for cdf conditions in the whole paper check the eq or eq the format should be the same the literature references and are not needed add the following references instead of and h i okagbue p e oguntunde p o ugwoke a a opanuga e c erondu exponentiated generalized exponential distribution ordinary differential equations in the world congress on engineering and computer science h i okagbue o olasunmbo agboola o paulinus ugwoke and a abiodun classes of ordinary differential equations obtained for the probability functions

this paper discusses acupuncture and rehabilitation for spinal cord injury i recommend the paper for publication however a number of changes must follow made to improve the paper these includethe abstract focuses too much on actual patients grouping and the results but doesnt give a clear idea about the methodology and the proposed approach we suggest to shorten these definitions and add more details about the problem statement and proposed approachat the end of the introduction section please add contributions in the studysection has some extensive use of colon we suggest to restructure the sentences without the use of colonfigure shall be improved with use of better font data pronunciation sizeacupuncture therapists scale evaluators statisticians and rehabilitation therapists are divided into four people to complete this year in

in this current article microrna attenuated nsclc proliferation through idhhif axis suppression in warburg effect the authors have tried to explain how mirna alters distinct factors which further lead to nsclc proliferation the study looks interesting but lacks some basic supporting evidence which needs to be reformed before acceptance there are basic grammatical errors and english needs to be corrected they should proofread it again lung cancer is a global problem so authors need to mention it and then they can mention its a major death causing cancer in china authors should mention that there are different types of mirnas and tell in brief about them starting the procedure with the numerical looks quite unscientific like t cell a t cells were kept by our lab is quiet

this paper proposes the use of neural network technology to evaluate college based classroom teaching methods and studies the content of our article has a unique and innovative way yet some details have not been done well if the following subjects are improved the authors of the papers will be greatly improved there are few references cited and some important research status of home and abroad has not been mentioned adding some references will make the article more substantial the neural network structure diagram in before third part has no relevant content explanation and the writing of the article is rough and very unreasonable some important equations in the third part had no relevant content explanation because this type of formula is a special equation in related fields